Spanking Thread #38: Public Edition

Kinda itching to do a quick one-shot spank green. Any requests on prompt?

>>29307257
depends who's asking. I found this again while looking for an OP image. It doesn't have any story to go with it that I know of.

https://derpibooru.org/581425?scope=scpe5e18910dd7d47411454301213408d12d8be0ad1a

And this, which might be fun.

https://derpibooru.org/1180485?scope=scpe0f0d184fbc61a945d7727bddc5ee2583d0e51997

>>29288078
all labels on paddles are so hot. What would some pony-themed ones be?

>Good Behavior Spell
>Hoof Substitute
>Hind Quartermaster
>Flank Flambé (serves one)

>>29307257
Cheerilee spanking Scootaloo after class after warning her repeatedly to behave in class. It's the first time she's had to spank a filly in years.

>>29307295
>depends who's asking.
Doubt if anyone from these threads remembers me. I did a Blueblood whipping green a long long time ago for the spanking thread.

>>29307327
The voyager has returned? Not so much now, but for a while there every few months someone would ask if you had written anything else.

So your interests are public and brutal?

>>29307360
Yeah but I can do gentle and consensual as well. Whatever you guys want.

>>29307405
fuck it, go brutal if that's what you want. other interests are being served by other writefags.

>>29307327
>>29307405
Yes I remember you. Actually we're good on content for now so we don't really need green from you, brutality isn't really our thing. You'd fit in better in SiM, they'd probably welcome content like yours.

>>29307327
Dude that green is legendary, I'm sure everybody remembers it.
Anything from you would be welcomed. Not sure what kind of stories you like to write besides that one. Maybe something with the Pies before Pinkie left, during a harsh season or something?

>>29307693
It depends on just how brutal. I'm cool with it personally, even though I'm not a personal fan of the Blueblood fic in a sexual sense. SiM would love it, though.

>>29307297
I'm in favour of this.

>>29307257
>you are a human/pony
>the filly you take care of is trying to "experiment" with something dangerous for the umpteenth time, for example, trying to pull out the plasting protection from the AC socket to make some tests on different things with electricity
>earlier you asked her many times to not to do that because it's dangerous
>filly's curiosity is stronger than her and she does it again when you're not looking
>she was caught by you and you decide to give her a spanking
>no, waiting, no corner, no anger, no yelling, no articulation and ZOOMED WORDS, more like immediate "sigh, you know what's going to happen, filly, over my knee and tail up"
>it's not her first time to be pulled over your knee
>no tools, no crying, no bawling, no sawwy waah momma babbling, you swat her with your hand/hoof and hear grunting and whining
>you can change the position, decide how long she is going to get smacked, but of course not too long
>you can add lewd if you want, genitals can be mentioned and touched
>spanking fixes the problem, you rub her butt and carry around when her muzzle is burried under your arm
>buy her an electronic building kit

>>29308298
is that a request or an entire story?
all u needed was expanded a little bit and your done.

>29303147
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29217277/#q29303147
(the thread reached 500 before I was able to comment on your story.)

it was rather a cute little story anon. I like how you gave that drawing some contex.
>Diamanda looked away for some reason, not making eye contact, silent
that awkward little moment. it builds a realistic atmosphere. not sure if that's was your intent. being realistic was kinda unfitting for this type of story. and that kinda shortened up the story.
-any how this was short and enjoyable little experience.

>>29308667
Just a /r/, I'm a bad writer

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>>29308939
greentext isn't exactly shakespeare

>>29308982
I needed this image

>>29309135
Take it, friend, it's yours!

Anyone like role reversal? A usual spankee spanking a usual spanker?

>>29310346
Apple Bloom spanking Applejack. But it feels wrong just saying that

>>29310346
Anon getting spanked green when?

>>29310580
There are four anonfilly stories, but that's not quite the same thing.

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>>29308746
Thanks.
I felt that awkard moment was necessary to show "Diamanda" was conflicted. You could say her maternal instincts kicked in upon seeing cute little Spike and learning about his story, but she also couldn't take him away from his pony family.
Spike meanwhile found himself in that unusual situation were he was being treated like the baby dragon he really was, and deep down he apreciated it.
That's the impression I got from that picture assuming the dragoness wasn't his biological mother.
I also liked that other story that seemed to go on a similar direction although in a more comical way: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29217277/#29302766

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>>29310346

Wait, couldn't ponies use horseshoes as spanking implements? I don't think I've ever seen it (or read it). It sounds more plausible to me than human implements that they may find hard to pick properly.

Fun fact: in the show a smack on the rump is described as a way to make pony work/walk faster, not to punish a pony.
Holding and spanking a pony means torturing them.

>>29310346
It would be funny to see twilight velvet or spoiler rich spanked. Or even filthy rich, even though he seemed to be a pretty nice guy.

>>29311585
There is one story on fimfic where Filthy spanks Spoiled, because Spoiled spanked Diamond Tiara for hanging out with Crusaders. Well, first chapters are ok, later it turns too overdone and weird.

>>29311585
Diamond Tiara would make a satisfying spanker for Spoiled Rich.

>>29311454
https://derpibooru.org/877131?scope=scpe3aa6b9f00f4f5d7a78f7e5f56ee434e0884f51f5

sometimes my encyclopedic knowledge of this worries me

Hey everyone. Sorry I haven't posted an update yet. I've just had very little time, but I'll try to squeeze some writing in tonight. Cool to see the thread continuing! Still have to read that Nomine and Krishna collab, and well, everything else.

>>29307224
aw yeah featured story i'm honored.

>>29301383
>And go on the show does.
>Trixie jumps right back into her usual tricks fortunately ignoring you for the time being so you can suffer in silence.
>The hairbrush continues to pound your bottom like a bratty filly and it takes everything you've got not to cry out and give yourself away.
>Sweeping your gaze across the crowd to make sure no one is looking at you funny you catch pinkie's eye.
>She gives you a cheerful smile and wave that takes considerable effort for you to return.
>The brush has continued its steady work punishing your bare bottom for what feels like hours now but in reality has only been a few minutes.
>Your feeble efforts to escape prove worthless against the well secured restraints pointing your now red bottom up in the air.
>You can only hope shes hidden your tail well in a place no one is going to find your exposed parts on display.
>There isn't a ton of room backstage and you can just barley hear your bottom getting its firm lesson but the WHACK WHACK WAHCK is distinct to at least you.
>Caught completely off guard you startle when you suddenly find Trixie and the crowd looking at you once again.
>What had she said?
"It would appear Trixie's assistant was a bit distracted. We ask again Twilight Sparkle how are you enjoying the show?"
>You swallow and put on the bravest face you can muster.
>"It's WONderful TriXIE!"
>Your voice spikes as you're violently spanked but you manage a fake smile that only gets a few odd looks from the crowd.
"Trixie knew you would enjoy the show! Now for our next act she needs your help as well."
>She uses her magic to move your upperbody's cart center stage causing you to gulp in nervousness.
>At least when you were on the side you were out of the way now all eyes are on you!

>>29312666
>"For our next trick Trixie needs just a bit of help and she knows her assistant's magic is up to the challenge!"
>A spellbook floats into view from offstage, it's a thicker tomb on advanced magic research opened to a section detailing resonance field overlap.
>Pointing out a rather complicated spell Trixie addresses you once again.
"Now all you need to do is maintain this field for trixie and the show can go on! Trixie is sure the element of magic will have no problem with a feat such as this!"
>You gulp but nod with a fake smile and confidence.
>The spell was not complex but required concentration.
>Concentration you lacked as your flanks got deeper and deeper deep fried back stage.
>At this point your hind end was on fire and if this were a private session you'd have been crying and begging all over the place.
>The brush had worked over every inch of your exposed rump and even some upper thigh, if your rear was not naturally purple it was going to be very very soon.
>Lighting up your horn you try to drown out the pain and focus on the spell.
>The nebulous reality altering field expands from your horn then instantly collapses as the brush redoubles its efforts to turn you into a crying filly!
>Trixie turns around with fakes suprise.
"Is something the matter assistant? Trixie knows you can do it!"
>"I'm sorrRRYYYYY Trixie just give me AAAAA Moment!..."
>Lighting your horn again you get a bit further into the spell this time before to your horror a second brush slams into your right cheeks the same time as one slams into your left cheeks.
>Left completely unprepared for the double spanking you scream out in pain!
>"OWWWWWWWWW!"
>Collapsing onto the padded board you grasp at the soft cloth like a spanked filly as you simply close your eyes and endure.
>The new brush is a lot more determined than the last one and practically picks you up with its heavy thudding spankings to your already abused bottom!

>>29312676
>Both continue flattening your bottom as trixie approaches with concern on her face.
"Twilight Sparkle are you alright?"
>She uses her magic to lift your chin so you can no longer hide your fresh tears in the fabric below you.
>Your completely at your limit, this is the worse spanking of your life you doubt you'll sit for days and theres no way you can pretend anymore.
>"PLEASEEEE trixie i just need a QUICKKKKKKK break!"
>At this point every parents in the crowd is probably putting two and two together.
>You can't help but grit your teeth and let out sharp gasps and whimpers with every spanking even thrashing your head back and forth in agony.
"Of course of course, Trixie appologizes ladies and gentlecolts the show will go on after a brief intermission"
>As soon as the curtain closes and she wheels you behind stage the manufactured kindness vanishes.
"Haha Trixie though you would last longer than that Twilght Spankle!"
>You try to ignore her as you bury you face in the cloth again and let out a scream while you pound your hooves in agony.
>"STOP STOP STOP PLEASE STOP!"
"Awww still not used to a long one huh? We'll have to work on your endurance in future shows my lovely assistant."
>The sound of wood against flesh gets louder and louder until she finally wheels you into view of your bottom.
>It's even worse than you thought the entire seat is big macintosh red and only getting worse.
>At this point you just hope you don't have to go to a doctor and try to explain why your flanks looks like they went through an industrial press.
>The tears are flowing freely now as you thrash both sides of your body in search of relief.
>You only accomplish wiggling your flanks which from your unusual perspective of them just makes it look like your begging for more spanking or something even lewder.
>Trixie walks over to your wiggling bouncing cheeks and lets out a whistle.

>>29312682
"Trixie can admit you already did have nice flanks Twilight Sparkle, She never knew they got all their exercise like this though! Imagine her surprise when she while spying on you she finds you spanking yourself like a little slut! Though now that i see your bottom in action i can see why you did it, this is the most deserving bottom Trixie has ever seen!"
>To your eternal relief the brushes stop their vigilant pounding of your vulnerable bottom for the first time in what feels like forever.
>To your embarrassment Trixie takes this as a chance to take over herself.
>You watch as to your horror she not only walks up behind your raised tail and takes a look but rears up putting both her fore hooves on both sides of your hips.
>The image is forever burned into your mind as she climbs up further onto your back and flanks mounting you like a stallion.
>Your blush whimper and squirm before seeing how much worse thats making it as she wraps her fore hooves around your sides securing herself in place.
"Oh yes Twilight Spankle Trixie can see why the stallions would enjoy this! Your flanks feel so nice and warm!"
>With your legs slightly spread by the restraints her rear hooves reach the floor easily giving her leverage to do anything she wants.
>You'll never forget the feeling of Trixie giving you a firm hump...
>Your indignation was quickly lost though as she raises her right hoof and brings it down on your right cheek!
"MMMMM yes is this how they do it Twilght Spankle? Get your cute little flanks nice and red before mounting you like a whore?"
>You open your mouth to retort but find your response turned into a squeak as the sudo-mating continues.
"MMMMMM Trixie could get used to this, beneath her is just where you belong Twilight Spankle!"
>"OW OW please Trixie I'm sorry I'm sorry!"
"Yes Trixie is sure you are you little skank. Maybe next time you will think twice about humiliating Trixie in front of the whole town! Is that right?"

>>29312686
>"YES PLEASE YES!"
"Hmmmmm"
>the heavy hoof spankings stop replaced by some flanks rubbing and a bit of grinding thats starting to get you hot under the collar despite everything.
"Trixie supposes she could give you a break while she finishes the show. Just remember Trixie still has the photos so if you want to keep whats left of your dignity you'll be waiting right here for me once the shows done."
>You can only pathetically nod and whimper and she climbs off your back.
>Turning to go back on stage the gives you a quick flick across the flanks with her tail
"Now stay right here, Trixie is not done with you yet Twilight Spankle."
Thats it for now. Poor twilight, what happens next spanking thread folks? Does someone find her backstage? Does Trixie takes her back to her wagon after the show for more discipline? Or worse yet back to twilight's castle where spike might hear? i'm pretty open to any direction past this point.

pastebin: http://pastebin.com/AYVMrqyZ

>>29312698
Trixie tries to take Twily to her wagon after the show for more spanking, all night long, but Twilight turns the tables. Trixie underestimates Twilight's magic and that she no longer is in front of an audience, and only puts on a weak magic reduction ring on Twi's horn.

Big mistake. Now, it's Trixie's turn for the all night long spanking.

>>29312666
I like Twilight as a spankee, and for some reason i LOVE that this is written on first person from her point of view.

>be you as a pony
>wake up one morning on your couch
>you slept sitting in the Lyra position
>can't remember a thing
>there is something heavy on your lap
>it's a cute mare, sleeping
>hoove marks on her rear
>likely from some hours ago
>she wakes up
>"So you made up your mind at last?" she says, "Are you going to use it?"
>next to you is a hairbrush
What do?

>>29313665
Use the hairbrush on her ass. What kind of question is that looool

>>29313759
Wouldn't you first want to spank her with your bare hooves since you can't remember what it feels like? Of course she may get impatient.

>>29313665
Make eggs for her

Short update coming tonight!

>>29314572
<3

>>29289678
THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

Magnum knew his daughter was a bit of a drama queen. But this time around, he was pretty sure her tears were not exaggerated. He had reached the stage of the spanking where the swinging of the hairbrush was just a mindless rhythm, a whack to the left and then a whack to the right, again and again. When he told Rarity that she was in for the worst punishment any teenager in this city had ever gotten, that meant he wasn’t planning on letting her up until she had taken everything she possibly could.

Rarity’s kicking was absolutely frantic. Her toes collided with the back of Magnum’s calves, causing him to grunt and briefly adjust his position sitting down, extending his legs out. Every time she kicked, her thighs and buttocks clenched and flexed under the brush. She squealed and screamed and cried, and let out a wail of agony into her pillow.

Then, downstairs, the front door opened up. Magnum’s hairbrush halted in the air beside his head. Over his knee, Rarity continued to weep, not hearing the door at all.

A voice from downstairs reached their ears. It was a familiar, girly voice, calling out in a jovial tone.

“Hey, I’m home! Volleyball practice ended early!"

>>29314758
Oh, NO. It was Sweetie Belle! While Rarity did not hear the door, she heard her middle school sister’s squeaky voice from downstairs, and gasped. Suddenly, newfound embarrassment and fear made her tense her abdomen to stop herself from heaving air and crying too loud, desperately trying to push away the pain. She moaned pitifully into the pillow.

Sweetie’s footsteps moved up the stairs, faintly audible through Rarity’s closed door. “Hello? Hey, Rarity, you there?”

Rarity’s father sighed. He raised his voice to break through her door. “Rarity is here, Sweetie, but right now she’s getting a spanking. Could you go downstairs for a little while, hun?”

It may have only been her sister, but Rarity still felt so embarrassed, moaning out of shame into her pillow. Sweetie Belle paused, footsteps stopping, but they soon turned right around, heading back downstairs.

“Yes, dad!” Sweetie replied back. She wasted no time doing what her father asked, scampering away in a hurry.

>>29314762
As soon as she was gone, Rarity finally allowed herself to cry again, not trying to hold back. She braced herself, fully expecting the hairbrush to go right back to spanking her blazing red bottom cheeks. But when many seconds of nothing came, Rarity lifted her face out of the pillow, and tried to look over her shoulder.

“D-Daddy…?”

“Stay still, Rarity. Don’t move.”

Then, she felt her father’s legs open up, unpinning her thighs. Rarity’s mouth opened in shock, but just before she was about to squirm her flaming butt all around, she remembered to obey him, not moving despite the horrible pain in her tush. Magnum lifted her much smaller frame up and put her belly down on the bed. Then he got to his feet.

“Rarity, stand up.”

Whimpering and holding the now wet pillow against her head, Rarity heard the order and immediately became confused. What was her father doing? He wasn’t stopping, was he? Was her horrible evening finally done? Goodness, she thought, Sweetie Belle may have cut this awful, ghastly ordeal short! She would have to thank Sweetie personally for this one!

>>29314769
Rarity, sniffling and shaking, slowly stood up. She still held the pillow, but now that she was standing, the teenager used it to cover the place between her legs. She turned her mascara streaked face around to look at her father, eyes big and frightened.

“Dad, father… is it, are you…”

She stopped right away. Frowning deeply, her father looked back at her. Rarity wasn’t looking at him, though, but what was in his hand. Her heart stopped, and she sobbed.

Magnum pointed to the bed with the doubled over belt held in his fist. “You were in for a lot more with that brush, but… we’re doing this instead. I don’t want any more prolonging this. Let’s just get this done, Rare.” He sighed. “Keep your legs straight, and bend over the bed.”

Told you it was short. The belt, oh noes!

I'm having a little too much fun with this one. First human story ever, so why not?

Night, guys.

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Not very content with this sketch, but someone on the last thread wanted this pairing so may as well post it.

Nice to read from you, Zad. Be safe.

>>29312793
hmm i hadn't thought of that, its not a bad idea though.

>>29313308
thanks glad you like it.

>>29314776
This story is pedo

>>29315125
No u

>>29315125
Be nice, quackers

>>29313665
>Play it safe and tease her by using the brush to brush her mane.
>Wait for her to signal you, and avert your attention toward her rump.
>you comply and slowly move the brush down toward her but.
>you take a firm grip on her tail and pull it up. Exposing her ponut.
>then start brushing her tail.

>>29315894
kek

>>29314776
I wonder if the neighbors could hear it.

>>29317702
Oh yeah. I think so.

>>29317702
next door neighbor Anon is watching from his bedroom, livestreaming it to the whole school

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here you go, perverts

>>29319639
>you will never be spanked by Flutterbitch
It hurts.

[The Curse of the Alicorn's Eye]
Some of you might recognise the comic I based this on.

>the Alicorn's eye is an old relic created by starswirl the bearded himself.
>It was said that it gives it's user an unmatch magical power.
>but it can corrupt the user.
>so Starswirl had to seal it away.
>he made sure that no pony can reach it.
>young princess celestia who was a filly at that time was overly curious.
>she loves magical gadgets and relics that Starswirl creates.
>When she saw him use the Alicorn eye to banish the sirens out of equestria.
>She was dying to try it herself.
>one day Starswirl was going out of the castle for weeks to collect rare herbs.
>it was her chance to steal..err borrow the eye.
>at night she snuck around the castle to the chamber where he kept the Alicorn eye.
>This chamber was inside his quarters.
>it's a huge labyrinth of bookshelves and stairways.
>but she knew her way around.
>she reached the chamber's door.
>"the alicorn eye would me mine" tia said
>she entered the chamber.
>Young Celestia saw the alicorn eye in the middle of the room. it was there inside a glass box.
>"If I know Starswirl any better. he would have put some sort of traps. so I have to be careful."
>she looked around. but the room was empty only the alicorn eye was in the middle.
>"I think that old man is getting a bit sloppy."
>she walked toward the Eye.
>only to be magically float in the air.
>she was being shot by a magical beam coming from the eyes of a statue in the ceiling.
>the statue head came to life and descended from the ceiling. then like a bat it landed on the floor.
>it was a rather large pony statue with bat wings. it was floating Celestia with its eye beam.
>as the statue was floating her it said. "Intruder detected, No pony is allowed in the Alicorn's eye chamber."
>"Hey I'm not anypony I'm the princess I demand.. Order you to put me down."
>the statue replied "Intruder Identified. Proceeding with Celestia Protocol 1"

>>29320160
>"protocol 1? .. heeeey!"
>the guardian statue forcefully pulled celestia toward him.
>he sat down and pulled her under his front leg.
>she was facing his back.
>her lower body was in front .
>he raised his other hoof and ...
>Smack! ~he smacked her butt with it.
>"Owe ! what the hey are you do~ Owe!
>he smacked her again. then raised his hoof up in the air preparing for another one.
>smack!
>"Owe! . you can't do that to me I'm the prinCeeeees owee ! the princess.
>the statue didn't reply to her and continued spanking her.
>his hoof did leave a mark on her white butt.
>her butt color turned from white to light pink as he was spanking her.
>she continued to protest but the statue ignored her and continued with his spanking.
>moments later which felt like forever for her he stopped spanking her.
>then lifted her with his magical beam and lead her outside.
>He said "Do not enter the chamber again or I will proceed with Celestia protocol Number 2"
>Celestia was gently dropped at the chamber door.
>she rubbed her spanked flank and left the area.
>"I will get the alicorn eye one way or another. but I need to get me some ice pack first."

>>29320244
>the next night Celestia came to the chamber again.
>but this time she was prepared.
>she was wearing a jumpsuit.
>and a thick panties under it to cushion the impact.
>"this is my fail safe plan, But I don't think I'm gonna need it"
>she entered the chamber.
>as soon as she entered she used her magic to transform herself into Starswirl.
>this will fool that stupid guardian.
>She walked toward the glass box.
>the guardian came to life.
>and moved his head toward Celestia.
>"Scanning... Master Starswirl detected. disengaging."
>Disengaging indeed.
>She continued walking to the middle where the alicorn's eye was.
>when she got closer. a ring barrier appeared from the ground around the Eye.
>Celestia was caught in side of it.
>The barrier Dispelled her illusion spell.
>she got turned back being her Young self.
>she then heard the dreaded "intruder Detected intruder Detected." coming from behind her.
>it was the guardian again. he suspended her up in the air with his eye beam.
>"Intruder Identified- Proceeding with Celestia protocol # 2."
>she gulped as she was being dragged in toward him.
>she knew that there is no point resisting. and totally accepted her fate.
>he pulled her across his lap.
>he then tried to remove her clothes.
>he tried pulling it down but failed to do so.
>Celestia snickered "you can't do that it's a jump suit . I don't think you know your way around this."
>the statue continued pulling an yanking it down and failed to do so.
>"just give up. you have lost . you either let me go. or spanking me through my cloths."
>the guardian statue stopped for a moment then grabbed the back of her suit and start yanking it up.
>the suit was wedgieing her . biting up her butt.
>he jerked it and yanked it harder and harder.
>wedging her further.
>she yelped in pain.
>he pulled it hard enough to rip.
>her butt dropped down wobbling. she gave a sigh of relief.
>but that moment was short lived as the statue was pulling down her padded panties.

>>29320430
>"there goes my fail safe plan."
>the guardian statue pulled out a hair brush.
>"what the.. where did you .. and why.." celestia confusion vanished away when the statue start spanking her with it.
>Whap! Whap! Whap!
>owe owe oweeee
>this time she recived far harsher punishment than her first time.
>it felt like forever.
>her eyes was tearing.
>her but turned red by the dreaded brush.
>the statue just continued spanking her for a while.
>then stopped and lead her toward the door.
>she was rubbing her well spanked butt.
>and wiping the tears in her eyes.
>"Don't come back again or I proceed with Celestia protocol 3"
>"there is protocol 3?" she said that as she was leaving the chamber.
>the door closed behind her.
>"dang it. My poor little butt cannot take anymore punishment. but I have to endure it abit more."
>"next time it will be the one I get my hooves on the alicorn eye. but now I need more ice packs."

-I'll write the final part later

>>29320430
Her butt falling through her ripped jumpsuit from a wedgie.... yeeessss

>>29320507
It's ok, but it reads kind of like a checklist when you're talking about the actual spanking. Too much "and the the statue did ____ and then he did ____" kind of narrative, which doesn't leave as much room for other descriptions.

Kind of curious about what sort of new fetishes these "protocols" will use.

>>29320997
it's an important detail.

>>29321452
>Too much "and the the statue did ____ and then he did ____" kind of narrative, which doesn't leave as much room for other descriptions.

yea that's a big issue, I don't really know how to work around it.
it's a force of habit. probably caused by how my brain processing works and by the mistranslation.
Descriptive spanking narrative is not my weakest area. which is kinda my main reason I write in >green format.

and I do apologize for my poor quality writings. I know I could do it better if I put some more effort into it.

>Kind of curious about what sort of new fetishes these "protocols" will use.
well you have to wait and see. I got it well planned out. but I'm always open for suggestions.

>>29314776
Rarity gasped, looking at the big belt in her father’s hand. Despite Magnum’s clear direction, Rarity was in disbelief, and a whole new wave of fear washed over her.

“But… but father! You said… you said…”

Magnum cut her off, but with a surprisingly calm and level voice. “I know what I said. But listen, Rare…”

He shook his head. Rarity thought for a second, fear gripping her heart, that she had spoken out of turn and would incur his wrath. But luckily, that’s not what she got.

Magnum sighed. “Ok, Rarity. There are two options I’m going to give you right now. Either you go back over my knee and I wear out your bottom with the hairbrush, or you bend over and I wear out your bottom with my belt just the same, but in only half the time.”

He waited for her response, crossing his arms over his chest with belt in hand. Rarity heard her two options, and to her dismay, neither of them sounded very fun at all. She sobbed, mulling through her choices while imagining herself in each predicament, while also fighting the urge to reach back and massage her spanked rear end.

>>29321734
The fear of the belt gave her pause. She recalled when Applejack told her about the time she got caught pilfering liquor from a friend’s mother’s refrigerator, and how Granny had given her the belt. Applejack told her how absolutely awful it was, like a switch and a paddle put into one tool. “The worst spankin’ I ever got,” she told Rarity.

But still, being pinned completely, the hairbrush roasting her poor derriere, feet wiggling helplessly… she couldn’t willingly choose it. Rarity’s fear of the unknown didn’t overcome her desire to maybe take a chance with the belt and hope against hope that it wasn’t as bad as being taken back over her father’s knee.

She made her decision. Voice like a squeak, Rarity barely got out her choice. “The b--belt, daddy. I’ll take the belt.”

Magnum nodded his head in approval, but only faintly. He sighed, and pointed back to the bed. “Ok, Rare. We’ll do the belt. Now, like I said, keep your back legs straight and put your elbows on the bed, ok?”

>>29321738
He pointed to the spot in front of her. Rarity, trying her hardest to be an obedient daughter for her daddy, nodded her head while she stared fearfully down at the bed. The mattress was actually below her waist level, and as Rarity put her pillow down on the bed and began to bend over and rest her elbows onto it, she suddenly realized how raised up her bottom now was. The spanked skin stretching out also reignited the horrible fire in her bum, making her gasp from the sting.

She held in a whimper of embarrassment and fear, but nonetheless did what her father instructed her to do, pressing together and straightening out her bare legs. Her loosely fitting camisole slid down her belly, baring most of her back and her belly button. The new area of bare skin exposed to the air made her shiver.

Magnum simply waited for her to do as she was told, keeping his face neutral while having to steel himself within. Rarity was sniffling and sobbing and “oww” ing all the while, but she wasn’t done yet. There was still this order of business left.

Once she was in position, he stepped up next to her, readying his belt. Rarity heard him, and her knees bent slightly, like she was bracing herself. Magnum frowned ruefully.

>>29321748
“Alright, Raribear.” He almost whispered her pet name he had for her, voice sounding pained. “I want you to be in that position for when I’m giving you your licks, but if you gotta move around some in between, you can. But no reaching back, and no flopping down on the bed, either, ok? And when I tell you that you gotta get back into position for the next lick, then that’s what you gotta do. You understand all of that, Rare?”

He spoke slowly and clearly for her, not wanting her to miss any details. Rarity, even though she was in pain and was anticipating even more of it in a moment, was still a good listener. But she wasn’t stupid. She could tell by what he was saying that her being allowed to “move around some” meant that what she was about to experience was going to be very, very painful.

But she had no choice, either way. Sighing, she replied, “Yes, daddy, I do-oo…”

Magnum heard the little crack in her voice, and he felt it in his heart. But he pushed his feelings aside, focusing fully on his promised task to her to give her the rest of her “worst spanking ever.”

Rarity obediently remained in position. Her taut buttocks twitched as he laid the leather belt across them to aim. Then, he raised the belt up high.

He swung.

Just updating this thing in spurts when I get the time, so sorry for being so sporadic! Hope you people are liking it. Goodnight, thread!

>>29321769
>>29321780
Y'know, Zad, there are probably some valid criticisms of your work. I mean, I can't fucking think of any, but they're probably out there.
But one thing that can never, ever be said of your stuff is that you can't write cliffhangers.

>>29321769
Yep there's muh dick

>>29320507
>2 days later.
>Celestia came back again.
>"Starswirl gonna be back tomorrow so It's gonna happen tonight.
>she rubbed her bottom.
>"my butt still a little bit sore from last time. but not today. I'm came fully prepared."
>she entered the chamber and closed the door behind her.
>Celestia then took a deep breath. then narrowed her eyes.
>"Now!"
>she cast one of the forbidden spells. The time manipulation Field.
>the entire room around her moved at extremely slow rate. while she can move freely in the effected area.
>she then ran through heading straight toward the Eye.
>Even within the slowed time. she triggered the ceiling statue.
>With very slow deep voice he still managed to say "Innn trruuuderrr Deeeteeecteeed"
>the statue started shooting the levitation beams at her.
>Celestia managed to easily dodge them.
>"I don't have much time. the slow field will desperate in matter of seconds."
>she ran though the anti magic barrier.
>but it didn't effect her.
>She turned around and gave the barrier the raspberry tongue. "bprrt not today. I coated my fur."
>she finally reached the glass display box where the Alicorn's eye was kept.
>She tried to raise the glass cover but it was heavier than she anticipated.
>the guardian statue was on the ground behind her running toward her.
>she did trigger multiple alarms as she was raising the heavy glass.
>the time field spell she cast earlier was fading away.
>she was already out of time.
>"come on you stupid thing."
>she looked around her. and saw another statue was heading toward her. and another ..
>there were many of them. and her time field faded. they all rushed in.
>with a quick thinking. she made a magical hammer and smashed the glass box.
>she took the alicorn eye. and flew up.
>"ahahaa now I finally got it. now feel the wrath of the alicorn.
>she cast a spell but it didn't effect any of them.
>"wait what."
>the guardian statues shoot her with multiple beams suspending her mid air.

>>29322512
>"I don't understand. the Alicorn eye's magic is unstoppable."
>While she was still suspended midair , she took a closer look at the relic she was holding.
>"hey wait a sec... This is fake. no wonder it didn't work. that Starswirl must have put a decoy for extra safety precautions."
>"Intruder Identified. Proceeding with Celestia protocol number 5" then they slowly moved her down toward one of them.
>"wait protocol 5 ? .. what happend to 3 and 4 ?"
>the other 2 guardian statues walked by and stood next to the first one, which was the one pulling her.
>she saw herself being slowly dragged toward them.
>one of them already brought up a hairbrush. the other one a paddle...
>she gulped and shivered knowing what's going to happen to her.
>"err can't we discuss this ?"
>one of the 3 statues walked back. then fly up in the ceiling and retracted there.
>"oh good you see you agree with me how about you two?"
>one of them swung the brush mid air.
-Swoosh
>celestia clenched her butt as a reflex. "guess not"
>she was placed in the first statue knees. he yanked her tail up with one hoof and started spanking her with the other.
>Smack smack smack!
>it didn't give her time to settle in it just went full force.
>she was just laying there on the magical stone statue taking it in the butt.
>this already feels familiar to her. cause she was already been there couple of times.
>smack smack smack.
>"ow! ow! ow!." that's all what she can do from that position.
>the young filly should be already used to it by now. but she was still feeling that.
>his stone hoof was coming too strong for her. it felt as if he was pounding her.
>smack smack smack! ~ her spanking continues nonstop.
>while she was fighting the pain she asked herself "well this isn't as bad as I thought it would be. it's no different from previous protocols"
>but as soon as she asked herself that.
>the other statue moved in closer with the hairbrush. and before she knew it.
>Whap!
>She yelped!

>>29323275
>The first statue didn't stop either.
>she received her punishment by two of them simoustanly.
>Whap! Smack! Whap! SMack!
>aw aww aww aaaaa aawwwwww www
>her yelps turned into long wail. the continuous and relentless punishment she was receiving was to much for her.
>she was getting a 2 hard smacks a sec. each one hitting a different butt cheek.
>this was too much for our little trespasser.
>she soon started weeping.
>she kicked and squirmed but the statue's grip was pinning her butt in place.
>"awww awww please aww sniff aww let me go aww I'm sowwy aww."
>both guardian statues ignored her plea and continued spanking her for much while.
>but then they both stopped.
>the young Celestia laid there sobbing with her roasted butt.

=
that's all for now
there are more steps in the celestia protocol 5. so it's far from over

>>29323275
>hey wait a sec... This is fake. no wonder it didn't work. that Starswirl must have put a decoy for extra safety precautions."

Lel
This reminds me of this one old palcomix with jade
Was that your inspiration?

>>29323309
CELESTIA STORY FINALLY! Sunbutt needs to feel the "sun" on her butt.

>>29324310
And as a filly no less.
I'm sure this is a first.

>>29324310
now that a pun i can get behind.

>>29323768
>This reminds me of this one old palcomix with jade , Was that your inspiration?
I think it goes without saying.
It was a good comic nonetheless.

>>29324310
I like this pun.

>>29324943
I prefer to see/read the current celestia getting spanked . Not as a filly.
But it didn't fit this story. I could have gone with filly twilight instead, but that's gonna be a bit easy. (As I was writing it I mistakenly typed twilight instead of celestia on multiple occasions.)

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I hope you guys are enjoying it so far.
The weird stuff are gonna be next

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I can never get enough of human Twilight getting it.

>Be Moondancer.
>You’ll be spending the Summer away from your home in Canterlot and living in Ponyville, as part of Princess Twilight’s new “Traveling Friend” program. Girls from around Equestria are assigned to live with other girls they wouldn’t normally associate themselves with, in hopes of promoting friendship, and offering a new chance to study friendship magic.
>You’ve been assigned to live with Tree Hugger, a friend of Fluttershy’s. You were both given a cute little cottage on the edge of Ponyville. You’ve only been together a few days, but are starting to get along fine. She is a bit odd though. Definitely different from your normal set of friends. But that’s the point of the program, you guess.
>About a week in, you come back into the house in the evening after spending the afternoon at the library. Tree Hugger is sitting on the couch looking at a lava lamp with a stupid look on her face. The window is cracked open, and there is an ever so faint haze in the room. There’s also a pretty distinct smell in the air. One you’ve never smelt before, but knowing her, you have a pretty good guess of what it is.
>“Oh hey Moon.” She says, very relaxed. “How was the library?”
>You look at her and furrow your brows. “Tree Hugger?”
>“Yeah?”, she says smiling, clearly high.
>“Have you been smoking weed?”
>She cracks a grin: “Maybe.”
>You look at her, shocked. “Wha…? Tree Hugger, that’s ILLEGAL.”
>“Is it?” She says giggling. “I don’t remember.”
>“Tree…-“ you facepalm and sigh. “Tree Hugger, you can’t do that. If Princess Twilight finds out you’ll be in huge trouble. I’LL be in huge trouble.”
>“Come ooooonnnnn, Moon. What Twilight doesn’t know won’t, like….hurt her.”

>>29326146
>You’re not putting up with this. You will not be able to spend the next three months in this house if this keeps going on. And knowing her, even if she promises not too, she’ll probably keep doing it every time you leave. And you can’t tell Princess Twilight, you want her to stop but don’t want Tree Hugger to get in trouble. The only thing you can think of doing is what your mom would have done.
You walk directly over to her. You grab the sides of the skirt that she’s wearing, and yank it completely down in one smooth motion.
>“Whoooaaa dude…chill out a little. If you wanted to experiment, you could have just asked.” She smiles, looking in your eyes.
>You breathe in, annoyed. “That’s… not what’s happening here.” You sit down and pull her naked butt across your lap. “I’m not putting up with this. You can’t smoke in here. It’s against the rules.”
>“Or what…?” She says sleepily. “What are you doing, anyways?”
>“I’m going to spank you.” You sigh and roll up the sleeves of your sweater. “For smoking weed.”
>You look down at her butt. You note that it’s definitely very…full. It isn’t chubby, by any means, you just notice it seems a little big in proportion to the rest of her body, but only a little. You wonder if your mom ever made such basic, utilitarian observations about you or your sister when you were kids. You stop thinking about it.
>“Whaaaaaaaat….? But whhyyyyyy….?” She says, looking back into your eyes, just beginning to look concerned.
>“Because its illegal. And it’s bad for you.” You have no idea what you’re doing. You’ve never spanked anyone before. You had definitely never planned on it. But you’ve definitely gotten it before, so at least you have that to go off of. You take a page from your mother’s playbook as to how to start. “Uhhh….this if for your own good.”

>>29326165
>You start spanking, simple, fast, and hard. Just like mom used to do. No bullshit, just spanking. Tree Hugger yelps, half out of surprise, half out of pain. She wiggles her butt around, making a very obviously pathetic attempt to get away. You hold her down. She’s clearly aware that she’s in no state to be able to make a hasty get away. You’re stronger than her anyway. She cries and wiggles, as you spank at your constant pace. You’re following a pattern of swapping cheeks every two slaps. You think that’s what you remember your mother doing. You were hurting a bit too much at the time to really retain that info.
>“Okaa-ay, okaaayyyy, I won’t smoke in here. Come on Moon, stop! Please!” You don’t give in at all. You keep spanking, hard and fast, completely unhindered, her butt getting really red, bouncing with each impact.
>“No. And you’re right, you won’t smoke in here. But more than that, you won’t smoke ANYWHERE. Got it?” you ask, spanking away.
>“Okay! Okay! Cool, I got it! I promise! I got it, Moon! Please! Stop!” she says though tears. She covers her eyes, looking shameful.
>“No. We’ve still got quite a ways to go. This is for your own good. Stop talking.” You say, focused hard on her quivering behind.
>She keeps crying as you keep spanking, but she listens to your command to stop talking. You could probably stop pretty soon, but you want to make sure that this is something that’ll make certain she doesn’t break her promise. You follow your mom’s example and press on.

>>29326191
>After a few minutes, Tree Hugger’s tears turn into full on sobs. This is what you were waiting for. The break. The moment that came every time you got spanked by your mom, where you gave in completely, and just let it all out. Tree Hugger had stopped wiggling or trying to get away. She just lay there, eyes locked shut, sobbing like a baby, and taking each hard smack to her glowing red, bouncing ass. She wasn’t fighting back at all. She was a pacifist, after all. You decide to keep the spanking going for just a little while longer.
>Finally, you give her one last, hard slap, and stop. She gasps for air, and tries to catch her breath between sobs. She continues to cry, and cry, and cry. You just sit there, her butt still quivering on your lap, and wait for her to let it all out. In a few minutes, her crying slowly turns into quiet sniffling. She turns her head to look into your eyes, still laying in your lap. Her eyes are still welled up with tears.
>“I’m sorry, dude.” She says. You can tell she means it.
>“It’s fine. Just don’t do it again. Or we’ll have to have this become a recurring theme. Got it?”
>“Yeah…” she sniffs.
>“Good.” You look out the window and see that the stars have been out for a while. “Then get up. It’s time to put on our pajamas.”
>Tree Hugger gives a faint little smile. “I normally don’t wear clothes when I go to sleep.”
>“Fair Enough.” You say.

>>29326214
Whelp, thats my first greentext. Been on the ride for a long while, figured I should do something. let me know how it is. I have an epilogue if anyone wants it.

>>29326259
Pretty good for a first try
Like it

>>29326259
This was hot. We don't see much of the peer to peer kind of spankings where one person assumes a dominant role, so it's nice to see that. It's also really cool when Tree Hugger seems to submit to Moondancer at the end, officially establishing the dynamic of their new relationship.

I especially liked Moonie going on for a while, really breaking Tree Hugger. She was unsure of herself, but she drew on her past experience with her mother and it makes sense why she wouldn't stop when Tree Hugger told her to at first.

Only criticism is how fast Moondancer decided to spank Tree Hugger. I think that would be something she would have to ponder for a while, or maybe let things escalate with a big argument between them before "time to spank!"

I liked it, welcome sir!

>>29326214
Thumbs up, good first go!

>>29326131
>I can never get enough of human Twilight getting it.
Agreed, but we sure have had enough of Celestia giving it. There's already like 5 images of 'Tia giving spankings...maybe it's time we had a different spanker. Luna, Cinch or Twilight's mom perhaps?

Nice drawing either way.

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>>29327582
Last thread had this too.

>>29327943
Must hurt to bend over like that. Is that a riding crop? Kinky.

>>29327582
Or big brother Shiny...

Bump at bedtime

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Bumping afore bed.

>>29328945
Real nice.

>>29328945
from the thumbnail it looks like she's about to shove a pair of very large cherries up her butt

I'm doing an empty bump and no one can stop me!

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>>29329361
Empty bump?

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>>29326131
I totally forgot about that drawing.

>>29326214
Liked the ending and the overall story. Second Zads comment about the peer spanking being interesting.

>>29329928
Excellent.

Empty is bump

>>29331186
ded thread ?

>>29331191
Ded? Slow, but we've had content.

>>29326214
I'm conflicted. I like the idea of Tree Hugger getting spanked, but having her in pain and crying makes me sad.
Still nice green and idea.

c'mon guys, so little feedback ever

Relevant, but NSFW

https://www.derpibooru.org/1347050

>>29332019
there are only 4 recurring daily members including me.
too bad we got a good amount of content creators but no audience.
I don't know about the rest of u guys but this is really getting me down.

>>29332620
yea i saw this an hour ago.
pussy smacking... I don't know if it count as spanking/punishment.
I think it fits more with bondage / sm stuff.

>>29332650
There seems to be spanking content on Slave Pony thread a lot. Belts and stuff galore, even though that's not the main focus usually.

>"And for her next trick, Trixie will turn that noisy pony's bottom bright red..."
>"That's it?!"
>"....without using magic!"
>SLAPSLAPSLAPSLAPSLAPSLAP-

>>29332650
Dumb question, but how do you know it's 4? I know a lot of people just read the stuff that's made without replying. You can only say golly gee I sure love spanking so many times. Other than that people just like to read and look at pictures. We just need more people writing and making pictures.

>>29333872
The feedback matters.
When a writefag or drawfag is working to produce material and is greeted with absolute silence...no critique either negative or positive...they stop producing. They move on and do something else.

You want a healthy thread, you've got to feed your content producers.

>>29334132
It also doesn't help that this is such a niche fetish. And one so specific. I bounce between here and Slave Pone, so I KNOW there's an audience for spanking stuff. It's all over the place there, and people like it.

>>29334132

This.

I hate to sound like an attention whore, but this, to the extreme.

I love to write, and I do it for pleasure all the time. But I come here not only to write about colorful horses getting their bottoms smacked, but to hone my writing skills. Even on greentext, there's a case of practice makes perfect.

But it's the feedback that really makes it worthwhile as a writer. When you post a story and get lots of comments...not the "Ooohs and Aaahs" but real well thought-out feedback and discussion of story details...that's often what gives me the inspiration to keep writing.

After all, if I'm going to spend over two hours writing a story and revising it for people, I'd like to feel like I didn't just waste my time.

Not trying to tick anyone off here, but that's my opinion on the subject.

>>29334933
It's fine, man. It makes perfect sense.

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>>29334132
I get what you're saying, but it works both ways. If you want feed back you need traffic, and if you want traffic you need more content. Nobody want to hang around a thread that's just creators circle jerking. They just want to get off. The real thing to call for is getting more lurkers to make some stuff.

>>29335645
This is coming from a guy who writes shit, btw.

>>29333443
Got to admit, I laughed. Audience like "what the fuck is going on?" And the foals all like "Princess Twilight was a bad filly?"

>>29335645
Celestia's hand looks like it's chokeholding Luna. Interesting how they're both naked, too. Foreplay? Incest is wincest!

>>29333872
>Dumb question, but how do you know it's 4?
Its 4 recurring active members per day. not the maximum total number of people per day.
I didn't came up with this out of my ass (maybe I did). You can saw I'm autistic / stalker / someone with so much time on his hand.. etc
It's based on 3 factors.
First : The amount of reply we get per day from the start of the thread. and the counter in the bottom right.
I analysed the writing style and the specific stuff they like and hate.
usually we are 7 - 12 different people commenting in this thread.
but now those people's number have been reduced dramatically to 4 daily members per day.

second : the content and the bumpers.
during the entire day there are almost zero activity. most of our activities starts from 7 hours from my current post time. till now. and then it's gonna be total silence with only bumps for the next 14 hours.
which you can easily tell that most of people here are from US.
the only person who seems to be active in that time is usually Rusticanon/woox and sometimes Nomine.

3rd : the most thing that confirmed my theory was the number of poll voters in woox's story.
the one he gives us a choice of votes.
most of the results ends up with barely 4 results per day.
in the first 5 hours after he posted it he receives a total of 2 votes including mine.
after 10 hours he might or may not receive any other votes. 24 hours later The total votes usually be 4.
Even though he constantly that he needs only 4 votes to continue the story.
(where is the next part woox ?)
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I may be wrong on this, but everything supports my theoretical numbers.
I can easily tell that most active users in the past 2 threads were
Nomine - Rustic - ChuckSchuld and another 2 anons I couldn't tell who they are.

>>29334933
Exactly that.
we usually spend so much time writing a story/ drawing something...etc
when we post it here. and get treated with total silence . it makes us feel we wasted all our time. it feels like you were talking to someone and then person leaves while you are talking without saying anything to you.

as Nomine said
>I hate to sound like an attention whore, but this, to the extreme.
I don't know about the rest. but I think they would agree on me with this.
We are looking for a certain type of feedback not any type of comments.

comments like " wow " "that was great" "nice" and "great story" don't really mean much to me. it's not worthless. I appreciate them. but all i take from it is that you read my story and you liked it .. that's all.
what I'm looking for are comments that are related to my story.
"twilight really got it this time" , "the line you wrote 'quote' was hilarious " , "That part felt a bit off" , " I didn't like what you did with ..."
Comments like that are really helpful and means a lot to me. it tells me that there are people actually reading my story. not just skimming through them. as Nomine said
>that's often what gives me the inspiration to keep writing.

>>29332650
How could we get more feedback?

existing posters post more

how? encourage feedback, writefags ask for specific things they want feedback about (dialog, spanking, show accuracy, etc)

>>29336121
this feedback feedback is helpful to me. I can try to be better. I have fapped to stories (obviously finding them good) and still only replied "unf" or "great" in response.

get new posters

how? move to Niche Fetish General or >>>/trash/. This could be temporary, or an every-other-thread pattern, or something else.

or change something about the OPs. almost all are the same format. I doubt there's that many more spankfags who would join the thread with a different OP that aren't already joining. but sometimes we have success with stealth threads that don't say "spanking thread" in the header. usually with a hot image and a hot prompt, both of which leaning towards consensual adult romantic spanking.

Not saying we need to move, just trying to lay out what we could possibly do if we really wanted more feedback.

I think you want to have the best of both worlds but none of the downsides from each world. If we go on hiatuses we usually get a large outpouring of content and feedback when the thread returns. But we can't post to the thread when it's on hiatus, which hurts growth and casual users who may not know about mlpgeneral.com/spanking. And if we constantly keep the thread alive we are inevitably going to run out of things to say. Yes there are stories here with minimal or no feedback, but give a bit of time (few hours minimum, few days preferred) before you declare any story dead and unread. People need time to read especially for porn stories because there's only so much fapping one can do.

My default mode of operation is to ignore or skim stories until they end, then read them for real. If people want audience interaction, something easy to ctrl-F would help me. like "vote:"

Hi Zad, welcome back. I'm glad you're feeling better.

>>29336161
>My default mode of operation is to ignore or skim stories until they end, then read them for real.
I can relate to that.
I have to agree that going hiatus are doing too much harm to our casual fan base.
it alienate the people outside the circlejerk.

>move to Niche Fetish General
as you said we had succesful stealth generals before. it's more about the OP.
if we gonna merge with more general fetish type. which one gonne be ?
From the look of it. 90% of our stories includes adult/filly relations
Parenting general ?
Filly general ?
I don't think we fit into slave pony category or consensual adults
we hardly got any of those or have a write fags willing to write them.

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I said that before. spanking fetish in general is uncommon and Rare these days.
the spanking fanbase in general are pretty low.
and we Filtered out most of the already low fan base when we posted it here in MLP.
Maybe if we went somewhere else and moved to Cartoon spanking general. or something like that we would get more people.
a lot of people who like Cartoon spanking in general don't mind ponies , and I don't think most people here mind if it they get none pony related content if it include the spanking they like.

But this cannot be done here in 4chan. cause its against its outdated rules.
as much as I hate that site how about Reddit ?

To really revive the spanking fetish in mlp. we need to have a spanking scene in the show (which will never happen). the next best thing is to have a scene in a famous comics and fan content. let's say pencil draw a scene where the minotaur spanking rainbowdash when they reach inside the labyrinth
this would really spark the interest in spanking...

>>29336161
This shouldn't move somewhere, but the stealth thread idea is good as long as you make it obvious enough for regulars and somehow get more casual people interested in it, too. That might be hard.

>>29336161
We tried /trash before, it didn't work out. I'm all for staying here and maybe make more casual treads without a behemoth of a header that scares casuals away

Feedback thing is a problem for me lately as I'm absolutely not into any sexual content in a story and lately there has been a lot of it.
Zad's story was a welcome change again

>>29336078
I think the artist said it's the real reason Nightmare Moon came to be.

>>29337404
yeah i can see why you wouldn't want that in the history books. went crazy due to jealousy sounds a lot better than got spanked too much.

what are other fetishes/Trops that are somehow related to spanking ?
I can name few but help me out
-Age play
-age aggression
-mouth soaping
-school girl
-humiliation
-wedgie

>>29337689
bdsm
slave(pony)
medical

>>29337752
>medical

Rectal thermometers, mm mm good

Bum bump

>>29337798
I always liked the idea of uncooperative foals at a doctors... like I hope that comic with Scootaloo will turn out

>>29338471
>I always liked the idea of uncooperative foals at a doctors.
that's actually a very interesting concept. I would write it but no one seems to like my stuff anyway.(I'm just being overly dramatic)
I hope someone else would get on it.

>>29336359
It'd definitely be interesting to have a SubReddit.
Especially considering we could actually post and link NSFW art directly.

>>29337614
Not to mention, once it gets out that your punishments literally drove the person you were punishing to try to fucking murder you, it starts to look like maybe you're the asshole.

In regards to the discussion about responding to stories, if I'm not giving any constructive criticism, it's probably because I don't have any to offer. Occasionally, a particular phrasing or turn in the story will make my dick explode, but for the most part, I don't tend to have anything to say. I will try to start reading stories closer to see if there's any comments or criticisms I could make.

>>29338942
>if I'm not giving any constructive criticism, it's probably because I don't have any to offer.
Then a good thing to do is point out a particular passage that stood out to you.

Knowing what sentences had impact helps a lot when I write my next story...and I'm often wrong about which parts resonate with the audience. Often the passage I thought was terrific goes completely unnoticed, while an innocuous sentence I never gave any thought to is a hit with readers.
But, as writefags, we don't know this stuff if you don't tell us...

>>29338825
I guess I could do something like that. I did read a DA story about Scoots getting glasses a while back, so maybe she throws a tantrum at the eye doctor's because she doesn't wanna get glasses?

>>29338980
I was thinking more of the line. filly refuse to cooperate with her doctor. the doctor wants to just give her an injection but she makes a fuss.
he pinned her down and forcefully give it to her.

maybe throw in thermometer scene where she also refuse to do it right - causing the doctor to use the rectal one.

stuff like that.

>>29337404
>>29337614
>Season 1 Luna just back from the moon.
>Your sister was so nice to you today, maybe shes changed.
>Bedroom door opens.
>She kept that hairbrush for over 1000 years?
>Guards outside have to pretend not to hear their new sovereign cry as she gets her moons turned red all over again.

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>>29339159
>she gets her moons turned red all over again.
Little did anyone know, there's a direct correlation between Luna's butt cheeks and the actual moon.

All around horse land, ponies took to the sky in amazement & horror as the moon above them turns from a pink to red hue right before their eyes.

>>29337689
Mouth soaping for the win!

>>29339187
>civil unrest starts as the moon keeps turning red every night around the same time.
>Celestia blames luna
>Only reasonable solution is to spank her more right?

>>29339242
so great to see/hear about so horrible to experience.

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Okay, I've got something half done.
It's judicial, which usually isn't the most popular, but I like them so fuck it.
For the first time I'm bringing back an OC...Ivory Lance, the crusty old Sergeant from my "Three Cadets" story (it's on FiM Fiction). This one is set about 20 years before, when he was a young Sergeant in the Royal Guard.

Special Duty Service...enjoy.

>>29339814
1
>"Sir...the Sergeant Major will see you now."
It had been a long wait but at last Ivory Lance got on his hooves and walked into the office of his new superior, giving a polite nod to the secretary as he entered.
>"Sergeant Major Cannonade?"
>"Ah yes! Come in, come in. Sorry to keep you waiting."
Ivory Lance walked in, tall, straight, at attention...the picture of perfect military bearing.
>"Sergeant Ivory Lance, sir, reporting as ordered."
The Sergeant Major was considerably less formal.
>"At ease, have a seat, please."
He shuffled a few papers on his desk, sweeping them away into a drawer but leaving one folder.
>"You're fairly new to the unit, I haven't gotten a chance to meet you properly. Today's a big day...you'll be administering your first judicial punishment. Do you feel ready?"

Ivory Lance never dropped his rigid professional demeanour.
>"Yes sir. I've completed the training...my appointed assistants and I have done several dry runs with the practice dummy...and I've served as assistant on two punishments."
Sergeant Cannonade nodded...he was aware of all this. It was standard procedure for a new member of the Canterlot Special Disciplinary Detachment to act as an assistant a few times before he or she was called upon to deliver a punishment themselves. Break 'em in slow...it's a hard job.
The Sergeant Major opened up the last folder left on his desk.
>"I've been reviewing your service record...very impressive, Sergeant."
>"Thank you, Sir."
>"Top of your class in basic military training...worked on engineering projects on the Northern rail-road...accepted to the Royal Guard...you even saw actual combat in the Badlands."

>>29339819
2
Ivory Lance downplayed it;
>"Just skirmishes, Sir. Dog squatters frequently violate the mining treaties and move in on pony claims. Settlers were attacked...we responded to pacify the situation."
Sergeant Cannonade's eyebrows rose.
>"Wounded twice in action...awarded the Celestial Medal of Valor...I'd say you did more than 'pacify' the situation."
He gave the junior NCO a respectful nod. In 20 years of service in the Equestrian military he'd never seen combat himself. It wasn't exactly envy, but he had a solemn admiration for this young Sergeant who had actually proven himself in battle.
>"With a record like yours you could have any posting in Equestria. So tell me, why did you choose the Special Disciplinary Detachment?"
Ivory sensed it was time to loosen up a bit; he answered less formally.
>"Well, Sir, my long term goal is to teach. I'd like to have a position at the Canterlot Military Academy someday and the best way to do that is to have a wide variety of service on my record."
Again, the Senior Sergeant nodded.
>"Well, you've certainly got that."
He shifted subjects to the work of the day.
>"Today's going to be your first whipping, so we're starting you off easy."
>"It'll be a private one, so you won't have to deal with a crowd."
He pulled a paper from his desk and slid it over to Ivory Lance.
>"Miss Juniper Jewel, age 19. Arrested for shoplifting, pled guilty. Had one prior conviction, 3 years ago, for mischief & vandalism. The court sentenced her to 30 public lashes with the strap but she was co-operative and seemed like a good kid, so we offered her private punishment instead...which she happily accepted."
As Ivory read the Court Order for Punishment his supervisor continued;
>"You said you've participated in two punishments already?"
>"Yes, Sir. As an assistant. Last Tuesday with 3 minors convicted of defacing a public fountain...then yesterday with that private punishment of the banker convicted of fraud."

>>29339827
3
Sergeant Cannonade rolled his eyes.
>"Oh boy...by Celestia's beard, that one turned into a clusterfuck."
It had been part of a much bigger fraud case...dishonest bankers had been caught selling bad investment bonds to senior citizens. Princess Celestia took a hard line against that, and a lot of formerly rich ponies were going to be spending time in the dungeon...or worse the salt mines...for that. But one young stallion chose to save himself by giving evidence against his superiors, so earning a lighter sentence of 50 whacks administered privately.

He'd been pretty anxious and didn't sleep the night before, but when the time came and the young banker was led into the punishment room he completely lost his nerve. He began struggling and begging for mercy...Ivory Lance and the other assistant had to drag him across the room to the flogging frame, then force him down to be restrained. All the time the panicked young stallion fought them...screaming and pleading for help from the witnesses who had to sit and watch uncomfortably his shameful display.

By the time the struggling prisoner was finally strapped down tightly Ivory Lance was panting, nearly out of breath. He straightened up and reported;
>"The prisoner is ready to receive punishment."
He had to raise his voice; the banker never stopped his pitiful howling.

Luckily the trooper appointed to deliver the whipping that day was an experienced mare named Tre Buchet. Sergeant Buchet never showed a hint of emotion, neither pity nor anger. When it was time she stepped up, delivered 50 lashes to the rump of the screaming, bawling banker and when it was over professionally reported the sentence had been carried out.

>>29339833
4
Exausted (more by his own struggling than the beating) the stallion had to be helped up and almost carried back to the recovery room. When he was released later that day he was very ashamed of his conduct.

>"At least you troopers did your jobs well. Let's hope your first whipping goes smoother than that mess."
Ivory agreed.
>"Yes Sir. If that's all I think I'll go check preparations and go meet the convict."
>"That's a good idea...might put her at ease. Dismissed, Sergeant Lance."
Ivory Lance got up, snapped to attention and left with the same military professionalism he'd entered with.

First Ivory checked the punishment chamber and found it in perfect order.
The flogging frame was in position...all restraints in good working order.
There were chairs set up for the witnesses.
The room was clean...the dreaded leather strap was freshly oiled.
Satisfied, he moved on.

As Ivory walked down the hallway, hooves clopping on the old stones beneath them, he passed the stairway down to the old dungeons. No longer used, these were the ancient torture chambers from the bad old days before Princess Celestia's reign. Down there were preserved the terrifying tools of punishment used by the Unicorn Kings to keep their subjects in line.
Clamps and chisels for splitting the hooves of Earth ponies...
Hooks for ripping out Pegasus feathers...
Neck restraints and saws for cutting the horns off Unicorns.
Some of the awful tools worked equally well on all 3 races, like the rack where ponies were stretched until their joints tore apart, and blackthorn vine whips that cut flesh with every cruel lash.

Of course none of these things had been used for centuries...not since Celestia had taken over and reformed Equestrian justice. Now they were museum pieces, carefully preserved as reminders of a harsh past. Every year around Nightmare Night the old dungeons were opened up for tours; popular with goth teenagers and ponies with a macabre sense of curiosity.

More to come

>>29339187
HOLY FUCK THIS IS GENIUS

Continuing...

>>29339846
5
Despite her abolition of cruel torture methods Princess Celestia was resolute in her belief that ponies who had broken the law could still benefit from a reddened rump, and that society would benefit from watching those miscreant ponies have their rumps reddened in a public setting.
In most small towns this was done by the local constable. Equestria was a peaceful country with no need for large police forces. If the town constable did not feel up to the task a detachment of the Royal Guard could be sent to assist, but it usually wasn't necessary.
In larger cities where there was more crime the police departments handled these unpleasant matters. Canterlot was special...as the capitol city its law enforcement was handled by the Royal Guard and City Guard, so a special detachment was set up to carry out punishments. It was considered a difficult assignment, delivering painful beatings went against the nature of Equestrian ponies, but there were always a few volunteers willing to take the responsibility. These were screened carefully to weed out sadists and perverts, leaving and elite group of trained professionals sworn to carry out the orders of the courts.

Today Ivory Lance would be delivering his first punishment. He stopped at the door of a locked cell and took a deep breath. Up to this point it had all been just training. Even when he was serving as an assistant...leading the unlucky ponies to the flogging frame, strapping them down...it hadn't been him delivering the torture. Today it would be, but first he was going to meet the filly he would be torturing.

The guard on duty in this section came down the hall to unlock the door for him.
>"Visiting the prisoner?"
>"Yeah...she's scheduled for 3pm this afternoon."
>"I don't think she'll give you any trouble, she's been pretty quiet. You'll be locked in so just give the coded knock if you need help or want out."
Ivory thanked him and he unlocked the door.

>>29340567
6
The room was not a long term prison cell, simply a waiting room where the prisoner spent her time between her sentencing at court and the punishment. It was comfortable, with white painted walls, a barred window and a bed. There was a single chair, and the prisoner was allowed to have books.
Ivory Lance entered and saw the young shoplifter laying on the bed, but she jumped to her hooves when he entered.
>"Is it t-time?"
She stammered nervously...the bags under her eyes told Ivory she hadn't slept much last night.
>"Not yet. A few more hours. Just try to relax."
For this Ivory Lance dropped his strict military bearing and tried to put her at ease.
>"You're Juniper Jewel? My name is Sergeant Ivory Lance. I'll be carrying out your sentence today."
There was a plate of hay and vegetables on the chair, only nibbled at. Most convicts didn't have much appetite before their punishment was carried out. Ivory carefully moved her plate to the windowsill and sat down.
>"I just came to see how you're doing, and tell you how things are going to happen this afternoon."
Juniper nodded, and sat down on her bed across from him.
>"My lawyer from court sorta told me what to expect."
>"That's good. She'll be there, along with a few other ponies you won't recognize."
Ivory spoke softly to put her at ease.
>"When it's time two guards will take you from your cell to the punishment room."
>"Will you be one of them?"
>"No. I'll be in the room already. I know you'll be nervous, but just go along peacefully, it's best for every pony when you do.
>"Along with me there will be a Court Officer. She will certify that the sentence was carried out, and report back to the Judge.
>"A Doctor will supervise the punishment.
>"Your attorney will be there, along with an observer from Amnesty Equestria. They'll both guarantee your rights aren't violated.
>"The business owner you stole from has a right to be there, but he hasn't signed in so I don't think he's coming."

>>29340570
7
Ivory Lance continued to list the ponies who would be present at Juniper Jewel's whipping;
>"My boss...Sergeant Major Cannonade will be there to supervise.
>"And you are allowed two witnesses of your choosing. Do you have any pony coming?"
Juniper shook her head.
>"No sir. My parents visited me last night, but I asked them not to come.
>"I just...don't want them to see me like that."
Ivory nodded understandingly.
>"Okay, so it's just you, me, my two assistants and those five ponies we talked about.
>"Now, your lawyer told you about the special deal you got...why this isn't being done in the public square, right?"
She gulped and nodded. There was a lot of nodding.
>"She told me it was your first time, and I might get a few extra l-lashes 'cause of that."
>"You're right. If the Court Officer isn't satisfied with a stroke she may order it repeated."
Juniper shuddered. 30 lashes were going to be bad enough, but that was the deal. The risk of a few extra in exchange for a private whipping.
>"I understand, sir."
She brought her eyes up to meet his. Juniper wasn't crying, but her eyes were full of nervous tears.
>"I...I'm really sorry. I screwed up...I don't know why I did it. It's not even like I needed the thing I stole. It was so stupid."
Ivory Lance didn't know what to say. Sorry or not, it made no difference, he had a job to do.
>"Well, what matters is what you do after today. It's too late to avoid this now, you just have to learn from it and move on positively."

>"I got in trouble once before. Some kids from school had a party in a vacant house and things got out of control. We had cider...somepony started trashing the place...we were all doing it and then the City Guard showed up.
>"I only got community service then. My father gave me a spanking though..."

>>29340585
8
Ivory Lance shook his head.
>"You really shouldn't expect it to be like that...like a spanking from your parents.
>"This is a court ordered judicial punishment. It's going to be a lot worse.
>"When you were a filly, and your parents felt you'd had enough, that you'd learned your lesson, they stopped, right?"
Juniper sniffled, but confirmed with a nod.
>"Well I can't. I'm required by law to deliver the full punishment ordered by the Judge. If you're in unbearable agony by the second lash, sorry to say nopony is going to stop things...you're getting the full 30 no matter what.
>"Only the Doctor can stop things if he determines you are in medical danger...but even if he does the whipping will continue at another time."
That seemed to scare Juniper;
>"What do you mean 'medical danger'?"
>"The Doctor will call a stop if you can't breathe, or you lose consciousness. Also, we have to stop no matter what if there's even a speck of blood...but you don't have to worry about that. The strap is carefully designed never to break your skin; it's pretty much impossible.
>"You understand, the Doctor is not there to mitigate your pain, just to protect your safety, right?"
Juniper said she understood.
>"Beyond that, only Princess Celestia can issue a pardon...and I've never heard of that happening for simple shoplifting."

Juniper was quiet for a while, pondering her fate, but she finally spoke.
>"I think I'm ready. Thank you for coming to talk to me. I think I'm less scared now."
Ivory got up.
>"Try to relax...get some rest. It'll be over before you know it and then it's all up to you how you go from there."
She thanked him one last time and Ivory gave the code knock. The guard let him out of the cell. The next time he saw Juniper Jewel he'd be taking a strap to her behind.

To be continued...

>>29340596
The kind demeanor from Ivory and his sympathetic yet businesslike manner of describing things to Juniper about what her punishment will be is both cute and hot.

The anticipation part of it is especially well done, and the effect is mirrored by what I felt, too. You set the tone and the mood very well. I personally loved the "30 strokes no matter what" explanation parts. Something about a cold number that needs to be enforced, no matter how in pain the pony is, is hot to me.

Also, two things: sorry for no update tonight, and sorry for not reading your Nomine/Krishna collab, yet! That thing is long.

>>29340596
I like Juniper, she sounds like a qt. It's a shame she got a whipping coming.

>>29340570
not a big fan of judicial, but these characters are interesting. This could be one of those miniseries, the punishments dealt by Ivory Lance, different ponies with different stories and personalities, and different punishment implements and amounts. Not only DCFTEF could do it, maybe, but something other writefags could even do their own twists on.

Bedtime bump, keep it up fellow spankos

>>29339814
I remember that fic. Jesus, that was really that long ago?

>>29342091
[Feeling old intensifies]

>>29336359
was talking about >>29285431

>reddit
no, I hate how there's an account requirement. I don't want to make a new account for every post either.

/trash/ would allow cartoon spanking.

>>29338471
I love this shit, but the genre usually involves some kind of penetration when I really just want cute women dealing with uncooperative patients.

>>29338977
your technical quality is so high it would take multi posts to paste all the funny & good quotes in just 1 story. rest assured with you I am guaranteed 2 of [intrigue, funny, and hot] and often all 3. like twily sounds like a total believable dork in the hornjob story and it's really funny.

>>29339159
>>29339187
kek and unf
>everypony knows when Luna has been bad

>>29342091
I remember discovering DC's fics (the pinkie one especially) and all notions of not becoming a "clopper" going out the window

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/76648/pinkie-pie-the-cakes

>Gilda
>Visiting her old best friend Rainbow Dash
>In the privacy of her house
>Setting her plan in motion
>"So hey, wanna try a game only the best griffons dare to play?" she asked in her usual tone, but her heart was racing
>"Sure!" replied Rainbow Dash "I may be no griffon but I AM best, so close enbough."
>"Cool. Most ponies just aren't though enough to take it, that's why I'm asking you."
>"Tell, how is it?"
>Gilda tried to speak, but only heavy breaths came from her beak, wich she covered up by clearing her throat
>"It's easy" she tried her best to sound casual about it "the challenger smacks the challenged's flanks for, say, a minute. If the challenged cries, the challenger wins, if not, the challenger loses."
>Rainbow Dash's smile had dissapeared, she was silent
>Oh shit, gotta add something
>"If the challenger loses, it has to do wathever the challenged tells her to do for the rest of... the day."
>"I see" said Rainbow Dash, thoughtful "That sounds..."
>"Like too much for you?" teased Gilda
>"No! Just unexpected."
>"I told you only though griffons could handle it."
>"Well, here is a though pony that can handle it too!"

>>29342355
>Despite all her anticipation, Gilda was still surprised to hear that, couldn't even hide it
>"You sure? I was..." She was starting to have second thoughts, if she ever found out there was no such game... "I wasn't being serious."
>"But I am. And I... Wait. I get it. I know what's going on here."
>...
>"You know I'm going to win!" Dash finally said "Don't worry, Gilda. I won't make you do anything too embarassing."
>"Hee hee... Sure."
>"So... how, exactly?" Asked Dash pointing at her rump with her eyes
>Gilda sat down and, still visibly shocked that it worked, and simply pointed at her lap
>Dash got closer, confused
>Gilda helped her lay across her lap, trembling
>"I think I saw something like this in a magazine once" said Dash "A mother and her foal, so how bad can it be?"
>Wait, she was never spanked before?
>"I can see the clock from here, Gilda, so no cheating"
>Gilda was breathing heavily again
>"Ready, set, g-... Wait... Someone is calling me from outside."
>Gilda quickly went outside to see, leaving Dash behind
>"...brand new day and we got a lot of pranking to- Ooh."
>It was a pink pony, full of weird party stuff
>Dash went to greet her
>"Morning, Pinks. Gilda, this is my gal pal, Pinkie Pie."
>Gotta play along for now

To be continued maybe
Based on this fic: http://pastebin.com/LbEBnemT

>>29339846
>Clamps and chisels for splitting the hooves of Earth ponies...Hooks for ripping out Pegasus feathers...Neck restraints and saws for cutting the horns off Unicorns.Some of the awful tools worked equally well on all 3 races, like the rack where ponies were stretched until their joints tore apart, and blackthorn vine whips that cut flesh with every cruel lash.

Careful with that edge, don't cut yourself

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Stuff that was happening in another thread.

>>29340596
judical punishment is a huge turn off for me.
and almost lost intrest when I read about the tools of punshment for three races. I mean I was like. is he really going there ?

2nd thing. you are using too many OCs. its making it hard for me to follow the plot.
-
these are the issues that bothered me while reading your story.

but its good that you addressed some of these issues. immediately killing my tension and reassure me (as a reader) in following paragraph that these torture devices are ancient and its used as display for the museum.
it got me going.

>Princess Celestia was resolute in her belief that ponies who had broken the law could still benefit from a reddened rump
now that's a princess we all want.

ivory going to the prisoner and telling Juniper what's gonna happen to her in the following day was really good build up.
Note : you cannot tell the us the audience what's gonna happen in advance and follow through with it.

looking forward for what's gonna happen next .

links to pics? nsfw ones?

Page 9 quick bump

>>29342734
Which thread was that?

>>29343144
who are u talking to ?

>>29343988
Bat thread

>>29344023
>bat thread
*write your fetish and slap a bat pony into it thread

There fixed that for you

>>29344071
shh...
stop telling people my secrets

>>29344071
You sound salty

>>29344071
at least there are active people there. unlike this barren place.

>>29344332
Slow, but not barren. It just seems like a lot of the people who are normally here are just too busy to post stuff most of the time. They'll pop in and out.

>>29342369
Interesting idea
I like how Gilda is all nervous about it

>>29344279
naw m8. nothing of the sort
i was just poking some fun at it

How is this for an idea?

Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom make a bet. Each one of them bets 100 bits, which is a lot of money for fillies, that they can take more spankings than the other pony before giving up.

So, each one of them acts as naughty as possible with their families, and they count the number of spankings they get and report back the next day, showing each other their spanked red flanks as proof and taking pictures so that they can compare the previous day with the present day, verifying that each filly was indeed spanked.

This goes on until their pictures are discovered.

>>29345141
kind of OOC for them

>>29345177
Apple Bloom and Scootaloo? Only thing is I doubt Scoot's parents and/or RD spank her.

>>29345186
I'd say use OC colts

>>29345193
Rumble and some other colt maybe. Button doesn't seem like a colt who'd do that, or Pipsqueak for that matter. Tender Taps?

Still being a lazy ass and waiting for a story where the crimes of one CMC accidentally end up getting another CMC spanked. Undeserved spanking from misunderstandings give me wood.

>>29340596
sounds harsh, i'm not normally one for judicial but im interested in more.

>>29340596
>>29346225

Sounds very harsh indeed. For all this destroys my spanking cred, though, I actually find myself wanting her to be shown mercy.

Maybe it's just due to working on an extremely harsh judicial spanking myself, albeit a well-deserved one, but I really want Juniper to have her sentence lessened or something.

A little sweetness to go with all the harshness I'm going to drop on this thread soon, as it were. UB4 is almost complete, and the spankings Chrysalis will undergo are...rough.

>>29340596
Nope, nope and nope.
>grimdark le edge mcfuck past with detailed description of torturing and killing ponies
>judical lashing
>beating with no mercy

we need more sweet, cute and lewd, not this FoE shit

>>29346865
It was a description of past goings on. That's not edgy. More cute would be nice, though.

>>29346980

Well, like I said, I'd like to see some mercy or cuteness in this story, and I know DC is one of the guys who can do that really well.

Perhaps Ivory intercedes with someone on Juniper's behalf? As a decorated veteran, he should have some clout, after all.

I guess we just have to wait for what DC writes. Personally, though, I don't find the story to be all that edgy. It does state that the items were used in the past, and the narration makes it clear that Ivory thinks they were barbaric and wrong.

>>29346980
>That's not edgy
To my taste, it was overedge. Completely pointless to be mentioned here, I felt like reading Project Horizons again

>>29347619
I just thought it was good background info to explain why corporal punishment of this nature exists in the first place in a cute horsy land.

>>29347619
>Mentioning bad things happening literally ever is super edgy, u gaiz

>>29345141
I had a similar idea that I may or may not use some day, which also has Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom making a bet of some variety that they can take more punishment than the other.

The catch is, the two of them switch places (and punishments), as a "I bet I have it worse than you do" sort of thing. Applejack and Rarity don't really question it and are willing to play along, because they already found out about their sisters' deal, and decided to make a little wager of their own...

Another idea also has the swap, but for added shenanigans, Scootaloo gets punished by BOTH sisters.

>>29347956
My peepee needs this.

>>29346865
Nope nope nope
We dont need more shitty fingerings and fake spanking. We need proper spankings just like DC provides

>>29348144
erotic is good though, too. we got to have the blend

>>29346603
dammit! all your early shit was so hot and not harsh! But I'm happy with the number of stories already in the archives.

>>29346865
>analagous to real life torture devices
>edgy
this isn't some shitty manga where they make up new forms of evil just because the writers can't write. Gotta admit those lines in DCFTEF's story are spoopy for me.

>>29342369
This is interesting. So Gilda is turned on by it but doesn't want to show it?

>>29345141
I like this idea a lot, but I think it needs to be tweaked. As >>29345177 says, it doesn't make sense for their characters.

>>29347956
Sounds like your brand of funny and comedy of spanking errors.

>>29348649
No, fuck erotic and fuck fingering, keep this garbage in the shitty fetish bat thread
DCFTEF gives us the best possible material we could imagine, I want ponies to scream in agony and beg for mercy, this cancer >>29342734 is what we should avoid

>>29348931

I intend to return to not so harsh in later stories. While I can write harsh, bear in mind Parental is what I do best.

I believe I can promise at least two more stories with Violet, one with her as the spanker, actually.

Likewise, I'm working on that story wherein Twilight releases a God-like being from an ancient book and gets spanked for it. It will involve Velvet catching it as well.

Either way, save for one guy it actually seems like a few people in here agree with me that they want Juniper to be shown some mercy.

Maybe it's because she's showing remorse?

>>29348939
>REEEEEE

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>>29348939
>Stop enjoying things REEEE

>>29348939
>spankee does something.
>spanker pulls the spankee.
spank spank spank
>oo oo
spank spank spank
>wah wah wah
>spankee start bawling
>spanking ends.
>Gives a hug.
>the end
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>spankee wants to be spanked.
>spanker spanks the spankee
Spank spank spank
>hnn nnn mnnn
spank spank spank
>ah harder owe owe
>spanker start fingering spankee
>spankee cums.
>the end

===

two different things. almost same formula
so instead of complaining post something.

>>29342734
this happened in another thread. I kept this there cause I am aware of people's taste here. I posted a summary of what happened there cause it's still whether you like it or not it's spanking related. and it's better than empty bumbs.
oh one more thing. stop sucking DC's dick

>>29315028
Only thing is maybe Sweetie's face looks a little odd, but the position and Magnum's face is very hot

ah the drama. it killed the thread.
-Page 10 bump

>>29351607
The thread before this one was better, but this was the continuation of the last thread. It makes some sense that it's slower.

This place has gone through downtimes before, and it's also gone through some big uptimes too. We've weathered!

>>29350454
my thing is ponies spanked to unexpected orgasm when it's supposed to be punishment. I can't find ones with that in the PB

>>29352322
There was that thing Rustic wrote a while back that had a colt orgasming during a spanking from his mother, but if I remember correctly, that was from his dick rubbing against her thighs, not the spanking itself. There was that thing with Dizzy getting off during a spanking for posting naughty pictures on 4bat tho.

>>29352322
>ponies spanked to unexpected orgasm
If i remember correctly woox done that on multiple occasions.

Shining armor and hit wife
http://pastebin.com/VX6aCk8f

The Gingerroot experment
http://pastebin.com/4Z815Nd4

Mischievous dream spirit
http://pastebin.com/fnigPERP

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btw what happend to woox I haven't seen him around

>>29352322
Quackers wrote stories with orgasm during punishment, but we don't archive him

>>29352401
He goes by RusticAnon now. This should be him: >>29342734

Cute punishments with naughty fillies. Mmm.

Imagine Sweetie Belle galloping home three hours after curfew. She forgot again, and her mom and dad are probably worried sick about her. Her fellow CMC offered to come with and try to take some of the blame, but Sweetie declined. She knows what is coming.

She opens the door, and her mother and father are standing in the living room. Sweetie flinches as they turn around to give her a shocked look, but it turns angry.

"Young missy, I was worried sick about you! What do you have to say for yourself?"

Sweetie's mom is quiet, and it's obvious she's been crying. Sweetie Belle knows she has no excuse, so she tells him the truth. "I forgot, daddy. I'm sorry, please don't spank me! I didn't mean it!"

Her daddy was already on it, though. Sweetie Belle had been promised a hard spanking if she broke curfew again. Her mother is still crying when she leaves the room.

Daddy goes into the kitchen, and comes out with a big wooden spoon. Sweetie Belle sobs with fear, knowing that spankings with an object in her family were only reserved for lengthy butt blisterings that everypony would be able to see on her bottom the next day.

"Sweetie, get over my lap. You earned this," he says while he pats his lap with the spoon.

Sweetie Belle cries while she drags her hooves, a very long spanking and a very hot red bottom in her future.

>>29353391
we have tons of these stories and the new ones vary just on character names. Like >>29350454 said

>spankee does something.
>spanker pulls the spankee.
spank spank spank
>oo oo
spank spank spank
>wah wah wah
>spankee start bawling
>spanking ends.
>Gives a hug.
>the end

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>>29353421
So what? We enjoy them.
Every fetish thread on this board has its own formula. If you've got some unique, paradigm shifting idea then let's see it.

>>29353421
ha giving hugs. We dont believe in hugs in my stories just more spankings.

>>29353421
Invent something new then.

>>29353457
>So what?
>p10 bump

>>29353481
you must be really fun at parties

>>29353498
Heh typical meme reply.

>>29353481
>surprise climax during a spanking
>daily/scheduled spanking
>asking for a spanking to be punished
>asking for a spanking for sexual pleasure
>asking for a spanking to get both
>spanker and spankee working together to find a proper place to deliver a spanking
>friendly and happy spankings
>foals trained to assume the position when they need a spanking without even asking them
>public spanking with sexual themes
>experimenting with positions: spankee standing, lying on the back, leaning over your arm, hugging you, being held by hindhooves
>experimenting with places: on the street, in the park, public, hidden in the bushes/behind the tree, in alleys, on a beach, in mountains, in a forest
>time stop: stop the time for 10 minutes to do anything you want
>pony culture: giving a spank is a sign to work or walk faster for them, use this as an excuse to "prepare" or hurry your pony

>>29353552
>bored/uninterested spanking, when you're busy with one thing and simultanously you're spanking
>pony maid - every mistake means pulling down her panties and giving a few spanks

>>29353552
>>29353421
>>29350454
How are people complaining about formulaic stories when we literally have one about a disembodied / magically cut in half twilight being spanked in semi public in this very thread?

>>29353570
predictable and "Trixie's revenge on Twilight" scenario is passé

>>29353481
Getting a cutie mark prompts a spanking ceremony? Ancient tradition where a cutie mark attracts predators or bad luck or some shit, so the curse needs needs to be whipped and beaten out of the flank? Tie it in to the whole Cutensenara or however the fuck it's spelled thing, have a fic where DT's special day is ruined when she realizes every guest at her party has to take turns spanking her.

>>29353583
disembodied wasn't predictable to me. life must be rough if everything is so dull to you.

>>29353583
>Thread is dead
>Insult one of the few stories we have

>>29353614
>Insult
Do you even know what is an insult and what is insulting and what is criticism?

>>29353583
>>29353614
>>29353640
Felt insulting to me, just adds to my drive to not continue it. Got all of like 2 responses anyway to the whole thing anyway so i guess i'll just leave it where its at.

>>29353664
>Felt insulting to me
your life must be really hard

>>29353570
Exactly.
And what about that other one where pony transformed into brush and was used to spank another flank.
And of course the Woox's crazy story about mechanical nursery.

Also there was that one where rarity got mistaken for a filly in mintours land

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Plenty of stories that are out of the regular formula.

>>29353688
>Not knowing how to offer constructive criticism and just sounding like an asshole instead.
You must have a lot of friends.

>>29353742
Jesus, stop

>>29353747
>Jesus, stop
>Do you even know what is an insult and what is insulting and what is criticism?
top kek

>>29307224
Is it wrong that I clop to this?

>>29353583
>>29353597
>>29353640
>>29353688
>>29353742
>>29353747
>>29353758
can't take criticism about his criticism. That's pretty rich.

>>29353720
People just want to complain.

>>29353664
I loved it so far, but I understand. I didn't get much so far for my new Rarity story, either, and it kinda sucks. Not even sure if people like it.

But fuck that guy, vega. No matter what we do, it'll be "boring" to him. You have good shit.

>>29353887
Thanks I've enjoyed your stuff too. It's no big deal either way though this one was supposed to be short so i'll just wrap it up and try something else next. This thread is just kinda slow, you've gotta write for yourself as much as everyone else to survive.

>>29353720
The pastebin has at least two thirds of his "unique" scenarios in it already, lolol

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>>29353887
I can't speak for anyone else directly, but I think the fine people of this thread will stand with me when I say this: that story is pretty fuckin good so far, and sorry for not commenting.

>>29352401
>btw what happend to woox I haven't seen him around
I'm here. I just changed my username to match my tumblr account.

also
>>29352397
>>29352401
>>29353720
People actually read and remembered my stories. This really made me feel happy.
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>spanking formula
I have to admit I'm one of those people who are not a fan of the standard formula.
I find it repetitive/predictable and that makes it a bit less interesting for me. but who am I to judge what other people like.

>>29353552
>asking for a spanking
I think DC wrote one with big mac asking cheerilee to spank him.
but
>asking for a spanking for sexual pleasure
this is not an easy plot to write.

>spanker and spankee working together to find a proper place to deliver a spanking
>experimenting (places - positions)
this would make an interesting story. I might get on it one day.

>foals trained to assume the position when they need a spanking without even asking them
Heh I did write a similar one to this but it was reversed. the Anon assumed that his pony wanted to get spanked when she handed him a brush and laid in front of him.

>time stop: stop the time for 10 minutes to do anything you want.
This is my type of crazy and has my name written all over it.

>>bored/uninterested spanking, when you're busy with one thing and simultanously you're spanking
I kinda wrote something similar. the Father was too busy while spanking his daughter. His spanking was getting interrupted and delayed , which agonized her.

>>29353664
I was waiting for you to finish. the story good part was about to start and you are abandoning it ?

>>29354940
Your stuff is sometimes less sexy to me when I read it because it goes off the rails, but I still like reading it because of that very fact that it is so crazy, and funny

You also made thread minx, Dizzy Cream, the daughteru of us all. We got you, Rustic.

>>29354940
it was never going to be long. there will be a bit more but thats probably it.

>>29354940
I think you must be thinking of the one Zad did with Big Mac asking Cheerilee to let him spank her.

>>29355134
Sounds fine bro

I asked for story suggestions some threads ago and have thought about the reply / replies I got. Nothing written but if I get the urge to write I will check back on what people said.

A few weeks ago I wrote a few dozen words about Rara adding a spanking to her on-stage performance, but I ran into a few versions of the same problem. Never got passed the setup and exposition, but did think about beyond that.

How to make it hot? For once the story made sense but I guess I have no interest in her being spanked in the context I came up with. Best I could do would be a ripoff of the oneswat with Photo Finish. Rara being a professional and this being in the script. Then the realism of the performance going too far and her being in genuine pain. Plus the public element since this would be on-stage. Or as a slight alteration, she specifically wants the spanking to go that far, because she and her fans are just crazy enough to want it.

The reason for this story would be Rara is still a pop star, even after the events of the show. She had to find what parts of her pop identity to keep and what to change, and also needed to make a new show to tour with.

...adult Rara might be too much of a pure qt for me to want her spanked anyway. Filly Rara getting a camp spanking might be fun.

>>29353664
I wasn't interested once it got into Trixie calling Twilight a slut and humping her. So I didn't vote because I didn't feel it was my place to vote.

Cool, especially because it's disembodied, but the slut stuff and the humping between borderline strangers is not what I'm usually interested in. Don't know how to make it constructive because it's completely subjective. So I avoided posting what I thought. (Also have been a bit busy.)

>>29354940
I have had such trouble following your stories because you post them a little at a time and our archives have been backlogged lately. Then there's the subjectiveness where sometimes I don't enjoy them.

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Bump question:
When one sibling gets spanked but the other doesn't do you prefer...
>sympathy?
or
>sibling teasing?

>>29356228
>Cool, especially because it's disembodied, but the slut stuff and the humping between borderline strangers is not what I'm usually interested in. Don't know how to make it constructive because it's completely subjective. So I avoided posting what I thought. (Also have been a bit busy.)

that's totally fine i love feedback like that. I actually toned that back a lot i just wanted to emphasize the humiliation aspect but if its not for you i can't blame you for that. They'll be nothing like that for the rest of this one if that helps.

>>29356228
>Then there's the subjectiveness where sometimes I don't enjoy them.
#cries in the corner.

>Your stuff is sometimes less sexy to me when I read it because it goes off the rails, but I still like reading it because of that very fact that it is so crazy, and funny
This...
Less sexy more crazy...
I totally understand where you coming from. My concept and view on spanking are somehow different than how other people here view it.

To me the build up and the situation is far more important than the spanking itself.
example :
a scenario where a filly being chased around , then gets captured by an alien floating octopus that want to spank her for whatever reason, Is far more important (Lewd) for me than a well written scenario with much detail of a misbehaving filly getting spanked by her teacher in front of her classmates.

even if the spanking in the first scenario wasn't written in much detail. what lead to the filly's spanking was the thing that did it for me.

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the other important thing that is also important to me .. (i don't know the right word for it or how to describe it properly)
the feeling of being forced into a humiliating situation while being self-awareness of the awkwardness it causes.
(I hope that sentence made sense )
another way to say it. feeling uneasy of your humiliations. being self embarrassed by something.

let me give u an example (cause I think I lost you)
Celestia and Luna barged inside Twilight's room to see their little purple alicorn tied herself up in her bed while spanking herself with a brush. they took the brush from her. then they both spanked her really hard with it.

-In Twilight's mind she would be far more busy with the embarrassment and the shame rather than the pain in her butt. she would probably plead for them to stop. cause the Pain she is getting is being processed by her brain as shame.
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I think you understand now why most of my stories were written in such a way.

>>29356802
Sympathy soon after the fact, but teasing later on when the redness is faded and the hurt feelings are gone.

>>29357673
This

For whom do you think it would be most embarrassing for if they were being pulled by their ear to their spanking. I was thinking twilight, rarity or Celestia. Who do you think would be most embarrassed?

>>29358106
Spitfire by her Mom... in front of the entire team

>>29358125

Either her Mom, or by Celestia herself. Or perhaps Soarin decides he's had enough and needs to teach her a lesson about being captain?

>>29358195
That would be embarrassing, but hot.

>>29358195
After Rainbow Falls, oh hell yes.

>>29358195
If we are talking about humiliating, then she should have to stand in the corner with her red rump exposed for the rest of the day, letting all the newbies and the team seeing her.

>>29358952
I'm all with you on that. But why?
What would she do to deserve that humiliation.

>>29359293
because happy penis

>>29359304
Couldnt have said it better

>>29353767
I hope not.

>>29356802
Teasing. Ideally with a few smacks from the parent for teasing, so then they both have something to tease the other for. In spanking fiction / "real life" accounts, this involves an equal punishment for the teaser as the original punishment. That is over the top in my opinion. >>29357673 compelling argument.

>>29356898
your shit is so damn hot I don't care if you go in directions I don't like for some stories. It'd be a shame if you avoided something you love just to please someone else.

I adore humiliation just like you do, but most often in situations that sort of make sense. Humiliation stories can go way off the rails but usually start with only a few key facts that drive the rest of the story. The humping is more sexual harassment / abuse than anything else, but if one accepts DC's theory that spanking is commonplace in Equestria, then a spanking for naughtiness isn't hard to imagine even for adults.

>>29357103
>the feeling of being forced into a humiliating situation while being self-awareness of the awkwardness it causes.
I like this too.

>>29358195
F/F > M/F for me, so would prefer mom or Celestia. Mom would be easier to make realistic, but both are quite out there in realism.

>>29358195
>>29358605
>>29358952
I hope you read my "One Big Family". Not a perfect story but at least it has embarrassment.

>>29359293
Hats off to anyone able to write realistic humiliating scenarios. KK's Sore Shopping with Score and Act of Kindness, and DC's Visit from the Mother's League and 10% Time for example. Vega's Minotaur story starts plausible then gets crazy but stays crazy-hot.

>>29312698
>Collapsing onto the bench with both halves of your body you can only lay there panting and exhausted.
>Trixie was kind enough to leave you facing your shiny red sore flanks, no doubt just to humiliate you even more.
>All the attempts at kicking and squirming had left your backside covered in a light sheen of sweat which only made the red show up even more.
>If anyone saw this they'd know without a doubt you'd just had the bottom blistering of a lifetime...
>The show does on outside the curtain, you can't hear much but the cheers of the crowd are distinct.
>The longer she takes the better as far as you're concerned, it just means more time for you to recover before she comes back and does who knows what.
>How long could she keep you here anyway? She'd already spanked your bottom mercilessly surely she couldn't do much more right?
>You shutter knowing your only fooling yourself.
>She had been having fun lighting up your rump like a naughty filly and is likely no where near done.
>You almost slip off into an uneasy nap until a louder cheer gets your attention.
"Thank you! Thank you! You have all been such a wonderful audience that Trixie has decided to come and visit this lovely town more often!"
>More cheers go up, you find it a bit odd she went from mildly hated to loved so quickly but it was a good show you had to admit.
>Your musings are interrupted when you hear movement behind you.
>Movement that had better be Trixie, the only thing you had a good view of was your well reared rump.
"Did you hear that Twilight Sparkle they loved the show."
>"Thats umm thats great... I'm glad it went well for you..."
>Her face is unreadable to you, is her mood better or is it another facade?
"Yes Trixie is sure you are but more importantly what do we do with you my naughty little spankle?"

>>29359851
>You flush and look away from her, the gaze is practically predatorial and it sends a shiver down your spine.
>"I umm I've learned my lesson i swear..."
"Hmm yes Trixie is sure you think you have... Did you enjoy the view Trixie left you with?"
>She takes a few steps and places a hoof on your rump juggling it a bit for you.
>You blush and can't help but squirm your backside as she reminds you just how sore and exposed you are.
"Quite a well spanked bottom you have Twilight Spankle. Tell Trixie were you spanked growing up? Trixie knows you have been spanking yourself lately but has anyone else ever done it?
>Despite what some thought you were not a spoiled high noble filly who had never been in trouble in her life.
>Both your parents and the princess herself had worn your flanks our when needed and you didn't blame them, you were quite a handful after all.
>"...Yes..."
"Hmm yes what Twilight? Trixie wants to hear you say it."
>"Yes I was spanked growing up..."
"Trixie thought so, you have the air of a bratty filly who outgrew her spankings too soon after all."
>You blush but just look away from her, what does she know anyway?
"Trixie can tell you don't believe her but you will don't worry. Trixie will get the whole truth out of you and teach you an overdue lesson before the night is over my naughty spankle."
>Without warning Trixie's horn lights up a bright red and you find yourself abruptly teleported into what looks like her wagon.
>You didn't know Trixie knew teleportation at all much less was powerful enough to cover that distance with another in tow.
>Seeing the surprise on your face Trixie laughs.
"Trixie has grown much more powerful since our last encounter Twilight, do not be surprised."
>She walked past you and casually kicked your cart on the way.
>Much to your dismay this just happened to force you face first into your own butt, you bounced off but the term 'kissing ass' has taken on all new meaning for you now.
.

>>29359861
>Shaking your head you hear Trixie return from rummaging around behind you and try to turn your head to look at her.
>Before you can you gasp as something heavy and very powerful slides down over your horn.
>Your worst fears are realized as the inhibitor ring locks into place.
>In a panic you flare you horn attempting to break it, your an alicorn after all, but the ring holds strong.
>Before you can focus even more power to battle the ring your concentration is shattered by a horrible pain in your flanks.
>SPANK SPANK SPANK SPANK SPANK
>You squeal and squirm as the gigantic paddle in Trixie's hoof slams into your unprotected and sore flanks 5 horrible times.
"Did SPANK Trixie SPANK say SPANK you could SPANK struggle???" SPANK!
>"OWWWW IM SORRY IM SORRY!"
"You will be Twilight Spankle! You will learn to behave if it takes Trixie all night!"
>You gasp and whimper as Trixie's magic flows over the paddle and it takes on a life of its own beating your backside into submission!
>It's not as bad as when Trixie wielded it herself but its still a paddling!
>Over the next minute your struggles fade into pathetic sobbing as the paddle continues its brutal work on your raised rump.
>Trixie simply watches with a satisfied look at her nemesis goes from proud princess to bawling foal in front of her very eyes.
>With a spark of her horn the paddle finally stops, your bottom feels like your sitting on hot coals and you can't stop the tears rolling out of your eyes.
"There there its stopped your ok. All you have to do is be a good filly and do what Trixie says and you'll be fine ok?"
>You can only pathetically nod your head.
"Trixie knew there was a good filly in there somewhere! Now tell Trixie all about your past, she knows your a spanked filly so tell her everything."
>"I... um well... what do you want to know?..."

>>29359868
>The paddle lightly taps your abused seat and Trixie gives you a meaningful look making your eyes widen in terror at the idea of more paddling.
>"NO please my parents and the princess both spanked me! Please no more!"
"Shhh shhh you're not getting more yet just tell Trixie everything."
>She floats over a notepad and quill.
>The next half hour is perhaps the most embarrassing of your life.
>You tell Trixie everything from how your parents and the princess spanked you to when, why, how often and when the last time was.
>She was delighted to learn the princess had disciplined last only a couple years ago but kept the teasing to a minimum.
>Recording everything about your discipline history in her notepad she then pulled out some photos from a nearby desk.
>You blush realizing they are of course ones of you tanning yourself with the brush.
>In truth you had no idea why you'd done it, it just felt right even as you got bright red.
"Trixie is sure your curious why she's writing all this down so she will tell you."
>Closing the book she scribbles something on the front then turns it around to you.
'Effects of corporal punishment on Subject Twilight Sparkle'
"Now don't worry Trixie is not going to show this to anyone, it will remain between the two of us."
>Opening the book she shows you a few pages on the inside.
>You blush when you see shes included pictures and diagrams of your purple butt being turned bright red including some from today.
"As you can no doubt tell it is a study. A study of spanked princess plots that will go on far past today."
>You gulp at that past part.
>"Trixie please you can't hold this over my head forever this is blackmail..."
"Oh don't worry Trixie will not be the one running the study Twilight Spankle, you will!"
>Opening her cloak you only now notice something around her neck, some kind of winged amulet.
>You have no idea what it is but it positively radiates powerful dark magic.

>>29359875
"Trixie searched far and wide after you disgraced her and found this Twilight Sparkle! The Alicorn Amulet!"
>Trixie's horn sudden lights with magic causing you to scream as it smashes into your mind!
"You will not remember today Twilight Sparkle! You will only remember helping Trixie with her act and going home! But from this day forward you will have an insatiable need to be spanked! You will spank yourself! You will have others spank you! You will become the princess of spankings for all to know!"
>You uselessly thrash your head back and forth trying to resist the invasive magic.
>Mind magic has been illegal for centuries so very few were trained in the defense of it including yourself.
>Ideas flowed into your head faster than you could stop them.
>You were pretty bratty after all.
>You had spanked yourself before perhaps you just needed more?
>You would ask celestia. You would ask your friends.
>They would understand you just needed a good lesson right?
>Even better you could make a machine!
>The sparkle spanker 3000!
>The schematics formed in your mind and you pictured yourself tied down and bawling as you got your well needed lesson!
>How had you not seen it before? Forget friendship the princess of discipline was your true calling!
>Suddenly the ideas all stop and you collapse onto your table.
>The next few minutes you simply pant as you try to sort out your mind.
>The hot sore status of your bottom suddenly feels very deserved as you wiggle it remembering the paddling you had just received.
>Your thoughts are shattered as a hard wooden paddle is placed under your chin and lifts your gaze up to Trixie's.
"Well Twilight Sparkle. Do you have anything you want to ask of me?"
>You lick your lips and blush but know what you have to do.
>"Yes Trixie would you please... would you umm well... would you please finish with my lesson..."
"Your lesson Twilight? Trixie is unsure what you mean?"

>>29359883
>"My umm... with the paddle..."
"You have to say it spankle."
>"Please spank me trixie..."
>A huge grin spreads across Trixie's face and she ruffles your mane happly.
"Of course my little Spankle. Trixie knows what you need."

>An hour later you leave the wagon.
>Your rump is beyond red but all things considered not brutalized too badly, most likely due to your earth pony stamina you muse.
"Now Twilight you are to go home to your castle right through the town square. Ponies will see your spanking but if they ask you are to just tell them you deserved it, do you understand?"
>"Of course it was necessary afterall."
"Good. Trixie will stop by every few weeks as her schedule permits to check on you and you had better not be overdue for a lesson when she arrives!"
>"Yes Ma'am, thank you Ma'am!"
>Having shared your goodbyes you happily trot off towards your castle as fast as your unsteady legs will allow.
>What a great day!

>Ugh what time is it?
>You feel like you slept on your head or something...
>Crawling out of bed with your usual grace, falling onto the floor, you make your way to the bathroom.
>As soon as you take a seat in front of your vanity though you quickly jump back up and squeal!
>Turning your hips towards the mirror you are greeted by the sight of a bright red princess plot that looks like it's been spanked into next week!
>Reaching back to rub it even hurts! what happened!
>And why does it say 'Property of Thunderlane' on your left cheek?...
>OMG did you sleep with Thunderlane? Had he worn out your backside like this?
>Running a towel under some cold water and placing it on your backside helps a little as you go back to your room to look for any extra clues.
>A magical check of your 'parts' revealed that you had not slept with Thunderlane after all but if that was the case why had he reddened your seat like a foal?
>Suddenly out of the corner of your eye a notebook catches your eye.
'Effects of corporal punishment on subject twilight sparkle'

>>29359887
>You don't remember writing this... or do you?
>Taking a look inside makes you blush redder than your seat.
>Especially the most recent page.
>On it is what seems to be a first hand account of your encounter with Thunderlane!
>Including a few tears you must have dropped onto it as he did his painful job!
>Sweet celestia there was even pictures of you over his lap screaming like a foal!
>You vaguely remember talking to him about researching the effects of punishment on princess performance.
>Was that why you did this? It must have been.
>Based on your other notes in here it didn't seem like such a crazy idea the more you thought about it.
>And oh my this machine diagram!
>That looked very painful but a part of you knew you needed to build it...
>Opening to the schematics page you begin writing up a list of needed parts.
>Might as well get started on this 'Sparkle Spanker 3000'
>It was for the good of the kingdom after all... right?

end.

>>29359890
Holy shit, so hot vega. So that's why Twilight was so obsessed with spanking herself.

Trixie needs some comeuppance for what she did. Luna or someone else needs to figure out the reason why (maybe not Luna, since she seems to love frying poor Twilight's butt) Twily wants to be spanked so much, and find out the presence of mind magic. Then one thing could lead to another and then, it's Trixie's turn to get regular bottom roastings.

>>29359890
I didn't even realize this was a prequel. I think my favorite part is when Twilight has to ask Trixie for the spanking, and "one hour later" made me laugh out loud. You make sure your characters are spanked into oblivion. It was unclear whether she had amnesia or if Trixie framed Thunderlane or something like that so that Twilight wouldn't remember Trixie's mind magic. I can only imagine how embarrassing it must be for Twilight to want to ask other ponies to spank her flank, something so embarrassing but so desired by her at the same time. I think all the stallions in Ponyville would be down with paddling a Princess plot.

>>29360521
>It was unclear whether she had amnesia or if Trixie framed Thunderlane or something like that so that Twilight wouldn't remember Trixie's mind magic
yeah just like you said that's kinda up for you to decide.

>>29360037
that's not a bad idea i might have to think about that. glad you liked it.

C'mon niggaz, page 9

Page 9 yet again, but someone gave me a really good idea.

Usage of a switch, but rather than simply applying it to a naughty flank, apply it first to the hoofies that did the deed.

>>29362274
Oh fuck yes.

>>29362274
Peepee engaged. Peepee happy.

>>29307224
Is there a EQG version of this?

>>29362645
>EQG
no

>>29362416
>>29362622

You can thank Krishna for the idea

>>29362883
On the bottoms of the hoofies, or on the fetlocks? Or both?

>>29321769
SHHWHAP!

In an instant, the thick leather belt slashed all the way across Rarity’s presented buttocks. The impact, even in her bottom’s taut state from bending over so sharply, left momentary visible ripples on the skin.

Rarity felt the unbelievable, horrific sting immediately, and her mouth opened up wide, but the agonized cry took a moment to come out. It was like the shock of the pain just delivered made her brain take an extra moment to comprehend it, but once that moment was up, Rarity’s scream echoed around the house.

“EEEEEYYAAAAH!”

In reflex from the pain, Rarity’s legs bent at the knees, lowering her butt toward the floor, and her left foot lifted off of the ground. She automatically angled her bottom away from her father and the awful belt in his hand, sobbing while her feet crossed behind her and her hands squeezed the pillow like a vice. “Ahh, oh no, owww! Oww!”

The stripe of searing, unrelenting heat was unlike anything she had ever felt. Not even the hairbrush felt anywhere near this bad. Right away, Rarity had a wave of regret pass over her, and in a gasp of desperation, she pleaded for mercy.

“Oh, father, PLEASE no, I change my mind! Oww, oh, spank me with the hairbrush instead, daddy!” She said while looking with begging eyes at him, face still lying on the pillow.

But Magnum shook his head down at her. He closed his eyes, and tightened his grip on the belt. “No, Rare. You made your choice, and now you’re gonna take this belting.”

>>29363230
That was that. No anger in his voice, just telling it like it was. Rarity moaned pitifully, muttering “please” and “daddy” under her breath. Her father forced himself not to listen and commit to the rest of her punishment.

When Rarity’s bottom waving and flexing of her legs lessened, he sighed, and raised his belt. “Alright, Rare. Back into position. Time for the next lick.”

This declaration made a loud whine of protest come from his daughter’s mouth. She hesitated, but Magnum gave her some time to obey him, knowing she was in pain.

Rarity sobbed into her pillow, the seconds going by so fast before it was time for the next stroke of the belt. Every part of her wanted to simply bolt from the room, hands over her butt, but she knew better. Even though she was so afraid, she did obey her father, and straightened out her legs. Her bottom stuck high up in the air again, and her father took aim while she gasped and sobbed.

SHHWHAP!

“OOOOOWW! AAAOW! Ah, ahh!”

Squealing, Rarity once again bent at the knees as the belt whipped the lower half of her bottom, and her tummy slid across the bed as she pulled her rear end away from the source of the pain. Her legs danced in place, crisscrossing, kicking backward, and raising and lowering as she tried to relieve the sting from her rump. She couldn’t help but wave her bottom drunkenly all around, the crimson red stripes of pure pain driving her to howls.

“Ahhaaa, oohhohohh…”

Magnum waited perhaps another ten seconds, and then raised the belt again. “Next lick, hun. Get that bottom up.”