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Super Humans and Power Ponies! Issue #3

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>Cosmic horrors edition

Last thread
>>29156343

Excelsior true believers! Welcome to the Superhero thread, formerly Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends. All mlp/superhero green, art, and discussions are welcome.

Story list:
untitled 7 (still might be a Hydra agent)- chapter 1: http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
chapter 2: http://pastebin.com/pGJV6pUZ
chapter 2 -TL;DR version: http://pastebin.com/UusPhq6y
chapter 3: http://pastebin.com/fYHRDTA3
(Even further split then it was previously!)
treppahcs (has not seen Guardians of the Galaxy) - http://pastebin.com/xShn5AbX
superkeaton (under surveillance) - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (all clearly organized in his Pastebin)
Spider-bloke 2099 (not really from the future) - Blue Beetle Anon (http://pastebin.com/zANAAGcy) The First Date (a Blue Beetle Anon "side story" http://pastebin.com/GVr7XGyD)
Defiant - Probability Anon (http://pastebin.com/3Myw3t0h) Darkest Anon (http://pastebin.com/gQyK64G2) Hearths Warming green (http://pastebin.com/caHJZndf)
Beans (Still doing the rewrite) - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
3suns (has not posted in a while) - http://pastebin.com/u/3Suns
Red (now in Gotham)
The Captain - http://pastebin.com/77rsTRGZ (needs a Pastebin that he can update)

"all" Superhero Stories:
http://pastebin.com/AiBP87Si

drawfriends:
mamorukusanagi - http://mamorukusanagi.tumblr.com/tagged/my-art
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Shimmer is worst Person/pony
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>Actual last thread >>29223575.
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>>29294577
You gone goofed
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>>29294719
At least I caught it on my own this time.
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>>29294577
You got dubs so I guess Kek forgives you, so shall I.
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>>29294751
you still goofed though
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>>29294751
At least dubs let you fix it>>29294577
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>>29294751
The tradition continues!
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>>29294550
in the catalog this just looks like a galactic anus.
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>>29296392
Those are some nice hips.
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>>29296903
Damn right the are.
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Hail Hydra
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Where is everybody?
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>>29296903
SciTwi as Iron Woman or has armor plated hips.
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>>29296990
Not sure, after we had a no drama name change it just got quiet here. Or people have life stuff to do right now, we usually see everyone come by later.
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>>29296990
Its like January so most of the people here are probably students, so this would be pretty close to testing week or something for a lot of them. Waiting on having some spandex clad superheroine can wait till after testing, so they can get a reward for doing the right thing...I am now imagining Spider-Woman going over to her #1 fans house(Anon) to congratulate him on passing his test.
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>>29296994
But can you ride them? B-because that sounds nice.

>>29297007
That's my worry though--what if the name change was unnoticeable, and people think we just stopped?

Should we go, dare I say, back to fomrula?
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>>29297053
Well I got a screencap of the time we had the name change, and it only, what 2 or 3 threads back? I could just post that if anyone forgot.
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If i can find you guys after being gone since i stopped writing my story cuz life n sheeet I'm sure other faggots can
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>>29297115
What were you writing?
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>>29297132
I was writing a story about an Anon who is based loosely off the marvel character Mimic, and he had a personal grudge against SpiderShim for saving the man who killed his father instead of his dad.
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>>29297135
http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8

The first act is done and is a self contained story if you'd like to read it. I dont think it deserves to be on the list since im not very active anymore.

But id like to be active here again
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>>29297140
DOOO IT MUH NIGGA! We could always use more.
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>>29297037
>I am now imagining Spider-Woman going over to her #1 fans house(Anon) to congratulate him on passing his test.

Fuck. I hate inspiration.
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>>29297165
I don't. Especially when I know a fellow hips fanatic is around. Did you answer the question of life correctly?
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>>29297037
>>29297165
>“Hey.”
>You look at your open bedroom window, a voluptuous figure in red and blue tights and fiery hair sitting on the windowsill.
>You sit at your desk, putting down your pencil atop your pages of paper.
“Oh. Hey.”
>“S’up. Mind if I come in?”
>You shrug.
“Sure. Mi casa, su casa.”
>With that, she enters your bedroom, then plops herself on your bed tiredly.
“Sorry I haven’t been visiting you lately. I’ve been busy doing some ‘studying’ of myself. You know, like, totally lame super-hero stuff.”
>You laugh a little.
“‘Totally lame super-hero stuff’ huh?” you repeat back to her. “How is that a thing? Lame super-hero stuff?”
>She shrugs.
“You’d be surprised. It’s a chore. Gets to be really taxing. I mean, c’mon, you don’t think this suit sewed itself, did you?”
>Eh, good point.
>You nod, relenting to her argument.
>“How’d it go?”
“The test? It was alright. Rough, but alright.”
>“You get any good grades?”
“Nothin’ but A’s for days.”
>“Oooh. Impressive. So whatcha gonna do now, Mister A-plus Anon?”
“Teach you better quips.”
>“Please. I’m a quip goddess.”
>It's then that she notices you, scribbling feverishly on your papers once again.
>“You’re not seriously doing more homework, are you?”
>You shakes your head ‘no’.
“It’s a song I’m writing. Friend of mine and her friends’ band write their own, and, uh, I wanted to write one about…someone special.”
>“…You like her?”
>You gulp.
“Yeah. A lot.”
>An uncertain tension lingers in the room.
“Sorry. Didn’t mean to make this weird. This weird? This feels weird.”
>“No, no! It’s fine. Do you, ya know, need to talk about it?”
>You’re about to decline, wanting to transition from this topic…
>But you hesitate.
>Maybe talking to your dear webhead about “her” would be very helpful.
>…
“Well ya see, her name’s Sunset…”
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>>29297181
The question of life is what one makes of it, my friend. To find one's purpose is to form their own as an individual, I'll have you know.
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>>29297215
I meant the eternal question of whether tits or ass is better, and why.
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>>29297250
ass. why? because you are on /mlp/ everyone is an ass man here
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>>29297250
My friends ask me this a lot since I'm a sex addict. They simply don't understand that I cannot choose between ass or tits.

A true male knows that while ass and breast are both desirable, the qualities to each are different for each and every woman. One ass may be thick as another, but has a different shape, feel, and end up lacking. Same with breast. I believe it's like comparing ear lobes. They're all the same thing, share the same traits, yet each stand out on their own. Except you don't fuck them.

But hips.

Whew.

Hips change everything.

Hips determine the frame and shape they may have. Sometimes they're just pleasant to hold on to.

Either way, I need help.
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>>29297215
I will just throw out the answer now because I have been waiting to use this pic forever.
>>29297257
Thank you
>>29297290
You are half right, let me enlighten you some more, but a hips man is still good.
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>>29297295
This anime was... interesting.
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>>29297392
It certainly was.
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First time in these threads since the re-branding, so kudos whoever thought of that. Has anyone done a story with Tokusatsu spin on the topic?
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>>29297498
I thought about doing it. I was super-tempted to make Anon a sorta Ultraman, but human sized.

I thought it'd be too weird for the story because it didn't fit.
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>>29297498
Uh...a what?
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>>29297524
>>29297529
Welp. Guess I know what I'm doing tomorrow. I'm actually thinking about making a small book about a similar subject matter, so it's really gonna be practice for me to shake off this writing funk I've been in for the past year.
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>>29297546
Oh, well, while I have no idea what your doing, I have a vague idea what that pic is from, does the pic related also have anything to do with that?
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>>29297591
Nope! Or it might, I'm not too versed with Hesei-era shows. If you aren't in the know, "tokusatsu media" is basically Japanese live-action special effect shows. It's an umbrella term that covers everything from monster films like Godzilla to super hero series like Kamen Rider. The latter is what I'll primarily focused on. If you've ever heard of Power Rangers before, it's in the same genre like that, people transforming into super powered beings to defeat the forces of evil and all that.
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>>29297641
You could have said Power Ranger stuff and I would have got it. looking forward to it anyways.
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>>29297667
Oh, sorry! It might not be just exclusively Power Rangers though. More like a mix mash of different things in the genre. Any story recommendations by the way?
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>>29297682
As in story recommendations from here? Trepp and Untitled have a lot of stuff.
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>>29297706
Any of them stick out to you the most?
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>>29297730
Trepps would be my favorite, but most of the stories are pretty good, and have a lot to read too.
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>>29294550
Is Cap deaded?
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>>29298254
Nah, just waiting, some shitposters have been going on a which hunt lately and I don't want to bring it down here. I hate to pull a Beans, but the Trepp intro oneshot will be done soon.
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>>29297053
Nah fuck that. We've opened the thread to more content and if people can't find the thread because of a simple name change they wouldn't have been contributing that much to it anyway.

>>29297392
It was such a laugh.
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Guys... Do you think they can do justice to Lovecraft?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVLTI-_KYPg
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>>29298606
I didn't know they were doing a game, who is making it?
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Hello.
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>>29298644
Hi Fappy, nice dubs.
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>>29298620
I don't know. I just saw it too.
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>>29298699
We haven't had much bad luck with Lovecraftien so it could be okay. We will just have to see more trailers for it.
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>>29297140
Hey Rabble!
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>>29298780
Hi
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>>29298644
so... you just gonna namefag around out parts?
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>>29299296
Hey, a ghost.
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>>29299709
Boo.
How have you guys been? I need to catch up on everyone's greens.
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>>29299814
How do you like zombies?
Cause I can give you zombies
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>>29299133
Expanding dong
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>>29299814
Well we got a few new writefags, Mamoaru is still silent, i started an elder god Anon green with Yandere superhero Sunset and sone of us are part of a purate crew
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>>29299832
You have zombies? 2spooky. Zombies are like skeletons with meat.

>>29299864
New writefags are always good. I'll have to get to work on those stories too...

I never would have expected homework from a thread.
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>>29299899
>You have zombies?
not yet
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>>29299899
>99899
Check'd
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>>29300364
Hail apple butt
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>>29297196
>“Well ya see, her name’s Sunset…”
Well, fuck.

You fucked some > but otherwise, yes.

>>29297290
No, brother Bean(i)s. You are poisoned with hips, cure yourself with hips.

Fight fire with fire. And fap.


SPOON!

>>29300348
>>29300362
>>29300364
WHOA
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>>29300348
>>29300362
>>29300364
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ASbNdixIxs4
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>>29294550
Continuing from the last Infamous Anon post

>It's the end of a decently calm day for you, so you must be Anon.
>Right now you’re making way to the one place that could help you with a little problem.
>This problem was the shard you found with a couple of Shadowbolts last night.
>After your explanation of your powers to your sisters, you couldn’t sleep as your mind kept on wandering to the shard as many questions went through your head.
>Who were those people?
>Why were they loading up shards into vans?
>Where did these shards come from?
>Those were some of the things going through your mind.
>You just walked out of your school while waving to a few of your classmates.
>After about twenty minutes of walking and one quick snack stop, you finally reached your destination.
>The library.
>You figured there could be something in there that could help answer some of your questions.
“Well, i better go check out what they got.”
> “Check out what?”
>You would have jumped if you weren’t use to this by now.
>Turning around, you see Lemon with her friends Sugarcoat and Sour Sweet in their Crystal Prep uniforms.
“Hey Lemon, what’s up?”
> “Saw you walking and wanted to say hi.”
“And your friends?”
>Lemon scratches the back of her head while laughing nervously.
> “Well, we have an assignment due soon and came to the library to finish it.”
>Sugarcoat rolls her eyes as Sour gives her green haired friend a polite smile.
> “Try waiting till the last minute.”
> “Now Sugar, we shouldn't be to hard on her. But when she fucks up royally is a different story.”
>Lemon began to sweat as her friends glared at the back of her head.
“Well don't let me stop you.”
>You started to walk up the steps that led to the library when someone grabbed your hand.
> “You never told us why you were here dude.”
>Her friends look at you with mild interest.
“No reason.”
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>>29300877
>Their eyes narrow at that.
>Maybe you said it a bit too fast as Sugarcoat gave you a dry look.
> “Is it about that thing we found last night?”
“......Yes.”
>You figured it wasn’t worth stalling any longer.
>Lemon jumps at that as Sugarcoat and Sour hold her shoulders to stop her bouncing.
> “REALLY?”
>Your clamp a hand over her mouth to stop her yelling.
“Be quiet. I don’t want anyone to hear us.”
>Sour and Sugarcoat look at you like you’re crazy.
> “Who would know what we’re talking about? We haven’t said what the thing was.”
> “You should really think about your actions, Anon.”
>You see them glance to their left as a few people point at you.
“Oh, right.”
>You remove your hand from Lemon who looked a little annoyed.
> “Not cool, dude.”
“I’m sorry…... but you’re right. I’m trying to look for anything on what we found.”
> “Cool. Maybe we can help.”
>Her friends just shake their heads in disappointment.
“You just don’t want to do your assignment, right?”
>The girl haired girl looks at you in what you tell was mock shock.
> “How could you say that? We're best buddies now and best buddies help each other out. It's in the rule book dude.”
>You joined her two friends by giving Lemon a dry look as she grabbed your hand and began to pull you towards the library.
“Hey, let go of me Lemon.”
> “No time. We’ve got to find out what that thing is and fast.”
>You tried to break her hold on your arm but it was impossible.
>The girl had a damn good grip.
>You saw Sugarcoat and Dour running up the stairs, catching up to you as you entered the library.

>You've been here for over an hour now and you honestly say that the time here was well spent.
>If you were being a tutor that is.
>While you were looking up anything on the D.U.P, you were also giving the three girls some help with homework or in Sugarcoat’s case, a crossword puzzle.
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>>29300888
> “I'm looking for a five letter word that means a shelter serving as a place of safety or sanctuary.”
“Haven.”
> “... Thank you.”
>But between answering a few questions and pulling out anything this place had, you could honestly say that you found nothing.
>Nothing on Conduits, the D.U.P, your father or even Augustine herself.
> “Find anything?”
>Looking back at Lemon, you say, “ Not a damn thing.”
>You close the Internet browser as Sour gives you a polite smile.
> “It's okay. You'll find something sooner or later.”
“I know but this is frustrating.”
> “Then go find those assholes get your answers from them.”
“That's real tempting but i have to find them first.”
>Lemon grabs your shoulders and makes you look at her smiling face.
> “Don’t be so glum, dude. We'll help you if you ever need it.”
>You found yourself chuckling at her antics.
“Trust me i will.”
>You started to get up when you heard a familiar voice call your your name.
> “Anon, what’re you doing here?
>You turned around to see Sunset, Rarity and Twilight standing there as they stared at you.
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>>29300897
Sorry but this is it for now
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>>29294550
>"You ready Anon?"
"Isn't this your friend's room?
>"Oh, Pinkie won't mind."
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>>29297053
I don't the last time she did that she had some timber up her butt.
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>>29301212
Pinkie joins them and Twilight watches. For science
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>>29301226
Low blow, man. Low blow.
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>9
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>>29301494
She fell on Timber's Log Ride and got wet.
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>>29300373
Yes mam!
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>>29300888
CHECKED!
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>>29301390
U-unf.
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>>29301212
>"Yeah Anon I won't mind! Just clean up after your done."
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>>29300897
Oh shit...CATFIGHT!
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>>29302634
Anyone else imagine she still has a horse pussy under those panties?
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>>29302697
Not in the Library. Anon has to get them outside first
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>>29300888
>>The girl haired girl
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>>29303238
To be fair, girl is a color in that world.
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>>29302634
why did i stop visiting this thread again?....
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>>29303373
Don't know, why do you use a name? These are questions everyone wants to know, but the world may never know. Have some cougarlishous Sunbutt.
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>>29303399
sorry
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>>29303433
Yup, have another pic.
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>>29303467
I want to hold hands with tsundere Aria.
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>>29303996
We all do. I would bump that grump on her bed till she smiles...or ahegoes. Whichever comes first.
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>>29303399
This would be so much better if it wasn't for the bimbo dimensions.
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>>29304031
She would lay there all flushed, looking away from you while occasionally whimpering, trying to not make any sound
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>>29304128
>tfw you will never cuddlefuck on her bed while tries to read her book. Going on an on until she gives up and starts to thrust back so you can both finish faster. Filling her up till she is satisfied, she will never let out a nervous moan as your healing factor keeps you going after she finishes twitching.
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-20°centigrade/-4°trumpgrade at high humidity
I fashioned a hijab from my scarf
snot was freezing in my nostrils.

>>29304122
only kids or people who were stopped in ther mental development like oversized breasts.
at the very least draw the line at the size of her head
have you ever seen a real woman with macromamalia? it's disgusting, (and really painful on your back)
Remember, people, you only need a handful

>>29304140
>Anon with healing factor
that's my turf, buddy
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>>29304384
This guy says otherwise, and to pass the grenades.
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>>29303238
I really need to check my shit
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>>29292258
>The odor of death and disinfectant blows against you as you pass the threshold.
>Holy.. fuck, that's bad.
>You see two people, colors clearly make them Twilight, and someone in a lab suit.
>But your eyes look for the tube Starlight talk about.
>Some smell neutralizing thingy.
>“Spider-Woman, what an odd guest.”
>Just as your hand takes a hold of the salve you hear her voice.
>Twilight's... not Twilight...
>Her hair was much darker, she's sprouting wings.
>However, her eyes don't have that faint aura and atop her head was no mockery of a unicorn's horn like she had last time.
“Twilight...”
>You say her name slowly and calmly, you use the same caution as you approach her.
>The smell was not forgotten, but there are more important things at hand.
>“Nonono, I'm not Twilight,” she shakes her head, almost as if being amused, “this here's Twilight.”
>She takes a step aside to reveal her own corpse.
>And seeing that wipes your mind clear.
>It's unreal.
>“Why don't you come closer?”
>You hear /Twilight/ speak, and obey without thinking.
>Your feet simply carry you towards the body.
>It was cut open, her organs were visible.
>Everything looks so neat and clean.
>“Check her cecum. She has had her vermiform appendix removed.”
>You don't register the words /she/ says properly, but they weren't meant for you anyway.
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>>29306143
Not happening in Infamous
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>>29306485
>The doctor, whoever he was seems to nod and goes to move through the bodies guts quickly and shows of the part, and confirms “the appendix has indeed been removed.”
>“Further proof that on this here table lies Twilight Sparkle,” /she/ turns to you, “Spider-Woman...”
>You can only guess she's deliberately not calling you by your name, so you remove your mask.
“My name is Sunset, you know that...” you hesitate, “Twilight.”
>“Nonono, I'm not. I'm just confirming her death.”
>Clones, that's the only option you can come up with.
>Spitfire must have cloned Twilight.
“No... You're Twilight Sparkle, and I'm your friend.”
>“Spider-Woman, you were my enemy the first time we've met, even before you donned this mask. You and her, you even gave me a name.”
>Midnight.
“No, you're my friend Twilight Sparkle, you hear me?”
>There's hesitance in her, before shouting “that's not the name you gave me!”
“You're my friend!”
>“I'm your arch nemesis!”
“You're my friend.”
>You say once more, but softer as you take her in an embrace.
>Her body quivers in the grasp.
“You're my friend, okay? We're gonna get through this- whatever this is.”
>Your spider-sense goes of, warning you to retreat from her, but you only hang onto her tighter.
>A wave of magic pushes onto you.
>“Say the name you gave me!”
>A maelstrom of magic whirls throughout the room with her in the center.
“Twilight Sparkle!”
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>>29306491
>You don't let go and hold onto her, even when scalpels flew around and cut you up.
>“SAY MY NAME!”
“TWILIGHT SPARKLE!”
>And then there was silence.
>You need a few moments to realize you're on the floor on the opposed wall of the morgue.
>Nothing happens for a long time until you decide to stand up and walk over to the table where...
>You shake your head.
>Both the dead Twilight and Midnight were gone.
>And the doctor /she/ had made perform her autopsy lays dead on the floor, a scalpel had hit his throat.
>This was no accident either, the cut was long and precise, as opposed to the cuts on you.
>Which means she let you live...
>Which also means that she's a murderer now.
>Your best friend is dead, there's no shaking that.
>And the other being?
>She's still Twilight.
>You've seen her.
>She's been with you and Rarity when you cut your hair, you talked, she's Twilight.
>You can still save-
>...
>No, you are going back to Equestria.
>You are not going to be the one to help her, you're not even going to be in the same reality as her.
>You curse out loud and slam your fist onto the stainless steel table.
>Your spider-sense doesn't even go off.
>You are not in danger.
>Right now you appreciate the pain, as you continue to form the table until it was no longer cold but had heated up from the transforming process.
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>>29306143
sauce?
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>>29306493
>You're not crying this time around.
>There may be no more tears left which you could give.
>The act of destroying the table didn't make you feel anything.
>Your head seems to have shut down, simply to keep you sane.
>You clench a fist again as you walk out the morgue, discarding your new, but now broken, web-shooters.
>Both your hands must be broken, and you can not move your pinkies without pain, but they'll heal within the day, you've broken your hands before.
>The morgues door flies out of it's hinges as you deliver a kick to it.
“Starlight?!”
>She's still unconscious and you pick her up by her throat, which seems to rile her awake.
>Only gasping noises escape her as you slam her against the wall.
>You remain like that for a while before you drop her again.
>You are not a killer, and while she carries a chunk of the blame.
>The other one was...
“Spitfire.”
>“Wh-” Starlight struggles to breath, “what?”
>You take her hand and begin to move out, back to the entrance, dragging Starlight behind yourself.
“You – Starlight – You are going t take responsibility for your actions.”
>“That's not- that's not my fault.”
“BUT YOU WILL HELP FIX IT!”
>Without even looking back you know what expression she must have.
>“I-I...”
“Because if you don't, you'll meet not Twilight's but my alter ego demon form. And I'm pissed at you right now.”
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>>29306501
http://pastebin.com/fYHRDTA3
updated

>>29306500
>>29306488
must you interrupt me? rude!
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>>29306510
Sorry. I just say the pic and had to comment
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>>29306542
after 7 hours of bumps, I post in 3 minutes and get interrupted twice. I'm amused, not mad
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>>29306500
Cut pic I got out of /trash/, I would show the whole pic but cant for obvious reasons. Go check there.
>>29306488
I know, but a man can dream with three hot fish women living with him.
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>>29306554
I hear you. Gonna be trying the post the next Infamous part toniggt if possible and hopefully get the girl haired girls to meet
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>>29306766
Unf, tfw you fuck Sunny ragged after a long night of fightan.
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>>29306766
>>29307557
>You will never fuck till the sun comes up.
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>>29307819
you only need to fuck until the sunset comes
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>>29307845
>Implying she doesn't want to keep going.
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>>29294550
>"What do you think Anon?"
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>>29308085
plumage should be your eye-shadow of choice, the one you have is too light
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>>29308127
I think it fits her
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>>29308085
Seatbelts everyone!
>"Please let this be a normal Field trip"
>"With the Shim?!"
No way!
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>>29308694
>When you're in the middle of Web-slinging and chill but she gives you this look.
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Last time in Blue Beetle Anon (http://pastebin.com/zANAAGcy): Anon fought Aria Blaze and dozens of hypnotized ravers while Adagio Dazzle approached Sunset, threatening the life of Applejack's family to convince Sunset to help her break Sonata out of a Hydra base.


>You are Sunset Shimmer.
>Tonight you are going to help Adagio Dazzle, the leader of the Dazzlings and a thousand-year-old siren turned super-powered thug, break into a laboratory that may or may not belong to a supposedly defunct Nazi splinter group that made the fucking S.S. look like Buddhist monks.
>All while trying to keep this little excursion a secret from S.H.I.E.L.D.
>And Rainbow thinks keeping up with homework and soccer practice is hard
>You glance at your phone.
>9:57
>Pulling your costume on all the way, you send a text to Twilight.
‘u ready?’
>’*You, and yes, I’ll be at your apartment soon.’
‘nerd ;p’
>The light in your living room changes drastically as Twilight literally rips a hole in reality from her bedroom.
“That’s really cool, Twi.”
>Twilight blushes.
>”Thanks, so uh, when is, uh, when’s Anon gonna get here? Or are we supposed to meet him somewhere?”
“He should be here in the next few minutes.”

>After Anon arrived, the three of you discussed a backup plan, in case this really was a trap.
>With a backup plan in place, you take one last look at the wall.
>10:45
>Time to go.
>One reality-defying portal later, the three of you are standing in the middle of MIT.
>About 10 minutes from the “agreed” to meeting spot.
“Well, time to get to work.”
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>>29308936
>When you reach Kendall Square, Adagio is waiting.
>”Huh, with the amount of time it took you to get here, I’d have thought that you’d have brought at least a Quinjet or two.”
>Before you can retort, Anon interrupts.
>”Sorry lady, if you wanted the Avengers you should have gone to them.”
>Adagio rolls her eyes.
>”Regardless, I think it’s about time we went over how we’re going to get Sonata out of there.”
>Looking to the building that Adagio’s pointing at, you are once again struck with second thoughts.
>Twilight sums up your thoughts rather succinctly.
>”Polyp Genetics? I’m sorry but why would they be holding your sister? And why would they-”
>Adagio cuts her off.
>”If you are quite through we need to get moving, shift change for the guards only lasts around five minutes.”
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>>29308942
>Not quite ten minutes later you find yourself crammed in an air duct in the sub-basement of Polyp Genetics between Anon and Twilight.
>Though you would prefer to leave the Hydra takedowns to Captain America, or any of the Avengers really, you can’t help but feel a small rush of excitement.
>Still you know that you should not be doing this with a possible enemy, two heroes with very little training, and absolutely no backup.
>Well, not like you can turn back now.
>You are broken from your thoughts by your face becoming better acquainted with Anon’s rear then you would have liked, followed by Adagio whispering just loud enough for the three of you to hear.
>”We’re here.”
>With that said she slowly removes an air grate and rather quietly drops into the room below.
>Next you lower Anon into the room by way of a web stuck to his back.
>You follow by crawling out onto the ceiling and down the nearest wall.
>Twilight levitates herself down into the room, silently magicking the grate back into place.
>With the four of you in what you now realize is a disused laboratory, you feel the need to ask Adagio a question that has been on your mind since you entered the air duct.
“So, Adagio, what’s the plan for getting us out of here alive?”
>Adagio turns to you with a smirk.
>”I think you’ll have something figured out by the time we need that.”
>You can almost hear Anon’s facepalm.
>”So we’re here, in the middle of one of Hydra’s bases, trying to break out a prisoner, without an escape plan?’
>He also mutters something under his breath but you aren’t quite close enough to hear it.
>And regardless, you have a mission to complete
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>>29308949
>You peek out the nearest door, checking the hallway beyond.
>Almost as soon as you do, you pull your head back and, quietly as you can, close the door.
>Two guards are standing in the hallway, luckily neither are facing towards the door you just closed.
>You turn to the three other occupants of the room.
“Alright, we’ve got two guards outside, does anyone have something that could knock them out?”
>Adagio smirks, opening her mouth, but before she can say anything Twilight speaks up.
>”Well, I, uh, I’ve been practicing something I read in one of the Doctor’s book. It could work, but I haven’t quite been able to get it to work without it affecting me.”
>Once again Adagio tries to speak only to be cut off, this time by yourself.
“It’s better than nothing.”
>And with that Twilight creeps up to the door, eases it open, places her hands just on the other side, and mutters a spell before quickly shutting the door.
>A second later you hear the two guards slump to the ground.
“What the hell was that Twilight?”
>Twilight rubs the back of her head.
>”The Mists of Morpheus, they cause people to fall into a deep sleep. We shouldn’t have to worry, though, they only last as long as the spellcaster channels them.”
>Adagio finally manages to voice her thoughts, uninterrupted by the rest of you.
>”And how long will the guards be under for exactly?”
>You can almost taste the venom dripping from her voice.
>Twilight seems not to notice as she answers Adagio’s question as if she is a teacher asking for the answer to a math problem.
>”The Mists will keep them unconscious for two days unless someone uses the counterspell.”
>You sigh, feeling relief swell in your chest.
“Anon, Adagio, bring the guards inside and prop them against the wall.”
>Anon jumps to it, being used to you calling the shots.
>Adagio hesitates for a moment, then joins Anon in the hall.
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>>29308959
>Another few minutes sees the four of you creeping through the underground complex.
>While the “Mists” were very effective, their wide range, and extreme potency, made them dangerous to use in such close quarters.
>Though you Anon and Adagio seemed able to incapacitate most of the guards easily enough.
>So now you find yourselves standing just outside a slightly less abandoned laboratory than the one you entered from.
>Inside the lab, two researchers are doing some form of analysis on what looks like it could be blood.
>And just on the other side of them is the reason you are here.
>Sonata Dusk, the youngest dazzling.
>Turning to the three other people in your party, you ask the only question on your mind right now.
“How are we going to get in there?”
>Adagio stands, walks over to the door, then walks into the room as if she weren’t just breaking back into the Hydra base that was her prison for some time.
>All you can do is stare as Adagio screeches at the scientists, throwing them into the holding cell sending a spiderweb of cracks through the glass.
>Another screech and the cell walls shatter, freeing the siren trapped inside.
>The moment the walls are down Anon grabs your shoulder, spinning you around.
>”Sunset, I think that person we fought six months ago is back.”
“What do you mean? Which one?”
>Before Anon can elaborate, you see a blue flash and hear an all to familiar voice.
[HOPE]
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>>29308963
And done. So, any thoughts or concerns?
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>>29308903
"Sunset why are you looking at me like that?"
>Anon doesn't know that Sunset's human hormones are acting up again.
>As we naturally born humans are used to this, however to Sunset it's a switch between being normal and being in heat.
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>>29308963
Good/10.
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>>29308963
If three mildly perturbed cats is "good"
and a unusually blue orange is "alright"
id rate this a surprised book/10
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>>29309076
Thanks! Anything in particular that stood out, either good or bad?
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>>29309107
Personally it's so far so good.
And I am tired as fuck so I can't think of anything else.
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>>29309128
Well well well what do we have here?
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>>29309138
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>>29309147
How are you doing m8?
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>>29309155
I require trepp butt
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>>29309178
He is ready for you.
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>>29309178
OUR GOD DEMANDS A SACRIFICE!
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>>29309198
>>29309201
Prepare his thwip hole
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>>29309227
I know where this is going.
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>>29309178
>>29309198
>>29309201
>>29309227
>>29309795
>>29309807
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>>29309958
A somewhat common thing. The regulars call Keaton the mascot/slut of the thread but Spider Bloke claimed me as his for some reason.

>>29309807
You've been quiet for a while. What happened?
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>>29310257
>You've been quiet for a while. What happened?
he got chemically neutered, so you're save now
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>>29310514
I can only hope
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>>29306501
I feel like I missed a jump at some point.
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>>29310955
did you read the one at the end of last thread?
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>>29308936
>The light in your living room changes drastically as Twilight literally rips a hole in reality from her bedroom.
“That’s really cool, Twi.”
>Twilight blushes.
So no one learned a lesson from the last time she ripped holes in reality?
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>>29311134
This time she's under the tutelage of the Sorcerer Supreme.
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>>29310972
I did, but the perspective jumped so hard I cant tell what the last part was.
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>>29311134
Standing, on the edge of a crater
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>>29311266
Huh...
From where do where do you think it jumped?
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I remember the part where Anon and Synergy was just getting settled into the Hydra base, then out of nowhere Sunset got from the camp to the hideout with Anon on the roof of some place, did you miss a post between that? Because that was so jarring I have no idea what you were doing.
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>>29311819
>>29311768
Forgot to link after refreshing the post.
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>>29311768
Pony Starlight is talking to Sunset here >>29257590 And next post >>29278975 Anon is waking up in his room at college. But he was in his Hydra room with human Sunset the last time we saw him http://pastebin.com/pGJV6pUZ line 2056 to 2152

I really think we missed something.

I was going to tell you at the time but it was last, and I thought other anons would tell you so I went to bed.
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I got something for you guys.It's not canon to my story.

>I sit on the snowy roof of a pharmacy, shivering under the thin spandex as night falls with flakes of snow.
>I hate the cold, really. I used to never get cold, even in the coldest conditions.
>My blood was always hot and boiling with life and fire that made me passionate on many things.
>Too many things.
>Things that I regret doing.
>Things that were wrong of me.
>I was hot--I was on /fire/.
>But scorching hot is different from warm and embracing.
>I wish I knew that back then.
>Would’ve made things a lot easier than they are now, that’s for sure.
>I sigh, the fog expelling from my masked mouth into the frosty air.
>Ever since I changed my ways, that life, that fire, had been dormant, it’s smoldering remains stagnant and forgotten.
>My blood was still, like I was once a rapid river of feelings now turned into a little tranquil stream of politeness.
>It’s one of the things I’m the guiltiest about.
>That as much as I’m glad I’m no longer the “old me”, I still miss that power, that thrill...and that rush.
>It kept me fiery; I took no nonsense, and things like “cold” were just a trifle.
>When I was mean, when I was ruthless--I was truly powerful.
>“And irresponsible,” says a little voice in my head.
>And it’s right. It’s always right.
>I was powerful, but that’s not an excuse to be irresponsible and as ruthless as I was, much unlike the woman I am now.
>I got to have responsibilities to balance out the things I’m capable of, but still...I’m freezing out here, and this little coat over my spandex just ain’t cuttin’ it.
>The sirens several blocks away go off, and I’m reminded that Christmas Eve doesn’t mean everyone goes to sleep, more specifically the “naughty” children.
>I sigh, standing up from the rooftop’s edge and shake my body out to increase my blood flow.
>Satisfied, I leap, shooting a line of web with a thwip.
>Time for work.
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>>29312228
Later…

>I hop onto the police-car, my heart-beating fast thanks to the rush of web-slinging as my slightly warmed up body prepares itself for anything.
>My spider-sense helps me have a better understanding of my surroundings, knowing what’s where, what’s happening, and anything that could be hazardous.
>Thanks to this, I have a slightly better understanding of what’s going on here.
>The police car I’ve hopped on; its officers just let out a gasp from under the hood.
>The sidewalks are also empty tonight, and there's a car ahead of us going way too fast.
>Must be a getaway.
>I see it.
>Honda Accord, gray, barreling down the street like a runaway stagecoach.
>I thank the Moon of Equestria that it’s Christmas Eve tonight and that humans spend the night off at home, because if the roads were as busy as they usually are, an accident would surely have happened by now.
>Doesn’t mean one won’t, though.
>So, car’s going crazy fast, I’m clinging to this police car chasing it; so what do I do?
>I jump off of it, launching another line of web that I sling on.
>I should see what’s up with the grey Honda Accord.
>Spider-sense will warn me if something bad happens.
>I continue to sling over head, following after the car.
>I /could/ run after it, considering how fast I’m capable of sprinting, but this overhead view along with my spider-sense’s ability of helping me understand my surroundings adds a bonus amount of assistance, giving it more to observe and comprehend.
>With a few minutes, I know the surrounds even better than my old bedroom back in Celestia’s castle.
>Wait.
>Hold up.
>Spider-sense is going all weird on me--trying to inform me of something else.
>Huh.
>That’s strange.
>The speeding car isn’t taking any turns that are closest to it, nor any sporadic ones to throw off the police.
>No, no they’re waiting for the “correct” turn.
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>>29312235
>They’re not trying to run away, they’re trying to go somewhere, but where?
>What for?
>I swing myself down a bit lower, about a mere twenty or so feet above the street itself.
>When I’m close enough, I hop onto their hood.
>They’re going fast.
>Wherever these folks are off to, they’re in one hell of a hurry.
>I need to see what the drivers are doing.
>I lean my head to the right side of the car, staring through the window of the passenger seat, knocking on the window with a little wave.
>To my surprise, I don’t see two armed dorks in ill-fitting ski mask…
>…I see two average people: the driver a male with jet black hair in a panicked frenzy, and in the passenger seat a…
>Oh.
>Oh come on…
>A woman--a pregnant woman--screams loudly, shrieking bloody murder as she clutches her stomach.
>She’s in labor.
>I the dread drop into the pit of my stomach.
>You have /got/ to be kidding me.
>I want to back out now; I’m not equipped to deal with this.
>If I were to mess up this situation, it wouldn’t just be bad, it’d be unforgivable.
>I don’t know what to do.
>Should I intervene?
>I don’t know!
?My body screams at me to run, jump, sprint away from this madness before it get any worse than it can be, but my conscious scolds me to stay and do what’s right, despite logic forbidding it.
>Oh jeez, oh jeez…
>What’s more responsible to do?
>…
>I knock on the passenger window again, and as the woman looks at me, she screams more.
>The man, I’m assuming he’s her husband, glances over, his eyes widening even more.
>Wasn’t expecting me of all things tonight, I bet.
>I urge him to put the window down, and dumbstruck and frightened, he does so obligingly.
>“S-spider-Woman? You’re real!?”
“Tell me what’s going on,” I say quickly. I have no time to quip.
>“TOOOMMMY, OH GOD, OH GOD IT’S KICKING! IT’S KICKING!!”
>‘Tommy’ looks at me.
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>>29312247
>“Uh, w-we’re trying to go to the hospital. The baby’s not suppose to be ready yet, and the brakes are out! I don’t know what to do!”
>I look behind me, glancing at the following police car.
>Or cars!?
>Oh this is great!
>The police’s numbers are growing as apparently it’s gone from a small chase from one police vehicle after a runaway Honda up to a group of cops pursuing a car with it’s brakes broken with an early christmas present waiting to kick out from mommy’s vagina.
>Sheesh.
>I look back at Tommy and speak.
“I’d stop the car for you if I could, but there’s too many cars behind you now. I’m going to try and tell them what’s going on, alright? Maybe I can do something.”
>“But my wife’s about to--”
“I can get her to the hospital on time. How far is it by car?”
>“Fifteen minutes away, b-but you’re not fast enough to--”
“I am. Trust me. I’ll be right back, okay?”
>He nods nervously and I jump off the car with another line of web.
>I slow my swinging down so I can get behind the police cars, and when I see the leading one come nearest to me, I land on it gracefully.
>Again, I knock on the window.
>The driver gives an incredulous look at me and pulls it down.
>“What do you want wall-crawler?” he asks.
>Doesn’t seem to like a costumed character such as yourself on his hood.
“I don’t want anything--I just need help. Look, that driver’s brakes are broken, and his wife’s in premature labor. They’re trying to get to the hospital, but are freaking out.”
>“And why should I believe you? For all I know you’re in cahoots with one of ‘em,” he growls.
>“Uh, actually, Smit, she’s tellin’ the truth,” his partner says. He brings up his phone’s gps. “Look where we’ve been drivin’! All the turns they’ve made...they’re tryin’ to--”
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>>29312259
“Get to the hospital, but can’t because their brakes are broken. See? Told ya. Now I can’t stop them with my web; the ice on the road is making their car skid all over, and by the time I’d stop, all your cars would crash into theirs. If we don’t do something it’s only a matter of time before more people get hurt and a baby gets a late abortion.”
>The driver frowns, reluctant to accept help from the likes of me.
>Despite this, however, he knows his options are low.
>“What do we do?”
“Get all your cars and wait at the end of this road. This street ends in 15 minutes. I’m going to get the mom out of the car and swing her to the hospital. I’ll be back in about five minutes to help stop the Accord before it crashes into you all. Then you get to ask your questions and all as momma gets to welcome junior to the world.”
>“Hnn…And if you mess up?”
“I won’t.”
>“You might.”
“Then I’ll turn myself in.”
>‘Smit’ nods, satisfied.
>He picks up his radio as I hop off the vehicle.
>I proceed lunging across the hoods of each police car till I leap to the Honda Accord once more, a plan set in my mind.
>Once again, I talk through the passenger seat’s window.
“Hey, so, uh, Tommy’s your name, right sir? Uh, we got a plan.”
>He sighs in relief.
>“Oh thank God…”
“That unfortunately doesn’t mean it’s over. You’re gonna have to keep driving straight down this street, okay? I’ll take your lovely gal pal here to the hospital for ya. The cops are gonna be at the end of this street by the time you get there, and I’ll be back in time to stop the car. Meanwhile your little wifey here’ll be delivering. Got it?”
“TOMMY, DON’T YOU DARE!” screams his wife.
>Her husband, however, seems to weigh his options.
>“Fuck…Yeah. Yeah, good as anything I guess.”
>“TOMMY! NO!”
“Good. Now I’m gonna open this here door and…”
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>>29312263
>The wife screams loudly, flailing in hysteria as I pick her up carefully by her side.
>I give Tommy a look.
>He seemingly reads it through my mask.
“She’s gonna be fine. I promise. You both will.”
>“Do your stuff, Spidey.”
>I salute him, swinging on a line of web as the soon-to-be mother howls, the cold air blowing against both of us.
>Her squirming and flailing isn’t good, messing my direction and positioning up, not to mention her center of gravity is a tad different that what would be normal.
>She sends my swings into odd shapes, misdirecting me.
>It’s making the speed at which I go at dangerous.
>I have to slow down--hell, I could get us killed if I don’t slow down…but I can’t slow down.
>If I do, I risk everything.
>She needs to calm down before I get us both killed!
>I got to get us down.
>I search for a rooftop and thank Luna’s Moon--my Luna, of course--when I do, landing carefully and making sure the impact isn’t dangerous for my “passenger”.
>I’m hoping that by running across the snow-covered roofs of shorter buildings, then leap to another, I can still make a timely arrival.
>If only it were that simple.
>The wife’s panicked state is /still/ messing my whole balance up.
>I have to get her under control.
>I keep running and leaping, but now, I try to talk to her…try to relax her…
“Ma’am? Ma’am, what’s your name?”
>“OOOOOH! OOOH NO! AUGH! GOD! JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!”
“Well that’s a nice name…”
>“FUUUCK YOOOUU!!!”
“Um, I’m gonna need you to stop squirming Miss. Uh, if you do anymore, I might slip and, like, crack our…necks…open. You know. Yeah.”
>“WHAT?!”
“Er, just relax, please. We’re almost there. Just need you to hold still.”
>“I’M HAVING A FUCKING BABY YOU GODDAMNED CUNT!”
“Oy.”
>This is tough.
>I persist in my efforts.
“Um, okay, do you have a name? I saw your hubby, I heard his name “Tommy” but, uh, yours?”
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>>29312271
>She tries to get a grip, and considering the fact that a little brat is having a freak-out inside of her uterus, I’m impressed she’s capable to do so.
>“S-sarah…” she says through gritted teeth with strange breaths. “M-my name’s Sarah…”
“Huh. Nice name. Well, ‘Sarah’, I, uh, need you to be careful, okay? We’re almost there, you can totally make it, alright?”
>“AUUGH! HURRY! PLEASE!”
>And we’re back to screaming again.
>Joy.
>As she screams, I continue running across the rooftops, appreciating her attempt at being still, but still fight to keep balance as I leap.
>She holds onto my arms in a tight grip, her nails digging through my costume and piercing my skin.
>I bite my chilled, blue lips as I try to ignore it.
>Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy.
>Almost there, just another minute, please!
>“WAIT! STOOOOOOP!”
>I skid to a halt on the roof, the hospital just three more leaps away and it’s gigantic tower staring down at us.
>I look at her, and I fear the worst is about to come.
>“I…”
>Please don’t say it.
>“I THINK IT’S--”
>Don’t you dare.
>“THE BABY’S COOOOOOMING!”
>Why me?
>I place her down quickly, hoping I don’t enter a blind panic, not really knowing that I already am in one.
“Uh, uuuuhh, what do I do? I don’t know what to do!”
>“WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT THE FUCK TO DO!? YOU’VE NEVER DONE THIS BEFORE!?”
“Yes--I mean, no! I haven’t! I just--”
>“AAAAUUUUGH! SHIT SHIT SHIT IT’S COMING! OHMIGODOHMIGOD…”
>I shouldn’t have done this.
>I really, really, really shouldn’t have done this.
>I’m just a kid for the Sun’s sake, I can’t deliver a baby!
>I could just swing away and--NO.
>No, Sunset, you are NOT swinging away.
>You have to do this and you have to do it now.
“Um, okay, do you know your breathing exercises? Um, d-do those. Alright, I’ll try and do this.”
>“AAAAAAAAAAH!!!!”
>She goes into a mixed state of screams and huffs.
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>>29312287
>With my cold, numb hands, I fumble my fingers as I help take her pants off.
>I feel so wrong for doing this as I spread her legs apart and rest them on my shoulder, her clothed back resting on the snowy ground of the roof giving an extra sting to what awful pain she’s experiencing.
“Alright, uh, push, okay!? I need you to push!”
>“UUUUNNGGHHH…”
>She huffs.
>“AAAUUUUUUGGGHHH…”
>She puffs.
>“OHMIGODOHMIGOOOOAAAAAAUUUUUUU---”
>And the only the head sticks out.
>It’s slimy.
>Nasty.
>Gross, even.
>Now…I have something to admit.
>I…well, I never knew what human birth looked like.
>I knew how sex itself worked, though, but I never felt the need to exactly witness or learn about birth here unless I were to, I dunno, get my freak on and have a happy little accident in my uterus.
>But have gotten my freak on?
>Well, with /him/, sure, but that’s not relevant at the moment.
>What is, is that I’m not sure of what the fuck to do.
>If I were a pony, and she were too, then yeah, I’d know exactly what to do since I went through the School for Gifted Unicorn’s emergency help-course.
>This is different though.
>A lot different.
>And here I am, delivering a human baby.
>It’s disgusting and horrifying at the same time, much like it is for a pony--but it’s weirder doing this with a human.
>In fact, whoever the fuck said this shit was beautiful must’ve been sick or something.
>Anyways, she screams more, I tell her to push more, and I’m scared.
>From what little I’ve heard about human birth. it’s not only one of the most painful experiences imaginable, but it can take, like, forever.
>Like, anywhere from nine hours to nine minutes.
>I barely have fifteen minutes before a possible father dies in an accident with several lined up police cars while I deliver what might be a late abortion.
>I thought I could do this, but I thought wrong.
>I sigh, and ask myself what to do.
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>>29312290
>The answer I get is another question: “what’s most responsible?”
>I make up my mind.
“Sarah, I’m going to take you to the hospital.”
>“NO! NO DON’T YOU DARE!”
“SARAH, IT’S ONLY THREE ROOFS AWAY, IT’LL BE LESS THAN A MINUTE!”
>I scoop her up, not even giving her a chance to put her pants back on. I shoot a web at them, and bring them to me.
>Now with both mother, child, and pants, I make a dash for the hospital.
>One roof, leap.
>Another roof, leap.
>Third roof, and a leap against the side of the hospital building, and I leap to the ground, surviving the thirty foot drop thanks to my proportionate strength.
>The entrance of the building stares at me like the pearly gates, and I’m relieved to see a group of nurses run over.
>I lay Sarah down.
“Premature birth, can’t talk, gotta go!”
>I swing away praying that I haven’t killed the future of a happy family.

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>I swing back over to the street.
>The Honda Accord is still out of control, and while there are no pursuing vehicles chasing it, I can still see the end of the road in the distance, my spider-sense picking up that they’re holding a line of cars waiting, just as I’d told them to do.
>I swing down from my height of the roofs, slinging my way along the street.
>As my last rope of webbing starts to loosen upon the end of my swing, I time myself just right to land far in front of the charging vehicle.
>It’s black form grows as it accelerates towards me, and the smoking exhaust puffs out like fire.
>It’s a mad bull coming after me.
“Knew I should’ve made that left turn at Albuquerque,” I mumble to myself.
>My spider-sense gives me a good idea of how long I have to stop the car.
>It’s only increasing in speed, but it’s still gonna take a minute, probably a bit less, to hit me.
>With the police cars behind my back in a line instead of chasing behind the Accord, there are no cars able to smash into the back of the oncoming vehicle.
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>>29312300
>Finally, I can end this.
>The first thing I do scan my surroundings.
>I know, I mention it often but it truly is necessary to know your environment so you can use it to your advantage, trust me.
>The buildings here are closed for the night, some street-lights are on, several planted more firmly on the ground than others, and the road is clear.
>With this information, I form my plan knowing I have plenty of space to work with.
>I spread my arms out, firing two, thick strands of gooey web that solidifies into what is essentially webbed-up concrete.
>The strand I fire to the right hits the street-light.
>It’s a new one--I can tell by the abnormal tightness of the bolts that plant it to the ground.
>The left strand hits the brick of a sturdy building, it’s brick mortar stronger than the structures around it, despite being decades old I assume.
>I’m not done yet, though.
>I have to make a fence--a wall--to capture the car without it tearing through my webbing.
>This is easy.
>After all, a pencil lead-thick strand of spider-silk can stop a Boeing 727 mid-flight without tearing.
>I, on the other hand, have much more webbing.
>The problem isn’t that my web could not stop it due to a lack of strength of the webbing itself...
>It’s finding the /safest/ way to stop it.
>I could have just yanked his car back with one large rope of web from the rear, but that’d probably tear off part of his car, and he’d be flung so hard, his seat-belt would tear as he flies out the window.
>This net is the smartest, safest, and most foolproof way I can be sure to save him.
>After a fifteen seconds, I’ve completed it and the car comes a-runnin’ at me.
>I see Tommy’s eyes as the car approaches.
>He sees the web--questions it’s strength and stability.
>I notice several police-men in their own cars twitch nervously.
>Then, it happens.
>The car hits the gigantic web, it’s tires still running but the car un-moving.
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>>29312308
>It’s caught like a fly in a spider’s web.
>A collective sigh of relief seemingly permeates the winter air as Tommy steps out.
>He falls on his knees, exhausted. I help him up.
“Are you okay?” I ask.
>He ignores the question.
>“How’s Sarah?”
“I almost had to deliver on a roof, but, uh, I got her there. She’ll be okay.”
>His shoulders drop, and he hugs me.
>“Thank you. Thank you so much.”
>…
>“FREEZE! HANDS OFF THE MAN! SIR, STEP AWAY FROM HER RIGHT NOW!”
>I turn around and face the wall of police cars.
>Every officer holds up a gun, aiming at me.
>I’m livid.
“What the hell are you doing!?”
>It’s then a familiar officer steps out of his car door, drawing his gun.
>It’s ‘Smit’.
>“We’re taking you in.”
>You’re shocked--outraged!
“But I did it! WE did it! No one got hurt, we saved the day!”
>“And you’re still a criminal,” he states firmly. “We take criminals in.”
“B-but…I helped…”
>I feel my knees grow weak.
>I collapse on them.
“I h-helped…” I repeat, this time more quietly.
>My throat starts to shut as my eyes under my mask water.
>I did everything well tonight.
>Everything.
>And what was damaged?
>Nothing.
>Tonight I proved I was responsible.
>Nothing was destroyed.
>Ye here I am, getting arrested.
>Then, I notice something.
>I feel cold.
>Even colder than I have for the entirety of the night.
>That’s when I realize it.
>The flame inside me--that fire and passion I was talking about earlier?
>I thought it went away, but did it really?
>Did that passion really become snuffed the moment I became who I am now?
>A better person?
>I thought I grew colder on the inside because it was gone, but…maybe it never left.
>Maybe it just changed?
>Yeah, that’s it.
>I changed my passion.
>I was awful, evil, and bitter.
>But now?
>I save the fucking day.
>Tommy places a hand on my shoulder.
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>>29312322
>“Hey, it’s okay,” he says comfortingly.
>Officer Smit sneers.
>“Not in court, it ain’t.”
>“Oh shut the fuck up! The hell’s wrong with you! She practically did your job and MORE. My baby could’ve just been born in a car accident, and you fucks were chasing me down! The fuck is up with that!? And now? Now you’re just gonna arrest her!?” Tommy shouts angrily.
>“She’s a vigilante. She’s a criminal.”
>“A CRIMINAL!? ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY!?”
>He shakes his head.
>“DO YOU SEE ANY DAMAGE!? IS ANYONE HURT!? NO! SO LEAVE. HER. BE.”
>“Look, we can’t just--”
>“IT’S CHRISTMAS FOR FUCK’S SAKE, GIVE HER A FUCKING BREAK!” barks Tommy.
>He sighs, turning towards me.
>Then, he gets out his wallet.
>“Look, I don’t care what they say, but you’ve saved my wife, my kid…and you saved my future tonight. Hell, you even saved my car from crashing. Take this. Spend some time with a friend. Something.”
>In his hand reaching towards me is a one hundred dollar bill.
>I look at it.
>I deserve it.
>I should snatch that money up like it’s the last water I’ll ever have…
>But I don’t.
“N-no. I can’t.”
>I sniffle, shaking my head to decline his largesse offer.
“Merry Christmas, Tommy,” I say hoarsely. “You and Sarah have a good life.”
>Next thing I know, I’m swinging away…
>I’m swinging home…
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>>29312328
EPILOGUE

>I knock on the second story window of the suburban house, peeking through the blinds into the lit room.
>I see Anon in there notice my knocking, and he approaches me, opening up the window to allow an entrance.
“Hey.”
>“You sound tired.”
“…I should. I almost delivered a…nevermind.”
>“No, you can tell me. I wanna hear.”
“Okay… I’ll tell ya in the morning.”
>I try to walk, but exhaustion fights me from doing so properly.
“Hey, you think you can--”
>“I gotcha,” he says with a warm smile.
>He picks me up bridal style.
>I chuckle wearily.
“You know, holding me by the shoulder as I walk slowly would’ve done fine enough.”
>“I know, and I’d do that normally…but uh, I got something for you.”
“Oh?” I question curiously.
>He cautiously seats me down atop our bed.
“Lemme guess, a ‘tactical whoopie cushion again?”
>“Don’t act like you didn’t love the tactical whoopie cushion,” Anon says. “And Sunset? I, ah, gotta ask ya something,” he asks nervously.
>What’s he doing?
“Yeah? What’s up? You okay?”
>“Yeah, i-it’s just…” he sinks down onto one knee, slowly reaches for his back pocket, and finally, kneeling on the bedside, he smiles the biggest, goofiest smile with his cheeks a rosy red.
>He retrieves a small box and…
“Oh my gosh.”
>“Sunset Shimmer…”
“Oh my gosh…”
>“…Will you marry me?”
>Right as Anon opens the box to reveal a stunning diamond ring inside, my heart beats faster than it’s ever beat in it’s life.
>That warm fiery passion returns like a full-fledged flame, and…I sob.
>I sob more than I’ve sobbed before.
>And finally, for the first time in all of tonight, I take my mask off, crying with a gigantic smile across my jaded face.
>My chest tightens as I sob, tears running freely down my cheeks, dripping off my chin and into the lap of my costumed legs.
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>>29312345
>Everything tonight has lead to this moment. My emotions all burst forth at once with one, single word.
“Yes.”
>And then, with a kiss, we laid ourselves down, holding the other in our arms...

THE
END
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I want to stick my timber in Bean's boipussy while we watch the twilight.
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>>29312016
Oh, yeah, I jumped, but everything done will be easier explained in the next scene with Anon and Sombra at college.
I kinda got sick of the exposition stuff und you guys were too, thats way I jumped
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>>29312228
>>29312235
>>29312247
>>29312259
>>29312263
>>29312271
>>29312287
>>29312290
>>29312300
>>29312308
>>29312322
>>29312328
>>29312345
>>29312361

Hope you all enjoy this here little diddy.

PASTEBIN:
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>>29312422
Ayyy
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>>29312485
Can we get a green of married Spidey life?
It's comfy.
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>>29312798
Seconding this. And adding a waifu to seal the deal.
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>>29312996
But Anon having more than one waifu will ruin your lifeu.
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>>29312996
>big gravity defying breasts on Twilight
how's about no?
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>>29313138
Is this better?
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>>29313349
much better
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>>29312996
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>>29314342
How about no?
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>>29314703
I don't know trepp, I think I might Hail
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>>29314750
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I'm in the need of a comfy green.
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>>29312798
>>29312996
Um...Uuuummmm....

I just did this one to give you all while I work on Rebirth, ya know? And if I did do another one-shot where Anon and Sunset where married, it'd probably be too much of a tear-jerker. Relationships like that are painful as much as they are incredible, I tell you. It'd be more "I hurt myself today" than "Hey honey, I'm home!"

And if I added Twilight in? I'd probably have her and Sunset break Anon's heart...or Twilight and Anon breaks Sunset's heart...you get the idea.

Point is that love hurts, and I have trouble with writing it nowadays to be honest.

>>29313138
But them hips tho

>>29313349
Are twilight's hips, dare I say...BIGGER than Sunset's?
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>>29315041
Forgot to trip
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>>29315048
>Twilight's hips are bigger than Sunset's.
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>>29312996
Smug mama SciTwi is something I didn't know I wanted, does she brag about how her man fills her up at night when she fights crime to other female villains? Does the baby learn magic sorc stuff or is the baby the new Tony Stark? Does Twi bab go on wild hijinks adventures with Sunset bab like a Tom and Jerry skit?
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>>29315041
Implying Twi and Sunset wouldn't snuggle the shit out of their man, I am not sorry Beans but I am proud to say there is a guy doing a story on this that doesn't have your shit taste in romance style. Fuck your broken heart bullshit.
>>29315322
Depends on which Twilight...or SciTwilight for that matter too, pic related. Doesn't change the fact they are semen demons waiting for a good mating press though, so you know, whatever.
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>>29311300
Like the prophets once said
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>>29316420
and the ashes are all cold now
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>>29316274
It's not so much that I'd be doing some more broken heart bullshit rather than the idea of trying something different. I already did the "Sunset, Twilight, and Anon" story to death. It's literally the first green I ever wrote, it's the big conclusion in the "Lewd Sleepover" story I did, and I'm sick of just saying "Oh, they all love each other and they bump dirties while hijinks ensue!"

So yeah.

Instead, I'd make them cry, I'd put them through the wringer, possibly add a Gwen Stacy v. Mary Jane sort of vibe to it and make it interesting like many others would. It'd probably be a comfy, yet feelsy green if I actually wanted to do it.

If you don't like the idea, I don't blame you, but I'm only trying to explicate as to why I disagree that I have "shit taste" in your argument , and my reasoning is not unjustified in that I want to make a compelling story rather than do the same one with Sunny, Twi, and Anon all loving each other for, like, I don't know, the fifth time.

We good, man?
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>>29316466
you always try to justify yourself
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>>29316901
Sorry.
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>>29316429
No more bullets and the embers are dead
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>>29316934
We know your not, but thanks for pretending.
>>29311300
>>29316420
>>29316429
>>29317052
Wat
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http://pastebin.com/heMDGuq4
>After letting out a shudder, he takes note of the tiny light once again.
"Something to look forward to... I guess..."
>He glances at the glowing door, grimacing before making his way through the crowd of coffins.
>Drawing farther and farther away from the door's light, he soon finds himself nearing the edge into darkness once again.
>"Ah..."
>And as though he'd been chilled to the bone, he abruptly stops.
>His heart thumping loudly in his chest, he slowly scans the darkness before him.
>A pointless act since the only thing he can clearly see is...
>...something stirring just within reach of the tiny light: a translucent figure, its hazy form similar to that of a mirage.
"...Who's there?"
>"To think that I would be the one... to fall victim to our machinations..."
>The figure draws closer to the light, its humanoid form shifting and bending with every ebb and flow of the light's rays.
>"To be the catalyst that will open the stairway to paradise..."
"...You're Colonel Silverstout."
>There was no need for confirmation; no need to question the figure's identity.
>He already knew; a combination of vocal recognition and a nagging feeling in the pit of his stomach.
>It's then that the figure slowly loses its fairy-like translucence, revealing itself to be Silverstout.
>But there's darkness in his eyes; their irises are red and their sclera black.
>"Colonel? Hrmm..." Silverstout looks to the light, "How many years has it been? Seven?"
>He shakes his head and turns his attention back to Flash, "No. No time for stray thoughts... You must act quickly."
"...Meaning?"
>"You have to kill me."
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>>29317709
>A long silence follows, Silverstout's gaze taking on a melancholic tone.
"...That... that's..."
>"I have become a living weapon; a monster bent on taking a human life. You've no choice but to kill me."
"And... how do you expect me to do /that/? Just... just walk up to you and choke you or something? This is crazy!"
>Silverstout frowns, disappointment apparent in his crinkled features.
>"How? Must I show you how to breathe, as well?"
>He then motions to the light, his face twisting into a grimace.
>"And this toy. Haven't you outgrown such childish nonsense?"
"I don't know what you're talking about!"
>At this, Silverstout lets out a rueful sigh.
>"Then I'll have to jog your memory."
>He raises a hand to his chest and presses it against his heart.
>"The flesh: shells in which our souls reside. The heart: power by which these golems move. Death: the means by which we are free."
>With a deep breath, his body begins to glow.
>"The soul: a light which never fades. Deus Imperfect: the shadow it casts..."
>And it glows brighter, Silverstout's skin cracking like porcelain until his spirit breaks forth and his body explodes into glittering specks of dust.
>As the light fades, what now stands in Silverstout's place is a being clad in dark blue robes, its face obscured by the purple helm it wears, matching its chest plate in color and golden engravings.
>In its right hand is a silver scepter; its runes glow in a faint, blue color.
>"Deus Acknowledged: when soul is given form..."
>He taps the ground with his scepter and the darkness dispels as a wave of blue light washes over the room.
>"Given power... Do you remember now?"
"...No?"
>"..."
"..."
>Silverstout taps the ground again. "Executive Privilege: Sim-shell Control Override."
>Electricity begins to dance about the tiny light and Silverstout's scepter glows a rust red.
>"Take form," he growls, the light expanding until it is about 6 feet in diameter, "and refresh this errant boy's memory."
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>>29317715
>The light fades to reveal a grayish blue creature that is humanoid in appearance, but mechanical in nature.
>Its amber eyes spring to life as they set upon the boy. "Preparing Memory Synchronization."
>Purpose resounding with each footstep, the creature makes its way to its target, who reflexively takes a few steps back.
"There's nowhere to run, Fade."
>With that, Silverstout taps the ground again and the coffins that fill the room come rushing towards the group.
>Diverging, they form an ever moving circle, fanning out just enough to create several coffin rings too high, fast, and numerous to climb over.
>Distracted by this spectacle, the boy barely has time to realize that the mechanical creature is reaching for him.
>He takes a swing at it, but it catches him with ease.
>Grabbing his free hand's wrist, the creature forces his arms down and wraps him in a bear hug, its eyes locking with his.
>"Ah! Let go!"
>"Ignoring command. Initiating Memory Synchronization."
"Either you're playing the fool, Fade, or your memory truly is-"
>"ERROR. Synchronization failed. Improper identification."
"Improper...? Then..."
>He looks to the struggling boy, his stomach twisting in knots.
"He's not Fade? I was sure-"
>"Receiving. Identity confirmed. Initiating Catalyst program."
"Belay that! Identify this boy."
>"Ignoring command." The creature's eyes glow a bright green, "Continuing Catalyst sequence."
"Errant toy! I command you to-"
>'Colonel Silverstout!'
"Ten-Wo?"
>'Your Executive privileges have been suspended! Goodbye!'
"What?! You damnable machine, why have you done this?"
>But there is no response.
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>>29317723
>>>>>>>>24
>His ire cooling to a resigned simmer, he looks back to the struggling boy.
"I've made a grave error. You and I will die here, along with so many others."
>"N-no!"
"If it had started the sequence earlier, you might have stood a chance."
>Silverstout clutches his stomach as the creature starts glowing.
"Even if you're compatible... I'm not sure I can hold back long enough..."
>"Completing sequence."
>A flash of light engulfs the boy and his captor.
>The resulting explosion leaves behind a fire-like pooling of energy; a pillar consisting of shades of blue, and gold, and orange mixing together in a sparkling display similar to that of a galaxy in motion.
"I expected as much. And I've no power to restore your form..."
>Silverstout says, a slight tremble to his voice.
"Perhaps it's better that way; dying now will spare you any further despair."
Watching as the flame continues to burn, he lets out a shaky breath.
"My time... their time draws near... I'm sorry. For what little it's worth, I'm-"
>Before him flashes a translucent screen.
>[BINDING SUCCESSFUL]
"What?!"
>Something stirs within the fire, its humanoid form barely standing out against the flames.
>"Silverstout."
>The fire collapses like a house of cards before rising up to swirl around the ethereal being.
>"I've got a bone to pick with you."
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>>29317749
>Emerald eyes.
>Flickering memories of years gone by.
>A boy. A girl. So many children standing before a screen.
>[The brightest light casts the darkest shadow.]
>There is a boy. He stands before an altar. A light sits upon it.
>[Death is the means by which Peace is achieved.]
>The memories flicker again.
>A bruised boy. A girl with a heavenly smile.
>The eyes glow brighter... and then...
>-Hey-
>Flash finds himself in darkness, an orb of red light floating before him.
>-Do you want to die?-
>Flashing into existence, pictures of the Gala begin to circle around him.
>Octavia and Rarity. Blueblood and Teal Hair. Sunset Shimmer and...
>...and so many others. They stand in fear around a creature, a large, jagged smile splitting its face.
"N-no."
>-I can save you. I can take you away from here-
>Flash looks to the creature, an unsure look on his face.
>-Or you can stand and fight-
>The screens flicker for a moment before clearing to show an image of himself projected on them.
>-For yourself-
>They flicker again, this time showing the crowd of Gala goers.
>-For these people-
>Another flicker. An army of that grinning monster appears.
>-Whatever you choose, no matter the reason, this guy won't be the last-
"So, I make my stand now... or keep running?"
>-Pretty much-
"And I... I have to..."
>-What's one life compared to one million?-
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>>29317761
>Flash looks to the light, a strange sense of nostalgia washing over him.
>-Hope. A guiding light. A spark to light the flame inside you-
"Who are you?"
>-A little devil-
"Ha... so it's my soul you want?"
>-Yes. I want to see it grow until the day when it finally ripens-
>Fear seizes his heart for a moment, but a wave of calm washes over him.
>To run and die later. To fight and die later.
>His life versus one hundred.
>That tiny red star.
"...Alright."
>-Then take it-
>He reaches for the light, his fingers awash with heat as they reach its core.
>A reflexive grunt escapes him as the light springs to life, engulfing his hand in blue fire.
>It spreads throughout his body, tearing into his core.
>-That light... Who knows what'll happen if it fades away-
>He becomes a pillar of fire, a raging inferno of blue energy.
>-Keep it safe-
>And it all comes crashing in.
>-Don't let it die.-
>...
>Before Silverstout stands a monster.
>Its golden skull, ablaze with blue fire, stands out against its leather clad, humanoid appearance.
>"...This power... Were you there? A spark from the blade that guards Eden?"
>The monster lets out a chuckle as it makes its way towards him.
>"Boy? Wait... Is there another-"
>Suddenly, its right arm whips forward, a red chain shooting from it in a flash of blue fire.
>Silverstout reacts a second too late, the chains wrapping around his arm before he could mount a defense.
>"Who! Are! You," he growls, struggling to free himself as he shoots the creature a glare.
>But he stops, a chill seeping into the core of his being as he stares into the black void within the creature's eyeless sockets.
>Even from this distance, he could see it.
>That spark of hatred.
>"I'm your executioner."

And so, Dormammu finally makes his appearance and the update stops here for now.
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>After learning that Anon is going to have a daughter thanks to the newest ultrasound, which Sunset is amazed because they don't have that in her world.
>He decides to buy a shotgun, Sunset disapproves.
>"You know damn well that you don't need that when I have powers."
"I know. It's just for when our baby girl gets older."
>"WHAT?!"
"No not like that. It's for the future when she is 17 years old and some scumbag wants to date her."
>"...."
"Trust me, you'll thank me later."
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>>29317886
Kek, Anon becomes the Punisher and cleans his guns in the living room when his daughter has friends over. Sunset repeatedly ties him up when she knows she is having friends over, but he somehow escapes every time and is in position.
>>29317774
Thanks for updating? I am going to re read what you have so far to familiarize myself.
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>>29317886
A father always needs to keep his daughter safe from the Flash Sentry's of the world.
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>>29317886
>>29317947
>>29317971
I wouldn't say Anon is the Punisher but whenever a boy comes over he brings our his shotgun to "clean" it.
"Boy, do you know what a 12 gauge buckshot does to the human body?"
>"I-I uh-"
>Daughteru shows up after getting ready.
>"Ok, Daddy we're off to the movies. Do you know where mom is?"
"She's working she had to do the night shift."
>"Sounds good."
>They walk out but, you grab the boy's shoulder and whisper.
"If I find out that you touch a single hair of my daughter you're going to find out what buckshot can do."
>"Daddy.."
"OK kids have fun watching Shrek 25!"
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>>29318065
>Shrek 25
Some things would need to die long before that point.
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>>29318084
That was the first thing I came up with.
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>>29318111
Trips confirm DreamWorks milk Shrek like a bedridden amnesiac.
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>>29318065
I always thought if the baby is girl her name will be Sunny and if it's boy name him Sonny.
Is that something we can agree on?
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>>29318131
no
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>>29318148
OK any ideas?
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>>29318171
Get Sunset in a mating press first, baby steps and the name of the toddler second.
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>>29318171
Ma'am, you were in a coma when you gave birth, your brother named your twins
Oh no, he's retarded... What did he name them?
The girl he named "Denise".
Oh, that's not that bad... and the other?
He named the boy "denephew"
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>>29318193
Lel but seriously I wonder how it would go.
"Are you sure the baby is going to be fine with Rarity?"
>"Don't worry she is responsible."
>20 minutes later.
>Phone rings
>It's Rarity.
>Sunset picks it up.
>"Hello?"
>"Uh, darling we may have a proble- No Rainbow you can't use a broom."
>"Wait why is Rainbow there?"
>"Well you see the baby got stuck on the ceiling and now the girls are over trying to help."
>"HI SUNSET!"
>You hear Pinkie scream in the background.
"Oh god. Our baby is going to die."
>"Anon and I will be there."
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>>29318276
>Rarity called the remane 6 before calling Sunset and Anon.
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>>29318697
>She didn't want to disturb their date.
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>>29318733
I think that a kid developing powers would be a very good reason to interrupt a date.
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>>29318748
But you don't understand, SciTwi doesn't want her experiment to be interrupted. She must know if the baby can follow the ceiling maze she made while on a caffeine binge before blacking out, and she doesn't want to just waste it.
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>>29317052
Whispers in the air, tell the tales of the brothers gone
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>>29318797
>Be Anon
>Just got dinner at great restaurant cancelled.
>Traffic is jammed.
>Sunset is freaking out.
>Can't use webs because don't want to be seen in public.
>Finally get home.
>Place is a god damn mess.
>Baby on ceiling crawling on a maze built by Twilight, Rarity is freaking out because she has webs in her hair, Pinkie and Rainbow are eating your food.
>Bitches are also eating your favorite fruit rollups.
>Applejack and Fluttershy are the only ones trying to help.
>"WHAT THE HONEST FUCK!?"
>Screams Sunset.
>You never seen her this angry.
>hfw.
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>It's night in Ponyville.
>The air feels close, the cold glow of the moon eerily lighting the thick fog. The mist silently billows, muffling the few noises of this late hour as the vague shapes of buildings loom past, empty and imposing, like great shipwrecks.
>Combined with the darkness and the alien, distorted noises, the mist twists your surroundings. Every door slam or bark has you jumping nervously, every shape appears suddenly in the mist, dancing and swimming before it reveals its innocuous nature as a mailbox of signpost.
>You shiver, tightening your cloak.
>Tonight's not a good night.
>Just two hours ago, a message arrived from your brother.
>Your mother was dead.
>Finally.
>After years of suffering, it was over. She'd died screaming, apparently, but at least she wouldn't hurt anymore.
>Still, the thought of her death hadn't upset you as much as it would have if she'd even resembled the woman you used to love and admire.
>In the end, she'd been almost like a stranger. It was harder while she was living, but now...
>A gust of bitter wind rakes you, the cold nipping at your face, and you glance up as the fog lifts briefly.
>You're on Clement Street. Not far now.
>Tonight was indeed a night of ill portent.
>The miserable cold, the news of your mother. The dog.
>It was just round the corner from your house when you'd been shocked when a large shadow resolved itself into a big, black dog.
>You'd stopped, taken aback. One of the dog's back legs was broken, and it dangled uselessly.
>The dog was just standing there, staring into space.
>While you hesitated, it twitched, turning to face you, growling.
>It had stepped toward you and, for a moment, you were afraid it was going to lunge for you.
>Then it seemed to have a change of heart, whimpering as it turned tail and hobbled off into the mist.
>You hadn't seen it since but you were paranoid it might be following you, even though you haven't heard anything.
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>>29319682
>Another gust of wind makes you stop, glancing around.
>The mist lifts again, for just a moment, and you see your destination at the end of the road.
>Hearthoof Manor. The imposing building sits on a gloomy hill, bare trees dotting the dismal gardens, its border wall tangled with overgrown vines. A sickly light flickers behind one of its windows, just emphasising how empty the rest of it is.
>You suppress a shiver. Whether of cold, fear or anticipation you can't say.
>The manor's scary in its own right, the mad children of its wealth owner being essentially locked up there until they died. The place hadn't been well-looked after when it was inhabited, and its abandonment hadn't made it any better in the decades since.
>Arriving at the front gate, you find the chain that once held the rusty iron bars shut has been cut, just as you'd expected.
>Your friend's in there.
>Tonight's the night of the experiment.
>You pause before slipping through the gates, monetarily struck by the series of bad omens.
>You wish you were tucked safe and warm in bed but, with a deep breath, you step onto the property.
>Tonight's the night you get your answers.
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>>29319682
>>29319764
I saw the words comic horror, and wanted to write something like this.
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>>29319505
Kek.
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>>29319769
Do it!
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>>29319213
Desolation, devastation
What a mess we made, when it all went wrong...
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>>29320795
Watching from the edge, of the circus, For the games to begin.
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>>29319505
Anon better hold Sunset back before she kills her friends
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>>29321271
gladiators draw their swords, Form their ranks for Armageddon
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>>29322204
I'M NUCLEAR!
I'M WILD!
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>>29321732
If Pinkie and Rainbow ate my fruit rollups I would not restrain Sunset.
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>>29322204
I'M NUCLEAR
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>>29322261
I'M WILD
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>"Hey Claus, do you know vat page ve are on?"
"please Wilhelm... don't do this to me again"
>"Fine."
>...
>...
>"Its page nein"
"I'm going to kill you one day Claus"
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>>29322229
I'm breaking up inside!
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>>29322233
I meant Twilight and Rarity
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>>29319769
Nice
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>>29323017
Kek
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>>29323092
A HEART OF BROKEN GLASS
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>>29323677
Why are we having a singalong, what is it from, and do we need to kill with fire?
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So is this even about superheroes and superpowers anymore? Unless these Lovecraftian stories are going to be a crossover type thing they don't fit the theme and would be better suited to their own general or one of the wide topic general i.e. AiE, EQG/humanised.
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>>29323757
Its a crossover thing. The title is still there for /sup/ stuff.
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>>29323769
Fair enough. I suppose with a slow start it'd take some time to introduce the 'super' elements, with it being Lovecraftian you can't really jump straight into superhero crime fighting.
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>>29323838
Yup
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>>29323677
DEFILED!
DEEP INSIDE THE ABANDONED CHILD!
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>>29323940
Standing on the edge of the underworld.
Looking at the abyss.
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>>29323970
And I'm hoping for some miracle.
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>>29324004
To breakout to escape all this.
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>>29324009
Whispers in the air, tell the tale of a life thats gone
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>>29324211
Are we a singing thread now?
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>>29324876
i hope not
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Reviving old green.
http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8 (part I)
http://pastebin.com/edit/MWFjuLWz (part II)

Summary for those who don't want to read it all. Spoilers for those who do.
Anonymous finds himself and his father kidnapped by unknown thugs. While the thugs try to question him and his father Spiderwoman breaks in to save the day. Unfortunately, while saving Anon and stopping the bad guys she let Anons father die, something he has not forgotten. In an attempt to discover why his father was being kidnapped and questioned Anon searches his house to find a mysterious chemical that once he accidentally inhaled allowed him to copy the abilities of those close to him.

After the discovery of this ability Anon is quickly contacted by a group calling themselves S.O.M.B.R.A. or the Secret Organization Mobilized to Battle Repressive Authority. Who dressed as Wonderbolt Agents to try and force him to join the Wonderbolts before more SOMBRA oppratives bust in killing the fake Wonderbolts and saving Anon, Securing his loyalty to themselves. As a member of SOMBRA Anon was trained by Taskmaster, while Sunset and Vinyl joined up with the real Wonderbolts in an attempt to free Anon.

The plan backfires, causing Vinyl to leave the Wonderbolts immediately after the operation. During this Anon discovers that his mother was in charge of the SOMBRA Cell that tricked him by discovering her body and a microphone that masked her voice. Anon destroys the base in his rage stealing a SOMBRA vehicle and a few weapons, and decides to do the one thing he was trained for. Mercenary work.

Anons next job leads him to a club called HarmonY for a meeting of mercenaries. The same club that Sunset and the girls have planned on visiting that same night.
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>>29324899
>it seems to take forever for Saturday to arrive
>Luckily you actually had clothes fit for clubbing
>by that you mean you had a nice tight outfit that guys would love to get a closer look at.
>the feeling of the tight outfit isn't all too different than your spider suit, though far more attractive
>You give your bedroom mirror a few flirtatious looks while making several poses to accentuate your more feminine features.
"Oh yeah, crime fighting definitely helps make a body look good."
>Your phones alarm goes off signaling its time for you to head out to meet the girls.
>with a wide grin and much excitement you leave the house, ready to make your way to HarmonY.

>its been a few days since Chrysalis has found out about your special talents
>and she has quickly become the closest thing to a friend you currently have
>"Anon, you clearly haven't been to a club before."
"Why do you say that?"
>Chrysalis points to your getup while you pick up your mask from the table
>"You're wearing a hoodie, jeans, and if you're thinking of wearing that mask you're crazy."
>You kook over to her then back to the mask
>she has a point, two actually.
>you haven't been to a club, you have no idea how to dress for one, and not only that but you would stick out like a sore thumb with a skull mask.
>despite that fact, this mask is one of the few things that keeps you Anonymous.
>...
>that hurt a little.
"Well what do you expect me to do then? If I don't have THIS"
>you wave it around slightly
"then not only will I make it harder to hide myself in the future, Its the only thing that-"
>your voice trails off leaving the sentence unfinished
"Its just important I have it."
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>>29324899
oh yeah, i missed that story, but didn't remember what writefag it was
glad to see you back
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>>29324911
thanks for the welcome

>>29324907
>"Where do you keep your clothes?"
"I have a few things in the closest. Although I don't have much in the way of casual wear anymore."
>Chrysalis rolls her eyes and walks to the only closet in the apartment and starts to look through the choices.
>after tossing aside a few tactical rigs and a few bags she finally grabs two plain white shirt
>"are these really the only things you have that don't come with a holster?"
>you don't bother responding and take seat on your couch.
>"Ugh. You really, and I mean REALLY, need to get out more."
>in the past year and a half your career as a gun for hire has left you little time for a social life
>in fact the last time you have gone out to do something was back before you knew Sunset was...
>nevermind.
"You probably mean 'stay in' more."
>There is a sudden flash of green light and when you look back to Chrysalis shes a copy of you in your current attire
>"Oh look at me I'm a gunman who spends half my life out in the streets and the other half in an apartment."
>her mocking tone and gestures aside, she just gave you an idea.
"you can copy clothing too?"
>"Of course I can."
>she bursts into green flame for a second and she returns to her old self with her own outfit
>you stand up grinning before you yourself burst into the same flame
>once they disperse you are wearing a dark blue button up a white undershirt and well fitting pants
>your face is also slightly changed, just enough for you not to be recognizable and your hair is gelled into a short fohawk.
"How do I look now?"
>"Like a douche."
"At least we will be matching then."
>you slide the mask on over your new face before it burst into flame hiding itself away
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>>29324912


>The sound of the music thumping outside the club has your heart racing
>Its been forever since you have had fun with your friends like this
>Rainbow and Twilight have already arrived and you are quick to meet them in the line, where rainbow greets you
>"Hey Sunset! lookin' good."
"Thanks Rainbow, Where are the others at?"
>Twilight takes out her phone reading off a few texts
>"well it looks like Fluttershy had something come up, but AJ and Rarity should be here soon. I have no idea where Pinkie is"
>Rainbow leans in for you to hear her clearly
>"I guess AJ needed some help finding something to wear, And Rares volunteered to help her out."
>imagine that.
>the line moves a bit quicker than expected and soon you three are next in line to get in
>the bouncer at the door waves for four people to enter unlatching the rope
>the three of you look around for Pinkie, Applejack, or Rarity but they are nowhere to be seen
"Well just send them a text saying we are already inside. I'm sure they will be here soon."
>Pinkie Pie pokes her head out from behind the bouncers arm surprising everyone, including the bouncer.
>"Yeah! Come on Twilight, lets get inside and get this party started!"
>just as everyone is about to enter a white expensive looking car rolls up.
>its not a sports car or anything high end like that, but it definitely cost quite some money.
>a valet quickly rushes over to the new arrival along with two bouncers as a woman with long dark aqua hair and a red dress that contrasts her dark skin nicely steps out.
>from the drivers side comes a stereotypical looking rich boy, fohawk and all.
>Twilight giggles
>"its a shame he came with a date isn't it girls?"
>the others join her in laughing but something seems familiar about him.
>but you cant put your finger on it.
>the apparent VIP's are escorted inside just ahead of you and the girls
>as they walk by you notice that the man seems to stare at you for a moment before entering the club
>weird.
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its was about time i actually contributed, im actually pretty excited to be writing again. Hope you guys will enjoy!
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>>29324211
Desolation, devastation.
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>>29324876
I don't know whether or not to report as shitposting...its kinda confusing and I don't even know what they hell their singing.
>>29324899
Neat, I get some more to read, I guess the name change was a good thing.
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>>29324955
I will enjoy when I finish reading the rest of the stuff you wrote...also your name will be added next thread.
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>>29325034
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RrkzIN2eP0U
Its "Nuclear" by Mike Oldfield, its gained popularity from Metal Gear Solid V the Phantom Pain.

also, the name was actually a joke from SpiderShim thread #17 when i posted a bit of green and Trepp told me to get a trip to tell me apart from "the rabble"

I rolled with it.
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>>29325057
I also just noticed you likely meant the thread... not my name.

oh well
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>>29325057
I didn't say anything about the name, so cool? As for the song, I wasn't really that interested in that either, I am more annoyed that its taking up space, but I might listen to it anyways.
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>>29325087
Yup, I don't even know how you thought I was talking remotely about your name. Nice to have you around either way though.
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>>29324955
still waiting on manos, you know
even if I it makes me cringe
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>>29325101
it makes me cringe too.
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>>29325191
I destroyed all evidence
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>>29325197
Oh really?
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>>29325216
OH SNAP! PLOT TWIST!
Also, what is this >>29325101
>>29325134
>>29325166
referring too?
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>>29325236
the reason i thought >>29325090 >>29325097 was talking about my name. I had a general for almost a year about a green i was writing.
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>>29325216
you monster
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>>29325252
Again dude, your name wasn't mentioned at all. At most it was referring to the mangoes reference. Unless that is also relevant to your name. It is pretty safe to assume no one cares about asking about your name. The green you were writing in a general for you is of higher interest than your name.
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>>29325317
think he is trying to explain that His pastebin name was his old writefag name, he's been called out for having changed his name to avoid writing that gren a few times before so he probably assumed you were doing the same thing.
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>>29325329
Ah, now this makes sense as an explanation. Thank you random Anon.
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>>29325329
>>29325341
yeh, words.
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>>29325348
Its okay, I fail at trying to brain sometimes too. I usually just need to get some sleep and then am right as rain after that though.
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>>29325290
If you think THAT'S bad?
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>>29324998
What a mess we made, when it all went wrong
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>>29325674
you seal your own fate, but don't seal mine
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>>29325674
What kind of monster are you?
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>>29325825
I bet he hangs his toilet paper up wrong too

>pic unrelated
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>>29325825
Hell is empty. Because I'm up here.

>>29325837
As a matter of fact I do.
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>>29325851
>As a matter of fact I do.
but then you make it an easy target for small creatures like cats or toddlers to unroll!
you need to change your ways, dude.
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>>29325216
Saved
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>>29325871
don't make a big deal of it
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>>29325862
Fuck you I do what I want.
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>>29325851
You're the worst kind of monster
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>>29326091
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>>29326124
I don’t get the image
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>>29326656
The bread is sliced horizontally rather than vertically
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>>29294550
I wonder how Sunset reacts to tornadoes since they are harmless in Equestria.
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>>29326707
Oh.

You evil fiend
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>>29325676
Im Nuclear! I'm Wild!
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>>29294550
What's the over under on a kryptonian anon story?
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>>29327699
None yet, if you feel like writing one feel free.
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>>29327856
writing's for chodes
reading is where it's at
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>>29327904
No u
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>nein
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>>29327699
Come back when you learn how to make a sentence.
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bump from 9
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>>29306501
>Be Anon
“I hope you're not interrupting anything right now.”
>Sombra gives a dismissive wave and gestures you to sit, his other hand still holding the phone, “As usual I agree with your decision, I was merely pointing out the fact that you have once again taken one without consulting me or the council first.”
>You take the seat he points to and try not to listen in.
>“However, I have a meeting now, I'll back up your reasons for the council, because they don't usually see that easily to it,” he continues, “yes, see you tonight.”
>He hangs up and you bite your lip.
>It sounded almost like a marital dispute, but you know he wasn't married, and he mentioned a council.
>“Spitfire,” he explains then, “She has had some artifact moved from the Triskelion, we studied for a while now.”
“Okay,” you nod, unsure as to why he shares what seem to be classified.
>“A lot of people can't handle Spitfire, but as with everyone, you just need to know what makes her tick.”
>What makes Spitfire tick...
“And what would that be?”
>Sombra folds his hands and asks, “what do you know about her?”
>Good question.
>You never really were one to try and figure out people, machines are more your thing.
“She hides her Argentinian accent.”
>Sombra smiles, “and what does that tell you?”
“She's... not the type of person who wants to conform... I don't know.”
>“Maybe her reasons are the opposite. Maybe she's a rebel.”
“A rebel?” you laugh out. “her?”
>“Well, where does one acquire an accent?”
“Her family...?”
>Sombra nods, “quite the daddy issues. He-” then shakes his head, “No that's not my place to tell.”
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>>29331214
“Daddy issues...” you repeat.
>You haven't interacted with her enough to be able to back up such a claim, but you take Sombra's expertise on her.
>“She comes from a line of 'super'-heroes, you must know. Her grandfather was a Howling Commander, serving with Captain America, before he chased Nazis to Argentine. And his father before him fought in the Occult War.”
>Huh...
“So she needs to live up to a legacy?”
>“Quite the legacy, indeed. Her being a workaholic would be to put it mildly.”
>You think for a moment
“Why would you tell me that?”
>He shrugs, “maybe to ease you into talking about secret things, maybe to show I trust you.”
“But those are not your secrets, they are hers, “ you state, “you don't trust.”
>He chuckles, “oh, not one bit,” shaking his head in amusement, “but I know you're smart, and I trust you will make a choice that is in your favor.”
“So how would me joining the hextopus-club be in my favor?”
>He smiles, “oh, but we are the Wonderbolts, Mr. West. We fight Hydra, of course.”
>His words are underlined with generous gesticulations.
>You pull your chair closer to his desk and lean forward.
“So tell me about the Utopia Project.”
>His features fall a bit.
>“Oh, Utopia. How tragic it always eludes our grasp.”
>You notice he likes to start his sentences with 'oh', it's getting almost annoying.
“So? What is it about?”
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>>29331220
>“Have you noticed you like to start your sentences with 'so' a lot?”
>You open your mouth to respond but take a moment.
“So what?”
>You share a smile and he dismisses it with a shake of his head.
>“I assume you're familiar with the Matrix trilogy?”
>You frown.
“As far from utopia as you can get.”
>“Indeed,” Sombra nods once more, “but let's delve into the story for a bit. Science fiction is always so helpful when it comes to making metaphors.”
“Okay... I've seen the movies, it's been a while though.”
>“I'm sure you remember the important bits,” he takes a breath, “The first matrix has been created as an Utopia, as a garden Eden for humans to thrive in, but it didn't work out. More iterations have been made until – was it the sixth matrix? – one was designed after the world around 2000.”
>You try to access that memory and easily recall this part of the second movie where the architect talked to Neo.
>Why do you remember that so vividly?
“Yeah?”
>“Humans... strive for conflict, but for some people even Y2K wasn't enough. They needed to be out, in a much more hostile world. Something that really challenges them...” he makes a small pause, “now imagine you're the architect, what would you do?”
>Think evil.
“Outside the system they'd put my creation at risk. Are you trying to railroad me into saying 'for the greater good' or 'the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few'?”
>“Nono, you want them to be happy, not kill them.”
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>>29331228
“Let them out and do as they please?” you laugh and shake your head, “only I wouldn't be able to use them as batteries anymore, so let them stay...”
>You furrow your eyebrows and stop mid sentence.
“I... would...” the words come out slowly at first, “create a second matrix. Let them think they escaped.”
>You look up to Sombra again who smiles.
“Okay, metaphor's over, what's the Utopia project?”
>“Neo was able to use his powers outside the matrix in the third movie.”
“I said the metaphor's over now.”
>“Yes, and I'd like you to think about it, I want to see what solution you may propose. How would you change the world for the better?”
>You look down.
>It was actually something you are wondering about.
>But the matrix... huh.
>Give people fake conflict where nobody really dies?
>No, that's not it.
>For the greater good.
“Try and control every conflict there is? How would you plan to do that?”
>“We have named the answer to this question the Utopia Project. The name is by far the thing we have thought out the least,” he chuckles, “but you should go back to your courses, we don't want to inhibit your education, Mr. West.”
>Sombra shoo's you away with a hand gesture, and while you're still in thought you obey and stand up.
“Just 'Anon's fine, Professor.”
>“Anon then,” he gives you a friendly smile which you return, “now go and let people tell you things you already know.”
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>>29331214
Okay dude, this random jump is so bad I don't even know where you were supposed to be starting off from last time. You gonna have to go back to before the jump from Anon and Synergy meeting on the helicarrier to have any semblance of continuity, because the hot mess you have so far is all over the place now.
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>>29331850
your*
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>>29331850
there never was a heli-carrier...
but yeah, I take away from that, that I have to end my scenes more properly.
Without anyone ever saying anything I think I do fine, people.
Respond, comments, questions, concernes
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>>29331869
This is why usually I ask for comments and concerns at the end of my updates.
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>>29332003
Who directs the episodes?
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>>29331869
Then what was the part when Anon, Synergy, and Treehugger meeting Sombra for the first time? I remember that they met on the helicarrier for the first time. Then you just go off on a tangent because you thought we didn't want more talking scenes, then you jump to some other random portion without any context and then jumped a few more times till now. I don't even know if you remember where you last left off anymore if you cant remember the last coherent portion you wrote.
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>>29332022
maybe I said helibay, it was a hangar
I jumped back and forth between Sunset and Anon a lot, but the last few updates were all almost an entire scene, at least those in chapter 3
it's hard, because I have two narrative streams, you know?
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>>29332070
Yeah we know the different narrative streams, but the last substantive parts we read was the hanger you mentioned, and the happy campfire fight with Spitfire and Sunset. After that nothing else you posted recently made any sense or had any context to them from the plot. Other than vague mentions of stuff we don't know about or haven't read yet. If you even went to explain it. Its like a bad season of Naruto, actual plot for a few episodes then random filler that comes out of nowhere and is only tangently related.
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>>29324899
http://pastebin.com/MWFjuLWz (Part II)

I just noticed that I Made a mistake in the pastebin links. I posted the edit link instead of the normal one
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>>29332153
I'll have to remember this for the next thread.
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>>29332102
it didn't pan out how I wanted it to, lot's of stuff didn't go how I wanted it to.
But the only thing I heard from you guys is that it's going boring, so I wanted to make a jump.

I should remove the exploration of the forest that, how it turned out, was only to hint that it was indeed camp everfree.
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>>29332201
No problem. Everything is a "learning experience"
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>>29332183
Just ask for relinks to anything we might miss at the end of the thread, then you can throw it all up for the next one without missing anything.
>>29332201
Yeah...if your gonna do that, then its better to come out an say that instead of carrying on like no one would notice the dramatic scene change with no relevance or context of the last part. I was fine with what you had before and I cant imagine what on earth(or otherwise) possessed you to change it that dramatically, or why for that matter. past that then basically what this guy said>>29332349
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>>29332349
>memo to self: finish posts with "please like, comment and subscribe if you haven't already."

>>29332429
>I cant imagine what on earth(or otherwise) possessed you to change it that dramatically, or why for that matter.
at one point I go 4 updates with a single response
that doesn't feel great,
seriously, all I knew from you people was that my story devolved into a mess of exposition
with me unhappy too I changed something around, and two weeks pass where I still got barely anyone talking about it until now.
I just want/wanted to move on and go to the story arc I actually want to write... kinda.

I even shitpost and namefag in the thread more.
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Just imagine Spider Shim with 60s Spider-Man meme attitude.
>"Here's your options:
>"Fuck you I'm Spider-Woman."
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>>29332503
>"I got you covered Anon. Now hurry up and take a piss."
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>>29332494
If people thought that the story was a mess of exposition, they would have said something, going off to do a train wreck isn't a good idea. What you have is a captivated audience...or people with little brain power to make insightful comments. In any case, trying to act like Beans to get attention isn't a good thing, posting your story more will get you the (You)s you crave. Take a breather an calm down for a bit.
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>>29332511
okay, now I want to rewrite the entirety of chapter 2
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>>29332684
Its not necessary, just roll back the last few updates you did, and you should be right where you left off. I don't think anyone really understood what you wrote and how it applied to the story recently, so nothing of value was lost but some spoilers for what you might still have planned to play out. Unless you change that completely too.
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>>29332684
kek
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>>29333486
>>29333488
Really?
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>>29333543
Shit happens
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>>29333557
That it does
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>>29325101
>>29325134
Wait... Rabble is HS?
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>>29332684
I know that feel
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10
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Old green from a long time ago, using for bumping purposes.

>"give us the purse lady!"
>"yeah we promise we wont hurt you too much"
>you turn to look down a dimly lit alleyway as a group of thugs are mugging a woman and her husband
>"here take it! just let us go!"
>the thug takes the purse and counts the money inside
>"what the hell? only fifty bucks? what kind of woman only has fifty bucks in her purse?"
>one of the other thugs punch the man in the stomach making him kneel over out of breath
>"that's not going to pay the toll for OUR streets!"
>"looks like we are going to have to take payment another way..."
>a wave of anger surges up inside you as you set down your athletics bag and take out a damaged hockey mask
"These creeps picked the wrong town to do this shit."
>you put on the mask your magenta eyes peering through the openings towards the alleyway
>before you walk down you pick the bag back up and sling it over your shoulder
>your footsteps are drowned out by some of the thugs beating the kneeling man down while another struggles to pin the woman to the wall
"Hey assholes..."
>the two guys beating the man stop and look over to you while the one with the woman finally pins her before looking over to you
>reaching behind your back you pull a bat out of your bag
"Why don't you pick on someone your own size?"
>...
>"who the hell is this idiot?"
>"it isn't Halloween girly, take off the mask and go home, this doesn't concern you"
>your mask stares on at the goons while underneath you smile as two of them approach you
>one pulls a knife from his pocket while the other picks up a metal pipe next to a trash can
>"this is your last chance girly, get lost!"
"that's not going to happen"
>you reach to the bag again and pull out a baseball
>the two men give you a confused look as you toss it up and down twice before one takes another step
>he's the target
"Batter up."
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>>29335787
>you toss the ball and swing the bat striking the ball sending it flying at the goon
>it collides with his forehead and knocks him to the ground with a grunt
"strike one"
>the other charges at you and the one holding the woman drops her to join his friends
>"Now you're in for it!"
>he raises the pipe and swings it hard and fast at your skull
>you block it with the bat like some street version of a sword fight
>as the mugger starts to put too much force on his side you step back causing him to fall
>you raise your bat to bludgeon him but the bat is taken from you by his friend
>"Baseball seasons over kid!"
"if you say so"
>you pull the oldest move in the book
>you kick him square in his crotch making him keel over in pain as you pull out one of your hockey sticks along with a puck
>taking a few steps back you set the puck on the ground and watch as his eyes look up at you
>"don't you fuckin-"
>you raise the stick for the shot
"Three seconds left on the clock. Dash is alone at the net!"
>with all the force you can muster you shoot the puck right at his face
>it hits right in his teeth shattering almost all of them and knocking him out
"strike two!"
>you now turn back to the mugger who is starting to get back up
>with the hockey stick you grab his leg and pull him back down to the ground
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>>29335798
>"p-please! we'll give back the money! just stop!"
>you flip him over so he can face you as you stare at him through your mask
"should have thought of that before you threatened and beat those people back there..."
>you raise the stick and smash it into the mans face over and over until its broken and bleeding
>once you notice all three criminals are down for the count you smile
"and the games over folks, that's three outs!"
>you reach down and pick up your bat from the ground and put both it and the stick back into your bag after a quick wipe down with a sports towel
>as you walk off you hear the man and woman behind you speak
>"thank you, thank you so much."
>"who are you?"
>you look back at the two your hockey mask covered in splatters of blood
>reaching up you grab the mask and reveal your face with a smile
"the names Rainbow Dash."

--- fin ---
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>>29335787
>>29335798
>>29335804

that is a good bump
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>>29297140
This is the writer/story that brought my interests here, hope you continue!
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>>29336445
I have some good news for you anon
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>>29336524
Good news is always good
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>>29335787
Nice taste in bumping.
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>>29337109
Sorry I meant bad news. I always get them confused
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bump from 9
>>29337645
So...pic related then?
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>>29337645
So you’re not gonna continue it?
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>>29338503
>>29338231
He's not me. I'm going to keep working on it
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>>29338511
That’s good
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>>29338511
Based dubs
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Merica bump
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Finally made a pastebin for elder god Anon

http://pastebin.com/Jv15Gq29
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>>29339904
Nice
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bump from 9 with Spider Woman's main man, and the guy that gets jealous looks from all other male villains.
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>>29340439
I think i know why.
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>>29340466
That's a part of it, but the one thing that really gets him that position is the fact he can make his dick vibrate non stop, one Sunset and Trixie know about this...and whoever they pimp him out too on their wacky foursome Friday nights.
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>>29340486
only* not one. Is anyone else having their screen flash and all the text disappears, or is it just me?
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>>29300897
>Well this is a bit awkward.
>You girlfriend and a couple of your friends just found you with their arch-rivals.
>Enemies?
>You should ask where they stall in that regards.
>Back to the matter at hand, Sunset was just standing there with her eyes wide open.
>Makes you wonder what's going on in her head.

>Be Sunset as your mind tries to process what you were seeing.
>Anon was hanging out with the Shadowbolts.
>Did he know who that are?
>Why were they there with him?
>Was Lemon trying to steal your man?
>Why was your brain making a mental image of the Shadowbolts, tied up, with Anon standing there with a riding crop?
>And why do you want that to happen to yourself?
>Why did you feel something wet on your lip?


>Be Anon once more and Sunset’s starting to scare you.
>She asked you a question and started to stare at you while her nose began to bleed.
>Maybe you don't want to know what's going on in her head.
>Anyways you walks towards Sunset and hold your hand in front of her while snapping your fingers.
“Earth to Sunset. You in there?”
>She seemed to snap out of her self inducted trace as she shook her head.
> “What? What happened?”
“You asked why I'm here and went off into your own little word.”
> “He's right, darling. Are you feeling alright?”
>Rarity touches Sunset’s forehead but your girlfriend swats it away.
>Twilight looks between everyone there with a confused expression on her face.
> “Shouldn't we get back to the matter at hand?”
>You give Twilight your own confused look at that.
“And that is?”
> “Why you're with the Shadowbolts?”
>Lemon gets in Twilight’s face after she says that.
> “You got a problem with that.”
>Sunset grabs Lemon’s shoulders and pushes her back while getting in between them.
> “And if we do?”
>You turn back to see Sugarcoat still working on her crossword.
“You gonna do something?”
>She gives you a dry look before turning back to her puzzle.
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>>29340707
>She gives you a dry look before turning back to her puzzle.
> “I'm doing something. Here's one, a male witch or demon.”
“Warlock.”
> “.....Thank you.”
>Turning back to the girls, you see that they were already charging their powers, raising their fists or sliding their blades out.
>You better take care of this before this gets ugly.
>Not even taking the time to think of plan, you walk between the two groups with your hands raised.
“Okay girls. Let's calm down.”
>All the girls say, “Calm down?”
“Yes, calm down. We don’t want to cause any unnecessary problems here.”
>They lower their arms while deactivating their powers.
“Now let's talk like normal and civilized people.”
>You hear them mutter, “Fine.”

All i got for now
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>>29340740
Anon is the voice of reason? Well, colour me impressed. In this situation I'd be egging them on trying to start a superhero cat fight.
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>>29340740
I really need to catch up on your greens, reading your past few posts have me pretty interested.
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>>29324929
>What the hell are THEY doing here?
>as you walk past your former friends and Shimmer you cant resist glancing over to them just to confirm what you saw.
>Chrysalis has her arms around yours like shes some trophy girl.
>Honestly it fits the look pretty well.
>"Whats wrong?"
>you realize she must have felt your arm tense up from the sight of Sunset
>but the less she knows about her the less you will need to worry about them meeting.
>at least for now.
"Nothing, just got nervous."
>the doors are opened for you and the music hits your eardrums like a freight train

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fLelk26BlEM

>after walking down a short hallway and going past a coat check and check in, you open the next set of doors.
>what awaits you is near sensory overload.
>lights are flashing
>music is blaring even louder than before
>and to put the icing on the cake there are people covering almost every inch of the dance floor.
>the edges of the club have several seating areas and tables for those willing to shill out for what you assume are incredibly overpriced drinks and light meals.
>Chrysalis is shouting but you can barely comprehend her words.
>"Its been a while since I've been here! What do you think of it?!"
>Sunset and your-- her friends, more or less brush past you making their way to the dance floor.
>you watch her as she walks by her hair bouncing slightly with each step as she raises her arms cheering with the others
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>>29341208
>Chrysalis notices your gaze and your arm tense up again, and she looks at Sunset as she moves by
>"Do you know her?!"
>if it wasn't so loud you'd be afraid Shimmer heard her, but as it stands there is little chance of that.
"Better than I should."
>reaching into your pocket you pull out a small token with the visage of Copper Coin on it and you hold it up to a nearby "security" guard dressed in a well fitted tuxido
>with your full attention on him you speak up loud enough for your voice to be heard
"I'm here for a meeting."
>He leans in to inspect the object before nodding and waving for you to follow him.
>as the two of you are led away from the main floor and the volume of the music slightly drops you take the time to talk to Chrysalis as quietly as your surroundings allow
"When we get inside stay calm and quiet-"
>She raises her hand surprising you and cutting you off in one motion
>"I've been in situations like this before. don't worry"
>she gives you a seductive wink
>"I'll be good."
>you can feel the desire to say "Yeah~ of course you will" on your tongue but you suppress it.
>instead you reach into your holster under your clothing quietly as to not attract attention and hand the weapon over to her
"Just in case."
>she reaches for it before you slightly jerk it back
"Emergency only."
>you let her take it this time and she slightly lifts the leg of her dress revealing a garter
>she slides it in quickly makign sure its safely positoned so it wont fall before standing straight up again.
>you can help but comment on it
"Do you always wear one of those?"
>"Shut up, its lucky. What about you? Now you don't have a weapon."
"if everything goes well, Neither you or I will even need one in the first place."
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>>29341219
>"and if it doesn't?"
>her tone makes it clear this is more out of her own curiosity rather than fear.
"then I'll barrow one from a friend."
>you can feel your wrists burning slightly as they change filling with biological webs
>hopefully Sunset plans on staying here longer than you do.
>not to mention close enough for you to keep her abilities on hand.
>The guard turns back to face you and motions to a door
>"Right inside, just show them the coin."
>he doesn't wait for you to enter or give any response, instead he walks away back to his post by the dance floor.
>he's either a man who takes his work seriously, or wants to get back to watching girls dance.
>both are plausible.
>you approach the door and knock on it several times before a slide opens up revealing a set of eyes peering through
>you stare back momentarily before raising the coin.
>the slide quickly closes and the door is opened, the music inside contrasts a bit to the thumping beats you left behind you.

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>As soon as you step inside the man at the door looks you over from top to bottom.
>"You sure you're in the right place kid?"
>you pass him by without a word followed closely by Chrysalis
>the room is rather large for the amount of people inside, there are small groups of well dressed men and others you can tell have just thrown on a suit or clothes over a vest
>those are the ones who are more than likely armed and are here to represent their employers
>just then a group of three men approach you, each with a clearly visible ballistic vest under their tux and a holstered sidearm
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>>29340976
oh he wants to see one. He just wants to wait for the right time.

>>29341194
You're not missing much except a few one shots and a crossover between the two main greens I'm writing.
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>>29341226
>the man in front grins and looks back to his comrades as he speaks in a thick Belgian accent
>"Look at this... Who decided to let a boy into the men's room"
>his eyes drift over to Chrysalis
>"well, at least he brought a beautiful woman with him."
>he takes a step towards her but is stopped by your hand
"She's with me, and I am here to represent the Copper Family."
>The man brushes your hand aside and stares you down
>"They must be on hard times if they have to employ pop star wannabes"
>you are about to speak when a voice you could never forget comes crashing down on your ears
>"Appearances can be deceiving."
>from the corner of the room a figure in a white hood approaches and the three each give a bit of space for him to meet you
"What are you doing here?"
>it takes every ounce of will power you have to keep yourself from clenching your fists or bringing unnecessary attention to yourself
>but even so, you know he can read your stance like a children's book.
>"the same as you, Anonymous."
>the light of the room finally casts upon his face, or rather, his white skull mask.
>"I'm here to represent an employer."
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Would Spider Shimm workout, or would nightly patrols be enough to keep her, or any other hero for that matter, in shape?
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>>29341875
Probably enough with night runs, though she might do regular exercise as an excuse to wear tights/yoga pants in front of Anon during the day.
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>>29342789
She probably gets Anon to help her with a few "Hands on" exercises
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>>29343606
>tfw Sunset wont use you as her personal gym rack, squat thrusting on your dick each lift. tfw you will never carry her sweaty body to the showers to do what you want sense she used her energy up exercise fucking.
It hurts.
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>>29340707
>Was Lemon trying to steal your man?
>Why was your brain making a mental image of the Shadowbolts, tied up, with Anon standing there with a riding crop?
>And why do you want that to happen to yourself?
>Why did you feel something wet on your lip?
U-unf...Lewdset best Set.
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>>29340976
You would kill Twilight inside if you destroyed a perfectly good library.
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>>29343691
It's somewhat a common thing in the Infamous green. You should have seen some of the images from earlier scenes
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>>29341237
I am going through the first part of your pastebin, and the only problem I have seen so far is that you have a LOT of capitalization problems. Liking it so far otherwise.
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>>29340466
>the shocker
>not the minivan
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>>29344849
> the minivan
What did he mean by this?
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>>29345029
You're not a family man, are you?
2 in the front, and a handful in the rear
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>>29294550
What would Sunset do if I bring a pupper home?
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>>29345401
she's more of a cat person.
you should buy her a pig
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>>29344491
Thanks for the post. I'll go through it all when I have some spare time and try to clean it up a bit.

Any notes are appreciated
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>>29345474
i too have to take some time away from my day to reread your story from the start, sorry if I'm not giving you input right now

have to catch up on trep first as well
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>>29345570
Hey there's no rush, if I wanted (you)s for the sake of (you)s I'd write fetish greens.
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>>29294550
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>>29341237
Finally caught up
Am hyped

A few grammar errors, but glad you're back to it, Rabble
Tfw Rabble doesn't remember I was the one who suggested that he get a trip
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>>29346647
It was you? I'm 99% sure it was trepp but if I'm wrong, sorry.
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>>29346744
I forgive you.
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is it just me, or are our pages going down quickly today?
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>>29347244
It does feel that way, doesn't it?
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>Deep inside a destroyed instillation there is a low hum.
>Almost all power to the facility has been cut off, save for emergency reserves and a single backup generator.
>Halls once filled with well trained and equally well armed soldiers and guards are now desolate and burnt.
>Bodies leave a bread trail of where someone, or something had fought it's way out, or possibly, in.
>If you were to travel deep enough inside, past the burnt corpses of the dead, you would be greeted with a single room still with power.
>Inside dozens of large cylindrical tubes are positioned on both sides of the room.
>Most are broken, lifeless bodies sunk to the bottom or lazily leaning out of the openings with a strange liquid filling what portions of the containers the cracks and openings will allow
>At the far end, a large computer with several screens, now shattered or dead.
>All except for one.

>Ninety-seven percent...

>One the screen is a single bar just below a row of shapes that resemble the tubes.
>Most of them are flashing red, with the words "Caution: Breach detected! Subject Deceased"
>Save, one.
>Inside a tube a fully adult female floats, the life support amazingly keeping her alive while death surrounds her liquid sanctuary
>She, is you.

>Ninety-eight percent...

>You feel, nothing. You see, nothing.
>Your entire world is the sounds of foreign voices thrusting themselves into your mind.
>If you could feel pain in here, you are more than certain that you would be overwhelmed by them.

>"You're real lucky kiddo. You were almost 'protected' by the Wonderbolts."
>"Who are the Wonderbolts?! And for that matter who are you guys?"
>"Don't worry kid, we are the good guys."
>"Freedom Fighters."
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>>29347935

>Different voices come again, one of them is the same as before, and the other as strange as it seems, is familiar despite the fact you have no knowledge of it.

>"Take the shot"
>There is a slight delay
>"I said take the shot."
>"Understood"

>You can hear the voices, you can see the images but, none of them make sense.
>You feel as though they are supposed to be connected to you somehow but...
>They are too strange, like they are talking AT you, but not TO you.
>Now another voice comes, its different from the others, with a tone that demands respect.

>"perhaps you are worth taking a look at."
>"Impressive. Are you reading my moves that quickly?"
>"I wonder, are you learning my skills? Or just copying them?"
>"Once you reach your limit, you are training."

>Ninety-nine percent...

>That same voice from before returns again.
>Is it important?
>Does it mean something?
>Why do you keep hearing it!?

>"I understand, I will not embarrass you."
>"Whatever you plan on doing here Wonderbolts."
>"It ends now."
>"Training course setup 2-C."

>One-hundred percent.
>Memory Upload: Complete.
>Releasing Subjects from containment.

>You can feel your aquatic safety being flushed away and the weight of your body becomes apparent to you.
>The cords and cables attached under your skin pop away and you breathe with your real lungs for the first time.
>You cough, your body not yet used to breathing on its own.
>With considerable effort you rise up from the floor of your container and open your eyes.
>The glass tube opens up for you, your first sight are the corpses of your tube siblings.
>Your skin is wet and cold, and each step you take makes a light slapping sound on the metal floor.
>You see the screen at the end of the room, as you approach a face of a woman appears and speaks.
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>>29347943

>"Hello. I am your creator, your god, your mother."
>That's the voice from before!
>The one you could hear in the liquid!
"Mother?"
>Slowly you place your hand on the screen, as if it could somehow bring you closer to her.
>"You are made from the joint effort of myself, your father, and your eldest brother."
>Her voice is soothing, and the knowledge that you have family gives you a warm feeling in your chest.
>"Regrettably, your father has passed, and your brother knows nothing of you or your connection to him."
>She smiles for the first time.
>"But one day I hope you can all become the children I wish I had from the start. My true children."
>The screen shuts off, as do the lights.
>Your heart races and panic sweeps over you, not from the dark or not knowing where you are, but from the loss of your mothers face.
>From the fear of being alone.
"Mother!? MOTHER COME BACK!"
>You slap the screen with your palms desperately trying to make her loving smile return, but it's no use.
>You slump to the floor defeated, but no tears form in your eyes.
>You are startled by the sound of footsteps behind you, you hadn't seen or heard anyone besides your mother's image on the screen
>A figure comes from the darkness, his silhouette all you can make out with only your unadjusted eyes in the dark.
"Who- Whose there?"
>You see a hand reach out to you in the darkness.
>"Don't be afraid of me. I knew your mother, and knew ~of~ your brother"
>You find yourself reaching out to the hand feeling the touch of another person for the first time.
>"I am Sombra, and you are Alpha."
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>>29347946
I mean... "bump"
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>9
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>>29348615
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>Herd time
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>>29347946
Interesting
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>>29347946
Oh shit...this is bad. What will the brainwashing do?
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bump from 9
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Good morning, thread
How's everyone doing today?
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>>29351671
I dug a grave for my cat at sunrise, and about to make breakfast. How bout you?
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>>29351683
Um, not the response I expected, sorry about your cat.
I'm okay, getting stuff together so that I can move back to my apartment tomorrow.
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>>29351705
Neat, have a good day then, I'm making burritos.
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>>29351671
Good enough. Gonna try and weite something later and get an idea on elder god Anon
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>>29352320
hype.
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>>29294550
Would any heroes willingly take someone as a sidekick? Would any of them refuse?
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>>29353371
I think it would depend on the hero in question an who the character that is under the mask reacts to the offer.
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>>29353368
Yup. Now to use a Sunset shimmer that's not Spider-Woman
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>>29353784
Ooooo, what will you have her be then?
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>>29353888
Ghost Rider Shimmer?
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>>29353888
trips confirm for trep
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>>29353901
Ghost Rider Shimmer
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>>29353888
I was thinking of that. But need to read the general idea of Ghost Rider though
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>>29353784
You're breaking tradition!

>>29353888
If it's ghost Rider or something unexpected I'm pumped to see it. I love surprises
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>>29354133
I made 2 green with Spider-Sunset. It's time to break the mold.

Plus i want to do a crossover with my 3 Anons playing poker and comparing their lives to each others
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>>29354156
Metaing the meta using the AGP poker room for your Anon's?
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>>29354192
I already had Infamous Anon chill with Tonic Anon so why not
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>>29354239
This is gonna be cool or disturbing, did Occult Anon's mom have them meet up for shits an giggles?
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>>29354257
I'm making it were they get together sometimes to blow off some steam. For shit and giggles.
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>>29354322
Poker night at the pastebin.
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>>29354350
.....I'm so using that title
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>>29354361
Oh god, I hope we get a scene of stripper Sunset's.
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>>29354385
I'm thinking about it
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bump from 9
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>>29355240
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>>29356887
Mamoaru needs to return
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>>29357585
yup
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>>29358971
>>
Are we officially dead? Or has life just started to get in peoples way?
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>>29360143
it's the weekend, we have other priorities
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>>29360143
The quiet before the storm.
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>>29360159
fair point.
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>>29360177
two responses within 5 minutes to your question, I think that answers our dedication, no?

Do we need a topic to discuss?
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>>29360143
I'm working on something but it's taking some time
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>>29360220
>>29360187
Still, five bumps with very little discussion in between, kinda makes you wonder.
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>>29360256
Well what do we do? I'm writing Occult Anon and trying to figure out what hero Sunset will be. I'm open for anything
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>>29360285
popular vote was ghost rider, and I'd back that up
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>>29360285
I'd say just have her retain the powers she had in LoE, and not be a pre-existing hero.
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>>29360297
I'm for it but can someone give me a small summary of Ghost Rider. I just know the first movie
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>>29360333
Are you wanting his power summary or his general character description? Because I think his wiki will do just fine for that.
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>>29360333
>CAGE RAGE
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>>29360359
Just general character. I just don't want Sunset to be based on Nichalos Cage
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>>29360367
Well...if your just using his powers and having Sunset use them, then you don't really need his general character. Unless of course you plan to use some of his villains. They wouldn't be entirely, relevant to a Cuthlid Anon, as they usually keep their supernatural weirdness to themselves, but I could see them becoming a thing.
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>>29360396
I just like to know what I'm getting into before I dig to deep of a hole.

Besides it's just the powers I'll mainly use powers
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>>29360410
Fair enough then, I'll go find his wiki and post a link for you. Unless you just google it yourself. Also
>Besides it's just the powers I'll mainly use powers
you need some sleep.
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>>29360428
already looking at it.

I didn't sleep last night
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>>29360333
there are plenty of ghost riders
Mephisto forcefully bonds a demon against his will to a mortal
the mortal, when transforming, gains the usual, speed, strength, durability, etc. but the outstanding ones are sin perception, penance stare, some pyromancy
weapon
he wields a chain that can extend in length and can be summoned out of nowhere, really

that's the rough gist of things, make your own canon
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>>29360444
Fair enough trips man, GO TOO SLEEP!
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>>29360456
I can't. Had too many cakes

>>29360447
Thanks
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>>29360464
That sugar crash is gonna be crazy.
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>Be Skrull Infiltrator #217
>Fuckin shit yeah, time to conquer Earth!
>Get assigned to watchin a couple of schoolgirls
>Aw hell yeah, gonna get summa dat sweet, primitive human poon
>"You're a student, Anon."
>Wait, fuck, nobody said nothin about homework!!
>How the shit were you supposed to pass Human History or Social Studies!?
>Fuckit, we'll do it live!
>Should be easy anyways, barely even need to shapeshift, all these hummies are funky colours to begin with
>Just smooth the chin greebles, tweek the nose and eyes, and round the earsies
>BAM!
>Name? Hah! Two steps ahead of yah!
>Anon, short for Anonymous, duh!
>What do you mean, it's a stupid name!?
>This bitch's name is APPLEJACK, for fuck's sake, it'll be fine
>Still, best way to keep an eye on these chick is to keep 'em close
>And what do human chicks love more than money, amirite?
>A sweet three-piece suit should do the trick, hint at being casually wealthy with a sense for fashion
>How much?
>Eh, just a small loan of a million dollars
>Okay! The invasion is a go, just need to make first contact
>What could possibly go wrong?
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>>29360672
>Sunset's face when she brushes his arm on his first day.
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>>29360672
you know what to do
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>>29360672
Kek, this is fucking gold.
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>>29360672
>Right, done with the easy part of landing the ship
>Is it still double-parking if nobody can see your spaceship?
>More importantly, who gives a fuck?
>Now for the hard part
>Heh
>Okay, okay, enough dick jokes
>The school's in view, you didn't get punked on the way by any wackjob "supervillains"
>Man, those guy's have middle management written all over them once the Empire takes over
>Especially that freakass Goblin guy, dude's already green with pointy ears
>Knowing your luck, you'll probably get stuck with them
>Fuckfuckfuck!
>Okay, chill, target sighted
>One Sunset Shimmer, no known family, used to be a real bitch before some weird laser light show
>Let's get to work
>Maximum Effort
>You raise a hand as she turns to face you
"Greetings, fellow ki-"
>'BAM!'
>When you come too in the Human Child Mortuary, known as the nurse's office, you get the rundown on, precisely, what the fuck
>Did the authorities get the number of the Thanos that ran you over?
>Huh?
>That bitch laid you out with one punch!
>Your eye is blacker than the reflection of space in the Silver Surfer's undies!
>Thank Skrull God that your disguise doesn't revert on unconsciousness
>But damn him all the same for giving you this assignment
>What's that?
>Sent home!?
>But how were you supposed to observe the girls if you were sent home!?
>Fuck, this Redheart chick isn't budging
>She could be the Empress with the glare she's giving you
>So, backpack in tow, you head for theparking lot where your ship is waiting
>Man, this day sucks
>Your eye hurts, you're tired, this city is loud, and your ship is cramped
>You are so going to bitch about this on /r9k/
>reee....
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>>29360801
not sure if me gusta
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>>29360856
It was just a random thing that popped in my head
I like the idea of inept world conquerors and the thought of Sunset's Spider Sense ringing so hard that she decks someone she doesn't even know makes me chuckle
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>>29360801
>Skrull Anon is also a /r9k/bot
this is why you are one of our favorite writefags keaton.

>>29360856
>Speaks Mexican.
>Post Trump.
>Pic related.
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>>29360890
In all instances of sentient life, there will always be frustrated /r9k/bots
>pic related
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>>29294550
More road rage Spider Sunset when that shit was funny.
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>>29360937
needs more jiggly physics
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>>29294550
continued from the last occult Anon

>It’s a new day and you’re still Anon.
“Ow. Ow.”
>And you feel so sore right now after last night’s activities.
>Whatever dad did to Sunset kept her going at it for hours.
>It was like she was an animal or something but whatever.
>Now it’s time to go to class and hear the teacher drone on about the book we’re currently reading.
>As you wrote down notes, your phone began to vibrate.
>You take your phone out to see that you received a message
>Looking around, you see that no one is paying any attention to you.
>With that in mind, you enter your password and look at the message.
>It didn’t come from anyone you knew and it said to meet up at the gym once school’s over.
>You look around the room to see if anyone sent it but couldn’t tell who sent it.
>Everyone was either taking notes or almost falling asleep.
>All except for your classmate Pinkie Pie who was eating a bucket of cookies.
>She stopped eating for a moment to smile and wave at you.
>You lamely wave back with a nervous smile.
>Turning back to the teacher, you just sit there and wait for the end of the day to come.
>The bell rings causing the teacher to stop the lesson as everyone gathered their stuff to leave.
>Just as you were about to walk out the door, Pinkie walked beside you and grabbed your arm.
> “We need to go Anon.”
“What?”
>She doesn’t answer you as she starts to pull you down the hall and towards the entrance.
>You don’t know how it happened but you were suddenly outside the school’s entrance with your backpack in front of Pinkie’s friends.
“How?”
>Twilight raised her hand to silence you while shaking her head.
> “Don’t ask. You’ll live longer.”
>Jokes on her, I’m immortal.
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>>29361705
“So I’m guessing you wanted to talk about something.”
> “Yes. We were wondering if you’ve noticed Sunset acting odd.”
>That’s odd.
>Did dad’s power affect Sunset more than you thought.
“I haven’t seen her all day. Why?”
>Rarity walk towards you as she took a piece of paper.
> “Well she came by and gave us this.”
>You take the paper to see it written in some kind of gibberish writing.
“Okay? It could be a prank.”
> “I would think so if she didn’t ask us to join her in worshipping you. Is there something you want to tell us?”
“........Sunset sure is a good prankster. So she’s at her home?”
>You were just about to leave and find Sunset but Rainbow and Applejack grabbed your shoulders.
> “We’ll escort you.”
> “Wouldn’t want you to get lost partner.”
>You shrug their arms off your shoulders and stare at them.
“I’ll go and talk to her. She’s probably gonna play another prank if all of you go there.”
>Hopefully they believe that and let you go.
>You need to see how dad fucked her up.
>Rainbow doesn’t look convinced and neither does Applejack.
>Pinkie continues to eat her candy as Fluttershy hugged her rabbit.
>Rarity and Twilight on the other hand look thoughtful.
> “Why don’t we have one of us go with him?”
>You and the girls look at Twilight.
> “it’s just an idea.”
>After much talk, they decided that Rarity was going to accompany you to Sunset’s place.
>It doesn’t take you and Rarity long to get to Sunset’s place and knock on her door.
“You think she’s here?”
> “I’m sure of it, darling.”
>The door opens to reveal a very crazy looking Sunset.
>Her clothes looked all wrinkled, her hair made it seem like she just got out of bed and her eyes dilated once she saw you.
> “Anon, you came for me.”
>She gets on her knees and bows to you as Rarity looks at you in confusion.
> “I thought about our time we spent last night and I’m happy you were gentle with me.”
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>>29361878
>Rarity adopts a shocked look as she brought her hand to her mouth.
>Sunset looks up at Rarity as she smiles a little.
> “Are we gonna do the same thing to Rarity Anon? I’m sure she’ll find it as pleasurable as I did.”
>This is gonna be difficult to explain.


A new part of Occult Anon. Trying to work the Yandere thing with cult recriutment
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>>29361705
Fuck yeah. Will read when I am not passing out.
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>>29361903
What powers did Anon have again?
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>>29361903
Not bad, but Sunset feels less like a devoted cultist, and more like a sex-addicted school-girl who also happens to be dating a man that may or may not be able to turn into a tentacle monster.
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>>29361982
I didn't decide yet. The next part i'll have an idea of what he can do
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>>29361989
I'm gonna go for that later. it was just the first lines that came to mind and i'm gonna work on it
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>>29360937
>Be Anon heading home after a date with Sunset who got dressed up by Rarity.
>Sunset is driving her kickass cycle.
>Why not web swinging you ask?
>Well in her words.
>"Trust me web-slinging in a dress is a bitch."
>Speaking of that dress she looked absolutely stunning in it.
>The very definition of beaut-
>"IT'S FUCKING GREEN YOU IDIOT!"
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>>29362074
Obey the rules of the road Sunset
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>>29361903
Yeees! I was waiting for this.
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>>29361903
Kek, Anon has to have an awkward conversation about how his mindbroke Sunset to date him.
>>29361997
>>29362029
Why not something like pic related.
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>>29365148
dad*
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>>29361989
I mean...isn't she kinda both?
>>29362029
I have a cock magic cyoa around somewhere, it would easily explain this>>29361989
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>>29365252
I'm trying for both but it came out as dick worship. It would just tentecale dick anyways

>>29365148
got any others of powers?
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>>29365285
Dick worship scenes aren't bad...as long as they are written properly. As for the any other powers question, do you mean as in the eldritch abomination powers or the cock magic...because the cock magic kind of counts as both. I can dig through my folder to find them an post them, but some might be too big to post on this board. Just a forewarning.
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>>29365307
the first one. I'm just trying to give Anon a couple as he's still young
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>>29365356
Awww, fine then, I will try an dig up some non lewd powers. Give me a few minutes to find them though, I have a fuckhuge folder to dig through. Also, new thread when?
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>>29365356
>>29365379
On the off chance I cant find any, do you want me to just post some random powers that kind of fit? Also we really need a new thread, so I can post them in the new one instead of reposting anything I find there from here. I am only a third of the way through and I hit the waifu wall section, so its gonna be awhile.
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>>29365600
Random powers are fine. Anon won't be powerful if you compare him to his father
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>>29365620
Ded
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>>29365620
That's....a fair point then. I will post them in the new thread, and anything that can fit being posted on this board. Just keep in mind that this board cant fit stuff tg can, so just tell me when if you got enough to use. If its multipart I will keep posting it till its finished though. My OCD wont let me not leave incomplete. NEW THREAD WHEN?
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New thread >>29365865
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