Lewd Sleepover #13

FIRST ^:) lololol

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Wow I thought we were officially kill

Glad we're back even though My main Green is now finished

Anyone wanna tell me what you guys think of it or yell at me or call me a faggot both are acceptable

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It was alright

>>29216981 I thought it was gr8, and that you need to start writing the hot dates as one shots. Small enough it doesn't become another giant ball of effort, but packs a satisfying punch of "oh god i want most"

>>29218704
That was the plan

I don't have anymore huge greens left in me

Glad you liked it

>>29219429
still waiting

>>29219546
I did say I was going to take a break after I finished the green, but I might do a set up for the dates tomorrow if I have time

I'm not making any promises just yet

Well uhh. I'm going to be at a Military base for the next 12 days starting tomorrow. So I'm not sure if I have the time to write much in that time. Expect Octave to be MIA a little bit. Will lurk as usual.

>>29220601
I'll give you the advice I give all my friends who go into the military

Try not to get court-martialed

>>29221151
You'd hope, eh.

All chill though. Just an Air Force Cadet mate. They can't do too much to me. Heh.

>>29221946
You say that now, wait until they send you to Mordor

>>29219858
I hope i can see more of your green. I hope the other guys that were in the last thread will find this one.

>>29216278
Hooray, it is back. I'd made a thread asking about it a while ago.
>>29216981
where did you finish it?

>>29223292
I finished it last thread, I just didn't have time to say "Hey this is the ending right here" before the thread died

I updated the pastebin and the link up there is current if you missed it

>>29216278

>>29216981
I loved it...can't wait for more. I think just doing the dates as little shorts would be good. Thanks for following through and finishing...unlike some of these fags here...

>>29227488
glad you liked it, gonna try working on a few post prologue before the dates here in a bit

>>29216278
This pic lewd, please explain.

>You are Anon
>And you'd made it to Monday
>You'd never been so happy to make it to a school day
>Sunday hadn't been so bad
>You spent the morning calling or texting all the girls
>And luckily you only mixed up like one or two texts
>That was awkward, but apparently being a little awkward was one of your best features
>Or at least that's what Rarity and AJ told you
>Later Pinkie had come over
>You hadn't been sure what too expect
>But your parents had made sure things didn't get hot or heavy
>They'd taken the news surprisingly well
>But that just meant that for the first time ever they weren't going to leave you and Pinkie alone in your room
>So you spent the evening watching cartoons together on the couch
>The lewdest thing that happened was you held hands
>At least til you walked her home
>Then she kissed you for so long you might wanna think of getting an oxygen mask
>After that you made your way to the drug store and picked up something very important
>Condoms
>Lots of condoms
>The girls may have said it was okay to cum inside them the other night, but you weren't taking anymore chances
>No shotgun weddings for you
>But now as you walked to school you felt pretty good
>Sure things were still kind of weird
>But your confidence was at an all time high as you strolled towards school feeling good for once
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1Du0FONhGs
>That was when you got a text from AJ
>AJ: Hey Anon, I just wanted to say before you get to school me and Rarity are sorry
>That can't be good
A: What did you two do?
>AJ: Well turns out Applebloom may have heard me and Mac talking about our relationship and may have told her friends
>That didn't seem too bad
>Wait, one of Bloom's friends was Sweetiebell
>And Sweetiebell had a big mouth
>That's when you notice people pointing and staring at you as you walk in
>"Dude" One of your teammates cries wrapping an arm around you "Tell me how you snagged six bitches at once"
>Fuck

>>29229179
>Now there were a few things you'd consider outside of your comfort zone
>But to say you didn't like being the center of attention was, to be fair, an incredible understatement
>You'd only gotten through dressing out in your jersey on your first game day because you'd loved the surprised look on everybody's faces
>But right now you were definitely the WRONG kind of center of attention
>Some girls were giving you some very dirty looks
>And then there were some who were giving you the opposite
>Like they figured if that many girls wanted to date you there must be something they were missing out on
>There wasn't of course
>But you weren't going to waste time explaining that to them
>Mostly because you could see a few guys from Rarity's fan club eyeing you like they wanted to have words with you
>So you duck out of your buddies' hold and tell him you'll talk later
>Really you just need to get away before anyone else starts trying to ask you about things and your business becomes the talk of the school
>More than it already is you mean
>You book it to first period and grab your seat near the back and slump face down
>There are a few murmurs here and there, but it seems like no one is gutsy enough to talk to you about it
>Lucky you
>Fuck you could use a smoke
>Unfortunately you were only able to sneak away to do that because no one ever noticed you were gone
>Now though
>Now everyone was noticing you
>There goes your comfortable background character status
>least things were quiet for now
>"Hey Anon"
>Why do you do this to yourself
>You look up and see Sunset and Twilight staring down at you
>Oh yeah, you share first period with them
>How could you forget
>And they don't seem especially happy with you
>"We need to talk" Says Sunset crossing her arms
>Luckily her bully routine never worked on you
>But she was still magic
>You think
>Maybe
"You know, I think I might know what this is about" You say giving them your winning smile "But what exactly have you heard?"

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>>29229806
oh shit

>>29229806

>That went over about as well as you figured
>These two obviously weren't here for your sparkling personality
>But Sunset keeps her pokerface on
>And Twilight tries to look intimidating
>Which is adorable
>Ineffective, but adorable
>"Well I called Pinkie the other day to see how the sleepover went" She says glaring at you "And imagine my surprise when she tells me how she and all our friends are now dating you"
"You think you were surprised, imagine how I felt" You say in a Rodney Dangerfield-esque way
>This gets a raised eyebrow from Sunset and a confused look from Twilight before they go back to bad cop awkward cop
>Yeesh, I tell ya, no respect
>"So you mind explaining exactly what happened?" Sunset asks firmly
>Actually you would mind, but you figure you have no choice
"Sure, but exactly how much DID Pinkie tell you, because there are some things I'm pretty sure the girls would rather I not go blurting out" You say trying to sound innocent
>Which you are
>Sort of
>like 60/40
>So Sunset and Twi spill what they know
>Which is basically everything
>Including some of the sexy bits
>Shit Pinkie what the fuck
>Twi blushes but Sunset keeps a straight face
"Sounds like you know pretty much everything to me" You tell them
>"Really, because I think we're missing somethings here. Like how you got that" She says pointing to your bruise
>Shit you forgot about that
>Again
>"And mostly just how in general"
>It was then you notice a small device in Twi's hands
>Wait a...
"Hey is that your bullshit magic detector" You ask making Twi fumble with it
>"What, this? No, it's a um..."
"Really, you think I magic-ed all the girls to like me" You say feeling a bit hurt
>Goodbye ego
>"The thought may have crossed our minds" Sunset said not looking guilty at all
"Oh, okay, well how about everyone here who hasn't tried to take over the school with crazy horse magic raise their hand"
>Both blush as Lyra stands up cups her face and shouts "DAMMMMMN!"
>Yeah, not your best moment

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>>29230499
>>Both blush as Lyra stands up cups her face and shouts "DAMMMMMN!"

Did insanebow ever come back? All the other stories were basically the same shit.

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>>29230499
>those digits
>that roast

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>>29230499
Savage

>>29230499
Those bitches really think Based God Anon used magic?
why doesn't he show them how he did it? Ya know, only to prove them wrong ofcourse

>>29230499

>Now did it feel good to roast Twi and Sunset like that
>Oh Lord yes
>Was it really the best idea though to shit on friends of 5 of your 6 kinda girlfriends'
>Fuck no
>Time to fix this
"I appreciate the assist" You say leaning past the girls and looking to Lyra "But do you mind, this is kind of private"
>Bonbon quickly covered her friend/girlfriend/whatever the fuck they were's mouth and sidled them away while smiling sheepishly
"Okay, now maybe that was a little harsh, but really you guys know about as much as I do for why the girls like me. Hell you probably know more because as last weekend taught me I don't understand women...like at all"
>"Now that, I believe" Sunset said as her blush began to fade
"Gee, thanks a lot"
>"Guess we were lucky we missed the party after all" Twi added
>Shit, this girl had no tact
>That was almost as savage as what you'd said
>And it was unintentional
>That made it hurt worse
>But still
"Yeah, you can say that again" You sighed in agreement
>Then you heard them both breath in sharply
>"And what's that supposed to mean" Sunset asked looking angry
>"Yeah, it sounds like you'd wouldn't want to date us" Twi added puffing out her cheeks
>Now that you'd planted your foot firmly in your mouth you had to handle this gently
"Yes"
>Perfect
>"Oh, and what's so wrong with us?" Sunset almost growled
>Okay, she was starting to remind you of demon-Sunset
>Time to mollify
"There's nothing wrong with you two" You say hurriedly trying to think up a decent excuse or two "It's just that A, 6 girls is more than enough for me to try and handle. And B, I'm not dealing with Flash having some kind of Autistic breakdown if you two wanted to date me. I'd probably have to try to stop him from running into that statue portal to pony land you all think is so secret"
>They blushed and fidgeted at that
>"What portal are you...wait, what's this about Flash"
>FUCK!!!!
>ABORT ABORT
>Luckily that's when the bell rung
>Saved by the bell
>At least for now

>>29232813
>what's wrong with us?
Well one of you is batshit crazy, the other is a huge nerd. Seriously though, friends or not he had no reason to downplay it. They came out of nowhere accusing him and being generally cunty

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>>29216278
We back bois!!!!!

>>29233746
This, even if Shimmy and SciTwi are qt 3.14's. The fact that they came the fuck out of nowhere and started harassing Anon is a HighSchool bullshit thing that (girls) do. too many cunts that can't think for themselves m8, and it hurts to see 2D waifus act too real but I'm loving the green and hope for some lovin' soon

yeah so it turns out y foot may be broken so I'm gonna go take a bunch of pain pills and try to sleep through the night before I go to urgent care in the morning, so I'm putting this on hold for now

>>29235344
Damn BA. You need to start being more careful with yourself...

>>29235635
The scary part is I didn't do anything to it, I just woke up one day and couldn't walk on it, 5 days later I was in mind numbing pain.....ain't that a bitch

>>29235794
Sounds like a classic case of foot fucked. Lock your doors next time -- pesky fucks always rubbing their cock in between toes when people sleep...

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>>29235794

>>29236078
hey when you have an alcoholic roommate you learn to deal with certain concessions

>>29236088
yeah, I've gotten to the point where something bad happens to me every year, what's sad is I'm not even out of my twenties

The moral of the story is get a job with health and dental kids

>>29216278
>Anon's External Hard Drive
what
this is real

Will try to get a post out later, right now getting ready to go to urgent care for my foot

>>29236380
I feel you bro. I totalled my car driving back to a Christmas party a couple days ago. Bad luck loves my/our company.

>>29237669

>>29236735
whats on it?

>>29238095
hope you feel better senpai

>>29232813

>As soon as the teacher starts talking you slip out your phone and start texting Flash
>Not like you need to pay attention anyway
>What are you, some kind of nerd
>Like Twi
A: Heeeeey Buddy
>FS:..What did you do
A: I just want to tell you I'm sorry
>You follow it up with like 6 frowny face emojis hoping that might soften the blow
>FS: Sorry for what, and what's this I'm hearing about you dating six girls at once
>That's when you remember you never got back to Flash after talking to him Saturday
>Oops
A: Well it's a case of good news, bad news, and worse news
>FS: Well what's the good news
A: The good news is I managed to fix things with Pinkie, Trixie, and Dash
>FS: So what's the bad news
A: Well it turns out I've actually had a sparkling personality all along and now I'm in some weird trial dating period with them, plus Rarity, Applejack, and Fluttershy and I have no idea what I'm doing
>FS:...HOW DOES THAT EVEN HAPPEN
A: I dunno, maybe it's something in the water
>FS: Then what the heck is the worse news
A: Oh..that...well you see I may have maybe just slightly might have accidentally mentioned to Twi and Sunset that you are into/still have feelings for them when they started giving me the third degree
>There's a long pause before he replies
>He's probably just having a good laugh at all of this
>He's a chill dude after all
>FS: WHAT FUCK DUDE WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT
A: I SAID I WAS SORRY, IT JUST SLIPPED OUT
>You notice the time and see it's already almost time for the bell to ring
>Your next period is study hall
>AKA ditch period
>You grab your stuff as you watch the second hand tick down
>As soon as the bell rings you book it out of there
>Last thing you need is to stick around for another lovely chat with Twi and Sunset
>You've done enough damage there
>And you have a date with your first love behind the bleachers anyway
>That is until you crash into something, big, solid, and red
>"Anon" a deep voice thrums down at you
>Oh fuck
>Shit
"H-hey Big Mac"

>>29240854
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4zLfCnGVeL4
Perfect tune. RIP Anon. You were still a huge faggot. Even though you boned 3 girls in 1 night.

>>29240854
[Romance BigMac] (1%)

>>29242791
Anon's bardic power isn't that strong, right now he's just hoping to his charisma score is high enough to talk his way out of death by big brother

>>29243172
Topkek. Even with high charisma, he still gets a broken nose from Big Mac.

>>29243217
Actually Anon has a few modifiers in his favor, two being that A) He and Big Mac are friends and teammates and more importantly B) He hasn't gotten past first base with her.....yet

Now he just has to roll high

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>>29243241

>>29244249
fug

>>29246346

>>29243241
>Rolls a one
See >>29240989

Don't die please

>>29240854

> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AdIpoE2LEps
>Seriously
>Actually you knew this was coming
>Honestly you were surprised Big Mac hadn't come to your house on Sunday to beat your ass then
>Probably because he didn't know where you lived
>But here he was now
>Just glaring down at you
>Not saying a word
>Seriously, you know he's a man of few words and all but fucking say something man
>No luck there
>He just keeps mean mugging you
>Guess you have to break the ice on possibly your own ass beating
>Typical
"S-so I g-guess you would like a word"
>"E-yup"
>Now we're getting somewhere
>And you also start to notice people are circling around
>Most are whispering
>You don't have to think hard about what
>Might as well appeal Mac's generosity
"That's cool, but um, you think we could take this somewhere private"
>You gesture to your impromptu audience just as one asshole in the back yells "World Star?"
>Mac looks around at the crowd making several people flinch reflexively before he grunts at you affirmatively and nods for you to follow
>The crowd parts for you two as Mac marches on and you dumbly try to assure the crowd you aren't going to die via awkward and wacky hand gestures
>But honestly you are sweating bullets
>You just wanted a fucking smoke for crying out loud
>But now you were doing this
>And hey if he was going to kill you maybe you could still get one last smoke
>Like a firing squad
>With more fists and less bullets
>All of a sudden Mac stops and you crash into him and tumble to the floor again
>You realize he's moved you to a small un-populated hallway
>Suddenly this no longer seems like one of your better ideas
>"Alright Anon" Mac says turning around and crossing his massive arms "Let's talk"
>Okay
>Time to put your plan into action
>What's the plan
>Oh wait you don't have a plan
>You have to stop coming up with ideas thinking you'll come up with a clever plan right in the nick of time
>Because that never works
>Shit, guess you'll try talking

>>29246346

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>>29249100
RIP Anon, may you have lewd encounters with all the virgins in paradise

>>29246346

>>29249493
10 bump

>>29251762
yis

>>29249100
Last digit is anons charisma check.

>>29249100
The last two numbers in my post number are how many broken bones anon gets.
If dubs he dies, and if trips he beats Big Mac to a pulp

>>29255018
>18
Not bad.

>>29249100
Post number is the percentage of how fucked anon is

>>29249100
"Okay Big Mac first let me just say it's not what you think"
>"Really" Big Mac said sounding unimpressed
>Shit
>You didn't think you'd actually get this far
"Yeah man, I mean c'mon, you know me. Am I the type a guy you'd consider a lady killer"
>"Nope"
>Yeesh, don't pull any punches on my account
>Wait
>No
>Pull all of your punches
>In fact don't even throw any of them
>Embrace pacifism and find enlightenment
"See, I mean I didn't try to make any of this happen...it just sorta did"
>"Uh-huh" Big Mac sounded more than a little skeptical
"Seriously that's what happened, we didn't even do anything major"
>"Do what now" Mac growled tensing making the veins in his arms begin to pop
>SHITSHITSHIT
>Back pedal quick
"Kissing! Kissing is all we we did! I swear on my granddad's lucky horseshoe. And she only kissed me twice just ask her" You blurt out trying to scoot back from the very angry brother
>"I already did" He said calming down
>Not by much though
>He just went from "I'm gonna kill the fuck outta you" back to "I'm about to kill the fuck outta you"
>Still a marked improvement
"Then you know I'm telling the truth"
>"E'yup"
>Score
>You can work with that
>"But that don't mean I'm just gonna let whoever is court'n my baby sister go gallivant'n around with a bunch of other girls" He said gruffly cracking his knuckles
>Fuuuuuuuck
>This is it
>Really
>This is how it all goes
>After all that work it took to get here
>...
>Nah
>Fuck that
"You know what? Fine, go ahead" You say standing up and throwing your arms out "Put me out of my misery. You'd probably be doing me a favor anyway"
>You close your eyes and wait for punch
>But it doesn't come
>"Pardon"
"Think about it, I'm dating 6 girls, and not just any 6 girls, but my two best friends, the captain of the soccer team, the hottest and most innocent girls in school, and your sister. And all of them are expecting me to eventually somehow choose between them. You think that's gonna be easy? Nah, I'll take the beating"

>>29255899
>"The hottest and most innocent girls in school, and your sister."
I laughed too loud and my lil' brother woke up. Fuck you Burn.

>>29255938
Ah damnit, now I'm laughing. You funny-guy

>>29255938
I hadn't realized how that sounded until you said it, but damn, Anon's level of don't give a fuck just went up a few more ticks

But really I think everyone in school knows you can't out innocent Fluttershy, even babies would be like "damn girl, you too fucking adorable"

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>>29255938
I fucking choked on my drink

>>29256057
did you died?

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>>29256120
Almost as hard as Anon's about to

>Be anon somewhat new student in CHS
>Kicked out of Crystal prep for failing all you courses, didn't care enough anymore to try
>After the friendship games fiasco decided it'd be hella cool to go to CHS.
>You weren't exactly the most popular kid but the two main impressions you have are "Extremely annoying" or "Extremely funny."
>Between acting like an autist or making fun of some of the students for being autists, you actually started doing good in school, mainly test scores.
>You were extremely smart but just too lazy to do any of the homework and most of the classwork... or even act smart.
> You mostly just tried to confuse people or make them look stupid or uncomfortable
>As your class ends you walk into the cafeteria
>They were serving your favorite: Nothing you like
>You didn't really eat lunch, not anorexic or anything, just not hungry.
>You go over and sit at an empty table. You were one of the first to sit down and without any real friends so far, you just waited to see who sat next to you.
>Low and behold a pink chick was the first table guest, she immediately begins talking to you.
>You may not be the best person at this school when it comes to being friendly but you at least try when no one is around.
"uhhh, sup?"
>You weren't paying attention to anything she was saying prior.
"So you're the new student , Huh?"
>You liked the way she said that.
>So energized
>You may have been one of the laziest kids at the school but whenever someone energized liked this got near you, you always perk up.

IT's 2 AM, I know it's shit but should i continue?

>>29256150
>New green
Damn right you should

>>29256150
"Well As a matter of-"
>Thats when you see someone sit down on the other side of the table.
>Now don't get me wrong, you are amazing at entertaining groups, mainly because of you ability to adapt to everyone's sense of humor, but there is always something about being upbeat and perky when more than one stranger enters the mix.
>You just didn't like being overtly friendly.
R:"Pinkie pie, who is your new friend?"
>A pumpous, egotistical voice asks.
>Sounded Crystal Preppy,
>Lets just say, when it comes to not paying attention, causing distractions and borderline offensive jokes, Crystal prep didn't really enjoy you.
P: "He's the new kid, I have him in like all of my classes and he's the funniest guy you could meet!"
>You loved the egotisitcal dick suck going on here but whenever someone calls you funny the next response comes like clockwork.
R:"Oh, really, well, why don't you tell me a joke?"
>Despite you first reaction was to go for the old playground isn't of just saying "you", you decided to take to higher road.
"Your fucking voice."
>Good job anon, really sealed the deal.
>This leave both of them a little speechless before pinkie laughs a little.
>You guess she realized the joking nature of it but Whity didn't.
>Luckily some more girls join and start talking before Cracker can respond.
AJ:"So, you the new guy?"
>Seriously, you've been here a week, how many people are going to ask you that.

I have a bit Pretyped, Just critique whenever something is wrong

RD:"Of course he's the new guy, why else would he not be asking for my autograph?"
>That sounded like a joke, probably was a joke.
"Well, I'm applejack, and might i be the first to welcome you to the CHS family."
>How about you welcome me to that asshole.
>Good thing you didn't say that.
"Im Rainbowdash, but you can call me awesome."
>Okay joke or not, you liked that one, even got a light Chuckle.
"And I'm Pinkie Pie!"
>Man, its like she talks with a permanent capslock.
"And i'm... Rarity, its a pleasure... almost..."
>Dafuqs her problem.
>Oh yeah... heh.
"Well, I'm-"
"Anon?"
>It seems like anytime you try to talk someone has to fucking interrupt you.
"Well, thank you for letting me complete my fu-"
>you turn around to insult the mouth breather before you realize who it is.
"Oh hey."
>You say with a bit of a perk.
"It's closet dog girl."
>Everyone at the table turns to you. Maybe using the old nickname you made up wasn't the best idea.
>You're a pussy whispering, ya know that.

>>29256188
"I mean... Night...light...."
>You struggle remembering her name but at least you got it right
T:"I-it's twilight."
>Close enough.
>You dont say another word.
S:"You two know eachother?"
>Yay a girl with Ketchup and mustard poured in her hair added to the mix,
T:"Yeah, Anon use to be in some of my classes before i chose to student alone."
S:"Was he as much as a... Unique personality... as he is now."
>You don't know whether to be flattered or insulted.
>You're a little bit of both
T:"Kinda, i don't really remember too much of his actions"
>She stares at you for a second
>You try to give her you're most charming smile
T:"Now that you mention it... Yes, yes he was."
>Now that feels like an insult
>You turn back around, looking at the table as the two girls sit down.
>Conversations continue normally as you just sit quietly until a new topic enters the mix near the end of lunch.
RD:"So are you guys coming to my super cool party tonight?"
R:"Wouldn't miss it for the world, Darling."
P:"I'd never miss out on a party."
S:"Kinda have to, I'm twilight's ride."
A:"RD, ya know I'd never leave ya hanging."
>You just stay quiet.
P: "Hey maybe Anon should come too!"
>You're kinda flattered.
R:"Are you sure Pinkie? We just met him and he might not want to come."
>Rarity obviously didn't want you there.
>Hell, you didn't know if you wanted to be there.
>But because she didn't want you there, It made you want to be there a lot more.
"Sure, I'd love to go, if it's fine by the Hostess."
RD:" Heh, fine by me, If you think you can handle it."
>She say that kinda teasingly, leaning in.
"Oh, I'm up for anything."
>You lean in too, being dramatic.
P: " Then it's settled, I'll text you the address!"
>You look at pinkie a bit confused.
"But you don't have my..."
>You're phone buzzes in your pocket.
>As you slowly pull it out you see the notification.
>"One new message! From Pinkie."
>You stare for a second, wondering why she is in your phone already.

All i have for now

Allah

Bump for the new guy

Burnout, you'll be pleased to know that last night I dreamed I was back in high school seated next to my best friend, Pinkie Pie.

Alas, no Trix to be found.

>>29216278
plenty of groping

>>29256254
>scriptwriting

>>29258835
Sorry bro, first green text. If you'd like to give m e a few pointers, i'd love it.

>>29259564
Show don't tell,
Keep it realistic,
And have fun.
Thats about all I got.

>>29260109
Okay, thanks for the tips.

also, bump cuz about dead

>At home now
>Quiet
>No parents
>Sigh
>You trudge up stairs dumping your bag on the floor as you do.
>start slamming in the essentials
>ToothBrush
>Laptop
>Clothes
> A Full flask you keep for "special" occasions
>Finally you're ready.
>You look at the address one last time
>Welp, time to go
>Half way there you realize no one gave you a time.
>So two choices
>Lurk outside Rainbows house until someone else comes or text pinkie.
>...
> She could be busy.
>So you just stand about half a block from the house
>Rocks are the best for kicking.
>Half an hour pasts before you notice someone leaving a car
>Nice car, expensive
>Nevermind the car.
>Mind the girl
>Rarity.
>Time to shine.
>"Hey." She said it so dismissively kinda like she didn't want you there.
>Okay be cool, don't do anything stupid.
"Don't seem so eager to see me."
>"You weren't exactly the most... hospitable of men to me at lunch."
>Okay, you should have expected her to bring that up.
>Simple, be charming.
"Didn't expect you to be so sensitive."
>Why did you say that
>That face of loss she previously had was gone now
>Just pure annoyance now.
>Ya know, maybe you should stop being mean as a joke, its turned into more of a reflex now.
>Never good.
>Lets hope your act cleans itself up as Rainbow opens the door.

>>29261157
Rainbow dash doesn't approve

>>29261157
>"Sup Rarity,hey Anon, didn't expect you guys to show up so soon"
>"Well, darling, i just thought i'd come and help out before anyone else arrived... Then i saw this..."
>She was searching for an insult that didn't sound like one
>Time to beat her to the punch
"The word you're looking for is "Pussy-Destroyer"."
>This get a hardy and i mean hardy laugh from Rainbow
>You don't really know if she thinks it's funny or pathetic.
>You'll go with the latter.
>"I would exactly use that kind of horrid language... or even that phrase at all."
"Then what were you gonna say?"
>Why did you challenge her
>nothing good can come from this
> A) She bests you and you look stupid
> B) You best her and then she gets your unsupervised sleeping form for revenge.
> Thinking about it B could end up sexy.
>How old is she?
>" I more would have use... Pathetic mess."
>Oww
>Rainbow recovers from the laughing fit to feel the tension.
>"Why don't you two come, I already made snacks."
>Fuck yeah.
>You hope there's Reese's Cups.
>Nothing gets you dick harder than reese's cups.
>You walk in behind Rarity hoping for reese's cups
>Why even did you like Reese's Cups
>Was it Reese's cups or Reese's Cups?
>Who's Reese
>Before you could learn the troubling truth your body stops suddenly
>More specifically, your pelvis.
>"Excuse me!"
>Fuck, you were too caught up you didn't see Rarity.
>Uhhh Quick think of something.
"You're too fucking white, couldn't see you past your privilege."
>What is fucking wrong with you?
>Not only did you ram your dick against a girl but you also insulted her.
>You slowly walk pass her into the kitchen
>You notice RD staring at you.
>Now in this very moment you dont know what is worse.
>The fact you just made yourself look like a huge ass in front of RD and Rarity
>Or the fact that there are no reese's cups in sight.

>>29261965
Damn. Compared to burnout Anon, this is like crash and burn Anon.
Keep it up!

>>29261965
>Lucky you, you dont have to answer that
>A knock at the door subtracts rainbowdash from the equation
>But Rarity was still with you
>"Not to be rude but, What's your problem with me, darling?"
>The C is capitalized.
>Finally the truth comes out
>Wait
>What'd she say?
>Something about her being rude
"Oh no, don't worry, you're good."
>Why is she waiting so expectingly?
>Doesn't matter, it's too quiet now
>You never liked silence.
>You should say something
>Maybe apologize.
>you were an ass
"Hey, look Rarity?"
>"Guess who finally arrived."
>Guess god want's doesn't want you to apologize
>"WOOOOO Lets get this party STARTED!!!"
>Oh it's this person Hell yeah.
>"Pinkie dear, please don't b-"
>Fuck Rarity
>You love how energized she is
"SHE'S IN THE MOOD RIGHT NOW!"
>Why are you shouting?
>Why are you pointing at her.
>Now she is shouting louder.
>Why is this is fun.
>"Alright pinkie, save it for later."
>Rainbow was having a good laugh trying to calm her down.
>Small talk begins as guest after guest arrives until everyone is here.

>>29262334
Does anon have autism. Cause this sounds exactly like me. It hurts

>You lay on the couch as vidya games are used to inflate the ego of the blue one.
>Redneck seems to be holding her own.
>What even is this game?
>"I almost have ya beat RD!"
>"In your Dreams!"
>The room seems to be doing their own thing
>lucky you, no one is doing anything with you.
>until
>"So Anon, tell us about crystal prep? I mean, your experiences with it."
>Fucking Bacon is talking to you.
>"Yeah any interest'en adventures?"
>You notice everyone staring at you, except GayPride, she's using this moment to win.
"Well, Ya know, Ol' Crystal Prep... It's a... thing."
>You didn't enjoy talking about it
>"Come on, Darling, there has to be some... Juicy tales."
>She sounded like she wanted to hear something that made you look bad.
>Bitch
>But honestly, even if you wanted to share the tales, ya had no interesting one
>You could tell them about the time Sugar coat blew you in the bathroom
>Wait, No, that was a dream.
>A good dream
>Might wanna revisit it.
>Later anon, later.
>Come on, Improvise something,.
"Well, there was this one time."
>Everyone leans in for the tale.
"Okay so it was Third Period, right before lunch, Class was about to end when none other than... Blue.. berry came up to me, now him and i weren't exactly the best of friends."
>"A guy named blueberry?"
>"Yeah, anon, I dont remember a guy named blue berry at Crystal, Let alone ANYONE named Blueberry."
>Be quick.
"Well, first off, don't judge, and secondly, he was way to cool to talk to someone like you."
>You fucking didn't
>Why are you so fucking rude?
>Just blow it off anon.
"Anyway, He wanted me dead, for reasons we shall not speak about."
>"What were the reasons?"
>Pinkie is cool
>try hard to be nice
"REASONS WE SHALL NOT SPEAK ABOUT, PINKIE"
>You shout jokingly and dramatically

>>29262389
Hey, up to you what anon has, just know that its not common sense

>>29262395
"Now he was a big dude, like huge, but Anon could easily take him on"
>Rainbowdash has a good chuckle at this.
>Fuck her
"But then suddenly, Two... No, Six dudes come from behind him like those russian dolls except bigger and scarier."
>They start looking way to into it
>You can't keep the charade up
>Need to end this
>Be funny and believable
"Well, to make a long story short, I get my ass beat."
>Hell yeah, no one will doubt it now
>The slight laughter even made you proud.
>"Wait, is that the why you were in the hallways crying?"
>FUCKING TWILIGHT
>WHY WOULD YOU SAY THAT
>Everyone having a fucking giggle now
>Be cool anon, play it off.
"No that was an entirely different story. You see..."
>Fuck think of something they will believe, wont question or make fun of you for.
"My dog... died... he was..."
>Welp, no going back now but atleast this is getting an response that isn't mocking.
"Hit by a car..."
>Hook them anon.
"I-i dont want to talk about it."
>You hide your face behind your bag,
>Could never fake tears but hiding your face is good too.
>"Anon... I..."
>Wait no, you dont want them to pity you
>Quick
>ItsAPrank.exe Started.

>>29262611
"I'm just fucking with you guy, I never had a dog."
>They all stare you
>You start to feel awkward before a loud snort breaks the ice
>"You had me going there for a second anon, I was all like 'oh poor anon'!"
>She can barely speak in between laughing.
>Is she insane?
>"You got me good!"
>She is insane
>Doesn't matter, All that matters is the fact that her laugh defused the awkward situation here.
"Well, that's all i got folks, I'll be here all day."
>Finally, eyes are off of you.
>"I CALL NEXT GAME."
>Quickly Pinkie pounces on the controls followed by rainbowdash.
>You relax into the couch
>everyone turns attention to the TV watching the two girls duke it out on some FCC Friendly Mortal Kombat
>You start thinking to yourself
>Thinking about this day
>You feel a knot in your stomach.
>Why can't you be a decent human being for once
>Especially in a room of girls.
>Okay anon, new plan be calm and collected
>Dont talk unless talked to.
>After about 45 minutes someone finally speaks up
>"So, Rainbow, Dear, Obviously we all didn't just come here to watch you play video games, whats on the agenda?"
>Rainbow pauses for a second, Pinkie now getting the upper hand.
>"I was actually hoping one of you would come up with something, you know, my idea beings too intense for you guys."
"Doubt it, sounds like an excuse to me"
>Please shut up
>"Fine then, You want to take on one of my Extremely Daring challenges?"
>No you dont.
"I've been to a few Rodeos, so, i'm sure this will be a cake walk."
>No, why wont you shut up
>No why is she going upstairs?
>Please god.

Honestly, if anyone sees any mistakes or something that can be worked on, please point it out.

I just realized, I completely forgot Fluttershy existed

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>>29262653
I don't think anyone else remembered either.
Oh, well.
Just write her off, saying it was her turn to offer her 'services' to any of the animals at the local shelter. http://i.imgur.com/7vpbNwD.png

>>29262624
wtf. Does anon actually have Aspergers?

420 bump

>>29262624
I think the only thing I could say is that it's still a bit difficult to tell who is talking at times. You've made MAJOR improvements already though, so keep it up!

>>29262624
I actually can't read this shit it's not the writing just anon is fucked in the head and the only way he'll get any pussy is through rape

>>29262624
>What mess did you just get yourself into.
>You hear foot steps on the stairs.
>She's back.
>Fucking no
>"Well, are you ready to some TRUTH orDARE?"
>Why did you not like the way Rainbow said that
>It's okay
>Talk you're way out of it.
"I thought only children liked playing truth or dare... Guess I was right."
>Thats one way to talk
>"Fine Anon, what do you play at parties? if you even go to any." You're pissing Rainbow off.
>Truth is ya never did
>Crystal Prep wasn't too charmed by you
>All too stuck up
"Too cool for Parties, Never found the appeal."
>Smooth as ice.
>is ice smooth?
>"YOU'VE NEVER BEEN TO A PARTY!" Fucking Pinkies basheen screech catches you off gaurd
>Fucking can one foolproof plan be foolproof.
"uhhhh, no...."
>"TRUTH OR DARE IS A PARTY ESSENCETIAL. YOU CANT HAVE A TRUE PARTY WITHOUT IT." Pinkie yells nearly blasting out your eardrums again
>Sounds more like a lazy writing cop out to get some backstory behind a character easily.
>But whatever,
>you're fucked either way.
>You all surround a bottle RD brought from upstairs
>"So, how do we determine who starts?" Sunset questions before looking at you
>"Why doesn't anon start?!" Pinkie please, I trusted you
"Why me?"
>"It is yer first time." Applejack input, adding a bit of hand motions
>Why even try, you're gonna have to do it eventually.
>But you dont know these girls boundaries
>What if your questions or dare is too pussy
>or too much
>You reach for the bottle and give it a good spin
>Please not Rarity
>Please not Rainbow.
>Please fly away into the abyss.
>Annnnddddd the winner is... Sunset
>"You know, rainbow, maybe this is a childs game."
>Sound's like you aren't the only one trying to wiggle out.

>>29264630
>But like you, sunset is fucked.
"Truth or dare?"
>"Truth"
>Time to use your excellent mind to find the sweet spot.
>"Have you ever.... thought about another girl in a... sexual way?"
>This question is well recieved,
>Goodjob anon, you didn't fuck up this time.
>"Well, I mean Everyone has atleast once, how else would you know you're straight?"
>Goodpoint
>She takes the bottle for a whirl and the next constestant on the price is right is...
>Applejack.
>"Turht or Dare, AJ?"
>Applejack thinks for a second.
>"Truth."
>"What even am I suppose to ask her? I already know a lot about her." Sunset, stop trying, accept death
>"I don't know, just something and make it embarrassing." Rainbowdash is enjoying this too much.
>"Have you ever done anything sexual with your brother?" It basically sounded like she forced it out
>Ha applejack is flustered.
>Ha
>wait
>what
>"WE only kissed, okay?" Applejack doesn't seem too good.
>Everyones silent again, except for rainbowdash who is dying with laughter
>And like dominos pinkie is laughing too.
>You chuckle lightly.
"I think it's your turn, AJ."
>Is she okay with you calling her AJ?
>"I know, sugar."
>Sugar? Was that flirting or just her go to pronoun
>She takes a whirl.
>Twilight.
>"Truth or Dare?" Hopefully AJ was merciful
>"Uhhh... Truth..." Twilight seems nervous.
>Why is everyone chosing truth?
>Bitches.
>"What yer favorite subject?"
>You can't help but squint at her
>Dafuq is this
>Seems Rarity agrees with a head tilt.
>"Well, I do love math and reading but i'd mostly say science and history. Just learning about all the great people behind our generation who helped pathed the path towards success and..."
>"Uhh, no offense but I dont think anyone cares." Rainbowdash is blunt
>But you thank god she did
>"So I just spin the bottle?"
>Fucking noob
>git gud
>MLG SPin the Bottle

>>29264637
>"Yes darling, just spin and wait for it to land on someone." Rarity sounds like she is talking to a child.
>Now obviously everyone was going to ask pussy shit so you zone out.
>Lost in thought you just think about the party
>Mainly its guests
>Rarity is cool and kinda hot but you already burned thats bridge
>Sunset is smart but seems a bit too serious for your liking
>Pinkie was too insane
>Twilight was feasable for a friend to hang out with.
>Rainbowdash was challenging and insulting... You liked that.
>Applejack was too nice.
>"Do you hear me? Darling, Truth or dare?"
>Is she talking to you?
>"Annnnnoooooonnnn?" Rainbowdash begin shaking her hand in your face.
>How long were you out?
"Uhh... dare?" You didn't think about that, you just said it.
>That smirk
>No
>Please god.
>"I dare you to... show us whats in your bag."
>Thats it?
>Thats better than anything you thought she was going to say
>You shrug as you reach over to your bag before pulling out the things you packed.
>You know, ToothBrush, Laptop, Clothes, Condoms, Flask
>Something isn't right.
>"A-anon why did you bring condoms?" Rainbowdash seems a bit disgusted.
>No no no
>You did not put those there.
>But if not you who?
>Rarity.
>Everyone staring at you.
>What do you do?
>What do you say?
>Fuck this is bad.
>You say nothing, you dont know what to say.
>What would you say?
>"Maybe he brought it just incase, you never know what could happen in a party full of girls, he was just being careful." Like a knight in shining armor, Sunset comes to the rescue.
>Situation defused.
>Understanding nods circle the room.
>"Well, thats enough of Truth or dare. Who want something to eat?" Rainbowdash begins her way to the kitchen, most everyone follows with various yeahs.
>You stay.
>Not hungry.
>Kinda sad.
>"Hey anon?"
>Guess sunset stayed too.
>"What's wrong with you?"

>You jump a little, but expected this to come eventually.
"I-i don't know."
>"Okay, that might have sounded not like i meant. I mean, what's wrong? On the way here, Twilight told me so many good things about you, mainly freshmen you."
"I don't know what you mean."
>You try to sit up straight, trying to act like you dont know what she means
>"She says you were extremely nice to her, and more sweet and funny than now. Why are you acting like such a fool?"
"Cuz i can?"
>"Are you nervous? Maybe scared? Anon, I want to help you."
>There's something you never hear at Crystal Prep.
>Help
>The more you think about what Sunset is doing the more calm you feel.
"Sunset... I... should be going to get some food."
>Why are you doing this?
>Don't leave.
>Talk.
"Want anything?"
>Not what i meant.
>She looks at you a bit sad.
>"N-no thank you."

>Be sunset.
>At slumberpaty with the new kid.
>He doesn't seem that social, even borderline mental at points,
>Twilight told you to look past that.
>She's concerned for him, too concerned.
>Just seems... different.
>You notice Rarity picking on him slightly but he doesn't mind.
>But she takes it a bit too far when you see her sneak condoms into his bag while he was out of it.
>You couldn't stand the look in his eyes when everyone was looking down on him
>Not like pure sadness or anger just like
>He was use to it
>It's like, right there is a shell of a broken man.
>When everyone leaves the room you decide its time to strike.

>>29264834
"Anon?"
>He doesn't respond, only looks.
"What's wrong with you?"
>Wait
>Fuck not what you meant.
>He's shocked, flabberghasted even.
>"I-i don't know."
>Just then, the look in his eyes.
>He was serious
"Okay, that might have sounded not like i meant. I mean, what's wrong? On the way here, Twilight told me so many good things about you, mainly freshmen you."
>"Cuz i can?"
>You know he's lying
>Try to get him to talk
"Are you nervous? Maybe scared? Anon, I want to help you."
>That catches him off gaurd.
>But he's relaxing a bit more.
>By god You think you did it.
>"Sunset..."
>Yes, spill it.
"I..."
>Open up.
"Should be going to get food."
>Oh...
>You were so close.
>You can't help but feel sad a bit. Why is he trying to hide it?
>Wait he stopped, maybe.
>"Want anything?"
"N-no thank you."
>And he's gone.

>Be anon
>Freshmen anon,
>You walk up and down the halls too nervous to go to class.
>Shaking even
>what did you do?
>Was this just crystal preps curse?
>In middleschool everyone loved you, you were apparently like a super god of comedy to them
>But now
>no one finds you comedy to be funny nor do they find you amusing anymore
>And if that wasn't bad enough, every single one of your friends turned on you, playing jokes on you to make them more accepted by the seniors
>posers.
>But no matter what you called them, it never changed the fact the you were alone.
>All you can do is just sit against the wall and bury your face in your bag.
>and cry
>You try to keep it silent but you can't.
>What did you do?
>What god did you fuck with?
>"A-anon? is that you?"
>Fuck fuck
>Quick clean it up.
"H-hey twilight."
>You try to look nonchalantly at her.
>"Are you okay?"
"Fine fine, whats up?"

>>29264650
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>>29264849
>"Were you crying?"
"No n-no."
>You get up and grab your stuff.
>"Anon..."
"I have to go."
>You storm into the bathroom
>Not like a tornado but more a raincloud.

>Be present day anon.
>Drinking from the flask you snagged from your bag.
>Stairs seem cozy.
>You hear the pitter patter of feet coming from the kitchen.
>Be cool.
>You hide the flask in your pocket and stand up.
>"What are you doing, anon?"Rainbowdash looks at you like you were trying to steal something.
"uhh...Looking for the bathroom."
>Nice call.
>"Upstairs, second door on the right."
"Thanks."
>You make your way upstairs and wait a minute or two before heading back down
>You sit back in your spot from before
>"So anon, now that you're back, why dont you tell us about yourself?" Sunset asks trying to include you.
>"Ya anon, dont think we learned anything new bout ya?" Applejack smiles lightly at you
>"And your stories are quite the tale to hear." Rarity adds.
>You feel a bit happier
>but then immediately realize whats going on
>Sunset told them the equivalent of 'Play nice'
>You never liked being pitied.
>but then again
>Whats the worst right?
>Sunset was able to make everyone give you a second chance.
>Dont waste it
>and most of all
>Play nice.
"Well, nothing really to tell, Crystal prep was in a way its own adventure but in the end, i think middleschool was the best."
>They seem interested,
"Nothing really stood out but there were times that i could never forget."
>"Go on, tell us!" Rainbowdash almost commands.
"well, this was way back, but one day"
>You continue your story telling all who want to listen
>Smiles and laughs were delivered all around.
>You felt happy for a change,
>Happy that someone gave you a chance to make things right.
>and for once you didn't fuck it up.
>After story time ended, you felt like you made some friends.
"So, now that thats over, what now?"
>Rarity immediately ran over to her bag and begin rummaging through it.
>What does she have

>>29266325
To any merciful Gods listening, give anon a break from rarity's unyielding and unforgiving wrath. Please

>>29266325
>more condoms i hope.
>Shut up
>Then you see it
>No
>A make-up kit.
>The day has come Anon, for you must have to watch a make-over
>"Rarity, I am not letting you put make up on me again." Rainbow sounds threatening
>"Come on, Dash, it'll be fun." Pinkie pie tries to plead.
>"No, I'm not into all this Girl Fru-fru crap."
"It's okay guys, Rainbowdash is just scared."
>Rainbowdash snorts loudly before laughing some.
>"Scared? scared of what, getting a fake eyelash is my eye?" She seems to be having too much fun with this
"Well, you tell me, I've never been scared of a make over."
>Why did you say that?
>"Fine then, why dont you get one." She's challenging you
>Don't be a bitch,
"Fine."
>You make yourself firm into the couch as Rarity smiles at you
>"Let's start with the eyebrows." She says getting into position.
>Heh, how bad could this be?
>Apparently very.
>The first pull hurts, like a lot.
>You wince a bit.
>"Hold still." Rarity commands as Rainbow keeps laughing.
>You didn't have bushy eyebrows but you also didn't mantain them.
>Rarity sighs
>"I need better positioning."
>You feel her slowly moving to straddle you lap.
>"Now don't get any idea's darling, this is only for the eyebrows."
>It seemed like she was try hard to not touch your lap at all
>But just the thought of her like this was getting your gears in motion.
>Better winces of pain as eyebrow after eyebrow was grooms
>you open your eyes only to see the deep cleavage cravinces polluting your view.
>Boner no.
>Yet the boner train left the station.
>Hopefully everyone is too focused on your pain and not your junk
>"Annnnddd done!" She says pulling out one more hair.
>Finally, the pain is over.
>Rarity sits down on your lap
>But far down
>basically on your knees
>she reaches for the make up kit
>You can't believe you're doing this.
>Slowly but surely you feel layer after being finished until finally its done,
>"Mwaah" She does that weird chef thing with the hand.

>>29266460
I think you're the only one somewhat enjoying this story, thanks for being a reader.

>>29266932
Not the same nonny, but i enjoy also!

>>29266932
Not the same anon but I'm loving this, keep going

>>29266932
I don't post very often but I'm also enjoying

>>29266932
This is nice , keep going bro

>>29266932
Always account for at least 2 lurkers that just don't post for any number of reasons

>>29266932
I love your story, I'm scared for anon because he reminds me of myself hope you keep posting

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>>29266932
Keep writing, faggot.

>>29266919
I now find myself hoping that there are actually two people/personalities in anon and his inner monolog is the "good" anon trying to convince the "bad" anon to behave.

>>29266919
>"How does it look, girls?" She checks with the group before moving beside you
>Well, the laughter is always a good sign.
>Hopefully no dicks.
>Speaking of dicks
>You look down.
>lucky for you, the hoodie you put on was convering it.
>Sigh of relief
>You kinda feel pretty though
>are you gay?
>Maybe.
>Atleast it's over
>Or you thought before your somewhat long hair is pulled back.
>No, please no.
>A brush begins its assault
>Unlike your eyebrows, you did take pride in your hair.
>Washed it every over day
>Kept it brushed
>You didn't mind the brushing as much as the make up or Plucking
>kinda soothing.
>well until she hits a knot.
"Fuck dude, careful." You wince in pain.
>"Oh sorry dear, I'll try to be more care."
>Rainbow was getting a nice laugh, but it was you who would get the last laugh
"Oh Rainbow, I think someone else needs a makeover too."
>"I can't take you seriously in all that!" She wont stop laughing.
>Now you're a little embarrassed but most feeling pretty.
"So, butch can dish it out but can't take? Anon wins this trail!"
>"Anon, stop moving, this is a huge knot." Rarity pleads.
>"Yeah anon, stop moving." Rainbowdash mocks.
>You're gonna beat this bitch in something.
>You feel a hard tug before rarity sighs.
>"Got it."
>Rarity leaves your pressence and moves to dash.
>few pleas and screams before dash is pinned by rarity
>Wait for it
>ha
>ha
>The last laugh was delivered.

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>>29268109
>While the borderline rape happens in front of you, a new challenger enters the couch.
>"Anon?"
"Hmm?"
>You turn to get a glimpse
>It's Sunset.
"enjoying the show?"
>"Very, who would guess rarity would be to overpower Rainbow like that?" She laughs lightly,
"I don't think she did"
>Sunset turns to you, cocking her head
"I think Rainbow just doesn't want to admit she wants it."
>"STTTOOOPPP"
>"HOLD STILL"
>"You sure about that?" Sunset smirks at you
>Shrug.
>Finally you see the Blue and white mess on the floor settle.
>Rainbow looks completely different
>"Gotta hand it to ya rare, Cant even tell thats dash." Applejack leans in for a better view.
>You have to admit, she does look a lot better now
>even kinda cute
>no
>stop
>"OOO Do me now!" Pinkie begins to shout
>IN due time pinkie
>Wait
>you think she was talking to rarity.
>No worries
>Every other girl was very calm and collected, letting rarity do whatever she wanted to their face
>Man, only if you had the same privilege
>stop
>You don't know if these girls are legal.
>If they're 12 you're 12
>They aren't 12
>you're still 12
>Being 12 is cool
>Finally an excuse to watch spongebob again.
>You're not 12.
>But you still watch spongebob anyways.
>YOu need to go get diagnosed
>"Oh my gosh, you all look so pretty now!" Rarity almost squees.
>Bitch, Im always pretty.
>everyone looks at each other slightly agreeing.
>To rarity
>not to you
>Rarity yawns.
>That means one thing.
>"I'm so sorry girls, but i think i might need to head of to bed, need my beauty sleep."
"Sure you didn't already have it?"
>Woah, where did that come from
>Creepy
>Wait.
>she's smiling.
>Smoothe.

>>29266932
Another anon here, Im enjoying the story, keep it up

>>29269286
Don't stop writing bro

>>29269286
>"Now that you mention it, I need to recharge too." Rainbowdash stretches.
>You know, you could also go for a rest.
>You barely sleep.
>"Awww, are you guy serious? The party is only getting started!" Pinkie doesn't seem tired.
>"Sorry pinkie, but people normal people need sleep."
>You lightly laugh at sunset's comment.
>Pinkies beady eyes plead to everyone.
>"Without an average of 8 hours of sleep, a human body..."
"I'll do it." You only say this so you don't have to listen to Vsauce Twilight
>Pinkie seems to perk up a lot.
>Applejack says nothing as she walks by
>Just a farewell pat on the shoulder.
>Couldn't be so bad right?

>its been an hour...
>You're upside down on the couch
>You want sleeep
>Please sleep pinkie
>"Aaaaannnnnnnoooooooooonnnnnnnn?" Her face just appears right in front of you
>What the hell is this girl.
>She is upside down too but
>What is she hanging on?
>Is this sleep hallucinations
>Better yet
>Is this hell?
"Yes pinkie?"
>"Are you okay?"
>no
"Fine"
>"You look very tired."
>You are
"Not at all."
>"GOOD BECAUSE I BROUGHT TWISTER!"
>You hope condoms weren't the only rarity snuck in your bag.
>Before you knew it, its all set out
>"LEFT FOOT RED!" You feel a headache coming on.
>If only you could drink in front of her,
>Well you could but, you dont want to end up with 6 girlfriends
>Foot down
>"LEFT FOOT RED!"
>Waht?
>Her foot lands next to yours.
>"LOOKS LIKE IT'S LEFT FOOT RED!"
>Okay somethings not right.
>"LEFT FOOT!"
"PINKIE!"
>She pauses, staring at you.
"who is spinning the wheel?"
>The question is met with a very confused look
>"Gummy is, silly!"

>>29269568
>Why is a stuffed Crocodile manning the wheel
>Is it still manning?
>or Crocodiling?
>Focus anon.
>Stuffed animal wheel.
>WHY IS A STUFFED CROCODILE CROCODILING THE WHEEL
>He's an alligator :)
>WHO WAS THAT
>okay, You need sleep
"Pinkie, i don't think he can spin the wheel."
>"Im not stupid, anon."
>Shocker.
>"I know he can't spin the wheel, thats why we're pretending!"
>Anon calm it
>anon no.
>You can't get away with murder.
"Pinkie, do you mind?"
>You notion towards the kitchen.
>You need a drink
>"Well, who am i gonna play twister with while you're gone?" She starts to look sad
>Quick.
"Gummy would love to play."
>"He can't play, anon, he's a stuffed animal."
>Anon, please.
"I have to go to the bathroom."
>You walk out without asking permission this time.
>Okay Rainbow.
>wheres the alcohol?
>Nope
>Nope
>Nota.
>Face the truth
>you're up shit creek without a paddle
>Welp time to say your goodbyes.
>You slowly walk into the living room.
"Hey pinks?"
>Holy fuck
>Is that?
>Is she?
>She's asleep.
>Your body fills with relief.
>Til you realize she is on the couch.
>Where you planned to sleep.
>Welp, either move her or find somewhere else to sleep
>Ya know,
>Floor looks comfy.

>>29269621
>Eh, maybe she'll get up eventually.
>Fuck you and your inability to touch women without permission
>You head to the porch outside.
>Wasn't the comfiest of places but luckily you were sleeping on it.
>You just sit down on ground and just look out
>Heh, you know
>Today didn't go that good
>But it wasn't a fail too
>WAIT.
>You had your flask
>Fuck yeah
>Pull it out nigger
>Time to get turnt
>Actually
>maybe later.
>You didn't feel in the drinking mood anymore,
>"Anon?" Someone asks from inside.
>down the hatch.
>"Are you out here?" You you think is sunset opens the door.
"Yeah."
>hey, you were right.
>"What are you doing out here?"
"Geico could save you 15% or more on car insurrance?"
>She laughs lightly at that before sitting next to you
>Commercials never lie.
>"Seriously, anon, why aren't you asleep?"
"Why aren't you?"
>"had to check to make sure you were okay first, today has been rough on you."
>Whats her agenda?
>Maybe she just cares about you
>You laugh at you.
>Shut up.
"Can say that twice."
>You think for a second.
"Actually, dont."
>She laughs again.
>"Don't worry, I didn't plan to."
>Stars are pretty tonight.
>Stars are gay
>Can i assume star's genders?
>"Hey anon?"
"Yeah?"
>"You really came around tonight, you seem a lot different."
>Dafuq does that mean?
>You know what that means.
"I know."
>You sit in silence a bit before turning to her.
"Thanks ya know."
>She turns to you too, almost confused.
"I know you told them to be nice to me."
>"You looked like you really needed a friend, Wasn't gonna leave you hanging."
>You give a little half smile.
>"You know, whenever you're not being rude to people, you're really fun to be around."
>OKay, Crystal prep wasn't famous for compliments so you're not use to this.
>just be cool
>dont get flustered.
"You too."
>You know, you were doing so good.
>Wait no,
>another laugh?
>Oooohhhh she thinks that was a joke
>but when she stops laughing
>she just stares into your eyes,
>blushing
>smiling

Is burnout kill?

>>29269568
>you don't want to end up with six girlfriends.

Heh. Hehehe. AHHHHH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAGLARBLE

>>29269774
probs

>>29269774
or maybe he's just burntout

>>29216278
Lewd sleep 101

>>29269810
Kek

>>29271979
Weird...

>>29271979
Nice.

>>29269720
Tell me anon is gonna use his terrible jokes to get back at Rarity. Something along the lines of mentioning it to the girls that she must be really interested in him, to smuggle so many condoms into his bag.

>>29273571
This, Sunny knows Rarity tried to fuck up anon with that bullshit. Not to mention he has had a shitty trasnstion from comedy God to punching bag

>Check'ed

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>>29273450
>>29272466
PT. 2

>>29269720
>>29269720
>Are you suppose to kiss her now
>You give another half smile
>Do it fagget
>She looks away slightly
>Kiss the girl
>back at you now
>Hell yeah fucker
>Her eyes are closing
>yes
>yes
>You lean in
>She follows

>Is this heaven?
>Soft, sweet heaven.
>it's like, kissing an angel.
>well, you are.
>"anon..."
>You just smile back at her as you end the kiss
"Yeah?"
>"Do you...wanna take this inside?"
>is she suggesting what you think she is?
>Holy fuck anon
>Anon the pussy destroyer at your service.
"Uh, yeah?"
>You give that sexy half smile
>Pussy integrity: 0%
>Flooding imminent
>She's getting up anon,
>time to follow.
>She leads you inside
>Is this real?
>Or is it just fantasy?
>You never realized how big Rainbowdash's house was
>It felt like you were walking for hours until she finally pushed you into a room
>She's being a little bit rough

>>29275688
>You sit on the bed
>Very soft, but hard too
>You're not a huge fan of spring mattresses, more of a foam guy
>Why the fuck are you thinking about mattresses at this time?
>Her hands begin a trek across your chest as she straddles you.
>Anon, just don't have a heartattack
>She forces you back, making you lay down as she presses her lips against you again
>Anon, you've struck a gold mine
>You feel your breathing pattern change
>your hearts racing
>Is that a bananna in your pants or are you just happy to see her, anon?
>You begin hoping its not a banana, that'd be weird.
>Do you have ADD?
>No i have Subtraction
>Heh
>Wait
>where are your pant?
>Better question, wheres sun-ooooooo
>you think you found her.
>you feel the wetness of her tongue massage your shaft
>You grip the sheets, getting a full handful
>What's that noise?
"Sunset~"
>Are you moaning?
>ew, Stop that.
>The mouth work being used on your cock was that of a professional,
>you cant help but stare into her eyes as the length on your dick was used to plug her throat
>This is very nice.
>Her padded lip ramming hard against your pelvis
>Is this girl like a pro hotdog eater
>She lightly closes her mouth at the base, her teeth rubbing up and down your swollen shaft
>Your back arches as you try to force more of yourself into her mouth
>Why are you so sensitive?
>She locks eye with you, tears beginning to well as she keep her lips wrapped around the base
>Is she humming
>Fucking vocalist, you swear.
>The bobbing then continues after you give a massive moan of pleasure.
>Random muscles begin to move as you cant barely stand the assualt on the sensetive head.
>you swear you gonna bite off your lip if she continues this.
>She pulls off for a second panting.
>her hand still going at the speed of light
>"H-how is i-it?"
>You can't answer in fear of a voice crack
>she smiles at you.
>"Your face tells it all~"
>You smile back as you lean forward
>moving the hair from her face

>>29275920
>She takes advantage of your kindness and places a spit and precum cover kiss on your lip
>What the fuck Richard?!
>You kinda liked it a little
>She heads back down to continue the reverse wack-a-mole game
>You two keep eye contact as your cock violates every party of her throat
>You know, she looks a lot cuter with a massive dick in her mouth.
>Finally something you can agree on.
>Her free hands rubs your hip lightly
>You begin panting,
>what's this feeling?
"Sunset... I think i might...~"
>Already?
>bitch.
>Instead of slowly down like you expect she goes harder.
>Her hand now a basket for your two boys, massaging delicately
>Sir, the dam is coming lose what do we do?
>Evacuate the town, warn the Governer.
>Why don't time for a full evacuation
>THEN MAKE THE TIME DAMMIT!
>You sit up, tensing up
>fireworks begin launching
>the dam cracking
>The champaign cork about to launch
>another metaphor for cumming
>Wait
>Whats this?
>you don't feel her mouth anymore.
>You can't really feel anything down there
>Where did she go?
>"Anon?"
>You jump up quickly.
"TWILIGHT!"
>Oh fuck me
>"Wha-what are you doing?"

Sorry if this set seems shittier than last, kinda sad right now but didn't want to miss today posts.

>>29275973
Well damn. You had me going. WHAT'S NEXT? WHAT'S REAL?

>>29266932
Nah I fucking hate this autism anon but I love the story keeeep gooooing

>>29275973
Is it actually twilight?
Is anon going to cum?
Is fluttershy alive in this story?
Find out next time on DRAGON BALLS ON TWILIGHT!!

>>29275973
>Be twilight
>Currently about 1 A.M.
>You can't sleep
>too busy thinking about anon.
>this was the first time in a long time he actually talked to you
>Last time you remember was in the hall during freshmen year
>You knew what Crystal Prep was like but you didn't think anon would succumb to it
>Always thought he was strong minded.
>But then again, Anon was a very social creature,
>always needing atleast someone to be on his side
>and only science knows what loneliness would do to someone like that.
>You can't help but think about Past Anon.
>always smiling,
>Kinda condescending
>always Sarcastic
>Now
>he's just mean
>and awkward.
>one of the rarest sight was Anon crying.
>You've only seen it once.
>He experienced family death before
>but No tears
>Failure.
>no tears.
>even hardcore rejection from girls
>Anon wasn't a someone who cries.
>He always though crying was a waste of time
>Time that could be used to fix the problem
>Thats why when you saw him crying that day,
>You knew something was wrong.
>something broken your anon.
>something he thought he couldn't fix
>And the anon you got in return
>Atleast he's trying.
>You know
>Maybe you should see if he's up
>Maybe go talk to him.
>You slowly get up and try to sneak out of the room,
>weird, you thought sunset was sleeping next to you
>maybe she went to the bathroom.
>you head downstairs.
>Nope, no anon.
>Outside?
>no
>Thats when you hear something
>something weird
>But it sounds kinda masculine
>Anon.
>You head up,
>too dark
>too many doors
>It takes you a while to find the door the noise is coming from.
>You knock once
>No response.
>You slowly open the door and walk in.
"anon?"
>"TWILIGHT!?"
>You really didn't mean to scare him,
>anyway, what was he doing up here?
>thats when you notice it.
"Wha-what are you doing?"
>anon's penis was right out in the open
>And very
>very erect.

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>>29276596
I like you're story but anon is making me cringe like a motherfucker. I'm guessing that's the goal though, to show what he has become and how he will transition out of it.

>>29276653
>you're story
>you are story
Fuck me

>>29276670
later

>>29276596
>Be anon again
>Current situation: Fucked.
>Sunset disappeared
>Twilight walked in on you post-Blowjob
>And you're outta options
"Uhhh.... I honestly, have no excuse."
>she just stares at you.
>"I-i have to be dreaming..."
>She said that like it was not a good thing.
"Trust me, you aren't."
>"Anon, what were you planning to do?"
"There's no point in lying."
>You can't really say you were being blown
>You need an excuse,
>Come on anon, i know you can do it
>Be the master of vaginas and time like you were meant to be
"Twilight, I know this a bit weird to say but."
>Okay, anon, doing good,
>Take it slow.
>baby steps
"you know, how rarity was on my lap and well, you know me."
>"Were you going to masturbate?"
>She seems a bit uncomfortable
"Yes."
>"so you came up here so no one would walk in on it?"
"Yeah but, the way this day was going, i should have expected someone would anyway."
>You sit back down with a little laugh.
>She seems more comfortable but trying hard to avoid looking at your soldier.
>She sits next to you though.
>"Anon, i know this isn't really the time but... why were you crying that day?"
>She was right,
>it wasn't the time.
>By know you realized that sunset probably heard Twilight and hid under the bed.
"Thank you, Twilight for the concern, but i really don't like talking about it."
>She just looks at you, kinda sad
>but more pleading for you to talk to her.
>"Please, anon..."
>You are going to have some painful blueballs in the morning
"Fine, but tell anyone, and I will legit never talk to you again."
>She nods lightly.
>So you tell her everything that was going on, even knowing sunset could hear you
>Twilight looked very interested in finally knowing what happened.
>"I'm sorry i left you anon."
>She seems very guiltridden
"You didn't do anything wrong, don't worry... kid."
>Fuckin hit her with the edge
>"You know, i kinda always looked up to you in middle school"
>Please dont
>you know whats coming
>Please save it til i have pants

>>29276768
I just noticed, several times I put "I" instead of "you", thats not an easter egg, its shitty 12:48 am typos

but if you still want the headcannon that anon has multiple personalities in him, ignore this message

>>29261965
I like how fucked up this anon is. Keep it up!

page 9 bump, don't die on me goddamnit!

Morning bump

>>29276768
Loving the green, also bump

>>29277741

Bump for incoming story. Prepare thy selves /ls/

>>29276802
doing great, Im liking the story. keep it up

bamp

Bumping for potential pony plot

>>29282403
what this anon said

10

>>29279812
I'll start writing at least a few posts after a quick seven and a half hour nap. Bye

>>29284223

>>29276768
>"You know... I always kinda..."
>Okay you need to do something to shut her up
>No pants=No confession
>You quickly lean forward
>kissing her as passionately as you can.
>Why do you let impulses take over?
>'you know whats a good idea, kiss the girl to stop her from confessing'
>That's you
>idiot.
>It's fine, we can just pull out and explain it
>You feel a tight grip surround your length
>Never mind, its too late
>She begins pumping slowly
>You bite your lip
>Just relax anon
>"A-am i doing it right?"
>This makes you laugh lightly,
"Yes, yes you are."
>You close your eyes, relaxing into her hand
>Twilight leans against your shoulder, just watching her hand go to work
>but, Anon, are ya sure this is what you want?
>Like This just feels wrong
>Sunset was full of lust,
>ya know, a one time thing
>but twilight
>Fuck, feel the way she's playing with your cock
>So delicate and passionate.
>That type of handjob can only mean one thing
>She will probably want a meaningful relationship after this
>...
>fuck that.

>>29285336
"Twilight..."
>she doesn't respond
>She keeps moving, picking up speed a little.
"Twilight..."
>She seems a lot too into it
>Regretibly, you grab her wrist, stopping the motion.
>She seems a bit shocked.
>"W-was I doing something wrong?"
>Come on Anon, be strong
"No, it's just"
>She seems a bit sad.
"I should be going."
>Where the fuck are you gonna go though?
>You get up and head for the door.
>As you reach for the door knob you just hear her yell.
>"Anon wait!"
>No anon,
>dont look back.
>you head into the hall.

>Be Twilight
>Anon forgot his pants

>Be anon again,
>You forgot your pants
>But now a problem arises.
>Awkwardly walk back into the bedroom or don't
>...
>you packed spares.
>You head for the stairs
>Hella dark though.
>hope ya don't fall that the stairs and this all turns out to be a dream because you passed out playing with pinkie.
>Wait,
>If you get erect in your dreams
>are you erect for real?
>Oh shit
>you need to get out of here before pinkie notices.
>shut up, you're not dreaming
>you hope.
---------------------------------------------------
>You're downstairs now
>time to find those pants.
>As you turn the corner to the living room
>you realize that this isn't gonna be as easy as you thought it would
>Not only is pinkie no longer on the couch.
>but rarity is.
>Dafuq she doing up?
>Dont mind plot holes,
>Only mind the plot hole on the couch.
>Actually, today's been fucked.
>Tonight's been fucked.
>Plus who's gonna believe Rarity that you were naked last night?
>Probably everyone but fuck it
"Sup rarity."
>you walk right by her, nonchalantly as your dick sways in the wind.
>She seems a bit too shocked to respond.
>you kneel down and grab your pants from where you dumped them during truth or dare.
>You turn to Rarity.
"You just gonna stare?"

>>29285353
>"W-why on earth are you... Naked?"
"Sunset was sucking my dick."
>Again, too shocked to respond.
>Boxers, where are your boxers?
"So what you doing up?"
>Is she legit just staring at your dick?
"Yo, you alive?"
>"I-it's just..."
"First time seeing a dick?"
>"We-well, I don't really think thats any of your business."
"Okay."
>You slowly put on your pants
>going commando.
>You sit on the couch.
"So, what are you doing up?"
>"I-i just want to come down and apologize for my actions earlier... but i saw you were gone so i decided to wait for your return."
>Apology accepted
>however you're not going to let her know that.
"You know, what ya did was fucked, bro."
>stop talking like that.
>"It was certainly not the right course of actions to take, but after how you treated me in the kitchen, I was kinda... upset."
>Yeah you can understand that
>wait
>after the kitchen incident?
>Meaning she didn't plan it
>meaning she had no reason to meditate it
"Wait wait wait, If you only thought of that plan AFTER what happened in the kitchen, why did you bring condoms?"
>this catches her off guard.
>"w-well, you'd understand that a woman like me has to be prepared for anything, even if it seems highly unlikely."
"You prepared for us to have sex?"
>"I guess, you could take it in that way."
>ha
>ha
>Anon the pussy destroyer.
"Do you want to?"
>What are you doing?
>"Want to what, dear?"
>Anon dont
"Have sex."
>You can't believe you just did that.
>there is no way
>Wait
>she's debating it in her head.
>What the fuck,
>are you just a pussy whisperer and you didn't even know it.
>legit, you've been an awkward creepy mess this entire time
>what is going on here?
>"I can't believe im agreeing to this but... yes... Only if you keep this between us."
"Deal."

>>29285396
>Anon, you do know that there's potentially 3 other people not asleep,
>someone could walk in any second
>Holy shit, her tits are huge.
>...
>This is the only time anon.
>She begins removing her clothes hesitantly
>garment after garment is cast aside until the full beauty of rarity is infront of you.
>every bit of her body,
>well mantained and groomed to the point where she actually does look like a goddess.
>"A-anon... are you going to get undress too, I feel a bit awkward."
>she fucking deserves to after what she did
>but you nod and slowly follow suit until both of you are naked on rainbows couch.
>You're shaking alittle, anticipating the ride of a life-time.
>She slowly grabs the box of condoms you carelessly left on the floor and opens it
>taking one of the small lubricated bags out of the wrapping
>small?
>bitch
>you're atleast an extra medium

>>29285396
Oh Anon... You poor, beautiful bastard

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>>29285437

>focus anon you dont-
>extra medium?
>You hate you.
>She lightly takes hold of her lip with her teeth, biting it but in a fancy way so you look more sophiscated typing this.
>Her hand slides down the shaft of your cock, forcing the condom on.
>Forcing
>its a bit small
>damn straight it is.
>As it finally reachs the base, she removes her hand
>You turn your body so your back is against the arm of the couch.
>She works her way onto your hips, hovering right over your man spear.
>Is this really happening?
>you're seriously losing your virginity to a girl who fucking #Pranked you
>Put you in the most awkward situation ever
>She descends slowly, as it to keep tension.
>Though, looking back now, it was kinda a good joke to pull
>Now ofcourse if you pulled the prank, you'd most likely come out immediately but lets look past that.
>You feel the tip of your cock being caressed by her lips
>almost fully in anon,
>last chance.
>you look at Rarity's face,
>she's staring at you, kinda blushing.
>You give a little half smile,
>The more you stare, the cuter she gets.
>it begins
>inch by inch, you feel the tight hole slowly swallow your gerth
>Holy fuck
>She moans lightly before leaning against your chest
>Her hips gyrat against yours,
>you can feel her heart pounding as she presses harder on your torso,
>lol You have tits on you
>never thought this would ever happen.
>You just had two handjobs, a blowjob and now vaginal sex, and tits being on you is still in your list of unlikely things?
>"A-anon.~"
>Is she moaning your name?
>you place your hand on your hips, helping her move a bit faster.
>She pants against your neck, burying her face deep in it
>Man, she's really going at it.
>she begins bouncing up and down with force of a retard on an exercise ball
>Hell ye
>You can't help but moan back, the tightness of her pussy is that of a blowjob from a garden snake.
>A baby Garden Snake

>>29286882

>>29287792

>>29286190
This story has had me laughing my sides off at some points and reflecting on my own life at others. But, just my opinion mind everyone, not sure if random references to BurnoutAnon's story is humor, a kind of 4th wall breaking thing for Anons personality, or insulting. Any way the story would be much more enjoyable without them especially if they are insults since BurnoutAnon brought us a great story and even after he finished he came back to gives us some aftermath. Again, just my opinion. Also, tonight I literally just came and read green, so if this has already been addressed ignore my mention of it

>>29289840
Sorry, brother, but I really only made one reference to burnout, that being the six girlfriend joke. But rereading I can see where you can get some of the parallels but the Truth or Dare joke was meant as a joke to how i was going to use it but decided not to, kinda like ">She lightly takes hold of her lip with her teeth, biting it but in a fancy way so you look more sophiscated typing this." It's more of a meta to the narrator insulting himself.

If there are anymore i dont notice, please tell me so i can try to clear it up.

>>29286190
>Her hand combs through your hair before grabbing the back of your head.
>You can't help but begin to thrust up, causing Rarity's moans to become louder.
>Ya really should be careful, anyone can hear you two.
>Using your hand, you begin forcing her against every one of your thrust, bring yourself closer to orgasm with every hit.
>From the way her body is beginning to react, you feel the same is for her.
>She lightly bites on your shoulder, trying to keep herself from moaning any louder.
>The bite doesn't hurt at all really so you don't mind
>You can't help but to start to succumb to your feelings.
"Rarity! I'm about to-"
>You tense up,
>After this long quest, anon
>you think you might finally cum
>"I-... I-"
>You feel rarity begin to spasm lightly on top of you,
>She tightens with the grip of a vice causing you to let your stockpile finally release inside her
>well, mainly inside the condom but, who cares?
>you both pant lightly together, the afterglow filling you both.
"Same time next week?"
>You give a winded smile
>seriously, time for jokes?
>"Maybe"
>she smiles back before snuggling against your chest.
>"Maybe, anon."
>Your energy drains as your eye begin to close.
>Guess you're finally crashing, anon.
>atleast this time,
>ya aren't burning
>But maybe you guys should put on clothes before you go to sleep
>Anon?
>You awake?
>Welp, see ya in the morning
>Or well you thought you would.
>You open your eyes slowly, still feeling horribly tired.
"R-rarity?"
>"No silly, it's pinkie!"
>What
>wait what
>your eyes dart open.
>you're upside down
>laying on the couch
>Pinkies face right in front of yours.
"Pink-pinkie what time is it?"
>"Anon, have you been drinking?"
>She seems teasing about this.
"No, seriously, what time is it?"
>"Aboooouuuuttttt Twelve thirty."
"Pm?"
>"No, AM, and it's a good thing you're awake because I brought TWISTER!"
>It was... all a dream
>Your heart sinks.

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>>29290973
>It was... all a dream

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>>29290973
>It was was all a dream
I fucking KNEW IT! I wish I didn't but fuck, the ultimate wet-dream and a light amount of blue balling. You did good son

>>29291496
Kek

>>29285353
Niceeeeee.

>>29255899
Burnout where are you
Don't get me wrong this green is good too but I still wanna know what happened with big mac

>>29293233
Sorry been busy with finally returning to work and getting my new PC set up

>>29294951
aye

>>29290973
I saw this coming. I think everybody did. That's not the problem, though. The gap between falling asleep and sex was very short and the sex was out of left field. Well, that's why it was predictable I guess, but it also makes the whole sequence seem to only exist for fan service, which I like, being a fan and all. But seriously, it's a little bit dumb. you could do something cool, though, like have the same situations arise only slightly altered and have Anon remember the dream.

>>29295634
The next set of posts were going to do that but of course have anon fail at doing so,

Also, i did the dream thing because
of
>>29276025
>>29276381
and how they suggested that things weren't real.

And sunset disappearing, (even though i did write that she probably hid under the bed)

As well, like you said, the sex came too easy for anon, That was another reason, after everything that happened with anon and rarity, it shouldn't have been such a walk in the park.

So yes, it was predictable because i used it as a cop out to fix the previous problems i had with the story.

Anything worth reading in this general?
Anyone got story summaries?

>>29295828
Burnout and Deathgripped's green are good and they're in the OP and ZeroPeriods' working on his now

Are you looking for a particular waifu of choice?

>>29295861
Thanks anon, I'll check then out.
As for waifu, that's Twi, but I'm more interested for decent story/writing at the moment.

>page 10 save
Don't die on me now thread. Imma bout to drop a new green.
It features the Dazzlings.

>>29296892
awwww yiss

>>29296892
bump...

Bumping for the save

>>29255899
>"What exactly did you mean by refer'n to Applejack as just 'My Sister' " Big mac asked looking perturbed
"Honestly not a thing" You say realizing just now that this might have been a very bad idea, but fuck it you were stuck with it now "In fact dating Applejack seems like a really sweet deal on paper, well except for this" You point between the two of you "Situation"
>Big Mac looked like he was going to say something when a voice shouted from down the hall
>"What in the sam hell are you two doing back here"
>You whip your head around and see Applejack and Trixie walking your way
>Well Trixie was walking, Applejack was kind of marching as she glared at Big Mac
"H-hey guys, what are you doing here?" You ask
>"Well everyone in school is talking about how Big Mac dragged you off to murder you" Trixie said looking annoyed, or at least she was trying to look annoyed to hide how worried she was
>That was so sweet
>Applejack looked like she was about to blow her top though
>Big Mac actually looked a bit scared
>He probably hadn't told her he was planning on doing this
>That's when you get another idea
>But you have to act fast
"What? They thought we were..." You look between you and Big Mac before turning back to the girls and laughing "Oh now that's funny, isn't that funny Big Mac?"
>"Huh" Big Mac says looking a little confused
>"Anon, what you going on about?" AJ asked putting her anger on hold
"C'mon you guys didn't really think Big Mac here was gonna beat me up did you? We're friends, teammates even. Isn't that right big guy?" You say sliding next to Big Mac and putting a hand on his shoulder
>Big Mac looks at you confused and a bit annoyed
>You do your best to sign to him with your eyes to go along with it until finally he agrees with an "E'yup"
>Trixie and AJ don't look convinced
>Then what may I ask are you two doing all the way out here where nobody can find y'all?"
>Now that was a good question
>And you had to think up an answer
>Fuck adlib-ing is hard

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>>29299397
HE'S BACK!!!

>>29300401
Page 10 is bad for this threads health

>>29301356

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I'll give a short prologue/stage set if you will for my greentext with the Dazzlings later tonight after I get done with my homework.

Fucking Embedded systems, man.

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Octave come back...i need more Chrissy...badly

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>>29301971
I'm back. Gave up on my homework. Here's the premise of my story.

>be high school juniorfag anon at CHS.
>dating sonata for half year.
>get invited to sleepover at the dazzlings' house.
>hilarity and lewdness ensues.

Sorry about the picture. I don't have alot of dazzling art on my computer. If you guys have any good pics, post please. Especially Sonata art.

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>>29303269
pls to stay faithful to best dazzl

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>>29303269
You know, having them as a tiny fishpones instead of nohooves abominations suddenly makes them much more appealing

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>>29303879
I agree completely

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>>29304315
This pic made me think of the Vactory toy

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>>29303472
Don't worry, I will.

>>29303879
Here's your (you). Now go castrate yourself faustcuck.
>pic related it's you

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>>29305027
Really glad you chose to namefag for that, now I know that you bring nothing of value before you even posted

Page 10 bump

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Bumping for sleepover where wild drunken cougars sexually harass Anon

>>29308307
Never give up

Hey guys just a quick update, will get back to my green monday if I can, I'm working back to back days all weekend, but I'm still here just in full lurk mode with no time

Here here, I'm back from base and havn't gotten shot whilst doing my course. Sorry for the weekly death of me gentlemen.
>>29302420
Give it a day or 2. Need to get my shit together.

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>>29309947
Hurah!

>>29309941

>>29308307
I never knew I wanted this

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I'm back bois. I'm shooting to get at least the first two posts done today. And then two more tomorrow. Also,

>>29309947
>>29308990
Welcome back, bros.

And finally,
>>29309941
Loving the green.

bimp

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How lewd do you think the flower girls can get?

>>29312934
Some, probably.

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Lets liven this place up a bit.

>>29303269
>Be Anon
>you’re getting ready for another boring-ass Wednesday at school
>You’re a junior at Canterlot High
>you’ve gone there since seventh grade and saw Sunset Shimmer try and take it over as well as the dazzlings trying to rule the world for vanity’s
>You are a cross country runner, track runner, and involved school choral groups
>life was peachy for you
>it somehow got better for you after the dazzlings came along
>They came in the first semester of your sophomore year and tried to take over but were subdued by Sunset Shimmer and her band of weird but well-meaning friends.
>you didn’t much care for them
>after that, they disappeared for the rest of that semester
>they suddenly and unexpectedly returned and re-enrolled at the beginning of the second semester of your sophomore year.
>strangely enough, you ended up having a large chunk of your classes with them.
>mainly your choir classes.
>You’re surprised Ms. Shores let them into the class considering what they tried to do last they could sing
>so far nothing strange has happened
>so far
>though because you see them so often you got to know them quite well
>they even became a quite reliable study group
>In particular Sonata Dusk, of whom took great interest in you.
>she ended up getting into the canterlot madrigal this year
>the top choral group at CHS