Super Humans and Power Ponies! Issue #1

>>29156343
Why the name change?

>Galactus looks down at the newly birthed thread mewling about on the front page, before turning his attention to Sunset Shimmer.
>Her face is twisted with anxiety, eyes wide as she, too, watches the thread.
"A great change has been made."
>The World Eater says, a hint of amusement in his voice.
>"Wh-what does this mean," Shimmer asks, looking up at him.
"Perhaps it means little should no one fully seize upon it, but it marks the end of an era."
>"M-my era?"
>Galactus nods, pointing a beefy World Eater finger at the tiny girl.
"You're old news, Spiderling. If that thread is to sustain itself beyond the bare minimum, new blood is needed."
>He looks to the sky and calls out,
"To me, My Herald!"
>Sunset follows his gaze, a twinkling light catching her attention.
>Soon, a man descends from the skies upon a golden surfboard.
>As if that isn't odd enough, his skin is the same golden sheen.
>Sunset stares at the approaching figure, his identity dawning on her as she finally takes notice of his spiky blue hair.
>"Flash?!"
>"Yo, Sunny-bunny," Flash says, squatting as he settles in a few feet away.
>It's then that Sunset takes note of the fact that all he's wearing is a pair of blue briefs, which are a little too snug.
>Reeling in her wandering mind, she turns to Galactus.
>"You're gonna replace me with an Oscar wannabe? Seriously?"
>"Speaking of Oscars," Flash interjects, clicking his tongue, "Don't think I didn't catch you mirin' my Golden Globes."
>"Oh my god... you are... I can't even-"
"Enough! Herald, have you found him?"
>"Yes."
>Flash begins to glow, his hands extending forward.
"Spiderling. My Herald is not who you should fear."
>A portal opens up before Flash, light streaming through.
>"Then... who?" Sunset's stomach tightens as the portal grows larger.
"A legend."
>The portal reaches peak growth.
"A hero."
>A beefy leg steps through it.
"A true superstar."
>"No..."
>And then comes the whole package.
>"No!"
"Yes! And his name is JOHN CENA!"

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>>29156642
Oh.
Oh bravo.
Bravisimo.
Truly, this is the beginning of a shining new era.

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>>29156447
Pic related

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So where were you when a superhero manga makes a pony cameo?

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>>29156642
>Flash as a playboy messenger
>John Cena
I like this thread already

>>29156642
>Cue annoying trumpets.

>>29156343
Still no pirates green link.

>>29157656
Its just a few oneshots I wrote, the only one to deserve a spot up there is Defiant.

>>29157699
Yeah, show our boy Defiant some love.

>>29157735
I fucking knew I forgot something. Post the link, I'll try to get it into the next OP.

>>29156343
Why are they so sexy in the Power Ponies outfits?

>>29157776
It was at the top 10 posts of the last thread, how did you miss it?!

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>>29157794
I'm not a clever man...

http://pastebin.com/3Myw3t0h

Pastebin

>>29157811
THERES MA FIRST MATE!>>29157863
No its just a matter of getting it put up in the next thread.

>>29157863
http://pastebin.com/u/TheDefiant

This has the hearts warming short too.

>>29157876
I'm kinda excited now

>>29157884
Better be, you'll be up there with the greats, and Beans sadly, but mostly the greats.

>>29157886
Look ma! I'm famous!

>>29108710
>Be Anon, still.
>You kinda regret now making fun of Sombra's lisp in college.
>It's easier if you don't know the people you make fun of.
>Even if it makes you an asshole.
>To be honest, if you make fun of other people's speech problems you're an asshole either way, whether you know them or not.
>By all you've seen so far he seems like someone you would get along with.
>He is quite sympathetic...
>But he's fucking Hydra.
>You don't let yourself get seduced, you need to be reflective on your actions and feelings.
>As if that wouldn't be hard enough when Synergy so much as smiles at you.
>And you know Treehugger's still lying to you.
>You love her, of course, but...
>You need to be 360 degree emotionally alert.
>What you want to do is to go home and be alone for a moment.
>Studying Tay's source code was frustrating when you have no idea what programming language it's even supposed to be.
>Something that hasn't been invented yet, sure.
>But... argh.
>Everywhere your thoughts go you find questions without answer
>Either because there are ears everywhere, nobody would know the answer, or you don't even comprehend the question yourself.
>Treehugger, Synergy and you have been given a room for the night, and pretty much everything you could ask for.
>Anything you could ask for is a mouse and a CAD program so you can design a bit on your new laptop.
>You half expected the mouse to come with a Hydra-logo on top of it, but corsair had to suffice.
>Treehugger vetted it by engulfing it in her blood to check all it's functions before she deemed it clean.

>>29157922
>She did the same with the room and all surrounding ones.
>That should also explain why why you got a 3-bed room.
>Sleeping next to Synergy will not be easy.
>Treehugger disabled about 200 devices recording anything, most of them having been in the hallway.
>This room, however, had been quite empty.
>Suspiciously empty.
>Like they either want to lure you into false security.
>Or that they actually do give you your space.
>It just makes you paranoid.
>And when you think about it, you didn't know what you would have preferred.
>You just can't know with these people...
>Another thought returns: Would Spitfire's camp have been bugged?
>Did she listen to you and Sunset...?
>And now you're alone in a room again, with another 'Sunset'.
>“Anon, look away.”
“What? Why?”
>You turn around to look at her to see why she even demanded-
>Oh, okay, she's undressing.
>You quickly turn back to the laptop.
>“I told you to look away, and not here.”
“Well, if you just say that it's- argh.”
>You stare at the screen where you did the benign task of recreating sunset's web shooters.
>It was a mindless task as you only transfer something from memory.
>Like painting by numbers.
>But you don't look at the fine lines of the assembly, no.
>The dark screen serves as a reflective surface.
>Not a very good one though.

>>29157925
>You can only see Synergy's silhouette as she changes.
>You unquestionably shouldn't be staring.
>Contrary to common courtesy, her wishes, and yours not to cheat on Sunset... you are totally staring.
>Her body is just one of the many finer attributes of...
>...of Sunset.
>Sunset has many good things about her.
>Synergy... you barely know.
>She's somewhat sympathetic, but she's not Sunset.
>And screw technicalities.
>She's NOT your Sunset.
>She's just... a hot chick currently undressing in your room
“I know what you're doing.”
>“Well, you just took a look, of course you know.”
“No, I mean you, like, trying to seduce me. Not just now, but a few times already.”
>She needs to think of an answer for a moment.
>“Well, I- Hmm... It's harder to say than to act out, but why do people usually try to 'seduce' another?”
>You frown.
>“If they have an attraction to them, right?”
“Yeah, usually. But not in this case. We barely know one another. Sure, we had lighthearted moments, but certainly not enough to make you want me to cheat. And I'm sure as heck not an anime protagonist. So what I want to know from you is why.”
>You turn to her and she defensively grabs a blanket to cover herself.
>Both of you have somewhat of an angry expression, yet hers is mixed with some shame.
>That shame, however, is not rooted in her almost nakedness.
>You tilt your head.
>Now it's guilt.
“Tell me.”

>>29157927
>“She's not from here, all of her achievements should be mine.”
“What- you're jealous?”
>“No! I mean on the cosmic scale. Realities shouldn't mix. And fate-”
“Fate? Don't come me with fate, we already know time travel and-”
>“Yeah, but that was the time gem, a primordial force of the universe. That still trumps fate. But some random tear in the universe she steps through and then stays? She's not only endangering our reality, but also hers. Simply by existing here.”
>This takes you a moment.
“Like... what? Both realities would- what? Collapse?”
>You chose the best girl to fall in love with, Anon.
>“Yes, kinda like that. I don't know. All I know is that it's bad.”
>Fuck.
“And so the list of problems keeps on growing.”
>She remains silent as you look around the room, unsure of what you're even looking for.
>Until your eyes fall on Synergy again.
>She moves to sit on the bed, slinging the blanket around her a little so she wouldn't have to hold it.
“And you- You do what exactly?”
>She sighs and looks away.
>“Try to shift your affection. Sever your connection to her, and hurt her enough so she'll go back on her own.”
>You sit back down in the chair, not even sure when you stood up.
>You're not sure how to digest this.
>And why is the only question that pops back into your head is if Synergy is offering herself up to you?
“Who else knows that realities might collapse because of this?”
>“Besides cosmic entities who'd never help us? I assume Celestia and Luna, they should know. And, uhh... your mother, because I told her.”

>>29157929
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw + http://pastebin.com/pGJV6pUZ
updated

>>29157929
So...the reason Anon isn't told shit because?

>>29158421
his question was why synergy's trying to get it on with him

>>29159105
No I know that, I meant the Pone Sunset might be a reality fucker anomaly that could kill them all, is what I was referring too.

>>29159142
because the plate is already kinda full and everyone is a manipulative asshole in my story, so...

>>29159579
Sounds about right

>>29159821
I really need to start killing people off

>>29160028
What a great time to be alive!

>>29160028
Cuntfire dies first. I don't mean Rainbow by the way, just to be clear. Or Rarity for that matter.

>>29160067
Die or be imprisoned on the moon?

>>29160515
Uh...what? Is this a actual question, or did you link the wrong post?

>>29160527
Wasn't Nicky Fury imprisoned on the moon?

>>29160686
Uh...I think you thinking about something else.

>>29160722
I guess so.

Sorry

>>29160730
I remember Nick Furry having a secret Moonbase where he was an intergalactic hitman for Earth if that helps.

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> Thread talks about super hero's, super humans, and power ponies of various kinds.

>Nobody mentions a single tokusatsu character.

I'm Disappointed, /Mlp/.

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>>29160765
In that case does this guy count too, or at least those that have his power count at any rate? Thankfully the thread title is vague enough to be able to include villains...and biohazard monstrosities, or anti heroes.

>>29160794

Tokusatsu is a form of live action entertainment that utilizes special effects. for example, Power Rangers, Super Sentai, Kamen rider, Most kaiju films, Ultraman, GARO, and other things like that.

>>29160815
>>29160794
>>29160765
As long as they have powers and/or have a secret identity I'd say they're fine.

>>29161042
Well...>>29160794
these guys can eat people and have molecular shapeshifting. Does that count?

>>29161074
>molecular shapeshifting
Sounds like a power to me.
Of course, to me, warp-fuckery sounds like a power, so...

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>>29161136
>warp-fuckery

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>>29161155
>Double dubs

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>>29161188
Purge the unclean!

We can not let chaos win!

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>>29161227
Or we could just fight for the greater good...

>>29161188
DEATH TO THE HERITIC!
>>29161136
Well its more Viral Form, but it functions more or less the same.

>>29161248
>fight for the greater good
you want to hear about the utopia project?

>>29161260
Shoot for the stars, there is probably some ancient alien god or something in them.

>>29161260
Does a wild bear crap in the woods?

>>29161253
sounds like an interesting villain.

>>29161318
That pic is just a concept armor upgrade for the main villain in Prototype 2 Alex Mercer. He was a...anti hero(?) in the first game, but apparently after they finished it a comic came out and did a thing with him turning to become a bad guy. That butchers/rapes(?) 12 year daughter of the second games anti hero/hero(?) James Heller. His boss fight was disappointing, it was still good, just not as good as it could have been.

>>29161318
>>29161354
I forgot to add that Mercer attempts to do this shit to Heller's daughter, he doesn't succeed.

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>>29160765
best rider coming through

>>29160794
>Prototype

Rather fitting that that game was mentioned here since its, well, 'prototype' was Incredible Hulk: Ultimate Destruction. Seriously, the gameplay in both is EXACTLY the same. Well, other than the 'eating people' thing.

>>29161788
>Hulk: Ultimate Destruction
What?
>Googles
Oh... He's right it is almost identical.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jv9VEwcHDk8

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>>29156830

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>>29156343
>Formerly Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends

>>29156830
Wow, good decision. Look how active this thread is now that the name has been changed.

By the way, bumping from page 10.

New name same old bumps. It's like nothing changed.

>>29162951
Change doesn't happen over night

>>29162516
>>29162951
Hold your horses, Mr Sourgrapes.

>"You are free to choose between these three Ponymon types: Fire, Water, Grass. However, if you choose Fire, I will punch you in the dick. Choose wisely."

>>29163277
I know right, it's like people expect the change to happen then everything comes flooding in all at once.

I honestly think it's someone from the thread formally known as Fingerbang trying to shit up our thread. They had/attempted a name change but it wasn't nearly as civilised as ours, I'd say mountain of drama is an understatement but it looks to be only one or two guys kicking off.

>>29162951
>>29163277
We have about the same amount of fresh green as they do, just bumps and not drama in between
Activity may go up, but lets not become them just yet

>>29164189
I happen to be from the real thread, and not this guy>>29162951
>>29162516
Unlike Alex being an arrogant piece of shit and just taking the thread for himself, this thread can actually do a vote to do a simple name change better than him. Hell I am the one to drop off the instructions on how he should have done it properly.
>>29163862
Fire, my balls are made of steel, your hand isn't...unless your Colossus.

>>29164633
I'm just replying to you, speaking of, WE GOT OUR (YOU)S BACK, PRAISE TO GOOK MOOK'S HANDLER! And I wont be replying to you fuckstains now, just the one. Good day sir.

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>>29164666
You mentioned the thread drama first>>29164189
don't get pissy at me for calling you wrong. Fingerbang insulted the Discord chat to the end of the earths for deciding things outside the thread, I will insult Greentext for trying to pull that shit too, who does it is irrelevant, if he did what this thread did before, "I thought about this for a few weeks now and decided to change the name after talking to Disco", then it wouldn't matter, he could have done whatever he wanted, and the Fingerbang name could die out properly. But he didn't, He acted EXACTLY like those fucks that went to Discord, ergo he will be treated like shit for it, Greentext should have known better than to do what he did, but again, he did it anyways. Go fuck yourself. Have a (you), also backed up currency again, and drop it.

>>29164633
>>29164666
well, something happened I didn't see

on a scale of invading russia in the winter to try selling child pornography to the punisher, how bad was it that guy did?

>>29164812
Nothing much, just a faggot shitposting to defend another faggot. Nothing of consequence as it wasn't related to this thread. My apologies to sup for the slight derail.

>>29164812
It was responses to >>29164620 telling him to leave his drama out of this thread which I'm guessing he then deleted because the other guy decided to kick off about pointless and irrelevant stuff as seen in the post about yours.

>>29164917
Pretty much this. There has been some drama going on in another thread but it's all but been resolved but there is someone who can't seem to let it go and the deleted posts were basically saying to leave their drama out of our threads. Completely reasonable if you ask me.

>>29164935
This guy is the one telling him to drop it though>>29164694
Not whoever it was that started the conversation here>>29164189

>>29164944
That first guy is straight up talking about shit that has no relevance here, in plain view at that. While the other guy did mention it he had the decency to hide it from the thread.
Still we should drop it though there is an irony to that guy saying so seeing as he seems to be incapable of doing the exact same thing.

>>29164962
Meh, I don't care either way. Whatever those two are talking about it was so short I doubt anyone will notice.

>>29164969
Mmm true that, posts were probably deleted to stop it from getting any worse.

On a more relevant note has anyone done anything with the Punisher? Other than maybe a side character in one I can't really think if anyone has.

>>29165007
Uh...no, no one has done anything with the punisher other than Infamous's Anon's story using Luna to play as him.

>>29165048
There was one back when we had more writers

>>29165102
Really? I don't remember seeing it then, must have been before I showed up.

>>29165119
I wasn’t that long anyways. Just gave us the idea that Anon was the Punisher and after a job he was heading towards Canterlot high

>>29165253
Oh wait, I remember that now. It was a short that guy did, wasn't it? Wonder what happened to him.

>>29165275
Who knows? I was actually looking forward for that one to continue

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>>29164620
I said dick, boy. Prepare to get bent out of shape.

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>>29165730
Bring it, my dick is a Diamond!

>>29165767
that's a quartz crystal, which means it's very brittle and breaks easily

>>29165774
And stabs the shit out of your hand, BRING IT, HANDY MAN! Imagine the voice of Hellsing Ultimate abridged Alucard saying this in the caps part.

>>29165787
>Imagine the voice of Hellsing Ultimate abridged Alucard saying this in the caps part.
don't tell me what to do

>>29165805
Fine, I'm going for a walk.

>>29165817
It better not be an enthustistic walk

>>29166425
It will be a VERY enthusiastic walk. Don't worry I will try to avoid the Dairy Queen. By the way, where is your grampa's old car, oh and the nearest goat farm...I want to try some goat cheese...yeah, goat cheese.

did you just change the name?

>>29166899
Yup, we had a vote last thread and screencapped it too.

>>29166933
>Vote
NOICE.
Can I stay?

>>29166968
Go for it fappy, going to make a story here too? Speaking of how is your editor coming along after the...outburst, you two had in the Alone in Equestria girls thread? And semi related just because of my morbid curiosity, why all the weasels/ferrets?

>>29166968
>implying you need our allowance
always nice to have new people on board... literally, there is a pirate thing going on
psst, read my story

>>29166988
He agreed to help. Now I have to write something, but I'm sick. Fucking Flu.

>Ferrets
Well. It happened as a joke. One of my friend draw me as a... seven legged ferret. We just rolled with taht.

I have to finish that Alone in Equestria story before I'll start another project - otherwise I'll end up doing nothing. Like always.

>>29166995
Well. You know that I namepost like a fuck I am, and it's always nice to be asked for a permission.

>psst, read my story
Cute. Is that you? From fungabunga?

>>29166968
>>Vote
democracy works if the average voter is not an idiot

>>29167035
Well good luck getting better Fapman.

>>29167035
>Is that you? From fungabunga?
uhh, what?
no?
I guess more people have the idea to fill in untitled

you have my permission to stay and write, but, you know, keep the namefagging to a minimum if it's unrelated

also, hey being-sick-buddy! get well soon to you

>>29167035
>psst, read my story
Cute. Is that you? From fungabunga?
Took me a moment to notice that with the fungabunga thing. It would be me your referring too. Here is my story pastebin. A friend made it.
http://pastebin.com/77rsTRGZ

>>29167122
>>psst, read my story
>It would be me your referring too
yes but, I also meant mine

>>29167275
Fair enough, but fapman was talking about a conversation we had in the fingerbang thread, >>29167035
I do recommend reading untitled's story though.

>>29167324
To add onto this I would recommend reading everyone's pastebin...except Beans, for one thing he isn't around to post his story, and another is that he is redoing it completely, he just hasn't showed the thread anything he has made yet.

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>>29167041
Viva Democracy!

>>29167061
T-thanks, Anon!

>>29167091
T-thanks, Untitled! Will read in free time!

>>29167122
Oh, so there you are! Good. GOOD.
>http://pastebin.com/77rsTRGZ
Will do!

>>29167324
>I do recommend reading untitled's story though.
I believe it's good. I will give it a read!

>>29167335
>except Beans
it will take some time anyway!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

>>29167526
happy new year.

happy new year from Austria too

>>29167526
of happenings!

Happy new year from Poland!

>>29167643
>>29167626
Thanks, future-Americans!
What are your resolutions for the glorious year of 2017stopkillingallthecoolpeopleholyfuck?

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>>29160765
Yo, I'm totally down for sum delicious toku
He's muh fave

>>29167662
Bully you until you continue your story? It's work in progress.

>>29167626
Habby New Yer from Poland!

>>29167643
Ayy! Kurwa mać! Horse fuckers united!

>>29167662
>future-Americans
y-you t-too

It;s 14 minutes in and already a meme <3

Happy new year all!

Still got a few hours till the new year hits for me.

>>29167724
Ayy! Wypijmy za to!

>>29167643
>Happy new year from Poland!

>>29167724
>Habby New Yer from Poland!

I have a polish publisher.
liquor is so cheap and the women are beautiful for you guys.

happy new years from germany guys

Happy new year my friends.

Gonna try to have the next update for Tonic tonight, if not then tomorrow

>>29168190
Happy new years guy I don't know...who are you again?

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>tfw everyone is wishing you Happy New Year, but you're on the East Coast

>>29168243
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EB8ZRUpfHPo

>>29168243
what time is it at yours place right now?

>>29168256
thats the goofiest and dumbest hitler ever wtf

>>29168260
little past seven thirty

>>29168314
wow so still about6 and a half hours to go... was gonna wait and congratulate you in time but dunno if im still awake then we almost have 2 am over here

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>>29168341
Alright, sweet, fuck me I guess...

>>29168366
Don't worry bro, I am at 6:50ish here, so I'll be up to say it.

>>29168366
>>29168384
good i might try to still be up then too i still got a rockstar here waiting to be drunk anyway

>Ow ow hot hot HOT.
>Your lungs aren't the only thing burning as you sprint down the hall as fast as you can with the flames hot on your heels.
>Pun intended.
>Joking aside it seems your watch has cracked from the heat. No back up this time either.
>The PA over head crackles and clears.
>"Ah Anonymous, no need to worry about that briefcase you're carrying, IT will survive the flames.
"Eat a dick Siege!" you pant.
>"I prefer my sausage cooked, speaking of which."
As the the PA clicks the ceiling panels shift and reveal clicking burners.
>Fuck this is going to hurt.
>Your clothes are swallowed by the flames, leaving only you, and the package.
>Every movement is agony as you speed wack to the window and break it to the case.
>50 stories separate you from the concrete below.
>You hope Rainbow dash can read minds.
>The rush of cool air on the way down briefly soothes your pain before your sudden impact.
>Maybe you should just lay here in this crater, you've softened concrete enough.

>>29168670
What?

>>29168670
first green of the year, but... I'm having a hard time reading it... what?

>>29168670
I feel like I'm missing a lot of context

>>29169087
You and everyone else reading it.

>>29168670
Okay.
...
What?

Happy New Year!

>>29169930
>It's still only 10:00 for me
Happy new year, though!

>>29169930
Yup, now try to update your greens this year

>>29168718
>>29168811
>>29169087
>>29169108
>>29169569
Patience Anons, also Happy New Year

>You dust yourself off and shamble down the ally ways, hopefully a department store isn't too fall away.
>You swear, If you ever meet Siege face to face, you're going to punch him in the mouth.

>Be Incognito, Director of C.H.O.D.E
Canterlot
Hero
Observation
Department:
Earth.
>You've lost contact with Anonymous about an hour ago. Not that you're worried about him, he's bullet proof.
>What you're concerned with is the in-tell from Siege.
>Those documents tell the source of the horses, or should you say, "Ponies'" magic.
>With dirt like that, We'll have a defense against them if they decide to invade.
>"Sir It's Anonymous." one of your subordinates tell you.
"Put him through. you command. Anon, have you secured the package.
>"Yeah, you really need to see this."
"No shit Anon, we're sending a cab"
>"No, you don't understand, this is the one case where I hope Siege is fucking with us."
>This can't be good.
"Say no more until you get back, I'll see you then."
>"Over and out." his words were accompanied by a sharp cracking sound.
>Likely the sound of him breaking that cellphone.
>You're somewhat disturbed by Anon's words.
>Siege may be an eccentric little fudge packer but he's reliable and he knows better than to fuck with you personally.
>What could possibly be on those documents?

Happy new year thread.

Fuck it. Reposting something for you guys.
http://pastebin.com/GVr7XGyD

>>29170819
Thanks, almost forgot about that one. Good read

beeeeeep

>>29170227
Anon enters the meeting room with the package.
"Glad you could make it."
>"Me too, I may be fire proof but he didn't know that."
"He thinks you regenerate."
>"That's not the problem" he opens the briefcase and takes out the only piece of paper inside. On it read one word in all caps. "This is"
"Friendship!? Are you shitting me?"
>"I wish I was"
"How in the hell do we counteract that? Fucking Ted Bundy had friends."
>"Adam Sandler has friends."
>"Jim Jones had lots of friends."
"So all we can do is just hope they don't invade us?"
>"Not quite, going to war with an ally wouldn't be very friendly."
>He's got a point there, but only in theory.
"Is friendship a fluid term to them? If so we may be in trouble."
>"You'll have to ask them that. In the mean time, I'm getting a shot and a back massage."
>He waves his way out of the room leaving you there to contemplate.
>Friendship is Magic....
>Son of a bitch.

>>29172517

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>tfw you will never have your super-gf realize how hard it is for a nrmie like you to fight crime at her side

>>29173830
>*normie

>>29156343
The Tonic story continues

>The moment you land, you duck under a shockwave as your senses go haywire.
>Looking to the side, you see Clash standing there with her arms raised.
> “Wasn’t gonna let Lemon have all the fun, Tonic.”
>She charges up another blast as you jump into the air while shooting some web at Clash.
>Seeing the webs coming, Clash fired the shockwave at the ground and causing the concrete to making a barrier.
>Taking a huge chance, you run towards the makeshift barrier with the stupidest idea ever.
> ‘Please don’t tell me you’re gonna do it.’
>Once you were within arms reach of the barrier, you vaulted over it and punch Clash in the chest.
> ‘And you did it.’
>The force of your punch sent her into the arms of Octy as she glared at you and sent a bladed tentacle at you.
>It doesn’t even reach you as a web bullet hits the tentacle, sending it to the ground.
>Looking up, you see Spider-woman hanging from the ledge of the building with her hand raised.
“You couldn’t have helped sooner?”
> “Wanted to see how you handle yourself.”
“....Dick move.”
>She shrugs before jumping off the building as a green beam hits the spot she was hanging from.
>You even backflip over a beam as your senses went crazy.
>When you and Spider-woman landed, you turned to see Lemon and she was starting to scare you.
>It wasn’t the fact that she had her hand raised and glowing.
>That seemed normal from what you could tell.
>What was scaring you was the smile and the look in her eyes.
>Lemon lowered her arms as she started to hug herself.
> “Ohhh this feeling. I thought I could only get this with my love but you.”
>She looks at you with her eyes slightly closed as her hands cup her cheeks.
> “But you.”
‘I’m starting to feel dirty from this.’
> “You were able to make me feel so alive. I must have you and my Spider-Woman.”

>>29174026
> ‘Host?’
‘Tonic, don’t.’
> ‘I just want to say…’
‘I’m warning you.’
> ‘Don’t EVER breed with her.’
‘Damnit Tonic, I said….. Wait, what?’
> ‘I said don’t breed with her. She’s too crazy, host.’
“..... You know what fuck today.”
>You just shot a web behind you and just pulled it, hoping for something big to throw at them.
>It was wishful thinking but what you got was a bus flying over your head and towards the trio.
>It would have crushed the alien and the other two if there was one thing you didn’t miss.
>You forgot about Clash and her shockwave power bullshit, which she used to destroy the bus.
>Raising your arm you create a shield to protect you from the debris.
>Once it was over, you lowered your shield to see that the villainous trio had disappeared.
“Fuck. They got away.”
> “Yes ad it’s you’re fault.”
>You turn to glare at her even though she couldn’t see it.
“My fault? If I didn’t show up you would have been that alien’s plaything.”
> “I was doing fine you piece of…”
>Police sirens were heard coming your way.
“Shit, the cops.”
>You jump into the air and start to swing away as Spider-Woman was yelling at you.
>All you wanted to do right now was go home and sleep.
> ‘You do need to do your homework and eat first.’
>Scratch that, do your homework and have a nice meal before you sleep.
> ‘And some chocolate.’
‘Fine, Tonic.’

>>29174039
All I got. Getting over being sick

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>Sigh
>Huh? Oh, it's nothing, it's just...
>Adagio gets fire powers, Aria can move stuff with her mind, and all I get is some blue skin and pointy teeth...
>I mean, could there /be/ a dumber, more useless superpower to get? The only thing these teeth do is kill my dating life...
>It's The Worst!
>Like, what guy would wanna kiss a freaky fish girl who could bite his tongue off?!
>Huh?
>Y-You'd really want to hang out with a creepy mutant like me?
>And, like, do that kinda stuff? Holding hands and junk?
>F-For realzies!?
>Omigosh, you're The Best!
>I can't wait to tell 'Dagi and Ari' and rub it in their dumb, no-boyfriend faces!
>Eeeeeheeheehee, they'll be soooo mad! C'mon, let'sgotellthemrightnow!

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IMPORTANT UPDATE
On an unrelated note, Sister-Beans urged me to wish you a happy new year. Don't respond to this part of the post. She just wants me to tell you guys.


>>29167335
>redoing it completely
This is not at all what I'm doing.

>>29175215
Oh please do go on.

>>29172777
Trips on a green that makes no sense whatsoever. Actually now that I think about it, weren't you here before? You seem familiar.
>>29174026
And back to the good ol sanity we know and love.
>>29174039
And Tonic learning about the best rule for a living being. Never stick your dick in crazy. Not even with another guys dick.
>>29174094
Get well soon.
>>29175253
Its close enough. Also, HI SISTER BEANS!
>>29175215
You know by now slut, that this isn't enough right?

>>29175479
Thanks. I'm feeling better but the weather isn't helping that much.

Yup Tonic is learning plus I don't think he wants to deal with anyone crazier then Pinkie

>>29175253
So... you're only mostly starting over?

>>29175270
I mean, I kinda did already, but I could write something short and fluffy about the difficulty of making out with your mugga girlfriend and her shark mouth.

>>29175578
Because anyone crazier than Pinkie is usually a violent lunatic?

>>29175621
Well, You're not wrong.

Also need to figure out what happens next

>>29175647
Sounds good mate, on a separate topic slightly related to our intrepid bug themed super heroes. Any thoughts on that anime Terra Formars? It looks like an interesting concept for bug themed abilities...and I saw the main guy curbstomp a Kodiak bear to death after ripping out its eye.

>Herd
>Power Ponies
FUND!

>>29175215
>Anyone could tell you that dating a mutant came with its unique difficulties
>Crazy mutant supremacists, crazy human supremacists, inconsistent, dangerous powers, mockery about your "genetic fever" and the occasionally burning cosmic space chicken making or killing a whole metric bitchton of mutants at the flip of a coin.
"Ah, shit!"
>This, thankfully, was not nearly so dangerous
>"Omigosh, I'm so sorry!"
>You just wish it didn't hurt so damn much
>Sonata Dusk sits across from you, worry wrinkling her adorable features, a trickle of deep red blood trailing from the corner of her pouty lips
>Your blood, to be exact
>You raise a hand to wave off her panicked hover-hands, putting up a weak smile even as the taste of your own coppery essence coats your injured tongue
"Ah, it's fine, babe, no biggie."
>Sonata sniff, wiping at her eyes and marring her careful mascara
>"No it's not! It's not fine! How am I supposed to do, like, normal girl stuff with my boyfriend if just kissing him hurts!"
>Her little fists beat childishly against the cover of her bed that the two of your are sitting on, filling the awkward silence with soft 'THMP's
"Sonata... I'm okay, really..."
>Gently, you pull her smaller frame against your chest, getting a bit of stubborn resistance before she caves and accepts the hug
>" S'not fair"
>She grumbles quietly, muffled by your shirt
>You feel her little platitudes until she calms down, gently stroking her back and her long, silky hair asnd letting her know that you agree, it isn't, but that it would all be okay, and that she's the prettiest girl in the world
>Eventaully, she stiffens, and while you expect another tantrum, instead her bright fuschia eyes look into your with determination
>"I want to try again."
>All you do is nod and let her take control, biting back the twinge of fear in your guts as her lips rise to meet yours
>This kiss is soft, gentle, and slow, Sonata taking her time to taste your lips and to let her confidence grow

cont

>>29175749
Hnnng, Sonata a cute.

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>>29175749
>Then, that familiar prod, her tongue begging your mouth to open
>This was it
>Desperately hoping that Sonata doesn't sense your trepidation, you open your mouth and let your tongue greet hers, deepening the kiss and earning yourself a pleased hum from her
>Briefly, your human teeth clack against her decidedly inhuman set
>There's a moments pause before the kiss resumes, your hands roaming from the small of her back to those dangerous hips, not daring to go further out of fear of startling her
>Sonata's response is to grab herself a handful of your own ass and give it an appreciative squeeze
>Well then.
>Pushing your luck, your tongue forces her own squirming muscle back, instead pushing into her mouth, only just grazing against her threatening jaws before tasting her mouth
>You throw up a mental victory point as you snatch a surprised squeak and moan from those plush lips
>The little tug-of-war continues, a playful game of give and take, with your poor, much abused mouth at risk
>Eventually, your lips break apart, the pair of you panting with flushed cheeks and heady smiles
>With a shove, Sonata forces you onto your back and lays atop you, her head propped up by her hands, a victorious grin on her face
>"I totally did it, for realzies! And you didn't get hurt, right?"
>You shake your head, not even a little prick
>Well, not from her at least
>She squee's and wraps her arms around you, snuggled up and more than happy to claim you as her prize
>You do the same, cradling her voluptuous weight
>Sure, dating a mutant could be a heavy risk
>But the priiiize

>>29175683
I heard of it. Looks interesting but not my thing.

>>29175836
Nice and cute but you should get back to your other stuff if possible

>>29176067
fair, I just really like Sonata for some reason
I think it's cause she's blue

>>29176419
It was still cute and I'm not trying to rush you so take your time.

To tell the truth, I'm working on another one shot that I hope to post within the next week or 2

>>29175836
>But the priiiize
God damn it Jacob.

>>29176484
It's rare to get a romance option who explicitly cheats on the MC.

How the /fuck/ does someone cheat on the Double Savior of the Galaxy? What pussy is even /worth/ that?

>>29176705
Really? I just went male shep the entire time.
But he actually cheats Fem Shep? I would of left his ass on the collector base then put my finger up a blue butt.

I have I'm just getting ideas out
>>29175479

>>29177585
I...what? Are you saying you were here before? Because this is barely a sentence.

So how does this thread feel about the Indigo Tribe?

>>29177929
The what? Is that one of the Green Lantern cannon tribe colors?

>>29177957
Yes, they channel and use compassion. They are also usually the worst kinds of criminals.

>>29177965
Uh...don't know much past this>>29177957
So not to partial one way or the other.

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>>29175603
Not mostly starting over. It's the same start. Then, when it gets to the point that Anon meets the whole gang, I'll do it all originally from there.


This chart hopefully should help explain it. Hopefully.

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>>29178297
You've taken the time to make a damn chart instead of posting content...you wonder why people are annoyed with you.

>>29178330
I just want people to know that I'm not remaking the whole green itself. The content will be out when it's out. I would be posting it now had I now run into a problem with the continuity a few days ago.

I've been thinking about making short oneshots like the Spider-Shim vs The Rhino thing until I can start posting Rebirth so I can still give you guys something to read. However, if I started posting it and said I did it so you guys could have something to enjoy while I finish Rebirth, you'd might still say "we don't want this, where's the real green?"

>>29167988
>I have a polish publisher.
Do you publish books? W-What?

>>29178335
Ain't that a lot of work anyway?

>>29178399
What, doing short one-shots till the Rebirth is done? Only a little. I write a lot in my normal life, this wouldn't necessarily be any more of a burden or challenge.

>>29178399
Just role with it, Beans is asinine at the best of times, apparently he's an actor that likes to dress as batman. Coherent thought is kinda antithetical to his job. As is basic logic for that matter.

>>29178442
Yeah but he is our faggot that dresses as Batman. If he posts something or doesn't, it'll be okay.

I'll be back in a thread or two or something. I don't mean to disrupt, I just thought I'd try and update, but, I clearly messed that up. Happy New Year.

>>29178491
It's fine. We have plenty of writers here to occupy everyone

So, how is everyone doing in the Year of Our Lord Trump 2017?

Sun still rose and fell? Food was eaten, steps were taken forwards and back? Breaths passed your lips?

Tell me, anons and faggots, how was your day?!

>>29179980
Great, having a good birthday and I'm working on the next update for Tonic.

>>29179993
Oh? Well, happy birthday then, treps!
May you continue to be our most reliable writefag, even in your advanced age.

>>29180030
I'm not leaving till i get these greens done.

Also thanks

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>RIDER BUUUUMP!

"...They're coming!"
>Distant hoofsteps grow louder; 7 ponies decked in colored uniforms appear.
>"Pretty Purple," calls a lavender unicorn, her wings unfurling in a mighty pose.
>"Pretty Yellow," says a pegasus, her pose looking more like a retreat than a statement of presence.
>"Pretty Spectrum," yells a rainbow maned pegasus, a cocky grin on her muzzle
>"Pretty White," says a white colored unicorn, "Wahaha!"
>"Pretty Apple," shouts a an orange colored pony, her voice dripping with a southern belle accent.
>"Pretty Pink," giggles a pink pony, bouncing into position next to her allies.
>"P-pretty Teal," announces a pale-purple(pink-oish?), who sort of just trots up next to the group.
>"We are the Friendship Rangers..." starts the lavender one, her allies gathering around her before busting out into a united pose, "The Pretty Ponies!"
"They're really here! Did you see that?! A real Pretty Pose!"

>>29180800
"Wow Sunset with the Spider Suit and that how much money do you have?"
>"Equestrian gold."
"You know what gold will not get you?'
>"What?"
"Wings."

>>29156343
Spider-Bloke! The fuck! You couldn't put the REAL PowerPonies there?

>>29180814
Sir, please, I ask you not to tap into my deep, shameless love of PreCure, lest my heart give out from excitement

>>29180838
Control yourself. Also would magocal girls fit here?

>>29181490
I mean...we did expand the name now. Maybe lolis will motivate the slut to work more>>29180838

>>29181490
Magical girls are the best and not for sexual!

That said, I won't be doing more writing tonight, I'm not feeling so great.

>>29181507
Well heroes and magical girls are 2 different things to me


>>29181517
As long as they aren't like Sailor Moon, then i don't care. And get well.

I won't be updating either but I'm still working on it so who knows

>>29181543
So what does that make Doctor Strange?

>>29181553
And "Epic Facial Hair Bro", that's what.

>>29181553
Did he get a sex change?

I meant japanese magical girl anime stuff.

>>29181568
Still magical, but if that aint your cup of tea then whatever I guess.
>>29181560
>And "Epic
An* fixed.

>>29181580
I was just asking were magical girls fit here

>>29181580
Fuck, I need to sleep

>>29181595
Magical Girls are pretty much superheroes with a lengthier suit-up. I mean, the EG cast is already basically a bunch of magical girls already.

>>29181601
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>Anon doesn't care for heroics and just lives his life as a normal citizen in whatever pony based metropolis. >Though anon has the power of a random power each day.
>heightened senses. Anon now keenly aware a mouse has gotten into house.
>got drunk on technological prowess day. Now his computer is sentient and judges him on his browser history.
>zero friction day was a good day. Finally got those paper stickers off without leaving anything behind

Essentially one shot fuel prompt

Page 10

>>29184752
Would he be in Equestria or EQG?

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>>29185621
Equestria? We got plenty of EqG stuff, why not some of pic related.

Good morning, thread

>>29184752
>>zero friction day was a good day. Finally got those paper stickers off without leaving anything behind

kek

>>29185982
I'd go skiing with that power, be the best there is in a concrete jungle.

>>29185653
Point and was just asking

>>29186442
Fair enough. No harm in that.

>>29185653
They look like horses

>>29186556
They are pones, mutant pones, but pones non the less. With spandex costumes tight enough to show the outlines of their teets and ponut, and the most juicy bit, horse pussy

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>>29186556
No shit.

>>29180838
>PreCure
Not quite. It's an old video game reference.
I just thought 'Pretty' would work better than 'Handsome' in this case.

>>29188235

Sorry for not updating lately guys, I'm kinda having a block. It might be time for another short.

Good news is I've been coming up with ideas for new characters that would appear in later parts of the story, but it doesn't matter if I don't write it.

Anyway, we'll see how it goes.

>>29174039
>Be Starlight, the director of this facility.
>It’s been over a week since Alpha began the test run for the glider and it's been nothing but a headache for you.
>When you started this project, everything seemed to good according to plan.
>No side effects, no explosions and no setbacks.
>That is until many different complaints and reports started to appear on your desk.
>From what many of the reports showed, Alpha had the strength to destroy a few of the labs equipment.
“That’s shows the serum is working.”
>Looking at another report, you see a psychological test and a report on his behavior.
>Both of which don't fill you with any amount of joy.
>You don’t even need to look through the complaints to know that Alpha either hurt someone or was harassing someone.
>Mainly the female staff.
>Letting out a groan, you threw the complaints to the side and continued to work when your phone started to beep.
“What now?”
>Without any hesitation, you press the button on the phone.
“Yes?”
> “Miss Starlight, Alpha’s here to see you as you requested.”
>Taking a moment to prepare yourself, you told them to send Alpha in.
>A moment later Alpha opened the doors and strolled in as if he was bored of everything.
>Stopping in front of your desk, Alpha just looked at you as if you were a fly compared to him.
> “You wanted to see me?”
>You stare at him for a moment before gesturing to the one other seat in the room.
“Please sit.”
>He sits in the chair while using your desk as a footrest.
>Taking one of your pens, you push the mercenary’s feet off your desk.
“Now, can you explain to me why I'm getting so many complaints from my subordinates about your behavior?”
> “I'm not much of a people person.”
“Regardless of your… life choices, you need to conduct yourself in a proper manner with these tests.”
>He nods his head while waving his hand around in a circular motion.

>>29189491
> “So we can find out my limits and blah blah blah. All I need to do is go out there and clean up your mess.”
>Glaring at the mercenary, you take a moment to take a calming breath before you say something.
“Yes but the glider and the suit aren't finished yet so we will continue with the tests for the unseeable future.”
> “Just give me them as they are and I'll take care for your problem tonight.”
>He was really starting to annoy you with his constant “Take care of your problem” talks.
>It's times like these, you wish you were somewhere else doing something else.
>Maybe you should of listened to mom and should have been a therapist.
“We can’t, Alpha.”
> “And why not, director? Trying to make sure your ass won't be on the line?”
“No but I'd be worried about yours, Alpha. You may have volunteered for this project but it doesn't make you any less expendable than you already are.”
>He gets up from the chair and began to walk towards the door.
> “You mean like yourself. I've heard that the boss hasn't been to happy with you lately.”
>Opening the door, he just stands in the doorway with his back facing you.
> “Makes me wonder how much longer you'll last before the boss terminates your contract.”
>He began to walk through the doorway while humming to himself.
“I'll be here longer than you mercenary.”
>He stops and turns to look at you curiously.
“While I might be on thin ice, our boss needs me more than he needs you. Don't think for a moment that you’re invincible because you became a part of this project. We can have you replaced with twenty others fairly easily, Alpha.”
>You feel a bit happy when you saw Alpha’s smile turn into a frown.
“Do remember that. We can always use new personnel who will listen to their orders.”
>He nods at your hidden message of “Don’t fuck up”.
“Do you understand, Alpha.”
> “......Crystal.”


A little look into the Director's end of things

>>29184651
>You will never fuck her while she wears the suit.

>>29187354
Gotcha.

Is pirate green continue?

>Spider-Shim will never sneak in the apartment at late night and being so tired she keeps the suit on but takes off her mask.
>You will never feel her surprisingly soft texture of her suit as she cuddles you.
>Her gloved hands will never softly rub you as she gets comfortable.
>You will never get goosebumps as the groves of Sunset's gloves touches your skin.

>>29190888
Is cuddling you or molesting you?

>>29192125
why not both?

>>29192142
Good point. Lewd Spider-Sunset is always good and we need some more of it

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>>29185653
pic somewhat related

>>29190888
checked, but what if you would be lovers at days and arch-nemesis at nights?

>>29192478
>what if you would be lovers at days and arch-nemesis at nights?
we had a ministory like that, shockeranon where every heroine stopped Anon by sleeping with him
it was somewhat nice to imagine, but to be honest neither really fun nor lewd

Villains need good motivations to make a good story
I for one would.. like a good story no matter what it is

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>>29190888

>>29192509
Now that you mention it, where's Shocker?

>>29193162
I think he's ded.

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>>29193162
In an asylum. Hips drove him mad.

>>29193176
>>29193177
Damn, i wanted to see who else was gonna go after Anon.

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>>29192509
>a good story no matter what it is
What is a good story for you? what makes a good story?

>>29193240
when it's an actual story and not just a sequence of scenes happening to the same character, as was the problem with shockeranon

>>29193271
Fair, do you consider my greens as stories?

I want to know so i can improve them

>>29190888
Trips demand green.

>>29193379
I'd say no. You jump about a bit but each 'jump' has enough happening for it to feel like an actual story before moving onto the next one. Shocker's felt really disjointed and swapped before anything of note happened it was like we were getting snapshots of part of a picture. A few anons point this out to him and his last update seemed to fix this.

>>29193447
Well thank you for being honest. I'll try to correct it

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>>29156343
I think Sunset has a problem.

>>29193379
yes, trepp, you have an overarching story you follow in tonic anon moreso than infamous one.
we actually come to care about your characters

>>29193491
nail biting, neat. I shall build that quirk in

>>29193646
Wait that's good right?

I just want to make my greens good for everyone

>>29193646
I think it's more of biting her thumb.

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>>29193666
Satan must be right.

>>29193471
I wouldn't say you need to correct anything; sure you jump but it isn't like you do one post of Anon/Tonic POV, one post Sunset POV, then one post Pinkie POV for example. I have no problem following the story/action and don't think anything needs correcting but if you want to change stuff that's all up to you.

>>29194373
So the jumps are fine just have less of then or make them long enough?

>>29194453
well, shockers jumps were all 5 lines, so...

>>29194638
I meant that of i jump, i at least make it worthwhile like what I'm gonna do to Starlight

By that i mean make the jump last a good number of posts

>rape every power ponies
>you still last long

>>29194453
You're fine dude don't have to change anything. As untitled says you have an overarching story but each section is long enough or has enough going on that we actually care as opposed to swapping to another arc before anything has happened.

TL:DR Keep doing what you're doing.

>>29194781
Ok. I just worry sometimes since writing isn't my forte.

But yeah, I'll have more starlight soon since shit's about to get real

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>>29194797
>since writing isn't my forte
Stop worrying. Writing isn't MY strong point.

I haven't read your shit yet, maybe will start someone's tomorrow, cos I feel better, a bit, but you're probably doing just fine!

>>29194884
>>29194797
well, writing is totally my forte, so you all should listen to me
And I tell you to continue doing what you're doing, trepp

>>29194924
>>29194884
Sorry, it's just how i am

>>29194933
If you dont't believe in yourself, just believe in the me that believes in you

>>29195849
You're right. I should believe in Kamina

>>29197014

Gonna post more green later

Doing some research on Marvel, and Found out that they never retconned Conan the Barbarian out of existence in Earth-616, despite selling the I.P. to Dark Horse.

>>29199761
Oh?
That's pretty cool!

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>>29156343
AAAAAAAAAAA

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>>29199860
Well then.

>>29199847
Now here's where it get's interesting. The original writer for Conan, Robert E. Howard, was part of "the Lovecraft Circle", a series of writers that wrote for Wierd Tales and had frequent correspondence, including H. P. Lovecraft himself. Many of the stories were interconnected, including Conan.

>>29199908
Exactly where my mind went.
Conan's fought plenty of wackjob cultists, who's to say he never busted up a "Make Chthon Great Again" house party?

>>29199908
Which means that the entire Lovecraft panthion exists in the Marvel multiverse in some form or another

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dafuq did I just read?

Captain America: Sam Wilson 017

>>29199965
Oh right, Marvel's usual "solution" to people pointing out their writing problems, blow it entirely out of proportion and directly address it with the all subtlety of getting hit with Kamala's soapbox.

Like... fucking, come on. I get it, that those kids are villains, left and right extremism, blah blah blah, but those are panels that could have been used for something of value.

>>29200092
>Kamala's soapbox.
Wait what?

>>29200392
Kamala Kahn, the new Captain Marvel
She has a bad habit of being used by writers who want her to talk about issues they think are important, like voting and profiling and shit, getting on the proverbial soapbox, as it were.

>>29200483
Meanwhile, Dan Abnett is doing for DC what he did for 40k.

>>29115804
>He soon spots the very girls he'd been hoping to avoid.
>Luckily, they're a few "rows" ahead of him, their eyes focused on each other and the stage.
>Well, save for one of them: the budding fashionista, Rarity, has taken to looking back at him.
>No, she seems to be focusing on Blueblood, if her half-lidded glare is any indication.
'I can't blame her. The guy was a real jerk.'
>And yet, a part of him sympathizes with the spoiled 'Prince'.
>The thunder of applause snaps him out of his thoughts.
>Apparently, the Mayor had just given them the okay, because the orchestra begins playing as she and Captain Armor made their way off the stage.
>"So, Blueblood," one of his groupies starts, moving to wrap an arm around his, "about that dance..."
>He smiles, casually slipping out of her grip, and looks to his 'friend.'
>"Of course. But, let's make this a bit more interesting"
'What's with that look?'
>"Dance with Lance here-"
'Lance???'
>"-and, should he deem you worthy, I'll dance with you."
>The girls, 6 in total, exchange glances before huddling around Lance, their smiles wide.
>"Me first!" "I'm a great dancer." "Hey, hey, let's get this over with!" "C'mon!"
>His eyes dart between them, anxiousness washing over him as he tries to get a word out.
>"However..." Their attention returns to Blueblood, "Only three of you will be chosen. After all, I've business to attend to and won't have time to dance the night away."
>Eyes narrowing, Lance shoots Blueblood a glare.
>But something gives him pause, holds him back from letting his ire and mistrust be known.
>The smile on Blueblood's face doesn't waver; a calculated act made all the more apparent by the expectant look in his eyes.
>With a sigh, Lance puts on a smile of his own.

>>29200581
God I love that man

>>29200587
"I'm flattered you think so highly of my tastes, Prince, but passing the buck to me doesn't seem all that fair to these lovely ladies, now does it?"
>"On the contrary, every prince needs an advisor, an assayer, if you will, to provide a first line opinion. Or to 'taste' the waters, as it were."
>Blueblood lets out a light laugh, an act that prompts Lance to let out a subdued sigh.
"If you say so."
>Giving him a nod, Blueblood makes his way to Lance, the girls parting to the side, and gives is 'friend' a few pats on the shoulder.
>"Good man," he says, leaning in to whisper, "Enjoy the feast. Be careful that you don't get food poisoning."
"Will do, Your Highness."
>With that, Blueblood turns to the girls, regarding them for a moment before taking his leave.
>"I'll be awaiting your assessments, Lance."
>The group watches him for a moment as he makes his way over to Principal Celestia and a woman take looks to be a close relative of his, before the girls turn their attention back to Lance.
"Uh."
>One of them sighs: a blonde, blue eyed girl wrapped up in a pretty red dress.
>Hands on her hips, she looks him over.
>"Let's make this quick," she says, "Instead of us wasting time, just choose three of us."
"Well..."
>The other girls voice their agreement, drawing closer to Lance in a huddle.
>"Yeah!" "No point drawing things out."
"I, uh..."
>"Hurry up!"
>Their caterwauling grating his nerves to dust, he reflexively raises a hand to cover his ear, a grimace on his face as he raises the other in front of him.
"Knock it off!"
>They clam up, some of them shooting him offended glares, and he takes a moment to compose himself.
>Clicking his tongue, he points to the girl that kicked off all of that noise.
"You're up first."
>She puffs her chest out, a haughty look on her face. "Good move, Chance. Blueblood's gonna love me."
"It's Lan..."
>Teeth clenching for a moment, he shakes his head.
"Whatever. But, you've got it twisted if you think I just gave you the OK."

>>29200591
>She scoffs, smile twisting into a frown, "What?"
"Dance with me."
>"Why? No offense, but I've got better things to do than go through some half-baked middleman."
'Talk about going for the jugular...'
>But he smiles in response.
"That's fine. The field just got narrowed down to five, then."
>"Hey," she balks, eyes widening, "You can't just kick me out of the running like that!"
"Funny, seems to me like you did that to yourself."
>The other girls start to murmur. Apparently, it's nothing favorable to the girl considering how she shoots them a glare.
>"F-fine," she grumbles, stomping over to him. She extends a hand towards him, grumbling all the while.
>He takes her hand, right in left, and places his right hand a little bit above her waist.
>"Don't get fresh with me," she grumbles, eyes narrowed on the floor.
"Hey."
>She looks to him, her face stern. He meets her gaze with a mask of neutrality, one that's soon broken as his lips curl into a small smile.
"Relax."
>His fingers interlock with hers, an act that cause her face to redden.
"Let's just dance for a little bit."
>She takes a moment to respond, eyes darting between him and the floor as she tries to find her voice again.
"...O-ok."
>He moves a little closer and, as the music begins to pick up its pace, nudges her to move with him.
>A minute or so goes by, the two of them dancing in silence as the other girls watch intently.
"What's your name?"
>She glances at the ground.
>"....Clover."
"Nice to meet you, Clover."
>"Mm."
>The music slows, their pace following.
>They sway in place, her eyes downcast and his focused on nothing in particular.
'Why me? What is Blueblood expecting?'
>He looks to Clover, her expression no longer boiling with indignant ire, but something akin to bashfulness.
'Does he really want me to vet them? Or is this just a joke on his part? Passing a headache off to me instead of dealing with it himself...'

>>29200588
I know what you mean, Dan is the writer that G-dubs needs.

>>29200601
>Taking a step back, he raises her right hand.
'Whatever Blueblood wanted...'
>Instinctively, she closes her eyes and allows him to twirl her for a moment.
'This is my show now.'
>They settle back into each other, Clover's attention going back to the floor.
"Clover?"
>"...Yeah?"
"What do you know about Blueblood?"
>She finally looks up at him, a cautious and suspicious look on her face.
>"...Is this part of the assessment?"
"In a sense."
>"...I know he's loaded and hot."
>He lets out a light laugh.
"Is that all?"
>She gives him a small smile. "That's all I need."
"You don't mince words."
>"I like keeping things on point. Leave the fluff for beds and pillows."
"I have a feeling you've got a taste for satin sheets and designer dresses, Goldilocks."
>She laughs. "Not a bad guess."
>He laughs along with her, but it eventually gives way to a moment of silence.
"But, seriously..."
>Sighing, she looks up at him, "You're not gonna let this drop, are you?"
"Think of it this way,"
>He says, giving her a small smile,
"The more truthful you are with me, the less likely you'll be... overly disappointed when you meet Blueblood."
>She thinks on this, eyes narrowing in contemplation, before letting out a sigh.
>"Alright. Fire away, Chance."
"It's Lance-"
>Catching himself a little to late, he lets out a resigned grumble.
'Whatever.'
"...What else do you know about Blueblood?"
>She glances to the other girls, their eyes having never left the pair, and then takes a moment to survey the surrounding guests.
>No one else seems to be paying much attention to them and Blueblood is still AWOL.
>"He's an ass."
>He couldn't help but smirk at the forwardness of her response.
"Ouch. Not saying that I don't agree, but..."
>"Well, it's the truth as far as I've seen it," she says, shrugging her shoulders. "Even if I didn't know a few girls that've danced with or dated the guy, I could tell just by looking at him that he's a spoiled brat that likes to strut around in big boy clothes."

>>29200606
>She pauses, a small smile on her face.
>"Well, I guess you could say it's more like he's trussed up in big boy clothes."
"Uh, what do you mean?"
>"Hmm." She moves in a little closer, "He doesn't seem to enjoy himself all that much and likes to pass the buck whenever he can... As you can see for yourself."
"Sorry about that."
>"It's not all bad. I thought you'd be more of a pushover since Blueblood dragged you into this."
>She moves her left hand from his shoulder and slides it down his chest, eyes going half-lid.
>"But you surprised me."
"H-heh. Yeah, well, I've had to deal with my fair share of hell-raisers in the past."
>She nods, "I can imagine."
"Mm. W-well, let's keep going, then. What do you hope to gain?"
>"From Blueblood?"
"Sure. From him. For yourself. What do you want in life?"
>"...I want to live a comfortable life."
"Waited on, hand and foot, by dozens of servants in a big mansion?"
>She quietly laughs, shaking her head, "Is that a comfortable life to you?"
"I prefer something quieter. Low-key."
>"Right. A pampered life is nice, but I want a comfortable life."
"With just enough money to get by?"
>"I don't even want to have to worry about money. Or food. Or drink. Or warmth... Or love."
>His stomach tightens, the last word lingering between them as she looks up at him.
"And Blueblood's... in the cards for all of that?"
>"Maybe."
"But he's kind of a jerk."
>"Yeah... but I'm no saint, either." She looks dejected for a moment before smiling.
>"Who knows? We might be perfect for each other; a hell-raiser and her knight in grimy armor."
"Hmm... will it really work out?"
>"Only time will tell. A relationship is more than just a feeling, just words. It's about action, too. Right?"
"Yeah."
>"And we're both pretty rockin' in the Good Looks department."
>They share a laugh.
>The rest of their dance goes by in silence. A minute later, the music dies down.
>They separate. Tentatively. Reluctantly.
>She gives him an expectant, anxious look.

>>29200613
'You passed.'
>No, that didn't feel right.
"I... think you're ready. I'll vouch for you."
>Not quite as accurate as he'd like, but close enough.
>Clover sighs with relief. "You know it's kinda funny, but..."
>He waits for her to continue, but she just smiles at him and shakes her head.
>"Forget it. Thanks for the dance, Lance."
>She takes her leave and the girls watch her for a moment before looking to Lance.
"Uh, anyone wanna volunteer?"
>A black-haired girl, dressed in green with eyes to match, steps forward.
>"Me."
>Her voice is gruff, similar to Rainbow Dash's, and she immediately strikes him as the type that's not usually interested in guys like Blueblood.
>She takes hold of his hands, trying to mimic how he had stood with Clover, and it becomes apparent that she's more used to blitzes of the football variety than those of the ballroom.
"H-hey. Ease up on the grip. Let me just... there."
>Her face reddens as he finally sets them into a proper stance.
>"Ugh. This is so weird."
"You'll get used to it."
>"I guess..."
"You heard what I said to Clover, right?"
>"Ye-yeah!"
>The music returns.
"Alright. Just be honest."
>Her grip on him tightens and he swears he can feel her pulse pick up.
>"Ok."
"What's your name?"
>"Buttercup."
"Nice."
>Several minutes pass, the two of them dancing and talking before the music dies down once again.
>During that time, her tomboyish nature was revealed with all the subtlety of someone wearing a neon sign and prancing about with a megaphone.
>Not that it bothered Lance.
>But it also became apparent that she was bandwagoning and had no interest in Blueblood beyond using him to assert her femininity.
"Gonna have to disqualify you, Buttercup. Besides, you'd probably just end up suplexing him into a table."
>"No I wouldn't! I'd just punch him in the face."
>She shrugs her shoulders, a grin on her face.
>"But I'll bow out. You're not a bad dancer, Lance."
>If his toes weren't so sore, he'd probably say the same to her.

>>29200618
>Clover
>Buttercup
>Sylvia Silverstout
>Cleo Clementine
>Blackfire
>Blossom
>Of the 6, only Clover and Clementine made the grade.
>It was an enlightening experience, to say the least.
>Their motives overlapped; their behaviors, too.
>But, with every comparison came a contrast.
>Clover wanted a comfortable life, money only important in the sense that it gave her that.
>Blackfire desired a luxurious one. Her straightforwardness matched Clover's, but she was greedier.
>Buttercup wanted nothing more than to prove something to others.
>Silverstout, too. But Silverstout carried herself like a lady. No pretense. No sore toes.
>Clementine was similar, but, like Clover, she seemed prepared for Blueblood's particular shortcomings.
>Perhaps the most interesting encounter was the last.
>Blossom seemed the bookish sort; smart, with a love of knowledge and a natural affinity for leadership.
>One thing she said, stood out to him:
>"Blueblood strikes me as a very lonely person. He seems to despise the politics of being a man."
>And then, when all was said and done, she stopped him from giving his verdict.
>"Thank you for the dance."
>And walked away.
>Minutes later, Blueblood found him again.
>He looked perturbed.
>"You."
"Yeah?"
>"I'm... surprised. I didn't expect you to choose only two... let alone ones close to my taste."
'Would've been three, but...'
"Didn't go the way you hoped?"
>"Hmph. I expected you to slink away frustrated... yet..."
>Lance smiles as Blueblood's expression twists into a grimace.
"What can I say? If you need a wrench, I'll be the monkey that throws it."
>Though his eyes narrow, Blueblood manages a smile.
>"Well. They'll have their dance soon enough. Good work, Lance."
>He turns to leave,
"Blueblood."
>Looks over his shoulder,
"My name is Flash Sentry."
>Before waving dismissively,
>"Lance suits you better, Hero."
>And walking away, a hint of derision in his voice.
>Flash smiles, satisfied.

>>29200624
>A dainty cough and a light tap on his shoulder draws his attention to someone standing behind him.
"Ra-Rarity?"
>"My I have the next dance?"
"Uh, sure."
>But the music dies before they can even move into position.
>"Please give our orchestra a hand," comes the familiar voice of Captain Armor.
>The audience claps as the students file off the stage, Captain Armor taking a moment to applaud them as well.
>"As the orchestra switches out for a well deserved break, we'll keep you folks entertained in a longstanding Gala tradition: long-winded speeches."
>There's laughter as the Captain sweeps an arm out, his index finger directing the audience to his left.
>"And I've brought an expert, too. Please give a hand to Mr. Rusty Silverstout."
>Silverstout makes his way onstage amidst the laughter and applause, waving his hand dismissively.
>"Stay at the military business as long as I have, Shining Armor, and you'll learn to love the sound of your own voice, too. Certainly a better cure for insomnia than the whizzing of bullets and the smell of napalm."
>There's light laughter. A few minutes into Silverstout's speech, Octavia makes her way into the audience.
>Flash and Rarity make their way over to her.
>"Oh? Is Rarity your date?"
>"Not exactly. Or dance has been delayed for the time being."
>"Ah," Octavia looks to Flash, a small smile on her face. "Speaking of, I caught a glimpse of you dancing. You're quite popular."
>He rubs the back of his neck.
"Heh. It's not like that. Blueblood thought it'd be... Ah, well, whatever."
>"That reminds me," Rarity says, "I never knew you and Blueblood were... friends."
>He frowns in contemplation.
"Not really?"
>Her next words are cut off by the sounds of laughter.
>"...once you get a few more bars and some hair on your chest, that is."
>Shining Armor laughs, combing a hand through his hair, "I hope none of those are gray, sir."
>Another round of laughter, with even Silverstout getting a light laugh in.

>>29200630
>"Yes, well, my... heh. In my day... I... heh."
>He slouches over the podium.
>"Hehe... My... I... heheheh..."
>Shining Armor glances about before taking a step towards him. "Are you alright, sir?"
>"N-no... I... heheheheheheheh! I can't... no! It's... I've been heheheh!"
>The audience begins to mutter; Silverstout pushes off of the podium, prompting Shining Armor to try to grab hold of him.
>"Sir-!"
>"N-no," Silverstout screams, pushing out of his grip, "St-stay back! I hehehh! Infected! Keheh!"
>He stumbles off the stage, the audience taking a frightful, reflexive step back.
>Octavia and a few others rush to the fallen man's side.
>"Mr. Silverstout! Are you hurt? Can you-"
>"Get back," the man shouts, rising to his feet and stumbling forward. "It's... you have to run-hunheheh. Or... y-you'll die."
>He slumps over, collapsing to his knees.
>"No. It's... To think it would end..."
>Flash's eyes widen at the sight.
>What once was a man, had suddenly turned into a monstrosity.
>The creature, a lanky thing of blood red skin and beady eyes, sat cradling itself.
>He wondered if anyone else saw that Silverstout was no more; if they could even see that haunting, jagged smile on its face.
>"Ahehe... heh..." It rises to its feet.
>"Mr. Silverstout?"
>And looks directly at Flash. And, for a brief second, its form flickers. Becomes clearer.
>It's at this time that he realizes Rarity has been pressed against him.
>Because she lets out the loudest scream he's ever heard.
>"Keheheh!" It bolts forward.
>Screaming, the audience backs away, but it pays them no mind.
>Flash feels his heart sink like a stone, the creature's manic laugh growing louder as it shambles closer and closer.
>He knew he'd die. And not just him...
'Rarity.'
>He looks to her, clinging at his shirt.
'She could... a shield.'
>The monster is close, now. Too close for anything but reflexive action.
>He considers taking a step back and... pushing her.

>>29200640
>Would she shake out of her daze and throw up a force-field?
>Or die?
'Who... cares?'
>He takes a step back...
>-Will you really let her die? Will you be complicit in her death?-
>...and pushes away from Rarity
>-I know. You want to live. But is this how you want to live? At the cost of her life?-
>His heart pounds faster...
>-To give your life for someone else is pretty hardcore.-
>...as he steps in front of her.
>-I know you have what it takes.-
>Before bolting towards the creature.
>-To put your life on the line and make it out alive!-
'What am I doing?!?!'
>The creature's laugh reaches a crescendo; it throws its arms out, preparing to embrace him.
>He tackles it to the ground, their bodies hitting the floor with a powerful thud.
>"KAHAHAHAH!"
>A flash of light engulfs them.
>And then... the world goes dark.
>[Stop. Processing. Yes... Activating Domain... Yes. Running Simulation... Error. Simulation run invalid.]
>[Activating BABEL. Yes. BABEL activation valid. Initiating. Participants... Error... Anomaly... Processing... Corrected.]
>[Participants: SILVERSTOUT and ZARATHOS]
~A Hero's wage is but a pittance in the face of righteousness.

Lot of green, but thought it was needed. Almost at the super power part, at least.

>>29200652
Awesome, always nice to see more content

>>29200652
Interesting. Now we need a pastebin.

>>29200652
intriguing

>>29202208