Dadonequus: Childrens of Chaos

>>29069040
Old thread: >>28987616

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Hey OP great work on doing it right this time and-
>Childrens

Nyx wants to go on a date with you.

And I'm going to have to drop this off again.
Once again if Elo and Tentacles have been bothering me lately trying to get me to continue my story.
I finally told them if yall wanted me to come back I would.
So: http://www.strawpoll.me/11884206

>>29069067
>Nyx
Fuck off to the Anonfilly thread

>>29069090
It was their idea, they set up this date.

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>>29069147
Whoa, a nyx picture that doesn't look that bad.
Uh.
We need more anoncolt art

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>>29064305
>I'm gonna be honest, I kinda want to see erfanon use the horn to go full eldritch abomination on some villain in the future.
That could be cool beans. The pitfall being ErfAnon's forte is the cartoon, and there's not exactly a representation of eldrich horror there-- or is there?

>>29064840
Not bad, I disagree with anon and the Elo/Eli about the pacing so far. That was an exciting introduction with 90% showing and 10% telling. There's plenty of time to firm up what's going on, but that was a good squishy intro.
Right off the bad you showed us who this Anon is by his actions in the moment, that was good. Discord gave a telling, but as exposition of his obfuscated motive so not so bad when he needs to be shoe horned in one way or another anyway. The OC unicorn I have to hold judgment on, but her actions were well played.

The dialog is a little stiff, and you could describe scenery a more boldly and colorfully.

It's not shit, I'd give you a 7/10.

I am not being Nice. I'm not Nice. Back to your slave pen and write some more!

>>29065159
Curses, Elo, that Rarity was bomb ass. Eris being developed a bit more makes her even more charming, and the totally goody-horse-shoes discord is amusing as fuck, I dunno if you and Erf planned it out, but this chapter laid out the a firm foundation for Erf Anon's anal agony at PhD's Perfect Life.

>>29066771
WAA-HAHAHAHA Anon is taking strides toward the darkside. It's kind of sad seeing how he's disregarding scoots, when, as he asserted to himself she's the only one of CMC that hasn't ever been all up in his shit. Plus, he doesn't need to worry about her falling for him, but no-- the puppet master comes out and scoots is just
> useful

I wonder who threw the flower pot... mmm. Was special agent Bon Bon watching the whole time under command of sun bum?

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>>29069080
Dough Eat!
Due Ate!
DO IT!

>>29069395
>The dialog is a little stiff, and you could describe scenery a more boldly and colorfully.

The criticism is appreciated. Thank you!

>OC unicorn

Never said anything about her being a unicorn. KK is very complex. Her story is COMPLETELY separate from Ano's and she will only be seen occasionally in this story.
So don't kill me for that detail.

>Back to your slave pen and write some more!

Already started!

rip in piss gumball

gone and completely forgotten

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>The criticism is appreciated. Thank you!
You're welcome, and thank you for writing as well being big enough to take some honest critique, I now like you!

>>29069613
>. KK is very complex.
Uh-oh! I'll just have to trust for now that you're not aiming for some sort of sonic fan art marry sue horror.

> Already started!
Excellent!

>>29069631
>rip in piss gumball
Sigh, Gummy has been dead for a long time now. Gumball, I'm going to have to summon you! By the power invested in this particularly ugly image, let it be so!

>>29069631
Guess I'll starting writing again soon you win this time Elo
Anyways what have a missed while I was gone?

>>29069395
ErfAnon was kind of a fucking asshole and proved how much Chrysalis and Discord has influenced him. He just likes Scootaloo because she "has proven that she can be useful" constantly bitching about how HE deserves everything. Not only that but his last paragraph felt like something that a villain would say "I will prove to him that I'm the best pony, smartest, kindest and most heroic" like jesus, just the mere thought of PhD brings the worst out of ErfAnon.

But I agree that this was an amazing contrast, ErfAnon being the closest he has ever been to Discord, even having Starlight and Fluttershy as his leverage points against PhD who is clearly more immature now in the sense that he acts more like a light hearted colt, caring for his friends in a genuine way, constantly offering to help others, and enjoying his life at its fullest

Also, question for Erf, the white hairs thing. Was it a gag or something more deeper and related to ErfAnon's immunity to chaos magic?

Won't be posting my update tonight. I want to start doing a scheduled post of every 2 days, but school just sucks the motivation out of me.
Don't worry, I have chapter 2 done, but I want to edit some chunks and re-do some parts that felt bland for Anon's 'daily life'.

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>>29069890
>mfw he's actually starting to develop subconscious chaos abilities due to his close relationship with discord
not to mention the fact that discord essentially made him that body

>>29069890
it was a gag. And yeah, Anon is becoming more of an ass as the story progresses. It's not like he wants to be. But people tend to not notice when they are being a douche, even if they mean well. Anon has had the misfortune of being a plaything to Discord and then Chrysalis. It rattles his mind. To know that another Anon is being loved,snuggled, and not dealing with puppet master bullshit pisses him off because he thought thats how it'd be with him. Anon isn't perfect, and he loses his way a lot and gets jealous quite easily. But he still has a heart, and would still protect those he cares about. But that doesn't stop his way of thinking.

>>29070031
It's been so long since I've read your story. I'm going to have to take tomorrow's afternoon just to catch up.

>>29070031
Hell, if driven to utter madness. His way of being a hero would be to destroy every universe but his to remove those villains before destroying every villain in his equestria. He'd challenge even Discord , accusing him to being a danger to Fluttershy and all the shebang. But this ia of course, a mega worst case scenario that he'd still end up losing then. If you put Anon in a more positive enviroment with maternal being, his attitude would get better. As for Scoots being "useful". to him, she is, but in a calmer state he's glad that she actually likes him enough not to shit on him and would in fact do something for her if something made her upset, just aa he always has. Of course, this also feeds his ego.

>>29070074
prepare for a ride then. alt universe shenanigans and Anon becoming more of a shitty pony

>>29070031
>Puppet Master bullshit
Pardon me, but ErfAnon himself came off as a puppet master in several parts of his mad rambling. He really is acting and thinking more and more like Discord, and the perfect example was how he saw Scootaloo, as a tool and nothing better.

Also, what the fuck was up with the flower pot? Where did it come from?

>>29070102
another gag depending

Yes, Anon is also quite the puppet master. Doesn't meam he realized that he's been that bad. Throughout the story Anon has been called on for doing stupid shit that he doesn't realize he's doing. Or worse, encouraged to keep it up. It's a cauldron of bullfuckery that keeps boiling due to more and more shit added into it.

>>29070134
depending on what?

>>29070134
>Erfanon will eventually go blow up because of all this
>Everyone not Discord or Chrysalis will start hating him
>Erfanon goes full surperior Iron Man
>Meanwhile PhD starts becoming Captain America

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>>29070222
>>Everyone not Discord or Chrysalis will start hating him
That would be very bad, because he just might take Chrysalis up on her world domination offer at that point.
All according to plan.

>>29070222
>Captain America
That's actually quite fitting

>>29069806
>sonic fan art marry sue horror.
Nah. I just mean that her story is A LOT bigger than what will happen here. I've been working on her story in my head for over a year now.

>I now like you!
Daaaw! <3

>>29070841

>Putting your thoughts to the side for now, and embracing your excitement for a second chance at life, you make another attempt to stand.
>This time you are more careful, keeping balance on all four legs, and slowly rising. After getting comfortable with standing, you attempt your first step. While a bit wobbly, you don't fall, so you count that as a win in your book. Now for your second…third…fourth…
>A good minute of walking in circles in the grass was all you needed to master it, so you kick it up a notch by transitioning into a trot. From there, you move into a full on gallop, going this way and that way, simply enjoying how fast you were now that you were a pony. It was a liberating experience, just to move so fast.
>After you've had your fair share of running around like an idiot, you start to move back to KK.
>Coming to a stop near the mirror that was still there, you start to stretch to relieve the tenseness that built up in your body during your run.
>During the stretch you feel…that's interesting.
>You walk to the reflective side of the mirror. Turning sideways in front of it reveals a set of fairly large wings on your back. You're not just a pony, you’re a Pegasus. HOLY SWEET FUCK THAT'S AWESOME! Awesome enough to make up for the loss of your hands and feet. Wait. Can you… Focusing on the muscles in your back, you try to get them to move.
>As hard as you might try, you can only get them to twitch. Well, not everything can be mastered as easily as walking, but that didn't matter cuz now you have wings. FUCKING WINGS!
>Regardless of that though, there were still so many questions on your mind, so you might as well ask them while you could.
>Calming yourself a bit, you turn to KK who was…still sitting in the same spot, looking at you with that same smile. Odd.
“So, how's this whole ‘second chance’ thing gonna work?”
>This seemed to take KK by surprise.
>”Hm? Discord didn't tell you?”
>Discord?
“Who is Discord?”

>>29070984
>Your statement causes KK to mumble under her breath, so that you couldn't hear.
>”Hmph. Discord. ‘Master of Chaos’. More like ‘Master of Predictability’. Not even the decency to introduce himself. Well we’ll just fix him up, in that case.”
>KK returns her attention to you.
>”Well, to inform you a bit, that spirit that you made the deal with, his name is Discord and he is not the reason you are here right now. You were actually brought here at my request. You see, I know what it is like to be in your situation. Unloved, pathetic, lonely.”
>You listen intently to her words, each one pulling at a string in your heart. You never want to live like that ever again.
>”So, as a good interdimensional traveler, I help those that I can along the way of my journey, and you just so happened to be in such a position, so I had Discord go and make a deal with you. That is why you're REALLY here.”
>Wait, interdimensional traveler?! How is that…actually, never mind. You were done questioning stuff. You were taken to a magical world of talking ponies and transformed into a Pegasus, so for the sake of ease, you were just gonna accept that sky's the limit in this world, and move on.
>”But to answer your question of how this will work, I will need the missing piece of the puzzle. One moment if you please, Ano.”

>>29070995
>KK stands and gracefully glides over to an empty spot of the field, not too far from you. She rises to her back two hooves, raises her hoof above her head, then dropping to all fours again, slams her hoof into the ground with great speed, causing the earth under her to crack.
>Not far in front of KK, a tall, slim pillar of stone shoots up from the ground as soon as her hoof makes contact with the it. Standing up straight, she flips her long, straight hair. KK walks over to it very slowly, and once she reaches it, gives it a dainty tap.
>The block slowly shatters outward from the point that was tapped. After a few seconds, the cracking stops, and whole block crumbles slowly to the ground in a million pieces. As the pieces fall away, they begin to reveal a figure trapped inside the block.
>It was Discord. He was frozen in the position of him holding up one finger, probably in protest of something. When about half of the block is gone, he falls forward out of it, slamming his face flat into the ground.
>The whole scene was quite entertaining to watch, making you laugh. As soon as you do though, Discord poofs in front of you. Anger covering any positive feature on his face. Guess that goodie two shoes personality was just an act.

>>29070999
>”What exactly are you laughing at?”
>He spoke in the harshest tone that you have ever heard. And you've heard a lot in your life of crime. This guy wasn't messing around at all.
>You tense up. He did say that he was “all-powerful” back on Tetra, so you best not piss him off and risk the chance of being sent back. Weather he could actually do that or not was unknown to you, but better safe than sorry.
“N-nothing! I was laughing at nothing.”
>Discord narrows his eyes at you.
>”That's what I thought.”
>Just then, he is warped away from you and replaced with KK. Still with that smile.
>”Don't worry about him. He thinks that he can control everyone that he wants though brute force, but don't judge him too harshly, he's just really insecure about being nice.”
>Discord poofs back next to KK, and OH, if looks could kill. KK doesn't even look at him.
>”I am NOT–”
>Before he can finish talking, he explodes into glitter and confetti, making you jump. That actually concerned you a bit. HE JUST FUCKING EXPLODED!
>”As I was saying, don't be afraid of him. He won't do anything too out of line, so don't let him intimidate you.”
>…
>Y'know what? Fuck it. Sky is DEFINITELY THE FUCKING LIMIT! She seemed to be perfectly fine with him exploding, so why the fuck shouldn't you?
>Discord pops back into existence once again. Well, he isn't dead. In fact he's treating all of this teleporting and him exploding as if it was completely normal.
>…
>On a side note, you really, REALLY hoped that you didn't just get dragged into a world that makes people randomly explode.
>…
>God, what have you gotten into?

>>29069040
I like the OP pic, make it look like FS and Discord have a kid who happen to be green.

>>29071005
This was an improvement over the last update, as a little advice, try to make Anon a little more involved when you have situations like these where it is 100% related to him

>>29071005
Ugh. I feel like these first few updates might drag out a bit, but they're also kinda necessary for explaining why Ano is there.

Whatever. The more I look at what I write, the more I hate it, so I'm gonna leave that up to you guys.

>>29071078
>This was an improvement over the last update
Thx

>Try to make Anon a little more involved when you have situations like these
Noted! Thank you.

I took a glance of the greens a missed while I was gone and man it looks like someone put down several novels in front of me.

>>29069395
>Not bad, I disagree with anon and the Elo/Eli
God damn it I make one typo and already somebody latches on to it

Where the fuck is Gumball?

ehh...I don't have it in me to write tonight. I perhaps burnt myself out. Don't worry however. I should be juiced up for tomorrow

>>29072194
rip

>>29072194
Fug

>>29069040
>using the same image

>>29071079
That's the exact feeling I felt when I first started to write. I felt confident in what I wrote, but overall it was rushed, just so I could get to a part I was hyped for.
Then I reread it and absolutely hated what I wrote. Take your time and make sure to be descriptive when necessary, and explain what needs to be explained.
Make the characters feel alive and unique, add some description for actions thoughts, and environment.
It'll drag on and take some time, but when the ball starts rolling, it'll all make sense and tie in together for yourself and for the reader.

>>29072595
relax, its wintertime. Its par for the course

Who do you guys think the next crossover will be?

>>29074369
Nah nigga, let erf and elo to keep what they are doing, that is more than enough. I like this indirect crossover, where PhD seems to be more focused on meeting Scrappy again and ErfAnon hating the young prince despite never meeting him

I fucking love Elo's Rarity, she always gets me so fucking giddt

>>29073346
(Thank FUCK! I thought it was just me.)

>KK finally acknowledges the existence of Discord by turning to him.
>”Ah! Discord! Where have you been? We've been looking for you for a while now.”
>This only serves to make Discord even angrier. Steam started blowing out of his ears.
>”You! You–”
>Well, if what you were told was true, this guy was the kind that acts like he's all that, but does nothing to prove it. In that case, might as well play along.
“Yeah. It's a pretty childish move to avoid someone like you were.”
>Oh yeah, your smug levels were off the charts.
>Discord’s eyes literally catch on fire as he turns to you. He moves his face just mere inches from yours, but you don't even bother flinching. According to KK he wasn't gonna do shit.
>”WHY YOU LITTLE–”
>KK quickly steps behind you, and wraps her forelegs around you in a protective manner. You blush slightly.
>”Uh uh, Discord. No bad words. Not in front of…”
>KK pauses. You could practically feel the smug emanating off of her. Whatever she was about to say would do it in for Discord, and you couldn't wait! You hated that whole “tough” persona thing that some people try, and wanted to see this guy get his arrogant ass knocked to the ground for it. You were having good fun with this.
>”Your new son.”
>All of your smugness and enthusiasm drains from you instantly. Looking over to Discord, it seems that the same goes for him. Steam had stopped blowing from his ears and his eyes had completely fizzled out, leaving only the face of a defeated man.
“Wait, what do you mean by ‘son’?”
>She couldn't possibly be suggesting that THIS guy was going to be your Dad. While he was all-powerful, he didn't seem like the best candidate that might be available in this world. That and you managed to piss him off within the first few minutes of actually knowing him.

>>29075294
>Discord turned his gaze to KK, quickly covering up his defeated look with an annoyed one.
>”Yes KK. What EXACTLY do you mean by that?”
>”Simple.” she says “You will act as a paternal role model for Ano from here on out. You will also provide him with adequate living arrangements as any good parent would.”
>…
>Is she insane!? You pissed off this, what you will assume to be, god off, and now she wants to sent you home with him?! You were fine with making fun of him while KK was around, since she seemed moderately strong from what you saw her do, but if you're alone with this guy, he's bound to pull some buttfuckery.
>But you couldn't even voice a single word before Discord speaks up.
>”What?! It isn't my job! You were responsible for him being here, so it should be YOUR job, if anyone's.”
>Discord, was on the defensive about this. He didn't want some stupid brat to look after, on top of all of his scheduled chaos.
>You, too, speak up. Discord seemed like he was someone with the potential to be a psychopath, so you needed to get out of this.
“Yeah, you just can't send me with this guy! He's crazy! He looked like he wanted to kill me a few seconds ago!”
>KK lets out a sigh.
>”First of all Discord, I may have asked you to bring Ano here, but I was not the one who made the deal with him, you were. If you really looked into that deal, you would know that it leaves the dealer responsible for the consumer’s new life.”
>A stack of papers materializes in front of Discord. He takes the stack and begins to sift through it.
>”I might be responsible for him being here, but you are responsible for his life. And on top of that, you were the one who actually brought him to me, so YOU are technically responsible for all of this. Without you, none of this would have happened. I would have just let him go.”

>>29075301
>Discord, with the papers still floating in front of his face, raises a finger in protest and opens his mouth to speak, but no sound comes out. All of the papers fall to the ground with a soft thud. He just sat there, frozen in shock of his defeat.
>KK seems satisfied with her work and moves on to you.
>”As for you, little Ano, you don't have to go with him if you don't want to.”
>You let out a sigh of relief.
>”But that would undo the deal you made, sending you back to Tetra.”
>Your heart drops. That bitch. She was just playing nice!
“But that's not fair! I didn't agree to be his son!”
>KK, still behind you with her forelegs around you, gets close to your ear and speaks softly.
>”No, but you did agree to a new life. One that is to be provided by the dealer and creator of the deal.”
>A single sheet of paper materializes in front of you. It looked like a section of some kind of contract.
>”And as the creator of said deal, I am responsible for finding you a new guardian. The deal was that the closest being that is able to provide for you is to take that spot, and that so happens to be Discord. So, this is actually completely fair.”
>You read through the paper as best as you could. You picked up some words here and there, but most of it was words that you didn't know the meaning of. Regardless, about halfway down the page, you see it. Clear as day. It was exactly what she said about her finding you a guardian.
>But…she…FUCK! You wish you asked more about this “deal” before you accepted. It's not like you could’ve, you were being chased and Discord denied and other motives than him helping you out of the kindness in his heart. Either way, this was a lose, lose situation for you right now.

>>29075311
>Ugh… You know that you don't really have a choice here, and there is no doubt in your mind that KK knows that as well.
>You drop your head in defeat.
“I'll go with him.”
>As badly as you wanted to avoid that psychopath, you couldn't go back to Tetra. Not now that you're so close to a new life.
>”Good. You won't regret it.”
>You really doubted that that was true, but it didn't matter. You were in this now. Time to nut up or shut up.

>>29075319
Everytime you mention Tetra, I picture that character from thr wind waker

>>29075319
As always, keep practicing, think very well how your scenes will play out, who will say what and how. What is the purpose of that scene or dialogue.

Also, is KK a reference to K.K. Rider?

>>29076402
As always, the criticism is appreciated.

No, it's not a reference to K.K. Rider.
Just a convenient nickname to replace her abomination of a real name.
Nice try though.

>>29074754
Me too, by far the best Rara I have read

Now that ErfAnon got hyper salty about PhD, when are we having another cute friendship moment with PhD and Scrappy and erfanon CMC?

>And so you both continued the trek to Lyra's house.
>In your mind, you couldn't even believe why he'd be considered lovable, the other you that is, the guy was gonna taze you and possibly beat the shit out of you because you kissed his girl AFTER she went all crazy on you. It wasn't your fault she didn't let you escape in the first place. In fact, it could very well be similar to Sunburst, at least in your mind. A fucking shit of a person who betrayed their friend and then ends up with royalty due to some ridiculous circumstances.
>And then your mind wandered a bit to Starlight, you wondered how'd she would handle this whole Sunburst business. Maybe it's best you not tell her. Or maybe, you need to get specifics out of that jackass so you can figure out how to proceed.
>What a fucking mess. Two little fucks who have the admiration of royalty despite being little shits. Meanwhile you're trying to reform a major villain and you're getting shit on. What a ridiculous joke.
>"Anon?...Are you ok?" Scootaloo asks, still worried about you. Snapping out of your daze.
"W-wha?...ahh, sorry Scoots. Kinda just zoned out"
>"Anon, are you sure, really really sure that you're ok? I don't know if it's all training or stress or both. But you don't really have it together right now. Maybe you should go take a nap."
>Dammit, you didn't need a nap. Just relax Anon. you must be looking pretty retarded right now.
"Nah, just deep into thought. I have a lot on my mind Scoots. Everyday is a new challenge for me."

>>29077397
>"Yeah...it looks that way. Anon, can I ask you a personal question?" Scootaloo's expression, she was looking at you with concern and curiosity
"Personal?...umm, yeah sure I guess."
>At first you suddenly thought she'd ask about your true origins. But nah, there was already a set in past. She couldn't know about your human side. Dammit, just let your mind ease up Anon, your letting this new info get to you.
>"Well, ummm, how do I put this...uhh..Well. How do you handle everything? I mean, you're Discord's kid, but you seem totally ok around him, which is weird because he treats anypony not Fluttershy like we're all dog dirt. You have bug breath in your basement and she can't be fun. And yet you're trying to reform her, I don't even think Twilight would try that. Then there's all the heroic stuff you do. Like when Sweetie Belle told us when you saved that entire other dimension. It's all so cool, I mean..you didn't save the world as many times as Rainbow Dash did but..It's still mega cool. That's why I'm asking how you can handle it. To me...well" Scootaloo looks down, she's feeling bad about something all of a sudden..but what?
"What? What's wrong?"
>"Well, I mean. I'm not innocent either. I gave you that trouble with that whole fan club war thing. So I guess I feel really bad about all the trouble we gave you, calling you high and mighty and stuff.You didn't really deserve it, at least, I don't think so. " Scootaloo looks around and moves in close to you to whisper in your ear "Don't tell anypony, but even though I wanna join the wonderbolts too and hang out with Rainbow Dash and be like her and stuff?...I'd be scared to do all the stuff you're doing right now."

>>29077502
>....she what?
>Well, you knew they were sorry before. But it didn't really feel too heartfelt to you that time. But now? Here was Scoots telling you, on her own, that she was not only sorry, but that she'd never be able to do what you do.
>...she actually appreciated what you do.
>For some reason, a tear comes out of your eyes.
"Scoots, do you really mean all that?"
>Scootaloo nods, feeling embarrassed about what she admitted "Yeah, I screw up sometimes at trying to be brave and stuff. I mean, I am pretty brave..but..well...I guess not brave enough to deal with your dad or Chrysalis. That's why I am really REALLY sorry about anything I did to ake things harder on you, especially anything with Scrappy. We're trying to help you, I mean that. But I guess we didn't consider how much you do compared to what we do. Does that make sense? Because, umm..Look, let me make it simple. I'm sorry, especially about anything I've done." Scootaloo was having a hard time keeping it simple. But that was enough. You rushed up and gave the caramel pony a hug.
"..Scoots, thanks, no..really..thanks. You took a load off my mind."
>She did, all this time you felt all three of the CMC were just bagging on you. even after they apologized, you felt the way they inserted themselves into your plans was beyond annoying. But now you saw, at least with Scoots. That they..or maybe just she...was trying to help without wanting to cause you any trouble. And to be your friend while trying to understand your stress. You could.....you could do with that. You were fine with that..
>Scootaloo felt a little awkward, she didn't expect this reaction, but she pats your back anyway before you pull away with a smile on your face "Y-you're welcome Anon"

>>29077587
>You felt a warmth in your heart. A warmth you hadn't felt in awhile, well, not since you last snuggled with Fluttershy. And that warmth? Someone in town who was understanding of your strife. And it just so happened to be a Cutie Mark Crusader. How grand.
"Well, Scoots, it's...not all bad. You don't have to be TOO sorry. I mean.."
>You give her a smug smirk as you fiddle with your horn.
"I got this from Dad himself, it helps ease the stress since it's a once a day super magic horn."
>Scootaloo gazed at the horn, and moved her hoof to tap it before look at you with even more curiousness "Yeah, for some reason I forgot what this thing does. I guess it would make things easier. Oh! What super cool things have you used it for lately? Anything super heroic?"
"Have I, just..."
>Wait..no..just today you snowballed your own ass.
"Just...before I came back to this dimension. I used it to defeat the evil king versions of Flim and Flam."
>Scootaloo seemed a bit skeptical about that however, she didn't know all the details. "Really? I mean, thats neat. But it's Flim and Flam. How tough could they be?"
"Oh, trust me Scoots. They had the entire world at their disposal. They made a giant mech with the Alicorn Amulet at it's core. Very scary stuff, it was made of metal that was resistant to ALL kinds of magic. I created this punch ghost thing to pummel the living Tartarus out of it, like...a million hits a second"
>"Woah..That sounds AWESOME! I don't even think Rainbow Dash can buck that fast! I just have one question." Scootaloo was super impressed.
"What's that?"
>".....what's a mech?"
>Ahh, cute pony ignorance, her head tilt made it all the more adorable. You liked it.
"A mech is a giant machine that can move and attack and stuff. Like...Imagine if a minotaur was made of metal, huge, and had a pony on the inside controlling it, now imagine it shooting things like darts, rockets, and having drills for hands."

>>29077653
Scootaloo a best crusader, even if erfanon is a little shit

>>29077653
>".......woah. That sounds super dangerous. You beat that kind of thing?"
>You nod with a smirk
"Yuuuup"
>"Wooww...." Scootaloo looked super impressed...and yet "That's almost as cool as the time Rainbow Dash defeated Tirek with Twilight and the others. I saw her in the distance using this Rainbow Power thing. Super rad!"
>......goddammit Scoots.
>And yet, you couldn't be mad. Not at her for some reason. You knew her character, nobody was EVER going to take RD's place on her mantle. "Almost" was as close as you'd get with her.
>"Oh! Speaking of Rainbow Dash. Was there a Rainbow Dash in that other Equestria place?" Her eyes grew big when she asked this question, she was super excited and giddy for the answer.
"Oh, yeah actually."
>"I knew it! Was she the same? Was she different? How was she like?" Scootaloo was bouncing about, wanting to hear the answer.
"She was the chief of police of the...that version of Ponyville."
>Scootaloo immediatly stopped hopping as she cringed "ooohhhhhh...geez, not even the leader of the Wonderbolts? I don't even think we have a chief of police. Which means...ogh...Did she work for those dumb cheating ponies or something?"
>you nodded.
"Yeah, but she didn't actually like it. But she did like one of the perks. She..did sort of help out though. She got me to a few places I needed to go."
>"..ehhh...That's ok I guess, So uhh....Was I there?" She asked
"Probably, but I never ran into you. Sorry"
>"..That's probably good." she shuddered "I don't wanna know how I was like there anyway."
>That made you giggle, that type of reaction was cute. Hell, you were quickly forgetting your troubles with Scoots around. They were still there of course, but that other Anon guy? You'd just have to wait...but oh boy, once he comes for that revenge...he'll be the one who's done.
>No, for now...it was time to knock on Lyra's door.
"Welp, we're here"

>>29077806
short chapter. but, it's still cold. and even this electric blanket isn't doing too much for me. Or maybe it's also making me super sleepy. I can't say,

>>29077824
Also, dunno if anyone has noticed. But I've been, for quite some time now. combinbing my writings until I feel it settles a certain section as a chapter. Sometimes it can be long. Sometimes short. MEaning we are starting chapter 280 tomorrrow. Though we would have been well beyond that normally.

God...This story has become it's own show. hans't it? And, even though Scootaloo is not my favorite CMC. She always seems to end up being the best in my stories...or thats just opinion in and of itself.

>>29077831
Been enjoying it overall. Some parts I hate, some parts I love, but overall enjoying it.

Page 9 bump

>>29077831
There are up and lows and meh parts but I love your story, I really, really do

As for our writters, Erf and Elo seem like overall nice people who probably are fun to chat and hang out with. Gumball too but more reserved, Ben and Wanda seem a bit too autistic and Cookiefish, well, no offence man but you come off as a bit of a douche

>>29079274
Either you're spying on us... Or you're a fucking magician, because that's so accurate it hurts.
Implying you don't autistic for shits and giggles

>Your mum shrugs, serving herself another glass “But since I know that you never were an exemplary student, I suppose that we should thank that…how did you call him? Slob? Yeah, that slob of your ex for coming up with such a historically important name”
>”Aaaah! Zat would be one zing!” Aegia exclaims with as much excitement as her emotionless face allowed her to “Ze ozer would be zat he actually has a work…”
>”I didn’t know that collecting Power Ponies cards counted as a job, might as well try my luck with something like playing arcades and collect bits from the foals who watches me play” Aegia, Luna and Moonlight shares a laugh before the prench mare takes a sip of her cider
>But Aegia quickly spits it out, looking at her glass with disgust “Zis cider is terrible, I never believed zat I would drink a worse cider zan ze one made by ze yaks… what happened to ze bottle zat I brought from Ponyville?”
>”Luna…that’s what happened” Moonlight replies with an unamused tone as she glared at your mom, who happily flies to where they were
>”You act as if you didn’t drink of that bottle too…” Luna replies with some offence in her voice “In fact, you drank like half of the bottle before I could even get a single drop of that delicious cider…”
>Aegia raises an eyebrow, giving both Luna and Moonlight a stoic glare ”And what happened to ze bottles of cider zat I brought from Prance?”
>”Luna…”Moonlight says with a stoic voice before serving more cider into her glass “But meh, cider is cider…”
>”Aaah, yes, that was entirely on my fault, but what do you want me to say? That was some of the most exquisite cider I’ve ever tasted, and as the princess of the night, I have had my fair share of cider” Luna drinks another glass of cider in a single gulp, immediately serving herself more “And yes, this cider is horrible, but as Moonie here said, cider is cider, so bottoms up!” Aaand there it goes another glass

>>29079274
Elo is a shithead and I want to punch him in the man cunt

>>29079652
>You and Rarity were speechless and the whole scene, Rarity you guess from watching the princess of the night being so…un-princess, and you…
>You simply couldn’t believe how much your mom could drink, like this was on a new whole level, she probably was going for the 7th or 8th glass and she was still completely fine, no signs of being drunk, or even a little dizzy…
>Not even at your peak you would be able to match your mother in a drinking competition, heck, you were sure that Eris would fail at your mom’s liver of steel.
>”Oh” Aegia finally shrugs, smiling briefly before returning to her emotionless usual self “Zen ze rumors about ze talent of ze princess of ze night when it comes to decimating bottles of cider were true…”
>”Cider AND wine…” Moonlight rolls her eyes as she chugs another glass in a single gulp “But meh, don’t worry, because after my shift is over, we go to Golden Apple’s bar…”
>”Oui, I look forward to zat, especially when it’s ze element of loyalty’s turn to pay ze tab…” Aegia chuckles as she gives RD a mischievous look
>”What?! Oh no! Don’t look at me!” RD quickly drops the conversation that she was having with Fluttershy and flies to protest against Aegia and Moonlight’s proposa l” Last time I treated you two, you ended up drinking my whole monthly check! I had to survive by doing mail delivery for a week!”
>Moonlight shrugs and serves herself another glass of cider ”It’s not our fault that you are the worst card player of the continent…”
>”Rainbow Dash!” Rarity finally speaks up, not looking pleased by this last statement “We have discussed this matter before, you simply have to lay off that nasty habit of yours, we all know that card games and other luck based entertainment is simply not something that you can manage”
“Yeah…”
>You speak up too, remembering how RD fared against you in all of the games that you played together

>>29079667
“You are super cool RD, but cards? Nuh-Uh, I bet that a rock could play better than you…in fact, as Rarity said, you stink at pretty much anything that involves luck…”
>”Me?!” RD protests, looking at both of you and Rarity with some annoyance “Those guys are a buncha cheaters! Who the hay gets a royal flush FIVE times in a row!”
>”Did I hear right?” Luna takes off from the ground, getting closer to RD with that creepy smile that she gave to Eris “Did you just call me a cheater? I sure hope that it was just something that I heard wrong due to my age, because I don’t think that you actually called your princess of the night a “cheater””
>”N-NO!” RD frantically shakes her head “I-I said that you guys where a bunch of charts …yeah…because you guys are like, super mysterious when we play cards!”
>”I thought that too…” Luna smirks and nods to herself, gently landing on the ground…and drinking a whole glass of cider again “Now why don’t you and the girls go and prepare the deck, I have some business to discuss with the element of generosity…”
>”Y-yes ma’am!” RD gives Luna a military salute and dashes off to the table
>Aegia just chuckled at the whole scene and flied away to help RD with the deck of cards.
>”Moonlight, you should go too…” Your mom’s tone became a little more…regal and authoritative…huh… “But before that, would you be so kind as to give me my list?”
>”As you command, my princess…”Moonlight takes a sheet of paper from her armor, you could see that there was a lot of stuff written on it, but you couldn’t read what “Now if you excuse me…” The bat mare makes a bow to Luna and you before going to the table and serving everyone in her group more cider.
>That sudden change of attitude…it made you worried to say the least
“M-Mom? Is everything okay? Y-You aren’t mad because I got send to detention, are you?”

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>>29079274
>come off as a bit of a douche
Where in the world would you get such an assumption? Did I type something that upset you to a degree?

>>29079673
>”Well, I didn’t know that you misbehaved at school, and yes, we will have to talk about that later, but…” Luna shakes her head, and gives the now nervous Rarity a serious glance “I am not angry, it’s just that businesses should be addressed with the seriousness that they deserve, now…Rarity, am I correct?”
>Rarity frantically nods and if that wasn’t enough, she bows to Luna “Yes, you are certainly correct, your highness…w-what do y-you need me for?”
>”At ease, Miss Rarity, this is nothing to be worried about, in fact…” Luna gives a confident smile to Rarity, placing her right front hoof on the white unicorn’s shoulders “What am I about to say should be a matter of great celebration for you…”
>Rarity looks to Luna, then to you and finally to Luna again “B-but your highness, being in the presence of the rulers of Equestria is already a motive of celebration for me…b-but I-I am getting a little far ahead, please…” Your poor friend bows again to Luna “Do continue, your highness…”
>”Tell me, Rarity…”Luna continues “Am I correct in assuming that you were the pony who designed those wonderful shirts and ties that my son loved to wear?”
>”Why, yes! Those were a little gift from moi to the young Prince! Hmm, now that you were so kind as to mention them…” Rarity looks to you with a look that told you that she was curious about something “May I ask you, Prince Anon, why you aren’t wearing any of the clothing that I made for you? And please, be honest, I’m not angry or anything of the sorts, it’s just that…well, call it…curiosity, and my curiosity just wants to confirm something that keeps floating in my mind”
“Oh! Well…I-It’s just that…uhhhm…since I’ve started training with RD, and Moonlight and Aegia and…”
>You look to Luna and give her a smile which she returns whole heartedly
“My mom, I-I have…w-well, how do I put it? Hmmm…okay, I think that I have lost some weight so those shirts are now too big for me…and they look kinda soggy when I wear them now…”

>>29079798
>”Thank you, that’s exactly what I suspected, but with that said, I have to say something in regard of your statement of “losing some weight” well, it’s more of a little advice…” Rarity gives you a glance complete with a sultry smile “That is, if you don’t mind that little old me snoops again into matters that are not of my concern”
“N-No…I-I don’t m-mind…”
>You try your best to cover your blush…but you failed miserable since your whole was as red as a freshly picked apple
>“Do not undersell yourself, my young prince” But Rarity still held that enticing expression….ooooh….” I have purposefully held myself on commenting about the effectiveness of the physical training that Rainbow has made you go through…”
“Huh…r-really? Why?”
>Rarity lets out a small giggle and caresses your mane “That is because I do not believe that one should constantly praise how good a pony looks, that always generates an unwanted and frankly nasty boost on their egos, but your little attitude did bother me, you have done much more than just “losing some weight” if you don’t mind me saying this, I think that you are definitely en-route to become a dashing stallion.”
>”So with that said…” Luna speaks up, her tone this time was a little softer “I’m sure that you have noticed that my beloved son is in dire need of a new wardrobe, and based on the letters that my sister gets from the princess of friendship and the honestly impressive work that you did with those adorable shirts, I can’t think of a better pony than you, Miss Rarity, to handle this task…”
>Your mom handles the sheet of paper to Rarity who gently and elegantly grabs it with her magic and reads it “Oh my! Do you mean that moi will have the honor of designing the entire wardrobe of the little prince?! That is, simply FANTASTIC!” The white unicorn’s didn’t wait to show her happiness, stomping her hooves in the excitement of the moment

>>29079813
>”Why yes, I thought that I made myself clear on that…” Luna chuckles “But there are some details about this request that needs more privacy to discuss. So why don’t you head with me, that way we can go over the details with a glass of the finest wine that the castle has to offer and a game of cards with some friends.”
>”Oh, yes, yes, yes and a thousand times yes! I’ll even shuffle the deck and bring my best game, I’m quite the connoisseur in caravan! Oh my, oh my! An actual request from the royal family! This is the best day of my life! Eeeeeeeeee!” And with that…Rarity runs faster than a fighter jet and sits at the table, taking the cards out from RD and furiously starts to shuffle them.
>Luna lets out a little laugh “That’s the attitude that I like to see, now…” Your mom turns to you and pats your head “Don’t think that I want you to leave, but this is actually a surprise that I have for you, my little star and besides, cider and cards weren’t made for foals…”
“H-Hey! I’m sure that I could handle a card game just fine, thank you! But yeah…whatever…I get it….”
>”D’awwww, I just love when you puff your little cheeks like that…” Your mom gives you a hug and nuzzles a little into your mane before putting you back on the ground “But as I said, you are too young for this kind of entertainment, with that said, would you mind if I visit your dreams tonight?”
“I-I’m old enough to play…wait what? Sure, you know that I don’t mind, but…uuuhm…Now you got my curious…why-“
>”I’m sorry my little star, but since this is a surprise, let’s just say that I have something important to tell you, call it, a realization, but…you will have to wait to see what it is…” Luna caresses your mane before leaving to the table
>Well…now you were on your own now and while it was tempting to go where Cherrywood, your mom Celestia and Discord were…maybe you should use the fact that your little bat is distracted to say hi to your other friends

Okay, I have to go out, so I will post the rest of the update either tonight or tomorrow morning. Feel free to post your feedback though, as always, I'm eager to see what you think

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>>29077806
hhhhnnggg
scoots is too adorable
this update was adorable

Fuck you people

Huh? Where the fuck is everyone?

>>29080884
They all were offended by this >>29080609 and left.

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>>29071444
>God damn it I make one typo and already somebody latches on to it
Kek, but it's so good. Elo made a reference himself to an Eli on top of your typo hypo hip hippo.

>>29071800
>is Gumball?
Dead dead-dead, Gummy is--- oh wait, he just twitched, I gotta get muh hammer BRB.

>>29075294
>(Thank FUCK! I thought it was just me.)
No U, I myself am one of those faggits who need remind himself he's got words to contribute. Which, when you combine with me being an ENTJ @ 52,19,39,6 each +/- 5 per analysis of differentials... ehhh... Not muh blog, what I mean thru comparative exhibition is that we all got head issues, bro; only thing to do with them is laugh and realize the silliness of it all.

And let me say, you're doing nothing wrong in developing your characters and world and situation. It's not boring, it's fun. Take your time, and remember we don't know what's in your head, it's all an adventure of exploration to us.

Same to you Ben, you might hate your story, but I sure don't.

>>29077806
B-but you said you weren't gunna post! Erf, you're not an iron man, you're made of the strongest metal: DIAMOND!

Fuck, that scoots and anon scene--particularly with the puppet master vibe of the previous scene--was so brutal adorable it gave me type 47 diabetes: the evolved diabetes that slays you and then revives you as a zombie 4 seconds after infection.

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>>29077824
>but, it's still cold. and even this electric blanket isn't doing too much for me.
Fuck, man. Do you use your computer at a desk? Rig up a kotesu with a cheep space heater and a wooly blanket. Tack blanket to the apron of the table, but in the middle of the blanket so that it drapes down and looks nice + double insulates.

Have the blanket long enough that it terminates a with a good 2' or longer lap. Sit there and roast your legs like a boss of heat.

If you're using a laptop in bed or something -> get an under cover electric blanket. They are MUCH more electric->thermal efficient simply due to their relative orientation to the subject.

Obvious when you consider that the electric blanket on TOP means it's trying to heat BOTH you and the ambient air above it, where as if the blanket is an under type--and under you-- then it's trying to heat you + the insulation of your mattress under it -> the vast majority of the heat goes to where you want it to go: YOU!

I use one myself because I'm a cheep bastard.

Seriously though, they have under cover electric blankets @ wallmart, get one while you fight off the eggs for greater justice.


>>29079859
>Okay, I have to go out,
Delicious update so far, Eli! I liked the exploitation of the princess of the night being good at all things nightly, and your OC,OC + RD + Luna yammering was a bit confusing, but I could follow the dialog just fine with how themselves they all are. And Rarity? Yummy.

Anon just being there for the ride was a'okay, nothing wrong with your anon, I just like your OC and Rarity and RD more.

>>29080884
>Huh? Where the fuck is everyone?
Recovering from Erf-scoots induced type 47 diabetes.

>>29081813
Naw dude, I love the story I have now. And that's with rereading it and seeing what I could have done better. I like the results.

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>>29081876
>Naw dude, I love the story I have now.
My bad for misunderstanding then, and cool as the ice outside muh studio apartment that you love your story now!

Nothing wrong with self improvement either, there's great joy in the struggle to grow and improve.

>>29081224
So all of the lurkers are a bunch of pussies?

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>>29081925
>More footfag shit

>>29082627
Well, I see no other explanation for them leaving so quickly

>KK slides out from behind you and casually ambles towards Discord.
>”I can tell that you're upset Ano, but look on the bright side, you've learned a very important lesson from this.”
“And what’s that?”
>You mumbled under your breath. You were dreading this whole situation, and you didn't even care if showed.
>”Nothing ever comes without a price.”
>You allow yourself a pity chuckle.
“Heh. Maybe. Or maybe I just learned not to make deals with strange dragon creatures.”
>As much of a joke as you made out of it, you would take her advice to heart.
>KK lets out her own gleeful giggle.
>”There you go, that's the spirit! Have a little fun!”
>She reaches Discord, but before proceeding, she turns back to you.
>”Ano,” she says in a much gentler tone, making you curiously look up.
>She was smiling with that same smile as before, but it was…different somehow. More…motherly than before. Not that you'd know what that's like, but it was very comforting, nonetheless.
>”Everything is going to be okay. Because, believe it or not, I actually want things to go well for you. You remind me of when I was young, and…well, I just never really want to see someone in a situation like you were in ever again.”
>A tear falls from her right eye, but she kept that same smile all the while.
>”And soon enough, you'll know how I feel as well.”
>Tears are steadily trickling from her eyes, but she stands strong, not even letting her voice waver.
>”I know that you're mad that I tricked you, but you'll see that it was for the best, in due time.”

>>29082764
Get the fuck out.

>>29082764
>That…fuck…you don't know how that made you feel. You just sat there, shocked at that whole display.
>That made you want to cry a bit. Not because she might actually understand what you've been through, but because she actually seemed to care about you.
>Someone…actually cares.
>Your mind was numb. The mere thought of such a thing seemed so surreal to you.
>”Until we meet again, Ano.”
>KK turns to Discord and rises to her rear legs. She gently boops him on the nose, even adding in her own light hearted “boop” sound for the action.
>Before you can say anything, you are blinded by a bright flash of white.

Alright guys, imma take this real slow with short updates. Just to give myself time to (hopefully) improve my writing as I go

>>29082779
Welcome back shitposter anon
>>29082783
Shit seems pretty mysterious, KK is up to some weird shit I bet

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>>29082627
>So all of the lurkers are a bunch of pussies?
No, I think it's because the mods are faggots. F.ex, they just belieted a perfectly work safe image & post I uploaded, fuck if I even know why. It was just sunset in an apron with a ladle with some stew in it. I must have triggered a vegan or pure homosexual or something, fuck if even know.

But anyway, if the mods are militantly banning posters of this thread because the mods are literally miserable faggots with nothing better to do, it would sure explain allot.

>>29082720
> footfag
Son, I thought I raised you better than that! BONDAGE != foot fetish.
Women have feet. Trust me, I'm not like the others. I won't mislead you! Now, when you tie a woman up, she still has feet, understood? The feet do not come off just because you tie her up, not even once. Does this make you a foot fag?

Even if you tickle her feet-- does this make you a foot fag?

And that image in particular, clearly the fedora who abducted sunset has a goal, and that goal is to extract flies shaped like musical notes from her quivering body.

This is, thus, clearly insectoconceptomorphaphilia porn, you miserable pleb.

Hopefully that will summon Gummy to correct my bastardization of Latin. Or who knows, the mods will ban this post, too, because cars and the clear understanding this is cumbustophilia presented most lewdly. Shit nigga, check out the combustion on that bitch.

>>29082783
>Alright guys, imma take this real slow
Do your thing, it's your story and your time, I appreciate it and all the posters who were banned by the insane mods do, too.

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>>29082938
>Trying to deny it
You make good reviews but your taste in fetishes belong in the dumpster

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>>29082952
O-oh-yeah?! Well, take a good look at this enlightened and effete cultured fetish material!

Here we see Sunset blazing fire out of her ass as she exists as a-- a-- thing!

I just told capitacha a street sign is a store front, HAH.

>>29082972
WOW!!!
You REALLY showed that capitacha who's boss!!!

>>29079660
Not my fault that I'm the best Jiggs main, just behind hbox. And that reformed Starlight Glimmer is a bland character.

Also, I'm drunk as all fuck, and I'm still drinking, so excuse grammar mistakes, I do love all of you.

>>29079819
>Or… you could see what are Moon Dancer and Twilight discussing with so much … passion… yeah… that’s the word alright.
>And it wasn’t because you didn’t want to see the cutie mark crusaders, those three were usually a lot of fun, but that argument had your curiosity.
>With your decision made, you walk towards the two mares…and Moon Dancer greets you with a smile on her face
>”Ah! Anon! Finally! I will prove that everything I’ve said is true!” Moon Dancer gives a smirk to Twilight and gives you a hug…
>”Would you at least say hi to him?!” Twilight replies with a sarcastic tone “It’s easy, you just need to do this “Hi Anon! How have you been?”” The purple princess looks towards eyebrows and huffs “See? It is THAT easy!”
>You raise an eyebrow and take a step back…okaaay…maybe this wasn’t the best idea that you ever had…
>Especially that you now remembered that Twilight was still giving visits to that jerk of Starlight, she even managed to make personal visits to Starlight’s jail…
“Hi Twilight, ehhh… long time no see, right? And…”
>You look at Moon Dancer and simply couldn’t resist the urge of giving her a smirk
“Moon Dancer, my friend! What’s wrong?! You got kicked out from the library again? I have told you that you can’t actually live in there!”
>”Can it, now it’s not the time…” Moon Dancer replies with annoyance before clearing her throat when she saw Twilight’s angry glare “I-I mean, Hello Anon…I haven’t seen you since…yesterday…”
>Awww, she was grumpy… again…
“Yeah, speaking of that, you aren’t having classes today, right? You know, since we are in a party and all that”
>”Actually…” Moon Dancer grins at Twilight “We are kind of having a class, call it an exam, but this won’t be a regular exam, you will cast the best spells that we have been practicing, and the pony who will qualify you, will be the princess of friendship herself!”
>What
“What”

>>29083421
>Twilight slaps her face and groans “Will you stop with that? Listen, I know that you and Anon have been studying hard, which is something that you should be proud of, but come on! Do you even listen to a word that you have said?!”
>Moon Dancer rolls her eyes and stomps her right front hoof on the ground “Yes! But have you been listening to what I have told you?! Anon is special! In how many languages do I have to spell it out for you?!”
>”How about in a language that actually makes sense?!” Twilight yells back “I know that Prince Anon is special, but puh-lease!” The purple princess rolls her eyes “A foal who can cast highly demanding spells like teleporting and freezing magic as it was nothing?! You must think that I’m crazy to believe such thing…”
>Ooooh! So this was the reason of their discussion, well…wait a minute! Is Twilight… Is she saying that you can’t do any of those things?! Oh no! Oh no, no, no, no!
“Hey, Moon Dancer is right! I can do that and more! I have mastered the shield spell too!”
>Twilight takes notice that you were there too and quickly tries to backpedal “E-err, no offence Anon, but…” she chuckles “Come on, that’s pretty advanced stuff for somepony of your age”
>You didn’t like that patronizing way that Twilight was talking to you… you didn’t like it one bit… You glance to Moon Dancer who was now displaying a huuuuge grin on her face, your teacher adjusts her glasses and nods.
>You can’t help but to chuckle, you nod back to Moon Dancer and give Twilight the biggest, smuggest, most arrogant smirk that Equestria has ever seen
“I have to say Twilight, I’m heavily disappointed in you…”
>The purple princess takes a step back, confused and surprised by your change of attitude “W-What do you mean?”
>You shrug and adjust your little glasses. Still giving her the mother of all smug smirks, you focus, making your horn glow… time to ace your exam
>You teleport at Twilight’s right side who could only react with a surprised “Gyah!”

>>29083430
“I’ve always thought that just like me and Moon Dancer, and my mom Celestia, you were a scientist at heart, but this little attitude of yours has proven otherwise…”
>You teleport again, this time to her left side, making Twilight to jump in fright once more
“Because you see, when faced against something that challenged your views, in this case, how awesome I am at magic, what you did was simply to deny everything as false, not bothering to prove if your original statement was actually valid or not…”
>Your horn glows again, this time you teleport behind Twilight, who was now looking frantically for you
“And scientists, REAL scientists don’t close their minds to new possibilities, nooope, they actually observe and research and compare their results with their peers. I suppose that in a way, harmony works like that….”
>The moment Twilight turns around, you teleport to her back, where you comfortably appear lying on your own back, resting your head on her soft mane… mmmm …she still smelled sweet
“Most things in this world are temporarily hidden from us, but the last thing that we should do is to run away from them, or dismiss them the moment that they are presented to us…”
>You roll your eyes and shake your head… all while Twilight was actually listening to you
“No, no, no, noooo! What we must do is to shine the light of harmony upon that darkness, and yes, those things might look a little alien for us at first, but if we learn to observe and study them, we might find that some of those things are actually a part of what makes this life such a beautiful adventure…but…”
>You chuckle and shrug

>>29083448
“We can’t be too naive either, there’s also stuff that may want to harm us, to take away everything that makes us what we are, and when that happens, we must act like a shield for everyone else, to protect their way of thinking, their freedom to be themselves, their right to live in the way they please as long as they don’t hurt other ponies way of life…oh, speaking of shields…”
>You cast a shield spell around you and Twilight, teleporting right in front of her and giving her a bow
“And that concludes the lesson for today…”
>When you dispel the shield, Twilight could blurt out some words like “Wha…Whu…HUH?!”
>The poor purple…and still very hot mare shakes her head, looking back and forth from you to Moon Dancer “B-But…HOW! I-I don’t understand! H-How! S-Starlight told me things, and Princess Celestia sent me some letters about your talent but this! J-Just…HOW!”
>You simply couldn’t resist to go smug all over…you simply couldn’t
“Well Twilight, I had an amazing teacher…”
>”Who had an amazing student….” Moon Dancer steps in, messing with your mane “Who’s also an awesome friend!”
>Your teacher extends her right front hoof and OF COURSE that you brofist…brohoof? Her…whatever, it was awesome!
“Oooh yeah! We are the super awesome team! And …
>And then you saw her… Celestia was standing right at the hall’s doors, she was smirking and motioning you to follow her.
“Err… Moon Dancer, could you give me a moment? I think that my mom is calling me…
>”Sure…” Moon Dancer shrugs and adjust her glasses “Good luck with that, kid”
>Oh, come on! Even her?! You weren’t a kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid! You were more mature than that!
>You follow your mom who by now had just walked out of the hall. You were fearing the worst…getting a scolding from going to detention AND going overly smug with Twilight

>>29083453
>But what you got when you stepped out of the hall…was your mom patiently waiting for you, with that smile of her that you loved so, so much displayed on her beautiful face.
“M-Mom…a-are you mad at me?”
>”Hmmm?” Celestia raises an eyebrow and tilts her head in confusion “Why would I be mad at you…oh…” Your mum rubs her chin for a moment, thinking of something, then she finally smiles “Should I ask, is it because that little show of yours that you did back there, or because you got sent to detention?”
>You feel a chill going down your spine as you take a step back
“D-Do you know about that?”
>”Of course I do!” Your mom giggles “I’m not going to scold you, and yes, I knew since this morning, I’m the principal of the school after all.” Celestia rolls her eyes and groans “If you could read the “memo” that Sunny Hill sent me…TWELVE pages detailing why it was justified to sent you to detention just because you ran in the hallways…ugh…Now I know where Twilight got that little quirk of hers”
“O-Oh…so you aren’t mad at that…good…but what about-“
>Your mom rolls her eyes and gives you a bonk in the head ”Would you relax already?! I told you that I’m not going to scold you! But, with that said…” Celestia giggles once more, giving you a little smirk “I heard what you told to Twilight, and I know a thing or two about…” your dear mother changes her tone, making a high pitches voice to obviously mock you “”Real scientists” and you forgot to mention that “Real scientists” also accept criticism, it’s part of their job I think, and your dear mother has some criticism of her own for you…”
“W-well, it depends you know, sometimes the critics may not be valid since, well, the guys who did it probably don’t know much about what you are talking about, and-“

>>29083468
>”Well first of all…” Your mom interrupts you as she starts walking in circles around you, head held uptight and a regal expression on her face “That shield of yours is a bit flimsy, but more than anything, seriously my dear? Trying to tie your little show off with a lecture about harmony? Did you suddenly become Twilight or something? I would rate your whole show with seven out of ten, and I’m being generous”
>You look away trying to hide your embarrassment and huff
“Oh hah, hah! Very funny mom…”
>But… what if she was being serious? Oh no…you turn to look at your mom, some desperation was taking hold of you
“Was my shield really that lackluster? A-And how was my speech? I-I know that the context was wrong, b-but I really meant it when I said that harmony kinda works like that”
>Your mom can’t help but to laugh at your reaction “I was just joking, my dear! Your shield was fine for the most part. You just need to reinforce it more by concentrating more magic into the spell. Remember it’s not about releasing more magic, it’s how you use your magic, quality over quantity, my dear; let me give you an example…”
>Celestia’s horn glows with that golden aura and…
“YOOOOO! THAT IS AWESOME!”
>A beautiful golden shell surrounds your mother, and yes, it looked tighter than Fort Knox and the most awesome thing was that the shell itself had its own engravings, displaying the sun, the moon…and your cutie mark
“How did you do that?! I mean, I get how you did the shell, you molded the shield so it could have that form, but the engravings! WOW MOM! They are soooo cool!”
>Your mom chuckles as she nods proudly “This, my dear, is what you get when you are as awesome as your dear mother” And with that, your mom dispels the shield…aww “Now, I actually didn’t use THAT much magic, it was that I knew HOW to use it, as for the engravings, well…”

>>29083473
>Celestia shrugs “While they don’t require that much extra magic, they do need a bigger mental effort since you have to think about the patterns and actually know how to mix that with the shield spell, but I like to be stylish with my magic, that is an art that is sadly getting lost in ponies”
“I ain’t complaining that was seriously awesome! And…wait…I think…that I got derailed…I was going to ask you another thing…what was it? Eeeh….hmmmm…Oh yeah! Why are we here and you know not in the party?”
>Celestia walks past you and sits on the floor, resting her back against the wall ”Well, am I forbidden from having a little talk with my son?”
“Yeah, but…”
>You walk by her side and sit on the ground, resting your back against the wall in a similar way as to how your mom did it
“But…eeeh…I’m not complaining if that’s what you think…it’s just that…you know…why here and not there?”
>Your mom sighs and rolls her eyes “You know darn well why…” Celestia rubs her temples, looking somewhat annoyed “Don’t get me wrong, my dear. I do enjoy the company of all of those wonderful ponies and that pair of…charismatic draconequus, it’s just that… meh…”
“Meh?”
>”Yes, meh…” Your mom sighs again “The moment I try to be myself, is the moment where everypony get awkward on me…”
>Oh yeah… you kinda forgot… that your mom really couldn’t act like her usual playful and arrogant self in front of anyone besides you and Luna
“Everyone? How about Discord and Eris?”
>”Even Discord for harmony sake! And he’s supposed to be the biggest jokester this side of the continent!” Your mom rubs her temples once more, before looking at you with an awry smile “That’s why I wanted to, you know, actually enjoy MYSELF during my son’s party, as in the real me and not that perfect pony princess…”

>>29083483
“I’m sorry mom…I forgot about that, and I get you, trust me, I hate that you have to do that façade, the perfect princess Celestia is so, well, boring and bland compared to the real deal, soooo… okay, eh, I have an idea, how about we tell my mom Luna to join us? That way we could have a little family moment here!”
>”Nah, that would be a horrible idea…” Celestia looks at the door for a moment and lets out a small chuckle “Trust me, nopony wants to stop Luna when she’s drinking cider, well, nopony has ever been able to. I do feel bad about Rarity and Rainbow Dash though, they don’t know what they have gotten themselves in, but let me tell you, they will know the horrors of partying with Luna when they wake up next morning”
>Hmmmm… that reminded you…of your past life… good old alcohol, how you missed it…
“Well, Moonlight seems to have some experience with my mom Luna drinking abilities, and Aegia looks like she can hold her liquor, and wait a moment… why aren’t you drinking cider too?”
>”Eeeeeh, I do like the cider that the Apple family makes, but I’m not really fond of that awful brand that Luna likes so much…” Your mom shrugs “Besides, I’m more of a coffee pony…too bad that nopony ever thinks to serve coffee at parties, it’s always punch, or cider, or soda…and I hate soda”
“Well…that’s news for me and… Oh, that’s right! Now that Aegia is here, I remembered that there was something that I have wanted to ask you since the carnival!”
>”Hmmm?” Celestia raises an eyebrow, looking at you with curiosity “That was many moons ago, you need to stop being so scatter brained, my dear”
“H-Hey! I’m not scatter brained! It’s just that I have a lot of ideas going on my head… and sometimes they mix up, but other times a new idea will take priority, but then that idea would lead to a hypothesis, it usually happens when-“

>>29083577
>You feel another bonk in your head “That’s exactly what being scatter brained means, my dear. Now, what did you want to ask to your dear and beautiful mother?”
>You rub your head…that one actually hurt a little…and you weren’t scatter brained, she was just exaggerating, like that one time when she…okay, don’t get derailed…
“Ask you something? What do you- Oh yeah…wait…lemme backtrack…and backtrack…right…the carnival and Aegia…hmmmm…Oh yeah! Aegia mentioned that you and Luna went on like secret missions and when you got involved, it was like, super top secret stuff, what’s up with that?”
>”Aaaah! That! Well…” Your mom gives you a smug smile of her own “That’s true, your mom is “incredibly awesometacular bro!””
>You slap your face and groan
“Mom… I don’t think that anyone has talked like that in like a century…just…leave that stuff to mom Luna…please…just…stop”
>”Hmph!” Your mom turns her head and crosses her arms “It’s not me who is wrong, it’s everypony else…I’m groovy and all that…but…” Celestia shrugs “Yeah, I can’t tell you everything, well, not yet, but it is true that your dear mother has seen her fair share of action…”
“Like dragons?! I like dragons yo!”
>”Dragons? Pffft, those are always bark, no bite. Let me tell you my dear, their lord is like bigger than a mountain, but once you show him who is boss, then he acts like a newborn puppy…” Your mom giggles “But well, I think that I went a little overboard with him, but that’s what he gets for being such a jerk…Now, this is supposed to be a “welcome to Equestria” party or whatever, so I hope that you don’t mind me if I get a little…cheesy”
“Nah, don’t worry, I’m used to that, after all, I have heard your speeches!”
>Your mom gives you another bonk on the head “Cheeky…” Celestia rolls her eyes and sighs “But whatever, I want to believe that you realize that this party came a bit too late to say the least, but nonetheless, it got me thinking”

>>29083601
“That maybe this Grand Galloping Gala stuff is super lame and we should forget about that?”
>Celestia shakes her head and waves her hoof dismissively “Nah, I have thought that for decades now, but you sometimes have to do stuff that you don’t like, even if it’s something so boring that being imprisoned in Tartarus looks like a weekend in Las Pegasus by comparison…”
“You really aren’t helping for making me look forward to that lame event, you know?”
>Your mum shrugs “Hey, I have to honest with you, my dear. But what I wanted to say is that…well…this whole theme got me thinking about how was my life before me and Luna met you…”
“Oh…A-And what did you think?”
>Celestia looks at you directly in the eye, giving you a warm smile ”That’s the thing, I really couldn’t think about it. I simply can’t imagine how my life was without you, well…not literally, I had my routine, waking up, rising the sun, doing my royal businesses, then I would read the FIFTY letters that Twilight would sent me on a daily basis…but that life…that routine…it seems so alien now…so unnatural to me…have you ever felt the same way, my dear?”
>You start to think about your past life…about your routine…and how…boring and even disgusting it seemed compared to your life now…you look up to your mom and give her a hug
“Yup…I just can’t imagine my life without you, or Luna…or Cherrywood…I just can’t… Getting to Equestria was the best thing that has ever happened to me, I’m not changing that for anything and you can bet that even if my old world was still standing, I would never want to go back”
>”Thanks my sunshine” Your mom gives you a tight and warm hug “I was scared that maybe…you weren’t that happy with me, but…” Your mom takes a deep breath “Well, you know…it just makes my heart sing that you are also happy with us…and hey, I actually got a surprise of my own…here…” Celestia’s horn glows, making a somewhat large box to appear “From me to you…”
“Ooooh, cool, what is it?”

>>29083606
>Using her magic, your mom brings the box closer to you ”Open it and find out”
>You didn’t think twice about that, tearing apart the paper that enveloped the box and opening right away…and what was inside…
“D’awww…thanks mom!”
>It was a rather stylish white coat with golden stripes on the sleeves and navy blue ones around the armpits and fore hooves, it even had fur on the neck…man, this was great!
>Your cutie mark was perfectly engraved on the right side of the chest, and on the left one, it was the same symbol that made up the necklace that Luna gave to you, the sun and the moon, mixed together as one.
>A little winter hat was in there too… and it looked super comfy and warm… you think that these things had a name…your russkie friend from accountability told you once…ushinki? Ushanku? Whatever, it was like one of those warm hats that the commies used.
>”I know that Rarity might get a little offended that I didn’t request this from her, but…” Your mom shrugs “What are we going to do about that…”
“Well, don’t worry, because mom Luna got ya covered with her… did you came up with the design?”
>Your mom shakes her head ”I’m going to admit that I know nothing about fashion, but I actually don’t care, so I hope that you like the design, it was pitched by Book Watch, you still remember him, right?”
>Oh yeah…the scary old stallion that was…actually a nice mate
“Mhmm…can I try it now?”
>”I think that it would be better if you wait…” Using her magic, your mom takes away the coat and places it on the box, and then she makes the box to disappear in a flash of light “We don’t want you to get stained, right?”
“Awwwwwww”
>”Oh, stop complaining, you can use it tomorrow…” Your mom reassures you with a pat on your head “Now…” Celestia gets up and stretches herself “Let’s go back before everypony wonders where we went, just stay close to me, alright? And bring your marefriend too, I want to know her a little bit more…”

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>>29083611
>You get up too and just like your mom, you stretch yourself and nod
“Sure! I bet that Cherrywood will love to hang around with you!”
>And with that, you and your mom return to the hall, where the party was still going, where everyone was still having fun…except for Rarity and RD who were now starting to realize the cider ride that they got themselves into.
>But for now…everything was fine…everything was alright…

Aaaaaand that's it! As always every kind of feedback is welcome, no matter if it's negative or positive, I'm always taking everything into consideration.

And yes, I continued drinking, if ya can ever get your hands on a wine brand called "casillero del diablo" I would recommend it, good taste for low cost.

Gumball where the fuck are youuuu darling.

>>29081925
>Sunsetfag has a tickling fetish
Right on
>This pic
.....manface...

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>>29083093
>WOW!!!
Verily so, it is my pleasure to introduce you toward a higher fetish of a fire butt thing with a thing on a blue background!hat somehow relates to a sunset!
> You REALLY showed that capitacha who's boss!!!
Oh, uh... um. uh-- t-thank, y-you too!

>>29083622
>Aaaaaand that's it!
Nice update there Eli, Twilights anal injury from the combine rapine powers of PhD and Eyebrows was excellent. That's got to have consequences latter though in the shape of a sperging Twilight. Perhaps she'd get suspicious of anon and things get complicated real fast. Perhaps she'd try to awkward as ALL fug try to seduce him to get the 'truth'. Lots of possibilities.


Low cost wines are my thing, being a cheep bastard; and that California grapes yield some damn nice wines. When I'm in Mexico next I'll run around looking for the castle of dab low in a distinct burger accent.

>>29083687
>.....manface...
You know, I didn't see it until you pointed it out, now I do and all is ruined! Sunset has one HELL of a jaw line in that image. I know part of it is the cartoon embellishment of laughter so strong it lures in musical note shaped insects, but eh-- the artist went a wee bit too far. Here, take a confused sunset creeping around.

>>29077806
>You go up and knock on the door.
"I hope Lyra is home."
>....with Bonbon
>It didn't take long for the door to open. But instead of Lyra, Bonbon is the one to answer the door. SCORE, it means Lyra was definitely around.
>Bonbon, the moment she sees you and Scoots, smiles, finding it a pleasant surprise "Well well, long time no see Anon. How have you been?"
"I've been alright. Things have been things. Lots of crazy stuff, ya know how it is. How about you?"
>bonbon could only guess on what you meant considering what you've done with your horn. But she doesn't put too much thought into it. "Oh, she's in her living room. We're setting up a telescope she bought from Canterlot so we can go star gazing. We're almost done, do you and Scootaloo want to help us out?"" Bonbon had noticed Scootaloo, but how did she know her enough to just casually say her name? She did think however, that she was here with you to visit. Hence acting so casual.
>"Hey, that sounds pretty cool. I wanna help out. I need the practice anyway. It's just like putting a scooter together right?" Scootaloo seemed pretty happy to get to work and socialize.
>"Right." Bonbon nods as she steps aside to let you both in. But as Scoots steps in...you had to ask.
"Wait, you know Scootaloo?"
>Bonbon shrugs "Sort of, it's a small town Anon. everypony knows everypony elses name. And when you have Pinkie Pie around throwing parties for everypony every other day? Yeah, you tend to learn pretty quick. So, with that said. Have you really been ok?....."
>She leans in and whispers "Considering your bug problem?"
>You eyes go wide...DA FUCK?!
"...You know? H-how?"
>"It's my business to know Anon. Don't worry, nopony else knows. But next time there's a very strange puppy attack. You might want to make sure to cover it up better.I know about your sister, I know about the Crusaders knowing, and thats it. I know Princess Celestia knows. But she's asked me to stay out of it."
>..G-goddammit.

>>29084054
"...oh..I-I see. Agent stuff then?"
>She nods "Mhmmm, so...Keeping it together?"
>....shit...how much does she actually know?
"Yeah, it's tough sometimes. But, ya know. I can handle it....ummm..so...what else do you know?"
>"Only that...why? Is there something else?" She looks at you with suspicion...FUCK
"...uhm, would you accept "need to know" basis"
>You give her a great big fake grin.
>She just raises an eyebrow, but still nods and turns to walk inside. "I understand confidentiality Anon. So, let's just drop the subject ok? I need to check on Lyra anyway bec-" She stops herself when she sees the telescope's viewfinder discarded on the ground. Looking forward as you followed Bonbon. You can see Lyra and Scootaloo happily inspecting and tightening screws in the telescope while putting on the big lens in the end.
>"Is it on right?" Scootaloo asked as she taps at the end of the telescope. She had to lower it to her level just to view it.
>"I think so?" Lyra giggles "I feel kinda silly. I bought this thing and I don't even really know how to get it all together. This is more of a Bonbon thing and- Oh hey, there you both are" Lyra looked to the both of you and waved.
"Heya Lyra! Heard you were making a telescope. Looks like it's almost done"
>"Yeah, almost. I need to put the smaller lens of the other end. But that's a little tough because there's all these knobs I need to figure out how to get in. And there's this slot right here on the end of the telescope I just can't figure out what it's for. It looks like a weird cup holder for a hat or at the theater." Lyra points to where...the viewfinder should go

>>29084136
>Bonbon rolls her eyes with a smirk on her face as she stares at Lyra with a snarky grin "...or it may be for this" She takes and holds the viewfinder towards Lyra.
>"That? Oh Bonbon, we don't need that. That's why we have the telescope" Lyra giggles as she dismisses the object.
>"Actually Lyra, that's the viewfinder. You use that to find where you want to point the telescope at. You just attach it there and look at what you want to look, then look into the telescope" Scootaloo actually lectures her on it. Then again, everyone should know what it fucking does at this point. Good thing Lyra was cute about it. Because..damn.
>"Huh? But...why not just point with the telescope?" It was clear Lyra had never used one before. "I did it all the time as a foal" Or used one properly.
>Bonbon laughed as she walked over and went to work to attaching the viewfinder "Lyra, you silly filly, the telescope looks at things very closely. So it actually makes it harder to find what you're looking for with it since you have to be precise. This let's us point at what we want to look at by having less of a zoom. And after we pinpoint the star or the moon with it. We look through the main lens. Easy peasy."
>"oooooooh! Now I get it. I guess I should have read the instructions a little closer, huh?" Lyrish giggles a little embarassingly as she rubs the back of her head.
>"It's fine, I just want to get it ready for tonight. This is a pretty high quality telescope Lyra. Are you sure you had the money for it?" Bonbon got a little concerned as she looked over the telescope and tapped it a few times.

>>29084190
>"Oh no, it's fine. I had been saving up for something for us to do this whole time. Then I saw the telescope and thought "STAR GAZING!". No price is too big when it comes to our friendship" Lyra exclaimed....aww. Dammit, you forgot how strong a bond these two shared. Hanging with Chrysalis for so long. You forgot a few things.
>You didn't even bother thinking how much bonbon knew about you at this point either. She knew, she's known for a little bit. Enough that if you were to be worried, it would have been days ago. It'll be fine.
>"Wow, so do you two do everything together?" Scootaloo asked, impressed with their bond.
>Bonbon nods "Just about, Lyra and I are very good friends. There's a lot of things we do that just wouldn't be any fun by ourselves. And trust me, it's A LOT of things."
>It's weird. You had a weird feeling in your stomach when she said that.
>They were so close. A real friendship. Something you forgot. You looked at your closest friends. Who defaulted to Discord and Chrysalis and Starlight.
>Discord, he was a good guy deep inside. For him, you kinda wish...yeah..that he was more dad like. Or just, maybe just going out and doing some normal things together without an ulterior motive.
>Chrysalis, she says she's your friend. But, is it true? Maybe, but you had this feeling that there was a truth to her wanting you on her side. Like an odd obsession. But she lies, she cheats, she manipulates. But, in the end. You wouldn't be standing here without her. She saved your life.
>And Starlight, the most normal of the three. You actually would like to get closer. She was nice, sweet, and...yeah. She needed a friend. But the distance...If only she lived in Ponyville. But her town needed her.
>The rest? Well, Fluttershy was your "Aunt". You dearly appreciated her love, and sometimes..you wish you really were here nephew. With none of the bullshit attached.

>>29084303
>The CMC, welp. Scootaloo has slowly been climbing that ladder.
>Lyra and Bonbon. Pretty cool casual friends. Need to visit more.
>Everything else wasn't as close. And the Princesses? Yeah, they were basically monkeys on your back now. You had to watch out for them.
"So, can we go star gazing with you guys? Make this twosome a foursome?"
>Haha...they will never get the double meaning.
>"Hey, that sounds like a great idea!" Lyra smiled as she poked at the viewfinder. "Doesn't it Bonbon?"
>But Bonbon let's out a lamentable sigh "You know we can't Lyra, I don't mind but, you know, they do have school tomorrow. I doubt their parents. Well, at least Scootaloo's parent would let us have her tag along tonight"
>Lyra's ears droop as she frowns. "Awwww, I thought it would have been cute. Have either of you ever gone late night star gazing? When the moon is right above us. It's well...it's just perfect."
>You never went star gazing period.
"No, I never even gone star gazing before."
>"I have, but not that late.....awww" Scootaloo looks down, she wanted to try late night gazing "late night star gazing actually sounds pretty cool. I bet the stars get really bright when it's that late"
>"Well..." Lyra starts to think it over "It's not like I won't have the telescope after today. If you both get permission for when you have a day off of school. We can set up a night where we just eat popcorn and gaze at the stars."
...ok..I overdid myself. good night

>>29084334
i really have no excuse for tonight. I really just got to it late.I've been hesitant to write lately. And I dunno why.

What if there was a plotline where Trixie wanted to bone Discord

So what I got from ErfAnon past rant was that he now hates PhD for just existing. And that was an interesting twist on it, or well, to be fair, an interest continuation on his hate of PhD. Seems like I predicted correcrly his reaction towards Luna.

What I find interesting is that in reality, ErfAnon hates PhD because he got all of the things that ErfAnon wanted, and ErfAnon wants those things, he desires them, he thinks that he is entitled to them, ErfAnon has become a much more selfish, arrogant and stubborn pony. His objective now is to wait until PhD gets to the Erfverse, attacks him and then get his 3 charges so ErfAnon can utterly destroy PhD, all while having a wicked smile on his face. ErfAnon acts and thinks with chaos

Then on the other universe, we have the party hoing on, where PhD actually listened to Pinkie Pie, a pony who he absolutely hates, and thus, became friends with her, Eris and PhD relationship feels whimsical and based on banter, Cherrywood and PhD simply know that they love each other, and his family is tight. And even with all that, the young prince has maintained himself a little more innocent and humble. PhD doesn't care about ErfAnon because he seems that he has let go of that hatem instead he cares to see Scrappy again, because PhD cares more about friendship, acrting and thinking with harmony

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>>29084334
Lyra's cute. My favorite background pone.

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>>29084336
never mind. I puked dinner this morning. I knew I felt off.

>>29084334
Is ErfAnon going to tell Luna about her bullshit? Is PhD finding a way to meet Scrappy?

>>29085432
Oh shit, everything alright?

>>29086678
its normal but rare. ever since I hit 19 ten years back there is a seldom occasion i won't digest food. Puking the food out and eating something else fixes it. but damn. does if cause a hell of a belly ache

hey look i finally wrote something

>You remember living up in Alaska
>It was when you were small, real small
>Big enough that you could still remember things, but small enough that those memories couldn't be trusted, as they were muddled by time and distorted by a disconnect from your old childhood superstitions
>You went with your family to see one of the glaciers
>It was on a lake, so getting a closeup view required kayaking
>Someone, your father you think, really wanted to touch it, just to see what it felt like
>You remember getting close, seeing this titanic, godlike wall of ice right at its feet
>You stared up at its face, seeing it stretch into the heavens to mingle with angels
>You felt like touching it would disturb the dormant beast and invoke its wrath
>Your father rubbed the side, someone whistled and said "Wow," and little baby Anon had begun to cry

>>29086956
>"Sklort will show you to the tent."
>Trixie's voice snaps you out of your stupor
>You look up at her and then around at the teepee
>You don't know what to think
>Something grunts behind you and you turn to face Glass Joe, or Sklort, who beckons for you to follow
>You comply and he begins leading you to the back of the cult compound to a tent larger than the rest
>It looks like one of those military tents that soldiers might eat in or go to get limbs amputated
>Standing at the entrance of the tent is Monster Mash, who is now holding a sleeping bag and pillow
>She waves at you and Sklort departs wordlessly
>You towards her and she stuffs the ragged fabrics into your chest, and you take them in your leg
>"These are yours. C'mon, you better claim a spot now so you don't have to lug that around camp all day."
>She pushes open the tent flap and takes you inside
>It smells of sweat and urine
>Very few ponies are here despite a fuckton of sleeping bags strewn about the floor, which is a thin plastic tarp that has torn in some places
>Unlike outside, inside all of the ponies are either rocking in place or aggressively mashing their hooves together, creating a sort of broken rhythem from the clopping sounds
>You find a spot somewhere in the center and lay down your things
>Thankfully yours is denoted by three large blue stripes sewn across the bag's exterior, and the rest are all marked with their own unique patterns and colors so there is little chance you'll be sleeping in someone else's piss tonight
>Just as your thoughts begin drifting back to the miserable escapade in the darkness, Monster Mash speaks up
>"You should get introduced to some of the family, since you'll be sleeping with most of us tonight."
"Most?"
>"Some of us have individual tents that we've either bought or made ourselves, me included."
"Oh."

>>29086962
>You are taken back outside and to the sizable bonfire, where a collection of unwashed treehuggers, grizzled foresters and the horribly deformed
>There are tie-dye bandanas, long white beards and one harelipped stallion with so many excess teeth his lips can't shut properly
>It's like that time you accidentally walked into the retarded classroom in high school
>Except instead of screaming and hitting each other like tendies do, these folk are just sitting around, enjoying small talk
>"What's up, guys?"
>They break from their conversations and look over at Monster Mash
>"'Sup, Mash. And who might you be?"
>A yellow mare with slightly bulging eyes and dreadlocks responds, setting her expressionless gaze on you
>You open your mouth to speak, stop, close it, and look into the fire
>"This is Speedy, he's just joined the family."
>"Hi, Speedy."
>They say in unison, sending shivers down your spine
>Mash keeps calling it a 'family,' lending further credibility to your suspicions of cultly activities
>Either that, or some stoner conclave for former carnies, since a good chunk of the ponies you've seen look like they'd be found in a midnight monster picture
>Maybe Trixie had actually given you an explanation, but you in your terribly mindfuck vision had tuned it all out
>Perhaps that incense in the teepee was some sort of mystic chinese drug
>Maybe you've just lost your marbles
>"Sho, what did the /man/ deem you guilty of? Thinking the wrong way? Looking too different? Or did shome fuckin' shadisht doctor jusht pull you off the shtreet?"
>The green snaggletoothed cunt hisses, his voice full of bitterness
"Well, I..."
>You've forgotten what got you there in the first place
>Something about Nazis and wrestling
>...
>Right, your daring escape from Unit 731
"Okay, so there were these Japanese Nazi horses who had no idea how to counter a turnbuckle high-flyer dropkick-"

>>29086970
>Your new companions are quite sociable
>Timber, the guy with all the teeth, gave you a lecture about all the evils of the medical world, and you found that the two of you had a lot in common
>Hodgepodge, an aptly named mare whose coat and mane were s comprised of all sorts of pigments (though mainly baby shit green), and whose limbs were all of inconsistent length, led you all in a song about nature and peace on earth n shit
>She actually has a lovely voice
>Some green lady in a doo-rag and red dreadlocks, who you later learned was named Tree Hugger, wove you a wicker basket and seemed only to grin and giggle
>The night was surprisingly pleasent, even though when supper came around you secretly dumped out your rations of onion soup in the bushes on suspicion they might be drugged
>Trixie introduced you to the whole camp over said supper, after which you all drank moonshine and the rest of the night is a blur of drum beating, chanting and dancing by the fire
>The fire itself was later fueled by a managerie of funky herbs and fungi, putting most of you in a pleasant daze that lasted seemingly forever
>Your final memory is the lot of you howling at the full moon and laughing at yourselves
>Overall, it was a 10/10 night, which made the discovery of Hodgepodge's mangled corpse in the surrounding woods the next morning all the more shocking

>>29083360
fuck off, my Jigglypuff will shit your ass any day of the week

>>29086982
Oh shit and here I was thinking that you were ded

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>>29087300
I've been shitposting in the discord this whole time

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>>29084973
>What if there was a plotline where Trixie wanted to bone Discord
Hmm. What if. You mean another green where Trixie is a vigorous maternal entity to Anon->pone, child of discord, just to get close to discord and shag him?

That could be quite fun.

>>29084334
>...ok..I overdid myself. good night
Aww, health first my fine fearless writefag!
Amusing update, well-- aside from it nearly killing you and all.

Anon concerned with Starlight's distance amuses me-- namely, Anon seems to forget that he can make independent artifacts with his horn.

But, the guy has only made a clock. Twice.

And a few temporary objects, like that recent calamity with the snow launcher of ice ass sodomy.

It absolutely wouldn't come to him that
> Aww sheet, I can make a portal to GlimGlam town!
But, even if it did, he'd fuck up and forget to make the portal in a good spot plus have a difficult key so no random pony could wander thru it into his room and have to waste another charge just to close the portal later.

To me, this is why the horn is such a great device.

>>29085298
Keen analysis, essay anon!

>>29086977
>Timber, the guy with all the teeth, gave you a lecture
kek, schizo anon palling around with Chad Timber as a horse. DO WANT. The only question, does he have a thing for his sister in the alt-universe; too?
>Tree Hugger, wove you a wicker basket and seemed only to grin and giggle
Kek
>Overall, it was a 10/10 night, which made the discovery of Hodgepodge's mangled corpse in the surrounding woods the next morning all the more shocking
DUN DUN-DUN! Who done it? SUNSET!

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>>29087582
Haven't actually watched most of EQG, and I forgot that Timber even existed, but I suppose I might find some way to work that in. Hell, it's more of a character than generic mistreated conspiracy nut.

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>>29088175
>but I suppose I might find some way to work that in.
Kek, do it, it would please twilight fags. We might get a few of them hanging around like the flutter shippers.

All you need know about Timber:

[ ] He was designed as more of a hyper chad than even Flash. Take flash squared := Timber. That's primarily what busted my sides when he game up in your story as part of the mutant caravan.

[ ] He hated living alone in the woods with his family, but eventually after his parents died he learned to be delighted in living alone, with his sister. Alone... with his sister.... ALL Alone.... with... sister, except during Camp Week when Fility rich would show up and try to disrupt their pure wincest love haven and force them to sell themselves for a week to canterlot high.

[ ] He seduced Sci/light, even though this isn't twilight it makes twilight fags rage.

Gumball where are you?

>>29088987
More like where's everyone, in terms of activity from posters, this weekend really was luckluster to say the least

>>29086746
I remember having that problem as a kid. For me it only really happened if I ate and went straight to bed.

>>29082783
>Your vision becomes clear as the brightness fades from your eyes.
>You were in a fairly well furnished room, a living room, if your guess if right. For the most part, it was what is to be expected from a lifting room. It was rectangular, with a wooden floor, neatly painted jade green walls – not unlike the color of KK’s hair – and a ceiling fan.
>But there was an odd ensemble to the room. Everywhere you looked, something was off.
>The planks in the floor spiraled inward to a single circle of wood, located in the center of the room. The walls, while neatly done, had a swirling motion in them, constantly moving from darker to lighter shades of green. And the ceiling fan’s blades were contorted and misshapen with holes scattered throughout them randomly.
>There was also the furniture. Closest to you was two, extremely comfortable-looking, wood adorned chairs in either corner of the right side of the room. Both were seemingly defying gravity by sticking to the wall. On the opposite side of the room was a couch…on the ceiling. It looked just as comfortable as the chairs, but unlike them, had some kind carving in the wooden parts.
>The only normal things in the room were the door behind you, a large doorway to what seemed to be a kitchen, and a window on the wall behind you, which looked out into purple swirling nothingness.
>And, of course, on the other side of the room, directly under the couch, was Discord. He was still frozen in shock, eye twitching slightly every so often.
>Well, here you were. All alone. With a god. That you just pissed off a few minutes ago. Perfect.
>To keep calm, you start to reason with yourself. Maybe he wouldn't be that bad. Yeah, he did seem pretty bad, but that was after you pissed him off. And, now that you think of it, you've only know the guy for a few minutes. And even then, you hadn't actually talked with him during that time. So maybe you're overreacting.
>…
>You REALLY hope that you're overreacting.

>>29089470
>As if on queue, Discord snaps out of his little stupor, angry as hell.
>”AAAARRRGGGHHH!!”
>He screams with so much force that you actually have to try to keep your balance. Maybe that's a good sign…
>”That's just like her, to go and do that! Promising me something and NEVER delivering on it, then top of that, she dumps a little brat with me! And to think that she calls ME “predictable”!
>Discord floats to the couch on the ceiling, laying on it facing the floor, and arms crossed. Man he's pissed.
>Well, he doesn't seem like he's going anywhere for the time being, so now was probably your time to step in. Just don't screw this up.

>>29089470
I forgot to ask, what race is your Anon supposed to be?

Are we getting erf's green tonight?

>>29084334
>"That sounds pretty cool. I gotta see if I can get Rainbow Dash to join in. Then it'll really be a star gazing party!" Scootaloo said with excitement.
>You know, you liked her ignorant and adorable nature best out of the CMC as well. It was innocent wonderment that didn't bother you. Still, RD being there was kinda eh.
"I mean, I'm for it"
>You lie
>"Well, we'll have to see. Lyra, you know I have to have a day free myself if we're going to have a get together" Bonbon explains to her
>Lyra gives her a grin as she wiggles her eyebrows at her "Are you saying you wouldn't have a free night to spend with your bestie best friend?"
>Bonbon then gave her own smug grin back "You know I always have a free night when it comes to you."
>....And yet they don't fuck.
>"Then it's settled. Next night you both have off. You should definitely come for a visit." Lyra says as she finished the final touches on the Telescope. ".....aannndd done! Woo! You two should have come when we got started. We would have finished a lot sooner then. Then again..." You all hear a ding go off in the kitchen. Which makes Lyra grin big as she licks her lips "We would have been done wayyy too early for some apple pie. You both eat apple pie right? It's got a little extra sweeeetnesssss" She tempts the both of you. Which was pretty easy, being both a horse, young, hungry, and fucking PIEEE.
>You and Scootaloo agree to some pie. Lyra heads into the kitchen and quickly comes back with the pie. It had steam coming from the top. It smelled good! and damn...magic sure is convenient. It just floated ahead of her. No need for gloves.

>>29089904
>Lyra set it up on a small table she prepared mostly for just her and Bonbon. There were two plates and a knife for cutting. She cut the pie into four pieces. You and Scootaloo getting smaller pieces as she sets them on the plates and magically brings them towards the both of you. You both sit on your plots and take the plates and start blowing on the pies. Well..not you..you just bit right in as it seemed Lyra and Bonbon would just eat straight from the pan.
"Agh! HOT! HOT!"
>"Anon!" Lyra exclaimed "Of course it's hot, it just came out of the oven. Oh geez, maybe I should have warned you first. Didn't think you'd just bite in like that......it's good huh?" The table also had a pitcher of water and two glasses as well. She fills a glass with water and puts it beside you. You drink from it immediatly and start rubbing at your tongue as Scootaloo giggles.
"...eyyhhh...."
>your poor tongue
"Y-yeah..it's really good..."
>It really was. The fragrance of apple, that sweet taste...if only it didn't burn.
>"Anon, you're funny sometimes. Y'know? Sometimes I think you do that kind of stuff on purpose just to get a laugh out of everypony." Scootaloo chuckles as she blows on her pie.
>On purpose?!...on purpose...well....dammit...fuck. Was it really that silly?
>it must have looked silly. Burning your tongue like that? What the fuck were you thinking?
"Uhm..I guess sometimes. Yeah, I mean."
>You give a smirk, yet there was no confidence behind it
"Nopony would REALLY be dumb enough to just bite into freshly baked pie"

>>29090009
>Lyra giggles "Yeah, you could feel how hot it is just from having it close to your face." Lyra lifts her piece with her magic and brings it close to her nose and takes a whiff, her smile becoming a little drunken from the fragrance. "Sooooo goooood." She blows at the end a couple of time and takes a small bite.
>Bonbon was the only one looking at you as if you were full of shit, but she didn't comment on it. Instead, she took her piece onto her hoof and bit down on a huge chunk of it without even blowing. Not a hint of pain on her face as she chews and swallows. She looked pretty smug about it too. "Luckily for me, I've dealt with so many different conditions in my life that a little heat doesn't bother me at all."
>Scootaloo was blown away by that. "W-what?! Wooah! Isn't that burning your throat or something? How did you do that?!"
>"I'm fine, as for why it's not burning? Let's just say I've had to get used to swallowing a lot of things at a lot of different temperatures. Warm pie is nothing to me" Bonbon said as she proudly stood, taking another bite.
>"And that's one of the reasons you're so amazing Bonbon, Nopony else can eat pie like you can" Lyra cheered
>"Oh come on Lyra, it's not that amazing. Besides, I think Pinkie Pie has me beat anyway. I've seen her down like three pies in one go. ALL fresh out of the oven." Bonbon sounded humble, but she still felt damned proud.
>"Yeah, but Pinkie Pie is a weird kinda cool about stuff like that" Scootaloo explains "It's scary sometimes, especially how you can swear she was in front of you...and then she's behind you...and then above you. Sometimes a rumor goes around that she's actually a ghost or an alicorn in disguise but I don't buy it. It's just Pinkie being Pinkie." Scootaloo then blows and takes another bite.
>Both Lyra and Bonbon have a laugh at that. You didn't see what was so funny though.
>"A ghost?" Lyra giggled
>"An Alicorn? Foals these days have really active imaginations" Bonbon notes.

>>29090085
>"Well...umm" Scootaloo felt a little insulted. It may have been in general. But she felt it pointed at herself as well. "I mean...Twilight used to be a unicorn, then BAM" She finishes off the rest of the pie and swallows. "Alicorn. You never know, How can you know? Anything can happen in Equestria. I mean....one day I could save the world and stuff.....Like Rainbow Dash" Scootaloo was now projecting. Poor girl. She overthought it.
>But Lyra just agreed with her like it was nothing "Well of course you can. Look at Anon, a few days in Ponyville and he became the "Hero Colt". I bet, if you really want to be, We'll be calling you Super Scootaloo or something in just a couple of moons"
>"Super Scootaloo? Or maybe just Super Scoots...yeah...That sounds pretty cool" Scootaloo pondered. "I'd need a new cape though"
>"A cape? That sounds pretty neat. Anon, why don't you have a cape?" Lyra asks with genuine curiosity.
"What? pffft, c'mon. I don't need a cape. I'm the HERO COLT!"
>You jump and stand in a prideful position.
"I have like, just this aura that just comes off as heroic."
>"...I dunno, you'd be cooler with a cape." Lyra couldn't see it, she really thought the cape would add on to your "heroness"
>"I dunno Lyra. I mean, I think I'd look cool with a cape. But Anon is just keeping it old school. You know, like how the princesses don't have capes, or Twilight, or Rainbow Dash. I mean, if we wanna go into comics. Heroes like Filli-second don't have capes either. It just depends on the circumstances and who you are. If you're brave in here.." Scootaloo points to her chest "Then it doesn't matter who you are or what you look like. That's something Twilight taught me once."
"Aww...thanks Scoots. And yeah, she's right...I mean check these moves"
>You perform you're near trademarked Shoryuken and actually. for once. Land gracefully on your hooves. Yeah! You got it this time!
"Yeeeeah! It wouldn't even look that cool if I had a cape. Bandanna maybe, but no cape."

I wake up again. ugh, I really need a motivater it seems. or maybe I need to buy some doa for some future nights for the caffeine

>>29090152
I'm sorry of we.haven't motivated you like we should

I wonder, or maybe it is just me being a little too slow to get things, but is ErfAnon going to question Luna about that other version of her?

Fucking hell guys, why is no one commenting?

Fell asleep on the couch for the last 5 months so I still got to catch up.

>>29089581
Anon is part of a race of technological biomasses called the Tetromorphs, nicknamed Tetras for their four fingers. They were created by the humans to be a cyborg-like replacement for humans in warfare and recon. Their propose was to absorb different organisms to change into them for more effective spying. Without spoiling too much, I can tell you that they were a bit to strong and intelegent, ultimately making the humans go extinct. Anon's generation, much more like humans than their predecessors, comes around decades after the humans.
In short, Ano is basically a human, but with some perks. He MAY also have some abilities that they start to develop around his age...
More will be revealed throughout the story.

And yes, I do think a lot about the whole universe instead of just one story.

>>29091858
I meant it more as in what race of pony your Anon was, but okay, now that makes me think of another advice for you considering this somewhat big backstory that you have: Do not drop it, and think how it will come into play with your story and characters.

>>29091783
Feel free to ask about anything that you might find a bit confusing. Erf's story is a big ride that sometimes is hard to keep up with, considering that he often brings plotpoints and gags into his story that are from at least 100 updates ago. I'm sure that you are enjoying it though

>>29090109
he really needs to stop being such a fucking dork

>>29092122
Oh...
Well he's a Pegasus to answer your question.

>somewhat big backstory
You don't know the half of it...

>Do not drop it, and think how it will come into play with your story and characters.
I don't plan on dropping any backstory. When I think up a new character, I think origins first, then personality based off of the origins. Thanks for the advice.

>>29092221
Then I'm looking forward to what you have m8

So wait, just catching up, who is this other Anon? Why is OUR Anon such a little shit now? He has become more than Discord than the heroic, yet dumb dude that I knew him from

GUMBALL IS FUCKING DED

DEEEEEEEEEED

>>29093222
other anon is elo's Anon from a one chapter crossover. Anon has always slowly become a shittier person despite being a "good" guy, he's just not too smart. Imagine being treated better in another dimension, and finding out another anon is treated like royalty. mixed with stress and the fact even royalty distrusts you and you will become a jealous shitter

>>29093379
also, i was hit with inspiration today. too good to spoil.

>>29089475
>Discord snaps the same giant stack of papers from before in front of him, looking it over with great concentration. He even went as far as giving himself a tiny set of glasses.
>Ok, don't mess this up. Just walk up to him.
>And so you do, slowly working your way to the…ceiling couch.
>As soon as you are in his line of sight, Discord looks over the paper currently floating in front of his face, and at you. He was not happy in the slightest.
>”Oh, look who's here. It's the no good brat that got me into this mess! If you would have just passed up the deal, I wouldn't be in this situation!”
>Wait, he’s blaming this on you?! Oh hell no!
“Hey! It's not my fault, you're the one the made that stupid deal! And you didn't really leave me with any choice!”
>”Of course I did, you could have declined if you wished.”
“I would have DIED!”
>Discord rolls his eyes and continues his scanning through the papers.
>”A temporary matter.”
>Was he fucking serious?! TEMPORARY?!
“Yeah, temporary for you maybe, but if you haven't noticed yet, I can't just explode and come back to life whenever I want!”
>”Yes, but…”
>Discord trailed off as he looked wide-eyed at the single sheet of paper in front of him. He starts to mutter under his breath, just loud enough for you to hear.
>”…upon signing you agree to take on the role of active guardian for…wait…FOR LIFE?! But I'm immortal! How is that fair at all?”
>Heh. While you didn't laugh, it was still funny to see a god so upset.
“Well, I guess we're in this together huh?”
>Discord sneers.
>”Not if I have anything to say about it.”
>He's nearly growling when he snaps his fingers, sending him away with a flash of light.
>Huh.
>That was a relief on you. You needed a minute to relax.
>Also, he may do some good in getting you out of being his son.
>But you would have to wait on the second one. For now, you relax.

Starting to get into this a bit. Liking it.

>>29093379
It's just that I'm amazed how much Anon has grown to become like Discord, like holy fuck, he actually thinks as if he was Discord's real son

Page 9 Bump

Erf green fucking when?!

>>29095499
it's coming
and trust me. I have a lot of inspiration and 4 liters of pepsi

>>29090109
>"That move, Anon...you do realize if you miss with that hit that you leave yourself open for a buck right? Or worse if you're facing say...a griffon" Bonbon analyzes your Shoryuken. It seemed useless to her.
"What? I mean..yeah. But that's why you don't miss."
>"Yes, but the power you have in a single hoof from a jump like that is negligible compared to say...a buck to the face or a jumping stomp or even the basic flurry jabs of the front hooves." Bonbon explains.
".......huh...um. Well...umm..."
>"Ohhhhh...come on Bonbon. Don't go hurting his feelings now." Lyra felt bad for you, she knew Bonbon would know what moves work and which don't. Considering her position. "I think it could work. It looks cool at least"
>"I'm just saying, it could backfire." Bonbon was being truthful. And thinking about it. She may be right. Especially since you were so small. The Shoryuken never actually worked on anyone unless fueled by magic....ugh...
"....I guess..."
>"C'mon Anon..." Scootaloo noticed how discouraged you felt. And tried to cheer you up. "It's just one move, I'm sure all your other moves work. I even bet you have a move that always works!"
>...at first you couldn't think of anything. But then...
>Riiiight, hitting them in the nuts always worked....you had that.
"M-maybe, but I guess my best asset is how I used the horn."
>"Agreed, considering how you stopped those foalnappers and griffons. I'd say you have a good handle on it. So don't worry" Bonbon gives you a gentle love tap with her hoof. "You're still amazing, you just have one bad move"

>>29095600
>...well...at least you were amazing. Oh come on Anon, stop being a little bitch.
"Thanks Bonbon, y'know? You're right. I've done a lot of cool things. One bad move doesn't make a difference."
>"Yup, I mean. You wouldn't have gotten a cute marefriend like Scootaloo if you were just y'know, not that great." Lyra giggles.
>...WUT?!
>"WHAT?! I'M NOT HIS MAREFRIEND!" Scootaloo gags
"W-what even..WHAT EVEN GAVE YOU THAT IDEA?!"
>Holy fucking christ!
>"Oh.." Lyra was taken aback in surprise "I just though since you two were together right now. That....y'know."
>Bonbon giggles "No Lyra, I know it's been awhile. But he's still with Filthy Rich's daughter"
>"OHHH! Is that still going on?" Lyra snickers as she looks at you with a sultry look "Well Well, color me surprised. I thought that was gonna last a week. You know how relationships with rich ponies go. Good job Anon, you must have actually won her heart." Lyra hops over towards you and gives you a few gentle jabs in the chest "Don't go being a dad so soon."
>"Lyra!" Bonbon scolds at her
>Lyra giggles "Sorry, just seemed cute and weird to me"

>>29095693
>Oh good lord. Pull it together Anon, it was just friendly banter. Then again, Scootaloo looked as irked as you were. But she was still on the "Being your marefriend" thing.
>No seriously, when you gave her even an encouraging smile. Her face turned green. Was she THAT not into you? Or did just the mention just gross her out?
>No, she felt like explaining at least "Look, let me get this out there. Anon is cool and all. But even if he didn't have a marefriend, I wouldn't date him. I'm WAY to focused on getting better at flying and learning from Rainbow Dash for relationship stuff"
>Aww, that warmed your heart. You were "Cool"
>The rest of the visit went along a little more normally. You all talked about recent activities. Though no mention of the empire or bugbutt was mentioned. Scootaloo got applause for giving her reasons to being like Rainbow Dash. Which included being able to help and save anypony with lightning speed and such. And Lyra and Bonbon decided to go on about a vacation to Las Pegasus they were planning. It was all kinda nice.
>Yeah, you felt at ease. No stress, you were smiling, you were among friends. You could be....yourself. In a sense anyway.
>At the end of the visit. You all gave hugs and promises were made to meet again soon. But as Scootaloo and you were stepping out the door. Bonbon stopped you, and pulled you aside. Asking Scootaloo for a private moment. She agreed, but didn't understand why.
>"...Anon, before you go. I need to ask, are you sure...You know what you're doing? Do you understand how much everypony would just want the changelings to be gone for good?" Bonbon gives you a serious look. Even she couldn't understand your motives.

>>29095776
>You sigh, dammit. You CAN handle this. You know it. You didn't need Celestia or even Bonbon questioning it.
"I'm sure, trust me. I know that it can be done and even then, she's mostly contained by my dad. We've actually connected, heck, we went on an adventure and saved the world once."
>"....hmm..." Bonbon looked deeply into your eyes, she was checking for any sign of lying. To her surprise, there was none. And then she was further perplexed by those words. "Saved the world?...seriously?"
" It's a long story, if we get another time alone, I'll tell you abo-"
>Lyra pokes her head around the corner with a smile "Hey, you're still here. Ohhh...are you both talking about the changeling thing?"
>..........
"YOU TOLD HER?!"
>Bonbon actually felt nervous about that. And turned her head away while still acting serious. "She's my bestie, I couldn't not tell her."
>"...oh" :Lyra's own sheepishness was apparent however."I mean, Anon. I'm not going to tell Anypony. I-it's just...well...what Bonbon said. And besides, now that we both know. If you ever need a place to just relax and collect your thoughts. You have us, I can't imagine how scary and stressful it is being around somepony like that all the time....sorry if you're mad" Lyra frowned, she didn't mean to cause any trouble.
>Neither did Bonbon.
>...Well, you couldn't be mad, could you? You could trust them right? The CMC seemed to be doing a good job with the secret. And, looking at that adorable frown. How could you be mad? Lyra and Bonbon had never ONCE been terrible or annoying towards you. It wasn't like they were fucking Sunburst.
"....no, nah. You guys aren't trouble. I actually really appreciate it. But, we could have talked about that too during the visit you know. Scootaloo knows about it too."

>>29095800
>"We know, but we can't talk about it because, Well...I have my secret too. So just blurting it out would raise some questions" Bonbon explains as she puts a hoof gently on your head and rubs "Anon, you're an amazing colt for doing what you're doing. But don't overdo it. Queen Chrysalis is dangerous and not to be trusted. Don't let her have her way. Alright?"
>You knew all this. And for sure...you felt you'd be fine.
"I got it, trust me. And..thanks again. You guys are true blue friends. Thanks for being friends with this crazy little colt."
>Lyra giggles "Hey, we couldn't let you be sad all that time ago. Didn't think it'd turn into a friendship like this. But hey, weirder things have happened."
>...aww.
>You give them all a hug again. And leave on your way with Scootaloo. She asks you what that was about. But...you do lie. You just tell her that they had a little pie left you'd might have liked. And kept it at that. Scootaloo thought it was weird you had to be alone for that. But she just shrugged. "Well, that was fun. I like them. They're pretty nice."
"Yeah, Lyra and Bonbon are pretty cool. You don't think it's weird I have adult friends though?"
>Scootaloo raised her eyebrow at you. As if that was a stupid question "Uhhh, did you forget that we're also friends with Rainbow Dash and her friends?"
>You giggle nervously...right...how could you forget.
"Yeeeahhhhhhh...heh"
>"Yeah, so. I was thinking of something actually. Because, well. I think Applebloom and Sweetie Belle HAS been harsh on you. And well, what if I got a taste of what you have to deal with?" Scootaloo...was...wait....why did this fill you with dread?

>>29095811
"...what do you mean?"
>You asked with caution
>"What do you think? Let's go see bug breath together! Let's show her we mean business! Let's find out EXACTLY what she might be lying about! We can have eachother's back and corner her on any lie she's got for us. Not only will that help you out, but if I can handle her, I can handle anything." Scootaloo had a double goal in mind. You could see it behind her facade of bravery.
>Chrysalis would tear her apart.....verbally
"Scoots, that's a bad idea. A SUPER bad idea."
>"Why? Don't you have her under control?" Scootaloo seemed confused.
"Yeah but...look, she's still dangerous around anypony not me. My house has this barrier spell to protect everypony inside of it BUT still, she's a master of words. She'll tear you apart just by talking at you."
>...you actually feared for her. You didn't want her to get hurt
>But on the flipside...she could be right.
>"Pffft, c'mon Anon. Tear me apart with "Words"? That sounds dumb. And it won't happen" Scootaloo started to get frustrated "C'mon! Don't be like an adult and tell me I'm too young. I got this! Don't you want Applebloom and Sweetie Belle to know just how hard you really struggle? I'm trying to help you"
>....
"I do...but..."
>"Come onnnn..what's the worse that can happen? Now that I know she can't even hurt me, I totally got this. It'll be fine" Scootaloo gives you a confident smile.
>......could Chrysalis do anything to her?...it's just words.
>And it did benefit you. What's the worse that could happen?
>You could be responsible. But, maybe it's overprotective.
>Scootaloo was your friend, she wanted to help you, and this...could prove to be useful indeed.
>And you'd be there. So, you could handle the situation no problem.
>Why say no then?
>....you got this

>>29095863
"Y'know? You're right. Why would I say no when you're trying to help me out. And you're right too. I bet once I reform Chrysalis and we can let everypony else know that Rainbow Dash will be SUPER impressed with you."
>"Yeah! I know right? This helps the both of us and we'll totally not mess this up! You and me Anon. We'll be heroes...well, you're already a hero. But I'll be a hero too." Scootaloo was showing some of her selfishness as well, using this as an easy ride to the top, even if she did want to genuinely help you. She also knew or believed at least that she could help herself too.
>She really did however, feel bad that the other two ragged on you. Especially Sweetie Belle.
>"Trust me Anon, nothing can go wrong. Not one thing We'll go in, come out. And go see the girls and let them know what's up" Scootaloo's plan was pretty thin. You knew SOME extra precautions were needed.
"Sure, but Scoots. We have to act like Scrappy lied to you about what he said. We have to go in there acting like we knew what I just knew. And act like we discussed that it's possible we were lied too because she's "Evil and always up to no good" and stuff like that. Which is, well, obviously true anyway."
>"Ohhh..right. I don't want to get Scrappy in trouble either. Ok, I got it. It shouldn't be too hard, I didn't trust her anyway" Scootaloo giggled "You did though, that's still kinda funny."
>you give her a grumpy face and you groan.
>It just makes her laugh a little harder

>>29095882
>......
>"sorry Anon, it's just pretty silly...but ok" Scootaloo takes a breath, and calms down to stop from laughing. "I got this."
>You start fumbling around in your saddlebag for the map.
"Just don't say stuff like that in front of her, ok? She tends to tease me too and that will just make things worse"
>"Got it.." She giggles again "but...geez Anon, c'mon. Don't be so whipped. You're a hero remember?"
>......mmnnnggghhh
"Yeah...look, just focus ok?"
>Scootaloo nods, and tries again. Looking forward with a serious face "Ok...now I got it"
"Good.."
>.....Hopefully she did anyway...sheesh. No respect, no respect at all.
>And so, you and scootaloo returned to your home via the river that ran through town.
>This was gonna be a thing.....oh lordy.

>>29095888
Fuck year!

Once again Scootaloo proves that she is best CMC member. Also Erf, you seem to have a hate boner for Sweetie Belle.

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>>29096325
Scootaloo CUTEST CMC.

>>29095888
>Scootaloo and Mini-Discord face Chrysalis together
>Scootaloo gets hypnotized the moment she even dares to raise her voice against bug breathe
>Scoots become Chrysi's puppet drone

>>29096415
This, as cute and adorable as Scoots attitude was, I just can't see any other outcome for her but to get hypnotized or to be placed in a pod

>>29093577

An early update for you wonderful fucks.

>While discord was gone, the stack of papers remained on the ceiling, only one paper was out of place, the one Discord was holding. It too was affected by the pull, letting it slowly float to the ceiling with the others.
>Sighing, you walk over to one of the chairs on the wall. Both were nearly touching the ground, so you were able to hop up onto one easily enough.
>Though, when you expected to land on the back, you were quickly pulled to the bottom of the seat, so that you were sitting in it properly.
>So, apparently, what you assume is Discords house, changes gravity on a whim. Not that you were complaining, it was pretty fucking awesome! But it was also pretty disorienting, with the wall becoming the floor all of a sudden. On a side note, you were right about the chair being comfortable, you didn't want to leave.
>Buuuut your curiosity calls.
>You poke your ha-hoof…out into the area off of the chair. It doesn't feel any different than on the chair, so you try stepping out onto the wall. And to your surprise, you stay there. Even if you jump, you stay on the wall. Hmm.
>Walking up to the wall that used to be the ceiling, you put your hoof onto it. It pulled your hoof onto it letting you continue walking onto the ceiling. This was really strange.
>You spend a good while entertaining yourself with the gravity. Jumping from one wall to another, sitting in the corner of the ceiling to see what happens, anything at all. That is, until you notice that you could now reach the papers on the ceiling.
>Heh, well Discord isn't the only one allowed to know what's going on.

>>29097338
>You walk to the ceiling and lay in front of the single sheet of paper on the ground. Luckily for you, it was face up.
>On it were a lot of big words and you knew the meaning of almost none of them. The only part that you could read with any clarity, was the section on you. It said exactly what Discord was angry about, one lifetime of responsibility for you. Below that was how you were to be treated.
>Wow! If KK actually did write this, then she set you up good! Not in a bad way, but she was very specific on how you had to be treated.
>Three meals a day, own room, transportation, education.
>Education…
>Now that interested you. You read more in depth.
>”…education for subject ‘Ano’ will be provided by the princess, Twilight Sparkle. Lessons will be arranged by myself for personal, one-on-one tutoring…”
>Holy shit! KK set you up with stuff that would be king levels back on Tetra. No one but the high-ups got any of the things that you would be getting here!
>And school…being taught…and by a princess if you read correctly. You couldn't wait! Even if Discord was a COMPLETE dick from here on out, it would be worth putting up with him for all of this.
>And speak of the devil.
>Discord pops back into the room with the signature white flash. He was in a state of disarray, even more so than before.
>His eyebrows were singed, most of his tail seemed to be bitten off, his left horn was gone, and his wings were on upside down. Unlike when he left, he seemed to be more annoyingly tired, than angry.

>>29084973
>>29087582
>Maternal Trixie
Well, I haven't thought about Ano having a mother figure yet...
>...
>......
>.........
Lemme just go and edit my shit really quickly...

>>29097418
Why would Twilight train a dude that is a pegasus? Twilight is fucking awful at flying

>>29095600
Man, he really was a NEET weeb wasn't he?

>>29098233
She will provide education as in schooling for Anon. Someone else will have to teach him how to fly.

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>>29095888
SCOOTALOO NO, ANON YOU IDIOT

THE ONLY REASON CHRYSALIS IS BEARABLE TO YOU IS BECAUSE SHE LIKES YOU

FOR SOME REASON

I have an update almost ready to go, but I just bought Shantae Half Genie Hero, rest assured, I will post after I finish playing

>>29095888
Great job Anon! Just perfect! Take the filly that has a physical disability and a sensitivity to said disability. Why don't you take Derpy with you too? I'm sure that it will all be PEACHY.

>>29099132
it is perfect. it won't lead to a
ULTRA MEGA SPOILERS
SUPER ULTRA SPOILERS
SPOILERS GOKU SATSU
Anon/Scrappy/ Luna adventure

>>29099212
Sweet

>>29083622
>All in all, the party went pretty good, once you re-entered the hall, Cherrywood basically never left your side, and the fact that she seemed to get along super well with your mom was a huge bonus.
>But alas, everything has to come to an end, and after a few hours of fun, the party had to end too. All of your friends from Ponyville had to return by train to their home town, Discord and Eris poofed away, your moms had some royal work left to do.
>And so on and so on, after your moms asked some of the castle staff to clean the party and bring the few gifts that they brought to your room, you decide…to not actually go to your room.
>It wasn’t night time, in fact, the sun was just starting to set, maybe you didn’t have enough time to go to Canterlot, but you bet that you could have a little stroll around the gardens.
>But that was tooo boooring… so what you did was to teleport all around the hallways to avoid being detected by the guards, reached your room and took the necklace that your mom Luna gave to you before the chaos carnival and the coat that mom Celestia just gifted you today.
>Aaaaand, you teleport all over the place until you reach the frontal gate, where you teleport once more into a set of bushes that were located right in front of the outer wall.
>Heh, no one saw you, no one suspected a thing… thank god for the incredibly lame security of the castle… sheesh, Moonlight really needs to put the guards on check.
>But for this time, their negligence played in your favor, you were going to chill out for a moment in Canterlot…on your own…and enjoy a little cup of coffee…or tea…or maybe some doughnuts…nah mate, how about some chilli dogs, you haven’t had those since you were a human.
>Now that you remember, you haven’t eat tacos in at least a year or two now, Tijuana kinda traumatized you with that dish… and speaking of traumas, frickin’ gypsies man, those jerks where all over Rome, ruining your vacations completely.

>>29099533
>And speaking of ruining moments, now that you remember, you haven’t thought that much about that other Anon, which you have concluded in multiple occasions that he must be the king of jerks, and… and… you got derailed…
>Maybe it would be better if you get your flank moving before you spent the entire afternoon making pointless ramblings and freeze to death…
>And so, you make your way through the snow covered streets of Canterlot, enjoying yourself with the sights of the city and it’s ponies who were…
>Well, yeah, if there was one thing that you and your mom Celestia agreed 100% was that the elite ponies were a bunch of jerks.
>It felt a little like going back to Paris, the city was populated almost in its entirety by pricks, but man, wasn’t the buildings, museums and other historical places some of the best stuff that you have seen ever.
>And Canterlot actually rivaled Paris in beauty, heck, you would say that it surpassed it in some aspects, even more now since the snow gave the equestrian capital a certain whimsical atmosphere that was quite hard to put into words.
>The deeper you went into the city, the darker the sky started to get, you could see some stars shining, ponies in uniforms starting to light up the street lanterns…and you actually didn’t know where to go…
>So you could either A: get lost in the city, looking for a place not filled with these pompous jerks or B: Go to that nice little joint that had a sign which read “Sky Dreamers Café”
>And yeaaah…you had a history of getting kidnapped too, so maybe getting more adventurous wasn’t the best idea… even if it sounded fun…but no! You can’t risk yourself like that…but maybe…
>You slap your head before you get derailed once more, deciding to enter the Café, that as it turned out, it was on a basement.

>>29099545
>Regardless of that, the place itself was actually pretty cozy, everything was made of old wood, shelves with jars of coffee and boxes of tea were displayed behind the large counter.
>Portraits with landscapes, family photos, memories of old adventures and mementos of treasured moments were placed alongside the walls.
>From the ceiling a series of banners with the equestrian, Canterlot and wonderbolts flags were being hanged.
>Despite all of the little trinkets and decorations placed in the café, the place was quite small, not much larger than your classroom.
>Circular wooden tables with two or three chairs each were placed among the café. On top of each table rested small pots of sugar and honey.
>You decided to take seat at a table that you thought was a perfect spot to go unnoticed: On the farthest spot from the door, and in a corner.
>”Aren’t ya a little too young to be here on yer own?” An old looking gryphon asks you the moment that you sit.
>You shake your head and wave your hoof in a dismissive manner, picking up the menu that also was on the table with your magic
“Nope, I’m super mature and capable of doing everything on my own, now; could you please give me a cup of black coffee?”
>”Nah, that ain’t happening kiddo...” The gryphon shakes her head and takes away the menu from you
“Hey! I’m not just a kid! I’m more intelligent and mature than a normal kid! And I have money too, you see…”
>You reach to your saddlebag and…and…AWWW COME ON! HOW DID YOU FORGET YOUR FRICKIN’ SADDLEBAG!
>”And ya don’t have a single bit with ya…” The gryphon shakes her head and grabs you by your hoof “We ain’t charity kiddo, and even if ya did have a bag with a buncha bits, I wouldn’t take it because yer are too young to hang around this late, so why don’t ya tell me where yer parents are and-“

>>29099569
>”Madame, I understand your concern, but I will have to ask zat you release ze colt in zis very instant…” That voice…that accent… HOW DID SHE KNOW THAT YOU WERE HERE?!
>The gryphon raises an eyebrow, but nonetheless comply with the order that Aegia gave ”And who yer supposed to be?”
>Aegia takes a seat at the table, looking at you with some annoyance “You will have to excuse moi for my manners, Madame, but zat is not of your concern, ze only zing zat you need to know is zat ze colt comes wiz me, and zat I would like a cup of black tea, no sugar, no milk…”
>The white Pegasus throws a bag of bits on the table “As for ze colt…” Aegia takes a menu from a nearby table and gives it a glance “I zink zat a glass of your best milk would be fine…”
“Awww, but I wanted coffee, come on, just for this time, can I have a cup of that? Pleeeeasseeee?”
>But Aegia shakes her head “Non, ze coffee zat zey serve here is too strong for somepony of your age. It will be a glass of milk and zat is, understand?” The glare that Aegia gave to you…it sent a chill down your spine.
>You give a military salute to your friend and nod frantically
“Yes Ma’am! I understand Ma’am!”
>”Good, I zink zat would be it…” Aegia speaks to the gryphon, who shrugs and jolts down the order on a little notepad.
>”I will be back in a moment with yer stuff…” The gryphon rudely says before going back to the counter.
>Once Aegia is sure that the gryphon was gone, Aegia rests her hooves on the table and rolls her eyes ”Of all ze cafes in Canterlot, you decided to come to zis dumpster.”
“Well, I don’t know Canterlot that much, you can’t blame from not knowing where the cool stuff is and… hold on, hold on…let’s backtrack, how in the world did you know that I was here?”

>>29099585
>Aegia raises an eyebrow and gives you a little smirk before going back to her usual emotionless expression “I zought zat you were more intelligent zan zat, Mon Petit…” The white Pegasus chuckles “You didn’t care about covering your tracks, teleporting all over ze castle, and wandering around like a tourist, I have to say zat you are ze easiest target zat I’ve had to follow so far”
>Oh…so you weren’t as stealthy as you thought…but
“Wait a moment, I thought that you, Moonlight, RD and mom Luna were going to go to a bar or something, why did you come here instead of…well… literally anyone else?!”
>”Zere are protocols, Mon Petit, and you know zem very well. A member of royalty like yourself can’t go around wizout a body guard.” A little smile appears on Aegia’s face when she said that part
>But why? Why would…WAIT
“Did you say body guard? Does that mean that-“
>”Aaaah, took you long enough to figure zat one out…” Aegia nods and lets out a chuckle “Oui, ze application was approved zis morning, I’m officially your bodyguard now, well…” the white Pegasus rolls her eyes “Second bodyguard, General Moonlight is still ze main one”
“But that’s still awesome! Man, now THAT is what I call good news!”
>”Oui, and ze best part is zat ze pay is much higher zan ze secret service…” Aegia grabs the bag of bits and gives it a little glance “I zought zat you wouldn’t mind if you pay for our little celebration…”
“Well, I would love too, but I didn’t brought any money with me, soooo, what do you say if you take the shot this time, and I do it next time, I promise that…waaaaaaaiiiit…. I know that bag, and I know those bits!”
>”You have gotten a little slow for your own sake, Mon Petit…” Aegia replies with a playful tone “You know zis bag because I took it from your room, I never zought zat your mozers would give you zis much of an allowance, but I’m not making any complain, zis will be more zan enough to pay for ze bill, especially since you picked such an expensive café”

>>29099588
“Awwwww! I was saving that money to buy a dragon figurine that I saw on the Canterlot market! It came with a knight set with catapults and all that cool stuff! It’s not fair!”
>But Aegia just shrugs “Life isn’t fair, Mon Petit-“
>”Here ya go…” The old gryphon puts the cup of coffee, the glass of milk and some napkins on the table “What yer ordered, will ya want anything more?”
>”Oui…” Aegia nods “Bring ze colt a piece of apple pie, I will want some of ze cheese cake zat you serve, and I expect it to be good”
>”Whatever, ya better leave a good tip…” The gryphon jolts down the new order before going back behind the table once more
>Once Aegia makes sure that no one was listening, she turns to you and leans on the table, speaking in a lower volume ”Now, I know zat you aren’t dumb, Mon Petit, but before our ozer guest arrives, I want to tell you about ze ozer zing zat I found in zat mess zat you call room”
>Aegia threw a small box on the table wrapped in a simple but cute gift paper. And you knew what that box was, you knew where it came from…
>You look to the gift and then to Aegia who was now resting on her chair, her eyes piercing into yours
“This is one of the gifts from my party…the gift that Twilight gave to me…it even says on the card “From Twilight to Anon” Why did you bring it here?”
>But Aegia just replies with a cold ”Open it…” as she brings the gift closer to you.
>You open it, taking away the wrapping very slowly, and it was…
“A book?”
>It was a thick one at that, titled “The art of forgiving by Twinkle Letter”. You also notice that a letter came with the book too.
>You didn’t wait for Aegia’s instructions, you opened the letter and read its contents which were as follows.

>>29099597
>”Dear Anon. When I started writing this letter, I thought that it would be easy, just a nice and polite welcome and apology for not visiting you or your family in so long. But the more I thought about it, the more I realized how difficult it was to ask for your forgiveness. But wait, I suppose that even when I’m trying to convey my feelings of regret, I should not forget the proper etiquette that should be in a letter.
>”So, let me start by writing, Hi Anon! I hope that everything has been going well for you. There I wrote it, now while I do hope that you have been doing more than just fine, I should first apologize that I will be a little selfish and base this letter about my personal feelings”
>You take a pause and look to Aegia who just motions you to continue reading
>”First of all, I have to admit that the fact that I haven’t paid too much attention to you has kept me a little uneasy, I don’t mean that in a sense that you might be doing something wrong or that your behavior has been poor, everything that I have heard points otherwise”
>”But rather in the sense that I consider us family, you see Anon, I have always looked at your mother as if she was like family to me, so I hope that the son of my tutor, my mentor, friend, and family, may look at me in the same way as I look at his mother“
>”At this point you might have seen the title of the book, maybe you even read a few pages before even opening my letter, and I know that the gift I sent to you might pale in comparison to others, but the subject matter I think, is important for the both of us.”
>”For me, because I have to learn to forgive myself for not acting like the friend that I should have been, for not being the mentor that I wish I could have been for you just like your mother was for me.”

>>29099607
>”And for you, because I want this book to symbolize the fact that I’m want to say I’m sorry, and because I believe that there’s something that you can improve too, because you see Anon, I also believe that there’s a certain somepony that you should forgive too.”
>” I’m not saying that this is an act that you should do right away, but considering what your special talent entails, I believe that even after everything that Starlight Glimmer tried to do to you, you should consider to forgive her.”
>”I know how hard it is for you to even consider that possibility, and how cynical I may seem for even daring to suggest such thing. But I do wish for us to get along better, to be friends, to be like family, so, if it’s not too much to ask, I would like to request a meeting, just the two of us”
>”Please Anon, let us talk about this subject matter in a neutral zone, you chose the place and I will happily attend to it, waiting for you answer, no matter what it might be, I just wish for us to be friends. With love, Twilight Sparkle”
>The barrage of emotions that this letter made you feel was…overwhelming to say the least. You could tell how much regret Twilight felt over what you thought was simply a natural occurrence of life.
>After all, life sometimes gets in the way, preventing you from seeing friends and family, sometimes as work, sometimes as a weird alien with god-like powers.
>But the fact that she saw you as family, that she was feeling awful that you and her never really became close, not even as casual friends, really seemed to affect her…and that made you feel…sad
>You liked Twilight, she was beautiful, she was smart, she was kind. During your first days in Equestria you always wished to be with her…then you kinda forgot her.
>You want to see Twilight now, probably more now than ever but then…but then she mentioned Starlight.

>>29099617
>That pony who took the suffering of your mothers and transformed it into nothing more than a tool to brainwash you, and then had the audacity to try and blast you three times…and she might have succeeded if it wasn’t for Aegia, Moonlight and…Discord.
>But… harmony does mean to forgive, not to forget, but to forgive…what if-
>”Don’t zink too much about it” Aegia snaps you back into reality…and you notice that your apple pie was on the table “Just go zere and talk wiz ze Princess just like she requested…”
“Yeah, I guess that you are right, it’s just that…WAIT!”
>That wasn’t right, that wasn’t right a single bit
“How did you know what the letter said?”
>”What do you mean, Mon Petit?” Aegia asks with a smirk on her face
“Telling me to do what the letter said and talk with Twilight, I never mentioned that the letter had anything like that, in fact, I didn’t mention the letter. I’m not dumb you know? Your attitude and what you said, makes me think that you already knew what I just read”
>Aegia takes a sip of her tea, but makes a disgusted face, leaving the cup on the table “Seriously Mon Petit, ze ponies of Canterlot don’t understand how to make good drinks, one day I will take you to Prance so you can learn what good tea tastes like…”
“Aegia, please, don’t dodge the question”
>The white Pegasus rolls her eyes and chuckles “I have worked many moons at ze secret service, I know how to open packages wizout anypony ever knowing zat zey where open, and before you get mad, as I said, zere are protocols, and one of zose is to check any gift zat a member of royalty gets, zat way, we can know zat ze princesses actually gets a gift and not somezing else”
>You raise an eyebrow and look at Aegia with some… annoyance
“Did you do the same with my other gifts?”

>>29099641
>Aegia nods “Oui, ze young sisters of ze elements of harmony gifted you a razer rare and expensive collection of ze power ponies’ cards. My favorite one was ze gift zat ze element of honesty gave to you, a razer cute hat, too bad zat you can’t use it because of how zis winter turned out to be”
>You shake your head and sigh
“I understand why you did it…I don’t like it…I don’t like it a single bit…but okay…so, before I get derailed with something else, tell me Aegia, what do you think? Should I talk with Twilight? Should I forgive Starlight?”
>Aegia nods “Oui, you should talk wiz ze Princess of Friendship, it makes nopony good if you two aren’t on good terms, but as for forgiving zat ozer mare…”
>Aegia sighs, and looks at you directly in the eye “Listen Mon Petit, you will listen to everyzing zat ze Princess has to say, but you will listen wiz skepticism, you are going to tell her zat you will zink about it and zen, you will report everyzing zat mare said to me and me only, is zat clear?”
>You narrow your eyes at Aegia, now there was something seriously suspicious about that
“And why? You know that I was going to be skeptic about whatever Twilight had to say in regards of Starlight, no matter if she sent a letter or not. How you said everything sounds as if you were planning something, and if I’m right, then that means that you want that info for that plan…”
>Aegia gives you a little smirk “Aaaah, so you can be sharp, good, good, I like zat. It means zat you can be fit to be an actual prince. As for your question, oui, I have been keeping an eye on zat Starlight Glimmer ever since she got sent to prison…”
>You take a sip of your glass of milk… eugh … this thing tasted worse than Mexican water…nope… you don’t want to spend another week and a half trapped in your bathroom
“Okay, I will tell you every single detail of my conversation with Twilight, IF, you tell me everything piece of information that you have gathered about Starlight”

>>29099648
>”Aaaah! So you can negotiate too! Zat is even better!” Aegia claps her hooves “Too bad zat you worded yourself in ze wrong way, you had to ask about everyzing zat I know about Starlight AND Twilight”
>Oh, that’s right, Twilight was heavily involved with Starlight, you couldn’t discard her…dang
>Aegia lets out a small giggle and rests on her chair “But I will tell you anyways, just try to avoid zose rookie mistakes, trust me, zey can end up costing you more zan some info.”
>You don’t say anything, just gulp and nod
>”I have to admit zat I don’t know as much as I would like to. Just zat Princess Twilight visits Starlight twice per week, and zat zey have become quite close, but just zat, after all, Glimmer is at a maximum security prison” The white Pegasus sighs “And ze secret service hasn’t been of much help eizer, since zis also requires keeping tabs on a Princess, and zat is not somezing zat zose cowards likes to do that much…”
“Maybe not the service, but what about-“
>”Your mozers?” Aegia asks with a playful smile
>You nod
>”Zey are no fools, in fact, I have been able to do what little I have achieved zanks to Princess Celestia, as for ze Princess of ze Night…”
>The white Pegasus takes a bite of her cake, but just like with the tea, she makes a disgusted face and leaves it be “Ugh, what is wrong wiz zis place?! Never mind, as I was saying in regards of ze younger Princess, I don’t know much, just zat just like me, ze General of ze Night Guard is handling personally a secret investigation on Starlight Glimmer”
“And have you talked with Moonlight? Because I find hard to believe that my mothers would keep that kind of secrets from each other”
>Aegia gives you a reassuring smile ”And they aren’t, ze General and moi are actually going to talk about zis subject tomorrow morning, so you don’t have to worry about your dear mozers going on each ozers backs”

>>29099671
“Thanks the heavens…hmmm…okay, so we’ll have to wait until hearing what Moonlight has to say, but what about Twilight? Do you have any info about her and Starlight?”
>Aegia shakes her head and sighs “Non, ze details about ze conversations zat ze Princess of Friendship has wiz Starlight Glimmer is somezing zat I don’t know. Luckily I have my own resources, so I have been able to at least keep an eye on ze Princess of Friendship ”
“Everything about this feels strange… And tell me Aegia, because this is very important, how reliable is your source?”
>Aegia smiles at this and nods ”I like your sharpness more and more Mon Petit, you see zanks to Princess Celestia, I have been able to get a contact in Ponyville, a veteran agent from an agency zat was disbanded long ago, she’s retired, but she’s still loyal and willing to do anyzing for ze Princess”
“Well…that sounds reliable enough…what has this agent told you?”
>”Zat Twilight’s relationship wiz Starlight has started to put in jeopardy her friendship wiz ze rest of ze elements of harmony” Aegia could tell your immediate reaction of surprise and giggles “Aaaah! Seems like I impressed you wiz zat bit of news, Mon Petit!”
“How could expect me to not get surprised by that?! B-But don’t keep me in suspense!”
>”I’m afraid zat ze details are vague, zat agent isn’t too close to any of ze elements or ze Princess…” Aegia says with a frown “But she has confirmed zat most of zem has grown more and more distant to ze Princess, even ze ones zat initially backed her on reforming Glimmer, especially ze element of laughter”
>Aegia stretches herself a little and gives you a sultry smile “Now, zat is everyzing zat I know so far, but I’m even wiz zis scarce information, zere are some logical deductions to be made, I have mine, but I want you to impress me, Mon Petit, so I’m going to ask what do you zink about zis whole situation?”

>>29099684
>You really need to stay focused, to not get derailed and start thinking about stupid stuff like that one time where you almost failed an exam because you kept imagining how awesome it would be to…
>You shake your head…No, no, no! FOCUS! You close your eyes and take a deep breathe…okay….you take another breathe…you can do this…
>After some minutes of heavy thinking, you open your eyes and rest on the table, looking at Aegia directly in the eye
“Well, as you said, we can deduce some scenarios based on the information and evidence that we have. First of all, it would be stupid from us to label our worries as mere paranoia, there must be something fishy going on if Moonlight is personally handling an investigation on Starlight, and even more when Twilight’s friends are distancing from her, now...”
>You take a bite of your slice of apple pie…ewwww! This tasted horrible!
“We aren’t paying for this, right?”
>”I’m definitely not, but you are.” Aegia replies with a smirk
“Awwwww… well, moving on… we could put that distancing if it was just Rarity, RD and Applejack, but your source said that Pinkie Pie was also starting to distance herself from Twilight, and everything seems to point that her conversations with Starlight are to blame, then again, Starlight is super intelligent and has a silver tongue, so I doubt that it was the actual conversations but more like…”
>”Her attitude” Aegia interrupts you with a cheerful tone “oui, zat is a brilliant deduction, Mon Petit! Ze element of laughter profile does says zat she’s very empazetic, so it makes more sense zat she sensed somezing wrong wiz Glimmer razer zan somezing zat she said”
“Wait, I’m not finished yet…”
>Aegia was surprised by your response, but nonetheless, she smiles and nods ”Oh? Zen go on, I’m already impressed but I can get impressed even furzer…”

>>29099696
“Now, this isn’t a deduction but a guess… as the princess of friendship, Twilight must be desperate that she’s losing her friends just because she wants to reform what she thinks is a pony in dire need of friendship. So that letter can be an honest attempt for us to become closer, but that last request…”
>”Oui…” Aegia nods, smiling proudly “Zat last request changes everyzing once we consider how ze Princess of Friendship is faring, right Mon Petit?”
>You slowly nod…
“Given her current situation… hmmm… I don’t really want this to be true… I-I really don’t, trust me, I really like Twilight, a-and I do want for us to be closer friends because I think that she’s cool a-and all that, but… but….”
>”Go on, Mon Petit…” Aegia’s smile was growing wider and wider “You are almost zere…”
“We can’t really trust that her intentions are that… well… how do I put it? Uhhm… ehhh… well, let’s just say, that this ain’t looking completely honest… it feels… it feels as if she’s just doing this to gain my support on her cause”
>”And why ze Princess of Friendship would want your support, Mon Petit?” Dang, Aegia knew the answer… but she wanted to hear it from your lips
“Because the whole reason that Starlight is on jail, and one of the main motives that made her friends to go against the idea of reforming her…is me… if the pony who Starlight attacked forgives her, there won’t be a reasonable argument to be against her reformation”
>Aegia nods proudly, her emotionless expression gone in favor of a big smile “Now, one last zing, and zis is very important: given ze information zat we have, what should we do next?”
“Well…hmmmm…”
>You take another set of breathes and some minutes to think about it… but you actually didn’t know…
“Ummm…I-I don’t know…C-Can’t we just…you know? Wait and see? D-Don’t take me wrong, this is worrying b-but-“

>>29099710
>Aegia shakes her head and sighs “You were so close, but…” the white Pegasus shrugs “Ozer zan your ze cowardly tone of zat last statement, you were magnifique”
“H-Hey!”
>Aegia holds her right front hoof in the air, making you shut up “Oui, ze manner in which you said our plan of action was terrible, but you are right. Oui, Mon Petit, we have to wait for more information to arrive, zat is, for our agent in Ponyville to find more about ze situation wiz ze Princess and for me to talk wiz ze General, now…”
>Aegia stretches herself and yawns “Let go back to ze castle, it is getting late, you have school tomorrow, and ze element of loyalty is paying for ze drinks tonight”
“School?! Are you crazy?! After everything that you have told me? I-I can’t go back just like that! We need to-“
>”Wait and see…” Aegia interrupts you, giving you that scary as heck glare “Do not forget Mon Petit, zat everyzing zat I have told you is off-record, and zat you still have responsibilities, you don’t want to disappoint those lovely fillies from your classroom, right?”
“Waaaait…”
>You narrow your eyes at Aegia
“How did you know that I’m running for school president?”
>”I didn’t…” Aegia giggles “But you just told me, and zat is an even better reason for you to go to bed. Now, let’s go back to ze castle, relax a little, and zen you go back to sleep, because now you have a new order: You are going to win zat election, is zat clear, Mon Petit?” That glare…oh man…
>You gulp and give Aegia a military salute
“Yes, Ma’am Aegia! As clear as water Ma’am Aegia! I will do my best and only my best to win the election, Ma’am Aegia!”
>”Good…” Aegia chuckles to herself “Zat is what I wanted to hear, I hate ponies who complain about everyzing…”

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>>29099724
And that's it! I really hope that you have enjoyed this! I have several stuff planned for the future, and this is one of the major things. For the school election, don't worry, we'll be back to it in no time!

As always, please leave your feedback and thoughts! Oh, and for those looking for a good platforming game, Shantae Half Genie Hero came out today, it is quite fun so far and the music is simple fantastic. ´Performance is all over the place though.

>>29099724
>Starlight got sent to a maximum security prison thanks to PhD
>Starlight got humilliated and disregarded as a delusional mare thanks to PhD
>Starlight got robbed from her future and labeled as a a terrorists thanks to PhD
>Starlight lost any opportunity for making any ftiend outside of Twilight Sparkle and even then, it was only because she is the princess of friendship, all thanks to PhD
>Starlight lost her dreams
>Starlight lost her freedom
>Starlight lost her hope
>All thanks to PhD

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>>29099973
>Why are we still here? Just to suffer? Every night, I can see my town... and my ideals... even my destiny. The equality I've lost... the friend I've lost... won't stop hurting... It's like they're all still there. You feel it, too, don't you Twilight? I'm gonna make him give back our future.

>>29099212
>Insert random meme about me not listening to the GOKU SATSU spoilers

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>>29100391
"The world calls for wet-work, and we answer! No greater harmony. No equal cause! We pull in bits, friendships, just to ruin Anon. Rubbing our muzzles in muddy inequality dirt. All for revenge."

>[Dun Dun Dun Duuuun]

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>>29100451
>>29100391
>>29099973
>Anon sents us to Tartarus, but we are going even further! Take back everything we have lost!
"Starlight, I'm already an alicorn"

Phone autocorrects "fantastique" to "fantastic" as well as a bunch of other stuff. Oh well, I guess that I will have to get used to these gigantic phones.

>>29099973
>>29100391
>>29100451
>>29100477
The only thing that I can tell, is that you will have to wait, right now, we are still in the "Trump" arch as that other Anon named it

sorry I missed writing tonight guys. I was doing some stuff. didn't even notice the time

>>29101609
Fuck

I love you guys, but please post more

>>29099753
Do you have a fetish for being dominated by an older woman?

>>29102878
I do like milfs, but no, that is not my fetish. Why do you ask, anon?

>>29101609
rest in pieces

>>29079685
It's just that out of any writter of tgis thread, you seem like the most arrogant to me, again, no offence, but how little you actually participate in the thread other than just posting your story makes you feel like a bit like a douche.

Speaking of stories

>>29099753
oh boy, Starlight Glimmer wants to be back, Twilight wants het back, but everyone else doesn't. I do wonder how PhD would react if he knew about ErfAnon and Starlight

>>29103401
PhD thinks that ErfAnon is a jerk, and that there is something fishy about him and his relationship with the changelings, the fact that other anon even managed to do inter dimensional travel makes him nervous, and is because PhD doesn't why ErfAnon went to his dimension, he just knows that the only ways for him to have gotten there was with chaos magic. So that Discord approved that "attack", that Anon has chaos magic of his own... or both.

So if PhD ever knew that ErfAnon is besties with the pony that he considers a dangerous criminal. Well, PhD would go into Defcon 2

Come on guys, stop being so lame and post

Bump.
I got high and started catching up. Got to the point where chrissy handled the ex captain.

>>29103401
Sorry, but I usually don't participate in any threads I view. This is really the only exception, so posting my story would actually be the kindest thing I'd be doing. It's just too bad I haven't been feelin' it lately.

>>29105390
Ah, I see, that sucks

I don't care about Starlight! PhD is supposed to lead a life where he learns how to become a leader, not a hero! Hero stuff is for erfanon, I want to get back to the school election!

>>29106755
I support this

Are we getting erf green tonight?

>>29095888
>So there you both were. In your room. Scootaloo was still pretty amazed, just like last time, how neat it was to jump into water and come out in a room.
>"I wish I had a way to go back home anytime I want. That'd be so cool!" Scootaloo said as she hopped off your bed and looked upon your closed floor door.
"I guess, It is pretty convenien-Scootaloo wait!"
>You stop Scootaloo has she opens the floor door. She stops, but she hadn't planned to delve any deeper anyway. "What?"
"There's no stairs there, you gotta be careful. You have to use a special way to get down"
>"Well, Yeah. I can see that.I wasn't just gonna go down like that" Scootaloo looks down at the stairless drop to the living room. "...So how do we get down there exactly?"
"Easy, you just need to focus on "Stairs". Like, just focus and imagine there are stairs and you'll be able to walk down just fine. It took me a little bit to get used to it. But it actually is pretty easy. Here, let me go first. And then you try"
>Scootaloo steps aside as you focus and head down the gravity stairs.
>You give a warm smile and look upwards as you call to Scootaloo
"Ok, Scoots, your turn"
>But, no answer. Instead you feel tap at the back of your neck that sends shivers down your spine.
"HOLY G-GEEZ, C-Chrysalis?!"
>You look back to see who tapped you with a hoof. But it...was Scootaloo?
"S-Scoots? H-how did you get down here so fast?"
>"Duh, I just followed you and used my wings to hover down here. I can't fly yet, but I can at least sorta float now." Scootaloo gave you a smug smirk "Gotcha good, huh?"
"tch, no!...I was just...."
>"Yeeeah...I got you. You were like "C-c-c-chrysalis?!"" Scootaloo makes a face to imitate yours when you got startled, then chuckles "It was pretty funny"
>.....uugghhhhh
>You just peer into Scootaloo's eyes with a hard stare
"Do you get off on messing with me like that?"
>"Get off?...uhhh, does that mean like...find it funny?"

>>29107384
ITS ERF TIME

>>29107384
>Ahh shit, she didn't understand the meaning of the phrase.Ugh, sometimes you forget you also have to keep a certain level of cleanliness in your own speech.
".....uhhh..Yeah"
>"Then yeah...Come on Anon, it's not like I'm being mean. It's just a joke, you're still cool. You don't need to act so seriously...geez.." Scootaloo pokes your side to try to elicit a smile, but you didn't feel very ticklish at the moment "Where did your funny bone go?"
>You sigh, Maybe you were being too serious. Then again, at this moment...you needed to be.
"Scoots look, we need to be serious here. We're going down to see Chrysalis. And one mistake and this could turn super sour super fast."
>"Hey, I got it Anon. I know how to be serious" Scootaloo points to herself with pride as she stands with bravado and courageousness "Just watch this." Scootaloo then gives you a very stoic face, and yet, it was nearly menacing "Listen here Bug Breath, we have a feeling you were lying to us and even made Scrappy lie. Because come on. When do you NOT have something evil planned? I'm calling you out!" Scootaloo then gives you a cheerful smile "See?"

>>29107416
>Hmmm, that was kinda good.
"Yeah, that's ok. But don't insult her, and don't be too demanding. We also gotta make sure not to piss her off. Trust me, we won't get anywhere if she gets angry"
>"Mnnnngh." Scootaloo did kind of want to tick her off just to tick her off. But she also considered the weight of the situation and how it could affect her friends. Including Scrappy. Although, she was still ignorant of the dangers of meeting her period. "Fine, I guess. She really doesn't deserve to be talked too as if everything about her was nice either y'know."
"I know, but this is something that heroes have to do sometimes. Sometimes, they gotta do what they don't want to do"
>"Yeah I know, I've heard Rainbow Dash say that...sooo" Scootaloo looked around "Where is the hive place anyway?"
>You walk over to the trap door and open it, revealing cave steps that lead into Chrysalis's lair.
"Right down here"
>"Woah, so it leads into an actual cave? Weird." Scootaloo said as she looked down into the dank,dark, and dreary abyss below.
"Yep, not scared, are you? You can always turn back"
>"What? pfft, no. I was just surprised it leads into a cave" Scootaloo ,feeling challenged, steps on ahead. "C'mon already, let's get this over with!"
>...damn, welp. You should have expected she would just press forward. You remembered her camping trip with her and three of the mane six. Always acting brave, and lost sleep over it due to being scared.
>You both start going down the steps together. Leaving the safe confines of the living room into the creepy darkness of the caverns below.
>"She's actually ok with living down in here?" Scootaloo asks
"Sorta, she hates being forced to live here but this basement is where she's most comfortable."
>"Huh...weird. So, she can't really hurt us right? Like, even if she even really wanted to?" Scootaloo asked, a faint hint of fear in her voice
"Nope, if she tried. She'd just rocket off in the other direction."

>>29107456
>"Ha!" Scootaloo hopped down a few steps and looked forward with bravery "This will totally be a cinch then!"
>But before you could try to Warn Scootaloo to not get too cocky, you both start hearing shuffling sounds ahead. With low moans and small voices saying "Foooood"
>Scootaloo immediatly darts behind you and looks over you. "W-what's that?"
>At first you didn't know, but as you saw some glassy bluish eyes peering up from below. You started to realize what's going on.
"...It's just the changelings. Look, Scoots. Don't get scared..i-"
>"Scared? Ha! I'm not scared..." She said as she still stuck behind you, looking over you with frightened eyes as she tried to put on a brave face "What do they want anyway?"
"I think they are sensing some raw emotion"
>You know for the most part, they leave you alone on Chrysalis's command, also because you knew how to fill your heart with deep depression bullshit and pure hatred. Scootaloo on the other hand."In other words, food. Scoota, before we go any further. You're gonna have to think of something that makes you angry and sad. And keep it in your head. They can smell the love and excitement off of you"
>"O-oh...erm. I-I guess I can do that...let me think...erm.." Then Scootaloo thought of something, but just thinking it, along with the ever slight drain she was feeling as you both stood near the entrance to the hive, made her actually feel rather down. "..mnnnn...I really hate it when ponies make fun of the fact that I can't fly..or get compared to something like a chicken."
>You look back at her, you could see the genuine hurt in her face. But, you could see the glow of the changelings backing off, the sounds lowering.
"I'm sorry Scoots. But you're just going to have to keep that thought burning through your head right now. Try not to let it bother you too much, but as long as it makes you sad. You should be fine."

>>29107511
>"I'll be fine..so, even though they can't hurt me. They can still eat love?" Scootaloo asked with a notable drop in enthusiasm in her voice.
"Yeah, and since you're a visitor, they won't hesitate"
>And saying those very words. It made you feel unsure about your decision to bring her down here.
"Scoots, are you sure you don't want to go back? There's no shame in backing out"
>"Well...they can't feed off me if I just keep thinking bad stuff right?" Scootaloo asks you
"Well yeah but-"
>"Then I'm going. If they can't hurt me or eat my love, then they can't do squat to me. We've got em' right where we want em'" Scootaloo said with confidence as she started to go ahead of you, stepping down the final steps. Dammit! You rush up to her quickly as step in front of her.
"Scoots, I'm serious, We should head back"
>"We already got this far Anon, Can't you trust me? I said I got this" Scootaloo says as she steps ahead of you into the lair of Queen Chrysalis.
>...she wasn't listening. Goddammit Scoots.
>You could hear the changelings start to stir again.
"If you're gonna step out like that at least remember to keep what I said in mind. They can smell you again."
>Scootaloo stops, and looks around. She didn't see anything until she looked up and gulped. Seeing the eyes of Changelings clinging on the ceiling. "...r-right.."
>She just sat there, seemingly petrified, looking straight up, was it finally sinking in as to where she actually was?

>>29107584
"Scoots?....."
>"I'm fine Anon...I'm doing what you said. I'm thinking really depressing thoughts." She was doing her best anyway, the changelings didn't make a move, they just, observed. Scootaloo stood and walked forward as bravely as she could "C'mon, or are you the one who's scared?" She was being aggressive, she was feigning bravery.
>You don't say a word as you sped up your step to stay ahead of her. Now you were getting annoyed. And yet, something did strike you as frightful...but what?
"...Just let me start this little dialogue, huh? And just follow my lead"
>"No problem, you know her better than I do anyway. That's why I got your back. We can do this" Scootaloo said, slowly looking around, afraid she might get jumped.
>Finally, you both approached Chrysalis's throne, behind it....her Ferrari was parked. Chrysalis herself resting on her throne after a day of driving like a fucking nutcase.
>Though now, the throne itself had been replaced. It's been made longer, larger, and more accommodating for resting. It even had another seat similar next to it. And a cup ho...oh god. She had a new throne converted to be like the seats of a car, but enlarged.
>"Psst, Anon" Scootaloo whispered "What's that weird thing behind her weird chair? It looks like a huge boxcar"
"Don't ask, it'd take too long to explain"
>You whisper back.
>And as you both approached, Chrysalis's eyes slowly open as she slowly gazes upon the both of you. With noticable surprise.

>>29107707
>"Well well well, how interesting." Chrysalis sat up right slowly as she gazed directly at Scootaloo "Anon, you brought a friend. Tell me, what's the occasion? It must be something important" Chrysalis then gazed upon you, there wasn't a smile on her face as she spoke, in fact, she seemed somewhat annoyed. "Considering you seemed to have told her enough to keep her love locked up inside, amazing, she must be thinking of something truly depressing to keep my children from feeding."
>You take a breath, and then give Chrysalis a stern look.
"She's here with me because I told her how you said you weren't planning anything evil, which the cpatain had also told her. Essentially, we think you lied to the captain to make sure he didn't let anything slip because anything YOU have to say is probably a lie. I well...." You act falsely embarrassed . "I should have guessed you would have lied to me. Yo0u usually do about things like this."
>"Yeah, how can you lie to Scrappy like that? What are you planning bug breath?" Scootaloo let's out. She sounded pretty angry. Whatever she was keeping in mind to stay negative, it must have also made her upset.
>AHH SHIT!
>You tense up, ready to get Scootaloo out of there immediately. But Chrysalis doesn't act. She merely makes a rather sour face. "Bug Breath? Hmmm" She then looks upon you again "Anon, I'll let that slide. But I would suggest your friend watch her tongue while in my presence. Or something might just happen to it. But..." Chrysalis hops off her throne and walks over to her ferrari as she slides her hoof along the upper edge of it. "I have to admit, she was right about me, I did in fact lie. Oopsie, I was caught by the dumb detectives of Ponyville. So then, what exactly was your next move after finding me out?" Chrysalis then looks to Scootaloo with a sinister grin "I mean, to bring a filly down here just for a silly simple lie. It must be my birthday, So rarely these days I get to make a pony suffer so much"

>>29107733
>Scootaloo rolls her eyes at her "Oh please, I know you can't hurt me. So stop acting so tough! We came for answers!"
>Chrysalis again did not like Scootaloo's impertinent tone. "Cute...she doesn't understand the scope of the situation. That's fine. Since it seems I've clearly been outmatched. I'll tell you my plan. You see, a very dangerous changeling by the name of Thorax, a changeling who had defected secretly during a...failed operation, has been spotted by the Captain, which by the way, he will be reffered as in MY presence. I'm having the captain retrieve him tomorrow morning for either discipline or IMMEDIATE destruction. Depending on my mood." Chrysalis chuckles to herself "I don't want too much time taken from my driving. I want to make sure my skills are perfect for when I debut as Equestria's new ruler."
>you move close to Scootaloo and whisper to her.
"Yo hey, calm down ok?"
>Scootaloo says nothing, she just stares angrily at Chrysalis.
>You look upon her yourself. Sending Scrappy alone against someone so dangerous?
"Why send the captain alone? If this changeling is so dangerous, wouldn't he massacre him considering the restrictions put on him by...dad?"
>you almost said Discord.
>"Possibly" Chrysalis said, with no hint of care in her tone. Which angered Scootaloo.
>"You're a monster! You'd send Scrappy by himself against a dangerous changeling?! What if he got hurt?!" Scootaloo barks.
>Ahh shit, the changelings around started to gather now. They gathered as Chrysalis kept her cool this time. And even asked her. "Then what do you suggest my little pony?"
>"...." Scootaloo was surprised she was actually asking her. She looked around and pointed to herself "Are you actually asking me?"
>Chrysalis sighs and slowly threw her head back in aggravation "Yes...I'm asking you. Now out with it!"
>"Oh...u-umm..Why not send Anon with him? He'd be able to help Scrappy with his-"

>>29107745
>"....that name so annoys me" Chrysalis let's out a half annoyed, half amused chuckle. She so wanted to tell Scootaloo that Scrappy, the Captain, was not her friend. But kept it to herself. Totally ignorant to the truth that her captain did indeed like Scootaloo. "But go on, since you refuse to follow my rules."
>Scootaloo had no care of whether she liked it or not. "Anon can partner up with him tomorrow, that way nothing bad will happen at all. Anon.." Scootaloo looks to you, her face giving you gentle worry as she asked "You'd go with him right? And make sure he stays safe?"
>Oh come on Scoots. Don't do that. You were amazed she didn't seem at all woozy. Was she being fed upon? Or was she really holding on to those negative emotions.
>Though, she already said forget school. So how could you say no?
"Yeah, I'll...I'll go with him"
>Chrysalis looks to you, then starts laughing. "What's this?! HAHAHA! Are you saying you are willingly going to help the captain tomorrow?"
>You look to Chrysalis , already worried as to why she was laughing, surely it was just because it was something like "You're becoming closer and closer to becoming mine" or some shit. Y'know? Yeah, it was probably something like that. She was full of shit. Which gives you some bravado in your tone.
"Yeah, what about it?"
>" Oh nothing" Chryslais giggles girlishly "I was just going to foalnap you and force you into helping him by calling in one of my debts. But now you're doing it for free. I'm such a lucky girl to have you as a friend, eh Anon? And I have our silly little friend to thank. So thank you Scootaloo, for being a wonderful little tool." Chrysalis cackles.

>>29107790
>...wait....DAMMIT!
>And as you facehoofed at your own stupidity. Scootaloo began to bark at Chrysalis again. "What's your problem you stupid bug! Why do you always have to be a jerk! Anon just wants you to be nice and good, is that so hard? Scrappy is the nicest changeling I ever met, and since he's nice, I know you can be nice too. But no! You have to be really mean for NO reason! Anon says you can change, but I don't see how. You still seem like the stupid bug who got blasted at the wedding. Anon was doing you a favor, and instead of appreciating it, you had to be all" Scootaloo does a mocking evil cackle "haha! I get to get you to do what I want for free because I can use you whenever I want"
"Scoots!"
>Ngh, what was she doing?!
>You looked at Chrysalis, who was looking very very displeased. "I'd suggest you shut up little filly, I can only be so patient"
"Scoots, it's over. Let's ju-"
>Scootaloo starts stepping towards her, still barking angrily. "Patient smatient! I haven't been down here ten minutes and you are being a humongous jerk! You don't want Anon to go with Scrappy to protect him and to make sure he'll be ok. You just want Anon there because it just gives you better chances that it'll go better. I bet you wouldn't care if Anon or Scrappy or even both of them got hurt or something!"
>Chrysalis's eye twitched as her inner anger grew "....I'm warning you..." Chrysalis looked to you, with a fatally calm expression. "Anon, I'd suggest you take her away from here now..."
>...was she...really being that patient?...dammit...fuck.
"Scoots, we're done. Let's go. There's nothing more we can do"
>You try to grab onto her, but she pushes off of you. She wanted to get what was on her chest off. She wanted to force Chrysalis to understand.

>>29107808
>"Listen you big dumb bug! You're supposed to be Anon's friend! But you're so selfish and dumb that you only see everypony around you as things you can use to try to take over Equestria. You don't care about ANYPONY. You're so sad and pathetic! You have Anon, who WANTS to be your friend despite you being evil and you treat him badly just because you can. No wonder he's so stressed out. You're worse than a bad friend or an evil bug. You're worse than dirt! And you know what? You stink as a bad guy too, at least Discord and Tirek almost won. What did you get beat by? Oh yeah, that's right. The THING YOU EAT!" Scootaloo scoffed.
>.......oh crap.
>Chrysalis said nothing at first. She gave you a glance, then focused on Scootaloo.
>You forcibly grab Scootaloo as the changelings begin to hiss at her.
"Scoots, we gotta go and we gotta go now. Come on!"
>You try pulling, but she slips her hoof away. "Hold on Anon, I'm actually winning. Who knows." She gives you a confident smile "I think I'm actually getting through to her!"
>.....oh god Scoots....please...
>You try grabbing at her again. But you are immediately pulled back as some of the changelings hold you down and cover your mouth. changing into rope and a scarf to keep you from doing anything.
>Chrysalis then slowly approaches the confident filly. Her expression becoming cruel, with an evil smile on her face. "Excuse me, did I hear right? You think you actually got through to me? Is that what you inferred?"
>"I mean..yeah. Come on, If Anon was really your friend. Then you realized that I'm right, right? You need to be nicer to him and everypony else. Maybe then, you could even get help from the princesses" Scootaloo tries to explain to her.
>"Oh my, how wonderful, and I suppose they could help me go along the right path. Is that right?"
>Scootaloo nods, she felt it was working "Yup. I'd think they might even forgive you maybe...no, definitely"

>>29107837
>"Ohhhh, really?" Chrysalis gives her a soft smile as she holds her hoof to her chest, acting as if she felt something warm "And you think, I could have friends too?"
>Scootaloo felt like she had truly gotten through "Yeah! I mean..erm..it'd take a bit. But yeah"
>You struggled the best you could...dammit. DAMMIT. ITS A TRAP!
>"How.........idiotic" Chrysalis states, much to Scootaloo's surprise. "In fact, let me tell you EXACTLY how things would go....it would go..something like" Chrysalis then turns into Rainbow Dash, with an evil smile on her face "..this"
>Scootaloo stepped back, feeling scared and frightened, she looked back for you, but the changelings had you in their grasp, hidden from sight.
>"W-what?! R-rainbow Dash?" Scootaloo was confused, she had momentarily forgotten changelings could change shape.
>"Howya doin' squirt." Chrysalis chuckled witht hat cute raspy RD laugh "Let me tell you something "cool". Let me tell you that once Queen Chrysalis rules Equestria, I'll be brought in front of her, and be tortured for her amusement as she makes me realize what a coward I am, how much of an idiot I am to oppose her"
>Scootaloo became red with anger as she quickly realized that wasn't her idol "Shut up! You're not the real Rainbow Dash!"
>"No, but I WANT you to see her face. To know how it'd be when I decide to drain her dry, when she becomes an emotionless husk from days and days and days of feeding. We'll single her out and feed off her until she can never recover. How does that sound?" Chrysalis smirked as she looked upon the changelings holding you, you could feel the grip of the one posing as a rope loosen. Why was he giving up?
>"S-SHUT UP!" Scootaloo screamed, but she was starting to look a little pale.
>Chrysalis laughed as her wings started to molt, her feathers falling off. "Oh no, wait wait! I got it! How about we just pluck and tear every feather off her wings..wouldn't that be grand"

>>29107848
>"N-NGH, STOP IT! R-RAINBOW DASH W-WOULD STOP YOU F...for sure..ngh" Scootaloo began to wobble, she was feeling sickly.
>"Oh yes, but..at least you could take solace that she would now be as equally useless as you. Yes,a pegasus pony who can neither fly nor glide. WHAT A WASTE! HAHAHAHAHA! Who has EVER heard of any pegasi unable to fly. It's the most pathetic thing I've ever heard. You care so much for such a meddlesome and useless horse. Well, perhaps not useless yet. I'd have to make her as useless as you are before I say that. Did you hear me little one? You're useless, it's funny. Why would such a pony like her waste her time on you? She can fly from to any point in Equestria in mere minutes to an hour? You, you can't even get ten feet off the ground."
>Scootaloo could say nothing, she backed off, feeling cold and sick, letting out a small "H-help..r-rainbow dash..h-help..A-Anon"
>"Hrn? Nothing else to say? Awww, you must be tired....and oh so very scared...Well then." Chrysalis nods, the Changelings holding you let you go, you get up, and angrily growl at Chrysalis. What the fuck did she do?! Did she..drain her? she got her emotions up..just to drain them.
"Chrysalis..you bitch."
>Chrysalis could see the anger in your eyes, she could taste it from your body. But she calmed herself as she returned to her throne to rest. "Don't be mad at me Anon. As your friend, I held my patience as much as I culd. But she simply couldn't show proper respect to her future queen and thus deserved punishment. In fact, I was so nice that I didn't even have a single ounce of her love."
>You rushed over to Scootaloo, her bretahing was slow, she was barely conscious as she slowly made a grab for your leg and tried to cuddle into it "....."
"Then wha-"

>>29107864
>"What happened? I didn't drain her Anon. But my children? Well, it is instinct. They did what they did because that's what they do. I don't see why you're arguing with me" Chrysalis lays square on her back as she turns her head towards you with a malicious smile "They are still feeding. Perhaps if somepony was more responsible...this wouldn't have happened. I did my best Anon, oh so sorry that you're friend was an idiot." Chrysalis arrogance subsided as she just began to relax with a sleepy expression on her face as she said sing songly "My children still feed as you sit here and wait, I wonder what would happen if things ended up toooo late, perhaps if one had been smarter, she would have avoided thiisss fate." Chrysalis let's out one last dark chuckle as she turns away from you "It was a nice visit Anon, we should do it again sometime. Remember...I did my best as your friend"
>You didn't say anything. You took the hint. But dammit, she wanted Scoots to suffer. She...dammit..fuck it.
>You quickly lower your face to scoop Scootaloo oto your back. You could feel her weakly grip you as you use all your strength to carry her back up into the living room. The changelings don't follow. Thank christ.
>You even, through sheer will and worry. Carefully get her up along the gravity stairs by painfully crawling up them along your back as you held Scootaloo against your tummy. It was an odd position to be sure. But if you carried her along your back. She'd just fall straight down. She didn't have the strength to actually hold on.
>Once in your room. You get her up onto your bed. She was cold, shaking, and whimpering.
>.....Scoots...
>...Was this your own fault?.....it was...wasn't it?

>>29107891
Jesus

>>29107891
>Was this your own fault?
Yes you stupid fuck! Everyone with a fucking brain could see from a mile away that something like this waa going to happen!

>>29108588
>>29107891

He told her many times to turn back and then not to act out. Sucks for her but she got the message.

I worry about her waking up and telling someone else about what happened to her. That would definitely result in a raid of the hive.

>>29108681
He told her many times after they fucking got there. Anon should have been fucking intelligent and never even actually brought Scootaloo into his house and into Chrysalys lair. He really went completey retarded from start to finish

>>29107891
Commence spooning!

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>>29108681
>>29108811
Both of these, really. Both are equally retarded, she somehow forgot just who she was talking to.

>>29107891
I REALLY liked Chrysalis this update, a little reminder of just how close she is to Anon and how cruel and malicious she can really be to those that mean nothing to her.

I got a good song for her.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZXT-Y3w523A

>>29109229
Yup, both went full fucking retarded, erfanon should have acted like any logical person would have and told scoots that Chrysalis simply doesnt like any other pony other than him for the moment and that he's working on that. But no, he instead got 1000% retarded and caused this mess.

Scootaloo was simply plai fucking idiotic too

>>29109722
>ErfAnon
>A logical pone
Nigga ErfAnon doesn't know the definition of actual logic and common sense he ain't PhD

Bump for Gumball

Erf anon has been...not that rational...or mature...with some critical thinking situations so I'm not surprised he thought this was a not terrible idea. He knew the stakes but also didn't figure Scoots would go so far unhinged. She fucked it up by being the RD crony that she is.

Recovery plan? Wrap her up in a blanket, put a blanket on top, cuddle, and try to talk to her back to her senses (not all the way but definitely not a whimpering mess), then they can go to sleep.

>>29110280
Gumball is fucking dead, anon.

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>>29110743
>Recovery plan? Wrap her up in a blanket, put a blanket on top, cuddle, and try to talk to her back to her senses (not all the way but definitely not a whimpering mess), then they can go to sleep.
Yes.

>>29110743
After reading this chapter, I have the strong feeling that even with the three charges and Chrysalis by his side, ErfAnon would get curv stomped by PhD. Fucking ErfAnon is too much of a retard to have a chance, even with unlimited power he's just...a retard

>>29110889
He'd probably end up accidentally blasting Chrysalis with his horn, then promptly faceplant into the curb without anyone else even having to lift a finger against him.

He's that incompetent.

>>29110907
I can actually see ErfAnon getting rekted by just being seduced by Eris. She convinces him to use the three charges in some stupid, unrelated shit, and then just sents erfanon packing. Whatever happens, yeah... ErfAnon would lose to PhD without PhD ever having to do something, or even noticing that ErfAnon was after him

>>29110854
It's not like that. I figured the best remedy after changeling attack would by the magic of love and friendship. She can be a memelord after the fact but still she will be OK when it's over. Anon can keep that in his pocket, or at least bring Scoots down a notch and be less...cutetarded.

I enjoyed the part where the suggested word after cutetarded was my name.


Also, Erf, there has been a lot of shit talking. How say you be better than PHD? There are ways...