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It's coming to be hearthswarming season, and you get the glorious opportunity to help Dashie prepare! How do think she'd decorate her house? What gifts would you put under the tree?

Writefagging, Pictures, Discussions

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Current Writefags:

Church !!YbKx3Eb79HH
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Rosenkreutz !!x9kIUBwer0n
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mobius !9PEUyNz5zw
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RiggyRag !wql9fEjKic
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Sorry, I had to.
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>>29048014
Eh, no harm done. It'll be A-Ok!
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She'll decorate it with christmas stuff. Also I'd put gay porn under the tree.
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Christmas are near.
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>>29048083
homo or lesbian porn?
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Cuddly pones.
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I expect she could put a big hearths warming tree up outside.
As for gifts, a glass cider mug with her cutie mark on it plus some cider to drink with it.
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Some of you Dashfags are alright. Don't come to the S07E03 sticky.
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>>29049293
Homo, because everyone knows that 2 dudes taking their bromance to the next level is no where near as gay as lesbipleb porn.
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Here is Rainbow Dash in a hoodie sipping a delicious Pepper PhD!

It didn't come out the way I wanted to, but here it is nonetheless.

Any other requests? I might have a little extra time to draw tonight!
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>>29050817
Rainbow Dash hugging a human. Conceal their face so we can self-insert please.
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>>29050939
Coming right up!
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>>29050939
I couldn't decide which pose to use so I drew this one twice. I gave the human a hoodie to conceal identity. So here's the first one, standing.
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>>29050939
>>29051766
And here is one sitting! I hope one of these is what you were looking for (more or less)
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>>29051766
>>29051774
Just adorable!
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Hey y'all. I know it's been a bit since my last one, and I apologize. So, to make up for it, here's a nice big update. Hope you enjoy!

[TenochtiCon Cont.]
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>Your laughter cuts short as you wheel around to prepare for landing and nearly plow through a tight snarl of Pegasi.
“What the-?”
>Barely catching yourself in time, you float up a bit to look around at what’s causing the traffic jam.
>Below, in the center of the Atrium, a large circle of sets has been erected and a huge crowd of ponies surrounding them takes up every possible inch of space.
>Looking around the Pegasi you notice that lengths of shiny red ribbon have been stretched between the upper floor railings and elevators to designate an area for Pegasi spectators.
“The performance!”
>No one can have a problem using wings to queue for THIS area at least.
>You zoom around looking for a moment and find a good vantage point to watch down over the entire display.
>Lights flash near the center signalling that only a few minutes remain until it begins.
>You wish you had a bit of cloud to sit on, but hovering isn’t so bad.
>In short order the same pony who played announcer for the costume contest yesterday steps into the center of the ring of sets.
>”Ladies, and Gentlecolts! Welcome to the eighth annual TenochtiCon Daring Do Live Action Experience!”
>A roar of cheering erupts through the assembled crowd of ponies, and you find yourself yelling as loud as anypony.
>The Atrium lights dim and a spot from a unicorn up on the second floor shines down to illuminate one of the set pieces.
>”When we last left our HERO, Daring Do had just escaped the vaults of memory holding the first of three keys to the lost hoard of King Grover of Griffonstone!”
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>A pony appears trudging wearily out from backstage dressed as Daring Do.
>You’re pretty sure your costume is better.
>”Weary, yet triumphant, Daring Do still has a long road ahead of her if she wants to win the race to the hoard against the nefarious forces arrayed to stop her! We join her now on the streets of Dodge City, searching for a contact who may know the whereabouts of the second key!”
>An excerpt from the Griffons Goblet.
>You cross your legs and settle back into your slow, easy hover.
>The play is actually very well done.
>The different actors seamlessly transition from the urban landscape of a city, to the rocky terrain of Griffonstone, to the rolling hills near Canterlot.
>You’re completely drawn in finding yourself gasping, sighing, and cheering with all the other assembled spectators like one gigantic organism.
>It’s better than you’d even hoped.
>Daring Do is well played and the costumes and silky smooth transition of the scenes from novel to visual form shows just how much work they’ve put in.
>When it’s all over an hour later you scream and cheer and pump your hoof as hard as anypony else.
>The crowd begins to dissipate under the watchful eye of a fire marshall and your stomach
roars it’s disappointment that you’ve only had what amounts to a snack.
>You quickly zoom over to the pub area and alight to order some breakfast.
>Lunch.
>Brunch?
>A big mushroom and avocado sandwich with hay fries and a slice of lingonberry pie satisfies your noisy stomach, and you pull out your schedule again to plan out your day.
>The big obstacle course isn’t til this afternoon.
>You absentmindedly double check your hard won ticket.
>There’s always the dealers’ hall again, but you don’t really need to go down there until the last day for the deals.
>No need to put your remaining bits in more jeopardy than is strictly necessary.
>You also need to talk to Windsong ASAP.
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>>29052303
>You look around as you dust crumbs from the front of your costume.
“There should be at least one around here…”
>You trot around the Atrium and into the lobby area where you spot what you’re looking for.
>A small blue colored booth stands off to one side with a pair of ConSec workers watching the crowds and peace-binding replica weapons for the attendees with plastic straps.
>You watch with interest as you approach.
>A large stallion wearing Saddle Arabian garb was holding up a long, curved sword in a scabbard.
>The ConSec ponies used a plastic tie to secure the sword to the sheath so that it couldn’t be drawn.
>You smile at them as they send the stallion on his way.
“Hey guys! How’s it going?”
>The two security ponies look up at you and smile.
>”Hey! Nice costume! Anything we can help you with?”
>They look bored and happy to be talking to anypony at all, so you spend a few minutes talking about the events and their duties before getting to your question.
“So...I’m looking for Windsong. Either of you know where she might be this morning?”
>One of them looks at you more closely.
>”Oh right! You were with her last night at the party!”
>The other one nods suddenly.
>”Yeah, she was, huh? Oh, um...Windy is a little...worse for wear this morning.”
>The first pony rolls his eyes and quirks a smile at you.
>”That’s putting it mildly. She’s always a wreck the morning after a party”
>They both look at you.
>”But, she’s always up early no matter what. I think she had Hornshine do her duty this morning, so she’s probably taking it easy somewhere around here. I’d check the pub.”
>You nod and thank them for their time.
>You just came from the pub, but maybe you just missed her.
>Trotting back the way you came you look around at the tables and bar.
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>>29052310
>Your eyes pass a huddled form in a headscarf and sunglasses you’d seen earlier before suddenly snapping back.
>You hurry over.
“Windsong?”
>The obscured face jerks in your direction before the ears beneath quiver and flatten.
>The poor mare gently cradles her head in her hooves before croaking softly at you.
>”...morning Rainbow...ungh...it is still morning...right?”
>You nod and slide into a chair across from her as quietly as possible.
“Still morning, Windy. Are you...gonna be okay?”
>She flinches a bit still despite your near whisper.
>How she can stand the noise of the milling crowds around this place is beyond you.
>A waiter levitates a tray with a huge mug of black coffee and a plate of fried eggs to sit in between you.
>Windy sighs and immediately begins wolfing down the eggs and gulping the coffee.
>”Mrf...yeah..I’ll be fine. Ooh, hot! Just a little worse for wear after the party last night.”
>She gives you a wry smile.
>”It’s always like this. S’why I don’t party like that very often. I really should know better by now.”
>You manage to contain the smirk trying to tug at your lips.
“You...d’you always...um...fly upside down like that too?”
>Okay, maybe you weren’t as under control as you’d thought.
>Color flashes across her cheeks as she buries her nose in the enormous mug.
>”Did you need something, Rainbow Dash?”
>You’re practically quivering with suppressed mirth.
>You cover a burst of a laugh by clearing your throat.
“W-well aside from checking on you...ahem...I need a favor.”
>Windsong sighs and mops up some egg yolk with a scrap of toast before munching it.
>”Why do I feel like this is gonna be trouble…”
>You stare at her a moment, savoring your revelation.
“Well...if you don’t want to, it’s fine. It’s no big deal. I got Anon to agree to dinner with me, you, and Hornshine tonight at the King’s Chamber, but we need a reservation. I guess if you’re not up for it~”
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>>29052322
>The mug bangs loudly on the table making Windsong wince at her own noise.
>”WHAT? Oooow...sweet Celestia… You got him to agree? Really?”
>You nod, smiling happily.
>”Wow. You work fast, Rainbow. Okay.”
>She chuckles softly to herself, ears flicking back and forth.
>”Last minute reservations to the premiere restaurant in the resort. Well, at least you don’t ask for much. Me and Hornshine can wing it, but do you have the bits for it? The place ain’t exactly cheap.”
>You mentally go over your remaining bits.
>To be honest you don’t normally buy much.
>Since you started going to Cons and such you’ve spent more than ever before, but your stockpile of bits is never really dented much.
“I got it covered. Even if I’m paying for Anon too.”
>She nods and takes out a walkie talkie from the saddlebags next to her.
>”If you didn’t, we’d have you covered. No worries. Him too. It’d be rude to...ask...Anon to come and not cover him at least.”
>She doesn’t quite meet your eyes when she says “ask”, and you remember admitting to bullying Anon earlier.
>Better not to mention how you got him to agree.
>Windy takes another slug of coffee before clearing her throat and lifting the walkie.
>”Dirtybird to Studmuffin. Come in, Studmuffin.”
>You gape at her as she grins wickedly into the radio.
>”GAH! Windy! What in Tartarus?!”
>Hornshine’s voice crackles over the speaker full of embarrassed indignation.
>”Are you still...this ISN’T a private line!”
>You and Windsong both giggle at his consternation.
>”Whaaaaat? I just needed your attention...cutie pie!”
>Confused spluttering comes across the radio as you and Windy hear laughter exploding from the security booth across the way.
>”Windsong! What the ever loving h-”
>”Relax, sweetie. I just needed your attention. Where are you stationed at the moment?”
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>>29052344
>There’s a long pause at the other end.
>”Windy...I’m covering your shift at the signing booths, remember?”
>Your friend blushes furiously.
>”W-well, GOOD! I was just making sure…! Everything’s good right?”
>”Um...yeah. Wha-”
>”RIGHT. Me and a VIP are coming by to ask you something. Be there in a sec.”
>”A VIP? They’re all here signing though. Why don’t you just ask n-”
>”OVER AND OUT”
>She quickly snaps the radio off and drops it into her saddlebags before hiding her face in her hooves.
>You busy yourself playing with small cellar of sugar.
>If this goes much farther you’re going to crack a rib from not laughing.
“Um...so...should we go?”
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>Down in a conference room set up near the dealers’ hall you find rows and rows of booths set up like the vendors down the hall.
>Only here the ponies behind the tables are signing artwork or writings or clothes or whatever the milling crowd asks for.
>Some pose for instant photos and sign them for ponies while others simply scrawl their signature with a thick black marker on whatever’s at hoof.
>There’re ponies here representing a whole side of the Daring Do fandom that you’ve never really associated with.
>Artists, musicians, writers, toymakers, sculptors, every kind of creative mind you can think of.
>And you know these only represent those popular enough to be sought after for their autograph.
>It’s a bit mind blowing for you seeing just how intense ponies can get for the things they love.
>At one end of the hall you spot Hornshine standing near a stall, head swiveling to passively keep an eye on the room.
>Windy nudges your flank and you both quickly trot over to him.
>Hornshine grimaces at Windy as you approach but turns a smile on you.
>”Ah! Nice to see you, Rainbow Dash. So you’re our “VIP”, huh? You don’t look like last night left you any problems. Unlike SOME ponies.”
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>>29052353
>A hoof to his ribs doubles him over wheezing as Windsong smiles fiercely at him.
>”Nice to see you too, HONEY.”
“Hi, Hornshine! You sound a little under the weather, yourself. Don’t overdo it, okay?”
>A laugh bubbles from your lips as you watch him try to maintain his composure.
>His voice comes out more hoarsely than is really necessary.
>”So, what can I do for you two fine ladies?”
>Windy nods in satisfaction.
>”Dash set up a dinner date with Anon and us. We need a table at the King’s Chamber tonight. I don’t think the time really matters. But we need it pronto.”
“Yeah, it came together really fast before I could think about it. I was hoping you guys could arrange something.”
>Hornshine shakes his head ruefully.
>”Sweet Luna, you two don’t ask for much, do you?”
>He finally straightens completely, though he still massages his bruised ribs.
>”Well, since it’s for you two...and a chance to meet Anon. Just a sec.”
>Hornshine walks a few paces away where it’s a bit quieter and starts talking into his walkie.
“Do you think it’ll work?”
>Windsong looks at you.
>”The reservation? Or convincing Anon that ponies aren’t bad people?”
>You’re not sure what you meant and shrug shaking your head.
>”Well, as to the first, Hornshine knows a lot of ponies. If anyone can get the res, it’s him. As for Anon...I really can’t say. You said he had issues. Can you tell us anything else yet?”
>You shake your head sadly.
“I actually forgot. We didn’t talk for long this morning. I left as soon as he agreed. I should’ve asked him some more stuff, but I was just happy he’d said yes, y’know?”
>She gives you that sidelong look again.
>”He DID say yes, right?”
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>You look abashed.
>He did say it! He agreed! But what if…
“He said he’d come. But I’m not a hundred percent sure. Maybe I’d better talk to him again…”
>Hornshine trots past you heading toward a booth and waves a hoof to stop the two of you from following.
>He starts talking into the ear of one of the signing ponies.
>”Maybe you’d better. From what little I’ve already heard, he may not appreciate it if you’ve somehow...cornered him into it.”
>You hunch your shoulders.
>She lays a comforting hoof on your shoulder and looks at you.
>”It’s fine, Dash. Just talk to him. Try to maybe...listen a little?”
>You sigh and nod.
>Crap. You’d thought you had it all so nicely tied up.
>Hornshine comes walking back up with a smile on his face.
>”I’m so good, it’s scary sometimes.”
>Windsong brightens.
“You got us the reservation?”
>You and Windsong speak up quickly in perfect unison.
>His smile broadens.
>”Nope. I got one for tomorrow night.”
>You physically feel yourself deflating.
>”But I got Inkwell over there to switch his reservation with mine. For tonight!”
>You and Windsong stare at him dumbfounded.
>”It took some finagling, but a master of negotiation can alwaWHOA!”
>Windsong had dived into him carrying him to the ground in a hug.
>”You’re amazing!”
>He laughs and strokes her mane before giving her a quick squeeze and helps her get up with him.
“Wow! Seriously, Hornshine, you’re awesome! That took no time at all!”
>You laugh as Windsong continues to cling to him.
>”I get to meet Anonymoooooous!”
>Hornshine laughs with you at her obvious delight.
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>”It’s no problem, Rainbow. It makes my marefriend happy, after all.”
>Windsong gives him another hug for that before looking at you seriously.
>”You still have to handle that other thing, Dash. Make sure he’s coming legit. You have to go talk to him.”
>You heave a sigh and nod despite Horny’s searching look.
“I know. I’ll make sure I get a hold of him. I better go. I’ll see you tonight.”
>You all make your goodbyes and you’re halfway out of the room before Windsong catches up and taps you on the back.
>”Oh, Dash! I forgot to mention. The King’s Chamber is a three hoof restaurant with a strict dress code. Make sure you wear something appropriate, okay?”
>She takes your speechless expression as confirmation and hurries back to Hornshine.
“....something...appropriate…”
>You have a strong feeling that you know what that means.
>You meander slowly out of the hall not looking where you’re going.
>Well...dresses aren’t THAT bad…
“Uuuughh!”
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>You scribble angrily at a piece of paper at the Concierge’s desk as the pony looks at you in mild concern.
>You’d made a quick trip up to your room to check your belongings, but you already knew you didn’t have anything appropriate for a fancy restaurant.
>You don’t have any time to spare. It’s time to bite the bullet.
[Hey girls! I’m still having a blast out here in Las Pegasus! I went to a radical party last night and won a competition for tickets to a big event here today. You can bet I’ll take the grand prize! Thanks for your last letter. I’m trying to take care of stuff while still doing everything the Con has to offer. Tonight I’m going to a fancy restaurant. The King’s Chamber. I have to wear something fancy to get in, so Rarity, I need some help. Can you send me something before tonight? I know it’s last minute, but I don’t have anything here. I’ll write more when I can. Stay awesome! -Rainbow Dash]
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>>29052378
>You give the sealed letter to the concierge with the extra bits for an expedited courier.
>Hopefully Rarity will get back to you quickly.
>Magical mail is expensive, but sometimes worth it.
>You look at the clock above the reception desk.
>There’s still a few hours before the obstacle course.
>No putting it off any more.
>You flap your wings and sail slowly upward trying to think of what to say.
>You feel like a complete idiot.
>Why did you have to bully him into it like that?
“That wasn’t even the plan!”
>Other pegasi fly wide at the sight of you muttering to yourself.
>Well, you didn’t really HAVE a plan.
>You just saw an opening and went for it.
>But Windsong is right, that’s not the best way with this po-...human.
>You alight and raise your hoof, tapping on his door.
>The door quickly opens and you jump in surprise.
>The linen wrapped flanks of a housekeeping pony back out nearly running you over as the earth-pony employee drags a cart loaded with supplies out after her.
“Whoa! Hey, watch out!”
>The housekeeper merely looks at you as she rolls her cart ahead of her now.
“Hey! Wait!”
>You fly around quickly in front of her, watching past her as Anon’s door swings shut.
“Was there a...anyone home? In that room?”
>The mare heaves a sigh.
>”Nopony home, no. I hate VIP guests. He always has a Do Not Disturb sign out and we’re supposed to only come up to restock and turn down the room when he’s out. Now, please excuse me. My shift should’ve ended half an hour ago.”
>You swoop around in front again, earning yourself a tired, reproving look.
“Sorry, just one more thing. He didn’t check out, did he? The guy in that room?”
>The pony shrugs.
>”How should I know? ‘Scuse me, Miss.”
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>>29052392
>A thought occurs to you.
>”LUGGAGE! Was there still luggage in the room?”
>Your yell behind her makes her pause for a moment.
>”Sorry, yeah. His stuff was still there. I didn’t think of it.”
>You thank the tired mare and wend your way back down to the Atrium.
“Where could he have gone?”
>He wasn’t at the signing booths, and his stock sold out almost as soon as he opened shop.
>You don’t have any other way of getting in touch with him.
“Just my luck. A hermit decides he wants to travel as soon as I want to find him.”
>You chuckle to yourself.
>Guess you’ll just have to check back later.
>A quick study of your booklet gives you a short list of panels you’d like to attend before the big event this afternoon.
>Even with all of that there should be plenty of time to find him this evening.
>You head back to the lower floors looking for the first one on your list.
>[History and Peoples of Tenochtitlan]
>A bit brainy, but you’ve picked up a small interest in history.
>Very small.
>But it might be cool to know the real history of the places so famous in A.K.’s books.
>After watching the admittedly interesting presentation (they had artifacts and relics of the ancient civilizations to examine), you move on to the next one.
>A panel by real archaeologists talking about the places they’re excavating.
>After that, a discussion about dungeoneering and how ancient traps and mechanics work.
>That one gives you a few ideas that may be useful in the upcoming game.
>Most interesting of all was the last one.
>A Q&A for scout ponies who’re paid under Royal charter to explore and document areas outside Equestrian influence.
>Nims waves at you from behind the guest speaker’s table and you wave back.
>You go up to talk to him afterward.
“Hey! I didn’t know you were a guest speaker!”
>You hoof his shoulder.
“How’d you end up working security?”
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>>29052403
>He smiles sheepishly
>”They give free passes to ponies who come to speak at sponsored panels so I was here anyway, but then Windsong told me she was short hooved so I decided to lend one. That’s all.”
>You look at him with an extra measure of respect.
“So you knew her already? I guess you grew up around here with them and Amplitude?”
>He shakes his head emphatically.
>”Oh no, no. I’m from Rainbow Falls. No, I’ve just been coming to TenochtiCon since the first one back when I was a colt.”
>You smirk to yourself thinking he’s not very much older NOW.
>”Windsong’s been chief of security since the beginning, and you can’t come here every year like that and not get familiar with some of the staff.”
>You walk with him down the hallway chatting about the previous Cons.
>”Hey, you won the thing last night, right?”
>He checks a small watch strapped around his foreleg.
>”You’d better hurry if you want to participate.”
>You leap into the air in alarm.
>The panels had been so much fun you’d nearly forgotten!
“Thanks, Nims! See you later, I gotta fly!”
>You race down the hallway forgetting yourself enough to leave a rainbow trail careening around corners as you head for the escalators.
>You come to a sharp halt at the bottom and wind into the scrum of ponies trying to reach the Atrium.
>A few long seeming seconds of huffing and tapping your hoof impatiently as the stairs climb you up to the next floor and you take off running toward the rear patio.
>You dodge around other Con goers and leap through the big double doors out into the bright Las Pegasus afternoon.
>You pull your safari hat low to shield your eyes until they can adjust and finally look up to see something out of Pinkie Pie’s most wild dreams.
“A….awesome…”
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>>29052409
>Beginning only a few feet away and towering over the patio stands a massive construct.
>Wooden beams and plywood panels shroud a pony made cave entrance that leads into the huge...thing.
>Huge bulges with gears and pulleys sticking out rear here and there, heavy booms with weighted sacks acting as counterbalance, even a working water-wheel that seems to be driving most of the mechanics.
>The construct rears high up at least two stories implying multiple floors inside, and your mind races with the possibilities of what might be found inside.
>A buzz of wondering conversation fills the air with quiet tension as the dozens of ponies who’ve come to watch jabber at each other, awestruck by the immense complexity of it.
>”Amazing sight, innit?”
>You clap your mouth shut with a click as the familiar accent whispers from entirely too close to your ear.
>You spring away into a hover and glare at the dark gray pony.
>Amplitude smiles widely showing every one of his brilliant white teeth as he sweeps a bow.
>”Lovely day for sport, eh Rainbow Dash?”
>You have to take a moment to absorb the flashy weirdo.
>His mane is still lime green, streaked with black and styled into spikes.
>You’re sure his finely cut clothing and neon yellow shades are designer brands.
“Don’t sneak up on ponies, Amp. That’s a good way to get a hoof to the face.”
>He only grins wider.
>”Sneaking? What an appalling slight upon my good name, Lady Dash! And besides, nopony would ever damage such a national treasure, even by reflex!”
>Your eyes roll so hard it almost hurts.
“So, you planning to go into that dungeon in that?”
>You gesture to his fancy duds.
>He starts and looks himself over quickly as if he had no idea what he was wearing.
>”Hmm...that’s...well, look at you! You’re still in your Daring Do costume!”
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>>29052419
>You lift one of your lapels with a hoof.
“Oh, you mean this? You mean this safari outfit? This uniform of adventurers and dungeon crawlers?”
>He looks at you sourly and opens his mouth, but you cut him off with a smirk.
“Yeah, this comfortably loose, hard wearing fabric might be a real problem in there, Amp. Maybe I should get myself some nice flappy designer stuff, huh?”
>”Alright, alright!”
>The DJ flaps a hoof at you with his nose up.
>”I daresay you look a sight better than me in anything, my dear. A pony like you can dress all for function and end up setting fashion trends to shake Manehattan by days end, I expect.”
>He eyes you sideways and then gives you a roguish wink.
>”Perhaps later you’d like to give me a lesson on dressing properly…”
>You sigh and smile, shaking your head.
>Off balance for all of two seconds. He doesn’t ruffle easily.
>”Contestants, this way please! Clear the way for the Contestants! Present your ticket to the security pony near the entrance, please!”
>You and Amp both turn to look.
“No way…”
>There must be fifty ponies queuing up for the course.
“Fifty ponies? And only one winner? This can’t be right. There’s too many!”
>Amp turns to you with the characteristic twinkle blazing behind his shades.
>”Ten more than last year, love. One winner and no pony made it all the way through.”
>You look at him and land to ask quietly as the two of you approach the line.
“Have you done this before? Do you know anything?”
>He gives you another sideways look.
>”Nnnooo, I haven’t. I wish I could tell you. But all I’ve heard is that it’s not that the dungeon they build is long exactly. It’s that they’re devious tricky. You’ll see.”
>Thanks to your conversation, you and Amp are among the last to get your numbers in exchange for your tickets.
>After everypony has one, the security pony touches a crystal hanging around his throat, and his voice echoes out magically amplified.
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>>29052424
>”All contestants and spectators, welcome to the eighth annual TenochtiCon Dungeon Trial! Each contestant will enter the dungeon by the front entrance and proceed as far as they can. Progress will be monitored by a panel of judges and shown via crystal projection on the screens to the side of the dungeon. Contestants waiting for their turn must do so in a waiting room just inside the resort where they cannot view or hear the proceedings. The contestant who achieves the greatest progress toward their goal will receive prepass tickets to next year’s convention, a full suite with amenities for next year’s Con, and a voucher for any item or group of items from the dealers’ hall valuing up to fifty bits, all courtesy of the TenochtiCon Convention Board, and Fluxor Resort and Wellness Spa! All contestants other than contestant one please follow the security pony near the doors to the resort back to the waiting room for your turn. And thank you all for attending the eighth annual TenochtiCon!”
>His long pronouncement is met by deafening cheers and cries as the huge huddle of contestants flows around you back towards the doors.
>You nudge Amp who’s staring at the construct with a shrewd look on his face and you both turn to go.
>You sigh inwardly as you enter the comfortably appointed waiting room.
“Fifty contestants, and I’m number forty seven! If I was earlier I could at least watch the rest do the trial.”
>Amplitude walks past you to grab a skewer with a cookie in his teeth and hold it under the fall of a chocolate fountain.
>”That’s how the cookie crumbles, my dear.”
>He punctuates that by snapping the chocolate coated munchy into his mouth.
>”Something tells me it won’t be so bad as all that, however.”
>You eye him again as he goes up and down the snack table.
>Just what does he know?
>Windsong would probably give a bugbear insider information before Amplitude, but he keeps making those comments.
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>>29052440
>You shrug and shake yourself.
>He’s a local. He probably has just been to the Con for years now, and has just watched the events even if he’s never participated before.
>You settle into a plush leather chair to wait for your turn.
>Amplitude was right.
>You hate to admit it, but the contestants get called rather quickly.
>Anypony else might call the speed of new contestants being called ‘nerve wracking’.
>But not you.
>Twenty contestants in just under an hour.
>The first half dozen or so went in no time at all.
>But you’re not nervous.
>Why should you be?
>You get a surprise as contestant twenty-five gets called and Amp stands up and stretches.
>”Wish me luck, love! I’m off!”
>He waves his #25 card under your nose before walking out with a smirk.
>You sit there fuming.
>The jerk must’ve traded with somepony else too nervous to go.
“Wish I’d thought of that…”
>But there’s no point doing it now. Not when he did it first, anyway.
>The wait was intolerable.
>Finally, after nearly a whole other hour, you’re next.
>You run your hooves over the arms of your chair in the deathly quiet room.
>The tick of the clock’s second hand seems to come more and more slowly as time goes by.
>You can barely hear the breathing of the other three ponies who all look like they’re trying to merge with the furniture beneath them.
>The door opens.
>”Number Forty-Sev-”
“THAT’S ME”
>You shoot into the air with your hoof raised and practically scream at the pony.
>His eyes go wide and and you quickly land and run your hoof over your mane.
“I mean...that’s me…I’m forty-seven.”
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>>29052447
>You hoof him your card, and he nods silently turning to lead you out.
>There must have been some kind of spell on the doors, because as soon as you cross the threshold into the hallway you’re nearly knocked flat by the clamor from outside.
>As you follow the security pony out into the sunlight, you gaze around open-mouthed at the cheering, talking, yelling, excited crowd.
>Here and there as you approach the dungeon entrance you can spot a contestant from earlier.
>There’s one looking angry.
>Another with a broad stripe of red paint across his face.
>Amplitude coated nose to hoof in green slime of some kind.
>Each one you spot seems to be halfway caught between annoyance, and excitement.
>”Please empty your pockets and leave your saddlebags here with me. They’ll be returned to you after you complete your trial. Continue through the course to obtain the artifact until you are either marked with red paint, or expelled from the course entirely. Good luck.”
>You quickly comply and adjust your hat to give an air of rakish confidence.
>At least the wait is over, time to DO this!
>”Contestant Forty-Seven, are you ready?”
>The magically amplified voice echoes over the ebullient crowd.
“READY!”
>You yell defiantly as you ready yourself to dash inside.
>”BEGIN!”
>You hurl yourself into the entrance and gasp as two heavy wooden slabs slam shut behind you and all the noise of the patio vanishes in an instant.
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>>29052460
>Looking around the dimly lit entrance room, you see three paths leading off.
>The left one goes up a stair.
>Forward and right twist out of sight quickly.
>You mentally apologize to the waiting ponies inside, but you’re not about to rush this when there’s no time limit.
>You look between your options musingly.
>You don’t want to go up yet, and center just doesn’t seem like a good choice.
“Right it is, then.”
>You carefully enter the right hallway and curve around a corner until you enter a medium sized room.
>Fairly obviously, the walls and ceiling are covered in what look like foam spikes tipped in red paint.
>One step into the circular room and the floor begins to rotate and rock in crazy directions.
>Your hooves skitter and slip you towards a spiked wall before you get enough purchase to spring into the air and flare your wings.
>You remember just in time to keep from flying up into the ceiling spikes, and you just hover there a moment watching the bucking floor and calming your heart rate.
“This is no joke.”
>You see how so many ponies got eliminated so quickly.
>A fierce smile crosses your face.
>There were only a hoof full of pegasi contestants.
>Nopony can complain if you maximize your advantage.
>You angle your wings and flap to move across the room only to be sent spinning sideways by a sudden blast of air.
>You halt your flipping slide sideways just before you hit the spikes only to be buffeted back the other way by another explosive gust.
“Gyah! Come...ON!”
>You move your wings with all the skill you can muster.
>Blasts of air come from every direction one after the other sometimes crossing to spin you, sometimes hurling you one way or the other.
>Several times you only barely manage to tuck in a limb before it can touch the spikes.
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>>29052464
>Slowly you start to understand the air movements and start using each one to advance you before bracing against the next.
>You make it to the entrance to the hallway at the end of the room and settle back to your hooves with a grateful sigh.
>A very slight click is your only warning.
>All six of your limbs fling out wide as a trap door drops out from under your hooves.
>Just as your hooves barely cling to the outside edge of the chute leading down to what looks like a pool of slime below the construct filled with foam ‘gators’ a heavy weight thumps onto your back.
>A heavy sack filled with what feels like flour dropped out of a niche in the ceiling to ensure whoever tripped it falls in.
>Your muscles strain and sweat pours down your face as you struggle to hang on to your tentative grasp at the edges.
“Wingpower, don’t fail me now!”
>You give your wings a heavy pump and flail with your forehooves as you shoot forward a few feet.
>You scramble at the edge as the sack slides off your back and hangs by an attached rope.
>With a grunt of effort you haul yourself out of the pit trap and flop onto the floor of the hallway gasping for breath.
“For...for Celestia’s sake! This is insane!”
>Beyond where you lay panting lies a circular room.
>In its center stands a wooden altar with a golden key standing on end on top of it.
>Aside from that the room seems completely innocuous.
“Sure. Like I’m gonna believe that.”
>You roll onto your stomach and stand to your hooves.
>A more thorough glance around the room doesn’t give you any further insight.
>No markings, symbols, trip cords, switches...nothing.
>You sigh loudly.
“Guess I just go for it, then.”
>You walk into the room with a gingerly step and a look of intense focus.
>Nothing happens.
>You take another few steps toward the altar.
>Still nothing.
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>>29052470
>Giving in to paranoia, you circle around the altar and approach from the other side.
>The nothingness is starting to seriously creep you out.
>Finally, becoming frustrated with yourself, you walk straight up to the altar and snatch the key, looking around sharply for any signs of...anything.
>Nothing.
“Oooookay-”
*SHWACK*
>The noise heralds the room becoming a blur of flying ‘death’.
>Thin foam disks whip into the room from every possible direction spinning in the direction of the altar.
“GYAAAAAAAH IT’S VOICE ACTIVATED???”
>You yell and jump, weave and dodge.
>You buffet some of the light foam disks away with puffs of air from your wings, and dive around like a drop of water on a hot griddle.
>After what feels like a decade the torrent of disks stop flying and you lay stretched out panting quietly on the floor again.
>Careful to avoid the paint-edged disks, you crawl like a mouse in a dream across the floor toward the hallway thinking incredibly quiet thoughts.
>Still unwilling to risk a noise, you leap over the pit trap and fight your way across the spinning floored air blast room and back to the entrance.
>You collapse bonelessly onto your back, chest heaving for air.
>A smile tugs at your mouth as you hold up your prize for a moment.
“...got a key...ugh…”
>Ignoring your already protesting muscles, you clamber to your hooves.
>You remember making noise aloud in here, so it should be safe.
“Okay. I got the key. Now which way?”
>Still reluctant to go up the stairs, you go down the center hallway and curve around to…
>A door.
>You rummage excitedly for your key before you notice that the door handle is painted blue.
>With a queasy feeling in your stomach you try the gold key in the lock.
>On the up side, nothing happened.
>On the down side, that includes opening the door.
>You grunt in frustration and pocket the key.
“Upstairs it is, then.”
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>>29052474
>You quickly return to the fork and glance up the staircase.
>It looks sinisterly normal.
>It’s starting to look like you aren’t going to see any of these traps before they’re sprung.
>The ponies in charge are pretty good at this game, you grudgingly admit.
>The stairwell is too small for you to extend your wings, and the stairs too high for you to do a wing assisted jump.
“A coincidence, I’ll bet.”
>You roll your eyes and sigh again.
>You start trotting up the stairs.
>Listening with all your might you’re just able to hear the click as you reach halfway up the stairs.
>It doesn’t help much.
>The stairs flatten into a very steep, smooth slide as a panel flips up at the bottom revealing a thick snarl of red tipped spikes.
>You scramble for footing on the slide as your wings try to snap out and bump against the walls.
>The inability to open your wings strikes a stab of panic at you, but you’ve trained for moments like these.
>A thought suddenly comes to you as you begin to slide down.
>You plant your hooves flatly on the slide allowing yourself to whoosh back a few feet, but enough to let you spring up off of it.
>You grunt as your back hits the ceiling nearly knocking the wind out of you, but you keep it together enough to hurl your hooves and wings out sideways into the walls of the stairwell.
>Hanging there suspended from the walls, you catch your breath for a moment trying to figure out your next move.
>A second, louder click sounds and the slide folds out back into stairs.
>Muscles in your limbs start to shake with effort as you ponder your situation.
>You think you remember which stair is the trick one…
>After taking a deep breath you hurl yourself forward again, curling your body for as much distance as possible.
>You flail forward and up scrambling up the steps with a mad strength as soon as you land.
>With a flop and a groan you roll past the top step and find yourself laying on the floor again.
>This seems to be a trend today.
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>>29052479
>Refusing to give in to your building exhaustion, you roll to your hooves and straighten up.
>You adjust your hat and look into the room ahead.
“Well, at least this is normal...hmm…”
>The room has an octagonal shape and a floor of tiles with various symbols carved on them between you and the altar with a blue key standing up from it.
>A similar trap is one of the more recognized from the books, but…
>At the same time with everything else you’ve seen, that seems way too obvious.
>You look at the symbol carved floor tiles.
>The symbols are nothing you’ve ever seen before.
>Some repeat here and there, others don’t seem to have a double on the floor at all.
>Looking at the ones with no copy, they don’t seem to provide any path to the altar specifically.
>You flex your wings hesitantly.
>Traps so far have been designed specifically to counter pegasi.
>You don’t know what to do.
>It all makes you wonder if there’s some counter to teleporting too.
>You shake your head.
>Letting your mind wander won’t help anything.
>It’s frustrating how often you’re reduced to just letting loose and dealing with what comes.
>You take several deep breaths and slowly flap into the air.
>Looking around furtively, you ease across the room to the altar.
“So far, so good.”
>A gasp wracks your body as you clap a hoof to your mouth remembering the sound trap, but nothing happens.
>You slowly let out your breath and reach for the key as sweat runs down your face.
>You stop suddenly just as your hoof touches the key.
>There’s a small switch under it.
>But the only thing in your pockets is another key!
>You growl loudly at the altar.
>Gritting your teeth you flap around to the back of the altar.
>You poise your hooves around the key and gather your strength, taking long, steady breaths.
“NOW!”
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>>29052489
>You tear at the air with your wings as you snatch the key off the altar.
>Hundreds of tiny ‘pft’ sounds fill the room as little pellets fire from the walls in all directions.
>Your mouth stretches in a wordless cry of defiance as you haul the key as hard as you can fly towards the hallway.
>Your speed of movement is the only thing that saves you.
>All the pellets were trained on the altar and fired that direction, but you’d vacated that space as quickly as possible.
>You plunge into the stairwell still yelling and pull your wings in.
>Rolling down the first few stairs, you activate the trick stair and swiftly slide down.
>Planting your hind hooves at the last second to propel you tail over ears back into the entrance room over the spikes, you painfully tumble up against a wall.
>You climb shakily to your hooves and stare at your new blue key.
>How many ponies could’ve made it this far?
>Maybe there’s some other way to stop the traps?
>No time to think of that right now.
>Every part of you feels strained and slightly bruised.
>You lift your hat and wipe at your face with the back of a hoof.
>Can’t be much more...maybe you can make it to the end?
>You trudge down the center hallway and stick the blue key in its lock.
>Gathering yourself as much as possible you strain your eyes and ears again for any sign of problems as you turn the key and push the door open.
>Your breath eeks out of you as nothing happens and you see only another short length of hallway before another door with a gold painted handle.
>You enter the closet sized space warily.
>The gold key slides into place as easily as the blue, and you can’t help but to hold your breath again.
>The door clicks open and swings wide showing another fun room.
>A wide hallway stands between you and another open doorway.
>In between are a number of swinging foam blades all edged in red paint swinging wildly at different rates.
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>>29052496
>You watch carefully and quickly spring forward a few feet at a time.
>Careful of your tail, you dance along the hallway timing each jump as nearly as you can to ensure the next comes before you get hit.
>It takes careful timing and maneuvering, but this is no harder than completing any normal obstacle course though you are careful to watch for any signs of greater danger.
>You leap past the last swinging ‘blade’ with alacrity at the last possible instant, and turn to look at the blade trap.
>That one wasn’t so bad.
>You carefully tip-hoof around an s-curve hall and peek into the room beyond.
>Breath catches in your throat as your eyes widen.
>You have to appreciate the sheer effort put into this thing.
“Whoa…”
>Several skeletons, made of what looks like craft foam, and carrying foam weapons march around the room animated by some kind of magic.
>The shimmery, colorful aura around them is proof of that.
>You grin at the look of one of the skeletons.
>A pegasus, with wing bones folded neatly.
>This is pretty cool.
>Across the room on a tall stone plinth sits a replica of the Sapphire Statue.
>You’d seen similar ones in the dealers’ hall, but none so big.
>This one has to be a one to one scale!
>You’re sure it isn’t real sapphire, but it’s still pretty amazing looking.
>Is this the last obstacle?
>You size up the six pony skeletons.
>Spooky, but nothing to worry about.
>And since they’re not ponies in costume nopony will care if you go all out.
>You rub your hooves together in anticipation.
>This dungeon has been pretty harsh…
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>>29052503
“Time to work off some frustration, YAAAAAAAH!”
>You charge into the room yelling like mad.
>The skeletons immediately turn your way and rush in waving their foam weapons.
>You skid around and plant a hard buck into the chest of an earth pony skeleton with a foam sword in his teeth.
>The bones explode away from your powerful double kick with a satisfying clatter.
>You jump, kick, roll, chop, dive, and kick some more!
>The skeletal guards don’t stand a chance.
“HaaaaaAH!”
>The last boney guard falls to pieces when you uppercut its skull off as you rise into the air from under him and twist around a few times.
>You huff a breath through your nose at the piles around the room as you watch closely to make sure that they aren’t getting back up.
>That felt surprisingly good.
“Just what the doctor ordered.”
>You eye the statue on its plinth.
>It sits there benignly gleaming in the dim light of the room.
>There’s no way this is it.
>It can NOT be as simple as grabbing it.
>You study the statue and look around it and the room trying to figure out how it might be trapped.
>Nothing leaps out at you.
>You wonder how long you’ve been in here.
>It feels like forever, but you’re sure it hasn’t been all that long.
“Grah! Why can’t I see it?”
>You walk around the plinth carefully.
“Maybe another snatch and run...hmm…”
>You tap a hoof thoughtfully on the floor wishing you had some other pony to bounce ideas off of.
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>>29052505
>A deep sigh wells up as you roll your eyes.
>You’re gonna have to leave it up to reflexes and luck again.
>Just how many of these traps can honestly be avoided?
>No use worrying about it.
>You flap up above the plinth and ready your hooves to swipe the statue.
>As before, you take a few long, steadying breaths.
“GYAH!”
>You whip your hooves over and yank the statue off with everything you can muster.
>The statue and your hooves barely clear the plinth when a square of four foam blades crashes down around it faster than you can blink.
>Your hooves tingle with their close passage as your eyes widen.
“A Sun forsaken GUILLOTINE?!”
>It doesn’t matter that it’s foam!
“These ponies are completely crazy! Comple-”
*click*
>Your body lunges into motion towards the hallway as the room behind you fills with whizzing pellets.
>You yell your lungs out as you swoop into the hallways and gallop back up their length to the entrance room
>Not daring to stop you continue onward, clutching the statue tightly under your wing.
>You reach the big double doors and hammer on them with your hooves.
“Lemme out! I got it! I GOT THE STATUE!”
>The doors crack open and you waste no time.
>You dive out between them and roll to a stop clapping your hooves over your ears as a head splitting roar of noise assaults you.
>Staring around and spinning defensively, you suddenly realize that the noise is the crowd going absolutely ballistic.
>You’d completely forgotten about them.
>Ponies scream and clamor in cheering adulation as the announcer pony steps up to throw a hoof over your shoulders and gesture for you across the assembled crowd.
>Everypony is going completely nuts!
>The spectators, the other contestants, even Amplitude!
>”Wow! What a performance! Everypony give it up for contestant forty-seven!”
>As if they needed any encouragement.
>You laugh out loud triumphantly as you hold the statue up over your head.
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>>29052513
>At his direction, you gather your stuff from the announcer pony and make your way down into the crowd.
>You make your way toward the back as Amp falls in beside you while you give hoof bumps and bathe in the wash of happy ponys’ congratulations.
>”Hey, Dash! Really well done! You were the very best so far, I swear.”
>You look at him questioningly.
>”No lies, my dear. Two others reached the Sapphire Statue so far, but neither got past the guillotine or the pellets. I’m still amazed YOU did.”
>You smile at him tiredly.
“Well, it wasn’t all that bad. By that point I’d dealt with sudden blades and pellets already.”
>He grins at your affected modesty.
>”Of course, of course. No trouble at all. Surely not.”
>You thump his shoulder.
“I’m going back to the waiting room. I need...want a place to sit down for a bit.”
>He looks you over a moment.
>”Sure, sure. Come this way. They have a separate room for that. The screen isn’t as big, but it has facilities to clean up and such. Over here.”
>You follow the party pony into the small room with a bathroom and another refreshment table near a small screen that shows contestant forty-eight getting ready to enter the trial.
>You get into the bathroom making sure to securely lock the door and jump in the shower.
>The hot water makes you feel much better even if you still feel extremely tired.
>Toweling off, you hop out of the tub opting not to put your sweaty costume back on.
>You bundle it up and stuff it into a saddle bag before going back out.
>Despite your suspicions Amplitude is no longer in the room.
>Seems like everypony has gone out to watch the bigger screens in the crowd.
>You rest in a plush chair and watch contestant fifty slowly creep down a hallway.
“Watch out for the...trap door…”
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>>29052517
>You smile to yourself as the unicorn mare tumbles down into the pool of slimy green goop.
>Remembering Amplitude wearing a similar coating makes your smile even bigger..
>The announcer’s voice comes through the crystal projector tinny and thin, but clear.
>”Alright folks, you know what that means! We have our winner!”
>You jump up and gallop out the door and down the hallway.
>The doors burst open ahead of you letting you back out into the sun just as the announcer finishes saying your number..
>Another huge swell of noise breaks over you as the crowd makes way for you to the dais in front of the entrance.
>”Contestant Forty-Seven! May I have your name?”
“Name’s Rainbow Dash!”
>”Well done, Rainbow Dash! You are our winner for the eighth annual TenochtiCon Dungeon Trial!”
>The announcer hoofs you an embossed brass plaque and a certificate before gesturing for you to hold them up.
>You oblige him and smile huge for all the flashing cameras.
>It always amazes you how a cheering crowd can fill you with energy.
>You hoist the plaque up high and yell your excitement back at the crowd.
>After a long period of photos and hoof shakes, and even an interview for the TenochtiCon newsletter, you tiredly make your way back into the hotel.
>Amp had excused himself after walking you back inside saying something about promising to tell Windsong what had gone down.
>You slog towards the elevators. No need to fly at the moment.
>What you really need is a nap, but you have so much to do.
>You still have to talk to Anon, and you have to work out something to wear tonight.
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>>29052523
>A wide yawn makes your jaws click as you ride the delightfully gentle elevator up to your floor.
>You walk into your room and dump your saddlebags and key on the floor.
>Falling into your bed, it takes everything you have to fumble the receiver off the phone on the bedside table
>”Front desk! How may we be of service, Miss Dash?”
>Are all reception ponies so chipper?
“I need a wake up call. Two hours.”
>”Certainly. We will call you to wake up in two hours. Is there anything else, Miss Dash?”
“Mrf.”
>You hang up the phone and let sleep wash over you.

More to come. Thanks for reading! Comments and criticisms are greatly appreciated!
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Thank you, RiggyRag, I like it! Although to be honest I like even more how >>29051766 turned out, it looks amazing.

>>29052529
Great update, Rosen. It was much longer than usual and I usually like shorter updates, but it was really good, I enjoyed it a lot. Not much else to say, keep it up!
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>>29052529
This was exciting.
Loved it!
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>>29051766
Hey, I hope you don't mind, I did a quick edit of your drawing to color it.
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>>29052529
this was great Rosen keep it up
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>>29053152
Aww thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
>>29051948
Good to know I hit the mark! This drawing was a real challenge for some reason.

I'll draw another request tonight. Anybody have one for me? I'm up for anything.
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>>29054501
wut
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>>29054382
I actually didn't see this before. I love it! It looks wonderful! Thank you so much, Anon!

If you have a request, just let me know!
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>>29053490

It's the same with Rarity for most of the fandom. People don't like a personality from someone that is strong and full of ambition. It reminds them of what they'll never be or never have. Funny to think about.
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>>29054398

Do you have a request for a story you want to see? You're giving so much so maybe I can give back. Won't promise it'll be perfect or amazing or anything.
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>>29054692
Don't undermine yourself Anon! Whatever it is you make, it'll have a little something that only you can bring to it.

How about a cute little story about an old Hearth's Warming gift Rainbow Dash loves from her childhood? I'll let you decide the specifics. That would be nice to see!
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>>29054501
Well, she did try to stop winter...kinda like stealing Christmas.

>>29053152
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>>29054389
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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>>29054969
Dash is such a cute mare.

I'd want to fly with her.
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I've just finished a HUGE final assignment and am happy to say I can draw a bit early tonight. If there aren't any requests I'll figure something out! If you've got one just let me know.

>>29054779
I just read your monster of an update. Keep up the good work Rosen! I look forward to your green!
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>>29054978
Requesting green of Rainbow teaching Anon the joys of flight after some sort of magical involvement making him a Pegasus pony
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>>29055966
>tf
how about hes just given temporary wings or something instead

yuck
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>>29055969
Or he can just temporarily be a pegasus.
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>>29055950
What about Rainbow giving a present to Scootaloo? Or Scootaloo giving a present to Rainbow. Or both of them giving a present to each other. Something something presents would be nice.
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>>29055966
seconding
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>>28996664
>The dirt felt smooth and fine beneath your hooves and the wind was light and refreshing, carrying a sweet scent from the village you had left in your wake.
>While armor felt heavy and cumbersome to most, the cold embrace of the steel gave you a sense of comfort you rarely felt elsewhere.
>The shifting weight of the worn longsword strapped to your back gave you a feeling of security, as if you could take on the whole world, just you and your sword.
>Life wasn't all comforts though, comfort only dulls ambition.
>You hated long walks like these, and this was the longest one you'd had the strength for in a while.
>You had only walked for a mile or so, and if that eccentric stallion was correct you still had many more to go.
>Watching the world flow by you, a seamless mess of chaos mixed in with the seemingly endless fields of grass on either side became boring very quickly.
>Risking boredom-induced insanity, you were forced to turn to the confines of your own mind for entertainment.
>This was the source of your hatred for long walks.
>"Why did you leave that nice village behind?"
>It had already started, much quicker this time than usual.
>"They were nice ponies, they healed you and armed you, free of charge."
>"Why did you abandon them? What were you afraid of?"
'............'
>"Surely you weren't afraid of the Changlings, you don't even think they're going to come. So what was it then?"
'You talk too much. You're always sulking around, just leave me alone.'
>"Oh, I see! You weren't afraid of them, you were afraid of yourself, weren't you?"
'I said to shut up.'
>"Remember Dashie, you can't hide those sneaky little thoughts from me. I made all of them in the first place!"
>"You're afraid of yourself, I see now. If you can't find some "bad guy" to hack up, who's to say you wont turn on those poor villagers, right?"
'............'
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>>29056820
>"You've already taken yourself past being a simple pony, so why wouldn't you? What do you even do besides kill other creatures? If those ponies knew what you've done in your illustrious career so far, they'd drive you away with pitchforks and torches."
>"But you don't really care about that, do you? After all, what kind of a monster cares about the ponies it devours?"
'What?'
>"Don't play dumb, you already know it well. I make the thoughts, but you're the one who entertains them. You're a monster. You don't deserve to call yourself a pony any longer."
>"What type of simple pony strives only to mow down those in the way of a paycheck? What type of pony only ever feels good when they've got at least an arrow or two in their body, or when they're chopping through another herd of creatures?"
'Shut up already! You never just shut up!'
>"Of course not. I'll be here as long as you are. After all, I am your only friend. It takes a monster to keep a monster company after all."
"I SAID SHUT UP!!"
>The lone shout travels through the valley, your rage echoing endlessly off your surroundings.
>Scoffing, you swallow your wild feelings and trudge onwards to your destination.
>You try to entertain other thoughts to pass the time, but you can still feel "it" in your mind, licking at their edges like a flame.
>Even insanity was a better fate than that, so you turned back to the valley.
>After walking for what seemed like hours and loosing count of the birds that flew over head once you reached the hundreds, you decide to give your weary legs a short rest.
>You spy a small hill in the distance and decide its peak looks like as good a spot as any to rest your tired body.
>Making the short climb to the top, you drop to the floor with a dull thud, drowned out by the rambling of your armor shifting.
>The rest feels good on your hooves, and your back was beginning to ache from all the walking.
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>>29056834
>You flop on to your back, resting your head on both forelegs as you stare up into the nearly empty sky.
>The sun had already started descending from its usual place above, and a few lonely stars were coming out for their nightly performance.
>All of them seemed to exist in groups, save for a single star.
>It hovered right above you, completely alone in the growing darkness.
>Its glow seemed much dimmer than the others, simply existing amongst its brethren.
>You could only chuckle at the star and its well placed irony as you sat up, relieving your back from the armor digging into your skin.
>As you sat up however, you could see a distant glow in the dusk air, painting the surrounding grass a shade of orange.
>It looked to be....
>....a fire.
>Staining your eyes, you can barely make out a roaring fire, surrounded by a hazy number of ponies.
>It could be deer or Changlings though, it was too far away for your tired eyes to tell.
>You make your way back down the hill, crossing over the path and cutting through the thick fields of grass towards the light.
>The lengthy blades block your path, desperately clinging to you legs, hindering each step as you press on to the fire, drawn to it like a moth.
>You try to peer over the eye level grass, shakily navigating to the flame through the growing darkness.
>As you grow closer, faint voices can be heard over the swaying sea of flora and the crackle of dry wood consumed by the heat.
>You duck down, lowering your head beneath the grass and looking through the tiny gaps as you approach the group around the fire.
>They had managed to create a clearing, a wide circle of dirt marking their camp, surrounded by the army of grass.
>You counted ten stallions sitting around the fire, each watching in amusement as one began to play some sort of instrument.
>Their coats were all bare, but you could easily make out a few pieces of armor scattered around the encampment, most joined by a sheathed sword or bow.
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>>29056849
>You were still assessing the group when a dark grey stallion stepped into view, calling the attention of the group.
>That was him.
>That was stallion who attacked you in the woods, you were sure of it.
>You were angry with yourself that you hadn't noticed it before, but this is clearly the group of ponies you were looking for.
>The one you set out to kill.
>A wild grin splits across your face as you begin to formulate a game plan, though those don't usually make it past the "attack" step.
>You make a move to grab your sword, but immediately cringe as your movement generates a loud sway of the grass.
>Everypony in the circle suddenly freezes, all eyes trained on your position.
>You can hardly pay attention to them any longer with the feeling rushing through your body.
>Your sword made a glorious noise as it slid out of its sheath, the kind of sound that only becons violence.
>The urge to fight was coursing through every fiber of your being, swelling in your mind.
>It had been so long, over a week now.
>Everypony was already on their hooves, slinking over to their respective weapons as they listen to the grass, watching for any movement.
>Times like these were what you loved the most.
>It was too similar to a wolf stalking his prey, the inescapable urge to rip into the unsuspecting creatures just within the glow of the fire was the only thing holding you up right now.
>There were no complex worries to think about, just survival and swinging your sword around.
>It seemed to be the only thing you were ever good at, and you relished every second of it.
>After retrieving his sword from his pile, a scrawny looking pegusus lifts slowly into the air, peering over the tall grass.
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>>29056860
>You anxiously grip your own blade in your hoof, lowering your haunches to spring forward.
>"I dunno boss, I can't see anyt-"
>You couldn't wait any longer.
>Every muscle in you was on fire, just begging to move.
>You could even feel yourself licking your lips, eager to attack.
>All this burning need manifests itself into an ear piercing roar, erupting from your throat as you launch into the air.
>The midair stallion is caught completely off guard, even dropping his sword in terror as you lift into the air, almost too fast to see.
>You easily ram your shoulder into his defenseless midsection, a cocktail of fluids spewing out of his mouth as you hit his stomach like a brick wall.
>The two of you arch through the air as you push him forward, spinning a full ninety degrees.
>You let go of the paralysed stallion, letting him drop straight to the floor with a dull thud as you continue to spin through the air.
>Your hooves contact the floor fluidly, giving way for your perfectly executed roll.
>By the time you're back on your hooves with your sword in hoof, none of the ponies had even had the chance to move other than the unfortunate victim of your first attack who was now laying on the floor motionless.
>You were at the other edge of their circle now, all of your combatants clamoring for their weapons in shock.
>The leader of the group tries to open his mouth, but you've already given them too much time to prepare.
>You shot forward like a bullet, rearing your forelegs upwards and cocking your sword back on your shoulder, gripping the pommel feverishly.
>As you approach the first of the group you execute a wide overhead slash, slicing through his cheek and barrel in one clean movement.
>His howls of pain rip through the night as he blindly flails his club toward your head, blood spurting from his wound.
>Your guard easily blocks the attack, giving you a perfect shot at his throat.
>You thrust your blade forward, piercing the soft skin and tendons.
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>>29056868
>He immediately drops to the floor, attempting to move for a few seconds before falling silent.
>The entire group looks on at their two fallen comrades in silent shock before fixating their eyes upon you, full of terror and anger.
>Your once clean armor was already bloodsoaked, but your lust for the stuff was still unending.
>Finally coming to their senses the group of ponies attacks, weapons held high with their bravado hanging on their numbers.
>They all rush your position, filling in any path of escape with more bodies for you to cut through.
>Deciding to start on the right side, you drop your sword into a mid guard and charge forward, closing the distance between you and your attackers.
>Everything was a haze to you now, but it all felt so natural, so clear at the same time.
>You could barely make out the stallion making a wide swing down on your head, but you could counter attack perfectly.
>You thrust your blade through his reared-up body like paper, the thin metal sliding straight through his coat.
>Before the stallion can even begin to collapse on you, you shift your weight against your sword, jutting it to the left.
>The false edge makes a jagged cut through his body, slicing out to his side, a cascade of red liquid following.
>You put all your force into a horizontal swing, ramming your sword into the nearest stallion.
>It hits his helmet with a metallic resonance, dropping him to the floor in a torrent of yelps and screams while clutching his ear.
>You felt completely invincible now with these two stallions crumpled at your hooves, none of these ponies could even touch you.
>The fear of death had long since been suppressed in your mind.
>An arrow whizzes by your chest, scratching against your armor as it flies past.
>The bowman responsible stands behind the fire, readying another shot.
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>>29056880
>You focus your attention on him, darting beneath the angry swing of a short sword, aiming straight for the roaring fire.
>Archers were the bane of any swordsman, it was too difficult to focus on your attackers while dodging arrows.
>A stallion brandishing a rather large battle axe blocks your path around the fire, but you were already moving too fast to stop.
>Tucking your hooves beneath you, you dive straight into the fire, planting your hooves on the roaring embers.
>The flames lick at your legs, consuming anything they can grasp.
>The heat was nothing compared to what was in your mind as you lept through the flames, so their affect did little to hinder you.
>Pushing off the fire you slam into the panicked archer, landing on his muzzle with your sword.
>The both of you went to the floor, and you manage to land on your stomach with your sword tucked underneath you.
>You can hear the heavy hoofsteps of a stallion behind you, and the grunt escaping his lips as he swings his heavy axe.
>You quickly roll over to your back, letting your sword pull you through the motion as you spin.
>The heavy axehead thuds into the ground right where your head was less than a second before, burying itself entirely.
>The tip of your blade slices right through the stallion's throat, propelled by your movement.
>He immediately drops the axe, clutching his throat with a gut-wrenching gurgle as he staggers backwards.
>You stand from the floor, much slower this time as the sweat drips from your forehead.
>Your body burns with a conflicting mixture of exhaustion and ambition, but it was far too late to give up.
>You had already hacked your way through six of the group, there were only four timid ponies left now.
>The quivering group looks on with terror as you raise your sword, cackling while you point it directly at them.
"So, which one of you is next? I don't really feel like stopping quite yet."
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>>29056887
>The leader of the group bares his teeth, lifting his polearm and charging.
>"Monster! We'll kill you!"
>Filled with bravado and wanton bloodlust, you throw your sword to the floor, disarming yourself voluntarily.
>The stallion thrusts his spear at your chest, the sharp tip barely discernable in the night time air.
>A small tinge of fear shoots up your spine as the metal slashes through your skin, only giving you a short second to move out of danger.
>You dodge to the side, grabbing the extended wooden staff and driving your knee through it, shattering the worn wood.
>The front half has a familiar weight in your hoof as you turn to the paralyzed stallion, another powerful roar bursting from your lungs.
>You drive the shining tip into the barrel of his chest, digging the pole in up to your hoof.
>The stallion gasps for a moment, slumping against you as the blood begins to fall from the gaping wound.
>You grimace in disgust, letting the pony fall to the floor as you wipe off your hoof in the dirt.
>Seeing their leader killed, the three remaining demoralized stallions turn and sprint for the tall grass, hoping to lose you.
>You quickly tear the helmet off the leader and launch it into the air, watching as it gracefully hurdles through the air and slams into the head of an escaping stallion.
>By the time he hits the floor you're already on the group, utilizing your flight to tackle another one to the ground.
>You slam his face into the dirt, giving the back of his head two swift punches.
>Making sure he's not going to get back up, you nearly miss the sword hurtling down on your head.
>You lift your foreleg, catching his crossbar on your extended limb as you thrust the other into his exposed stomach.
>The impact makes him drop his sword, hunching over to clutch his bruised mid section.
>You grab his lowered head in both hooves and slam your knee into the edge of his jaw, spit flying through the air as he drops to the floor.
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>>29056899
>Wasting no time you leap to your hooves and brace yourself for the next attack, but none come.
>Only bodies surround you, a puddle of blood no longer home to combatants.
>Slowly coming down from your frenzy, you pick up the nearest sword and quickly dispatch each of the three unconscious stallions, leaving no opportunities for revenge.
>You groggily wander over to the fire, dropping to the floor in exhaustion.
>Sweat trickles from your body to mix with the blood, not all of which is your own.
>A lump forms in your throat as you look at your surroundings, at this graveyard which was once a campsite.
>You raise a hoof to your face, breathing heavily while you attempt to hold your breakfast down.
>"Well, look at that. You've done it again, haven't you?"
'Leave me alone.'
>"You see, most ponies would laugh at the thought of attacking ten armed and dangerous bandits by themselves, but not the great Rainbow Dash, right?"
>"That's easy stuff for you. And it should be after all, considering."
'What?'
>"Well, you heard it yourself. They called you a monster. Not a pony, not a bastard, asshole, bitch, or whatever a thug calls someone they hate. A monster."
'Leave me alone! I'm not, I know I'm a pony.'
>"Looking at all this devastation. Ponies would be terrified of you if they saw this, and they'd consider you insane if you even told this story. You can lie to all of them if you want, claiming all this was for revenge. But you and I know the truth."
>"You saw an opportunity to kill again, and you took it. They never even took your bag in the first place, you left it back at that clearing where you first stopped."
>"I'm not going anywhere Dashie, it's a long walk back to the village."
>You slowly stand to your hooves, fetching your sword and starting back to the village.
>"After all, even a monster needs some company."
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>>29056912
Hopefully the long update makes up for the lack of consistency.
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>>29056912
I'm really liking this story. I enjoy the gritty, violent nature of it and the way you write and describe things is spectacular. The action scenes are immaculate, but I expect to see that in an action green.

If I had a single complaint it would be Dash. While I love the direction she's going in, I feel like we only know three things about our MC.
1. She loves to fight
2. She's kind of a prick
3. She's at least partially insane
We got a little more insight into why she does the things she does and I like that, but I feel like we need more.

Great stuff though, this is my favorite green ITT and one of my favorite RD greens ever.
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>>29056348
Done and done! I like the way this one came out even if I had less time to make it than I thought. I hope you enjoy!

I might be able to squeeze in one more tonight! Any more cute requests?
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>>29057821

How cute! The only criticism I have is about the torso and the awkward way it is angled. It gives a little too much fat to her midsection/lower half. The back slopes at this weird angle as it disappears behind her front. I was going to comment on one of your earlier drawings in the thread about how her showing hind leg had one too many humps on her hip. Still very greatful for the art!
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>>29058170
I actually intended on giving her a bit more chub for cuteness sake, but I see what you're saying! As for the lump in the hip, I actually noticed that after inking. Trying to adjust inking tends to ruin a drawing, so I left it.

Thanks for the critique! I'll be sure to keep an eye out as I go forward!
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>>29057821
dash is a chubby pone
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>>29058232
I wanna rub that belly.
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>>29058215

OK, understandable if it's a stylistic choice. I should have assumed so based on your previous drawings. They really are just nitpicks and otherwise look very clean. There are a few other small things, but we won't get into that. I look forward to seeing more from you.
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>>29056912
This is such a great story, keep it going.
Noticed there were far less spelling errors this time, that makes it so much easier to read.
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>>29057821
That's lovely, thank you!
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>>29057821
I promise I'm not doing this for every pic you post, but I colored this one too. I tried to fix the perspective and I'm afraid it look a bit too stretchy but, well, what's done is done.
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>>29056912
I'm lovin' it
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>>29055950
Thank you! And again for drawing my request the other day!
>>29056912
Keep up the good work, Gattsu! You're improving!
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>>29058383
It's alright! I'm trying to develop my own style at the moment, and it's really difficult. But seriously, thank you for your critique! It lets me know what is working and what might not be. A lot of small mistakes are because I don't have much time to work on them, so they tend to be a little sloppy.

>>29060485
It looks great to me! I love these edits, I've been printing them out and putting them on my wall. Thanks a whole bunch!

>>29060049
You're welcome Anon! That was a great request!

>>29061254
No problem Rosen! I might draw a scene from your story down the road if I have the time (probably after finals).


How is everyone in the Rainbow Dash Thread today?
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>>29061336
I'm doing great, especially after seeing >>29061112
I love it!
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>>29054969
Is there a higher res of this?
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>>29061402
Here is the link
https://derpibooru.org/1316724?scope=scpe2074bb05c07adc80b88063d3cd7d5baff08c867f
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>>29061336
It's my pleasure, I enjoy coloring, and those two drawings were really cute. I'm sorry, I just noticed that Scootaloo's right ear is red. Fug. At least it's not very noticeable now that you saw it you can't unsee it.
By the way, if you want the drawings saved in the Gimp format (I mean, with layers and such) to edit them further, just ask me and I'll upload them somewhere.

>>29061402
Unfortunately the source has the same resolution, but if you want to scale a drawing, say, to use it as a wallpaper or something, try Waifu2x
http://waifu2x.booru.pics/
They use a different system than usual photo editors and it (usually) looks much better. Here's a comparison of the original pic rescaled to twice the original size, using the usual Bicubic rescale and Waifu2x.
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>>29056912
Such an awesome green, listening with music makes it 10x better.
Pro tip: Bloodborne OST.
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>>29048037
RIGGY?

>>29051766
>>29051774
RIIIGGGY!

>>29061336
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGGGGYYYYYYYYYY!


>>29052529
ROSE!
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>>29062105
Don't worry about Scoot's ear, I didn't even notice haha. You're the best! Hold on to those gimp files, I might inquire about them one day.

>>29062722
Haha hey Fapman! It's been awhile! It's really great to see you. How have you been?
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Posting cute Dosh in a Dosh Thread
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>>29062923
Like a shit under ice on frozen lake. Shitty, but stable.

How are you? New art? Maybe wroitings? Anything?

>>29063001
WINTER?! You as well?!
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>>29063034
Sorry to hear hard times have come your way, Fappy. Good people like you shouldn't have hard times.

I'm making new art as I go, gonna write as soon as my finals are over and done with. I'm making a return, and I'm hoping to stick.
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>>29063075
Oh, man. I want to see all of your art, and I'm happy to see your future writings, man. I'm glad a fag of mine posted here so I came to actually do something here.

Maybe even if Dash-post.

I write humanized-RD story, I guess I should not link it here.
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I have a little time to draw at the moment! I'm gonna start drawing, so if you have a request feel free to ask!
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>>29062722
(^_^) Hi Fapchan!
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>>29063995

So I have a challenge for you. If you don't mind, I would like to see a pic of Dash and Anon on a couch, Dash's hoof either held discreetly by Anon or just the lightest touch between them. I consider it a challenge because human hand and because I'm not quite sure how one would go about holding a hoof discreetly, so I would love to see your take. It also is part of your story request that I'm working on up higher in the thread.
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>>29064730
Working on it now!
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>>29064730
Here you go my friend! I didn't have as much time as I thought, so this has yet to be colored in. For a quick sketch/ink though, I think it came out well. I actually really like drawing hands.

I'll probably do some after-thought inking down the road along with shading it. I hope you like it!
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>>29065253
that is fucking adorable. Writefags plz i need this.
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>>29065253
my heart
my soul
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>>29065253
That looks awesome. Great work, man.
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>>29066889
>earlier
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>>29065605
I'm glad you enjoy it! I'm excited to see what the anon who is writing this story is going to come up with!
>>29066227
You made me chuckle when I read this.
>>29066454
Thank you Anon! I'm glad you like it.

I'll be drawing up a storm later tonight. Here's an odd question: Does anyone have an idea for a short comic they would like to see? I can't promise it for tonight, but I really love drawing comics.

Other than that, feel free to throw some requests my way! I'll be happy to make something for y'all!
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>>29067616
Rainbro Dash watching the classically oblivious Anon from a cloud?
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>>29067646
You got it! I'll draw that tonight!
Any others?
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>>29067678
Anon showing dash derpiburo
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Hot tomales, I've gotten through a lot of studying tonight so I'm taking a break now. Gonna start drawing
>>29067646
and
>>29068020
now!

Can't have a day go by with no content!
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>>29069787
Nice
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>>29069787
Will you begin writing the story you promised this weekend?
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>>29070368
My finals are on this weekend actually. So after this weekend I'll finally have some free time to write!
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>>29068020
Here you go! A little shitty comic for ya!

Emphasis on little. My sketch pad is small enough as it is, separating the page into 6 little windows made it damn near impossible to be any kind of consistent. Ah well, you can't win em all.

Still, I think the story comes through. I also really like the third panel

Shitty or not, I hope this at least satisfies!
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>>29070852
That's adorable!
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>>29070852
kek
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>>29070852
bretty gud
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>>29065253
>I actually really like drawing hands.

What kind of life do you want? A not very loud one?
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>>29070870
>>29071959
>>29070894
Whew! Good thing y'all enjoyed it! I hated it after I drew it at first.

I'll be drawing >>29067646 tonight when I'm done studying for the day.


>>29057821
I just realized I must have subliminally remembered this from somewhere because there is an eerily similar picture here >>29072840 and I had no idea about it until today.
I figured that the scootaloo-in-a-present thing was common, but I didn't think I'd make a picture so accidentally similar.
I hate it when that happens.

>>29072529
You misunderstand, I like drawing hands in Pokemon tcg.
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>>29073702
Welp. >>29060485 here. It's kinda funny that I have a folder with a few hundred of my favorite pics of Dash, I check it often and this is one of them, so I've seen it a bunch of times, but I didn't remember it either. My favorite part is that I managed to use the same colors for the box, making it even more unnecessarily similar.

Anyway, having some more Scootalove is always good.
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>>29073774
Who doesn't? Twilight?
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Mobius when?
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Kawaii Dash-u
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>>29055966
*Bob Ross
*joys of painting
ftfy
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>>29077777
Fak u and ur fuckin pony too
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>>29077777
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It's the morning before one of the hardest and most important exams of my semester. It's do or die time.

I'll actually have time to draw after it today, so I can get caught up on requests.

Until then, wish me luck O'hana. It's gonna be a trip.
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>>29078438
GOOD LUUUUUUUUCK! I'll be channeling all the good vibes I can muster at you!
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>>29073702

Are you trying to tell us you're a man named Ken Sugimori who makes art for video games? If so, that would be pretty fucking great.
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>>29078438
Not even a dashfag but good luck all the same.
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>>29078438
Good Luck!
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>>29078438
you got this pham
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>tfw too intelligent.
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>>29080483
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>>29080708
Yeah, this picture didn't workout as well as I'd hoped.
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>>29080483
>that pic
disgusting
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>>29080483

>oddly appropriate
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>>29080483
Brainbow Dash
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>>29079404
>>29078496
>>29079770
>>29080286

Thank you for your power! I think I passed the dang thing. For now, I'm going to go pass out.

>>29078921
____________yeah______

>>29080483
>pic related
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Page 9
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>>29047999
Hey guys, I'm aware that this board is a blue board, but I'm looking for some good Dash er... Pictures, that aren't of her being brash as fuck in sex, but more reserved and nervous like. It's fucking adorable as shit. Does anyone have some links for a fellow dashfag?
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>>29073702
It's too late, Kira.
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>>29081968
>I passed the dang thing
Good job have a Rainbow Dash
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>>29081968
>scrolling though the first page, name catches my eye
hope you're doing good, well done, here's a dash for you
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>>29081968

Boy oh boy, I like to belive tales on the Internet. If this were somehow proven, /vp/ would shit themselves.
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>>29084666
>*creepiness
fixed
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>>29083990
Use derpibooru.org
Just search like
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or something like that
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>>29085547
>damn nightmares
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LXY3wVOf7z4
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>>29080483
anon
>tfw to intelligent
that's how you do it
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I almost bought the original painting of this from the artist a long time ago at a con. Instead I got his other piece depicting Canterlot from a distance with a backdrop of the night sky. Both were the same price and as much as I love Dash, I couldn't help but think there was more effort and creativity put into the Canterlot painting.
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i drew a pic for you Dashfags, hope somebody will like.
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>>29087386
I like
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I want to write green again. I haven't written in 2 years for a Dash thread. Anybody want to listen to an old writefag spin a yarn or two?
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>>29088297
Do it! Do it!
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>>29088882
Fuck yes. Also, who were you?
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>>29089240
Meant for
>>29088297
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>>29088297
Sure!
What was your name?
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>>29076610
Mobius soon. Just finished my finals, completed some smaller projects I needed to get done and finally started leave. I'll be dumping more green in the coming days.

>>29052529
This is just really fun to read. Not many writers can depict Dash sperging out over her interests while keeping her in character and not autistic. Looking forward to more.

>>29056912
For some reason this made me think of that scene in Kill Bill where the bride kills all the Yakuza.

>>29065253
>>29081968
Glad to see you in the Dash thread! Hopefully you enjoy your stay and never leave! Your picures are freaking adorable especially this one; you've got some serious drawing and writing talent man.

>>29088297
Please.
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>>29088882
>>29089240
>>29089389
>>29089708
I don't even remember my name it's been so long. I do remember.

I think I'll use this name though: http://pastebin.com/u/BallblasterTheFifth

When I get something going, I'll be sure to drop it here. Might be a while, like two days, because I get my internet shut off here real soon. I guess that just means I get more time to refine the story a bit.
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Oh let me ask you this: How are the threads these days? I remember leaving around the time the Nightly Dash shit started up, so it was back in 2014. I recall very distinctly the drastic decline in Dashfag population at that time. Have things changed? Are we getting more population?
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>>29089907
its fairly steady, ever since mobius popped up the threads have been more active than they have in a long while, i remember back then the threads were endless bump fests, but nowdays the dash threads seem to be able to keep themselves up day after day without a stream of bumps.
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>>29089958
I think you mean Church. The threads were really dead until Church started writing. He's been gone for a while (are you OK, Church?), but when he appeared he posted almost daily updates, and that was a huge change for the better.

Mobius started writing later, after Rosen. Not that I want to rank them, I love them three a lot, but it was definitely Church who "saved" the thread when some of us started saying that maybe this shouldn't be a permanent thread if it was going to be nothing but bumps. I'm glad the other side won and kept /dash/ alive, this is a worthy thread now thanks to them, and if dark times come back, I'll be there by your side.
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Hey, I've just realized something.

There are 2 ways to link to a pic on DeviantArt. I'll use >>29051774 as an example. The "long" link ends with the image number, in our example this link would be
http://riggyrag.deviantart.com/art/Dashie-Hug-Sitting-650965847
The "short" link is the link that appears in the sharing section of the page, it ends with 7 characters and those 7 characters are also in the filename, in our example
http://fav.me/darkggn
Those 7 characters can be either numbers or lowercase letters, and they're consecutive. I mean, after darkggn comes darkggo, then darkggp,..., darkggz, darkgh0, darkgh1...

Well, here's the thing, DeviantArt is about to reach "dash000". It'll do in about 48 hours from now if my calculations are right. That means that, for a very short period, maybe about an hour, there will be 46655 pics whose sharing link will start with "dash". If someone here (besides RiggyRag) has a DeviantArt account, I think you could like to have one of those links for one of your pictures of Dash.

More random data for anyone willing to attempt this "get":
Latest deviations:
http://www.deviantart.com/browse/all/?order=5
Beware! The topmost deviation isn't always the most recent one, check always a few of them to be sure. You don't need to actually open them, just look at the number in the URL. For example, right now the most recent deviation is #652091775 (das8l8f), that means that there are still 392385 deviations to post until dash000. As a reference, deviation 651699391 was posted 48 hours ago, hence my calculations.
Useful equivalences:
http://fav.me/dash000 -> http://www.deviantart.com/view/652484160
http://fav.me/dashzzz -> http://www.deviantart.com/view/652530815

This post was longer than I expected, specially for something barely related (sorry!) but if anyone has any other question, I'll try to reply. By the way, if you know some other Dashfag who doesn't come here but has a DeviantArt account, tell him about this, he might be interested.
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>Rainbow Dash sighted
>This is the moment I've been waiting for
>Readies Dildo Launcher
>Prepare your anus bitch
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>>29084191
My cover is blown

>>29084231
Thanks Anon!

>>29084266
I am doing well! I hope the same for you Anon! Thanks for stopping by for my sake. It makes me feel special.

>>29088297
>>29089743
Hey welcome back! I look forward to reading your story! Take your time, we'll be here for ya!

>>29089708
Hey Mobius! Good to be in the thread! You're the big kahuna here so this is really high praise! Thank you so much! I look forward to seeing your work.

>>29090416
Hmm, curious. I have a drawing request or two to do, but it usually takes me hours to make them though. Hopefully my timing will be lucky!

I am back from dying due to exams, I'll be spending today blocking out some stories and drawing a few requests. This'll be awesome!
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>>29090584
Can't wait for the green
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>>29047999
Why do you like her?
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>>29091037
She's a cute pony
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>>29090606
Excellent, because I've gotten about three quarters of the way through blocking it out. I plan on finishing the planning stage today and start writing by tomorrow or the next day.

I am shocked by how much I like how this story is coming out. Considering it was inspired by the combination of two different random requests, it's actually coming together quite nicely. I'm looking forward to it!

>>29091037
Dash isn't my favorite Ponkfag sorry and I used to not like her. She grew on me a lot the more I watched her though.

I like her because she is a hotheaded athlete with a heart of gold.
She looks out for her friends, and she's the first one to put up her dukes when it comes to protecting them. She has learned to be more caring and understanding, and even how to embrace the more nerdy parts of herself. I love that.
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>>29091037
But I don't "like" her.

I love her. I admire her. She's an inspiration for me. I love everything she does, I love everything she is. I love her eyes, I love her mane and her tail, I love her wings, I love her cutie mark. Her voice melts my heart and her smile makes my world shine. She makes me happy. This beautiful mare means the world to me.
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>>29091037

She's pretty straight forward with her opinions and somewhat set in her way. We have the same lazy streak. Her voice is a good mix of crackyness. The tomboy trope has always been something I've liked. We both go over the top in out love for our hobbies and interests. The idea that small fights that tend to wear down relationships wouldn't do much to hers with the element of loyalty. The sense of dedication we have to our friends is the same. Her light blue coat is soft on the eyes while her rainbow mane makes her stick out. Our egos are pretty close. The idea of making little things into competitions between one another sounds amazing and can motivate me to do things.

There's a bit more, but I'm at work and can't post much.
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Hey guys BallBlaster the long lost writefag from earlier here.

Got myself a doc open in pastebin right now with the premise of the story and some notes on maintaining the interest through the story.

So far, I've decided it's going to be a a split POV story, with Dash and Anon inter-changing POVs as to maintain mystery to the overall plot's conclusion. I can't wait to get to work on it and share it.

That being said, I'm curious, does anyone have a specific postcount in mind for when a story is considered big or small?

I've read about suspension of disbelief and immersion and all that jazz, and how people like longer stories because they can live and immerse themselves in the world the author is in to escape from reality, and I assume the case is the same for this board especially, but the post count comes into play.

I don't want to just spam the fucking thread with endless posts and turn people off of it. I'd like to get some of your opinions on this. Do you like long greens? When does a green become too long? Would you mind my green being a bit long?

I would like to make it as long as it needs to be, but if need be I suppose I can just cut some corners.
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>>29095779
you wont get any complaints about long greens for this thread, i will say though we have 2 authors who already post in the 'big green dump but long delay between' style, so it might be better if you write in the 'short but frequent' style just to fill the gaps
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>>29095779
>does anyone have a specific postcount in mind for when a story is considered big or small?
I'd say that there's no such thing as a "too small". We're eager to suspend our disbelief and immerse, and even a 2 posts long quickie can work. On the other hand, the longest green in the thread has 386k characters and counting (that's almost 200 posts), but it's been running for over 6 months.

IMO, if you want to write a one-shot, it really shouldn't have more than 20-30 posts. If you want to write something longer, it'd be for the best if you posted it through several days. Also, I'm seconding what >>29095806 says, "short but frequent" would be appreciated.
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>>29095806
>>29095816
A big problem I have with the short but frequent thing is that I really like just planning everything out first, and then in one long session, create the entire one shot in one sitting. I kind of hate having stories sitting around too with me posting parts of it every few days.

Looking at the doc it doesn't look like it'd be a giant 40 post thing, so I'll probably be ok.
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Quick Update!
I have finished the blocking out! I'm happy to say I'll start writing tomorrow morning.

>>29095806
I actually usually write in the small green dumps as it goes kind of writing. I'm probably going to write for hours each morning then post what I have when I finish. That way there are updates each day until it is done!

Alrighty RD thread, I'll get everything prepped for tomorrow and pick out the last details in my blocking.
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So we're about to get a new update by Mobius, a new green by Riggy and a new writefriend. Christmas is coming early this year.
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>>29090166
I am. It was the least i could do, ny favorite thread needed some help ajd i offered my mediocre abilities. I appreciate your thoughts, but I think I'm done writing for the RDG. You guys were great, but you have new, better writefags and I've found other nuances and threads to write for. Sorry I'll never finish that green of mine.
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>>29047999
Can I have some lewd pics of RD in pony and EQG form?
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>>29099478
>Sorry I'll never finish that green of mine.
Pic related.

Seriously though, you made this thread a better general and you'll be missed. Thanks for everything, Church.
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>>29100743
Begin the ear nibbles!
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>>29100743
hhnggg
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Time for a blast from the past...
1/20
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>>29101259
2/20
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3/20
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>>29101273
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>>29101282
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8/20
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9/20
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>>29101292
11/20
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20/20
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>>29101330
And for those who want the clop ending, enjoy.

https://imgur.com/a/J5h9E
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>>29100743
>she smells like fast
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>>29090166
There was also Crunchbite, who was before Church and Mobius. Rest in peace, you glorious motherfucker. Hope you're kicking it up with her right now you lovely soul.
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>>29101331
I love this comic.

>>29101748
Sorry if I expressed myself badly, I didn't mean that Church was our first writefag. Of course he wasn't, there were great writefags before him, and I certainly won't forget Crunchbite. What I tried to say is just, Church made our thread much more pleasant during one of our "low times".

Maybe I'm giving him too much credit, but I remember that shortly before he appeared I wrote some shit like "we should wait a couple of weeks before starting the next thread". I remember it because I wasn't at my best and I loved it when he started posting all those cute short greens, and I remember being glad you guys didn't let the thread die. But I admit that maybe my memories are distorted and the thread wasn't really so dead before he came. I don't know.
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I, for one, miss grim ponka and the other guy who wrote at that time. They did some ubercute shorts, and wrote requests all the time.
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>>29090416
FYI, if anyone was trying to do this, the DeviantArt links start with "dash" since a few minutes ago. Pro trick: if you upload a pic to your sta.sh (any pic, even a blank image) you can replace it any time in the future before submitting it and it'll still have a link starting with "dash". Pro-pro trick: if you upload a few pictures, you can use their links later, for your future drawings.
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>>29099478
Don't stop the story just cause the thread is busy right now.
I love your green
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Hey guys I'm the long last writefag.

I'm probably going to take even longer, because the story I was going to write I've decided isn't all that great of a premise. I'm instead just going to cut the artsy fartsy shit and make a smallish fun little story.

Still I feel kinda bad about the 2 hours or so of work I did on making the planning, so here's the paste I was using as a guideline for the story. The plot guideline is very very unpolished and kind of nonsensical. http://pastebin.com/bq9pzBfa

Basically, Anon was supposed to see Twilight using a color spell for Rarity on a dress, and then on the way to watch Dash practice, he was supposed to see Rose pushing a cart of roses, and then he hatches an idea. Then it cuts to Dash being jealous over Anon not hanging out with her, and then getting worried when he is taking roses to Twilight's house because of how they're both eggheads and would make a good couple. Then she realizes she likes Anon.

End of the story is her getting pissed at Anon, and then he gives her a thing of magically colored roses with the colors from her mane.

If anyone would like to write up something with that concept in mind I'd love to see it.
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>>29099478
Don't stop, nigga. We love you. Be loyal to them. Be loyal to me. Pls?
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This is a fun thread.
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I've normally been a rarafag but I've really been liking RD more and more lately
threads like this are contributing to these feelings
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>>29106038
Never really liked rara all that much. She's just too elegant and froo froo for me. I've been a Dashfag since I started watching the show.
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>>29106038
i think rarity is a good pony and ranks second for me next to dashie.
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>>29106038
Thanks Anon. You're waifu a cute.
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>>29101331
>muscle control
>people really used to think mares could squeeze you with their vaginal walls
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>>29108589
She could squeeze my heart with her vaginal walls.
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>>29108599
I'm now visualizing an excised human heart being pushed inside Dash's pussy. Thank you for that image.
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>>29108618
And in turn I'm visualizing an R rated Daring Doo movie.
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>>29101331
What's the sauce for the thumbnail? I know it's weaver, but I'm looking for the original image.
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Hey everyone! Sorry about the delays, the holidays are very busy. I'm gonna be writing all night, but before that I need to go out.

That being said, here is the first post for my new green!

>The fine silk of Rarity’s scarf hugs her elegant neck with tender and gentle warmth.
>As the scarf warms the outside of her neck, her aromatic tea heats the inside of her throat and pushes a sigh from lips into the cool December air.
>”Such a crisp morning,” Rarity says lightly, “I am going long for these days as the weather becomes more ghastly by late January.”
>Rarity adjusts her gaze to the pony across the table from her.
>Twilight has her snout deep in the pages of a large novel. Her ears covered by a soft pair of maroon muffs, and her body covered by a tasteful winter jacket.
>Rarity isn’t surprised when a response doesn’t come until after a short delay.
>”O-oh, yes” Twilight says finally rejoining the conversation, “It really has been a mild winter so far. Hopefully it will stay that way.”
>Twilight’s eyes seldom look up from the pages.
>Rarity sighs.
>”Honestly darling, it has been so long since we have had tea together and you’re too engrossed in your book to make a genuine effort at conversation,” Rarity says.
>”Sorry… I don’t really have much time to read in the castle, and I want to be caught up in this series before Hearth’s Warming,” Twilight responds, this time more immediately.
>Rarity pouts.
>”Well I for one find it rude to be reading when a close friend invites you to tea. Why must you be caught up before the holidays?” Rarity inquires with an impatient tone.
>Twilight turns to the next page before responding.
>”Spike is going to surprise me with the next book in the series for Hearth’s Warming.” She says plainly.
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>>29110093
>Rarity tilts her head in confusion.
>”And how would you know that? Not much of a surprise, is it?”
>Twilight smirks with a short glance towards Rarity.
>”Spike is… not very gifted when it comes to wrapping paper. He did such a poor job I could kiiiiinda make out the title through it.” Twilight says playfully.
>Rarity giggles at the thought of poor Spike trying to wrap presents with such sharp claws.
>With a sigh she takes another sip of her tea and begins to pony watch on the busy street again.
>And people watch, technically.
>The tall Anonymous juxtaposes the much shorter crowd as he towers over pedestrians around him.
>Rarity waits patiently for his inevitable companion. She could almost count the seconds until…
>A small blue Pegasus soars a little ahead of him before settling on the ground and walking next to him.
>Rarity smiles and shakes her head; just as she anticipated.
>It took all of five seconds before Rainbow Dash was with him again.
>It seemed like the whole town was playing the same game as they waved hello and passed by.
>These days one will see them together more often than on their own.
>”It would appear Anonymous and Rainbow Dash are enjoying a Sunday morning at the market,” Rarity says gently
>Twilight chuckles
>”How did Anon get Rainbow up to do something as quaint as that?” she asks, still reading intensely.
>Rarity raises her eyebrows.
>”From what I have heard, they do an assortment of shockingly humble activities together. I simply can NOT believe that our Rainbow Dash will get dressed up for romantic dinners and charming date nights.” Rarity says with a smile.
>Twilight finally looks up from her book with a look of uneasy inquisitiveness.
>”And how would you know all this?”
>Rarity waves off Twilight’s glare.
>”Oh come now, it is just a bit of harmless gossip. Still, Anon has an odd effect on her.”
>Rarity furrows her brow.
>”How long have they been dating now?” she asks.
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This pony a cute
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>>29047999
Can I have pics in LOE outfit please.
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My friend bought this for me for hearth's warming , and made the rainbow lanyard. She was worried that the theme would be too subtle, but I fucking love it.
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>>29110100
>”Two years and counting,” Twilight responds quickly, still occupied.
>Rarity squints her eyes as her tea floats to her lips again.
>”Two years? My my,” She says softly, “They are so close, if I were a certain monkey I would give a certain somepony an anklet by now.”
>Twilight turns another page in her book before looking up at the pair of misfits across the road.
>Anon and Rainbow Dash search through the hand-me-down tents selling old items that are supposedly ‘another mare’s treasure’.
>As Rainbow searches through used clothing, wool hats, and old socks Anon has found something of interest behind a glass case.
>He glances over his shoulder at Dash before speaking with the cashier discretely.
>A small grin grows on Twilight’s face as she starts to realize what is going on.
>He found something she’ll like, and he’s going to surprise her with it. It’s no secret that Anon spoils her with what little he has.
>Funny enough, she never brags about all the things he gets her. If anything she becomes rather bashful.
>Maybe it is time for Anon to get on one knee and give her an anklet…
>”Doesn’t he already have the anklet?” Twilight inquires
>Rarity nods, happy to have Twilight back in the conversation.
>”He got it months ago, and it was an exquisite piece as well. He made sure to get the best his money could buy,” Rarity states proudly.
>Twilight raises an eyebrow at her posh friend.
>Rarity has been guiding Anon in a lot of his romantic endeavors since day one. She almost likes their pairing too much.
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>>29111740
>”I remember when the town was abuzz about it,” Twilight says, looking back to her book, “It shocks me just how quickly gossip travels in this little town of ours. It seems like the only pony who doesn’t know about it is Rainbow Dash herself.”
>Rarity nods lightly.
>”Honestly, that Anonymous should get his rump in gear if he truly intends on proposing to her. If he just sits on it, then it shall never get done!” Rarity says in an alarmed tone.
>Twilight’s eyes scan the pages of her novel at a rapid pace.
>”Well there is nothing we can do it about it. It is up to Anon,” she says flatly.
>One could almost hear the lightbulb glow above Rarity’s head as she suddenly straightens in her chair.
>”Au contraire, mon amie,” Rarity responds with a grin, “I believe I could give him the push he needs!”
>Twilight looks at Rarity from the corner of her eye.
>”Don’t you think that might be a bit too much?” Twilight probes.
>Rarity dismissively waves her hoof.
>”Oh please, it’s simply helping a friend, dear! Is that not what we are supposed to be doing as elements of harmony in the first place?”
>Twilight squints her eyes before letting out a long sigh. She places down her feather bookmark, then carefully closes the book and gets to her feet.
>”I, for one, am far too busy to assist you in this… endeavor,” She says with a graceful smile, “However, I won’t intervene.”
>Twilight packs away her book before looking down the road.
>”I wish you the best of luck, Rarity.” She says with a light giggle.
>Rarity stands confidently.
>”I don’t need luck, darling, when it comes to romance I am second only to Princess Cadance!” she says with incredible gusto.
>Twilight nods in goodbye before trotting away.
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>>29111747
>Rarity’s mind was now alight with fantastic schemes and plans to get the wonder couple together, like a machine processing a particularly lengthy script.
>After a few moments of deep thought, a brilliant, elegant strategy strikes her and brightens her disposition. She trots off to her boutique in preparation.
>Tomorrow will be an wonderfully eventful day!


Sorry I didn't come back for such a long time. I took me mom out to dinner.
Anyway, this is the beginning of a requested green, so enjoy! I'll be sure to post more tomorrow.

Until then, I'm very tired. Goodnight Rainbow Dash thread!
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>>29111740
this made me feel. I want to spoil dashie, i bet the poor little thing hasnt ever had someone special lavish her like that
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>>29111759
>an wonderfully
Shoulda gone to bed sooner. Yeesh
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>>29111791
This. I bet she'd have no idea how to react to it.
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>>29111759
This is a great start, looking forward to see where this goes.
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>>29111759
>Sorry I didn't come back for such a long time
Don't sweat it, man, you came back and that's what matters. This is looking good so far, can't wait for more.
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>>29111759
Now this is unique. Eagerly waiting for more!
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>>29103591
>>29104366
>>29101242
Hmmm, I guess I had no idea anyone still wanted to read it. On the last few updates the response wasn't so good, so I figured it was going on too long.
I'd love to get back to it though.
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>>29113893
YIS. Here, there's your pony
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>>29113893
>the response wasn't so good
Aw, shit, Church. I can't remember if there was any other negative comment, but If this has something to do with that reply to your last update where I called your Anon a dick, I'm really sorry if I fucked up. I really would like to read more of your green. I'm a bit afraid to check the archives to see what I actually wrote, but I wasn't try to say something negative about your writing, on the contrary, I tried to say that it was interesting to see anon being "imperfect". Please don't go away, Church.
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>>29114140
No, it wasn't you at all, I understood what you meant. It was just a combination of stuff like that, lack of replies in general and a personal issue I was going through at the time that kinda got me out of the SoL writing mood. I'm excited to get back to it though now that I know people actually want to read the story, I'll have another update tonight.
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>>29114850
Happy to hear your not stopping the story.
Looking forward to it!
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>>29113920
She looks like she's in the mood for sum fug
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>>29115353
All drunk and roofied up nicely- you bet she is.
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>>29115353
>>29115529
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In case anyone missed it, the current ELAOWF thread is at >>29091279. As usual, I'll steal some of the pics with Dash from there to post them here, but there are some (other) really nice art over there, don't miss it.
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>>29090166
This.

>>29091037
Because she motivates me to make something of my life and she inspires me to write.

>>29111759
This is a really cute idea, can't wait for more.

>>29114850
Thanks for not leaving, your stories are what motivated me to get into writing and I enjoy them.

Continuing horse words.

>You finished the short walk back to your apartment with your mind on what the morning might bring.
>One hand was in your pocket, the other rested on your azure companion.
>You draw in a deep breath of the crisp night air.
>Tomorrow was a pretty big day. You’re about to start a job appointed to you by the princess herself, and the expectations of you were pretty high.
>Apparently being an alien meant you knew things no one else did.
>In any other situation you’d find a way to stress yourself out about it, but right now you can’t bring yourself to worry.
>You look down at your blue partner.
>She’s got her eyes closed and her side is brushing against your swinging leg for balance; your hand on her nape helps guide her hooves.
>A short smile graces her muzzle.
>She looked more tired now than when you left the party, and your fine tuning could tell that she probably wasn’t serious about her earlier jabs.
>She always wanted to present herself to you when she was at her best.
>And despite her cocksure attitude about everything, she had a pretty good idea of when she was on top of her game.
>She knew by now that you didn’t care about any of that, but she was much more of a romantic than she let on and inebriated copulation was not something she’d consider ideal.
>Your legs get out of sync and her lighter one stumbles around your heavier one—forcing her to fall into you.
>Her eyes jolt open and a wing half-extends for balance.
>She looks up with a snort and a guilty smirk, “Watch where you’re walking.”
“You’ve got twice the legs I think it’s your responsibility to look out.”
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>>29117316
>She bumps into your thigh again.
>”No that means I’ve got the right-a-way doofus.”
“I’m pretty sure the rules alway favor the more handicapped individual…doofus.”
>You continue on in silence another few yards and you start to realize how dumb that sounded coming out of your mouth.
>Dash could pull it off fine, but it fell off your tongue like a bad taste.
>”Anon do us both a favor and never say that again.”
“Hahahaha! But I want to be cool like you!”
>She adds a quirked eyebrow to her amused grin before murmuring something that gets lost amidst the gravel crunching under your feet.
“What’s that?”
>”I said you’re cool already!” She practically yells while looking straight ahead.
“I don’t think the entire town cares about that particular—“
>”—Then listen up better…geez, you’re ears r’so small.”
>She thought that her frustrated appearance would act as a distraction from her fuzzy confession, but it only displayed her weakness.
>You reach down and wrap your arms around her torso.
>”Hey!” Her wings shoot out in surprise as you pick her up off her hooves.
>It wasn’t easy to do, but you manage to shoulder the flailing pegasus.
>”Anon what are you doing!”
“I’m carrying you the rest of the way back.”
>”Why!”
“Because I love you and I want to.”
>”B-but we’re outside! What if some p-pony sees us they’ll—“
“—They’ll think about how cute you look all asleep in my arms.”
>Her voice returns as a rushed whisper this time and she feebly tries to push off your chest.
>”B-but what about…what if they take a picture or something and-and—“
“Dash, no one’s ever out at this hour and if any one shows up then I can just set you down.”
>”But—“
“—And I doubt the contemporary photography capabilities can resolve low lux settings.”
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>>29117323
>She finally stops struggling.
>”P-promise?”
>You give her a reassuring shoulder scratch.
“I promise.”
>She hovers in indecisiveness for a moment before wrapping her furry fore hooves around your neck.
>”Mkay but I’m not going to sleep.”
>The mare clutches her hind hooves around your waist which takes most of her weight, your hands below her wings lock her in place against you.
>She murmurs something incomprehensible as she tucks her muzzle into your neck.
>You can’t help but smile as her familiar scent and flicking ear tickles your face.
>She can’t deny that she absolutely loved it when you did this.
>Even when you were just friends she had a weird affinity for piggy back rides once she realized how high up it got her.
>You found some humor in the irony so you were all too happy to oblige.
>It kept her wings rested and it kept you in shape.
>Of course it always occurred in moderation and never in a public venue, but breaking the mold was fun sometimes.
>She was honestly a bit too big to hold like this, but it wasn’t far to your apartment so you figured you’d make it.
>You get no more complaints from your passenger as you navigate the darker ally’s to your home.
>By the time you find your door, her form is limp against you and you could feel a bit of drool on your back from where her muzzle hung.
>She might not be completely asleep, but her hind legs weren’t supporting her weight anymore.
>You unlock the door quickly and flip on the light as you stumble inside.
>The disturbance jostles your partner, and you let her down to her hooves.
>She avoids eye contact and immediately trots down the hall to get cleaned up—probably to avoid admitting the obvious.
>You change into your nightclothes, set your alarm, and pack your bag for the morning.
>When you finish, you trade places with Dash and find your toothbrush in the drawer next to hers.
>You begin your routine and take a moment to soak up your surroundings.
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>>29117329
>Rainbow was a very low maintenance pony.
>The only things she’d added to your bathroom clutter was a multipurpose body/mane wash, feather conditioner, deodorant, and hoof file…and her toothbrush.
>She shared her toothpaste, mouthwash and comb with you.
>You finish up and rinse off your brush before putting it back in the drawer next to hers.
>To the best of your knowledge she’d never picked anything up from her house, all of this was stuff she’d stowed here months ago when she realized how much time she spent with you.
>Wait, when was the last time she went to her house?
>You walk out to find her curled up in a ball on the bed, her nose buried in your pillow.
>She jerks her head up the moment she sees you and tries to cover up by pretending to adjust the pillow with her muzzle.
>You keep the little nugget to yourself and pretend not to notice.
“Dash I was just thinking, don’t you need to anchor your house down or something?”
>She turns to you with a slight blush, ”A-anchor it?”
“Yeah a while ago while ago you told me about how the winds would pick up and you’d lose clouds.”
>”Heh that usually only happens over the Everfree where all the chaos is and stuff.”
>Oh of course.
>She pulls up the blankets for you and scoots over.
>She’d laid on your side to warm it up for you, how thoughtful.
>Before you have a chance to get comfortable she moves to intrude on your personal space.
>You still find it amusing how the very thing she avoided in public was the exact thing she craved in private.
>You finagle for a bit and realize that Dash was going for something different this time.
>Intrigued by her intentions, you silently let her have her way.
>She gets higher up on you so she can hook her muzzle over the top of your head, her fore hooves hold your neck and her hind leg lays across your hip. Almost reverse of what you usually did with her.
>Interesting.
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>>29117333
>You reach out and flick the lamp off before getting comfortable with the new dynamic.
>You still had full access to pretty much anywhere she needed a scratch, but for the first time, she was actually able to return the favor.
>The hard edge of her fore gently traces your neck and back smoothing out any tension you had there.
>You press the side of your face into her breast fluff and your arms hook under her wings; she extends one to lay across your bare side.
>A new realization slowly dawned on you, as does a stupid grin.
>This was ridiculously cozy.
>You were surrounded by a cushion of Dash.
>Her heartbeat was as obvious as her breathing and you could feel hot air from her nostrils part your hair.
“This is nice.”
>She giggles a bit.
>”Good cuz I’m not moving.”
>You’ve got no quarrel with that.
>You reach up and gently run your fingers through her oily feathers.
>You moved slowly and deliberately so as not to arouse her, she’d commented before on how soothing it was and you hoped you could return some of her comfort.
“So I guess you’re uh…living here now?”
>She pauses her back rubs.
>”Well you can’t walk on clouds so…yeah.”
>She never even considered living separately from you.
>You’d always heard how clingy partners were annoying, but it was exactly the opposite.
“I should be able to get a better place once I start getting a steady paycheck.”
>”Why?”
“Why?”
>”Yeah, this is pretty coz-uhh…nice dontcha think?”
>You weren’t sure what she was getting at.
“It’s cozy sure, but I can’t have my Wonderbolt come home to a hole in the wall on a back street now can I?”
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>>29117338
>She stays silent for a moment while you work your fingers past her feathers down to the bare skin of her wings.
>”I don’t care as long as you keep buying those chocolate chip granola bars,” She replies earnestly.
>She pulls her head back a bit to bury her muzzle in your hair.
“Heh, well I do…and it’s not like I’m going to save up for a Corvette or anything. Might as well spend my money on something we can both benefit from.”
>You can feel her nose twitch as she takes in your scent.
“Dash.”
>She stops what she’s doing and lets out a short snort to clear her head.
>”S-Sorry!”
>Dating an alien had drawn undue attention to her little quirk.
>And that’s just it, it wasn’t a quirk at all, not to her at least.
>You’d made her uncomfortable about her own instinctive habits and it was about time to make it up to her.
“You know I would’ve given you my shirt if you’d asked for it.”
>You swear you can feel her neck start to sweat when she realizes you weren’t ribbing on her for playing with your hair.
>She audibly swallows and tries to forget about it, but the new topic didn’t give much respite.
>”Uhh…I’m, I was going to give it back, it’s sitting in my saddlebags right now and—“
“—Dash it’s fine. It’s just that humans don’t use our noses like you do.”
>”Heh, y-yeah I kinda figured.”
“But for the record I think you smell nice too.”
>You could hear her heart murmur a bit and her voice returns with vigor.
>”R-really?”
“Yeah it’s a little spicy. Pretty unique if you ask me.”
>She just lays there and soaks up your comment.
>If you’d told her outright you were okay with her little addiction then she’d still be hesitant, but you hoped to ease some of her self-consciousness by relating to her.
>And you definitely could relate.
>You make a point of comically wiggling your nose into her exposed leg pit.
>”Heheh-ahahaha! Sta-hahap!”
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>>29117345
>It wasn’t so much the scent itself that was comforting, but rather the knowledge of the mare it belonged to.
>The best way to describe it is that it just made you feel closer to her.
>You stop tickling and her laughter subsides.
>You know your mission is accomplished when she finally buries her muzzle in your hair again.
>“Anon…” She sighs.
>You could practically hear the smile on her face.
“Hmm?”
>”I like you a lot.”
>Her scratchy voice wormed its way into your heart.
“I say the same thing to myself in the mirror every morning.”
>Hot chuckling sends your hair sprawling across the pillow, and her belly racks with humor.
“But yeah I think I’ll keep you.”
>”Heheh, you better.”
>Whatever tomorrow may bring, you can rest easy knowing it can’t bring you down.

Well that fills my Dash cuddle quota for a bit. Should update again soon, sorry it took so long.
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I want to play on this pony's hoofball team and then have celebratory sweaty anal sex in the endzone after we score. in front of everybody
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>What?
>Every thought in your mind suddenly froze, all hanging around his words.
"What do you mean?"
>Anon's expression changes slightly as he leans over the table, staring at you with a tinge of worry.
>"I said, it's not like you're keeping the foal anyways, right? I can't imagine the great Rainbow Dash letting herself be slowed down by a thing like pregnancy."
>You stared at him in complete silence, unable to form any words.
>Any words you might try to say had sunk into the pit in your stomach, rendering you speechless.
>Anon still looked confused as ever, the expression of worry growing across his face.
>Without voicing any thoughts you wordlessly stand from your chair and walk into the living room, out of Anon's sight.
>You can hear scrambling in the kitchen as Anon stands from the table to follow you.
>"Dash? Dash, what's wrong?"
>Still in complete shock, you wander over to the couch, pausing directly in front of it.
>Anon reaches his hand down to your shoulder, not noticing the large tears welling up in your eyes as he tries to merit some response.
>Out of no where, a burning feeling rises in your chest while your mind suddenly explodes with thought, prompting action.
>You wrap your hooves around the couch cushion right in front of you, easily sliding it from its spot and taking to the air.
>"Dash, what'r-"
>You lob the cushion at Anon, catching him off guard as the pillow collides with his chest.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU!"
>A firm look of terror crosses Anon's face as he begins to realize his mistake.
"AFTER ALL THIS, YOU DON'T EVEN WANT A FOAL!?!"
>You quickly grab another cushion, aiming for his head with a much harder throw.
>Anon quickly dips his head, covering his face with an arm.
>"Wait, you actually want a foal?"
"OF COURSE I WANT A FOAL, SEEING AS IT'S YOURS, YOU BIG JERK!"
>Anon stands up ridgedly straight, allowing you to peg him right in the side of the head with the last cushion you could get your hooves on.
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>"Y-You actually want to keep it?"
"I just said I did!"
>Anon turns back to you, a look of indignation replacing his worried expression
>"Well why are you mad at me?! You never even asked me if I wanted this!"
"You had all this time to say you didn't, but most stallions enjoy the concept of having a foal with the mare they love!"
>"Well I'm obviously not most stallions!"
>Your brain was going completely on auto pilot now, you felt like you could barely make words any more.
>How could he?
>You were actually excited about this foal, excited about having this foal with him.
>You could barely breathe with this pain in your chest, you felt like your heart was about to burst.
>Anon lets out a loud sigh, plopping down on one of your fallen projectiles and planting his head in his hand.
>"I didn't know you wanted to keep it, Dash."
"I didn't know you didn't want a foal with me."
>Anon gives you an exasperated look, sitting up straight.
>"Don't say it like that, you make it sound like I don't love you or something."
"Oh, of course not. You just love being a prick."
>The tears we freely streaming down your face, much quicker than you could wipe them away.
>Lowering yourself into a landing, you plant four hooves on the floor and angrily stomp over to the staircase.
>"Wait Dash, we have to talk about this."
"There's nothing to talk about! I've got this... "thing" inside me now and you don't even want it! I can't believe you would do this to me!"
>"Dash, just calm down. We can fig-"
"CALM DOWN?!"
>Anon flinches, lowering his gaze.
>You're too frustrated to even make words, so you storm up the stairs, muttering under your breath.
>You feel slightly heavier as you ascend the staircase, but you're sure that's just your mind playing tricks on you.
>As soon as you reach the top you barrel into the bathroom, slamming the door behind you.
>You plop down on the cold tile floor, curling yourself into a small ball and leaning against the door.
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>>29118272
>The tears had mostly stopped flowing, but you still couldn't stop sniffling.
>You felt like someone had come along and punched a huge hole on your chest.
>You trusted him with this, you decided you wanted to be a mother with him, and he didn't want any of it.
>What were you going to do now?
>You can't keep the both of them, but you can't part with either of them.
>Your rainbow mane droops over your face, stringy and wry from you jostling it so much in your rage.
>You lay there for what seemed like hours before your ears suddenly perked up, the familiar sounds of footsteps trodding up the stairs.
>They pause for a moment at the very top before turning down the hall, to the door you were laying just beyond.
>They come to a sudden stop right on the other side of the door way, a soft thud against the door accompanying their pause.
>Anon slides his back down the length of the door, taking a seat on the floor on the other side of the thin wooden frame.
>Another light thud can be heard, Anon's head resting against the door.
>The two of you just sit for a moment, neither one daring to speak a single word.
>You had lost track of whatever time had passed by the time Anon spoke up.
>"Dash?"
"What."
>"Remember that day when we first met?"
>You sniffed, nodding slowly.
>"And you called me a weird monkey, so I called you a dumb horse?"
>A faint smile crossed your face as you recalled the memory.
>"Then you challenged me to a fight, and I accepted almost immediately because I thought for sure I could take down some tiny little pony?"
>You couldn't help but giggle, raising both hooves to your mouth.
>"You know, that was the first time I've ever been lifted into the air by something smaller than I am."
"You were so sure of yourself too..."
>"Yeah, I was positive I could beat you."
>Anon falls quiet, a long moment of silence passing before he starts up again.
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>>29118278
>"Dash, I'm always going to love you. I know you already know that, but it doesn't hurt to remind you. I'm sorry I hurt your feelings, but I didn't know you felt this way."
"What am I supposed to do now, Anon? I don't know where I'm supposed to go."
>Anon sighs, standing up from the floor slowly.
>"I don't know either Dash, but I do know that wherever you go, I'll be there too. I'll always be there with you no matter what choice you make. You can't get rid of me that easily."
>You giggle again, wiping your nose on your foreleg and standing up off the floor, peeling open the bathroom door.
>Anon is waiting on the other side, kneeling down to your face, his deep, caring eyes staring into your own.
>A rush of calm passes over you as he runs his hand along your muzzle, flashing you that winning smile of his.
>You lift both forelegs up on his shoulders, leaning into him.
>"I love you Dash."
"I kinda love you too, dork."
>You lean forward, planting a thick kiss on his lips.
>His warmth soothes your panic for the time being, making you forget the events of that morning.
>Anon reaches behind you, scooping up your back legs and lifting you into the air, holding you tight against his chest.
"Hey! You know how much I hate it when you do that!"
>"You can't lie to me, Dash!"
>You squirm around in his arms to no avail, not that you were really trying anyways.
>Anon carries you down the steps, cradling you in his arms.
>Of course he knew how much you liked it when he did this, but he was smart enough by now not to say anything, at least if he didn't want to get slugged.
>Anon stumbles into the living room from the stairs, carrying you over to the couch.
>He pops down on it, landing right on the cloth-covered springs, grunting as you land on his rib cage.
>"Geez Dash, what did you eat for breakfast? Bricks?"
"Maybe you're just getting weak! You haven't been to the gym with me in a while."
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>>29118288
>"The last time I went we had to call the ambulance after you made me pull something in my back."
"Pfft, pansy."
>The two of you laid there for a while, enjoying each other's company.
>Anon idly stroked your mane, and you nuzzle against his chest every so often.
>"You know, it's been a while since we've been down to that bar too. I kinda miss it, it's nostalgic."
"Oh yeah, the Watering Hole. That's practically where you lived for the first month or two of you being here."
>"Don't act all high and mighty Dashie, thats where I first got your know you. You were in there everyday too.
"Yeah, but I was only there for the nachos."
>"I haven't had a chance to visit for quite some time now, I've been snowed in for a while. We should go sometime soon."
"I don't think I'll be going near that place for a while."
>"Why?"
"Because of the foal, duh."
>"Oh, right."
"........."
"You totally forgot, didn't you?"
>"No! I just wasn't thinking about that!"
>You sit up from on his chest, glaring down at him.
"You're still totally sure I'm going to get rid of this foal, aren't you?"
>Anon shrugs, sitting up.
>"I didn't say that at all. I'm just...."
"Just what?"
>"I dunno. I'm just having a hard time imagining us with a foal. I still can't believe you want to do this, it's so unlike you."
"I can't believe you. After all that, you can't let up for even a moment? I still don't know what I'm going to do with it, but I'll make that decision by myself!"
>You flutter off his chest, making a bee-line for the door as the sting of tears poured down your face again.
>"Dash, wait!"
>You threw open the door, floating out into the snow swept terrain.
>Anon rushed after you, running out into the snow.
>"Dash, slow down. Let's ju-"
"No! You can sit here and second guess this all you want. I can make this decision myself. I can't believe I trusted you with this."
>Anon looks visibly saddened, and you feel a pang of regret as you trudge onwards.
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>>29118294
>He tries to follow you, but you bolt up off into the sky, leaving him far behind in the snow.
>You had no idea what to do now, but the only thing you could think of was to go see your friends, maybe they could help you.
>You turned towards town and let the wind carry you there.
Fin.

Feels good to be writing this thing again, feels like I'm where I should be.
>>29117406
The idea that I helped inspire something like this is the coolest thing ever.
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>>29118301
Aww this is great church!
Welcome back
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>>29087386
I'd fuck it/10
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>>29117987
>have celebratory sweaty anal sex
muh nigga
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>>29118301
>Fin.
wait what?
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>>29117406
That was adorable. And the last scene was so comfy, I loved it, mobius.
Kinda unrelated, but thanks to this green I've discovered something funny about my language. In Spain when we give a piggy back ride to someone, we call it "llevar a caballito". I had never thought about it before, but since words have different meanings, that sentence could also mean (roughly) "to carry a little horse". Now I really want to give Rainbow Dash a piggy back ride.

>>29118301
Great to read you again, Church. Looking forward to more!

-- --

By the way, HAPPY HEARTH'S WARMING, /dash/!
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>>29117987
That face.
>Told ya your stick was going to get muddy Anon.
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>>29117406
It's so fucking cute, I love your writing.
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>>29120253
Is it weird if I'm ok with this?
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Are you listening to the best Christmas song today?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_yiRSRr3-M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MuPKt9OPHiU
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>>29119487
I was about to report this, because it looked clearly NSFW, but then I noticed they censored out RD's nostrils, so it's only lewd. Pretty close call though.
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Happy almost Hearth's Warming, /dash/ lads! (depending on your time zone) May your holiday be filled with best pone
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I'll be posting something special for my O'hana tomorrow evening... so be here!

Until then, be with those who make you happiest /dash/, and enjoy the holiday!
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Happy Holidays!
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>>29118301
This is making me feel.

>>29119889
That's a really cool coincidince. I'm glad you liked it and it's really neat to know that I've got a Spanish reader!

>>29120347
Thanks!

Happy Hearths Warming Everyone!
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Raridashdoodles (or someone who draws exactly like Raridashdoodles) is taking requests in >>29125295. Reposting here the drawing I got, I love it.
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Merry Christmas, /dash/

Thank you, Church. You want me to post what you wrote? : 3
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>page 10
Oh boy the board is too fast today.
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This hairsyle is cute
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>>29127208
Snowdash a cute.
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Did anyone gift/receive anything best pone related for this wonderful holiday?
i didn't ;_;
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>>29128736
That's adorable
She's so fluffy
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bamp
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Nightly RD thread:
>>29130449
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>>29130815
you must be new if you think linking that here is a good idea
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>>29125743
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>>29130815
no.
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>>29127761
I did. Kinda. I got a cheap Chinese knock-off of best filly for my cheap Chinese knock-off of best pony, so she won't be alone when I'm away.
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>>29131523
I want to shower her in gifts
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>>29133114
I want to cum inside Rainbow Dash.
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>>29134076
pony kisses are kinda hot
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A wash of seven colored light
A blast of shattering sound
Our pony hero, fast and bright
Soars far above the ground

Let others have their waifus, drab
With all inferior hue
We worship for her rainbow mane
And coat of softest blue

We are the truest of them all
We priests of Rainbow Dash
And never shall we trip or fall
Like those who worship trash
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Rainbow dash is sonic the hedgehog of mlp.
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>>29136730
leave now

>>29136646
This was really cute and I would've framed it if it didn't have the cringy references
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>>29136646
That's so cute Anon, but (forgive my autism) some of those other waifus are Rainbow's best friends, I hope you're not calling them "trash", she wouldn't like that. Oh god, that sounded even more autistic written than in my head.
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Made a Lyra -> RD edit
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>>29138994
Hawt. It looks like a prequel to https://derpibooru.org/853428.
Saved.
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>>29134064
I want to bite Rainbow Dash's tail.
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>>29139333
>Hawt
R-right back at ya'
Got any more like it?
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>>29138994
Another one.
If anyone's got one they want colorized, send it my way.
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>>29139936
>Got any more like it?
Well, that's kinda vague, I do have a lot of Rainbow porn. Here are a few of my faves by the same artist, MostazaThy:
https://derpibooru.org/832657
https://derpibooru.org/454698
https://derpibooru.org/853250
https://derpibooru.org/975566
https://derpibooru.org/916726

If you haven't already, learn to use Derpibooru. Once you have used it a few times you can find pretty much anything you want in no time.
Quick guide in case you have never used it:
Click on "Filters (Default)" and select "Everything", or "18+ R34". To see more pics by this same artist, enter the following in the search field
rd, artist:mostazathy
You can add other tags using commas, like
rd, artist:mostazathy, explicit
For example, my default search for porn is
rd,explicit,-anthro,-humanized,-eqg,-gore,-grimdark
You can also sort the results by score to see the most popular images first, etcetera. Give it a try.
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>>29140171
Anon with hair looks really freakin weird. Should've colored him tan or something so he looks like a bland self insertable anime character. Still a good colorization otherwise.
>>29140291
>MostazaThy
Fuck, this guy's art is so cute and comfy. Kinda sucks that he draws human vaginas on ponies tho
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>>29140291
Ty x 1000
I have been a nor/mlp/eople for 4+ years at this point, but i've never learned how to use derpibooru properly, untill now.
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>>29140339
Alright, just a sec.
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>>29140677
>>29140339
Something along these lines?
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>>29140339
Yeah, I'm not much of a fan of the way he drew genitals, but his expressions and his poses were so great that it still was one of my favorite artists. Not to mention that his SWF was absolutely adorable. I miss him, too bad he stopped drawing.

>>29140355
Why, I'm glad I could help. My pleasure, Anon.

>>29140677
>>29140685
It's nice to see these colored. And fwiw, unf2.1 looks definitely better than unf2.
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>>29140171
Do me next
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>>29141388
And this one (If you do re-color)
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>>29140171
http://imgur.com/a/FonUI
I-if you're up for it
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>>29141683
I second this
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>>29136646
>>29137469
It was more of a fun poke at us than anything serious. I just thought of a pseudo religion of Dash lovers proselytizing and felt like writing a poem.
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>>29141683
please god yes
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>>29143085
>anthro
>no hooves
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Someone's spamming the nightly thread with lyrics from metal gear
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>>29143442
>nightly thread
That's been happening for a while and nothing of value was lost.
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>>29143442
Someone's improving the nightly thread with lyrics from metal gear
FTFY
Besides it's hardly spam when the thread itself is spam and cancerous on top of that. You're obviously new so take a lesson from the rest of the Dashfags, report and ignore the nightly threads that's the only action to take.
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>>29143337
Not really anthro, but it is appalling.
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>>29140171
Why is Trump's skin green tho?
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>>29144180
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>>29141567
I'm the other colorist in the thread, I've hijacked this request to give it a try. The edges between the different colors on the mane and the tail look much fuzzier than I'd like, but this already took me way longer than my usual colorings, so I'm posting it as it is anyway.
BTW, MadHotaru is on the DNP list of Derpibooru, so this edit is exclusive to /mlp/. Or exclusive to /dash/, I'm not posting it anywhere else.

>>29142877
Good to know it wasn't completely serious. But again, except for the demeaning ending toward others, I think it was pretty cute.
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>>29144446
Oh.. WOW... Me Likey. Me likely alot.
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>>29144446
How about this one? Please? Would make my day.
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>>29144446
>Off-by-two kenobi
u tuk my gerb!
But it will make a fine addition to my collection. You also did i better job than i probably would have.

>>29144604
I tend not to color raw scetches like these, it's hard as fuck to get the edges right. And if i do, i have to make a more refined verision first. It's a bigger job than it sounds.

>>29141388
WIll do this one tonight.

>>29141683
I'm playing with the thought of doing this. Though it will take a while. 1-2 pages/day at max.
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>>29144604
Welp. The other Anon is right, coloring this kind of sketches is unexpectedly difficult. I tried to use my habitual system, and it was nearly impossible, so I looked at some other sketches by this artist, like
https://derpibooru.org/950662
https://derpibooru.org/976103
and they use a different technique, namely a rough coloring that doesn't follow the edges. I never tried it before, and the fact that I couldn't figure the exact shape of the dress and the veil makes it even worse, so the best I could do looks kinda awful, but here it is.

>>29144724
Hey, if you're coloring the comic, the link in >>29101331 is the same comic with a slightly larger resolution (1500px width instead of 1200px). That's an awful lot of work, you have all my moral support, Anon.
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This artist reminds me a lot of CaptainPudgeMuffin.
Not that I'm complaining.
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>>29146345
He does make pretty good art, but it kinda sucks how most of his stuff tends to be shipshit.
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>>29146354
Do you prefer non-romantic images or solo?
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>>29145130
I think its amazing. Thank you so much.
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>>29146390
Both are good
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Apparently this could be a season 7 episode.
"The Treasure of Donkeyville. In this book Rainbow Dash sets out searching for a treasure to the legendary Donkeyville."
I'm not sure what to expect. The summary looks pretty similar to the Griffonstone episode, except this looks more like a solo episode. Not gonna lie, I would love to see an episode where Dash is the hero for once. I mean, she has already been the hero before, but after this fucking season, she really deserves a more positive episode again. Fingers crossed.

>>29146390
I like both non-romantic and solo and shipshit too, specially TwiDash, sue me.

>>29146407
I wasn't really sure about it, I'm glad you liked it.
>>29146446
This is going to be difficult too. I'll give it a try tomorrow-ish. Maybe.
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Continuing >>29117406

>You get jostled out of your dream as one side of your cushion moves.
>A short reality check reminds you that you set your alarm for work and until you hear it, you don’t have to move an inch.
>Something rustles in the background before your warm blanket returns to hold you.
>Luckily whatever interrupted was short lived, getting a full night’s sleep was crucial to—
*lick
>Something warm and wet drags across your forehead.
*lick
>It happens again, but slower this time. Whatever it was intended to wake you up.
>A boost of unwelcome consciousness allows you to remember your bedmate and you put two and two together.
“…Huh?”
*lick
>The assaulting tongue slicked up a tuft of hair.
>You reach up to confront your wake up call but your arm is trapped under a blue wing.
>It wasn’t heavy, but you quickly decide that it wasn’t worth disturbing its deliberate placement just to satisfy your curiosity.
>Dash licks you again, this time across your temple.
“Rainbow?” You croak.
>”Hmmm?”
>Her response is more passive than receptive.
>Your cracked eyelids can’t make out much besides the longer hair of her chest tuft a few inches off your nose.
>Unfortunately you could also make out that it was dawn—meaning your alarm was closer to sounding than you’d hoped.
>The grogginess in your head is taking much longer to clear than you’re used to.
>Must’ve woken up in the middle of a REM cycle.
“What time is it?”
>”We’ve got a few more minutes…” She whispers, her mind focused on the present.
>You take a deep breath and relax back into your mare’s furry embrace.
>”I turned the alarm off early…I thought I’d wake you up instead.”
>She woke up before the alarm went off?
“I like this alarm better.”
>“Heheh…”
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>>29147230
>You spread your fingers through the hot fur under her wings and her tail swishes in response.
>Her tongue grazes the corner of your eye and forces you to close it.
>You weren’t going to inquire about the purpose of her new hobby lest you make her self-conscious again.
>But you really ought to pick up a romance novel or something that would shed some insight into these things she did.
>Your fingers trace the faint outline of her ribs and her progress continues unfazed.
>She gets to the tip of your nose and you nuzzle back into her fuzzy lips.
>She pulls back at the disturbance and you tilt your head to look her in the eye.
“Good morning love.”
>You look past your own reflection in her dilated pupils and wait for a blush to blossom on her cheeks.
>It doesn’t take long.
>A very faint grin appears and her ears splay back.
“I didn’t say you had to stop…”
>You feel her heartbeat speed up as your intentions sync.
>She leans in a bit but hesitates; you cover the distance and peck her lips.
>The opener returns her confidence and her slender tongue rolls out to tenderly meet your mouth.
>You remind her that she’s always welcome by returning the favor—wetting the fine hairs of her maw.
>Your noses press against each other and you share your air as you alternate your affectionate gestures.
>There’s no sense of urgency, the knowledge that either one of you could intensify it if they desired made you content to savor the gentle pace.
>Your morning breaths go unnoticed as you focus on the tastes and textures you’d come to know so well.
>A dozen rounds made your lips tingly and her acute attention begins to tickle.
>Like two different turn signals at a red light—you slowly shift out of your alternating sequence and find yourselves swiping your tongues against each other.
>Something about kissing, particularly Dash’s style of kissing, just felt incredibly intimate.
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>>29147247
>It was a different kind of intimate that wasn’t inherently sexual.
>A middle ground between the two ends of emotional expression.
>The blatantly direct approach of sampling each other, and the unspoken comfort level it revealed was very gratifying.
>The second hand on your wall clock could be heard faintly amidst the sounds of wet embrace as your hazy minds got their fill.
>You continue for a solid minute, the incredible enjoyment never waning.
>But duty calls and unfortunately no one ever conquered the world by making out.
>You stop meeting Dash’s tongue with yours and she concludes with a more conventional kiss.
>You open your eyes and study your partner.
>The telltale matted fur around her muzzle was evidence of the action that her eyes craved more of.
>You’d love to lay here all day with her, but that was something you needed to earn.
“I’ve got to get up now.”
>She shows no intention of moving, and with how tangled up you were you needed a little cooperation.
>”You could just find another job you know.”
>She sounds so serious that you have to hold her gaze for a few seconds to tell she’s kidding.
“Heh, it took a while to find this one so I think I’d better show up.”
>You glance at the clock and notice that you were still one minute ahead of schedule.
>You start to slide away from her but her wing and fore hoof tighten their grip.
>”What if I don’t want you to?”
>You smile at your captor.
“You know you’ve got somewhere to be too right?”
>”You know I can get there in in about two minutes right?” She rebuts.
“Yeah but I can’t,” You grab her hoof from your shoulder and hold it in front of you “that’s why I set the alarm.”
>Her cocky smirk grows and she blows some of her messy mane off of her muzzle.
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>>29147260
>”I could just fly you there—“
“Dash.”
>”That’d give us like…another thirty minutes.”
“I don’t think that’s realistic.”
>Her train of thought comes to a halt and she narrows her eyes at you.
“I-I mean I’m not doubting your abilities, but I’m like twice your weight and…”
>Her nose leans in until it bumps against yours, her menacing look told you to choose your words carefully.
”…and besides, I already bought train tickets.”
>Her look doesn’t abate.
>You try to think of something else to say, but nothing comes to mind.
>Why work smarter when you can work harder?
>A quick peck on her nose momentarily stuns her so your tickling hands can take her by surprise.
>”Ahahahaha! That’s no-ot fair you can-hahaha!”
>She tries to push away from you but her forelegs aren’t doing what she wants them to.
>These ponies had no effective counter for hands, it took an experienced unicorn to even come close to replicating your dexterity and efficiency.
>You were going to make sure Dash knew exactly where she sat on the food chain…metaphorically of course.
>”Haha A-Anon! Ahahahahaha!”
>Your wiggling fingers stop their torture and your palms come to rest in her damp leg pits effectively pinning her to the bed.
>She stops her flailing in turn and grins playfully back—a spark of retribution in her eye.
“Are you going to let me go now?”
>She no longer had any leverage on you, but you were willing to humor her.
>It was the least you could do after your pleasant wake up call.
>She ponders the question for a moment.
>”Only if you let me take you to dinner tonight.”
>She powers through the sappy comment with pure confidence; her inevitable blush a mere afterthought.
“Deal.”
>A mare of her word, she lets you go.
>You slide out from under her appendages and she rocks to her hooves.
>You look at the clock: one minute behind schedule, you can manage that.
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>>29147275
>Your morning routine passes quickly—your mind on more pertinent matters.
>”Anon where’s my flight suit?” A scratchy voice interrupts your Windsor knot.
“Should be hanging next to the washer.”
>She never asked you to wash it, but you liked to help out.
>You finish up and check your breath before heading out to grab your things.
>All of your items pile into one backpack.
>It didn’t really match the suit you were wearing, but it was all you had.
>”Whoa! Dude where’d ya get that?”
>You look over to see Dash trotting your way with her uniform draped over her back.
“Rarity made it for me on credit a while back once I found out I got a job.”
>She tosses her clothing in her saddlebags while her eyes unabashedly look you over.
>”It’s uhh…you look good…”
“My eyes are up here Dash.”
>Her eyes snap up to meet yours before she looks away.
>”Don’t g-get ahead of yourself you don’t look that good.”
“Really? I must be if I managed to snag you.”
>She’s a bit taken aback at the unexpected compliment and her ears finally give in and fold.
>You ruffle her mane and shoulder your backpack.
“I better get going now, but I’ll be looking forward to dinner tonight.”
>She finally finds her voice.
>”Y-Yeah, how about seven?”
>You do some quick mental math.
“Seven should work for me, do I need to bring a date?”
>She hits your leg and tries to glare.
>”Get outta here before you miss your train dummy!”
“Alright, alright, no dates then. We’ll just awkwardly stare at each other while—“
>”Anon!”
“Yep leaving now.”
>You open your front door and adjust your tie in the doorway.
>Dash watches you with mock annoyance.
“I’m headed out.”
>She just stands there, waiting.
>You make direct eye contact and take another half step.
“I’m leaving, like for the whole day.”
>”Yeah.”
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>>29147287
>You rest your hand on the doorknob.
>She closes some of the distance, anticipating your departure amidst the awkwardness.
>You stare at her.
“I think I might be missing something.”
>”What?” She looks around the floor to see if you’ve dropped something.
“Oh there it is.”
>You lean down and reach over her back.
>She looks back to where your hand was reaching and sees nothing.
>She twists around in confusion and her momentum completes your calculation.
*smooch
>Her lips mash against yours in a surprise kiss and she takes it in stride.
>You pull off each other with a satisfying pop.
>Magenta eyes cross to focus on your smile, her confusion still evident.
“Found it.”
>”Aw for cryin out loud! You shoulda just said that to begin with!”
>You make your escape through the door as Dash’s yelling transitions to laughter.
>You start your short walk to the train station, the tingling on your lips topped off the well of happiness in your chest.
>You were going to go invent a damn toaster.

Fin for now. Comments, criticisms, complaints appreciated.
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>>29147338
Cosy and sweet
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>>29147338
fuck my heart man. you write the best snuggles and non-lewd intimacy I've ever seen.
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>>29146446
Not the colorfag that's been here, but here's my first attempt at coloring using my tablet that I haven't touched in about a month. Tried to keep the coloring job kind of messy, so that it would look similar to the messy and jagged line work.

You guys might want to go ahead and save it if you like it, this might be a /dash/ exclusive. I might upload it to my derpibooru thing but idk
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>>29134076
Got any more like that?
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>>29146902

If you're going to pair Dash with anyone, it better be Twilight.
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>>29147338
That's really great and feels really warm and fuzzy. Keep it up
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>>29148981
>dyke shipping
>shipping
Nah
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>>29148981
This.
Twidash a best
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>>29148657
I actually really like the tone of the color you chose here. It's nice and comfy.
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>>29149111
This. All shipping is garbage, especially AnonDash.
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>>29147338
Absolutely adorable, mobius. Rainbow Dash is best alarm. I loved it/10.

>>29148657
>the colorfag
Actually, there were 2 of us posting ITT. But the more the better. This looks pretty good to me, I wouldn't have done line cleaning, so this is probably much better than what I was going to do.

>>29148664
Not that I recall. Not by the same artist, at least. Stoic5 drew some great pics, both SFW and NSFW, but nothing else really similar to this.
This pic was originally a bat pony
https://derpibooru.org/1304712
There's this other pic that looks from the same set
https://derpibooru.org/1304449
but it feels quite different. Judging by the filename in the source, both are old pics, and only recently they've been posted to Derpi, so maybe there are a few more pics hidden in the archives.
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If the gods allow it?
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>>29147338
>Fin for now
was good man, I hope you do more, but I'll be happy if you do decide to leave it here
Overall the story was great, the progression to the relationship, and then how the relationship itself developed were well paced
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>>29150844
Me x My Waifu is the only acceptable ship.
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How about a ntfw pic to color?

https://derpibooru.org/1327042?scope=scpedc9baa83c4a29465087ddf899221bd1b38b4d23a
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>>29151676
Funny story (not really), I almost skip this request. Not that I have anything against Fluttershy, but I don't dig the idea of sleeping with her. Then I realized that there's nothing sexual strongly implied here, and as a cute-only-and-totally-non-lewd image it's really nice, so here's your delivery.

>>29152919
And done too:
https://derpibooru.org/1327927
Feel free to ask for nsfw, but I'm a bit picky so even though I've just done a bondage pic, I'll probably turn down a lot of requests.

This is it for today.
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VOTE VOTE VOTE >>29153368
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>>29153227
Thx alot
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does anyone else really wanna nibble on her cute little ears? theyre so underloved, those fuzzy little radar dishes need love too!
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>>29156494
totally
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boop
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>>29118301
"GODDAMN IT DASH!! COME BACK!"
>The shout echos out of your cupped hands to no avail, the rainbow mare is long gone.
>Throwing your hands to the sky in frustration, you turn back to the house, the bitter winter wind painfully reminding you of your lack of winter attire.
>"Damn it Anon! What the fuck were you thinking?"
>You bitterly trudge through the snow, a scowl firmly affixed to your face as the cold bites at your skin.
>"What was I supposed to do? I couldn't lie to her, have some child I don't even know if I want or if I'm ready for!"
>A snow-filled breeze brushes over your face as you finally near the lone house.
>Your feet easily find the worn wooden staircase leading up to the door way, each wooden board creaking beneath your heavy footfalls as you traverse the steps.
>The door flies open with a slight tug, aided by the harsh winds blowing past you.
>As you step into the house, you can't help but notice that the entire room somehow seems darker than it was just moments ago.
>Like there's something missing.
>You quickly shake your head, throwing these thought from your mind.
>"You can't be blamed for this Anon, it's your life too."
>These words did little to soothe you, and you found yourself doubting them the second they sprang forth.
>Shaking any loose snow you had on your pajamas off, you wander over to the couch, a sudden sharp pain in your chest arising when you see the still removed couch cushion and recall the day so far.
>Your limbs start to feel numb when you put them back, rendering you only capable of plopping down on the cushion, your mind filling to the brim.
>"What do I do now?"
>"How could you do this to her?"
>"You can't lie to her Anon, you did the right thing."
>"Where did she go?"
>"When will she come back?"
>Out of all of them, one seems to shout much louder than the others, clawing it's way through to the forefront of your mind.
>"I need a drink."
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>>29157498
>Deciding to listen to this one, you quickly make your way to the coat closet and fish out the thickest thing you can find.
>Grabbing out the coat, you take a second longer than you normally would've to stare at it.
>"That hole there, the one in the arm. That's from the first time she flew into you."
>"Remember how she called you a wimp for freaking out when she hit you, only to find out that you actually broke your arm and had to go to the hospital?"
>"Turns out humans are much more fragile than ponies."
>Recalling these memories normally would've made you smile, but for now each moment you recall squeezes your heart a little tighter.
>Shaking your head, you throw on the coat and make your way back out into the unforgiving cold.
>Even with the winter protection clinging to you, it certainly wasn't comfortable out here.
>The walk into to town was a quiet one, not many ponies had anything worth doing that made them brave this sort of cold.
>The few ponies in sight were hurrying from place to place, completely at the mercy of the inclement weather.
>For the first time in a very long while, you felt much more adaptive to the current environment than the ponies.
>That might just be because the weather was the last thing on your mind.
>Reaching the edge of the small town your home bordered, you pause for a moment to survey the town.
>There was the library to your left, the familiar boutique across the courtyard, and the-
>There it was.
>That once welcoming old building, now with a melancholy tint surrounding it.
>It hardly even qualified as a building any more, a shack was a more appropriate term.
>Crossing the already plowed streets of the square was easy, avoiding little built up snowbanks as you make your way to the door.
>Stopping just outside the thin wooden door, a rush of memories comes back to you.
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>>29157502
>You remember the first time you came to this place, how it was your only home in this strange land for quite some time, the oh so familiar alcohol being your only window into the world you left behind.
>Things were very different here in Equestria, but getting drunk was still the same.
>Taking a left off memory lane, you slowly push open the door, leaving the harsh cold behind you.
>The inside of this place is much more lively than the outside, a small crowd of ponies scattered around the den of fights and lost brain cells.

>You wander over to the bar, avoiding a few wobbly ponies dancing, making out, fighting, or a combination of the three.
>A worn, cracked stool is all that awaits you, but with the way things are now, even that seems inviting.
>As you take a seat, the grey stallion behind the counter turns to face his new customer.
>His face was grizzled, yet friendly, and his demeanor was more of a goofy one than anything.
>"Anon?"
"Hey there Mac. Long time no see."
>A hearty laugh pours out of his mouth as he leans over the counter, wrapping you up in a big hug.
>"You sonofabitch, you still owe me 40 bits!"
"Still? That was months ago Mac, give a guy a break!"
>The pony dips beneath the counter, emerging with a crystal clear shot glass, setting it on the counter with a clack.
>"I gave you a break too many times, that's my problem..."
>Mac grabs a large, black and brown bottle from the rack behind him and pours it into the glass before you, the amber liquid filling the container.
>Your bartender leaves the bottle there next to you and give you a knowing nod, going to serve another customer.
"You know me all too well, Mac."
>You quickly down the shot, barely even noticing the warm presence of the liquid as it pours down your throat, readying another shot.
>Before you can get the liquid down, the tiny door separating all the patrons from the bitter outdoors swings open once again, a sudden chill sweeping through to room.
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>>29157507
>The heavy thud of the latch closing is followed by hoofsteps leading up to the bar, taking the stool even worse for wear next to the you.
>"Howdy there Anon."
>You gulp down the next readied shot before even bothering to respond.
"AJ."
>"Been a while since I've seen you in here."
"Well, everyone has their low moments."
>This earns a chuckle out of the orange pony next to you as the bartender readies her drink.
>No one speaks for a moment, the both of you staring endlessly into the cabinet in front of you.
>"I could almost hear Dash hootin' and hollerin' from across town to Fluttershy earlier on."
"Heh.Yeah, she can be like that."
>"I uh, couldn't help but overhear what it was all about when I went over there to find out what was wrong."
>You know you should've been surprised, but you were finding it hard to even care anymore who knew about you and Dash in your current state.
"Yeah? What about it?"
>Mac slides a large stein across the counter, right into the hooves of the pony next to you.
>She takes a swig of her drink, a small trickle of cider running down her cheek before continuing.
>"Well, it ain't really my business, but what're you gonna do about it? This is kinda important."
"If I knew that I wouldn't be in some shitty bar adding to my outstanding tab."
>Even Mac has to laugh at that one.
>"Do you think you should go to her? It looks like the both of ya aren't real happy with how this turned out."
"I don't think she wants to see me, but even if she did, I'd have no idea what to say."
>The both of you stare straight ahead at the bar, absentmindedly palming your drinks.
>"Well, answer me this. Do you love 'er?"
"Yeah, of course I do."
>"And do ya want to be with her forever?"
>This one takes a moment longer of consideration, but it's answer still comes easily.
"Yeah. Yeah I do."
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>>29157514
>"Well, that's all there is to it then. She's dead set on havin' that foal, and the way I see it, it's yer responsibility to be there for her. She loves you to pieces, and I think you're kinda sweet on her too."
"But I don't know if I can do this AJ. As much I do love her, I don't want to lie to her about the way I feel."
>"That's a good point."
>"Don't lie then. Tell her how you feel. Talk to her, and be there for her. Trust me sugarcube, as soon as you see that little bump in her belly, you won't be able to wait till the day it finally comes out."
>"I think she needs yah now Anon, yet yer hidin' in here. Go now, she's waitin'."
>Pausing for a moment, you turn to the orange pony next to you and wrap her up in the biggest hug you could muster.
>"Alright there lover boy, you best get out of here now."
"Right. Thanks AJ!"
>Stand from your stool you quickly don your coat and head for the door.
>You give the patrons a final wave goodbye before wandering back out into the snow.
>You couldn't believe how blind you were.
>This was the mare you loved, and you abandoned her when she needed you the most.
>You were going to find her now though, and explain to her the entire thing.
>You had to find Dash, you needed her right this instant.
>Your mind was racing at a million thoughts per second, but that much seemed clear to you.
>Starting the long walk back to your house, you scan the streets for any pony that might be able to help you.
>Everypony seems to have gone home by now, save for the lone mare happily trotting through the snow.
>Staining your eyes, you instantly recognize the pink pony.
"Pinkie!"
>"Hiya there Anon! What's going on?"
"I'm looking for Rainbow Dash. Have you seen her?"
>"Oh yeah, I did! She flew by here about an hour ago! She was in too much of a rush to talk, but she said something about going to Twilight's house to "get rid of this dumb thing". No idea what she was talking about, but she seemed kinda sad. Is everything alright, Anon?"
>Shit.
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>>29126227
Y-You better not...!
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>>29157518
Enjoying this, very interesting
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>>29157518
Oh look another problem that's going to resolve itself perfectly for anon.
I like that you're providing content Church but as your story has been going on it has been getting more and more boring there is no real conflict/problems, which works for one shot slice of life type stories but not so much for developing tales like yours. Those that did come up have been written as minor hiccups at best with it getting resolved perfectly each time and I'd be willing to bet that this next bit will be no different; anon will arrive in the nick of time and they will work it out over a couple of lines.
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>>29157518

I agree with this anon
>>29157633
while I really like your story, I think that in your last update Anon should put more fight, have more internall conflicts. While he love Dash he reallu doesn't want to have a foal, so It take more time and efforts to convince him.
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>>29157518
>"get rid of this dumb thing"
oh shit
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>>29157518
>to "get rid of this dumb thing".
Ohfuckohfuckohfuck
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>>29156494
I would go full ASMR on them
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>>29156494
I do now, hnnng!
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>>29157518
I don't think that your green needs more conflicts, it's just that sometimes you solve them too quickly. I think >>29157684 has a good point here, and I think Anon's change of mind felt rushed.

When some updates ago I said that it was interesting to see Anon being a dick, I wasn't saying that I enjoy seeing Rainbow Dash suffering because she's with an idiot, of course I don't, I want her to be happy, and she deserves a perfect Anon. The interesting thing about a dick Anon is, he can learn to stop being a dick and start being a better Anon for Dash. Here you pretty much skipped that, Anon moved almost immediately from not really caring about Rainbow's feelings to let Applejack change his mind in 2 minutes. Even with the same ending, I think this scene would have worked much better if Anon had been more stubborn, and Applejack had needed more effort to convince him.

Plus, even though we're here for Dash and maybe that's why you tried to keep this scene short, I really think that seeing Anon struggling with his conflicts is important. You're writing a story of Dash and Anon and their problems, if you omit Anon's problems, it becomes pretty much only a story of Dash having problems, which probably isn't what you want.

Anyways, I'm still hooked, Church. Looking forward to your next update.
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>>29157518
While I somewhat agree with the other two Anons on the predictable nature of the story, I think it's fine. This isn't really supposed to be a masterpiece, and it's enjoyable. We complained that there wasn't enough conflict, and you listened and put in a ton, so I can't complain anymore.

Good shit Church, keep going.
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>>29157633

>Doesn't write content or contribute to the thread.

>Bitches about a content creator not doing what he wants instead of just writing his own shit.

Oh wow! Look at that idea. Why don't you write something, you faggot?
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>>29158379
>We complained that there wasn't enough conflict, and you listened and put in a ton
Really? Where do you see this conflict?
>>29158431
>You need to be a chef to criticise food
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>>29158379
Cute!

>>29157518
Well, done!
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>>29158379
It isn't problem that story is pedictable or there aren't enough conflicts, there are a lot of stories without any relationship problems. Some of them are just "Anon x RD cuddle/have sex" and they are still good and I like to read them.

It's just that that author introduce kind of big problem and paint Anon as a dick and after that, all that Anon need to realise what to do is few words from AJ.
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>>29158894
The thing is with those stories that's all the are; Anon and Dash cuddling/having sex, they don't have a plot or try to develop the characters it's just a cute one shot.
When stories have Anon and Dash cuddling/having sex along with plot or development there's conflict and by that I don't literally mean they get into fights/have relationship issues I mean there is a problem that needs to be overcome, which is basic story telling.
I think the issue people are having with this story is that it is just predictably jumping from set piece to set piece as if it's on rails. This current part could have gone something like: Anon and Dash get into the argument, tempers flare and one storms out (basically what happened in the story) one of them then gets approached by someone else who convinces them to, or arranges a sit down with the other so that they can talk it out properly. At this point Dash and Anon could explain why they think what they do and this would be the turning point where they both come to see why the other is thinking what they are and a resolution could be worked out.
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I worship this mare.
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>>29160696
Same senpai
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>"But how, Anon!? How could you?"
>You don't look up. You couldn't bear looking up. To see her hardened, fearful gaze. It would shatter what was left of you.
>Instead you do nothing. You just stare into the sand.
>"How could you kill all of those people? I don't understand... I thought you were a peaceful-"
"There is no PEACE. Earth is a smoldering ruin. I don't know how I got here, ok? All I know is, I killed my way through. The fuck was I supposed to do, Dash? They were attacking me. I gave an oath to protect my land no matter what. And I did it. And I don't regret it."
>You look up, and instead of seeing what you expected to see, which was anger and resentment you saw...
>Fear. Unbridled fear.
>"I..." She wavers, her gaze shifting, unable to look you in the eye. "I can't even look at you... You... Murder."
>She turns and takes off, flying off into the sky before you could say anything.
>You don't do anything but just watch her fly off. The last chance you had to feel human again.
>Such is the lonely life of a soldier.
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>>29162464
That was fucking great
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>>29162633
Really?
I kinda just shit it out. I thought it'd be seen as edgy honestly. I'm glad someone enjoyed it. I've always toyed with the idea of a warrior Anon going to Equestria and the secret spilling out that blood was on his hands. Speaking of which here's a scene I have been wanting to write.

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>It was so... Chilling. Chilling to think that... Those hands, the very hands that had killed countless PEOPLE - thinking people like her and her friends and family...
>Those hands had... Had touched her...
>It sent shivers down her spine. It made her gag. Made her dizzy with resentment and disgust. How could this have happened!? How could she not think something was off!?
>And this... This... Killer. He was living in the same town as her... Walking among her friends and the innocent people of Ponyville...
>She shook violently, It was almost too much to bear.
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>>29162715
Ah fuck it why not.
>Those hands...
>The same hands that had been the source of pleasure and warmth and loving embrace...
>They had... Killed. Had blood on them....
>And she let them touch her.
>Her head was a confused mass of emotions... Ranging from disgust, resent, anger, and...
>Betrayal.
>He had betrayed her.
>He had betrayed her and everyone he knew by hiding such a monstrous secret.
>And she would never. Ever forgive him for that.
>The Anon that she knew.
>The Anon she LOVED.
>He was a big lie.
>He was a monster.
>Anon is dead.
>Her world shook and collapsed in on itself, as she toppled to the ground. Sobbing mournful tears for her one and only love.
>She had let someone into her life in... 'that' way... And he turned out to be something evil and monstrous.
>A killer.
>She sobbed and kicked and screamed. Wailing into the night sky. Her limbs ached from how hard she had ran. She had never ran that hard in her entire life. Never had flown that far in her life. She didn't even know where she was.
>Defiled, disgraced, and...
>Alone.


i think i went too far
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This is why killing is one thing I wouldn't do to get to equestria, unless it specifically says that she'll forgive me for it.
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>>29163052
I still really want to write a warrior Anon in Equestria because I'd love to tackle the moral dilemma of killing for your country.

How would Dash react to killing out of loyalty to the homeland? Could Anon maybe try to get her to see his point of view there? Or,
>"you know, I would have thought out of all the ponies in Equestria, you'd be the one to understand me most, Dash. I didn't just murder those people. I killed them because they were going to kill the people in my homeland. I did it because of loyalty. And that's part of the reason why I fell in love with you. Loyalty. It resonates with me. But I guess you just don't understand."
That was fucking shit. But you get my point. That's something along the lines of what I'd like to make. Out of all the ponies in Equestria, Dash could probably be the only one who could understand killing for the sake of your home. Killing for loyalty.
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>>29163092
Personally, as far as I'm concerned there's no way you can morally kill someone. I've also never been a 'country loyalty' kind of person either, so I dunno. I can get over being immoral, but I don't expect her to.
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>>29163144
What if there's a person trying to kill you?
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>>29163168
If there's no other option but to kill, it's still immoral. Everybody can believe you were in the right, but it's still ending someone's life.
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>>29162747
Continue, faggot
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>>29163181
It's immoral, sure, Whatever. But I'd rather kill someone than to let them kill me and my family because of moral shit. Maybe that person shouldn't have decided to try to kill me. Two wrongs don't make a right, but would I really be wrong for defending myself? It'd be better to try to knock them out sure, but if there's absolutely no way at all to end it without death, then the innocent should prevail.
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>>29163184
I'm just roughly shitting out some concept story stuff. If I do continue this, I'd be restarting and doing it the right way with actual conscious effort.
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>>29163092
If you go with the angle of "Ancient Pegasi were Equestria's Warrior Class" (remember Dash wearing that armor?) it wouldn't be something they couldn't understand and deal with.

Equestria might be peaceful now, and it would be shocking that Anon comes from a place and a people that are anything but peaceful and harmonious, but it wouldn't be an unbreachable divide.
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>>29163213
Honestly I love the idea of Pegasi being a warrior class. It makes sense. They're proud and brash warriors. Action first. Dash pretty much represents this. Fluttershy is probably the farthest thing away from a warrior though, but she is a rare exception I guess.

I think it'd just be a shock though to her that Anon had killed a lot of people and never told anyone. I think that a pony like Twilight or Fluttershy would be more disgusted about it though.

I do wonder how big wars were in Equestria. There were those threads a long time ago about Anon telling the ponies about WW1 and WW2 and laughing about the ponies deathcounts in their own wars, but I seriously wonder.

>The Griffon-Pony war was a travesty. Hundreds died.
>-cue anon laughing-
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>>29163201
I mean, you're right, and it is more justifiable to counter attack than to just let yourself get killed, but in my eyes one kill is just as bad as another, and I can't expect others to see it in a different light.
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>>29163257
Well we're at an impasse. Guess it's time to let bygones be bygones.
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>>29163248
Fluttershy I feel would understand as well, perhaps better than most in some respects.

The animal kingdom is often a violent place, and she cares for animals at every rung of the food chain.

Her hangup would probably be that Anon and his people and the people they were fighting weren't just animals, that there were other options besides fighting.

But then Anon isn't a pony, and doesn't think like one. He does come from a predator species, which has it's own "evolutionary baggage" as Sagan would say, and she could begin to understand at least some of the reasons why humans are the way they are. (and would probably find it fascinating, in a morbidly sad kind of way)
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>>29163300
I'd also like to write a story of an Anon involved in an inter-galactic war with a warrior race of aliens that were just conquerors where peace was not an option. That'd be fun.
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>>29162747
I find it difficult to think that she'd go from loving someone to totally abandoning them based off of what they'd done that quickly. I don't think it's realistic, and I don't think she would even need to be the element of loyalty to experience this.

As benevolent as the canon universe is, I believe there have been references to the intent to kill (see 1:15 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ExBUdhOcjlY). [Embed] Granted it's the alternate timeline, but I believe it would be inconsistent even with the cartoon physics for Dash to survive the boulder falling on her. The ponies attempting to kill her were under Sombra's spell and they could have been considered "monsters" and it would have logically freed them from the responsibility of killing. The blame for the attemted murder would then fall on Sombra.

Furthermore, there have been references to other battles and warfare in the distant past. There must be some concept of war theory and there must have been some philosophical attempt to justify killing for a cause, self defence, or an extention thereof. If human intellect is comprable, we had the first attempts at just war theory by St. Augustine (religious/moral high ground justification), and various Arabic philosophers (self-preservation justification) in 500 AD and 900's respectively. We were more primitive in those times than ponies are currently, so it stand to reason that they've already passed this philosophical milestone.

All this to say that I think this >>29163213 narrative of 'pegasi warrior class' is correct and I doubt she'd be such a die-hard pacifist as to not differentiate between killing in combat and murder.
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>>29163300
Fluttershy would probably be on board with the whole hunting for survival thing, but wouldn't agree with killing another sentient being.

>>29162464
If anything I think Dash would be the one who understood him. She's not the kind of pony who would live in slavery or constant fear for the safety of herself and the ones she cared about. Surrender is always an alternative to war, but I doubt Dash would accept that if it meant living under an abusive system. Call me idealistic or whatever, but I believe the nature of her character is definatley patriotic, and a soldier anon could relate to her on that level.
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>>29164444
>>29164444
>>29164444
>>29164444
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>>29164446
Why?
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This thread is still usable.
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>>29165548
Then use it.
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>>29165552
damn
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>>29165552
Abuse it.
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