Slave Pony Thread #84

>>29043108
First for all stories being canceled.

>>29043108
Ponies aren't slaves. Ponies are superior to humans. If anyone should be slaves, then it is humans.

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>>29043135
We're all slaves, if you subscribe to that particular theory of belief.

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>>29043108

>>29043174
that style is atrocious

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>>29043135
Humans are slaves to their passions and weaknesses, and above all their fears, they always try to be above others and when they achieve it immediately they fear losing everything to something or someone superior, so they always seek to submit everything to their absurd precepts , Humans can enslave the ponies, rule Equestria, but they will always live in fear of being the next to be ruled

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A New Landscape Continued...

>You applaud how quickly emergency personnel arrive on the scene.
>they may have been forewarned, you don’t know
>all you know is that the little girl’s life is now out of your hands and into the ones of people far more capable.


>Applejack watches in solemn silence as the girl is loaded onto a stretcher and lifted into the back of the ambulance
>It’s not the only medical vehicle here. The whole block is covered in flashing lights, and sirens are still all around
>It’s a rather populated suburban area, so you think there’s personnel from all over the county
>firefighters, police, paramedics…


>You were reassured by paramedics that these sorts of incidents, that is to say, the girl’s IMPALEMENT, were actually treatable
>you don’t know if you should trust him, but you decide that you will
>even though it seems unbelievable to you

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>>29043135

>>29043166
There's literally nothing wrong with fucking horses. So what? If shinynon likes banging his mare more power to him.

>>29043188
>Applejack cries silently
>You remember how tightly the girl held onto her mane as she was transported on the stretcher to the ambulance
>Applejack followed by her side the whole distance
>now, she was watching her being worked on in the back of the vehicle, bandages and casts and things you have no idea what they are being fastened around her torso, around the piece of plank
>you put your hand on her neck and pull her against your side, in a little hug
>Applejack continues to stare as they close the back door, and within ten seconds, they’re on the way out
>She wipes a hoof across her nose


“I don’t wanna leave her…”


>Your eyes water, and you stroke the side of her neck


“I know, hon. But she’s in good hands, now. I think she’ll make it.”


>Applejack swallows, you can feel it since your hand is on her neck
>She nods her head, and leans into you


“I hope so, Master. She… was in so much pain, I just…”


“It’s ok now, Applejack. You were there for her, you helped her. You dug her out, and if it weren’t for you hearing her…”


>You trail off.
>it doesn’t really need to be said, you both understand
>Applejack sniffles
>rubbing her neck all the way up and down one more time, you pull your hand away…


>You see red.
>Immediately your eyes shoot down to your hand, and you suddenly notice the sticky red blood on your fingertips
>You stop breathing, and then you look over Applejack’s shoulder

>>29043177
But the subject is fascinating. I hope they meet again.

>>29043174
The only thing that does not make sense in this drawing is the mouth of Candance, the artist does not seem to know that horses do not have canine teeth since they do not eat meat (most of the time)

>>29043211
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZnYNmGMsU18

>>29043201
>Low on her side, and down on her belly from front to close to her flanks, there’s a thick, wet smear of blood
>At first, you feel your heartbeat quicken as you think your pony is now injured, too
>but then, the realization hits you
>that’s not her blood…


>you feel sick.
>you gag, and and look away from your hand
>you don’t wipe your hand on your clothes, or anywhere else
>it just sits limply by your side


>Applejack stays next to you
>she still remembers your order
>but she’s looking all around, taking everything in with an anxious demeanor
>her eyes bug out, and she points to where two paramedics are carrying a stretcher


“I-Is… is that…”


>you look over
>and your face blanches
>it’s a white sheet covered stretcher…
>coming from the far corner of the same house where you found the girl.


>the two of you stand, slackjawed.
>And that’s when Applejack starts to cry aloud.
>shivering sobs wrack her body, and she lowers her weepy face to the road.

>>29043234
>you’re more in shock than she is, so you don’t cry
>but the knowledge of who that must be isn’t lost on you.


>you feel a horrendous, splitting headache all of a sudden
>you put your bloody hand up to your forehead out of habit, but before you can remember, it’s too late
>you yank your hand away, but it leaves a smear on your skin that you can feel
>your eyes roll back, and you feel faint, but you fight it
>eventually, you do win, but you’re done.
>you can’t do this…


>You pet Applejack’s head, and start slowly walking away from the scene, back to the safety of your home
>She looks up at you, bloodshot eyes fixing you questioningly
>you shake your head, ignoring your throbbing head


“Let’s… come on, hon, let’s go. We gotta get home and get you cleaned up…”


>You feel like the ground beneath your feet is shaking
>but it’s probably just you
>Applejack opens her mouth, about to say something, but she closes it quickly
>lowering her head, she nods


“Yes, Master… but what about other people, what if they need…”


>Your head is killing you, but your heart melts
>but you just can’t do it right now, and you can’t just let Applejack go off by herself
>it’s actually against the law, too
>you shake your head and cradle hers as you walk

>>29043249
“No, Applejack… I don’t think there’s any more we can do now. We just have to, just have to…”


>You swoon, and stumble while you walk
>Applejack sees it, and then gets in front of you with her whole body
>You thankfully don’t fall, but you place your hands on your back, pushing down with your weight
>the points of her vertebrae can be felt under your fingertips
>Applejack pushes back against your weight, supporting you quite well
>she speaks with worry in her voice


“Master, are you alright?”


>You nod, pushing yourself back onto your feet
>the shock of seeing all of this is getting to you, badly
>When you look back down, you see the bloody fingerprints on Applejack’s back


>Fuck this.
>You start forward, gently pulling her forward by her shoulder


“Yeah, yeah, I’m fine… We gotta get home…”

>>29043257
>Applejack stays to your side, but she’s angled inwards
>watching your every move
>you just want to get home…


>then, the thought of the little girl’s blood enters your mind again
>on the ground, on Applejack, on your hands…
>the wooden stake driven through her chest...


>you don’t remember doing it, but your legs give out from under you
>your body slumps forward, and you crumple toward the earth
>your eyes falling closed.

>>29043265
That's all for now. There probably won't be another update from me for at least a few days, but I hope this tides people over for a little bit!

>>29043174
I want to know more about the circumstances surrounding how they were initially separated. Shiny said he was taken as he slept. I wonder if Candyass was too?

>>29043223
I know, for that say "Most of the time"

In times of scarcity herbivorous animals become omnivorous and consume the corpses of other animals to survive

>>29043177
What don't you like about it? It's moderate for me - they played a little loose with the horn placement and I'm not a fan of Cadance's mouth, but I really like the textured/fuzzy look their coats have and the way Shining's muzzle is done.

>>29043265
It kind of figures... AJ would know exactly how it feels to have families torn apart, to lose everything she's ever known - to have her whole life obliterated. It's understandable this would hit her so hard...

...wondering what's up with Anonymous here, though.

>>29043108
It hurt my heart.

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>>29043281
gadamn. That's pretty hard hitting. hope things get better for them all soon.

She sure lost a lot of blood.

>>29043412
>wondering what's up with Anonymous
He's just overwhelmed by the situation.

Coming close to death then something so awful can do that to a person.

>>29043166
I'm so jealous right now.

>>29043166
fake and gay

>>29043166
>>29043536

Real mare is not for sexual. No update tonight, I'm super tired and probably going to turn in early. Will try to shoot for Wednesday but can't make any promises. Horses are a lot of work.

>>29043660
Used my old trip on accident.

>>29043166
IRC screencaps are super easy to fake if you have the right client.

>>29043660
>>29043668
rip shinyanon
it was fun while it lasted

>>29043660
Ran out of motivation, eh?

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>>29043108

>>29043785
>>29043834
Wow, you guys are cunts

>>29043839
I would adopt a Corona.

>>29043870
RIP
IN
PEPPERONI

>>29043894
She may try to kill you at some point, so be careful if you do.

do you guys write stories with a pony(slave) point of view?

>>29043920
She never meant to hurt her master.

>>29043839
>Corona with a cutie mark.

That's heresy. Everyone knows Corona's cutie mark is just a mass of scars and bare skin now.

>>29043923
Occasionally.

>>29043933
Funny thing is Corona's old cutie mark was exactly the same. Her special talent is being hurt.

>>29043933
can I look at some of those?)

>>29043957
most of them are not from a single point of view. shiny anon definately has some, as well as blind-shy iirc

>>29043957
I don't follow many stories from the ponies point of view exclusively, but here's a nice short one.
http://pastebin.com/mqhmSQVB

>>29043927
No one ever does.

>>29043108
I need adorable slave pony stories full of feels.

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>>29043108

>>29043996
fuck. This is my fetish. I want more. Is there a big story about ponies being trapped as slaves on Earth?

>>29044106
All of our stories are about slave ponies on earth.

>>29044112
i meant
>from the ponies point of view

>>29044126
Shiny and Corona alternates between the pony's point of view and that of their Master. It's currently one of the most popular stories in the thread, it's still ongoing and I highly recommend it.

>>29043188
Man. Ive seen someone shove their liver back into place while a whiskey held his guts in. Humans are incredibly fucking durable.

>>29044126
A Deal is a Deal has a lot of stuff from ponies' POV. It's also dead, so probably not worth it.

>>29044126
I'm going to have to agree with >>29044147
This story is pretty universally loved around these parts. Pastebin here: http://pastebin.com/9d5xtBD5

>>29043923
>>29044112

Off the top of my head, stories that fit what you are looking for:
> Shiny and Corona: pastebin.com/9d5xtBD5 - switches between the view of the slaves and their master. Ongoing.
> Choose Your Own Slaveventure: pastebin.com/8Fvxa5kW - also switches views between slaves and owner, also ongoing.
> Honey Bun: pastebin.com/mqhmSQVB - hasn't been updated recently; I hope writefag isn't gone.
> Fire & Sky: pastebin.com/VAG2qGzh (part 1) and pastebin.com/vSRW90Zr (part 2) - finished.
> Tibetanon: pastebin.com/Ay9ifYBL - another one where I hope writefag isn't gone.
> Spoons: pastebin.com/tjeFy9bY - sadly dead
> Blind Anon & Fluttershy: pastebin.com/0rmywwyB - sadly dead

>>29044078
nice edit faggot gb3SIM

>>29044266
started reading it but meh, not really interested in a story about a stallion

>>29044505
There's two names in the title for a reason.

>>29044505
Stallions never get any love

poor things

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>>29044609
Stallion is for riding and loving

>>29044634
did the anon that was writing the big macinslave being used as a riding poner story ever come back?

>>29044591
>>29044505
It's a mediocre story anyway. You're not missing out on much.

corona is fucking canceled

>>29044699
Your shitty opinion has been discarded

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>>29044708
CORONA OR RIOT!

>>29044708
>>29044726
He said on IRC that he might drop a small update in the morning before he goes to work.

>>29044719
>how dare you not like what I like
You are everything wrong with the world.

>>29044669
No.

>>29043281
Damn, the intensity of the story of today was palpable, I really felt the pressure and the physical and mental exhaustion after the rescue and the way that Anon and Applejack had to face it.

Many more stories of these in the future nameless anon

>>29043660
Take you time and relax iopb, this thread jhas ust begun

>>29044768
It's my opinion that your opinion is shit

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You go in your car on the road back home after a day of work.

Suddenly, something comes out of the trees on the side of the road.

Everything happens so quickly that you can hardly react, much less divert your vehicle or step on the brakes in time.

You hear a dull thump, you perceive the charge of an object against your vehicle and the last thing you feel is the signal of the car when stopping after leaving the road.

After the initial shock, you recover soon from the experience and moved by the concern and curiosity of your vehicle.

And there it is, lying on the road, seemingly lifeless.

Ah! No, wait, still breathing but with difficulty

A pony.

No doubt a fugitive for the way he ran.

What should you do?

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>>29045005
You can't leave him there. A dead pony is worth less than a retrieved pony who was nursed back to health. Carry him to your vehicle and take him to a hospital, if the injury is very bad, or home if not.

>>29045005
Pull out a road flair and burn the tip of its dick to humiliate it before it dies

>>29045005
>>29045005
Pick up a large rock and end his suffering.

>>29045005
Track down the owner and sue for damages.

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>>29045005
Well, the poor beast must be suffering.

The most human thing is to end their pain.

I choose piety

People are so heartless toward stallions, jeezus

Still laughed though

>>29045049
He could just be stunned, doesn't mean he's dead. Stallions are hardy guys

I honestly don't think ponies even as slaves would be treated by society at large in such a harsh manner as depicted in many of these stories. Sure there will always be the sick fucks that get off on abusing them, but animal cruelty is a felony in all 50 states now. Pony cruelty would probably be an even more serious offense, given that they can talk and testify to the fact they were abused.

It might be legal to make your pony work for you but I highly doubt whipping and other torturous methods of punishment would be looked upon very kindly in the eyes of the law. You might, at the most, get away with some open-handed spanking or taking a belt to their rump for reasonable punishment - but doing it just because you feel like hurting your pony wouldn't fly.

>>29045052
This.
Fucking pony, my insurance rates are gonna soar because of this shit.
I should've gone with Liberty Mutual Insurance and gotten accident forgiveness.

>>29045005
Be not an asshole.
>Get the blanket (that you totally keep in the car) and use it to help abduct the pony into the boot.
>Cover pony with blanket, he will be in shock.
>Score free pony slave!
>Take to vet.
>Write green. Good green.
>Don't forget the bath scene.

>>29045180
>>29045180
Assuming that its 'owner' is not some asshole or a criminal who even cares

>>29045194
>get caught
>have to admit to being an accessory to pony escaping or take all the blame and say you stole him
>still have to pay for all medical bills
>still have your insurance rates go up
>still going to do jail time

The right answer is take him to a vet, track down the owner, and sue for damages. Owner didn't do an adequate job keeping his ponies in line and should be held liable for all damages and medical bills. Offer to settle for ownership of stallion and medical costs.
Scores you a truly free pony slave without having to pay for getting him fixed up or worries that the law will come back to bite you at some point.

>you will never lovingly suck your sweet little stallion slave off as a reward for being such a hard-working and loyal good boy for his master
>you will never fondle his sheath and balls until you both fall asleep while you spoon and snuggle afterward

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>>29043108
I want a pet pone who I shower with genuine affection, all the best food, drinks, entertainment, and even have her sleep in the same bed as me and cuddle


At the same time I want to fuck her in any hole I want at literally any time and she knows this and accepts it, one look or snap of my fingers and she will immediately start sucking me off, one push on her upper back and she will go ass up face down, no matter what she is doing or how she feels, sometimes she will be woken up by me fucking her and she just lays there and takes it and drifts off to sleep with my cum in her once I'm done

>>29045264
>no matter what she is doing or how she feels
What if she's sick? That's a good way to get pony puke all over your lap, and nobody wants that.

>>29045277
In that case I don't do oral and just go doggy or ass up face down so her face isn't facing me

>>29045264
Would you eat her pussy and suck on her teats, too? Make her cum, too, so it's all the more shameful for her. She'll hate herself for liking it when master does things to her.

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>>29045264
That's the dream, isn't it?

>>29045287
Hell yes. I mean how can you look at a pretty little mare pussy and not want a taste?

>>29045287
Definitely

Not every time but a fair amount

Just grab her by the waist / back legs (arm around both legs and pull her ass into me) out of nowhere, start eating her out, do it till she cums and support her legs so they dont give out

Then push her down ass up face down and rail her, call her my bitch, tell her I own her, she's mine

Cream her balls deep while she calls me master

30 minutes later and she made dinner for us and is cuddling me on the couch

>>29045296
Someday I will have this with a human chick

>>29045303
Get you a broken little slave mare that came from a horribly abusive situation. She'd probably do all that without hesitation, and maybe even genuinely love you for treating her well otherwise, as well as caring enough about her to see to her need for sexual release now and then.

>>29045332
We need green of it
I'm sick of this white knightey beta cuck faggotry where people forgo sex because muh feels

You can be nice and dominate her at the same time
Pet on a velvet leash type deal

Random beatings and shit is for faggots
Never even getting a fucking hoofjob is for faggots

>>29045303
What if you woke up to her lovingly sucking you off while looking up into your eyes with sheer adoration. She saw your morning wood and couldn't resist. Would you call her a good girl for being so eager to get a muzzle full of master's cum, or punish her for doing it without being commanded to?

newfag here

any stories about the actual breaking of the slaves? The maid thing is fine, but I mostly want the abuse.

>>29045332
Can I break a little slave mare so badly that she represses the memories of it to save time?

>>29045367
Maybe not everyone wants to fuck their slave, anon.

>>29045369
Reward her for being a good girl. It's oh so much better if she wants it badly enough to do stuff like that.

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>>29045369
Good girl but tell her she needs to deep throat it or she will get a spanking
If she fucks up actually do it while fingering her G spot and telling her that she better learn fast or she wont get fingered and spanked anymore

Make her like being spanked

>>29045382
faggot
https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2016/11/18/1298495__solo_explicit_nudity_clothes_blushing_anus_vulva_plot_eyes+closed_panties.png

>>29045407
What if the only slave you could acquire was a stallion slave. Would you fuck his tight little ponut and teach him to suck his master's dick like a pro? Would you ever give him a reacharound while taking him from behind to feel his tight little ass clench around your dick when he cums?

>>29045446
never any stallions only mares

>>29045446
>>29045454

And if it is a filly or a colt? Or if you suffer from amnesia or in reality is a Changeling?

>>29045476
no guys

A changeling slave would be the best slave ever.

after reading this http://pastebin.com/mqhmSQVB

I want my own epic 500k words adventure about a filly who was raised on Earth and whose destiny is to return her race back in Equestria.
See you in three years. Nah, I'm sure I'll throw it away by the end of this week.
But now I've got 500 words.

http://pastebin.com/jaKxVSYX

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>>29045690
But what about the ponies that don't want to go back?

>>29045757
it is their choice. Apparently, the main opponent wouldn't be people but ponies who are loyal to their masters.

>>29045690
Word of advice. If you are going to write a story you should post it here first instead of going directly to pastebin. Many anons, like me, skip links since we are on mobile or because we are lazy bastards.

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>>29045367

>people forgo sex because muh feels

Some of us aren't into beastiality, you sick fuck.

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>goad tgn into posting
>only posts one post worth of each.

Please don't hate me.

>>29045367
Gotta agree, there's been next to NO lewd in any of these stories.

Fuck, I understand not wanting 100% of content to be smut, but 0% seems kind of low.

>>29046239
Don't worry, sooner or later Corona is going to get some from her master.

Whether he wants it or not.

>>29046264
>whether it's an erection or rigamartis.

ftfy

>>29046239
>0% Lewd
That'll change soon...

*ominous horse noises*

Shh...

>>29046335
lewd leads to impregnation.
impregnation leads to satyrs.
satyrs lead to mostly comfyness but also whiners. So it's a win lose situation.

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>>29046379
yes

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When are we getting the filly brothel green?

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>>29046588
As soon as anon can afford to buy them out.
>after said buyout anon arrives and sends the human staff home.
>The fillies are gathered in the front room. Terrified at the kind of pervert anon must be to want to own them all just for himself.
>Anon says he just wants to see them grow up happy and healthy, and he will even start getting them an education.
>And all he ask is they keep him company and let him pet them. Maybe even rub their little bellies on occasion.

>>29046746
>he will even start getting them an education.

In sex?

>>29045372
You want the other slave pone thread, Submision is Mandatory, or SiM. That's what they do there.

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>>29043183

>>29047183
CRAAAAAAWLING IIIIIIIIIIIN MY SKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN

corona is fucking dead

>>29046588
We are not pedophiles

Perhaps xenophiles, but not pedoshit

>>29047963
she has her cutie mark, so she can be bred.

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>>29046746
W-We do not want your type here, y-your monster!

>>29048001
That does not change the fact, perhaps his body mature, but his mind is still that of an infant.

Is pedophilia

>>29046746
Does he take them trick-or-treating on Halloween?

>>29048071
Of corsh

>>29043211
Horses actually do have canines.

>>29049074
This. though they're pretty underdeveloped and not situated in the front like most carnivores and omnivores.

>>29049094
They're in front of (rostral to) where the bit is placed, so it's not exactly far back. Also, they're often not visible, especially in mares, because they might not break through the gums at all. Anyway, evolution is a weird and wonderful thing.

>>29049074
>>29049094
>>29049208
>Fewer than 28% of female horses (mares) have any canine teeth. Those that do normally only have one or two, and these may by only partially erupted. Between 13 and 32% of horses, split equally between male and female, also have wolf teeth, which are not related to canine teeth, but are vestigial premolars.

>>29049255
Okay... And what's the moral of the story?

>>29049262
what

>>29049262
>>29049297

That the artist must check better the equine anatomy before giving them aspects that do not correspond to completely imaginary beings

>>29049262
Always look a gift poneslave in the mouth. If she's got canines, she's a maneater and not in a good way.
Unless you need bodies disposed of, in which case she's your new best friend! Never gonna have to take a trip down to the pigfarm ever again!

Anon the Cleaner and his pony minions when?

Shiny is kill. Corona is kill. Dead thread. Dead show. Dead fandom. Rip in pepperoni.

>>29049965
But Anon can never die!

>>29049965
>one day since update of story
>dead thread
>lol

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Pones shouldn't be sold at auctions! They should be available in retail stores!

>>29050134
only the toys m8

>>29050582
God, that's cute as hell

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>>29050134
I am sure that many ponies will have qualities so valuable that their price will be inaccessible to the public, for those who fall into this category of elite there are auctions to the highest bidder

>>29050614

Now he imagines that they are Corona and Shining playing with Gracie (Although I suppose that Shining will have to be higher)

>>29050638
Man, I love it when people make them with actually different body styles like this.

Any recommended fics, uncompleted or otherwise, of humans getting BTFO?

I'm feeling an insane distaste for my own species reading through a few of these and would love to see a fic where ponies' get to turn the tables on their masters and get sweet retribution.

>>29050714
maybe yous hold kill yourself then senpai

>>29050714
way too meta for me

>>29050744
meant for >>29050726

>>29046111
I don't think he's been in the IRC either. Probably dead.

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>>29050682
Thanks to the artists and their creativity for it, although I think Applejack should be the tallest and sturdier, considering that Rarity's parents do not imagine her too tall and thin.

Chibi Pinkie just makes her more adorable

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>>29050714
That's some real turbo-heresy right there, anon.

Pone is not for revolution and table-turning. Pone is for slavery, cuddles, and becoming attached.

> Ponies in one large city manage to pull off a coordinated rebellion
> It's unexpectedly successful; they manage to seize stored weapons and equipment
> Inspired by their accomplishment, nearby cities begin to experience uprisings as well
> Traveling by phone, clandestine radio, or even just simple word of mouth, tales soon begin to spread.
> An attempt at a response is hampered by the need to divert forces to handle further rebellions around the nation
> For some time, the ponies actually attain autonomy in a region
> Force the humans there to live as they had made their slaves live
> Wear the collars and chains they'd worn
> 6 months later
> The army rolls in and brutally disassembles the self-styled "New Equestria"
> Ponies are mercilessly returned to bondage
> Whether they played a part in the initial uprising matters not
> They were aiding the rebels by living there
I want to buy a captured rebel and savagely crush her spirit, then gently rebuild her with caring and kindness.

>>29051040
>> Force the humans there to live as they had made their slaves live
What if a poner had an extremely kind and gentle master that loved her and pampered her? Would they be shown mercy?

>>29051040
>returning rebels back to slavery
Nah dawg, public executions.
Long, slow, painful executions.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mg_13WJ4gDo

Story about anon buck breaking a big strong stallion when?

>>29051061
nope

>>29051315
A poner and her master are deeply in love with each other. She was his slave by law only - she was never treated as such. He would constantly dote on her, buy her unexpected gifts, flowers for no reason, stuff like that. They even got married in a private ceremony - though slave marriage isn't legally recognized in the human courts. He refers to her as his wife and she refers to him as her husband, they don't care what anyone else thinks. He is well-known for donating money to slaves-rights movements, and she wasn't coerced into marrying him in any way. She was rescued from an abusive, cruel owner by him, and hasn't had so much as a harsh word spoken to her since they've been together. You can't tell me she wouldn't try to defend him in such a revolt.

>>29051350
nope
sell him out for the greater good of pony kind

>>29051261
SiM would welcome that, but this is the comfie slave thread. Not that it's a bad story idea...

Question for writers who occasionally tackle boring shit like politics in their comfy slave fic: how do you usually write world leaders in your stories? Reasonable, authoritative, regretful? How in general do you have them justify the pony's servitude?

corona is fucking dead

>>29051350
>Initially they are left to their own devices
>Aside from the laws which specify human servitude, they're largely allowed to keep to themselves.
>In private, their relationship continues as always.
>He wears the collar now, of course, but much like before the actual legal status of things barely matters.
>When a brick is thrown through their window, for the next two week an assortment of ponies stand guard outside their door at night.
>Each and every one of them former abuse victims who'd benefited from his actions.
>Some even look on their relationship with a degree of jealousy, for she was one of the few who never seemed troubled by the precarious position New Equestria found itself in.
>She had her love, and that was enough.
>Gradually, however, things begin to slip.
>Food was never in short supply, but other resources are starting to grow stretched by the blockade the rebels' holdings find themselves under.
>Eyes that had once regarded them with bemusement and tolerance, soon begin to grow cold and hard with anger and then hate.
>Was she blind to what was going to happen?
>Did she care about that /human/ so much that she didn't think about her own kin?
>As it becomes clear that an assault to retake the land is imminent, she hatches a plan to slip him out and escape the fighting.
>They never make it.
>Caught near the border by a self-proclaimed 'guard patrol', she is separated from him.
>Her mane and coat shaved, locked outdoors in a cage once used by the slave markets as a traitor to her kind.
>She survives the assault.
>But without her owner, she is simply reprocessed and sold off again.
>Never even knowing if he is still alive.

>>29051532
wait till midweek you fucking obnoxious crybabies

>>29051452
Research is part of writing. Start with https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Proslavery

>>29051551
rip

>>29051350
If they got involved at all. He would probably join the revolt as well.

She would have to stick by his side to defend him from other ponies. Though I'm sure there would be several pony sympathizers willing to fight along side them.

I would.

lets go full tinfoil hat.
What if the government started requiring something new to be added to public water because of "health benefits" when in reality it was just to pacify the public. This had a unintended side affect of directing the public's maliciousness towards the ponies. Only the anons that took care to avoid the water could see how fucked up things have gotten.

The ponies and anon's raids and attacks would be aimed at municipal water supplies. though it can take months for the drug's effects to wear off.

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>>29051452
We don't really. It's kinda been a necessary plot hole of this thread since the beginning.

Kinda like Equestria and ponies being real

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>>29051565
THE GOVERNMENT IS PUTTING DRUGS IN THE WATER SUPPLY TO MAKE YOU HATE PONIES! OPEN YOUR EYES, PEOPLE!

>>29051452
I try to avoid bringing it up. The more you delve into Equestria and the details and the ponies slavery in general, the more you stretch suspension of disbelief. Better to never bring it up and just have the ponies be there; ready for the cuddlin'.

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>>29051315
So what if he and other sympathizers are hidden by a network of ponies who oppose the new law and secretly plan to flee to another place where they can live mutually in friendship and harmony?

>>29051542
And so begins the story of Corona

>>29051551
Deeeeeeaaaaad

>>29051802
no

>>29051542
>dat ending

no.

>>29051802
Nigga has a life, youz a retard

>finals week

>>29052596
Finally someone gets it

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>>29052596

It's that time of year.

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>"How'd I get saddled with this?"

>>29053642
Because this saddle leaves your rear end exposed for riding crops, silly Dashie.

where rat. i need to find him.

http://pastebin.com/9d5xtBD5

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"No."
>Anon slowly turns his head to look at you
>"What?"
"I said no, Anon. I don't know what's gotten into you, but this... this isn't you. I'm not going to send Corona out here to-"
>his eye twitches
>"That's none of your business, Shiny. Just do as you're told or I'll whip your ass right alongside hers."
>you snort and sit on your haunches in front of him, refusing to budge
>he stares at the floor in a daze for a few moments, and you take the opportunity to snag the belt from his grip
>suddenly he smiles, lifting his head and slowly shaking it as he gives a soft chuckle under his breath, bringing a hand to your chin
>"Shiny Shiny Shiny..." he says with a sigh, leaning in close to you. "Such a stubborn little horse."
>his other hand reaches up and begins softly stroking your muzzle
>his lower jaw begins to tremble, and a pair of tears roll down his cheeks
>"I'm sorry I hit you just now, buddy."
>before you can reply, he's on his knees in front of you with his arms wrapped around you in a tight hug and crying softly
"Uh... there there?" you say in a baffled tone
>"You're a good boy, Shiny. My little buddy," he says as he strokes your neck, back, and withers
>he pulls back, and your head reels as the back of his hand strikes your cheek harshly
>"DON'T YOU DARE FUCKING DISOBEY ME!"
>you wince briefly, that really stung
>whatever's going on right now though, you'd rather he get it out of his system on you than Corona
>you shudder to think how badly he'd hurt her in such an unstable state
"I think you need help, Anon," you say, taking a few steps back and rubbing your cheek with a hoof
>"I don't need any help, I can whip your ass on my own!" he growls, stumbling toward you as he picks the belt back up
>he loses his balance, and you take a step to the side, allowing him to plow face-first into the floor
>"Hold... still"

>>29054565
>standing over him, you place a forehoof between his shoulder blades and press him into the floor
>"Damn it Shiny, get... off me!"
>you're hardly even putting any weight into it
>he begins laughing hysterically
>"Hahaha! Okay okay," he says, his entire body shaking with each laugh, "you got me, buddy, you got me! You win!"
>he tosses the belt aside, spreading his arms out in front of him
>"I surrender, you smelly little stallion!"
"I think you should go to bed, Anon. Sleep this off."
>"Don't you tell me what to do, SLAVE!" he growls harshly
"Or what?"
>"I'll whip you! I'll whip you so hard that... that..."
>he goes completely silent and simply stares off into space
>"Shiny? What's going on?"
>you blink a few times, not responding
>"How'd I get on the floor... why are you pinning me do-"
>"Did uh... did we get into a fight or something?" he stammers
>you cautiously remove your hoof, allowing him to roll over and sit upright
"You really have no idea what just happened?"
>he shakes his head
"Well, you hit me. Twice, actually. And I'm pretty sure you were about to beat Corona until I stopped you.'
>he places a hand on the side of his head and groans loudly
"Why don't we get you into bed, Anon... I think you need some rest..." you urge
>thankfully, he doesn't resist this time, nodding in agreement
>"Yeah."
>he places a hand on your withers, pulling himself to his feet as you stand next to him
>"Steve's bringing Gracie over for a visit tomorrow. She's been wanting to see y-"
>You tilt your head as you turn your neck to look back at him as he continues to steady himself by leaning on you
"That was today, Anon... actually, they just left not too long ago."
>"Oh..." he says nearly at a whisper. "Right... So, what do you want for dinner?"
"We already ate, Anon. We all had pizza. You ordered it yourself."
>"I did?"
>you have a sick feeling in the pit of your stomach as his confusion only seems to intensify

>>29054570
>Anon's odd behavior combined with what he'd told you earlier... well, it's more than a little troubling
>he might be worse off than you thought
>"My mind is just so foggy right now..."
"Shh... no more questions. Let's just get you to bed, okay? Maybe by morning the fog will have lifted."
>"Okay."
>slowly the two of you make your way down the hall, and to his room
>"You're a good boy, Shiny," he says as he takes a seat on the edge of his bed. He reaches forward and gives your ear a scratch. "Love ya, pal."
>he blinks a few times, eyes darting around the room for a moment before he smiles at you
>"Oh, good morning Shiny! I'm not late for my doctor's appointment, am I? You know, Steve was going to bring Gracie by afterward and..."
>you climb up on the bed next to him
"Anon... lay down."
>"But..."
"Please just lay down," you plead with him softly
>"I need to take a shower, maybe I'll make us pancakes for breakfast and... why do you sound so worried?"
"Anon, I'll explain everything later. Just trust me for now, okay?"
>"Of course I trust you, Corona. Let's get you hitched up to-"
>you pull back the blankets
"Sleep, Anon."
>"I don't wanna..." he says, sounding like a stubborn foal even as he swings his legs up onto the bed and rests his head on the pillow
"Anon, sleep," you say more firmly, draping the blanket back over him as he closes his eyes and begins to mumble
>you get the feeling it's going to be a long night

>>29054573
Oh no hes retarded

>>29054573
Im waiting for anon to have an episode, look at shiny, and say "holy shit a talking horse!"

>>29054573
>"Love ya, pal."
I wonder how Corona's going to feel about her master telling Shiny he loves him first.

>>29054573
Is this all we're getting? 3 posts? After almost a week of waiting?

>>29054634
She already proved to be yandere as fuck. She'd probably whip him herself.

>>29054401
He's dead. Death by pony snuggles and whipping.

>>29054573
Shiny's gonna wake up with his master's dick in his butt.

>>29054573
>Shiny gets a hard slap on the ass
>followed up by a pimp hand to the face
>shrugs it off like it's nothing
Shiny best pony.

>>29054711
Considering he's suffered some pretty harsh whippings in the past that's probably nothing in comparison.

>>29054634
She overheard it and is currently in the room, crying into her pillow (Which has Anon's face drawn on it with crayon by now). Not just for the "I love you," bit but she was looking forward to anon's hand on her ass.

>>29054744
She's crying because master will never pee in her mouth.

>>29054768
>tfw you will never catch your crazy little slave mare lapping up water from the toilet after you use it while shlicking herself

>>29054573
yep
hes gone

rip anon
dead by morning

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>>29054744

I hope shiny anon updates tomorrow
Going this long without an update is frustrating

>>29054952
There's an update above you.

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>>29054863

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>>29054573
>>29054591
>>29054614
I'm worrying out of my mind at what's wrong with anon but I can't stop laughing

>>29055008
>wrong tripcode
are you retarded or something anon?

>>29055411
check the pastebin anon
it's the right trip code

>>29055411
Nigga you dumb

I've read faq but I didn't get what is actually "the top that belongs in SiM".

anyway update of >>29045690

http://pastebin.com/U9RBTEkA

>>29054640
This is Tuesday, and he usually makes bigger updates on Wednesdays and Sundays, so this might be a "tiding over" update.

If not, then just respect that the dude has a busy life and shit. Believe me, I want this story to continue just as badly as you.

Corona causes autism
Corona a bad girl
Corona has bad autism and is therefore a bad girl

>>29054573
Shiny is a good slave - looking after his Master like that. Like he said in the last section, he can't forget that he is a slave but that doesn't mean he can't be a good boy for his Master either.

I really like that balance, SWF. You've actively moved him into a spot where he isn't so easily defined in one category or another, and it's a much more interesting story than either 100% resistant or totally compliant.

>>29056050
Shiny a good boy who loves his master.

>>29055866
Corona causes earthquakes.
Corona is the reason Japan gets fucked with tsunamis.

So much hate for Corona, again. It's sad how short people's memories are.

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>>29056160
Who's corona again?

>>29056249
>We never got that proper Corona whipping drawing we were promised
Don't remind me.

>>29056259
This is it.

>>29056267
Lol

Fuckin Picasso shit over here

>>29031659 for later. For now:

>>29030843
>>29030860
>>29030886

> Your coat stands on end, and for the briefest moment you are abundantly thankful for even the tiny but of coverage the outfit gave you.
> ...not that it would stop Catherine from being acutely aware of just how uncomfortable that thought made you, with how adept she'd proven at reading your emotions.
"Ma'am, I..."
> "Oh, dear - my terrible apologies, Cadance. You must have thought I meant I am having them... forced. No, no - you needn't apologies, dear - like I said, I know the awful, awful things some people will do to their ponies."
> Her hand is still on the back of your head.
> Soft, gentle, and only just paused from the affectionate touch that you had not pulled back from.
> She was not having her ponies raped, you were certain, because her eyes sparkled with real warmth and entire demeanor towards you was of someone who was helping calm a pony at a moment when she was most vulnerable.
> Not having them held down and entered, not reduced to the bruised and battered form that Cotton Cloudy had been when you were lead to her.
> Not that.
> But how many mares, you wonder, would not struggle - because the difference between lifting their tails and presenting and not was to be away from a woman who gave them real affection and care when others saw them simply as... things?
> Because the implied 'if' was worse than the real 'is'.
> How many stallions would she be able to find who could blind themselves to what they were doing, if it meant they had to do no more than little tasks and rutting the mares they were directed towards?
> Swallowing - hard - you dip your head to pull from her touch at last.
> Gather enough willpower to keep your voice calm, keep the emotions running wild within you out of it.
"Forigve me, Ma'am. I did misunderstand. But.. in truth, my Master hasn't considered having me... bred."
> "Oh? Really? Why on Earth not?"

>>29056311

"Directing his facilities here takes a considerable amount of time and focus. To have me subject to the... imbalances that come with carrying a foal, and the exhaustion - it would be too much. Especially at this critical moment."
> "But you are an alicorn, dear, are you not? You surely don't get tired that easily."
> Not physically, perhaps.
> But emotionally...
"He believes not, and - I agree, Ma'am. I must do my best at the task my Master has given me, and with the planned expansion - things are only going to get busier."
> "Hmm!"
> The noise isn't one of anger, but more of confusion.
> "Well, I shall simply have to have a talk with him..."
"Y-Yes, Ma'am. Although, he will not tell you anything I have not already."
> "Oh, don't you worry yourself about that."
"If I may be excused then, Ma'am - I have to go see to the other guests."
> "Of course, dear. Please, don't let me keep you."
> It's the sheer kindness and honesty in her voice that puts a shiver down your back now.
"Thank you, Ma'am."
> Trotting on into the lounge, you take a careful glance around in the corner.
> There was Thunderlane, wings out and speaking to one of the guests - presumably about his duties.
> Anonymous had taken a center seat on a quite large chair; Megan kept a smaller seat to the side, Flurry Heart sitting attentively in her lap.
> Too long your eyes linger on her, and she looks to you in return - mouth opening in a wide smile, one voluminous wing subtly half-extending in a quiet pegasus equivalent to a wave.
> Something learned from your own habits showing through, no doubt; you'd never really been able to get them out of your system after your ascension.
> How you wish she was seeing at any moment but now!
> The bridle you wear seems to constrict - pressing, squeezing, choking - as you half-extend a wing in return.

>>29056316

> But Anonymous had said not to let her see you a broken mare, and so you do not - holding your head up high and proud for as long as you can before you must break her gaze.
> And then the questioning begins.
> Interrogation after interrogation, face after face - they soon begin to blur together, as the questions are often very similar.
> "Just how much does he have you manage?"
> "What expansion does have planned already?"
> "How quickly can new ponies be integrated?"
> "How often are they removed from the workforce for misbehavior?"
> Those were the easy ones.
> The others...
> A few dare to speak their more personal questions out loud.
> "Does your master often have you wear clothes?"
> Many more more subtly make their feelings known - eyes tracing your flanks, falling to the golden bands circling your fetlocks and the gleaming chains run from them.
> Asking what he had done to "tame" you, as if you were a wild animal who might have snapped at any moment before he brought you to heel.
> When the first bottles of liquor appear, you know it is only going to get worse.
> "Anonymous!"
> Someone's voice is raised.
> "Anonymous, we've all heard what you're telling us - what you're pitching for us. But, why don't you show us? Give us a little tour of what is going on?"
> Your head snaps around, the weight of the little humiliations multiplying by the second.
> If you were to go traipsing around the camp like this...
> Pondering for a moment, Anonymous nods.
> He leans over, whispering something in Megan's ear.
> Eagerly nodding, she leaps from her seat - Flurry Heart close on her heels.
> More than a few eyes track them as they leave the room.
> "I think it's a fair request to see exactly what I'm asking you to invest in. Come, Cadance."
> With a sick feeling in your stomach you move to his side.

>>29056325

> Cool air was usually a good treatment for nausea - something you'd discovered when carrying Flurry Heart - but stepping out the front door into the night air did nothing but make you feel even worse.
"Master..."
> You speaks softly to Anonymous.
"Master, they'll already have gone off-shift for the night. Gone in to dinner. There won't be much work to show..."
> At least you could make this as brief as possible.
> Maybe even get back inside before dinner started to break up.
> "I know, Cadance, but I'm sure we can give them something. Maybe even let them talk with a few of my ponies."
> Celestia preserve you.
> That was the last thing you needed...
> But Anonymous' mind is made up, and out you go.
> Not even walking, but riding in a small herd of the little electric carts that the security used.
> As if actually making use of their feet, potentially touching the ground with their perfectly-shined and polished shoes would cripple them for life.
> Touches of bitterness reach up from your throat as the group rides into the camp.
> The streets are relatively empty, but not by any means entirely so.
> With every moment that you pass further in to the camp, another pony looks up to watch your pasting.
> Lays eyes on your humiliation.
> Don't let them see you a broken mare.
> But every pony has their limit, and the your eyes grow damp despite every drop of willpower going in to crushing those emotions.
> Eventually the carts come to a halt in front of one of the major workshops - a cloudstuff packing facility.
> Some of the day's work still lingers there, a semimorphous cloud tied to one of the building's open ends to be torn apart and packed into specially-prepared pillows and mattresses within.
> Two pegasi still buzz around the cloud, securing it until it could be used tomorrow.
> Anonymous stands, stepping out of his cart and motioning to the facility.

>>29056334

> "Most of my products are worked in relatively small facilities like this one, making use of the ponies' unique abilities. This also protects me to some degree from individual markets crashing."
> Someone in the car with you stirs.
> "Doesn't he have trouble finding ponies who can work on that level...?"
"No, Sir."
> You shake your head, glad to have something - anything - to pull your mind away from other thoughts.
"In our - in the past many unorganized areas had weather patrols, small groups of local ponies who handled the weather in their local area. Most pegasi got, at the very least, a basic training in how to move and form clouds properly."
> "And now they're passing that on here."
"Yes, Sir. It's the same thing with Unicorn and Earth Pony skills - we have a few ponies who know those skills, and can transfer them to new arrivals."
> "Isn't that risky? Can't they sabotage the product - make lightning from those?"
"No more than you can sabotage shoveling earth. It is a very, very basic skill... and we have not had any instances of sabotage."
> Yet.

Since this was a request, is there anything in particular that they should go see? Some of the other stuff being produced? Where the ponies live? The medical clinic? Something else? Or just prefer I breeze over that and move things on?

>>29056346
Poor Cadance has suffered enough, plus like she pointed out, working hours are done and the ponies have gone home for the night. There's not much more to show right now.

>>29056346
If the guests don't mind seeing an empty work area, I'd take them there first before the guard station. Living quarters seems a bit too risky. Medical ward would bring up some pretty bad questions, I think. Plus Mellowheart is probably still a pretty loose canon.

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Writing is hard.

>>29057185
The hardest.
Writing is diamonds.

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>>29054565
IS TIME

>>29057426
That sucks man.
I won't write unless I get harshly w-
*Drastically changes the subject*
Corona a cute.

>>29056160

Corona always a shit.

>>29057525
Corona will be the most loving, loyal, hardworking pony in the whole world now that she is learning her lesson. Corona did something shit, but she a good girl.

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>>29054573
Great, Corona broke his master.

Now who is going to want a ponie that is responsible for the mental deterioration of its owner?

Your fate is the glue factory

Personally and setting aside the side comic situation I must point out that testify the mental decline of a perfectly healthy person is something extremely oppressive, I say that Anon could not be recovered in the future, but now, seeing and experiencing the situation is devastating for relatives of the victim

>>29057540

Nah, she's a little broken bastard.

>>29054573
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>you stretch and yawn loudly, joints snapping in the cold morning air
>it's been a while since you slept so well
>you find yourself gravitating toward a nearby source of warmth, still not opening your eyes as your body fights to cling to a few more precious seconds of rest
>instinctively you wrap your arms around the warm body next to you, murmuring and muttering as your eyes slowly open
>the first thing you see is the white coat of the stallion lying on top of the blankets beside you
>he takes slow, deep, steady breaths, his nostrils flaring and a breathy nicker escaping his throat as his lip quivers, still sound asleep, an ear subtly twitching as he dreams
>you don't remember him climbing into bed with you
>maybe he had another nightmare or something
>you sit up in bed, careful not to disturb him
>though your effort is in vain, as he's soon lifting his head, blinking his eyes open with a deep yawn of his own
"Good morning, Shiny."
>he sits up on his haunches, arching his back as he stretches his neck toward the ceiling
>"Let me guess, you don't remember anything about last night, do you?"
>you hesitate for a few moments as you attempt to recall the events of the previous day
"I just remember Steve was over, we had a few beers and..."
>your eyes shoot open
"I didn't try to uh... do stuff with you, did I?"
>his expression matches yours the instant he realizes what you're thinking
>"Oh CELESTIA no, nothing like that..." he says with a frustrated snort
"Oh thank heavens..." you say, putting a hand on your forehead and closing your eyes. "Don't know how I'd be able to look at myself in the mirror again if I tried something like that with one of you..."
>you chuckle
"I get kinda lovey dovey sometimes when I've had a few too many and-"
>"You weren't. You didn't," you're abruptly interrupted
>he hops down from the bed

>>29057565
>"And you weren't exactly affectionate, either," he says as he starts toward the bedroom door
"Oh... Why were you in here?"
>"Someone had to keep an eye on you. You were totally out of it. You hit me. Angrily," he says
>you bite your lip as you swing your legs over the edge of the bed, resting your hands on your knees as your head hangs with a hint of shame
"I don't remember that..."
>"Well I do. You weren't yourself. I figured it was because of that bump on your head, so I can't really blame you for it too much I guess. But you should know, you probably would have hurt Corona badly if someone hadn't intervened."
>Corona...
>you quietly hope you weren't too harsh with her yesterday
>better go check on her to make sure
>you stand up, noticing that it's a little easier to keep your balance than it had been for the last couple of days
"I appreciate it, Shiny..."
>he simply shrugs
>"I don't expect a pat on the back for exercising a little common sense... and besides, keeping an eye on you was as much for my and Corona's sake as it was yours, so my motives weren't entirely selfless. Now if you'll excuse me, I think I'm going to snag some of that leftover pizza for breakfast."
>following closely after him, you slowly turn the handle to their bedroom door as you and Shining part ways

>>29057525
>Anon gets tired of Corona
>snaps
>kills her
>cooks her
>eats her
>Shiny comes back from spending weekend with Gracie
>finds Anon on the toilet
>Anon is laughing like a maniac
>"What's so funny? Where's Corona?"
"CORONA A SHIT!"

>>29057577
>the little mare is sound asleep on her bed, and you quietly slip into the room, sitting down next to her, just watching her sleep
>her eyes open as your weight shifts on the bed, and right away her ears flatten as her head lifts off the pillow
>"Master... I'm sorry... did I oversleep?"
"No."
>she flinches when you reach toward her and gently scratch her ear
>"P...please don't, Master..." she says, shrinking away from your touch
>her demeanor isn't fearful, but full of shame as though she feels she doesn't deserve any expression of affection from you
"Corona, I think it's time we cleared the air between us."
>she avoids eye contact with you, not moving or saying anything in response
"I want to make you an offer," you say as you scoot closer to her, and she flicks an ear in your direction. "I don't need to hear excuses or explanations about what happened. It's in the past now. I just need to know I can trust you to never do anything like that again, no matter what. I can tell you regret it... whether that's for my sake or yours, I don't really care. I know you're sorry."

>>29057586
>"Yes, Master..." she mutters
"I gave Shiny a chance for a clean slate, so I guess it's only really fair that I offer you the same thing."
>"Clean slate?"
"A chance to start over. For us to both move past what happened."
>she slowly tilts her head toward you
>"Start over?"
>you nod
"Why don't we go ahead and get that belting out of the way, and after that we can pretend nothing ever happened. Your punishment will be over. You can have your tub and outdoor privileges back as well. I don't want this to keep hanging over us and causing tension... maybe this will assuage your guilt a little as well."
>"I don't know if I can ever forget, Master..."
>you shake your head
"I don't expect you to forget. I don't think either one of us will. I just want to put this behind us, and I'm sure you do too."
>"I... I don't know, Master... I..."
>you place a hand on top of her head, and she flinches again
"I just need a yes or no, Corona. Are you ready to move on or not?"
>she begins trembling, swallowing a lump in her throat as she finally looks into your eyes
>"yessir..."

>>29057595
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>you hop down from the bed, following closely on Master's heels, your head drooping as your heart climbs into your throat
>in a way, his offer comes as something of a relief
>you know he's right
>this is the only way you're ever going to forgive yourself for hurting him
>well, maybe not forgive yourself
>but at least be able to look at him without your stomach twisting up in knots with guilt
>you shudder as he closes and locks his bedroom door behind him
>briefly glancing up at him, you see no joy or pleasure in his expression
>in fact, you see nothing but doubt and hesitation
"W...what should I do, Master?"
>"Just lean over the bed for me, girl. Keep your tail out of the way and don't squirm around too much."
>you bite your lip as he takes the belt in his hand and doubles it over
>it's not a whip, but you're still shivering in anticipation of the pain
>regardless of how much you feel like you deserve this, you start to have second thoughts as your eyes dart between him and the door
>something doesn't feel right...
"Master..." you whimper, scooting back on your haunches
>"Shhhh..." he says calmly as he approaches you. "Lean over the bed, Corona. Let's get this over with."
"I... I don't..." you say, clamping your tail tightly against your rump
>"Don't make this any harder on either of us than it already is. Lean over the bed," he says a bit more firmly.
>your efforts to steel your resolve are fruitless, your shaking and trembling intensifying as you slowly turn around, laying on your belly on top of his bed
>your hind legs dangle over the side, tail still clamped down tightly as you close your eyes
>you jump when Master places one of his pillows underneath your head
>"This is gonna hurt, Corona. It's supposed to hurt. But I promise you'll be okay. If you need to cry out you go right ahead."

>>29057607
>you bite a corner of the pillow, already pressing your face into it as Master takes a step back
>"Now move your tail, girl," he says softly. "Move your tail out of the way for me."
>when you fail to comply, you feel him tug on it, lifting it to the side
>"Keep it right there."
>all at once the sound of the leather implement sailing through the air, followed by a deafening "CRACK!" meets your ears
>you're taken aback, unprepared for the sharp, sudden pain on the skin of your rump as the first blow is delivered, which the soft winter coat that's just starting to grow in on your hide does little to cushion
>a gasp catches in your throat, but before you can utter a sound a second "CRACK!" as loud as a gunshot echoes off the walls of the room
>your body flinches and a loud whinny finally erupts from your muzzle, a whinny which quickly breaks down into a stuttering sob as a third "CRACK!" mercilessly assaults your ears, followed by a fourth and fifth in rapid succession
>your tail immediately moves to block the next blow, but you feel it tugged up and out of the way once again - and held there this time
>every instinct is telling you to jump from the bed and burst through the door, to escape the searing pain on your hindquarters
>or to buck
>kick
>bite
>fight back with all your strength
>anything to make the pain stop
>but you grit your teeth and force yourself to endure it, your front hooves curling over the pillow in front of you, pulling it tightly against your muzzle as your body heaves with loud sobs
>you lose count after the fifteenth stroke, hyperventilating as the pain becomes overwhelming
>it's too much for you to handle, and you feel yourself scrambling up onto the bed, trying to climb over it
>though a pair of hands quickly wraps around your hind fetlocks and pulls you back into position
>you look back over your shoulder just as two more strokes connect, the sound of each every bit as harsh and merciless as the lash of a whip

>>29057618
>there's considerable force behind the swings, though you still see no hint of emotion on Master's face as he delivers several more blows
>it occurs to you at some point that you'd begun to beg him to stop, though your pleas for mercy fall on deaf - though not unsympathetic - ears, as you see tears welling up in his eyes
>his face is red, and he's beginning to sweat and breath heavily with exertion
>he wavers and wobbles, stumbling for a moment before swinging again, this time connecting with your hind legs just above your hocks, where you immediately feel a fresh pair of welts rising on what up until now had been an untouched area
>you gasp and choke on your cries, just wanting the pain to stop
>nobody's hurt you this bad since... since...
>you try to shake off the thought
>Master is different...
>CRACK!
>he's not like the others...
>CRACK! CRACK!
>he...
>CRACK!
>he has to be finished soon...
>CRACK!
>surely he's seen by now that you've had enough
>CRACK! CRACK!
>he knows how sorry you are...
>CRACK!
>that you've been punished sufficiently
>CRACK!
>you hear a loud banging on the bedroom door, the sound of your cries having long since stopped
>it takes considerable effort just to inhale, feeling yourself on the edge of consciousness
>CRACK!
>your entire backside is on fire
>from your croup and tail dock
>all the way down the backs of your hind legs
>he's worked you over good
>you didn't know it was possible to be in this much pain
>it doesn't even matter how many more blows he delivers at this point
>you let out a low, long and mournful wail when you finally manage to catch your breath
>each welt throbs and stings, feeling as though the blows are continuing every time
>even though you realize by now that Master has finally stopped

>>29057625
>you choke, and cough, and sputter
>you just want the fire in your backside to be put out
>but this is what happens, isn't it?
>when you're a slave
>when you disobey your Master
>when you hurt him
>you deserve this
>and if he decided to lash you with the belt a thousand more times
>or even take a whip to your miserable hide
>you'd deserve that too
>you belong to him
>you're his slave
>just a slave...
>a stupid, disobedient little slave...
>he's sitting on the bed next to you, a hand resting on your withers as your tail flails and swishes wildly, uncontrollably from the agony
>he calmly pulls you into his lap
>you'll be a good girl from now on
>you don't ever want to hurt this badly again
>you hear yelling, and in a haze of suffering you briefly lift your head to see Shining Armor sitting on his haunches next to the bed
>you can't tell what he's saying, but he's very angry
>he should be careful not to take such a tone with his Master...
>but Master doesn't seem upset or angry
>instead he focuses on you
>though he does nothing to soothe or stop the pain still pulsing through your backside, he begins softly stroking your back as he pulls you close
>"It's over, girl. It's over. It's all over," he says to you softly
>"I forgive you..."

>>29057635
>you writhe in his grasp, and finally - mercifully - the pain begins to dull little by little
>a wave of relief washes over you as he repeats himself
>"I forgive you, Corona. I forgive you..."
>Shining is still carrying on, but you don't even care
>all that matters is that you're forgiven
>your Master forgives you
>he's not going to get rid of you
>he doesn't hate you for what you did
>you nearly killed...
>you nearly...
>it doesn't matter now
>you're forgiven
>you're forgiven...
>a smile tugs at the corners of your mouth, and your trembling ceases as you relax into Master's embrace
>and it IS an embrace, he's not simply tolerating your presence
>he's hugging you close
>stroking you affectionately
>he didn't enjoy what he just did
>he never wanted to hurt you
>he's here for you
>he's different
>he's not like the others...
>they wouldn't have cared how badly they just hurt you...
>they wouldn't hold you like this
>they wouldn't love you like he does
"I love you, Master..." you coo with your eyes closed, in an exhausted and delirious state even as the throbbing on your rump continues "I love you, Master..."

>>29046239
>baww why cant THIS general among millions have more smut
go the fuck away

>>29057643
>just got her ass beat damn near unconscious
>still loves her master
Yep, Corona's fucking BROKEN lads.

>>29046239
I don't fucking get it, mate.
Everbody is bitching about this generals or stale wish forfillment or everything ending in some fucking at the end but when we got a HQ thread they just don't stop bitching...

>>29057595
>>29057586
>lets just pretend my horses ptsd is going to go away because we pretend nothing ever happened
god damnit anon.

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I can give you faggots lewd, but I can guarantee you won't like it. Shall I?

>>29057778
Nah.
For me, I'm burned out on lewds. Not only do they not interest me anymore, at least at current, they actually deter me from reading.
But hey, that's just me.

>>29056346
All of the above, and also add the prison and the school, only most of the guests are looking for a defect or a lie in the miraculous and cooperative farm of Anon to press it with advantageous conditions for themselves, or are simply amazed and jealous of the success that has been Anon to allow some degree of autonomy to their ponies and the good results obtained with this idea , and some fear the power that this can achieve if it expands its operations and influence.

>>29057643
Wowww. That was extremely harsh, but I'll be honest, even though it sounds horrible.

In the context of slavery, this was good for Corona. In one punishment, she's been freed from her guilt, AND come to the understanding that Anon is not her old master. It was going to take something very harsh, something severe, to truly get rid of the guilt she was feeling and get that clean slate, and that's what she got.

Although, I can't help but feel that his mind's state had something to do with it. I mean, I wouldn't be surprised if Corona's got some bad marks on her rear, like blistered bad.

>>29057766
I think that's why Shiny's so mad. I mean he would have had to bust down that door to get in there with it being locked. This also shows just how deep into stockholm syndrome Corona is. She was just seriously abused, but all she cares about is that her master forgives her for what she did.

>>29057815
She's probably missing some fur on her back end at the very least. She was whipped damn near unconscious with that belt - and the state of mind she's in suggests she may actually even be in shock. That's going to leave some nasty marks.

>>29057693
I like how you twisted what I said into a condescending greentext format to make me look petty

You win, my good sir, I'll just suck your dick and then kill myself.

>>29057565
>Don't know how I'd be able to look at myself in the mirror again if I tried something like that with one of you...
Anon is squicked out at the idea of sexualing his ponies. Corona's never going to get master's d.

>>29057860
I don't think she was trying to get a master's degree. I don't think ponies are allowed to go to college.

>>29057867
She already has her PhD in Snuggleable Waifuology anyway.

>>29057778

I could do the same.

I could write quite a bit of smut.

Everyone would hate it.

>>29057858
>>29057880
I can't wait until the whole thread gets blueballed by shiny and corona ending without corona ever getting romantically involved with her master.

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>>29057892

Quite a few people were expecting Maud and Anon to fuck.

I laughed.

>>29057643
I think Corona just developed a belt whipping fetish.

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>>29057913
WHEN?

>SeeOP pic
>Oh Hey thats a cute OC maybe I should draw for this thread
>Read a bit
>Its grimderp Fuck yeah Humanity bullshit all around

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>>29057999
If you don't like it it just means you got pleb taste.
Also you are wrong.

>>29057999
trips confirm retard

>grimderp

You obviously haven't read jack shit.

>>29057778
I'll check back in 12 hours to see if I need to write lewds. It will not involve any fat, diaper, vore, scat, mutilation, or cock-on-cock action, but you will hate it and hate yourself for requesting it.

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>>29058016
Can't be worse than mine.

>>29057999
You say you read some, but you didn't really read any, did you?

What grimderp have we had? Trainer Anon and aDiaD? Maybe Slaveventure or Celestia's Maiden Voyage?

As for HFY!, I can't think of any.

corona is a bad girl

>>29058079
And now she knows better. She got her little hiney spanked.

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>>29058060
>tfw everybody forgets about your story
It's okay I am simply not good enough.

>>29058090
Maybe your story didn't involve enough mutilated ponies to be sufficiently grimderp?

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>>29058096
It did but no explicitly descripted.
Gotta work on that.

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>>29058090
>tfw everybody remembers about your story.

I don't even see Maiden Voyage as that grimdark, despite people telling me it is. What is it about that story?

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>>29058220
MOAAARRRR!!!

>>29058220
The Fluttershy rape, how broken Dash is, but mostly the complete lack of hope for anything other than the two swapping places.

>>29057643
this story sucks ass

>>29057643
daww

but man is she fucked up

>>29058266
dubs confirm corona a shit

>>29058220
The story and its characters are moderately grimdark - >>29058236 gets what I'd say in that respect.

But on top of that you have the background - bioweapons were used, a whole lot of people died, and lingering resentment to outright hostility means there's really doesn't seem to be hope of a reconciliation in the near future.

>>29058266
>>29058272
samefag confirm a samefagging fag

>>29058266
>He doesn't like getting his ass sucked.

Get out.

>>29057643
I've never read a story where someone made abuse seem so cute.

>>29058406
>discipline is abuse

>>29057643
fuk man that was awful. i hope she's not bleeding. they seriously need to get her some ice.

>>29058522
No. She gets no relief from the pain. The whole point was that it was SUPPOSED to hurt, and hurt BAD. That's why her master is simply holding her, instead of rubbing the parts where he whipped her to try to help ease the pain.

>>29057643
so... she just told anon she loves him
that's kind of a big deal

>>29058582
The whole point was to get it done and over with. Not to make her suffer all day or for the next few days.

>>29056346
Cadances day of degradation will not be complete without bumping into Sunburst. The friend she conspired with, and who then took the extra 30 lashes from her just so they could hang out togather. What will he think when he sees her serving Anons friends, in her humiliating outfit, trailed by Flurry Heart contravening her own punishment?

>>29058777
The sting needs to set in for a little while. It really needs to sink in just how severely she fucked up. The worst part is over, anon is under no obligation to ease her pain. He's comforting her, and that's all she needs - and quite frankly deserves. At worst, she'll hurt for the rest of the day. I don't think much real damage was done.

>>29058782
He'll know it wasn't her decision or her choice. He's not a fucking retard.

>>29057643
how many lashes did corona take total?

>>29057643
Pretty much what I was expecting, and very well done. Thank you.

>>29058800
Slaves don't have any good choices, but they still choose. Sunburst understands why, but their relationship might change nonetheless.

>>29058817
Probably 50, if not more.

>>29058846
She didn't have a choice this time.

Shiny is just mad because he wanted to watch. Stand there with his horsecock slapping his belly and dribbling pre with every crack of master's belt against the little blue mare's rump.

>>29058888
quads be check'd