Spanking Thread #36: Imminent Spankings for Inappropriate Spanking

I have exams to deal with at the moment, but I'll try to do some work on my story in progress if I can find the time.

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Alright, I swore I was done posting stories on /mlp/...breaking them up into 2,000 character blocks is a pain in the ass.

*sigh*
But here goes...
"Twiley and the Ultimate Horn Job".

>>29000584
1/11
>It had been about 2 years since the barrier between universes had been pierced.
>Physicists working in the human world...magical scholars in the pony world;
>At the same instant they discovered something and the two were connected.

>Travel between the realms was not as easy as stepping through a mirror though.
>Think more like the early years of the space program.
>Dangerous, energy intensive and massively expensive.
>There had been failures, accidents...lives had been lost on both sides.
>But the project to normalize travel between universes pressed onward.

>Most of the missions were unmanned...or unponied.
>But a few brave souls from either side were selected as ambassadors.
>Because of your extensive collection of hard-core horse pornography, you, Anon, were selected to be among these first human explorers.
>Your 3 year mission; to maintain the inter-universe gate
>to facilitate transfers of cultural material
>to learn about Equestria's culture and teach the ponies about humanity.
>Okay, enough background?
>That's not why you're reading this story, is it?
>Fine...I'll get on with it.

>You are at Twilight Sparkle's castle in a backwater town called Ponyville.
>The inter-universe gate was located here instead of Canterlot or the Crystal City
>just in case it exploded...nothing of value would be lost.
>Yesterday there was an unmanned mission, a shipment of books from Earth.
>So today you and Twilight have the job of cataloging it all before it's made available to the academic community and eventually the general pony public
>And of course, the jokers on the Earth side of the gate slipped in a little surprise for you;
>A stack of skin mags
"Just in case you get tired of horse pussy.
"Sincerely;
"Your buddies back on Earth."
>Of course, Twilight eagerly grabbed those first.

>>29000592
2/11
"Wow, human females sure are flexible..."
>It's ironic because she's reading the magazine upside-down, balanced on a stack of books
"You're one to talk."
>She gives you no response, she just goes on flipping through the pages of hard-core porn.
"Hey Anon, what do you call this one?"
>Twilight leans over to show you the page she's reading
>The stack of books topples over and she falls to the floor
"Ow!"
>You just shake your head
>Twi is nerdy and clumsy...you've seen her hit the ground dozens of times
>You barely even notice anymore
"This one here, Anon, where the human mare wraps her finger-thingies around the man-stallion's wiener."
>You take a look
"That's called a 'hand-job', Twi."
>She seems to like it.
"Oh...clever...because you primates have hands instead of hooves."
>You chuckle
"Seems like the female could really hurt the male if she did it wrong.
"Is it considered an advanced technique?"
>This time you shake your head
"No, actually it's a lower-level sex act. Usually the first thing young human teens experiment with.
"Remember how I explained baseball analogies? It's 'third base'."
>Twilight nods in understanding
"Oh, okay. So it's like a horn-job."
>Now it's you who needs an explanation
"Sorry, I keep forgetting you don't have magic in your world.
"It's kinda the same thing...the first thing a unicorn filly does with a colt she likes."
>Twilight rolls her eyes and blushes
"It's also the act that absolutely RUINED any chance I ever had for a normal dating life in school."
>You sense a story coming.
"Oh yeah? How did that happen?"
>Still a little embarrassed, Twi plops down next to you and begins;
"Well, I was about 13...attending Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns..."

>>29000597
3/11
>Twi gets into her tale.
"I was in the 7th Grade, and I was kind of a dork...even worse than I am now if you can believe it. It seemed like ALL the other fillies in my class had at least kissed a boy, I felt like the only one who hadn't. Even Moondancer had smooched a pegasus colt when she was away at summer camp. MOONDANCER, for Celestia's sake! That filly smelled like cheese and had eyeglass crust that could be carbon-dated! Even she got to kiss a colt before me!"

"There was a boy I sorta liked. I had filly-crushes on some handsome older colts, like any schoolfilly my age, but they were totally out of my league. Beetle Brand was actually my friend...he was my age and just as geeky and awkward as me. He had a magnifying glass for a cutie mark and could stare at an ant-hill for hours. When I saw the Seniors hang him up by his shorts in gym class I knew he was the colt for me!"
>You laugh. Young nerds in love.

>Twilight continues...
"Beetle and I read together a lot, but I don't think he ever thought of me as anything but a study-buddy. I decided I was gonna change that. There was a hallway on the upper floors of Princess Celestia's school where the older students went to make out and do...other stuff. Every pony called it 'Lover's Lane'. You got in trouble if an adult staff member caught you messing around...but teachers usually didn't go up there. It was considered a pretty safe spot."

"So one day I borrowed a little perfume from Lemon Hearts, brushed my mane really nice and got Beetle Brand in a good mood...I brought him a new book about bugs.
"I had a plan; I wasn't just gonna kiss him...all the other fillies had done that already. If I was going to stop being the biggest dork in the 7th grade I had to jump past all of them."

>>29000606
4/11
>Twilight sighed nostalgically
"I know what you're thinking, Anon. I was doing it for all the wrong reasons. I wanted to be cool for a change. It stinks always being the biggest loser in school, being the baby who's always last to do important things. I guess I wanted to be the big-horse on campus for a change."
"Anyway, I'd found a naughty magazine that one of the older fillies left in the girls' room. It had an article; 'How to drive your stallion wild with the Ultimate Horn-Job.' I snuck that magazine home and hid it under my mattress. I read it over and over again until the pages started to fall out. I even practiced on a carrot. You know how I get when there's a new spell to learn...I was obsessed."

"So the big day arrived. My friend Beetle loved the new bug book I'd found, and he even said I smelled pretty today! So I asked him if he maybe wanted to go up to the 4th floor and hang out someplace a little more private that the library.
"He was pretty nervous about that. It was mostly older students who went up there to fool around...and even they got in big trouble if they got busted on 'Lover's Lane'. It was no secret; at Princess Celestia's School 'big trouble' meant you were sent to the disciplinary office to get your rump busted with a wooden paddle. Nopony wanted that!"
"So Beetle wasn't really sure about it, but I talked him into it. Poor guy...I honestly didn't take no for an answer. I sorta guilted him into it over the new book, like he owed me. I really felt bad about it later...but we'll get to that."

"Luckily, Lover's Lane was empty. All the cool kids were at some kind of sports game or a pep rally or something so us egg-heads had it all to ourselves for once.
Beetle Brand would have been perfectly satisfied to just kiss...or just hang out and read about bugs, but like I said I didn't give him a lot of choice."

>>29000614
5/11
"I made Beetle lay down on his back, like this..."
>Twilight shows you, laying you out flat on the floor with your head up on a stack of books
"He was worried about getting caught, but I told him everything was going to be okay. I told him I had a new spell to show him. Like I said, I'd been practicing on a carrot, but there's only so much you can do with vegetables. A colt's wiener feels totally different the first time you touch it with your magic. But the instant I did Beetle stopped complaining. He got hard so quick! I was a little freaked out but I figured it was proof I was doing it right...so I started doing the spell from the magazine.
"I really can't explain what I was doing to a being without magic...it's sorta like touching and rubbing something but deeper, like I was touching every part of his penis and balls, inside and out. He was rock-hard, breathing heavily with a glazed look in his eyes, so I figured I was doing it right. I concentrated harder...little magical sparks were coming off my horn and falling down on his dong, cracking & popping as they touched. Beetle Brand was all warm and sweaty...I could feel the heat coming off him and his peanut-butter breath was hot and damp like the jungle."
>You feel pervy for enjoying a story about two kids getting it on, but you have to admit it's giving you a wiggle.
"I didn't know how long I could keep it up...or how long Beetle could last. He opened his eyes wide, they had this weird look like he was afraid but it didn't register with me. The magazine said a stallion makes funny faces right before he's about to orgasm...I was just excited that I was gonna make a boy cum on my first try!"
"Beetle began to stammer, but he couldn't get any words out. I just smiled...I felt like an expert. Nailed the ultimate horn-job spell first try. He's gonna remember this day his whole life!

"I didn't realize he was trying to warn me about something."

>>29000619
6/11
"Just as I was about to bring him to climax I felt a painful yank on my ear.
"Not a magical yank either...I got grabbed from behind! It was Mr. Buckets the school janitor. He'd come up to mop the hallway and I was so focused on Beetle Brand's dong I didn't even hear him or his squeaky mop bucket come up behind me. Beetle saw him, but I was working his junk so hard he couldn't get the words out to warn me.
We.
Were.
Busted."

>Twilight sighs and continues her story;
"We tried to beg Mr. Buckets to let us off with a warning...it was our first time and we PROMISED never to do it again. Yeah, he'd heard it all before. He dragged both our butts to the school disciplinary office and sat us down on the bench to await our doom."

"See, the way it goes at Princess Celestia's School, one teacher is in charge of the disciplinary office at a time. There's a schedule...if some professor doesn't have a class to teach they're in charge of discipline for an hour or two. That way one staff member doesn't get stuck doing all the paddling. Mr. Free Verse the poetry teacher was on duty when we arrived. He was a big stallion, so we were both scared out of our wits.
"We had to wait on the bench outside the office while Mr. Buckets explained what he had seen. I tried to apologize to Beetle Brand...this had been my idea and now he was gonna get punished for it. I felt awful, but when I opened my mouth the secretary across the hall shushed me and told us 'No talking!". All we could do was give each other sympathetic looks.
>You bring up a point Twilight probably hadn't considered;
"So Beetle didn't even get to climax? Poor guy probably had blue balls on top of everything."
>Twilight groans.
"Ohhh, no! I hadn't even thought of that! Now I feel even worse about it!"

>>29000627
7/11
>But Twilight continues her tale:
"Anyway, the door opened. Mr. Buckets left and gave us a disapproving look...Mr. Verse came out and scolded us right there in the hallway. He yelled at us for lewd behavior, for violating school standards, about how foals our age shouldn't even know about stuff like this yet. Oh boy...we were miserable and we hadn't even been paddled yet."
"Once he was done lecturing Mr. Verse ordered Beetle Brand into the office first. He gulped...his eyes were already teary. Poor guy. None of this was his idea, he just wanted to hang out in the library and read bug books. It was all my fault and I felt terrible about it but I wasn't even allowed to apologize."

"In about a minute it started. There was no doubt what was going on in that office. When I heard that wooden paddle smack his bare rear I almost jumped out of my skin. Poor Beetle couldn't even man-up and take it like a stallion either...he was bawling his lungs out by the second whack and it didn't end there.
"I counted...it was all I could do. You know what a geek I am and numbers gave me comfort while I listened to my friend get his heinie spanked...a spanking that was my fault!
"I wished it would stop at six, but I knew that wasn't realistic.
"I hoped it would stop at ten, but it kept going.
"I expected it to stop at twelve but that terrible paddle kept on smacking Beetle's rear.
"I prayed to Celestia that it would stop at fifteen, but poor Beetle kept on howling.
"Not only did I want his suffering to end...I knew I'd be getting the same punishment in just a few minutes!
"Finally, once Mr. Verse reached eighteen the terrible sound stopped. My friend kept crying for a few more minutes, gradually calming down. His bawling turned into sobs, his sobs turned to sniffles, and finally the door opened.

>>29000635
8/11
"I wanted to throw myself down and beg forgiveness. This was all my fault.
"But Beetle Brand scrambled past with barely any eye contact. What little I saw in his face wasn't blame...it was shame for the way he'd handled his spanking and for me seeing him this way. I wanted to hug him and apologize with all my heart, but he was gone in a flash. I got a good view of his rump...angry bright pink showed through his brown fur.
"Soon my own purple bottom would look the same."

>Twilight gave a long pause in her story for dramatic effect.
"But Mr. Free Verse didn't summon me into the office. I waited on the bench.
"Soon he came out and I jumped, thinking my doom was near, but he just told me to sit there. So I waited while he had a quiet conversation with the secretary."

"An hour passed.
"A few more teachers came to the office but I couldn't hear their conversation. I wanted to put my ear to the door and listen but that secretary was watching me like a hawk. Surely they were talking about me...but what were they saying? Why hadn't I been paddled yet? I didn't want to be spanked, but waiting was pure agony."
>You think you know why.
"It's because you were Princess Celestia's protégé, isn't it?"
>Twilight nodded
"Yeah, eventually I heard a few whispers and figured that out. The teachers weren't sure what to do about me.
"That just made me worry even more.
"What is the Princess going to say?
"Am I going to lose my position as her personal student?
"Am I going to get kicked out of school?
"What are my parents gonna say? They're gonna figuratively kill me!

"I got no answers, only more time to worry. I was tied up in knots, my stomach was doing somersaults. Another hour went by...me sitting miserable on the bench as grown-ups discussed my fate.
"And then my answer came walking down the hall."

>>29000642
9/11
>Twilight's story reached its climax.
"All the whispering and debate stopped when Princess Celestia arrived. She didn't say anything to the teachers, just gave them a polite nod, which they returned by bowing.
"Then she leaned down to me, sniffling on the bench.

"Good afternoon, Twilight. Are you okay?"
I couldn't really answer, I was too scared and ashamed. I nodded.
"I ran into Mr. Buckets in the hallway and he told me you'd gotten into a bit of trouble."
What could I say? "Y-Yes ma'am."
Princess Celestia never got angry. She just nodded and replied "Well, I suppose giving your first horn-job is a rite of passage for a young filly. But if it is then suffering the consequences when she gets caught is a rite of passage as well."
The Princess stood up straight and announced to all "I expect the school can handle this matter appropriately according to its rules."

"And that was it. She gave every pony a nod and continued walking down the hallway.
"Oh boy was I relieved...the Princess wasn't furious at me...I wasn't getting expelled from school...but now I had another problem.
"Mr. Free Verse was gone, he had a class to teach, and now the teacher on-duty was Ms. Inkwell.
"Ms. Inkwell was a wonderful, experienced teacher but she was old-school to the core.
"The school had rules about how many whacks of the paddle were given for each crime but Ms. Inkwell didn't give a flying feather about rules! When a naughty filly or colt got sent to her office they got as many whacks as she felt they deserved, regardless of what the rule book said. Sometimes it was less, sometimes it was more but there was no arguing either way...every student knew arguing with Ms. Inkwell always got you more!"

"Satisfied that the crisis was resolved and none of them would be losing their jobs, the other teachers departed. Now it was just me and Ms. Inkwell."

>>29000651
10/11
"Ms. Inkwell didn't waste an instant. She grabbed my ear and led me straight into that office. The teacher in charge of discipline had a set on procedures to follow, they were supposed to make the unlucky colt or filly bend over a desk and stay there for the regulation number of swats, but not that old mare!
"She dragged a chair into the center of the room, sat right down and dropped me over her lap. Ms. Inkwell made sure I got a good long look at the paddle when she levitated it over...it sent a chill down my spine. There were a few sharp words about how unacceptable my behavior was, that well-raised, well educated young fillies shouldn't be acting like wild tramps and as the Princess' private student my standards should be even higher.
>Twilight rolled her eyes a little as she told the story
"To be honest, all I was worried about at that moment was my poor tushie.

"And oh boy was I right to be worried! As soon as she was done lecturing Ms. Inkwell lit up my rear-end like a bonfire. She must have laid on 5 good whacks before I even had the chance to scream...and every one of those spanks was HARD.
"I'd counted poor Beetle Brand's smacks but there was no counting for me. Ms. Inkwell laid them on so fast that it felt like one continuous spank. Seriously, my butt felt like it was on fire. I honestly have no idea how long it lasted...I was just howling and crying out of control, I couldn't even beg for it to stop. Was it more than 18 smacks or less? To this day I have no idea, I just knew I never wanted to be across Ms. Inkwell's lap ever again!"
>It sounded pretty harsh, but Twilight laughed as she told her tale.
>A painful, but treasured memory of her fillyhood.

>>29000655
Last/11
"Well, eventually it ended, but I don't know when.
"My butt was still on fire a LONG time after she was done. Ms. Inkwell let me cry for a while and catch my breath but she didn't dole out much sympathy. In her estimation I'd gotten exactly what a naughty filly deserved for committing a lewd, unladylike act on a colt in her hallway."

"Once I calmed down my next worry was what my parents were going to say about this. Serious trouble in school usually meant a letter home for them to sign, but I was surprised when Ms. Inkwell let me go without one. By then school was over for the day...I looked for Beetle but he was gone, so I went home too."
"I put my robe on as soon as I got home to hide my swollen rump; lucky it was a cold day so my folks didn't question it. For a whole week I worried that the school was going to contact them, but they never did."
>You think you understand why.
"They probably didn't want the parents knowing students were screwing around at in the halls. It would make the school look bad."
>Twilight agrees with that.
"Beetle and I stayed friends, but we never tried anything like that again...in fact I never messed around with another colt until I was grown up and moved to Ponyville."
>She gets a wicked look on her face.
"But I never forgot the "Ultimate Horn-Job" spell."
>You feel her magic unzip your pants.
"And since your mission is to learn about pony culture, I'd say we ought to give the story a little context..."

>And so Anon experienced his first horn-job
>Twi's story hardly did it justice
>Every cell in your dick and balls is stimulated
>Every magical spark that falls on them sends a shocking jolt of pleasure through your body
>It lasts and lasts, but unlike poor Beetle Brand Twilight does not leave you will blue balls
>By the time you climax you can hardly stand up
>You're sorry Twilight had to suffer a terrible paddling so many years ago
>But for you, the end of the story was worth it.

END

>>29000659
Horn job? What the fuck is this story going to be? Can't wait to read it

>>29000659
great story, i only wish she got another spanking after this horn job. maybe a slightly more friendly one i suppose.

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wew didn't expect this thread to be created this early.
and we already got a new story.
Nice

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I kinda forgot to post this. it was done 2 threads ago.

>>29000659
the backstory felt kinda unnecessary. you could just said that Twilight and anon were chilling in the library talking about past experiences(or something like that).
but I liked it.

I love how the teachers were unsure how to deal with twilight's punishment.

one thing was kinda off. Twilight was way too open about her embarrassing stuff.

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"Oh wow Babs! Yer mom really did a job on yer backside with her hairbrush!"

"Yeah, it was muydah sittin' on dat hard taxi bench all da way here."

>>29002305
Great edit!
>>29002093
Always good to see Dizzy getting it, and even better seeing it animated!
>>29000659
I like the way it was told as a backstory narration instead of real time. It felt more humorous that way. Twily also got more than 18, probably, from how it sounds. The ending was great too, a great way to wrap up the arc. Good job DC!

Where u at Skye, we miss you!

Off to a slow start as usual I see

>>29002093
I forgot, what is Dizzy's mother's name again? That is her mother, right?

>>29003987
Actually no this is just an oc sterny came up with.

Dizzy is more like anon oc . She changed her sittings a lot.
One time she was aryanne's daughter.
Other instance she got a bat pony mother. So go figure. Even woox was so inconsistent with her.

>>29004648
Scootaloo looks like she needs some more redness on those cheeks. Rainbow didn't do it hard enough.
>>29005033
Spitfire's mom... help, my dick, it's too much!

>>29004648
those little scamps

>>29004648
I remember comparing spankings from parents with friends when I was little, it's a real thing. They didn't even think girls got spanked because they thought it wasn't allowed. I just think it's funny because there are three fillies in the picture.

>>29005822
what a memory, i never did that but did one time get a playful one from a friends friend at a spend the night party. needless to say i never forgot that.

>>29005879
Not saying we showed each other our asses, just talked about it. I think we all exaggerated a little bit of course. Not exactly the same as the picture, that would've been weird since all the other kids were boys.

>>29005947
ah yeah that makes more sense.

>>29001379 (Vega)
> i only wish she got another spanking after this horn job
I considered it, but I really don't do consensuals. Maybe if he wants to talk Twilight into some of that he can ask the guys at NASA for some spank-fetish mags on the next shipment, to pique Twi's interest.

>>29002093
Great animation...clean lines, great facial expressions. Straightforward parent/foal stuff is my favorite. The only thing missing is a little redness on the filly's backside.

>>29002194
>the backstory felt kinda unnecessary
Yeah, I considered shortening it but I got attached to the joke about Ponyville being destroyed in an explosion and 'nothing of value would be lost'.

>Twilight was way too open
It's impossible to make everyone happy with Twilight's characterization because she's all over the map. Some episodes portray her as nervous & awkward...some as preachy & bossy. The show writers twist her to fit the demands of the story, I admit, so do I.

Thanks for the feedback...it's that kind of detailed stuff that puts fuel in a writefag's tank. A bunch of vague 'I liked it' comments, or none at all, just drain me of the will to write more.

>>29002852
>the way it was told as a backstory narration instead of real time.
I've got another one brewing too, a little more grim and feelsy. It's going to be hard to work out because the show writers shit all over my Fluttershy headcanon.

>>29003987
I thought Dizzy was a bat pony? That filly has no wings.

>>29005822
>comparing spankings from parents with friends when I was little, it's a real thing. They didn't even think girls got spanked
I never did that, but since I developed my spanko fetish while still in Elementary school I always had my ears open for a mention.
While the statistics show boys certainly get spanked more they seldom admitted it out loud. Girls were more willing to confess that they'd been spanked the night before, or feared getting one when they got home. I have a theory about that.

>>29006033
>I have a theory about that.
Do tell? All of the other stuff is true from my experience, one of the boys had to admit it before any of us started talking about it, and for the other boys it was only so they could seem tougher and one up each other.

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>>29006284
All kids that age want to demonstrate how tough they are, to size themselves up against their peers and establish their place in the pecking order...it's an animal instinct we'll probably never evolve out of.

Boys have a lot more socially acceptable outlets for this. Our games are rougher...to an extent we're even encouraged to fight amongst ourselves. When a boy gets a bruise or scar it's something cool to show off to your friends.

Girls, even in this day and age, are under more social pressure to stay pretty & demure. Bruises and scars are blemishes to be avoided and covered up with make-up. They are not encouraged to play tackle football, wrestle or fall out of trees.
Subsequently, for girls, the measure of toughness is what you can endure...not what you can inflict (either on others or on yourself like boys). The girls I overheard almost bragged about spankings they'd gotten as a show of their toughness & endurance. Boys tended to keep quiet about theirs; equating it with being defeated.

I can't claim this theory as 100% my own. The outstanding author Margret Atwood touched on it in her loosely autobiographical novel 'Cat's Eye". When I read the chapters where girls brag to each other about spankings they'd received as a way of gaining social status it put my own memories of conversations overheard in Elementary school and Jr. High into a new context.

It's an undeveloped idea of course, I have no serious research to back it up. I'd be interested in hearing others' observations. Perhaps they could inspire a story..?

The only one time my sis got a spanking was 15 years ago when she was 14, she had a small can of beer in her school bag (it turned out she carried it for someone and forgot about that). It was the last spanking in her life, because mom sprained her wrist on sister's hard, fit butt. It was an embarrassing day for both of them

>>29006391
that's hilarious
>>29006382
I don't care how sexist this sounds, but I think spankings might work a little better on girls. I was a good girl with my parents mostly and I deserved to get spanked when I did, trust me, but the boys who claimed they got spanked the worst were actually the ones who didn't behave well, for what I'm remembering. They didn't like adults.

>>29006478
>I think spankings might work a little better on girls
It seems dangerous to generalize in this area. Every kid is different and the adults in charge should adjust their response to the individual...not a pre-conceived notion about what's better for each gender.
That said; in the case of pony spanking fiction we certainly have an overwhelming preference for chastising filly butts.

>>29006391
You're aware that every spanko in this thread is now picturing your sister's "hard, fit butt" decorated with red hand prints, right?

>>29006722
>It seems dangerous to generalize in this area.

Yeah, you are right. I'm sorry, it's just my own personal experience and what I noticed as a kid, and you know how inaccurate that can be for people sometimes.

>>29006982
No need to be sorry about anything, it's an interesting conversation and it's keeping the thread going until we get some fresh content.

Did you discuss your spankings with other girls?

>>29007066
No, only one time, but it was one of my friends telling me what happened to her, so it counts I guess! It was a private talk with me and one other girl. Her mom was actually not a very nice woman, either, which meant no one came over to her house when people wanted to play. We liked her though, and she turned out ok.

>>29007066
>fresh content
I have been really busy lately.
But I just wanted to say that I am currently working on a new drawing. Its related to your recent twilight's story.

Also I am writing a new story. Feat. Anon and flurry heart

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>>29007364 (Woox)
>new drawing.
>related to your recent twilight's story.
I am intrigued. Looking forward to it.

Brainstorming story ideas here:
Do you think Equestria has an equivalent to the Krampus? Someone who goes into the homes of misbehaving foals on Hearth's Warming Eve, armed with a bundle of birch rods intended for naughty rumps?

Would Discord be a good fit for the role?

>>29006722
>picturing your sister's "hard, fit butt" decorated with red hand prints
oh baby.

also more Twilight's Political Plot later probably, paste here for those who might have missed it. http://pastebin.com/UhEMy183

>>29007593
>Twilight's Political Plot
Catching up with this...some clever snake word-pay, and I like the bit about the Lamia Ambassador being able to detect Twilight's recent spanking with her infrared sense.

>"Twilight why don't you poke your head down into the kitchen and see if they have any tea
Ouch...there's an ego blast.

There's a little tense confusion, you switch from past to present a few times, but it isn't too distracting. Looking forward to more.

>>29007638
>>"Twilight why don't you poke your head down into the kitchen and see if they have any tea

In my head it was meant to be an excuse to give her a break not put her down but i can certainly see how it would be insulting too. But really i just wanted an excuse to move the plot.

>There's a little tense confusion, you switch from past to present a few times

Yeah im horrible at bothering to edit my stuff im kinda working on that, glad you like it though.

>>29007652
>im horrible at bothering to edit my stuff
You could try downloading a text-to-speech program (I'm currently using Balabolka, it's free).
Once you're done writing copy-paste it in and let the program read your story back to you. I catch a lot of errors that way.

>you are anon
>human in Equestria
>you are currently staying under twilight's supervision.
>one day twilight was needed at the crystal empire.
>Twilight took you and spike with her.
>Ponies still didn't get used to you being different.
>but they treat you nicely cause of the princess twilight.
>Twilight flu away ahead of you to the crystal empire.
>she asked spike to escort you there.
>you had to travel by the train station.
>you and spike have a lot in common.
>you befriended the little dragon.
>spike told you about his heroic deeds in the crystal empire.
>And how big a deal he is there.
>you arrived at the train station there.
>spike disguised himself and got of the train station.
>I have a small errand you should head toward the castle. its the tall building in the middle of the city.
>spike then ran off.
>you had to check your bags and got of the train.
>as soon as you left the station.
>One of the crystal guards stood in front of you.
>"Halt!"
>you find it cute how the little blue crystal colored pony trying to intimidate you.
>"what kind of creature are you , And what are you planning to do in the crystal empire"
>"I'll tell you what I'm gonna do"
>you picked the guard up
>"hey what are you.. this is a direct assault"
>you ignored the stallion's rebellion and gave him a hug.
>he was frozen for a moment. and his helmet dropped of his head.
>then he pushed you away and rebelled.
>"Hey hey I cannot believe you just did that to me. I'm ..."
>you put him down and petted his head. "you crystal ponies are so cute"
>he blushed hey I'm not...
>"don't worry I'm here with the princess."
>"princess huh" , he said that while picking his helmet.
>He then blew a whistle.
>moments later you were swarmed by other crystal guards.
>"capture him"
>and they did throw a rope around you.
>you looked around for spike but he is no where to be seen.
>they took you to the castle's dungeon.

>>29007742


>and before they throw you in . Princess Cadences came down to meet you.
>so this is the creature you speak of.
>the blue guard said yes. he assaulted me and was planning on assaulting the princess.
>you laughed, I did not do any of those things.
>this is just a little miss understanding that's all.
>misunderstanding huh..
>yes I'm sure princess Twilight can explain the whole thing.
>"See. he already ..." the blue guard was talking then the princess interrupted him and said
"Twilight huh.. I'm sure she can if you just tell us where she is ?"
>"what, is princess twilight missing ?"
>"Don't play dumb in front of the princess" the blue guard.
>"listen I am supposed to meet twilight here in the castle."
>the blue gaurd was about to say something but princess Cadence stopped him again. then looked at you to continue.
>"you explained the whole thing"
>Cadence "so you telling me that spike traveled with you and he is already at the crystal empire ?"
>yes
>"guard?"
>no mam spike wasn't sighted in the empire "
>she then looked at you with a raised eyebrow
>"i told you spike was in his stupid disguise . are you telling me your guards are that incompetent ?"
>the blue guard was pissed.
>then suddenly another guard came in and informed the princess that spike arrived at the castle.
>"you smirked , see "
>bring him in
>moments later spike came in
>Anon! hey why is he tied up like that
>the blue guard .. he assaulted us and ...
>so spike good to see you in the crystal empire .
>oh hello princess cadence
>was twilight traveling with you ?
>no she went and flu ahead of us . wait ... is twilight missing 'spike started to panic'
>Don't worry I'm sure she would arrive here soon.
>but what if something happened to her. what if she was hit by lighting and exploded /
>relax spike that's not how lightning works.
>release him.

>>29007748
>"sorry for the rough treatment , you see our guards were just doing their job.
>"it turned out ok, but for now we have to look for twilight."
>um yes.
>you are welcome to stay in the castle for the time being until we find out about twilight.
>She summoned the gaurds . she learned that twilight actually made it in the crystal empire and was last seen inside the castle.
>she started to explain to spike the situation. you were just there listening..
>shining armor was attending the dignitaries of another part of equestria.
>I need to join the meeting soon.
>Twilight was supposed to investigate the missing baby sitting staff.
>they just keep disappearing for some reason.
>"Detective spike can handle it"
>this is no game spike take some of guards with you just to be safe.
>I have to attend the meeting. If I don't my husband would have a panic attack.
>meanwhile shining armor was sitting there in the meeting covered with sweats. and kinda losing it.
>cadence left spike in charge with some of the guards. the blue guards was with him.
>"what do you think happened to the staff anon ?"
>"I'm not sure but we need to see the seen first "
>"the crime scene ?"
>"don't assume it. we are not sure if its a crime or not."
>"not a crime .. yet"
>you rolled your eyes.
>spike ordered the guard to look for anything suspicious in the castle.
>the blue guard stood and pointed at you.
>Spike "no somepony other that anon."
>he glared at you and left the area.
>you and spike entered Flurry hearts's room.
>it was fairly big room. it was kinda messy filled with toys and other baby stuff. as expected in a baby room.
>flurry heart was inside her crib. next to her was a white mare with pink mane. she looked exhausted.
>"oh look at you. you grown up much than the last time I saw you" -spike said
>"spikey .."
>"oh you can talk!"
>the pony who was attending her said . yeah and she can read also.
>"this is amazing "

>>29007753
>what happened to the rest of the staff ? - you asked
>"I have no idea. I only started working here since yesterday."
>have you noticed anything strange going on ?
>well now you mentioned it some times I feel that I'm being watched .
>"yea i get that feeling too"
>well its feeding time for her.
>the pony stood up and she trembled next to you.
>you held her and fixed her equilibrium
>sorry I am exhausted. I couldn't get enough sleep. taking care of baby alicorn her age is really hard.
>don't worry you should rest I know a thing or two about babies. (actually you don't but you just said that)
>thank you strange one .. you can find food inside the fridge over there. it's the bottle marked Monday.
>Monday got it.
>Spike went ahead of you and grabed it and brought it to you.
>thanks spike.
>you went and picked flurry up .
>she smiled.
>you then put her inside her high chair.
>you opened the bottle ,grabbed a spoon then got some of the food of the bottle.
>open wide
>no.
>take its yummy.
>no. she protested and closed shut her mouth.
>you looked at the baby sitter for little help but she was already asleep in her chair.
>you tried to imitate an air plane.
>her comes the air plane vroom.
>you swung the spoon around playing with it as if it was air plane.
>she laughed and was exited .
>she casted a spell on the spoon.
>suddenly the spoon came to life and started to fly on its own dragging you with it.
>you were flung around and fell on the floor.
>the baby sitter woke up.
>"what's happening ?"
>umm she just casted a spell nothing to worry about.
>oh no
>she panicked and ducked under the chair.
>what ?
>she goes into magic berserk. no pony noes what's she gonna do next.
>relax she is just a baby.
>a baby alicorn is different. we must do something.
>she crawl down and crept toward flurry.
>you just laid down on the ground watching the flying spoon goes by.
>what do you suggest we do - spike asked

>>29007762

>we should grab her horn. that way we can muffle her spell casting.
>oh well that's easy
>wait ...
>spike jumpped at the table infront of flurry heart.
>she was startled by him and then she shoot him with a spell.
>he turned into a baby bottle.
>oh no spike.
>the bottle was spinning around then fell of the table.
>you immediately jumped and grabbed it.
>you turned around and asked the pony.
>umm what would happen if the bottle breaks ?
>I'm not sure if you want to know.
>flurry then start flying around.
>oh there she goes again.
>the mare stood up and shouted at flurry to get down.
>flurry "no i wana play with the plane wee.
>you can get play after you finish this bottle.
>yuky bottle you eat it.
>Flurry casted a spell on the mare teleporting her at the high chair.
>she was stuck sitting there. as the high chair size wasn't meant for big ponies like her.
>the bottle and the spoon came to life. the spoon went inside the bottle and scooped a spoonful of the baby food . then it went toward her .
>she was being force fed.
>you don't know what to do.
>you put the spike bottle in a safe place.
>then you tried to talk to her.
>come here flurry lets play .
>play ?
>yes we play a game,
>yay game . lets play hide and seek
>ok you hide and I'll seek you.
>you closed your eyes and start counting.
>she went and hide behind the crib.
>ok ready or not here i come.
>you knew where she was. but you ignored her and went to free the poor pony that was being stuck in the high chair.
>you tried to pull her up , but that didn't help she was wedged in.
>ok I think I need to break this.
>you applied much pressure force on the joint and broke her free
>you then slowly cheeped toward the crib.
>Gotcha
>she screamed no fair then pushed you. with her magic
>you flung away and fell off the window.
>this is was it.
>you were at the high tower of the crystal palace.
>you were doomed.
>you felt the world around you turn dark.
>and splat you hit rock bottom.smashed your head and died

>>29007767
>but then you the black haze was lifted.
>you were still alive.
>dangling in the air.
>you were just imagining you death.
>you were saved by the same blue guard.
>he was struggling and barely flying as you were descending to the ground.
>What in the hey are you trying pull here. Jumping of the building like th...
>before he finished you gave him another hug.
>thank you!
>umm.. he blushed and looked away for a sec.
>I thought I was a goner if it wasn't for you.
>hey man I'm just doing my job.
>that little brat pushed me off the window.
>little flurry heart ?
>yea. I'm powerless against her magic.
>well if it's magic ... I think I have a temporary solution.
>oh..
>one sec . he flow off then moments later he came back holding a bottle in his mouth.
>here .
>what is it ?
>its anti magic potion. We as a guards have to be prepared for all types of encounters.
>interesting.. how do i use it ?
>you drink it duh.
>is it safe for .. humans ?
>I think so. it's made from none poisonous herbs.
>here goes nothing.
>you drank the whole bottle.
>but I have warn you. the effect only last for about 5 mins.
>five mins. I have to hurry up upstairs then.
>you start running.
>I'd fly you up if you weren't that heavy.
>hey I'm not fat.
>you climbed up the stairs to deal with the little naughty filly.
>you reached her room.
>the red head pony was trying to take away a book from little flurry heart.
>Hey give me that. you shouldn't be reading that...
>no I want it ... its mine
>I said let it go.
>no
>somehow the pony grip slipped and flurry got the book.
>then flurry start reading it. and casted a spell on her.
>she got transformed into a mane brush.
>Flurry Heart! - you yelled.
>she looked at you.
>Stop transforming other ponies.
>no. she casted a spell on you. but it had no effect.
>she panicked. and kept casting spells on you with no effect. as you were approaching her.
>you cannot harm me. so Stop wasting your energy on me and turn every pony back.

>>29007774
>hmmf - she turned her head away.
>you picked her up and placed her on your knee.
>You have been very naughty little filly. you know what we do to naughty fillies ?
>she did not replay.
>you grabbed her tail then pulled down her diaper exposing her tiny butt.
>then you raised your hand and gave her a light smack.
>she was shocked. it was her first time experiencing this.
>turn everypony back.
>no.
Smack!
>this one was with a little more force. still wasn't much to harm a little filly like her.
Owee
>she turned her head back looking at you.
>she saw your serious face.
>she then got a little scared. he is serious and not playing around.
>turn them back.
>for some reason she kept protesting.
Smack! smack! smack!
aa aa aaawwe
>she was about to cry but still refuse to break and refused to comply.
>you let out a sigh...
>Turn them BACK!
smack! Smack! Smack! smack!
>she was frawning. she didn't want to get spanked anymore and was about to burst into tears.
Smack! smack! smack! smack!
>FLURRY ! Oh my celestia what the hell are you doing! - Candace
>cadance suddenly entered the room. she was shocked at what you were doing and soon she shoot you with a beam.
>it actually connects and it pushed you away to against the wall. guess the potion effect wore off.
>she got to her daughter and hugged her.
>are you hurt? - she asked flurry.
>yes mommy that big meany came here and hit me.
>How dare you do that to my daughter.
>its not what its look like she.
>silence! ... she abused her magic and silenced you.
>she was mad.
>I have never should have trusted you.. how would you like it if you were in her postion.
>she then used her alicorn's magic to transform you into a little colt.
>poof!
>you are now little foal. you were disoriented form this. somehow you and your cloth shrank.

>>29007782
I will continue this later.
-
now that I got the setup out of the way now I can get into the spanking stuff.

if anyone read it please let me know how do you feel about it so far. and be a little more patient with me as I will get into it once I have free time.

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>>29007789
Reading right now...

Also; Page 9 safety bump

>>29007782
>she was attending to her daughter.
>you tried to walk but you tripped over.
>Cadance turned around to see you walking toward the door.
>oh no you don't. - Cadance
>she picked you up with her magic then she hanged you by your cloth on a cloth's hook.
>stay there you little savage.
>one of the guards came in the room and whispered something in her ears.
>she nodded.
>Cadance then kissed flurry heart on her head and then told her .
>"don't worry that big beast wont hurt you anymore . mommy will be back quick."
>then they both left the room.
>you struggled to get down but you couldn't get off the hook.
>then you noticed that flurry was looking at you with a grin on her face.
>she was holding something behind her back.
>you gulped. you tried to talk but the silence spell still in effect.
>she then revealed what she was hiding .
>it was that spell book that the other pony was trying to take from her.
>she turned few pages on.
>she then got an evil smile and looked back at you.
>you know that means trouble.
>you tried really hard to get off the hook as she was preparing to cast a magical spell.
>boom
>she hit you with the spell.
>it bounced you up and you fell on the floor.
>ouch the small fall really hurt you.
>she turned the book around to show you what she just cast on you.
>you read the lines, it says damage amplifying spell. cause nerves to be more receptive to ....
>then suddenly you saw an opening.
>she was a bit distracted by her gloating.
>you jumped at her. and took the book off her.
>you raised the book up as she was trying to catch it.
>you just lean backward pulling the book away from her.
>then all of sudden she dropped on the floor and start crying.
>you were confused of her odd behavior.
>Oh my Celestia!
>Cadance just got back and saw you holding the book up as if you were about to smack flurry who is laying and crying on the floor.

>>29008424
>I can't leave for one min without you hurting my daughter.
>Come here you little menace.
>she yanked your ear pulling you toward a chair.
>She sat down then picked you up. and placed you on her knees.
>you soon know what's gonna happen.
>your gonna have a taste of your own medicine "
>she raised her hoof then
Wham!
>that really felt that.
Wham!
>you wanted to yelp but your voice were still under the silencing spell.
Wham! Wham! Wham!
>she mercilessly spanked you. all you can do is kick and squirm.
>first you threaten my guards.
Wham Wham wham!
>you betrayed my trust.
Wham! Wham! Wham!
>that guard must have told the truth.
>Wham wham! wham!
>you were trying to assault the princesses.
wham! Wham!
>Assaulting my poor little princess.
>Wham WHam WHam!
>this really hurts . hurts more than usual.
>you couldn't handle this.
>you start burst into tears. and bawled (in silence)
>she stopped when she saw you crying. maybe she thought she was over doing it.
>she pulled down your pants and your brief exposing your little pony rump.
>it was barley pink.
>huh could have fooled me with those fake tears.
>meanwhile while you were getting it
>flurry was laughing at you.
>she went throw a drawer and pulled up some make up.
>Cadance was busy with you and didn't notice what her mischievous little alicorn was doing.
>she pulled her diaper's down and put some red and blue make up on her butt making it look like it was swollen.
Wham! Wham!


===
just some little update for the time being

>>29008436
Flurry trying to make it look worse than it was? That's pretty good, though I wonder if Cadance will find out?

>>29007742
>you picked the guard up
>"hey what are you.. this is a direct assault"
Anon doesn't seem to be getting off to a good start.

>they took you to the castle's dungeon.
>"what, is princess twilight missing ?"
At this point in the story I thought Anon was going to be blamed for Twilight's disappearance and the Crystal ponies were going to torture him (in our usual manner) for information.
I don't think anyone has written a story like that yet...Anon tied down and spanked by ponies who think he has committed some treason against Equestria.

> are you telling me your guards are that incompetent ?"
More reason for the blue guard to hate him.

>spike ordered the guard to look for anything suspicious in the castle.
>the blue guard stood and pointed at you.
That was funny.

>FLURRY ! Oh my celestia what the hell are you doing! - Candace
>poof!
>you are now little foal.
I see...Anon might be getting a spanking after all.

It's a little crazy and confusing right now, but I'm sure you have a plan for tying this all together.
One spelling note;
>Twilight flu away ahead of you
>no she went and flu ahead of us
The spelling you want is "flew".
"Flu" is a short way of saying influenza, the illness.

Crazy story so far...I await the rest.

>>29008513
>spelling mistakes.
yea I think I had a lot in this one.
Candance instead of Cadance
Flu instead of flew
Gaurd - guard
btw is there a past tense of Cast ?
Casted doesn't sound right does it ?
..etc
I kinda slacked on proof reading. I posted this as it is unedited. which made it seem like some parts were kinda unnecessary. but I think they where needed to for the spanking build up. (I'm all about the situation and the build up)

>I thought Anon was going to be blamed for Twilight's disappearance and the Crystal ponies were going to torture him (in our usual manner) for information.
It did cross my mind when I was writing this.
but it felt kinda harsh. and if I did that and spike showed up to clear things up. Cadance wouldn't jump into conclusion to spank him later on.

thanks for the feedback.

>>29008487
Flurry trying to make it look worse than it was?
yes. she wants payback. so she came up with this little scheme.
>though I wonder if Cadance will find out?
the real question is how will Cadance find out ?

>>29008628
>is there a past tense of Cast ?
No, 'cast' is the past tense.
We all understand English is not your main language...don't worry, you're pretty easy to understand.

Notes on the two new parts:
>then you noticed that flurry was looking at you with a grin on her face.
>she then revealed what she was hiding .
>it was that spell book that the other pony was trying to take from her.
Flurry is wonderfully evil here, but it seems a little weird that she's still a baby in diapers for this tale. Feels like she should have been aged-up a few years.

>your gonna have a taste of your own medicine
If Cadance really wants Anon to pay the price she should give him over to the blue guard who already hates him. Let that guy do the spanking!

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>>29009131
This pic gives me the dick. Always loved the anticipation of getting a spanking when your partner in crime is already getting it.

page 9 bump

http://mlpgeneral.com/spanking/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=144

jesus christ woox how do you keep putting out content, pics and fics. You're worst than Zad. I am like 25 fics behind. Leaving us mortals behind.

I'm meeting up with SkyeHigh next week, so I should hopefully have the motiviation to start writing again. And reading, I guess :/ School is harsh.

>>29009131
That's terrific; always great to see one of my own stories in living color. Soon Twilight will have even more color...on her rump.

>>29009162
On top of that she knows it's all her fault. Her 'partner in crime' is getting paddled because of her plan.

Wich cmc (or filly for that matter) do you imagine developing a spanking fetish.

>>29007593
>This is bad.
>Despite the relatively light spanking Luna's hoof is giving you it's really starting to warm your flanks back up.
>You're sure you are once again bright red back there and your strangled squeals are quickly approaching loud cries.
>Luna for her part seems to be having the most fun you've seen her have in ages.
>She continues singing her little song and spanking your bottom again and again like its the most natural and normal thing in the world.
>You briefly wonder if she has ever had foals with how quickly and easily shes taken to tanning your hide until a harder smacks interrupt that train of thought.
>"Ow Luna please please I've learned i swear!"
"Oh sweet little Twilight Sparkle we know a naughty filly trying to escape her punishment when we hear one. You are not the first filly to feel the wrath of the moon after all!"
>The firm smacks she continues to deliver make you whimper and squirm but you have no chance of escape.
>"Ahhh please i'm not a filly ow ahhh I'm a full grown mare Luna please!"
"Thou could have fooled both us and the ambassador isn't that right? Now don't be difficult about this we know a young princess in need when we see one."
>Raising her hoof high you squirm and wiggle around her lap as the spanking goes on.
>A firm hoof on the small of your back keeps you in place as your bottom transitions back to bright red and fiery to the touch under Luna's swift judgement.
"We are merely warming you up for our sister hoof anyway. She seemed most cross and we know first hoof she has not changed her spanking policy in the past 1000 years while we were gone. You were raised with her hoof in the past were you not?"
>You don't really want to talk about it but you figure she'd just spank the truth out of you if you resist.
>"Yes I've lived in the castle since i was 8..."

>>29010466
"So you know quite well what to expect when she returns yes?"
>"... yes..."
"What will she do young Twilight?"
>"..."
>Several painful smacks in a row are sufficient to get you talking.
>"Oww she'll punish me!"
"Twilight we want you to say it like a big filly."
>SMACK SMACK SMACK
>"SPANK ME SPANK ME SHE'LL SPANK ME"
>She sweetly tousles your mane making you blush in embarrassment.
"See that was not so hard was it?"
>You grumble something about the moon and banishment.
"Ha we see someone is eager to get back to their lesson!"
>"No no wait!"
>The guards outside shift uncomfortably as the sound of hoof on bottom begins again even louder than before.

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>>29007587
>Krampuscord going around smiting the naughty bottoms of Equestria's fillies
>Extracts justice mostly on Mane 6 funnily enough despite being a bit too old for birchings
>Maybe the princesses too just because

Seconded

>>29010360
Sweetie Belle. It's usually the good girls/boys who were spanked only sometimes that get the fetish.

>>29010736
I was surprised to discover that apparently those spanked when growing up are more likely to have a BDSM / spanking fetish.

I was hardly ever spanked (so infrequently that it barely even registered until years after my fetish started) so I figured it would be the opposite.

Wait, shit, that's exactly what you're saying.

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>>29010524
>too old for birchings
>too old for birchings
>too old for birchings

Never.

Good, funny story DCFTEF.

>>29007587
Discord is objectively a good fit but isn't as hot as a female Krampus.

>>29010470
Twily's still getting spanked by Celly after all of this too, oh goodness. You like to extend the punishments out, vega, and it's hot.

>>29008677
>but it seems a little weird that she's still a baby in diapers for this tale. Feels like she should have been aged-up a few years.
I know what you mean. she is a little bit older than last time we saw her. but her off age behavior is intentional part of the story.

>she should give him over to the blue guard who already hates him.
that is brilliant. I totally missed this opportunity to make it happen.
it would make senese for the filler build up I did with that character.
but I already added the rescue scene. which kinda killed any chance of this to happen.

>>29010105
and I did all that while being busy irl.
>"get on my level."
the only person who is now competing with me right now is Vega (which I hope he keep it up, like he did in last threads)

>>29009801
eww empty bump
>>29009806
this is kinda a new story I wrote in bat thread. I figured that I post it here.

>>29009162
>>29010121
glad you two liked it.
I loved that part of the story, its one of the most memorable ones. twilight sitting in anticipation. while her friend getting spanked cause of her.
So I decided to draw that part.
I got one major set back while drawing it.
I have no idea how to properly draw background prospective.

Do you think Luna spanks naughty ponies in their dreams?

>>29012747
well thank you for drawing it, and for writing your story too, woox!

>>29013336
yes but only the really naughty, they wake up blushing and rubbing their bottoms just remembering it.

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>>29005947
showing them to compare is a meme in spanking stories. I can see it also being real.

>>29006033
Sorry DC and others for often neglecting feedback. DC, your technical writing quality is so consistently good (realistic, funny) that there's not much to say. I got more out of the humor than the first spanking, but the no-rules otk second spanking made up for it a bit, especially how embarrassing that must have been. Nice way to tell this story but so few spanking details that it sacrifices some personal hotness along the way.

>>29007674
the Nomine method. Freak out whoever you live with

>>29008436
hello boner my old friend

>>29010466
boner, meet boner

>>29013336
>>29013482
>naughty foals wake up from a dream spanking like any other nightmare
>their parents rush in, hearing their apologies and cries to Luna
>Luna does not spank without cause, so the parents know to shift this punishment into the physical realm
>sometimes right then in the dead of night

>>29013776

Ah, the joys of effectively living alone.

I'm nocturnal, my roommate diurnal.

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>>29013981
I literally live alone, in a building unattached to any others. It means I can have a really noisy spanking machine...which is nice.

>>29008436
Wham! Wham! Wham! Wham!
>Cadance kept spanking you despite the fact you were crying and wailing.
>you still not 100% in control of your body. being turned into 4 legged animal is not a pleasant experience.
>but pain is pain .
>you had few reflexes.
>you were kicking and squirming in her lap as your butt getting tanned.
>you wanted it to stop.
>unconsciously you peed on yourself.
>eew! - cadance said.
>control yourself little colt.
>you finally cached your breath cause she stopped spanking you for that moment.
>are you acting like a little foal ?
>trying to get some sympathy from me ?
>you were panting . with much hiccups.
>she pulled down your pants. and took off your shirt.
>stripping you naked.
>guess I'll have to deal with one more baby.
>she then picked you up toward the table and placed you on your back.
>she took a wipe and wiped your crotch.
>you felt violated.
>adding to your humiliation she rubbed some baby oil and made you wear diaper.
>there this should keep you from having any more accidents.
gurgling !
>flurry was sitting holding her stomach.
>oh are you hungry little flur.
>she opened the fridge with her magic and took off a milk bottle.
>she then levitated the baby bottle that was on the the table. she poured the milk inside it.
>you widen your eyes. you want to talk and tell her about that bottle.
>but the silence spell was still active.
>she focused her magic on the baby bottle. and the milk started to get heated.
>by that moment you finally was able to talk. the magic spell was lifted.
>hey stop using that bottle .
>Cadance gave you an opposing stare.
>why not.
>this bottle is actually spike.
>she kept her opposing void stare.

>>29014889
>spike ?
>yea flurry turned him into a this baby bottle.
>... I'm not sure what are you trying to pull here.
>listen I'm telling the truth. flurry was casting spells from a book and transformed spike and other ponies into random objects.
>and she even cast a spell on ....
>Enough! I guess being in filly body brought the worst in you. you are just lying and making stupid excuses blaming my poor innocent little baby for..
>and you even beat the crap out of her.
>I know how to handle kids. I was trying to make her turn the others back to normal.
>Again with these lies ?
>mommy it hurt. - flurry said
>cadance took a look at her daughter. flurry heart was rubbing her bare butt showing off her fake bruised injury.
>cadance got really mad.
>not know how to handle kids .. you monster.
>I didn't hit her that hard .. she must have fake it.
>Cadance exploded.
>again with your lies and blame game. maybe i didn't spank you hard enough.
>she yanked your ears and pulled you back toward the chair.
>she sat down and placed you on her lap.
>she then grabbed the mane brush that was laying on the floor .
>and before you could say anything .
>your fluffy pink diaper were pulled down and you received it.
Whap! Whap! Whap! whap!
>you immediately bursted into tears.
>the pain was unbearable.
>she was angry and she was spanking you without mercy.
whap! Whap! WHap! WHap!
>you were bawling . howling.
>your face is all messed up .
>tears flying . snots running.
>flurry was laughing at you.
Whap! Whap! whap! whap!
>cadance kept going and going none stop.
>making stupid excuses. blaming me daughter.
>she is only a little kid. she can't even talk properly .
Whap whap whap
>yet you claim that she was using advance magic spell.
Whap whap whap
>And from a book
Whap whap whap
>A frigging book. how do u expect a little foal like her to read.

>>29014897
Whap! Whap! whap! whap!
>you were way busy squalling kicking and crying to answer her.
>you already passed the point of all you can take . you don't know anything anymore and was unable to do anything.
Whap! Whap! whap! whap!
>your butt color was turning from red to purple.
Whap! Whap!
>then suddenly. the wall mirror was moving on its on.
>it was vibrating then suddenly . Poof!
>the mirror transformed into Twilight.
>as soon as twilight hit the ground. she immediately cast a spell.
>FREEZE!
>she froze the time.
>everything in the room stopped moving.
>you were just smacked by the brush. and you were screaming.
>flurry was laughing in her crib.
>but everything was frozen in motionless.
>twilight was catching up her breath.
>then she stayed focused.
>I only have one chance of this.
>I need to combine my brother's shield spell with reverse magic spell.
>she focused her magic on the tip of her horn then boom she cast a spell on the entire room.
>she dispelled and undone everything.
>you turned back to normal human self. but unfortunately you were still wearing that pink diaper and was still laying on Cadance lap.
>the cadance was holding also turned back to normal.
>it turned into that mare from before that was taking care of flurry.
>she was crying.
>her butt was red and was pushed against yours.
>apparently the back of the brush was also her butt. and cadance was spanking both of you.
>she was being held by her tail .
>the time was still frozen.
>the baby bottle turned back into spike.
>flurry heart stopped laughing.
>the spoon from earlier turned into sunburst.
>and other random stuff turned into other ponies as well.
>all these things happened within twilight frozen time frame.

>>29014900
>then soon the time start flowing again.
>the chair cadance was sitting broke.
>she fell on the floor while you and that other mare fell on top of her.
>Cadance was confused of what just happened.
>good everything is back to normal. -twilight
>is everypony alright ? -twilight
>the mare was sitting on top of you and she was crying.
>you tried to get of but she was kinda in the way.
>cadance was holding her tail. she realized that and released her.
>she moved while sniffling.
>you jumped of the floor and took a rug and wrapped it on yourself. you were almost naked after all.
>Twilight ! - you said.
>sunburst turned around and was wiping his penis . it was stained with foal's food.

===
that's all for the time being

>>29010466 (Vega)
>You are not the first filly to feel the wrath of the moon after all!
Luna is amusingly melodramatic here...I like her using overly formal, anachronistic speech.

>"Yes I've lived in the castle since i was 8..."
Can't say I've ever been fond of this idea...it limits your options too much. If she lives at home, goes to school and takes lessons at the castle it multiplies the number of potential spankers & situations she can get in trouble with.
No big deal, just headcanon and everyone is entitled to their own.

>"Twilight we want you to say it like a big filly."
>"SPANK ME SPANK ME SHE'LL SPANK ME"
I like that line a lot. Even while she's being spanked it's difficult to say the word out loud...adding humiliation and confirming her doom.

>>29014889 (Woox)
>she took a wipe and wiped your crotch.
>you felt violated.
That is a powerful line. There is something intimate and personal about that...Anon would feel violated.

>made you wear diaper.
Eh, diaper stuff? You're losing me a little bit here.

>the cadance was holding also turned back to normal.
What's going on here? Do you mean the brush?
>the baby bottle turned back into spike.
>the spoon from earlier turned into sunburst.
>and other random stuff turned into other ponies as well.
And now things are getting really crazy.

Looking forward to the big finale...

>>29015003
>the cadance was holding also turned back to normal.
omg I really need to proof read what I write. (sorry for the confusion)
yes its the brush.
the line was supposed to go like this.
>the brush cadance was holding also turned back to normal.
if you remember here
>>29007774
she got transformed into a brush. which was the one anon got spanked with.

>Eh, diaper stuff?
yea I know, but I didn't dive into that much. I just added that for more humiliation.
I had something to go with it but it didn't fit the mood.
the diaper itself was actually another mare that got transformed. so when twilight Dispelled everything. she got turned back to normal and anon fell on her(penetrating her)

>>29014903
This story just went woowoo crazy

I love it

>>29014903
lel at the story, but now I want some justice,
you should make sure she will pull her daughter over the knee and whoop her butt red
then you can do the same to her for being an ignorant mother who abused her magic power

Flurry's gonna be a hoof full to take care of, I can tell. It's going to be really easy for her to become spoiled and a brat if Cady and Shiny are not careful.

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Good News, Everyone!

Krishna and I have finished the Fic, and I have finally finished revising and editing it to be a bit more cohesive while still keeping our respective styles for the parts we wrote. I'll be posting it here shortly, once I get it split into 2000 Character parts.

Also, pic attached is the pony whose bottom will be turned a nice red.

Enjoy!

It was a dark and stormy night...

No, not really all that stormy, it was just sprinkling, but it was still bad enough to drive Violet indoors, away from the dank memes alleyways she so loved to prowl. Grumbling to herself as she slipped into the shadow of the nearest building, she wrung the water from her body, letting it flow away before heading inside.

Once indoors, she shook the last of the liquid from herself, casting her gaze around. For the moment, it didn't seem bright enough to cause her any issues...good. Last thing she wanted was to get trapped in a closet or under a bed tonight.

That was when her nose caught a delicious scent...foals. Foals who were regularly naughty, too! Oh, what luck...tonight she would eat, and eat well! All that yummy, delicious terror!

Pulling out her rabbit plush and giving him a snuggle, she tucked him back into her body before dissolving into her shadowed form, slithering up the stairs towards the source of that delectable scent.

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“Stupid thing!” Scorecard groaned, whacking the console with his hoof. “Da disc is skippin’! Dis ain’t no little music playah!”

He reset the system and moved back, watching the television critically. The little jingle and logo played and it went to the main menu while it attempted to read the disc. Scorecard sat down on his rump, tapping his hooves together.

“If dis don’t works, sis, we should do somethin’ else. Wanna wrassle?” he asked Babs, turning to look at her.

“Yeah, I guess we could do dat.” the pudgy filly said, giving the console a whack of her own, grumbling under her breath. “Dis dumb ting ain't workin no matter what we do ta it.”

Turning away and plumping her plump rump down with a bump, Babs looked at her brother. “Wrassle?”

Violet, meanwhile, had slipped into the room, staying hidden in her shadowed shape. Merging with the shade beneath the couch, she watched the two children, milky eyes focused on Scorecard.

“Mmm...yummy little colt.” she muttered to herself. “Always tasty...and a delectable morsel of filly fear...I’m going to eat well tonight.” She grinned, then settled herself in, keeping only her eyes formed out of the gloom…just to watch, of course.

“Yeah, wrassle!” Scorecard said with much bravado, standing up quickly and holding his forehooves out wide. “Betcha I could pin ya shoulders to the floor in a minute!’

The sound of approaching hooffalls alerted them to the presence of their mother, that ‘mother-hearing’ she has picking up on ‘wrestle’ very keenly.

“I don’t want you kids wrestling in the house! Remember last time, Babs? You broke that bookcase?” Candy reminded them, shaking a stern hoof at her foals and moving back into the kitchen.

“Yeah, ‘cause I suplexed ya into its!” Scorecard bragged once their mother had left, feeling rather pleased with himself. “Guess we don’t wrassle and I remain the champion!”

“Ah, you shut ya fat face, ya big dummy! Ain’t no faih ta get ta stay da champ when Mommy says we can’t wrassle!...But ah guess we don’t get ta test it eithah way.”

Under the couch, Vi was flummoxed and grumbling. Her meal was slipping away! How could she give these two naughty foals a nightmare if they weren't naughty?!

Looking down at her grumbling stomach, feeling the complaining phobius sleeping in there, she grimaced. Time to take matters into her own hooves…

Slipping out from under the couch, she spun her original body up out of the shadows, seeming to appear out of nowhere before these two.

“Such well-behaved little ponies! So good to listen to your Mommy!” she complimented them with a sarcastic clap, then smiled evilly. “But I bet there’s a lot you did that Mommy never caught you for, huh?” she asked, eyes narrowing at the both of them.

“Whoa, whoa, WHAAAT?” Scorecard exclaimed, jumping back from this ninja pony. “I… where… Babs?” He looked between his sister and the newcomer, in case she showed signs of recognition or was perhaps partly responsible for inviting this stranger. “And… uh, yeah. Duh,” he answered, trying to calm his heartrate.

Babs shook her head, shuddering at the sight of the freshly appeared pony coming up in front of their couch. “Ah dunno who dis filly is, Score...Hey! Who ah you an...and what’re ya doin heah?”

Vi giggled upon hearing that, grinning even more widely. “Oh, maybe I’ll tell you later. But for now...well, since you’ve both gotten away with stuff…”

She walked over to a table with a lamp on it, smiling broadly. “Since you both didn’t get punished for stuff you did do...I think it’s only fair you get punished for something you /didn’t do/.”

With that ominous statement, Vi hip-checked the table, knocking it and the lamp clean over onto the floor with a resounding crash. “Oops...clumsy me.”

Skating over the fact that her logic was fairly sound, Scorecard darted towards the table and lamp with the speed and expertise born from his many days playing soccer. Sliding along the floor on his belly, he stopped… a good foot away from the lamp as it shattered on the floor. Oh, good, now it looks like he did it! Before he could roll over and point in dire accusation at this very, VERY rude houseguest, the hooffalls from earlier returned with some mildly increased force and intensity.

“SCORECARD AND BAAABS!” Candy hollered, appearing in the doorway again and glaring at them both. “WHAT DID MOMMY JUST SAY, HUH? Back away from that before you cut yourself, and I want the both of you in the corners!”

Quick as lightning, Candy swept over towards them, ignoring this mysterious filly for reasons to be explained! Alright this narrative is getting campy. Anyway, she shooed her son away from the broken lamp, fuming. A snort of air escaped her nostrils. Scorecard leapt up, backing away, unable to speak at this indignity.

Frightened now, Babs pointed to the filly still standing in the glass and shards of the lamp. “B..But Mama! SHE did it! Nawt us! We listened!” she protested, hoping beyond hope that Candy would turn and see the true culprit.

Violet just laughed at this, coming up next to Candy and yodeling into her ear. “Yeah, stupidhead, it was me! Can’t you /see/ it was me? Can’t you /hear/ what I’m saying?”
Grinning evilly at Score and Babs, she hopped up onto Candy’s back and waited for the implications to sink in...their Mommy couldn’t see or hear this little filly.

The little filly who now was dancing a waltz on Candy’s back, shaking her booty at the two.

Scorecard’s jaws hung open with fear. She was right! Candy most definitely could not see, hear, or feel this little monster. Candy, meanwhile, was glaring at her pudgy daughter.

“Wow, Babs, maybe you’re not a bit too old to use the imaginary friend defense!” Candy mused with awful sarcasm, sitting down and dragging her hoof down her face.

Unfortunately for Scorecard, a dancing filly on top of an overly exasperated Candy looked like something out of a cartoon. Still scared, he let out a very nervous chuckle. Candy looked daggers at him.

“I TOLD YOU BOTH TO GET INTO THE CORNERS! MOVE!” she commanded him and his sister.

Babs immediately darted for the corner at that tone of voice, rankled and angry at the unfairness of it all. How dare that filly get them in trouble! “B...But Mama! She’s right theah! How can ya naht see her?!” she asked, a touch of that anger creeping into her voice.

Violet was just laughing and giggling at the situation...and, oddly, seemed to be coalescing some kind of black smoke out of the air, drinking it like Babs would a soda.

“I'm not going to listen to any more of that nonsense! Move it, young lady! You're already going first!” Candy snapped.

Scorecard, meanwhile, reached the other corner and stuck his face in it, feeling irritated and angry, but nervous, too. He breathed a sigh of relief, though; he wasn't going first! Then the fear returned! She's going to spank them for no good reason.

Babs just whined in the corner, hurt but determined. “Mama! You really can't see her? Really? Score, c’mon back me up! She's right there!” the chubby filly whined at her, getting angry now. She was NOT gonna get spanked for no reason!

Vi just giggled again, jumping off Candy’s back, then wincing as the glass crunched beneath her hooves. “Oh, bugger…”

“It's true, Mama!” Scorecard said, supporting his sister. “She's on ya noggin!”

“There is NOTHING and NOPONY here!” Candy roared, losing her patience now. “No talking and no moving! I need to clean up your mess…”

She turned to storm off, but stopped as she heard a light crinkle and cracking noise. She looked down at the glass, worried she had stepped in it. But there was no glass beneath her unblemished hooves.

Slightly unnerved, she looked back at her foals. Reassuring herself they were lying, she skulked off huffily to get a broom and dustpan.

“You’re a jerk, ya know that, ya stupid (BABS! This is a family show!)”, Babs snapped at the filly, who was currently picking her way carefully through the glass. “Ya got us in trouble fa no reason.”

The filly just grinned. “Well, if you hadn’t been naughty, you and your brother both, I’d have never shown up in the first place!” she said. “Not that it matters, your Mum can’t see, hear, or touch me.” Taunting done, the filly turned her attention once again to coalescing the black smoke around herself, swallowing it down and smacking her lips.

Scorecard scowled into the wall. Yeah, they got off with a lot Candy Mane didn't know about, but that NEVER exactly made this fair! He didn't look to see this crazy (kid show) surrounding herself with black smoke like she's hitting a hookah like a bong.

“Why can't Mama see you?” he asked, hoping Candy wasn't about to return.

“Yeah, why can’t Mama see ya?” Babs chimed in, causing her to laugh.

“I guess your Mama’s just a stupid sod of an adult, way too grown-up to see the likes of little old me. C’mon, you little babies, dontcha know who I am?” she taunted, dancing in the glass and making a crunch crunch sound effect before stopping with a gulp as Candy returned, broom and dustpan at the ready.

Candy approached the glass and stood over it, staring down at it. What in blazes…? Something was going on… regardless, she swept it up and made to throw the broken shards out.

“I know who ya are!” Score answered once Candy was out of earshot again. “Yer a freakin’ jerkwad!”

“I’m sorry...what did you just call me?” Violet said, holding a hoof to her ear.

“YOU’RE A FUCKIN’ JERKWAD!” Babs all but screamed in answer

Well, that was poorly executed on Babs’ part. Candy stomped back into the room, going straight across to her daughter. With a hard snatch, she took Babs by the ear.

“So it's bad enough you're getting your rump smacked first, so now you want to you that filthy tongue scrubbed out too, huh? How DARE you say something like that to your own brother, Babs! March! Bathroom!”

She slapped Babs’ on the right cheek to get her moving, before turning back to her son. Scorecard seemed to know she was glaring at him. He was paralyzed with fright.

“Sounds like Babs thinks your invisible friend idea wasn't any good! No use calling him a jerkwad, Babs, because you were both in trouble regardless!”

“IT WASN'T MY IDEA! MAAA, SHE'S RIGHT THERE!” Score snapped indignantly.

“YOU WATCH THAT TONE, YOUNG COLT!”

And she dragged her daughter off.

//End of part one. Part two's got some of the good stuff, Part three's when the magic happens. I'll post part two a bit later tonight, part three tomorrow morning.

>>29015697
>End of part one. Part two's got some of the good stuff, Part three's when the magic happens. I'll post part two a bit later tonight, part three tomorrow morning.

Just to stretch it out?

>>29015697
This is so delicious, I'm eating this up just as much as Violet is. This is a great joint effort between you two. I'm very excited to see this all unfold. Babs is going to get it so fucking good. *scrubs out mouth with soap*

>>29015697
>Babs' mother being ignorant in a magical world where invisibility is possible
someone should repost that story where Anon turned her ass red after spanking Applebloom

Maybe after all is unfolded, candy will get everything she gave to babs and score

>>29016243
There was no reason for her to think that an invisible intangible thing was doing those things. I don't blame her at all for getting upset at them seemingly disobeying her totally and swearing with the f word.

>>29016341

Well, I'll give some simple clues, though part 2 will reveal quite a bit.

Note what she said she was going to eat, the general prevalence of a certain word...one beginning with N and related to Santa...and most of all the fact that the only one who can't see or touch her is Candy.

As for why I'm stretching this out, it's 8000 words long and I don't want to inundate the thread. Plus I had to go to work.

>>29015665 (Nomine & Krishna collab.)
>Wanna wrassle?” he asked Babs, turning to look at her.
Has any sibling in the history of the world ever ASKED that question? Usually you just tackle 'em and their response gives you your answer.

>she hopped up onto Candy’s back and waited for the implications to sink in...their Mommy couldn’t see or hear this little filly.
I have to admit I cringed when I saw this was going to be another 'magical character' story, but you're weaving it in well. I'm okay with this.

>“I TOLD YOU BOTH TO GET INTO THE CORNERS! MOVE!” she commanded him and his sister.
Great 'Mom talk'. Love it. Candy keeping them away from the broken shards is a genuine detail too.

>Scorecard seemed to know she was glaring at him. He was paralyzed with fright.
Seems like he's stuck and helpless here...nothing he can do will make things better, anything he tries will make it worse. Best to just freeze.

Looking forward to more...

>>29016341
but it only proves that she is a shitty mother

>>29016531
Or, you know, wait for the goddamn story and determine from there.

>>29016569
no use arguing with retards, just ignore

>>29016531
not believing that a ghost just broke the lamp and caused her daughter to say the f word doesn't make her a shitty mother, and this is a spanking fantasy so stfu lol

>>29016569
>>29016598
>>29016640
>calling contributors retards
ok then

>>29016918
Quackers is back!

Guys, as a favor to me, can we please not fight and argue when the story is only 1/4 of the way told?

No accusations of quacking, no insults, please. I know this is 4chan, but can we please fucking not?

>>29017261
>>29017190
Okay, I apologize, player. Keep postin

>>29010470
Princess Celestia
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>You have finally finished trade negotiations with the Lamias.
>Trade negotiations made much more awkward and difficult after a certain ambassador had spanked your student.
>Your student who showed up to trade negotiations with a bright red spanked flank.
>You resist the urge to facehoof in the middle of the hall and instead maintain a regal stride back towards your room.
>The room you had left said student in under your sister's somewhat questionable 'care'.
>Luna had seemed quite enthusiastic about tanning little twilight's hindquarters when you had visited them earlier.
>Admittedly its usually her in trouble so she must like being on the other side for once.
>Despite your ages she is still the little sister and you have no problem treating her as such.
>Not to say Luna had no experience dishing out discipline, both of you had been in charge of many foals over the years.
>That being said it was kind of cute seeing how happy she was beating Twilight's little plot.
>You turn the corner and immediately hear said plot still taking it's firm punishment, even through the door it's quite loud.
>The two guards on either side of the door snap to attention.
>You notice both males are at attention in more than one way but you suppose you can't really blame them considering what they have been listening too for the past little while.
>"Gentlecolts you are both dismissed for the night I am sorry you've had to be a part of all this."
>They both salute you stiffly.
"Not a problem Princess just doing our job!"
>"Well hopefully this will not become a normal part of that job. That being said i expect your utmost professional discretion about what has gone on here tonight, do i make myself clear?"
"Crystal Ma'am we heard nothing out of the usual!"
>You nod to them and they trot away secondary 'attentions' swaying as they went.
>Oh how twilight would blush if she knew she had caused that.

>>29017572
>You wait a moment for them to clear immediate earshot and open the door.
>As soon as you do you are glad you choose to do so as the noise of Twilight's spanking pours out of the room.
"NAUGHTY FILLY IM A NAUGHTY FILLY!"
"Oh we know thou are little Twilight and what do naughty fillies get?"
"SPANKINGSSSSSSSS OWWW"
>You fail to resist the urge to facehoof as you close the door behind you with your magic.
>"Luna please i understand you are trying to help but look at her flanks your spanking her raw."
>The midnight princess stops and blinks at you before finally learning over and looking at Twilight's rather abused flanks as if for the first time.
"We suppose she does look rather sore..."
>You shake your head with unsurprised disappointment.
>"You can't just keep swatting you have to check what damage your doing sister..."
"Well we were not spanking hard!"
>"You know she was already sore you had to have seen it!"
>Twilight for her part just lays limply across Luna's lap and sniffles, no doubt grateful for the break and deciding not to get into an argument about how proper spankings are given.
"Well we did but she is an alicorn surely she can take a bit of spanking!"
>"Oh she's proved she can and now she gets to explain just why she showed up to a trade negotiation spanked a little filly."
>Twilight stiffens but does not turn to look at you.
"I umm well you see..."
>"I am waiting young mare. Do you know how hard it was to finish negotiations when they lost all respect for Equestiran princesses?"
"It's just that well my studies show that uhh... productivity..."
>She trails off and buries her head in the couch.
>"Twilight I love you very much but you can get the strangest notions in that head of yours."
>She simply nods still to ashamed to face you.
>"Now you said you had made a machine to do this to you. Do you subject yourself to this often?"
>Again she nods.
>"Twilight use your words i need details."
"Every week..."
>Luna snickers.

>>29017580
"We told you she was a naughty filly sister"
>You shoot her a quelling glare and continue.
>"Now you said it makes you more productive? What do you mean by that?"
>Twilight's voice quivers as if shes on the verge of tears but she answers quietly.
"I get a lot more umm work done, i've got charts at my castle if you want to see..."
>"Perhaps later for now we need to discuss this incident. You really jeopardized that meeting Twilight and it's not just something we can move past with a few nice words. What do you think we should do young mare?"
>Twilight mumbles something unintelligible into the couch.
"Pick they face up and speak clearly young Twilight we can not understand you."
"(mumble mumble) Spanking..."
>"Yes i'm glad you understand. Luna if you would?"
>You take a seat on the opposite couch and gesture to Twilight then your lap.
>Luna seems to get the idea and soon the blushing tear eyed young alicorn is floating between your laps before being firmly deposited on yours.
>You shift her around a bit to raise her well spanked flanks up at the optimal angle, its been a while since you've had to do this and shes grown quite a bit since last time but it still feels just like old times.
>She must feel the same as her quivering slowly stops as you give her a few minutes to get used to the old position she had been in so often as a foal.
>"Now Twilight you know i love you and only do this for your own good correct?"
>She gives a little nod and squirms a bit under your hoof on her back.
>"I'll make it quick since my sister has been kind enough to add her own hoof to the job..."
>Luna looks extremely proud of herself and sits up a bit straighter.
"Twas an honor to give a lesson to our younger counterpart!"
>"Yes i am sure shes very thankful..."
>With that you waste no time in raising your hoof high in the air.
>"Now i want you to think about what you did young filly!"

>>29017591
>Bringing the hoof down hard on her flanks Twilight's cheeks bounce and she squeals.
"OWWWW"
>"Ow is right and we are just getting started!"
>SPANK SPANK SPANK
>"You seriously undermined equestrian princess authority in that room Twilight!"
>SPANK SPANK SPANK
>"Had i not managed to convince them this was all a misunderstanding there is no telling what would have happened!"
>SPANK SPANK SPANK
>"Showing up to an official meeting with a spanked bottom!?!? Just what were you thinking?"
>SPANK SPANK SPANK
"OWWWW IM SORRY IM SORRY PLEASEEE!"
>"You are only sorry because you got caught! What made you think spanking yourself was a good idea?"
>SPANK SPANK SPANK
"I'LL NEVER DO IT AGAIN PLEASE PLEASE AHHHH OWWW"
>"I am sure you will not! Not by the time i am done with you!"
>You levitate over your hairbrush.
>In truth it is an heirloom from a simpler time and fortunately also a time where they made things very sturdy.
>It was a heirloom Twilight was very familiar with as well.
>"Do you remember this Twilight? I think its needed tonight don't you agree?"
>Twilight's eyes widen in terror at her old nemesis.
"NO NO PLEASE NOT THE BRUSH IM SORRY PRINCESS!"
>"You are not yet but you will be soon young mare."
>You raise the brush high and bring it crashing down into the red and purple flank bent over your lap.
>Her cheeks bounce like crazy as the tears and squeals erupt.
>"Starting to learn now are we!?"
"YES PRINCESS YES PLEASEEEEEE!"
>Even Luna squirms uncomfortable in her seat seeing the purple princess in so much agony, or maybe its seeing the brush at work shes no stranger to it either.
>"I have not been so disappointed in you in years!"
>Tears stream down your students face as you blister her bottom all over with the brush, this is one she will not forget.
"PLEASEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEE"
>You give her 5 more quick spanks then start to warm her tushy down with some light hoof spanks.
>"I hope you will remember this lesson Twilight i will not be repeating it."

>>29017603
"Yes ma'am yes ma'am I'll behave!"
>"I am sure you will from now on Luna will be in charge of your discipline, no more of this silly machine business."
"Us sister?"
>"Yes i want you to visit Twilight every week and use your own discretion, she had made it clear she is not yet grown enough to live on her own without a guiding hoof."
>Twilight just whimpers in embarrassment but says nothing.
>Luna's face on the other hoof lights up as if shes received the best news of her life and scoops Twilight up off your lap in her magic.
>Hugging the little alicorn she spins in circles and cheers.
"Most wondrous of news young Twilight! We shall visit ever week!"
>Twilight is content with rubbing her rather bruised flanks and crying on Luna's shoulder.
"And worry not we shall be most firm just as you need! You might even think we are our sister, you will want for anything!"
>The way Twilight clings to Luna is rather cute and so is Luna's excitement at getting her own 'student' to look over.
>"I am sure she is very excited Luna but why don't you let her get to bed its getting rather late and shes had an exhausting day."
"Yes yes we shall tuck you in! come!"
>You briefly wonder if shes taking the mother thing a bit too far but Twilight voices no complaints.
>Sighing you put your brush back on your dresser and throw yourself down on the bed.
>The things you put up with...

Content explosion, yeees

>>29017981
then its dead.

>>29017610
Thats probably it for that story. Maybe a follow up story of both twilight and rarity's aftermath.

>>29018617
followup, yes please!

I just meant explosion as "there's a lot of content", so thanks for making good content, all of you!

>>29018617
I think Rarity ended up getting it worse, but that's a good thing since she deserved it more. Celly spanking Twilight didn't make sense to me all that much, but it was hot af so I don't really give a fuck.

>>29019345
Yeah she did but at least no one she knows knew about it. Twilight has to deal with both princesses and the guards knowing exactly what happened to her. Celestia did go from calm to angry pretty quickly but let's be real i just wanted to spank her flank.

>>29019425
We all want to spank her flank, perfectly normal

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ponies not normally wear cloths makes writing some spanking tropes difficult.

>exposer humiliation
>wedgies.
>close person to spankee seeing his/her bare butt.
>underwear pulling.
..etc

>>29016464
>another 'magical character' story
Has Nomine posted any other spanking ones?

>>29017610
unf

>>29019759
>Has Nomine posted any other spanking ones?
Not Nomine specifically. We've had ghost spirit stories, enchanted hairbrushes...Magic is okay in small doses to move the story along, but when it's the central plot element the story kind of loses a bit of appeal for me.
But like I said; Nomice & Krishna are using it well here, and who cares about my opinion anyway. I'm certainly guilty of overdoing the other extreme, down to earth SOL stories.

I'll catch up on Vega's story, hopefully tomorrow. 12 hour shift at work...I don't have the energy right now.

>>29020241
Take yo time senpai

>>29017610
>WHACK WHACK WHACK
>Luna is a wonderful pony.
>It's hard not to appreciate her love and dedication.
>But when that dedication is focused on beating your flanks its a bit easier.
>Its been a month since Celestia put her in charge of your discipline and shes taken to it like you would never have imagined.
>Every Friday night promptly at 8pm she has shown up bursting with enthusiasm ready to deep fry your poor hindquarters.
>All attempts at negotiations were quickly exhausted and you very swiftly found yourself tail up and getting the baby princess treatment from her once again.
>And OWW does she really get into it!
>This is the first week she's showed up with a horrifying long handle wooden bath brush tastefully decorated in her cutie mark and now applied to yours.
>You were scared the minute you saw it, it ended up your fears were justified as it was currently searing your tail off in one of the most painful spankings of your life!
>"LUNA PLEASE PLEASE I CAN'T TAKE IT PLEASE!!!"
"Oh do not be so dramatic Twilight Sparkle we know just how tough they flank is by now you just want out of your spanking like any foal."
>A light knock on the door frame indicated Spike's return with the glasses of water Luna asked for earlier.
>That's the worse part, Luna has no issues letting your young charge see you reduced to such a state.
>Spike for his part grew up with enough spankings from you that he doesn't seem to mind the turned tables and makes no effort to save you from the blistering.
"Ah we thank you young spike we were most parched."
>Balancing the brush on your back for a moment Luna levitates the two cups over and drinks from hers while moving yours in front of your face to drink from.
>Thankful for any distraction from the bare bottom beating you gulp down the drink.
>You soon whimper as the bath brush is lifted off your back again.
"Now that we are refreshed there is not a moment to lose! WHACK"
>"AHHHHHHHH IM SORRY IM SORRY!"
>It's going to be a long night!

>>29020795
Getting spanked at a specified time in weekly basis is so lewd.
And Luna's mood is making this really hot.
Cool story vega.
Can't wait for more.

>>29021315
2nded on the weekly maintenance spanking stuff being hot. It's so opposite of real life, but that's what makes it so goooood.

Who said fetishes have to be real life?

Also, sorry for the delays...I crashed hard last night and only just woke up. I'm doing final revisions now on Part 2, and I'll post Part 3 after my accounting final.

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>>29021775
Can't this link get anymore dirtier?

>>29021775
It doesn't work boi

Babs struggled and fought as hard as she could, not crying, not yet. “MA! SHE’S RIGHT THERE! SHE’S FOLLOWING US! LOOK, MA!” she screamed, pointing.

For sure, Vi was indeed following them, giggling like mad at this show in front of her. “Babs’s gettin sooooaped, Bab’s gettin’ Soooaped!” she chanted, still drinking that black...well, now it looked more like goo than smoke. “Do keep it up! I’m loving this!” she taunted, then got curious. “So tell me, is your Mama a good spanker? Is she gonna roast your poor bummy?” she asked.

Now that this jerk was closer, Babs could easily place her accent: Trottingham. But there was something off about it still...old fashioned. Either way, she was walking right next to her now, grinning that same evil grin, so wide she could see she had tiny fangs as well as normal teeth.

Unfortunately for Violet, she also wasn’t watching where she was going, and bumped into a different table, setting another lamp to spinning on its base, though this one stayed unbroken and untoppled. “Ow!”

Candy turned and watched the lamp. It cobbled against the table as it spun, teasing tipping, but it settled. She reached forward, sighing, and straightened it up before yanking Babs Seed along. It wasn't until she reached the bathroom that she felt something was off. Babs wasn't close enough to hit the table… was she?

Shaking herself mentally, she pulled Babs to the sink. Reaching into the vanity, she pulled out a new box of soap. Peeling open one end, she slid out a brand new green, heavily scented bar of soap and put it in the sink. With a creak, she turned on the water.

“You keep that trap wide open, young lady! You don't want to make this worse, do you?”

Still struggling, Babs opened her mouth to protest. “Mama! It wasn’t me! It wasn’t Score! We’re innahcent!” She shouted, stamping her little hoofies and trying to thrash away, knowledge of innocence keeping her going long after a normally guilty Babs would have given up.

Violet, giggling like a schoolfilly, though rubbing her head, sat on the toilet, watching the whole show. “Oh, such a treat! You’re such a little brat! I’m gonna eat well tonight indeed!”

“Shut ya doggone mouth, ya jerkwad!” Babs snapped, looking over at the toilet. “If ah’m a brat, what’s it make you? A big mean bully, that’s what!”

“Babs!” Candy shouted, seriously alarmed now. “What has gotten into you?! BABS, THERE'S NOPONY THERE, THAT'S ENOUGH! Stop squirming and open your mouth!”

Candy picked up the slick soap after rolling it around in the sink for a few seconds, her heart racing madly. Something didn't feel right at all. Maybe she was better off threatening to deliver the soaping but stopping?

Violet was now going mad with giggles, and leaned up against the toilet back. “This I gotta see…” she said, smiling broadly as she watched the madness unfold before her.

Babs, sensing defeat, just shuddered and opened her mouth wide, ready to accept the unfair punishment her mom was going to deliver. “Nah faih...I iidn oo aahthin” she said, keeping her tongue out and her teeth covered by her lips so she didn’t have to taste the whole thing.

Resigned, Candy dragged the soap’s corner down along Babs’ tongue. She kept a forehoof around her daughter's torso to keep her steady. Pressing it into her mouth, she warned Babs not to spit it out.

“You hold that with your teeth for a bit. You better promise Mommy when she takes it out that you'll never cuss like that again, or else you'll get a good thorough soaping next time! And then a good hard hairbrushing while you hold it in your mouth!”

Babs whined, but obeyed, tears in her eyes at the foul taste of the soap as she carefully gripped it in her teeth, staying where she was and staring into the mirror, glaring daggers at the fuchsia filly sitting on the commode.

Said filly was just laughing her head off as she leaned back, but then her elbow bumped the lever, causing it to flush and her to jump up with a startled yelp as she landed in the bathtub. “What the fuck was that?!” she squeaked.

Candy spent the longest ten seconds of her life staring at the toilet. Tapping Babs on the cheek, she prepared to pull the soap out, not wanting to scrape the teeth. She made absolutely no comment about the toilet. Or the other lamp. Or the glass. Or the oh my Celestia, she thought, I'm going mad.

Violet stayed stock still, scared she may have accidentally revealed herself. If this mare started believing in spirits...she was doomed. Sucking a bit more smoke out of the air, she hunkered down and hid behind the shower curtain, taking care not to pull it.

Babs, meanwhile, was in purgatory, the soap in her mouth foul and nasty, even as she tried to stay stock still. Her little hoofies wiggled on the stool and her forelegs trembled as she looked at her mama, pleading with her eyes for it to end.

Realizing Babs never got the hint to open her mouth, Candy used her other hoof to jaws of life that bitch open. Throwing the soap into the sink and shutting off the water, she frowned down at her filly.

“Are you ever going to yell at your brother… or, uh, anypony else, like that again, young lady?” she asked, staring sternly at her.

“N..No, Mama…” she said, whining and trying to wipe the suds from her mouth, giving her the big sad soulful eyes in return to her stern gaze before looking away. Framed or not, that punishment had been a fair one.

Silently, Candy took Babs out of the bathroom and back into the living room. Sitting down on the couch, she pulled her daughter in between her hooves and looked into her face.

Scorecard looked around, seeing his sister about to get a scolding or something before she gets taken across Candy's knee, and shivered. It wasn't fair for them to be punished for nothing!

Babs looked her Mama in the eyes, whimpering as she waited for the worst...this was so wrong. Wrong in every way, but she couldn’t fight it. That would only make it worse...maybe they could beat up the filly, though!

Violet, meanwhile, had slipped back into the living room, trying to avoid making any noise. Aside from a solitary bump of her head against a door, she managed it.

The ear closest to the door flicked. Candy didn't want to look and see a door swinging or creaking on its own. Looking dead ahead at her terrified youngest, she tapped her on the snout.

“Scorecard, get over here.” Candy still had the hoof scrunching up Babs’ snout, thinking.

Scorecard gulped. Oh, no! Was he going to go first?! He gave a nervous titter, tail clamped so hard against his crack and belly he looked tailless. Once he reached her, she jabbed him in the snoot with a boop too.

“Let me make myself very clear,” Candy warned, pushing harder against their noses. “When Mommy says not to do something, then don't do it. Understood?” she asked, taking her hooves off them.

Scorecard nodded quickly, glancing up at her from the tops of his eyes, his face drooping down.

Babs nodded as well, continuing to look her Mama in the eyes as her tail moved to cover her own pudgy bummy. Was...was Mama gonna spank them together, both at once? She’d not done that…

Violet just tilted her head, curious now. What was going on here?

Scorecard was thinking along the same as his sister. That would be new… and horrifying. Not knowing when the next smack was coming, but flinching at the sound of his sister's pudgy bum getting swatted good? He gulped again. This would be awful!

“Go unload the dishwasher, Scorecard, and you can set the table for dinner, Babs, and then help your brother. Shoo.”

Scorecard would have left a colt-shaped dust cloud behind if this were a cartoon.

Babs darted away as well, though not quite as fast...pudge from too much fudge made it very hard for one to budge. But either way, she moved her unspanked flank to set the table and help Score with the dishwasher, relieved as all get-out that she and he escaped the spanks.

Violet, meanwhile, was fuming...they’d escaped! Now what was she...supposed...to...eat….the thought stopped her as she looked and grinned, seeing how out of it the mother was. “Piece of cake” she said to herself, melting back into the shadows and hiding under the couch.

“That's gotta be some sorta record!” Scorecard breathed on tenterhooks, loading up a stack of plates before carrying them to the end of the counter. “To escape Mama without red butts!”

In the living room, Candy rubbed her temples. Groaning, she fell back into the couch, staring at the ceiling.

“I've gone fucking bonkers…” she said in a voice low enough as to not taint the innocent ears of frolicking foals. “Barking mad.”

The glass… the other table! THE FUCKING FLUSH. The door! If she believed in ghosts, maybe, she'd assume they were telling the truth. Not that she wanted her kids talking to invisible spirits or demons or what have you. But she had no answers.

Violet grinned and settled on the couch next to her, teasingly making funny faces all over the place as Babs and Score were finishing up the dishes. “Yeah...I guess we got lucky. Maybe Mama believe in the filly now?”

Said Filly just stayed there, waiting for nightfall...perhaps now would be a good time for either Dad to come home or the scene to cut to nighttime.

Like a vicious fart through the pristine air, it cut to nighttime. Candy was in her gown, having put her children to bed. She was… a bit of a wreck. Jittery and jumpy, she eased back into the sheets and clicked off her lamp after much debating. She watched shadows dance across the ceiling from whatever light was spilling in from outside the window.

What she wouldn't give to have her husband with her tonight… unfortunately, Streamline was a busy service engineer, off on a job and wouldn't be back in Manehattan for several days.

Babs asleep, and Scorecard too, Violet was free to roam the darkened house, slipping into candy’s room with the ease of practice as the mare laid awake, watching the ceiling. Opening her jaw, she began to feed. Candy would feel a strange lethargy come over her as her fear was drained out of her, fueling and fattening up the thin filly on her chest.

Candy spent the night mostly awake. Now and then, she had a gradual weakness come over her. She got up and fetched a glass of juice and munched a muffin from the bread box, stopping to frown at her figure in the hallway mirror. After awhile she began suspecting that it wasn't low blood sugars causing her to feel exhausted and dizzy. There was something definitely wrong. The entire time she thought these things, she worried and fretted, afraid of this unknown. Inadvertently, surely, this would continue to bloat and feed the mysterious guest.

//End of part two...the next part has the good stuff. Don't worry, you all will get your spank on yet....Like Krish and I would ever disappoint in that regard.

>>29021879
Candy Mane deciding to not spank was a good decision by her, of course. I like how Violet is feeding off of the mother's fear right now, too, it's something I did not expect. I'm always a mouth soaping fan too, but poor Babsy.

>>29021879
>>29021903
Agree mouth soaping is so much worse than most realize, i'd almost rather get a 2nd spanking honestly. great story looking forward to the conclusion.

>>29020241

>Not Nomine specifically

Speaking as the guy who created said enchanted hairbrush, and is using it as a plot device (Hee Hee he said Plot) to move Undercover Blues along...

I'm just messing with you. I understand the dislike of stories with too much magic in them, and I like a lot of your down-to-earth style stories. And considering you're one of the bigger authors here compared to someone like little old me, I sure as Hell care about your opinion.

Though I will warn folks, you've already seen this filly dining on naughty foal's fear and melting into shadows, and it's only gonna get stranger from here. The next part would make the Queen of Hearts proud at one point.

>>29021903
>>29021917

Sheesh, that was fast! I barely even post the story and get two nice comments.

As for Vi feeding off Mama Mane's fear, any port in a storm, any meal when you're hungry, right?

And definitely mouth soaping is horrible. As someone who had it done more than once...blech. At least a spanking just hurts for a bit.

Like the return of the Candy Mane. And the Babs.

>>29019729
but it's great that fillies can wear pajamas

Spanking with a hoof is like a spanking with a hard and heavy piece of wood

>>29022663
but pony hooves are soft and delicate

>>29022663
>>29022683
one word: horseshoes. Or those golden/Silver princess regalia slippers.

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>>29022683

>>29022663
so it's like beating with a small wooden hammer

>>29022617
>be Dizzy's foalsitter
>she was a clumsy pony
>again
>her parents didn't have enough time to punish her because they had to go out
>get a task to spank her tush for being clumsy
>you know that Dizzy is enjoying her spankings a bit too much
>give her chores instead, no tv and internets for a few hours, only cleaning her room and the kitchen
>she sighs but she does what was asked for
>after 3 hours she finishes
>sit on the couch, pull her pajama pants down and set her across your lap
>spank and finger her until her butt is pink and she squirts sex juices on your hand
>give her a warm bath, tuck her in the bed to sleep
>her parents come back, they check their daughter's flushed butt
>be called a good foalsitter

>>29022775
m-muh peepee

>>29022775
>be Dizzy's foalsitter
>invite your best friend, Minuette, to watch movies in your house with you and Dizzy
>bring popcorn, chips, and lemonade
>Dizzy was a good filly so you pull her across your lap and open her butt flap
>Minuette settles next to you, leaning against your side and idly scratching behind Dizzy's ears
>start watching a movie on ponyflix, gently rubbing Dizzy's back through her pajamas
>every few seconds you give her a smack or two with your second hand, then you rub her butt
>you watch the movie and chat a bit with Minuette, idly spanking your purring filly
>you even catch some naughty words coming from your friend straight into filly's ear
>both ponies fall asleep snuggled against you
>both of them have wet snatches
>you like that filly and your friend

>>29022878
creepy but in a good way

>>29022878
Terrible foalsitter
He needs to be shot...

>>29023214
he needs to be given a cinnamon bun

>>29023214
>terrible foalsitter
why?

>>29023214
https://derpibooru.org/1208276
this one blue gurl too

>>29022698
Still not like normal horse hooves. "Pruny" hooves have also been shown, so their hooves are different.

>>29022617
Pajamas are love. You have to have something to pull down.

The next morning, as the sun crested the horizon and entered into Candy’s bedroom, a soft hissing sound could be heard. Growing steadily louder until it would likely wake the mare up, the sound moved to a short time of boiling, and the with a loud POP! Candy would feel a sudden weight on her chest as a fuchsia filly appeared, Violet mane disheveled and ragged, bones showing through her frame, even after the meal of fear she had received. Opening two steel-gray eyes, the filly blinked, then looked into the sun, wincing and rubbing them.

Then she gasped and looked at herself, wincing. “Oh bugger…” she said as the realization struck.

Violet would see two baggy, bloodshot magenta eyes piercing through the lines of shadow not yet eliminated by the morning sun. Two hooves sprang up from the sheets and grasped her by the forehooves. Candy panted heavily, her exhausted frame creaking like an old rocking chair as she sat bolt upright. She hadn't slept more than an hour, tops, the entire night.

Violet eeped and tried to pull away, her skeletal frame stronger than it had any right to be. When that proved ineffective, she gulped more, looking up into those magenta eyes with her own, steel grey and scared. She gulped, well aware she was in for it...this mare could see her, and she could touch her too.

With that realization, Vi just froze, hoping her skeletal appearance would inspire some pity in the mare, despite her clearly bloated belly.

Candy pulled her closer, bringing the filly's face within inches of her own. She looked at the horn. Then the thin, bony frame. The mane, the swollen belly, the steely eyes, everything. Then she glanced to the rump. Then back to the eyes.

“A… a l-little far from Canterlot, are we?!” she hissed in a vicious voice. “An invisibility spell so you could torture my children, huh?!”

“No! No, it’s not like that at all!” the filly protested, struggling still. “I...I’m not from Canterlot, honest!” she cried out, clearly audible throughout the place. Her accent was easy to place yet again. Trottingham, but very old fashioned. “S’truth! I swear! I meant thee no harm!” she stammered, still trying to escape. “A..And thou couldst not see me for a special reason!”

Candy half placed the accent, but she only ever heard old folks yammer on in it. This in no way altered the present climate.

“Trottingham has a school for magical fillies, huh?! What's this special reason, then?! A potion? Alchemy? WHO ARE YOU AND WHY ARE YOU HERE?” she demanded.

Scorecard crawled out of bed, stretching and wiping his eyes. What in blazes was all that noise? He approached the wall joining his room to Babs’ and knocked softly upon it, seeing if she were awake already.

Babs was indeed already awake, and she crept over to her brother’s room. “It ain't me yellin...ya don't think Mama caught her, do ya?” she asked.

Meanwhile, the “Her” in question was gulping and scared. “Thou couldst not see me because thou art too old! Too grown up! Too mature! Thou no longer believeth in me and so to thee I doth not appear!” she yelped, blinking her eyes. Already her belly seemed to be shrinking as the sun continued to shine on her, causing her to whimper.

“Make sense and stop talking like a loon and TELL ME WHY YOU ARE HERE!” Candy demanded, her eyes flicking once to her nightstand and back.

Scorecard, meanwhile, shrugged at his sister. “I 'unno, but I hopes she did! I wanna see that brat get what's comin’, know what I'm sayin’? Let's go take a peep.”

Babs nodded, letting Scorecard lead the way to their Mama’s room, just in time to hear the sound of their mother struggling to hold a little filly. All delicious and nice, but the next line might just floor them and click everything into place.

“Thou...You couldst not...Couldn’t...see me because I doth...am…” she stammered, clearly having trouble overcoming her native accent. “I’m the Bogeymare and you’re too old!” she finally managed to get out.

“Oh, that makes sense!” Scorecard whispered in a satisfied moment of clarity.

Candy continued glaring at the intruder, holding tightly still. She wasn't yet buying this supernatural nonsense, but she knew one thing for sure.

“I don't care who you are, but you'll pay for breaking my lamp and scaring the crap out of my family and trying to get my foals into trouble!”

“We weren't actually scared…” Scorecard mumbled, but focusing his gaze on the scene about to unfold. Was what he was thinking would happen going to happen?

Violet eeped, shrinking in on herself, her stomach now back to its normal size...or lack thereof. Now she looked like any starving filly. Candy could even see the growing fear and dread in her eyes as she redoubled her efforts to pull away, trying to escape the fate her actions had earned her. “W..What art thou...What art thy plans for me?”

Babs snickered outside, whispering to Scorecard “Two bits says Mama uses the hairbrush...and speak for yourself, she got me soaped!” she said, giggling.

“Well, I'd imagine you could use some good food,” Candy suggested.

Outside, Scorecard did the whole 'AWW C'MON!’ thing, though quietly.

“But first you're going to get what my children would have gotten!” Candy continued, still glaring at her. “You're paying for your night of fun, young lady.”

Babs snickered again. “Looks like ya owe me two bits, brother.” she teased. “Double or nothin she tries ta block and gets punishment spanks?”

Violet, meanwhile, was grimacing. “I..I doth always look like this...I do not partake of mortal foodstuffs…” she stammered, still scared as she whimpered. “And...what...what doth thy plan to...what you wouldst have…”

She gasped and renewed her struggles as the realization hit her. “No! No, thou cannot! Thou wouldst not! Let me go!”

“Hey, dere's nothing sayin’ she's getting brushed!” Scorecard argued. “Bet she does block, though!”

“You can stop talking like how stupid ponies think Princess Luna does and take your medicine,” Candy snapped, kicking her legs off of the bed as she adjusted to a seated position on the edge. Throwing this thin filly over her knee, she reached for the object on the nightstand: the brush.

“Ah, zebra darts…” Scorecard sighed.

Violet struggled a little more, then whimpered. “Canst thou at least close the curtains? The sunlight burns…” she asked, coming perilously close to whining and begging.

Babs grinned and held out her hoof to Score. “Pay up.” she gloated.

“You're in no position to make demands,” Candy said, cracking the brush against her own thigh in a test swing. “You're about to be one very, very sorry little girl!”

“Do ya see pockets on these soccer jams?” Scorecard hissed quietly at his sis. “Now shaddap, it's starting!”

“Please! I beg of thee...my skin feels aflame!” Violet begged Candy, not only to delay the spanking, but with her honesty in her voice. Her tail instinctively swung down to protect her tender, thin flank cheeks. Meanwhile, her horn stayed useless, not even sparking yet.

Babs grinned and settled in to listen...this promised to be quite good. Mama was mad, and a Mad mama meant a sad bottom.

Candy slapped the tail to her back, twisting a bony hoof up to cover and pin it. Ignoring Violet's pleas, she swung the brush out, up, and then WHACKED it down firmly and soundly across the right cheek. The brush covered the thin butt-half easily.

“Eee!” Scorecard squeed like a filly. “It's a mad, mad, mad, mad Mama!”

Violet’s yelp of pain was high pitched and shrill, more like a scream than a yelp. Already that cheek was turning a dusty pink just from the first spank...this was not going to be a fun time for the filly, not at all. “H..How many?” she finally managed to stammer out, tears already forming in the corners of her eyes.

Babs grinned. “Heh, Score...she thinks Mama counts the spanks...this is gonna be rich.”

“You be quiet!” Candy scolded, cracking the heavy hairbrush across the left cheek now. “You'll get the spanking you've got coming! A GOOD HARD SPANKING, just like my foals would have gotten! That sounds about right!”

CRACK, CRACK, CRACK!

“Aaah,” Scorecard sighed happily, falling to his rump and stretching out to watch and listen. “Good stuff.”

Violet yelped and thrashed and screamed as the brush cracked down into two tender cheeks, cheeks that had gone many long years without feeling the firm discipline of a mother’s hoof. Already turning red, her flank was burning more than any other part of her.

Meanwhile, around her horn was gathering the same black smoky ooze that Babs and Score had seen before...the same stuff this girl ate all the time.

Candy smacked again and again, alternating cheeks, her wide swings and hefty cracks slapping those sorry cheeks at sharp angles. Violet would learn that she was in the well practiced hooves of the mother of Babs Seed. All the while, she kept the forehoof pinned, allowing her legs to kick freely off the side of the bed.

“Looks like she's gonna eat again!” Scorecard noticed. “Is she scarin’ Mama? Dat's how booger ponies eats, right?”

Violet screamed and thrashed as much as she could, then her magic finally manifested, attempting to pull the curtain closed!

Candy's eyes flicked to the window. Yeah, no. If there was that impossibility that this was a boogeymare getting her butt tanned over her lap, she'd keep her under wraps.

With two heavy WHACKS across both buttcheeks to stall the spell, she leaned back, stretched out her leg, and kicked the nightstand over to the window. It pinned the open curtain between it and the wall.

Violet’s protests were cut short by the two heavy whacks as she threw her other hoof back to block the dreaded brush, crying openly now.

“I’m sorry! Please! No more!” she begged, trying to stall or end this torment. “I’ll leave! I’ll stay in the shadows where I belong! Just please stop!”

“When we're done, dear,” Candy reminded her sternly, grabbing the other hoof and pulling it back. Readjusting, she held both hooves crisscrossed behind Vi’s back, pressing hard on the bony limbs. “We've got lots of time yet!”

Candy lowered the angle of her swing, whack, whack, whack, the brush bounced up and down. She danced it across Violet's rump, keeping the writhing filly in place.

“I’m sorrr-oorrryyyy!” Vi screamed as the brush bounced up and down her flanks, eliciting a yelp with each spank. Her bottom growing redder and redder, the supernatural filly squirmed and writhed, trying desperately to get away from the spanks tormenting her poor flank.

Finally, though, she just stilled, no longer fighting it, just resigned to the pain.

Just because she had given in did not release her from the punishment. Candy fell into a routine, her grip against the hooves lighter, but prepared to tighten at a moment's notice. Her thigh was elevated, stretching out the thin sitspots. Occasionally, she cracked against the top of a thigh, but kept her focus on painting a nice scarlet cloud over that tush.

“When we're done, you can plant yourself in the corner in the living room, right across from the window!” Candy told her sternly. “When I'm satisfied you've had enough time to calm down and think, we'll come back in here and have a good long talk!”

Candy started laying in the cracks straight across both cheeks now, thrashing the buttcrack.

Outside, Scorecard was in awe. “Gooosh. It looks sooo much worse from out here, huh? I don'ts think Mama ever let me watch you gettin’ brushed! I'm always in the corner…”

Violet’s thrashing had finally stilled, as said, and while the more furious assault on her bottom and sitspots did garner more yelps and screams, she stayed nearly stock still, her voice having given up as well. Able only to utter half sounds. Her wailing, though...it was the wail of a banshee, almost painful to hear.

Finally, though, Candy would hear a hacking and coughing from her as she began trying to cough out the snot and tears that had somehow collected in her mouth.

Candy's spanking slowed to a more methodical pace now, seconds growing between hard smacks. Beating the drum to this slow pace, she focused on the sitspots. She rubbed the pinned forehooves softly and had long since stopped her scolding. The only sounds were whatever crying and snotting was coming from that filly… and the occasional whack of a heavy wooden hairbrush.

Candy counted to twenty in her head and whacked the final thwack. The hairbrush thudded as she tossed it back onto the nightstand. She held Vi closely, letting her cry on across her lap.

Violet sobbed and cried her eyes out, squirming on Candy’s lap as the pain grew, even after the hairbrushing stopped. Poor girl was becoming more skeletal by the second, it seemed.

Babs just grimaced. “Dat was almost as bad as the time you an I fought over dat game, huh?” she whispered. Not that she felt sorry for the girl, to after what she did...maybe a smidge.

Said girl was finally at least able to speak, though she didn’t much, preferring to continue to cry and sob, until, finally, her voice sounded out. “Please...the sun...ithurts…”

Candy frowned. She wrapped a hoof around her waist and hoisted her up into her chest, turning away from the window. Was this poor child sensitive or allergic to sunlight?

“Why does it hurt?” Candy asked, not unkindly.

“Man, don't reminds me!” Scorecard said, wincing. “After Mama thrashed ya goods, she came and tanned me just as bad, it felt!”

A sniffle and a few sobs were Candy’s only response for a minute or so, until she lifted her head. “I...I told thee...I’m the Bogeymare...the light of yon sun tis my Anathema.” she explained, trying in vain to wipe her tears from her eyes...though they were just replaced by new ones. Her nose was running as well, from all the crying.

Though it seemed turning away from the direct sunlight helped a bit...her shivering stilled and she seemed to start filling out again.

“Score...dis filly is weird, with a capital W, E, I, R, and D.” Babs whispered to her brother.

Candy was prepared to sigh intently at that nonsense… until she noticed the skeletal thinness begin to fill out a little before her eyes. They widened.

“Is that so?” she asked rhetorically, trying to process all of this information. “Do you need a facecloth for your snout?”

“Not much weirder den da way you and our Cus plays house!” Score teased, satisfied with the whuppin.

“Oh shaddap abouts dat, watch da show! Dis is gettin real good!” Babs told him, looking at the filly. The filling out had stopped, but now she only looked starved, not emaciated.

“I..I wouldst most appreciate that, if thou wouldst be so kind…” the filly said to Candy, still sniffling and whining at the pain. “And it is...it is true. I doth be the spirit of all foalhood terror…”

“Come to the bathroom,” Candy offered, squeezing her tightly and setting her on her hooves and reaching out for a forehoof. “I must admit, I am curious to learn more.”

For a spirit of foal terror, Candy wasn't exactly shaking in her fur. Still, she was willing to show kindness now that there was a bright, shiny bottom in the room.

“Ah craaap, bail!” Scorecard hissed. “Before Mama and da Boogerbrat come out!”

Babs booked it! Moving as quickly as she could, hurrying back to her room so as not to get in trouble.

Violet, meanwhile, was simply following Candy, letting her lead her by the hoof if she wanted to. “I wilt answer thy questions…” she said, rubbing her bottom with her free hoof if she could. “And...I do believe thy foals wert watching mine...penalty.” she said, looking around.

Babs growled when she heard that. That little squealer! How’d she KNOW?!

Candy heard Scorecard’s bedroom door slam with the subtlety of controlled detonation. Rolling her eyes, she shook her head.

“I see…” she mused amusedly. “Well, you can't necessarily begrudge them of that, could you?” she asked with a yawn, though in all fairness she would have shooed them… eventually.

In the bathroom, she stood Vi by the sink and let some warm water flow over the soap from the night before. In the cabinet by the toilet, she extracted a cloth.

“So… why my children, again?” Candy asked, quite forgetting the 'talking later’ bit.
“I...I doth dine upon fear, and naughty foals provide goodly amounts thereof…” she explained, squirming a little as Candy applied the cloth to her face. Bogeymare or not, she still acted like a foal trying to escape the cleaning. Maybe she wasn’t as old as she claimed.

“And...I art not upset...they didst not mean any harm, only ca...catheart...what is that word?” she asked.

“Catharsis, sweetheart,” Candy supplied, squeezing the cloth against Violet's snout. “Blow.”

Once that was done, she went on.

“If you eat fear… then you ate your own, pre… presumably?” Candy stifled a yawn, stretching. She was really tired.

“Neigh. I cannot do that...I, um...I didst, um...dine upon thy fears last night.” she confessed, still squirming against the cloth. Oddly, when she wiped away the stuff, the cloth would come back black before slowly turning its normal color again.

“I am sorry...I wast starving last night, and the rain drove me indoors…”

Candy frowned upon hearing that she was a sampler platter. Still, the punishment was over. No use complaining now. She dropped the black, lightening cloth back into the sink, staring at it.

“We've got potato chips, honey,” Candy explained with exasperation, folding her hooves. “If you were starving, why didn't you just bang on the door? Or were you invisible until the sun hit you this morning?”

“I cannot be seen by adults...only by foals.” she said. “Under the light of the sun I become visible, and tangy...tongua….” she stammers, facehoofing. “310 years old and I still doth not know simple Equestrian…”

“So, I'll only see you in some tangible form during the daylight?” Candy asked, opting not to scoff at the supposed age; if this little girl was over three centuries old, then Candy was the queen.

It would explain the archaic speech, though. And she nodded. “Unless thou comest to believe in the Spirits, such as me, I shalt be invisible to thee save within the light of the sun. And that hurts me.” she explained, whining a little. “And...even if you couldst have seen me, I doth not partake of mortal foodstuffs.” she explained. “I can...eat them...but they doth not nourish me in any manner.”

“So, I can see you now, I suppose? And… that's a raw deal,” she said sadly. “Is there any easy way for you to feed?”

“Neigh...I hath tried. Scary movies I can feed upon, but...they doth taste of disgusting things.” she explained, sighing. “I just wish I could draw the same nutrition from fake fear I can from real fear. I would dine upon it instead.”

Once the cleaning was done, she rubbed her own face seemingly rearranging it before it settled back into place. “Would...would it bother you if I were to clean my ears as well…”

Violet tilted her head. “Um..I, um...I didn’t mean that…” she said, then nodded. “But it wouldst work better…” She nodded, then reached up and pulled on her head. Harder...harder...POP! She set her head on the lip of the sink, her body stepping away. “To make it easier for thee to reach my ears.”

Man, that was a good fifteen seconds or so with Candy standing stock still, gawking blankly at the head. The facecloth was on the floor, having fallen from a limp grip.

Once she was surely calmed down enough to be sensible again, Candy backed up. With a resounding, echoing twump, she landed butt first into the bathtub.

“What doth be troubling thee?” her head asked, her body coming over and offering a hoof to help her out. “I told thee I am the Bogeymare...I canst take myself apart at will. In fact, I even keepeth mine to…” she started to say, then clamped her mouth shut with a sheepish blush.

Candy observed the extended hoof like a firearm pointed in her face. Safety off, she allowed the assistance, though she made sure to do most of the work with getting up, as not to pull that filly into the bath with her. Huh, maybe she'll offer a bath later.

“I-I s-see…” Candy croaked, the last morsels of hope that this all had a perfectly reasonable explanation leaking out of the proceedings and running down the drain. “You keep your what?” she continued, seeking clarification.

A blushing headshake was her response. “Nothing...naught of importance.” she stammered, the little fibber. Her body wasn’t really all that strong anyway, no stronger than a normal filly without the head.

Weirdly, there wasn’t any blood either, just a clean cut. Like this filly was a jigsaw puzzle.

“Are you okay? I hath heard that a fall within one's bathtub canst cause massive injury. All the more reason I doth not take them anymore.” she said, her body going to sit in the corner.

“I’m fine, yes,” Candy said hastily, rubbing her keister and remembering her muffin. “I'm getting as robust as my darling sister, so I’ve got padding.” She shook her head. “Just… put it back on. Pl-please…”

Well, at least Vi might get a snack from her fear.

With a quizzical look, the young filly called to her body and proceeded to quite literally pull herself back together. Once her head was reattached, and after giving it a spin to make sure it was screwed on just right...she was no Grinch, after all!...Violet nodded to Candy again.

“I do apologize for startling thee...I didst tell thee, however, what I doth be. Perhaps thou now believeth me a mite more than before?” she asked, letting a minor bit of snark creep into her voice.

“Mm,” Candy answered shortly with a grunt of assent. “I’ll clean your ears, you know… properly…”

Once the task had been completed, slowed a little by a sudden reluctance to touch this demon filly, Candy stood back from her and frowned.

“So… where do we go from here?” she asked, forgetting about the corner time she had planned.

“I doth not know, to be most truthful with thee…” she said, rubbing her left ear. Just like when her face was wiped, the swabs had come back black and were slowly lightening again.

“After all,” she continued, giving a slight glare to the older mare, “I didst expect to never even be seen by thee, let alone to have my flank beaten by thine hairbrush. Left to my own devices, I wouldst have been gone before now, belly full and on my way.” she almost, but not quite, snapped.

Candy narrowed her eyes. “Yes. Feeding on the pain and fear of my children being spanked for no good reason. Still, I wouldn’t feel comfortable with letting you mosey on your way without feeding you up… somehow.”

“I doth not feed on pain, only upon fear. And thy children doth hardly be angelic seraphim or cherubim. They themselves didst admit to me that they hadst committed misdeeds for which they were never apprehended nor suffered consequences for.” she snapped for real. “I doth not frighten the innocent. Only those deserving of a good fright as penance for their misbehaviors.”

“Without specifics, I wouldn’t justify punishing them, darling,” Candy said with delicacy. “And you didn’t mention how you can actually feed right now, because you look like you’re starving.” An idea hit her. “Aaactually… I’m wired now, but give me an hour, and the lack of sleep will catch up with me… and this freakin’ ordeal is going to mess with my dreams. Can you eat those?”

“Not...thy dreams. But if thou shouldst have a nightmare, then yes. I canst and often do dine upon the fear that those generate.” she said slowly, looking at Candy with an unknowable emotion in her eyes. “And if thou doth offer such, I would be thrice the fool not to accept.” she continued, her body growing fainter without the sunlight to force her into tangibility.

“Then that’s settled, I suppose… Scorecard has awful night-terrors, but if they can be beneficial to SOMEPONY, I guess it doesn’t do any harm? Celestia, that makes me feel like an awful mother…” She lost her train of thought a moment. “Just, yeah, I’m going back to sleep soon, feel free to feed, and… as long as you aren’t the source of my children’s nightmares, stop by and fill up.”

She nodded, her body now only halfway there as she faded away. “Then I suppose I’ll see you in your dreams.” she said, carefully rubbing her eye, then pulling it out and dipping it in the sink before putting it back in. “Sorry...it keeps sticking.” she said, before finally fading completely from view.

Once she was gone, Candy sat down on the edge of the bathroom. She’ll get her kids ready for school shortly, and then off to take a good nap.

“What the fuck is my life, even,” she mumbled, head in hoof. “A fucking boogeymare. I ask you…”

At that word, suddenly Candy found herself with a bar of soap stuffed into her mouth and the sound of fading laughter on the wind.


//And there is the end of part three. I know it got a bit more wonky towards the end, but here's hoping you all enjoyed it. Krish and I may yet write more about Vi's antics, if folks like it.

And for those wondering, Vi wasn't inspired by Woox's dream spirits. In fact, I referenced her in response to that story, stating I had an OC similar to it.

>>29024504
Good things come to those who wait. Now I will see if this is one of them. Thanks for the post and the collab! You got KK to write something again!

>>29024504
You two did great. This was very unique and creative. I'm glad Violet got found out, even though undeserved spankings are hot to me, too! Scorecard and Babs making commentary and betting on what their mommy would do made me laugh my ass off. Candy was cool in this story, too, and her reaction to all of the shit Vi did was hilarious. I loved it.

>At that word, suddenly Candy found herself with a bar of soap stuffed into her mouth and the sound of fading laughter on the wind.

She deserved that. Cussing, unacceptable. All parents can be hypocrites, sometimes.

>writing more
Go for it, this was awesome!

goodnight Spanking Thread

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>>29024504
Funny, but sort of lost me with the last few posts. Despite a story like it being told many times before, I think I'd rather read Candy disciplining the foals than the ghost.

>>29024504
I hope for more Vi shenanigans in the future.

>>29019729
>ponies not normally wear cloths makes writing some spanking tropes difficult.
>exposer humiliation
>close person to spankee seeing his/her bare butt.
I like using the tail as corollary to underwear. The last line of defense between the spanker and an unfortunate rump...the last bit of modesty covering the private parts.

When the tail is pulled out of the way we are past the point of no return.

whew just managed to keep up with reading all these awesome stories.

>Nomine story
I can see the resemblance between your boogymare and the dream spirits story I wrote. yet they are totally 2 different things.
The story was nice yet somehow cute story. believable reactions and interactions between all of 4 characters.
spanking felt just right not long or harsh . neither short and unjustified.
I love how candy mane saw a naughty magical filly and spanked her.
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>>29020795
did that story ended ?
if so it went on low note. if not then I can't wait for the finally.
so far this is story is both hot and funny at the same time. I like Luna's interactions with twilight and how she was way too open about spanking subject.
I also love the way you tie up your stories together. and the way you branched them out.
I also can't wait to read more stories from you.

>>29022775
I'm not sure if the spanking was a reward or a punishment.

>>29022878
>Minuette
that was completely random.
Also I kinda agree with >>29023168 .
not want to discourage you or anything. but I find these shorts a bit shallow for my taste. I really like them but could you expand more.

page 10 bump

>>29026196
>I'm not sure if the spanking was a reward or a punishment.
a nice bonus for Dizzy and a proof of your job done for her parents

>>29026196
>did that story ended ?
for that one yeah, theres no dramatic conclusion just Twilight resigned to visits from luna every week for who knows how long. There will probably be a short follow up to both where Mrs. Brightheart and Luna meet or at least find out about each other or something, i'm not really decided yet.

>>29026797
what about twilight's spanking machine.
did she just leave it in her castle ... and would starlight glimmer get lost there and stumble upon it ?

>>29027458
That's not a bad idea

page 8 guiz

>>29027458
my god your right. soon.

>>29020795
Like the Minotaur story, started realistic then went off the deep rails, but stayed white hot throughout. Your kinks and mine align a good deal.

>>29028728
yeah things got a bit out of hand looking back but whatever, Rarity had it coming. glad you enjoyed it.

>>29025361
Is that screenshot from Double Rainboom?

>>29026162
I like the tail being pulled away so much I find myself wishing humans had one. I'm a weirdo fuck.

>>29005033
There is another by this artist on derpibooru featuring Cadance and Shining.
Can't be posted here without major censoring.

>>29030353
Oh, well then I'm gonna look for it.

>>29030353
https://derpibooru.org/1305022?scope=scpea975c7f2e908d8f05e087ccc396074ff0d2c3319

here it is.

>domestic abuse thread

>>29031095
but we like spankings though

>>29028600
how about that Starlight used that err... lap/basement for her studies. she just left that machine there being covered.
but one day she invites trixie to help her with new spells or to help her create new tricks for her magic show..
you know where I'm going with this

>>29031206
maybe starlight did modify and added new features on twilight's machine. before it captured Trixie.

>>29031206
hmm yeah im thinking maybe the current story is set right after twilight gets the castle but before meeting starlight. Either luna has stopped supervising Twilight or Twilight just reports to canterlot for it so starlight does not know about it. Then she stumbles across it ect ect.

>>29025361
To be constructive, the character opens up some possibilities. A disembodied character witnessing their own spanking?

If the character wasn't so hurt by sunlight, sunlight as a punishment too. But it read like that causes too much agony / death.

>>29014903
>spike curled down holding his stomach.
>aww my stomach hurt. what did I eat ? - spike
>twilight ignored you and head to flurry's crib.
>she looked at flurry heart.
>flurry was just sitting there innocently.
>Twilight waved her hoof in front of flurry's face.
>flurry was dosed off barely noticing Twilight .
>ok, It seems that she turned back to her normal self.
>sunburst was nervous for some reason.
>twilight noticed how nervous he was.
>she somehow knew he had something to do with it.
>she glared at him.
>sunburst felt pressured and he couldn't take it anymore.
>ok it was all my fault.
>I was doing a little research on the progress of alicorn intelligence. >I found out that she was receptive to brain enhancing spells.
>and I did cast that on her . the results were amazing. she was able to solve basic mathematical equations. and she got much better control of her magic.
>if she can control her alicorn outburst at young age. we can prevent another disaster , like that time she broke the crystal heart.
>but I was foolish enough to increase the intensity of her brain enhancing spell. it back fired on me and she transformed me into a spoon. that's all I remember.
>cadance then continued the tale
>when you were missing I sent a look out team to search for you. meanwhile the other staff took care of her. she transformed them one by one. so I had to send for twilight for help.
>twilight continued...
>I came here as fast as I could. I met my brother who was on his way to the meeting. he explained the whole thing.
>so i went straight to see flurry heart to make sure she was safe. which thankfully was. then I noticed her increased intelligence. she manged to imitate my spells.

>>29032029
>I was so fascinated by her progress. and I had to document everything. I wanted to be the first to document a baby alicorn's progress.
>sunburst sorry twilight but I was first in that field. -sunburst
>but I had more progress than you . -Twilight
>doesn't matter I was doing it first. -Sunburst
>can you not compete on experimenting on my daughter. -Cadance
>oh sorry. -both twilight and sunburst
>continue twilight. - Cadance
>ok where was I ... oh yes I continued to cast higher level spell seeing if she can keep up. somehow she did. I cast brain for thought spell on her and she was able to read. so I brought with me the advance arcane spellbook. then I showed it to her. she was only a foal. she didn't really understand all of it. she just picked random spell that thought it was cool for her.
>and before I knew it she cast me inside the mirror. I got trapped there for 2 days. watching and monitoring all things that happened.
>the red head mare was rubbing her red butt."I knew that I was being watched."
>anon came here and got caught into this mess.
>she throw me out of the tall tower to my death. if it was not for that guard I would be dead by now.
>she turned spike into a baby bottle.
>spike, I was turned into what ! that's lame owe owe my stomach.
>your stomach ache probably cause This princess (you pointed at cadance) wouldn't listen to me and pure milk inside the bottle ...errr you.
>Cadance was kinda ashamed and lowered her ears.
>Twilight tried to defuse the accusations. she said "at least no pony got hurt in the process"
>you , that mare and spike stared at twilight.
>twilight panicked a little and corrected her sentence.
>"no one was badly hurt..."
>she stopped when that mare showed twilight her red rump.
>twilight panicked again.

>>29032041
>I'm sorry everypony . -Cadance.
>I'm sorry that my daughter caused you all these troubles. I take full responsibilities for her actions.
>ever other ponies instantly forgave her. it wasn't your fault... it's ok... I was the one who cause all of this - sunburst.
>twilight no it was me who brought her the magical book.
>you on the other hand felt her apology was have ass-ed. these ponies have great respect for their Queen. so they cannot really be so sincere and not kiss up to her.
>you didn't want to say anything and be the outcast of the crowd, so you just left the room.
>as every other pony in the room sharing the blame Cadance noticed you leaving but didn't say anything.
>she excused herself. she was still needed in the meeting that was taking place outside the empire.
>She asked twilight to handle the situation inside the castle.
>then she flew out.
>Twilight took care of things.
>she even personally took you to the guest quarters. and showed you the room you would stay in for the day.
>It's still noon in here in the empire you have the whole day for yourself. you can still go outside and see the Crystal empire. I'm pretty sure you'd love it here.
>maybe I will but first I need a shower and some clean cloths. I can't go out half naked.
>Twilight oh yes you and your weird obsession with cloths.
>you just rolled your eyes knowing there is no point arguing with naked pony.
>you went inside your quarters to refresh. then spend most of your day outside.

--

now that's out of the way. I can safely approach the story finally.

Never say no to a mom with a manebrush.

>>28972199

Page 9 bump, would have content but I just woke up

>>29032069
Man, you all are loving the zany stuff this thread! Transformation spells, magical genius babies, all that stuff. This was really creative woox.

>>29031986

Well, to be fair, it could be used. Violet was playing up the sun somewhat, trying for sympathy.

I hadn't thought of her receiving a disembodied spanking before, that's actually a really interesting idea.

For those who like undeserved spankings, perhaps I should delve into her backstory a bit...Hers has quite a few.

>>29033298
Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed the silly scenarios in my story.
I did have more magical "zani" ideas that I couldn't fit in the story.
One of them was body switch.
Imagine a filly cast body switch the moment she was about to receive her spanking. Maybe she switch body with an adult.

Another idea was transforming a pony into a rug/sheet then get carpet beater treatment.

>>29034407
>One of them was body switch.
YES! YES! Done all the time in shows so it wouldn't even be out of the ordinary.

Dunno if I would like the rug thing (inanimate object transformation is where I stop) but that's okay.

>>29034476
second on the body switch

page 9 jesus christ this is slow today

page 9 bumperoo

>>29035646
yeah sure is, i'm kinda sick so nothing from me for a bit til i can get over this.

>>29036745
slowness is a fact of this thread's life, we've made it through it every time. no worries friendo

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>>29010360
>>29010736
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>>29037194
Whoa, that's my dick. There it is. I wonder if Luna knows that spanking Sweetie is stimulating to her? What would happen if she found out?

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>>29037407
She would make her dream of her parents spanking each other for fun.
That should be a turn off.

>>29037464
This is well done, nice job. Cloudy Quartz is a total milf and poor Pinkie Pie probably deserved it.

>>29037450
That's not the only flank Rarity's father has spanked, for sure.

Bedtime

>>29004648
love

>>29005033
odd context but kinda hot

>>29032069
Not giving feedback because I'm waiting for it to finish before I give it a good read.

>maybe I will but first I need a shower and some clean cloths. I can't go out half naked.
>Twilight oh yes you and your weird obsession with cloths.
>you just rolled your eyes knowing there is no point arguing with naked pony.

hot

>>29037860
unf. Different context for all three fillies and mares in his life.

>>29014903
>sunburst turned around and was wiping his penis . it was stained with foal's food.
I hope someone did guess what happened to him, and why his penis was stained.
Hint he was a spoon

>>29037194
Oh I was kinda gonna draw something similar to this.
Good job sterny

>>29038966
>I was kinda gonna draw something similar to this
Do eet pls

>>29037860
Maybe someone should finally spank him.

If anyone is wanting, people can do mlp role plays at animeotk.com

>>29039517
originally i was gonna do it with Dizzy.. but his is more relevant to this thread's posts.
And I don't want to steal his thunder.

>>29039634
>animeotk
its hated by many people here in 4chan. due to their mods and their favoritism.

I once learned that some people where using some scenarios from one of my stories as RP material.

>>29039658
>using some scenarios from one of my stories as RP material.
Really?
That makes that shithole of a site even more cancerous

>>29039681
not sure if this is an insult to me(and my stories) or that website.

>>29039697

Sounded like he was insulting the website.

It was Rainbow Dash's 20th birthday.
It was also the day she moved all the way into her new house all the way on the other side of town.
Sipping from a coffee mug, she reminisced about childhood.
More specifically, childhood punishment.
Even more specifically, childhood spankings.
As she had grown older, spankings had, of course, become both harsher and less common.
For example, when she was 7, being rude would have earned her a smacked tushy, but when she was 17, it would have earned her a brief scolding and a warning to behave.

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(Combination of three ideas in the anonfilly / mlp general threads)

If you ignore ages, then first my image
then this >>29013776
then this >>29008387

>>29009131
Annoyed secretary is hilarious.

>>29019729
KK got around this in his Cake twins story.

>>29021315
Oh yes.

>>29040118
Veeery interesting. Being what one thinks is too old for a spanking and getting one anyway is a delicious injustice.

>>29040118
>As she had grown older, spankings had, of course, become both harsher and less common.

That's why I love the older filly spankings, because you can make them harsher and the story plot is usually that they did something really super bad. You know they deserve it.

>>29040534
Ear pulling is muh shit

>>29041160
>AB's expression
>the pose
>my imagined context
>AJ's smug face
Excellent.

>>29041201
>my imagined context
Mind to share?

>>29041160
Apple Bloom's head looks a little weird for the sketch since it's black and white, and I like underarm better, but it's cute and Applejack's face is smug and funny

page 9, things moving fast today

>>29041312
If I had more I would've posted it. Just a loose idea from the file name: Applejack wants something done (some farm chore like picking apples or washing jars) and AB gives her some lip or doesn't want to do it. Then she gets some encouragement from Applejack as she carries her to where the chore is.

>>29042532
I like this headcanon Pan

Do you remember Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon teasing Apple Bloom and Twist about their blank flanks in "Call of the Cutie"?
I'd take these two naughty fillies on my lap and tell them about the true meaning of cutie marks, and that friendship is more important than money. Then I'd hug them and ask to say sorry to other fillies.

>>29043129
Now that is just abusive.

>>29043129
DT should apologize to SS and SS should spank her as penance for DTs treatment of her and then they could fuck

"Bend over" you said firmly.
"Anon, wh-what are y-"
"Bend over" you repeated with some clear impatience. "Do not make me say it three times".
Trixie obeyed, trembling.
"It's going to be thirty five. You will count".
You picked the riding crop with your mouth while Trixie gulped.
First strike.
"EEEEEEEEEEEEHHH!! ONE!"

Ever since Trixie went mad with power and took over Poniville, you've now discovered, she's been taking stallions to her chambers and forcing them to pull a dominant act on her as foreplay.
As the strikes continue, you hope that you are doing a good enough job, as you fear that all those other stallions that were whipped in public had been in the same situation as you now but failed to impress her.