Incestuous Relationships Thread

>>28865141
Bump
If singles I kill myself

>>28865583
Drink the bleach bitch.

>>28865141
Bumping for qt sis green

>>28865583
rip

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FROSTY PLS

>>28865583
RIP

>>28867538
its ded anon

its time to let go

I still can't believe the last thread lasted for 4 weeks.

>>28868279
Me neither.

I'd like write some stuff, but my sister has a birthday tomorrow and I'm trying to get ready for that.

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>>28869304
You better give your sister all the love she deserves, onii-chan.

>>28870630

>>28869304
I hope you give her a nice, long, present for her birthday.

>>28871409
This.

>>28872895

>>28873548

Previously; http://pastebin.com/xsBFVzbv

>You are Anonymous, and you don’t have much time.
>You don’t often get the chance to do this in the morning, but you have to be swift.
>You huff and puff, clenching your teeth as you desperately jerk your dick in a white-knuckled grip.
>It hasn’t even been a minute yet and you’re already close.
>You almost never get the opportunity to deal with your morning wood because your sister always wakes up before you.
>But not today. Today, /you/ woke up first, opening the way for a unique opportunity.
>An opportunity to get off /twice/ in a day instead of just once like usual.
>You think of some of the lewder movies you’ve seen, the shapely women therein.
>You think of a few books from one of your rare forays into the adult section of the library.

>>28874911
>You grunt as your rhythm gets too fast and your hand slips over the head of your dick at a funny angle.
>You lose grip, get pre all over your palm, and stop the friction for a full second.
>You hurry up and start jerking again with gusto, but the peak fell away.
>The imagery in your head is hot, it’s keeping you on your peak, but it’s not enough to finish this.
>Your mind shuffles through all of your memories and imagination, trying to find that one perfect image to make you-
>Unbidden, a new image fills your mind.
>Chryssie, naked in the tub, grabbed your hand by the wrist and forced you to /feel/ her.
>She stares deeply into your eyes the whole time, a furious blush on her face.
>’I just… don’t want… any barriers… between us…’
>You almost recoil and stop from reflex, but instead you bite your lip and groan quietly. Rational thoughts were beginning to leak out of your ears.
>You were /so/ close…
>Another image.
>Chryssie again, her hand feeling you through your pants.
>’Oh, and if you ever want to touch me down there again, just go ahead.’
>‘You don’t even have to ask for permission.’
>Oooh fuck that’s so wrong in hindsight
>Oooh fuck you’re cumming
>You tense, teeth clenched as you lean over the toilet bowl.
>With an undignified groan and a few wanton thrusts, you were shooting your load into the toilet water.
>Then it was over.

>>28874919

>You must’ve been quite a sight. Pajama pants around your ankles, hunched over the toilet with one hand leaning on the counter and the other wrapped firmly around your dick. Panting like you just ran a marathon, sweating like it’s summer, and a face redder than a tomato to top it all off.
>Now that your orgasm has passed and your head is clear, you feel dirty.
>Not your appearance, that doesn’t concern you. The bathroom is no place for silly things such as dignity.
>What makes you feel dirty are those last couple fantas- no they weren’t fantasies, they were memories.
>That night in the bath, two years ago…
>You wince. You forgot all about that. Must’ve blocked it from your memory ever since puberty began in earnest.
>It’s probably the lewdest thing you’ve ever been personally involved with, and it was with your sister. >To be fair, as socially isolated and often sheltered as the two of you were, you didn’t really know what it meant to be lewd at that point.
>It was a weird night.
>Thinking back, you stopped bathing together soon after that day. You realize this was probably because Chryssie found out what she was doing.
>If you’re weirded out in hindsight, you can only imagine how mortified Chryssie must have been.

>>28874928

>And here you are, tainting an innocent embarrassing childhood moment by masturbating to the memory of it.
>You can almost feel God frowning at you, and you aren’t even religious.
>You know what you need?
>Porn. You need real porn.
>You don’t find your sister attractive at all, with her long flowing hair and sparkling emerald eyes, with her tall, slender form-
>Rephrase; YOU DON’T FIND YOUR SISTER ATTRACTIVE AT ALL. NOTHING ELSE NEEDS SAYING.
>You only /think/ you find your sister attractive because she’s the only girl who’s consistently been in your life.
>Also she’s the only girl you’ve ever seen fully naked. Even the dirtier movies you’ve seen cover up the nakedness with cheeky camera angles.
>So there, you need some real porn. Once you have that, these fucked-up thoughts you’re having will be replaced by thoughts that are fucked-up in a different way. In a non-incestuous way.

>>28874937

>You’re startled by the bathroom doorknob suddenly jiggling violently.
>”Anon? Are you in there?”
>You haphazardly begin cleaning your hands and penis with toilet paper, your quickened movements leaving behind sticky traces of TP on your genitals.
“Y-yeah I’m just, uh, I’m almost done!”
>You flush down the remains of your work, wash your hands, and open the door to see Chryssie leaning on the wall giving you a weird, suspicious look.
>You stand in the doorway, not entirely sure what to do.
“Did you, uh, want the bathroom?”
>”You seem flushed,” she observes.
“I-I just-“
>”Winded, too.” Her gaze travels over your body, a contemplative look overtaking her features.
>Then she grins like a shark, which combined with the metallic texture of her braces and her strangely lengthy eye teeth, made for a legitimately eerie image.
>“But what -oh what- could cause my dearest brother to be both winded and blushing… in the bathroom?”
>You give an annoyed huff and step out of the doorway, turning down the hall and walking towards the down stairs.

>>28874944

>“No response?” You hear suddenly from right behind you, letting you know that your sister had been following right behind you with that unnaturally quiet gait of hers.
>Suddenly her arm is thrown around your shoulders, stopping you in your tracks.
>”Could it be, that my little brother is embarrassed about something?”
“Chryssie…”
>”Embarrassed about a particular undignified act most vulgar?”
“Chryssie!”
>You frown as she starts giggling at your expense. “Sorry Anon, you’re too fun to tease.”
>You roll your eyes and look at her.
“Chryssie, goading me about my… habits, is really weird.”
>Her eyes become lidded as her smile somehow becomes mores smug. “Habits, eh?”
“Yes, /habits/. So can you please drop it?”
>Chryssie laughs again, but it’s softer and less mocking.
>”Sorry Anon.” She takes her arm off your shoulders so she can look directly at you. “I’m just trying to make a point.”
>You squint at her suspiciously.
“What point is that?”
>She smirks.
>”I already know you jack off in the shower every night.”
“W-What!?”
>Before you can back away her hands snap forward and grab you by your shoulders.
>”And I don’t care.”
“We-ell I-I-”
>”Do you think I think less of you? Do you think I don’t understand the urge?”
>You’re about to sputter some more unintelligible nonsense, when she suddenly leans forward and presses her forehead to yours, staring deeply into your eyes.
>”You don’t need to be embarrassed. You can trust me. You can /always/ trust me. With /anything/.”

>>28874949

>You’re speechless.
>This is uncomfortably heartfelt for a conversation about your masturbation habits.
>”So if you need some alone time to rub one out, just tell me.”
>You frown.
“J-Just tell you?”
>She does her best to nod without breaking contact with your forehead.
“J-Just straight up say ‘hey Chryssie get out of here for a minute I gotta jack off’?”
>”Yes.” She smiles mischievously. “Unless you’d like me to help.”
>You choke, stumbling back from her embrace, and she starts laughing.
>You glare at her, thoroughly unamused.
>Then you sigh. Your sister always did have a weird sense of humor.
“Chryssie, asking someone to leave so you can masturbate is weird no matter how close you are to them.”
>Her laughter tapers off, and she frowns at you.
>”Only if you make it weird.”
“Then why don’t /you/ announce when you’re masturbating?”
>”Fine!”
“Yeah, that’s what I- what?”
>”In fact, I’m going to go masturbate right now!”
>You stare with wide eyes as she storms past you and into the bathroom, closing the door behind her. A small ‘click’ later signifies she locked the door.
>Your wide-eyed gaze doesn’t leave the closed door for a moment.
>There’s no way she’s actually…
>…is she?
>…
>…
>You… turn around and head downstairs.

>>28874955

>You sit down at the dinner table with your foster parents.
>”Where’s Chrysalis?” Mrs. Cadence asks.
“She is busy.”
>A few minutes pass with only chewing filling the silence.
>Finally your sister comes downstairs, and sits down next to you.
>You idly notice her wiping her left hand on her pants leg.
>”Where were you?” Mrs. Cadence asks.
>”I was busy.” Chrysalis responded evenly.

>Two days later you discovered a naughty magazine under your pillow with ‘have fun’ written on the cover in your sister’s handwriting.
>She continued to tell you and random points that she is leaving to masturbate, but you’re /mostly/ sure she does it as a joke to fluster you.
>You have yet to reciprocate, because honestly that’s really weird.
>But, judging by the looks your sister gives you occasionally, she knows when you do it anyway.
>Anyway, the magazine is pretty good. It’s just missing a few pages, some of them apparently having been torn out.
>Most of the pictures left in the magazine are of really slender dark-skinned girls with long hair, which reminds you of your sis-
>-which reminds you of no one. No one at all.
>At least whoever ripped the pages out has good taste.
>Regardless, porn was acquired.
>You’ll have to thank your sister for this someday.
>In writing, preferably. ‘Thanks for the porn’ is rather awkward to say out loud.

>>28874960
I love it.

>>28874960
Yeah boy. I'm not alone anymore.
Glad to have you back.

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>>28874960
Perfect

>>28874960
holy shit where were you

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>>28874960
I thought you were dead

I ain't dead yet, expect a fluttermom one-off from me, toodles.

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>>28878088

>>28874960
Awesome stuff. More when?

>>28878848

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>"Oh, hello Anonymous. How can I help you today?"
>"Hmmm?"
>"What do you mean, what am I doing?"
>"Darling, I'm just performing my motherly duties while our actual mother is out of town."
>"Well, she has to eat SOMEtime, Anonymous."
>*giggle*
>"Haven't you seen her try to cook? I tremble at the thought of what my boutique would look like if I left her to her own dev-ow!"
>"Sweetie, please! What did we say about using our teeth?"
>"Don't you look at me like that, young mare. I have half a mind to send you to bed before you can empty the other one."
>"Mmmm~"
>"That's right, darling."
>"Keep suckling~"
>"Hmm?"
>"Oh, right. Do be a dear and keep this between the three of us, hmm?"
>"Oh, there's nothing wrong with it, darling. In fact, it's perfectly natural."
>"Some ponies just wouldn't-"
>"Ooh... Oh, Sweetie, that felt nice."
>"Er, some ponies just wouldn't understand the bond between a mare and her little sister."
>"I'll make it worth your while~"

>>28880109
I-I just came by to get these buttons on my jacket fixed, but uh, I'll come back.

>bump
Need more sibling fucking.

>page 10
One last bump and then I'll let nature take its course.

>>28881053
I just want to see >>28880109 become something.

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>>28880109
>crotchboobs on an anatomically human torso

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>>28880109
>human pectorals
>human collarbone
>human shoulder
Might as well have put chest tits on her, it's already ruined.

>>28881489
>>28881757
It was either that or a Rarity with her mane shaved off and scars all over her body. I didn't have a lot of options that weren't super fetishy.

Goodnight, sweet prince. Maybe Frosty will come back some day, and the thread will finally have one single good writer.

>>28882651
:c
That's a really mean thing to say Anon. Someasshole, Onii, and even GAmethyst have all at least posted here. I'm flattered that you think I'm any good but there are better ways to say it.

I said when I posted the Maud story that'd I'd be really busy and that is pmuch what happened. I've been working on something for this thread when I can but it hasn't been much. I'll have some more free time starting tomorrow so hopefully I can have it done then.

>>28882696
>That's a really mean thing to say Anon.
That's why I said it.

>>28882651
I'm shit and have almost no green to my name, but if people are interested I could either continue an Applemom story that's been collecting dust or pump out something short and sweet tomorrow.

>>28884036
Yes Applemom plz. I want to fuck the applemom.

>>28882696
Hope you are able to get something out tomorrow. And that anon sees you're good, but is still rude. I love all the writers who contribute. Onii, someasshole, GA, the lot of you. You're all great and hope to see more incesty green from you all.

>>28884036
What plans would you have, if you don't do the applemom. Which was getting interesting btw.

>>28884060
K. Here's the paste link for what I had so far: http://pastebin.com/UAxqWKsL
I can dump the whole damn thing when I update it tomorrow, if new people want that


>>28884092
No idea, just throwing that out there as an option if people weren't interested in the Applemom stuff.

>>28882696
S-senpai! Thank you for defending me. c:

>>28874960
I really need more of this

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>>28886167
>tfw your hot cousins married retarded dudebros

>>28886516
live

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haeee miss me?, bumpen ur shit agen, lov u

>>28884116
Posting from the beginning seems fine. It would keep the thread alive, give new people stuff to read, and there isn't too much so it won't take up the whole thread.

Also, fuck yeah, more sexy applemom. I need this bad.

>>28884360
im sorry, but its been so long
what were you writing here? and do you plan to continue? were dying here
pls

>>28889712
Don't worry, it happens a lot. I was the writer for the "A Dazzling Life" story where Anon romances the Dazzlings. I plan to continue, but with school, recent video game releases (see Dragonball Xenoverse 2 and Pokemon Sun and Moon), and life, I just haven't really had the time/motivation to write again. Hopefully this fluttermom one-off will get me back to writing.

>>28889850
Wait, so you're doing a fluttermom one-off? So we're getting a Fluttermom from you AND an Applemom from Zed? My oedipus fantasies can't take this much unf.

>>28889996
See >>28878088

Commence the dumping!
Side note, this: -=-=-=-=-=-
means a perspective shift.

>You are Anon, and right now you are sweating your balls off.
>You are home for the summer from college, and that meant working the fields at the Orchard.
>You used to be able to be out here all day, but you've gotten a bit out of shape while at school.
>And now you are paying for it with pain and sweat.
>"C'mon, Anon! These trees ain't gonna just drop their apples for us!"
>Well at least you aren't alone, your mom thought you might lag a bit, so she tagged along to help.
"Sure thing ma, I'm just gettin' a bit tired. Been a while since I had to do this much liftin'."
>"Well don't worry, ahm gonna work ya right back into shape 'fore the summer's over."
>As much as you hated it, she was right, the work would do you and your body good.
>And if you ever needed proof, you just had to look over your shoulder at your mom.
>If you passed Applejack on the street, you would never have guessed she was some college kid's mom based on her body. She had just enough curves to draw the eye, and was well toned everywhere else.
>"You okay kiddo? You've been starin' off into the distance again."
>You snap out of your daydream and immediately regret the subject of it.
"Uhh, yeah, just thinking about school."
>"I guess ya miss some of yer friends, then?"
"Y-yeah, a little."
>You climb down the ladder and carry the large basket full of honey-crisps over to the truck, and pick up an empty one.
>"Ya got a girl ya miss?"

>>28890138

>As you and Anon ride back to the house in your rickety old truck, you think about how your son was looking at you earlier.
>At first it was rather flattering, but the more thought about it the more you worried about why he saw you like that.
>Did you do something wrong in bringing him up? Was it because of that time you left the door open to the shower?
>Did you give him the talk wrong or something?
>You let out an exasperated sigh, trying to push the stress out with it.
>"You okay ma?"
"Huh? Oh, yeah ah'm fine, buddy. Jus' a bit tuckered."
>"Alrighty then, Imma put my headphones in."
>After a few minutes, you glance over to your son, who is gazing out the open window.
>He may not be as strong as he was before he went off to school, but he's still quite the looker.
>Strong jaw, firm shoulders, and a cute butt.
>As he turns back to look forward, you snap your eyes back on the road.
"Almost home. D'you want to take a shower or can I jump in?"
>"I can wait until after you go."
"Alright, but I'm warnin' ya, the water heater can only give a good five minutes of hot water, so it'll be chilly."
>"That's fine, it'll feel good."
>Good thing you are going first, hopefully you'll be able to 'massage' out some of your stress in the shower.

>>28890151
>After you and Anon unload the truck, you head inside and check on the crockpot.
>You may not be the best cook, but you can make some mean roast beef.
>After you are sure it'll come out good, you walk off to your room and grab a towel.
>Once you get the temperature just right, you undress and hop in.
>You can feel the shower head that Rarity gave you work its magic on your shoulders. It was some fancy thing for spa showers, but it works wonders on muscle tension.
>As the knots in your back disappear, your hand wanders down to your nethers.

-=-=-=-=-

>As you stretch out on your old bed and pop some of the joints in your back, you regret not taking the shower first.
>Getting a bit impatient, you walk over to the shower door.
>Just before you knock, you hear a soft moan come from inside.
>Listening closer, you can also hear small gasps and panting.
>Ok Anon, you need to just walk away and let her do whatever it is she's doing...
>As you think about listening longer, you notice the old handle on the door, and the light coming out of the keyhole.
>...
>Fuck it, not like you had anything better to do.
>Peeking through the old keyhole, you see your mother in her full glory.
>Her breasts are impressively perky on their own, capped with soft chocolate circles and currently hardened nipples.
>Her ass is the perfect combination of muscle and surface fat.
>She was very obviously masturbating, with one hand down between her legs and the other against the wall.
>As you watched, you could tell she was getting close, her panting increasing in volume and the strain on her face increasing.
>"A-Anon...", she almost sighs out as she finally reaches release.

>>28890158
>uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
>what
>you move away from the door and try to rationalize the situation.
>She couldn't have been thinking of you, right?
>Maybe she was thinking of your dad?
>You don't have much more time to think as you hear the water stop and the door jostle.
>You look down to find that despite that last part you still have a raging boner pitching a tent in your pants.
>You manage to get into your room and close the door just as the bathroom door opens.
>"Alrighty, Anon. Shower's all yours."
"Okthanksmom" you manage to get out as you rush between your room and the bathroom.
>As you undress, you still have a hard on.
>Maybe you can whack one out in the shower before dinner.

-=-=-=-=-

>Damn, damn, damn damn damn.
>What were you thinkin' girl?
>Fantasizing about your own dang kid?
>What the heck is wrong with you? What would your friends think?
>As you dry off and get dressed, you try and shake the thoughts away.
>Was it cause he looked so much like his father?
>That jawline, the curly brown hair, and those amber eyes...

>>28890171
>Not to mention a-- dammit your doin' it again!
>You sigh loudly as you finish tying back your hair and putting on your old brown hat.
>Better go check on the food.
>As you pass the bathroom door, you notice some light coming through the old keyhole.
>...
>Gotta get that lock fixed.
>Turning down the corridor, you head into the kitchen and are quickly greeted with the smell of burning.
>Pulling off the lid to the crockpot, you are buffeted with a blast of steam and smoke.
"GAH!"
>Backing up and waving your arms, you slip in a small puddle that had formed near the dishwasher and fall on your rump with a loud thump.
"Dangit, need'ta get that fixed too."
>Suddenly you hear the door opening down the hall and the barefooted approach of your son.
>"Ma? are you alright?"
>He enters the kitchen with a towel rapped around his waist.
>You get quite the view of his chest for a fraction of a second before he trips.
>And falls directly on you.
>You notice two things in the seconds that he is on top of you.
>One, he is not as nearly as out of shape as you thought, there is almost no give to his pecs.
>Two, you can feel a rather large lump pushing against your inner thigh.
>"Ah, oh shi- sorry, ma. Are you okay?" He asks as he gets off of you.
"Yeah, ah'm fine, are you alright?"
>as he helps you up, his loosely folded towel toga falls off, giving you a view of his valuables.
>Guess he gets that from his-- STOP LOOKIN' AJ THAT'S YER KID.
>Bringing your hand up to cover your face, Anon gets the message and grabs the towel up quickly.
>"UMM, IMMA GO FINISH MY SHOWER" he says awkwardly as he backs out of the kitchen.
>As he turns, you notice that his butt is pretty well toned.
>You mentally scold yourself for what seems like the hundredth time today, and are quickly reminded of the crockpot that has ruined perfectly good beef.
>That's one more thing you wouldn't mind replacing at some point, though for now BBQ sauce will have to fix your cookery screw up.

>>28890177

-=-=-=-=-

*Thud*
*Thud*
*Thud*
*Thud*
>While painful, smacking your head on the shower wall helped you get over the embarrassment of flashing your mother.
>Of course you had to run out in your goddamn towel and help your mom.
>Not like she's been living on her own for a year now.
>Also she's healthier than you are, not like she's gonna shatter her hip or anything.
>Plenty of padding there...
>...
>Guess you still have time to wank it.

~~A few much more normal and totally less awkward days later~~

>In the distance, a rooster heralds the rising sun, stirring you from your sleep.
>As you leave the land of slumber, you realize that you are caked in sweat from the summer night's heat.
>You'd almost be inclined to call it slime, with how thick it felt.
>Groggily, you plant your feet on the floor and make for the bathroom.
>You definitely need a shower before anything else happens today.
>Heading to the shower, you don't notice the light shining from the bottom of the door.
>Opening it, you come face to face with your mother, right as she climbs into the shower.

>>28890177
oh fuck this again
Fucking more, please.

>>28890191
i'll get on the next chunk when I'm done pasting this stuff.

>>28890188
>It takes a second to process, but once it does, you snap awake, averting your eyes.
"Oh crap, sorry ma."
>You do a 360 degree turn and walk right back out the door, closing it behind you.
>Shaking the image from your head, you throw on a shirt and pajama bottoms and head into the kitchen.
>Guess you can make some coffee while you wait for the shower.
>While the water boils, you grab a bowl and peer into the pantry, looking for something sugary to enjoy on your Saturday morning.
>Chex, Oat bran, and Apple Jacks.
>Heh, you remember that you always called it 'mommy's cereal' when you were a kid.
>Grabbing the orange and green box, you pour yourself a serving and head to the living room with your spoon and cereal.
>Might as well go full kid today and watch cartoons with your breakfast.
>You head back into the kitchen and prepare your coffee, and once you've added the milk to your meal you plop down on the couch and enjoy what Nickelodeon has on today.
>As you are finishing your sugary meal and the show ends with some moral about sharing with your sisters, you hear the door down the hall open and close.
>"Shower's all yours, Anon."
"Thanks ma."
>You gather up your dishes and place them in the sink, then head to the bathroom to de-slime.

-=-=-=-=-

>As you walk into the kitchen, the smell of freshly brewed coffee hits your nose.
>Mmmm, its the strong stuff too, a good espresso brew.
>Thank god that boy didn't get used to them 'frappamocha' coffees they had in the city.

>>28890208
>As you sip on your coffee, you look into the living room and see that the TV is showing some cartoon, looks kinda like a comic strip.
>Did he eat in front of the TV? He hasn't done that since grade school.
>You remember how Saturdays were back then, he'd grab his bowl of 'mommy's cereal' and sit in your lap in front of the TV.
>He was bout as tall as your navel back then.
>Nowadays, your about a head shorter than him. Must'a been those apple genes kicking in.
>Finishing your cup of coffee, you walk over and flip the TV to the news, some story about the Norks playing.
>Just then, the phone rings in the kitchen.
"Sweet Apple Acres, this is Applejack."
>"Hey AJ! I'm just calling to tell you that I'm about to get on my plane, I think I'll be in town around noon."
"Sounds great Twi! D'ya need a ride?"
>"Actually Rarity is going to rent a car for us, we figured we could check out the town a little before we came down for dinner."
"Ya'll are travelling together?"
>"Lucky coincidence, actually. Our planes land at about the same time."
"Well ok then. Any word from the others?"
>"Rainbow Dash wanted to try out her new convertible, so she's probably getting on the road now, and she's going to pick up Fluttershy on her way through Colorado. I think Pinkie said something about trying her new advertising gyrocopter."
"What in the hay is a gyrocopter?"
>"Well, a gyrocopter, or more correctly called a gyroplane, functions by-- you don't want the full lecture, do you? Basically, it's a combination between a plane and a helicopter."
"Huh. Well I wanna take a look at it when she gets here, sounds interestin'."
>"Yeah, I-- oh, I think that's my boarding signal. I'll call you when I land, hopefully Rarity will be with me."
"OK, bye then, and fly safe, Twi."
>"Thanks, AJ. Talk to you in a few hours."
*click*

>>28890214
-=-=-=-=-

>Putting on a loose t-shirt and jeans, you check yourself in the mirror.
>Yeah, that looks good enough for bumming around town on a lazy Saturday.
>Lets see, what to do? It's still only about nine in the morning, so you had time to think about it.
>You could start with going out to lunch, maybe you could take mom out with you.
>After that, maybe hit the mall and get a nice shirt to wear before dinner.
>All you had around were some wrinkled polos, and you don't want Miss Rarity fussing over you all night.
>Your mom could probably stand to get some new duds too, otherwise she'll probably wear jeans and a plaid shirt.
>Heh, if you didn't know any hetter, this was starting to sound like a da--
>"Hey, Anon?"
>Your mom's call from across the house grabs your attention.
"Yeah?"
>"Just got a call from Twi, she and Rarity'll be gettin' into town about three o' clock."
"Do they need a ride?"
>"I offered, but I guess Rares wanted to rent a car and drive around town a bit before comin' down to the orchard.
"OK."
>Might as well ask now.
"Hey ma, do ya wanna go get dinner around noon and then hit the mall for some dinner clothes?"
>There is a slight pause.
>"You askin' yer mom out on a date?"

>>28890228
>Are you?
"Uh, no, I just thought that you'd like to get something other than a ham sandwich for lunch. That, and I kinda don't want to get an earful from Rarity later."
>As your mother enters the room, you swear you hear her sigh before speaking again.
>"Well, I suppose I should wear something a little more formal than this." She states, waving down at her outfit.
>Looking her over, the plaid shirt, vest, jeans and boots look great on her, but are better suited for the set of a western than a dinner party.
"I don't think it'll take too long, heck we could go see a movie afterwards."
>"Sounds like a plan. But are ya sure that this ain't a date?" She asks, a sly smile adorning her face.
"Do you want it to be a date?" You ask, cocking an eyebrow.
>You try and keep a straight face as your mother gets flustered.
>"I-- Of course not, ah'm yer mother for chrissakes!"
>As you chuckle, she gives you a soft punch in the shoulder.

-=-=-=-=-

>As you ride into town in the passenger seat of Anon's little compact, you wrinkle your nose at the smell of the plastic.
"This thing still smells brand new after a year at college, dang."
>"I kinda like it. So, where do you want to go for lunch?"
>Thinking to yourself, you try and remember what restaurants were in this area of town.
>It's been a while since you really went out, what with managing the orchard all on your own.
>"Huh, haven't heard this in a while", Says Anon as he turns up the music.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Af6jOq0dWqo comes through the speakers.
"David Bowie? Seriously? You know that this is before even my time, right?"
>"Yeah, but I started listening to it after that Ben Stiller movie used Space Oddity."
"That was a weird one, it was just some guy gettin' a picture."
>Back on the topic of food, your stomach growls.
>Looking out your window, you see an old restaurant that you and the girls went to in high school.
"How about the diner?"
>"Sounds good to me."

>>28890231
>Pulling into the parking lot, looking up at the sign fills you with nostalgia.
>You and the gals used to head here during slumber parties and just eat breakfast in your PJs.
>Walking through the front door, you are greeted with a nice elderly looking waitress.
>"How many?" She asks cheerily.
"Just us two."
>"Okie dokie, right this way."
>She takes you over to a nice booth near the corner.
>As you sit down, she hands you your menus and asks what you want for drinks.
"I'll have the ice tea, no sugar."
>"Same for me please."
>"Alrighty, I'll go get those for ya."
>As she passes, she turns to you and gives you a wink, accompanied with a thumbs up.
>"You OK, ma? You're gettin' a little red in the face."

And that's the story so far. I'll post the update as soon as I finish it. I may do a short update for now to get my brain going, then do more as I get ideas.

>>28890138
OH SHIT
There's a chunk that goes between this post and >>28890158

>>28890283
>The bluntness of the question catches you off guard and you trip down the bottom two steps of the ladder, falling on your back with a loud thump.
"U-uh, no, nothing like that..."
>"Oh, well that's too bad" says AJ as she helps you up.
>As she turns back to her own ladder, you swear you can see a hint of a smile on her face.
"I dunno, I just don't fancy none o' them. Their either either too airheaded or too fru-fru for me."
>"Heh, don't go tellin' Miss Rarity that. Speaking of which, all mah old friends are visiting on Saturday, so watch that mouth of yours."
"Yeah yeah, I'll be 'nothing short of the noblest of gentlemen'."
>"Ya don't need to be a damn saint, just be nice."
>You didn't really mind her friends, they were a diverse set of individuals, and you still wondered exactly how they all met.
>You knew each of them, and they you; they were practically your aunts.
"How are they all doing? Is Twilight still doing that research thing in Greenland?"
>"Actually that's why we're all gettin' together, she got back today. And I think it was somethin' about thermal-geo whatsamahoosits that she was lookin into."
"Geo-Thermal generators? Cool."
>"As for the others, Pinkie opened up a new party supplies store up north, Rarity moved her boutique from New York to Beverly Hills, Fluttershy got a bigger building for her shelter, and RD got promoted to Major."
>Once again loading another full basket into the truck, you grab your bottle of tea out of the cab.
"Wow, that's great. By the way, how's the new orchard over in San Antonio doing?"
>"Pretty good, despite the drought that's on right now. Yer aunt Apple Bloom came up with her own custom irrigation system to keep the trees growin' fruit year long."
>As she talks, you gaze at your mother and get a sight of her jeans riding up and outlining her ass as she works.

>>28890290
>You take a sip of tea, and wish you had added less ice earlier.
>"You enjoying the view, slacker?"
>Aw shit, she caught you. As you choke on your tea, you try and think of a response.
"Sorry, just gettin' tired."
>"Well fill two more baskets and we can call it a day."

-=-=-=-=-

>>28890151

>>28890247
Sorry for fucking up the order.


-=-=-=-=-

>Looking over the menu, you try to find something that catches your eye.
>Being a diner, most of the options are what you'd expect.
>Finally the name of a dish catches your eye. The 'Haymaker Hayburger'.
>'Served with our signature horseshoe fries, this third-pound burger is furnished with fried onions, a fried egg, bacon, and our special Haymaker Horseradish sauce, guaranteed to knock your socks off!'
>Guaranteed, huh?
"What are you gonna get, ma?"
>Your mother starts, nearly dropping the menu she's been hiding behind.
>"Ah think I'll get the Ciderspice Salad. How 'bout you?"
"I think I'll try the Haymaker Hayburger."
>"They still make those? I wonder if they still make that crazy sauce to go on it..."
"I feel like there's a story here."
>"Well, back when I was in high school, me n' the girls used to come around here all the time. When they added the Haymaker to the menu, Twilight decided to give it a try. Ho nelly, she took one bite o' that sandwich, and I swear there was steam commin' outa her ears."
"Wow. Now I have to try it."
>"Alright, but I warned ya."
>The waitress walks back to your table, notepad in hand.
>"Now what can I get for you two lovebirds to eat?"
>That manages to get both you and your mother to blush.
"U-uh, heh, we're not a couple."
>"Oh, sure you aren't. Anyways, what'll it be, cutie?"
"I'll have the Haymaker Hayburger, please."
>"And you, young miss?"
>"Uh, the Ciderspice Salad and a small side of fries, please."
>"Alrighty then, I'll have that out for the two of you in a jiffy."
>"Thanks."
"Thanks, ma'am."
>As the older woman walks off to fulfill your orders, your mom tries to pick the conversation back up.
>"Well that was weird."
"To be fair, you look great for your age, I'm sure anybody would mistake you for my girlfriend over my mother."
>Woah, that came out weird.

----------------------------------------------------

That's what I got so far. I'll try and do more on Friday.

>>28890738
Thank you based god

>this thread

being a shit

shitty fucking thread

Wow guys you are really incesting.

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>>28891219
>>28891224
>>28891228
Samefag. You know you can leave any time.

>>28891219
>>28891224
>>28891228
Wow you're really samefagging

>>28891321
Dammit, Onii, I had this handled.

>>28891333
The trips don't lie

More Chrysalis sis when?

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>>28865141
>You will never hotdog your Appulmom's ass in the shower.

>>28892832
Green please

>>28890738
Nice update. Hope to see more friday.

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>>28892832
>mfw mom x son on /gif/

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>>28892832

>>28892832
>She will never guide your cock towards her tight ass.
>You will never feel your part of the head slowly push in her sphincter.
>"Are you ready to give your mama a ride sugarcube?"

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>>28894891
This is why applebutt is my waifu :') i love wincest

Thx anon

>Be anonymous
>Playing vedayo games while my mother walks by.
>Her name is Rarity, she's been extra busy working on a important dress for someone.
>She hasn't been very specific to who it was for, but I understood she had work to do.
>I could remember what it looked like, a vermillion Chinese dress with a dragon design on it.
>She was always talking about how it would change her life to make this dress.
>Me being a full-grown stallion living at his mom's house doesn't really constitute to know or care what little meanings come from people.
>Even if I had a cutie mark, it wasn't even easy to find yourself with it.
>I guess things just never work out sometimes.
>Well, I turned off the game, could hear the knitting machine toiling away.
>Time to sleep for another day being worthless.
>Closed my eyes and felt the lull of sleep calm me down.
>As I slept, my consciousness slipped by me.

>>28895142
>Suddenly, I awoke, it was the middle of the night and the door has slammed open.
>A dark figure right before me.
>I yelled out to who was there.
>I could only hear a female voice giggling.
>A flick of the light lit up the room.
>It was mom wearing that same Chinese dress from before.
>She had a glass of wine levitated by her horn, and seemed very drunk.
>I called out her name, asking what she was doing.
>She only came to me asking if I was sleeping alright.
>I shuddered, wondering why she was wearing the dress for the client she was working with.
>She told me that I was going to be her client tonight.
>Suddenly, she pecked me in the mouth with her lips.
>I stood frozen, yet aroused out of nowhere.
>She unveiled her marehood, my mother spoke of how she wanted grandchildren, yet couldn't wait for her own son to waste around.
>So she decided to do it herself.
>She pointed out my erection between the bedsheets.
>I could only watch as she slowly pulled the sheets down from my body.
>Then, she easily grasped my penis with her hooves.
>And she greedily sucked on me.

>>28895155
>I didn't know how to counter this, sexual energy and shock stopped me from pausing this.
>But, deep inside me, she was right.
>I was never going to go anywhere, this was all I was ever going to have.
>Though, it was scary to love my mother in such a way.
>Rarity let the member she created slide down her throat.
>She gagged and slobbered over her child's cock.
>To her benefit, it was finally fully erect.
>She spoke out, how she failed her son as a mother already.
>How she never did the best for him and decided this is what she deserved.
>Speaking while inching my privates into hers.
>She moaned like a chimpanzee, started crying from her own personal despair.
>I felt guilt from how I never amounted to anything.
>I wanted to make her happy for once.
>To push your lips onto your own mother is one thing, but to feel her driving your cock deep in the place you were gestated.
>It seemed extremely erotic.

>>28895166
>She kept humping with such perversity and strength.
>There was no going back.
>I slapped her round butt cheeks, she laughed at the sentiment.
>Squeezed them as she went up on me.
>She asked me to hit her harder.
>I did so, her butt bouncing from the force.
>She started moaning even louder.
>I tried to calm her down as to not notify the neighbors.
>She only smiled devilishly, before grasping my head and locking herself to mine with tongue.
>I could feel the warm rush of seed coming forth from me.
>She certainly knew what was coming, and started humping even harder, eager to breed.
>I clenched my teeth and eyes, and groaned satisfied.
>She fell on me, seed pouring from herself.

>>28895174
>A laugh came from her, she whispered to my ear how she had seen the doctor.
>That this was her unsafe day.
>She even had the audacity to call you a father to her children.
>I could only respond by grabbing her big ass and bringing her in for a final kiss.
>She huddled into the bed.
>We were now forever more lovers.
>And she was the fastest to accept that.
>To imagine her belly filled with the inbred foals that were made with yourself and her.
>It only filled you with... DETERMINATION.

>>28895184
like and subscrieb

>>28865141
Bump.

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>>28895184
Thanks for the green mah nigga.

Was hoping to write a lengthy update next week with having no school, but my boss took the liberty of working me the entire week; except for Thanksgiving. I'll be lucky if I get one or two viable sessions of writing done, and that's if I feel like it.
So yeah. I'm sorry it has to be this way, but shit happens.

>>28895773

>>28882696
Frosty is objectively best writer in thread though.

>>28896588
>No words of the story or anything.

Well, at least I bumped the thread, even though I failed as a green texter.

>>28897512
>Be Frosty in Equestria.
>You and your hot sister Boxy were transported here by a horse storm.
>Today you are going to visit their dictator Twilight Sparkle, who rules over this town with a marshmallow hoof.
>You approach the front door and speak to the guard pony guards guarding it.
"Hi, I'm here to talk to Twilight."
>"Hey, you're one of those new human things, aren't you? Come on in."
>The guard that answered you leads you through her doom fortress to her evil throne room.
>"She should be in here, If you need anything just ask one of us guards and we'll try to help."
>You see the purple pony princess at a large table covered in books.
>She soon notices you and stands up to greet you.
>"Hi Frosty, thanks for coming. I have so many things I want to talk to you about."
"Okay."
>"Like have you ever considered having sex with your hot sister? I'd really like to have more of you humans around."
"You want me to knock up my sister so you can play with our mutant inbred progeny?"
>"I guess you could put it that way, but I'd also like to study the entire process in depth because it's my fetish. So what do you think of the idea?"
"Okay, I'm convinced. If Boxy agrees I'll go full british royal family and populate the world."
>"That's fantastic. Could you please pass on this invitation next time you see your hot sister Boxy?"
>The excited purple pony turns back to the table and writes up an invitation which she then passes to you with her demonic magic powers.
"Sure."
>"Thanks so much, now while you're here would you mind telling me more about how your human traffic laws work over some tea and assorted baked goods?"
"Okay."
>You spend the next hour eating the fruits of her oppressive governance and giving what information you can remember from driver's ed.
>Later on when you get home you give the invitation to your hot sister.
>A week later you are having depraved incest sex with your sibling.
>Twilight watches and takes notes as you do so.

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>>28865141
>No Moondancer older sister gf to ride your face.

>>28898052
Well, so here's the thing, I didn't read this at first and I'll tell you why. A name like Nigger McFaggot already kind of sets the impression that this might be a shitpost story, browsing through there's a ton of "I" and "She" which "I" already doesn't fit the standard second person and the overuse of them also again seems to imply a shitpost story, throwing in a spicy Undertale meme at the end further reinforces it and smacking on a youtube maymay as a finisher only cements that further. Nothing I could see at a glance gave me the impression that this was taken seriously in any way but if you really are interested in writing and this was a real attempt then I'll give you my thoughts now that I've actually read it.

Definitely cut back on the "shitposting" stuff I mentioned above. Use second person, ideally leave the memes out, the name can probably stay if you want but you need to reformat your work so it actually looks like a serious attempt. Don't overuse the same opening words, it gets boring to see-
>She
>She
>She
-over and over again. Your actions are fine, the physical motions of sex are telegraphed well and you have a good grasp on writing but, and this the issue over all too, it's all just stated. You're just telling the readers but you're not showing them, you want to lead the reader on with your descriptions, thoughts, and actions let them come to the conclusion you want rather than drag them to it. Otherwise it's not engaging and if it's not engaging people aren't as likely to read it and even less likely to do anything beyond lurking. So, not a bad job honestly, just take a more serious tone and I think you'll do very well.

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>tfw Gloriosa will never be your hot aunt or older sister
feel.gif

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>>28898052
I liked it.

>>28900035

>>28890738
-=-=-=-=-

>Wow.
>Did he mean for that to come out the way it did?
>No, AJ, of course your son isn't saying you're hot.
>Though there was that moment back on the orchard where you caught him staring...
>And that bulge you felt in the kitchen...
>No! No, this is a slippery slope, and certainly not the kind of thoughts to have about your son.
>Your face must be giving you away, 'cause now he's backpedaling.
>"Uh! W-what I meant to say was, I think that you look nice, and uh..."
"I know what you meant."
>"Oh. Okay, good."
>Did you know? You knew when people were lying, and this boy wholeheartedly called you hot.
>Your young, handsome son called you hot.
>And that is really making you hot.
>And you can't get your mind off that moment in the kitchen a few days ago.
>As you feel your juices begin to flow, you get up and abruptly look around for the bathroom.
"I gotta go powder mah nose." You blurt out as you make your way towards the ladies' room.
>Entering, you bend down to check if there's anybody else in the room.
>Luckily, nobody was there.
>Entering the first stall, you pop your belt open and pull down the loose jeans you were wearing, pushing them off straight past your boots.
>Damn, you were really feelin' it down there.
>All because of that dumb comment, from your loving and handsome son.
>Your strong, handsome son who had taken you on a date to your favorite diner...
>You didn't notice when you started fingering yourself, but you sure as hell weren't going to stop once you did.

>>28901583
-=-=-=-=-

>Man, you must have really made her uncomfortable.
>'Powder her nose', yeah right.
>Your mother was a terrible liar.
>Thinking back, why had you said that?
>You had already gotten over the fact that you thought your mom was hot.
>But did you have some sorta oedipal thing going on?
>No, that'd be ridiculous. It was just a stupid thing you worded poorly.
>Man, she must've actually needed to use the bathroom, she's been in there a while.
>Just as you start wondering where your burger is, you notice an odd noise.
>Sounds like a little propeller driven plane in the distance.
>Odd, considering there weren't any nearby airfields that you knew of.
>Then you hear the roar of an engine in the distance.
>Your mother finally comes out of the bathroom, looking a little flustered.
>You both turn and look as the sound of squealing tires and a roaring, turbo-charged straight-6 make their way into the parking lot outside the diner.
>As the smoke clears, you make out a sky blue, 1980-something Toyota Supra back into a parking space.
>You and your mother look at each other in confusion as the doors open and two women exit the blast from the past.
>You look to your mother, who is somewhere between shocked and elated.
>Meanwhile, you hear the plane in the distance is getting closer.

>>28901594
I might do more tomorrow, but that's it for today.
Am I doin OK?

>>28901632
So far so good.

>>28901632
I look forward to more.

>>28898052
You miss understood my post.
I enjoyed the story you wrote. It just wasn't written in a way that made me stop what I was doing and say "Hot damn where did this god send of a writer come from. Kind of what >>28898988 said.

Also, the gif was intended to show my feelings for my boss right now. No hard feelings.

bedtime bump

Hey, who else would want a noncanon short with Marble from Frosty?

There was a story two or three incest threads ago with Twilight confessing her love to Anon. Anyone know that specific story? Was never finished.

>>28903350
Was it this http://pastebin.com/eg0EpcPF ?

live

>>28904381
I remember this. Too bad the writefag abandoned the thread.

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>>28872895
She'd get the D right then and there

>>28905100
>blonde hair

Make it black and you got a deal.

>No…
>Holy shit no.
>"Mmnn~”
>"Ah~” you gasp out as she circles your head with her tongue.
>This can’t be happening.
>Sunny looks up, directly into your eyes as she pulls her head back.
>Her lips grip tightly around your shaft, stretching her mouth across your length as she slowly draws you herself off of you.
>She gasps loudly after coming away from your swollen head with a lewd pop.
>Your member throbs in the weak grasp her hand has on your base.
>She giggles to herself before starting to stroke your length.
“Nnn~ S-sis…” you whisper, partly out of pleasure and partly out of continued disbelief.
>She kisses the tip of your cock, lapping up the pearl of milky fluid that was collecting on it, “Shh” she whispers into your cock before giving another stroke.
>She plants her lips at the tip again, you can feel her tongue swirl around your head as she raises her eyes to look up at you again.
>Two seafoam green orbs stare at you intently as she works your head and gently squeezes at your thick base.
>You can feel yourself spiking to the edge, fast.
>Your sister’s lips curl at the ends.
>She comes off of your cock with another pop.
>You can only stand there, with your pants down by your ankles in the living room, in anticipation of what she’s going to do next.
>Her hand travels up your length, firmly griping your cock just under the head.
>From here, with her head out of the way you can see down her shirt.
>Loose pajama shirt gives you plenty to look at, and with the thin cloth it’s made of, what you can’t see you can imagine. easily with her nipples poking through the front.
>The hem of her oversized shirt is bunched up around her hips.
>All of her weight is on the balls of her feet as she sits on her heels and keeps a hand on your leg for support.
>Her shirt must’ve bunched up with all the movement, or maybe she lifted it herself.

>>28906095
>You’ve been so overwhelmed by everything that there’s no way for you to tell.
>You can see the front of her panties now that her lower half is exposed.
>The thin white cloth of her underwear is made somewhat see-through with moisture, it sticks to her groin and you can just. barely make out the outline of her puffy lips.
>You think you can even see the faintest hint of bright red bush peeking out through the top.
“Gah~”
>You nearly double over from the sudden warm wet sensation on your groin.
>The sight nearly sends you over completely.
>Your older sister is suckling one of your balls in her mouth while stroking your cock with her free hand.
>She’s keeping one eye closed as your head rubs her cheek right near it and the other eye is looking up at you.
>Sunset is still smiling as she grazes her tongue over your sack.
>Her hand grips your leg firmly as she leans in close and buries her face into your junk.
>You can feel her kissing your sack, your balls nudging on either side of her lips.
>Her nose rubs the underside of your cock while her hand rubs around your engorged slick head.
>”Mmmm~” she hums loudly, you can feel the rumbling in her throat travel up to her lips and against your boys.
>The sensation sends a shiver down your spine.
>She giggles, again sending a rumble straight to your crotch.
>Sunny draws back, pressing her tongue firmly against your sack, separating your balls to either side.
>She drags her tongue up over your sack and against the base of your cock.
>Her tongue drips long strands of saliva mixed with your precum as she slowly traces up your length.
>Her lips are still curled up at the ends and her eyes look dead into yours with a yearning passion.
>”Ahh yoo clothe Awon…” she asks, keeping her tongue firmly planted on your head, her lips moving and touching your sensitive tip as she spoke.
>You only manage to get a nod out.
>She puckers her lips, putting them right on your head and chuckles.

>>28906101
>Her hand resumes stroking you, faster now.
>The wet sound of her handjob is only matched in volume by her coaxing coos as she pleads with you desperately, "Do it little brother, cum in your big sister’s mouth.”
>She lets her tongue lol out as she pumps out drop after drop of free onto it.
>"Just like your prude bitch girlfriend won’t let you do.” she says, glaring at you.
>She drops the hard stare in favor of another smug grin as she brings you right to the edge, she can feel your cock sweeping with desperation.
>Her grip around your thick length is so very tight, she hums with satisfaction, “Mmn~Give me a thick hot load of your hot seed little brother.”
“S-Sunny!” you groan as your hips thrust forward, forcing your head into her mouth unexpectedly.
>”Hmmf?! Mmm~” she pops her mouth off of your cock, dribbling some of the first loud out of your cock out of her mouth and down between her plump breasts.
>She keeps jerking you, pumping out round after round of cum from your shaft.
>Your sister eagerly catches each squirt of thick white fluid in her mouth, even guiding in the last few dribbles by milking your tip onto her tongue.
>She plants one last kiss onto your tip before pulling herself away from you.
>You can only look on as she seems to be switching the fluid in her mouth before you hear her gulp and watch the faint bulge of her throat travel down to her chest.
>”Aah~” she sighs contentedly.
>Sunset rises from her crouched position, obscuring her damp panties from your view as her shirt once again fall over to dangle down at mid thigh.
>She hums to herself as she wipes away the bits of cum and saliva from her lips and chin.
>You sister look straight down, into her shirt and scoffs, “Anon! Some of your cum dripped down my chest” she says with a scolding tone.
“I-I’m sorry?” I mumble back.
>She giggles and pushes her breasts together with her arms, “Ooh~ It’s all slippery between my breasts now…”
“Buh…”

>>28906108
>She turns and starts walking away, the gentle sway of her shirt, made possible by the roundness of her butt clinging to the fabric…
“W-wait! Sunny I…” you stammer out while fumbling back into your clothes.
>She pauses and turns to face you, your sister tilts her head and adopts a curious look on her face, “Hmm?”
“I uh… c-could we…”
>You walk closer to her and hold up a shaky hand, slowly bringing it closer to her chest.
>A firm pressure in the middle of your forehead gives you pause, you are pushed back roughly byre finger along, “Ah ah ah… you little perv. Mom’s gonna be home any minute.”
“T-tomorrow then!” you bark back, hungry already for more.
>She takes that same finger and put it to her lips, pulling down the bottom plump bit of flesh that was just recently wrapped around your cock, “Hmm… Well jeez little bro aren’t you supposed to go on your date with your little prude girlfriend?” she coos.
“Uh-“
>Your heart sinks.
>Starlight…
>She’d been pretty insistent on keeping “us” as we were no matter how much you pushed the issue.
>Sunset coaxed you into opening up to her about your problem and then made fun of you for it.
>You took her up on her teasing offer to blow you instead and before you had realized what had happened, your pants and. underwear were on the floor and her lips were around your cock right here in the living room.
>It all happened so fast you completely forgot about Starlight.
“W-well I do- I did but…”
>”Hmm, a shame, maybe if you two didn’t have any plans… ever… I might-“
“Sunny, I’ll break up with her! I’ll-“
*Click*
>”Hey kiddos, I’m home!” mom calls from the front door.
>By the time you turn back Sunset is already heading up the stairs to her room.
>You lower your head and help your mom with the groceries.
>You dismiss her concerns over your mood by telling her you’re just worried about an exam.

>>28906117
>With a kiss on the forehead she sends you away to put everything up herself so you can go study.
>The first thing you do when you return to your room is notice the blinking light on your phone.
>[Hey! Can’t wait to walk through the whittling exhibit at the museum tomorrow Anon! Three o’clock sharp, (Ha, sharp!), don’t forget! c:
>You stare at the screen for a long while, thinking of your girlfriend, Starlight, and your sister, Sunset.
>Starlight is the same sweet, but strict girl she’s always been.
>Sunset…
>She’s changed… to do something like this...
>The keyboard is ready and available.
>But what do you type?
>You sigh as your thumbs start to tap over the screen.

“Mmn~”
>Your fingers spread your tight and still absurdly thin lips.
>A gasp escapes your lips as you gently rub these lovely fingers over your slick entrance.
>How you yearn for a thick stallion’s cock to push apart these tight walls.
>To make you feel oh so full.
>So receptive when his thick leather balls clench and he pumps your tiny womb well beyond capacity.
>So marely as his thick seed flows out of your tight cunt, keeping enough of it in to be assured of pregnancy.
“Ahh~” you squeak as you knead your stationary clit, rubbing it faster and faster while your other hand begins to push a bundle of fingers into your burning slit, spreading it out just far enough not to hurt.
>You bite your lip as you can feel your orgasm approaching.
>Your fingers brush against a thin bit of skin inside your depths.
>”No!” a voice shouts in your head, snapping you out of your stupor.
>You blink yourself back and take stock of your surroundings.
>Looking yourself over in the mirror you can see this version of you’s body.
>You perky chest teats and made plump by your compressed arms, nipples standing firm and ready for suckling.

>>28906127
>Your hands both down between your legs, formerly bringing you to orgasm before being so RUDELY interrupted.
>You glare at your reflection, and the face of it cowers back in response.
“Oh forget it!” you huff, removing your hands from your groin and flicking away the moisture, “You don’t even have a cooler anywhere in our room” You snap at the reflection of yourself.
>”No I… I wouldn’t…”
>You huff.
“I can tell, you’re still a virgin after all.”
>Your reflection flinches at the accusation.
“OH! I was right?! Oh my dear me… you need me even more than I thought you did. Don’t worry Sunset, your better self will happily make you a real mar- er, woman- womare(?) all in due time. Your stud of a brother is already so receptive of “you” after all…”
>A look of panic crosses your reflections eyes, “N-no! I don’t want to… not with Anon!” She whines.
“Oh? But you hate his girlfriend don’t you? I can feel the displeasure you have for her you know.”
>She lowers her head, “S-so? That doesn’t mean I want to…”
>You chuckle.
“But you got so wet while you sucked on his thick hard cock, Sunny, you can’t mean to say that didn’t mean anything right?”
>She fidgets, “Th-that was you!” she barks back.
“Was it? Hmm… I’m pretty sure I gave you control back part way through. What was it you said? Ah, wasn’t it... “cum in your big sister’s mouth”?”
>Her face becomes bright with an embarrassed color.
“That was you wasn’t it?”
>It wasn’t.

>>28906134
>Seems estrus still hits even when your mind occupies another body.
>But she believes you just the same.
>You can feel the doubt settling into her heart and she can’t even catch a hint of even your weakest guarded thoughts.
>It’s no surprise, unlike you, she’s just a weak girl after all, within minutes of inhabiting her body you had already wrestled away complete control.
>And with it you are going to do great things…
“Mmm~”
>Your legs quiver as another wave of lust washes over you.
“Ugh…”
>Just as soon as this damned heat passes over.

Alright so the Octavia sis thing I was originally doing isn't really coming together like I had hoped it would by thursday and it still isn't really working out now, but I wanted to get something out so here's this instead, kind of a scrapped idea I had originally for Double Suncest with the shared body thing that I'm reworking as its own thing. Sorry if it sucks, but I've got thanksgiving break this week so hopefully I'll be able to do stuff more often again and be better, that'd be nice. Thanks for reading

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This isn't Pie Sister's at all!

but somethings better than nothing

>>28906170
Nice green, Frosty.

>>28903350
>>28904381
>>28905088
While I didn't mean to abandon this story, it was something I thought of while on vacations and just didn't know how to continue it. And I feel like shit for leaving you hanging like that. I'll try to come up with something new though soon. Again, sorry to all of you who waited for this story

>>28906898
I'm looking forward to more of this. It has great potential.

>>28906170
So more of this new Suncest green? Pie sis? Fresh stuff? What can we expect Frosty?

Either way, liked this anyway

>>28906170
It's not that I dislike your green. Hell every scene you write is captivating. I just feel like you've started and stopped writing so many stories that were never going to get one that reaches a solid conclusion.

Needs a disclaimer in op.

>No greentexters that don't cater to my high standards

Would waste less time for a lot of people.

>>28910481

>>28909014
Onii, I... fucked up and didn't catch on your RD story. Pls, link.

I'm lazy.

>>28898877
Life is suffering.

>Moondancer is too NEET/socially awkward to get a boy
>Not that she's shy or bashful or anything
>Cannot function around the opposite sex
>Might be legitimately socially-retarded
>Realizes that she gets along with her little brother pretty well
>Sees no problems with trying to fuck him
>"Trying" being the key word

>>28899136
>"OOPS I lost my top! Quick, Anon! Get over her and cover my breasts with your hands!"

>>28906170
>Sunset falsely convincing her human-self that she has an incest crush on Anon
kek

>>28913908
>Pone-sunset comes back years later after Anon and hume-Sunset run away together and have a kid
>"It was me Austin! It was me all along! You don't love your brother, I just made you think that you did!"

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>>28906127
>>So marely as his thick seed flows out of your tight cunt, keeping enough of it in to be assured of pregnancy.

>page 9
You heathens.

>>28912756
Here you go.
http://pastebin.com/2DRqRmpY

>>28914636
fuck

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Drawing for strangers on a taiwanese image sharing server is some of my highlights in life at the moment

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>>28916662

>>28916662
>>28916668
Das some good shit, my dood
Hope you continue making them
Fluttercousin is really cute/sexy

>>28916662
>>28916668
I want greens about when they tell their parents about their relationship.

>>28916662
Is there a story to go with these pics?

>>28917272
yesss

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>>28913834
fund it

>>28918583

>>28913834
>"H-Hey, Anon?"
>You look up from your book only to find your big sister, Moondancer, about 6 inches from your face.
>Only your lifetime of experience with "Loony Moonie" lets you stop yourself from flinching at her sudden close appearance.
"Yeah, Moons? What's up?"
>You try your best to sound casual; you know that Moondancer doesn't have the best feel for social dynamics, and being this close to someone she loves like her brother probably doesn't seem weird to her.
>To spook her now would be to instill doubt, and make her retreat into her shell.
>You could write a goddamned book on everything you've learned just from living with your sister.
>"I just wanna say thanks for all that help earlier with my computer."
>Moondancer smiles and leans forward, capturing your lips in a quick peck.
>Before you can react, she's half-way across the room and well on her way back to her room.

>Be Moondancer
>You're back in your room after smooching your little brother.
>Your heart is beating and you're super sweaty and everything is too hot and you can't believe you did that!
>You ditch your sweater and throw it into the corner (ready to be worn again tomorrow) and walk over to the big white board on your wall.
>It was supposed to be used to keep track of chores, but that lasted about 3 days before your parents just sort of stopped trying.
>Instead, you've got your master plan written on it.
>"Operation: Incest is Wincest"
>Thank you, countless hours of internet.
>"Step one: kissu~"
>"Step two: repeat step one until Anon doesn't think it's weird"
>"Step three: full-frontal nudity"
>"Step four: sex"
>"Step five: fall in love and run away and be a family and be happy forreruruo~~~~"
>Oops; it looks like your marker kinda of trailed away when you started crying.
>You'll fix it later.
>Step two awaits.

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>>28917272
Not exactly a green, but

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>>28919743

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>>28919657
I like this allot

>>28919657
Pick a name and continue please.

>>28919743
Oh my goodness, this is so cute.
I need more of these two, please.
Maybe a little lewd?

>>28919657
I hope you plan on continuing this because I need more neetness

>>28916662
boi those hips though. unf

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>>28919657

>>28920132
>>28920671
>>28920800
>>28921273
Glad you guys like it. Sure, fuck it, I'll do something with it if the thread is up tomorrow.

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>>28921374
Looking foward to seeing more of this cutie sis.

>>28919743
is he gonna get a piece of his sexy auntie too?

>>28916662
>>28916668
Why are shy girls the most lewd?

>>28919657
More when?

>>28922071
Too much time with the internet and not enough time talking to real people and being reminded of what is and is not socially acceptable behaviour.

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>>28920697
how lewd?

>>28923687
neck kissing lewd

>>28923687
not-missing-the-nose lewd

>>28923687
Nice

>Why is this thread so dead?

Because you scare off content creators who even bother to post content. It's a shame when someone posts content and doesnt recieve attention they deserve.

>>28924925

>>28925131

>>28925153

page 10 save rave

>>28865141
bump from 10

>>28906170
I miss the pie sisters story. Why do you hate it?

>>28916662
>>28916668
God damn it Nayaa, FINISH THE DAMN GREEN ALREADY!

>>28919743
why is this shit sideways? And more importantly, why isn't the green for this being finished?

>>28890208
Its 180 though, 360 means you just spin in a circle till you face the original direction.

>>28928997
Its A meme.

What happened to the Moonie green?

>>28929003
Good to know. I thought it was The meme.

>>28928857
this pls

>>28930062

>>28931363
live

people from the coco little sister thread should come here

>>28931980
Do you have a link to that thread?

>>28930755

>>28925131
Man, imma stick with this thread til it dies. I really like the stuff that's been posted on here so far.

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>>28914873
That the end of it, or are you planning more?

Definitely like what you have so far

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>>28934150
I'm definitely going to continue, but it's going to be awhile. Just got off of work helping set up for Black Friday. That's 12:30 a.m local time. Thanksgiving is tomorrow and I work the opening shift for Black Friday. So needless to say I'm a few days away from finding a stretch of time to write.
After that though I hope to find enough time to write an update at least 12 posts worth.

I would contribute, but im not sure anyone will read my story, so its best not to.

>>28934305
Do it, with nothing going on here... people will read it.

>>28934305
If you're here to being with, there's an audience. I felt the same way when I started writing. Now, I feel like I'm somewhere in the thread. Contribute, and remember to not make it a shitpost.

>>28934541
to begin with*, it's late and I'm tired. Been making a lot of progress with Fluttermom story!

>>28934544
How long till you think it'll be done? Don't rush it, of course.

>>28934305
And you, take GA's advice. He's good, and I'm sure you'll do fine.

8 not great

>>28935412

>>28865141
Bump

>Be anonymous, son of Fluttershy.
>You lost your father in a cart accident many years ago, now it's just your mother and you living together, alone in the forest.
>She home schools you, other than your mother's friends, you don't really go out much and you've mostly taken time to do chores.
>You help mom with animal things and you noticed that you never met anypony else really.
>You have never gotten to know any strangers, you could call yourself coddled, but in some weird way you enjoyed it.
>The problem is that ever since you became a young stallion, you've been having strong urges to relieve yourself.
>And there are no ways of getting off correctly, even when you try to picture one of your mother's friends.
>It's still not enough to get off with, as attractive as they are in their mature age, there was something "missing".

>>28936961

>Something carnal within you that never leaves your mind, and one day when you were sitting with your mother, you realize where it was coming from.
>How her supple and gentle flank sways against the air while preparing lentil soup that she likes to make.
>How her beautiful wavy hair makes your erection hard to control, how much you want to be with you're own mother and love her till the ends of the earth.
>And how much you want to stick it in her without remorse or apprehension, she deserves it after all for keeping you here.
>She might as well do you a favor while you are still of the ripe age, before she coddles you to an old stallion.
>One day, you were eating dinner with your mother, Fluttershy.
>She was mixing her spoon in circles and having an odd fixation on you.
>She wouldn't stop watching you, as if there was something wrong with you're face.

>>28936970
>Then, she gets the courage to speak up while you eat the bit of lentil and onion in your spoon.
>"Is there something wrong my child?" she asks with sincerity.
>You begrudgingly think on what to do, the sound of her sweet voice has given you an erection.
>Then, you blush without thinking and finally come up with a solution in your mind.
"ugh, mom, I'm going to my room, I have to fold some clothing that I have left on the bed."
>"But, you haven't even finished your food! I've cooked it just like you liked it, how can that be so important..."
>Then, the table shook with the thud of your erect horsecock, you just couldn't control your emotions when you had no experience in the matter.
>Fluttershy looks peeved before quickly looking down below the table, she screamed suddenly and blushed more vibrantly than you had.

>>28936977
You speak, "It's not what it looks like, I was just admiring your voice is all!"
>She scrambles off the table and runs to her bedroom across the living room.
>You just stand there, confused and utterly defeated, unable to know what to do next.
>Sitting there for several minutes, suddenly you hear a her voice singing a hymn like a lullaby.
>"Oh, anonymous, please come to my room urgently." she said.
>You were surprised by the gesture, coming out of nowhere, your cock became fully erect from the beautiful serenade.
>Then to pull off the chair and walk to her room slowly with silent steps, terror filled your soul as you grimaced to what was next.
>The door screeched open with your gentle force, it slid open to find no pony to be found except for a bed and a few pictures of her animals.

>>28936988
"Mom, I'm sorry for what I've done, it was a mistak-"
>She suddenly came to you, face to face, her breath on your face, the smell of dandelions.
>Fluttershy immediately presses her lips against yours, her tongue's warm touch swaying against yours.
>It was a quick peck that lasted a few seconds, before she let loose a trail of saliva from your mouth.
>She giggled at your confusion, face blushing red and eyes agape with worry.
>Your mother even went up the bed and raised her plump plot all for her son.
>The scent of sweet female caressed the senses, her gaping hole emanating female heat and pulsating with a fleshy bulb, in and out it came from her, she stretched her mouth open and laid out her tongue, moaning for her son's love.
"What is happening?" you ask.

>>28936993
>She only raised her plot higher, the sheer electrical shock in your brain became as strong as being killed in a electric chair.
>"Hurry, son, I-I need this, I've helped animals out before, I-I can help you out too."
"But, mom, we shouldn't be doing this."
>"Please, anonymous, I haven't had a stallion inside me since your father had died" she begs, "I'll do anything to make you feel better."
>You take one step forward, before pausing almost utterly.
"I-I".
>"Oh don't give me that child, your cock is speaking for me anyways."
>You look down to your phallus, it was bulging red with the blood vessels in flaming with need. You've been with your mother for so long, she is the only mare you could ever think about, and now she was offering everything you wanted.

>>28937012
>All that fear melted away as soon as the realization hit your head like a thrown brick to the skull.
>You ran up, got atop of the bed and without any hesitation, slipped it in to the place where your mother grew and gestated you.
>"Nnngh, that's my boy", she said with your cock being caressed by warmth, her eager cunt that squeezed you incredibly hard.
>An animalistic instinct completely took over your mind, and you started thrusting in your mother with a loud squishy pop.
>She started pushing against your force, as she started to wet around yourself.
"Mom, what if you get pregnant?" you ask.
>Fluttershy only laughs a cute little chuckle, while moaning like a wildebeest.
>"I don't care, I wouldn't want you to pull out on your first time." she says while pushing faster, eager for your sperm. "I need a foal in me, don't rob me of this!"

>>28937026
>Without any inhibitions circling in your mind, you feel that there was no turning back from this.
>You suddenly slapped against her, your cock getting more and more difficult to pull out from the powerful suction being produced.
>A warm sensation flowed through your balls and was moving powerfully through your member.
"I'm about to cum mother!"
>"Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes, Y-yes, Y-Yes, YES!!" she screams as you unload your seed into her womb. Your cock spurted so powerfully that you could hear the semen hitting her vaginal walls, a little "Pat pat" went through.
>You rest on her body, your mother now the first love you have ever had.
>And you were so happy, a joy went through your mind, satisfaction destroyed all worries.
>"Now, here is the best surprise." she said happily. "I'm not on my period."
>You laugh that you just inbreeded with your own mother, and start thinking about what would be a good name if it was a filly or colt.
"I love you mother" you say.
>Then, you slump on top of her body some more.

>>28937033
Questions, concerns, etc,

Gotta go work.

Happy Thanksgiving.

>>28937036
It was a thing/10

>>28937066
Deliberate?

Ugh, wait, it wasnt good was it.

I knew I shouldnt have tried.

>>28937036
I enjoyed it.
It's nice to have some green on Thanksgiving.

>>28937232
>Less than thirty minutes after story was written.
>Nearly barely any replies again.

I'm done.

bampu

>>28937033
Oh baby
Guess it runs in the family

>>28919743
Whew.
Try explaining that one over Thanksgiving dinner.
"Hey Auntie, I'm gonna marry my cousin. You ok with that?"

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>>28937396
It might not have helped that you posted it on Thanksgiving where a lot of people are spending time with family, (and not in a sexual way). I JUST read your story.
That being said it was a decent go for a greentext. I really appreciate that you made it pony incest. We're sorely lacking in those. That being said.
In terms of a one-shot green I enjoyed it, but if you had any plans for the future you're not leaving yourself a lot of options. Sure single mom out in the wilderness is hot, but I feel like you rushed through the plot of the story to the sex scene.
I also get the feeling that English isn't your first language. Whether it is or not is irrelevant I just suggest proof reading your story before hand. It may sound different from what you intended if you read it aloud.

>>28937943

>>28938115
So, out of ten?

>>28934980
To be honest, either Saturday or early next week.

>>28938680
I like it id give it a 7-8ish out of ten and yeah didnt have much time to check pone I've been playing keep the drunk people from murdering each other all day

>>28938680
Not him, but I give it a solid 7. It gets the job done.

>>28938115
This. It's a good effort, but feels a bit rushed and the way the characters behave seems unnatural.
There's also a lot of odd wording, like "The door screeched open". Was "squeaked" perhaps the intended meaning in this case?

>>28940030

>>28938680
6.5/10. Thank you for the contribution.

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>>28940803
you know I just got finished catching up with your writing
got an idea for the next update?

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>>28941041
I do, and now that I'm finally done with all my bullshit I can finally start writing. I'll let you guys know when I'm close to being ready.

Alright so, just to keep things lively for the next little bit I'm going to do something a bit different. The Octavia sis thing still isn't really coming together so I think I'm just going to scrap that one as it's not really very far into anything anyway. I've been working on another thing and I figure it's quiet enough here I might as well do a "post as I go" approach, something I haven't done in a good while, to keep me motivated and actually finish this thing. If anyone has an update or chunk of story to post while I'm doing this, by all means please interrupt me, I don't know how long I'll be at this for so don't feel intimidated to step in and post please. Now with that out of the way I'll get started.

>This is such bullshit.
>”Anonymous.”
>Your arms remain firmly crossed and you don’t even glance towards the front of the car, in your mom’s direction.
>”Anon, honey, you’re an adult for goodness sake.”
>You only JUST turned 18, and your mom has already run that excuse into the ground.
“Nooo, if I was ACTUALLY an adult you’d have let me stay at home instead of dragging me along to this.”
>Worse still, EVERYTHING you had was either dead or out of battery so you’ve got nothing to make this go by any quicker.
>”It’s Thanksgiving-“
“It’s AFTER Thanksgiving-“
>”All the more reason why we are going. To see family, to be thankful for having them.”
>You furrow your brow further and blow a puff of air through your nostrils.
>”I know you don’t like your younger cousin very much-“
“THAT is an understatement I ever heard on-“
>”But it will only be for a couple of hours.”
“Oh is that all? Just a couple of hours of the most awkward moments of my life since the LAST time you forced me to go over there.”
>“You didn’t mind going before.”

>>28942885
“I didn’t mind going when Cuppa Midnight was still living there, her sister was cool, but after she left for school and it was just me and her…”
>Mom sighs, becoming frustrated now.
>Good.
>”Well Anonymous, why don’t you just stay outside with the rest of us.”
“C’mon mom, do you not remember the last time I tried that? “Go on Anonymous, spend some time with your cousin, she really missed you, you know?” If you want me to tell them she’s a weirdo I ca-“
>”Don’t. Just…” she sighs again as she pulls into the driveway, packed with cars, “Look, just put on a happy face and… and I’ll buy you that new game you wanted.”
>Woah!
>Well hot damn!
>Maybe you won’t just chase down your Aunt’s terrible cooking with bleach after all.
>She parks the car and turns to look you in the eyes, “Happy face or no game, got it.”
“Yes ma’am!”
>She sighs softly and even smiles a bit at your dorky salute.
>”Alright, come on baby. Let’s get this over with.”
>Your jaw drops as you make for the door right behind her, a scoff escapes your lips.
“”Get this over with”, mom? You mean you didn’t want to do this to- ooph!”
>She retracts her hand from the light bump she gave to your stomach, and uses it to push the doorbell
>”I mean as in just us honey…” she whispers.
>She’s still pretty broken up about Dad leaving it seems.
>"Our first Thanksgiving without-" she pauses when the door opens revealing an older woman who comes up to about Mom's nose.
>Mom's eyes widen and a big smile spreads across her face, "Big!" she cheers.
>"Little!" your Aunt, mom's older sister, cheers back.
>They quickly embrace each other, "Oh I haven't seen you in so long!"
>Yeah, and you'd prefer it stay that way-
>A sharp sting meets your face, making you wince.
>"My goodness Anonymous, just look at how much you've grown!" your Aunt cheers, releasing your achey flesh from between her finger and thumb.
>You rub your cheek tenderly.

>>28942907
>For being the older sister, your aunt sure doesn't look like it.
>No offense to mom or anything but with her height, or lack of, combined with how smooth her skin looks, even right up close like this.
>Jeez, even the way she keeps her hair in a bun like Cuppa's.
>You could easily see her being confused for the oldest sister of her own daughters or something...
>Your aunt slips a hand around to the back of your neck and tugs your head down lightly while also leaning up and puckering her lips.
>She plants a soft kiss on your cheek, right where she pinched, "Oh I'm so sorry Nonny, I'm just so thrilled you tw- uh, all are here! Guess I don't know my own strength eh?" she jokes.
>Even going as far as you pull down the somewhat flowy and loose part of her dress's shoulder, exposing a sizable portion of her chest and some of her bra to you both while she flexes the spot where her bicep would be.
>"Ah-haaaa, Big! You're uh, enjoying the four day weekend a lot are you?" mom quickly stammers out.
>Huh? Who wouldn't enjoy a four day weekend?
>Your aunt returns her dress back to normal and tilts her head towards your mom, "Whaddaya mean Little?" she responds.
>It's then that you notice the slight slur in her voice.
>The faint bit of color on her cheeks.
>The sort of dopey smile on her face.
>Oh... she's drunk.
>That's what mom meant.
>"Nothing, nothing, Big. So, may we come in?"
>Auntie's face lights up, "Oh yeah of course, of course! Come on in Big, Nonny, come say hit to everybody."
>Mom is quick to follow up behind your aunt.
>You linger for a moment, for them to clear the door somewhat.
>Mostly though, to clear your head.
>You'd been to your aunt and uncle's plenty over the years.
>Sometimes staying for up to a month in the summer when your parents first moved away from this town because dad had found a better paying job.
>And a secretary who gave better blowjobs apparently...
>Shaking that darker thought away, you think to the times you had seen your aunt.

>>28942993
>In just a bathrobe, making breakfast for everyone.
>One that you realized then was a little short, but are only just now thinking HOW short it was.
>How much of her thighs and maybe even some of her butt as she dug deep into the fridge to get the orange juice, complaining about how your uncle keeps putting it in the back.
>No, what?
>What are you doing Anon?
>Another image of your aunt's smooth chest flashes in your mind to take the place of the bathrobe one you just brushed away.
>The lacey frilled edges of her bra that peeked out at you while she was trying to flex.
>You shake your head one more time and cross through the doorway, shutting the door quietly behind you.
>"-king already? ... -know how you get ... -u're tipsy" You hear mom whispering something to your aunt, while clinging to her shoulders and being led further into the house.
>You can hear voices coming from the direction you're all headed.
>"-not in my twenties anym- ... -ides, ... -e really hot for after everyone leaves ... -ve the house to ourselves..." your aunt responds with a light giggle.
>Mom gasps in bewilderment, "Uh-huh, not in your twenties anymore, suuuure..." she playfully scolds, loud enough that you could hear her clearly.
>She uh... did you hear all that right?
>"Hey! Nonny! Little-in-law!" your uncle greets you and your mom warmly as you both reach the kitchen where everyone is.
>You shake hands with your uncle, who proceeds to yanks you in and wraps you into a powerful hug, "How have you been 'Non? Holding up okay?"
"M'alright..." you mumble back, desperate to have the air that he is currently crushing out of you.
>He releases you with a hearty laugh and claps a hand down on your shoulder, "Good to hear son, good to hear..."
>You fight the urge to gasp for air in his face and wait until he's turned away to talk to your mom to take in a huge gulp.
"Hah..." you sigh, happy to feel like you're living again.
>A giggle tickles your ears, causing you to look up.

>>28943243
Alright, that's it from me for now. Internet's pretty spotty up here at my folks' so I'm gonna stop fighting to get posts out when I finish them and just hammer out more story instead. So, there will be more of this later, in a chunk like I normally do, when the internet seems to be a little better.

>>28943255
I love you.

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>>28943255
Thank god for Frosty.

>>28944205
Atra?

>>28943255
Looking forward to more Frosty.

Also, are these new characters? Because I, for the life of me, don't recognize the names. Not saying that's bad, I'm just curious. And, if you think this will be solely aunt focused, or will we also get with the cousin aswell? Personally, I'd like to see the "fighting" between cousins. I've always had a thing for tsundere type characters.

bampu~

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>>28943243
>You raise your head to meet a pair of magenta eyes, partially obscured by a blue swoop of hair that droops down, somewhat past this girl's forehead.
>You can feel a bit of embarrassment begin to flood your cheeks.
>You had to have looked like a total chump in front of... wait, who is this?
>"Uncle's like, pretty strong, isn't he? Almost like a... a... a strong guy!" she chirps.
>Her voice is so airy and light.
>She sounds like one of those stereotypical valley girls you hear on t.v.
>Going by her terrible "joke" and how much she's giggling at it, you're thinking she's about as smart as they are too.
>You clear your throat to get this girl's attention.
"I'm sorry, he's your... uncle?"
>She hums cheerfully, "Yup! Him and my mom are, like, brother and sister."
>Oh!
>Oh?
>Is she like... friend of the family then?
"Your mom and my uncle are "like" brother and sister, or like "brother and sister"?"
>She furrows her brow at you.
>Her plump shiny lips form into a slight pout as she... thinks?
>"Uhh, yes? Like, that's what I said... twice" she responds, with an almost patronizing tone to her voice.
>You stifle the biggest sigh in the world.
"Okay so, my mom and my aunt are sisters, and my uncle is my uncle only because he married my aunt. So he's technically more like my unlce-in-law."
>She compresses her lips together slghtly and lets out a faint hum, "Oh! My granny-grans gave birth to my mom and my uncle."
>Okay, so your aunt is her aunt-in-law. Finally cleared that up.
>"So my auntie is, like, my auntie-in-law too!" she chirps.
"Yeah, okay I understand now. My name's Ano-nnng!"

>>28946446
>Before you can even register it, two soft and silky smooth arms wrap around your torso and a face buries itself into your chest and shoulder, "And you're my cousin-in-lawwwww!" she cheers, squeezing you tightly.
>Her busty chest presses against your torso and in the surprise of her, well, surprise hug, your hand flings out a little.
>You feel something warm and soft meet the back of your hand as you graze past... whatever it was you touched.
>The girl lets out a pleasant hum, just after you made contact...
>You're pretty sure that was just circumstance, the touch was an accident and so brief... right?
>She releases you, mostly, her hand slide forward and come to brace you around the upper arms, right below your shoulders
>"My name's Lemon Hearts!"
>You cough and try to avoid her eyes and ignore the softness of her hands on your arms.
"A-Anonymous."
>She giggles, "Oh so you're Anonymous!" she says with with a slight inflection on "you're", "I thought Loony was making you up when she mentioned- Oh!" she releases you and claps a hand over her mouth all cutely.
>Lemon Hearts' lips curl up at the ends, "I'm not supposed to call her Loony while I'm here..." she whispers at you.
>A brief chuckle rumbles out of your chest.
>You glance around to see all the adults still greeting and chatting with each other.
>Seems like mom is being introduced, or probably re-introduced to your uncle's side of the family too.
>You turn back to Lemon Hearts.
"I think you're in the clear"
>She peeks around past you briefly before looking back up at you and lowering her hand to reveal a coy smile, "You won't tell on me will you~?" she whispers softly.
>Your mind dulls slightly at the way she holds the pucker of her soft lips well after she finished saying the word "you".
"Uh... n-nope." you motion that your lips are zipped shut to make up for the words that refuse to form in your head.

>>28946452
>She giggles.
>"Shay, you two sssure are getting along alright aren't you?"
>You almost jump at the voice coming from your side.
>Looking into the eyes of your hot au- your aunt you can feel an immense blush beginning to form on your face.
>Lemon has put herself well inside your "personal space" zone, and it MUST be obvious to your aunt.
>You attempt to make that less obvious and step back but an arm hooks around the back of your neck and pulls you forward. and your head down before you can make the step.
>"It's sho good to shee you two getting along sho well!" your aunt coos.
>Your face is warm.
>So very warm.
>Your aunt's dress feels soft against your cheek.
>Her chest is warm.
>So very warm.
>"Auntie~"
>You blink out of the stupor your Aunt's chest has on you and find yourself face to face with your second cousin.
>Her nose is wrinkled as she huffs and tries to free herself from your aunt's hold.
>Her nose bumps yours in her struggle which gets her attention on you as well.
>Lemon Hearts blinks once and looks into your eyes.
>A coy smile form on her face, just for an instant, as you suddenly feel a gentle warmth on your lips and your vision is obscured by her sky blue hair.
>Your aunt releases you both and you immediately dart up to stand tall and distance yourself from both of these women.
>Lemon Hearts places an arm onto your aunt's back and steps in close to her.
>Their busts smush against each other as she pulls her aunt in closer, "Oh Auntie you're so silly!" she chirps.
>"And you're sssillier Lem!" she responds back, booping Lemon on the nose.
>"I'm so happy that, like, we're all SO close~..." she nuzzle your drunk aunt's cheek with her own while eyeing you intensely, "-as a family~"

>>28946460
>Your aunt, happy to receive the affection in her inebriated state only giggles in response, "Mmhmm! Say, why don't you two go spend time with your cousin. Let the adults make with the boring blah blahs. Moonie really missed you Anonymous, you know?"
>You clear your throat loudly and take another step back from the two girls, unsure of what in the hell to make of ANY of what just happened.
>"Oh of course auntie! I'd LOVE to spend time with my cousin~"
>Lemon releases your aunt and begins to saunter- walk, she's just walking... a-and swaying her hips is just how she walks probably, over to you.
>She reaches a hand out and hooks a it onto your arm, slowly, she brings down one finger at a time until she has gripped your arm completely while closing the gap between you both.
>Her chest meets your shoulder, brushing against it firmly enough to turn your torso slightly, "Don't you, like, wanna spend time with your cousin too Anon~?" she coos, walking past you now.
>You feel a light tug on your arm, which you mindlessly obey, walking away from the adults gathered in the kitchen and off into deeper parts of the house.

Okay that's it for the moment. More chores to do so I'll be back at it after that, expect more later today. One thing while I'm away, for those who happen to be catching this and are interested enough to want to take part, should Anon and his second cousin go see their cousin or... should these two second cousins get to know each other first?

>>28945255
I hope it's a little more cleared up for you now, the older cousin and his aunt are new characters in the sense that they have no canon names unlike the younger cousin. Because of that I was playing around and keeping it ambiguous because I was still doing this post as I go so the reveal would come piecemeal. Crappy internet changed those plans but the groundwork was already there so I had to build off of it. I hope all this makes sense.

>>28946528
I'm enjoying it, I just don't recognize the characters

>>28946641
Guess I'm playing it too subtly, sorry. I'm pulling heavily from Amending Fences if that helps you any.

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>>28946528
Welp, since nobody said anything for whatever reason I went ahead and made the choice myself

>You are pulled along gently into one of the halls.
>One door after the next passes by.
>In one solid yank you find yourself dipping away from the hall and stumbling into a room.
>You whip around to face the door out only to watch it shut with a single butt bump from Lemon Hearts.
>She leans back against the door, keeping her hands tucked behind her, which inadvertently, you think anyway, puts her chest out towards you.
>You swallow nervously, unsure of what to do right now.
>"So..." Lemon coos, "Cousin~" she sing-songs, relaxing her position and starts stalking towards you, "I have been, like, SO bored the last two days..." she whines, getting ever closer towards you.
>You take a hesitant step back but she matches it with a step forward.
>"The signal strength here is so bad~" she says, booping your chest with a pretty, painted, long nail.
>"And trying to talk to Loony is... ugh, like, impossible... you know what I mean don't you~"
>The rest of her hand follows the initial finger as her fingers spread widely across the center of your chest.
"Y-yeah I-"
>Her hand darts up to put a finger to your lips, "Shh, Lemon's talking."
>She slowly traces her finger down your lips, grazing her nail over your chin.
>Down your neck, sending a shiver up your spine.
>She digs her nail in a little when she reaches the exposed part of your chest, just above the neck of your shirt, before dragging it down.
>She scratches gently against your skin, pulling the collar of your shirt down somewhat before it snaps back up and she spreads her fingers over your chest again.
>"Mmm~" she hums pleasantly while gently grabbing a feel of your torso.

>>28947619
>She stops suddenly and tilts her head to the side, "Mm? Uh... like, where was I?" she muses aloud.
>You open your mouth to speak but she's quicker to respond, "Oh right! Duh Lemon, like, how could you forget?..." A smirk spreads across her lips as she eyes you up and down, "How bored I've been~"
>Her hand begins to travel lower.
>"But now I've got a new, cute, loving cousin to spend time with right?" she chirps.
>Cute?!
>Her hand is past your stomach now and is quickly approaching your pelvis.
>"And you are loving aren't you cuz? I can see it in your eyes~"
>You can't even look away from her eyes, the deep magenta pools have your head completely submerged.
>You feel a light pressure over your stiffening bulge.
>Her fingers slip under your shirt and she begins to bring her hand up now.
>"Hmm~ Oh I just knew it, you are loving aren't you~" she coos, stepping closer towards you.
>Her hand travels higher and higher, your shirt catches on her wrist and rises with it, slowly exposing your chest as she nears.
>Lemon stands right up close to you, her chest is inches away from yours, her hand is up at your shoulder now, your torso is almost completely exposed.
>She looks down at your body and bites her lip a sultry giggle rumbles in her throat.
>Lemon raises her head and looks into your eyes again, "I can be real loving too you know, Anon~" she whispers just under her breath, like she's only now afraid of getting caught.
>Lemon leans forward, gripping your shoulder for support and to pull you down slightly.
>You can feel her breath on your lips before you feel her.
>The sweet citrusy scent of her breath tickles your nose just before you feel her warmth against you.
>She moans softly into your mouth, you can feel her lips vibrate against yours as she presses them firmly to you.
>Your hands move of their own accord, one coming to rest on the spot where her upper thigh meets her butt and the other against her hip.

>>28947629
>You can feel her smiling against you at your touch and even gives her ass a little shake, coaxing your hand up higher.
>She comes away from you with a faint smack sound and looks up into your eyes, biting her lip.
>You can feel your cock starting to ache as it pushes against the shackles of your cloth prison.
>It seems she can feel the struggle in your pants as she suddenly lets out a squeak and her lips form a wide "O" shape.
>She leans back a little and looks down your bodies, giggling as she does, "WOW, like, somebody's a little excited aren't they?"
"U-uh... sorry I-"
>"Shhh" she leans in again and kisses your lips, "Lemon's talking~" she coos softly.
>She purrs as she rests her free hand on your side, "Don't feel embarrassed cuz... you're not the only one~" she singsongs
>What in the actual fuck is all this?!
>Your heart is racing in your chest as a mixture of sheer confusion and arousal all come crashing down onto you.
>"I just, like, LOVE younger guys you know?"
>Younger?
>She looks like she's your age, maybe a little younger.
"I'm eighteen."
>She hums, pleased with your statement, "I knew it. Thats a hot, tight, twenty-four year old's ass in your hands Anon~"
>What?!
>She giggles, 'Oh I just love that look on a guys face when I tell them that..." she muses aloud, "See I had to figure you were at least sixteen with a favorable growth spurt which would've been great, but I like eighteen too. Really, it's the hesitation that I, like, TOTALLY love!"
>She leans up and kisses you, throwing you completely off and making your body tense up in response.
>She settle back down and giggles at you, "See, like that. Awww~"
>Lemon raises a hand against your cheek and rubs your face with her thumb, "So adorably frozen!" she babytalks you.
>Without any warning you get a rough shove to your chest and stumble back to fall back first onto a bed.
>Your eyes lock to the ceiling and then immediately to where Lemon is, but only manage to catch her in motion.
"Ooph!"

>>28947634
>Before you could even register what was going on she's already straddled herself over your groin.
>You can feel the warmth and weight of her body against you.
>Her hands come to rest on your shoulders, and press you firmly down onto the mattress.
>Lemon herself is smirking down at you, "And now completely helpless. This is a very fetch look for you Anon, like, I'm getting SO hot right now~"
>As if to punctuate that statement, you can feel her grinding against your bulge as she rocks her hips back and forth, side to side.
>Despite your best efforts a small grunt escapes your lips.
>Lemon's busty chest heaves with each of her heavy breaths as she looms over you.
>"And I know you're only my cousin-in-law or whatever, but you're just going to be my normal cousin for this you got that?"
>The burning desire in your eyes has you completely entranced.
>You muster a weak nod, or at least you think you do.
>She practically pounces down on you regardless and buries her face into your neck.
>Her soft, warm, wet lips meet your sensitive skin.
>You shiver under her, feeling each puff of breath that escapes her nose as she kisses and licks your exposed flesh.
>This doesn't last too long however, as you both hear a voice, punctuated with a click.
>She jumps up tall and whips her head around to face the door, you lean to the side and look towards it as well.
>"Lemmy! We're going to the store for some things, come with us."
>"Daaaaddy!" she whines, bouncing on you as she does, "You and mom go on your own!"
>"You've had Moonie the last two days, let her other cousin spend some time with her. They'll be here when you get back."
>She huffs and looks down at you, her hips rock back and forth on your crotch, "We are SO continuing this later..."
>With that she throws her leg off of you and, in a fluid motion, slips off the bed and starts walking to the door.
>She pauses with her hand on the handle and turns her upper body back to face you.

>>28947640
>Lemon grabs the hem of her shirt and lifts it up to flash a yellow tiger-printed bra at you, she winks and drops her shirt as she slips out the door.
>"Lemon!" you hear her dad call her from beyond the door.
>"I'm coming jeez Daddy, relax!" she growls back, her voice getting quieter as she travels further away.
>You fall back onto the bed and let out a long sigh.
"What in the fuck?" you whisper to yourself.

Okay and that's it from me for now. There might not be anymore today, other things to do with my weekend but if I'm not too wiped from all that then, maybe, I'll have some more out later tonight.

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>>28947653
Okay not gonna lie the change of pace on that really threw me off, felt maybe we needed a little more exposition or something before that, but I mean otherwise I still like it.

>>28946641
Same. I have no idea who any of the characters are, and unless I misunderstood, Anon and Lemon Hearts aren't even actually related.

>>28948124
Seems to me like this is gonna involve Moondancer too

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>>28947653
Fuck, Frosty. You need to stop doing these things to my dick. With how you've written these other characters, I'm looking foward to seeing how you'll write Moonie.

And, I want you to know this doesn't mean it's bad writing, it is a bit confusing who's who at first. As Lemon Hearts (pic related) isn't necessarily said to be related to Moondancer in Amending Fences. That's what kinda threw me off in the beginning.

Nonetheless, keep it up man. I like where this is going.

>>28949278
Yeah, that's the trouble when using background characters. Nobody has any names and I don't want to throw a bunch of meaningless character names around if they're not going to be important, plus I just don't want to go through the effort of making names. There's kind of not really much I can do for a story set up like this. I'm aware that Lemon Heart's isn't related to Moonie, that's why this is a fanfiction. For the purposes of this story, she is, just as Anon is too. I'm using her because she has relevance to Moondancer and given the bottle scene for those who watched Amending Fences could be seen as a ditz which was the kind of character I needed, plus it's not just some OC that complicates things further.

tl;dr Using background characters and branching characters off of those characters can be trouble, I'm trying not to fuck it up too hard.

>>28947915
>Change of pace
How so?

>>28949536
I dunno for me the scene with lemon hearts came really quick. I mean it's probably just me, but that's how I felt.

>>28949536
Dammit, Frosty, I wish I could write as well as you. I've been practically skimming through your posts this thread as I write the Fluttermom story. Oh well. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>28949707
Just keep writing, the "wellness" comes in time. I was absolute garbage when I first started, and now I'm like high quality trash. The kind of stuff you find in gated communities y'know?

More seriously though, you weren't too bad as far as I recall, your biggest issue imo, was your pacing and the actions of your characters. They moved far too quick to feel really believable and sometimes the actions your characters did made sense between themselves, but didn't fit the context of the world at large.

Just take your time, try to think of your story like a movie or something. Speak the dialogue out loud and see if it makes sense for your characters to say and that you could believe them saying it and evoke the responses you want in the characters they're speaking to. Visualize the scenes and paint them out with your words, picture your characters moving through these scenes, make the movements logical and describe it with enough detail that you think the readers can imagine it too.

Most importantly, show don't tell, coax the reader along in your story but don't drag them through it. Nobody likes being hand-held through things. Yes, it's more work and yes you might not quite get them onto your line of thinking, but they're engaged in your story at least and the readers will, hopefully, share their thoughts and that can tell you where you need to shape things more to lead them back on track.

>>28949602
Ahh, I see. That was kind of intentional actually, character building. Though, maybe it was a little too sloppy, hopefully, when I address that later it'll be justified in retrospect.

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>>28949804
>High quality trash

You mean SiIvaGunner?

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>>28937122
Not him, but there was some weirdness going on in your writing that made me think it could be a troll, specifically the part about the electric chair. That sort of metaphor is hard to pull off in this context already, but the fact that it wasn't deliberately played for laughs was confusing.

Your dialogue also feels a bit odd/inconsistent to me. One minute Anon will be using contractions like a normal person and the next he'll be avoiding them entirely. I understand that it's hard to make characters speak convincingly in a story, though, so I would recommend practicing that more.

Whatever you do, don't take this as a hint to stop writing; green is hard enough to come by as is, so more people writing is always good. The fact that you tried is more than most can say, and in doing so you're showing that you want to try your hand at this. Please, keep at it and take criticism into account.

>>28949707
Bad doggo
I know where you live.

>>28949536
I see now what you're going for. Props to you for trying something others wouldn't. If it makes any difference, you've got me invested in your story. Looking foward to your portrayal of Moondancer, and how you have her, Lemon, and the aunt interact with eachother, and anon.

>>28946714
>heavily
Is this the right word, though?

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