Anon in Pone Prison: #48 Replacement Green promises to actually

>>28807595
Now I want to develop a dog-size breed of pygmy pony, then take one and teach it to horse-squeal at strangers that come near the door.

>>28807783
It has to accept belly rubs too

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>>28807783
Done and done.

Any sad stories, or stories where anon loses his mind? I'm interested in the topic, but haven't read any so far.

>>28808348
No. This thread is cute only!

>>28808348

Actually sort of yes. I wrote something like that a while back. Look for "Anon alone" and the prelude to it or something. It's in my bin.

p.9 bump

Dead general

>>28810711
Funny. That was going to be a character in my green.
IF I ACTUALLY CAN FOCUS ON WRITING IT

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>>28810711
Uwot m8?
>You aren't free, but it feels good to interact with people, er, ponies.
>You were allowed time outside your lodgings but you had to report back to them by 8pm.
>You understand, even if an ayylien was peaceful on your planet they'd still keep it under watch.
>Actually if it were a muscle bound terror like you are, odds are the government would weaponi-
>"Ya with us Anon?" Apple Jack says while nudging your leg.
>Oh yeah, you were doing something.
>"Yeah, just thinking." you respond.
>"Ya do that a lot ya know?"
>Do you?
>In any case you reach you destination. An Old apple tree as tall and thick as an oak.
>You notice depressions in the bark at around knee height that weren't on any of the other trees.
>It makes sense, the thicker the tree the harder you have to kick it.
>"Feast yer eye's on practice oak Anon."
"Oak trees grow apples?"
>"Of course not, don't be silly it's only called that because it's so big. The apples on this here tree are the sweetest on the farm, and the hardest to get."
So the new guys can just buck away and not worry about harming the tree?
>"Yes in deed, since you're pretty strong, Ah thought you might be suited for it."
"Alright then, I'll give it a shot."
>You lean in close and ball your fist.
>You want to get an apple off but you want to leave their tree in tact.
>You Tap the tree and you don't even leave a mark.
>You give it a love tap and crack the bark sightly.
"Come on Anon quit foolin' around. You can hit it harder than that!"
>Here goes nothing.

>>28810711
Got to admit despite the number of content creators here things are a tad slow. We're all just busy with life I guess. I've always thought about moving to /AiE/ and it's not too bad an idea. Things move a bit faster there so the threads usually always up, I don't even write when our threads not up and I'm sure they'd like more content over there.

>>28793042
<| °_° |>

>You were just about to round the corner to the Changeling sister’s room when the tiny and wrinkled form of Shear’s friend Gran bustles around
>She jumps back, startled at your sudden appearance
“You’re here sooner than I thought.”
>”What?”
“Uh… I mean I think I’m lost dearie, can you help me out?”
>”… Right. Well there are maps of the buildings on nearly every hallway.” You respond, desperately hoping this was just a brief moment of confusion and not a complete descent into dementia and madness
“You’re quite right Sonny. Thank you kindly for helping an old mare find her way home.”
>”No problem.”
>She smiles vacantly and you take it as your cue to leave
>That was strange
>Walking off you overhear her talking to herself
“The smell! Goodness those changelings are going to have a good time.”
>What? (God you thought that a lot)
>You didn’t smell bad did you?
>A quick sniff and all you get is various fruity fragrances, petrichor, and lavender, along with a slight sweaty pony stank
>You smelt pretty good actually, there was a lot of pony hair on your clothes though
>Finally rounding the corner you spot a tiny, ashy cat slinking away from the changeling’s door
>”Aw, you’re a cute little kitty aren’t you!”
>The cat jumps back in fright before fading away in a puff of ash
>”… I think this place is getting to me.”

>>28811444
>Knocking at the Changeling’s door you receive a unified “Come in Anonymous.”
>How did they know it was you? Or speak so perfectly in sync? God please don’t let them have some hivemind shit going on
>Inside the insect’s room you find them all patiently waiting, snuggled up on the one bed
>The moment you stepped in their eyes locked upon you
>Totally not creepy
“Come, sit with us.” They continue in unison
>”Uh… Are you sure? I know being that close on a bed is pretty intimate here.”
>Chytera leans back, shocked and flustered
>She drops the creepy synchronised speech, speaking solely
“W-what? We are no filthy ponies Anonymous. Our culture is much more… progressive, such close contact is considered a sign of respect. You should be honoured, you are the only other creature here we respect, any other would only receive our wrath.”
>”Good to know.”
>You sit down on the bed to suddenly, yet not unexpectedly, be flooded by the sleek shelled bodies of the changelings

<| °_° |>

>Be Chytera
>Anonymous had been down for less than a second before your sisters had lost their composure and pounced upon him, feeding on the ridiculous amount of rich emotion just… drifting from him
>It was unbelievable, something you’d certainly not expected
>He was meant to come here, you’d ask for a meal and he’d leave. But this!?
>The moment he’d stepped into the room it had been flooded by feelings, you could see them diffusing through the air
>It was a powerful concoction of five magically enhanced sources of love and arousal
>You’d no idea what he’d been doing but it had already melted the minds of your sisters, you could literally see their stomachs swelling as they ate

>>28811476
>It was taking all your willpower not to join them, the errant emotion leaking into you form the proximity had become very bothering
>By the hive! Any plans you had were ruined! He would never look at the five of you again after this!
>You wouldn’t fail yacko’s plan though, it appealed to you too much, should he avoid you after this you would simply use a more aggressive means of taking his emotions
>But for now… well, there was no way you could hold it off, and there was a feast to be had
>Sometimes, you just had to let yourself go, future hivequeen or not.

<| °_° |>

>Be Anon
>Two of the sisters push themselves against your sides, slipping up through your armpits, forcing your arms around them, the others move parallel to your leg and latch themselves on
>Only Chytera remains in her original position, looking at her sisters with a disgusted understanding
>”Are you sure this is normal!?” You ask, alarmed as the insects slowly rub themselves against you
“Ah, yes! Of course! Please, f-forgive my… Ah” She trails off as her eyes twitch, struggling to keep her composure
>She shakes herself back into awareness
“Forgive my sisters. It is respectful, but, we are creatures of emotion as you know and well…”
>She gets up and moves behind you
>You can feel her smooth carapace press against your back
>Her cool wet snout pokes into the crook of your neck and sniffs
“You smell nice Anonymous. It’s a little, egh, overwhelming. So emotionally charged.”
>Shit, the sweet scent of four horny ponies bundled up together might play a few tricks on magical bugs that lived off feelings
>”Fuck. That’s my bad. Sorry for messing with you girls, I’ll go if you want.”
“NO! Please, please stay with us Anonymous, let us feed.”
>”Uh…”

>>28811444
Damn zew, dem quads!
Also I've been trying to put my life back together. but I did the draws in advance.

>>28811493
>You look down at the two bugs on your legs, both of whom had gained considerable weight, their once thin bellies swelling up after mere moments of you sitting down
>Good Christ! That cuddle sesh must have left you overloaded, or your feelings have a shitton of calories
>”I don’t really think I have a choice in that, but if it keeps you happy go ahead, it doesn’t exactly hurt and by the look of it I’ve got plenty to go around.”
>She doesn’t respond, instead her hooves wrap over your chest and pull you closer towards her, sniffing through your hair
>Overall it was a strange experience, having five sentient bug horses rub themselves against you all while apparently eating your feelings
>Yet helping others like this was also very comforting and highly satisfactory
>You grin at the sense of self satisfaction, causing the sisters to all moan
>Shit! You should be more careful with your feelings around these things
>”So, ah. I have these tickets to the dance recital and I was hoping you’d all come out tonight. It starts shortly, sorry for being so late with these.”
>None of them answer
>”Yeah, I’m just going to leave these on the bedside table.”
>Chytera grunts something guttural
>”Cool. So are you guys…?”
>The green mare to your side, odonata you believe, nuzzles against your hand initiating it’s now instinctual petting response
>It was, perhaps, the wrong decision, as the gentle contact cause her to spasm and hiss
>As she does so her tongue extends out further than you’d thought possible and wraps around your forearm, moving up and down, leaving it coated in a mystery slime bug saliva
>Your natural instinct was to recoil in terror but the current situation made the action difficult
>Instead you choose to straight face the entire thing and watch on with mild confusion
>You were oddly calm considering the situation at hand

>>28811523
>They must release a soothing pheromone or something to prevent creatures from freaking out when they feed
>She continues to slide her tongue up and down your arm, her reason for doing becoming apparent with her belly now twice the size of any other mares
>”Heh… You guys can eat a lot can’t you?”
>No answer other than ragged breather and tongue squelching
>”You have a way of dealing with all that or...?”
>This time your response is Chytera struggling her way onto your shoulders, piggybacking you and resting her now very pudgy stomach on your head and sighing in content
>”Alright then, cool. You’re not like goldfish right? If I don’t stop this you won’t keep eating until you die right? Please don't die.”
>Thankfully this time the non-response you receive actually answers your question, as odonata burps in satisfaction, releases your arm from her tongue’s grip, and rolls over, swollen abdomen preventing further movement
>”God you look like you’ve got octuplets in there.”
>No answer, just ragged breathing as usual and the growing weight of chytera on your shoulders
>You poke Odonata’s now massive and pudgy belly
>She burps again and giggles, struggling to roll away, but incapable in her current state, little legs flailing around wildly
>”You need to stop that right now you tubby little bug, it’s too damn adorable!”
>Despite the request you keep prodding to elicit those wonderful insect giggles
>”Too damn adorable.”
>Eventually the other sisters drop off you, all looking like swollen little balls with legs stapled on
>You go around poking and prodding their fat and jiggly bellies, glad their undersides didn’t have hard carapaces
>You set up a happy chorus of giggling changelings, only stopping after they fall into a bout of hiccups, all the while uncontrollably giggling

>>28811541
>”How on earth they ever came to fear you I’ll never know. That and how emotion converts to so much mass.”
>Overdosing on it also caused poo brain judging by their behaviour, they were like foals, struggling around on the bed
>Chytera squirms back up and starts licking the back of your neck
>”Just can’t control yourself can you? Greedy little thing.”
>You turn around to face the tubby mare and give her a disappointed stare
>She still had the self-awareness to look ashamed but nevertheless continues licking, only now on your face
>”God damn plump bug you are.”
>Incapable of holding disappointment in anything so adorable you pull the fat mare into an embrace, letting her nuzzle against your neck and lick away
>Finally she wiggles herself off, you’re guessing not because she was full but because you were empty
>”What the heck are you guys using all that for anyway? No one needs to eat this much right?”
>You weren’t expecting an answer and you didn’t get one
>With nothing better to do you gently stroke their undersides before getting up to leave
>As you do Chytera grasps at your hand
“Please don’t hate us for what we’ve done.” She croaks out
>You tussle her strange mane
>”Silly bug horse, I don’t hate you, this was kinda cool, despite how creepy it was. It’s a bit like feeding the ducks.”

>>28811566
“Truly? You don’t hate us?”
>You poke her again, causing an involuntary giggle form the supposed meanest prisoner in this place
>”Damn right, I hope to see you guys make it to the dance recital, although I think it’s fine if you give it a miss.”
>You look over their bloated forms crowding the bed
>”Unless you pull off some kind of miracle.”
>She grins
“We’ve got a few miracles. See you there Anonymous.”
>You leave the five cute fat bug horses to perform their “miracles”
>There was no way they’d make it tonight

<| °_° |>

>Be chytera, struggling to maintain control of your mind after such an unbelievable meal
>Anon’s sweet feelings had left the lot of you so bubbly and happy
>And so damn fat!
>You felt disgusted with yourself but looking over your swollen body caused tremendous satisfaction
>Yacko had requested you produce a workforce, then anon walked in and provided you with the beginnings of an army!
>Honestly you were considering just bailing on Yacko’s plans and starting a hive with the energy you had already
>But should whatever she’s truly planning come to pass you’re sure you’ll be able to start one along the way
>And so you lazily roll onto your side and get to work, converting raw emotion into fuel for your newly forming drones
>Already your sisters had produced several small clutches of slime covered eggs
>With further nourishment from Anonymous they would grow into some of the strongest drones ever produced
>Unlike eggs fertilised in the regular fashion those born of magic didn’t produce true viable offspring

>>28811577
>The eggs would rapidly develop into slave drones
>Off no true mind they were pheromone controlled insectoids utilised for rapid construction and expansion of new hives
>They were often used as cannon fodder between warring hives back in the era of darkness due to their unnaturally short lives
>But for now they would serve whatever purpose Yacko deemed them fit for
>Construction? Or invasion?
>The five of you continue your slow and semi-uncomfortable task for some time, small clutches of eggs steadily building up around you, a veritable pool of lubricating fluid coating the covers
>They would have to be moved to a more appropriate location later and this bed would have to be washed… or replaced
>Your slow progress is interrupted when you recall Anonymous’ offer
>Yet another opportunity to harvest bountiful amounts of love and one you couldn’t possibly pass upon
>A brief command to your sisters and you each begin excreting dense sacs of concentrated emotion, perfect for later consumption and purging your bodies of the extreme emotional excess
>It simply made room for more
>For whatever reason you’d always envisioned Anonymous being unreasonable and indomitable, likely due to the manner in which he’d first bold facedly introduced himself,
>Nopony had ever stood up to you like that
>So it would only be natural that you’d never expect him to give up his emotions so readily, but now you see you may have mistaken confidence and danger for simple ignorance
>He would give you whatever you needed and all you had to do was ask!
>You doubt you even need be nice. Of course you would be, to him at the very least

>>28811603
>You hate to admit it but his ignorant and innocent nature, coupled with his phenomenal strength, made him quite endearing
>After this has all gone down you’ll be sure to keep him as a personal slave
>Feeling much lighter and looking considerably thinner you gather up the tickets and leave with your sisters, a batch of eggs to one side of your cave, a pile of food sacs to the other

<| °_° |>

>Finally reaching the library’s theatre you meet up with your herd mares milling around the foyer, speaking to Platinum
>The minotaur was dressed in some spandex leotard thing and god damn she was banging in that thing
>Sleek tight body rippling with muscles and breasts just barely contained within her costume
>Fu-uck! Stay down little anon! Stay down! These prison pants weren't very concealing
>Shear looks up and greets you by hugging your leg
“How’d it go with the changelings? Ugh, you reek of them! We’ve got to fix that.”
>”Things were strange, but I gave them the tickets. I don’t think they’ll make it by the look of them. Also what?”
>Before you know it you’re swamped by little ponies, rubbing their scents upon you
>You never really knew horses were so smell sensitive, or that they scent marked
>Actually you knew stallions did, but like most things back on Earth that was just with their own piss
>God Earth was gross
>Shear looks back up to you
“All better. So, you don’t think they’ll make it? Are they okay?”
>”They’re just feeling a little bloated.”
“I don’t know how you can tolerate those bugs Nonny. I’ve heard such terrible stories from the other guards.” Adds Silver
>”They aren’t too bad trust me. If you look past their abrasive speech and manners they’re just as cute and harmless as you guys.”
>Ember's head shakes
“You think everything here is cute don’t you?”
>”Something like that.”
“Well they’re black suits for a reason. So you better watch yourself.”
>”I’ll be sure to."

kbai

who did the green with the boxing match that Discord stopped and gave anon powers?

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>You step back and deliver a straight right jab to the tree causing the branches shake and you're showering you with leaves.
>"Ya got power, Ah'll give ya that." she says inspecting the gash you put in the tree, "But we don't get apples from just wailing on em."
"Could've fooled me"
>"Watch and learn." She about faces the tree and gives it a swift strike with her back hoof.
>The tree vibrates from bottom to top and a single apple lands on AJ's hat.
>"What ya gotta do is focus all of that energy."
>How do I do that?
>"That Ah can't help ya with, it's like describing the taste of water. Everypony who's done it just finds their own way. Heck, even Caramel did it once."
>Really?
"That's... really vague unhelpful."
>"That's just how it is, partner just keep at it." She heads to the orchard and speaks over her "shoulder". "Make sure to finish your other chores around the farm."
>Just how is she balancing that apple still?
>You look back to the tree.
>This is a new beast entirely, maybe you should try that Bruce Lee thing. You would if you know the first thing about Kung-fu.
>You'll have to think about this when you play with the kitties.
>On the way to your carriage you Idly wonder what their going to replace fluffy with.

>>28810711
That's what they all say.

>You wake up in your Cell the next day and hear more claws scratching the ceiling above than usual.
>Time to housebreak your new pet.
>You walked up the steps and lift the hatch, all the scratching stopped when you lifted the door.
>You shut the hatch from the other side and are worried by the sight before you.
>Spike is whimpering in the corner with blood staining his fur. These things can take a beating, but they've never been afraid of you.
>What's more is you haven't touched him for the last 2 days!
>A moist growling breath spills over your shoulder, but once you turn to look at it, it's gone. You look up to the ceiling and see the newest addition to your play pen.
>This one is thinner than the rest, so much so that he can comfortable hang from the ceiling by it's tail.
>He's on the other side of the room in a blur. This time, he's ready to pounce.
>He's gone in a flash as pain sears across your back throwing you into the adjacent wall.
>Once you get your bearings, you realize that this is no ordinary manticore.
>You had been tossing them around so much you forgot what it was like the other way around.
"You know of course, THIS means war!"
>You step out of the wall to find him tensed again with his tail snaking back and fourth.
>You're gonna teach this cat a lesson.
>You make a Bee line for each other and scream.
>That cat taught you a lesson, you escape by the skin of your teeth and slam the hatch above you.
>You stagger down the stairs and bang on the door for the gaurd before collapsing.
>The steady beep of a heart monitor is the last thing you hear before passing out.

>>28812142

Sleepy rant inc, TLDR add more fluff and dialog, stop summing up plot points in a single line.

I think that you're going way too fast with this. We suddenly went from talking to AJ and preparing to punch a tree to *suddenly it's the next day and we're fighting a manticore*. Except that the fight was over in two lines without any explanation why.

My advice:
Slow down the overall pacing of the story - you're glossing over hours of the day at a time for no good reason (you even skipped months at the start of the story iirc). You have a really bad habit of "telling" what happened instead of "showing", where major plot points are summarized in a single line or less. Try to think about the little things that should be happening around Anon as the story progresses, since the rest of the world doesn't stop when he's not around, and ask yourself some questions about what might happen.

Did Anon actually practice more on the tree? What were the other chores that Applejack mentioned, and did anything interesting happen while doing them? Did Anon stay for dinner since most writers have AJ offer some immediate recompense for labor? Who else did he talk to while at the farm? Did any of the background townsfolk have any input on Anon? How did Anon get back to the prison, in detail? What kind of dialog or witty banter does Anon have with the guards? What happened between arriving at the prison and going to bed? What provoked the manticore into a frenzy, and why is Spike bleeding in the corner? What "lesson" did the manticore teach Anon/how was he injured specifically? What was he thinking during all of this? How did the guards react to seeing Anon after the fight? I could keep going, but you probably get my point.

Cont'd ->

>>28812531
->Cont'd

Right now your story feels like a fight scene that has everyone getting riled up and angry for a few minutes, except when it actually comes to the fight the screen *flashes white* for a moment and cuts to the main character 40 years later, retired and relaxing on a beach somewhere. To make a truly good story you need the right amount of juicy details, casual dialog, and random fluff points to build up the world around your characters so that the everything flows together properly and so that it doesn't read like an outline of a story instead. I do think that you did well with the dialog with Applejack, and it had a good amount of fluff interspersed throughout the actual plot points. We now know more about the inner workings of farm life based off of what can be gathered and inferred from said dialog, such as the fact that she sometimes gets help from the townsfolk to work on her farm, which you can then tie in to some of the lessons she learned during the IRL show in order to flesh out her character even more.

Neither our world nor theirs is a static place; everything is constantly in motion, things are happening around you whether they immediately affect you or not, and people are -constantly- talking. I think that it would do you and your story well to have more casual dialog and fewer time skips of greater than an hour. You seem to know where you want the story to go inside your mind, though you need to help us get that same image in our own minds by being more descriptive with casual details and dialog.

/end rant

Thank you for reading, and I hope that this helps in some way.

>>28812545
Damn son,

I hear you and I will expand on these scenes here.

thanks for the feedback.

>>28812531
>>28812545
Man I want feedback that detailed.

>>28807595
>be anon in equestrian prison
>everyone is very easy to manipulate
>use your superiour linguistics and rampaging lust to sleep with nearly every mare in the place
>afterwards they would always insist they were in your herd
>you now apparently have a herd of 30+ mares, some guards included

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Still hoping Mythd will give me his blessing to repost his Prison Herd.

>>28814074
>tfw cunning linguals

bumpmap

>>28816083
Bump. Also reminder that an irc was made last thread #poneprison on rizon.

> "What's that Anon ? You think your sentence is finished because you survived until page 9 ?"

>>28817344
Kek to you sir, kek to you

>>28817344
And here we are again. Revolving-door prison system, I tell you.

early morning bump

>>28817344
God, It so hard and lazy.

>>28814074
This has me inspired to do a mini-story sometime soon.

>>28821848
Everything.

>>28811760
That was Nope.
http://pastebin.com/u/MLPNope

>>28822470
Good shit!

>>28821848
Lookin forward to whatever it is.

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Attempting to Summon Wand.

>anon in p0ne prison for "crime"
>ponis confused by his watch
>released for "groundbreaking technological advances"
>creates watch company "Ponex"
>arrested for running a monopoly
>such is life in Prisonverse

>>28814074
>>28826206
K, I'm finished.
It is lewd, hardcore lewd, like not even joking, butts, horse puss all that jazz, mainly cuz I haven't wanked for like four days.
Do you guys still want it?

>>28826972
Why is that even a question

Commence dump pls

>>28827021
k, gib me time to proof read

>>28826972

>asking anon If we want green

>may as well ask the drugy if he wants the needle

>>28826972
full lewd please
also sorry for being gone so long you little bastards, came down with illness due to my trip to africa probably
I'm almost better so I'll be back to writing again soon

Right, I could have spent some more time refining this into something good, but I haven't got that time. Also I just chose cookies cuz it was an easy pre-existing character.

>>28814074
>>28814074

>One mare in particular held a special place in your ravenous heart
>She was the guard who'd been posted outside your cell
>You'd taken her the very first night of your sentence
>Cookies 'n' Cream was her name, now she'd made herself dominant mare of your herd, only answering to you
>To be honest the entire, er... "Incident" with her had been an accident, if anything she'd been the one to claimed you
>She was the best guard in all Equestria after all
>Ahh, you remember it like it was yesterday
>It had been a thunderously stormy night, the wind outside near deafening
>While it had you irked you'd found nearly every other inmate had been sent to a state of stress and panic
>That had been your first taste of this world’s absurdity aside from the whole being arrested by techni coloured sexually repressed dream ponies
>What followed was your second

[that one blurry screen transition they have in shows when someone remembers things]

>So here you are, in a spacious, well-furnished room your captors had claimed was a cell
>It did a reasonable job at keeping out the raging storm because good fucking god was it coming down out there
>For whatever reason it had everyone on edge, actually no they'd already willing leapt over the cliff side, most of the inmates were endlessly crying from the thunder
>God it was so stupid, but not the dumbest thing you've encountered thus far
>Being arrested for self-endangerment, now that was the stupidest thing you'd ever heard or seen
>All you'd done was slip in a patch of ice
>Feeling none too happy about how pants on head retarded that was you were already thinking of ways to break out
>You were searching your room for valuable escape tools when you discovered that your door wasn't actually locked

>>28827306
"Fuck me swinging! Are these guys serious?"
>Looks like getting out of here would be as simple as walking right out the door
>Except they'd posted a guard outside your room, having deemed you a danger to yourself, requiring constant surveillance
"Shit."
>You have an idea, a pretty damn flawless one
>You were very big, she was very small. You just have to pick her up, steal her keys and lock her in your room as you saunter on out
>You might have a search for an umbrella before you leave but
>Creeping your door open you half expected to find your guard ready to pounce
>Instead you find her huddled up in a corner, shaking in her adorable guard uniform, a simple blue shirt and shorts, as thunder boomed in the distance
>You look up and down the hallway
>Empty, nopony, nothing but the rain pounding against the windows
>You sneak up to the mare, unable to hear your approach over the storm, nor able to see you with her head hidden under her hooves
"Sorry little pony."
>She looks up in shock at the sound and attempts to react as your arms lash out and grasp around her waist
>"W-what!? Let me go prisoner! NOW!"
"No."
>You begin to cart her back to your room
>"P-PRISON BREAK! SOMEPONY HELP!"
>Her shouts are lost in the deafening rumble of nearby thunder
>The sound of it makes the windows vibrate and causes her to lose all defiance in a snivel
>It certainly made it easier to haul her inside your room
>You slam the door shut to prevent her escape and toss her onto your bed
>"Guah! You don't scare me prisoner! You can't do th-
"Shut UP!" You bellow
"Your keys, give me your keys. Also are there any umbrellas here? Or a huge plastic bag?"
>"Like I'd tell you! And you're never getting my keys, I'm the best guard in all equestria!"
>You pick up one of the apples from the complimentary fruit basket they’d had in the room and move over to the ill-tempered guard mare
>"I'll have you know that I'd rather- grmrmmff!"

>>28827309
>Her words are cut off as your shove the apple directly into her open maw
"Didn't I tell you to shut up? Listen, ah..."
>You grab her shirt and find her name tag
"Listen Cookie 'n' Cream, christ what a name, I don't think you understand, best guard or not right now here's the pecking order. It goes me, then you. Now give me the damn keys."
>She spits the apple back in your face
>"Bite me!"
"That's it!"
>With just a single hand over her chest your lift her up and force her onto her back
>She whimpers and covers her exposed stomach with her hooves
>That was weird
>You look her over and find the keys around her belt
>Once you'd torn them off you let Cookies go and stroll to the door
>Stage one of your escape plan had gone off without a hitch
>Until you decide to take one last look at the pony you'd so thoroughly trounced
>Such a wonderful mistake on your part
>She'd gotten up but hadn't left the bed
>Rather she just sat, hunched over and looking like the saddest adorable horse in the multiverse
>Thunder roars from right above the facility and the mare breaks
>She start to sob and wail, a veritable flood of tears suddenly running down her face
"Fuuuuuuuck. What are you doing man?" You ask yourself
>You couldn't leave now
>Moving back to the bed you sit down beside Cookies
>Damn, how do people deal with situations like this?
>You do the one thing that feels natural, you cross your legs, grab the mare, put her between them, and hold her in a comforting embrace
"Are you alright? It's only thunder."
>"I know that! ~sniffle~ I-I've failed my job! How can I ever claim to be the best guard now! I'm a failure!"
>She continues to cry in your arms
"Hey, hey it'll be alright. Look I'm not going anymore, see? Staying right here."

>>28827313
>"Thank you prisoner." She mumbles out between ragged breaths
>Her sniffling doesn't stop so your start to rock her back and forth, stroking her from mane to tail
>You keep petting the mare as she cries herself out, having started she now found it difficult to stop
"You're a fantastic guard Cookies, you stopped me from leaving right?"
>"Heheh, yeah I did." She giggles before descending back into tears
>Jesuz these little things could cry something fierce
"And please, call me Anon, all my friends do."
>You feel her muzzle move up and down your chest as she nods
>Voluntarily or not her body relaxes as you continue petting her
>You are petting your guard... Why are you petting your guard!?
>Shit just don't make sense here
>Her crying stops and the intervals between each sob grows longer
"Someone must be feeling better." you say happily, taking your hand from her back and vigorously rubbing her belly
>You could physically feel the mood change
>"Ah~ A-Anon! What are? Mmm~hah! Oh! What are you doing!?"
>Unsure of what she was going on about you just look confused as you continue onwards
>She had such a fluffy little stomach
"I'm just trying to make you feel better Cookies."
>"Myah~ But we've only just met! And you're a prisoner! It could never work."
"That's the stupidest thing I've heard. Friends need to support their friends."
>You comply with her previous request and stop rubbing, instead moving your hand behind her ears and scritching away
>"We're friends?"

>>28827317
"Yeah we are Cookies. After this I don't think we can't be."
>You'd been referring to the situation as a whole up until now
>She may have taken a different interpretation
>"A-after this? But, but."
>She leans back and looks you up and down, a strange appreciation flowing through her features turning into a lustful desire
>"After this we're more than friends Anon."
"Hmm?"
>She leans back and hugs herself against you
>"Thank you for supporting me. So many ponies are scared of me for being so tough, I don't get to be close too many ponies."
>Things were getting a little strange
>More than friends? What was she going on about?
>Before you know it she rolls out of your legs and onto her back, this time her hooves remained splayed, further exposing that belly under her little guard’s shirt
>You look on in bemusement as she stares at you expectantly
>You remain unmoving, not comprehending a thing
>As you watch a vibrant blush forms on her cheeks how that worked with fur you didn't know
>"What are you waiting for?"
>She looks away
>"S-stop staring! Aren't you going to do anything?"
"Uhhh, okay."
>She stays splayed out, awaiting you
>Your hand moves out pushes onto her stomach causing her to moan
>That was... the wrong reaction
>Feeling unsure about your actions you choose to push onwards and slip your hand up her shirt brushing against belly that remained hidden
>Her eyes close as quiet, now sensual, whimpers escape her lips
>When her hooves decent to slowly unbutton her uniform do you finally understand what was happening
>Moment of realisation passed you're left grinning
>Fuck leaving prison now
"Oh, I know what you want you naughty pony."

>>28827320
*descend

>You help her with the remaining buttons and yank the shirt away, tossing it onto the floor
>"Ah~ Careful inmate, we wouldn't want to extend your sentence for aggression now would we."
"Don't threaten me Cookies. I've already told you, in here it goes me, then you."
>Now that you knew what was going down you were taking control again
>She gulps
"O-okay Anon."
>Damn you'd broken this pone already
>You place both hands on her underside and run your fingers through her short coat hair, making her squirm and cry out
>Pleasingly you locate a small belly button among the fluff and slowly run your fingers around it
>That has the poor mare near thrashing around the bed
>You'd figured by her posture and previous reaction that for whatever reason the stomach was a huge erogenous zone and judging by her response it certainly was
"Getting off to belly rubs, now that's something new."
>Her eyes open to look at you
>"It's LEWD Anon!"
"You're certainly making it that."
>You lean down and kiss her belly button
>"Ah~ You're the lewd one! C-can you do that again?"
>You smooch her belly over and over, getting tremendous satisfaction from the way it wade her body wriggle
>You can only envision her reaction to the main event
>Seeing the heavily panting, sweaty mare writhing beneath you already had you beyond rock hard
>You'd never been fussed with what you fucked, if it was conscious and consenting, you went for it
>Moving back up you rest one hand back on her soft gut and slide the other down to her rump, squeezing it through her tight guard shorts, they were basically spats
>"Ah~ W-what are you doing with my butt?"
"What you want me to."
>Your hand moves under her rump and grabs on, pulling her crotch towards yours

>>28827325
>Feeling beyond horn by this stupidly adorable thing you push your groins together and grind back and forth, bodies naturally falling into a gentle thrusting rhythm as you rampantly dry humped
>Cookies can only scream out in ecstasy, her words falling away in a babble of whinnies and neighs and you grind against her sex
>If it weren't for the storm you'd have awoken everyone in the prison
>You slow your grinding, eventually stopping from concern
>She was too loud, were you hurting her?
"Are you alright?"
>She whimpers and wraps her hind legs around you, taking up your grinding motion
>"Ah~Anon. I-I feel weird. I’m on fire, it's too intense! You have to help me."
>She looks you deep in the eyes
>"Please don't stop."
>That's all the encouragement you needed
>Hands once again around her hips you push her against yourself and pound away
>You were likely being too rough with this little creature but you heard no complains
>Just endless groans and moans
>You'd been going at it for just a few minutes when she cries out again and tries to push you away
>"Ah! What's happening!?"
"Sorry did I hurt you?"
>"No! I... Anon I. It's so intense, I'm going to pee myself if you don't stop, or it feels like I am."
>You grin wickedly and start grinding again, this time much slower and harder
>You could feel her swollen lips spreading and parting around your cock as you pushed and thrusted up, despite both organs being hidden under clothing
>"Anon, no!"
"Shh, it's alright, let yourself go, follow the feeling. You want relief don't you?"
>"But, but hah~ AH~! ANON!"
>It would seem she didn't have a choice, as your continued stimulation pushes her over the edge

>>28827330
>Her small body jerked and bucked, her muscles clenching and spasming as she orgasmed
>You refused to stop grinding, grunting quietly as she scream, the sensation of her soft folds rubbing around your twitching shaft proving too delightful to stop
>Her cries, well, whinnies, easily outmatched the storm as she called out for more, little hips wriggling herself against you
>With a final cry and buck she relaxes and collapses in a sweaty tangle of limbs
>You feel a wetness rapidly running its way down your legs and look down to see the large wet patch on just about everything in a one foot radius from the action
>The room suddenly smelt of cookies and cream, leaving you both perplexed and hungry
>She was a squirter to be sure
>You flop down beside the panting mare and pull her against you
>"I'm sorry. I didn't mean it! Please don't hate me."
"It's only natural Cookies. I don't think I could ever hate you."
>You lay together a while before she starts to squirm once more
"Are you alright there?"
>"I'm sorry, it's still burning. C-can we keep going?"
"I was just getting started. But none of this high school dry humping shit."
>She blushes and hides her face away
>Not waiting for her to recover you get up and roll her onto her back, hurriedly searching for whatever kept her now wet pants on
"God damn it how do I get these off!?"
>"Oh, ah, there's a button under the tail."
"Right."
>You easily flip her over and lift her tail away, causing her to yelp
>The button was right there, just under the tail it wrapped around
>With her rear shoved in your face you could truly appreciate it
>Round, soft, well-toned. Most people would kill for an arse like that
>"Stop staring!"
>Right, you had a job to do
>You undo the button and painfully slowly pull them down, loving the anticipation and receiving a glorious sight
>She had a pair of pearl white panties on underneath, rather translucent after her recent gushing release, exposing her tender and swollen pussy

>>28827334
>You could make out slight movement under there, coming to realise she was winking at you
"You certainly are eager aren't you?"
>"S-shut up! Stop staring at me prisoner!"
"Hmm, no, you just look so... tasty and..."
>You push your nose against her mare parts and inhale deeply as she squeals in shock
"And you smell so good, just like cookies and cream."
>"Eh? You're weird Anon."
>A downright creep, but you didn't care
>You had to taste her
>Slipping off her panties you expose her tight ponut and dripping sex, eliciting a gasp that quickly turns to a squeak as you seal your lips around her small winking clit, softly suckling against her
>"Ah~ F-fuck! Sweat Celestia. Anon what are you do- Ah~! Oh by the goddesses."
>You greedily begin lapping at her, feeling her fat lips contort and move around your tongue as it moved up and down, loving her struggles to speak as you swiftly bring her to an ecstasy she'd never experienced before
"You taste so good."
>Like cookies and cream, who would have thunk it?
>She blushes and puts her hooves over her eyes
>"I'm not tasty! You're just a pervert!"
"Are you telling me to stop?"
>In response her rump is pushed into you face
>Guess not
>Her clit no longer winked at you, remaining out and desperate for your mouth, she looked near throbbing
>Diving right back in you lick and taste her most sensitive parts
>Overcome by the phenomenal flavour you can't help yourself, even as her body stiffens and she cries out, spraying you right in the face with the sweetest liquid you'd ever tasted
>Fuck! What was this mare’s diet to leave her so sweet?
>She must actually be made of sugar, spice and everything nice
>Hungrily you lap away at the mare's rear
"Anon please! It's too much! I'm too sensitive."
>But you can't stop, it was a trap! There was no escape for you
>Unable to pull yourself away her body continues to shake and twitch as she pleaded with you to stop
>You wouldn't, you couldn't

>>28827340
>Things only come to an end when you force another orgasm upon her, revelling in the spray of fluid, leaving her too weak to stand
>It took all your effort not to follow her decent and keep going. You could lose yourself in there
>She lays limply beneath you, struggling for breath
>Yeah, she needs a rest
>So for the second time you lay down beside her and she snuggles up against you
>"Take off your shirt."
>Off it flies
>She bites her lower lip at your rippling body
>"I'm so happy we arrested you."
>Lifting your head you plant a surprise kiss on her muzzle leaving an embarrassed blush on her face
>You'd think she'd be beyond embarrassment at this point
>She struggles to flop herself onto you, splaying her limbs over your body as she stretches out
>You find yourself already squeezing and massaging her arse
>"You can't help yourself can you? I've bedded a pervert."
"And you love it."
>"S-Shut up!"
>Your fingers drift down and slide over her labia
>Her eyes squeeze shut and she pushes her face into your chest, muffling her cries
>You slip a finger in her
>She was warm, slick and moist. You could feel her tugging against your finger
>But it soon proved too much for her as she pleads with you to stop again, still too sensitive to continue
>An evil idea comes over your horny mind
>You move your now slick finger up to the ring of muscle of her anus
>As they brush over her tail hole she stiffens, the tight ring clenching shut
>But as you swirl and massage your wet fingers around the edge you feel the muscles naturally relaxing
>"W-What are you doing anon? Why are you so obsessed with my butt? This feels weird."

>>28827347
"Do you want me to stop?"
>She shakes her head and hides it away yet again
>"I'm a dirty pony aren't I?" She mumbles
"You're a sexy pony."
>You prod your finger against her hole and push until you overcome the resistance, sliding into her velvety insides
>You wiggle your finger around feeling her insides and the sensation of her occasional involuntary squeeze
"Do you like it?"
>"Mmhmm." Comes an answer from beneath her hooves
>This prison was fantastic, this mare, amazing. Your life couldn't be better
"Good."
>Reaching out to your limits you grasp a bushel of grapes
>She still refused to look out from under her hooves so she'd no idea what you had in store
>You pull your finger from her insides and grab several grapes
>Each one promptly found itself safely nestled in her colon with a few moans and grunts as you push them slowly inside her, feeling her sphincter stretching open and squeezing shut as they popped in
>"Hah~ Heheh, you're lewd Anon." She giggles as the last small fruit disappears
"I'm not the one with grapes up my arse. Now give them back."
>"Wha-what?"
"You heard me, we can't leave those inside you, push them out."
>"But, I, it. Why did you do this to me!?"
>She hides her head away for the umpteenth time and whimpers as you feel the wet plop of the first grape landing on your stomach and rolling onto the bed
>She grunts and pushes out a stream of the ovaloid fruit
>"Is that all of them?"
>You gather them up and count them as they're tossed to the floor, except the last one, you were feeling a little hungry and horny as fuck, yet to have actually relieve yourself
>She'd watched you lustfully as you did it, drawing a perverse pleasure from watching
>"That was inside me Anon. Inside me..."
>”In my butt.” she whispers
>Her hoof descends between her legs, rubbing furiously at her mound, focussing on her lewd thoughts

>>28827363
"I'd say you're ready to go again. Good it's about time I got my rocks off."
>"Your rocks?"
>You don't bother answering, lifting the mare up and putting her down, hoof rubbing all the while
>Rolling over you loom above her
"You know what comes next right?"
>She glances down at the bulge of your pants, gulps and nods
"Good."
>Of all the clothes removed that night your pants fell away the fastest, leaving your fully engorged member throbbing above her
>Her cheeks were red as roses while she stared at your cock, too embarrassed to speak and too enraptured to look away
>"Meep."
>You lower yourself down and shuffle closer to her
>Removing her hoof you rest your member between her legs, lifting them up to rub yourself against her thighs
>As your cock slides forward she pokes at it with a hoof, a brief moment of curiosity overcoming her desires
>You pull back and she looks at you with disappointment so push forward and rest there, letting the curious pony play around
>"It's so hard, it looks a lot smoother than a normal stallion."
>She prods it again as you leak pre-cum
>She leans forward and licks the tip, sampling your own sexual fluids
>"Mmm, salty." she says before accepting the first few inches of your cock into her mouth, reciprocating your earlier favour
"Fuck I love you."
>She releases you with a *pweh* and a trail of spit
>Her cheeks were red as ever, but she wasn't letting her embarrassment get in the way of what she wanted
>You let her legs down and pull back, lining yourself up with her marehood
>You could roast a marshmallow with the warmth coming from her, god she could be in heat for all you know
>"I don't think that's going to fit."
"You'd be surprised. I bet you have more control down there than you think" You say, rubbing your cock against her pussy, running it up and down her lips
>The way they moulded around your glands left both you and Cookies groaning in mutual bliss
>It was time

>>28827372
>You push your fearsome manhood into her cunt only letting the tip dip in and out
>Each time you pull out it makes a moist popping sound, causing her to shy away
>So fucking adorable
>You would have to be slow, she was right, as wet and ready to go as she was the size difference between you would make it a tight fit, despite her excellent muscle control
>So you continue to push just your head in and out feeling her walls stretching out to accommodate your size
>Already she was tugging and pulling at you in an attempt to draw you in further
>But you pull out completely and push yourself against her now puffy red folds
>"Nyah~! How are you still going?"
"Because it's only been like a minute."
>"Exactly!"
>Was she making fun of you or something?
"I'm going to ignore that. Are you ready?"
>A curt nod later you've lined back up
>You slide in with barely any resistance
>First your head pushes through, garnering a wonderful gasp from Cookies
>Your shaft followed, much slower, making her writhe in pleasure as you stretched out her insides
>She was so warm
>At last you find your pelvis pushed against her own, erection buried to the balls, which gently sat against her buttocks
>Her walls contract and squeeze your member, desperately trying to milk you of your seed
"F-uck. Cookies you're good, and so soft."
>She smiles and blushes but it's broken by a series of moans as you slowly withdraw yourself, her snatch tightening painfully to prevent your escape
>"Ah. Celestia! Anon you feel wonderful. It's such an intense pressure."
>She press down on her lower torso, crying out in pleasure
>You could feel her insides squelching around you as her hoof moves back and forth
>Unable to pull yourself free you push forward, her marehood immediately loosening for your entry
"Fuck, you can do some magic shit down there."
>In response she produces the apple you'd previous stuffed in her mouth and fits it in your own
>"Shut up and fuck me prisoner."

>>28827381
>You've no choice but to follow an order like that
>You move your hands to her rump and lightly slap at them while slowly pulling out, being stopped and thrusting deeper inside her soft cunt
>Each time you slap her cheeks she lets out a pained whimper but when you ask if she wants you to stop she answers by putting your hand back on her rear
>So you go back to slapping her soft behind until it had gained a soft pink hue
>No longer willing to continue less you actually hurt her you begin brushing against her thighs, moving your hands down to her crotch, squishing and rubbing her pink labia, pushing in and out all the while
>Her spongy clit begins rapidly winking as she's overcome by pleasurable wails
>"Ah~ I'm c-cumming!"
>As she cries you push yourself in a far as she could handle, enjoying the tight squeezing of her pussy, and lean down to kiss her forehead, her crying dying down to whimpers
>"I love you Anon."
"Can you keep going? I'm almost finished over here."
>"Mmhmm." She answers dutifully
>"Just please hurry up I'm starting to feel sore."
>She hugs your cock tightly with her insides, smooth soft walls gently massaging you in a peristaltic motion
>You throbbed inside her as your pleasure rapidly intensifies
"Oh my sweet god, keep that up and I'll be done in no time."
>She grins
>"Good."
>As you thrust she matches your movement with her own hips, keeping you inside her as much as possible
>Her marehood winks joyfully at you and she triples her internal efforts, her sex ravenously tugging and rippling around you
>It had suddenly become all too much, your pleasure had spiked to pure ecstasy
>Your natural reflex was to pull out as tremendous release flowed through your body, leaving you beyond relaxed
>But Cookies refused your exit
"Gah! What are you doing?"
>"What I want prisoner."
>You hold yourself off as long as possible but you'd already lost control
>Slow rhythmic thrusts became quick jerky twitches

>>28827387
>Your cock throbs, glands expanding at the end of each sporadic thrust as you shoot load after load of cum into the mare
>Each spurt sent waves of orgasmic pleasure through you
>"Yes! Breed me, breed your mare Anon."
>Yes you fucking would!
>With a final and powerful thrust you empty the last of your balls as deep into her as possible
>Finally she releases you, letting you out with a wet squelch, a veritable river of semen running from her slit down her rounded butt cheeks and puffy anus, to drip and pool upon the bed
>So much cum... You can only imagine the flood you'd left in her womb
>She was obviously thinking the same thing as she rubs her stomach in tremendous satisfaction, looking over you lovingly
>Her hoof descends and wipes some of your leaking seed from her fur, happily licking it up and going back for more
>You nestle up to the mare who sleepily rolls onto you, resting a semen-saliva covered hoof on your pec
>Gross
>"We're more than friends Anon, we're a herd now, and forever."
>You had no idea what that meant but you were happy enough about it, so long as you could keep that ass your own
"Definitely."
>The two of you fall asleep in each other’s arms, the storm outside long since ended

You haven't fucked like that since grade school

>>28827389
>Cookies and Cream and Cream and Cream
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=norQuJfdDWU

>>28827389
good shit man

Repost because... Prison?
>28827124

>The Rookie looked around the darkened cooridors of the X-Pon base. She knew what she was about to do was wrong... so wrong, but she could not help herself. she wanted him- needed her. she had since the first time she had looked into his dark green eyes that he was her and she was hims.

>Sure, she had only managed to stay behind with him, after shooting herself in the hoof with her unicorn. So she lost a few inches of her right hoof- he was worth it. She heard him singing to her, faintly, beautifully.

>And now she was along with him the other X-Pon Agents out on assignment, the scientists and engineers sleeping off another hectic day. But he was awake and hungry- and he was all that could sate her hunger.

>She quietly opened the door, making sure the magic alarms were off, and the coast was clear. In front of her, with only a transparent wall, and a single door between them, was her belover. Anxiously, hands trembeling with excitement, She fumbled out the key needed to open the door, and heart racing, She slid the key into the lock.

>There his was, standing in front of her, his body firm, yet yielding to her hoofs. "I love you" She whispered, her voice barely breaking the silence of the room.

>She began to sensually massage his wet, gleaming pink head, his fingers whispering down her tight soft tuff. He made a fire burn inside her, a passion, a furious conflagration that only his touch, his taste could extinguish.

>In her hoof, her stunrod began to tremble, her eyes alight with lusty delight, she began to disrobe golden vest, small bright sparks filling the air, her breathing deep, and body ready

>She rut, her mouth sliding open, a soft moan escaping as his rod entered her. Friction and deft movements- they moved together, his five fingered hands around her thighs as he pushed the stunrod into h-

>"Moon!, You damn Xeno bucker!"

>*Huuf* *Huuf*

BAD END

>>28828117
X-com? Oh yeah.

>>28827389
Good shit man, glad to see propeller hasn't gotten you yet. Can we expect more of this story line?

>>28812142
>The Manticore about faces and knocks you into the air head over heels before you can react.
>With every turn you watched your opponent fly closer too you with his jaws wide open.
>You aren't going to be a snack today if you can help it!
>You steadied out and drove your heel into his forehead causing him to flinch and miss with his blind swing.
>You tuck and roll on your landing before being blindsided by Speedy.
>Speedy, that name works.
>Speedy slams you into the wall and drags you along the length of it, his paws are covering your arms so you cant get a good swing in.
>The stone cracks and crumbles against your head and back.
>A bar wraps round you as your tossed from the cage and onto the floor.
>Speedy bags his tail against the bars and...laughs at you? It's a strange beastly cackle but a laugh none the less.
>Now he fucked up.
>You spring to your feet and break into a full sprint.
>Speedy snorts and backs away from the bars, he spreads his wings and crouches low.
>You shoulder your way through the bars without slowing down and speedy flies to what he thinks is a save distance.
"Oh no you fucking don't!" you say as you lunge for him.
>Your fist connects with his jaw and sends him through the wall, not before grabbing you with his tail and taking you with him.
>A blast of cool air hits your face as your surrounded by the night's sky.
>It'd be nice to take in the scenery but you've got bigger problems to deal with, your buddy here is the only one that can fly after all.

>>28828984
You climb down speedy's tail with wind whipping past your ears.
'YOU HAVE WINGS DUMB ASS, FLY"
>You remain in free fall as speedy fails to stable out, the ground is not looking very soft tonight either. In anger you punch him in what ever part of his back you've latched onto
>Will. You. Just. Fucking. Fly!
>If you're going to die He's going to die violently.
>At that thought, you're both surrounded by a blue glow and and pulled upward at a gut wrenching speed.
>You and speedy are tossed back into the room and the hole in the stone wall closes soon after.
>Well that's new.
>You fail to stand back up and you're met with a searing pain across your back and a headache.
>You're adrenaline has definitely run out, but speedy's hasn't.
>He's shaking his head and getting his bearings.
>You'll mark this down as a draw.

>>28829083
Nicccce.

>>28829083
AdviceAnon from before - much better.

>>28807595
Bump?

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>"We gonna have sex tonight anon"

>>28811888
>Be Apple jack.
>Supper is tasty as always but you can't take a bite without getting this off your chest.
"What do you think of im' granny?"
>"Think of who child?"
>"Anon, the hummen, A.K.A. the Night Walker"
>"Well let's see, he's a hard worker! He was stackin those hay bales like it was goin' outta style. Unlike most youngin's nowadays', he's got some home trainin too.
>"Didn't you hear what he did to Celestia!?"
>"Ah asked him about it but he didn't give a straight answer'." Big Mac cuts in between plates of carrots.
>"I wouldn't like bopping that goodie two shoes one my self to be quite honest. Them taxes are multiplyin while that city get's brighter every year!"
>"But don't ya think he's dangerous, Granny? He put a new notch in the practice oak deeper than big macs.
>Big mac stares disapprovingly over his pile of carrots at AJ before stuffing his face again.
>"He aint' any more dangerous than the pies. They break rocks with their bare hooves for a livin'" Answers granny.
>You're still not convinced, but you'll take granny's judgment on the matter.
>"Besides, If he meant any harm he'd still be stompin' around that Forrest they got him from."
"Alright Granny, If you say so."
> Bone appetite.

>>28830720
Wow syntax and my name.
I stay fucking up.
If you're wondering where the pics are, my class is getting pretty hard.

>>28830720
>>28812142
>You open your eyes and see that your eyes are open.
>The magnets are messing with your metal detector and you have yet to readjust your moral fiber.
>Then you wake up. Your back hurts like hell so you must be Anon.
>You stare at the ceiling tiles wondering what the fuck that dream was about.
>After what seems like hours, nurse Redheart clippity clops in with her clip board.
>Maybe you've lost more blood than you thought.
>"Oh you're awake, and you had lost over half of your blood. Absolutely remarkable."
"You should see the other guy" You snidely retort.
>"Well I think you should lay off the playtime for a while, I can only heal an Alien so much.
"Yeah I think you're right, plus the two in there right now need to settle their differences.
>Spike may have been a bloody pulp when you say him, but those manticores can walk off entire limbs missing.
>That might be the repair magic at work however.
>The very same magic that doesn't see fit to lend you any help.
>You raise your hand to the tray to take your own temperature, that's when your shoulder hitches and the stabbing pain orders you to lower it again.
>"You mustn't move too much Anon! We cant give you any pain medicine remember?"
"Don't remind me."
>Oh you remember, the last time you were hear they offered you a horse tranquilizer and you were high for a week.
>You'll never be in that much pain.
>"I saw your MRI, what did they do to you, drag you through concrete?
"Just abOUT " you shrug and Immediately regret shrugging.
>"Looks like you found out your shoulder was dislocated the hard way. This new cat's got your number Anon.
>You take a careful look at yourself before shifting in your sheets.
>Better get as comfy as you can. You know they'll have to replace the bandages soon.
"Nah, he's just faster than the other's that's all. He'll get his, fist wave!"
>"You just said "fist wave" out loud"?
"I can't do it physically can I?"

>>28829997
Bump

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>>28826370
[Demonic writefag noises]

Sorry for no updates, been doing a thesis about cruices and contamination.
And next week I have a TOEFL, so I might write some updates so it help me study. Hehe, yeah.

Also I miiiiiiiight make another chapter cause chapter 8 is already 18k long
Spoilers: I could post a single chapter, aka 10-15k long in a single day
Maybe this friday instead of going to schoolz I'll write like a maniac from morning to night and see how much I write

In the meantime have the song I heard while writing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hji4gBuOvIQ

Maybe tomorrow I could continue that tiny one shot about Anon cop

early morning bump

>>28833522
Anon..don't..tease me.. but do slow.

This thread makes me want to sexual the pone more than usual.

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>>28832267
Mighty kekin kekl kekers

>>28835392
You still play that game?

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>>28836395
we all do

>>28836395
I never played that game. I just got my computer working recently

>>28836512
>>28836538
>2621 player
>Why live

>>28827104
Where are you?

>>28836512
I'd sick my dick in that.

>>28838359
Too bad no one can draw a shorty in a pirate outfit
A solo male shorty
Covered in cum
As he moans "Yar~"
While showing his booty

>>28839179
I want Shorty to dress up as a pirate for Anon.

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>>28827389
I wanna fuck Cookies n' Cream.

>>28837641
still slightly sick and spewing out my intestines
soon my wonderful little bastard, soon

>>28841011
Ahhh. you're gonna stick with us?

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>>28832267

>>28841011
I can't even remember what your story was...

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>>28836512
Wand, do you also want to fuck Shorty's tight boi pussy?

Worried bump. Where are the writefags?

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>>28827340
>Sweat Celestia

>>28844334
Is that even a question
Too bad I don't have shekels for a saucy pic of Short Fuse, but we have rat's draw at least

>>28845105
Did Rat draw a lewd of Shorty?

>>28839179
>booty
So a butt-pirate that's incarcerated on a boat prison, and spends all his time in the brig except when taken out on work detail to swab the poop deck?

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Cause I'm feeling nice. Enjoy.

>>28847136
Neat.

>>28832267
"Anyway, how bad did he scratch me?"
>"We put in 23 stitches"
"Is that a lot?"
>"Considering your size, no. The cuts are deepest on your shoulder blades, so those needed to be stitched the most.
>She sits on rolling stool next to you and shows you the diagram. It's a pretty accurate outline of you.
>"On top of that, we had to treat the bruises on you back and shoulders, and pop your left one back into place"
>Speedy may have one this round, but you'll be ready for him when you get out.
"So how long am I out?"
>"For the next 4-6 weeks you shouldn't lift anything over 5 lbs with your right arm or walk long distances without stopping."
>Lame.
>"You also need to wash with towel instead of standing under the shower, and make sure to dab your stitches dry, not wipe them."
>This is by far the worst loss you've ever had.
"So are their any bones fractured?"
>"Surprisingly no, but you're still going to have to wear a sling for that arm. Since your joints are so different than ours, Well just have to do routine checkups to see how you heel."
"Do you have any idea how long it'll take?"
>"Hmm, a Minotaur would heal in about 8 weeks, but they wouldn't tell you if they were still in pain."
>That's nice to hear but you're no Minotaur, it'll probably take you twice as long.
>That means no more horse money from the apple farm. You should still visit though, if only to tell them you got fucked up and cant help them.
>"This may be a good time to pick up other hobbies Anon."
"I don't have much of a choice do I?"

>>28847757
Good.
>stuck on hospital because wifi is shit.

>>28844831
One wrong character out of 16k isnt bad tho

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>>28847757
I like your style.

WHERE'S RAT!!!

WHERE THE FUCK IS ZEW?!?!

WHERE'S MY CAR?

>>28849632
>>28850521
>>28850436

I'll be streaming the next draw, on steam.
himbly_dimbly

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>>28845853
https://derpibooru.org/1277875

>>28851753
What's with the pizza?

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here is draw.

>>28828984

I'll sort out the order in the pastebin

>>28852103
Is so shorty doesnt look all sad
Pizza makes everyone happy

>>28852205
that scare me.

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>>28850436
I've been busy eating ass. I love to eat ass, can't help myself.

>>28852943
So...is there a pizza version?

Bampu

>>28851753
God, I live this edit so fucking much. You have no idea.

>>28854855
Me too. i was the one make 4 thread. but this one not me.

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>>28854855
WHERE'S YOUR STORY ASSHOLE!

>>28856492
Did it live?

>>28857495
I DON'T KNOW; I JUST WANT RAT TO WRITE SOMETHING!!!

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>>28856492
>>28858123
S-sorry. N-no problem here masa. I's a writin'.

>>28858123
i hate rat. fucking traitorus scum.

Maybe we could establish a writefag chain gang.

>>28807595
its so weird to see my art used as OP images. Especially my early work.

>>28827334
Squirting is disgusting. It is literally piss. The muscle contractions force the piss out. It's gross as fuck.

>>28827347
>revelling in being sprayed in the face by urine
Fucking disgusting

>>28832267
Pastebin?

>>28859612
Here ya go family
http://pastebin.com/cNpYZnpr

>>28858274
YOU'D BETTER HURRY UP; MY DAD WORKS FOR MICROSOFT AND HE'LL BAN YOU FROM THE INTERNET!!!

>>28807595

>>28859601
>>28859578
Grow up you absolute children.

>>28807595

>>28860840
Growing up involves enjoying piss fetishes?

I think I'll remain as I am, thanks.

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>>28859578
>>28859601

>>28859578
>>28859601
Now thats some hardcore samefagging.

>Hillary Clinton finally gets convicted for everything from fraud to treason
>gets the death penalty
>at the last moment makes a break for it, jumps into Soros' demon-summoning portal to escape
>ends up in Equestria, and she's a pony now
>continues being a horrible person
>gets put in jail again

It's been over five days...

>>28864972
I think its cuz the thread is shit and the one overplayed idea of cuddles being lewd has run dry from use.

Mare guard thread just took your place famalamas.

Do writefags only talk to us if we mention their name?

>>28866713
Yeah. How else do we know who yall are talking to?

>>28866713
No they are like demons you must draw a circle out of salt and sacrifice a chicken to commune with them

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Summoning Wand again.

boop

>>28867063
I resent that.

Let it die
let it die
let it shrivel up and die

>>28869180
Then why bump?

I have kind of an update, but desu this place is so dead and stagnant I'm quite happy letting it die.

>>28870858
The reason this place is so "dead and stagnant" is because no one (except slamnonymous a few days ago) has written anything in A WHOLE FUCKING WEEK WHAT HAVE YOU FAGGOTS BEEN DOING ALL THIS TIME?!?!?!

>>28870858
I only keep coming here because I like your gay story

>>28871085
More or less watching the world burn feel the edge on that one kiddies .
Went out drinking with a friend, not much else. Even if I managed the effort to get back into consistent posting it would still just be me and occasionally a few of the other writers. It's a cunt of a thing being one of the soul supports of a thread. Why do you think these things die? No new content creators arrive, leaving most of the burden on those few still here and that sure as hell isn't great motivation. That's why I've always supported merging with /AiE/. It takes away that pressure because I know other people will keep you saps entertained while I fuck about with life. That way writing's less of a chore and becomes more of a leisure activity again.
Anyway why don't you write something?

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Hey. It's me. Pretty sure I'm dieing.

>be anonymous.
>you were thrown in prison
>all because of some bullshit cold you caught.
>pones were a scared because you might murderalize them, being as diseased as you are.
>"cough hack wheeze"
"THE HORROR, THE HORROR!"
>another Pone just died
>who knew the common cold was murder to horses.
>actually I might die myself.
>stupid overly powerful immune system.
>when it fails, I get hit harder than most people

>>28871159
AIE needs the green as much as we do, I say we merge too, I just might start posting there.

>>28871159
>>28871728
I'll go if you guys do. Sorry about not writing much lately. Just this one part I've been real indecisive about. I have a lot after it planned, and a lot written even though.

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Second to apologize
I have a TOEFL this friday and I have to study, writing stories and update doesn't count that much and I have to read stuff
I'm kinda nervous but I know I'll pass it and then write bunch of updates until my story is over which could be from this month until my birthday in december along with Zew's bitrhday

Have a cheerilee as an apologize

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Let me spice up things, shall we?
Things coming from the next updates

>Identity of The Boss
>Nightly Veil and terrorists next attack on the prison
>Sleepover of a warden and a nurse
>Background story of Red and Blue Candle
>Probably adding Princess Luna or Shining Armor as backup for the prison of Saddle Arabia
>Ghost blowjob

Also the other story I'm writing at Daddonequus has some easter eggs and I'll be posting there something about prison related with Red and Blue Candle
Stay tuned for more!
I know I'm a shitty writefag that wants his other story to be noticed too and i'm sorry for it

>>28872064
I have a birthday?

>>28872134
When you say "ghost blowjob" do you mean Red giving Blue a blowjob?

>>28872064
Holy fuck, do we all have birthdays in December?

honestly we should probably world build instead
more on how pony prisons operate and what not

Go on

Reminder: Wand has a folder on his computer named "traps".

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>>28874738
Are there prison gangs?

Are prison tattoos a thing?

Do they also have their own "currencies" like our prisons do (food for example).

How are new prisoners usually treated?

Are some prisons more strict than others?

How often do prisoners end up returning to prison?

Are the prisons of each species drastically different?

Is racism (speciesism?) an issue for prisons?

When was the Emergency Use Churro invented and why?

>>28876197
>Do they also have their own "currencies" like our prisons do (food for example).
pudding cup's have been used as currency, i think

>>28876197
All right listen up, I'm only saying this once.
This is for all you new people, so pay attention!

Pony prison might sound like some silly happy fun time, but I assure you it's not.
You've got multiple prison gangs like the 1844's
hardcore Luna supporters who are named after the famous 18 words of Princess Luna's rebellion, "I will ensure the night lasts forever so that all ponies will see the glory of my moon", and the last two digits of the year Luna rebelled against Princess Celestia.

For currency around here, pudding, candy cigarettes and lolipops are the go to. Pudding because it's only given to good ponies who do good things, which is very uncommon amongst the hardened criminals of pony prison. Candy cigarettes because they are contraband and make you look cooler. Lolipops because those are only given to ponies that have to go to the nurse, so ponies with a lot of lolipops or lolipop sticks are usually the hardest of the hard, able to take a combat pillow to the face without crying in pain.

New prisoners can expect to either join a herd for safety as soon as possible for nightly forced cuddles until a new pony comes along, or they are forced into a herd for forced cuddles.

The happier the prison name sounds the more strict the place is, I heard Sunny Days Rehabilitation center actually LOCKS the doors on their inmates.

1/?

>>28876197
Prisoner return rate is usually low depending on how harsh the punishment is, typically the less time spent in pony prison the more likely that pony is to return, but sometimes even a day is enough to get a pony to change their ways.

The prisons for each species don't even exist, I mean have you seen the griffon lands? Literally Mexico 2.0, not enough resources to even make a prison. Instead they just send them to equestria and let them get into trouble here, cause when grffonstone sends us their people, they aren't sending their best, nothing but criminals and serial cuddlers.

Yes speciesism is sometimes a problem especially against the yaks and the griffons. The yaks because you can't trust them to not threaten war on your to get their way, and the griffons because they are almost always criminals and meat eaters.

The emergency churro was invented in secret by the Celestial Intelligence Agency as a changeling interrogation device and eventually made it's way into prisons across equestria.

>>28811029
>ayylien
Kek

>>28872134
I'm in it for the ghost blow job

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>>28873186
I promised back in like, february or something that I would make a green of red giving a ghost blowjob to Anon.
But anything can happen

>>28873764
Only the best have their birthdays at december!

>>28876106
Yes

>>28876197
>Prison tattoos
Those that last a day and are removed by water and soap.

>Are the prisons of each species drastically different?
My headcanon is that breezies prisons are the most strict, having the highest amount of breezies breaking the rules of their dimension, therefore getting in prison for a while, even an entire week.
Now I would like to write an scenario but the breezie language is kinda away from me.
Pic related shall do, the call of the male breezies in every winter.

emergency bump

>>28877171
It lovely.

>>28877171
What kind of tattoos would that have in Equestrian prisons? Would they be smuggled in or would they be made inside?>>28877171

>>28880753
Butterflies, cookies, that sort of thing. They make them during Arts & Crafts.

where rat. it been forever since last update and im getting pissed.

>>28881076
Where is rat's pastebin? It doesn't work.

>>28881610
http://pastebin.com/u/Rat
His story link is attached to this name now. For a second there I thought he got his account suspended or something.

>>28881054
But are they against the rules?

>>28876374
Do the 1844's do anything besides like Princess Luna more than Progress Celestia? Are they known for violence? Do they exist outside of prison?

>>28882425
Of course. Since when are you allowed to draw on yourself? But once the sharpie's on, all they can do is wait for it to fade.

>>28882913
So, what kinds of tattoos do the gangs have?

>>28884111
that sliver of popcorn kernel that get's stuck in your teeth.

>>28807595

>>28876374
If candy cigarettes exist does that mean that regular cigarettes also exist in Equestria?

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>>28886776
Poner society used to be like human society til Princess Celestia took over and started a massive social over haul. Most politicians only have at most a decade to get their policies to work, she's had over a thousand years. So the concept of things the cigarettes ect might remane but the identity of the thing has changed.

>>28887616
Then Anon showed up and cranked the rating up to PG-13.

>>28887494

>>28887704
>A bunch of ponies in Equestria, young and old, criminals and law abiding citizens, want to emulate Anon

>They get arrested a lot

>They are dubbed "Anonists"

>They're kind of like the illegalists in our world but a lot less dangerous

>They are feared for they're impulsive behavior, tendency to make others cry, and sometimes even a love for belly rubs.

>>28876445
>The emergency churro was invented in secret by the Celestial Intelligence Agency as a changeling interrogation device

That's so...evil! What other secrets had the government kept secret from it's citizens?

>>28811444
update your pastebin jesus.

>>28885022
the fly in your soup, the pebble in your shoe, that banana peel on a slippery floor
those kind of things

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>>28891083
I do it all because I'm.....

>>28811638
Hey, thread? Question for you. Why is Zew such a huge retard that he doesn't understand that black text belongs to the speech of the person whose perspective the story is focused on? This is, like, the first thing you learn when you start writing in greentext format, but this guy's somehow (SOMEHOW) fucked it up.

>>28891764
Zew is high
Zew has his own way to write
It is too late
1 year and a half year late

>>28891764
He started his story that way. By the time anyone had pointed it out to him it was to late to change.

>>28892152
>>28892593
That's quitter talk. He could literally do it right now.

>>28892730
That would make all the dialogue in his story inconsistent, and besides, there's no set rule that says all text that isn't the main character's speech needs to be greentext.

>>28889517
Um...

On a different note, where the fucking fuck is rat ? Im pretty sure that fucking faggot left us for another general. fuck im so mad right now. thread is dying and no one fucking cares.

bemp

>>28893384
Does my idea sound good?

>>28807595
>>28891111

>>28894242
If your up for writing it go ahead, could be funny if done right

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Picture bump. Because I have literally 0 inspiration

>>28882855
1844's are perhaps one of the most violent prison gangs, activities include but are not limited to: forced cuddles, crashing club events, extorting pudding cups, and smuggling contraband. The majority of members are bat ponies, pegasi, and some unicorns

Rival gang is La Graza, a deeply religious earth pony/donkey supremacist group that originated in Mexicolt. They worship Princess Celestia as the most holy virgin mother of all equinity. Their criminal activities include illegal salt candy making (mostly blue rock salt candy), mule smuggling, and voting fraud

>>28890240
there are many other government secrets fellow pony, but I can't say here on 4pone while on an unsecured network. I'll try and get some documents uploaded later, I've got enough problems from the ponice already.

>>28895924
>voting fraud
Like what? Making sure they always play with the parachute when the prisoners get to vote on a game?

>>28896002
no they are transported by carts to neighboring towns/cities to vote in elections for politicians who will then set up jobs for La Graza members in businesses like construction so that they can set up smuggling operations, make a profit off their illegal salt candy then give a cut of the profits to the politicians

>>28896119
In a rather insidious twist, many judges, politicians, and even ponice are members of La Graza. The public at large is only recently learning about how deeply rooted La Graza is thanks to a La Graza city judge involved in a lawsuit scandal against Governor Elect Chief Golden Hair of Manehattan

>>28896119
>>28896150

This is awesome, please continue.

>>28896170
*puffs candy cigarette*
All right foals, buckle up cause this is going to be a bumpy ride
Now a lot of this compiled information is from my own experiences in Prison as well as my time as a member of La Graza. The rest is the result of investigative journalism that I've taken up since I gave up on crime.

Yes, that's right, I did just say I was a former member of La Graza. To start with this story, I'd have to go back a bit, quite a bit, to the days just after with war with Vietkong and their jungle gorilla attack force.

>>28896235
It was 1674 Celestial Calendar Year when I arrived back from the war, and those days were Tartarus itself. We returning veterans were spat on for fighting in an unpopular war that resulted in many stallions getting taken into gorilla jungle camps and forcibly cuddled. Most of the population saw us as soldiers who forcibly cuddled and pillow fought with gorillas young and old, so many of us couldn't go back into the work force, and Celestia was very busy dealing with the new Yakistan crisis. It was so bad, many veterans like myself resorted to stealing to survive. Eventually I was caught and thrown in prison. It was there that I had my first run in with members of La Graza

>>28896263
Now the thing is, back then, prison was much harsher than it was now, you had to be tougher than the pony in front of you, quicker than the pony behind you, and stronger than the ponies on the side of you. If you weren't, you could expect plenty of forced cuddles, a soft pillow to the head, and then if you were lucky you'd get passed to the prison guards for more forced cuddling.

Having comeback from the war I was plenty strong, fast and tough. Being a dual member of the Celestial Intelligence Agency and the Celestial Army as well as a black pajama operator tends to make such hard stallions.

Anyways, even though I was individually strong, tough and faster than most, I couldn't fight to keep my cuddle purity every day of the 5 month sentence I had been handed. And yes I said 5 months, back then prison sentences were much longer than they have now.

As I was saying I couldn't keep pillow fighting every day because eventually I'd lose. That's when the local chapter of La Graza approached me

>>28896309
La Graza back then was just making a name for itself in the local prisons. Protection, a herd that always had your back, even after you got out of prison, and access to a network of fellow members willing to help you out. For a former vet like me, it was like I was back in the celestial army, only with more criminal activities. Of course you also had to be either an earth pony or a donkey. I grew up on the Southern Friendship Plains so 3 guesses as to what type of pony I was, and the first two don't count.

At first it started with simple things. Things like push laundry load 3 into the processed and cleaned laundry piles, or whistle if you saw a guard approaching at night. Eventually I was so helpful and by that point loyal to La Graza they banded together and all wrote a letter of good behavior to the Warden who took it to a local judge who let me out early.

The next day the judge received a sack of bits for his troubles.

that's it for now you little bastards, writing this shit takes a fuck load out of me

Comments, reviews, whatever appreciated, but don't let it get to your heads, I'm not writing because I like writing for you little bastards or anything.

If I can I'll try and post more later tonight or tomorrow.

>>28896414
Well thank you for helping keep the thread alive, we will wait and hope for more.

late night bump

stay alive bump

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Less terrible bump.

>>28898944
Luckily, she only has to spend two days there.

>>28896414
Thanks for the green.

Were you writing another story already? I can't remember.

Do you have a pastebin?

>>28899980
no pastebin, and yes I was writing another story, I'll probably get back to that one later

>>28898213

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ATTEMPTING TO SUMMON WAND AGAIN!!!

Rat is gone...

crosspostan technically relevant thing
>Day shinty-six in Equestria.
>Be Anon.
>Today is Tuesday.
>Prince Shining Armor is here to arrest you for breaking the law.
>"You are under arrest."
>He puts hoof cuffs on you.
>They fall off because you do not have hooves.
>Which is why he's arresting you to begin with.
>"Oh right."
>"I'll get them."
>His partner Princess Cadence leaves to get the handcuffs from their cruiser.
>"Don't try anything you criminal scum."
"This is totally gay."
>Cadence returns to hear this.
>"You are going to pony prison for your crimes."
"Gaaaaaay."
>They take you outside and put you in their chariot cruiser.
>They then fly you to pony jail.
>A pony comes out and takes you into the jail.
>You are locked in a cell and it's super lame.
>A while later Twilight's Mom comes and takes you back to Ponyville.
>Twilight is mad when you see her.
>"Stop committing crimes Anon."
"Pony laws are stupid. I'm a human, we don't have hooves. It's not possible for me to follow the law."
>"I can think of a way you can."
"What?"
>"You could have my hoof, in marriage."
"Did you arrange this all just to use that pickup line?"
>Twilight looks down in embarrassment.
>"Yes"
>"So will you marry me? We could be so happy together."
"Goddamnit Twilight, do you really expect me to make such a big decision without putting any thought into it?"
>"Um..."
"Twilight, we aren't anywhere near the point where marriage would be on the table. We aren't even dating or anything."
>Twilight's mom breaks in
>"If that's the problem, would you try giving my daughter a chance and go on a date with her?"
"If you can stop all these convoluted schemes I'll have lunch with you sometime, Twilight. We can see where it goes from there"

>>28904634
At least have the common courtesy to stick it in her, Anon.

>>28904634
Keep going.

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>>28902534
Tibia has double exp a double exp weekend and I can't be stopped

>>28904634
>shinty-six
From the popular phrase "I've only have shinty-six days left to live".

Now that i'm writing the update, I'm gonna create a new chapter cause chapter 8 is 18k long already.
I really need to see how much words to write...

>>28906787
I can't wait.

I mean that literally; if I have to wait another 2 days I might kill myself.

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>>28907979
How about 2 weeks

donut die

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>>28908785
Do you think you're funny or something?

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>>28910849
Just a little

>>28912395
I swear I'm going to fucking deport you so hard you'll end up in spain.

>>28877171
What's in your traps folder?

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>>28912974
But i'm in México AND I have a passport

>>28914163
All kind of traps
Trap music, picture of traps like bear traps, the usual stuff

Also... I did get too much into Tibia, maybe I'll update tomorrow morning
You guys okay with 4k tomorrow?

>>28914920
The joke was that you're already in Mexico but I'm going to deport you SO HARD that you'll end up in Spain. It's a history joke.

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>>28915606
I'm slow at getting things sometimes

Goddamit!
christmas time!

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>>28916818
it's not even tanksgiving, how can it be christmas time?
more writing soon

>>28807595

>>28917985
Goddamit. Fine!
>Christmas time~
>Murica break down the door
>Foot in my mouth
>Start bitch slap me and force me write more story
>tfw i want christmas

Hallelujah!

>>28917583
>28827330

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>>28914920
Do you like traps while at the same time not being gay?

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>>28922402
Liking traps is gay
But some are just too cute.
Is not the idea that a male is wearing a dress that makes it cute, but the fact that he looks way better than females will.

<Previously, on ‘Anon in Saddle Arabia’s prison’!

>A boss… a kidnap of a colt, the box, the edgy shadow pony…
>Something big is happening in this desert… and you need to solve this mystery

>”Hello Jenny!” A voice came from behind the giraffe
>Standing behind her was Yarn Feather with a happy expression
>”Cookies?” The Pegasus simply asked

“Goodbye… Pancho”
>”See you… space… monkey….”
>Your buddy, friend, pal and amigo Pancho, died.

>”All we need to do is see which pony had this… signature… hmm.” He examines the signature from very close. “This signature is… obviously not from a pony, or maybe a pony with hoof problems.”


Be Yarn Feather
>No, wait wait wait. Wrong name!
<Are we seriously messing with the lines this early!?
>Hush silly voice in my head!
Be Musul Mare
>YAYA! Much better!
>Be in your cell along with Codename Wing and Rock
>You have both spies taking a glass of milk with extra milk in their glasses. Yes, /extra/ milk. You can’t have enough milk in your glass of milk
>For some reason they don’t want cookies, must be because they could think you want to mindwash them. But nah, they aren’t so worth a cookie
>You are so ready to tell the news about the box and how they are useless and worthless little ponies right now! That they could get fired and probably The Boss could and /will/ punish them for this!
>Can’t believe all you had to do is enter the cell of Anon and just take the box and quickly play with it before destroying it piece by piece!
>Although you aren’t sure why she was looking around the ceiling, as if she saw something flying around. But gosh, that cell was really warm… was it getting hot or was it just you?
>You place your butt on the chair next to them and stare at them for a bit while, waiting for them to ask you why the glare
>…They don’t ask
>Come on! Do it you silly willies!

>>28922892

>”Uh… Yarn?” Rock starts the conversation
“MUSUL! MUSUL MARE!” You correct the Pegasus spy
>”Yeah… is hard to tell the difference but, well I was going to ask…”
>Yes! He’s going to ask about why you are staring at them! And then you’ll tell the BIG news!
>You can’t wait to see their reactions!
“Yes, Codename Rock?” You smile widely and wait
>”Can I have more milk? The milk in my glass doesn’t have enough extra milk”
>Oh for Tartarus sakes!
“Sure, let me get it very quick.” You clear your throat before tenderly calling the cat of Yarn Feather. “LUCIFER! OHHHHH LUCIFER!”
>The cat quickly jumps into the table and even puts his paw on his forehead as a soldier would reply
“You. Get the milk with extra milk from the fridge.” You point at the fridge that was mere inches near the table
>Lucifer nods and jumps from the table… and slams his face on the floor. Weren’t cats supposed to get in four legs or something…. Eh whatever, cats are not your thing. That’s for Yarn to worry about
>With the cat going for the milk, you stare again at them but this time you don’t wait for a question. You straight yell at them
“CODENAME ROCK AND WING!”
>”Y-YES MA’AM!” Both spies quickly stand up and salute at the same time, same way as the cat, hoof to the forehead
>Oh yes, here come the news!
“I have news for you two…” You glare at them with a creepy expression in your face, making them worry as you silently wait for some good drama effects. They start sweating and you can sense the fear on one of the ponies… must be the Pegasus. “Well, as you two know… the box-“
>Suddenly from the saddlebag that was on the table, static sounds. Must be a radio call from somepony from the terrorists… maybe is the news of that kid they captured. Nightly something, was it? You have memories from Yarn Feather that, that kid was just silent and serious

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>>28922895

>>28922895

>Yeah, he’ll do well if he’s already mindwashed as Yarn is.
>Is funny how a mindwash cookie works
>The effects of a good cookie can be fought and the original host can talk with the guest, but over time… the guest will always win
>Isn’t that right, Yarn?
>Of course she can’t talk; it’s been a long time since she got to speak as you were in control of her body. Tricking her into letting you have the control sometimes was easy, so easy. That warden really is friend of Yarn, and it wasn’t so hard to threat her into telling the warden Yarn was part of the terrorists
>It only takes a cookie…
>Oh gosh your internal thoughts got the best of you that you almost forgot your call. Hmm, AYAYA, time to answer it
>You search for the radio and quickly turn it on, grabbing it and bringing it to your ear level, you start hearing a female voice in the radio
“Ya, Musul Mare here” You push the button of the radio so your message goes to the other radio or station
>”I left the oven on… Go to the library, secure a book of hoofprints and take the witnesses out and blame the hueman for it.”
>That voice… it was The Boss in the radio
>Witnesses? Witnesses…
>Wait, hoofprints? Why would she-
>…
>Oh golly, you left the oven on!
>Maintain the calm; she doesn’t need to hear you like this
“Roger, I’ll do it as soon as possible”
>”Not soon, now.” The radio stops and all that’s heard is the static. You put the radio on the table and place a hoof on your forehead, rubbing your temples
>…This is bad, if she wanted this now she must mean serious business…
>You look at the two ponies that still were waiting your bad news
“Okay you two.” You take a sigh of defeat; you really wanted to ruin their days. “Change of plans. You two are going to the library of the prison and I want you to take a book of hoofprints. Burn it or rip the pages off, is important that that book isn’t find”

>>28922903

>They both nod without asking questions, good… very good
“And you two must go in this precise moment, this mission is more important than the box. Forget the box, focus this book. You two NEED to get that book. Is an order from The Boss.” You open your saddlebag and get a pair of cookies. “These two cookies will set to sleep anypony that eats it, use them wisely”
>Codename Wings picks one and Codename Rock picks the other one, both saving them in their prison uniforms pockets
>But before they leave…
“And I don’t want witnesses. Probably Anon is in the move and he could be clever enough to know about this b-“ You almost spilled some beans over there. “Forget that, just get the book. You two have one mission and The Boss is counting on you two”
>”Yes, ma’am!” Both ponies nod a gesture and leave the cell
>Lucifer gets back to the table and gets two glasses of milk on the table and looks at you with a salute, same as the other one
>From rage in your veins, you throw the table along anything on it, even the cat. You were mad, angry…
“ADD THE SIGNATURE TO THE NOTE, BOSS! IT’LL MAKE HIM SURE TO NOT STICK HIS NOSE IN OTHER PONIES BUSINESS! IS A GREAT IDEA!” You kick a bottle that was on the floor, hitting a cat in the process. “AAAAAAAGH! This must be fault of Yarn Feather! It must be! Dumb, dumb pony! If Anonymous find who’s the hoof signature from… she is going to… blame me…”
>…
“Agh… okay, relax… relax. Everything will go just fine; we got the crystal and even a colt as hostage. I’m just going to call the terrorists and see what they’re up to…”


This is for this night, forgot to update yesterday cause I really was playing Tibia too much.

Also a reminder that Blue and Red emotions change the ambient of the room, if they are sad the room gets chill and so...

I'll try to get another 1k tomorrow!

>>28922908
You're awesome writer among of us

>>28922892
Oh my god it's been so long thank you.

>>28807595

>>28922908
You're probably the only one in the thread who's not completely useless. Thanks.

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>>28924961

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>>28924961
I beg to differ.
Zew does a good work writing, and he even does it while high!
Rat is a drawfag, what more you want? He must be lazy but he can't get more lazy than I am.
Replacement Green has some issues RL but I bet he'll be back to writing something.
OldMan gets his time to draw something /and/ write in the same day.
Durnk is drunk.
And me? I'm lazy. I could write 15k words in one day, but I'm really, really lazy.
Well despite doing sometimes that thesis and finally doing the TOEFL past friday, I think I'll come back to writing the way I need to.

>>28922993
>>28923798
Thanks Anons, appreciated.

I'm creating the new pastebin chapter before I write the update of today.
Also I got university today so the green comes in the night.
No feeling like playing Tibia so don't worry

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>>28925959
>S-senpai talk to me

>>28925959
Last I saw Zew he was posting in /aie/.
>traitor.gif

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Pastebin for new chapter
http://pastebin.com/cPezbUZh
Starting to write now

>>28922908

Be Light Cloud
>Be talking with Water Fall, or as he likes to call himself, Page 9
>You two are sharing a friendly chat in the watchtower of the prison, since you are here the griffon that was guarding the skies and around is taking a well deserved break
>You find it cute that Water Fall decides to stay hidden in your long mane as you two talk whatever comes to mind as time passes. Maybe is his habit; you had to remove your helmet as to let him stay there for a while… you really didn’t mind! It feels as if he’s giving you a head massage!
>Good thing his east wing of the prison was guarded thanks to the friendly minotaur brothers. Is amazing how minotaurs can be so protective over their places, their energies are so wonderful that it makes you jelly! You would love to guard not only one spot in the same day!
>Hehe, maybe with time you’ll get more stamina for multiple jobs! Sky’s the limit as grandma Blur always says!
>”Is so fantastiskt that a pony like you got the opportunity to be a royal guard and work for Celestia!” He sighs slightly. “Too bad we breezies are so tiny that we can’t get the opportunity to do something for her, like defend her. I bet any kinds of dangers happen often around her.” His tone could be heard as a bit down, a bit of sadness, maybe? Or jealousness? Hmm…
>Well, only crazy dangers that recently happened were the changelings attack and that draconequus turning Cloudsdale into a big cotton candy colored purple… that was some sticky situation back in the days, ah… such a naughty creature
>But back at the topic! You shouldn’t see your new friend so sad about something he hasn’t tried yet!

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>>28927919
I gonna need coffee for this.

>>28928591

“Aww… don’t be like that! Sky’s the limit, Water Fall! Look at me, an earth pony that is guard of Cloudsdale /and/ royal guard of Celestia! I have among the top ranks in the team and my family is proud of me!” You stare at the sun for a while; it had some clouds around it, making you remember of so many good memories. “When I was a filly I wanted to fly like the rest of my friends… and Celestia made my dream come true.” You were starting to get a bit nostalgic, some tears getting in your eyes. “If I could accomplish this, I don’t see why not you couldn’t! Just try!”
>Well, for a breezie maybe he couldn’t get something about protection… but he’s so tiny that most ponies couldn’t see him and he could spy or something. Right? Yeah… that could work. If you were Celestia you would think of that
>Or maybe his special talent would-
>…Wait, Breezies don’t have cutie marks… eeeeh, maybe he’s good in something!
“And look at you. Page 9? You said that’s among the highest of ranks in Clover prison! We are so similar both…” Well, except for body size. “Just think about it!”
>”Tack… Light Cloud.” You felt as if your mane was being nuzzled, maybe he decided to lie down in there. “You really are a gott pony… maybe with time I can accomplish that… and if not, well, I still have my rank!”
“That’s right Water Fall!” You slightly nod. “And you have me and your friends here in the Saddle Arabia’s prison! Everypony is here to support you!”
>You keep staring at the sky with dreamy eyes on it. You don’t know if Water Fall was doing the same, but this moment between him and you are to remember
>The solid determination of a breezie to accomplish a goal and the unstopped dream of an earth pony to fly…
“Did you know something, Water Fall?”
>You keep staring at the sky
>”…Ja? Light Cloud?” He takes another slowly sigh as he nuzzles on your mane

>>28928683

>Your eyes start to water a bit…
>YOU WERE STARING AT THE SUN FOR TOO MUCH
“Aaaah! My eyes!” You close them and place your hooves near your eyes. “Why, Celestia, why! Why did you make the sun so glorious that it starts to blaze into my very soul! AAAH!” You fall back, landing on a pillow that was on the floor.
>Okay on second thought, you shouldn’t stare at the sun for too long
>You bit your lower lip to try to hold the pain in your eyes
“Mmnn~”
>”Light Cloud, my karlek… you okay?”
>You might be right but your pride isn’t… that was so embarrassing… that it almost turns you on
>The mere feeling of somepony watching you as you struggle to stop the pain… your pride being trampled… anypony laughing at you… unf
>aswdaggh
>This secret desire about your liking of pain… needs to stop
>But not today
>Not tomorrow
>Not next week
>But… someday probably
>Also… Karlek?
“Umm, yes I am okay!” You wipe a tear from your eye and sniff the pain away, the sweet, sweet pain and get yourself up from the floor. “But, what is karlek? Is it some breezie way to call a friend?”
>Water Fall starts to blush slightly. You couldn’t see it very much because of size differences but you could tell he was blushing for something
>”Umm… ya… it is the way we breezies call other friends… ja…” He scratches his mane and looks away from you
>Daww, the little guy is shy!
>With little of your strength you pull the breezie for a face hug, letting him hug your cheek slightly but not strong to hurt him
“Don’t worry! You can call me whatever you like! We are friends for something, right?” You take a pause and then giggle. “Or maybe karleks as you called me before? Hehe!”
>Hopefully this hug wasn’t lewd enough for the little guy. He seemed to be still a bit sad and you are trying your best to raise his spirits!

>>28928801

>Well, lewd for you would be getting a tiny punch from him… but you are not telling him to do that. Well, not yet maybe?
>Hnnng… now you remember how you did in the past bad things as disobey an order from your superior and get scolded in front of everypony… Aaaaah if only you had wings you would get a wingb-
>…You are starting to blush and you shouldn’t… Water Fall will think other things and you need to stop that, you silly not-pegasus pony
>”Ja… y-yes… b-but” You feel his little hooves over your cheek, maybe he wanted to stop the hug? You back away your face from him so he gets to reply without you hindering him. “Just call me by my name… or rank. Is that okay, Light? Or… Cloud? U-uh, or Light Cloud?” He started to blush again. How cute! “Uhmm… how about we continue telling histories of each other?”
>You smile at the breezie guard and nod
“Sure! Would love to hear more from your prison! Is quite interesting how the system of inmates works in there!”
>”L-Love…” The breezie was touching both his hooves as if thinking of something
>You tilt your head and stare at him in curiosity
>”I mean! I would love to too! To hear, the stories I mean. Ja! Stories!” He quickly gets back in your mane
>D’aww, you are starting to like this breezie… as a friend of course! He seemed at the beginning like a serious guard, but now? He must be showing you his normal way to be… and is so nice
>Hmm… wonder if there is any spells to turn into a breezie… you would have a good time with him!
>N-non lewd of course! Just… maybe he could give you a ride in his city?
>O-Or maybe somepony could make fun of your breezie size… mmmn….
>No! Bad Light Cloud! Thinking somepony would laugh at you for being a breezie would mean that somepony can laugh at Water Fall! He is not laugh material!
>Hmm, maybe you need to find better ways to hurt yourself again. You’ll throw several pillows at your face this night