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Spanking Thread 34: Discord Edition

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Once again the show has spanking in it. Discord brought that pig into the world, then made it cry right after. He's a goofball. What would Trixie do if he missed and "accidentally" smacked her hindquarters instead? Would she whinny and cry just like the pig?

Featured Story: Discord's Gift by DCFTEF (Guard/Twilight)
>But maybe you could show me what a whipping was like back then? Unless you don't have the power...
http://pastebin.com/teMkG9L4

Forum (stories, pics, discussion):
http://mlpgeneral.com/spanking/index.php

Master archive (pics, stories, Imgur links):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ce_DlEwnDcpjqTKRRxvsL4SCjka9H4cYq5lTfku8Tiw/edit?pli=1

Group Pastebin (140+ stories):
http://pastebin.com/u/SkyeHigh

Be advised: this is a thread about cartoon horses. Nobody here cares about real life disciplinary methods.

Old thread:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28254012
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Hey. About to go to bed, but thought I might as well give this a quick bump.
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Some new content in the forum that hopefully will come here.

That pig really squealed. How hard was the spank?
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>>28792404
>That pig really squealed. How hard was the spank?
It wasn't hard, it's just that the flying pig was a newborn not used to pain.
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There is a weird spanking comic going on about Spike as a schoolgirl getting spanked in class by Twilight as the teacher.
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>>28792470
I saw that one. Not sure how to feel about the art style, but it was still kinda hot.
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>>28791909
Based on how hard the pig squealed, methinks Trixie would have done a "spanked filly" dance from just that spank.

Trixie and Discord actually do make a surprisingly good friend team, too.
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>>28791909
I would rather see him spanking Fluttershy's bun than some non sentient pig.

Also, that mare on the left seem to really like the pig abuse.
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during hiatus I've been busy with Bat pony thread.
And I got some decent responses and also got a mini stories.

I'm still in middle of writing 2 long stories.
1 - about Twilight revisiting the EQG world , but in futuristic sittings where everything is automated, by the school's central Computer system.
Yes the system will go haywire. and yes there will be spanking

2 - mane 6 got trapped in an evil scientist's base. And that scientist punished them accordingly.

but I stopped working on them cause of the thread hiatus, which made lost motivation to write.
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>>28793464
Where does this pic come from?
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>>28793399
That first idea sounds extremely cool. Very believable given how nerdy Twilight is, too.
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>>28793146
>Discord smacks Fluttershy playfully on the rump one day
>Fluttershy squeaks and then blushes
>crosses her back legs and mumbles something under her breath

>later, Discord is at Fluttershy's house
>Flutter Butter approaches him with a big wooden spoon in her mouth
>drops it into his hand
>Discord looks at her confused
>she climbs over his lap
>then sticks her butt up in underneath his face and looks up at him with bedroom eyes and a red face

>evening turns to night
>the faint whacking sounds of wood on skin still make it through the cottage walls
>Discord's lap is sticky and wet
>with Fluttershy's steaming hot red seat still wagging under his nose

>this is going to be a long night
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Every night before the sleep your little pet bat lays on the edge of her bed, waiting for you to come to her bedroom. Every night she receives a gift for being a good or a bad pet bat after the whole day. The good gift varies from a simple kiss and a hug, to… something more enjoyable for both parties. Bad gift, however, usually is waiting on the floor to be picked up and used, but sometimes she receives a *special* bad gift for being a very naughty pet. Fun thing, even if she was a good girl for the whole day sometimes she tries to convince you she was the naughtiest pony on the world…
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>>28793551
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>>28793555
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>>28793562

http://vitolewdponi.tumblr.com/post/151119974985/heart-aches-butt-is-fun-and-dont-worry-she
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>>28793533
Continue good sir, tell me what is happening with his erection
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>>28793481
I'm not sure, but Woox posted it in the "Where The Apple Lies" thread.
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>>28791909
>He's a goofball.
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Spanking ponies would be great. Twi would be more embarrassed then anything, biting her lip and trying to not give the satisfaction of responding. Rainbow would be even more indignant, yelling and struggling to escape your lap as you slap her ass, but would be crying in shameful frustration in no time. AJ would be a challenge, smirking when you try to spank her toned ass. But her eyes would go wide when you brought out granny's old paddle, smacking that ass red as she cries out like she used to as a filly. Rarity would whine and plead, whimpering the whole time, trying to hide how much she got off on it. Pinkie giggles and asks for more, but as you keep going, starts to enjoy it less, and finally starts crying and begging as you keep slapping that red, jiggly ass. Flutter's the only one I might not want to spank. She would start sobbing and hiccuping and apologizing one slap in, and I'd just feel bad.
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>>28793588
that user posted this also.
as for who he was and where ?
If I remember correctly they were posted in Inkbunny

>>28793749
I love how Celestia's hair is warped around Luna's arm.

>>28793555
>>28793562
I don't personlly like belt as spanking implement. but this is both cute and hot.
>>28793577
I really like her expression in this

>>28793466
umm... posting exposed genitalia ?
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>>28793859
>I don't personlly like belt as spanking implement
I'm against of using tools, but hey, it's her little secret fetish and she shares it with the person she loves.
I can only say that her "bad gift" belt is made of soft, light material, so it's not really painful for her. After whooping she cuddles with Anon and lets him finger her.
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>>28793823
Rarity's whines and whimpers as you paddle her tush, her red hot rear wriggling on your knees, the gasps and weepy sobs getting more and more desperate. Promising that she'll be a good girl, mascara flowing down her cheeks, squeaks and moans and loud wails punctuating every new sharp crack of the paddle against her flaming bare bottom. Little bucks of her hips off your lap are rewarded with immediate repositioning of her plump derriere, followed by faster, sharper, crisper thwacks of the paddle that make her choke, gasp, and sob pitifully. Half formed words leave her lips, incoherent and breathless, drowned out by the repeated pops and thwacks of the constant hard spanking to her suffering bare cheeks.

She asks with a choke and a broken wail when her punishment will end, but she hears no response. Hoofy kicks drum against the armchair, butt squirms uselessly back and forth, and her roasted red cheeks still ripple and bounce with every paddle whack.

The spanking still doesn't stop, and neither do Rarity's sobs, pleas, and cries for mercy.
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>>28793914
>caught masturbating without your permission
>that's a spanking
http://imgur.com/a/FRZ6F
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>>28794049
I like this bat pony
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>>28793914
I kinda forgot to add her into that bat pony thread 250 OP image.
I really wanted to but kinda forgot about it and added someone's else bat pony there.
Reason why I wanted to add her , cause you were active and releasing content with your OC. unlike many dead bat ponies there that are hardly even relevant now.

I will draw her being spanked later. once I get my life together
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>>28793859
>Umm…posting exposed genatalia?
Oh, crap.
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>you are anon (pony).
>you were vising the summer sun celebration festival.
>you walked around the booths there.
>you see that booth (picture related).

what would you do ?
after you had a mango banana drink
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>>28794976
>take the spanker entrance
>grab Dizzy
>spank her until she cums all over your legs
>continue spanking
>finish when she wets herself after the eleventh orgasm
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>>28793961
Dayum that's good and detailed
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>Dizzy's mom discovers that Dizzy is touching herself after every spanking
>she continues the "punishment" every time her daughter is just a little bit naughty, like eating coockies before the dinner
>Dizzy hyperventilates and stiffles moans every time her mom whoops her butt
>different positions, different places, a few times in the bushes almost in public
>they don't show any sings to each other that they know it's not a real punishment
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>>28795420
Yeah, I never really get what's going on in that pic.
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Say, do you lot think it would be appropriate to make SpankingArt Wiki articles on some of the writefags here? I mean, they've articles on various articles of clothing that've nothing directly to do with spanking, so it shouldn't be much of a problem.

Speaking of, according to their page on words for spanking in other languages, one Russian word is "Zad" (Зaд).
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>>28796376
Zad is butt
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>>28796376
Correction: It's apparently Russian for "Buttocks".
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>>28796395
I do find it funny that by the time I corrected myself, someone else had already corrected me.
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>>28796407
This was totally unintentional, but damn does it fit me well.
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I have a hunch recent episodes have good spank material.

Gabby is eager to help ponies to find her true talent. That includes helping foalsit them to give their parents a break.

Starlight gets her comeuppance for hypnotizing all her friends.

A play session like in "Dungeons & Discords" gets out of hand. Either it's someone's fetish and they request it, or Discord thinks it would be funny.

Another version of "P.P.O.V. (Pony Point of View)" with a foal getting spanked from the perspective of the foal, the mother, and an onlooker. Was the foal guilty?

"28 Pranks Later" and "The Cart Before the Ponies" have stupid mares who could use an ass alignment.

Spike gets spanked by Twilight while Starlight watches. Just look at this tailpull.
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>>28793823
Pinkie desperately begging for relief is the biggest turn on ever for me.
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Uh oh

Thread is a little slow
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>>28794976
Take Pinkie with me

Bring 1000 bits

Not tell her what it is

Have her walk in the spankee booth

Twelve hours later...
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>>28793399
Dubs don't lie

And hi, woox! Long time no see. Where's KK and Skye, or Pan or Nomine or Bluejay? Or DC?

Gang's not here presently. :(
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Discord can give her something to cry about, like in the oneswat story with the Pinkie Pies.

>>28797536
unf

>>28798276
1 same
2 same
3 same
4 have her walk in the spanker booth
5 .5 seconds later after I wimp out...
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>>28798347
these butts won't spank themselves

>>28798276
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>>28798381
Hi Pan!
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>>28798347
Lurking. I have an old story that I put on the backburner for a few months 'cause other stuff came up; I'll see if I can finish it at some point.
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>>28798347
maybe some of them are here but not namefagging or just in lurking mode.

>>28797613
her tail is down... that's one of my biggest (spanking) turn off.
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*click, scroll, click*
"Sigh, all these underage little fillies posting their privates here for attention and being little sluts"
*scroll scroll*
"Even this one here, look at that text, what a little whor..."
*pause*
"Wait why does that nether region look so-Dizzy!"
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>Dizzy's mom proceeds to punish her daughter
>the squeaks turn into moans and squeals
>naughty filly squirts marejuices all over mom's hoof
>shocked mare stops and looks down at the embarrassed filly
>she puts her back down on her bed and without a word leaves the room
>one hour later she sees a new post on 4bat
>a picture with very familiar rump, but now all red and with drooling privates
http://i.imgur.com/xEhiMCQ.png
>maximum scrunch
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>>28798487
Uuunf my dick

>>28798461
That's the pic that went with the Anon and Pinkie green, right? The Old Fashioned Wife? Did Sterny make it, or Woox?
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>>28798449
>backburner
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>>28798627
It was an unidentified anon me thinks.
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So, does anyone have any story ideas you'd like to see that I could do?
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>>28798840
I don't think there is a story with the Pie parents diciplining one or more of their daughters yet.
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>>28793455
This is one of the cutest things I've ever seen. Thanks, Sterny.
>>28798832
I believe they were referring to the person who made the image, which I believe was Woox.
>>28798861
Huh. Never seen this before. Is it new? Did you make it?
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>>28798938
>Huh. Never seen this before. Is it new? Did you make it?
It's relatively new, I think from around the same time as >>28795420
Not made by me, not sure from where I saved it desu, maybe animeotk.
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No matter how old you are, Miss Cheerilee treats all students the same in her classroom. Same rules, same punishments. Be on your best behavior, Mayor Mare, or that wooden stool is going to feel even more uncomfortable on your bare rump.

Sharkrags wrote a human to pony transformation spanking story with Cheerilee enforcing classroom rules on an adult in a semi similar fashion.
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Fluttershy carried off for a spanking.

>>28799290
This might not be a desk in the Ponyville schoolhouse. But the size would fit.
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>>28798945
It's from this guy
loulouvz-commissions.deviantart.com
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>>28799294
I guess this is the prequel image.
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>>28799358
…And this is the sequel.
Apparently, this "Loulovz" gal also made the Practical Pig SS & DT pic.
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I failed on this one as I made way too many mistakes
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>>28800091
Still looks good doe
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You can only spank one character from the show, wich one is it?
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>>28801044
Ponk Ponk and Ponk
I wanna hear her cry in her squeaky cute voice and beg for an early end with her foalish attitude
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>>28801044
Lyra, she would love to interact with a human even if it means to have her skirt being pulled up to get a spanking every time I want
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>>28801064
while in middle of a spanking session.
Bonbon came in and caught you in the process.
she saw Lyra crying and you are hitting her...
whats gonna happen next ?
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>>28801079
I'd never spank Lyra hard enough to make her cry, nonetheless Bon Bon would attack me with her marshmallow hooves. All my hope that Lyra would explain to her friend it's just her fetish.
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The blue Unicorn adventure story continues
you can read it here
http://mlpgeneral.com/spanking/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=40

TLDR version of the story so far

>you are anon. a blue unicorn
>you were walking down town and saw a mother spanking her child.
>you interfered and stopped the spanking.
>the mother was angry and told you to mind your own business
>you calmed yourself and asked the mother What did she do to deserve this?
>the mother explained what her daughter did.
>you tried to talk to the little filly and showed her the trouble she caused to her mother.
>the filly responded well with you.
>The mother offered you a job, to take care of the naughty filly.
>you accepted the her offer and quit your old job for it.
>you went there to be greeted by the butler and asked who you are ?
>you said : The mistress haired me.
>the butler mistook you for the mistress's Dom.
>You went there and saw the mom dressed in leather and tied up .
>you wanted to defused this awkward little mix up and untied her ...
>she offered you bribe money to never talk about this again.
>you refused the money.
>she was impressed by your integrity and decided to continue hiring you to tutor her daughter.
>you needed that job and accepted it.
>the filly came back home. and saw you.
>she wanted to play.
>you asked to show you her toys ...
and there we are...
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>>28801272
Option A
>yes lets play.
>Yay . what game do you want to play pretend .. Doctor and patient.
>do you have toys ?
>she excitingly said : Do I ? Come I'll show you.
>she ran to her room.
>you followed her there.
>pewyoo I have read too many books about kids playing doc and patient... I know it wouldn't end well. she is just a lonely filly that doesn't know the true meaning of having a friend.
>stepping down to her level. I might get her to understand the true meaning of friendship. and as her friend I can make her see the importance of respect.
>you went right inside her room.
>it was more like a suit apartment than just a bedroom.
>there was a bedroom area
>bathroom , changing room
>and a hall in the middle connecting them all.
>she was standing near a closet door in the hall
>wiggling her tail eagerly waiting for you to show up.
>as you entered. she opened the door. it was full of all kind of different toys.
>no foal should be allowed to own that much.
>She started to drag stuff out of the closest.
>oh lets play with this.. no that one .. or this.
>she was showing you of her toy collections.
>wait how about you pick 3 of your favorites and I pick one of them to play with .
>not fair I want to pick one to play with.
>but you'd be picking 3 toys and I would be only be picking 1.
>oh ok.
>she dug deep inside the closest. and got you three different toys.
>one of them was a school sit. with little pony dolls.
>the ther one was Video Orbs from the crystal empire.
(its a crystal ball where it can play a pre recorded scenes from crystals. AKA video tapes)
>oh Video Orbs that thing is way too expensive. I have never managed to see one with my own eyes.
>she already picked an orb to be played.
>and lastly she showed you a board game you were unfamiliar with... it was the hero and changeling's queen.

ok Which shall we play with ?
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>>28801280
ok Which shall we play with ?


Before you vote read this
Since I'm doing a voting system I have to tell you that one of these voted scenarios (B) might be way too out of the place and kinda wacky that shifts the tune of the story.
I'm telling you this cause I wasn't sure if I should go for it or not. please don't vote cause you are just curios about it and think of your next vote from the story prospective.

http://www.strawpoll.me/11135760
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>>28801290
If the tune shift goes into some lewd scenario, then I'm up for that
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>>28801290
I can go for wacky, tho
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Would a filly or colt take a spanking for another filly or colt? And if so, which one(s)? Would the CMC do it for each other?
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>>28798848
>>28798840
>no pie
There is the joke oneswat but that's all I know.
>story ideas
You started a story with embarrassment as a theme but backed off. If that is an interest of yours I am very interested. Many oneswats can be fleshed out if you need ideas. Or >>28798381 or >>28797376
or Discord/x. We know from the OP and some fanart he's a kinky fuck. (Discord, spanking tags on Derpibooru).

This idea is not specifically a request for you, but lately I've been wondering what a reality bending Discospanking would be like. Best I can come up with so far is the spankee watching their own rump be spanked and their hind hoofsies flail about, maybe separate from their upper body or head. Or a spanking where intensity has no context. Tartarus from his paw (like he did to the pig) and love taps from a whip that looks like it will destroy any rump in its wake. Perfect for a nervous worrisome sub.

>>28801290
Voted school because it could help the foal in the story.
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>>28801272
what if this filly's fetish is public humiliation, spanking and being forced to expose her bits to everyone?
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>>28803170
shh... Don't give me ideas.
I hope you read the whole thing not just the TL;DR version.
>picture of the filly in the story.
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>>28801290
--Simi bump---
>lets play with the video orb
>she was excitedly brought it up from the box and starting working on it.
the video orb sounds interesting, it's a rare chance for you to try one.
you looked at her unfolding strange wires and stuff out of the box...
>umm ... are you sure you know what you are doing ?
>yes I played with this toy a lot.
she looked at you and smiled.
>but having someone else to play with is way much better.
this is exactly what you have planned. gaining her trust and scooping down to her level. So I can manage to show her the importance of,...
you were kinda absorbed with your thought but you got interrupted by her giving you a tiara like thing hooked with a wire that is connected to the base of the orb.
>here put this on your head.
>are you sure its safe ?
its a strange question to ask a foal.
>don't be scared. I will put mine too.
>well alrighty then.
You put the silly tiara on your head and she wore hers.
there was 3 slots for the wire to be connected with.
>I'll be the good guys and you can play the baddy ok?
well I've always picked the good guy when I was a little foal so it's a good for a change..
>ok...
>but how do we play this ?
>its easy you just do what the narrator's say.
>wait there is acting involved ?
she pressed the button on the device. the orb in the middle start glowing .
then a blinding bright light came from it.
...
I'm gonna continue this tomorrow. let your imagination run wild.
then get disappointed by the result
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What couple do you think it's not represented enough, if at all?
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>>28804587
Anon x Pony
This thread needs more hand on pony butt, sfw and nsfw
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>>28804609
Agreeeeeed
>>28804010
It would be good to start out with a scenario that puts Anon in the parent's "seat" and then places her in the position of a filly coming back from school with a teacher's note or something similar. That could lead to some juicy shenanigans
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>>28804682
Or just something crazy, which is what woox is saying he'll do. Anything's good, excited for more man!
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>>28804010
Well I sure didn't expect this story to turn into the holodeck from Star Trek. I'll be waiting the next part.
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bedtime bump, keep it alive errbody!
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I'm working on a little animation.
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>>28805301
>animation

My dick is curious about if the animation involves your pic related.

And hi, Sterny!
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>>28803547
Cute filly!
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>>28805434
Hi, tell him that yes.

>>28798938
I'm happy you liked it.
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>>28806065
Slower.

This was a test. I'll keep practicing and improving the "digitalizing conditions" (as in, get a scanner).
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>>28806065
Oooooh nice work Sterns
Can't wait to see the finished one
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>>28793823
>>28793961
remind me, is any of this new oc? still good either way.

>>28805031
I would do all my porn there. Who wouldn't?

>>28794049
hot

>>28804587
Starlight has no respect for anypony. Spank her ass raw.

>>28804609
>sfw, socially acceptable spanking
my favorite part of spanking

>>28806065
>the way her tush moves around and stretches as she kicks out
phew

>>28804010
anon gets spanked? finally a chance for revenge from a foal?

>>28804609
Aren't there 35 Anon/X stories in the Pastebin? What about X/Anon? Now that's hard to come by.
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>>28806065
This is looking rather good

I know it's your first, but if there is anything that makes something like a spanking animation look best, it's making sure the actual spank and the filly's jump move faster than the windup part. That gives the spank a much more powerful feel in the animation than if it's just an equal number of frames/time period going up and down.

The characters look great and the animation itself looks pretty good too, Stern. This one's hot.
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>>28804010
suddenly you lost control of yourself.
you were confused and slightly blinded.
as you gaining your sight you saw. you felt distressed unable to talk move and do anything.
it felt like a weird dream.
the you heard someone's voice coming for no where.

>... once upon a time in the crystal empire. a small family of three crystal ponies lives in small house...
as the voice was talking you suddenly went to the crystal empire watching this story as its being told.
it was out of the world experience . you totally forgot that you were unable to move and react. you decided to let go and just immerse yourself with the experience.
the voice continued...
>the practical , she was the smartest of the three. then there was a little filly called Penny. and then there was a little colt called flip.
>Flip and penny where playing outside their little house. while their bigger sister was in her workshop working in one of her inventions.
>Flip and penny went to take a look at what their big sister was up to.
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>>28807396
>They saw the practical one working hard, sweating.
>they laughed at her. then penny said :
>Look at her, Working all day. no time to play no time for fun.
>then her bother flip said : yea unlike us we will go to the meadow and play.
>their big sister got alarmed, she stopped working, turned and said:
>Don't go to the meadow now, you see the changeling are on the lose.
>her siblings replied : bah you are always like this all work and no play.
>their big sister replied : Go on and play ... but don't leave the Two Red crystal entrance.
>ok said the two little foals. then they ran out west of the crystal empire.

>meanwhile the big scary changeling queen was inside one of the frozen caves in the crystal mountains . talking to her little changelings subjects.
>we are weak , we need to feed. who do we feed upon ?
>her evil changeling army replied : the crystal ponies.
>and why the crystal ponies ?
>cause they are full of love from their faithful great queen of love . queen Candace.
Such propaganda
what ! I can talk. Suddenly you went out of the experience and felt like yourself again.
you were sitting inside her room with Aquamarine who you should be tutoring.
The tiara thingy was still on your head but you have become self aware...
That little filly was still sitting next to you watching the orb like a zombie... she was overly focused and unaware of her surroundings.

You ...

http://www.strawpoll.me/11571489
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>>28805031
>Well I sure didn't expect this story to turn into the holodeck from Star Trek.
>>28807079
>anon gets spanked? finally a chance for revenge from a foal?

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that was my original intention. but somehow I couldn't make it to work.
First of the motivation...
Second your dialog, I cannot make a believable one. I couldn't find a way to make it work without making the filly be a psychopath...

but I'm far more comfortable with the way I'm doing it now and also a bit more confident of the result.
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Thanks for the comments.
>>28807128
And thanks for the advise.

Here I made the "fast" frames go faster.

I need to make a lightbox, the drawings didn't align as much as I hoped doing it all manually. Still was a lot of fun.
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>>28807432
Yeah, that would've been a drastic change from how Aquamarine behaved prior to this. Thanks for reconsidering, that wouldn't have made much sense.

This hologram story thing is interesting, I'm just waiting to see where it goes. Thanks for livening things man!
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>>28807582
are you gonna retrace it in a Drawing program, then reanimate it ?
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>>28807582
I'm glad you're having fun with it Stern!
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>>28807582
The way her eyes open up when the hoof spanks her tushy, uuuunf
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>>28807697
Maybe when I improve the animation and scan it better. I've come to enjoy paper and pencils more than tablets lately, so I want to keep practicing.


Speaking of wich, give me ideas for sketches.
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>>28808658
Oh nice one and glad to hear you're having fun
As for ideas, how about something exotic? Like two spankers one spankee, sitting opposite to each other and unfortunate pony over both laps and one cheek for each one.
I think I've seen it once before so that came to me as a practice idea

(For characters twins like the spa twins would work, and with Rarity or Flutters)
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>>28808658
Sketch ideas, hmmm...

Cadence. That royal tushie needs a good paddling. I'll bet she gets Shiny to take her over his knee whenever they have time off and enough time for the redness to fade. They have to go on vacations at least once a year, right? It's probably a big fetish for her.
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>>28807405
>you had enough of that cheesy flick. it was boring for you.
>you removed the set off your head and looked around her room.
>her room was much bigger than yours. and propablly much bigger than your aparment.
>man this rich folks got it all.
>your eyes gazed upon her, she was sitting comforably on Red pillow watching that Orb . which was playing the story.
>she wont be going anywhere soon.
>well then how do I begin with her...
>her study desk is over there on your right. and the bed room is back inside the other room.
>you took her backpack and unloaded it on her desk.
>lets see here...
>you skimmed through her note books to see what are they teaching these foals these day.
>simple reading essays... basic maths ... the magical elements of equestria ...
>phew all basic stuff.
>you took a look back at her watching that video Orb. and thought to yourself
>shall I interrupt her now or ,, well It can wait ... she just came home from school.
>I'll sit next to her and pretend that I have watched it with her.
>you sat down and watched her watching the orb.
>her face was a bit flushed as she was watching. gazing at the orb with her mouth open.
>is that normal ?
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>>28809042
>meh how should I know... she said she watched it a lot before,
>after a short while you noticed her moving.
>she opened and spread out her legs, changing her sitting pos. wedging the pillow between her legs.
>this is an odd way to sit... wait WHAT!
>she moved her hips up and down humping the pillow she was sitting on.
>holy Luna! she is masturbating... what is she even watching...
>you took a look at the orb
it was showing the 2 siblings from that story being strapped down with their tail raised up by mechanical thing .
>and the contraption they were strapped on was paddling their butts with a hairbrush.
>wait what kind of story is this ?
>her humping was matching the speed of the paddle.
>she was fully absorbed by that video orb... she was doing it unconsciously

this is kinda awkward what should I do ?
http://www.strawpoll.me/11573957
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>>28809053
Bonerus maximus
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Manebrush attack!

>>28808658
corner time pls

>>28809053
mommy might want to change her approach to discipline
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>>28809207
>Manebrush attack!
Top unf
---

sometimes I wonder how long do I keep doing this filler story. it kinda survived 4 threads if I wasn't mistaken.
the thing is .. writing it is a lot easier than it seems.
I just write it down then when I get into the point to move the plot I just do these Polls. let you guys be a part of it.
I did plan the main concept of the story and how each branch might lead ... but I didn't plan the exact detail on how it goes.

Sadly writing this takes a toll on my mental compasity and time for finishing my other Long stories that I've been writing and maybe some drawings.

What I'm really trying to say.
keep the board alive. I don't want to this board to be about this filler story ...
Just do it. we all have the same spanking fetish.

Write something down, and don't worry about it. as long as there is butt getting a smacked you can't go wrong.
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>>28809053
Going with ignoring, let's see if she is able to cream herself from the watching.
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>>28809336
Also thought I should mention that there are two new stories by DC and Zad on the mlpgeneral forums in the Author Lounge tab

We got more content for sure
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>>28809207
mane/hairbrushes are my favorite implements. The fact they can be used for brushing hair OR butt roastings makes them so appealing to me.
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>>28808799
That's an excellent idea.

It's not clear in the final product, but the twins are placing their right legs betwençen the other's legs, sitting in some small chairs next to a special bed for the upper body.
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>>28811137
Sterny

Stern

now I have to get new pants

this is one of those pictures that could get some serious attention on places like derpi. It is so fucking hot, dude. Getting this beyond sketch stage is probably a good idea if that's what you'd be interested in.
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>>28809207
>corner time pls
I'm drawing a filly. Who should it be?
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>>28811192
not the guy who suggested it, but maybe... filly Rarity? Tears and a pout on her face looking at the viewer? I dunno.
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>>28811190
Thanks, I liked how it turned out, I'm thinking of finishing it sometime.
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>>28811341
go for it, man!
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>>28810872
A young filly laying on her bed, casually having her mane brushed by her mother/sister/babysitter/whoever, makes some remark that prompts the elder mare to turn the brush over and give her a few warning swats. Unf.
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>>28811604
Bluejay detected. If so, thanks for giving me that sub-fetish, but with an embarrassment and casual spanking fetish it was bound to happen anyway. Always loved those parts of Bluejay's stories.

>>28811227
>>28811192
guy who suggested it, filly Rarity would be fine. Filly anypony is a good choice. DCFTEF already did filly Rarity in the corner, so maybe filly Sweetie Belle if I'm not too late. If I am I'll be no worse off.

Of the mane 6, filly Twilight works best imo. Side foals, I don't think DT or SS would be put in the corner by their parents, as hot as it would be, so unless Cheerilee is doing it that leaves those out. Of the CMCs, Sweetie Belle makes the most sense. Apple family has a barn and Scoots has
>noparents
. I view corner time as a logical follow up to a spanking held in the same room, and only when that room has potential to be trafficked by others. At the least, the foal needs to know they will be seen in the corner once again when their caretaker tells them their time-out is over. When they are put in the corner, their rear will be smarting and they can't think about anything else. As corner time continues, they are very aware of where the eyes in the room are going..

Once you start moving ponies around after a full spanking, which is hot, you go straight into fetish territory. Aspirations aside, Rarity and her family are of a lower social class than DT and probably Silver Spoon as well. Rarity's family rides the difference between low class and high class just enough for it to be used by her parents and herself.

Or maybe this is just for semi-public corner time. I can imagine Celestia being royalty, but still putting a naughty Twilight in the corner of Celestia's personal study as Celestia brushes up on policy the day before a big speech.
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>>28811227
how can she look at the viewer from the corner? I'm hoping for a rear view. A key idea in most uses of corner time is that the spankee keeps their snout in the corner and does not look around, under threat of extra spanks.
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>>28811718
over her shoulder, butt facing outward?
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>>28809016
You bet they go all out whenever they get the chance, since it's not often.
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>>28811850
Intended filename: Love Butt.
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>>28811850
That expression on Cadence's face is absolute top UUUNFF material. The hoof on her head, Shiny's smug face, and how deeply pressed into his lap she is just shows how much control she's letting him have, and it's fucking hot. Wowww.

Any criticisms I have are not trying to be ungrateful, but I think her butt's a little big, like wayyy bigger than her real form in the show, and it makes it look a little unnatural in the context of the image for me. I'm also not sure if I'm really seeing her body on his lap or not.

Thank you for rocking this, Stern!
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>>28811850
How do you do such good work in so little time?
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Where are Skye and Krishna? I'm starting to get worried, man. Anyone heard anything from them at all?
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>>28807582
Frame 1 complete .
5 more to go (I hope)
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>>28811137
I like this
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This thread is so boner

Just boner everywhere
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>>28811939
Yeah I let myself get carried away with the butt, it's not often I make non-diciplinary spanks.

>>28811995
Thanks. I got used to drawing these ponies in these position after doing it for a while.

>>28812139
Damn. Godspeed.
I can upload the original frames separately if you want.
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>>28812195
They're such a good couple. Cadence just wanting a break from royal authority for a night, getting spanked like a filly by her hubby's strong hoof, makes so much sense for her. Mare needs it.
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>>28812195
Uhh..When I tap on the file, it says it's gone 404.
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>>28812139
>Woox
I haven't been in this thread before but I have a few questions about your name...
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>>28811227
>>28811696
>>28811718
Sweetie Belle it is, since I already did Rarity tonight.

I'm afraid she did look back, but she's still pressing her nose against the wall so maybe the penalty doesn't have to be too severe?
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>>28812290
Before you ask no I'm not that runescape player.
but go on ask anyway
I have a feeling that I'm gonna regret this

>>28812195
it's fine I extracted the images from the gif (some frames are too dark thou)
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>>28812271
…And now it no longer does.
>>28812482
Daww…
>>28812506
Not the same anon, but I'd definitely like to know where that came from.
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>>28812020
I'm here, thought the thread notice on the pastebin gave that away.
I just have nothing to contribute and so keep to lurking, bumping and suggesting.

Wonderful sketches btw Sterny, I love them all so far. The traditional drawing is a nice change too.
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>>28812539
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>>28812482
Looking back? Just two more spanks to each cheek and five extra minutes. Obviously needs a little more heat on her tush.

Pic looks good, as usual! Only thing I can think of for criticism is that Sweetie's mouth looks a bit funny. Can't put my finger on it. Thanks, Stern!
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>>28812139
Hoooo shit this just got real
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stumbled over this old thing and imagining it happen before sternys fluttermom spanking series
hng
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>>28813689
Aw, who's this cutie?
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>>28812482
Very nice.

>>28813291
>Just two more spanks to each cheek and five extra minutes. Obviously needs a little more heat on her tush.
unf
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>>28813841
Dizzy
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>>28813894
Oh wow, I was thinking that bit I didn't realize she was being drawn in another thread, that's awesome!
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>>28813894
>>28813961

Dizzy travels between threads looking for someone to spank her.
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>>28813482
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>>28814395

Thank you based Sterny
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>>28814448
Kriiiishnaaaa what's up, long time no see
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>>28814395
That's gotta be my favorite picture of you ever sterny.
So much unf
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>>28814467

Perpetually behind on reading stories and commenting on art, as always. I haven't had anything to contribute in a long time so I haven't been as active on the forums.
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>>28814483
We like having you here either way, no worries. You been busy? Just a lack of motivation?
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>>28814090
Unf
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>>28801044
Applejack, long and hard with a switch.
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>>28814564

Both. In school now that my life is back on track and SkyeHigh keeps me busy
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>>28814619
That's great man! It's good to hear you're doing better, I know you said you had some bad times before.
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>>28813482
Forgot how much my dick twitches at mouth soapings. Flutter taking her punishment like a good girl.
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Give me more ideas to draw today.

Hi Krishna.
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>>28815464
Some more PoV pictures?
Like that Fluttershy on her back with Rainbow from Flutters view. That would be interesting
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>>28815464
Your Rarity and Magnum pic from forever ago, but with a redone hairbrush impact so it doesn't look weird.

I love that thing. Sorry if that request seems passive aggressive Stern, but I assure you that isn't my intention.
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Currently reading Melody's Stories, and would like to let you all know that in Chapter 59(Melody's Adventures In Camp), a character gets their tail lifted up for a spanking. Granted, the character is a cat-person, not a pony, but I still thought that might be of interest to the anons here.
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>>28815511
Very interesting. A rare case where the spankee's point of view would have a point.

>>28815552
I did a version without the impact though never got to color it.
Right now I feel more like drawing than painting, I could try this pairing again because why not.
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>>28815558
Sauce? I can't find what you're talking about.
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>>28815464
Filly Applejack getting her rump absolutely fried over Granny's knee with a small paddle? Like, reaaally red and Applejack is crying really hard.

Bet none of you saw this request coming from me, right? Must be a shocker.
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>>28812937
Thanks for being here, Skye! Like having you around, always good to have the gang together after a hiatus
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>>28815558
Nvm I thought it was MLP

I just found it and my weewee thanks you so much for letting me know such a series exists.
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>>28815889
lolwut
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>>28815722
You're very welcome!
In case you didn't know already, it's actually the first part of a whole thing called the "Rejuve Universe".
Oh, and where are you reading it? From my understanding, the version on Rogue's Weyr(Which is hosted on Boyzbeingboyz) is the "full" version, with a few extra chapters that the Laura's Spanking Corner version doesn't. Links to both can be found at the Spanking Art Wiki article on it.
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>>28815889
>>28815902
just something I drew while watching TV...
Sorry for the drop in my usual quality as if I had quality in first place

I didn't add the dialog yet.
basically ...
>panel 1 :
click click scroll click
>panel 2 :
Twilight : Hey what are you doing ?
Dizzy : just browsing this strange image board...
>Panel 3
Twilight : oh ?
Panel 4 :_
Dizzy : it's all about people wanting to see ponies getting hit on the butt.
>panel 5
Dizzy : I don't know what's the appeal in that , I tried smacking my butt with my hoof... nothing happen...
>panel 6
Twilight couldn't resist the temptation anymore and pulled Dizzy over her knees. to give her the full experience.
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>>28816029
That's where I'm reading it at, yeah. It's slightly kind of totally hot as all fuck.
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>>28815889
it's cute woox. funny, too. Dizzy is a naughty little minx.
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>>28816728
that's some weird proportions.

-
I've been thinking should I post my W.i.P twilight in futuristic high school that I keep mentioning over and over. or resist the temptation and keep it until its fully done.
its 14,285 characters so far.
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>>28816066
Cool. What chapter are you on?
Also, I'm currently reading another Lurking Dragon story over on the Spanking Corner called "Collegegirl".
I just finished Chapter 4:Bicycle.
This is now a Lurking Dragon thread.
Just kidding.
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>>28816897
>Spanking Corner

it's amazing how so many of us are such obsessives about spanking that we've seen a lot of these same websites outside of MLP content and know what we're talking about

just hilarious man
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>>28815552
Last night Rarity had a relaxing spanking, now she has to make up for it by the belt of her father, with a little assistance of mother.
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>>28818272
P-P-P-PENIS

that POV looks like it was not too easy, but you got it done, Stern. You are on a fucking roll.

Assistance from the mother is also hottt. This is another one of those that would be amazing out of the sketch stage
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>>28818329
Thanks!

And speaking of POV...
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>>28815511
>>28818409
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>>28818495
without the context of the other image, it would be really hard to tell exactly what's going on in this one. Part of that is because it isn't colored in, but I think part of it is just because drawing from that POV is so difficult. You nailed RDs positioning relative to the original image, though, and with the context of the other image it does look pretty well made regardless. Just not as sexy as some of the other sketches you've done so far, in my opinion.

I might be totally off, but I'm thinking the gap between Fluttershy's legs might be a bit wide compared to the original, too. kind of makes it look like her tushy cheeks aren't very tightly pressed together like they are in the non POV pic.
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>>28818613
>>28818613
>the gap between Fluttershy's legs might be a bit wide compared to the original, too.
Damn you are right, that was an oversight on my part.
I feel the same way desu, but I was curious if I could actually do eet.
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>>28818692
I think you did do it Stern, all the way down to the fluff on Fluttershy's front hoofies. Good job!
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>>28818272
I have a personal headcanon that Rara was spanked well into her teen years. Her family is a mix of Ponyville hoedown and Canterlot proper backgrounds, so it kind of makes sense.

And I'll be willing to believe that an incident involving teenage Rarity secretly dating a much older, unsavory stallion despite her father's objections got her a VERY hard belting session when he found out.
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>>28818773
how about you expand on that and write it down as a story.
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>>28818805
I might, but I don't have time to hunker down and do it right now, so maybe later I'll give it a shot.
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I made a quick edit image of Glimmy post-spanking. It was gonna' be for some green, but I think I got over-zealous and just have a short fic in the works now. So, look forward to that, I guess?
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>>28819021
>glimmer
>spanked
unf
can't wait for that.

>>28818879
the premise is good so I'll take anything that can dye that white marshmallow to pink.

>>28818692
there is something off about the way you draw the bottom of the hooves.
you should draw them more oval shaped not full circle.
and
maybe you shouldn't draw the concave lines.
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>>28816769
I think you shouldn't. Most of your stuff you post before it's done then scramble to finish.

>>28818805
>>28818879
Check DCFTEF's stories. This sounds familiar. Maybe this one? http://pastebin.com/SyeaeZ4H

He alludes to older Rara spanking in another one of his stories.
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>>28815688
I'm sorry, Zad, but little Applejack will have to wait, I'm tired tonight.

>>28815889
Cute. That's a pairing I didn't expect to see.
I wonder how it feels like, being unable to resist the urge to spank a filly you have right next to you, without even asking first...

>>28818722
Thanks!

>>28818773
Sounds very good.

>>28819021
This one looks very good.

>>28819096
Thanks, I'll try those canges later.

>>28816769
>>28819112
You/he may feel more motivated to finish it after posting some of it.
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>>28819176
>I wonder how it feels like, being unable to resist the urge to spank a filly you have right next to you, without even asking first...
Shit, that sounded creepier than intended. What I was going for is that Twilight may regret her lack of control later. I don't think there is any story like this yet, with a character giving an undeserved spanking for the sake of it and then facing the consequences.
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>>28819112
>Most of your stuff you post before it's done then scramble to finish.
So true, I'll try to withhold it much longer.

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I kinda hit Writing block. with my super villain story.
What I really need is a wacky creative ideas for punishment soft torture that is done by automated machinery... and possibly robots.
Stuff other than the usual spanking... like tickling torture - sexual teasing ... etc
Anything wild or Wacky or cartoonish in nature but nothing gruesome.

anyone have any ideas ?
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>>28819824
>Stuff other than the usual spanking... like tickling torture - sexual teasing ... etc
well go by the old mickey mouse cartoons where donald was in that barber chair with the hot towel for example.
or if you want that sexual teasing you mentioned do things that go in the butt or so... machine fingers, thermometers, ginger root
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>>28819824
Ginger roots cuz muh dick
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>>28799436
I like the idea of those douche dragon teens being human teens instead of dogs.
I imagine they'd get in trouble a lot.
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>>28820550
>Spike is only dog

Jesus writers

Jesus
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Chipping away at that story I've been working on. At my estimate, it's about halfway done.

Since the thread's kinda slow at the moment (because mornings), I'll put forth a topic for discussion, for anyone else who's written for the thread: what story ideas of yours never got off the ground, or were put aside or made part of a different story? My very first greentext for these threads, back when I was just starting (http://pastebin.com/dj2rStTu) had, like, three and a half variations before I settled on the final version. Most of them had in common:
>Celestia/Twilight, because those two as (surrogate) mother/daughter is still my OTP
>Humanized, because preferences
>Backstory: Twilight's living at the Academy full-time, but isn't attending regular classes yet. Celestia tutors her in private, during the evenings (when she's off-duty)
>Celestia decides to take a more personal role in her apprentice's upbringing (at such a young age, she needs a caretaker more than a tutor)
>For one reason or another, Twilight ends up being babied against her will (and usually gets "processed" in some humiliating fashion— stripped down, bathed, powdered and diapered, dressed up in some cute attire)
From there, the exact scenarios diverge (continued in next post):
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>>28821527 (Forgot name, oops)

1)
>En route to her first evening session, Twilight is intercepted by some of Celestia's maids/servants/whatever, who decide to tidy her up a bit before she can see the Princess
>>"B-but, I need to—"
>>"Not looking like -that-, you're not. When's the last time you had a bath, young lady?"
>They "escort" her to a bathchamber, undress her, give her a thorough washing, force her into a diaper and a cute dress, and spank her for being uncooperative
>Rather embarassed by the whole ordeal, Twilight's also afraid that she'll get in trouble for being late
>Celestia assures her that there's nothing to worry about... but also decides to continue babying her, just because

2)
>In a casual conversation, Twi asks Celestia if she has any wants/desires
>The Princess is hesitant to answer at first, but eventually admits that her private life is a bit lonely, and that she'd like a familial bond of some kind— a son or daughter of her own, to be loving and affectionate towards
>Twilight, eager to please (and not quite realizing what she's about to sign up for), offers to fill that role for her, "at least for a little while"
>Not-entirely-consensual babying ensues

3)
>Celestia starts babying Twi so that she can keep a closer watch on her, either:
>A) as punishment for some prior misbehavior, and to keep her from getting into further trouble
>B) to settle her down after a particularly bad outburst/tantrum/panic attack

3A (with some elements of 1) is what I ended up going with, since it seemed the most fitting for a spanking thread. At some point, I may revisit one of the other ideas, but who knows.
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>>28821540
Your early work is still very good. Every writefag puts their own spin on the thread themes and it just happens that your stories please me more often than not. It still blows my mind the selection we have in stories. No matter what spanking mood you're in, there should be multiple for you.

All three clearly came from your mind. There's a short story on fimfic with a bit of 3B from what I remember. Some delegates from Saddle Arabia and Twilight freaks out.

The consent for 2 would be hard to write effectively. The legitimate authority would be all out of whack and I think Twilight would be powerful enough to escape it if she wanted to. 1 and 3 work better because Celestia is already understood to be her parental figure. If she was a parental figure in 2, then there's no reason to have the conversation, because she already has the power to raise a daughter, and 1 or 3 can play out. In 1 & 3, Twilight stays because she trusts her mentor is making the right decision and because Twilight wants Celestia as a mentor, even if she doesn't like all the attention her tush is getting.

>>28821527
If I come up with an idea I think can work I usually post it to the thread. >>28797376

Sometimes I see stories with good plot ideas that don't go the way I want. The Many Uses of a Brush is a hot premise with not enough focus on the humiliating parts of spanking. I did the genderswap of Skyehigh's Anon/Soarin' story because it was otherwise very boner. Sometimes take other stories and I add in quick swats from the spanker as they are still lecturing or angry at the other pony, because I find it hot.

I started my own story in the Princess' Bath universe, but it didn't go far. Just 100-250 words on Luna stealing food at night, thinking nobody saw her, and a cook telling Celestia. Luna has the audacity to lie to Celestia (and also didn't think it was a big deal), which leads to a brief backside baring and requisite reddening.
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>>28821540
An initial consent that is later irrevocable is quite hot for me. I do this with An Odyssey, and thought of continuing it: Pinkie thinks she is finally too old for spankings, but the Cakes think they still help her. It's not a punishment if you can opt-out whenever you want, so how to resolve this? spankings

If anyone is looking for ideas just keep working backwards through threads. There must be 5 per thread at a minimum.

https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28254012

Now that Legends of Everfree is out, camp spankings are in order.
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>>28821679
The "too old for spanking" trope is my favorite, personally.
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>>28820241
you got the right idea.
>hot towel
is a good example.
>machine fingers, thermometers, ginger root
I don't want to spoil or create false hype.
but keep these ideas coming.
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I have to say that I got my inspiration from the old Cartoons. stuff like ( picture related ) that's the main mood of the story I hope to be able to convey
and not make it horrifying realistic experience as I usually do
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>>28813689
I imagine Dizzy as a quiet, smart filly who discovered her little fetish and she tries to trigger spanking situations
Her mom secretely knows her daughter loves to be smacked, but she is too embarrassed to let her know that
also, it turns her on too

captcha: harmony care
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>>28822060
That's kinda hot, but realistically I think the mom would be horrified if she found out
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>>28822327
>be Dizzy's mom
>have your little girl pulled over your knee for sneaking out in the night
>deliver smacks all over her small butt
>she is always so quiet when you spank her, sometimes it makes you wonder if it's because she is trying to be so tough
>accidenty smack her in the very center of her butt, colliding with the small crotch
>hear a loud squeak and whine
>panic
>pull her up and hug, apologizing and kissing her scrunched in pain face
>gently rub around her butt to make the pain subdue
>suddenly: wetness
>slimy, warm wetness seeping from your daughter's crotch
>what the hay
>you pretend like you didn't discover it
>gently pull her down on the bed
>now you can see the shiny, wet coat on her buttcheeks and her winking fillyhood
>shocked, without the word you leave the room
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>>28822060
I'm trying not to shove her all over the place here. as people gets tired of OCs easily. OCs sometimes feels like a personal (input) and unrelatable unlike ponies from the show.

But since you are talking about that OC then I will dive in. I've been hold back all that time
I had created this OC back in 2013. she was my practice dummy for drawing. instead of drawing random ponies or the infamous Wingless RD pony
But when I first mentioned her here. she was just filling the roll of a (Random pony) or (insert pony name here).

Then with more stories she grow a personality.
The stories She was in ...
>sabotaging anon's pharmacy
>she got bullied by AJ and she got in trouble.
>posting her butt online and got spanked by her mom
>used her mom's money to get herself transformed into a wingless bat
>hiding behind a bushes watching a mom spanking her daughter in lewd fashion
>her dad wanted to spank her but her spanking keeps getting postponed
>she tried to rescue a filly from Ents but she got entangled and whipped instead
some shorts
>she got her butt stuck on a tree, only to have her friend used that to play with her butt
>opened spanking booth but anon grabbed her and spanked her instead

about the personality posted here >>28822060
that's also the personality that the people in bat thread gave her. which is probably cause of this image
>>28798487

which is not far away from what I originally in visioned her. So I kinda rolled with it.

>Filly that always trigger spanking situations
check - the whole point of her existence is to get her flank spanked.
>discovered her little fetish
I didn't intend for her to have a spanking fetish. but the idea of her trying to hide that while being spanked is kinda Lewd. So Its fine.
>Dizzy as a quiet, smart filly
The first time I ever gave her a purpose , she was working as house repair. ( Picture related )
before she set off and started her other shady business. >>28793399
So basically they all checked out.
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>>28822411
I like to think she is a filly who doesn't yell like a banshee when being tanned
like, she accepts every spank and stiffles every moan that tries to escape her mouth
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>>28822560
Meanwhile, Scootaloo does scream like a banshee and hates that she can't look like a toughie when she's spanked.
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>>28822974
that's interesting...
Green when ?
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What did twilight do to CMC and that griffin when she learned that they lied to her about getting Cutie mark ?
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>>28823990
She got upset. Not like the CMC knew Gabby was lying when they told Twilight. And I don't think Gabby needs a spanking for that
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>>28822411
>the whole point of her existence is to get her flank spanked.

This is basically a what happened when I took on Babs Seed and it was a fetish she developed growing up under Candy's hoof, quite literally. I need to return to Bad Apples some day.
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>>28824424
your Babs Seed shit is THE shit. The whole conflict between "spanking hurts and I cry" and "but I love the pain so much after" is so boner
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Hey, I recently wrote a new story, or most of it, for the mlpgeneral thread. Would people be cool if I post what I have so far on here since the thread is pretty slow currently?
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>>28824829
go ahead fill the board. not everyone does visit the forums.
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>>28824847
Ok, then I will. I used to not go to the forums either, and I was really hesitant, but I'm going to start to. Woox did a good job with it.
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Swinging Your Hoof Down

Fluttershy shook her head, holding her chin in one hoof. McIntosh stood across from her with a cross frown on his face.


“I can’t let you, Mackie. I can’t let you do that to her…”


“Flutters, I know it’s hard. But every time I’m gone, she walks all over you. I know you’ve been trying to put your hoof down, dear, but it isn’t working. If I don’t, she’s just going to keep getting worse!”


Fluttershy wiped a tear out of her eye. She looked up the stairs of their house, looking through the wall at where her daughter’s bedroom was. She chewed on her lip.


“I just… can’t imagine doing that to her. I know other parents do it, but…”


“And it works, sweetheart. I promise you, it ain’t pleasant, but in cases like this, it WORKS.”


Fluttershy shook her head again, sighing deeply. She was trying hard to not cry.


“I just don’t want her to get hurt…”


Big McIntosh shook his head back at her, giving her a tiny, knowing smile. “It’s just her rump, Fluttershy. I promise you, I will not injure Flora.”


The room they were both standing in fell very quiet for a while. Fluttershy covered her mouth his her hoof and stared at the floor, thinking deeply. She glanced back up the stairs.


“So… it worked for you?”


Big McIntosh walked forward and nuzzled her, hugging her around her front. “Yes. For me, for Applejack, for Little Bloom, all of us. I promise you, when we needed it, we got it. And it worked.”
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>>28824926

He drew away and stood across from her again. Fluttershy breathed heavily. She sniffed, and wiped another tear away. Her eyes closed, and she sighed. When she opened them, her gaze toward her husband was intense.

“I still don’t want you to… but I’m not sure what else I can do. What we can do. I’ve grounded her, taken away toys, made her go to bed without dinner, but…” She choked back a sob, and trailed off the sentence.

McIntosh shook his head gravely, gritting his teeth. Both of them had slowly seen their 9 year old daughter, Flora, grow more and more badly behaved, much brattier, in the last many months. This was made worse now that Big McIntosh wasn’t home very much due to the harvest season being in full swing. Fluttershy was a kind, nurturing soul, but unfortunately, that also meant she was a little too gentle, too.

Something had to be done.

Fluttershy swallowed, and bowed her head. She nodded once. “Ok. Mackie… I trust you. I don’t like it, but… do what you need to.”

She sounded defeated. McIntosh picked up on her tone, and despite hearing her give him permission, he still wanted to make sure she was ok. “Flutter? Are you sure?”

He was surprised by how quickly she replied to him. “Yes. I’m sure, Mack. I trust you, I do, but… I-I can’t be in the house when it happens. I-I’ll go run some errands. I just can’t bear to hear… you know.”

She stood up straighter, trying to gussy up and sound more resolute. But it was clear that she was still not feeling good about all of this.

But then again, neither was McIntosh. But he knew that it would work, and that’s what drove him to do what he had to do.

He nodded his understanding to her, and kissed her on her lips. He ran his hoof down her cheek.
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>>28824960
I don't like it
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>>28824960
“Ok, sweetie. It’ll be alright, I promise. Flora won’t like it, but things will be better here after this is over.” He kissed her again. “I love you.”

Fluttershy smiled, and leaned into his hoof on her cheek. She sighed. “I love you too, Mackie.”

A few minutes went by. Big McIntosh didn’t go upstairs as soon as Fluttershy went out the door, ears folded down and a tear still in her eye. Instead, he sat down for a minute, and took some deep breaths while he thought about and prepared for what he was going to say and do.

What Fluttershy had told him when he came home was enough to get his blood to simmer. His wife always meant well, and wished nothing but the best for her daughter, but it was becoming very clear that she had let Flora get away with far too much over too long a time period. Today, though, it went beyond that. Throwing something at his wife...

He couldn’t help but think back to his own growing up days. The parallels were uncanny. There was once a time when he had done his best to get away with as much as possible with his own mother, and over time it had gotten to become a habit. Until one day, however, when his mother had broken down, and told his father about what usually happened when he wasn’t home.

That night, his father hadn’t finished with him until long after the blisters appeared.

It may have sounded horrible, and he never would have admitted it to his wife, but… were it up to him, and only him, Flora would have been facing exactly the same fate tonight. But it wasn’t. He had to be more careful.

McIntosh was a stallion in control of himself, but tonight, he was truly angry. His wife didn’t deserve this. Flora had ignored, backsassed, and flat out disobeyed her for far too long, and he was going to make sure that tonight would never leave his daughter’s mind.

He sighed, and stood up, walking to the stairs.
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>>28824980
Oh. Sorry. What do you not like about it?
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>>28824982
He knew Flora could hear him as he walked up. His hooves were heavy, and unfortunately for Flora, those same hooves were going to be applied to her rear end tonight.

McIntosh knocked on the door with the back of his hoof, listening closely. It took a moment before he heard anyone on the other side, but when he did, it was the voice of his daughter.

“Who i-is it?”

Big McIntosh answered with a low, booming voice, “Your father.”

There was no reply. He grabbed the doorknob, and nodded once in approval when it wasn’t locked. She knew better than to ever lock her door when she was sent to her room, and if it had been… it would have been even worse news for her. He swung the door open, and slid his large frame through the crack before closing it shut behind him.

And there she was, laying on her back on her bed. The pale blue filly’s forelegs were crossed over her chest, and her rear legs were stretched out below her. Her yellow tail lay flat between her legs over the blanket, giving her the appearance that she was relaxed. However, Big Mac could see how nervous she really was, as her body was tensed up as he entered the room.

She stared at the ceiling, not even turning to address him. Big McIntosh frowned down at her. He shook his head.
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>>28825016
She stared at the ceiling, not even turning to address him. Big McIntosh frowned down at her. He shook his head.

Flora huffed through her nose. Big Mac also noticed a roll of her eyes, something that made him grit his teeth together audibly.

Flora huffed again. She curled one of her hind legs up to her belly and turned her head away from him. “Look, I know that I…”

“Don’t you DARE say one more word, Flora. Not one.”

Big McIntosh rarely raised his voice. But when he did, it was enough to even to silence Flora. She stopped mid sentence with her mouth open, and she gasped with shock. Her ears fell down, and her eyes shot wide open.

Big McIntosh closed his eyes, and relaxed his jaw before he could lose himself. He couldn’t believe it. The first thing out of her mouth upon seeing him had been an attempt to sass him.

She had no idea what was coming her way. Big Mac took a deep breath, and then, he said with a lowered voice, “Flora, your behavior is going to end. Tonight.”

Flora’s ears twitched, and for the first time, her eyes darted over to him. But that moment of fear that was displayed clearly on her face, once again, faded away. She closed her, and sighed again.

“Ok, ok, I’m sorry, alright? I know I shouldn’t have taken the money from her bag, but my grades have been getting bet...”

Big Mac’s eyes, for a brief moment, widened into saucers. His teeth ground together again. Anything that Flora was starting to say, he didn’t even really hear.

He could hear his own heartbeat thump in his ears as he turned his head toward her vanity, set up in the corner of her room. His eyes burned.

Then, slowly and methodically, he walked over there. When his eyes locked onto the thing he was searching for, he reached out and picked it up.

Her hairbrush.

“...that wasn’t fair! I really wanted to go, but…”

SMACK!
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>>28825064
Flora’s entire body jolted, and a quiet ‘yip!’ escaped her before she fell totally silent. She finally, since the first time he had entered her room, lifted her head to face her father.


Big McIntosh held the hairbrush tightly in his hoof over her vanity table, which he had just struck with the flat side of the brush. He met Flora’s eyes with his own, and his gaze was the most intense she had ever seen it.


This time, any trace of defiance in her eyes was totally gone. McIntosh never took his eyes off of her as he spoke, voice shaking.


“Flora… did you know that your mother has been having trouble sleeping lately? Because she has.” His eyes were watering, but he blinked the tears away. His hoof grasped the hairbrush even tighter.


Flora, from the other side of the room, waited slackjawed for quite some time before she eventually shook her head, slowly and without a word. Big McIntosh nodded his head one time, affirming he had seen it, and took a deep breath.


“And you want to know why? Some nights, when you’re already in bed… she cries. I sometimes wake up and hear her crying next to me… trying to keep it quiet in the pillow…” He angrily swiped a tear out of his eye. “...And every time I ask... she wonders what she did wrong. Wonders why her own filly never listens to her anymore. Wonders what she could’ve done to make you so angry at her.”
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>>28825097
Flora, for once, said nothing. She could see the tears now trickling down her father’s face, and scarcely a breath even entered her lungs. McIntosh’s hoof was sweating as it hung on to the hairbrush.

“She’s hurting, Flora. WE’RE hurting. We love you, so much. We’ve tried taking away your dolls, grounding you, giving you extra chores… but nothing works.”

Flora’s face was blank. She stared at the wall beside her father’s head, but her ears were angled toward him, listening very closely to every word. Big McIntosh looked down at the brush in his hoof, and tossed it down at the end of her bed. Flora’s eyes saw it land on the blanket out of the corner of her eye, and she turned to look at it.

He once again turned his eyes toward her, the fire returning to them. “But tonight… that’s gonna change. For a while, now, I’ve tried to convince my wife to let me punish you in a different way… but she’s resisted it. She didn’t want me to do it, still doesn’t… but when you stole money from her bag today, snuck out with your friends to the movies, and then had the nerve, the NERVE, to yell at her when you got back… she gave me permission to do whatever I needed to do.”

Big Mac stepped forward, and closed the distance between himself and Flora, whose gaze was suddenly growing more nervous by the second. She had good reason to. Mac pointed at her with his hoof, and then jabbed it at the floor.

“And I will. Get up, Flora.”

He stared right at her, pointing at the floor. Flora, ears now pressed against her head, gripped the comforter tight, and her legs went rigid.

Big Mac was a soft spoken stallion. But right now, she had never seen him more angry at her.

She stammered, after a period of confused silence, “Wh-what, wh-why? What are you g-gonna…”

“I said, get. Up.” His voice left no room for debate. “I won’t warn you again.”
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>>28825108
Flora’s breathing got a lot faster, and slowly, she slid her body over the bed until she was at the edge. Looking away from him out of sheer nervousness, she tried to speak again with her tail tucked in between her legs.

“O-Ok, d-dad… wh-where’s mom? Is she...”

Unbelievable. Hoping that mom would pushover yet again and stop what was going to happen…

McIntosh shook his head. Flora stood shakily on the floor, and her confusion only grew when Big McIntosh instead sat up on the bed. He looked down at her gravely. “No. She’s running errands right now. She left because she didn’t want to hear this.”

Flora felt a chill run up her spine. Shivering, and looking wide eyed back up at him, she took a step back. “Uh… didn’t wanna hear wh-what? Daddy, what’re you...”

Big McIntosh reached out, and took a tight hold of her front leg before she could get any further away. Her whole body went stiff in shock, and she gazed slackjawed up at him. Then, he grabbed the hairbrush from the other side of the bed, and laid it down next to his right leg.

The next words he said came slowly, methodically, and without a hint of shakiness in his voice.

“Your spanking.”
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>>28825134
I'm going to leave it at this right now. Sorry to the guy who said he doesn't like it. Hopefully that's not what everyone else thinks, though!
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>>28825134
I don't like the way they're using the spanking - mother doesn't want to hear or look, betrays her daughter and runs away, dad comes to the child all angry and acts like a dick
shit looks more like a rape
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>>28825191
>shit looks more like a rape

Well that's horrible. I didn't want that at all, shit.

The thought process behind Fluttershy leaving wasn't betrayal, it was just that she had been convinced that a spanking needed to happen but was not going to be able to stand hearing her daughter crying and in pain without chickening out. Leaving the house was trusting him, or that's what I was trying to show.

Parents aren't perfect, either. I don't want to spoil the rest, but McIntosh realizing he's going too far from anger was already going to be a plot point. Big McIntosh has a right to be pretty angry right now, though.
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>>28825134
at first big mac didn't sound angry/ pissed. and that was kinda distracting.
but when he got up to her room it started to make sense.

Your story structure kinda reminded me of KrishnaKarnak. (not sure who was first but I read krish's stories first)
both of you tend to story starts right in the middle right before the spanking.
we as readers will only learn what the spankee did wrong right before getting spanked.

>>28824980
not the same anon. but you could atleast say what doesn't work for you and why you don't like it. the Writers would really appreciate it more.

Each person got his own preferences. I don't personally like this simi consented spanking. where the spanker is calm and goes into this spanking ritual.
but in your story it works. I hope you get into it and finish the rest of it within this thread span. not the next.

>>28825191
>dad comes to the child all angry and acts like a dick shit looks more like a rape
but the angry big mac was the only relatable person in that story. How would you suggest he aproch the spanking ... calmly ? consented ? asking his daughter to count the smacks and say "thank you daddy may I have another after each smack ?"
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>>28825280
>spoil the rest, but ....
that's exactly what I was expecting to happen based on the the flashback earlier remembering how his father bruised him
I mean if not .. then that flashback would be completely pointless.
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>>28825280
It would be okay to give her several smacks immediately after she got caught
It's very not okay to make a whole scene, she feels like a prisoner being lead to the executioner to be hanged. It's much more harmful than the actual spanking, shit leaves a scar on kid's mind.
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>>28825411
she didn't even know she was being spanked until he practically had her on his knee, though. She was just in her room, and she sassed off her father when he walked in, so she obviously wasn't scared. She wasn't anticipating a spanking up until maybe the minute before.
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>>28825163
Like it so far. As unrealistic as it can be, I do like oblivious spankees not realizing what they're in for. I will probably skim the spanking as it becomes too much feel and not enough boner for me personally.

>Flora, ears now pressed against her head,
>with her tail tucked in between her legs.
cute

>Unbelievable. Hoping that mom would pushover yet again and stop what was going to happen…
Reminds me of "Lazy" which I think is in the Pastebin.

>>28825411
Keep in mind that this is just fantasy. Zad is not endorsing this. There are stories I personally stay away from because they're more abusive than what I want.
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>>28825571
>Keep in mind that this is just fantasy.
I know it's fantasy, I'm just commenting it's too dark for my tastes
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>>28825571
>There are stories I personally stay away from because they're more abusive than what I want.

Yeaaahhh. That's probably most of mine, honestly. Is it sad that the severity of the spankings in my stories comes from personal childhood experience?
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>Is it sad that the severity of the spankings in my stories comes from personal childhood experience?
...I'm glad my parents were always so nice to me...
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>>28825608
Yes. I sincerely hope you're doing fine now.
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>>28825657
My fetish for this shit is just one of those things. I can either feel ashamed of a sexual fetish that I can't control and that probably came about from childhood experiences, or just accept my fetish and move on while also understanding that, should I have kids, I would never do anything like that to them. So I don't feel ashamed like I used to, especially now that I know there are people out there who have this fetish just like me... except maybe not exactly like me.
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Since I don't have much time for writing outside of weekends, I'll post the first half of my story in progress. Enjoy.

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Trixie Goes to Magic Kindergarten (part 1 of ?)

A hooded figure walked the streets of lower Canterlot. She kept to the shadows, not wanting to be seen, until she reached a small shop in a secluded alley. Perhaps one of these arcane trinkets or curiosities could help her. She didn't bother introducing herself to the stallion at the counter, keeping her face obscured; in times such as this, anonymity is–
>"I know it's you, Trixie. You don't need t'be so dramatic about it."
The blue mare removed her hood and glared at him.
>"Dammit, Tarot. I am trying to keep a low profile here."
The shopkeeper rolled his eyes.

>"You've got some nerve showing your face around here, Trix. Since, y'know, you're kinda wanted for that whole 'possession of contraband magical artifacts' thing? Last thing I need is some police pony snooping around."
Trixie scoffed.
>"Oh, please. You know they could never make the charges stick. (Besides, I said I was sorry...)"
>"That doesn't solve either of our problems, y'know."
>"Bah. Give it a week; they'll find some other nuisance to deal with and forget all about somepony like me. Always happens."

The mare leaned in closer, glancing around to check for eavesdroppers.
>"But, um, until then, you wouldn't happen to be selling anything that could help a pony... lay low for a while, would you?"
>"If you're looking for another cursed amulet, you're outta lu–"
>"No, no, nothing of the sort. Just something to, perhaps, alter my appearance? Temporarily, of course."
>"(sigh) (If it'll make you go away faster, I'll see what I can do...)"
>"I heard that."
>"I know, and I don't care. Just, gimme a minute."

The stallion rummaged through his wares.
>"You sure you don't just want some, like, hair dye or something? Or just, I dunno, -skip town- like any sane pony would do?"
Trixie gave an impatient glare.
>"Don't question my methods, Tarot."
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>>28825828 (2)

>"I'm just sayin'. Transformation charms and potions and whatever are hard t'come by these days."
>"Excuses, excuses."
>"Lemme see... glamours, no... masquerades, no... I suppose -this- could... hmm."
The blue mare raised an eyebrow.
>"Hmm? What's hmm?"
The stallion pulled out a flask from a high shelf and presented it at the counter.
>"Well, this stuff is supposed to make a pony look, let's say... younger. I dunno, knock about... say, five, ten years off, and you could maaaybe pass as somepony different? I'm not sure it's exactly what you–"
>"I'll take it."
She swiped the pink flask from the shopkeeper, dropping a sack of bits on the counter in return.
>"Wait, I didn't even– if you're just gonna– at least read the instructions on the– Oh, forget it."
Trixie was already halfway out the door. Tarot returned to his seat and started counting his coins; whatever absurdity she was about to involve herself in, he wanted no part in it.

>"Nothing to worry about, Trixie. You've dealt with potions plenty of times."
She tracked down one of her old hiding spots, a little alcove in a quiet part of town. Here, she could assume her temporary identity in peace. She uncorked the flask, and took a whiff of the pink liquid.
>"...Well, I've had worse."
She took a breath, then drank most of the potion in a single gulp. Setting the flask aside, she relaxed a bit. The thing with potions is, you never know how long it'll be before it starts to–

When Trixie came to, it was nearly sundown. Once she was fully upright, she mused to herself.
>"Huh. Must've been out for a couple hou–"
She recoiled at her own speech. She'd forgotten how high-pitched her voice used to be when she was...
>"...Hold on."
Trixie scanned her surroundings. Everything was... bigger than she remembered. Her hooves were the wrong size. Her hat didn't fit any more. She stumbled over to a decorative fountain, and looked at her reflection in the water. She reeled.
>"Oh, what the FUCK!"
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>>28825840 (3)

Take off five, ten years, he said. Not TWENTY. Damned potion must've been defective! Trixie was livid.
>"When I get my hooves on him, I'll..."
>"..."
..."I'll what," she thought to herself. Thinking it over, she didn't have many options. She still had a decent grip on her magic, more or less, but physically, she was little more than a helpless filly.
>"(sigh) Fine. You can make this work, Trixie."
First order of business, clean herself up and make sure she wouldn't be recognized. She took a brief rinse in the fountain (after she made sure no one would notice– a girl needs her privacy, after all). Now, she had to find someplace to spend the night. Surely, some nice mare or stallion would be willing to let an innocent little–
>"Who goes there?"

Trixie jumped a bit. A rather imposing mare (at least, for someone of Trixie's size) had snuck up on her.
>"You shouldn't play around in dark alleys, child. It's not safe."
>"Um, o-okay."
>"You seem nervous; are you alright?"
>"I, I'm fine, ma'am."
The mare scanned her.
>"Have we met before? You seem familiar."
>"I... don't think we have, ma'am."

>"Wait a minute... I -have- seen you before."
>"Um, I, you probably have me confused with– hey!"
Trixie felt the mare pull on her ear, trying to lead her somewhere.
>"You'd better have a good explanation for this, little missy."
>"Lemme go! You have the wrong–"
>"What in Celestia's name are you doing away from the Academy at this hour?"

>"...Huh?"
>"You -know- you're not supposed to leave the grounds unsupervised..."
Trixie paused. Did she just get mistaken for a schoolfilly? She couldn't exactly contradict the mare, lest she blow her cover.
>"I, um, lost my backpack? Somewhere around here, and I, um, went back to look for it..."
>"(sigh) Then you should've asked an adult for help, sweetie. For now, you need to come back with me."
>"Um, yes, ma'am."
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>>28825853 (4)

Trixie felt a bit nostalgic upon seeing the Academy gates once again. She attended it for a few years when she was a filly. She was never a star student or anything, but she did well enough. This could work out– zero-effort classes, free room and board? Sounds like a plan.

All she needed to do was not draw attention to herself... which could prove harder than anticipated, since the mare who found her escorted her directly to the headmistress' office.
>"Milady?"
Celestia herself was seated at her desk, sorting a bit of paperwork. Upon seeing the Princess, the filly's nerves started to get the better of her.
>"Hmm?"
>"I know it's past sundown, and you're just finishing up, but–"
>"My last appointment for the day is in ten minutes. Please, take your time."
>"It's about one of the new students. I found a... straggler."
>"Oh?"
Celestia rose from her desk, and looked the filly square in the eyes.
>"What's your name, little one?"
Trixie stalled, trying to come up with a good pseudonym.
>"Ummmmoonbeam? I mean, Moonbeam, ma'am, I, well,"
Nailed it.

>"Apparently, she lost her pack on the way here. No supplies, none of the forms her parents were supposed to sign, and come to think of it, she hasn't even been assigned a room yet..."
>"(sigh) (There's at least one, every year...)"
Celestia pondered for a moment.
>"Very well. Take her to one of the spare dormitories in the far hall. Help her get settled in, then put her to bed. We'll see if we can get this sorted out tomorrow."
>"Yes, milady."
The elder mare turned to address young Trixie.
>"You heard her, little miss Moonbeam; please, follow me..."
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>>28825859 (5)

"Moonbeam" stayed silent as she walked through the halls. The general layout of the place seemed vaguely familiar, but she could barely recognize anything. It was probably renovated a few times since her graduation.
>"Alright, little one. This will be your room for the time being. Washroom is just down the hall, on the left."
>"Um, okay."
Her temporary residence was small and plain. It was tidy, though, so there wasn't much to complain about.
>"Now, it's past your bedtime as is. I'll be back to check on you in ten minutes or so, and I expect you in bed by then, okay?"
>"Yes, ma'am..."
After the day she'd had, a comfortable bed was exactly what Trixie needed. She washed up a bit, then settled into the sheets. The mare came back soon after and tucked her in, and she drifted off to sleep.

>"Moonbeam, dear, it's time to wake up..."
The filly slowly opened her eyes. A bit of morning sun shone through the curtains.
>"(yawn) Hmm?"
>"You overslept, sweetie. That's what happens when you stay up past your curfew..."
Trixie yawned again, stretched, and hopped out of bed.

>"...Wait, who are you?"
She glanced at the older mare; grey coat, well-kept white mane, wearing attire that resembled a maid's dress.
>"Oh, I'll be looking after you from now on."
The filly grumbled with contempt.
>"I don't need a -nanny-, if that's what you're implying."
>"There's nothing to be ashamed of, really. It happens every semester. Always a few first-year students, cute little colts or fillies like you–"
The mare gently pinched Trixie's cheek, prompting her to pull her head away. (Wait, "first-year"?)
>"–focus so much on their studies that they forget how to take care of themselves."
>"(huff) I'm not a foal, you know–"
>"That's nice, dear. Now, sit down and eat your breakfast before it gets cold."
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>>28825859 (6)

Trixie, after a bit of prodding, seated herself at the table. A bowl of plain oatmeal lay in front of her.
>"What, this mush?"
>"Well, we didn't know your preferences, and on such short notice... so, yes."
>"Um, I'll pass, actually."
She nudged the bowl away, only for the matron to nudge it right back.
>"This is no time to be picky, dear. You must be -starving-."
>"I'm fine, really, just– hey!"
The spoon was magically wrested from Trixie's control. It scooped a large serving from the bowl and presented it to her.
>"Open wide~."
>"Ohhhhno. You are not–mmnmph!"
The mare seized an opening and forced the spoon into the filly's mouth. She spit most of the oatmeal back out, making a mess of the table.
>"No! I will not be bucking force-fed like– uhn!"
Trixie was hoisted from her chair, her tail raised. The matron gave her bottom a firm swat.
>"Eep!"
>"If that's how you want it, fine." (SPANK) (SPANK) "That's another thing I have to deal with every year," (SPANK) "children who think they can do whatever they please." (SPANK) "I must say, it's been a while since I've had somepony who's both."
>"Lemme go, you–" (SPANK) "Ow!" (SPANK) "Uhn! Please..."
She fussed and whined. The mare gave her three more quick swats, then set her back in her chair. Trixie grumbled a bit, then motioned to take the spoon, only to be denied. She (begrudgingly) submitted, and allowed the mare to spoon-feed her the rest of her meal, though still voicing her displeasure at every opportunity.

>"There. Was that so bad?"
>"(grumble) (Yes.)"
>"Now, we've wasted enough time already, and I don't want you to be late for class. Go ahead and get dressed. I'll see to you in a moment."
>"...?"
The filly's scowl turned to a look of confusion.
>"...Your uniform. You -did- see the... (sigh) Actually, nevermind. At this point, it'll be quicker if I just dress you myself..."

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(That's all I have for now, but as you might imagine, little miss Trixie's not off the hook yet...)
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>>28825893
This is a hilarious segway into the rest of your planned story Bluejay. I love the setup.

I'm probably polar opposite from you in the sense of what I stress in my own stories and what I like the most, but I'm really intrigued by this one. Trixie is super cute.
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>these comments
>the DA comments
>the tags
>the based anon who tagged it "imminent spanking"
>her glorious plot
>her clothing that still leaves her rump accessible for spanks
I keep fucking cumming back to this image.

https://derpibooru.org/1080916?scope=scpe0aee679d2bb37281e2b4f897da194cac9c454492

>>28825608
>>28825761
I know for sure spanking fetishes can't always come from childhood spankings. Almost everyone was spanked in 1960s USA but only some of them ended up like DCFTEF.

I only remember being spanked once and if I was spanked more than that, it didn't even register in retrospect.

And I've had a lot of trouble making peace with my spanking fetish. Never saw it as a phase, but never knew what to do with it either. Maybe writing spank smut is my lot in life. I'm not ashamed of it but I'm scared to bring it up with anyone because of what they might think. There's single cute spanks during sex, then there's what I'm into, which is way more than that. These threads are the first time I've discussed the finer points of it. It's good to talk about a shared interest. I'm always happy when these threads are up.

>already fapped today
>new unfinished Bluejay story

>"(sigh) Then you should've asked an adult for help, sweetie. For now, you need to come back with me."
>"Um, yes, ma'am."

Time to clear my schedule. Today's big question: is 6 parts of an unfinished story to get me where I need to go?
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>>28825989
Forgot about that one. Domestic discipline with Fluttershy? Sign me up. Sombra needs to show her who's boss and heat up that cute little tushy.
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>>28825893
very nice setup. I really like it.
somehow I do enjoy age aggression stories, when they are done this way.
I also have to mention that i enjoy this pacing, like everything went out of Trixie's control ever since she drank that potion. and how she is losing control of her life.
I cannot wait to read more of this.
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>>28826803
this hurts my brain.
I have no idea what's supposed to be in front and what's on the back.
Is he fused with that thing ? is he strapped on the side ? is the frame curved to match his body ?
and where is the rest of his limbs.
How is he getting spanked? the part that is holding the brush doesn't have joints , does the entire frame move back and forth. and its not even aiming at his butt.


I'd like to think that >>28799292 is the followup to >>28825989
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>>28826803
Source? Who's the artist?
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>>28825937
Don't worry about it zad
There are people like me here who love your heavy spankings. They are the best. You can't please them all so just do what feels best for you
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anyone got drawing request ?
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>>28827499
Adult stallion getting publicly punished or in one of those spanking machines?
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>>28827499
Apple Bloom sympathetically hugging Scootaloo, who has a red butt from a spanking she got beforehand?
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>>28827499
Dizzy in diaper position looking at you pleadingly
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requests came 4+ hours late.I was already got myself full of requests from other threads/ chatrooms . and now I'm not in the drawing mood anymore.
It's not like I wont do them , but I might draw them later.

>>28827911
there you go.
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>>28825989
>Today's big question: is 6 parts of an unfinished story to get me where I need to go?
Sadly, no, but I love what's there so far. Found some Bluejay babying, bathing, and mouth soaping in another thread which was cool too.

>>28826803
>2016
>Not getting spanked by mc escher's personal spanking machine

>>28826914
Same artist for both images, I think.

>>28827865
>Adult stallion getting publicly punished
mite b cool
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>>28828395
Really cute, woox. Poor Scooty knows that her friends won't judge her for crying. Only thing I can say criticism wise is that the redness on Scoot's butt is a little hard to see, but this is still cute as a button. Thanks!
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>>28827865
>>28828451
>public spanking
For me it's a lot of work . Getting the proper composition , finding the proper scale ratio for the bg and drawing multiple ponies in the shot.

I did draw DT being spanked in public , I ended up with drawing only 2 bystanders and it took me longer than it should.
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>>28828451
Glad you're enjoying it so far.
>Found some Bluejay babying, bathing, and mouth soaping in another thread which was cool too.
Yyyeah, I still need to finish THAT story, too. Been juggling them in between university classes (and up until a month ago, I put both stories on hold to work on a third project for another board). I'd like to have at least one of the two done in the near future.
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>>28828451
that pic related is so fucking hot. casual spanking like that is just the best. like girls having a pillow fight, only naked and they're hitting each other on the ass.
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>>28828528
no worries, do it when you feel like and when you can
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>>28793682
>spanking the monkey
>literally

I keked
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bump page 8
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>>28825134
In that instant, Flora’s face totally fell. She looked at him with an expression of shock, still processing what he had just said…


But McIntosh didn’t give her any more chance to think. He pulled her forward, dragging her hooves over her floor, and grabbed her beneath her shoulders. Flora felt her body leave the ground, and suddenly, she found her voice again.


“W-Wait, dad, no, no no…” She said as she began to struggle, wriggling in his hold. “No, wait daddy!”


Mac was done. Just, done. As soon as she started to struggle, he only redoubled his grip on her and set her belly down on top of his lap. Then, her back legs began to kick, and she tried to turn her head around to look at him.


“I’m sorry! Please daddy, don’t!”


Big McIntosh, despite hearing his filly’s pleas, felt absolutely nothing tug at his heartstrings. He pressed down more tightly on her back and slid her body further across his lap, until her rump was almost laying on top of his left leg. She gave a hard flurry of kicks and raised her voice in protest, but her struggling wasn’t going to be a problem. He spread his legs apart, and with his hoof, grabbed hold of her two back legs, pushing the forcefully into the space between his knees before he closed them tight.


All of a sudden, despite Flora’s best efforts, she suddenly found herself unable to move her rear legs an inch. Raising her voice in protest, she narrowed her eyes and, with a spark of both anger and fear in her voice, she said, “You can’t do this! Mom wouldn’t let you! Where’s mom! Mom!”
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>>28829868
Her forelegs flailed out, and she desperately tried to reach back and block. But McIntosh put an end to her last act of resistance, and grabbed her forehoof and pinned it to her back, pinning it like a chicken wing. She tried to pull herself forward and away from his lap, but her efforts were totally ineffective. Flora still wasn’t done.


“Mom! I don’t believe you, she’d never! MOOOM!”


Big Mac’s face never changed. He shook his head, and blocked out her cries for help, getting himself used to not listening to a single one of her pleas. All that was left was her tail.


He probably didn’t need to tug on it, but he did anyway as he flipped her tail up and away from her bottom, pinning it tightly right beside her immobilized hoof. Tail stretched taut, Flora gave a yip and a whine of protest, but he didn’t loosen his hold on any part of it one bit. Mac could still feel her struggling, but now, her whole body was nearly immobile on his lap. Not even her last, unrestrained hoof gave her any leverage over his lap, making it impossible for her to move.


Now, there was only the matter of her butt, jutting up, bared, and bent over his knee. Big McIntosh took a deep breath, bit his lip, and raised his hoof above his head.


Flora felt the movement, and she gasped, a tear falling down her face. “No, DAD! Please, I’m sorry, DADDY!”


McIntosh took another deep breath, and said down to her with a tear in his eye, “Flora… say sorry to your mother after we’re done here.”
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>>28829878
Then, with a hard swing of his hoof, he gave his daughter Flora her first spank on her pale blue butt.


Smack!


“OW! Ow, da...”


Smack, smack!


“OWW!”


Flora’s head jerked up with the first few spanks, which left behind stinging pins and needles in her rump. She tried once again to squirm, kick her legs, block her butt, anything… but it was useless. She pushed herself up on the bed with her last free hoof, but couldn’t hold herself up for longer than a few seconds before she collapsed once again, causing her to invariably stick her rump higher in the air.


“OWW, noo, no, daddy stop! No, stop it! YOW!”


McIntosh was totally done listening to her. Her please, cries, moans and squeals, it didn’t matter. The only thing he cared about was the color of her rump, and that wasn’t even pink yet. He spanked his hoof down hard on one cheek at a time, smacking the middle of her rump at a rate of at least one spank per second.


He didn’t know if he would regret what he was about to do, tonight. Perhaps his wife would read him the riot act. But as he went over the words he had said to her in his head, he realized that technically, he had told Fluttershy that he wouldn’t INJURE Flora tonight…


And blisters didn’t count as injury.


His hoof continued to connect with loud smacks to her futilely squirming butt, igniting little firecrackers on her skin which made her squeal, squeak, and yelp in pain. Flora still tried to speak, cry out, and struggle, but the most she could get were little wiggles of her hooves and broken gasps.


“DA-hic-AAD! Nyah, aahhow, AAOW!”


SMACK! SMACK! SMACK, SMACK, SMACK!

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Whoops, didn't have my name!
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>>28829882
Big Mac knew what he was doing. He continued to use his hoof, looking for that shade of bright, glowing red to show up on her bottom cheeks. This was only the warmup, the part of the spanking that ensured she wouldn’t get any bruises when he moved on to the hairbrush lying next to his leg. Then, once her rump was properly prepared, he could spank her as long as he wanted to with her brush without having to worry about doing any damage…


...except for blisters, which by the end of this, Big Mac was determined to raise on her rump.


However, her butt was only getting pink, now, and the spanking had been going on for almost a minute. Flora had no idea that her sobs, whimpers, and attempts to struggle were only being spent on the very first part of her punishment, but her father didn’t mind if she exhausted herself early. He smacked one buttock three times in a row in the same place, bringing a short, loud howl to her throat before doing the same thing to the other side. Flora hung her head and cried.


“Daaa-aaddy, stohohoop!”


Her begging was answered with a harsh, quick flurry of hard spanks all over her reddening rump, making her cry with a whine and an attempted kick of her hind leg. McIntosh felt her leg wiggle back and forth between his knees, and thanked his decision to just get rid of her struggling from the beginning. He raised his hoof above his head for every spank, delivering controlled smacks one after the other without giving his naughty daughter a second of relief for her butt.
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>>28829888
No, Flora. Mac wasn’t going to stop until her rear was redder than he was.


Another two minutes ticked by, and Flora’s struggling, incredibly, still never let up. Neither did her pleas to stop or her half-hearted sorries. Big McIntosh saw the tear stains on the blanket beneath her face, but that wasn’t what he was interested in.


The bright red shade of her heated seat was where it needed to be, now. He swallowed, and with his eyes burning in resolve and his daughter sobbing over his knees, he reached over and picked up the hairbrush.


It was a maple wood brush, hard, lacquered, and slightly larger than his hoof. It was truly the perfect tool. However, he had to be focused, eyes locked in on her rear and very clear with his aim. His hoof was one thing, but if the brush struck anywhere but her bottom it could be very bad news.


Flora’s cries continued, but with the short pause between transitioning tools it began to die down to whimpers. She tried to prop herself up again with her last free hoof, looking over her shoulder to try and get a glimpse of her flaming rump while she gasped and sobbed.


“Daa*hic!*dyyy… I’m sorry… i-is it overrr? Owww...”


Big McIntosh gripped the hairbrush tighter. Then, to aim he set the cool wood down on the middle of her soon to be blistered cheeks. He felt Flora shiver at the touch, and she did a little clench of her rear. He sighed, and stared down at his daughter’s rump with conviction.
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>>28829895
She still tried to see what was happening behind her, but she couldn’t get a good look with her father’s hoof pressing down on her back. She sniffled, and asked with fear in her voice, “Daddy? What is *hic!* thaaat?”


Mac tapped her bottom with the brush three times, and raised it up to his head level. He swallowed, and answered Flora.


“Your hairbrush, hon.”


Flora had only a second to comprehend before he swatted it down, landing with a sharp THWAP on the center of her butt.


Flora’s mouth suddenly gaped open, the breath choking in her lungs before she finally released the howling cry of pain. “Aa, AAHA! OWWW! DAAD!”


The sharpness of the pain that now blazed on her bottom was far worse than even her father’s spanks delivered by his own, massive hoof. The way she shouted his name was almost accusatory: “How could you do something that hurts so much!”


Steeling himself, Big McIntosh raised the hairbrush again, and delivered another whack that rippled the skin of her right cheek. Flora raised her head again, crying even louder. “AAHH DADDY NOO! WAAH!”


THWACK! CRACK! FWAP!


Big McIntosh began. He spanked slowly and methodically, hardly needing to make any adjustments to where the brush landed at all despite his errant daughter’s best efforts to wiggle her butt away from the punishment. He landed two spanks in the same place sometimes, and other times he spanked six times on one side from top to bottom before doing it to her other cheek. But most of the time, he simply swatted back and forth, each spank hard enough to send faint waves through the skin of her pudgy butt, slightly plump from a late fillyhood of relative inactivity.
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>>28829907
Flora blubbered and cried tears that streaked down her face. It hurt so much! She couldn’t even imagine this ever happening to her, and yet here she was, laying on her daddy’s lap for what seemed like forever, the hairbrush continuing to spank her rump relentlessly despite her cries and begs to stop. She thought it was over when he stopped before, and she had felt so relieved, but now it was becoming clear to the filly that she was in a far worse predicament than she ever imagined.


“Uhhuhuhhh, WAAH NOHOO! OW OW OWWW! OWIE, AAOW!”


She once again tried to inch forward on his lap, and now that her body was beginning to be covered in sweat she managed to slightly slip. But it worked to her disadvantage: with the lower portion of her butt more accessible, Big McIntosh switched targets from her now blazing red bottom to the relatively untouched undercurves. He raised his left leg up from the bed, bending her butt at a sharper angle than before, and began spanking away at the place where buttocks and thigh meet.


This made Flora’s face absolutely erupt with tears, and she bawled into the blanket. “GYAHH! Nyehehhh, AOW OWW OWOWOWOW! NOOAAHAHAA!”


After at least a dozen punishing spanks on each cheek in that spot, he moved back up to the much redder skin, returning to the spanking proper. Flora’s body, as much as it could, writhed from side to side and her hoof aimlessly reached forward, swinging back and forth while she sobbed and choked.
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>>28829917
McIntosh tried his best to spread the redness evenly across her entire butt, working to tan it so red that it would match the color of his own coat. He noticed that now, finally, Flora was no longer telling him to stop, calling out for his wife, or doing anything other than cry her eyes out. Her hind hooves kicked slightly beneath him, but she was resisting less, now.


This was getting through to her. He could feel it. He only wished he didn’t have to get to this point for it to finally start sinking in, but from the start, he somehow knew this was what it was going to take. A spanking was like antibiotics: you either give your kid enough, or don’t give them any at all.


He never wanted to do this again. So, he had to be sure.


The spanking continued.


THWACK, SMACK, CRACKK! WHAP, WHAP, WHAP!


Flora moaned piteously into the bed in between her weeps and howls of pain. She tried so hard to move her rump away from the roasting it was getting, but there was simply nothing she could do. Her face was a disaster, smudged with tears and mucus from her snout, and her head swam.


Images, snapshots of memories were beginning to break through her mind. Pictures of a classmate of hers walking into school one day with a red rump, trying so hard to hide it from everyone but failing to do so. Everyone had heard she had cheated on her math test, and weren’t surprised at what they saw the next day.


[i]Boy,[/i] Flora had thought, [i]I’m sure glad my parents don’t do that to me![/i]


And now, here she was, suffering the most horrible paddling on her rump that just wouldn’t end. She had never seen her father so angry before, not even close, but now she knew the consequences…
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>>28829927
But then, it began to occur to her. The thought stabbed her deeper than the pain of the bonfire that raged on her crimson bottom cheeks and would’ve drawn tears even if her rump wasn’t engulfed in flames.


It wasn’t because he was angry. It was WHY he was angry.


THWACK, THWACK, WHACK!


“OWWOWOW AAHAHOWW!”


She closed her weepy eyes and could clearly see her mother, standing across from her as she walked through the door. Holding her bag in her hand, looking at her with hurt and anger in her eyes. Her mother dropping the bag in front of her, and asking, with a sob, why her money was missing.


WHACK WHACK, WHACK WHACK!


And it wasn’t mom who shouted, oh no. It had been her, Flora. A demand to just leave her alone. Shouting about how unfair it was that she was still grounded when her grades were so much better. Yelling directly into her sweet mother’s face...


THWACK, THWACK…


And then, in a fit of rage, she had thrown the bag right back at her.
CRACK!


Flora, at long last, understood why. She understood why she was here right now, pinned to her daddy’s lap while he fried her tushy wine red. Understood the magnitude of her behavior. Her father’s voice echoed in her head.


[i]She cries… wonders why…[/i]


And now, the tears that began pouring out her eyes were not just from the steady spank of the hairbrush. Through the loud, desperate bawls she cried to the ceiling, came another cry for her mother. But this time, it wasn’t a cry for help…


“MOOOMMY, I’M SOOORRYYYY! AAAOW, I’M SOOORRYY! MOMMY!”


It was a cry for forgiveness.
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That's the rest of what I have for now. I'm back at work doing real life things currently, but next time I get a long break I'll get back to work on the rest. I just thought the thread could use a content bump.
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>>28829931
...your childhood was fucking scary, man.
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>>28829931
What can I say - completely not my fetish.
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Yeah, I think my next one is going to be... not this. Sorry, guys.
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>>28793961
we need more adult rarity spankings, white bottom turned red is just too perfect.
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Hey guys check this out a female Zephyr.
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>>28799480
always loved this one. what a plum backside, some brat's bottoms were born to be spanked i guess.
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>>28818773
>I have a personal headcanon that Rara was spanked well into her teen years
shes always seemed like the type i agree

>>28812195
this is amazing need more of lovebutt
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>>28830015
Don't apologize man
This stuff is boner, hard and merciless... unlike that other weak patting wimps like
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>>28830015

Haven't read through it yet, but never apologize for the heavy stuff, Zad! Write what is boner for you and remember that there are folks here who really enjoy that heavy stuff. Besides, I love how realistic you make your details. The first time you described the goosebumps, I was like, holy shit, this actually happens and I never ever thought to include it.

Not everyone can write thrashings of that level or the super heavy stuff well.
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I think what I'll do is finish Swinging Your Hoof Down, and then get to work on another story with Rarity or Cadence/Shining Armor. I'll try to tone it down this next time a little bit. Glad some people enjoy this one, even if it isn't other people's cups of tea. I did sexy spanking before with McIntosh and Cheerilee and people liked it, so maybe I'll sink my teeth into that again.
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Also, if people want to read DC's new story on the forums, it's really good. Here's the link: http://mlpgeneral.com/spanking/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=94
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>>28830646
This thread needs more sexy and parental/sexy spanking
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>>28830820
Then write some yourself and stop complaining
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>>28830880
don't be rude, he's not complaining
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Dizzy has a spanking and humiliation fetish
Sometimes she knows when you are going to visit her family and then she acts like a clumsy filly
She leaks all over her legs on the thought of being pulled over her mommy's knee and getting a spanking in front of you
she would even spread her hindlegs a little
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>>28828220
Couldn't get it exactly as you wanted.
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>But aaah waaawnt it naaayow-YIPE!
She instinctively recoils from a sharp slap on her bum.
>If you throw a tantrum about this, AB, ah *will* take you over mah knee
She's never gotten a spanking before.
>Y-Yes, sis.
She says, rubbing her butt.
>Good girl.
You say, bending over to kiss her on the forehead.
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>>28831719
It's not a bat
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>>28831729
That was short, and really sweet. Threats of spankings, especially first spankings for some reason, are super boner inducing for me.
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Having spent the last several minutes with your no-longer-bawling adoptive granddaughter in your arms, you decide to ask her a question.
>So, you ever gotten a spanking before, champ?
Scootaloo wipes her nose and lifts her head up from your chest to look up at you.
>Um… Uh-Huh. Rainbow spanked me back at the campsite for getting myself in danger.
>Really? She barely knew you, right?
>Yeah.
>Huh.
She settles her head against your chest and closes her eyes as you stroke her mane.
You've only been babysitting her for a few days, but you've already come to love Scootaloo as much as your own daughter, the mare who adopted her.
'Course, you're not nearly as proud of her as you are of Dashie.
Scootaloo isn't a world-saving-world-class-athlete-Wonderbolt.
But she's still pretty great.
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>>28831878
Thanks!
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>>28832057
Awww. Post-spanking cuddles.
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>>28832057
Good to have you aboard, Chuck!
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>>28832142
>>28832171
Hopefully, I've made Krishna proud.
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>>28832531
He's a sucker for Scooty Booty.
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bump page 8
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>>28831719
those eyes...... so seductive......

This filly, I swear to Christ
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>>28832057
Honestly, it occurs to me that there's absolutely no chance in heaven or hell that I'm not the first person ever to do "Rainbow Dad spanks Scootaloo
>>28832646
Ew.
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>>28833490
Just meant that Scootaloo spankings are a favorite of his.
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For the sake of curiosity, which fillies/colts/mares/stallions do you think have the most spankable rear ends? Which ones do you think would lay more still and take their spankings vs. struggle and kick?
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>>28833575
Rainbow Dash would be a tough one to get under control. Pinkie prolly has the most spankable bottom, but the most fun one to spank would be Rarity for me. Watching her white rump turn red while she whines and squeals and her eye makeup leaves black and blue streaks down her face. She'd wriggle and do her petite hoofy kicks, but she wouldn't be so hard to restrain. Besides, she needs an attitude adjustment if you ask me.
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>>28833575
Sweetie's pretty spankable. Not to mention, she'd probably kick and squirm quite a bit. Scootaloo, on the other hand, would probably try to keep calm, then break down and end up kicking herself for not being able to look tough, like this anon here >>28822974 said.
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>>28833827
Sweetie a qt, but dang it, her butt really is just made for spanking. Especially some hairbrush paddling for those white little cheeks to turn them red.
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>>28833801
totally agreed on rarity being the most fun, i'd love to hear her whine complain and beg as she goes from pale white to bright red. i can picture her breaking down from refined and proud to sore sorry and crying. she'd last a while but when her spanker takes her own brush to her bottom she'd crumble quickly.
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>>28833575
the least to crumble have to be Twilight.
she would take the spanking seriously and wont struggle.
But in other terms I always picture her as the one enjoying it. unlike the other mane 6.
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>>28821059
It says oc right in the file name
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>>28834272
Twilight is one of those ponies who I could even see spanking herself with her magic, holding a brush, and then covering her scarlet covered bottom cheeks with a spell so she can go to school without anypony finding out.
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With Discord holding her like this, it's clear he thinks her backside is not off-limits. Combine that with >>28791909 and we are in for an interesting scene.

>>28831402
A version of this, with a colt intentionally acting up when his family is hosting other ponies for dinner, would be hot for me. This post is also hot but I don't know if I could write it that well.
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>>28835078
>With Discord holding her like this, it's clear he thinks her backside is not off-limits.
Greentext when?
Always liked the Discord/Celestia pair, Discord/Fluttershy is just subpar
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>>28834987
i could see this, locks herself in the bathroom at night while spike is asleep and tans her own bottom since no one else is going to do it for her. now i want a green where her illusion covering it up falls off somehow and half the town sees her purple flank is bright red.
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>>28835226
Penis material right there
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>>28798347

Don't worry, I'm right here, and I have a little treat. I've been revising UCB 3 a little and added a scene to the start. Enjoy!

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Eerie red light filled the hive of the changelings as Chrysalis stamped and stomped her way through the halls. Not from the queen’s horn, no. Nor was it from her hateful eyes. Even the normally green lights on the ceiling were nothing compared to the ruby glow coming from the queen’s cheeks. Both sets, in fact. The front cheeks shining with embarrassment and the rear ones glowing a red so bright the smallest hatchlings were getting excited about Santa.

Chrysalis had finally decided, due to the night previous, that she’d had enough. It was time to end the reign of this stupid hairbrush over her flanks. Last night had been the absolute worst…one indulgence in rage, one thrown object, and she had found herself over her bedside for an hour while the brush reddened her bottom. The final straw, though, had come this morning. Upon arriving to her throne room with a thick cushion and taking her seat, Chrysalis had immediately leapt up with a cry of pain. Looking beneath the cushion, she found one of the hatchlings’ toys…a figurine from some show about a pony in space, complete with Karate Chop action. Sadly for her flank, it had karate chopped her right through the cushion.
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It was the final straw for the queen, who now stamped her way through the hive, Hairbrush and toy held in her magical grip. Into the Chamber of Understanding she made her way, pushing aside scientists and mages alike with her legs before (gently) slamming the brush’s box onto the table.

“I want this thing disenchanted and I want it disenchanted yesterday. I don’t care if you have to steal that time travel spell from Canterlot’s archives in order to do it, just get it done!” she barked, glaring all around her, especially at the changeling standing next to the lever. Kronk at least had the decency to look sheepish and hold up a tray of what appeared to be Spinach puffs.

Rolling her eyes at the attempt to placate her, Chrysalis swooped out of the room, pausing only to grab a puff on her way out. The guy was an idiot, but he could cook…

Shaking her head, Chrysalis made her way next to the hatchling nursery, holding the buzz toy high. “And just whose is this?” she asked, venom dripping from her words as she looked all around the room, the little ones having stopped playing the instant they saw how angry Queen-Mama was. Slowly, ever so slowly, one of the little ones raised his tarsus.
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“And do you know where I found this?” she asked, receiving a headshake in response as the young drone began to look scared.

“Why, I found it on my throne, when I sat on it.” The queen responded, smiling a little as she dropped the toy into that hatchling’s chest, eliciting a sigh of relief from him. “Oh stop it.” She snapped, “I’m not about to break your favorite toy just because you didn’t pick it up. However…” she started, then moved in a flash.

The hatchling found himself grabbed and turned across Chrysalis’s knees as the queen sat (gingerly) on his bed, magically grabbing a nearby hairbrush. “Maybe it’s time I took a leaf from the pony’s book and began using a hairbrush instead of a corner and chores to discipline you when you break the rules. Now, are little hatchlings allowed on my throne?” she asked, receiving only a squeak in response.

Swinging the brush down into that chitinous flank, Chryssy heard a sharp yelp from the hatchling in her hold, who immediately began squirming, trying to escape. “I didn’t hear that answer. Now, are little hatchlings allowed on my throne?” she asked again, hairbrush poised up and in the air.

“N…No, Mama…” the little one…Scramble, that was his name…managed to stammer out. Chrysalis responded to the answer with a pair of blows, causing Scramble to yelp louder and begin to cry. “That’s right.” She continued, “Little hatchlings are not allowed on my throne. Yet I found this toy sitting right in the middle of it. Care to explain how it got there?”
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“I...I was…playing and OWWY!” Scramble started to say, only to be interrupted by a trio of spanks from the brush, his chitin now glowing a healthy blue from the repeated impacts. Chrysalis wasn’t being anywhere near as harsh as Shining Armor and Cadance were to her, though. He /was/ just a hatchling, after all.

“So you were playing on my throne, where you had no right to be, hm?” she scolded, spanking her little one twice more, then raising his flank to attack his sit-spots with a separate pair of swats.

Poor Scramble couldn’t take it anymore, breaking down and bawling from the pain in his bottom. “I was just playing pretend! I was being a cool queen like Mama!” he managed to say before succumbing entirely to the tears.

Just like that, Chrysalis stopped, looking down at the child before picking him up and giving him a loving hug. Setting him on his bed, she strode out without another word...chiefly because she didn’t want to seem merciful or let her hatchlings see her wipe away a tear.

Still, she couldn’t deny…that had been rather enjoyable. Forcing Scramble to accept what he had done wrong, holding him down like that…that had really been exciting. Almost like executing a military maneuver. She could see why Shining and Cadance used it on Flurry now. Heck, she could even see using it when she got her…her…

Suddenly, the queen’s face split into a nasty grin, as evil as she had ever smiled. There was even time today to do it, if she could slip in properly. Which, given palace security, wouldn’t even be difficult.
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So, what do you lot think of this: Twilight is convicted of some crime (possibly the events of Lesson Zero?) and is sentenced to spend a year with her parents, receiving regular spankings.
However, she is given a choice: spend that year as an adult, and mostly be treated as one, but also get much harsher punishments,
OR: spend the year as a filly and get much lighter punishments, but also be treated like a little filly.
For example: as an adult, she can stay up until 3:00 AM and swear as much as she likes, (though if she swears at her parents, she might get smacked in the mouth and told to go to her room.), but as a filly, she might be allowed to stay up until midnight at the latest, and any swearing would result in a mouth-soaping, and possibly a hoof-spanking, depending on the word.
>>28835545
>>28835558
Christ on a bike, these are hot!
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>>28835639
>>28835646
>>28835652
>>28835662
My butthole clenches with excitement.
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>>28835662
I love basically all of the author's stories on here, but I always find yours to be the most amusing of the bunch, Nomine. Makes me chuckle and get a boner at the same time.

Also, Chrysalis getting a full hour over the bed with the brush? Me gusta.
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>>28835842
I like it a lot, except the year long time period is really too much. MAYBE a month at most.
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>>28835170
I'm the opposite, Discoshy is bae

He also gives Fluts a big, squeezy hug in the finale where he has his hand on her rump, too. She blushes.
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>>28835593
All of Sweetie Belle's clothes are off from the waist down, unf. The way she's holding her own panties like they're a handkerchief is adorable, and her bare feet just make her look even more exposed and helpless to escape her spanking.
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bumpity
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>>28835842
we need more adult sparkle spankings, im on board. i can't decide if her or rarity is more likely to own a spanking machine they regularly strap themselves into.
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>>28836989
I think it would be Twi's dirtiest little secret. Knowing how obsessive she can get, it's probably been a thing for her since she was a little filly.
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>>28837185
i can see that, anytime she feels shes getting out of control she goes to her 'thinking room' and comes out much later calmed down but sitting funny.
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Alright, she's been in the corner long enough.
>How ya doin', Sweetie?
>Um… I'm okay, mommy.
>You sure?
Her rump is still red.
>Alright then, let's get you out of that corner, Sweetie.
You lift her up and take her over to the couch.
>Oh, by the way, Sweetie…
You give her three good smacks straight to the base of the crack.
She stiffens up and starts to sob, thinking her spanking is going to continue.
>…That was for peeking earlier.
You pull her into a tight hug.
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>>28837428
Daaaw, poor Sweetie.

>She stiffens up and starts to sob, thinking her spanking is going to continue.

Misunderstandings where the spankee thinks that they aren't done and that they have a long way to go make my dick so hard. I don't know why.
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Hey, all. There's a thread about the US election going on in the forum right now, so if you have anything you want to contribute to that, just mosey on over.
>>28837708
It's good to know I've made you hard.
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>>28835842
I want to see Twilight get a mouthsoaping, so I guess I would go for filly. But I do ask, would she looks like an adult or transformed to a filly?
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>>28838138
By 'adult or filly' I just meant that she would either retain her current physical form, that of a grown mare, or be physically transformed into the form of a young (eight or so) filly
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>>28838026
someone in bat thread was nice enough to draw Dizzy. check the rest of the images in his post.
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Not sure if anypony agrees, but I have always wanted princess celestia getting the trio of spanking, corner time and mouthsoaping. I like her as a princess, but with all her power and being treated like that is a large amount of humiliation. Which I love.
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>>28838498
This little minx is getting popular! Ooh, and is that a handprint? Guess Anon is babysitting and caught her doing something naughty.
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I need tips
I'm currently writing in green style.
I found myself writing starting a lot of sentences like this.

>He moved his face.....
>his lips touched ....
>her butt jumped ....
>he start pulling it...
>he used his hooves to spr....

is there a way around this ?
cause somehow it feels redundant . He did that ,then she did that , then he did this ... etc
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>>28838654
Substitute "He" for the protagonist's name (i.e. Anon, Jim or whatever) or refer to the spankee by name.

Talk about what he or she's doing at the start of the sentence, like "The squirming continued as the paddle kept whacking down" or "the spank made her butt jump" or "Bawling filled the room" or whatnot.

Since it's green, you can get away with not typing up full sentences from beginning to end for each line of green. That can make it so your lines don't start out with the same subjects all the time.

TLDR just experiment with it, try and look at some other greens from the pastebin to get a feel for what makes some of them different. You'll get there!
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>>28838697
>Talk about what he or she's doing at the start of the sentence, like "The squirming continued as the paddle kept whacking down
thanks this would do.
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bump 4 Trump
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>>28839339
Bump 4 the possibility of someone decent in 2020
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This next story is a part of a flashback Applejack was having during my long Evil scientist story.
as I was writing that flashback scene. I thought that I couldn't do that Flashback justice. it's a good material . and can have its own structured story.
I then expanded that little flashback story into self sustained one.
I hope you'd enjoy it.

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>Applejack was at her teenage. (same age shown in When apple lies episode)
>It all started when she overheard 3 old mares talking inside a train.
>one of them went on and on talking about her new tea recipe made from gingeroot.
>the other two got bored of her bragging.
>enough of your gingeroot. why don't you just shove it inside your butt like u used to.
>that babbling old mare stopped talking and her cheeks start blushing.
>they other 2 laughed at her.
>you know when she was young she used to cut the tip of the ginger root and she ... *whisper *Whisper
>oh no . they laughed.
>and she was enjoying it ?
>yea and they laughed again.
>the other one was embarrassed. and looked away. "meh good old days." she said.
>curiosity got the best of applejack and decided to try it.
>one day Granny smith was out to visit one of the apple family out town.
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>>28839647
>she stole one of the ginger they were planting and went inside the barn.
>she peeled the tip of the gingeroot . creating a cone shaped tip.
>she lied on the floor of the barn. she spread her legs to raise her butt up.
>while holding the ginger in her front hoof.
>she grab it to her back to be inserted inside.
>the tip of the ginger root touched her butt. she clenched it as a reflex.
>the peeled tip got inserted in.
>then she tried to push it in. but then her butt pushed it back.
>the ginger juices was lubricating her. making it easier to be inserted.
>she took a deep breath and shoved it in.
>it went smoothly inside and got stuck there by the neck she made.
>at first it felt like a butt plug.
>few moment later the burning sensation started.
>her butt hole start twitching.
>she clenched her butt.
>but by doing that she squeezed the juices out of the roots.
>It started to burn her even more.
>it was the good kind of hormonal burning sensation.
>she let out an mmmm sound.
>at that moment big mac stormed inside the barn.
>she eeeped! and hid behind a haystack that was lying in on of the corners.
>big mac went straight toward that haystack.
>oh no no noo .
>he turned around and laid on the hay stack.
>phew. I thought he was coming for me.
>but what is he doing in the barn alone?
>she removed her hat and took a little cat like peak at him.
>He was laying there with a book in his hoof. 'oh hes just reading..
>oh rotten apple. he's gonna be here for awhile.
>what am I gonna do...

http://www.strawpoll.me/11609330

A : she jump at him and scared him.
B : she remain there. and wait.
C : she go out tell him about the ginger root that is stuck inside her butt, and she was masturbating to the sensation and kinda needs more privacy.
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>>28839661
>apple Jack remaind motionless for few seconds.
>the uncontrollably twitching of her butt caused the burning sensation and her hormones .
>The ginger root inside her gave her a boost of pleasuring feelings.
>she moved her hips up and down creating a slow humping movement.
>she started breathing heavly.
>she was kinda sweaty , and her cheeks were turning red.
>she was aroused alright but she couldn't do anything about it.
>dang it Mac. how long are you gonna stay there.
>Mac, flipped the page and continue reading.
>her pussy was itching for a touch.
>she moved one of her hooves between her back legs.
>she touched herself.
>her horsey pussy gone wild reacting to her hoof.
>it started to wink and clench hard and uncontrollable.
>the pleasure was too much for her. she couldn't resist touching herself more.
>as long as I don't make a sound he wont notice.
>what if he noticed what would he do to me.
>that would be so humiliating.
>she bit her lips and clopped more.
>she was out of breath. she needed more air, and started to breath from her mouth.
pant# pant# pant#
>oh shoot this is getting out of control, I should stop.
>her body wasn't responding to her commands and her hooves continued scratching.
>I need to stop sstoop , mooveing my my.
MMmmmmf
>she did it , she let out a moan.
>this snapped her out of it. and stopped moving.
>her bother heard it.
>Whos there ?
>he closed the book and stood up looking in the back.
>it's me.
>applejack what are you doing back there, and how long you've been...
>he saw her wet hoof and her mare juices that was dripping of in between her legs.
>hey! were you masturbating in the barn ?
>her face was flushed red. she looked away from him and said no.
>No? what did we tell you about lying AppleJack.
>go to your room you are grounded for a week.
>A week ? but the summer road race is coming tomorrow ..
>Enough! no arguing go to your room now!
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>>28839756
>she lowered her ears and nodded.
>big mac sat down on the haystack crossing his hooves together, while glaring at her.
>she lowered her tail trying to hide the buttplug. and slowly walked out of her hiding.
>as she was passing him she stepped on her tail and lost her equilibrium.
>she fell right across his lap.
>He grabbed her from falling over her face.
Silly applejack she is Still being clumsy as ever. Big mac thought to himself.
>you ok ?
>umm yes. she was sweating and panicking. her butt is exposed.
>which immediately caught big mac's attention.
>"What is that!"
>Applejack grabbed her mane and covered her blushed face with it.
>big mac took a closer look at it. he tried grabbing it with his hooves but it couldn't get a hold of it.
>He moved his face to it. and grabbed the tip of it with his teeth.
>his lips touched applejack.
>a sensational Jolt of electricity ran through her body caused her to jump a bit.
>the gingeroot was being pulled but it was kinda stuck. so he was kinda pulling her butt hole out.
>The gave appleJack a mixed emotions. it made her do a silly expression.
>her mouth was wide opened with her tongue slacking out.
>he used his hooves to spread her open and pulled.
>Pop! its out.
>Then he spat it in his hoof to take a look at it.
>He soon recognized what it is from the after taste.
>that's ... that's Ginger. he said that while looking at the phallic shaped peeled ginger root.
>dang it apple jack why are you acting like this.
>you know better than not to waste our food.
>and this is ginger , you know how hard it for us to get it?
>why are you being this stupid ?
>answer me.
>She was way to embarrassed to talk.
>her mind was kinda occupied with her still twitching butthole.
>I don't think grounding you is enough.
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>>28839762

Big mac was thinking 'If only granny smith was here. she would know how to teach her a lesson. he then remembered the last thing she told him before going out ,
"Mac you are grown stallion. so you gonna be in change and be the head stalion of the house."
mac continued thinking 'well I guess I have to do it'
>he raised his hoof and smacked his sister's butt.
>apple Jack jumped in shock. she wasn't prepared for it.
then another Smack! landed on her other cheek!
>Aawo , what the hey are you doing?
>spanking you isn't that obvious ?
>A spanking ? I'm a grown mare you can't spank me
>spanking is for little fillies.
>Does a grown mare do what you just did ?
>she went silent.
>Thought so , you were acting like a filly and you should be punished like a filly.
>but.
>yes your butt gonna get it. and the pain will remind you of what you did.
Smack! Smack! Smack!
the spanking continued.
>She wanted to argue about it , but she was kinda ashamed of what she did.
Smack! Smack! Smack!
Mac, continued smacking her butt cheeks.
>AJ just laid there on his lap and took it.
>wait... why am I not doing anything.... He can't just do this to me.
>he is not my parent , he is just my brother.
>he has no rights to do this.
>furiously she pushed him away. wanting to get off his lap.
>hold still. her brother said.
>no , I wont gonna lay there and take it.
>her rump moved away from her brother's thighs
>Mac, felt a faint loss of his authority.
>that got him pissed.
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>>28839786
>he firmly grabbed her waist securely and pulled her back into his lap.
>no AppleJack, you have to accept my punishment.
>you have no right to.
>Yes I have. I'm your big brother.
>but you are not in charge of me.
>but I am, Granny Smith left me in charge of the whole farm. including you.
>I don't agree with that.
>sorry but you have no say in this matter.
>how can granny put a good for nothing self righteous pony like you in charge that aint fair.
>a vain snapped on big mac's forehead.
>he firmed his grip on her waist. but applejack didn't sit there. she was squirming around still wanting to get off.
>Hold still,
>the squirming continued.
>I said stop ...
>applejack was still kicking and twisting her body around.
>Mac decided to enforce his authority.
Smack!
he hit her really hard.
>she gasped ! and held still for a moment.
>now I got your attention.
>no , that was nothing , she continued squirming.
>big mac got no choice. and let out a ferrous spanks one after another.
Smack! smack! smack! smack!
>the spanking was a little to much for her but she still holding it together.
Smack smack smack
>she felt a helpless , unable to get off and losing the battle to her brother.
>AJ thought to her self 'dang it I cannot win against my brother anymore. here I am laying on his lap being treated like a little filly.
>well I am just a little filly to him now. his muscular hoof grabbing me, and I am unable to shack it off.
>He is strong, and sweaty. I can smell his sweat.
>then suddenly snapped , oh noes what am I thinking he is my brother...
>big mac continued to spank her but not as hard rate that he started. but he was also silent and just delivered the spanking. one spank after another...
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>>28839792
Smack smack smack
>i cannot have dirty thoughts about my brother... who is currently spanking me ... hitting me on my butt... with his hoof... strong stallion hoof... touching my private parts... while looking at it.
>as she was having these thoughts in her head, the spanking pain faded away.
>she stopped kicking and fighting . and received her spanks.
>she moved her rump with each spank matching the spanking rhythm .
>her but thole was still twitching and burning...
Smack!
>she felt a sharp burning sensation running from her but thole. that feeling sank away with the stinging sensation she was feeling in her rump.
>she was getting aroused by this.
>she still didn't cum ealier.
>she panicked.
>she wanted to avoid anymore awkwardness .
>if he continues she would probably lose it.
>she was enduring so much stimulation.
>she wanted it to end.
>I'm..
Smack ! smack!
>I'm sorry brother..
>he stopped.
>you're sorry ?
>yes, I am sorry ...
>Mac was waiting for her to continue but she didn't say anything ..
>sorry about what ?
>he asked her that to make sure that she legitimately learned her lesson.
>she blushed and hesitated... but she said
>I am sorry for touching my self ...
>and ?
>and using the food as .. as..tools for..
>and ... ?
>Mac know how embarrassed and ashamed she was. but he really wanted her to think of what she did.
>I am sorry for being irresponsible little filly and .. and.. being rude and unrespectful to you.
>good. listen appleJack I don't want to do this to you again. you are a grown mare so be responsible for your own actions.
>with a tear in her eyes she nodded.
>no go to your room. you are still being grounded.
>and she left the barn and went straight to her room.
>she laid on her belly and stuffed her face on her pillow.
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>>28839884
>AJ you fool why did I that today of all other days. and my idiot brother had to butt in...
>she started massaging her red well spanked butt.
>I couldn't have waited 1 more day ... tomorrow he was going on a date and I would have been all alone...but no i was to eager to try it.
>stupid ginger... I doubt that I will use it again.. but dang it Mac you had to embarrass me like that.
>Pulling it out of my butt. and he had to use his mouth... he almost kissed my ...
>she let out a sigh... her hooves went from massaging her butt to her pussy.
>I'm such a shameless pony... Here I am touching myself again right after I was punished for it...
>and she got herself busy that day. and didn't leave the room.

at that moment Mac was still in the barn ...
>whew that was kinda embarrassing. good thing she was so occupied with her punishment and didn't notice my boner.
>he took a look at his spanking hoof. it was all wet with her love juice.
>such a shameless little sister I have. getting all aroused from being spanked.
>i hope I don't do this to applebloom thou . it's way too awkward.
>he unconsciously sniffed his hoof.
>I wonder If all other mares do this.
>especially that blond unicorn.. the one cheerilee hooking me up with...
>in his daydream fantasy he imagined that mare calling him.
>what is it.
>there she was standing there blushing with a naughty look on her face.
>big and handsome mac , I need your help .
>she turned around and showed him her butt.
>there was a carrot stuffed inside her butthole . "help me its stuck and I cannot get it out."
>Mac rolled his eyes and pulled it of
she moaned in pleasure.
>big mac I'm a naughty and horny little mare what are you gonna do about it.
>Mac's dick went full boner mode.
>he snapped out of his fantasy . dang it appleJack.
>he want behind the haystack and start masturbating.
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>>28839889
The End.

Sorry that I didn't expand a lot on the spanking itself. cause it's not my specialty.
The pony Big mac mentioned is currently unnamed.
you can see her here derpibooru.org/1268049
it's just a little backstory twist I loved to add.

As I mentioned this was only a flashback. so some story elements and areas might feel a little rushed. as I added and edit them today.
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Sorry I haven't been keeping up with the thread tonight. My mind has been elsewhere. if fapping can drown out this sorrow, I will do so tomorrow.
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>>28839982
when I saw this scene for the first time, my jaw dropped and so did my balls
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>>28839762
>ginger root
>up sweet Applejack's butthole
>masturbating with it
>spanked for it
>cums on brother's hooves
>more masturbation

This is speaking my language, woox. My dick is twitching.
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Election day slowness
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>>28839982
This scene along with her using her butt to bounce the rubber ball in Buckball Season makes me suspect she has a slight spanking fetish in the real show. She does seem to have a slight butt fixation maybe just a bit.
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spank that flank
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>>28839982
Oh Pinkie, never change
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What is you guys' favorite spanking implements? Does it very by the character, either spanker or spankee?

Mine is the hairbrush, followed closely by the switch. Uppity characters like Rara or Diamond Tiara do best with a good bottom paddling with a hairbrush.
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>>28838637
Maybe she wanted Anon to catch her on doing something naughty. And after being undressed and exposed to him and feeling his hands slap her butt she feels so ashamed that she actually creamed herself. She only hopes Anon won't notice her shaking, massive blush and wetness.
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>>28842465
Hairbrush it is for me too
It's such a domestic and intimate tool because it's short ranged which follows usually by otk. And it's basically in every house and bad fillies (or mares) cringe everytime they see it lying around innocently when they got a bad brushing coming for bedtime
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>>28842535
>everytime they see it lying around innocently when they got a bad brushing coming for bedtime
Hnnng
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>>28842465
>parental/intimate spanking
>scheduled daily spanks
>no tools! only hand on a naked butt
>spanking position: being held close, hugging and reasuring the spanked pony
>massaging and sexual stuff, fingering after the spanking deed
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>>28842590
https://static1.e621.net/data/e5/9c/e59c30d444817b826c80130d55206d71.jpg
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It's amazing, just how perfectly suited to spankings the ponies of this show are, emotionally and physically.
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>>28843119
Not really, they're too innocent for such a thing and spanking is no-no in most counties on the world
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>>28842465
>Favourite implement.
Probably hairbrush. Unless we're counting hooves/hands, in which case it's a tie.

>Favourite position.
Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeefinitely OTK.
Personally, I'm unlikely to ever enjoy a story with little to no after-spanking comfort quite as much as I would if it had some, no matter how well it's written.
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>>28829931
McIntosh’s hoof had fallen into an unthinking rhythm. His daughter’s rump was so hot that it radiated heat onto his restraining leg, but the hairbrush didn’t stop falling down with harsh thwacks and cracks onto each crimson red cheek.


But Flora’s broken wail, such a loud and desperate cry for mercy, verging on hysterical, suddenly unclouded his vision. The hairbrush, raised for yet another punishing spank to his daughter’s rump, froze next to his head.


Flora’s body was so tense before, at the start of the punishment, but now, McIntosh felt all of the tension leave her muscles. Her body slumped forward, and while her immobilized butt still twitched and weaved slowly from side to side, it was like all of the resistance in her body had disappeared in a sudden flash.


Her weeps and shrill moans of agony never stopped, though. More cries of “sorry” and “Mommy” left her, in between gasps and sobs. Mucus and tears soaked the bed below her face.


McIntosh stared down at his daughter. The hoof which held her hairbrush trembled, and soon his eyes weren’t looking at her, but through her instead.
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>>28843406
He was no longer in his daughter’s room. His mind was somewhere else, a whole new location. Now, he could feel the prickling of hay on his belly, and the red wood wall of the barn lay in front of his face. But the wall was a blur, as his eyes were filled with tears.


The switch wasn’t stopping. It kept falling, over and over, never ending, thwick thwick thwicking across his rump. Every spank felt like a razor blade slashed across his bare skin, and every new one built upon the pain of the next. It had been unbearable from almost the very start. He’d screamed, wailed, begged, struggled, and even tried to get away. But he was only a colt. His father was stronger than him.


McIntosh didn’t remember when it had stopped. All he remembered was coming to his senses, the sun low in the sky, and the absolutely horrific, blistering agony radiating from his rear. His head swam, and his chest hurt from sobbing so hard.


It took him ten full minutes to walk home, all alone. Blisters and welts, some burst and some newly formed, felt like needles digging into his skin. When he finally made it up the stairs, he had slowly dragged himself into bed, trying to sleep on his belly, his pillow hugged tightly to his chest. But he failed, unable to block out the pain long enough to close his eyes and drift away.
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>>28843428
All of this flashed in front of his eyes in warp speed, until finally the distance in his stare disappeared, and he was back in the room.


“Mohoomm, AAAaahaah! S-So--rry, Mommy, oooaaoowww, WAAhahaaaa…”


McIntosh barely breathed. Flora still weeped and hyperventilate desperately, and her whole body shivered. And under his face, her wine red butt still lay framed on the center of his lap, helpless to get away no matter how long it was spanked, no matter how much pain was inflicted upon it. It was the same helplessness, under absolute agony, he had gone through all of those years ago.


And he had planned on continuing it. He had...


The hairbrush fell out of his hoof, and struck the floor. McIntosh’s open jaw quivered, and Flora’s ribs rose and fell under his hoof pressed down on her back. A tear fell, then another tear, and another. The shock of the realization of what now lay in front of him stole his voice, but he still was able to whisper.


“Wh-What… What’ve I done…”
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I'm still not done, but I wanted to bump the thread anyway. The next time I update I'll have the whole rest of the story. I hope it's still reading well for you fine folks.
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>>28842472
>be Anon, the human foalsitter
>currently you're foalsitting Dizzy Cream, a cute little bat filly without bat wings
>with her parents traveling to Los Pegasus, you've been left with their daughter in the big luxury house
>they even have a PC with human Internet!
>after a day filled with playing wth her in the garden, you feel like you need to take a shower
>to avoid any awkward situations you decide to not to do it together
>she quickly washed herself first and put on her favourite onesie
>after you enter the steamy bathroom you enter the cabin and turn up the water
>you hum when the warmth pours through your tired body, but suddenly you hear something strange very close
>you look down, shriek like a little girl and fall on your ass when you see Dizzy stalking you, peeking under the curtain
>she squeaks in panic and slips too, tearing the curtain and pulling a ceramic soap dispenser, crashing it on the floor
>you cover yourself and pout on the scared and blushing filly sitting on the floor, the pieces of the ceramic bottle lying around her
>her parents adviced you that every act of destruction coming from Dizzy should end with the naughty filly pulled over your knee and getting a spanking with a hand
>you wrap yourself in a towel and stand up
"What do you think you are doing, Dizzy? I told you it's very naughty to look at humans when they're naked! Just look what you did!"
>Dizzy furrowed her eyebrows and looked at you with puppy eyes
>"I was just l-looking if you need any help or... or a towel!"
>now you raised your brow and watched as she is sweating after telling you this obvious lie
>she broke a rule, she acted like a little pervert and now she's lying to you!
"You're in trouble, Dizzy. To your bedroom and wait here for me, now!"
>Dizzy picked herself up and run outside the bathroom
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emergency bump
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>>28843448
Dizzy Creme is best minx

A pic of her cumming with a hoof rubbing her pussy, ass in the air, with a red spanked ass = my dream
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>>28793455
>TWILY!
You grab your charge's arm and lead her back to the other side of the street.
>Do you have any idea how much you scared me?
>…Sawwy…
Sighing, you crouch down on one leg and hold her against the other.

PAF!
>YIPE!
PAF!
>AH!
PAF!
>WAH!
PAF!
>GAH!
PAF!
>YAH!
PAF!
>EEE!
PAF!
>OWW!
>CADANCE! I'M SAWWY!
>Alright then.
You give her a kiss on the forehead and walk away with her holding your hand.
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>>28844249
>…Sawwy…
for fucks sake, no
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>>28844249
Not a lot to this one, and the sawwy thing isn't the best, but I'm still a fan of on the spot casual spankings, so it's still enough to get me stiff. There could be more details, like what Twilight's wearing or whether or not Cadance pulled down her pants and panties to give her the spanking, among other things, but still, thanks Chuck!
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>>28844254
Well, I mean, she's supposed to be like 4. Sorry if that didn't come across.
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>>28844285
Yeah, this is based on Sterny's drawing, so it's just supposed to be a few good smacks over what's gotta be like, 3 layers of clothing. I'm thinking:
-panties (Pull-Ups?)
-trousers
-overalls
Sorry for not making that clear.
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>>28844442
So close to quints, gawddamn

You're good! I know what pic you're referring to, now it makes more sense.
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>>28843448
>after putting up fresh clothes and cleaning up the mess, you head to Dizzy's room to deliver the punishment
>the most efficient spanking is the one given just after the naughty thing happened
>you open the door to see Dizzy leaning against her bed, looking at you with a pint of fear in eyes, holding a hairbrush in mouth
>it takes you aback that she assumed the position and brought a tool to whoop her, even if you didn't ask her to do that
>and seriously? A hairbrush? You doubt her parents would use anything besides their hooves to punish their girl
>nevertheless, you slowly move to her and crouch down
>now when you're close to the filly you see her body shaking, breaths quick and short
>boy, she must hate spankings... but the rule is the rule, red butt for being naughty
>you gently pull the hairbrush out of her mouth
"Don't be silly. Stick your butt to me and don't move."
>you unbutton the onesie butt flap to expose her small tushie
>in the corner of your eye you see her looking at your hands working with the flap
>she is madly blushing
"Sorry, kid, it must be bare bottom"
>a quiet whine answer you as she shakily stick her delicate buttcheeks up
>you ponder a few seconds what position would be the most comfortable for you and her and finally you simply sit down on the bed, next to her
>with one hand gently pressing her small back against the mattress you lean down to get the full view of her butt
>time to start
"You know why are you getting a spanking?"
>quick nod answers you
"Then tell me"
>"F-f-for breaking a-a rule and looking at y-you when you w-were... you were n-n-naked"
"And?"
>"A-and not l-listening to you"
>her breaths are getting quicker
"And?"
>"And being a-a naughty f-filly!"
>you feel strong shivers as she says it loudly
"30 spanks for being a naughty filly, let this be a lesson for you"
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>>28835662
HOT
>>28835972
all have funny moments but Nomine or DC take the cake
>>28835842
year is too long. >>28836036 month for major crime, 1-2 weeks for serious but not horrendous crime
Filly regression would be bueno, especially if it's physical only and not mental. Mental is good too.
>>28836058
both are a-ok
>"Now Fluttershy, don't run off again."
>"If you do, I have half a mind to move up from the mere warning swats you received today to something *far* more serious for you and your little butterbutt."
>he gives her rear-end a squeeze

>>28836148
>her bare feet just make her look even more exposed and helpless
oh yes

>>28836989
probably in twilight's basement

>>28837428
>>28838637
>>28838498
unf

>>28839786
>A spanking ? I'm a grown mare you can't spank me
>spanking is for little fillies.
>Does a grown mare do what you just did ?
>she went silent.
>Thought so , you were acting like a filly and you should be punished like a filly.
>but.
>yes your butt gonna get it. and the pain will remind you of what you did.
very good
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>>28844626
colossal erect penis
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>>28844646
There's that SnuggleFlutters picture. I love how he has her carried under her rump, it's so intimate and sweet.
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>>28844626
go on ... my weewee is waiting...
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And then Chrysalis went and saw Cadance and got lots of parenting tips from her on how to properly spank a little hatchling. The End.
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>>28845713
then who was brush
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>>28845792

Brush was Colgate. Duh.
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>>28843406
>His daughter’s rump was so hot that it radiated heat onto his restraining leg, but the hairbrush didn’t stop falling down with harsh thwacks and cracks onto each crimson red cheek.
This right here
Top unf
Proper redness is the best
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So, the Wikipedia article on Doric felt the need to mention that "Dinna be coorse or Ah'll skelp yer dowp." means "Don't be rude or I'll smack your bottom."
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>>28844236
you mean something similar to this ?
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>>28845375
will do
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>>28846590
Similar, but her hooves aren't rubbing her pussy here

But it's still real hot
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>Princess Celestia issued a new decree
>from now on, Ponies of Equestira must be held responsible for their actions.
>There have been a lot of destruction of property, and criminals activities that went unpunished.
>From this day forward any pony breaks the rules would be reported to their local discipline center.
>there the Judging community would pick the proper form of disciplinary action and execute them.
>Everypony that did break the law would get a free pass for now. but any future incident would be dealt with severe consequences.
>the constructions of these centers would be effective immediately.
>few weeks from this royal decree . each town and city in all over equestria got a discipline center.

--
how do you like this set up?
I got this idea from the show of course. where rainbow dash destroys clouds dale's weather factory and got away Scot free.
same goes for many other characters.
Here is a list
spike destroying ponyvile ,
Starlight Glimmer (missing with time + starting a cult) ,
RD stealing a book from the hospital.
CMC using love potion.
FS stealing celestia's bird
Mane 6 ruining the grand galloping gala.
Twilight and the doll mishap
Pinkie sending the parasite to neighboring town.
CMC running though the woods at night.
snips and snail bringing ursa minor to ponyvile.
Fluttershy bringing parasprite menace.
TW changing her friend's CM. not only she got away with it. she got rewarded for it.
AB. running a dangerous route alone.
Rarity changing everything without permission.
FS being rude to ponies.
DT abusing her position also bulling the CMC.
Trixie and the amulet
Scoot running in the wood almost got herself killed

that's all I can remember.
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>>28847605
Starlight GlimGlam needs 500 paddle swats to be delivered to her rump over the course of three weeks, along with jail sentencing during those three weeks. The convict must be spanked no fewer than 20 times a day, but the convict can choose to reduce the length of their sentence by taking more spanks than that in one day. Any spanks left over on the last day of week three must be delivered all at once, which can be at most 80 strokes based on the math.
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>>28847651
oh god ouch. i do like the idea of her having to pick when shes going to take them knowing if she puts it off she'll just be more sore later.
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>>28847766
She deserves all of it for nearly destroying the world and enslaving so many ponies.
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>>28839647
>>28843406
>>28843448
Thanks, based Woox, Zad, and Anon who's probably Woox! These are all great!

One thing, though:
>>28843433
>Flora still weeped and hyperventilate desperately.
Shouldn't that be " wept and hyperventilated"?
>>28837428
Is it just me, or did I say "Sweetie" way too much here?
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>>28848213
>Anon who's probably Woox!
nope he is not me. he is someone that have been lurking in both this and bat thread.
I have a faint suspicion about who he is. but that doesn't matter and I really appreciate what he is doing.
next part when ?
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>>28847605
AB running a dangerous route alone, only I think that should take place outside of a discipline center. A good switch held in Applejack's mouth should do the trick.
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>>28847605

I gotta say, a lot of those would be more under the jurisdiction of their parents/guardians than a Punishment center.

Plus, some were kind of justified in show...Spike couldn't control himself and Celestia wanted them to destroy the gala, to name two examples.
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So, here's two more ideas I had a while ago that I might actually do one day.

1. As punishment for the Gabby Gums incident, the CMC must be punished judicially in town hall. However, it is decided that due to their young age, their spankings will be:
* From their big sisters
* With what would typically be used for naughty fillies their age.
(Note: I just realised that I'm not sure if "Ponyville Confidential" came out after "Sleepless in Ponyville", so Scootaloo's spanking might have to come from somepony else.)

2. After the "Anon-a-Miss" incident, they all get spanked in front of Sunset.
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>>28848556
>after appleJack caught up with applebloom and escorted her to safety.
>she was relived that her sister was ok. and kinda amazed that she managed to deliver the cart in one piece.
>they made the delivery there.
>as the hillbilly ponies were enjoying the pies.
>AJ said" Just remember you wont be enjoying these pies if it weren't for my little sister."
>And my sister.
>But this don't change the fact that trying to make this delivery on your own was a plum crazy thing to do.
>applebloom lowered her head in shame "i know"
>disobeying your big sister, sneaking out while being grounded.
>but.. I did deliver the pies..
>You did and it was mighty impressive. but that doesn't mean you wont get punished for what you did.
>I said I'm sorry.
>sorry wont cut it... I cannot ground you , cause you are already grounded.
>so no broccoli for a week ?
>applejack narrowed her eyes at her sister's sassy remark.
>you know what, I'll let the judges in the discipline center decide the proper punishment for you.
>no .. not them it will be embarrassing..
>you should have thought of that before getting yourself in danger.
After they head back to ponyville applejack dragged AB to the discipline center.
>there was a long line there, each pony got their number to be seen by the judging comity.
>after long wait their number was up and they went to talk to him.
>Aj explained what applebloom did , then listened to what AB part of the story.
>the judge took a short moment of thinking then decided the proper punishment.
>he went and opened a cupboard, and pulled out a cane.
>appleboom trembled in fear when she saw that cane. the judge went ahead and gave it to AJ.
>give her twelve strokes on hind .
>applejack was unsure about this and hesitant to take the cane.
>she lowered her voice and said "don't you think that's a little bit much?"
>miss this is the law and you have to obey it like everyone else.
>he pulled a documented paper of her case and stamped it.
>now it is official.
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It looks like Confidential came out before Sleepless.
>>28848556
>>28848655
Same.
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>>28848796
man this didn't go well as I planned initially planned. i took a stupid funny idea and turned it a bit dark with realism.
I will do another take on it after I finish this little story.
-

>applejack felt that the matter was getting out of her hooves.
>she took the cane and looked at applebloom.
>her little sister was kinda afraid of what's gonna happen to her.
>she was breathing fast and starting to sweat.
>Applejack couldn't bare the look at her sister and dropped the cane.
>she went there and hugged her little sister.
>I aint gonna do this.
>miss applejack mind I remind you that you are directly disobeying the law.
>I don't care. I'm going to take my sister and go home.
>as she was leaving the guards stood in front of applejack.
>miss for directly disobeying the disciplinary comity you will be punished instead of your sister. and you will be placed on the stocks.
>one of the gaurds escorted applebloom out.
>the other one escorted AJ to the disciplinary room.
>there she was instructed to lay on a bench and wait.
>minutes later. a pony came wearing the official discipline center uniform holding a cane in his mouth.
>he carried out her punishment.
>He cut her 12 times as instructed.
>the strokes left a mark on her butt.
>she was then escorted out of the center and got placed on the wooden stocks midtown.
sorry for rushing in like that
>applebloom's guilt was eating her alive.
>seeing her sister suffer all caused of her.
>she visited and stayed with her stocked sister.
>she cried and said that she was sorry.
>applejack reassured her little sister that its ok, and its not a big of a deal.
>but applebloom was still feeling guilty.
>applejack stayed in her stocks from noon till dawn.
>then she was released.
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>>28848556
>>28848819
it seems that I failed to explain the list.

The list I made here
>>28847605
was for all the missed opportunity for spanking.
all those ponies got away unpunished for their actions.

some of these were minor events and doesn't need severe punishment.
the story I just wrote here >>28848796
is prime example of how not to report minor incidents to them as they take their job seriously (too seriously).
and as I stated , it went far away from what I initially wanted the disciplinary center to be.
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>>28793466
This image would appear not to have been Scruffy'd yet.
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>>28848943
Right, sorry for misinterpreting you.
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>>28848943

Okay, now I see what you were getting at. Perhaps an addendum to the concept that, barring greater crimes, colts/fillies are not to be sent to the discipline center, would not go amiss.

Also, speaking as someone who is very much Chaotic Good, the idea of the whole situation is rather...eh.

Not saying it's a bad idea, not by a longshot...nor a hookshot, for that matter. Just don't expect to see me use it often, if ever.
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>you are anon
>you have been hired to be the judge in the in the newly opened Disciplinary center.
>it was an official establishment issued by the princess herself.
>the reason behind it is to raise awareness of consequences and to lower the "incidents" rates.
>many ponies in the past got away with criminal and destructive behaviors due to lack of proper punishment system.
>so there you are inside one of the new established building.
>at the first 2 weeks there wasn't many incident reports and it was the good life.
>on your 3rd week the amount of reported incidents rose up.
>one of these reports was about a clumsy Pegasus that caused the construction of a new bridge to collapse.
>it was her fault and there was no excuse for it.
>you decided that
A1 - send her to the stocks.
A2 - 30 smacks on her behind.
A3 - get her fired from her job.

>another case of stealing. a unicorn used his magic to teleport stuff to his bag.
he already sold all the goods.

B1 - make him pay for all the stolen good, and work for the missing ones.
B2 - public stocks for him.
B3 - make him wear the magic muffler for a 2 months.

>these were the good old times.
>when you get actual cases.
>but few months later.
>these incidents reports have been lowered drastically
>now most of your cases are minor stuff.
>and mostly fillies problems.
>one of your frequent customer is the school teacher.
>she's there almost 3 times a week.
>reporting children to you.
>you ended up being foal sitter... than a judge.
>one of these reports was about 2 little foals
a filly named Red june and the other one was a colt carrot Crunch.
these two foals were fighting with each other.
Red June did swear at Carrot. and carrot did tease her earlier for failing the running race.
sorry if you feel like I am enforcing this idea. I'm doing this for fun
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>>28849078
>remembering this case made you sigh.. this is what my job turned into. instead of doing important and powerful disciplinary actions now you ended up with the verdicts like
C1 : issue mouth soaping for Red June.
C2 : Take Red june over your knee and spank her yourself.
C3 : let her write I'm sorry for swearing and fighting to Carrot crunch.
and issued
D1 : 5 hits with a ruler on the top of his hooves.
D2 : take him over your knee and spank him.
D3 : make him sit on the naughty stool in class.
>compared to what you used to deal with these verdicts were nothing.
>and here you are sitting on your disk. waiting for the next report...

the end?

--
forgot to mention that you pick one of these punishment as you read. like A2 then B2 ...etc
that's is how imagined how the scenarios go with that set up.

>>28848997
>Just don't expect to see me use it often, if ever.
to be perfectly honest I never expected or even the idea crossed my mind that someone might use this idea.
I was just asking for opinion if I should continue and write down a story based on the set up. the little feedback I got was enough for me to write down 2 small stories.
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>>28849148
What if they were horny and just roughly playing?
>>
>>28849148

The next report comes in as a group of colts drag in one of their protesting members. It's the colt's club known around town for their eternal prank-war with the fillies.

Their leader...Rumble, that was his name...pushes the perpetrator forward. "Your Honor...we caught this miscreant engaged in a crime most heinous. We caught him...Kissing!" he says, righteous fury in every line of his frame.

What do you do?
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>>28849078
>>28849148
Hey, this is pretty good!
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>>28849435
Smile and explain that there's nothing wrong with a colt kissing a filly he likes as condescendingly until they get bored and go tar & feather him themselves.
--------–---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
That's how it *could* have happened. But this is how it really happened.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-But your honor, he was kissing another colt!
(See above, but replace "filly" with "colt".)
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>>28849616
"[A]s condescendingly as possible".
>>
Got another bit revised, no spanking in this one.

That's the next part.

---------------------------------------------------------------------

Slipping through the barrier, Chrysalis paused and took stock of her disguise. No Flurry Heart or Cadance this time, no sir. She had disguised herself as a simple member of the Crystal Guard. Trotting towards the palace, trying to think about just what she was going to do, she found herself stopped by the gatekeepers.

Pausing only to give them a cursory glance, she gave the code phrase her spies had picked up. “I am the Keymaster.” she intoned, eliciting nods from both of the guards. “We are the gatekeepers.” they replied, pulling their spears aside and allowing her access into the halls of the palace.

Trotting down the crystalline structure, Chrysalis marveled at the shimmering lights for a moment before continuing on through the multicolored building, hooves clicking slightly on the gemstone flooring. A left turn here, a right turn there, a quarter turn this way, turn south by southeast here, turn thrice widdershins and clap your hooves twice…there it was! The doorway to the royal quarters of the palace lay before her.
>>
Opening the door with a gentle hoof to minimize any creaking, the disguised queen slipped into the royal apartment with ease, heading towards the chamber where Shining dressed and occasionally slept (there was no bed in that room, only a couch. Cadance had forbidden the installation of any bed). That would be the perfect place to deliver her vengeance upon Cadance and Shining Armor. The notes were already written, ready to go. Chrysalis was in the process of moving to the Consort’s chamber when a slight cough made her blink.

Turning around again, she saw that the door to a different bedroom was slightly ajar, the light on inside, and the soft sound of shuffling coming from beyond. She crept over slowly, peering her eye into the crack, and stifled a gasp at what she saw. Flurry Heart stood there, playing with a set of dolls and building blocks. Though oddly, she was being very quiet. Like she wasn’t supposed to be there…

It hit the Queen in a flash of memory. When Cadance had spanked her during her last infiltration, the excuse she had used was that “Flurry” had skipped school that day, since she was home. Checking her mental calendar, Chrysalis realized that was why the Princess was being quiet…she didn’t want to get busted.

But she had been busted…and revenge was going to be sweet indeed. Chrysalis stepped away from the door, activating her magic. As a wave of emerald flame passed over her body, she resumed one of the most familiar forms to her…Princess Cadance herself. One quick check to make sure everything was in order…she didn’t want to forget her horn like the first time she had changed into this mare…and Chrysalis strode quietly back to Flurry’s door, took a deep breath, then threw it open.
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>>28850001
>off by one

But no really, muh dick

Poor Flurry. This might be a hell of a spanking for the poor little filly.
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>>28844626
>your raised hand lands loudly on her buttcheeks the first time
>a loud, satisfying smack echoes through the bedroom
>you give Dizzy no time to react to the first spank, because the next one, and the next one already pepper her rear
>the butt flap is relatively small, only to provide the necessary hole when a filly needs to use the toilet, so your hand claps in the very centet of Dizzy's butt
>silently you count the number and now you pay more attention to her reactions
>to your surprise for the first ten spanks she was completely silent, like she was holding back any squeaks of pain
>that's strange, usually fillies start squealing after 6 or 7
>to change the routine of spanking the very center of her tush, you pull the onesie with the second hand, giving you access to her uncovered left cheek
>13, 14, 15, clap, smack, smack!
>you start to move around her butt, pulling the material in different directions to cover every inch of the soft, smooth body with the second hand
>and then, with the 16th spank, you hear her first
>"Mmm..."
>here we go, you bet she won't make it to the 30th smack without crying
>17, 18, 19, both buttcheek are already pink, she starts to move her small hips around
>every time your hand collide with her fanny, you hear more "Mmm!"s
>20, 21,22, clap, clap, whap!
>her tail, held to the side for the whole punishment, slowly moved back to cover the most burning spots
>not on your watch
"Bad girl!"
>you grab her fluffy tail with your free hand, pull it up and give a series of five hard smacks
>"MMMNNnaahH! Nnn! MMm! MM! MMM! Ahhmmm!
>a few seconds to cool down, back to work
>23,24,25, now much harder than before
>her "Mmm" now sound more like "Oooh" and "Ahh"
>a thought appears in your head that it's not usual for a filly to make those sounds when being in pain
>26!
>"OhhhM! Owwwmmm!"
>27!
>"NNNNnnaah!"
>she is stepping from hoof to hoof, rubbing her burning buttcheeks together
>she is also shaking like a leaf
>28!
>"OOoooOh!"
>29?
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>>28850565

Off by one? Did one of my details not add up?
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>>28850594
>"Yaahnnnn!!"
>no, wait
>you stop to see what's wrong with this filly
>Dizzy is panting, shivering and blushing madly like during a fever
>...blushing? shaking?
>wait, she is not shaking!
>you pull her away from her bed and turn to the side
>she doesn't react fast enough to pull her one forehoof from her abdomen
>her tiny nipples protunding under the material are now stiff and clearly visible
>she was touching herself from the very beginning of the punishment
>her face slowly goes from half-drunk with pleasure to shocked and extremely embarrassed
>you turn her roughly around again and, without really thinking about consequences, you do one more thing to confirm your presumptions
>you slip your hand under her onesie and touch her crotch
>"eeeEP!"
>you pull it out with shock as she arches her body and squeaks loudly
>thin trails of slimy, clear liquid connects your hand and her reddened butt
>the material on her crotch and legs is completely damp, almost like she peed herself
"What the hell"
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>>28850647
nah, nigga, your post number

1 away from quads
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>>28850706
oh noes don't stop now
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>>28850917
what should Anon do?
>>
Big Mac sobbed into the haystack, fearfully anticipating the next *THWACK* of the switch.
>It's over, Big Mac.
The firetruck-coloured foal felt himself being lifted up and settled down on his father's lap. Almost leaping to wrap his arms around Pa's neck, he managed to sob out:
>AH'M SOOOO- OOOORY!
>I know, Mac, I know.
The only sound for the next minute was Mac's sniffling and sobbing, as his father tried to comfort him.
>O- owwww…
>I'm sorry we had to do this, Mac.
>Now, would you like to go back inside?
>Uh-huh.
>Alright then.
He lifted his son up and started to carry him out of the barn. While it was rather embarrassing for Big Mac, at nine years old, to be carried by his father like this, he had to admit it was better than walking right now.
>Now, I want you to apologize to your mother when we get in. Understand?
>Yes, daddy.
Ma opened the door for them, smiling pleasantly at both of them.
>Well, hello there, boys.
>Um…hey, mama. Listen, I'm real sorry about-
>Shhh. It's okay, baby.
>Alright, Mac, go up to your room until supper's ready.
>Yes, Pa.
Big Mac walked away, visibly wincing as he did so.
>Jeez, have you got any idea how hard it is to get a sense of when to stop spanking a colt that shade of red?
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>>28850952
This is a much better scenario for poor Big McIntosh than in my story. I liked this one a lot.
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>>28850937
Yea I know what you mean. I ended up in that situation a lot not knowing how the characters would react next...
All i have to say to you is don't over think it. just go with what you think he should do.
you can make anon think with his head or his penis
in this situation I prefer if you do put your perverted self inside anon's shoe.
remember one thing... this is a fetish thread , so don't hesitate to go all the way.
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>>28851205
It's great to know you liked it!
Also, is this going to be a "Wow, my father was actually fucking horrible." realisation for Big Mac?
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>>28850706
will continue but later
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>>28851403
it's going good so far, keep going!

I say hoof her to orgasm and Anon tells her if she behaves from now on, he'll hoof her to orgasm more
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>>28851648
whoops, meant to say finger, not hoof. it was a habit since we hardly ever see human Anon here
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>>28848261
gotta admit I thought all the anon greentexts are woox as well. but I'm happy to be wrong here.

>>28847605
>there the Judging community would pick the proper form of disciplinary action and execute them.
execute is grammatically correct but has another connotation: killing. Pick a different word here. "carry it out"?

I like it, but I don't feel everything warrants a serious spanking in that list.

>>28847766
oh hey boner

>>28848909
more detail on what aj feels in the stocks and how ponies react pls

>>28849078
>sorry if you feel like I am enforcing this idea. I'm doing this for fun
never apologize

>>28849994
>Got another bit revised
Pavlovian boner
>no spanking in this one.
Well, thanks for warning me at least.

>>28851378
careful there, since we know Zad is basing it on his own experience.
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>>28852127
>careful there, since we know Zad is basing it on his own experience

It's fine, I'm not offended. When it came to punishment my dad basically just did what his dad did to him. At least he didn't hit me with his buckle like his dad did with him.

Fuck, this shit's probably depressing the whole thread, so I'll just stop now.
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>>28852127
>gotta admit I thought all the anon greentexts are woox as well.
you guys are giving me way more credits than I deserve.
>>
Bump this benis
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>>28852750
You deserve a lot of it though, writing stories, drawing stuff, making the forum. You a real OG nigga
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>>28816463
>>28838638
>>28816463
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>>28853870
good work
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>>28852127
>>28852613
Yeah, probably should have been more careful with the phrasing there.


Hey, Zad, if you ever need someone to talk to, you can always PM me over on the forums. Granted, I'm not exactly a professional, but having someone to talk to still might help, though I would certainly hope you're doing fine.
>>
>>28852127
>>28852613
Yeah, probably should have been more careful with the phrasing there.


Hey, Zad, if you ever need someone to talk to, you can always PM me over on the forums. Granted, I'm not exactly a professional, but having someone to talk to still might help with any problems you might still have, though I would certainly hope you're doing fine.
>>
Accidentally doubleposted there.
>>28853870
Well done, person-who-I-presume-to-be-Woox!
>>
I have the remainder of the fic largely edited, only a few more paragraphs to go. Just to whet your appetites (you pervs), the final product involves a hairbrushing, a hoof spanking, a secret, very mean implement, an accidentally ripped wolf, and a belt.

....and a partridge in a pear tree.
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>>28854439
Whoa. That's fucked up.

I love it
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>>28854439
>[A]n accidentally ripped wolf
What.
>>
>>28854732
I'm confused and intrigued at the same time.
>>
>>28854732

Exactly What it says on the Tin
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>>28855126
It's good to see that someone else feels that way.
>>28855397
And here I thought "wolf" might be a euphemism for "vagina" I just didn't know about or something. I guess you're going with the "don't clarify anything until the story itself" route, eh?
>>
>>28850706
>this is just beyond your responsibilities
>this filly is not just a naughty pony, she is a masochist!
>this is wrong, this is completely against your-
>...
>what did her parents say?
>always spank her for everything?
>this little minx is not a masochist
>she has a butt whooping fetish
>not even mentioning the voyeurism in the bathroom
>now she stands in front of you, shivering in fear and trying to cover her wet onesie
>what should you do?
>Yell? Call her parents? Get out of this house and quit the job? Call the police?
>and then you see first tears rolling down Dizzy's cheeks
>"P-p-please don't tell m-my parents... and don't hate m-me!"
>if you were thinking about any offensive options, now they don't exist anymore
>the broken, small voice of this filly tugged your heart
>you actually really like her, you both spent long days on playing and reading books together
>it would be a dick move to betray her and destroy the bonding you both developed
>if she had enough confidence to make a lewd mess and show you the naughty part of her, then it's your duty to straighten her behavior and fix her problems
>your face softens and you crouch down before Dizzy
"Dizzy, I want you to answer this question honestly, without lies - do you like to be spanked?
>if earlier her face was red from embarrassment and crying, now it's simply glowing
>still standing on hindhooves she covers her face with front ones and nods
>"Y-Yes..."
>without a word you slowly pick her up
>you move back to her bed and sit down with a scared filly hugging your neck
>you gently position her on your lap, so she doesn't sit on her sore fanny
>"I think we should take it off"
>slowly you unzip her onesie, from the neck to her wet crotch
>her scared and confused eyes follow your hand but she doesn't dare to run away or protest
>when you reach the end of the zipper, the material parts, unrevealing her heaving, fluffy chest, small belly and tiny nipples
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>>28855617

If you haven't read the original Undercover Blues, I'd suggest reading it. It will give away just what I mean by that.

Also, it may satisfy your craving for a spanking quite nicely, since there's two...technically three...nice long ones in there.
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>>28855629
>take it off

ooooh getting hot in here. Poor little filly can't help herself
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>>28855629
>you help her pull out front hooves from the sleeves and slip the rest of her pajamas down
>when the soft material run across her sore buttcheeks you hear a hiss of pain
>now you have an undressed filly lying on your left arm like a baby, looking at you with big, confused eyes
>with your hand supporting her hindhooves you provide some comfort for her butt, so it's not touching anything
>your free hand runs across Dizzy's mane to calm her down
>"Relax, I'm not going to tell your parents"
>she sighs with relief and nuzzles your arm with closed eyes
>"But it doesn't mean your punishment is over"
>her eyes spring open with fright
>your hand slowly travels lower, scratching her ear, running down the neck, chest fluff and belly button
>you feel her shiver and gasp, as you start massaging her underbelly, gently flicking and pinching the small nipples
>"I don't remember where we stopped... let's start over again."
>before she can't react, your hand suddenly goes even lower and grabs her small crotch
>Dizzy's back arches as she lets out a loud, chocked gasp of shock and pleasure
>it hits you how hot and wet is her winking fillyhood
>to not waste any second on simply holding her here, you start massaging the wet folds
>copious amount of clear, thick liquid covers your hand as you spread it more and more wide across her privates
>you calmly look down at Dizzy's blushing face, listen to her gasps and moans of pure pleasure
>you move your hand south until the middle finger meets her tiny, puckered ponut and tail dock
>she squeaks and twists her hindhooves together in the attempt to trap your hand in that position
>you press your fingers down and drag across her whole crotch, pulling the tender, wet skin with them
>you other hand, however, slowly moves lower, to Dizzy's hindhooves
>you grab both of them together while your other hand gently masturbates the filly
>inch by inch two hindlegs move back to her chest, completely exposing the small butt and privates to you
>>
>>28856406
u-u-u-unf
>>
>>28855975
Okay, I just reread it. Was it the thing about the Teddy Wolf?
>>
>>28856600

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyup
>>
>>28856689
interesting
>>
>>28856406
this went much better of what I had in mind.
keep this story coming anon.
>>
oh man, not only this board. but the entire 4chan website not having enough traffic.
its been slow since >the USA elections.

>>28854159
>person-who-I-presume-to-be-Woox!
yes Its woox. I did it again and forgot to namefag.
And I'm glad you guys like it.
I got inspired to do this mini comic doodle. from the comments here.
especially from that anon who kept calling Dizzy a minx. and the one currently writing the >green story.

>>28852127
Pick a different word here. "carry it out"?
I wanted a word that sounded a bit official and enforce authority. but yea I "execute" wasn't the best word.

>>28856406
The story is great keep it up. I can't wait for more.

but what's up with that image ?
are you the same anon as that posted ?
>>28828220
>Dizzy in diaper position looking at you pleadingly
are we to assume Dizzy in that position ?
>>
>>28857450
I don't visit bat thread, just this one
more story tomorrow
>>
>>28857477
I look forward to it
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Do we want a new thread after this one right away? I think we've got it moving ok so far
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>>28858347
yea we should create new one. this thread got plenty of content coming form hiatus.
To anyone Creating New thread .

Upload an image with a clear spanking content. and try to attach Spanking Thread text in that image.
Try to avoid uploading stuff like OP's Webm and gifs.

I think its better if people would recognize the thread's content from the image alone not the text.
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>>28858752
Bump for the end
>>
I'm all in for a new thread, personally. I'll be posting the remainder of UB3 after work today.
>>
>>28860042
Hypeeeeee
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>>28860042
My penis be's ready, mate
>>28860121
Agreed.
>>
Just imagine giving Dizzy a spank every time soemone posts in this thread
500 smacks in 10 days doesn't sound that bad, it's like, 50 every day, so maybe 25 at the morning and 25 at the evening
Do you think 25 spanks would give her an orgasm?
>>
>>28860543
500 spanks would make her so wet there'd be a puddle on the spanker's lap. 25 would get her pussy wet, but not an orgasm unless you used a paddle
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>>28860543

>>28860610

Ah....but what if the spanking was delivered by One-Swat Mare?

Also, would that be Candy Mane's Superhero name?

ONE SWAAAAAAAAAAT!

(Working where I do makes you go a lottle crazy)
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>>28860739
Retail?
>>
>>28860739
Red Butt Redemption
>>
Okay, we're at 500 posts now. This thread will no longer bump. I'll work on an OP if nobody else wants to do one. Should be up within 60 minutes of this post.

>>28860739
>Also, would that be Candy Mane's Superhero name?
You have no idea how hot it is for me to imagine Candy Mane jokingly telling her offspring that she's really a superhero who can make naughty colts and fillies behave with just one swat.
>"I only keep going after the first to make sure you get the message."
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>>28861401
Thanks m8

I'm utter shit at OP making
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>>28861401
>>28861485
New thread
>>28861588
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