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Lewd sleepover #9

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Negan chose Beans.
>>28673939
Writer blokes:
BurnoutAnon
http://pastebin.com/u/BurnoutAnon
Beans
http://pastebin.com/Rejz1xai
FuckFace McGee
http://pastebin.com/515d4KLQ
Insanebow Dash
JungleBuffAnon
http://pastebin.com/96SvHZhi
DeathGrippedAnon
http://pastebin.com/0ry1kQWA

>Thread theme
http://youtu.be/czTksCF6X8Y
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Great thumbnail, sir
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>>28727930
>>28727744
Continuing from the old thread. Nearing the end here lads.

>Fluttershy sets down the giant tray of bagel bites between all of the girls.
>Everyone digs in enjoying the delicious treats.
>Fuck this is tasty.
"Mmm this is really good Flutters"
>It sounded muffled as your mouth is full of bagel bite goodness.
>Rarity hits your arm lightly.
>"Manners, darling." She smiles at you knowingly.
>You smile back jovially.
>Soon you all go back to bantering and laughing with each other.
>You think of the nights events.
>You remember back to when Rarity invited you. You were hesitant before.
>Meeting the girls and getting to know was a highlight of the night.
>Nothing compared to the biggest highlight of the night of course.
>Your time with Rarity.
>Your feelings were finally in order and everything was great.
>You felt happy. Genuinely happy.
>And you were glad to share that happiness with the beauty next to you.
>"Hahah! And then after Pinkie finishes the second keg, I tell you, the second freaking keg Applejack sets her down, she stands up puts her hands in the air and belches for a minute straight!" Rainbow tells of the nights events, a particular scene you missed.
>"It was absolutely amazing! Haha!" Rainbow grabs her stomach as continues to laugh thinking back.
>"Hehe! It was easy!" Pinkie adds with a smile.
>These girls were absolutely crazy.
>"My favorite part was our little karaoke session." You hear Sunset add to the conversation.
>You think back to your performance. That was something you never you would do but you enjoyed it nonetheless.
>"Oh dude that was awesome!" Rainbow perks up remembering that particular part of the night.
>"Anon should sing something again, to celebrate getting to know us all ya know?" Applejack raises a suggestion as always.
>"Yea!" Rainbow and Pinkie shout in unison.
>"Jinx, you owe me a beer!" Again they shout to each other in unison.
>These girls man, you swear.
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>>28728109
That'll be my last post of the night.
Goodnight everybody!
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>>28727930
good lord, BurnoutAnon, I summon thee
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>>28727930
>Missed my pastebin.
>Cry

Might have to hold off on my green until later tonight (or whatever time zone you guys are in + 3-4 hours). Have to do real-person things.
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>>28727930
Why is Rarity's right hand a butt?
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I would love to write lads, only I have midterms and microbiology is fucking my asshole. I'll write when they're done and over with.
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>>28728472
Man, fuck microbiology.
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>>28727930
Sorry I've been gone longer than expected. Had to do my Batman thing for a haunted house and a commercial.

The green's almost done, and it's pretty damn lewd.

And what do you mean by Negan chose me?
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How do I write this
>͖̫̐͟y̔̓͒̈̕ó̶̤̗͚̱̹͙̱̐ͪu͖̻̻̥͔̥ͪ̌̽ͧ͘'̜̓ṙ͆͋̄̄ͩͤ҉̲͔͎͓̱͎ẻ̋҉̞̞̞̠͍̱ ͎͍̳̖̙̯̏̆ͣ̏͌̚͢j͑͗̑̅̚͏̣̯͖u̶͈͖͔ͩ̈ͦ̇s̳̗̪̫̈́̀̽͂̓͋͡t̝̜͍̫ͨ͌ͪ͗̾̕ͅ ̡̣̰͗̏ͧ́͛a͓͇̣͚̩̙͕ͦ̔͘ ͋̉ͯ̚҉s̵̺̘͙̏̓̽̚t̠̙͔̗̲̣̦̕u̴̱̬̰̦̰̮̙ͨͬ̏̈́̚p̪̱̼͗̚i͇̓͘ḑ̳̦͉̫̖ͅ ̩̠̭̞͇͍̆ͬ̈f̿͏̰̲̪̭ͅa͇̘̣̭̰̍̃̌̒g̖̪̞͐̉ͣg̛̤̭̠͐̄ͩo͖̠̓̎͞t̪͍̺̺͚͐ͦ͑͑ͮ͢
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>>28729031
>Had to do my Batman thing for a haunted house and a commercial.
And you wonder why people think you're annoying.
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>>28728472
I will await your return with baited breath, and boner in hand...
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>>28729243
If that's a blog post, then so is >>28728472. His post gave just as much info, so let's not fight until I actually start over explaining. Rather not have shit start again, so let's be chill friend.
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I really should be sleeping, but I thought I'd say sorry about not being able to post, even though I said I would. But with that being said, I'll make it my top priority when I next have spare time. Octave don't feel so energetic after tonight...

Hopefully BA, JB, and DG :( should be enough to entertain you lurkers for the next 20 hours.

Again, my bad completely. On the plus side, I do have a middle-setting and end scenario set out, with quite a bit of content for when I get there. But, as some fellow >greens might know, is that trying to write your way into that situation is harder than it seems.

With that concluded, I should really head off now and get my minimum 6 hours. If anybody really cares for my green, that is. I'm definitely sure *others* are preffered ATM.
And it's completely understandable as to why ;)

>Pic somewhat related
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>>28729324
Im enjoying it
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>>28728181
>A demonic sigil glows on the ground as Burnout is pulled into this world wearing a pink bathrobe, slippers, and holding a cigarette and a coffee mug full of orange soda

THE FUCK YOU WANT! I WAS ASLEEP!

Updating my pastebin while the old thread is still up, then I'll see what I can get done before work
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>Pinkie's attention to detail is amazing
>She was methodical
>Slowly but surely she ran her tongue up and down every inch of your shaft stopping each time at the head with a ghosting flick of her tongue
>The anticipation was killing you as you gripped the sheets waiting for her to finally take you inside her mouth
>"Y'know Nonny." Pinkie breathed hotly against your eager member as she began lightly stroking again "It doesn't taste very sweet, but I think I still like it."
>At that moment your mind has a brief flash of clarity
>Not that long ago you were rubbing your dick against Dash's ass and pussy
>The same dick that Dash had coated in her pussy juice when she orgasmed all over your lap
>Pinkie had just spent the last few minutes cleaning Dash off your dick
>With her tongue
>And now was hardly the time to tell her
>You felt like the biggest scumbag ever
>Not just because of that
>But because right now, the thought of that made this feel a hundred times hotter to you
"Pinkie please..." You moan as she begins toying with the tip with her thumb
>"Please what Nonny?" She asked playfully feigning ignorance
"Please, just start sucking it already." You beg looking her right in her big blue eyes
>Pinkie just giggles "Well since you said the magic word." And with that she raises up and take you into her mouth
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnT7pT6zCcA
>The feeling was incredible
>Hot
>Warm
>Enveloping
>You were in a realm of pure joy and she wasn't even that far past the head
>Pinkie even seemed to be loving it as you felt the vibration of her moan run through your dick as she began bobbing her head up and down as she became accustomed to how much of your phallus she could take in at once
>Slowly you managed to unclench one of your hands from the sheets and brought to rest on Pinkie's head feeling her soft, poofy, and now disheveled hair between your fingers as she hummed her approval
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Here's where we left off and here's the updated Pastebin link:
http://pastebin.com/wwi5PhR0

Now just give me a little while to grab a smoke and start paneling out the rest of the lewd scene
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>>28729862
God dammit I've gotta head out for 2 days for a job so I'm gonna be behind now. Best timing NA
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>>28729887
Get one of the 4chan apps on your phone, it's how I keep up with the threads at work
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>>28729896
Good idea, now I just gotta hope I'm not so far out in the backwoods and that I have service.
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>>28729896
Wtf there's 4chan apps? I've been using google
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>>28729933
There's a ton in the play store, I prefer Clover but you can pick the one you think is best
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>>28729933
Clover
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>>28729943
>Burnout uses the same app i use

It's just like my Chinese Cartoons
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>>28729933
Clover is the best imho. It isn't in the Play Store btw
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>>28729852

>With a little bit of gentle easing from you it's not long before Pinkie makes her way to the base
>You let out a moan of satisfaction as Pinkie holds there for a few seconds before pulling back up for some air
>She looks up at you with a look of pure accomplishment as her eyes water slightly and a small strand of saliva strings itself from her lips to your dick
>"Well Nonny?" She says a little out of breath "Is it everything you hoped for?"
"It's amazing Pinkie." You say brushing a loose strand of hair out of her face wondering if she'd always looked this beautiful "Just please keep going." You urge
>She just smiles up at you and starts stroking you again
>"Oh don't worry Nonny, I'm not stopping until I get a taste of your special whipped cream." She says huskily as licks her lips
>She immediately goes back to work taking half of you in at once as she begins bobbing faster than before
>You can hardly take it
>You are moaning out loud now
>And that only seems to be spurring Pinkie on
>She's even lightly massaging your balls now with her hand
>It's altogether too much
>You can feel your orgasm building
"Pinkie, I'm close." You groan moving both of your hands to her head
>She pulls off your dick moving a hand to replace her mouth as she keeps up the pace she'd been sucking with
>"That's it Nonny! Give it to me!" Pinkie demands before latching back onto your dick and taking you in as far as she can
>That was it
"Pinkie!" You moan as you bury your hands in her hair as your load erupts into Pinkie's mouth
>She holds on for as long as she could but after a few second she pulls back letting the last few spurts hit her face and tits
>Pinkie just sits there for a second her mouth and eyes tightly shut before she finally swallows your load in one big gulp
>As her eyes flutter open she looks up at you breathing heavily
>"It tastes kinda funny, but I think it will grow on me." She grins proudly as she cups her breasts and leans down to lick them clean of your seed
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Am i early.
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>>28730808
Depends on your time zone.
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>>28730634
Shit post
Because fuck you
That's why
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>>28727930
lewd inbound
http://swfchan.com/40/197503/?egdashpantsu.swf
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>>28728109
Holy shit! Beans is back.

"Ehh I don't know... It's getting late you know..."
>You try to get yourself out of this one.
>"Pleeeeease, darling." Rarity gave you her best pout and sad puppy eyes.
>Goddammit again!
"Alright, fine."
>You sigh and concede into giving one final performance.
>"Yaaaayyy!" Pinkie hollers at you.
>"Awesome!" Rainbow adds shortly afterwards.
>This time you think of something different, a little more fun.
>You go up to the middle of the room again, grabbing the microphone.
"I think I got a good one."
>You smile at the girls, looking to Rarity to give her a wink.
>You start the song.
https://youtu.be/khk77JHALmU
>The familiar guitars and piano carries you to begin the singing.
"~Oh, honeybear, honeybear, honeybear~"
>Your voice is full of love as you sing the first verse to the girls in front of you.
>You take your eyes to the purple haired girl of your dreams.
>Her face now filled with a deep red blush, as she swings in tune with the song.
>Her smile warms your heart.
>You continue the verse into the chorus. Your favorite part of the song.
"~Everything is doomed, and nothing will be spared, but I love you, honeybear. Honeybear, honeybear, honeybear.~"
>The girls are entranced by the song, Pinkie and Rainbow hugging each other as they begin to sing along with you.
>You see the rest of the girls swing to the sweet song.
>You keep your warm eyes on Rarity as her blush deepens and a warm smile forms on her lips. She's loving this.
>She moves closer to you as you complete the second verse all the while looking straight at you.
>Soon the second verse is almost complete as you fall on your knees to sing the final chorus.
>Rarity is right in front of you.
"~But everything is fine, don't give into despair, cause I love you, honeybear, honeybear, honeybear, honeybear~"
>The music swells as you move the microphone away from your face.
>Rarity cups your face and kisses you deeply, uncaring of the audience.
>You embrace her once again.
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>>28730634

>You felt completely drained
>You had no idea Pinkie could be this sexy
>But just one glance of Pinkie hungrily lapping up the globs of spooge from her tits was more than enough to breath life back into your dick
>When she's done she just looks up at you with those lust filled eyes and licks her lips getting one last dollop of cum as it trickled down from her cheek
>"That was fun, but I think it's time for the real party to start" She said standing up and pulling you into another kiss
>As you deepen the kiss you run your hands down along Pinkie's body until you reach her glorious hips
>Carefully you hook your thumbs into the waist band of her shorts and pull them down until they pool at Pinkie's feet
>Breaking the kiss Pinkie locks eyes with you
>The look of pure longing in them drives you wild as she steps out of her short now standing there in just a pair of pink panties
>"You like what you see?" She asks turning around and bending over to present her ass to you
>You see on the back of the panties in big black letters is written PARTY GIRL
"Why don't you come over here and see for yourself" You say giving Pinkie a playful slap on the ass which drew a deep moan from her
>Oh Nonny that felt good" She mewled as she sashayed back to you
>Now that you got another look at them you could see the front of her panties were completely soaked through
>She was ready for this
>Feeling more than a little playful and adventurous you pulled her close and began kissing down her body feeling her tense as she gasped in anticipation as you slowly moved lower and lower stopping just above her panties
>Once there you took the waist band in your teeth smelling and tasting the faint traces of Pinkie's wetness against them as you pulled them down
>"N-Nonny" Pinkie moan "I'm ready" She gasped as you pulled them down far enough for them to fall to the floor
>As soon as they were off you pulled Pinkie down on top of you and into another kiss rolling with her on the bed
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>>28731266
habbanding
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>>28731217

>You break the kiss and touch foreheads, sharing a warm embrace between you two.
>That felt good.
>Soon you feel the stares as you realize you had that whole exchange in front of the girls.
>You sit next to Rarity while you smile at the girls cheekily.
>"Awww." You hear Fluttershy say from the back.
>"You guys are so cute." Sunset says with her familiar motherly tone.
>You frankly blush at the current situation.
>Rarity kisses your cheek.
>"So this is a thing now, er something?" Applejack says with a joking smile.
>Rarity huffs and punches Applejack in the arm, who chuckles.
>You smile at the whole ordeal.
>What an amazing night, you think to yourself.
>"Oh my god guys! It's almost 3 in the morning!" You hear Twilight finally say looking at a tiny wristwatch on her right hand.
>It really was late.
>"Pfff who cares! Spooky movie time!" You hear Pinkie shout going in some direction outside your view.
>You weren't opposed to the idea.
>The alcohol was keeping you and the girls up anyways.
>Soon Pinkie comes back with a collection of horror movies as you and girls set the living room into a cozy area for all of you.
>You lay in a big couch as Rarity nuzzles with you. Truly comfy as fuck.
>Soon Pinkie inserts a random movie into the player.
>After about two or three movies you and the girls are too tired to pay any attention instead most of them falling asleep on each other.
>Rarity sleeps under your arm as you silently doze off as well.
>This time your dreams don't turn into nightmares, as you dream of being of a strange place where ponies could talk and do magic. You figure this was Sunset's old world.


>Soon you feel rays of sun hitting your face.
>You open your eyes to find yourself nuzzled with Rarity. You try not to disturb her still sleeping form.
>You get out your phone to check the time, ignoring the many texts you got from Bulk and Flash. You'll deal with them later. It was almost noon.
>Damn you knocked out.
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>>28731476
Is the end near?!
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>>28731266

>After a few minutes of rolling around on the bed and kissing each other you finally find yourself on top of Pinkie
>She gazes up at you with a look of eager anticipation as she lays back and opens her legs for you
>It was time
>You get up on your knees and ready your dick at Pinkie's entrance feeling its heat and wetness against your tip
"Okay Pinkie, you sure you're ready for this?" You ask
>Pinkie just bites her lip and nods giving you a pleading "Mmmmhmm"
>Okay, here goes nothing
>You go slowly as you push the tip into her watching as she tenses at the intrusion
>You can already feel her insides clamping down on you as Pinkie lets out gasps and moans the more you push in
>"A-Anon, please...keep going." Pinkie moans reaching up and grabbing your shoulders
>You could tell she was feeling it, it had been years since she'd called you by your real name and wasn't mad at you
>You speed up the pace just a bit until finally you're all the way in
>Pinkie lets out a long sigh and you watch as her breasts heave up and down as she tries to maintain her breathing
>Finally she looks back up at you and moves her hands to your cheeks
>"Don't move just yet." She says sounding completely out of breath "I just want to stay like this for a little while"
>You feel like your heart just melted as you gaze into her eyes
>You just stay like that for a few moments feeling Pinkie grip your dick at the subtlest movement
>"O-okay, I think I'm...ready for you to go." Pinkie says giving you a warm smile
"Alright Pinks, I'll try to be gentle." You say returning her smile
>"N-not too gentle I hope." She say playfully winking and sticking her tongue out at you only to moan when she feels you twitch inside her
>You start to pump in and out at a steady rate getting used to feeling of resistance inside her as her pussy clenches around you every time you pull back
>The feeling is incredible
>Combined with Pinkie's moans of pleasure you think you might be in Heaven
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And that's all I've got for now

Off to work so expect me back round the usual time
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>>28731595
Make sure you come home before dinner. We're having greens tonight.
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>>28731586
OH YES
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>>28727930
I haven't read any of the green in here since #2 I think so I'll enjoy catching up tonight. I'm ready for some LEWD.
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We need a green where Celestia and Luna are at the sleepover.
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>>28731476

>You figure you should wake up Rarity.
>You nudge her slightly waking her from her rest.
"Rise and shine, sleepyhead."
>You're face to face with her, smiling.
>"Mmm good morning, darling."
>She smiles back at you warmly.
"Well it's noon, but good morning to you too."
>You laugh a little, while Rarity looks for the time in slight shock.
>"Oh dear."
>Suddenly you see Pinkie awake from her slumber with a groan.
>"Ugghhhhh my head..." She says as she grabs her head in pain.
>Those kegs really fucked her up, you thought.
>Pretty soon the girls are awake and moving about, with Fluttershy going to the kitchen to make you all a nice breakfast.
>Twilight helped Pinkie recover from her massive hangover.
>"Just stay hydrated Pinkie, and take an advil." Twilight says to her as Pinkie continues to roll around on the floor holding her head.
>You head to the kitchen counter with Rarity to chill with Fluttershy.
>Soon Fluttershy finishes a nice big breakfast for you and the girls, eggs bacon everything that's delicious.
>You enjoy the food while chatting idly with Rarity.
>Soon enough the other girls join you all in the kitchen.
>After breakfast and an hour of cleaning up Pinkie's house, most of the girls figure it's time to finally leave.
>Rainbow and Twilight are the first to leave.
>Sunset and Fluttershy stay to help out Pinkie while you and Rarity along with Applejack leave the house to your respective rides.
>"So uhh crazy night..." Applejack approached you awkwardly.
"Yea..."
>You rub the back of your head and smile at her sheepishly. You wondered what Applejack wanted from you.
>"Listen, ah know you're great and all... but don't hurt her, or ah will do something drastic. Just giving you a heads up is all."
>And she just threatened you. Okay, was not expecting that, you thought to yourself.
"Applejack, once you get to know me more, you'll know a couple things. One of them being that I don't hurt the ones I love, especially her."
>You nod toward Rarity.
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>>28732150
theyre the only ones at the sleepover
their sleepover
and youre invited
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>>28732220
Nah, be more fun with the mane six and the principals there.
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>>28732203

>Applejack raised her eyebrows in slight shock at your statement.
>She put her hands in defense.
>"Alright, ah get it! Ah just can't get over my protectiveness." She smiles inserting a little humor into the tense conversation.
>You smile at her sensing that she's not being like this because of trust, but because she cares about her friends, and you respect that.
>"To be honest, ah do trust you, Anon. So good luck, and have fun." She pats your shoulder and gives you a friendly wink.
"Hah alright, cowgirl. Have a safe drive."
>You chuckle at her jovially before finally saying your goodbyes.
>You walk back to Rarity's jeep.
>She's inside checking her phone.
>You kiss her on the cheek through the open door.
>She looks up through her sunglasses and flashes a loving smile.
>"Ready to go home, darling?"
>Her accent was music to your ears now.
>You enter the car and soon Rarity pulls out of the driveway.
>Rarity leaves the windows down, letting the wind take your hair.
>You look at her again, while she focuses on the road.
>You think back to another time you did the same, this time your heart pings with a feeling of surging love.
>You smile to yourself looking back out through the window to stare at the forest you sped through.
>You feel a happiness lift you as you lean back in the leather car seat.

And we have reached the ending. Hope you guys enjoyed it, made it a bit more romantic that lewd, hopefully nobody minded.
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>>28732264
and fucking weird

who the hell has a sleepover with their principals
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>>28732264
Nah, son.
We've had plenty of stories with the girls.
How about we let some mature women have a shot at Anon?
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>>28732311
Updated my pastebin with the ending.
http://pastebin.com/0ry1kQWA

>>28732316
>>28732264
Yea it would make more sense if it was adults with the Celestia and Luna, not the girls.
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perhaps we could have anon as a faculty member rather than a student for the sleepover with the older women? It'd be really fucking weird otherwise.
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>>28732349
Great story man. Thanks for the green!
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>>28728472
>>28729031
Yay l. You're both back! Sorry bout the work insanebow, good luck. I'll be waiting for you.
Same with you beans, me want some twi sunny loving.
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>>28732340
This!
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>>28732340
How about one where anon is an idiot savant and the teachers are like his caretakers?
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>>28733679
>>>/a/
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>>28733679
That's borderline rape.
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>>28732349
Better not be leaving us just yet, DG.
Who else will provide mental hospitality besides BA and I?

Green soon.
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>>28729943
R U talkin' bout Mimi? that's the one I use
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>>28733974
Mimi isn't the same as Clover m80
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>>28731595
why do you have that sadistic pleasure leaving other anons with massive boners?
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>>28734021
Because its how he gets his own pleasure. It's like how I cant find pleasure in getting off to my own green, something just doesn't sum up.

Watching TWD in 20mins. As soon as I return, expect an update.
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>>28726415

Pastebin updated, btw

>Woo! Charades!
>You loved playing charades at parties
>Watching people either:
>Be really good at it, or
>Suck a whole lot of dick
>Pleased you...
>Though you meant sucking dick figuratively
>However, you wouldn't mind a blowjob right now
>Who in this room could give the best one?
>You silently scan the crowd of seven and smile
>Dude
>For some reason you feel Sunset or Dash could just blow you away
>Pun intended
>Sunset has had a bf before, right?
>Experience gained
>Dash has been on many sports teams and knows all of the football players!
>Experience gained..!
>Is it common for football players to get their dicks sucked by soccer captains..?
>You didn't really know
>You could just ASK dash!
>What? No that's stupid
>But...curiosity
>You wonder if she'd be willing to suck you off, just for a moment
>Say it's part of the game
>Charades, yeah!
>Jesus, Anon!
>What are you thinking!
>You'd rather have Rarity do it, duh
"Anon! Anon!"
>You hear someone shouting at you, you look up instinctively
>It's Dash!
>Did she read your thoughts? Is it time?!
"I've been calling you for like, ever! Lets go play!"
>Play? Ohohoh Dash, not beating around the bush, eh?
>Wait, she means charades
>You're too drunk for this shit
>Meh, whatever, that kind of makes it more fun
>"Oh? Yeah Dash I'm coming, darling"
>She gives you a weird look before walking back to the group of girls
>Did you call her darling?
>You think about Rarity too much
>It's unhealthy
>She's hot, tho
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>>28732311
Great story, my friend! So what are you going to do now?
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>>28734470
I guess just lurk for the meantime.
Maybe see if I can write something else.

Maybe also expand on my Anon's story or something.
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>>28734533
SEQUEL
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>>28734470
What JB said.
>>28734533
DO whatever you want fellow writefag, offer advice and whatnot. Or as >>28734553
suggested; write a sequel. That is, if you have the time and motivation. Otherwise, I don't want to see that name disappear for a while.

Just finished watching TWD. I have no words and have no strong feelings either way along the emotional spectrum. Hm.

Green is being written as we speak.
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>>28734628
so like, what time is it over there, friend?
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>>28734675
4:10PM
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>>28734021
>>28734050
I don't take pleasure in blue balling you, I'm just not in a position to put stuff out quickly, especially when each post takes 45 mins to get right and by the time I get 3 or 4 posts in I have to go to work

Will try to get more out before I pass out hopefully

also writing the actual lewds is not my strong suit so I'm trying to make them great, my forte is somewhere in action and comedy so I'm taking this as one big challenge
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>>28734848
Don't burn yourself out, bro. I understand myself. Trying to perfect my posts as well.

Who knew the CoD:Finest Hour Stalingrad Opening could be so inspiring?
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From last thread.

>God, you really did it.
>He might /actually/ come!
>You are Chrysalis, and a very happy one at that.
>Nearly jumping up and down at your locker you can barely contain yourself.
"Yes yes yes! I've done it. Aha! Please come, Anon. Yes! We'll have so much fun together with the others. Me, you and-!"
>"Vinyl and I" continues your sentence.
"W-wha?" you reply, confused.
>Looking to your right, the locker door closes, letting light shine upon 2 of your very 'talented' friends.
>Vinyl and Octavia
"Hey guys!" you beam in a cheerful tone.
"What bring you here?"
>"Why, nothing at all Ms.Chrysalis. Me and Vinyl just wanted to know who's music would be better off played at your... gathering?"
>As Octavia replies, you notice the competitive grin she gives her partner, who in turn give her a smirk back.
"B-but I can't decide, you're both really good! you protest.
>Octavia whips her head back around and points it downwards a tad, before eying you again.
>"But, you've just got to have a preference, don't you? You can't just like two opposites that easily."
>It's true that you really don't prefer one or the other. You've seen both of them perform before, and they both do excellent jobs at it!
>It's why you thought they were so cool in the first place, its why you decided to befriend them!
>But you cant answer this. Rivalries have never really been your thing.
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>>28735086
"How about something of the mix? Aheh." you stumble out.
>"Why whatever do you mean, Chrysalis?"
"Maaaybe have a mix of both? you suggest.
>Maybe it isn't the best suggestion, but again, hopefully it gets them to stop arguing.
>Octavia ponders in though, hand on chin and looking towards the ground.
>"Possibly... but I would rather play separate pieces of music than attempt to 'combine' our talents"
>Progress. Could this be a good idea, though. Pitting 2 opposites to work together for once?
>"Buuuuuuuuut, I guess it won't hurt to try..."
>Octavia looks back at Vinyl with a change of heart, with Vinyl giving Octavia a side-ways thumbs up with bit of a wobble.
>"Well, I guess we shall settle it ourselves then. We will see you later tonight. Farewell Chrysalis."
>With an awkward smile you wave goodbye as both girls turn and leave, and you aren't sure of it. But you do believe you just say Vinyl give Octavia bit of a peck.
>Getting a little bit red in the cheeks, you turn to head down the road yourself. Having approximately 4 hours to set everything up until it is expected for everyone to arrive.
>You swear that this will be your best efforts put in towards getting this sorted. It must be perfect, everything must be perfect!
>You needs drinks sorted, snacks to be distributed, Vinyl and Octavia are on 'verbal entertainment', what are you missing?
>Gah! Movies and games! How can you be like this Chryssi! It's a /sleepover/ party. How can you forget the basics!
>Slapping yourself on the head, you shake it off.
>Oh god, how can you be this stupid, what would Anon think of you!
>Picking up your pace, the stress builds up. You just knew something was going to happen.
>Hmhn, might as well think of a solution on your way back.
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>>28731586

>After a couple of minutes of the two of you getting used to the feeling you decide to pick up the speed
>Pinkie begins to writhe under you moaning more wildly as you pick up the pace
>You're glad the guest room is on the far end of the house
>You should have figure Pinkie for being a bit of a screamer, but wow this was a bit overkill
>Still was hot though
>Like seriously you could listen to her moan like this all day
>You're pulled from the thought of Pinkie' moan by the motion of her breasts
>You watch as they sway and bob in time with your thrust
>It was almost hypnotic
>You lean down bracing yourself with one hand as the other moves to capture one of Pinkie's bouncing breasts
>You squeeze and massage the soft flesh doing your best to focus your attention on both your thrusts and toying with her boob
>Once you're confident you can manage both you lean in further and start kissing and nipping at Pinkie's neck
>That really sets her off as she moans your name loudly wrapping her arms around your head and her legs around your waist plunging you even deeper into her
>"That's it Nonny more. Don't stop." She gasped as you started thrusting again barely pulling out of her before thrusting back in "And keep playing with my cupcakes!"
>Wait
>What?!
"Keep playing with your what?" You manage to mumble out against her neck despite her tight grip on your head
>Pinkie blushes a bit and looks away bashfully
>"I-I mean my boobs...I um, call them...cupcakes." She said unable to meet your eyes
>You can't help but smile and begin thrusting once again drawing a yelp of surprise from Pinkie
>She may have surprised you with her sexy side tonight
>But she was still the same old Pinkie
>But she did give you an idea
"Hey Pinkie, wanna try something else?" You ask nipping once more at her neck
>"Oh, what Nonny?" She asked looking down at you with a mix of confusion and want
"I think I know a position you'll really like." You grin pushing yourself back up
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>>28735090
>You are Anon, and you REALLY hate your front door.
>5 minutes, 16 jiggles, and a sore wrist later, and you are finally allowed to enter your own house.
>Parents are gone for the month, so woo-bloody-hoo for you. Alone time, best time.
>Throwing your bag at the door, you head straight into the kitchen and flick the kettle switch on.
>Once cold water starts boiling, you decide the next best course of action would be to take a shower, so to the water you head.
>Stripping down to your naked form you slowly test the water and hope its at ample temperature before you step in.
>Finding a suitable temperature, you walk in and let the warm, refreshing water run down your back.
>Running your hands through your hair you make sure to massage the back of your scalp and neck.
>This, this was relaxing.
>Grabbing the various soaps and conditioners from the shower-basket you douse yourself in the thick substances, letting them bubble up your hair and body.
>Hey, they're men's brand. Whats bad about that?
>Approaching the 5 minute mark of the water stream you decide that you smell, and look, decent enough for later.
>Turning the shower off you drip for a few seconds before grabbing the nearest towel and wrapping it around your waist as you step out.
>Looking towards the mirror awards you with the view of your facial hair. All 2 weeks worth of it.
>Welp, must be in tip-top condition for your presentation. Can't leave any of the girls thinking they are sharing the same room as an ape.
>Grabbing the razor and shaving gel, you apply a clean dose of water to your face before adding the gel.
>As you go through the weekly process of hair removal, you can't notice but feel a little more... open about yourself.
>Weird.
>>28735093
Hey, you broke my green!
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>>28735099
>Happy with your hygiene, you leave to your bedroom, and with it, your display of clothes on a rack.
>Now, what to wear. Mind you, you still have a few hours to work with, so even if you pick something that feels uncomfortable, you still have the chance to change out if need be.
>T-Shirts, Trousers, Jeans, Tracksuit Pants, Long-Sleeves. Hmmmm.
>Coming to the conclusion of Black tracksuits with a Green-on-Black T-shirt accompanied by a Purple/Black hoodie.
>Damn do you love your hoodies. Its like the perfect combination between everything.
>Ahh, but lets not forget the 'sleepover' part of this event.
>Well, with what you're wearing already, you should be comfy enough to sleep with what you have on.
>Not like this is the first time you've slept in your day clothes.
>Putting the chosen apparel on, you make haste to the kettle, which has concluded its only use of boiling water.
>Making sure that it hasn't gotten lukewarm, you pour some into a mug and add 1 teaspoon of coffee with 2 tablespoons of sugar and topped off with milk.
>What. You like it sweet.
>Happy with the outcome of the warm beverage you nearly spill it making your way to your desk.
>The cause of your near-spillage comes from your phones vibration.
>*sigh* Who could this be? Place your bets!
>Placing the mug down at your destination, you input the code to unlock your phone and swipe to read the message.
>[Hiya Anon! Should be all ready to go for tonight, turn up whenever you feel like it :3! Thanks for coming Anon, I mean it. :) ~Chrysalis]
>Tapping back your reply, you hit send and make the screen turn black.
[No problem Chrysalis, its what friends are for, right? Talk to you later. -Anon]
>Now, what to do for the remaining 3 hours, 27 minutes and 29 seconds?
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And that's all for tonight, I'll try to finish up this scene some time tomorrow if I'm lucky

>>28734866
Also Octave I just want you to know that pun physically hurt me

night broes
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>>28735125
>Breaks my greentext wall and then said my puns suck, finishes it off by going to bed.
Love you BA.
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>>28735125
>>28735133
Holy shit Burnout fucking savage
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>>28735203
>ENDLESS SUFFERING
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>>28735212
FUCK DO YOU WANT ME TO REDRAW IT WITH YOU ACTUALLY IN IT?
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>>28735224
No. It was merely a joke. Chill JB, I love it how it was. Now toss those words in the green-grinder.
Sorry.
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>>28735240
everything's chill over here senpai
enjoy your kangaroos
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>>28735353
TIL "f.a.m" autocorrects to "senpai"
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Oh god no why. Ok. I've been inspired. Dis gon' be short, and probably not very good, cuz it's my first time (oh god be gentle please)

>3 a.m.
>Normally by now you're at least feeling a bit tired, but tonight was one of THOSE nights.
>You've been tossing and turning... no, thrashing was the right word. You'd been thrashing in your bed trying to find a comfortable spot for at least an hour
"fffffFFFFFUUUUUUUCK!"
>No dice. Sleep was not in the cards tonight
>You get up and sit at the end of your bed, lighting a cigarette. When was the last time you had a night like this?
>Oh. Right.
>You don't remember specifically, but figure it must have been about 5 months ago now.
>It feels like it JUST happened, and yet still felt like an eternity ago. Almost like it never happened at all.
>Oh but it did.
>You take a drag as you remember how much you hated smoking.
>You also realize that this is only the third cig you've smoked in the last 6 months.
>Fuck these things are stale
>You start to run through the events of that night in your head
>Maybe you'll bore yourself to sleep
>Maybe you'll start shitting gold
>Maybe you were tired and a bit loopy
>You put on your headphones and start up your go-to relaxation piece
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z7ADxutdB6I
>As the music and smoke calm your nerves, your eyes start feeling heavy at last.
>The cigarette burns slowly in the glass you dropped it in
>Cold air pours in from the window in stark contrast to the mugginess of the air in your room
>you lean back and close your eyes
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>>28735423
Welcome to the shitfest!
Quick, JB; break out the biscuits! I got the kettle!
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>>28735423

>You are Fluttershy
>The sun shines through your closed eyelids
>You feel a gentle breeze push blades of grass across your skin as you slowly and gingerly crack your eyelids open.
>"Hey there sugarcube. I Reckon it's about time to mosey on into town"
>Right. The sleepover. It wasn't that you didn't WANT to spend time with your friends
>But if you had your way, you wouldn't be spending time with your friends tonight
>It really had nothing to do with them, you just didn't really have fun in the same way that they did
"Oh. Ok Applejack."
>You reached for her outstretched hand
>It was callused and rough, but not unpleasant. You knew it was from hard working days on the orchard
>"Ah know you're not really hankerin' for a girls' night in. Believe you me, Ah'm not either. But Rarity just HAS to have us meet her new friends, so it's only right that we say hi."
>She had a valid point. Rarity's friends were everyone's friends, after all.
>And at least it was just the one new girl coming to meet the rest of you. This would be an easy way to take Vice Principal Luna's advice to meet new people in a nice, relaxed environment, too.
>It was a short walk into town
>You vaguely remember talking to AJ about Rarity's new friend, but you're too preoccupied with the butterflies in the bushes and your stomach to pay much attention to anything else.
>"Applejack! So good of you to make it! Oh and Fluttershy, darling how are you?"
>Rarity's chipper attitude and posh accent were on point, but you still noticed something a bit different. Nerves?
>Was Rarity nervous about introducing her new friend to the group?
>As you walk into her living room, you notice you're the last ones to arrive
>You also notice that AJ has stopped right in front of you and you've accidentally buried your face in the back of her shoulders.
>You step back to pull a loose hair out of your face with one hand and flatten your skirt with the other
"Oh, excuse me Applejack, but did you mean to... Oh. Oh my"
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>>28735502

>You are Anon
>You are sure there's been some kind of mistake
>I mean, the hottest girl in school asked you to spend the night with her?
>You're running through your lucid dreaming checklist
>Light switches work
>Things feel appropriately heavy
>You even pinch yourself, just in case your usual methods have failed
>Nope, not dreaming
>You've wanted to talk to her for ages, but you've never really felt... good enough?
>You're not exactly a terrible person, just not the type that was invited to things
>Rarity has been milling around her house for the last half hour
>Or at least you think it's been a half hour
>The bare spot on your wrist where a watch would go hasn't grown any new hairs, so it hasn't been THAT long
"Rarity, are you sure there's nothing I can do to help?"
>"Oh Anon, it's fine. Everything will be fine, really! You just relax there and stop worrying about it!"
>It was only the third time you'd asked, but at least it was something
>Anything is better than waiting, even if it's just being told to wait
>The doorbell rings and you hear a few voices that you recognize
>You weren't new to the school, you just hadn't exactly made your presence known
>You were content with hanging out with the "out" crowd
>Twilight was the first through the door
>Pinkie was right behind her
>The small talk you could overhear was nothing out of the ordinary, except for the occasional squeak from Pinkie's bag hitting the floor
>You wondered what she had in there. It almost sounded like a dog toy, but more excited
>Can dog toys be excited?
>You're about to get up and wander into the front room to introduce yourself when you hear Rarity welcome Rainbow Dash, apparently followed closely by Applejack and Fluttlershy
>The gang's all here... hoo boy
>You stand up and look into the other room and are met by Applejack with a very strange look on her face
>She's frozen, except for the gentle nudge from behind her
>"Excuse me Applejack, but did you mean to... Oh. Oh my"
"Um. Hi"
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>>28735550

>You've seen them all around before, but you've never actually met
>"Well I guess now's as good a time as any for introductions. Anon, this is..."
"Pinkie, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight, right? You guys are... kinda famous"
>Rarity smiles
>"Yes, I suppose they are."
>You could tell that you weren't what they expected
"So uh, Rarity... I gotta ask you. Why are we here?"
>Rainbow Dash clearly had the same thing in mind
>"Yeah Rey, what gives?"
>Rey, huh? You've never heard anyone call her anything but Rarity
"I kinda feel like the odd one out. This isn't some kind of virgin sacrifice, is it?"
>Fluttershy stuck her face between Applejack's shoulder blades again
>Pinkie tilted her head and looked at Twilight
>"A virgin sacrifice? Now THAT'S a drink I've never heard of!"
>"Pinkie, I don't think he's talking about cocktails"
>Rarity shook her hands vigorously in an attempt to regain control of the room
>"No no dears, no sacrifice. I simply wanted everyone to get to know Anon!"
>Now you're really confused.
>You wonder what Rarity even knows about you
>The only time you remember ever talking to her was when your friend on the football team dragged you to the homecoming game.
>You vaguely remember talking to her... or at her, rather... after the game.
>That whole night was a bit on the fuzzy side. You hadn't been feeling great in the first place, and the koolaid/vodka monstrosity you drank didn't help either.
>Again, you found yourself not alone in your thoughts
>Applejack spoke up
>"Now ah don't mean to be inhospitable, but isn't Anon a bit of a stranger? How do you even KNOW him, Rarity?"
>She looked at you out of the corner of her eye and quickly looked back at the rest of the group.
>She's... blushing?
>"Well, a lady doesn't usually kiss and tell, but..."
>Six jaws hit the floor.
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>>28735596
Ok. I'm gonna call it here for now. I've got more to this story than I thought I did, but I need to work out where I'm going from here a bit more clearly.

I also need to solidify my own backstory here a bit. I feel like there's sort of two different anons here, one who's a total stranger and one who's been Rarity's friend for a while.

I'll be back tonight, hopefully with a more consistent conclusion
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Bumparoo
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>>28727930
This picture makes my dick hard
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>>28728109
Don't use "ha ha" and "hehe" to indicate laughter. They're cringey phrases. It makes your writing seem like the texts of a sixteen year old suburban kid trying to hit on a girl and failing miserably.

The story itself is pretty good, though.
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>>28729031
I thought you killed yourself
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>>28731217
You have terrible taste in music, Death. Like, really bad. Also, how could shouting song lyrics be perceived as 'cool' or 'awesome' ? Flailing about like an idiot while screaming shitty music is usually something that gets you ostracized forever, not idolized. Unless you're actually part of the original band, of course. But that's an entirely separate story.
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>>28735596
panon?
PANON?
PAAAANOOOOON!!!!
Best fucking name
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>>28735133
>>28735203
>>28735212
Yeesh if I'd known ya motherfuckers would react like this to that shit I would have done something like drop a mic at the end

>>28732150
>>28732264
>>28732340
Why has no one just considered doing a green that takes place when Celestia and Luna were in highschool themselves, just fudge the time line and ages a little and you could get a full party cast pretty easy

Will get to work on next post after a smoke
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>>28736646
That's actually one I started but still outta town on work business so I have no way to post it.
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>>28736646
The whole point of having Celestia and Luna is that they're older than anon, dipshit.
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>>28736852
Hooooly shit everyone is anally destroying poor Burnout!
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>>28737196
Sounds like a good time
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>>28736646
Is it that time already?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tkplPbd2f60
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>>28735602
Pretty good so far, homefries.
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>>28735093

>Pinkie blushes but nods
>"Okay Nonny." She says leaning up to kiss you "What do you wanna try?"
"Okay, I want you to get up, turn around and get on your hands and knees." You whisper into her ear before giving it a nibble feeling a tremble run through her body and she tightened around your dick
>Pinkie catches on to what you're planning and gives you a lusty smile
>"Nonny, you're so naughty." She grins
"I don't think you're in a position to be saying that." You laugh
>"Not yet at least." She giggles
>Dear lord
>If this is a dream you pray you're in a coma
>You pull yourself out of Pinkie earning a whimper from her before she moves to follow her advice
>Soon you have Pinkie there in front of you
>On all fours
>With DAT ASS presented
>Just for you
>You can't help but reach out and fondle one of her big pillowy cheeks
>"Oh, c'mon Nonny, stop teasing me." Pinkie moans pressing leaning her ass back towards you
>You can't help yourself
>You pull the hand that was groping her back and give the cheek a good slap
>This time Pinkie's moan was louder, longer, and much happier
>You grin as you lean forward and whisper into Pinkie's ear
"See, I told you you'd like this position." You chuckle before getting ready to line yourself up
>For a second you look at Pinkie's welcoming hole and spy her asshole
>The thought occurs that right now you could stick right in there
>....
>Nah, You weren't going to do that to Pinkie for her first time
>Plus a small voice in the back of your head reminds you Dash's ass still had a date with your dick
>So you position your dick at Pinkie's still wet entrance and push in earning a long hum of pleasure as you push back in
>There's far less resistance this time
>But it's still just as tight
>You grab hold of Pinkie's hips and begin pulling her into you as your thrust
>This feels so much better
>You've got more leverage and once you've gotten used to the motion you run one of your hands up to her breasts
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>>28736078
Alright I get you, thanks for the tip.
>>28736108
I wanna know what you consider "good" taste in music.
I also don't know what you're talking about, who's flailing about like an idiot, like what are you talking about?

On an unrelated note, I am thinking of a sequel to this, taking place during the new eqg movie, but I don't know if people would like that or not
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>>28737196
You are severely overestimating the level of shit I currently give Jungle
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>>28737598
wew
i can see this really blowing up in his face later
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>>28737675
Let's not get ahead of the fun, try just enjoying the moment, Anon sure is

Hoping to finish my next post before leaving for work
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>>28730912
Don't click. Redirects to that shitty browser hi-jack tech support scam.
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>>28733700
>Borderline
We need to go deeper then
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>>28737598

>You take her tit in your hand and squeeze listening to Pinkie pant as she starts moving her hips back into you on her own
"Y'know Pinkie" You say moving your other hand up to her other breast "All those times you offered me cupcakes were you really talking about these?" You tease giving both tits a firm squeeze
>Pinkie moans loudly again pressing her ass into as much as she can
>"M-maybe on-once or twice." She manages to giggle while panting "If I'd kn-known you'd li-like them so much I would have offered you them m-more often"
>You can't help but laugh at that
>Yeesh, how Pinkie could make jokes right now was beyond you
>But once you collect yourself you get back to the task at hand
>And speaking of hands you run one down back to Pinkie's ass and giving it another smack as you thrust into her
>Pinkie squeals at the sensation throwing her head back
>"Ooooh Nonny that feels soooo good" She moans "More, please spank me more."
>Well who were you to argue with that
>You keep up your current pace while throwing in the occasional smack to Pinkie's ass watching as she writhes more and more with each following slap
>It isn't long before you can feel another climax building
"Pinkie, I'm getting close." You groan moving both your hands down to Pinkie's hips to get a better hold
>"Me too Nonny." Pinkie moan as she leans forward and grips the sheets
>You give a few move quick thrusts and one more smack on her ass before you feel her go rigid and tighten up against you as she cums
>"Anooon." She moans as her legs reach back behind you and pull you all the way inside her at the moment of climax
>That sends you over too as you fire your load deep inside her
>It takes a couple of minutes for the fireworks to subside, but finally Pinkie unclenches her legs and lets you slide out of her
>The 2 of you cuddle together on the bed
>Pinkie is barely conscious but but she nuzzles herself into your chest before whispering
>I...love...you...Nonny." Before passing out
>Well Fuck
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So in case you'd forgotten since we entered lewd country

I LOVE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!

Well that's the end of of Route 2, what else does Anon have in store for him

Stay tuned and find out
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>>28737890
>he got to cum inside
niiiiiice
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>>28737608
I meant Anon's singing performance.
And I don't have any music that I like significantly more than other kinds, but I do have kinds that I specifically dislike. I don't know why, it just either hurts my ears or gives me a headache. I don't even know the genre that the Death Grips would be considered, but it just doesn't agree with me. It's much more fun to call it shit tier garbage than to write an actual critique.
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>>28737890
>"More, please spank me more."
Im done
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>>28738113
Well I see what you mean, you like what you like. Just a bit triggered considering they're one of my favorite bands. I will admit they are a band you either love or hate, and I sit in the former.

And the whole performance thing was to show how anon can really go off the rails, just like the song implies. I understand how you can see it as cringy but at that point all of the girls had already done the same so I don't know.
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>>28737900
Yo burnout, did you update the bin?
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>>28738255
I just see it as childish "LOOK HOW COOL I AM GIRLS IM SO EDGY LOOK AT ME SING THIS SONG WITH SUPER EDGY LOUD LYRICS IM COOL"
That's the type of thing that gets people to call the cops on you to make sure you aren't going to shoot up the school.
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>>28738255
I want to take Rarity and her jeep out mud riding and get stuck in the middle of the woods somewhere. I wounder if she would survive?
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>>28738760
Haha, well if that's what you got from that then I don't know, but that's not at all what I was trying to convey. Also Anon is not an lmao edgy teen, probably a tad hipsterish though but everyone has their faults.
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>>28737890

your story is making my heart sad for trixie
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>>28734436

>Fluttershy walks up in front of you and the girls, looks kinda nervous
>She places her hands into her armpits and waves her elbows
>Like a chicken
>"Chicken" You say nonchalantly
"Uhm, yes" Fluttershy squeaks
>That was too easy, Fluttershy suuuuuucks at this
>You gotta give a challenge! Like do a movie from the 1800s or some shit
>Nobody will get that one
"I'll go next, I've got a good one!"
>Rainbow Dash scurries up onto the 'stage' and readies herself
>She gives you guys the motions to work it out amongst yourselves
"A movie!"
>Yuppers
"Two words!"
>"Uhhhhm"
"Oh oh oh! A burger!"
>"A gun?"
"Screaming!"
"Table flipping!"
>Hmm, what movie has table flipping, burgers, and guns?
>Not ringing any bells for you
"Oh! Lemon juicer!"
"Orange juicer!?"
>What the actual fuck is going on?
>She's pretending to remove the pulp from the jar of squeezed lemon or orange juice
>Uuuh
"Pulp!"
"No pulp!"
>She looks really excited, like you're getting closer to the solution
>Pulp.....
>Fiction...?
>"PULP FICTION!!!" You shout, flailing your arms like a madman
"Yes! Anon got it!"
>Dash high fives you and she takes her seat
"Ohhhh! I remember that movie!" Pinkie says.
>That movie is greaaat, you remember watching it with Dash yesterday night
>Oh yeesh, yesterday night, that was only yesterday?
>"Me and Dash just watched it not too long ago, actually. Nice choice, hun'"
>The fuck?
>Hun..?
>Dash nods at you anyways
"Thanks! I knew you'd get it, Anon. Plus who hasn't seen that movie!?"
>Hopefully nobody answered
>But basically everyone, except for you, Pinkie, and Dash, answered with a:
>'I haven't'
>'Not me'
>or 'Me'
>Motherfuckers
>"ALRIGHT! We are going to watch pulp fuckin' fiction, tonight! You'll love it I promise!"
"Sure! Maybe later though I have other games we can play!" Pinkie says, nodding her head
>It's not even 9:00 yet, goddamn what a long night
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>>28738993
At least it isn't bitter fury and hatred
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>>28738993
Don't worry, there's hope for everyone except for Anon, he's on the slow road to ruin

>>28739098
What have I done to offend you in such a way good sir
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>>28739254
His testes are gonna be the size of gob stoppers by morning the way this is going.
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>>28739254
I'm always like this when I read stories like this.
It kind of concerns me so I've been reading them and looking for what exactly makes me hate everything so that maybe I can fix myself.
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So I'm putting up a straw poll and see if people might want a sequel to my Anon's story.
http://www.strawpoll.me/11507268

It's basically Anon going through what happens in the new EQG movie, with added lewd
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>>28739709
the votes are unanimous. do it faggot
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>>28739254
Anon needs to fuck trixie and then settle with pinkie, don't turn him into the greatest asshole in the universe
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>>28739607
Well he's only cum like 3 times, he's not going to turn into a hentai MC and be shooting like a hundred more loads, but he probably got 1 or 2 more still in him

>>28739930
I am neither confirming or denying any ending But do remember Anon is a dick, not an asshole, take that however you like
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>>28740095
fair enough. Still though, it's gotta get painful.
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>>28740595
He's a big guy, so it shouldn't be too much of a problem.
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>>28740659
For you.
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>>28740736
Was fucking Pinkie part of your plan?
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>>28739930

anon needs to fuck pinkie and then settle with trixie, its fun to watch such a happy person suffer
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>>28739930
I just want to see trixie happy
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I shall wait for thy writefags!
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I am dissapointed. I woke up and theres no new green
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>>28742835
Sorry. Will update tomorrow. Was busy.
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>>28737890

>There are few moments where one experience true clarity
>But laying here
>In bed with Pinkie
>As the teenage hormones subsided and the blood began returning to your vodka hazed mind
>You realized something
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGp9P6QvMjY
>Shit just got real
>Like existential crisis real
>Pinkamena Diane Pie
>Your oldest and dearest friend
>Just confessed her love to you
>After you'd taken her virginity
>After you'd just thigh fucked one of her best friends
>In her room
>While she was asleep
>And if that wasn't enough to fuck with you there was also the fact you had no idea how to respond to any of this
>Seriously
>You never saw this coming
>Hell an hour ago she was just one of two girls who actually talked to you of their own free will
>You should have seen this coming the moment she started saying weird shit when you ran into you outside the bathroom
>But you were still to busy thinking about what happened with Dash
>And then she kissed you and your boner took control
>Well you knew two things
>One you really needed a smoke right now
>And two, you needed to piss
>Again
>So with the same care one would reserve for defusing a live bomb you painstakingly wiggle your way out of the sleeping Pinkie's grasp and sneak out of the room
>One ungodly long alcohol piss later you quietly stumble back into Pinkie's room
>You are legitimately surprised to find all the girls are still asleep
>You were pretty sure Pinkie's moans could have woken life on Mars
>But you decide to count your blessing as you grab your smokes and head downstairs
>As things come back into focus you realize the sound of rain from earlier has picked up
>Fuck, whatever, you'll run under a tree if you have to
>You need this smoke right now
>Your plans are crushed though as you reach the patio door
>You look out to see it is coming down like a hurricane out there
>You were surprised the back yard wasn't flooding by now
>Fuck
>You turn to walk back and find Trixie glaring at you
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expect slow updates for now, I'm hungover and need to go buy groceries

more when I get back
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>>28743622
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>>28743622
Yep we have fucked up now.
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>>28743622
https://youtu.be/k2a30--j37Q
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>>28743622
Fucking finally! Conflict, honest to God conflict! Seriously too many greens now a days forget this.
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>>28744044
Fitting choice, since someone is about to go nuclear
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>>28744104
I learned a long time ago a 2 sacred lessons. NEVER piss of a women or a magician, anons about to get the condensed version of these lessons.
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>>28744132
And good riddance. Getting drunk and (almost) sticking his dick in crazy, then another crazy who is also his best friend.

I was worried this would go generic harem route. Please don't
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>>28744132
This is possibly the greatest post I've read on 4chan in some time my friend

You win

Congratulations

Also trying to decide if I want to continue with Anon's perspective or switch to Trixie's for the this next post....also trying to not throw up but that's neither here nor there
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>>28744132
ZOOMED WORDS
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>>28744146
Write both, post one then the other.
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>>28744146
Still waiting
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>>28744742
I'm half way through the next post, but this part right here is tricky, I'm trying not to fuck it up

Unlike Anon, who has done nothing but fuck everything up so far
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>>28743622
Good good
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>>28743622

"Trixie!?" You almost shout in surprise stumbling back a little "Fuck, just about gave me a heart attack there Trix" You say clutching your chest as you regain your footing
>Trixie doesn't say anything
>She just stands there
>Dead-eyeing you
>Not saying anything
>Okay
>This might be bad
"Uh Trix...you okay?" You ask
>You've seen Trixie get mad before
>But usually never at you
>"I woke up and saw you weren't in the room Anon" She finally says
>Fuck
>You barely had your head on straight right now
>You hadn't even thought of coming up with an alibi
"Wh-what? Oh yeah well you know how I get when I drink, right? Can't sleep and always pissing" You say scratching the back of your head nervously "After the last trip to the bathroom I thought I'd grab a smoke to wind down, but it's fucking pouring out there now"
>There's a pause as she keeps staring at you
>"Then why is Pinkie not in her bed?" She asks crossing her arms
>Shit
>You forgot about Pinkie
>But still what was up with Trixie?
>Why was she giving you the third degree all of a sudden
>You love her to death but you wouldn't even be in this mess if she hadn't wanted to come to this fucking thing
>Shit, you don't even want to think about the L word right now
>Just say something already and try to think of a way out of this
"Pinkie's not in her bed?" You say trying to sound surprised "Maybe she went to use the bathroom after I came down."
>Fuck
>That was bad
>And it didn't look like Trixie bought it at all
>"Damn it Anon stop." She says throwing down her arms angrily "Don't lie to me." She says stepping right up to you "You were with her, I know it."
>Oh no
>This can't be happening
>This can't be fucking real
>You'll wake up any minute now with a hangover tomorrow morning
"Trixie I..." You start to say but Trixie cuts you off
>She reaches up and grabs you and pulls you into a kiss pushing you back and forcing you to stumble backwards towards the living room
>Whether you like it or not this is happening
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>>28745082
WOAH NELLY

AGGRESSIVE TRIXIE
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>>28745082
Yes. Continue.
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>>28745082
https://youtu.be/KThlYHfIVa8
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>>28745082
I expected more of a punching session followed by a breakdown. Now I don't exactly understand Trix here - mow mad is she?

Also the fourth stop for Anon should be AJ, to completely fuck him over. Or you know, help him. Personal problem are not that relevant once you're hospitalised with severe brain trauma
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>>28745082
Yesssss. I want agressive Trixie to attack me...sexually
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>>28745451
She's aggressively jealous. She's going to steal Anon and put that pink bimbo in her place.
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>>28745082

>You are The Great and Powerful Trixie
>And the sound of thunder just woke you up
>You grumble sitting up for a second to get your bearings
>You could still feel the vodka muddying your thoughts a bit as you remind yourself that you're at Pinkie's sleepover
>With Anon
>In fact you start to remember that you weren't that far from where his spot on the floor was
>An idea pops into your head and it may be thanks to the alcohol but you're feeling a bit more brave than usual
>If you're quiet enough maybe you could sneak over and cuddle up to Anon
>It would feel so nice and send a good message to the girls like Pinkie and Rarity to back off come morning
>And he probably wouldn't mind
>Especially since he spent most of the night letting Fluttershy do that to him earlier
>But that didn't matter
>Now was your time
>That's when you look over and see that Anon isn't there
>Probably off taking a piss
>Alcohol always goes right through him after all
>But then you notice something that makes your heart sink
>Across the room you see Pinkie's bed
>Empty
>You know you shouldn't worry
>Sure she's known Anon longer
>But you know him better
>You always have
>Everything is probably fine
>That's when you hear someone coming
>You throw yourself back under your covers and pretend to be asleep
>As they stumble in you hear a few mumbled curses
>It's Anon
>Peeking just a little you see him bend down and grab his smokes and lighter
>He looks disheveled, worn out, and a bit sweaty
>You feel a knot start to form in your stomach
>You start to think about Pinkie again
>She may not want to say it out loud, but you know she feels the same way you do about Anon
>You always thought that you'd be able to confess to him before she decided to accept her feeling
>But now
>Now you were afraid you were too late
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I'm taking a quick break, I'm feeling sick right now, but don't worry, I plan on posting at least two-three more posts today

>>28745451
Don't worry, Trixie is gonna explain exactly how she feels here soon

Also remember there are only three routes

This is Route 3: Heaven's Trix

Feels may or may not get real
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>>28745473
oh no
shes always going to feel second best now
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>>28745500
>Also remember there are only three routes
but mom,
>>28740095
> he probably got 1 or 2 more still in him
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>>28745500

what are you talking about with routes, is this going to prong off into three alternate universes or are you doing a cyoa thing
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>>28745082
>Anon's subconscious
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>>28745507

not if she proves herself to be the best ;^)
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>>28746151
Doesn't matter. Her husbando is no longer, and will never be pure. She hesitated, and it was a mistake she will never get to rectify. Whatever she does, she will forever be at second place
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>>28746243
Anon, stop. I didn't need that feel in my life.
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>>28746274
Shh, it's okay. No tears only dreams now
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>>28746296
Ground control, to Major Tom...
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>>28746243

hah vore in the cartoon

yeah her pain is pretty feels inducing
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>>28746243

entropy's a bitch
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>>28746243
All i wanted was her fucking happiness
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>>28746440
But all Anon wanted is to get laid, and he ended up hurting Trix in a ways he wouldn't think possible
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>>28727930
>dat Spike

I support EQG!Sparity
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>>28746476
Fucking now I'm depressed, thanks guys, gonna drown my sorrows in liquor now.
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Working on the next set of posts now, also shit I fall asleep for an hour and y'all niggas go on fucking suicide watch
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>>28746501
Mind if I join you?
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>>28746694
Just end our suffering
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Thread music for tonight - https://youtu.be/k1-TrAvp_xs
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>>28746694
You did this to us.
>>28746758
Yeah sure, I got enough rope for two.
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>>28745473

>That was it
>You had to talk to him
>You needed him to tell you that you were wrong and say something goofy and sarcastic like he always did
>So quietly you stood up and slunk out of Pinkie's room
>The hall was faintly lit by the light from the bathroom, which had it's door hanging wide open
>The fact Pinkie was nowhere to be seen was not lost on you and only served to make you both nervous and angry
>You just manage to catch a glimpse of Anon as he heads down the stairs and quietly move to follow
>As you follow him you can't help getting even more angry
>Mad at Pinkie for possibly ruining your chances with him
>Mad at Anon for never treating you like how he treated Pinkie
>And mad at yourself for not working up the nerve to tell him how you felt
>All this rage just started bubbling to the surface until you found Anon standing in front of the patio door with his shoulder's slumped in defeat as he stared out into the heavy rain
>He didn't even notice you walk right up to him until he turned to walk away
"Trixie!" He shouts falling back a little in surprise "Fuck, you just about gave me a heart attack there Trix"
>Usually you'd love when he'd use that nickname
>But right now you couldn't shake your sense of anger
>So you just stare at him
"Uh Trix...you okay?" He finally asks after a few long moments of glaring at him
>"I woke up and saw you weren't in the room Anon." You say simply
>There were million different things you felt like you wanted to say to him
>But you kept it simple
>To see what he had to say

Short post so I don't get character limit fucked
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>>28746476
WHAT THE HELL AM I LOOKING AT RIGHT NOW!?!?!?!?
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>>28746988
It's Rarity magicking up an imaginary friend to cuddle her when she's lonely.
How is that hard to figure out?
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Hi, Lewd Sleepover Thread. I found this place through BurnoutAnon posting in a thread I was in last Friday, and last night, I just so happened to write and finish a lewd scene in a story that's relevant to the whole sleepover idea you all started. It takes place in a tent at Camp Everfree, with Anon sharing a tent and a sleeping bag with Trixie. But the scene itself can become a separate one-shot story that I could post here as a contribution to the thread if you'd like. I should warn you that it contains porn logic and memes.
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>>28746959

>You try not to notice his eyes go a bit wide before he answers you
"Wh-what? Oh yeah well you know how I get when I drink, right? Can't sleep and always pissing" he says laughing nervously "After the last trip to the bathroom I thought I'd grab a smoke to wind down, but it's fucking pouring out there now"
>Now Anon was a good liar
>You'd seen him bullshit his way out of more than a few situation
>Which is why it hurt so much that he was doing such a bad job lying to you right now
>It hurt
>But you weren't going to call him out on it
>Yet
>You owed him at least one more chance to tell you the truth
>"Then why is Pinkie not in her bed" You ask looking him right in the eyes
>That got a reaction out of him
>He looks like he's thinking about what to say next
>Please
>Just tell me the truth
>Or at the very least deny it
>It might hurt more, but part of you just want him to tell you there's nothing to worry about
>To tell you that you still had a chance
"Pinkie's not in her bed?" He says feigning surprise "Maybe she went to the bathroom after I came down."
>Really
>You can tell by the look on his face even he knows how bad that was
>He wasn't going to tell you
>You didn't know why
>But fine
>If that's how he wanted it, you'd just make him tell you
>"Damn it Anon stop." You say throwing your arm down to your side and clenching your fists "Don't lie to me." You step right up to him feeling the anger welling up faster, you can't even stop yourself before you let the last part slip "You were with her, I know it."
>Oh no
>No
>You said it
>There's no way he could not pick up on why you'd say that
>And you see him make the realization too
>He looks shocked
>Confused
>And maybe afraid
>And you can't take it back
>This is it
"Trixie I..." You can't let it happen like this, you have to do something to save this
>So you reach up and pull him down into a kiss
>Please let this work
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>>28747320
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>>28747137
welcome to the ride motherfucker, rope and snacks are to your left
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>>28747137
>GTS has migrated to the LST
Ahem

IT BEEEEEGIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINSSSSSS
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>>28747137
Hey welcome Savant

You came I'm at a rough time

Pic related to how I feel doing this right now
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>>28747546
And I forgot my triptag....things are going great
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>>28747546
>>28747564
fuck you burnout, i hope you burn in hell for this
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>>28747581
If it is any consolation I feel just as bad doing this to Trixie and Anon as you all feel reading it

I lack Butcher's ability to derive joy from breaking down characters, hence my why I needed to start drinking after my last post

I'm just a slave to the story I created at this point
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Boy, I just finished Deathgrip Anon's story. It was nice. And hey, actually had a good ending. It gave me happy feels.

Now I'm ready for this fucker to blow it all away >>28747546
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>>28745451
I believe she is going to violently rape him.
Yeah, you can't rape the willing and all, but you can be violent enough that they start questioning themselves. Grabbing his balls and squeezing them to the point of nearly popping while angrily telling him they belong to you is one way to do it.
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>>28747564
>>28747546
What's wrong BA? Aside from anything mentioned.
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>>28747643
Fuck this is why I hate posting from my phone

>>28747682
There will be no rape, but there are going to be feels, lots of feels
You've been warned

>>28747678
I make no promises how you'll all take the ending, but I'm not planning a tragedy and that's all I'm saying
But we still have a long way to go, you should get ready for a ride
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>>28747746
>I'm not planning a tragedy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vc6vs-l5dkc
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>>28747746
I am not ready for this ride
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>>28747746
i appreciate all the Fate references. You have great taste. Looking forward to Heaven's Feel movies next year?
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>>28747865
Yes and no

My Fate knowledge is limited

I've watched all of FZ and both the original UBW movie and the series from last year and am reading Apocrypha translations and the Prisma Illya series, but I know next to nothing about HF except that it's Sakura's route (my least fav girl) and that my friend who got me into Fate says it's his favorite overall story

So I'll watch it but I'm up in the air about how I will like it

Also unrelated but how did I become the only active Writefag for a day
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>>28747903
Because everyone is depressed now.
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>>28747485
>>28747520
Thanks, guys. I promise I'll make myself at home during my stay here.
>>28747546
Sorry to hear that.
>>28747903
Also, are you or anyone else posting soon? I'm going to try and dump the whole thing here when I get the chance.
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>>28747953
Go ahead, I might type up the next part, but I won't post at least til tomorrow morning since I'm spending half the day moving more stuff into my new place and the other half playing pathfinder

So do your thing, I think everyone could use a lift of spirits
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>>28747903
I'm sure you've heard this before, but the original visual novel is worth reading, even if you already watched the anime. It's an amazing ride. Heavens Feel is great, but I agree, Sakura is shit.
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>>28747986
Roger that.
>>28747953
>Crickets chirp in the night air outside the tent.
>It’s probably like four in the morning at this point. The chill from the air is somewhat proof that it is around this time.
>You really wish that this tent was a little bit thicker.
>Shake your thoughts away and nuzzle back into your sleeping bag.
>Trixie soon has every light she possibly can on, sitting upright and constantly looking in every direction.
>You’re still too low on energy to do much.
>But you can soon hear Trixie doing something on her phone.
"Whatcha doing?"
>"Shitposting some more." Trixie answers. "These are some of the best hours to do it anyway."
>You turn your head to watch her frantically typing with her thumbs. She seems to be getting really into this, as usual.
>It's still a little funny how Trixie turned out to me the internet dwelling type. You wouldn't have wanted to pair up with anyone else in one of these tents.
>But you do wish that your sleeping bag wasn't so thin. This cold air is really getting to you.
>"Want to join in?" Trixie asks you, showing her screen so you can see which thread she had open.
"Eh, I'm still kinda tired." You notice Trixie's feet kicking around in her own sleeping bag that's aligned right next to yours.
>You look up to the dome shaped ceiling of the tent, exhaling quietly.
>"Well maybe the excitement will wake you up a little."
"I dunno, I think I'd just like to get a couple of hours sleep in now. That's all."
>"But..." Trixie leans in closer to you. "Trixie doesn't want to be awake all alone!"
"I'm sure there was nothing serious out there." You groan. "Probably just a deer or something."
>"How can you be sure?"
"I, uh... eh I dunno, I just wanna go to sleep."
>"Please don't. Stay awake with Trixie."
"But it's like four in the morning!"
>"And Trixie doesn't have any chocolate pudding to suffice for her life falling apart!"
"...What?"
>"It's a meme! Now pull your phone out and shitpost with Trixie!"
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>>28748042
>There is a pause, leaving nothing but the chirping of crickets outside to be heard. It's soon accompanied by the rustling of Trixie's sleeping bag as she turns to face you.
>"Please?" Her pupils dilate.
>You take a deep breath and give in.
"Eh, it's too cold for me to sleep anyway."
>You pull your phone and make your way to the same page as Trixie. The girl turns on her mini boom box again, and sets the volume at the lowest setting so no one else is disturbed.
>She starts playing a completely different Vaporwave playlist than before.
>The girl turns to you and gives you a smile as it starts to play. The smile feels... striking as her eyes meet yours.
>It's striking enough to make you smile back without being able to help it.
>Which only makes her smile grow a little wider.
>Something feels as thought it got real just now, and it's apparent enough to make the two of you start to giggle.
>The two of you start shitposting in a random thread on 4chan. A thread of Trixie's choice after the previous one prunes.
>You're nodding your head to the vaporwave that's playing, feeling warmth rush through you from the vibes you're getting from the quiet vaporwave that's playing.
>It sends a few shivers down your spine and back up to your head.
>But you can't help but notice the goosebumps on Trixie's arms as the cold seeps into the tent.
>But you only feel... playful about this happening.
>You're more than sure there is a happily glazed look in your eyes.
>Trixie's eyes are doing the same thing, waiting for you to notice her latest post.
>She's doing that thing where she posts random thumbnails from google again and pasting whatever she copied directly from some... Facebook page it seems.
>Something about fine dining; she's literally just gathering something that's made out of text and spamming it into her posts.
>You open up google and do the exact same thing, almost competing with the girl in a friendly way.
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>>28748055
>The same moment from before is revived as Trixie scoots a little closer to you. There wasn't much space in between the two of you to begin with.
"You know." You begin. "I thought what you did during the campfire story was pretty fucking rad."
>"Well, Trixie wasn't sure how long they were willing to listen to her reciting the bee movie script."
"You lasted longer than I thought." You giggle just from the thought, the memory alone of her doing that.
>A cool sensation takes your mind as you finally come to terms with the fact that you actually... liked what she did.
>After a few more minutes, the Vaporwave playlist starts playing music from the Weather Channel.
>From what you can only presume is from the 1980's.
>Both you and Trixie start lightly head-banging to the Weather Channel music.
>It's a pretty sweet groove.
>Continue saving every single random thumbnail you can find after typing random phrases into Google Image search.
>So many jpegs.
>And surprisingly a lot of images with plants.
>Trixie gleefully starts to quietly sing along with the words in the vaporwave songs, now leaning up against you.
>She's jamming to this just as much as you are as you keep trolling random strangers on 4chan; together. Actually teaming up at times.
>Trixie licks her lips, soon realizing how cold it's getting in the tent due to it being sometime in the early morning.
>Her breath begins to shudder more, and you notice her arms are still covered in goosebumps.
>She notices you looking at her, but only smiles a bit when your eyes were caught wandering below her face.
"...Cold?"
>Trixie nods with a bite of her lip, seemingly interpreting your words for something else. But part of you can completely understand her.
>She means something... really good.
>This session of trolling people on the internet feels a bit different than the last one. Trixie is... bumping into you more often in her sleeping bag.
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>>28748067
>It isn't long before you figure out that's she's doing it on purpose.
"Still cold?"
>You're starting to shiver partially from excitement and partially from the cold now. But after looking back at Trixie, you can see her shivering too.
>"These sleeping bags are thinner than Trixie thought."
>You're about to answer her, but she interrupts and starts off with something else.
>"We should double up our sleeping bags."
>You're taken by surprise, but only a little bit. Trixie has already said weirder things than this before.
"You... you think so?"
>"Trixie wants to be warmer."
"But if we like... double layer the sleeping bags, then which one of us is going to use it?"
>"Both of us." Trixie is obviously trying to keep from grinning.
>You can feel the blush creep across your face. No need to describe what just happened, you just look around for seemingly the longest time as the vaporwave continues to play.
>Feeling yourself getting harder in your pants as you imagine yourself... sharing the sleeping bag with Trixie.
>Saying yes or no isn't even required; Trixie is already sliding out of her sleeping bag as the clock strikes around four thirty AM.
>Her purple top clings to her torso as she squats and opens up the hole of her sleeping bag after she's completely out. Two small bumps on her chest reveal to you where her nipples stand erect under the fabric.
>It's too late to look away; you already saw it. The image is in your mind, and your can't stop yourself from reaching full mast in a compressed fashion.
>Smile awkwardly, but Trixie starts to smile awkwardly the exact same way you are as she catches you taking a peek at her chest.
>"Stick your legs out." She holds the opening of the sleeping bag near your feet.
>Her knuckles slide against your body as your sleeping bag is enveloped inside of hers.
"Why my sleeping bag, though?"
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>>28748074
>"Two reasons." Trixie tells you. "Trixie likes to keep her scent alone in her own sleeping bag." She pauses and smiles at you. "And she knows what's going on in yours anyway."
>Nervousness chills you.
"Y-you mean."
>"Shh." She crawls right up to you. Through the loose arm hole in her sleeveless top, you can't see any bra hugging her body.
>First, her legs rub up against your chest, then they sink lower and invade where your legs are. She just started climbing in without warning you.
>You can tell that she can feel your mast pushing against her through your pants.
>The pressure against the sleeping bags's surface intensifies as both you and Trixie take up the space, now making the double layered cloth grip around the two of you really... tight. Pushing you and Trixie together.
>And there's no way to pull your chest away from Trixie's; you feel her breasts squish against you as her arms move around with the phone in one hand.
>"Well, Trixie sure thinks this is an improvement." Her voice's texture goes along with the tones of the vaporwave music that's still playing. “Want to post some more?"
"S-sure. Now that we're warm." You can feel her breathing against you.
>Her breathing becomes more gradual, but her heartbeat quickens. As does yours.
>Trixie dims the lamp that illuminates the tent, leaving your phone screens as the only major light source.
>Her breath tickles your neck as your phones are lined up against one another, parallel to the ground.
>You feel Trixie snake her arm around your body, but it only makes you do the same to her.
>Things are getting really heated really quickly. But the last thing you want to do is turn back.
>Start saving more thumbnails from google images.
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>You sort of wish you hadn’t fallen prey to this arousal at this moment of weakness in the early morning. But Trixie wanted to stay awake… and things started to happen. Resistance became a thing of the past.
>It got cold outside, you got hot inside.
>Fuckin’ nature.
>The threads at this time in the morning are moving really slow. But they get more traffic from another timezone in the world after you and Trixie start flooding the place with your messages.
>You face the girl inside the not-so-spacious sleeping bag, placing a hand on her hip and letting your fingers find her bare skin in the gap between her shirt and her shorts.
>With this, Trixie giggles. She scoots her waist forward so it lightly pushes your pelvic ares back a little bit. And your sturdy boner triumphantly sinks between her flesh between her thighs.
>Your phones lightly bump against eachother as your posts get more and more excited. Trixie’s starting to breathe more heavily, getting red in the face as she feels your fingers digging under the top of her shorts and playing with the waistband of her panties.
>The girl sighs appreciatively and presses her face against yours by the cheek, wrapping you into a side-embrace with her arm and prompting you to start pulling her shorts down with a slight nudge of her hips.
>That smile on her face is so kissable. It puckers against your lips that lightly mash against it, followed by a quiet moan from Trixie.
>She’s unraveling up against you, but those shorts are on too tightly. Trixie turns to completely face you so you can undo the front of her shorts more easily. You feel her do the same to your shorts.
>Time to get pants-less comfortable when posting like this on the internet. Your hands are shaking so hard for a moment that you see the sleeping bag around the two of you vibrate for a second.
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>>28748085
>Her hands are doing something really quickly as you turn your hands to your phone to post another wall of text with a jpeg of a lawn care advertisement.
>The two of your have been alternating with lustful smiles being exchanged between one another, and Trixie brings her hands up to the phones to post next as yours go back down to work on getting her now undone shorts to her knees.
>You pull, and feel your own shorts get dragged with them.
>They’re off of both pairs of legs with enough twisting and turning around with what little space you have. Bring them up past your increasingly heated bodies and out into the open.
>Trixie had connected the two pairs of shorts through their front buttons and slots that had been undone. She grins at you with an eyebrow raised.
>”Impressed?”
>Let out a short breath with a convinced nod. Trixie’s petite form moves its nearly bare hips against you, turning its side to the brunt of your erection.
>Caress the side of her shoulder, watching her perky tits slightly sway under her tank top in the glow of the screen as the girl perches herself up by her elbows.
>Telling one of the anonymous users on the thread that their opinion doesn’t matter because they don’t like anime. That should get a reply or two.
>Mount yourself on top of Trixie from behind her inside of the sleeping bag, letting your shaft find its place lying flat between the soft cheeks of her ass. She pushes that rump back up into you, prompting you to push it back down with the force of your hips. Trixie can’t hold back a pleased sigh, pushing back up against your weight to challenge you to push harder.
>End up grinding on her after her own arousal makes her hips stronger than yours. Trixie bites her lip in response to this reward, pushing her ass up even further into your gliding pelvic shoves against her.
>You’re both very far from cold now, starting to sweat at the mercy of eachother’s body heat.
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>>28748089
>Trixie’s phone is right up against yours; your hands and her hands brush up against one another as you excitedly type your replies to those who took the bait. Fingers nearly getting tangled in a clumsy, loving mess.
>Even replying to eachother’s bait on purpose.
>After you have to wait for the timer to let you post something else, your hands happily return to exploring Trixie’s body as she leans on her elbows under you. Her erect nipples under her thin top still brush past your fingers as you grope her softly jutting chest. Your fingertips play with them as Trixie posts some more.
>You didn’t even notice her start to post from your phone as well until she says something to you. “Watch this.”
>Each of the girl’s hands work on a different touch screen, and you get the message to keep touching Trixie’s body by the playful swinging of her hips.
>Trixie suddenly breathes out heavily as she feels your hands slip into the arm holes of her top and inch across her smooth skin.
>You can feel her breathing become more anxiously thirsty as she dishes out a new post every thirty seconds. With your fingers each flicking and grazing across an areola at first before retreating out of the top to grab Trixie’s gently rocking hips.
>And Trixie raises her ass into your solid member once more. “Reach… under…” She pleads in an airy voice.
>In instant response, Trixie’s panties are grabbed by eager fingers and infiltrated with pleasure-ridden tugs and pulls. They’re twisted down and away from her swaying hips, tangling around her now slippery thighs.
>Trixie shudders as she hits the submit button after filling out the captcha.
>Her brain spins as you voluntarily pull her ass into you, pushing the tip of your dick further under between her cheeks towards the front of her underside. The only two things between your skin and hers are your boxer shorts and her panties; both noticeably soaked by now.
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>>28748097
>”Don’t stop.” Trixie welcomes your curling fingers kneading around her waist that gently claw towards her crotch. “Trixie wants to be stimulated when she puts these sheep in their place.” She eyes all of the replies she’s getting. “They shall not escape the wrath of The Great and Powerful Trixie!”
>The sheer ambition in her voice alone makes your dick twitch, the heat inside the sleeping bag seemingly endless.
>And that ambition amplifies when you thrust your fingers in between her sopping wet lips, forcing Trixie to jolt around at the feeling of being entered, with a croaking, sustained moan.
>Her fingers frantically conquer both of the keyboards on the touch screens, typing at a speed able to match the speed of typing on a physical keyboard. Your clutching induces so many typos in what she’s saying; the girl is starting to grunt like a wild animal as she completes one shitpost after another under the name of Grim Reaper.
>With le’s and XD’s riddled all over the text box.
>With heavily pixilated thumbnail photos of Ronald McDonald, a field full or tractors, a plate of jello and a flaming train flying off the rails of a railroad track.
>The last photo perfectly describes what you’re making Trixie do to this thread. She has zero mercy for the now dozens of replies she’s getting. Relentlessly showering them with d a n k m a y m a y s .
>The wrath of The Great and Powerful Trixie indeed.
>You feel her squirm spasmodically underneath you. She’s slipping and sliding against the interior of the sleeping bag. her slick skin becoming more revealed as her damp top rides up her torso from the movement.
>Take one hand and help scrunch the top away from Trixie’s supple chest, pulling harder against the sweat making the top stick to her.
>The other hand still digging through Trixie’s dripping honeypot with the free hand liberating Trixie’s tits from her shirt.
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>>28748102
>Trixie starts spamming “THE BEST” dozens of times per post with pictures of Dave Grohl shouting into a microphone.
>After several more minutes, the replies you barely notice through your arousal make you smile ever wider.
>[>This ‘the best’ spammer. Do we have mods or not?]
>You can feel Trixie heating up under your gripping fingers that cup her drenched nethers. She shivers for a bit, groaning as you plant prolonged kisses onto the back of her neck.
>With her panties now bunched just above her knees, Trixie slowly rolls over beneath you onto her back. Keeping your soaking hand between her sweet folds.
>Her wide grin meets your lips with a hot breath into your mouth, tasting like cherry bubblegum. Trixie moans loudly with her lips latched with yours, she tightly shuts her eyes.
>The girl is on her back, ducking her head beneath her shirt as your free hand pulls it up past her face after the kiss breaks.
>The shirt is grappled behind Trixie’s neck. Trixie is breathing wildly as she slips her phone into your free hand, your phone still in her devious grasp.
>You feel her feet snake up the sides of your legs, soon reaching the sides of your boxers and adeptly pulling them down. The wet hand joins the dry one holding Trixie’s phone.
>Find yourself flicked out of your trousers with your tip colliding against those same wet lips with an almost silent smack. Slipping between them… slipping in.
>”Trixie’s going commando tomorrow.” She murmurs as you hear a stuttered ripping sound.
>About twenty seconds later, Trixie pulls out a purple pair of panties from within the sleeping bag. They’re torn apart, tossed to the side. The girl gives you a sultry grin.
>Trixie groans ecstatically for your shaft to start polishing her walls. She begs for it with the glistening in her eyes, beats of sweat on her forehead.
>Her tongue sweeping her smile from left to right.
>Wanting it is an understatement.
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>>28748108
>Trixie quietly yelps with her mouth closed when your length slides in between the moist flesh, trembling in something beyond pure ecstasy.
>Enjoying it is an understatement.
>You watch the girl’s posts show how desperate she is for more as she furiously types from your phone, back to back with hers in your hands. The text doing the best it can to blare the eroticism she’s feeling in what couldn’t POSSIBLY be silence. Describing it is impossible.
>Impossible is an understatement.
>You thrust… and thrust and thrust and thrust still. Straining ever so passionately as Trixie’s soft, warm, soaking walls hug the entire length of your dick, slipping and dragging back and forth with maximum stimulation.
>Maximum is an understatement.
>On Trixie’s phone, reply to her posts with some babbling utterances of extreme excitement of your own. Mouth the words through gritting teeth as you type them, feeling your dick melting into Trixie as you plow her harder. Giving her all of the fun she could ever have on her back.
>Fun is an understatement.
>All of the other anonymous users on the thread watch in confusion and horror as the hyper-horny back-and-forth shitposting reaches a level beyond levels. There is no text nor images that could express what you really want to put on there, what Trixie wants to put on there in response to what you put on there.
>Put is an understatement.
>Your screen becomes coated in Trixie’s luscious, syrupy juices from your fingers. So many typos, so many butterfingers, so many incorrect captchas.
>Clumsy is an understatement.
>Trixie’s most recent post shines like a green light. [OH AON IM CMUMIGN. I AMN C U M M I N G]. That green light is accompanied by a jpeg of the blue NUT button meme. [CUMCUMCMUCMCUMCMU].
>Nut is an understatement. Definitely on Trixie’s end.
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>GreenTextFaggot infects yet another thread with his cancer-tier writing
Wew
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>>28748116
>She undulates with unstoppable outbursts, erupting with outright turmoil under your embrace in the sleeping bag. You reply by pasting the link to the wikipedia page on ejaculation, spamming it not even god knows how many times. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ejaculation
>Ejaculation is an understatement. Especially regarding what is happening to you.
>Reciprocate Trixie’s lustful convulsions through your own turbulent orgasm that reigns down upon the girl. Mirror every last one of her unrestrained movements; the sleeping bag is literally sent into mid air.
>Even feeling it is an understatement; Trixie curls her toes and clenches her teeth as you fiercely glaze her womb in a crashing surge of semen.
>On the thread, you match her wanton message with a jpeg thumbnail image of a cheese wonton from a Chinese restaurant website you found on google images.
>Any word at all is an understatement.
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>Many minutes later.
>Many, many more minutes later.
>”Trixie wants to call it sexposting.”
>You laugh with her a little bit, noticing the sun rise in the distance through the thin layer of the tent. Trixie cuddles up beside you, completely bottomless in her wrinkled tank top.
>Birds chirping in the distance.
“I think that’s a good name for it.” You stroke the inside of Trixie’s thigh, making her giggle and involuntarily pull back.
>It definitely becomes apparent now that everyone in the other tents are getting up now. You and Trixie stay quiet, making sure no one tries to creep up on your tent and take a peek at the two of you again.
>Breakfast time might start soon.
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The End.

http://pastebin.com/B5XebR5U

Lemme know what you guys think. Did you laugh, cum, or cringe?

>>28748135
That's a pretty neat meme. Proud of you.
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Alright I'm out.
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>>28748148
I had more of a laugh than a boner, but it was good. I'll give it a spaghetti/10.
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>>28748148
>That's a pretty neat meme
Thanks, senpai
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>>28748148
Jesus fucking christ dude
I need to fap to this later on
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>>28747137
Hello Mr. Grey.
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>>28748148
>Did you laugh, cum, or cringe?
All three, you magnificent faggot.
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>>28748148
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>>28748148
Where is the full version of this story? I need to know because of reasons.
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>>28748424
Fingerbang.
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>>28748157
>>28748216
>>28748256
>>28748325
Thanks, all. Glad to post this here.
>>28748178
You know it's true.
>>28748248
Hi.
>>28748424
>>28748436
There is a paste for it that should be everything up until like a third of the way through what I posted here. It's not finished just yet, but will be updated once I wrap the thing up, which should be soon. I guess check back to the paste by like Halloween or something.
http://pastebin.com/jSdznwyL

I'm also considering starting a completely new story for here with possibly Rainbow Dash. It'll be really short and straight to the point, but less silly than the last one I posted.
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>>28748148
This is a fetish I never knew I had
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>>28747986
Good luck, I'll be waiting for you. These feels are making my heart ache so much.
>>28748627
Nice to have you pop in for a bit.
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>>28748627
>mfw
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I just finished typing up tomorrow morning's posts

The feels are there but I'm hoping it's a little easier on you guys

see you in the morning
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>>28749010

don't cater to us, do what you want to do

maybe its just because im a feels junkie, or maybe just because that's what I actually believe
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>>28748627
By all means, if you have something to contribute, as a fellow writefag I welcome you to join in.
JB seems to have vanished into think air, or he has found another street-sweeper...
DG is (hopefully) lurking and BA seems to be in bit of a shitty mood, so an extra set of fingers is always appreciated to satisfy the usual visitors.
I myself am not as much cared about, since I'm dragging mine out. That and I'm quite inconsistent in my posting.

I'm dealing with real-life shit atm, and the condition some friends are in require my attention. Might not be able to produce any green until the weekend. But I will be lurking the thread and offering any advice/help to anyone if they need it.

>>28749010
If you're depressed, I'm depressed. So stop being so feelsy.
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>>28748627
I can tell you this, your writing is really good. It even reads like decent prose. >>28748135 is just being butthurt, ignore him.
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>>28749071

I'm still lurking around as well. I'm going to try to pick mine back up tomorrow when I'm not out of the house 13 hours then packing the last 5 hours I'm awake. Been a busy fucking week so far
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>>28748148
Glorious.
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>>28747320

>You are Anon
>You are completely off balance as the two of you stumble into the living room
>Trixie refuses to let go or break the kiss so you are having to focus on both her grip on your face and trying to stay on your feet
>Your mind is still reeling from everything that's happened in the last few minutes
>You can hardly tell up from down anymore
>And that's when you smack into the arm of the couch and fall backwards
>You instinctively grab hold of Trixie so that she doesn't hurt herself and end up pinned under her as you fall back onto the sofa
>Trixie is still kissing you and you don't know what to do
>Until now you'd just been going with the flow
>But now you'd manage to pull your head out of your ass just enough to realize that this is bad
>And even though it might be too late you have to try and stop this from at least getting worse
"Trixie...stop...please" You manage to get out trying to break the kiss and push her away without hurting her
>"No...all...you...think...about...is Pinkie." She says between kisses "You....never...think...about...how I...feel" She says finally breaking the kiss and sitting up straddling you
>That's not true
>How long has she been thinking that
>Right now there's a million things running through your head that you want to say or ask her
>But you can't get a single one to come out before she pulls off her t-shirt to reveal a plain white bra
>"So now I'm just going to have to show you" She says with determination despite a faint quiver in her voice
>As she leans in for another kiss you put your hands on her shoulders to try and stop her
"Wait Trixie" You say wracking your brain for something to get her to stop "I don't have any condoms"
>A look of irritation passes across her face "Did Pinkie care that you didn't have any?" She asks angrily
"What? No, I mean..."
>That only seems to make her madder as she fights against you now "It doesn't matter okay, I'm on the pill anyway." She says sounding more determined
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>>28750394

"Trix c'mon, this is a bad idea" You plead
>You suddenly feel all of the fight go out of her
>She stops struggling against your arms and sits back
>You look up to see her shoulders slump as she hangs her head no longer looking you in the eyes
>You hear a faint sniffle
>Trixie looks back up at you with tears welling at the corners of her eyes
>"What's wrong with me? Is it my body? Am I not pretty enough? Tell me, why won't you pay attention to me just this once?" She says her voice quivering
>Fuck
>It feels like your heart is breaking
>You have to do something
>You can't stand to see her like this
>You push yourself up into a seated position and pull her close to you
>She resists at first but you don't let her go
>She slowly starts to give in and accepts the embrace, lightly sobbing into your shoulder as you stroke her hair
>You stay like that for a little bit letting her get it all out before you finally decide to speak
"Trixie." You start to say trying to pick your words with care "There's nothing wrong with you. You're perfect just the way you are and I'd never want you to change." You say as you lean back so you can look into her eyes
>They're red from tears, but both are fixed right on you
"You and Pinkie are my best friends and I'd never try to put one of you over the other. You're both too special to me." You say moving your hands to her shoulders and giving them a reassuring squeeze
>"Then please Anon, just for tonight I want you to make me feel special." She says looking at you pleadingly with her lavender eyes
>You sigh
"Trixie I don't think..."
>"Please, just this one time." She says moving her hands up to cup your face
>You know this is a bad idea
>There's going to be no going back from this
>Your brain is screaming no
>But you can't stand to see her like this
>You lean forward resting your forehead against hers
"Are you sure this is really what you want?" You ask
>She gives you a sincere smile "More than anything Anon"
"Okay Trixie" you sigh
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>>28750405
>"Is this really what you want?"
Anon, stop. Anon, please don't do this.
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This is all I have time for, about to leave to move furniture for most of the day, will check in from time to time when I can
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Finally done moving, I'm dead, will try typing up a few posts to drop later tonight, but I'm not making a ton of promises right now

Upside I got to finally being home a few of my treasures

Pic related
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>>28750405
WEW LAD
FURTHER DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE WE GO
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>>28749311

lol dude no its not

his ideas are pretty disorganized and its hard to understand what he's trying to get across sometimes

its not the worst writing, but I think that other guys criticism was legitimate, not constructive, but legitimate
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>>28750405
Never before was this more relevant - https://youtu.be/2k0SmqbBIpQ
Seriously, how fucking old is Anon to be this stupidly horny
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bampu
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>>28750405
>"You and Pinkie are my best friends and I'd never try to put one of you over the other.
Except for the fact that you just fucked one, you insufferable moron?
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>>28751661
Is that a drum stick?
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>>28751972

well he's in highschool

and if you had fine bitches wanting to do sexual things with you i don't think you'd turn them down
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>>28753322
>fine bitches
See I was going to reply to this, but the more I read that sentence the less I feel qualified to discuss merits of black culture
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>>28753379

>merits

lol what merits
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>>28739709
Well I am finally back! I come back with the new green, of course the sequel to Anon's Lewd Sleepover. Hopefully you faggots enjoy.

>You are Anon.
>You are currently in Rarity’s pink jeep, parked near the school you attend, Canterlot High school.
>You sat in the comfy leather passenger seat, as Rarity sat in your lap shaping her immaculate nails.
>You fumbled with the radio flipping through station after station trying to find something that won’t harass your ears.
>It’s clear, however, that the radio is not on your side today.
“Goddammit… stupid radio…”
>You mumble as you turn off the radio preferring the silence.
>Today it seemed that everything was going against you, your frustration splayed on your shoulder.
>You sigh as Rarity looked toward you with a warm face.
>”Are you okay, darling? You’ve been in a sour mood all day.”
>A worried frown formed on her face, looking to you to answer her.
>You sigh again before you answer her.
“Just been a bad day. I woke up late; Ms. Harshwhinny gave me shit, again. All my classes were horrible today, also some dick said I was a hipster! Who does he think I am!”
>You rant at her, expelling all of your frustration.
>Rarity now just smiles instead, a particular comment catching her attention.
>”Oh darling, I understand your frustration, however you do have to admit…”
>She stops her sentence halfway through expecting you to reply.
“Admit what? Oh c’mon Rares, not you too! How can you say I’m a hipster?!”
>”Oh shush honey, you know I jest!”
>Rarity replies with a couple jovial laughs, the humor passing through you.
>”But you are a tad hipsterish…”
>Rarity proceeds to burst into laughter at your expense, you just sit there with a stern face.
>Soon however her laughter infects you as a reluctant smile invades your face.
“Okay, maybe just a tad.”
>You laugh at yourself.
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>>28753400

>Soon after the laughter subsides Rarity leans in on you, still sitting comfortably in your lap.
>Rarity’s jeep was especially spacious with the amazing leather seats, so this position was not a hindrance.
>You could feel her kiss your neck, moving up to your jaw.
>Soon she moves onto your lips as you lean in closer to her face to share.
>Your lips tangle in passion, as you both kiss sweetly.
>You taste the cherry flavor on her lips as you lightly bite her bottom lip.
>She smiles into a kiss as she does the same to you, biting just a tad harder at yours.
>You had told her you enjoyed that quite a bit. You involuntarily moan at her actions.
>Soon Rarity changes her position in her lap so that she is straddling you.
>Your hands explore her body over her typical school outfit.
>Your lips smack together as Rarity begins to grind ever so slightly into your crotch.
>Things were getting awfully steamy in here, you thought.
>As soon as you were about to lovingly squeeze her butt you hear a rough tapping on the window.
“Oh s-shit…”
>Rarity heard as well stopping her actions and quickly falling back into the driver’s seat.
>You both look towards the window to see who interrupted you, hoping it wasn’t Principa-
>And it was Vice-Principal Luna. You thought too soon.
>You take initiative as you press the button to lower the car windows.
>You smile sheepishly at the stern looking woman.
“Uhh so I can explain.”
>You begin but she just raises her hand silencing you.
>”I clearly interrupted something, intimate, here and believe me I did not want to, but I do have to tell you that you should refrain from intimate acts near the school. And it’s very serious that you follow that rule.”
> Vice-Principal Luna tells you in a calm but stern voice. Internally you were happy she didn’t expel you both on the stop.
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>>28753389
We wuz kangz.
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>>28753406
Fucking kids being as horny as cocksucking jack rabbits
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>>28753018
Well half of one, I had to fight for every bit of it at the only show The Real Mckenzies ever played in our town

>>28751972
At this point he isn't horny, he is in over his head and doing something he knows is a bad idea, but doesn't know what else he can do I will say right now the only thing he's thinking about is Trixie....and that's both good and bad
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>>28753406

>”Of course, P-principal Luna! We promise it won’t happen again!”
>Rarity responds in a shaky voice and smile.
>”It better not.” Luna finishes eyeing you both.
>”Now please, enjoy your teenage passion somewhere else.” The vice-principal finally leaves you both.
>As she leaves both your sights, you sigh with a release on tension.
>Soon Rarity starts up her jeep as you begin to pull out of the school parking lot.
>”That was your fault…”
>Rarity finally speaks up laying blame on you.
“What!? You’re the one that started all the kissing!”
>You reply in a shocked tone.
>”Well you, you seduced me!”
>You smile at the absurdity, slightly complimented by Rarity statement.
“Alright, alright, maybe I did.”
>You smile smugly as the road opens before you and soon you’re on your way home.
>You feel a familiar vibration in the pocket of your pants. You reach for your phone and examine it to see you received a text from Flash.
>[Dude, we gotta catch up. Come over today, got pizza and beer. ]
>You realize it’s been a full week since you’ve had time to hang out with him, ever since the sleepover last weekend.
>You figure you owe him, considering he is one of your best friends and all.
>You turn to Rarity.
"Hey can you drop me off at Flash's today? The dork wants to hang out."
>"Sure, darling. It's not a problem." Rarity responds with a smile.
>"Thank you so much sugar." You lean over to give her a kiss on the cheek.
>She blushes heavily at your personal attention.
>You knew Rarity loved it when you called her little pet names.
>You lean back into the seat as you watch the trees move past you.
>Pretty soon you arrive at Flash's house as Rarity drops you off.
>"Oh, remember darling, we have the big trip to Everfree tomorrow! Don't forget to pack."
>Shit, you just remembered about that whole thing. You would have to pack later tonight which would be a pain, but future you will deal with that.
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>>28753533
And here's the pastebin for this one.
http://pastebin.com/fuW4D1Ca

>>28753516
I really like something about that painting.
>>28753439
Well teenagers are known to be like this, trust me I know from experience.
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>>28753533

"Well thanks for the reminder."
>You give Rarity a final kiss before she speeds off leaving you at Flash's house.
>You text him that you're outside.
>Soon you see the door open and you see his familiar blue hair and jacket.
>Does he ever take that off?
>You wonder in your head as you walk inside your friends house.
>"Sup man." Flash raises his fist expecting a complimentary fist bump.
>You of course don't leave a brother hanging.
"Sup Flash. Long time no see, dude."
>You leave your backpack at the floor as Flash leads you upstairs to his room.
>"It's only been a week."
"It's a saying dude."
>You take the many steps up and follow him as he turns to the left leading to a decked out door.
>Filled with stickers or random bands and other random symbols.
>Flash opens the door inviting you in first.
>"Ladies first." He cheekily adds as you walk in.
"Shut the fuck up."
>You reply in a jovial tone before plopping down on one of his beanbag chairs.
>Flash walks in closing the door behind him before sitting himself down in a computer chair.
>He turned around to look for something underneath the desk.
>You begin speaking anyways.
"So what's up Flash, anything new?"
>He's still rummaging around looking for something.
>"Nah not really, just the usual."
>Soon he finally seems to find what he's looking for.
"What are you looking for dude?"
>You ask curiously.
>He takes out a small box and opens it.
>"Check it out man."
>He throws you a small white blunt. You should have figured.
"Didn't take you for a druggy, Flash."
>You give a cheeky smile as you joke with him.
>"Shut up man, it's for my anxiety." He replies holding a lighter and his own blunt.
"Anxiety?Really?"
>You give him a confused look.
>"Yea."
>Flash just nods his head.
"Okay I'm just gonna let that go."
>Flash proceeds to light up his blunt, afterwards throwing the lighter to you.
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>>28751791
This is how I know you're either samefagging or trolling. Calling something that says nothing more than "cancer-tier writing" before the person even had time to read it "legitimate criticism".
That's a pretty weak excuse to then go on to overanalyze porn, sir.
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>>28750394
MY MINDS TELLIN ME NNNOOOOOOOOOOO
BUT MY BODY
MY BODY IS TELLIN ME YEEEAAHHHHEEAAA
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>>28753676
>Flash has anxiety
Do you think it's because of Timber?
>>28753917
GS's story didn't interest me all that much, but I think that's a pretty fair point.
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>>28753676

>You light up your own and proceed to take a nice huff, Flash following your moves.
>Soon you're both chilled out.
>"So you never told me what happened last weekend man, all I heard was something about a sleepover at Pinkie's house?"
>Flash begins to question you.
"Yea, sit down as I have a story for you man."
>Flash of course was already sitting down and ready to hear your grand adventure.
>You begin to tell your experience of what happened at Pinkie's, detailing every part. The drunkenness, party games, and general debauchery of you and the girls.
>"So you're telling me she knocked you out?" Flash interjected seemingly confused.
"No, no Dash didn't knock me out, she just fucked up my nose real bad. Applejack made me pass out when she reset it."
>You clarify to him as he laughs at the thought of you with a broken nose.
>It wasn't funny to you at the time but you could see the comedy of it now.
>You continue with the story letting him know all about your nightmare and then what occurred with Rarity.
>"Holy shit, now I find that hard to believe."
>Flash seemed shocked at your telling of the story.
"I'm telling the truth, just ask Dash, she interrupted us."
>You smile jokingly as Flash eyes widen with surprise.
>"Hah! Are you serious?"
>He laughs in surprise.
"Dead serious."
>You reply in semi-serious tone.
>You finish your telling of the events adding the week that you spent with Rarity and the girls.
>Flash nodded in approval.
>"Man, you and Rarity. Honestly never expected that."
>His hand shot to his chin, looking up in wonder.
"Hey, you're not the only one. I wasn't expecting to lovingly fuck one of my childhood friends and then make her my girlfriend. Can't say that was on my list for the day."
>Flash begins to laugh like an idiot at your words.
>You laugh with him smoking the final hits of your tiny joint.
>The conversation lulls for a while as you both finished smoking.
>Again Flash seemed like he wanted to ask you something.
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>>28753917

I am doing neither, I'm just a critical person

would you say he's even close to being the best writer even ITT?

he's pretty average, I'd honestly say I wrote better than him back when I did, and I look back at parts of that shit and cringe
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>>28754121
>I am doing neither, I'm just a critical person
Works for me.
>would you say he's even close to being the best writer even ITT?
I don't rank writefags. Never said he was the best either. Just loved his story, because I found it sexy as fuck while also happening to resemble prose a little.
And to be frank, writing the way he does seems pretty above average. Hell, the same thing goes for a couple of the other writefags here in this thread, especially BurnoutAnon. I mean, a lot of this stuff is descriptive in really good ways that evokes a lot of emotions, whether it's sadness or arousal. I was able to fully immerse myself into both of the Trixie stories. The writing is pretty damn gripping, and it shows in how many people here enjoy those stories.
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>>28754059
Haha no it's not because of Timber, not yet at least.

>>28754066

>"So uhh, Twilight was there? Right?"
>He asked you in an awkward way.
"Yea she was there. Why do you ask?"
>You raise an eyebrow in interest.
>"No r-reason, just uhh just wanted to know."
>Flash responded, his tone conveying a different meaning behind his words.
"Dude... don't tell me you're still not over that Twilight girl."
>You finally catch on to why Flash is being so awkward.
>Figuring it was clearly about his weird obsession with that girl.
>"Dude! Of course I'm over it! Why are you even asking? You know I'm over that."
>You knew when Flash was being disingenuous.
>Again you looked at him with a suspicious glare.
"Yea, I don't buy it dude."
>Flash responds with an audible 'ugh' as he throws his hands in the air.
>"Fine! Okay, maybe I'm not completely over her."
>He finally gives in to the truth.
"Alright man, look all I'm saying is that Twilight girl and that other Twilight girl you fawn over are not the same person."
>"I know, I know! It's just..."
"It's nothing dude, they're not the same person. And you can't expect her not to find it just a bit creepy how you're trying to get at her."
>You lay a smack down on Flash, trying to get him to see the errors of his ways.
"Oh also not to mention that the girl you were into, was a magical horse! Speaking of magical horses, I see you're still into that show."
>You point towards a DVD case.
>"Oh my god, dude, not this again."
>Flash tries to stop you before you go on your rant again, even though its futile.
"Look man, I won't knock you for what you like, but maybe a show like 'My Little Horse: Companionship is Sorcery' isn't for guys your age."
>Flash just facepalms. You could see him shove the DVD back into the bottom of his bed, hiding his shame.
>"Okay, man! I get it! Let's just move past that."
>Flash finally begs for you to stop before you do too much damage.
>You give in to his demand, sparing him this time around.
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>>28754350
That was my last post of the night. I will continue tomorrow with a lot more >greens, so look forward to that.

Also this whole story will involve other characters getting lewd than just Anon so that's another upside.
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>>28754444
>4444
Also I hope you mean VP Luna here
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>>28754444
First, check 'em mofo
Second, I'm really hoping those plans for lewdness include >pic related
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>>28754487
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fucking trixie's theme right now
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=birrtUbd-CY
poor girl, fuck you burnout for hurting her in this way
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>>28750405

>The two of you just sit there staring into each other's eyes for a few moments
>Neither one of you really knowing if you should be the one to start
>In a weird fucked up way this kind of reminds you of how you first met Trixie
>Two awkward nerds siting alone together at lunch, both too nervous to say anything to one another
>Finally you bring a hand up to cup her cheek and lean into a kiss
>It's not like before
>This time you're both calmer
>Gentler
>You decide you'll let Trixie set the pace as you let your arms travel down to the small of her back
>After about a minute or so Trixie starts to deepen the kiss
>The way she kisses is different from Dash and Pinkie
>Where as Dash kissed hungrily and Pinkie's were full of repressed passion, Trixie kissed you slowly
>Carefully
>Like she's afraid to make a mistake
>She picks up the pace slowly as she gets used to what she's doing
>She brings her hands up to the back of your head while pulling herself closer to you
>After a few more moments you break the kiss to breath
>Trixie looks at you with a faint but innocent smile
>"That was great Anon." She says untangling her fingers from your hair "But you don't have to hold back okay." She says reaching behind her back to undo the clasp on her bra and letting it slide off her shoulder "I want you to touch me." Her hands reach down to behind her to your wrists and guide the up to her breast
>You take a second to appreciate Trixie's modest bust
>She was bigger than Dash's, that was for sure
>They fit in your hands perfectly
>You start playing with them
>Slowly and gently as you lean in to kiss Trixie's neck
>She moans as you fondle and caress them
>You feel her hips start to gyrate against you
>You begin to play with her nipples drawing a long sigh of pleasure
>She pulls your head from her neck and pulls you into another kiss as she falls back towards the couch reversing your earlier position as she wraps her legs around your waist
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That's all I have for now, will try to post more tomorrow before work

>>28755547
I know, it's as rough on me to write this as it is for you guys to read this

but damn this song is too spot on, you're killing me with this shit here

>>28753556
Welcome back DG, I really love that pic too

Beware, it matches the tone of things to come for poor Anon
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>>28753676
>white blunt

Boy howdy who the fuck paints blunts

There aren't white cigars man

at least there better not be
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>>28755739
It's either rolled with the 'raw' wraps or just a fat joint.

Gosh, kids these days and their danks.

WHY I REMEMBER WHEN IT WAS CALLED MAIZE AND YOU HAD TO WALK 15 MILES THROUGH THE GHETTO JUST TO GET HALF OF HALF A GRAM
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>>28753400
>>28753406
>>28753533
>>28753556
>>28753676
>>28754066
>>28754350
>>28754444
DG has returned! What a time to be alive!

As much as I hate not being able to have enough time to update, I do feel a bit better about things on my side of the equator. Expect updates soon fellow lurkers.
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>>28755650
h-help
i dont know which is better
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>>28755764
Raws are still brown though dude.


I've never been much of a paper guy but this is a great disrespect.
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>>28755844
Google them, you'll find they're not all brown like XXL's or optimo's.
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>>28755871
I know raw makes some normal paper. Like hemp paper shit.

But a blunt is made with cigar wraps.

Otherwise it's a joint
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>>28755650

are they in the room with the girls or are the girls in a different room
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>>28735596

I HAVEN'T POSTED IN THREE DAYS SHIT SHIT

>Twilight is the first to recover
>"Rarity, I think an explanation is in order here."
>You agree
>"Well, it all started last year when Roseluck and I were trying to find dresses for the dance."
>You knew Rose. She was one of the few who you actually felt comfortable around, but you'd gradually drifter apart.
>"I asked her if she had a date yet, and she said she had someone in mind but was just waiting to be asked"
>You listen intently, hoping to remember anything about what she's talking about, but still nothing comes to you
>"Anyway, after a while we decided that it would be fun to make it a ladies' night and go together! But, well... it didn't work out that way."
>You were starting to piece things together now. With what Rarity had said so far, your hazy memories of the night after the homecoming game, and Roseluck becoming distant...
"Um, Rarity, can I ask you something real quick?"
>"Why of course darling!"
"Would this have something to do with us hanging out after the homecoming game?"
>Rarity's eyes twinkled
>You rather liked it when she looked at you that way
>"So you DO remember then..."
>oh
>oh no
"Well, Yes.... and no."
>Rarity's smile fades a bit
"But I'm sure I'll remember when you finish your story?"
>"Well I would certainly hope so... after all it WAS my first time"
>Your heart stops
>The room is silent
>The other girls eyes dart between you and Rarity
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>>28756146
ITT: Anons fuck up
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>>28756194
That squirrel didn't fly so good.
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>>28757089
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>>28757588
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>>28755650

>As the kiss deepens you move one of your hands down to grope Trixie's pajama clad ass
>While it wasn't anywhere near as big as Pinkie's, Trixie made up for the size of her bust with her impressive hips
>Feeling you start to become more adventurous seemed to spur Trixie on as well
>She seems less cautious in her kissing and begins more actively grinding into you
>After a few more moments you pull away from the kiss and start trailing kisses down her neck towards her breasts
>Trixie moans as you take her nipple into her mouth and tightens her legs around your waist
>Gentle you tease the nipple with your mouth
>Licking and sucking it
>As Trixie continues to moan and writhe under you slip your hand past the waist band of her pj bottoms and get a handful of her pantie covered ass
>Trixie moans again before getting your attention "A-Anon, sl-slow down...stop"
>You stop dead in your tracks and look up at her afraid you've done something wrong
>But Trixie just smiles down at you
>Slowly she pushes you back up to a seated position and plants a light kiss on your lips
>"You're making me feel so good, but now I want to return the favor." She says moving her hand down to rub the bulge that had begun to form in your pants
"Tr-Trix..." You moan at the sensation "Y-you don't have to..."
>"I know I don't have to Anon." She says as wave of confidence seems to wash over her as she sees the effect she's having on you "But I want to." She says before kissing you again
>With one hand she pulls down your zipper and frees your dick
>As she kisses you she starts stroking your dick
>Her movements are gentle but deft
>neither too fast or too slow
>She breaks the kiss and looks down at it
>Her eyes widen and she lets out a faint gasp
"Everything alright Trix?" You ask as she ceases her stroking
>This seems to pull Trixie from her thoughts as she tries to get back into her confident persona
>"O-of course, just getting used to...seeing the real thing is all. I'm fine, really."
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>>28756194
>sit there taking pictures while the thing hangs there in agony
nice
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>>28758127
>mesmerized by the dick
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>>28754444
Still pushing for some lewd with her
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>>28758127

>Trixie snaps herself out of her nervousness and puts on confident front again as she begins stroking you again while leaning in to kiss your neck
>"Anon would you like to see magic trick?" She whispers to you as she pulls away from your neck
>You're confused until you see her lean down on her hands and knees
"Trixie..." You moan as you feel her breath against your tip
>"Prepare to see The Great and Powerful Trixie make this wand disappear" She says leaning down a little more and placing a kiss on the head of your dick before taking it into her mouth
>You groan as you feel her envelope you and begin lightly bobbing up and down
>For the second time tonight you realize a girl is sucking your dick while it was still coated by another girl's juices
>Except this time you don't think it's hot
>You just feel more like a scumbag even through all the pleasure
>Trixie begins trying to take more of you into her mouth but it doesn't seem easy for her
>As she tries to go down more than halfway she begins to sputter and pulls herself trying to catch her breath
>"A minor setback but don't worry Trixie can master any trick" Trixie coughs while wiping a stray bit of drool
>You feel bad
>She's trying so hard
>You reach over and place a hand on her cheek
"Trixie, you don't have to force yourself to do this" You say
>"No Anon, I want to do this" Trixie insists taking your hand in hers looking up at you with determination in her eyes "Please just let me try again"
>You sigh, but give her a warm smile
"Okay Trix, but just take it slow okay." You say at least trying to make it easier on her "It already felt really good"
>Trixie blushes as she lets go of your hand and leans back down
>Your dick is at full attention by now as she starts blowing you again
>This time she's going slower
>Gradually taking more of you into her mouth as she gets comfortable while still stroking you with her hand
>It feels incredible and you can't help but moan her name as she makes it halfway again
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That's all I have time for until I get back from work, see you all in like 5-6ish hours
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>>28758889
>>28754487
Hmm well you got me to think about it, I'll see if I can work something out.

>>28754350

>Soon you both calm down again as Flash sets up a game of Street Fighter for you to.
>Due to your current highness you get absolutely smashed.
"Well shit."
>You say feigning an upset tone but you didn't really care.
>Suddenly you see Flash widen his eyes as if he forgot to tell you something important.
>"I almost forgot man! You're gonna love this. Follow me."
>You wonder what Flash is so excited about but you follow him anyways.
>Flash leads you down the stairs again this time heading for his basement.
>You hope it wasn't a rape dungeon.
>Your fears are soothed as you enter the slightly dusty basement of his house.
>Flash turns the light now clearly showing off the room inside.
>And you were impressed.
>This was essentially Flash's studio, where he kept his many guitars and what seemed to be a new drum set.
>To the side was an open cabinet that held his growing music collection.
>From what you remembered last time, it seems a lot bigger.
"Wow, you've outdone yourself Flash. Got a new drum set and everything."
>You give him a smile as you walk over to the instruments carefully examining them.
>"Here you go dude."
>Suddenly he throws you a couple of drum sticks. You catch them in the air and look at him with a questioning glance.
>"I'm not really a drums guy."
>Flash shrugs with a smirk as he goes for one of his own favorite guitars.
>"I figured we could jam out, like we used to."
>His tone was nostalgic.
>Sitting down at the foot of the drums you start to remember all the years you used to hang out with Flash, all the times you would fool around with his instruments.
>They were good times.
"Sure man, let's jam."
>You test the consistency of the sticks, tapping the hi-hats and multiple drums at your feet.
>Once you get a feel for it, you both begin. Your drums crash and thunder while Flash commits to his usual twangs of his guitar.
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>>28759154

What a shit show this night has been.

A glorious, sexy shit show
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>>28759690

>After about an hour or so of the jam of the century you and Flash finally break.
>You're sweating slightly from the action.
"Yo Flash noticed your collection's gotten bigger since the last time."
>You finally mention, pointing toward the open cabinet.
>"Oh yea, you kinda inspired me to branch out."
>He admits before setting down his guitar to take a swig of water.
>You get up from the drum chair and move toward the cabinet inspecting it closer this time.
>You see the many vinyls and CD cases of the many bands which Flash enjoyed.
>It was mainly classic rock from your parents time.
"Oh Flash and your dadrock."
>You jokingly mock him as you keep rifling through his collection.
>"Still GOAT man, check my new shit, you'd like that."
>He replies cheeky as always but you follow his word looking for newest purchases.
"Hmm Yo La Tengo, Pavement, and Bjork?"
>You weren't quite expecting that last one.
>"Yea, something about her voice just gets to me."
>He smiles sheepishly as he rubs the back of his head.
"Can't say I was expecting that."
>You finally finish looking through Flash's collection before you pick out a vinyl and set it on his player.
>Flash sits down in another bean bag chair near you.
>Soon you set it up to play and the song begins.
https://youtu.be/ZOP3ahVErOM
>You sit down in a separate bean bag chair near Flash's.
>You start to wonder what Flash's deal with bean bag chairs was but you let it go as the song plays.
>You let the infectious bass roll as you and Flash enjoy the song.
>You then remember about the camping trip happening tomorrow, figuring you should ask him if he's going.
"So Flash, you going to that Everfree camping shit tomorrow?"
>You ask to Flash who was currently moving his head to the beat of the song.
>He is interrupted by your question but soon answers it.
>"Uh yea, I'm going to that. You?"
>You reply with a nod.
>"Heard it was about a week or something like that. I've never been camping before but it sounds like fun."
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>>28754121
>I'd honestly say I wrote better than him back when I did
lmao the fact you said that almost makes you sound jealous desu
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>>28759895

>You decide to finally check the time on your phone.
>And realized that was it was pretty late.
"Shit! It's getting late and I haven't even packed, fuck my life."
>Flash just laughs at you.
"Yeah, yeah very funny."
>You roll your eyes as you get up.
>You both leave the basement as you get your belongings.
>"Hey man, that was fun, we should keep hanging out from time to time, maybe get back the old squad."
>Flash fist bumps you again.
"Yea that'd be cool, anyways see you around dude!"
>With that you leave the house waving goodbye to Flash and setting off for your own house.
>Fortunately Flash lived a couple blocks from you so it wasn't a hassle.
>However you're probably going to have to spend the night packing like an asshole.
>You mentally smack yourself as you make your way back home.
>Soon enough you arrive to wonderful abode.
>You proceed to tell your parents about the trip.
>Mom proceeded to unnecessarily baby you, as always.
>Dad tried to tell you a story about his youth and experience with camping but you got out of there before a two minute story turned into a two hour one.
>You finally enter your room.
>Okay, time to focus. You think to yourself as you open your closet doors and begin to pack.
>An hour or so passes before you are adequately prepared for the week ahead in the camp.
>You fall back down on your bed sighing from the tiredness.
>You decide for a bit of distraction as you grab your phone to text your marshmallow princess.
>She doesn't respond for a while, you figure she was busy.
>Soon afterwards however you receive a scandalous text of a picture of Rarity in what seemed to only be a towel.
>You smile to yourself like an idiot.
>[Wanna see more, darling? ;)]
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>>28760027
OH MY
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>>28739086
I'm back! Sorry I've been gone.

>Pinkie's House: Basement
>Time: 9:13 PM
>Situation: Critical
>You: Are Anon
>Right now you and the girls are in a circle, with your bowl of nachos and salsa in the middle
>They want to play Marry, Fuck, Kill
>This can only go just very bad, right?
>Luckily you kind of liked this sort of stuff, scandalous shit
>Plus you get to know who'd fuck you and stuff
>And who'd kill you, it's good to know that stuff, as well
>It's been cleared up that you can chose people outside of this room, cool
>"Alright, Applejack"
>She perks up and looks to you, she's sitting cris-crossed with a nacho in her hand
>You pause to munch on one, thinking
>"Flash, Rarity, Vice Principal Luna: Marry, Fuck, Kill"
>This is good
"Yeesh, that one's good Anon" Sunset commends you
>You try
"Ah'm not sure, sugarcube, lemme think..." Applejack says, grabbing another chip and dipping it in the bowl of salsa
>She hums to herself briefly before grabbing another chip
"C'mon Applejack, it isn't THAT hard" Dash says
>Applejack shoots her a death glare before swallowing the chip
"Alrigh' alrigh', Marry Rarity, Kill Luna, Fuck Flash"
>Guh, seriously?
>Flash is a little prick, at least to you, you would have killed him, obviously
>No way you were marrying him, or worse, fucking him!
>Or is it vice versa?
>Scuffing someones timberlands doesn't mean booby trap their locker, asshole
>"Gee Applejack, not sure how you'd enjoy fucking Flash, of all dudes" You say, popping a chip into your mouth
"Well I didn't really have any better options, sugarcube" She admits, raising her brow at you
>She's good at that
>"You would fuck Flash over VP Luna or Rarity? If I was you I'd have killed the guy, married Luna, and fucked Rarity"
>That actually is pretty unfair to say
"Well, no duh, Anon, you're a GUY!" Twilight points out
>You were just thinking that
>"Yeah yea, I was just saying" You chuckle
>You think about a marriage between Rarity and Applejack, funny
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>>28760027

>You reply with several happy face emojis.
>Soon Rarity sends another pic of her covering her breasts with just her arm, the towel now gone.
>You hated and loved when she teased you, it was very conflicting.
>You figure you should fire back at her with your own scandalous pics.
>You leave your room and head to the bathroom.
>You strip down to your boxers and send your own flattering pic with a very raunchy message.
>[Oh my, is that a rocket in your pocket or are you just happy to see me? ;) ;)]
>You chuckle slightly at the cheesy joke but respond like a flirt anyways.
>She sends another pic this time with her hands invading her light blue panties.
>[Wish u were here <3]
>A blush grows on your face as you continue to sext with her.

>A couple hours passed and you're now in bed waiting for your mind to finally calm down enough to sleep.
>You wish you could keep texting Rarity but she's fast asleep.
>So instead you just lie in your bed staring up at the ceiling looking for cracks.
>There are too many thoughts in your head, circling around, keeping you from getting some shut eye.
>You think forward to how the camping trip will be, hoping you'll get some quality time with Rarity.
>You twist and turn just trying to get some sort of rest before the morning comes.
>Soon however your feel the tiredness catch up with you again as your eyelids grow heavy and you set off to dream.
>You wake up in the morning from another strange dream, though you can't quite remember the details only something about mystical rocks.
>You brush it off as you prepare for your morning routine.
>Brush, wash face, shower, and then getting your packs ready for the trip.
>As always Rarity is a sweetheart and picks you up as you both head for the school.
>You look toward Rarity who's dressed for camping with purple shorts and a frilly light blue shirt.
>You had a black baseball shirt as well as a cap to keep your hair from your eyes.
"You look good, sugar."
>You smile at Rarity.
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>>28759154
She's going to "mess up" and feel bad, isn't she?
Holy shit man, your Anon is so punchable
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>>28760441
>For some reason Rarity looks at you funny, though you don't want to mention it
>Is it something you said? Or did?
>Oh, right...
>You kinda just said you'd fuck her, is she creeped out?
>No way, that's part of the game
>You think the girls have been spared that it's just 'fuck'
>Because god damn you would DESTROY that woman
>And no way you're saying that out loud
>Back on track,
>"Applejack it's you're turn, 'sugarcube'" You mock her
>She smirks at you and rolls her eyes
"Okay, Anon"
>Ah shit son, you set yourself up for this
"Me, Pinkie, Twilight"
>FUCK
>You had too have seen this coming
"Marry, Fuck, Kill"
>The the selected girls gasped and looked to you, in fact, all eyes were on you
>You looked to Pinkie, smiling a little bit, you already fucked her, sooooo
>You try to give her a "can i just kill you" look, but you don't think she was getting it, her face was just contorting into confusion, happiness, and suffering
>What?
>"Uuuh, Kill Pinkie"
>She doesn't seem too fazed by it, thank god, though you didn't think she'd be hurt, anyway
>She got the dickn' tonight
>"Marry Twilight and fuck you, Applejack"
>Twilight seems pretty surprised by your answer, her eyes widened and she has a blush on her face
>She mouths some words you can't really make out, you're bad at reading lips
"Well golly, Anon, ah'm flattered" Applejack tips her hat to you and you nod to her
>"Sure thing Applejack, you've definitely got the body for it, sugarcube" You smile at her blush and you reach to grab a chip
>GONE?! JESUS
>These girls were fucking savages
"You'd marry Twilight? I would have married Applejack, Anon" Dash says, pointing at the farm girl
>Jeez, Dash, don't be so harsh
>"Absolutely I'd marry Twilight, smart people are hot, dude. Plus like, out kids could be smart, too" You say, looking to Twilight
>By this time she's completely beet red and staring at you, you wink at her
>She looks away quickly and stares at the floor
>That's cute, indeed
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>>28760533
This is going to be a nice ride, DG.
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>>28760533

>She smiles back at you handing you a similar compliment.
>Pretty soon you arrive at the school to see the bus you will be travelling in.
>You and Rarity gather your bags and head toward the bus, though it was mostly you carrying the bags.
>You arrive to meet a couple other students from CHS stuffing their bags into the storage area of the bus.
>It was mostly people you didn't know, but you spotted Sunset in the midst.
>She walked toward you both after she finished stuffing her packs into the bus.
>"Hey guys! You ready for the trip?"
>She speaks in her typical warm tone.
>Rarity replies with a nod looking at a small mirror in her hand fixing her complexion.
"Ready as I'll ever be."
>You're actually struggling a bit with everything your carrying but Sunset notices and helps you out.
>Soon you're finished with packing everything into the bus as you and Sunset return to Rarity.
>"You know I've never been camping in the human world, I hope it's not as dangerous as mine."
>You look to Sunset with a questioning glance then you remember why exactly she said that.
"You'd be surprised Sunny."
>You reply jokingly.
>Soon however the rest of the girls join you including Flash behind all of them.
>You greet the girls and move on to Flash who seems a bit conflicted.
"Sup Flash."
>"Hey dude."
>You help him with his stuff still noticing his changed demeanor.
"Something up?"
>You ask away from the group of girls near you both.
>"Oh n-nothing dude, just a bit tired. Stayed up all night."
>He gives you another dorky smile but you buy it for the mean time.
>After a couple of minutes you all spot Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna all dressed in camper get up, looking like a couple of girl scouts.
>You would find it cute if they weren't mature women, but you digress.
>They gather everyone up right outside the bus, you assume you're about to hear a speech.
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>>28760831
So I'm taking a break for a bit, I'll see if I can post later tonight though.
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BUMP of the love
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Bump, one more green up for tonight soon
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>>28760831
>You would find it if they weren't mature woman
Fucking fight me you (maybe not really) socialist French Canadian nondrinking lightweight
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>>28760731
"And why'd you kill me, Nons? I thought..."
>Pinkie grabs your arm and gives you puppy dog eyes
"You loved me..?"
>PINKIE
>YOU'RE PLAYING THIS TOO LOOSE GIRL, DON'T BLOW OUR COVER!
>"Uh, you know I love you Pinks, but, y'know...overpopulation..?" You shrug, smiling weakly at her
>You get some giggles from the girls
"Overpopulation? Didn't you bring up having kids with Twilight?" Sunset says, holding in her laughter.
>"Riiiight, I guess I'll have to kill a person for each kid we have!" You shout
>You shuffle over to Twilight, who's still flustered, you put your arm around her and kiss her cheek
>"Isn't that right honey?"
>Her reaction is fucking great
>She opens her mouth to say words but her face just deepens in it's crimson color and she just nods unsurely instead
"Man, Twilight, you sure are embarrassed by this, aren't you? Kinda cute" Sunset adds
>Twilight squeaks and buries her face into your shoulder to hide herself from her friends
"Aaaw, they're gettin' along perfect already, so sweet" Applejack teases, poking Twilight's side
>"Yeah, our kids are going to be so beautiful, juuust like their mother"
>You chuckle when Twilight pinches you
"We should spare poor Twilight any more embarrassment, let's keep the game going!" Rarity says, smiling widely while rocking back and forth
>You nod in agreement, squeezing Twilight affectionately
>She moves her head to look up at you, the both of you share a deep, romantic stare
>She really is a qt, especially with those glasses
>Twilight wraps her arms around you and sighs quietly
>Nice
"I got one! Fluttershy suddenly bursts
>"Alright, Fluttershy, shoot"
"Okay, listen up, this is a haaard one" She giggles at the word "hard" like a 7th grader
"So is this for everyone?" Dash speaks up
>Fluttershy nods rapidly
"Okay. Janitor Discord, Snips, and Snails: Marry, Fuck, Kill"
>Oh jeeeeezuz christ almighty
>Everyone visibly winces at the less than amazing selection
>Nobody has the balls to speak up
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Finally back from work will try to get another post or maybe two out tonight since I'll be stuck at work pretty much all day tomorrow

Hoping to have Trixie's lewd done by the end of the weekend if I'm lucky
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>>28759154

>Trixie continues her ministrations for a few more moments
>She manages to get nearly to the base before pulling herself off
>She grins up at you with a look of accomplishment on her face while lightly stroking you
>"Well it looks like you're ready now" She says leaning back on the couch and hooking her fingers into the waistband of her pj bottoms and panties before pulling them down and off "And so am I" She said opening her legs enough to see her glistening slit nestled just below a strip of white pubic hair
>You gulp looking down at Trixie as she beckons you to join her
>You move closer
>You take one of her legs in your hand for leverage as your other hand guides your dick towards her entrance
>You can feel the heat radiating from her as your tip hovers millimeters from her wet folds
"Last chance Trixie" You say looking down into her half lidded lavender eyes "Are you sure you still want this?"
>Your tone is serious
>Trixie just reaches up and wraps her hand around your neck
>"More than anything" She says leaning up to kiss you one more time
>That was it then
>Slowly you ease your hips forward pressing the tip into her
>Trixie takes sharp intake of breath as you push inside of her and you give an almost matching groan
>She was tight
>Tighter than Pinkie
>Hell she may have even been tighter than Dash
>And you can tell as you begin to push further in that you're going to have to be gentler with her than you were with Pinkie
>You weren't even a third of the way inside her yet
>You look down to see Trixie's eyes are screwed shut
"Trixie are you okay?" You ask leaning down so you can meet her eyes "Do you want me to stop for a minute?"
>Trixie opens her eyes with the same look of determination from earlier
>"No Anon keep going" She says "This much is nothing for The Great and Powerful Trixie" She declares
>Despite what she says you can tell she's about on the verge of tears
>So you lean down and kiss her tenderly
>You hope it takes her mind off the pain
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A much needed bumpo has occurred!

Does anybody think Octave is still alive? Although I haven't really read his green, haven't seen his name pop back up in a while.
We need more Chrysalis in here.
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>>28760831
>You would find it cute if they weren't mature women
>not liking mature women
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>>28762988
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>>28762248

>You feel Trixie begin to relax a little under you
>You're glad
>You continue the kiss for a while longer staying as still as possible
>Then, once you are sure you're not going to hurt her you begin pumping in just a little more
>Trixie breaks from the kiss and whimpers just a bit, but she doesn't seem to be in as much discomfort as before
>She moves her hands from your neck to your shoulders gripping them tightly as you continue to slowly easy into her
>You decide to keep trying to keep her mind off the discomfort
>You lean down and begin kissing your way down her neck
>You still hear Trixie whimper as you slowly inch into her, but now they're also interspersed with moans of pleasure
>Trixie's eyes screw shut again as you make it just past halfway in
>You can feel her walls tightening around you and can't help but moan yourself
>You weren't sure if it was because this was her first time or if she was just naturally this tight
>But the feeling of her warm wet walls gripping you like this was something else
>You move the path of your kisses down to her collarbone stopping just before the slight curve of her breasts
>You hear her let out a long pleasure filled sigh as she tilts her head back and arches her back
>The sigh is cut short by a gasp as the motion moves you further inside her
>You move your mouth down to one of her breasts taking the erect bud of her nipple between your lips to try to ease the pain away again
>"A-Anon" She moans after a few moments of you sucking on her nipple
>You look up to see her gazing down at you
>"Please, kiss me again." She pleads
>You comply leaning back up to capture her lips again
>She's tense but the kissing seems to help
>You go a bit further in before she breaks the kiss, "Anon stop" She gasps "I'm sorry, but I can't take anymore." A tear runs down her cheek "I'm so sorry."
"Trix"
>"I-I thought I could do more"
"Trix" You reach a hand up to wipe away the tear as you nod downwards
>You were already all the way in
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That's all I have time for, hope to get another post or two out when I get back, but we'll see how I feel after 9 hours of manual labor
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>>28760831
>>You would find it cute if they weren't mature women, but you digress.
This disturbs me
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>>28760831
U cheeky nigga wat you say
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Looks like BA kicked a hornet nest
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>>28766605
Not that he didn't deserve it
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>>28766687
I never said he didn't
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>>28766605
>>28766687
>>28766738
Thanks guys, feel'n the love
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>>28767099
Just know they all love you more than anybody is gonna love a black guy dressed as a mormon.
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>>28767207
That does little to improve my mood, but I guess it's the thought that counts
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>>28767099
Well you reap what you saw ^:)
But I still like the story somewhat, even if you overdid hentai logic
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benis in bagina
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>>28767099
Talk shit, get hit.
love you, maybe homo
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>>28764434
Why does this whole scene feel gross to read?
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>>28767857
Try seeing it from Trix point of view. She just saw her best (only) friend and a long-standing crush shag his childhood friend who also had some repressed feelings. She saw that she was late, and didn't act fast enough. Worse yet, she doesn't understand why. But her best guess is that Pinkie is just prettier and sexier than her, so she has no place trying to take Anon back now. She tries to conflict him, but for some reason and that's kind of an eyebrow raiser in your story BA does not voice her feelings fully, instead going for "I can be as good of a lay as that other girl, please trust me" approach. She no doubt wants to do it with him, and probably only with him. But she clearly was scared of the concept, hence the hesitation. Judging by how she has been acting so far, she would prefer her first time to be much more intimate and quiet than doing it at someone else's porch during a group sleepover. But no, instead she holds down her tears, literally chokes on a dick and then urges Anon to fuck her, despite the pain. Notice what she asked him for when he was trying to get it in - not to play with her tits, or kiss her neck which is probably of some sexual stimulation for her. She asked for a kiss, vanilla mouth to mouth kiss. Because she wanted to forget what she was doing. Because she doesn't want to do it, and yet feels like she has to.

NOW look at it from the wider perspective. Anon has just fucked not only a tsundere Dash who was trying to screw him over the entire evening (which honestly makes sense, nothing like a good ol' hatefuck), but instantly after that, he went on to have sex with his goddamn childhood friend who did not confess her crush before that evening, without hesitation (and that one I cannot let slide). IIRC he showered after the first one, but not after the second. So you have him both literally and figuratively covered in Pinkie and Rainbow, when Trixie tries (and fails) to voice her feelings
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>>28768012
Even got so into the story you went over a character limit ranting about it?

... opting instead to become a third notch on Anon's dick this evening. This is all that's left for her. Leftovers. Rainbow-Pinkie covered leftovers. And she takes them despite the pain, because she cares about him that much.

I am seriously conflicted about this story, and the next few posts are going to explain a lot to me. Is this a full on clopfic with porn logic? If so then it fails by implementing all the feels. You already had a virginanon fuck two of his virgin friends, no need to go with the extra pain on Trixie. Is this supposed to be more feelsy story trying to go beyond just clopfic? Well, if so, then there are some issues too. I will wait with thouse issues before BA posts a couple more things so that I can understand this better.

But you know man, no pressure. ^:)
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>>28768037
Oh and I forgot. Last 5 lines. She cannot take it anymore, and she apologises. She apologises for being hurt, and thus inadequate to what Pinkie was able to offer.
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Well it seems Burnout's story has taken a dark turn.
https://youtu.be/6p6PcFFUm5I
Hopefully this is fitting.

Also sorry for no update to mine today, I'll see if I can get at least one update for tonight before tomorrow.
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>>28768248
Don't think you're off the hook for disrespecting the Royal Milfs. That was some fourth degree heresy
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>>28768259
Yea I fucked up with that, I admit it.
Milfs are awesome, and I will try to give Celestia and Luna some love somewhere down the line. To atone for my sins.
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>>28768259
>That was some fourth degree heresy
While it was heresy indeed I would say it was second degree heresy at best

Don't jump the gun like that m8
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>>28768296
Sorry, I was using the 1780s standard, they have more tiers.

>>28768292
The only thing saving you is the implied implication that they are not cute in their outfits, but smoking hot
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>>28768346
Anon's gonna warm up to them and their outfits, I tell you what.
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>>28768346
>Rarara gets cucked by the Principal and Vice Principal
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>>28768383
No god no, Anon isn't that much of a dick.
It's more of a look and admire, don't touch scenario.
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>>28768414
But they should still get touched, just maybe by eachother
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>>28768422
We'll see anon, we'll see ;)
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>>28768467
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>>28768037
>>28768012
>>28767857
>>28767816
>>28767207
>>28766687
Please do not crush the Burnoutanon like you guys did the Beans. Let him finish his story and not dissapear. Both of these stories were and are good but Beans will never finish his and I for one want to see Burnouts to the end...even if he is destroying my waifu in the process.
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>>28769237
They're not gonna drive me away, I've spent too much time working on it not to finish it

I don't wanna spoil the ending but I will say a few things
>The story will still be feel heavy for awhile
>The ending won't be perfect, but it will be happy-ish with no one being emotionally destroyed
>Trixie is basically doing the same thing Pinkie did earlier, she's just more worried and insecure in how she's doing it
>There will be consequences for Anon's actions and he is gonna have to deal with and fix what he's done
>We still have a looooong way to go before this ride is over I am incapable of writing short stories so just enjoy the ride

Now it's been a long bad day at work so I'm gonna start drinking unless people really want me to get out another post before tomorrow

Also I've been thinking about some more lighthearted Sleepover greens to do after this possibly an alternate version of this one with the same Anon getting tangled up with either the Crystal prep girls or the Dazzlings or continuing this one like DG after it's run it's course if you like the sound of that let me know

Now there's a 5th of vodka calling my name
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>>28769374
Love you anon
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>>28769374
I'm glad to see this. Reading the updates to all the stories here is the high point of my boring days. The ride cant end till im dead!
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>>28769374

Th... The Dazzlings!?

mmmmmmm
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>>28769374
I feel like there's a very large emotional range in this story, and honestly it's why I like it. Sadness and discomfort aren't bad things, just intense, and an amount of enjoyment can be taken from it just as well as from happiness or attraction. It's a good story, but I think Trixie's part is what makes it really good.
Do you. It's working fine.
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BUMP! Sorry no posts today, but in the morning i'll get some in, and then later that day! Gnight my friends!
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>>28769933

my thoughts exactly
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Bumparoo
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Bumperoni bumperoni let's get the thread of page tenoli
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>>28761666
>Janitor Discord, Snips, or Snails?
>Fluttershy must have been thinking hard on this one, you almost completely forgot there was even a janitor
>Your school is always clean anyways and you pretty much never see him around
>Though one time you saw him go inside a janitor's closet and come out of another, and then into a classroom and out of the bathroom
>He's a fucking sketchy dude, this Janitor guy
>Snips and Snails were actually pretty chill guys, you got along with them pretty well in your ceramics class
>While they aren't the smartest of people, they can hold a conversation pretty well and you actually have a lot in common
>You should kick it with them one day
>Maybe you could invite them to a slumber party..?
>Nah
"For the record, I'd marry Janitor Discord" Fluttershy says, giggling
>Ok? Really?
>"Fluttershy you know he's like, an old ass man, right?"
>She nods and looks away
"He's kinda cute, though...dontcha think?"
>Nooooot really, dude's creepy AS FUCK
"He's actually sorta creepy, Flutters" Dash says, crossing her arms and huffing
>Yes, Dash, read my thoughts
"I saw him spying on the girls in the locker room once! Then he played it off like he was just mopping the floors!"
>Dash got snooped on by an old man? You gotta tease her about this later
>"Yeesh, that's a pretty bad reputation to have"
"Tell me about it" Dash replies
"And then I'd kill Snails and fuck Snips" Buttergirl says, smiling in victory
>You're not to eager to go next
>"Okay, girls, what's it gonna be for you?" You urge them on so maybe they'd kinda skip you
>But Rarity gives you this look that you don't like
>Okay bitch don't you dare vol-
"Oh, Anon! I'd love to hear YOUR choices, darling! Right girls?"
>The girls hum and nod in agreement, Pinkie gives you an apologetic look
>You think Twilight looks up at you but you're busy eyeing Rarity
>You motherfucker...
>"Alright alright, I'm not getting myself out of this one"
>You pause for a moment to think about your options
>Bathroom!
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>>28772255
>Triple dubs
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>>28772548
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>Will that even work? A bathroom break? Hell, won't hurt to try
>"Hey! I really gotta go to the bathroom! Soooo, someone else fill in for me!"
>You quickly get to your feet, Twilight is pushed off of you from your movements
"Hey! You can't just leave when it's your turn!" Dash shouts
>Dammit Dash shut up please
>"Bathroom breaks are emergencies, Dash. You don't want me to piss myself do you!?"
>You speed walk to the steps of the basement and shuffle up the steps
"Ugh, he probably doesn't even really have to go!" Dash groaned
"Oh, well what did you expect? This decision is probably the hardest for him compared to all of us, yeah?" Sunset adds
"Well, I guess so, but we gotta make him spill once he comes back!"
>Sunset nods to Dash and looks around the room
"Dash, you're next!" She calls
>Dash gives a crazed look then points to Sunset
"What?! You can't just substitute me in! How about YOU go!"
"Fine! Marry Snails, Fuck Snips, Kill the Janitor!" Sunset retorted
>Dash retracted her pointing finger and looked down at her feet
"Can we just CHANGE this fucking selection? God Fluttershy you're too good at this"
>Applejack nods
"Ah'm not really feelin' too great about this one neither"
>The girls nod, except Fluttershy, she's a little insulted!
>How dare they just skip her challenge!
>Twilight sees this chance to say one she's been thinking of for a while, or
>She can have other plans
"Hey girls, I'm gonna go grab some food from the kitchen"
>Twilight stands and heads for the stairs
"Hey Twilight! Grab enough for all of us!" Dash calls out
>Twilight nods and rolls her eyes
"Well, of course, Rainbow"
>Twilight makes it out and walks through the hallways
>Pinkie's house is way bigger than she ever expected, not absolutely huge, but pretty big
>Any stranger could easily get lost and even miss a few rooms due to the size
>There has to be some cool secret rooms around here!
>Twilight stops check her surroundings
"Now where is that bathroom?"
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>>28762248
Burnout you fucker, i've been waiting this whole time THIS WHOLE TIME, for hot trixie lovin, cute nerdy best friend trixie cute warm sexy times with much snuggling and happy thoughts

Now i just want to cry.
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>>28773806
Your narration is weird. You do second person, but not only Anon's lines are the only ones that are implied, but you describe shit that's happening when he is not around
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>>28774365
Yeah I actually felt weird doing that! I'll try to avoid doing that in the future
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>>28773806
>"Now where is that bathroom?"
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>Still no sleepover with the hot teachers and principals
Shit thread.
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>>28760831
I'm back again, sorry for being scarce with the updates.

>Soon Principal Celestia begins a small speech.
>"Welcome Students, I am glad to see all of you this wonderful morning. We hope you enjoy this trip to Everfree as much we did when we were your age."
>With that quick speech over and done with they let the students finally board.
>You go up to Rarity to ask her a question.
"Hey you don't mind if I sit with Flash, right?"
>"Of course not, darling. In fact I believe we should be incognito at the moment... considering you know who, is here."
>Rarity leans in to whisper the last part pointing back to the Vice-Principal.
>Point taken.
"Huh good idea, Rares."
>You smile at her before boarding the bus, Flash following behind you.
>You enter the bus, noticing who the bus driver is.
>To your surprise it wasn't some random person but your Drama Professor Discord, who also worked as the janitor for some reason.
>"Are you going to stare or sit down sonny?"
>Discord noticed your staring and smiled his usual crazy eyed smile at you.
"Oh sorry, yea."
>You finally walk to a seat.
>'What a weird guy'. You think to yourself before sitting down on a seat.
>Flash sat right next to you on the aisle part while you took the window pane.
>You always preferred the window side.
>You finally see the girls along with Rarity get inside. You also notice a seemingly tired Twilight Sparkle but you shrug it off.
>You wave to Rarity before she sat down on her seat, she gave you a smile and a wave back as she sat down.
>Soon everyone is seated and ready to start the travel.
>You figure this was a good time to ask exactly how long this trip will be.
"Yo Flash, you know how its gonna take to get there?"
>Flash looks up, putting a finger on his chin trying to remember the answer.
>"Oh uhh I think they said like 3 to 4 hours. So pretty long."
>You groan internally, externally you give a low sigh and curse.
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>>28774949
How do you justify a sleepover with principals?
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>>28774970
Why would you need to?
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>>28774970
Pinkie invites them, there.
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>>28774970

i guess they could be running some sort of crazy teenage sex ring on the down low
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"Well it's a good thing I have my ipod."
>It was a late save by your dad of all people saying you should pack some form of entertainment.
>Thanks bunches, dad.
>Soon the bus is on and leaves the parking lot of the school.
>You watch the familiar buildings and sparse trees move slowly away from your view as the bus makes its way out of the area.
>You take out your ipod and headphones. You scroll the multitude of artists and bands trying to figure out a playlist perfect for the trip.
>After a minute you find something fitting.
https://youtu.be/8L64BcCRDAE?list=PLOS8p8acagwXUPSmCsjkl7NoMCLr-oXws
>You let the music soothe you as you watch the outside through the window.
>You pass through a multitude of towns as the surroundings become more wild, filled with dark green trees that span on the sides of the roads.
>You can see the mountains in the distance as well.
>The music makes this experience the better as you drift away leaning your slightly against the pane of the window.
>You feel your eyelids get heavy as you're lulled into a sleep.

>You awaken from your sleep as you hear someone yell behind you.
>The yell originated from Twilight.
>You wonder what the hell it was about, but you decide to fully wake up from the grogginess you had at the moment instead.
>"We're getting close."
>You hear Flash say in general looking ahead at the road.
>You stretch your arms up in the air to get the kinks from your back and shoulders.
>Man that was a good nap.
>"Attention students! We're almost there! But before we arrive we wanted to thank you all for helping to make this trip happen."
>You hear Principal Celestia address to all the students, soon Luna chimes in.
>"We made some of our favorite memories in these woods when we were your age. And we hope you will as well."
>"Who's excited for Camp Everfree?!" Celestia finishes pumping her fist in the air and waiting for the cheering to come.
>Everyone cheers and claps.
>You join with a couple claps and cheers.
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>>28775058
I do suppose Celestia would go for it with her troll attitude, probably completely putting Luna and Cheerlie out of their elements
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>>28775230
>filename
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>A couple minutes go by before you see that you have arrived at the camp.
>The place was surrounded by the beautiful dark trees of the Everfree.
>You make your way outside with Flash and the rest of the students.
>You get your bags as well Rarity's putting them all down next to her.
>You go back to help Flash with all of his stuff.
>You overhear the girls all talk about their plans for the week.
>You walk back to Rarity to overhear Pinkie going on about their past year.
>"I'll say, we fought three evil sirens who tried to hypnotize everybody with their singing, one ridiculously competitive school. and TWO demon friends!"
>Pinkie finishes pointing towards Sunset and Twilight.
>Sunset has her arms crossed while Twilight grabs her other arm looking down in shame.
>Wow Pinkie no need to lay it on so heavy. You think to yourself.
>You look to Rarity with a quizzical look. She just replies with a shrug.
>"Uhh I mean no offense." Pinkie smiles sheepishly catching herself.
>Sunset seems to shake it off. Twilight on the other hand still looks very uncomfortable.
>She puts a comforting arm on Twilight.
>"None taken.You'll get used to it." She gives one of her warm smiles trying to make Twilight obviously feel better.
>You turn to speak to Rarity now.
"Man I wasn't expecting that long of a drive."
>She turns to you and begins.
>"The view was certainly wonderful, something about the woods is just so... romantic."
>She gives you a knowing smile, her eyes half lidded.
>You drag in for a hug and a kiss on the forehead.
>You're gonna make the most of this trip.
>You hear the southern twang of Applejack behind you both as she speaks up.
>"Ah'm just excited to finally be away from all that magic mumbo jumbo and enjoy some good old fashioned non magic woods."
>Suddenly you see Flash run up to Twilight with her bags.
>Oh god Flash, what are you doing?
>"Here, Twilight!" You see him hand her the bag.
>"Thanks it's uhh Flash, right?" Twilight awkwardly replies.
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>>28775528
I'll be back in a bit with more updates. Gonna take a shower.
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>>28773806

ANON' LINES ARE GOING TO BE IN BLACK TEXT FROM NOW ON, BETTER LATE THAN NEVER AMIRITE?

>You have truly dodged a bullet
>No fucking way you were participating in that round!
>Plus, a little time to yourself never hurt anyone, at least you sure hoped so
>You open the door to Pinkie's pretty cool bathroom and check yourself out in the mirror
>You're hair has some strays and you fix them easily
>Not actually having to go to the bathroom, you look around the room to find something to pass the time
>It's rude to go through people's stuff, but whatever
>You rummage through the cabinet beneath the sink and the medicine cabinet above it
>You actually find some magazines in the lower cabinet, something to pass the time on the toilet you guess
"Grape Soda Monthly? Big Truck Little Truck? Gun-Ho? TIMES?"
>Why is there only one normal looking magazine in here?
>You grab "TIMES" and sit down on the toilet seat, leaning back to rest on the tank
>Flipping through the pages you see exactly why you don't really read magazines, a bunch of bullshit and fake "news"
>But there is one discussing the destruction of the local park to make a quarry
>Uh yeah that's not happening under your watch
>You and Dash played soccer games there all the time! No way some corporate scumbags are going to destroy your memories
>Though there are other parks in the city, just farther away, you'd rather not lose this one
>Flipping through some more, you grow bored of it and quickly skim through the rest of the magazine and toss it back into the cabinet
"Well, this was nice. Better get back to the girls" You say to yourself
>You stand up and grab the door knob, swinging the door open, you see Twilight right in front of it
>You stare at each other for a moment, before you kick yourself into working gear
"Oh.. Hey Twilight, what's up?"
>She lags for a second
>"Nothing! Nothing, I'm just headed to use the lady's room!" She laughs nervously and brushes hair from her face
>She's so cute
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>>28775970
lewd later, gonna go play Skyrim
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Finally back, typing up the next few posts with Welcome Back, Kotter to make sure I stay awake
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>>28775528
And I'm back.

>"Yup that's me! And you're you, and we barely know each other, heh..."
>Flash tried to speak with Twilight with the grace and charm of an autistic gorilla.
>This was painful to watch.
>Twilight just seemed confused but recovered.
>"Right. I guess I'll see you around or something..." Twilight sheepishly smiled at him as he walked away. She cringed hard then took a glance at Sunset who just shrugged at her.
>Sunset proceeded to explain exactly what the deal was with Flash.
>In the meantime, you needed to talk to him.
>You said your goodbye to Rarity and went off after him with your bags in tow.
>You catch up to him just in time.
"Flash! What the fuck was that?!"
>He just stares back at you, shrugging with a cringe.
"What did I tell you about this man? You're gonna make a fool out of yourself."
>You facepalm explaining to him the consequences of his actions.
>"I'm already a fool, dude."
>Flash looked down at his feet with a sullen look to his face.
>You were about to respond but suddenly a loud crackle hurts your ears as you hear a voice coming from the loudspeakers set up around the camp.
>"Hi everyone! If you could start heading to the courtyard that would be RAD!"
>Jesus Christ did that hurt your ears.

>You stood next to Rarity and the rest of the girls in the courtyard.
>In the middle stood a gazebo with the two camp counselors.
>An young woman with long red hair and a flower crown stood testing the microphone by tapping it slightly causing shrieks of feedback.
>The younger looking guy with green hair and beanie stopped her from tapping the mic to not cause any more damage to everyone's ears.
>You thought that they looked a bit young to own and manage this camp by themselves but you let it go once the red haired lady spoke up.
>"Hi everybody! Welcome to Camp Everfree! My name is Gloriosa Daisy and this is my brother Timber Spruce! I'm your camp director so think of me as your nature guide!"
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People still welcome me here, r-right? Green very soon. Not pulling out this time.
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>>28775970
>she was trying to creep on him
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>Gloriosa hands over the mic to her green haired brother.
>"And think of me as the cool one! Who should always be invited to fun things."
>He threw the mic in the air and promptly caught it, ending his statement with a wink to the crowd.
>Well he's certainly trying to be the "cool guy", you thought to yourself with a raised eyebrow.
>Gloriosa took back the mic and continued with her introduction.
>"We aim to please all of you! Before we assign you your tents, we would like to hear from you! You're free to do whatever you want!
>Timber cut her off.
>"Uhh except hike near the rock quarry, it's a bit dangerous over there."
>"Yeees but your options aren't limited in the slightest! So what activities will you guys do?"
>She proceeded to point the mic to your group.
>Rainbow seemed mighty excited jumping up, raising her hand like a kid.
>"Yes?" Gloriosa asked.
>"Rock climbing!" Rainbow started.
>"Done!"
>"Archery!"
>"Yup!"
>"Water skyiing!"
>"That too!"
>Suddenly you see Sunset stop Rainbow before she blows a gasket from her excitement.
>"Chill out, Rainbow. Let other people speak."
>Sunset scolded the rainbow haired girl before letting her arm go.
>"Arts and crafts!"
>You turn around to see that it was Bulks who spoke up, now looking a tad embarrassed at the attention he is receiving.
>Gloriosa turns to the girls next to you,they all speak of a desired activity they want to do.
>Gloriosa then decides to turn to you and ask you directly the same question.
>"And what would you like to do?"
>Shit you hated being put on the spot. Quick think of something!
"Me? Uhh a concert?"
>You say that a bit unsure but Gloriosa smiles exuberantly.
>"That's a great idea!"
>Gloriosa speaks again about tradition or something or the other about the camp.
>In the meantime you noticed the Timber guy staring down at a certain purple girl.
>You and the girls look to Twilight who was staring back at him with a blush clear on her face.
>Oh ho ho.
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>>28776164
NO GO AWAY AUSSIES AREN'T WELCOME
nah i love ya m8 get in here
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>>28764434

>Trixie looks down to where the two of you are connected and blinks for a sec
>"I-I did it?" She whispers in surprise
"You did it" You say warmly
>You watch as Trixie's expression morphs from crestfallen to elated as she pulls you in for a hug
>"I did it!" She squeals triumphantly only to wince as you inadvertently shift inside her from the movement
"Yeah, Trixie, you're doing great" You assure her as you ease her back down onto the couch
>"Th-thanks Anon" Trixie says staring back up into your eyes
"So..." You say after a few moments "You ready for me to start moving?"
>Trixie begins to look sheepish
>"Of course Anon, Trixie is more than ready to truly begin."
>You try not to roll your eyes
>You can tell she's started to relax a little, but is still getting used to the sensation
"Alright, but I'm gonna take it slow at the beginning." You say getting ready to move "If that's okay with you."
>Trixie just blushes and looks away for a second "Of course it's okay...thank you" she whispers the last part
>Slowly you begin easing yourself in and out of Trixie
>Only moving by an inch or two at a time
>Trixie gasps and tightens around you each time you pull out but slowly her gasps begin turn to pants and moans and you begin to feel her relax slightly while still clenching against you
>As she become more used to it she looks back up to you with lidded eyes
>"Anon, please..." She pleads lustily "Play with my tits again."
>You smile as you lean down and plant a light kiss on her lips while moving one hand up to toy with her breast
>You feel Trixie arch against your touch as you run your thumb in circles around her nipple
>As you continue to play with her nipple you move your other hand down from her leg to get a hold of her ass
>Trixie lets out a hum of approval and pulls you into another kiss
>This one was more intense than before, Trixie seemed more confident and eager to claim your lips now as she ran one hand through your hair and the other along your back
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>>28776164
The part of me that's mad someone here beat me to a Chrysalis green says get out of here, but the part of me who likes your story and gets along with Aussiefags says to get your ass back in here

we cool nigga, we cool
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>>28776290
>>28776407
Cheers guys, I've been going through a few things myself recently, with friends and all. So I haven't really had the time to think out/write some green worth an update. Just finishing the last few updates now. SO yea, hold on tight for the return of Ausfag.
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>You snicker along with Sunset and Pinkie who notices Twilight clear blush.
>From behind you all the Principal speaks up.
>"What about the Camp Gift? That was my favorite Everfree Camp tradition."
>You see Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna grin like a bunch of school girls.
>You notice that their outfits look a lot more appealing, actually pretty hot.
>"The camp gift, of course!"
>You turn back to the camp counselors. You notice Timber eyeing his sister and whispering something.
>You notice the beginnings of them bickering right on stage.
>"Anyone else picking up on a little tension?" Sunset says to you all speaking low.
"Probably just typical brother sister tension, I'm sure."
>You try to reassure them but the girls don't seem impressed.
>You could indeed feel the tension right from where you standing, which was a little awkward.
>"Anyways... every year campers come together to make something useful! And they leave the camp knowing they gave a gift for future campers. It's all very nice!"
>She smiles at you all showing off a couple of the years gifts to the camp.
>Including a sun dial that apparently was from Principal Celestia and Luna's time in the camp.
>Vice-Principal Luna however brought up it's "usefulness".
>You're inclined to agree with the Vice-Principal about its lack of usefulness outside of daytime.
>"Well it seems to me that you campers are an inspiring bunch, so I'm sure you'll leave behind something meaningful."
>Everyone seems to cheer at that statement.
>You clap along.
>Timber now begins to speak to the crowd.
>"Now it's about time we give out tent assignments!"
>He again winks at the crowd.
>If he winks anymore you think he might join a boy band from the 90s.
>"Girls will get their assignments from Timber, I'll handle the boys. Come along everybody."
>You wave to the girls and kiss Rarity on the cheek before heading towards Gloriosa and the rest of the guys.
>The guys bunched up in front of her.
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>>28776392
Anon has done nothing wrong
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>>28735107
>Kicking back and taking a load off of your shoulders really put you in the right mood.
>Booting your trusty computer up, you input the password and enter the world of the cyber.
>Opening up your browser you head to your most desired websites.
>Youtube, World of Warships, and this mysterious place called 4chan.
>Tabbing over to Youtube, you tap in a few words into the search bar and click on a video to listen to.
>Closing the World of Warships tab, you head on over to see what your fellow Anons are doing in their beloved threads.
>Navigating to the /mlp/ board you start shit-posting under the name JungleBuffAnon. Jokes on them, you're merely pretending to be stupid.
>You don't even know what MLP is. Some sort of show? Last time you heard about it was about the characters inside the girly cartoon.
>Names like Purple Smart, Pink Poodle, White Marshmellow. In a sense these remind you of a few people at CHS. Meh, just coincidence.
>Kek, only faggots can enjoy these stupid multi-coloured horses.
>The video playing in the background finishes, and with 30 minutes gone by, you decide its time to hit it up with some vidya.
>This was what you did day-in, day-out. Post online and immerse yourself in fantasy worlds.
>The only other person you knew that did this was Chrysalis. And hell, she's layed off the games recently and taken a more 'Artistic' approach to her life.
>Usually making digital arts and posting them online making a quick few dollars here and there. She was passionate about it, but not too passionate to be greedy with it.
>Well, not that her preferences matter. You have some competition to endure.
>Scrolling through the list of games you have installed, your eyes lay rest on one in particular.
>Command and Conquer 3: Tiberium Wars
>Clicking the 'Play' button, you finish what is left of the coffee and place the mug on a nearby coaster
>Might as well get serious about it all
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>>28776695
>WHAT? WHERE DID THAT RECKONER COME FROM?
>A series of quick mouse movements soon follow your frantic button mashing of the keyboard.
>The unit deloys inside your base for the 2nd time this game, allowing the constant flow of flames from the occupying flame-troopers to damage your base.
>Despite all your efforts, you've lost too much within the first 5 minutes to even consider attempting a comeback. Harvesters lost, units killed, etc.
>Tapping out of the game awards you with a screen titled 'Defeat', as if to rub it in.
>Letting out a deep sigh you close the game. ANd a quick look at the time shows that you have 30 minutes left until you should consider leaving for tonight.
>Hopping out of the chair and grabbing the mug you head back to the kitchen, not the best mood after that experience, but not a good one either.
>The mug is placed on the kitchen sink as you make a turn for the lounge-room, where you head to find the TV remote.
>TV wasn't really your thing, there wasn't much to watch nowadays. The news? Just full of A-mare-ican election bullshit. What sort of country name is that anyways?
>You can't be the one complaining, you live in a place called Canterlot you stupid git.
>Fuck up. Besides the point.
>Cartoons were meh. Sure, they seem cool with their differing stories and all, but it just didn't appeal to yourself.
>Heading over to the movies section on the TV guide shows the results of the past month's new releases.
>Animal-themed movies, some movies that are being replayed from the 90s, action movies...
>Hmmm, nothing really caught your eye, that is, until you hit the second page.
>Short Circuit - 1986
>God damn was this movie a wild card.
>Selecting the title bring you to a very old looking film.
>Seems that the movie is already a few minutes in. And the boring parts seem to be occuring, you know, characters talking nonsense for the next 10 minutes or so.
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>>28776706
Forgot to correct grammar last 2 posts, my bad if any mistakes.
>Heaving yourself out of the chair and heading towards the kitchen in search of snacks begins.
>Biscuits, chips, glorious original Australian Shapes. Too little time to be making popcorn worthwhile.
>Making your choice of the Pizza flavoured shapes you return to the couch, and well, characters are still talking bullshit just to make the movie span longer.
>Looking down at the packet you open it up and start with a handful towards your mouth.
>The flavour of crunchy tomato bits and traces of cheese enlighten your mouth.
>A few resulting stacks of Shapes later, and you look up to see that the movie is finally getting somewhere.
>Number 5 needs input, and a whole lot of it, it seems.
>Heh, might as well make the next 20 minutes worth it.

>You are a very nervous Chrysalis.
>Everything has been going well ever since you left school. You thought of a few 'grown up' games to play, and if all goes well, you could have some serious fun with everyone.
>Hopefully, one certain person more than others...
>Later Chryssi, you'll get your chance later.
>Doing another once over of the house you find it adequate for tonight's festivities.
>Clean room, kitchen, lounge-room. Check, check aaaaand check!
>Brilliant!
>Taking a quick glance of the clock hung over on the Kitchen wall shows 6:30.
>Well, 30 minutes until everyone is /expected/ to arrive. What to do until then?
>Flopping on the couch you stare at the ceiling. And what a very dull ceiling it is.
>Whipping out your phone and inputting the 4 digit ping lets you into the desired menu.
>Tapping several apps travels you to the photo gallery, one of the many places on your phone you treasure deeply.
>Photos of you with friends, some with Anon in particular. A holiday you took with your parents some years ago. Various animals.
>You really did like your photo- ohhh, how did that get in here...
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>>28776721
>Swiping back gives you full view of Anon, but this time without his shirt on.
>Thinking back to the day Anon came over for bit of a pool party reminds you of the *exact* time and place you took that picture.
*~FLASHBACK~*
>He walked out of the bathroom after getting changed, and you managed to get a good glimpse at his body before he came outside through the window in the hallway.
>Discretely grabbing your phone you pointed the camera towards his direction and zoomed in to the approximate distance and snapped the picture as soon as he exited.
>Having a quick giggle to yourself of your success and you place your phone back inbetween your hips and bikini underwear with a little snap of the fabric.
>Walking over the Anon you wrap your arm around his neck and guide him over to the poolside chairs under the shade.
"Ready to get wet, eh?" you ask.
>Anon gives out a little smirk before being the smart-ass he is replies with "Define your context of 'Getting wet'".
>To which you punch him in the arm, of course.
>Removing your phone from your temporary holding place, you redesignate it to the small table inbetween the chairs.
*~FLASHBACK END~*

>Is it getting hot in here, or is it just you?
>You still have 20ish minutes until everyone arrives... surely you can have some... fun?
>Looking down your body and glancing at your lower regions makes your mind go into a dismal.
>You've done it before, and thought about... him whilst doing it. But this seems wrong.
>You dont take them sort of pics without any intention not to use them, r-right?
>Glancing back at the digital picture one more time rewards you with a very lewd Anon.
"B-bad Chryssi." you tell yourself, shaking your head. This was not a good position to be in.
>Biting your lip your hand starts its descent towards your hips, that is until it reaches your pants and hooks around the top.
>It's too late to turn back now.
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>>28776731
>One look at the front door shows that the blinds are shut and the door locked.
>Well, who says you can't relieve some of the stress you've built up setting this event up. Right, aheh?
>While your fingers bring down your pants to knee level you sit yourself back on the couch and let the room temperature hit the skin of your thighs.
>A small gasp escapes your mouth and your mind heads back to the things you've done in bed alone.
>You definitely deserved this.
>One hand makes it back to the brim of your panties as your remaining one runs the length of your nethers.
>Your voice trembles as you slowly glide it across your mound, which by this point has a mind of its own, as it is already wet without you realizing.
>You better hurry up, if you take too long to... finish, you might not be able to get there... heh.
>The hand that stroked your lowers comes back up to your top and makes it's way under the fabric, while your panty hand begins its wrap around the fabric once more.
>Inching it down further and further until the warm, room air touches your exposed womanhood.
>A tremble in your voice continues as the shirt hand does the exact same process but with your top, bringing it over your head and tossing it onto the floor besides you
>Now laying on the couch with your bra completely exposed and underwear around your knees you cant help but let out a little laugh in between your slow breathing
>Chrssi, you naughty girl.

Pastebin should be updated after this post. Sorry to pull a Burnout.
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>>28774970
Very simple: It's not your sleepover

>Your mother has a book club
>Cel and Luna are part of that club
>Mom invites club members over for drinks and movies
>They all have a few too many; impromptu sleepover
>A few of them have a thing for younger guys
>Sexy hi-jinx ensue

>>28776554
>>You notice that their outfits look a lot more appealing, actually pretty hot.
Yeah, you'd better.
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>>28776554
Last post of the night. Updating my pastebin as well.
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>>28776392

>As the kiss deepens you feel Trixie begin rocking her hips in time with your thrusts
>You feel her legs wrap around you again as she pulls herself up into your lap
>You groan into the kiss as you feel her slide down your dick taking it to the base
>You feel her walls tighten around you again as she begin lightly bounce in your lap
>She breaks the kiss and begin moaning as she rides you
>You can only try to keep pace with her as you move your other hand down to grip her ass and support her weight
>Trixie just pulls your head back to her neck wordlessly signaling for you to start kissing her neck again
>You comply and hear her let out another long pleasure filled sigh
>You feel her quicken the pace again
>Her neck must be her weak spot you think to yourself and you begin kneading her ass
>While it isn't as firm or soft as Dash or Pinkie's the softness is next to nothing
>"C'mon Anon." Trixie says as she takes in the full length of your dick once more "You can do better than that." She said with panting laugh "Or do you just like that Trixie is doing all the work?"
>It seemed that now Trixie had fully regained her confidence
>And her cockiness
>You guessed that was a good thing
>But that still didn't help the slight wound to your pride
>Well, she did ask for it
>Taking a better grip on her ass you lift her up and pull her back down while bucking up into her
>Trixie moans and tenses up gripping your shoulders tightly
>You repeat the action a few more times
>Each time drawing a longer moan from Trixie as you feel her begin to tremble against you
"What's the matter Trix?" You ask planting a few kisses along her collar bone "I thought you wanted me to start pulling my weight" you say pumping lightly into her as you spread her cheeks a little in your hands
>"A-Anon..." She gasps pulling you away from her chest and looking you in the eye
"Yes Trixie?" You ask cheekily
>"You're an ass." She says before pulling you into another kiss
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>>28774965
>considering you know who, is here.
Damned voldemort attending school camping trips.
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>>28776784
I could see that. Maybe throw in you being at a small sleepover at Twilight's, with just Twily and maybe 1-2 extra. That way not only you can add extra embarassement from the situation, but also Twimom for extra milfage
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I'm almost done with my green lewd scene.

Still.

If I over-work myself tonight, I might be able to dump the finale by tomorrow on Halloween Night. That's a big 'if' though.
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>>28777377
DO IT!
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>>28777377
Do whatever you feel is right man.
Just don't wear yourself down.
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>>28777532
Thank you

>>28777447
Ok

Quick question by the way....should Twilight have any kinks? Any ideas? I kinda exasperated all my shit on Sunset's scene already, wanna add more to Twily.
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>>28777590
I always view the quiet nerdy ones to be into some bondage. You know, "it's always the quiet ones" and all that
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>>28776858

>You begin massaging and running your hands along her ass as you kiss her
>As your hands are roaming your fingers slide down the crack of her ass grazing against her asshole
>Trixie yelps into the kiss
>You're surprised but continue the kiss returning to what you were doing
>It happens again
>This time Trixie lets out a little moan and you feel her pussy twitch
>Okay, this bears some investigating
"Trixie?" You say breaking the kiss
>"Y-yes Anon." She says blushing a little as she tries to catch her breath
"Trix, do you like it when I run my fingers along here?" You ask grazing your fingers across her asshole one more time
>Trixie gasps
>When she realizes you were looking right at her she begins to blush more and looks off to the side
>"M-maybe" She mutters "Just a little bit."
>Okay, now that was pretty adorable
"Trixie?" You say taking her chin in your hand and turning her back to look at you "Would you like me to play with your ass?"
>Trixie just looks down still blushing and mutters something
"What was that?"
>I said maybe, just a little." Trixie said still looking down bashfully
>You just smiled and planted a kiss on her forehead
"Okay Trixie, I promise to be gentle" You say as you move your middle finger to her waiting hole
>As you get ready to press in you feel her grip on your shoulders tighten again
>With great care you begin pushing in stopping at the first knuckle
>Trixie lets out a moan wrapping her arms around you and pressing herself to your chest
"You okay Trixie?" You whisper into her ear
>"Mmmhmmm." She hums into your ear "Just keep going."
>You continue pushing in further
>Trixie begins to get used to the feeling after a while
>Mewling as she started to rock back and forth taking in your finger one way and your dick another
>Even you let out the odd moan as she began to get her rhythm going
>"Anon I'm getting close." Trixie finally murmured
"Me too Trix" You breathed feeling your own climax steadily building
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Taking a break, may try to get one more post out tonight to finish up this scene

But until then I'm sitting down to watch the first episode of the new Kamen Rider
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>>28776695
lmao what kind of name is JungleBuffAnon and why is this anon using it
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>>28777618
wait so is she nerdy or quiet
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>>28778054
Quietly nerdy
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>>28776784
Make it happen writefags.
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I love this thread. Not because I lurk here, but because the OP pic reminds me of the Spike is a slut meme.
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>>28778134
Bitch I might
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>>28777723

>You begin moving with her now
>Thrusting up into her in quick powerful bursts
>Trixie leans into your shoulder and stifles her growing moans into your neck as she continues to ride you
>You pull your finger out of her ass causing Trixie to gasp loudly as you move to cup your hands under her butt gripping it tightly
>You're almost there
"Trixie I'm about to..."
>You feel here legs tighten around you and she grabs your face and pulls you into one last passionate kiss
>You feel her tense up as spasm runs through her lower body
>That's when you feel yourself let loose with your load
>You both break the kiss panting heavily
>As the waves of pleasure begin to subside you gently lower her back down to the couch and pull your spent cock out of her
>You were completely drained
>You two stay like that in silence for a moment
>Only the sound of your panting filling the room as you hear the heavy rain outside
>"That was...amazing Anon..." Trixie says gazing up at you with a look of bliss "Thank you..."
>You see a lone tear trickle from her eye
>You need to say something
>And now might be your only chance
"Listen Trixie, I..."
>You're interrupted by the sound of a gasp coming from the entrance to the room
>Your head shoots up and your blood runs cold
>You see Pinkie standing there
>A look of pure shock plain across her face even in the darkness
>You watch as she brings a hand to her face covering her mouth
>"N-no." You hear her murmur before turning and running back towards the stairs
>Pinkie wait!" You call to her jump off the couch and running after her

And that's where I'm ending it for tonight, will try to write more tomorrow before work if all goes well

night
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>>28778402
SHEEEEIIIIIIT
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGp9P6QvMjY
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>>28777723
I'm just gonna chill here for a moment with a stiff rod between my hands
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>>28778402
BA, this anon better stick with the trix, ponka is a slut anyways
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>>28778329
Bitch, I hope the fuck you do
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>>28778402
HOLY SWEET MOTHER OF FUCKING JESUS OH MY FUCKING GOD WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING
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>>28778402
>>Pinkie wait!" You call to her jump off the couch and running after her
Man, no. Just no. I get the idea behind going full hetnai on fug scenes, it's a clopfic, sure. But the emotional whiplash going from normal person to sex god getting all the pussy in the house, back to "muh feelings" is really annoying. And if the feelsy parts were consistent I'd shut up. But Anon just finished "comforting" Trixie by sticking his dick inside her (what a hero), didn't even talk to her about what he or she feels, and what do you know, just ran off after Pinkie the second she showed up. This is him cheering Trix up. Just his third fuck of the night, no words and run away.

Just no man. This is turning from sad to stupid in a hurry
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>>28778564
Maybe we should have a story where Anon purifies each female with his pizza dick with symbolism way too thought out and with each scene being a mere cock tease to everyone who reads it.

W-wouldn't that be stupid? R-right?
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>>28778564
Gotta agree with this faggot

The mood swings in this green is kinda of jarring
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>>28776784
>Celestia and Luna are having idle chatter with your mother when the discussion turns to you.
>Your mother is taking sympathy on Luna and the three of them start planning to sneak up to your room to surprise you.
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>>28776554
>>You notice that their outfits look a lot more appealing, actually pretty hot.
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>>28778934
Maybe Bison with his creepy smile wasn't the best image to use in order to express my satisfaction.
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Pinkie's ponkadonk was inches away from Applejerk's face, separated by a thin fuzzy layer of pajama bottoms. Applebottom inched her face toward the seat of the pink pony's pants, as the two lay on their sides on Twishit's bed. (Along with the rest of the sleeping mane six; it was well past midnight and the girls were all tired from having an awesome slumber party)

Appledapple sniffed Ponk's bonk. When Binkie didn't wake up, she reached her forelegs out to pull back the pajama bottoms, while she pressed her fat face between the fuzzy fabric and her friend's bare hide. Concentrated sweat and musk, the sweet scent of a sleeping mare, hit Applejoke like a brick wall. She almost fainted from the intoxicating aroma; dazzed, the farm pony pushed her face into Pinkie's pajama bottoms to inhale her smell.

The pants snapped against Applejacks, trapping her face between Pie's pies. She sniffed those pink cheeks like there was no tomorrow - loud and hard - reveling in the wonderful odor surrounding her and the thrill of being naughty. Pinkie still did not wake up. Applebuck used her forelegs to part the balloons, and she extended her tongue out to lick at the treasure hidden between them.

The ponut quivered at the touch. Appledyke lapped and prodded at the butthole, hungrily, wanting to taste it so badly. She kept inhaling as she licked, getting the full sensation of her friend's backside. Applesnack moaned with delight as she licked and sniffed, sniffed and licked, and licked and sniffed some more - enchanted by and obsessed with the biggest booty in Equestia. It was no secret how fat Pinkie was, nor how Applejerk stared at her butt any chance she could get.

The blonde pony made a mess of her friend's anus, completely coating it in her saliva - inside and out. When she was done tasting the rump, Apple gave the rear one last good sniff and lick, then exited the pajama pants and went back to sleep, as if nothing had happened.
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>>28778944
So many confused boners in this thread
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>>28778402

OH NO!

https://youtu.be/bmEBiN1ML3U
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>>28779491

>not posting the best version

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4V4udOasIw
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>>28778812
Top kek, don't worry beans, I still like you
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>>28727930
>The new kid Anon sneaks in and buys the ice cream sandwich.
Wat happens?
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>>28780133
They ask him if he wants /ss/
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>>28780133
Hilarity ensues
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>>28780133

they try to give him shit for it but he doesn't care at all because he's anon

then they get aroused by his disinterest in them and sexual tensions builds until horny teenage fucking happens
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>>28778402

>Shit
>Fuck
>No
>No no no no
>Shit just keeps going from bad to worse to fucking horrific
>And it's all your fault
>You let things get this way
>Now you had to try and fix this
>You rush up the stairs after Pinkie and see her disappear round the corner towards the guest bedroom
>You follow after her nearly tripping over your own two feet as you round the corner
>The alcohol is starting to weigh heavy on your system at this point
>Yet another thing you brought into this that is coming back to haunt you
>No time to dwell on that now
>You had more than enough guilt now as it is
>You have just enough time to see Pinkie close the door
>You hurry to the door and try to open it
>It's locked
"Pinkie open up" You say frantically twisting the knob
>"No! Go away!" You hear from the other side of the door
"Pinkie, please listen I can explain" You plead
>"No Anon! How could you do that?!"
"It's not like that, please just let me explain" You beg leaning against the door now
>"No, just go away!" It sounds like she's crying "Please, just go away Anon."
>It feels like your heart is in a vice
"Pinkie please, just open the door" There's no reply
>Part of you wants to start pounding on the door
>Bust it in and try to explain everything to her
>To try and fix this anyway you can
>But you can't do any of that without waking up the rest of the house
>So you just stand there leaning against the door
>It feels like you stand there for an eternity before you force yourself to pull away
>As much as you want to just stay there in hopes Pinkie will change her mind
>You had to check on Trixie
>You didn't have time to think when Pinkie showed up downstairs
>You just left her there
>Just another in a series shitty mistakes
>As you head back down the hall you find her leaning next to the door to Pinkie's room
>She's got her clothes back on and is staring at the floor
"Trixie I'm sorry I..." Trixe just raises a hand to stop you
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>>28780133
Green of this when?
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>>28780551

>"You lied to me." She says hurt evident in her voice
"What, no I..."
>"For a second I actually felt special. I wanted to believe it was true." She says running a hand up and down her arm "But then Pinkie showed up and you drop everything to make sure she's okay. I guess I really am just second best when it comes to her."
>No
>Not her too
"Trixie no that isn't..."
>"Save it Anon, I'm done." She says with a defeated sigh stepping into the doorway "At least I know where I stand now" And with that she closes the door leaving you alone in the hall
>Well congrats Anon
>You finally lost your v-card
>And all it cost you was the friendship of the only two girls you ever really cared about
>You let out a growl of frustration and slam your fist into your leg
>You feel something crumple inside your pocket
>You reach inside and pull out your lighter and now badly dented pack of cigarettes
>As you stare down at them the emotional toll of everything hits you like a ton of bricks
>You have to fight back the tears
>Now you really needed a smoke
>As if to further break you a loud crash of thunder echoes outside reminding you of the raging storm
>You're just about to surrender all hope when you remember something
>Mr. Pie had a small corner of the basement reserved for him to smoke his pipe
>You could probably get away with having just on cigarette down there without anyone noticing
>So you head downstairs
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>>28780551
>Dumb-fuck Anon tries to have his cake and eat it too: The Story: The Bump
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>>28781091

>As you slowly trudge your way downstairs can't help but run through everything that happened tonight
>Every mistake
>Every misstep
>How could you have never noticed Pinkie or Trixie's true feelings for you
>That didn't matter now
>You just knew you had to make things right
>Think of some way to fix it
>You'd do anything if you could
>You make it to the basement without incident climbing down the rickety stair
>Thankfully Limestone left her workbench light on
>Working on her rock sculptures or whatever late into the night
>You find Mr. Pie's rocking chair in the corner sitting next to an old rusted spittoon that doubled as an ashtray and collapse into it and light up your cigarette
>You can feel the ill effects of the alcohol in your system now as you begin rocking back and forth
>You try to block it out
>Focus on your smoke as you take a long drag of your cigarette
>You've never felt this tired before in your life
>The darkness of sleep is starting to take hold of you and there's little you can do to stop it at this point
>You just give up and let it take you
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YFPigyCAzQk
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Fucking character limits, well I'll be back later, off to work

preparing for all the salt and hate to come from these last posts

Happy Halloween everybody
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>>28727930
Halloween sleepover when?
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>>28781174
This is went from great to the winding roads of self hatred pretty quick.
I did in fact need these feels
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>>28727930
>Door bell rings.
>Pause vidya
>Open door.
>"It is I the Spooky and Scary Trixie!"
"..."
>"Do you have any peanut butter crackers?"
"I got Reese's peanut butter cups."
>"Not exactly what Trixie wanted but it will suffice."
"Uh you're welcome?"
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>>28781329
Insanebow did a thing for that sorta
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>>28781174
>all the salt and hate
No salt, just disappointment. Don't pull that card mate, you could've prevented it
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>>28775970
>Twilight looked pretty nervous, standing in front of you, what's up with her?
>Were you a bit to strong earlier? Shit son you thought it was a little funny
"Hey, so you need to use this?" You say, stepping out from the doorway to the bathroom
>"Thanks" She laughs nervously and steps passed you, her shoulder brushed up against yours and you hear her sigh a little
>She's acting a little weird
"Hey, Twilight, I didn't completely mess you up down there did I? I didn't mean for you to-" You stop when she grabs your hands firmly
>She takes a deep breath and looks into your eyes, almost, passionately
>"Anon, can I talk to you?" She says
>You thought you were already doing that, but alrighty
"Of course Twilight, what's it exactly you want to talk about?"
>She smiles
>Twilight says nothing but slowly leads you into the bathroom with her
>Oh goodness.jpg
"Twilight, what's going on? Are you alright?"
>She doesn't reply but instead shuts the bathroom door and presses you against it
>She pushes herself onto you softly, you can feel her heartbeat faintly, it's very rapid
>Hell, yours is too
>When she looks up at you, you can make out from behind those big, sexy glasses of hers some tears beginning to form
>The fuck is happening?
"Twilight, I need you to tell me what this is about"
>She takes a deep breath and moves her hands up and down your torso
>"Anon, did you? Did you really mean all of that?" She finally mutters
>Hm?
"All of what, Twi?"
>You figured a cute nickname was in order right now, she blushed a little bit and smiled
>"When you said that um, smart people are hot and stuff, and that you'd...marry me?"
>Is this a proposal?!
>You give a look of uncertainty and she looks a little afraid at first, before realization dawned on her
>"I don't mean marry me! I am talking about the game, y'know? Yeah"
>Nice save, girl
>You smile lovingly and pull her into a hug, rubbing her back slowly with your left hand
>She's surprised about the gesture but returns it
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>>28782237
>FILENAME
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>>28782249
Here, have a sequel
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>>28782257
seems like it didn't taste too great
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>>28782269
She forgot the seasoning is all
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>>28782340
you mean the food..?
checkmate, faggot
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>>28782348
No, I meant the salt
You wish
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>>28782243
>>She's surprised about the gesture but returns it
Small tip - when you are doing a narrative from the perspective of someone, do not outright tell other people's feeling like this, describe how the narrative person sees it. "She seems surprised about the gesture" is something that would be completely fine from Anon's point of view, but this is a bit weird. Not to say that it can never be used, something like "Oh yeah, she is pissed now" can be used as a way to show the main character's observation about someone, but it's best not to overuse it.
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>>28781387

have her over for a lewd sleepoever
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>>28782348
Calm down, Walrus.
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>>28782527
boi you better not
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>>28782441
I see what you mean! thanks anon!
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>>28782243
I am very emotionally erect right now.
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>>28776554

>You see a couple of the guys get their tent assignments.
>It seems they get a card with a random gem or crystal.
>You walk up to Gloriosa to get yours.
>She reaches inside and grabs a card, handing you a card with an emerald.
>"Emeralds are very nice wouldn't you say?"
>Gloriosa asked staring at you with a smile.
>You respond with a slightly awkward "sure" as you walk back to Flash.
>You wanted to know what tent he got.
>Fortunately you can see he is already holding another card with an emerald signaling you'll sharing a tent with him.
"Hey Flash, looks like we're sharing a tent."
>"Awesome!" He responds with a smile,giving you a fist bump as you begin to walk towards the tent area.
>"Oh oh, remember to meet up at the docks in 15 minutes boys!"
>You heard Gloriosa shout from behind you, but you made note of that.
>Wouldn't want to miss anything.
>Soon you arrive at the tent with Flash to get yourselves situated.

Meanwhile:
>You are Twilight Sparkle.
>And you were hoping your friends didn't catch you staring at Timber, and also blushing.
>Oh gosh, you really hope they didn't notice the blushing. You think to yourself as Gloriosa is finishes and tells everyone to get their tent assignments.
>Soon the girls go up one by one to get their respective assignments.
>You reach in to grab yours and look seeing that you got Sapphire, at least you assumed it was.
>Coincidentally you hear Sunset shout from behind you that she got the same card.
"Hey me too!At least I think it is."
>You smile at Sunset.
>Maybe this won't be so bad.
"Technically sapphires aren't just blue, they can be pink, purple, yellow-"
>You begin spouting off facts about sapphire until you're interrupted Timber.
>"Yea but they're mostly blue, that's why they're named after the latin word 'spheris'."
>Wow.
>You're surprised by his knowledge.
>You didn't expect him to be cut-
>Stop. You're going to blush again.
>Suddenly he leans in and whispers.
>"That means blue."
>You smile as you respond.
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>>28783219

"I know, but did you also know that they're just rubies without chromium"
>You whisper to him as well, smiling like a dope throughout.
>It was fun talking to someone this knowledgeable.
>Suddenly his hand got close to yours as he took the card from you.
>The contact made you blush slightly as he continued to speak.
>"You know you're lucky, the sapphire tent is the best one. You know why?"
"No, why is that?"
>You are genuinely curious about his statement.
>"Because you're in it."
>He smiles at you, his eyebrows moving up and down in a comical way.
>You can't help but laugh slightly.
"Oh please, I bet you tell that to all the campers."
>You reach back for your card with another smile on your face.
>"Nope. Not true." He shakes his fingers while giving you a cute smirk, you mean smirk. Yea smirk.
>You see him interact with Bulks as he jokes around about his tent assignment.
>You can't help but stare at him.
>You giggle as he tries to make a nerdy joke at Bulks but completely misses it.
>"See you around." He gives a wave of his hand and a smile leaving you staring.
>Soon you notice you're not alone as you hear the familiar snickering of your friends.
>You turn around with a blush on your face to seem them all staring at you with grins on their faces.
"What?"
>"Pff nothin'." Applejack says stifling a laugh.
>"Ooh that was so... adorable!" You see Rarity get all giddy.
>You shake your head in vain disapproval.
>The last thing you wanted right now was awkwardness.
>Soon a saving grace comes to you as Gloriosa comes back to tell you all about meeting up in the docks soon.
>However you see a limo pull up out of nowhere.
>You stare confused at the strange occurrence as a man in a sleek business suit comes out from the limo.
>He walks to Gloriosa who takes him aside to speak with him privately.
>That is certainly strange.
>You look back at Sunset who just shrugs to you, seemingly confused as well.
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>>28783219
>filename
Whoa, spoilers dude
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>>28783362
We all knew it was coming anon.

>>28783336

>You see Gloriosa and the man known as Filthy Rich, an apt name for his appearance, bicker with whispers.
>You can faintly hear what they're talking about.
>It's clear that something is up with the camp.
>Soon however the man steps back into the limo and speeds off.
>"Uhh Filthy Rich is an alumni of the camp, he comes by from time to time just to see things." Gloriosa tries to salvage the scene but no one seems to buy it.
>"Anyways! Go find your tents and prepare for the best week of camp ever to begin!"
>You finally proceed to get your things as she and the rest of the girls walk off.
>You make your way to the tent with Sunset.
>A couple minutes go by as you and Sunset get settled in the tent.
>You're on the bed thinking about certain things, like certain green haired boys-
>"That was weird, right? The whole Filthy Rich thing?"
>Sunset was looking at you with a raised eyebrow.
>She caught you in your absent minded state.
"Oh uhhh yea, I guess..."
>Sunset stills seem perplexed by situation continuing on about Gloriosa.
>You pay no attention until she says something that catches you off guard.
>"Her brother's pretty cute, huh?"
>You can feel the mischievous smirk even if you're not looking at her.
>Her words make your cheeks redden and warm up.
"He's alright..."
>You look back slightly smiling.
>"Oh looks like our little Twily's getting the hots for somebody." Sunsets lean into her bag smirking like a she devil.
"No I'm not! I don't know what you're talking about!"
>You deny Sunsets claim fervently.
>You we're not 'getting the hots' from anybody. You would know! Because you're you. Right?
>"I'm just messing around Twi."
>Sunset laughs a little before getting a tad serious.
>You walk back and sit on your bed holding a sweater close to yourself for comfort.
>"You okay Twi? I still remember what happened on the bus, was a bad dream or?"
>Sunset begins to bring back memories from your unfortunate nightmare.
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>>28783599

>"Probably had another one of her nightmares." Spike spoke up from his little bed.
>You looked down at with a frown as you threw your socks at him.
"I'm fine. Trust me Sunset, it was just a bad dream."
>You try to reassure Sunset but she still seems worried about you.
>"If you say so."
>You try again to salvage the situation by exclaiming how well you've been treated at CHS.
"Trust me, Sunset. Transferring to CHS was the best thing to happen to me. I made new friends, people actually don't hate me anymore... I'm not lonely. And I appreciate that. Even if... what happened at the Friendship Games was my fault..."
>Your tone takes a shameful turn at the end as you remember what you did way back then.
>How ashamed you were at you had become, a monster. That nightmare you had was just another reminder that deep inside of you still lies that monster. And that scares you.
>But you don't want to worry your friends, especially Sunset.
>"Please Twilight. You know what happened there was not your fault. You were manipulated, but all of that is over now. You're with us now. And we accept you."
>Sunset gives you a warm smile, a smile that bores into your heart and gives you warm fuzzy feelings.
>You feel that maybe things will be okay.
>"Yo, you guys coming or what?" You see Rainbow shout at you guys from outside the tent.
>"We'll be right there!" Sunset responds prompting Rainbow to leave.
>You both get up from the bed.
>Sunset seems to be looking for something.
>"Now where did I put my sunscreen?" She looks down into her bag.
>You notice the bottle on the floor near the bed and promptly point at it, signaling Sunset.
"Got it!"
>Suddenly you see a purple aura envelop the sunscreen as moves closer to your hand.
>Are you causing this?
>Your face is a mixture of shock and awe as Sunset looks at what is unfolding in the room.
>You look up to see a multitude of items all enveloped by the same purple aura, all levitating in the air.
>Oh no.
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>>28783788
>>How ashamed you were at what* you had become, a monster.
Fuck, sorry for the dumb mistakes.

Later:
>You are Anon.
>Currently you were fixing your hair inside your cap again. Man it was getting long.
>You had just made it to the docks with Flash.
>Soon Rarity and her gang join you.
>You stared out into the sizable lake as Rarity took a grasp of your arm leaning into your shoulder.
>"Wow it looks so beautiful. Look at how it sparkles, just absolutely breathtaking..."
>She stared out into the lake with a twinkle in her eye.
>You yourself had to admit the beauty of it. You haven't ever really seen a lake as pretty as this.
"It really pretty. You see the sparkling water?"
>You point towards the lake with your free hand.
>"Mhm..."
"It reminds me of that night at Pinkie's. Remember the stars?"
>She seemed to blush reminiscing about that day.
>She smiled and tip-toed to kiss you on the cheek.
"Remember what I told you then?"
>"Yes I remember." She smiles with a heavy blush being reminded of your words.
"Still true."
>You kiss her forehead again.
>Smooth, Anon, smooth. You mentally high five yourself at the moment.
>You really enjoyed all the quiet moments with Rarity. It made you feel truly alive.
>A couple minutes go by as you and Rarity sit by docks watching a couple kids canoeing in the waters.
>Next you was Fluttershy feeding birds with scraps of bread.
>"I'm thinking maybe the blue clashes with red too much but I'm not sure."
>Rarity had begun to speak with you about the fashion show she was looking forward to.
>You listened to her and replied with as much as knowledge as you had though it wasn't much compared to yours. You can't compete with the fashionista of course.
>You hear Twilight walking along the pier behind you until you hear a crack and a yell from her.
>You turn back to see Twilight falling back right onto the arms of Timber.
>You think how preposterous that was, as if it came straight out of a cheesy romance flick.
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>>28783935

>You see Twilight blush furiously as Timber spoke to her.
>What a bunch of lovebirds.
>You smile at Rarity who covers her mouth to not laugh out loud.
>"They look absolutely adorable together." Rarity cupped her hands together and looked at them as if she was a proud mom.
"Chill out, Miss Matchmaker."
>You poke fun at her, smiling mischievously.
>She just rolls her eyes with a smirk.

>You are Flash Sentry.
>Right now you stood watching the pier where everyone was mingling with each other and having fun.
>Meanwhile you stood there, alone. Like a creep.
>Sigh.
>You really need to get your shit together.
>You spy Twilight fall into the hands of that green haired kid.
>You instantly hated him, and totally not because he's getting the attention of Twilight or anything.
>No he just looked like a douchebag. With that dumb beanie, and his dumb green hair, and his dumb face.
>Okay maybe you were just a tad jealous.
>Maybe Anon is right and you should just get over it. You don't want to be a creep.
>You sigh as you look down.
>Suddenly you feel a hand on your shoulder.
>You turn to see your ex-girlfriend, Sunset Shimmer.
>You hope this doesn't turn into an awkward conversation.
>She doesn't say anything just stands there smiling, expecting you to say something first.
>Something that will make you look like a fool.
>Of course you do exactly that.
"Okay maybe I shouldn't get jealous. It's not my Twilight, uhh I mean not that the other Twilight was mine or anything and uhhh oh crap what am I saying..."
>You make a fool of yourself. Again.
>"Flash, calm down. It's alright, dude."
>She just gives you one of her always warm and soothing smile.
>"Look I get it. But you have to realize that 'your' Twilight is a magical princess pony from Equestria. And she's probably not gonna spend most of her time here."
"I know it's just hard... I guess. But I'll get over her, at l-least I'll try."
>You rub your neck feeling the awkwardness emanate from you.
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>>28784054
That was my last post of the night. I'll try not to follow the movie too much after this, but keep the general story.

Hope you fags had a wonderful Halloween.
Night night.
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>>28784054
fuck now i feel bad for Brad
let him get back with Shimmy, I hate to see the man suffer
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>>28784085
Well that's what I was planning, hopefully people don't get on my shit for shipping but fuck it.

Also the emotional roller coaster Burnout is taking us on is a crazy one. Gotta say didn't expect it to turn so dark.
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>>28784078

have a rare ride
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>>28783935
>"It really pretty
>>Next you was Fluttershy
>with as much as knowledge as you had though it wasn't much compared to yours
You alright there DGA? Need me to call for help with that stroke of yours?
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>>28784389
This is embarrassing, sorry for the stupid mistakes. I was a bit unfocused writing today.
I'll make sure not to stroke out anymore.
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Savior bump!
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>I have made a terrible mistake for wanting a new thread pic.
Forgive me.
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>>28784946
I like it
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>>28784946
this is fucking awesome you're my new favorite person
fuck yea i'm Rara
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>>28784946
First thing I see after waking up is this

Eh, not bad

But how come I'm still missing my smoke man, DISHONOR, DISHONOR EVERYWHERE!!!!
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>>28781164

>That night you didn't dream
>Whether it was because of the alcohol or the whirlwind of emotions you wouldn't know
>But you spent the night enveloped in a fitful darkness
>You almost couldn't tell the difference when someone began to shake you
>"Anon, Anon, c'mon now wake up." A voice called slowly pulling you from your sleep
>You began to stir
"A-Applejack?" You groan as your eyes slowly strain to open
>Your head aches
>Your mouth and throat are drier than nun pussy
>And your stomach hated you
>No doubt about it
>You were hungover
"Shit where am I?" You ask looking around trying to get your bearings
>"You're in the basement sug', I don't know why but we been looking everywhere for you." Applejack explained taking a step back to give you room to breath
>The basement, why were you...
>That's when everything from the night before hits you like truck
>Fuck
>You didn't think you could feel any worse than you already did
>But now you do
>You go to move your hand and feel a sting in your fingers
>You look down to see the charred remnants of a cigarette filter still clutched in your fingers
>It must have burned itself out in your hand when you passed out
"Yeah...I think I must have come down here for a smoke last night and just passed out." You say carefully as you flick the burnt out nub into the spittoon
>You don't know what kind of fallout you're in for
>It's best to keep things simple
>"Well now that I found you we best be getting upstairs." Applejack said extending you a hand "Y'all're gonna wanna see this"
>You didn't like the sound of that
>You prayed it wasn't some kind of fight
>You barely felt human
>If you were going try to fix this you needed at least a few minutes to think
>You couldn't hear yelling
>That was at least a good thing
>Course the only thing you could really hear right now was the sound of the storm outside
>How was it still coming down
>You'd been out for at least a couple hours
>Whatever
>You had more important things to worry about
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>>28785942
You ever get that feeling in the pit of your stomach that feels like a thousand rats gnawing into you? Cause that's what I'm feeling now.
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>>28786000
same
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>>28786000
>>28786008
Yeah, but then I take some pepto and have a smoke and I feel right as rain
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>>28786010
Well I guess it's too bad I don't smoke cigarettes that is
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>>28785942

>You follow Applejack up the stairs and into the living room
>Everyone is there, even Maud and Limestone, most huddled around the couch in front of the tv
>Limestone is the first to notice the two of you come in
>"Where were you and what's with that getup?" She asks angrily as always
>It's then that you realize you were still only wearing your jeans from the night before
"It's a long story." You say dismissively
>You notice pretty much all eyes are on you
>Makes sense since you kind of pulled a disappearing act last night
>Everyone seems mostly relieved to see you
>Maud is giving you a weird look
>Well it looks like her usual blank stare, but it feels like she's eyeing you
>You don't really care
>You're focused on only two pairs of eyes
>Pinkie and Trixie
>Pinkie is looking at you with hurt evident in her eyes
>And Trixie looks like she'd been taking glaring lessons from Limestone
>It feels like your stomach just shrunk at least two sizes
>And your heart felt like it just got punched
>But now wasn't the time for feeling guilty
>Plenty of time for that later
>Now you had to figure out what was going on so you could focus on fixing shit
>Luckily everyone was too focused on you showing back up to notice Pinkie and Trixie's sudden change in moods and soon turn back to the tv
>Not sure what's so important
>You catch a glimpse of the outside through the living room window
>Fucking hell
>If it start raining any harder you're gonna need to start grabbing animals and building a boat
>That's when you realize everyone is huddled in front of the tv watching the news
>Specifically an emergency weather broadcast
>Turns out the city was being hit by the worst storm in over a decade
>Half the city was without power and the other half was under severe flood warnings
>Citizens were being advised not to leave their homes under any circumstances
>Was this even real life right now
>You wonder if it's too late to head back to the basement for a smoke
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>>28786301

>Someone please stop the ride
>You want to get off
>Of course somewhere in the back of your mind you realize wanting to get off is how you got into this whole mess
>You wished that part of your mind was the one feeling your hangover
>Well it looked like you were stuck here for at least another day
>That wasn't so bad
>Not like staying just one night here hadn't gone just swimmingly for you already
>You felt like you already needed another drink
>Then your stomach chimed in and you regret even thinking about booze
>The next few minutes are taken up by everyone going to get their phones and calling their folks to let them know they were safe and you'd be staying with Pinkie until the storm blew over
>After that everyone starts the process of getting comfortable for the long haul
>The girls get started on deciding a bathroom order for getting cleaned up
>While they're busy doing that you head for the laundry room
>Luckily your shirts were at least done getting cleaned and you slip on your t-shirt from the day before
>Since you can already figure you're at the end of the line when it comes to getting a shower you head for the kitchen and already find all the girls not waiting on the bathroom trying to scrounge up something to eat
>Turns out you were at the end of the line when it came to food too
>You end up settling for a bowl of dry cereal and a glass of OJ
>Everyone seems to be splitting up into little groups so you take a seat at kitchen table by yourself
>Looks like Pinkie got first dibs on the shower since she's nowhere to be seen
>Dash, Fluttershy, and Trixie are all seated in the living room checking to see if anything new had come up on the tv
>Trixie occasionally steals a glance your way
>She seems like she has something on her mind
>You're not sure if that's good or bad
>Applejack seems to be talking to Maud and Limestone about something near the entrance to the living room but you can't hear what
>That's when you're pulled from your thoughts
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>>28786670
I've given you so much shit in the last 2 threads that I think I might as well try and be constructive for a change. Therefore, I will grace you with my hot opinion.
Shagging Trixie this fast was a mistake. I've complained about the mood shifts, but that pretty much is the only thing that really slams the breaks for me, the rest was fine. I think that the advanced snuggling with Dash should have been less hentai and more spaghetti, since they were both inexperienced as all hell, but the general scene was not out of place. Hell, you could even play it as Anon really wanting to cum inside Rainbow Dash, but due to his lack of preparations he couldn't. Then Pinkie cornering him and confessing her feels would be a bit more likely to cause him to lose it and just fuck her there and then. Her whole scene would be fine as it was. But even in the way you wrote it there wouldn't be enough weird shit to complain, if Trix was handled a bit differently. Have her confront Anon, and talk. For crying out loud talk. You don't need Anon to come up with a miraculous solution to justify his actions, he should be surprised and confused. He didn't know either Ponk or Trixie were into him before this evening. Have him make some excuses and petty promises. Have them kiss. And then have Pinkie walk up on them kissing. Then have Anon chasing after her, fucking over his relationship with both of them. You would have just 1 sex scene less so far, but much more convincing emotional load.
In the end though, that's like, my opinion man. You are not going to retcon your story now, but hopefully you will understand where I am coming from. I'm not some kind of "b-but christian board" purist, I just wanted the feels to be smoother, so that me continuing to read your story would feel better. Have a Fluffle.
t. Feel Addict
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>9 lewd sleepover threads
>not a single mention of the lewdest equestria girl
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>>28787412
She was invited, but got to the wrong address
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>>28786670
Doesn't matter
Had sex
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So I updated the pastebin and fixed all the stupid mistakes I made when writing last night. I must have sounded like a grade A retard, jesus christ.
http://pastebin.com/fuW4D1Ca
I'll continue with the updates later tonight.

>>28787412
Maybe she'll get some love in my sequel, who knows ;)
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>>28787412
Believe it or not she was originally going to be Anon's other best friend, but then I decided she was too much like Pinkie and went for Trixie instead
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Why is there a new thread before we hit autosage?
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I did a thing that does the thing
>>28787933
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>>28787951
Because
*puts on glasses*
Deal with it
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Xd
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>>28787967
Nigga you do realise that those threads don't instantly die at 500 bumps? And that you don't need to take up twice the space for no good reason? All the writefags won't be posting until like 5 hours from no anyway
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>>28788016
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>>28788021
Some blokes just want to see the world burn
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Can someone please make the new thread? I'm tired of that edgelordXD who put his trip without making content.
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>>28788041
I'm afraid it's already been done
>>28787954
And how am I edgy?
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>>28788041
I wanna say fuck that guy too, but I don't like spamming the board with 3 fucking threads for no good reason
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>>28788062
>>28788041
Can someone explain where the hate is coming from?
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>>28788073
From one salty anon.
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>>28788041
>>28788050
*CringelordXD
FTFY

>>28788062
You can always try.
But who is gonna take the risk...

>>28788073
>Constantly using your trip without posting content
>Constantly using your trip just to circlejerk
>A-A-Always s-s-s-speaking l-l-like this t-t-hinking is f-f-unny/cute
>Maymays xD
>ALWAYS using a image.jpg as a OP pic
>Not even checking the thread and using the other writefags pastebins and deleting the ones who no longer write in the thread
This is not your autism safe space called /sst/. You just came here following Bean's dick and he is no longer here. You're not important in the thread.
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>>28788226
Maybe it's you who has autism if you get angry over things that have nothing to do with you. Maybe you should turn off the computer and rethink your life and why you get triggered over things that some guy you don't even know does on a pony board.
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>>28788226
But let me take a serious response to your points
>Constantly using your trip without posting content
Fair enough
>Constantly using your trip just to circlejerk
I don't do that
>A-A-Always s-s-s-speaking l-l-like this t-t-hinking is f-f-unny/cute
I am cute, fool
>Maymays xD
Trump did Harambe
>ALWAYS using a image.jpg as a OP pic
If this triggers you, you no longer have the right to call others autistic
>Not even checking the thread and using the other writefags pastebins and deleting the ones who no longer write in the thread
I'm always checking the thread
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>>28788429
Don't use trip for no reason. In particular, don't trip if you aren't creating content.
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>>28788461
Better?
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>>28788226
Yeah, you tell him. I would never do any of those things. And I'm totally not here. B-besides, I-I'd never do any of those things, unlike Spider-Bloke!

Bloke's chill. He's done less wrong than me. I am a real attention whore. Bloke's just that—a bloke. Go easy on him, cause he's better than someone who's legit a shit, like me.

With that out of the way, I'm almost done writing. I found this story's Twilight's kink, and I'm going to break her. The I'll be done with this green and finally post the one I promised to post for the Nightly Twilight Threads.
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>>28788562
What's with the self pity Beans, didn't anyone tell you it's not an appealing trait.
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>>28788749
Just sticking up for Bloke and trying to keep the peace, man.
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