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>>28725432
no

>>28725432
0

>>28725432
shit/10

>>28725451
Pease explain.

>>28725466
>Red eyes
>Black mane and tail
>Hooves different color than the coat
>Strange coat color
>Mud pony
It's shit

>>28725432
0/12

>>28725488
give critique.

>>28725432
Homestuck/10

>>28725504
He's trapped in Twilight's House.

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>>28725432

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>Grey and black, a disgusting colour scheme.
>Edgy red eyes. Only one pony is allowed red eyes and you're not her.
>Visible hooves.
>Bland, realistic mane.
>Lady looks like a dude.
>No cutie mark
>Dead expression, like a drowning fish.

Scrap the whole thing and start again. Haven't you ever heard of a fucking colour wheel? Get this shit out of my face until you find some colours that don't make me want to cut myself and buy from hot topic.

>>28725806
But doesn't Big Mac have visible hooves?

>>28726422
Big Mac does have visible hooves, yes. As do one or two other males in the show. Everyone else in the show doesn't. Stick to the design of the show as closely as possible, ignore ponies with unique body shapes. Unless your character is a total beefcake, they look out of place and make her look like a fag.

>>28726444
The reason you can tell the genders apart is by the eyelashes.

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>>28726444
Is this better?

>>28725432
cancer/cancer

>>28726500
>red and black

now you're just trolling.

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>>28726493
>Eyelashes

It's the fucking face shape, you cretin. Every female character in the show has this head shape >>28725432 and every stallion in the show has this head shape, pic related.

This has been consistent with every character in the show for six seasons. LEARN!

>>28726525
Need a clips from the show for conformation.

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>>28726500
Anon there's a whole world of color and you go with red and black.

>>28726525
I thought this was basic knowledge only the blind needed to be taught. Faggots are going around making mares with stallion faces and vice versa?

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>>28726500
>Still has hooves
>Still has black hair
>Still has no cutie mark
>Only changed the godawful coat to a different shade of godawful coat.

What part of 'scrap it' didn't you understand? Pastels, nigger, they're what the show is made of. No blacks. No dark reds. No dark colours at all. You make your colour scheme as bright as possible without it being eye gougingly neon.

At least you didn't make her an alicorn or give her homestuck horns or something.

>>28726542
LEARN!
Look at this, not a single male without that head shape Excluding pony Joe, who has a unique design., and the only females without their head shapes are those with unique designs like Fleur.

>>28726554
Well its actually more of a brown.

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>>28726542
Posting show to prove point.

>>28726584
Maybe I should just correct myself a little.

When I say no dark colours, I am aware that there are characters in the show that have dark colours. But since you can barely make a functional OC, bright colours is playing it safe. By all means, if you think you can handle someone with dark colours (you can't) go ahead and make one.

And don't you fucking dare bring me someone who's coat is white. White goes with everything, you're better than that.

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>>28726597
>LEARN!
Reminds me of something
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DfizLF4-Pdo&list=PLeZV2UXOouwk2nWKbMsaSm-69ZURUTAql&index=19