Alone in equestria, i fucked up edition

>>28548420
Previous thread >>28435009

>>28548455
Guys you post? On page3 im alone, but will pick up tokeep withtimezone hopefully

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>>28548520
Take this pic and use thread relevant images next time, we got plenty of them.

>>28548589
Thanjs anon i forget tosave them plus im on phone at minute so again sorry about this

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>>28548620
You have been excused. Have another pic.

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After a longer wait than normal...
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>"Anon? How does this one look?" Applejack asks you from behind her changing room door.
"Hmm?"
>The door swings open and Applejack comes out modeling off a two-tone red and green swimsuit.
>You're left speechless. At least for a few seconds.
>Applejack smiles at your reaction, "Thanks, ah think ah have mah answer."
>Shining Armor elbows you in the side with a cheeky grin before taking a drink from his water bottle.
>You just let out a cough.
>"Oh Shining what do you think about this?" calls out one of the Twilight's.
>Rarity pulls her back in before she jumps out all the way, "Wait! Twilight don't you think that's a bit... racy?"
>"Nonsense!" she answers back.
>Walking out, Twilight comes out wearing a purple sling bikini.
>Shining spits out his water.
>"I- uh..."
>You internally chuckle.
>"Gah what are you wearing!?" human Twilight demands.
>Rushing over to her other-self, she pushes her back into the dressing room.
>"Hey wai-! Shining didn't tell me his opin-"
>"HE SAYS NO!"
>The door slams shut and rattles off its hinges.
>Looking at Shining, he pounds a fist into his chest to try and clear his throat.
>"I *cough* don't want to hear it." he tells you.
>You smirk and look forward as he grumbles.
>"..."
>"Should make a note to come back here with Cadance..."

>"Thanks for paying Anon." Applejack says holding your arm as you walk towards the mall entrance.
"You're welcome AJ."
>After a few grueling hours of watching the girls try on different clothes, swimsuits and bikinis, they finally decided on something to buy.
>Or, as a quick double check of your watch actually showed you, twenty minutes.
>As a consolation though, Sunset was true to her word; she managed to convince Applejack to buy an additional string tied bikini that even you know she would never normally go for.
>Especially since it would show off most of her "assets" to the point where she might feel she isn't wearing anything at all.

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>>28548640
>But maybe, that's a reason why she preferred to try it on inside at the booth.
>Yet she still got it.
>"Maybe tonight ah'll show it off for ya." she whispers.
"I'd like that."
>"Though part of me thinks it was a waste of money."
"Really? Why?"
>"Cause it'll probably be on the floor more than on me if you know what ah mean."
>Cheeky girl.
>As your group walks out of the store you notice Twilight Sparkle giving her Princess counterpart questionable looks as the latter latches onto their older brother.
>In a similar manner that your girlfriend latches onto you.
>Which is kind of stra-
>...
>Wait...
>Fluttershy and Sunset definitely must have noticed it too, judging by the way they're purposely trying to avoid looking at the two.
>...
>Well, this makes for an interesting turn of events.

>Twilight pokes Rarity on the shoulder, "Rarity could I ask what time it is?"
>With a nod, the fashionista pulls out her cellphone and presents it to the Princess.
>"Wow, look at the time! I didn't expect to stay as long as I did."
>"Probably because you were *sooo* distracted." mumbles normal Twilight.
>There's some hostility in her tone.
>"I should really get home now. Spike's probably slacking off on his chores as we speak."
"But you HAVE to come back and hang with us at the pool darling. That swimsuit you chose will just turn heads when you show it off."
>You can't help but feel a bit bad for non-pony Twilight.
>The way all her friends gush over an alternate version of herself that's the same, yet at the same time more.
>No one but you notices her downcast and bitter gaze, rubbing her arm as everyone else focuses on the Princess.
>Even her brother doesn't seem to notice too much.
>While everyone else is preoccupied, you walk over to Twilight and pat her on the shoulder.

>>28548639
Thanks anonn
Oh i have an idea for a story
Basicallu anon is alone and man 7 try and befriend him but anon makes mistakes and discord sends him back tothe dayto try again, but he runs in problems with filthy rich and slavs, and the bug bad is sombra and anon saves the day with mane 7

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>>28548654
>She looks surprised at your touch.
>You try to comfort her, but you don't really know if you doing it is for the best.
>But at least she returns a faint smile, so that's something you suppose.
>"Ahem."
>"Sorry. I forgot that the older brother was still present." Rarity corrects herself with a roll of her eyes. "Even if the sister is a version from another world."
>The group, barring you and non-Princess Twilight, share a small laugh.
>As you prepare to finally leave the mall, you suddenly get a strange feeling that someone's watching you.
>Casually turning around, you scan the mall for any suspicious figures.
>Unfortunately, the mall is still packed with shoppers and families going about their day to notice anyone out of the ordinary..
>...
>The medallion on your chest hums, but it's the same low humming as whenever you're around Sunset Shimmer, Applejack or any of the others due to their innate magic they seem to just radiate.
>You suppose that's one weakness anyone could exploit if they knew but still...
>And almost just as quickly as it came, the feeling disappears.
>Maybe it could have just been some passerby noticing your large group.
>Experience has taught you however, that such feelings are rarely coincidences.
>Giving one last look around it proves just as fruitless as the first. The mall is just too dense with other people to pick anyone out.
>All you can do now is just be on guard for the unexpected.
>"Anon? Ya seem a little tense. Is something wrong?"
"..."
>"Anon?"
>May as well tell her, it's not like you can lie to Applejack.
"Just on edge AJ. Felt like someone was watching us."
>She grows concerned, "Is it serious?"
"Tough to say right now. It was a quick feeling but a feeling nonetheless."
>"Well we better be careful then. And if they try to do anything funny, I'll just show'em what-to with those new fighting skills you taught me."
>She flexes out her arm to emphasize her point.

>>28548640
We knew you were here.
>>28548660
Did you just take NaOH's idea in the Fingerbang thread give it a minor change?

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>>28548666
"Careful cowgirl, you haven't had that many lessons." you poke fun at her. "Don't want you to ruin that pretty face like mine."
>She cups your face and gives you a smile, "Ah but they make you look so distinguished."
"Ha ha. Very funny."
>"Ah'm perfectly serious." Applejack, "But enough about that, c'mon girls let's get a move on."
>"Well look who it is? Sister, isn't this just a coincidence?"
>That voice...
>Turning around, you see Celestia and Luna walking up to you. Both their arms holding shopping bags filled with clothes and other luxury goods.
>"Indeed Tia. Hello."
>"Principal Celestia? Vice Principal Luna? What are you doing here?" Sunset asks.
>That's a stupid question.
>"Oh just going on a little shopping spree thanks to a generous individual." she replies, giving you a subtle wink.
>Applejack tightens her grip on your arm.
>"And is that Princess Twilight?" Luna asks.
>"Hello."
>"It's good to see you again Twilight. How have you been?"
>"I've been doing fine thank you."
>"I hope nothing serious has happened." Celestia says with some growing concern. "Lord knows if we have to deal with another magical threat to the school so soon after the Everfree field trip..."
>Twilight shakes her head, "No, just a day of us girls hanging out."
>"That's good to know. Well Tia and I should be heading home soon. You girls stay safe and we'll see you in school on Monday."
>"Oh and Anon?" Celestia says walking up to you.
"Yes?"
>"I've got a few new outfits I'd *love* to show off to you sometime." she says with half-lidded eyes.
"Sister..." Luna scolds.
>Applejack scowls at the older woman who just smiles, turns and waves goodbye over her shoulder.
>"I don't get it. What's gotten into that woman?" Applejack asks you.
"Nothing, that's what."
>*Ba-dum-tshh*
>You all look over at Pinkie who conjured up a small snare drum and cymbal from nowhere.
>...

>>28548679
A naoh? You mean noah cause i dont know, it like that groundhog day flim

>>28548640
>As a consolation though, Sunset was true to her word; she managed to convince Applejack to buy an additional string tied bikini that even you know she would never normally go for.
>Especially since it would show off most of her "assets" to the point where she might feel she isn't wearing anything at all.
Unf, Sunset best girl.

>>28548700
Okay I have no idea what the hell you are saying right now, come back when you can write a proper sentence.

>>28548693
>*Ba-dum-tshh*
>You all look over at Pinkie who conjured up a small snare drum and cymbal from nowhere.
>...
Pinkie and her excellent taste of pun note drops, on another topic. WHERE THE HELL DID SHE HIDE THAT!?

>>28548741
I meant to say noah? Because i dont go in fingerbang area so i dont know him or it. The idea is groundhog day with the anon

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>>28548693
>Anyway...
>"Dears, we're burning daylight if we want to use my pool before dinner tonight."
>Without another word, Rarity rushes you all out of the mall.
>Shining walks next to you, "Was Celestia hitting on you?"
"Uh huh."
>"So it wasn't my imagination at dinner."
"Nope."
>"Guessing you don't want to talk about it?"
"No."
>"Fair enough."

>Sitting with your feet in the water, you watch as the girls do their own things in the water.
>Pinkie, Sunset and Fluttershy playing with an inflated ball. Applejack and Rainbow Dash seeing who can hold their breath the longest, while Rarity tans herself.
>Must be good to own a private pool this size.
>Applejack swims up to you and rests on the rim of the pool.
>"C'mon Twilight, water's great!" she says wiping her hair out of her eyes.
"I'm good." you say scratching your chin.
"I'm not much of a swimmer anyway." you point out.
>"Shucks you don't have ta swim, just enjoy yerself." she says before splashing you with cold water.
>Climbing out, Applejack sits next to you.
>Speaking of you...
>Where's the Princess?
>"Oh Shining? Could you rub this lotion on my back?"
>There she is. Wearing slightly less provocative swimwear but still enough to turn a few heads.
>Bolder, more confident in what she wants. It's hard to believe you two are the same person.
>It doesn't help a small part of your self-confidence thinks she might be slightly larger than you.
>"Sure I guess." your brother answers, grabbing the bottle of tanning lotion.
>Why does she even need a tan. From what Sunset told you she's just going to be covered in fur again when she goes back.
>You've pretty much given up at this point. You can't really stop her from doing what she's doing.
>All you can do is just glare.

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>>28548776
>On one very demented hand it's kind of funny seeing your own brother starting to realize what's going on and getting flustered.
>But on the other it's really creepy since it's essentially an alternate version of *you* causing it.
>At least your brother is catching on.
>"Ah that's... right there... mmph... human fingers are SOOoooo good!"
"..."
>She's not even being subtle anymore.
>Even Shining Armor is beet red.
>"Hey Twilight! Quit getting off on your brother touching you and get in the water!" Rainbow Dash calls out.
>The Princess shoots up in shock and her head hitting Shining square in the chin.
>He ends up staggering back into the water, as Twilight recoils in pain much to your amusement.
>"H-he was... I was not get-getting off!"
>"Uh huh, after all that moaning? Hard to believe."
>Princess Twilight blushes and buries her face into her hands.
>Shining breaches, paddles over to the rim of the pool and rubs his reddish chin.
"Shining? Are you okay?"
>"Yeah... just a little wet."
>Pinkie snorts and starts giggling.
>"What's so funny Pinkie?" Sunset asks.
>"*snort* Shining isn't the only one who's wet." she answers with the cheekiest smile.
>Sunset facepalms, "Oh dear Celestia..."
>Both you and the other Twilight feel a mutual feeling of wanting to die at this moment.
>"Hey I thought it was funny."
>"It was... kind of funny." Fluttershy squeaks out with a small giggle.
>Ugh...
>The worst part is, you can't help but crack a small smile at Pinkie's joke.
>It wasn't even that funny.
>Applejack wrings out her hair and looks around.
>"Say Twi, you seen Anon?"
"He's by the tree over there." you say pointing towards the south side of the yard. "I think he's meditating."

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>>28548795
>The witcher looks extremely tranquil under the shade of the large eastern redbud Rarity's family planted.
>Pink colored petals fall and float down to the ground as Anon lies motionless.
>It's a picture perfect moment despite the fact that Anonymous is only wearing orange swim trunks and a white t-shirt.
>Suddenly Applejack gets a wicked grin on her face.
>"Hey Twilight, wanna help me with something?"
>Looking back to your brother getting out of the pool and your other self staring at his butt while he does so, you decide why the heck not.
>Might as well try to relax.

>As the girls play in the water, you decided to relax in your own way.
>You were never a big fan of bodies of water.
>Usually any other time you needed to spend time in one there were dead bodies, monsters, parasites, filth, sewage, and various other things that most would only need one reason to avoid.
>But color yourself mildly surprised when you discovered Rarity's backyard had a perfect spot to meditate even with the close proximity of the splashing, playing and incestuous Princess flirting with her dimensional counterpart's brother.
>With your focus solely on the world around you, you enter a state of "being awake inside without being aware of anything except awareness itself."
>Or at least that's what the words your old teacher described it as.
>You think back on that feeling you felt back at the mall.
>A few ideas on who that individual or individuals could be go through your mind.
>It was only for a brief moment, but it's constantly on your mind. You've had a lot of people trying to tail you in the past and the last thing you want is for someone out for your blood to get the drop on you and harm one of the girls in the process.
>Could be one of Iron Will's or Chrysalis's men, leftover from your encounter.

>>28548770
It was done already, here is the dudes pastebin, or at least a part of it anyways.
http://pastebin.com/VsVnfA5s
and the last update he did.
>>28520626

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>>28548810
>Would explain why you couldn't see anyone and also why your medallion didn't react much.
>But there's no real telling if this was just a one-off thing, all you can really do is hope that it was.
>...
>You're drawn out of your thoughts by the sound of crunching grass under wet footsteps.
>Which judging by the weight of the footfalls, and the faint smell of apples mixed with chlorine from the pool that would only leave one person.
"Hello Applejack." you say without opening your eyes.
>"Aw dangit, how didja know?"
"It's hard to sneak up on a witcher. You should know that."
>You also hold up your medallion, still dangling off your neck.
"Also, this started reacting when you walked up as well."
>She lets out a huff.
>"You ever get tired of wearing that thing?"
"Nope."
>"So you gonna come in the water or am I gonna have to drag ya?"
"Not really one for getting wet."
>"Anon can you at least take off that shirt so I can admire that body of yours."
"And here I thought you loved me for more than my body." you snark.
>"Well what was the point of getting this darn thing if y'all ain't gonna get in the water with me." she asks pointing towards her bikini.
>Peeking one eye open she just towers over you, her body and hair dripping water into a small puddle at her feet.
"..."
>The way the wet fabric clings to her body does make the idea more appealing.
>Though your view of her right now with her nipples starting to poke through the striped cloth, her bottom half slightly wedging up in all the right places.
>You have to say your spot right here is pretty good as it is.
>Applejack notices you staring and smirks.
>"C'mon Sugarcube."

>>28548640
>that pic
Which ones would you wreck?

>>28548815
Oh okay, i have saddended more to the core now cause its done but okay.
So if sumset came over anf said show us your tits would you?

Oh yeah why it it just you me and axii, wheres everyone

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>>28548834
"Applejack... The chlorine is probably going to really sting my eyes an-"
>You don't manage to finish your sentence as Twilight cries out your name.
>"Anon I need your help!" she asks.
"Just a sec AJ."
>Sighing, you get up and walk over to Twilight.
"What is it?"
>"Oh nothing." she says.
>You narrow your eyes at her.
>Behind her glasses, you notice her eyes keep shifting between you and something behind your back.
>Why is she...?
>Your medallion suddenly begins to jerk rapidly at the chain.
>With little warning beyond that, you hear the sound of rapid footsteps hitting the ground behind you.
>Grabbing your assailant's arm and running purely through instinct and reflex, you toss them over your head and into the pool with a large splash.
>As the water settles, the adrenaline wears down when sudden realization dawns on you.
>Applejack was behind you...
>Looking around the pool, everyone looks at you with wide eyes.
>Under the water looking straight at you is Applejack, holding her breath with a shocked look on her face.
"Oh fuck..."
>Twilight takes a nervous step back.
>Your girlfriend surfaces and takes a deep breath of fresh air.
"Applejack are you okay? I'm sorry I didn-"
>She waves her hand, "Ah'm fine, ah'm fine. Forgot it ain't the best idea to sneak up on ya."
>"..."
"..."
>"Help me out will ya?" she asks holding out her hand.
"Yeah... just let me-"
>You just barely comprehend what AJ just asked that you don't even realize her intent.
>As you reach out, her hand grabs your wrist and pulls you in with another splash.
>"HAHA! GOTCHA!" she cries out. "HA...ha... why ain't y'all laughing? I'd thought at least Pinkie get a giggle."
>"A-Ap-Applejack..." Twilight stammers out.
>"What?"
>Twilight points at an object floating in the water: The top portion of her bikini.
>"Oh what in tar-!" is all she can say before you pounce on her from under the water.
---

>>28548839
All

>>28548795
kek, good joke

>>28548839
>Which ones would you wreck?
Yes.

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Sorry about the extended wait. I just wasn't happy with the previous drafts. Hopefully it'll be awhile before I stutter that badly again.

>>28548693
>>"I don't get it. What's gotten into that woman?" Applejack asks you.
>"Nothing, that's what."
AYY

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>>28548855
Okay are you using a phone or something, because the grammar is really starting to piss me off looking at it. In any case I have no idea what the hell your saying aside from the where is everyone comment.
>>28548900
It was fine.

>>28548871
Deep water groping Anon is go. I love it!

>>28548912
Im on phone but im all wobbly so sorry abour text grammar
I meant if sunset came up on you and said ill show you my tits, whats first thing you say?

>>28548941
Get in my car, lets go to my place.

>>28548420
New to this thread. What are the best greens?

>>28548958
Axii anon, ongong
YFNAnon is good, on going
These are maine ones
Sci ajon is meh and dead

>>28548980
>>28548958
Sci is a staple but still dead.
Correct on the rest though

>>28548875
>>28548896
YOU ONLY GET ONE YOU GREEDY CUNTS.

>>28548990
Yeah sco is staple but dead cause he shit on carpets or something. Axii has beem around for while amd still a postie

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>>28548871
>>"A-Ap-Applejack..." Twilight stammers out.
>>"What?"
>>Twilight points at an object floating in the water: The top portion of her bikini.
>>"Oh what in tar-!" is all she can say before you pounce on her from under the water.
Oh yes, I like where this is going. Time for lewd and very public fondling.

And incestuous princess Twilight is tickling me, love that.

Love that fresh thread smell.

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>>28549034
Now we need to fuck Applejack in the pool, only real answer isn't it? Hope Rarity has good filters.
>>28549005
BREED THEM ALL!

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bump from 9 before bed.

>>28549005
>YOU ONLY GET ONE YOU GREEDY CUNTS.
No.

Hey, is it okay I stray from the prompt a little? I have what I'm going to write for my story for the most part. Anon will still be alone, and so forth I just don't have Sunset initiating things.

>>28550791
I don't think anyone minds duderino, sometimes people have other characters besides Sunset notice Anon

>>28548420
rip Spergatrons story

>>28551800
Unf

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>>28551800
>implying Timber didn't destroy that cunt with his hardwood
Dumb slut

you are Anonymous suddenly you hear you name drop like some sort of curse "why he sits alone"
-you growl a little under nose
>grabbing a sandwich from your lunch and leave cafeteria
>"i know it that coming here was a bad idea"
>(read in mocking Voice) WHY HE SITS ALONE?, WHY HE DONT BE SAME LIKE US SOCIALIZING AND HAVING FUN AND JACK OFF EACH OTHER EGO, as you made small puppet show from hands
-YOU PUFF WITH ANGER STEAM FROM YOUR NOSE
>jezz can't they stop doing this i just like be alone
>but sadness get you as think that you will come back to empty home again welcomed only by pictures of your family
>"oh jeez,not again" you whisper quietly
>you feel that annoying feel mixed with pain in your chest memories of your mom and dad flash for second
>omg can't i just stop,they are death and NOTHING will bring them back to live
>but sadness doesn't stop moving forward
>you feel water in your eyes
>O SHIT EMERGENCY MENTAL BREAKDOWN
>YOU RUN QUICKLY TO TOILETS, CLOSING YOUR CABIN
>OMG CHILL DEEP BREATH
>YOU PULL OUT CIGARET FROM BACKPACK, AND START SMOKING
>NOW, NOW COUNT TO TEN
>YOU SPOKE TO YOUR SELF TAKING OUT MORE OF CIGARET INTO YOUR LUNGS
>suddenly everything come back to normal, like nothing happened
>you sighed with relief
>but you forget that toilets got smoke detector,and suddenly beep filed silence of toilet, scared you a little
Oh for fuck sake
>you open cabin throwing unfinished cigaret in to the toilet and flushing it down to pipes
>better get out of here before miss sunny D and her moon edgy come to rip me a new one
'beep' 'beep'
>sound still rings in your head
>behind that stupid looking statue of "mule" in front of school
>well no one saw me,better finish that sandwich, and maybe smoke some more
>you to devour your sandwich like frog swallow fly
>you're guy who doesn't like "table manners" you just filling up your stomach
>after big satisfied squall on full volume you decide to skip chemistry and head home.

should i continue? or just give up?

>>28552882
The story is progessing to quickly. Rewrite it and plan how it will go slowly. For example, take the time where Anon begins the breakdown long. Also don't explicitly write how he feels, show it by him shaking, having pains and repressing memories.

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>>28552882
Please do, I don't know if it's on purpose, but I like how you've written it

Continued from: http://pastebin.com/VDqqPVnA

>WHAT THE HELL!?
>NO, calm down
>There’s obviously a ratio—
>Your thoughts are interrupted by the barely covered semen-demon tackling your legs rubbing her face against you
>Bare ass
>Barely covered body rubbing against you
>The overwhelming scent of lavender invading your sense of smell
>Yes hello, is this brain?
>Sorry but the number you have dialed is currently unavailable, please hang up and try again
>You stand there awestruck by the feeling and sight of the barely clothed girl rubbing against you
>At least until you hear purring
>Girls don’t literally purr
>At least you don’t think so
>You look down to the bacon haired girl below and notice something strange
>Well, stranger than finding her rolling around in your clothes naked
>While she looks up to you, you notice that her eyes are off
>Like they’re just solid blue
>Wait, solid blue eyes, purring, and rolling around in your clothes?
>The also no apparent signs of forced entry
>This couldn’t be?
“Jordan?”
>The now pretty much confirmed Sunset Jordan continues to purr as it rubs its head against you
>Wait, since it turned into Sunset does that mean it’s a girl?
>Also why did it turn into Sunset?
>How does it even know what Sunset looks like?!
>Too many questions!
>You need to focus on the important issue at hand here!
>Your eyes drift down to the ample rump wiggling bare beneath you as Jordan continues its rubbing offensive
>No bad!
>You snap your eyes ahead as you ready yourself
“Jordan, if you’re going to keep being Sunset then we need to get you decent.”
>Jordan chirps as it wraps its rather slender arms around your right leg
>Well, Sunset’s rather slender arms

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>>28553466
>No, don’t think too hard on that
>Heh, hard
>NO!
>You start walking only to find Jordan has wrapped its legs around your right leg as well
>Oh, how preci—
>This would normally be adorable as it’s like the little fella is riding your leg, but now it’s horrible
>BECAUSE IT’S LIKE A PANTY-LESS SUNSET IS RIDING YOUR LEG!
>YOU ARE NOT PREPARED FOR THIS!
>Did IT just touch you!?
>No wait that’s just the hoodie
>Instead of tempting fate further by bouncing Jordan on your leg increasing your chances of coming into contact with Jordan/Sunset’s no-no area, you drag your right leg across the room to your closet
>Opening your closet you’re pleased to find several pairs of pants and underwear readily available
>You grab some holding it above Jordan
>You have to stress every word here so Jordan gets the message
“PUT, THESE, ON…”
>And Jordan looks at you like you’re crazy
>You hand it the clothing anyways, hoping it gets the gist of what you want, as it scoots off your leg
>Jordan examines the boxer-briefs curiously before you see it have a eureka moment
“Yes, put them on!”
>Jordan nods and puts them on…
>On its head
>You pinch the bridge of your nose as Jordan peeks at you through a leg hole giving a little chirp
“N-no, not even close…”
>Ok, Jordan is like little babby, yes?
>Show it how to do it!
>You carefully take the undieroos off of its head and pat your chest
“Here, I’ll show you how to do it.”
>You take off your sweatpants, this time MAKING DAMN SURE not to take your underwear off with them
>You then put on the underwear and take them off multiple times making sure Jordan is paying attention
>You then hold them in front of Jordan
“Now you.”

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>>28553476
>Jordan looks to the underwear and then you
>Smiling with recognition Jordan nods with a giddy smile
>Good, looks like it gets i-WOW OK YEA THAT IS NOT COVERING ANYTHING!
>As Jordan stands up you avert your gaze so fast you swear that if you were a lesser man your neck would’ve snapped
>Didn’t see anything!
>Nope, nothing at all!
>Certainly not the hoodie barely hiding the sight of Sunset’s crotch!
>You are SO GLAD you’re bigger than her
>Just thinking about if you were quite a bit shorter and less muscular than you would’ve seen…
>You let out a painfully Tidus-esque laugh involuntarily
“AHAHAHA AHAHAHA!”
>Wow, you haven’t inspected that corner of the room in quite a while!
>Is that dust you see?
>You’re forced to refocus back to Jordan as it pokes you in the stomach with an outstretched hand
>You look back and see Jordan smiling with an eager look of expectancy
>Is Jordan looking for praise?
>Well, it did put the underwear on right
>You sigh before smiling and placing a hand atop its head
“You did well.”
>You caress Jordan/Sunset’s hair as it stands there as if seemingly shocked
>That is until it starts rubbing its face into your caress as it chirps happily
>Damn, even as Sunset that’s adorable
>But while an underweared Jordan/Sunset is nice, it’s still like Sunset standing around in nothing but one of your hoodies
>Time to remedy this!
>You hold the sweatpants you brought out for Jordan in out-stretched hands
“Do the same thing with these!”
>Jordan seems to understand this time and puts the pants on without any difficulty
>Well except for the fact your pants sorta just fall flat right after Jordan pulls them up

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>>28553482
>Jordan futilely tries several more times to bring the pants up only for them to fall once more
>You finally decide to step in when Jordan starts to look a bit disappointed
>Crouching down you bring the pants up and tie the drawstrings tight
>You only now realize how close you are to Jordan/Sunset
>Like, VERY close
>The scent of girl is strong
>Ok, what the hell is wrong with you?
>Keep your head on straight Anon, this IS Jordan!
>You shake away any bad thoughts as you step back and give a little hand flourish
“Viola, your pants will no longer fall!”
>Jordan just flashes you the dopiest smile you can imagine before hugging you
>Aw, it feels so warm
>When was the last time you wer—
>Oh yea, it was by Sunset, and you were crying
>Let’s not think about that, shall we?
>You pat Jordan’s head as it rests its head on your chest
>Managing to finally pry Jordan off, a thought occurs to you
>What if Jordan didn’t KNOW how to eat?
>That sounds completely idiotic, but could be a possibility
>You point to your bed
“Go sit over there while I grab some snacks.”
>Jordan looks to the bed and back to you before nodding vigorously
>You turn around and as you step through the doorway to the living room you hear a *pomf* from behind you
>Now what would be a good snack?
>Oh, wow you’re stupid
>You pick up the slightly beat up backpack off the ground and place it on the counter
>Unpacking it, it seems like the culinary treats Rarity packed are still in one piece
>What the heck are these?
>Look kinda like English muffins
>Or like tiny reverse pancakes
>Are these crumpets?
>Whatever they are, they’re probably delicious!
>You grab one and as you’re about to take a bite you realize how stupid you are

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>>28553490
>You can’t eat this cold and without tea!
>That’d be disrespectful to Rares!
>Well, hopefully she wouldn’t mind you splashing her tea in Gilda’s face
>Whatever
>You place all the crumpets(?) on the toaster oven tray
>Might as well heat them up and toast them a little!
>You set them to toast for a minute or so while you start boiling some water
>Pulling out a few mugs you decide on what flavor of tea to use
>Earl Grey, English breakfast, or French vanilla sound like good options
>Decisions decisions…
>Can’t go wrong with good ole Earl Grey!
>As the ding signaling the crumpets(?) are done toasting, you hear a knock at the door
>Who could that be?
>Not many know where you live
>Well, besides Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Sunset, Luna, and Celestia
>Maybe one of the girls needs you for something?
>Or Luna and Celestia got done with whatever they’re up too?
>Whatever it is, you just hope it’s not trouble
>You undo the deadbolt and chain as you stand in front of the door
>Your hand hovers over the lock for a moment as something in the back of your head yells to just goto sleep instead
>But you’ve got snacks and stuff
>And what if someone ACTUALLY needs you for something?
>You sigh as you unlock and open the door
>And what greets you is…
>The smiling trio known only as the BJ Brigade
>”Hello again, my dear Anon.”
>Of course
>Why don’t they bring Chrissy and Flash along?
>That way you can just see EVERYONE AGAIN!
>You look down to the smirking Adagio as she looks up to you
>Heaving one of the many sighs you’re bound to have you speak as you massage your temples with one hand

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>>28553495
>”Hey there Adagio…”
>Heh, Anon might be less than happy to see you right now, but soon he’ll be singing a differe—
>Wait, what happened to him?
>”Wow Anon, you look like a chewed up piece of dog shit.”
>Anon drags a hand down his face
>”Thanks for that, uh Aria.”
>”Yea, you look like you were bitten by zombies! WAIT, you weren’t bitten by zombies were you!?”
“No Sonata, Anon wasn’t bitten by zombies; you weren’t right?”
>Anon stares you in the eyes for a moment before sighing once more
>”Got into a fight.”
>”Ah, so you got your ass kicked, huh? How did it happen, I thought you were BIG and STRONG.”
>You shoot Aria a glare, hopefully silencing her, to which she just huffs as she crosses her arms
>Anon leans on the door frame while looking unamused
>”It happened when I went up against 6 magic monsters and took them down in less than a minute.”
>You smirk to Aria as you point to Anon
“See, Anon can more tha-wait did you just say 6?”
>”Wooowww, are you like a monster hunter AND a bird summoner Anon?”
>Anon nods slowly
>“Yes, and no.”
>He seems so serious, you doubt he's lying
>Sonata let’s out a sad hum as you and Aria both look at Anon in shock
>You had figured Anon was strong, but to fight 6 people, no magic monsters at once…
>You’re going to enjoy having such a strong boytoy
>”Now, excuse me if I come off as rude, but what the hell do you three want? I’m a bit tired and don’t want to be up right now.”
>Sonata jumps
>”OOH, I know this, we’re here to ensla-GAH!”
>You elbow her sharply in the side with clenched teeth
>”Dagi, that REALLY hurt…”
>Coughing into your hand you try to clean up Sonata’s little mess
“We’re here to ENTICE you to a little proposition of ours…”

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>>28553503
>Oh yea, REAL convincing
“Not interested.”
>As you go to turn around Adagio grabs your hand
>”Now wait, hear us out; we just want to talk.”
>Normally you’d just walk away, but something irks you
>Adagio’s grip is strong, way too strong for her size
>Knew they had some kind of magic altering their physical prowess
>Something tells you that it would be a good idea to wait for a good moment to leave
>Not while she has a hold on you
>You sigh for the literal hundredth-odd time as you turn back and cross your arms
“Ok, what’d the deal?”
>Adagio smiles brightly
>”Trust me, you WON’T be disappointed…”
>Spreading her arms out as if to point to all of them she speaks
>”WE, the three beautiful sirens are going to ask YOU to be our personally boytoy!”
>Uhh
>”Yea, we can hangout all the time and eat tacos and stuff!”
>”I don’t really give two shits what you do, as long as I get me some of that magic dic—”
>Adagio elbows Aria in the gut
>”AHEM, what she MEANS is, all we would ask in return is a little bit of your magic is all.”
>Uh-huh
“Is that all?”
>She holds a finger up
>”Don’t worry, you’ll of course get BENEFITS as our personal boytoy!”
>Trying to keep the disdain out of your voice you ask against your better judgement
“Oh do tell.”
>Adagio adopts a sultry smile as she now leans on the door way dragging her finger down the doorframe
>”Well, not many students talk to us now… It’s very LONELY with just the three of us.”
>She looks away towards the ceiling
>”Why if a man were to be around us so much, they’d probably be the ONLY man we could talk to. They would be the only man we’d interact with EVERY day.”

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>>28553515
>She makes eye contact with you suddenly
>”As the only one we could rely on, why, we would just HAVE to REWARD him wouldn’t we?”
>Oh boy, REWARDS again, huh?
>“Yea, I could let you wear my taco eating sombrero!”
>That you wouldn’t mind seeing
>Aria pinches the bridge of her nose
>”She means that we’d fuc—”
>Adagio doesn’t break eye contact as she kicks Aria in the shin who mutters under her breath while clutching her shin
>”Shit that hurts!”
>Adagio continues with her speech
>”And since we’d be SO appreciative we may even decide to REWARD him WHENEVER he wanted.”
>You get the feeling you’ve heard talk like this before
>“After all, we’re all just starved for the attention of such a handsome man; who knows what sort of REWARDS we would be more than willing to give…”
>You’d be lying if you said you weren’t getting a bit hot under the collar thinking about it
>But you know better than to just throw yourself at someone with magic who tries to put thoughts in your head
>Adagio steps back and flutters her eyelashes
>”So what do you say Anon?”
>Easy
“No.”
>Aria clicks her tongue while cracking her knuckles
>”Told you he wouldn’t do it, just let me knock some sense into him.”
>Adagio holds an arm up while laughing
>”It doesn’t matter if he agrees!”
>She holds both her hands up like she’s giving her energy to Goku
>”He doesn’t know that he’s already fallen, now that he’s under our spe—”
*SLAM*
>You quickly reapply the deadbolt, chain, and lock
>You’re only met with silence for a the briefest of moments before you hear a muffled voice beyond the door break the silence
>”Dagi, I don’t think he’s under our spell…”
>”I can SEE that Sonata, thank you!”

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>>28553524
>You hear a sigh
>”I just don’t know how he could resist my charm AND my magic!”
>”You win some you lose some Adagio, can I try now?”
>”Yes, we’ll try your way now.”
>Pfft good luck, you’re behind 7 sheets of reinforced wood door
>They ain’t getting in here
>You walk over to the kitchen and proceed with your snack making
>As you pour the boiling water into mugs you hear several loud thwacks at the front door
>Pffft, are they actually trying?
>That would take even you a few tries before you could bring that door down
>And that’s only because you know where to hit the door
>You shake your head as you take the now nicely crisp crumpets(?) out of the toaster oven
>Plating them you notice that the thwacking has stopped
>Must’ve finally giv—
>Your thoughts are interrupted by a loud *CRACK* followed by a subsequent *THUD*
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZMg9ryeWOw
>Did they just…
>You look at your door as it lies on the floor
>Aria strolls into your living room brushing some sawdust off her knuckles before smirking at you
>Your head is starting to throb
>”Don’t you know it’s polite to answer when someone knocks?”
>Why is everything getting red?
“Oi…”
>The crumpets are starting to blur
>Sonata and Adagio skip in behind her
>When did your breathing get so heavy?
>”Sorry Anon, but we won’t take no for…”
>They all seem to stop as they stare at you
“You three…”
>Why do you feel so, ANGRY?
>”Dude calm down, it’s just a door.”
>You slam your fist so hard into the counter it cracks
>Just a door, no it’s just YOUR door!
>Sonata and Adagio both step behind Aria before Adagio peeks her head out
>And THEY broke it!
>”We can always replace the door Ano—”
>Looking up from the crumpets your glare focuses on her which causes her to hide behind Aria once more
>”W-what’s wrong with his eyes Dagi?”
.
.
.
TO BE CONTINUED

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>>28553538
Oh shit

Gonna continue my story tomorrow.

>>28553476
HNNGGGGG

>>28548420
SCIANON
C
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A
N
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N

pls

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>>28553538
Well then...Anon is about to break their asses one way or another. Hope they survive to learn a lesson.

>>28553960
based Fapman.

>>28553538

MOOORREE!
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7aBAy9cOdKM

Bump from 9

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>>28553538
is it a rule that every green has to blue ball me at every opportunity?

>>28557330
We have an abnormal amount of faggots against lewd, so yeah. They bitch harder than sarkisian.

>>28557330
I'm so sorry Anon, but I don't forsee lewd any time in the immediate future. I could always do an offshoot like Axii, but i don't think mine wI'll be nearly as good

>>28553960
Hype!

>>28558071
Axii didn't think he could do lewd well either, it may need improvement but he proved the detractors wrong. Even made it a good joke at Sunset's expense. I for one, want to see what you could come up with, even if its just Rarity's aphrodisiac induced wet dreams.

>>28558071
I want Trixie lewd tho.

>>28558159
We can fug Lunamoon later. We need to break the BJ brigade's asses first.

>>28552882
>you start to walk slowly,you like it that way
>you decide first to go to shop to buy some food for dinner
>you buy ready spaghetti in can and some ingredients for chicken to bake also some dog food and some bottle of water
>well that gonna be 45$
>you pay for it and continue your routine to home
>you breathe deeply, as you pass some garden
>smell of roses and lavender filled you with better mood
>that long walk remind you that you should pay someone visit
>slowly walk to some garbage dump enter through your secret pass
>bowl with water and food is empty and happy bark from some sort of makeshift shack welcomed you
well now i got somthing for you
>old dog walk to you slowly limping
>you open your backpack and fill bowls one with water and other one with dog food
>you sit on ground as dog start eat food
>you start talk to Maxpax how was your day, what you gonna do when you finished school and your dreams
>for some reason dog always stop eat when you talk, you wish that Maxpac could speak to you but it would be stupid right...?
>after 1 way conversation you get up and say your goodbyes to dog with scratching behind ears
>sun is orange now and feel of coming autumn is getting stronger
>you like autumn, the smell, many colorful leaves falling down on ground that remind you about your mother fun in stack of leaves that my dad just finished prepare as he join us to have fun
>this time no breakdown like some one put spell on me like you feel mother and father hugging you from behind,and whisper into my ear "we love you"
>small tears flow down from cheek as you start walk, it was not sad tear, nor happy bittersweet tears dropping from cheek on ground like chestnuts in autumn
>you reach for cigaret and smoke as you walk and let the tears fall from your eyes
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z-PdV61Z8Mg

*cough* *cough* http://pastebin.com/8BB4kmgm

>>28558303
>http://pastebin.com/8BB4kmgm
Wait...so the ending with anon having kids with luna was just...what? A dream?

>>28558679
Yeah. It's essentially a dream realm.

>>28558679
Anon is a vegetable kept alive by Luna's magic. In his head, he and Luna have a home, family, all that stuff. In the real world. He' comatose and they're hiding out in a run down shack.

>>28558303
You don't have idea how much I was searching for this green Anon. Thank you so fucking much, you're da real MVP.

>mfw I was searching this since 2015 but I give up thinking that the pastebin was nuked.

>>28558679
Yeah, a good one btw.

If I'm not wrong this >green have a second part but tbqh I'm not sure.

>>28558136
For real, getting Rarity on aphrodisiacs and then doing nothing with that hurts me

>>28559700
It hurt all of us.

>>28558303
here's the second part
http://pastebin.com/GYvTRzWB

>>28559895
Oh my god there's a sequel? When did this happen?

>>28558294
>you reach your home as you get inside it start raining outside
home sweet home
>you said and drop backpack on ground
>pick your groceries and cook spaghetti
>its not big home made for modern family and emptiness of space in home make you depressed sometimes, but you manage to use to it but still silence is unmanageable annoying
>you pick letters and look for something interesting
Bill,Bill,Bill
>head back kitchen and pick up your cooked meal
>and eat fast, as you finish wash dishes and made some sandwiches for tomorrow
>tomato,ham,salad,cheese,and fresh slices of bread
>suddenly you hear knock to door
wow that something new
>you head to door and open them,it was Celestia
>"why did she come here, i don't have time for this bullshit"
"hello miss" you greet her with unpleasant
>"hello anon"
>at least she don't call you nony, that would make you mad as fuck
what do you want?
>she looks at you with that look that you don't like
i am sorry, i am really tired wanna come in?
>yes and i would like speak with you anon
>"o shit" you know that tone of voice it's something serious "fuck"
>you clean table a little from dust, you don't eat in dining room for some weird reason but you trying keep everything "clean"
tea,coffee or cola?
>tea please
>you go to kitchen and open tea you brew one for you and one for Celestia
how many spoons of sugar?
>2 please
>as you give tea and seat in other end of table,you're prepare for worst
>anon you are alone and you don't have any friends in school most of time you isolate from others
and this is bad because...?
>you got good grades and you're nice person, but isolation its not way to live anon and you started smoking i am just worried about you
and what should i do go and find false friend so YOU can piss off or just stick my fist up into someone's ego till he cum with force of horse
>Celestia punches table with fist "fuck why did i say this out loud"

>>28553524
>>”Dagi, I don’t think he’s under our spell…”
>>”I can SEE that Sonata, thank you!”
kek

>>28553538
yeeeessss

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>>28553538
Jordan is the real MVP.

What a cute little bug that I'm still not entirely sure the gender of. I guess I could assume female since it chose Sunset to randomly transform into.

>>28560787
But Changlings can shapeshift into anyone, regardless of gender. We would have to change Jordan's name if its a girl. What would it be?

>>28561329
Jordan.

>>28561362
real creative there Anon, seriously I'm proud of you, 10/10.

>>28561329
>>28561373
Frisbee

>>28561391
We aren't throwing cutest love bug like a toy, try again.

>>28548420
>Thumbnail OP

Embarrassing, to be honest.

>>28561416
Fucking New Guy did it. Problem has been addressed and relevant pics have been provided for next time.

>>28557362
I don't think there are actually all that many, just one or two who are very vocal. To be honest I do get where they are coming from but certainly don't agree with the no lewd what so ever approach they push, just like I don't agree with the couple of anons who are acting like they blow their load at any bit of female attention and who are trying to force lewd at every possible moment.
To me lewd should be used to enhance a story, to bump it up however it shouldn't be forced and should keep the flow of the story.
Using examples from the stories here the dream dinner with Celestia & Luna that Sunset had in Axii's would have been shit if it was canon, unlike the other dreams it was forced and had no real connection to the story like the others did, it was forced and lewd for the sake of lewd. On the other hand if YFN includes a lewd with Rarity it would be spot on, she's spiked herself and she's been lusting after Anon for a while so this would be the perfect point for lewd.
With all this said I'd say that it goes out the window if the writer doesn't want to write lewd or of the sole purpose of the story is lewd; if the writer doesn't want to write or include lewd I'm not going to bitch out and try to force them to do it likewise if a story is written solely for lewd and not the well thought out and developed plot what point is there in making a fuss about it.

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>>28561500
And the best and probably only good argument for the biggest problem in the thread.

>>28561500
Nice dubs, you also make a very compelling argument. I guess I could do a scene cut to rares I was going to MEANWHILE anyways .
I was more on the tran of not doing it because I flet it would interupt the flow of the story. But who the hell am I kidding? Afterall, SOMETHING will be flowing at least ;^)
So I will if I feel I write it well enough, and or get approval from an editing friendo

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>>28561424
>>28561416

I really am sorry about that. I was baked and no one else made the thread. I should have tried harder.

>>28561763
Its isn't your fault, you did it and that is what matters. Save the relevant pics from now on and use those next time.
>>28561729
How in the hell would smut interrupt the story when we have Rarity literally taking an aphrodisiac? Do itttttt!

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>>28561362
This.

>>28561391
But this is also kinda cute in a way.

>>28560716
>listen i don't want to force you to do this but you don't give me much options anonymous
>"wtf she plan to do"
>she take deep breath and small sip of tea
so what you plan to do?
>she smirks at you
>I am gonna put someone in your home
>"no no nope nope never please let this be nightmare, she cant do this to me"
>as she can read in your mind, Celestia answer your question
>yes i can anon she live alone just like you but in well bedsit and she got visit from friends sometimes she surely will take YOUR proposition for one free room to live in
MY PROPOSITION WTF ARE YOU NUTS CELESTIA I WILL NOT...
>she shut you up
>or you do this or you will be suspended for three months out of school for smoking
>"shit this is bad" you don't care about it but more of time that she put in suspended you from school, you don't like this idea at all that work in school all exams and home work you gonna need catch up
isn't this weird that some random student gonna say to guy that dont know and say "hey dude wanna move into my place"
>she correct you
>a girl anon
>now this is worse that you expect guy living with other guy doesn't sound bad for you at least you could play video games and find some interests but girl..."now this sound uncomfortable as fuck"
am i need to call ambulance? are you feeling good? ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY LADY!?
>she smiles at you,you did not notice but you're fire red as fuck on face both with embarrass and anger
>aww that cute anon you shy to girls i mean i could move my self to you home and sleep every night in one bed when you're scared of darkness
>now she tease,you probably more red and look like tomato right now
>oh my,i did not know that you like older women anon
>now this catch you off guard
i...dont i mean i ehh I what?
>i am just playin with you anon, or maybe you would like me to move...
>you crossed fingers intro crucifix and say
Out of this house by the power of christ compels you
>she laughs at you,as you realize what you did it with impulse

>>28562531
Is this a joke, or a serious story?

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>>28562966
well it's my first green,you probably think is shit i will stop if i get negative results i don't really care,i am just bored and i fill my spare time killing my boredom
should i continue or just stop now?

>>28563127
my advice to you would be; proof read your green, and learn to grammar, stop using acronyms and have people just say "what the fuck". keep writing

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>>28560716
>Bill,Bill,Bill
>was expecting Bill Nye the Science Guy for some reason
>it has nothing to do Bill Nye

>>28563238
this
>>28563387
Why?

>>28563127
I would want you to continue as I like it so far; though i would also take >>28563238 advice.
Getting help from someone who has a better grasp of the English language might help you as well. At least until you become more advanced through writing

>>28562531
>oh anon you and your weirdness hahaha
what i can say,i just don't like any of this idea Celestia can you just give up on this?
>no anon she will move to you tomorrow, let me do the talking i only need your presence
>you growl under nose with annoyance
at less can i know her name?
>you know that Celestia will not give up you really don't wanna be suspended for so long
>it will be surprise
>she wink at you weirdly
Oh c'mon
>you facepalm table with your head almost spilling rest of your tea that left in you cup
>well it was nice that she at least come to you privately to tell you this in 4 eyes not in her office you hate smell of it oranges give you a headache and her office Always smells like that
>well anon see you tomorrow
>she heads to exit door, leaving you confused,annoyed and embarrassed
good night
>you mumble under nose but loud enough so she can hear it
>sweet dreams anon, oh and prepare room for her if you could
>oh you now will have nightmare for sure
>again you are alone in your 4 walls of silence but not for long 15 hours to judgment day
>"oh for fuck sake now not only i need to clean room for "invader" but also i need to do my home work" you get up and put empty cups of tea in sink
>"well at least it's not much homework from school today let's see,math and history"
>at least 2 hours to do all homework, math was hard but you manage to do it and history was easy "wow genealogy tree of greek gods is fuck up"
>you put homework in to backpack
>you head up stairs there are 3 bedrooms and one toilet with shower you know that no way you gonna let she sleep in parents room you sleep there,your old room is free but not cleanest and last room is small and you put a loot of boxes in there no fucking way you gonna move them today
>you look at your old room "ahh ok just let do this quick"

>>28563387
kek
Me too.

>>28564238
Capitalize the start of every sentence, and don't forget to add commas where they are needed, you also keep forgetting to capitalize the names of people.

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>>28548871
>What is Anon doing?
>You didn't expect him to be such a... a ruffian!
>Especially after Applejack had such an awful wardrobe malfunction.
>If that happened to you, why, you might just die of embarrassment.
>Doesn't he know how dangerous roughhousing in the pool is? Daddy expressly forbade any acts like that.
>...
>Well he also forbade bringing boys over without telling him, but Twilight's brother is a police officer so it should be fine.
>He's just keeping an eye out for his sister after all.
>Not that he isn't... something to look at...
>Unf.
>Dean Cadance sure is a lucky woman to snag a man like that.
>Wait...NO!
>Back to the present Rarity!
>Getting up from your chair you go over to scold Anon when suddenly the two surface up from the water.
>This time though, with Anon's shirt wrapped around Applejack's chest like a makeshift top.
>Don't tell me he took off his shirt and did all that under the water?
>"Thanks Anon." she says giving him a peck on the cheek.
>"Sure." he replies, swimming his way towards the rim of the pool.
>Getting out, your jaw drops.
>O-oh my...
>He's... his... you never really noticed how muscular he is without his shirt on...
>Rainbow let's out a whistle, "Yeah Anon, take it off!"
>This is probably one of the few occasions where you and Rainbow agree whole-heartedly.
>Usually anytime he went without a shirt he was covered head to toe in bandages and gauze. You can't really recall a time when that wasn't the case.
>And you like what you see.
>Rolling his shoulder, Anon notices you.
>"Something wrong Rarity?"
>Now you have a clear unobstructed view of his body. Not too built but not scrawny either.
>Those scars... some of them look quite terrible but... it might be just you, but they seem to add instead of detract from his appearance.

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>>28565286
>"Rarity?"
"Y-yes?!"
>"Is something wrong?"
>You wave your arms frantically, "No darling, I just wanted to see if uh... if you needed a towel or another shirt?"
>Pleasedon'tsayshirt.Pleasedon'tsayshirt.Pleasedon'tsayshirt.
>He raises a brow but shakes his head, "Not a shirt, but a towel would be nice."
>Slowly you nod your head, not taking your eyes off of Anon's glistening torso.
>Reaching for a towel on one of the sun chairs, you grab air a few times before finally grasping the cloth in your hand.
"H-here you g-go..."
>"Thanks Rare."
>You bite your lower lip.
>Maybe Anon could rub some lotion on you this time...
>"Hey Anon, you alright?" Applejack asks walking up to him.
"Like I said, not much of a swimmer." he replies wiping his face off.
>"Ah'm sorry Anon."
>He dismisses her apology, "It's okay."
>"Nah, it ain't. Though ah think karma bit me in the butt fer it." she says holding up her bikini top by a strap.
>"Rarity could I use yer bathroom?" Anon asks.
"Of course dear. Would you like me to sh-"
>"I'll do it Rarity." Applejack answers for you, "I need to put my top back on anyway and I'd rather do it in private."
>You nod.
>As the couple walks off you can't help but narrow your eyes at the smile she has just before she turns all the way around.
>She's planning something...

>"Anon, you opportunistic varmint." Applejack whispers as you two enter Rarity's house.
"What?"
>"Don't think I didn't feel a squeeze while we were under the water."
"My grip slipped while I was putting on the shirt."
>She rolls her eyes. Your lie not at all convincing to one who naturally can see through lies.
>"Uh huh."
>Suddenly you feel a sudden pinch on your bottom.
"Ow!"
>"So here's the bathroom." Applejack says, not at all acting like she did anything.
>Rubbing the sore spot, you make a step towards the bathroom when suddenly Applejack drags you away to another part of the house.
"Applejack?"
>The cowgirl opens another door and pushes you inside.

AXII

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>>28565297
>Shutting the door behind you, she dives in and kisses you deeply. Her tongue forcing its way into your mouth.
>Leaning back for air, she smiles at you with that sultry gaze of hers.
>Looking around the room, you see bolts of fabric, spools of thread, dress designs and prototypes scattered around the room.
>It almost looks like a... design studio?
>Is this Rarity's studio?
>"Hush now sugarcube. It's not lying if no one asks the questions."
>You feel a hand cup your crotch.
>"Just let it happen."
>You once heard of a tale of another witcher doing something like this before; having sex in someone else's private study.
>A stuffed pegasi may or may not have been involved, details are really hazy.
>Or was it a unicorn?
"This is your kink now isn't it?" you reply with a smirk.
>She takes your wet shirt off and reveals her breasts to the open world once more.
>"We got around ten minutes before people notice we're gone, let's make it quick."
"Right."
>Locking the door behind you, Applejack turns on the fan in the room to create some white noise to any passerby.

>Where are Applejack and Anon? They've been gone for awhile.
>Is there a problem with the bathroom?
>Oh you told Daddy that the toilet wasn't working properly.
>Walking into your house you head to the guest bathroom and prepare to knock on the door.
>But before your knuckles make contact, you notice that the doors cracked open.
>...
>Pushing the door open a little wider, there's no sign that anyone was inside.
>The seat is still down, so no one seems to have used the bathroom at all.
>But where could they have gone?
>They couldn't have gotten lost, Applejack has been here plenty of times before.

>>28565286
Cat calling Rainbow is a funny.

>>28565323
Oh please give Rarity something, her thirst needs to be quenched.

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>>28565323
>Looking at the floor, you notice some still wet footprints leading away from the doorway and deeper into your home.
>Following them, they seem to trail off right outside... your personal workspace?
>As you move a hand towards the door, you hear something coming from inside.
>Placing your ear to the door the first thing you hear is the fan on.
>But... it also sounds like... moaning?
>"Ahh... ahh... ahh... AHH!..."
>That sounds like Applejack!
>NO! They seriously can't be doing it in your own private sanctum?!
>How... how... Uncouth!
>Why... why you have a right mind to tell those two off right now!
>Reaching for the handle you pause.
>"AnooOON! Ahh...!"
>You begin to recall the time you became an accidental voyeur on their first date night.
>That mixed with the visual sight of Anon's body dripping with water...
>The sight and sounds cause a tingling sensation "down there".
>Oh no Rarity stop it!
>What if someone walks into you?
>...
>The thought of getting caught...
>A stray hand makes contact with your special place, sending a shiver up your spine.
>You could just blame the mess on just coming out of the pool right?
>In just an instant you find your hand inside your swimsuit while you sit against the wall listening to two of your friends violating your personal space.
>...
>Rarity, you have a problem.
>But... you're starting to enjoy this particular problem...

>"What took you guys so long?" Rainbow asks.
"Got lost." you reply.
>"Uh huh. Sure." she says turning back and spiking a ball to Pinkie Pie in the water.
>The party girl bounces it on her head and begins to balance it.
>"Well c'mon you two. We still have plenty of time before we need to leave. Let's party!"
>Stepping into the water, you and AJ wonder what the pink girl is planning when she starts lining you all up around the pool.
>"Anon's up first."
"First for wh-"
>In a blur, you lose your sight as a blindfold is wrapped around your eyes.
>"MARCO POLO!"
>What...

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>>28565376
"Can I opt out?"
>"NOPE!" she says with a chesire smile.
>You hear the girls giggle as Pinkie Pie spins you around.
>Even Shining Armor laughs at your misery.
>Well, you could take at least one day to unwind and make them all happy you decide to partake without being too much of your normal self.
"Marco."
>"Polo!" a chorus of voices repeats after you.
>The sounds of them paddling in the water and the direction of the waves quickly allow you to hone in on a target.
"Marco."
>"Polo!"
>There's one on your right.
>Turning ninty degrees, you hear someone curse under a hushed voice.
>Got one.
>Reaching out, you grab onto someone's shoulder.
>"Darnit." Rainbow curses.
>One down, five to go.
>...
>Five minutes later...
"Marco."
>"Um... Polo..."
>Curse that Fluttershy and having such a soft voice.
>She's so slow in the water you can't actually pinpoint where she's coming from.
>"C'mon Fluttershy!" the girl's cheer.
>You're starting to get agitated.
"Marco."
>"... Polo." she says in another whisper like tone.
>That has to be cheating...
>"C'mon Anon thirty seconds!"
>She didn't leave the pool. So where is she?
>Despite everything, you time out before you could locate her.
>"Fluttershy wins!"
>"I... I won? Oh my gosh!" she says surprised. "Oh... um... sorry Anon..."
>Taking off the blindfold, you see she was literally right next to you the entire time.
>But...
>But how?
>You cross your arms.
>This was a stupid game anyways.

"So is everyone ready to go?" you ask checking your phone, "Vinyl just texted me the location of the restaurant."
>Checking that you have all your belongings, you place the swim trunks and bikini you and AJ had in one of the shopping bags and place it into the truck.
>"I think everyone is." Applejack responds, "Wait, where's Rarity?"
"Has anyone seen Rarity?"
>"Not since you came back from the bathroom." Fluttershy answers.
>You and AJ share a knowing glance.

>>28565376
voyeur Rarity is pretty sexy, does Anon notice her sent over the fresh Apple cream pie?

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>>28565386
>Sunset folds her arms, "Well we need to leave soon, it's almost six and we still need to drop Twilight off at the portal."
>"Look there she is!"
>Rarity comes out of the house wearing a casual dress with her hair done.
>"Oh I apologize everyone. I just had to choose the right outfit for tonight."
>Rainbow and Applejack shake their heads.
>"Well c'mon, times wasting." Applejack says hopping into the driver's seat.
>Sunset gets inside the back seat on the driver's side while you hold open the door for Rarity.
>"Thank you Anon."
>You dip your head slightly.
>But before you shut the door, she holds it with the palm of her hand.
>"Oh and Anon?"
"Yes?"
>"I know what you did." she cryptically whispers to you. "Inside my work room."
>Your eyes widen as you two lock gazes.
>"I expect appropriate compensation for your debauchery. But don't worry dear, I'll let you know when you can repay me."
>She nonchalantly sits in her seat and closes the door.
>Fuck...
>Taking your seat in the passenger seat, you look at Rarity in the overhead vanity mirror.
>Rarity just stares back at the back of your head until her sightline shifts to you.
>Her eyes stay half-lidded as she gives you a smile with disturbing implications.
>Not many things can scare a witcher, but Hell hath no fury like a woman's scorn.
>And Rarity looks like she has the potential for a lot of scorn...
>"Non?"
"Huh?"
>"Seatbelt hun."
"Oh. Sorry."
>"You alright sugarcube?"
>You make a quick side glance in the mirror and Rarity just purses her lips.
"Everything's fine Applejack."
>Sunset looks between you and Rarity with a raised brow.
>A slight gesture with your hand tells her not to ask questions.
>"Alright everyone, next stop? CHS!"

>>28565386
Huh, Fluttershy is op at Marco Polo, makes sense in a weird way.

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>>28565416
>Standing in front of the statue base outside the High School, everyone gathers in a semi-circle around Princess Twilight.
>A cool breeze of air blows by as the girls are chatting happily one last time.
>"We're going to miss you Twilight!" Pinkie says, "Next time you HAVE to let me throw a party for you."
>"Sure thing Pinkie Pie." Twilight replies with a hug. "I'll try to give a little more notice next time."
>"Aw thanks Twilight."
>"I'll also try to bring Spike too, maybe even Starlight as well."
>"That sounds great." Sunset says with an apprehensive smile. "Can't wait to meet her."
>You let out a short chuckle that earns a glare from her.
>"Are you sure you don't want to come to dinner with us?"
>"As much as I'd love to, I need to get back."
>Princess Twilight steps towards her counterpart.
>The Twilight with glasses, folds her arms and doesn't bother to make eye contact.
>"So..."
"So." glasses Twilight repeats.
>"I should just say it. I'm sorry I made this so uncomfortable for you, my behavior wasn't really the best."
>Twilight just stays silent.
>The Princess holds her hand out, "Before I go, I'd like for us to be friends. Or at least try?"
>Human Twilight keeps her arms folded and just stares at her counterpart's outstretched hand.
>Switching between her hand and head, she sighs.
>"You need to stop harassing MY brother next time." she says adamantly.
>Princess Twilight recoils slightly before getting back her resolve and nodding.
>"That's... fair."
>"Then maybe next visit we can do something we both can enjoy."
>"Sounds like a plan."
>The Equestrian Princess pulls her other self into a deep hug much to the other's surprise before finally moving onto Shining Armor.
>"Sorry about earlier."

>>28565416
unf.

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>>28565425
>"It's fine. Not the weirdest thing to ever happen to me."
>Twilight lets out a sigh of relief, "Oh well that's go-"
>"Though it's probably top ten."
>"Oh..."
>"But next time, we'll have to bring Mom, Dad and Cadance."
>"Even after all that you'd still want to see me again?"
>Shining laughs, "Sure, you're still my sister after all."
>"I wouldn't go that far." mumbles this world's Twilight.
>Opening his arms for a hug, the two embrace one final time.
>"Stay safe Twily." Shining says.
>Twilight smiles.
>Looking to you, Princess Twilight waves you over.
>Walking up to her, she bows her head slightly.
>"Keep up the good work yeah? I've never seen Sunset doing so well."
"No promises."
>"Ha. Ha." she says pushing your shoulder, "Maybe I'll throw in a bonus next payday."
>"Pleasant journey to you Princess."
>Stepping towards the portal, Twilight gives everyone one last look.
>Smiling steps through the wall and disappears in a flash.
>With that settled, you take a look at your watch.
"Time to go everyone."
>"Well, I better get going for my own dinner plans." Shining says. "Can't say I'm looking forward to it though, Cadance wants to try experimenting with kale again."
>He lets out a shiver.
>"Alright Shiny. Tell Cadance I said hi."
>"Will do."
>Waving goodbye, Shining Armor takes his own leave.
"So are we done saying goodbye to each other?" you ask. "I'm kind of hungry."
>Rarity loops her arm into your and directs you towards the car.
>"Is little Nonny getting cranky?" she teases.
"Don't do that." you say trying to avoid eye contact.
>"Rarity quit teasin' Anon." Applejack requests.
>"Oh just a little." she says with the most mischievous smile.
>Still, you try not to make eye contact.
>"Anon you still got the address?"
"Yes, I'll give you directions."
>Loading back up into the truck, the vehicle moves forward and heads downtown.
---

That's all for now.

>>28565487
GO RARA GO! Great update man.

>>28565487
rarity is playing with fire

shes going to find herself with applejacks fist lodged in her face

>>28564238
>You open door slowly with small fear that something is behind it, you turn flash and you fear was confirmed,DUST,DUST EVERYWHERE
>You saw mess, a lot of dust on shelf,dusted picture frames that you forget that even existed
>First bed,replacing dirty bedding for a new fresh one
>You open window with difficulties, but you manage to do it
>Old desk filled with standing pictures dusted that no image is visible catches your eye
>"What even are the pictures"it was long ass time when you visit your old bedroom it was 4 or 3 years ago, you don't remember these pictures most of the time you just avoid enter there for some reason
>You pick them up and place in prepared box not cleaning them just put them with dust, hiding secrets of the images under dust bother you least
>"Its not like i need more pictures in my new room"you put more stuff in boxes most of them are private or just some old toys
>You pick up box with this dusted picture and some wallpapers in it and head to your room and place box in corner of room
>Back to cleaning you open old closet "O MY GOD LOOK AT THIS" it was nothing just "some" clothes hangers:^)
>You swept sweat from your forehead as you throw last of trash bag to trash can
>Your old room was clean and look better for second was looking like you just moved into this home and slept first time on uncomfortable mattress
>'Flash back' of you and your dad slowly carry boxes filled with some stuff to home, as you trying help carry some of box to new home but most of boxes was to heavy,taste of home made soup that mom cook when we moved all boxes into home
>You shake your head and look at clock 10pm
>"That should do" you look satisfied with your job
>You hit the shower,brush your teeth
>Turn off lights in home and you go to sleep with hope that Celestia will change her mind but why you gonna lie to your self, she will not change her mind

>>28565861
Or her ass.

>>28565386
2OP4me
Damn you Flutterwaifu

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i wonder what happened to scianon that he stop posting green

>>28566544
two words

dog carpet

>>28566544
Dog

>>28566544
Probably killed himself, he seemed pretty depressed.

He was always apologising for not posting as much as other people were, and he drew this dumb picture that nobody liked and got really upset about it.

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I have just read Sunset's dream sequention from the second pastebin of Axii's story: 3653-3681

...

Oh, my, god.

>>28568925
Yeah...remind me what that specifically was.

>>28568871

>>28565922
>Closing your eyes and wishing that tomorrow will never come slowly you drift intro dream land
>For some time it was only darkness, you flow through like on some sort of boat carrying you somewhere deeper and deeper into unknown
>This time you don't had any dream,well only small images flow through your mind as you trying remind yourself what was in your dream
>You were lying in bed for some time,you not quite awake but you not in dream land, your brain slowly start working you look at clock 5am
>You are early bird, as you slowly head to toilet and brush your teeth
>Your head down to kitchen in pajama to brew some coffee
>Filling up coffee express with water and turning on as you watch black liquid filling slowly you mug
>There was only one thing you like in morning, coffee without sugar and no milk
>"Well today is judgment day" you think, sipping slowly still hot coffee
>You grab one of sandwich from fridge that you make before sleep, you eat the same way as usual, faster as you can
>Full you drink rest of coffee, you head to your room to change clothes
>Jeans pants,shirt with printed tie on it and grey Hooded sweatshirt with zipper in the middle
>You look at time 6:35 am
>You had 2 hours to go as you remember that way to school takes you one hour and
thirty minutes, you decide to leave home early this morning,you don't want to be late again on lessons
>Grabbing lunch box with sandwiches and putting it to backpack you leave home
>As you walk,you hear someone behind you
>Anon wait
>you turn around to see derpy run to you direction,"now i remember why i rather getting late to school"
>You trying to avoid Derpy as much as you can every morning
>Good morning anon
>She greeting you, as she catches up to you
>You trying ignoring Derpy
>Hello is anybody there
>You say with annoyance
Good morning derpy
>are you ok? you look worried
>She ask "for fuck sake can't she just shut up and go away from me"
Ohh everything's is just fine
>You say sarcastically

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>>28561416

page 9

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>>28569939
>You speed up
>Anon what is going on?
Just leave me alone Derpy
>You almost yell at her
>She look at you confused,this is bad you lose your cold blood and start boiled up inside slowly for no reason
>Anon what the matter why you angry so sudden
>You reach for cigaret with your shaking hand
>What are you doing anon
>One more stupid question...
I AM SMOKING, YOU RETARD
>You answer with hatred to Derp, you hitting critical mass of hate
>She stare at now you with tears in eyes and confusion
WHAT YOU GONNA CRY NOW, GO AHEAD AT LEAST MAYBE YOU STOP ASKING STUPID QUESTIONS
>You hate her, but why? what she did to you she only follow to school you and ask how you feel
>Answer was easy for broken mind of your, she existed she bothers you every morning with these uncomfortable questions
>"Anon stop" tears falling on ground from her face
>you turn around and say
OH BO HO HO, AND WHAT YOU GONNA...
>She hug you now, what is going on...
>ANON STOP WITH THIS MASQUERADE
>You push her away and say
FUCK OFF
>She get up from ground trying to hug you again
>This time you avoid her attempt of hugging you
JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!
>You yell with full force.
>Anon please just stop with this, why you're so mad at me,did you forget what promise to you anon
YES, AND I DON'T CARE, I DON'T WANT ANY SYMPATHY FROM YOU OR FROM ANY ONE JUST FUCK OFF!
>She fell on knee, defeated and say
>As you wish anon
>She get up, and start to run in direction of school leaving you with cigaret in mouth
>You start walking,"I do not care about she and what she feels
>"What was that stupid promise again" trying to dig in memory

>>28569939
>>28570921
You are forgetting parentheses to show whom is talking.

>>28570921
You need to check your grammar, Anon sounds like a preschooler.

>"Hey girls why do you wonder why Anon is alone?"
>What a ridiculous question.
>Why else would you be alone?
>Because you decieded it would be easier to sperate yourself.
>It would be, despite how pathetic and shortlived it would be.
>You're surrounded in a school full of attractive girls and strong Chads that wouldnt question you're existence
> However it all really became strange
>when that party girl Pinkie Pie began to question your existence.
>You began to hate her for questioning this.
>But then began envying her for having the courage to do this.
This is one of my very recent greentext, among one other, feel free with the criticism.

>>28572750
Got any more to it?

>>28572760
I may, however this is one of my first's, therefore i suppose I'm very anxious/clueless about it.

>>28572948
I wouldn't say its a green though, its more of a add on to the original prompt, write out some more, then we will see.

>>28572973
That's true, If I'm to begin a prompt that's where I'd begin it, If I gain the courage too I'll continue it and see where that leads us.

>>28573064
Okay then

>>28572750
>Look at her.
>Her pink silky hair
>Her curvacous body
>Her smooth skin
>How can anyone not envy her?
>Yet people call her "weird" or a "joke"
>These adjectives are the real joke
>How can someone really be a joke if their accepted by the majority?
>It's like being thatt ((Comedian)))James Corden
>Anyway.
>Pinkie Pie has invited you to this party.
>Which has resulted in you lokng at her with the >constanza face
>You're a faggot but you understand realism.
>You're a faggot but you and she knows shea pretty/sexy girl
>Why would she be interested in an average guy such as yourself?
>You deal with...
Your decision what Anon's choice of profession is.

>>28573178
>Your decision
DROPPED

HES A FUCKING HITMAN

>>28573198
If you'd like mate.

If he's Agent 47 so be it.

However I will wait on the consensus.

>>28573221
I'll second this>>28573198
we got witcher and jojo, why not throw someone less likeable on the list.

>>28573221
Anon as a teenager who by day seems to be a normal if reclusive and beta teenager, and by night is a bad ass assassin? Where the fuck do I sign up?

>>28573257
>>28573271
>Be Anon
>Just another day on the job
>Be hired to assasssinate some noble's daughter
>Diamond Tiara
>Even the name oozes aristorcray
>Still you've got a job to do.
>The manor is well defended.
>Patrols around the manoure
>Armed sentry turrets around the fcriticla centry points
>However being a trained assassiN IS aimed to avoid these points.
>Like a normal peasant or an overbearing noble
>All are options that are well granted those under the guidance of those they call they call the Outsider.

TBF I am ripping off a character, If anyone has any better suggestions please advise

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>>28573271
Why not take it a step further? Pic related.

>>28573493
Fuck did I love the original Prototype.

Mercer was my nigga.

>>28573457
I kinda liked DT, but continue.
I have no idea what you are ripping off, just the random capitalized letters being an eyesore.

>>28573504
He got kind of bland second game, and Heller was so boring. The powers were cool though, I just wish I could still do combos with bare fist mode, instead of punching with a hard punch at the end, or a strong kick.

>>28570921
>You feel bad now "that was really immature of me"
>You look up to the sky like you wanted to be struck by lighting in this very moment
>"Maybe i should apologize,but not now"
>You have other problems in head now
>You enter to school and look around "everything look normal, as usual"
>Some of students just arrived and some chit-chat about god knows what
>You head to your locker and pick some books that you need for today
>In your way you to class been interrupted by Flash sentry and he say
>Here comes dat weirdo
>Ignoring him, you pass him unfortunately you push his shoulder with your shoulder
>Suddenly you hear "DUCK ANON"
>You duck,as Flash Sentry fist passing you in inches
>You almost fell over,you turn around and face him
>You are mad now, all muscles twitch,your face make ugly grin of mad man
>You are prepared for his move you know how to fight
>this time he tries to kick you in stomach
>Dodge,you swing right hand with all you got to hit his face, he dont duck in time, as your fist meet his nose, he is wide open no guard nothing, he cover his face with his hands with pain,your left hand goes automatycly in to his midriff,he now lay on floor unable to catch breath
>You release steam from nose, and wait till he get up,but that was all, you did not notice, but a lot of students watch whole thing
>You put hood on head,as you walk through crowd of spectators,walk into your classroom
>You can hear students asking flash "are you ok"
>you expect Flash put more of fight,that was just pathetic
>You in classroom,suddenly you can hear from speakers
>"Anonymous to the vice-principal office NOW"
>Professor Discord look at you with look in his eyes "what did you do"
>you glance back at him with look"god can't help me now"
>He smirks at you, and tell class to open textbook on page 25 and read to page 27 till he come with me
>You like Discord,he saved your ass not once
>As he closed door behind him, he ask
>Ok, what the case anon?
>You answer willingly

>>28574100
Okay, triple check your spelling and grammar.

>>28574268
i wish i had some one who can help me with spelling and grammar or send to someone to correct my shit,anyway don't send original look much much worse than this trust me, it takes my 3 hours to write it and 2 to 3 hours make it somehow bearable(wich is probably not)
should i continue? or just give up?

>>28574644
Why don't you try to post at the writefags guild first with everything that you got so far and ask them to spell check it, you have a good idea here and the possibility to get it across well, if you can find one there to help with the grammar and spelling mistakes then you can repost it here. But don't stop otherwise. Someone can get into specifics here if you point out some areas where you think you messed up then we can confirm and expand on that.

>>28573198
WE A47 NOW

9bump

I know I've talk with a few other Anons about it in here so I suspect you already know but in case you didn't it has begun.
>>28548016

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>>28574100
>you release steam from nose

Starting Axii's 3rd pastebin and writing my own thing.

Love you, fags.

>>28577322
I haven't actually gone through his pastebin, I just watch the updates sense the beginning. Has it already been 3 now?

>>28574696
This. Seriously m8. Let these guys help you

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>>28577467
4th on the way. Like 1000 into the 4th one and 4k into the 3rd one.

But it's worth it. kek/wat story telling.

And I'll read YFNAnon's story next... Feels good...

Tbh, the more in the better it gets. I feel just not satisfied enough with the big boss aka misterious man. I get that he would be not defeatable for our heroes, but holy fuck, that would be some secret agency level shit.

>>28574696
>mfw I'm in the guild too
I see this kind of encouragement so rarely it makes me happy to see one.

>>28574644
Hi, my fellow non-english spoeaker anon. The writefag guild is open for everyone, you including >>28479439

However, if your only problem is grammar, then you need a more personal touch of a private editor.

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>>28577910

>>28570921
STOP.
WRITING.
PLEASE.

>this is 110% fucking autism

>>28579106
Come on anon, at least he's trying. Even if he has a poor grasp on english amd grammar

>>28579666
Cant argue with satan

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>>28579666
Satan isn't a dick, good job man.

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>>28579666
ok satan,i am working at next part right now and here my pastebin
http://pastebin.com/9UfNxjVj

>>28579882
If i had the time, i would go through your green and help you with it.

>>28573457
>Outsider
CORVO, MAH NIGGA!
Either that or I just royally fucked up.

>>28580505
I didn't even get that vibe, but a magic Blink assassin Anon would be pretty cool. Would he have the awesome mask?

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i trying to convince one of my steam friend to help me with it and it gonna probably cost me some killing floor 2 items so it gonna take longer time to post new part if i don't convince him to help i will post as always,i think(i can feel spaghetti falling from my pockets right now)

>>28580653
It is very spicy spaghetti.

>>28580525
Yeah, I had a feeling I fucked up. Still, we share feelings, fellow anon. And I hope he'd have a bad-ass mask as well. I mean, he'd have to have one if he were still going to a highschool where anyone can identify you. Or just a good ol' bandit mask or something.

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>>28565487
>You and you entourage of seven magically enabled teenagers walk up to the front of the small little restaurant.
>Huh, looks like they have an oriental theme going on in this place.
>Not really your usual thing, but hey it's nice to try something different once in awhile.
>You wouldn't tell Applejack straight to her face, but apples get old after a while.
>Entering the restaurant, you walk up to the little podium where a woman dressed in a thin black dress and her hair in a bun stands behind.
>The intricate gold dragon wrapping around one side of the dress grabs Rarity's attention almost immediately.
>"Can I help you?" she asks, not looking up from her work.
"We're meeting two people here."
>"Party's name?"
>"Vinyl Scratch." Rarity answers.
>Opening her ledger, the woman peeks through the most recent calendar day.
>"Ah yes, I'll take you to them."
>Her stoic expression during that entire exchange never changed.
>This is who they have to greet people? This place doesn't exactly scream high class to warrant the attitude.
>Following the woman, she pushes past a small curtain and leads you deeper inside the building.
>Stepping through after, the entire room becomes a bit more open and a little more grandiose despite the walls being slightly worn and a few of the floor tiles having large cracks in them.
>There are a few fish tanks lining the walls with exotic looking specimens, gold lined crimson drapes and each table is lit by an overhead paper lantern.
>The only exception is the large circular table in the center of the room where two familiar individuals are chatting.
>"Hiya Vinny! Hiya Octy!" Pinkie Pie shouts.
>The ambient noises in the place immediately stops as other patrons in the restaurant stare at your group.
>"Please no shouting." the hostess says to Pinkie without even facing her.
>Vinyl leans back in her chair and waves you all over.

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>>28581057
>"Sup."
>"Hello." Octavia greets.
>"Um... thank you for inviting us." Fluttershy says taking her seat.
>Taking out Applejack's seat, she thanks you and sits down.
>Rarity on the other hand chooses the chair on your other side and pretends to be checking her makeup.
>...
"Here Rarity."
>"Why thank you Anonymous. You're such a gentleman."
>Applejack doesn't seem to mind too much though.
>"Well now that you're all here, order whatever you guys want. It's on me." Vinyl says. "And yes Pinkie, you can even order the entire dessert menu."
>"Sweet." says Rainbow who begins listing all the things along with Pinkie that they want to eat.
>"Shucks Vinyl, we don't want to make you feel like you're obligated to pay."
>"She's right." Twilight says, "The last thing we want is to eat too much and have you pay an enormous bill."
>Vinyl waves you all off, "Don't worry about it, I make enough cash that this'll be a drop in the bucket."
>"Vinyl's been very good with her money." Octavia points out, "She has stocks in most pharmaceutical businesses and a plethora of patents that she licenses out to them."
>"Eh, I came up with a lot of tools and machines both purposefully and not trying to find a cure. May as well make a profit of them."
>Picking up a menu, she opens it, "So like I said order whatever you want."
>"I would recommend the ginger scallion lobster, though that's just me." Vinyl says, "Could we get some waters around here?"
>"Yes Miss Scratch." the hostess answers with a slight bow of her head.
>The DJ laughs and leans over to the table, "I know the owner. So if you want a custom order or something just ask."
"How?" you ask.
>"Just a friend I made a little while back. Saved him from some people he owed money too."
>That sounds slightly suspicious but it would be rude to pry any further.
>"They got orange chicken?" Applejack asks.

>>28581057
Based Axii.

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>>28581066
>"Applejack darling, we have the option to explore our pallets without worrying about price and you simply want "orange chicken"?"
>"Hey! I like orange chicken." she retorts.
>They both glare at each other with you in between.
>"I'm gonna get that too!" Rainbow says still looking through her menu. "And whatever that Chòu dòufu is."
>"Barbarians..." Rarity mutters.
>"Here are your waters." the hostess says carrying a large tray.
>Walking around the table she places a glass of water in front of everyone.
>Once she leaves again, you decide to talk about the elephant in the room.
"How's Octavia?"
>"Anonymous!" Rarity scolds. "Must you be so blunt."
>Octavia embarrassingly focuses on her chopsticks.
>"She showing canine signs." Vinyl answers, "Enlarged fangs, heightened sense of hearing and smell. Fur growing in... certain places."
>Vinyl elbows Octavia in the ribs and wags her brow, "Certain sexy places."
>"Vinyl please!" she whispers, "Not in front of others."
>"You don't seem all too concerned." Sunset points out.
>"Well, that's the thing. That's all that's going on. No metamorphosis beyond those traits and she hasn't had a suppression pill since the last transformation."
"That's still no reason to let our guard down."
>"Yeah yeah, I'm keeping a close eye on her." she says. "Besides, I know what Tavi's dressing up as for Halloween."
>"Vinyl!"
>"Ha, kidding." she says before whispering to Rarity, "Mostly, so can you, ya know, fix something up?"
>"I'll do what I can dear. Just get in touch with me after tonight and we'll work out the details."
>A waiter comes up to your table with a pen and notepad, "Have we decided on what we want?"
>A quick glance around the table and it seems everyone is ready.

>Your food finally comes out by the droves.
>Because of all the extra food Pinkie Pie ordered, it requires two or three extra waiters just to bring it to her.
>"Alright everyone, dig in!"
>You pinch off a bit of your stuffed lobster tail with your chopsticks.

>>28581105
>"Hey! I like orange chicken." she retorts
now I am thinking of Scootaloo.

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>>28581105
>Steam radiates off the dish in an almost tantalizing way.
>Around the table all the other girls are sincerely enjoying their own meals while Pinkie Pie just shovels it into her mouth.
>"Consarnit..." you hear Applejack curse.
>She's apparently having a vicious battle with her rebellious chopsticks...
"Need help?"
>"Would you kindly?" she asks.
>Using your own pair, you grab some of her orange chicken and feed it to her.
>Much to Rarity's consternation as she narrows her eyes and pouts.
>"You think I could try some of that there lobster Anon?"
"Sure."
>You repeat the process before and she lets out a sensuous moan.
>...
>Lobster must be really good...
>Outside of your peripheral vision, Applejack sticks a tongue at Rarity who just gasps in shock.
>As you're about to take a bite of your own food, a sudden tingling sensation in your nose gives you pause.
>Something smells... off.
>Is it the lobster?
>It's not the stinky tofu Rainbow ordered and is just poking at.
>Giving it a quick sniff, the smell almost seems to punch you in the senses.
"Applejack did the lobster taste off to you?"
>"Not that I could taste. Why?"
"Must be my senses acting up because of all the ingredients. Nevermind."
>Guess it's just you.

>"Oh man, I'm couldn't eat another bite." Rainbow Dash groans out.
>"Same..." Sunset concurs, her head lying flat on the table.
>"You girls are such lightweights." Pinkie says stuffing another dumpling into her mouth.
>One must wonder how a girl like Pinkie manages to devour so much yet stay so lithe.
>It really must be that gypsy magic she continuously denies having. It's the only explanation on how she would have such an insane metabolism.
>The rest of the table, barring you, Pinkie and Vinyl, share the same sentiments, each of them fully stuffed.
>Even Rarity went a little overboard.
>"I shouldn't have eaten so much." Rarity says giving out a slight yawn. "Now I feel all sleepy."

>>28581105
Unf, I am both aroused and grossed out by the extra hairy Octi. I don't know what to do.

>>28581130
>Giving it a quick sniff, the smell almost seems to punch you in the senses.
"Applejack did the lobster taste off to you?"
>"Not that I could taste. Why?"
"Must be my senses acting up because of all the ingredients. Nevermind."
>Guess it's just you.
GIVE IT TO DOGGY TAVI, THEN PANIC!

>>28581130
FOOD WAS DRUGGED, FUCKING SHOOT THE PLACE UP! RUN!

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>>28581130
>Twilight also yawns, "Y-yeah... me too. Must be the chemicals inside the chicken..."
>"But only... Applejack and Rainbow had chicken..." Sunset says.
>"Maybe... I *yawn* did eat too much." Pinkie says, "Food was just... so... good."
>Soon enough the entire table starts yawning.
>Fluttershy struggles to keep her eyes open, "So... tired."
>Wait a second...
>Looking around the restaurant, there's no one else. A quick glance at your watch shows that you only spend an hour here.
>It's way too early for the place to be completely empty like this.
>Both you and Vinyl lock gazes and begin to realize the same thing.
>All the girls except you two are struggling to stay awake.
>Something is definitely not right.
"Applejack, c'mon stay awake." you say shaking her shoulders.
>"Zzz..."
"Vinyl what the hell is going on?"
>"I don't know man." she says standing, "Tavi wake up."
>It's ultimately no use as all the girls lay passed out.
>You have a real bad feeling about this.
>All of a sudden you hear a commotion by the front entrance.
>Grabbing your concealed weapon, you unlock the handle and hold the blade at the ready.
>In come marching a few dozen armed men in gas-masks who train their firearms at your table.
>"Shit..." Vinyl says, obviously recognizing them. "It's these guys..."
"These guys?"
>"Just some creeps. Must be wanting payback for what I did the other day."
"I totally called it." you say. "I knew that would bite us in the ass."
>"Guys, isn't your boss taking this a little too far?" she asks them.
>Before you know it, something hits you and Vinyl in the shoulder.
>A small dart is sticking out.

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>>28581166
>Poison?
>Taking it out, a small drop of blood pools out of the wound.
>You feel a slight aching sensation, but it feels strangely similar to if you ingested a potion.
>Vinyl however is feeling a bit wobbly on her feet. Black veins extending from the dart like she just was exposed to... Black Blood.
>But... that shouldn't happen unless it's mixed with the blood of a witcher.
>"Male is still standing sir."
>"Hit him again." the lead man orders.
>One of the gunmen points his gun at you, but this time you anticipate the shot and cast Quen.
>The dart collides into the barrier and ricochets off harmlessly.
>There's a murmur of concern from the men at the door.
>"Sir is that...?"
>"Tell the boss we just found our other target."
>"A...non... I'm not feeling so hot..." Vinyl says trying to stay on her feet.
>Suddenly Vinyl collapses onto the floor.
>Well... one witcher with nine incapacitated friends versus six armed and fully aware men.
>A crash from the kitchen draws your attention as four more men bust through the double doors.
>"Kitchen clear sir!"
>Make that ten armed men.
>Not very good odds… even for you.
>"Drop your weapon… witcher."
>On signal, each of the other masked men raises their guns.
>Even if you decide to fight, there's no way you could protect the others from any stray gunfire.
>Dropping your sword, you hold your hands up.
---

>>28581176
Shit, well that's one way to get the monster mob in again.

>>28581166
Fuck the swat is here.

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>>28581130
>>Outside of your peripheral vision, Applejack sticks a tongue at Rarity who just gasps in shock.
kek

>>28581176
Now that's some good fucking training. I like these guys.

>>28580653
>This faggot is going to give away his KF2's items just to improve himself/ get better at his first green.
>Just to provide us with a high quality story
There are little to no people with the "I want to change and get better at this" attitude in this board m8. Keep it up.

>>28583758

9 bump

>>28585232

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Sexy Witcher bump

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>>28553538
I am so sorry about the radio silence the past few days guys. I have been dealing with transferring workplace and unpacking the only way I know how,
long spurts of pushing my problems to the back of my mind by playin vidya with friends
Anyways, I'm going to be getting back into the groove by writing a Rarity section. Look forward to it soonish(ie within the next three days)

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>>28586654

>>28587330
i cant believe yfn is dead

i need more jordan in my life

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>>28587330
>Rarity section
We getting the wet dreams?>>28582069

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>>28587789

>>28588372
Applejack is going to shred that dress when she finds out what she is planning. If they get away from the monster mob swat team.

>>28588394
what is she planning

>>28588429
She knows Anon and Applejack fucked in her dressing room, she may or may not have been taking advantage of that fact. Well until the swat dropped in.

>>28588452
taking advantage how though

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>>28588509
Okay nice bait, you got me on that one.

>>28588562
i dont get it

what does a dress have to do with her taking advantage

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>>28588606
your not even trying anymore.

>>28588636
i dont understand why youre doing this
how am i baiting

>>28588676
Then your intentionally stupid or just didn't read.

>>28588714
what does a dress have to do with anything

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>>28588728
Here is your last (you).

>>28588728
Listen here: Rarity is going to get some fuk from anon.

poke

Ded thread

>>28591445
No just asleep.

Goodnight bump

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>>28592179
Goodnight

>>28589006
Nah wanting some fuck will be her first thought then she'll realise AJ would break her in two so she'd move on to asking if she can watch while she fingerblasts herself.

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>>28593744

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1 out of 2 trade also next part is in editing right and getting schooled now as i work on 5 next parts right now

>>28593744
bump