After School Lesson

No thanks

>>28539613
nice push up bra, Sunset

>>28539613
They don't teach magic here, and aren't you like 22 and still in high school.

No thanks.

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>>28539613
Much more than that, Sunset.
I want you to marry me so we can make a family.

>>28539613
Yes please

>>28539988
Excellent! Where do you want to study anon?

>>28539678
She runs away from you.
>Game Over

>>28540044
In your butt

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>>28540058
>implying she can run from someone with nothing to lose
She'll have to kill me to make me give up

>>28540213
Used the magic of friendship to purify you from dark influence.

>>28540137
>Pizza Hut it is then.

>>28539660
>Ahh. Thanks anon.

>>28540044
aylmaos

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>>28539667
That's not a very nice thing to say.

>>28540264
>Oh you must be talking that Mexican restaurant.

>>28540242
My love for her is the purest thing on this planet and she could know that from touching me

>>28540290
>I'm not ready for a relationship anon.

>>28540290
You deserve her anon, always love her and cherish her

>>28540370
>Didn't you hear Brad? She not ready for another relationship.

>>28539613

>>28540266
>>28540259
why are you two talking for her?

Writefag here. Care for me to write?

>>28539613
I always have a hard time in class when I sit behind you.
>>28541877
Sure. Sounds great.

>>28541885
Then I'll work my magic

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"Hey anon I notice you having a hard time in class. Want me to tutor you?"
>You turn around to see who spoke to you
>Sunset Shimmer
>The girl who destroyed the school and got 'reformed' and was now trying to be overly nice to make up for it
>You didn't trust her
"How did you know that?"
"I'm a TA for the math class duh. Do you even pay attention?"
>Oh shit she was
>You were too busy staring at her big boobs
>Speaking of
"Anon?"
"Oh yeah. Right."
"So do you want me to help or not?"
"Uh... sure I guess. Why not?"
>You'd at least get to spend some time with a hot girl and maybe, if all went well, you could pass math too
"Sure Sunset, why not?"
>You tried to sound as unenthusiastic as possible
"Great. Where do you live?"
>You felt some butterflies in your stomach
"Aren't we going a bit too fast?"
"Dork. We need to tutor after school duh. So where do you live?"
>You give her your address
>Nothing wrong with bringing a hot girl into your home

(one thing I forgot to ask. Do you want this to be sexy or more romantic? Or both with it leaning more towards one or the other?)

>>28542014
Romantic sex is amazing. Go with both. Shimmerfags seem to like romance and being all lovey-dovey. Our thread is literally /hugbox/. Both would be nice.

>>28542052
Alrighty. And what do you mean /hugbox/? I'm amused.

>>28542084
Everyone is so kind in the Shimmer thread. Its just a bunch of random, love struck idiots expressing how much they love Sunset. I'm one of them
It feels much different than many of the other threads. We don't take too kindly to mentions of raping or hurting Sunset. We all agree on everything. We honor her like a goddess, whereas in the Glimmerthread, they are all sadists it seems. Only a few seem normal.

Also, it's quite late in the night right now so you may not have too many people notice your writing till morning.

>>28542084
The term hugbox usually mans a cancerous small group of people circlejerking so hard and being overly positive with one another that they stray from being Anons and become overly defensive and supportive once stuff normal to 4chan happens, kind of like someone calling someone a fag as a friendly snarky greeting and the guy gets triggered and runs to his male feminist friends and they al cry together and hug one another while the rest of Anons are put off by what kind of pussies they've become.

>>28542118
>>28542128
Shimmerfag approved.
This is our thread pretty much. We are THAT sensitive though. Just hella fucking nice and kind to each other.

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>>28542014
"Well then it's a date."
>She has a big, goofy smile on her face as your face was beet red
>She was totally doing this on purpose
"W-well see you then."
>You watch as she walks down the hallway, that smile never leaving her face
>God did you want to ravage her
>A few days later, as you waited pins and needles, the day arrived for the tutoring session
>When you got home your were practically watching the clock
>The doorbell rings and you run to open it
>Her arms were full of books
"Hi there Anon. You ready for some studying?"
"O-of course Sunset."
>You both walk into the living room and sit down on the couch, Sunset placing her books on a desk you moved in
>You sit beside her, but not to close
>She was even sexier up close
>Those curves

>>28542118
That's funny. The dazzling general is my home and we generally do the same, though not quite as extreme. And we also get our panties in a twist when it comes to traps apparently. Also forgive me if myy quality is down. I'm quite tired.

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>>28542171
We don't care much for trannies. Po pretty much every fetish except for rape, cuckoldry, and sadism is except. Any if those 3 and you will be attacked by a bunch of white knights.

>>28542208
>except
*Accepted

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>>28542171
>Dem hips
"Anon?"
>Shit you were staring again
>She just brushes it off
"Alright, so tell me what you're having trouble with."
"Oh... um well..."
>You open the textbook she brought with her and point to some of the algebra
"Algebra huh? Alright. Do a problem and show me exactly how you do it. I want to see how your thought process is."
>You take out a paper and do the equation
(7x7)+2x8(9[6+2])=F
>Fuck that looked hard
>You start working through the problem as Sunset's judging eyes watch over you
>You finish it, knowing you got it wrong
>Way to screw it up
"Oh I see what you did. You didn't do the inner brackets first. You see, you're supposed to do the 6+2 first, then multiply it by nine and work it from there. You did a good job though.Try it again."
>She smiles at you and you smile right back
>You got a warm feeling in your tummy
>You liked it
>You do as she said and kept going through the problem
"Oh you're so close. Do you see what you missed?"
>Shit
>You looked back over the problem
>It looked right as far as you were concerned
>After a while of looking she jumps in
"You multiplied the 2 and the 8 wrong. You want to multiply the 8 by the answer you got in the brackets."
>You tried the problem again and again before finally getting it right.
>Just one problem left you defeated
"Hey, don't beat yourself up. We all have our struggles in life. Keep at it."
"I really hate math."
"I know. But that's why I'm here right? I'll help you every step of the way. Just keep working at it."
>Was she always this gentle and sincere?

>>28542208
Kek you guys are ever worse than us. Pretty much (for some reason) it's just traps for us. You can literally write about anything else and no one bats an eye but give Adagio a penis and everyone will lose their damn mind.

>>28542253
Is this considered "difficult math" in american education? I feel bad for you guys.

>>28542590
I got 99 problems but my dick ain't mine

Another fucking sunset shimmer thread. This is what I think of shimmer you pricks.
https://trixiebooru.org/1262121

>>28539613
Nice rack, what size are you?

>>28542630
>I think the size you need them to be.

I like where this story is going!

>>28542253
>Is it 29376?

>>28542590
>Americunt education is low tier
Friendly reminder that nobody likes a shitter comparing country A,B,C with country X, Y and Z. It just makes your superiority complex stand out

>>28542253
More?

>>28542253
Pls continue.

>>28543639
No I think It's 1201

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>>28543684
>Correct anon. Do you want me stay for the night?

Bumping a dead thread, on a dead board

To the top! Never gonna stop

>>28539613
I was doing badly to get Twilight to tutor me. Now leave me alone ginger.

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Where is that write fag. I demand his immediate attention.

>>28542014
d'aww she looks cute with that hat

Bump

I wanna see more of the story

Back. Sorry it took so long. I didn't think anyone was thaat interested

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>>28542253
"Right."
>You go through the problems for another hour, Sunset's gentle hand guiding you through the entire thing
"That was an amazing job Anon. You're really making some progress. You want to meet again next week?"
"Oh yeah. Of course."
"Great. I will see you later. Same time, same place."
>You nervously laugh
"Yeah."
>She gets up and walks out of your house, prompting you to take a big breath in
>God talking to girls was scary
>But she was so nice
>The next day comes and you go to your lunch table, alone of course
>You notice Sunset sitting with her friends
>One was that Dash girl, super good at sports and flat as a board
>Then Fluttershy, adorable as all hell
>You just sit there admiring them from afar
"Hey Anon!"
>You snap out of it
>It's Sunset Shimmer
"Why don't you come sit with us? You're doing that stare thing again."
>Was it that obvious?
>You make your way to the table and sit with the group
>The rainbow haired uggo says something
"Hey Sunset? Who's the dork?"
>The purple haired one elbows Rainbow's ribs
"Rainbow Dash!"
"What?"
>She whispers something in Dashie's ear
"O-oh right. Hi."
>You lift your eyebrow in curiosity
"I suppose we should introduce ourselves. I am Rarity."
>The hot animal lover goes next
>You already knew who she was but god those tits
"I-I'm... Fluttershy.."
>You could barely hear a word she said
>Then the even bigger busted, thicc pink girl
"HI ANON! I'M PINKIE PIE!"
>All of a sudden a look of worry goes across the groups face as she says your name without knowing it
"How did you know my name?"
>Rarity has a nervous smile on her face
"She just knows everyone at school /right/ pinkie?"
"Uh yeah hahahaha."
>What was up with these weird girls?
>The rest of the girls introduce themselves from Dash to AJ
>A large nervous silence falls across the table and Rarity comes to the rescue
"So mr.... Anon? How did you meet up with Sunset Shimmer?"

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>>28539613
I'm not having a ha-- oh. It's a come on.

Well I guess that explains why she emailed me a picture of her tits in a push up bra.

Does anyone know that story where Rainbow Dash and Anon are going out? It was written a long time ago and it had it's own general and everything. I realize it isn't much to work with. But I think it will help me write this one a little better. I've never really written a good rom before.

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>>28550750
"Well she asked me if I wanted help with my studies so I said yes."
>Rarity smiles
"Well that is Sunset Shimmer. She's quite smart."
>Sunset giggles
"Oh Rarity stop."
>Rainbow still is looking at you with a half smile-half scowl
>She was so standoffish
"So er... Anon? What kinda name is that. I've never heard of a name like that before."
>What a surprise
>Dumb country bumpkin doesn't know anything
"It's just a name my parents came up for me. I never asked them how they did it, never really got to curious about it."
>The awkwardness was reaching critical levels now
>You spend most of the rest of lunch on awkward silence before the bell finally tolled
>You had never been so relieved to get out of lunch in your life
>Sunset comes up behind you
"Sorry about them. They always get really weird when I hang with new people. Our study thing is still on right?"
"Of course."
"Good! I'll see you then."
"See you then too."
>You now have to go to gym
>With Rainbow Dash of all people
>And on cue, she was hawk eyeing you the entire time
>Why was she so annoying? It wasn't as if you liked Sunset or anything?
>Right?
>Right.
>But you didn't have much to worry about when it came to her
>Sunset on the other hand....
>You are now Sunset Shimmer, waiting in the bathroom after your friends put on that huge shit show
>Why did they act like that?
>You pull out your cellphone and text Rainbow
Rainbow why did u do that? U were scowling the entire time like u wanted to kill him!"
>What a mess
>Why were you worrying about this so much?
>It wasn't as if you liked Anon?
>Right?
>Right
>You get a text back, but no from Rainbow
>It was from AJ
Dash seemed mighty mad at lunch today. Why do ya think that was?
>You furiously type on the keyboard

Don't let it end here please, we gotta know what Dash's problem with Anon was

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>>28550909
I don't know. She is so weird around boys.
>Ding
Ya don't think she has a crush on Anon do yer?
>You keep typing
I really doubt it
>There is a bit of a pause after that
Well then I just plumb don't know
>You snap your phone closed and walk out of the bathroom
>Maybe you should talk to her
>But that would be so hard, you didn't want her to be mad at you too
>You would talk to her!
>You walk to the gym and look inside
>Both Anon and Rainbow are in the same gym class
>How convenient
>And, just as she did before, Dash had the same look
>They were playing basketball and Dash was being exceptionally rough
>Whenever she passed to Anon, she made it a point to throw the ball as hard as she could, making him recoil in pain
>Not that Anon was weak, Rainbow was just stronger than most high school varsity seniors
>She would cut him off and just act all around mean
>What the hell was her problem?
"Damn it Dash."
"My, my they are playing quite well wouldn't you agree?"
>You nearly jump out of your skin as you realize rarity is standing directly behind you
"Jesus Rarity! You about killed me!"
"Sorry darling. I just noticed you were watching them play. Spying on your little love interest?"
"He is NOT my love interest. I just tutor him and that's it."
>She just giggles
"Whatever you say."
"Why is Dash acting so rough with him?"
>Rarity looks a bit uncomfortable
>She knew something
"Rarity."
"Yes?"
"You know why Dash is acting like this don't you?"
"O-oh don't worry about it must be um... her time of the month."
>You look at her skeptically
"Ok, ok fine! But since I am honor bound not to tell a secret I'll just give you a hint. Let's just say that some of us have love interests."
"What?"
"Now, now darling. No extra hints."
>She quickly scampers off and you wait till the next class is concluded

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>>28551350
>Dash wants to fuck sunset
>anon in the crossfire
dammit, this nigga can't catch a break

>>28539613
Sure, would you mind explaining why your tits force your jacket to stick to them though? That's anomalous.

>>28542208
It honestly feels like the Shimmer thread traded in its balls. I understand not wanting cuck or torture stories but amazing stories have come out of Sunset being in a less then positive situation. These days they would never have even gotten off the ground and it feels like if Sunset stubbed her toe you'd have people bitching about how you hurt "muh Sunneh".

Gotta have the dark so you appreciate the light.

>>28550750
Where the fuck did the idea the Flutters has massive tits come from? I'm not knocking the story or anything but the idea that Fluttershy has huge boobs makes no sense given that in the show it's implied she has the body of a supermodel and has been shown to be tall and slim in the flashback scenes.

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>>28551350
>You patiently watch as Dash rips Anon a new one using her sports prowess
>She was really laying into him, you'd never seen her fight so aggressively
>But finally the class ended, a sweaty and broken Anon walking out from the locker room
>You two both lock eyes for a moment before Rainbow gets in your way, pulling you away from him
"Rainbow? What the hell is the matter with you?"
"I just don't think he's your type. He's a total loser."
>You rip your sleeve off
"Why are you acting like such a mega jerk?"
>She genuinely looks surprised
"What do you mean? I was just showing Anon how to play sports the real way!"
"By being a massive jerk?"
"Oh buzz off."
>Rainbow angrily walks away
>You are now Anon again, trying to mend the bruising on your body
>Rainbow was brutal as all hell
>You see Sunset walking towards you again
"You alright Anon?"
"I'm fine. Rainbow was acting a lot more aggressive than usual."
>Sunset frowns
"Oh believe me, I know."

>>28552103
Because she's shy I guess. I don't know.

>>28552069
I can write something a little darker if you wish. Ask /dzg/. I mean I won't make this story doom and gloom but if you'd like I can add some darkness too it.

And are you guys honestly enjoying this? I feel like my writing is just awful right now.

>>28552178
Keep going , this is getting more intense
I like this green really

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>>28552178
"Well I'll see you later. I've got to hit the books."
"Well... you want me to help you study?"
>Sunset smiles
"Sure. I'd really like that actually."
>You follow Sunset to the library where she pulls out some flash cards
"So what are we studying?"
>She sighs
"History."
"You not a fan of history?"
"I am except your world's history is entirely knew to me and-"
>You look curiously
"Our world's history?"
>Sunset looks nervously
"Uh let's just say it's hard ok? Can you help me?"
"Yeah, sure thing."
>Maybe she was just really into the dumb anime shit
>Bunch of loser weebs
>You pick up one of the flash cards
"What year did the Seven Year's War start?"
>She thinks for a moment
"Umm... 17... 1780?"
>You shake your head
"Nope 1756. What was it's significance?"
"Oh that's an easy one. It was to establish American independence!"
>wat
"No that was the American Revolution. This was a battle between France and Britain."
"O-oh yeah. I knew that."
"Alright. Who established the Committee of Public Safety during the French Revolution?"
"Um..."
>Sunset looked really sad all of a sudden, like she was about to cry
"You alright Sunset?"
"Y-yeah. I'm fine. I just need to take a quick break ok?"
>She gets up and walks out for a while
>How did she not know any of this?
>Could she really have been from another world?
>How would that even be possible?
>Sunset comes back, her eyes swollen and puffy
>It didn't take a genius to figure out she had been crying
"Sunset?"
>She put on the biggest fake smile you had ever seen
"Yes, Anon?"
"What's wrong?"
>All of a sudden you hear someone stomping from the other side of the room
"I knew it! You are a big jerk!"

>>28552178
Nah you don't have to do anything to your story I was merely voicing my concerns about the general state of the Sunset thread while others were talking about.

>>28552492
This is getting interesting. I can see Dash getting her heart broken, and not let down in a gentle way like what would have been possible if she wasn't acting as jealously as she is.

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>>28552492
>You both snap your head to the side
>Motherfucking Dash and her stupid attitude
"You made Sunset cry you big jerk."
"Rainbow this isn't what this looks like, you're misreading the situation."
"Oh am I?"
>All of a sudden Sunset's face changed
>She was done
>She grabbed rainbows wrist and walked her out of the library
>You hear some hushed arguing for a while
>They were getting really heated
>Finally Sunset returns, Rainbow not in tow
"You ready to study again?"
>You nod
"One sec."
>You wanted to at least check on Rainbow
>You walk out into the Library and see her sitting down, her head in her knees
"Rainbow? You alright?"
>She looks up at you
"You happy?"
>You look confused
"Happy?"
"Yeah? I've been trying to get her as my girlfriend for over a year now!"
>It hits you like a bunch of bricks
"Rainbow, Rainbow, you're looking at this all wrong. It isn't like that. We're just friends."
"Well I'm glad you see it that way. Because Sunset doesn't. I can see it in her eyes!"
>You had no idea Rainbow was so jealous

>>28552704
Well i dont spect that coming

>>28552704

This needs to be continued into infinity

>>28552704
Called it, though I'd love to see it from Sunset's perspective.

>>28552704
>You are Sunset again
>You couldn't believe it
>Now what Rarity said made perfect sense
>She literally thought you were coming on too Anon
>Even if you were, she didn't own you
>You could date whoever you wanted
>The nerve of her
>And it wasn't as if you liked him
>Did you?
>You shake your head
>No
>He did have a nice body though
>And was pretty cute
>You shake your head again
>You did not like Anon
>Speaking of, where was he?
>You walk out of the the library to see her conversing with little miss jealous
>All of a sudden you had the urge to twist the knife in
>Make Rainbow feel the hurt you were feeling
"Come on Anon. We need to go and study again"
>Both you and Rainbow shot glares at each other that could melt steel
>Anon pulls his jacket over his body
"Later girls. I'll let you too figure this out."
>Anon storms away, clearly angered by the whole ordeal
>And it's back with the basic bitch
"I'm sorry Sunset."
>You cross your arms
"Why would you do that? Dash.. you realize I'm not gay right?"
"I know ok! I know... But I can't help my feelings."
"I get that. But..."
>You sigh
"I need to think about this. I'll see you later."
>Rainbow just stays silent
>You walk outside and are rushed by a cold breeze and your very bones go cold
>Winter was certainly coming
>You see Anon getting on his bike
>You couldn't let him ride home on his bike!
>It was freezing!
>You run over to Anon
"Hey, Anon!"
>You see him turn as he gets on his bike
"Yes Sunset?"
"It's so cold. Would you like a ride?"
>He thinks about it for a bit and smiles
"Sure."
>He had such a great smile

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>>28552888
>You both walk to your tiny red car
>Life wasn't easy in the human world, but at least you got a car
"What about my bike?"
>You think about it for a bit
"Don't worry about it. I'll pick you up tomorrow."
>Your heart skipped a beat and you got a funny feeling in your tummy
"Thanks Sunset."
>You both hop in the car and start driving back
"A lot warmer in here huh?"
"Yeah."
>Anon touches a pony figurine on the dashboard
"This is cute."
"Yeah. Fluttershy got it for me. She really is nice."
"Say... You wanna stay a while at my place... as friends of course."
>The feeling came back in your gut again
"Yeah. I'd quite like that. As friends."
>You turn up the heat but felt yourself getting almost dizzy
>Just the thought of hanging out with him made your heart speed up
>You get to his place and walk out into the house
>He opens the door for you
>Such a gentleman
"Can I get you anything Sunset?"
"Do you have anything warm?"
"I've got tea or coffee."
"Some tea would be delightful."
>Anon goes and sets up the pot
>What was this feeling?
>It felt good, like happiness but much more

>>28552949
This is cute.

>>28539613
Bumping

>>28552949
My respects to you anon , this is a good green

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>>28539613
>people are actually rp'ing with the namefagging autists
>people keep replying to their shitty threads

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>>28552949
>You watched as Anon brewed some tea
"Anything you want to watch?"
"What do you have?"
"Well I do have netflix."
"Hmmm. I don't know."
>Anon tosses you a controller
"Go ahead and look around. Also."
>He drapes a blanket over you
>Your heart was thumping so fast it might as well jump out of your chest
"Thanks Anon, it's quite warm."
"You're welcome Sunny."
>You face goes red
>You do like Anon
>No, no, no
>You do NOT like Anon
>You don't find him cute and funny or handsome or
>Sunset!
>Anon comes back with your tea
"Here you go."
"Th-thanks."
>You sip nervously
>Damn this was good
>Really good
"Wow Anon. You know how to brew a good cup."
"Thanks. My mom taught me. She was amazing at cooking."
>You cock your head for a bit
>Why did he put it in past tense?
>You just leave it alone
"Did you pick out a movie?"
>You shake your head
"Not yet."
>You turn the TV on and start scrolling through the movies
"What are you in the mood for?"
"I'm not sure. I need something... cuddl-"
>SUNSET!
"S-something comfy. Y-yeah that's what I meant."
>You put your head back in your tea and take a big sip, as if that would hide the sheer embarrassment
"Let's see. I'm sure we can find some comfy movies."
What movie should they watch?

Also the pastebin is up: http://pastebin.com/Dd3J3Md6

>>28553939
It continues.

>>28553939
concept of Sunset falling in love with beta anon within a few days is kinda naive

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>>28553939
Aw shit, it's time to get cozy

>>28554056
Don't worry. I'll take it nice and slow.

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>>28553939
>You watch as Anon scrolls through the movies
>All of a sudden you see his arm start to creep around you
"A-Anon..."
>You put your head down and move out of the way of his reach
>He looks a bit confused
"I know you mean well, but lets not get ahead of ourselves. Especially with Rainbow."
>Anon retracts his hand, looking slightly defeated
"But let's watch a movie ok? As friends."
"As friends."
>You scroll through the movies and find a good action-comedy flick
>Your emotions were fighting with you right now
>On the one hand, you kinda had a thing for him
>But on the other, you weren't ready for a relationship nor did you want to move to fast
>You didn't want to make a mistake like you did with flash...
>Maybe some day though
>Your phone dinged with a text message
>It was from Fluttershy
Hey Sunset
>You text back
Hi Fluttershy
>Ding
Do you know what's wrong with Rainbow? She seems pretty upset
>Just when you though you could get away from it all
Don't know
>You really didn't want to think about it
>Why did Rainbow has to chose now to act like this?

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>>28554183
>anon goes in for the kill
>SS blocks the reception
>"lets watch the movie, as friends
Why must you hurt me writefriend

>>28554226
Because that's the way I like it. And just wait. I've got plans for your heart. And boy will it make it hurt. Mawahhha.

>>28554276
Will it kill you?

>>28554279
Fuck off

>>28554276
Ohhh shitt

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>>28554279
>can only vote for one

>>28554279
THEY'RE GONNA KILL US, I TOLD YOU THEY WOULD DO IT

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>>28554183
>You keep texting Fluttershy
>She sure was persistent
>You had a feeling she knew, she must
>How many of your friends knew rainbow had a thing for you?
>You couldn't help but wonder if your friends kept you in the dark about this, what else they were lying to you about
>Your thoughts of course jumped to the worse
>Maybe they still hated you, just like everyone else
>Nobody every forgives or forgets
>Not even them apparently
"Sunset?"
>You look at Anon
"Yeah?"
"You alright?"
"Yeah of course. Why?"
>He looks at you sympathetically
"You're tearing up."
>You now realize your eyes were really hot
>You get up
"I've got to go Anon. I'll pick you up at six ok?"
>Before he can eve get a word in you run to your car and start driving home
>You knew everyone hated you
>Even your so called 'friends'
>How could they keep that secret from you?
>And the way the bring up your mistake over and over and over again
>You did something wrong! You got the damn picture!
>But they just do it over and over, as if to make fun of you and
>You are stopped in thought as you realize your vision is getting blurry
>Would you ever live down that stupid mistake?
>You had changed! You know you had! Your past wasn't you anymore! Why couldn't anyone understand that!?
>It had been over a year!
>Not only had you changed but you also helped defeat three sirens and a damn wood demon! What more did you freaking need!?
>You pull over the car and let the tears run
>Would you ever escape your past?
>Ever not be reminded of the terror you caused?
>Maybe you deserved it
>Maybe you were still shit
>Clearly everyone else seemed to see it, no matter how hard you tried to change
>You slam your head on the dash and cry
>You were such a fool
>How could you ever think you could change?
>One a demon always a demon

>>28554276
Tell me about Bane! Why does he where the mask?

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>>28554478
>Once a demon always a demon.

>>28554549
Because he likes dicks

>>28554276
If it's going to break my heart I better leave this thread already.

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>>28554478
>You sit on the side of the road and cry for a while
>Get it together Sunset
>You get another ding on your phone
>It's Dash
>Great
Hey Sunset. Let's meet. I think we need to talk about today.
>Why the fuck not
Alright. Where?
>Ding
Coffee shop. 15 minutes.
I'll be there
>You drive down to the the nearby coffee shop and walk inside
>15 minutes your butt, Rainbow was already there
>You sit across from her and just stare for a while
"So Sunset..."
"Yes?"
"I'm sorry... I didn't mean to go weird on you like that..."
"I'm not the one you should be apologizing too."
"What do you mean?"
"Anon. He was the one you pushed around."
"Oh... right..."
"But that's not important right now."
>She cocks her brow
>You are Anon
>And you were doing just about as well as Sunset was
>What were you thinking?
>You have known her for like 3 days!
>You probably just ruined your chances with her
>You were such an idiot sometimes
>You walk up to your room and lay down on the bed
>You just hoped you didn't ruin your relationship as well

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>>28539643
Sup, cockwhore. Give me your homework. Faggot like you probably filed it with asinine errors.

>>28548868
what fucking hat?

>>28556094
Oh my god I remember that thread. It was fagslut though, not cockwhore

>>28556116
You missed it

>>28556128
yeah the original prompt, later it was changed

>>28556139
I want twilight to nerd dom me

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>>28542253
>You can literally write about anything else and no one bats an eye but give Adagio a penis and everyone will lose their damn mind.

>>28555942
I'm enjoying this so far, I do have one mild complaint though. The all black for speaking makes it a little hard to follow who is speaking sometimes, it isn't impossible but it does take more effort than the typical black for the PoV speaker, green for everyone else.

>>28556599
BG9 makes good greens

>>28556599
I could fix that. I have always found it just annoying when it's a wall of green and only a few black lines. So if that's what you want I could certainly do that

>>28556611
tripdubs confirm

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>>28555942
>You thought about it for a long while before finally drifting to sleep
>Meanwhile, back at the coffee shop
>"Then what is important?"
"What's important is anything else."
"What?"
"You girls don't still hate me do you? For what I did?"
"I obviously don't. But the other girls should either. At least I've never heard them say that."
"Are you sure?"
>"Uh... yeah... Why do you bring this up?
>You look down
"It's just... you bring it up so often... what I did."
>Rainbow puts her hand on your shoulder
>"Sunset we've all done things we regret, as we saw what I just did. Sometimes we just joke to get over it. You always said "none taken" so I thought you were ok with it."
"I'm not. I'm so ashamed of what I did."
>"I guess we're even huh?"
"Yeah. I guess so. Let's promise never to do this again hm?"
"Yeah. We still friends?"
"Yeah."
>The next week went by uneventful
>Anon, however, kept his distance
>You must have let him down to hard
>You hoped that it didn't ruin your little study date
>Y-you mean study SESSION. It certainly wasn't a date
>nervous horse woman laughter
>It also began to really freeze over
>Winter was coming in with the force of a steel bullet
>The cold was fierce, it froze the very blood in your veins
>Rainbow was also putting distance between you too
>This was such a mess
>You walk over to Anon, sitting alone at the table and sit across form him
"Hey Anon."
>"Oh uh... hi Sunset."
"Is our tutor session still good?"
>"Y-yeah... if you want. I promise I won't-"
>You stop him
"Don't worry Anon. We're cool. It was a weird time and we're all good."
>"That's great!"
>He said it that way but you could see that little break in him
>He was obviously hoping you still had a thing for him
>And maybe you did
>But you just couldn't go to fast

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>>28557993
i'm rooting for my boy anon

>>28558179
We all are.

>>28539613
Bump.

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>>28557993
"Mind if I sit with you?"
>"Don't mind at all."
>You both sit for a while and eat a bit when you noticed Mopey Mary AKA Rainbow Dash scowling at you again
>She really needed to curb that jealousy
>"Is Rainbow still mad?"
>You sigh
"Just a bit. She's not to happy about me not accepting her advances. I just wish she would let it go."
>"Let's just ignore her for now. By the way Sunset where did you get that necklac-"
>Anon touches your shoulder and all of a sudden you can see it
>You can feel his emotion flowing into you
>You saw him last night, crying
>You could feel the loneliness, it was palpable
>Like you were in a dark room with no one at all
>And the fear
>So much fear
>You forcibly move his hand, you breathing labored
>"Sunset? Are you ok?"
>Well you couldn't just tell him you could see his memories and feel his emotion just by touch
"Y-yeah I'm just... not feeling well. Excuse me."
>You quickly rush to the bathroom
>Was he feeling all of that right this moment?
>How did he deal with such loneliness?
>It was like nothing you ever felt before
>You lean back against the stall
>You really had to learn how to control these magic abilities

>>28558665
Anon is quite intense. Love truly is the greatest suffering.

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>>28539613
Flutters a cute.

Don't let it end here, not when the plot was getting deeper

>>28539613
bump

>pretty girl talking and being nice to me
This is a trap. She's setting me up for something terrible. So she can laugh at me.

>>28561045
this
it was always like this in high school, why would it be different here

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>>28561045
>>28561060
Because this is a safe space

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>>28561068
kill yourself carlos

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>>28558665
>You sit back up and walk out when you stumble into Rarity
>"Sweetie why whatever are you doing in here? Weren't you going to have lunch with your sweetheart"
"He's NOT my sweetheart! Just a friend. And I was, but my magic got in the way"
>"Why not just tell him?"
"He doesn't know about magic or the fact that I come from an alternate dimension inhabited by ponies apparently. I doubt he would believe it."
>Rarity thinks for a moment
>"Well I guess it can't be helped. What did you feel when he touched you?"
"The loneliness was intense. It seems he really took me not being into him hard. I can't say I don't feel absolutely horrible"
>Not to mention you kinda did have a thing for him
>Yet you said no
>"Well it's not your fault. You just aren't ready for that yet and no one can blame you"
>You put your back to the wall
"I know it's just.. I wish this all wasn't so complicated, especially that whole ordeal with Rainbow. Not only did i hurt Anon, but I burned her pretty bad too"
>Rarity puts her hand on your shoulder
>"Darling don't be so worried about it. Your feelings come first. No good comes of a relationship if one of the parties is not happy about it. Believe me, I know from experience."
>You nod
"I know that. I just hate hurting people like that. It's like how I was before"
>"No. You're entirely different. The old Sunset never would have cared who she hurt and would have just used people. You aren't doing that. You're different."
>You smile
"Thanks Rarity. You always know just the right things to say."
"Anytime, anytime. It's what friends are for."
>Meanwhile, back at Anon's table, AJ comes for a visit
>"Howdy partner."
"Top of the evening, cowpoke"
>You said it in the most unenthusiastic way possible
>"Now, now don't you fret. What's goin' on with you? Ya do realize ya can still sit with us right?"
>You shake your head
"I don't really want too."
>AJ looks a bit annoyed
>"Is this about that whole Sunset thing?"
>You look surprised
"You knew about that?"

>>28558665
Oooo, good use of new cannon powers, and the first I have seen as well.

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>>28561068

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>>28561631
MOAR!

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>>28561631
>"Course I did sugar cube. Y'all ain't slick."
>You sigh
"Let's just say I don't have much luck with ladies. It takes its toll after a while, being so unlikable."
>AJ smiles
>"Nonsense sugar cube. Yer plenty likable."
>You don't even look up from the food you've been pushing around your plate
"Try telling that to Sunset Shimmer."
>AJ looks down a bit
>"Now listen. I know it's hard right now, but give er time. She'll come around."
>You feel a glimmer of hope
"Do you mean she actually likes me?"
>"Well ah can't say fer sure. But if ya just keep sulkin' like this ya ain't gonna get anywhere are ya?"
>You lean your head on your hand
"I guess you're right. It's still sad though."
>"And that's fine bu-"
>AJ puts her hand on the table and to your surprise, it goes right through it, breaking a good chunk off the side of the table
"What the?"
>AJ puts her hand behind her, as if to hide her mistake somehow
>"Ah um... well it's be fun. I'll catch ya later Anon!"
>She quickly scurries away before you can ask how a scrawny farm girl was able to literally tear a chuck off of a lunch table
>What in the world was up with these girls?
>The lunch bell rings and you go back into class
>You couldn't help but let your mind drift back to Sunset
>You even had tutoring with her soon
>How were you going to be able face her?
>That last time was hard enough
>She was just... everything you needed in a girlfriend
>Everything you needed in life
>You had no friends and just desperately wanted to be loved by someone
>Anyone

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>>28561756
>You had no friends and just desperately wanted to be loved by someone
>Anyone

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>>28561756

>>28561756
more plz

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>>28561756
>tfw no gf
>tfw forever alone
>Once again we return to Sunset's body
>You were doing just as well
>Rarity may have given you that prep talk but you still hurt two people you really cared about
>Your feelings didn't come into it
>There had to be a way to make it right
>You smile
>Idea
>You had to find Dashie and Anon after class
>You quickly rush to your calc class
>God calc was boring
>As they say, a watched pot never boils
>And boy was it fucking true
>You swear time in that room was going slower than an old lady crosses the side walk
>Your gaze became transfixed on the clock and the damn ticking
>"Sunset!"
>You snap out of it
"Y-yes?"
>"Are you even paying attention to a word I just said?"
"Yes m'am."
>"Then perhaps you'd like to come up on the board and solve this problem? Flawlessly I presume."
>God your teacher was such a bitch
>You walk up to the chalk board and, of course, bomb the problem completely
"You may sit down Sunset."
>Bitch
>You go sit down with a scowl on your face, now your full attention on Mrs. I have a problem with good students who mess up even once because I'm a big fat meanie loser snob face
>The clock didn't go by any faster, but at last, finally the class ended
>You had never left a classroom so fast in your life
>You knew that both RD and Anon had to be getting out of gym sometime soon
>You quickly rush to the gym to meet them outside
>They see you and both awkwardly wait next to each other
>"Um... hi.. Sunset Shimmer."
>Since when the fuck did RD call you by your full name?
>Anon just nodded
"I need you, both of you, after school."
>"What for?"
>You smile big
"Glad you asked Anon. I've got a little pet project that I need your help with."
>RD crosses her arms, skeptical
>"And what project might that be?"
"We're going to uh-"
>Shit
>You didn't actually think this far ahead
"We're going to... do an obstacle course."
>WHAT!?
>What fucking obstacle course Sunset!?
>You idiot!
>Rainbow giggles to herself

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>>28562404
>"Well I'm game. I could beat you all in ten. Seconds. Flat."
>Roll with it
"Yeah. What about you Anon? You game?"
>He thinks to himself for a moment
>"Sure thing but I have a few questions... where is this obstacle course and how is this a pet project?"
>Internalscreaming.png
"Well uh... that's the thing. We're going to make it ourselves!"
>Oh dear god where were you going with this
>"And why are we doing this?"
>Dash playfully nudges Anon's ribs
>"What's a matter Anon? You chicken?"
>"No, I just want all the details is all."
>"Oh I'm so sure. You really should be a bit more trusting of Sunset."
>"Oh shut up. I trust her just fine."
>"What did you just say to me?"
>Fuck they were going at it again
"Guys, guys! Calm yourselves, we're all friends here right?"
>They both grunt at each other
>This was clearly going to be a lot more challenging than you thought
"Great. Now meet me after school in the courtyard. And try not to kill each other ok?"
>They both walk away from each other faster than the time it took for Flash to orgasm
>This was going to be tricky
>But maybe if you could get them to bond, even just a little, it would fix any broken feelings
>At least until you were brave enough to accept Anon's advances... but that was beside the point
>Even if it was only for a little while, you wanted them to be close just so all the weird looks and sexual tension would go away

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>>28542253
I'm somewhat disappointed that you didn't bring up some actual decent problems and left Sunset spouting random theorems to use on the problem.

>"Oh, this problem is trivial if you realize the cylindrical symmetry and apply the divergence theorem."
>You didn't get a single word of that, but you nod along anyway. You suck at integral theorems.
"That sounds about right."
>"You had some other integral too, right?"
>pic related
>"Oh that's a simple one as well. Just factor the root and complexify the expression."
>Your mind blank and you find yourself looking at Sunset in confusion.
"What? This integral is real, why the fuck would you make it complex."
>"So that we can use the residue theorem."
"The resi—what now?!"
>"It's just a matter of picking the obvious branch cut on the real line between -1 and 1 and integrate along that. Just be careful to check that you don't have a pole at infinity, which would screw everything over."
"Now you're just screwing with me."

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>>28562522
>They both walk away from each other faster than the time it took for Flash to orgasm

>>28562576
I am here for Sunset, not for maths.
>>28562840
I kekked hard, even if other Sunfags are probably going to bitch on this one.

>>28561068
I don't get it

>>28562522
>>28562576
So Anon and Rainbow going to hate fuck right?

>>28563382
Sunset has a weird way of solving problems.
>inb4 things get even more akward.

>>28563449
Maybe it's a pony thing.
When there is tension just fuck it out.

>>28562576
Man I'm a writer, not a mathematician. I can barely do elementary algebra.

>>28563743
And I'm a physics student, not a writer. I can't write stories for shit. Nice to meet you! :^)

>>28550656
we are anon, now keep going, remember sexy and good feels please and thank you.

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>>28552103
This idea has been around for years anon, just how new are you? I'd guess it has something to do with the fact that most quiet type girls in anime have huge tits. There's also that she was only a thin model type in FiM, not EQ series.
Plus, in the latest EQG they are pretty big.
Sorry for it being shit quality, just know this is an actual screencap and not an edit.

>>28550784
the one where he takes her to prom?

>>28563771
Nice to meet you too friend.

>>28563958
You're getting all the feels. The sexy ones, the good ones, the heart wrenching ones, the beautiful ones. Armor up the heart because the feel train has no breaks. And it's going to be picking up speed soon

>>28564149
Nah I found it. It's Whatever I Want by PastaFromSpace. I want to base is somewhat off that though I'm nowhere near the writer pasta was.

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>>28564256
>whatever i want
welp looks like i've got something to reread while waiting for you to update, thanks mang

>>28564348
Sorry it's taking so long. I'm writing the next part right at this moment. But it's one of my faves.

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>>28564368
will my benis enjoy it, if so
>mfw

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>>28562522
>But what were you going to do?
>You didn't have the materials for a damn obstacle course!
>Or did you?
>Idea
>You are Anon and walking down the hall going to your last few classes
>What the hell was Sunset on about?
>Obstacle course?
>What?
>You walk out to the field
>You were too damn stressed to do class today
>And you didn't care either
>Such useless information
>You hated it even more because you felt so stupid while doing it
>Maybe you were just stupid
>You sit on the field when you see Dash come and sit by you
>Just the thing the cheer my mood
>Said no one ever at the sigh of Rainbow Dash
>"Hi Anon."
"Hi Dash. What do I owe the pleasure?"
>She sighs
>"Listen. I know we got on the wrong foot..."
"Oh my body knows. You know when you slammed the basketball into it the other day?"
>You were not in the mood for this shit and you certainly not in the mood for Susan the Scowl to apologize to you
>You didn't want to hear it
>You didn't care
>You just wanted to be left alone
>Enough of Sunset, enough of school and enough of damn Jealous Judy
>Rainbow runs her hand through her hair
>"I know, not exactly the best move on my part... but I'm sorry ok?"
>For some reason hearing that made your body fill with anger
>You get up
"Fine, whatever. I don't fucking care ok?"
>You angrily walk away, leaving a confused Rainbow Dash in your wake
>You go under a shaded tree and slam your headphones in, playing the angriest song you could
>You don't know why you were so angry, maybe it was being left alone
>Again
>Like everyone did your entire damn life
>Or maybe it was the bitchy way Rainbow acted
>Or school making you feel as inferior as possible
>You just lean back and listen
>Then you see Fluttershy
>But something isn't right
>She was surrounded by rodents, birds, and critters
>And was she... talking to them?
>You knew shyness could make a person crazy but this was ludicro-
>wat
>She was singing with them
>And they were singing back in perfect harmony

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>>28564411
>These girls just kept getting weirder and weirder every day
>You pull out your earbuds just to make sure your eyes aren't playing tricks on you
>And they weren't at all
>She was literally singing
>With wild fucking animals
>This was some magipup shit
>N-not that you watched that little girls show of course!
>O-of course not
>You slowly sneak over and keep watching
>"Oh Owlilicous, your singing is oh so pretty. Ahhahhah~"
>Was there something in this schools water?
>You want to confront her, but you're just stuck watching the show
>That's when Pinkie comes along
>"Hiya Fluttershy!"
>She says it so loud, Fluttershy jumps, scaring all the animals away
>She was pretty obnoxious
>Not gonna lie
>"Watcha doin!?"
>"W-well... I was talking with my animal friends.."
>"That's awesome! I still can't believe you can talk to them! I'm still having some trouble controlling mine"
>Controlling hers?
>They fucking didn't
>There was no damn way
>They did not have super powers
>That was just impossible
>"W-well.. please don't throw anything around me."
>"Oh I won't silly! Not unless it's a PARTY!"
>You get up and move away
>AJ had ridiculous strength for her size
>Fluttershy can seemingly talk to animals
>And Sunset said something about learning 'our world's history' as if it was not her own
>What the hell was this?
>They weren't aliens were they?
>Just then you hear the bell toll
>Class must be over
>You needed to go meet Sunset
>Maybe you could ask her what this whole mess is about
>Or maybe not
>You get up and begin walking towards the meeting place
>You are now Sunset and are anxiously awaiting your guests to arrive
>This was going to be one shitty obstacle course but what else could you do?
>Rainbow walks up and to your surprise she looks sad
>Like really sad
"Rainbow, you alright?"
>She crosses her arms
>"Yeah. I'm fine"
"You don't look fine"
>"I'm fine."
>What got into her all of a sudden?
>Just as this conversation was about to go from zero to awkward, Anon shows up

>>28564572
Hey BG9 slow down, what's with the rush? You're kinda off from the plot already, and please lesser cussing and more with the feels TQ

>>28539613
Are you Kidanon in this scenario?

>>28565577
no anon is about the same as SS.

>>28565631
You mean the same age group right?

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>>28561756
>"It takes its toll after a while, being so unlikable."
To close to home anon.

>>28565569
What do you mean slow down and that I'm off the plot? I feel like it's going pretty smoothly, though a bit disjointedly. But I do want feedback, so please tell me.

>>28565793
This is pussy stuff compared to what I have down the line

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>>28566033
>this is pussy stuff
what is anon gonna have to put sunset down ol' yeller style when she gets cervical cancer and can't bare children 15 years after they get together or some shit
>pic unrelated

>>28566090
No, not quiet that bad. But It will make you feel. But there will be good feels well. So stay tuned. It won't all be just doom and gloom.

>>28566033
>But I do want feedback
It is quite good, but you are right. It feels quite disjointed at the moment.

Also, in my opinion, you are not putting enough behind the idea that Sunset is trying to keep anon at an arm's length. Maybe it is the fact that we really don't know what "I am not ready for a relationship" actually means yet, giving us more hints about that might help. I, presonally, am not buying that is only due to the "i was a she-demon last year" stuff. There seem to be something else besides that.
Otherwise, you are not quite conveying the idea that the demon incident was as traumatizing for her as you are implying.

I am sorry if i came too much as an ass, i am enjoying your green, BG9.

>>28566123
Are you done for the night?

>>28550750
>One was that Dash girl, super good at sports and flat as a board
>Delicious flat chest
>UNF

>>28564572
> everybody at school saw what happened at Fall Formal
> everybody knows that there is some magic shit going on
> everybody knows that the first Twilight was a pony princess from another world
> everybody knows what happened at Camp Everfree
> everybody saw their powers
> Anon is basically the only one who doesn't know shit and for some reason nobody wants to tell him

P L O T H O L E
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>>28567604
>not being a mid school year transfer student that no one talks to for being said transfer student

i think your doing school wrong

>>28567663
I know that in USA you are living in a society that can communicate only via smartphones, but here when we got a transfer student he was usually accepted by the group after a week or so.

>>28567693
>accepted after a week or so

where the fuck in Candyland do you live?

>>28567716
Poland.

>>28567716
Are high schools in the states as class/group segregated as they appear in media? That tribal shit is crazy
New and transfer students get incorporated into the group within the first week or so, unless you are a terminal sperg.

At worst, if you are in a really shitty school, the ostracization ended when you had a smaller group to fit in, and then were accepted into the class one.

Dead thread?

>>28568291
>>28568291
Nigga I sat alone at the lunch table from grades 1-12 and any time I tried siting with anyone they would move to a different table, so you tell me

>>28568373
No, no, no. We also had outcasts too.
What i meant is if that tribal-like segreagation we see in your media is a country wide phenomena.

I mean, sure, in my school we also sat by groups that shared some common interest. But if i wanted to talk to, say, the metalheads, or the preppy kids, or the thugs, i bloody could. Provided there was no bad blood between us, but that goes without saying. And i was no goddamn social butterfly either.
Even our spergy outcasts weren't that alienated and there was bullying, discrimination and all of that stuff, i won't deny that.

Look, i am sorry if it looks like i am putting your experiences in doubt, i am not. I am just trying to cope with the fact that the idea of the american highschool that your media puts forward might be a reality.
That's horrible.

>>28568373
Maybe you gave them reasons for it.

>>28566375
Nah, nah it's fine man. I'm always looking to improve so if I'm doing something dumb tell me. I will work that part a little better.

>>28567092
I was going to write more but then life happened. Hopefully I'll be able to do more today though.

>>28567604
I should have elaborated on the fact that I want Anon to either be an exchange student or someone who doesn't pay attention to this stuff.

Bump that body like there's no tomorrow.

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>>28564572
"Hi Anon! You ready to have some fun?"
>Anon just grumbles to himself
>What the hell happened?
>They were fine literally 30 fucking minutes ago
>This place was just nuts sometimes
>You unzip your bag and pull out some paper, pens, and colors
>Rainbow crosses her arms
>"Uh Sunset, I don't mean to sound cynical, but that doesn't look like obstacle course building materials."
"We're doing a different sort of obstacle course, though one just as challenging. We're going to try to mend our hurt feelings. We've got some friction going on between us so I want to do something to fix that."
>You smile
>"Fine. Though it won't be nearly as fun."
"Anon?"
>"Yeah I'll do it whatever. So what are we doing exactly?"
"We're going to make some art."
>Rainbow and Anon both say in unison
>"Art?"
>You nod
"Yeah. I thought it might be a fun little bonding exercise. I don't like it when my friends are fighting with each other. So let's just have some fun for once."
>Both of them sit down, you along with them, taking out three pieces of construction paper
>You go to work, casually looking up now and then to see what Dash and Anon are working on
>Rainbow was drawing some sort of sports collage, featuring soccer balls, footballs, and the like
>Anon seemed to be drawing something more abstract, drawing a bunch of lines and using an entire array of colors
>He was kinda cute when he focused that hard on something
>You were drawing you escape world
>You had drawn it many times before but it never got tiring
>The trees, the castle, the ponies, the elements of harmo-
>Fuck you missed Equestria
>Maybe it wouldn't hurt to give Twilight a call
>It had been ages since you last wrote in that magic journal to her
>She'd probably know to fix this
>At least this was a relaxing get together with friends
>All of a sudden you see Rarity, Ponka Donk and Butterhush walking toward you
>"Good day. What are you three working on darling?"
"We're just drawing."
>Rarity smiles
>"Mind if we join you?"

>>28569254
go on...

>captcha jewish museum

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>>28569254
bump for more

>>28569822
lewd dubs

>>28568015
>most homogenous society in the world
No fucking wonder. Here you have to constantly be on the guard on everything. That being said: kurwa, jebowilem twoja matke.

>>28569948
>most homogenous society in the world
Only by ethnicity. In reality we are as much divided as nearly any other European country.
Also;
>kurwa, jebowilem twoja matke
Kurwa, jebałem twoją matkę*.

>>28569254
bump

>>28569822
>Sunset still has heat cycles
>Sunset starts sweating and getting wet.
>She sees Anon then she takes off her clothes in the middle of the hallway
>"I can't take it anymore! Anon rut me now, make me yours!"

I hope the writefag only went to sleep or work, and did not abandon us.

>>28539613
Can we all agree that SS have the tits?

>>28571779
Nah I'm still here. Just finishing up some things. I should be home in say an hour

>>28572044
bump.

>>28571791
Yes. Yes we can.

Hey guys. Sorry to inform you but everything is about to get really crazy for the next few days. I'm going to need to take a break for a while. But when I'm done sorting everything out I will just go back to the Sunset General and post more there. I'm sorry.

>>28567663
my class graduated 81, which was the largest class in decades A new student was the center of attention the moment they set foot on school property

>>28572718
It's cool.

>>28572718
FUCK!!! it's fine, FUCK YOU. nah i'm okay

>>28573168
There's not much point in keeping it bumped if the writer plans on posting in the Sunset General

Bump from 9

>>28575184

>>28572718
Don't take it to /SG/, just make a new thread.

>>28575184

>>28575884
Why not?

>>28576705
yeah, why not?

>>28542253
>Forgetting PEMDAS

What are you, some sort of idiot?

>>28572718
>saying sorry for taking care of his real life
Are you Canadian?

>>28570841
>Equestrian ponies have evolved to be sophisticated
>like humans they ideally form mates for life
>the body changes, but the internal cycles do not, upon traversing the mirror
>instead of periods - which is human heat - she has regular mammalian estrus
>calling her a brood mare will set her off, bot in a weird and in a good way

>>28578803

>>28579374

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>>28579887

You guys sure are persistant

>>28580711
YOUR DAMN RIGHT WE ARE

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>>28580711
you're doing god's work, anon

>>28580782
>>28581316
Ugh fine I'll keep writing. You faggots are lucky you're so endearing. But I'll do it tomorrow. For now I sleep.

>>28581431
Do you like the story that much?

>>28581457
What do you mean? I like it it's just life is being crazy right now

>>28581523
I guess the story is moving a bit fast.

>>28577291
Would you believe it, while student teaching last year, I happened through a classroom where students had made posters about math, including the order of operations.

In the same room, I spied a common core math quiz open on a laptop. After crunching the equation in my head, I realized that none of the options given would have yielded the correct answer, unless you had ignorantly solved it from left to right.
Fuck education though, right?

You know I think the sunshine
She feel how I feel, yea

>>28584380

>>28542014
Both.

>>28584380

thread's getting bumpy

>>28581846
That is fucking terrifying.

>>28584380

>>28588365

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>>28581523
We need the new chapter please!

>>28569254
Are they gonna draw lewd?

>>28584380

>>28584380

>>28542253
Unless i'm mistaken, is the answer 1,201 = F

>>28539613
Yes and if you wouldn't mind, shove your used underwear in my face and force me to smell them.

>>28591322
yeah thats it, at least i got the same answer

>>28581431
Maybe green today yes? Hope.

fug

>>28584380

fug

Fragrance of a riding soldier

holy sheito guys wheres writefag its been two days
he didn't live in florida did he?

>>28581523
Writefriend will be back r-right?

Page 9 bump in hope of write friend

is there at least a fucking pastebin for this?

We need him, more than ever...

>>28596235
Yeah. Right here. http://pastebin.com/Dd3J3Md6

Sorry for taking so long all. Let's get the next chapter out

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>>28569254
>You meant this to be a bonding exercise between the three of you, but oh well
"Sure."
>The three other girls sit down
"Although I don't actually have any other supplies. I could go get some mor-"
>Rarity laughs
"Darling, a girl always keeps art supplies on hand."
>Do they?
>She takes her bag and pulls out some paper and 2 packs of colored pencils
>You didn't even want to know
>The six of you spend the better part of an hour drawing until you finally are done
"What did you draw rainbow?"
>She giggles
>"Well what else would I draw? Something awesome!"
>She had drawn a picture of her cutie mark
>Though it was quite puzzling how she knew what it looked like, seeing as she was a human and all
"Anon?"
>Without saying anything, Anon flipped up a picture with a bunch of different colors making waves across the page, some overlapping to form new colors
>It was quite beautiful when you looked at it
"I love it."
>Anon just grumbles
>Why was he so grouchy right now?
>Rarity holds up her masterpiece
>It was some surreal drawing of pillows on top of a sky scraper making shapes
"Um... interesting... Rarity."
>She smiles wide, clearly not seeing the sarcasm in your words
>"Why thank you, I did think it was quite excellent."
"Fluttershy?"
>She quietly and cutely lifts up her picture to show a meadow with animals in it
>It looked like it was drawn by a second grader
>But hey, it was the thought that counts
>Just before you could get another thought in, a paper was shoved in your face
>"DO YOU LIKE IN SUNSET!? I used cake batter for this one!"
>She takes it away from your face, putting you into a coughing fit
"Y-yes Pinkie it's-"
>You break into another coughing fit again
"Beautiful. Please don't do that again."
>She smiles, not seeming to understand why people don't like having cake batter shoved in their face and starts to eat it
>The way Pinkie ate, it was amazing she wasn't the size of a cruise liner
>They all now stare at you
>"Well darling? What did you draw?"

>>28596859
Yiss.

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>>28596859
>You put the picture up to your chest to hide it
>You weren't thinking and drew something extremely personal
>Fluttershy smiles at you gently
>"Come on Sunset. It's not like any of us will judge you."
>You look down
"I know but-"
>Rarity puts her hand on your shoulder
>"Trust me sweetie. You have nothing to be ashamed of."
>You take a deep breath and finally give in, shutting your eyes tightly
>You just hear silence
>You slowly open your eyes to see you friends terrified faces, their mouths all agape
>Rarity is first to break the ice
>"W-well sweetie its... something."
>You hear some nervous laughter
>Fluttershy nervously chips in
>"U-um... all the red is... nice I guess?"
>Rainbow Dash was wearing the biggest fake smile in the world
>"Yeah. The red is... yeah."
"Well look at the time, I have to go!"
>You quickly get your things and bolt out of there
>That sure was stupid
>You couldn't drive out of the parking lot fast enough
>Why was it so hard to be interact with other people?
>As you parked into your drive you saw the magic journal that allowed you to communicate with Twilight
>What would you say?
>She probably didn't like you as much as the others...
>What a mess
>You open the journal and start writing
Twilight... or Princess Twilight... Or is it Princess of Friendship? shit... Anyway. I need some friendship advice, please respond post haste.
>You close it and it sends
>You didn't even have the balls to tell her what it was
>Not to mention you had Anon's tutoring session tomorrow
>Why were you so anxious about it?
>Every time you thought about it your heart skipped a beat

>>28596983
Did she draw lewd?

>>28597011
It must have been pretty dirty.

>>28597283
4 u

>>28596983
Is that all we get? You're going leave us just like that? I'm dying senpai.

>>28598324

I'll wait forever for you BG9

anyone wanna play wizard 101

>>28597283
>>28598324
>>28598871
>>28600449
Ughhhhh why are you guys so patient? I'm to lazy to write often. But I'll do it because I love you.

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>>28596983
>You put the magic journal back and go back into your home
>You still can't believe you made such an edgy picture
>Can't wake up
>You go up to your room and put on some music
>You needed to get your mind off of all the things that were going on
>But music wasn't going to be enough
>You needed a good way to relax
>You take your music box and turn on some bath water
>Time for a girl day
>You slowly take off your shirt and undo your bra, your breasts falling right out with a bounce
>You then slide your pants and yellow panties off
>You look down at them
>When did you get that wet?
>Why were you that wet?
>You knew the answer
>Time to partake in some guilty pleasures
>As the bath water finally filled to the top you turn off the flow and grab your shower head
>Time to take out a month's worth of frustration in a good 'ole fashion finger bang
>You sink into the tub, your trusty phalic object by your side
>You first take your fingers and shove them inside your snatch, warming your self up
>And man were you sensitive
>Just a touch and you already let out a little moan
>You slip you fingers deeper past your labia and made nice circular motions, imagining Anon was giving you a nice hard pounding
>Putting your whore body in it's place
>After a little finger bang your grab the shower head and press it right up in there, moving back and forth slowly while keeping your finger on your clit and rubbing in circles
"Oh Anon~"
>The things you wanted him to do to you
>Just ravage every single bit of you
>You keep it up, going faster and faster, your every repressed sexual desire playing throughout your mind in vivid detail
>Now it was almost time
>You place your legs on the sides of the tub, spreading wide and ready for the big finish
>Your hips were already swinging back in forth in anticipation and you moaned loudly, begging for the sweet release
>So... close... just a little... more

>>28601243
>After a few more good rubs you finally finish
>With one last moan you cum with the force of 10 billion suns
>Your lower lips begin to sizure violently, expelling all of your love in a single go
>You could feel yourself squirting your juice inside the water, your organs dancing from the pure bliss of release
>Water began to splash everywhere but you didn't care
>All you wanted was to satisfy your pure, primal desires
>After what seems like forever you finally come down, breathing hard
>That self love session was clearly long over due
>The water surrounding your crotch was slightly murky, indicating you had come quite a bit
>It was surely not healthy to be this pent up
>You hoist yourself back up, your heart still beating faster than an Indian drum
>Time to just enjoy the soak
>Man was your mind dirty
>Who knew you could be such a vixen?
>You sit in the water a while, just enjoying yourself
>You needed this
>You finally get out and put on nothing but a robe, enjoying how the soft fabric felt against your breasts and vulva
>Living alone was awesome
>You go and sit back on your bed, your book vibrating
>Get your mind out of the gutter Sunset!
>You open the book and check the message Twilight gave you
Just call me Twilight. What can I help you with Sunset?
>You put the pen in your mouth, thinking about what to say
I need help Twilight. You see... I may really like this boy, but I'm to afraid to go out with him. Not only that but another friend likes me and if I go out with the boy that friend is surely going to be hurt. I just don't know what to do. I'm so confused and just want this to stop for a while.
>You slam the book shut
>Well that was a downer
>Focus Sunset
>Girls night
>Or Sunset night, seeing as you had no friends
>feelsbadman.png

>>28550750
>anon not knowing how pinkie knew his name
>even though sunset just yelled out "Hey Anon!"

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>>28540277

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>>28601163
Well when you make good stories like this one, we can't help but want more. On that note, looking foward to see how this turns out.

>>28568291
Yes, in fact it is a bit worse depending on where you go. I had five people attack me when I was in middle school for sitting at the wrong table. Middle school students in America are fucking savages. Black, Mexican, Asian funnily enough, and White people.

>>28568628
It is true, weirdly enough one of the few things the media gets(begrudgingly) right, the southern and Midwest ones are worse, they push their Christian sharia law shit, and sense they are in red states, no one cares. If you ever have the misfortune of going to one, better make sure you white and know English very fucking well.

>>28570841
I want this.

>>28600479
Nobody senpai

>>28602529
I forgot about the whole fám shit

>>28542606
>glimmerfag going suicidal.

>>28601243
>>28601307
God damn I didn't expect that.

>>28601163
I'll suck your dick for more green

>>28603130
Well I suppose I'll do it the

>>28603127
Sexy times are fun times.

>>28603784
Based BG9 strikes again.

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>>28601307
>You get and and get some nail polish
>Time to look fabulous
>You start painting your nails when you receive a text on your phone
Darling are you alright? You ran away in such stress
>You type back
Yes, Rarity I'm fine
>Ding
Are you sure sweetie? You just ran away.
>You type again
Yes. I'm fine
>You click off your phone and start painting your nails again
>They looked so pretty in pink
>After girling out you watch a movie through most of the night before falling asleep
>The next morning you wake you get a chill down your spine
>You were late
>You were so, so, so late
>You quickly get up and put on all of your gear
>Welp there goes your perfect attendance record
>You slap on your bag and book it to school going in to your least favorite class, Calc
>Great job Sunset, only 4 hours late too school because you're a stress case
>You nervously make your way in and sit down at the back of the class, trying to hide
>"Late are you Sunset Shimmer? Not up to your usual standard"
>Urge to kill rising
>"Perhaps you were off studying and would like to solve this problem?"
>You fucking bitch
"Y-yes m'am"
>You go over to the board and, to her surprise, solve it perfectly
>"Sit down shimmer"
>Boy was she salty
>Score one for shimmy
>You sit back down, vindicated
>At least the good part of coming in late was that there was only 15 minutes left of class
>You wondered how Anon was doing right now
>You blush, thinking off all the fantasies you had last night
>Sunset you were a bad girl
>After thinking good, pure, Christian thoughts, you get focused again
>You were going to tutor him again today huh?
>Should be fun
>Hopefully he wouldn't be alk moody
>All of a sudden your heart started beating faster when a certain little though crosses your mind
>Would you be able to do something so forward?
>But Rainbow Dash...
>"Sunset are you listening?"
"I'LL ASK HIM OUT."
>Fuck
>Fuck
>Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
>You had been so lost in your thoughts that you just said that out loud

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Bump keep it up