Queen Umbra Thread

Part of me is really tempted to post all those Alt Anon parts again

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>You are Umbra
>Opening your eyes, you find yourself laying on the crystal floor of a strange room
"Where am I?"
>Looking around you can't help but feel a sense of familiarity
>This feels like your castle
>Only more ominous
"Luna! Celestia!" You yell "Show yourself Whorse!"
>...
>Nothing
"Celestia guess what I just did with Anonymous!" You yell "We just made love! The entire time I had Anonymous screaming in pleasure!"
>...
>Still nothing
"Maybe they aren't here after all."
>You look around
>Really there is nothing here
>Behind you is just a wall
>And in front of you is a pair of large doors
>No windows what so ever
"Well I suppose I have no choice then."
>Walking up to the doors, you use your magic to open them
>As soon as the door cracks open, they both fly open
>You jump back just in time so that they don't hit you
"What is going on here?!"
>Looking outside you see that it's raining heavily out there
>Stepping outside you find that you are indeed on top of a tower
>And this tower is looking over an empire that looks like your
>Only you know this isn't yours
"Where am I?!"
>Your ears perk up as you hear something more above you
"Is that the sound of swords clashing?"
>Looking to your left, you see a ramp leading further up

Fuck it, I'm doing it

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>>28325048
>Why do you feel so uneasy?!
>You just shared a passionate night with your beloved
"I should not be having this dream!"
>The sound of metal clashing still rings off in the distance
"I suppose I have no other choice..."
>Walking along the ramp, you continue to look out at the horizon
>You can see a wall around the outskirts of this empire
>You can even make out buildings that are in the same locations as the ones in your empire
>This can't be your empire, can it?
>You shake your head
>No. It raining
>It never rains in your empire
>And if this is your castle, then this is wrong
>You don't have anything like this at the top of your castle
>There is a secret staircase that leads to the room that holds the crystal that powers the barrier
>But it doesn't lead to this!
Continuing up the ramp, the sounds of metal clashing get's louder
>But the rain is also picking up
>At the end of the ramp, you see that there are stairs that lead up
>There is a sense of dread before you, telling you to turn back
>Casting it aside you start to climb the steps

I really liked these parts, and I want to start the thread with these

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>>28325053
>Walking further up the steps, you watch as lighting dances through the sky
>Upon reaching the top, you stop at look at the scene before you
>It's Anonymous!
>He's dressed up in a new set of armor
>You can't really make it out due to the rain
>Looking on, he swings his sword around and avoids another strike
>But when you look at who he's fighting, fear begins to stir within you
>It's another Anonymous!
"What?!"
>He's dressed in an armored blue coat
>And his sword is much slimmer than your Anonymous's sword
>That must be the alternate Anonymous that your beloved talked about!
>But why is he here?!
>The two swing their blade with such speed that when both their blades collide, the rain around them falls on them
>They were so fast that they stopped the rain from touching them
>You watch as the two continue to try to gain the advantage on one another
>But something grab your attention
>The other Anonymous is grinning!
>Looking at their swords you see that they are getting red in the middle
>Before Anonymous can react the other one throws their sword up
>And with it Anonymous's Rebellion goes flying into the air
>No...
>Time seems to slow down as you watch his sword fall
>Looking back, you turn back in time to see the other Anonymous run your beloved through with his sword

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>>28325055
"NOOOOOOOO!" You cry out "ANONYMOUS!"
>Your beloved is holding the sword from going any deeper inside him with both his hands
>But the damage is already done
>Blood falls from his wound
>When he coughs and you see blood come out
>The other Anonymous just stares coldly at him
>You close your eyes and shake your head
"STOP IT, LUNA!" You scream as the tears start to form in your eyes "STOP SHOWING ME THIS!"
>"Umbra..." You hear Anonymous speak
>Opening your eyes, you at your beloved to see him reaching out to you
"My love..."
>"Umbra..." He says as he coughs up more blood "I'm sorry. I failed to save you..."
>You see the other Anonymous smile before he pulls the blade out of your beloved
>The alternate Anonymous looks over at you as you watch Anonymous falls to the ground
>When your beloved crashes into the ground the water splashes all around him
"Anonymous!" You cry as you run over to him
>Coming up to him, you shake him
"Anonymous, wake up!" You say as tears fall from your eyes "Please!"
>The alternate Anonymous walks over and pulls Rebellion out of the ground before he begins to walk away
"Why?" You ask "Why would I even have this nightmare? This shouldn't be happening!"
>You notice that Anonymous begin to stir, but before he can get up, the other Anonymous comes charging back with Rebellion ready to strike through Anonymous
"NO, NOT AGAIN!" You plead with him "STOP!"
>But before he hits, you wake up screaming
"ANONYMOUS!"

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>>28325062
>You are Anon
>"ANONYMOUS!" You hear Umbra scream out
>Your eyes shoot open and you leap out of bed
>Tumbling down the stairs, you grab Rebellion off the rack
"Is Celestia here?!" You ask with your eyes still closed "Come on then Celestia, it time to cement this break up!"
>Opening your eyes, you see that everything is still quiet
>Your bedroom is dark
>"Umbra, what's the mat-?" You say as you turn around only to be stopped by the sight of Umbra
>She's still in bed
>Shaking like a leaf
>Tears are falling from her face
>She looks like she's been scared half to death
"Umbra what-?!"
>The doors burst open and Sombra and Eris come through
>"What in the world is going on in here?!" Sombra asks "Do you realize what time it- Argh! Anonymous put some clothes on!"
>"Yeah you love birds." Eris says before yawning "Don't you think it's time to give it a rest?"
"Shut up!" You yell back "Look at your sister!"
>Sombra and Eris look over to Umbra
>She hasn't stopped shaking, nor has she looked at any of you
>She just has a blank stare as she whimpers to herself
>"Sister..." Sombra says "Anonymous, what happened to her?"
"I don't know..."
>Climbing back up the steps, you climb back into bed
>Scooting up in front of her, you cup her cheeks to get her to look at you
"Umbra, honey, look at me." You say softly "What's the matter?"
>Umbra finally looks at you, but it seems to upset her more as more tears fall and she starts to whimper harder
>"A-Anonymous..." Umbra cries out as she throws her fore legs around you, pulling you into the tightest hug you've ever had

>>28325066
>You're taken by surprise
>"P-Please promise that you will not leave me!" Umbra sobs as she holds you tighter "Please..."
>You slowly wrap your arms around her
"I would never think of such a thing." You whisper into her ear as you hold her "Umbra, what happened? Where did all this come from?"
>Umbra remains quiet, but her whimpers get louder
>You run your hand down her back
"It's okay, Umbra..." You tell her "Whatever it was, you're safe now."
>"Anonymous, I had a nightmare." Umbra says through her tears
>You look back to Sombra
>"Was it Luna?" Sombra asks softly as not to further upset his sister
>"I-I do not know." Umbra says "I was in a castle. It felt like mine, but it was not."
>She sniffles a bit
>"I only had one way to go, out two doors that led to the outside." Umbra says "When I was out there, I saw what looked like my empire, but just as before it felt different. It had this ominous feel to it."
>"I saw a ramp and I climbed up it to find some stairs." She says as she begins to shake again "That is when I..."
>She starts to cry again
"Umbra..." You say holding her
>"That is when I saw you, my love." Umbra says "Fighting the other you that you talked about..."
>She saw Alt Anon?!
>"But he got the advantage of you!" Umbra cries out "And I could only watch in horror as he ran you through with his sword!"
>What the hell?
>"You started bleeding and coughing up your own blood!" Umbra sobs "The last thing you said to me was that you were sorry and that you failed to save me!"
"Umbra, you can-"
>"He pulled the sword out of you and you fell to the ground! After that he took Rebellion and began to walk away" Umbra says "I thought he was done so I ran to your side, only for him to come charging back with Rebellion and-!"
"Enough Umbra!" You say as you hug her tighter
>Umbra stops and begins to weep once again
"It's okay, Umbra. It's okay..." You tell her "It was just a nightmare..."
>At least you hope it is...

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>>28325071
>You open your eyes slowly to see that the barrier is still intact
>"Welcome back." Your draconequus says "Did everything go as planned?
>You close the Book of Dreams and stand up
>Looking off at the empire in the distance, you can't help but smile
"Yes. The seeds of fear are planted in her mind." You tell her "In the future we will use that to our advantage to get what we want from her and her beloved."
>"Will that be anytime soon?" She asks you
>You shake your head
"No, we are still dealing with the annoying bugs known as the Celestia and Luna." You say "When we crush them and take over Equestria, we will decide where to go from there."
>"Of course." She says "Forgive me for asking such an idiotic question."
"I also want the perfect opportunity to where I know they will surrender easily and obey my orders."
>You look back at her
"Are you certain that they could not detect us?" You ask her "I do not need their draconequus telling them anything."
>The draconequus nods her head
>"I am quite certain that she could not sense me." She states "This barrier around us and the storm around us are the perfect cover."
"Good. Now let us return home, hurry up and create a portal." You order her "I have a warm bed and a beautiful queen that require my attention."
>The draconequus bows
>"As you command, my lord." She says as she snaps her fingers
>A swirling vortex appears behind you
>Looking back at the lesser empire, you grip the sheath of blade, Yamato
"Soon, Soon you all will know my power..." You say "The power of a true king..."
>You are...
>You chuckle
>You know who you are
>Turning around, you enter the portal with the draconequus before it closes behind you

>>28325080
>Day five
>...
>You are Celestia
>Waking up from your slumber, you wipe the sleep from your eyes
>Looking around the dark tent, you glance over to Luna
>She still sleeping
>Getting up from your bed, you walk over and nudge her
"Luna, it's time to wake up." You say "We need to raise the sun and lower the moon."
>Luna begins to groan as she stirs from her slumber
>When she finally wakes, the two of you exit your tent and make your way over to a clearing
>Using your magic, you both perform the ritual you're so used to
>As the moon falls and the sun rises, you feel more awake
>With the sun firmly in place in the sky, you return to camp
>You wonder how Marie is doing
>Heading to Twilight's tent, you open the flap to see all the girls starting to wake up
>Except something is wrong
"Where is Marie?!"
>Cadance and Twilight look around before their eyes widen
>Pulling your head out of their tent you're about to call for some of your ponies to start a search
>But you stop yourself when you see her
>Marie is standing near the outskirts of the wastes, looking out to it
>You walk up behind her
"Marie? What's the matter?" You ask "We thought you had ran off.
>She shakes her head before turning to you
>"Princess, the storm has cleared." Marie says "We may proceed now."
>A smile forms on your face
"Are you sure?"
>She nods her head
>"We have a short time before another storm starts." Marie says "If we go now, we can reach the empire by tomorrow morning."
"Finally!" You say "It's time to pack up everypony! Make sure to eat a quick breakfast because we are moving out!"

>>28325086
>You are Anon
>When the morning rolled around, you and Umbra remained in bed for a few hours before you got dressed for the day
>that Umbra was pretty quiet this morning
>And she always stuck close to you
>Hell she refused to even be in a different room than you
>Last night really hit her
>All this because she had a nightmare that another you from a parallel dimension killed you
>She loves you so much
>When you got to the dining room, you saw Sombra and Eris waiting there
>Taking a seat at the table, you continued to hold Umbra's hoof
>"How are you feeling this morning, sister?" Sombra asks
>"I am doing better." Umbra says "I just do not want Anonymous to leave my side."
>"You were really spooked last night." Eris says "Do you have any clue why you had that dream?"
>Umbra shakes her head
>As she does, the grip she has on your had tightens
>"No. I don't." Umbra says "I have never thought about that Anonymous ever in my free time. For him to show up out of the blue, it troubles me."
>Same could be said about you
>"Anonymous, I think it is time you tell me what happened that day." Sombra says "I only know of some parts, but I would like to know more."
>"Same here!" Eris says "This kinda thing seems like it's up my alley

Don't know if anyone is lurking, but I'm going to bed

>tfw sad because last thread didn't live to a ripe old age

>>28325341
It's is oke friends, we are here for you

>>28325910
Thanks, friend.

>>28325341

still reading still bumping

>>28328379
I shall aid you friend

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>>28325341
>You are a loyal guard of Queen Umbra
>Gallows is the name
>Currently you're sitting in one of the many outpost out here in the wastes on lookout duty
>They're little hidden outpost that are built into the snow for two
>You grabbed your orders from Stormhoof and used a teleportation spell to arrive to your post
>After getting all settled in, you took your seat
>"Another slow day out here in the wastes huh?" You friend Anderson says
"Looks that way." You say "It sucks that we actually have to pay attention and look out for princesses."
>You been told by Captain Stormhoof that Captain Marie has betrayed the empire and that she will soon be leading Princess Celestia to our doorstep
>Your job is to send word back to the empire if you see anything
>And this goes for all the other lookout teams out here
"Did you at least bring some cards?"
>He smiles as he pulls the deck out of his bag
>"Yup we should be good for-"
>You throw your hoof up when you hear something loud
"Wait. Do you hear that?"
>You both remain silent
>The sound of many hoofsteps echo through the air
"Oh come on, really?!" You say before running up to the window
>Looking off in the distance, you see her
>Princess Celestia!

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>>28329550
>Along side her is Princess Luna, Princess Twilight, and you're sure the pink one is Princess Cadance
>And finally, the treacherous dog named Marie
>You notice that as they walk Marie is pointing to something
>You don't understand what until she points right at you
>The princess looks right at you before squinting her eyes
>She wouldn't...
>"She's telling them where we are!" Anderson says "Where we all are!"
>Bitch!
"Dammit! I need to send word back to Captain Stormhoof!"
>Turning around you pull out a parchment and quill and you start to write the letter
>"You better hurry!" Anderson says "Princess Celestia and a few of her guards are walking right up to us!"
>Damn, damn, damn, DAMN!
"Again let everypony know! Marie is telling them where we-!"
>You drop your quill as the roof of your outpost is ripped off by a golden glow
>Not wasting any time you quickly roll up and seal the letter
>Looking up, you see Princess Celestia, her guards, and Marie looking down on you
>A warm smile is etched on her face
>"Marie was right, there are ponies hiding out here." The princess states "Hello, little ponies. I implore you to surrender peacefully. I promise you will not be harmed if you do."
>You look over to Marie
"How can you betray your own brothers and sisters!?" You ask her "You'll pay for this traitor!"
>She looks over at the letter
>"He's planing on sending word back to Umbra." Marie says "I suggest you stop them if you want the drop on her."
>"We can't have that now, can we?" Celestia says "Please step away from the letter."
>You look over to your friend before nodding your head
>"For our Queen."
>Using your magic, you send the letter back home
>You quickly reach for your weapons before the princess's guards jump in to subdue you

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>>28329840
>You are Anon
>After telling Sombra and Eris exactly what happened you leaned back and let out a sigh
>You really hate thinking back to that day
>"Wow, it seems like things got pretty out of hand." Eris says before smiling "It would've been a party if I was there."
>"So our Princess Celestia disregarded our Star Swirls warning and traveled to the mirror Equestria just to see an alternate version of myself and because of that our worlds almost merged?" Sombra asks "Really how foolish can she be!?"
>You nod your head
"She wanted to break things off with that Sombra because she had me, but she didn't want to leave him to deal with that worlds Celestia and Luna by himself."
>"And that only made things worse." Umbra says "In the process they somehow got Luna to destroy the mirror leading to that world."
>Umbra sighs
>"She is such an idiot!" Umbra says "If it weren't for her going back over there then-"
"Then we wouldn't have met..."
>Umbra sighs
>She's just irritated about this whole Alt Anon situation
>"Meaning there's no way to get back over there, or for them to come to us." Sombra says looking at you "He can not get revenge on you now."
"That still doesn't answer why Umbra had that nightmare." You say "Why would he-?"
>"QUEEN UMBRA!" You hear what sounds like Stormhoof "A situation has arisen!"
>You see him come galloping into the dining room
>"What is it?!" Umbra asks as you all turn to look at him
>"Princess Celestia is coming!" Stormhoof says as he holds out a scroll "At this rate she'll be here by tomorrow morning!"

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Alright work. I get home at ten or earlier if I'm lucky so just keep it alive for now.

Now that I'm moving along we should get the one or two parts in the morning and then one at night. I want to strive for five or six parts a day

>>28330585
Good god, good luck

bump for plot progression.

Uh

Well cool since they're training the new guy I didn't even have to be there!

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Even when not playing video games, I end up finding a puzzle game made by Nintendo back in the '80's.

>>28332226

Why is Celestia such a jew

>>28330465
>"WHAT?!" Umbra yells as she lets go of your hand
>"How do you know this?!" Sombra asks "What has transpired?!"
>Stormhoof hands Umbra the letter
>Umbra unrolls the parchment
>As she reads through it you see that look of fear getting replaced with a look of anger
>Well at least she doesn't look sad or afraid anymore
>"Damn her!" Umbra shouts "I hate that damn mare!"
>"Celestia?" Sombra asks
>"Well her yes, but Marie!" Umbra says "That traitor is showing Celestia where all our lookouts are!"
>You see Umbra stand back up
>"Stormhoof, how many pairs have returned?" Umbra asks
>"Out of the thirty?" Only eight so far." Stormhoof states
>"She capturing them all!" Sombra says "No doubt to use them as leverage against you."
>Umbra walks over to the window before letting out a sigh
>"We need to start the evacuation." She says "Find Cyprus and Arthas, and when you do, sound the alarm."
>Stormhoof nods his head before taking off
>Umbra looks back at you and Sombra
>"Come now, we are going to be busy with this all day." Umbra says "Anonymous we need to return upstairs. Sombra and Eris can you wait for us downstairs?"
>They nod their head before you follow Umbra out the dinning room

>>28335146
>After getting dressed in your armor, you and Umbra headed downstairs to meet up with Sombra and Eris before exiting the castle
>As soon as you stepped outside, you could tell the atmosphere of the empire felt different
>Bells were echoing throughout the empire
>Ponies are being instructed to head to The Grotto
>"Come on, we have to get over there as well." Umbra says
>Walking past the groups of ponies, you hear the guards try to keep everyone calm
>Sometime you see the glares they give you
>"Just ignore it, Anonymous." Umbra says
>Upon reaching The Grotto, you already see a line of ponies coming out of it
>Heading down the stairs, you come across a chaotic scene
>Ponies of the high class variety are trying to get through that set of sturdy doors
>Arthas is there and is trying to keep some form of control
>"Where is Queen Umbra!?" One ponies yells
>"How long are we expected to stand here?!" Another one yells
>"Who is going to look after our fortunes?!" One yells
>"Where is that blasted human!?" Another one yells "It is because of him that we are-!"
>"SILENCE!" Umbra screams out
>Everyone goes quiet as they turn to look at Umbra
>Holy shit that was so loud you felt the cave shake
>"Not another word about this being my beloved's fault." Umbra says "Say another word about him and I can guarantee you that you will not be using that tongue anymore."

>>28334506
She just wants her human back
Also she hates Umbra

off to bed

>>28335492

>>28336300

Bumperino

>>28335404
>The ponies in the room shut their mouths as you, Umbra, Sombra, and Eris walk over to Arthas
>"Stormhoof informed me what had happened." Arthas says "I never thought Marie would betray us like that."
>"It feels as if she wants to help Celestia defeat me." Umbra says "It matters not, she will pay for this."
>Umbra looks at the door as her horn lights up
>You watch as the locks become undone
>When Umbra undoes the final one, the doors slowly open up to all of you
>Looking down the hall, you see a long tunnel that stretches as far as you can see
>The are crystal in the ceiling that are lighting up
>"This is where you will go, this tunnel leads to a safe haven where there is food, water, and supplies for the night." Umbra says "You are to remain there until the battle is over."
>"My queen, what if you do not win this?" A pony asks "Then what?"
>Umbra looks back at the pony
>"We will win." Umbra says "Now get moving, we don't have time to waste. DD!"
>You see DD leap off the ceiling
>"Yes, Queen Umbra?" He asks
>"Make sure the ponies get there and get settled in." Umbra orders him
>He nods his head before motioning the ponies to follow him down the tunnel
>As the ponies file in, Umbra turns to you
>"Come on, we need to help ponies get over here." Umbra says "Sombra can you help Arthas here?"
>Sombra nods his head
>"Eris, you are with us." Umbra tells her "You can get ponies over here quickly."
>Eris nods her head before you all head out

It's supposed to be my day off, but lol a coworker wanted to take his vacation so I have to go in today
At least I have tomorrow and Tuesday off

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Okay I'm off. Keep it alive until I get back at 11 or so.

I'm a little upset

>>28338699

>>28338699
Why

>>28332591
what is that?

>>28340728
It's called the Ten Billion Barrel. It's a puzzle toy Nintendo made in the 80's.
Here's a link explaining more.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nintendo_tumbler_puzzle

>>28339798

>>28341660

>>28340501
I didn't want to go in today since it was my day off

>>28343101
I got your back Rager

Bumperino

>>28338469
>You are Lance
>"B-But Lance!" Cynthia cries out
"No buts, you're going with Ariadne, and that's that!"
>Currently you're packing up her things for the evacuation
"Dammit." You say for yourself "Why couldn't that sun princess wait another day!?"
>Last night was so perfect
>After you came home with Ariadne, you tucked Cynthia into bed and got cozy with Ariadne
>One thing led to another and you ended up in bed with her
>From there? Let's just say you won't need your V-Card anymore
>Speaking of Ariadne...
>She raced back home to collect her things for the evacuation
>"I don't want to go!" Cynthia yells "I want to stay with you! What if something happens to you!?"
>Tears begin to fall from your sisters face
>"I-I don't want to be alone..." Cynthia whimpers out
>You sigh before walking over to her
>Sitting down in front of her, you pull her in
"Listen to me, baby sister. I'm going to come back from this, I always do." You tell her "Remember the prison? I came back from that, I'm sure the princesses can't be any worst than Alastor."
>Her cries soften
>"And you'll be with Ariadne!" You say "She'll be with and keep you safe, while I can't."
>Cynthia begins to settle down
>"Don't forget about Credo and Eris and Jaina. They'll all be there with you!" You tell her "You'll never be alone."
>Cynthia looks up at you before smiling
>You wonder how your friends are handling this

>>28343103
>Climax
Hmm...

>>28342179

>>28342668
that sucks

>>28344794
bump

>>28345342

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>>28343308
>You are Biggs
>"Mom come on!" You yell "You don't need to pack everything! The house will still be here afterwards!"
>"I don't want to take any chances!" Your mom yells "Who knows how much of a mess those princesses will make!"
>You groan
>Hearing a knock on the door you run over and open it to see Wedge waiting on the other side
>"Hey Biggs, how it going?" He asks
>"Biggs! Where are those baby photos I took of you!?" Your mom shouts "I'm not leaving without them!"
"That's how good it's going." You say looking at him "How about your folks?"
>"All packed up and ready to go." Wedge says "I ran into Ariadne on the way here, it seems that Lance and Cynthia are having a bad time splitting up."
>You nod your head
"Figured as much." You say "Cynthia hates being away from Lance."
>"She also told me that Anon and Queen Umbra weren't at the castle." Wedge says "I assume they're helping with the evacuation."
"We should get on that." You say before looking back "Mom! I'm going to help Queen Umbra with the evacuation! You better be packed up when I get home!"
>"Don't you raise your voice at me!" Mom yells "I'm still your mother!"
>Rolling your eyes, you get dressed in your armor and head out

>>28347827
bump for biggs's mom

Gonna take a shower real quick, when I get back the parts will come

>>28348696

>>28349339
That's a long-ass shower

>>28347827>You are Anon
>"Queen Umbra, please be careful." Sasha the griffon says to you and Umbra as her and her husband exit their shop "We don't want anything to happen to you two."
>Umbra smiles
>"Do not worry, Anonymous will keep me safe, and I will be doing the same for him." Umbra says
"Yup, can't let Umbra get hurt now can we?"
>Sasha smiles before turning to Eris
>"So we just go with her?" Sasha asks
>Umbra nods her head
>"She'll get you to The Grotto quickly." Umbra says "Eris?"
>Eris nods her head before walking up to the two
>"Ready?" Eris asks
>They nod there heads before Eris puts her paws on top of their heads
>You wave goodbye as they are teleported away
>Umbra lets out another tired sigh
"Come on, Umbra, how about we take a break?" You suggest "We've been at this all morning."
>Umbra looks over to you with a weary expression before nodding her head
>Walking over to a park bench, you both take a seat
"Oh man, this has been a crazy day." You say "To think we almost have everypony out of here."
>"Everypony has been working hard to get everypony out." Umbra says "We should have the empire evacuated by the end of the day."
>It helps that Biggs and Wedge are doing their part to help you two as well
>You still haven't seen Lance though
>He's probably still busy with his sister
>You look up at the sky
"That's soon." You say "I take it we're going to bed right after?"
>"We can have dinner before bed." Umbra says "But yes, I think it is best we get to bed early."
>Umbra gets back up
>"Well I think that good for a little break." Umbra says "Come on, Anonymous. We need to see Rodin."
"For?"
>"I still haven't received my leg armor!" Umbra grumbles out "We need to have a talk."
>Shrugging your shoulders you get up and follow her

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>>28350971
I was thinking about the universe

>>28350982

>>28350982
We are infinitely small specks of dust in a universe that would barely notice if we disappeared, and if we were wiped from the earth our history would span barely a fraction of the lifetime of the earth

>>28350972
>After arriving at Rodin, you and Umbra walked in to find the place empty
>You could hear the music from The Gates of Tartarus quietly going on inside the place
>Walking past the velvet rope, you and Umbra walked into the main area of the restaurant
>Looking towards the center of the room. you see Rodin sitting there smoking a cigar
>"Rodin!" Umbra says as she marches up to him "Where is my leg armor?!"
>He takes a quick puff before blowing rings of smoke out
>"They aren't done yet." He says
>"You do realize the princesses will be here tomorrow, right?" Umbra says "I need them now!"
>Rodin takes another puff before blowing a smoke spear through the wings
>"Chill, Umbra. You know I've never let you down before." Rodin says "Don't worry they'll be done by tomorrow."
>"How soon?" Umbra asks in a more serious tone
>"If everything goes right? I should have them to you before you even have to fight." Rodin says
>Umbra shakes her head
>"Very well." Umbra says "I better get them first thing tomorrow morning."
>Rodin nods his head before Umbra turns to you
>"Let us go, Anonymous." Umbra says "We need to continue helping with the evacuation."

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>>28352296
>After exiting Rodin's place, you and Umbra continues to help ponies evacuate the empire
>With help from Biggs, Wedge, and all the other guard ponies, you ended up getting almost everypony out
"There aren't that many left it seems." You say looking over to the line of ponies heading in
>"Man, I'm tired!" Biggs says as he collapses on the ground
>You see Wedge rub his neck
>"At least the empire is almost evacuated." Wedge says "Looks like I'll be going to sleep right after this."
>Looking up at the sky you see the moon hanging high above you
>You see Sombra come up the stairs before he lets out a sigh of relief
>"Such an exhausting day." Sombra says
>"So did everything go well?" Umbra asks
>Sombra nods his head
>"Yes, most ponies have already been escorted to the safe haven." Sombra says "I assume this is the last of them?"
>"Hopefully." Umbra says "When these ponies go I'll send Eris with them and seal the doors."
>"Wait!" You hear a voice call out
>You all turn your head to see a group of ponies approaching
>It's Lance, Cynthia, and Ariadne
>And behind them is Biggs's mom and Eliza

Because of the new guy fucking off I have to work. I going to ask for my second day off tomorrow and if they don't give it to me, Well lets just say there won't be huge pauses during the day. I do need to go back to school after all

Alright, I'm off to get angry at work. Keep it alive Anons

>>28352018
thats deep mang

>>28354326
2deep

>>28354992
4u

>>28355493
Fug

>>28356314

>>28353184
>"Lance?" Biggs says "Where were you today?! We could have used some help!"
>He nods before scratching the back of his head
>"Yeah I'm sorry about that guys." Lance says "I just wanted to spend the day with these two."
>Looking at Cynthia, you see her clinging to Lance
>"It's no trouble." Umbra says "You should be the last ones anyway."
>You take a look around
>Now that the bell has stopped ringing, this place feels like a ghost town
>"Did you get everything, mom?" Biggs asks
>She nods her head
>"I finally found your baby pictures! I really didn't want to lose those." She says "You were such a cute baby!"
>You, Lance, and Wedge all laugh at Biggs
>"It looks as if the line is clearing up. There are no ponies in the stairwell" Sombra says "We should head downstairs."
>"Yeah." Lance says "Let's get going."

>>28357469
>Entering the grotto, you head down the stairs to find Arthas sending another group through
>Beside Arthas is Jaina and Eris
>"Queen Umbra, are there any ponies behind you?" Arthas asks
>Umbra shakes her head
>"No, I believe this is the last group." Umbra says
>"L-Lance..." Cynthia whimpers out "I don't wanna go..."
>"Cynthia, we talked about this." Lance says "You promised you wouldn't cry as long as we spent the day together."
>You see a pout form on her face
>"I need you to be brave." Lance says
>"But I-I can't!" Cynthia cries
>"I promise I'll be okay." Lance reassures her "Anon, Biggs, Wedge, and even Captain Arthas will be there to keep me out of trouble."
"You can count on us, Cynthia."
>"We won't let anything happen to him." Biggs says
>She looks over to you before hugging Lance one more time
>"Now go with Ariadne." Lance says "She'll keep you safe."
>Cynthia wipes her eyes before turning around and hopping onto Ariadne's back
>"Take care of her." Lance tells Ariadne
>Ariadne nods her head and kisses him before looking at Umbra
>"Lady Umbra, please be careful." Ariadne says with tears in her eyes
>Her too huh?
>"Do not worry, Ariadne. I will." Umbra says "Believe in me."
>The two hug
>"Now as Lance said, be brave for Cynthia." Umbra says "She needs you."
>"Eris, protect them." Umbra tells her "With everything you have."
>"I won't let you down." Eris says "Good luck, Umbra."
>After everyone says their goodbyes to one another, you watch as the girls enter the tunnel with Eris leading the way
>As Umbra begins to shut the door you watch as Cynthia looks back to her brother
>The two are able to wave at each other one last time before the door closes

Tomorrow is the day Anons

>>28357345

>>28358728

>>28359463

Bumperino

>>28361008

>>28361029

>>28357506
>After Umbra closed the door, you all stood there in silence
>That was it...
>The empire was evacuated
>And now it's just you and the guards inside the empire
>"So what now?" Biggs asks
>"We get some rest." Arthas says "I need you four to be ready for tomorrow."
>Umbra nods her head
>"Arthas is right." Umbra says "You should all return home and get some sleep. Make sure when you wake up, you come to the castle."
>"That's where you'll give a speech to the guard?" Sombra asks her
>Umbra smiles
>"We need to rally their spirits somehow." Umbra says
>"Alright then you four are to meet me at the castle."Arthas says
>You and your friends nod your heads before you split up
>As you, Umbra, and Sombra walk through the empty streets of the empire you can't help but feel chills
>This place feels so eerie without any ponies around
>There are guard ponies moving supplies throughout the street
>After returning to the castle, you, Umbra, and Sombra scrounged around for something to eat
>It actually surprised you when Sombra actually whipped up something to eat
>After a quiet steak dinner, you returned to your room with Umbra

>>28362418
night bump

>>28362811
Page 9

>>28362418
>After removing your armor and placing it on it's rack, you slump over to your bed
>"It's so quiet outside." Umbra says "I have not seen my empire like this in quiet some time."
>She turns around and sits in bed
>Climbing up the stairs, you see Umbra pat the spot next to her
>"Come here, my love." Umbra says "I want to cuddle before we return to sleep."
"Alright, Umbra." You say as you climb into bed "Come here."
>Umbra smiles before she nuzzles up to you
>You both remain silent as you run your hand up and down her back
"So this is it, huh?" You say "You and my ex are finally going to meet face to face tomorrow."
>"I actually can not wait." Umbra says "It will be nice to finally plant my hoof in her face."
>You chuckle before letting out a sigh
"You know I'm actually proud of you." You say "This morning you were too afraid to speak, but after you got that letter, it felt like you complete forgot about your nightmare last night."
>"I did not forget about it." Umbra says "I just put it aside because we need to deal with Celestia."
>Umbra frowns
>"Speaking about that nightmare, I need to talk to Luna tomorrow." Umbra says
"Do you think she did it?"
>Umbra remains silent
>"I do not know what to believe." Umbra says "All I know is that it felt like I was not alone last night."
>Damn
>You really hope Luna didn't do that
>...
>You shake your head before turning Umbra's head to look at you
"I love you."
>Umbra looks at you with a small smile on her face
>"I love you too." Umbra says "No matter what happens tomorrow, we'll be together forever."
>The two of you kiss one more time before settling into bed
>Umbra pulls the blanket up over you two
>Wrapping your arms around Umbra, you pull her into you before falling asleep

>>28363347

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>>28363675
>The Final Day
>...
>You already feel something moving you around
>"Anonymous, wake up, my love." Umbra says to you "It's time to get ready."
>You slowly open your eyes to see the ceiling
>The sun has yet to rise as the room is still pretty dark
>Celestia hasn't risen the sun yet
>Letting out a yawn, you stretch
>That was a good rest
>You feel refreshed and ready for today
>Looking over to your right, you see a still naked Umbra next to you
>She smiles before laying beside you
>"I apologize for waking you so early." Umbra whispers "I just thought we should get ready here soon."
>You nod your head
"It's alright Umbra." You tell her "We had to get up eventually."
>"We can stay like this for a moment." Umbra says before looking out the window "It's snowing just a little bit, so the ponies on the wall should be able to alert us if they arrive."
"Well when you say that..." You say before you pull her in "Then I'm not opposed to the idea."
>Umbra giggles as she rest her head against you
>After about thirty minutes of keeping the warm mare against, you both got up and got dressed in your armor
>When you were all set, you looked back at Umbra who came out of the bathroom wearing her armor
>The armor she had on covered most of her neck, chest, and back while leaving her belly exposed
>The only thing missing is her leg armor

Okay so I passed out while typing this so I think I'm gonna go in for an early night
>tfw been up since eight in the morning and it is now three thirty

bed bump

>>28357345

>>28366067

>>28366498

>>28364895
"I do not know how you do it." You say "But you look amazing in that armor."
>Umbra smiles
>"We both know I look good in whatever I wear." Umbra says with a wink "It just comes with being a queen."
>You chuckle before you hear a knock at the door
>Walking over to the doors, you open it to find an armored Sombra on the other side
>"Good, you two are ready." Sombra says "I believe Arthas and the boys are here."
>Looking over at the steps, you hear hoofsteps in the stairwell
>As they get louder, you see the heads of your friends poke out
>"The empire is so quiet that I heard them coming up to the doors." Sombra says before looking at Umbra's legs "Still nothing?"
>"Rodin said they would be done soon." Umbra says "Before the fight, in his words."
>"My queen." Arthas says as he walks up to you "The guard is all set at the front gates. Stormhoof, Cyprus, and Jin are all set."
>"Good, now all of you follow me." Umbra says as she walks over to the stairwell "There is not any time to waste."
>You follow her over there before she stops at the wall next to the stairwell
>She places a hoof on it, and her horn glows before the wall comes down, revealing a secret staircase that leads up
>So there is another floor to this place!
>Following her up, you come up to a room that has a balcony that leads outside
>And in the center of the room a large floating crystal
>"What is this place?" Lance asks "We gotta be on top of the castle!"
>"This is a room that only Sombra and Arthas know about." Umbra says "It's the room that controls the barrier above the empire."

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>>28367730
>"This is really what controls the barrier?" Wedge asks as the guys look at the crystal
>"Indeed it is." Umbra says "It contains a very powerful spell that can hold back the elements to a degree."
>You walk outside on the balcony and take a look at the view
>Even though it's still dark out, the empire looks beautiful
>Just like it's queen
>Just as Arthas says, you see the might of the empire collected at the gate
>There's so many ponies down there!
>You come back inside to see Umbra talking with Sombra and Arthas
>"So what exactly are we going to be doing?" Sombra asks
>"When Celestia arrives with her forces, Stormhoof and Cyprus will lead the assault while Arthas and the boys charge in to get Marie." Umbra says "While they're busy with that I will lower the barrier to allow Celestia and her sister to enter the empire so that we can deal with them."
>Umbra looks out to the city
>"If we can take them down then we will have won this war." Umbra says "No ponies will continue fighting after their princesses have fallen."
>She turns back
>"Sombra, I want you to hide at first." Umbra says "I want to surprise those two with your return."
>"I can not wait to see the look on their faces." Sombra says
>"It's a good thing the empire is empty." Umbra says "We should have no problem communicating with one another."
>Umbra looks over to you
>"Hopefully you will not need to fight with us." Umbra says "I think Sombra and I can handle it."
"Hey don't say that." You say "If we have it under control out there and you need help, then maybe I can get back and help you two."
>You notice that it's starting to get brighter
>You all turn around to look and see that the sun is rising...
>"She's here." Umbra says

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Alright, I'm off to work. Get ready for some Bayo shenanigans here

>Tfw talking with someone to see if they can make me a plush of Umbra This story really did help me find my waifu

>>28368119
Cool

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>>28368119
This guy knows what's up

>>28368119
Celestial bump

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>>28368119
sweet

>>28371039
Bumping again

>>28368119
odd

>>28367895
>As the sun rises, Arthas speaks up
>"We need to go to the gate, now!" Arthas says as he heads towards the steps
>"Yeah! Time to get this party started!" Lance says
>As you start to head towards the steps, you turn back to Umbra who is already looking at you
"Umbra..."
>She smiles before running up to you climbing up you
>The two of you share the most passionate kiss you two have ever had
>Pulling away, you touch foreheads with her
>"I love you, Anonymous!" Umbra says "Please be careful out there..."
"I love you too, Umbra!" You tell her "Don't do anything stupid..."
>You kiss one more time before pulling her into a hug
"Sombra, you better keep her safe!" You tell him while pointing at him "You hear me?! Keep her safe... Please."
>Sombra smiles before nodding his head
>"Do not worry too much, Anonymous." Sombra says "It will be like old times, I'll keep her safe from herself."
>Pulling away, you wipe away the two stray tears running down her face
"I see you soon." You tell her "Try to go easy on Celestia."
>Umbra smiles and nods her head before you turn around to face your friends
"It's go time!"

I kinda have to go to sleep early because I work ten to eight tomorrow.
I'm sorry about that Anons

>>28372650
It's cool dude. Hope it goes well for ya.

Bed Bump

Hey guys, I was trying to catch up to this story a while back but lost interest and thus where I was. Could one of you be a bro and point me to where in the story they where trying to solve the fasmeres mystery? And they where about to go in at night for reals and one of them got beat up by some rich cunt.

>>28372784
Part 2, line 529

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Alright, I'm off to work so just try and keep it alive during the day and I'll be back at eight

>>28373407
Thank you very much.

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You got it boss

>>28373726
Stayin alive

>>28375103

>>28375896

>>28375103
Stayin alive

>>28376965
Ah ah ah yeah

My feet hurt

>>28378247
Hold on I'm just relaxing right now

So how will this story end?

>>28379271
>end

Bed bump

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>>28372650
>You are Celestia
>Placing the sun high above the air, the glow around your horn dies down
>"So that is her empire..." Luna says
>You stand on top a hill over looking Umbra's empire
>Finally after that long journey, you are finally here
>The lair of the witch
>"It's so much larger than mine." Cadance says
>Twilight and her friends remain silent
>You look at the wall surrounding the empire
>Of course she would try to keep everypony out
>She is just an ice queen after all
>"Princess, we are ready to move." Your captain named Glory says "Just said the word and we will charge in."
>You look over at Twilight, her friends, and Cadance
"You are all coming with us." You tell them "Luna and I are going to deal with Umbra while you two keep Anonymous from interfering."
>You love that human, but his constant meddling in your fights is starting to become an annoyance
>Taking a look out into the empire, a smile forms on her face
>She must already know you are here
>You take a deep breath
>"Sister?!" Luna asks in a surprised tone "Are you about to use the royal-!?"

>>28380494
>You are Umbra
>"UMBRA!" You hear Celestia yell out "THE TIME HAS COME! WE FINISH THIS TODAY!"
>You roll your eyes
>"She is using The Royal Canterlot voice." Sombra says
"She is just spouting hot air!" You say before turning to Sombra "Get back in the castle. Come outside when I give you your cue."
>Sombra shakes his head
>"You always love making everything so dramatic." Sombra says "Very well, try not to get to crazy."
>Sombra returns inside, leaving you alone with the crystal
"Alright, Whorse. You want me so bad? Then come and get me!"
>Taking the crystal off the pedestal, you watch as the barrier around the wall drops
>That's not the only thing that catches your eyes
>Looking over at the Icy Gem Cavern, you see Rodin standing on the roof
>A smile is etched on his face
>That means your armor is ready
>But the question is how to get over there in a hurry...
>Looking down, you see Arthas standing in front of all the guard

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Oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy

>>28380698
>You are Anon
>Standing next to your brothers and sisters, you listen on as Arthas begins his speech
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiYQwWg1KrY
>"Now you all know why we are here today." Arthas says "Outside that gate the forces of Canterlot gather at our doorstep."
>He paces back and forth
>"You have been training for this day ever since you joined the guard." Arthas says "The day when somepony thought they could just come to us and try to take the empire from our fair queen!"
>Arthas points up to Umbra, who is standing on the balcony
>That queen! That queen right there is why we are fighting today! Arthas yells "She not only needs us to protect her, but also her citizens! Her empire! Most importantly our way of life!"
>You hear the ponies around you start to get riled up
>"She needs two hundred percent from you today!" Arthas yells "She needs you to give it you all! And then some! Can you do that?!"
>"SIR YES SIR!" The ponies around you yell
>"Watch each others backs out there! Assist your brothers and sisters when possible!" Arthas shouts "And leave the treacherous dog to me and my boys. We will make sure she answers for her treachery!"
>Another roar of cheers erupt from you all
>"If you find any of your captive brothers and sisters out there, free them and give them a weapon." Arthas says "We will need every pony for this!"
>Arthas stops and stands in front of you all
>"NOW ARE WE READY!?" Arthas screams
>Everyone cheers again
>Arthas smiles before looking up at Jin
>"Open the gate!" Arthas yells "It is time to show these intruders the might of the empire!"
>As the gate opens, Arthas along with the four of you charge head first into the waste to meet Celestia's forces as everypony follows behind you

Alright early bed time again because I go in at ten again. At least I get out a five tomorrow

so neat

Man this sucks, I hate going to work early

Alright Anons, off to work. I'll be back at five so keep us alive

>>28377389
STAYIN ALIVE!

>>28384356

>>28385307
Bumpo

>>28381014
This wasn't a very good speech.


>>Arthas points up to Umbra, who is standing on the balcony
>>That queen! That queen right there is why we are fighting today! Arthas yells "She not only needs us to protect her, but also her citizens! Her empire! Most importantly our way of life!"
You and your concerns are unimportant! All for Umbra and HER citizens and HER empire! I'm sure you all care enough about the Queen to kill and die for her and her empire right? I mean, most of you won't have actually ever seen her face to face beyond a couple times and almost none of you will have ever said more than a few words o her but still...

I think there needed to be far more emphasis on the personal attachment of the soldiers to the Empire.

>>"Watch each others backs out there! Assist your brothers and sisters when possible!" Arthas shouts
The emphasis on camaraderie is good but then...

>"And leave the treacherous dog to me and my boys. We will make sure she answers for her treachery!"
And don't forget that there are traitors among us! Me and the elite specialists that I've personally decided are better than you and have humiliated you all before will deal with them though! Don't forget how you were blindsided by betrayal before but be sure to trust each other and certainly don't forget that you're the disposable rank and file I'm sending into the meat grinder.

Oy Vey.

>>28386588
Tore my shit right up fa.m!
But you're right it was a rushed part that I was trying to get out before bed last night. I've decided that I'm gonna redo it right quick

>>28387919

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>>28389054
It's a shameful bump I know, I'm just kinda stuck

>>28386588
its the thought that counts

>>28389066

Possible course of action:

>Redo the Arthas speech without having the defenders charge /out/ of the place they're defending this time; have them assemble inside and on top of the wall
>Celestia steps forward, just outside the wall, to engage Umbra in conversation and make a plea for Anon to return one last time
>Either reveal Sombra at this point or use him as a trump card/surprise distraction later on
>Once negotiations break down, have Celestia step back and start the Equestrian army laying siege to the walls.
>(Description of the siege)
>The Equestrians inevitably break through to find an empty city
>Celestia comes forward again to finally start the real fight with Umbra and Anon. (Probably reveal Sombra here if you didn't previously)

I think that a dramatic fight on and around the castle would be cool. There's plenty of environmental variety for Anon to use his different DMC stances, and there's enough vertical real estate to utilize both Celestia's flight and Anon's/Umbra's platform jumping. Fight scene while running UP the outside of the castle towers when?

Bamp

>>28381014
>You are Anon
>Standing next to your brothers and sisters, you listen on as Arthas begins his speech
>"Listen to me, all of you." Arthas starts out "Today is a very important day for the empire, a day where we have to show our strength to our enemies."
>Everyone remains silent
>"Past this wall stands Celestia's forces..." Arthas says "Ready to take the empire from our Queen!"
>He slams a hoof down
>"We can NOT let that happen!" Arthas says "For it is our duty to stop them!"
>Arthas points up to Umbra who is standing on the balcony still
>"That queen, that queen right there is the reason we fight!" Arthas says "She is the reason that any of us have the life we have now."
>Arthas looks up her
>"You all know that she is depending on us, on all of us." Arthas says "This is the reason you signed up for the guard in the first place! To protect the Queen! The citizen of this empire, your families, friends, and lovers! And most importantly, our home..."
>Arthas looks at the many faces in front of him
>"Each of you hold a memory of our queen in your heart." Arthas says "You know that she would do everything in her power to protect all of you."
>Arthas smiles
>"If you were a part of the guard, she made it her duty to introduce herself to each of you personally." Arthas says "Do you remember the first time she talked with you? How she asked you to tell her about yourself and about your families? Do any of you remembered that she also asked if any of you needed any help with living arrangements while you trained to become part of the guard?"
>You see some of the ponies nod their heads
>"As our queen, she made sure to talk to each and everyone of you to get to know you." Arthas says "I guarantee you that she could name you all off if she was with us."
>"You know how much our queen cares about you all." Arthas "Although I do not think any of you can imagine how much she truly cares about you all."
>You smile

>>28390911
>"As you all may know by now, Marie betrayed us." Arthas says "She betrayed Queen Umbra and led Princess Celestia to us, while also pointing out the locations of Stormhoof ponies so that they could capture them, I know that some of them are close to some of you."
>He steps forward
>"We will NOT abandon them!" Arthas shouts "Stormhoof and I are leading an assault on the camps the Jin spotted on the wall while Jin and Cyprus hold off any of Canterlot's forces from entering our empire!"
>"We are bringing them home, along with the traitor." Arthas says "This I swear to you all!"
>"This is not a solo team effort, no we need everypony to give it their all!" Arthas says "No pony, no matter how good they are can stand against this alone! That is why you need to aid your brothers and sisters when they need! WE ARE NOT LOSING A SINGLE PONY TO THOSE PRINCESSES!"
>Arthas looks at you
>"Now I do not know if any of you hold feelings of resentment towards Anonymous. Maybe some of you think he is responsible for all of this." Arthas says "But even if he was, he is here fighting with you! He is ready to risk it all to show that he belongs here!"
>Arthas looks away
>"I know Marie's betrayal shook the foundation of the guard." Arthas says "If a captain were to betray the Queen, what is to stop others from doing the same thing?"
>He looks back at you all
>"She wounded the trust we had for one another, but she did not break it. In any case, she made it stronger" He says "Because we need to work as one if we are going to win this!"

Damn character limit

>>28390962
>"There is no time for doubt! No time for second guessing!" Arthas says "We need to rely on each other..."
>Arthas smiles
>"Beside, you all know what happens to those that betray us." Arthas says "It's time we bring judgement to Marie. She needs to be held responsible for what she has done to us all!"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7oMBq1vkCM
>"We will remain glorious until the very end!" Arthas shouts "WE will not give in until WE are victorious! And we will defend this empire at all cost! Do you understand me?!"
>"YES SIR!"
>Arthas draws his sword and holds it up to the sky
>"Now then! Let us show Princess Celestia that she has chosen the wrong empire to invade!" Arthas shouts "FOR THE QUEEN!"
>Cheers erupt form everypony around you as ponies chant one thing
>"FOR THE QUEEN!"
>"Everypony! The Princesses are approaching the castle!" Jin yells out "Arthas, I need you up here!"
>Arthas nods his head before turning to you
>"Come with me." Arthas says "You'll most likely have something to say to her."

Alright, I'm off to bed

>>28387299
Don't worry about it. Good speeches are hard.

>>28391445
Indeed, he didn't do a bad job either

Shits gonna go down!

Bumperino

>>28392404

>>28392404

>>28392771

Bamp

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>>28390990
>When you get up to the wall. you look over the side to see Celestia, Luna, Cadance, and the Mane 6 standing there
>You eyes meet Celestia's which causes her to smile
>"Good morning, my sunshine!" Celestia says with a smile on her face "It feels so wonderful to see you again in person!"
"I wish I could say the same thing..."
>That smile of hers falters before she looks around
>"Where is she?" Celestia says in a more serious tone
>"Not here, princess." Arthas says
>Celestia doesn't seem to like that answer as she flies up into the sky
>She looks past all you, and finds Umbraon the balcony
>Looking between the two, their gaze never falters
>"ARE YOU TOO GOOD TO FACE ME?!" Celestia asks in the royal Canterlot voice "OR ARE YOU SCARED NOW THAT I AM HERE IN PERSON!?"
>You hear Umbra laugh
>"NO!" Umbra yells back "I JUST DO NOT WANT TO STAND TO CLOSE TO YOU! I MIGHT CATCH WHAT MAKES YOU SO MUCH OF A WHORSE!"
>Oh boy
>Looking over at Celestia, she look pissed
>You would be too if you were called a whore in front of your army, Candance, and The Mane 6
>Celestia's mane glows brighter as she looks back to her army
>"WONDERBOLTS!" Celestia yells out
>Looking behind her you see the Wonderbolts along with a few other pegasi zoom right past her and above your heads as they head for Umbra

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Dammit, I have to go to work. I'll be back at eleven, Anons.

>>28390990
Gud speech.

>>28394764
Damn

>>28395214
very gud

I remember this was a thing before and it's still going on?

Jesus, I've got a lot of catching up to do.

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>>28396719
yes you do

Bamp

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>>28394598
>You are Umbra
>Well then, she send you some neat stairs
>They should do nicely
>You can get to Rodin this way
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UduLIGkU90E
>I-Is that music?
>You look down to see that Rodin has some speakers set up on his roof
>He uses his magic to create a hand that gives you the thumbs up
>You smile as a little music could lighten up the mood
>As the pegasi fly towards you ready to strike you leap off the balcony towards them
>Landing on the first one with the orange mane, you force her back down to earth with one leg while also using her as platform to the next one
>"Spitfire!" The pony with the dark blue mane yells before he looks at you "You'll pay for that!"
>When he goes to strike you, you dodge the strike mid air by leaning back before kicking him under the chin with a back leg
"I'm terribly sorry, boy..." You tell him with a smile on your face "There is only one man that is allowed to touch me!"
>Sending him flying up, you leap off him and to the next pony below you
>As you deliver a kick to the blue mare with a white mane, you think to yourself
>You can't help but feel bad for these ponies
>After all, they are just following orders
>And it is very likely that Celestia fed them all lies about you
>Well this is a predicament
>You need to avoid harming any of these ponies with lethal force
>Even if the are trying to take you out
>Continuing to avoid their strikes while getting in a few of your own while leaping off of one after another, you find yourself coming down into the park

Dammit I got distracted by Bayonetta and now I need to head to bed
I got parts they just need to be checked and edited

>>28399434

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>>28399118
>Landing on the statue of yourself, you watch as ponies fall from the sky
>You seen Pegasi fall from worse heights
>They'll be fine
>Looking over to Rodin, you smile at him
"That was an interesting song, Rodin." You tell him
>Rodin smiles
>"It's something new we've been working on." Rodin says "You like it?"
>You smile
"It worked, although I prefer something a little more fast paced."
>"Don't worry about it, I think I got you covered." Rodin says
>You notice that behind Rodin
>A pony is trying to sneak up on him
>He must think Rodin is a normal civilian and that taking him would stop you
>Bad mistake
>When the pony moves to grab Rodin, you see his eyes start to glow
>Rodin spins around before using his magic to grab the pony by the throat
>"Don't interrupt a stallion while he's talking." He says "And besides, I'm not the partner you came to dance with!"
>He chuckles before looking at you
"Rodin. You said my armor would be ready for me." You say "Is it ready?"
>"Yeah." Rodin says "Like it or not, they're ready when you are."
>You lick your lips

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>>28401137
>Rodin pulls in and headbutts the pony before his horn begins to glow
>He lets out a might roar as a portal appears in front of him
>Out of the swirling vortex comes your leg armor
>Each one decorated with a gem at the top
>They come shooting out of the portal right at you
>Jumping into the air, you spin around as each one attaches itself onto your legs
>When the last one is on your leg, you channel your magic to jump in mid air
>You feel the platform under you as you jump into air again
"It works!" You yell in excitement "Great work as always, Rodin!"
>Rodin only smiles before lighting another cigar
>Using your newfound ability, you leap into the air all the way up to the wall where your beloved is standing
>Along the way, you see more Pegasi try and stop you
>Thankfully your pegasi come to your aid to stop them for getting near you
>When you reach the top of the wall, Anonymous smiles at you while you step up to the solar princess
"I'm so sorry about that." You tell him "I just needed to pick up my armor."
>You look dead at Celestia
"Now I'm ready to deal with you." You tell her "You damn sun princesses!"

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>>28401613
>Princesses
Damn, a typo at the end...
Last day of work before a day off! Then I can type without having to run off!

Well except to grab my check, cash it, then grab groceries.

Then we can get this war started.

>>28401688
Can't wait

>>28402357
Bump

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>>28403609

Bumperino

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>>28401613
>You and Celestia continue to stare each other down
>It only now that you see the army she brought with her
>Not only are her guards there, but Luna's bat ponies are there
>It almost feels like the outnumber you
"I am flatter that you would bring all of your armies just for me, Celestia."
>Celestia looks over to Anonymous
>"It is time for Anonymous to come home." Celestia says "Umbra, this is your last chance to surrender peacefully, otherwise you will leave me no choice, but to take him and your empire with force."
>You chuckle
"Come now, Celestia. We both know that this is the only way it's going to end between us." You tell her "And do you think I am stupid? You said yourself that you would take everything from me with force anyway."
>Celestia smile
>"I find it funny that Anonymous is your everything." Celestia says "Just as he is mine."
"Well that is most likely the only thing we can agree on." You say with a nod "Still my answer remains the same. I will not surrender my beloved or my empire, and you know what? I think your ass deserve a good kicking."
>Celestia growls at you before looking to Anonymous
>"What about you, my sunshine?" Celestia asks "This is your last chance as well. I do not want to harm you, but I will if it means bringing you home."
>You smile as Anonymous before draws Rebellion
>He points it at her
>"No." He says "I stand with my home. I stand with family right here against you! And last but not least, I stand with the mare I love. Umbra."
>You smile before giving him a kiss on the cheek
"Well then, I think you have your answer."
>Celestia's eyes close for a moment before she nods her head
>She says nothing else, but instead turns around and flies back down to the ground
>As she walks back to her sister and the other princesses, she takes a deep breath
>"FORCES OF THE SUN AND THE MOON!" Celestia shouts "ATTACK!"
>And with that the forces of Canterlot come charging towards the wall

>>28405284

Bumperino

Okay I'll be back gotta grab that check

>>28407991

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>>28406047
>You are Anon
>"Sound the drums of war!" Umbra cries out "For today we will emerge triumphant!"
>Looking on as Celestia's forces charge towards the wall, you see Arthas spin around
>"Prepare yourself everypony!" Arthas yells "We need every unicorn and pegasi up here now!."
>Each of the captains nod their heads before Jin looks into his scope
>"Where is she?" Arthas asks
>"Marie is in the very back of their camps." Jin says "But it looks as if she's about to move with a few of Celestia's guard."
>"If only we knew what she was planning!" Arthas yells "Anonymous, move! NOW!"
>You place your sword on your back before following Arthas
>"Anonymous!" Umbra calls out "Good luck."
>You smile and nod your head before following Arthas down the stairs
>When you move down to the ground floor you see that Biggs and Lance aren't there
>"I take it they're going to stop pegasi and other unicorns from getting in?" Wedge asks "Pegasi can just fly in and unicorns can make platforms that go up."
"Like a magical elevator."
>"That is correct." Arthas says "We as earth ponies and well a human stay down here in case they get through the gate."
>"You don't think they can get through that, do you?" Wedge asks
>"They have four princesses." Arthas's says "I'm sure they can make a hole."
>"But two are secretly on our side!" Wedge says "Well I hope at least Princess Cadance is."
>All of you stop talking when you hear something at the gate
>It sounds like a battering ram is being taken to it

There will be a bit of perspective jumping, just to let you Anons know

>>28411588
>You are Celestia
>Flying back to your sister, Cadance, and the girls, you let out a sigh
"It has begun." You tell them before turning around "Our forces march upon Umbra's empire. It will only be a matter of time before we tear down that wall."
>You look over at Twilight and Cadance
>Both still look apprehensive
"Are two still are having second thoughts?"
>"I am." Cadance says
>"So are we." Twilight says "We don't think you should be doing this."
"Twilight, I have to do this." You tell your student "You see the way she acts towards me? This is how every exchange has gone with her since the day we first crossed paths."
>"That because of what you're doing!" Cadance says "I would be pretty angry as well if a princess tried to invade my empire!"
"She has Anonymous!" You tell them :And if you two were with us a few nights ago you would have seen what she did to Luna and-"
>"Princess, if I may." Marie says cutting in "There is a way to end this war quickly."
>You raise an eyebrow at her
"I'm listening."
>"The most important thing to Umbra may be Anonymous and her friends, but she also cares very deeply about her citizens." Marie says "I can show you where they have gone. If we find them, maybe Umbra will surrender. There is one in particular that would get her to yield if we captured her. A mare named Ariadne."

>>28412476
OH MY FUCKING GOD ARTHAS BETTER KILL HER ON SIGHT

I really love how Marie went from being forced to reveal the location of the empire, to WILLFULLY ASSISTING CELESTIA AND BEING A FUCKING FULL ON TRAITOR.

>>28412476
"Ariadne?"
>Marie nods her head
>"She's very important to Umbra, almost like a daughter to her." Marie says "Get her and Umbra will no doubt surrender."
>You think on it
"She would not be hurt, correct?"
>Marie nods her head
>"You would just need to show that you have her." Marie says
>While you don't like the idea of taking an innocent mare to use against Umbra...
"Alright, what do you need Luna and I to do?"
>"Celestia, you can't!" Cadance says "You said yourself that this is between you and Umbra! There is no reason to get civilians involved!"
>You ignore Cadance and listen to Marie
>"I need a distraction." Marie says "I can't even get close to the wall."
>Looking back at the wall, you look up at the top at Umbra, who is currently raining down magical fire on your soldiers
>The ones at the gate are having a hard time breaking through it with Umbra and her guard blasting them
>You unfurl your wings before getting into a charging stance
>I think I know how to create as distraction." You say "Luna, Cadance, Twilight! We are going in!"
>Sprinting down the snow, you take off and fly right at Umbra

>>28413019
She'll explain later when Arthas confronts her

>>28409603

>>28413812

>>28414349

>>28413245
>You are Umbra
>Keep them away from the wall!" You command as you fire another bolt at stray pegasi "We need to dwindle their numbers enough so that they do not overwhelm us if they get in!"
>Looking up at the sky, you see Lance battling it out with another pegasi
>You fire a blast at his opponent allowing Lance to gain the upper hand
>"Queen Umbra!" You hear Biggs shout
>Looking over at him, he runs up to you
>"We can't keep them off the gate!" Biggs says "They're starting to stack up on magic shields! We can't break through them!"
"Dammit!" You say glancing down to the gate
>They have unicorns making a battering ram out of magic and are using to make a hole into the gate
>You were able to keep them off it at first, but as Biggs said multiple unicorn ponies have created a magical shield around them
"I can get through it, I just need to charge a blast."
>"I'll keep them off you then." Biggs says
>As you begin charge your magic, you see that the gate is starting to show cracks
>You need to stop them now!
>One of them looks up and notice you charging your magic
>"Watch out!" He yells "Their Queen is about to fire at us!"
>You rear up and-
>"NO SHE WON'T!" You hear Celestia yell
>Looking to your side, you see the solar princess flying right at you
>You try to dodge her, but her wings extend out so far that she tackles you off the wall and into your empire

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>>28415713
>You two continue to fly for some time before she take you down in front of your castle
>Rolling away, you quickly shake off the pain and stand
"I was wondering when you would come to face me!"
>Behind her you see Luna, Cadance, and Twilight and her friends
"Nine against one does not seem all that fair."
>"They will not be partaking in this battle. Only Luna and I will." Celestia says "The seven of them think you are not as we tell them."
"Smart girls." You say "I can not say the same for you."
>"Still you insult us even though you are alone." Luna says "It will be nice to finally silence you!"
>You chuckle
"Luna, as much as I would like to whip your backside around your empire, this is between me and Celestia." You tell her "But do not worry! I found somepony to babysit you!"
>Luna and Celestia look confused
>"Anonymous is not here to aid you." Luna says "You are alone."
"I am not talking about him." You tell her with a smile "I was thinking about it and I thought who better to watch the sibling of my enemy than MY own sibling!"
>"Wait, what!?" Celestia says
>Looking back at the castle, you watch as the doors open
"Come on out, dear brother..."
>And from the inside emerges your brother, Sombra
>A smile is etched on his face as he begin to walk out onto the black crystal
>"Hello princesses." Sombra says "It has been some time, hasn't it?"

Alright Anons, it's time for work.

Be back at eleven so keep it alive

>>28415895

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>>28415831

>>28418116

>>28419129

bamp

Sorry guys, work kinda kick me in the dick today. I'm almost done with this part so it'll be up early in the morning

Holy shit emergency 5hr bumperino

Bumperino

I can't be the only one here guys

>>28415831
>All the princesses besides Twilight look shocked to see that your brother has returned
>"Sombra?!" Celestia says "But how?"
>"I saw you get destroyed!" Cadance says "I was the one to do it!"
>You see Cadance turn and look at Twilight with a serious expression on her face
"We found him in his study under the castle." You tell them "He was just a shadow on the wall. He attached himself to me and then to Anonymous to aid him in his fight against Shining Armor."
>You look over at Sombra
"After that it just took him sometime to rebuild his body, and walla! My brother returned to me." You say "And not only that, but he was back to his normal self, not the tyrant you two sealed away."
>Sombra smiles before stepping forward
>"Indeed. My time locked away changed me. I know what is important now." Sombra says "Now I need to stop you two not for my own selfish gains, but for the good of this empire and for my sister."
>Celestia remains silent for a moment before she begins to chuckle
>You step forward
"What is so funny?"
>"The fact that you two really think you can defeat us." Celestia says before taking on a more serious expression "We have defeated Sombra before and will do so again today!"
>"The last time we fought, the odds were not in my favor. You tend to do that a lot." Sombra says "I will NOT stand by and allow you do the same to my sister!"
"Do not worry, dear brother." You tell him "Today is different now that I am here! It will be a fair fight now!"
>Celestia looks over at you
"Now you and I can battle without getting interrupted." You tell her "Like it was meant to be."
>Celestia looks you dead in the eyes
>"Luna, deal with Sombra." Celestia says "Umbra is mine."
>"Of course, sister." Luna says "We will be victorious this day!"
>"I made a promise to Anonymous saying I would protect my sister." Sombra says "But I may lose sight of that to get some payback for sealing me away!"
"Alright then..." You say before getting into a battle position "Let's dance!"

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>>28422183
About time we start to fight dislexia

>>28422183
>You are Anon
"UMBRA!" You shout as you watch Celestia tackle her off the wall
>"Anonymous, no!" Arthas shouts "She will be fine! I need you here, you are one of our greatest assets!"
>You watch as they land far away in front of the castle
>Arthas spins you around
>"Lord Sombra will be with her to help her!" Arthas says "We need to keep Celestia's forces out and off of them! If they get past us, they will most likely overrun them, allowing Celestia to get the advantage!"
>Damn it! You know that, but...
>You hear the pounding on the gate getting louder
>Cracks are also starting to form on it
>It's going to give any moment now
>"Look at me, Anonymous!" Arthas says
>You look at him
>"I promise that once we have control of the battle and Marie is in our custody, I'll let you loose to help Queen Umbra." Arthas says "Until then, We need you out here, Understand!?"
>You nod your head
>"Hey!" You hear Biggs shout
>Looking up, you see Lance carrying Biggs down

Damn character limit!

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>>28423035
>When they land, you can see that they're both exhausted
>"It's crazy up there!" Lance says "You got pegasi trying to bring you down and you have friends and foes shooting magic at you! I've never had to avoid so much in my life!"
>He smiles
>"It's kinda fun." Lance says
>"Sir, they're going to get through the gate." Biggs says "We tried to hold them off, but they started stacking magical barriers on each other."
>"It's alright. They were going to get through eventually" Arthas says "Come on you four, I need to let everypony know the plan."
>Walking up to the large group of ponies in front of you, you see they're all ready for when the gate gives
>"Listen up! Now when they get through the gate, Stormhoof's ponies and us are going to rush right through the hole they make." Arthas says "From there we fight our way to the camps where our ponies are being held while Cyprus and Jin's units continue to hold them back from getting in."
>"We find them and rescue them!" Arthas says "If you spot Marie let me know immediately! We need to bring her in..."
>You look back towards the castle
"I believe in you, Umbra."
>Arthas turns around and watches the gate
>One thump
>"Get ready." Arthas says
>Another one
>"We will show our strenght today!" Arthas says
>As the gate takes one more hit, a large hole opens up at the bottom center of the wall
>"CHARGE!" Arthas shouts as both Stormhoof and Arthas's group rush towards the hole

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Alright work time, but question time

I'm thinking about summarizing Anon and the guys getting over to the camps. Then plot. Then they head back. Are you guys okay with that? Also I was thinking we could do a part or two that focuses on the battle in the empire from Arthas's perspective and an Eris part, what do you think?

Then after that we could focus on the main fights going on

Umbra and Sombra Vs Celestia and Luna

Anon, Arthas, Lance, Biggs, and Wedge Vs Marie and some of the elites from Canterlot

Then into

Umbra and Anon Vs Celestia

Umbra Vs Celestia

>>28423426
Summarized sounds okay.

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>>28423426
Sounds good

>>28423426
alright then time to wait

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>>28423426
>umbra+anon followed by umbra alone

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>>28425858

Well shit I lost track of time, but guess what? I got the day off today! Meaning we can go all out today!

Bumperino

>>28428628

bimp

>>28422183
>walla
voila*
Stop being such a big babby :^)

>>28426720
be very scared

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Hope no-ones got short-term memory loss

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>>28423066
>"Let's go." Arthas says as he draws his sword
>Rushing out with him, you and your friends stay close to him
>As you exit the hole, you all take a look at the chaos around you
>Ponies of all different kinds battle it out for their Queen or Princess
>Arthas quickly moves forward and kicks a pony that was engaged in a horn lock with another
>"We need to move!" Arthas says "Don't fall behind!"
>Nodding your head, you follow right behind him
>It was actually really hectic to fight your way across the battlefield
>You and your friends battle everyone that stood in your way while assisting other guard ponies
>Some of them even returned the favor and assisted you whenever a large group stood in your way
>You and Biggs attracted the most attention it seems, as more ponies came to take you two down
>The tag team you two had going was pretty effective with his and your magic combined
>It felt like you had a giant bounty on your head because the Canterlot guards were trying to jump your group
>Celestia must have put out that you were a high priority target
>Makes sense
>If they took you down, that would get Umbra to surrender
>Too bad they never got the chance as you and your friends fought your way to the camps
>Getting to the camps, it's the same as the battlefield
>Tons of Canterlot guards stand between you and the prisoners that Celestia took
>But it wasn't just you five
>A few guards that you had helped also joined you
>Smiling, you and the ponies behind you rushed in to take the camp

>>28433934
>Kicking a pony across the back of the head, you look over to Arthas
>"There's just no end to them!" Biggs says as he takes his hammer to a ponies head
>"Well this is their camp!" Wedge says "I would hope that they would keep this place guarded."
>"Anonymous, with me!" Arthas says "The captives are over here!"
>Following right behind him, you turn to see Lance tackle a pony that was attacking a comrade
>Upon reaching the ponies, one looks up at Arthas
>"Captain!" The one tied up says
>Poor guy looks like he's been through hell
>He must have got those bumps and bruises from when Celestia captured them
>"It's alright, you're safe now." Arthas says as he cuts the rope "Can you stand?"
>The pony takes a moment to stand before nodding his head
>You walk around and cut the other ponies free from their restraints
>"Captain, we need to get back to the empire!" The pony says in a more panicked tone
>"Whoa, whoa, whoa! Slow down." Arthas says in an attempt to calm him down "What is the matter?"
>"I overheard a conversation between Marie and the princess, Marie plans to lead a group of ponies to The Grotto!" He says
>"What?!" Arthas says cut the other ponies free from their restraints
>"That's not all!" The pony says "They're going over there to capture Lady Ariadne! Marie says if they can get her, Queen Umbra would have no choice but to surrender!"
>"WHAT!?" You hear Lance yell
>Turning around you see a worried Lance

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>>28324471

>>28435175

>>28435813

>>28437851

>>28434824
>Shit
>Lance looks like he's just about ready to freak out
>"They're going after Ariadne?!" He asks
>"They are." Arthas says before walking towards him "Listen to me Lance. I know what you are thinking, don't do it."
>You see Lance unfurl his wings
>"Lance!" Arthas says
>"I have have to keep her safe, Arthas." Lance says "I made a promise to Queen Umbra that I would!"
>You watch as Lance tries to take off into the sky before Arthas tackles him
>"No! I'm not going to let you run off like an idiot!" Arthas says "What good do you think you'll do if you rush in by yourself!"
>Lance tries to get Arthas off him before looking away
>"I understand how you feel. I would feel the same way if it was Jaina they were going after." Arthas says "I'm sure Biggs would feel the same way if it was Eliza."
>Arthas stands back up before lending Lance a hoof
>"We need to work together, Lance." Arthas says "There is no telling how many ponies Marie has with her."
>When Lance stands back up, Arthas turns to the captive ponies
>"All of you assist your brothers and sisters in taking this camp!" Arthas shouts "The less support the princesses have the better!"
>The ponies begin to pick up some weapons laying around before charging back in to fight
>Arthas looks back at you four
>"These ponies should be able to handle it from here." Arthas says "Now let's get back to the empire, there's a traitor that needs to be dealt with."

>>28438942
>You literally wasted no time in getting back to the empire
>You had no idea how close Marie is already to The Grotto, but you need to hurry!
>Damn bitch probably found a way to sneak inside without anyone noticing
>Battling your way through the hordes of Celestia and Luna's forces, you ended up outside the gate
>"Dammit! Some are starting to push through!" Biggs says
>"They were bound to eventually!" Arthas says "We need to deal with Marie quick! Then we can fully assist in the battle."
>"Arthas!" Stormhoof yells
>Looking over you see Stormhoof run over
>"Stormhoof, what is the situation!?" Arthas asks
>"We're mostly holding them back some stragglers are getting through us though." Stormhoof says "Whether it'd be over the wall or through it."
>"How many is some?!" Arthas asks
>Stormhoof sighs
>"Enough that Cyprus has his hooves full." Stormhoof says "Did you rescue our ponies?"
>Arthas nods his head
>"They're assisting the ponies trying to take the camps from Celestia." He tells him "They told us something troubling."
>"What is it?" Stormhoof says
>"They said that Marie and some of Celestia's and Luna's elite guard are headed to The Grotto." Arthas says "They're going over there to capture Lady Ariadne in an attempt to force Umbra to surrender."
>You hear a giant boom that echos throughout the sky
>Looking through the hole in the gate
>"Queen Umbra and Lord Sombra have already begun their battle with the princesses." Stormhoof says "I recommend you stop Marie before she accomplishes her goal."
>"That's what we're going to do!" Arthas says "As soon as we're done we'll come back to assist you all!"
>Arthas motions to all of you and you all head into the empire again

When we get to Umbra's pov it'll be before the fight starts

>>28439521
Marie getting btfo when?

>>28439521
>Upon entering the empire, you see the chaos in front of you
>Ponies battle it out in the streets before you
>Houses are damaged, light posts are broken, and there are hurt ponies laying throughout the streets
>Looking down the road towards the castle, you see Umbra and Celestia
>The two are battling it out with kicks and magic
>You also see Sombra leap off a building before biting down on Luna's tail to slam her back into the crystal pavement
>"We have to go around Queen Umbra to get to The Grotto!" Arthas says "I'm sure we don't want to get caught up in that!"
>Luckily it seems no one else wants to either
>Any normal pony that gets caught up in that crossfire is gonna regret it
>"Anon, come on!" Lance yells "We can't stop moving now!"
>You look at him before nodding your head
>As you start to follow Arthas, you look back once more
"Just wait a little longer, I'll be there soon."
>Taking off down one of the side roads you hurry around the wall
>The entire time, you hear booms and cracks throughout the sky
>They're really going at it
>Battling your way through the enemy forces that line the street, you come to the farm lands
>"There! Look!" Wedge says
>Looking over, you see The Grotto
>There are some of the empire's forces lying around the entrance
>"She took out so many..." Wedge says
>You see Arthas grit his teeth
>"We're ending this. Now!" Arthas says "By any means necessary."
>You all nod in understanding
>You know what needs to be done
>The five of you quickly ready yourselves as you head over to The Grotto

>>28439572
Soon as I get home after getting out of work at ten or midnight.

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So yeah, work. Now that these parts are done I can focus on the fights

Hopefully if nothing goes wrong and I get my day off tomorrow I should start getting more parts out.

So long as I also don't get distracted with Smite
I wanna get so good that I can get payed to play

>>28440019

>>28440722
>rott

Well fuck me! My boss sent me home because he just wanted me to help the new guys with prep!

>>28441625
>prep
Do you work in the food industry?

>>28441869
Yeah, I work a pizza place here in town as a dish washer. We just so happen to do the prep as well

>>28442017
Plus tip?

>>28442017
Prep is super easy what's wrong with them, are they black or something?

>>28442074
Fuck off /pol/

>>28442126
You don't have to be from /pol/ to know that by and large blacks are far more stupid and lazy than whites, it's part of why most african nations are failed states.

>>28442074
Well my main boss is half Hawaiian and Italian. My other bosses are white. Surprisingly no African Americans work there, there use to be one, but he got fired for messing around.

>>28442226
Just really new then? First prep is always a little intimidating, but it's pretty simple one you know where everything is/goes, just time consuming.

>>28442175
Again fuck off /pol/. Take your ignorant views elsewhere. This isn't the place to spread your racial prejudice

>>28442238
Yeah they've been there for about a week

>>28442269
Welcome to the internet, you don't get a safe space.

>>28439894
>Upon reaching the entrance to The Grotto, you all quietly follow Arthas down the steps
>"Listen to me, we have to work as a team on this." Arthas whispers "So keep each other covered, we don't know anything about the ponies that Marie is bringing."
>You nod your heads before continuing on
>Continuing down the stairs, you notice that Lance looks tense as fuck
"Hey Lance?"
>He looks over to you
"It's gonna be alright, we're gonna stop her."
>He nods his head
>"I know we will, I just don't know if I'll be able to stop myself from hurting her." Lance says "Especially after she threatened Ariadne."
>"Just don't run her through with your spear." Wedge says "We need her alive."
>Arthas abruptly stops you all
>"Shh..." He says as you all listen in
>"Are you sure you know how to get through this door?" A pony asks
>"Of course I do." You hear Marie says "Queen Umbra showed us all how to open the door in case she couldn't."
>You begin to hear her fiddling with the lock
>Arthas looks at all of you
>"Now is the time." Arthas says "From this point forward be ready to fight."
>You all draw your weapons
>"Marie!" Arthas shouts "It's time to answer for your crimes!"

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>>28442325
Eat shit bigot.,we're here for story and vidya. Not your white boi got
B L A C K E D racial grudge

>>28444486
Judging by the spelling, I think I spotted the nigger, either that of one of these new age faggots.

>>28444642
>>>/pol/

>>28444409

Bamp

Bumperino

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>>28444341
>The ponies around Marie turn to face you all
>These ponies are dressed in very different armor that the normal Canterlot guards
"These are Celestia's elite guards." You say "I've only seen them when things get real bad."
>"Arthas..." Marie says "I'm surprised it took you this long to find me."
>Marie turns around to face you
>"I was expecting you sooner." Marie says "I must say I'm a little disappointed."
>"How did you fall so hard?" Arthas asks "You were once a proud member of the captains. You swore to protect this empire and it citizens, and now look at you, you're nothing but a traitor."
>Marie remains silent
>"You led the princesses right to us!" Arthas shouts "And now You are willing to jeopardize the safety of all our citizens! For what!?"
>"For what you ask?" Marie says before looking up to Arthas "I just want to see Umbra lose."
"What?"
>Marie looks over to you
>"You could almost say it's revenge against you both." Marie says "Everything was fine before you showed up, the empire didn't have to worry about anything until you arrived!"
>Arthas draws his sword
>"She put you above all other ponies, just because of how close you two were!" Marie says "And if we said anything bad about you we payed because of it!"
>You pull Rebellion off your back
>"I was thinking about the good of the empire!" Marie says "You're nothing but a parasite that's killing the empire! I had to leave MY home because of you!"
>"So what?! You think handing Ariadne to Celestia will fix all that!?" Wedge asks
>"No, but it will secure Umbra's defeat." Marie says
>"You crazy bitch!" Lance says "You won't get away with this!"
>"Call me what you like, I don't care." Marie says as she draws her weapons "I only care about Umbra's defeat."
>"Marie, This ends today." Arthas says "I have my orders to bring you in, but I think I'll have to put you down like the mad dog you are."
>You see the ponies around Marie ready themselves for battle

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>>28448291
Let's roll

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>>28449121
lock and load

>>28449121
Moonman is left-wing
He's a nazi

Bumperino

>>28448291
>You all hop off the stairs into the main atrium
>The elite ponies quickly surround you from all sides
>"Boys, watch each others backs." Arthas says "This is going to be tougher than the fights outside."
>"He's right." Marie says "I may not be a captain anymore, but that doesn't mean I forgot my skills in battle."
>You look around you
>As soon as either Arthas or Marie give the word it's going to be chaos in here
>You grip the handle of your blade tightly
>"Remember, we bring the human Anonymous in." One of the elites says "So we can't hurt him too much. The others are of no concern."
>"We won't let you take, Anon." Biggs says "You'll have to kill us first."
>Everyone remains still
>It's quiet in here
>The only sound that can be heard is the waterfall from the hot springs to your right
>That is until Biggs swings and whacks a pony right in his face
>"Screw this waiting crap!" Biggs says "We need to finish this quickly so Anon can help Queen Umbra!"
>Well he's not wrong
>"My thoughts exactly!" Arthas says "Attack!"
>Wasting no time, you and Biggs charge into the ponies on your side while Lance and Wedge handle their side
>Leaving your Arthas to deal with Marie

>>28324471

>>28451198
>Dodging a strike from one of the elite ponies, you follow up with a right hook
"Damn it, unicorn ponies are so annoying!"
>Biggs smacks another pony before looking over at you with a disapproving look
"Oh admit you guys are annoying to fight!" You say while dodging another blow "I mean it's almost impossible to predict you guys!"
>You lock blades with another unicorn that tries to slash at you
>Using your magic, you force the pony back into the wall behind him
>Turning around, you see a pegasi pony try to run his sword through your shoulder
>Thankfully Biggs smacks him out of the air by throwing his hammer at him
>But as Biggs tried to pull his hammer back with his magic, the pony he was fighting takes his blade to Biggs's leg
>Biggs yells out in pain as his hammer falls in front of you
"Biggs!" You yell before picking up and chucking the hammer at the pony
>It bops him dead in the face and the pony falls down unconscious
>Rushing over to your friend, you look at his leg
>"I'll be fine!" Biggs says as he shakes it off
>"Now you're mine!" A pony behind you says
>Spinning around you fire a bolt of magic from your fingers into her wing, casing her to eat the ground
>"Dammit, that hurt!" Biggs says
>Looking around you see that Lance and Wedge are doing okay on the other side of the room
>But looking over to the giant door you see the battle between the two captains going on
>Arthas and Marie are going at it like mortal enemies
>It's just a flurry of strikes
>But you notice that as they are fighting, you see another pony sneaking up behind Arthas with his blade drawn

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>>28445115

>>28453220

>>28452391
"ARTHAS!"
>Arthas turns to see the pony behind him
>Before the pony can strike him, Arthas blocks the attack before countering with one of his own
>"Arthas, weren't you that told me never to take you eyes off your opponent!" Marie says
>Arthas quickly turns back just in time for Marie to run her sword into the upper part of his leg
>Arthas lets out a pained howl and his sword falls from his mouth
>As he crashes to the ground, you hear Marie laugh
>"That's too bad." Marie says as she walks up to him "It's unlucky for you that I know your fighting style. All I needed from you was to make one mistake and I could capitalize on it."
>Arthas reaches for his sword, but Marie kicks it away
>"I suppose it just because I'm younger that you. You'd make a mistake anyway." Marie says as she readies her blade "The only thing left to do is put the old dog-"
>You interrupt her by punting her into the door
"Shut the hell up!" You yell, before looking down to Arthas "You alright?"
>Arthas looks up at you and smiles before he tries to get up
"Whoa that's a nasty wound." You say "You're bleeding pretty bad!"
>"I don't have time to bleed." Arthas says "Now where is my sword?"
>"We're coming captain!" You hear your friends call out "We got it over here!"
>Looking behind you, you see that the fight has transition to the middle of the room
>"How dare you!" Marie yells out
>Turning around you stop her strike with a royal block before using her energy to send her right back
>As Marie collides with the wall, her sword flies away from her
"You can't beat me like that!" You say "I'm unpredictable when I fight!"
>Marie looks at you with a hint of annoyance in her eyes
>Before you can move in, she fires a bolt of magic above you, causing the crystals to fall on you
>You notice that as they're falling, Marie takes off towards the hot springs
>"Anonymous go after her!" Arthas says "I'll be right behind you!"
>Nodding your head you chase after her

>>28454546
Alright, off to work. Be back at eleven. When I get back Anon and Arthas will finish this