Get That Waifu! 2

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>>28300839
Subscribed to the new thread.

Page 9 bump already... jesus.

>>28301531
no updates no bumps. those are the rules.

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>>28300839
The four of you are walking along a long winding track leading away from the clubhouse and towards the main town, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle in front, you in the middle, and Scootaloo in the back.
You can feel her eyes drilling holes into the back of your head.
After a few moments, you call to the unicorn in front who looks over her shoulder at you, smiles, and slows down to meet your stride.
>"Yeah, Anon?"
You crack your mental knuckles and muster up the best flattery you can think of.
"Sweetie Belle, has anyone ever told you how beautiful you are?"
She puts a hoof to her mouth and giggles cutely.
>"What are you saying, Anon?"
"I'm just commenting on your immense beauty, it almost matches if not exceeds nature itself."
She gives you a sulty smile.
>"You aren't to bad looking yourself, for a human."
"Thanks...?"
You clear your throat.
"As I was saying, Sweetie, how do you not have colts tumbling and tripping over themselves trying to get a chance with you? Don't tell me you haven't found a colt friend yet?"
She looks downcast.
>"No... not yet. I don't even get a sideways glance from anyone at school..."
"Impossible. They must be blind to not see the star shining before their very eyes."
>"Do you really think that, Anon?" She looks at you hopefully.
You prepare for the final blow, placing a hand lightly on her chin and raising her eyes to meet yours.
"Of course, with all my being."
>"J-jeez..."
She quickly looks away, but you can see the redness all over her face. Hook, line and sinker.
You glance behind you and notice Scootaloo isn't looking too happy. She obviously heard the things you said to her friend. All part of the plan.
Stage two.

>>28301591
"Sweetie Belle?" You meet her glance and smile cooly. "You look tired, and someone as sweet and delicate as you shouldn't have to walk on the same ground as the pet, no?"
You suddenly scoop her up in your arms, much to her and Scootaloos surprise.
She squirms for a while until you find the perfect place for your hands. Your first arm runs under her belly, ending somewhere around her... well, you try your best to avoid that area, for now. Your second arm crosses over her side and ends with your hand on the nape of her neck. It's at this point you notice how soft her fur actually is, especially around her stomach. It's almost velvet to the touch.
>"A-Anon! Don't just...!" She stammers quickly. "You didn't even wait for me to s-say anything..."
"But you like it, don't you?" You whisper in her ear. "I like holding you, it's like holding an angel."
>"W-well... I guess it's nice. It really beats walking..." She looks up at you, your faces close together. "I could get used to it..."
You can feel her heartbeat on your chest, it's quick. A quick glance over reveals a seething Scootaloo.
Grinning on the inside, you begin pressing Sweetie Belles supple flesh. It springs back with no effort, and she sighs softly.
>"Anon... what are you.."
You squeeze her a little bit, gliding a few fingers close to her holy temple and it interrupts her train of thought.
"I'm just servicing my future owner, that's all..."
You expertly trace your newly trained finger up her slit, just barely spreading them open. You make sure to graze your palm on her perky nipples as you do so.
Sweetie Belle suddenly moans, quite loudly at that.
This is when you hear Scootaloo yell angrily.
>"WHAT ARE YOU DOING, YOU CREEP?"
You hurriedly place Sweetie Belle on the ground and turn just in time to take the full force of the blow the pegasus inflicts upon you.

>>28301601
She tackled you with her whole body, sending you tumbling down to the ground with a thump. You actually cringe in pain, holding your stomach. Despite her small frame, she sure can pack a wallop.
As you grovel on the ground, you can hear the three yelling above you.
>"Scootaloo what the hay?! Why'd you hit Anon?" Her voice cracks in anger.
>"What do you mean 'Why did I hit him'? Didn't you notice what he was doing??"
>"He wasn't doing anything! He was just being nice!"
>"Don't be stupid. He's a creep, a pervert, a... a filly fooler!"
Applebloom then jumps in.
>"Hey, now you cain't just go around tellin' ponies that, you could ruin their life."
>"He'd deserve it!"
>"Yeah, well... you still shouldn'a hit him so hard. You nearly knocked all the wind right outta him."
As they argue among themselves, you manage to get slowly to your feet.
Now's your chance.
>>Sneak away.
>>Play the victim card even harder.
>>Directly ask for sex as compensation.

I promised filly foolin' last thread, so each of these will lead to it one way or the other.

>>28301610
voting for playing the victim and asking for sex with asking being the primary vote.

>>28301610
>I promised filly foolin' last thread, so each of these will lead to it one way or the other.
Then choosing anything doesn't change much.

>>28301610
whichever ends up with Sweetie

>>28301777
Why do we want to fuck the fillies so much? Our waifu is Pinkie, not them.

>>28301807
we want to be nice and they seem to really like it. they can also be underlings and help with pinkie in SOME way.

If I can offer a suggestion OP.
Your writing is way too detailed and in the moment compared to your art. You should try and only mention the essentials in the text and focus on more scenes being played out in your art. You could of probably spread out what you just wrote over 3 or so art pieces with small decisions in between. I can kinda tell you're getting burned out trying to make a good story. You have to understand that we only want smut because we are degenerates and that most anons aren't even bothering to focus on the story, which is apparent by the shoddy replies you keep getting.

>>28301610
>>Guilty Shitter
>>Feign Innocence
>>Full Shitter
None of these choices feels even remotely paragon.

>>28301610
Play the victim. Make Scootaloo feel so bad she cries. Then feel her up

>>28301882
There have been good suggestions in the last thread, but I think many anons don't have the patience to wait. Instant gratification is all they want. Sounds like that's what you want too; more smut to jerk it to and less words to read.

What are you, a pleb?

>>28300839
Thank you Wuzzlefluff for coming back
To fondle the small sister of Applejack
And of course little Sweetie Belle too
Along with that cutie tom-mare Scootaloo
I'm down with anything that may happen
I'm up for anything that gets me fappin'
Your art is cute and sexy, I really like it
I hope to see a little teaty filly tike tit
Keep up the good workin'
We're ready to be jerkin'
With love, kindness and a kiss
From your friend, Anonymous

>>28301591
>dat pink flush on Sweetie's rump
Unf

>>28301610
I'm torn between playing the victim and asking outright. I kind of wish the asking part wasn't "for compensation," but more of an open ended spur of the moment request similar to RD, but perhaps tinted with more of a "I'm doing you a favor" feeling.

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Wow you guys are fucking autistic virgins

>>28302351
Yep, for me, seeing how absurdly the previous sexual encounter had started, making this one as absurd makes more sense.

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>>28302376
>autistic
Maybe.
>virgins
Definitely not.

BTW, we are a horse-related board. Non-horse imagery isn't welcome here.

>>28302376
You're not telling us anything we don't already know.

>>28302136

I appreciate this

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i am ashamed any of you exist

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>>28302136
Yeah, I'm done.

>>28302888
Don't stop now, we'll never get our waifu!

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>>28302938
Nah.

I'm done fags.

>>28302888
Don't ruse me, man. Don't you do it.

>>28302958
You're just trying to get another poem out of me. I won't make another one, you'll all lol

>>28302958
I hope you're joking, but if you aren't, then I think you may be one of the laziest drawfags on /mlp/, using any excuse to not work as hard. You'll go back to your cyoas that only have stick men and stick ponies, with the occasional basic pone butt to hook people, and no one will know you're wasting your talent.

>it's the perfect plan

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>>28303081
Yeah I bet you're a nigger IRL

fuck outta here

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>>28303103

>OP after reading the poems
>pic related

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>>28303148
Undertale is for shitfaces anyways

>these fake wuzzles
I FOUND YOU, FAKER.

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>>28302958

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>>28303204
Why you sad,nigga?
It's a joke....(probably)

>>28303208
You can tell it's not him even by looking at Anon. It's no where near similar. But I think an attempt at his way of drawing a pony would be laughable. Lets see it, fake hedgehogs!

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>>28302888
>>28302958
>>28303103
>>28303148
>>28303204
>>28303217
This is a stick up! Put the waifus in the bag and no one gets hurt!

>>28301882
Wow, what kind of suggestion is that?
Mine is that Wuzz can make some updates without picture at all just with text, the story will progress faster and further and won't lose it's quality.

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>>28303343

You think this is some kinda FUCKING GAME?

I'll tear your ass apart, shoot me I fucking dare you I'll eat that bullet then spit it back out at twice the velocity I'm for real

>>28302351
This?

>>28303371
Shut your mouth and put waifu in the fucking bag!

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>>28303353
>>28303343
I'm sorry, Anonymous, but I would advise against such a decision.

>>28303397
Aw shit

This thread descended into madness quickly. Excellent.

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>>28303397
Alright fuckboy, bring it.

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>>28303427
Sorry it took so long, I'm not used to this transformation.

So... We autism now? Cause if we are, could always pull a
>war

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>>28303606
Join in soldier! We need as much muscle as possible!

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>>28303652

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>>28303652
Turmoil, 100% spec reporting in.

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What fuck is going on? where is the real Wuzzle? What is this shit?

>>28303732
Sick sara gsword nub.

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>>28303863
It's a warzone out here, private! You better be ready!


>>28303897
nigga that's an armadyl GS, u fucking scrub

>>28303922
it's been so long, I had forgotten in my old age.

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It's looking grim out here, soldiers. Where are the reinforcements!? We're losing men left and right!

>>28303948
Fucking hell who are we fighting, i can't fight without a reason.

>>28304059
Fight for fillysex then.

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>>28304059
We're fighting the enemy solider. They hurt them... The waifus.. We need to save them! But, I don't know how. It's all fading soldier... Carry on, for us, for me, for them.....

>>28304108
FILLY SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECKS

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>>28304144
So that's what it was.... The filly sexecks. You know... It all seems so close now... I guess I'm just too tired to try and grab it. Maybe if I just close my eyes...

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>>28304191
Come on man. It's gonna be okay. Just a few more posts. Then....you have my permission to die.

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>>28304281
Shhhhhh
He's in equestria now

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>>28304281
I'm sorry, but he's dead private.

>>28304330
>NOT saving private Ryan

>>28304339
Now, hold it... Maybe he's not dead. I mean, he hasn't lost THAT much blood, yet. Do we go and try to save Anonymous? Or do we continue the battle and work to avenge his "death?"

>>28304449
>Anonymous
Do you mean "Anon Y. Mous"?

>it's a "let's blueball Anon all week" episode
The anticipation is killing me, famalamadingdong.

Thread recap for when OP comes back:
Anonymous walked alongside the CMC, picking up and sexually rubbing Sweetie Belle. He was attacked by Scootaloo who was scolded for that by Apple Bloom. Anonymous sent OP a poem that was read out loud by an anonymous anon, to which an imposter pretended to be OP and left the thread. HE proceeds to throw the thread away when he gets replied towards asking him not to. Then that anon who said not to leave the thread got scolded by another anon, which led to another anon getting sad and starting to cry. One anon asked him why he was said, seemingly so to comfort him. Then all of a sudden a mugger anon jumps out of nowhere and demands everyone give him waifus! It didn't seem like an empty threat at the time, he was really angry, but among us one anon stepped up and called his bluff; making wild claims to attempt and intimidate the mugger anon, all the while sans is trying to reason with him when a ninja anon comes and advises that both anons should stop this petty foolishness and be one with peace. This upset one of the anons who reached for his baseball bat(I don't know what retard brings a bat to a sword fight, but whatever), and called out the ninja anon. 1 season, 30 episodes, and 5 minutes later, a wild Super Saiyan anon appears! He put a stop the the entire argument and scared everyone away.

One anon came back and questioned the entire ordeal, which set of a chain reaction of PTSD flashbacks to the great waifu war of thread >>28300839. On the battlefield we are introduced to some unlucky anons. At first we see a struggling soldier trying to call for more back up, the anonymous troops were being slaughtered left and right by an unknown force. The back up was contacted, and they had Edgelord Anon and L33T PK3R anon on standby waiting to be called in, but the coms tower was destroyed on the battlefield and they couldn't get in touch with the dropship to locate when and where the anon's needed to be deployed.
1/2

>>28304893
Being slayed down right and left, the anons started to question their existence and their meaning in this war. Some anons went up in arms and trooped out onto the battlefield, some had to be forced, and others... Well, let's just say they committed the ultimate sacrifice while also committing the ultimate sin. Salvaging other supplies from dead anon, one brave soldier anon led some of the resistance against the great evil, handing out rifles and ammo to anons and telling them what they need to do to make it through. However, this anon soon met his demise. On the battle field he was overran, after countless maneuvering and advanced military tactics, he couldn't defend against the onslaught, just barely managing to make it out of one of the more dangerous lines of fire, he lost his right arm and weapons. He pulled through far enough to grant warning to some anons, but it wasn't of much use at the time. Losing all that blood and sweat just trying to survive, he exhausted himself. Thinking back on his goal, he kneeled down, and dreamed of a better world for the countless soldier anons who had to face such an evil. Taking his last breath, he closed his eyes and prayed....

2/2
Fin

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>>28304893
>>28304897
>Taking his last breath, he closed his eyes and prayed....

>>28304893
>1 season, 30 episodes, and 5 minutes later,
you got me there

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Sweet, the thread is back.
Wait.. what's going on?

>>28304897
>On the battle field he was overran, after countless maneuvering and advanced military tactics, he couldn't defend against the onslaught, just barely managing to make it out of one of the more dangerous lines of fire, he lost his right arm and weapons. He pulled through far enough to grant warning to some anons, but it wasn't of much use at the time. Losing all that blood and sweat just trying to survive, he exhausted himself. Thinking back on his goal, he kneeled down, and dreamed of a better world for the countless soldier anons who had to face such an evil. Taking his last breath, he closed his eyes and prayed....
The realest nigga out there. R.I.P. Anon Y. Mous.

But was his sacrifice avenged? Did we win the war?

>>28305187
And if that wasn't clear enough:

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1ovDorWdWMm

>>28305283
>One anon came back and questioned the entire ordeal, which set of a chain reaction of PTSD flashbacks to the great waifu war of thread >>28300839 (OP)
>One anon came back and questioned the entire ordeal, which set of a chain reaction of PTSD flashbacks to the great waifu war of thread >>28300839 (OP)
Holy shit, my slides

>>28305283
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s1ovDorWdWMm
Thank you.

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>>28304897

war never changes

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>>28305242

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>>28305460
RIP

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>>28304897
Let's remember the hero worthy moments of soldier Anon Y. Mous.

>>28305730
Lol, who is drawing this?

>>28305863
A group of interns working at the Anon Y. Mous Memorial Institute for Enlightened Military Individuals.

>>28305863
OBVIOUSLY The guy who could have been drawing cool adventures.

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>>28305730
Hold them off, Anon. Stand by your champions.

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>reads thread
I am afraid

>>28305875
If you really think this is the same guy as OP, you must be thick.

>>28306890
You dummy.
I was >implying that with skills like that one can hop into fun world of Adventure drawing.

>>28306933
Damnit, soldier. Get back in there, don't pussy out on us now! We have a war to win!

>>28307311
Damnit, soldier! This isn't a game. Now get in there and fight for your beloveds!

Should've chose a Necromancer class, sans. Resurrect the dead anons to fight another day!

>>28307404
Daaaamn. My nigga Anon Y. Mous risked his entire life just to allow you to have waifus and other unlisted positives, and you don't even try to avenge him. Fucking gay. Papyrus is better, fucking spine yourself.

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>>28307404
Hey sans wanna go get some ice cream and pizza?

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>>28307703

>>28307521
>I get the joke but y no pizza
>nobody said we had to eat
>I just wanna burn the place down
>some men just wanna watch the world burn

RIP this thread.
RIP OP.
RIP this story.
RIP Anon.

>>28308647
RIP you a new asshole for not having faith

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>>28309052
How dare you. >>28309052 is right. Bend over now!

>>28309369
You've fucked up, faggot!

>>28308647
Shit. I meant >>28309369.

>>28309496
Let me make it up to you. Just wait.

>>28309512
It doesn't make any sense!
Are trying to say that >>28308647 is right or the >>28309052 is???

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Sorry for my rampant autism guys. Here's an Apology Ponk.

>>28309836

It's shit, just like whatever you did that you're apologizing for.

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RIP good thread,
You will be missed.

Was it worth it, Anon?

>>28310509
He fought well.

>>28309836
Good for you that I don't hate Ponk anymore.
Apology accepted.

waifu

Boop

filly

bump for the fallen

>>28310509
I like how the color scheme went black and white on the last panel. The attention to detail in just about all of these always take me back a bit. It's a nice touch and things like this help me remember that I should add more abstract and dynamic elements to my own drawings.

tl;dr R.I.P. Anons

lmao this didn't last very long

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>>28314108
I wonder why.

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"This statue is in remembrance of Anon Y. Mous -- the soldier who risked it all for the sake of life, love, and liberty."

>>28314360
Oh come on, he risked everything to fuck fillies. And he failed.

>>28314727
>he risked everything to fuck fillies
Seems like a noble goal.

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>>28310509

>>28315248
That sure is, Anon.

Wait a second, the drawfag is gone without a reason? and left us at the climax? He has really done it?

>>28317989
Oh, there was a climax alright

A brutal, bloody climax

R.I.P.

>>28314727
He didn't fail. He made it so other Anons could live out his dreams. That was his ultimate goal. Now he's in paradise.

>>28317989
>and left us at the climax?
No, we haven't gotten to the climax yet. The climax is meeting Pinkie Pie, Right now where just with the CMC. Fucking sweetie isn't the climax.

>>28317989
>without a reason
Considering the thread being hijacked by a few different anons, I don't blame OP for leaving.
Not to mention the faggots who, with their shitty directions, lead OP into a monotonous writing corner.
Fuck nice things though.

>>28318196
I-I don't know if your gonna get banned for that or not.

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>>28318204
Meh, I don't know, I've dynamic ip so I don't care.

Page 10 are we still going?

>>28318196
This is the most fucked thing I've seen here. I can't stop watching. Why would you do that?

>>28319092
For the lulz

>>28319092
>This is the most fucked thing I've seen here
In this thread or on /mlp/ or on 4chan?

>>28319338
I can't help but wonder what motivated him to shove a tiny hat in his dick
Probably the sam reason for most stuff on this page: boredom, alcohol and the fact that you can.

>>28319402
whoops, deleted the > there on accident.

this is over. what are you still doing here?

>>28317989
he was weak

>>28319595
I've gotten used to it to the point where I gradually stopped caring about the rest and now I don't have much else left.

>>28319619
find other things to like, and when they end find something else. it's that simple

>>28319624
But this gives me a good reason to drink.

I can't be the only one who keeps checking on this thread to see if War Anon continues posting pictures on the war for waifus, right?

>>28320114
No, you're totally the only one. I'm not really here. It's not like I have this thread in the thread watcher and on auto update or anything.

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<"!sdratsab eimmoc uoy eiD"
<""*sesiondoolbnognikohc*"
>"Sad, out of all sides he had to choose *that* one.... This is the fate you chose."

>>28318817

Bump from 10. what are we doing are we supposed to let it die?

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>>28319595
>what are you still doing here?

What are any of us still doing anywhere?

Friendly reminder that
>>28302136
killed this thread.

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>>28325289
Stop it with that negativity soldier!

>>28325289
Remember when this was about Anon trying to romance Pinkie Pie with possible Filly Fiddling? Now it is... Not even pony related and should probably be pruned or moved to >>>/trash/

So this thread is stickdeath now?

>>28325682
I sadly agree.

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>>28325649
Sir, new orders from command. We are to seize the enemy's fillies, denying them of their daily cute rations. Time for a war of attrition.

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>>28325789
Orders received. Proceeding with mission.

>>28325944
we RGS now?

>>28325990
Im guessing so, i was enjoying the green filly fucking or not but oh well.

>>28326042
What went wrong? Anons finding an art style easy enough to copy?

>>28326042
There wasn't much even going on. It was cool at first, and this thread left some to be desired, but OP just upped and left for no reason. I personally enjoy his replacement, at least it's somewhat consistent.

>>28326070
>OP just upped and left for no reason
It was faggotry that drove him away but I agree that it wasn't the degree of faggotry that's usually required to drive away a QM.

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>>28326070
Well im not saying i hate the new guy i really don't. Its just i hate when anon's let their story die. Its like the snake filly story, or the story were twilight is anon's daughter because her mom summoned and fucked him. Or Wardrobe Malfunction At Canterlot High. It just sucks that there are so many stories that people just abandon and then here is another one.

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>>28326200
Don't forget about forget about human Pinkie >no hooves trying to get hikikomori/social recluse Anon to lead a better life, NHK style.

>>28326136
>poetry
>faggotry
Are you literally 12 years old?
>pottery

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Why do people think that it was the poetry that killed this thread?
Why do people think any drawings past >>28301591 are OP at all?
Do you really not see the difference in style, even the difference in penstrokes?
OP probably left because >>28302888 >>28302958 and so on decided to copy his style in an attempt to make people think he was giving up again.
Soon after even more anons decided to just post their own crappy attempts at what OP was doing. So yeah, I understand why he left.
If you don't, then you must be thick.

>>28328492
nope

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>>28328506

>>28328506
>nope
What did he mean by this?

>>28328492
>Do you really not see the difference in style, even the difference in penstrokes?
There isn't a big difference. In >>28301591 the 2nd panel shows that OP did not actually sit there and draw Anon, he just put together a stick figure using the line tools. There's no trail of pressure sensitivity and its quality rivals >>28302958.

>>28328492
>I understand why he left.
I could understand why he may have left, but that doesn't make it a good reason. He could've still continued the story and as evidenced in the thread, no one could draw fillies like he can, so it's an obvious sign that it's him. No one hijacked the thread or derailed it. OP left us hanging, then someone who possibly could've been OP said it was over. Leaving for such a reason makes you a pussy, but even the biggest of pussies could realize that everyone here would still enjoy the story if OP came back. Him leaving isn't excusable and the thread is better now than it was when he first made it.

Thanks for ruining the thread, wannabe tryhards.

>>28328821
>he just put together a stick figure using the line tools
Op goes back and forth from thick lines to tapered lines, this is evident since the beginning. The thick, more rough lines are for scenes that aren't in the moment compared to the slick, tapered lines used for something like when we bedded the cunt horse.
Also, is your head on straight? Even in the second panel, the lines aren't perfectly straight. So it wasn't a line tool, he drew that himself.
>No one hijacked the thread or derailed it
So is a few random anons deciding to make it seem like OP gave up the thread NOT supposed to be hijacking? Or is the other Anon who "replaced" him making it about some sort of war NOT derailing?
>thread is better now than it was when he first made it
lol
Whatever sort of story is happening right now is not better than what OP did for us last thread. It's someone drawing random war scenes with shitty stick anons doing whatever. The first time a pony even showed up is >>28325944 so don't try and pull that garbage. This thread was on the edge of page 10 more than a few times, just let it die and maybe OP will come back for something with a bit more planning a little less "giving anons the full reign."

>>28328894
This anon speaks the truth.

>>28318190
>>28328867
Objectively speaking, posts like >>28328492 >>28325682 >>28325289 >>28328894
are what's ruining the thread.

>>28328894
>he drew that himself
>2nd panel

>So is a few random anons deciding to make it seem like OP gave up the thread NOT supposed to be hijacking
Who's to say that it wasn't actually OP? There's nothing that says he couldn't just jump back into the thread. In fact, I bet the only reason why anons started to draw their own shit was because the thread had nothing else going for it. And I bet everyone who wants to see OPs story would welcome OP back to the thread if he came back.

>Whatever sort of story is happening right now is not better than what OP did for us last thread
>last thread
>this thread
You see nothing important happened to the story in this thread, and the novelty died off after the first thread died. The only reason why the first thread was even popular was because it starred a stick figure. It reached its peak in popularity when Anon was about to fuck rainbow dash, and most posts are in reference to other posts and not the story itself. The story died when the thread hit the bump limit, as this thread went to page 9 before OP even started and it had only 2-3 replies.

Also, seeing the entire war that's going on now unfold was the 2nd greatest thing in these threads right behind Anon eating out Rainbow Dash. All of a sudden a bunch of stick figures appear calling each other out, at the time no one expected it and it was fun to see what happened next.

The war story is also objectively better written than the GTW! story, and it has much better characters.

>maybe OP will come back for something with a bit more planning
That won't excuse the shitty story. The hype died when thread 1 died, and thread one leached off of the success of the first three RGA stories. No one would've clicked on just another cyoa, the stick figures are what saved it, and selling sex was the only thing that made this thread interesting.

>>28329116
>Objectively speaking
"Objectivley speaking" is a good way to say "without a lick of thought."
>Who's to say that it wasn't actually OP?
Because then styles and handwriting are totally different??? Look at the first post anon and the letters written there, then look at >>28302888 and >>28302958, the anon and the letters. If you can't see how different it is, you must be blind.
> as this thread went to page 9 before OP even started and it had only 2-3 replies
Maybe you didn't realize that OP takes at least an hour to write and draw each post. So yeah, the thread almost died after he posted it. That has nothing to do with anything.
>seeing the entire war that's going on now unfold was the 2nd greatest thing in these threads
Again, lol.
>most posts are in reference to other posts and not the story itself
I guess you've also never been in a CYOA thread before. The time in between updates is always either shitposting or bumps.
>shitty story
It wasn't shitty, OP just focused on it too much.
>leached off of the success of the first three RGA stories
>selling sex was the only thing that made this thread interesting
1. The RGA story and this one only share similarities in that both Anons are stick figures. Why is it suddenly leeching when one anon uses a stick figure for Anon and another Anon does the same? There have been countless threads with Anon being drawn like that in the past, so this one doesn't make any difference. Some people just find it harder to draw a full-blown human in a suit.
2. The only reason that sex even happened is because of anons voting for it. Like I said before, the story was mostly controlled by anonymous and OP just filled the in between. This is why useless things kept happening that lead us no closer to the original goal, because anon hates nice things. >>28318190 said things about a writing corner, and that's exactly what happened.
We KNOW OP fucked up, I am not denying that.

>>28329290
>>28329116
Also,
Claiming that OP was leeching off another threads success, RGA anons, is something I consider to be a disgusting generalization of what a CYOA is.
Just in case you never bothered to read what both QMs do with their thread...
RGA anon uses his randomly generated choices to FORCE the story forward, and there was never a real "goal" when the thread started. This makes for some random stuff that can be pretty fun to see happen.
THIS anon uses a predetermined goal and the input of anonymous to gently ease the story forward, making the interactions longer and more memorable. Saying that the characters in this story was somehow worse than whatever was going on in the war bits is fucking retarded.
Also the word "novelty," that's a bad use of it. Something like RGA is more of a novelty than what this was. Because novelty describes a certain quirk or aspect that's new that makes something interesting. The WAR anons story is novel. If anything, this story has no novelty at all, but is still wholesome despite it thanks to the art and story.
Personally, I think OP should just draw things, and stop attempting to craft a perfect story along with it. It seems like too huge of an undertaking.

>>28329290
>without a lick of thought."
Considering that anyone currently viewing the thread is viewing it at a consistent pace, then there are people who keep coming and spouting BS like the thread is dead which if it was you can go to CYOA discussion to complain.

>Because then styles and handwriting are totally different
Don't tell me you're going to argue that penmanship for the title and for sound effects are the same as the penmanship you use for every day writing?

>Again, lol.
Tell me again what makes OP's story any better?
>you are anon
>you are in equestria, well you've been there, for a year
>you like pinkie pie
>rarity is a bitch
>you eat rainbow cunt
>get raped by CMC
vs.
>you are anon
>you are a soldier
>fighting for the right to have a waifu
>risked it all
>you die at the end
Sorry mate, but licking rainbow taint doesn't make a story good in my opinion. At least the war story has depth to it, regardless on how it was just thrown together randomly.

>It wasn't shitty
It only had one thing going for it, the one thing that even made it interesting aside from the stick figures, and that was tasting the rainbow. Everything else wasn't worth reading, it was just filler. No depth, nothing interesting, really bland.

>The RGA story and this one only share similarities in that both Anons are stick figures
Mate, do you honestly believe that this CYOA got its attention because it had an interesting premise and was genuinely written well? After the success of RGA(3 times in the making) of course having a stick figure MC is going to turn some heads. If it had an originally drawing of a human anon in a suit it wouldn't have gotten nearly as much popularity. It wasn't even brought up in CYOA discussion when it was first released, yet a thread actually made and posted into CYOA discussion with basic vector art had 1 poster. If RGA never came back around, and stick figures weren't the selling point, GTW! would be another dead CYOA with only ~30 posters on average.

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>>28329414
>generalizing the whole last thread to better his argument
>comparing it to 7 or so quick and dirty posts about some random war garbage
>somehow it's better

>>28329414
>nothing interesting, really bland
But that's just like, your opinion man.

>>28329382
>Claiming that OP was leeching off another threads success, RGA anons, is something I consider to be a disgusting generalization of what a CYOA is.
Except you're overlooking the fact that RGA 1-3 were extremely fucking popular and going by the average CYOA, they need something extremely unique to get a huge following. GTW featured a stick figure just like the most popular threads of the past month, naturally people would click. Maybe I'm basing it off myself, but I know for a fact I wouldn't have clicked on the first thread if it weren't for it having a stick figure, RGA set some high expectations, and in fact, GTW started right while RGA was still going. There's no doubt OP knew he could use stick figures to an advantage.

>Saying that the characters in this story was somehow worse than whatever was going on in the war bits is fucking retarded.
The main story for the war section has one main character, everyone else is fodder for him. The story makes him out to be a Gary Stu, and he's supposedly the perfect hero who died a great death. So you have this completely cool soldier guy who is a great person vs a loser trying to fuck a horse. I'll also remind you that this "soldier" is also fighting to allow losers like GTWAnon to fuck a horse.

Nothing is going to change my opinion that regardless on how little text the story has, war anon is written better than GTWAnon, and GTWAnon doesn't have characters that tie you up and somehow make it your fault.

>>28329451
The last thread only had one thing making it interesting, and that pales in comparison to the detail in the story about the war. Which is really fucking sad because it's as you said short and just thrown together.

>>28329414
Bro, I came to this thread because I liked the way it was drawn. Why the fuck do you think that some other anon drawing a stickfigure, and NOTHING else being the same, makes it some sort of leech?
RGA anon doesn't even draw actual ponies, they're stick figures too, why the hell isn't that something you bring up?
Why are you ignoring these facts?

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>>28328894
>>28329116
>>28329290
>>28329382
>>28329414
>>28329451
>>28329466
>>28329490
>>28329519
Damn it, soldiers! It doesn't matter! We all got left behind, don't you see? We're all in the same boat, and it's sinking. Either help us stay afloat, or weigh us down; regardless on what you chose, know that none of this is your faults, we were just piled up together like trash.

We stand here to fight for our freedoms. Maybe there is a man out there, living in a fantasy world where he gets to play with ponies. What we strive for in life is to allow that man to be able to do such. Actions speak louder than words, so get out there and make this short life of yours count!

>>28329490
>Op knew he could use stick figures to his advantage
Or, OP can't draw humans well?
Also what the fuck kinda universe do I live in when a Gary Stu is supposed to be better than an underdog with room for improvement?
At this point I really have to give up on you, Anon.

>>28329519
>and NOTHING else being the same, makes it some sort of leech?
If a new show came out and the main character was similar to Twilight Sparkle in nearly every way, that would obviously make you want to see what it's about more than if it was just another calarts CN production.

GTW started out when RGA was basking in success, the stick figures are the initial leach, and the sex kept people here. As you can see, it didn't do much because this thread died quickly and had no action even before OP left.

>>28329549
>Gary Stu is supposed to be better than an underdog with room for improvement
>hur dur this cliché is worse than this cliché so regardless on how good the story is, this will always be bad.
Shit fucking argument. Doesn't matter how much of a gary stu War Anon is, he's written to be a better character than GTWAnon.

There's a clear contrast over which character is written better, one may be more relatable, but the other is more noble. Self insert vs Perfection.

>walls and walls of text

okay, it really is time to let this thread die and wait for OP to make a new thread for the same story or something completely different or nothing for a while.

>>28329490
>detail in the story about the war
We reading the same thread here, bub?

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>>28329585
>It doesn't matter that their both cliches, MINES better!
>Fuck realism! I want my favorite character to be perfect! I don't wanna build it up into something greater than before!
>I know i'll just call them self inserts when the OP specifically said that he makes Anon out to be whatever our choices make him! Fuck, i'm a genius.

>>28329608
>Fuck realism! I want my favorite character to be perfect! I don't wanna build it up into something greater than before!
That's an ever shittier argument than before. Just because the story is about a person just like you doesn't make it great. If you're not an interesting person in real life, then you won't be in a story about yourself. You have a loser trying to get laid vs a soldier trying to win a war. You have to have literal shit taste to believe the loser is a better story.

>>28329588
You don't need endless lines of dialogue and narration to have detail in a story.

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>>28329666
No bro, you have shit taste.
>No bro, you have shit taste.
No... bro... you have shit taste.
>Naw, pretty sure it's you with the shit taste.
I think i've boiled down this conversation enough. See you in therapy.

>>28329490
>>28329549
>Gary Stu
War Anon isn't a Gary Stu. If you actually read the story, he's just the one soldier that stands out the most. In fact, going by the comics, he's just another soldier who apparently has more connections than others. It wasn't until this post >>28304897 where War Anon gets put on a pedestal as the best soldier. He doesn't actually do anything special in the story, as of now he helped one person and killed another. The only Gary Stu related section he has is >>28314360 and even then it isn't stated that he's the greatest soldier in the world. It just states he's a soldier he risked it all.

>>28329587
>let this thread die
Not really. The thread is fine as it is. The other anon mentioned it in a poor manner, but the thread doesn't need to die. OP's story did in fact lose its spark after the first one died, and it's undeniable that some of its interest - maybe even a majority of it - stemmed from the fact that it featured a stick figure which just so happened to be something the most popular thread at the time had as well. Just going by the way it played out this thread, the story wasn't going to get immensely better. At best we would've gotten some filly sex which would've sparked up the posts, then it would've settled after a few hours when OP stopped writing about the stuff everyone wanted.

Speaking subjectively, the new story is better. A more interesting dynamic and not something that's been done since 2011 on /mlp/. Yes, it has been done before, but GTW! has been played to death, whereas a war story on fighting for fillies has not. The two characters? One is probably more relatable, and one is without a doubt more special. Does that make either one better? No, it does however set them apart vastly.

>>28329684
Your opinion is literally shit though. Mine is less shit.

>>28329721
So OPs story was done to death shit, and War Anon's story is new and unique?
So I win the argument, great, I expected so.

>>28329721
A story about anon in a war is not new, you fucking retard.

>>28329776
Meant to reply to
>>28329756

>>28329721
tl;dr

>>28329792
tl;dr: GTW! is nothing special. Is written just barely on par. Has poor characterization.

War Anon isn't played out. Is written better. Has a better main character.

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>>28329856

>>28329856
I don't care what you do. If you really did just leave like a pussy, then I have less respect for you than the next random anon who calls me out on my shit.

Sad how the shitposting is still better than the story that you managed to create.

>>28329856
PULL THE TRIGGER
DO IT

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>>28329856
What will he do?

>>28329990
grow enormous eye brows

>>28329990
Oh look, another doppelganger.

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>>28329995
Doesn't sound like a great idea to me. What about something else?

>>28330031
summon a small lesser demon through sheer willpower

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>>28330026
>>28329990
Are you the real Wuzzlefluff? Mmmm, looks like a fake to me.

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>>28330055
Seriously guys, stop hijacking the thread. Actually, it doesn't matter. I'm going to make a new one in just a few moments. I just need to plan out the story board.

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>>28330098
>>28330055
>>28330031
>>28329990

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*click*

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>>28330262