Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #31

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>green

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>>28299069
>Not using the telephone picture.
You done goofed bloke.

>>28299104
Not Spider-y enough

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>>28299104
>>28299116
We need to edit it more then.

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>>28299090
Son of a

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Well I guess it's time to get started on the next update.

>>28299116
Don’t web inside me.

Buy me some drinks first

>>28299125
Give her a penis.

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Remember that this is untitled's true form

>>28299200
no, bad Anon

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>>28299200
Go away trapfag.

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>>28299274
>taking the bait.

>>28299470
it wasn't bait.

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>>28299470
>the clone giving me lip

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>>28299510
Why so serious?

WHY DID YOU WEB ME BLOKE?

>>28300656
>INB4 keaton's become too loose

>>28300656
I needed to make you mine, just like I did Keaton

>>28300725
Why not beans or unlimited?

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>>28300749
Silence
And accept your fate

>>28300779
I don’t want to be a bicycle, want to be alive or a cowboy

>>28300818
You can be
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Dat boi

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>>28299069

>>28300843
Can’t someone stop bloke's reign?

>>28298978
Fuck you.

Continuing from pastebin: http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0

>You sit in the back of the police car with Barbara, and none other than her father Commissioner Gordon drives you.
>The music he plays is alright, nothing special.
>Some classical stuff that’s quite relaxing, pretty calming.
>Good shit really.
>It’s been awhile since he’s made those phone calls at this point, and a plan has been set.
>You’re going to Twilight Sparkle’s house where all the girls are meeting, then you guys pick them up and go to Gordon’s place.
>And truth be told, imagining Twilight and and Barbara meeting each other is really satisfying.
>Why is this satisfying?
>Because you wanna know how they’ll interact one on one for the first time.
>You know, if it is the first time they’ve met seeing as how they both went to Crystal Prep.
>...Yeah, you’re still hung up on how similar sounding the two’s voices are, so what?
>Really though, you’re just glad to be surrounded by friends.
>Even though you pretty much saw the whole gang at school today, you definitely miss them right now.
>You’re vulnerable and weak; you need to see these people in your life at the moment.
>And you don’t mean to pick apart everything and complain, but...
>It’s night outside the car and it’s spooky, Barbara is on the phone with her boyfriend, and you’re pretty sure Gordon used his rear-view mirror to comb his moustache earlier.
>Other than that, you’re fine despite your Dad going missing and dealing with trauma from leaving your Spidey-for-lifey behind at her request while fighting a crazy topless chick with robot arms of death that wants to do things to you.
>But hey, everyone has those weird weeks, eh?
>...Ok, maybe not.

>You lay your head against the car window and observe the black night and what little is lit by the streetlights.
>From what you can tell, these houses are not lower-class or upper-middle class, just a solid middle.

>>28300914
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czTksCF6X8Y

>>28301124
oh shit its a ghost

>>28301226
Time to finish Red's revolution!

>>28301317
No one can stop pizza time

>>28301406
We can try, you slut

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>>28301487

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It appears Shimmy has been captured.
Why, any old super villain could come right along and do whatever he wanted to her.

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>>28301317
>>28301487

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>>28301904
Hail Chronos

>>28301226
Why this music?

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>>28302101

>>28300749
>unlimited
What?

>>28302411
I guess that's your new name?

>>28302961
This makes my delusions worse

>>28303901
If I have to go down then I'm gonna take you with me

>>28304052
I'm still writing on both my stories

>>28304117
Same here. just need a break at times

Good morning~!

How is everyone?

>>28304550
I'm pretty good.

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>>28304550

>>28304614
Then brace yourself

>>28304630
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S-XEINagmaU

>>28289883
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Equestria Dimension 7225
>Sunset transformed back into her human form, and, considering she's naked, you quickly summon a blanket for her.
>The guy whom she clings onto single-handedly made her transform back from her form of corrupted magic.
>And he had brought with him a woman who removed the other entity from Sunset.
>This woman...
>She bears the features of a changeling.
>The color scheme, and the perforated hair and wings.
>You have not met the Chrysalis of your world often, but you're sure that this person is this worlds Chrysalis.
>And you know that Spitfire has had problems with changelings.
>Your past self would immediately inform Spitfire about this, but you should give this Chrysalis the benefit of the doubt.
>There are more than one tribe of changelings in your world, there could be more than one in this world as well.
>You're not going to sit by idly either, but as she helped safe your friend, Sunset, she deserves you treating her with some respect.
>But Chrysalis is not the current problem.
>The other Sunset is.
>The Sunset that has been born in this world.
“You are Sunset Shimmer?”
>She took a defensive position, her eyes trailing to her counterpart every so often.
>“I am... So who's that?”
“That's a Sunset Shimmer too... Uhh... Hi! I'm Matter-Horn. Nice to finally meet you.”
>You extent your arm to her, which she doesn't take.

>>28305045
>“Have I been cloned? Is- Is that what's going on here? Is Celestia responsible for this?”
“Princ...ipal Celestia? Of Canterlot High?”
>You see the area around her eyes on the mask move slightly
>“I'm not gonna tell you anything.”
“You can trust me, I'm... uhh... friendly?”
>“You're wearing a mask, don't tell me your real name, that's me there who just transformed back from being a monster. You start talking, or I start throwing punches.”
“Okay, ahh, hmm...”
>You take off the mask covering your face.
“I'm Princess Twilight Sparkle, I'm from another dimension, as is she.”
>“You're from another dimension?”
>Both Chrysalis and Sunset say in unison.
>Meanwhile Spitfire moves to keep the quin-jet hovering at the building to walk in and out.
>“You're expecting me to believe that?”
>“You say that rather casually.”
>Chrysalis seems to be familiar with the concept.
“I have no reason to lie.”
>“I don't know who you are, you may have every reason to lie.”
“Thank you for helping save my friend, Miss Shimmer.”
>You give her a bow, catching her off guard.
>“I- ahh... you're welcome?”
>“Now this all is very fun, isn't it. I'm excited for the debriefing.”
>The woman in flames, Rapidfire, reminds you that there are secrets to be kept in this world, and that they are not quite yours to tell.
>You should let Spitfire dissolve the tenseness of the situation.

>>28305052
>Be any of the girls in the quin-jet, but Pinkie or Spitfire.
>You rush out of the jet as soon as you could to come to Sunset's side.
>Last time she was a monster she needed all the comforting she could get.
>While you don't know what's going on, you'll help your friend.

>Be Pinkie.
>You know exactly what is going on, and as soon as you could hear the next... wait for it.
>“Well, what in darnation is going on around here now?”
>Applejack gives you your cue.
>You let go with the breath you had been holding.
“Oh, that's easy. Sunny, and I mean our Sunny, the one we went to school with, not the one who disappeared just before ours showed up, because, you know, a 'Sunset' had been 'sick' at one point of our High School life for a while, which was just a cover to say she was missing, or ran away from home. While at the same time the Sunset from the other dimension ran away from home too, literally! She hopped dimensions to ours and took this Sunny here's place.”
>You point at the masked Sunset.
“Remember when Sunset said it was easy to find her way around, well that had been because everyone already assumed she existed, and she didn't come out of nowhere. So anyway, our Sunny got possessed by this black goo, which is now in that lady over there, a condition she should have checked out soon, because Sunny went bad bonkers crazy and transformed into a demon-y thing.”
>To underline your words you flail your arms around theatrically as you approach the subject of your words.
“And just as we all arrived, everyone arrived, all of Sunsets friends to help her! And after the goo was gone Sunset got rescued by the power of love, I mean, look at just how cute those two are together.”
>Crouching down next to Sunset and the boy you extend your hand to him.
“Hey, what's your name, I'm Pinkie Pie! I think Sunset called you Anon while she was still transformed.”
>He looks at you in confusion before shaking your hand.

>>28305055
>After being done with the handshake he snaps his fingers next to his ears and shakes his head.
“He also suffers hearing loss from rushing to Sunset while that lady over there screamed.”
>You look to the black woman for a second more before returning your attention to Sunset.
“Hey, Sunset, nice to see you again, even if the circumstances could have been different. I don't know if you're in the mood, but with almost everyone here we should throw a reunion party. All we need now is our Twilight.”
>Then your head snaps back to the present Twilight.
“Not that you're not /our/ Twilight as well, but I mean the one of our dimension.”
>“Yes, I understood that, Pinkie.”
>Twilight comes closer to Sunset, Anon and yourself and leans down to help Sunset up.
>During your explanation everyone had been quiet, and Sunsets tears had ceased.
>“That was quite something.”
>Rapidfire's Flames died down as well.
>“Colonel, I request all our debriefings be like that in the future.”
>“I'll see what I can do to make that request a reality.”
>Spitfire replies with a slight smile.
“I can be hired for parties, but I don't think it's the time to talk about business at the moment.”
>“No, you're quite right. We have more pressing issues...”
>Spitfire approaches the woman who took the black goo monster thingy.
>“You knew what this was?”
>“The Klyntar?”
>The goo monster forms another head on her shoulder and snarls at Spitfire then retreats back into her body.
>“No, never heard of them.”
>She smiles deviously.
>“I've been waiting to meet someone from the Wonderbolts though. However, I didn't expect it to be top cop.”
>Heh, top cop.
>“We have much to talk about.”

>>28304640
did the green please you or do you want more?

>>28305074
we always want more, silly!
but yes, this is good!

>>28305082
always for you

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>>28305074
You have to ask?

>>28305059
>Be Spitfire.
>“We have much to talk about.”
“I agree.”
>You look towards the boy once more.
>Treehugger never told you exactly what was going on with him, or her for that matter.
>You only know she has a healing factor which makes her survive time as well.
>Not perfectly, because she has seemingly fallen sick the last couple of years.
>You have no idea what it is, or if her power is simply failing, but you know she hasn't gone to any kind of doctor.
>Nor contacted anyone from her past life.
>Besides you until 12 hours ago.
>He hacked into Twilight's Wonderbolts account, and now shows up to save his girlfriend from some sort of parasite with an unknown woman.
>You're missing a few pieces of this puzzle, and you don't like that.
“Colonel Spitfire.”
>You extent your hand to the woman.
“But I assume you already know that.”
>“Indeed I did.”
>She takes your hand.
>“Chrysalis. I'm... a friend.”
“I've heard that one before. A friend of what?”
>“Humanity's independence and/or survival.”

>>28305095
“Humanity's independence?”
>You repeat.
>“Yes... You see, about three years ago you've unearthed – no pun intended – a powerful artifact. By the amount of energy it radiates out into the universe I can only assume it's the space-gem.”
>That was your deepest fear.
>The tesseract emits a form of radiation, but now you actually have confirmation that an alien species is interested in it.
>“You have taken the tesseract out of it's hiding-place?”
>Both you and Chrysalis look to the earth-born Sunset Shimmer.
>She knows about it?
>“And Celestia let you?”
“The principal of that High School?”
>“This world's Celestia guarded the tesseract?”
>Princess Sparkle, who used the cube as an exit node for the transdimensional portal knows another 'Celestia'?
“You have a version of Celestia in your dimension as well?”
>“She's... Equestrias ruler.”
“And in this world she was the principal of a high school?”
>“Celestia wasn't just the principal of a High School. She was supposed to keep the tesseract safe!”
>This world's Sunset Shimmer has obviously strong feelings about this.
>“Because, with it outside of its confinement...”
>“...this planet better be ready to defend itself.”
>Chrysalis ends.
>Priority 0 – World: Interplanetary war imminent.

>>28305082
Almost out of inches to stuff you with. Don't make me make you beg for more

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>>28305143
L-Lewd!

>>28305186
you know you want more

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>>28305192
sh-shut up!

>>28305211
eh, I'm almost done with the rest anyway

>>28305270
Can I have sloppy seconds?
>Smacks Keaton's ass.

>>28305286
my keaton, not yours

>>28305100
>Be Sunset Shimmer
>Of Equestria Dimension 7225.
>Not that you would have felt the need to add that in your introduction ever, but now it seems necessary.
>The Sunset Shimmer of this world sits quite close to you and gives you a weird glance every once in a while.
>She has taken off her mask after everyone boarded the quin-jet.
>You remember shooting one out of the sky... You hope nobody got... too much hurt.
>Everything's gone to shits.
>It feels so long ago when you had blushed at Anon for talking nerdy to you.
>You're leaning on his shoulder.
>He was supposed to be your last straw to a normal life.
>You aren't sure how he got to you, but he pulled you out of the actual monster-making goo from space, and with only a hug managed to transform you back to your usual self.
>You dragged him into this.
>You'd apologize over and over, but his hearing has not returned yet... if it would return.
>Chrysalis screamed quite badly, and Anon disregarded his own safety to save you.
>You are the super powered one.
>You are to protect him.
>But he did it for you.
>You'd really want to be alone with him right now, but... the fate of the world is in the balance.
>Meanwhile the girls try to catch up a little, but you don't say much.
>Hey, I forgot to tell you that I'm Spider-Woman. Only Twilight knew, but she's dead now. That's my boyfriend, Anon. And done, all caught up.
>What is there really to say with the threat of planetary war looming over you.
>You just want to go home and fall into your bed.
>Or Anon's bed, and cuddle a little.
>The thought brings a smile to your face.
>Anon saved you.
>This thought always returns to your mind.

>>28305431
>Any sane person would have ran, but not him, he saved you.
>The damsel in distress is not so much a clishee when the damsel has super powers and the white knight doesn't.
>No arguments hold out against your feelings.
>Everyone in this jet has some sort of power.
>But the only one to make you feel protected is Anon.
>You have fallen for him.
>Hard.
>You know the words to say, but he can't hear you right now...
>A wave of sadness washes over you.
>He may not be able to hear you say these words ever.
>You think about Twilight again.
>There are things you simply don't bounce back from.
>The world is a fragile place, but very much worth of protecting.
>Spitfire, Princess Twilight, this Chrysalis, and the other Sunset all are discussing the possibility of war.
>A war you know you were going to be fighting in.
>You're not a soldier, nor would you want to be one, but it's not like gasprices are on the line.
>The entire planet could get destroyed.
>So if you are not going to be nuked from orbit, you are going to fight.
>This has nothing to do with the “With great power comes great responsibility”-crap.
>You're not going to help save the earth just because you're one of the idiots living on it.
>You want to protect him.
>Anon looks down to you.
>He was so cute, trying to stay calm while having no idea what's going on and even loosing his hearing.
>As his eyes fall on you, he manages to smile though.
>You know he wouldn't be able to hear it, but you want to tell him desperately, so you only mouth the words.

that's it for the day http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
pastebin now always crashes when I edit a piece, I may need to start a new paste and be one of those guys who has his story in multiple parts

>>28305481
thanks
it was cute, if a little awkwardly worded in places

>>28305481
can't wait to see him break the news that it's all his and chrysalis' fault.

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>>28305940
we can only guess where this is going

ok, I'm at a loss, I'd have to read my story again
anyone kept track how many days even passed?

>>28306219
not for your story, no

>>28306219
like a week right?

So, how's everyone's day going?

>>28306763
I think it was 1 and 1/2

Put my pastebin up there too next time pls

http://pastebin.com/t7Z4sp0i

>Be Femanon
>After getting your boob signed by Trixie aka Screwball you were late for your class
>Apperantly she was also late since she just came in
>You are taking history with her, a fact that you also didn't know until this moment
>She looks around for a place to sit after teacher tells her to come in
>"You can sit beside Miss Mous, Miss Lulamoon." She points toward you. "Please do hurry, I don't want my class disrupted any longer."
>"Yes, Mrs. Luna" Is the only thing she says before walking towards you after a slight hesitation.
>She just puts her backpack down and sits, ignoring you
>You are greatful for that honestly, because you don't think you can talk to her without dying
>You have her signiture on your left breast
>The thought is enough to turn you crimson and make you want to bash your head on the desk

>Be Trixie, Great and Powerful
>You are seated next to your crazed fangirl
>She already looks like she's about to explode
>You must admit it is a wonderful feeling, knowing she is so deeply effected by you but you are also really creeped out
>She keeps looking at you with the corner of her eye and she keeps fidgeting in her seat
>You decide to ignore her and reach for your history book
>404
>This. Is not. Happening.
>You dig around in your backpack
>Nope
>Okay Trixie, relax. Maybe Mrs. Luna won't not-
>"Miss Lulamoon, could you please open page one three five of your textbook."
>You are so screwed
"I uh... I can't find my book maam."
>She frowns at that. "In that case Miss Lulamoon, share your friend's book for now," she turns around before continuing "and see me after class please."
"Yes, maam."
>Green haired girl slides her book towards the middle of the desk
>You move a little closer to the book so you can look at it from a better angle
>She must be wary of bothering you since she just looks at the book from afar instead of moving closer
>Now you feel bad

>>28308024
>You are about to tell her to come closer when you realise you didn't even ask her name
>You feel extra bad now
"Hey!" You whisper after taking a deep breath, she looks at you, "What's your name?"
>She looks somewhat panicked. "I-it's Femanon, but you can call me Fem if you want... or not. You don't have to, you know? It's just-"
"Okay, Fem, Trixie got it." You intervene before she babbles any further. "Trixie wonders if you are having any problems reading like that?"
>"I- no it's fine, I'd hate to be a bother. Especially... Especially after this morning." She looks away.
>She feels really emberassed about that it seems, since she is really trying not to face you
"Trixie insists you come closer. This is your book afterall."
>"But... but I-" That's it.
>You grab her arm and pull her towards you
>She lets out a yelp
"Curses." You say as you realize everyone in the classroom is looking at you
>"Both of you stay after the class." Mrs. Luna says before going back to the subject

Btw I lost the past couple parts, can anyone link me to an archive so I can put them on my pastebin?

Made a pastebin for the Tonic green
http://pastebin.com/cMN76iPS

http://pastebin.com/LS1m1tMC
Pastebin for the green were Tonic Anon meets Infamous Anon

>>28310227

>>28310227

Good morning!
I hope everyone slept well?

>>28299125
Can someone edit in her lower suit?
I love seeing a butt and hips in tight spandex.

>>28299104
Must. Breed. Them. Hips.

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>>28311962
THAT*S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!

>>28311954
Yes. I bet somebody in this wide word can do that.

>>28311896
Doing well enough. I'm gonna try and write something for tonight. Just not sure if I'll continue the Tonic story or make another one shot.

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Gotta keep this thread alive.

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>>28312814

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>>28311954
I will see what i can do when i get home.
Also here have a pic i have posted before. Indigo Mania

>>28313120
Still your best work.

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>>28313120
yessssss

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>>28313146
Domo, still need to finish my backlog. Got down to highlights on nsfw black cats pic request, still need nova dash and another req from Trep.... Also just think i wanna do one of shim cause of muh fav.

>>28313198
godspeed, you fantastic drawfriend

>>28313198
Nice, can't wait

>>28313198
Always happy to get more Shimmy.

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>>28299125
This needs a black underwear edit asap.
Sunny is lewd when it comes to her panty choices.

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>>28313198
Midnight Sparkle as Galacta when?

>>28314891
Wonder, galactus or thanos...

Anyone know when the Tonic Anon is going to come back and write more?

>>28315082
I'm working on it

>>28315101
Sweet, just got done burning through whats there.

>>28315124
I'll have something by tomorrow and you just reminded me that I need to update the story.
Thanks

>>28315134
let me know when you update it.

>>28315145
I updated it

>>28315182
now back to reading

>>28315197
Hope you like it

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>>28315026
Galacta a cute

>>28315862
Does she turn planets into beads? What would the pull cord be made out of?

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>>28315889
Actually, she goes out of her way to avoid eating any sentient planets. She loves Earth culture, to the point of starving herself while suffering from insane hunger brought about by her pregnancy upping her required intake.

>>28315922
This cannot stand, GET THE MISSUS FOOD NOW OR I WILL BREAK YOUR WORLD!

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>>28315982
She is, in fact, ultra-cute.
so much so that, mistaking her pregnancy for a cosmic tapeworm, she tries to kill herself with the Ultimate Nullifier so she won't be hungry and dangerous anymore

>>28315862
I remember her. Wish I read the omics with her in them

>>28316742
she hasn't appeared again after her short run, unfortunately

Any suggestion/wishes for PurpleAnon?

>>28317507
Not sure, hypno isn't my thing. Just don't get rapey and that's good enough for me, maybe throw in a few scenes of Pinkie edging herself.

>>28317520
>hypno isn't my thing
Not mine either, really. But it would open the door to everything else easily...
I really need to think of an actual story I want to do

>>28317131
Damn and she looks cool

>>28308155

Guys I know this isn't as important but please link me to an archive like you did back then to prove keaton was thread slut so I can get my lost part of the story

>Be Sunset Shimmer
>It's lunch time and you are sitting with the girls
>Rainbow is talking about yesterday's Screwball broadcast
>You know, how you and Fem were like a couple
>Yeah it is trending on MyStable and stuff too
#Spider-Green
>"... and Spider-Girl was so embarrased but then Screwball ruined the moment." Rainbow goes on, "I wonder who is that new girl."
>"Hey girls. What are you on about?" Speak of the devil...
>Fem takes her seat next to you
>"Oh, hi Fem," Fluttershy speaks, "Rainbow was just telling us about the latest broadcast of Screwball."
>"Oh yeah? What happened?"
>"SG got a girlfriend!" Rainbow is really excited about this
>"You girls shouldn't give that ruffian any more reason to commit crimes by watching her videos ." Rarity intervenes. "If no one watched those videos she wouldn't go around causing damage."
>"She is harmless, Rares." Rainbow claims. "It's not like she hurts people."
>"Actually just yesterday she caused $27.000 of property damage." Twilight says. "She caused a total of $254.000 confirmed property damage and over half a million suspected damage."
>"I gotta agree with Twi here, Rainbow." Says AJ. "You should stop watching her videos, it only encourages her."
>Rainbow was about to object when Fem jumped in. "Can we go back to this girlfriend thing?" She says throwing her arm around you and pulling you close
>"Oh oh me me me me!" Pinkie chirps. "They were like hugging and SG was blushing and there were hearts everywhere theywere socuteohmygod!"
>"Oh was she now?" Fem breaths into your ear.
>Your heart skips a beat
>How does she always manages to push all your buttons?
>"Did you see the broadcast too Shimmy?" Fem asks slyly.
>Thankfully you are saved by a somewhat unfimiliar voice
>"Trixie hopes Trixie doesn't bother anyone by sitting here."

>>28318157
as soon as i get home

working on a (small) update. posting it soon

>>28286872
>Be Anon
>It's lunchtime.
>But you are not really in the mood to eat anything.
>The fact that lately not one, but THREE people saw you despite the use of your power is bothering you.
>First this psychopath with the stone mask saw you and you just thought he may have been a mutant with powers allowing him to do so maybe.
>Only problem is: Even if he had powers like that, it wouldn't explain why Smile and especially Pinkie would have been able to notice you.
>The worst is that you know for sure that Pinkie doesn't have powers that would enable her to do that despite yours.
>“Something wrong Anon? You seem kinda down.“
>You look to your right, realising Sunset is looking at you like the rest of the girls do.
>Pinkie of course isn't there, probably being with Smile.
>Wherever that may be.
“Well... sorta. I think I might be losing the control over my powers or even my powers themself.“
>No respond
>Besides sniggering from Dash
>“Man, what gave you a stupid idea like that?“
„Simply the fact that three people managed to notice me when they shouldn't have been able to.“
>This time, Sunset is the one to respond first.
>“Who? When? How?“
>She seems quiet nervous... or is she actually worried?
„Well first the Psycho from yesterday and today Pinkie and Smile.“
>The reaction that you get is actually kinda troubling.
>They all say the same thing at the same time?
>“Smile?!“
>And then, they just look at you in disbelief.
„Yep. He exists and as far as I can tell, he's a jerk.“
>“Tell us about him, darling. How does he look?“
>Of course Rarity would be the one to ask that first.

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>>28318344
„Well, first of all, he's an albino, white skin and hair, I think is eye-colour was pink. He looked a bit big, I guess he's about 1,80 tall.“
>After a moment of silence Rarity speaks up again.
>“And?“
„And what?“
>“Is he hot?“
>You have no idea what you expected.
>Even an idiot would have known she wanted that question answered the most.
„I have no idea Rarity. I'm not into guys if you remember.“
>“Is he ugly? Like, does he have crooked teeth or agne?“
„No.“
>“Is he fat?“
„Nope. He actually looked kinda fit.“
>“Is there anything about his appearance that could be discribed as hideous?“
„No.“
>Rarity just starts to smile onstead of asking more questions.
>“Sounds like he's hot if you ask me.“
___________________________
And done. hope you like it

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>>28318157
I've checked your pastebin and it looks like what you posted ends in this thread https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28164881/ and there is this thread that's between them https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28221563/.

Basically any update from later in Issue 29, any of 30 & 31 aren't in the pastebin.

Also for bonus information Issue 29 had the reminder that Keaton is no longer the slut and Bloke is now the official thread slut. The original changing occurred in Issue 26 towards the bottom of the thread. https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/27986413/#q28052885

>>28317507
How about more hijinxs like making Trixie stop talking in third person when he's around or even have Rainbow do all the push ups

>>28318415
Thx man appreciate it.

Thanks to this anon pastebin is updated

And I apologize to you keaton, didn't realize you've passed on your duty as the thread slut

>>28318877
Your bullying is... forgiven.

>>28318995
Good thing I don't bully my keaton

>>28318877
>>28318995
when the hell did we actually even get a thread slut?

>>28319066
When someone is asking for it

>>28319066
I dunno... I just woke up one day and there was all this... bullying...

>>28319139
I'll protect you from them

>>28319139
It happened during your first 2 one shots i believe

>>28305438
>Be Anon.
>You smile down at Sunset.
>One Sunset.
>Your Sunset...
>Hearing is slowly returning back to you, but pretending not to hear anything is kinda paying off at the moment.
>You're so utterly fucked.
>But at least there seems to be bigger problems at hand than you.
>You really need to think of an excuse as to why you knew that 'the monster' was Sunset to come to her aid.
>That is, if they don't already know.
>You need to find out what Chrysalis told them.
>If they are not busy planning a war, if you heard correctly.
>Why is there another Sunset?
>Why is there an alive Twilight?
>And why are there two people looking exactly the same, but one is tied up?
>The free one (you believe both their names are Starlight) tries to convince the other to use her powers for good and stop her agenda.
>The other won't have any of her mirror images 'attempts of advanced interrogation.' and 'how they dare clone her to brainwash her'
>Does everyone have an evil twin?
>Is it gay if you fuck a clone of yourself, or an advanced masturbation technique?
>The second Sunset seems friendly at least.
>What are your chances on a threesome?
>No, you wouldn't ever split your attention away from Sunset, even if it's another Sunset.
>Dear god, that line sounds cheesy.
>Wanting to please here more than you'd want to fulfill some male power fantasy...
>You know you were falling for her, but it's already that bad.
>Don't exclude any awesome opportunities!
>No, bad brain.
>You should think about... getting out of the mess you're in.
>You can tell them you work with Chrysalis, that much is almost public record (you think)
>But why would you know it's Sunset?
>'Because you love her and have a connection.'
>That won't hold up in court.
>Whoever that other agent was you told that it's Sunset and not any monster to slay knows you knew almost immediately after
>Because you saw the previous fight and saw her turning.

>>28319259
>Let's roll with that.
>Why were you there...?
>Could you talk your was out of it by saying you wanted to follow her?
>No, you're not stupid, you wouldn't have done that if you wouldn't have powers.
>Easiest method would be if Sunset covers for you...
>But you'd also need to know what Chrysalis told them.
>You snap your fingers by your ears again.
>Normal hearing.
>You sigh.
>There is no more point in delaying.
>You nudge Sunset.
“Can hear a bit.”
>“Oh thank god.”
>She buries her face in your shoulder, clasping onto you.
>“I don't know what I would've done if you- b-because of me, and I-”
“Shh... Sunset. It's okay. It's not your fault.”
>You embrace her again, letting her start sobbing again.
>Your little bundle of emotions.
>After a little while you let go of her again.
“I need to thank Chrysalis for saving you. I don't know what I would have done had I lost you.”
>“I ahh-”
>You cut her off and wiggle out underneath her to stand up.
>With a hand gesture you sign her to stay while you walk to your alien friend.
>“Oh, Anon. Is your hearing back?”
“It is.”
>You look to Twilight, Spitfire and the second Sunset.
“I still don't know what's going on, but... uhh... fucked up night, huh?”
>Please take the bait.
>Chrysalis smiles.
>“Not every day you find your coworkers girlfriend fighting a Klyntar on the news. Of course I took you there. Even if we were too late.”
>Oh thank god.
“But you had to reveal yourself for me.”
>“It was bound to happen sooner or later. And I wanted to talk to the Wonderbolts sooner or later.”

>>28319267
“Yeah... So what's going to happen now?”
>You look off to Spitfire.
>“Anon West, correct?”
>As a response you only give her a nod.
>She clears her throat, but you speak up before she can talk.
“Sunset and I-”
>You look to the present Sunset.
“Well, a Sunset and I would like to go home.”
>“We need to clear her, give her a medical exam to-”
“To what? Tell what it means to have an alien parasite take over her body? Nothing she or I can do will help you short term. We'd rather go home where we can be comfortable after what happened. It's not like we are going to run away.”
>She leans forward over to you, watching you intently.
>“No.”
“But-”
>“No.”
>She leans up again.
>“When it comes to privacy, you two will be able to have some.”
>Chrysalis chuckles at Spitfire's implication.
“And when can we go again?”
>“Talks need to be held, It's an answer I can't give yet.”
>You recognize her voice somewhere.
>It's Spitfire, sure, you've heard her voice and seen her face via the news a couple of times.
>But somewhere else...
“My aunt expects me at home...”
>“Your aunt lives in Canterlot and you were in a dorm room in New Yoke, Mr. West. That sounds like a cheap excuse.”
>Then it dawns on you.
>The Argentinian hydra woman.
>Spitfire.
>The actual head of the Wonderbolts is Hydra?
>You take a step back.
“I want to go home, if I'm not under arrest...”
>“You'd do well to comply, Anon.”
“Didn't know we were on a first name basis yet.”
>You turn around to Chrysalis.

>>28319275
“Anyway, thanks again, Chrysalis.”
>“You owe me.”
“Yeah yeah.”
>Then you walk back and sit yourself to Sunset again.
>She leans herself onto you slightly and takes your hand.
>“I've heard a bit.”
“They won't let us go home.”
>“Are you surprised?”
“Not really, but...”
>You grasp her hand.
“Sunset I- I need to tell you something... later... in private.”
>“Okay.”
>She lays her head on your shoulder.
>You hide a sad expression.
>It sounded like you want to give a proper confession of love, but actually you plan to tell her everything about how you've been lying to her.
>That.. is going to suck.
>“So, Anon.”
>She takes her head of your shoulder again.
>“These are my friends from High School...”
>Then she starts to introduce you to the present girls.
>Two of which you could have sworn have had wings earlier, just like the Twilight talking to.

>Later you fall asleep in the quin-jet without any indication of having reached the destiny.
>You hadn't slept last night, your fatigue simply overwhelmed you...

>Be Treehugger
>As soon as it's dawning you enter the dorms and start looking asking for Anon without your efforts yielding any fruit.
>They let you into his dorm room where you could access his computer and later find his cellphone in ragged, abandoned pants on some rooftop.
>Some serious foul play was going on.
>You need to contact Spitfire again.

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>>28319281
Liked this update. Anon trying to comprhend the situation, Spitfire being a dick, Chrysalis being herself and Treehuger is questionable to being a good or bad guy

>>28319281
Spitfire is right to be wary of Anon
From her point of view, he's an absolutely involved, but almost totally unknown, factor.

How would you guys feel about a sexual bullying triangle that might possibly end in an alliance?

>>28320042
I am okay with this

>>28320042
I dropped the second I saw femanon. Go nuts either way.

>>28320042
Sounds fun. Go for it

>>28320178
but... femanon was present from the very beginning...

>>28320187
I just got here and started looking through stuff, I want no part of that.

>>28320190
alright, your call

>>28320187
Exactly.

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>>28318415

>>28320426
Damn right you're going to beat us, and why stop at beating, use your mouth as well as those hands.

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bump

>>28320042
romance is hard to write
if you want to make it hollow lewds, sure
but if you want it humorous you need it to be relatable
finding 3 girls that aren't cringy tumblretts that age who have that sexuality is hard, immersion simply is lost and you can't relate to the characters anymore to make your scenes really funny.
and actual romance?
that's hard
so my opinion: don't, not if you don't actually know what you even want to do.

>>28321125
To be fair, FemAnon is more fun than serious.
Mostly.

>>28321166
it's not funny if the situations are arbitrary like a sketch comedy which tries to tell a story...
even humor has to be done right

>>28321125
Well, as I said before, I don't have a overall planned plot that will tie to something. I'm just writing as it goes, so I think you are right. It maybe best to cut back on the romance and go for some shenanigens

Thx for your honesty

>>28322006

Nothing tonight but I'll try tomorrow

>>28323048
Same here, to the surprise of nobody.

Is there a time stop anon yet?

>>28323048
>>28323541
WRITE SOMETHING! MOAR!
>>28323616
Non that I know of, and I just got done reading through everything.

>>28323669
I will have something tomorrow. It's hard to write when you have a cold

>>28323723
Fair enough.

>>28323731
Yeah but I promise to have Something tomorrow. Maybe a goodnight sleep will help

>>28323747
aye then

So I have a new job starting next week with like 300€ more a week (after taxes)
thing is, I usually write on the train and bus, but I don't exactly know what kind of connection will be the best to get to and from.
I have one busride less because I have to bike/walk from the trainstation to my new workplace, so obviously no writing there.
I also can't really write in my breaks for a while because I have to act social.
What that means for you is that my writing time is effectively cut to about a fifth of what it used to be until i figure out a better schedule for myself. (or am not a lazy slob and write at home for a change)

just the heads up

>>28325486
bump with new insight in the english language. I learned a new word
commute

>>28325943
Good for you Untitled. Now get Bloke off me

>>28326916
you have to get bloke off by yourself
I have keaton

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page 8, I continue my quest on the english language

>>28326916
>>28326993
*thwip*
Pizza time

>>28326993
You’re no help. I'll just work on my green then

>>28328749
yeah, get back to work on some green for us

btw. I just finalized Treehuggers powers

>>28328776
Nice

Just woke up update. ( Continuing from: http://pastebin.com/zANAAGcy)

>You are Luna Artimus Faust
>Vice Principal of Canterlot high school.
>Although it’s getting hard to remember who you are.
>Not your name, you could never forget that monstrosity no matter how long you live.
>What's getting hard to remember is who you were before you became a vigilante.
>A small part of you feels that on some level what you are doing is wrong.
>With four people hospitalized due to your actions, not even counting those who have died.
>True all were muggers, rapists and even a few low ranking members of the mob, but still that small part of you feels that there has to be a better way of doing this.
>However the you feels that those shits are getting off far to easily.
>As you continue walking back to the rather spacious apartment that you and your sister share, you feel the ring on your right hand pulse.
“So, more scum wishes to test their mettle against me? So be it.”

>>28329812
less than 1000 character update?
is there more?

>>28329839
I still need to finalize the fight scene for this particular part. With any luck I might have that done by the time I finish work today.

>>28329904
Take your time. We can wait

>>28330958
All I need at this point is to figure our how to write a fight between supers.

>>28331425
*out.

>>28331425
I wrote a few action guidelines a few threads ago

>>28331425

1. Explain what's on the line if the hero loses.
2. The faster a sentence can be read (or the shorter it is), the faster the action happens in the readers mind.
3. Show off the personality of a character through the way they behave.
4. If someone talks, interrupt their sentences. It gives additional sense of quick pace, if someone can't even say a whole sentence while a lot of stuff happens quickly.
5. Don't repeat yourself, use thesaurus.com if necessary.
6. Contradicting rule 2: run-on sentences are allowed every once in a while if each part is short. (Action - reaction - but wait! - reaction to reaction)

>>28332373
>Gwenom

>>28331762
Thanks.

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>>28332661
those are general rules for action scenes

fights between supers is about what result you want to have and how to get there properly
you need to be sure of both their abilities and if both know the full abilities of the other
usually the smarter one or the luckier one wins

>>28332793
>rules
well, guidelines

>>28332939
Either way it helps.

>>28332793
So does he die or tony starks out of it?

>>28299069
From the last part in my pastebin

>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>Or as the media calls you, Spider Menace.
>Fuck You Jameson.
>That’s besides the point.
>You're leaning over a gargoyle, glaring at the streets menacingly as you try to find anything wrong with this small town.
>You let out a large sigh while leaning back and stare at the night sky.
“Why am I even doing this? It's been slow for the past few days.”
>It’s true, the last few days were nothing but a snoozefest like science class.
>There was no robberies, muggings or superpowered villain plots going on.
>Just you swinging around for a few hours and you were tired of it.
>Shooting a webline at a building, you began to swing through the air like you always do.
>While in the air, you searched the streets below for any sign of criminal activity.
>It wasn’t that surprising as you saw nothing interesting happening.
>Just the everyday people walking around, without a care in the world.
“I hope something happens soon. I'm really bored right now.”
>Your spider sense goes crazy as you let go of your web and flip in the air.
>During the flip, you saw what appeared to be some kind of missile.
>You slowly spun around as the missile flew by your face.
>Looking at the flying projectile, you saw that it was heading towards a crowd of people below you.
>Thinking fast, you shot some web at it and flung it into the sky.
>It explodes harmlessly.
>Landing on the side of the building, you try to see if you can find to one responsible for that.
>You don’t see anyone behind you but you can see a faint smoke trail leading to the other side of a building.
>You look up at the sky, with a raised eyebrow that no one can see.
“You take things way too seriously.”

Small one post update. Wasn't home and didn't have my phone all day. Will have more tomorrow

bump from 9

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>>28329812
>You are Sunset Shimmer.
>Right now you are swinging home.
>For the first time since you left equestria you are content with your life.
>Even with the occasional homicidal maniac trying to kill you from time to time or the super-powered nut jobs committing crimes for the most absurd of reasons, you wouldn't change a thing.
>On the whole, for you anyway, life is pretty good.

>You are Luna.
>And for the first time you feel as if you have a real challenge before you.
>What you thought might have been a simple thug or at most an enforcer for the mob, is in fact some form of android.
>An android barreling at you at just under mach 1.
> It seems prudent to suit up at this time.
>Hopefully a quarter charge will see you through this fight.

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I can't sleep.
It's 6 AM and I haven't slept.
....
I got nothin.

>>28335573
Then write SOMETHING WITH YOUR GIFT OF INSOMNIA!

>>28335778
I cannot. I can merely lay here, staring up at my ceiling, immobile.
I will try and write some more in a bit, though. But now is time for mental catatonia.

>>28335834
if you can write this fluently right now, your fine to write in general. SO WRITE! Or do you just have no plans for right now?

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>>28335845
I'll be honest, still finding my feet after losing so much progress, but I have been doing bite-sized chunks of writing and rewriting.

oh look, the Sun.

>>28335861
praise the sunset
get well soon

>>28335885
will do.
sincerely, I'm so sorry to people who really like my story.
waiting this long for updates is terrible and reflects poorly on me.

>>28335888
We don't like you for your story but for your body

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>>28335893
well... that just makes me sad...

>>28335899
story is a bonus

>>28335888
Hey don't feel bad. It happens to the best of us.
Maybe you just need a relaxing day to yourself?

>>28335928
I've taken too many as is
even 1 was too much

>>28335861
you have an excuse.

>>28335934
How just go for a walk and get some fresh air for a bit?

>>28335934
I-It's okay senpai! We a-all still Lov-LIKE you anyway.....

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>>28336229
not a terrible idea...

>>28336301
I'mma give you head pats, Anon

>>28336316
I'll stroke your head anytime

>>28336324
l-lewd...

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>>28336332

>>28336359
That's a custom-made image!
That makes it extra-lewd!!

page 8

thinking-about-getting-a-pastebin-finally-because-ive-got-an-idea-for-another.green-bump

suggestions on how to differentiate between the multiple versions of people I have in my story?

>>28338700
^give them a specific way of talking or use there initials before there lines if thats what you mean

>>28338700
Have different hair styles or a scar?

>>28338718
>use their initials
TS and TS, SG and SG, and SS and SS
maybe not

>specific way of talking
not sure if I can do that well,
I more meant of a way to refer to them

>>28338727
partially planned already

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>>28338753
Use any title they have in conjunction with either the first or last name. For example "Princess Twilight/Princess Sparkle".

>>28338700
establish who's point of view is speaking, if they are referring to the characters as "mine" or "the native"

>>28338823
Twilight is by far the easiest
Pony Twilight has her sense of authority for being a princess for about 5 years now, while SciTwi was still more reclusive and nerdy
Their personalities are quite different

>>28338865
>"the native"
keep that in mind

>>28338895
I was just using her as the example, because, as you said, she is the easiest to differentiate (also the first to pop into my head).

So what are this thread's greatest fears?
For me arachnids, and needles/knives/sharp objects near my eyes.

>>28340095
well i am afraid of heights

>>28340121
Is it the being high off the ground, or the knowledge that if you happen to fall there's no chance of surviving that frightens you?

>>28340159
mostly the former but the later doesnt help aswell

>>28340095
No fears but I not fond of heights or certain chairs

Still working on something bump

>>28340095
Lack of improvement, heights and myself. Also got distracted by reading almost 200 chapters of berserk in three days.

>>28341046
So how much you like the rape monsters?

>>28340095
getting trapped in tight spaces, sharks, and buzzing insects.

>>28340095
Nothing fobia tier but I hate those 20-40 long legged fast moving bugs. Also any bugs bigger than a few centimeters that are capable of flight or jumping.

>>28341141
I-I'm scared of sharks a-as well senpai. But mainly the idea that t-there are various things that I can't see o-or get away from that are just l-lurking below me.

K-kinda like Spider-Bloke......

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>>28341278
It's okay, little one, I won't let him get you.

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>>28341062
I relate to them i guess?
I really need to stop being lazy, just don't feel like drawing.

I'll update tomorrow cause I'm not quite finished with this part

>>28340095
Dogs...
Developed a phohia after my third bite as a child.
Heights are a maybe. I kinda get the urge to jump of throw off something important, but not really a fear.

>>28341278
>>28341668
It's too late, I'm like a skeleton...
I'm already inside you

>>28299069

Shocker Anon here, still alive, and still trying to hammer out the details for my reboot.

Of course, between me actually having employment now and Monster Hunter Generations, I'd probably put the release date as "Duke Nukem Forever", but hopefully with less disappointment.

>>28343053
Senpai?!

>>28343053
Well glad to see you're still alive and trying to work

>>28343053
Curse you monster hunter gen. I am glad the included the pirate j gear for western copies now.

Morning, thread!

>>28344166
Morning Keaton. How's the writing?

>>28344490
Occurring
Totally forgot it was Labor Day, so this little day off from class will be nice

>>28340095
I actually love sharp objects. I have some really sharp knives. The sharpest one cuts just by a light scrape. You don't even realize it cut you until you feel the sting a few minutes later.

I've cut myself many times while playing with them, even got some stitches, but it didn't dull my interest in the least.

>>28319281
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>You finish taking your shower.
>You're oddly calm, considering the discovery you had just made.
>Maybe there was simply too much on your mind right now to properly process this new information.
>Maybe you're just becoming a professional at this.
>You're a Wonderbolt now.
>Well, technically you're dead and part of a new team Spitfire made because she fears the Wonderbolts were infiltrated.
>Either way, you were bound to witness a couple of unusual things.
>Like the portal you ripped through the fabric of space-time to send two people to Equestria.
>But with the proper time to think and knowledge you see the logical reason behind that event.
“Shiny!”
>You don't even have your face turned to the bathroom door, but look out of the window of this seemingly closed-for-the-season camp.
>“Yeah?”
>His footsteps come.
“Take a look at this.”
>“What- oh, you're naked.”
>As soon as he had entered he turns around again, facing away from you.
“Goddamnit, Shining. You're my brother, it's not like that, and I'm already in underwear.”
>“Mhm... Then- uhh... what do you want me to look at.”
“The bulletwound, Shiny.”
>“Wait, you took a shower?”
>You know yourself you shouldn't soak a freshly stitched wound.
>Shining turns around, his eyes narrowed to be able to close them immediately.
“I wanted to just change the bandages, but yeah, I took a shower then.”
>To humor him you cover your breasts with your arm additionally.
>He steps closer to you.
>“It's-”
>He doesn't continue so you end the sentence for him.
“-gone? Yeah.”

>>28344679
>Be Spitfire.
>Hours awake: 54.
>There is only so much coffee can do for you.
>What you need is good old natural sleep.
>But what the world needs right now is someone to help secure it.
>Once the insight helicarriers are finished you need to take a day off, maybe two.
>But they can only help against threats coming from threats on the planet.
>Not from those outside it.
>Princess Sparkle, Chrysalis and the Sunset Shimmer native to this world have offered to take the cube off your hands.
>But only Pricness Sparkle you count as an ally, you don't trust Chrysalis one bit, and Sunset doesn't tell you anything.
>It's true that the cube radiates energy, but is it really strong enough to be noticed far out in space?
>You can't exclude the possibility of Chrysalis telling the truth, even if your easiest course of action would be to give this powerful object to her.
>Hiding the cube in a different dimension will have very unforeseen consequences.
>And wouldn't it just push the problem on someone else?
>Equestria may be more powerful than Earth, but they are, just like Earth, entirely inexperienced when it comes to interplanetary war.
>The only real solution was to get as much information about it as possible and try to mask it's energy output.
>All the while still preparing for war.
>Princess Sparkle knows about as much about the cube as you do, and the two other present women are very uncooperative.
>Chrysalis acts like she knows everything about it, but won't tell.
>And Sunset Shimmer says she can protect it, but if she even knows anything about it, won't tell you.

>>28344762
>On the note of Sunset Shimmer, the cube's previous guardian, the Principal of the High School the cube has been taken from, was missing together with her sister Luna.
>They had never been searched by the Wonderbolts and have no other relatives who would have pushed the topic, so they remained missing since two weeks after the cube has been removed from Canterlot.
>Did someone get to them or did they move on?
>Their “protege”, Sunset, albeit having run away from them at some point shows extraordinary ability.
>When asked about those she only said that most humans can learn most of the stuff she does.
>It's even more difficult to get information out of her than it is from her equestrian counterpart.
>Speaking of.
>Sunset Shimmer, the Spider-Woman was sleeping.
>Ahh... sleep...
>You shake your head.
>You need to focus.
>Next issue you have is the Anon-boy.
>He's too involved, even if you cant prove anything on him yet, except the hack where he barely got anything out of.
>Hydra is history.
>The only ones really calling themselves Hydra nowadays are Neonazis, nothing you have to worry about.
>Besides when Treehugger wanted you to use it to scare her nephew.
>But that seems to have backfired.
>He's now more involved than you would have ever thought.
>It's practically only a matter of time until Treehugger contacts you again.

>>28344765
end of my days work

>>28344670
Oh I have no problem wit sharp objects most of the time, it's just when they get near my eyes.

>>28344782
*with

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>>28344782
I move them deliberately close to my eyes in front of family members to freak them out

So guys, I have a very important question. Which Spider Shim is the best Spider Shim?

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>>28344858
You deserve this.

>>28344882
keaton or Red.

>>28344882
keaton or untitled

and Red is dead

>>28344889
>>28344932
wait wut
how is my ShimSham close to best?

>>28345058
fucking questing and this thread, dropping my trip all the goddamn time

>>28345058
I dig it, it's solid
there is just not much of it

>>28345082
This^

>>28345082
and because I can't vote for myself, obviously

>>28344932
I can agree with this

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>>28318157
>You are... sitting in an armchair
>Screwball's last broadcast plays on loop on a laptop in front of you while you push a cable into some plastic explosive
>These "heroes" and this "villain" seem like they were having a lot of fun
>This little chunk of C4 is just a catalyst for three tons of ammonium nitrate
>This little chunk and his 49 brothers
>A grin from ear to ear accompanied by a creepy giggle spreads itself to your lips
>You have been prepearing this surprise for months and it was almost done
>You are anxious to join them in this game of cat and mouse
>As a lion
>Someone should show these amateurs how it's done
>This Screw B. thinks crime is a means for entertainment
>She doesn't understand it's full potential
>But it's okay, you will teach her, you will show her that a real criminal can accomplish much more than being internet famous
>You will show her the fame that fear can bring
>Oh, of course. The heroes...
>Spider-Girl and new green samurai think they are working for justice and order
>You will show them how deviant their justice and how fickle their order are
>It is the rule of this universe after all
>Everything leans towards disorder and chaos
>You will teach them the rules, you will show this city how easily their beloved protectors can be rendered helpless
>And they will see how easy it is to... DIE
>Your laughter echoes through the empty warehouse for a minute before you walk outside and toss the bomb you prepared to the hands of a clown masked man
"That's the last one." Man nods before running off with the bomb
"Hey!" You yell, making him stop and look at you. "Tell the boys to buckle up." You grin. "You're all going for a ride." He nods again and keeps running
>You climb some ladders to board the only truck in your plan
"It all started with a big BANG!" You say to yourself, while checking the gig one last time
>You will show them
>You will show them that this world is nothing but
>A Joke

>>28344884
I want it

>>28345552
Oh. We're 'bout to get dark.

>>28345562
You definitely deserve it.

i think im gonna try to write the start of a new green tomorrow and then ill see what you guys think about it compared to the other and try to write the more popular one for now

>>28346446
Do whatever makes you happy, man.

>>28346493
ok tomorrow hopefully ill write green about a greedy criminal anon

>>28346562
Cool beans.

>>28346562
Normal or superpowered?

>>28346714
no, that's Myth, Beans is the other guy

>>28347023
superpowered though hes not going to be a much of a fighter. enhanced intelligence, portal creation and bullet projection is what i think ill have him be capable of

>>28347155
Might not be a fighter but still sounds like a formidable opponent

>>28347064
I said "Cool beans," not "Cool, Beans."

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>>28347155
The Spot?

Cool.

>>28347327
Best Marvel villain right there.

>>28347327
to be honest i have never even heard of the spot
>>28347187
well yes, but hes gonna be outshined by his accomplice who is a going to be a very powerful mutant

>>28345552
>You park the truck in the middle of Canterlot Square and set up the mobile stage then climb on before grabbing a mic
"Hear ye! Hear ye! Welcome to my show." You announce
>Most people seem uninterested and just carry on with their lives
"I promise you that this show will be a blast, more than "a" blast. Be careful or it might blow you away." You let out a maniacal laughter.
>You turn towards the giant LED TV at the back of the stage and pull out a remote
"But first I need my assistance." A clown masked man appears on the screen.
>"Hey boss, you hear? Is it on?" You grate your teeth.
"Shut up, idiot! Just tell me if you're ready." You snap.
>"Yeah boss, we're all good to go. Just say the word."
"Good, good. Now I wan-" You are cut short as a police officer calls to you
>"Hey, clown! I didn't hear nothing about a show today." He comes to the edge of the stage. "Let's see some papers."
"Oh, yes officer of course." You turn towards him.
>"Boss maybe we should call it off." Your head snaps back towards the giant screen
"IF YOU SAY ONE MORE WORD I WILL CUT YOUR TONGUE WITH A RUSTY SPOON!" This outburst causes the cop to reach for his gun
>"Sir, I need you to step down fr..."
>You don't hear the rest as you run you fingers through your hair and jump on the cop with a switchblade
>At this point people started to run away but you are too busy stabbing the cop over and over again
>After a few more stabs you stop and get up, turning back to the screen
"Hit the goddamn switch!" You say. The man on the screen turns his back and gives the go ahead
>A moment later ground shakes as a thunderous sound rips through the air
>You pickup the dead policeman's radio
"Officer, I'd like to report an explosion."

That's all for now. Good night guys

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>>28347578
oh

>>28345552
>>28347578
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lm_GPkOfVKI
Why aren't you laughing?

>>28333369
>Launching yourself off the building, you shot a webline as you resumed swinging around.
>Only now you’re following the smoke trail.
>Rounding the corner, you can barely make out the thing making the smoke.
>From what you can see it’s humanoid and on a board.
>Whatever it is, you need to follow and or stop this thing.
>It flies straight ahead before making a sharp right and disappearing from sight.
>With the next shot of web and a strong pull, you cleared the distance a lot faster.
>As you round the corner, your spider sense goes crazy as another missile was heading towards you.
>You were able to flip kick it away from you as your spider sense is still going off and something grabbed your leg.
>Looking at your leg, you see some kind of green armored man.
>The person seemed to have have some kind of fitted armor like in those japanese rider shows with a round helmet on.
>Reminds you of Iron-man except a bit less protective.
>A quick web shot to the face and it released it’s hold on your leg to get the web off of him.
>Landing on the side of the building, you turn to the emerald flyer.
“A little early for Halloween isn’t it?”
>He’s able to get the web off his face as he looks at you.
>Not saying anything.
>.....
>Okay?
“Hello? This is usually the part where you curse me and say that you’ll kill me or something.”
>He just raised his hands as the top of his arms opened to reveal a gun.
“Oh shit.”
>You didn’t need your spider sense to tell you to dodge.

>>28348778
>Jumping off the building, you shot some web on his arms as you began to swing away.
>You make as many turns to try and lose the guy but he’s still behind you.
>Who’s been shooting missiles at you like no tomorrow
“Don’t you ever run out of ammo?”
>Spider sense goes off, causing you to jump over the one hundredth missile of the night.
>You quickly tap your ear as a ringing sound filled your ears.
>The ringing stops as a familiar voice is heard.
>“Hello?”
“Aunt Celestia, it’s Sunset and I need a favor.”
> “Sunset, you know I can’t let you play hooky just because you’re tired.”
“Not that. I’m currently being chased by some flying missile man and need you or Luna to help me.”
> “We’ll be there soon. Where should we meet you?”
>You dodge another missile as you looking at your surroundings.
“I’ll try to get near the shops. Can you be there in a minute or two?”
> “We’re already there. We’ll see you in a moment.”
>The line goes silent as you turn back to see the armored man a few yards away from you.
>Releasing your hold on the webs, you do a crazy spin flip to dodge the incoming missiles and shot some more web at the guy.
>.......This is getting repetitive.
>Maybe you should talk to Twilight about getting some kind of web bomb.
>You’ll have to ask her later.
>Right now, you need to get your sexy spider ass to the shops in one piece.
>It doesn’t take you long to get there as you search for any sign of your aunts.
>Landing on the nearest as you try to find the cavalry as you call them.
>To your disappointment, you can’t see them anywhere.
“Where are you?”
>Suddenly, you see your pursuer floats in front of you.

>>28348832
“Seriously? Don’t you have anything better to do?!!”
>He doesn’t answer your question as his hover board, or whatever it is, opens up in the front.
>You could tell that the opening wasn't for some kind of super missile.
>Not from the sickly green glow it was getting.
>He began flying backwards as a golden beam and a stream of fire are shot at him.
>Turning around, you can see your aunts, donning their costumes, with their hands pointed at your opponent.
>Your aunts grin as they walk towards you.
> “Need some help Spidey?”
>You ran up to them, happy to see them as they lower their arms.
>Well Celestia did.
>Luna was holding onto her sword.
“Like you wouldn't believe it.”
>You see Luna or Magik, as she’s called, glance at the flying nuisance.
> “So this is what you’re having trouble with?”
>You give her a quick nod while turning to face the emerald flier.
“Yeah, he’s been chasing me for a while now and just firing…”
>Two projectiles are shot out of his board and are heading towards you fast.
“...Missiles at me.”
>A dark blue but transparent wall forms in front of you as the missiles collide against it.
>The smoke from the explosion makes it impossible to see.
>Once the smoke clears, you’re surprised at what you see.
>You see the your assailant is gone and there’s no trace of him.
“What the fuck? Did he just leave?”


Finally did this. Sorry about all the promises but the weekend was crazy for me. But yeah new villain and Sunset knowing she needs help every so often. So Thoughts?

>>28349024
Not bad, feels a little rushed though.

>>28344765
wait we never really got a confirmation on what twilights powers were so the fact that her bullet wound is gone was supposed to be surprising caught me off guard.

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>30 threads
>Not one single mention of this guy