Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #28

Finally out of the car.
That should nit have taken 6 hours.
Everything hurts.

Post the green.

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>>28091509

>>28091580
"We should form like, a league, that deals out Justice"

>>28091594
>Spider-Man anywhere near a team other than temporary teamups
why?

>>28091580
why are they all so fat?

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>>28091609
>He didn't understand that reference

So What's Mamoru been up to?

Am i the only one that thinks we need some Batsex Green?

>>28091938
I think we all know that Tara liked it

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>>28091938
I agree

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>>28091938
Twilight is for killing joke.
She already has an Oracle setup

>>28092005

mah nigga

>>28092022
Dubs confirm.

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>>28092020

so anon as batman and twilight as batgirl/oracle, shit this has potential for feels

>>28092069

and sex, lots and lots of batsex

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>>28092069
Who'd be a good joker?
A perfect foil for Anon Batsy?
Ohhh yes, I know who

>>28092095
Just remember, Anon takes twi's batvirginity.

>>28092128
Pretty sure it's the other way around

>>28092112

Flash as the joker sounds nice though, or we just do discord, but that feels like the easy choice

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>>28092128
I was thinking Anon is The Green Hood

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>>28092156
"Get a load of this guy, Sunny"

>>28092154
Why not have Flash as Paris Frantz?

>>28092156

but that would mean no batsex anon, and who would be batman, flash? oh wait... fffffffuu-

>>28092180

you... you're alright

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>>28092192

>>28092192
Flash should be Two Face.

>>28092154
Personally I like to keep Discord as an elder god.

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>>28092222

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>>28092222
B-but mr quads, I like my idea

>>28092112
You cant just add "bat-" before everything and hope it makes sense

>>28092267
Yes I can
Because I'm BATMAN

okay, cast list so far
Batman-Anon (right?)
Batgirl-book horse
Paris-Flash
Joker-??? (idunno)

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>>28092251
Just use the Waifu thief 2.0

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>>28092298
Joker...hmmmm
(Thinking...thinking)
IVE GOT IT

>>28092333
He more suited to Gordon. I mean if we're doing Killing joke.

>>28092333

yes, add to the list of shit twibat will have to deal with by making her brother joker, feels, feels everywhere

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>>28092426
Forgot picture

>>28092426
Or you could just use Twi's actual dad.
LEMME EXPLAIN:
White skin.
Purple suit.
Funny hair.
We could use pregnant Cadance for his origin story.

>>28091509
>Dash is Miguel O'Hara

But why?

Suddenly a Bat Thread

lets do this

>>28092467
Because she's mexican

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>>28092475
You shut your mouth.

so Shining as Joker or Gordon

>>28092460
(But bloke, that would mean killing Cadance and Flurry)
DO IT ANYWAY

>>28092570
Twilight already has a dad that would fit as Gordon
So I want Shining as Joker

>>28092598
I'd say use glimglam as joker.

>>28092642
I'm still set on Shining

>>28092656
Does that mean that you're writing it?

>>28092642 so instead of killing everyone with smile gas, she justs kills them with equality?

sounds gud 2 me

>>28092697
Death is the ultimate equality.

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>>28092642
>not Professor Pyg

Who's gonna write this then?

>>28092789
Not it!

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>>28092789
I nominate, uhhhhhhhhhhh
This guy!

>>28092794
>>28092803

no you

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>>28092794
What, afraid that we won't like it?

>>28092789
I'm out. To many stories on my plate as it is

>>28092838
>>28092833
I can't, I literally can't. I honestly have no desire or writing skills that you all have

>>28092803
Ah, but he won't do it. At least not with the characters we're using.

>>28092852
Curse you, copyright

i would, but i don't have a keyboard

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>>28092879
>yfw

>>28092850
Dude, Blue Anon is the first story I've ever written. You don't have to be the greatest writer in the world, you just have to have an idea and the resolve to post it. Even if it is shit, I can guarantee at least one person will read it.

>>28092905
Life is rough anon

that drive fucked me up, I passed the fuck out after that last post

>>28093266
It’s okay keaton, we forgive you. Right guys?

>>28093266
This is now a DC thread

>>28093313
Only if we can all hold hands

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>>28093321
fuck.

my tummy hurts... life is bullshit...

>>28093313
normally I would say no, but he got dubs so I forgive him.

>>28093354
Shh, let it happen. Take a nap. Stop being so rustled

>>28093266
Not a big deal. It happens to the best of us.

>>28093388
I know it happens to the best of us, it's happening to me!

>>28093380
No, I will remain grumpy and hurty and rustled

>>28093461
I think you need a timeout young slut. Go sit in the corner

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I would still enjoy a ghost rider story sometime, but i love all our current runners as well. Granted i wish my art didn't suck so damn bad as well... Maybe i will have time to get back to it someday

>>28093551
I could write it, but my other story takes precedent.

I can see the thread, though. Shimmer's demon form, fire powers, guilt, leather jacket, she's basically half-way there.

>>28093551
Your art is in need of work, sure. But I wouldn't say it sucks.

>>28093551
Your art is good and they say Practice makes perfect. How goes the pics anyways?

so, I'm not great, how is everyone else?

>>28094389
Not bad, Thinking of the next part of the green

>>28094389
Can't complain. Had an interview that went fairly well.

>>28094806
Awesome!
I need to set up one for a museum around here soon-ish.
Got to get my foot in the door for actual museum work before I complete my degree and graduate.

>>28094861
Best of luck with that.

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To all of you who told me that Suicide Squad sucked, I say to you:

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>>28095213
>using a .gif from a shit movie to defend a possibly shit movie.

>>28094389
We are now returning to our regularly scheduled untitled updates

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>>28096251
Yes!

>>28095870
>Implying that cat in the hat isn't a national treasure
You disappoint me

>>28096372
Says the prequel lover.

>>28096428
Do you wanna 'ave a go, Quibble Pants?

>>28096428
let's just ignore his opinion and form our own, okay?

>>28096436
THEMS' FIGHTIN' WORDS!

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>>28096452
Then lettuce engage in the fisticuffs my good man!

>>28096466
Verily!

You're all a bunch of dorks...

>>28096822
Your face is a dork

>>28096822
but we're your dorks

>>28096822
And you're a bike

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>>28096822
And your just now noticing this?

>>28096841
4 correct your/you're in a row and you got to combobreak?

>>28096855
Well, time for bed then.

>>28096828
Hmff.... I guess I'll accept this.

>>28096939
Just like when it comes to taking dick, you have no choice but to accept it

>>28096946
You really shouldn't talk to yourself so much, that's not what your mouth is for, Spoder.

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>>28096964
Getting feisty, are we?
A good dicking should put you in your place

next level circlejerking

>>28096971
I'll circle your jerk

>>28096971
God knows we have to be notable for something.
Or, rather, nothing.

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>>28096994
When did keaton stop being fun?

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>>28097008
I'm always grumpy when I wake up before my alarm
Give me a little time and I'll perk up.

>>28097014
When I wake up, my pee pee perks up

>>28093635
Pics are going slow. New command for temp duty. New command sucks donkey wang but i will eventually get works up

>>28097248
That sucks. Wish you luck though

>>28097248
Sounds rough

good green when?

>>28098318
Gonna have something later

So, how's everyone doing?

>>28101098
helping my second roommate move in

>>28101098
Writing the next part and waiting for my commission of Witchblade Sunset

>>28101098
Getting ready to go on vacations with family.

>>28101846
I hope you enjoy your vacation.

>>28101846
where to?

>>28091509
From the last thread

‘Shut up Tonic, I don’t need a headache right now.’
> ‘Sorry, host. I’ll try to …..what’s that?’
>Confused, you blink and see something heading towards you.
>As you stood there like a moron, you could clearly see what this thing was.
>Running towards you was some kind of robot man, destroying everything in his path.
>As this tank go closer, your sense activates causing you to dive out of the way.
>Rising to your feet, you turn to see Spider-Woman and some other woman in a blue and red bodysuit chasing the tank.
>You see them turn around a corner and disappear out of sight.
>You stood there a few seconds just staring in the direction they went.
> ‘.....You think, what I’m thinking?’
‘Follow them and watch what they do? Oh yeah.’
>As calmly as possible, you started walking in the same direction that the three went.
>Once you made the same turn as them, you ran into a small alleyway.
>The next moment, you jump out of the alley in the Tonic suit and land on top of a building on the other side of the street.
> ‘You know they have a good head start on you, right?’
‘Shouldn’t be hard to find a tank with Spider-Woman and flying hero behind him.’
>You took a running start then jump over a satellite dish.
>Holding both hands over your head, you shot some web at a traffic light.
>As you start to fall towards the ground, you grab the web and pull it hard.
>That caused you to launch yourself into the air as you began to web swing, looking for Spider-Woman and the other two.
>It doesn’t take you long to find that group of people.
>Especially when you see the trail of destruction they left in their wake.
“Glad I’m not the one who cleans this up.”
>It takes you another minute or two to find the group in the middle of the street.
>Landing on top of a nearby building, you slowly walk to the edge while staying out of sight.

All I have for now. I'm gonna try for more later or tomorrow

>>28102985
thanks for the update, treps

>>28103108
No problem. The next scene isn't as good at the moment or long enough. So I'll try to have more later.

>>28092803
Didn't I do a bat one already?

And besides, who wants to read about how Sunset has to cope with Anon getting crippled again?

>>28103249
Well me for one.

>>28103269
Well maybe someday. But now. New job is busting my ass and we don't have actual internet here. Also you can take off shdowanon from the greenlist now. We are one and the same after all

>>28103249
We didn't even mention sunset in the discussion, and Anon is Batman. I don't think you should write any stories with Anon if you're just gonna abuse him

>>28103249
ah....
>>28103269
GOOD NEWS!

>>28103984
>GOOD NEWS
What did he mean by this?

>>28103995
You'll see. Probably after this week is over, cause I'll have finished my Summer class.

>>28104118
If Anon is crippled he won't be able to participate in lewd activities

>>28104207
Says you.

>>28104207
Well, Shimmering Anon and Sunset weren't particularly active in that area to begin with.

They cuddled and stuff, but they never really got the time alone for the relationship to get seriously physically intimate.
They might have during that date night Anon had planned, but the Sinister Six shot that down.

They were actually a pretty chaste high-school couple.

>>28104257
Has Keaton gone too far?

>>28104291
by... portraying a chaste, brief, and tragic romance between two high-schoolers?

I mean, they were only dating for... a few months at most, if I was vague enough with the timeline to permit it

Ugh, now I'm worried about whether or not I rushed things...

>>28104358
>Brief
>Were
>IM-PLY-ING

>>28104398
Hm?

So why all the serousness lately Keaton?

>>28104490
Ah, just stress, I suppose

I'm still happy to write cute, fluffy stuff, but Shimmering was always going to take a more serious turn once I basically finalized the script

I'll probably write a one-off of Anon giving ShimSham's tender massage lovings after a hard day's crime-fighting

that sounds like fun

>>28104509
I just want your characters to have a happy ending in the main story

>>28104520
I'll try not to make it just a "Doomed from the start, shouldn't have even tried" ending, because that invalidates the characters' struggles to improve their own lives and the world around them

I'm not guaranteeing a happy ending (they solve enough things with the Power of ____ in the shows and that frustrates me) but I want it to be an earned one.

Happy or sad, I just want to write a good story for you all.

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>>28104552
But will there be more of this?

>>28104602
You'll just have to keep reading to find out~
Anyways, I have an exam in 12 hours, so I'm gonna catch some sleep
Night!

>>28104552
As long as it doesn't permanently stay dark and edgy. You can tell a serious story and still have cuteness and jokes

Well I finally have some green to post, expect it within an hour.

yo guys did anyone cap when red went crazy?

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continued from the paste bin.

>You are Sunset Shimmer.
>Right now you are working on your homework as you wait for your mentor in the lobby of the Pym Tech tower.
>CHS was buzzing with gossip today as Anon, the kid who was beaten by the thugs you helped catch as they tried to rob a museum , was missing for the entire day.
>The theories ranged from him simply sleeping in, to him being kidnapped by some shady organization bent on world domination.
>Of course, you think he was just getting a checkup.
>After all, most anyone that had their back used to break a display case would probably need some serious medical help.
>You shake your head as you grab the last bit of homework you need to complete.
>Just as you finish with the last equations of your Trigonometry homework, the tall navy blue haired form of Orion Sparkle, your mentor, sets his briefcase down beside you.
>”Sorry about making you wait, Ms. Shimmer.”
“It’s fine, gave me time to make some headway on this.”
>You lightly slap your book bag, creating a muffled wooden thunk.
>Smiling he gestures towards the front doors.
>”Well, ready to get started?”
>You stand eager to begin your patrol.

>>28105494
>You are Norman.
>And right now you are in uptown, on your way to a gig.
>Flash Drive are playing at some hipster nightclub by Pym Tower this evening.
>Now if only you could convince Flash to change the name of the band you'd be set.
“Well speak of the devil.”
>As you near the shop, you can see Flash’s beat up old minivan parked in front with Brawly and Ringo hauling the drum kit, and Flash talking with the owner.
>As much as several people at the school would like to say otherwise, Flash is a fairly good guy.
>He just has some confused feelings towards the newest member of the CHS student body.
>It definitely doesn't help that she looks almost exactly like the dimension hopping pastel pony princess that he fell hard for.
>It’ at that moment when you feel a buzzing in your pocket.
>Pulling out your phone you check to see who's calling you.
>Shit, It’s your father.
“Hey Dad. What's up?”
>”Yes, hello Norman. I'm just calling to say I'll be having a late business meeting, and won't be home until sometime after midnight.”
>This is the fifth time this month that he’s had a business meeting, if that's even what he's doing.
“Sure, hope it goes well.”
>”I'll see you tomorrow morning then. Stay safe.”
>Before you can say so much as “you too”, your father hangs up.

>>28105502
>You are Anon.
>And for the last who-knows-how-long you have been a passenger in your own body.
>The only thing preventing you from thinking that this might still be a dream is the skull splitting headache.
>The thing that’s been in control, however, has been eerily silent.
>It’s almost like it’s taking a great amount of concentration to control you.
>Wait, if it's having a hard time controlling you, that might just mean you have a chance to regain control of your body.

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Here's Witchblade Sunset by Shonuff44. The idea wouldn't leave my head

>>28105564
These hips are sure to attract Beans

So, any thoughts on the latest update?

>>28105649
I like it, a small look into their days is good

>>28105721
And the last part?

>>28105761
A good amount of mystery, and I like that

>>28105453

Ditto, does anyone have caps?

cont. from pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
>Be You.
>Your host is comforting a female.
>A female he earlier shared saliva with.
>You know he wanted this.
>But you don’t know what information he gets from her saliva.
>Her immune system works fine.
>She seems healthy besides her emotional state.
>There are many factors you’re unfamiliar with.
>She seems interesting.
>Not human at all.
>You doubt your host even has access to that information.
>If his senses were evolved enough to get information out of this action.
>And his emotional state was depressed.
>You do your best to keep his neurotransmitters stimulants, and not depressants.
>Can’t go around messing with his brain too much, it must seem natural.
>In combat it would be different.
>...
>Human mating rituals are strange.
>It seems he first needs to care for her.
>Show her he’s a fitting mate to raise offspring with.
>Humans still develop after they have exited the mothers womb.
>For many years.
>Social creatures are strange.
>You could be wrong.
>You never had a host who came to mate with anyone
>A Host who created offspring.
>This seems to be an important action, but you become restless.
>You want to do something.

>>28091509
Who.

>>28106245
>He’s accessing his memories of another female.
>The one that died.
>He’s looking for something specific.
>Notes.
>Notes for a device she had built.
>The human mind seems so unorganized.
>You create new neurons for him
>You tie all the information he needs together.
>Makes bridges of logic as opposed to emotion.
>The Others are prodding at you again.
>They feels you up
>They want to know what you’re doing.
>You have yet to find a way to communicate with them.
>But you don’t want to.
>They don’t not have a mind like you do.
>They are mechanical minds.
>Smaller than a natural cell.
>They communicate between themselves by radiation.
>But you don’t know how.
>Their number has grown.
>Since you do their job of repairing your host they had reproduced.
>Taking parts of his ingested food to do so.
>You’d need those ingredients for yourself.
>Usually.
>But you’re curious.
>You need to experiment with them.

>>28106248
>>He’s accessing his memories of another female.
he's not reading sunsets mind, but thinks about someone
That's the kind of shit that happens if you don't proofread, kids.

>>28106248
>Be Anon.
>You’ve comforted Sunset enough to make her be able to continue.
>You go to your separate dorm rooms though and each take a nap.
>While your mind is racing with the notes Twilight has had on her pendant.
>You almost vividly remember all the notes you just saw laying around on her desk, even if you had only glimpsed at them once.
>You have never actually looked at them, for the simple reason of not wanting to steal her ideas.
>But now that she’s dead, this Arcane Resource Collector could come in handy.
>Arcane resources.
>She either means magic stuff or dark energy.
>Dark energy is simply a form of energy we can’t detect yet.
>And not even that, but probably a bunch of different types of energies.
>Whatever this arcane energy is, it’s something that has to naturally occurs in the universe and can be scientifically explained.
>The one she had powering her suit was a differs from the notes you remember.
>Obviously because the notes she has had were just for a resource collector.
>Making a battery is one thing, using it an entirely different one.
>You’ll simply build that Mark 1 yourself and see what you can do with it.
>Maybe tomorrow...
>You kinda told Sunset she should keep being on lookout for – well – your-superhero-self.
>She wants a real fight and you can get her one.
>You first convince her to help you against the Irish, convince her you’re a good guy, then reveal yourself to her as... yourself.
>...
>This is not going to go well.
>But you can’t keep hiding from her, you need to tell her.
>For the sake of your relationship.
>Sunset...
>You manage to fall asleep thinking of the sound of her laugh and her soft skin, and how much you want to hold her...

>>28106360
yay, an update!

poor Anon, he has to know this won't go as well as he hopes

>>28106360
Will Twilight ever reveal herself?

>>28106471
>poor Anon, he has to know this won't go as well as he hopes

I wonder...
>>28106360
>>You first convince her to help you against the Irish, convince her you’re a good guy, then reveal yourself to her as... yourself.
>>...
>>This is not going to go well.

he knows

>>28106483
it's been like 18 hours after her "death"

>>28106687
ah...
whoops

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RED ALERT GUYS
SCI TWI'S VIRGINITY HAS BEEN STOLEN

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>>28107137

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>>28107161
!!!!!!!!!

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>>28107137
So it begins.

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>>28107181
EVERYTHING IS ON FIRE!

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>>28107190
"I SAY GOD IS DEEEEEEAD"

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Oh, and Flash is eye-fucking Celly and Luna

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Is it just me or is it the first time we see boobs as more than just bumps in their top, but wit actual outline above and below said orbs

>>28107244
Celestia looks super cute, can't really hold it against him

>>28107244
To be fair, I mean.... yeah
I'd do it

>>28107214
Very much doubt anything much will come of it
besides some blushing and maybe, maybe, a kiss on the cheek.

>>28107757
Could be both and she is cute like that

>>28107181
Just look at Shimmy though, that slight smirk, she sees what is going on but does nothing. Does she know something we don't?

>>28108057
If you're gonna be the fun police, you might as well not speak

has rabble left us for his nazis?

>>28109388
For now...

>>28109400
hail... *sniff* hail hydra...

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>>28109606
Say it like you mean it
HAIL HYDRA

>>28109733
Hail Hydraulics

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>>28109733
[Spoiler]HAIL HIPS[/Spoiler]

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>>28109778
pneumatics has advantages when you...
I mean...
you heathen.
HAIL HYDRA

>>28109803
I shall allow that

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>>28109803
>Hooves

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Each movie gets lewder

>>28109829
>Not praising Sunset in all her forms.

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>>28109856

>>28109856
Are you complaining?

>>28109856
>>28107757
you know that I posted literally the same picture only one screenscroll up?

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>>28109861
Bro, it's a prank, it's a prank, there's a camera right there

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>>28109856
I just hope everyone knows that Vinyl and Derpy have best butts

>>28109933
Not even dubs can undo your heresy.

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>>28110030
O-oh yeah? Well....
I love Demon Shimmer, alright?! Quit judging me!

@supercuteon
Read through your pastebin
It felt weird to have Sombra refered to as "Osborn" in Anons pov, it's Anons name too after all.

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>>28110072
Fine taste.

>>28110014
pockets are eyes
weird faces
can't unsee

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>>28110072
Angel sunset is great too.

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>>28110072
>>28110101
>>28110110
Ha

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>>28110105
You son of a...

>>28110138
Alan Rickman is dead

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>>28110128
Midnight Sparkle is actually superior to Demon Shimmer

Like, no contest

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>>28110182
Got that right

>>28110256
I hate those bloated tits though...
only weebs and people who have never seen boobs in real life begore think this is pretty
...
treppahcs...

>>28110285
well, the man does write a bimbo story...

>>28110285
>>28110297
I just asked the character to be drawn and that's it. And compared to my other stuff, this is tame

>>28110345
oh, wasn't complaining at all
you already told us that you were lewd from the start

>>28110378
I know, to tell the truth it's sorta my headcannon that girls who get corrupted tend to change their appearance in very drastic ways.

>>28110402
well, far be it from me to shit on another man's headcanon

>>28110422
Besides i see nerdy Twilight being somewhat small compared to Sunset

>>28110443
I could see that.

>>28110475
That and Pinkie is related to Deadpool, Q and Discord

lazy keaton bump

>>28110297
*looks it up*
huh...
well... virgins shouldn't write porn
Thankfully trep imporved since last year

>>28111360
Pastebin or Fimfiction?

>>28111429
Pastebin
Air headed sister and bimbo adventure

>>28111539
I just started around those times

>You are now Screwball
>You haven't been getting much clicks on your videos lately
>It's easy to fix, with some more livestreamed crime
>That's what you do
>Commit minor crimes, livestream them, get views
>You now have a baseball bat and a nail gun strapped to your hip
>You look to the camera you are holding
"Hello my dear fans and welcome to Screwball Show!" You do the intro. "Today I'm gonna smash some traffic lights. Shoot some tires with my nail gun and maybe beat up a few cops. Also cross your fingers for Spider-Girl. I've got a little surprise for her."
>You take your bat and run towards the first traffic light you see
>This is gonna be fun!

>Be Sunset Shimmer
>Fem made you some coffee after her apology
>You and her are now watching some TV
>There is some news about a man saving a dog after it was hit by a motorcycle
"I think we should continue studying Fem." You say. "You won't be catching up on the classes anytime soon if we don't."
>"Yeeeaaah..." She winces a little. "I actually lied about not understanding." You raise a brow.
"Why?"
>"I umm..." She plays with her hair. "It was my first day at school and I wanted to make a friend."
>Well that's cute. "Heh."
>"Hey don't laugh, I was really nervous while asking you if I could sit at your table." She grins. "You checking my boobs did kill the tension though."
"I did no such thing." You say.
>"Yeah, yeah, whatever." She dismisses. "The point is we don't need to study. We could play some Mortal Kombat X if you are up for it?"
>You've never tried playing any games before but there is not much to do anyway
"Sure, but you gotta teach me first."
>"BREAKING NEWS! INFAMOUS SCREWBALL IS AT IT AGAIN! SHE IS DAMAGING TRAFFIC LIGHTS AND VEHICLES. POLICE IS HAVING A DIFFICULT TIME CAPTURING HER AS SHE PARKOURS THROUGH THE CITY."
"Or we could go catch some criminals. Whaddaya say?"
>She smirks. "Oh I'm in."


Sorry for my long absence

>>28112201
forgiven

Fem needs to tease ShimSham with a Mega-Milk shirt

No update tonight. This part is being a bigger bitch than the Abyss Watchers from Dark Souls 3

bumpu

>>28112201
God, it's good to have you back.

>>28112251
That is a great idea I love it

Good morning, everyone

>>28114763
Hello Keaton. What's up?

>>28115119
pretty much nothing
cooking breakfast, making some coffee, reviewing my notes

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>>28112201
>Be Screwball
>You have been having fun with the cops but it really starts to get boring
>You jump behind a wall and check on your viewers
>They seem to be bored too
"C'mon Spider-Girl"
>You exhale and go back to pulling cops' pants down and handcuffing them together
>Just as you were about to swing your bat to a police car's windshield a web catches it
>You turn to see no other than Spider-Girl
"Awww yeah! Thanks for joining us SG! I've been waiting for you"
>"Wouldn't miss it for the world you maniac," she says, "I also brought a friend hope you don't mind"
>Uh oh...
>You look around to see her +1
>"Down here sexy"
>You look down
>She just came out of the ground!
>You try to run away but she catches you by the ankles, causing you to do the flap
"Oww" You sit up rubbing your nose. Spider-Girl is already walking towards you and the other hero is now standing on proper ground. "No fair SG, I didn't even get to play yet!"
>"Maybe next time Screws, when you get out of prison"
>Just a little closer and... NOW!
>You pull out a small glass container from your purse and throw its contents in to the air

>Be Femanon
>That was really easy
>Shimmy said this girl has no super powers, she is just an expert on parkour
>Disable her feet and she was done for
>At least that's what you thought
>But she just threw like a hundred wolf spiders into the air
>They are coming down, on your face
>You gotta do something
~Yeah I'm initiating little girl scream
>Fuck you brain!
>You scream
>You hear Shimmy's scream
>Even some policemen screamed
>You get grabbed by your waist and find yourself on top of a building
>"THEY ARE IN MY HAIR!" Shimmer shakes you. "GET THEM OFF, PLEASE!"
>You have a good idea on how to do it and have some fun
>You pull Shimmer to you chest and make her and yourself intangible
>Spiders drop to the ground and scatter away
>Now you've got hugging you with a death grip
"Spids... I can't... breath" You manage to say
>Her grip is released as she blushes

>>28115145
well, that's actually horrifying
also, Spider-Shimmer afraid of spiders, very cute

>>28115184
It’s cute but it's ironic as well

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>>28116233
l-lewd...

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>>28091509
H I P S
I
P
S

>>28116496
we haves HIPS, yes

repostan

>Be Anon.
>Fucking chemistry class.
>No, it’s not the class.
>It’s other people.
>You were minding your own business when a bunch of jocks came to ‘be interested’ in your project.
>And after you told them it’s harmless you could have guessed what happened next.
>You’re now behind the school, washing off your /everything/ with a hose.
>You really don’t want to be inside the school and possible run across them again, they know you got to be somewhere cleaning your chemical off.
>From what you can see your skin is turning purple now.
>That’s certainly not what you have had in mind your invention to do.
>Better hope you can wash it off.
>“Hey Anon!”
>You shriek together as an eerily cheerful voice exclaims your name only a foot left of you.
“God fucking damnit!”
>You hurdle away from the voice and aim the hose at her in defense.
>“You know you shouldn’t curse, Anon.”
>The perpetrator was Pinkie Pie, the school’s candlejack.
>She can be everywhere and nowhere at the same time, and if you say her name she’ll appear.
>...
>She can also appear if you’re half naked and you’re washing your ruined clothes, while your body has a mixture of purple and green, like the talking dog of the transfer student.
“I curse as I fucking please.”
>“Okiedokie.”
>You didn’t expect her to simply agree with it.
“I curse as I fucking please.”
>You tell her. So whatcha doing, Anon?”
“Piss off, Pinkie.”
>Maybe you should be less of an asshole, but you’re really not in the mood for Pinkie fucking Pie right now.
>“Like... right here, or should I go–”
>You clench your fist.
“Pinkie. Go. Piss. Off. Now.”
>You empathize each word, and her head goes red.
>She clenches her body together and has her arms pressed to her bountiful chest before letting go with a sigh.
>At first you weren’t sure what had happened, but then you see a wet spot appearing on her skirt and liquid running down her thigh.
>We Killgrave now.

and newstuff: go!
>>28116629
“W-What are you doing?”
>Pinkie turns bright red.
>“I- I just...”
>She frantically tries to cover the wet spot on her skirt with her hands.
>The girl in front of you just peed herself on – well, not exactly on your command, because you didn’t mean -
>No, what the fuck just happened?
>You aim the garden hose at her for a second, splashing her with water.
“Now nobody will notice, and you can blame it on me.”
>She sniffled.
>“Anon... but people will think you were mean to me...”
“Better than them thinking you - you know.”
>“You would do that for me?”
>She’s looking at you with big eyes.
“Uhh- yeah, sure. It’s not like people liked me much before.”
>“Oh, but I liked you. I like everyone, but I don’t know if people would like me if they knew I peed myself, I mean it’s kinda embarrassing and they wouldn’t let me life it down, not that I would know I never peed myself before, okay, actually I did, but back then I was a teensy tiny kid, oh I must have-”
“Stop talking.”
>And for some miraculous reason it happened, she actually stopped talking.
>She only stares at you.
>Like her eyes would pop out..
“Breathe, geez, what’s the matter with you?”
>She was breathing again, but wasn’t responding.
“Pinkie?”
>Nope, no response.
“Uhh... talk?”
>“oh my god, I don’t know what just happened. After you told me to stop talking I totally felt compelled to do just that-”
>She takes in much air and continues to talk in pinkie speed.
>“Like you wanted me to pee my pants, even though I didn’t want to pee my pants, because who would want to pee their pants? But then you said it again, and I think I had a little in me, so I totally just did it. You have mind control powers, Anon, how cool is that? I mean it’s totally creepy you ordered me to pee my pants, especially since I don’t wear pants, but a skirt. And imagine what you can do with your powers, like awesome crime fighting.”

>>28116639
>She throws some punches into the air.
>“Or- Oh no, what if you become a villain? Going around ordering girls to pee in front of you-”
“Stop talking again.”
>She shut up instantly.
“But remember to breath.”
>Pinkie nods, her eyes dart around in panic.
“Sorry, Pinkie, but... you’re kinda freaking me out. But so are you... You can talk again, but please do so in a regular human talking speed.”
>“I- I’m kinda scared, Anon.”
>So are you.
>“But I- You’re a good guy, aren’t you? The making me pee myself is kinda weird, like you were testing your powers, but-”
“I didn’t want you to pee your pants, I said piss off, as in go away.”
>She turns and starts to walk away.
“God damnit, no, stop. Come back.”
>As ordered, Pinkie comes back.
“I ordered you again. I didn’t mean to. Ahh...”
>What do?
“Pinkie... You can do whatever you want, be yourself.”
>“Aww, that’s like the nicest thing I heard today. People usually don’t like me being myself, but want me to be less... me. It’s actually kinda sad when you think about it- So mind control powers so how did you get that? How does it work? You seem inexperienced. Am I your first? Hm?”
“Yeah- you’re my... first? That kinda sounds wrong.”
>You look at your purple hands, and the discoloration making it’s way up your arms, as well as down from your head where you had been doused.
“It’s probably because of the pheromone-”
>Mind control through pheromones?
“Pinkie?”
>“Hmm?”
“Would you... help me figure out... stuff?”
>She gasps.
>“You want to experiment on me? Like seeing how far you can push me? Is this like... like a lewd thing? B-Because I-”
>She trails off muttering to herself, cheeks burning red.
>Body language makes her twist around a little, play with her hair and hide her generous assets.
“Yes, test subject like, but... not lewdly.”
>“Not lewdly?”
“Yeah.”
>She seems disappointed.

>>28116648
>“Well, I think you could just order me to be your test subject, can’t you?”
“But I’m asking you. Would you help me?”
>She takes a breath to think and weighs her options.
>“Yes, sure, you seem like a good guy, and it would be kinda bad letting you run around test on random people, so why not on someone who agrees. I’d like to ask you not to do weird stuff to me... or make me do weird stuff to you, you know?”
“Yeah... But-”
>You empathize that ‘but’.
“-you seemed disappointed when I confirmed I wouldn’t use you lewdly.”
>She tilts her head, feigning innocence.
>“What do you mean?”
>You clear your throat.
“Answer and tell the truth. Were you- Are you disappointed, because I said I wouldn’t use you... lewdly?”
>She clasps her hands before her mouth to stop herself.
>Wha..?
“Remove your hands from your mouth and answer me truthfully. Are you disappointed, because I said I wouldn’t use you lewdly?”
>She removes her hands and blurts out at full Pinkie speed.
>”Yes, I was, but now you made me say it and you’re going to probably make me do it and that scares me, because I barely know you. You seem like a nice guy, but I kinda seem to have offered myself up to you now, which would probably make anyone want to test out his ability to make me do lewd things, so I’m not disappointed anymore, I’m kinda like... scaroused.”
>You let that sink in.
>Not just into your own brain but also into hers, as she continuously gets redder with every passing second.
“So... I can command you to tell the truth as well.”
>”That’s what you take away from it? I- I’m like quivering here and...”
“Calm down... Wait is that viable command?”
>”I- ahh don’t know? No- I don’t, like... feel calm.”
“So I can’t change your emotions... not intentionally at least. Let’s see... Pinkie? Breathing exercise, okay? Calm breaths. Deep in and out. Smile, not forced, but content.”

>>28116660
>She smiles and starts doing breathing exercise, mimicking the breaths you take as instructions.
“Okay, do what you want again, be yourself, Pinkie, but... this are extraordinary circumstances... maybe you should continue.”
>She nods and continues a little while as she calms down.
>”It’s still really scaring me...”
“You’ve said scaroused.”
>”I-”
“It’s okay... uhm... So I needed to command you twice to tell the truth... I also told you twice to ‘piss off’ earlier before you did it. So I guess stuff you really don’t want to do need more convincing...”
“So you seem to have at least some degree of control left, and you’re well aware that the compulsion is not coming from yourself.”
>Pinkie tilts her head.
>”Yeah... I guess so.”
“So you have a mind control fetish? It aroused you?”
>”Nope, no, definetely-”
“Tell the truth.”
>”Yes, totally. It’s like the rape fetish some women seem to have, but better, you’re not actually in fear of being too roughly handled because you don’t defend yourself, which means your master can be gentle, and he’ll make you do whatever. Depending on the type of control he could make you do things you didn’t even know you can. And you’re a good guy, I know you’d make me enjoy it too-”
“Do you browse /d/?”
>”Yes! It’s so much better than regular porn. You see all kinds of stuff and what people are into. Reality is no longer the limit but only your imagination and skill to draw or write, and-”
“The /d/ question wasn’t a command to tell me the truth.”
>Pinkie goes red again...
>”It- it wasn’t?”
“Nope, not this time around. That truth you told me all on your own.”

and dump done

>>28116667
cute in a pervy way
nice to see more work, it's neat to see Anon trying to get a handle on is powers with careful wording

>>28116667
>Pinkie on /d/

>>28116903
Pinkie is for sexual

>>28117054
Very true.

>>28106360
>Be Anon (still)
>You wake up, relaxed as you had never been before.
>Is this what a wake mind is supposed to feel like?
>This is great!
>Fuck,
>How long did you sleep?
>You sun is still out... or out again?
>You pick out your phone from your discarded pants and-
>What?
>You only slept half an hour?
>Your mind feels so... clean.
>Every thought you have now is precise.
>You look around and see the mess of your dropped clothing.
>Gotta life clean.
>You pick them up and put them to the laundry before taking a shower and redressing.
>Second shower today, but if you use the right shampoo, your hair will not take damage from too much chemicals.
>You clearly remember reading shampoo ingredients when Sunset didn’t come back after your first kiss.
>Quick google and /fa/ search later, you analyse your hair and pick out the ingredients your hair would benefit from and which would be harm it.
>And one for Sunset too, while you’re at it.
>You clearly remember the feel of her hair, and imagine what it’ll feel like if...
>Then you write down every sort of shampoo you remember with their ingredients and evaluate them according to the new information.
>Trolling good old /fa/
>hmm...
>You set up a site with the algorithm you wrote, plus a form to enter more shampoo brands.
>While you were at it you set up advertisement on the site and let out some bots to find fashion and hairstyle boards and websites of hairdressers and to spam them discreetly.
>Hmm... might as well register a company and trademark, find a loon for a better logo than what you can whip up in GIMP, and maybe within a week sellout to Google.
>Google... we’re at a full circle.
>Now what...?
>Wait...
>Didn’t you plan to remake Twilights pendant?
>What the fuck happened?

side effects...
bad update today, but my laptop ran out of battery and then updated windows for like an hour, I was pissed

>>28117521
>>28117054
or for peeing her pants

>>28117571
oof

>>28117556
a few spelling mistakes here and there

Hit upon a new, fun, semi-comfy/feelsy one-off
partially inspired by Treps, my own experience, and (gasp) a good fimfiction story.

>>28117571
Whatever floats her boat. I feel she would into anything from latex catsuits to tickling

>>28117605
Care to share?

>>28117613
well, I haven't started writing it yet, but the general idea is pretty sweet and simple.

Anon, like any good boyfriend, wants to give Sunset a massage, to help her after a stressful week, early in their relationship. Surprisingly, Sunset is not okay with that and, after a little coercion, Anon finds out why once she takes her shirt and bra off.
On her shoulder-blades and at the base of her spine are several large, nasty looking scars, from when she transformed and was purified by the Elements.
She's really self-conscious about them.
Anon helps her with getting over them, a bit.

>>28117654
you mean when her wings got ripped off

>>28117677
Wings and tail, yes.
Rewatching that, growing them looked like it hurt. Getting rid of them didn't look fun either.

That's the general idea, anyways.

>>28117681
I love all of your writing equally keaton, and I am excited to see whatever you write for this. That said, the general has lost a lot of traffic because people have stopped writing. No offense to the last 2 or three writers who just updated, I appreciate you Could you at least post it here instead of only on your pastebin?

>>28117654
I meant the fic that inspired you.

Nice idea though and glad to see I'm somewhat of an inspiration

>>28117710
ooooooh!
yeah, sure, right here
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/277267/1/scar-tissue/scar-tissue

>>28117705
I can do that, yeah
Unlike Shimmering, this will be a pretty reasonably sized piece, as opposed to a monument to match my ego

I'll write it in on pastebin, put it here in greentext first, then actually put it in my pastebin archive.
Sorry, if that's an annoying habit.
Should I repost more of my work here in green form?
I don't want to look like a huge, self-promoting asshole waving my word-dick in the air, but it /does/ feel nice to see the pastebin numbers tick up.

>>28117740
I say at least put the spin-offs here

>>28117795
that's fair, they don't matter to me nearly as much as the main story does.

Not to say they take less effort or that I don't enjoy writing them, not at all, but Shimmering is my pet project.

>>28117705
>because people have stopped writing
Sorry, i was idle for half a month
I think we should also catalogue our fallen comrades better now...
Time for a new copypaste op?

>>28117740
You can dump yourstuff, nobody would mund
I'd appreciate it if the thread would look greener

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>>28113758
Good to be back

>>28115145
>"Thanks." Shimmer says backing up a little. Then she tilts her head. "How close did I need to be for you to make me intangible again?"
"About three meters would be enough." You grin even though she cant see under your helmet
>"W-why did you hug me then?"
>You take a step towards her
"Because I wanted to." You say with a sultry voice
>She looks at you biting her lower lip, "I-I umm..."
>"Wooow look at that viewers, SG has a new girl-friend!"
>You and Shimmer turn towards the voice. "Hey girls! Please don't stop. It's gonna be great for my little show."
>It's Screwball, "Oh and I must say I was actually sceptical about the spiders but it worked! Best. Episode. Ever!"
>"Let's catch her." Shimmer says before jumping towards her. You run right after her
>Screwball dives straight down the building
>You two realize she had tied Sunny's previous webbing to her ankle
>Screwball unties the knot just as she was about to pulled back up and lands to the ground with a flip
>"Sorry girls, gotta run now! Thanks for the views!" She runs and steals a police car
"She's good." You say matter of factly
>"Well, I'm going after her." Sunset says
>But neither of you noticed Screwball leaving a little canister behind before jumping down
>It's a smoke bomb
>Sunset raises her arm to spin a web but the canister goes of putting both of you in a coughing fit
>By the time the smoke is gone so is Screwball
"She's really good." You say
>Shimmy looks frustrated. "I hate her so much" She states
"Well, we got our asses kicked in a gentle way." You reply. "Wanna get your ass kicked brutally in Mortal Kombat X?"
>She sighs, "Sure, I could use some stress relief."

>>28115184
>>28115725
Good to see that I was able to give the feeling I want

>>28116667
Mind control fetish pinkie best pinkie

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>>28116667
This is gonna be fun.

>>28117855
Sexual Bully FemAnon a cute

Should have an update in a while

>>28119413
excite

>>28102985
>Be Spider-Woman with Captain Marvel.
>Right now you’re dealing with the villain of the day and current pain in the ass, Iron Rhino.
>Long story short, this was suppose to be a military weapon with some AI but it went rogue.
>Why they wanted a robotic rhino is beyond you but now you have to focus.
>The weapon stood up to its full height, nine feet tall, and glared at you.
> “Surrender Spider-Woman and be deleted.”
>His arms turn into machine guns as he fires a barrage of bullets at you.
>Both you can Captain Marvel dive to the side and run at the robot.
>Rhino raised his fist while you were running at him.
>He threw his fist as you jump and shot some web at his arm, causing it to stick to the ground.
>He tried to pull his arm back, to break the webs hold on him but the web was stronger than it.
>Rhino didn’t see Captain Marvel right next to it with her arm glowing.
>The metal monstrosity looked in her direction as she blasted him with a golden beam in its face.
>The blast caused Rhino to stumble back a few feet as his face was slowly crumbling.
>A large blade extended out of Rhino’s arms as it started to run at you.
> “CRUSH!!”
>You spider-sense flared to life while Rhino was getting dangerously close to you.
>You just need to wait for the right moment to strike.
>Rhino slices a car open as it made its way towards you.
>Just a little closer.
>Rhino was within arm’s reach when you jumped over him and shot some web on the ground.
>The metal beast stepped on the web and couldn't move it's legs.
> “Release me.”
>Rhino struggles to free it's legs as Marvel flew in front of it with her fist raised.
>She slammed her fist into the robot causing more of it’s face to break.
>You jumped on the damaged Rhino with your fists over your head and brought them down.
>Marvel then grabbed Rhino’s right arm and slammed her elbow into it, breaking and bending it.
>Landing on the ground, you see the robot fall over as if it was dead.

>>28119772
>You let out a sigh as you turned to look at your aunt/superhero mentor.
“Thanks for the help Marvel.”
>She waves her hand dismissively.
> “I’m sure you could have done it yourself.”
>Unaware to you, Rhino twitched a little bit.
“Still, thanks.”
>Your spider-sense goes crazy as you turn to see Rhino pointing its gun at you.
> “I ….Will …...Destroy….”
>Before he could finish, a pole pierced its head causing the arm and gun to drop.
> “YYYYYoooooooouuuuuuuuu.”
>Rhino basically powered down as oil began to leak from the pole.
>You looked up at the rooftops of all the building to find out where that pole came from, but didn’t see anything suggesting its origin.
> “Where did that come from?”
“ …..I don’t know.”
>You could hear the sound of sirens getting near your location.
“We should leave before the boys in blue show up.”
>Captain Marvel just giggles and said, “Like the good old days.”


>Be Anon.
>You’re walking home, deep in thought.
>Or you would be if Tonic wasn’t talking to you.
> ‘You did you help her?’
>You don’t answer him as your mind is elsewhere.
> ‘You didn’t have to do it, you know.’
‘I know that.’
>You stop at a crosswalk, waiting for the light to change.
> ‘Then why did you do it? I thought you hated her.’
>You sigh as the light changed, allowing you to walk across the road.
‘I don’t hate her. I hate her methods, that’s why I decided our next course of action.’
> ‘And what’s that? Don’t tell me we’re gonna kill her.’
>You smile slightly to yourself.
‘No I don’t but ….Let’s talk in the morning alright?’
> ‘Is everything alright?’
>You shake head while running a hand through your hair.
‘I’m fine. Just need some time to think.’
>Tonic doesn’t say anything as you continued walking towards your home.

>>28120071
The newest update and Anon is beginning to have a few problems on his plate. So thoughts?

"Sunset... with great power comes even greater bumps."

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Filthy Rich doing his Norman Osborn impression

>>28121667
kek

>>28120097
A few mistakes, but it's nice to see some action

>>28122344
Yeah The scene was being a pain so it was shorter than I wanted. But yeah I'll fix it later.

Also wanted to give Anon a bit of a problem so to say. Make it were he sees a bit of what the heroes do and makes him think or something

>>28122360
I got you

>>28117556
>You’re unable to focus.
>No.
>You’re able to focus on what you’re doing excessively, but you lack a bigger picture.
>This is not good.
>That must have been the symbiote
>You certainly recognize it’s advantages, but if you forget about important stuff, or rather, if it inhibits your evaluation of importance of certain topics it has to go...
>But it has served you well so far.
>It’s friday, you’ll see Chrysalis again on Monday, you ask her then how to get rid of it.
>If you haven’t figured out what to do with it by then.
>You should make a schedule with reminders of what to do.
>Which is more of a band-aid than a cure for it.
>You don’t like half measures.
>But making a schedule for yourself would make you more efficient in general, so maybe let’s do that anyway.
>And not get sidetracked this time.
>Let’s see it’s... past 5pm. So you spent the greater deal of the afternoon on hair care, which, in retrospect was quite stupid.
>But there is still the website sells.
>Sunset.
>Sunset’s a priority.
>You copy from memory what you can about Twilight’s pendant and head out again.
>It’s Summer, so 6pm is not exactly the cover of night, but you can still find spots far from traffic cameras to suit up.
>You wonder what a super-hero vigilante would do in London...
>Know your blind spots, get into manholes and use the underground sewer/subway/abandoned tunnel system to change and appear wherever you want.
>Get information on that and make your own map of New Yokes underground, added as priority.
>Another look at your to do list.
>Irish Mafia; Let yourself be found by Spider-Woman and give her the fight she wants; Convince her to help with the Irish, show her you’re a good guy.
>You’ll start with a warehouse/sweatshop away from the city center.
>The buildings where still high enough to properly use as webbing targets for Spider-woman to move fast.
>Being easily spotted, you were soon chased by her.
“Just according to keikaku."

>>28123014
Great now Anon’s Light. Please don’t tell me he has a death note

>>28123341
he shouldn't talk in cringey may-mays when he's alone

>>28123366
Agreed. If he said according to plan then fine. But to talk like that is just him being a dork.

Still like the update though

>>28123416
I'm just washed up, untitled 8 and 9 are more fun to write at the moment...
I need to get back into my schedule

>>28123439
Look at my update.

It's not my best but it’s something and you’re doing great in my opinion

>>28123536
trep, where does your handle come from?

>>28124248
What handle?

Who the fuck is Pinkie supposed to be

>>28124314
Spiderman noire

>>28124304
your online handle?
your name?

>>28124340
For what? Please speak clearly. I don’t meme well

>>28124355
I think he means the one you use here.

>>28124373
I use Treppahcs cause it's my last name.

>>28124314
She was ordered to just be herself

>>28124389
huh.
I figured it was a clever distortion of trepak, the song from the nutcracker suite.

also, go me, forgetting to use my own trip

>>28124418
No problem, but yeah this is my real name.

Somewhat.

>>28124418
It's okay, we all do stupid things from time to time.

>>28124432
I am not a clever keaton

>>28124430
neat

>>28124468
Well I'm terrible with names, so i made an anagram of my name. It's better than the first name i took.

It was cookedwings

>>28124497
gotcha.
I've... pretty much always used superkeaton for most everything.

still no clue where the idea for it came from

>>28124555
Hey it's better than my first few attempts at getting a name. Now i need to plan Anon’s lewd greeting with Sunset, Alpha's transformation and the possibility of another hero/villain.

Also what did you think of my update?

>>28124579
I thought it as good
Plot and character advancement always helps a story

>>28125071
*was

fuck

>>28125121
That happens at the worst times huh?