Spanking Thread #32: Bedroom Edition

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>>28007648
The quick, casual spanks at the end were my highlight.

>>28012445
>If you ever had foals, then maybe you'd do something like that to THEM when they acted up
this pleases me. this whole fic pleases me.

>>28016591
being given a choice of spanking vs. something else, that the spankee cannot go back on is my favorite thing in spanking probably. like the Anon/Soarin' pie story. Not much of a choice there (threat of a RD spanking! Eep!) but spankee still has to play an active role in the reddening of their own backside, along with all the hoofy-kicks and crying like a foal.

>>28016791
Too fucking funny. I could see anon or any strong adult/adult pony getting a nickname like that amoung younger foals.

>>28021528
ponies were made for jammies.

>>28021830
Older Twilight sleeping at her parents' in her old bed?
Bet that tushie must be BURNING under these jammies!

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The mods are dead and you all slaughtered them

>>28021713
Damn, dat op picture!

>>28021932
Good

gonna continue my group project.
Maybe it would have more responses

Rules are simple
-Anyone can join in
-add one line or more as much as you like.
-Changing the entire plot is encouraged. but within the reason.
-Don't hesitate to join in. this is made for fun.

story so far

>You are anon
>you created a portal to ponyvile that you can travel freely between these 2 dimensions.
>Equestria accepted you as a member of their society
>you open a pharmacy in manehattan trading earth medicine for bits and jewelry .
>A big corporate medical company in manehattan was losing their business cause of you.
>They sent a litter to mercenary mare to sabotage your business.
>But that letter did no reach her but reached another pony.
>that pony thought she could fool the medical company by doing the dirty work herself.
>at night she snuck inside the back window of your pharmacy's basement.
>she made a ruckus.
>you were actually inside the pharmacy building and you hear the noise in the basement.
>you rush down the stairs
>pull out your keys to open the door
>PIECE OF CRAP, there's like forty keys on here. Why do you have so many keys?
>found the right one!
>you shoulder your way through the door and pull your phone out
>on goes your flashlight
...
>you just turn on the light switch
"Who's there? I warn you, I'm armed!"
>you got two arms!
>the light switch was on the far side of the room.
>you stood at the door and scouted the room.
>you saw a broken box.
>you walked toward the box to inspect it.
> you heard a noise creeping behind you.
>you swiftly turned around...
>And there she was...
>Batmare
>She looked at you and screamed
>"I liek Cholaet Milk!"

>>28023392
>you were startled.
>with a quick motion you pushed her away.
>she fell over some of your stuff. She tangled herself with some of your ropes.
>she struggled but that caused her to tangle herself more.
> she stopped after she was completely stuck between 2 crates.
>she was laying on her back, and her back legs was being tied up with her neck. Causing her butt to be presented to you.
>you went ahead and turned the light switch on
>you saw a yellow mare wearing some sort of black bodysuits laying there stuck and unable to move.
>she looked at you and smiled.
>you asked her "who are you and what are you doing in my basement"
>she nervously replayed " um I was lost and I fell down from that window."
>you look at the opened window. and traced the mess trail that she made.
>a strange paper past caught your eyes.
>you picked it up.
>she was started to sweat nervously.
>the paper was actually a litter addressed to that mercenary mare from the Medicine company.
>you read how they wanted her to sabotage your business.
>you glared at that nervous tied up pony.
>"Sabotage!" you said

>>28023395
>"I'm gonna call the authorities on you. you'd be thrown in a dungeon for the rest of your life"
>"no please mr.human man. anything but that.
>"pleading wont help you ..." you took a look at the paper again searching for a word.
>"mrs.Scarlet Mane" it was the name of the mercenary that the litter originally addressed to.
>"I bet there is a huge reward for you."
>"no mr.human" I'm not that mercenary. I'm just a stupid pony who happened to found this litter. and I can here to warn you about it"
>you looked at that mare in the eyes, she avoided eye contact.
>you sigh. "I'm not that stupid, I know it when a someone is lying to me. besides if you were gonna warn me about it. Then what are you doing dressed like that and sneaking around in my basement?
>"errr umm.. I was ..
>"enough! since you are already tied yourself up for me I can just carry you to the nearest station."
>"no please anything but that."
>you carried her on your shoulder. you held her back legs so she wouldn't fall. she was still being tied up. as soon as you started to move she continued pleading.
>"please human. I would do anything. but don't let them throw me in the dungeon"
>wow she actually believes that dungeon thing. "too late you gonna rot there"
>she started to tear "I'll do anything.. I can be your slave .. I'll do your dishes and your laundry .. you can punish me yourself .. you can do anything to me but not the dungeon"
>you suddenly stopped at the door thinking of what she just said.

now someone else continue this.
add anything.
change the plot
lets see how this story goes.

"I WIN!!" shouted Buttons Mash triumphantly. After weeks, he had finally completed the story mode of his newest game.
"Yes, but at what cost? Asked a familiar voice above her.
Buttons had been so focused in his game, he didn't realize he had been moved across his mother's lap with his sight never leavin the screen.
He also realized, now startled, that he hadn't done any of his chores or homework, despite his mother's warnings.
But it was too late, Button's mom was now as focused in her own "game" as he had been in his. Pulling his tail with one hoof as if it was the moving stick of an arcade, she began smashing Buttons' cheek in the right combination to unlock the desired lesson.

>>28023433
>Asked a familiar voice above her.
*above him
>she began smashing Buttons' cheek
*Buttons' cheeks
Plural. Damn it.

>>28021713
I just finished updating the image archive of thread 31
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>>28023433
I like this

>>28023403
>>28023403
>Anything?
>You turn your head around
>"Oh, really?" you say "and what punishment is suitable for a saboteur like yourself? Wanting to screw my whole business? Something pretty severe, I think. Have any ideas?

>she looks at you with fear in her eyes
>she's silent

>meanwhile, you have a tied up pony on your hands
>helpless
>suddenly you think about the two crates she got stuck in between
>and your brain hatches an idea

>You ask her, "so, little pony, Scarlet Mane. Have you ever been spanked before?"

>>28023485
>"spanked?" how can humans know about this thing.
>"yes spanked you heard me"
>"um yes. when I was a little filly my mom spanked me once for sneaking out of the house"
>you were curious about this. and asked her "give more detail"
>I was grounded for not doing my homework at school. and there was a concert that I wanted to go to, so I thought i could sneak out of my room and go there."
>I opened my window and tied my bed sheet as a rope.
>as I was climbing down my mom was waiting for me down,
>she knew that I would do that so she bit my ear and yanked it dragging me back inside.
>she yelled and lectured me. then decided that she needed to do some drastic measure so I can remember not to disobey her.
>she made me lean on a couch and she swatted my umm.. rear
>it was painful and embarrassing experience. that I would not forgot.
>you commented. "and here you are again. sneaking into other people's property. it seems your mom's spanking wasn't enough."
>She gulped

>>28023521
>"You will have to learn this the hard way, won't you?"
>she looks terrified
>and you feel a pretty surge of power go through you
>you're angry, upset that some pony dared try to sabotage your livelihood
>You're going to make this pony pay.

>You turn around
>walking back to those crates where she'd gotten stuck
>she notices, and starts to wiggle her tied up body

>The pink mare rubs one leg with the other
>yips and yells every time your hoof gives her butt a stinging smack
>shivers and sobs
>but she refuses to struggle
>apart from some twitching
>she’s so sweet and kind and affectionate
>you hate hearing her in pain, and crying
>You’ve been trying to ignore it, but it’s not easy

>”Yowch! Oww! OWW!”

>You’re getting in a rhythm
>left, right, middle
>left, right, middle
>it seems like it’s working
>based on Pinkie Pie’s tears
>you’re watching closely
>paying attention to her butt
>you don’t want to leave a bruise
>so far, it’s hard to tell that you even did anything
>her backside is pink, after all
>You can only imagine what a big hairbrush would do to her
>You try not to think about that

>Pinkie Pie just submits to it all
>she’s so tense
>you can tell she wants to move
>but she isn’t
>you can only imagine what’s going through her mind right now
>wanting to please you
>wanting to take the punishment she feels like she deserves
>such a heavy weight on her mind

>SMACK! SMACK! SMACK, SMACK SMACK!

>”Uhhuhhoow! Oww! OWIEEE!”

>That’s when she moves, for the first time
>Shakes her butt away from you
>kicks her hooves

>All of a sudden, it’s like she’s about to have a panic attack
>she gasps
>Starts stammering

>”I-Im-m sorry! Sorry, Anon! I won’t kick anymore, I’m sorry!”

>>28023626
btw this is continued from Pinkie green last thread, sorry for no labels

>Oh, jeez
>you didn’t even say anything
>since she’s submissive with everything else, it only makes sense
>she feels like she has to totally submit to this spanking, too
>to her, struggling is disobedience
>your heart is breaking
>you almost stop right there
>call it a night, give your wife the biggest, warmest hug and kiss you’ve ever given

>but before you do that, something occurs to you
>a thought, that makes you groan inwardly
>if you stop now
>then she’ll think you’re stopping because you don’t think she can take it
>because you feel sorry for her
>not because you think, as you said before, that she “learned her lesson”
>And it still hasn’t been much time

>You never want to do this again

>”It’s ok, Pinkie. A-are you, doing ok?”
>god, that seems like a stupid question
>she’s crying while being spanked!
>”Doing ok?” are you retarded?

>But she cries out a teary eyed response
>She nods her head
>Her poofy mane isn’t as poofy anymore
>”Y-yes, Anoonnn…”

>You’ll take that with a grain of salt
>You’re starting to see a little bit of darker pink on her plump tush
>It’s obvious she’s in pain
>but you have to go on
>at least a little while more

>You’ve been spanking the same spots this whole time
>Leaving small dark pink circles on her butt
>You decide that you’ll start spanking lower
>You aim, and SMACK! goes your hoof

>Pinkie yelps, and her back hooves do a little wiggle
>but she doesn’t kick
>you spank the other cheek, same spot
>she hiccups and sobs into her legs

>>28023652
>Several more swats and Pinkie is really starting to cry
>Before it was softer, held back
>now it’s more open
>Instead of kicking or moving her butt anywhere, Pinkie Pie shuffles her legs up and down each other
>”Owwowowoww!”

>But she hasn’t begged at all
>pleaded for you to stop
>even said your name
>Your poor wife still must feel so guilty
>and knowing how submissive she is, she’d probably lay right here all night long
>take whatever punishment you give her
>Because that’s what she thinks she has to do

>You love her
>and you’re so glad she married you
>not some other stallion
>because you will never abuse her trust of you
>never go too far just because she’ll let you
>which is why you have to stop, now

>But first, you’re going to follow through with your promise to her from the beginning
>your promise that you would spank her until she “learned her lesson” or whatever
>So, you stop smacking her ass and ask a big question

>So, Pinkie, have you learned your lesson yet?”

>Pinkie Pie can’t answer you right away
>But you’re just happy to be done with this whole thing
>she’ll just say yes
>and then as soon as she does you’ll let her up and give her a desperately needed hug

>Finally she speaks, through sobs

>”I-I, I h-haven’t… I don’t think I have yet, Anooonn, I’m sorryyy…”

>Oh, fuck.

>>28023553
>she noticed something. her crate wrapper that tied her up were a bit lose.
>as anon was holding back leg. she unwrapped her forelegs. only her tail and one of her back legs are tied.
>she started kicking and squirming.
>"hey hold still" you were losing your grip on her.
>she broke free and kicked your stomach.
>you dropped her and you had to take a kneel cause of the pain.
>you thought to yourself 'damn that horse leg can really pack a punch. I need to be careful'
>she unwrapped her bond. then faced you. ready to fight.
>the door was behind you and it was the only quick way out. the window was far up. and she know that she wouldn't go there.

>>28023652
Use labels mate. and name fag yourself when you are telling a story.
so we can easily follow yours.
and collect it for pastebin or our forums.

write something like this
Pinkie story - part XX
at the start of each part.

>>28023673
I created a post for you in the forum.

http://mlpgeneral.com/spanking/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=35

I put the whole story in. for anyone who wants to jump in and read it.

gotta empty bump, no time

>>28023741
>"You can kick my ass, I know" you start saying to her "But I can make you go right into the dungeon, remember?" You probably can't if she escapes, wich seems easy for her now, but she also doesn't seem very bright. "So what if instead it's your ass the one that gets hurt?"
>She starts losing her though, ready-to-fight pose
>Her face shows internal conflict
>If you are going to spank her (and idea that seems to be taking over you) either she will have to agree with it, even if reluctactly, or you'll have to figure out how to tie her up again.

>>28023673
this is top unf material I cannot wait for more

>>28023673
>Oh, fuck

Oh, fuck YES

>>28025743
>"Think about it, you don't want to go to the dungeon. you are still young and have your life ahead of you"
>while she was deep in her thoughts. you moved toward the door.
>while facing her. you locked the door from behind you.
>"there the door is locked. its you and me. you cannot fight me I'm bigger and much stronger than you"
>she started to look worried. weighing her options.

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Was wondering how an underarm spanking would be possible with ponies and this came out of it.

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>>28027038
underarm ponies always looks awkward.
I tired many version of it.
and ended up making her hooves goes under the held pony instead of going over it.

>>28027038
I love it

The only thing is that Rainbow Dash looks pretty sadistic. Loving every second of it

Not in character with her for me

But Scoot's butt, unf

>>28027038
KrishnaK is going to flip when he sees that pairing.

Dash's torso looks a tiny bit too long, you might consider sliding the lower half of her body a few millimeters higher.
Both faces are brilliantly expressive...Rainbow's look of wicked satisfaction would have felt out of place and cruel in a parental punishment but it works great for a sister spanking.
Great stuff as always, Sterny.

Okay, I haven't written anything for the last two months but I guess it's time to get back on the horse or get the horse back over my lap? Is that the right colloquialism?

3 options; what do you horsespankers feel like reading?
>A)
A judicial spanking, from the POV of a Royal Guard stallion administering a punishment to a criminal for the first time. All OC.

>B)
An EqG parental spanking starring Sci-Twi. She hasn't gotten enough attention yet. This is the only option that incorporates the thread theme of bedrooms.

>C)
A comedy of errors story featuring Apple Bloom and her dancer friend...I forget his name. I'll remember it by the time I write the story.

>>28027301
How did that go again?

B, B and B! I'm a sucker for bedrooms

>>28027038
That pic is pure unf and while in the air the whole underarm thing seems to work out

>>28027301
C. CCCCCCCC

Appletaps is life

>>28023673
Pinkie story - part 4 Thread 32

>You weren’t planning on this happening.
>How long did these things take for her family?
>With a hairbrush?
>WHAT?

>Screw it, you’re going to try reasoning with her

>”Pinkie, sweetie, why do you think that?”

>ironic
>she’s the one being spanked
>but you’re the one basically begging for it to be over
>She cries some more
>wipes her face on the couch
>thing is covered in tears
>her butt is light red, too
>she’s been spanked plenty, right?
>Right?

>”I alm-most burned the house down… a-again… uhhhuuhuhhh… we coulda been on the street c-cuz of me…”

>so that’s it, then
>You just haven’t done it hard enough
>she thinks she just deserves more
>this is crazy
>horrible

>You can’t believe it, but you have to keep going
>You sigh, try to calm your fast beating heart
>mentally brace yourself
>after all of this, you are going to have a talk with her
>a REAL talk
>God, this poor pony

>”Ok, Pinkie. I’m gonna keep going, ok?”

>Pinkie Pie shivers on your lap
>she nods obediently
>”O-ok… yes, Anooon”

>no time to sit and think
>you have a job you promised her you would do
>You raise your hoof, and spank her again

>You get back to the rhythm, and pretty soon she’s sobbing all over again
>her posterior is heating up
>and even though she’s doing her best
>she still sometimes just has to shuffle her hooves
>but she never moves her flanks
>makes sure that they’re always in the same place
>ready for the next swat
>her butt has to be on fire
>It sure looks that way

>>28027571
Pinkie story - part 5 Thread 32

>Your hoof is starting to burn, too
>You think a morbid thought
>No wonder her dad used a hairbrush instead
>but you can’t even imagine how much that thing would hurt the sweet pony on your lap

>Pinkie lifts her head when you spank her on the bottom part of her butt
>cries out loudly, freely
>Her puffy hair is getting in her face
>tears are getting it wet
>you honestly don’t know if you should stop now or not

>You don’t have a clock
>But you guess it’s been a couple of minutes
>does that count as a long time?
>Her bottom is getting redder
>you don’t know
>you honestly wish Pinkie gave you a time amount
>so you could do half of that
>without that fucking hairbrush

>your mind keeps going back to that brush
>but it’s only now that you are starting to realize something
>Pinkie, bless her heart, is probably used to a spanking from THAT thing
>not from your measly little hoof
>and even though she’s crying, she’s still in control of herself
>And she’s a pretty loud and noisy pony to begin with

>Oh crap.
>It’s no wonder she doesn’t feel like it’s enough.
>But what that means for you is…

>No, you won’t do that
>No hairbrush
>But you have an idea
>And it’s still not one you like.

>You need to lay down the law, and go full at it
>Or she’ll never feel ok with what you’re giving her

>You take a deep breath and aim your hoof
>Then, you begin spanking much faster
>SMACK, SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK!

>”Uhhuhh, OWW! Ouch, oowww, ow ow ow! OW!”

>Pinkie’s cries suddenly get louder
>Less sniffly, more bawly
>Your hoof leaves some little red prints on her tush
>They make you wince, and your stomach feels bad
>But she doesn’t move
>even though her hooves are twitching and the rest of her body is so tense
>the now blubbering pony still stays there, across your lap
>taking the punishment she (thinks) deserves

>And the beat goes on and on

>>28027650
>No, you won’t do that
>No hairbrush
Aww shame :(
But still is really good so far. I'm enjoying this

>>28027038
Ponies have genitals.
http://i.imgur.com/fjCCxKo.png
http://i.imgur.com/IR7Z8Vc.png

>>28027571
whats the color of anon in this story.
I don't like the green guy's color on a pony.

>>28027853
nice edits

>>28027853
Horse is not for s-loljk

Empty ass bump

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>>28021866
I believe it was KK who first pointed out that image.

>>28027301
A only if it's F/m or F/M.

B or C otherwise.

>>28027571
You're doing great so far.

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short spanking story, Twilight/Spike

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/20623254/

>>28026634
>"come on we can do it the easy way or the hard way"
>both you and her stared at each other in a stand off.
>the tension raises in the atmosphere.
>you made the first move by walking toward her.
>:I chose the Hard way" she yelled!
>she rushed toward you, and jumped kick you.
>blocked her attack got knocked on the ground.
>she quickly ran pass you toward the door.
>she tried to opened it but it was lucked.
>you smirked. "I told you there is no escape."
>she swiftly ran toward the window.
>it was high up she had to jump on a box to reach it.
>she jumped off the box toward the window. she barely reached it. and start climbing her way out.
>you were too far away to reach her.
>the window was jammed and wasn't fully opened.
>her butt got stuck on while climbing out. her upper body made it through but her rump was still stuck inside.
>you laughed at her. "look at you , you cannot do anything right can you."
>you stood right behind her. the window was at your eye level . it wasn't that high for you but it was high enough for her.
>she stopped struggling and wiggling around. knowing that her flank fell completely at your mercy.

>>28029301
>stuck in window setup

This. This is my fucking fetish.

I like it so far.

>>28029301
Lift her tail and admire the small pussy and ponut

>>28029333
>>28029333
Back in the mid-90's sometime I got a hooker stuck in a small bathroom window.
No spanking occurred but I'm not saying it didn't cross my mind...

>>28029546
this guy gets it

>>28027650
last update before bed, good night thread

Pinkie story - part 6 Thread 32

>You force yourself to just stick with it
>follow through with every spank
>Your hoof stings and is turning red, too
>but it’s nothing compared to how Pinkie’s backside looks
>your spanks are now painting temporary white hoofprints that fade back into red
>like pressing against a sunburn

>then she kicks, again
>just a single time
>but she reacts in the same way as before
>choking and crying
>”Ssorry! Sorry, ahoww, I’m sorry…”

>You ignore that
>you can’t tell her right now, exactly
>but you don’t care if she kicks
>struggles
>you won’t punish her worse for something like that

>The clock keeps ticking on
>and you don’t think you can take much more of this
>not anymore than she can
>You are spanking her seriously, no holds barred
>disregarding the stinging in your own hoof
>and now, Pinkie is howling
>crying without trying to keep herself calm or quiet at all
>her mouth is gaping open
>tears are turning her face red, too

>”BWAAAAHH! OWWOWOWOWOWOW!!”

>that’s when she starts to squirm anyway
>under your spanks, she begins to move her butt
>not much, but despite all of her best tries, she can’t help it anymore
>you don’t think she even knows that she’s doing it
>Because, well, she’s still doing it
>and that makes your heart shatter
>knowing she's in that much pain right now
>it's just...

>That’s it. Enough.
>You spank her a few more times, and stop

>>28029546
>she gasped and said " hey what do you think you are doing you perv"
>"I can't help it seeing your delicious delicate part presented in front of me.
>she blushed and crossed her legs trying to block the view.
>"no stop that"
>you spread her pussy and took a closer look.
>she clenched her butt. making her pussy look like as if it was winking.
>"oh look at that. are you inviting me in ?"
>"no you stupid perverted human, man. stop it! its not funn .. EEeeP!
>she shrieked and froze in shock when you started licking her pussy.
>she felt electricity moving inside her whole body.
>"Oh my Celestia what are you doing." she started kicking you."
>you grabbed her legs. then spread them and pin them against the wall.
>you penetrated her pussy with your tongue and licked deep inside.
>a heat wave struck her as she was panting.
>her body was enjoying it. but her brain are telling her to stay focus and fight it.
>she tried to pull herself out of the window but couldn't do it .
>the only way out for her is going back inside.but his face are stuffed at her crotch.

>>28030146
More!!!

>>28030133
This was intense. Poor ponies.

Thanks a lot for the comments.

>>28027074
Nice pic, and that final pose you came up with is great. Poor earth ponies have to be efficient. Magic and flight give way more freedom.

>>28027077
Yeah it may be exagerated, but it was fun to draw.
Like >>28027301 said it's more a "sister spanking" than a parental one. I imagine them coming to know each other enough to be angry at each other in a way they wouldn't be with any other pony, or something like that.

>>28027301
Does the "for the first time" in A) refer to the guard doing the punishing or the criminal getting punished? My vote may depend on that.

>>28030133
>>28030146
Loving how full of content this thread is already.

>>28028743
>A only if it's F/m or F/M.
Sorry, I'm planning on M/F for this one.

>>28031497
>"for the first time"...refer to?
The Guard stallion, recently assigned to the unit that carries out sentences, is tasked with administering a spanking for the first time. The story would follow his POV.

>>28027301
B sounds pretty good

>>28031730
M/F will be quite fine but B or C sound better in that case.

>>28030146
A few light slaps should stop her efforts to fight

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That's a Whuppin'

>>28032597
Daily activity for Rarara

>>28033152
Can't get enough of applejack whoopins

>>28033152
>>28033285
AJ whuppins are the best, she's adorable when she cries

>>28033152
This pic is hotter than it has any right to be

>>28030146
I love the way this story is moving. One anon is trying to push the plot toward the boxes , another anon wants more fight and psychological submission .
Then this happen he sexually assaulted her.
===

One other thing. If you want something to happen , then do it move the plot don't just hint at it hoping anther person would catch on.
Example
>>28023553
>walking back to those crates where she'd gotten stuck
You only hinted on what's gonna happen next, it seems to me that you wanted that plot to happen as you did hint at it more than once. but you didn't setup that situation for others.
But I do like how open ended you left your part of the story.


>>28032829
>>28029546
Write it, don't suggest it.
At least write One or 2 lines. that would help get things moving again.

you could have gone with :
>you life her tail and admire the small pussy and ponut
or
>You gave her a light slap on her flank. to stop her effort to fight.
something like that so others can work with it.

>>28030146
>you take a break long enough to say, "are you ready for your punishment now?"
>she squirms in the window, trying to get away, but she's helpless
>she waits a bit, you breathing on her slit

>finally, she cries and answers "Please, please just get it over with!"

>>28034863
>rocking horse bondage
>paddles OC

Omfg my dick

>>28034863
I love it when i find a new fetish

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its for anon's Pinkie story.
It is the moment that pinkie got got into anon's lap for the first time.

tried many version trying to capture the Spanker's point of view.
so I had to do a cut out of his body. that way I could fit all her body without doing a weird Field of view.

what do you think ?

>>28034668
>you dive back between her legs, licking furiously her delicate parts
>she cried in shock and ecstasy, your tongue ravaging the virgin hole and making it drool sweet juices
>you worked fast and hard, penetrating her love hole with your tongue, licking and pushing at her urethra and sucking the small, winking clit
>suddenly you felt a gush of warm liquid flooding your mouth and face, you pressed your face against the snatch and licked every droplet from the squirting mare
>she was tired, panting and limply hanging from the trap

>>28035813
>you pulled her out of the window.
>She was a little tired and horny to fight back.
>you held her in your arms and walked toward the door.
>she was still panting , and had a distraced dazed look on her face.
>you unlocked the door and went upstairs toward a staff room.
>as you were climbing the stairs. she said
>"hey where are you taking me."

>>28035647
That's very cute

>>28036002
"The basement is not the perfect place for a spanking, don't you think?"
>she looked at you mortified
>"B-But you already punished me, y-you pervert! You touched me and now you want to spank me too?!"
>you looked down at the scared mare
"Yes."
>she started to fight back again, wiggling her butt and trying to break your grasp, but you were too big for her
>you moved the hand that supported her butt between her buttcheeks
>she froze as she felt your finger pressing hard against her butthole
"Don't even try to escape, or I'll push it. Deep."
>feeling the cheeks burning, she stopped wiggling
>she never tried anything with THAT hole...
>to be honest, it was the first time when a different creature touched her under the tail

>>28036120
threatening anal penetration
unf my dick

Lunch was special that day at Sweet Apple Acres, Apple Bloom had prepared it all by herself for the first time.
"Thish shoup ish great!" congratulated Applejack with her mouth still full "Wha'chur shecret?!
"It's a secret, so don't tell anybody..." whispered Apple Bloom who hadn't eaten yet to better apreciate the others' reactions "I used Granny's Smith secret ingredient!"
Applejack stopped munching and for a moment went pale while staring into nothing, she then looked at Big Mac and Granny Smith who had eaten their fair share already. It was too late.

Several hours later, Apple Bloom was laying over a fence outside, getting both her buttocks kicked simultaneously by Applejack's back legs with almost no pause.
Applebloom bawled loudly, wishing she had asked what a laxative does instead of wanting the lunch to be as much of a surprise as possible.

>>28036738
>laying over a fence outside, getting both her buttocks kicked simultaneously
so, she basically tried to kill her sister

>>28036738
Wut the fack

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>>28036792
By fence meant these things btw. Not sure if that's the correct name.

>>28036842
>getting both her buttocks kicked simultaneously
>getting kicked simultaneously
>getting kicked
>by a horse
broken bones and deep bruises are not fun

>>28036738
The buildup was hilarious, but I can't get past the kicking

Unless Bloom has buns of steel

>>28036899
>>28036929
I'm confident Applejack knows how to control her own strenght. She's both an earth pony and a professional apple bucker.

>>28036120
>you opened the door and throw her on the bed.
>Pomf!
>she laid with her blushed face facing the ground but her eyes moved upward to face you.
>Damn she is cute, you thought to yourself.
>Take off this ridiculous black hoodie.
(note : she was suppose to be wearing full black suit just like future twilight did. but it seems the other writers forgot about it)
>"why human?"
>call me master anon. and don't question my orders.
>she pouted and complied. she undress herself.
>it was cute sight to watch a pony struggling to undress herself without hands.
>she took a bite of her sleeve and pulled one of her forelegs out of it. then did the same with the other one.
>she then leaned forward and stepped on the hoodie with her back leg end pushed herself out of it.
>her Yellow golden mane got messy and she started to straighten it up.
>"ok then now lay on your belly"
>she laid there and looked back at you "like this ?"
>"yes, now raise your flank."
>she blushed again "m my what ?"
>"you heard me . your Butt"
>"b but why ?"
>"So I can spank you, and what did I tell you about questioning my orders "
>she arched her back raising her flank up.
>"raise it further up"
>she turned her face away from you. and supported her self with her back legs.
>her upper body was down while her bottom was up.
>she was covering her genitals with her tail.
>"your tail is in the way, move it"
>"what!. no that's embarrassing"
>"says the pony who were presenting herself in the window"
>"no that's different . there I was stuck and it was out of my hooves. but now if I do that . Its like I am submitting to you."
>"that's the whole point. move it or I will force you to and go harder on your butt."
>"she stuffed her face in the pillow, and gave a cute sqeek as she was moving her tail away."
>

>>28036738
Ok, let's try this again:
-----------
Lunch was special that day at Sweet Apple Acres, Apple Bloom had prepared it all by herself for the first time.
"Thish shoup ish great!" congratulated Applejack with her mouth still full "Wha'chur shecret?!
"It's a secret, so don't tell anybody..." whispered Apple Bloom who hadn't eaten yet to better apreciate the others' reactions "I used Granny's Smith secret ingredient!"
Applejack stopped munching and for a moment went pale while staring into nothing, she then looked at Big Mac and Granny Smith who had eaten their fair share already. It was too late.

Several hours later, Apple Bloom was laying over the kitchen's table while Applejack repeteadly smashed her tush with the very wooden spoon she had used for the soup.
Applebloom bawled loudly, wishing she had asked what a laxative does instead of wanting the lunch to be as much of a surprise as possible.

>>28036953
>the little mare presented her petite parts for the second time
>the small, cute ponut clenched tightly with every strong shiver, the aftermath of a wrecking orgasm she's just achieved
>the thin slit kept opening, revealing the flushed insides and the tiny love button
>suddenly she yelped and squirted on the floor
"You know it will be 10 more spanks?"
>the poor mare panicked
>"P-Please, no! I won't do that again, I'll clean, please d-don't spank me! I s-swear I learned my lesson!"
>her voice was filled with fear and you felt a pang of guilt in your heart
>you planned to give her spanking of her life, but maybe it would be way too much for her
>after all, she is much smaller than you and you're not really a type of person to hurt other people... or ponies
>and, well, you've just molested her
>you sat down on the bed next to her
>she looked at you with a mix of confusion and fear
>"W-What are you doing? I thought you w-wanted to... spank me..."
>without a word you picked up the light mare and sat her down on your lap, so you were facing each other
>she tensed as you touched her, but didn't fight back
"I want to spank you and I will. But before that I want you to tell me why you are here and if you really wants to ruin my life. The way I'm going to spank you depends on your answers. Now I'm listening"

>>28037012
That's better! I like the touch of using the same spoon as the one she used to make the soup, that's hot

Also, several hours! Poor Bloom. :(

but my dick tho

>>28037237
>you said that while petting her head.
>she was still a bit horny and confused.
>she felt the warmth of your body. while your hand was on her head.
>she felt a bit safe and she calmed down.
>while still facing down. she raised her eyes to make an eye contact with you.
>'wow his body is warm. I didn't know human can be strong and yet gentle at the... what Am I thinking. focus focus.'
>"well I'll tell you the truth."
>"I work as a workshop assistance. Me and my boss travel around carrying our business from town to town and we made it here. Finding a steady job here in the city is hard. I don't like working under my boss. she always boss me around doing underpaid work. but I needed the money to maybe start my own business. "
>you look at her with a bored unamused look.
>"what does that have to do with you ruining my business ?
>"I'll get to that. yesterday the mail-pony mixed up my mail and gave me this litter by mistake. it was suppose to go to a mercenary . offering her a job to sabotage your business.
>"The letter I found with you at the basement ?"
>"yes. it seems you were ruining the local medical company's business with your off world medicine ."
>"I see. So you thought you can come here. pretend to be the mercenary and do her dirty work ?"
>"um yes.. I mean noo"
>"You think you can get away with it ?" you wanted to be a bad pony. then I should treat you as such."
>"um.. no but.."
>"no buts"
>"you throw her back at the bed. you pulled her tail raising up her butt."
Smack!
>owe
>"you wanted to be a criminal eh!"
Smack!
>"ruining my business eh!
Smack Smack!
>owe
>you were smacking her butt with your open hand.
>your hand can barely reach both her buttcheeks. you couldn't cover all the spankable area of her delicious bubbly butt.
>"Destroying my creates eh!
smack! Smack! Smack!
>you alternate between her butt cheeks. given her 3 smacks on the right side with your palm you switch to her left cheeks.
Smack ! Smack! Smack!

>>28037664
I think this filly needs a little more than a hand to learn this lesson
If you know'm sayin

>>28037664
>poor mare felt like she was a little filly again
>every spank left a stinging mark, making her wiggle the red butt around
> suddenly she received a firm smack that collided with her slit and ponut
>she's never experienced such a strong feeling, a mix of blinding pain and ravaging pleasure that made her body collapse on the bed
>poor girl wailed and you froze in fright as you noticed your horrible mistake
> you quickly picked her up and started to rock her in your arms, petting her mane and massaging the stinging genitals
>"Ow ow ow! P-please don't do it a-again!"

>>28038053
This is getting really hot real quick

>>28038053
ouch... poor girl

>>28037543
"Several hours" was meant to imply that the others had to deal with the effects of the "secret ingredient" first.

>>28039023
oh, lol im a ratard

Apple Bloom was probably waiting in the corner for a long time while that was going on. Hnng

>>28035647
this is super cute! the cut off legs look kind of weird, but Pinkie looks adorasexy. love her little hoof grabbing the couch., that detail is cute.

Poor Ponk.

>>28038053
>Your hand moved while massaging her butt cheek toward her genitals.
>an electric jolt ran throw her body as you touched her most sensitive part.
>her thighs were twitching uncontrollably.
>her delicate part were winking
>her flower was closing tighly
>she completely absorbed in the sensation.
>her eyes went blank.
>she let out a delightful moan
Hah mnnm
>but whats this. Her own voice snapped her out of this.
>'~did I just moan? oh no this is so embarrassing'
>her face completely flushed out. she turn away covering her face.
>you stopped and looked at your hand.
>it was dripping wet.
>'man what a slut. she is completely enjoying this.
>you noticed that you have a full raging throbbing boner
>'~well I can't just let her have all the fun can I'

>>28039137
yea now that i look at it. I didn't layer the couch properly.

>>28039189
*unzips dick*

Just went through Zad's Worst Deal Ever ( http://pastebin.com/aQafEb7f ) and I'm loving it so far. I'm not normally a fan of intense spankings, and this is full of descriptive imagery, but damn... It just works with the Apples. I expected Mac's punishment to resume for taking the fall aswell, but I'm glad it didn't. And maintenance spankings? Anyone who read my first few things or these threads know I'm a fan of maintenance spankings.

Speaking of relation to those, started writing something else a couple days ago. Candy Mane (Babs' mother for those who aren't familiar with my headcacon in the threads) and Apple Bloom, like Sneaking and Shrieking. However, there's a few differences.

I'll post the first part shortly, but bear (bare!) in mind it's unfinished so far.

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Confessions of a School-Aged Farm Filly

Part 1/x

Apple Bloom bid her cousin a sad 'see ya later’ as she marched down the hall of Babs’ home, trying to calm her breathing. Her vision was swaying as her head swam. Her skin was a million degrees beneath her pajamas. Oh, no, oh, no…

She entered Babs’ bedroom, hearing each and every hoof-fall of Candy Mane as she followed her down the hall and inside. Candy closed the door, eyebrow raised.

“You going to tell me what's wrong?” Candy asked, moving to sit on the bed and patting it invitingly. “I promise I'll help however I can, sweetheart.”

Apple Bloom couldn't look her older cousin in the eye. Her stomach churned. She wanted to be anywhere but here, but there was nothing she could do. She already decided on that, after all. Apple Bloom didn't want this on her mind anymore. But she was terrified.

“Apple Bloom?” Candy prompted her. “Come on, speak up. We're here, now, so out with it. What's wrong?” she asked, not unkindly.

“Ah… Ah… aahh, shucks, C-Candy…” she stuttered, sitting down on the floor instead and covering her face. “A-Ah m-m-messed up… m-messed up b-bad…”

She couldn't see Candy's face, but there was a stretch of silence. Apple Bloom could hear her leaning forward intently, perhaps deciding on how to approach the situation.

“How did you mess up? You've got to tell me what happened, honey. Is it serious? Maybe whatever it is can be fixed.”

“C-Candy, Ah… Ah did sommat real mean!” she blurted out, hating herself.

More silence. Apple Bloom closed her eyes hard against her forehooves, willing herself not to cry; easier said than done. Her head still pounded and swayed.

“Really mean?” Candy said at last, seeking clarification. “Did you get angry or upset and say something to Babs, or anypony else? Did you try apologizing?”

“N-naw, Candy, it a-ain’t that, Ah…” Apple Bloom screwed up her face behind the hooves.

>>28039971
Part 2/x

“Apple Bloom, come over and don't hide, sweetheart. I can't understand you if you're talking into your hooves like that…”

Apple Bloom rose up and took a hesitant step forward, her eyes staring at the carpet. She chewed her lip, her limbs shaking hard. It would've been way easier to just sit back down and curl up to never be seen again.

“A-Ah did sommat to A-Applejack,” she mumbled ashamedly, sinking back onto her butt.

“Sweetheart, this sounds like something you've got to work out with your sister, not me. I can listen and try and tell you what you should do, but if you did something bad to her, just talk to out when you get home.” Candy leaned forward even more and stretched out her hoof, stroking Apple Bloom’s raspberry mane. “You're obviously sorry, so…”

Apple Bloom shuddered at the touch. She had good reason to feel apprehensive to her older cousin's touch. She rubbed her hooves together fretfully.

“A-Ah can't. She can't never know!” Apple Bloom whimpered shamefacedly, her hooves instinctively moving to shield her pajama waistband, but she was able to look into Candy's face, silently trying to convey her conflicting thoughts and intentions.

Candy looked at her for several seconds, her eyes alert as they searched her face. She relaxed back, almost sinking into the mattress, her hooves folded in her lap.

“Is that why we're here?” Candy asked.

Apple Bloom didn't need to ask what she meant by 'that’. Candy was quick on the uptake, a fact Bloom realized with a sniffle.

“A-Ah sorry, Ah just… Ah 'unno w-what t-to d-dooo!”

Candy sighed resignedly. She half rose off the bed and reached out, taking Apple Bloom by the fetlock. With a tug, she pulled the filly to her back hooves. Candy then moved her hooves down to the pajama bottoms and paused.

>>28040050
Ohh, I might know where this is going

Guilt spankings are my fav

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After doing that Dash/Scootaloo picture I wanted to try another mid-air position I've had in my mind for a while. I concluded it isn't very practical.

>>28031730
I vote C. Sounds different to the usual.
I thought the criminal was getting punished for the first time and would be therefore nervous but you do your thing as you see fit.

>>28035647
Very nice. But is this anon a human? I think he's a pony in the story.

>>28040050
I want to know what she did. It can't be that bad, eight?

>>28040482
nope its a pony.
I wanted to draw it from his point of view.
I made him blue cause Green is not a very good color on naked pony.

>>28030133
Will this get continued? I'm curious about the aftermath.
Also very good.

>>28040579
I see. I did think he was wearing trousers because of the blue. Keep it up.

>>28040482
Thunder sure has a great view there

>>28040482
Looks like a piledriver opportunity. Two reasons for KrishnaKarnak to flip.

>>28040050
>Candy sighed resignedly. She half rose off the bed and reached out, taking Apple Bloom by the fetlock. With a tug, she pulled the filly to her back hooves. Candy then moved her hooves down to the pajama bottoms and paused.
M-muh dick... this is gonna get good

Page 8 bump

>>28030133
Pinkie story - part 7 Thread 32

>Pinkie Pie is crying brokenly
>Her butt is an angry, burning red
>she’s sliding her hooves back and forth
>over the couch cushion
>but she suddenly stops
>goes rigid
>and she starts stuttering yet again

>”I’m ss-sorry, I didn’t realize, I-I’ll stop! I won’t mo-ove!”

>Oh god, that’s it
>you aren’t giving her one more spank
>you refuse
>you know what you’re going to do

>You pick her up, lifting around her underside
>Pinkie’s still weeping
>her spanked tail end fiery red
>you lift the plump pony up
>slide her over your lap
>and hug her tight with both arms

>The poor thing hiccups and sobs
>but when she sees you are hugging her, she latches onto you like a filly
>squeezes you hard
>hugging you around your shoulders

>You feel tears in your eyes
>as well as the tears of your wife on your shoulder
>her mane is wet
>the poof in her pretty hair much less than usual
>You rub her back lovingly
>right between her shoulders

>”I’m-m sorryy! Waahahaaa!”

>You feel so sorry for her
>she’s in pain in more ways than one
>your mouth is right next to her ear
>you talk into it

>”Pinkie, sweetie, it’s ok, now! It’s over, shhh, it’s over, I’m done. I’m not mad at you, you’re ok, shhh”
>You pat her back and nuzzle her mane
>The pink pony melts into your hug
>begging for forgiveness
>her rear legs squirm
>probably from the pain in her bottom
>you can feel how hot it is now that it’s touching your lap

>you cringe
>hug Pinkie tighter
>you really did it to her hard
>you are starting to regret ever going through with this

>you wait for Pinkie’s cries to quiet down
>and eventually, they do

>>28041853

Yes. I love Sterny's Thunderlane and Rumble pics, I really do, but they tend to look like wrestling. First one he got kneed in the stomach, ifyou pass over the second one, he then turns him over into a pile-driver.

THUNDERLANE GOES FOR THE COVER.
One! Two! OH MY GAWD HOW DID RUMBLE HAVE THE WHEREWITHAL TO KICK OUT?!

anyways, I'll try to write more later. A good friend passed away so I'll be preoccupied for a bit.

>>28043469
This story gives me a conflicted boner. Good job.

>>28027038

:O I like this one! Expression is a bit severe, but everythingelse looks perfect. Really one of your best sketches!

>>28043639
Sorry to hear that. Be well.

>>28043639
Take your time Krishna, sorry to hear that.

Empty bump nigga

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How about we come up with an oc while we wait for content?
I had this hairstyle in mind for a while, and tought it would be fitting for a "mother" kind of character. Haven't thought much beyond that, things like colors, type of pony, relationships, and other details. Could be the mother/aunt/babysitter of a background pony or another oc, same goes for that filly wich you may or may not ignore.
Throw suggestions and let's see what comes out of it

>>28045846

Definitely looks like a stylist. Maybe a future employer of Babs Seed? Because everything fucking circles around to me because I'm a self obsessed asshole. Or... I try to be!

>>28045956
That's not a bad idea. Even if it IS KK's world. *wink*

I hope we get an ep with Babs soon. We name a whole con after her, I mean fuck

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>>28045846
the pony in the OP image is naughty and needs a mom.

inb4 >shameless push

>>28046620
I want to molest her

>>28046620

Seconding

>>28046641
Top kek

But really tho, maybe this filly does need some "corrective authority"

>>28045956
>Spanking General Shared Universe

>>28046620
Biological or adoptive?

Ideas for a color scheme? (We can try several)

>>28046735
give me another sketch of her.
I will suggest a color scheme for her.

>>28046735
Brunette with a dark blue coat?

>>28046735
you know what .
Come join me here
http://flockmod.com/draw_pony
and lets figure it out

>>28046816
make sure you enter
draw_pony
as the name of the room

>>28046816

Fucking thing don't work on Android, apparently.

Guess I'll write.

>>28046967
its flash so it wont work on mobile "easily"

>tfw no one came

>>28046816
I'm in.
First time visiting that site.
Pl-please be gentle.

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me and sterny experimented with color schemes.
and did came up with these 3 colors.

which one do you think looks best ?

>>28040050
Part 3
“If you think it's going to help, Apple Bloom, we can still talk about it. I mean… if you want me to know, but this is happening now whether you want to open up further or not, you understand me?”

There was a lot of detail in her voice. Something of disappointment, but still affectionate concern. Kindness, but a stern tone meaning her fate was firmly set in stone. But there was also uncertainty.

“I don't know how severe this is,” she admitted, tugging the pajamas carefully down Apple Bloom's legs until they collected into a knot at the floor. “I don't know how severe you need to be punished and I'm not going to go easy just in case, so I'm going to get the brush. Do you want to tell me what you did?”

Apple Bloom hadn't realized she was already crying. Her mouth was parted, sucking on air as she breathed hard to steady herself. Warm tears flowed down her cheeks. She nodded.

Candy took her firmly and lifted her into her lap, holding the younger pony close to her chest. Apple Bloom's pajamas hung off her left leg.

“Then we'll have a talk first.” Her voice carried a hint of exasperation; Candy wasn't going to do anything if the crime wasn't equal to a tanning.

Unfortunately for Apple Bloom, it was.

Apple Bloom shivered harder, feeling her exposed bumcheeks against Candy’s thigh. What would they feel like in fifteen minutes time?

Candy put a hoof to her chin and made her look into her eyes. Apple Bloom gulped, hard against the feeling of the limb. Bloom tried to turn away, but was held steady.

“Alright. You can start from the beginning, Apple Bloom, or summarize it quickly. Then we start.”

Apple Bloom stayed quiet a moment longer, her legs closing together tightly, her tail swirling up to cover her bottom.

“Ah… umm, see, wh-when Ah…” She stopped. Yeah, she needed to summarize it badly.

“Out with it!” Candy commanded, keeping her moving forward.

“A-Ah stole from Applejack!” Bloom exclaimed.

>>28047841
Here is an anonymous poll for it: http://www.strawpoll.me/10892782

I need some pactice with that site, thankfully Woox had a lot of patience.

>>28047926
Voted for the first option

>>28047875
Oooh, stealing? That's a paddlin, AB. A big one.

Loving it so far!

>>28043469
Pinkie story - part 8 Thread 32

>Pinkie Pie finally relaxes a little bit
>You rock the poor mare back and forward
>she doesn’t let go
>you nuzzle her again, wiping tears on her mane as you do
>then, you relax your hold
>let the whimpering pony lean back
>and you give her a wet, deep kiss

>Air sniffs through Pinkie’s runny nose
>she’s definitely surprised
>but she “mmphs” with pleased shock when you plant your lips on hers
>And with another tear spilling down her face
>she closes her eyes and kisses you back

>you keep the tender moment going
>she sometimes has to gasp for air
>her nose is too stuffy
>but she goes right back to kissing you once she gets a breath

>eventually, you force yourself to break the kiss
>you have other business with her that you need to discuss
>desperately
>you never want to do this again

>You start to gently move Pinkie off your lap
>”Ok, Pinkie Pie. Can you just, I dunno, sit next to me? We have to talk.”

>You didn’t want that to sound ominous
>but it did
>Pinkie’s face is still stuffed into your chest
>but you feel her slowly nod her head against you

>”Yes, Anon.”
>She says shakily
>Then, she reluctantly moves off your lap
>Her puffy eyes and face held low
>Nervously
>You realize that Pinkie must somehow think you’re going to scold her more

>She sits down on the couch
>winces
>You feel like slapping yourself, forgetting that sitting down is probably not very comfortable for her now
>”A-Actually, Pinkie, if you would be more comfortable not sitting down, you could…”

>you don’t finish the sentence
>you just point to the floor around you
>inviting her to stand if she wants
>Pinkie Pie hesitates
>looks at the floor and then at you
>and then, she asks, “O-Ok… s-so do you want me to not sit down?”

>>28048746
Pinkie story - part 9 Thread 32

>this time, it’s hard not to groan with frustration
>to her, the only thing that matters is your say so
>what YOU want
>it’s exasperating
>but you control yourself
>”Whatever you think is more comfortable, Pinkie. That’s what I want. Ok?”

>You hope it sinks in
>You don’t want to have to order her to sit down or stand
>Let her make a decision for herself, the poor thing!
>Pinkie nods her head
>”Ok… yes, Anon.”

>and slowly, she gets up
>and stands facing you
>ok, good
>you’re glad you suggested it as an option
>god, her butt must REALLY hurt
>these cushions are pretty soft!

>Then, Pinkie starts talking
>breathing shallow, fast
>she’s bowing her head
>and her back hooves shuffling behind her

>”I’m-m really sorry I kicked so much, Anon. I didn’t mean to do it, I Pinkie Promise! Next time you spank me, I-I’ll stay more still…”

>no
>no more
>you can’t take it anymore
>”No, Pinkie. Just… listen. Listen to me ok?”

>Pinkie’s ears flop down
>she instantly quiets down
>true to herself
>Then her big eyes looking at you attentively
>dropping whatever she was going to say

>You address her directly
>Pinkie Pie, I love you. I love you dearly. And I know you love me, too.”

>Pinkie Pie can’t quite stand still
>her butt is throbbing too much
>but she’s listening
>you lean your head in
>looking at her closely

>”And I know you want to show me that you love me, too. But Pinkie… that doesn’t mean that you always have to do exactly what I say no matter what. It doesn’t mean I can just boss you around. Ok?”

>Pinkie Pie’s face is somewhat predictable
>slowly it turns into a confused expression
>she’s hesitant to speak up
>but she does

>”Oh… b-but I’m your wife, so… doesn’t that mean you’re the boss, though?”

>Fucking shit
>how are you going to get through to her?

I just have to write this one piece at a time. It will get done eventually
goodnight thread

>>28048763
guess the only to get to her head. is to scope to her level.
she thinks husbands should boss around their wives well
to even the odds
you should order her to spank you.
this way she would understand that marriage is two seats ride on the roller coaster of life.

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>>28045846
>>28046620
Looks like we are heading somewhere.
Here is some practice. I'll color it another day after her color scheme is decided. We also still have to decide the name, cutie mark, personality, backstory and etc. Don't be shy to throw ideas.

For now, good night.

Also I made a gallery in Woox's archive.
Here you can comment in any picture individually:
http://mlpgeneral.com/spanking_gallery/thumbnails.php?album=22

>>28048983
cute.
I love the filly's confused expression. and as usual your style of drawing angry/sternly looking mares are the best.

by the look of this drawing. she may fit as a new nanny.

Haven't made much progress on my current fic (not much private time for writing recently); working on a one-shot story in the meantime. Anyone want to suggest a name for an upper-class mare OC?

>>28048763
Imagine if to top it all some ponies outside heard what was going on and called the cops, wanting Anon behind bars for domestic abuse.

>>28049106
High Brow?
Topsy Shoes?
Lemas Cara?

>>28049106
Upper Crust

from somewhere but cannot remember where
>>28048778
Take your time

>>28048972
And much like MLP and /mlp/, the ride never ends.

>>28048983
cyoote

>>28039189
>*But I cant just do it, can I . teasing and touching is one thing. but actually penetrate her is different matter*
>You took a look at her genitals.
>Her pussy was dripping wet, her love juice was streaming on her thighs . all the way to the bad sheets forming a dark wet spot there.
>looking at that turned you on even more.
>your throbbing massive boner was demanding your attention.
>it was slowly taking control over your body.
>your crotch was clenching involuntary .
>your hip started moving also making your dick grind against your pants.
>she got a bit worried pondering why your motionless.
>she turned around . and saw you
>She immediately know what are you about to do
>that thought alone made her even more hornier.
>she was also fighting the urge ,and was on the verge of losing it.
>she bit her lips , and rubbed her thighs together.
>she slowly moved her eyes checking you out , she moved slowly from your upper body checking and internally admiring your physique
>then her eyes got stuck and locked on your boner.
>seeing how you were thrusting your hips and grinding was the last straw.
>she lost the battle, her lust and her desire won.
>with a quick motion she stood up. and pushed you.
>you fell of the bed. you back body fell on the floor while your butt barely touching the bed .
>before you got up she sat down on your chest facing your feet
>it was uncomfortable pos , but you were more focused on what she is doing.
>she unzipped you pants . with her hooves she pulled your pants down with your underwear
>she looked at your erect penis
>'so this is how human penis looks like. its kinda small compared to stallion's but it looks much cleaner'

>>28050114

>>28050674
I love it when Anon meets pony stories have the pony react to the human's peepee

"It's so different" hng my dick

>>28050674
"Small?"
>after a short tumbling on the bed, Scarled Mane found herself pinned under your tight grasp
>her head on the white bedshhets, her butt up and uncovered
>smack! smack! smack!
>"OooOoow!"
"It's very unkind to tell something like that to the stallion!"
>smack!
>four furious flaps fwooshed on her fanny
>the stinging sensation flooded her already punished butt, making her squeal in discomfort
>she didn't have too much time to protest as you quickly pressed your rod against her tiny butthole
>you felt her shudder and gasp
>"N-Noo! Please, anything but there! P-Please, I beg you!"
>you actually didn't want to do it in THAT hole
>well, you kind of wanted, but you also knew it would be very painful for her, and you are not a monster
>but some teasing would be fun, right?
"Did you learn your lesson?"
>"Yes! Yes! Please, I am a good pony, I've just a mistake!"
>smack!
>"Oooow!"
"A very serious mistake. You know it could end with years in dungeon?"
>she squirmed as you pressed your penis harder against the tight hole
>"Aah! Yes! I won't do it again! Please, no!"
>you stopped the fake attempt of butt deflowering
"Every day for the next two weeks you'll come here to my pharmacy and I'll give you a proper spanking on your naked naughty butt., just to make sure you won't try to ruin someone's life again. You skip one day, then I go to the guard post with this letter."
>she froze and looked at you with shock
>"T-Two weeks of spanking?! You can't do this! I-"
>smack!
"Two weeks of spanking or two years in dungeon, your choice"
>she looked at you with tears in her beautiful eyes
>then, she nodded and slumped down on the bed
>"Okay, I'll do it..."
>you gently turned the sad mare on her back and leaned down
"If you're a good filly, then we can skip a day or two... or maybe I'll even give you a gift..."
>you pressed your lips against hers, the look of sadness and confusion turned into a surprise and happines

>>28051595
L-lewd

>>28051595
>"Two weeks of spanking or two years in dungeon, your choice"
Thats so deliciously cruel

Oh boy
https://derpibooru.org/1215470

>>28051595
>after you kissed her.
>you petted her head.
>she closed her eyes having a satisfied look on her face while feeling your hand over her head.
"you know what. I could use an assistance here in the pharmacy."
>her eyes brightened up. looking at you with kinda glee.
"really are you offering me a job. after all I did ?"
"yes. I think you learned your lesson. you are a good pony at heart. and I think you just made a bad desigion."
>she happily jumps into your at you. wrapped her hooves around you hugging you.
>"Thank You!" she said that with tears in her eyes.
>you are the kinda of person that usually suppress your feelings.
>but that hug melted your heart.
>it was a very warm feelings. you kinda wasn't prepared for that kind of feelings.
>it made you feel good for yourself. and happy in the inside.
>you enjoyed this moment for a bit then.

"so I take that as a yes?"
"Of coarse "
"but I have few conditions. "
"I'll do anything"
"ok first this is gonna be a full time job. so you have to quit your old one"
>she smiled and nodded.
"second ...
"third ..
>you talked about job related things. her and explaining to her the nature of a pharmacy assistance.
"but mr.anon ..If I have a problem "
"what it is ?"
"My boss is kinda letting me stay in the store's wagon. If I quite my old job I wont have a place to live"
>~~well that would kinda a problem. I can't let her be with her old boss. she was kinda unhappy with her. and I cannot let her come with me through the portal to my home on Earth.
Celestia forbid me from doing that. and she might throw me in a dungeon... heh now I'm thinking like this pony. wait a got it ~~
"well you can stay here. and make this your home"
"really but I don't want to be a bother. you offering me a job is good enough."
"no it wont bother me. having someone look over the store, while its close is an added bonus. but we kinda need to modify the restroom to add a shower and what ever you pony need."
"I don't know how to thank you Anon"

>>28053109
Well this turned directions real quick

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>>28047841
>>28047926
Looks like the middle one is winning.
Any suggestions for a name? Wich could be related to her profession and/or cutie mark? Some people have suggested her being a stylist and babysitter.

>>28053589
>dat filename

>>28053109
>>28053563
yea.
what about anon's boner and that weekly spanking?

>>28053589
Oak Swirl?

>>28053109
>"I don't know how to thank you Anon"
"well you can start by doing something to my"
>you looked down pointing at her crotch. as she was literally sitting on top of your boner.
>she blushed and immediately let go of her hold and jumped back on the bed.
>she was caught up with the moment when she was hugging you, and totally forgot that your half naked.
>as she landed on the bed. she crossed her legs together. trying to hide her winking pussy.
>the sight of your penis instantly turned her back on.
>the Surge of desire over heated her body. she starting to breath heavily looking at it.
>you stood up and completely presented it to her.
>her eyes were completely locked on the price.
"Well ... ?"
>she gave you a shy nod.
>you slowly approached her with your weapon .
>she gazed upon it with dreamy eyes.
>she lean forward toward it and licked it.
>her tongue was large enough to covor most of your dick.
>licking it , moving from the left side of base of your dick . moving upward in swirly motion until she reached the tip. all with one sweep.
>your dick twitched from the sensation.
>the toes of your feet were spreading uncontrollably with from that sensation.
>after few 3 long licks she kissed the tip.
>that made you melt. you lost your equilibrium.
>you had to sit down.
>you laid down on the bed.
>She sat on you.
>she this time she pouted her lips.
>and slowly start sucking your dick.
>your dick was completely inside her mouth.
>she reached the base of your dick.
>her nose blow hot air on your testicles as she was exhaling.
>then she started to suck hard, while she was slowly pulling up.
>the suction was hard.
>your left feet was twitching . you felt a good tingling feeling from inside your pelvis.
>she moved up until your dick was out of her mouth.
>the sensation was strong. you are recuperated with that feeling.
>but she didn't give you much time for it as she repeated what she just did.
>and started sucking you again and again.

>>28053589
Cutie mark? Hairbrush.

I'm boring.

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>>28053589
Don't over think it.
if you want name just pick one
go with Ethel coat.
or anything similar.
the name of the filly in your drawing is Dizzy Cream.
Dizzy was kinda random i attached cream as her 2nd name cause of her creamy colors.
I just made sure there wasn't any other oc with similar name to her when I created her.

Cutie mark can be anything.
Look at the cutie mark I used when I created pacific glow's mom.
what does her cutie mark means. I have no idea but its there and it doesn't seem to bother anyone.

>>28054887
No Anon, you are brilliant. A hairbrush fits both a hair stylist and a babysitter that has to take drastic measures.

>>28055401

Plus Oak Swirl fits both a hairbrush cutie mark (the oak can swirl in a wood knot) and the mane stylist thing.

>>28055489
That's true

page 7 bump

so many shitpost threads, fuck

>>28056421
or you could say this thread is kinda dying in comparison of the one before this.
there are hardly any new content just some filler stuff.
guess its just summer midweek thing.

>>28056473
most threads have a lull in activity. I think this is just one of those times. Besides, people have been busy, too

We've had three ongoing stories/greens, new artwork, and now we're making a new OC. Not bad considering we just had a good thread before this

>>28056592
its sad that we are a very small group of people.

Its kinda rare these days to find people that interested in my little pony, spanking and visit /mlp/ at the same time.
even if we find such a person. getting them out of lurk mode is also a challenge.

Well, I can post some summaries from over in the forum...I am working on these now that I have recovered.

As always, aside from the first one, anyone is free to take these and use them:

1) Button Mash's investigation into the spanking of Sweetie Belle. A comedy that was almost done being edited...it's mostly posted on this site if anyone wants to mess with it or post sequels.

2) Twilight and Velvet: Twilight is caught by Celestia in a public place doing dark, forbidden magic. That is, Involving the Neighcronomicon dark. Celestia drags Twilight before the court, only to be reminded that as a minor, Twilight's parents are considered responsible for her actions. Thus, Both Twilight and Velvet find themselves publicly spanked by Celestia.

3) Undercover Blues Pt 3: Chrysalis, finally tiring of being spanked incessantly by the enchanted brush, decides to sneak back into the Crystal Empire, this time disguised as Cadance, merely to beg the Princess of Heart to remove the spell. However, upon her infiltration, she sees Flurry Heart playing with her toys...on a school day. Realizing the opportunity for revenge, she gives Flurry the biggest paddling the little filly has ever had.

>>28056816

4) Undercover Blues Pt 4: A direct sequel of the first, Cadance delivers another spanking to Chrysalis, forcing her into Flurry's form for the duration before giving her over to Shining armor for a public (I never decided upon the implement Shining would use. I even considered NSFW style punishments for a time). After that, Chrysalis would be dragged back to the hive by Cadance, threatened to be paddled in public there as well, only to run afoul of the brush again...ecret Twist ending abounds.

5) Bonus Blues: Chrysalis, having developed a spanking fetish from the incessant paddling of her bottom, now takes to impersonating a hatchling or filly in order to get her fix. I dunno who the spanker would be for this...I toyed with the idea of making it a Colt's Club style open-ended story. That is, anyone being free to write Chrysalis getting her fix in a number of ways.

6) Unknown stories involving some of my own Pony OC's. Simply not sure if I am comfortable revealing them yet, though Woox has me tempted with his mischievous dream spirit's tale, as one of my own OC fillies is a dreamweaver.

>>28048763
Pinkie story - part 10 Thread 32

>”Oh, well I uhh… ok, Pinkie. Let me put things this way. There’s a difference between a boss, and a boss who loves you. And even though I love you...”
>you are desperately hoping what you say makes sense
>”Sometimes, Pinkie, I may do things that don’t feel very, well, loving. Because nopony’s perfect, right?”

>Pinkie’s slowly nodding her head
>looks like she’s following
>meanwhile, her back legs are still dancing in place a little
>butt moving side to side
>”R-Right…”

>”Right. And Pinkie Pie, whenever that happens, I want you to be able to tell me when. If I’m ever doing something you don’t like, or treating you in a way that makes you feel bad, I want you to be able to tell me, sweetie! Ok? Because I love you, and if I’m just acting like your boss, then I’m not being a good husband.”

>Pinkie sniffs and snorts through her clogged nose
>she looks at you with those huge, expressive eyes
>and they’re lighting up a little with understanding of what you’re telling her

>”But, but, you are a good husband, Anon!”

>the fact that a pony could say that
>so sincerely
>just after they’d been spanked by said husband as punishment
>it’s kind of hilarious
>in a fucked up way
>you nod, and your eyes do a roll

>”Well, yes, but that doesn’t mean I won’t have my bad days, ok?”

>Pinkie smiles just a little
>blushing
>she looks back at her flank
>makes a pained face

>”Yeah… I guess I understand. I have my bad days, too”

>>28056836
Pinkie story - part 11 Thread 32

>You wince when you see what she’s looking at
>but it turns to a smile
>Finally, she gets it
>at least, it’s a start

>”That’s ok, sweetie. It’s all ok, in the past.”
>you assure her

>This makes Pinkie’s face brighten up
>she stares at the ground
>blushing harder
>”Ok…”

>”So Pinkie, do you promise to let me know? To speak up whenever I’m not acting the way I should, even...”
>you pause
>almost trail off
>but at the last second, you finish
>”even though I’m the boss?”

>long pause
>You hope to Celestia she says yes
>you pray to Celestia she says yes

>When Pinkie Pie slowly nods, you feel overjoyed
>”Uh huh… If that’s what you want, Anon.”

>Alright, now that takes care of one thing
>but there’s still one more thing you need to talk about
>and it’s not going to be pretty

>Sigh
>sigh again
>ok, it’s time to just go out with it
>”And Pinkie… we need to talk about spanking.”

>>28056816
3

33333333333

My penis my penis my penis

Oak Swirl it is then! With a hairbrush cutie mark!

Working in a follow up to >>28053589
Woox, tell me more about Dizzy Cream please. How would she react to a spanking? For the pics I've seen she seems to be very "naughty" at times. Would she turn out to enjoy it or something?

>>28056855
>”And Pinkie… we need to talk about spanking.”

Noooo Don't cut of here ....

--
>>28057061
I haven't flushed out her character yet. so she is totally open to anything.

>Would she turn out to enjoy it.
this kinda feels about right.
but would that make her get an even harder spanking?

>>28056816
3
would there be any other right answer ?

>>28057032
>>28057268

I'm working on all of them, guys...not just one or two. Those are all just previews of what I have in store. They'll all get finished.

Though, like I said, still nervous about having my own OC's shown here.

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>>28057350
>my own OC's shown here.
why can't you be as shameless as me.

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>>28057268
>this kinda feels about right.
Good because I already went ahead with the idea.
I took inspiration from >>28027074

>>28057453

Because I use the OC's elsewhere in a different roleplay, one that has been running for a very long time.

Like, I joined the rp before Luna Eclipsed aired.

>>28057500
I love the expression and the pose on these two.
but the size difference seems a bit off.

Sorry I have not been more active. I still lurk n jerk but my anon posts are way down. Phone is not an ideal way to browse the thread or post. Woox and others have done a great job bumping.

Also have not been motivated to write more pony stories.

Story idea: the nerd congoer from the episode complains about how unrealistic his spanking is, while being spanked.

>>28055401
sweating @ drastic measures

>>28057865
Not gonna lie if the other rp frowns upon spanking it may not be a good idea to make it

https://derpibooru.org/1215833

>>28058894
Hi Pan!

Whoa

Thread is kill rait naw

>>28057500
this is so fucking hot Sterny. Her stretchy position, the way she's shouting up at the sky, uuuuunf

she's probably leaking all over the place

>>28056855
Every time I make progress, I'll bump when thread needs it

Pinkie story - part 11 Thread 32

>There it is
>that word again
>It makes Pinkie’s face instantly drop
>she gasps softly
>gulps
>”Oh. Ok...”

>somehow, you think she thinks you are going to scold her
>talk to her about her moving during the punishment
>you’re gonna set that straight

>”Ok, Pinkie. About what happened tonight… I don’t want to do it ever again.”

>Ok, it’s out
>let’s see how she reacts
>you hope she understands

>Pinkie Pie wipes her runny nose
>she looks just like she did before
>before you spanked her

>”I know, Anon. I, I-I’ll be good, I won’t forget the oven again…”

>Oh, wait
>you should probably rephrase
>poor Pinkie thinks you’re promising her another spanking if she forgets again
>although, you’ll definitely be pissed
>whatever

>”No Pinkie. I mean, I CAN’T do it ever again. Just seeing you cry, knowing you’re in pain. I can’t do it.”

>That should be clear, now
>you wait

>Pinkie Pie stares at you for a minute
>then, she pulls her thinking face
>that adorable expression with her eyes narrow
>eyebrows bent down in thought

>She talks slowly
>like she’s reasoning while she talks
>”But… it’s a punishment. Isn’t it supposed to hurt? I mean, I know I cry, but I’m ok, Anon! It’s just my butt.”

>Only Pinkie Pie could say something like that and sound so innocent
>You sigh with exasperation

>>28060633
>”But… it’s a punishment. Isn’t it supposed to hurt? I mean, I know I cry, but I’m ok, Anon! It’s just my butt.”
Oh Pinkie, never ever change

>>28060759
Pinkie a cute

>>28058573
Yes sometimes I accidentally make the spanker too big and/or the spankee too small. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll fix it later.

Bump

Why u so ded thread?

>>28061678
Because you touch yourself at night.

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>>28063085
If that comic had Cloudy giving a spanking to one of her daughters I would die happy.
The art is so fucking good. It looks official. I wonder if the artist would be allowed to work for the comic after all the porn he/she's made.

I started writing a new story...
and I made it again.. I wrote down about 2K words near 12K characters and I still didn't get to the main part of the story.

it a force of habit . It seems I always like to build the foundation of a huge story arc. instead of diving in the action.
the main event wont make any sense if I stared from the middle and write the main action parts.

I mean I love to write ridiculous over the top situations . so when I do came up with one and set my mind to it.
I always think that I need to build it up, making that situation somehow believable as a story for the reader.

take one of my story of instance : The main scene I wanted was -
>a pony running around while being chased and spanked by a magical paddle.
(actually it was something else way far away but I'm gonna focus on this for now.)
how did I go with it.
I went and started it from the moment she woke up. then went to school. she got in trouble so the teacher decided to spank her. her spanking got interrupted so the teacher enchanted a paddle to spank the little filly and left her there.
then I got to my main scene that I wrote the entire story to get.
To reach that part I wrote like 25K character, building to it.

Not sure if that was redundant or not.
another example of an incomplete story , kinda related to my previous example.
Main even -
>apple jack getting stuck inside a spanking machine that are controlled by a lie detector.
to get to that event I wrote so far 50K characters 10K words. and I still far from reaching my main plot.
I had to cut it and made it into 4 different stories that are all connected.

I need help to decide on something. shall I just skip all that and dive in to main plot with no backstory whats so ever. I mean just throw it in your face. and you have to just accept it as it .
or continue writing these long and somehow redundant back stories that build up to my main plot to give it a bit of meaning so it makes an impact ?

>>28063480
When she told off Limestone earlier in the comic my dick exploded

>>28063480
the artist is an extreme plot worshiper. a spanking scene is not far fetched.

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>>28063480
Limestone got pretty close a few pages back.

>>28063506
You could try coming up with a scene or part of the story that allows some basic exposition and leave details to the imagination.
For example, start the story with a scene that introduces a situation like this one:
>a pony running around while being chased and spanked by a magical paddle.
Have the pony be the narrator or have her meet someone she can tell the basics of the backstory pretty much like you already did:
>she got in trouble so the teacher decided to spank her. her spanking got interrupted so the teacher enchanted a paddle to spank the little filly and left her there
Maybe add some details like what exactly interrupted the teacher.
And then go will with the spanking stuff.

Just an idea.

>>28063506
You can provide some backstory mixed in with the action, or skip to the part where she's in the classroom in trouble

You don't have to start out with the beginning of the day, either. If it isn't relevant to the main point, just cut it out

>>28063560
"Reminder"

There's no way in hell that pencils didn't mean spanking there

>>28063576
>>28063641

yea that could have worked. thanks and I'll keep that in mind in my future writings..

but that could work with simple plot. but having a complicated scene like Ex:
>the disciplinarium Area in my ponyvile's Mechanical nursery story.
its wacky and way out of the place.
I had to explain the sittings.
the situations.
the Why and the how ?
I managed to reach that part in 10K characters. I used news anchor to tell us the story which made it much much shorter from my original plan.
but using a news anchor caused the main part to be shorter and kinda bland from what I originally wanted. maybe it was for the best.

ok I went a bit off track. the thing is I couldn't skip and dive into the main plot with no back story.

Guess its all about the creative writing talents that I somehow lacking.
I love Practical things and use logic more than I should. that kinda conflicts with being imaginative . I don't like leaving stuff open ended or unexplained (and kinda bothers me when I read stuff like that). that's why I always trend to explain stuff (just like I'm doing right now .. )

I will try to follow your advice and drop many parts in the story I'm currently writing.Parts that can be skipped or summarized by a short exposition narrative.

>to give you small preview of small narrative that I would use :
Twilight was summoned by her cutie map to go on new mission. but the location wasn't inside Equestria . instead it was on another dimension. she had to use the Teleport that got her to human world. but this time it wasn't the same universe . it was another one with far more technologically advance society.
[Enter the main plot line]
I guess that could work.

>In full length I went and wrote it down as if it was an actual episode.
Twilight doing a random thing then her cutie mark start glowing. she was happy and dragged starlight glimmer... etc

maybe I will post the full length version with back story ..etc in the forums after I'm done with it.

>>28063926
i was out of space
>In full length I went and wrote it down as if it was an actual episode.
Twilight and spike was visiting a school. she was teaching a class when her cutie mark start glowing. she was happy and took off. she forgot spike there.
she kidnapped starlight glimmer and went to the map room trying to figure out the the location of the summon. they couldn't figure it out when pinkie randomly suggest that it could be in another dimension.
then they traveled to celisita's castle in cantorlot. going though the clues they know how to open the portal.
since the map only chose twilight . she went inside the portal alone.

>this was a short version of how I did write it.
In this short version. I left out many funny comedic elements and dialog. some lewd scenes and awkward misunderstanding scenes... etc

as you can see I tend to drag things building toward the main plot. all of that part are filler and can be cut out. but not all fillers are bad, take a french fries as an example.

>>28063556
someone should write something about Marble getting her big plot smacked

then her realizing that she liked it

and developing an obsessive spanking fetish

becoming a recluse who is constantly afraid of other ponies discovering it

>>28064405
man you are talking to the right person. as that totally something I would write.
but I got my hands full. and currently writing a story.

you got the basic ideas and the premise. why don't you write it yourself.
we could always use more writefags.

>>28064497
Ill think about it, but I'm not very good at writing stuff. I might make a less complicated version of that sometime

>>28064598
just do it as one shot short story.
I don't think I'm that good either. but I did it. I people here liked what I did write.

at least I think some of them do..

>>28064650
We do!

>>28054436
this needs to continue.

>>28056855
>”even though I’m the boss?”
I wish he would have tried to end this tradition altoguether, I mean he ASSUMES Pinkie will feel insulted but he could at least try, since this Pinkie clearly just doesn't know different and could actually end up liking the change.

>>28065878
When I read that line for a moment I thought Anon had a change of heart and ended up enjoying being the spanker boss and wanted things to continue that way.

>>28065663
I'm not good at writing smut scenes

>>28066022
are you a virgin ?

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someone did color my old sketch.

also this thread reached page 9 for the forth time in a raw.
I still have much in store for this one. and kinda don't want it to end.
if anyone got something do it . to keep things this thread moving again.

>>28066944
Now is going to be the slow time anyway with nighttime in the Freedom Staates of murica

>you are a random unicorn stallion.
>you were walking in ponyvile.
>you heard a yelling of an old mare.
>so you head toward the source of the yelling.
>you saw a light purple coated mare biting and pulling an ear of a little pink filly.
>the mare was angry and the filly was protesting
>curiosity got the best of you so you stood far and observed the situation.
>the mare appears to be the mother and she was scolding her daughter.
>you gave a sigh of relief . you thought it was kidnapping or something..
>the mother tugging her daughter's ear forcing her to move toward a bench.
>the purple unicorn sat down on the bench and then pulled her daughter on her lap.
>you thought to yourself 'is this going where I think it is'
>the mother pulled her daughter's tail with her mouth while the filly on her lap and .
Smack!
>she slapped her daughter's butt right there on the bench. in fornt of everypony .
>the poor filly was embarrassed.
>she was squirming and whining.
>her mother gave her another
Smack
>the poor filly was crying.
>her mother was still angry and scolding her daughter.
>she was a bit far from you. you couldn't make up what she was saying.

you then ..

A - Continued being a bystander observing the situation from a far.

B - interfered and stopped the spanking.

C - you didn't want to interfere with mother and her daughter so you ignored them and walk down the road.

>>28067603
A, A and fuckin A

>>28067603
hot setup with a tough choice. here in the spanking thread, what should we do? the one option that leads to spanking, or the other two that do not? ;)

>>28066944
in the old days of the thread I would not bump until it made it to page 9. 9 was normal, 10 was a sign nobody was posting. This time the lack of participation is more pronounced. So many good writefags cut down in their prime or on a break.

>>28064025
I like this summary. Personally I usually skim until I get to the lewd parts. I'm guilty of this even in my own writing. If you want a long story, then do it! Fuck trying to always match what other people say they want.
>>28063506
Consider the oneshots. They can be hot (for some people) with just a few hundred words.
>>28063085
I love it
>>28060633
What I see I do like.

>>28067903
>hot setup with a tough choice. here in the spanking thread, what should we do? the one option that leads to spanking, or the other two that do not? ;)

how would you know which option would lead to spanking and which one would lead to even hotter spanking ?

Trust me I'm full aware that this is a spanking thread. and I know what you guys want.

one thing for sure.
>There is no wrong answer.
each one of them would lead to a spanking one way or another.

>>28047875
Part 4

The way she grit her teeth made it sound like the words escaped against her will. Bloom gave a weary sob, knowing she definitely earned herself a bad spanking by admitting something as awful as a dishonest act. And it was all over something so unimportant!

Sitting there in Candy's lap, she started to explain it all. She paused often to regain herself, helped along with Candy's steady encouragement. The entire time, Candy rubbed her back through her pajama top. Candy never said anything beyond insistence, allowing the younger cousin to get the whole tale out of the frying pan before her tail end was sent into the fire.

Applejack’s diary revealed that she had a secret stash of bits behind her wardrobe. It was concealed behind a loose piece of the wall. The Autumn's harvest had been a bountiful one, leaving some additional funds leftover that Applejack had already delegated.

Some repairs had to be made before winter set in. The barn door needed replacing and the back of the house was nearly torn to pieces after a ferocious storm. They needed to purchase a bulk order of barrels to replace the ones scattered and destroyed by the weather. Most of the emergency funds were for those. A small portion left over was intended as a donation to the Hearth's Warming Eve Foal Fund.

Apple Bloom was positive she could pay back what she took. She took that donation money and got a gift for herself, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. Three front row three tickets to the last Wonderbolt performance of the season!

Long before she had collected even half of what she owed, from allowances and helping ponies out around Ponyville, the guilt started to set in. Because Applejack had no idea, Apple Bloom overheard her talking to Big Macintosh about the Foal Fund donation. You know, just to twist that knife a bit. The repairs had been made, but Applejack hadn't noticed what was missing, as Apple Bloom had put anything she made back into the bag.

>>28067964
>each one of them would lead to a spanking one way or another.
In that case the most unlikely option C sounds suddenly interesting to see where it leads

>>28068355
>Apple Bloom was positive she could pay back what she took. She took that donation money and got a gift for herself, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. Three front row three tickets to the last Wonderbolt performance of the season!

She is so fucked...

>>28068355
Part 5! Boobie trap the stalemate button!

She was still short around 70 bits when those odd jobs and chores started to run out. That was a lot of money that wouldn't get donated. If Applejack found out her sister took it, even if Bloom was somehow able to pay it all back, she'd be so crushed and hurt. Apple Bloom was convinced she'd never be trusted again.

“So Ah 'unno if Ah’ll make up the rest of the money, Candy… Ah’ll do nothing but look for folks 'round Ponyville needin’ a helpin’ hoof, Ah guess…” Apple Bloom suggested to herself heavily.

“Was the show worth it, Apple Bloom?” Candy asked, looking her dead in the eyes again. “Is an afternoon of entertainment worth all of this? Your guilt, stealing from your sister who had intended that money to go to less fortunate fillies and colts than yourself?”

Apple Bloom hugged Candy tight, trying not to start bawling into her chest already. She pressed her snout hard against it. Her face scrunched up, her eyes battling the flow of tears.

“It ain't h-happened yet… The Wonderbolt show is next weekend, just 'fore the snow,” she explained sadly. “Ah shouldn't go…”

>>28068492
Part 6

Candy pulled her away and sat her up straight, leaning back on the bed. Apple Bloom was sure she was thinking. Probably of what shade of purple to make her fanny, Bloom thought miserably. Finally, the older pony spoke.

“If I remember right, all Wonderbolt shows have a very good refund policy. Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo were promised a show, so I'd let them go. You can go to the ticket office in Ponyville and refund your own, young filly. Take the money to Applejack and you tell her everything!”

“She'd kill me! She'd hate me forever! She-” Apple Bloom gasped in shock, not even registering what a good idea it would be to just take her ticket back or sell it to someone else.

“She's your sister!” Candy interrupted, wrapping her hooves around Apple Bloom, who froze in fearful realization. “Explain how you felt, what you did to get the money back, and how sorry you are. She'll understand. Applejack's gonna be pissed off, I'd imagine, but once she gets a good look at your fanny and reads the letter I'll give you to take home, she'll forgive you!”

“Y-ya sure?” Apple Bloom asked sadly, covered her face, fighting with everything she had not to cry now.

“I am sure. It wasn't so long ago that I was making a delivery to Ponyville and had to give my cousin a thorough reminder about the importance of honesty, Apple Bloom. Applejack, more than anypony, will understand the importance of such a lesson.”

Before Apple Bloom could work out what was said, she felt her hooves around her torso tighten. Her eyes widened, knowing time was up. Candy lifted her up and draped her across her lap, right to left, like someone about to fold a towel. To make it all worse, she felt a hoof go to her backside and start to rub. She was going to get a long scolding first. Candy rubbed her butt hard. It was going to be extra sensitive after a good massage.

>>28068512
>She was going to get a long scolding first. Candy rubbed her butt hard. It was going to be extra sensitive after a good massage.
This is getting gud
I love these slow buildups and preperations

>>28068512
The buildup in your stories always makes my weewee wet Krishna

>>28067603
B

>>28067603
I decided to to pollstraw style votes .
I only need 4 votes to write the next part.
I might break the tie myself .
http://www.strawpoll.me/10912215

>>28067731
>>28068704
>>28068380
I got 1 of each choice therefore we are back on square one.
re vote

Prespanking butt massages are so hot

Especially because they make it hurt more

>>28067603
-B-
>seeing a little filly crying kinda melted your heart.
>You had to do something.
>you approached them.
>you can finally hear what they were saying.
~Smack!
Aha awe am sawee.
Mom "oh now your sorry"
~Smack!
Mom " Do you know how much that cost me"
~smack!
Mom " 3000 bits"
then she furiously spanked the little pink little filly
~Smack Smack Smack
Aoe ee ahaha bwahaa
the filly was kicking and bawling.
Smack SMack ... "eh!"
>you went there and held her hoof.
>mom: "hey let go of my hoof , what do you think your doing ?"
>"ehem don't you think that little filly had enough?"
>the filly was stopped crying still trying to catch her breath.
>the mom struggled to pull her hoof of your grip
(Note : hoof gripping is a thing cause I say so)
>mom "hey I said let go. you don't know anything "
>You : "that poor thing look at her."
>she was still catching her breath she wiped her tear, and her snout.
>"she is embarrassed ashamed and in pain."
>mom : "I can discipline my child as I see fit and beside who do you think you are telling me what to do. "
>She forcefully tried to lose your grip over her hoof.
>"I said let go of my hoof"
>"not until you stop hitting your foal in front of everpony in the middle of the street"
>"I can spank my child where ever I see fit. she deserved it"
>she said that while looking at the filly that are laying on her lap. the little one got scared of the menacing look her mother gave her.
>after looking at how that little filly reacted to her mother's mean look ...

you ...

http://www.strawpoll.me/10912672

This reminds me of a video on YouTube of when a mother was spanking her child and some stranger decided to spanked the mom , I don't know whether this is inspired by that or not, but either way I love it.

>>28069363
I have to admit that this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ECep5OWdPE

did cross my mind while writing this part.
I said to myself. wait a min this sounds a little too familiar then I remembered that scene.
the line
>"not until you stop hitting your foal ....
was directly from it

>>28069217
Is there an option to get yourself spanked cuz would pick that?

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>>28069435
picture related : one of these branches might lead to that.
not gonna tell you which one is which.
and yes I did plan these choices beforehand.
it would make it easier for the time frame.

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>>28069217
-C-
Note don't click the spoiler image yet
>you took a deep breath. and tried to calm yourself.
>you got caught up in the moment and don't have all the facts.
>how can a mother do this to her child. there must be a reason.
>you calmly the mother "What did your daughter do to deserve this ?"
>the mother took a deep breath and let out a long sigh. while shaking her head.
>you let go of her hoof cause she seems calm enough.
>"where to begin.. this little brat got a D on her science class. then she decided to run away from home. we've been searching for her all day. and when I found her hiding in that store's basement she ran off and broke one of the stores valuable vases."
>the mother started to boil up her tone of her voice started to get sharper.
>"and after all that she used vulgar langue . the nerve."
>she said that last line while glaring at the little filly who is still on her lap.
>out of the blue you gently asked the frightened little filly.
>"what's your name ?"
interrupted the mother kinda hoping to defuse the situation. you don't want that filly to be traumatized.
>the little filly mumbled and spoke softly.
>the mother yelled at her daughter. "Where is your manner young lady . is that how I tough you to..."
you extended your hoof on the mother's shoulder. you looked at her in the eye and nodded.
"now tell me little princess whats your name ?"
filly :"I'm.. my name is . aquamarine"
Picture related.

>"you broke that man's vase. you did him wrong. right ?"
>she dropped her ears and lowered her head in shame.
>she nodded.
>Don't you think at least you should apologize to him ?
>her a tear dropped from her eye . she nodded again.
>well .. come on lets go apologize to him.
>her mother let go of her daughter to follow go with you. she was kinda shocked on how her daughter was listing to you.
>you went with her and she apologized to that store pony.
>when you came back. you lowered yourself to her level. you looked at her in the eye and said.
...

>>28059258

......Well then. So much for that...

>>28069838
>listen your mother was very worried about you,
>"its gonna be ok."
>you told her that cause she was kinda reluctant to face her mother.
>"your mother is worried about you."
aqua "but my mommy always yell at me and she is very strict with me"
>"your mom want whats the best for you. when you ran off. she was looking all over the place for you" (you don't really know if that's true but you had to over sell it )
aqua "but if I go back now she is gonna .. gonna. spank my poor behind"
>"I'm sure she wont." (and if she did I would stop her)
>"She just paid that stallion a lot of money just to cover your mistakes. if she didn't love you she would have let them put you in jail"
>she was kinda shocked.. that thought didn't cross her mind.
>"so when you go to her now just do what I say, you whispered in her ears."
she smiled.
you went back to the bench were her mom was sitting.
>aqua ran toward her mother and hugged her.
"I'm very sorry mommy I wont do it again please teach me how to be a good elegant pony like you,"
the mother was kinda shocked by how her daughter switched personality . she was like a complete different filly.
she hugged her daughter and talked to her for a bit.

what happens next ?
http://www.strawpoll.me/10913502

Note I'm kinda sleepy and I will continue this later.

>>28069573
Damn this nigga dedicated

Got all these branches n shit

>>28070110
that mom deserves a spanking of her life, also in public, for not helping her daughter with science classes
If the filly ran away it's because she was scared of her ignorant mother
Let's make a science test for the mare, if she fails, she is getting a trashing much more severe than her daughter

>>28070212

Maybe we should leaf him alone, get to the root of the story. I'll stick around to see what happens...I mean, wooden you like to know what's next?

....I'll pack my trunk, I think I'm barking up the wrong tree here.

>>28070275
O u
What's the pun-ishment on being this punny anyway?

>>28070567
A punitive punch?

>>28070619
How about canedian cane?

>>28070753

A British Birching?

>>28070110
Damn can't wait to see where this goes

>>28070856
I somehow doubt you'd want that...
You got no idea how that feels

>>28071235

Don't I?

>>28071315
I don't know
ya got a story or two to tell? we're all ears

>>28070110
Loving all that dread from Aquamarine, such a qt