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Previous Thread: >>27673060

Would you let Fluttershy pretend to bully you to boost her confidence?

Pastebins:
50SoY: http://pastebin.com/tNGcwGq6
CC: http://pastebin.com/SgWisaqP

Death evades you once more.
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>>27937257
bump
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>>27869937
>You both lay on the ground for a while more.
>Your heart was still racing by the time one of you realized what this meant.
>It obviously wasn't you.
>She blinked a few times, before smiling and jumping up from behind you.
>The suddenness along with your state of mind caused you to hit your head on the floor.
>You knew it hurt, but it just didn't register, immediately at least.
>Your mind was still processing this.
>She- She left.
>Just like that.
>Maybe not without incident, but there was no way she'd just give up like that.
>Right?
>It was about then that you felt the pain in the back of your head.
>Sweetie was already apologizing.
>But there was definitely a hint of excitement in her voice as she helped you up.
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>>27937257
I feel guilty. I saw the last thread on pg 10 and didn't bump it. Forgive me anons.


>>27938186
This feels like the calm before the storm. I wonder if Fluttershy will be back with Rarity.
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>>27939283
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>>27932283
>Geez, for a small girl, she’s something.
>Whatever is under her skirt is dragging you down.
>You can only imagine if it's thick thighs or some rump she carries.
>...
>Keep those lewd thoughts away, you need a clear and calm head.
>People would notice your stiffy if you kept it up.
>You were fortunate to walk past a few adults that paid no attention and were much older than you, making it to the front doors of the restaurant without an issue.
>”Is this it?”
“Yeah.”
>She stays quiet as you stand there, expecting her to get off.
“What?”
>”I’m not getting off until we find a seat.”
“Oh for crying out loud.”
>A guy on the inside was merciful enough to hold the door open.
“Thank you.”
>”I’ve been there at your age, kid. Hope it’s worth it in the end.” The man leaves with his wife, who smacks him in the back with her purse.
>You ignore that and continue to the waitress who is looking through her phone.
>”Welcome to--” The waitress stops when she sees you carrying Fluttershy.
”A table for two.”
>”Do you have one that has a nice view?”
>When the waitress was done silently judging you, she lead you into the restaurant, still carrying Fluttershy all the way until the table was directly in front of you.
>”Anything to start you off?”
>”Hot tea would be nice.” Fluttershy asks.
“Just water, for now.”
>She leaves you with the menu and walks away.
>You slouch in your seat and relax.


>>27937257
One again, thank you, OP.

>>27933782
Too true, mate. This story has gone longer than expected and I'm not stopping now. Y-you too.
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>>27940755
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Well, shoot. I made that first thread hoping for something in the same vein as those ones where Twilight bullies you with math. Didn't know it would turn into long running stories.
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>>27942843
I was just wondering when you'd turn up.
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>>27942584
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>>27937257
I remember when I requested this image I had one single thing in mind.
I want him to look as though if she doesn't stop in the next few seconds she'll cause irreparable damage.
I was not disappointed.
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>>27940755
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>>27942899
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>>27940755
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>>27938752
>This feels like the calm before the storm. I wonder if Fluttershy will be back with Rarity.
She better.
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>>27947425
If she does, I think I know where this story will be going.
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>>27941081
Glad to hear it.
ILY

>>27938186
>"Are you okay?"
>She said.
>Yup, she was definitely happy about something.
>You confirmed as you rubbed your head and blinked.
>Once she was sure of it, she strangled you.
>Well maybe not exactly strangled, but not far from it.
>You sure weren't short on affection as she crushed you in a bear hug.
>Despite the this, and the smile on your face, you couldn't stop from worrying.
>You turned to the little device now laying on the floor.
>She continued showing it by rubbing her cheek on yours.
>It was a wonderful gesture, but you slowly escaped her hold.
>While she was a obviously disappointed, the torn rags that were once her shirt quickly grab her attention.
>As she excuses herself, you look at the bright pink rectangle just at your feet.
>...
>You groan.
"This is so stupid."
>Slowly, you reach down and take it.
>Nothing particularly special about it, not that you had anything to expect from Fluttershy.
>You click the button at the top and are immediately greeted by a picture of a particularly angry looking rabbit.
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Bumping for Flutterbully shenanigans
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>>27949827
Don't let me down. I need more cute girls being bullies.
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>>27948821
Can you update your pastebin, sir? I read from pastebin and I don't know why or how did they end on a date.
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>>27949827
>>27950584
Soon enough, my fellow Anon.
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>>27950739
Alright done, though I may (or most definitely) fucked up.
I'll have to check.
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>>27950584
You didn't get enough in high school?
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>mfw I couldn't save the last thread because I was banned.
Fifty/CC pls forgive me.
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Starlightfags REEEEEEEEEE
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>>27952981
you can never get enough
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>>27952981
Kek
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WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT HORSE DOING WITH THAT MEXICAN IMIGRANT
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>>27952981
I chuckled.
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>>27941081
>”What’s going to be your dinner, Anon?”
>You glance at the menu. So much to choose.
>Seafood, burgers, pasta, they even serve pancakes at this time.
“I’ll think it over later, an appetizer will do for now.”
>She points at hers and glides it around.
>”I’m thinking about trying their half-pound hamburger, or maybe the shrimp scampi instead, but a stack of waffles does sound delicious right now…”
>As she drones on about the menu, you wonder if they two of you are truly alone.
>There wasn’t anyone you recognized when entering the restaurant, but you never know.
>Any of these people could be parents of anyone at your school.
>You and Fluttershy are even sitting by the window.
>Fuck, you can’t get away with breaking more than one leg!
>”Anon, Anon!”
“Yeah?”
>”I said, what are you going to get?”
“Wait, aren’t you still picking?”
>”Sort of, I’ll just get some salad for now.” She closes her menu. “You need to stop doing that.”
“Doing what?”
>”You go into your little world. Whatever it is, it must be important.”
“Sort of, I’m just panicking.”
>”About what? Is it about the car?”
“Not this time.”
>”Then what?”
“If people will get this the wrong way.”
>She sighs.
>”Everyone might have had that at some point. Can’t you relax for once, without any stress about what other people think about us?”
“Hey, I was the one that carried your wide load over here.”
>She backs into her seat, embarrassed by you oddly accurate slanderous remark.
>”W-well, I can't help it if it goes straight to my thighs!”
>She tries to act as if she was angry, but appears to be more ashamed by it when she starts to rub her bum.
>No, no lewd thoughts. Now’s not the time.
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>>27957170
>”Can we just talk without any argument?”
>The answer would be a resounding no, but you may as well try.
“Maybe.”
>”Do you fight for anything for a living?”
“Surprisingly, yes.”
>Fluttershy scratches her head.
>”Okay, forget all of that and just tell me, what do you like?”
“Just so that you can tell me that I have shit taste?” You swiftly respond.
>”What? Why would I say that?”
>Wait, this is a human being, not your computer.
“I have a bad time talking about certain tastes with some people.”
>”I’m not them. You can tell me, like what do you listen to?”

What artist/composer/genres do you say to her?

>>27938752
>>27954083
It happens, don't worry about it.

>>27948821
Your name is everywhere, my friend. You made quite a name for yourself since it is in many threads. And for that, I applaud you.
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>>27957186
Three Doors Down
Fucking with you, go with Aerosmith
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>>27957186
"I like Johnny Cash's songs"

who doesn't like him? desu
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>>27958264
And covers.

"Hurt" kills my soul.
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>>27957186
"Kavinsky", but assuming for bad taste on 4chan and bully taste 'Punk in drulic album - NOFX ', 'Rust in Peace -megadeth' ,'Clipping-Wriggle' or tumblr tier taste like "Grouplove"
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Love is a burning thing~
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>>27955602
Kek
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>>27964695
Top qt
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>>27962148
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>>27962798
And it makes a fiery(?) ring
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>>27966022
Check'd
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>>27957186
Oh. Yeah. Right.
Most of them hardly care despite me actively trying, but whatevs.
I'm not complaining, I do this for fun, it just feels awkward.


>>27948821
>Pretty off putting, but you keep at it.
>Upon sliding however, you're greeted with a big lock screen.
>At that point you just about gave up.
>You quickly glance at the door and then back to the phone.
>Could a few tries really be that bad?
>You type a random string of numbers and surprise surprise, it doesn't work.
>You try again, and again it only makes it buzz.
>After a few more tries, it locks you out for a few minutes.
>It's probably for the best.
>You felt weird.
>Like and urge.
>You start walking without thinking.
>Straight to the door.
>Or you would've.
>Sweetie comes back down wearing one of your t shirts.
>It's pretty much her size anyways.
>Not like that's a good thing.
>"Do you mind if I borrow this?"
>She says holding what remained of her previous garment, which now just a clump of rags.
"Sure."
>She smiles and thanks you.
>You can't deny it, she definitely looks cute wearing one of your...
>Right.
>You were just about to go somewhere.
>Though, now that you think about it, you don't know exactly.
>You glance down at the phone.
>...
"Ugh."
>Why must you be so pathetic?
>You open the door, which immediately gets Sweetie's attention.
>But you ignore her calling out to you.
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>>27970535
The fuck is happening?
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>>27971636
He's about to return the phone to the Fluttershy.
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>>27971970
Kek, he is fucked.
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>>27970535
You've got Sweetie Belle, basically naked in front of you, and you're going to go give fluttershy back her phone.
http://youtu.be/izUAUX7bBBA
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>>27966922
Bound by wild desire
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>>27974484
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>>27957170
>”Sort of, I’ll just get some salad for now.”

No offense to you FSoY, just something that hit me and I wanna vent it. I don't know what it is but everyone always eats fuckin salad in these greens; I swear all the time that I've ever spent in a restaurant, have I ever seen someone just buy a single portion of salad and that's it. I get that most of the time the stories are around a pony culture or teenage girls, but even then, there are more foods than just salad.
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>>27977707
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>>27978658
Don't like salad?
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bamp
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>>27981324
Salad tastes shit on its own, but he has a point. Theres more than justsalad. Just because its meant to be friendship goodness land doesnt mean cows arent killed for beef
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Need to know what happens to anon!
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>>27983201
This
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>>27982151
I like salad
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>>27979968
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>>27984866
That's alright, we all have different tastes.
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>>27984866
salad is good
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>>27981795
>
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>>27986004
Do you like salad?
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>>27988523
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>>27970535
DON'T DO IT
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bamp
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>>27990793
Nice high quality bump faget
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Fifty where are you?
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>>27993431
I'm here, mate. I've been busy with essays for the last few days. By the end of today, that should be the end of the worst of it and I can finally focus on more green.

Here's some artwork that I was going to use is the story, somewhere.
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>>27993758
Oh shit.
I was neglecting this thread and was worried you'd died or something.
I will also fix the lack of content at some point either today or tomorrow.
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>>27992293
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>>27993758
I miss you bby
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>>27970535
>What were you thinking?
>You can stop right now and go back.
>No you can't.
>You really are pathetic.
>Can't even stop yourself from going and getting maimed.
>You really hated that.
>Not that Fluttershy did what she did.
>That you couldn't do anything yourself.
>Couldn't stand up for yourself.
>Couldn't defend yourself.
>You couldn't even stop yourself from crawling back to the one who makes you so miserable.
>Once you make it to the end of your block, you just fall onto your knees.
>And look.
>You couldn't even finish that.
>Now you're crying on the sidewalk.
>You let that speak for itself.
>Why couldn't you be just a little better?
>You didn't want to be a jocktard.
>Just someone who doesn't get pushed around by-
"Fucking Fluttershy."
>You thought about it for a while.
>Maybe you wouldn't be so wimpy if you had someone to teach how to be tough.
>Maybe if your mom hadn't been so eager to please you.
>Maybe if you had been in sports since the beginning.
>It was all pointless.
>No one could help you.
>You were beyond help.
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>>27998026
>Of course, that's what you thought.
>But you still felt a pair of hands on your back and still heard the most wonderful voice.
>"A-anon?"
>You barely managed to look up and see her, standing over you, on the verge of tears herself.
>You just stare at her.
>"Anon."
>Then she starts.
>"Please, say something."
>You didn't want to.
>You didn't even know what you wanted.
>Maybe just to lay there and hope this all worked itself out.
>You thought about how that'd go.
>How she'd try to move you and fail.
>Maybe they would get an ambulance.
>Whatever.
>It was all just thoughts.
>But your mouth still opened.
"Something."
>Not even sure if you knew or if you just didn't know what to say, but you see the relief on her face.
>She kneels next to you.
>"What happened?"
>Do you tell her?
>What would she even think?
>'After everything I did, you want to go running back to Fluttershy?!'
>You wouldn't blame her if she started to hate you.
>Then, you felt a little weight on your shoulder.
>You turned and instantly felt the little strands of hair tickle your nose.
>It was then that you knew she wouldn't.
>"If it's something bad, please tell me."
>Her words only confirmed it.
>So, you sucked it up.
>"Sweetie Belle!"
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>>27999003
>Well almost.
>You both jump slightly as the booming voice cuts into your ears.
>You got over the instinctive fear quickly, but Sweetie?
>She was mortified.
>You were the first to turn around.
>Once you did, you joined her.
>Trying to keep pace with her was Fluttershy.
>But who was she?
>A stranger, you knew that much.
>Curly purple hair, pale white skin and a serious scowl on her face.
>You were too afraid to put it together.
>Thankfully Sweetie explained it all, in just two words.
>"H-hey sis..."
>The two finally stopped just feet away.
>Fluttershy stood closer to you.
>"Sweetie Belle, do you mind explaining why Fluttershy told you- What was it again Fluttershy dear?"
>She said just as a way to get the exact quote.
>"Oh Rarity, it was j-just awful!"
>Was she really doing this?
>"I was just watching her and Anon, but then she started acting out!"
>She didn't mention why.
>"So I gave her a warning, then another, but she still didn't listen."
>There's no way anyone would buy this!
>"I really didn't want to, really, but when I tried to call you she just-"
>She chokes.
>"I think I've heard quite enough, thank you Fluttershy."
>No fucking way!
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>>27999151
Anon about to get raped again.
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>>27999151
>"B-but-"
>"You are in deep, deep-"
>She huffs.
>"I can't even begin to tell you how upset I am with you."
>Sweetie just hangs her head.
>"Anything to say for yourself?"
>She jumps at the opportunity.
>"But she started it!"
>Probably not the best choice of words, but she continues.
>"She started touching and kissing Anon and-"
>"Sweetie Belle!"
>She flinches.
>"I'm not lying! Please believe me!"
>"Quiet missy, we're going home right after this and you're not visiting anyone for-"
>"No! Please, I'm sorry!"
>She'd given up on being coherent, just begging now.
>"Please take my phone, my allowance, but I can't stop seeing Anon!"
>You're eyes widen.
>Fluttershy also seems to not be focusing on you for once.
>"Sweetie... Is, something happening between you two?"
>"N-no! Well... Nothing bad! We just-"
"Play games?"
>"Yeah, we play games- video games!"
>"Videogames?"
>She looks at you.
>You nod.
>Then she looks at Fluttershy.
>You see her face shift to suspicion.
>"Is there something you're not telling me Sweetie?"
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>>27999217
Oh shit. Now it's going down. If Sweetie is not there for anon who knows what Fluttershy will so to him.
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>>27995838
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boop
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>>28001119
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>>27999813
THIS
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IWTCICC~
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>>28004532

>>27999217
>Was there?
>"Um. Well."
>She stops and looks down.
>"Sweetie Belle."
>She still says nothing.
>"Sweetie Belle!"
>"Huh?"
>"You were saying?"
>"Oh yeah. Um... What was I saying?"
>She slaps herself.
>"You were just telling what it is you're keeping from me."
>Were eyes widen and her face grows red.
>"Right. It's uh-"
>"Out with it."
>The sternness in her voice even scares you.
>But then again, it really doesn't take much.
>You really are a pussy.
>"A-anon is my boyfriend, b-but you don't understand-"
>"Sweetie Belle."
>She interrupts her again.
>"You- An- a boyfriend."
>She says, mostly to herself.
>You're not sure whether to be worried or not, but that doesn't stop you from doing so anyways.
>She says something barely audible, but you're not able to understand it.
>"Do our parents know at least?"
>"Um, yes?"
>Her claim is just as sincere as Fluttershy's.
>She already bought the other one, so maybe-
>"Well we'll certainly see about that. But for now..."
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IWTCI50SOY
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>>28004995
>She turns to you.
>"Is this true?"
>Oh man.
"I- I don't really..."
>"I think what he means to say is yes."
>Fluttershy starts.
>"Poor thing can hardly speak after everything that's happened to him."
>You can feel her coming up behind you and slowly stroking your hair.
>You froze.
>Definitely not the right move.
>You can only guess Rarity saw that as conformation for Fluttershy.
>"I've been visiting him since what happened."
>Rarity watched intently.
>"He's made so much progress."
>She continues.
>"It was obvious to me that him and Sweetie were more than friends."
>No.
>You're not letting this happen.
>"But ever since she starting spending time with him, he's been more and more difficult."
>You try moving away from her.
>She just holds you and coos into your ear.
>"It's okay, it's okay..."
>Sweetie does nothing.
>She couldn't.
>You were on your own.
>Not just that.
>She was counting on you.
>"I didn't to tell you because I figured you were already aware."
>You move again, grunting in the process.
>"Oh my."
>Rarity says.
>You stop when only when you tire.
>"Rarity, I'm going to be honest with you."
>"I don't think Sweetie is a very good influence on Anon."
>"I think it's best if they were to spend less time together."
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>>28006183
Don't do this to me faggot.
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>>28006183
>Finally.
>It seems you've had enough.
>You suddenly break from Fluttershy's hold.
"Look, Rarity was it?"
>What on Earth were you doing?
"I from what I know Fluttershy is your best friend, and I understand that. But please believe your sister. She's done horrible things to both of us and by lying, she's done it you too."
>...
"I'll admit it, yes we've been together for a little while now, but I've been bed ridden for almost the entirety of it, I'm sure you can understand how that was the least of my concerns."
>"Anon?"
>Sweetie says.
>But you're too into it to acknowledge her.
"Everything your sister said is true, she tried too... I really don't want to say. But Sweetie stopped her."
"They had a little spat, some clothes were torn, but ultimately Fluttershy stormed off."
>She's silent.
"I had just come out to try and get her phone back to her when I just couldn't take it anymore, and just dropped here. Sweetie came chasing after me. I was just about to tell her what it was that was bothering me, when you arrived."
>"..."
>You-
>You actually got somewhere!
>All you need to do now is show her the-
>Phone...
>"Oh Anon, you did such a good job!"
>So that's why she-
>You have no words.
>None.
>"Anonymous."
>Rarity finally says.
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>>28007314
>"That is a very disrespectful and downright criminal accusation to make."
>...
>"But."
>"I can see it now."
>"While I cannot condone your action, I can appreciate your motives."
>"You just trying to defend my sister."
>Well, yeah but.
>"While I'm definitely not forgetting about what you've done, I do believe that keeping you apart would do no one good."
>"D-does that mean?"
>"Yes, you can continue seeing him, I do believe you had a sleep over planned for tonight, correct?"
>"Yes!"
>"Then I'm willing to keep quiet about this little incident, but on the condition that you inform mother and father once you get home."
>"I will. I promise."
>She smiles at both of you.
>"I think that's enough of that, you may go now."
>"Um Rarity, are you sure about this?"
>"Oh Fluttershy, you know you can't stand between young love."
>Sweetie Belle meanwhile gives you a much needed hug as the two older girls walk away.
"Did that really just happen?"
>"Forget about them, let's just go back inside."
>"Oh Sweetie Belle!"
>She comes running back.
>"Will you be needing a change of clothes?"
>She looks down at your shirt.
>"I think I'm okay."
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>>28007491
Awwww shit they don't believe him. Fluttershy must be pissed he ratted her out. I hope nothing bad happens once rarity is away.
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>>28007518
>I hope nothing bad happens

all the bad things are going to happen
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>>28007491
I just want him to be raped again.
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Waiting
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>>27941081
This should end with anon honing on a psychotic rant on everything fluttershy has done to him then if that doesn't work he just straight up kills fluttershy with a knife in a insane rampage
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>>28012000
Going not honing sorry
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>>28007491
Anon has almost reached Dipper Pines levels of beta and bad luck. He's not quite there yet, but he's close
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Page 10 bump
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>>28007491
>"You're sure?"
>She hums yes.
>"I'll see you at home then. One last thing dear sister."
>She looks up.
>"You already know what I'm getting on when I say that you know better."
>She gives her stern look.
>"Now you be sure to enjoy yourself!"
>Then just like that she leaves, Fluttershy chasing behind her frantically trying to talk to her.
>You just sort of stare as they gradually get farther and farther away.
>A thought suddenly came up.
"W-where's she going?"
>"Oh once they get into it there's no stopping them. I don't think you'll have to deal with Fluttershy anymore, at least for today."
"Are you serious."
>"Yeah, it used to be so annoying, but maybe..."
"What?"
>"Oh never mind, let just go back."
>She begins to lead you back by hand.
"Wait! Wasn't she suppose to be watching us?"
>"Oh come on, what's the matter? Haven't you ever been home alone?"
"N-no."
>She stops and looks at you.
>Just looks at you, with the most unsure expression.
>You can't do much beside standing there with your hands in your pockets.
>"Fluttershy will probably be busy with Rarity for the next few days. Just try to forget about her."
"But my what about my mom? She'll be expecting her."
>"We'll think of something, now come on!"
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>>28014479
Are...are they about to fuck
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>page 10 save
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>>28014816
Maybe.

>>28014479
>Once more she took your hand, and pretty much dragged you back home.
>You steadied yourself and kept pace with her.
>After you got inside, she immediately locked the door.
>Good thing you didn't notice.
>Regardless of it, you still had not idea what to make of all this.
>Just being with Sweetie wasn't enough to keep her away.
>Not to mention what she might do to her now.
>If her own sister didn't believe her, what hope did you have?
>Although, if what Sweetie said was true, you may have something to work with.
>"So Anon."
>She interrupted your thoughts, probably for the best too.
>"Were you being serious about never staying home alone?"
>Oh.
"Yeah, I was."
>"Seriously?! I mean, not even for a little bit?"
"Well sometimes when I got got sick, my mom would leave me in my room, with the door locked..."
>She cringes.
>"Well, um, let's fix that!"
>She motions for you to follow her to your room.
>When you get there she takes a seat on your bed.
>"You'll probably want to close the door."
"Why?"
>"You'll see, come on Anon."
>It's really hard to deny her requests.
>No, really.
>Once that's done, she pats the spot next to her.
>You hear the bed creak as you sit.
>She just sort of, stares at you.
>Normal that wouldn't be so bad, but I goes on for a while.
"Sooo..."
>"Anon. Do you remember where we were before we were so rudely interrupted?"
>She says the last part with some malice in her voice.
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>>28016725
Don't screw this up Anon
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Wew lads, I just got some big news.
I'm stopping here for now and picking up when I wake up.

>>28016725
>You wait a minute and actually give some thought.
>Meanwhile, she gets -really- close.
>That's what triggered your memory actually.
>And instantly you're sweating.
"Um, I- I think so."
>She hums in your ear.
>"Then don't you think we should get back to it?"
>Her voice.
>It was so weird.
>It's different.
>Like, she wanted something.
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>>28018013
It's happening!
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>>28016776
Goose egg boob
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How do you say sleep tight in your language?
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>>28018310
Which one?
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>>28018310
This.>>28019628

Shady please come back, we miss you.
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>>28018013
>You wait a minute and actually give some thought.
>Meanwhile, she gets -really- close.
>That's what triggered your memory actually.
>And instantly you're sweating.
"Um, I- I think so."
>She hums in your ear.
>"Then don't you think we should get back to it?"
>Her voice.
>It was so weird.
>It's different.
>Like, she wanted something.
>You already knew though.
"I don't know."
>"But you were doing so good before~"
>You swear her breath is burning you.
>It's not uncomfortable, but-
>"Don't you want to?"
>Did you?
>You definitely feel something.
>"It's okay if you don't want to."
>Oh thank goodness, you really didn't want that on your mind right now.
>"I mean, I really wanted to, but if you're not up to, I guess we could just do something else..."
>Suddenly she breaks out into a heartbreaking frown.
>You knew it was beyond exaggerated, but, ugh.
>Besides, it wasn't that didn't want to.
>You just didn't feel comfortable.
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>>28021047
She wants the D.
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>>28021047
HE BLEW IIIIIT!
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>>28021047
He secretly wants Fluttershy to rape him.
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>9
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>>28022235
who doesn't?
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bamp
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>>28025597
bemp
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>>28021047
"N-no! I mean, you don't have to stop, I just-"
>She shushes you.
>"Just calm down Anon, you'll like this, I promise."
>She whispers into your ear.
>You want to relax.
>Too bad you don't control that.
>Just wish you weren't shaking so much.
>"Anon."
"What?"
>"I want to explore a little bit first"
>She says, it come off as more of a demand than anything else.
"E-explore?"
>"Mmhmm. You'll see."
>She takes your hand.
>You briefly wonder what she was doing, but when you feel a little bump, you catch on instantly.
>You feel your face get flushed as she moans.
>Even with the shirt she had on, the contact was just-
>Weird.
>She starts to move, just a little.
>Eventually she moves it once more, lifting her, or more accurately, your shirt to let you feel her bare skin.
>Your heart pounded as you watched.
>It was surreal, and for a while you didn't even think it was your hand.
>Once you realized it was actually happening, you recoiled.
>But you didn't stop.
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>>28027207
bimp
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>>28028365
Beep
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>>28029148
Boop
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>>28028210
Go on...
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>>28028210
>You couldn't.
>You tried saying something, but it came out as nothing more than some embarrassing squealing noises.
>She giggles as you do.
>"You can touch the other one too."
>She says between heavy pants.
>You're not sure what you were thinking, actually, you do.
>You weren't thinking.
>And with that in mind, or lack there of, you took her suggestion.
>You squealed as it made contact.
>You were both beyond being embarrassed at this point.
>Not like anyone was watching.
>Her kissing you was less surprising this time.
>Sloppy and inexperienced yes, but not surprising.
>You're too entranced to care.
>You're also finding it hard to focus on anything else.
>But when you feel something touch between your legs, you do manage to focus on that, and Sweetie easily focuses on your gasp.
>"Relax, you're okay right?"
>You nod.
>"Then calm down, just, if you don't feel okay with anything, please say something okay?"
"Okay.."
>She flashes you a flushed smile and gets back to your garment.
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>>27957186
>After searching a few songs, she puts down her earbuds.
>”It’s fine.”
“Which ones?”
>”It is all fine, I’m not picky.” Fluttershy grabs her fork and mixes her salad.
“Why? You aren’t going to tell me that any of it is mediocre or crap?”
>”No, I’ve listened to different things from my friends, I really don’t mind it at all.”
“You’ll listen to any type of music.”
>”Most of them, there are others that I couldn’t get used to.”
“Let me guess; screamo?”
>”I honestly don’t know what that is.”
“Trust me, you don’t want to search that up.”
>You grab a breadstick and munch on it.
>”How is it?”
“It’s shit.”
>”The breadstick?”
“Oh no, it’s still good.”
>You keep on eating it, waiting for your steak to come by.
>”Do you still listen to all of these?” She waives your phone around, pointing at the playlist.
“I do, but I prefer to listen to it in the car.”
>You slam your head on the table, reminding yourself that they were lost in a fire.
>”At least you have them in your phone.”
“Flutters, there is a difference to downloading something, and having it right in your hands. One of those albums was a limited edition.”
>”Anon, it’s just--”
“IT WAS A LIMITED EDITION!”

>>27957207
>>27958264
>>27959971
I was actually impressed. Nice job, Anons.

>>27970535
I get you, i really do. The same thing goes for me. Do your best to finish your work, there is an Anon or two who would love to see them completed.

>>28020546
Whoops, sorry. A lot came through and now I worry about the future.

>>28005551
Dinner and a movie first, pal.
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>"So tell me... Why do ~you~ think you have these suicidal thoughts?"
"Well, I believe it is from a neglect from my peers, schoolmates, friends, and office mates in the general working environment."
"I also believe that such neglect led me to be anti-social, which subsequently makes it so I can't express my emotions properly. When they get built up, I feel the need to release them, you know?"
"S-sometimes it's just thoughts of suicide, or hurting little rabbits and squirrels."
>"Uh-huh. Well Mr. *cough*, I think you need to find a proper outlet to vent these emotions."
"Yes sir."
>"I think we should have a few more meetings. We covered some good stuff today, but I definitely think we should discuss this further to better prepare for the future."
"Yes, of course."
"Thanks for seeing me, sir."
>"Any time, Mr. *cough*. See you in a few weeks!"
"Looking forward to it..."
>
>"How was it?"
"Same shit as always."
>"Did you have fun?"
"Christ, shy, no I did not have fun."
>"Well you should definitely work towards bettering your mood."
"Alright, don't fucking play with me. It's your fault I'm even in this-
>"Who do you think you're talking to?!"
"Don't fucking do that, that's in the past. It's literally just me and you, you should be over this by now."
>"W-well, I just figur-
"Yeah well just fucking figure out how to become a normal person."
>
>The car ride is relatively silent.
>
"Ughh... I'm not going to apologize, but you know I'm sorry."
>"It's okay, you've done all this for me, anyways. I should thank you."
"Yeah you should. I mean, it really isn't like you got us into this or anything."
"How did it start again?"
>"What do you mean?"
"Didn't it have something to do between classes? Or was it before school started?"
>"It was on a weekend."
"Oh right... Now I remember... Just like it was yesterday....."
>
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>>28032936
>"Hey y-you!"
>>"Yeah, go get 'em Fluttershy!"
>You look up and don't see much.
"Heeyy, you"
>"Uhh, y-yeah! You! R-run your pockets--... uhh..."
>>"C'mon shy! Say it, you got this!"
"Who's yelling fro-
>"Yeah, run y-your, run your pockets, n-nigga!"
"Hoooh, waitaminute...."
>>"Haha yeah, she's doing it!"
>>"I think she just might stand a chance...."
"No! Give me yo change, f-fool!"
>Holy shit, who is this bitch.
"No?"
>"O-oh, um, well, see I... um.."
>>"Oh, damn it! she's doing it again!"
>>"Told you it wouldn't work, Dash."
>"AHA!" Ahh, someone pops out of a bush... What a disguise.
"Oh, I didn't see you there...." If you could roll your eyes in any other direction you would've.
>"I'm, um, I'm sorry Rai-
>"No time for that! We gotta leave!" And with this the two women rush off, leaving just one behind.
"So are you gonna explain what just happened... Or...?"
>"I-I don't even know dude. Just know that it's probably going to happen again tomorrow or next week."
"So, some girl just comes up to me and starts throwing around terms she can't use, for no reason?"
>"Look, it's part of some experiment or something. They picked you... I really don't know. Anyways kid, I'm leaving, just be careful I guess."
"The fuck...?"
>It's best to let this go. Just wait till tomorrow and hope for the better... Or just stay inside. That always works, sometimes...

continue? y/n
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>>28032939
Interesting, please do.
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>>28032939
Yeah, go for it. We need more stories.
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>page 9
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>>28032939
I'm interested.
Check your dialogues.
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>>28032817
>“Flutters, there is a difference to downloading something, and having it right in your hands. One of those albums was a limited edition.”
>”Anon, it’s just--”
>“IT WAS A LIMITED EDITION!”
ANON: AUTISM UNLIMITED!
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>>28034121
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>>28032939
Cute/10
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>>28035232
Nice bump faget
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>>28032939
keep going
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>>28032939
>You come to a red light.
"Ah, damn, thinking on it, that was pretty funny, but weird."
>"Well, I tried my best, you know."
"Yeah, and your best wasn't good enough."
"Regardless, then after that was at the school, right?"
>"Yeah, you and your friends were gathered outside and..."
"Oh yeah, that shit was wild! I didn't even know you could rap..."
>
>"Check it, check it, one two, the tight mic crew's about to have fun wit' you,
Spittin' for fun, nothin' to do, just 3 guys comin' out of the blue..."
"Haha, alright, alright..."
>"Okay let's hear it." Your friend says.
"Yo, yo... My na-"
>"HEY, YOU!"
>Who dares to interrupt me?
>Oh damn, it's ~her~ again.
>"Who's this chick?"
>"I don't know."
"It's this girl, ugh..."
>"What, your girlfriend or something?"
"No! she's just-" Bitch cuts you off.
>"Hey, don't think I forgot about yester-" Bitch gets cut off, thankfully.
>"Listen, I don't care if your best friends with *cough* or not, but if you're gonna interrupt the cypher, you're gonna have to spit somethin'."
>Oh lord please no, this is going to be so embarrassing.
>"Oh, a-are you guys rapping?"
>"Duh, what did you think we were doing? Having a circle jerk?"
>Damn, harsh.
>"Okay, fine, I'll rap. After that I wan-"
>"Then hurry up."
"I-I... don't know what to expect..." You really don't, but it should be either funny or cringy, either one is good enough.
>"Wait, what's your name?"
>"I-it's Fluttershy..." She sure does sound shy.
>"Okay, go."
>She clears her throat...
>"Yo... I hold my rosary close to me,
but with the weight of the world, it feels like somethin' is chokin' me,
A better life is what I hope to see, maybe a prince to elope with me, hopeful~ly with ease,
but I never get it, even when I say 'please',
I just get abused and used, like bruised electric tool wit' a short fuse,
yet even then- I refuse to lose...."
>Oh fuck!
>"DAAAMN, GIRL!"
>"Oh Shit dude! That was fucking ace!" Your friends are way too excited, but for good reason.
>"Y-you, liked it?"
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>>28039660
Damn, I forgot how green text worked. Either way, that entire verse at the end is supposed to be green, I just suck at formatting.

Hope you liked it. It was just a one time story thing, but I wouldn't mind adding more laaater on if anyone else here enjoys rap.
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>>28039684
Go ahead m8
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I WANT TO CUM INSIDE 50SoY
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>>28039684
>rap
I love you already.
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>>28039684
Go ahead, I'm curious to see how this story would play out.
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>>28041730
this
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bum
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live
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>>28032016
>The feel the zipper skip as she undoes it.
>All these new sensations, the pressure it's-
>Starting to make you feel sick actually.
>You're definitely no stranger to that.
>Remembering what happened last time, you ignore it and feel the slight breeze as the first layer is removed.
>Her hands are too eager to get a hold of you, but not too rough to be unpleasant.
>Then you get a taste to what she must've been feeling the whole time.
>It's-
>Hard to describe.
>You feel too queasy to try.
>Once more you ignore it.
>This time you have to focus on ignoring it.
>It works, and the feeling of your bare flesh being exposed is-
"Urk!"
>You instantly cover your mouth as you feel the bile coming.
>As you try to make it to the bathroom, you trip on your undone pants.
>The fall manages to push them up though.
>You leave Sweetie in the room, confused and flustered.
>No time to think about her.
>Once you're close enough, you let it out and oh boy.
>It feels like your stomach is being ripped out.
>Jesus, you can't even stop it, it just keeps coming.
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>>28044549
The next time Fluttershy tries to rape him, he will puke in her face.
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dsfsag
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>>28044549
That's it! That. Is. It! You are officially below Dipper, Anon. You have my permission to die
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rApHi4F28eY
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>>28045544
Sick numbers m8
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>>28045544
k
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>>28039660
>"HELL YEAH! That Was Awesome!"
>It really was.
>"I did not expect that, sis!"
>"Uhm, "sis?" Fluttershy asks... shyly.
>"Yeah, I mean, you're cool as fuck, but you can't be a "bro", so you're a "sis." Logic checks out.
>"Yo, A-non, you didn't tell me your girlfriend could spit." Your friend says.
"I--I, didn't know...."
>"Well, if you, uhm, 'bros', wouldn't mind. I'd like to, uhm..."
>"Oh, yeah, yeah, Yo, A-non, we'll catch you after class, aight, b?"
"Yeah, duces."
>Your friends hurry off, you don't know why, there isn't much to do yet, classes haven't started.
"Alright, "Fluttershy," is it? What do you want?"
>She grabs and yanks your right ear... Pretty hard.
"OW! Chh, what the hell is wrong with you!?"
>She doesn't let go.
>"Give me your, um, your lunch money! Or...or... or I'll-- pull harder!"
"Jesus, this again?" You say as you slap the bitches hand away from your face. Disrespectful.
"What's up with you!? Yesterday by the store, now today?"
>"Well, uhm, my-my friends say I need to be more assertive...." Fluttershy says, looking down and away from you.
>You don't doubt it, but damn.
"Assertive?"
>"Yes. I, uhm, if you didn't notice, I'm a little bit shy."
>Yeah, a "little bit."
"Mmmm, no, I can't say I've noticed." You're such a great liar.
"So, you're just going to keep annoying me from now on, trying to be less "shy" or whatever?"
>"Well, not if you don- I mean, yes! Yes, I won't leave you alone! Because, because... You're a dummy!"
>Today's going to be a loooong day.
"Ughh. Alright, I'll be real with you for a few seconds. Introduce yourself, as you've heard, my boys call me A-non, but you can just call me "Anon," for short."
>""Anon?" Like, "Anonymous?"
"Uhh, yeah, something like that..." She doesn't need to know.
>"Okay, well, I'm Fluttershy. It's a pleas-- uuhh, it's not nice to meet you!"
>You know your going to regret accepting fate, but it's fate, so you have to.
"Alright Fluttershy, I just wanna say, you're a *really* good rapper."
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>>28049122
"That was pretty cool, and deep."
>"Thanks.. Sometimes I like to just express how I'm feeling through poetry."
"Well, you're good at it. Either way class is about to start soon, and I don't feel like being late today."
>Her eyes avoid yours.
"Yeah, so work on being more assertive or whatever, I'll see you later."
>"Oh, okay, bye."
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>>28049536
>
>Class is as boring as ever.
>The teacher is done with the lesson, some people are talking to each other, but right now you're just trying to relax.
>You start rapping under your breath, to yourself.
"Bored in class, waitin' for time to pass,
something something, fast, something blast..."
"Ugh, I can't focus" The boredom is killing you.
**RING**
>Convenient timing.
>Majority of the class quickly rushes out of their seats and out the door
"Finally." You say it eagerly, though, you still wait a minute to leave, those hallways are probably flooded with kids right now.
>"Have a good lunch, *cough*!"
"You too, sir." Gotta be respectful.
>On your way out of the class it hits you, you need to take a piss.
>Sucks, but food can wait.
>Is the bathroom to the left or right?
"Look's like I'm going on an adventure... Ugh."
>Left or right? Tough choice.
Left or Right?
Just kidding, CYOAs are that way >>28027738
>Ehh, fuck it.
>You decide to go left.
>The halls are pretty empty, the lights are flickering, some of the bulbs are cracked...
"Cheap ass school."
>It gives it a nice feeling, it feels familiar, but that's a story for another time.
>"H-HEY! ANON!" Shouts a soft familiar voice
>Damn, this again.
>You turn around and see the one and only, Fluttershy!
"Hi Fluttershy. What do you want?"
>"You're stupid! You know that!?"
*sigh*
"And you're a bitch."
>"o-oh, I-i-i- I did---" She barely manages to get the words out, she's choking up.
"Oh come on dude, you just came at me screaming and now-- ugh. How do you expect to be more assertive if you can't take the heat?"
>"Oh, i-it was just a test? Are you working with Rainbow Dash?"
"Uhh, y-yeah, and you failed."
>"I-i'm sorry, it's just I'm no good at being assertive."
"Well, there's your problem. Did you not see that one episode of SpongeBob? You gotta stop apologizing and be more direct."
>"I-I can be direct..."
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I was originally planning to delete >>28049536 and rework it, but the post was 55 minutes old, so no deal. I did however delete one segment, about as long as >>28050186. It consisted of A-non having lunch detention with some of his friends, but I felt that it could've been done better, so I just put A-non alone in class this time, so we can get directly into A-non x Fluttershy.
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>>28050186
"Alright, let's do a quick exercise. I'll tell you to do something, and you tell me no."
>"O-okay."
"Wrong!"
>"W-what's wrong?" She says cluelessly.
"You failed the exercise!"
>"Wait, that was it?"
"Yeah, and you failed."
>"I'm sorry, Anon."
"Don't be, alright, let's run it one more time."
>"Okay!"
"DAMN IT, SHY!"
>"Oh, was that another test?"
>You want to give up at this point.
"Alright, you're a lost cause. I'm leaving." You're done, you give up.
>"N-No! No, you're not!" Her certainty catches you off guard.
"Says who?"
>"Say's me! Now, uhm.... Give me, uh, s-something!"
>She tried.
"Nah." Time to play around.
>"You do as I say!"
"Nah."
*SWACK* (swack?)
>I know this bitc-- ~You~ know this bitch did not just slap you.
"Alright, I'm going to give you one chance... Never do that--"
*SWACK*
>This bitch is going to die.
"Fluttershy...."
>"Did I say you can talk?" Her voice, a lot more aggressive than before, halts you.
".... I swear to Christ, if you do that one more time I will rip your uterus out and give you a public hysterectomy."
>"Uuh- uh... I-I-I-I-"
"Shut."
>"I-"
"Up."
>"I didn't mean to hurt you, I'm really sorry, Anon." She says in the most sincerest voice.
>You can't stay mad at that, but damn, that hurt.
"It's alright, it didn't really hurt, just-just don't do it again. Ever. The next time you touch my face there *will* be problems."
>"I really am sorry, I was just tryi-"
"Mhmm, I get it, no seriously."
>You need a few seconds to calm yourself. Take a breather, relax, exhale, exhale, don't inhale, pass out.
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>>28050976
>Thankfully you don't take your thoughts seriously, otherwise you'd have passed out.
>Sure would be disappointing to someone watching from the sidelines and expecting you to.
>Oh well.
"Okay, shy, let's get this straight... you're trying to be assertive?"
>"Yes."
"And for whatever reason, I'm your target for assertivation?" 'assertivation' This is why you think before you speak.
>"Yes."
"Are you ever going to stop?"
>"Most likely once I get over my fear and become more assertive..."
"Okay, so never? That's just great." You can't be any more sarcastic. You try, but it doesn't work.
>"Well I would like to think that I'm...."
>You stare straight into her eyes.
>"...making some...."
>You don't break contact. You give her the coldest stare.
"...pro--....gress..?"
>You know that this isn't something you want.
"No... No, you've made some, I guess. I guess I'll just have to help you, just don't be annoying."
*sigh*
"Alright well, lunch probably isn't even serving right now, and if I'm not going to eat, then I'm not going to the caf'. I think I'm just going to head home."
>"But what about next period?"
"Eh, I have study hall next, I can manage an absence."
>"Oh."
"Yeah, I'll probably get some McDonalds™ and call it a day."
>"Oh, I love McDonalds."
>Did she just-? No respect.
"Yeah, McDonalds™ is great. Anyways, I guess I'm out. Wait, you got a phone?"
>"Y-yeah, I do."
"Give me your number. I figure that if we're going to be asserting each other then we should have some contact."
>"Oh, yeah, sure um... Do you want me to write it down, or...?"
"Nah I got this." You say as you sly-fully pull out your phone. You do one of those twists where it spins around your fingers and shit. It wasn't intentional, you almost dropped it, but you can pretend.
"Alright, so the number?"
>"Oh right, it's um, it's REQUIRES DLC PACK 3"
"Wait, is that with three *cough*s, or two?"
>"N-no... Just one."
"Oh! Shit, yeah, I got it now."
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>>28051046
>"...pro--....gress..?"
Should be greentext. I really need to check my dialogues.
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>>28051046
>"Wait, is that with three *cough*s, or two?"
Don't know why, but I laughed
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>>28044549
>He's so traumatised he won't be able to have sex anymore.

Poor dude
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>>28051950
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boopidy
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>>28044549
>Your throat starts to burn and your insides feel painfully empty.
>You heave air as the taste finally hits you, and groan as you slump down next to it.
>Tears stream down your face now, involuntary of course.
>You breathe carefully, scared doing it too hard with trigger it again.
>After a few more minutes of being still, you finally try focusing on something other than not spewing again.
>Immediately you know that this wasn't normal.
>Shocking, you already knew.
>You'd gone even farther without incident, so why only now did this happen?
>It didn't take more than thinking about food and pain to assume it was Fluttershy.
>You groan again and mumble.
>That soup.
>You absolutely had to eat it didn't you?
>Quickly, you remember the other person in the house.
>Looking back into the room.
>You see Sweetie shocked and confused.
>Can't really say anything to her.
>"I think hugs are just fine for right now."
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>>28053609
I thought he had PTSD or something.
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>>28052910
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>>28053609
I forgot about the soup. Although it's strange she gave anon the soup instead of sweetie so she could send her home and be left alone with anon.
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ggg
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>>28053609
>"Hugs are fine"
I honestly wouldn't blame Anon if he just hung himself after this
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>>28051046
"Alright, well, I'm out, Shy. I'll see you tomorrow."
>"Oh- um, well, I was wondering if I could go with you."
"Where, to McDonalds™?"
>"Uh, yes. If you wouldn't mind." She can just barely maintain eye contact.
"I don't know. I don't have cash for two people."
>"That's alright, I have some money."
>Damn, do you really want her following you to McDonalds™?
"Alright well, let's go then." You signal her in your direction and make towards the stairs.
>Well, you might as well accept your fate, like always.
>You both make way down the staircase and out one of the side doors.
>You heard it was going to rain, definitely looks like it.
"Alright well, it's a pretty long way to McDonalds™, so what do you wanna talk about?"
>"Oh, I don't know. Whatever you want."
>This gives you a thought
"Yo! Spit something."
>"You-you want me to rap?"
"Yeah. I don't know if I told you earlier, but what you spit this morning was really dope. Respect br- sis."
>"Ohh, uhm, t-thank you. I try my best."
>It's actually kinda adorable how shy she is. But you're going to change that. You're going to break her, tear her a new one, eat her up, spit her out, then face the consequences of the monster you just spawned. It'll be like the New Testament; should be fun. You hope.
"Aight well, go ahead. I wanna hear some more, if you don't mind."
>"Okay, but um, is there anything in particular you want me to rap about?"
"uhhhh..."
>!!! An idea pops into your head!
"Rap about some gangta shit."
>Holy shit, this should be golden.
>"I don't know, it seems out of character for me."
>You approach the end of the sidewalk, green light, you stop.
"Oh come on, please. Just for us."
>"Us?" She asks with an eyebrow raised.
"Yeah, "us," you know... Me and you."
>Who else would it be?
>"Well... If you really want me to."
"Yes I do, and it'll help with your problem. Getting used to saying things like that will make you more comfortable when talking to others."
>You're such a good teacher.
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>>28056721
Oh, this is going to be good.
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>>28056721
>"Anon, I'm just no good at that kind of rap. I don't think I could manage."
"What? That's the easiest kind."
>"Well, not for me. I could do any other type of style, but I don't think I could get an intricate rhyme scheme while trying to keep up with a gangsta vibe."
>Now she's getting all technical and shit.
"Ugh fine." You need to come up with something else...
>!!!
>And idea!
"How about you try rap battling me?"
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>>28056721
>>28057830
I realized I had no clue how to write gangsta rap. It was either no gangsta rap or over the top bust glocks 24/7 shit. So I copped out. Next time, for sure; in a few days. However, the rap battle looks much better than what the gangsta rap initially was, so look forward to both of those sometime this week.
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>>28057830
>"Oh, I-I don't know, Anon."
"What do you mean, you don't know?"
>"It's just that-- that's not really what I like to rap about."
"Aww, don't disappoint us now."
>"I just don't even know where to begin. I don't think I'm ready."
"Ugh, you're going to need a lot of practice before you can break out of that shell. C'mon, try dissing me!"
>"Oh, I could never do that Anon, you're my fr--"
"First off, no. Second, no. Third, this is a good way for you to learn. How about it, a little rap battle between me and you?"
>"But I don't want to hurt your feelings."
>....
>Did she really just..?
>Calm down, just go easy, let her think she'll win, then rip the victory away from her in round 2.
>A genius plan.
"Alright, how about I go first, then you just go whenever you're ready?"
>"Okay, if that's what you feel is best."
>You clear your throat. Remember, go easy, basic shit.
"Coming back to rap from Hell again,
out of the blue challenged by some bitch with yellow skin,
she thinks so, but in reality she's not a friend,
she couldn't even learn to rap if her skin had melanin."
>Some light work. Nothing special.
>"Haha, is that all?" She says in the most condescending voice imaginable.
>Fucking triggered
>She clears her throat.green text doesn't like me, so all of her verses will be black, start, and end with '//'
//"Yeah, okay, it's on me, I'm Fluttershy,
ironic how you rap tough- but won't even look me in the eye,
"melanin in my skin?" yeah, that's another lie,
so predictable you're the living opposite of a surprise,
standing around- rapping while your mom gets fucked by another guy,
I bet you he's splitting both her holes open while she cries,
and in the end she's just a living cum dumpster 'til she dies."//
>No words.
>No. Fucking. Words.
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Who do you think won round 1? Vote NOW! http://www.strawpoll.me/10902793
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>>28058537
Slap dat ass and say good job

>>28058574
Nigga it's 3 fucking a.m people are sleeping.
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>>28058612
Hey man, as long as you vote eventually.
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>>28057497
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>>28058537
Dayum, FS going straight for the throat. Time for anon to go all out.
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>>28058537
Daaaamn
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>>28053609
Kek
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>>28058574
damn
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>>28058574
Flutters a cute
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>>28054693
This
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Fucking Starlight spam REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>28065402
don't let her bully you
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>>28058537
>"I'm sorry if that was too much for you Anon." She says as she smiles.
>Oh, now she's cheesing.
>"But you look like you've handled it well." That condescending voice... It gets to you, but you need to relax, or your bars won't be as thought out.
>Oh, now she's cheesing.
>She's probably withholding her laughter at how she just took the first round.
>Talking shit about your mom... Damn. You can't spit some slut type shit, then you'd be biting her... Gonna have to go with typical shit.
>Round 2
>You don't even clear your throat.
"Fuck that, I spit flames,
your verse that last round? That shit was tame,
you're nothing to me- but another a game,
and here's the truth, your whole flow is lame,
and when it comes to your rhyme scheme,
that shit is plain,
I look at you- and I can tell you're jealous of my fame,
See? Your pussy's wet, and it's not from the rain.
And as your Clit Drips from the chainsaw in pain,
it'll teach you not to Ever Fuck with me again." again pronounced as "uh-gain", technical limitations
>Bitch wasn't ready.
>"Haha!" That laugh, again.
//"Is that all? Boy, you ain't raw,
and what was that shit about a chainsaw?
something something being in pain,
listen A-non, you're nothing but a shame,
it's ironic how you're the bitch- yet I'm the dame,
thinking you can beat me? That's just insane.
Real talk though, you think you're good? Bitch please,
you can't spit flames, you just freeze,
I'm too sick, I can even give the mic a disease,
that's two L's for ya, here- hold these."//
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Who do you think won round 2? Vote whenever you get the chance to! http://www.strawpoll.me/10911049
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>>28066914
But she is everywhere
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>>28067283
Flutters was lame тбх фaм
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Now everybody from the 313, put your motherfucking hands up and follow me!
Everybody from the 313 put your motherfucking hands up, look, look
Now while he stands tough,
Notice that this man did not have his hands up,
The free worlds got you gassed up,
Now who's afraid of the big bad wolf,
1,2,3 and to the 4,
1pac, 2pac, 3pac, 4,
4pac, 3pac, 2pac, 1,
Youre pack he's pack your pack, none
Thisguy aint no motherfucking mc,
I know everything he's got to say against me, i am white, i am a fucking bum, i do live in a trailer with my mom,
My boy Future is an uncle tom,
I do have a dumb named cheddar bob who shoots himself in his leg with his own gun, i did get jumped, by all 6 of you chumps.
Wink did fuck my girl, i'm still standin' here screaming fuck the free world.
Dont ever try to judge me dude, you dont know what the fuck i've been through.
But i know something about you, you went to cranbrook, thats a private school.
Whats the matter dog, you embarrased?
This guys a gangster? His real names clarence. And clarence lives at home with both parents, and clarences parents have a real good marriage.
This guy dont wanna battle, he's shook,
Coz' aint no such thing as halfway crooks
He's scared to death, he's scared to in his fucking yearbook,
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>>28068364
B. Rabbit vs Confusion was total slaughter. You can't help but feel bad, especially considering that she choked on her verse.
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>>28068392
Who's confusion? I dont remember him raping against them
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>>28068799
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mxODTOb2nlw
It's on the bonus DVD. There's 3 extra battles.
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>>28068819
Oh right, i didnt know that, inever owned the dvd.
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Page 10, not again
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>>28069925
GLIMMERPOSTING REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>28068621
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>>28069925
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>>28070135
This
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>>28053609
>You wanted to say something.
>Too bad you went right back to leaning over the bowl when you opened your mouth.
>She flinched.
>You spent the next hour sitting miserably next to the toilet.
>Occasionally leaning over to spit.
>Feeling disgusted with yourself.
>It did get better though.
>You spit one last time, and flushed it away.
>As you get up, you stumble once from the sudden movement.
>It was then that you got an actual feel on how it was.
>Your stomach hurt and wanted to clench on it's own.
>You couldn't look in mirror, just couldn't handle it.
>So you looked down the whole time as you tried washing your face in the sink.
>It helped just a little.
>Next you walked back into your room, which was actually surprisingly, to you at least, empty.
>You couldn't really do anything about it either.
>You'd just have to add it to the list of failures.
>Right now, you just wanted to lay down.
>You dropped like a sack right onto your bed.
>Probably the best feeling you've had in a while.
>Or so you thought.
>You hear some clanking and groan as you turn your head to the door.
>"Oop- er- sorry!"
>Sweetie stumbles with several things overwhelming her as she tries her darnedest to hold them.
>She moves carefully to the nightstand on which she sets it all down.
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>>28070594
>soviet filth
"no"
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>>28070594
Cyka
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>>28070594
That's a very cute cat.
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>>28067302
U ded?
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>>28075926
were all ded
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>>28078138
Neh
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>>28067302
Where are you faget?

>>28072615
>Sleepover
Dis gon b gud
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>>28067283
"Alright, that last line was pretty clever, I'll give you that."
>"I don't have much to say about your last few lines."
"Neither do I. Thankfully it's just a battle."
>You had crossed the street while battling, your pretty far down your path.
"Alright, so for the sake of everything, explain everything going on with your assertiveness."
>"Well, I um, I just need to be more assertive. I'm really shy, and I don't really want that to be apart of my personality."
>Think, what can you do exactly. You want to use her, but how...?
"Alright well, try being less nice."
>"Less nice. I've tried that before and it didn't really work."
"Nah, nah, see, what you need to do is be less nice and useless and be more relaxed but still respectful."
>"I-I don't think I'm following."
"Just try to mimic me, but be less of a biter and try to twist your own personality into things."
>"Act like you? I don't think I know how."
"You were on the right path earlier. When it was you and those two girls outside the store. All you need to do is just forget about feelings and let your mind go off."
>You try to sound as convincing as possible.
"Look, you know how you're shy, right? And when you start to spit it all goes away?"
>"Yeah?"
"Well, apply that to your everyday mentality. Act as if you're about to spit something cool. Be confident and don't worry about anything. You're about to get nervous, so just remind yourself that it doesn't matter in the grand scheme of things, and imagine yourself with the confidence of an emcee."
>"So, just talk relaxed and don't worry about anything?"
"Pretty much. Though, I don't know what that chick told you yesterday, but that shit is wrong. Don't listen to her."
>"Um, well, I'll see what I can do about that."
>Some birds fly by.
"Alright so try it out. And the more we go on I'll talk realer and realer, break you in a bit."
>She gives you a confused expression.
"Talk to me as if you were going to rap, but just don't rap."
>"Alright, well um, hi, Anon."
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C'mon men, keep it off page 10.
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>>28084449
Aye
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>>28082682
"Hey Fluttershy, what's going on?"
>"I'm just walking around, what about you?"
"I'm straight chillin."
>"Oh, um, well, how is that going for you?"
"It's chill."
>"Oh, that's good."
>You give her a face of expectance.
>"Uhhh, so, how has it been lately?"
"I've been good, B, just chillin and rappin wit the homies."
>"Did you do anything fun over the weekend?"
"Last weak I split some cat's wig for three hunned bones."
>"Um, A-Anon..."
"For real dawg, some daffodil-in-the-face-ass-nigga walked up to me and told me I was on his block."
>"Oh-kay, uhhm, A-"
"I straight up told the nigga "Yo, who the fuck you think you runnin on, B?""
"Nigga looked me dead in the eye like he was about to flex on your nigga. Nigga started reachin, too."
"I fucking played that shit out, I backed up, apologized, then the nigga made the mistake of turnin his back on me."
>"Listen Anon-"
"Bent down and picked up a brick."
>"Oh no."
"One hit and that nigga was down."
>"A-anon, you're just jokin-"
"I ran that nigga's chain around the block then hit the feet after hearin sirens."
"I tell you, these days, niggas just think they all that."
"Nah, but enough about me, babygirl, how's it been witchu? You tryna come to a nigga's crib, or what?"
>"...."
>She just looks at you in disbelief.
>Sometimes the inner hood gets to you, even though you're not hood in the slightest.
"Yeeeaaah, anyways. Just be real-- enough! Real enough. And don't be nervous and shit."
>"I don't think I want to take your advice anymore, Anon."
"Yeeeaaah, I'm not great at giving advice."
>"Hey look, we're here." She points out in the distance a bit.
>You look and see the beautiful golden arches.
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>>28085364
>You both walk up to the door.
>You proceed to hold it open for Fluttershy.
>"Why, thank you, Anon." She says oh so humbly.
"Anytime."
>You follow her through and take in the sight of a great fast food haven.
>It's pretty empty.
>You two proceed to the counter and you see a familiar face.
"Aayyy!"
>"Yoo! Was poppin my nigga?"
>You dap each other up.
"Ain't much, B.
>You look around eyeing down the menu.
>"Is this your girl?" Your friend says, catching you off-guard.
>You turn your head and your homie nods in Fluttershy's direction."
"Oh, uh..."
>Fluttershy just looks at you.
"Nah, she's one of the homies."
>"Wait... I think I recognize you." Your friend exclaims.
>"Do-- do you really?"
>"Yeah, aren't you one of Rainbow Dash's friends?"
>"Ye-yes. Um, how do you know her?"
>"I used to coach the team two years ago, I'm Spitfire."
>"Oh, hi, I-I'm Fluttershy."
>You kinda ignore their conversation.
>Just focusing on that menu.
>"Yes, I think I remember you now. Rainbow Dash used to always talk about you and the sports teams."
>"Haha, yeah, that Dash sure is something else."
"Uh huh..."
>"Anyways, what do you two want?"
"Finally. Let me get some fries, like, 2 of those shits, and some nuggets, like 10 or something."
>"Alright, usual. What about you?"
>"Oh um, can I get a salad-
>Wait... What?
- some fries, and a coke. Make it medium, please."
>"Alright... That will be $14.16 and $0.70 is your tax, coming out to $14.86."
>As Fluttershy is about to hand you the money
"Nah, it's all good. Here." You give Spitfire $15.
>"But Ano-"
"Shh, it's all good."
>"So are you gonna tell me what's between you two?" Spitfire abruptly says.
"She's a homie, that's it. Oh, and she can rap too."
>"Really?" Spitfire raises her eyebrow.
>"If you're hanging with A-non then you must be pretty good."
"Yeah, she's great. We just battled earlier, I mean, I won, obviously, but that shit was close!"
>"Really?"
"Yeah. Hey, Fluttershy, you wanna show Spitfire some of your stuff?"
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>>28085387
Qtshy is cute
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>anon puking his guts out
>FS rapping
I hate getting to threads late, what the fuck is even going on? How much would I have to read to get up to speed now?
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>>28086526
>what the fuck is even going on
Sexual repression and rap battles.
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>>28086650
/resume
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>>28085784
yes
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>>28088722
Dubs confirm
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>>28086526
readit
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>>28085387
>"Oh, I don't know. I've been rapping all day, but if you really want me to-"
>"Nah, it's fine. Save it for when we battle." Spitfire winks at Fluttershy.
"Yo, why don't *you* show her some of *your* stuff?"
>"Nah."
"C'mon, I haven't heard you rhyme in a minute." again, greentext is my enemy, so it'll be black text.
~~"Here, I'll start with this-
how at heart I'm a narcissist with a heart to quip,
catch you with the hardest hit,
and flow shit back at-chu when I start to spit,
but don't throw a fit,
because a mis~fit will get lifted,
as I'm forever gifted,
with the quick fix,
to spit some slick shit,
that's always apocalyptic."
"Fucking fire, dude!" Don't lie, it sounded pretty cool.
>"*tsk* That was nothing. See, that's your problem, A, you're to easily pleased. If you keep sticking to Dr Seuss rhymes you'll lose every battle you get into. Which is what I bet happened earlier, right Fluttershy?"
>"Oh, no... It was kinda close." Fluttershy says sarcastically.
>Ego ruined
>Some dude walks up and puts the bags on the counter.
"Ayy."
>"Mmmm, seems about right, well, here's your food." Spitfire hands it to you.
>"Well, you two have fun at your table." She winks at you and Fluttershy, you don't notice though.
"Sure can do, come on Fluttershy."
>She awkwardly hurries alongside you.
>"Eh, she's kinda cute. Good for him." Spitfire says as you and Fluttershy find a booth.
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>>28091903
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>>28092744
qt
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>>28092744
>You both sit down.
>You both pull out your food.
>You don't need to explain the rest.
"This is some good shit, yo."
>"Mhmm." Fluttershy responds with a mouth full of sauce.
"So I see you like salads, huh?"
>"Mhmmm!" she says while tossing around the salad.
"Yeah, I mess with salad sometimes. But you look like you're really enjoying it."
>She swallows.
>"Y-yes. I eat salad a lot, I don't really like to eat meat."
>A Vegan, huh?
"Yeah? That's cool. What about fish?"
>She gulps down.
>"I'll eat fish on occasion."
"Yeah, fish is pretty good."
>You downed those nuggets in seconds.
>You reach for your fries, downing some of those too.
>Fluttershy rips the box from your hand.
"The hell..?"
>"So what are we going to do after this?" She asks while eating your fries.
>You just sigh and look away.
"I don't know; I was planning on going home, but now you're here."
>She's still eating your fries. You don't really mind, but, it's just...
"So, are you gonna give me my fries back, or...?"
>"When I'm done." She says as if she's annoyed.
"Yeah, whatever. Seriously, I have no clue. I'm honestly just about to go home."
>"Alright, then let's go home."
>Let's?
"Let's?"
>"Mhmmm." Still chewing those fries.
>She swallows.
>"Let's go to your house."
"For what? There's not much to do."
>She gives you that "nigga, really?" look.
>Oh
>Shit.
"Oh"
"Shit. I don't know, Shy, there's not much to do, maybe play some video games or something."
>Sly
>"Well we'll find something to do."
"Aight, well, I'm done here. You ready to go?"
>"Almost, let me just finish my fries."
"You mean *my* fries."
>"Oh right, speaking of which, here, you can have the rest."
>She hands you one of her barely touched boxes
"Thanks... I guess."
>"Alright, c'mon, Anon." She hurries to the exit."
"Aight one sec." You hurry past.
>Make way to Spitfire.
"Yo, I'll see you later, alright?"
"Take it easy, alright?"
>You dap each other up.
"Whatever you say."
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>>28094782
L-Lewd
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>>28094782
>"Take it easy, alright?"
Should be greentext.
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>>28086526
A lot
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>>28094782
>You rush over to Fluttershy, opening the door and gesturing her through.
>"Thank you, Anon."
>You kinda just, ignore that.
"Alright, well, my house is just down a block or two. We'll be there in no time."
>"Okay." She says blissfully
>
>You both continue to walk.
>Nothing eventful happens.
>You talk about life, things going on...
>Haha, just fucking with yourself.
>Nah, you two were trading bars back and forth.
>Just trying to diss any and everything with your lyrics.
>It was pretty fucking wild too, but because you are A-non technically, you already know what was said, so you don't need to see it in text again.
>Either way you both keep on walking.
>Your house is coming up close.
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10
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>>28097969
-9=?
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>>28098947
7 :/
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>>28100132
-6=?
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>>28101560
8... it ain't great
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>>28097068
"C'mon, my house is right over there." You point off not too far.
>"Oh, the one with the-"
"Ye-yeah, that one..."
>You both walk up the path and reach the door.
"Alright one sec." You gotta get them damn keys.
>You swear this shit never works for you. You twist left and it unlocks, but then you need to twist right to confirm it or some shit.
>Whoever designed these needs to get shot.
>It opens!
>"That, uh, took long enough."
*sigh*"Yeah, I know. Anyways, come on in."
>You gesture her inside
>You go and close the door after her.
"Well, this is my place. Kitchen is over there, bathroom is over there, my room is over there, and well, yeah."
>There's a lot more to it, but she can see with her own eyes, no need to go in depth.
>"It's a nice place, Anon, I like it."
"Oh, thanks. Yeah, it's pretty cozy, kinda."
"Alright well, follow me to my room, unless you wanna sit around here."
>"Okay."
>You lead her into your room, it's a pretty big room.
>"Wow, I like your room, Anon."
"Thanks, I tried my best when it came to organizing and managing everything. Think it came out fine."
>Fluttershy looks around at all the stuff you have, from gaming systems and paintings to balls of yarn... It's a wide variety.
>You sit down on your bed.
"So, what do you wanna do first?"
>She walks up to you and sits on your lap.
>"Oh, I have an idea..." She says seductively....
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This part of the story gets pretty intensive. I hope you guys are ready for some sexy fun time.
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>>28103201
MADMAN!
IT'S A BLUE BOARD
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>>28103022
>tfw it was flutterrape all along
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>>28103022
>
>This light is *still* red. Why?
>"So then we both walked into your room and I started looking around."
"Oh yeah."
>"Then..."
"Yeah, you kinda forced me into it."
>"Yes, but it was worth it, right?"
"Yeah, that shit was cash."
>"Probably the best you've ever had, huh?"
"Ehh, I've had greatness before, but that ~was~ pretty good."
>"Definitely, we battled like animals for about an hour. It was probably the best feeling of my life!"
"Yeah, well, they say I'm pretty good."
>"Mhmmm, it *was* pretty good."
"Haha, yeah. So. after that we just talked right? Didn't you leave after that?"
>"Well, it wasn't for a couple of hours though. Remember, after about an hour we both went to sleep. After that I woke up at around 9 or so."
"Ahh, yeah. Then you started doing that- thing, again...."
>
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>>28103795
kek, you fucking fagette
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>>28103724
That's a very realistic robot(?)
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>>28103795
>
"...like a casanova,
no witnesses, Jehovah,
won your--"
>You hear a cracking sound.
>Maybe it's a dream...
>You open your eyes.
>"Mmmmmm." Someone is mindlessly humming.
>You focus your pupils.
>It's F̵̷͞l̷͝҉ù̶̢t͟͟͞͠t͏͢e̶̴̡̨͘r̛͢͠s҉̸͜͡h̷̀y̧?
>No wait... Your eyes focus a bit more... It's- it's, Fluttershy.
"Y-yo..."
>"Oh, Anon, you're finally awake!"
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>>28105107
"Uh, yeah."
>"Anon."
"Yeah?"
>"Go get me something to drink."
"Oh--kay..?"
>You walk out of your room, kinda just questioning shit.
>But hey, it's just some juice, or something.
>You walk downstairs, yeah, you forgot to mention your house had a staircase, or two.
>You walk into the kitchen, hit up the fr-
>Wait.
"YO! Fluttershy!"
>"What?!" She says like she's pissed.
>D-damn...
"Uuhhh, what do you want?"
"Anything!... Please."
>Uhuh...
>You guess she's working on her assertiveness, going well, kinda.
>You get some cups. Plastic, because she's a fake ass bitch.
>Walk upstairs, back into your room.
>Yeah, that's right, you got a mini-fridge that you just so happened to forget about.
>"Where's my drink?" She tries desperately to sound aggrivated.
"It's right there." You just flick your wrist in 90 degrees worth of directions.
>Foncusing bitches.
>You lean down, open the firdge and pull out a 40oz... of Coca Cola©.
>About a half empty 2L bottle. Well, half full, because you're optimistic.
"Fluttershy, you like this, right?"
>"Yes."
"You like everything I like, that's why ~I~ like *you*"
>You're done pouring your cups.
>You hand a cup over to her.
"Cheers."
>"Uh, ch-cheers."
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>>28105272
>Plastic, because she's a fake ass bitch
It's 3 am faggot, I can't laugh hard.
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>>28105272
>You both take a sip or two
"It's good right?"
>"Mhmm." She says, her mouth full of your carbonated drink.
"Yo, how long do you plan on staying?"
>"*gulp*-what do you mean?"
"We have school tomorrow."
>"No, remember, we only have school today and on Thursday."
>How convenient...
"Oh, nice."
>This is good, no school, nice.
"Well, what do you wanna do then?"
>"Well..."
>She kicks her legs back and forth off your bed.
>"I think I'm going to stay here tonight."
>Hol'up
>You almost choke on your carbonated drink.
"I don't know, I mean, I kinda don't have the house to myself."
>"Oh, will your mother not approve?"
"No, no, not her, she's gone. I'm talking about my sister."
>"You didn't tell me you had a sister, Anon."
"Yeah, no one else told me either."
>Fluttershy is visibly confused as to what you meant.
"Well, I'm sure she wouldn't mind. I'm not trying to say too much, but she might not even be here."
>"Oh, well, tell me about her, what is she like?"
"You met her earlier."
>5
>4
>3
>"Wait, Spitfire is your sister?!"
>Damn, 2 seconds off.
"Yeah."
>"When did that happen?"
>She can't be seriously asking this
"In the prequel" 8 mile parody starring A-non, Spitfire, and Derpy Hooves, coming soon!
>"Uhh..." She's really confused now.
"Ignore that. But yeah, she's my sister."
>"I-I don't think I would've put that together."
"Yeah, well, not many people do. Anyways, like I said, she probably.... won't be here tonight. So it's just me and you."
>"Oh."
"Yeah. Anyways, do you want to take a shower or something? I can give you some of her clothes... I... Don't think she'll mind- that much."
>"Oh um, yeah sure."
>You go off and get some clothing for Fluttershy.
>You give her some clothes, she gets in the shower, naturally you do the same... In the other bathroom of course.
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>>28106203
>You finish in the shower.
>It went relatively well.
>Except for the spiders...
>You're dry now, so you get your clothes on and head out back out.
>You enter your room, you need a drink.
>Hit up the mini-fridge and pick out some more carbonated drink.
>That shit is cash.
>While pouring your drink you here footsteps approaching...
>"Um, excuse me, Anon?" It's Fluttershy!
"Mmmm? Wassup?"
>You notice how she's keeping her arms crossed.
>"Um, Spitfire wouldn't happen to have any *other* clothes, at all?"
"Yeah, she has a few things here and there. Why, you want something else?"
>"Well, I--uh, kinda..."
>You gesture her to keep going.
>"Uh. Alright, excuse my language, but you didn't give me a... bra."
"See, Spitfire has small tits. And you don't. So, I mean, there isn't much I could've done."
>"Oh..." She says softly as her cheeks turn red.
"Yeah, sorry. Blame her, not me."
>"Oh- I couldn't blame her for something that happens naturally."
"Ehhh, not really. She does coach the teams or some shit like that, she's really fit. I think she'd be a bit bigger if she started eating more."
>Fluttershy is getting visibly uncomfortable.
>Guess tit talk doesn't tickle her teets.
"Aaanyways, what do you wanna do now? It's uhh--"
>You check the time
"Ten twelve."
>"We could batL?"
>WHAT
>You nearly died choking on your carbonated drink.
"I-I---I don't know... At this time? I'm kinda tired, but if you really want to.."
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>>28106611
>"If you don't want to that's fine. I'm kinda tired too."
"Man, then do you just wanna call it a night?"
>"I think that's a good idea. But um, where do I sleep?"
>You did not think about that.
"Damn. If you want you can sleep in Spitfire's r- no, no, no. Uh. I guess you could sleep on my bed... Fuck it, I'll sleep in the living room, I guess."
>"Oh, no. It-it's fine, I don't want you to have to move for me."
"Nah it's fine."
>You get up, about to head out.
>"Or, we could sleep together?
>Hol'up
>You almost choke on your carb- You ain't even drinking that drank man.
"You..." You pause for a moment.
>
"Do you *want* to sleep with me?"
>"Well, I-I certainly don't want to *not* sleep with you..."
"Alright, fuck it. The bed ~is~ big enough for like 3 people."
>Fluttershy carefully moves onto your bed.
"Do you want me to close the door or anything? Turn off the AC? Lock the windows? Paint the walls?"
>"Um. No. I'm fine. Thank you, though."
"Alright."
>You climb into bed, and get under the covers. Helping Fluttershy do the same.
>"You know, I had a lot of fun today Anon."
"Yeah, it was a pretty chill day, y'know?"
>"*yawn*yeah, I hope we can do it again, maybe tomorrow."
"me too."
>"*yawn* i-i think... i think i'm going to.... go to...*yawn* goodnight anon..."
"goodnight, shy"
>You think back... How did it get to this point?
>Chick tries to rob you, tries to beat you up and assert you, then she's flamming you in a battle and sleeping in your bed...
>It's like in those shows where people just become best friends after like 5 minutes of screen time. Eh, fuck it, now your life is officially a story.
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>>28106759
>The clock strikes midnight.
>You hear a blood curtling scream and the sound of rain drops falling.
>Your heart is racing. Palpitating at speeds unknown to you.
>You run down the hallway, making sure not to look back.
>You desperately try to keep pace, struggling to stay up and lacking depth perception of having one eye closed. You run, bob, weave, anything to escape. As you approach the corner you trip over something.
>You hear a instense cracking and land on the flor with a heavy thud; to which you lie for what seems like an eternity. Only remembering one thing.
>The sound of the rain drops gets louder and louder. At this point you can feel a puddle gathering around you.
>You need to rest.
>As you lie there, you take note of your surroundings. Something-- you didn't pay attention to before...
>The view of the moonlight shining through the cracks in the cieling. An ominous glow illuminates the path, but you're just so tired.
>At this point you can practically feel the water, but it's not dripping on you, or around you, no-- it's dripping out of you.
>You turn over, look down at your arm... It's bleeding.
>It's been bleeding, ever since you started this; ever since the beginning. Why?
>Only time will tell.
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>>28106759
cute/10
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OH SHIT
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live
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>>28107025
>Open your eyes and lean forward, stretching as you do so.
>Good morning Anon." Says a soft voice.
"Oh, good morning. How long have you been up?"
>"Not too long."
"How did you sleep?"
>"I slept great, actually. Your bed is surprisingly comfortable."
"Yeah, it's amazing." You grunt.
>You head off the bed for some carbonated drank.
"Alright so, what's the plan for today?"
>"What do you mean?"
"What are we going to do?"
>"Oh... I don't know. I figured you would decide."
"Ehh, there isn't too much. But we should eat first, are you hungry?"
>"No not really."
>Her stomach growls.
>"Okay, maybe a little."
>You let out a little laugh.
"Alright well, I can't cook for shit, but I have some cash, we can order something if you want."
>"Ordering out for breakfast?"
"I do it all the time. Unless you don't want to, that's fine."
>"Oh, well, it's up to you."
"Alright, what did you have in mind?"
>"Anything you want if fine, Anon."
*sigh*"Fluttershy, you have to stop letting me decide things. You have to choose for yourself."
>"Oh, right. Well, let's see...." She pauses, heavily in thought.
>"How about some.... Pizza?"
"Pizza. You want *pizza* for breakfast?"
>"Yes. That's what I want, and that's what we're going to get. And you're going to pay for it."
"Uh-huh..."
>You take a moment to collect some thoughts.
"Alright, what kind of pizza do you want?"
>"Something good-- hurry up and order it already, I don't want to sit here starving!"
"Why am I even doing this?" You ask, under your breath.
"Alright, Shy, I'll order it. Give me a minute."
>You hurry out of the room.
"Damn, this feels so odd."
>"What does?" Another voice catches you off guard.
>You turn to see Spitfire.
"Hey sis!" You exclaim.
>You attack her with a hug.
>"Okay, okay, relax. It hasn't even been that long since the last time, and I just saw you yesterday, remember?" She says sarcastically.
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>>28111925
>>28111962
W0t?
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Huh. I'm still new to the threads, what's up with Fifty and Church?
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http://pastebin.com/AnD2eSpi
Making it official.
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>>28111962
"I'm glad you're here."
>"Glad I could make it." She winks at you.
"Haha, anyways, I'm about to order some pizza, you want any?"
>"Pizza. You want *pizza* for breakfast?"
"That's what ~I~ said! But Fluttershy wants pizza, so, fuck it."
>"Huh, alright. Get me anything, you know what I like."
"Alright-- hey, I hope you don't mind, but I gave Fluttershy some of your clothes."
>"Yeah, I noticed."
"You cool with that? It was honestly a last second choice."
>"It's fine, she's a nice girl, I can't get mad."
"Cool, cool. Hey, what are you doing later?"
>"Gonna go to the field."
"Aight."
>"Why?"
"I don't know, I just... Ah, fuck it."
>"You definitely are something else, A. Call me when the food comes." She trails off into her room.
"Aight."
>You order the food. Not just any food, *pizza*.... For breakfast.
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>>28113288
>The food gets here, you pay, collect, etc.
>Realize that you have to carry all these bags and boxes upstairs.
"Damn, man."
>You make it upstairs.
"Alright, food's here."
>"Ugh, finally!"
"Alright, I got us a fucking feast. Large pizza, wings, fries, everything you could possibly imagine. So start eating, I'll be right back."
>"Uh, Anon, aren't you forgetting somrthing?"
"No? I'm about to go give Spitfire her food right n-"
>"Ahem." She angles her head towards the pile of food.
"Yeah, it's food, right there."
>"Aren't you going to serve me?"
>Oh, how times have changed.
"Alright, I will, just give me a moment."
>"No!"
>You want to question why this is happening, but your ignore your thou
"Fluttershy, I'm going to give Spitfire her food. Give me a couple of seconds."
>"Spitfire can get her own food!" Her voice is gradually getting louder.
"Shhh... Keep your voice do-"
>"Don't shush me!"
"Look, just keep Spitfire's name out of-"
>"Anon, you have till the count of five to serve me my food, or else."
>"5..."
"Fine, Fluttershy."
>You go up and get a plate- nah, fuck that, you get a napkin and put some pizza on it and just toss it to her.
"There, now I'll be right back."
"Damn." You say under your breath.
>You knock of Spitfire's do-- It's open.
"Hey, sis. Here's your food."
>"Christ, A, you know I can hear you two talking right?"
*sigh*
>"Mind telling me what it's all about.
"I honestly don't even know. I'm trying to help her be more assertive or something.. It's confusing."
>She turns to you are gets right into your face.
"Uhh, s-"
>"Haha, A, you're totally whipped!"
"What?"
>"You're pussy-whipped, A. It's pretty obvious."
"Bullshit, I don't even"
>"Then why was she sleeping in your bed last night?"
"...."
>"Yeah, thought so. Just remember, don't let her walk *all* over you, and if you need me, I'm here. Hopefully you learn something out of this."
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>>28112985
Like, what's in their stories?
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>>28113426
>You leave Spitfire's room, wondering what you got yourself into.
"Damn, man."
>You feel--for whatever reason--that this story is going to take a pretty drastic turn.
>It's a gut feeling. You don't expect much, but still, it could always go wrong.
>You move on back into your room.
>Fluttershy is gouging down on her food.
"How is it?"
>"Mmmph--mmmmm... Hmph!"
>...
"Oooh, kay... Glad you're-- eating? Whatever."
>"*gulp* anon, I'm going to need a favor."
"What is it?"
>"I need you to drive me somewhere."
"I-I don't have a car."
>"*gulp* that's too bad." She sounds way to sure of herself.
"Where do you need to get to anyways?"
>"*gulp*"
>How the fuck is she still eating?
>"I need to go meet someone, outside of town."
"The fuck do you need to go outside of town for?"
>"It doesn't matter, I just need someone to drive me there."
"Ugh, alright, one sec."
>You exit your room and head over to your sister's room.
"Yo, sis."
>"Yeah, I heard." She says, chomping down on some food.
"Do you mind?"
>"Nah, go ahead."
"I don't know how long it'll take. When are you planning to leave to the field?"
>"Doesn't matter, if anything, I'll walk."
"You sure?"
>"Yeah, but on one condition." She gets up.
"What is it?"
>She leans in to your ear and whispers..
>"........."
>"How does that sound?"
>
"I don't think I want the car anymore..."
>"Oh, don't be a pussy, A!"
"Literally or metaphorically? Because that's not cool, at all."
>"Oh c'mon. I know you want to!"
"Oh, no, please, stop. You're kidding right?"
>"Maybe... Either way, take the car, we'll talk about it later..."
"Fuck you, not literally, but... thanks..?"
>"Anytime, A. Now leave me alone, I'm trying to eat."
"Sorry."
>You hurry out of the room.
>Damn it.
>You head into your own room.
"Alright, I got a car we could use. When do you need to leave?"
>"Mmmm...."
>She checks her phone.
>"Right now would be good."
"Convenient, okay, let's go."
>"Wait, I'm not done eating."
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Before I continue, I just want to get some information. Anybody have anything to say on the story? Feedback: recommendations, problems, hopes, dreams? It would suck if Fifty and Church are taking a break and your only option is a shitty story. So tell me shit you like or dislike, and shit you want to see. Don't hold back, either.
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>>28114024
Just write, and ask later
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>>28114543
Thing is, this was going to be a turning point in the story. So I'd rather leave it open for a bit so everyone can get some thoughts in, that way I can better reflect on the story.

If I continue writing now it probably will come out with the same quality that its had since the past 10 updates. And we don't want that.
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>>28114571
I suck at giving feedback but I personally like it so far and don't really see anything wrong with the story.
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>>27937257
Looks like Carlos is a little to tied up at the moment.
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When does star wars general come back?
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>>28114778
What do you like about it?

I like the fact that it's funny to me. I don't think anyone has laughed at the story as much as I have.
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>>28114794
Yeah, I giggled at some parts too.
I like character interactions the most I guess, the fact that Spitfire is Anon's sister is also pretty unique.
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>>28114024
I'll be honest with you. Your narration is a bit strange. I don't know how to explain it, but it just doesn't feel like other greens I've read. To me it looks like this is your first time writing, and if it is, don't worry it's not that bad. Still, I'll keep reading. I want to know what you have planned with this.
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>>28113812
>pear
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>>28114024
Pretty much this.
>>28115643
2bh, famula.
Nah I'm not taking a break, I'm just busy, and your story isn't shit.
For what it's worth (which isn't anything at all really) I liked it, and want to see more rap battles.
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>>28115643
>narration
I was never really a fan of typical green narration. I like it when it's read, but it feels odd when I'm writing it. If am I catching this right, I'll try and rewrite >>28050186 in what I think is the normal/typical green narrative. Tell me if this is what you meant by my narrative:
>Be Anon
>Highschooler, rapper, & swag enthusiast
>Lately you've been getting assertified by some yellow girl.
>It's weird, but it's cool.
>She's kinda cute
>You might smash.
>Who knows.
>Anyways, you're out in the halls, the bell just rang for lunch.
>It's Malnutrition Monday
>You've waited a week for this.
>The lights flicker throughout the halls.
>Damn, this school is cheap af.
>No wonder the cafeteria is empty on Mondays.
>"H-HEY! ANON" Someone screams while whispering
>You turn around.
"Hi. Fluttershy. What do you want?"
>"You're stupid! You know that!?"
>sigh
"And you're a bitch."

If so, then yeah, I'm pretty different when it comes to this. Also, my dialogue is noticeably different. That's how I talk in real life, so if you see a lot of: well, yo, aight, dawg, b, yeah, oh, and nah, then just know it isn't artificial. Even in some lines where saying the words multiple times is redundant, it's glanced over in daily chat. You'd be surprised how many people talk like this. I'll keep in mind some things, though. Won't go overboard with certain aspects, but I'll stick to the plan.

>>28118138
>more rap battles.
Rap battles are so played out, I was thinking more so of "rap wars." Yeah, it's like a battle, only 1000x better.
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>>28119654
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Just a friend coming back to save page 10 again.
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>>28119654
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>>28122231
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>>28114783
Oh you!
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>>28121299
We appreciate it, mate.
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Lump
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>>28121299
Thanks
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>>28072615
>The smell alone calms your tense body.
>Although, it did kinda smell like burning, but it really wasn't noticeable.
>For the most part.
>It was still a grilled cheese.
>Definitely not the best looking, but whatever.
>"I hope you don't mind, I kinda used your kitchen..."
>Not at really.
>And you told her.
>"You should probably drink something. I brought you some juice."
>You spot the bright yellow fluid in the glass.
>Didn't really like it that much, but you couldn't complain.
>You took her advice and started on it.
>She went ahead and took one of the many sandwiches she made.
>You eagerly drank the bitter juice.
>Probably the situation, you didn't really mind it at all.
>So you two ate.
>Not sure if the same eagerness applied to the food too, but you thought it was alright.
>It warmed you up inside.
>Well...
>She did too.
>Once you finished, she was about to take it all back, but you halted her.
>You hated the feeling of being dependent on anyone else, ironic as that may be.
>You could take the dishes down at least.
>Not that you were gonna clean them, but that wasn't the point.
>After nearly slipping on the stairs, you walked back carefully.
>She greeted you with a hug.
>It only served to remind you of what had just happened.
>And that just made you feel sick.
>"You okay?"
>She asked as she still held your shoulders.
"Yeah, but I-"
>You suddenly felt a jolt of that sickly feeling.
"I just kinda want to lay down."
>"Oh, alright then. But."
>She stopped.
>"Maybe we could cuddle? You can stay on this side, just in case."
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>>28126350
>You hated the feeling of being dependent on anyone else, ironic as that may be.
Kek

CCpai fast question, this >green is going to be centered only in Anon, SB and Flutters? Or are you going to add more characters?
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>>28126350
Hurrah more CC!

This seems calm. Too calm. What are you planning...
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>>28129073
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>>28127264
Centered on them for the most part, but yes, there will be others.

>>28127996
You'll see.

Also sorry for spending like 2 months on the same day.
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>>28130119
>2 months on the same day.
I personally don't mind. A lot of things happen throughout the day.
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>>28113812
>Standing there waiting, you watch as she eats her food.
>Her teeth slowly and ever so gracefully piercing the thick layer of cheese, seeping through the next layer of sauce, and elegantly tearing the dough from underneath.
>As she pulls the slice away from her mouth you can see strands of melted cheese getting lifted by her soft hands.
>Chewing with style of mastercraft only the likes of goddesses can achieve, she swallows.
>"Okay, I'm done!"
"Finally we can lea-"
>"I just need to clean up real quick. It'll only take a minute."
>With that you exit the room.
>You sit down on the couch and think about some bars.
"Damn, that was pretty good. I'ma use that..."
>Stop talking to yourself.
>"Alright, let's go."
>You look up, Fluttershy is seemingly prepaired, time to head out.
"Alright so, we are going?"
>"Outside of town, by the burger place. You know the one."
"I thought you didn't eat meat?"
>"I never said we were going there to eat."
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>>28130788
>You're driving, on your way to this burger place. Really don't know what seh's up to, but Fluttershy seems to be fine with it, so you don't mind either.
>Though, you can't help but feel kinda bored.
>You're not your usual self. It might be what Spitfire told you.
"Shit." You shudder.
>"Hmmm? What's wrong, Anon?"
"Oh, it's nothing."
>Only if that were true.
>
>"Alright, it's just ahead on this street."
"I've never really been over here before."
>You pull up to a curb.
>Around you are some one-story shops, rails, benches; imagine a park, but like 20% less park.
"Alright, before we get out, what exactly are we doing here?"
>"I have a... friend... that I have to meet, excahnge some... information."
"Uhh."
>That sounds incredibly sketchy.
"Shy."
>"Mmm?"
"I need you to be real with me. If you're going to get me into some wicked illegal shit, tell me now so I can mentally prepare myself. I mean, I'm down, ya'know? I haven't done much since my rap wars a few years back, so I've been taking it easy. I'm willing to do some wild shit again, but I *at **least** need to know what's going to happen-- if anything."
>She gives you a look of confusion.
>"Uhm, Anon, nothing's going to happen."
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>>28132434
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>>28135148
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>>28131651
>Inb4 cocaine
>>28135148
-9=?
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>>28136870
9 again
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>>28137806
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>>28139775
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>>28140900
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page 11 bump
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>>28144412
Dem bewbs
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Sup, page 10?
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>>28146566
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>>28146566
Sick numbers m8
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>>28146566
cya in 2 hours page 10
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>>28136870
>Inb4 cocaine
Updates coming soon!
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>>28152233
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In the next update A-non commits a crime,
just notifying you cuz of page 9.
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>>28152233
Sick numbers Anon
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>>28152233
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>>28158780
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>>28146566
-9=?
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>>27937257
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it's been 30 minutes and already needs bumping
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>>28126350
>Hard to say no to that.
>No, seriously, your mouth refused to open.
>You nodded though.
>She smiled and started to take off her boots.
>You were tried to relax.
>Then she took off her skirt.
>You didn't really have the energy to react.
>"Aren't you gonna get comfortable Anon?"
"I'm okay."
>"You sure, it might help you relax."
>So you put on some pajama pants.
>You'd rather just do it than have to talk about it right now.
>Afterwards you groaned and flopped down.
>Instantly you felt a little sick, but it dissipated after a little bit.
>Then the warm sheets creep over you, and an even warmer pair of arms over you.
>You noticed that the lights were off now.
>Didn't think about it too much, but it was nice.
>Occasionally you'd still feel awful, but not enough to make you leave.
>Sweetie's embrace really helped.
>Her heartbeat helped calm you down as you thought about the day's events.
>Eventually her breathing became steady so you assumed she was asleep.
>You could feel the warm air hit your neck.
>That was all you needed.
>Without much effort, you joined her.
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>>28163084
Flutters is going to break in during the night. Calling it right now.
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>>28164038
Pls no
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>>27937257

if fluttershy were a human girl, i would kidnap her, strip her completely naked, tie her up, then play table tennis on her clitoris until she had at least ten orgasms
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>>28165427
It could happen.
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>>28166957
Or you could befriend her and learn what she likes and naturally kick off a great relationship.
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a rude shy
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>>28169441
I don't have any pictures of a mean Fluttershy, sorry anon.
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>>28170215
You disgust me
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>want to read green
>dont want to read green because it's giving me bad feels
>have to admit it's good green because it affects me so
>now im missing good green
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>>28172419
Which one are you referring to?
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>>27937257
boop
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>>28172419
Read the newest one ;)
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>>28173548
I normally write smut. Well not normally. It’s just that smut has been what I’ve been writing as of late. I’m gonna try and put out something mildly entertaining here. But I don’t actually like EQG so I’m gonna stick to regular old Equestria. Hope that’s alright.
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>>28174150
>You’re Anon!
>And you’re seven years old!
>Now that you were seven, you were allowed to go to the park on your own!
>And since it was your birthday, that exactly what you did!
>After all, a guy needs to celebrate.
>Which leads you to where you are, walking down the path at the park, all on your own!
>You live at Princess Twilight’s home for wayward foals, by the way
>Which was kind of funny because you weren’t actually a foal.
>When you asked Ms.Readheart what you were, she said something like a “Hyooman”
>It doesn’t matter too much though.
>You were just happy that they kept you around.
>Despite that, you kinda did wish somepony would adopt you already.
>Nopony at the shelter really was your friend.
>You were always called “that weird colt” or something like that.
>And most of the ponies that did make friends with you never really stayed that long.
>As you walked down the street, lost in your thoughts, you noticed something odd
>A rather large line of ponies…
>Looking through the commotion you spied a white cart
>The ice cream pony!
>Yay!
>Ms.Redhart always says that ice cream is bad for you.
>But that never really made much sense.
>If it tasted good why would it be bad for you?
>Silly Ms.Readheart.
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>>28174160
>Strolling into line you fished around in the pockets of your favorite jacket.
>Come on...you have to ha-
>Ha! Yes! Two bits!
>You knew picking these up a few weeks ago was a good idea!
>As you waited in line, you fiddled with the coins
>Finally reaching the front you stood on your tippy toes and tossed the coins on the counter
>The sales pony peeked over the edge of the cart and spotted you
>”Aw, well aren’t you the cutest thing! What’ll it be?”
“Uh...can I have whatever the best flavor is?”
>Honestly you hadn’t tried ice cream more than once.
>And when you had tried it it had been plain old vanilla.
>”Hmm. Well mint chip has been popular lately. Want to try that?”
>You gave a quick nod.
>With a laugh, the pony reached into the cart and pulled out a cone.
>Then he scooped out a generous portion of green ice cream flecked with black, filling the cone to the brim
>Reaching down, he handed it to you.
>Eagerly taking it you scampered away to a rather secluded park bench away from prying eyes, and sat yourself down
>Taking a lick, you contemplated the flavor
>It was... pretty good…
>Kinda like toothpaste, if toothpaste was supposed to taste good.
>The best part was probably the chocolate chips though.
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>>28174170
>None on the right.
“Uhm. Miss. There aren’t any animals on the bench.”
>”Oh, really? Have you looked in the mirror lately?”
>Oh! She thought you were an animal!
>Eh, ponies make that mistake sometimes.
>Ms.Readheart always corrects them
“Miss, I’m not an animal, I’m a Hyuman! Ms.Readheart says.”
>”Ms.Readheart? Oh, haha, you’re one of those ‘poor innocent foals’ who do nopony any good, huh?”
“Well I’m not a foal bu-”
>”Exactly. You’re not. You shouldn’t be there. Or here for that matter!”
>Shaking your head in confusion you looked around
“But I’m seven now! I’m allowed to go to the park.”
>Reaching out a hoof, she grabbed your wrist
>Her grip was quite strong, but the pain wasn’t your main concern
>She’d grabbed the hand you were using to hold your ice cream!
>”Humans should all just stay out of Equestria! We know what you’re really like!”
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>>28174187
>WIth that she pushed your arm up towards your face, smashing the half eaten treat into it
>Reaching up with her other hoof, she pressed the cone into your face
>Some of the ice cream entered your nose, making it hard to breath
>As she kept pushing the sticky mess into the spots the initial push has missed, you felt the cone crack against your cheek and your eyes start to burn
>And it wasn’t because ice cream was in them.
>Sniffing a bit, you felt a pit open up in your stomach.
>It was like you’d been punched.
>Thousands of questions flew through your head
>Why’d she do that?
>You payed for your ice cream just like everypony else!
>You should get to eat it!
>Were you doing something wrong?
>The yellow pony finally removed her hoof from your face, wiped it on your jacket and smiled
>But not normally
>It was a mean smile
>Like the ones the other foals gave you when they hid your clothes
>Or put hoof tracks on your chair.
>Despite your predicament you did your best not to cry
>You simply stared at the yellow pony in front of you and did your best to keep a straight face
>Aaand you didn’t even last a minute
>You let out a choked sob
>You’d been waiting so long to get that ice cream and she just ruined it.
“Miss, Wh-why’d you do that?”
>”Because. I want you to know what it feels like.”
>Sliding off the bench, you turned towards the park exit and began running, only for a hoof to stick out in front of you.
>Toppling over you felt your head connect with the ground, in a disorienting impact
>Then, that same hoof grabbed your shoulder and rolled you onto your back
>”I’m going to teach you exactly how horrible all of you are!”
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>>28174187
>A spike of fear shot through your chest, and your heart suddenly began pounding
>You only knew that because you could feel it where your head hit the ground
>Getting to your feet, you began running towards the park exit as fast as your little feet could carry you
>This honestly was like a nightmare!
>Thankfully, your running wasn’t somehow super-slow though
>As you sprinted through the park you heard several “oh my”s and “be careful”s
>Though you payed them no mind, rather you focused on your sole objective: Get back to Wayward’s
>No way you were getting caught by that killer pony!
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>>28174197
to>>28174192

Fucked up my linking again.


>>28174197
<3 hours later>

>”Oh Anon! Honey can you come out here!”
>Well you’d managed to get yourself home.
>Ms.Readheart threw a big fit when she saw you
>On the bright side you got to spend a bit of extra time with her
>Plus she didn’t even get mad that you got ice cream
>When you told her what happened, she said that she’d ask around to figure out who it was.
>She said that she already had a theory though. Some pony named raindrops.
>’She had it out for Waywards’ Ms.Readheart said.
>”Anon!”
>Snapped out of your little world you got to your feet and ran out into the front room
“Yes Ms.Readheart?”
>The motherly mare gave you a kind smile.
>”Honey somepony is interested in adopting you.”
>Your jaw dropped
“Really? Somepony wants me! Like me, or just a foal?”
>”Yes, you, you specifically!”
>No way!
“Who is it, Miss?”
>Clearing her throat Readheart shouted
>”Come in, Fluttershy!”
>The door at the end of the small room opened and in trotted…
>Oh
>Oh no.
>The killer pony!
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>>28174205
>Running up to your caretaker, you wrapped your arms around her
“Miss, Miss, she was the one from the park! It was her!”
>Readheart looked down at you
>”Anon, don’t be silly. This is Fluttershy. She’s a close friend of the Princess’ and the very embodiment of kindness. She’d never hurt a fly, much less you.”
>You felt a hoof on your shoulder
>Knowing what you would find if you turned around, you simply clutched onto Ms.Readheart with all your might
“Please! I don’t wanna be adopted anymore I want to stay with you!”
>The mare raised an eyebrow in surprise
>”Anon, you know that I’m not allowed to keep anypony here if someone is going to adopt them. Especially if the adopter is such an esteemed guest.”
>Feeling the hoof from your shoulder snake down and wrap around your torso you began panicking.
>”Come on, Anon, I’ll take good care of you. You’ll learn a lot.”
>Ms.Readheart leaned down and gave you a kiss on the forehead.
>”You can always come back and visit, okay Anon?”
>Deciding that maybe Miss was right, and it was just a fluke in the park, you let go.
>After all, you’d always wanted to be adopted.
>This was a dream come true.
>Right?


That's all I really wrote so far.

Essentially Cont.? Or does this thread have its fill of write fags?
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>>28174215
Please do.

Anon, there can never be too many writers.

Also.
I thought about Keemstar the entire time.
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>>28174215
Please continue, we need not humanized Bullyshy.
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>>28174215
There's never enough.

>>28174841
It's filling your taste, so don't count for "we"
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>>28174841
>we need not humanized Bullyshy.
I don't know, it doesn't do much for me personally.

Also, tOWNWS, how the fuck do I read this? The replies are all over the place.
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>>28175976
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>>28177267
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>>28174215
Am I gay If I think that this Anon sounds/acts cute as fuck?
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>>28174170
AWWWWWW
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>>28178496
Glad you like it, gotta admit, it's satisfying writing a cute kidanon

>>28178496
Nope.
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>>28179688
Nice, I was scared.
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Best ass.
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hey 50shadesof fag when are you updating the pastebin

last threads deleted so the story is broken up now
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Damn. I forgot all about this thread.
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And bump
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Let this thread rest in peace. It was beautiful when it lasted.
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>>28186507
Nah man, more updates are coming soon. I'm working on a scene right now, it'll be amazing! I just need a few weeks to organize it.
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>>28187407
Damn, you're an angel faggot. Godspeed.
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>>28163084
>"Anon!"
>You bolt upright.
>Your mother looks absolutely livid.
>Worse yet, nothing's immediately coming to mind.
>Can't really remember exactly what was happening.
>You feel a little squirming beside you.
>She turns and faces you, she also just started waking up.
>And like that, everything starts coming back.
>"Look at me."
>You turn to your mom, ready to start on the thousands of words it would take to explain.
>But you froze up.
>Your mouth just hung open.
>She continues to scowls at you.
>This was about the time Sweetie would start doing it for you.
>She puts her arms around you again and gets comfortable again.
>Before going right back to sleep...
>Welp.
"Mom-"
>"Save it. Just make sure to clean the dishes you use next time."
>She says as starts walking out.
>"Oh and before I forget, please thank Fluttershy for me the next chance you get, she must've left while you two were asleep."
>Then she leaves.
>You watch as she closes the door behind her.
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Rank the stories based on whatever criteria. If you want to go in detail, sure, if not, just rank on which you prefer.
>CC
>50SoY
>DITFAN

CC suffers from poor English. Many grammatical errors, misspellings, all of that. The story is really dark, and it just keeps kicking Anon's ass in each time, and I like that a lot.

50 is good at writing, not many mistakes. The story is comfy and has a nice theme, we don't know why they are after Anon, but they are, everyone is. Seeing how he deals with them is nice.

DIT has as many mistakes as 50, and the writing style is different. The intro was interesting, and rap battles are cool.

I love them all, but this is my list on the rankings. Post yours, they don't have to be detailed.
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>CC
>DITFAN
>50SoY
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>>28068621
I don't speak radiation.
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>>28068621
Uh yeah rush B
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>>28068621
Cyka
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>>28189608
Anon, I'm not gonna fuckin proof read.
And it's not because like, I want to have shitty grammar.
It's because I actually have respect for my readers.
I don't treat them like children, and I let them make up their own minds, and let them do whatever the fuck they want to do.
And have any opinion they want to have.
Alright, so keep babying your readers buddy.
But I'm gonna treat my readers with respect.
Come at me, imma fucking smack you.

Yes I did sit through the entirety of Keem's video just to make this reply.

But in all sincerity I don't really check it before I post, so you could probably chalk it up to that.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I must ask.
What about theGuyWhoUsuallyWritesSmut?

I like that story very much thus far.
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>>28192177
You really need new reaction pics.
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>>28184581
SHOO SHOO TITTY MONSTER
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Do you ever wonder what the original OP thinks now that this is what it is?
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>>28192177
>What about theGuyWhoUsuallyWritesSmut?
Not a fan of the story. It doesn't feel right not being EQG, ponies should be kept for a different type of story, and after reading 50 and you, it's become clear to me that EQG is the perfect setting for bullshy, ponyville is not.
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>>28193906
Yeah
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10, again, we need more content
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7 days since the last update. It'll be great when I get back in action! I'm still writing those rap wars and whatnot, hopefully they make the final draft. So here's some oc to freshen the thread; this is also what I think Fluttershy looks like in my story.
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>>28197945
Awww
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>>28197945
Hnnggg
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>>28193939

Sorry you don't like the story, Anon.

Maybe I'll have to write something EQG related someday.

For anyone that actually does like my story, I'm pre-writing now, and I will dump soon
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>>28201251

I need a fucking trip.
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>>28201251
I like it fampai.
I want to know how an abuse case would be in the "perfect" Equestria. I'm really curious, keep it up homolord.
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>>28174215

>>28202726
Yeah I really should read a few Bullyshy stories to see if they normally have happy endings or not. I need to decide just how badly I'm gonna have Flutters torture kid-Anon. and if he lives,

Writing this really makes me want to write/read a story where Fluttershy cares for a sick Anon and babys him. I'm kind of a sucker for fluff.


>3 days later...
>You’re Anon
>And you’re dead tired.
>Miss.Fluttershy has been working you day and night
>The first day when you got home she gave you a really heavy bag and told you to feed the chickens.
>Which you happily did.
>Even if lifting the bag was really hard
>And your head still hurt from in the park
>But so far, Miss.Fluttershy really hasn’t been too mean
>She just gives a lot of chores
>You kind of wish you had something to eat though.
>It’s been a day and a half since your last actual meal.
>Every Time you asked Ms.Fluttershy for something to eat, she just gave you some crackers
>Not that you didn’t like crackers, but they really didn’t fill you up.
>As you layed in your bedding, you decided that maybe Ms.Fluttershy just was busy and hadn’t had time to feed you properly because of how busy she was
>Getting up and shaking some of the sawdust out of your hair, you clambered out of the small plastic tub and began sauntering towards the staircase
>Walking down you saw your new caretaker sitting quietly on her sofa reading a book
>making your way over to her you stopped about three yards away.
>Miss.Fluttershy said that you’re not allowed to come any closer
>Deciding to wait until she addressed you, you stood quietly, looking at her
>As you did you felt an odd pang in your chest
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>>28202793
>You really wanted to get to know her better
>After all, the two of you were going to be living together from now on
>Who knows, maybe she’d even take you out for ice c-
>”What do you want?”
>Starting you looked towards your caretaker
“Uh, I was just wondering if maybe I could have something to eat, please?”
>Miss.Fluttershy frowned.
>”You already ate all my crackers.”
>Looking down in embarrassment you considered just saying you’re sorry and going back up to your box
>But your hunger outweighed your shame
“But, uh. I haven’t had anything for dinner, and my tummy is aching”
>Huffing, Ms.Fluttershy rolled her eyes and got up.
>Walking towards you, she suddenly pushed you down
>Surprised by the sudden force, and too tired to counter it you stumbled backwards and fell on your bottom
>Yelping at the sudden pain in your tailbone, your hands flew down, grabbing your hips
>”Stay there. I’ll get something”
>Still nursing your bruising bottom, you gave a grunt of acknowledgment.
>Your caretaker made her way to the kitchen
>After a minute or so you felt the pain of your fall subside, but the ache in your belly was still there
>But not for long!
>Ms.Fluttershy was going to make everything better!
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>>28202803
>Two or three minutes go by while you’re just sitting on the floor
>Just when you begin thinking that Miss may have forgotten you, she comes walking out of the kitchen doorway
>In her hoof is a plate with a perfectly cylindrical lump of pink...stuff
>You really don’t know what it is
>But Miss.Fluttershy would never feed you anything bad!
>As she walked closer, your nose scrunched up in revulsion
>Whatever that was it really didn’t smell good
>But...but that’s okay
>Ms.Readheart did say that you should be appreciative of anything somepony else does for you
>Even if you don’t like it
>And besides, it’s not broccoli or anything nasty like that.
>Placing the stuff along with a plastic fork down in front of you, she saunters past and sits back down on the couch
“Uh...Ms.Fluttershy?”
>”What!?”
>Oh no! You made her mad!
“Nothing! I-I just wanted to say thank you is all.”
>”Just eat and go back to your spot.”
>Deciding to take her advice, you picked up the fork and take a small scoop of the mystery food
>Doing your best not to breath through your nose you put the bite in your mouth
>As soon as the stuff hits your tongue, you have to do your best not to gag
>It tastes bitter, and sour
>The texture is slimy and has a raw quality to it
>And the noxious smell all but molests your senses from inside your mouth
>Deciding not to chew, you simply swallow the mass
>And then it hits you
>You have a whole plateful left!
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>>28202816
>You really don’t want to ask Ms.Fluttershy for anything else
>But...well you might as well figure out what you’re eating.
“M-miss Fluttershy? What is this?”
>”Meat. Human food. That’s what you people eat. Does it remind you of home?”
>...Why is she using such a mean tone?
>Is this some kind of punishment?
>What did you do?
>Well maybe you didn’t do anything.
>Maybe she’s just trying to be nice.
>But even so you don’t actually remember where you’re from.
>Your only home other than here was the orphanage
>But the food there was always amazing!
>Mr.Zest always made the best stews.
>And he’d mix them with rice, and everypony sat together, and would talk about their day and tell stories.
>...
>This stuff did remind of you of that
>It makes you miss it
>It makes you want to go home.
>Resigned to your fate, you held your breath and did your best to choke down what remained
>About halfway through your eyes started to water
>Not because you were sad, but just because this stuff was so bitter
>Finally finishing the horrible food, you picked the plate up off the floor, put it in the sink and wordlessly made your way back up the stairs at a slow steady pace.
>If you moved any faster than this, you knew everything you just ate would come right back up
>walking down the hall you made your way to the dark blue storage box that was your current bed.
>Stepping in, you pushed some of the sawdust to the side, and shuffled some of the newspaper around to make sure not too much of it got in your clothes.
>Pulling the blanket up you decided to lay there for a while before Ms.Fluttershy came to put you to sleep.
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>>28202832

That's it for tonight.
Yeah normally I do a lot more pre-writing but some stuff came up and, well, yeah.

I'm gonna go think up more ways for flutters to be a dick for this green, but I won't be posting much more tonight.
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>>28202893
Godspeed writefriend, I like your Anon. No homo
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>>28202893
Thanks for continuing, liking the story so far.
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