Teenage Flurry Heart

Is that story the one that starts off with anon as Celestia's "son"?

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>>27917175

>>27917227
ye

>>27917227
Yeah

rutting intensifies

>>27917175
I don't think Kid Anon as Snake is a faptastic story like the Flurry Heart stories...

I really wanna see what they do with Flurry Heart. We've seen so little of her.

>>27917175
I was wondering when this thread would be back. I need more teen Flurry in my life.

>>27917292
Kind of hoping TheFunBegins would see this and continue his story. yeah He got overshadowed by the Wandering Writefag but he still had a good story.

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>>27917350
I can try to continue my shit, hopefully the original writfags will come back.

>>27917361
Kek'd

>>27917383
Please do

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>>27918223
I didn't really have a lot to begin with so I'll just reupload everything.

>>27919476
>Be seven year old Anon.
>Working as an indentured survent for the Royal Family of the Crystal Empire.
>It's hard work, but you are grateful to Sir Armor for saving you from freezing to death in the Yakistani Mountain Region.
>You can't remember how or why you were there.
>Doesn't matter.
>Now you have a nice warm place to sleep and food in your belly.
>Working at a castle is better than being dead.
>Because you are so young you can't really do much.
>Help maids clean under hard to reach areas, put away equipment for the guards, small stuff.
>Madam Cadenza sometimes let's you sit with her and the young Princess for small breaks.
>The first time you saw her she was scared to death of you.
>Eventually though you both started getting used to each others nature.
>Wanting her to get some social skills, whenever you weren't doing work outside you would be Flurry Hearts playmate.
>A happy childhood friendship emerged from this arangement.
>However once she turned around eight she started classes on how to be a proper Mare and you then got a permenent job as one of the workers outside.
>Now it's ten years in the future and you now have a new assignment.
>Being Princess Flurry Hearts personal servant.

>>27919494
>Sweat poured out of your pours
>Not just from working all that day, but also out of sheer excitement.
>Your last day working in these fields.
>The feeling to be back working inside the palace overwhelmed your thoughts.
>With a plus to that you'd be taking care of the only pony that came close to being your friend.
>All the other work hands despised you for two reasons.
1. They all thought you were a freak of nature.
2. While they had to bunk up together a private shack was built to accommodate your size.
>Who's going to claim that shack now that you're gone?
>Hopefully that old donkey Rico gets it, he was never friendly, but at least he never said anything vulgar about you.
>That doesn't matter anymore.
>Tomorrow you are going back to the Royal Palace.
>It had been over a decade since you seen your old playmate.
>Hopefully she still remembers you as vividly you do her.
>The quitting time bell could heard across the field.
>And so the days work is finally over.
>Making your way back to the shack you feel a little remorse for leaving.
>Yeah they were racist jerks but you still...for some reason...felt bad, like you were abandoning them.
>Ohwell.jpg
>Time to move on to a greener pasture.
>Mourning came faster than a timberwolf chasing a rabbit.
>Like clockwork a couple Crystal Knights came to lead you to the home you truly knew.

>>27919912
>"My my if it isn't Anon, by Celestia you have grown.
>Sir Armor was always so sentimental.
>Before you were sent to the fields he treated you like the son he never had.
>All until his advisers finally pestered him to stop.
>'Maybe it be best to be a little more distant with the creature, what would the public think?'
>Even after all this time those words are haunting.
"Sir Armor. Madam Cadenza."
>Prostrating yourself.
"Thank you so much for giving me this opportunity to show my gratitude for taking me in so long ago."
>"I couldn't just let you freeze. Nopo...er nobody deserves that fate."
>"Anon, there is a special reason why we requested you."
"Yes Madam..."
>"Flurry has become very distant these past couple months, very reclusive. We want to to try to cheer her up along with your average duties. Can you handle that?"
"If my job is to make Princess Heart smile again I shall make it so."
>"Excellent my boy, you start first thing bright and early tomorrow."
>"Thank you Sir."
>You back out of the chamber never letting your back to the couple.
>Once the door closes you let out an excited scream and skip merrily to your room.
>Only to slow to a brisk walk when other ponies looked your way.
>Day ends and night comes.
>First day of making the smile.
>Walking to her bedchamber you wait patiently for her to stir.
>Waiting
>...Waiting
>After about an hour you knock lightly on the hard door.
>On cue they fling open and out walks the Princess.
>"Good morning servant."
>Geez somepony woke up on the wrong side of the bed.
"Good morning Princess, it's so great to see you again!"
>She somberly turns to you
>"Again? Have we met servant?"
>Guess she never really truly cared for your company back then.
"I know it was about a decade ago, but I was your young playmate before you were sent to Mare school."
>"Ah now I recall."
>This is going to be harder than you thought.

>>27919973
>Weeks go by and she is as cold to you as ever.
>Every passing day you feel more and more like her.
>With every monotonous task, every 'Yes Ma'm' said, you die a little.
>What happened to her?
>Back then she was so...
>"Anon, please fetch me some iced tea."
"Yes Princess.
>...down-to-Equestria
>At least she is saying 'please' and addressing you using your name now.
>Once your day of serving 'Princess Lifeless' is done you talk with Sir Armor.
>Finding him finishing inspecting the guards you wait til he is done and approach.
"Sir may I ask a question pertaining Princess Flurry Heart?"
>"Anon whenever we are together in private you don't need to be so formal."
"Thank you, being submissive all the time really puts a strain on my mind."
>"So what's on your mind my boy?"
>My boy.
>You haven't heard those words since you got sent to the fields.
>Holding back your feels you ask him.
"When Flurry went to Mare School who was her primary teacher?"
>A groan
>"Abacus Cinch. The most mind numbing tutor in all of the Crystal Empire."
>Cinch? That name is familiar.
>Through your eavesdropping over the years you have learned she was one of the most prestigious teachers in all of Equestria.
>"She apparently is the most prestigious tutors so me and Cadence hired her immediately."
"Well, she did make her become a proper Princess right?"
>"Yeah...a nice proper Princess."
>He looked a little disgruntled.
>Anon I have to go now, feel free to come talk to me again okay son?"
"Of course..."
>You cringe at him calling you that.
>Calling you the forbidden name that could 'cause shame to the entire kingdom' according to his advisers.
"...father."

>>27919989
"Good mourning Princess."
>"Good mourning Anon."
"Dear Princess, would you bless my ears with the tales of how you became such a graceful Princess?"
>Flattering a Princess is one way to get some emotion.
>"Well..."
>Success!
>She opened up.
>Finally coming out of her shell just like when we were kids.
>She talked about the classes.
>How much she 'enjoyed' them.
>What she said and how she said them gave subtle hints as to what she really felt.
>An eye twitch here, an ear flap there.
>Days go by.
>It's almost as if you were kids again.
>Almost.
>One subject in particular made her almost grimace.
>How and When to talk.
>Doesn't seem so complicated.
"When you want to someone, you talk?"
>"No, a Princess must show grace and be humble. Only talk when addressed!"
>She was nearly shouting.
"O-okay...surely at school Ms. Cinch taught you when you can relax? To enjoy yourself?"
>Silence.
"Can I speak freely Princess?"
>"You may."
"Maybe you should stop acting like a 'proper' Princess and act a little bit more..natural?"
>"What are you saying servant!"
>Servant
"What I am saying Ms. 'Princess' is that you should lighten up, have some fun!"
>You both gasp.
>She looked at you as if you were a criminal.
>Maybe yelling at the Princess isn't the smartest idea.
>Yet you decide to continue your assault.
"Is this what it means to be a Proper Princess?! Is this who you want to become? Some stuck up pompous snot!"
>"Anon! I am not the filly you knew back then!"
>She stops with a tear in her eyes.
>"I don't even think I can remember how to be."
>She turns to try to run but you grab her by the tail.
"Then let me help you."

>>27919995
I stopped right here at the last thread. Didn't bother to continue when the thread died. Since this is back up I'll have to gather my thoughts and hopefully write more tomorow if this thread is still alive.

>>27920608
Thanks anon, see you in the mourning

>>27920608
we will keep it alive, captain

>>27922209
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>>27919995
>For the next couple of days you try to find what interested Flurry.
>"A-anon I don't think this is working..."
>You stop mid-step with both hands holding lit candles with another one in your mouth.
>Hot wax slowly pouring down your wrist and dripping on your shirt.
"Yuuu terrr suuu gawaa?"
>She giggles a little.
>"Go ahead and spit out and drop the candles."
"Thanks, but you aren't having fun?"
>"It's a little more fun just seeing you get messy with wax."
>You take off the now wax stained shirt and leave it for the other maids.
"Well what would you like to do now?"
>A light grumble can be heard from her stomach.
>"How about we get some food?"
>We
>She wants to eat lunch 'with' me?
"I have an idea, how about you make your own food?"
>"What!?"
>She had a tinge of anger in her voice.
"What I mean is that we can make it together, maybe cooking is something you'd enjoy."
>Nice save Anon.
>"I don't know Anon..."
"Scared you'd be forever known as the Princess of baking?"
>Laughing at the jest she follows you to the kitchen.
>"Eyy Anon, you showing da Princess a 'good time'? Hehehe"
>Galfreedo the main cook always loved to give you a hard time.
>He was almost like a brother to you.
"Well I am not in the dungeon yet so that's a good sign."
>"Word throug da Cine is that da Princess has a ting fer ya."
>"Well let's just keep those words Galfreedo."
>"Princess! OH if I knew ye was paying me a visit err would've made dis place presentable!"
"Actually that wouldn't be necessary since we are probably going to make a mess anyway."
>"We? Wut ya two doing?"
>"Anon here is going to teach me how to cook a little."
>"Wot?!"
>"Go ahead and take your leave for now, we shall be fine."
>Before leaving he gave you a dirty yet sly look
>It's not like that!
>I don't think it is...

>>27923247
Just a little post before work, see you all in 10 hours.

>>27923492
See ya soon mate, story's comfy so far

>>27923492
I too am enjoying the story, although things do seem to be moving quickly.

>>27924785
I never really cared for long stories. Just short ones to get through the week.

fffffffff
bump

>>27919995
So wait, who the fuck died? And how are they mourning them so good that everyone complements each other on their mourning?

>>27926001
gave me a chuckle

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>>27926280
I leik dis Princess.

>>27917175
Eyyy its back

>>27923247
">So...what would you like to make?"
"How about spaghetti? I haven't had that in years."
>"That sounds delicious...what do we do?"
>Directing her to gather all of the supplies seemed a little funny.
>A servant bossing around a Princess.
>You were enjoying yourself being in charge for once.
>"Okay here's the garlic, onions, spices, and mushrooms. Now what?"
>A shit eating grin goes across your face.
"Go ahead and cut these onions into very tiny little pieces while I cut these mushrooms."
>As you dice your mushrooms you watch out of the corner of your eye as Flurry slowly cuts into her first onion.
>It only took a couple of minutes until you could hear the sniffling and low grunts holding back tears.
>You giggle to yourself.
>"This-s isn't f-funny A-anonnn."
>Tears are now streaming down her cheeks.
>"Jerk, I should have you thrown in the dungeon."
>ohshit.jpg
"Heeey now, it was only a joke. Y-you don't have to be so harsh...I'll h-help you finish cutting them if-"
>You got cut short by a dopey laugh coming next to you.
>"The look on your face is priceless."
>She continued to giggle as tears still dripped from here eyes.
>You never heard her laugh like that.
>Other than you almost shitting your pants, it seemed really pleasant.
>"Um Madam, Anon. I don't mean to disturb you both. It's just that I need to start cooking dinner for Princess Cadence and Prince Armor, do you thinkPRINCESS WHAT IS WRONG WHY ARE YOU CRYING!? ANON WHAT DID YOU DO?!"
>The face Galfreedo made out of terror must've been like mine.
>After seeing him jump I was practically rolling on the ground laughing just like Flurry.

>>27927341
>You both sit in a private room eating the dinner you both hopelessly tried to make.
>Probably should've let Galfreedo teach her.
>Sure am GLaD he was able to finish the dish for you both.
>The basil, onion, garlic, mushroom, tomato sauce on the pasta was mouth-wateringly delicious.
>You look over to see how Flurry likes it.
>She seems to be liking it.
>Though something seems off about her.
>More off than usual.
>"Thank you so much for this Anon. I-I haven't felt this happy in years."
"Flurry, it was my pleasure, nopony deserves to be miserable, even if it is going to cost you acting like a 'proper princess'."
>"No you don't understand, you are one of the nicest, kindhearted, patience po-person I know. From the bottom of my heart, thank you."
>She gets up from her seat and wraps both her wings across your body giving you a big hug.
"Aren't I the only person you know?"
>Both of you laugh a little.
>You take a deep breath processing the moment.
>Mission accomplished: make the Princess happy.
>Right after she releases you a guard walks in.
>"Milady, you're presence is required in the main Throne Room."
"Well Flurry, I will see you tomorrow yeah? Maybe we will find something we are both actually good at."
>"It's not like you can go anywhere 'servant'."
>You giggle under the jest and she follows the stern guard out.
>As you set out back to your room your mind wanders.
>Why was she requested at such a late hour?
>As your mind wanders about pointless thoughts so does your body.
>It wanders
>Wanders
>Wanders
>Wan-CRASH
"Ouch."
>Realizing you walked into a wall, you notice it was just opposite of the Throne Room.
>You hear a small discussion going on inside.
>Mind and body ache with curiosity.
>Eh why not.
>You put your ear to the door and listen.

>"Seeing your progression with Anon is wonderful Flurry!"
>"Yes, your father and I are so happy to see you show that wonderful smile."
>"It feels so good to be like this again. Anon is so wonderful!"
>"Yes he is, which is why we want him to be the planner for your 21st party."
>"That sounds...horrible."
>"What? Why?"
>After all he has done, all I put him through, we reward him for his work, with more work?"
>"Well honey when you put it like that, it does sound awful."
>"Actually I was kind of hoping he would be able to be an attendee at the party as my personal guest."
>"That can never happen."
>"But-"
>"No buts, do you have any idea what kind of image that would paint on this kingdom and family?"
>"Shinny, the image doesn't matter, a servant is a servant no more, no less. I just think it would be awkward for your suitors for him to be here."
>Suitors!
>Your heart almost jumps out of your chest.
>"Suitors? What are you talking about?"
>"Well sweetheart, now is about the time when a young colt and yourself becomes paired in matrimony."
>"With your newfound attitude improvement the young Princes should be completely smitten by you."
>"NO! I don't want to get married yet!"
>"It's too late, we already sent word to the neighboring kingdoms about your party, there is no turning back."
>While Flurry turns towards the doors you scramble back to your room.
>As you just close the door and get into your bed a knock can be heard.
"Hello?"
>Flurry is in tears.
>"Anon, I am supposed to get married."
>You choke a little.
"T-that's great Flurry."
>"No not great, over the past couple of months it wasn't you teaching me to be happy, it was you making me happy. Without you I don't know IF I can be happy ever again!"
"Flurry, I can still be your servant wherever you go."
>"I don't want you as a servant you dense knobhead! I love you."
>She dives into your chest and wraps her wings hard around your shaking body.

>>27928772
>I love you.
>Those words hit you like a dozen arrows.
>You ponder over those words until she looks up at you.
>"Well?!"
"Well what?"
>"Do you not love me too?"
>With all your might you want to say those, but years as being a submissive subject holds you back.
"Flurry, it can never work. I am your servant not your suitor. Imagine what this would do to your public image?"
>"You sound just like my Dad! W-we could run off together, you and me!"
"Flurry please try to understand, this is for the greater good! Think about your future!"
>She just stares at you with tears showering down her face.
>"Is this really how you feel?"
>You pause for a moment.
>What you say next can drastically change both her life as well as yours.
>"Yes it is."
>Flurry then puffs up her face. It turns bright red and the tears stop almost immediately.
>"Fine then!"
>In a flash she teleport's out of your room leaving you alone.
>Days go by.
>You haven't heard or even seen her which feels like an eternity.
>Why are you feeling like this?
>You want her to be happy with the Prince of her dreams not just some lowly servant.
>Yet regert fills your mind.
>Busy busy little brain.
>Worrying about what could've been.
>Trying to solve a mystery that couldn't be solved.
>Everything about you two being together was wrong.
>Yet whenever you spent time with her it felt so natural and right.
>As if you were a king who can do anything he wanted.
>As if you could ever be a king.
>This battle in your mind of doing what is right and doing what your feeling feel goes by for what seems like an eternity.
>Time goes by in a blur.
>Before you realize it the party was tomorrow.
>You still are worrying about Flurry.
>The thoughts overburden you.
>Your mind wants to be a good servant yet your heart wants you to continue to be happy with Flurry.
>You make a decision.
>Hopefully everything tomorrow will go smoothly.
>You hope you made the right choice.

>>27928930
Sorry if this all seems a little rushed. Because it is. College work is pilling up and I need to get it done.
I just have a dreadful feeling this thread will 404 on me before I can actually finish it.

>>27928772
Something that doesn't make sense to me is that Princess Cadence, princess of Love, is forcing her daughter to get married.

>>27928954

>>27928954
A little would be an understatement

>>27929752
You know i didnt think about that at first but youre completly right
Whats condonce doing

>>27933516

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>>27917361
Hilarity and merriment

>>27928930
>You wake up in your bed.
>Restless sleep.
>Suitors from all over Equestria should be arriving at any moment.
>Through your thoughts you hope somepony would see through your plans and stop you at the last second.
>But your heart still presses your body to commit.
>As the day goes by you meander through your regular duties and also help set up the remaining decorations.
>While you are putting up some streamers, a sparkle shines in the corner of your eye.
>Looking closely it's...
"Galfreedo?"
>"Shhhhh!"
"What are you doing? Shouldn't you be in the kitchen looking over tonight's feast?"
>"Dem other chefs are taking caree of it. We neeed tu talk."
"Look Galf I don't really have the time right n-"
>"I know what you planning, and it stupid idea."
>You freeze
"I have no idea what you are talking about."
>"Everypony will just think you are crazy. U'd probably spend da rest of yer life in da dungeon."
"Are you going to stop me then?"
>"No, I have bigger problems than your idiocy friend. Just wanted to let you know I won't be 'aving your back dis time."
"That's fine by me."
>With the days chores completed you head back to your room to wait for the party to begin.

>Be Flurry Heart
>You feel very distraught.
>Although you keep your composure and wear a bright smile greeting each guest.
>Ponies from all over Equestria are here.
>"Prince Ajabada of Saddle Arabia."
>"A pleasure to meet you unhindered one."
"T-thanks?"
>Unhindered.
>You have a feeling he came up with that on the spot to sound extra fancy.
>While it was a party for you, nopony seemed all to interested.
>The evening progresses and still the closest thing that ever came close to a conversation was one of the chefs asking if it was time to send the cake out.
>How rude.
>I may have not wanted to get married but I would think at least one pony here would at least try.
>Am I that lacking in charisma?

>>27934723
>A quick look to your parents show the same amount of distress.
>Father Shining has the happiest face plastered on, yet his eyes show daggers.
>Mother Cadence has less of a plastered face of merriment, instead she has the look of disappointment.
>I guess they didn't care for any of the suitors either.
>Looking around again one catches your eye though.
"Um herald, you never announced that stallion."
>"Madam I don't know who that is. He definitely isn't a Prince, I shall call the guar-"
"No, let me confront him."
>You get up and trot towards the mysterious pony.
"Ahem, I do believe I haven't met you yet."
>With an awkward turn he faces you.
>"Hello F-Princess Flurry Heart."
>...
"I know you know me, but who are you?"
>"I am Sir..."
>He pauses for a moment looking anywhere but your eyes.
>"...Falgreedo"
"Falgreedo? Really? Well Falgreedo would you like to join me outside? It's terribly hot in here."
>He nearly jumps at the opportunity to leave the crowded room.
>Once outside you tell the guards to leave you.
"So tell me about yourself, where are you from? Surely a handsome stallion like yourself wouldn't be caught without somepony here."
>He was uglier than a donkey.
>"Err I'm from the...Badlands."
"The Badlands?"
>"The desolate desert Badlands where nopony could possibly live?"
>"Y-yes..."
"Okay enough of this. My Mother told me horror stories from her marriage, this may not be the best of parties but you won't ruin it!"
>You glow your horn and shoot a bolt of magic at him.
>Before he could even protest it hits him.
"Stupid Changelings! Where's the rest of your nest hid-"
>You are stopped short seeing the ponies true form.
>Your mother and father jump outside just in time see what the commotion was all about.
"Anon?"

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>>27934909
shit is going serious

>>27934909
Damn it cadence, you are litterally the princess of love
How does she not see flurry and anon are in love

Boop

>>27934909
>Be Anon
>You lay on your back after the shock.
>Everything feels terrible.
"Geez what the heck was that for?"
>"WHAT IN THE NAME OF CELESTIA DID YOU DO TO YOURSELF?!"
"Keep it down! Do you want the other guests to hear you?"
>"I don't give a nmad about them! Why were you a pony?"
>"Yes Anon, why 'were' you a pony?"
>Shining Armor and Princess Cadence walked up behind Flurry.
>Sir Armor looks more menacing than he should be now that he is looking down at you.
>The only one who didn't say anything was Princess Cadence, who for some reason had a tiny smile on her face.
>"Go ahead and tell us Anon."
"I-I wanted to court Flurry as something more natural fitting. So your families image won't get tattered by me."
>"So your saying you want to marry my daughter!? Boy, what could've make you think this way?"
>"Please Shining hasn't it been obvious?"
"You knew about this?"
>"I am the Princess of Love after all. I just couldn't believe we had to throw this party to force you to make a move. Honestly I was starting to have my doubts in you. Turning yourself into a stallion though was pretty funny."
"Why did you keep quiet this entire time, all this stress could've been avoided."
>"Seeing you nervous and run around reminded me of when Shinny here first tried to court me. You see Anon sometimes the best way to get a mares true love, is to show it through your actions."
>"What are you talking about?"
>"Shinny, Anon practically went to the Gates of Tartarus and back just to try and get some personal time with Flurry, not as a servant to master but as friend to friend."
>"But me and Anon already had that kind of relationship Mom."
>"You did?"
"We did?"
>"Yes! Before a flower is a flower, it's a seed that needs water. Like Anon and me before our relationship can blossom it was friendship that was watered by love."
>"That's beautiful honey."
"Flurry, I'm sorry for what I said in my room and what I put you through these past couple days. Can you ever forgive me?"

>>27936845
>"Yes I can!"
>She wraps her wings tightly around your still aching body.
>"Anon is still a servant!"
>Shining Armor still had a begrudged look on his face.
>"How will that make us look if our daughter married a commoner?"
>"Shining Armor!"
>Princess Cadenza looked with furry at her husband.
>"Anon is no mere commoner, you found this poor boy surviving in the YakYakistani mountain range, he worked painstaking to help bring joy back to our daughters eyes, and even learned how to turn himself into a pony just to try to be with Flurry! How can you deny him the happiness he rightfully earned?"
>With a solemn face Shining Armor calmly replied.
>"Because he isn't a Prince..."
>Princess Cadenza looked on fire with rage.
"...yet."
>"What?"
>"What?"
"What?"
>With a smile Shining Armor calls the entire troop of guards.
>"Stallions, I want you here to witness me..."
>Cadence, Flurry and yourself have a confused look on each others faces.
>"By the grace of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna I name Anon my son right here and now!"
>The three of you almost have a heart attack.
>"All of you here are my witnesses!"
"Sir Armor...I"
>"Stand Anon. From this day forward you are now to be known as Prince Anon."
>You're speechless
"T-thank you...Father!"
>"Now that you are of royalty, wouldn't you like to tell my daughter something?"

>>27937126
>You turn to the teary eyed Alicorn before you.
"Flurry, from the first time I saw you smile when we were young, all I wanted to do is make you happy. I'm sorry it took so long for me to realize how much I truly cared for you. And I wish to never stop seeing that beautiful smile."
>You bend down on a knee.
"Will you marry me?"
>With a tear dripping off her cheek.
>"Yes, yes a thousands times yes."
>For the first time ever you both share an intimate loving kiss with one another.
>Standing off to the side Shining and Cadence watch happily.
>"What happened to keeping a clean public image?"
>"Cadence I would do anything to see my family happy. If all I had to do was adopt Anon I would've done it ages ago."
>They smile and enjoy each others embrace as you do with Flurry.
>Ignoring the party you both continue to sit outside enjoying the evening sky.
>This was the beginning of a wonderful loving new life.

The End

>>27937170
Well here it is, The End.

Sorry I rushed it in the end and I feel like shit for doing that. But I seriously had to start on my College work and I couldn't concentrate with this story on my mind all the time. Hopefully you all still enjoyed it just the same.

Also here's this.
http://pastebin.com/aZCfeyAM

>>27937215
Ending was sappy but i enjoyed it
Good luck with your work

>>27937561
Thanks the support and for reading.

>>27937215
I understand. I too cannot get a story out of my head until I write it. Maybe after all is over you can rewrite it on a normal pace.

>>27917175

>>27938032
I was thinking about going back later, but I like how it ended up so I'll just leave it be.

Plus I kind of want to move on and write a different story.

So now what? Both greens are done. Anyone have another idea for a green?

nah, this will be the last bump