Incestuous Relationships

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That new thread smell.

>>27840980
Only if you sniff the back side.

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Would Rarity be a good single mom?

>>27842711
>You will never share a hot chocolate with Sunset beneath a blanket whilst watching a movie together late at night.

>>27842938
>good
Would she do "anything" to keep her baby boy happy?
>Rarity noticed that her teenage son Anon is having urges and showing a interest in girls.
>But she doesn't want him hanging around uncouth girls or have his heart broken.
>What would any caring mother do?

>>27842971
>Rarity sends Anon off to boarding school.

>>27842980
>Rarity continues to worry regardless and the girls come up with a plan to sneak over and check up on how he was doing.
>To all of their surprise, they stumble upon Anon in a precariously lewd situation.

>>27842980
g o o d m o m m y

>>27842971
I need a green of single mom Rarity.

>>27842971
I need this.

>>27843105
>*tips fedora*

>>27843105
>It's better than vore,

>>27842971
Suck his dick, make him her one and only

>>27842980
>There's a mixup and Anon is sent to a all girl's boarding school
OR
>Rarity deliberately sends Anon off to an all girls boarding school because she thinks boarding school girls will be prim and proper (but they won't)
AND MAYBE
>Rarity gets a job there
AND POSSIBLY
>Anon has to cross dress to fit in

>>27843462
>>Anon has to cross dress to fit in
and thats where you lost me

just asking for a fag invasion

>>27843507
This toobeeaych familia

>>27843447
this please.
>"Darling just relax and mommy will make you feel good."
>Your dick twitches as you feel your mother's hot breath on your tip.
>"You grown so much sweetie, you're going to make some girl happy one day."

>>27843585
unf.

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>>27796145
>Just one more health shake, Anon, please
>NO PLEASE NO MORE GOD I BEG OF YOU

>>27843462
>Anon has to cross dress to fit in
Wasn't thhis an anime?

Who would be your mlp blended incest family?

>no hooves

This is why we can't have nice things.

>>27846285
Ebbin

>>27846285
I love Sunset Shimmer in all forms, especially as my blood-related sister.

>>27846291
What if I'm serious? ;_;

>>27842711
>Driving with Sunset beside you, you turn onto the parking lot for the local theater.
"Still can't get over how realistic their films are you know?"
>"It does suck you in pretty well doesn't it?" Sunset agrees before looking around the parking lot, "The girls should be here already, they live so much closer after all."
>You glance around yourself looking for the rather unique vehicles your sister's friends like to use, a few jeeps, some Toyota trucks and even a Prius litter the parking lot, but no Chevy Cruze that you remember Pinkie? likes to drive around.
>"Lemme just..."
>Looking over to Sunset you see her already halfway out of your passenger window as she sits on the door.
"Sunset!"
>"Relax, I'll just be a second."
"Just don't fall and crack your head alright?"
>"Worry wart." Sunset replies her dress flexing against her frame as she leans up to get a better view.
>..Admittedly you can see why /alot/ of guys want your sister...
>Your thankfully brought from your less than wholesome thoughts by Sunset suddenly bouncing on the door, "OH! I see them! Girls over here!"
>You start out of your truck as you look over in the directions Sunset is looking to see a small crowd of teens brush past you to greet Sunset.
>You smile at the sight of your sister greeting the girls with hugs and excitedly talking about the movie.
>Speaking of you glance at your phone and note the time.
"Girls, we'd best get into the theater, movies' gonna start soon."

>Quickly enough the party takes off for the theater bringing you into the crowd of teens as they surround you.
>Getting the tickets was a chore due to the line for some twenty year in the making sequel to an old film apparently, but your group managed it.
>Entering the theater you soon start for a spot that's relatively big enough for everyone to sit together.
>"Ahem, Anonymous Darling, if you don't mind. Could you and Sunset sit up behind us?"
"Huh? Why?"

>>27847140
>The fashionista simply replies with a coy smile before answering you, "Well I had thought if we set in a cluster we'd be able to better enjoy the movie."
"What's wrong with sitting on the same row?"
>"Shucks Anon, we've got so many of us that it be better to take a couple rows fer ourselves." Applejack chimes in nodding her head to the back of the theater, "Sides I don't like havin' to crane my neck back in the front."
>"Which is why I took the liberty of having us seated like so." Rarity replies as she points Rainbow, Fluttershy and Pinkie together on one row, herself and Applejack on the row before them and then finally you, Sunset and Twilight on the top row above Pinkie's group.
"...This feels really complex for a seating arrangement."
>"I don't know about you Anon, but Pinkie likes to talk in a movie alot." Rainbow says easily taking her seat with no fuss.
>"I do not!" Pinkie replies with indignation.
>"You totally do! We almost got kicked out a few weeks ago!" Rainbow shoots back before Applejack interjects, "Just whisper what ya'll wanna say for Pete's sakes."
>Sunset grabs your hand leading you to the seats Rarity picked, "Let's just go with it Anon, beside's the back of theaters are always the comfiest."
"Where'd you hear that?"
>"Internet."
>You shrug at that answer, "Fair enough."

>As everyone begins to settle in for their movie viewing experience Twilight stands up from beside you, "I just remembered, need to get a drink. Anon did you want something? Sunset?"
>"A Dr. Salt would be nice."
"Crack for me."
>Twilight nods and is soon followed by Pinkie and Applejack as they too remember to get something to drink and eat.
>You watch a few trailers as you settle back in your seat enjoying the rather vivid pictures and film.
>"Oh wow, that one looks like fun." Sunset murmurs beside you as a trailer about a man coming back to the jungle after living in civilization.
"You just like the way that Tarzan guy looks."

>>27847149
>A faint blush is on your sister's cheeks before she swats at your shoulder, "Oh shut up, that's not the only thing you know."
"It was pretty impressive that he's going up against that ape, thing is huge."
>"Almost reminds me of a Daring Do novel actually..."
>Before you can reply you hear Twilight coming back with the girls a trio of drinks in her hands.
>Waving at Twilight you start to reach for your drink and Sunset when Twilight suddenly stumbles drinks tipping out of her hands!
>SPLASH
>Ah damn it all.
>You wince feeling the ice cold liquid soak into your lap.
>That's going to be so sticky before the night is out!
>"Anon! Oh my gosh, I'm so so sorry, here I-I got some napkins..." Twilight stammers out as she uses the complimentary napkins that go with the drinks to wipe at your pants.
>"Twilight are you alright?" Rainbow asks looking over her seat as Sunset stands up helping to collect the drinks that fell to the ground.
>"Y-yeah, sorry I just tripped..." Twilight says face red as she pats your lap down.
>You help out by picking the ice cubes off your pants.
>You start to hand off the ice cubes to Sunset when you feel a gentle grope of your dick.
>Whipping your head back to your lap you see Twilight trying to clean your pants.
>No, couldn't have been...
>You go back to drop the ice off with Sunset only to find her glaring at Twilight.
"Sunset?"
>Snapping out of her foul mood, Sunset just smiles at you, "Yeah Anon?"
"You alright?"
>"Just peachy!"
>You start to answer when your little guard jerks again at the constant pat downs and quickly stand instead.
"Hey you know what? I think the napknin's aren't working, lemme just go use the restroom right quick. Thanks for trying to help Twilight."
>"O-oh, uhm, alright, sorry again about your pants..." Twilight answers with a heavy blush holding the wet napkins in her hands.
>You make a beeline for the bathroom, hobbling from the small party downstairs as you do.

>>27847166
Keep going!

>>27847166
>Brings back the drinks
>She's the thirsty one
Nice

>>27847166

>As Anon runs for the bathroom you watch him go just out of sight of the theater before whipping around to glare at Twilight.
"What do you think you're doing?"
>Twilight who had been looking after Anon as he went suddenly jumps in place before looking away from you, "I-I don't know what you're talking about."
"Cut the shit, why were you feeling Anon up like that?"
>Fluttershy gasps at hearing this and Rainbow taps the duo in the front.
>Twilight meanwhile just stays silent for a few moments before she manages to say, "W-well h-he didn't say anything about it right? So he must have liked it!"
>This bitch.
"Twilight, he probably knew, but didn't want to call you out on it. That being said, back off he's mine. You already got shot down you know."
>Pinkie tries to calm things down, "Girls, come on let's not fight? Please?"
>Sorry Pinkie, but your not letting your mate be claimed by another.
>Challenge me for Alpha huh, Twilight?
>Not happening.
>Twilight's face hardens then as she balls her fists up, "Yeah? Well if he's yours how come you haven't even said anything to him about it? Huh?"
>Ohohoh...
>You simply lean back and smirk at Twilight.
>"Twilight Darling, yo-"
"I already have actually."
>"What?!" comes from Twilight while the rest of the girls soon bombard you with more questions
>"When was this?"
>"Did ya'll yanno?"
>"W-was he happy about it?"
>"Of course he was I bet he danced for joy at it!"
>"Darling are you sure that he was ok with it?"
>"Applejack that's gross, why'd you ask that?"
>"Ah've been havin' a dry spell alright shuddaup!"

>>27847382
"Girls! Girls, calm down we're taking it slow, Anon doesn't want to rush into things. Thought I wish he would, tonight was sort of a date to test the waters."
>"I'm hurt Darling, why didn't you tell us?"
"Sorry Rarity it just kinda happened..."
>Looking back at Twilight, you see her clenching her fists in anger and stares back at you bitterly.
>Applejack catches on quick as she walks up to the row and gently touch's Twilight's shoulder, "Sugarcube, ya'll need to calm down alright? Ya don't want to do something either of you regret right Sunset?"
>No fuck you, bitch wants my man.
>You grab hold of those mare instincts that tell Applejack and Twilight to jump off a cliff then throw it off the cliff instead.
>Their your friends, remember?
>Taking a deep breath you let it out and nod giving a small smile back at Twilight.
"Yeah, I'm sorry Twilight I shouldn't have been mean about it, we cool?"
>You hold out your hand to Twilight waiting for her to take it.
>Twilight stares at your hand then up at before she crosses her arms and asks in a snide tone, "What did you even do to deserve a wonderful brother like that?"
>Jerking back in surprise you hold your hand as if burned.
>"Darling! That's going to far."
>"Sugarcube, Ah know your new to the whole friendship thing, but ya gotta learn to live and let live."
>That fucking little cunt!
>You don't care she's an alternative Twilight from your realm, bitch just spat in your face, metaphorically speaking.
>You start to walk over to that thirsty bitch a lesson in respect when Rainbow is there holding you back, "Sunset, no. Don't do it, it's not worth it."
>You glare at Rainbow in response, but she holds firm against you, "Don't, loosing a friendship like this is a terrible thing, so just don't."

>>27847387
>"Well? I'm still waiting on answer Sunset, I mean, sure I went a bit crazy with magical power, but that was just a mistake. You intentionally went and turned into a raging demon bent on conquering your home, so why do you get the brother that wants you?!" Twilight asks anger and the faint motes of something else lingering in her eyes.
>You strain a bit more against Rainbow, yet your soccer inclined friend holds firm.
>What does she even...
>You stop trying to get past Rainbow as you look at the sticky floor of the theater deep in thought.
>What's terrible...
>What's terrible is that Twilight's right.
>And you know it.
>As you twist and turn the thought in your head you faintly Rarity and Pinkie talk with Twilight about what she'd done.
>The sound of arguing starts to climb until you look up, locking eyes with Twilight.
"You're right."
>Like that the argument dies down as you say that.
"I don't deserve a brother as amazing as Anon, I should have been alone from the start. Heck I tried to do it alone, but he caught me grabbing supplies from my room when I was getting ready to leave."
>You wrap yourself in your arms as you think back to those panicked stricken times.
"I couldn't lie all that well with most of my stuff packed up ready to go, Anon just heard what had happened at the university and had come looking for me."
>Twilight leans forward intensely listening as you continue your tale.

>>27847402
"I mean, what was I? Just a stupid pony who wanted more than she could have handled and what do I do? Run for it and drag my brother into my own mess. I should have just ran for the portal from the get go..."
>You take a deep breath again the pity you feel for yourself is disgusting, yet you can't find it in yourself to stop.
>Until, warm arms wrap you in a hug.
>You look up expecting maybe Rainbow or Pinkie, instead you find it's none other than Twilight hugging you!
>Seeing the question in your eyes Twilight answers shamefully, "I'm sorry Sunset, I, I know what you mean, by bringing your brother into a mess you made yourself..."
"What do you mean?"
>"Before the games, well Shining and I, I would stay inside so much that Shining had wanted to bring me out of my shell, so one night he had taken me out for a dinner, I forget what we even ate, but I had seen some kind of glow from an alley. So I went to look with Shining and it happened so fast I didn't even see it, but Shining got hurt, bad."
>Twilight looks up at you with tears in her eyes, "If I had just left thing alone maybe I wouldn't have made that dumb amulet and nearly end reality..."
>Oh jeez...
>You hug Twilight in return.
"Twilight, that's...that's terrible, but heh, I guess we're both two terrible sisters then to our brothers?"
>Twilight lets out an undignified laugh of misery at that.
>Meanwhile the rest of the girls offer their own form of comfort.

>>27847409
>Despite the rather rough night, you think you've grown a deeper bond of friendship with Twilight...
>Though through out the whole spat, you're starting to wonder where Anon is at.
"Hey how long has Anon been gone? The movie's about to start..."
>You debate on going to check on Anon, but that would be a bit weird to be standing outside the bathroom waiting for him.

>Finally after fifteen paper towels and extensive use of the hand dryer, you're pants are finally dry!
>Though somewhat still sticky you can bear with it.
>Tossing the last paper towel away you head out the bathroom and start to make your way for the theater.
>Along the way you notice a large group of girls walk in talking amongst themselves.
>You simply pass them by intent on making your way for the movie when you hear, "Hey you!"
>Turning to look at the call you find a pink girl with green streaks in her blond hair that reminds you of Pinkie for some reason, "Oh you heard me!"
"You were talking to me right?"
>Hearing a few giggles from behind her you look to see her friends watching your interaction with an intense look.
>The girl also heard them and you can see a faint blush on her cheeks, "Y-yeah, of course, uh, hey so I was wondering, where you interested in doing something later tonight?~"
>...Is she coming onto you?
>Looking over at her friends again then at the still blushing girl you step a bit closer to her.
>Hearing the excited whispers coming from her friends start anew you lean down and whisper to her.
"Are you asking me because of your friends over there by chance?"
>The girl jumps as if zapped and looks up at you with wide eyes, "N-no! Of course not, that would be silly for me to do a dare like that!"
>Suddenly she clasps her mouth shut with a muffled eep.

>>27847418
>Cute.
>Coming closer still you whisper with a smile.
"Listen, I don't want to break your street cred with your friends, but I'm...seeing someone."
>Seeing the hurt look in her eyes you gently pat her shoulder.
"But, if I give you my number and you give me yours, you can show them up a bit. What do ya say?"
>The suggestive tone and confidence from before starts to make a comeback as she whispers back, "Can I sneak a kiss at least?~"
>In answer you kiss her yourself on the cheek.
>Beet red the pink girl hastily writes her number down on your hand and you do the same for her.
>You give a cocky wave to the group as they swarm around the pink girl.
>Huh, you never got her name...

>>27847432
>Heading back into the theater you soon take a seat next to Sunset who looks over at you in surprise, "Anon, what took you so long bro? I thought I was going to need to drag you out of there."
"Eh something came up, meet a friend. I think?"
>"Oh?"
"Yeah some pink girl her f- what is that?!"
>Pointing at the screen you watch as some old man is held aloft by a whirl wind of tentacles and speaks in a strained tone.
>"Something about aliens not having vocal cords so they need someone to be a mouth piece, but tell me more ab-"
>"Sunset, can you be quiet it's hard to hear." Twilight asks beside you.
>"Oh sorry."
>You just watch entranced at how life like the alien is as it uses the president as some meat puppet for it's demands and taunts.
>Though what brings you out of your trance is the warm feeling enveloping your hand.
>Looking over you smile as Sunset holds your hand playing with your knuckles as she does so.
>Leaning back you bump shoulders with her catching her eye.
>Smiling back at you Sunset slides more of herself over to rest against you.
>Applejack was right, the back of the theater is rather cozy...
>Despite the amazing sight before you and the feeling of happiness coming from Sunset you feel your eyes start to droop down.
>Even in the octane fueled fire fight against the alien threat can't keep you awake you nod off...

There we go, something to sate the anons, that being said I took some Anon's idea's into consideration, here's some of that result. Also sorry about stopping in the middle of updating, I kinda forgot halfway through while waiting for reply box.

>>27847444
nice trips

interested in seeing if the pink girl goes anywhere

>>27847444
Lemon Zest?

Not too sure otherwise. Do keep going when you can.

>>27847382
>>"Applejack that's gross, why'd you ask that?"
>>"Ah've been havin' a dry spell alright shuddaup!"
ayy
why they all so thirsty

>>27847432
Cute.

>>27847444
I'm liking this.

>>27842938
I've asked this same question about Trixie
(If you wanna check it out)
And it's produced good green, now I hope one of you shall do the same with Rarity

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>>27849126

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I'm rather new to drawing. so here is kitty shimmer.

>>27843462
Anon your fetish is showing

>>27847444
gotta say, I like how sunset's pony instincts shine through when she gets heated.

>>27843462
Is it wrong that I want this?

Well... everything except the last part.

You could have the school doing like some sort of experiment, trying to add few boys to an all girls school, see where that gets you.

So is Love and Powerlifting dead or what?

>>27850039
Hopefully not.

>>27849335
Not bad for a new artist. Try to keep your lines a little cleaner though. I have a friend who has been drawing for over a year and he still draws scratchy lines, and his pictures are not as pretty as they could be because of it.

Try to draw the initial sketch very lightly with your pencil first, then draw over it with more confident strokes.

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>Oedipus is back
>again
How do you keep coming back to life?

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>>27850537
We love it.

>>27850537
Because incest is always a hot topic.

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Would you be able to resist?

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>>27850897
You don't think I can?
Because I would.
Fuck her I mean.

>>27843462
Die.

>>27844096
Yes, it was only 2 episodes and it died.

>>27842711
careful, you don't want this thread to become a general
people HATE generals
how many continuous threads does it take to turn a thread into a general?

>>27847997
NOW YOU FUCKED UP

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Is this now a incest thread in general?
Cuz i've been working on a cousins story about flutters

>>27851420
All are welcome Anon.

>>27851420
Sure

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>>27851420
oh gosh thats adorable

>>27851420
w-who drew this?

>>27852119
Me, i also sketched OP image and >>27847997

>>27852173
You gonna post that Flutters story? Because anything with Flutters is disgustingly adorable.

>>27852180
Like i said
Im working on it, ill post it here with some visual aids like the sketch i did
Im more a drawfag than writefag so expect something a bit below average

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>>27851420
>cousins
Hope they live on the east coast so they can get married

>icthyosis

>>27852173
>>27852276
It's really nice. Where can I find more of your stuff?

>>27852940
Tell us!

>>27842938
>It takes only one swipe to fix messy hair in Flash land

I appreciate Zephyr even less.

>>27842711
why does it have to be incest? Why can't it just be a normal relationship?

>>27853458
because that's not a fetish

>>27852574
I don't get it what do the colours means?

>>27853773
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cousin_marriage_law_in_the_United_States_by_state
basically if it's blue it's legal for first cousins, and the redder it is the more illegal it is.

>>27853458
Because this is more HAWT

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>>27853458
Because normal relationships are boring and run of the mill.
An incestuous relationship has that "forbidden" aspect to it that makes it exciting. Moreover, I personally believe that people just like the romance part of it. Having two people that have grown up with each other, that have been such a large part of each other's lives basically since they were born, falling in love with each other is the ultimate romantic story. Throw in the forbidden part from earlier and you have the basis for a great story in your hands. Unfortunately, very few incest stories that I've read on this board explore that without focusing on the sex part of it. pic related, my face when we will never get a good incest story that focuses on the relationship they have with each other rather than on the lewd aspect of it

>>27853996
I mean, I could make one. I can't promise greatness mostly because 2/3 bottle of Sangria doesn't make for great writing but I can try, sob over it in the morning, and keep going.

>>27853996
>tfw trying to explore more on the relationship of the story instead of just simple now they have smut.

Why must you hurt me so Anon?

>>27853882
Incidently in my state it's cool if I fug my cousin, but I can't marry her...how exactly does that play out again?

>>27847997
>the guy with the Amerindian soungding starts drawing again
[T]
\/
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>>27854171
Sorry bud, I haven't fully caught up with your story. I've only read the beginning.

>>27842711

What's the artist? Google and iqdb can't find him.

>>27854584

Disregard that, I suck cocks.

>>27854584
Colorer is Marno on Derpibooru, in case you were curious about that.

>nayaasebeleguii
Is that a brazilian name? Are you a grill? You're drawings are cute, but the original sketches and line art are a lot better than the colored versions. Something about them makes them seem off.

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>>27854668
Yes?

>>27855103
London?

>>27856628
LONDON

>>27856628
>>27856643
Brexit!

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Anyways, i'm gonna take it a bit slow, since i'm both drawfaggin and writefaggin
If you can help me with some advice i would appreciate it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zPLU6nF3T3c

>”WAAAAHHHH” a faint cry is heard at the distance of a community park
>A small girls with short pink hair, a long yellow dress/overall and a beige shit is crying under a tree, constantly sniffing and hiccupping
>That girl is you
>Those kids are such meanies, why they did push you? You never did anything bad to them, you just wanted to play with them
>But they keep calling you Klutzershy and other nasty stuff, but why?
>You don’t care, Mommy told you to go outside, but you hate it, it only makes you cry and feel bad
>The tears just keep running
>Until you feel a hand patting your back. You quickly turn around, startled
>“There you are!” a boy slightly bigger than you is smiling
>Despite his cheerful smile, you cannot contain the tears, you broke again and hide your face in your knees
>”Hey! What’s wrong?” The boy kneeled to your lever, still patting your back “Did those kids picked on you?”
>You weakly nod “Then I’ll be your knight!” with that statement, you slowly turn your head and watch the boy who just took the job as your personal knight, like in those fairy tales you loved so much “I’ll do it, so you will not cry again!”
>He offers you a hand, still with that infectious smile
>”You can count on me Shy…” that last part echoes through your head
>”…Shy” It sounds louder, making you feels safe
>”…Shy!” That’s weird, it keeps getting louder everytime You hear it
>”Fluttershy!”
>”FLUTTERSHY!”
>You snap back at the voice yelling your name
>You’re Flutteshy, at the Canterlot High Cafeteria

>>27856847

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zxrQfSsRYsA
>”Sugarcube, are y’all right?” Your friend Applejack ask, with an obvious look of concern
>”Yeah, is not like you to be this distant darling” Rarity finishes “We were getting worried”
“O-oh, im sorry girls” You quickly apologize, you never meant to worry your friends but being lost in your memories caught them off guard
>You stay in silence after that, hoping whatever the girls were talking resumed, eating slowly your salad
>…
>The silence is still here, while all your friends are looking at you, as you slowly shrink on your seat
>”So?” Inquired Sunset Shimmer
“So?” You repeat quietly
>”What were you wandering about, Flutters?” Rainbow Dash interrupted
“N-nothing”
>”Really? Because that’s too much for remembering nothing” Twilight Sparkle noted
“I-is fine girls” you quickly move your hands “I was just remembering something while I was a kid”
>”Oh my, Fluttershy” Pinkie Pie squee’d “Was it about a boy?”
“WH-WH-WHAT?!” You quickly jump from your seat
>”That reaction just confirms it, sugarcube” AJ chuckles “So who’s this fella?”
>Everyone is looking at you again
“J-just s-someone who helped me… before I met Dash” You replied lowering your voice
>The whole group just D’awwed at the same time, leading even more people gathering their attention to your table at the cafeteria, just what you wanted
>You hide under the table, hoping the earth might swallow you whole

>>27856847
oh no
i can already feel the diabetes inducing cuteness squeezing around my heart

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>>27856862

>Somewhere else
>You’re Anon
>You slowly opened your eyes, only to find out that you haven’t moved an inch since you closed your eyes some hours ago, in the seat of the train that’s going to Canterlot

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3pJom2ZiNc

>You yawn and stretch in your seat, as you slowly turn your head towards the window, the city of Canterlot is on the horizon
“Damn that was a good nap” you say proud, the traveling was less painful when you sleep “We’re almost at nothing to finally arrive”
>With you back on your seat, now sitting normally you make a quick summary of what’s on the agenda
>You were not happy with the college you were studying, so you proposed your mother to go to Canterlot, which was very proud of having the cream of the crop of the colleges in the state
>You needed to do the exam again, but fortunately you did some research and you did not have to do all your courses again
>After some hard earned work and saved money, you were able to get a small apartment in Canterlot, ready to move on and face a new life
>Before boarding the train your mother gave you a piece of paper “You might want to visit this place” That’s what she said before planting a kiss on your forehead and shoving you to the train
“Mothers” You scoff
>After a half an hour, more or less, the train finally stops at the Canterlot Station
>You wait till the other people that are leaving the cart scram, you always liked to leave at the last moment
>As you lazily step down, with your luggage on you back and the piece of paper on your right hand, you read what was on it

>>27856902

>A direction, just like she said, and with the extra annotations on it, sounds like an animal shelter
>Why on earth your mother would mark this place as if was so goddamn important?
>You check a map that’s on the hall of the train station, And you wince, it’s almost at the downtown of the city
>After some thought, you shrug and started to walk, is not like you will have limited time, and it’s your first day here, you can always have some sightseeing and getting familiar with the city.
>You start to make your way to the so important location you mother wrote, it could take a couple of hours, but nothing you could not handle
>You start walking


That's all for today tho
What do you think so far?

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>>27856912
I like the direction your going in as well as the build up, though I'm gonna make a guess that English isn't your first language.
Other than that, great job and MOAR please.

>>27856902
>"Cream of the crop"
Every time I hear that phrase I think of this video
https://youtu.be/8C4lK41SX-Q

>>27856912
>PQ and FE:A music
My man. You're doing pretty well, if I say so myself. The pacing's good as well. I guess what you need to work on is proper punctuation and a little bit better grammar.

>>27856912
Promising start. Please continue.

>>27856912
I like the setup, especially with the music to accentuate it

>>27856912
Color me intrigued, would like to see more come I as you write and having buts if art spaced through it is awesome to see as well.

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>>27856847
>>27856862
>>27856902
>>27856912

>>27856847
>a long yellow dress/overall and a beige shit
>a beige shit
kek

>>27857001
Yeah, his English definitely doesn't read like a natives.

>>27856902
>“We’re almost at nothing to finally arrive”
What?

>>27858708
It's the secret to all things right there

>>27859366
42?

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>>27858708
Sorry, guess some slangs don't translate that well to english
I'll try to do a more neutral english

>>27860545
What sort of slang is that?

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>>27842711
For the person who requested anon be bottomless and Sunset looking at his crotch while blushing.

>>27860851
SQUATS & OATS

>>27860851
[Patting Intensifies]

>>27861122
Somebody animate that.

>>27860851
thank you drawfriend

>>27843507
It's like you think Sorority Boys is a fag movie or something.

You're the only fag here, anon.

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>>27842711
>Shimmer will never be your twin sister who's married to the king
>You'll never cuck the king with Shimmer
>You'll never watch Shimmer get the king in a hunting accident and watch your cuck-spawn become the new king

Life is pain.

/r/ teen Pound & Pumpkin with a bit more realistic scenario Not like
"guuuuh, it's a benis"
>"yee!"
"can I touch it?"
>"but your mu sister"
and then they have sex. Something more about feeling how wrong it is, getting close for days, maybe weeks, hiding from parents, small steps, you know? Like, showing one boob one day, letting her touch him and nothing more another day. And if you reach the sex part, don't go full pro professional porn stars.

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>>27861866

>>27847444
>tfw when I haven't watched independence day 2 yet.
>tfw I get spoiled to the movie in the place I was least likely to get spoiled.
Life is suffering.

>>27862765
He didn't spoil much, other than they repeated the "stealing your vocal chords" thing they did in the first film.

Hello thread, I'm new to this part of the board and EQG in general so please do be firm but gentle in letting me know how this all turns out. I've got an idea that I think is kinda interesting but I may not have implemented correctly so I'd greatly appreciate some direction after it's all posted, particularly with Sunset's character to make sure I'm doing it okay. And I think that's enough rambling, here we go!!

>You take a deep breath and hold it.
>Hand reaches out and curls up into a fist.
>You hover it over the plain looking front door.
>C’mon Sunset, just knock.
>That’s pretty easy to do.
>Just…
>You retract your hand and clutch it to your chest while letting out the breath you were holding.
“I-I can’t-“
>You are cut off by a gentle grip on your shoulders.
>Looking up you see the calm smiling face of Principal Celestia.
>”Yes you can. I’ve spoken to them at length about your… predicament. They have been nothing but positive about this.”
“But Principal Celestia-”
>”Sunset, in all my time as Principal of Canterlot High School I have never seen a student show as much potential as I have seen in you.”
>Yeah, potential world ending disasters maybe…
>She gives your shoulders a firm squeeze.
>”Potential, Sunset, is only that. Where that potential ends is up to you, good or bad. The coming semester will be trying, but I’m confident that you will not only meet my expectations, but exceed them.”
>You can feel a pang in your heart.
>From the way she stands over you, with the light breeze in the air, her mane- hair, almost seems to shimmer.
>She really does share more than a namesake.
>Principal Celestia smiles, “But that, is a whole break away. Right now, you need time to recover and reconnect. And knocking on that door there is the first step.”
>You look from her back to the door and let out a small sigh.
>Principal Celestia releases your shoulders as you step forward again.
>You take a deep breath and hold it.

>>27863711
>Hand reaches out and curls up into a fist.
*Knock knock*
>You hear activity coming from inside the house, hushed mumbles and footsteps.
>”-hair okay?”
>”-’s great honey can we-“
>”ou sure? First impressions and all-“
>”-om! Can you just open the door-” a familiar voice grumbles, and gradually gets louder as the door swings inward.
>You are turning away from the woman standing next to you and looking ahead.
>”-Already?” you trail off as your eyes come to focus…
>On yourself.
>Wow, okay this is…
>”Creepy.”
>Weird.
>You look at yourself on the other side of the doorway, standing next to an older couple that seem familiar.
>”Well gosh almighty would you look at that?” the elder woman exclaims.
>She steps outside through the doorway.
>It’s no barrier but the shock of seeing “you” on the other side almost feels like there should be.
>The woman steps right up to you and scans you over with her eyes.
>The familiar sea-foam green orbs look you up and down, she raises a hand over her mouth and her eyes begin to shimmer with tears.
>You look at her for as long as you can but soon find yourself welling up with emotion.
>The longer you look the more you can start to match the familiar features with your own mother.
>Even the little wrinkle in her nose when she’s smiling.
>She opens her arms wide and you can’t help but lean forward and allow yourself to be embraced by them.
>You bury your face into this woman’s shoulder and sob quietly while being surrounded by the familiar cinnamon scent your mother always had.
>She pulls you back slowly and you clear your vision of tears to find that the other two have also stepped outside.
>The man rests a firm hand on your shoulder with the exact same pressure that your father would use.
>You throw your arms around his waist and give him a quick squeeze.
>He steps back and allows “you” to step into view.
>You are still reeling upon seeing her, you.

>>27863719
>She leans one way while you lean another.
>The both of you circle around taking in every detail.
>You are looking for something other than clothing to differentiate yourself from this world’s Sunset Shimmer and you can only assume she’s doing the same.
>It’s futile though, down the even the stray hairs on your head, you are just the same as she is.
>That is until she crosses her arms, you can see a reminder of yourself that you’d rather not see.
>A familiar sharpness in her eyes, the same aura of disdain you had for everyone at Canterlot High surrounds her.
>And you know exactly how to dull that sharp-
>Well, you knew how to...
>Until Twilight came and took everyth- saved you from yourself…
>”Well well, hearing and seeing are two very different things. No matter how much I thought I prepared myself for this… Do you call yourself Sunset as well?”
>You blink away the strange feeling that comes with hearing your voice not come from your mouth.
“Y-yes. I um…It’s nice to meet you.”
>You hold up a hand towards her.
>She eyes you up and down before they settle on your outstretched hand.
>You can see her lip curl but a deep voice from inside the house draws yours. and everyone else’s attention.
>”Hey is she here yet? Why is the door-“
>Your eyes widen as you take in the sight of the young man walking towards you all from inside the house.
>He approaches not with the reservation that “you” had but rather with a sort of carefree confidence.
>”Whoa! No way! Mom, Dad, you guys are seeing this too right?” he exclaims loudly.
>They both roll their eyes, “No son, despite being the last one to the door, you are the first to see this” the older man responds sarcastically.
>The young man rolls his eyes and parts his parents aside so he can walk right up to you.
>HIs eyes look from “you” to you and back again.
>He puts a finger to his lips and hums.

>>27863728
>Slowly he moves his hand away from his face and allows the finger to hover in the air while still humming, there’s an exaggerated look of concentration on his face.
>It’s enough that you can’t help but smile a little at his antics.
>His emerald green eyes twinkle with joy and he points in your direction, “You. You’re the new one.”
>”Geez Anonymous, how’d you figure that one out?” other Sunset asks him with a slight irritation in her voice.
>Anonymous. His name is Anonymous...
>He smiles, "Because she’s not tired of me just yet like you are sis” he responds, “not yet anyway” he adds with a playful wink.
>You have to stifle a giggle from escaping your lips.
>A hand is extended out towards you, “My name’s Anonymous. I’m Sunset’s older brother and… I guess yours too?” he asks with an adorable confused squeak.
>He raises a questioning eyebrow in Principal Celestia’s direction.
>You forgot she was standing there behind you this whole time.
>You step a little to the side of her and allow her to address the rest of the family before you.
>”Why don’t we go inside and discuss it.”despite the words themselves being phrased as a question, everyone understands them as the statement she intended.
>You walk beside Principal Celestia.
>The mother and father of this family begin making small talk and giving a makeshift tour of the home as you are all walking inside.
>You watch as Sunset maintains her gaze on you slightly longer than what seems necessary as she turns around to walk inside.
>It’s like looking at a video of yourself from just a month ago.
>A gentle nudge to your arm draws your attention to your other side.
>”Hey, don’t dwell too much on my little sister, she’ll come around.”
>Anonymous is walking beside you with a cheerful smile on his face, “And until then, you’ve got me at least, other sis.”
>Other… sis?

>>27863734
>After everything you’ve been through lately, hearing a friendly title thrown your way feels really good.

>”So, Sunset, this is where you’ll be staying.” Mrs. Shimmer says as she opens the door in front of you.
>Inside other you is laying in the bottom bunk in the room texting, she looks over at you both with a very well disguised sour look on her face.
>”Now I know it’s not perfect, but we simply don’t have the space to give you a room of your own and we thought it might be a good idea to have you room with, well… you” she follows her joke with an airy giggle that sounds just like home.
>”Shimmy-“
>”Mom!” Sunset snaps back at her mother.
>So she goes with Shimmy, not Sunny like your mom does-
>Oh, that makes you a little sad to remember...
>”-Get to know each other a little and decide how you’re going to share this room okay?”
>She huffs and returns her attention to her phone while Mrs. Shimmer places a gentle hand on your shoulder, “If you need anything dear, I’ll be right downstairs okay?”
>You nod and she gently closes the door behind you.
>The awkwardness in here is so thick that you could almost choke on it.
>You’re pretty sure Shimmy would rather you did.
>”Bottom bunk is mine” Sunset announces, not looking up from her phone.
“Oh, yeah, sure.” you respond as friendly as can muster.
>”It’s bigger, and since this was my room to begin with I deserve it.”
“R-right… sorry” you respond sheepishly.
>Principal Celestia didn’t tell you you’d be sharing a room with this world’s Sunset Shimmer, though its likely she didn’t know it would turn out that way either.
>She hums noncommittally to your apology.
>You shift your weight from one foot to the other for a good bit, not entirely sure how to move the conversation along.
>”Man you’re really quiet aren’t you?”
“Oh, uh, sorry I-“

>>27863747
>”And you’re sorry all the time. You nearly wiped out an entire school and come from a magic world. I’d have thought you’d have more backbone than that.”
>In quick succession she surgically targeted all the things you didn’t want to confront.
>You try to keep a straight face, knowing that’s what she’s likely after but you can’t keep your knees from going weak.
>She looks over at you and sneers, “I guess my whole room got changed around so you can be here to grow one huh?”
“Uh, n-no! I was…”
>She looks like she’s not paying attention but you can tell that she’s focused on every word that comes out of your mouth, waiting to use them against you some how.
>You breath in to calm yourself.
>Let the silence hang in the air just long enough to make her stop pretending she’s not listening.
“I’m here because they’re scared I might do something worse” you respond, in your old cool collected voice.
>Sunset sits up in her bed and looks you in the eyes.
>They bore into you, looking for any chink in your armor.
>When she finds nothing she can use she pretends to lose interest and flops unceremoniously onto her bed.
>”Psh, yeah, sure.”
>She raises a hand and waves in the direction of the closet beside you “Left side is mine, right side’s yours. Don’t touch my things and definitely stay out of my drawers in the dresser. Got it?”
“Yup, got it.”
>You pick up your duffel bag and carry it over to the closet, out of the corner of your eye you can see Sunset peeking at you under the continued guise of looking at her phone.
>Okay so that wasn’t the “right” way to handle that, but what else were you supposed to do?
>Twilight said to 'seek out friendship’ but how in the hay are you supposed to do that with “you”?
>It’s not like you can hit Shimmy with a rainbow beam or anything.
>You remove everything that needs hanging from your bag, which really just means your jacket.

>>27863763
>A small stride across the room and you are standing in front of the dresser.
>You know she’s watching you, you can feel her eyes on your back.
>You’d be the same way, eyeing her like she were a piece of meat, because as far as you cared that’s what she would’ve been to you.
>The right thing to do is politely ask which drawers are yours so you can stay out of hers like she asked.
>But, if you want to push her back from this conquering mentality she has…
>”Hey! What do you think you’re doing?!”
>Shimmy storms over while you are looking over the rows of neatly folded panties.
>Each of them bearing the color or logo of your cutie mark somewhere on them.
>She slams the drawer shut and glares at you.
“You seemed to be very absorbed in your game or conversation and I didn’t want to bother you” you explain.
>Her nostrils flair as she breathes a puff of hot air that tickles your neck, “Your drawers are on the right. I would think that didn’t need stating since I already told you the layout of the closet.” she huffs before returning to her bed and flopping down into it.
>You turn away from her and set your bag down on top of the dresser and open the right drawers to disperse the few things you have among them.
>Shortly after you’ve put away everything in the bag away.
>Well, all save for one.
>Your leather-bound journal.
>It’s been with you since leaving Equestria and for whatever reason you could never force yourself to get rid of it.
>A sign of weakness you used to think, having a failsafe in case you faced an obstacle you couldn’t overcome.
>But now it feels like the opposite, a source of strength, a reminder that you’re not totally alone, even in the face of your biggest obstacle, yourself.
>You climb up into the top bunk and lovingly tuck it under your pillow just like you had done with that ratty old bundle of blankets in the Canterlot High gymnasium.

>>27863769
>From up above you can see almost every inch of the room, save for Sunset directly beneath you of course, but if you lean just a bit to the side you can barely make out her arm hanging over the edge of her bed.
>The door to what is now your shared room opens and Anonymous stands at it’s doorway.
>”Hey sis!” he chirps, eyes looking downward relative to you, “Hey uh, Sunset?” he greets looking up at you now.
>Your chest feels lighter upon hearing some positivity enter this negative space, you give him a meek smile and wave.
>”What do you want Anon? Can’t you see we’re bonding or whatever” Sunset responds.
>”Oh yeah totally, really great effort your putting in there little sister. Sunset here looks totally at home, isn’t that right Sunny?”
>Sunny? Did he just-
>”Anywho, mom and dad said that dinner is going to be ready in an hour and to ask if you have any allergies Sunset.”
>You shake your head.
“No, I don’t think so.”
>”Great! Though honestly it doesn’t really matter what your answer was going to be.”
>He leans back, gripping the doorframe in one hand for support he cups his free hand over his mouth and calls out down the hall.
>You can catch a small glimpse of his flat stomach peeking out through the hem of his shirt, his chest expands as he takes in a breath to call out “Hey ma! She said that green beans don’t really sit well with her!”
>Wait what?!
>Before you can respond he’s already turned back and is jingling a set of keys in your direction, a coy smile plastered on his face.
>From downstairs you can hear his mom calling back, “Oh really? Well, go and take her somewhere then. We’ll keep that in mind for next time.”
>He nods in the direction of the doorway and follows it with the rest of his body, leaning past the doorway and slipping out.
>You sit there somewhat dumbfounded for a moment.
>Beneath you a frustrated huff can be heard.

>>27863782
>You decide to take the more appealing offer and scurry your way down the ladder ignoring your counterpart’s subdued displeasured.
>”We’ll be back in a few ma!” Anonymous calls into the house while holding the front door open for you.
>”Okay honey, drive carefully.”
>”You got it!”
>You see one of the cars in the driveway’s lights flash and hear the faint click of the locks, so you start heading in that direction.
>Anonymous skirts around to the driver’s side and you open the door to the passenger’s.
>”Alright, anything you’re in the mood for?”
>You think on it for a bit.
>Eating out wasn’t a common thing for you, leaving the school and not getting back in time meant you slept outside.
>Usually you had someone bring you a number 4, whatever it was from wherever they went and hoped for the best while never letting anyone on.
“I’m uh, not sure… what’s around?”
>He begins listing off places, a LOT of places.
>Too many, what’s a Subiznos?
“Oh! There, that sounds good” you exclaim after he lists someplace.
>”Custard King?”
“Yeah” you half mumble.
>He smiles, “I like your taste other sis. Custard KIng it is! Buckle up.”
>You look around for the seat belt but don’t find it attached to the side wall like in all the other cars you’ve seen.
>Where in Tartarus is it?
>You look up and back on the wall again to double check that it’s there.
>Anonymous is looking at you oddly.
>Embarrassment floods your cheeks.
>He then smiles and reaches a hand out towards you.
>Fingers held out like he’s going to grip something, his hand is approaching your chest.
>You can feel your breathing suddenly get heavy, your face hot.
>Wh-what is he-
>His hand hovers over your chest…
>Then continues on past it, he snakes his hand around your shoulder and you hear the familiar sound of cloth sliding against itself.

>>27863800
>He retracts his hand and holds a tan colored seatbelt in his hand.
>You follow it back and see that it was flush with the back edge of the seat.
>In your flustered state you completely missed it.
>”One thing I really don’t like about this car, is definitely the seatbelts. Here.”
>He holds it out for you to take, you trail your hand down the length and grab the actual buckle piece and click yourself in.
>Anonymous smiles, not in a mocking kind of way like you would have done, but a genuine smile as if he were just content that you’re now safer than before.
>He reverses out of the driveway and takes you down a road you don’t know.
>”So…” he opens with after several minutes of silent driving, “You’re uh, going to be living with us now.”
“Mmhmm” you respond.
>”What do you think? Step up from living in the school right?”
>You were about to give him a plain answer before he added that last bit that has now tripped you up.
>Anonymous picks up on that and immediately adds on a slightly panicked, “Oh! Uh, sorry! I didn’t mean to be an ass-“
"It’s okay Anonymous. It IS a step up from that, honestly…” you mumble.
>He chuckles, as a nervous habit you assume.
>”You can call me Anon, by the way, or big bro if you want.”
>Big Bro...
>”Do I have a pony version?” he asks.
“Wh-what?” you ask having been drawn from that little daydream.
>”Well you’re a pony right? From a magic pony world? There’s you and mom and dad obviously, but am I there too?”
>You clear your throat.
“No, I never had a brother. It was just me, my mom and dad.”
>Anon hums, “I kind of figured about as much, you looked more confused than shocked when we met.”
>You tap your hands on your knees while the car is stopped at a red light, the car rattles slightly when it isn’t moving you’ve noticed.
>”What do you think of my sister? You two like… synching up or anything weird like that?” he asks with a joking smile.

>>27863808
>You smile back, but that quickly fades when you start thinking of how exactly to respond to that.
>'Yes she’s as much of a bitch as I was and kind of still am?’
>Probably not the right approach.
“She’s…”
>You struggle to think of a good response.
>”Grumpy? Prickly? Aggressive?”
>A soft noise escapes your lips
>Anon suppreses a snicker
“All three?” you squeak out
>Anon laughs deeply then gradually gets quiet while also dropping his smile, “Mom and dad had trouble having a baby.”
>This strikes a chord with you, you remember hearing the same thing from your parents.
>He glances over at you, there’s a questioning look on his face.
>You nod, confirming his unspoken thought.
>It was the same for you, your parent’s considered you a true blessing.
>”And just when they were about to give up hope, they had me.”
>A bittersweet feeling overcomes you, you know what he’s going to say next.
>”I was a damned miracle to them. Everything I needed and plenty of things I didn’t were mine.”
>You nod slowly, thinking back to your own upbringing.
>You don’t recall ever thinking you received things you didn’t earn though, not at the time.
>”Then a little over two years later, I got something else, a little sister.”
>He’s quiet for a moment, thinking, as given by the fact that he sat at the green light long enough to get honked.
>”Growing up, kids in school were usually jealous, and they weren’t too subtle about letting either of us know it too.”
>Those foals were beneath you, they were right to be envious of your stature.
>At least that’s what you convinced yourself of.
>”So for a long while, she was my best friend. We took care of each other...”
>How then did she turn out exactly like you did when she had-
>”Or I guess I should say that, I took care of her” he adds.
>He pauses again, face twisted in thoughts.

>>27863818
>Soon after waiting for a left turn he continues, “I was the miracle child, she’s just their daughter.”
>And now you understand…
>”I know they love her, of course they love her, but being away on business all the time like they are… well, it boils down our childhood into key moments and in all of those Sunny Bunny was left wanting and sad.”
>The approval of those you regard highly.
>Seeking it drove you, made you push yourself harder than anypony who ever came before you, go places where nopony would dare go...
>And you learned that there was good reason for that path being the one less traveled.
>”She turned bitter, stopped seeing me as her best friend. She saw me differently and everyone else as competition...”
>You can see the sadness in his beautiful green eyes.
>Your heart aches, both for him and your counterpart.
>He blinks it away and turns to face you with a weak smile.
>The car stops rumbling and turns off.
>You look outside the window and see that you’ve arrived at the Custard King.
>”So, that’s the little rundown of things that you won’t get from my folks and definitely not my sister. I hope you’ll keep it in mind and not let things get to you if they seem a little heavy. We’re all good people at heart I think.”
“Anonym- Anon…” you start, but have no idea how to continue.
>What could you say to him?
>You’re barely realizing that what you’d done all this time was wrong.
>Good people at heart?
>For him maybe, seeing the treatment you got from others, by loving and caring for you, he skipped the “demons” and-
>Her.
>You meant her, your counterpart…
>He loved and cared for HER-
>You are enveloped in a comforting warmth, you focus on what’s going on outside your head and find yourself looking over his shoulder while his strong arms surround you.

I know the main thing here is Shimmer, but would any writefag be willing to continue this story about Dash? I was really fucking disappointed in the ending of it because they didn't actually hook up again. I mean if she comes back and doesn't hook up again right off the bat then it is unlikely they will again. I just want them to hook up and maybe get a little more shit because it would be incest and pedophillia at this point.

If someone is interested here is the green: http://pastebin.com/u/canocorn

>>27863836
>”Hope I’m not coming off too strong, you just looked a little overwhelmed and like you could use a hug, and since it’s my fault you’re like that I figured...”
>The tingling coming from everywhere he’s making contact with you, and the satisfaction you feel being surrounded by his warmth tells you that he figured correctly.
>Slowly you snake you arms around to his firm back and bring yourself in just a little closer.
>Anon hums contentedly, “Its been so long since my little sister has ever hugged me back like this…”
>Your heart skips a beat and you can feel your face get warmer, and you know it’s not the heat coming from his cheek against yours.
>He breaks the hug and quickly leans back onto his side of the car, a sheepish look on his face as he looks into your eyes, “Oh, n-not that I meant you are… I uh, realize I never got your approval on the “other sis” thing…”
>You want to tell him that it made you feel the happiest than you’ve been in a while, the last time being when you were a demon with unlimited power...
>Deciding not to be that descriptive you go for a more tempered response.
“It’s okay, I guess I don’t mind.”
>He smiles and opens the car door, “Great! Let’s get our grub on!”
>You swallow nervously when you see that there’s no line inside the Custard King and that the menu board is MASSIVE!
>”Welcome to Custard King, may I take your order?” the person behind the counter asks as Anon walks up to the counter with you trailing in slowly behind him.
>”Yeah I-“ he trails off while looking back at your confused face, “-‘ll have a number four and she’ll have a number two.”
>Number two?
>It’s a cheeseburger meal, doesn’t look like anything special.
>Although it does have-
>”Without pickles and a junior caramel custard too.”
>Wha-
>He pays for the order and hands you a cup, “It’s what Shimmy likes, figured you’d like it too.”
>You take the cup and wait for him to join you.

>>27863850
>He gets the receipt and change from the worker and begins walking to the drink machines.
>You find you are holding the cup close to your chest and quickly lower it while caching up to Anon.
>He mixes two of the drinks in his cup and takes a cautious sip before smiling to himself and reaching for a lid.
>You mirror his movements and fill your cup with the same two drinks and give it a try.
>The taste of artificial cherries? and… Limes? nearly makes you gag.
>Anon watches the face you make after sipping from your cup and chuckles.
>”It’s an acquired taste Shim- Sunset.”
>You wrinkle your nose and feel a slight bit of guilt pouring the drink down the drain to fill it up with regular cola.
>The worker calls out your order number and you help Anon carry the food back to the car.
>He suggests you eat the custard on the way home so it doesn’t make a mess.
>You do…
>And it is AMAZING!
>Anon seems to get swept up in your joy upon eating such a delicious treat.
>It’s almost as good as honey tipped hay!
>You arrive back uneventfully, most of the ride back was quiet because you were too busy savoring your custard.
>Anon is scolded for picking up food for himself by his mother, but he plays it down by telling her he needed the carbs for swimming which she buys.
>Only further confirming what you and Anon talked about on the car ride.
>You run upstairs to put on a slightly nicer shirt since, at a glance, the parents seemed to be dressed up.
>At the top of the stairs, you learned from the tour that Anon’s room is down the hall on the right and across from him is the parent’s room.
>On the left is yours and Shimmy’s room and the bathroom you’re both going to share.
>You waltz over to the room and reach for the door handle, but stop one you realize it’s not shut and when you thought you heard a small squeak come from inside the room.

>>27863866
>You look back down the hall to make sure no-one is coming and hear another sound inside the room by the time you turn back to face the door.
>Using the frame to brace yourself you lean in and peek in through the crack in the door.
>You have to bite your lip to suppress a gasp escaping your mouth.
>Inside you are-
>SHE, Sunset, the OTHER Sunset is…
>One hand is quickly rubbing the shiny slick skin between your- HER legs.
>The other is holding a bundle of cloth to her face, she’s using it to stifle the little squeaks and breathy moans coming out of her mouth.
>You stand there mesmerized, watching her ravish your body with those lithe fingers.
>Burying more of them and deeper than you though was possible.
>Her hips thrust into the open air while her face remains buried in that bundle of green cloth.
>You can feel an intense heat on your face.
>And elsewhere too…
>You find yourself licking your lips when your name is called from downstairs.
>You jump to attention and turn back to face the stairs.
“I’m just going to get a change of clothes! I’ll be right down!”
>You stand there awkwardly for a moment, trying to think of what your next move should be.
>She clearly must have heard you outside her door just now.
>So hopefully she’s… stopped.
>You knock on the door quietly.
“Are you changing too? Can I come in?”
>You are met with a breathy response, “Yeah… changing.”
>You wait for a moment and are nearly bowled over as your counterpart bursts out of the room.
>Her clothes are wrinkled and hastily thrown on, her hair is matted to her neck and all messy, and you catch a hint of her arousal trailing behind her as she continues across the hall into the bathroom.
>The door slams shut behind her.
>You casually stroll into the room and make for your side of the dresser.
>As you are crossing the room your curiosity gets the better of you and you step over to her bunk.

>>27863874
>The sheets are odorous and you can see a small patch of dampness that is hastily covered with sheets.
>Beneath her pillow is the bright green cloth she was burying her face in.
>You look back to the door and then down again to the master cloth.
>Lifting up the pillow reveals… well mystery cloth.
>It looks like a pair of boxers or at least oversized boyshorts, patterned all over them are question marks.
>You've seen most of her underwear earlier and she certainly didn't have any with that pattern on them
>So who’s symbol could they belong to?

And that's all I have so far. I hope the focal plot of the story is starting to develop with all this. Like I said above, I'm pretty new to all this so some feedback on where I'm doing right/wrong would be greatly appreciated.

I know for one I'm sure I overused the ellipses and sentence breaks (the hyphens) but my thinking was that this first meeting with her EQG family was a bit of a shock to experience for real and the same would go for the family. Still, not handled as nicely as they probably could have so those will diminish heavily in the coming segments since they'll be getting time to get comfortable with each other for the most part.

Thanks for reading!

>>27863711
oh lordy it's frosty! Delicios green ahead hoooo!

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>>27863967
9000+/10
Everything about this is great

>>27863967
I'm enjoying it, nicely done.

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>>27863967
>Two Shimmies for the price of one

Anon won't survive the break.

>>27863967
Holy shit are all my favorite Writefags going to pop in here?
This is a fantastic twist on the prompt too.

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Preview of what am i writing
With a pic
Yeh

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>>27863845
Nigga that story is done, and if you had been in that thread with Can you would know that he wanted it to end there.
I would respectfully honor his wishes and write something new.

>>27864924
Thread was deleted by the time I got back in it. I was busy for a few weeks and didn't get around to finishing it until after the thread went down.

>>27864943
Also forgot to mention canocorn came back in the thread where pastafromspace was writing last year and said he ended it because he ran out of ideas and was fine with someone continuing it. But pasta abandoned us

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>>27842711
>Start reading liakon
>mfw

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>>27863967
>both sisters have a brother complex
wew

i like it so far
would read more

>>27863967
I need more on this, ASAP

>>27865265
>A$AP

>>27863967
Don't stop.

>LaP
>Frosty
I didn't know RGRE had a siscon fetish

>>27865901
And I didn't know Nayaa was into p0nes or EqG

>>27866204
Where are you from?
/v/ or /a/?

>>27863967
The possibility of double Sunset is doing amazing things in my imagination right now. Frosty you are fucking wonderful.
>>27864151
We all know there are worse ways to die.

>>27865901
Is this a complaint or just wonderment at the situation? Because I for one am completely ok with this.

>>27865206
I bet pony sunset is gonna start dating anon and other sunset is gonna pretend to be pony sunset so she can fuck anon

>>27866524
I doubt this as it would be very awkward considering that even though she is a different person, he is still technically dating what could be considered his sister.

On the other hand I can see him developing feelings for pony Sunset and the other Sunset getting jealous, with the situation resolving itself into a lewd threesome, if not a "twincest" scene beforehand.

>>27864490
I feel lewds are in the air!

>>27863967
threesome incoming

>>27866849
I mean does it really count if its the same person? I always have that question.

>>27847444
>Slamming the door shut you lean against it watching as Sunset gallops ahead in the vault.
"Sunset!"
>Hearing the muffled sounds of bodies hitting the door you shove it back magic lighting up as you scramble to slid the bolt home.
>A few more seconds of struggle and the door is locked.
>You can hear the muffled thudding of the vault's door as magic is thrown at the sturdy piece of wood rattling the gateway.
"Sunset!"
>"Over here!"
>Following the sound of your sister you navigate through the cloistered amount of artifacts each one worth a family fortune and even more.
"Damn it Sunset where?!"
>You continue to look only to crash into a small body sending you both to the ground.
>Grunting you get up and help your sister up as well.
"Sunset, why did we even come here it's a dead end now with the guard outside the door."
>Sunset looks up at you with a steely determined glint in her eye, "Not quite big brother, in here is a portal to a different world!"
"Different world? Sunset are you sure about that?"
>"Positive, Celestia had shown it to me a time or two when we were having lessons, who would have thought my old teacher would provide our escape?"
"Heh, yeah, but question is, where is it?"
>Sunset starts to answer when the doors to the vault suddenly grind open.
>"Sunset Shimmer, Anonymous Incognito I know you're in here."
>Oh sweet solar flames...
>Princess Celestia herself?!
>"Please come out my little ponies, I know you feel slighted, but taking power for power's sake is not the way."
"Sunset, find the portal, now."
>You start to head towards the voice only for Sunset to grab you, "What are you doing?!"
"Doing what I do best, stalling."
>"What?! No you idiot, you can't just..."
>Hugging your sister close you nuzzle her cheek.
"Listen, I'm not going to go hoof to hoof with her, just talk to her. You need to hurry I bet she has the guard already scouring the place now."

>>27867195
>Sunset's worried look and frantic eyes hold your own gaze before she sighs and nuzzles you back
>"...Fine, but you better not leave me big brother! You got that?"
>Kissing Sunset on the forehead you nod to her before trotting towards the sound of Celestia calling out.

>Rounding the corner of artifacts you see her, the monarch of the sun and the Equestrian Empire itself, Princess Celestia.
"Your highness."
>You bow low to the monarch before standing once more, it looks like her guard are just behind the door waiting on something...
>"Anonymous." Celestia bows her head to you in greeting, "I hope that you've come to your senses now."
"I'd just want to talk, understand why."
>"Your sister, she is...talented yes, but she pursues those talents for the wrong reasons." The princess says trotting a bit closer to you.
>You take a step back in return and hold her gaze.
>"My apologies, do you not trust me my little pony?"
"I'd rather not be taken unaware, what makes you say her reasons are wrong?"
>"Power for the sake of power is not the way I rule, nor would I allow for others under my rule to use this method to protect our kingdom."
"Yet without power, how is one supposed to defend against that which threatens our own?"
>Celestia makes a small nod, "You do need power yes, but sometimes a little finesse and the thought of fighting for /others/ rather than /yourself/ can make all the difference."
>Come on Sunset hurry up...
"That maybe true, but from what Sunset had told m-"
>"She told you something along the lines of I was going to choose her as a protector of Equestria yes?"

>>27867201
>Shocked somewhat you can only nod at the Princess.
>"Yes, I was afraid of that." Celestia says with a small frown, "You see Anonymous, I had many different plans that involved your sister, being a protector of the realm was one, so was having her become the headmaster of the gifted school for unicorns as well."
"Prestigious positions either way, why didn't you trust her with it?"
>"Simply put, your sister is too much of a hot head."
"Hey, that's my sister your talking about."
>"I know, I felt she had to slowly adjust to her studies and truly understand what it meant to wield the power she has."
>Celestia bows her head closing her eyes in thought.
>The moment she does you feel your scarf buzz, Sunset must have found the portal!
"You should have let her at least try." You argue back mentally trying to figure out how to get to Sunset.
>"And put the kingdom at risk if my student had gone rouge? Like she has right now?"
"You're just afraid she'll do a better job that you'd like! Even then she hasn't done anything wrong!"
>"Yet she has learned dark magic behind my back, plundered the tomes of the Starswirl the Bearded section and is now trying to escape from Royal Authority." Celestia counters coolly as she takes a step closer to you now.
"She'd need to learn it to beat dark magic, you wouldn't let her check out those books and you're trying to imprison her for not following your little path!" You snap back horn glowing with anger readying a spell.
>"Princess!" Some of the guards call out starting to file into the vault.
>"Steady my guards, I shall handle this." Celestia says holding up a wing, turning to you the alicorn holds a sorrowful look to her face, "Do you truly believe that I would do that? Is this the path you wish to hold yourself to?"
"In the words of my house, Family, Duty, Honor."
>You respond before sending out your spell!

>>27867207

>You jerk awake to the feel of Sunset's hands on your shoulder, "Anon?"
>Looking around wildly you see yourself in a movie theater, the girls are surrounding you looking concerned and you can hear music playing of some movie...
>...right the movie, you went to the movies and must have fallen asleep?
"Ahem, uh yeah, sorry Sunny...Did I fall asleep again?"
>"Actually Darling you had um..."
>Pinkie interjects, "You started glowing all green and golden like!"
>What.
>"We didn't know what was happening so we had to cover you up before anyone noticed." Twilight adds, looking at yourself you find that you're covered in spare jackets and even a scarf.
>Pulling a few of the loose clothes off you find yourself looking at normal pale green skin.
"You sure I was?"
>"Anon, you were." Sunset says with conviction.
>Letting your head back you let out a groan.
"Great, now I get to worry about turning into a sparkler, lovely."
>"Ya'll don't think he's able to pony up do ya?"
>"Dude that would be awesome if he could!"
>"Well he is from Equestria so that might be it." Twilight adds in on the conversation around you.
"Look, uh sorry about falling asleep on you guys, guess I was more tired than I expected."
>"H-have you b-been using the melotonin like I s-suggested?" Fluttershy asks
"Yeah actually, been feeling great afterwards usually a bit drowsy, but the good kind you know?"
>"He's been able to get at least eight hours if not more from the pills." Sunset offers as well.
>"Maybe Anonymous is simply suffering from narcolepsy, has this happened before back home?" Rarity adds to the brain storm.
"Not that I've noticed no, look so I sleep a bit more, so what?"
>"Anon you started to use magic in your sleep, what if you used some of the combat spells we knew from back home?" Sunset asks worry infecting her tone.
>"I could fashion a device that could help reduce any magical disturbances, or at least absorb it for a while." Twilight offers up.

>>27867215
>"Eh no offense Sugarcube, but the last time your doohicky had drained us we felt exhausted, I don't reckon Anon'll be able to do much of anything if he uses it."
"Yeah, let's not do that. Look it'll be fine, might have something to do with what I was dreaming anyway."
>"Which was what?" Rainbow asks leaning over her seat to get comfortable
"It was when Sunset and I were escaping from Equestria to begin with..."
>All eyes go to Sunset, wide eyed the girl looks at you, "You mean when you?"
"Yeah, still can't believe a flash spell even worked."
>"Care to fill the rest of us in Darling?"
"It's a bit funny, but Princess Celestia is in control of the sun and light itself right? Well I had used a flash spell to blind her before sprinting to the portal. I didn't expect her to actually be blinded by it since she could control light."
>Sunset gives a giggle at the memory, "It was pretty funny when we managed to get through the portal at least."
>"Huh, so it's like when a video game boss get's whooped by his own weapon huh?" Rainbow asks aloud in thought before grinning, "I like it, good job on that at least."
"Thanks, hey since the movie is over think we should all head out? I dunno about you all, but I'm kinda starving now."
>As if to punctuate that statement your stomach growls rather loudly.
>Snickering erupts around you as the girls try to hide their smiles.
>"Anon's right," Sunset says standing up from her seat holding a hand out to you, "Let's go eat!"
>Taking the hand up you hear the girls cheer at that before they soon discuss where to eat.

>>27867227

>Walking with Sunset to your truck you look down at Sunset's hand.
>Well, you were kinda a jerk for sleeping through the movie, but you did get to enjoy some cuddling as the movie played...
>Sunset also managed to keep her libido in check as well...
>Decision made you reach out with your hand and hold Sunset's.
>Sunset looks from the truck to you with a bit of shock to her face, before she soon beams at you in return intertwining her fingers with yours.
"Ahem, so uh, where we going to eat?"
>"We all decided on Applebee's." Sunset says as she walks closer to you cuddling into your side her hand tightly clasp to hers.
>You adjust your pace to match Sunset's as her warm frame burrows into your side keeping the chill at bay.
"Neat, anything in mind?"
>"Was thinking of a cream pie for desert, I know that much."
>You look down at her to see the little smirk of self satisfaction.
"Proud of yourself for that one?"
>"Yes, yes I am in fact."
>Snickering you escourt your sister to the truck and open the door for her.
>Sunset simply kisses your cheek making you flush before she hops in.
>You follow suit shortly after and drive the truck following the girls towards the local Applebees.

Anon-Sunset Relationship Up!
Some sweet moments and just wanted to show Anon slowly getting used to Sunset and stuff, plus lemme know if the flash back stuff is cool or not, I know that sometimes the whole flashback thing can be eh at best.

>>27867244
i feel like, so long as they happen naturally, flashbacks are a-okay
and so far, they haven't been out of place imo

story's great so far, I hope you're enjoying it just as much as we are

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>>27867244
>"Was thinking of a cream pie for desert, I know that much."
Anon better fucking give her that pie.

>>27867244
Liking it! I think the flashbacks add a lot, since it shows that there's a lot more to Sunset's attraction to Anon. And it makes him a more complex character who's given up a lot.

So we have two Sunset incest greens going? Nice.

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>>27867244

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>>27863967
This needs a pastebin.

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>>27866387
I-I get around...

>>27867244
I am turned on and proud of the that creampie joke. Good on you.

>>27868075
Frostybox hasnt added it to her pastebin yet
http://pastebin.com/u/Frostybox

>

>>27842711
Why can't she be real?
I know she'd never love me, but I could live knowing somewhere in the world there was a single mote of perfection.

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>>27868197
My, what would you guys think of me, it would be a tragedy if the rest know
I've been doing pone and humanized for a while even before going to /a/

I wish I was in an incestuous relationship with /mlp/ instead of an abusive one.

>>27870186
>having a relationship
>browsing /mlp/

Got the makings of a story coming soon. Want to write a little more before posting though.

>>27871263
Even onii-chan has come here, what has become of /mlp/? Have they acquired a good taste in fetish?

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>>27856912
>You’re now Fluttershy
>You make your way to the animal shelter
>You’re alone, since the girls were unable to accompany you
>Applejack was needed at the farm, Sunset stayed in school tutoring Pinkie Pie and Twilight and Dash were busy “helping” in her boutique
>This is somehow a blessing in disguise, since that means no more questioning about what happened in the cafeteria
>Not because you didn’t trust your friends
>But because these memories are so special, you could say even sacred for you

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AlYhbad-s7I
“Anon!” You quickly run to the little boy, face planted in the grass, next to the tree
“Are you okay?”
>The boy just stands up and shakes his head, and looks at his hands “Hey Flutters! Look!”
>Anon opens his hands, as you look down, and notice what he was holding… a small butterfly hairpin
>You eyes are open as plates. You thought you lost it a few hours ago, after win it in a prize machine, you ask where it was, because you looked and looked everywhere and it disappeared
>Anon smirks “I saw some kid took it from your backpack, After I accused him he told me where he hid it”
>Anon pointed out a very tall tree branch more specifically a nest
>Both your cheeks warms, as you hold the pin close to your chest
“Thank you, Anon”
>CHIRP!!
>Chirp? You look quickly look both left and right, trying to find where that sound came from. It was close, but where?
>CHIRP!!
>Again, you focus where is the origin of the sound
>Something emerges from your cousin’s reddish pink hair, a little bird, a very, very little bird
>You remember seeing it somewhere in the school books, a robin, a baby robin
>You giggle while Anon tries to get it off of him “H-hey! Let go!” He ruffles his hair, but a t the same time the bird has his hair firmly grasped
>Your little lungs give upp, and you laugh at your hands contents at the feud between your cousin and a baby bird

>>27872132
HABBANING

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>>27872132
>”Hey, kids” Everything all right here?” a deep voice breaks the scene, as you two turn your heads to see where it comes from
>”Oh PA!, HI!” Anon waves his hands at the big man; your uncle, Anon Senior.
>After some explaining, uncle Anon nods, as he agreed to help you to get the robin back to its home, since the little guy was only calm when you were holding it
>He lifted you high enough to reach the nest. You waved goodbye to your new friend as Uncle puts you back to the floor
>”Come kids, your Ma and your aunt are getting the picnic ready”


>You’re now reaching your destination, walking is less of a chore when you’re deep down on your memories. That little robin was the first one, since that day, you were bringing in animals to the house almost every day, with that little hairpin as your witness until today
>You’re in front of the Animal shelter
>One final thought invades your mind, you really want to see anon again
>You reach out for the door’s handle, but at the same time a hand clashes with yours
>”Oh, I’m sorry missy!” You hear “You first” Before you go through the door, the voice sounds somewhat… familiar
>You turn your head, only to find out
>It’s Mr. Safari, the husband of the Shelter founder and retired safari man
>You mentally scold yourself, Come on Fluttershy, keep yourself together , who else cold it be?
>Is not like Anon is going to appear behind Mr. Safa-
>”Hey, uh… is this the Canterlot Animal Shelt-FLUTTERSHY?!”
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V216jD1Ex0M
>You instantly freeze, now that’s a voice you definitely feel familiar.
>It can’t be, though
>A young male appears behind the pudgy man, he looks like Anon, way more taller than you remember and a bit scruffy
>But that hair, those eyes… Oh my! That smirk! IT’S HIM! IT REALLY IS HIM!!
“ANON!!”

>>27872222
>Finally, after almost two hours walking, getting lost three times and ending in a sketchy neighborhood called Griffonstein (Not to be confused with the actual country Griffonstone), you finally arrived to the blessed animal shelter
>By the lord in the skies your mother and you will have a serious conversation when you arrive at your apart-
>Your internal rant is interrupted when you see a flock of pink hair behind the fat man in front of you
>Reminded you to your dear cousin Fluttershy, but then again, she’s not the only one with a pastel colored hair, especially in this place
>You shrug it
>You better ask if you’re in the place you have to be, you usually get lost when it comes to visiting areas for the first time, even with a map
>You decide to circle the big guy
“Hey uh… is this the Canterlot Animal Shelt- FLUTTERSHY?!”
>You take a glimpse of the slim girl in front of you; the detail that gives her away is the small butterfly hairpin she wears
>Definitly her
>You smirk when you see her, and then the next couple of seconds is a blur
>You find your back making acquaintances with the pavement and Fluttershy pinning you down with a bear hug , the girl is strong for her physique
>You hear the door slamming and a voice of a middle aged woman with a lot of worry on her tone
>”Fluttershy, dear, are you alright?, I heard you yelling!”

>>27872132
Yo Nayaa, just giving some pointers I got from other anons about writing.

>Applejack was needed at the farm, Sunset stayed in school tutoring Pinkie Pie and Twilight and Dash were busy “helping” in her boutique

This could be better by splitting it up a bit, try to use And about once a sentace otherwise it get's rather cluttered.

>Applejack was needed at the farm, Sunset stayed in school tutoring Pinkie Pie.
>While Twilight and Dash were 'helping' in [Rarity's] boutique

>This is somehow a blessing in disguise, since that means no more questioning about what happened in the cafeteria

Replace Questioning with question as it doesn't roll off the tongue well.

>You eyes are open as [wide as] plates. You thought you lost it a few hours ago, after win[ning] it in a prize machine, you ask where it was, because you looked and looked everywhere [, but] it disappeared

Maybe a bit too heavy on comma use, but I get called out on not using them enough either so that's fine.

>Anon smirks “I saw some kid took/take it from your backpack, After I accused him he told me where he hid it”

>Your little lungs give upp, and you laugh at/into/ your hands contents/contest/ at the feud between your cousin and a baby bird

Still liking the story you've got going so far and can't wait to see more! Also Flutters and Cousinon are top cute and OTP for me. Keep up the work!

>>27872237
Bless you Nayaa, your green and your drawing is exactly to my liking. Aside from a few grammatical and punctuation errors, the progression of the story is great, establishment of characters and the backstory is good and god the drawings I love it.
Keep up the good work!

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>>27872237
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fd6MW-XhO5I
>Judging by the woman’s reaction, it seems that your dear cousin being loud is still a VERY rare as a solar eclipse
>”O-oh, Ms. Safari!” Fluttershy quickly got off of you as fast as she tackled you down “Good evening”
>Now that’s the soft spoken girl you remember
>”And pray tell, Who’s this young fellow?”
>”Huh?... OH gosh, ANON!” Flutters turns on her heels and quickly helps you get on your feet, a shame, you could feel how your back and the street had a connection of some sorts
>You see your cousin fidgeting , she can’t hide her happiness, and you can barely hide it, despite your calm demeanor says otherwise
>It’s been a while since you two see each other, almost 11 years
“I missed you Flutters” you say as you pulled your cousin for a more personal hug, she offers no resistance and hugs you back
>”AHEM! Anon is that it?” You hear the woman Shy addressed as Ms. Safari “I take you and miss Fluttersgy know each other”
“You have no idea” You say as your gaze meets her
>And geez, what’s with that look?
>She looks at you, back to Fluttershy, then back to you, and then back to Fluttershy
>Her gaze show a lots of things, curiosity, suspicion, and finally, amusement
>A woman in her mid-thirties as you assumed, green hair tied with a ponytail with a few bangs on the sides of her head, using an apron over her matching green sweater, jeans and boots.
>”Well then, I’m pretty sure you kids have a lot to catch up… Fluttershy dear, you can take the day off” Ms. Safari nods
>”Oh my, are you sure?” Man, Fluttershy is really bad at hiding her excitement, or her other emotions for that matter
>Ms. Safari nods again
>”THANK YOU!”
>You feel your arm getting tugged, while Fluttershy urges you to follow her
>You decide to not take much resistance, but not after you messaged your mother you finally arrived to Canterlot, and thanking her for the nice surprise

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arrived to Canterlot, and thanking her for the nice surprise
>And after a while you are dragged through Canterlot, your new home

>Somewhere else, in a Cafe
>You just received a message from your son, you open your phone as you put on your glasses
>”Arrived to canterlot, nice surprise ma, thanks”
>You smile, while the waitress arrives with your mocha and your butterscotch pie
“Keikaku doori” you whisper
>”Keikaku means plan” the waitress completed


I thank you guys for all the feedback you gave me
It's my first official green, i hope i can get better

>>27872444
That's bullshit, there's no way this can be your first green. Do you do any writing aside from this?
Based keikaku doori anon-mom.

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>>27872522
Small greens and oneshots here and there but nothing big
I wrote a Tales of Symphonia fanfic once but i am not proud of that

>>27872579
Ahh I see.
Your writing feels very weeb influenced, not that I hate it, now I know why.

> “We’re home.”
“Okay dinner we’ll be ready soon. One of you can take a quick shower.”
> “Thanks mom. Dibs.”
“No way Anon. I’m the older sibling so I get priority.”
> “Dash you can’t pull the age before beauty card every time you want something.”
“Well since I have both age and beauty I win by default.”
> “Or we could compromise and shower together.”
“Yeah right little bro. That’s never going to happen in a million years.”
> “So I get to shower first then?”
“Over my dead body.”
> “That can be arranged.”
“Not if I kill you first.”
> The two of you wrestle in the living room for a minute until your mother yells at you to knock it off.
> “Guess we’ll have to find another way to settle this.”
“Yeah, how about first one to the bathroom gets to shower first.”
> She says while simultaneously bolting for the only bathroom in the house.
> “No fair Dash.”
> You say running after her. Dash easily makes it there before you and slams the door behind her.
“I win!”
> “Yeah, I suppose I should have seen that coming.”
> You say defeated.
> You were Anon, and this was your life. Sixteen years old living with your mother and older sister.

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> You lived in the westside suburbs of Chicago. Attending the same local high school as your sister. You being in your Junior year and her in her Senior year.
> Both of you star athletes. You for baseball. Her for track., and since practice was after classes each day you just rode to and from school together.
> Your family was tight on cash most of the time since your father was no long a part of your life. Mom would work fifty hour work weeks for a telemarketing company. Dash worked weekends at a gas station, and you worked the same hours, but at a public golf course.
> Life was tough, but you never let that get you down. Even though their was plenty of things to be down about.
“Anon!”
>Your mother’s voice snaps you back to reality.
> “Oh sorry mom.”
“I swear you space out all the time.”
> “Sorry. What did you want me to do?”
“Finish making the potatoes.”
> Once you’ve mashed and mixed the butter and salt you set the table. After that you hear Dash yelling about something and decide to go check on her.
> “Need something Dash?”
“Yeah they’re no towels in here.”
> “You got in there knowing you didn’t have anything?”
“Just hurry up and get me a towel.”
> “Well mom just threw down the laundry, so your S.O.L.”
> You could hear a faint sigh of frustration through the door.
“Fine then can you just go grab something from my room.”
> “Me go into your room? Are you sure you can trust me to do that.”
“Yes, now can you please hurry up I’m starving.”
> “As you wish.”
> Forcing you to wait on the shower now begging you for help. You think it’s time for some pay back.

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> Upon entering her room you find the skimpiest top and bottoms you can find. Intentionally forgetting a few crucial items.
> “Here this is all I could find.”
> Dash cracks the door for you to hand her clothes and quickly closes it behind you.
“Are you serious Anon? You didn’t even bother to grab a bra or panties?”
> “What’s the problem that’s never stopped you before.”
“Does seeing me like that turn you on you little perv. Now go get me some real clothes.”
> “Sorry can’t hear you mom says dinner’s ready.”
“ANON!”
> ~“Carry on my wayward son. They’ll be peace when you are done.”
> Feigning ignorance pays off when you see your sister come to the dinner table with only what you gave her. Exactly as planned.
> Mom doesn’t see to notice, but you couldn’t help but giggle to yourself all the while.
> It was a dangerous game you played with your sister, but it was worth it every time.
> After dinner you go straight to your room to do your homework.
> Precalculus wasn’t that hard, but it sure was time consuming. The worst type of homework. After two hours of hammering away at you remember that you hadn’t taken a shower yet.
> Not only that you recall that you don’t have any towels that are dry. Going to the laundry room you grab a dirty towel from the hamper and grab a quick rinse just to freshen yourself up.
> As you step out of the shower you notice Dash is sitting on the toilet waiting for you. Damn you didn’t even hear her come in.
> “So sis can you remind me who’s the perv again.”
> She doesn’t say anything while continuing to give you a mischievous smile.
> “Dash say something your starting to freak me out.”
“Remember that time you flushed my retainer when I was fourteen?”
> “Y-yeah.” You say hesitantly.
“Well now something of YOURS has been in the toilet.”
> Getting up she leaves giving you nothing but those foreboding words.
> Guess you won’t be brushing my teeth.

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> By the time you finish your homework it’s already 10:30.
> Damn nothing to really do, but to go to sleep. However, you still had a nightly ritual to perform. Grabbing the washcloth you kept hidden under your covers you closed your eyes and imagined your sister’s jiggling tits as you began to slowly jerk off.
> You didn’t love your sister like that, but when you’ve got a fully developed sexual goddess walking around with almost no clothes there was no way you wouldn’t get turned on. Damn puberty.
> Her firm muscularly toned body was exactly what you looked for in a woman, but god had to go and make her your sister. Which is why you were an atheist.
> Her tits were the perfect size for your hands. You could imagine fondling them while teasing her nipples. Burying your face in her lovely marshmallows.
> After about a minute you climax into the rag, but one wasn’t enough. It never was. After three more orgasms you finally feel relieved enough to sleep. You look at your rag and decide that today is a good day to throw it down.
> Always have to replace it before those cum stains become visible. You try to get up, but you legs feel like lead. Same as your eyelids, and before you know it you were out.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iweOSPbU73Y
> Seven o’ clock already? Fucking hell.
> You drag your feet out of bed to find that Dash isn’t up yet.
> You peek inside her room to find her sitting at her desk.
> “Playing hooky today Dash?”
“Yeah, so can you play it cool for mom for me? Also, here’s my homework if you can take care of that too.”
> “Sure thing. I always do.”
> Convincing mom of anything this early in the morning took no effort at all, but everything else was completely normal. Same routine of food, clothes, and personal grooming before you were out the door.

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> Be Rainbow Dash
> It’s Friday and the last thing you wanted to do was go to school. Fuck that noise. You were going to get a head start to your weekend. Especially since you didn’t have to work.
> First things first however you needed to get the laundry going. Since mom didn’t get around to it last night.
> Not much of your stuff needed to be thrown down, but you were sure Anon forgot to throw down his uniform last night.
> Upon entering his room sure enough there it was thrown into the corner. Sometimes he could be a real slob. However, something else catches your eye. A single wash rag beside the bed. why the heck was that there?
> As you pick it you feel that it’s all stiff and crusty. What the heck happened to it? For some reason you brain tells you to take a whiff of it. The smell is strangely fishlike, but strangely arousing.
> Then the realization hits you. Anon probably uses it to clean up after he masturbates.
> At first your disgusted. Then, you’re intrigued, and finally after another sniff horny.
> This was so wrong, but you didn’t care. Getting off to your brother’s scent wasn’t the worst thing in the world. It’s not like you love him like that, but he was always so nice to you. Even when you didn’t deserve it. He forgave you, and helped cheer you up.
> His body was also super toned from playing baseball, and he was cute. Everything you wanted in a guy. Damn whoever decided to make him your brother.
> The only thing you could think of now was getting off, so you rush back to your room and pull out your secret weapon. A dildo that your friend Gilda gave you for your birthday. It was originally a joke, but it’s come in handy more times than you care to count.
> Already plenty wet from sniffing the washcloth you plunge the elongated toy deep inside you. Everyday you wondered what the real thing would feel like, but you weren’t quite ready for that kind of commitment.

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And there you go.
I REALLY want to continue this story, but I'm not sure with my prior obligations how much I'm going to be able to write.
Oh well. We'll see how it goes.

http://pastebin.com/2DRqRmpY

>>27872866
Pretty good. Except for when you brought religion/lack of religion in. That stuff kills threads. I am a religious person but I don't really care about what others believe and shit. But there are a few religious nuts who browse this board

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>>27846152
Mom: Celestia
Aunts: Luna, Cadence, female parents of the Mane 6, Cherry Jubilee, Vinyl, Octavia, Hippie horse, Starlight, Cheerilee, Coco Pommel, Flower trio, Mayor Mare, Harshwhinny, Peachbottom, Blossomforth, Mrs. Cake, Nurse Redheart, Cloudy Quartz
Sisters: Twilight, Pinkie, Maud Moondancer, Fluttershy, Rarity/Sweetie, Rainbow, Scootaloo, Spa Pones
Cousin: Apple horse, smaller Apple horse, Derpy, the female Wonderbolts, Chrysalis, Coloratura,

I got sick of making the list so that's what you get.

>>27873162
>>27873162
faggot

>>27873162 (you)
>Makes comment to whine about muh religion
>"But I don't really care"

>>27872888
Well I'll be waiting. Hope you can right more soon

>>27874179
This.

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>>27873162
>he doesn't appreciate illegal christmas cheer
kys my man

>>27872222
that pic is cute

>>27872828
>“Okay dinner we’ll be ready soon
>dinner we'll be ready soon

>>27872579
MOAR!

>>27872852
>>but god had to go and make her your sister. Which is why you were an atheist.
Kek,oh lordy kek.

>>27872417
That self satisfied smirk of 'So this is Shy's fuck toy, I'm watching you boyo'

It does things to me...

>>27873887
It's more about not wanting the thread to die from religious nuts

>>27873796
Says you. Nerd

bump from 9

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Oh shit she's asleep and dreaming with you guys
What do you want to ask?

>>27879465
Sup bby how big is your best friend ass? My friends want to know

>>27879465
Questions for you or fluttershy?

>>27842711
Wow guys, you sure are really pretty incesting in this thread

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>>27879551
For fluttershy

>>27879465
What's your opinion on that qt boi you met today?

>>27879465
I know you have the hots for your coz but would you go out with me?

>>27879674
What?

>>27879641
Will you be my qt gf?

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>>27879674

>>27879720
>>27879641
>>27879632
>>27879465
Your art is magnificent. Quick, yet concise.
are you on derpibooru

>>27879465
How are children made?

>>27879801
How or why are you so cute?

>>27879465
Will you ever make porn?

>>27879465
Flutters are you aware you're a fictional character? Is it like an acting job, or more like the Truman Show?

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>>27879465
Have you ever passionately held hands with Anon?
If yes how was it? If no, do you want to?

>>27879465
Fluttershy you are not dreaming. You woke up. Take the red pill to know the truth or the blue pill to go back to your blissful ignorance. Which will it be?

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>>27879465
Did you know you're a horse?

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>>27879465
What's your favorite outfit to wear?

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Sorry guys
There was a blackout in my neighborhood
Im phoneposting at the moment so i guess that's it for tonight, but before i go

>>27879841
Depends, this story? Maybe
In other aspects? Yeh, i do draw it

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>>27880403
Thanks, I liked it. I love the way you draw.

>>27880403
like tears in the rain scoob

>>27879929
>Scandalous
I don't know why I laughed so fucking hard.

Based Nayaa.

>>27879929
>>27880564
Fluttershy is for sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation.

>>27880439
F I D D L E

>>27880573
Unf

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>>27872888
Looking forward to the next part.

>>27881445
"Hey, who keeps taking down my posters? Those cost a lot!"

>>27879641
>>27879801
>>27879929
>>27880114
tfw Nayaa answers all of your questions.
You're the Based, Nayaa.
All these drawings make me want to get a drawing tablet, even though I'm no good of an artist.

>>27882162
If you have a scanner you can draw stuff and post it here.

>>27882227
Oh, and there's the learning curve with drawing on a tablet. I'd try drawing on paper before going for a tablet.

page 9

Is Love and Powerlifting going to continue his story?

>>27882933
I sure hope so.

bemping for more
can we get some pinkie and anon incest going?

>>27883761
Pie family harem. Igneous left to go be with a mistress and now big brother Anon must return to take care of all his family's needs.

>>27883786
I like this idea.

>Momtwi will never let you relieve your stress letting you her fuck her but will never be emotionally involved in anyway.
>You will never fuck her while she is reading a book with no noise except the couch creaking.
>She will never be slightly annoyed and roll her eyes when you decide to drain your balls on her face.

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>>27884992
>Me thinking it's a nice idea to wtite
>need inspiration
>Go check /gif/ because there's always momcest threads there
>the thread is filled with cuck shit

I mean, i know /gif/ has a high level of faggotry there, but this is just really fucking sad

>>27885103
Trash felt like having a field day there. Nothing to be done except post the on topic ones. :P

>>27885150
>/Trash/
Implying that 4chan isn't just overrun with garbage like that and traps now.

>>27885103
>cuck shit

Like a mom cucking a dad by fucking her son or something?

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>>27863967
I haven't seen you around the board before, but I'm really digging your writing.
Good job, man. I hope to see more.

>>27885757
yeah, I am trying to convince myself sjw trash hasn't tried to poison the homeland.
>>27886129
no just regular cucking.

>>27886129
Nah more like "Pat, the bully" shit gifs

>>27886205

Couple of days ago a guy in /d/ posted a thread to unironically bitch about racism in captioned hentai pics. Yep, a dumbass was being triggered by the text on some mongolian drawn porn not pandering to his beliefs and decided to throw a tantrum about it on niggerkike-hating 4chan. No, I couldn't believe he wasn't baiting either.

>>27886712
fucking tumblrites ruining this land of peace and happiness. have they no shame?