Storytime thread 22

page 7

>>27710856

File: full (1).png (105KB, 712x806px) Image search: [Google]

105KB, 712x806px

Keep this thread alive for a couple hours and I'll start work on a story.

>>27708048

>Upon seeing your tall, looming stature, Pinkie immediately stops her tirade and takes a few steps back
>You start stepping towards her
>Her whole body is trembling
>And not like she's on a sugar high or her Pinkie sense is going off
>"S-stay back! Don't eat me! I-I don't taste like cotton candy!"
>You're unsure whether you're making the best choice of actions, but keep approaching anyways
>Once you're in reach, you pick her up
>She screams and kicks out at you instinctively
>She nails you in the gut and you wheeze in pain
>Damn, you feel sorry for whoever got Applejack
>Or anyone who got a fucking magic user at that
>Probably disintegrated or some shit
>Nevertheless, you keep your hold on Pinkie and pull her into a hug, both to restrain her, and try to calm her
>She keeps yelling and squirming, but slowly devolves to whimpering and slight squirming as she starts to tire out
>You awkwardly try to rock your body to help ease her as well
>Eventually, she stops resisting, and you notice she's passed out
>Well, you suppose that counts as being calm
>You start carrying her to the empty guest bedroom to let her try to rest
>Well, this was DEFINITELY not how you ever imagined meeting Pinkie Pie would go


Hey I'm back. Sorry I let other thread die. I have failed you all. Let me recompensate with more green.

[/spoiler] Also I really have no idea how to write a completely terrified and panicking Pinkie Pie... will probably be better at writing her after she's settled in.

>>27712133

>tfw you always fuck up the spoiler
>always

>>27712139
Insert text

>>27712153
Fucking hell. I feel like an idiot.
[.spoiler]text[./spoiler]

pg 9 bump

File: 46c0be2d76abcb27ca01c4dbc66e5ad7.jpg (50KB, 564x564px) Image search: [Google]

50KB, 564x564px

>>27711542
>tfw senpai noticed our thread

>>27713036
T-thanks Anon. Will deliver soon.

Bump. Waiting on that story Droid.

File: 1466564502607.png (269KB, 650x900px) Image search: [Google]

269KB, 650x900px

http://pastebin.com/hJKBCUGb

Soon.

>>27713886
>amber
go on bro

Bump. I'm still writing, keep the thread alive for me.

>>27714323
Will do fampai

>Your name is Anonymous.
>You've lived a pretty successful life so far.
>Graduated University, licensed engineer, and a nice house on 52 acres of land.
>It's surprising how you've made it this far.
>Seriously. The first half of your high school years were terrible. Could hardly get anything higher than c's and b's.
>Good thing you picked yourself back up for the second half, or you'd probably be living the trailer life in some backwater town.
>The fact that you got that scholarship still amazes you to this day.
>Even though you've done so much in life, you still waste your time on 4chan, browsing /mlp/.
>How did you even get into the show?
>It's been so long, you can hardly remember.
>Turning to your computer, a quick google search reminds you.
>Those threads on /b/, and /co/.
>You cringe inside as you remember the autism of the early days.
>Ugh. It still hurts.
>You push that thought aside, and look back to your computer.
>You've just opened a thread, a prompt you skimmed past months ago that just reappeared.
>Looking it over, it simply states two options.
>You could go to Equestria, the land of promise, but at the cost of being a total cuck. All of its inhabitants would have no genitals whatsoever, and any attempt to engage in sexual activities would result in immediate banishment from Equestria.
>Or, your favorite character, your waifu, whatever you'd want to call it, could be transported from their world into yours.
>(S)he would be cold, bruised, and in need of care, but in time they would warm up to you. (S)he would have no idea why they were brought here, but you could tell him/her if you so chose to.
>The catch?
>Nobody besides you must ever know of her existence. Failure to stay true to this would result in your guest being ripped from your world, and returned to theirs.
>Normally you wouldn't post in threads like these since the recent Scruffening 2.0, but this thread has been up for a while now.

>>27715162
>Who would you pick, and what option, though?
>You never went crazy over a certain character in particular.
>Well not until recently.
>Ever since they aired that episode, 'Gauntlet of Fire', there's been a certain character you just fucking adore.
>Princess Ember.
>There's just something about her character you just can't get over.
>Her tsundere attitude, her looks...
>Hell, everything about her is amazing.
>But what option would you pick?
>Surely there wouldn't be any point in option one, unless you want to be friendzoned for eternity.
>Option two it is then.
>Pulling up the post form, you list that you'd take Ember with option two.
>A second later, the post is in the thread, joining the hundreds of others.
>Well gee, that sure got the stimulators pumping.
>Welp, off to the catalog.
>You click off the tab and return to the catalog.

>Twenty minutes of faggotry later, the power goes out.
>Everything.
"What the fuck?"
>You turn around in your chair, looking around the room.
>You can't see.
>Well, faggot, this is what happens when you shitpost at night.
>You pull your lighter from your pocket to try and illuminate your surroundings.
>Nothing out of the ordinary.
>You've got a flashlight in the kitchen, so it would make sense to head there.
>With a combination of feeling your way and the lighter, you make it to the kitchen.
>Opening one of the drawers, you grab the flashlight, and put the lighter away.
>You scan the room once more.
>Again, nothing out of the ordinary.
>Maybe you should check the brea-
>In an instant the house is bathed in a show of light and chaos as all of the light begin to flicker wildly, and all of the appliances turn on, causing certain objects to shake and fall.

>>27715175
>Earthquakes, here?!
>You're in fucking Ohio!
>Regardless, you aren't about to question the nature of this madness.
>Throughout the destruction you book it to the basement.
>Upon reaching it, you slam the door and head down the stairs.
>You made sure to grab a radio, your phone, and some food.
>As you reach the basement floor, the shaking stops, and you're greeted by a shadowy figure with a bag at his feet.
>You can't make it out clearly, but he's just standing there.
>You shine the flashlight towards the figure, and are able to get a better view of him.
>He's wearing a trench coat and a fedora, and he's got a katana sheathed on his hip.
>Softly, he whispers "Ayy lmao."
>The fuck?
"W-what the hell? Who are you?"
>Looking up from the ground, he only says "Name's Anonymous, correct?"
>You take a step back at this.
"How do you know my name?"
>Before he can reply, you turn around and reach for that old bat you've got on the wall.
>However, you didn't notice that he teleported behind you.
>As you try to swing, the bat is thrown from your hands with a swipe of his finger.
>Instinctively, you try to jump back at this, but hit the wall and fall to the floor like a fucking idiot.
>Your head hits the bat's shelf on your way down.
>He smiles at this
>"You posted in the thread, correct?"
"..."
>The man frowns, and unsheathes his katana, putting it against your throat.
>"Answer me, kid."

>>27715184
"I-I've posted in many threads... what do you want with me?!"
>He looks back at the bag.
>"You know the rules, right?"
>What?
>Your head hurts too much to know anything right now.
"R-rules? What rules?"
>The neckbearded faggot unleashes a screech that could pierce the heavens.
>"The rules! You get your waifu, but you have to keep her secret! I'm not asking you again, kiddo, do you know what I'm talking about?"
>Oh for God's sake.
>That thread.
>Fucking hell, how could you have known about that? How could he?
"Yes, y-yes I do. Your point?"
>He sheathes his katana, and points to the bag on the other side of the room.
>"I'm assuming you know what's in that bag. You break the rules, she's gone. Forever. Got it?"
>You're so confused right now.
>Better try to keep him from doing something.
"Of course, yes. I totally know. Mhm!"
>He squints his eyes, and teleports back to the bag.
>"Very well then. I shall make my departure. Try not to dissapoint?"
>He tips his fedora, and lets out another screech, twice as terrifying as before.
>That's a fucking war cry.
>He teleports out of your residence, leaving you in the darkness of the basement.

>>27715189
That's it for tonight. It's late and I've got other stories to write as well.

Criticism and feedback is encouraged and appreciated. Will look over anything and everything.

>>27715201
Forgot, here's another link to the bin.

http://pastebin.com/hJKBCUGb

>>27712133

Hey I'm back. Might write more tonight if you're all still interested in mine.

>>27715621
Yes, please do.

>>27715189
Liking OP so far. Hope to see him some more.

>>27715201
Good start, waiting for more.

Don't die on me, I've only just started. I'll write more tomorrow.

>>27715184
>>Softly, he whispers "Ayy lmao."
kek

File: 1448162156941.jpg (12KB, 178x209px) Image search: [Google]

12KB, 178x209px

>>27715189
>>27715184
>>27715175
>>27715162
i made a right choise to invite you in this thread.
>>27715621
move yo ass and write

page 8

>>27718193

>>27718553

Rather than post bumps why don't others write/post their options?

I'd take Rarara, option two. She'll definitely be weirded out by the big scary monster but I'll get her to warm up.

>>27712133

>You enter the small, spare bedroom and gently lay the resting pink pony on the guest bed
>You grab the nearby desk chair and pull it up to the side of the bed
>Taking a seat, you watch over your new charge and think about what the hell is going on, and what you're going to do
>First you decide to go over what you know

>One, some strange force pulled your attention to a thread on /mlp/
>The thread gave you two options and you chose one, again urged by some strange force
>Afterwards, the thread hit bump limit and was archived within seconds
>Last post said the choices were made
>Then, everything went black, there was a strange figure, and then Pinkie Pie was here
>And she was pretty shaken up too
>Sigh
>Not much info to go off of
>You'll have to ask her what she remembers of the ordeal

>You glance back at the aforementioned pony
>You know the biggest priority right now is figuring out how to calm Pinkie down and explain the situation
>You sigh as you again notice several cuts and bruises on her body
>Scratch that, priority should be first aid
>You stand up and head to the bathroom to get supplies
>After searching through the cabinets, you finally come across some gauze bandages and bandaids
>Eh, good enough
>You return to the bedroom quickly and step over to the bed
>Pulling out the first aid supplies you grabbed, you begin to awkwardly dress her wounds

>>27719823
He didn't finish it. For whatever reason all of the older writers just sorta gave up and left.

Working on an update, expect it within the hour.

>>27715189
>What the hell was all that about?
>Did you did a do?
>You attempt to stand, nearly falling again as you do so.
>As you regain your balance, your vision slowly creeps to the bag on the other side of the room.
>That guy couldn't have been serious.
>Surely he's pulling something.
>You walk over to the bag.
>It's nearly the size of a man.
>Fuck it. Let's see what's inside.
>Preparing for the worst, you undo the rope closing the bag, and open it up.
>Your heart skips a beat when you see its contents.
>The man wasn't lying.
>He fucking did it.
>Before you lies a certain blue dragon, who seems to be out cold.
>You are both ecstatic and terrified right now.
>Sure, Ember's right here before you, but how are you going to do it?
>How are you going to be able to keep this dragon happy while contained within your property?
>Sure, you've got over fifty acres of land, but there are always these rednecks that come in to hunt, even if you've labelled the area for no hunting.
>Maybe you could follow the Trump doctrine, and build a wall.
>You've got the money.
>You can dwell on that later, right now you've got something to attend to.
>Putting that thought in the back of your head, you look back to Ember.
>Picking her up, you carefully begin to take her upstairs, into your bedroom.
>When you exit the basement, you begin to take in the destruction.
>Did he need to do all of that to get your attention?
>Fucking hell, he could've just come upstairs and made a deal out of it there.
>Oh well, no point in crying over spilled milk. This can be cleaned in a matter of hours.

File: edb9a715e099f9b1bebd1814e3b4a5ce74fddd80943ed22e04e9a67ecbac7b56_1.jpg (45KB, 799x464px) Image search: [Google]

45KB, 799x464px

>>27719859

>>27720174
>You continue your journey to the bedroom, and upon reaching it, you carefully place Ember in your bed.
>You look her over once more, observing her condition.
>Cuts and bruises in various places, light bleeding. Nothing you can't handle.
>As happy as you may be right now, how will she react when she wakes up?
>Surely she won't be in the happiest of moods.
>Perhaps if you have some food ready that could help?
>Bandages first. Then food.
>You leave the room, going for your first-aid kit you've got in the attic.
>It takes you a minute to get there, wading through the clutter.
>Eventually though, you reach the pull-down ladder and make your way upstairs.
>Looking around, you spot the kit on the wall, and grab it.
>You return to the bedroom moments later, and open the kit.
>Let's see, bandages, cold-pack, alcohol. Yep, all that you need.
>Damn, that's a nasty gash she's got on her arm.
>You douse the alcohol on a rag, preparing to clean the wound.
>You hope this doesn't wake her up.
>If it does, well you can expect a couple cuts and bruises yourself.
>You lightly dab the wound with the rag, causing Ember to stir a bit.
>After a couple seconds, however, she seems to lie still again,

>>27720191
>Wew, that could have ended badly.
>You take the bandages, and carefully but firmly wrap it around the wound.
>You repeat these actions with the rest of her cuts.
>Surprisingly, she didn't wake.
>You cover her up with the blankets, and go to the kitchen.
>Now that you've got that taken care of, you can start work on food.
>What would she eat, though?
>Sure, her teeth make her seem like a carnivore, but in the show dragons eat gems.
>Hopefully she doesn't eat your watch when you sleep.
>Perhaps you could try a steak? Nothing can go wrong with steak.
>One hour and thirty minutes later
>Damn, if it weren't for Ember you could eat this all yourself.
>Nonetheless food's done, the house is cleaned, and you should probably check on your guest.
>You walk to the bedroom, with her plate of food in hand.
>Opening the door, you're greeted by the sight of absolute chaos.
>The blankets have been torn to shreds, there's trash everywhere, and most of your personal possessions are now in a pile on your bed.
>What the he-
>You couldn't even register the blue dragon that just knocked you to the floor.
>"Who are you?! Where am I?! You better start talking before somebody gets hurt!"

Smaller update, but it's something. Will probably work on more later.

page 8

>>27720202
O shit

page 8 bump

>>27722227

>>27723210

>>27723865

File: 1458431665282.png (372KB, 769x698px) Image search: [Google]

372KB, 769x698px

>mfw the laptop with the shining armor green literally took a bullet

>>27724392

bump

also notification

might not be able to write much this weekend, for reasons

bumping

also notification

might not be able to write much this weekend, for reasons

>>27725027
How did that happen?

>>27720202
AT LEAST TELL ME YOU SAVED THE STEAK

File: gty_dropped_food_restaurant_nt_120425_wmain.jpg (39KB, 640x360px) Image search: [Google]

39KB, 640x360px

>>27727196
Anon...

File: spike.no.jpg (59KB, 1920x1080px) Image search: [Google]

59KB, 1920x1080px

>>27727271
Raise your plate arm while you fall, hug it to your chest, whatever you do, save the meat!

Bump. Expect an update soon.

File: sig-4471431.1133320__safe_solo_blushing_dragon_tsundere_artist-colon-novaspark_spoiler-colon-s06e05_gauntlet of fire_princess ember_tsundember.png (1MB, 1800x2000px) Image search: [Google]

1MB, 1800x2000px

Bump

>>27728013

Update nearly done. Keep thread alive for me.

>>27728985
please make it long space man.

>>27729417
Will try.

Also, made slight edits the to bit right before Anon was tackled by Ember, would make sense to check it out in the paste before I post the next part.

http://pastebin.com/hJKBCUGb

>>27728583

>>27729863
Writing more than originally planned, taking an oddly long amount of time.

>>27730646
keep writing bro

>>27720202
>You're left speechless for a moment.
>You should have expected this you fucking idiot.
>Leaving her unattended for that long?
>Might as well hav-
>"I said SPEAK!!"
>She shakes you by your shoulders before slapping you across the face.
>Ouch!
>Fuck it, you aren't taking this shit.
>Using whatever force you can muster, you push Ember off of you, sending her back a couple feet.
>Standing up, you expect her to make a comeback, but rather, she just stands there, glaring at you like you just killed her son.
>You take this opportunity to speak.
"Listen, j-just listen to me! If you calm down, I can tell you everything you want to know!"
>She just looks at you for a moment before she says anything.
>"And why should I do that? So you could stab me in the back? Yeah, not taking it."
>Damnit.
>She's a cute, but she's stubborn.
>Although, she's got a right to be.
>She doesn't know where the hell she is, and is talking to something that didn't exist in her world.
"Do I look like I want to hurt you? If I wanted that you'd already be dead. I found you in my basement, banged and bruised."
>Her expression changes from anger to curiosity at this.
>Only slightly though. Seems she thinks you're lying.
>"Elaborate."
"Of course. As I said before, you were in my basement. You were covered in cuts and bruises, so I brought you up here. I patched you up, and made you some food. You like steak?"
>Looking down to the ground, you see that somehow the steak survived the fall. The plate landed perfectly.
>"S-steak? You have steak?"
>She's eyeing that fucking meat.
>You know what to do man.
"Yeah, if you still want it go for it."
>You nudge it with your foot, sending it sliding towards the dragon.
>She picks up the plate, and sniffs the steak.
>"How do I know this isn't poisoned?"

>>27731006
>Fucking hell man.
>Maybe...
>It would certainly be risky.
>Operation: Taste Test engaged.
"Well, maybe if I tore off a piece and ate it, that would prove it?"
>She pulls the plate closer to her body, before looking back at you.
>"Fine."
>She tears off a chunk with her claws, and slides it back over on the plate.
>You pick it up, and eat that motherfucker.
>Shit's damn good.
"See? Harmless. Do you believe me now?"
>"Hmph."
>For the last time, you send the plate her way.
>She takes it once more, and at first, nibbles it.
>Seconds later the entire fucking thing is gone.
>Holy shit.
"Do you... uh... want more?"
>"More?"
>Now's your chance.
"Tell you what. You put those claws away, and sit down with me for a chat? It would certainly help me explain our situation here."
>She seems to think about it for a moment.
>"Okay. Deal. But if you so much as try ANYTHING, don't expect to get far."
>Fuck yes.
>You were expecting her to put up more of a fight.
"That's fine. Just follow me, and I'll show you where you can rest your feet."
>You lead Ember into your kitchen, and show her where she can sit.
>On a barstool at the island.
>You sit opposite of her, and motion towards the other plate of steak.
"That was originally going to be mine, but feel free to help yourself. I can make more if I really want to."
>Without a word she takes the plate, and begins to devour the meat.
>It's sorta making you a bit uncomfortable.

>>27731013
"Do you uh... want a fork?"
>She stops where she sits and looks you dead in the eye.
>"Enough with the gimmicks. Why am I here?"
>Well shit.
>You were expecting this question, but not this soon.
>Telling her about the thread certainly wouldn't be a good idea.
>There'll be another time.
"Again, no idea. You were in a bag in my basement. How and why you were there? Not of my knowledge."
>"I was thinking you'd say something like that."
>"Surely you can answer this. Who and what are you? Where am I?"
>Easy.
"Just call me Anon. My full name is Anonymous. I'm what you could call a human being, or simply human. You probably didn't see any of us back where you're from. As for where you are, you're in my house, as you know, which is in the state of Ohio, part of the United States of America, located on planet Earth."
>She blinks in confusion.
>"I'm sorry, what? That doesn't make sense, those places don't exist. And neither do you."
"Well, where do you think you should be?"
>"Certainly not in the 'United States of America'. I don't even live on a planet named 'Earth'."
"Perhaps you traveled beyond dimensions?"
>"Do you take me for a fool?"
>You just look at her, shaking your head.
"Believe what you want, I'm just trying to help you here. I don't know where you came from, but you're here now. I don't know what else to say about it."
>She just glares at you again.
"Look, I don't know what I did to wrong you, but I promise to do everything in my power to help you get through this."
>She scoffs.
>"Really now? I can handle myself. I might as well just walk out of here no-"
>Oh fuck.
>Damage control initiative Beta-23 activated.
"NO, no, don't do that!"
>"And why not?"

>>27731016
>You're bad with reasoning.
>Time to lie your way out of this.
"M-my people wouldn't react to your presence as kindly as I have. If so much as one other person were to ever see you, who knows what would happen!"
>She gives you that glare once more.
>"I think I'd like to take my chances, thanks."
"Nonono, wait!"
>As she gets closer to the door you stand up to get in front of her.
>You're nearly there, when suddenly...
>*BANG*
>Holy shit!
"Get down!"
>Ember fucking jumps at the noise, and by reaction does what you said.
>"What's happening?!"
"Just stay low! Don't go outside, I'll figure out what's going on!"
>You crawl over to one of the windows, and take a look.
>At the edge of the treeline you can make out a figure in camouflage.
>He's got orange spots on him, and he's carrying a gun.
>He seems to be walking towards something...
>After a couple seconds, he stops, holsters his weapon, and picks up a dead coyote.
>It's one of those fucking rednecks!
>The piece of white trash screams out in satisfaction, and slumps the animal over his back, carrying it away.
>After he disappears into the woods, you look to see where Ember is.
>You're a little more than surprised when you see her looking over your shoulder.
"See what I mean? That idiot just killed an animal with the press of a button. I can only imagine what would happen to you.."
>She just stares forward in shock.

>>27731022
>"You're people are barbaric."
>She isn't wrong.
>Well not entirely.
>You stand up as you state your response.
"Some of us. Others would say most. While there are those of us that act like that, they're certainly outnumbered. Humans as a race do try to keep order, there are certainly an odd bunch of people who like to be exceptions. The best thing to do is just cope with it and stick it out"
>"So why do you want to help me? Why do you act like this when it seems as though the rest of your race would do me harm?"
>Well Anon? Why?
>Because she's your waifu?
>Nah. Terrible response.
"Because I'm not like them."
>She sits there for a moment, taking into consideration what you've said.
>"I... I think I'd like a couple minutes to myself, if you wouldn't mind."
>Okay. Simple enough.
>Wouldn't hurt give her a minute to catch up with herself.
"Fair enough. I'll be back in ten minutes."
>As you begin to leave the room, you hear her faintly say "...Ember."
>You turn around.
"Excuse me? Something wrong?"
>"Ember. M-my name is Ember."
>Fuck.
>You can hardly hold in all the HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG at this point.

File: 1466799664883.png (244KB, 375x382px) Image search: [Google]

244KB, 375x382px

>>27731029
wew.

Took longer than expected. Kept scratching shit because I didn't think I was writing Ember well. Any pointers with this would certainly be appreciated. Will work on this again ASAP.

>>27731043
And as per usual, paste updated, errors being fixed.

http://pastebin.com/hJKBCUGb

File: trump 4.jpg (63KB, 728x485px) Image search: [Google]

63KB, 728x485px

>>27731029
>>27731022
>>27731016
>>27731013
>>27731006
nice

>>27726905
Some scrawny ginger kid tried to run away with like 5 backpacks at an event I won't name. He got shot at twice, once in my bag and once in the ass. Not by me. Also ruined a pristine, unworn pair of socks.

Hope he never walks again.

So is this thread dead? What happened to all of the older writers? Seems like there are only two people writing stories for a thread spammed with bumps.

>>27731578
Color me suspicious... by that I don't mean black.

How did he manage to stay under the sun for so long without bursting into flames?

>>27731636
I dunno, man. He was the most chalk white faggot I've ever seen but I'm just a normal cracker and can't even spoon with a bitch without direct air conditioner output in my face. Must've consumed a lot of souls before this heist.

>>27731043
Based!

>>27719592
>inb4 injured vagoo

>>27731043
I think you made Ember believablemail, continue.

>>27732398
Reeeeee, autocorrect somehow fucked up believable.

>>27732404
>autocorrect
>believablemail
Why is your autocorrect retarded?

>>27732421
The way my phone works, if I accidentaly put r instead of e, erase the r, then type the e in its place, it'll substitute the e with a full word. It's fucking dumb.

>>27733187

>>27733848

>>27734220

page 9

>>27734929

>>27735841

>>27736246

>>27731635
Seems so. Only two writers we have left just started. Shame, this is a neat idea.

>>27736884
I may or may not come back given a bit of time. Just gotta see what life brings.

>>27731043
More when?

>>27736737

>>27738550

>>27738980

post 100

This thread is a shitty bumpfest therefor I will just try to get dubs
Dubs get

>>27741422
Checked.

I'm back I guess.

Working on writing big update. Will post later.

>>27742259

>>27719592

Bigger update

>It takes longer than you expected to wrap up Pinkie's wounds
>She's absolutely covered with small injuries, and you make sure to be gentle and take your time, lest you cause her further harm
>You slowly run your fingers through her coat, searching for any hidden scratches or cuts
>You'll be damned if it wasn't the softest thing you've ever felt in your life
>As you treat her, the physical contact causes something to click, and the reality of the situation to truly and completely sinks in
>The unbelievable softness of her coat, the light rising and falling of her chest as she breathes, and the faint smell of sweets and baked goods
>It all confirmed that this wasn't some strange dream or fantasy
>Pinkie Pie was really here and suffering, and it was all your fault
>The idea is almost enough to break your heart
>You sigh as you finish patching her up, and slump back in your chair
>After a few minutes of watching the pink pony, you doze off into sleep

>>27743037

>You awake to the sound of rustling fabric
>You stretch and yawn before rubbing your eyes groggily
>Finally clearing your eyes of crust you open them to see a half-woken Pinkie Pie mumbling to herself as she rubs her own eyes sleepily
>"Mmmh... Gummy, I just had the most craziest weird dream last night an-"
>She cuts her sentence short as she opens her eyes and sees you
"H-hey... are you-"
>Suddenly she gasps in a massive breath, preparing to shout
>Realizing that you're doomed the moment she starts talking or screaming, you frantically scramble to hush her, pressing your finger against her lips
"Shhh..... shh! Please, please, PLEASE stay calm! I-I'm not going to hurt you okay? I uh.... I Pinkie promise? Just PLEASE let me explain myself first?"
>Pinkie stares at you with wide, frightened eyes for what seems like an eternity before nodding her head in understanding
>You sigh in relief, slowly removing your finger from her mouth
"Alright, thank you... now... uhm... I guess I'll answer your questions... B-But one question at a time, please!"


>Pinkie stares for another moment, before finally speaking
>"What are- no, what's your na- n-no, sorry I mean, uh, wh-who are you...?"
>You stifle a chuckle at her adorable attempts to get her words out
"W-well uh... my name is Anonymous... but uh you can call me Anon... or whatever you want to really.... oh and uhm.... I'm a thing called a human... whi-"
>Pinkie blinks in confusion, seeming to perk up and become more attentive
>"Human? B-but we don't have humans in Equestria..."
>Hold on... she knows what a human is?
"W-well uh..."
>"Where ARE we anyways? It doesn't FEEL like we're in Equestria..."
>You sigh, hoping you can keep the conversation on track
"W-well uhm... that's the thing... we, well we AREN'T in Equestria.... or your world, or possibly even your dimension either... we're i-"
>She suddenly gasps, as if all the secrets of the universe were revealed to her
>Shit, so much for keeping focused

>>27743060

"OHHHHHHH! So like that time that Twilight went through that mirror thingy that was actually a portal to chase Sunset and get the Element of Magic back and she met other versions of me and our other friends and-..."
>You stare at her blankly as she goes off on her tirade, trying to keep up with her
>Well you'll be damned
>Guess the EqG movies are canon
>Fuck
>"and then when Twilight finally went back she saw the OTHER Twilight and-"
"Pinkie!"
>"H-huh?"
"Shhh! Please, let me answer!"
>"Oh... Okie dokie!"
>You sigh, before finally continuing your explanation
>At least explaining interdimensional crap wouldn't be too hard now
"Ok, well... uhm... well... this dimension isn't the SAME one as the one Twilight went to... but it's pretty similar in how it functions... though... there aren't alternate versions of everyone you know here.... we're all... uhm... completely unique and new individuals... and we don't have any magic either..."
>"Ohhh ok then. But... uhm... how do we go back to Equestria?"
>Fuck...
>Here come the hard questions

>>27743070

>You scratch the back of your head nervously
"W-well... uhhh.... that's kinda the... uh, problem. There... there is no way back..... this world and your world.... as far as I know... are COMPLETELY separated... there's no way to really, uh, travel between them."
>You hold your breath, nervously awaiting her response
>Her composure drops to one of worry and sadness, and then turns to confusion
>"O-oh........ b-but... if there's no way to go between them... then.... then how did I end up here??"
>Boom
>There's the big question
>"A-and........ wait... how... how do you KNOW all of this? You... you know my name... and... and my home, and my friends, and about the portal thingy and the world it leads to. HOW!?"
>She stares at you, now with a look of suspicion
>Aaaand there's question two
"Ok.... it... it gets a but harder to explain things here...."


That's all for now... not entirely sure I'm writing Pinkie to be, well, PINKIE enough. Any suggestions or tips would be appreciated.

page 8 bump

page 7 bump

Is thread dead?
Is anyone still reading?

>>27745367
I am.

>>27746000

trips has spoken
the thread lives

File: zIvPpx6.jpg (31KB, 640x452px) Image search: [Google]

31KB, 640x452px

>>27743083
House cat. Also, pic related

>>27710248
Option 3: you get sent to equestria. Sex exists, but you have to put effort in making any friends with pones, including ones you want to sex.

Pone are skeptical at first

>>27746854
i will add that to my list

>>27746907
I think it's best to keep it at two options. That's what this thread is and always has been.

>>27747164
better expanding

>>27747220
Shouldn't have to expand, it's just that all the old writers up and left for some reason. Anyone know why?

>>27747250
People here are all writing about option 2 and nobody gives a shit about option 1
So we should turn the general into a single option or espand it?

>>27747375
Make a poll before anything, at least.

>>27747375

Don't go changing the rules too much now. My story will rely heavily on the exact wording of the rules.


Also update inbound.

>>27743083

>You take a breath, thinking through how to explain everything
"Ok, first of all, as for the reason I know so much. Well... you and your friends and your world and stuff are all... part of a story in this world, in a way. You're all in a show called, err... My Little Pony... and it chronicles your adventures and stuff. I don't know how accurate it is to your reality though, but the general information seems to be right."
>Pinkie simply nods in agreement
>"So we're like.... uh.... like those Power Ponies characters that Spike likes, right? Just characters here, but still part of our own world?"
>God damn, you were lucky
>Of course the fourth wall breaker would be quick to understand
"Y-yeah, I guess... maybe... I dunno. But anyways. There are a lot of people who like the show and a lot of stuff has been made based on it. Music, art, toys, books, clothes, you name it. And a lot of... uh.... social communications to discuss all kinds of things about it."
>You pause and look back at Pinkie
"Really, there's a LOT to explain, and it'd probably be easier if you learned about it over time. But that's the gist of how I know about you."
>She lets out a small hum and closes her eyes, thinking over the information, before nodding again in understanding
>Good
>Now to explain the CURRENT situation
"Okay good... now... as for how you got here..."

File: 1466139901354.png (195KB, 557x394px) Image search: [Google]

195KB, 557x394px

>>27747429

>>27747250
I'm going to remain anonymous while saying this for now, but this guy: >>27747375 and some of the other shitposters is a big reason I left. It seems to have calmed down a bit, so I might actually come back if it stays that way.

>>27747722
If you're Skittles Anon you better stay anonymous, because if we find out that you let an ineffectual stain on this thread's underwear drive you away, you will suffer.

>>27747722
>shitposter
>literally talk rare in this thread and made a new thread for you
please. renew yourself

File: pepe.jpg (528KB, 720x720px) Image search: [Google]

528KB, 720x720px

>>27747722 MUH FUCKING SKITTLES REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
or is that you jessi?

File: [deep concern intensifies].jpg (47KB, 676x450px) Image search: [Google]

47KB, 676x450px

>>27747722
Jessi Jinx?

File: 9 11 1.jpg (99KB, 599x659px) Image search: [Google]

99KB, 599x659px

>>27747722
Writefaggot weak like ant

page 10

>>27750153

Keep thread alive!
Almost done work, will try to make update when I get home.

>>27748929
>>27748939
I haven't been in here for a few days, but who are these guys that you're talking about? I don't remember them being in this thread.

>>27747722
Go back to your momlestia circle jerk faggot

>>27751194
I will, senpai!

>>27731029
>Well now that you're out of there, perhaps you can check out the damage done to your room.
>Making your way through the halls, you eventually arrive at the bedroom.
>You push open the door, revealing the damage once more.
>Damn.
>Why didn't you put her in the guest bedroom?
>A tired mind isn't a smart mind.
>She must have panicked when she realized she wasn't home.
>All of the drawers are open, which you proceed to shut.
>Afterwards, you begin to pick up some of the junk on the floor, and move them into a corner of the room.
>It's mostly old things you kept locked up in the closet.
>Once those got sorted out, you turn to the makeshift hoard on your bed.
>All sorts of things have been piled on there.
>As an added bonus, your shredded blankets have been put on top, like a cushion.
>The hoard consists of things like old books, figurines, your air conditioner, and your computer.
>Wait what?
>There it sits, lying in the mess with everything else.
>You carefully but quickly take your computer from the hoard, making sure not to damage it.
>No dents, or any other signs of harm.
>Thank the fucking LORD for that shit.
>You place it back next to the monitor.
>It can be wired back up tomorrow.
>Speaking of which...
>Looking at your watch, it reads 3:32.
>Holy shit, you haven't even realized how late it was.
"Well shit, looks like I get the guest room tonight..."
>You turn to leave the room, about to step out of the door, when you see Ember standing in the doorway.
>"What are you doing?", she asks, in a slightly aggressive tone.
"Just cleaning my room. whatever happened in here, I don't need to know."
>She steps back a bit.
>"Your room?! You can't just take my hoard! If anything, this is MY room!"

>>27753309
>Oh hell no.
>Engaging territorial defense system mach-3.
>Initializing.
"I don't mind your company here, honest. And while I'm willing to let you sleep here for now, you can't just take my room. And that hoard? It's made up of my stuff. It's not staying, missy."
>She scoffs.
>"M-missy?! How dare you! Why should I?!"
"Well, I mean, you could always just share a bed with me."
>Blush mode activated.
>"Ugh, fine, whatever! Just let me sleep here tonight, I'm too tired to clean it up now."
>Mission accomplished.
"Deal. Starting tomorrow you get the guest bedroom. See you then, Ember."
>She only sighs, and shuts the door behind you as you leave.
>You're going to need some new blankets.
>At least you've got some in the guest room.
>You head for the guest room, and arrive minutes later.
>This whole ordeal is fucking crazy.
>Never in your life would you have thought that you'd be sharing a house with a dragon.
>A cartoon dragon at that.
>You lay onto the bed, and before you know it you're starting to drift off.
>Sleep takes you before you can bring up another thought.

>>27753319
>Seven hours and some much needed shut-eye later, you wake.
>Feels good man.
>You step off the guest bed, and start to stretch your arms and legs.
>Why were you sleeping here again?
>Can't exactly remember.
>Well, might as well go grab some grub. Afterwards, maybe you coul-
>Oh wait, work.
>No, dumbass, you've got the next couple days off.
>Looks like you get to be a lazy bastard for a little while then.
>You head into the kitchen to grab some food.
>You're too tired to put in the effort to make a real breakfast.
>Cereal sounds good.
>You open the cupboard and grab some cereal.
>Applejacks or Cap'n Crunch?
>Truly a question worthy of the gods.
>Fuck it, you're not in the mood to get some new cuts on the roof of your mouth, Applejacks it is.
>You grab a bowl and spoon from the next cupboard over, and turn around to the fridge.
>Which, for some reason, the door is open.
>The hell?
>You slowly approach, spoon at the ready.
>You quickly throw open the door, only to be met by a blue figure.
>A blue figure that's eating all o' your god damn meat.
>Memory strikes you like a car does an overweight adolescent.

>>27753351
>Last night. The thread, the neckbeard, the steak.
>Ember.
"What do you think you're doing?"
>She jumps in her place. Seems you startled her.
>Ember returns your look, and says "What? I'm hungry. Can you leave me to eat in peace? You're making me uncomfortable."
"Actually, no, I can't You're eating all of the meat I've got in my fridge, and you're eating it raw. You could've waited for me to get up and cook it, y'know."
>"..."
"Tell you what. I've got to go get groceries anyway. You can finish up, I guess, but when I get home I'm making real food. What do you eat?"
>"Excuse me?"
"What do you eat? I mean, as in your diet. I already know you eat meat, but do you eat fruits, or vegetables?"
>She looks back at her 'meal' before she says anything.
>"You're right, mostly meat, however I can eat those other types of food as well. Dragons eat gems too, but only on occasion."
>Well, you'll be grabbing meat regardless, and gems...
"You eat gems? Just how common are gems in your world?"
>Ember looks at you like you asked her a stupid question.
>"They're everywhere, Anon. You could find them in about every rock you could find."
>Time to break it to her.
>No gems for this dragon. At least for now.
"Good thing you only eat them on occasion then, right? Gems are especially rare here, and just a small one would cost you a fortune."
>"You can't be serious. Really? You're playing a joke, aren't you."
"Really. Now I've got to go Ember, I'll be back in a little bit."

>>27753361
>Two hours later, and you're pulling into your driveway.
>Nearly everything you bought was meat, with the exception of some small things, like blankets and waffles.
>Bitches love waffles.
>Fifteen minutes of putting it all away later, Ember is nowhere to be seen.
>At least in the kitchen that is.
>Where could she have gone?
>You take a quick trip around the house, the first stop being your now tidy room.
>Shit's clean as fuck.
>She even put everything back where it was.
>Ember seems to be lying on your bed, asleep.
>Taking a nap, eh?
>You unfold the blankets, and cover her with them.
>Time to make sum o' dat good shit.
>Waffles for the waffle lord!
>You race to the kitchen, your heart racing with excitement.
>Ten minutes later, the waffles are done.
>You set your plate on the table, fork in hand, syrup at the ready.
>You coat the waffles in the syrup, and set it on the other side of the table.
>Time to eat some bomb-ass waffles.

>>27753367
That's done. Paste updated, more sometime soon. Feedback and suggestions are welcome.

>>27753408
I want ten paragraphs on how bomb-ass those waffles are.

>>27753319
>>You head for the guest room, and arrive minutes later.
>minutes later.

How fucking big is the house? Doesn't tale me more than 15 seconds to walk down my hall.

>>27753735
I see your point. Will fix in the bin, thanks.

>>27753682
I was about to include a section of Anon teaching Ember about the fine delicacy known as waffles, but I couldn't write it to sound believable enough. If I'm correct, I left a little bit of it in the bin.

>>27753771
lewd when

>>27753795
B-but I need to develop the characters more. I feel like I've hardly done anything with them yet.

>>27753815
I agree. Lewd too early always ruins a story.

>>27753361
>Last night. The thread, the neckbeard, the steak.
>The steak

There goes my fucking drink. Damn you.

>>27753815
at least an exposed pussy

>>27753853
That brings me to another thing that I forgot.

http://www.strawpoll.me/10606598

>>27753887
what does "cloaca" mean? if it's scat i'm gonna cry

>>27753981
It's a reptile's pussy. They don't have two holes, rather one. Google it and you'll see.

>>27754030
can't find it

>>27754030
i prefer pussy not cloaca

File: disgusting 6.png (221KB, 348x438px) Image search: [Google]

221KB, 348x438px

>>27754030
>cloaca
that's so fucking disgusting

File: shiggy diggy 4.jpg (11KB, 250x238px) Image search: [Google]

11KB, 250x238px

>>27753887
>steamy reptile cloaca
>steamy

File: vomit.gif (2MB, 280x296px) Image search: [Google]

2MB, 280x296px

>>27753887
>cloaca

>>27754459
>>27754347
>>27754207
>>27754050
>All this shit taste

File: image.png (257KB, 1280x800px) Image search: [Google]

257KB, 1280x800px

Fucking hell... got writer's block kinda...

Trying to figure out how exactly to scale Ponka
Pic related
Choice wouldn't really affect the overall plot, but would greatly impact interactions
i.e picking up and carrying, lap sitting, and of course, lewd.
Personally I prefer option A or B, but I'd like some input from you guys

http://www.strawpoll.me/10607339

File: big smoke.jpg (38KB, 291x433px) Image search: [Google]

38KB, 291x433px

>>27755044
big please

>>27753887
Whelp. Pussy it is then.

Next question...
Human or horse? If horse this includes donut.
http://www.strawpoll.me/10607435

File: image.png (807KB, 750x1334px) Image search: [Google]

807KB, 750x1334px

>>27755044

I feel like you guys are just fucking with me because I stated a preference

Big it is then I guess
And time to do some rewriting

>>27755044
>A
What is this? a Ponka for ants?
>>27755170
>Human or Horse
>Horse pussy on lizard
no thanks, my stomach can't take it

File: ABSOLUTELY DISGUSTING 1.jpg (1MB, 5000x5000px) Image search: [Google]

1MB, 5000x5000px

>>27755170
>horse pussy on lizard
what the fuck are you thinking Anon

>>27755191
People have preferences, not necessarily me.

And to be honest, some of the Ember porn that has horse pussy doesn't look all that bad to be honest. http://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/trash/image/1461/46/1461465970421.png

When in doubt, give her a penis and blame OP for the faggotry.

>>27755191
>pussy on a lizard
no thanks, my stomach can't take it

>>27755211
it doesn't load

>>27755248
Just go to the clop thread on /trash/ and click the link to the previous thread, replacing the desustorage with cuckchan. The first images uploaded to that thread are Ember, so you should know the pic I'm talking about when you see it.

File: 5458490+_1fe4b67e6f3fbe70ffc97cad9ac4fe98.png (21KB, 300x193px) Image search: [Google]

21KB, 300x193px

>>27755271

>>27755191

A is a Ponka for picking up and carrying around easily

A is a Ponka that can be kept discreet, so there is less worry that she'll be lost forever

File: shiggy diggy 3.jpg (58KB, 634x960px) Image search: [Google]

58KB, 634x960px

>>27755396

File: 1466462229492.png (250KB, 420x500px) Image search: [Google]

250KB, 420x500px

>>27755271
>>27755211
Seems like I've got everything I need. Going to write soon, but first...
It's time for some late night Amnesia...

>tfw about to enter storage

>>27755417
horse pussy it is then

>>27755405

desu the idea was only in my head because of
>27746808

>>27755417
>http://www.strawpoll.me/10607435
Checking it again, horsepussy is in the lead.
Was it the picture I linked that changed your minds? I'll look at it again tomorrow, and decide myself then.

>>27755466

>>27746808

I am ashamed of that failure

File: 204550.png (80KB, 512x512px) Image search: [Google]

80KB, 512x512px

>>27755477
yes

File: DuNOXDF.jpg (43KB, 600x415px) Image search: [Google]

43KB, 600x415px

>>27755494

Option 2 seems neat, TwiTwi

File: 1466864349491.jpg (20KB, 200x209px) Image search: [Google]

20KB, 200x209px

>>27753408
Call me a heretic but so far I think your story is on par with if not better than anontheterrible's story. I'm sorry, but it's true.

>>27755995
Not until it gets lewd it isn't.

File: 1466715130626.png (255KB, 539x634px) Image search: [Google]

255KB, 539x634px

>>27756400
D-dragons are legal, right?

>>27756875

>>27757287

Ember is cute, but I'm still waiting for Celestia greentext.

>>27757500

>>27757799
Hate to break it to you but ember is much more of a cute then celly

Everyone say it with me: Teen. Dragon. Pussy

>>27747429

Here's what I wrote last night but didn't post because I fell asleep. Probably shit cuz I was tired.

"This is going to be harder for me to explain.... mainly because I don't really understand it myself...."
>You had decided to tell her the truth, right from the start
>It would be much better in the long run, and she wouldn't end up feeling betrayed
"There was this... well... maybe it would be easier if I showed you..."
>You pause and glance over her, concerned by her wounds
"Errr... Can you move? Or does it hurt too much?"
>Pinkie blinks in confusion before looking down at herself
>Was she only just now noticing the bandages?
"...you were pretty beat up when you arrived, so I patched you up a bit... does it not hurt?"
>"N-no... not really. I think I should be able to walk."
>She slowly gets up and moves to the edge of the bed
>As she steps with her left foreleg, she suddenly lets out a sharp gasp of pain and stumbles, falling over the side
>With reflexive instincts commonly found in individuals known as 'dads', you reach out to grab her

>>27758920

>Upon catching her, you're surprised to find she's lighter than you expected
>A LOT lighter
>Despite the fact that she was about chest level to you when standing, she felt like she weighed no more than 40 pounds
>Fucking balloon pone
"Well... I guess walking's out of the question for now... do you uhh... do you mind if I, err, carried you instead?"
>Pinkie looks up at you before averting her eyes and awkwardly grinning sheepishly
>You could have sworn you heard a faint squee sound
>"U-uhm yeah... carrying... I mean, if it's no trouble to you."
"To be honest you weigh almost nothing compared to your size... I should be fine. Here, let me just..."
>You carefully shift her around to a more comfortable position, and then start heading to your office

>>27758725
Teen. Dragon. Pussy!

>>27758725
Baby. Dragon. Anus!

>>27755417
She better not find Anon playing Skyrim.

File: Dragon body.png (1MB, 1024x1280px) Image search: [Google]

1MB, 1024x1280px

>>27755477
Alright, looked it over again. Even though horsepussy is leading, looking at Ember's anatomy from the show, it wouldn't make sense. She doesn't have an ass, so the pussy wouldn't look right. I'm going with human, but when we get to it, I'll try to write it as neutral as possible so it could be depicted as either. Sorry for the confusion, I'll have an update soon.

>>27759672
I think dolphin pussy would make the most sense based on her body

File: dubs man nice.gif (2MB, 396x304px) Image search: [Google]

2MB, 396x304px

>>27760333

File: Nope.png (593KB, 995x1414px) Image search: [Google]

593KB, 995x1414px

>>27760333

File: 1466197345778.jpg (77KB, 456x900px) Image search: [Google]

77KB, 456x900px

>>27760333

>>27760333
Trips confirm dolphin puss-puss

File: this anon 1.jpg (8KB, 229x230px) Image search: [Google]

8KB, 229x230px

>>27760333
nice shit m8

>>27760700
>>27761027
Oh Trumpfu-chan, I feel the same way.

Let's build a beautiful wall together <3

>>27761027
I'll let you build a wall around my heart.

File: t9rdZ34.jpg (118KB, 466x700px) Image search: [Google]

118KB, 466x700px

>>27761027
ay bb u wun sum fuk????

Bump. Next dump coming soon.

File: write-hard-smaller.png (34KB, 400x320px) Image search: [Google]

34KB, 400x320px

>>27762512

Am here, but exhausted as fuck

Dunno if gonna do another update tonight or not

If I do it'll probably be shit cuz too tired to think really well

>>27762512
Soon?

>>27763442
Soon. Taking longer than expected, but it'll be here tonight. Even if that means 3 AM my time it's coming.

>>27763452
No rush, just wanted you to know im looking forward to more

>>27763452
Bump. Shit happened, my sister got into a wreck and she's in the hospital. Update won't be until tomorrow, though more than likely the day after.

>>27764916
Fuck sorry to hear that

>>27758929
Now wrap her in a blanket and chew on her ears.

File: react jameson laugh.gif (1MB, 320x180px) Image search: [Google]

1MB, 320x180px

>Softly, he whispers "Ayy lmao."

>>27764916
Page 9 bump, also how is your sister?

>>27767445
>>27765959
Not the best. She's broken her right shin, her jaw, and three ribs. She has to wear a neck brace because of damage in that area. There was internal bleeding in various places, but the doctors took care of that. She'll recover.

Good news though.

It wasn't her fault. Some guy was going ninety through an intersection and hit her car's passenger side.

And now that I've gotten home from that, I can start work on green.

>>27767819
>And now that I've gotten home from that, I can start work on green.
Please dont force yourself just for us. If you need to take a break im sure everyone will understand

>>27767908
dont volunteer me for shit

>>27767908
It's fine. I enjoy writing the story, so if anything it's kinda like stress relief.

>>27768205
Can't wait.

Page 9 isnt fine

>>27769910
Neither is page 10.

Keep the thread alive, still working.

Keep the thread alive, I'm still working.
To keep the thread from being a wave of bumps, I've got a proposition. I'm facing a bit of writer's block as of late, and I think it would be great if you guys gave me ideas on things you'd like to see happen in the story. It would help loads.

Holy shit, I didn't realize I was away for so long. Haven't had much time to do anything but edit some of my stuff that was already written. Anybody want me to continue one of the things I was writing?

>>27771176
Holy shit yes!

>>27771176
Yes!

>>27771176
Now we only need anontheterrible and some of the other writers to come back.

>>27770894
Damn its hard to say because we know so little of Ember... if this takes place post her becoming dragon lord then she'll be more open to being friend's with someone. Friends is a good thing, it can lead to so much more. If we are to bone her, then lets spend some time having some fun first

File: CLICKITYCLOCKITY.gif (215KB, 588x324px) Image search: [Google]

215KB, 588x324px

>>27771714
By doing what? Sure I could show her the show and vidya first, but that's like copying anontheterrible's story. I probably sound like a filthy beggar right now, but I need

M O A R
O
A
R

One idea I had was Anon taking her out to squeeze off a couple rounds with his >insert raifu, but the redneck resolution arc has yet to come.

File: 1466882431103.gif (987KB, 229x176px) Image search: [Google]

987KB, 229x176px

>>27771987
>Redneck resolution arc

Holy shit

>>27771176
Oh joy! The elder writefags are returning!

Also, working on update tonight, but wanted to ask all of you guys a question.

Should I take the plot along slowly, with lots of filler interaction?
Or should I do a little skipping ahead to get to my big plan?

I'm presuming you guys will want more Ponka interaction, but I figured I'd ask anyways

>>27772059

>>27753833
>>27753833

>>27772059
Filler is fine just don't go full naruto.

>>27772109

>implying I meant lewd

File: 1466890060598.gif (1MB, 300x159px) Image search: [Google]

1MB, 300x159px

>>27771176
MOAR LUNA NOW

>>27772691
Sorry dude, I'm not the Luna writer.

>>27771987
You already know what to do. Show her the glory of the waffle!

>>27772977
Praise be to waffles!

>>27773858
And steak. Can't forget the steak!

>>27775659

>>27776656

If sept's anotherterrible comes back.

>>27777797
What did he mean by this?

>>27753367
>After you're done with your meal you decide to go back to your computer.
>Checking the thread would be a good idea.
>Perhaps other people have had this happen to them.
>When you get to your computer, you try to turn it on, only to have no reaction.
>Oh right, Ember undid your wires.
>You plug them back in, and start up your computer.
>It takes a minute, but eventually it completes the task, giving you the freedom of the Internet.
>In under thirty seconds you've got the thread open.
>The first thing you do is read through the rules again.
>Maybe there's a loophole or something you can work with.
>...If even one other person finds out, she will be taken away never to be seen again...
>Wait, what?
>Never to be seen again?
>You thought she'd just go back to Equestria if she was caught.
>God fucking damnit...
>You are a massive cock-juggling thundercunt.
>Before, you thought that if anything were to happen there'd be no harm done. She gets to go home, and you got to spend time with your waifu.
>But now?
>Now that you know this, you aren't sure how to feel.
>Ember will never be able to go home. If anything, this is her new home.
>She's stuck here because you made a stupid decision.
>If only you didn't post in that thread.
>Things would have been different.
>But then again, how were you supposed to know?
>To you it seemed just like all the other prompt threads on /mlp/.
>You take a couple minutes to contemplate this thought before returning to your computer.
>Scrolling through thread, it seems just like any other of it's kind.
>You've got shitposters, bumps, and people writing green.
>There isn't even one reply about a situation like yours happening to someone else.

>>27779246
>Odd.
>Maybe you should post something.
>You fill out the post form describing what's happened.
>Time to hit pos-
>HOLD THE FUCK UP LASSIE.
>You quickly erase everything you had in the post form.
>You were mere seconds away from losing Ember.
>Holy hell, you hadn't thought of that.
>If you so much as mentioned her in the post, she'd be gone.
>Fuck.
>Anons are smart not to have said anything.
>What else could you do?
>lightbulb.png
>Without giving it a second thought, you purge all of the porn on your computer like it's the city of Stratholme.
>Same with anything else pony related.
>No use in risking it.
>Not yet.
>You'll show her the show, and other things, when she's ready for it.
>There's no point in making a hot-headed dragon angrier than she already is.
>You step out of the chair, and turn off the computer.
>As you step out of the room, you notice Ember is still sleeping on your bed.
>Good thing you destroyed the dirty dirties.
>What should you do now?
>TV?
>Nah.
>You step back into your room, and into your closet.
>You pull out a box.
>The big one.
>Honestly, you don't care what Ember has to say about this.
>The Emprah doesn't tolerate heretics.

>>27779261
Smaller update, things happening as you all know.

I also don't know a whole lot about W40K tabletop, but I'll make it work.

holy shit this thread survived

page 9

File: 1fe.jpg (80KB, 1024x634px) Image search: [Google]

80KB, 1024x634px

>>27779261
>The Emprah doesn't tolerate heretics


Aww shit son. I'd explain the basics but I don't know either. Maybe another Anon will.

>>27781337

I'm back, forgot to post update last night.

In hindsight probably good because it's shit. Apparently sleepwriting is very low quality.

Also, I think part of the problem I'm having is I can't figure out what angle to write Pinkie from right now.
Do I have her naive and curious to all the new things of the new world, or have her vaguely and innately aware of the workings of it?
And do I have her open up to Anon quickly and be her bubbly self, or be more reluctant and downcast due to her situation?

I can honestly see her going either way for both, and I'm not sure which to take. So I'd like to hear some of your thoughts on the matter.

>get Sunset
>she's already canonically on earth
>she gets seen
>nothing happens

>>27782818

>>already canonically on earth

Where the fuck on Earth have you seen a school comprising of technicolored skinned students that match up to characters from the show?

>>27783024
Where have you seen a society where Sheldon Cooper doesn't get fagbashed to death for being a dick? Is that not Earth either?

Dipshit.

>>27779272
Short but sweet. Liked it.

>>27779261
Anon had better use an assload of slaaneshi

page 10 bump

>>27784809

>>27787432

>>27788095
Christ do you have to trip/name? You're not even making any content.

>>27788172
i'm here since 1453

>>27788194
>>27788095
Autism.

File: 3b5.png (163KB, 500x401px) Image search: [Google]

163KB, 500x401px

>>27789175

File: image.jpg (23KB, 480x360px) Image search: [Google]

23KB, 480x360px

>>27789253
you are a steaming bag of aspergers, arguing against this fact is stupid, just like namefagging without content and responding to posts with image macros
kys

File: butthurt 3.jpg (28KB, 544x420px) Image search: [Google]

28KB, 544x420px

>>27789532

File: nasty.jpg (20KB, 441x414px) Image search: [Google]

20KB, 441x414px

>>27789583
>ifunny

>>27782805

Well, I was hoping to return to find some advice/suggestions/opinions, but it seems that isn't the case

I can't for the life of me figure out which angle is the best
I've tried writing, but then it either become inconsistent, or just starts to not quite feel like it's Ponka

>>27789994
I'd say have her curious and naive, and open up quickly. The premise for option 2 even states that they do.

>>27790048
Scratch what I said. I was remembering incorrectly. It still seems in character for her to do that, though

File: REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE 1.gif (536KB, 381x512px) Image search: [Google]

536KB, 381x512px

>>27789994
WHERE IS THE LEWD

>>27790048

Thanks! Finally feedback!

That's what I was thinking I'd prefer, though the problem I'm having with it is so far I've written her as more shaken up and timid, and I can't figure out how to TRANSITION to the happy, perky quality she usually has.

I dunno. Could I just suddenly have her start being more cheerful, or does everyone really care about consistency?

>>27790174

Also sorry if all my question asking and stuff gets annoying.

This IS my first time making a greentext story. Hell, technically my first time actually writing down a story instead of just havig it vaguely in my head. So I'm trying to make the most of it.

>>27790174
Have Anon do some things with her, and start conversations. Be relatable.

>>27790157
You really need to go slit your fucking wrists.

>>27790174
>>27790205
No problem, always up for giving advice.
Just do what >>27790224 said. Have them do stuff and talk. Have a moment where they click and realize they can relate to each other.

>>27790224
>>27790374

Right. I think I have an idea of what to do.

I'll try to do some writing, but no promises that I'll have anything done and posted tonight

File: 0086fddf70baac8626cb3f9601500bebd8ff9616.jpg (27KB, 624x351px) Image search: [Google]

27KB, 624x351px

>>27790277
nice dubs
i will not do that samefaggot

>>27792282

>>27792282

>>27793876

File: kill again wtf ponk.jpg (90KB, 866x743px) Image search: [Google]

90KB, 866x743px

>I have ten tabs pinned
>the last two days worth of posts in all of them are pure bumps

File: p0hOOJV.png (162KB, 187x433px) Image search: [Google]

162KB, 187x433px

>>27794921

File: image.jpg (298KB, 1125x1188px) Image search: [Google]

298KB, 1125x1188px

>Oh hey, look! A story time thread!
>Some of their writefags are pretty good, I think I'll check in and see if that Celestia story updated!
>little to no discussion
>dank ifunny memes
>shitty bumpfest for most of the thread
>same mentally challenged namefagging retard pushing for lewd with no character development
let it die desu

>>27794921
I'm working on an update

File: kek 19.jpg (7KB, 250x224px) Image search: [Google]

7KB, 250x224px

>>27795175
>same mentally challenged namefagging retard pushing for lewd with no character development

>>27795175
>>27790277
>>27789668
>>27789532
>>27789175
>>27788172
>Taking the bait

>>27794815

>>27797309

>>27798099

Bump. Still chipping away at the bin, expect some green relatively soon. Valve time of course.

>>27799564
Don't let it die guys

>>27800493
Ffs fampai.

I'm here now. Seeing as I already had some crap typed up, I figured I'd post some of it if you guys are still interested.

Continuing from >>27642332
>The mare looks at you inquisitively, but you shrug it off, not wanting to go into more detail.
>Dinner is finished at about the same time for both of you.
>You take your dish to the sink and rinse it out, leaving it on the counter to be washed more thoroughly later.
>Fluttershy does the same after observing you.
>When she’s done, you notice something overtake her, as if she suddenly had a severe itch crop up.
>She crosses her back legs for a bit before relaxing them a bit.
>”Um… Anon? Where’s the bathroom..?”
>You almost completely forgot about her possibly having biological functions like that.
“Here, follow me, it’s right over here.”
>Shortly after, you’ve given her a full tour of your small bathroom.
>After showing her the shower and seeing herself in the mirror above the sink, she’s decided to clean herself up after relieving herself.
>She closes the door, and you hear the toilet seat lift up; that’s your signal to leave her to her business.
>With nothing else to do, you go back to your computer, deciding to take a break and goof off for a bit.
>You hear the sound of the shower starting after the toilet is flushed.
>About fifteen minutes pass before you hear the bathroom door open once more.
>The floor creaks as the occupant of the bathroom steps out.
>The sound gets closer to your position, causing you a bit of unease.
>It’s been so long since you’ve had another living being in your house that hearing movement is unusual.
>It’s even worse when the movement is approaching you slowly from behind.
>You turn around, catching sight of Fluttershy, who is now sporting a bit of a messy mane and coat.
>”I um… I hate to be a bother but, do you have a hairbrush? I could only find a comb in the bathroom…”
>A brush? It’s been a while since you’ve seen one of those… Though, you know that there’s one around here somewhere.