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Calm Before The Storm Edition

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>>27425136

Twisted Desires Pastebin
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Part 2: http://pastebin.com/WSp0Cpxv
Part 3: http://pastebin.com/ZTwyKsMN
Part 4: http://pastebin.com/dVKsDRhX
Part 5: http://pastebin.com/PEVVbQHu

Knifey said he wasn't feeling too good, but he might return to us one day. Check his story out here
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And Minty has returned! His story can be found here
http://pastebin.com/u/mintyanon

Like always if you want to write something go ahead
If not sit back and enjoy or talk about vidyas of your choice
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>>27699613
>Walking into the dream, you take a look around
>The empire seems to be in chaos
>Fire spreads across the city
>The houses look destroyed
>It is quite unpleasant to look at
>"NO! STAY AWAY!" You hear the mare cry
>You better hurry
>Walking through the streets, you take notice of the empire itself
>It actually looks impressive in size
>Umbra has done a good job of creating an empire
>Too bad you and your dear sister are taking it from her
>Coming around the corner you stick to the shadows
>Looking out you see a twisted image of your sister
>The only thing off with her is that she's has spots of blood all over her
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>>27699631
>Too bad you and your dear sister are taking it from her

Rager, you know just how to make me hate a bitch
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>>27699631
>The mare cowers before your sister
>"L-Leave me alone!" She cries "Haven't you done enough!?"
>This twisted version of your sister only closes in on the mare
>"No, I haven't." Celestia says "Not until this empire is nothing but ash."
>"But why?!" The mare yells
>Celestia looks around at the ruined empire
>"Because your queen challenged me." Your sister says "And you don't challenge the power of the sun!"
>The fire around you intensifies
>The mare panics as she tries to get up
>"Where do you think you're going?!" Your sister yell "You can not escape me!"
>Celestia kick the mare back down to the floor, before placing a hoof on her head
>You believe now is the best time to intervene
>Celestia's horn begins to light up
>"And because of Umbra's foolish actions, everything will burn..." She says "Including you!"
>"NO PLEASE!" The mare yells
>Before your sister can unleash her spell on the mare, you use your magic to get rid of the dream Celestia
>Walking up to the mare you watch as she cowers with her eyes shut
"Open your eyes, my little pony." You say "You're safe now."
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Shit, I promised parts, but only got out two
Well at least I'm not stuck anymore
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>>27703036
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Morning bump
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>>27703036
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>>27702226
>The mare slowly opens her eyes and looks up at you
>"P-Princess Luna?!" She asks "What are you doing here?!"
>Her eyes widen and she tries to crawl away
>"N-NO PLEASE!" She yells "LEAVE ME ALONE!"
>You slowly walk up to her
>She must think you're another part of this dream
"Calm down, we are not here to hurt you." You say softly "We've come because we've seen that you were in distress."
>She is still on edge
"It is our duty to make sure every pony has a peaceful slumber." You say "Even if they live under the rule of an enemy."
>She seems to calm down a little
>Using your magic you extinguish the flames around you and around the empire
>The mare looks around as the flames die
"There, that is much better." You say before looking at the mare "What is your name?"
>She doesn't answer you
>You hold your hoof out
"It is okay..." You say softly "You can trust me. I'm not here to hurt you."
>The mare looks as if she struggles before placing her around yours
>"I-It's... Marie." She says
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Off to work, Anons
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>>27699613
bump
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>>27701224
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>>27706969
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>>27705101
see ya
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I'm going to start another run of Fallout 4, what should my SPECIAL be. Also bump
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>>27708901
Dammit I was going to start another run too
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>>27708957
Then let us Fuck with the commonwealth
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>>27709746
Bump
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Damn it, I got stuck. I'm trying to decide if I really want Marie to traitor it up, or for Luna to force it out of her.
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>>27710140
Marie is a hyper bitch to Anon, but she still is loyal to the empire. I think Luna should have to coerce the Intel out of her, but that's just my two-cents.

You do you senpai. Write what you think flows best.
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>>27699613
> You are Anonymous.
>After getting lost in wherever this place is, you fell through a wall and are now even more hopelessly lost wherever you are.
>Great.
>This place was a giant maze.
>You can't even remember where that staircase you went down was.
>The entire time, keeping your hand on the wall to check for more odd walls to fall through.
>Still, you had to admire whoever built this place.
>It's easy to see, no thanks to those strange blue crystal lamps everywhere.
>Oh yeah, it was certainly built. The walls were made of stone and mortar, and the floors as well.
>The ceiling was made of the same materials, but strangely enough, left more than enough room to walk upright.
>Almost as if it was built by humans.
>Nah, humans are an old mares tale.
>Uh, you're human. So I guess the old mares tale is true.
>As you were walking, lost in both mind and body, you stumbled upon a door that you are sure you'd never seen before.
>Old, rotten wood, easy enough to kick down.
>Your reward for your efforts: another staircase, this time leading up.
>Well, at least you getting somewhere.
>Up we go.
>As soon as the stairs level out, you see to your left one of the see through walls.
>And a group of ponies on the other side.
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>>27710140
Force it out of her. She still loves the empire, after all.
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>>27710140
They work out a deal to remove anon from the empire, with a promise to spare the empire?
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boop
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>>27710140
Shit i forgot about this thread.
Looking like i didnt miss much since luna went looking for dreams after that one captain got yelled at.
Mind spoonfeeding me if i missed anything important?
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keep calm
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>>27712194
ok
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>>27699613
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>>27713285
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>>27713285
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>>27713931
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>>27709746
nothing like a seizure right before bed
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There's been lots of fucking drama today, Anons. I'm sorry I have been able to get any parts out today. I have some peace and quiet now so let me try.
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>>27704901
>Helping Marie up, you can see that she is still cautious of you
"Marie?" You ask "That's a beautiful name."
>You look around at your surroundings
"Tell us, Marie, why do you dream of this?"
>She hesitates for a second
>"I'm afraid this is what will happen when you find our empire." Marie says
"You expect total destruction?" You ask "Is that truly what you believe?"
>"From what Queen Umbra told us? Yes." She says
>You shake your head
>"All we want is Anonymous." You say "But every time we have tried to convince him to come home, your queen is there to stop us."
>She looks away from you
"Judging by your dreams, you want him gone too."
>She looks back at you with an ashamed expression
"Why don't you help us?" You ask "We could help each other that way."
>She immediately shakes her head
"Why not?"
>You notice that she's looking at something behind you
>Turning around you see a stallion heavily clad in armor
>"If I betray Queen Umbra, she'll send Captain Arthas after me!"
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>>27717202
This kills the Rager
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>>27714442
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>>27715824
>You look over to her
"We will admit, he does look frighting." You say "I remember the night we first saw him, he felt powerful."
Marie eyes still hold fear in them
"We can promise you protection." You say "In exchange for your assistance."
>Marie again shakes her head
>You're starting to lose your patience here
>"He'll get through." Marie says "Once Queen Umbra gives him an order, he completes it. No matter what."
"I assure you, we can handle it." You say "He is only one stallion."
>"You don't understand." She say "He's not a normal stallion! I've seen him cut down battalions by himself!"
>Sounds like your sisters captains
"Marie, believe us. We can handle him."
>"I don't believe you can." Marie says
>You try to keep your calm composure
"Marie, please."
>"I can't tell you where we are." She says "Anything you do can't compare to what Queen Umbra will do to me!"
>That's it
>You have tried to give her a chance to help you
>Now it looks like you'll have to force it out of her
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Off to work, Anons
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rwgezrfdgzvgfdv
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>>27721165
yes
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>>27721764
no
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>>27722454
maybe
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>>27722527
I don't know?
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>>27722553
Can you repeat the question?
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>>27722662
You're not the boss of me now!
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>>27722676
You're not the boss of me now!
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>>27722945
You're not the boss of me now, and you're not so big
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>>27723346
You're not the boss of me now!
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I don't get it.
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>>27723799
I don't either.
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>>27723799
>>27724570
I guess not everyone grew up with Malcolm in the Middle
https://youtu.be/8x-ujqvOhts
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>>27720091
>Using your magic you begin to fan the fires again
>Marie looks around in horror as her nightmare slowly returns to life
"Now listen to me, Marie." You say "We have given you the chance to help, yet you continue to refuse."
>The twisted image of your sister begins to fade back into existence
>"N-No! Not her!" Marie cries out
"We even offered to protect you!" You say "But still you say no."
>Marie looks around for a chance to escape
>You stop this by making multiple copies of your sister to surround her
"You have forced my hoof." You say "We need the location of Umbra's empire!"
>Using your magic, you begin to use the same spell you used Nightmare Night
>Your body begins to change
>Marie can only watch in horror as you grow in size
>"P-Princess Luna?!" Marie yells
"SILENCE!" You shout "I AM NOT LUNA, I AM NIGHTMARE MOON!"

>>27724615
I did not
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>>27710394
>Rushing over to the wall, you knock on it, hoping that it isn't soundproof like the last one.
>Your hopes are dashed as none of the ponies even glance in your direction.
>Sighing, something else catches your attention.
>Well, somepony to be exact.
>Mainly because you don't remember rescuing her from the diremites.
>A mare stood among the group of ponies, and even through the hazy wall, you could tell she is something special.
>A head taller than the stallions, with a deep black mane and a gorgeous gray coat.
>Not to mention those eyes.
>Those bright green eyes.
>None of that mattered if you couldn't even talk to her.
>With that in mind, you turn your eyes further down the hall.
>Only be surprised at what is on the wall.
>A single lever positioned upright.
>Just then, a thought occurred to you.
"What if that lever pulled down the wall so you could join the ponies and get out of here?"
>Running over, you wasted no time pulling the lever down.
*CLICK*
>Your efforts were rewarded with a long series of what sounded like gears turning in the walls.
>Excited, you look at the ponies on the other side of the wall, waiting ton see them in person.
>Of course, your excitement turns to sheer horror as every single one of the ponies falls through a now open trapdoor underneath them.
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>>27725519
Inb4 Marie doesn't know who NMM is due to having grown up in the Empire.
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>>27727531
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>>27725519
>Marie eyes go wide
>"Nightmare Moon?!" She says "As in THE Nightmare Moon?!"
>You walk up to her
"You know of us?"
>The mare quickly nods her head
>"Long ago We had ponies come to the empire with information about you..." Marie say "I-I wasn't around, none of the captains were, but there are still records of what they told Queen Umbra."
>There are ponies that defected from you and your sister's empire to Umbra's empire?
>This must have happened after your banishment
"So you know what we are capable of?"
>She nods her head
"Then you will tell us where the empire is!"
>Marie looks around at the copies of your sister
>"I-I can't!" Marie says before looking at you defiantly
>You shake your head
>You never wanted it to come to this
"Then you leave me no choice, Marie." You say "You will tell me eventually, and when you do, you won't be able to tell your Queen because she'll brand you a traitor."
>The fear returns in her eyes
"I'm sorry, Marie." You say "This must be done. As I said before we will protect you when we arrive, should you want it."
>Your horn begins to glow
"Forgive us."

Alright now, we can head back to Anon and the gang

>tfw want to do a cut away to Alt Anon
>tfw can't because it would spoil a lot
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Alright, Anons. I'm heading to work again.
Actually we're going to go back to Celestia for one more part
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>>27728509
bye
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Any of you have a steam account? Add Me.

https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198086540036

What kind of Games are you Playing?
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>>27729338
playing some doom, real damn good so far
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>>27731059
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>>27730129
Finished the game. Its great!
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>>27728369
>You are Celestia
>Opening your eyes, you see the moon still high above the sky
>But you know it's almost time to raise the sun
>Climbing out of bed you walk over to the bathroom before jumping into the shower
<Turning on the shower, you let the warm water wash over you
>You miss having Anonymous around...
>It always felt nice to wake up and see his sleeping face
>You look down at the drain
>You will make this right
>Umbra and his love for her is the only thing standing in your way
>After finishing up in the shower, you grabbed your bathrobe and returned to your room
>As you sit down at your desk you begin to brush your mane
>But before you know it a portal opens up behind you and Luna comes out
>She has a disappointed look on her face
"Luna?" You ask "What's going on?"
>Luna looks at your reflection
>"It seems we can finally travel to her empire." Luna says "I was able to 'convince' the mare to help us."
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bemp
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>>27733179
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Hey, Rager, did you know that pastebins that have more than 1000 lines are a pain to read on mobile phones?
Seriously, in the future consider making more chapters but smaller; for example new chapter whenever you update.

And good job with this fanfic - it's cool.
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>>27733179
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>>27733564
>You spin around in your seat
"Really?!" You ask "You really got her to help us?!"
>Luna slowly nods her head
>"She was being difficult, so I had to turn into Nightmare Moon to convince her." Luna says
"What?!" You say "Why would you do that!?"
>Luna looks away
>"You said it yourself, we need to find her empire!" Luna says "This was the only lead we had!"
>You rub your head
"You didn't need to traumatize her." You say "We are not like that."
>Luna looks away
>"I'm sorry, sister, but it had to be done." Luna says "The mare has asked for our protection from Umbra, she fears now that she has given up the location of the empire, Umbra will sentence her to death."
>You sigh
"Then it is our responsibility as princesses to ensure her safety."
>"She plans to escape the empire when arrive at the outskirts of the wastes." Luna says "From there she will meet us halfway."
>While you don't approve of Luna's method at least she got the job done
>You look back to your mirror
"Then today is the day we rally the guard." You say "And tomorrow, we set out for the empire."
>Luna nods her head
>Well Umbra, it looks like we'll be able to settle this face to face soon
>Prepare yourself
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Off to work, Anons

What should we do with the outing with everyone? I was thinking of a big party at The Stray Mare, but I'm open to suggestions.
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>>27737122
I think it's time for whats-her-face to die.
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>>27737122
Anal Orgy
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>>27738494
I second this orgy porgy
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Anybody get tokyo mirage sessions? It plays just like persona 3.
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>>27739703
Don't fuck with me, Anon, that's my favorite game. Does it actually play like P3?
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>>27736982
>You are Anon
>The sound of the wind howling outside is what wakes you from your sleep
>Opening your eyes, the first thing you see is Umbra's sleeping face
>Quiet snores escape her, as she nuzzles up to you
>She's so cute
>You wonder what she's dreaming of...
>A small smile forms on her face
>You actually shiver under the sheets
>Shit it's cold this morning
>The wind outside confirms that there is a storm raging outside
>Damn
>That means there must be a white out happening outside the wall
>You have to go out there with Arthas today
>...
>Fuck
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>>27740174
Yeah, quite a bit. It's a shin megami tensei/ fire emblem crossover. 90% shin megami, 10% fire emblem. It has the slash, stab, crush(?) mechanic. The big difference that I've noticed, granted I'm not very far, so I could be wrong; it doesn't have the social aspect to it. Reminds me more of p3 than p4, especially battle wise. It's got a neon green color scheme.

All in all, if your interested, go look up some game play videos.

I got it to hold me out till p5 comes out. Seems to fit the bill.
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>>27740938
>The wind howls and you shiver again
>Screw this!
>Pulling the blanket up a little more over you, you slowly reach over and pull Umbra in
>Her fur helps keep you warm
>Umbra lets out a happy sigh as she nuzzles her cheek against your chest
>Holding her close to you, you run a hand down her back
>While Umbra continues to sleep, you start to think about Celestia and Luna
>You hope when this is all over, you could talk some sense into them
>They still are your friends after all
>Even if they lost their damn minds because of Umbra
>Also you still want to be able to talk to Twilight and your other friends without there being any tension
>But for that you have to win this
>And to win this, you need to keep getting stronger
>With another howl of the wind, you notice that Umbra starts to stir
>You watch with a small smile as she slowly opens her eyes
>She blinks a few times before looking up
"Good morning, my lovely queen."
>Umbra only responds with a big smile
>"Good morning, my love." Umbra says
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Off to work, Anons!
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>>27743751
>While Umbra continues to sleep, you start to think about Celestia and Luna
>You hope when this is all over, you could talk some sense into them
>They still are your friends after all

Anon can't really be this retarded right?
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>>27745054
I know, Anon. I know.
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>>27743751
>>27743994

Rager, I'm gonna trust you to do you, but I know we all talked about this; how you made celly and lulu irredeemable, and anything less than a professional (not friendly) relationship is the most that could reasonably happen.
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>>27743751
>You give her a quick peck on her nose
>That smile of hers doesn't fade one bit
>The wind howls against the window again causing Umbra to shiver
>"I'm cold..." Umbra says "Hold me closer to you, Anonymous."
>You chuckle
"You don't get to be cold, you have fur." You say "I don't have any."
>"What about this little patch on your chest?" Umbra asks as she looks down
"That's not enough to keep me warm." You say before pulling her in "You on the other hand..."
>Umbra pouts
>"Is that all I am to you?" Umbra asks "Just a warm bundle of love?"
>You smile
"Nah, you know you're more than that."
>Umbra smiles before looking out the window
>"Sounds like it's dreadful out there." She says "I'm not sure I want you going out there."

>>27745701
I know, I know. Just relax
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>>27748880
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>>27699613
>that edgelord fur coat

UGH
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>>27748880
"I know, Umbra." You say "But Arthas is going to make me go out there."
>"Along with a large portion of the guard..." Umbra says as she cuddles up harder to you "Please be careful out there."
>You give her a quick kiss on her head
"I will, don't worry."
>You and Umbra continue to lie there in each others embrace while the wind continues to howl
>It's nice being like this
>That is until you hear a knock at the door
>"Come in..." Umbra grumbles out
>When the door opens you see Ariadne poke her head in
>Uh, Anon?" Ariadne says
>You sit up against Umbra's protests
>And by that you mean she tries to weakly pull you back down
"What's up, Ariadne?"
>"Captain Arthas sent me to wake you up." She says "He said to meet him at the front gate."
>You sigh and nod your head
"Okay." You say before looking at Umbra "I got to go, Umbra."
>Umbra whines as you get out of bed
>Getting dressed in your armor, you grab your sword and head over to the bed
>Umbra still has a frown on her face
"I'll be back." You say before giving her a kiss "Have a good day, Umbra."
>Umbra smiles at you
>"I know you'll do your best, my love." Umbra says
>Walking over to the doors you head out
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>>27752289
The only thing that I don't like about your green is the slow updates. But those are only a minor annoyance.
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>>27752976
Well I have the day off, I'm just fucking around on The Long Dark and DMC 4 SE
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>>27753006
>DMC4
i fucking love that game
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>>27752289
>Heading down the stairs, you stop right at the doors that lead outside
>Looking out the window, you see snow flying everywhere
>Oh boy
>That looks fun
>Pulling up your hood, you open the doors and head outside
>The wind's icy embrace is the first thing to greet you as you step out onto the crystal
>You see a few guard ponies running past you to the front gate
>"Anon!" You hear a voice yell
>Turning your head, you see Biggs, Lance, and Wedge coming up to you
>Perfect timing
>"You ready?" Biggs asks "It looks like today is going to be gruelling."
>You nod your head
"This should be fun." You say sarcastically
>"I can't even fly right!" Lance says "The wind keeps pushing me down."
>He looks so sad
>You see more of the guard run past you
>"We should hurry." Wedge says "It won't look good if we're the only ones who are late."
>"Yeah, we're the captains students!" Biggs says "We need to keep a good image!"
"Then let's get going." You say before you four run to the gate
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>>27755367
>When you arrive at the gate, you see a large number of other ponies waiting
>Some turn to look at you
>While others continue to talk with their comrades
>Arthas is at the front on the group
>When he notices you four, he motions you to come over
>"This feels so strange." Biggs says as you walk up to the group "We're usually training alone."
>"Well the future of the empire is on the line." Wedge says "I'm sure the captains are making sure everypony is up to snuff."
>You notice that there are someponies looking at you
>"Isn't that Queen Umbra's lover?" You hear a pony ask
>"Of course it is, you dunce." Some other pony says "Still why is he here? You think Queen Umbra would keep him away from this."
>You shake your head
>You're here because you want to fight for this empire
>Just like everyone here
>You want to protect your home
>Lance notice how you're acting and pats you on the back
>"Don't worry about it, Anon." He says "You know what you're fighting for."
>You smile
"Thanks, Lance."
>Walking up to Arthas, he looks over at you
>"Good, you are all here." Arthas says "Get in line, were waiting for a few more to arrive."
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>>27703036
Enjoy your ban.
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I enjoy the idea of being a very tall Queen Umbra's loyal advisor, consort and sex toy. She is very rough.

Rate my fetish.
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>>27757771
"cucked"
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>>27756423
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>>27758635
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>>27757402
>Doing as you are told, you and your friends stand next to some ponies
>You hope these other ponies arrive quick
>Getting physical is most likely the only way you're gonna warm up
>Out of the corner of your eye you see a unicorn pony run up to Arthas with a clip board
>Arthas glances over it before nodding his head
>The pony comes up to you four
>"Anonymous, Lance, Biggs, and Wedge, right?" The pony asks
>You all nod your head and she scribbles something down
>"Just making sure everypony is here for the captain!" She says before taking off "Thanks guys!"
>With that the mare takes off
>"I hope you're all ready for today." Arthas says "Today's training is going to be tougher than anything we've done before."
"I think we're all ready." You say, looking to your friends
>"Yeah, we're gonna kill it today!" Lance says
>"Just like we always do." Biggs says with a confident smile
>Arthas smiles before looking back out to the large group of ponies
>"Let's hope we don't lose track of any ponies out there!" Arthas yells "Stay together with your group!"
>"I assume we four in a group?" Wedge asks
>Arthas nods his head
>You see that mare from before come running back
>"Captain Arthas! Everypony is accounted for!" The pony says
>Arthas nods his head
>"Good then we're ready to leave." Arthas says

Fucking RE5 is too much fun when you're playing it with a friend
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Off to work, Anons
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>>27757771
Sauce?
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>>27758384
You shouldn't use words you don't know the meaning of. There is nothing even vaguely related to the scenario he described that could relate to cuckolding.

>>27760443
Pretty sure that image is on Derpybooru under Queen Umbra. There is a horse cock futa variant.
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>>27760732
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>>27761430
>Salami
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>>27762128
>kielbasa
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>>27762247
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>>27760376
Here I am!
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>>27763162
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>tfw you can't stay up
Day off tomorrow...
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Apology bump for not writing quickly enough.
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You are aware Sombra is already a feminine term, right?
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>>27725791
>Not even the pegasi in the group were fast enough to escape the trap.
>That you sprung.
>Well, no time like the present.
>Maybe you can figure out where they fell and rescue them.
>You continue to stare as the trapdoor places itself back into its original position.
>Your eyes follow the long hall down to where you haven't explored yet.
>A sigh escapes your lips as you see yet another staircase leading even further down.
>Well, as they say; history repeats itself.
>Time to see where that leads.
>Letting your thoughts drift away as you wander over to the staircase, and as you descend further into the depths; you think on the mare you saw earlier.
>If you wanted to save anypony, it would be her.
>Even through the wall, you just knew that her beauty is unparalleled.
>You never had much luck with the ladies, but for some reason, you wanted to tell that mare how beautiful she is.
>Kind of a bad reason to save someone though
>Hopefully she won't think less of you.
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>>27765580
>Your thoughts are jarred out of your head as the stairs level off and open up to a new sight.
>Sort of.
>Another damn hall.
>This one, however, doesn't have a staircase at the end.
>Along with a single door to the right in the middle of the hall.
>Turning around, and then looking up, you reorient yourself.
>This new hallway had to be underneath the one that the other ponies fell through.
>Maybe...
>...She's there...
>You couldn't get to the door fast enough.
>Your hopes are once again crushed when you see the door.
>Made of metal, there are no openings to look through.
>It's plain, with nothing but a circle etched into it, with something else eyed inside that.
>You do a double take as you recognize the 'something else'.
>It's looks exactly like your hand.
>Shakily, you put yours up to the one in the door.
>The circle flashed a light blue, and then the door clicked and swung itself inwards.
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>>27765546
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bump my boy
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Bumperino
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>>27768030
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>>27769114
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>>27770234
This will be the final bump.
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>>27760114
>"LISTEN UP!" Arthas says "WE ARE ABOUT TO LEAVE!"
>The chatter around you slowly dies down
>When it's all silent, Arthas starts to pace back and forth
>"Now as some of you may or may not know, there is an incoming threat over the horizon." Arthas says "The princesses, Celestia and Luna."
>You feel a few eyes on you
>"For those of you looking at Anonymous, your eyes need to be on me!" Arthas shouts
>You don't see it, but it feels like they stop looking at you
>"We need to prepare." Arthas says "Some of you may already know that Stormhoof took some of your brothers and sisters outside the wall to train for the upcoming battle yesterday. We're going to do the same."
>He looks up the wall
>"RAISE IT!" Arthas yells
>A moment of silences passes before you hear the gears activate
>As the gate begins to rise, you see snow start to flood in
>"I have placed you all in groups to keep track of one another." Arthas says "So be warned, if you lose a comrade in the storm, you won't be coming back in until you find them."
>You and your friends look at each other
>The gate stops at a point where you can all leave and so that the winds outside don't just flood in
>"Now then, get a move on." Arthas says "We have a lot of training to do."
>Arthas turns his back to everypony before heading out towards the wastes
>You and everypony else do the same
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>>27770234
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>>27770796
heres another bump
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>>27703036
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>>27773757
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>>27772045
>Stepping outside the gate, you see a few unicorns put up a barrier
>It takes a few of them, but they end up holding against the harsh weather
>"Don't get used to it." Arthas says "As soon as you're given your orders to spar, these barriers are going down."
>So that's what is going to happened
>You're used to sparring with your friends
>But other groups of ponies?
>This should be interesting
>"Is it me or is the captain walking in a weird way?" A pony whispers
>"Yeah, he's just stopping and going in another direction."
>You follow Arthas for a little bit longer before he stops and turns around
>He looks around at the surroundings
>"This will do." Arthas says before turning around "I don't see the wall."
>What?
>All of you turn and look around
>You don't see anything!
>"Alright then, this is how is going to go." Arthas says "There are nine teams of ten, I want you all to battle each other until one team is left standing."
>Wedge raises his hoof
>"What is it, Wedge?" Arthas asks
>"You said teams of ten." Wedge says "We're missing six."
>You look back and see that there are teams of ten behind you
>"No you're not." Arthas says "You four are my students. Therefore I expect you four to do well even against the odds."
>"Wait what?!" Lance asks
>"Oh and that reminds me..." Arthas says before looking out to the other guard ponies "There's a reward for the group that can defeat these four."
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bed bump
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>>27775022
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>>27775966
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Pretty quiet today
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>>27777558
Yep
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>>27774913
"What?!" You ask "You're putting a target on our back?!"
>Arthas nods his head
>"I'm making things more challenging and entertaining for you." Arthas says
>You hear murmuring behind you
>"Now on my word, I want you all to spread out." Arthas says "The barrier will drop, and you're training will begin. Good luck."
>Arthas looks around
>"Go."
>The groups all race out of the barrier
>You and your friends do the same and book it
>Getting out of the barrier you shield your face with your arm
>"Shit!" Biggs says
>"We need to think of a plan!" Wedge says "They're going to come for us!"
>You look around
>There's a small hill over there
>Running over to it, you all hide behind it
>"Alright, Wedge. Come up with something!" Lance says
>"I'm trying!" Wedge says "I just need time!"
>You look over the hill
>This is going to be a story to tell Umbra later
>But you should be thinking about her right now
>Your focus is going to have to be on this
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>>27778728
Alright, off to work
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>>27778805
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>>27778728
>You are Umbra
>As the door closes behind Anonymous, you sigh
"He's gone now..." You say before turning to his side "I'm already missing his warmth."
>You notice that Ariadne looks guilty
>"I'm sorry, Lady Umbra..." Ariadne says "Captain Arthas just told me to get him."
"I know, Ariadne." You say "It's okay."
>Arthas would have come up here and dragged him out of bed anyway
>You sit up in bed
>You suppose it's time to get ready as well
>A yawn escapes you
>Laying your head back down, you decide that you could use five more minutes
>while you lay down, you watch as Ariadne cleans the room
>She looks so happy as usual
>Thinking back to last night, you remember what you and Anonymous talked about
>You roll over to your side and levitate and parchment and quill
"Ariadne, can you do something for me?"
>She looks over at you
>"Anything!" Ariadne says
>You jot down a few things before you pass it to her
>Ariadne looks at the list
>"Why do you need lube?" Ariadne asks
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>>27782594
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>>27784179
>You blush before looking away
>Quick Umbra, come up with something!
"Something b-broke in the bathroom." You say "And Anonymous said he could fix it if he had some lube."
>Ariadne cocks her her head to the side
>She's not buying it!
"I-It was something with the tub!" You say "Anonymous and I ended up knocking something out of place when we were making-"
>"Okay I get it!" Ariadne says while a blush forms on her face "I don't need to know anymore."
>You smile
>"So just lube and some candles?" Ariadne asks
>You nod your head
>"Okay!" Ariadne says "I'll go out and get it after I do my chores!"
"Thank you, Ariadne." You say "Just make sure Sombra or Eris don't see you with it."
>Ariadne looks confused again before nodding her head
>While Ariadne continues her chores you find yourself staring at the ceiling
>All you can do is worry about your beloved
>The wind outside has not let up one bit since you woke up
>Hopfully he's does okay
>"Lady Umbra?" Ariadne asks
>You look over at her
"What is it, Ariadne?"
>"What's going to happen?" She asks "I mean when the princesses come..."
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Alright, off to work
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>>27787081
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>>27779937
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>>27788431
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>>27788952
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>>27790030
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>>27791048
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>>27786910
>You blink in confusion
"What do you mean, Ariadne?"
>She looks down at the ground
>"I mean what's going to happen to you when the princesses come?" Ariadne asks "I've been thinking about it lately, and I'm worried about you."
>You sit back up in bed
>"You know my mom and I haven't been real close..." Ariadne says in a shaky voice "If anything you've been there more than she has."
>Tears start to well up in her eyes
>Oh no
>Climbing out of bed, you walk over to her
>"I-I'm only worried because I look up to you." Ariadne says "A-And I don't want to see anything bad happen to you!"
>Tears start to flow from her eyes
>"I'm scared!" Ariadne says "I'm scared of losing of you!"
>You knew that you two were close
>But this close?
>It brakes your heart to see her like this
>You through a hoof around her and pull her into a hug
"It's okay Ariadne." You say "I'm not going anywhere. I promise."
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>>27792019
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>>27790030
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Here you go Rager. Don't know if you're into anthro, but I found these today.
https://derpiboo.ru/1190865?scope=scpeea8d6994c17368ea26df74b5f49ca4d55c8255b9

https://derpiboo.ru/1190866?scope=scpeea8d6994c17368ea26df74b5f49ca4d55c8255b9
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>>27792424
>Ariadne weeps against your neck
>"I just can't imagine you getting hurt." Ariadne says through her tears "I don't want you to get hurt!"
"I know, Ariadne, I know..." You say "Here, sit down on my bed."
>Ariadne nods her head and you both take a seat on Anonymous's side of the bed
>You continue to hold Ariadne close to you
>"So what are you going to do?" Ariadne asks "Lance told me that you were going to evacuate everypony to the safe haven, while you, Anon, and the guard stay to fight the princesses."
>You nod your head
"That is what we have to do." You say "I don't want any innocent ponies getting hurt because of this, that includes you."
>She looks up at you
"These princesses want to take everything from me." You say "Anonymous, my empire, and I'm starting to think my life as well."
>You sigh
"That's why I have to fight, so I can protect the future of this empire."
>Ariadne wipes her eyes before leaning her head against you
>"I wish I knew how to fight." Ariadne says "That way I could protect you too."
>You smile
"You're a sweet mare, Ariadne." You say "I couldn't see you taking up the sword."
>She frowns
"I appreciate the thought though."
>"So do you know when they're going to come?" Ariadne asks

>>27794181
>mfw
Not really a huge Anthro guy. but some of Umbra's stuff is that
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I got to go to work, Anons
See you at midnight or so
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>>27757771

>"Anon, the Queen commands that you go to her chambers immediately."
"D-Did I displease her earlier from my Cloudsdale report?"
>"Not sure. I do know that it would be unwise to keep her waiting any longer."
"Damn, why did I take this job?"
>"Well, it is unusual for the Queen to summon someone this late at night so maybe she'll go easy on the punishment. Oh and Anon?"
"Yes?"
>"It was nice knowing you."
"...T-Thanks."
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>>27795624
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>>27796744
2 L E W D 4 U
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>>27795624
BAN THIS SICK FILTH!
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>>27794013
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>>27795324
>You shake your head
"I don't know, Ariadne." You say "But I hope when they do make their move, they come to brag or gloat in Anonymous's dream."
>That way you'll know for sure
>You look outside the window
"That is why we need to prepare." You says "For when they do arrive.'
>You look back to Ariadne before patting her head
"Now why don't you lose the frown, so we can go get breakfast." You say "I promise you I'll be perfectly alright, Anonymous will make sure of that."
>Ariadne stares at you for a moment before her smile returns
"That's the spirit." You say with a smile "Now come on, let's get ready."
>Nodding her head she finishes up with your room while you get dressed
>When you're all set for the day, both you and Ariadne head out of the room
>You don't even walk a few steps before the door on your right opens
>Eris pokes her head out before smiling at you
>"Hey Umbra and Ariadne!" She says "Off to breakfast?"

>>27795624
Jesus
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>>27799311
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>>27799904
"Yes we are, Eris." You say as you continue to walk by her door "You can join us if you wish."
>Eris slinks out of her room and walks beside you
>She looks around before looking at you
>"Where's your boytoy?" Eris asks
>You smile
"Anonymous is at his training right now."
>"Must have broke your heart to see him go so early." Eris says "You two are so attached to each other."
>She's not wrong
"He's going to be hurting when he comes home." You say "When he comes home I get to be with him the whole night."
>Eris smiles before nudging you
>"Playing the nurse again, are we?" Eris says "If you want I can make a sexy nurse outfit for you."
>You chuckle
"I wouldn't want my beloved to lose his mind."
>Continuing down the stairs, you end up heading to the dining room
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Off to work, Anons
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>>27802705
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>>27803351
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>>27802705
Bump
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>>27803351
>>27804740
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>>27804740
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Ugh
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Sorry, I'm dead tired. Almost killed my boss's grandpa. Pretty exhausting day..
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>>27807894
Oh and happy 4th of July everyone!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-paa3wwGWww
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Bamp
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>>27808072
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>>27808858
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>>27807905
feels so good being free
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>>27810412
>feels so good being free
>American
>free
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>>27810412
Yeah, right.
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>>27799311
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>>27811951
Americans can never be free from themselves.
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I've got an adventure planned out in my head. Only if you guys don't mind me writing it out.
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>>27802468
>After taking your seat and ordering your food, you look outside the window while Ariadne and Eris chat
>Edith had brought you all some coffee as well
>The snow dances across the sky in such a beautiful way
>Although when you think about it, it's somewhat bad out there
>Meaning that it's absolutely dreadful out there
>You hope Anonymous is faring well out there
>"You worry too much." You hear someone say "He is perfectly fine out there."
>Looking back you see your brother enter the room
"He is my beloved." You say "I can worry about him if I want."
>"True, but all that worrying isn't good for you." Sombra says before shaking his head "I swear you act just like mother does towards father."
>You smile while Sombra takes his seat
"Well, mommy loved him with all her heart." You say "Just like I love Anonymous with all my heart."
>Sombra rolls his eyes
>You huff
"At least I have someone to love..." You say in a mocking tone "Unlike a certain stallion at this table."
>Sombra growls at you
>You smile and stick your tongue out at him
>It has always been fun picking on your brother
>"I don't have time to love!" Sombra says "We have princesses to worry about."
>Now it's your turn to roll your eyes
"I guarantee you would say something different if you and Ariadne were alone." You whisper to him
>Before Sombra can retort, Edith comes to the table with yours, Ariadne's, and Eris's food
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>>27812788
Go for it, we need more green
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>>27812962
>>27812962
>"Your breakfast, Lady Umbra." Edith says as she passes the eggs over to you "Ariadne, Eris."
>You help levitate their plates to them
>"Good morning, Lord Sombra!" Edith says as she bows to him "Would you like me to get you some breakfast?"
>"Yes, I would like some pancakes if it is not too much of a problem." Sombra says
>"It's is no problem at all, my lord." Edith says "Would you like some coffee as well?"
>"Please." Sombra says with a nod
>Edith bows before walking back to the kitchen
>Grabbing your fork and knife, you start to cut into your eggs
>"So I finished the paperwork you passed off on me." Sombra says
"Passed off is such an ugly term." You say "Let's say I entrusted you with it."
>A small smile forms on your brothers face before he shakes his head
>"In any case I wanted to let you know I have one left." Sombra says "It's the arms requisition for Credo."
>You look over at Sombra
>"I was hoping you'd come with me." Sombra says "He seems more friendly to you than to me."
>You nod your head
"Very well, after we are done with our breakfast we'll go see Credo." You say "I just hope he didn't have too much to drink last night."

Be back in a bit, going to go take a shower
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>>27813653
Rager, I hate to be a dick...But can things please get a move on? I can only take so many "Umbra and friends have breakfast scenes" and we've had so many...
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>>27813744
Patience is a virtue.
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>>27812962
You have a bad habit that i thought you dropped, but its coming back in full force.
>Although when you think about it, it's somewhat bad out there
>Meaning that it's absolutely dreadful out there
>You hope Anonymous is faring well out there
>"You worry too much." You hear someone say "He is perfectly fine out there."

Repeating words. Its really noticeable in your writing, but here its REAL bad. Four times, and they are all at the end of the line aswell, makes them really stand out.
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>>27813653
>"Hey Umbra, can I ask you something?" Eris asks
"What is it, Eris?"
>"What are you going to want me to do?" Eris asks "During the battle I mean."
>Sombra looks over at you
>"Yes, I have actually been thinking about that." Sombra says "Eris is a valuable ally, she is a Spirit of Chaos after all."
>You take a quick sip of your coffee
"Eris, I want you to stay out of the battle."
>"What?!" Both Eris and Sombra say
>"Why?" Sombra asks "Do you realize you're telling one of our strongest allies to stay put?"
>"Yeah!" Eris says "I can be a big help to you!"
"Tell me, Eris. Is Discord fighting for Celestia?"
>Eris shakes her head
>"He told me that Twilight and her friends asked him to stay out of the fight." Eris says "And to go into hiding for now."
"That's why I don't want you fighting. If Discord isn't than neither should you." You say "Now that Celestia and Luna know of your existence, there is no doubt they are trying to come up with a way to deal with you."
>"But I-!"
"I don't want you to get hurt." You say "And I surely don't want them to turn you against me somehow."
>Eris looks sadden
"But that doesn't mean you can't help some other way."
>Eris looks up at you
"I would like for you to help during the evacuation of the empire."

>>27815399
Oh fug, you're right
Christ
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Bed Bump
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>>27815861
Bump. Wait is there more to this green? If so where would i be able to read the beginning?
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>>27815861
>Edith returns with Sombra's breakfast
>"Here you are, my lord." Edith says
>"Thank you, Edith." Sombra says
>"You want me to help get the ponies out?" Eris asks
>You nod your head
"I think you would be able to help the guard ponies in the evacuation a lot more." You say "I just don't want the worst to happen to you."
>"But Eris is a-" Sombra says
"Yes, and so was Discord." You say "But Celestia and Luna still were able to defeat him."
>You look back at Eris
"And besides, if the worst came to pass and Celestia's forces discovered where we were evacuated the citizens, then Eris could protect them."
>"Hmm..." Sombra says as he begins to think "If Eris herself is defending the citizens then that means-"
"It means we can keep all our forces here in the empire." You say "I'm quite sure Eris can stop anypony from getting through that tunnel by herself."
>Eris smiles
>"You've been thinking a lot about this, haven't you?" Sombra says "And here I thought you were just focused on being all lovey dovey with Anonymous."
>You let out a small laugh
"The empire comes first." You say "Anonymous and I can agree on that."
>You place your fork down on your now empty plate before wiping your mouth
"Now then, now that Eris know what I want her to do, we can go to Credo now." You say "Come on, Sombra."
>"I just started eating!" He says
>You get up before walking over to the doors that lead out to the balcony
>The same balcony Anonymous and you stood on when you confessed your love for each other
"Then hurry up, brother." You say "We don't have all day now."

>>27816439
The OP has them all listed
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I love payday
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>>27822276
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>>27818563
>After Sombra finished his breakfast you said your goodbyes to Ariadne and Eris before leaving the dinning room
"Do you have the form with you. Sombra?"
>Sombra nods before pulling out a form from under his cape
>"I have it right here." Sombra says as he puts it away "I will just remain silent as you speak to him."
>Walking down the hall to Credo's room, you look out one of the windows to your right
>That storm is not letting up
>In fact, you think it's getting worse
>Coming up to the door, you knock on it
"Credo? Are you in there?"
>You push open the door and peak inside
>It's dark in there
>Looking at your brother, he shrugs before you both head inside

I found a cute image!
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>>27823657
Umbra's hair is so floofy.
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>>27823728
floofy bump
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Gonna cash my check and buy my shit, be back in a bit
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>>27825049
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>>27826756
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>>27827723
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So has anyone tried Pokeon Go yet?
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>>27829334
It's relaxing fun, I like walking around a lot so it's perfect for me
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>>27823657
>Entering the room, your nose immediately scrunches up
>"It reeks of alcohol in here." Sombra says "Are you sure he can fulfill this order?"
"Credo is the best blacksmith in the empire." You say "He can work under any condition."
>You walk into his room a bit more
"Credo? Are you awake?"
>You hear nothing at first
"Credo?"
>You hear what sounds like bottles clinking together along with grunts
>"Ugh." You hear Credo say "What's the blasted time?"
>You watch as he stumbles out of his room
>He does not look so good
>His mane is a mess and he looks as if he hasn't gotten any sleep
"Good morning, Credo." You say "Is now an okay time?"
>He groans before nodding his head
>"Anytime is a good time for ya, Lady Umbra." Credo says "What do ya need?"
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>>27831903
>You look over to Sombra who already has the form out for you
"I have an order for you." You say before handing him the form "The empire needs more armor and weapons for the upcoming battle with the princesses."
>You open it up for Credo to see
>He looks it over before nodding his head
>"Alright, I can get it done for you, my queen." Credo says
"Are you sure?" You ask "You don't look to good."
>"It's nothing I can't handle!" Credo says before letting out a hearty chuckle
>He quickly winces in pain before rubbing his head
>"I drank a little too much last night." Credo says with a smile on his face
>Credo glances over at your brother
>"My lord." Credo says
>"Credo." Sombra says
>You look at them both
>You wonder why they act like that towards each other
>You shake your head and look back at Credo
"It is quite alright, Credo." You says "Rest as long as you need to this morning."
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bed bump
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Sorry about not writing, i've been busy and have had a serious case of writer's block.

>>27765620
>Surprisingly, it does so silently.
>Watching as the door opens, you are greeted with a familiar sight.
>Another door.
>Hip hip hooray.
>At the end of the hallway, there is a new sight.
>A welcome one at that.
>There is one of the see through walls at the end of it, and on the other side...
>That mare is there, laying down.
>Welp, no time like the present.
>Walking over to the wall, you knock on it as a precaution.
>No response.
>That's to be expected, though.
>Searching for any way to get through the wall, you spot two new levers on either side of you.
>One of them had to open the door, but given your experience with the last one...
>Hoping for the best, you pull one without thinking.
>Closing your eyes you hear gears moving in the walls again, and a loud bang in front of you.
>Peeking them open, you are rewarded with a wonderful sight.
>The wall is gone.
>And the mare is looking at you, dumbstruck.
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>>27832251
"Uh, hi."
>Really? Hi?
>That has to be the worst first words ever.
>It doesn't seem to matter, since she looks up at you with tears in her eyes.
"I'm Anonymous, you are?"
>She just keeps looking up at you, her eyes not breaking away from yours.
"You okay?"
>Looking closer, she's a mess. Her amne is all messed up, and it looks like shes been crying pretty hard.
>She's still the most beautiful mare you've seen, even through all that.
>"You, you are...no, thank you."
>Finally shaking out of her trance, she stands up, and walks over to you.
>"I am Queen Umbra, ruler of the crystal empire."
>Oh.
>OH.
"Well, let's get out of here before that wall closes back up, okay?"
>She smiles at you, and says,"Lets."
>Oh, sweet Celestia, that smile is amazing.
>As soon as she walks over where the wall used to be, the wall rises up from the floor, nearly closeing on her tail.
>Or, it would have, if she hadn't swiftly moved out of the way.
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>>27832350
"That was close."
>She just laughs, and motions you to lead the way.
>As the two of you get into the hallway, you wonder something.
"Hey, you wouldn't know anything about my family, would you?"
>"Actually, I do. They made it safe and sound into my empire, where my people are taking care of them. By the way, do you know which way to go?"
>Hearing the news about your family made you happy, but apart from where you have been, you have no clue where to go next.
>And that's the best thing to say.
"Honestly, I came from that way." you say, pointing in the way you came. "I've pretty much explored everything that way, so let's go this way."
>She seems to think on it for a moment then says," Then let's go that way."
>You start off that way, when she asks, "So, how did you find me?"
"From the top?"
>"Yes. Everything. Including how you got lost in the snowstorm.
"Alright, but its a long story."
>"Seriously? We are lost down here, We have plenty of time for you tell that story."
>There are some parts you aren't sure you want to tell her.
>That part where you pull a lever and she disappeared into a trapdoor for one.
>Alright, might as well, got nothing else to talk about.
"Well, It goes like this..."
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>>27832251
>>27832350
>>27832413
Now we're moving along.. Also bump.
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Bamp
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>>27828732
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Gonna go buy something I'm going to hate myself for. Be back in a sec.
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I'm somehow still alive and I've still got some green left in me, though I'm gonna start over with something a little different.
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>>27835439
It has been a long time writefriend, welcome back
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>Shadow and Light

>As you step out onto the large marble balcony, you're greeted by the warm Autumn breeze.
>You look down to Canterlot, where you could make out the small figures of the Canterlot elite.
>Even though they had the money to live anywhere in all of Equestria, they chose Canterlot, the home of the alicorn princesses.
>The sun slowly begins to lower into the horizon, creating sunbeams that spread across the skies.
>You hear a voice from behind you.
>"Ah, so that's where you were."
>Her horseshoes clicked in a rhythmic tune as she came out onto the balcony.
>You don't turn around to face her and continue looking out at the horizon.
>"Are you enjoying the view?"
>You nod as you can hear her stop right beside you.
>"Luna should be raising the moon anytime now."
>She's close enough to be speaking into your ear.
>As on cue, the moon begins to emerge from the horizon, painting the sky in a deep ocean blue.
>You can feel her leaning into you, intentionally, that is.
"You know, Celestia, you're awful at keeping out of other's personal space."
>You hear her giggle and feel her wrapping a wing around you.
>"I have my concerns for my subjects and that includes you, my little human, whether you like it or not."
>You think back to a time when you didn't know she was so playful.
>You are Anonymous, the only human in all of Equestria.
>Or so it would seem, there were still too many unknowns to rule it out entirely.
>Ever since you became the princesses' aide you've had access to more information and resources than you ever could've imagined.
>Not only that, you've been given insight to the princesses' lives.
"I should be going."
>You stand up.
>"Oh, so it's already time."
>You give her a quick squeeze behind her nape.
>She tenses up but then relaxes, sighing under your touch.
"I'll send you a message when we get there. I'm sure the nobles will change their minds, even if they don't want to."
>It's her turn to not speak and just nod.
"Goodnight princess."
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>>27835439
Holy hell, you're back!
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Cool looks like the other guys are back. I'm just fucking around with this PS4 I bought then I'll get to typing
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>>27838347
Fucked up my trip
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>>27838347
>PS4
Good decision, there are a lot of good upcoming games on that console. Any games that you're interested in Rager?
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>>27839154
Persona 5. That's just about it. I bought Street Fighter V and Smite and I'm waiting for Darkest Dungeon. Got any games to recommend me?
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>>27839265
Valkyria chronicles
Tales of zestiria (sort of)
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>>27832126
>"I'm fine." Credo says "A little work is just what I need to wake up."
>You smile before looking around
>There are a lot of bottles scattered across the floor
>Using your magic, you pick them up and put them on the tables
>"Wait, Lady Umbra..." Credo says as he gets up "A lady of your caliber shouldn't clean up my mess."
"I am clearing some space."
>"Credo, may I ask something of you?" Sombra asks
>You both look over at him
>"What is it, Lord Sombra?" Credo asks
>"Can you create a set of armor for me?" Sombra asks "I wish to fight at my sisters side when the Princesses come."
"What?" You ask "Did I hear you just right?"
>Sombra nods his head
>"You're going to need some help." Sombra says "I can't let my sister carry this burden all by herself."
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Shit i fucked up with time management I was like a kid with a new toy at least Knifey and Minty are here
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>>27840184
Hey senpai, jerk off with your new toy as much as you want as long as you keep on realeasing new greens.
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>>27833488
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>>27839434
Valkyria chronicles is so god damn good
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>>27840103
>A smile appears on your face
>This is going to be so fun!
>You can't wait to see the look on that dumb whorse's face when your brother comes out to battle with you!
>You let out a giddy laugh
>"Sister?" Sombra asks
>You open your eyes to see Credo and Sombra staring at you with confused expression on their faces
>A blush forms on your face before you cough into your hoof
"Don't mind me, I am just excited is all." You say "Sombra and I haven't battled together in quite some time."
>"You and I are going to have to spar." Your brother says "Because I have not had much combat experience since my imprisoment."
>Credo smiles before looking over at your brother
>"I'll do it, Lord Sombra." Credo says "You'll need to stay here though so I can get ya measurements."
>"Of course." Sombra says
>Credo looks back at you
>"Speaking of armor, do you want me to touch up on yours?" Credo asks "It's been quite a long time since you have had to don it."
>You think about for a moment before nodding your head
>"Then bring it to me when you have a chance." Credo says "Along with Anon."
>You raise an eyebrow at Credo
"Why do you want to see my beloved?"
>"There is something I need to speak to him about." Credo asks "It's just for a little project I've had in mind."
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Okay, I'm off to work
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>>27836313
>You turn and start walking back into the hallway when you hear her speak.
>"Don't forget to say goodbye to my sister, I'm sure she'll appreciate it."
"I won't."
>"I'll see you tomorrow morning before you head off. Goodnight Anonymous, please take care of Twilight for me."
>You wave her goodbye as you step back inside the hallway where the candles have already been lit.

>She didn't have to say it.
>You know her well enough to not hold it against her.
>Without thinking, you head towards the western wing of the castle.
>The surroundings gradually shift from the white and gold decorations to black and blue.
>Likewise, the guards have also changed with the scenery.
>The pairs of guards wearing golden armour were now replaced by those of a different race in lavender armour.
>From the hundreds of Celestia's Royal Guard that you've seen, who were also her Golden Army, you would assume that they would easily outnumber Luna's secretive Night Guard.
>Then again, for as far back in Royal Canterlot history, her Night Guards were always veiled under the night sky when most ponies slept.
>You could easily imagine how that could play to her advantage.
>The castle maids that were dotted about, however, still wore the same black and white apron uniform.
>As you approach Luna's quarters, a pair of guards stand by either side of the doors.
>Judging by their appearances, they were both female guards.
>Not only that, they were both bat ponies, or thestrals as you were once told.
>They both tilt their heads up at you as you approach them.
>"Lord Anonymous."
"Please, Anonymous."
>The guards eye each other before continuing on.
>"The princess has-"
"I know what the princess has said, but I must decline. It would create further resentment within the Canterlot elite over my position as the Royal Aide. I do hope you'll understand."
>"… Anonymous, our sincere apologies."
"It's fine, I need to see the princess."
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Sorry for the inconsistent posting, been busy here and there.

As for the new story, I thought I'd try and take things from a different point and build it up from there.

There'll be more of Anonymous, the princesses and the shadow ponies.
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>>27843602
sounds good man!
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>tfw you and your friend are running around work catching Pokemon

Funnest day of work I've had. Thank god it was slow.
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Well, I was just about to write when I discovered my ds has now been destroyed by water damage... going to go get some tools to see if I can't fix it. Then write later.
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>>27848840
Ds? Or 3ds?
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>>27848917
3ds. It's one of the Zelda ones, so I'm hoping to save it.
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>>27843205
"A project?"
>Credo smiles
>"Sorry, my queen. It's private." Credo says "You'll see it eventually."
>Now your curiosity has been piqued
"When do you want to see him?"
>"Later on tonight around eight."
>Anonymous should be home around that time
>Although he might be exhausted at that time
>You think it over before nodding your head
"Very well, I'll tell him to come."
>"Thank you, my queen." Credo says before looking around "Now then..."
>You see him pick up a tape measure
>"Here, Lord Sombra." Credo says "Let's get your measurements."
>Sombra looks at you
>"Looks like I'll be here for some time." Sombra says "You should bring your armor for him."
"That's what I was about to do." You say "After that, I'm going to retreat to my study while I wait for Anonymous to come home."
>Sombra nods his head, before you turn around and head out
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>>27848973
ugh, this burnt smell is giving me a headache...
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bed bump
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>>27849265
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>>27850725
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Green incoming
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>>27832413
>So you told her all about your adventures from the past two days.
>The griffon raid on your hometown, the injuries you sustained while fleeing your home.
>How you got lost in the ice cave and manged to save her guards.
>And your escapade inside these caves after getting lost in them.
>All throughout the story you told, she stayed quiet.
>Even when you told her that you pulled the lever that sent her tumbling into the room you found her in.
>The only thing you didn't tell her was that you found her beautiful.
>She's a queen, and besides, it would make things awkward while the two of you are stuck down here.
>In the meantime, you wandered around this place trying to find a way out.
"...And now we are here. Any questions?"
>You asked that out of hope that she'd respond to you in some form.
>"Well, yes. Actually, I've got a few."
>YES.
>Her voice sounds like sex to your ears. You couldn't get enough of it.
>"For starters, you said that you fell through a wall? A wall that you couldn't see through one way, but could the other way?"
"Yep. I've been looking for more while we're down here, but no such luck."
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>>27851870
>She stopped walking for a moment whole she absorbed the info.
>"The crystal you touched, you said it sent a stream of energy at you? And did you absorb it?"
"Yeah, here, let me show you."
>Walking over to one of the many crystal torches lining the walls, you touch it so she can see.
>The process repeats itself, and you absorb a stream of energy from it.
"See, it looks like that."
>You turn around to see her dumbstruck.
>Cute.
>She then points her hoof to the crystal and says, "Look, it not glowing as much as before."
>And now it's turn.
>The crystal is certainly less bright than before.
"What do you think caused that?"
>You look over to her, only to see her shaking he head.
>"Moving on, you pulled the lever that sent me and my guards down the trapdoor, right?"
>Shit. You were hoping she didn't ask about that.
"W-well, yes, probably. I may not have, you never know."
>"Doesn't really matter. The majority of the guards you sent down there are honor guards. They aren't actually loyal to me."
>What.
"Wait, you're their queen, how can they not be loyal?"
>She gives you a look that says that she's done with that topic.
>
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>>27849220
>You did as Credo requested and brought your armor to him
>While you carried it downstairs, you realized it had be some time since you wore this
>More armor isn't necessarily your style, but you feel like it's needed for the princesses
>After all this is the first time you'll actually do battle against them in person
>When you returned to your study, you walked around and looked through the shelves that hold your books
>You're not really looking for anything specific
>Just something to pass the time
>As you look through your collection, you come across the cabinet that holds the scrolls that Star Swirl left you
>You think for a moment
>There are powerful spells that reside in these scrolls
>But you don't think you even have the time to master them
>Star Swirl was very powerful and skilled at what he did
>Even if he had a few screws loose
>You continue to stare at the scrolls for a second before undoing the lock
>It wouldn't hurt to look at one
>Pulling one out, you close the door and lay down on the cushions
>Looking outside the window, you see the storm outside getting worse
"Please be safe, my love."
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>>27851998
>"It doesn't matter right now, we need to focus on getting out of here."
>Hrmm...
"Not fair."
>As soon as you say that, she turns to you, looking confused.
>Oh, sweet Celestia...
>Confused ponies are so adorable.
>"What isn't fair?"
"Simple, really. I answered your questions, so now it's your turn."
>She looks at you for a moment, and then starts walking again.
>"I am a queen. I don't need to answer your questions."
>You follow after her, wondering why she would play the queen card in this situation.
"Well, that is fine and all, but we are still stuck down here together. It would be easier if we get to know each other, don't you agree?"
>She just stays silent.
"Fine. Don't talk."


>You are Umbra, and you are stuck down here with Anonymous the human.
>Not that you are complaining.
>He's taller than every pony you've ever met, except maybe Celestia.
>But then, you haven't seen her or Luna in a few years.
>But Anonymous here, oh boy.
>You can only catch glimpses underneath the tattered clothing he wears, but he's made of solid muscle.
>All that work on the family farm seems to have paid off.
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>>27852124
>But he just asked a very personal question.
>He probably doesn't even realize what he asked.
>Questioning the honor guards loyalties.
>If only it was so simple.
>Their loyalties lie with their leader, Marmosa.
>Marmosa's loyalties lie not with you, but with Sombra.
>And Sombra's loyalties lie with power and greed.


>Back to Anonymous.
>The two of you have been wandering for a while in silence now.
>You've also been looking for a source of water along with an exit.
"Thirsty..."
>"Me too."
>Well, a response is good.
"Yet here we are, stuck under who knows how much ice, and we can't find any water."
>She chuckles a bit.
>"Quite ironic."
>You wander for a while longer, looking for any sign of water.
>And an exit.
>Suddenly, your hand catches on the wall.
"What the..."
>Glancing at your hand, you see it sticking halfway through the wall.
>Umbra just stares in astonishment.
>"To be honest, I didn't believe you about the wall."
>You roll your eyes, "Thanks."
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>>27852083
>Later that night...
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9SB7U7kXoE
>"Hey Anon! You still awake?" You hear a voice say "Anon!"
>Your eyes snap open and you quickly sit back up
>The first thing your eyes see is the neon sign that reads "The Stray Mare."
>You are Anon
>And right now you're relaxing after a long day of training
>"You alright there, Anon?" Wedge asks "You were close to laying your face in your pizza."
>You let out a loud yawn before stretching
>When you return to normal, you look out the window
>It may be night time, but you can still see that snow raging outside
>Looking around the restaurant, you see and hear the other patrons enjoying their night
>It's actually a little busy here tonight
>Erika is just running around making sure everyone is taken care of
>Looking back at Wedge, you rub your eye
"Yeah, I'm good, just tired is all."
>"You and Biggs both." Lance says
>Looking to your right, you see Biggs leaning against the wall with his eyes closed
>You nudge him with your elbow to get him to wake up
>He groans
"Come on, bud." You say "If I can't sleep neither can you."
>"Ugh." Biggs says as he opens his eyes "Fuck off, Anon."
>You chuckle before reaching for your drink
>You ordered something new that taste similar to rum and cola
>"Well that was an ordeal." Biggs says as he starts to wake up "At least we came out on top."

Character limit and time got me!
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Okay I'm off to work. When I get back we'll see how the gang won.
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>>27852495
alright man
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>>27852338
>"Really we came out on top because of our teamwork.' Wedge says
>All of you nod your heads
"Yeah, you came up with the plan, then you, Biggs, and I fought em off. And Lance played his part and disrupted them."
>You think back to this morning
>...
"Wedge, we need a plan!" You say "Everypony out there wants to fuck our faces!"
>"I'm thinking!" Wedge says
>"Well hurry!" Biggs says
>You peek over the hill
>Even with snow blowing around you can hear the sounds of the other ponies battling
>"Can't we just wait it out?" Lance asks
"No, Lance. We can't." You say before turning to face him "Unless you want Arthas to-"
>You look around
>Why is there a floating set of armor here?!
"Lance? Where are you?!"
>"Right here?" He says
>You feel him push your chest
>Squinting your eyes, you see his red mane
>He's blending in with the snow!
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bumipo
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>>27843534
>"The princess is not in."
>You stand there patiently.
>This was one of the quirks behind the Royal Guards, or more specifically with Luna's loyal Night Guard.
>They were always cautious when it comes to the princess' security.
>When the nobles would come to seek private audience with Princess Luna, they would become impatient and storm off.
"Then if you're not willing to tell me where she is, would one of you be kind enough to escort me to her?"
>"… one of us can escort you."
"That much would be appreciated."
>One of them stepped forward, stretching out their batwings as presentation.
>"Anonymous, please follow me."
>You nod and follow her.
>The two of you were silent throughout the walk.
>You found the bat ponies intriguing, with their sharp fangs, bat wings and slit pupil eyes.
>They certainly did look intimidating when compared to the other ponies.
>What you didn't know was what their diet was limited to, could they also drink blood?
>The guard flashes you a displeased look before carrying on.
>Maybe you could ask Luna about it another time.
>You make various turns in the hallways and soon enough an open space appears, revealing an inner garden illuminated by the moonlight.
>In the open square space there are numerous patches of night flowers glowing in the dark, various shades of blue and purple paint the area.
>Fireflies float in the air and dart to and fro, their bright yellow lights shine like stars.
>Sitting down beside the water fountain looking up at the night sky was the princess of the night, Luna.
>The guard beside you announces your arrival.
>"My Princess, Lord Anonymous has arrived."
>There's a slight movement in her posture, though you couldn't be sure in the dim light.
>The bat pony bows before standing by the archway at the entrance.
>You walk over to where Luna is, following her eye line up to fountain statue.
>"Did you know this statue is thousands of years old?"
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>>27859477
"No, I did not."
>"It was here when we were all but a filly. Every time we gazed upon it, we've come to understand something more about it and appreciate it all the more."
>The statue is of a pegasus pony, standing on one of its hind legs, the forelegs were angled up as though reaching for the sky.
>Its wings were open, though they were slightly folded and faced downward and resembled a skirt.
>Its face had a blank expression upon initial impressions, but there was something about the eyes and the shape of the mouth.
>Before you even realised it, Luna was looking back at you.
>"How is our lord doing this fair night?"
"I wish you would drop the titles, Anonymous is fine."
>She puts on an exaggerated gasp.
>"But we must insist! Otherwise how else would our subjects acknowledge and respect you?"
"Your subjects already know who I am, but I have yet to earn their respect."
>"Anypony who dares disrespect and question your title is also guilty of disrespecting and questioning our authority too!"
>She snorts.
>"Perhaps a week in the cells would do them will, or perhaps a personal visit from Nightmare Moon-"
>You drop down beside her and place a hand on her withers, thoroughly interrupting her speech.
"What do you think will happen to your relationship with your subjects? Especially if you favour, what is in all respects, an outsider?"
>She looks down.
>"… you are being far too humble Anonymous."
"Things will change, in time."
>You begin to stroke her withers in a gentle manner.
"I'm sure you've heard of my planned trip to visit the Crystal Kingdom."
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>>27857244
"I can't even see you!"
>Wedge looks up
>"You're right!" Wedge says "His white coat is helping him blend in!"
>"Okay big whoop." Biggs says "How does that help us?"
>"Lance, take off your armor." Wedge says
>"What!?" Lance says "But it's cold!"
"You'll warm up real quick now hurry!"
>Lance does as instructed and removes his armor
>When the last piece comes off, you swear he disappears completely
>All you can see is his mane and blue eyes
>"Perfect! This will work!" Wedge says
>"Alright, so what's the plan?" Biggs asks "I still don't see how Lance losing his armor helps us."
>"We do what we do best." Wedge says "We fight as a team."
>He looks at Lance
>"Lance. we're gonna run in there and start swinging." Wedge says "I need you to fly around and separate ponies from their teams by using the now as cover."
"We're going to divide and conquer." You say "That's the only way we're going to deal with these numbers."
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Alright I got to work
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>>27859889
just started reading this story. writefag is based af.
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Sorry I was trying to git gud with pic related

>>27864776
Oh, thank you!
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>>27859889
>You look over the hill
"Lance, use the wind to increase your speed." You say "You'll be like a fucking rocket, and you'll hurt like one too."
>Lance nods his head
>"Alright, we all ready to rumble?" Biggs asks
>Wedge looks over at Lance
>"Go." Wedge says "Create some chaos."
>Lance nods his head before flying into the sky
>You keep your eyes on him until he disappears in the sky
>Looking back to Biggs, you smile
"Let's make some noise!"
>You swear that's a wicked smile that forms on Biggs's face before he vaults over the hill
>"Anon, look what I've been working on!" Biggs says as his horn begins to glow
>You notice that the head of his hammer begins to glow as well
>Next thing you know he swings it and a beam of magic flies out of it striking a few ponies in it's path
>Wedge looks over at you
>"Looks like he stole your move." Wedge says
>You shrug
"That's alright, it look like it'll be useful."
>Grabbing the handle of your sword you jump over the hill and charge into the fray
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Bed Bump
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>>27865464
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>>27866695
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>>27867724
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>>27865439
When Biggs is so big he becomes the heavyset German man as Reinhardt
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umbra a qt

prove me wrong
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>>27869740
But you're not wrong
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>>27869740
Qt for sure but not waifu material.
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>>27865439
>As soon as you, Biggs, and Wedge arrive on the field, the ponies around you stop and turn to look at you
>It's a stand still at the moment as no one has made a move
>"Yeah that's right! We're here!" Biggs shouts "Now who wants some?!"
>You watch as some as the ponies look at each other
>"How about it?" One say "We take care of Arthas's golden boys first and then we get back to it?"
>"Sounds good with us." The other pony says
>Readying your weapons, they all turn and start walking towards you
>Alright, here we go
>As they get closer you look up to the sky
"LANCE!"
>"COMING THROUGH!" You hear him shout before he rockets into the closest pony, taking him out of the sight and out of the fight
>"What the?!" His teammates say "Where did they go!?"
>You chuckle
>It's kinda goofy, but it works
>You look over at your friends
"Guess that's our cue!"
>Without another word you and your friends get to work

I got stuck, my bad
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>>27868739
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>>27871587
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9SB7U7kXoE
>You lean back against the couch
"It was such a long fight." You say "And an exhausting one to boot."
>You take another sip of your drink
>"You're only saying that because they started to focus you." Biggs says "Remember those seven that jumped you at once?"
>You chuckle
>"I thought they would have thought twice about attacking you." Wedge says "Seeing as how you're Queen Umbra's special somepony."
>"Maybe they were jealous of Anon." Lance says "Queen Umbra is an amazing mare. I know some of those ponies had a thing for her."
"Well tough shit for them." You say "She's already taken."
>You rub your knee
"I will admit, I didn't think my knee were going to be attacked so much." You say "They just kept trying to take me down that way."
>Picking up your pizza you take one more bite finishing it in the process
>"You know what bugged me?" Lance asks "The fact that Arthas didn't even congratulate us."
>"I'm sure he was in his head." Wedge says "He just doesn't want us to hear it."
>You let out a sigh before rubbing your stomach
"That hit the spot."
>"Looks like that was it." Wedge says as he looks down at the table "Should we get go-"
>"Yo Erika!" Biggs yells "Check please!"
>"That answers that." Lance says
>Biggs looks back at you all before shaking his head
>"Sorry guys." He says in an apologetic tone "I'm just really beat is all."
>"All of us are." Wedge says "I'm looking to head back home and take a hot bath."
>Erika come on by before placing the check on the table
>"Leaving so soon?" Erika says with a pout on her face
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bed bump
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Man, I was so going to get some writing done, but pokemon go murdered any time I had.
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You have made a decent contribution to society.
Bump.
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>>27873458
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I want Queen Bitch to get hit by a bus.
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>>27874636
Are there even buses in Equestria? I know there are trains so i suppose a bus isn't that far fetched , been a while since i seen the show. Well anyway that's pretty edge, senpai.
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>>27874636
No pls
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>>27873412
"Yup, we're running on fumes."
>Erika smiles
>"Alright then guys, take it easy." Erika says "Get home safe."
>With that, Erika walks off to service the other tables
>Lance and Wedge get up from there seats, but when you try to, you have a hard time staying on your feet
"Well this is awkward."
>"Need some help?" Lance asks
>You shamefully nod your head
>Lance grabs your hands with his hooves before helping you up
>"Lance, how about you help Anon home?" Wedge asks "I'll pay and make sure Biggs gets back home."
>"Sounds good." Lance says
"See you guys tomorrow." You say as you wave goodbye to them
>Heading out the door into the empire, you pull up your hood and head for the castle
>Along the way you look over at your friend who is flying next to you with your arm around him so you don't eat shit
"Thanks Lance."
>"Don't mention it, Anon." He says "What are friends for?"
>You keep walking in silence for some time until your hear Lance speak up
>"Thanks Anon." He says
"For what?"
>"For just showing up here at the empire." Lance says "I know we've told you this before, but I don't think any of us would have made it this far if not for you."
>You smile
"Don't thank me for that." You say "I'm sure you guys would have made it. I think I just sped the process up."
>"You're too modest, Anon." Lance says "And I like that about you."
>You chuckle before noticing that you're coming up to the castle
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Fuck! Time constraint got me again. When I get back Biggs and Wedge are going to see a familiar mare doing some suspicious things
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>>27876510
sounds good
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>>27877946
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>>27876331
>You are Wedge
>After paying the bill, you said your goodbyes to Erika and Boss before leaving
>As soon as you step outside the cold wind cause you to shiver in your armor
>"It's too cold out here." Biggs says "I'm gonna pass out from the cold."
"Don't do it out here!" You say "I don't want to drag your sorry ass home."
>Biggs chuckles before you both get a move on
>While you walked you couldn't help but noticed that Biggs was swaying a bit
"You drank too much, didn't you?"
>"It was warming me up." Biggs says "I couldn't help it."
"We were inside a warm building!" You say before looking at him
>Bad move it seems because you bump right into somepony
>"Watch where you are going!" You hear a feminine voice say
"Oh I'm terribly sorry miss... Captain Marie?"
>Before you stands the female captain
>She looks super tired
>"Are you okay Captain?" Biggs says "You look like shit."
>She doesn't even look at him
>"Move!" She yells before pushing you out of the way
>You see for a split second that there's a rope under her cape
>As she storms off, Biggs speaks up
>"What a bitch." He says "She acted like this with me the other day."
>Something is not right...
"Biggs, let's follow her."
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bed bump
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oh shit bump
we gotta saev the thread for domaro
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I keep losing track of time these past few days, it's a bit worrisome. Anyway I'm back with some more green on my story, so at least until Minty or Rager posts.

>>27859505
>"Yes we have heard."
>There's a slight tinge of sadness in her voice.
"We'll need to sort out a few issues, so I can't say for how long. But as soon as we're done we'll come back."
>"We, we wish you a safe journey… and thank you for taking your time to visit us."
>You smile at her comment.
"Earlier I saw the moonrise, tonight's sky feels so much more vibrant."
>"So you noticed."
>Standing up you look up at the night sky once again.
"We would rarely get such nights back on my planet. Well Luna, I wish you a goodnight."
>As you start to turn and head back you feel a sudden shift of wind behind you.
>A pair of dark blue wings wrap around you, warmth oozes into you, and a smell of lilac washes all over you.
>She smells like heaven, a sweet scent without being cloying, fruity but not too citrusy.
>A fresh, clean, sweet, innocent, floral scent.
>"May the stars watch over you."
>Placing a hand over her wings, you silently thank her until her wings fall loosen.
"Take care."
>…
>You wake up in a darkened room.
>The sun still hasn't come up, and the alarm clock hasn't gone off yet.
>You wonder what woke you up?
>There's not much point in going back to sleep, so you will yourself to get going.
>Rubbing the sleep away from your eyes, you stand up and light up the beside lamp.
>You have a suitcase already packed with spare clothes, but importantly, the important documents regarding the Crystal Kingdom and Canterlot.
>Opening up your wardrobe, you put on a clean shirt, trousers and jacket.
>Even though it seems like you've been wearing the same thing each and every day, apart from Rarity's other extreme outfits, they're the only things that you can wear comfortably.
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>>27882441
>You could even pass them off as something made back home, though they do have their strange Equestrian aesthetics, you couldn't fault them for it.
>Having put on your jacket, you hear a knock at the door, followed by a familiar voice.
>"Room service."
"Come in, the door's unlocked."
>A castle maid comes into the room, wheeling a tray with a bowl and several coverer utensils.
>"Good morning, my lord! I am Quick Snips! Today I will be in charge of your grooming!"
"I see, thank you."
>She had a grey coat with a blonde bob cut but what was most surprising was that she was an earth pony.
"Silver Snips?"
>"Yes my lord?"
>She mouth as she opens the lid to a bowel of hot water.
"I hope you don't me asking but… isn't it difficult doing that with magic?"
>"Whatever do you mean?"
>Silver Snips elegantly whisks together a pot of shaving foam.
"I mean to say, getting up and so close to groom another could be rather…"
>She stops and looks at you, before blushing and giggling to herself.
>"Oh please my lord, just relax, I'll be gentle…."
>You think you've been misunderstood.
.
>You are Twilight.
>It's been such a long time since you've gone on a trip to the Crystal Kingdom.
>And with Anonymous no less.
>You wonder how your brother and Cadence are doing?
>They seem to be in high spirits every time you send a message to them.
>It'll be nice for Shining Armor and Anonymous to meet up again after so long.
>Not only that, they seem to have been trying to find new ways of improving the Crystal Heart's protective ability.
"Right, let's see. Books... Check. Research material... Check. Spare scrolls... Check. Formal wear... Check. Wake up bright and early... Check. Wake up Anonymous..."
>That's right, you'll get to spend more time with Anonymous, even though it seems like you're going there strictly on business.
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>>27882462
>With all the preparations done, you begin your teleportation spell.
>You close your eyes and focus on visualising every part of your body, making sure to pay attention to yours wings, and place yourself inside an empty void.
>You can feel your body warming up with the magic circulating through your entire body.
"That's the first step."
>You whisper to yourself.
>You then try and imagine the layout of the castle, focusing on the current floor he's on and the room he's in.
>You start warming up even more, and the visualised image of yourself vibrating and doubling.
>This was the final stage.
"Here we go..."
>You try and teleport yourself over to Anonymous' room, and a bright light envelopes you.
>What happens next is that you find your vision blurred and your ears are ringing.
>You're also still inside your room, but you're on the floor.
"Wha..."
>You try standing but pain shoots up from your entire body, it feels like you've hit from a considerable height.
"Ouch!"
>BANG.
>The bedroom door swings open and in come four Royal Guards.
>They scan the room before turning their attention towards you.
>"Princess Twlight, are you alright?"
>Your vision seems to be coming back to you, and what seems looked like four guards became two guards.
"Wha-what happened?"
>"The castle's magical barrier activates when somepony tries to teleport inside the castle."
>So that was it.
>It's no wonder why your body feels so battered.
>You've just experienced the rubber band effect of a rejected teleportation.
>You recall the textbook theory.
>Your body was sent to the location inside the void but was unable to manifest itself there, so within the time you should have emerged the void had sent you back to your original position.
"F-fascinating."
>"Are you alright princess?"
"Yea-yeah, just give me a moment."
>You stretch out your wings and, with the guards help, unsteadily got up off the floor.
"Wh-who activated the castle's magical barriers?"
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It's fun waking around with friends while you meme with them
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>>27883177
Yay you're back!
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oh shit pg9
bump
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>>27883767
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>>27883767
Lemme get in on some of this bump action.
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>>27881444
>"Say what?!" Biggs says
"You heard me, something seems off." You say "I just want to see what she is up to."
>"Come on, Wedge!" Biggs whines "I'm tired, cold, and my hooves hurt!"
>You roll your eyes
"Come on!" You say as you start following her
>"Dammit..." Biggs says as he starts walking next to you "If my legs give out, you're carrying me home."
>You shake your head
>Making sure you can't be seen, you carefully follow the captain
>Using groups of ponies to your advantage, you manage to stay out of sight
>"So you said she had a rope on her?" Biggs whispers
>You nod your head
>"And that was so crazy that we just had to follow her?" Biggs asks "Oh a rope, big whoop."
>You notice that you're coming closer to the wall
"It not just that." You say "Why is she fully clad in her armor? Why does she have her bags?"
>You quickly dive around a corner when Captain Marie looks back
"And why is she being so damn cautious?"
>"Maybe because two stallions are following her." Biggs says "Listen I think we should just head on home and-"
"Shh! Look!"
>Looking around the corner you see the Captain arrive at a door
>A door that lead to the top of the wall
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>>27884439
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>>27885907
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>>27885907
Bump
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>>27884912
>Captain Marie looks around once more before she opens the doors
>"Where are the guards?" Biggs asks "Aren't they supposed to be stationed at each of these doors?"
>You nod your head
"This is strange." You say "They know they're not supposed to leave their post. What is a civillan got up there?"
>The captain heads inside before closing the door behind her
"Come on, we need to follow her."
>"How?" Biggs says "There's no way we can sneak up there. We aren't pegasi."
>You look around
>There has to be another stairwell around here
>You look over to Biggs
"Come on. We need to find another stairwell!" You say as you start to run along the wall
>Eventually you come across another door that leads up
>But unlike the one before this one has guards guarding it
>"Hey we need to head up!" Biggs says to the guards "Look we have our armor on, we're part of the guard!"
>They look at you
>"What for?" They asks
>"We think something going on with c-" Biggs says before you shut him up
"A friend of ours is going through some lady problems." You say "Captain Arthas wants us to check up on him."
>They stare at you for a moment before moving out of the way
>"Hurry it up." One of them says "You guys aren't normally supposed to be up there."
"Thanks guys." You say before you motion for Biggs to follow you
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>>27887768
>The both of you quickly make your way up the stairs
>When you both reach the top, Biggs is practically dying
"Come on, no time to rest."
>"P-Please..." He says while wheezing "I need... A break!"
>Walking along the wall, the night and the snow are your only cover
>Coming along one of the towers located at the wall, you stop when you hear hooves walking around on the other side
"Shit! Wall! Now!" You whisper
>You and Biggs both take cover on both sides of the doorway
>Looking out, you see Captain Marie
>She's sitting down and looking out at the empire
>It looks like she's been crying
>You and Biggs both look at each other, before looking back out
>"So this is it..." She says "My home, my friends, my life. I'm forced to leave them behind."
>What is going on?
>"I've failed you all, because I'm so weak. And now I'm paying the price for it." She says "I only hope you can forgive me for my betrayal."
>Betrayal?
>This sounds bad
>You watch as she throws her weapon over the edge into the wastes
>What is she doing?!
>She then pulls the rope out from under her cape
>"It's best I don't waste any more time." She says as she begins to tie the rope around the merlon "I must go now."
>Biggs looks over at you
>"What do we do?!" He mouths to you
>Should you confront her?
>Yes
>No

I'm gonna play a few matches of Street Fighter so go ahead and pick
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>>27888000
Yes. Confront her.
Also, nice trip dubs.
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>>27888000
Let them confront her, mr gets.
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Confront. She's going to leave either way without capture, and she's unarmed. Let them get some info to bring back to Umbra.
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>>27888000
Confront the traitor
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>>27889460
no, she loves pic related
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>>27888000
I'd say capture since she just chucked her weapon, after all, she doesn't need to escape to advance the plot if she already gave up the location.
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>>27889777
Oh, shit nigger, I can't believe I landed triple sevens.
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>>27888000
>You look over at Biggs and cock your head towards the captain
>Biggs nods his head and you step away from the wall
>Taking a deep breath, you head out side the tower
"Captain Marie?" You ask while walking up behind her
>Immediately her head snaps over to you two
>She stands right back up and stands on guard
>"You two?!" She asks "W-What are you doing here?!"
>"We can ask you the same thing." Biggs says "Why are you up here? And what is this talk about betrayal!?"
>Marie grits her teeth
"Are you betraying Queen Umbra?" You ask "Did you somehow tell the enemy where we were?!"
>She takes a step back
>"I don't know why you're asking her that." Biggs says "It seems pretty obvious that's what she did."
"But why!?" You ask "Why would you do that?!"
>Marie doesn't answer you
>"And now it looks like you're trying to turn tail and run." Biggs says "We can't let that happened."
>You nod your head
"I'm sorry captain, but you need to come with us."
>"No." She says as she shakes her head "I can't, she'll kill me! I won't!"
>Before you can react, the captain rushes up to you before delivering a hoof to your face sending you flying
>"Wedge!" Biggs yells before the captain bucks him into a wall
>Getting back up, you rush at her only for her to dodge you and a strike to your neck
>Falling face down on the floor, you look up at her
>"You two are fools. Attacking me when your bodies are already at their limit." Marie says "And did you forget I'm still a captain?"
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>>27890167
I hope you check those trips >>27889777
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>>27852291
"Well, ladies first."
>"Why, thank you. Such a gentlecolt. Must have had plenty of mares after you in your village, huh?"
>You flinch slightly, since she unknowingly hit a nerve.
"Honestly, no. Not very many mares liked me all that much."
>Just as she was about to go through the wall, she sits on her haunches and looks up at you, disbelief in her eyes.
>Looks like you aren't getting away without storytime.
>"What? That can't be right. I mean, look at yourself. You're a mighty fine specimen for a human. Not that I've ever met a human before, but still."
>You sigh.
>Working on the forms certainly helped you look your best, but...you are still a human.
"Umbra, I'm a human. Always have been. The problem is simple. Nopony, not one, in their right mind would want to be with me."
"I was the town freakshow. I got a few dates because the girls lost a bet or something; but I never had a mare be into me just for being me."
"When I was small, I was bullied, and I was shunned, just for being different. The one mare I confessed to told me that she'd never be with me because I'm a freak of nature. I've long since lost faith that I'll ever find a special somepony."
>She just sits there, taking in your little rant. Obviously she didn't expect you to say that.
>Looking down, she said, "I have a confession to make. You can tell I'm not a normal unicorn, right?"
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>>27890477
Damn, forgot my name
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>>27890167
Bitch
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Under-appreciated mare.
Needs more love.
Needs more BUMP.
>Still waiting on Rager, pls, you are good at this
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very (fucking) slow internet bump
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>>27891486
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>>27890167
>You grit your teeth
>"Arthas isn't the only one proficient in hoof to hoof combat." Marie says "And in your state it wasn't much of an issue to bring you both down."
>"Dammit!" Biggs says
>"Why did you even follow me?" She asks "You both should have headed home."
"Why?!" You ask "Why are you betraying us!?"
>Marie looks down at you before turning her back to you
>"I didn't have a choice." Marie says
>You and Biggs look at each other
>"What do you mean?!" Biggs asks
>"The Princess of The Moon visited me in my dreams." Marie says "She had helped me with some nightmares I was having. In return she wanted to know the location of our empire."
>"So you just gave it to her?!" Biggs asks "What the fuck?! You're supposed to be a captain! You're supposed to protect this empire and it citizens, not put the in danger!"
>"SILENCE!" Marie yells "Hold your tongue boy! You do not know the things I went through!"
>She looks back down to you
>"I told her no. I wouldn't give up the location of the empire, for fear of what Queen Umbra and Arthas would do to me." Marie says "It was then that she forced it out of me by showing me my worst nightmare."
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>>27892760
>She closes her eyes
>"I tried my hardest to resist the torture, but I was too weak." Marie says "Now Princess Celestia knows where we are."
>She walks over to her rope
>"And now I must escape my home to meet with her." Marie says "She has promised my protection from Queen Umbra and Arthas which I know I will need."
"Why didn't you just tell Queen Umbra about the nightmares!?" You ask "She could have helped!"
>Marie remains silent
>"It's... It's too late for that now." Marie says "I need to go."
>"I won't let you go!" Biggs says as he tries to stand "You're a traitor and you need to be brought in!"
>"I see." Marie says "Then forgive me."
>She rushes up to Biggs before turning around and bucking him in the face
"Biggs!" You yell as he falls to the ground
>"There. He should be out for a bit." Marie says before she turns her attention to you
>You try to stand to defend yourself only to fall again
>"Now listen to me, Wedge." Marie says "When you wake, tell Umbra and Arthas that Princess Celestia is coming and that they will be here soon."
>She turns her back to you
>"I'm sorry." She says with tear filled eyes before she kicks you in the face
>And just like that, everything goes black
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>>27892813
Biggs and wedge are cuc.ks
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Off to work, Anons.
What will happen now?
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>>27893618
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>>27894536
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>>27894548
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>>27892983
War.
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>>27894868
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>>27892908
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>>27892813
>You are Anon
>Opening the door to the castle both you and Lance enter
>Looking towards the stairs you see Ariadne dismissing the other maids
>One of them points to you and Lance
>When Ariadne turns around she smile
>"Lance!" She says before looking over to you "And Anon! You're back! Hold on I'll go get Lady Umbra!"
>She starts to head over before stopping to get a better look at you two
>"You two look tired!" She says
>You only nod your head
>"Yeah, we kinda are." Lance says "Can you get Queen Umbra so she can take Anon?"
>Ariadne quickly nods her head before running up the stairs
>Resting on a nearby table, you see a small black bag
>"Well at least I got you home safe." Lance says "So how are you going to get up the stairs?"
>You shake your head
"I honestly don't know."
>Your kneecaps are going to exploded
>"My love!" You hear Umbra call out
>Looking over at the stairs to see Umbra running up to you
>Damn that was fast
>Umbra runs up to you before wrapping you into a hug
"Hey Umbra." You say, wrapping your arms around her
>"I missed you." Umbra says "How was your day?"
"Good." You say "I'll tell you about it when we get to our room. How about you?"
>"Well it started off nice." Umbra says "I started with-"
>"Oh, Lady Umbra!" Ariadne says "I got the lube you wanted! It's in that little black bag."
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>>27898185
>your kneecaps are going to exploded
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Rager, your story is great! keep up the good work
:D
Currently writing my own story, could fit in as a predecessor to this one.
Continuity is important
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>>27899441
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>>27899441
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>>27898902
Another writefriend?
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>>27898185
>Umbra shuts up as her mouth hangs open
>"Why do you need lube?" Lance asks looking at the both of you
>"Lady Umbra said that Anon broke something in their bathroom." Ariadne says "And that they needed this to help them fix it."
>It's only now that the wheels in your head start to turn
>Your mouth starts to open and you look at Umbra
>She's giving you the puppy eyes and her face is bright red
>Umbra uses her magic to grab the bag before stuffing it under her cape
>"T-Thank you, Ariadne." Umbra says "But couldn't you just leave it in o-our room?!"
>"I forgot!" Ariadne says "When I came back from the shop, the other maids needed my help."
"Sombra didn't see this right?"
>Ariadne shakes her head
>"Lord Sombra has been with Credo all morning!" Ariadne says
>You let out a sigh of relief
>He would never let you hear the end of it if he saw out
>"Then I-I guess we should retire to our room for the night." Umbra says "You look as if you're about to collapse."
>You nod your head before letting out a yawn
"You think I can get a nice hot bath first?" You asks "My body is aching."
>"Of course, my beloved." Umbra says "Come, we will go right now.'
>Walking over to her she helps you keep your balance as you head to the steps
>"S-So how was your day?" Ariadne asks "Did you guys do good?"
>Both you and Umbra look back at Ariadne and Lance
>"I-It went good." Lance says "We won at least!"
>Ariadne smiles before she plants a quick kiss on Lance
>"T-That's good to hear!" She says
>You and Umbra chuckle, causing the pair to look at you
>Their face light up in embarrassment
>"H-Hey! You two kiss all the time!" Lance says
>With a smile you say your goodbyes and head up the stairs with Umbra

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These two get it
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Off to work, my fellow Anons. I'll be back around Midnight or so.

>tfw can't watch EVO
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Got a few errands to run, so some green from me in a couple hours.
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>>27901716

>T-Thank you, Ariadne.
>o-our room?!
>I-I guess
>S-So how was your day?
>I-It went good
>T-That's good to hear!
>H-Hey!

Please use stuttering sparingly, Rager - its annoying when overused.

As an alternative you could replace or add on to one of your many uses of "[Name] says", which you use almost exclusively, with a more descriptive word such as "exclaimed", "hesitated", "choked", "questioned", "fretted", "agonized", etc.
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wtf? 5 minutes ago i bu,ped ant now its on p4
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bump after half an hour from 10
fml glimfags btfo
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>>27905516
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>glimmerposting
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>>27901716
>"Come on, Anonymous." Umbra says "Just a little more."
>With a pained grunt you finally climb up the last step
>Umbra uses her magic to keep you from face planting onto the floor
>"You must have really gave it your all out there." Umbra says
"You have no idea."
>Walking down the hall, Umbra opens the door to her room
>She leads you over to the bed and you take a seat
>Laying down you get comfortable
>"I love Ariadne, but sometime she can be so... Blunt." Umbra says as she puts the bag on the bed
>While Umbra begins to undress, you open the bag
>Pulling out the bottle you take a look at it
"So I'm fixing a sink with this?"
>Umbra turns to you and blushes before she takes it from you
>"It's was the only think I could think of!" Umbra exclaims "I couldn't tell her the real reason!"
>You kick your boots off
"So you really want to try this?"
>Umbra fidgets around before nodding her head
>"I do, if it's something we can experience together then I am up for it."
>You smile
"I love you." You say "We can't do it tonight though. Too tired for that."
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Bamp
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>>27909236
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>>27907579
>"Of course we're not." Umbra says "I do not want you falling asleep halfway through."
>You chuckle before sitting back up
"Sorry, Umbra." You say "I wish I wasn't so tired, I'd be willing to do it tonight."
>Umbra plants a kiss on your cheek
>"Do not fret, my love." Umbra says "There will be other opportunities. Now come on, let's get you out of your armor."
>With Umbra's help, you undo the straps that hold your armor together
>You could just lift it over your head, but your arms are too tired for that
>The chest piece falls apart and Umbra takes it
>As she does fastens the straps again, she place it on the armor rack Credo made for you
>"I will go get the bath ready for you." Umbra says "Hurry and discard the rest of your clothing."
>Umbra trots over to the bathroom, leaving you alone
>You slowly take off your pants before leaving them on the bed
>Getting up, you make your way over to the bathroom
>Upon entering the bathroom, you find Umbra humming a tune as she drops some objects into the hot tub/bathtub
>You can't help but notice that she is sticking that cute butt of her's in the air as she checks the water
>Why does this always happen in here?!
>It like Ariadne says the bathroom is a place to get clean, not dirty!
>A devious thought crosses your mind and you walk up behind her
>"There. The water is just right!" Umbra says "Now to grab AnonYMOUS!"
>You just grabbed two handfuls of her flank
>She turns back to you, a blush present on her face
>"I thought you were exhausted!" Umbra cries out
"I am." You say with a smile "It's just that my marefriend was sticking her nice butt in the air and I just had to grab them and..."
>You squeeze her flank
>"In the tub you!" Umbra manages to get out "Other wise your going to have a problem on your hands!"
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Okay. I'm home. Just let me eat these chicken nuggies and I'll get to typing
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>>27913383
All I could think of
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eb1vcaqAivY
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>>27913383
aw yis
fkin 2 hrs for nuggies
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>>27910244
"Oh come on, I just like to tease you."
>Taking off your boxers, you climb into the tub
>The warm water quickly takes hold and you start to ease into the water
"Ah!" You sigh out as you lean back against the tub "That feels so nice."
>You look over to see Umbra smiling at you
"You're not gonna come in?"
>She shakes her head
>"Every time we try to relax in this tub together it ends up getting... Steamy." Umbra says "I think it's best if I just lay here."
"Come on, Umbra!" You whine "It feels strange just sitting in here by myself! Just sit here by my side, that way it won't be like the other times."
>Umbra raises an eyebrow at you
"I promise." You say "Besides look at all the trouble you went through. You should at least enjoy it with me."
>She looks down at the water before placing a hoof inside
>"Very well." Umbra says "Just make sure you don't do anything funny."
>You smile as she climbs in beside you
>"I'm serious, my love." Umbra says "If I get too excited then I am afraid that I will need sweet release you're so good at."
"You flatter me, my queen."
>Wrapping an arm around her, you pull her in
>"This is nice though." Umbra says "Anonymous, I forgot to mention that Credo wanted to see you."

>>27914103
And Evo
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Hey Rager,
Re-reading part 2,
and there are some things I would like to say:
1. Luna and Celestia don't have the right to hate Umbra solely because she is Sombra's sister. If you follow that logic, Celestia is evil because she is Nightmare moon's sister.
More points coming up soon!
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>>27914949
Maybe not hate, but certainly very suspicious. Celestia wiggled out of that one since she's the one who banished nightmare moon. Hence, not evil. Maybe. She's still a cunt in this green.
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>>27915014
and 2. Rager,
What's with the grammar in the earlier stories?
It's a little bit below standard.
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>>27915030
parts*
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>>27915030
I was a dumb babby. Still am, but not as bad as back then.
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>>27915042
*I still am
I have noticed improvements though.
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Also,
*baby
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>>27915054
>>27915063
Those two were intentional
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>>27915080
Really?
seems legit
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>>27914826
"For what?"
>"He wouldn't say." Umbra says "We should have went when you arrived home, but you looked like you really needed this."
>You nod your head before leaning your head back
"I could go see him after this." You say "I just don't want to walk those stairs again."
>"I'll use a teleportation spell then." Umbra says
>You look over to her
"Why didn't you do that before?"
>"I'm not lazy." Umbra says with a shrug "If I teleported everywhere I wouldn't have this perfect figure you love so much."
>You shake your head
>"Here, turn your back to me." Umbra says "I want wash your back."
>You swear these sessions with Umbra always feel like something out of your Japaneses anime
>Turning around, Umbra begins to wash your back
>"So how did the training go?" Umbra asks "You never told me downstairs."
>While Umbra continues to get your back, you inform her of the events of today
>She tells you about her day as well
>You were surprised to hear that Umbra didn't want Eris in the battle
>But Umbra was the smart one so you were not gonna argue on that one
>After finishing up with your bath, Umbra passed you a towel as she put on her red bathrobe
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>>27915221
Currently at part 3:
>"muh orders"
>mfw 4chan references in ponyland
keep doing god's work, son.
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>>27915221
>Exiting the bathroom, you begin to dry off
>"Here you go, Anonymous." Umbra says as she brings your pajamas to you
"Thanks, Umbra."
>Getting dressed, you collapse onto your bed once again
>So soft, so nice
>You watch on as Umbra brushes her mane
>"That was really relaxing." Umbra says "I'm glad I joined you."
"I am too." You say "I can't explain it, but when I'm with you I feel at peace and it's easier to relax."
>Umbra smiles as she places her brush down
>"I really wish you were up for some fun tonight." Umbra says as she comes back to the bed "But alas, you're not up for it."
>She climbs up on the bed and you pull her in
"Well who's to say I'm not up for a little make out session?"
>Umbra giggles
>"You mean a make out session that will lead to something more?" Umbra replies with a sultry smile
>This mare is too much
"You know what? Just because it's you I'm willing to try."
>"Are you sure?" Umbra asks "You don't-"
>The two of you are interrupted as you hear the sound of hoofsteps approaching the door
>"Queen Umbra! Wake up!" Arthas shouts as he kicks in the door
>You both sit up
>"What is the meaning of this?!" Umbra shouts "Do you not know how to knock!? What is so important you had to barge into my bedroom?!"
>"Sister." You hear Sombra call out as he enters the room "There has been a situation that has arisen."
"What is it?"
>"Wedge and Biggs were found unconscious on the wall." Arthas says

It's my birthday so I got the day off!
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>>27918889
Oh shit!
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>>27918889
"What!?" Both you and Umbra blurt out
>"That is not all." Arthas says "A rope was tied around a merlon. Meaning that somepony infiltrated us or that somepony left."
>Umbra scrambles out of bed and reaches for her bathrobe
>"We are assuming that it is the latter." Sombra states, turning his head to Umbra "Are you just going to go out like that?"
>"Of course I am." Umbra says "I need to talk to the boys quickly."
"What happened to them?!"
>"We do not know." Arthas says "I was resting at home when one of Jin's ponies came to my home and informed me that they found them on the wall."
>"How was nopony patrolling there!?" Umbra asks
>"I do not know!" Arthas says "Jin has no idea what happened there as well."
>"Dammit!" Umbra growls "Where are they?"
>"The hospital." Arthas says "They did not suffer any serious injuries, but Jin did not want to chance it."
>You hurry out of bed and throw on just your shirt and jacket along with your boots
"Well then we need to go see them!"
>"Exactly." Umbra says "Let us go."
>Following Sombra and Arthas, you all head down the stairs to see Ariadne coming to the stairs
"Ariadne, do me a favor and tell Credo that I'll stop by tomorrow."
>Ariadne nods her head before taking off down the hall
>Exiting the castle you head over down the street that leads to the hospital
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bump from gr8 8 m8
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What sucks is since I got my birthday off, I have to work tomorrow. So that means I'm off to bed Anons
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>>27923384
rip
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>>27924087
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>>27923384
This is the second birthday we know of.
You were two years younger when you started this.

Happy birthday, you old fuck.
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>>27922669
>When you arrive at the hospital, Umbra immediately runs up to the desk
>"Take me to Biggs and Wedge!" Umbra demands
>The mare nods her head before leading the way
"I hope they're all right."
>"Do not worry about them, Anonymous." Sombra says "I am positive that they will be okay."
>"Arthas, I want a list of the guards that were stationed on the wall tonight." Umbra says in a serious tone "I want to know how in Tartarus somepony was able to sneak in or out without anypony noticing."
>"I have sent Jin on it." Arthas replies "I should have the list soon."
>"Get off me!" You hear Biggs shout "I'm fine!"
>"Please, Mr. Biggs." You hear a feminine voice say "We just want to make sure you're okay."
>Turning into the room, the first thing you see is Biggs trying to leave the room
>There are a few nurses trying to get him to stay put along with Lance?
>How is he here?
>Wedge is there too. but he's just sitting quietly on the bed
>The doctor that tended to you when you were here is standing by the door shaking her head
>"Ah Queen Umbra!" The doctor says "You have arrived! Maybe you could talk some sense into this stallion."
>Your friends turn and look towards the door
>There is a silence that hangs in the air for a moment before Umbra speaks up
>"Thank goodness you're all okay..." Umbra sighed as she walked into the room "What happened."
>Biggs finally sits back on the bed while Wedge hops off
>"Queen Umbra." Wedge begins "Captain Marie has betrayed us. Princess Celestia knows where we are because of her."

>>27926441
Thanks m8. It's been a fun ride so far.
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Alright Anons it's time for work! I'll see you all later.
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>>27926467
>"WHAT?!" Umbra shouts, causing everyone to jump
>"It's the truth." Wedge says in a shaky tone
>"Where is your proof?!" Arthas cuts in
>"Why would we lie?!" Biggs says "We followed her to the wall where she was trying to make her escape."
>Umbra waves Arthas off before turning to your friends
>"Tell me what happened." Umbra calmly says "I need to know what exactly happened."
>You walk over and take a seat on one of the chairs along with Lance
>"Well after Anon and Lance headed home we payed the bill and headed home ourselves." Wedge starts out "We walked for sometime until we bumped into the captain."
>"She started screaming at Wedge." Biggs says
>Wedge nods his head
>"I had looked down to avoid her gaze only to see the rope under her cape." Wedge says
>You glance over to see Umbra shaking her head
>"I told Biggs we should follow her and that's what we did." Wedge says "All the way to an unguarded door."
>"Damn her!" Arthas says "She must have used her status as a captain to help her."
>Umbra quiets him down
>"We couldn't follow her up those stairs so we had to hurry to another set." Wedge says "Heading up, we came across her looking out at the empire."
>"She talked about how she was sorry for betraying everypony." Biggs says "And how she had to leave."
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I found my new bro.
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>>27934301
Guaranteed a spot on my team.
>tfw /mlp/ has ruined your view on horses
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>>27931885
>"I can't believe what I am hearing." Umbra says "I could tell that Marie's loyalty was faltering, but I did not actually believe she would betray us."
>Umbra closes her eyes
>"What did you two do?" She asks
>"We confronted her." Wedge replies "We got her to spill the beans."
>Biggs nods his head
>"She told us the Princess Luna had invaded her dreams and had asked for the location of the empire." Biggs says
"Wait Luna can enter dreams here now?!"
>"It was only a matter of time." Umbra says "With how often her and Celestia visit you."
>"When the captain said no, Princess Luna began to torture her by showing her, her worst nightmares." Wedge say "That's when she cracked and told them."
>"We tried to stop her from leaving, but it was just the both of us and we were too tired." Wedge says "She kicked our asses."
>Biggs grumbles
>"Before she knocked me out, she told me to tell you and Captain Arthas that Princess Celestia is already on her way."
>A silence hangs in the air before Umbra nods her head
>"I see. In any case thank you, boys." Umbra says "Thanks to you two we won't be blindsided at least."
>Umbra turns back and looks at Sombra and Arthas
>"We have a lot of preparing to do." Umbra says "And it seems our time schedule is much shorter than before."
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Off to work. At least it's payday today.
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I'm here, just relaxing from work. Give me a sec
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>>27890477
"You mean apart from being the most beautiful mare I've ever seen?"
>You did not just say that.
>Umbra looks shocked by the sudden compliment, blushes ever so slightly, then regains her composure.
>"W-well, not that. For both of us, I'll just forget you just said that."
>Yeesh, at least she wasn't offended or anything like tha.
>In fact, she seemed a little happy you complimented her.
>"I'm talking about me looking different than other unicorns."
>She did have a darker tone to her mane and coat colors.
"Well, you do look different than them, I guess."
>Her face goes deadpan as she gets ready for a lecture.
>Oh boy, here we go.
>"I'm what is known as a shadow pony. An incredibly rare genetic mutation is part of what differentiates us from the average unicorn."
>"We live about as long as an alicorn, and our reproduction cycles only occur about every ten years or so.
>A blush and an uncomfortable shuffle accompany that last part.
>"Another is that shadow ponies can freely control crystals at will. Alicorns and exceptionally gifted unicorns can only slightly manipulate them."
>"We also have no cutie marks whatsoever, are omnivores versus straight vegetarians, and are built slightly more muscular and larger."
>She flashes you a toothy smile, and you see her sharp canines in the process.
>"The combination of everything results in what you see in front of you. The darker coat and mane, and the diffrent style of horn." she says, pointing her hoof to the red horn on her head.
"And the eyes?"
>"Same thing."
>Everything you were just told is intriguing, to say the least.
"How many shadow ponies are left in the world?"
>She shakes her head, and replies,"Only two. The rest died in a war a thousand years ago."
"Who's the other? Your mate?"
>You asked this with a bit more venom in your voice than you would have prefered.
>Fortunately, she didn't seem to take notice.
>That, or she didn't care.
>Since her face read a mix of emotions.
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>>27935176
>Arthas remains silent
>"I shall let the captains know of what has transpired tonight." Arthas says as he turns to the door
>Before he exits the room, he speaks up once more
>"I shall bring you Marie's body when they arrive." Arthas states in a cold tone "None shall betray my Queen, her citizens, or her empire."
>The whole atmosphere of the room changes as he finishes that sentence
>Umbra doesn't respond as Arthas leaves the room
>"Just like his ancestors before him, his loyalty to you is impressive." Sombra says
>Umbra looks back at her brother
>"What now?" Sombra asks
>Umbra sighs
>"We just keep preparing." Umbra says "At faster rate."
>"What of the nurse ponies in this room?" Sombra asks "Word of tonight will spread through them."
>"What do you want me to do? Silence them?" Umbra asks "Let them. My citizens were going to find out eventually."
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>>27940419
>First, shock, then outrage, then sadness.
>All because of you and your stupid mouth.
>She shook her head, then surprised you with what she said.
>"Can I make another confession?"
"Go right ahead, I won't stop you."
>Sighing, she shakes her head, then looks at you, still unsure of something.
>You hear her mutter,"Can't believe I'm telling a stranger this."
>Must be really personal.
>"Do you remember asking me why my guards aren't loyal?"
>Huh? You asked about the other shadow pony, not her guards.
"Yeah, but what do they have to do with the other shadow pony?"
>Looking at you, she sighs.
>"A lot, really. I'll get back to them in a moment, but I should talk about Sombra."
>Sombra, huh. I guess that's the pony's name.
"He's the other shadow pony in the world. He lives in the Crystal Empire, which I rule.
>So it's a he, huh?
>"He's...an incredibly influential noble in the empire, to the point of being almost as powerful as me. To make things worse, he has followers. Followers thot obey him, not me.
>"I've estimated that he controls at least half of the empire, if not more. He's done this with a specific goal in mind."
"That goal would be?"
>To take over the Crystal Empire. More than likely Sombra's eyes are on the throne. So, as his influence grew, so did his ego."
>"Initially he used subtlety and tricks to get more power. Now, that he has power, i couldn't stop him from doing what had happened a few months ago."
>"He came to me one afternoon and gave me an ultimatum."
>"Marry him or he would start a civil war in the empire."
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Okay I'm gonna cash my check, I'll be back in like a hour or two.
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Okay I'm home
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>>27942531
Nobody cares.
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>>27940646
>The nurse mares look at each other before Sombra turns to them
>"You may leave us now." Sombra says "I do not think these two require anymore medical attention."
>The nurses nod their head before filing out of the room
>The Doctor on the other hand walks up to your friends
>"Just place some ice on your heads and stop by here if either of you are feeling ill." She says before turning to Umbra and bows "My Queen."
>With a bow, she exits the room
>Everyone remains silent as Umbra thinks about what has just happened
>"We're sorry we couldn't do anything to stop her." Biggs says "We let you down again."
>Umbra smiles
>"You two still do not get it do you?" Umbra asks "You did not let me down, you did an amazing job at finding out this treachery and letting me know about this ahead of time."
>Biggs looks down at the floor before nodding his head
>"Do not feel bad about it." Umbra says "Just worry about recovering."
>Umbra looks back to Sombra
>"Sombra, we need to speed things up." Umbra says "Can I count on you to do that?"
>Sombra nods his head
>"Of course." Sombra says "Leave it to me."
>A smile finally forms on your marefriend's face
>She lets out a small yawn
>"This has been quite the ordeal." Umbra sighs before looking at you "We should get home and get some rest. It is going to be quite busy tomorrow."
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bémp
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>>27946822
>You stand back up
"Are you sure, Umbra?"
>Umbra slowly nods her head
>"Yes." Umbra says "We have done all we can tonight."
>She turns back to face you
>"We should head home so we can get to bed early." Umbra says "You can't tell me you're not exhausted."
>You let out a rather loud yawn
>Umbra giggles
>"See?" Umbra asks "You're about to pass out on me."
>How in the world?
"How can you be so calm about this?" You asks "After everything that's happened tonight."
>You smile on Umbra's face falters a bit before it comes back
>"You can't let it be the primary focus on your mind." Umbra says "It will be worse for you as time goes on."
"Yeah, but..."
>"I am fully prepared to deal with all this issues tomorrow." Umbra reassures you "But for now, we just need to return home and clear out minds."
"If you say so."
>She looks back at your friends
>"Boys, we are leaving now." Umbra says "Please get home safe, and thank you again.."
"I'll see you guys tomorrow." You say
>Waving them goodbye, you leave the hospital with Umbra
>As you walk on home with Umbra, you look around at the ponies around you
>They all look so happy, but soon they'll hear about Celestia
>That feeling of guilt is stating to creep back in
>If only you hadn't found this place...
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>>27941091
>Your turn to be shocked.
"Seriously? What'd you do?"
>"I love my subjects, and he has influence in the places it counts. The majority of the royal guard is loyal to him. If he started a war..."
"The guards would have give him the upper hand in the fight."
>"Yeah."
>The only sounds you heard after that were nonexistent.
>You knew you were jealous, but to know the reason why they are together sucked even more than the fact that they are together.
>She didn't even need to say what she said to that ultimatum.
>An almost silent sob escapes from her, and you kneel down to look at her face to face.
>Tears form two small rivers on her face, and her eyes are squeezed shut.
>You want to comfort her, but how?
>Hesitatingly, you raise a hand and pet her mane.
>Softer than sin itself.
>You grasp that there is no way she is going to like this.
>Startled at your gesture, she moves to back away from you, but stops midway through the motion.
>Her eyes fly open, eyeing you suspiciously behind a sea of tears.
>Slowly, shaky, she leans back into your hand.
"Do you want me to continue?" you ask, uncertain of what she wants.
>"Mmhmm. Yes, please, it's rather nice." she responds, a wide, but bashful smile creeping back onto her face.
>Continuing for what seemed to be an lifetime, she gradually moves closer to you, finally resting her head on your shoulder.
>As she did, you reached up with your other hand and wiped her tears off with the back off your hand.
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>>27948564

Please don't do another breakfast scene unless it's actually important to the plot. The story needs to move on, and continuing to make slice-of-life content will destroy any amount of tension you build before the fight.
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>>27949105
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>>27948564
>When you reach the castle, you headed back upstairs to your room
>Upon entering the room, Umbra takes off her bathrobe and climbs on the bed
>You on the other hand just sit on the edge of the bed so you can look out towards the window
>The candles around the room start to dim down, so you know that Umbra is getting ready for bed
>"Anonymous? Are you okay?" Umbra asks in a concerned tone
>You look back and nod your head
"I'm fine."
>Turning back to the window, you continue to watch the snow dance along the sky
>Feeling movement on the bed you try to tell Umbra that your fine, but she wraps her forelegs around your neck
>"You are a terrible liar, my love." Umbra says before moving to your side "What troubles you tonight?"
>You let out a sigh
"Umbra, I'm getting that feeling again that this is all my fault." You tell her "If I had never found this place then you wouldn't have to worry about Celestia and-"
>"And I would be much more depressed." Umbra cuts in "You need to stop beating yourself up because fate brought you to me."
>You try to argue, but when you turn to look at her you notice that small tears hang from the comers of her eyes
>"Do you not remember how lonely I was when we first met?" Umbra asks "I only had Ariadne, Edith, Credo, and Arthas to really talk to."
>She wipes her eyes
>"I only really had them, I always thought Sombra was gone, but I did not want to accept it." She says "And to top it off I tend to shut myself away from everyone."
>She moves her face closer to yours
>"When you arrived things changed for the better!" Umbra says "For the empire and for me!"
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>She pulls you into a hug which you return
>"Look at what good you have done." Umbra says "Sombra is here with us, Eris is out of her confinement, you and the boys stopped Alastor and dealt with the issues at Fazmare's, And I know it doesn't feel like it, but you've changed Arthas!"
>She pulls away
>"And best of all, you helped me find love." Umbra says "I found the special somepony I want to be with. You..."
>She doesn't hesitate before planting a kiss on your lips
>The kiss last for sometime before you both pull away
>"Please. Stop blaming yourself for what has happened." Umbra pleads "If anything think of it as you brought more excitement to the empire."
>A small smile forms on your face as you and Umbra lay in bed together
"Excitement, huh?"
>Umbra smiles
>"Things were so boring before you arrived." Umbra says "It was like following the same schedule without there being a fork in the road."
>You let out another small yawn before Umbra pulls you in
>"I want to hold you tonight." Umbra softly says "Rest, my love. I will see you in the morning."
"Night, Umbra." You say before passing out
>...
>Looking around your dream you find yourself in the outskirts of the wastes
>Thank goodness this is a dream or you would be freezing to death
>The sound of twigs being snapped behind you alert you and you spin around
>You sigh
"Of course you show up again."
>A smile forms on her face as she comes into the light
>"Good evening, my sunshine. How are you tonight?"
>Celestia

Okay I have work so I'm sorry if this part feels a little rushed. I might re work it when I get home
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Okay I'm off!
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Now back to Canterlot where Anon and Twilight are getting ready to leave for the Crystal Kingdom.

>>27882496
>"Why, under General Thunder Cracker's orders. Her instructions were that there are to be no unauthorised teleportations within the castle grounds."
>The other guard stepped in.
>"It's to prevent another attack on the capital."
"Thunder Cracker?"
>The name rings a bell, but you can't focus.
>"Yes, she's Shining Armor's successor."
>A shrill gasp punctuates the air around you.
>"My princess! Just look at the state you're in!"
"N-no, I-I feel fine-"
>"But your hair!"
>You turn and look into the mirror.
>Your hair is frazzled beyond belief.
"I-I don't have time for this, I need to see Anonymous-"
>The maid steps into the room, levitating a bag beside her.
>"Absolutely not! As one of the head maids I can't allow you to see Lord Anonymous now, not in that state! It would be a disservice to yourself!"
>
>You arrive outside Anonymous' room later than you had intended to, and knocked at the door.
>Maybe the maid was right, your hair does look good right now.
>If only it didn't take so long to style.
"Anonymous, it's me, Twilight."
>Huh?
>Instead of a male voice, all you hear is a muffled female voice.
>Your breathing hitches.
"A-Anon, what's the meaning of this?"
>Again nothing.
"I-I'm coming in!"
>You force open the door.
>There's a pony maid with her back towards you, straddling Anonymous on a chair.
>Time freezes around you.
>She's on him.
>She's making out with him!
>How dare she!
>How dare she try and take away my Anonymous!
>What does she have that I don't have?
>I'll send her into the depths of-
>You hear something drop onto a tray, snapping you out of it.
>"All done Lord Anonymous!"
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>>27951522
>You are Anonymous.
>You wanted to sit down on the floor so that the maid could shave your stubble.
>But she flinched and waved her hooves in front of her as soon as you suggested it.
>"Oh no, I can't have the lord do that! Please take a seat, I'll manage."
>Well it wasn't only about making it as easier for her, but making sure she wouldn't cut you.
>Your tension disappeared once Silver Snips threw a hot towel over your face and began giving you a hoof massage on your shoulders.
"I've… never been given a massage by a pony before."
>Silver Snips giggles.
>It was true though, you remembered seeing the spa in Ponyville and how Rarity would invite all of her friends there.
>But of course, given your different physique, you had to reject her invitation to go.
>"You remind me of the minotaurs, however, I much prefer your type over theirs."
>Minotaurs.
>Something you that was written about in the old mythology of your world.
>What a strange coincidence that they should exist in this world.
>You've only seen one safely from afar.
>"Okay, please just lean back."
>The towel is taken off you and the grey mare places both hooves onto your chest.
>With a shaving brush in her mouth, she brushes a thick layer of foam all around your neck.
>You feel her jump off, before jumping back on.
>You open an eye to find her with a razor blade in her mouth.
"… are you sure this is safe?"
>"Ew haf uthin tew ear."
>She mumbled in response.
>"Aw haw ill."
>She drew her muzzle close to your neck and edged the blade even closer.
>You could feel her short breathes on your face.
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>>27951551
>Then the razor blade touched your neck, and scraped upwards in one swift motion.
>Not soon after, she began moving the blade to the next area.
>Her motions were so precise and quick, it was like a well-oiled machine working like clockwork.
>You felt a bit silly to doubt her, it seems like she was a professional after all.
>Then again, who would've thought a pony could be so skilled with her mouth?
>After a while, it was beginning to feel relaxing.
>You peeked another view at Silver Snaps, who was busy concentrating on getting all your stubble.
>As you sighed, she briefly glanced at you and grinned before carrying on.
>There was a knocking at the door, followed by a muffled voice.
>Silver Snips mumbles between each shave.
>"Uhf ah mineh."
>She's nearly done now, though now she's paying particular attention to the area around your lips.
>The door bangs open.
>You feel like you're going to lose your lips any moment now.
>But nothing happens.
>Silver Snips carries on as though nothing happened and never breaks contact with you.
>In an instance she places there razor back into the tray and smiles.
>"All done Lord Anonymous!"
>You run your hand over your chin.
>Smooth as a whistle.
>A purple field surrounds Silver Snips and pulls her off you.
>"Eep!"
>"And just what do you think /you're/ doing to our lord?"
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>>27952754
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