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Previous thread: >>27618234

>What is this thread about?
This thread is centered on stories about ponies being enslaved. Every kind of theme is welcome.

>I want to write my own story but I'm new to writing.
Check out these guides:
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pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f (clop specific)

>Where do the writers hang out?
Head over to www.rizon.net/chat with the channel name #slavepone. If you're ever having a writer's block or need advice, that is the place to go!

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>>27683857
If this stays up...
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>>27684046
SKITTLES WHEN?
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>>27683857
Need green of this image
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>>27683857
>inb4 deleted/autosage
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>>27684046
for more than 4 hours...
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So are we regarding this as like a test thread or should I post?
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>>27684484
Post
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Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/zGy7dNgp

>>27684490
>Be Moon Dust.
>You headed down the steps with Anon, freshly dried pain relieving paste on your snout.
>Your eyes kept to Anon’s broad back, just watching how he moved… it was a tired, yet determined stride.
>There was a kind athletic grace to how he did things.
>Humans were large and powerful.
>You had seen them accidentally hurt ponies when they misjudged their own strength, but in Anon, all you felt from him was gentleness.
>No other human had ever put you at ease like this.
>He was really unique, you suppose.

>You, Redheart and Anon headed down a long hallway, passing several employees on your way.
>You wonder for a moment why Anon was taking such a strange route but it was his training platform.
>He’d know which way was the best really.
>Anon turned to a door, scanned his thumb, and it opened with a harsh click.
>You walked in after him and took in the room.
>A large human bed lay up against the wall and a few travel bags sat near the door.
>There was a basic vanity, and a door leading to a washroom to your right.

>Anon dropped his shoes and motioned you over toward a door.
>”Go ahead and adjust the water temperature to your liking. I’ll be there in a second.”
>You glanced around, furrowing your brow.
>This looked a lot more like a hotel suite than a bathing area.
“Um, sir, are all the cleaning facilities at this rig this nice?”
>He and Redheart turned to you, giving you a look.
>”This is Anon’s personal quarters, Moon Dust,” Redheart said stiffly. “The training bay only has a large shower room with no curtains for privacy.”
>She gave you what you thought was meant to be a friendly smile, but somehow it felt forced.
>A nervous feeling settled in your center.
>Did you do something wrong?
>The nurse had been really nice up until you came here.
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>>27684513
>Anon nodded.
>”Mmhm. And I promised a bath, so we’ll be using my stuff,” he said, giving you one of his friendly smiles.
“Oh… thank you.”
>Suddenly the carpet seemed super interesting.
>Get it together filly, you thought. It’s just his room.
>No matter how much you tried to convince yourself, it still felt like you had been taken to a palace and told to make yourself at home.
>Celestia, how long had it been since you felt carpet?

“Right so I’ll get on that then,” you said in a quick slur.
>You scooted on into his bathroom and started the water, not wanting to stand in front of him while fighting your nerves.
>A big part of you wanted to just tell Anon ‘thanks for the offer’ and you’d decided not to waste his water and time, then scurry out just to end the guilt and butterflies raging in your stomach.
>But you think something letting Anon do this for you would make him happy.
>You wouldn’t throw his kindness in his face like that, no matter how nervous you felt.

>You sigh, and check the temperature.
>It was probably right—hard to say since it’d been ages since you had a warm shower, let alone a warm bath.
“Um, it’s r-ready,” you say, unable to keep the stutter out of your voice.

>Redheart came in first and took a seat by the entrance, looking somewhat bemused.
>Maybe she didn’t approve, but then she didn’t have the authority to question him probably.
>Anon followed just after in a loose tank top and some athletic shorts.
>”Alrighty, upsidaisy,” Anon said as he hooked his palms under your forelegs and lifted you carefully over the edge.
>Thankfully you just barely held in an eep.
>He placed you into the tub and you couldn’t help but let out a breathy moan as the soothing water soaked into your coat.
>Oh Celestia… this was so nice.
>You looked up at Anon and he grinned down at you.
>A heat spread across your cheeks and you bit your lip.
>”You ready?” he said.
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>>27684518
>You nodded and leaned back a bit, as his hands began working through your coat while cupping small doses of temperate water to splash on your mane.
>The water soothed your skin as it flowed down you, lulling your nerves with every trickle.
>Your eyelids felt heavy and your mind started to drift.

>What an amazing send off.
>Anon had tried not to say it outright, but there really was no point in dodging it.
>You knew exactly where you were headed after being returned so much.
>Any mare would have probably heard the rumors and put it together by now.
>You were powerless to stop it.

>Hub only sold slaves to certain people—affluent individuals, or at least people with good money and a decent track record.
>There were even rumors of a green and black lists that all the major companies shared.
>Somepony had told you it was a matter of keeping the worst of the abuse out of the spotlight.
>Not many people liked ponies, considering things, but if anything really bad surfaced, even Hub wasn’t immune to the backlash.
>Either way, your prospect of finding a buyer by the end of the day was… near nonexistant.

>Anon had tried even… and that meant the world to you…
>If he couldn’t, no one could.

>Anon grabbed a bottle and squeezed a dab of shampoo into his palm.
>He began working it into your coat with his fingers, scrubbing away all the dirt and filth from the night before.
>You felt the knots and tangles loosen under his gentle touch and your breathing hitched.
>Was this what it would have been like if he had brought you home?
>Would he do this some nights if you had dared ask?
>Being his…
>It was a dark, covetous thing to still be thinking about but somehow you couldn’t keep the fantasy from sprouting.
>Maybe at least for today you could pretend.
>Yes, right now, it was like you were his.
>Anon was cleaning his little pony after a long day.
>You had worked hard for him, and you earned yourself a night sleeping beside master.
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>>27684525
>What you would give to make that a reality.

>How many times at North Rig had you been passed up for purchase.
>Ten?
>Twenty?
>Your aptitudes and garish colors made you nothing but a pointless eyesore to humans.
>You had been grateful nobody wanted you for some time.
>But while some masters were bad, the trainers at North Rig were always worse.
>They took out their frustrations on you when you didn’t measure up.
>You reflected badly on them, and they couldn’t seem to ever get rid of you.
>They’d drink and beat you, calling you names and forcing you to degrade yourself by repeating them back.
>What they made you call yourself burned on your tongue, but at some point it stopped feeling bad.
>Some names started to feel accurate.
>There were sometimes even nights where you’d be forced to go to bed covered in bodily fluids from them or slave stallions, just like last night.
>Some nights you didn’t feel anything and just fell asleep staring at your ceiling.
>Others you thought you deserved it.

>Anon eased you onto your back in the shallow water and started combing his sudsy fingers through your tuft and belly.
>His wonderful digits felt their way to your hips and hind legs, traveling down to your hindquarters.
>A leg involuntarily twitched and you let out a breathy gasp.
>”Am I being too rough, Moon Dust?”
>You felt like your face was on fire.
>If anything, Anon was just being gentle and professional.
>You were just letting it get to you.
>What would he say if he knew what you were thinking...
“N-No. It’s okay.”
>You thought you heard Redheart huff but Anon’s hands distracted you before you could think much of it.
>He coated your haunches and thighs with soap, making sure to take care of every inch of you.
>You panted, completely unable to keep under control as his hands seemed to explore every bit of your body.
>Anon simply hummed to himself, giving you a smile every now and again when your eyes met.
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>>27684539
>He grabbed at the base of your tail and you bit down on your lip, hard, letting out a light mewl.
>Anon gave you a worried look.
“Moon Dust, do you want me to turn the temperature down? You’re looking awfully heated right now.”
>Your head felt hazy and you gave what you assumed was his blurry figure a limp nod.
>You felt a cool splash behind your neck though you couldn’t tell if it did anything.
>All you could think about was the sensation in your tail as he idly pulled his fingers through it.

>Anon thankfully gave you a breather when he reached up and detached the showerhead from the wall and brought it down.
>A hose ran behind the device and he carefully aimed it away while adjusting the temperature.
>After fiddling with the knobs a moment, he turned and started with your hindlegs.
>You flinched as the water brushed across your sensitive inner thighs.
>“Don’t worry, Moon Dust, I’m right here,” he said. “You can lean back and close your eyes if you want, I’ll make sure your head stays above water and I’ll cover your ears when I do your head.”
>Your heart beat like a drum in your chest as the stream relaxing water flowed over your chest and belly.
>”I’m right here, Moon Dust. Relax.”
>You leaned your head into his forearm and your eyelids drooped.

>Please stay here… master.

>Your days at North Rig gave you memories you never wanted to relive.
>It didn’t take long before your heart ached for a master to take you away.
>But each passed you by all the same.
>You’d watch ponies of all ages, shapes and colors get adopted instead of you.
>More than anything, you wished for a master’s soft leather collar to replace the cold metal one you had.
>A master who bought you might take pride in you.
>You’d mean something to someone, even if you were a slave.
>Even if he didn’t, any place would be better than North Rig.
>After so many times being passed up, you realized something though.
>Nobody wanted you.

>Until Anon.
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>>27684546
>You let out a squeak as the shower head passed across one side of your face to the other.
>Anon cupped around your ears to shield them from the flow and gently stroked the suds out with his hand in instead.
>You let out a yawn and found your head leaning up against his arm for support.
>The water’s mild embrace encased you like a blanket and you started to drift.

>Anon wanted you.
>Your heart sped up and a nervous feeling resettled in your gut.
>He’d never actually own you in the end… that sort of thing just wasn’t something ponies like you got to have.
>But still… to just know someone had thought to have you by their side…
>It felt good.
>It was so simple, but you could never return what he had given you.
>For the first time in forever—

>you felt loved.

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>>27684565
I'll leave it at that for the night. Fingers crossed for thread survival. If it dies though, I'll repost.

Comment/Critique appreciated as always.

PS: check out this super cool fanmade model
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Remember the story where a group of young humans were team with ex-slaves ponies and worked together looking and releasing others ponies of their human masters while they made follies, driving a truck and ate pancakes?
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>>27684513
oh yes
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>>27684587
This?

http://pastebin.com/t0b0q4LS
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>>27683492
>Derpy belongs to comfy anon, she's the one that tripped and hurt her leg while pulling her master's cart.
>INB4 Vinyl is the second nontalking mare
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>>27684513
Oh boy, jealous Redheart.
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>>27684565
Aww, she's such a sweet little mare too.
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>>27684565
Another fantastic update.

Not looking forward to how this is going to end for her though.
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>>27684763
>derphorse and wubhorse are anon's faithful mareslave team
You could do much worse in terms of cute poners.
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>>27683857
Any bets in how much will last this thread? Will it hit bump limit or not?
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>>27685482
It's been a while. I have faith. If not, I don't mind. I've come to really get used to the other name.
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>>27684565
Sweet and smooth great work Ephemeral

>>27684685
>This?

Yeah, good old times

Remember too the historie of blind Anon and Tortured Fluttershy?
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>>27685539
>white knight squad
>seeing eye pony
>skittles
>and many more

they are all dead, DEAD
why are you doing this?
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>>27685647

Well, one can always keep up with the stories, though not the original author, one must keep the storyline and not denigrate the text with unpleasant thoughts
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>>27684583
Speaking of custom figs...

She's been primed now. Will be done by Friday, assuming I can figure out how to paint such a delicate cutie mark. Or maybe I'll go without, like she did or most of the story.
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>>27661546
>you wake up the next morning brushing a bundle of vibrantly colored hairs out of your face
"pfft"
>you tilt your head slightly and...
>yep, that's a mare butt sharing your pillow
>and hooves on your belly and chest and legs
>your little mares had kicked the blankets off of you in the night as the three of you tossed and turned, trying to shift into more comfy positions on the couch, which barely had enough room for the three of you
>but their combined body heat on top of you meant you never missed the blankets as you snoozed soundly
>careful not to hurt her bandaged leg, you pick her up and turn her around so that her head is on the pillow next to yours instead of her rump, kissing her cheek as she sleepily nestles her head into the pillow next to yours, her forehead against your ear and muzzle against your cheek, blowing slow and steady warm breaths onto it through her nostrils
>and you pull the other one up further onto your chest so that your chin is resting on top of her head, squinting and sighing as dawn starts to break through the window
"We gotta get up soon, girls."
>they both whine and whimper in unison in response to your words, snuggling closer to you, causing you to chuckle softly under your breath
>because of your hectic schedule they don't always get to sleep with master, so when they do you almost have to pry them off with a crowbar in the morning
>silly spoiled mares
"On second thought, maybe I'll take today off work," you say to them softly, eliciting a cacophony of contented and excited nickers and tail swishes as they wriggle around happily on top of you, feeling little warm wet tongues against your cheek and chin, making you squirm and laugh loudly as you try in vain to tilt your head away from them
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>>27685894
>wake up with mare butt on your pillow staring you in the face
>turn pony around instead of burying your face under her tail and enjoying an early morning snack
why would you do this?
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>>27685912
comfy mareslave duo is for snuggles and cuteness, not for sexual
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>>27685929
Well, at some point his mares are gonna have needs that need to be filled. He can either help them through it or buy them a couple dildos.
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>>27685973
>implying they weren't spayed to keep them from going into heat
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>>27685989
>not wanting to punish your slaves with orgasm denial
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>>27685647
Tell me you're having those feels.
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>>27686015
You cant hide from 4chanx my tetris piece looking head friend.
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>>27686012
>implying snuggle-denial isn't a form of torture to them and the thought of it isn't more than sufficient to make sure they always obey their master
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>>27686028
I know. I use it too. Just forgot late to take away the tripcode
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>>27685894
>"We gotta get up soon, girls."
>>they both whine and whimper in unison in response to your words, snuggling closer to you, causing you to chuckle softly under your breath
>>because of your hectic schedule they don't always get to sleep with master, so when they do you almost have to pry them off with a crowbar in the morning
This is stupid adorable.
>tfw no affectionate mares
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>>27686056
Did you draw this, anon? You should draw more if so.
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>>27686056
>>27686056
Now this is awesome, great draw anon
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>>27686056
fukken saved
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>>27686056
fantastic drawing.
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>>27686056
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>>27686056
whenever comfyanon pops in with a post you should illustrate it like this
muh heart
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>>27686056
i...is this what heaven looks like?
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>>27686206
It is, Anon. It is.
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>>27686224
If your mares aren't nearly smothering you to death they're not snuggling you hard enough.
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>>27686056
c...can you draw them happily pulling their master's cart?
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>>27686274
seconding this request if you're here, drawfriend
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>>27684565
your story would be so much better without the edge and tryhard forced feels
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>>27686664
this anon is faget. keep up the good work writefriend
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>>27672210

>As you were walking down the street, the end of the leash in Jenny's hand, you couldn't help but notice the stares from other people who were out today.
>Most of them tried to pretend that they weren't staring, but you caught enough of them suddenly looking away when you look in their direction to no fall for it.
>But the walking was doing you wonders.
>It was summer, the sun shining, warming your back, the birds chirping happily.
>It was perfect.

>That is, as perfect as the situation could permit.

>Along with the sunshine there was a pleasant sweet spicy smell in the air.
>Probably some kind of flower.
>Humans were like earth ponies, planting flower plants and bushes everywhere they could fit them.
>The colors and smells they put off helped to calm your mind and just drift away as you walked.

>You could see the park getting closer.
>Paths flow in irregular organic shapes around a duck pond.
>Large shade trees.
>Off in to the side, our of the way is a large mishmash of brightly painted colored pipes and platforms bolted together in a mad disorganized chaos.
>Other children playing on the equipment as mothers sit on the near by benches.

>Jenny unclicks the leash and stuffs it in her pocket before running to play.

>"So, what should we do first? Tag, slides, or just climb?"

"I think I'd like to just climb."

>It was an impressive jungle-gym.
>Three stories tall, and an absolute maze to climb to the top.
>Several slides swoop and twist through other parts of the metal monstrosity on their way to the ground level.

>As you're following Jenny to the top, you can't help but feel a little vertigo from up here.
>You can see the whole park, and all the people enjoying this hot summer day.
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>>27688290
dontfalldowndontfalldowndontfalldown
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>>27686655
Broke it.

>>27686664
It wouldn't be the same story at that point. Anyhow, everyone's tolerances are different for what they consider edgy and forced.
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>>27688582
Not saying it's a bad story. Bad things can happen in a good story. It's a common problem really, a story with darker elements not being able to walk the fine line between just "bad things happening" and "unrealistic bad things happening for stupid reasons" very well. The former can make for captivating stories, the latter is edge. Just my two cents, I'll keep reading regardless.
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>>27688582
Teach him a lesson. Kill Moon Dust.
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>>27688644
You can already tell she's going to die. It's not very subtle.
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>>27688628
Hmm. Are all the dark moments coming off unrealistic to you or specific ones for specific reasons?

Are there other writefags that handle this issue better for an example?

>>27688644
Haha, that'd just prove him right and make me vindictive.
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>>27688648
Mercy kill in the tub? Anon let's her fall asleep on his arms and then drowns her?
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>>27685894
>loving
>using bits
I want to drown you, I want to drown you like a sack of dumb puppies.
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>>27688654
I'm on mobile right now but I can offer a more detailed explanation/critique when I get home later this evening if you'd like.
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>>27688672
>implying they're not rubber-coated apple-flavored bits that his little mares love
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>>27688644
no please
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>>27688695
that rubber would have to be the kind you get in a gumball shaped toy dispenser to not harm a ponies very sensitive gums.

the bright side i guess for people who are into that kind of thing is booping and kissing really would be very sensitive feelings.
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>>27688689
It would help a lot. I'd appreciate it. I'm not really out to write a novel quality green of course, and a lot of what I write can definitely be lacking for sake of pacing, but an opportunity to improve is rare. I do want this story to handle subtly better and keep "edge" to a minimum. Dark moments should be believable.
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>>27688721
>a reasonable response from a writefag welcoming critique instead of "REE LOL FUCK YOU"

Are we on 4chan anymore?
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>>27688707
>you will never stick your little mare's sloppy saliva-covered bit in your mouth and suck on it after a long, hard, hours-long drive through the park
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>>27688810
u...unf
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>>27688733
Most of our writefags have been pretty reasonable about criticism.
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>>27688853
because most of us are shit and we know it :^)
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>>27686224
Enought!!!!!!!!!!! This is much for my heart!!!!!!
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>>27685894
Do we have a bin for this one?
If so plz link.
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>>27685894
I. Need. Them. To. Speak. A. Few. Sentences.
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>>27689777
Good little mare slaves are seen, not heard.
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>>27689812
but my trips demand at least a "good morning"
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>>27689426
I made one in the meantime.
http://pastebin.com/GpJ5x1Qf

Hopefully I can get a proper bin and title from the writer at some point.
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>>27689777
>>27689829
This.
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>>27685989
>implying anyone in their right mind would ever buy a spayed pony.
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>>27689932
but anon, if you could buy a pony would you care if its spayed or not?
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>>27689946
Probably, yes. Even if I had no sexual interest in the pony I don't support the idea of "fixing" things that aren't broken just because its convenient to someone else.
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>>27688721
Not that anon, but most of your characters come off as pretty decent and act rationally. When they do ad things, there's a reason behind it. Not necessarily for objectively good reasons, but something that makes sense to them.

Your biggest issue is the entire situation as a whole - rationalizing under what conditions this kind of blatantly sexual exploitation becomes acceptable on a wide scale. There were explanations and references in the begining, but even under those conditions this kind of relentless misery becomes questionable.

That said, I think that's an inherent risk of this thread and an issue in almost any story here.
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>>27689966
tell them to my fucking cats
they have 2-3 litter every year
once there was 20+ cats around the house...
the fuckers learned to hide the kittens from me
there are like 100+ death cats buried in my garden
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>>27690001
*tell that
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>>27689946
>Buy gelded Shining Armor
>Previous owner cut him in hopes of curtailing his rage and violence towards humans
>Just succeeded in turning him into a hateful and depressed pony.
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>>27690033
>tfw you will never rehabilitate broken and angry Shiny gelding with multiple hours of daily cuddle therapy
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>>27690033
Well yeah, that shit would just make me more vicious and murderous as well.
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>>27690033
but anon imagine the following:
you can tell him lies about reattaching his balls because we are so advanced
but only if he behaves
also he can fuck any mare and not get her prego
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>>27690104
you know what pisses me off
thats theres so much gelding art and yet so little spaying art
or even just female circumcision

im severely disappointed in this fandom
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>>27690104
I kinda wanna write green about taming Shiny now.
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>>27690164
>Shiny is big enough to ride
>Anon buys him and breaks him to accept a saddle and rider and submit to the bit
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>>27690001
Then you clearly shouldn't have any cats.
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>>27690181
I'd love to see a good stallion-riding fic. We don't get enough slave riding around here.
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>>27689999
I don't normally point this out but... nice quads.

>Your biggest issue is the entire situation as a whole - rationalizing under what conditions this kind of blatantly sexual exploitation becomes acceptable on a wide scale.

I agree completely with this. A big part of how I choose to write Trainer had to do with the natural canon our thread ended up leaning on. Basically, the story naturally relies on readers having some concept of what the other stories have established, and I aimed to save time by not having to do exposition on that and get more into what I thought was worthwhile.

I think it's become something that sticks out really harshly at this point though, because every other plot element appears to have at least some reasoning to it. It's still really hard to understand how our society could possibly change into the one that's hinted at in Trainer, yet things from how the rig is run to their collars, to pay cards are all talked about.

I don't really have an answer to this. All of our stories besides a small handful come with the predicate of accepting slavery as now being part of our society, and since Trainer is written to fit into the pre-existing canon, it runs into the usual issues. Trainer also has the unfortunate circumstance that it also features the darker side of this fictional industry, so it's literally taking on all the hardest to believe parts. Something like Blind Anon didn't hit up any of those dark spots while still being relatively somber in tone, for example, and so I think it was easier to accept the same themes.

I don't think I can ever perfectly justify it all, but I think it is possible to make it easier to believe in. I'll have to try and sit down to figure out a scene to help this issue, but I have no clue what I can do about it.

Thanks for the feedback, anon.
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>>27690183
But anon do you know what it feels like to snuggle with 3-4 cats at night?
Also, if I spay (all of) them I would kill the genetic line.
The "current" generation is the 5th with my family. All the cats are older than 5 years.
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>>27690215
Verifying trip
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>>27690222
I verified that trip.
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>>27690212
Have we really never had a story with pony rides - in a thread about pony slavery?
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>>27690219
Yes I do, annoying fuckers clawing around on your belly and also laying right on top of your face trying to kill you in your sleep. I also know what it feels like so snuggle with 3 big German shepherds, and that feel is much better.
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>>27690123
I understand you compleatly.
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soooo
derp horse or celestia story when?
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Continuing from pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/fM7D9wgK

>she comes closer
>“I was wondering...Maybe if you had a spare jacket or something like yesterday? Winters in your world are a lot colder than equestrian ones.“
>you hand her one, along with a scarf, without saying anything
>when she's putting it on, you add:
„That's pretty much all human clothing a pony can fit in as well. Your head and ass is too big.“
>“Hey!“
„Don't act like it's not true.“
>“I'm not fat!“
„I didn't say that. I said it's too big for human clothing.“
>“...right. It's just the way you said it.“
„Come on, I'm just playing with you.“ you chuckle
>she gives you this half smile, half angry expression as if she wasn't sure which one to pick and it makes you chuckle even more
>when you finally open the door, you feel that it's not as cold as it was yesterday
>mostly because it isn't late night, obviously
>there isn't a lot of people in your part of city most of the time, especialy early morning, so you're not worrying about being suspicious or something
>you can just say you bought her cheaply if someone asks
>walking silently down the street, you're slowly making your way trough the city
>“Where are we going?“
„I don't know. Just walking.“
>“Well, you gotta have some sort of direction or plan, no?“
„We are walking a circle which takes us back to my house, but from other direction. Happy?“
>“I guess. Is it long?“
„Why? About normal.“
>“I don't know what normal means, according to you. I like long walks. Especialy when I don't have to worry about being catched, for now. This place sucks though. Are all human cities like this?“
„Maybe even worse.“
>“Phew. Where's the nature?“
„Far away.“
>“I see that.“
„Then why are you asking?“
>“I was asking just rhetorically. Not expecting the answer.“
„Well, there you have it.“
>for few minutes, there's silence
>but only few
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>>27690884

>“How can you live like that?“ she breaks it
„With very, very miserable mood. Everyday...You talk a lot.“
>“Well excuse me. Imagine you have no one to talk to for a whole year.“
„...I don't really talk a lot even without being held, so i can imagine.“
>“You need some help in your life Anon.“
„And you're the one to provide it?“ you snicker
>“No, just a little inspiration. I'll be gone soon.“
„Yeah, and what'll you do?“
>“Run somewhere far away from your civilization. It's insane here.“
„Good luck with that. I wish I'd do the same one day, but i'm not feeling suicidal enough.“
>“You're saying you can't live without it?“
„We're all dependant on society. Even if we hate it. I need food and electricity.“
>“Bah. There's always a way.“
„But not always an easy one.“
>“Then stop being lazy.“
„Hell, this whole conversation. What are you, a motivational speaker?“
>“No...Not really. Never been good at motivation.“
„I can see that because it's not working. You got pretty different from that sad, broken soul you were yesterday.“
>“Can't stay always miserable.“
„You were a lot more pleasant that way.“
>“….You really mean it like that?“ she says a more quiet, sadder way
>is she trying you or did it really just hit her like that?
>oh man it's painful to look at that sad face of hers, no matter which option
„...Nah, sorry I overdid it.“
>“It's alright...“
>funny, you still can't tell what she's like deep inside
>or what exactly she feels
>but for some reason she looks like she craves/hates your attention
>seems pretty damaged
>and you're not a good fixer, so she should probably find someone else
>but somehow you doubt there would be anyone else willing
>hell, even you never said that you ARE
>this just is where your sense of justice got you
>and you have to deal with it


>>27685848
>>27685857
Man, didn't think you were serious, that looks pretty good.
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>>27690924
If I lived within walking distance to the guy whose ass i kicked and stole a pony from i would be more worried about going out with her.

Then again ponies may be cheaper there and he may just not give a shit about a pain in the dick slave.
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>>27690860
I remember a story where a kid-anon gets Derpy as a present, she destroys his room and some toys trying to fly but it was too short

there is another with anon in a room and a screen but I didnt read that one, does anyone have the pastebin?
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>>27690181
>>27690212
Captain Anon had that. It's a shame that it was never finished.
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Let's try and make a slavepone green one. Jokes allowed.

>"I'm sorry, I'm so sorry!"
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>>27692985
>"It's okay, anon, I know you didn't mean to kill that slave. I understand that it was an accident."
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continuing from pastebin: http://pastebin.com/c348Pg2X

Where we left off:
>Lauren is being seen by Dr. Alda for the injuries caused by Apple Bloom kicking her off of the bed.
>Nurse Redheart has been asked to let Hematite Pie and Mica Pie watch her treat Derpy, who flew into a wall. Hematite wants to learn how to properly care for other ponies, not just herself.
>Our anonymous farmer, after who knows how many bowls of mac n’ cheese and several movies, has begun to open up to Moondancer and is in the middle of a serious conversation that has drifted from Maud and Apple Bloom to how ponies would have kicked the humans’ asses if love and friendship actually meant shit in Equestria.
>Diamond Tiara finished her shower and was preparing to sell herself again. Probably to someone who wouldn’t be nice.
>Silver Spoon comforted Cheerilee, even as the older mare tried to do the very same for her.
>Apple Bloom revealed to Scootaloo that she might be pregnant, who then dashed off to get a pregnancy test for her friend.

ANON
>Be amused.
>What Moondancer said doesn’t bother you, but she has her forehooves clasped over her mouth like it’s somehow not too late to the keep the words in.
“Yeah, I guess you’re right.”
>You shrug and lean back in your chair.
“If love and friendship meant shit, you ponies probably would have kicked our asses. But they don’t, so…”
>”Heh, yeah… they don’t.”
>She looks at you askance, clearly trying to read you.
>For the first time since you had met the unicorn, she looks scared.
“I’m guessing others have taken offense?”
>”Y-yeah.”
“My uncle?”
>”No, before him.”
“One of these days, you’re going to have to tell me about that.”
>”Yeah,” Moondancer chuckles, not meeting your eyes. “One of these days…”
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>>27693306
“I’m serious. You’ve been letting little things drop all evening. I don’t know if you were doing it intentionally or not, but it sounds like there’s some stuff there I should know.”
>”Nothing important. Really.”
“You know Twilight Sparkle.”
>Moondancer flinches.
>”Kind of…”
“And that thing about the scientist you worked with? I let it slide, because…”
>… because you just wanted to relax and pretend there weren’t any problems.
>”Yeah –“
>You lean forward suddenly, resting your elbows on your legs and startling the mare into silence.
“You tell me to open up to you, but then you hide things from me. How am I supposed to trust you?”

REDHEART
>Be annoyed.
“Well Derpy, if you weren’t flying around all the time, this wouldn’t have happened and you wouldn’t have to complain about the cream.”
>”I’m not complaining.”
“Sure sounded like –“
>”Wait, you can fly?” the little filly cuts in. She’s dropped the ointment back on the tray and is staring at Derpy in awe, like she’s never seen a pegasus fly in her life.
>Because *of course* she hasn’t. She’s too young to remember Equestria.
>”Yeah!” Dirpy chirps, smiling like an idiot. “All pegasus ponies can fly if they don’t take their pills!”
“Which you *really* should start doing before someone catches you or you push yourself too far and – wait, is that what happened?”
>The mare shrugs innocently.
>”You don’t take your pills…?” the filly asks, tilting her head to the side. “Oh, you don’t take your pills!”
“That’s what we just –“
>”That’s why you remind me of Silver Spoon and Auntie Maud! And… and you too, Nurse Redheart!”
“What?”
>”Can’t you feel it?” she shouts, bouncing up and down excitedly like her brother had been moments earlier. “Why can’t you feel it?”
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This only got deleted during the modtard fest a few months ago. The fact that we stayed on high alert after it obviously ended was fucking pathetic.

This is officially the first SPG-related thread in months and you can't change my mind.
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>>27693314
“Feel what?”

ANON
>Be patient.
>Moondancer stares at the floor for long seconds.
>”I guess you really don’t need that,” she answers slowly.
“No. Not really. Not after Apple Bloom lying to me and Maud going behind my back like she did. At this point, my tolerance for this kind of shit is starting to run pretty thin.”
“If you were dropping those hints intentionally, that’s a pretty dick move, Moondancer. Pretty much guaranteed that I could never really trust you.”
>”No,” she responds, shaking her head. “I was just…”
>She sighs and raises her gaze to meet yours with timidity you never would have expected from this pony.
>”I was just comfortable and let things slip.”
>Her eyes drop to the empty bowls sitting between you.
>”I just wasn’t watching myself as closely as usual. You’re not the only one that hasn’t gotten to relax in forever.”
“Sorry, I know I work you all hard, but –“
>”No, it’s not that. It’s… the other ponies, too. It’s not exactly a secret, but nopony really trusts me. Most tolerate me. Some are even my friends, but I don’t want to risk reminded them of what I’ve done.”
>Her chest heaves as she lets out another sigh.
>You wait patiently, recognizing the signs of someone struggling to find the right words and their courage.
>”The pills that everypony takes.”
“Yeah?”
>”I helped develop them.”
>You can’t believe your ears.
>”They weren’t... meant for… *this*,” Moondancer says quietly. “It was meant to *help* us.”
“Help you do what?”
>Your own voice is barely a whisper.
>”It… lets us…”
>The mare trails off into silence, staring at the far wall for a moment before flashing you an embarrassed grin.
>”Sorry, it’s technical. I’m trying to think of a way to describe it.”
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>>27693326
“You don’t have to. It doesn’t matter anyway.”
>”No, I do,” Moondancer murmurs. “I want you to trust me. And…”
“And?”
>”I need to tell someone, if you don’t mind. It’s been three years and… and I’m beginning to see why Apple Bloom spent so much time with you. You’re not one of *us*. We can talk to you without… well, not without being judged, but there’s an element of that.”
“Oh.”
>Moondancer sighs before continuing.
>”Basically, they were to help us acclimate to a magically dead world. This place… it feels… *weird*.”
>She shudders with the last word.
>”Imagine your whole life you heard a song playing. Your entire life is set to an orchestral score. You don’t even know it’s there, because it’s just how the world is supposed to be. And then one day… it just *stops*. That’s what it’s like, coming to this world.
>”A part of us that had always been there is suddenly gone. The orchestra stops playing. It’s disorienting and some ponies never get used to it.”
“I’m failing to see –“
>”The pills block that sensation. It’s not too dissimilar to an antidepressant in that in blocks chemicals in the brain. Basically, when we’re on the medication, we can’t feel magic at all.”
“But isn’t that the same thing?”
>”Not quite,” Moondancer sighs. “We all have our own magic in us. When I first crossed over, the orchestra stopped, but… I hope this makes sense… *I* didn’t. Instead of a full orchestra, it was as if I was playing alone. That sudden feeling of loss and aloneness practically sent me running back through the portal.
>”Twilight had warned me about it, but even so I wasn’t prepared. Everything felt *wrong*. With the pills, I can’t feel anything at all.
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>>27693337
>”They weren’t meant to block our magic; what we’re taking these days is exponentially stronger than what we came up with four years ago. All it was supposed to do was let us live on this side without going crazy.”
>Moondancer pauses and looks up at you.
>”Of course,” she chuckles darkly, “it didn’t work right.”
“Everything still felt wrong?”
>”No, that worked perfectly. We couldn’t feel anything at all… so those using it tended to draw too deeply on their own magic. Fatally so.
>”We stopped using them after only three months, after a pegasus fell to her death because she couldn’t realize her magic had run out. It was covered up, of course, but…”
>Her eyes silently plead for you to understand.
>”I never meant for anything to happen, but because of something I worked on, a pony died. And now…”

REDHEART
>Be confused.
>You don’t feel anything, except the usual sense of dedication.
>Maybe a little irritation. The filly should be seeing to Derpy, not fantasizing about… whatever it is she’s imagining.
>”I… um… I… I…”
>The little filly looks back and forth between you and your patient.
>”I must be wrong, I guess,” she murmurs. “It’s nothing. Nevermind.”
>You sigh – intentionally and loudly.
>It’s not that you mind letting her sit in, or even teaching her, but she’s making a patient wait for no good reason.
“Then if it’s nothing, show me what you can do.”
>”Yes, miss,” she answers without hesitation.
>You watch as she begins wrapping Derpy’s foreleg. She does a good job of it, keeping the gauze nice and tight, but not so tight as to be binding.
>So far so good – and then she grabs a pair of scissors with her mouth.
“What are you doing?”
>”I… um… I’m done –“
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>>27693314
holy crap
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>>27693373
“You’ve barely covered the scrape, girl. Wrap it a few more times –“
>”But… yes, ma’am.”
>She does one more circuit with the gauze – her eyes constantly flickering between you and the steadily shrinking roll.
>Ah.
>You recognize this. Done it yourself, in darker times.
“Use the whole roll if you have to, Hematite. We have more.”
>You aren’t operating out of an unsupplied shack anymore.
>”But…”
“I’m guessing you don’t have much in the way of supplies out on the farm, do you?”
>”No, ma’am,” the filly admits, dipping her head.
“Didn’t think so.”
>Her own bandages are thin – just a single layer of gauze.
>Probably doesn’t even have any ointment, maybe never did. and that’s why she didn’t apply it. Everything else was done with care and precision; she wouldn’t have simply forgotten a step.
“Okay, that’s good. We can cut it off here. Next, we’ll take a look at that cut over her eye.”
>”Yes ma’am.”

end for tonight

>>27693375
Didn't think I'd actually post today?
>>27690924
Sorry, takes me a while to get started on a modelling project, but once I've started it usually goes pretty fast.
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>>27690924
>“Can't stay always miserable.“

Well say here "I am not Skittles"!
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>>27692167
I remember two particular stories where Pinkie was the protagonist in the first hated humans because of abuses by their former masters and when it was bought by a good Anon she just hopes to be "used" in the same way as the previous and the other was shorter, Pinkie was adopted by a noble elderly couple who treated her like his daughter until they died and she passed into the hands of their relatives, did not know what happened after more
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>>27693306
You`re back!
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>>27693337
So ponies technically these "disconnected" when leaving their world and coming to ours, and drugs exist to mitigate the anguish and mental stress generated by the loss of their connection with magic, but as against effect inhibits chemically flow natural magic that exists within themselves, so when they stop taking a drug that produces a biochemical imbalance aggression and attacks of madness is created
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>>27693395
Great work TTGAN, really need more of this historie

G'nigths
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>>27684583
I gave you a page worth of ass kissing ~4 threads ago and I meant what I said.

As for saving Moon Dust, while I agree with the Anon who said you should only save her if you originally intended to in stead of pandering, your story has so much heartache in it that it's not really within your power to ruin it by pandering.

Potential readers, this next part is spoiled for a good reason, so consider wisely: You should have Vargas reconsider letting him save her, both for good feels and reader appeasement, and to use her as a stress pivot point in Anon's life later. Maybe Vargas will use her as leverage for some good drama?
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>>27693395
>Didn't think I'd actually post today?

I have a bad memory
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bedbmp
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Its a bit late but heres my collection of over 100 of my favorite pics of Celly

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B38wGJfyeGsheDFqUVpEZHBtZG8
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>>27694893
shit wrong thread :|
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>>27694899
hue
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How many of you are still following?
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>>27695169
You got more?
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>>27695169
Will read when it's finished. Unless it's sad. Then you've lost me.
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>>27695191
The only way to find out is if you read it.

>>27695173
Well, eventually.
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>>27695199
>The only way to find out is if you read it.
Or the people screaming for your head on a platter.
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>>27695169
I am.
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>>27695169
I have catching up to do but I've been reading it.
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>>27695169
1 here
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>>27695169
It's on my list. I'd like to catch up once I've finished catching up with my other greens. (should be able to start today.)
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>>27695169
I am.
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>>27695169
Reporting in.
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>>27695169
Following. Don't you dare quit on us
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>>27695169
Loving it so far
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>>27695169
Silver Spoon need that his story be told
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>Be Garret Rickett
>You were a scientist which was gonna make a test on a pony.
>Her name was Cadence.
>You've made this science project called 'Project Green Azure'
>However, it's top secret, tho.
>You started this 3 weeks ago. And it
was about a month since other scientists made this alternate dimension.
>Perky little bastards enslaving ponies.
>That was easy to expect from humanity, since it always enslaves any non human species.
>And you got this one in sale.
>A bit expensive, but it was at your reach.
>And you were gonna test this liquid on her.
>"Armando?"
>"Estoy listo!"
>I have this latin buddy, Armando Latorre. I don't understand a fuck what he says, Still a pretty good guy tho.
>"Dale! Encajale el suero que no la aguanto mas!"
>"Ok dude, I'll whatever-you-just-said."
And you can feel the needle crushing through every barrier Cadence had on her skin.
>Sorry my sweet dear, but it's for the science.
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>>27697972

>She went insane.
>I managed to tranquilize her and check results.
>Seems it worked.
>But it's not what you wanted.
>It overworked.
>Because of the overdosis.
>Looks like it's pretty powerful, tho.
>You can't have her this way.
>You need to hand her to the pony store.
>They will know what to do about it.
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>>27697984
>be Anon
>You wanted to have a pet since you were a kid.
>But nothing called your attention.
>Nothing but ponies.
>Those plushie toys... They're so sweet.
>You're at the pony store.
>On the stand there were 5 colorful ponies.
>They were sad.
>What actually happened? You don't know.
>You get in. Some random colorful ponies were there.
>But there was a really pretty one.
>It was the cheapest.
>She had both wings and a horn.
>She was pink with a purple, lavender and white mane.
>She had a print of a crystal heart. With some cute decor.
>That was what you wanted.
>She was murmuring rsndom shit you couln't hear because reasons.
>"Hey! I'll have this one."
>A shopkeeper came to aid you in that.
>"Ok, but be careful. Are your ears ready?"
>"My what?"
>He then opened the door to hear her first words.
>"Hey faggot! I know you came here for the plot. Don't make me go feels on you! What are you? Drawfag? Writefag? *Shitfag?* Anyways, I'm Cadence! *tripcode RRoy415uN.8u*
>The fuck?
>So she looks like the prettiest thing. But it came straight from /b/.
>I can live with that.
>"I'll take her!"
>Now you're heading to the cashier to pay for her.
>She was cheap.
>And insane.
>But at least you're not alone anymore.
>You like her sense of faggotry she has.
>She couldn't stop talking for the whole ride.
>"Are you an oldfag? I can see that from your belly, isn't it, OP? You should try shitposting, It's always hilarious. But it gets 404'd in a couple of minutes, Hours, if good shit is good. Wait, are you asian m00t? Please notice meeeeeee... I want to be admin, Can I be one? Please. Yes? You look like it's a no. Fine, I'll shitpost feels and frogs. You broke my heart, m8. You made me 200.0% mad!"
>She makes a warface.
>"Finally Cadence. We're home!"
>"Is anyone there? Yes? AND HIS NAME IS JOHN CENAAAAA"
>She began to whistle John Cena's song.
>She's just Hilarious.
>Hilarious.
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>>27697995
>"Ok, Cadence, you can settle in now."
>You take her leash out.
>"Thanks m00t, This is when the white-knight fags are just right."
>She then makes Pacha's gestures and face expressions.
>She's cute at it.
>We'll have to eat something. Somehow.
>"Well, Cadence, what do you want to eat?"
>"Is it Tuesday, Moot?"
>Moot? Isnt he the... Aaaaa!
>Atleast she thinks you're superior.
>"Yes, why?"
>"THEN IT'S TACO TUESDAAAAAY!!!"
>She then pops out a mexican hat from nowhere.
>She even got het magic suppressant pills? Even more because of her insanity.
>Well, atleast she limited herself to do meme-related stuff.
>Hope it doesn't get to the /pol/ point.
>That would screw up things easily.
>"Well, then Tacos it is! I'll get the phone."
>She began to move her left hoof in circles and sing.
>"You used to call me on my cellphone, late night..."
>While she keeps singing that song you recognize but you don't know, you begin to dial the phone number of Taco Bell's delivery.
>"Hey! It's Taco Bell. How can I help you?"
>"I would like to order 4 tacos, 2 of them extra spicy, please."
>"Well. where do you want it?"
>"Golden Freddy Ave. 420."
>"Ok, be there in half an hour. Thanks!"
>"To you!"
>You put the phone back just to find that Cadence is not singing anymore.
>You hear gibberish hums from your bedroom.
>Maybe she's ther-
>NO MY PORN!
>CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP!
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>>27698008
>You run as fast as you can to your bedroom.
>Only to see that Cadence was between two piles of books, and actually reading one.
>But not any book...
>Your Ultimate Porn Collection.
>She then notices your presence.
>Oh shit here it comes.
>"I think I was right about the plot thing, Moot. I thought you were asleep with the mods so I started reading '>rape' stuff. Is that bothering you?"
>You check any surroundings.
>Marecum on the floor near Cadence's plot.
>Right. Good.
>Shit. Fuck.
>She even fapped to it.
>Why...?
>She atleast would be fapping to some stallion. right?
>There were humans on every porn mag you had.
>No trace of stallions.
>Oh god...
>"Can I..."
>She then makes a gesture with a hoof and make a bulge on her cheek with her tongue.
>Ah hell no.
>Your UPC is enough.
>"No, Cadence..."
>"Pleeeeeeease? I won't shitpost anymore nor calling you a faggot. And you will be my Senpai. so pleeeeeeeeeease? No? Ok then faggot."
>She makes that face when you tries to discipline your child.
>Deep inside you...
>Very deep...
>You want that.
>You never had a blowjob since... Never.
>Maybe you should... NO.
>YOU WON'T DEAL WITH /H/ CADENCE.
>Never.
>But you would like being called Sen-
>I SAID NO!
>*DING DONG* *DING DONG*
>Doorbell.
>Finally, Taco Bell came to your door.
>"Oooookaaay. Tht would be 95.36."
>You hand him the money.
>"Thanks!"
>"To you."
>The delivery guy then leaves and you close the door.
>"Cadeeeeeeence. Stop the '>rape' thing and come here. There are tacoooooooos."
>She then imitates a TF2 guy voice.
>"TACTICAL NUKE, INCOMING!"
>And then she races to the kitchen where you had the tacos.
>She stared at them...
>And stared...
>"Ok Cadence. These are yours..."
>You hand the non extraspicy tacos to her.
>"And these are mine."
>Before you get your first chew, Cadence shouts.
>"ITADAKIMAAAAAASU."
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>>27698008
>Not only from /h/, /b/, and maybe /s4s/, but /a/.
>And you begin chewing the taco you had on your hand.
>"Well, you already told me your name, but you don't know mine. right?"
>"I never knew your name..."
>She makes a feels guy face.
>"Ok, My name's Anon Y. Mousse."
>"Oh, Nice name. It reminds me of a hacker group somehow."
>Yes, people always do.

and that's all
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>>27698016
>tf2 guy voice
that subtle bait/10
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>>27695169
Here! Love the story please keep it going!
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>>27697956
Name of the artist?
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>>27697995
I had already read this story
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>>27697972
>>27697984
>>27697995
>>27698008
>>27698016
>>27698027

How much proof do you want to ensure this as mine? This deutschebag is another anon. Now you can bring the hate and the filters
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Hurrah for positive reenforcement!
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>>27698532
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>>27698532
I agree
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>>27698532
yeah we know, not sure why someone reposted it but whatever.
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>>27695201
this. I'll keep reading spoons but there are plenty of ways to know if something awful is happening without reading anything. I love intense domination but even I had to call it quits at broken blue bird.
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>>27697956
I'd love to catch that pone and ride her before she realizes that I'm taking her words quite literally.
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>>27699685
You're one of Teddy Roosevelt's rough Riders?!
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Continuing from pastebin: http://pastebin.com/amhMYf99

>One rum-induced time-lapse later, you’re watching the credits scroll past. The *final* credits, you think, but you can’t be sure.
>Kinda fell asleep at one point. Maybe.
>The two mares certainly did.
>Berry is leaning up on your left shoulder and – ew – drooling.
>Why couldn’t you have ended up with a nice pony like Fluttershy?
>She’s sleeping quietly with her head in your lap. No drooling.
>”I wanna play with those ears.”
>HOLY SHIT SHE’S AWAKE.
“What!?”
>”Those ears,” the mare mumbles, waving a hoof in roughly the right direction of the TV, “I wanna play with them.”
“Um… you have ear of your own.”
>”Yeah, but I wanna play with *those*,” she giggles. “Kitty ears are fuzzy.”
“Your ears are kinda fuzzy.”
>”They are *not*!”
“They kinda are.”
>”It’s not the same,” she huffs. “They’re fuzzier.”
“Yeah, okay, they’re fuzzier.”
>”Mhm.”
>You take your glass off her head and set it on the table.
“Up.”
>”Time to put something else in?”
“Nope. Time for bed.”
>Fluttershy lets out a tired little moan.
“Come on, up. I’ll take the couch and you can sleep in my bed, but I need you to get up so I can stretch out.”
>”Nuh-uh.”
“Fine, then get up so *I* can go sleep in my bed. You can stay up and watch more, but I have to get to bed.”
>”Nuuuuuu. Be my pillow.”
>She wiggles slightly.
>”Comfy pillow.”
“No. Up.”
“Awwww.”
>Slowly, Fluttershy shimmies aside, giving you just enough to rise.
“Berry…”
>You gently shake the other mare.
“Berrrrry…”
>You shake her a little rougher.
“BERRY!”
>You shake her like a goddamn baby seal.
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>>27700019
>>”Nuuuuuu. Be my pillow.”
[HHHHHNNNGG INTENSIFIES]
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>>27700019
>”Whaaaaaaa?”
“Go to bed.”
>”Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh.”
>Berry slumps over, a controlled tumble across the arm of the sofa.
>She’s too tired to even try to hide the bottle of rum she smuggles away.
>You’re too tired to call her out on it.
>Just have to buy some more mango tomorrow.
>”G’narght.”
>You think that was a word. Several words. Maybe just a grunt.
“See you in the morning, Berry.”
>”Yeargh. Seadin.”
“Night, Flutterbutt.”
>”Good night, comfy pillow.”

end for tonight
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>>27684087
anon.. i'm sorry but...skittlesAnon is kill
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>>27700019
I've been out of the loop for a while, did you ever finish the other story you were doing?

Also how do I get rid of this fucking 'pastebin' banner at the top of the page? It blocks out the title and other shit.
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>>27700221
Nope, not done. Just got back to working on it.

Adblocker/NoScripts maybe?
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>>27700288
I forgot that uBlock actually has the option to select scripts and pieces of sites to block. Neat.
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>>27698554
Im following you too

is there going to be anything about diamond tiara?
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especially careful bump
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>>27683857

this image is very feelsy, you can see the broken hopes and dreams in her.
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>>27697243
I haven idea for celestia but I haven't had the time to write it out.
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I want to hit Scootaloo with a baseball bat.
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mfw i cant find an excuse to use this image in this thread like i did in all the others
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>>27699729
do you not know what the words rough and rider mean?
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>>27701499
That's why you 'purchase' her and give her a reason to live and to smile again.
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>>27700075
BE THE PILLOW YOU FAGGOT!
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>>27701705
>THAT FUCKING ONE PART OF HER HAIR IN THE THIRD PANEL IS MISSING A LINE AND IT PISSES ME OFF SO MUCH
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>>27693306
thank you for the recap.
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>>27695169
+1
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>>27688290

>This is it.
>You're standing next to Jenny at the top of the big slide.

>"Don'y be such a scaredy cat, I slide down this slide all the time,"

>Jenny sits in the big plastic tube and scoots forwards.
>Suddenly she's rocketing down, you lose sight of her after only a second as she rounds the first bend.
>Okay, you can do this, it it perfectly safe.
>If foals got hurt on this slide, they probably would have torn it down.
>Gosh it's hot today.
>You're sweating up a storm.
>But because it is hot out.
>Not because you're nervous.
>And your sweat smells like spicy flowers.

>You step into the tube and sit on your rump.
>Now all you have to do is scoot forwards, just like this...
>And...
>The moment gravity gets its hold on you, your rump suddenly takes off.
>Sliding fast down the sun cooked plastic slide.
>Wow, you really are putting on some speed.
>Turns out, furred pony buns are low friction.

>And the light at the end of the tunnel is approaching at an alarming rate.

>The same could be said for the sand pit just beyond the light at the end of the tunnel.

>Sand isn't very soft at high speeds.

>Huh...

>Is this what it's like to be a pegasus?

>Rapidly approaching sand.
>Time slows down around you.
>You have time to count the grains of sand.
>To take in the surprised face of Jenny standing just a step off to the side of the slide's exit.
>Time to watch in awe as the sand slowly contours to caress the shapes of your rear hooves, then feel the sand slowly envelop your face as the world suddenly goes dark.
>To feel your spine slowly bunch up behind your mane as your muzzle breaks your fall.
>To see the world become light again as blue dotted with white blobs moves into your field of vision.
>To count the grains of sand that pepper your coat as your rump lays out atop the sand.
>To see Jenny and a few other children slowly come into view in the blue, looking down at you as you lay on your back.
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>>27702689
She's OK, right? Its just a slide after all.. Right?
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>>27700019
>>27700019
>>”Nuuuuuu. Be my pillow.”
>>She wiggles slightly.
>>”Comfy pillow.”

TTGAN, this is cruelty to humans, I'll denounce the SPCA
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>>27700075
>>”Good night, comfy pillow.”

Now Anon have one new name of this historie

Great short green
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>>27702689
Step by step Silver, step by step..
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what the bump
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Need green of Zecora
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>>27703626
nigger horse working on cotton plantation
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>>27703635
Nah, that is bad, need some better, with less ofensive shit
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>>27703647
Baught by poor dude to have sell drugs and steel things?
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>>27703649
>Baught by poor dude to have sell drugs and steel things?

It would not be bad a story where it is sold to a hippie who wants to experience psychedelic experiences with their potions
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>>27701414
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>>27704184
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>Bumps extremly careful to not scare slaves, writefags or attract unwanted attention.
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>>27703626
>"YOU SHALL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE, TIME WILL COME AND MAKE THINGS RIGHT!"
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>>27703676
>"Master, I do not wish to be crass, but your wheeled home smells like ass."
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>She's a fucking muse.
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>>27686823
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>>27705827
Peace zebra-sister, we are all animals in the jungle of love, now help me to reach the Magic of Friendship with your wonderful concoction!!
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>>27702689
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>>27705251
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need my daily fix of comfy mare slaves doing cute pony slave things
also they need names
and to talk
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>>27706968
Sorry, looks like you aren't getting for fix today.
Have a pegasus being attacked by a wild little girl
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>>27707536
not gonna lie thats pretty cute. i'd read a story of RD living as a little girls pet, trying to act too cool but actually loving the kid deep down.
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>>27707633
The story of Dash and the little boy wasn't good enough for you? There was a parade and everything!
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>>27707706
eh that was just the story of dash screwing stuff up. need some slice of life dashie with her and her little cuddle buddy who she tries to stay aloof about.
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>>27707633
>>27707751
I love stories like that, where the slave doesn't want to be a slave but theyre owned by a loli whos only innocent dream is to ride her little pony princess. If the odds are theyre never going to be free, they may as well distract themselves by raising the kid a little.


And now I'm thinking of elementary class pet Cheerilee
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>>27707536
das cute
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>>27707789
>And now I'm thinking of elementary class pet Cheerilee
that... that sounds really good... she wants to help teach but most the time ends up just being petted.
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Tales of little ponies and their little masters.
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>>27707789
>owned by a loli whos only innocent dream is to ride her little pony princess.

We have a disturbing lack of pony rides for a thread about pony slavery.
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>That feel when you have a crush on your personal babysitter who will probably never see her husband ever again.
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>>27707536
Good draw
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>>27707844
>the story about Pinkie being gifted to a lonely child by his parent will forever be ded.
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>>27707706
I didn't know we had something like that. Link?
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>>27707822
>>27707861

Enought! This is much....
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>>27707822
>>27707844
>>27707899
where are you getting these picture their great.
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>>27707907
You just wish you could had have a little pony when you where little.
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>>27707861
i'd read it.
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>>27707939
Artist is Glacierclear, and that Rainbow Dash sighing one is probably his as well.

https://derpiboo.ru/search/index?page=2&q=artist%3Aglacierclear&scope=scpecd225d74963900299cd5029c384fa2a86d553d51&utf8=%E2%9C%93
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>>27707942
Nope, only one dog, one rabbit.. and one shark
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>>27707965
>tfw glaciers quest is forever kill
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>>27707965
She's a pretty good artist, too bad she doesn't like drawing teats or horsepussy.
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>>27707980
For other side...

Damn cuties puffy ponies, damnit damnit forever!!!
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I just want to remind you never have to care for and protect Luna and when Christmas to give gifts with all your savings and your credit card to buy
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Need more histories of Trixxie
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>>27707942
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>>27707822
>>27707861
>>27707899

>you are tiny mare
>small human master has awoken you from your slumber
>he wants to play "rodeo" again
>you sigh and nod your head as he gleefully runs to fetch his "saddle"
>start taking spare pillows from the closet and tossing them about on the living room floor
>he returns and places the "saddle" on your back
>it's nothing more than a small padded blanket tied to your back with a bath robe sash
>guides you over to a chair, which he climbs up on before scrambling up onto your back
>grabs ahold of the strap holding the "saddle" on and leans back, kicking his legs up by your shoulders as his free hand flails around in the air above his head
>"hyah hyah giddyup! go bronco, go!"
>take a couple of lazy steps - away from any hard furniture
>give a few half-hearted hops into the air with your hind legs not even coming an inch off the ground
>"yeehaw!"
>"woohoo!"
>"whoaa--"
>with the third hop he finally loses his balance, slowly sliding down your side, squeezing tightly with his legs to try to stay on but unable to maintain his grip
>he lets go and falls down right onto a pillow
>you plop down onto him, laying across his chest and pinning him
>he kicks and wriggles around wildly beneath you as you nuzzle and lick his cheek, playfully trying to push your muzzle away as he giggles uncontrollably
>he finally wraps his arms around your neck and nuzzles his face into your chest
>"okay okay, you win you win!"
>you nicker softly at him with a smug look of satisfaction on your face
>"good girl," he says "now let's go again!"
>you've lost track of how many times he's made you play this game
>truth is you don't mind any more
>you love your little cowboy, and it makes you the happiest little mare alive that he has so much fun spending time with you
>just the thought that he might outgrow you and forget about you some day breaks your heart, so you make every second you get to spend with him now count, so he'll always remember you fondly
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>>27708158
>tfw "rodeo" becomes a completely different game when your master hits puberty
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>>27708184
>He carries you instead
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>>27708184
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>>27708189

>he fucks you, pounding into you mercilessly until you gush mare cum all over the living room carpet after years of pent up sexual frustration, which you have to hastily clean up before his parents get home
>he nearly passes out from how good it makes him feel
>his mom and dad wonder why the air smells kind of musky and you're breathing so heavily and panting when they walk through the door
>being a typical horny teenager with a perhaps slightly above average libido he fucks you two or three times a day for the next five years until he graduates school and gets a wife
>he takes you with him when he moves out
>you occasionally sneak into his bedroom and seduce him into a quickie for old time's sake when his wife's not around
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>>27708252
wew boy
oh man
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>>27708158
That's sweet.
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>>27708278
you need delete the image soon.
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>>27708158
comfy mareslave anon strikes again
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>>27707789
>You are Rainbow Dash.
>The awesomest pony in Equestria and slave to these stupid evil humans.
>You've just been sold like a loaf of bread to some evil asshole human.
>And you can tell he's an evil asshole because he's in his 30s, has lots of body hair, smokes, and has a goatee.
>A bucking goatee, he must be evil!
>He'll probably be doing horrible things to you, probably rapey things, but you will be strong.
>You will not submit to him!
>You've finally got out of the box you were packed into when you got sold.
>And you step out into the dank dereliction of your new dark overlord's well lit living room decked out in party decorations.
>Wait, what?
>Before you can even figure out what the hay is going on, a voice cuts in.
>"Is that a pony?"
>Okay, why does your evil hairy monkey master sound like a little filly getting a birthday surprise?
>You look at the source of the voice, and it is a...
>...a human filly?
>Why would such an obviously evil man have a human filly in his house?
>Oh dear Celestia, she's his underage sex slave, isn't she!
>That sick fuck!
>"Yes, and she's all yours, sweetie."
>Wait-
>[HORRIFIC SOUNDS OF THE HAPPINESS OF A HUMAN CHILD]
>Suddenly you are hugged by the human filly.
>"You're the best dad ever!"
>Wait, your master is going to be a little kid?
>But you were promised a cruel goateed guy to be enslaved by, not a young child!
>Dammit, and even the cruel goateed guy seems to genuinely be happy at the joy his daughter is displaying.
>How the buck are you supposed to be heroic awesome free-willed rebellious mare when you have these two to rebel against?
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>>27708252
Happy Ending

At least his wife does not care cuckolded him with another woman or from little bastards

Really you nany pony is the best pony
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>>27708294
>it's actually the same anon when he was a kid
>he grew up with one of his mare slaves
>as he gets older he starts to ride her around the neighborhood
>both because it's relaxing and to give her her exercise
>bought the second one later on after he became an adult and got a job, so she'd have a friend to keep her company while he was away at work all day
>he's too big to ride her now, so he bought a cart and started driving her
>second mare also was needed to help pull the cart as he got bigger, so as not to overburden her
>second mare was rebellious and resistant at first, until she saw how loyal and devoted to her master first mare was
>quickly learns that her new master is quite loving and gentle
>realizing just how much worse off she could be, she falls into line and becomes as loving and subservient as the first mare
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>>27708278
>This shouldn’t expand dong, but it does.
What is wrong with me?
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>>27708347
Damn, that's some deepest lore right there.
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>>27708352
the picture or the text describing the scenario it was in reply to?
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>>27708357
The pic.
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Then there was that one story idea where young pony was bought for anons little sister. and as they grew up the sister went though one of those phases and became abusive to the pony. The pony ended up growing close to anon.

Anyone remember the original prompt?
I think we got a few posts of a story attempt but it died.
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>>27708158
>>27708347
does comfyanon sexual his mare slaves or is their relationship strictly platonic?
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>>27708443
>mare1 develops a friendly rivalry with mare2 when it comes to pleasing master in bed
>a sort of sexual arms race ensues, each trying to one-up the other in a never-ending contest to see who can give master the best orgasm
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>>27708443
>>27708453
Stop it. comfyanon mareslaves are too pure and innocent. they are for comfy cozy loving cuddles only, not for sexual.
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>>27708412
Yeah,
It is a bit depressing, brother ends up developing a codependency with poor pony and she does not want her to be hurt while it compensates for the human need to relate to others, I not remember that I remain
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>>27708252
>gets a wife
>not marrying the pony
>with the ridiculous shit that counts as "marriage" these days. Marrying a pony shouldn't not be a problem.
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>>27708453
>>27708480

It sounds like this is going to end up like School Days
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>>27708519
In the only place where their marriage would be valid it is in international waters and at Comic Con
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>>27708443
>>27708453
>>27708480
>you are mare1
>you've secretly desired your master for years
>every time he rode you when he was younger made your heart flutter and your breath catch in your throat
>it might have just been your imagination but you could also swear you remember feeling his erection press into your back every now and then when he'd ride you without a saddle
>now every time he drives you, every time he works you and reminds you you belong to him it sends shivers of lust down your spine all the way to your tail dock
>whenever he slips that bit in your mouth and snaps those reins on your hindquarters you have to hide your winking marehood by clenching your tail down nervously
>"mmff, yes master... harder..." you'd think to yourself as you drool around the bit and strain against the harness with your partner to obey your master's command
>thankfully he's never noticed, always chalking up the dampness in your tail as just being sweat from your workout
>you have to be careful not to let your mind wander too much
>if you start to fantasize about different ways you might be punished for having such inappropriate thoughts you'll start dripping
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>>27708536
>mare that actually wants to be punished and abused has the luck to get one of the few masters in the world that doesn't have it in his heart to hurt her
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>>27709202
loyal, willing, obedient mare is best type of mare

any asshole can break a slave through cruelty, it takes a special talent to earn their loyalty through kindness
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>>27708289
hahaha

no!
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>>27708252
What ever happened to the story of the Anon with Psyco parents, and the abused mare that tried to start a secret relationship after the boy gets rejected by someone at school and they try to keep it to themselves?
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>>27709305
that sounds pretty cute to be honest
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>>27709316
Not really, the Anon's sister tried to burn a cutie mark on the pony and the father strangled the Anon's pet dog in front of him. Them being together was sweet though. I don't think we got around to any smut though of them exploring each other in their room alone.
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>>27709334
Last I remember was Anon offering to take her out on a walk to have a quiet moment together.
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>>27709348
Just imagine they ran away together, anon. Ran away and lived happily ever after.
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>>27709202
I wanna ride the mare bareback. Saddles are for plebs that have no sense of balance.
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>>27709305
>>27709334
wait! what?

when did that happen?
where is that story?
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>>27709305
>>27709334
>>27709399
I need this story
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>>27709399
I cant remember it was around when Skittles Anon was around, it should be somewhere in the Story list, I think the pony was named Clare or something. I don't have the link, its been awhile.>>27709417
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>>27709426
Abandoned, right?
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I'll pull a Game of Thrones; and free Twilight Sparkle. Then nail her former 'Master's on poles under the hot sun and let them rott. Then I'd marry Twilight Sparkle, my dear blushing Bride.
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>>27709426
Also I don't think it was finished as well so keep that in mind. Writefag disappeared like Skittles.>>27709433
I don't know, maybe?
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>>27709436
CRAAAAWWWLING INNNNNN MY SKIIIIIIN
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>>27709384
Bits are a cheat too, you should never need more than a halter or some rope to control the horse.
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>>27707861
Her husband AND her baby.
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>>27709442
THESE WOOOUUUNDS THEY WIIIIILL NOT HEEAAAALL
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>>27709444
>tfw people's jaws drop when you ride your horse bareback and bridleless with total control and confidence
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>>27709463
GHOST BLOWJOBS WOO WOO WOOO!
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>>27709471
>mare gets a big boost of confidence and pride from all the amazed onlookers too
>she must look majestic as fuck
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>>27709444
Maybe slave mare has a fetish for taking the bit into her mouth when her master rides her
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>>27709492
>always likes something in her mouth when her master is around
That's pretty lewd.
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>>27709511
>"hey master~"
>"is that a carrot in your pocket or are you just happy to see me?"
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>>27709534
No, it's a carrot.
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>>27709542
Pet eponer and backpacking buddy when?
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>>27709235
>special talent.
So being manipulative rather than actually being a decent human being?

Naa. Fuck both types to death. neither deserve ponis.
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>>27709305
that's the one i brought up here >>27708412
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>>27709677
It's not being manipulative if you genuinely love your little pony slave
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>>27709693
Exactly. And only a monster wouldn't love their little pony slave.
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>>27709693
If you loved her you wouldn't treat her like a slave in the first place
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So this is the whiteknight slavery thread right?
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>>27709725
Yes. Happy comfy slaves and the masters who love them
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>>27709725
Mostly.

Yes.
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>>27709736
>>27709732
Good to know, thanks..

Is there an established 'canon' of any kind? For example I've seen 'anti-magic pills' for how unicorn magic is suppressed quite a few times, any other common themes like that?
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>>27709766
Horn circumcision where they baptize the tip of the horn with titanium nitrate, rendering the horn sterile for about a year
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>>27709542
Epone is for slave like all pones.
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>>27709862
>dat saddle
>"ride me, master!"
>"too heavy for me? Don't be silly, master!"
>"please sit on my back, master, I need you to ride me"
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>>27709905
The idea of a slave mare literally begging to be ridden makes my dick diamonds.
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>>27709917
The idea of a mare slave begging for her life makes my dick diamonds.

Oh shit sorry wrong thread :^).
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>>27709972
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>>27709917
>tfw no enthusastic slave mare to ride gaily
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>>27709766
All the headcanons are optional, though the most common starting point is buying slave pone at auction.

Though, Spoons started with a pet store instead.
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>>27705251
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>>27702689

>It all happened in a single second.
>Fwip baff biff!

>"Are you okay?"

"Ugh... my face..."

>The other kids crowding around you all have varying degrees of concern.
>Jenny helps you up as you rub your sore muzzle.

>"Come on, maybe we should go home."

"No... no, we can stay, I'm, fine."

>"Well, alright..."

>Jenny helps you over to a bench, you hop up and relax in the shade of a tree.

>"I'm gonna go play some more, call for me if you need anything."

"Uh huh."

>You gingerly touch a hoof to your muzzle as Jenny runs off.
>That spicy flower smell has slowly been getting stronger all day.
>It is a pleasant smell though.
>You absentmindedly rub your hoof across the scar on your belly.
>The fur had finally grown back in.
>Letting out a sigh, you lean back on the bench and stretch your hooves out.
>Feels good to feel the muscles stretching and tensing.
>Looking up, you can see the kids climbing all over the playground.
>Looking around, you can see several mothers watching over the playground like a hawk.
>Some of those hawk like glares are aimed at you.
>You pretend to not have noticed.
>That trick works every time.
>You tug at your collar to relieve and itch.

>One of the stern looking mothers stands up and starts walking your direction.
>You look towards the playground, looking out for Jenny.
>You can't make her out among the others.

>A woman with tired looking eyes, too much makeup, and far too much perfume has stepped up to the bench to glare down at you.

"S-sorry, can I help you?"

>"Where's your leash?"

"My leash? Jenny has it, why?"

>"Does this Jenny know it's illegal for a dangerous- " she sniffs the air "and filthy animal to be out without a leash?"

"Filthy? I took a bath this morning!"

>You try to not notice the attention your shout bought you.
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>>27710116
SAUSE?????
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>>27711196
Oh god it's one of those bitch moms.
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>>27707706
somebody remembers

>>27709542
nice
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>>27711196
wrong route filly, you do need a loose tie to the bench. jenny fucked up.
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>>27711196
donthurtherdonthurtherdonthurther
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>>27707900
>>27707706

Seconding.

Got link?
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>>27711388
http://pastebin.com/557UmQF0
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>>27711395
thanks m8
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>>27711196
>"Does this Jenny know it's illegal for a dangerous- " she sniffs the air "and filthy animal to be out without a leash?"

Oh shit...
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>>27710829
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>>27711395
I cried a little from that one.
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>>27711429
OH, GOD, BITCH MOM!
CODE RED, ASSUME DEFENSE PATTERN OMEGA!
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>>27712160
I can't tell if I'm laughing because I'm drunk, or because this is funny or because I'm happy.
Anyway thank you!
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>>27712821

Anon that is too cruel
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>>27712821
That's super fucking dumb, Anon.
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>>27713211
I don't fucking care!
Mare is for slavery!
Mare wants to be with master!
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>>27713229
It's not like they can't pretend-slavery.

What kind of backward liberation is the one that forces people to be free? You don't force slaves to leave their masters, you force their masters to let go of them.
It's like PETA killing pets because they can't release them into the wild.

And why can't her ex-master just go an visit her wherever she is?
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>>27708309
This sounds adorable.
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Getting seperated from Master...
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>>27713300
because, from what i gathered, pones have been extradited back to equestria as part of the peace agreement between the two nations/worlds. as such they can't really go back, as they are behind a gaurded border and to not send ponies with would be a breach of the peace conditions.
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>>27713768
They need a new world to live together if they want peace between the two peoples continue.

I hope not happen suicide pacts between ponies and humans that cannot accept to live without each other
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>>27705251
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>>27714647
You fucked up, now the slaves have been turned into quivering wrecks and are now hiding under various pieces of furniture, the writefags have bolted and escaped the barn, and everyone knows you did it.
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>>27715132
Don't worry. A little liquid courage and they'll get back to writing. If not, there's always the whip.
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Page 9 not fine
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>>27716259
Is that writefag going to continue his beautiful story about anon and his two lovely carriage mares?
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>>27716596
Bumping for writefag to return so he can make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside again
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>>27716259
Page 9 makes slave pones feel unloved, and they get clingy when they feel unloved.
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>>27715644
Calm the pones and catch the writefags.
Not writing is being lazy.
Lazy writefag is for whipping.
No exceptions.
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>>27700180
YOU SHUT YOUR WHORE MOUTH! THE RIDE NEVER ENDS! NEVER!
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>>27717620
I'm sorry, please, just stop whipping me. I'd rather have a pony ride me.

Just a quick one shot about an idea that was talked about a few threads back about a senile Anon fighting for pony rights long after ponies had earned them. I found the idea very Don Quixote.
It's not very good. I just needed to get the story out of my head so I could focus on the ACTUAL story I'm working on.


>It was an average day in Sugercube Corner Jr.
>The earthly branch of the Sugercube company.
>People would file in; Pinkie would take their orders and then would cook them in the kitchen.
>She was the only chef willing to actually work on Earth and stay there for long periods of time, and the Cakes wanted a pony there to make sure nothing went wrong.
>She still wrote letters back home; mostly reassuring her friends that she was perfectly fine and not writing the letter at gunpoint and that all the humans were respectful of her and treated her nicely.
>Still, as far as things went, it wasn’t that much different than it was back in Equestria.
>Sometimes, Pinkie would see a pony, but such occasions were rare and they rarely stayed long.
>Most ponies didn’t like to visit Earth.
>Pinkie couldn’t blame them.
>A lot of bad things happened to a lot of good ponies on Earth.
>She herself had just gotten lucky, but knew well the terrors her race had faced.
>Of course, that was all in the past now.
>Activists, lobbyists and one very important unicorn had made sure of that.
>Ponies had been free for years now.
>But not many ponies felt comfortable in the large, concrete cities of Earth.
>Hard to wash away all the memories, hard to ignore those who didn’t make it, hard to sleep at night, for some.
>Pinkie tried to remain optimistic though.
>A human was just another friend you hadn’t made yet.
>They knew better now.
>She just had to keep telling herself that.
>Anyway, it was an average day at Sugercube Corner Jr.
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>That is, until someone kicked the door open, storming into the building with all the speed of a man on a mission.
>He looked old, clearly bordering on an age where one should consider less running and more peaceful activities, like sitting on a chair and shouting at ‘those darn kids.’
>The long, ragged white beard probably wasn’t helping.
>He was wearing an old military vest; one Pinkie recognized as being from early in the war.
>There was an honest to God sword at his side.
>Probably Equestrian, since Pinkie had no idea if humans even made swords.
>His tired eyes scanned the building, quickly locking on to Pinkie herself.
>She flashes him an honest smile.
>”Hi! I’m Pinkie Pie! Welcome to Sugercube Corner, the best Equestrian bakery on Earth. Also the only one on Earth. We have a monopoly on it, but you still have to use real money though. I learnt that one the hard way.”
>The man points at her.
“Worry not, Pinkie! For I am here to free you from the oppression of your masters and return you safely to Equestria!”
>Pinkie processes this.
>”No silly, I’m not being oppressed. I can go to Equestria whenever I want!”
>Running over to the counter, the man slammed his hands down.
“There’s no need for such delusions now. I, Sir Anonymous, swear to protect you from any man or woman who seeks to enslave you! We shall be equal by the nights end! Now come, quickly, time is of the essence!”
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>>27717901
Late night posting is the best time to post.

>People were starting to stare. It was kind of embarrassing.
“Are you feeling okay, sir? I could sing a song to try and cheer you up, if you want.”
>Anon leapt over the counter.
“There’s no need for a reward, Pinkie. I understand you have very little to offer regardless.”
>”I make seventy thousand bits a year.”
“Hurry, we must be off before your owner’s return.”
>Pinkie let out a quiet ‘eep’ as an arm found its way around her midsection, before kicking out as she was lifted off the ground.
>She was too impressed to really say anything. Ponies were by no means light creatures, and Anon was lifting her single handedly.
>Holding her underarm, Anon vaulted the counter again.
“Your friends are waiting for you back home, let us be off.”
>Snapping out of her stupor, Pinkie cocked her head sideways.
>”My friends? Did they put you up to this? Is this just one of Rainbow’s pranks again?”
“Nay. I was being rhetorical. We are returning home. I am unsure if your friends and family are indeed waiting for you, or are similarly enslaved like yourself.”
>”Oh. You could…uh, put me down please? Pretty please?”
“It is safer in my arms, little one.”
“I’d really like to be back on the ground though. Just…just put me down? Please?”
“Never!”
>Sitting quietly as she carried across the room, Pinkie resigned herself to her fate.
>Humanity sure was weird.
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>Approaching the door, one of the patrons found the strength to stand up, blocking the exit.
>”Excuse me, sir, but you can’t just walk in here and carry the owner away, I’m still waiting for my…”
>A swift backhand knocked the man to the ground.
“Step aside, knave! This pony is not here to work for your convenience! She pines for freedom!”
>”I HAVE freedom!”
“I mean true freedom, Pinkie. Now hurry, you’re slipping.”
>Stepping over the man, Anon continued out the door.
>Staring down the street, the sun temporarily blinded Pinkie as she waited for her eyes to adjust.
>She noticed they’d started walking again.
>”Um, where are we going? I mean, I don’t mind going on adventures, especially ones that are sudden, but I have cakes in the oven that I need to take out soon and if I don’t take them out then they’ll burn and if they burn then people will be unhappy with me and I can’t have people be unhappy at me. Twilight says I’m supposed to be a ‘representation,’ whatever that is, and that means I can’t make too many mistakes.”
“To my escape vehicle. Then, onwards to Equestria!”
>“I’m not really supposed to go home so soon though. Everypony except Twilight would be happy to see me, but I really do have important responsibilities.”
“Forget about whoever owned you, from this point, you’re a free mare.”
>Turning a corner, Anon stopped suddenly to avoid slamming into another pony.
>Pinkie accidently booped her on the nose.
>She was pale yellow, with a similar pale purple mane, composed of two colours. Her cutie mark was of three flowers.
>Or was it two?
>Upon seeing Anon, she let out a sigh of relief.
>”Oh thank Celestia you’re safe, Anon. You know we need to stick together. Somepony needs to protect you.”
“Nonsense Sunshine, I protect you.”
>”Sure you do, friend. Is that a pony under your arm? Who is it this time?”
>Pinkie raised her head.
>Sunshine’s eyes lit up.
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>”Oh wow, it’s THE Pinkie Pie. Oh boy, oh boy, I’m your biggest fan! I loved all the stuff you did back in Equestria! Not here on Earth, cause, you know, the war and the slavery, but everything else you did was amazing! Can I have your autograph? Since you’ll be going back to Equestria soon anyway?”
>Pinkie wasn’t sure what to say.
>”I don’t have a pencil on me, silly.”
>”No no, it’s fine, I have one. Anon makes me write down the names of all the ponies he ‘saves’ so he can track them down later.”
>”Well, I guess I could give an autograph then. Just don’t sell it to anypony, okay?”
>Taking the pencil in her mouth, Pinkie scribbled her name on a piece of paper presented to her.
“Sunshine, where’s the escape vehicle you promised?”
>”I have hooves. I can’t drive.”
“Damn! We’ve been outwitted again.”
>Motioning Sunshine closer, Pinkie started to talk
>”What’s actually going on here? I’m not sure I follow this game very well.”
>”Trust me, it’s better to play along. At least you’ll have an excuse to skip work for a day. It’s not like he can actually send anyone back.”
>”Why is he trying to free me? I’m already free.”
>”It’s…a long story. Just humour him. Anon…Anon’s had a hard life.”
>”Why are you helping him?”
>Sunshine shrugged.
>”He offered me a family villa in Italy if I helped him. And while I don’t know what either of those are, they sound expensive. So why not?”
>Waving her hoof dismissively, Sunshine continued, “Plus I’m…kinda his state appointed caretaker. I should be fine as long as he doesn’t get hurt. Which he rarely does.”
>Pinkie had to admit, she had a valid reason, even if she still didn’t understand what was going on.
“…And that’s the plan, ladies. Just endure a moment longer, we shall soon be free.”
>”Hang on, have you been speaking this entire time?” Pinkie said
>Sunshine simply nodded.
>”Great plan, friend. I follow behind you.”
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>>27717912
“Then onwards! We have much ground to cover.”
>Before they could set off again though, the screeching of tires echoed down the streets.

>A police car had parked itself at the end of the street, and two officers started to advance towards the group.
>Anon reacted immedietly.
“Blackguards! Quick, if they find us with a stolen pony we’ll be hanged! Into the alley, now.”
>Swinging quickly, Pinkie let out a loud ‘wheeee’ as they hurried into the gap between buildings.
>The policemen obviously noticed, and hurried to pursue.
>They ran a couple of steps, before stopping.
>This alley led to a dead end; a large wall covered in graffiti and mold.
>Turning to leave, Anon found himself cut off.
“Cornered, are we? Do not worry. I have a new plan, Pinkie. Our crusade shall not end here.”
>”Hands up!” The cops shouted.
“Hands up? Why of course, villains. But you’ll never return this pony to her fate!”
>In one quick movement, Anon launched his arms upward; taking Pinkie with them.
>She soured through the air, before flying right over the wall and landing with a loud thud on the other side.
>She rubbed her butt. That was going to bruise, she just knew it.
>The police took a careful step forward.
“Your turn now, Sunshine. Get Pinkie to safety. I’ll be fine.”
>”Me? Oh no, I really don’t think…”
>Her sentence was never finished, as Anon threw her over the wall as well; coincidentally landing on top of Pinkie.
>Cracking his knuckles then wincing as Arthritis took its own bite back, Anon advanced toward the officers.
>Both of which had drawn their Tasers.
“Now then, who wants to be the first to fight Sir Anonymous? Come forward and be knocked down!”
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>>27717914

>On the other side of the wall, Sunshine helped Pinkie back to her feet.
>”Oh no, this is bad. This is really bad. I need to get back over there before Anon does something stupid.”
>”Didn’t you say that he rarely gets hurt? Nothing bad is going to happen!”
>”No no, I really must get going. You should head home as well. I’m sorry Anon caused all this trouble for you. You must be quite frazzled.”
>Pinkie shook her head.
>”Actually, I had fun. Wish it had lasted longer!”
>”Are you serious?”
>”Yea.”
>Sunshine shrugged. “Oh, it’s just that some ponies don’t take so well to being suddenly picked up and carried away. It brings back bad memories in some.”
>”No, it’s fine. It’s fine.”
>They waited a moment. Before Sunshine pulled herself up and ran down the street.
>”Right, I need to get going. Gotta save Anon again. Have a nice day Pinkie, thanks for the autograph.”
>Pinkie was going to say thanks back, but Sunshine was gone by the time she got the chance.
>The walk back to the shop was uneventful. At least compared to what had just happened.
>Pushing the door open with her head, Pinkie noticed the man Anon had attacked holding his head.
>”Oh, I am so sorry. Let me get you some ice, how rude of me. You know, I was once slapped, so I know how you feel. Ice really does help, which is surprising, because it’s just water. Really cold water, so I don’t see how…”
>The man glared at her.
>”Right, ice, sorry.”
>Retreating into the kitchen, Pinkie’s nose was hit with the unfamiliar smell of something burning.
>”Oh no, the cakes!”
>Doing her best to salvage what she could, Pinkie pulled the burning cakes out of the oven. Then she went to fetch ice for the injured man. And only when all that was done did she sit down and think about all that had happened.
>Humanity sure was weird.

>STORY ENDS NOW CAUSE I SUCK AT ENDINGS!
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>>27717916
Shit, I just realized I removed the line where Sunshine reveals Anon's sword is just foam. Now he looks crazy.
Ah well.
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damn. Gonna have to read that after i wake up. 9 am time for bed
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Whip the mares and cuddle the writefags!
Wait, no...
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>>27717920
I took it that Anon's a white knight weeb and is running around with a shitty mall katana.
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>>27717920
I was a little confused because of him being old and having Arthritis but leaping over tables and throwing pones but other than that I really liked it!
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can we get a story where anon has a harem of pet mares that he cuddles with
and the massive orgy that takes place when they're all in heat
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>>27718523
Working on it.
Not to sure about the orgy part, though.

>>27700075
>You lurch towards your room, your legs fighting with you every step of the way.
>Looks like they fell asleep before the rest of you.
>Lazy fuckers.

>It’s still dark outside when you wake.
>Which is impossible, because there is no fucking way you slept through the entire day, and nothing short of being murdered could wake you up before noon.
>Your bed shifts and creaks slightly as someone puts their weight on it.
>Someone not you.
>Shit, someone’s about to get murdered.
>Hopefully not you, but that doesn’t seem likely.
“Um…”
>"G'back t'slep," Berry drunkenly mumbles, crawling alongside you.
>Okay.
>Good.
>It's just your pony.
>Shit.
>It's your pony.
"Um... this isn't really appropriate...!"
>"Shaddap," the mare grunts, burrowing under your sheets and snuggling up against your side.
>You try to scoot away, but something has your legs pinned.
>Shit.
>Trapped.
>"Y'gawt n'right to talk 'bout 'propriate," Berry slurs as you lift yourself up to stare at the weight on your legs.
"Fuck. I guess not."
>"G'back t'sleep."
"Yeah. Okay."
>You know when you've been beat.
>With a sigh, you lower yourself back down.
"Good night, Berry."
>"G'night."
"Good night, Fluttershy."
>The mare curled up on your legs flicks her ears and lets out a tiny snore.
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>>27718876
Is it bad that I want to wait until your story is finished before I read it so I can read it all at once?
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>>27718876
>>
https://youtu.be/tf7IEVTDjng
We are one step closer to having our pony waifus being real
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Fireking when?
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Slave is not for being free.
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Is humans enslaved by ponies okay for here?
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>>27719683
sure
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>>27718876
they got work tomorrow?
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>>27717916
Good green for laugths, thanks anon, you new one new name and maybe on second chapter
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>>27719683

Depend of the pony
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>>27717916
Holy shit senile slave rescuer Anon is amazing. Keep going soon.
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>>27718882
This story doesn't have a final goal or overall story arc. I would suggest reading it as chapters are completed, since the story might not actually end.

>>27720178
Nope, they were waiting for a day off. Still probably going to go out, though. I think Anon needs to take Fluttershy on a trip to a certain store.
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>>27721052
Oh god. Not the liqueur store.
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>>27721310
>fs terned out to be the only missing element of harmony. The rest lived at the old lady's place.
Using the eoh they return all ponies to their homeland.
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>>27708158
>>27708347
hey comfy anon was this you? is this canon? it's too cute not to be
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>Page nine
Look what you've all done, now mare feels unwanted and unloved.
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bump from 9
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>>27719070
Apply taxidermy to that and BAM! waifu slavepone on the easy-go!
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>>27721415
Yes.
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>>27717916
>New headcannon.
ponies age very slowly compared to humans.
So some could have been enslaved for hundreds of human years.
This is the anon from Regards (version with the good ending) but in 70 years.
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>>27719683
now that you mentioned it, I remember a short story about Lyra getting a human and trying to set him free to earn his love but everything went kinda wrong when he escaped because anon wasnt interested in her
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>>27723124
that one was pretty good.
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>>27723124
>This image

Run anon, protected you purity!
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>>27723124
>no pony will ever tell you what your going to do on the bed.

just for you to find out it building a pillow fort or something
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>>27723714


before bed bump
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>>27722856
Dude, I was fucking tempted while writing it to make that true. In the end though, I decided against it. That Anon's earned his rest. While I could still write stories about him, all stories need to end eventually.

>>27720929
I'm not going to say you have bad taste...

Anyway, here's some more!
Because writing down the story only made it spring into my mind more.

>Sunshine wasn’t very fond of human hospitals.
>They felt so impersonal.
>Every patient shoved into a room with three to five other people, waiting and praying for a doctor to finally pay them some attention.
>And now Anon was one of those three to five people.
>”You tased an unarmed old man in an alley? What the hell is wrong with you?”
>”He was armed.”
>”With a foam sword! What’s he going to do, boop you on the nose? Are you telling me that you two were so scared of a crippled old man with arthritis that you needed to electrocute him?”
>”Hey, don’t act like he’s entirely innocent here. What about the man he attacked?”
>”Oh no, someone got hit in the face by a man barely strong enough to lift a spoon. I hope he’s alright.”
>”He’s actually quite strong.”
>”I know, I was referring to a Silver Spoon.”
>Neither of them got it.
>”Nevermind. This kind of thing would never have happened back in Equestria.”
>”Listen, I don’t need to hear this kind of thing from a pony.”
>”Hey listen, when you send someone to the hospital, I don’t give a f…flying where you hear this from. You’re an idiot.”
>”I think this was your fault, really. You should be watching him more closely, and not feeding into these delusions of his.”
>Sunshine opened her mouth to reply, before stopping.
>She knew he was right, but would never admit it.
>”Well, Anon isn’t feeling well enough to talk to any policemen, so you might as well bugger off and come back tomorrow.”
>She watched the two of them leave, before returning to her seat in the hallway.
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>>27724650

>After a time, she wasn’t sure how much, the nurse came, ushering Sunlight into the room.
>Anon, thankfully, didn’t look too injured.
>Sure, he was still hooked up to all the machines that the humans used to tell if you were still alive, but at least it didn’t look like there were any broken bones.
>Unlike the last time they’d run into trigger happy cops.
>Anon pushed himself up at the sight of Sunlight, smiling greatly.
“Sunlight! My loyal companion, tell me, is Pinkie safe? Did we break the chains of her bondage, together?”
>She waited a moment, thinking.
>”Of…of course we did. She’s running free in Equestria as we speak.”
“Haha, then it was all worth it! They may have bested me in the fight, but we have won the day!”
>”Of course we have. You’re not…hurt, are you? I’m so sorry that I wasn’t there to protect you, this is all my fault.”
“My choices are my own, Sunshine, never forget that. We are employed under a righteous cause, and any self-hurt served to further it is necessary. Besides, little one, I protect you.”
>”No, you don’t understand. You’re not…”
>Sunshine stopped herself. There was no point in explaining.
>Something tapped her on the pony equivalent of a shoulder, and she turned around.
>It was the nurse.
>To your surprise, she was a pony as well.
>In hindsight, it was obvious that ponies could be nurses, but you never actually thought one could get hired at a human hospital.
>Why would one want to?
>”Excuse me, Sunshine, can I speak to you outside for a moment?”
>She felt a ball of anxiety form in her stomach.
>Anon wasn’t…that bad, was he?”
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>>27724662

>Following the nurse, Sunshine did her best to keep a brave face.
>”He’s not dying, is he?”
>The nurse looked confused.
>”Well, I mean, we’re all dying, just not quickly. But, I mean, no. No, of course not, Anon is fine, but I just need to know…is that THE Anonymous in there?”
>Sunshine nodded.
>”Wow. I thought he’d be…grander.”
>”You should have seen him when he was younger. He was truly something to behold back then. Now he’s just…a little past his glory days.”
>”You know, I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t for him.”
>”Coming or going?”
>”Coming or going?”
>Sunshine nodded again.
>”Did he bring you here, or did he let you leave?”
>The nurse looked shocked.
>”So it’s true? Anon used to be a…slaver?”
>”He was personally pardoned of any wrongdoing by Celestia after all he’s done to make up for it, but yea. I thought this was common knowledge.”
>”Wow.”
>Sunshine didn’t know what to say.
>”It hurts me a little to see him reduced to this. A lot of ponies owe their freedom to his hard work, and this is what happens? His mind is leaving before his body, and apparently not even humans are advanced enough to stop it.”
>”Dementia.”
>”Yea. He thinks he’s still a young activist. That he needs to go out and tell people that ponies are equal and that we don’t deserve to be slaves. Sometimes he gets…a little more passionate about it than other days.”
>”You’re not worried he might think he’s a…well, you know, again?”
>”What harm can he do even if he did? He’s just an old man now. He just doesn’t realize it.”
>Sunshine gave a sad laugh.
>”Still, I can always hope he gets better, eh? He sure deserves it, after all.”
>”Right. We better both get back to our jobs. I’ll do my best to make him comfortable.”
>And with that, the nurse left.
>After a moment, Sunshine went back into Anon’s room.
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>>27724678

>She knew it would never stick, but she needed to clear her conscious.
>”Listen, Anon, there’s something you should know.”
“Whatever it is, friend, I await it eagerly.”
>”Ponies are…well, they’re kinda…already free.”
>There was a moment of silence.
“No, they’re not. We just met one. There was a slave in this very hospital!”
>”She’s working here of her own volition.”
“But what about all the ponies in the middle east, or Australia or Pinkie…”
>”The treaty was signed years ago. You just…can’t remember it sometimes. You’re not as young as you used to be and your mind…”
>There was another moment of silence.
“Are you telling the truth, friend?”
>”Yes.”
“Ah. I am unwell then? Can’t…hold my memories like I wish to? And ponies have already moved past the need for my help?”
>”Yes.”
“This is all hard to believe.”
>”What year is it, Anon?”
>He stated the year he thought it was.
>Sunlight showed him his medical file, focusing on the actual date he was admitted.
>Neither knew what to say.
>Anon started laughing.
>His joy echoed down the halls of the hospital.
>Suddenly, he stopped, staring at Sunlight.
“A pen! I need a pen, right now!”
>Pulling hers out of her pocket, Sunlight handed it over. “What for? You’re not…mad? Sad? Anything?”
“How could I be sad? We won, Sunlight! All the work, all the time, I am redeemed! The black mark upon my soul has been lifted.”
>”But…you’re…”
“It matters little. My work is done. You should be out living, Sunlight, not caring for a relic like I. Nothing would make me happier.”
>Scribbling furiously on a piece of paper, Anon passed it over to Sunlight. “I believe I promised you a villa for your services, yes? This paper should count as legal tender to retrieve the deed, if my memories are still to be trusted. Now be gone. You have the sweet taste of freedom to enjoy.”
>She still wasn’t done. She hated this next part.
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>>27724688

>”Anon…we’ve done this before.”
“Excuse me?”
>”I’ve told you these things before. You never remember them.”
“Oh.”
>”I thought, maybe, just this one time, they’d stick, but I know…when you go to sleep, and you wake up; you’re not going to remember any of this. I may as well put this deed with the others. You never remember, and I always have to go out and find you and explain all this to you again and again and again, and I can’t bear how you react sometimes. And I know one day you’re going to go out and bite off more than you can chew and it’ll all be over. I just want to see you better. Sometimes I feel like the only pony who still remembers you. I…I can’t handle that.”
>Anon was silent.
“Ah. I apologize then.”
>”I knew you’d say that as well.”
“Then I suppose there’s nothing left to add, that I have not said already, in times forgotten. Nothing left to do.”
>”Except fade away.”
“With you by my side, it’s not such a bad thought. Especially now that I’ve lived a full life, helped those I could, righted my wrongs. I have no regrets. I am ready to stop my fight, and rest.”
>”But what about all you could still do?”
“I’ve already done all I could. Ponies are free. Is there anything more you would wish of me?”
>“To remember who I am. Who I was to you.”
>Anon smiled.
“How could I ever forget that, my dear friend, after all the adventures we’ve had together?”
>And then, summoning up his strength, he sat up.
>And gave Sunlight a kiss.
>The nurse returned eventually to signal the end of visiting hours.
>Sunlight left tearfully, leaving the room empty except for the frail form of Anon.
>And he was content and happy, at least for now.
>Sunlight knew that he would forget, and they would share in many more adventures, until one day, they’d reach the last one.
>And fade away.
>And while that thought hurt, maybe it wasn’t such a bad one.
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>>27724698

The actual end, since I still suck at endings, but the last ending wasn't the real ending.
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>>27724698
ok that was a lot more emotional than i expected, great work.
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>>27705251
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>>27724698
Goddamn, anon. Were you abused as a child? You do realize that some stories actually end happily, right? Top notch work, brah, but damn. That ending.
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>>27725758
>wanting happy endings
What is wrong with you?
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>>27725554
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>>27724698
Actually pretty damn good. Especially endings, those are damn hard
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Been working on this, relates to the thread.
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>>27726701
Damn, that's real nice. Good work.
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>>27726570
Endings are easy. The story comes to a natural close once the last character dies.
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bump?
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>>27726701
10/10, Great line art so far.
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>>27693395
Just the idea that that tiny little filly has had such dark times really hurts.

I didn't know the nurse was also off her pills. I really need to know more soon please.
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>>27728157
yes
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careful bump
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so wheres some of that there spitfire?

this worked in the past surely it will work again
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>>27728709
There will be more tomorrow.
Hopefully enough that I'll be able to hit one of the bits I've been looking forward to writing for months.
Dear Princess Celestia...
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>>27732242
Excellent.

We have been so freaking slow today.
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WHERE'S THE GILDA GREEN!?
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In stead of bumping, I'm going to talk about myself a little bit.

About 30 minutes ago, I took such a massive shit that my legs hurt, despite having nothing to do with the shitting process. I can also feel my heartbeat in my sphincter sufficiently as to count my BPM if I were interested.
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>>27732788
you've gotta eat more fiber anon
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>>27732431
Fuck gilda i want selene octavia back.

That son of a bitch saw his chance and ran just as the going was getting tough.
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>>27732431
I CANT BELIEVE HES FUCKING DEAD
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>>27732810
dang dont remind me of that one being dead.
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>>27690924

„...What was it like in Equestria? Was it a great place to live?“ you ask
>“Oh you wouldn't beleive! It was the most awesome place ever. I wish i could go back...“
„And what exactly happened?“
>“You mean, before they took so many of us and then left?“
„Probably. Nobody really knows how and why did you ponies get into our world. Except for the rich ones who financed it.“
>“I'm not gonna tell you the painful details, but I can tell you. Basicaly, there was a portal, opened for a limited time. Enough for you, humans, to kidnap hundreds of our kind, as it seems. Then our princess probably managed to close it. But it was too late anyway.“
>there's a desperation in her voice and anger as well
>must have brought her some flashbacks
„Well, at least it's closed and the rest of your world is safe, eh?“
>“The only comforting thing about it...But before yesterday, I thought the number would be a lot smaller. That they only took few...“ she almost whimpers
„At least it isn't even bigger...Hopefuly. You don't see a pony in every human family, that says something. You're still pretty rare.“
>“Yeah, hopefully. I couldn't bear, knowing there's even more, living in slavery.“
„You're pretty patriotic, eh?“
>“I should be loyal to my kind. And I should be the one to save them, but I'm just running instead. I'm,..I'm worthless.“
„Come on, it's not your fault. Chin up.“
>“And what if it is?? Then what?“
„What do you mean?“
>“Nothing, forget it...This weather sucks. I wish I could fly and move those stupid clouds away so I could see the sun.“
„Yeah that would be nice if it was so easy.“
>“It would be easy if I had my feathers intact.“
„What are you talking about? You can't just control the weather.“
>“Yes I can. I used to be a weather mare. The best one even.“
„Weather mare? That sounds funny.“
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>>27733741

>“Hey, this is no joke. It was my life. I could fly so fast, the sky would explode in the explosion of colours.“
„Seriously, what drugs are you on?“ you laugh
>“Why am I even trying, it's like talking to a rock. But some rocks at least listen, unlike you.“
„Ok, ok I'm sorry. Guess your world was a lot more um...magical than this one.“
>“Ya bet.“ sme smirks sadly „This one is just one big machine.“
„That sums it up pretty well.“
>“You know, if humans didn't do this to us, maybe I'd even pity you.“
„Ok, I get it you don't like us. You don't have to repeat it constanly.“
>“But I mean it with the pity. It must suck for you to live here.“
„...You know it.“ you grin again, this time only faintly as it hurts as well
>then there's another time of silence, which gives you some time to think
>now that you recapitulate, you actualy realize that you maybe even enjoyed this conversation
>it's funny, but you kinda wish she would say something so you could argue again
>but right now, she looks buried in thoughts as well
>wonder what she's thinking about
>most likely something that one of you just brought up
>maybe the number on the ring again?
>or the collar?
>oh right
>she still has the thing around her neck
„...Sorry i forgot about the collar.“
>“Huh?“
„I'll put it off you, once we get home.“
>“Oh,.. yeah. Thanks.“
>...
>“...If I were to go outside, I'll have to wear it again, right?“
„Well, it would be suspicious if you didn't.“
>she just sighs
>“...I hate this. It reminds me of the real happening around me. Every time I can feel it around my neck. It stings.“
„I can get you some more comfortable one if it helps.“
>“I don't think so.“ she smiles bitterly „This doesn't hurt my body, but my soul...But thanks for the effort.“
>…
>…
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>>27733752

>…
>“What's this big ugly house for?“
>she's pointing at the old warehouse, few blocks away
>is she really interested in what is this shitty building for, or is she trying to start a conversation?
„They used to store some stuff from factories inside. But not anymore.“
>“How come?“
„They made a bigger one, an uglier one.“ you smirk
>she can't help herself but to let out a little chuckle
>“I guess it would be pointless to ask why, eh?“
„Guess you're right. Anyway, it's abandoned now. Just standing there for some reason.“
>“Have you ever been inside?“
„Why? Do I look like an adventurous boyscout?“
>“Certainly not adventurous enough. Let's take a look, come on.“
>she instanly changes direction without asking about your opinion, relying you'll come with her
>this could be a contest of will, which you'd win
>but fuck it
>you'll just tag along
>it's not so bad, being outside after all
>soon, you're standing at the rusty gates of the empty complex
„So, this is it. A real shithole.“
>“Why you have to be so vulgar so often?“
„Humans are rude fuckers you know.“
>“You just can't help yourself, can you?“
>she enters though a hole in the fence
>big enough for you as well, but you have to crouch pretty low, resulting in your knees getting wet from snowy slush
„Goddammit.“
>“Come on, slowpoke!“ she calls for you, already standing by the building
>the main gate is shut, but there are some old ladders to the metal balconies that used to function as a spot for smokers
>and a fire exit as well
>but the point is, you can get trough this way inside
>though you'll have to jump – the ladders are about two meters from the ground
>she's already climbing up, so you're running to catch up
„Hey! Wait!“
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heeeeeeey. There's some good green to read.

Thanks.
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>>27733759
Every two lines in this green is just "wahhh humans suck wahhh". Not just Rainbow either, anon does it more
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>>27711196

>"Oh, I'm sure you've taken a bath, such as filthy animals do..."

"Just leave me alone."

>You cross your arms, snort, and turn your nose up at her with your eyes closed in disgust.
>This is it, all your years of training in the tutelage of Diamond Tiara in the ways of the bitch.

"And if anyone here is a filthy animal, it certainly isn't me. I mean really, have you even looked in a mirror when you apply that... makeup? And I'm sure all that perfume you're wearing isn't to cover up the smell of your disgusting oldness. Seriously, no one as old as you should be allowed to wear that much makeup, or else some poor drunkard might mistake you for an attractive woman."

>"I... you..."

>The scent of spicy flowers is permeating the air thickly.

"And here I was, thinking I could enjoy a day outside without one of you deranged humans attacking me for a change. But no, I get verbally insulted by the creature from the Everfree Forest!"

>"Why you little-!"

>"Is their a problem here?"

>Your eyes snap open at the sound of a second voice.
>A tall man in a blue uniform with a gold badge on his chest is standing to the side, looking at the two of you.
>You look at him, he looks between you and the woman.
>The woman has a sickeningly smug look on her face.

>Uh oh...

>"Why yes officer, this animal has been running around without a leash and thinks she can just sit here without a master near by to keep her in line."

>"I see... Looks like I'll have to write you up."

>The man in blue pulls out a note pad.

>You could actually puke, she was so smug as she glared down at you.
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FIREKING WHEN????
FIREKING WHEN????
FIREKING WHEN????
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>>27734558
next time you manage scoring trips
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>>27734528
Oh shit. Sliver's not holding back with the insults.
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>>27713731
>"I'm gonna love her, and feed her, and pet her, and brush her mane!"
>Oh god, please no.
>The father chuckles.
>"Well, maybe you should start by feeding her, she's probably a little hungry."
>The little girl leaves the room for elsewhere, probably to get food.
>The girl's father walks over to you, crouches down, and stares out you.
>No, stares right into your soul.
>"Okay, miss..."
>You aren't going to give this bastard the satisfaction of knowing your name.
"Rainbow Dash."
>WHAT DID I JUST SAY
>He speaks with hushed breath so that only you two may hear what he says.
>"Rainbow Dash, you probably don't think highly of me, given our respective roles. But I promise you, if you don't hurt my daughter, you will be fine. Understand?"
>You nod.
>"Good."
>He pats your head and slinks away back to where he was before.
>Yeah, definitely evil.
>Oh, the kid's back, finally giving you some reprieve from being alone with the Dadstroyer of Worlds.
>"Well, I have to go now, sweetie. You play with your pony until I get back."
>"Okay, dad."
>And the guy tousles her hair and leaves.
>Now you are alone, trapped with a young child.
>"You want a sugar cube, pony?"
>A young child offering you a sugar cube in the palm of her hand.
"Ok."
>The sugar cube remains firmly on her palm as she looks at you expectantly.
>Does she really want you to just eat it directly out her palm of her hand?
>No, you will not go along with such a blatant act of submission!
>But, on the other hand, sugar cubes are nice...
>"Come on, do you want it or not?"
>Fine, you'll eat out of her palm for a stupid sugar cube.
>So you do that, nuzzling the palm of her hand as you do so.
>The girl starts laughing in response.
>You knew it, she laughing in triumph at your subjugation, all humans are evil, even the children!
>"Hehehe, that tickles!"
>...or your mouth is tickling her palms as you try to eat the sugar cube.
>Celestia damn it all, you thought you were onto something.
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>>27734528
writing up the lady for pet abuse?
Pleaaaaaaaase? let someone not part of the family NOT be a dick to her.
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>>27734977
Please go on
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>>27732811
I'm pretty sure he's not dead. He's on the IRC sometimes. He just doesn't work as fast as other people.
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>>27734528
C`mon more!!!
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>>27734977
Good job!!
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>>27735302
That seems a little farfetched
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>>27735586
Oh. Should he cite Silver Spoon for being too adorable?
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>>27735302
It's jenny's fault. she should have leashed Silver to the bench. The police might let her off for being a kid and giving a stern warning, but Jenny is in the wrong. Leash laws exist for a reason, and it's not illegal to be an insufferable cunt.
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>>27736098
>Leash laws exist for a reason
but I think that it shouldnt apply when the leashed animal is sapient, the only logical reason could be control but it doesnt matter much if the pony is compliant
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>>27736098
Being too adorable is a serious crime, citizen. It has been known to cause fatal cases of HNNNNNNGH and DAWWWW in humans.

Silver Spoon is sentenced to seven years in the iso-cube.
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>>27734977
You better fucking continue.
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>>27736212
Doesn't matter, there are dogs that have more self control than humans. Exceptions to the law aren;t written into the law, theyre excused by the officer, such as if the loli is too young and cute and the officer has reason to believe that they will do so in the future and have no ill will towards the law. The very fact that ponies are under leash law means that their sapience doesn't matter in this instance.
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>>27734528
>Plot twist
>Officer is one of the ones who responded to Silver's attack earlier.
>Soccer Mom gets rekt with a ticket for disturbing the peace and attacking another person's slave.
I can dream...
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Basically just hit the week deadline I try to have for myself and just not even sure if I should post something or not. I've changed the coming scene maybe 3 times now and I just can't find myself happy with it no matter form it takes. I now for the first time understand what writefags mean when they say they hate the pressure. At the same time I know I don't want to be one of those people who seeks perfection that will never be achieved, and I don't want to be as slow as I usually am either.

I don't know why I wrote this honestly. Just wanted to post and tell my readers what's going on lately I guess. You guys are supportive and I appreciate that, so I figured I'd at least explain if there will be a delay. If I can get off tilt I'll try to see if I can get something out tonight.
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>>27737807
I, a random anonymous person and certainly not a fellow writefag who should be working on his own story, will be on the irc in about an hour, if you need someone to give it a read.
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>>27734977
this are great, keep going.
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>>27736098
>>27735931
>>27736526
>>27737406
i was having some flights of fancy at work this morning and came up with some stuff.

officer is secretly a member of the Pony Liberation Force, Same as the dad. recognizes Silver from the facebook photo.
maybe has some symbol on his uniform only ponies can see/would recognize (Pic maybe?) takes silver aside and puts on a show to fool the land whale before giving her a ticket with a message on it to be passed on to the mom.

Ok this next part is not such a good idea, But i found it funny

Also the pony liberation force or PLF is just a group of people with a strong seance of right and wrong that have a soft spot for cute things. They gather with their ponies in secret meetings around bonfires dressed in different colored pastel robes with pointed hoods obscuring their faces. Adorn only with their chosen cutie mark on their shoulder. Referring to each other as "brother anon". Discussing their next move and harassing known abusive Slavers(burning large letter S's on their lawns) with the message "we are watching"

OK that's a quite edgy, I'm done
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>>27738105
>this joking kkk shit
this is how the real kkk was actually born. don't do that.

>plf
seems unlikely. I don't think jenny needs to be excused from the wrong of her actions even if the punishment of fining might be a bit too harsh. She needs to know it's wrong and to be responsible because when she takes silver out on a leash like that she's responsible for silver. Silver is her dependent, and while she is too young to have the full responsabilities of an adult she still has the smaller ones of a kid. Keeping track of their pet and making sure no waste is left behind and leash laws are obeyed are one of those responsibilities.
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Actually, I was gonna go with Pony Protective Services.

PPS.
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>>27738196
Actually, there should be a government program to look out for the well being of little ponies.

Federal Foal Services.
FFS.
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>>27738196
as a rebel group or a state funded regulation of pone rights?
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>>27737807
Take your time. We still need that heartbreak
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You know what I'd really like to see?
A story like this: http://pastebin.com/LkW3Kkc5

Not because of the storyline itself, but because of all the nice and realistic horse behaviour. I'm a really bit fan of this. Wish there were more stories where they actually act more like horses. (And less like humans in horse bodies).
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>>27738831
well if you like that you'll love this

http://pastebin.com/BG2s2fnX

then you'll cry with me when you realize its dead.
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>>27738338
>You will never fight for the rights of pones.
>You will never raid a plantation, only to be met with heavy resistance.
>You will never take one to the chest.
>Your last sight will never be a scared mare, trying to save you.
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>>27738935
Ah, yeah, I read that one.
All the good stories die so young.
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>>27738195
I disagree with everything you said. But that's ok. I'm not going to argue about it.
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>>27739454
the nice thing about laws though is that you don't have to agree.
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>>27734237

There was a time when Anon said he almost felt ashamed for being a human, but that's all. He mostly disagrees with the society and the way the world goes, not humans in general.
About Rainbow, her motives are pretty understandable, she's after trauma. Though it's not really every second line.
I'm sorry you feel that way and hope this helps to explain.
Just hope there aren't too many people who feel the same about the story so far, I don't get too many opinions.
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>>27740883
different anon here.

naa mang not what I got.
I just saw someone disillusion with humanity.
I feel the same way, and we don't even have slave ponies.
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Bump..
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>>27741536
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>>27741693
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>>27742388
careful!
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>>27683857

I thought we already did.
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>>27743462
this picture makes me sad
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>>27740928
Really? Because I see some variation of "humans are literally satan" every post
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spitfire when?
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>>27744344
writefag is on a 2 week vacation
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Figth against the Bump!!!!!
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>>27738338
guess i'll know when they show up..
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>tfw no recent posts from comfy mare slave anon
Well it was nice while it lasted.
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>>27746362
I don't completely understand the appeal in these. If you explain it to me, I might give it as shot.
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Guys, what if
Now here me out here
Guys, what if: Scat Slave
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>>27746515
I dunno. I just like these tiny little glimpses into the lives of content mare slaves and the master who loves them. No stupid overblown drama, edge, or misanthropy, just warm n fuzzies from a world where everyone knows their place and is happy with their lot in life.
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>>27746515
Most of our green has been along one of three themes:
>White Knights
>Hurt/Comfort
>Hurt ALL the ponies! I'm looking at you, Ephemeral and tgn

Less common are Black Knight, Lewd, and Comfy

The Comfy stores eschew the active plot of the White Knight theme for a more laid-back and relaxing pace. Hurt and Hurt/Comfort provide a rollercoaster of feels, but can be over-the-top or simply unappealing at times. Black Knight stories don't generate any happiness, except schadenfreude and the Lewds are, well, lewd.

The Comfy stores are like wrapping yourself up in a toasty blanket on a cold winter morning. They're exactly what the descriptor implies. Comfy. They don't rock the boat, no rollercoaster of feels, and mostly happy.

Not to say that they have to be a constant stream of happy vibes. A few stabbings are okay, but the story needs to return to happy times quickly, without leaving the character emotionally crippled for life. Lollipops and ice cream help.
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>>27746611
This really. I wish comfy mare slave anon would do a full length story. I'd eat that shit up.
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>>27746362
The rodeo post was him. Although granted that was almost a week ago.
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>>27746608
Like Goo Pony but made of shit?
A Golgathan Shit Pony? Made from the feces of a hundred crucified alicorns?

Well, it would dual-fetish scat and daemon-summoning, so go for it.
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>>27746608
there have been a couple about slavepone as toilet
those werent really appreciated

>>27746636
have we had any comfy/lewd story before??
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>>27746822
>comfy/lewd
Recovery
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I'd like to see a story where pony is bought as a present for a kidanon with abusive parents. She becomes fiercely loyal to her lil' master, even going so far as to step in between him and his parents during some of their more violent outbursts and taking some pretty bad injuries as a result. As anon gets older their bond grows stronger, until eventually they realize they're falling in love with each other. She even repeatedly turns down his offers to free her, as free ponies are forbidden by law from living with humans, as she wants nothing more than to be by his side forever.
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>>27746850
>anon's parents become aware of the special bond he has with his mare
>they change their tactics, they start to punish one by inflicting pain on the other and making them watch
>little mare slave still bears the brunt of their anger, as she still defends her master with all her heart whenever they threaten him
>by the time anon is an adult her body is covered with scars from the years of abuse
>now it's his turn to take care of her
>he lavishes her with gifts, praise, and attention for the rest of her life
>reacts violently when others suggest he "replace that beat up old nag" with a younger, healthier slave that can be a better servant
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>>27746850
There are two stories that handled abuse by family members, one is a pony victim of abuse by a fu ing sister who makes refuge in the good elder brother and the other a very brief where Rainbow Dash and a human are forced by someone to hurt each other for diversion of a psychopath scum
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>>27746987
This is almost touching, you should consider expanding the idea

>I hope your parents suffer
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>>27746987
>mare knows actually fighting back would be suicide
>the best she can do is throw her body over anon's whenever his mom or dad comes after him with a belt, strap, extension cord, or whatever else they might happen to feel like beating him with
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>>27747055
>anon tends to her injuries afterward, crying into her fur that he was the reason she got hurt
>she simply swishes her tail and lets out a long, drawn out nicker as she nuzzles his cheek tenderly to comfort him, ignoring her own physical pain as best she can
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>>27746850
Holy shit, this is an amazing idea. A big writing challenge to get right, but man, I'd read it.
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>>27747176
I agree, though this would be incredibly difficult to pull off without coming off as too edgy.
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>>27747214
There was the one attempt but was quit part way through. Don't even remember the name of the writer, just that people were bitching about it.
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>>27747214
>people beating their kids is edgy
That's not edge, anon, it's something that's actually rather common. A kidanon coping with abusive parents by bonding with his pony would make for some nice bittersweet feels.
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>>27746636
>>Hurt ALL the ponies! I'm looking at you, Ephemeral and tgn
>TFW
Sometimes I feel guilty about it.
Sometimes.

>>27747214
Yeah. I personally wouldn't even approach it. Too much realism and need to understand the subtleties of abuse. It'd bother me to try to entrench myself in that even if I thought I could pull something off. I write/read too much negative and I need to do something lighthearted as a break from Trainer if anything.
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>>27747274
No you don't you fucking liar.
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>>27747274
>feeling guilty
Never! Except once.
Ever hurt a pony enough you ended up guilt-waifuing her?

>>27732242
By 'tomorrow' I actually meant Monday. I blame the time travel.

>>27685848
Friday also means Monday. I still blame the time travel.
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>>27746636
To be fair. a deal is a deal is not as dark as it started. Things were actually starting to tern around.
Hopefully it will continue that path.
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need 7 replies for begin on new thread
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>>27747564
7 replies
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>>27747501
Yeah, I've been channeling my hate into other stories.
Everyone is still suffering, though, just with less rape and getting mauled by dogs. Only really have one more dark spot planned, everything else should be following the slow climb towards the light.
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>>27747607
Good Job
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>>27746608
NO DONT SUMMON THAT SCOOTALOO PICTURE! I DARE YOU!
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This shitpost is brought to you by the faggots in the IRC. Somebody made a joke, I took it too far.
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Stallion is for riding
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>>27746850
I'd read that.
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>>27747607
I am excited yet scared.
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