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My Loyal Ponies: Submission Is Mandatory #87

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Previous Thread: >>27503168 (archive link: https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27503168/)

>What is this thread about?
This thread is dedicated to stories that have clear dominate and submissive roles; both with and without consent.

>What exactly is welcome in this thread?
A wide variety of stories are welcomed here; from non-consent and sexual slavery, to abusive manipulation and psychological domination, to maids and extortion, and even healthy consensual relationships with BDSM role-play elements.

A few topics that are discouraged are NTR, vore, scat, and other similar themes.

>Featured Story
The Mouth of Anonymous
Hawkeye
http://pastebin.com/wcXHMZkx
Acting on behalf of Lord Anonymous, Fleur is tasked with overseeing the preparation for a royal ceremony. However, due to hoof-dragging by the local Ponyville residents, she resorts to... unconventional measures to ensure the ceremony's success.

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Pastebin list of all stories: http://pastebin.com/778zgnJ5

>SiM wiki page:
http://mulpwiki.org/index.php/SiM
Don't think you have what it takes to write a long greentext? Go here and fill in the pages!

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Historical Note:

This thread was originally founded to support the “Submission is Mandatory” story by MrNameless. While the story has gone on hiatus, it’s content is referred to by a number of stories in this thread.

Submission is Mandatory by MrNameless (Recommended)
Nightmare Moon summons Anon to defeat the EoH. In return, she grants him ownership of the Mane 6.
http://pastebin.com/ycY3zrvA

(Non-Canon SiM Expanded Universe Stories)
Octavia POV (Recommended) http://pastebin.com/Y2AahdQp
Other Stories - http://pastebin.com/3AFdqxvs
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Writfags will come back!
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>>27660170
Writefags are dead m80. They've all abandoned you.
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>>27660170
Heya! I'm still here. Still hitting up on some ideas.
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>>27660170
im sketching stuff up yo
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>>27660820
The drawfag we need, but we don't deserve.
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>>27660820
Could you please get a name or start using a tripcode? I like to set up color filters to differentiate between various content creators.
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>>27660961
sure
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>>27660966
Nice dubs.

We had a drawfag in the previous thread, but he used a different name and trip. Be you the same drawfag or did we get another generous artist?
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>>27660990
one and the same
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>>27660966
Thank you.
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>>27661004
Gotcha. Just wondering lad.
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Does anyone know which (unfinished I think) /sim/ fic it was that had the Spitfire thing with anon, and him inviting her to a club where he paraded a broken Fluttershy around before her? I'm looking for it and I can't find its pastebin anywhere
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>>27661144
Dungeons Deep.
http://pastebin.com/McXRjzgc
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designan outfits
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>>27661742
I'm not a fan of this design. There's too many things at once.

There is nothing explicitly sexualizing her, so I'm assuming she's not a harem pony. My best guess would be she's a dancer... but those large hoofguards look too rigid for that... and now that I think about it, they seem to be a very different style than the rest of her garments.

I do like the idea of a veil that's both masking her identity and possibly obscuring her vision, making her seem mysterious but also defenseless. But overall, I'm not sure what exactly I'm looking at and it's not making me happy.
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>>27661742
Is that a Saffron? Please tell me that's a Saffron.
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So did all the writefags live in Orlando because this shit is dead.
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>>27662208
Doubtful. Just like everyone else, they have lives. Then again here I am at 0130 browsing /mlp/ and reading shit posts on /v/.
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>>27662208
Writefagging is hard, you know?
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>>27661854
those are some good point. Im gonna have to think on that. thanks.

>>27662113
it is a surprise.
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>>27660319
In fact I know that this is not 100% true
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>>27663392
i like surprises
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>>27663392
It was late at night when you posted so I didn't get a chance to comment.

I'm not entirely sure who this changeling is so I'm guessing OC or Hope? that being said her role isn't very obvious, but I'm guessing arm candy by the way she is dressed. I make the assumption that she is a changeling because o the "holes" in her tail and the lines on her stomach give me the impression of Queen Chrysalis's stomach.

The manner in which she is dressed says arm candy and possible "entertainment." and if it's the second, I'm guessing she is reserved for royalty only. It doesn't appeal to me personally, but I have seen people who enjoy the eye curtain thing going on, but one thing that kinda just doesn't look like it'd actually work is that piece of fabric over her head. I suppose you could tie it up to the horn and if you were to use earrings as an anchor the cloth would be more stable, but as is it looks like a small breeze would just send that piece flying away.

Not sure what is going on with her hoof guards/shoes? So I'll wait to see them in more detail, but other than that it looks very nice anon.

Definitely a high class and high maintenance changeling for sure.
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>>27665755
its not a changeling at all, just a unicorn.

I cant say too much about her or her outfit without spoiling stuff, but its not meant as a sexual outfit.
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>You close and lock the door, the inner workings of the doorknob clicking in the silence.
"Rarity, I need you to get started on my laundry and I'll have to make note to bring some more of my clothes over."
>"Anything else master?" She asks watching you take the controller from your pants.
"Yes, before you begin I want you to gather Sweetie's toy and present and bring them up to your room. I'll let you take the clothes I'm wearing to wash as well."
>She nods and trots over to her workstation to fulfill her task.
>You pick up the filly and cradle her in your arms.
"Let's go have some fun Sweetie."
>She shut her eyes tight and whimpered as you ascended the stairs, offering no resistance.
>You traveled the short distance to Rarity's room and entered, leaving the door open behind you.
>Sitting down on the edge of the bed and setting Sweetie Belle down, you being undressing.
"Rarity and I have a surprise for you Sweetie. She'll be here with it in a moment."
>"I don't want it Anon." She silently replied.
"Sweetie, how can you say that without even seeing it?"
>Your undergarments join the pile of clothes on the floor and you lay back on the bed.
>You lightly pat Sweetie's rear and wait.
>Sweetie sniffled as she jumped up onto your stomach and lay down on your chest.
"I promise you're going to enjoy this."
>You boop her little muzzle and stroke her fur, much like you would a cat.
>Your fingers gently scratch at her short fur, eliciting little whimpers and silent moans as they wander to her more erogenous zones.
>The bedroom door swung open and Rarity walked in, a small package levitating via magic floating right beside her.
"Rarity wonderful timing, why don’t you show Sweetie Belle here the wonderful gifts we have for her?"
>Rarity giggled and joined you on the bed, her eyes fixated on your crotch.
>She cleared her throat and moved the garter belt and vibrator closer to you.
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>>27668997
>Now Sweetie, Rarity lovingly made you this little garter belt and I bought you a brand new toy."
>You take the two items from Rarity's magical grasp and sit up in bed, the filly on your chest sliding down onto the bed between your legs.
"Why don't you show her darling?"
>Rarity nods and turns, flaunting her backside.
>"See how it's not too tight Sweetie?" Rarity wiggles her hind leg. "It allows Anon to place a remote in the belt."
>You hold the little box and dangle the docile bullet in front of Sweetie's face.
>Sweetie Belle's body tensed as the little bullet stopped on her muzzle.
>"What is this thing Anon?" She asked nervously.
"This is a vibrator egg Sweetie Belle. You had the opportunity to play with some the other day when we had fun with Rarity.
>You pressed the button and brought the little bullet to life causing Sweetie Belle to yelp and squirm in between your legs.
"Calm down my dear. This won't hurt you one bit, quite the opposite in fact."
>Taking the controller in one hand and holding the bullet in your other, you press it against her soft fur.
"See Sweetie Belle?"
>You trace a figure eight on her chest, her breathing slowly returning to normal.
>Slowly the pattern starts to shift lower down her body.
>Soft gasps and moans mixed in with the fidgeting fillies whimpers as the bullet drew closer and closer to her slit.
>Sweetie Belle watched the vibrating bullet approach her sex before it shut off completely.
>She gazed up at you, her eyes sending a mixed message.
>"Did the batteries die?"
>You pressed the vibrator next to her little pussy, lubing it up with the small streaks of her arousal.
"No, I just wanted to give you a small taste Sweetie."
>She opened her mouth to say something but immediately clamped down shut, her body jerking as you slipped the bullet inside her body.
>The filly squealed as the bullet came to life and slowly increased in intensity.
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>>27669002
"See my dear? This is one part of the toy and as Rarity has shown the little controller will be held in place by the garter."
>Turning up the dial seemed to increase Sweetie Belle's moans and the vibrators power.
>You held the filly in place as the dial stopped, indicating the device was running at full strength.
"Thank you Rarity that will be all. Go on about your task and come back when you're finished."
>Rarity nodded and continued staring at her younger sister’s crotch, liquids slowly leaking out as the bullet worked its magic.
"Did you want a taste Rarity?"
>Rarity licked her lips and eagerly nodded.
"Okay, just a quick taste and off you go then."
>The fashionista dipped her head down into her sister's wet fillyhood and deeply inhaled Sweetie Belle's scent.
>While Rarity smacked her lips, you slowly turned the vibrator's setting from low to high and back down to low.
>Rarity noisily slurped at Sweetie Belle's groin, the filly squirmed and moaned under the combined assault of the vibrator and her sister's tongue.
>Leaving the vibrator on the lowest setting you began rubbing Rarity's ear.
>"No Rarity, s-stop!" The filly protested as the shock waves of pleasure wracked her little body.
>Raising your voice to be heard over the filly and Rarity you explained your idea.
"I wanted to spice things up around the boutique a bit so it occurred to me that having the two of you wearing your garters and the vibrators on while we were home alone would be a nice change. Of course we would start with them set to low so that you could go about your day with little to no issues."
>You crank the vibrator up to max and smile.
"Unless you think you can take the bullet at max strength that is."
>Sweetie Belle's small hind legs feebly attempted to squeeze Rarity's head.
>Shortly after her eyes shut tight and her mouth opened wide as she let out a high pitched moan.
>You turn off the vibrator and give the snacking mare's ear a gentle tug.
"How does she taste darling?"
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>>27669007
>"She was absolutely divine master!" Rarity replied her muzzle drenched with Sweetie Belle's fluids as she worked her tongue in a circle around her lips.
>You wiggled your finger at Rarity in a come hither manner.
>She approached you and puckered up.
>Giving her a moist lips a deep kiss you gently suck on her short fine fur; the faint taste of Sweetie Belle mixing with the taste of what could have been crisp apples.
>Breaking off the kiss you send Rarity off to her chores instructing her to hurry back.
>The aroused mare turned to leave, stopping when you snapped your fingers.
>You pull the vibrator from a panting Sweetie Belle's dripping cunt, a quiet meep escaping her mouth and a loud pop coming from her little flower.
>Bringing the slippery bullet to your face you take the bullet into your mouth.
>A slight sour taste spread on your tongue.
>Spinning your index finger around you instruct Rarity to turn around before removing the bullet from your mouth.
>You place the motionless bullet against her slick marehood.
"I'll be keeping this on low while you work understand?"
>Rarity looked back and smiled.
>"Thank you master." She replied with a quick yelp as her body consumed the bullet and your finger.
>She let out another quick gasp as the vibrator came to live, the vibrations coursing through her groin.
>You placed the controller against her left hind leg and let the garter firmly hold the box in place.
>You give Rarity a slap on the rear and send her on her way.
"Hurry on back when you're finished darling."
>"Of course dear." She replied as she slowly strode out of the room.
>Her steps were slightly uneven and fidgety as her body slowly grew accustomed to the vibrator.
>You turned your attention to the little filly that lay silently between your legs.
"Seems like it's just you and me now Sweetie Belle. How about we have some fun?"
>The shaken filly held her breath, the worry on her face obvious.
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>>27669011
"Are you alright Sweetie Belle? Is the excitement digging into you?"
>She slowly shook her head, fighting back a sniffle.
"Well no matter, I'll be digging into you soon enough."
>Springing up like a spider onto your finger tips and tip toes you dance around the filly, surprising her and stealing a quiet giggle.
"Oh you think that's funny my prey? I bet you didn't know that we spiders enjoy drinking the fluids of our victims!"
>You shouted before diving head first between her hind legs, your hands snaking around her thighs as the filly squealed.
"I won't need any of my stick webbing to immobilize you Sweetie."
>Sweetie Belle bucked once, her body reacting to the sudden cool breeze that you blew on her slit.
>"Could you wait a bit Anon? I'm still a bit sensitive." Sweetie pleaded, her voice having no conviction behind it.
"Sorry little fly, I'm far too hungry to wait anymore! I must feast!"
>The tip of your tongue pressed against her slick lips, slowly spreading them apart like a blooming flower.
>The filly's giggles faded into low moans, her little body trembling.
>She bit her lip and watched, her attentive moist eyes watching your movements.
>Her taste invaded your mouth as you lapped around her labia.
"I knew your juices would taste better directly from the source."
>"Don't say that." Sweetie Belle murmured.
"Oh? Are you embarrassed little mistress? Don't be and if it makes you feel any better you taste much better than your sister."
>Gently biting her labia caused her to shriek, her fluids splattering against your cheek.
>Even so you refused to relinquish your hold on her lip, gently tugging on it like a dog with a stuffed toy animal.
>"S-stop it Anon." She whimpered.
"You're right Sweetie, spiders don't tend to rip and tear their prey apart."
>Releasing her tender lip you return to tracing small circles before exploring her depths.
>The sudden stop and subsequent intrusion startled your playmate, her forelegs smacking your head.
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>>27669018
>Her ineffective blows gradually became a tight grip as she fidgeted in your grasp.
>As if she could hold me down you thought to yourself.
>Her insides were nice and soft, a warm and wet sensation completely enveloping your tongue.
>The spongy delicate walls gripped at you in a hopeless struggle to keep you firmly rooted in place.
>Simply flicking your tongue allowed you to easily push back the crushing flesh and elicit a sharp gasp from Sweetie Belle.
>"Don't. Anon. Please. Don't."
>Withdrawing from her damp and snug pussy you noisily suckled at her lips in an attempt to coax out the fillies little pink button.
>It made itself known after a moment accompanied by another shrill squeak and a miniature torrent of thick filly juices gushing from her body.
>You took a moment to lap up the liquids that had soaked up the sheets before bringing your face up to Sweetie's face.
"Clean me up little mistress."
>You whispered after a brief kiss.
>The filly stood up and nodded, closing her eyes as she leaned forward to lovingly lick as your face.
>Her dainty tongue tickled as it brushed against your chin.
>You let Sweetie Belle's tongue gloss over your lips for a moment before locking lips with the filly.
>You leaned forward into the kiss pushing her back as your tongue probed at her lips.
>Sweetie moaned gently into your mouth, her lips parting as she was slowly lowered onto her back.
>She feebly tried to push you back, but was her resistance melted away as the kiss deepened.
>You slowly slithered your tongue around her lips before her tongue darted out towards yours as if to defend its nest.
>Sweetie's tongue frantically tried to coil itself around your tongue, faltering for a moment when your fingers began stimulating her nectar dribbling flower bud.
>Her back arched upwards as she doubled her efforts to entrap the intruder in her mouth, her little hooves struggling to find a grip on the bed.
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>You were easily able to beat her back into submission, her defenses unable to keep up with the double pronged assault on her body.
>Your saliva mixed with hers as you coaxed her tongue out of its corner.
>A quiet smack echoed in the room when your lips parted, your tongue still lapping at her lips as she reluctantly opened her mouth.
>Sweetie panted as she stuck her tongue out of her mouth only for you to take it into your mouth and suckle at it.
>She explored the insides of your mouth as you tenderly stroked her tongue.
>Her heavy panting made your hard-on twitch in anticipation, a trickle of pre-cum secreting from your urethra.
>Your soaked fingers continued their assault, probing and spreading as her clit appeared and disappeared.
>Sweetie Belle's forelegs reached out to you, a look of longing on her flushed face.
>Giving in to her desires you embraced her once again.
>Not a second after your two tongues met did she wrap her forelegs around your head.
>It only served to muffle her mewls as your fingers stroked along her insides, her clit now seemingly thrashing about as it became the sole target of your caresses.
>Sweetie's body spasmed once, twice as an intense jolt of ecstasy shot through her body.
>Her grip on your head tightened her squeals and gasps muffled by your mouth.
>Her walls clamped down on your fingers, drenching your hand with more of her fluids.
>You broke the kiss and licked your hands clean while her tiny body shuddered as she rode the waves of her orgasm breathlessly.
>The door quietly opened as you lay next to the filly lost in pleasure.
>"Did I miss everything?" Rarity stepped forward.
>You leisurely stroked yourself and smiled.
"Not at all my filthy little pony. In fact you're right on time."
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>>27666989
Ah those lines on her stomach gave and what appeared to be holes in her tail gave me the impression of a changeling. Looking forward to the finished piece.

Went ahead and updated the pastebin and after finding out that writing out green on pencil and paper flows a bit more smoothly, I should be able to produce content for this story at a faster rate.

Noticed a mistake and fixed it in the pastebin and currently looking for another one I noticed.

>Now Sweetie, Rarity lovingly made you this little garter belt and I bought you a brand new toy."

should be

"Now Sweetie, Rarity lovingly made you this little garter belt and I bought you a brand new toy."
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>>27669068
Damn.. want to read but need to go to work. Will review later.

Welcome back!
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>>27666989
aaand done.
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>>27674079
Looking good.

The only objection i have is the way her tail is colored. The different colors don't seem to follow the way the hairs are growing, unlike with most ponies with multi-colored manes and tails.

Also, with the finished dress and a full veil... she doesn't look like a dancer anymore... she seems so clam and resigned, at peace... my best guess now would be that she's a sacrifice to be gobbled up on Nightmare Night by NMM. Her cutie mark and identity obscured, removed, and replace it with a mark of the deity her life now belongs to.
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>>27674637
you know I just rushed it to be done with it, but youre right. and it looks weird.

how's this?

orange version: http://imgur.com/a/8xPHu
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>>27675222
>how's this?
Beautiful.
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help

http://imgur.com/a/lKSOU
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>>27675400
Love this. No idea what the story is (though I like where >>27674637 was going, especially with regards to the cutie mark).

Only complaint is the veil on her hint legs blends in just a bit too well. My first impression was that there was something wrong with her back legs (they looked withered) before I figured out what it was.
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>>27675400
The lighter coat and purple cover goes well with the blonde hair. But the white haired version goes better with the older scheme.

Also, I still don't understand what the surprise is supposed to be.
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>>27675417
I can tell you he's close, but not quite.
I tried the darker mane look, and I really prefer the lighter shade. for your consideration: http://quiscontranos.tumblr.com/post/146084981092/nightmare-moon-related-pone


>>27675540
It factors into the story/stories of some of the writefags ive been talking to. But since the stories arent written yet I can't say more without spoilers.
also I will be posting with the name of this new blog from now on, same tripcode though.
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>>27675881
Niiiccee
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>>27676029
bump
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>>27669031
Well written, but the foalcon aspect of it is just too much of a turn off for me.

Previous sections focused on the humiliation factor (or at least that's what I got out of it) which admittedly did something for me, but this was more like just straight clop and just couldn't really get into it.

That's not to say there's anything wrong with this, got nothing against people liking what they like or anything and it's all pretend cartoon horses after all... just not my thing.
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Good night thread
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>>27669031
Well, I certainly enjoyed this. Hope you're sticking around.
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>>27679317
>"Don't worry, this won't hurt at all!"
>>"W-what if I wanted it to hurt?"
>"..."
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>>27680020
> Bathorse slave
I require more of this.
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>>27682544
As a potential writefag, who doesn't know anything about bat ponies.

What makes them different from regular (earth/pegasus/unicorn) ponies? What makes the idea of enslaving a bat pony more alluring to you than enslaving a regular pony?
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>>27679322
Blushing ponies are a cute.
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>>27682753
>What makes the idea of enslaving a bat pony more alluring to you than enslaving a regular pony?
nothing, bat ponies are top tier autism and a fucking retarded meme.
No respectable horsefucker would ever cum inside a bat, batfuckers need to keep their autism inside their containment thread.
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>>27683778
aww I think bat pones are kinda cute. I mean, Ive only seen them in moonstuck but those were cute.
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>>27683923
go fuck yourself you attention whoring pointless name+trip fag, no one fucking cares about your opinion here unless you're an Anon.

Stop being so fucking new and lurk more.
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>>27683525
Finally, a fleshed out version of pic.

>>27683923
Agree. The main problem I see is the same as using a background character or an OC. They have no established character which means you have to build the character up yourself.

Building characters is a hard thing to do, especially given the nature of green and attention span of readers.

>>27684060
>>27683778
Oh cheer up bitter anon, it's the weekend. Learn to smile or something.
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Forgot to attach pic..
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>>27684060
You are being extremely impolite, and also wrong. Bat ponies are canon.

But since nobody here can tell me what's so special about them, I'm not going to be making any green about them, so... I hope it improves your mood a bit?
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>>27685196
Not telling you to gtfo or anything of that nature, but there is a bat pony general at the moment. The anons there would probably be better qualified to answer your question than dead silence or the one loud asshole.

Ask them and if the answer intrigues you, write a story about a bat pony being enslaved.
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>>27685250
Yeah, I know there is a general and if I was going to write a story with a bat pony I'd certainly look there. But nobody /here/ seems interested in then more than "they're kinda cute" and... duh, they're ponies, all ponies are cute, that's nothing new.

If I'm going to write green, there's no reason to bother doing the research if the pony also being a bat doesn't make it special to any of the readers. Especially if it also turns away some other readers away altogether.
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>>27685420
I'm not the anon who mentioned liking bat ponys and am indifferent to them, but if I may say one thing without coming off as a condescending asshole myself. You're never going to please everyone. Write what you want to write and if people don't like it, they don't like it. Hell I know that there's probably only one or two people in this general that like my Rarity and Sweetie Belle story, but I'm still going to post it here unless /mlp/ rules change or the writefags that I consider to be the main content providers of the thread tell me to get the fuck out.

If you're interested in bat ponies look into it and write your story. Or not, you're choice anon. Have fun with it regardless of your choice. Now if you'll excuse me I have another bottle of apple moonshine to drink.
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So Ive been making green recently but not over yet and I'm beginning to feel... selfish.

I mean, You guys gave me feedback through all this time since I first entered this general to right now and I didn't showed even the tiniest bit of gratitude from it.

I want to fix that shit up and ask ya F.A.M.S...

How can I make it up to you?
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>>27685877
post mayonaise removing guid for my plush
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>>27685196
>what makes them special?
more sensitive ears, nightvision and bat skin wings instead of feathered wings? also they may or may not be from the MOON
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>>27685877
>How can I make it up to you?
Make. More. Green.
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>>27688260
Man, that pic is fucking dynamite! Where did you find it?
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>>27661742
If you did op, this is the only design you mad I don't hate. Don't listen to them.
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>>27692427
Is this a stallion? If not, then... sauce?
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>>27693010
Artist gets a lot of hate here for the weird mane style thing, but I love the shit out of their stuff.
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>>27693050
Got your sauce right here familam https://derpiboo.ru/557765
It's Octavia
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>>27693094
Meh, can't say I hate it. It looks awkward as hell, but the intention is to inflict pain. Rainbow Dash either holds her head up/back or get that hair being pulled on pain which in turn probably puts more pull(?) on her tail.

I can look past the way the mane is drawn for that reason alone.
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If you can't control yourself you lose touching privileges.
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Good night thread.
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>>27695257
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>>27685420#
Original anon you aimed the question at here.

People like batpones for different reasons. Sometimes it's the 'exotic' factor and sometimes it's writing a character viewed as an oddity/reject because of their race. Some people just like to use them as an opportunity to worldbuild - both in terms of lewd stuff, like writing them as more wild or predatory/aggressive than other ponies, or non-lewd ideas about them.

I fall into that last category. Never been over to the bat thread - they seem to have their own weird 'canon' they have decided on. I just like seein where people take the idea of an unusual pony race.
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Beepedy bump.
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>>27698157

marble pie is not for mean sexual
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If cutiemarks determine your distiny, are there cutie mark that make pone for abuse?

I made up this character for the sake of the comic, I think I shall name her Love Paddle.
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>>27698707
10/10 would spank again.

>If cutiemarks determine your distiny, are there cutie mark that make pone for abuse?
That would be very unfortunate for said pony... also very unf.

>Love Paddle.
That's a terrible name.
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>>27698773
too on the nose?
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>>27698801
Yes. Something Paddle, Paddle Something, or just "Paddles". Would be decent names, but Love Paddle makes her sound like a pornstar.
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>>27698888
Quads define her as Paddles
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>>27698888
Paddles. I'm reminded of Pong all of a sudden. I like it.
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>>27698888
I was afraid it was too on the nose, but Paddles actually works very well on its own.
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>>27699417
I like her mane, but I think her coat would be better with some color too. How about light-orange, or light-red-violet?

I like the color choice for the text through, white for PoV character, green for others, just like we're used to. That said, on the last line, Paddle's speech should be in quotes too.
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I won't give up!
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>>27658879
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Feel like making some drawing content and Subjugation is dead, any ideas people have floating around?
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>>27710666
I'd love to see Anon tying up a pone in a consensual way.
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bum
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>>27710666
What do you mean Subjugation is dead? It just went back to its old name.
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>>27698707
I do remember a story about a pony whose cutie mark/talent was in sex appeal - as in if you see her, you want her right now no matter your relationship status, sexual orientation, or what you might have to do to get her.

She hates it and has been looking for a way to get it removed.
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>>27710666
It returned to its former name: Slavepone
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>>27710666
tied up package Rainbow Dash a la Broken Bluebird
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>>27713543
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Mind control, dom twilight, harem,
<{([ ANTHRO ])}>

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/238368/friendship-is-mind-control
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Archives: https://www.anonpone.com/punishment/ http://pastebin.com/uY83evb2
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>Once you’ve finished coughing up liquid, you stumble out of your watering hole.
>MAN, you hate doing that.
>But you can already feel all your bruises begin to fade.
>Despite her histrionics earlier over coming back to life, you knew this was the easy way to get your arm back, without having to wait a full six weeks.
>...Yep.
>With an average “lifespan” of a couple months, you’ve taken a pragmatic view on suicide.
>Leaning against the wall, you play with the new splint on your arm, making sure it’s not going to go anywhere, while you take mental stock of the situation.
>Let’s see...chores have been taken care of, you took your net apart for real, actual rope, you just finished setting the bone in your arm and committing suicide, and...you should probably check on the prisoners again.
>...
>By the sound of it, Cadance is just sulking in that cage.
>She can sulk all she wants.
>As far as you're concerned, she really IS the reason she’s in there and the reason you had to kill her aunt.
>Maybe you’ll be more forgiving once Tartarus gets to work on making your arm hurt less.
>As for Luna…
>Well, Luna’s still in the middle of a flashback.
>She was already trying to beg SOMEONE when you approached the door, but gave that up real fast.
>Overall, these two seem to be marinating nicely.
>And now, it’s time for you to throw Celestia back on the grill.
>This bout of alone time was exactly what you needed to come up with an appropriate lesson.
>Assuming you can play her sense of righteousness correctly.
>As you collect everything, you can hear Hope’s voice drift out of your room, “... lot meaner than Mother said.”
>Wait, are they talking about you?
>Slowing down, you decide to listen in for a moment.
>Hope speaks up again, “Cuz it’ll make her happy, and I don’t like anyone being miserable.”
>...
>”Nooo, I don’t think so.”
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>>27714731
>...Hang on, why can’t you hear Celestia?
>”Uh oh, I think I taste my dad.”
>Ok, that’s it.
>With your stealth broken, you barge into your room.
>Hope’s sitting on her haunches next to an evidently still paralyzed Celestia, her tail wagging, “Hello father!”
>You jab a finger at her.
“Don’t you ‘hello father’ me! Who told you you could talk to her?”
>Hope’s ears sink down and she points a hoof at Celestia, “She did…”
>You glower at her and point to the corner, not wasting any breath in explaining just how wrong that answer was.
>Her head soon follows her ears, “Sorry father…” she mumbles as she drags herself over to the corner.
>The closest thing to a reaction you get from Celestia is a twitch of her legs.
>Looks like the venom’s starting to wear off.
>Not wasting what little time you have left, you get to work, binding her with the rope salvaged from your sacrificed net.
>Sadly, you used all the long pieces to make a leash and collar
>Well...technically it’s a noose.
>And by “technically a noose,” you mean that’s exactly what it is.
>...If you could make a choking collar...or anything that wasn’t nearly as morbid looking, you would.
>As for the rest...well, the best you could come up with is to tie her legs so they’re folded up, and force her to walk on her knees and hocks.
>She’ll probably figure out a way to squirm her way out of it when she’s left alone.
>This is what you get for using all your good restraints on Luna.
>As you work on binding Celestia’s limp legs together, you start having a much more one-sided conversation with her.
“So, while I was ‘checking up’ on your family, I was thinking about what you said. And you know what?”
>You set the now bound leg down and take her foreleg, giving her a look before getting to work on that one.
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>>27714738
“You’re right. Violence ISN’T the way to win. I mean, sure, I could bash your skull against the wall all day, and it’d make me feel a lot better but uuh...well, it wouldn’t really help my case any, now would it?”
>She gives another twitch and glares at you in response-she may not be able to talk, but with a look like that, she doesn’t need to.
>Pausing your work for a second, you reach up and pull her eyelids closed.
“Don’t give me that look, I'm agreeing with you. We’re only doing this because you're so bullheaded that I can't trust you to walk around. Instead, we’re going to work together.”
>With her forelegs bound, you start work on her back legs, even as she tries to kick them.
“I’d love to just take you out there and let you experience the hell you created firsthand, just like I did with Cadance. But you're kinda public enemy number one. I can't imagine why.”
>The sudden splatter of sarcasm threatens to stain her fur as you move on to her last leg.
“As for right now…uh…I got nothing. I’m tired, I want to get to bed, you and I can figure this out in the morning. And since you never learned your lesson from the last time you ruined my rope, you get to be my snuggle buddy tonight.”
>”Nuuuh,” Celestia attempts to respond, her head turning.
>Right!
>The collar, you almost forgot to put it on.
“I know Hope, I promised you cuddles tonight. Don’t worry, she’s not stealing your spot. You get to be the pillow!”
>”I don’t think I wanna be the pillow…” Hope mumbles out from her corner.
>You stop and shoot her another look, informing her that she’s given you the wrong answer once again, despite the upbeat tone of your words,
“I thought you were Nymph’s kid. She loved it, just give it a try.”
>”O-ohkay father.”
>“Who?” Celestia wheezes.
>Uh oh, the venom’s almost worn off, and you might not have secured everything.
>You attempt to distract her as you check all your knots.
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>>27714745
“Seriously? Did you just not pay attention to who you sent here? Or was it just THAT routine for you? I’ll give you a hint: she was the one who lived in the…she’s the OTHER changeling queen you banished.”
>Woops.
>You don't remember if Hope knows the exact conditions you kept her mother in or not…it sounded like she had a fairly rosy picture.
>...Good, looks like everything but the noose is nice and tight.
“There we go...Now, you ready to get to bed?”
>”No,” comes Celestia’s resolute response, every syllable forced out through her uncooperating jaws, “I need to see my fa-mi-ly.”
>Yes!
>Fighting back a grin, you squat to get closer to eye level with her.
"You mean you want to see what kind of torture I put them in. Ooh, they were screaming before, and now they’re silent. Let me take a wild guess, you think I must have done something horrible and you need to save them from their torment, right?”
>Celestia meets you with a mute sneer.
>D’aaww, she thinks she’s being all big and powerful by not verbalizing an answer.
>That’s YOUR shtick!
>You offer her a gentle mocking smile, a concession to the grin you were fighting.
“Okay.”
>Shock swoops in to replace her defiance, “What? What game is this?”
“Well, I see who taught Cadance how to trust people! ‘I want to do this! Whaaaaaat?! How dare you say yes!’ Look.”
>You jerk your thumb at Hope.
“I got a bug over there who doesn’t want to try new things, I got cuddles either way. And the last time I tried to convince a pony that they should let themselves heal instead of running around, trying to be the big damn hero, SOMEONE broke my arm!”
>Hope opens her mouth to protest something, but you keep going before she gets a chance.
“You just came back from the dead, and you're still recovering from a paralytic poison that's fading WAY too fast. You want to run around? Fine. But I'm not helping you.”
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>>27714758
>Celestia stares at you throughout your little rant, waiting for you to spring some sort of catch or condition.
>Finally, her expression softens, “Thank you.”
“For what, being irresponsible? Hold still and let me get the boulder off.”
>Moving over her tail, you squat so your back is blocking her view of what you're doing.
>There's one very, very important thing you need to do before you let her up.
>If you want this to be a fun game, after all.
>Taking the end of her leash, you tie it in with her multicolored tail, just above her dock so it's almost tight.
>She shifts behind you, her tail covering her pink sex, “Human, what are you doing?!”
>Does she really think you're going to molest her?
>That’s not an unfounded fear, given what you did to her sister…and it IS tempting…
>But this isn't the time for that.
“I’m making sure you don't trip over the leash.”
>”Then remove it or tie it to my leg, not my tail! Sexual violence is still violence, you barbarian!” She squirms on the ground, trying to get away from your hand.
“Oh for-if I wanted to break out the sexual violence I’d just do this.”
>Turning around, you make a point of making eye contact with her before you yank her tail high and press a finger under her tail dock to keep her from lowering it.
>The look on her face as she passes through shock, horror, embarrassment and disgust is priceless.
“Look. I’m the one with fingers here. Don’t tell me how to tie knots and I won’t tell you how to prance around like a pretty pony princess.”
>Gently, carefully, you boop her nose with your other hand to emphasise your point.
>...Ow…
>Turning back so she won't see the pained expression on your face, you get back to tying the rope to her tail, your arm yelling at you louder than Celestia's continued protests.
>Once you're reasonably certain that it's tied correctly, you rock backwards, bracing yourself against Celestia's big, squishy rump.
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>>27714765
>”Get off!” She squirms as you, with both legs, swiftly kick the boulder off her tail.
“There you go!”
>Once you've painfully and awkwardly climbed off of her and back to your feet, you lean against the wall.
“Now am I helping you to bed, or are you heading out on your own?”
>She squirms, testing the rope binding her limbs before sighing and giving you a dirty look, “I presume you expect me to crawl to them like this?”
>Your grin returns with a vengeance.
“How’d you guess?”
>She simply keeps scowling, “You’re a sore winner, human.”
>With that, she reaches out as best she can with her bound legs, fighting to get to all fours, and starts marching along on the joints of her legs.
>Can you really let that one go?
>Of course not.
“The only thing that's sore about me is my arm. Almost like it's broken or something.”
>She refuses to acknowledge you, instead staring straight ahead as she steadfastly works her way towards the entrance to the main hall.
>How much depth perception does she have with those silly prey eyes?
>Is she going to notice the little dip right there in time?
>You bite your lip in anticipation as she slowly squirms her way closer…
>”Ah!” She yelps in surprise as her next step is greeted with only air, her forelegs slip out from under her as she tumbles forward, her chin slamming against the ground, her rump raised high, invitingly.
>The noose around her neck tightens a few notches from that spectacular landing.
>Perfect!
>”You’ve traded violence for humiliation, human!” You can hear her fighting to keep the anger and tears out of her voice almost as much as she's fighting to get back up.
“You want to talk about humiliation? My people built weapons that MAKE suns, and I’m stuck naked, living out of a fucking cave.”
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>>27714771
>”Only through your continued refusal to live in harmony,” Celestia grits her teeth as she gets back to her arduous journey.
>That bitch is still…
>Nooo, she’s just trying to rile you up again.
>You’re not going to let her ruin your fun time with a philosophical argument.
“Have fun living in harmony as you spend the next hour wiggling your way down the cave. Hope and I are going to have a fun time.”
>”W-what?” Hope jerks as you call her name. “Are we, Father?”
>Relinquishing your spot on the wall, you approach her, your hand raised.
>”Maybe I should stay with Celestia-pony so one of us can-”
>You bring your hand down once you reach her…
>And scratch in that spot behind her ear, “Ooohhkaay…”
>It’s like a superpower or something.
>Sitting there, you keep scratching her while the two of you watch Celestia as she worms her way around the corner, falling and causing her noose to tighten a second time before she vanishes from sight.
>Finally, you let your hand drop, slipping down to her far shoulder.
>Hope lets out a little chitter once the scratches stop and looks up at you.
“What's this backtalk about suddenly not wanting to be the pillow?”
>Any joy she had leftover from her ear scratches quickly evaporates, “I-but, I didn't even want cuddles to begin with…”
“Oooh yes you do. Your mother loved it-hell, I have no doubt she STILL loves it. And she especially likes it when she gets to be the pillow, you will too.”
>Hope tries to shy away from you, only for you to pull her back against your side.
>”You said you weren’t gonna compare me to mother anymore…” she whimpers.
>...
>Woops.
>Well, she’s got you there.
“So I did...well, it’s not like I’m still playing with your wings.”
>She shudders against you, reaching a hoof back to rub over the gossamer you ‘played’ with earlier.
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>>27714776
“If it makes you feel any better, your mom wouldn’t cry this much about having those played with. I think she even learned to like it.”
>Well, either that or she learned that complaining would get her nowhere with you.
>Hope lets out a whine, looking up at you, misery plastered over her face.
>D’aaww.
.”Alright Not-Nymph, you win, I’ll stop. In fact…”
>You point towards the exit.
“I’m going to go have fun with Celestia instead. Watching her crawl is too hilarious for me to pass up. You want to come, or do you just want to get to bed?”
>Hope blinks, “But I only woke up when Cadance-pony ran over me…I’m not tired...”
>You motion for an answer,
“Soo…? ”
>Her ears drop as she realizes that wasn't an acceptable answer, “Maybe I'll just get to bed…”
“Good girl. If you really don’t want cuddles then go get the stuff I brought to Cadance’s room so you can have your own bed.”
>Once she answers in the affirmative, two of of you set out, Hope for some level of comfort, and you for entertainment.
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>>27714785
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>>27714745
>The sudden splatter of sarcasm threatens to stain her fur as you move on to her last leg.
That was unexpected keks, I loved that line good job.
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>>27714785
Needs some molestation...

I can't recall ANY story with Celestia being sexually abused against her will...
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>>27710666
>>27711110
Guess this could be something, need a lot of work on the hands.

>>27711671
>>27711640
Did not know that. I thought Slave Pony General was insta-404ed? How come they changed it back.
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>>27719069
The most courteous answer would be to go ask them. Strictly guess I'm assuming they're testing the mods.
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>>27699417
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>>27714785
So, the most immediate issue in my opinion is that Hope needs to be pacified. Already she is showing signs of falling into the same trap her mother did - betraying us not because she hates us but because she doesn't understand it is wrong. We need to get her solidly in our court, as we cannot forcibly control yet another.

There's also the fact that Celly is going to lose her shirt when she sees what we dI'd to Luna. We can use that, though.
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>>27714785
regardless of how we feel about changelings, we cant let that fuck up our relationship with Forlorn, if she ends up running off we could be looking at an entire hive coming down on the cave. So even if you have to force yourself and pretend, it would be a good idea to treat her with more kindness, or at least give her reason to like you or obey you willingly. Thus far we've mostly just confused her and ordered her around, even telling her what she likes. She'd probably appreciate it if we referred to her by her name, since we've been dicks about it so far. It'll seem like we're reaching out and opening up to her.

if our royal guests bother you again, maybe it'd be worth bringing up the horrible shit you've had to live through to give some context to how easy you've been on them.

Also don't forget Cadence tried to break up the fight between you and Celestia, even if she fucked up by letting her out, she didn't seem to have the intention of hurting you. It's a fuck up but not as big as it could've been. Blame celly for most of it.
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>>27718102
>I can't recall ANY story with Celestia being sexually abused against her will...
>he says in the thread named after it's main story
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>>27723858
Could go down the easy route and just have a green centered around anon abusing Celestia that would pretty much boil down as clop for the sake of clop.
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The SIM fic we need:

https://youtu.be/wXfFO2DV860
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>>27719069
Is it okay?
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>>27725550
Yes, yes it is.
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>>27725550
Unf. Who is it?
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Ketchup.
https://derpibooru.org/1182435
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>>27714785
We should keep in mind that Luna has been being punished through all of this. And that cadence tried to free Celestia first. When Celestia gets stuck at her door and has to go to cadence instead we can slip inside and inform Luna. At least she's not relegated to second this time. This time shes third.
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>>27727814 (me)
It seems like every time we turn around one of them is trying to help the other while Luna gets to bask in her torment.
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>>27714785
let Cadence know how badly she fucked up by letting Celestia out, but make it appear as if our arm is healing so fast from natural means, it'll make us seem like a more powerful creature than we are.
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>>27727723
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>>27730392
I was too late to spot Pinkie's cutiemark to delete this post. I hope you guys dont mind.
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>>27730825
Why is her mane so sexy?
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>>27730833
nice dubs and not to bash the atrist, but Rarity's manestyle goes well with red.
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>>27660588
>Heya! I'm still here. Still hitting up on some ideas.
>[i]Gangs of Canterlot[/i]
>After the Pony-Griffin's war
>The truth war begins
>Rape, dies, bits and Gangs
>The worst economic, politic and society conditions.

Pic unbelievably related
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>>27662208
I don't know write in english very well.
>TSW
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>>27732984
ive been trying to make it look a bit more like its own thing.

its pretty obvious where the idea came from huh?
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>>27669068
I almost forgot this story. Thanks for the update.
Also, just started to read your herding story. That one is a bit of a mess some places.
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>>27735114
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>>27737869
u-unf
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>>27714785
The increased Sunbutt dialogue has me on the edge of my dick. Excellent work, Olibird.
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>>27738817
Care to give me a detailed explanation as to your intent behind this post?
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>>27739449
Thought you'd enjoy tsun sunbutt dialogue. No ill intent I assure you.
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Night bump
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>>27742295
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>>27673851
sauce? pretty please?
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>>27739547
i did
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>>27687613
Sorry if it's too late for it but...
http://clopaholic.deviantart.com/art/Removing-Mayonnaise-from-a-Plushie-478146400

Hope it works.
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>>27747693
Incase you're asking: Still working on my green.
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>>27658879
How long has it been since that main > was updated?
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>>27673851
>>27745649
>sauce? pretty please?
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>>27749459
>sauce
The same as always, use the filename as image ID on derpibooru.
https://derpibooru.org/942367
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>>27748862
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>>27724393
source?
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>>27750619
Oh, I see you put the source in the filename.
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bump?
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>>27749498
Thank your good sir.

The filename as image ID... I feel a bit stupid now, but in my in my defense, it wasn't mentioned in this thread.
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Posting-from-5600-miles-from-home bump.
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Up we go!
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>>27760777
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>>27764432
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>>27764432
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>>27658879
bump
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>>27725550
Finished the picture. I hope you guys enjoy it.
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>>27767417
awesome!
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>>27767417
Dayum, I love your stuff. Good that you adjusted her speech to all be fitting - it's a little awkward to read, but fits in with the image.
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Art is very good. More green in the thread would make it even better. We are so close to molesting Celestia I can almost taste it.
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>>27767417
Top unf and your artwork is beautiful.
I bet this will be slave pones next op image has they seem to like using OC from here.
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>>27767417
Very nice. Loving the saliva.
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>>27775473
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>>27771430
What's going on in this one even?
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>>27776624
I think celestia is watching Rarity get tortured or sexually abused on a magic screen. Luna wants to watch but is not allowed.
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>>27777377
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>>27767417
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>>27780472
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Someday our.bumps will pay off, and this thread will flow with rivers of green once more
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Here we go again!
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>tfw can finally control someone irl
>tfw no longer need to pretend with ponies
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>>27788545
>control someone
Well that's a worrying way of describing what I hope is a consensual relationship.

Honestly though, if this is your first foray into IRL play, congrats and be careful. Shit's a lot different IRL and you may be completely caught off guard by how hard something you thinking nothing of in fantasies hits you or your partner. Take things slow, learn your actual limits, all the usual play safe advice..

>getting your kink on IRL meaning you lose all interest in porn
All the nope.
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Update bump: Had a bit of writer's block on Bluebird, so I am also trying a thing based on that Cadance image.

I'm honestly not sure which I will deliver first, but either way expect something within a few days.
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page 10 safe
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>>27789965
+1
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>>27789965
Ayy lmao,
>draw shitty picture with many flaws
>get quality greens

:^ )

JK, glad you liked it enough to warrant a greenie.
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>>27792691
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>>27760777
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>>27794168
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>>27793481
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>>27789965
>max hype
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>>27797654
>ITT faggots don't know how to remove their bumps
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>>27799091
>Removing bumps
Nah, I like to scroll through them after hitting update. Lets me pretend like stuff is happening in the thread.
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Who is best pony to have as a slave/pet/sub, and why? Give reasons for your choice.
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>>27799708
Pic related, by far.

>instill an emotional dependency on you upon her
>teach her how cruelty can be used as a catalyst to ensure that both war and harmony are fruitful when they are present
>cultivate her potential
>take over the world
>use her power and the world's resources to repeat this process across all realities
>eventually become so powerful and knowledgeable that you can create pseudo sentiences to continue this process for you
>spend the rest of eternity in decadence with your god empress of an interdimensional empire
>all because you taught Twiggy what no pony ever would have
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>>27799708
You. Because BDSM is hot.
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>>27799933
>Germany
YES

fuck didn't even know
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>>27803111
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the stamina of this thread is amazing.

Just let it go already. recover your strength for another one in a week or so..
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Gants Anon, I know you're lurking this thread. How's summer school treating you? How's getting kicked out and having your PC taken away because you were caught writing SiM greentext in class?

You know who this is. You wanna do something about it, get the fuck over here.
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>>27806587
wtf?
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>>27805638
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>>27806587
Buck you asshole! You know its going down. Time and place motherfucker! Or are you too much of a bitch to get your ass beat out the front of my house?

P.s. my parents arent even that mad so looks like im the one laughing now
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>>27809253
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>>27809752
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>>27811084
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>>27811957
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Will this ever be seen here?
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>>27813849
I'd love some NMM bondage loving, but I certainly hope it doesn't involve poking a hole in her wing.
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>>27813975
Birds love it when you do that though. 'm sure it would translate to birdhorse
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>>27814015
[Citation needed]
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Update! I've /just/ finished writing a new one-shot. You'll be seeing more Dirty Laundry pretty soon here. Just working my way through some revisions and proofreading, but the story itself is done.
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>>27814916
I'm looking forward to it
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>>27812757
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>>27817201
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>>27814916
nice
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Oilbird still alive?
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>>27819891
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>>27819288
Yes. There will be an update in the next couple days, friendo.
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>>27822536
hype
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So... #87's kind of a big number for a niche thread like this.

How far off do you suppose we actually are, number-wise?

I mean, we only started adding numbers at around thread 30 or so, and then there were a bunch of half-threads that scruffy kept fucking over, plus the occasional mis-numbered thread.

I think it's plausible that we might actually be pretty close to thread #100.

On another note, does anyone know what's up with mulpwiki? I'm getting a server error.
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>>27824828
I think the thread numbering is correct. Yes there were some odd threads here and there but if the thread gets pruned before it hits even 30 posts, I don't think it should be counted.
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>>27669068

Is there a way to get in touch with you without shitting up the thread?
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totally not bumping
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>>27826252
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still not bumping
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>>27825645
Send a message through pastebin?
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>>27820689
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>>27825645
Preemptive bump due to the current spam. You can message me via pastebin. Also what did you want to say if I may ask?
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27 threads of spam so far. Wonder how many more will be made tonight?
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Got green here in a few minutes. Finalizing a few changes before I post.
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>You are Dirty Laundry
>CEO and founder of Off-White Fashion House.
>…
>You shut the door behind you as the torrential rain continues to pour down outside.
>”Oh! That was a most /wonderful/ evening Mr. Laundry, I do ever so much appreciate your generosity!”
>You don’t pay much attention to the mare, instead removing your shoes and briefly rubbing your hooves against the drying rug.
>”The play was marvelous! I’ve read reviews about it in the papers, but I didn’t think it could possibly meet expectations!”
>Her words fade out.
>Dear /Celestia/ she won’t shut the fuck up…
>It’s been five hours — an awards show, a dinner, and a opera, and she /still/ won’t stop.
>Removing your overcoat and hanging it on the rack to your left, you finally face the mare standing in front of you.
>Rarity.
>Or “Miss Rarity” if you prefer the immature antics of a unicorn born in the middle of fucking nowhere.
>What was it again?
>Farmville?
>You’ve never even /heard/ of Farmville, much less heard of someone born there.
>And the more time you spend around her, the more you wish you never did.
>…
>With an inaudible sigh you help her remove her coat with your magic, before also hanging it up.
“It was my pleasure Miss Rarity; come, why don’t we have a drink?”
>She smiles.
>”That would be excellent.”
>You make your way past her toward your kitchen.
“Then please, follow me.”
>Like a well trained puppy, she does as she’s told, and follows.
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>>27829883
>After a quick walk you arrive in your kitchen and make your way toward the wine rack.
“What would you like to drink Miss Rarity?”
>"I’ll have a glass of Chardonnay, if you wouldn’t mind.”
>You throw on a faux smile.
”Of course.”
>Reaching the wine rack you upon the glass door before removing a cooled bottle of liquor.
>Rioja Gran Reserva
>It’s a Merlot; a red wine as opposed to the Chardonnay Rarity requested, which is white.
>And while a pony like her probably wouldn’t know it, Merlots are substantially better suited for consumption without food.
>Retrieving two glasses you pour a serving in each, and offer one to Rarity, playing up the ‘gentlecolt’ role is expects from you.
“Your Chardonnay Miss Rarity...”
>Casually she grasp it in her magic before taking a sip, making sure to swirl the glass like this is a high-class wine tasting.
>If it wasn’t so pathetic it would be comical; but you suppose a mare like her must be overcompensating for her lack of /actual/ class.
>Lowering the wine glass she smiles.
>”This is excellent! What vintage is it? It must be a few decades at least!”
>You nod in agreement.
”I think it’s something like 50 years if I remember correctly; although I’m not too sure, it’s a gift from a friend.”
>Which is a lie of course.
>But you’ll humor the little mare.
>She’s not the first to try and impress you with their apparent “knowledge” of spirits.
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>>27829892
>Taking a swig of your own glass, you lean gently on the kitchen island, the alcohol from the dinner before making you need the extra support.
>You decide to start the conversation yourself, knowing that letting her lead it would result in you wanting to kill yourself.
“So your Grand Opening is tomorrow if I recall; are you excited?”
>She nods, taking another sip, and taking a seat upon the small stool next to the island.
>”/Our/ Grand Opening darling; this wouldn’t be possible without you.”
>You chuckle.
“All I’ve done is provide you the means — you’re still the creative force behind this new boutique.”
>The mare puffs her chest out proudly.
>“I suppose you /could/ say that, but /Rarity’s Canterlot Boutique/ is still a product of your good will…”
>”I thank you.”
>You take another sip of wine, staring into the dark red liquid.
”So what are your plans to tomorrow evening, after the opening?”
”I wouldn’t mind throwing a small after-party, it’s a big day for you after all…"
>Surprisingly, she shakes her head.
>”I would love to, but I’m afraid I can’t; my parents and little sister will be in town and I’d like to take them out to dinner to celebrate…”
>…
”It’s not a problem, I’m sure we can get together at some later time; we /are/ business partners after all.”
>She nods.
>”Of course, I’d love to have a little get together later on with me, you, and Sassy…”
>There is a brief lull in the conversation, as you both take time to enjoy the silence, accented only by the sound of rain falling on the windows.
>The relative calm gives you a moment to think back on the evening, and why you chose to spend it with this particular mare.
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>>27829904
>As she said, you’re business ‘partners,’ although that description feels generous in this context.
>You aren’t so much partners as you’re an investor.
>You’re letting her use one of your storefront properties at a discounted price; 2,500 bits a month instead of the typical 10,000 bits.
>In exchange, you'll be getting a portion of her profits from this boutique, and any others she wishes to open up outside her little home town.
>And if your instinct is correct, you’ll be the party coming out on top in this deal.
>...
>You see, there are two reasons why you offered her that deal at all.
>The first being the obvious; she’s an exceptional designer.
>Even in the fashion circles you frequent, there have been some passing mentions about a up-and-coming mare from Farmville, who seemed to produce consistently brilliant designs.
>You decided to purchase a few samples anonymously and have a look for yourself.
>Surprisingly, even /you/ were impressed.
>Here is a mare from the middle of fucking nowhere, and her outfits were substantially better than Saddle’s “attempts.”
>And that’s ignoring the hundreds of mares who hopelessly throw mommy and daddy’s bits at one of the “fashion schools” that plague Canterlot.
>It was readily apparent to you that given the proper financial support this “Miss Rarity" could make a name for herself.
>So you offered her a deal.
>Of course, like any naive little filly, she bit.
>It’s a common thread really; mares buy into the fashion industry hype so much they actually believe you can only make it in if you know somepony; so when you toss them a lifeline, they latch on for dear life.
>The truth is much more sinister.
>There are half a dozen ponies perfectly willing to throw you a lifeline.
>But they aren’t there to save you; the end of that rope isn’t a life preserver.
>It’s a fish hook.
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>>27829915
>On the other hoof, it all works out reasonably well for you.
>In the likely event her store /is/ a success, you’ll be recovering your lost rent with ease.
>But the real kicker is in the long-term.
>Once she’s a ‘up and coming’ designer, she’ll want to open up stores elsewhere.
>Fillydelphia, Baltimare, Los Pegasus — even Prance if she’s big enough.
>She builds the brand, and than you kindly piggy back off her hard work.
>After all, most of these mares only have an eye for fashion; not business.
>...
>Your eyes wander to her flank,
>Which of course, brings you to the /second/ reason why you chose to offer her the deal.
>Her body.
>Just by looking at her you can tell she's got some extra meat on her flanks compared to your average Canterlot mare.
>You chuckle, perhaps a little to loud.
>Her ears perk up.
>"What's so funny darling?"
>She takes another sip of wine, adding onto the already substantial amount you had earlier in the evening.
>You play it off.
"Oh nothing, just thinking back to when I opened /my/ first store in Canterlot..."
"You were probably still in grade school when I did that..."
>She takes another sip, looking toward you as if telling you to continue.
"I just remember how nervous I was the night before my Grand Opening..."
>Looking into your wineglass you begin to realize just how terribly sentimental you're getting.
>You clear your throat.
"I just wanted to say I'm glad you chose to spend this evening with me."
>She gives a melancholy smile, aware you cut your story short.
>"Thank you Mr. Laundry, I'm glad to be here with you too..."
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>A much longer, more awkward pause fills the air.
>For a stallion has stereotypically masculine as yourself, you realize just how weird that last exchange was.
>Your eyes do a quick scan of Rarity, who is wearing one of the dresses she designed herself.
>It's actually quite stunning on her; its black and white fabric is accented by purple lace which matches her mane.
>Of course it /should/ be beautiful on her.
>A designer who can't match a dress for herself is a lost cause after all.
>"If you don't mind me asking Mr. Laundry, who designed the tuxedo you're wearing?"
>You look down at your chest before giving a cheeky "are you serious?" glare.
"I've give you three guesses Miss Rarity..."
>She scrunches her nose, suppressing a small smile as she realizes her obvious mistake.
>"Is it Burr Berry?"
>You take a sip of wine.
"Try again."
>"Tom Forelock?"
>You smile.
"He's gay Rarity, and I'm here with you; try again."
>She takes a sip of her wine trying her best to hide her laughter; prompting you to do the same.
>"I'd /hope/ it wasn't you! That jacket is atrocious!"
>She covers her mouth with a hoof, hiding a smile.
"You're right, I think A friend of my bought it from some discount rack store somewhere as a gag gift. Some place called "Rarity's Boutique;" I'll probably throw it away tomorrow."
>She makes a dramatic gasp.
>"You wouldn't dare!"
>Both of you break out into a soft chuckle, laughing at the exchange.
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>>27829951
>After a little more wine she continues.
>"In all honesty I /thought/ it was yours, but I couldn't recognize it from any of your collections..."
>You raise an eyebrow.
"You know every piece from my collections? That's quite an accomplishment; I'm not even sure if I could remember my spring collection right now if you paid me to..."
>She waives her hoof.
>"Don't flatter yourself darling, I figured it would be useful knowing a little about your work seeing that we're partners now..."
>You smile.
"Well that's a very astute eye you have..."
"And you're right; this is actually from my upcoming Winter Collection which I'll be unveiling next week at my showing."
>Her face lights up like any number of mares before her.
>"I /knew it!/ It's wonderful darling! I can't /wait/ to see the rest of the pieces!"
>You take a sip of wine.
"I actually have most of the pieces here in my wardrobe room if you'd like to take a sneak peek..."
>She practically bounces with joy.
>"I'd love t-"
>You place a hoof gently over her mouth.
"But you'll have to keep it a secret; this is it business after all...."
>You give cheeky smile.
>She nods furiously.
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>>27829964
>The walk to the your wardrobe is painfully long; the alcohol in you makes the corridors of your mansion feel like winding passages to nowhere.
>Rarity on the other hand, appears to be holding her liquor well enough.
>So well in fact, that you'd swear she was sober.
>She's trailing a few feet behind you, looking at the various paintings that adorn your walls.
"I didn't know you collected art too Mr. Laundry; your house is like a gallery!"
>You sigh.
>She's not wrong, and she's certainly not the first pony to remind you of these mistakes.
>A number of these pieces could comfortably buy entire neighborhoods.
>But realistically, buying a few tons of salt licks and whorses probably would have been a better idea.
>At least /those/ would have been entertaining. These painting are just…
>"Is that Warhoof!?!"
>You roll your eyes.
"It is; I bought it a few years back at an auction."
>She had to bring that memory up, didn’t she?
>"But I've seen this one before! It was in the Art Museum a few months back on display!"
>Again you nod.
"That's probably true, I let people borrow them occasionally for public use…”
>Mainly to get these fucking things out of the house.
>Having a multimillion bit mistake stare you down every morning isn’t something you’re very fond of.
>She prances up beside you, lightly brushing your trunk.
"Such a /gentlecolt/ you are, giving back to the community..."
>...
>At least it’s paying off some of its debt right now.
>You decide to stop being a prick for a minute, and play into her expectations.
"I wouldn’t say that; it would just be selfish for me to lock these pieces away forever in some private collection like my neighbors do..."
>Her voice gets a softer as she shifts a little more body weight onto you, still looking at the artwork as you pass by.
>"It's still very noble of you..."
>You use your magic to gently grasp her shoulder, pulling her closer.
“Thanks…"
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>>27830001
>Eventually you reach the Wardrobe; Rarity still leaning on you.
>With a flick of the horn you light the candle chandeliers hanging from the ceiling.
>Immediately Rarity perks up and her eyes open wide.
>"Mr. Laundry!! These are gorgeous!!"
>Knowing better than to hold a mare from a dress, you let her go as she descends the small set a stairs before gallops toward the various mannequins which fill the room.
>...
>This room... Always felt weird to you, evening after all these years.
>Being filled with so many expressionless, motionless mannequins...
>It's like a ballroom frozen in time.
>...
>In some ways you suppose it is.
>This was a private ballroom before you purchased this estate, and still carries the decorative architecture expected of such a venue.
>But watching Rarity get lost in the crowd, you realize just how.../strange/ it is.
>Some dummies are wearing full tuxedos and ball gowns, similar to those Rarity and yourself are wearing at this very moment.
>But as your eyes make your way toward the back of the room, their outfits change.
>Heavy winter coats, some made with exotic, expensive furs.
>More practical, but still stylish wear for ponies in offices, or just going about their daily business.
>And then perhaps your person favorite articles of clothing, the lingerie.
>They are what built your empire and payed for this estate after all.
>From this distance, a few of the mannequins almost look naked given the striking lack of material on them.
>But you know each of those little outfits by memory.
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>>27830038
>Your eyes immediately go to the third mannequins from the left.
>An adorable little outfit with thin, almost veil like white fabric, with black lace flower patterns on the corset.
>The black and white tail wrap ring; hoof guards, bridle, and saddle complete the set.
>It's an expensive little piece too, a few thousand bits worth of work in total.
>The majority of mares will wear cheaper outfits for the stallions who can't afford the finer things in life; but for those who can, they're certainly in for a wonderful evening.
>...
>Eventually your daydream comes to an end, as you see Rarity fixate onto a particular dress.
>You descend the stairs and make your way next to her.
"I see you've found something you like..."
>Your voice seems to break her out of her own daydream, causing her to jump before turning to you with a small giggle.
>"Oh yes! This dress is beautiful!"
>You smile.
>Of course she would gravitate straight to your dresses.
>Rarity's catalog is slightly more...limited than your own; focusing primarily on dresses, with the occasional hat thrown in for good measure.
>Something you're confident she'd improve on as she grows and matures.
>"This color pallet is brilliant! I would have /never/ considered using white and gold in a winter collection, but seeing it now, it feels so natural!"
>Your eyes turn to the dress in question.
>It's large - almost like a ball gown, but slightly more practical, and far less 'fluffy,' allowing the mare's body to be the focus on the outfit rather than the dress itself.
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>>27830054
>You make up some fake story.
"The idea hit me during a walk last winter; it was snowy outside, and I saw one of the Palace domes contrast with the snow around it..."
"It was beautiful; I knew I had to capture it in my work..."
>She looks back toward the dress, gently brushing it with her magic.
>"Well then, I do say you succeeded…"
>You watch her expression carefully.
>The way her eyes twinkle looking at the gown...
>The way her mouth hangs ever so slightly ajar...
"Let's have you try it on..."
>She jumps, turning toward you.
>Perhaps realizing how she was gawking at the gown, she blushes, and retreats a step.
>"Oh no! I- I'm perfectly fine; I don't want to intrude on your display here..."
>You shake your head.
"I have dozens of these already in production, besides, I'm interested to see how beautiful you'd look in it..."
>The severity of her blush only increases.
"I insist Rarity..."
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>>27830068
>Finally, she concedes.
"If you're certain it won't be a hassle.."
>You reach under the dummy, unbuttoning the dress before carefully removing it.
"Trust me Rarity; it’s my pleasure..."
>She nods weakly, before looking down, and slowly unbuttoning the bottom of her own gown,placing it onto the now naked mannequin.
>Standing face-to-face with each other, you steal a moment to take in /her/ naked form.
>Even though most ponies walk around naked, getting undressed near another pony was still considered to be a somewhat intimate affair, and the burning red blush on her coat as well as her stare into the distance makes it clear she realizes this too.
>There has always been something... erotic about a mare with jewelry and makeup on, but no dress.
>You feel yourself getting... excited.
>...
>Thankfully, your musings are brief enough that she doesn't notice, and you quickly lift the dress over her, before slowly lowering her onto her body.
>Making full use of the opportunity, you caress your magic down the side of her body, eventually reach underneath her trunk.
>I-I can button it up, you don't need to-"
"It's fine Rarity, I've done it a thousand times before..."
>The confidence in your voice comforts her slightly, and she nods, clearing the way for you to continue.
>One-by-one, you grasp the bottoms, securing them from front to back.
>Mid-way through she looks up at you; her eyes twinkle in the candle light.
>Using your magic, you instinctively brush aside the small part of her mane hanging over her eye.
>Your body takes control, and you take a step forward, closing the distance between you.
>You lean in.
>She closes her eyes.
>Your lips meet.
>You kiss.
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>>27830084
>Time seems to stand still as you secure the last button on her dress.
>At first the kiss is gentle -- tame.
>You drag your magic ever so gently up her sides, making your way toward her neck.
>The kiss gets more intimate.
>Your tongues meet, and you easily take control of the kiss; her nervousness all too apparent.
>Most mares are intimidated by your reputation and power: she's no exemption.
>After a few moments you decide to give her a minute to collect herself.
>You gently pull away from her lips, and move toward her neck, trailing gentle kisses along its length.
>Her head tilts up, and you feel her moan gently.
>"Laundry..."
>Using your magic, you begin to trail underneath her again, caressing her in a intimate, almost romantic manner.
>You pull away from her neck.
"You're so beautiful..."
>After a moment, you return to the kiss.
>She's much more prepared this time, her tongue playing with yours.
>You hear a gentle clop, as she lifts and replants her hooves out of pent-up nervousness.
>Your magic trails even further back toward her flank, then down toward her teats.
>You feel her gasp in the kiss, and pull away for a moment, before leaning back into the kiss.
>A rush of blood to your stallionhood prompts you to pull away,
"Let's go upstairs..."
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>>27830106
>Her eyes go wide.
>She freezes.
>Instantly, whatever fire existed in the moment is extinguished, as her nervousness is palpable.
>"I..."
>You lean back in for a kiss, but she leans away retreating a step.
>Realizing the situation is deteriorating, you try talking to her as you set your magic on her withers.
"Come on Rarity, we had fun tonight, and I'm sure there's more to be had..."
>As her install shock wears off, you can see her realize how awkward she made the situation.
>"I-I'm sorry Laundry, I just wasn't ready for- I wasn't expecting-"
>You gently shush her as you carefully close the distance between you.
"It's ok, I understand..."
>You plant a gentle kiss on her neck.
"Now come on let's go to my bedroom..."
>As you pull away you see her eyes are closed - her head shaking.
>"I'm sorry, I can't... I just can't..."
>Half confused, half annoyed, you speak.
"Why? What's wrong? I thought we had a good time tonigh-"
>"We did, we did..."
>You can see her eyes getting moist.
>Celestia, here come the waterworks.
>"I can't Laundry, not right now...I- I haven't done.../this/ before...I'm- I'm a..."
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>>27830123
>She's a virgin.
>...
>She's in the /fashion/ industry, and she's a virgin.
"You haven't had sex before, have you?"
>She shakes her head furiously, her humiliation clear.
>You sigh.
"That's not how this works Rarity..."
"I don't know how it works in Farmville, or wherever you're from, but in the /real/ fashion industry a stallion like me doesn't just help a mare's career without getting something in return..."
>Her eyes get even more watery.
"And don't fucking cry, you aren't 12 years old anymore, mommy and daddy aren't here to hold your hoof."
>"I'm sorry... I-"
>Her voice is as dry as it is soft.
"I don't expect you to be a whorse or some shit, don't get that impression, but when I take you out "on the town" or whatever the fuck you call it- and spend a few thousand bits on opera tickets, I expect something in return..."
>A silence fills the air.
>"I could... We could make out if you'd-"
"Make out? Dear Celestia are you fucking six!?"
"I /want/ to mount you Rarity - I /want/ to take you upstairs and make you scream my name! Not fucking "make out" and hold hooves afterward!"
"You're twenty something! You should know enough about this by now to know how things work!"
"I'm the /only/ fucking connection you have in this city! I would have /hoped/ you noticed that and figured it would be a good idea to keep me happy no matter what!"
>As you were expecting, the tears start coming.
>"But we're business partners... We have a deal..."
"And any mare with two fucking bits to rub together would know when sex is implied! You think I'm just going to promote your business for free? That I'm giving you such a generous offer out of the goodness of my fucking heart?"
"There is a /reason/ why all the female designers in Canterlot are attractive Rarity, and it's not because they're fucking related!"
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>>27830139
>There's a long pause.
>She doesn't even try to talk to you.
>You aren't particularly upset by the fact either.
"Get out of my house, I have things to do."
>She shakes her head.
>"I'm sorry Laundry, I didn't mean to- let me make this righ-"
"I'm not fucking a mare whose tears are going to stain my bed with mascara."
"Get out, or so help me this six month lease will be the full length of your career."
>Knowing you aren't messing around, she nods, and begins to try removing your dress.
Keep it. And learn some /common fucking sense/ before you come back to my house.”
“The next time you wear that dress /I’ll/ be the one taking it off you.”
>She again nods.
>”I'm sorry... I'm sorry."
"Grow up Rarity…”
“Go get some sleep, I'll give you your dress back tomorrow after the opening."
"You have to deal with the press, you can’t afford to look like a mess in front of them on your first day."
>She nods once again, squeezing her eyes shut before turning, and practically sprinting out of your house.
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>>27830150
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>An hour or two has passed.
>At least you assume it has.
>You can't really tell.
>You're drunk.
>The now empty wine bottle sits across from you in the table.
>Resting your head on the marble counter, all you mind will let you think about is that stupid mare.
>Rarity
>It's fucking mind blowing how naive she is.
>Did she honestly think you didn't expect anything?
>Did she simply not know?
>Did she think that she was going to keep her tail pinned down her entire life?
>That she was going to wait for her Prince Charming to sweep her off her hooves?
>Sex is /expected/ of ponies like her trying to make their way in fashion.
>It’s a cold, hard, tried and tested truth.
>And if she wants to ignore it…
>...
>It doesn't matter.
>If she wants a career, she'll be back.
>If she's not, you'll just bury her resume and blacklist her from Canterlot, Fillydelphia, and every other city you can think of.
>At the end of the day, the world needs Dirty Laundry more than it needs a prude like her.
>/You/ hold all the chips in this game; and you’re certain she knows that too.
>...
>But right now, at this very moment, it doesn’t feel like that.
>She’s off… doing whatever, and you’re hear blue-balled, drinking alone in your kitchen.
>Your mind all but forces you to imagine what she’d be like in bed underneath you.
>How you’d make her /scream/ with pleasure as you fucked her hard.
>The cute little squeals she’d probably make.
>The clapping of your balls against her skin.
>The vice grip of her virgin pussy.
>…
>/Fuck/ you want her right now.
>Any number of mares would have /payed/ to be in her hooves tonight, and she just throws it away!
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>>27830172
>The idea of sleeping in your kitchen crosses your mind.
>Wooden Floors aren’t /that/ uncomfortable to-
>The sudden feeling of stomach acid in your throat breaks your train of thought.
>You close your eyes for a moment, and wait as the bitter taste disappears, and wave of dizziness fades.
>...
>You’re pretty sure you smile like a brewery of some sort at this point.
>Or an alcoholic at the very minimum.
>…
>The idea of a warm bed suddenly seems really, really nice.
>Cautiously you stand up, using the island for support once again, this time in a much more substantial way.
>But after a moment, you manage to right yourself.
>If nothing else, wealth has forced you to become really good at holding your liquor.
>Closing your eyes for a moment to focus yourself, you cast off from the kitchen island, setting course for your bedroom.
>…
>You thought that line was cheesy didn’t you?
>It makes a lot more sense when you’re drunk.
>A few years later you arrive at your bedroom door.
>You’re instantly drawn to the small opening in the door, and gentle light radiating from inside of the room.
>You… you don’t /think/ you left the lights on before you left.
>...
>Then again you’re drunk, so your memory doesn’t count for very much right now.
>To impatient to actually think about why the lights were left on, you clumsy push the door open.
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>>27830187
>Your eyes are immediately drawn toward your bed.
>More importantly, the pony waiting on top of it.
”Saddles, what’r you doing in my room?"
>She jumps, looking up from the book she was reading, and practically tosses it off the far side of the bed.
>”Laundry!”
“Why are you in my room, you have your own, and it’s like one in the mor…”
>Your mind grind to a halt as you actually take the time to /look/ at Sassy Saddles.
>It takes but a moment to recognize what she’s wearing.
>The black and white lingerie from your Winter Collection.
>It’s slightly bigger than the one downstairs, but the appearance is unmistakable.
>”I- I was waiting for you to get home!”
>”I wanted to have a little celebration before tomorrow…”
>Her ears flicker down.
>“I didn’t think you’d be bringing her home…”
”Don’t you have work tomorrow? I got you a manager position at Rarity's Boutique…”
>She nods.
>”Yes I know, I just….”
>Her tail flicks as her eyes drop lower.
>”I wanted to spend the night with you… to thank you…”
>Your mind finally kicks in.
>She wants to have sex.
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>>27830203
>You look over her body as you make your way toward the bed.
>The lingerie looks… nice on her.
>A different color pallet would do wonders for her coat, but given what’s in the house, that wasn’t an option.
>It /does/ however, fit her /very/ well.
>Her tail wrap is nice and tight, making things easily accessible when needed.
>As you approach, you see her tail twitch again.
>You look up at her face, towards her bridle and bit.
>Her bit which isn’t in.
>You lift it to her mouth.
“Bite.”
>She turns back toward you.
>”What? Laundry, we haven’t ever-“
“You want to thank me? Then tonight you aren’t going to use words. You’re going to be my little whorse and whinny...”
“Now bite.”
>She looks at you with a hint of fear and confusion, then turns toward the bit only inches from her mouth.
>She takes a long look at it before slowly leaning forward, placing it into her mouth, and bites down.
>You pull sharply on her reins while pushing down on her withers, forcing her to sit still.
>She gasps sharply as her neck cranes back and tries to adjust herself to find some support.
>Unfortunately, laying on her stomach makes that near impossible.
>You can hear her nervous panting whistle past the bit in her mouth.
>For some reason, you smile.
>She’s a pretty mare, you must admit.
>With a body like hers you’d have expect her to be a model; not a designer.
>In all honesty, she’s one of the nicer mares you’ve ever had.
>But you aren’t going to let her know that.
>…
>Her hooves shift again and her tail flicks rapidly before settling slightly higher than before.
>Her breathing grows a little more frantic.
>She wants you; you can smell it in the air.
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>>27830243
>You give her flank a firm slap with your magic.
>She grunts.
“You’re whorse, you know that right?”
>She tries to adjust herself, but another firm slap to the flank quickly reminding her to sit still.
“What would have happened if I brought Rarity up here? If she saw her future employee spread out on my bed like a groupie?”
>She moans in an attempt to speak.
“But you don’t care do you? You just want my dick, don’t you?”
“You want to fuck your way to success just like all the other mares in this city…”
>You give another firm tug on her reins.
>She fights against them, and looks you dead in the eye.
>Her eyes are watering.
>Her breath is labored.
>Her tail is at full mast.
>”phheesh…”
>Her muffled words find their way to your ear.
”You really want this, don’t you?”
>She nods weakly, fighting the reigns.
>…
>You close your eyes and sigh, feeling yourself getting excited once again.
”Whatever, I want this too.”
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>>27830272
Done.

Feels good to be back at it. It's be a ///long/// time since I wrote you guys some green, so I'm really excited to finally give you guys something again. I won't be really long in the post-posting (har har) notes here, since I want to give you guys some time to digest it. But I want to give a huge thanks to Olibird for proofreading this for me. I'm sure there are still a few mistakes, but I'm sure you guys remember how poor my proofreading was before. It's (hopefully) much better now.

Please leave your feedback, comments, reviews, suggestions etc below. I'll drop replies as needed.
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>>27830319
good stuff, nice to see some green getting posted, and yours never disappoints.
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Can Any1 link me to any decent fics where dashie is kept as a pet? Nsfw is fine, even requested. no applejack preferably
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>>27833229
Sounds like Broken Bluebird would be right up your alley http://pastebin.com/G97Nn1XW
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>>27833828
Unfortunately I've read that one
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Hope never dies bump
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>>27830319
Holy shit that's a big chunk of green.

Unfortunately I won't have time to go through it till the weekend, but really looking forward to it.
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>>27836515
never say die
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>>27824828
read the wiki

>>27825558
>if the thread gets pruned before it hits even 30 posts, I don't think it should be counted.
when I was being the background thread person keeping everything recorded and updated, I only counted the thread as a number if it had green in it.
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>>27837127
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>>27838758
never say never
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>>27842856
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>>27842856
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>>27830319
Hey, great to see this story/character continued.

The good:
Definitely feels polished. Only noticed one typo:
>>You’re pretty sure you smile like a brewery of some sort at this point.
(assume smile should be smell)

I love the Dirty Laundry character, and this did a good job of continuing to build on him. It's hard to build a character from the ground up, but you've definitely pulled it off. I also like what you did with rarity.

>>The sudden feeling of stomach acid in your throat breaks your train of thought.
>>You close your eyes for a moment, and wait as the bitter taste disappears, and wave of dizziness fades.
This was a particularily good bit of descriptiveness. Something anyone who's done the whole drinking while pissed off thing can probably relate to. I could practically feel that taste when I read it.

The about-face when Rarity refuses sex was good. More interestingly, I like that Dirty Laundry isn't playing head games or trying to intentionally manipulate these ponies, he just gives the impression of being a naturally narcasistic asshole and this is just how that manifests itself. I got the impression that this wasn't a manipulative ploy, this is just how he views the world and was genuinely shocked/pissed off when it didn't work out. Again, really interesting and authentic feeling character.

I love that Rarity didn't cave and actually left.
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>>27850379
(cont)
The bad:
Biggest issue I had with this is the pacing in the beginning. There was a bit of a hook with some of Dirty Laundry's more cynical remarks about the industry, but then it felt like there was quite a slog where Anon was playing nice. I know I have a short attention span, but if it wasn't you and I didn't know it was going to get exciting eventually I may well have stopped reading. It was a good bit of character development for both of them, but it started to feel excessive to me.

The payoff also felt a bit abrupt. I suspect that's what you were going for, and it was powerful and probably a lot of what was going on there didn't really need to be spelled out or expanded on .. but it still felt disproportionate to the massive buildup at the beginning.


Anyway, overall liked it. I loved this story during the story contest, so definitely psyched to see it wasn't just a one off.
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bumpo
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>>27830272
thats a lot
thx
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>>27737042
Yeah it went fucking everywhere. My idea was more or less doing a "chapter" for each of the mares that joined anon's herd.
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can't take it anymore bump
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>>27849085
CAN'T WAKE UP
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>>27855046
SAVE ME
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How is this thread different from that one >>27796055 ? Do you really need 2 of them?
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>>27855599
Because the other one is filled with self admitted un apologetic white knights whos entire thing is taking former slaves/servants and rehabiliating them
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>>27855599
I think it's because BDSM varies a lot from person to person, including their level of tolerance to it all. Some people are okay with heavy bondage and non-con and some people aren't. Like how you have casual sites of BDSM content and then you have full blown waterboarding BDSM content on another. People in the SPG tend to not like a lot of the content posted here and vice versa.
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>>27855868
people on spg are light weight pussies that deserve deletion
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I had by now my next batch ready to post, buuuuuuuuuut that typical selection error which deletes you A FUCKING HALF of your fucking 2+ weeks of green. I cry now in a fucking corner out of Satan's wrath.
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>>27855599
We don't, honestly. We shared threads for a bit during the beginning of the Scruff storm with no problem, and frankly it might even help the green in this thread reach more readers. There's a very vocal opposition, though.
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>>27856421
And again, this is why you write in a document stored on your hard drive...
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>>27856421
Damn. That actually hurts me just /thinking/ about that happening. I remember accidentally deleting a post worth of Octavia POV and feeling defeated for the rest of the day. To lose a substantial amount of green really sucks.

On the upside, if you want to re-write it you already know the story. Chances are the actual green will end up being better too. That's been my experience at least.
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>>27855599
Huh SP used one of 'our' OCs as their OP again. I guess we have someone from SP lurking here.
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>>27857130
the artist posted it in both threads, same with the Cadance one.
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Stayin' alive!
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>>27858075
yep
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>>27857130
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>>27857321
Fair enough, I suppose they do fit both threads fairly well, if titles are any indication. I don't go in SP so all I was seeing was the pictures set as their OP thread thread following from when they were posted here.
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Duracell thread aka My Loyal Anon, Bumping is Mandatory.
I'm still thinking about starting some green.
But I should probably read more Mr.Nameless to get a better feel for this thread.
Maybe it should be CYOA-esque. Not a CYOA but in intensive dialogue with its readers.
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>>27836515
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>>27660170
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>>27861992
>Escapade post green, I'm the only one that bothers reviewing it
>Nothing but bump posts for like 2 days afterwards
>People asking for more green

This board is weird sometimes.
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>>27862308
Maybe it's time to let it go? No feedback usually kills generals.
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>>27830319

Proper review time.

So, this was a shift from your normal fare, and frankly benefited for it. While it arguably does sit in your 'normal territory' where a character in command confronts a weaker one and tries to 'educate' them on 'how things are', it's also firmly out of the norm in that Dirty Laundry is both not objectively correct and is shown to be an uncompromising scumbag. Perhaps a scumbag with a somewhat sympathetic background, given the first story with him, but still a scumbag - it's very apparent just how he views everyone around him as tools, not even bothering to remember where Rarity is from and forcing Sassy to silence herself and reduce herself to just an unspeaking thing to be used.

You also make excellent use of the house itself. Having Dirty store his designs in a ballroom - something meant to be occupied by people (or ponies, anyhow) and instead filled with his own products - goes very far to show how isolated he is. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but that Dirty gets drunk in the kitchen - a space that ought to be in use from servants, but apparently he can't even handle those - was also a good touch.

The only criticism I can make is that, in fact, it doesn't reference the first story enough. When Sassy Saddles presents herself to Dirty Laundry, there's no real reference to their first encounter - no reminiscing on how he once had to force himself on her, and now she is freely giving herself to him. I'd have thought that shift would be important to Laundry's line of thought, now that Rarity is occupying the position Sassy once did. Similarly, the conflict and uncertainty he showed in the first story isn't so much highlighted here; he seems to have fallen back on his old ways of thinking.

Despite all of this, I say this is some of the best character writing you have done in a long time.
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>>27862389
Nevar!

Honestly though, I think it's more that the thread has become slow/hesitant to jump into anything that's not one of the big ongoing stories (which may well in time kill the thread).
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One day things will happen.
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>>27862767
You have a point.
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Yes. I am bumping this thread.
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>>27867780
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Bumpity-boo
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ded thred
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bumpo
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>>27682753
They're not too far off from pegasi.
Their primary difference I would say would be their more useable as hands wings, an interest in some insects over pure plants, eyes being more perceptive at night while slower to react to light changes how you go blind from outside to inside, they have it much more frequently, better hearing with a plausible chance of echolocation I would say they are better at haring, and can just better place sounds, as opposed to actual sonar

As for me, I started something of Lyra buying a bat pony slave was unsure what I wanted after thinking it through, of Lyra being a sadistic "human" free pony, or just simply an escaped slave trying to keep up image and finding the bat pony was the cheapest she could buy.
For the allure, its the extra xenophilism, not just enough to be about a pony, its the idea that even to ponies bats are foreign and odd.
The breaking part would be a bit more fun, the idea being a bat pony would be much worse off with blinders or flashing lights, loud sounds and all.
That there isn't a need to do physical pain compliance, just a simple dog whistle instills pain.

Once broken, their allure isn't as good, its more to me the breaking physically part, with a chance of sexual dominance, such as grinding on their body as they try to resist or some heavy groping, but no penetration or sex.

A slave should be put in their place sadisticly, and painfully, their body desecrated and debauched.
But the idea is not sexual yet entirely my cum gallons tier fetish
A broken bat pony I would see going as being an exotic pet or slave, with a chance at being hardier than a pegasus for flight duties, but less maneuverable and slower.
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>>27872951
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>>27875955
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>>27869824
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>>27875083
Interesting analysis: Regarding the second option for Lyra, why would she break a slave if she is just trying to "keep up the image"?

(Not criticizing, mind you, just wondering. It sounds pretty damn good.
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>>27877601
Well it was more I came up to either option as being a thing and quit unable to choose and thus write more.

The two notions I had were,

1) Lyra wants to be a human, flat out she is the worm that walks like a man, doing everything she can to ct human after having escaped slavery. Humans are sadists, she's a sadist. Humans drink tea and eat meat, she does that.
All because that is who she sees herself as.

2) She is a damaged goods escaped slave, took a frying pan to her flanks to sear off the slave brands on her CM and managed to succeed in a bluff check for the healing to fix all the scar tissue.
She, as a free pony, is expected to have a slave pony. For the same reason you are expected to have a Facebook or Twitter account today.
So she now has to deal with the horror of what she went through, by seeing a slave and knowing she has to deal with the fact that questions she does not want will be asked if she doesn't get one.
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>>27878772
That sounds very interesting
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>>27858075
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>>27882670
Oli, whatchu doing uploading my unfinished trash

So, I finished this base recently and I wanted to make it publically available to all of you for use, so, here is the imgur link for NSFW: http://i.imgur.com/qwsf0gd.png

Have fun I guess.
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>>27882889
Yaaay! Coloring book!
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>>27882889
Nice.
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>>27878772
>2)
Ah, it sounded more like she'd be happily going into it, but this makes a lot more sense.

...frankly, I like it. If you're having trouble picking, go with 2.
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Never gonna give you up.
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>>27884650
1) was her happily going into it, a bit too happily for it really.
Sort of like Cupcakes happy where she doesn't even care what the batpony did was a security guard that fucked up and got sent to the meat market and just wants something to be sadistic on.
Was probably going to feature bolt cutters at the base of the wings, telling him to make her cum before she squeezes to tight and they come off.
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>>27885462
Never gonna let you down.
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>>27885695
Yikes. That sounds like a bit.much, even for this thread. Yeah, better go with the second option.
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>>27886801
So then this is a bad point to ask about the idea of a griffon buying from the meat market a pony to make it clear to the other slaves what happens if they step out of line?
Specifically, they will get eated?

Remeber as a background point, meat market slaves are supposed to be dead within some period of time, these aren't the sort of buy and keep forever slaves, their punishment is degradation from slavery followed by death.
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Finally swallowed defeat and begining the rewriting course bump
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>>27886847
what kind of edgy equestria are you from?
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>>27890135
The fun kind where ponies are defeated and used for chattel and more.
You know, much like American slavery, but with the predator prey twist.
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>>27890582
>ponies used for chattel
yes
>much like American slavery
yes
>with the predator prey twist.
yes
all good things, but a fucking meat market where you buy a live sentient creature for you to kill and eat?
don't get me wrong, I'm not a vegan, I eat meat with every meal, but that just edgy.
what's up with batfuckers and being weird.
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>>27890668
Oh no no, eating isn't a standard thing, just the requirement those particular slaves are to be dead in two weeks and remains/proof of death shown.

There's plenty of apocryphal tales in the towns where meat markets were made of local nobility buying meat slaves to have snuff sex with.
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>>27891784
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>>27891784
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>>27892574
>>27893160
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Ok let's try for something more content worthy.

Lightning Dust, Spitfire, and Gilda are out on a practice cloud.
Lightning Dust and Gilda are vying for the one open cadet spot and a chance at slurping on that skittley sweet mare ass.

Spitfire however is getting bored.
Lightning Dust is very much the better flyer, and has already been in the Wonderbolts before, much to her dismay.
Gilda however flies like somebody trying to park a Buick that is actually the fucking USS Iowa in a motorcycle spot.
Unfortunately there is not much of a competition here, particularly after Gilda does so bad just returning to the cloud, the mailmare with the swivel eye actually flies better.
Spitfire has until the end of tomorrow to choose the new cadet the letter tells.
What tricks and gamesmanship can Spitfire use to get Gilda into a wonderbolts suit over Lightning Dust?
Quite obviously in this thread, Spitfire is raking into both of them and putting a proper fear of respect into them, if only for now nonsexually, but certainly dominating.
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>>27894524
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>>27895281
Sorry, the only thing close I have written makes little sense for this thread and would take too long to make work.
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That's fine.
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>>27894524
Dead tired right now, give me some time to think on this and I'll get back to you.
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these threads are archived r-right?
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Why does Dashie look so good dolled up / in chains?
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>>27898122
Its the perfect way to start plucking her feathers one by one.
To go and paint over that CM with something more appropriate to her.
When you can leave her hanging over a box fan feeling like she is constantly crashing.
Where you don't get to just cum in that ass, you can wreck it entirely and forever as you hear her sweet little sobs of violation.
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This is a post solely for the purpose of bumping
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>>27899340
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So what exactly does submission mean here?
Is it doing as told?
Giving up all control on life?
Putting yourself into a certain hierarchy?

How do collars and leashes work with this?
Why are some ponies shown with a bridle and others have full body suits?

What does blinding a pony do?

Why do some have bits and other gags?


At what point is the pain pleasure?
Is breaking a bone pleasureful?
Plucking wings or manes?
What about whippings or fire?
How is a beating pleasurable?
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>>27900776
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>>27901972
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page 10
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>>27904442
it's almost at 500
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>>27897006
Nice. though all the features (eyes, wing, cutie mark) seem disproportionally small. Body shape and mane/tail are spot on though.
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dead thread
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>>27904491
Can't take credit for something I didn't do. I just liked the image although damn if I remember where I got it from.
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>>27904507
glimmered
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>>27905710
bump
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>>27901066
>So what exactly does submission mean here?
Submission is the change from being a strong independent pony to a pone that recognises that master is in charge.
>Is it doing as told?
yes.
>Giving up all control on life?
yes.
>Putting yourself into a certain hierarchy?
yes.

>How do collars and leashes work with this?
completely optional.
>Why are some ponies shown with a bridle and others have full body suits?
again, that's not compulsory but completely up to the "master's" preference.

>What does blinding a pony do?
Stops it from being able to see, obviously. Re-phrase the question.

>Why do some have bits and other gags?
Two completely different things; A bit is part of a bridle made to steer a horses head when riding it. You normally put a bit on a pone that's already under control.
A gag achieves something totally different; noise control.

>At what point is the pain pleasure?
after the virginity is taken.
>Is breaking a bone pleasureful?
What? No, what gave you that stupid idea?
>Plucking wings or manes?
No fuck off.
>What about whippings or fire?
change "fire" to "hot wax" and then the answer is "sometimes"
>How is a beating pleasurable?
It's not, "physical harm" is not my fetish and it's clearly not yours either from your stupid questions, you do realise there are plenty of sub/dom stories that don't involve leaving the pone half-dead? In fact that kind of ending is very rare.
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