[Boards: 3 / a / aco / adv / an / asp / b / bant / biz / c / can / cgl / ck / cm / co / cock / d / diy / e / fa / fap / fit / fitlit / g / gd / gif / h / hc / his / hm / hr / i / ic / int / jp / k / lgbt / lit / m / mlp / mlpol / mo / mtv / mu / n / news / o / out / outsoc / p / po / pol / qa / qst / r / r9k / s / s4s / sci / soc / sp / spa / t / tg / toy / trash / trv / tv / u / v / vg / vint / vip / vp / vr / w / wg / wsg / wsr / x / y ] [Search | Free Show | Home]

Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #16

This is a blue board which means that it's for everybody (Safe For Work content only). If you see any adult content, please report it.

Thread replies: 497
Thread images: 127

File: image.jpg (428KB, 1676x1940px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
428KB, 1676x1940px
Bacon edition
>Previously on Law and Order SVU
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27453418/#q27453418
Hey everyone. This is the superhero general, starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing Spider-Woman. Any and all mlp/superhero discussions, green, and art are welcome.
Fifteenth Anniversary Edition
>Pastebin List
Featured: Our newest addition: Voidborn
http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG

Live writefags by storysize:
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (in parts)

Dead Writefags by storysize:
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon - http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
Remember, keep calm and Excelsior on.
>Thread Theme
http://youtu.be/iFKAgx6-ZnE
>>
>>27491494
the thing about features is that they should change
beans is alive again
>>
>>
>>27491538
Couldn't be bothered to change it
>>
File: 1461436111601.jpg (176KB, 1024x1363px) Image search: [Google]
1461436111601.jpg
176KB, 1024x1363px
Now that that's over. LET THE GREEN FLOW!
>>
>>27491494
Best edition.
>>
>>27491556
then what good are you, prequels-liker?
>>
>>27491578
Let it go
>>
>>27491578
Hey now, let's not hold bloke's highly-questionable taste against him.
>>
>>27491596
You wanna 'av a go at me m9?
>>
>>27491623
I'd rather keep posting pics...
>>
File: image.png (467KB, 900x1000px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
467KB, 900x1000px
>>27491645
I'll show you pics...
>>
>>27491661
M-Muh heart...
>>
>>27491494
I'm not dead
I'm just a little writing impaired
I'll try to post something soon, but between studying, exams and work, it might take some time
>>
File: image.jpg (106KB, 1280x720px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
106KB, 1280x720px
HEY GUYS CAN I JOIN TOO
>>
File: qXZ2QTc.jpg (71KB, 350x449px) Image search: [Google]
qXZ2QTc.jpg
71KB, 350x449px
>>27491686
go be a spider nigga somewhere else.
>>
>>27491686
Sure, I think a Miles is fine too.
>>
File: image.jpg (83KB, 494x750px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
83KB, 494x750px
>>27491715
>>
If I'm not going to post greens, I might as well post Spideys.
>>
>>27491741
Don't worry I'll have a post ready soon
>>
File: image.jpg (126KB, 500x667px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
126KB, 500x667px
>>27491741
You'll need me as well
>>
>>27491758
Noir spidey's so cool...
>>
File: Deku_Link_Artwork.png (1MB, 1236x1468px)
Deku_Link_Artwork.png
1MB, 1236x1468px
>>27491494
Didn't realize it was Deku Scrub edition.
>>
>>27491494
>>
File: image.jpg (1MB, 3000x1875px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
1MB, 3000x1875px
Here comes the cavalry!
>>
>>
File: image.jpg (165KB, 745x1024px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
165KB, 745x1024px
>>27491806
Oh yea? Take this!
>>
>>
File: image.jpg (336KB, 1024x1581px)
image.jpg
336KB, 1024x1581px
>>27491897
Hey grill, whatchu doing later?
>>
So, does anyone have any story ideas they'd like to see?
Not saying I'd write them, just curious to know what ideas people have that they'd hope to see.
>>
>>27491968
From you or from anyone?
>>
>>27491968
still the symbiote anon, clinging all over sunsets body and make her feel everything more intense.
>>
>>27491977
Just in general. An idea for a story you have in your head, but lack the compunction to produce it, that's all.
>>
File: image.jpg (238KB, 1290x900px)
image.jpg
238KB, 1290x900px
>>27492032
>Symbiote lewd
>Agent Venom Anon
>Spider-Shim 2099
>Cyclops Vinyl
>Green Ranger Anon
>Spider-Carnage
>Big crossover story with all the Spider-Shims we've seen so far
>>
>>27489886
>Her carefree nature also seems to be reminiscent of your rainbow-haired friend, but her headphones that fail to contain all the music she listens to seems much more like a neat little callback to this one girl you’ve seen around CHS…
>You’re pretty sure her name was Vinyl Scratch, but you don’t know that for sure other than that she’s apparently an extraordinary DJ.
>However, this girl’s lax nature differed though and you could tell by the smile on her face.
>Whereas someone like Dash or Vinyl is cautiously aware of their surroundings despite being absorbed in their own music or activities, this girl seems to ignore not only her environment but her social exhibitions--hence why she literally just snapped a picture of you so up close without so much as saying “what’s up?”
>Not that you mind that much, though.
>I mean, truth be told: you’d wanna take a pic of HER ass, after all.
>She then stares at the picture on her phone for a second, nod with a smug smile of self-satisfaction, starts to hum to her music again, and walks away as her rock music leaks through her cheap headphones.
>For some reason, you feel a certain desire that make you start walking after her immediately.
>Almost hazily in a trance, you take several steps to pursue her cease when you feel a heavy hand on place itself on your shoulder.
>It’s Commissioner Gordon’s hand.
>You blink for a few seconds and clear your mind a little; you know, trying to shake off the haziness.
“Hey, what gives?”
>He smirks at you.
>“You know, kid, you remind a bit too much like myself when I was your age,” he says with a complacent smile.
>>
>>27489075
>Be Sunset.
>Laying down on your bed, wearing a pink silk nightgown and you can’t sleep.
>Looking at your alarm clock, you see that it’s 9:37 pm.
“Why can’t I sleep?”
>You’ve been trying to fall asleep for the last hour but you’ve been thinking of what happened earlier today.
>You ran around school searching for Anon and you held him down while demanding another date.
>Not your best moment but Adagio just makes you so mad.
“Maybe I should apologize.”
>Sliding you legs off the bed, you get off the bed and walk towards your vanity mirror.
>Picking up your phone, you scroll through your contacts till you reach Anon’s number.
>You hesitate a little, wondering if he’s awake or not.
“I’ll just call and leave a message.”
>You hit the call button and you hear the phone ring.
>RIIIIING.
>RIIIIINNG.
> “Hello?”
>Well guess that answers if Anon’s awake or not.
“Hey Anon, it’s Sunset.”
> “Sunny, is everything ok?”
“Yes everything’s fine.”
> “You sure, I could be over there in a few minutes.”
>You feel a bit tempted to say come over but decide not to.
>You don’t know if you want to see his reaction to your current state of dress.
“I’m sure and I called was to tell you that we don’t need to go on that date tomorrow if you don’t want to.”
>You hear him laugh a bit tiredly.
> “Sorry Sunny, but you’re not getting out of that date that easily.”
>You couldn’t help hugging yourself as you walk over to your bed.
“But I feel bad demanding a date from you.”
> “Hey, we were bound to go on another date sooner or later. So It’s not a problem.”
>You sit on your bed smiling.
> “Now what should we do tomorrow?”
>>
>>27492123
Nice save Jim, who knows what sort of lewd acts she would have performed on him
>>
>>27491968
Anon is a hostage to get to spider-shim. However, this happens so often that he no longer responds with fear, instead he is incredibly sarcastic and often mocks the villain who has captured him. After all, if they were going to kill him they would have done it before. Eventually, he gets so annoying that he either convinces a villain to reform, or throw him out.
>>
>>27492206
“How about noon?”
> “That’s fine.”
>He yawns a little.
> “Is there anything else you need Sunny? I’m a bit tired and want to sleep.”
>Shaking your head, smiling at his blunt response.
“No, I just wanted to apologize. But anyways I just want to say I love you and goodnight.”
> “I love you to Sunny and wish you were here.”
>You hang up the phone and lay back down on your bed.
>Grabbing your yellow and red pony plushie, you hug it close to your chest.
“Wish Anon did come over and see me right now.”
>You remember that you have your phone in your hand and get an idea.
“Maybe Anon will see me tonight.”


>Be Anon.
>You just finished talk to Sunset about your date.
>You just hope it’s better than last time.
>BEEEP BEEEEP!!
>You check your phone to find that you have a text from Sunset.
“Did she forget something?”
>Shrugging, you open the text to find a very interesting pic.
>The shows Sunset wearing a red silky nightgown that ends at her nice ass and hips while bending forward to show some cleavage.
>The text that follows said, “Think of me in your dreams.”
>You’re not sure if she’s messing with you or not, but one things for sure.
“I’m gonna have to save this.”
>>
>>27492219
He'll show fear when Rhino tries to do butt stuff with him
>>
>>27491968
I had an idea where Spider-Woman is trying to bone Twilight, but shoots web. The reaction Twilight would have practically writes itself.

Of course I can't write this due to my own established canon, but it's still a funny idea.
>>
>>27492230
All for now gonna write the date tomorrow. Thoughts?

>>27491968
Generally speaking I would like to see a green were Anon has to deal with a few variations of Spider-Sunset living with him and wanting him.
>>
>>27492265
>Anon has to deal with a few variations of Spider-Sunset living with him and wanting him


I'm just gonna keep this in mind for later...maybe...

It sounds like a fun idea.
>>
>>27492219
I'd like Anon reforming Starlight like that, It would be a good reason to have one of the powerless Anons to start learning magic, or not.
>>
>>27492219
Or what if Anon becomes friends with several of spidey's villains and has a poker night or something where they all meet up? I'm thinking of that scene from the JLU cartoon with the flash and the trickster.
>>
>>27492219
That's actuay pretty funny. I quite like it.
>>
>>27492277
I'm surprised no one did the idea with the Web-verse being out
>>
>>27492278
Comics Fan Anon trying to teach Starlight about Truth, Justice, and the American Way in spandex?
That could be fun too.
Man, you guys are full of sweet ideas.

>>27492281
*actually
>>
>>27492265
Please have something big written.
Thats all I ask, something nice that won't leave me hanging on the edge of my seat betwix deliveries.
>>27492307
Thanks.
>>
>>27492357
I'm gonna try to have a good number for tomorrow, that's all I will promise
>>
>>27492307
>She's a magical girl with great power but couldn't care less about being responsible
>He's a comic book fan who's read all about the responsibility, but without any power
>Together, they fight crime!
>.... Now if only they could decide on her superhero name...
>>
>>27492289
Web-verse? The fuck's that shit?
>>
>>27492405
I might have got the name wrong but I meant that comic were they show the different Spider-mans
>>
>>27492437
Spider-verse. That's what you're thinking of.
>>
File: image.jpg (414KB, 900x1366px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
414KB, 900x1366px
>>27492289
You mean the Spider-Verse?
>>
>>27492472
The extended skull one on the bottom left. Who it is?
>>
>>27492481
Spider-Monkey
>>
File: image.jpg (907KB, 2400x1924px)
image.jpg
907KB, 2400x1924px
So many Spiders, so little time
>>
>>27492557
... two of those are Silk, tho
>>
File: image.jpg (59KB, 633x537px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
59KB, 633x537px
>>27492576
Hey, who turned out the lights?
>>
>>
>>27492307
Personally, I'd go the extra mile for a protective, lightweight and utilitarian yet stylish sneaking suit. Both have their pros and cons, but I wouldn't take my chances with guns, superpowers or not. What do you guys think about this kind of thing?
>>
>>27492735
Spandex gets you labeled as a fetishist by storeclerks.
Military equipment gets you in watchlists and texas.
>>
File: No+capes_948eac_4393047.jpg (34KB, 500x581px) Image search: [Google]
No+capes_948eac_4393047.jpg
34KB, 500x581px
>>27492735
B-But muh superheroes...
Though it would be very funny to see Glimmer go full "No Capes!"

>>27492769
it's all about striking a balance
>>
>>27492778
>If it goes lower than your knees, it will get you killed!
>If it stays far from the floor, it will be a problem regardless!
>>
File: image.gif (754KB, 389x184px)
image.gif
754KB, 389x184px
>>27492778
Remember that time Disney had a villain get sucked through a fokin jet engine
>>
>>27492852
Remember that a duck will slow the engine and force a plane to an emergency landing.
He probably went to moraly-relative-afterlife with a few dozen souls.
>>
>>27492735
Do you think that love can bloom on the battlefield?
>>
>>27492769
Texas, man.

>>27492778
You don't have to look like a scarlet macaw to do the right thing. And I like the idea of her listing off random superheroes being screwed over by their capes.
As for the balance. Dark hex patterned spandex or something something similar? Like Spidey's black spandex when he began rolling with Venom.

>>27492917
Yeah... I do.
>>
File: image.png (57KB, 316x355px)
image.png
57KB, 316x355px
>>27492230
Oh my, yes.
>>
>>27493058
I had a revelation, about Starlight being a mutant who can supress others powers, she would be an antihero like the punisher, just slightly less violent.

She enters the scene, the supercriminals powers stop working and she breaks them with less-lethal weaponry, mainly her steel staff which ends in a cattle prod, she would beat the shit out of them before leaving, broken bones, internal hemorraghea and all that. She wouldn't be against shooting someone if there is no other choise, but it would be 'last resort'. I think she would be a paragon of fitness and would fight backed by [/fit/] normal people wearing the same oufit.

Those were my thoughts while brewing a cup of coffee for my boss.
>>
File: image.jpg (238KB, 612x916px)
image.jpg
238KB, 612x916px
There is a distinct lack of Jay Garrick in this thread
>>
>>27493332
I recognize the suit, but I have no idea about the name.
>>
>>27474051
>"So you have no direct control over them... hmm, I doubt that will do for very long, I imagine the Void will give you a power to at the very least direct them in a general direction eventually, but for now, if that is all you have for your offensive abilities..."
>She grinned at you, her appearance suddenly almost feral
>"Let's learn about your defensive capabilities!~"
>Oh fuck
>The way her voice changed at the end there
>...that was both terrifying and arousing
"O-okay!"
>She begins to float, the powers of the void faintly swirling around her momentarily, her hair growing longer and longer until it formed three distinct, ethereal whips around her
>The tendrils came together in front of her, sparking purple
>Then came the giant laser
"holy FUUUUUU-"
>your voice was cut off by the noise of the laser as it blasted right for you
>You tried to dodge it, but you were too slow
>it blasted into your shield, which, thankfully, held
>the blast sent arcs of purple light past your head, diffusion from the laser
>You stared it down, mouth open in a silent scream of pure fear until a second later your shield fell, and you were suddenly taking the full brunt of the laser
>It seared into you, almost rooting you to the ground
"AAAAAAAAH!"
>You screamed in pain as it started to burn THROUGH you, seeming to almost dissect you, even though you could somehow tell it hadn't actually burnt through you, it sure as hell felt like it.
>You fell to your knees as the laser finally stopped and Luna landed back on the ground, her grin gone, replaced with a look of worry
>"Oh dear..."
>That was the last you heard before you passed out
>>
File: image.jpg (708KB, 1200x600px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
708KB, 1200x600px
>>27493379
>not recognizing the first Flash
>>
>>27493408
Nononono, I recognized "First Flash".
But thats all.
>>
File: image.jpg (75KB, 580x430px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
75KB, 580x430px
>>
gooey friends
>>
>>27493248
Pretty nice, but what about her magic gimmick? Are we going thermonuclear astrophysics for this?
>>
File: image.jpg (39KB, 500x312px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
39KB, 500x312px
>>27493735
Heh, you said goo
>>
File: 1462554751882.gif (3MB, 713x713px) Image search: [Google]
1462554751882.gif
3MB, 713x713px
>>27493789
>>
>>27493837
Lewd
>>
File: 497780-146.jpg (124KB, 1200x675px) Image search: [Google]
497780-146.jpg
124KB, 1200x675px
>>27493850
good
>>
File: yoga.jpg (29KB, 358x796px) Image search: [Google]
yoga.jpg
29KB, 358x796px
Post hips.
>>
File: image.jpg (125KB, 640x960px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
125KB, 640x960px
>>27493871
So you're holding the story hostage unless we provide you with hips?
Fine you madman
>>
File: image.jpg (190KB, 1280x1269px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
190KB, 1280x1269px
>>27493871
>>
>>27493871
Here's Spider-Hips
>>
>>27493401
>You woke up with... holy fuck chest pain
>You groan weakly, looking around
>you're in a hospital bed
>greeeaaat
>last thing you remember is getting blasted in the face with a big purple laser
>...fuck you Luna.
>Fuck
>You
>Taking a closer look at your surroundings, you realize your hospital bed... isn't in a hospital
>It's still inside the warehouse thingy Luna has
>well, that's better than what you were expecting
>Having to explain a giant hole in your chest to your parents would have been hard
>You look down, finding yourself bare-chested
>no bandages
>nothing
>no burn marks or anything
>what in the high holy fuck is going on here
>you pat your chest, wincing a bit
>it hurt like a bitch, but there was nothing on the outside that showed it
>actually, now that you looked at yourself
>...when the hell did you get buff? or at least, muscular
>what used to be a layer of flab had become a well defined six pack
>huh
>well, guess the Void found something in you worth devouring after all
>thanks, you guess
>you slowly sit up, and find Luna staring down at you
>holy fuck you're blind sometimes
"...what the hell is wrong with you?"
>She continued to stare, writing something in her fucking clipboard
"Hello? Earth to Luna? You just SHOT ME WITH A LASER!"
>She nodded
>"Yes, yes I did, and not only did you survive, you completely blocked best attack with your shield for one point five seconds"
>...for fucking real
"...that was your best attack, and you used it on me"
>"...yes? I do not see your issue with this, if I had not tested you, something else would have, and I doubt they would carry your limp body to a bed after you passed out"
>okay maybe she had a point
>you sighed, wincing as your chest moved, it still stung like a bitch, but gradually, the pain was lessening
"Mind explaining why there's not a hole burnt in my chest?"
>"well that's quite simple, Anon, you regenerated it"
>are you
>FUCKING SERIOUS
"How fast?"
>"You have been unconscious less than an hour"
>>
File: 1448524782087.png (306KB, 954x815px) Image search: [Google]
1448524782087.png
306KB, 954x815px
>>27493871
but hips are lewd...
>>
>>27493888
Or maybe he's writing lewds and needs inspiration.
https://derpibooru.org/535815
https://derpibooru.org/733249
>>
>>27493935
Luna is Worst Mentor.
Worst.
Mentor.
>>
File: image.png (617KB, 1047x587px)
image.png
617KB, 1047x587px
>>27493947
Come on kid, all the cool people are doing it.
Don't you want to be cool?
>>
>>27493972
B-But... lewd...
>>
File: image.png (416KB, 2250x5000px)
image.png
416KB, 2250x5000px
>>27493871
>>
File: image.png (223KB, 554x1440px)
image.png
223KB, 554x1440px
>>27493993
Shhhhh, don't fight it
Just enjoy the ride
>>
File: hips are great.jpg (1MB, 2550x3300px) Image search: [Google]
hips are great.jpg
1MB, 2550x3300px
>>27493888
Nope, I just tried weed for the first time, and I want hips more than usual. And I'm giggling at absolutely fucking nothing. Kinda weird amd shit.

I'll deliver though, don't you worry. Probably tomorrow...
>>
File: such lewd.gif (1020KB, 490x275px)
such lewd.gif
1020KB, 490x275px
>>27494014
O-Okay...
>>
File: image.jpg (92KB, 1172x616px)
image.jpg
92KB, 1172x616px
>>27494028
But Beans, drug are addictive and illegal
>>
>>27494028
You should write now and edit later when you've ridden it out. Might be worthwhile.
https://derpibooru.org/413081
https://derpibooru.org/1144216
>>
File: dick is diamonds.jpg (106KB, 500x750px)
dick is diamonds.jpg
106KB, 500x750px
>>27493907
Whew lad...

>>27493966
>pic related
>>
>>27494052
It's a one time thing. I ain't ever doing this shit again. There's not even a buzz, I just feel giddy. I'm just hungry, my mouth is weirdly dry, and I'm slower.

>>27494065
Ok, I'll try this...
>>
>>27494111
"They said I wouldn't get hooked after the first hit"
>>
>>27494124
Bloke, I don't even drink. I'm not going to do weed ever again after this. It's not really all that good anyway.
>>
File: image.jpg (140KB, 1600x736px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
140KB, 1600x736px
>>27494132
Good, there has never been an instance where a person's life improved because of drugs
>>
>>27494151
I literally fell off my chair laughing at this and I never fucking do that.

AYLMAO
>>
File: huh.png (239KB, 500x500px) Image search: [Google]
huh.png
239KB, 500x500px
>>27494151
>4:19
>4:20
>>
File: 1453514996570.gif (3MB, 320x180px)
1453514996570.gif
3MB, 320x180px
>>27494042
>>
>>27494132
My sister did it once. She was very disappointed and frustrated by the fact that she was in that daze you get in when you're about to go to dreamland but wasn't able to actually fall asleep. She feels it isn't the right kind of escape.

Trigger warning: anthro
https://derpibooru.org/1016530
https://derpibooru.org/1016531
https://derpibooru.org/1016533
>>
>>27494251
This is basically porn
>>
>>27494280
I'm not complaining.
>>
File: fa0.gif (2MB, 640x360px) Image search: [Google]
fa0.gif
2MB, 640x360px
>>27494280
>>
>>27493746
Go Warlock route. Give her a grimoire (can be linked to Equestria, or not) and a ritual to contact a higher patron. She hid this from her henchmen/minions/fellow norman persons.
>>
File: Camerabeast.jpg (378KB, 2000x1280px)
Camerabeast.jpg
378KB, 2000x1280px
>>27494532
>She summons some mad as fuck wank demon as a last resort
>Everyone except her is awestruck and afraid
>But mostly afraid
>>
File: Malzahar.jpg (173KB, 1215x717px) Image search: [Google]
Malzahar.jpg
173KB, 1215x717px
>>27493935
>you'll think it again
>ARE YOU
>FUCKING SERIOUS
"You lasered a hole through my chest and I'm supposed to believe it took LESS THAN AN HOUR to heal up?"
>"Well, that is quite simply the truth, dear Anon, you have a healing factor, less than that of most other Voidborn, in fact, though faster than my own."
>This is bullshit of the highest caliber
>but you believe it
>because the only other option is her laser didn't actually do anything
>and pain like that is... pretty much impossible to fake to your knowledge
>so
>apparently you can heal from some fucking serious injury in under an hour
"So... why am I not dead? Legitimate question, because as far as I'm aware I kinda need a heart to live and you kinda melted that with your laser"
>"Oh, silly Anon, I did not put the laser through you! It may have felt that way, and I do apologize for that, I should have waited a while longer to put your body through such strain, if only for the more conclusive results. In any case, your heart did not stop, it was merely chared to almost a crisp"
>...
>WELP
>you're basically immortal
>...as long as you keep murdering people
>You slip your feet over the side of the bed
"Where's my shirt?"
>"Oh, ahem, it appears to have burnt up in the beam, however, I have some... replacement clothes, that I feel would suit you better"
>...
>hang on you don't have enough ellipsis to match your current emotional state of pure "wat"
>.......................................................................
"Why? Why do you think I need new clothes?"
>"Well, so that your identity can remain hidden, of course! Here, do try this on, it is made of cloth infused with Void energy, so it should change it's size to match yours"
>You were handed a faintly glowing purple cloth, and slipped it over your head, noting the hood that came up with it, and a scarf that covered your mouth, hiding your face.
>The voidcloth shrunk to fit you
~It feels GOOD~
>Wait
>that wasn't your voice...
~What else does this do~
>>
>>27494654
Make it a Telugoroth, a timestream creature gould be a golden way to link it to her canon story. And being learned from a grimoire lets Anon/Sunset keep it in mind to pull a "One More Day"
>>
File: image.png (425KB, 1027x539px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
425KB, 1027x539px
>>27494169
Speed Force. Not even once.
>>
File: 1464493844994.jpg (807KB, 2988x5312px)
1464493844994.jpg
807KB, 2988x5312px
Have a uncomfortable pic m8s!
>>
>>27495100
Uncomfortable indeed, why are you eating canned cat food?
>>
File: 1445301104154.jpg (346KB, 1328x2133px) Image search: [Google]
1445301104154.jpg
346KB, 1328x2133px
>>27495100
But why?
>>
>>27491968
Blue beetle anon.
>>
File: 1464493907026.jpg (41KB, 400x424px) Image search: [Google]
1464493907026.jpg
41KB, 400x424px
>>27495123
I don't know
>>
kinda quiet tonight, surprised I'm not getting much feedback, but whatever
>>27494692
>"Hmm? oh, it disguises your voice, lends it an air of command, useful, considering what you will most likely be doing while wearing that"
>The cloth was light, and seemed to keep you at your perfect temperature, and it was incredibly soft
~Do you have more o-~
>you pull the scarf down
"god that's weird, anyways, do you have more of this stuff? I kinda like it..."
>she giggles
>"I have a stockpile, I suppose I could let you have some extra, though if you intend to wear it, there's more from that outfit, here"
>She tosses you a set of blue underclothes and purple pants to go over them, a set of metal gloves -oh that would be useful to hide your glow- and some boots
>There was also a belt with a sword on it, but you... somehow got the feeling that was purely ceremonial
"Thanks, but I was hoping to make something else out of the stuff, it's... really nice, like, better than silk in terms of softness and stuff, I was kinda hoping to use it for blankets and pillows"
>the giggle became a laugh, and you sighed, putting a hand against your face
>"Oh Anon, you are quite adorable sometimes, but to answer your question, yes, I have plenty of the cloth left for you to make a blanket and pillows out of if you so desire"
>your face is turning red at this point, and you're starting to stutter out of embarrassment, which only made you more embarrassed
"T-thanks... c-could you turn around so I could try this other stuff on?"
>she smirks coyly
>"It's nothing I haven't seen before, Anon, I had to examine your whole body to keep track of the regeneration, after all"
>...WELP
>Luna's a fucking psychopath, AND a perv
>God damn, just your luck
>Get awesome super powers
>but you have to kill people
>get a mentor to help learn about your powers
>she's a creep who's easily twice your age and yet somehow has the body of someone so much younger
>...fuck it
>you strip quickly, tossing your old clothes away...
>>
>>27495374
I'm liking it so far, but you might want to wrap this whole training scene up and get to the shimsham real quick like.
>>
>>27495533
Aye, it's almost over, once he really gets into his new clothes it'll be time for dimmerdong to meat shimmysham
>>
File: 1462915014735.png (2MB, 2550x3509px)
1462915014735.png
2MB, 2550x3509px
Bump
>>
File: image.png (67KB, 248x300px)
image.png
67KB, 248x300px
I'm not saying any of you should write him into a story, but one of you should definitely write him into a story
>>
File: 1460249162573.png (159KB, 625x351px) Image search: [Google]
1460249162573.png
159KB, 625x351px
>>
>>27495374
>...fuck it
Oh he better. moonass is best ass.
>>
>>27497483
We need a stalker Spider-Shimmer
>>
>>27493401
Luna is Vel'koz.
Called it.
>>
>>27498087
Well I mean, no shit, she's a void born who's in control of a school, a place of knowledge, I thought it was pretty obvious
>>
>>27495374
>Luna mumbles something under your breath as she scribbles something down
>"Physical condition... peak... examine... capabilities...
>you think you know where she's going with that, and considering how fucked up your life is right now, you... don't really care that she wants to jump your bones
>You glance into the mirror
>Your whole body is evenly toned muscle, with maybe a light layer of fat over it all
>Well, that explains why she wants a piece of you
>Shit, if you were gay and had a cloning machine you'd probably fuck yourself, you look that good
>The Void has granted you a wonderful gift, with a terrible price
>But you've already proven you're willing to pay that price
>Are you a monster for that?
>Or are you just a man trying to keep himself alive?
>Is there a difference?
>You'd find out soon, you supposed as you slipped on the underclothes -a blue shirt and underwear-
>Next came the pants, which you found breathable, and light, with plenty of freedom of movement, on top of the already amazing qualities of the Voidcloth
>Then you slipped the robe back over your head, making sure the long piece was in the back
>Belt and boots and you were suited up
>The whole thing felt simply incredible to wear
>You pulled down the facemask and looked back at Luna, who nodded approvingly
>"Excellent, I assume they are to your liking?"
"Yes"
>"Good, now, if you will excuse me, I will be slipping into my own garb, and then we shall put your powers to the real test"
>Wait what
>You thought you were done for tonight
"Wait, what do you mean?"
>"You have your hunger to sate, I have mine, and our goals coincide, thus, tonight I am going to... oh how do you younger folk put it... 'take you out on the town' and feed upon the masses"
>...das fucked up
>dat's just straight up FUCKED
>She's basically asking you on a date
>to go murder people
>this is your life now
>...fuck, there's no other choice is there
>No real hope of mitigating damage either...
>Fuck
>Do or Die, Anonymous
>>
>>27498415
Post-Murder-Fuck when?
>>
>>27498415
"...um, okay, I guess, I mean..."
>You sigh
"I'm still getting used to the whole "Killing people" thing"
>She nods solemnly
>"I understand, that is why I will be going with you, to ensure the fact that you are uncomfortable with your duty does not prevent you from preforming it, and, if you require, to comfort you in the aftermath."
>Well shit
>You don't really have a choice
>Might as well just get it over with, try to avoid killing children so you feel slightly less horrible
>You pull up the cloth, covering the lower half of your face
~When do we start~
>She smiled, a warm, genuine smile
>Which just made you all the more uncomfortable
>"As soon as I change into my disguise, after all, I cannot risk being discovered and captured while we sleep"
>Wait hold up
>While WE sleep?
>She leaves before you can ask about THAT choice of words, which leaves you forced to assume the worst
>Or would that be the best
>On the one hand, she's your vice principal, easily twice your age, and fucking psychopathic
>On the other, you'd lose your virginity to that smoking hot body
>you shake your head, sighing as you walked out the door of the little emergency room she had set up
>Here you were about to fucking murder people, and all you can think about is sex
>Definitely leaning towards monster right about now
>You look around the warehouse, which was... mostly loaded with books
>And almost all of them were in languages you couldn't fucking understand
>Most of them had to do with science, from the looks of it
>Understanding the world around us
>Even as that world was fucked sideways by the Void
>You hear a door behind you and turn, looking at Luna
>She wore a purple facemask with her hair wrapped in three long, purple tendrils, and the rest of her body was covered in... grey? you think it's grey armor.
>Said armor made her look sexy as all hell
>why did you think that
>now is not the time to think with your boner, Anon
>"Well, are you ready to leave, then?"
"...Yes, let's go."
>>
>>27498496
>soon™
>>
File: dpKr845.gif (2MB, 320x179px) Image search: [Google]
dpKr845.gif
2MB, 320x179px
>>27498519
>>
Ah damnit I forgot to use the "Void Voice" marks instead of his normal quotation marks, I'll fix that in the pastebin
>>27498510
>The two of you leave the warehouse, and then climb up on top of the school to get a view
~So, do you have a plan?~
>"Yes, indeed I do, you see, my hunger cannot be sated with mere killing, I need assets in order to collect what I need, and on this world, assets are rather difficult to come by, therefore, we are going to collect what I need from the bank, where you can feed on the guards"
>Bank Robbery
>Welp
~Any chance I get a cut of the cash?~
>"Well of course, An- hmm, that is a problem"
~What is it?~
>"I cannot call you by that name, lest we reveal our identities... ah, there is a solution"
~We don't use names?~
>"No, we simply use the names given to us by the Void"
>wat
~The Void gave us names?~
>"Well of course, it has to identify us by something, and it does not understand human names, I'm shocked you did not realize this, do you not already know yours?"
>You thought about it
>Your name
>Anonymous
>Anon
>Then the Voice with no Voice put the thought in your head
>Malzahar
>Felt... Egyptian
>But you liked it
~Malzahar~
>"Ah... I am Vel'Koz, it is a pleasure to be on this quest with you"
~I would say the same, but I still have a little bit of a moral quandary dealing with, you know, murdering people~
>"Well, that is why we are doing this, the faster you become accustomed to this, the more useful you will be to the Void, come, let us begin our conquest"
>You both floated down off the roof, almost gliding towards the closest bank in your small suburb around New York City
>It was late now, almost 8:00, the bank would be about to close
>You both stood just outside the doors, and you took a glance around
>No one had seen you the whole way
>Good
>"Before we enter, Malzahar, I wish you to keep one thing in mind - be quick, for I have heard there is someone locally who has powers capable of giving us a fight"
>There's someone out there
>Good.
>>
>>27498947
wait a second malzahar? vel koz? league of legends inspired i guess? vel would rather kill anon than help him
>>
>>27499425
It's been that way since the start, I confirmed it a long time ago, and, from what I've seen of Vel'Koz, it would use Anon and his powers as a tool to gather more knowledge and THEN kill him. As long as Malz!Anon is useful, Vel gets more knowledge, why would it destroy a powerful tool?
>>27498947
>You felt legitimately better, knowing there was someone who could potentially stop you
>You still had some problems with murdering people, and breaking the law in general
>But you had to do this if you wanted to live
>Luna -Vel'Koz, you guess- had already put a laser through you as a TEST
>If the Void didn't kill you for refusing to kill others, she would
>just... get this over with, make it as quick and painless as possible for them
~Let's go~
>You shoved aside your doubts as you burst through the doors with Luna at your side, you could deal with the guilt when you weren't doing something risky
>Like robbing a bank
>At first, people just gave you strange looks as the two of you stormed across the marble room towards the tellers
>Then Luna shot a strange projectile forward, between the two security guards.
>It split, hitting both of them and making them stumble, groaning in pain
>You took your queue, wincing as you summoned forth the gateways to the Void, the two projectiles cutting right through them, killing them
>You kept moving, not looking at the dead bodies as you made it to the Tellers, who were currently panicking, having already pressed the button to call the police
>"Money, now! In the bag!"
>She held out a large sack of Voidcloth, and the Teller complied, opening her register and tossing money into it
>"Kill her" she snapped at you once the poor girl was done
>You complied, blasting your basic Void energy forward at her head, killing her as quickly as possible
>Four
>Four people you've murdered
>and as you looked around, you only saw more potential victims to your slaughter
>You pushed those thoughts away as Luna kept moving, collecting money
>Damn it
>>
>>27499549
ok that kinda makes sense velkoz using anoin as tool
>>
>>27499549
>You followed her, killing every single Teller
>You tried to make it quick and painless, but you knew how the Void did it's work
>You kept your self hatred pushed down though
>Luna could easily turn on you if you didn't kill who she said to kill
>And you knew you couldn't win that fight
>Soon, the whole row was dead by your hand
>you followed her to the back of the building, where the vault was kept, and watched her use her so-called "Best attack" to blast it open
>inside was loaded with cash on shelves, and you even saw a few gold ingots
>you helped her grab it all and shove it into her Voidcloth bag, which seemed to have an almost infinite space
>you were about to leave when you heard a female voice from up to your left
>"Hey, Arabian nights!"
>You looked up, and there you saw what would become your arch-nemisis
>A woman, hanging on the ceiling, in a red and blue spandex suit
~Is this the person you spoke of, Vel'Koz?~
>"Yes, yes it is"
>Luna glared up at her
>"We meet again, Spider-girl"
>"Um, excuse me, it's Spider-/woman/, please get your names right, you hentai nightmare"
>holy fuck you almost laughed out loud
>"I don't have time for this, Malzahar, kill her"
>You blinked, then nodded
~Very well~
>"Uh-uh, you stay right there tentacles!"
>The girl launched some white substance at Luna's feet, rooting her to the ground
>You stepped up in front of her, opening the gates of the Void to kill her
>She almost got out of it, jumping away, but the projectiles hit her leg, and she fell awkwardly, seemingly trying to throw another white projectile your way
>"What gives? Uugh, stupid fucking web slingers are broken again, fine, we'll do this the other way!"
>She launched herself at you, fist aimed right at your face
>your shield was in the way of that though
>her fist collided with it, and you thought you heard a *crunch*
>"Ow motherfucker!"
>You took the opportunity to back up a bit as she fell away, though you stayed silent
>you need to work on your banter
>>
>>27500267
"~I don't have time to deal with inse-- I'm going to squash you like a--...Just die~"
>>
File: ofuck.jpg (42KB, 500x258px)
ofuck.jpg
42KB, 500x258px
>mfw I legitimately can't bring the bantz for Malz!Anon because I'm not clever enough
I need to read more spiderman comics to figure this shit out
>>
>>27500922
If can't do playfull bantz then just try with menacing, even if it's bad you can have the other characters react to it.

"Welcome to the splatterhouse, kid"
-That's the best you have? A NES title?
"That and the building over you" Drops it.
>>
>>27500267
>Seriously, you've murdered how many people now?
>Eleven
>Eight Tellers
>Two Guards
>and Flash Sentry
>Eleven people
>And you couldn't come up with some good one liners
>What kind of super villain were you?
>Because you were a villain, that much had become clear
>This girl in front of you, with her form fitting spandex with a spider on it, was the Hero
>Wait, a spider?
>Yes, something to poke fun at!
~Well, little bug, I suppose it's time I introduced you to your friends!~
>You called to the Voidlings, summoning one in the tiny hall you were in, and hoping it moved towards this Spider-Woman
>It did, as Luna had disappeared with the cash... somewhere
>You'd find her later, for now
>You heard sirens out front
>Even as the bugs were multiplying around Spider-Woman, you started to float away as fast as you could
>"Hey, come back here, OW mothe- WHY ARE THERE MORE OF THEM!? GET OFF ME YOU PURPLE PUNKS!"
>You snickered to yourself, opening a nearby side door and making your escape
>Or, you would have
>had there not been a SWAT team right in front of that door
>"GET DOWN ON THE GROUND, HANDS BEHIND YOUR H-"
~SILENCE~
>You cast your void gates at the group, making their guns start to smoke and melt, now effectively neutered
>They started to run, but you called to the void again, and this time something else came out
>A purple cloud covered the head of one of the team leader, and he began to scream, falling to his knees, and then all the way to the ground, the purple cloud suddenly popping over to another SWAT member, causing the same thing to happen
>Until all six were dead
>Seventeen murders
>You had a feeling this was only the beginning
>But you couldn't think about the atrocity you just committed, you had to run
>And run you did, escaping the bank and making it back to Luna's warehouse inside the school
>the whole situation had taken only a bit over an hour to finish
>You had killed sixteen people in an hour, and robbed a bank to boot
>Villain status confirmed
>>
>>27501507
He could always become a Punisher style vigilante how just kills criminals. He would still be at odds Spider-Woman because you know 'Killing is bad'. Still better than being a straight up super villain, in my opinion.
>>
>>27501610
The story started with Anon killing spider-woman.
>>
>>27501637
I haven't been paying attention but,
Why is anon murdering people?
How can you have a spider-shim story if she's dead?
>>
>>27501658
It's a weird life story idea, telling Anon's story
>>
>>27492230
>Be Anon.
>You’re in front of Sunset’s house to pick her up for the date.
>You walk up to the door and knock.
“Hope nothing happens today.”
>The door opens to reveal Sunset wearing a simple purple halter top, an orange skirt and heels.
>She even had a small red purse hanging from her shoulders.
> “Hey Anon. Ready to go?”
>You cock your eyebrow.
“Yeah, you in a hurry?”
>She grabs your hand and drags you away from the house.
> “My parents wanted to do something embarrassing.”
>You smile and walk beside her.
“Aw, and I wanted to see your cute baby pictures.”
> “Not if I can help it.”
>You just laugh as her whole face blushes.
> “Let’s get going, ok?”
>You pull her arm, stopping her, as she looked at you confused.
“We’ll get there, but.”
>You break her grip on your hand and slip your arm behind her.
>You pull her close to you and begin to walk towards the park.
“Ok now we can go.”
>Sunset just nods as she rest her head on your shoulders.

>It only took about ten minutes to get to the park.
>You just walked around the park with no purpose except enjoying your girlfriend’s company.
>You asked all kinds of stuff ranging from ‘What’s going on,’ to ‘What crazy things Pinkie’s been up to’.
>Sunset answered all your questions and she even asked some of her own.
>Soon you decided to just walk and window show.
>Sunset walks towards a shop and looks at the window.
>You talk your time as you make your way towards Sunset.
“Why did you stop Sunny?”
>>
>>27502059
>She doesn’t answer, she just looks at the window.
>Looking up you see two mannequins dressed in a snow white dress and a black suit.
“So thinking about prom? Or maybe something else?”
>Sunset looks away from the window as she stammers.
> “N-no I wa-asn’t thinking t-that. T-they ju-st looked nice, that’s all.”
>You roll your eyes at her.
“Sure you weren’t. Let’s go look around some more.”
> “I want to check something first.”
>She walks inside while you stay where you are.
>Sunset comes back out a minute later and grabs your hand gently.
“Got what you came for?”
> “Sorta, just wanted to ask them something.”
>You nod, knowing she asked about the dress.
“Well, let’s go. I need to get something to drink.”
>Walking around you see a familiar face walk out a bookstore with a stack of books.
“Hey Twilight.”
>Said girl turns around and waves at you and Sunset.
> “Hey guys, what’re you doing?”
> “We’re on a date, Twilight. We just saw you and figured we’d say hi.”
>Twilight nods as she tries to hold onto her books.
“Need help with those?”
>She shook her head as she struggled to hold them.
> “I’m fine and I better get going. And Sunset, I need you to show you something later.”
>Sunset looks a bit excited.
> “You mean..?”
>Twilight nods at her question.
> “I’ll come by as soon as I can.”
> “Alright, bye Sunset, bye Anon. Have a nice date.”
>Twilight starts to walk away as Sunset waves goodbye.
“See ya Twilight and don’t tell Pinkie.”
>You could hear her laugh as Sunset giggles.
> “Why don’t you want Pinkie to know?”
>You give her a dry look, like she’s an idiot.
“She would throw a party for us and do you want a party to randomly happen if we have lunch or dinner?”
>Sunset’s eyes go wide and nods.
> “She must never know.”
>>
>>27501658
because this is a flash back sorta deal
and Shimmy isn't dead, this started with her ABOUT to die
>>
>>27502088
>You’re returning to Sunset’s home with Sunset happily hugging a small wolf plushie.
“You really love that thing, don’t you?”
>She nods as she looks at you.
> “Of course, you did win it for me.”
>You’re just outside her front door when it opens to reveal a woman with red and orange hair wearing a simple white dress.
> “There you are Sunny-Bunny. I was wondering when you would get back.”
>Sunset sighs as she hugs her mom.
> “Well I’m back mom.”
>Se let’s go of Sunset and looks at you.
> “Now did the two of you eat dinner yet?”
“No we decided to go home cause we were feeling a bit tired.”
>Mrs. Shimmer smiles as she holds the door open.
> “Well why don’t you stay for dinner. And I can show you Sunny-Bunny’s baby pictures.”
>Before you could answer Sunset starts to push you to the sidewalk.
> “Oh what’s that? You need to go home?”
>She spins you around and gives you a quick kiss on the lips then spins you back around.
> “Hate to see you go but I’ll see you later. Goodbye.”
>Once you’re on the sidewalk Sunset runs back to her house, pulls her mother in and closes the door.
“Well, that happened.”
>You begin to walk away as your phone rings.
>You take the phone out of your pocket to see a text message from Sunset.
> “Sorry Anon. I’ll talk to you later. Love you.”
>You end a reply saying it’s ok and that you loved her back.
>You put your phone away as you start to walk home.
>>
>>27502143
Good. Now I can actually bother to read your story. Why everything I write sounds scornful? I just mean that the snippets of your tale I've read over the last few days were pretty interesting, but without their link to Shimmy and the Spider-Shim theme it becomes (as I see) Lol fanfiction, and that is most uninteresting to me. Your declaration has given me hope to endure.
>>
>>27502211
The dates done and action will happen tomorrow.
Gonna try to figure out how Sunset will find out about Anon's powers. Thoughts and ideas?
>>
File: TsVJMfb.gif (607KB, 300x169px)
TsVJMfb.gif
607KB, 300x169px
>>27502211
When he finally gets his hands on those baby pictures I want him to make copies and them the all their friends. Cuteness overload.
>>
>>27502143
I really hope we get some redemption for our hero. I'll keep reading even if there isn't, and you can do whatever it's your story, but I would rather self insert as a hero than a murder puppet from the depths of space.
>>
>>27502249
That thing Twilight wanted to talk about. It's about Sombra right?
>>
>>27502285
It could be anything.
New material for their costumes, a vibrator, a love potion or even bondage gear.
>>
>>27502249
A simple one is having a villian attack with only one place to hide, but no way to hide from each other, so it becomes a stand-off of who suits up first to save their lover.

>>27502311
D) All of the above.
>>
>>27502311
Oh I love it when like that.

>>27502325
I like the way you think.
>>
>>27502325
Like the idea. Still thinking of Sunset seeing Anon transform into the Angel first before she finds out.

And it could be.
>>
>>27502356
>>27502331
You have no idea how happy this makes me feel.
One question. How did you decided on the angel's powerset?
>>
>>27502405
Anon Has Deslin Rowe's power from Infamous since Anon is his son.
Now I went through and saw what powers Deslin absorbed and Anon more or less copied them.
He has the simple blasts but I'm tweaking the powers so theyre somewhat special to him.
>>
>>27502436
Does Anon's powers have a green tint? I feel like they should.
>>
>>27502263
There's plans for that
remember the tease about "Kaz"?
>>
>>27502469
Somewhat, when he touches someone and absorbs their powers yes but the elements all depend.
Neon for example gives him a rainbow like glow.
The green's there but he's not like the Hulk
>>
yo, how's everyone?
>>
>>27503101
Good, just had post an update a while ago
>>
>>27503101
Dead inside, dead outside. How are you?
>>
>>27503309
hot, wet, and sticky. I hate working at the movies and this weather hasn't helped my mood.
>>
>>27503339
At least you're not me. I work at a parking garage
>>
ITT: How being miserable at work improves the quality of the greens.
>>
>>27503339
I clean hotel lobbies at a national park, so I know that feel.
>>
File: image.png (2MB, 881x1212px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
2MB, 881x1212px
>>27503339
This picture makes me hot and sticky
>>
>>27503791
what a qt
>>
File: Screenshot 2016-05-29 23.07.04.png (97KB, 1768x948px) Image search: [Google]
Screenshot 2016-05-29 23.07.04.png
97KB, 1768x948px
Ah, okay, I've added possible story ideas to my notes for Shimmering.
>>
>>27504479
I'm really liking that Henchman idea.
>>
>>27504479
Go With Glam!
>>
>>27504523
He could be like her own, personal Bob
It's not his fault, some people are just uniquely suited to the hench life
Sunset'd probably notice his constant appearance every time she shuts down a mad scientist or some other wacky shenanigans and strike up a friendship with him.
It's not personal, just part of the life, y'know?

>>27504552
That'll be a long haul story, prolly
Might do it after Shimmering is finished up.
>>
>>27504479
>>27504552
Meh, I think there needs to be more GlimGlam green, but I feel like it would be kind of cringey if the anon was a comic fan relentlessly lecturing her on what she should do. If he just had a common sense of decency and a mild affection then sure it could work, but the picture that comes to mind with comic book fan is awful. If anything, I think an Anon who is either friends/dating Spider-shim getting kidnapped by villains so often, he's chill about it and either winds up socializing with her to pass the time, relentlessly annoying her into submission/reform, or giving therapy sessions to her so she gets over her abandonment issues and becomes a good guy.
>>
>>27504611
He'd probably start off overexcited because hoply-shit-he-just-found-someone-with-amazing-powers-and-oh-no-why-is-she-frowning-at-him and then just offer to be her jimminy cricket. Something he says probably strikes a chord with her (maybe something Celestia once said in a speech about duty) and she decides ure, why not?
Costume arguments ensue

I'd actually totally forgotten about Constantly Kidnapped-non, I'll add it to the list
>>
>>27504647
See all I picture is some fat, hyperventilating nechbeard stammering out a few words and then shouting "CAN I BE YOU MORAL COMPASS?" before passing out. It just sounds like shitty cringe humor. Why would Glimmer listen to him for even a second? She doesn't have a reason to pay attention to him, let alone make him her "jimminy cricket." This is just what I'm picturing, don't let it stop you.
>>
By the way, I just talked with Mamo, and his ban was only til the 30th. He'll back soon, the magnificent bastard. For his new lewds, he'll just post the links. He says hi to you all.

Also, weed is weird. I never felt a buzz, but I laughed a lot and felt loopy. My writing was also sloppier than usual and I've had massive brain fog all day. I don't think I'm gonna smoke it again.
>>
>>27504479
I like
>Symbiote butt stuff
>Black suit bullying
>Goblin-non and Shommer
>>
>>27504669
.... If that is how you want to picture as yet unwritten, intentionally physically vague, basically faceless characters, then that is your prerogative.
As it is, he'll hardly be a drooling fanatic, just an excited fan of capes who sees someone with a lot of potential, but no desire to dedicate herself to a higher cause.
And Glimmer? Well, her intentions might start off... rather selfish.

>>27504716
You do you, Beany
>>
>>27504717
Nothing more embarrassing than your brand-new suit from space giving you a public orgasm because it's decided that you should feel good all the time

The bullying thing I'm just looking forwards to writing Shimmer as more of a character than a presence, even if it's just for something goofy and cute.

I feel like I do her a disservice most of the time.
>>
uh, bump
>>
File: 1460069945524.png (1MB, 2550x3509px) Image search: [Google]
1460069945524.png
1MB, 2550x3509px
>"...So to sum it up, I'm Griffon, the Vulture's replacement after he retired, and no, I'm currently not interested in getting in your pants."
"Oh thank god."
>"Wait, you're actually GLAD that I'm not hot for you? What're you, gay?"
"What."
>"Whatever, dweeb, I got places to be. Catch ya later on a job or something."
>>
>>27505507
kek
>>
>>27504479
>work to make her a proper superhero
Something something proper battle dress something something pragmatic.
I'm just yanking your chain I'm fine with whatever a hero's wearing.
1, 2 and 4 also appeal to me.
>>
>>27506084
That Gobling Anon thing is really stuck in my skull.
It's a hell of a fun idea to think about writing, just need the drive and the skill.
>>
>>27506143
*goblin
fuck my useless fucking fingers fuckity fuck fuck
>>
>>27506143
Just do your bets not to fuck up whatever you go with.
>>
>>27506143
Is he bad or good guy Goblin?
>>
>>27507053
>>
Hey quick question Should I make an update to my green once a day or randomly through the day?
>>
File: U9s4ZfV.png (369KB, 544x400px)
U9s4ZfV.png
369KB, 544x400px
>>27508068
hmmmmmm...Yes.
>>
>>27508068
Whenever you feel writty is fine. Once a day sounds reassuring, but I'd like to see more than just one update a day if you have the will to do so.
>>
Gonna update later today
>>
File: Adagio.png (1MB, 2550x3509px)
Adagio.png
1MB, 2550x3509px
Moment of truth, was a very eventful 28 hours sans sleep, but I think it was also productive. Behold the three latest additions.
First the leader of the Sirens, Adagio (Her hair is crazy to draw fyi)
>>
File: Aria.png (795KB, 2550x3509px)
Aria.png
795KB, 2550x3509px
Next up is (my personal fav for these pics) Aria ^^
>>
File: sonata.png (914KB, 2550x3509px)
sonata.png
914KB, 2550x3509px
And last but not least (For realzies) Sonata!
>>
>>27460999
>Lunch break
>Be Anon.
>You’re walking besides Sunset carrying her purchases.
>She said she needed some stuff, and now you carry her shampoo, conditioner and aftercare.
>You are just explaining her this mornings lesson thoroughly, because, for some reason, she missed out on the obvious.
“-and for the resistance to stay low we need to...”
>That’s why you only try to lead her into the right direction.
>You point to her to finish the sentence.
>“Uhh... increase the cross-section?”
>She doesn’t sound convinced, so you nod and give her the thumbs up.
>“Wha-? It’s that simple? But that’s like- Uhrg! I’m so stupid!”
>She hits your head.
>“Why didn’t I think of that? It’s the basics!”
>A boyfriend of your aunt once said you should look for someone who looks hot or cute when frustrated or angry.
>Back then you certainly didn’t want that image of your aunt in your head, but with Sunset as she is now, you know what he had meant.
>It was one of the guys your Aunt has kept for the longest you can remember.
“You were just caught up thinking of something else.”
>Sunset thinks and then starts to blush, going from one kind of cute to the next.
>“Yeah, just... stuff on my mind.”
>She scratches her shoulder.
>She does that a lot.
>You’re not certain if it’s a tell or something else.
>Should you say something about it?
>Would it be weird for you to admit you're analyzing her body language, or would you only be an attentive boyfriend.
>Painkillers no longer inhibit your... inhibitions.
>And she liked you being brash, didn’t she?
>So maybe you should say something?
>Eh...
>>
>>27508264
>Fuck it.
“Itchy shoulder?”
>“Huh? What?”
>Damnit.
“You’re scratching an awful lot.”
>“Oh- ah... yeah. I know I shouldn’t.”
>If she shouldn’t... that means it’s /something/.
“Mosquito bite?”
>“Uhh... yeah.”
>She scratches again, because her hand is already there.
>So maybe it is a tell.
>Is she lying?
“Should we get some mosquito bite stuff too?”
>“No, I-”
>She sighs.
>“Okay, it’s a skin-thing.”
>A skin-thing?
“Bad?”
>“No! Nono. it’s just a smallish-”
>She takes a breath and looks down.
>”Rash-thing.”
>She’s ashamed to admit it.
>“It’s just some red dots at a stupid location. Nothing severe.”
>You need to cheer her up.
“We discover our little flaws, how romantic.”
>And right back to blushing she goes, we have a winner.
>>
>>27508227
Nice, but needs more camel toe
>>
>>27508275
>“S-shut up.”
>You smile at her, but believe you were blushing as well.
>You find little flaws on her.
>It really is... enticing.
“Can I see?”
>“I- What?”
>You press the bottles of haircare between your stump and body and touch her by her shoulder with your good hand.
“May I see?”
>She removes her own hand and tilts her head away to offer her neck up to you.
>You can see her blushing even more as you touch her neck and run your fingers down, then you slightly push her top aside..
>Black strap... she’s wearing a black bra.
>You don’t listen to your brain and observe her skin.
“It’s not bad at all. But I guess annoying? As you said, stupid location.”
>“Mhm...”
>Then, the next few seconds seem to pass in slow motion.
>You place the shoulder of her shirt back where it belonged and trace your fingers up her neck again.
>Your own gentle touch fascinates you as your eyes carefully stick to your fingers as they make their way up.
>But eventually your fingers stop and you face her.
>You had come quite a bit closer as you investigated her shoulder, but now you’re uncomfortably close.
>No... The situation wasn’t uncomfortable.
>Sunset leans slightly into your hand and lets you support her head.
>Her eyes were angled down on – you guess – your lips, but then she looks up and her gaze meets yours.
>You can see the longing in her eyes as she licks her lips.
>You do the same.
>Of all these little actions which came instinctual, this was that last calculated thought.
>Softening up your lips to make them more pleasant, before you lean in closer...
>>
>>27508227
blue?
>>
>>27508297
Per request, Psylocke's costume was more blue in the original xmen cartoon, granted it's black in the comics but at the time almost everything that was black was normally inked with blue highlights so detail could still be seen (IE Venom, Spidey 2099-the last one since characters in the comic describe his suit as black)
>>
>>27508284
Agh, you tease!

>>27508246
Sonata a cute
A CUTE
>>
>>27508142
No not just one, i meant i post 3 to 4 at once or do 1 or 2 in the morning and another 2 at night

>>27508227
>>27508238
>>27508246
PERFECT
>>
File: adigopurple.png (1MB, 2550x3509px)
adigopurple.png
1MB, 2550x3509px
>>27508319
I should have spent my time writing
>>
File: mlp_shocker.png (540KB, 2286x2352px) Image search: [Google]
mlp_shocker.png
540KB, 2286x2352px
>>27505507
Love it btw Shocker. Feels very true to the character. Poor shocks.... the life you choose is a harsh one fraught with peril.
>>
>>27508505
>that pic
Kek
>>
>>27508362
>Agh, you tease!
any guesses on what'll happen? cause I think I'll write some stuff at home still
>>
>>27508749
Eother they kiss or they get supervillain-cock-blocked
>>
>>27508830
*Either
Dammit, phone
>>
>>27508749
>>27508830
they kiss, then hear a villian clapping whoa asks the two lovebirds to get out of the way.
>>
File: y me.jpg (42KB, 680x455px)
y me.jpg
42KB, 680x455px
>>27508227
>>27508238
>>27508246
You're too good for Anons like us, Mamoruku.
>>
>>27508284
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>You’re currently sitting on a water tower on a roof in central New Yoke.
>On your lap is your trusty laptop on which you work very slowly compared to what you could achieve in the lap.
>Not that the laptop is bad, by any means, but as compared to a borderline supercomputer... yeah, pretty bad.
>It also had to sacrifice some of its processing power to surveying traffic cam footage and social media for any signs of Sunset.
>Or rather, for signs of Spider-Woman.
>You knew she was in her lunch break, and usually shows herself.
>You can’t believe you’re in risk management of your own best friend.
>Neither can you believe that Sunset quit being Spider-Woman.
>It’s just not in her nature. Given her past.
>A past which would most likely give her different threat level than what she currently is.
>You scratch your head.
>Maybe you should have told the Wonderbolts.
>You hadn’t been present, but apparently Sunset had been a power hungry demon before.
>The Element of Magic had transformed her to show her – back then – true colors.
>You assume Spider-Woman is some way for her to repent.
>“Have some sunscreen. Boop.”
>Misty Fly immediately applied some to your nose.
“Gah!”
>You retreat backward, almost dropping your laptop in surprise.
>“Be aware of your surroundings.”
>She rebukes you.
>“And right now our surroundings are unhealthy amounts of UV-radiation, which are no known source of super powers. So we’ve got to fight it.”
>She raises her arms in a fighting stance against the sun.
>>
>>27508989
>Misty Fly is a woman in her mid to late twenties with wild hair of two separate light blue tones.
>She’s only wearing shades and a Wonderbolt-themed water-sports suit which left really nothing to the imagination.
>Would it not be bulletproof and Misty’s usual fighting gear, you had considered it indecent.
>But maybe only because probably everything that woman wears makes it seem indecent.
>You’re in college. You go through phases.
>And even though you have another equally unlikely celebrity crush, doesn’t mean you can’t be fond of Misty’s physique.
>“You’re staring again.”
“I’m so sorry, I-”
>“I don’t know if it’s envy, or lust in your eyes.”
>You bite your lip and she has her laugh.
>“Yeah, I do have that effect on people.”
>You take the small goop of sunscreen from your nose and apply it to your face better.
“Thanks...”
>She walks around the edge of the water tower again.
>“I’m just teasing. God knows I have nothing else to do if you take on all the surveillance.”
>Then she stomps down with the foot to the thin metal sheet.
>Water could be heard riling within the tower, seemingly trying to escape.
>“I must have done something to piss off good old Spitty, to have to do stakeout with someone who doesn’t talk to me.”
“Oh! I’m sorry, I-”
>“This is your first time being a field agent, isn’t it?”
>You gulp.
“Y-yeah...”
>“You’ve seen cop shows, right? We pass the time by – I don’t know – play ‘would you rather’, something like that.”
“Would you rather stakeout your best friend and wait until she commits a crime, or do the thing you love painfully slow on a laptop?”
>“Tuché.”
>>
File: large.png (196KB, 788x1024px)
large.png
196KB, 788x1024px
>>27509000
>>27508989
sorry, not sorry, I take painful enjoyment in what I do

also I changed it to Misty Fly's canon name where I refered to her as Misty Dew earlier
>>
>>27509028
I smell a changeling.
>>
>>27509028
So, iis Anon's aunt ever going to appear?
if I recall, her being bedridden is kind of the impetus for his studies, right?
>>
>>27509140
>So, iis Anon's aunt ever going to appear?
She has answers to some questions.

>if I recall, her being bedridden is kind of the impetus for his studies, right?
indeed

>>27509028
>sorry, not sorry
ok, I'm sorry
I shouldn't have ripped the scene apart
I'm probably just pissed and like to unpleasantly end exciting scenes because last time I got laid my music jumped to a nightvale
We came to the voice of Cecil and were laughing madly, but it was awkward

How was the last time you guys got laid?
>>
>>27509000
>Be Sunset.
>Of all the times you romanticized a first kiss, not once had it crossed your mind you’d have yours in the skin-care products aisle.
>What you have had wondered about was how the entire process goes.
>Do you, like, place your lips on his and hope for the best?
>But there was no more hesitation, no more wondering, no more doubt as Anon began to lean in.
>You don’t even know if his hand on your pulled you toward him or if you met him greedily on your own accord.
>The result stayed.
>Your lips met his.
>He gently sucked in your upper lip to have more of.
>The small movements on that sensitive body part felt like you were tickled.
>You never imagined to be ticklish on your lips.
>Not in a way to make you laugh, but one to make you smile.
>It’s an all around pleasant feeling.
>Does he feel the same?
>You slightly part your lips to take in his lower lip and return the favor.
>Sucking it in just enough to have more access to it, you press slightly on his, squeezing him.
>Getting really adventurous you bring in your tongue, poking his lip, then drawing a line from one side to the other.
>You sense him like you’ve never sensed anyone before.
>The texture of his smooth lips.
>The tensity when you squeeze him.
>His taste together with the still lingering lunch.
>His breathing.
>You feel his hand on your neck, gently massaging you.
>You want to feel his heart to see if it beats as fast as yours.
>As you get closer to him you were met with his cast, and the bottles of shampoo he was carrying.
>You open your eyes, not even remembering ever closing them.
>The moment was broken, and so is the kiss.
>>
>>27509506

>You look down to the bottles, the evil perpetrators who ruined your moment.
>Then up to Anon.
>He licks his lower lip, tasting the rest of you on him.
>You do the same, only with your upper lip, the one he had in his grasp.
>Your eyes meet again.
>And slowly realization came to you.
>Your eyes widen as the event sank in, and you look away.
>You’re probably blushing like you never had before.
>“Sunset...”
“I think I gotta go cool off.”
>You hastily make your way to the nearest ladies room.

>You splatter water into your face.
>You just had your first kiss and then decided to run away.
>You’re stupid.
>So fucking stupid.
>Stupid, stupid, stupid!
>ARGH!
>You look at yourself in the mirror.
>And now you’ve gone and ruined your make up.
>...
>Beyond salvageable.
>Your anger only increases as you remove what you can with the contents of your purse.
>As you rummage around in it you always came back to your in it’s hidden compartments on the corners.
>You really need to go for a swing.
>>
wasn't happy with the scene, so I stalled
was a stupid idea to rip the scene apart
will fix in pastebin
>>
>>27509614
it's alright, just take your time, write what sounds good
>>
>>27510001
If you make anon Goblin, will he be a good guy or a bad guy?
>>
>>27510050
Honestly?
I'm not sure.
>>
>>27509614
Worry not, we read what you write and defer to your judgement on what's best for the story.

Questions for the writefriends, have you all numbered your universes?
Have you learned something writing Spidershimm that you would have liked knowing from the beginning?
>>
>>27510001
so the kiss was okay?
writing it was easy, but I pend long just pondering about it
...
I should get drunk

>>27510091
goblin is supposed to be a bad guy
you can't just switch around a characters alignment
>>
>>27510118
again, I haven't decided on a lot of things
the kiss was cute, as was Sunset's inability to deal with it
>>
File: image.jpg (58KB, 480x360px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
58KB, 480x360px
>>27510091
Good guy. He is physically incapable of being a villain, and it wouldn't make any sense
>>
>>27510118
>>27510146
Goblin is derranged, not necessarily evil. The guy could fly around mauling whoever he thinks is a bad guy without realizing what he is actually doing. The evil comes mainly from the person that took the serum.
>>
File: image.gif (76KB, 500x269px) Image search: [Google]
image.gif
76KB, 500x269px
>>27510118
!!!!!!!!
>>
>>27510172
That was the original idea, Anon in his Goblin persona being not so much an evil monster, but a playful madman who doesn't really think about the consequences of his actions or who could get hurt.
>>
File: image.gif (989KB, 500x353px) Image search: [Google]
image.gif
989KB, 500x353px
>>27510118
>Reading the new Cap comic
>>
http://youtu.be/gG5OmOBQcYc
Steve Rogers a bad guy.
Norman Osborn a good guy.
Everything's all topsy turvy now!
>>
>>27510265
as I always say... hail hydra
>>
>>27510311
Who sees that symbol and thinks "This is the group for me!"
I mean, honestly
>>
File: robbie belongs.png (3MB, 998x2857px) Image search: [Google]
robbie belongs.png
3MB, 998x2857px
>>27510395
you just need to belong
>>
>>27510395
I do. They seem like a nice bunch.
>>
>>27510456
We need more speeches.
>>
File: image.gif (2MB, 500x219px)
image.gif
2MB, 500x219px
>>27510311
>>27510456
I will never join Hydra!
The Cap I'm totally not obsessed with would never join Hydra!
>>
>>27510606
He is just... just unfairly handsome
It's cheating, it has to be...
>>
>>27510606
want to aggressively post caps at each other again?
>>
File: image.jpg (46KB, 634x479px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
46KB, 634x479px
Was Hydra meant to be a copy of SPECTRE from James Bond? Because that's what it is
>>
>>27510627
#TeamThor
he's dreamy
>>
>>27510627
It's called Super Soldier Serum
>>
>>27510627
I know....
No homo.
>>
>>27510661
The proof that drugs are only as bad as the user.

Compare cap/goblin
>>
>>27510674
You misspelled all of the homo
>>
File: 1425752808517.jpg (147KB, 632x576px) Image search: [Google]
1425752808517.jpg
147KB, 632x576px
>>27510690
I would hold hands with that man...
>>
File: 1464534384594.jpg (47KB, 352x338px)
1464534384594.jpg
47KB, 352x338px
>>27510736
>>
>>27510736
I would salute with that man
>>
>>27510736
of all the sick bastards I met in my days you're one of the good ones
>>
File: 1419328088238.jpg (128KB, 526x511px)
1419328088238.jpg
128KB, 526x511px
>>27510801
Thank you!
>>
File: image.jpg (227KB, 1160x578px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
227KB, 1160x578px
>>27510736
>>27510772
>>27510801
>>27510822
>>
>>27510825
ANTS
>>
>>27510850
http://youtu.be/FJkJub2tlIA
"HOLY SHIT"
-Spiderman, 2016
>>
>>
Daily reminder that Harry Osborn's son is called Normie.
>>
File: image.jpg (25KB, 283x195px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
25KB, 283x195px
>>27510873
>>
File: ohsnap.jpg (14KB, 103x103px) Image search: [Google]
ohsnap.jpg
14KB, 103x103px
>>27510873
>>
File: image.jpg (118KB, 627x512px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
118KB, 627x512px
>>27510875
And is hooked up with Spidergirl
>>
File: ChiptWY.gif (478KB, 450x220px) Image search: [Google]
ChiptWY.gif
478KB, 450x220px
>>27510938
>>
File: image.jpg (23KB, 445x318px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
23KB, 445x318px
>>27510938
>>
File: image.jpg (34KB, 250x250px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
34KB, 250x250px
HES
A MAN
ON A MISSION
>>
>>27510988
Too low.
>>
File: 3978395-spider-man+2099+001-016.jpg (494KB, 1788x898px) Image search: [Google]
3978395-spider-man+2099+001-016.jpg
494KB, 1788x898px
Best spidey
>>
>>27511296
Agreed.
>>
>>27511296
Never read them but looks cool
>>
>>27510456
This

This right here, is what can be considered the most dangerous and powerful powers any supervillain, hell, any villain in general, can have.

The ability to inspire others to join their cause.

Trump is using this power right now.
>>
>>27512007
Bump because life has conspired to keep me from writing today
>>
>>27512457
sucks, mang
>>
>>27512516
That it does
>>
>>27512563
>>27512516
I think that the main reason I keep this thread open at all times is that you guys look to be always here.
>>
>>27512644
you're not wrong...
>>
File: image.gif (58KB, 500x229px) Image search: [Google]
image.gif
58KB, 500x229px
>>27512873
>waiting for new green
>>
>>27508956
That's not true Beans, I'm actually thankful for pretty much every request, it's helped me work on my art again since I slack too much on it. Anywho, I've gotten slots open again for arts, either post it here or shoot me an email/note or something on my tumblr.
I do still need to get a list from each writer of their preferred Shimmy (the version of spiderwoman used per green) But whenever is cool. Looking forward to more shenanigans you animals.
>>
>>27512644
I try to keep this thread going if I can.
Green soon.

>>27512937
When would be the best time for the Spider-Sunset thing? And I have a request for a character
>>
Looking over the views my pastes have gotten is so strange.
Like, logically the first has over a hundred, then it drops to nearly half that, stays there, goes up a bit, then jumps to a hundred again, and then goes back to half, before dropping to the thirties.

Not sure if my writing has gotten worse of if there are just fewer people in the threads or what.
>>
>>27502211
>Be Sunset.
>It's the next day and you're at Twilight’s house in her basement with your friends.
“You gonna show us the package, Twilight?”
> “Yeah, just give me a second.”
>Twilight walks out the door, leaving you with the rest of your friends.
> “Now that Twilight’s gone I need to ask, how was it?”
>You looked at Rarity, confused by the question.
“How was what, Rarity?”
> “Why your date with Anonymous, darling.”
>Your eyes go wide.
“How did you know?”
>Rarity gives you a dry look as she crosses her arms underneath her chest.
> “I heard from a few ..’reliable’ sources on how you held Anonymous down and demanded a date.”
>You groaned as the memory of your ….crazy outburst.
“It was good.”
>Rarity is suddenly in front of you and gently grabbing your shoulders.
> “I want details, dear.”
>You sigh as you gently brush her hands off your shoulders.
“Fine, we mainly walked around the park and by some shops. We had lunch, some ice cream and saw Twilight leaving the bookstore.”
>Rarity pouts.
> “That doesn't sound like much of a date.”
“I also saw a shop that had a prom dress and suit.”
>Twilight returned, carrying a large box, before Rarity could say anything.
> “I'm back.”
>She sets the box down and opens it, pulling out a few sealed bags.
> “Ok, so this one's the materials we need for sturdier outfits. How soon can you make the outfits Rarity?”
>She hands a couple of large thin bags to Rarity.
> “It shouldn't take more than a few days.”
>You look at the other bags, curious of their contents.
“So what’s in the other bags, Twilight?”
>Twilight shyly scratches her head and looks away from you.
> “Well, I've been thinking for ways to subdue Spectrum and ordered something that might help.
>>
File: image.jpg (30KB, 319x319px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
30KB, 319x319px
>>27513231
Fewer people
>>
>>27513231
Your writings fine. If anything I'm the one with the worst writing out of everyone here
>>
File: image.jpg (176KB, 736x736px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
176KB, 736x736px
>>27513272
>"I've been thinking of ways to subdue Spectrum"
>>
File: 1462396504024.png (314KB, 717x436px) Image search: [Google]
1462396504024.png
314KB, 717x436px
>>27513314
>>
>>27513272
>You grab one of the bags and rip the top open.
“Well let’s see what you got....WHAT THE HELL?!!”
>Looking inside the bag, you see some handcuffs and a ballgag.
“Why did you get these things? How did you get these things?”
> “I couldn't think of any solid plan.”
>The other open the other bags and pull out a straightjacket, a blindfold and a collar.
“WHY DID YOU ORDER THESE THINGS?!!!”
>Twilight blushes and looks away from you.
> “I figured we could use these somehow.”
>Pinkie grabs the bag from your hands.
> “Well if we can’t use these on Spectrum maybe Sunny can them on Anon.”
>You were about to yell at Pinkie when your mind began to paint a picture.
>The image of Anon tied up and on his knees before you.
>You’re not wearing anything from below the waist as you put a riding crop on his head and gently guide his head down to your snatch.
>You could hear yourself, mock harshly, say, “Lick.”
>He would slowly lick the outer lips, getting a taste before diving in.
>He would keep licking bringing you closer to the edge until you reach your peach and cum.
> “SUNSET!!”
>>
>>27513398
>You flinch as Pinkie yelled in your ear.
“W-What Pinkie?”
> “You spaced out after I said you could use these on Anon.”
>You shake your head, trying to get rid of your blush.
“I’m fine.”
>Applejack and Rainbow smirk at you.
> “Thinking about catching a stallion?”
“W-What no I was..”
>Rainbow drapes an arm around your shoulders.
> “Having an erotic fantasy about have your way with him?”
>You throw the arm off of you as you back away.
“C’mon girls.”
>The two laugh as they back away from you.
>Pinkie walks up to you and grins a little bit.
> “Did you..”
>You grab her by the collar and pull her close.
“Do we need to go over the Cookie Caper incident?”
>Pinkie holds her hands up in a surrender motion.
> “Ok, so anything else we need to talk about?”
>Twilight clears her throat.
> “Well I have been researching something I thought we should talk about.
>You looked around, wondering if everyone else knew what she was talking about.
>All of them had looks of confusion.
“Well what do you want to talk about?”
>Twilight walks over to her computer and turns the monitor towards everyone, showing a blurry picture of a winged man.
> “It’s about this Angel we’ve been hearing about.”
>>
File: m98GAt6.jpg (207KB, 2048x764px) Image search: [Google]
m98GAt6.jpg
207KB, 2048x764px
>>27513272
Trep-non should just keep faking that he has even more powers once the girls subdue him in order to escape
It'd be hilarious
>>
>>27513314
Don't get what you mean
>>
>>27513398
Well after reading all that, I'm not sure he'd WANT to escape if he knew...
>>
File: image.png (105KB, 401x577px)
image.png
105KB, 401x577px
>>27513398
Twilight is a sexual deviant.
Who knew?
>>
File: image.jpg (57KB, 800x450px)
image.jpg
57KB, 800x450px
>>27513409
This can only end lewdly
>>
Real life, I have escaped your grasp!

>>27513398
So I had sides and pants, they're both gone

>>27501507
>You waited in the voidspace, and only a few moments later Luna returned, still clutching her voidcloth bag
>"Did you kill spider-woman?
~I do not know, the police arrived and I did not exactly wish to deal with a large crowd, so I set the voidlings on her and escaped~
>She nodded
>"Very well, we will have to assume she managed to fend them off, in the mean time, I have something for you"
>She pulled two objects out of the sack
>A dark purple crown royal sized bag, almost identical to the larger one she had pulled it from
>"Firstly, your own voidcloth sack, then, I have something else for you"
>You pulled down your mask, working your mouth to get used to having a normal voice again
"What is it?"
>"I did mention you would be receiving a cut of the profits, yes?"
>You nodded
"I was about to ask about that"
>She smiled, pulling out a wad of Benjamins and handing it to you
>"Do try not to spend it all in one place"
>Holy shit
>this was EASILY two grand
>and who says crime doesn't pay?
>you shove the money into the bag, not entirely sure how Luna's held so much
>oh
>that's how
>your hand reached easily up to the elbow inside the bag
>which was, on the outside, about the size of a fucking crown royal bag
"I take it this is a miniature version of this warehouse you have?"
>"In a sense. Voidcloth, as you can already tell, molds itself to it's purpose, if that purpose is to store items, it will change itself to accommodate as many as needed"
>huh
>well that's good to know
>You nod, closing up the bag and tucking it into your robe, pulling the hood down now
"I guess I'll be heading home then, uh... wow, thanks, I guess? I mean... you had me kill sixteen people, and I'm still not really okay with that"
>She stood close to you
>"I could help you relax, if that is what you require"
>Oh god she's coming on to you
>PANIC
"T-that's really not necessary..."
>"I think it is anon"
>>
>>27513409
That's all and sorry there wasn't any action like I promised but I give you lewd instead.
Thoughts?
>>
>>27513466
Sexual predator Luna a scary
>>
>>27513466
He gets it in the pooper
>>
>>27513476
we are, as always, pleased by your offerings
>>
>>27513476
A bit lacking in lenght, but I like it and I'm not going anywhere, so I can wait. Nice stoppoint by the way, its intriguing but not frustrating.
>>
>>27513518
I type slowly and the idea came later then I wanted but thanks. Also Twilight play a big part later.
>>
Here's where the past month of ERP comes in handy!
Kill me
>>27513466
>She smiled warmly, trying to put you at ease
>It didn't work
>You took a step back
"I mean, what, exactly, would you do to make me relax, get over killing all those people?"
>Her smile widened
>"Well, I have an understanding of how young men operate..."
>She took off her mask in full, letting her hair come back to it's normal, short and light blue style, framing her pretty young face
>And then she managed to take off her chest piece all in one go, over her head and off to the side, leaving her torso naked
>"I imagine you like what you see?"
>NO
>BAD ANON JR
>NO RAISING TO THOSE PERFECT PERK-fuck too late
>You were glad these pants she gave you were loose
>You tried to wrench your gaze away from her dark blue. erect nipples, and failed
>She giggled seductively, taking off the rest of her armor above the waist, and placing her now bare hands on your hips
"Um, y-yeah, I guess, but I'm still not really sur-"
>She interrupted you with a kiss, pressing her glossy blue lips against yours, rubbing her chest against you
>You found yourself pinned against a wall, no escape
>She deepened the kiss, her tongue poking at your lips, looking for an entrance
>She found one by pinching your butt through your pants, causing you to open your mouth in surprise and let her in, the tongue invading your mouth, exploring it's every facet before it began to wrestle with your own tongue
>You tried to fight back, but she was far to skilled at this, expertly wielding her tongue like a sword, dashing circles around yours and making sure you couldn't do anything to stop it
>She broke the kiss a moment later, leaving you breathless
>"Before I go any further, I do wish to make sure you actually agree to this, as making you go through it unwillingly will have the opposite effect of relaxing you"
>Your brain was full of fuck, in all the ways that could be taken at this point.
"Y-yes"
>"Good."
>>
>>27513628
and here is where I leave you for today, enjoy those blueballs!
>>
>>27513665
>Blueballs
It's funny because she's blue
>>
http://youtu.be/D6kymmUR-GU
I'm bored so here's Redd White
>>
I should write Spider-Trap
>>
>>27514115
Spider...Trap?
>>
>>27514138
Does whatever a spider of the opposite gender can!
>>
>>27514138
Yeah, like, Sunset is Spider-Woman, but secretly a dude
And then Anon fucks "her"
I'm pretty tired, so now I'm just throwing out ideas and seeing what sticks to the wall.
Heh.
>>
>>27514154
Go to sleep son
>>
>>27514154
I... please, dont.
>>
File: image.jpg (61KB, 400x300px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
61KB, 400x300px
*looks left
*looks right
*inhales
...
...
SIGMA 6
BE A HERO
>>
>>27514238
*an hero
>>
>>27514162
>>27514217
I'mma go sleep, for all our sakes
>>
I'm working on something right now, have a sneak peek at the prologue.
-----------------------------------------
>You are Celestia
>Well, normally anyway
>Right now you are Solar Flare! Super Heroine of Justice!
>Even if it still sounds like a drug to you
>DODGE!!
>.....
>And right now you should be focusing on the fight instead of an internal monologue
>Especially since you are fighting against the greatest villain you have ever heard of, Nightmare Moon
>God you wish Luna was here
--------------------------------------------
Let me know what you think.
>>
>>27514713
this sounds fun, excited to see more
>>
>Beans is alive again
>Roommate finally fucked off
Things are finally the way they should be.
>>
>>27514713
>Y'know, if she had super powers at all
>"Face it Solar Flare! You can not hope to defeat Me! I am better than you in every possible way!"
"What makes you think having mosquito bites is better than having melons?!"
>That'll piss her off. Fuck. You are seriously considering calling for reinforcements here, she really is better at fighting
>You quickly throw up a Solar Shield!(patent pending) to block the beam of shadow she blasts at you, and it barely holds
>In retaliation, you hurl a ball of sunlight straight at her, which she easily dodges
>Clicking the fingers on your right hand you cover your eyes with your left hand while smiling as the ball explodes turning night

into day for a few seconds
>Hearing her scream of pain you rush in to try and punch her out of the sky

>You are Nightmare Moon and HOLY FUCK YOUR EYES!!
>WHY WOULD SHE DO THAT!!
>WHAT THE FUCK!!
>>
>>27514884
Fucking notepad. I need Microsoft word on my computer.
-------------------------------------
>You are Solar Flare and luck was with you
>Your fist connects with with Nightmare Moons back sending her plummeting to the ground
>You can see that she's trying to right herself, but she's still disorented from your attack
>You kind of feel bad about that
>/Now to Unmask you Nightmare, let's see who you really are./ You think to yourself as you fly down to where she hit the ground
>As you land you notice that she seems to be sobbing and, wow, yeah, that leg's broken. She looks drained. You're gonna have to remember that ball attack, good against shadow powers
>You quickly check yourself for injuries
>Ribs feel bruised, left ankle is dislocated, and various cuts, scratches and bruises that can not be easily explained away
>/Wonderfull./ You sigh as you carefully approach Nightmare Moon, watching out for any tricks she might pull to try and escape
"Now, Nightmare. Let's see who you really are before the Police get here, hmm."
>You slowly reach out and grab her mask, strange that she isn't trying to stop you
>You narrow your eyes and swiftly yank her mask off of her
>Your eyes widen in horror
>>
>>27514888
"LUNA!!!!!"
>You are Principal Celestia of Canterlot High School, and you just had a nightmare
>Well, memory really
>Your bedroom door slams open and your Teenage Son is standing there with a shotgun
>"NO ONE HURTS MY MOTHer and there's no one here."
>You can't help but smile at that. He's so protective of you sometimes. Thank God he isn't a mutant like you
"No sunshine. Just a nightmare. You should go back to bed, school is still on tomorrow."
>He just lowers the shotgun and looks at you sadly
>"But-"
"No buts mister. Bed. Now. School. Tomorrow."
>He sighs and nods
>"Goodnight Mom."
"Goodnight my little ray of sunshine."
>You both smile as he leaves the room and shuts the door behind him
>You sigh as you lay back down and close your eyes
>/I need to talk to Luna tomorrow/
-----------------------------------------------------
I feel like I rushed the whole thing a little.
Anyway, that's the prologue and all I have at the moment.
Let me know what you think.
>>
>>27514898
Also, grabbing a tripcode for future use
>>
File: Woooooooooooooo.gif (670KB, 350x200px)
Woooooooooooooo.gif
670KB, 350x200px
>>27514926
You. I like you.
>>
File: image.png (141KB, 1024x768px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
141KB, 1024x768px
Nostalgia trip:
The first green Shocker wrote for us
>>
>>27513446
everyone since ever
>>
File: image.png (155KB, 1024x768px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
155KB, 1024x768px
>>27515521
Then came a can of peas.
And now we're here
>>
>>27513039
Any time you guys want. It doesn't have to be all at once, i stalk the thread constantly so feel free to add it to the end of a random post. Also feel free to make character requests, i extend that offer to all members here.
>>
>>27515874
Not Voidborn, but can I get a pic of his Luna wearing her armor?
I'm kinda having trouble picturing it in my head
>>
>>27515874
Well Sunset uses the Spider-Gwen outfit. And the request I'll tell you on your Tumblr
>>
Pastebin updated
>>
"morning" bump
>>
>>27517062
How’s it going?
>>
>>27517301
Only just woke up a bit ago. Gonna clean my house, get some eats, and maybe see Apocalypse today with my friends.

Not a bad day ahead, all in all.
>>
>>27517391
Here's hoping it inspires more greens.
>>
>>27517416
I won't promise anything, but maybe it will?
I've got a few extra short story ideas buzzing around.
>>
>>27517441
That's good. I'm gonna be writing more lewd then action for later
>>
>>27517441
Nice.
>>27517485
I is worry.
>>
>>27517485
I need to catch up with everything again -.-
>>
A cat has crawled into my lap.
All productive activity is temporarily halted.
>>
>>27517540
reasonable, quite reasonable
>>
>>27517492
Updated the pastebin, so check it out

>>27517491
Oh just wait, as this is foreshadowing
>>
symbi-bump
>>
File: 1460405056920.png (513KB, 900x900px) Image search: [Google]
1460405056920.png
513KB, 900x900px
>>27517909
>>
>>27517540
You take that fokin cat and
.
.
.
.
Rub his ears
>>
>>27518373
She is most pleased by this suggestion, she is
>>
>>27518433
Is it a spider cat? Also feed the cat
>>
>>27518504
Feeding the cat more than she currently gets puts my hip bones at risk of atomization when snuggling her.

As for spideriness, if she can climb vertical walls and ceilings, then it's news to me.
>>
>>27518516
Try hanging curtains, you'll have her going vertical very soon.
>>
File: image.jpg (35KB, 500x500px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
35KB, 500x500px
>>27518516
Touch her belly and see what happens
>>
>>27518535
.... She bites me. As she has every other time I've rubbed her tummy for 18 long years.
>>
>>27518516
How did you like the lewd scene?
>>
>>27518574
I found it suitably sexy and cute
>>
>>27518604
You know you just challenged me right? Prepare for more in about 5 hours
>>
>>27518625
Is anyone else hyped for more lewd?
>>
>>27518574
What lewd scene?
>>
>>27518747
Newest update, Sunset gets the idea to tie up Anon in a sexual fantasym
Look here >>27513398
>>
Quiet day huh
>>
File: zJMniPl.jpg (20KB, 680x493px) Image search: [Google]
zJMniPl.jpg
20KB, 680x493px
>>27519651
I've been other places and wasted my time
>>
>>27519718
So... When are you going to retcon back to 4chan
>>
>>27519738
only if the outrage is big enough and my balls are too small to handle the backlash
>>
>>27519651
I've been taking care of the household.
Movie plans fell through.
>>
>>27519765
That sucks you didn’t get to see the movie
>>
>>27520262
eh, that's life
>>
>>27508227
>>27508238
>>27508246

Goddamn, fine work as always
please tell me there will be lewds
>>
>>27520357
True
>>
>>27520638
I can be persuaded. I'll toy with some ideas and see what sticks.
>>
>>27521199
Did you get my idea on your tumblr?
>>
>>27513628
>she pulls your pants down, pushing you through the door you had been pinned against and onto the bed that lay beyond
>pomf.wav
>She leans over you, grinning, her eyes filled with lustful hunger
>"I have learned quite a lot about sex in my time, you know, I imagine you will enjoy me teaching you some of the secrets~"
>The way her voice lifted at the end there, almost songlike
>oh dear god you were rock fucking solid now
>You pulled your shirt off, looking up into her eyes as you tossed it aside
>she leaned down further, kissing you and wrapping a hand around your head as her other drifted down, pulling her leggings off as she climbed on top of you
>Even though she was easily twice your age, she had the body of a sexy twenty year old
>you slowly moved a hand up to feel her perfect breasts, which sat easily in the palm of your hand, soft and squishy as you gently kneaded it
>she moaned into your mouth, bringing the kiss a whole new level of sensation as your tongues clashed between your lips
>Oh god she's barely done anything and you're already starting to leak pre
>She broke the kiss, clasping a hand over yours on her tits
>"Hmm, seems like you might have learned a thing or two yourself, young Voidborn!"
>she slid herself down your body, curling up over your crotch, forcing you to let go of her soft flesh
>"But let me show you what /I/ know"
>You moaned, head falling back against the pillows as she breathed hotly onto your dick, which twitched in response
>she gave it a slow, gentle lick from ballsack to tip, giving your member a quick suckle at the end, making you moan again
"H-holy shit..."
>She's a fucking pro at this, for sure
>At this rate you were going to cum in no time at all
>Your hands reached into her hair, feeling it's silky smoothness between your fingers as she slowly took the head of your dick inside her mouth, applying suction the whole time
>"mmmmmh"
>she hummed into it, making her mouth vibrate
>your dick spasamed in her wet, warm lips...
>>
>>27521263
indeed. I replied there as well, but now it seems like so many things to track at once to make sure I get all the info.

Also I admit I was having trouble finding the description of Luna's armor in your story Voidborn. I know I already have a request for her design to enter the art (noticed you mentioned her version with shorter hair? If you get a chance I'd love to pick your brain for specifics) Maybe I should work on Anon per-story as well, only one I technically ever drew was Shocker ^^
>>
>>27513409
>Twilight scrolls through a bunch of photos and news articles about the winged hero.
> “While the Director hasn’t said anything, I’ve been keeping an eye out for this guy just in case.”
>One article catches your attention.
“Isn't that the girl from the news? The one who said an angel saved her?”
>Twilight nods as she opens a new window and plays a video.
>The video shows a gang being subdued by a group of angels.
> “This ‘Angel’ just popped up not that long ago, so we should be careful about him.”
>Applejacks looks up from the video and at Twilight.
> “You thinkin’ this here angel might be a bad guy Twi?”
>Twilight shakes her head and closes the window.
> “I don’t know his affiliation but none the less we should be careful if we find him.”
>You nod at that.
> “Also Spectrum has been quiet for a while, so we should be on the look out for him as well.”
>Rainbow Dash slams her fist on the table and growls a bit.
> “He’s gonna wish he was never born when I find him.”
>Applejack puts her hand on Rainbow’s shoulder, calming her down a bit.
>Rarity cleared her throat.
> “Well while I get started on our outfits, why don’t you tell us why you spaced out Sunset?”
>>
>>27521737
>Pinkie bounces around you.
> “Maybe Sunny’s thinking of borrowing this stuff.”
>You immediately begin to blush as another image pops in your head.
>You see Anon tied to your bed by your webs while he has a blindfold and ballgag on.
>You could see both you and Twilight lying on either side of him, cuddling him.
>You’re wearing black nylon stockings, gloves and a corset with Twilight wearing the same thing in white and had her glasses glasses.
>You could see Twilight gently stroke his cheek as she huskily said, “You have such an adorable pet Sunset.”
“He’s such a good boy when you give him a treat.”
>You gently slide your down his chest to his waist.
>Twilight moves her head closer to his neck and gives him a little kiss as you smack his ass.
>You could hear Anon groan through the ballgag.
>You could see your and Twilight’s hand move further down his body till...
“STOP PUTTING THESE IMAGES I MY HEAD, PINKIE!!!!”
> “NEVER, HAHAHAHA!!!”
>Pinkie ran away, laughing like a mad woman
>The rest of the girls, minus Twilight, giggled at your discomfort.
“I bet Anon doesn’t have to deal with this.”


>Be Anon
>Sitting on the couch and being used as a giant pillow by the Dazzlings.
>You have Adagio and Aria on both sides of you with your arms between their breasts.
>Sonata, for some reason, is leaning back into you like your a chair.
>You don’t want to wake them up, so you try to stay as still as possible.
“Hopefully they wake up soon.”
>>
>>27521755
>Still Anon.
>It’s later and you’re free from your soft prison.
>Sonata apologized saying you were comfortable.
>Aria just scoffed and said sorry.
>And Adagio kept on asking ‘how it was sleeping with three beautiful girls’ before giggling to herself.
>And now you’re flying around just looking for anything to do.
>You’re flying over city hall and the library when you see a car drive through a bunch of red lights.
>You would have gone after them but you saw Spider-Woman chasing after it as the car made a sharp left turn.
>Spider-Woman followed and soon escaped your sight.
“Well, I guess she got this under control.”
>You were about to fly in the opposite direction when a thought came to you.
“Then again, when will I get the chance to see her fight again.”
>With the decision made, you began to fly and try to spot them.
>Flying over most of the buildings, you could see the crazy car with a white dot following it.
“Well that didn't take long.”
>You activate your shroud as you fly a bit closer to Spider-Woman.
>One of the criminals opened a side window and was aiming a gun at Spider-Woman.
>The sound of gunfire filled the air as Spider-Woman let go of her web and flipped with the bullets whizzing past her.
>She fires a webline at the car and uses it to pull herself closer to the car.
>She lands on the roof of the car as she starts moving side to side, dodging gunfire from within the car.
“How’s she dodging when she can't see?”
>She moves to the top of the trunk and punches the back window, pulling out one of the criminals.
>She threw the crook out the car into a fruit stand on the side of the road.
>Spider-Woman jumps off the car and continues to follow it to an alleyway were a bunch of crooks were there.
>She lands in front of them crouched down saying, “Hello boys, wanna show a girl a good time?”
>They grab their guns and aim at her as you land on the rooftop of the building they were next to.
> “I guess that’s a no.”
>>
>>27521794
That's all I have for now. Gonna update the pastebin later. So thoughts?
>>
>>27521402
aaaand there goes my drive to write anything
at least I got something out tonight
>>
>>27521755
>You gently slide your down his chest to his waist.
I read that as
>You gently slide down his chest to his waist.
With the sound of bones shattering and all.
>>
>>27521919
Forgot to put the word HAND in there
>>
>>27521806
moar cutes, could stand to have these be a little longer, spend a little more time on the atmosphere, etc. but that's all me.
>>
>>27521968
A bit lazy on my part sorry but hey at least I deliver green
>>
>>27521755
Twilight was in Sunset's fantasy
Interesting...
>>
>>27521995
Indeed, and it's both cute and interesting, but yeah, feels like getting a free 1 page comic every day. Every day the last panel is a cliffhanger.
>>
>>27522061
I'm trying to get all the green I can do in a day.
Like I said I can't promise a long update but I'll try and get what I can done
>>
>>27522088
No pressure. The day I pay you is the day I start pushing for updates.
>>
>>27518299
best girl bump
>>
>>27522516
Stan damn it Mania, let the veteran have some sleep!
>>
>>27522537
No sleep for the bad mentor!
He needs to get the FUCK out of space and back to earth to help ACTUALLY train her!
>>
>>27522628
It's the Spider-genome training method! Lose your mentor figure and figure it out yourself!
>>
>>27522726
It doesn't even count! Flash didn't die, he just left because Tony told him to!
To go to space!
He gave her symbiote Hell AIDS!
Take responsibility, Flash!
>>
>>27522757
I need an oxford comma in that third line.
>>
File: image.jpg (63KB, 471x515px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
63KB, 471x515px
>>27522516
You shouldn't skip leg day, Flash
>>
>>27522757
I want to cum inside Flash Thompson
>>
>>27522814
Thanks for that, I thought I was in /co/ for a minute.
>>
>>27522807
Flash can't really 'skip' anything
>>
File: image.jpg (41KB, 480x360px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
41KB, 480x360px
>>27523164
>>
Bermp
>>
>>27521794
Fruit stands. Providing heroes and villains alike with a non-lethal place to land since the 1930s.
>>
>>27523744
http://youtu.be/QNuzgDrUXP0
>>
>>27524020
You've missed my point. I see a fruit stand, but I don't see anyone in it. You gotta land in the stand.
>>
I have some more ready now if you guys want?
>>
>>27524388
Just post it. No need to ask unless another writefag is dumping their green.
>>
>>27524482
>It has been two and a half months since the Fall Formal....."Incident"
>You are Anonymous, Anon to your friends
>Nonny to your Girlfriend, who is sitting in the passenger seat of your car as you drive her home from school
>Snowdrop. Beautiful, kind, smells nice and she actually likes you back
>Still hard to believe that cousin Cadance has an international matchmaking service
>A super successful one too
>As you stop at a set of traffic lights you see a couple of mutants on the street opposite, you narrow your eyes slightly and mutter under your breath
"..fucking muties..."
>"I-i've always wondered. Why do you hate mutants so much?"
>Snowdrops voice brings your attention to her before you look back at the lights, waiting for them to change
"...I don't really want to talk about it right now Snow."
>"O-ok. But, maybe later then?" She says sounding hopefull
>Sighing with a smile on your face you hold her hand briefly before noticing the light turn green and driving onwards
"Maybe later. Sorry Snow."
>And now you feel guilty
>"It's ok Nonny," She says as she reaches over and lightly touches your shoulder, "I'm sorry I made you feel bad."
>Glancing at her you notice she has that smile on her face, the smile that had you falling for her
>>
>>27524659
"Well, better get you home so that I can get that kiss, huh?"
>You say with a smile once again on your face as you make the turn onto her street
>She pushes you lightly with the hand that was on your shoulder
>"You, sir, are an insatiable flirt."
"You make it hard to stop, ma'am."
>You chuckle while she giggles as you pull up to a stop in front of her house
"Well, this is your stop Snow. I noticed you never said anything about not giving me that kiss. Nudge, nudge, wink, wink."
>She outright laughs at that
>You could listen to that laugh for hours
>"Alright, but only because you've earned it." She manages to say as she leans over and gives you a kiss on the cheek. >"Mwah."
>Which only makes the both of you laugh some more
"I love you Snowdrop."
>She smiles
>"I love you more, Anonymous."
"Are we really going to start that again?"
>She giggles as she gets out of the car with her cane, she grabs her bag and waves as she walks to her house
"You can't see it, but I'm totally waving back!"
>You shout after her, making laugh some more
>You smile as you pull away from the curve
>/Whatever did I do to deserve her. I need to thank Cadance a-/
>Your thoughts are interrupted by an ear splitting scream
>>
>>27524673
>/That sounded like Snowdrop!/
>You reverse until you're in front of Snowdrops house again, making sure to put the parking brake on, you exit the car and rush up to her house
>Once you get inside you see a man with ram horns coming out his head and spikes sticking up from his shoulders holding Snowdrop by the neck of her shirt
>>"Hah! Look at you litt-"
>Is all he gets out before you quickly pull out a taser and shoot him with it, praying that he isn't one of those immune to tasers
>He drops Snowdrop and falls to the ground spazzing out
>You run up and kick him in the head, hoping to knock him out
>Which it does
>You walk over to Snowdrop, she managed to crawl to the wall and is huddled there and shaking as you approach
"It's ok Snow. You're safe now."
>She stops shaking and trys to stand
>You help her up, and now she's hugging you tightly, and you are hugging her with one arm as you call for the cops with your phone in the other hand
>You glare at the unconscious mutant. /Fucking Muties./
---------------------------
Yes I know I'm rushing it a little.
Yes I know I haven't described what Anon looks like at all.
I have no idea what I am doing
>>
>>27524693
Oh yes, that's it for now.
Sorry it's not much. Just working on the next part right now, and I can not get it right.

May need to look up some lore before I continue.
>>
>>27524721
>Humanized Snowdrop
Oh lawdy I need this. There's not a lot of this on Derpi either, plenty of uncharted territory.
>is anon's gf
This is so cute, and I've never seen this done before.
Your pacing is fast, but I think you're already aware.
Oh, what kind of lore might the story be missing? I'm not an MLP-edia but I might have some answers or be able to point you somewhere.
>>
>>27524693
Can we get some Daredevil Snowdrop?
>>
>>27524825
I don't know much about Daredevil, but if the lore is acceptable.

Maybe.

I'll look into it.
>>
File: image.png (199KB, 926x862px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
199KB, 926x862px
>>27524835
Well.....he's blind
>>
>>27524809
And I was so excited about eqg Snowdrop that I forgot that this is a eqg-superhero thread. Forget what I said about lore, I only know as much about DC or Marvel as any normie, but the green here is still awesome.
>>
>>27524693
Check that pace m8.

>>27524825
>The first person who is blind needs to be Daredevil.
Nigger that's racist.
>>
>>27524939
Can you name any other blind superheroes?
>>
>>27524954
kek
>>27524939
IT'S IN MY MIND AND IT WANTS OUT!!!

I'll try to slow it down. Though that probably means I have to go through the next section and flesh it out more.
>>
>>27524976
It's all good. So long as you keep up the good work! Also have a bohemian Shimm-shamm
>>
>>27524991
>The Apache Tracker—and I remind you that this is that white guy who wears the huge and cartoonishly inaccurate Indian headdress—has announced that he has found some disturbing evidence concerning the recent incident at the Night Vale Post Office, which has been sealed by the city council since the great screaming that was heard from it a few weeks ago.
>He said that using ancient Indian magics he slipped through council security into the post office, and observed that all the letters and packages had been thrown about as in a whirlwind, that there was the heavy stench of scorched flesh, that the words written in blood on the wall said, “More to come, and soon.”
>Can you believe this guy said he used Indian magics?
>What an asshole.
>>
>>27524991
I know it's standard Uotapo flair, but something's very, VERY wrong in that pic, yet I can't grasp what.
>>
>>27525324
Once you read this you won't be able to unsee so fair warning here.

The way her left arm is bent
>>
>>27525372
>What is this guy talkinh about, that looks normal!
>Gah! My shoulder!
>>
>>27525372
...fuuuuuuuuuck...
>>
>>27524976
Good stuff, suns
>>
>>27525372
Yeah, tried bending my arm that way, it doesn't work
If the elbow weren't at such an extreme bend, it'd be fine
>>
>>27524693
Not bad, liking it so far
>>
So how's everyone's day?
>>
Is Harshwhinney a good match as JJJ?

>>27528179
You're stealing my line, trep, haha
>>
>>27528179
But I'm okay.
Covering half of a co-worker's shift atm.
>>
>>27528316
At least your coworker isn't thinking you're not doing your job, cause that's what I have
>>
>>27528442
Oof. Sucks.

I don't exactly have much to do, what with it being wednesday at a movie theatre and such.
>>
>>27528530
You're lucky then. My coworker is an overachiever and doesn't trust anyone to do their job but himself
>>
>>27528552
Yeesh, sounds like my mother.
>>
>>27528183
Just use the JJJ pony as JJJ
>>
>>27492123
“..Sorry?”
>“I know I was when I was your age,” he chuckles, “but hey, it’s alright. C’mon. Let’s go find my daughter. I just hope she doesn’t act like any of these girls now; especially if I’m to guess you have a reputation...”
>You shrug a little with a sheepish smile.
“Well, if by reputation, there’s not much else than my stuff on the news and my encounters with Spider-Woman…”
>“I hope so. It’d be a shame if someone were to find ya out for the things ya probably been doin’, huh?” says Bullock, once again antagonizing you.
>You look at GOrdon nervously, but shakes his head and rolls his eyes.
>“Be nice, Harvy. We’re inside the school.”
>“Why don’t he be nice and confess to what he’s done, huh? Whatcha hidin’, kid? Weed? Tryin’ not to rat a friend of yours out so ya come up with a plan to make ya all innocent on the news?”
>You gulp as you pull the collar on your shirt to let some hot air out.
“Well, no, not really. I don’t even know where to find weed. I’m probably too chicken to even try to ask for some.”
>Harvy continues shooting the same glare he’s given you this whole trip.
>It’s like he just wants to make you squirm to see if he can get something, even though he knows he won’t find anything.
>Despite this, you, Gordon and Bullock continue down the hall.
>You try to ignore the various numbers of students that start to eye you.
>The brave students in these groups actually start to follow you, and even braver ones just snap pictures of you like that one hot girl who was pink and with the green and yellow hair.
>It feels weird constantly being followed like this.
>Eventually, the hallway leads to a break to two other halls.
>The one on the right looks more simple and just has doors down all alongside it.
>The left hall continues to even more lockers and classrooms.

I was officially stoned when writing this part. Is there any even noticeable differences?
>>
>>27528672
... fair.
>>
>>27528690
Well, you had Harvy accuse anon of hiding weed
>>
File: dafuq's a sonic.png (297KB, 480x358px) Image search: [Google]
dafuq's a sonic.png
297KB, 480x358px
>>27528747
Oh. I forgot about this.

Huh.
>>
>>27528817
I have some more, though it still feels a little fast paced to me.

Should I work on it and try to slow it down, or just post it?
>>
>>27528690
I thought you wuz quitting ze drugs
>>
>>27528991
Didn't mean to reply to a post there.
>>
>>27528997
Oh I am. I wrote this that night. It was when I was probably the most high I got. I'm never doing weed again. I didn't really feel floaty or anything, just laughed at stupid jokes I made in my head and felt realy hungry. The next two days I had massive brain fog, and posted some of what I've written. This was what I wrote when I was the highest.

Think of it as I prewrite and write at the same time.
>>
>>27529083
http://youtu.be/YeElVWiICh8
>>
I'm gonna post what I have as I have to leave for work soon.
------------------------------
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Well, actually right now you're Spider-Woman
>It's been almost three and a bit months since you got hit by the orbital friendship cannon
>And right now, you are looking for this theme stealing bastard who calls himself Tarantula and attacks people at random
>The only thing linking these innocents and criminals together is that they are all Mutants
>You are on patrol, keeping an eye out for him
>The sooner you stop this monster, the better

>You are Anon, and you are on a date with Snowdrop tonight
>The two of you are sitting in a balcony listening to the Canterlot Symphony Orchestra
>Eyes closed, leaning against each other, one arm wrapped around her while she holds your other hand in both of hers
>With a big smile on your face, you can't imagine being anywhere else right now

>Once again you are Spider-Woman
>And it's now hailing so you decided to cut your patrolling short to avoid uneccessary damage to yourself and your suit
>You really hope that monster Tarantula isn't going to do anything in this weather
>....
>Even though it would be the perfect opportunity as no one in their right mind would want to go outside tonight
>....
>God damnit
>>
>>27529307
>Be Anon
>Be very grateful that this place has covered parking
>As you help Snowdrop into the passenger seat of your car you tell her
"I wouldn't worry to much about it Snow. It's probably the last storm of the season."
>You say as you help her with her seatbelt
>She takes the opportunity of your nearness to give you a peck on the lips
>"I love you."
>Smiling you reply
"I love you too."

>It is the next day and you are Sunset Shimmer
>And you have bruises on your bruises
>Fuck Tarantula
>He didn't do anything at all last night
>It's like he's mocking you
>You don't even notice as you walk past Principal Celestia

>You are Principal Celestia
>And you are worried about Sunset
>It either looks like she got into a fight, or that she was out doing things in the hail storm last night
>....
>You narrow your eyes and memorize her figure before walking back to your office
>You hope you are wrong

>You are Vice Principal Luna. And you hate paperwork
>You rub your eyes a little
>You swear they still hurt from that time nineteen years ago
>>
>>27529320
>You are Rarity
>And you are ~Fabulous~
>The best kind of fabulous
>Anyway you are talking to Anon about Spider-Woman
"There's even photos of her being hit with hail in the morning papers!"
>You giggle lightly. Always good to see something bad happen to a mutant like her
>They all deserve it
>Anon chuckles as you see Sunset walking nearby
>"What kind of idiot goes out into one of the worst hail storms Canterlot has ever had?"
>Sunset noticably winces
"That's a good question. Oh Sunset, darling! You look like you got caught outside last night. What happened?"
>She freezes when she hears your voice, and fidgets a little before answering, could just be from the pain though
>>"I-Iwas just doing some errands and lost track of time."
>Did she just mutter 'yeah that's it'?
>Your eyebrow raises as you look at some of her bruises
"Did you at least put something on those bruises darling?"
>>"Y-yeah, it's fine Rarity."
>/Why is she so nervou-oh dear./
>You look back at Anon and he is glaring at Sunset
>/How did I forget about 'that'?/
>You take a deep breath before talking
"Anon, why don't you go on ahead. I'm sure Snowdrop is waiting for you in our history class."
>/translation: I want to talk to Sunset when she isn't afraid./
>>
>>27529338
>He glances at you before glaring some more at Sunset
>"Yeah. Fine. See you there Rares."
>He does the 'I'm watching you' gesture at Sunset, making her wince, before walking onwards to class
>Sighing you turn back to Sunset and gesture to walk and talk
"I'm sorry Sunset. I can't believe I forgot about....'that'."
>She sighs as you both walk down the hallway passing other students
>>"It's not your fault Rarity. He's just being protective is all. It shows how much he cares about those he loves. Even if it is rather terrifying for me."
>You sigh as you stop in front of the door to history
"I'll try to have him come around. But at least you can talk to Fluttershy in biology before we meet up for lunch. Chin up Darling. Things can only get better from here."
>Sighing she smiles and shakes her head a little
>>"Thanks Rarity. I'll talk to you at lunch."
>Hugging each other briefly you go into the classroom as she goes to hers
>/Now how am I going to convince him that she isn't a mutant but is, in fact, a magical unicorn from another dimension..........Oh bugger./
>>
>>27529354
>Be Principal Celestia
>Be sitting at your desk in your office with your head in your hands
>On your computer there is a picture of Spider-Woman
>And there is no doubt in your mind that Sunset Shimmer and Spider-Woman are the same person
>/I suppose I should call her mother. For more reasons than one./

>Be Sunset Shimmer
>And you just got a chill down your spine
>Which is odd, because the classroom heater is on

>Back to being Principal Celestia
>You sigh heavily as you reach for the phone
>/Let's just get this over with./
>As you dial the number you think back to how tiring it was balancing your hero work with your school work, and a part time job
>Sighing you hold the phone up to your head
>/If we can't convince her to stop, hopefully we can at least help her out./
>*RING, RING*
>*RING, RI-click*
>"~You have reached the bedside of the most luscious sex goddess, Chrysalis. To whom do I have the pleasure of speaking?~"
"Chrys, it's Tia. I need you to come in so that we can talk about Sunset."
>>
>>27529369
>You hear thumping through the phone
>"Stop it! So, Tia, why do I need to come in to talk if your on the phone right now?"
>You look at the image of Spider-Woman on your computer screen
"It's," You sigh before continuing, "Please, just get here so we can talk, Chrys, I wouldn't suggest this if I didn't think it was important."
>There's some whispering on the other end of the call
>"Alright. But it had better be important! I don't get to see my husband that often you know."
>Nodding your head even though she can't see you, you answer
"I know Chrys. I'll talk to you soon."
>"Bye."
>>"I HAVE A BIG -"
>Is how the call ends
>And now you are blushing at the implications
>/Why would he want me to know that?/
>Oh God. You won't be able to get image out of your head for a while
>*KNOCK, KNOCK*
"Come in!'
>Luna comes in looking at some documents she's holding
>/And the trials never cease./
--------------------------
And that's it for now.
I haven't even started on the next part yet, so here's hoping it's pace is a bit slower.

Again, let me know what you think.

Damnit captcha, that's a pineapple not a tree.
>>
>>27529393
I'll have to ask you to tone down the perspective shifts. That's all, is nevertheless pretty nice.
>>
>>27529393
I dug the little character introductions.
I'mma guess some mugga done bad by Anon in a way involving loss of life.

Chrysalis's part killed me, though
>>
File: Muh phoenix a best.png (520KB, 897x402px) Image search: [Google]
Muh phoenix a best.png
520KB, 897x402px
>>27529654
Thanks for the memories.
>>
>>27529707
Cap and Toby, the best of friends.
>>
>>27529745
>Toby
Wat
>>
>>27529780
Roots joke.
>>
>>27529780
One of the best parodies I've seen.
>>
File: 9-11.png (2MB, 988x1046px) Image search: [Google]
9-11.png
2MB, 988x1046px
>>27530270
>>
WHYDIDYOUSAYTHATNAME
http://youtu.be/pTuyfQ5CR4Q
>>
>>27521794
>One of the thugs raised his gun and pulled the trigger.
>Spider-Woman ducked under the bullet and ran towards the guy as the others moved away from them.
>He didn’t have time to move as Spider-Woman grabbed his arm and flips him over her shoulder.
>A bunch of them dropped their gun and picked up various blunt weapons like pipes and boards.
>You couldn’t help but sigh at their decision.
“These guys aren’t very smart.”
>They started to run, trying to catch her off guard, but she just jumped over them.
>She lands on her feet and send a barrage of web bullets at the ones still holding their guns, pinning their hands to their sides.
>Spider-Woman moved to the side as a fist sailed past her.
>She grabbed it and twisted it until a sickening crack was heard.
>You winced at that.
“She kinda brutal.”
>She lets go of his arm then kicks him towards two guys who were running to the car causing them to hit their heads on the car.
>The thugs that Spider-Woman webbed earlier are running around trying to get the web off of them.
>She shots her web at them and pulls them together with them trying to separate from each other.
> “Get away from me, shit head.”
> “What do you think I'm trying to do.”
>As they tried to free themselves, Spider-Woman got a run start and jumped at the trapped thugs.
>She began to spin while extending her leg out as she got closer to them.
>With one swing, she hit all of the thugs before they knew what happened.
>She looked around, seeing all of them down on the ground and clapped her hands.
> “Thanks for showing a girl a good time.”
>One of the guys gets up, staggering on his feet, as he grabs a pipe and raises it above his head.
>You raise your hand as Spider-Woman turns around to face the thug.
>>
>>27530699
>Be Spider-Woman.
>You just participated in a rousing sport of Thug Smashing and you did it in record time.
>Looking around the alley, you saw all the thugs were either knocked out or tied up.
“Thanks for showing a girl a good time.”
>You were just about to leave when you felt a strange tingling in your head.
>Your spider sense went off.
>Turning around, you see one of the thugs holding a steel pipe above his head ready to strike you.
> “DIE SPIDER-FREAK.”
>You were about to knock him out like the rest of his friends when you felt the same tingling in your head.
>A quick backflip and you land on all fours to see the thug pinned down by a bunch of glowing green weapons.
“What the fuck?”
>Looking all around the alleyway, you couldn’t see if anyone did that but then you heard something.
>The sound of wings flapping.
>Up on the roof, you could just make out the white glowing wings on someone.
“The Angel? Was that really him?”
>Groans of pain filled the area as the thugs started to come to.
>Looking back up to see the angel gone is when you come up with a decision.
“Stick around boys.”
>You fire a bunch of web on each and everyone of them, making sure you don’t miss even one of them.
“You’re gonna be here a while.”
>Shooting a strand of web at the side of the building, you use it like a bungee cord to launch yourself into the sky.
>You do a front flip as you shot another strand of web at a building and gently tap your ear.
“Hey Twilight, I think I saw that guardian angel you were talking about.”


Ok just letting you know this is all for tonight.
Yeah 2 posts but I'm gonna try to work on a big post/action scene so please be patient.
>>
>>27530739
neat, thanks for the update, trep
>>
>>27530805
No prob, and sorry for it being short.
The scene in my head wouldn't be finished in time to post
>>
>>27530699
>>27530739
I'm feeling kind of ill, so thanks for the update, it made the night better.
>>
>>27530920
No prob
>>
>>27530739
Things are really starting to get rolling.
>>
We've got some new people, which means we need to update the list
>>
>>27532283
definitely.
>>
We about to die
Bump
>>
File: image.png (706KB, 680x830px) Image search: [Google]
image.png
706KB, 680x830px
Hail
>>
>>27532283
Got that right
>>
>>27530739
>"Stick around boys"
BA-DUM-TSH
>>
As I'm trying to slow the pace down a little, I don't actually have anything to post tonight.

>>27529654
I could share the biggest reason why Anon doesn't like Mutants if you want, or I could find a way to work it into the story.

Or both. I guess.
>>
>>27534295
Please weave it into the story, Mr. Securetrip
>>
VOID
WHEN
>>
>>27528817
So now we know your a white person, now if only we could find the gender you bean.
>>
>>27534555
We already established long ago that he's a dude
How long you been here?
>>
>>27534693
Since void, like his story, so trying to catch up with the others as well.
>>
>>27534295
Ah, keep it in story, it's exciting!

>>27534799
Home mine doesn't disappoint
>>
>>27535541
Homie, you have yet to disappoint.
>>
>>27535553
Aw, well that just fills my heart with warm tinglies

>>27535541
*Hope
Goddamn phone...
>>
>>27534295
I know you just started, and it's a bit weird to ask this at this point in time, but may you point me to your first post of your green? I unfortunately can't find it.
>>
File: Mugga.png (114KB, 494x444px)
Mugga.png
114KB, 494x444px
>>27535778
>>27514713

Let me help you.
>>
>>27535727
I know how you feel
>>
>>27535727
>>27535827
So is it a requirement for all great writers to have crippling depression?
>>
>>27535856
Maybe I should start writing too?
>>
File: image.jpg (26KB, 620x387px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
26KB, 620x387px
>>27535863
>>
Recent lurker and possible writefag.
So is this exclusively a marvel themed superhero thread? Or just any in general?
>>
>>27535894
Any superhero, mostly starring Sunset as Spiderwoman
>>
>>27535799
Thanks f@m

>>27535856
Not even gonna lie by saying that it helps to understand what depression feels like as a writer. When you understand those feelings and emotions, it makes the process to translate it all the more powerful for you as the writer, and more enriching and emotional for the reader. I think most writers should probably try to experience different things (the main reason I experimented with pot recently). Like, I took up martial arts for a story once, and do volunteer work so I can experience the environment, maybe talk to a homeless man if I go to a soup kitchen after giving him some cash (yeah, Marc the Hobo in my story was real).

>>27535894
I'm adding in the Flash, so I don't see why not. As long as Spider-Shimmer is part of the plot. Hell, I even have Commissioner Gordon and Barbara Gordon from "Batman: The Animated Series" at this point.
>>
>>27535856
A writer with self-worth is just a liar with a keyboard.
>>
>>27535976
What if it's derived from megalomania?
>>
>>27535976
You guys are too hard on yourselves
>>
Right, before we die, we need an updated list and a pastebin for 3 Suns
>>
>>27535856
I'm not depressed, i just have big fingers and a small screen to type on
>>
>>27535912
>mostly starring Sunset as Spiderwoman
>>27535925
>As long as Spider-Shimmer is part of the plot

This kind of thinking seems like a good way to kill off a thread and put off potential new writers; obviously it isn't the case (evident in the line in the OP) but it makes it seem like we'd tell people to fuck off if they aren't going to write or include Spider-Shimmer.
>>
>>27536285
Do what you want. Don't gotta get hateful. Doesn't necessarily have to have spider-shimmer, but it needs to be mlp/eqg characters
>>
>>27536315
Indeed, but we would need to change the thread name, I think?
>>
File: image.jpg (233KB, 1467x1091px) Image search: [Google]
image.jpg
233KB, 1467x1091px
>>27536335
Hmmmmmmmmmm, nah
Spider-Shim is best super waifu
>>
>>27536373
That looks like Silk-Cadance.
>>
I decided to go ahead and make the new one
>>27536440
>>
>>27536335
I don't think so. "Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends!" sound a lot better than superhero general. But what I do think we need to do is stop forcing Spider-Shim to be included in writers stories, it already happened with Void's story but fortunately he took it in stride.
>>27536315
>Doesn't necessarily have to have spider-shimmer, but it needs to be mlp/eqg characters
I think this sort of mindset is best, it obviously need to have mlp/eqg character otherwise it is just superhero fanfiction without the relevance to mlp but I think we need to ease off on the "you need to include Spider-Shimmer/Spider-Shimmer should be the main focus" even though Shimmy is best waifu.
>>
>>27536480
There was a superhero general. I don’t know if it's still up
Thread posts: 497
Thread images: 127


[Boards: 3 / a / aco / adv / an / asp / b / bant / biz / c / can / cgl / ck / cm / co / cock / d / diy / e / fa / fap / fit / fitlit / g / gd / gif / h / hc / his / hm / hr / i / ic / int / jp / k / lgbt / lit / m / mlp / mlpol / mo / mtv / mu / n / news / o / out / outsoc / p / po / pol / qa / qst / r / r9k / s / s4s / sci / soc / sp / spa / t / tg / toy / trash / trv / tv / u / v / vg / vint / vip / vp / vr / w / wg / wsg / wsr / x / y] [Search | Top | Home]

I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/


If you need a post removed click on it's [Report] button and follow the instruction.
DMCA Content Takedown via dmca.com
All images are hosted on imgur.com.
If you like this website please support us by donating with Bitcoins at 16mKtbZiwW52BLkibtCr8jUg2KVUMTxVQ5
All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective parties.
Images uploaded are the responsibility of the Poster. Comments are owned by the Poster.
This is a 4chan archive - all of the content originated from that site.
This means that RandomArchive shows their content, archived.
If you need information for a Poster - contact them.