H&H Quest-#10 a CYOA.

RIP

I'll just start this on saturday,really dissapointing.

>>27469185
We were in public sweetums. It went farther than it was supposed to anyhow. Don't worry, I'll make it worth your while after we find what we're looking for.

Go to the barber.

>>27471171
I'm really sorry. I ended up sleeping all day.

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boop~

>>27470302
>>27471171
>bumping your own thread twice

>>27473839
Shamefur dispray

>>27472419
>You thank the colt for info and wave him goodbye,youll get around that later
>"Hey akita come with me for a second"
>You walk over to a bunch and sit,trying a human like position but due to being a pony find it difficult and sit in a much more comfortable position.
>"Sorry about that,we were In public and didn't have the time to finish it"
>She looks at you for a few moments
"It's alright Amber..just please do tell me when we can go full way"
>She specifically says all way in a seducing way.
>"Hehe,dont worry about it,but come on let's go now"
"Go where?"
>The barber silly come on!
>You get off bench and yank her paw to get her moving almost like a mother would do to thir foal
"Okay,okay im going"
>The two of you arrive at shop having followed colts direction
>You are greeted by a unicorn mare who asks you how can she help you.
>Right then,what was it you needed

>>27474997
Ask to see the mane styles and stuff she offers, ask to come inside.

Also, I read the general, and I agree with them. You shouldn't be running a CYOA for only one player.

>>27475334
>"Yeah mane styles do you offer"
"Here you go,take a look at our catalog "
>You flip the pages until you see mane style shore has
>You point at the catalog,"this one"
"Hmm we could do that for you,based on your head shape and all"
>You chuckle at her "no no not for me! I need a little piece of that sort of mane"
"You sure about that? Your mane is a bit messy"
>You scrunch and attempted to look annoyed "I-is not.."
"Haha take it easy,yes I can give you the mane"
"But do you need it from a stallion or a mare,yes trust me some stallions do have long mane"
>What was it you needed again?

>>27475334
I'm running a coltshan quest reboot I doubt people will care that much,most think it was fucked from start

>>27475408
For a filly, please. While she goes to retrieve the hair, squeeze Akita's butt.

>>27475426
How long do you plan on running the quest? I appreciate that you picked up the tab for Coltshan, but entirely one-on-one isn't how CYOAs are supposed to be. I'd be fine with this concluding after we get Shore her body.

>>27475507
>Do you some from a filly?
>She gives you a weird look but complies,and bring you the mane
>While she walks out to the back of salon you firmly grasp akita's bum
"H-hey what are you doin"
>"Ooh it's nothing ~"
>The mare unexpectedly walk back in and gasps
"H-heres your mane and um..do you two need some privacy"
>What do?

I really want to make this a good quest I do,the base idea is good enough,maybe I'll make my own cyoa one day

>>27475644
Trail your hoof up Akita's spine and say "I think all three of us could use some privacy." Smile sultrily.

The fact that it's a continuation of Coltshan means you won't get any more players. So you shouldn't look to keep this going long term. Look to start something of your own.

>>27475715
>"Oh us? You seem to be quite interested about us"
>You place your hoof around akita's neck and move it from there stopping at her buttcheeks.
>"You wouldn't mind getting some privacy with us wouldn't you?"
"I-im not that kind of a mare..w-what if my little one finds out?"
>"We can always lock the room,new experiencees can be fun."
>Akita remains speechleess
>"So are you with us"
>You say with a lewd smile on your face
"Uh..fine b-but don't tell anyone."
>So where do you take your two girls
Alright,prob won't have ton of time to update as of now,will cont if thread lives by time I'm back at pc,do give me some critique if possible,what am I doing wrong.

>>27476138
Isn't this her place? Her room should be fine.

Aw, I was getting into it. But okay. Thanks for running. <3

>>27476191
>"This is your place right,we can stay here?"
"Well this a shop..so i can expect customers,though i guess i can close the store for some time"
>"Sounds like a plan."
>The mare walks up to sign saying open and flips it over so it says closed,and locks the doors.
>She sighs
"Let's go girls."
>She leads you to the bedroom and lies down on it.
"So we're doing it the traditional way,or you had something specific in mind?"
>Her directness s rather suprising.
>Not that you mind it that much,what do you do.