Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #12

>Thread theme
http://youtu.be/2lz-txAGcUo

>>27248152

Think you got my link wrong, Broseph.

http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1

Got an extra H in the beginning that shouldn't be there.

>>27248152
you put down the wrong link...
http://pastebin.com/i6kMKCnN

get your shit together, bloke!

>>27248152
at least you got Roommate's link right.

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>>27248219
It's late, I'm tired
Get off my ass

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>>27248152

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>>27248210
>>27248152
>>27248219
>Fudges everyone else's links
>Posts mine correctly

You're all right in my book Bloke.

>>27248243
get fucking bullied, nerd

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>>27248284
Whoa, just take it easy maaaaaaaaaan

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Oh yeaaaa, Red exists too.
I wonder what he's been up to?

>>27248304
I promise, I'm still writing

>>27248671
Not good enough, slave
Write faster! Don't make me get the hose

>>27248700
don't tease me, bloke

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>>27248706

>>27248706
>>27248700
It puts the green in the basket or else it gets the hose again.

>>27248700
Go the fuck to sleep. I'll take over.

>>27248761
Oh god not this shit again.

http://pastebin.com/ct3QZciv
fucking
finally

>>27248797
Oh boy! New green!

>>27248797
oh yes

>>27248807
>>27248815
give me any advice or whatever
it's 2:30, so I totally could have made huge mistakes and not've noticed

>>27248823
Sorry I'm too scared to legitimately criticize you in case you stop writing. The only advice I can give, is when sunset snuck up on anon while he was browsing, you told us what happened instead of showing us.
Other than that, I'll suck your dick if you keep going

>>27248836
dude, never be afraid to fuck my shit up
I'll give that bit a once-over tomorrow
what were the parts that you liked, that stuck out to you?

>>27248845
That apology from sunset made me get a heart boner

>>27248853
admittedly, my favorite thing that I'd thought of was Anon putting her mask on for her
sort of the reverse of the upside-down kiss in the film

>>27248797
>And so are you
I'm sure that goes for everyone

Live damn you, LIVE!

>>27248546
Leading an unfulfilling life trying to fill the void with fleeting internet fame

>>27248761
Don't tell me what to do

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>picked up night shift
>all the fun happens when I'm at work
>backlog of green keeps building 3fast5me
I miss the neet life but I hate being broke.

>>27250180
The true ultimate conundrum. I feel you

>>27250272
i forget, what picture are you/your waifu/your dog working on next?

from the last thread

>You could deal with Spider-Woman or the Power Ponies.
>But dealing with FUCKING IRON-MAN is a different story.
>You need to calm down.
“What career?” you said as innocently as possible.
> “You know what career I’m talking about, young man,” Iron-man said, “We’ll need to talk about this at the base.”
>A base huh?
>Need to look into that later.
>Taking a few steps back, you looked around at your surroundings.
>You tried to find anything you could use to your advantage.
>But your see it.
>Your golden opportunity.
“Why should I? I’m helping some people who need it aren’t I,” you said walking to the side.
> “Let’s just say, we can’t let people like you run around freely,” Iron-man said.
>Just need to keep them talking.
“So it doesn’t matter what I want huh?”
>Just a little closer.
> “You’ll have your freedom. The others can guarantee that,” Iron-man said as her pointed to the others.
>Your golden opportunity was right behind you.
>Putting your hands behind your back and try to keep them occupied.
“So I just follow you and what, get experimented on?” you said
> “Maybe you’ll find a nice girl to do that. I could introduce you to a few girls,” he said chucking.
>You bring your hands to your side.
“Thanks but no thanks. Also here, catch,” you said, throwing a couple of sulfur bombs.
>The bombs fly towards Iron-man and the woman as they explode and blind them.
>They couldn’t see as you started to run past them.
“Later,” you said as you dashed away.
>You stopped at a tattoo parlor and absorb the neon gas.
>After changing your power, you began to run as fast as you could.

>>27250593
clever anon

>>27250841
He's supposed to be a bit sbeaky and clever

>>27251239
Well, you've succeeded at that

>>27251423
Thanks. I'm trying to stay true to both Infamous and Marvel.
Well as much as possible.

>>27251470
I really liked inFamous 1+2
Their only problems were the Good Ends kept killing their main fucking character.
The "hangin with Zeke" cutscene gets me every time.
You're doing good so far.

>>27251493
>the Good Ends kept killing their main fucking character
The first game's good ending didn't kill him off. <.<

>>27251571
It's killed his determination.

>>27251571
fuck me, you're right
god, it's been a minute

>>27251493
I only played Second Son and loved it, but yeah trying to make sure Anon isn’t OP as shit. Powerful, yes.

>>27251613
You should consider doing a Festival of Blood-style one off, just for fun

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>>27248797
So im blade ah through reading this part and
Anon is starting to sound a lot like a certain Spiderman character. Hmmm, who was it again?
At one point he made Peter do this face

>>27252038
would you like to try Englishing again?

>>27252055
Nyet

>>27252038
Wtf happened here?
I meant to say halfway

>>27252086
I'm sure you meant to say a lot of things, bloke

>>27251851
I had thought of doing that after i get to a certain point in the main green. Just need to rent the game and the idea will happen

>>27252107
Your face meant to say a lot of things

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>>27252127
Hey Trepp, that reminds me, I finished your Fleur pic in case you didn't see it in the last thread.

>>27252127
Maybe do it as a what if epilogue to the main story.

>>27248797
>This is the best day of my life
Uh oh

>>27252149
Man, you fuck up the pastebins in the op, you can barely explain what you meant to say, you okay, bloke?
Is your brain falling apart?

>>27252161
For some reason, i think her boobs should be a tiny bit bigger.

>>27252161
Love how it came out. Can't wait to see what else you make

>>27252179
Honestly?
Probably

>>27252192
not sure how I feel about one of my more vocal supporters being half-mad

>>27252179
Being a clone is taking a toll on him

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>>27252277
says the scarlet spider-bloke.

>>27252277
It's more along the lines of
Schoolwork and
Lack of sleep

>>27252271
At least you have other supporters. And i like your work

so, I keep worrying, is Anon's semi-told backstory alright?
Not too wangsty, too wangsty, etc.?

>>27252361
Very Harry Osborn-ish

>>27252361
Meh... I haven't seen much angst or much at all of it really, this is the first time it's really been mentioned. If you want his backstory to play a key part in who he is, we need to see more of it and how it affects him.

>>27252381
I've hinted at it in little ways, nobody calling him after the bus attack, how dead his apartment is, how lonely he is, but they've been pretty small and I didn't want to draw a ton of attention to them.

>>27252369
If that is the way it's going. I wonder, when are we gonna see daddy.

>>27252408
That was not noticeable. I assumed his parent were dead and was only recently given evidence to the contrary. This may be what you were trying to portray towards other characters, but remember this is a first person story. We should not be kept in the dark to his/our own reactions.

>>27252437
that's fair, I was fretting about how much of a cipher for the reader

I shouldn't have been as worried as I was, but like I said when I started, this is my first time actually making greens for a board

>>27252470
*about how much of a cipher Anon should be for the reader

fuck me to death

>>27218599

>Funny thing is...
>You actually don’t do your own grocery shopping.
>Be Soarin.
>The Spider-Woman agenda gave you an excuse to walk around outside, so you took the chance to roam the streets of New Yoke.
>Bon Bon and you had split up at the college, and usually people don’t recognize you out of your trademarked costume.
>You thoughts were consumed by the spider girl as you go to get a coffee.
>You envy her a bit.
>She does have a secret identity, and can go and get coffee every day.
>Eventually she’ll come around. She’s a good kid.
>Speaking of good kids...
>A tiny hand tugs at your shirt.
“Hmm..?”
>A child, maybe the age of 4 or 5 was in his mothers arms and trying to get your attention.
>The mother was busy with her order and didn’t recognize.
>“You’re Soarin!”
>When you spot the kid wearing a Wonderbolts you smile.
>There goes your peace and quiet among the people of New Yoke.
“Yes, I’m Soarin. And who are you, young one?”
>“My name is Kevin, and I’m four years old! When I’m-”
>“Kevin, don’t talk to strang...ers...”
>His (presumably) mother had noticed and went right into parenting mode.
>Now she’s checking you out.
>“It’s not a stranger, it’s Soarin!”
>“S-Soarin, of, like –“
>Her eyes dart to the boys T-shirt.
>“the Wonderbolts?”
>She’s biting her lip.
>You do have that effect on women sometimes.
>“He’s the best! He’s like super strong and can stop a 13 ton truck going 50 miles per hour, he...”
>As the kid starts to list the some of your accomplishments you think back to your childhood a bit.
>You had been able to name facts about dinosaurs.
>By now most other people in the coffee shop were also looking in your direction and the line had come to an halt.

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>>27252586
>“Kevin, maybe ask him for an autograph?”
>And now you have to sign autographs for half the listeners.
>“Yaay!”
>The mother hands her child, Kevin, to you and before being able to takes out a small notebook and pen out of her bag.
>The son clings tightly to you as the she checks if her pen works by writing a phone number on the first sheet of paper.
>Classy.
>She mouths ‘call me’.
>Kevin’s hand meanwhile go to your head, fascinated with your features
>As you hand him back you feel him scratch your cheek.
>Ouch...
>“When I’m grown up I want to be just like you.”
>That hurt...
>You slowly lift your hand to your cheek.
>Blood...
>“And I don’t want to wait to grow up.”
>You take a few steps back and assess the situation.
>Maybe it’s just a kid with super strength?
>“You didn’t plan to call did you?”
>The mother licks the son’s fingers.
>Before your eyes the both of them transform into... you.
>You take a swing which they easily dodge.
>Both attack, and while you were able to block the mothers attack, the son grazed you on the shoulder.
>You felt the force behind the attack, even if you barely got hit.
>He was strong, inhumanly so...
>They couldn’t make a perfect copy of you, could they?
>You pray to god the taste of your DNA they got was only for your appearance.
>Many people have tried and failed to copy the super-soldier-serum you got.
>But that was to copy only your powers, not you entirely....
>A perfect clone...
>Surrounding civilians quickly ran to make place for you and your two copies to fight.
>You soon figured out that they were just minimally weaker than you, yet still have strength in numbers.
>Even if you could break out anything they try to restrain you, the other managed to get enough blows off in the meantime to brittle you down.
>Soon you find yourself only blocking and dodging blows as they come, as you are forced into the defensive.
>You’re loosing this fight...
Kevin
pic related

>>27252627
*losing

>>27252627
>And once you’re up against a wall...
>Focus on the fight.
>If you can overwhelm just the one and ignore the other for a while...
>You jump to tackle the one on your left.
>Sweeping him from his footing you land on top of him on the floor where you begin to redecorate /your/ face.
>The other first attempts to pull you off, but is then told something by the one on the floor in a strange language you didn’t understand.
>Hands wrap around your throat, but instead of strangling you you feel something stabbing inside.
>The fact which surprised you the most was that it was apparently not meant to be a deep wound.
>You struggle to get him off but the hold was firm.
>No blood was spilling from your neck but you soon felt very dizzy.
>Your struggle soon dies simply as you stopped being able to see nor hear.
>You feel yourself break down.
>You have to keep fighting!
“Raaaah!”
>Your throat was sore, and when you managed to lift your hand to it you were unable to feel a wound.
>“Forgive me sister...”
>“For the queen, brother.”
>You have been pulled from the defeated copy-monster-thingy, and your vision is returning, albeit blurry.
>He’s killing her (her? If he called her ‘sister’.)
>You’re staring into your own dead eyes for a moment before you look up again.
>“So much of your blood... I think I’ll be able to convince them for a while.”
>Convince... them?
>He’s taking your place...
>No..!
>“But you...”
>You helplessly watch as he turns to pick up the bag the mother had earlier and pull out a syringe filled with a transparent blue liquid.
>“I’d say this won’t hurt a bit, but I’m only rewriting your DNA. Expect excruciating pain.”

>>27252666
thanks, satan

pastebin updated
pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw

>>27252729
nice
really liked the "you redecorate /your/ face" bit

>>27252729
good shit mang
Try using some onomatopoeia for the next fight scene though. This one sort of blended together

>>27252729
Changelings/Skrulls. Shit is getting real.

>>27253083
I... hadn't made that connection.
I am an idiot, that's amazing.

LIVE

>>27250361
Currently working on pin ups for sinister 6. Maybe a version of sunny as each spidey

Would SpiderShim have an alternate dimensional counterpart like Spider-ham, only called Spider-mare?

Alright, for its not too much trouble, id like it if one of you could make an updated pastebin list
So I don't screw up next time

>>27253561
not him Looks like we're in for quite the treat. dftba

Here we go, in no particular order
Superkeaton
http://pastebin.com/i6kMKCnN
ShockerAnon
http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
Untitled7
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
Beans
http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red
http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
FemAnon (never 4get)
http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
treppahcs
http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1

I looked through the thread to find your corrections if your pastebin is still wrong its because you didn't complain about it

>>27253561
That’s awesome. Should we tell you what each Sunset wears?

>>27253640
looks like all the links are working
thanks Anon!

>>27253642
Unless you don't mind me just going down the line of spidey suits.
I figured red n blue, gwen, scarlet, iron, and symbiote at first, but i would add a noir and others as requested. Thoughts?

>>27253948
Do it you brilliant bastard!

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>>27253640
Oh
THANK
LAWDY
for this lad

>>27253948
Sounds good but would you be drawing them with masks or something?

>>27250593
>If anyone could see you now, they would see a colorful blur and image of a guy running.
>You stopped running once you reached a the back alleys behind some shops.
>Hiding behind some dumpsters felt like a good idea.
>Glad you're outfit is all black.
“Man that’s nasty,” you said as you got a wiff of the dumpster.
>It wasn’t long until the heroes arrived at the scene.
> “The trail ends here,” Spider-Woman said.
>So she was one of the girls.
>Doesn't matter, you just need to wait them out.
> “He couldn't have gone far,” the woman said, “We should look around.”
>With that said, you could hear all of them either walk away or fly.
>But you hear footsteps coming your way.
>You try to hide as much as possible to the dumpster and not make a sound.
>The sound of footsteps got closer as you held your breathe.
> “Uhg, I doubt he'll be near here,” the accented woman said as she walked away.
>You let out a silent sigh and looked along the side of the dumpster.
>You could see that woman walk away and towards the others which was good.
>It was good cause now you had a chance to leave or trap them.
> “Did anyone see him?” Spider-Woman asked.
> “I haven't seen the young man,” Iron-man said as he scanned the alleyway.
“C’mon and leave already,” you whispered.
> “The trail ends here,” Radiance said, “Where could he be?”
>You were getting tired of all this talking.
> Why couldn't they go look somewhere else?
>You decided that waiting was going to take too long, so you focused neon gas into your hand.
> “Maybe we should…. What’s that?” Radiance said.

>>27254525
>Guess they noticed your little light show.
>You stand up and throw a cluster of stasis grenades in their direction.
“Surprise.”
>Each of the grenades explode, trapping each of the superheroes in mid air suspension.
>You unleashed a barrage of neon beams at them.
>The sound of bodies hitting the floor was the sure sign to leave.
>You hightail it outta there as fast as you can.
>Using the buildings and jumping from them to roads and repeating the process, you’re sure you lost them.
>You start to slow down as you near the library that was about a few blocks away from your apartment.
>Over use of your powers leaves you out of breathe sometimes.
“At least I’m almost home free,” you said panting a bit.
> “I wouldn’t count on it, big boy,” a VERY familiar voice said behind you.
>You turn around in time to be hit by a vicious kick sending against the stairs of the library.
>You tried getting up but your arms wouldn’t move.
>Looking to your sides you saw that web was covering them and only one person could use them.
> “Guess you fallen for me huh.” Spider-Woman said seductively.
>You don’t say anything as you try to break free of your bindings.
> “Hey, stop that or I’ll have to punish you like a bad boy.”
>She walks over and sits on your lap as she bends over you.
> “But if you’re a good boy, I’ll reward you,” she said as she laid her chest on yours, “So which are you?”

>>27254878
All for now. Tell me what you think

>>27255023
I enjoy your writing a great deal, but one thing has been bothering me. You don't really describe where others characters are, what they're doing, or what they look like. Other than that, I get a kick out of reading your writing. I hope this is helpful.

>>27255023
Goddamn that was good.

>>27255023
lewd shimmer makes me grin

>>27255062
Sorry about that, to put it simply when at school they wear their EQG outfits and I'm gonna add the outfit details later. When Anon sees them he's more focused on what they'll do than what they wear

>>27255086
I didn't mean to have you just tell me what they're wearing or doing. If you describe the people and setting in more depth it makes the story seem more real. I just wanted to give some actual constructive criticism so you could improve your writing. Everyone asks for the criticism and I figured I might as well try. Sorry if this came off as rude, but I haven't really tried this before.

>>27255123
It's no problem and I know that. The main thing I will be doing is giving them better costumes later. If you want an idea imagine them right now wearing spandex bodysuits.

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>>27255023
Good so far with the pacing in the action. Real question is about the pacing in the parts with less action. How good would you say are you with portraying emotion in green?

>>27255076
Me too. I know pic related isn't Sunset but it's still nice.

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And thus the endless wait for green continues.

>>27255890
I'm going to be a while, if anyone is wondering
This week is going to be a thing.

>>27256005
just keep the green as good as it's been recently and I'll have no problems waiting.

>>27256019
I'll try to meet those standards

>>27254878
Is he going to absorb Sunset's powers if she kisses him?

>>27257258
No, he could only absorb energy based powers

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Expect green sometime late this evening.

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>>27248152
Honestly kill yourself OP your nothing but a huge faggot m8 if I ever see u in real life I would deck U m8 honestly I would fuck off with sunshit shitter is worst pony/human in the fucking show and movies you apparently don't realize that cuz your a fucking bum thanks for ruining spiderman who was already a shit character to be honest.
p.s. I hope u die In your gentle sleep

>>27257702
I remember when Bronies were bros to one another.

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>>27254066
I can do versions with and without masks if preferred.

>>27257757
Sounds good

>>27254878
>You stop moving and glare at her, not that she could tell.
> “Good boy. Now I need to make a quick call, so I’ll be right back,” Spider-woman said, patting your head like a dog.
>She got off your body and stood up, walking away a bit.
> Craning your neck, you could see her pull her phone from the white and black bodysuit she was wearing.
>Where the hell was she hiding hat?
> “Matterhorn, I got him.”
>You glance over to your right and tried moving it again but didn’t move.
> “Yeah, we’re at the library.”
>Since you couldn’t move your arm, you tried to focus your power to the palms of your hands.
> “Yeah, he’s waiting patiently for me.”
>Looking at your hands, you could see that some of the web was melting but not enough to break free.
>You stop as she turns around to face you.
> “I’m sure I find something to amuse me. Bye”
>You could see her open her suit in the front and stick her cellphone in cleavage.
> “Well it’s gonna be a while before they get here,” she seductively said walking towards you with a sway in her hips, “So why don’t we get to know one another.”
>You say nothing as she began to straddle your hips.
> “Strong and silent type, huh?” she asked resting her chest on yours, “Well you don’t have to say a thing if you don’t want to.”
>You feel your paintball mask begin to shift a bit.
> “But I’m gonna do what I want to you, until you talk,” she said as your mask was lifted up your head a bit.
>The mask was pushed over your eyes and showing your mouth to her.
>After that you heard a light shuffle sound.
>You feel her hands grasp your face gently as you something warm and wet touch your lips.

>>27257997
keep going.

>>27258052
I'm trying to finish this part before work.

>>27258058
Than don't let me keep you. Go on.

>>27257997
>What the hell.
>This girl was kissing you and something wetis in your mouth now.
>Oh that was her tongue.
“MMmmmnnn,” she moaned.
>And now she’s grinding against you.
>While she was kissing you, you tried to focus more of your powers into your palms.
>You tried to force her tongue back into her mouth.
>But she overpowers you and moves your head to the side.
>The webs began to melt the more she made out with you.
>Your lungs begin to burn as this little make out session continued.
>She released you lips as she lifted her head away from yours.
>She moved your mask back to it’s original position and you saw her plump kissable lips.
“I need a girlfriend.”
> “Maybe later,” she said seductively, “Gotta say stud, you’re a pretty good kisser.”
>You flipped her over and hold her hands over her head.
> “I love a man who can dominate,” she said flirtily.
“To bad you’re not my type.”
>You released some neon energy on her hands creating some handcuffs.
“But I’ll say this, that was one hell of a kiss.”
>You stood up and shot her legs creating some cuffs there as well.
“Later Spider-Woman. Can’t wait to see you next time.”
>You ran as you heard, “Get back here you sexy bastard,” as you ran away from her.
>Dad would laugh at your luck.

Yeah small update and sorry this part is a bit rough

>>27258284
Wait, I forget, why is she all over his dick?

>>27258284
His secret technique.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7GaJUmefY1I

>>27258309
She acts seductive and goes a bit to far, plus she's a bit interested in who Spectrum is

>>27258318
>>27258377
Okay, so, part Black Cat, part Spider-Woman

>>27258388
Dubs confirmed

>>27258388
Yup but it's mainly a heroic Black Cat but yeah

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>>27258494
cool, I'd down with it

>>27258534
Yeah can’t write classic Spider-man so I'm using Black cat

>>27258732
write what you know
failing that?
write what gives you boners
an erection is a powerful source of inspiriation

>>27258771
But i don't want to write a latex harem

>>27257702
>p.s. I hope u die In your gentle sleep
so kind of you

>>27258779
Well then that's your mistake

So, how is everyone's day going?

>>27259764
Fine. St my job and thinking of what to write for the next part

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>>27257702

>>27259764
Well...
http://youtu.be/sMMhRmdjiQk

>>27259792
How about Anon telling his dad about how he technically got sexually assaulted by Spider woman.

>>27259871
Delsin then high fives him

>>27259885
Whan I said telling. I met bragging.

>>27259764
psychotherapist gave me a better outlook on the report card I managed to obtain last friday

>>27259871
>>27259885
I was gonna have that happen with Abigail there as well. Then have i show the next day.
Debating on whether Anon has the video power or not.

>>27259949
Why wouldn't he?

Unless you're gonna go with "Anon only got Delsin's absorbing power and got neon form mommy later".

But Anon also has smoke, so did Hank sick around? In Second Son he either fucks off with his daughter, or dies so chances are Delsin never saw him again. Eugene though, he would at least keep in touch.

I think I would go with Anon has all the powers that delsin had at the end of Second Son.

>>27257538
Sweet I was afraid you were dead forever!

>>27260143
You raise good points. And yes, in this story Hank met with Delsin again and Anon gained his powers as well.
I'm just messing with some stuff of the core relays and giving Anon some unique abilities for himself.

>>27260216
So you're going with the good kama ending. Does Anon have concrete too?
Because I don't think Delsin would let Anon anywhere near Augustine.

>>27260293
No concrete. Wasn't that impressed by it and how would he even absorb that power when you need enemies that use it.
But like i said, Anon will have an ability or two that Delsin doesn't

>>27257538
Praise be!

>>27260315
any hint of what those might be?

>>27260315
Will we see Delsin in action? Him saving Anon from capture perhaps.

>>27260779
The grenades are clusters, regular shots stay the same, an angel form and maybe a smokescreen.
>>27260822
You will see him later. I have aplan for them

>>27257708
They still are, atleast else where, this is just 4chan being 4chan

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>>27257757
That my dear sir would be most pleasant.

>>27260897
I'm keen to see the results of that plan.

>>27261175
the pleasantist

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thread's dead tonight, huh?

>>27262162
>You will never hotdog her sweaty ass after she takes off her suit.

>>27262178
.... I might write that.
Later, not this weekend.
Probably.
Finals week tomorrow, much to do.

>>27262162
Getting off work soon and will post soon green

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>>27262162
It's the calm before the spider-storm

>>27262198
>tomorrow
Next week
herp derp muh brain

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>When you grow up and realize that Dash was based off of Flash Thompson

>>27258284
> “Ha hahaha.,” your dad laughed like a hyena while banging his fist on the dining room table.
>You sigh as your head hit the table, knowing he would find this amusing.
> “Let me get this straight. You stop some kids from vandalizing a wall.”
“Yes.”
> “Met Iron-Man, a mysterious woman and two of the seven heroes from the other day.”
“Yes.”
> “You managed to outrun them, hide and subdue them.”
“Only because I hid behind a smelly dumpster.”
> “Take a shower in a bit. But to top it off Spider-Woman subdued you and you made out with her?”
“More like keep her occupied while I melt the webs but yeah,” you said blushing a little bit.
> “This is rich. My son had better luck with girls than me,” dad said.
“No really,” you said sarcastically.
> “Believe or not, my first date with your mom involved a drug bust and a punch to the arm,” he said raising his hand.
>You groan but smile as you mimicked the same gesture for a high five.
> “Hopefully you'll bring this girl over for dinner,” a feminine voice said chuckling.
“Not you too mom.”
> “Yeah Abigail, it's my job to mess with him,” dad said looking at mom.
> “I know Delsin just like it was Reggie’s job to mess with you,” mom said.
>Your dad stops and looks down,you could see the sadness in his eyes.
> “I’m sorry Delsin,” mom said, knowing that was a sore subject.
> “It’s fine,” he said quietly.
“You really miss Uncle Reggie,” you said knowing the answer.
> “Yeah, Kinda wish he was here right now. I could just imagine him saying how much a bad influence I am yet say how proud he is of you,” dad said, chuckling sadly.
>It was quiet for a bit before you spoke.
> “What was he like?”
>Dad sighed as he ran a hand through his hair.
> “He was responsible, annoying and he was always a killjoy. But he was always there for me when our parents died…….And I miss him every single day,” dad said smiling to himself.

>>27262624
“He sounds like a good man,” you said.
> “I wouldn’t say that. Tried to arrest me the moment we met,” mom said frowning.
> “At least I got him off your back for a bit,” dad said laughing like his usual self.
>Nothing else was said after that.
“I'm going to shower then go to bed,” you said, as you stood up and walked to your room.
> “Anon,” your mother yells.
>You turn around and look at her, waiting to hear what she said.
> “Sweet dreams,” she said smiling.
“Same to you and dad,” you said waving at them.


>Be Sunset.
>In gym class the very next day dressed in sweatpants and a red shirt.
>You’re running the track with Rainbow and Fluttershy as you talked about last night.
> “So what happened last night?” Rainbow asked as she ran beside you wearing blue shorts and a shirt.
“We found Spectrum and chased him but he escaped,” you said sighing.
> “But what else happened? That can't be it,” Rainbow said, not believing her.
“Look he got away and I was careless,” you said sighing.
>Fluttershy ran up to you wearing yellow shorts and a green shirt as she was breathing heavy.
> “H-He didn’t hurt you right?” Fluttershy asked quietly.
“No he didn’t.”
>You saw her eyes go red.
> “If he did, then I would break him,” she said as her muscles began to grow slightly.
“Calm down Shy. We can’t have you losing control,” you said fearing that she would go crazy.
> “Yeah, Sunset’s fine. Plus we’ll find that guy and show him who’s boss,” Rainbow said, pumping her fists up.
>Fluttershy lost the muscle mass as fast as she got it, turning her back to her meek self.
> “O-Ok,” she squeaked.
>You all continued to run as your mind began to wander about last night.
>More specifically the kiss.
>You don’t know why you did it but it felt ...right.

>>27258284
>>You ran as you heard, “Get back here you sexy bastard,” as you ran away from her.
redundant

>>27262624
You use "_____ said" a lot, even when it's obvious who's talking

>>27262748
so not even Sunset knows why she kissed him?

>>27262765
still alright over all, thanks for posting

>>27262748
Done for now. Thoughts?

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>>27262624
>>27262748
>>27262765
They.
Are.
So.
CUTE.

>>27262847
I lose track of who says what at times.
As for Sunset, she has a crush on someone.

>>27262865
Then make it clear with distinctive "voices"
Not every line needs to be
>"dialogue" person verbed

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and now we wait

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>>27263354

>>27263453
hey, bloke, how's things?

Fresh green very soon, just finishing up a few things.

>>27263987
huzzah!

>>27263987
YES!

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>>27264000
Checked

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>>27264055
Checked

前回はシム・シャムの蜘蛛な冒険!
After a complete thrashing at the hands of Kraven, and having her secret identity revealed Sunset Shimmer was thrown for a loop.
Now, recovering from her wounds her roommate, Anonymous P. Oster has ventured out to stick up on groceries, and unfortunately found himself in the crosshairs of Kraven the Hunter, desperate to defeat Spider-Woman, all while Deadpool searches for Sunset on behalf of the Kingpin!
Will Sunset recover in time?
Will Anon escape Kraven's wrath?
Will Sunset cry at the end of JoJo Part 1?
Find out now, on Shim-Sham's Spider Adventure!

>>27264562
Continuing from pastebin.

>ThisTriggersTheKraven.jpg
>Still hoisting you by the collar of your shirt, Kraven turns to face the source of the intruding voice, disdain worn plainly across his face.
>Turning your attention to the reciever of the hunter's stare reveals a well built man clad in black and red spendex with assorted weapons strapped to his limbs.
>"What are you doing here Deadpool?"
>Demands your captor.
>The masked mercenary shrugs.
>"Oh you know,"
>He says nonchalantly.
>"I was in the neighborhood and felt like saying hi."
>Despite the opaque mask you swear that you see the smug grin plastered across his face.
>Kraven however, is not amused.
>"Youve said your hello mercenary, now take your leave."
>Deadpool chuckles quietly and shakes his head.
>"Sure thing buddy, you two just keep having your fun back here, I'll be on my way."
>With a wink and brisk wave Deadpool strides back out into the street and disappears from view, leaving you alone with Kraven once again.
>"Now, where were we?" Growls the hunter.
>"Ah yes, you were about to tell me where the Spider-Woman is."
>The venom in his voice burns at what vestiges of bravado lurked in your mind.

>>27264584
>Looks like you're doomed.
>Only a miracle could save you now.
>"DYNAMIC ENTRY!"
>Without a chance to react a red boot flies in from behind and connects with Kraven's skull, his grip on your shirt relaxes and you drop to the ground, no longer restrained by the brutish strength of the Slavic spider-slayer.
>Quickly you spring to your feet and shake yourself off.
>Looking up at your saviour gives you a good look at Deadpool, now standing triumphantly on the shoulders of the unconscious cretin.
>"Tah-Daaaah!"
>Exclaims the mercenary as he throws out jazz hands.
>"Whaddya think kiddo? Pretty sweet huh?"
"Y-yeah."
>You stammer.
"Thanks."
>"Don't mention it."
>Replies the crimson contract killer as he hops off of Kraven's back and onto the concrete surface of the alley floor.
>Kraven grunts and begins to stir, the kick to his cranium clearly not enough to keep him down.
>Swiftly Deadpool crouches next to the villain, lifts his head a few inches, and promptly slams his forehead against the cold grey ground.
>"Sleep tight, preferably not as tight as your pants."
>Deadpool visibly recoils.
>"Seriously, tight pants on guys are bad, leopard print just makes it worse."
>Springing to his feet the masked man faces you once again and extends his hand.
>"Nice to meet ya kid, the name's Pool, Deadpool. How 'bout you?"

>>27264600
>Apprehensively you shake hands with your saviour.
"Anonymous."
>"Ahh, keeping things on the DL, I get ya. Don't want to be giving your name out around a freakshow like the Slavic shitknocker huh?"
>He says as he nods towards the unconscious Kraven, still shaking your hand awkwardly.
"No, Anonymous is my name."
>You explain.
>Deadpool's mask contorts with his facial expression to show a facsimile of his bemusement.
>"Ah, so your parents hated you, I know the feeling. Anyhow, pleased to meet you!"
...
....
>Seconds pass in silence, your hand still held in his firm grip as he works it up and down, up and down.
>What was once an awkwardly long handshake has now grown into an uncomfortably long one.
>Your attempts to break free are met with a tightening of Deadpool's grip, and an increase in the speed at which he pumps your arm.
>Growing more irritated, and somewhat concerned with each passing second you open your mouth to object.
>Only for your arm to be pulled downwards roughly and Deadpool's knee to drive itself hard into your face.

>>27264617
>CaptainFalconKnee.gif
>With all the grace of a paraplegic giraffe you stagger backwards and collapse onto the ground, painfully striking your head against the concrete.
>As your vision begins to fade you hear the scratchy, irksome voice of the masked mercenary talking to himself.
>"Show me ya moves!"
>And with that the world goes dark.

>Pain.
>Intense, constant, pain.
>That's what you're feeling right now.
>In your head mostly, but your legs are feeling it too.
>As much as you'd like to sleep off whatever was ailing you, the little voice in the back of your head was telling you open your eyes and get up.
>Realizing that that's sound advice you slowly open your eyes and force yourself to sit upright.
>Nothing.
>Well, nothing you can see at least.
>Wherever you are it's pitch black, no light of any kind.
>Just inky darkness all around.
>Instinctively you call out.
"Hello!?"
>"Howdy!"

>>27264632
>Is the reply you get as a 140 watt incandescent bulb flashes to life directly at your face, casting a blinding white light into your eyes.
>"It's a good thing you're awake! My ass was getting sore from sitting in this chair so long."
>As your bleary mind tries to process everything that's happening a certain red and black suited man steps into the blinding cone of light.
>"Now I know what you're thinking."
>Announces Deadpool.
>"Mr. Pool, where am I, why am I here, why did you knee me in the face?"
>With each phrase he strikes an over exaggerated thinking pose.
>"Those are all good questions, only two of which I'm actually going to answer."
>The mercenary roughly plants his boot on your chest and forces you back against the floor as he applies he weight.
>"Because I felt like it, and because you have information that is very VERY important to me and my 'Deadpool wants lobster dinner' fund.
>More force is applied to your sternum.
>"You see, Kingpin is willing to pay me a great deal of cold, hard cash if I can bring Spider-Woman in dead or alive."
>He says as he twists the sole of his boot against your flesh.

>>27264638
>"I know that Kraven isn't stupid enough to be chasing some random shmuck and accuse him of knowing where Spider-Woman is for no reason. Clearly you know /something/, or I wouldn't have had to save you from him."
>The weight on your rib cage increases further, reducing your breathing to shallow huffs.
>"Now I was watching your little exchange with Squats McSlavshit so I know you weren't willing to talk for him, however! Kraven doesn't like hurting people unnecessarily."
>Deadpool pushes his masked face mere centimetres from yours and smiles widely beneath the form fitting fabric.
>"I do."
>He says, voice barely above a whisper.
>Standing up Deadpool removes his foot from your chest and stares down at you.
>"So how's it gonna be kid, the easy way, or the fun way?"
>As you breath heavily to replace the air that was squeezed out of your lungs you struggle to sit upright again.
>"Tick-tock bucko! Gimme an answer or I'll decide for you."
>Heaving for breath you start to speak your answer..."
http://youtu.be/RxkezvGwI20
>Only for your phone to start ringing in your back pocket.
>Your captor calmly bends down, reaches into your jeans and withdraws your [nondescript smartphone] and stares at the screen for a second before answering it.
>"Hellooooo!"

>>27264638
oh Wade, you dick

>>27264648
>You are Sunset Shimmer, and you are on the verge of tears.
>Fuck Anonymous for convincing you to watch his stupid Cambodian Claymation videos.
>"Fare... Well..."
"No no no!"
>"...Erina."
"No!"
>The fiery explosion on the TV screen blankets the room in a yellow glow, as you stare intently at the scene unfolding before you.
"It can't end like this!"
>"Let me go, JoJo!"
>Hisses the severed head on screen, and your face instantly scowls.
"SHUT UP DIO!"
>You yell as you bite down on your fingernails.
>Heedless to your shouts the episode continues uninterrupted.
>"Let me go! Think about it! I can heal you! You can live forever with Erina! JoJo!"
>You're on the edge of your seat as the animated flames continue to engulf the ship as the two characters on screen are surrounded by the red and orange lights of the burning vessel.
>You can feel your heart rending with each passing second.
>"JOJO!"
>Shrieks the disembodied cranium.
>Dio receives no answer.
>"He's... He's..."
"Don't say it. For the love of Celestia! Don't say it!"

>>27264659
>"Dead."
>With those final words your emotions are pushed over the edge and the tears begin to pour forth from your eyes, obscuring the tv screen.
>You can hear sounds and words in a foreign tongue, but the actual scenes and subtitles are hidden behind the blurry mask of tears.
>The remaining few minutes of the episode run their course, but once they finish you simply turn the television off and lie on the couch as you come to terms with what you just watched.
"Too pure for this world."
>You mutter to yourself after your tears had dried.
"I'm never letting Anon convince to watch these shows again..."
>Speaking of Anonymous, didn't he step out to buy some groceries almost two hours ago?
>You figure it'd be a good idea to call him and see what's keeping him so long, you're getting hungry after all.
>Reaching into your pocket and pulling out your [nondescript smartphone] you navigate through your contacts and highlight Anon's name and hit "call".
>one ring...
>Two rings...
>Three rings...
>Four rings...
*Click*

>>27264663
>Cue Roundabout

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>>27264663
call being answered and someone on the other end.
>But the voice you hear is most definitely not Anon's.
>It's a hoarse, grating voice that automatically gets on your nerves, as well as strike fear into you.
>"Hellooooo!"
>You know exactly who it is.
>Deadpool.

I'll be the roundabout!

There's my less than substantial update. I'm sorry for it being shit, but if I took any longer I would've felt even worse about how slow I am.

Let me know what you think, any feedback is greatly appreciated.

>>27264617
>"Ah, so your parents hated you, I know the feeling
My sides have transcended time and space

>>27264714
only a few grammar mistakes, happy to have an update, however small
any idea when we might see more from you?

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"KEEP AWAY FROM ME, YOU LUNATICS!"
>"AW, COME ON! THIS ONE'LL STICK 'FER SURE!"
"STOP 'HELPING' ME, DAMN IT! EACH TIME YOU TRY TO 'REDEEM' ME, SOMETHING GOES HORRIBLY WRONG, WITH POSSIBLE PHYSICAL HARM TO MY PERSONAGE! AND BESIDES, I *DON'T* WANT TO BE REDEEMED, DAMN IT! I LIKE BEING A BAD GUY!"
>"WOULD YOU SHUT UP?! I'M TRYING TO MASTURBATE UP HERE!"
"Excuse me for a moment."

ONE POSSIBLY OVER REACTIONARY VIBRO BLAST TO AN APARTMENT LATER:

>"MY SPLEEN!"
"Awww, yeah. That? That I would not have been able to do as a hero, not without dragging the word 'hero' through the mud. As a villain? I have a practically have a license to be an asshole when I want. Sure, I can be somewhat nicer than some of the other villains around, but in the end, I like the freedom it affords. Plus it just feels *wrong* being a goody two shoes."
>"...So, yer' that dead set in 'yer ways, are ya?"
"Yep. Might as well just go on home and play with your dollies, or...whatever you do when you aren't playing heroes."
>"Right, Plan Omega, girls."
"...I don't think I like the sound of this plan. And that's just from the name."
"Oh, I think you'll find it's something you're VERY familar with~"
"Familiar with? Wha--"
"Yeah, after all, Spidergirl---or was it Spiderwoman? Yeah, she uses it on you all the time!"
"Simply put, we're gonna date ya' to prevent your crimes!"

>Your face at this moment

>>27263490
Well...
http://youtu.be/GexBMuXVU1I

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>>27265259

>>27265259
HE RETURNS!

>memewhile at Hasbro
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58SF0PzbzVw

>>27262748
>It’s the end of the day and it felt like a blur.
>You grab your backpack out of your locker and walk down the hall.
>You couldn’t focus on anything but the encounter last night.
>Why did you kiss Spectrum?
>You don’t like him…..do you?
“I can’t like him. I mean I know nothing about him.”
> “Can’t like who?”
>You didn’t shriek or jump.
>But you did turn around to see Anon zipping up his grey hoodie.
> “Scared you huh?” he said grinning like a fool.
“No, I wasn’t scared. I was playing along.”
>You were glad no one saw you especially Rainbow and Pinkie.
> “Sure you were. So what’s up? Usually you’re with your friends at this time.”
“They had other plans, so I’m all by my lonesome today.”
>They were actually going on patrol themselves and told me to relax for the day.
>You were happy that they were worried about you.
>But now you were a bit bored.
“Now I’m gonna go home and probably just veg out.”
>You walk out the door with the intention of going home but feel a hand on your shoulder.
> “Well since you got nothing to do, why not hang out with me?”
“Eh why not, maybe you’ll amuse me for a while.”
>You haven’t hung out with him in a while and it would be better than doing nothing.
> “I’ll try to meet your standards, madame,” Anon dramatically said as he bowed.
“You know, I think we have a score to settle.”
>The both of you are sporting evil grins at each other.
> “Oh I’m sure we do.”
>You couldn’t wait to put him in his place.

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>>27248152

>>27266556
>You couldn’t wait to put him in his place.

On his knees, between your thighs, I'd bet.

>>27266691
Slow down man, he needs to develop their relationship a bit first.
Don't worry we'll get to that soon enough.

>>27266719
Got that right but >>27266574 is right about that happening at a later time

>>27266774
I'm... Not sure I follow?

>>27266855
I meant that will happen later. Stupid auto correct messes me up sometimes.

>>27266874
I think anon's more wondering what you linking to >>27266574 meant

>>27267059
Wrong link then meant to touch this one
>>27266691
On my phone doing this but this guy's right>>27266719

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>>27267059
maybe because Aunt May is hot stuff Tony Stark is trying to get it on with?

poor murifags, have their north american release May 6th, while the rest of the world has seen it already (international release: April 27)

>>27267095
Wait what? I don't want believe you because of the sheer absurdity of a Captain America movie released in another country first, but I remember that this happened with the winter soldier.

>>27267095
Already found a low quality rip of it online, so I'm not exactly starving. Besides, with finals next week, I'm going to have to wait to see it anyways.

>>27267272
civil war as spoiler free of a spoiler as I can give as anyone expects it
Peter's personality is an adorable loudmouth and won't shut up, his character while on point feels too young (but I guess 15/16 is alright)
His powers include wall climbing, strength and speed (he caught the winter soldiers metal-arm punch easily), his web shooters are artificial (thank god)
His involvement in the story is utter fanservice and the one out-of combat scene (yes, only one) somehow manages to feel too long because you know he has absolutely no point being in the movie. At least he has more facetime than Antman's 12 seconds of glory.


There is "the one other thing" which I noticed, so don't get your panties wet people who already watched it, let's not tell anyone until some time after the movie came out in america.

>>27267341
I motion to ban all Civil War spoilers from this thread. All in favour press F.

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>>27264714
Awesome update. Can't wait for the next one.

Where is beans? Last we heard he was pissed because an idiot had decided to expose his powerlevel.

>>27268071
no clue, hope he comes back. So long as random smut doesn't become the major focus of his greens, I still really like it.

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>>27252729
>Be Anon.
>Be happy.
>It’s been a while since you’ve been happy.
>Content with the way your life is developing.
>You enter your place of work.
>Paid internship ad Flim Industries.
>Formerly known as FlimFlam Industries, but then one of the brothers exploded a building and turned into some goblin monster.
>Your ID lets you pass the electronic gate in the front, but immediately after you see a security guy put two finger to his and tilt his head in proper fashion.
>Act cool, there’s no way it happened because you entered the build-
>“Mr. West?”
>Would you let me finish my train of thought?
“Yes, that’s me.”
>“Please step into the elevator.”
>He gestures you to... the executive elevator, which, in dramatic effect, opens up for you even though you’re across the hall.
>This is creepy.
>Not ‘goblin monster’-creepy, but ‘house of cards’- or ‘suits’-creepy.
>Evil rich guys who can toy with peoples lives completely legally.
>“Sir?”
>Did the 40-something ex-military hunk of a security guard just call you ‘sir’?
“Yeah, I just... thinking.”
>You make your way into the elevator.
>Shit...
>This sucker has a carpet-floor, and one, two, … six security cameras in all of it’s corners.
>Hexagonal elevator.
>Because fuck you, that’s why.
>As the door closes some panic.
>There are like .5236 too many radians in these corners.
>You don’t feel save.
>Where are you going?
>The elevator barely gives you a feel for it’s movement.
>There’s a screen, a freaking terminal, why didn’t you look at it immediately?
>You’re going up.
>Don’t panic.
>They are watching...
>From six different angles.
>Voyeuristic bastards.
>Don’t show fear, show curiosity...
>Why would you be afraid?
>Because you used the knowledge you obtained here to make yourself a super-suit and work in a company who’s former CEO went berserk after infusing himself with prototype super-soldier serum?

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>>27268550
>Yeah, you’re worried.
>Flimdustries even uses a similar gizmo to yours, with four tentacle-y arms, while you have some more spider-looking ones.
>You also control them by reading the muscle movements from your fingers whereas some combinations result into the spider-legs then walking.
>They however control theirs via reading brainwaves. Practically like any other limb.
>It just takes practice.
>They have the resources to know when something someone’s running around with tech similar to theirs.
>And while you legally bought all the components here, it might be a stretch for them to assume you had been the guy in the suit yesterday.
>Just play it cool, Anon. Nothing’s bad gonna happen.
>This elevator ride is taking forever...
>Eventually it stops on floor 17.
>You just want to exit as the floor opens, yet you almost run into someone.
>Said someone was a dark skinned woman with long straight black hair.
>Wait, no, that’s not black... a shimmer of green?
>Radical.
>For some reason it looked great together with her business getup of a dark discreetly pinstriped...
>You lack the proper names for formal attire.
>She’s wearing something business-formal.
>While the jacket would give plenty of cleavage, yet a shirt (of some sort) blocks any view on the goods.
>It’s teasingly accenting her voluptuous breasts which were only form fitting for her broader shoulders.
>On any other woman you might have thought them too big, but on her it just flew perfectly together.
>She was really fit too, muscular even. Way more than Sunset, but just beyond what you’d post in a muscle girl’s thread.
>That jacket must have been a custom fit.
>Come to think of it, she has plenty of traits just not developed enough to justify putting her in any category on /d/.
>Even her face seems asian (the internet loves that, fucking weeaboos), but she’s like 6’5’’
>You can’t quite place her ethnicity. Maybe something mixed?
>All you know is that she is smoldering hot.

>>27268558
>“Anon West?”
“Y-yes?”
>God damnit, you’ve been staring.
>“You sound unsure.”
>Her lips form a devious smile.
>She’s wearing a lipstick similar to her hair color and the discreet eye shadow she’s wearing.
>Color coordinated with her attire.
>Oddly much work in the morning for security...
>At least you assume she’s security from the freaking gun she has strapped to her hip.
>“You are Anon West, is that correct?”
“Yes, ma’am.”
>“That’s better.”
>She raises her arm, and for a moment you thought she wants to shake yours, but she places her fingertips on your chest and gently pushes you back into the elevator.
>Simultaneously she steps inside and takes position right in the center of it.
>Which meant you had to be somewhere between her and the wall.
>That’s not how you effectively use the available space given to us, lady.
>You don’t say anything, though.
>You’ve scared and aroused.
“And what’s you name, ma’am?”
>She gives you a side glance and the same smile from earlier, yet does not answer.
>After the elevator door closes again she taps a pin on her chest and summons a holographic terminal before her.
>For a second you were amazed by the pins capabilities, but upon further inspection you saw that the projection came from the elevator.
>Thinking further it was also the elevator that captured her gestures (the six cameras) for a computer somewhere to interpret them and for the security gal to work on in as one would a terminal.
>That’s probably also the reason why she’s standing in the middle of the elevator.
>All’s fine, Anon, don’t worry.
>The cameras are explained, her standing in the middle of the room is explained...
>But she did not tell you her name, so there’s still weird things going on.
>Anyway... she’s apparently commandeering the elevator to go down, while accessing your employee information.
>Be a down to earth guy.
“Anything you want to know, feel free to ask, ma’am.”

>>27268571
>She turns to you, the terminal tries to follow, but once it hits you it drifts back a few inches.
>“How did you hurt your arm, Mr. West?”
>This wasn’t curiosity, nor was it concern.
>She spoke too matter-of-factly, no... Almost like a teacher testing you in front of class.
“Oh, it’s nothing serious. I just slipped in the shower and sprained it. The cast is only on for a week.”
>“Slipped in the shower,”
>She repeats after you, before smiling a little.
>“is that so?”
>You couldn’t help but flinch a little.
>Don’t be paranoid, she’s not expressing doubt, … is she?
>“You’re aware that we work here with highly sensitive equipment and clumsiness is intolerable?”
“Heh... It wasn’t actually clumsiness... I had... uhh... been caught off guard by a serious allergic reaction to some new shower gel I tried.”
>“Hmm...”
>She narrows her eyes and takes a closer look at you.
“Is my face still red? This side was affected.”
>You gesture to where you had to peel off your skin not 24 hours ago.
>She’s almost uncomfortably close to you.
>She licks her lips...
>“Now you are~”
>A grin spreads on her as she leans back again.
>You can’t help but smile too, because this time her amusement seemed genuine, even if it’s on your cost.
>Okay, ice has been broken.
“I don’t rightly know why I was called, ma’am. I came to work with Dr. Mason again, but security gestured me toward the elevator.”
>“Oh, but I guess a smart young man, such as yourself, has an idea why someone would call for him in this environment.”
>She’s deliberately dodging the question at hand.
>Doesn’t she know either, or...
“Science is not about making guesses and hoping for the best, it’s about collecting information and using them correctly... so, where are we going?”

>>27268577
sorry to end mit scene, but I cut my finger at work today bad enough to having to go to the hospital (technical issue more than it was human error but I could have avoided it)
also I have a long weekend ahead so I won't be having lunchbreaks or busses where I have nothing to do but write...
don't know when next update is, but until then, like, comment, subscribe and thanks for watching, good luck in solo queue and have a wonderful day
(but seriously, I always appreciate feedback)

>>27268609
well fuck, don't lose your finger.
several spelling mistakes, but nothing too fucked.

>>27268622
>several spelling mistakes
do tell me where they are, I run a spellcheck but sometimes I just use something way wrong or a homophone, so i don't know

>well fuck, don't lose your finger.
problem is the toxic coolant which comes with milling tools

>>27268648
What are gloves?
And why the fuck were your hands anywhere near something that would cut you and get coolant in the wound?
I hope you aren't one of those poor fuckers who eventually gets wrapped around a lathe because he put his fingers where they shouldn't be

>>27268550
>Paid internship ad Flim Industries.
*at
>You don’t feel save.
*safe
>>27268571
>Oddly much work in the morning for security...
*just weirdly worded
>For a second you were amazed by the pins capabilities
*pin's
>>27268577
>“is that so?”
*Is

>>27268648
and that's everything I could find with my sleep-deprived brain

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>>27268550
that use of a sixth π radiens though

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>>27266774
expecting quality lewd in a few days/weeks

>>27269215
There will be lewd

>>27269286
woot

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>>27264726
Next week most likely, but with luck this weekend if work lets up. On that note, pastebin has been updated to feature last night's update.
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY

>>27264723
Glad to see that someone is 'avin a giggle.

>>27267995
I appreciate the kind words Anon

>>27266556
> “K.O. You win.”
>You followed Anon to his home and the both of you have been playing Street Fighter for the last thirty minutes.
>And you got ass kicked with dragon punches and fireballs.
>Why you played a game he was good at, you'll never know.
>You looked at a smug Anon as he opens his mouth slightly.
“Don’t say it.”
>His mouth opens a little more.
“I'm warning you Anon.”
> “I win again.”
>You groan loudly as he said it.
“I'm done with this game.”
>Anon laughs at you and ejects the game from his PS4.
> “C’mon Sunny. Want to try your luck in MKX?”
“No way. I’ve had enough for one day.”
>You shook your head, not wanting to have him perform fatalities on you all day.
“Mind if we watch some TV or a movie?”
>He shrugs and turns the system off.
> “Sure, i don't feel like winning anymore today.”
>You feel your eye twitch a bit as you try to calm down.
“I'm just having an off day, alright.”
>He just grins, which irritates you.
“Anon, shut up.”
>He holds his hands up in mock surrender.
> “Hey, I didn’t say anything.”
>He gets off the couch and walks over to the cd stand.
>You look around the living room and see some pictures of Anon’s family and a few decorations.
“Hey Anon, we’re your parents? Aren't they here”
>You haven’t seen them in a while, plus they’re pretty cool to talk to.
> “No. They told me they're going out to dinner, so it's just you and me.”
>You froze when you heard that.
>Alone with Anon in his house.
>Why’re you nervous?
> “Why?”

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>>27270577
yey

>>27270577
“N-No reason. J-Just haven’t s-seen them in a while.”
>He looks at you curiously and walks towards you.
> “You ok, Sunny? You don’t sound too good.”
“I just been sneezing a lot today. That’s all.”
>Anon leans forward bringing his face closer to yours.
>You feel his hand on your forehead as his face was a few inches away from you.
> “You don’t feel too hot, so I guess you’re ok.”
“T-Thanks.”
> “Just making sure I’m not gonna get sick.”
>You lightly glare at him, as he walked away.
“Jerk.”
> I’m not that bad, but you sure you’re ok.”
>You shake your head but smile at his caring attitude.
“Yeah, I’m fine. Do you mind if we just watch some TV?”
>He shrugs and walks back over to the couch.
> “Sure. Seen everything anyways.”
>He grabs the remote from the table and changes the channel.


>Be Anon.
>And you guess you fell asleep on the couch but you needed that nap.
>But you hear quiet giggling and chuckling close to you.
>Opening your eyes, you’re greeted by your parents.
>Both of whom look like the cat that ate the canary.
“Wha-”
>Your father puts a finger to his lips to be quiet, but then points down.
>Curious, you look down, and your heart beats faster.
>You see Sunset lying on top of you as she holds your right hand in her left.
>And your left hand’s on her ass.
>You’re not sure if this is good or not.
>You remove your hand off her ass and gently shake her.
“Sunny wake you.”
>She moves a little, trying to snuggle into you some more.
“C’mon Sunny. Get up.”
> “No…. My pillow.”
>Your parents snicker at the two of you.
“Sunny. Wake up, my parents are here.”
>She groans and raises her head a bit to yawn cutely.

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>>27270861
the cutes

>>27270861
> “I’m up mom.”
>You roll your eyes at her sleep induced confusion.
“Sorry, but I’m not old or a woman.”
>She looks at you and her eyes go wide in panic.
> “Anon, why am I-”
“We feel asleep watching TV I guess.”
>She looks like she’s calming down a bit but has a blush on her face.
“But uh, you mind getting up?”
>She nods as she lets go of your hand and off your body.
> “Sorry Anon, I guess I was a bit tired.”
“No problem.”
>Mom claps his hands gaining your attention.
> “Well, how about dinner? You wanna join us Sunset?”
“I thought you had dinner plans?”
> “We did, but Abigail thought it would be better to just eat at home. You interested in dinner Sunset?”
> “I don’t want to be a bother-”
> “It’s not a bother. I can’t send you home hungry.”
>Sunset looks a bit uncomfortable as my parents look at her.
> “Ok, I’ll stay.”
>Your dad brings you and Sunset into one arm hugs as he smiled.
> “Great, now why don’t the both of you go to your room and hang out there for a bit?”
“Why?”
>He drags the both of you towards your room.
> “Me and your mom need to have a talk, and I’m sure you don’t want to hear about it.”
>You break out of your dad’s hug and lift a blushing Sunset into your arms.
> “Put me down Anon.”
“Ok, we’ll be in here."

>>27271084
>Be Delsin
>And It’s amusing how your son is around that Sunset girl.
> “Did you really need to say that, Delsin?”
“No, but it was funny.”
>Abigail walks up to you and kisses your cheek.
> “Still, they make a cute couple.”
“That they do. Almost reminds me of us when we were younger.”
>You wrap your arms around your wife, enjoying the warmth.
“You did get the pictures right?”
>She grins at you, and wave a small digital camera in front of your face.
> “Oh yeah.”
>You grab the camera from her hands and give her a kiss on the lips.
“Well, I’m gonna log on to facebook and upload some pictures. I’m sure Eugene would love to see how his favorite godson’s doing.”
>Your wife laughs at you as she turned around and walked into the kitchen.
> “You know Anon’s gonna try and kill you if he finds out, right?”
“Worth it.”

>>27271121
That's all for now and i'll update the pastebin in the morning.

>>27271084
>>Mom claps his hands gaining your attention.
wait wut?

>>27271257
Forgot to change that

Which sounds cuter? Anon calling Sunset "princess" and her getting all flustered and embarrassed over it, because it's a bigger deal for her, culturally, than it is for normal people, or Anon discovering that Sunset loves having her tummy rubbed?

>>27271449
Both

>>27271449
What >>27271476 said.

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>>27271476
>>27271520
Alright, I was probably going to end up writing both of them anyways

The "princess" one will probably be more feelsy, maybe
I dunno, I'm barely awake right now

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>>27271449

>>27271665
well fuck me for thinking I was being original.
Dammit.
Still gonna write the thing.

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>>27271740
>mfw I thought you knew.

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>>27271758
I thought I was clever...

>>27268721
>What are gloves?
>I hope you aren't one of those poor fuckers who eventually gets wrapped around a lathe because he put his fingers where they shouldn't be
No, but you apparently are as you dont know the first thing they teach engineers

>>27271850
>being cautious and taking proper safety measures around potentially dangerous machines that could maim you or worse isn't taught to engineers who work with the machinery almost every day.
Yes, gloves can themselves be a risk just like long hair, baggy clothes, rings, watches, etc. but unless you have a good reason not to wear them, you should always wear some sort of hand protection. But I know, you're a big man who ain't no pansy who is extra careful and that there's no way YOU could be the one missing a finger. And when working with hazardous chemicals there really isn't a reason not to wear gloves of some kind to protect you (and a respirator if it calls for one. I know a bunch of old auto body painters who never wore masks while painting and now they are livin the fun life of having shitty lungs). But who am I to tell you to be safe. I'm not your mommy, and if your high school shop class teacher couldn't get you to listen then I doubt you will to some random fuck on the Internet. Try not to get too many booboos out there sweetie.

>>27271740
Still a good idea

>>27273129
Who said any different?

>>27268721
>>27272667
>>27271850
girls, girls, you're both pretty (or all three of you)
I'm not wearing gloves because of the "wearing gloves is prohibited" sign on it (amongst other symbols)
I do however protect myself against regular skin contact with coolant by using specialized hand lotion which repels it. (too much exposure to coolant can give you an allergy which would make it almost impossible to continue pursuing that career)

>And why the fuck were your hands anywhere near something that would cut you and get coolant in the wound?
It's not a CNC, but a regular NC mill so I have to change the tools by hand.
the collet is form-fit in the machine head and held up by hydraulic while the milling tool is force-fit in the collet
to change a tool you hold the collet where it obviously doesn't cut you, use the hydraulic to release it.
then you carry it over to a special vice and use a spanner to release the force on the milling tool
as it was loose I picked it up with my fingers and tried to pull it out, business as usual
however, somehow it got wedged into something and I cut myself.
I quickly went to clean it with water, told my boss, got first aided, and then got sent to the hospital where the cut was cleaned, because if some coolant would have gotten in, it would have been a big problem.
After that I continued to work.
But my index finger does not like typing and I have to substitute the middle one as my index finger right now.

so yeah, now you know
and now you make me feel dirty for dramaqueening such a relatively small cut
I really rather have comments about my story than I do about my life, I know I have the second longest story in the thread, (self plug) but I'm not gonna become a beans

focus more on trying to ask me why chrysalis would work security at Flimdustries

>>27268813
yeah that's all stuff which is not picked up by a spellchecker, thans anon

>>27269286
you tease

>>27264714
I liked Deadpools interaction with the audience in his POV, but the "CaptainFalconKnee.gif" was Anon's POV so it felt weird seeing him say "Show me ya moves!"

>>27268277
this I like

>>27267893
F

>>27269120
I thought I know the radian equivalent for 30 and 45, and 90 degree so why wouldn't my protagonist

>>27271204
I'll read as soon as I find the time

>>27271257
>>27271288
No it's intentional, don't let trep fool you.
Your fetishes can't escape me.

Updated the pastebin. http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
But I have nothing at the moment for new stuff so I'm gonna think about what happens next.

eurofag again asking for general info on how you can get into college on like a sports sholarship-type thing (like forest gump)
I'm asking for Rainbow-y reasons

>>27274193
Thanks, trep

>>27275422
Scouts will go looking for talent in sports teams, if you're good enough then yay you get to go to college.

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>>27271204
doing the lords work
keep it up

>>27275428
>>27275472
Oh i will, and the next part should bring Sunset and Anon a little closer

>>27275541
Ifyouknowwhatimean

>>27275456
but it's usually a male thing, right?
what are the chances of a girl being drafted?
besides it being in a story and I can make whatever the hell i want

I also need to rewatch equestriagirls to see how useless celestia and luna were and how it would conflict with what i have planned...

>>27275541
you're keeping our dicks hard here

>>27275563
>>27275553
Not that close, but it will push them in the right direction

>>27275587
as i read i still need to read up to the current point, but I hope you speak of more getting to know one another instead of sunset just being horny

>>27275620
Yes, don’t worry about that.

>when you're bored and watch Star Wars clips
http://youtu.be/v_YozYt8l-g

>>27275634
you know, because I think I'm moving too fast

>>27275666
why would you do this, satan.
As bad as the movies were, this was still an emotional scene...

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>>27275695
But I like the prequels

>>27275695
Don’t worry, Horny Sunset won't be happening. I'm trying to use the picture Delsin took to bring them closer

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>>27275731

>>27275771
Im being honest

>>27275768
It's going to be so fun when people see those.

Rumour mill anyone?

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>>27275804

>>27275811
I'm not baiting, I enjoyed the prequels

>>27275804
It's okay, bloke, yourselfre allowed to be wrong.
Probably going to end up writing those ideas I mentioned last night today.
Boy, I sure have a lot of free time when I sleep through my alarm and miss my classes.

>>27275844
Spider-bloke confirmed for being 12

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>>27275872
>>27275851

>>27275851
Jesus fuck, what did my phone do to "you're"?

>>27275872
People. Be nice.

>>27275878
god damnit, we let ourselves be baited, didn't we?

I'll never understand why the prequels get so much hate.

>>27275907
oh boy, let me send you on an adventure
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FxKtZmQgxrI&list=PL9A12F8F947849C30

>mastah skywalkeh, there's too many of em, wot we gon'a do?

>>27275912
This review gave me cancer

>>27275977
one less prequels-liker
I count it as a success

but he actually talks why the prequels are bad, probably not your type of humor tho...

>>27276003
Screw you guys, I still like the prequels.
And Spiderman 3.

>>27276026
Spider-bloke, the joke has gone long enough, even if you might think it was funny once, it's not anymore... please stop

>>27276050
You guys are dicks

>>27275805
More truth than rumors. Just need an idea to execute it