Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #11

Request for mamorukusanagi. Fleur as Black Widow and Luna as Punisher

>>27216185
Same picture or separate? I admit i do like the concept ^^

>>27216246
separate and no hurry

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I'll try and put up a new issue Saturday, maybe Sunday if I don't wake up early.

>>27216439
All this Spidershim green and I've never had the opportunity to read the Spiderman comics (or any American comics for that matter) and have only seen some of the movies. Why did I have to grow up sheltered?

>>27216439
The suspense is triggering my spider sense

From the last thread and the rewrite

>BEEP BEEP BEEP.
>You’re a tired kid named Anon.
>Crrrunch.
>Opening your eyes to see the crushed yet melted remains of your alarm clock.
>Sometimes, you really hate having powers.
>You get up and start getting ready for school.
>After putting on pants, shirt, shoes and hoodie, you make your way towards school.
>Along the way, you see a familiar girl walking towards the school.
“Hey Sunny,” you yelled, as you ran up to your friend, Sunset Shimmer.
>She looks a bit surprised until she sees you and smiles saying, “Hey Anon. How’s it going?”
“Same shit, different day. You?”
>She sighs and said, “Tired, but that’s expected right?”
“You need to drink some coffee then.
>She shakes her head and said, “Don’t have time to make it.”
>You nod as you give a one armed hug.
“At least summer will be here before you know it.”
>She hums in agreement as the both of you walk to school just talking about this and that.
>You and Sunset enter the school as she starts to walk one way, saying, “Well see ya Anon.”
“Yeah, talk to you later, Sunny.”
>You head towards your first period class, Social Studies.

>It’s lunch time and you’re Sunset Shimmer.
>Sitting at a table at the far corner, your friends discuss the assignment you were given.
>Rainbow Dash looked around the table and asked, “So any idea on how we’re gonna do this?”
>Applejack rolled her eyes and said, “We’re trying to think of something Dash.”
>Rainbow waved her off as she said, “I know but I was asking if anyone has a plan yet.”
>Rarity said, “We don’t have enough information darling. Besides it’s not like we need to finish this now,” as she looked through a fashion magazine.
“Rarity’s right, we might as well look with a blindfold on,” you said sighing.
>Rainbow groaned, “There’s gotta be something on this guy. He’s been around for a couple of months now.”
>She wasn’t wrong.

>>27216605
>She wasn’t wrong.
>Your assignment was to find this mysterious individual that was reported either stopping crooks or saving people from getting mugged.
>Pinkie cheerfully but quietly said, “Hey, don’t be a Grumpy Gus. We’ll find him or we aren’t the Power Ponies and Spider-Woman.”
>This brought smiles all around the table.
>Fluttershy shakily raised her hand and asked, “T-Then what do we do?”
>Twilight closed her biology book and said, “All we can do is keep looking. Sooner or later we’ll find this guy.”
>Everyone nods as the bell rang, signaling the end of the period.
>You just hope this isn’t some super villain skeem.

>Be Anon.
>And you’re running on the roof tops.
>It’s amazing what neon based powers can give you.
>The blasts, rockets and speed were cool.
>Just wish you had something better to do than run around.
>Or have a crime or something happen.
>BOOOOOOMMMM.
>Looking around you see the lights flicker in a warehouse.
>Well better go check it out

>Be Spider-Woman aka Sunset Shimmer.
>You were doing your usual patrol when you found Scorpion destroying a warehouse.
>Apparently he was trying to kill some sleezy looking people.
“Hey Scorpion, did you forget about little old me?”
>Scorpion looked and said, “The annoying bug, this has nothing to do with you.”
>He raises his tail, ready to pierce the onlookers with his tail blade.
“Sorry, but can't let you make a human shish kebab,” you said, shooting some web at the tail and pulling him away from the people.
>Scorpion snarls and said, “You're annoying me.”
>He pulls his tail back sending you flying towards him as he swung his tail at you.
>You spin in mid air as you spider sense went off, narrowly missing the tail.
>Landing on the opposite side of the warehouse, Scorpion shot a glob of acid at you.
>You duck as it sails over you.
“You need to work on your aim.”

>>27216621
>Before you know it, a bunch of sleeves and stuff falls on you while knocking you to the floor.
>Walking towards you, Scorpion smirks and said, “At least I’ll live to work on that.”
>He raised his tail to impale you when a small ball of light hit his face and creates a shockwave.
>He began to float as he struggled to get his feet on the ground.
>He yelled, “Is this your doing freak?”
>You saw a few beams of colorful light hit his arms and legs as ropes of light covered him from head to toe.
>You get up feeling a bit sore but otherwise ok, a you walk towards Scorpion to inspect him.
>He struggles against his restraints while glaring at you.
>The sound of a door slamming causes you to look up at the main entrance.
>Running out the door you see a trail of colorful lights.
“I think I found our guy.”

That's all I have at the moment. Will make a new pastebin after the next part

>>27216637
>sleeves
Those must be some deadly shirts

>>27216667
V-necks or, god help her, tank tops!

BREAKING NEWS We found Fem, or Coolkids, as he now likes to be called.
>>27216956

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>>27217085
They could have just told us they didn't want to.

>>27217085
But it was only an act.

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>>27216149
For fucks sakes!
How many times must I clarify this?!
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
Is the functioning link for my story, you keep using the dead one.

Yes, I mad.

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>>27216477
Read the SpiderGirl comic. Real good stuff.

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>>27216149

>>27216667
???

>>27216477

Honestly, I've only seen scant amounts of Spiderman comics, aside from the various storytimes on \co\. I was pretty much raised on the animated series from the 90's. Sure, it's pretty censored, but it did a good enough job on introducing me to the world of Spiderman. Consequently, I can only read Spiderman in that version's voice.

>>27217583
This shit pisses me off so much. The ship makes zero sense and has no reason to exist and yet he makes twilight fugging hot so I have to look.

>>27218350
>one autist commissioning thousands of dollars of crackship art between fucking spiderman and twilight
>literally cannot search for anything on derpibooru without it showing up
for what purpose

>>27205032
>Be Sunset Shimmer
>Your cheeks were burning.
>There he goes being totally blunt again.
“Is... your mind still hazy from painkillers?”
>“I’m sober.”
>You nod again.
>That information was valuable but you had no idea what to do with it.
>You fan some air into your T-shirt again as an excuse to then feel your heartbeat.
>What is going on with you?
>Your rational mind wouldn’t allow for you to fall in love.
>The rest of yourself won’t agree as much.
>Then your mind is in a conflict of having made the decision that you were going to me a normal girl.
>Or at least as normal as life would allow it.
>Having a boyfriend...
>It never really was an issue until FlimFlam’s expo, and after that?
>Your life had been complicated enough.
>And now?
>Judging from your heartbeat you won’t have much of a choice.
>You smile at the thought somewhat.
>You had wanted control over your life, and now you’re in a battle with hormones.
>He’s manipulating you, he told you that.
>Jogging made him respire, which meant you were exposed to his pheromones.
>It’s that simple, isn’t it?
>It’s not you who develops a crush, it’s your body.
>You look Anon in the eyes.
>He also said it’s personality which decides if a couple stays together.
>And you like him... you really do.
>So should you be fighting your body on this one?
>Maybe you could simply... let go?
>Hmm...
“What are you thinking about?”
>“Despicable Me 2.”

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>>27218579
>What did he just- What?
“What?”
>“The kid’s animated movie. Despicable Me 2. It’s about this supervillain who had adopted three little girls because he came to like- Wow, that’s sounds really pedophilic when I say it out loud, anyway that’s-”
“Yeah, I’ve seen both movies. Why were you thinking about that?”
>You were kinda offended that your brain ran in circles about potential love and he thought about a kid’s movie.
>“That’s kinda awkward...”
>You only narrow your eyes in response.
>“Y-You see... advertisement is about exposing a potential costumer to your product. If publicity and popularity is high enough you are inclined to desire it and want the product for yourself.”
“I’m not sure I follow your train of thought... but continue.”
>“Yet if you increase publicity without popularity you end up running it into the ground. Like the Minion-Movie.”
“Okay...”
>“That’s what I was thinking about when I said we should take it slow. Because...”
“Because you put way too much thought into human courting rituals.”
>“Regular marketing, girl. I want to do a start-up, and I do have the knowledge and charisma to pull sell a product.”
“You’re selling yourself here.”
>“Yeah put I’m playing with my and your feeling here and I wouldn’t...”
>His tone banished the little perk of anger you had accumulated just now.
>“I- I don’t want to hurt you... Or get hurt myself for that matter.”
>He sounds... sad.
>“So yeah, I’m over cautious, and... and over-analyze it.”
>You reach out and touch his hand as he says that.
>He doesn’t retreat, only watches you take his (intact) hand into your own.
“You’ve been hurt before... haven’t you?”
>He nods.
“It’s okay...”
>You try to give him an encouraging smile.
“Is holding hands moving too fast?”
>You question as you lift your hands and his to show off.
>“L-Lewd...”

>>27218582
>You giggle, which in turn makes him laugh too.
>Again your eyes trail to his.
>You lick your lips.
>You want a kiss.
>Almost desperately so.
>Your heart is beating fast again, you don’t need to feel for it this time, it was quite noticeable in your chest.
>It would be your first kiss though...
>You wouldn’t know how to initiate.
>And it would go against the agreed upon ‘taking it slow’
>So you have to be content with merely caressing his hand.
>Neither of you say anything for a while.
>“It’s adorable how fascinated you are with my hand.”
“I- I’m sorry., I...”
>Your cheeks were burning again, ashamed of having been caught doing something...
>It wasn’t bad, was it?
>“Don’t worry about it. It’s just... You never had a boyfriend before, have you?”
“No I... I mean I did, but never...”
>“Never..? Hold hands?”
>You look up to meet his gaze again.
>Flash had meant absolutely nothing to you.
“Not like this...”
>“Never have been kissed?”
>You hesitate a moment before you shake your head, no.
>”Never had anal?”
>You let out a laugh, almost a snort.
“And there you go ruining the moment.”
>You look up to him, a broad smile on your lips.
>“I see you dodging the question.”
“S-Shut up.”
>“I’m still not hearing a no.”
>You let go of his hand again.
“And you’re kinda obsessed with anal. You need a better joke.”
>Your hands already miss the warmth of his.
>“Bondage?”
“Keep trying.”

>>27218599
I agree, that anal joke was getting pretty worn out.

>>27218746
The joke was only done once before...
Oh, i mean... your ass is getting worn out...
nailed it

>>27218856
10/10

>>27218868
Needs more water
IGN.

>>27218395
It still isn't as annoying as that autist who commissions the fuck out of his retarded cookie OC fucking Spitfire.

The art is still good, but i admit the concept is lost to me. Just seems like way to strange of a pairing. No real relevance

>>27218954
fuck that guy too

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>>27219026
because he wants to be Spider-Man
Just like JJJ

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>>27216149
>femanon link not working
Shit, has that one really been nuked?

>>27219429
Ours is a life of struggle

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>>27219501
Unless life decides to stop happening, I guess our ambiguously lesbian duo adventures are gone for good.

Shame for femanon. I was hoping to get a better description for her characters so i could add arts. I still enjoy each green, just sad to see one go. But i hope for return one day

>>27219816
we all do, buddy
we all do

>>27220101
RIP Femanon.

>>27220136
better mourn gone writefags than respond to those still active.

>>27216637
you sometimes jump between your tenses

>>27218599
cute, but slow burn still

>>27220152
Sorry. Not the best writer

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>>27220152
a reply!
I almost feel as if me writefagging here is appreciated

>>27220465
I still like it
Anon's awkwardness is weirdly endearing
like a poorly programmed robot

>>27220465
We like you! Get it through your skull.

>>27220500
>>27220482
I'm partially joking

so, how is everyone today?

>>27220757
very silent.

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>>27220757
Waiting for Writefriends to update, you?

>>27220757
I have big life accomplishments with photographic evidence to share but choose not to post them so I'm not an attention whore.

life seems like it's finally looking out for me

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>>27220775
plotting out one of those updates, haha

>>27220757
thinking about how fast I can get to one of two action scenes I have planned out

>>27220757
Trying to get the juices going to start to writefag for the thread.

>>27220757
Not bad and trying to get the next part done so i can post it later

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"Hey everyone"
So, I've come up with quite a few new character ideas.
>Discord
Professor X
>Tirek
Apocalypse
>Bulk Biceps
Juggernaut
>Maud
Tombstone
>Shining Armor and Twilight
Quicksilver and Scarlet Witch
>Flash
Grant Ward
>Spike
Beast Boy
>Starlight
Spider-Woman 2099

>>27220808
I've actually been hitting on the idea of Discord being the Green Goblin

Can't get it out of my head, actually

>>27220828
The Green Dragon, maybe?

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>>27220854
mm, not sure about that

also, check out the daftest thing I've seen all day

I ain't gonna post until I get some hip-pics of Shimmer or any other /mlp/ related thing.

I need my fix.

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>>27220854
fing fang foom?

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>>27220875
aske and you shall receive.

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>>27220870
Now I've got Kunoichi Spider Shim on the brain, thanks. Anyways, I'm working on my second issue, and hope to release before the night's out, but I can't promise.

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>>27220875
you're such an addict, Beans

>>27220927
you can see her breath condensing,
girl, think of your health and get dressed again

>>27220808
I was thinking Flash as a (self perceived) dashing rogue version of the Shocker.

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>>27220927
Can you blame him?

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>>27220875

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>>27220875
Damn you

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>>27220808
I think Flash would most likely make sense as asshole-venom trying to still get it on with Sunset, and simultaneously but unrelated with spider woman too

so... a teen-flash thompson rather than the adult one (or Eddie)
we can also stop with the picture spam now, can't we?

>>27220935
that's on the thighs, and it looks really bad when you think about it

>>27220972
He's just watching us dance.

>>27220757
Dead inside, nothing new.

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I still think that Flash should be Ward

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>>27220927
>>27220949
>>27220964
Hips are magic.

Will post green next.

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>>27215547
>She skids to a stop so abrupt, that it could almost leave skid marks on the floor of the hallway.
>Then she quickly leaps into the restroom.
>You both pant, hearts beating like drums in a band.
“Hey Sunset.”
>“Yeah?”
“You can stop carrying me bridal style now,” you say with red cheeks, “i-if you want to, that is…”
>Spidey awkwardly places you down.
>“Sorry. Kinda got used to you holding onto me.”
“L-lewd.”
>She facepalms with a playful sigh.
>“You just escaped from being her prisoner, but you’re already making jokes?”
>You roll your eyes.
“Uh, kinda of like you?”
>She raises a finger to counter, but falls silent.
“Thought so.”
>“I do this everyday so I get used to it unlike you who’s gotten TOO used to it.”
>She taps her chin as another thought occurs to her.
>“...In fact, I’ve saved you like, I dunno, four times this week. You’re gonna draw attention to yourself from my enemies if we keep this up. They could try and kidnap you like Ock wants!”
>You lean against the bathroom wall with your arms crossed.
“I dunno, I kinda like the attention I get from you when you’re around to save my butt.”
>“Oh, so you’re okay being my damsel in distress?”
>You’re about to respond, but find no words.
>Spidey grins under her mask.
>“Thought so.”
>Oh, she’s good.
“Using my own words against me? Clever. Speaking of clever, you sure it’s a good idea to hide to the Feds catch Doc? I mean, not that I’m complaining about your company and all, but I’d rather chill out without a raving lunatic wanting to kidnap me.”
>Spidey nods with certainty.
>“Yeah, it is a good idea. It all depends on when they get here though.”
>You look at her curiously.
“...You know how to tell when they are here?”
>She scoffs jeeringly as she brings out her cellphone.
>It has no case on it.
>Unwise for a web-slinger you think.

>>27221012
>>It has no case on it.
>>Unwise for a web-slinger you think.
killed me

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>>27221012
>tfw Anon ends up being too dense to recognize her phone

>>27221046
inb4 PROPERTY OF SUNSET SHIMMER

Alright, I got Issue 2 all written, and now to go back and tweak it all to perfection, hope to post it before 7:00 PM, EST.

>>27221064
eurofag here

>7:00 PM, EST.
I have no idea what that means

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>>27221061
I'm gonna call you Scarlet Spider, mr clone

>>27221012
>“Hey Sunset.”
HE KNOWS!

>>27221012
>"Hay Sunset"
>Sunset

Did Anon put two and two together?

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>>27221091
Oh shit, I completely missed that

>>27221070
It's Eastern Standard Time, eurofriend.

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>>27221012
We give you all them hips, And you give us just one post? ONE POST!
That it. No more hips for you mister

YES I MAD!

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>>27221012

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>>27221012
You're holding out on the green Beans

nice to see beans has so many minions going batshitcrazy when he posts

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>>27221181
Dude get my shit together

>>27221189
My brain is confused

>>27221173
>minions

"Minions"

Well, my having done some revisions, and now being thoroughly satisfied with what I have produced, here's the beginning of Issue 2 for you.

>You awaken, as Sunset gets dressed.
>She's still mad at you, you can feel it.
>You have so much to figure out, and so little time to do so.
>At least you have 2 days to work with.
>As you settle on her, she mutters to you.
>"You shouldn't have attacked them like that."
"I understand that now, but why? What makes harming them so bad? What makes one slash upon the criminal so reprehensible?"
>"If they'd attacked you beforehand, it might not of been so bad, but they weren't armed, and we initiated. you could've shown a little restraint there."
"So, I had no right to hurt them, because they didn't hurt me..."
>"Or anyone else."
"Alright, that makes... decent sense. I'll try to avoid doing that sort of thing in the future."
>"I hope so."
>Sheesh, not a lot of confidence here, you need to keep in her good books.
>You inform Anon you're going for a long stroll, and he nods.
>When you find a small alley to hide in, you again become Spider Woman.
>Your reputation is undoubtably damaged from the incident last night, but you have other things to worry about.
>Here's hoping this all works out.
>You head out, swinging on patrol. It's time to put this symbiosis to the test.

Will post the rest later, I need some time for R&R.

>>27221227
This is the most bro symbiote I've ever seen

>>27221227
I feel like the symbiote should be more dry about gathering information
and he has no idea about earth's morals and laws after all.

>>27221242
Wasn't he exiled because he was exceptionally shitty?

>>27221399
shitty for a species of body snatchers

>>27221242
>>27221399
There's a couple things I'm humorously noting: A, the assumption of being male, and B, the assumption that exceptionally shitty couldn't be completely different on symbiote planet.

>>27221443
He is gender-neutral you sjw.

>>27221443
>A, the assumption of being male
didn't mean to trigger you

>>27221456
>>27221459
Fair enough point, I'm not serious, I was just noting I find it funny, maybe I'm screwy in the head. Hard to say. I enjoy writing body snatchers as semi-sympathetic, that's not a good sign.

>>27221475
"he" is just easier to say

>>27221475
They already got you. The real symbiote anon is somewhere in the arctic, trapped inside an alien pod.

>>27221498
Fair enough point, friend, anywho, posting more!
>>27221227

>With the lack of activity, you need something to do, so you think to yourself to pass the time.
>You have to wonder, when you've gone over the boundary of the law, why would your life matter?
>After all, they're just going to do it again when they get loose, more often than not.
>You ponder this for a while, and can't seem to come to a solid conclusion.
>You were sent to die for less.
>How come humans get more leeway in the matter?
>It doesn't seem fair. No matter for now, you need to keep her in your good books, now isn't the time to ponder such things.
>You continue swinging, and consider stopping at the local cafe for some quick coffee.
>Yeah, caffeine sounds pretty damn good right now, patrol's a tiring thing.
>You shift back into a jacket after landing in an out of sight alley, and head into the corner shop.
>You walk into the cafe, and order a small plain coffee mug.
>You sit down close to the window to feel the sunlight.
>God, you love caffeine.
>You notice a yellowish blur outside the window with red highlights.
>It looks humanoid.

I'mma wait a bit, and post another, it's about as long as the last one, if you read that, so just be patient.

Hey, Symbi-Anon
What's your pastebin?

>>27221557
I do not have a pastebin, why, should I?

>>27221563
Yes, you should.

>>27221563
It would definitely make things easier to keep track of.

>>27221597
Well, I happen to write my shit on notepad before posting it, so a pastebin wouldn't be too difficult to have. I'll get on that ASAP so you kindly anons can go back and read what you missed.

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"This time will be different!"
"This time, Venom will win!"
http://youtu.be/Q0FFf1XBaZc

>>27221526
>I'mma wait a bit, and post another, it's about as long as the last one, if you read that, so just be patient.

Dont be an ass

>>27221644
Didn't mean to come like I'm being assisinine. Anyways, post 3!
>>27221526

>All it takes to shatter the glass is one fist pump towards the window from Shocker.
>"Howdy, folks. Just stay calm, and I'll be takin' the cash."
>Oh hell no.
>It takes all the willpower you have to not go Spider Woman right there.
>You quickly bail into the woman's bathroom.
>After a quick shift, you burst out, and swing into the Southerner intimidating the cashier.
>As Shocker looks up at you, you can sense the arousal.
>It disturbs you greatly.
>"Hey, love the new look. Really you!"
"You do realize I'm going to kick your ass harder for that one, right?"
>"Whatever, cutie, just means we'll be wrestling l-"
>Before the Texan can finish, you punch her, flinging the cowgirl over a table.
>"Wow, that new suit's made you feisty. I like it~."
>Your rage grows as this goes on. Time to kick a pervert's ass.
>She gets up, goes to pull her sonic crap, and unfortunately, you fly backwards, landing perfectly in a chair.
>You slowly get up as she comes closer.
>Unfortunately, a table is kind of in the way, but you end up kicking it in half.
>Looks like you're stronger now than you first thought.
>It also seems to be enough to make Shocker jump.
>"Yeeeeeeeehaw! I'm surprised at you, missy. Maybe we'll have a rodeo tonight!"
"Fat chance, lady."
>"Heh, I like the way you talk, ma'am, you might just be the monster they say you are now in private!"
>It is with that remark you deliver a firm boot to the face.
"Yeah, how about you don't call me ma'am?"
>Shocker falls over on her side, moaning.
>She doesn't seem to be getting up.
>Oh shit.

I'll post the next one ASAP, and the pastebin with it.

>>27221680

>After a brief altercation with the police, you manage to get Shocker on her feet again.
>Fortunately, she's slightly numb, so it doesn't take much effort for you and the police to restrain her.
>Shimmer's uncomfortable.
"Look, it wasn't your fault, neither of ou-"
>"She could've been seriously hurt!"
"We kicked a table in half, what did you expect to happen?"
>"Your lack of care for her safety is disturbing."
"She's robbing people, not exactly a safe business."
>"Oh, look, not important right now, we need to get some sleep. Yeesh, now you've got me talking plural."
"Get used to it."
>"No thank you."
>And with that, you swing home.
>After finding a nearby alley and shifting, you see Anon about to turn on the news.
>He turns to you, and smiles.
>"Hey, wanna see what they're saying happened at a corner shop?"
"Sure, why not?"
>You settle down to watch the news, and relax for the night.
>Just as before, you wait for Anon to fall asleep, and get undressed.
>Slithering off of Shimmer, you internally sigh relief.
>Your bond might be bumpy, but the turbulence is starting to lessen.
>On that note, you fall asleep.

And for those of you who asked for the pastebin: http://pastebin.com/XKxeHe9v
There it is, feel free to put it in the next OP. I'll update it with each fully released issue.

>>27221702
thanks for posting!

>>27222105
Not a problem, anon, I enjoy writing them, and I'd love to hear what you have to say about this one.

>>27221091
>>27221096
>>27221104
I was half asleep writing this. Sorry, it was suppose to say Spidey.

>>27221173
I'm sorry.

>>27221123
I'm making revisions so I don't slip names up again. Patience.

>>27221012
(FIXED VERSION)
>She skids to a stop so abrupt, that it could almost leave skid marks on the floor of the hallway.
>Then she quickly leaps into the restroom.
>You both pant, hearts beating like drums in a band.
“Hey Spidey?”
>“Yeah?”
“You can stop carrying me bridal style now,” you say with red cheeks, “i-if you want to, that is…”
>Spidey awkwardly places you down.
>“Sorry. Kinda got used to you holding onto me.”
“L-lewd.”
>She facepalms with a playful sigh.
>“You just escaped from being her prisoner, but you’re already making jokes?”
>You roll your eyes.
“Uh, kinda of like you do on a daily basis?”
>She raises a finger to counter, but falls silent.
“Thought so,” you say with a triumphant smile.
>“I do this everyday so I get used to it unlike you who’s gotten TOO used to it.”
>She taps her chin as another thought occurs to her.
>“...In fact, I’ve saved you like, I dunno, four times this week. You’re gonna draw attention to yourself from my enemies if we keep this up. They could try and kidnap you like Ock wants!”
>You lean against the bathroom wall with your arms crossed.
“I dunno, I kinda like the attention I get from you when you’re around to save my butt.”
>“Oh, so you’re okay being my damsel in distress?”
>You’re about to respond, but find no words.
>Spidey grins under her mask.
>“Thought so.”
>Oh, she’s good.
“Using my own words against me? Clever. Speaking of clever, you sure it’s a good idea to hide so the Feds catch Doc? I mean, not that I’m complaining about your company and all, but I’d rather chill out without a raving lunatic wanting to kidnap me.”
>Spidey nods with certainty.
>“Yeah, it is a good idea. It all depends on when they get here though.”
>You look at her curiously.
“...You know how to tell when they are here?”
>She scoffs jeeringly as she brings out her cellphone.
>It has no case on it.
>Unwise for a web-slinger you think.

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>>27222238
>“Of course I do. I know the police code and hacked into their radio. I just have to listen through my earbuds.”
>Wait, she can hack? Maybe she can help you with your streak investigation.
“...Can you hack traffic cams? Maybe, I dunno, teach me how?”
>She hesitates for a minute in a rather nervous way.
>You’re skeptical of her “hacking prowess” from this response.
>“...Uh, maybe later? Why, what about it?”
“...You know about the streak, right?”
>She nods slowly.
>“Yeah, let me tell you that over half of those photos are actually me...but you know that, right?” she says.
“Uh huh, but I have someone who saw it in person--the colors, the speed, the blur, all of it. I’m starting to think that there is more to this streak than everyone thought.”
>With a playful sigh, she leans on the wall next you.
>“You’re adorable.”
“Baka.”
>Spidey chuckles quietly, but finishes with a sigh.
>Her posture changes a bit as she slouches on the wall a bit more warily.
>“...You are probably the nicest guy I know, Anon.”
>Her voice sounds different.
>It usually sounds higher, sarcastic, and quick...but this voice sounded much more real.
>You swear you’ve heard this voice before, but you don’t focus on where it’s from.
>You focus on why it sounds sad.
>Looking at her, you see Spidey hanging her head low, vacantly staring at the bathroom floor while she leans beside you on the bathroom wall.
>You decide to grab her hand and hold it.
“And you, Spidey, are Amazing.”
>She looks at you under her mask, and you can see the tiny smile under the fabric.
>“Thanks,” her hand holds yours back, “you’re pretty Spectacular yourself.”
>Despite the smile, her tone is somewhat dismal.
“Something wrong?”
>She shakes her head ‘no’.
>“Someone I knew would tell me the exact same thing. He’d always go ‘You, Spidey are amazing.’”
“You’re actually named Spidey?”
>She groans playfully.
>“You know what I mean.”

>>27222196
You trolling mitherfucker

>>27222281
yay!

>>27222337
What? What'd I do?

>>27222373
I thought he had finally figured it out

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>Meanwhile

>>27222439
Bloke, why in Za Warudo is Dio in that?

>>27222281
I will pay actual money to have spideys identity revealed by way of either, recognizing dem hips, or having her phone have the words PROPERTY OF SUNSET SHIMMER printed across it.

>>27222527
"Spidey why do you have Sunsets phone?"
>"Oh, ummmm, mines broken and she let me borrow hers"
"Oh, alright then"

>>27222527
>>27222577
The reason why the phone has no case is so Anon can't tell it's her's.

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>>27222592
Clever girl

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>>27222616
Well, if I never do anything else in life, at least I'll be able to survive the hunger games

>>27222616
those hunger game threads get weird...

>>27223238
Bloke, I'd swear you have nothing better to do with yourself, also, you didn't answer my question from earlier.

>>27223569
>>27222449
You mean this? Idk, someone put him in

>>27216637
>You shoot your web at a nearby building and begin to swing after that guy.
>Following him was a bit trickier though as that guy ran on rooftops and the side of the buildings.
>At least finding his trail was easy in a way.
>You touch your earpiece to activate it
“Call Twilight.”
>You hear the ring for a while then you hear a feminine voice say, “Sunset? Is everything ok?”
“Yeah everything’s ok, Twilight. Listen I found the guy.”
>She’s quiet for a little while but then said, “Uh Sunset, I know you want a boyfriend but-”
“No I mean the guy we were assigned to find.”
>You were glad no one could see your blushing face.
“Listen, we’re nearing the park pretty soon. Think you and the girls can be there?”
>Twilight said, “We can be there in a few minutes. Think you distract this person?”
“I’m sure I can do that,” you said giggling, as you ended the call.
>You continued to follow that guy running on and jumping off buildings when he started to….float to the ground?
>Ok, that’s a little weird.
>Whoever this guy is landed on the ground and walked calmly to the main park gates.
>You land on a tree branch and watch him quietly.
>He stops at a fountain and shot a small beam at it and was bending it.
“What’re you doing?”
>He starts to make a bunch of spirals around the fountain, giving it a carousel like design.
>You hear the guy say, “There, now to go home,” in a masculine voice.
>Better do the meet and greet before you lose him, as you jump down in front of him.
>He’s surprised as he said, “Spider-Woman? What’re you doing here?”

>>27223748
“Oh just going for a late night stroll through the park. What’s a strapping young man do all by his lonesome?”
>He backs up a bit and said, “Just on my way home. Couldn’t sleep, you know.”
“Oh, poor baby. Want me to help you sleep tonight? It could be fun.”
>He backs up a bit and said, “Thanks but no thanks. I really need to get home though, so could you please move.”
> “Sorry but you’re not going anywhere,” a loud feminine voice said.
>You and the guy look in the sky to see the Power Ponies.
>As their feet touched the ground, they began to move to surround him.
> “And why can’t I leave?” he asked curiously.
> “Our boss wants to talk to you,” Mistress Marvelous said, crossing her arms.
> “Why? What did I do?” he asked.
“Sorry, but we just follow our orders.”
> “Now, you can choose one of two options. Either the easy way or the hard way,” Masked Matterhorn said, getting ready to fight if need be.
“No matter what, I’ll have you beneath me.”
>He looks like he’s thinking but chuckles.
> “I choose the third option,” he said cheerfully.
>Fili Second giggles saying, “There’s only two options, silly.”
> “There’s always a third option,” he said, as he started to glow.
>Everyone gets into a fighting stance as he flung his arm forward, throwing a small neon colored ball.
> “See ya,” he said, as the ball explodes around you and Zapp.
>The both of you floated there as the guy ran towards you, leaving behind an afterimage.

>>27223758
Gonna have the next part ready by tomorrow night then make the pastebin for this

>>27223780
good shit

>>27223818
Changed the powers a bit but I like the ideas I'm getting for this

>>27223758
He doesn't seem edgy, he seems like a nice, happy lad

>>27223873
Yeah, I'm trying to make Anon the relaxed whatever guy while Sunset will be seductive ad horny as Spider-Woman.
Also Anon's just a bit nervous cause he only had to deal with muggers, he hasn't dealt with a hero let alone 7 yet

>>27223906
If I had Delsin Rowe powers, I'd think my chances would be pretty good

>>27223758
As a big Infamous fan this makes me so happy. Keep it up man.

>>27223950
Funny you should mention that. Anon is close to him

>>27223980
In what way?

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VOTE FOR MY AMUSEMENT

http://www.strawpoll.me/10087215

>>27223996
Look at your post before and think of how Anon can be like Deslin? hint: he was in the second post of the story

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>>27224009
*literally gasps*

>>27224040
Figured it out?

>>27224068
I think I've got it.
.
.
.
So who'd Delsin shag?

>>27224082
Anon's power should tip you off

>>27224089
Well, obviously Fetch, but...
Where is she?

>>27224096
Well, let's just say they're not out of the hero business

>>27224115
So, can Anon steal other people's powers like Delsin, or is he restricted to neon?

>>27224133
Let's just say Zapp's in for a nasty surprise

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>>27224141
Yknow I was a bit nervous when you said you were rebooting it
But now, you've turned me into a giddy fanboy.
Well done

>>27224167
Like I said, The ideas will still happen it's just the execution I think I fucked up. The only thing that won't happen is the memory thing Deslin does.
Before you ask it's the fact he absorbs the element it self

>>27224194
question, how closely does thiss all hew to Equestria Girls proper?
Because if the girls still had their elements, ti would be funny to see Anon manifest some of their natures (generous, kind, funny, etc.) when copying their powers on top of the abilities themselves.

>>27224309
This is more of a human world. No Equestria what so ever.
But to answer you question Anon would only absorb powers being used. He could absorb Zapp and Ponied Up Dash but he would need them to focus said powers for him to absorb

>>27224346
ah, fair, thank you for answering

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I'm pumped for tomorrow's great and powerful episode

>>27220808
If I had to narrow down which of these I'd like to see the most...
1.Starlight-Spider 2099
2. Flash-Ward
3. Tirek-Apocalypse
4.Maud-Tombstone

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>>27222281
>You gaze into her masked eyes as your the corners of your lips curve upward in a smile.
>Several minutes go by with you two both enjoying each other’s company, silence being far more prefered over conversation as the presence of the other is enough to satisfy the void where talk would typically be.
>You, a freakin’ fanboy of Spidey, is holding her hand.
>You could die happy.
>...But what about her past, why she does this, or everything else about her?
>She’s kept everything a mystery from you so far, but with the closeness reached between you two, shouldn’t it be appropriate to at least drop hints about the other’s past?
>You’ve always wanted to know more about her, how she feels…
>You know, get to know who she really is even if she has to hide her face.
>Spidey seems to see you pondering over this.
>“Something wrong?”
>You shake your head ‘no’.
“Not really. I’m just thinking about you. What you’re like,” you explain.
>She tilts her masked head.
>“What I’m like as in…?”
“As in why someone like you is around. Why do you do what you do? You could do lots of other things, you know. Maybe become a celebrity, wrestler...why use your abilities like this?”
>Spidey exhales wearily.
>“It’s a long story.”
“I work for the Bugle, stories are kinda my business next to photography,” you say with a shrug.
>You try to sound casual to ease her, make her trust you a bit.
>She still doesn’t answer, but thinks about it.
“Look, I’m not asking for exactly what happened. Just give me a general idea.”
>“...You sure?”
>Your hand clasps around her’s just a bit tighter.
“Positive,” you say with a warm smile.


PASTEBIN HAS BEEN UPDATED TO THE LATEST GREEN: http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0

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>>27224808
thanks, Beans

>>27224808
generic encouragement.

So, guys, who in our possible list of characters would be The Thousand?
http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/1/15659/3071083-the_thousand-spider-man's_tangled_web%232-coming_out.jpg

>>27225626
breezies?
the blob?

Hey should Infamous Anon have the same Karma Bombs as his parents? the super attacks

>>27226416
never played the game
only know the electric guy can ride powerlines

>>27226438
https://youtu.be/e5aHvSbe_Dw This should give you an idea

>>27226441
people could get hurt

>>27226462
I asked if he should and he's a hero at the moment so all it'll do is capture people

>>27226468
dude, it's whatever you need to be in the story

>>27226481
Alright then

I guess Spidey and Fili Second are good friends.
https://derpiboo.ru/1142129?scope=scpe368bd3ebb74b6fc781e2247f6858c3d213e7e8d7

>>27226555
Unf. I bet it feels amazing because of Pinkie's speed powers.

>>27224001
You know, I want to be mad I'm not on there, but since I'm not, I get to vote for the guy who inspired me to writefag here in the first place.

>>27224001
besides all writefags voting for themselves we only have 4 people reading the thread

>>27226744
I didn't vote for myself

>>27226744
I didn't vote for myself, I'm not even on there!

>>27226767
y-yes... neither did I...

>>27217583
ok but wtf is going on with this boob it looks completely detached from her body this is bothering me so much

So hypothetically if I am able to get off my lazy ass and write some green.
Would anyone read a green where Anon works as a male stripper but for the rest of the night he is Black Cat?
He wears the exact same outfit black cat wears in the Spiderman 2 game.

>>27227356
I would read this.

>>27227356
pics, or some people don't know black cat from the spiderman 2 game

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>>27227434
Best pic I could find.

>>27226555
>UNF
>N
>F

>>27227434
>>27227549
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QYy-jlizdo

>>27227356
I'm reminded of that french Ladybug show

not sure if I want to see male stripper Anon with that deep of a cut

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>>27227356
I like the idea. just maybe change the costume a little.
>>27228199
yeah it's not the best look

>>27227356
wouldn't it be easier to simply make black cat a femanon?

>>27228695
This anon gets it.

>>27228695
Where's the comedy in that?

>>27228831
there are boobs in that and some potential dykeshit which I take over the gamble on someone writing a male stripper well

>>27228951
>dykeshit
Lesbian shit doesn't get me hard, yo.

>>27229023
judgement free zone
jk this is 4chan

>>27228695
sure but i think the role reversal would be a fun thing to read.
Plus imagining Anon/Black cat teasing a flush Sunset/Spider-woman brings a smile to my face.

>>27229101
It's always about how it's executed, not how it sounds

>>27229122
I concur with this anon, execution is important to every concept. People liked the concept I had, but it appears they don't like the current execution.

>>27229267
you actually had me cringe a little and showed me I'd like to write that story as well, but I already have one

>>27228565
>dat pic
unf!

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>>27224808
Whoah whaoh whaoh, beans
That pictures going a bit too far with the lewd

Just woke up
Gonna go get food and try writing

>>27230318
>try
you and me both

>>27227356
I was going to go this route with my Anon.

I'll change it. I can come up with something else.

>>27230462
He can always be Batman.

>>27230462
nah, dude. Go ahead. There is no guarantee that my lazy/perfectionist ass will be able to write anything good enough for me to post anyway.
I have already ditched one draft of it.

>>27230534
I ditched it already as well. Plus, now I ruined the surprise. Oh well. I have a back-up plan that I think is even better.

>>27230623
your judgement has never been wrong

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>>27230623
Who?

>>27230816
you're always so thirsty for spoilers, Bloke

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>>27230823
Yep

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>>27230834
okay, fine, spoilers
I'm writing cute things

>>27231236
And we love you for it.

>>27231236
Then you write murder-y things

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>>27231339
Then cute murder-y things?

>>27231375
I promise to write cute, murdery things

Question to the comic readers of this thread. I haven't read a single spiderman comic in my life, all I know is from the movies and games.
Has there ever been a version of the goblin where he rides a giant bat instead of just a glider shaped like one?

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>>27231472
Demogoblin
He's a magical version of the Hobgoblin
It still counts if the bat's on fire, right?

>>27231495
That might just be the single most metal thing i have ever seen.

>>27223758
>Be Anon.
>And now you’re running away from seven hero trying to lose them.
>A few of them aren’t fast so that’s not a problem.
> “Wow. You’re pretty fast,” Fili Second said, as she ran and matched your speed.
>But Fili Second is faster than you is a problem.
>You knew she was faster than this and was just stalling for time.
>Suddenly, an idea popped into your head.
>Moving your arm to your waist, and pull the chain off.
>Focusing your neon power, you turn the simple chain into a neon sword and swing it at the speedster.
>It hits her ankles, tripping her up.
>As she tumbled, you raised your free hand and shot her limbs to immobilize her.
>Fili Second was cover in neon ropes as you sped away from her.
>You didn’t stop to check on the fallen hero.
>Dodging trees, some bushes and a tool shed, you started to slow down when you saw the lights of a convenience store.
>You run, no powers, towards the store.
>They can’t find you if they blend with everyone walking around.
>Something hits your side, causing you to hit a tree.
> “Ah got ‘im,” a southern voice yelled.
>Groaning, you stand up and look at you attacker.
>And it’s the Power Ponies, just great.
> “You really should give up dear,” Radiance said, as you stood up to face them, “We don’t want to hurt you.”
>You stare at them.
> “Well, anymore than we already have,” Radiance said a bit awkwardly.

>>27231521
it's pretty strong

>>27231588
yay!

>>27231588
>Particles of light appeared around you as they were absorbed then released in a shockwave.
>The shockwave hit all the Power Ponies causing them to float as you dissolved into neon lights and reformed in the arm.
>You crossed your arms but wave them forward as you released a barrage of neon beams at the heroes.
>After your attack, all that the beams touched caused shockwave like explosions.
>Which trapped the Power Ponies in your neon ropes.
“Well love to stay and chat but I have things to do. See ya,” you said as you clapped your hands.
> “Not on my watch,” a scratchy voice said, as you felt some punch you towards the ground.
>Looking up you see Zapp standing above you, cracking her knuckles.
“How?”
> “I stood away from my friends just incase,” Zapp said, “Now to give you a little payback from before.”
>She raised her fist above her head.
> “And it’ll be a knockout,” she said as her fist had lightning dancing around it.
> “LAME,” Spider-Woman yelled from her spot.
>You tried to get up when Zapp pulled her fist back, ready to punch you again.
>As Zapp launched her fist forward, you caught it with your left hand.
>She threw her other fist at you and you caught that one as well.
>As you held her fists, the lightning traveled across your arms and it didn’t even hurt.
> “What’re you doing?” Zapp yelled as your arms began to glow.
“Something fun,” you said chuckling, as the energy created an explosion.
>The force of the explosion caused the both of you to be knocked back, you into the ground and her into a tree, knocking her out.
>You stagger to your feet and look yourself over.
“Man, I love meeting new people,” you said as lightning danced around your arm, “Well, hate to run but you all seem preoccupied so later.”
>With that said you walk away and towards your home.

>>27231675
I forgot, was he still in disguise?

>>27231746
yeah

>>27231760
Thanks.

posting a teaser before I finish Issue 5

>"Anon..."

>That's you
>Though you'd really rather be sleeping than be Anon
>Someone with a deathwish pokes your side, making you shift and groan
"Urrrgh..."
>There, see? A groan worthy of a grizzly bear!
>Now they have to leave you a-
>'poke poke poke'
>God is dead
>You open your eyes as slowly as you can get away with, shifting yourself to face your heathen oppressor
>Instead of Satan, you get Sunset Shimmer, dressed up as Spider-Woman, sans mask, crouched up on your desk and giving you a gynecologist's eye view of spider-cameltoe
>You take it back, God isn't dead, cause you've seen Her face
>ImABeliever.mp4

>>27231902
>Sunset looks guilty about waking you up, even more so when you slowly, carefully raise your head up from crotch height, mostly upright in your chair
"Sunny... wassup?"
>A glance at your phone reads a cold, unfeeling 6:13 AM
>Really testing your faith, God
>"Sorry, sorry, it's just... the storm's ended and as much as I really appreciate everything you've done, I need to get back to my place so I can look decent for school tomorrow"
>At the thought of her leaving, you heart picks up
>You... don't want her to leave
>It's been nice, not being alone, and you don't want to go back to it
>No, it's not just that
>You liked sharing a space with her
>You liked Sunset Shimmer
>And most definitely not as a friend

>>27231913
>You scramble for a reason for her to stay
>It's selfish, you know, but still...
>That shape that'd been watching the pair of you!
"What about the thing... outside the window! What if it's still out there?"
>Sunset shakes her head
>"My spider-sense hasn't given off so much as a tingle since last night, it should be safe to go out. But if you see anything, call me, okay?"
>Her phone, a simple hing in black, slides from a pocket in her suit and she offers you her lit screne
>Fumbling, you do the same with yours, swapping numbers
>Something something Final Fantasy victory music
>Look, it's early, you can't be clever all the time
>She crawls up your wall, across your ceiling, and to the window, resting dat ass on the sill
>"Thanks, Anon. Get some rest, I'll see you at school, okay?"
"W-Wait!"
>You swallow thickly as she pauses, still as a statue
>Slowly, with the kind of grace that just waking up brings, you stand up and talk over to her
>You're right in front of Sunset, the girl who's saved your live several times now and has the prettiest eyes and fuck you you're just standing there
"You forgot your mask..."
>Her hands go to her uncovered face in surprise as you hold up the mask she'd dropped on your desk
"Don't want anyone else to know, right...?"
>Sunset smiles, embarrassed
>"Thanks Anon. Could, ah, could you put it on for me?"
>Oh god
>That's so lewd

>>27231945
>With hands as steady as you can manage, you carefully place the silky mask over the top of your head, covering her face inch by inch until you come to her lips
>"Wait..."
>You freeze
>Oh shit, did you fuck up?
>You didn't have it inside out, right?
>Or backwards?
>Or-
>Sunset takes your hands with hers and stands up, angled off the wall, leaning closer to you
>"I meant it when I said that you're a really great guy, Anon"
>She's getting closer
>Shit, what do you do!?
>She's...
>Kissing your cheek
>You don't move, don't even breath as she pulls back, cheeks flushed and smiling
>"See you at school, Anon~"

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(I came with this on the spot, and for some reason had to start typing.)
>You are Anonymous. Also known as, The Scarlet Spider.
>And you, are a clone. Or not, you haven't really gotten a straight answer yet.
>All you know is that some mad scientist with too much time in his hands decided it would be fun to clone a superhero.
>But you do not know if you are the clone, or if it is your counterpart, Sunset Shimmer, the Amazing Spider-Woman.
>At least, that's what they used to call her...
>She used to be a true hero, she fought bad guys, saved lives. After you discovered that you had the same spider powers as her, you thought it would be a good idea to get into the hero business too.
>Once you started fighting bad guys, and saving lives, she took notice, and she wasn't very happy. Certain things happened, and now, you're living in a nightmare that won't end.
>It all started on that fateful day that you heard that the science company, Twi-Corp, was up to no good yet again, and you were gonna put a stop to it.

>>27231675
Pastebin link for this http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1

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>>27232013
>You'd been after them for awhile now, trying to expose their crimes. But every time you try, they manage to cover up the evidence.
>Head of the company is a woman named Twilight Sparkle. She made her fortune and started the company with her breakthroughs in science
>One day, she went too far and decided to test out some new kind of super serum on herself. She went insane, hurt a lot of people and became the villain that would be known as the Purple Goblin.
>In a way you felt sorry for her, all she wanted to do was help the world.
>Back in the day, she and Sunset Shimmer got into their share of battles. They were the worst of rivals.
>You later learned that Twilight was killed during of their fights, stabbed by her own glider. Poor girl.
>After her death, Twi-Corp was led by her son Spike.
>But her death was too much on him, he later resigned and handed the company over to its final CEO, Wilson Fisk, the Kingpin.
>Unlike Twilight, Fisk had always been a crook, leading a crime organization for many years.
>When he took over, the company really started getting into shady business. Unethical experiments, illegal weapons testing, and silencing anyone who would try to speak out against them.
>You were gonna put a stop to it that night...or so you thought.

>>27232243
Is Anon male or female?

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>You put on your suit and made your way to Twi-Corp.
>You cleverly snuck in through the vents and evaded security while making your way towards the labs.
>While hovering over the lab in one of the air vents, you saw the big man himself over watching a new experiment.
>It was the strangest thing you ever saw, the lab coats were jotting down science stuff on their clipboards while staring at a large glass container filled with sown kind of...red goo?
>Whatever it was, it was making your skin crawl, and was probably dangerous.
>But before you made your big entrance, Kingoin started talking.
>"Well done, doctor, it appears the Carnage project is almost finally ready."
>Carnage? You what, mate?
>Alright, time to take these losers down, and destroy that thing. You jump out of the vent and right behind everyone.
"Hey everyone, nice night for an ass kicking, don't you think?" (You are so awesome)
>"What?! Spider-wo...oh, it's just the cheap knockoff."
"Oh yeah? Well here's web in your eye!"
>You shot a glob of web and it got stuck right in that idiot's eyes. Rekt.
>"Arghh! Kill him!"
>You look and see a group of goons bearing down on you. Nothing you couldn't handle.
>After you quickly dispatch them, your spider sense begins tingling right before you're punched in the face by...Spider-Woman?
>"I thought I told you to stay out of my city. Now you're gonna pay"
"What's wrong with you?! I'm trying to stop Kingpin, and you wanna fight?"
>"I'll deal with him after I'm done with you"
"Spider-Woman, please, we can work together. We don't have to fight"
>"Shut up!"
>It was clear she didn't wanna talk. Fine, if she wants a fight, she'll get one.
>Looking back now, you should've just let her beat you...

>>27232279
Male

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>>27232424
This seems familiar.

>>27231675
Oh man this is great especially if you're going to be doing the same/similar scenes as the old version, the meeting one should be excellent given that Anon will have beaten them multiple times and taken as least Zapp's powers.

"What are you talking about I've already beating you x amount of times and I've taken your powers, you've done nothing."

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>>27232424
>You didn't have as much experience as her, but you had heart, and you weren't fighting out of anger like her.
>You threw the first punched, which she dodged and countered with an uppercut. ow.
>But you quickly fire some web at her feet to trip her up and and knock her on the floor,
>She quickly hops back up and rushes you with a flurry of punches and kicks
>You dodge and block most of them, but she managed to get one kick in on your legs and knock you down.
>"You just don't know when to give up, do you?
"I can do this all day"
>You say right before you gut punch her
>Then you give her a big kick and end up knocking her into the glass container, breaking it.
"Oh no"
>She ends up landing in the red goo, and as she tries to recover, it completely covers her as she screams.
>"AHHHGGRH, HELP ME! AAAHH!
"Sunset! Hold on!"
>he, hehehe, AHAHAHAHA! Sunset is gone! There is only...CARNAGE!"
>She looked like a monster, her voice now sounded like some kind of demonic screech, her appearance now looked like a mix of her costume and...something else, she also had monstrous sharp teeth.
>By now you had forgotten about Kingpin, who was sitting by and watching the whole thing.
>"Incredible, the symbiote has completely bonded with her"
"Symbiote, what are you talking about?"
>"Oh you won't live long enough to find out"
>He begins to walk over to her
"Fisk, stop! What are you doing?!"
>"Now then...Spider-Carnage, I order you to kill the Scarlet Spider."
>She just stands there with an insane grin
>"I said, I order you to kill-ARRRGH!
>His words are quickly cut short when Sunset shoves some kind of...tentacle through his chest.
>"Didn't say pleeeease, AHAHAHAHA!"

>>27232682
Yes, but in Infamous Second Son the powers Deslin gets are only copies. Zapp will still have her powers but Anon will have different attacks and stuff

>>27232677
Guilty as charged.
(I don't know how to come up with original ideas)

>>27232717
I want complicated love between anon and zapp

>>27232749
Sunset and Zapp/Dash with Anon

>>27232764
Draammmaa!

>>27232838
Maybe more.

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>>27232852

>>27232717
Never played any of them other than the first one but that is what I meant with my comment, I'm sure seeing someone else use her powers would annoy Rainbow to no end as well.

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>Kingpin fell to the ground, dead
>You'd be lying if you said you felt bad for him. Still, you can not let her do that to anyone else
>You quickly charge her to attack...before she grabs you with one of her tentacles
>"Oh, I haven't forgotten about you"
"Sunset please, this isn't you? You have to take that thing off!"
>"Why would I do that? I need it to kill you!"
>In that moment you did the one thing that gets you out of any and every bad situation. You shot web in her eyes.
>"Argh!"
>As she drops you, you follow up with a web strike and kick her through a wall
>Not dumb enough to go over there, you sit there and wait. And wait. And wait. But she has yet to attack you
"Did I knock her out or wha-AGGGH!"
>Suddenly, you're greeted by one of her tentacles stabbing you through the arm
>"Looking for me?"
"What? How?! My spider sense should've detected you! Why didn't it go off?!
>"Dont know, don't care, but if I were you, I'd be more worried about that arm. Ha!"
>You look and see a loooot of blood coming out, and you can't move it. Crud, there's no way you're gonna be able to fight with one arm
>She grabs you by the throat as one of her arms morphs itself into some kind of bladed weapon
>"Now then, Anon, let me *axe*'you a question, AHAHAHAHA!"
>Well this is rich. Not only were you gonna die, you were gonna die to a bad pun
>Then, almost as if by convenient plot reasons, another Twi-Corp security team shows up
>"Hands in the air, freak!"
>She looks at you and smiles
>"I'll be right back"
>She drops you and starts walking towards the guards
>"I said hands up!"
>One of the guards fires his weapon at her, but no bullets come out
>The horrible ringing in your ears say it's some kind of sonic weapon, but why?
>Your question is quickly answered as you look up and see Sunset screaming in pain as she and she grabs her ears and writhes around
>You don't want to leave her, but you can't do anything with your arm, so you take this chance to use your good arm and web in the vent

>>27233020
That's the point

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>"Heya Uncle Shocker!"
"GAH! WHAT THE FU--oh, it's you three. What do you want?"
>"Well, after how nice you were to us, we figured such a nice guy like you would be wasted as a villain...so we decided to redeem you!"
"What."
>"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS REDEMPTION ARC, GO!"
"I...again, what?"

>>27233126
so many orifices, so few dicks to stuff them with

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>>27233021
>It is now present day
>You managed to get your arm fixed by one of your allies, Doctor Moondancer
>After you made your escape, Sunset quickly recovered and killed the entire security team, the destroyed the building, along with every person that was inside.
>Then she went on a rampage across the city, destroying most of it, and killing a lot of people
>Each time you tried to stop her, she completely pummeled you and left you off worse each time
>At one point, one of her old friends, you believe her name was, Fluttershy? Tried to talk her down...it did not end well.
>At this point, the city is not much more than flames and ruins, along with scattered civilians hiding in the dark trying to survive.
>You were the one hope for this city and you failed. You...did this. And you were going to atone for it, and end this once and for all.
>For a while now, you've been having Moondancer try to develop some kind of weapon that you could use to defeat her. You told her about the incident and how loud noises weaken her, and ever since, she's been working. Hopefully today's the day that she completes it.

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>>27233186
>>27233233

>>27233348
You're our harem-for-no-reason story, don't act coy now

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>>27233261
>You finally make it to Moondancer's lab, one of the few places untouched by Spider-Carnage
"Moondancer, you here?"
>As you make your way through her place, you quickly realize that something's wrong. Why wasn't she answering you? Why's it so dark in here? Why is-
"Oh-oh my god.."
>As you enter her lab, what you see...is nothing like you've ever seen before.
>Spider-Carnage was there, and the was holding Moondancer in the air as she appeared to...drain her of life
>Moondancer looked saw you and the loom she had in her eyes was one that could be translated to "I'm sorry"
>You fell to your knees as you watched the rest of the life force drain from your only friend's body. After Sunset dropped her to the ground, she turned and saw you
>"Well, well well, just the person I was looking for. Did you enjoy the show?"
>As you sat on knees, balling your hands into fists as she taunted you, realized that you had failed yet again, and now your last loved one was dead in front of you, and without the sonic weapon there was no way to stop Sunset.
>"What's the matter? Nothing to say? A shame, I at least wanted to hear you beg before I killed you. Oh well."
>She morphs her arm into the shape of an axe, just like she did on the day that you created her
>Then it dawned upon you. You were clone, right? You have, not only her powers, but her memories as well. Just maybe...
"Would she have wanted this?"
>"What was that?"
"Aunt Celestia. Would she have wanted this?"
>You stand up
>"Shut up! SHUT UP! Don't talk about her!"
>She smacks you and knocks you into one of the walls
"Ugh. Don't you remember? Before she died, she said that with great power, comes great responsibility, Sunset. Look at yourself now, what would she think of what you'd become?"
>"SHUT UP!"
>She hits you again, this time knocking you out of a window. You grab onto the building and climb up to the roof as she gives chase

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>>27233522
>Once you both make it up there, you continue trying to reason with her
"She loved you, Sunset. She'd never want to see you like this, take that thing off, please! Let me save you!"
>For a time she sit there, conflicted, holding her head in pain like she was trying to fight it. Then she suddenly stops
>"Oh, you'd like that, wouldn't you?"
>Shit, you're losing her!
"Sunset, it's not too late, fight it!"
>"No, no I don't think so. I'm going to finally kill you once and for all!"
...
"So be it"
>You were done playing games. If you couldn't save her, you were going to stop her. Permanently.
>She lunges at you, as you quickly jump out of the way and shoot your webbing at her, and fling her into a nearby vent on the roof
>"Oh? Playing it my way, huh?"
"I'm done trying to convince you"
>"This is gonna be fun"
>This is it, no more holding back. You're gonna use every last bit of your strength to make sure she never hurts anyone again
>She lunges at you again, this time you grab her in midair and slam her on the roof surface
>"How? How are you doing this?!
"I told you, I'm done holding back, this time you're not getting away"
>"You fool! I'm gonna kill you! Just like I killed your little friend!"
>This time she gets the upper hand and swipes a claw and you, tearing your costume and drawing a little blood
"Time after time, I've tried to help you, convince you that I was on your side, now that you've killed the one thing I have left, I've run out of patience, and mercy. It's too late to save the city, but not too late to save the people that are still here. I'm going to end you"

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>>27233733
>"How touching, now shut up and die already!"
>She swipes again, but you dodge and counter with an uppercut that sends her flying back
>She doesn't move off the ground, looks like she's out cold. Good.
>You remember that Moondancer kept weapons in her lab, just in case.
>You quickly go inside and grab one of her grenades that she had hanging on the wall and get back to the roof, where Spider-Carnage still lays.
>As you sit there, grenade in your hand, you realize that you can't do it. You can't kill her.
>Finally she wakes up
>"Oooh, you're gonna regret that"
>You can't keep doing this forever, but you also can't kill her. You reluctantly realize there's only one thing you can do
"Take me"
>"What?"
"I'm not talking to you, I'm talking to the symbiote, that's what you're called, right?"
"Whatever you are, you can clearly see that Sunny's not up to the job anymore, take me instead, I'll give you what you need"
>"A-Anonymous, what are you do-AGHH!"
>Apparently the suit heard you, as it appears to be removing itself from her
>"AAGGH, A-ANON, HEEELLP MEE!"
(Thats what I'm doing, Sunny)
>The creature removes itself from Sunset as she falls to the ground, and it comes slithering towards you
"That's right, come and get me"
>It leaps at you, but you managed to web it up just in time
"Gotcha, now to finish you off"
>You arm the grenade and place it in your web trap, then sling it as hard as you can away
>It explodes, destroying the creature for good
>You then head over to the still unconscious Sunset
"Sunset. Sunset! Wake up, please..."
>"ugghh, Anonymous"
"Yeah, it's me. Welcome back"
>She immediately broke down into tears in your arms
>"I'm sorry! I'm so, so, sorry!
"Yeah, I know"
>"Why?"
"Why, what?"
>"After everything I've done, why did you save me?"
"Because that wasn't you who did all of those things, that was Carnage"
>"Still, if I hadn't gotten so jealous of you, none of this would've happened"
"It's ok, it's over"

>>27234056
Good effort/10

>>27234056
pretty good/10

>>27234056
...And then there fucked.

THE END...?

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>>27234056
>You and Sunset stand and walk to the edge of the roof
>"What now? I can't take back the things I've done, the people I've killed..."
"No, you can't. But you can make up for it, by doing what you always did before i showed up. Help people, help me save what's left. And maybe one day, we'll be able to rebuild and get this place back to normal"
>"Will they ever forgive me?"
"...I don't know, Sunset. I won't lie to you, they probably won't. I almost didn't..."
"But for now, you're back, the Amazing Spider-Woman is back, and she's not going anywhere, right?"
>"No, I'm not. Even if they never forgive me, I'm going to keep fighting, because like you said, Great Power comes with Great Responsibility. I forgot what those words meant, but not anymore"
"Well then, let's get to work"
http://youtu.be/h2ASUOtvHBU

The end. Now the good writers can get back to doing what they do.

Still working on more art, was debating on shameless dumping of previous pictures just for new peeps. So far I still have the request for Fleur and Luna right Treppahcs?

>>27234295
Yeah

>>27234328
Any requests regarding subject matter or poses or anything different you might want for them? IE: lewd, non-lewd etc

>>27234391
Luna should be in a action like pose, maybe holding a gun. For Fleur, I'm unsure. Maybe have her look like she's just finishing dressing in a catsuit or something

>>27234421
Roger, I'm on it. Gonna start gathering ideas. Want them with EQG skin tones like I did for the sinister six? Fleur sounds like she will be an interesting challenge, Luna will be fun but gonna have to make sure she's spot-on (not in the mood for a fan based ass-kicking)

>>27234477
Continue with the EQG skins. It's not a big deal for me and I think you'll do good with this

still writing from >>27231958

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Web

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>>27235387

>>27235557
shittierhips/10

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>>27235564

>>27231675
>Be Anon.
>It’s the next day and you’re having lunch.
>You’re minding your own business and eating a hamburger, when someone pokes you in the back.
> “Gimme all your money,” a fake squeaky voice said.
>You turn around and see Pinkie crouched down with the rest of the group behind her.
“You need to work on that Pinkie,” you said as you took another bite of the burger, “Sunny does it a lot better.”
> “Awww,” Pinkie whinned with Fluttershy patting her head.
“So what’s up? Gonna ruff me up a bit?” you said, half jokingly half worried.
> “Maybe later, punk. But do you mind if we sit with you?” Sunset asked smiling.
“Sure, I can use a little excitement in my life.”
>The girls said their thanks as they sat down.
>Soon all of them were either eating or talking about something or another.
>Sunset was oddly quiet and poking her food.
“You ok Sunny?”
> “Yeah, just had a hard time getting up this morning,” Sunset said, while shaking her head.
“You got something on your mind? Want to talk about it?” you asked, worried for one of your closest friends.
>She just looks down at her food, not answering you.


>Be Sunset at 6 am.
>You and the rest of your friends are sitting in the principal’s office, talking to Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna.
>But they weren’t the principals at the moment.
>She was Director Celestia of S.H.I.E.L.D. and The Punisher.

>>27235839
> “Now to my understanding, all of you found the ‘vigilante’ that’s been reported stopping muggers, crooks and gang members,” Celestia said in her professional tone.
>All of you nodded with Rainbow grumbling.
> “And instead of peacefully talking to him, all of you threaten him.”
“Um, I offered him to have fun with me,” you admitted, blushing a lot.
> “If you want to have that kind of fun I won’t stop you,” she said smiling, “But make sure you use protection.”
>You lowered your head as the other snickered at you.
> “And at the end, he was not only able to restrain all of you but you all saw him able to use lightning after he touched Rainbow Dash,”
> “I’ll show that jerk to copy me,” Rainbow said angrily.
>Celestia looked at everyone in the room and sighed.
> “It’s clear what I need to do. Luna, I’m gonna need you to make a few calls,” Celestia said to her sister and handing her a sheet.
> “I’ll get right on it,” Luna said as she walked out the room.
> “While she takes care of that, all of you should get ready for class,” Celestia said, shooing them away.


>Be Anon.
>Sunset still hasn’t said anything.
“Sunset. You in there?” you asked.
> “Huh, what did you say?” she asked.
“I’ve been calling you for five minutes. Seriously what’s up?”
> “Maybe I didn’t get enough sleep last night,” she said, laughing a little.
>You looked at her but nod.
>If she wants to tell you she will.