Age Difference Thread #20

>>27063752
>A history lesson with Cheerille that turns very lewd, very slowly.
>A very insecure Rainbow Dash challanges you, the male coach of the soccer team, to a game of soccer. If she wins, you have to let her play on the boy's team. If you win, she'll do something unspecified for you.
>You find a teenage Scootaloo out on the streets, begging passerbys for spare change or food. You strike up a relationship with her after taking pitty on her, and taking her out for icream
>The older Berry Punch shows up on your doorstep one night, ranting drunkenly about something you did. After you invite her in, and calm her down, you manage to take advantage of the not-so-sober mare.
>You, as the powerful founder of some record company somewhere, decide to give a the young Vinyl Scratch the light of day. Thing is, putting money on new talent is risky, and you need some more coaxing before you make a deal with her
>In order to raise some cash for a fundrasier, you decide to auction yourself off as a male prostitute to the highest bidder. Right as you're about to be sold off to a mare, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon show up, and place a bid higher than all the others. You're carted off with them, wondering how exactly you're going to come out of this with a sound mind.

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>>27063752

>>27063752
I'd write smut.
I don't wanna write cringe worthy shit though.
I've written for the thread before... but I wasn't satisfied. Any general tips for smut specifically?

>>27063984
There's the general "switch up your language" stuff and whatnot, but really, what you want to do is make your sex scenes unique. Don't just have your characters do the same thing each and every time. Switch up your foreplay, switch up who's the dom, make the characters try new things. Say you're having Rumble bang... I dunnow, Berry Punch. You could leave Rumble very ignorant when it comes to what he should do, and let Berry take the reins for the majority of their encounters. You could possibly have Rumble try to do his thing for the first time, and not fail at getting Berry off, so she directs him for the next encounter. Then you could have Berry slowly teach him new things. I don't know if certain techniques that you use on women would work exactly on horses, but look up various things you could do during cunnilingus or fellatio, and incorporate them into your writing. There's a pretty nifty tutorial floating around on Pornhub that shows you how to eat a girl out. There's tons of resources out there, you just gotta look 'em up.

Also, I never got a chance to say this last thread, but welcome aboard, Shitcity. 'Bout time you started pumping out green I'm kidding, I love ya man. But now you've got me reading, and I expect great things out of you. Don't let me down.

>>27063984
>write on notepad until story/chapter's finished
>revise
>repeat step 2 until satisfied
>retire at the ripe age of 91

>>27064392
>do it right the first time
>never look back
A man cannot walk into the future while looking to the past, or he shall surely stumble.

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Any story to match the OP image? Now that would be a perfect tale of
>new discoveries

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Shitcity/fluttershy's mom writefag here, sorry for not writing. Been going through medical problems and suffice to say I lost a lot of blood today. Should be much better soon and I'll be writing then

Also bump

boop

>>27066539
That sounds like it sucked real time.

>>27063752
nice thumbnail loser

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They grow up so fast.
Except when they're cartoon characters who never age.

I've been working on a humanized story based on the future where Nightmare Moon wins from the S5 finale. In it, she's got a harem of little boys and girls all to herself. Anyone interested?

>>27065067
There's Lorelove's story. Don't know if there's any other ones
>http://pastebin.com/LbuZ20MG

>>27066539
Damn, sounds like you've had a shitty time. Hope you get better soon.

>>27068278
I am! More green is always nice and we really need it.

>>27068278
Thats definitely sounds like something she would do. Please follow through.

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Go away page 9

>>27068679
>>27068950
Here's what I got so far. http://pastebin.com/AXDa221t

Planning for a little more with this along with a sequence with a little boy.

Also, I want to do a Tender Taps and Applebloom story, but I'm not sure how to start it. Maybe just with them practicing in the barn, he gets a boner, and it goes from there?

Boop

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Bump

How horrifying

>>27070353
Why not just write and paste on thread?
It would help thread be active.

>>27063752
Also...Viral it's a new BREAD

Colt Quest has started in case anyone wants to guide a colt on an adventure.

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>>27072683
>Deep in the cold armpits of Swederpistan
>The call is heard, carried upon the newborn cries of fresh BREAD
>Beneath its mound of empty Monster cans, it stirs
>A beautiful chorus sings its heavenly song to signal the awakening
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hiu1hPdJk-Y
>Arise to return to the beaitful people, to feed their hunger for green
>It comes

Too sleepy. Green tomorrow.

>That lazy motherfucker...

>>27072683
I suppose it would. Is it too late to do that, or does no one care?

>>27073590
Mainly up to you. Do what you feel is right

If anyone cares, I got a story in the works. Currently 4 google docs pages, editing not done yet.

I suppose before I get further, how do people feel about somewhat longer stories, with smut happening somewhat further in?
Cause so far the 4 pages are introductions and character relationship building.

>>27073816
Considering my story is currently at 33 pages and the only real smut that's happened is a public hoofjob with vague descriptions, I don't think anyone would complain.
I personally like it when some story builds up to the lewd instead of just diving headlong into it, so I say "go for it".

So, for anyone who didn't read the pastebin link, I'll paste the Nightmare Moon story here to keep the thread afloat.

The familiar sound of the bell echoed through the halls of the palace. The inhabitants knew what it meant, as the hour passed into that time of night. When only the moon shines in the sky, one needs a reliable way to tell the hour, but everyone knew what every twelfth bell meant. Whether they feared or rejoiced in it depended on who you asked, but one thing was clear: It was a reminder that they lived under the rule of Nightmare Moon.

After successfully sealing her sister away, the goddess of night made quick work of bringing the whole of Equestria under her heel. However, if she was to show that she was a greater ruler than Celestia, she would need to rule over her subjects with fear when necessary, but also with something resembling love to ensure loyalty. Through hours of deliberation, she had come up with a plan.

Deep within the halls of the palace was a particular room. During the time of the sisters’ reign a thousand years ago, this room did not exist, only being created recently by Nightmare Moon herself. A large and round room, littered with furniture meant for comfort. Long couches, piles of pillows and decorative rugs covered the floor. Inhabiting this room were a dozen or so young children, dressed in simple clothes reminiscent of the days of yore.

Every girl wore a white sheet, long enough to be wrapped around the chest and secured by a sash. Every boy had a thinner sheet that was draped over one shoulder and spread out over the hips, secured by a sash at the waist. None of them had any shoes on their feet, nor did they wear anything other than the sheet and sash. While it was a great shift from what they knew, they quickly became accustomed to it, especially since it was a great boon to be there.

>>27074218
Once children reached a certain age, they would be brought to live in the palace, free to do as they please so long as they did not leave. Given food and a place to sleep, the children lived in a state of peace. After dinner, they would be bathed and brought to the large room to await the top of the hour, when the bell would ring.

As the tone of the bell died out into the air, the children’s gaze turned toward the doors, flanked by two of Nightmare Moon’s guards. Seconds after, the doors swung open, and out walked the night goddess herself. Her dark skin was accented by the dark blue cloths that hung off her form, supported by bracelets, armlets, and other belts. It was a departure from the battle armor that she usually made appearances in, but it was a look the children were familiar with.

The children looked with bated breath as she scanned the group carefully. Some were tense, others seemed scared, others still looked eager with curiosity. Finally, Nightmare Moon raised her arm and pointed to one child, a girl with light brown skin and dark pink hair. The girl stepped back as all eyes turned on her, looking slightly frightened, but she didn’t run. Even still, to be sure she didn’t, the two guards next to Nightmare Moon approached the girl and lifted her by the arms. The girl brought to her, she lifted the child with her magic and carried them back to her chambers. As the doors closed, the children continued on with their business.

The private chambers of Nightmare Moon could be described only with the word “luxury”. Finely crafted furnishings, nicely scented candles and a large bed, all for the sake of the night goddess. Seeing all the features of the room, the child was unsure if she should be relieved or continue to be scared. Sensing the child’s apprehension, Nightmare Moon put on a small smile and had her float in front of her.

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/r/ing a story where celestia is anons adoptive mother, has raised him since he was like 5, and now is 19 or something and is incredibly horny and has already gotten into social trouble over it, and celestia starts reluctantly having sex with him because she doesn't want him running around messing with "random mares" and getting into social or legal trouble


Also she has that stupid idea that some people have that sex should be associated with love so he always emphasizes that she is doing this out of love

>>27074450
Wait a second... Wasn't Yeepz already doing this, or something like it?

>>27074231
“Are you scared, child?” she asked the young girl. The girl only meekly nodded in response. “What be your name?”

“Ru…Ruby Pinch,” the girl called herself.

“Dear Ruby Pinch, be not afraid,” Nightmare Moon said, combing the girl’s hair with her fingers. Her palm glowed as it was brought over the child’s eyes. Within seconds, the child calmed down, her shoulder’s slumping and her eyes glazing over, almost as though she were in a trance.

“I’m…sorry…” Ruby Pinch slowly replied. She was in no state of hypnosis, but was rather brought into compliance by Nightmare Moon’s spell.

“All is well,” Nightmare Moon told her, “for now, I shall show you pleasure. Through pleasure, you shall know love. Through love will you serve me.”

Nightmare Moon snapped her fingers, and Ruby Pinch’s sash came undone, causing it and the sheet that was her only garment to fall to the floor. The princess walked around the child, admiring her naked form, from her flat chest, to her soft back, to her perfectly round bottom. Not yet marred by the ravages of puberty, Ruby’s skin was smooth to the touch, which only made Nightmare Moon shudder with joy. With a wave of her hand, Ruby Pinch floated over to the bed and was laid on her back.

Approaching the bed, the moon princess began to undo the bindings that held the cloths covering her, letting them fall and tumble where they would. Soon, she was as naked as the child, her immaculate body almost glowing in the light of the room. She never strived to have a body as well endowed as her sister’s, as she believed her allure to be gained by the power and authority she wielded. Because of this, she had more of a slender figure, with moderately sized breasts and hips. Slowly, she crawled onto the bed and towards Ruby Pinch, who was breathing almost in a panic, but lacked the strength to do anything.

>>27074488
Dunno, haven't been in this general in a while

>>27074488
I am, but it's kind of on hold for now.

Although I might un-hold it because I'm stuck with MAAnon.

>>27074526
“You will enjoy this. I promise you,” Nightmare Moon told the child. Ruby could only watch the princess’ form tower over her, her breasts hanging close to her face and her hair flowing down her shoulders like a velvet waterfall. Gently, Nightmare Moon lowered herself onto Ruby’s body, the touch of bare skin to bare skin sending signals of pleasure throughout Ruby’s mind.

Ruby let out a short gasp, and Nightmare Moon knew she had them enthralled already. But, to ensure total loyalty, she’d have to do more than this. She lowered herself more, allowing her breasts to press into Ruby’s flat chest, while her arms wrapped around the child’s small frame. The smoothness of her back combined with the smell of the berry oils used to bathe her was something that the princess was already familiar with, but could never get enough of. She let her fingers roam through Ruby’s hair and her other hand travel down to the bare bottom, gripping it firmly in her palm.

“Ah!” Ruby gasped out again, making the princess smile with sincere glee.

“Oh, there’s so much more where that came from, child,” Nightmare Moon chuckled. She quickly began to work on Ruby’s neck, giving it quick little kisses around the base and her shoulders. Ruby’s eyes shut tight, perhaps to savor the feeling or to try and convince herself that this was nothing more than a dream. It made little difference to Nightmare Moon, as she had the advantage either way.

Sorry for no green from me. Been absorbed in God Hand and writing for the TRPG I'm running. The bleeding stopped, though, so I will commit tomorrow to writing for this thread

>>27076291
Bump to make sure it's still here.

I should be writing an update for a story, yet I spent four hours editing this.
http://pbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=304452

>>27063752
Good day favorite fetish general

Someone has some filly scout pastebins or some rainbow dash?
Dunno if this is the place to ask

>>27076452
Really good

>>27076885
Check THE PASTEBIN IN OP

>>27075333
Bin? Sauce? Something?

Here lies Jeff
He never scored.

>>27077266
Docs:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xiAVzqLiHXLjvYhldFT_V_0LHDXetFMPsWyONtONFYo/edit

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>>27079747
>good story
>great writing
>obviously overtly sexual mare trying to get him to come to her house
>its clear where celestia is gonna play into all this
>last updated march 25th
rrrrrrrrrrRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

page 9 bump

Should I be writing green?
I did say I would be writing green...
Yeah, I should write green.

Had some things to take care of today, so I don't have anything written yet, but I most likely won't be going to bed any time soon, so I might as well do something productive with my time. So expect some green in a few hours or so.

>>27075498
Keep going, Anonymous writefriend! Looking hot.

>>27080999
Trips for Amazing senpai

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Jus' bump my shit up flam

>>27080999
Has it been a couple of hours yet?
I'm sorry for the impatience but I just love your green

>>27076452
Nice, really nice

>>27082580
Still a little while until I'm satisfied with the amount, but it's coming along.
Just hold out a little longer, anon.

>>27079747
Any continuation of this?

Or if not that then making this?>>27074450
>>27074450

>>27061660

>Well, another disaster averted.
>Usually the drama tends to start after the date, not before.
>Okay, that’s was a really pessimistic thought.
>Still, you hope there will less excitement today.
>Unless it’s the intimate kind…
>Alright, stop right there, brain. None of that. Let’s just enjoy the moment and leave thoughts of gloom and lewd be for now.
>You look over Fem once more, scanning her face.
>Looking at her, smile on her lips as warm and comforting as the sun itself, you’d never know how sad she had seemed less than a minute ago.
>That youthful innocence of hers, in such sharp contrast with her more playful side.
>You really can’t help but let your mind wander towards certain thoughts, despite your attempts to prevent it.
>You knew she probably didn’t mean to when she gave you an eyeful of her glistening cleavage while cleaning your mane, but it can’t have been just pure chance that she picked an outfit that so clearly showed off her unique features.
>Could you really be blamed for having your eyes wander?
>Maybe, but she was definitely worth looking at.
>The thought makes you realize how intently you are staring at her and force yourself to avert your eyes.
>First date in months, Comet, don’t get overeager.
>Peering down the road, you spot a familiar part of the woods along the edge of the park, helping to clear your mind from your distracting thoughts.
>Catching Fem’s eyes, you incline your head in the direction of the trees.
>The path trailing down between the trees is hard to spot unless knowing where to look, partly overgrown at the edge of the forest, but you had passed through here plenty of times and knew it intimately.
>Taking the lead, you walk along the trail, Fem following closely behind you.

>>27084340

>Just a few meters down the path, it widens considerably, the large trees around you becoming further spaced from each other, allowing more sunlight to peer through the canopy of leaves and thick branches; brilliant beams of yellow bathing the path in soft light.
>The mellow sounds of birdsong are even more clear here as well; combined, it gives the forest a sort of mystical feeling. You could almost sense the age of the woods around you, like an ancient, breathing entity.
>It was one of the reasons you liked coming here.
>You suspect that there might have been a time when other ponies used to come here, considering the breadth of the path and how it had managed to keep from being completely overgrown, but at some point it had been forgotten, maybe as other, newer parts of the park became more popular.
>Fem moves to walk by your side again. Glancing at her, you see her eyes slowly take in the surroundings as you pass them by.
>A squirrel, watching us from it’s perch on a branch, catches her attention and they look long at each other, a big smile on her face, before the little critter scampers away, back to wherever its nest is, disappearing among the branches.
>”So cute...”
>You hear her coo softly to herself. You resist the urge to say “just like you”, not wanting to ruin the moment, not to mention embarrassing yourself with such a corny line.
>The rest of the walk is spent in silence, the two of you just enjoying the serene atmosphere and the cool shade provided to you by the trees.
>You like the sun, but you’re grateful for some reprieve from the heat.
>You’re not sure which of you are the most luckiest; you for not having to wear clothes during such a warm day, or her for not having a coat of fur.
>’Don’t start thinking about her skin again, Comet! Once you do, all you can think about is the smooth… soft… texture… and creamy… pink… soo smooth…’
>”Comet? You okay?”

>>27084348

>Quickly retracting your tongue-hanging limply from your mouth-back in its place while making sure there isn’t any drool, a startled stutter escapes you and you try to hide it by clearing your throat.
>A dumb, nervous grin is plastered on your face as you turn your head towards your date.
>She is looking at you with concern in her eyes and you avoid looking straight at them.
“Y-yeah, I’m fine, hehehe, completely fine!”
>Well that sounded completely sincere and not at all suspicious, not one bit.
>Leaning down a little closer, she studies your face intently. The corners of your lips twitch a little as you try to keep that grin on your face.
>”You sure? You seem to be getting a little sweaty.”
>You can definitely feel a few beads of sweat drip down the side of your face. Your ears twitch nervously as a tiny chuckle squeaks out of your throat.
>She suddenly reaches out to you with a hand, and before you can react, her palm is pressed against your forehead.
>H-her fingers brushes against your horn, causing you magic, still holding onto the basket, to briefly falter as your heart jumps into your mouth.
>’Mare, the things you do to me, and that I wish you’d do to me.’
>”Hmm, you’re pretty hot.”
>Y-you too…
>Celestia are you glad you didn’t actually just blurt that out.
>Her wigglers, sorry, fingers massage your forehead before she pulls her hand back.
>You already miss the feeling, but push that thought aside as she worried eyes drill into you again.
>”Are you sure you’re alright?.”
>Another nervous chuckle escapes you as you wave a placating hoof at her.
“I’m fine, I’m fine. It’s probably just the heat, yes, definitely the heat. Don’t worry, once we reach the lake, a cool dip in the water is just what I need.”
>Her lips purse into that cute little frown as she straightens up, looking you over thoughtfully once more.

>>27084489

>With your superior willpower, you finally manage to make your grin a little bit calmer. Not much more reassuring or genuine, but calmer.
>Hey, you’re not a miracle worker!
>The worry in Fem’s features seems to melt away slightly though and she gives a shrug.
>”Okay, if you’re sure…”
“Yeah yeah, I’m sure, no need to worry about me, just… Ah, we’re here!”
>You quietly let out a sigh of relief as the trees finally part and the path comes to an end, the two of you stepping back out into the light of the sun and onto the open field.

Last for now, familia.
Gonna need to plan out a little over what happens next, but I'll try to get more written soon.
Also, won't forget the pastebin this time. Here it is, updated and ready.
>http://pastebin.com/ktSs353f

Kisses to you all, Anon~

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>>27084506
Thank you for the green! It's quite adorable

>>27084506
Here's an idea (and it might be something to do other than bump between greens)
Do any of you guys have any ideas or suggestions on what you'd like to see happen between Fem and Comet?
I have a few things planned out, but some of them are still vague ideas.
You might end up inspiring me, which might help me write updates as often as possible.

>>27084687
Thank you, beautiful!
I'm always worried that it'll come out stilted or awkward, especially dialogue.

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>it's almost been a week since I've updated
Blood loss or not, that shit won't stand.

>>27035042
>She gasped, hiding under her mane as much as she could. "That's rude to say in front of the birds, Dashie!"
"Oh, so you'd be fine with it if we were alone?"
>"N-no! I just mean that it's very crass!"
"You know it!"
>She huffed and picked up the food bag
>It strikes you as odd how easy it is to confess secrets if you play them off as a joke
>In any other situation, you wouldn't be able to stutter out a "You look good today" before wimping out and pretending that you had to go take some flying lessons
>You can't help to see your previously nefarious smile turn soft as you watch her try to put the food away without the birds pecking holes in the bag
>You go to help her, while Gust Tumbler steps out. "Shoo! My daughter feeds you and this is how you repay her, huh?!"
>Fluttershy giggles. "It's okay mom, they're just playful."
>You start to take to the air to wave them away, when her mother raises a wing
>She then flaps it, blowing you hard enough to slide on the fluffy ground and throw all of the birds softly into their well-sculpted cloud fence. They then pop out, chirping indignantly
"Whoa! You're like, almost as strong as our coach!"
>Fluttershy grins. "Yep! She was a junior speedster too!"
>"Yeah, get a lot of exercise on the weather team."
>Your enthusiasm immediately drops, and you sigh.
>"Hey hey, don't look like that!" Gust frowns, with still a hint of playful energy in her eyes. "I'm not a rainbow mixer or anything lame like tha--uh--"
>She coughs, looking to the side. "No offense."
>You sigh again and lower your head. "Yeah it's pretty lame."
>Your dad would be sad to hear you say that. But he'd probably admit it.
>She pats you on the head with her wing. "Don't worry, kid. If you ever need help with wingpower or tornado-chasing, I'll be here."

>>27085066
>Your grin returns, as does hers.
>Fluttershy wipes the sweat from her brow, satisfied in a job well done. "That's everything picked up!"
>You look up as the sun starts to lower.
"I should get home soon, dinner will be in a bit."
>"Aww! Okay, Rainbow Dash."
>Gust Tumbler nods. "Yeah, I should start cooking. Fluttershy, you need to go take a shower."
>"I know, mom!" She says, stumbling inside over her lanky legs. You chuckle lightly and follow. "I'll see you later, Dashie! Thanks for coming over!"
"Thanks for having me. It was fun!"
>You turn to Gust, who's proudly smiling.
"Nice to meet you, too, Miss 'Shy!"
>"It was wonderful, Rainbow. Keep in mind what I saaaid~" She finished the second half in a sing-songy voice.
>You instinctively blush and lower your head, breaking eye contact for a moment
>When you look back she's chuckling, still a large smile on her that reminds you of Fluttershy's gleaming face when she showed you her cutie mark
>You nearly trip over yourself on the way out, making sure not to accidentally slam the door.
>Passing the bush you were hiding in earlier, you stop and stare at it for a moment
>Still an icicle out of place, mostly melted, causing the cloud around it to darken like a small raincloud, a blotch in the yard.
>You stamp the water out of it to be polite, and a crack of thunder hits your ears before you realize the shock travelling up your arm
>You hop back on your other legs, fur frizzing around you
"Owowow! Son of a bi--"
>Before you finish, you see a shadow form around you
>A moment later you feel two wings pick you up, and are turned around to see Gust Tumbler's worried face.
>"Are you okay, Dash?! What happened?"
>You decide to test the first question out first, and wave your hoof in front of your face to study it
>Well, you try anyhow. It's gone completely numb, and you end up floundering it onto your face
>Before you can try again, she asks again, "Dashie? Speak to me, sweetheart."

>>27085079
"Yea-HEUGH"
>You cough a small cloud of soot into her face, which she wipes off, staining both her face and wing in black
"Y-yeah I'm fine, M-miss 'Shy..."
>Despite the twitching in your left wing, you're not mortified inside from pain
>Gust itches at her eye to get the soot out. "You don't look fine. Sweetie, I need to be absolutely sure. Try to move your limbs, and tell me what's happened today."
>Your heart jumps at the pet name. She slightly loosens her grip on you, and you almost go to move closer
>You catch yourself, shaking the static electricity from your head. You try to place weight on your hooves as you recall
"Uh, I hid in a b--I mean, I uh.."
>Catching yourself again, you reflexively shake your head again to restart. You try to divorce yourself from the situation to help
"I c-came to the house and saw a very pre--"
>You clench your teeth. Okay, seperating yourself too much made you be a little...too objective.
>On the bright side, most of your limbs are working. Your right hoof still fumbles a bit, and your left wing won't buzz in sync with the other
"I--well, when I came in, me and Fluttershy had a tea par--"
>You stop yourself once more, suddenly worried
>As much as you'll defend Fluttershy in public and hang out with her, you kind of don't want it going around that you're doing lame filly stuff like tea parties
>Wait...This is her mom, it doesn't matter
>Does it?
>You want her to think you're cool. But she already knew, right?
>You still can't decide by the time she leans forward, wanting you to continue. You'll get back to that part, time to force ahead
"W-we talked about how you want me to be more forward with my crush on--"
>Fluttershy rushes into the yard, also looking over you
>Her terrified expression is enough to stop you, not even counting your reluctance to come out and say it
>"Are you okay Rainbow Dash?!" She alternates between whispering and shouting every syllable, almost crying as tears well up.
"Yeah Flutters, I'm fine."

>>27085109
>Gust shakes her head. "I'm not so sure, Rainbow! You're sounding disorientated, you might have amnesia!"
>Feeling is coming back into your front leg now. It hurts. A lot
>You start to tremble and yelp in pain
>But their eyes catch you first
>Not only Fluttershy's
>Gust Tumbler's eyes also begin to well up in tears
>You steel yourself, biting your tongue and forcing your lips to stop quivering
>You're Rainbow Cussin' Dash
>You don't make your best friends cry.
"I'm fine! I promise, it'll take way more than pesky icicle-poking cloud-parting little old lightning bolt to make me wince, let alone take me down!"
>With that, you force your limbs into order, puffing out your chest and holding your wings high
>Like you stood to get the coach at flight camp to notice you.
>A few moments pass
>Every time your wing begins to spasm, you look deeper into their eyes, and lock it in place
>After that, Fluttershy begins to smile, crashing into you with a full force hug
>It doesn't actually hurt
>By your estimation she's about three pounds. Tops.
>However, when Gust Tumbler wraps her arms and wings around the both of you and squeezes, you feel like you have sunburn bad enough that Nightmare Moon would sympathize
>You don't managed to keep a squeak of pain down, and she loosens her grip, pulling you up to face her
>"You're such a tough young woman, Dash."
>Your heart throbs, before she continues
>"We really need you to practice your weather control. That could have been very bad. It sounded like it was intense. I could teach you."
>You grin
"Really?! That'd be awesome!"
>She giggles and pats your head, Fluttershy still clinging to you.
>You lean into her, before realizing what you said
>Weather practice.
>Awesome.
>You'd be disgusted if you weren't in a sickly sweet huddle of wonderful feathery hugs

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>>27085113
Yeah that's all I've got left in me. Back to anonhood and more pressingly, to sleep. I hope you guys enjoyed it

>>27085169
Nice going, senpai!
But holy crap. blood loss? Hope you're getting better, and please don't work yourself too hard.

>>27078427
That fucker

>>27084710
Well, what about having Comet massage sunscreen on Fem, but with his magic instead?

They swim and have fun in the lake, but Fem's bikini gets a bit looser, revealing a bit more?

After swimming, they eat some pie, but when fem eats it, maybe a lot of ends up on her chest/cleavage? Comet goes and licks it up while trying to not make it sexual?

That's all I got. Why is there no one else helping senpai?

>>27085066
>Only a week of inactivity

Step up senpai.

Page 10? Madness!

>>27085887
Thanks, Viral. You guys make this thread comfy as all hell for a slightly decaying level 1 lich

>>27086122
Maybe the pie thing was not a good idea. Maybe stretches before swim is better. Lewd to comic but a health thing for fem, comic sees how flexible she is

>>27086122
>>27088177
>both my posts had dubs
Checked

boop

>>27088836

Well, seems like only one Anon gave ideas to viral

Where are writers?

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>>27086122
>>27088177
These are all good suggestions, thank you!
The pie thing might be a little bit too bold, you're right, but I do have something planned around Fem and the pie that'll make Comet sweat a little more.
Again, thank you for your ideas, they have helped me start to form out some scenes in my head.
Nice dubs too!
Love you~

>>27087846
Of course! If there's one thing I've campaigned for, it's to have a nice and positive atmosphere in the thread, including for the undead!
So how's unlife? Got any new, sick powers, or do you have to grind a bit more?

>>27091276
Still planning out things. I'll try to get something done as soon as I can.
Sorry familia

>>27092172
Don't apologize. It's ok. We can wait
Besides, you liked my suggestions.

Night bump.

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>>27092172
Ponies scream when I touch them. That's a new power. No it isn't.

On the bright side, I don't have to deal with flesh things. Since my blood is stagnant, I don't have to pay for viagra when I never use it, plus I didn't like the sun much in life anyways.

>>27092172
Can't wait!
Also, where the bumpers at, this is page 10!

Seems like the blue dragon Amber is underage for a dragon. So, any ideas for her?

Also bump.

>>27097004
Twi doesn't realize how young she is, starts asking questions about dragon mating for her book.

>>27097156
Oh that's good

>>27097156
So another Idea for a filly fiddler Twi?

Someone said something about a teen fem anon,14 or so, with carefree youthfulness and childlike wonderment being taken in by a filly fiddler Twilight to take shelter in her castle or something for awhile. Being alone with a human while Twilight's friends are away on some errand, spike being away on some other errand, learning that she is actually young for her kind and having nothing to do. Using illusion magic to cover up some sexual acts as innocent actions, maybe make fem have lewd dreams with the same magic.

Another Idea for Filly Fiddler Green now: A filly fiddler Twilight with a young dragon that she figures out is non-adult, could try and "Guess" how dragons mate by looking at and feeling her body up. Learn by doing, that is. Maybe teaching Spike as well by having him watch and than join in. Be a three way fantasy for her.

Viral is updating today right? IS anyone updating tonight?

>>27101485
Well, I suppose I could try to write something, if you reeeaally want me to.
It'll probably take a while though before it's ready.

>>27102020
Going to say some of us do.
Sorry if I'm rushing you, it's just that this thread is kinda dead. The other writers are dead mostly and you are the only living one today! Today that is

>>27102630
Though I am dead, Shitcity, I'm still here. I'll try to write if it comes to it, but I've been in a high fantasy mood lately so I'm writing other things too. It's really difficult to write one thing while you want to do another, you know?

I won't abandon you anons, though!

>>27102630
I understand, love.
Will definitely get an update out before bed, even if it will be a short one.

>>27102876
>>27102879

Woot. At least two writers are alive.

>>27101485
I'm going to, even if it's just one post.

I mean, shit, busy or not, this is fucking ridiculous. Shitcity, with non-descript bleeding and everything, updated his, and I'm just sitting here scratching my nuts.

>>27084506

>A carpet of green grass spreads out around you, surrounded by rows of trees, and in the center of it, a shimmering, blue body of water.
>The lake is not a large one, about two acres in size at the most, but more than enough for swimming.
>The sunlight is reflected in the small waves across the surface, creating a pattern of sparkling ripples in the otherwise calm waters. It almost looks like the lake is covered in diamonds.
>No matter how many times you see this sight, it always brings a smile to your face.
>Glancing over at Fem, you see it has the same effect on her as she looks expectantly over the lake.
>It also seems like she’s forgotten about the way you were acting just now, thank Celestia.
>Taking the lead once more, you move towards the lake, to a spot you were intimately familiar with.
>The willow tree.
>To you, the tree had almost become like an old friend, your only company on those days that you would visit this spot to be alone, to get away from whatever.
>It stood silently and alone just a few meters away from the shore, its leaves hang like heavy, green shutters, reaching almost all the way to the ground and waving slightly in the weak breeze, creating slits in the foliage for the sunlight to peek through.
>Once you reached the willow, you grip some of the slender branches with your magic, pulling them aside like a curtain and moving to the side.
>Turning towards Fem, you smile at her and motion with your hoof, beckoning her to enter.
>She inclines her head in a courteous nod, with her eyes half-lidded and a smile on her lips before she hunches down and slips in between the branches.
>As she passes by you, you notice her glancing at you with a demure look and you find yourself straightening up and puffing out your chest slightly at her small hint of attention.
>Your eyes drift downwards along her hunched form, until you get an eyeful of her flank through the thin layer of red cloth around her hips.

>>27103998

>The moment is brief, over in less than the blink of an eye, before she disappears behind the leaves, but it is enough for your breath to hitch in your throat.
>You quickly try to shake yourself free from your short stupor, but the image remains deeply engraved into your thoughts.
>Taking a deep breath and letting it out slowly, you collect yourself, wiping a hoof across your forehead.
>’This human will be the end of me’, you think to yourself before slinking in to join her inside the willow’s curtains.
>You find her standing before the trunk of the tree, slowly spinning around in place, looking around her with that child-like look of wonderment on her face.
>You can understand her; in a way, it’s almost like entering another world. The branches and leaves give the place a pleasant shade, while also letting a generous amount of light in between, the rays dancing in the air and forming various patterns along the ground.
>Along one side of the draping vines encircling you, the leaves part slightly, giving you a good view of the lake and allowing even more of the warm light of the sun in.
>The grass is thinner here, thanks to the smaller amount of sunlight, and the ground is flat and soft enough to sit or lie comfortably on. More than once have you found yourself falling asleep on this very ground.
>There is a stillness here; quiet, calm and private. A place where you can help but feel relaxed.
>Sitting down on your haunches, you silently watch Fem as she is seemingly mesmerized by her surroundings, like a filly finding some secret, hidden world.
>To you, this place is familiar, you know it like the back of your hoof.
>To her though… Your lips curve into a warm, small smile at you continue watching her.
>She seems so happy, so innocent.
>You think you could watch her like this all day.

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That'll have to be it for now.
Still need to plan out a little more, but now I've gotten some of the padding and background descriptions out of the way at least.
And anything to keep this lovely thread alive.

Pastebin updated as well, you sexy beast you.
>http://pastebin.com/ktSs353f

>>27104441
Best senpai EVER

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>>27097004
She was a qt

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Nothing like stopping by the ol' homestead and going to write about innocent young Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash and hearing your parents shagging to make you unable to write, or indeed imagine, anything that could be cute, ever.

i might be a little late on updating guys i've gotta kill myself again

>>27105147
Again? So... Would that make you double-dead?
What will you become if you're no longer a lich?

I know the feel. In fact, since my parents were divorced, I had the joy of hearing them going at it with their new significant others on multiple occasions, for twice the horror.
Not to mention my brother (whose room was right next to mine) and his girlfriend.
Just put on the headphones and blast your ears with music so you'll never hear anything again.

>>27105147
>>27105215
I've never experienced that feel but I can't even imagine it

I'm a virgin
I swear if my brother gets laid before me I'm raping someone

>>27105113
>>27105113
Best to fuck them when they are like that. When they grow up, well...Your dick would be too small to them

>>27105237
Just go out and talk to women m8. It's not the end of the world.
But after the story.

>>27105248
It's taken me losing a metric fuckton of weight, studying modern "fashion" and hair styles, and reading how to win friends and influence people to understand how normies minds work, to even have a real chance for the first time ever

I think I'm close, but I still think they are dirt

http://erudition.mohit.tripod.com/_Influence_People.pdf

>>27105237
It was my older brother and he's the type of guy who doesn't seem to even have to try that hard to get laid.
I was younger when I had my first time then he was with his though, so I'll take that as a victory.

>>27105267
This may sound cliche and lame, but I only really started to get any kind of attention from girls after I stopped trying to fit in and just tried to be myself instead.
Maybe I just got lucky and managed to attract someone with similar interests to myself.

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>>27105215
I'd just become a shade. Like, a shade of my former self. Hahah...it's funny because that's what I am, here and now. In real life, too.

Look at all these fucking normies in this thread. It's almost as if this board hasn't been cultivated entirely on hatred and is accepting enough to bring people together in a way that brings joy from the self-described hate machine of the internet in a display of our worth as humans. GET OUT YOU UN-VIRGIN FUCKLER FAGGOTS

>>27105382
>Negativity detected.
Don't let this be the last thing I see before bed, Shitcity. This is the thread for rainbows and faggotry!
I'll still love your shady ass.
Love it long time.

God natt!

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>>27105457
Alright Viral sempai. I believe in the you who believes in the me!

9th page bump. Don't die. Uh, well, those of you who haven't died yet.

Augh! This season is killing me with all these great potential ships to write stories for! Already, I want to do a fic with the Cake twins and Flurry Heart, one with Tender Taps and Applebloom, and another with Spike and Ember (teenager and straight shota, yeah!)

Why am I cursed with great imagnation but poor motivation?!

>>27105382
How would i write about having sex if I haven't before? All good writers do their research.

>”I’m just guessin’ here, but think about it. She left in charge of Applebloom for the evenin’.”
“For all of half an hour.” You retort.
>”Yeah, but that was almost a day after she after she agreed to it.”
>You slouch back on the bed, thinking about what Mac said.
>”I think that says lots about what she thinks about ya.”
>You stand back up, before rubbing your neck.
“Maybe; for all we know, she hit her head while working on the truck before deciding.” You say jokingly.
>”Do I need to repeat what I just said?”
“I’m fine with you just repeating yourself once, thanks.”
>Both of you stay silent for a second.
“Look, nevermind that, my point is that, personally, I don’t know what to make out of this.”
>Mac keeps quiet, as if saying you to go on.
“I mean, I like spending time with her and stuff and, at the risk of getting punched in the face for saying this, she is pretty, but…”
>You throw your arms to the side in frustration.
“I don’t know. Hell, I don’t care about her being younger than me, but still, I’m kinda pushing it.”
>Mac thinks for a second, before turning his attention back to you.
>”Then why did ya agree to the date?”
>You look down for a second to think.
“I figured it would be something to do. You know, screw around the fair for a while, eat some shitty food, and then drop Applebloom back here. And AJ would probably never shut up about it if I said no.”
>”But it didn’t go as you planned.” Mac adds.
“Well, I didn’t expect AJ to fucking tackle me, for once… You know, thinking about it, I guess what I’m worrying about is the fact that I’m not opposed to the idea of dating a teenager.”

>>27106368
>Mac cocks his head in agreement.
“Eh, maybe I’m just whining—“
>”Voicin’ a concern ain’t whining.”
“Depends on the wording, honestly.”
>Mac shakes his head.
>”Look, you wanna hear my honest opinion?”
>You shrug.
“Go ahead.”
>”I think you’re being too hard on yourself. Don’t ya think Applebloom woulda said somethin’ if she didn’t like the idea?”
“Well, yeah.”
“And… well, simply put, everyone has somethin’ they feel it’s weird. If I’m honest with ya, I believe that a person that doesn’t have and odd quality about them, no matter how small or big, is hiding stuff.”
”What, like that doll you took from Twilight?” You say.
>Mac crosses his arms.
>”We both know she was goin’ to get rid of it.”
>You chuckle.
“You really need to give it back to her, dude.”
>You slouch back again, to think about what Mac said.
>Goddammit, you weren’t exactly planning on getting this philosophical today.
>The last time you gave this much thought to something was when you were choosing which job to take.
>Thought to be fair, picking apples always sounded better than being a sewing assistant.
>Alright, on one hand you’re still not entirely convinced of your own arguments.
>Which honestly, it’s not exactly the biggest of your problems right now.
>On the other hand, you actually do like spending time with Applebloom.
>The smugness can get old pretty quick though.
>Honestly, all you can think about know is that maybe you should give it a shot.
>Hell, it’s how you got in this situation in the first place, maybe it’ll get you out of it.
“Alright, yeah, you got a point.”
>You sit back up.
“I may not be too sure about this, but sitting on my ass moping all day won’t change anything.”

>>27106376
>Mac nods his head agreement.
“Besides, I still owe AB for fixing my car’s engine.”
>”What?” Ask Mac after a couple seconds of pause.
“Long story, I had another car that didn’t work, she managed to fix it by changing something really simple. Lots of smugness and feeling like an idiot involved.”
>You look out the door, towards the staircase.
“I should probably go and see if ‘Bloom’s done talking to AJ. It’s getting kinda late, after all.”
>”Eeyup.” Mac replies.
>”I’ll see you on Monday, big guy.”
>Big Mac waves you off and you walk downstairs.

>>27106381
And I still can't get the formatting right, go me.

Well, that's all I have for tonight. If we're lucky, my updating schedule would get unfucked from today forward.

>>27106308
Welcome to the club. I have a shitload of ideas for games and programs, but I'm too goddamn lazy to actually sit down and learn a programming language.

>>27106344
I honestly just wing it. Just make sure it's anatomically correct, and that it doesn't sound weird when you read it back to yourself.

>>27106344
Google.
If your search history doesn't have you on at least three government watchlists, you aren't properly researching your stories.

>>27106381
He returns. Huzzah!

>>27106411
Learn Python or Go. Not super complex languages, but both have enough power to so what you need.

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>>27105382
FUCKING NORMALFAGS GET THE FUCK OFF OUR BOARD

RRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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>>27106381
Ah, good to hear from you again, m8!

>>27106344
Damn straight, though it has been quite a while, so I supplement my experience with rigorous amounts of research on google.
For science. Yeah.

>>27108315
No anon you are the normie.

>>27108782
About damn time I came back, if I say so myself.

Bumperoo

So most likely Orange and Viral updating tonight?
It would be better if all the writers updated, including Shitcity.

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>>27113061
Shitcity here, thanks for the consideration! I'll try and write tonight now that I'm mostly free of the inner sanctum of my soul screaming and the other things I'm writing.

>>27113061
Don't think I'll have an update tonight, familia. Sorry.
Haven't gotten anything written today and I'm going to try to go to sleep at a more reasonable hour for once tonight.
Will try tomorrow instead.

>>27113857
Will be waiting senpai!

>>27113814
Can't wait to read!

>>27113061
I'll try.
I have an exam tomorrow, but I can always study half an hour before it.

>>27114133
Exam first buddy.
Story later! Exams are more important

>>27114939

>>27114168
Alright, fine.
I don't particularly like the idea of not writing again after just getting back to it, but you're right.

>>27115971

I got bored and threw this together kinda quick.
http://pbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=304456
I'll probably come back to this and edit the hips to be more realistic later.

Anyone got any good.Velvet links?

>>27117647
You drew that?

>>27118033
Edited, I'm nowhere even close to ScorpDK's level.

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>>27113814
GOOD JOB FUCKLER FAGGOT DWAYNE THE HOCKEY PUCK DICK SUCK JOHNSON YOU DID GOOD. I apologize, anons. I let you down. Will try harder tomorrow.

Also, if it would so please, here's the pastebin of my story to add to the list whenever there's time. The title is "Butterfly Effect: (Or a less pretentious title)" http://pastebin.com/9z2nc5kn

>>27117647
Very good

>>27118969

Well good thing Viral and City are going to update today.
right?

Daily Dose of Bumps.

We need our green though.

Last bump from me
I won't be on for awhile to bump!

>>27118297
>Butteryfly Effect

Nigga that's kawaii.

>>27120849
Weeeeeelllll...
Okay, familia~

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>>27120849
i am try

>>27123324
Viral sempai, the world needs you! I need you! Assuming you aren't busy with something important, gorgeous.

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>>27125431
>Implying something could be more important than the high-impact homo love I feel for you
>mfw
Anon, love, don't be silly.

>>27104288
>This place is so cozy!
>The mix of the soft shade and and thin beams of sunlight create a cool and pleasant temperature.
>And it feels so private, like a secret hiding spot just for you.
>You’re Femanon, and you’ve finally arrived at Comet’s private spot for your picnic.
>And you’re not disappointed.
>Not that you ever doubted him, but hearing about it and seeing it with your own eyes are two very different things.
>It’s just like you had imagined in your mind.
>You spin around on your heels, watching the light dance between the leaves, and breathe the air deeply, full of a thick, earthy smell, with a small hint of something sweet, like sap.
>Around you, a choir of rustling leaves in the soft breeze, the quiet waves of the lake and the birds continuous song fills your ears.
>Holding your arms out, gripping the basket in your hand, you can feel your lips part in a wide smile as you keep pirouetting slowly in place.
>You don’t know why, but something about this place just makes you a little giddy; maybe because of how secluded it is, away from everyone else, where you could just be yourself.
>You understand why Comet likes to come here.
>Oh right, Comet!
>You had been so caught up in this place that for a moment, you forgot that you weren’t actually alone.
>As the stallion comes into view, you stop in your tracks, almost tripping over yourself by the sudden stop.
>He’s sitting just past where you had entered through the willow’s branches, silently watching you, his eyes half-lidded and his lips curved slightly upwards in a bemused expression.
>His eyebrows rise slightly as you stop, looking expectantly at you and staying silent.
>You’re suddenly a little self-conscious.

>>27126088

>Nibbling lightly on your lower lip, you lower your head and smile bashfully at him, gripping the handle of the basket in both hands and rocking from side to side on your feet.
>Oh my gosh, Fem, you’re such a dork!
>A hearty chuckle escapes Comet before using his magic to pull a blanket out from his basket and moving closer to you.
>Stepping to the side, you watch as he unfolds the bundle of cloth, checkered in blue and white; he pulls it taut in the air before lowering it to the ground right at the base of the tree trunk.
>You see how his magic ripples across the cloth as he smooths it out.
>Satisfied, he finally steps onto the blanket and sits back down on his haunches. His basket floats down to sit with him, on the opposite side of him from where you were standing. The dark blue aura of his magic finally dies down.
>You’ve silently been bracing yourself, waiting for him to make some sort of comment on your day-dreaming stupor.
>He doesn’t though, he just keeps smiling at you with that expectant look in his eyes.
>Releasing a breath you hadn’t even been aware that you were holding, you push the thoughts away from your mind, intent on burying that embarrassing moment instead of letting it interfere with the picnic.
>With that tiny little boost of confidence, you return his smile before lowering yourself to join him on the blanket, sitting down barely a foot away from him and setting your own basket down on the other side of you.
>Splaying your legs slightly to the side, kinda like those mare models do when they pose, you lean a little closer towards him, resting some of your weight on your arm as you press your palm into the soft fabric.
“This is a really nice spot.”
>You say softly as you peer through the branches and leaves, out over the calm waters of the lake.

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>>27126660
That's sadly all I've got for now, dear Anons.
Really wish I could write longer updates like I used to, but I'm making a lot of this up as I go right now and I don't want to leave the thread to become bump-city for too long.
You'll just have to settle for more frequent updates instead of long ones.

>>27126786
It's ok, we can deal with that.
Now we need the other writers to write.
Not Orange though, he needs to do his exams. We want him to pass...uh whatever he is doing. Is he in college?

>>27126805
College, and it was just one exam.

>>27106308
>Ember and Spike

I would almost write that if I were in the mood. I can see it pan out pretty clearly.

>Ember decides she wants an heir and asks Spike to help
>Awkward impact, sexual loving ensues
>Epilogue is something like a year later Spike being introduced to his kid for the first time

>>27126848
Oh, since you are done, Now would be a good time to write!

Shitcity reporting in. Sorry I've not been posting. I have written a post or two worth, but people keep needing my help with running pathfinder games and it's hard to say no to that. I don't want to just post one and a half parts of green and leave the thread waiting

9th page boop

>>27128202
>>
Bed bump

>>27106381
>You make your way down the stairs and start looking for Applebloom and AJ.
>Then you remembered that the ground floor of this house has like two rooms, and head for the kitchen.
>You enter the room, and see Applebloom sitting in the kitchen counter, chatting with Applejack.
>They both turn their heads around to look at you.
>”Hey, ya need anythin’?” Ask Applejack.
“Nah, I’m just here to say goodbye, finish what you were doing.”
>Applejack nods and turns back to Applebloom.
>She thinks for a second, then shakes her head.
>”Actually, I think that’s all I have to say about that. For all it’s worth, I’m mighty sorry for not realizin’ how obnoxious I was bein’.” She says.
>”Yeah, you kinda were.” AB says.
“Don’t ruin the moment.” You drily add.
>Applebloom looks at you, then turns to Applejack, who’s looking at her with a raised eyebrow.
>”To be fair, I kind get it. I mean, you kinda went overboard with i—“
>You clear your throat, trying to stop her train of thought.
>Applebloom seems to realize what you were implying and start again.
>”You were worried about me; I can’t get mad at ya for that. Too much.” She adds.
>”Heck, I’ll take it.” Applejack says, shrugging.
>Applebloom extends her arms, asking for a hug, which Applejack gives to her.
>After they’re done with their embrace, Applebloom turns to you.
>”So, you ain’t stayin’?” Applebloom asks.
“It’s Monday, ‘Bloom, I got a shitload of stuff to do.”
>She thinks for a moment.
>”Yeeeeeah… I kinda do too, now that I think about it.”
>”Like ya ever did your homework.” Adds Applejack.

>>27128594
>”Just ‘cuz you don’t see me do it doesn’t mean I don’t.” AB says.
>”Yeah, and Cheerilee keeps complainin’ about it just ‘cuz she feels like it.”
>Applebloom looks at you, as if asking for you to help her out.
“You’re on your own on this one, kiddo.”
>Applebloom takes a deep breath and looks at Applejack.
>After a couple seconds, she turns to you.
>”You said somethin’ about you leavin’? Let me accompany you to the front porch.” She says before jumping off the counter.
>She goes out of the kitchen and opens the front door, stepping outside.
>You turn your head towards Applejack, who does the same.
“Hell, she almost had me convinced for a second there.”
>”She’s better than me, at the very least.” Applejack drily says.
>You scoff.
“What, you’re telling me you’re a bad liar? I can barely notice you shifting in place nervously when you do.”
>”Yeah, you keep pushin’ your luck.” Applejack says before slapping you in the shoulder playfully.
>You roll your shoulder, before looking towards where Applebloom went.
“Well, I should probably go back home. I’ll see you tomorrow, then?”
>”If ya wanna get paid, yeah.” She says.
“Hell of an incentive, if you ask me.”
>You attempt to talk out of the kitchen, but Applejack grabs you by the arm.
>You turn around to look at her, half expecting to get socked in the face.
>”Anon, if there’s anythin’ you ever need help with regardin’ Applebloom, you can come ask me, okay?”
“Sure, I’ll remember that when I’m trying to cook something fancy and don’t remember which apples are the expensive ones.”

>>27128597
And that's all for tonight folks, sorry for the short updates lately.

Updated PasteBin:
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>>27129156
Bump

Not page 9

>>27127423
Why not? I post shit as I'm writing it all the time.

>>27130393

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>>27085113
>Eventually Fluttershy steps back from the hug, much to your dismay
>A moment later Gust also leans away, even more to your dismay
>However, she does stop you from standing up, placing her hoof on your head and smoothing out your hair
>You hated it when people did that. It's just going to go back after you fly around for a bit.
>You buzzed your wings to fly, but the left one cramped and you immediately fell on the ground.
>Sighing, you tested out your hooves again
"I guess this is what legs are for."
>Although you hate to admit it, your legs are kinda weak
>Bouncing on the cloud streets is way different than walking on the cloudstone of houses, and it takes a lot out of you trying to control it
>This is what you get for skipping leg day every time in favor of another wing day.
>They warned you about leg day, bro. They told you, dog.
>Gust managed to put a frown on her usually joyful face. "You can't fly?"
"Yeah. Well, I mean, it's just cramping. I can still move fine."
>She nodded. "That'll happen after a big shock. Boy, I'm really glad you're gonna be okay."
>She gave you another short hug, once again completely dulling the pain and placing a big stupid grin on your face
>The previous tension in your muscles started to loosen at the sensation of your fur brushing up against hers
>She picked you up and swung you onto her back, wrapping your forelegs around her neck.
>"C'mon, I'll fly you home. Least I can do."
"O-okay, Miss 'Shy."
>"Bye, Rainbow Dash!" Fluttershy said, "Get lots of rest. You'll be fine!"
>You blink
"Wait, have you been struck by lightning before?"
>She smiled bashfully. "I got scared while mom was teaching me to fly and landed on a storm cloud instead of floating to our yard."
>Gust Tumbler winced. "Y-yeah. That was my fault. I'm sorry again, girl."
>She wrapped an arm around Fluttershy, who happily leaned in
>Looks like you have something in common with her

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Will you be disappointed if I tell you I don't have an update for today, Anon?
Sorry about that, I've been having the strangest sleeping patterns lately and my brain is too full of fuck to even think about writing.
Also, I might be a little busy these coming days. Going to a funeral this Friday and there some things I need to get done before then, so I don't know how much I'll be able to get done until then.
If I get the chance I will try to write something before leaving on Friday, otherwise I'll probably be writing again my Saturday.
Take care, beautiful~

>>27133701
Huzzah, Shitcity delivers!

>>27133756
>>27128628
Dammit, was supposed to include Orange as well, but I derped and jumped the gun.
Good work, the both of you!

>>27133701
>Suddenly, Gust's wings shifted, one side raising and the other lowering
>Your weight shifted towards Fluttershy, nearly falling on top of her
>The sides of your faces end up smooshed together, stopping you from panicking
>Fluttershy blinked, confused, and stepped back enough for you to fall between the two and straight into her chest
>panic
>PANIC
>THEY TOLD YOU, DOG!
>You begin scrambling over the feathers around you, trying to escape without use of your wings
>All the while you breathed in a sweet scent of bananas and a faint trace of sweat
>Gust chuckled, making enough space for you to completely fall between then and then stand back up
>Your face felt as if it were on fire
>Suddenly, you are VERY thankful about being struck by lightning
>The constant twitching that your wing has been doing might cover up how stiff they've gotten
>Fluttershy stared into your eyes with a blank expression, unblinking
"Yeah I think that's about all the milage we're going to get out of this visit BYE FLUTTERSHY!"
>You jump onto Gust's back.
"GO! MUSH!"
>Gust laughed heartily, before blasting off the ground, still chuckling
>You grumbled under your breath. The heat was slowly retreating from your cheeks, but seems to be stuck now
>The cool fall air rushing around you seems to be helping the stiffness in your wings though.
>"You know, I didn't see that coming. You should take her out for dinner first, sheesh."
>You began to mumble nothing in particular louder, your voice cracking occasionally
"Y-you know I didn't...It's not that I..."
>"Such a forward young woman." She chuckles
"...Y-...you too."
>She stopped a moment, looking back to you. "Me? Forward about what?"
>Your heart spiked in embarassment
"Nothing, that's just...what you say..."
>Her chuckle takes a deeper tone. "You're pretty grown up. Even though, you're a small girl."
"Despite myself."
>You cough. What just came over you?

>>27133756
>funeral
Oh shit. I'm sorry Viral sempai. It's alright, you can take time off

>>27133756
You could try Supplements. or not writing so late at night.

>>27133779
"I mean, I just do a lot of training and I don't get much bigger. I guess it's good for my aerodynamics."
>"Mhmm." She coos. You feel the flight start to stiffen. She doesn't make as many little adjustments
>"Don't be in a rush to grow up. I wish I could be your size nowadays."
>You snort.
"Why?"
>"Well, I find ponies like you cute."
>Suddenly she drops a few feet. "Oh jeez, I just said that..."
>A few seconds of silence follow. You want to contemplate what she just said, feeling oddly complemented. But at the same time...
>You're alone, and she's the person who'd know the best other than Fluttershy herself.
>You bury your head into the back of her head, mumbling out the question
"Do you think Fluttershy thinks I'm cute?"
>You can see her grin. "Of course. Like momma, like daughter!"
>She tilts her head to the side. "Y'know. Assuming she's gay."
>You gulped.
"That's a really big assumption, Miss."
>"Only about as big as assuming you are."
>You blinked. Well.
>You suppose she's right in a way, but that's not really the point.
"Wait, you don't even know she's--then why would you tell me to ask her out?!"
>"Well how else am I supposed to figure out?" She rolls her eyes. "It'd be a little suspicious for me to ask my daughter if she wants to do kissing with girls."
>She's got you there, too.
"How am I suppose to confess without even knowing? You know what'll happen if she doesn't like me back?!"
>"Yep."
>
>Well shit. Just drop that on me why don't you.
>She places her weight on one wing, lightly smacking you in the side of the head with the other. In the middle of your amazement, she winks at you.
>"It's scary, but she likes you. It'll work out!"
"You've gotta teach me how to do that!"
>She shrugs. "At least I can't say you have a one track mind. You have at least two!"

>>27134034
>Giving her directions, she eventually floats down to the front of your apartment.
>You climb off grinning.
"Thanks, Miss. Today was pretty fun."
>"I'd say so!" She nuzzles the top of your head in a motherly way. "Come back any time, Dash. I'll train ya on the weekends."
"I can't wait! Today's..."
>"Saturday." She finishes
"So we can start tomorrow?!"
>"Quite antsy, aren't ya? Sure thing. See you then, Dashie." She finishes, drawing out the pet name and winking.
>You can't help but blush as you wave, and she takes off again, shooting into the sky
>She does a small flip while smirking at you, tumbling in the air and gliding off
>You can't help but flap your sore wings in excitement
>Even if it'll be about boring weather stuff, it'll still be training
>And with the promise of seeing more Gust Tumbler and Fluttershy
>You climb up the stairs to your place and walk in
>Your dad turns to you, washing a few dishes in the sink next to the window.
>"Hey, squirt. Who's that?"
"It's Fluttershy's mom, Gust Tumbler. She gave me a ride back! She's really nice."
>"I see!" He placed a plate on the table, and then a bowl of good ol' spaghetti.
>"But I thought you would want to fly there and back on your own. You're always exercising your wings."
>A bead of sweat drops from your forehead.
"Y-yeah, just felt a little tired."
>He leaned to the side, looking at your twitching wing."Is something wrong?"
>You sigh.
"Okay, I might have accidentally soaked the ground into a stormcloud, and then stamped it wrong and got a shock."
>"What?!" He nearly yelled. "Why would you do that? I've always told you to be careful with stormclouds."
>You shrunk a little under his gaze.
"W-well, Fluttershy has a very nice house, and it'd look ugly if there was just one patch..."
>He sighed. "We're gonna need to get you a weather tutor."
"Don't worry! Miss 'Shy said she'd teach me. She's on the Cloudsdale weather team!"

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>>27134376
>A smile returned to his features. "Oh really? And you'd do that?"
"Of course! She's super cool."
>He laughed and placed a plate next to you. "Alright then. When do you start?"
"Tomorrow!"
>"Hm. Alright then. I'll be quizzing you when you get home though, so don't slack off."
>You managed to lose a small portion of your enthusiasm at the mention of quizzes.
>After dinner finishes and the night goes on, you retire to bed
>Laying down and pulling the covers over your shivering body
>As you snuggle down, your mind flashes back to earlier in the day
>Your heart leaps as the images and sensations of being pressed against Fluttershy returns to your memory
>As your wings stiffen, you convince yourself that your pressing your face into the pillow from the cold rather than any namby pamby extreme desire to be pressed to Fluttershy's chest once again.
>The sensation of Gust's fathers stroking your back as you breathe in Fluttershy's scent is something you can't get out of your head
>You shudder at the thought
>As you lie there intoxicated by your own fantasies, you think to yourself
>Okay, Gust was right
>You REALLY need to ask Fluttershy out

All I got for now. Hopefully it was good. This is the closest I've gotten to lewd writing in 5 years

>>27133779
Thank you, senpai. I'm okay, but I have to be there for my dad, since it was someone very dear to him.

>>27133866
Regular sleeping schedules are for normies!
Seriously though, I'm just way too much of an night owl to go to bed early.
Curse your truth-filled dubs! I wanna stay up late and write lewd stories about cute ponies for the boners of strangers on the internet!

>>27134426
Really cute story, Shitcity. Looking forward to more!
Wonder how lewd you'll get, will it just be Dash and Shy, or will Gust join in on the fun?

>>27133768
>>27134504
Damn, that sucks.
Sorry to hear that, mate.

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>>27134504
Thank you for reading. I hope everything works out for you and your dad

boop

Colt Quest is running tonight:

>>27135582

>>27134426
Gust is a fuckin 10/10 mom. Good shit, FlutterDash too cute.

Remember to keep thread alive

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>>27136246
Thank you, Anon!

Also bump

>>27128597
>”Anon, I’m bein’ serious here.”
”Yeah, sorry. Just thought I’d lighten the mood a little.”
>She lets go of your arm and crosses hers.
>”Does that ever work out for ya?”
“On people with a sense of humor, yeah.”
>Applejack looks at you with an unamused expression.
>Obviously, she appreciated the jokes.
“Jack, I think I can manage by myself just fine.”
>”Yeah, but what if ya need to know about allergies, or stuff, Applebloom may not remember, or thi—“
>You grab her by the shoulders, which makes her look at you.
“Jack, you’re doing it again.”
>You let go of her, and she readjusts her hat.
>”Sorry, old habits die hard, you know.”
“Besides, we already spend an entire hour on this; I don’t want to do this again.”
>Applejack shakes her head.
>”And people tell me I’m the brutally honest one.”
“Look, hearing your brother say more than one sentence was already enough, but him giving me a lecture was something I really wasn’t prepared to.”
>”We all had stuff like that happen to us today, ya know.”
>It’s now your turn to make an annoyed expression.
“No, Jack, I didn’t know, I was only the one who told ‘Bloom to talk to you about it, I had no fucking clue.”
>Applejack cocks her head to the side.
>”Alright, keep your horses in their stables, jeez.”
“Hey, ask a stupid question.”
>You hear Applebloom sneeze from behind the door, and turn your head towards it.

>>27138241
“She’s probably not coming back in until I go out there.”
>”Yeah, I know.”
“I better get out there before she catches a cold. I’ll see you tomorrow, then?”
>Applejack thinks for a second, before looking back to you.
>”Nah, you know what? I think you should take the day off tomorrow. Think of it as a thanks for putting up with my crap.”
>You look at Applejack for a second, worryingly.
“Okay, now I know you hit your head while trying to get the truck fixed.”
>”I can always make you come to work, if ya want.”
“No, no, it’s fine, I’ll take it.” You say before turning around.
>You walk a few steps towards the door, then stop.
>You turn your head towards Applejack, who’s looking at you puzzledly.
“By the way, this may come off as kind of odd, but… thanks for being so understanding towards ‘Bloom.”
>Applejack looks down for a second, then nods.
>”Thanks, Anon. I appreciate you sayin’ that.”
>You thought about making a joke about expecting to get shot, but you ruined the mood twice already today.
>You step outside, closing the door behind you.
>Applebloom, who’s sitting on the porch’s stairs, turn around to see you.
>After dusting off the back of her pants, she walks to where you’re standing.
>She stares at you for a second, before blushing and rubbing the back of her neck.
>”…Hell of a day, huh?” She says, trying to start a conversation.

>>27138245
And that's all I have for now, folks.

I was going to write more, but I started really fucking late tonight, and it's already four in the morning here.

>>27138603

we definitely need green today

WHY ARE WE ON PAGE 10!?

>>27138245
Where's my kissu? I want more Appleboom spaghetti

>>27140728
Yeah, I was getting to that.

Hopefully updates tonight from our great writers!

Page 9 go away

In the twilight of the writefags, we will persist

>>27143271

So no green tonight?

There has been a distinct lack of YEEPZ over the last couple of days

>>27145530
There's a reason why, I've just been trying to figure out how to break the news.

Basically, I've burnt out on writefagging, and I've decided to quit. Not just in this thread, but as a whole. I'm sorry for the Anons who were reading my stories, but I just have no drive to write. That and I don't quite know where I want to take either of my stories.

However, for you lot that want some closure to MAKidAnon:

>Anon takes his filly friend out to the movies, nothing really happens between them
>Celestia trains Anon to fight her, which includes toughening his body through magic, increasing his stamina through sprints with the royal guard, and boxing matches with the head trainer
>He eventually gets good enough to beat his mother
>However, when he goes to fight Celestia, he finds himself woefully lacking in terms of fighting technique
>He continues to bang Flutts tho, with their third session including choking
>Afterwards, he feels guilty about the whole ordeal, and Fluttershy manages to reassure him
>He also manages to score Flutts a trainer, which raises Celestia's suspicions
>Twi's detox period eventually ends, and she becomes a much more pleasant person
>In fact she becomes so pleasant, that when Flutts goes to confront her to test out her own assertiveness, Twi apologizes for all the shit she's put Flutts through
>Anon and Flutts continue their sessions, until Celestia destroys Flutt's cabin, and catches them in the act
>She goes to fire a massive energy beam at 'Shy, but Anon deflects it with his hardened body
>He fights the god-princess in rage, and eventually manages to gain the upper hand
>Right as he goes to finish her off tho, he claims she was holding back (which she was), and lets her go

The story was kind of gonna end there.

Viral, Orange, Cosmic, whoever, shoot me an email so I can give you the deets on the Pastebin: YeepzMcYeepz @gmail.com.

It's been fun guys, I'll see you around. I'm sorry for being such a faggot.

>>27145836
Welp, Yeepz writes no more.
Sad really.

There is gonna be no green tonight, is there?

>>27133756
>scootadash
yes please

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>>27145836
Fuck. I'm sorry you feel that way. Thank you, again, for helping me so much. You helped me a smidge more than I'd like to admit; writing my first novel length story that wasn't trash was in large part due to you encouraging me. I hope you find some fun in something else. Gonna keep drawing shit?

Feel like a bit of a cock not actually owning up to writing here until now. Missed out.

>>27146202
I'm running a pathfinder game right now (on break). When I finish I'll try and write, but I might take a bit. Tired

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>>27145836
Well, balls.
We're gonna miss you, pal. I appreciate all the help you gave me when I couldn't come up with anything. Good luck on any of your future endeavors.

And hey, if you ever want to drop by and shitpost for a while, there ain't anyone stopping you.

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>>27145836
Just fuck my feels up.

Okay, turns out I actually had two exams this week, so my schedule's even more fucked than usual.

That has nothing to do with me not updating tonight, that was because I was a lazy fuck and I started writing at three in the morning.

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>>27145836
Ugh, sorry to see you go man.
Live long...and prosper my dear writefag.

Viral will pull through for us, with either frequent updates or long ones.
We believe in him!

>>27145836
Suck's to see you go, maybe one day you'll feel it again.

>>27150133

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Hey guys, sorry for the silence, like I said I had things to take of so I haven't been home.
I also have to get up early tomorrow to get ready for the funeral so I won't be writing anything tonight sadly.
Will have to wait until Saturday before I can start writing again.

>>27145836
Aw man, what sad news to return to the thread for.
I'm really sorry to hear that you're quitting writing, but if you don't feel like it's something you want to do anymore then you shouldn't force yourself to do it if it isn't fun anymore.
I hope you'll still be with us in the thread at least, you've been a strong supporting force in here as well as a creative one and I'd love to still hear from you from time to time, senpai.
Maybe someday you'll get the fire back; but even if you don't, then thank you.
Love ya~ 200% homo!

>>27152157

>>27151698
Thanks for the kind words man. I might stick around to help you lot if you ever get stuck with your stories. Plus, Pastebin and whatnot, if no one else wants to take over for me.

>>27146714
Ey, no prob. Glad I could encourage and help another writefag along. Glad you're finding your footing with long stories.

Although just so we're clear, because I think you've got me mistaken somewhat, I do draw, but I didn't draw that picture. JargonScott did. Really nice guy. Pony Emporium is his blog's name. This is a totally shameless plug I will still work on my own art skills though, just in a different area, most likely.

>>27147025
Any time man. In case you ever need any more help, just ask, and I'll see what I can do. This goes for anyone else really.

>>27146202
>>27147829
>>27147942
>>27149251
Thanks for the support Anons. I write mainly for you all in the first place, so it's great knowing people actually read my stuff.

Again, sorry for being such a faggot, back to lurking I go.

nothing yet

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>>27153583
Ah, shit. I just remembered you saying that you wanted to draw the OP to a sharing the minds thread and that you posted that. Might have gotten those flipped up turned upside down in the timeline in my head.

Good luck in your future endeavors, whatever they may be, and in shitposting. We'll be glad to have you, nameless or not. I will never forgive naming the OP filename "picture for pinkie thread" though. Petty, meaningless grudges are the best kind!

For the rest of the thread, will write today. Have a lot on my plate, but I'll make time.

We really need to do something about lack of writers and green.
We have 3 yet not all are able to update.
I suggest we try our hand at making green using Our ideas or ideas from the list.
Or do we have a "Life" to live?

>>27154785
I'm pulling through my school work so I don't fail. So make it 4 writers

>>27155131
Hope it goes well for ya m8

>maybe if i bump using greentext it'll look like someone wrote today

>>27154785
>>27156049
Stay strong for us, my loves.
Just help keep the thread alive and I promise I will dedicate both Saturday and Sunday to writing green.

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>>27156088
Sadly, I'm having some trouble coming up with decent dialogue, so I'm not updating tonight either.
Sorry folks.

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FUCK ME

Okay I didn't get enough to post tonight. I'm sorry. Have a picture a nice person made of Gust Tumbler to sate your apatite.

They say if you bump this thread, you can hear echo's because of how empty it is!
For now

>>27157427

I BELIEVE

>>27161468
BELIEVE HARDER, DAMMIT

>page 10

Alright, I'm going to update tonight even if it's just five paragraphs, this is getting ridiculous.

>>27138245
“Yeah, no fucking kidding. Really wishing your sister still made hard cider, I could use one right about now.”
>Applebloom grimaces.
>”Yeah, after that thing with the cows, I don’t think we’ll ever get near the stuff again.”
>…What?
“Okay, I’m assuming several things right now, most of which I’m hoping are wrong.”
>”Long story short, some of our cousins tried makin’ an impromptu bull rodeo. Thing is, the cows were outside, it was spring, and… yeah, you can see where I’m goin’ with this.”
>You close your eyes and try to get the mental image out of your head.
“Well, your family certainly knows how to party, at the very least.”
>”Eh, I prefer more relaxin’ stuff, to be honest with ya.”
“What, like we did today?” You say as a joke.
>”Yeah, exactly!” Applebloom responds, without a single hint of sarcasm.
>Both of you have very different definitions of “Relaxing”.
>”It was nice to do somethin’ without havin’ someone ridin’ my ass.”
>Your advanced sense of humor almost betrays you, but you manage to not laugh to Applebloom’s analogy.
“What, your sister has you running around doing my job when I’m not around?”
>”No, it’s just that… I mean, I’m not always helpin’ around here, since, you know, ripped as I am I can’t really carry heavy stuff around—“
“Sure you are, Arnold.”
>Applebloom gives you an annoyed look, but resumes what she was saying.
>”But if it gets to the point where I have to put some muscle into it, we’re usually either way behind schedule, or somethin’ broke.”
“I don’t get how that has anything to do with anything, though.”
>”Thing is, I like helpin’ them around, but if it isn’t chores, I have to be runnin’ around this entire place, and it ain’t called Sweet Apple ACRES for nothin’.”
“So what you’re getting at is: Not having someone hurrying you up was a nice change of pace.”

>>27164671

>”Yeah, exactly. And how could I not have fun while ridin’ around in that car? Watchin’ them is one thing, but I never thought I’d get inside one.”
“That’s because you weren’t driving the damn thing. After the third almost spin out I was getting white knuckles from holding the steering wheel in place.”
>”Oh, come on, you can’t say it wasn’t at least a little bit of fun for you too.” She says, elbowing you.
“Never said it wasn’t, but I wouldn’t exactly classify it as ‘Relaxing’.”
>”Alright, fine, maybe it wasn’t but it was fun, and that’s all that matters, isn’t it?”
“Even your short-lived dip in the lake?”
>Applebloom shivers.
>”Besides that.”
>Don’t mention her swimsuit and the fact that she was sitting on your lap.
>I said don’t fucking mention it.
“Well, anyhow, I wouldn’t leave your sister hangin’.” You say, trying to distract yourself.
>“Why? I mean, it ain’t like she doesn’t know where I am.” She asks.
“Because she’ll make you wear five jackets for standing in the cold for so long.”
>Applebloom looks at you for a few seconds, then turns around.
>”Darn it, you’re right.”
“’Bloom, I’m just fucking with you, we just had a half an hour long talk about this.”
>”I mean, she could had hit her head while workin’ on Betsy.”
>You open your mouth to retort, but pause for a second due to the fact that you weren’t the only one who thought of that.
>Strange minds think alike, you suppose.

>>27164678
And that's all I have for now, folks.

I'll try to actually finish this chapter and get started on the Epilogue this weekend, because holy shit, we're 53 pages in and I'm barely past the middlepoint, even the Snowdrop one wasn't this long.

Pastebin update:
http://pastebin.com/m2FUgh9c

>>27156338
Nice pic mang

>>27164702
>get started on the Epilogue
>I'm barely past the midpoint

I'm confused.

>>27164779
Yeah, reading that again, it doesn't make sense.

>>27164678
Thanks for what green you have

>>27160357
I wanna boop them all

Page 9 =/= okay

>>27165859
Is there green of this?

>>27167372
There is a comic of it.
It's by Anibaruthecat.
I think I spelled the name right.

Try searching e-hentai or maybe derpibooru.

>>27167372
Harsh Lovin', it's a comic.

>>27167429
>>27168071
Thank you, anons.

Remember, keep thread alive! Viral said he would write today and tomorrow!
BEST SENPAI

>>27168640
That's right, Anon! I just need to grab something to eat and write a bit more, then I'll have something to post later.
Don't know how long it'll be, but I'm still going to write more tomorrow as well, like I promised.

Also, and you guys will probably laugh or cringe or both, but do any of you remember that one joke fake-out green I did a while back?
The one that was a sorta-sequel to Kid Anon at the Spa, but Anon ended up with Bulk instead? (Though it ended before anything happened)
Well, for fun and to cheer myself up after a very depressing Friday, I've actually been writing an actual continuation of that madness.
Don't know if anyone would ever want to read something like that, I'm mostly just writing it to humor myself, but its happening.
I might at least post the pastebin once its done if someone would be brave--or foolish--enough to read it.

>>27168986
Nothing ventured, nothing gained friend.
Most likely, someone will read it.

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YOU THOUGHT IT WAS VIRAL, BUT IT WAS ME, SHITCITY!

>>27134426
>The new day has come.
>And so have you
>Going through your normal morning stretches, you can't help but be keenly aware of your every movement
>You stretch enough to place your chin against your knee, laying it there for a few moments, listening to the gently swaying wind outside your window
>You lift yourself up on your forelegs and extend your wings, slowly taking the weight off them and floating in place
>You're a lot calmer than you were last night, but you're still excited for the rest of the day
>After a few more stretches, you're done, and you've worked up a light sweat. You make your way to the shower
>As you're checking to make sure there's a towel, you catch sight of yourself in the mirror.
>Taking a few different angles, and comparing yourself to the surroundings, you feel like you've nearly grown an inch
>Making sure the door is locked, you step your forelegs on the counter
>A moment of preparation, and you place your legs together, puffing out your chest.
>Slightly disappointed, you find it's not quite as enticing as Fluttershy's.
>You'd still do you, though.
>You stretch out your body sideways, only to frown once more
>You still feel like a bit of a runt, compared to your equals in age.
>As much as you enjoy the aerodynamics aspect, it's a little embarrassing to imagine you trying to hold Fluttershy like a woman when you're a smidge above half her height
>You sigh heavily and stretch out your wings, which had grown fairly well.
>At least you always got these babies.
>You're so worth it.
>A quick shower later, you dry yourself off
>This would be the time you put perfume or something on, right?
>Dad did buy you some a long time ago, 'just in case'.
>Or is that something only girly girls do? Are you like a guy in this equation?
>No one taught you how to be gay.
>This is bullshit.

>>27170163
>No one taught you to be gay
kek

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>>27170163
Then who was phone!?

>No one taught you how to be gay.
>This is bullshit.
This is so fucking great, I can't even describe it.

>>27170163
>You elect to just follow your normal routine, and fly out the door
>You screech to a halt, and open it again, peeking your head back to the main room
"Bye, dad!"
>"Always in a rush..." He sighs, waving you off.
>Zipping across the cloudy roofs of the buildings, you eventually make it to the nicer neighborhood
>There's a nip in the wind today. You're almost shivering by the time you touch down
>Your fur coat has turned entirely puffy due to your goosebumps.
>A few stray snowflakes pass by you as you knock on the door. The cold always comes quicker, up in the sky.
>Almost immediately, Fluttershy opens it with a grin. "Hello, Rainbow Dash! I'm so glad you could make it!"
>You instinctively lean forward, closing a scant few inches of distance between your faces
"Heya! How've you been?"
>"G-good, Rainbow." She stutters, leaning back. "And you?"
"Well uh, that's the thing. You see, I have something to...Ah, we'll get back to it."
>You wave your arm dismissively, chuckling. A bead of sweat forms on your brow
>She tilts her head, her expression softening
>Interest, but no need to rush you.
>She steps aside, letting you in.
>You almost feel good about wimping out, just to spend time watching that.
>After a moment you jolt, stepping inside before you spend too long just staring at her
>The door closes, revealing the most disappointed motherly face you've ever seen behind.
"Hey-heeey, Miss 'Shy!"
>"Hey, kid." She managed to smirk, ruffling your hair. "Here for some tutoring?"
"You bet!"
>A bit happy to change the subject, you shivered. Kind of lame that you forgot to bring a scarf or anything.
>"Oh, Rainbow Dash!" Fluttershy trotted to your side. "You're not cold, are you?"
"Yeah, a little, but it won't be too bad. Working warms you up."
>She looked to the ground. "...Well, you could borrow my scarf. If that's alright..."

>>27170262
>>27170319
Thank you!

>>27170335
"That's oka--"
>"OF COURSE SHE WOULD!" Gust Tumbler interrupted, grinning and pushing the both of you to the stairs.
"What are you doing?!"
>You hissed to her, as Fluttershy stumbled up the steps.
>She leaned closer and whispered. "It's romantic! You read about it all the time in novels!"
"I don't read!"
>"Shush!"
>You took wing up the stairs, reaching the top at the same time as Fluttershy.
>Walking into the room, she opens her dresser
>You peer in from behind
>Scarfs of various colors
>And, under them...
>You see a pair of long socks
>Your eyes widen.
>Where the heck did she get those?
>You can't imagine her going into a shop and asking for them.
>A moment later, you see her jolt and throw some other clothes over them
>She starts to turn to you, and you immediately redirect yourself to looking at her line of stuffed animals
>You raise an eyebrow, feeling her embarassed gaze hit you
>But your attention is immediately grabbed by another question.
>What do people even do with stuffed animals?
>Just stare at them?
>You almost jump as a long scarf is wrapped around your neck.
>Looking down, it's a shade of orange with white stripes
>You place a hoof to it and rub it against your cheek, bringing a smile to your face
"Wow, this is comfy."
>She grins proudly. "It's one of my favorites!"
"Oh, uh, you sure? I don't want to get it all sweaty or anything."
>"T-that's fine, Rainbow. I won't have any problem wearing it after that."
>
"...What?"
>You hear a small squee from behind the corner out of the room.

>Hoping Shitcity is finished for the night and that I'm not stepping in on his airtime

>>27126660
>”It is, isn’t it?”
>He watches the waters with you for a moment before continuing.
>”I’ve sometimes thought about inviting a group of friends here, maybe have a party or something like that, but… I dunno… If I did, everypony would eventually find out about this place and I just… like the idea of keeping this place to myself, you know?”
“What about me then?”
>Turning back to you, he meets your eyes and winks, a smirk on his lips.
>”Well, your charms won me over.”
>You return his smirk, but you can feel a tiny hint of blush returning to your cheeks.
“So I’m the only one who knows about your secret spot?”
>With a quizzical arch of his eyebrow he looks at you thoughtfully.
>”You’re not planning on snitching on me, right?”
>Tapping a finger against your chin and giving a slow roll of your eyes, your pretend to think it over.
“I don’t know… You think I can charge ponies for an entrance fee?”
>He pulls back and presses a hoof against his chest.
>”You cold-hearted vixen! You were never interested in me, you just wanted my lake, didn’t you?”
>His mock shock is so thick with melodrama you could almost scrape it off and spread it on toast.
“Oh yes, a girl has to make money somehow.”
>The smirk returns to his lips, but a lot more smug.
>”Is that so? Then I suppose you have the thousands of bits you’d have to spend to buy the land, since it’s owned by the town, and the work to restore the path so ponies will be able to find it. Not to mention having the grass mowed.”
>Once more, you pretend to be in deep thought for a moment before meeting his eyes again, giving him you best puppy-dog-eyes.
“You wouldn’t happen to have a few thousand bits I could borrow?”

>>27171080

>You bat your eyelashes and do a little pout, a technique you had perfected years ago for those times you needed ice cream, as everyone does from time to time; Bon Bon and Lyra could almost never resist.
>For a split-second, he looks almost pained, and he made this strange sound, like a “hnnnng” as he clutched his chest again.
>You’ve seen other ponies react like this when you used your secret weapon.
>Perhaps it’s more powerful than you thought.
>Quickly though, he shakes the effect off and grins at you.
>”Nice try, little lady. You’re cute, but you’re not that cute.”
“Aww, shucks…”
>A hearty chuckle escapes him; you try to keep up your mask of disappointment, but you fail and let out a tiny giggle.
>”It’s just as well. After all, why would ponies pay to swim in a lake if there are plenty of free ones to choose from?”
“I guess you’re right. Oh well.”
>You say with a sigh before smiling at Comet, which he returns, radiating that welcoming warmth of his.
>”Speaking of swimming, would you like to go for a swim now? Or do you wanna eat first?”
>Glancing down at yourself, you can still see some sweat clinging to your skin.
>Now you kinda regret sitting this close to him.
>Oh Celestia, please don’t let him smell you.
----------------------
>Be Comet Tail.
>Something smells really pleasant.
----------------------
>Right back to Fem.
>Yeah, you really need to take a dip to get cleaned up.
>Smiling sheepishly, you turn your attention back to Comet.
“I think I’d like to go for a swim first. I, um… I got a little sweaty running to the park,” you run a finger down your chest to illustrate, stopping just between your breasts, “and I would like to get washed up as we swim.”
>He stares unblinkingly at your sweaty chest, making you feel very self-conscious about yourself, making you lower your eyes towards the blanket under you instead, suddenly finding the checkered pattern very interesting.

>>27171149
Oh yes!
Viral is going to with the suggestions! Unf!
Yes?

Twilight is between 16-22 it seems
http://i.4cdn.org/mlp/1461457186493.png
Big Jim Tweet.

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>>27171177
I might be~

>>27171288
How the hell can he be as old as Twilight when she had to have been about 10 years old (give or take) when he was born?
Twilight even refers to him as a baby.

>>27171315
She may of been younger. A smart 5-6 year old when she went into the school
So she is a teen. That Anons have been wanting to tap, or a young adult. I mean, that would explain EQ Girls movie. She's a teen human in it

>>27171346
Still, she would be older than Spike.
I always kinda assumed that he was as old as the CMC at most, he just seemed older because he grew up with such a studious and smart pony.

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>>27171080
Nah you're not stepping on my toes at all. Good updates!

>“You wouldn’t happen to have a few thousand bits I could borrow?”
>He stares unblinkingly at your sweaty chest
keks, but also arousal. You do this well!

>>27171369
True, though if she is just a smart teen....Maybe she has not done research on adult fun?

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>>27171290
Viral? ARE YOU STILL ALIVE?
It's been awhile

>>27171373
kek, if Fem wasn't so naive and used her boobs, Comet might have actually given her the money.

>>27171149

>Ugh, he must thinks you’re so disgusting.

>You are Comet Tail.
>For real this time.
>Can’t brain. Glistening teats.
>Nonono, bad brain, Comet think now.
>Whoa… Were you gawking again? Please don’t say you were gawking again.
>You lift your eyes from your tantalizing view to look at Fem’s face.
>She is staring holes into the blanket, her cheeks colored a deep pink.
>Yeah, you were gawking.
>Dammit!
>Activate damage control. Just play it off.
>Clearing your throat, you try to give your most winning smile.
>Probably looking like a doofus.
“Y-yeah, I actually got a bit sweaty getting to the park as well. A swim sounds great.”
>Please work please work please work.
>She slowly lifts her face...
>Good… Good…
>She’s looking you in the eyes…
>Come oooon…
>A smile returns to her lips.
>Yes!
>You give yourself a mental hoof-bump.

>>27171701
Yeah, but I think I'll have to call it a night now.
Will keep writing tomorrow, as promised.
Also, pastebin updated:
>http://pastebin.com/ktSs353f
Good night, beautiful~

Colt Quest got a new thread tonight. Let's hope this one lasts:
>>27171621

>>27171813
Yes! We can wait!

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boop pone snoot

bumperoo

>>27173471

Alright, quick questions to the two people who read my story:

I've been getting the feeling that the dialogue isn't quite... I dunno, let's say "up to par", I feel like instead of feeling like an actual conversation, it's just there to move the story forward. I mean, that is the purpose of dialogue, but it feels mechanical, like an actor reading his lines. Impossible as that may be, considering it's text

I dunno, am I just worrying too much about it?

>>27174881
There is more than 2 people reading. It doesn't feel like it to me

>>27174881
I know the feel, I always second-guess the dialogue I write, wondering if anyone would talk like that.

The characters in your story have just had a serious talk between each other, peppered with some snarkiness, so it's understandable if it feels like it's more to move the plot forward.
I think it felt real enough without going overboard into "too real". A conversation like that would probably go back and forth and go on for a long time in real life, and that would just be tiring to read after a while, so it helps to have at least a little bit scripted; it's just about finding a balance between "scripted" and "realistic", and I thought you did it well enough.

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>>27174881
>>27176053
What Viral said. The point of serious talks is to move your life forward; and in a story like this, their lives are the plot. It would drag on longer in real life, but as far as your writing, it seems good.

http://pastebin.com/9M4FmR4h

>Okay, sure, you've had some bad ideas before
>In fact, you've had some *really* bad ideas
>But this... actually might not be one of them
>Once you give Twilight permission to "instruct" Applebloom in proper dating etiquette (yes, the irony is not lost on you), she immediately sets to transforming your kitchen into a mock restaurant
>"Perfect for your first dinner date!"
>She sits across from Applebloom at your table, with menus scribbled on looseleaf paper out in front of them
>In place of actual meals, they've both got plates full of snacks, and the ambiance is provided by a couple candles you keep in case of emergencies
>Applebloom seems confused by the whole ordeal, but...
>Well, it's hard to tell with her, but she seems a lot happier
>Twilight, on the other hand, is bouncing with excitement over the opportunity to share her dating knowledge
>Again, the irony is not lost
>You're pretty sure Twilight's never even held hands with anyone, let alone gone on an actual date
>"Anon! Quit brooding!"
>The sound of Twilight's voice snaps you out of your musings
>"We need you to play the waiter!"
"The waiter? You've already got food."
>"Yeah, but this is important! The waiter is a critical role! See?"
>She points to a page in her book, showing a diagram of a guy in a chef's hat talking to a cartoon little girl
"Um... alright?"
>You step away from Sweetie, heading over to the table
"So, um... can I take your order?"
>"I'll take the chicken tendies, and my date here will also have the chicken tendies."
"Um... okay."
>"Alright, thanks!"
"Wait, that's it? Are you serious?"
>"Yep! You did great, too!"
"You... but... that was completely pointless!"
>"It was not! You had to set the scene!"

>>27178760
"Twilight... I swear to God..."
>"Just trust me, Anon! Now, Applebloom..."
>She leans her head on her hands, staring at the younger girl
>"Yes?"
>"Tell me about yourself."
>Twilight flutters her eyelids at Applebloom, making her blush
>"I, um... I like apples?"
>That's about the most succinct description of an Apple Family member you've ever heard
>"That's wonderful! And you should practice calling me Rarity, okay?"
>"Alright."
>Twilight opens her mouth to speak, then gets that absolutely-terrifying "I had a new, even worse idea" look on her face
>"Wait! I need to get properly into character first! Anon, do you have a purple wig?"
"Um... no?"
>"Do you have anything purple?"
"Like a t-shirt, maybe, but--"
>"Perfect!"
>Without waiting for your permission, Twilight runs into the back room and returns with your purple They Might Be Giants shirt
>She wraps it around her head, and tries to get one end to curl similar to Rarity's hairdo
>It... doesn't work in the slightest
>You didn't think you'd ever say this, but Twilight looks even more ridiculous than you expected
>"Alright, darling. Tell me all about yourself, darling!"
>"I, um... like what should I say? Most about me is kinda boring."
>"Just tell me, darling, what you like to do, darling! And I sure hope it's dresses, darling, because 90% of my life revolves solely around making dresses."
>You get the vague impression Twilight is working through some issues here, but you keep your mouth shut
>Next to you, Sweetie Belle has her hands clamped over her mouth, trying to resist laughing at Twilight's Rarity impression
>You have to hand it to your spergy friend, her Rarity voice is actually pretty spot-on

>>27178825
>"I, um... I don't really like dresses a lot."
>"YOU DON'T, DARLING?"
>Twilight brushes her hand over her face, acting as if she were about to faint
>"I simply cannot even!"
>Sweetie Belle can no longer contain herself
>She doubles over, spitting all over your leg as she laughs like a maniac
>You roll your eyes
>Unfortunately, her outburst has just encouraged Twilight
>"You simply must like dresses!"
>"Oh. Okay."
>"No! Don't say that!"
>"Sorry, Rarity."
>"No, I'm speaking as Twilight now!"
>"Sorry Twilight."
>"You have to stand out! See, it says it right here!"
>She points to yet another diagram in the figure, showing a little girl cartoon talking to a woman twice her size
>"Rarity will want to see the real you! You have to talk to her about your true self!"
>"Applejack usually spanks me when I talk about things that aren't apples..."
>For a moment, even Twilight is thrown off guard
>But goddamn, does she have some impressive recovery time
>"Well, Applejack isn't here! So...?"
>"I, well, um..."
>Applebloom begins to squirm in her seat, casting nervous glances at the windows as if expecting to find her sister staring through them
>"I always k-kinda thought Chemistry was really cool..."
>You swear Twilight just came in her pants
>"Me too!"
>All pretense of being Rarity is immediately lost
>"It's my favorite subject! Have you heard about the ORNL laboratories developing methods for extracting uranium from seawater? This could meet nuclear power demands for millennia!"
>She leans across the table, beaming at Applebloom

>>27178971
>"I, um... not really. If Applejack catches me reading about chemistry, she spanks me."
>"Oh..."
>"She says that it's just one step away from witchcraft, believing in evolution, and voting Democrat."
>"Well... she's not here! You should come read with me!"
>"But aren't we supposed to be practicing?"
>"Eh, you get the basics. This is way more fun!"
>She grabs Applebloom by the hand, and pulls her into the living room
>Sweetie Belle finally straightens back out, tears streaming down her face
"You alright?"
>"That was... the single funniest... oh my God. I wish I'd recorded that."
>She wipes her face, leaning against you
>You wrap around arms her shoulders, giving her a gentle squeeze
>"Told you this was a good idea."
"Yeah... you were right."
>"I've never seen Applebloom that happy."
"You can tell?"
>She nods
>"It's not easy. But she's having a great time."
"Thank Christ. She deserves it. Poor kid."
>"Yeah..."
>You and Sweetie follow the other two into the living room, where Twilight is already cozied up with Applebloom on the couch, holding her tablet between them
>"See! Ocean water has a naturally high level of uranium, so if they can find a stratifying material..."
>Now that you look more closely, you can see exactly what Sweetie is talking about
>She's not smiling, but Applebloom is definitely way happier
>She curls up against Twilight, resting her head on the older girl's shoulder as they scroll through various chemistry articles
>Sweetie pokes you in the stomach
>"Think we should give them some alone time?"

>>27179118

>You lead Sweetie Belle back into your room, collapsing with her onto your bed
>She lays her head on your chest, sighing
>"We did something good today, didn't we?"
"I really think we did. Somehow that unmitigated disaster turned out okay."
>"Yeah... and speaking of unmitigated disasters..."
>Sweetie begins to worm out of her t-shirt, revealing a flat training bra over her stubby breasts
>She winks at you as she hooks her thumbs in the waistband of her shorts, tugging them down
>"Where's that giant dildo?"
"Are you serious?"
>"Yeah! I mean... you didn't throw it away, right?"
"No. But... are you sure? It's like the size of your arm."
>"If Scootaloo can handle it, so can I!"
"See, you say that..."
>"Come on, just lemme try! I'll let you watch~"
"That's like offering to let me watch a train wreck. But alright..."
>You roll off the bed and root through your closet, finding the giant horse schlong
>Christ, it's like gets bigger every time you see it
>Sweetie's eyes go wide, and you're pretty sure she just had a similar thought
"You still wanna try this?"
>She licks her lips, nodding
>"I can do it. Just... gimme some space."
>You sit on the edge of the bed, while Sweetie takes the middle portion, holding the dildo in her lap
>"Alright. Alright. Here goes nothing..."
>She unclasps her bra, letting it fall away and revealing her perky, developing breasts
>Your signature has all but faded from them now
>She catches you staring, and winks

>>27178261
>>27176053
>>27175859
Well, that's good to know. Appreciate the help.