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Slave Pony Auction

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>So what is this thread about?
Pretty much this thread is about anon owning a pony as a slave. He can do whatever he wishes, be it nice and not abusing or the complete opposite.

If you're going to be writing some green, please name yourself. It will be easier to keep track of your story.

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction

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First for human slave
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Second
Now where are my stories
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Third for new thread. Can't wait to see greens.
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>>25650591
>>25650419
I'll update the Bon-Bon story tomorrow, still finishing it up.
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>>25650607
Yay
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>>25650607
>Bon-Bon story tomorrow
Wait what? We have one of those?
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>>25651128
- >>25590983
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>>25651146
Oh okay the run away slaves story. I forgot Bon-Bon was the protagonist.
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>forcing Fluttershy to eat meat until she likes it
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Unfortunately I didn't get much writing done this week, but still managed to get some words on the preverbial screen.

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>When you ran up to the customer service desk a few things happened in a very rapid succession.
>Firstly you managed to blurt out a lot of words very quickly.
"ListenIcameinherewithasmallfillybutnowIcan'tfindheryouhavetohelpme!"
>The lady that stood there could only watch with shock and fear as you rambled like a madman.
>But what you didn't see was a butter yellow pegasi literally jump all the way to the ceiling and clutch the lamp hanging there out of fright.
>Why is this important you may ask?
>Well lets watch and see.
>"Sir could you please calm down, otherwise I'm going to have to call for security."
>Taking a deep breath you tried doing as instructed.
>Getting kicked out of here wasn't going to help you find the filly.
"OK, I'm calm see. Calmer than Gandhi."
>"Riiiiight, now how can I help you sir?"
>Relax your breathing, that's it deep breaths, in and out.
>Fuck you need to start exercising again.
>Being this winded after a little run.
>Shit, Scootaloo!
"Listen I came in here with a little orange filly. She disappeared seconds later and I could really use some help."
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>>25651967

>The lady's face went from being wary of you to downright worried.
>"I'll get the security guard to look at the video from the cameras. We'll help you find her."
>You and the lady however made a mistake.
>You forgot about the yellow pegasus who was still hanging onto a lamp above.
>Fun fact: What goes up, generally always comes down.
>With a loud pop both the pegasus and ceiling lamp came crashing down.
>You could only wince as the lady who was going to help you, broke the lamps and pony's fall.
>The yellow equine managed to get out a single 'Owie' from the pile of metal and flesh now laying on the ground.
"You both okay there?"
>"Eeeeep!"
>And yellow is back to hiding amongst the wreckage.
>The lady's out cold though, damn.
"Hey mellow yellow, listen I'm sure you heard what we were talking about from your perch up there."
"I need to find that little filly before anything bad happens, so could you help me out and afterwords I promise I'll leave you alone to your panic attack."
>"Yes sir."
>It was barely audible but now we were making progress.
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>>25651986

>All in all the plan was simple.
>Have yellow horse take you to the store security office.
>There you'd get the guard to use the fancy surveillance footage to find out where the little pain in the butt went.
>At which point you would go and find the said pain in the butt.
>Promptly you would scold her for leaving your side and afterwords give her a nice hug.
>You know what they say about the best laid plans of mice and men.
>They fuck you in the ass, with no lube or reach around.
>The office itself was small and it didn't contain anything that would even resemble a monitor or computer.
>And from the looks of it, the guard was about one shift from going to the big mall cop gig in the sky.
>This couldn't fucking get any worse.
>As if you had to ask.

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So yeah, it's short. The pastebin is updated, and hopefully I'll get a bit more done this coming week.
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>>25652007
Ooooh, damn. This is getting good.

>But what you didn't see was a butter yellow pegasi literally jump all the way to the ceiling and clutch the lamp hanging there out of fright.
Got a giggle out of me.

Overall looking forward to seeing what happens if Fluttershy realizes it's Scoots.
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>>25652007
Nice
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>>25651864
>you will never manifest as the mary sue who buys all the mane six and reunites them
>you will never watch five sets of eyes stare in horror as Fluttershy carves up a 3 inch steak and eats it like it's nothing
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>>25650336
Story idea

Pony is bought as a present for some guy's little girl. Cause the standard "I want a pony" usually doesn't happen cause horses are expensive and require special housing and maintenance to keep, but MLP ponies are much smaller, clean themselves, and easier to maintain.

How would the bought pony react. I can imagine it being cold and hateful to the people enslaved it/tore it from its home and maybe even their owner who bought it like a pet, but could it really be mean to the innocent human child who just wants to brush it and play with it.

>>25652007
Get more done soon the tension is eating away at me,
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>>25653755
>How would the bought pony react.
That depends on the pony and their mentality. They could be too prideful for their own good, being resistant, possibly aggressive, though I doubt they'd physically harm a child.
Alternatively, they could understand their position, and rather than fighting it, accept their fate and make the best of it.
>free food
>free home
>a friend if the kid isn't a piece of shit
>no beatings
>no rape
>generally well taken care of
Knowing its situation could be much, much worse, it'd at the very least play along out of its own self interest, if not actually coming to enjoy its position. At least enjoy it as far as one can enjoy being a slave/pet.
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>Be pony slave.
>Some human family bought you as a present for an eight year old girl.
>It's not so bad.
>Except her 13 year old brother is going through puberty and is looking at you funny.
>You're probably going to get raped by him.
>Such is life on earth.
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>>25652007
Keep going
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>>25654167
>rape

Or so it appeared at first but actually the pony was young and going though puberty as well and needed a good dicking.

It starts off as a purely physical thing. Both not really interested in the other species. But after a few years the little girl grows out of her pony phase. The boy and the pony over time became close to the point that he's the only one she talks to. The parents decide it's not worth the expense to keep the pony. So boy has to figure out how to keep their relationship a secret and pay for her food and keep long enough for him to tern18 and get moved/kicked out and take the pony with him. Now he struggles to pay for housing and keep up with school. But trough it all his pony is there for him. And what was once nothing but his little sister toy has become his everything.
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>>25654883
This I like.
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>>25654883
>>25655290
Also gets my vote. Summon the writefags!
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>You will never have a qt slave trap
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>>25655918
At what point did this seem like a good idea?
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>>25656526
>You will never tease your slave's rigid shaft until he is a quivering wreck, watching his hips buck against the slightest touch as he seeks the few strokes more needed reach completion, listening to him beg nearly unintelligibly to be allowed to cum
>You will never lean over and whisper into his ear, "No."
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Y'know, I'd like to see a story with an Anon finding himself the brand new owner of Nightmare Moon. Or Chrysalis. Or both. Villains need structure and love or >rape too, don't they?
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>>25656526
>is not for slave, but instead for gentle sexual
Why not both?
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>>25656747
>NMMslave
...fuck, another idea I want to write.
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> "You know this one's a bit of trouble? You're going to have to keep an eye on her."
> "So I've been told. You can control her, though?"
> "Yeah, just crank the collar up if she gives you any real problems. These things can take a good jolt."
> "Noted."
> The voice in the background are nothing unusual.
> After how long you've been in here, they're something you barely notice.
> Not even worth raising your head from the remains of the rough cloth bedding.
> Booted feet stopping in front of the tiny, wire-twisted entrance to your cage and nudging it with one steel-capped toe, though?
> That's unusual.
> "Hey. Miss attitude, wake up. Someone wants to see you."
> The cramped confines barely gives you room to stand, and certainly not enough to view the humans' entire body even if you were to crawl towards the door.
> Instead another human takes the place of the market employee in front of the cage and squats down, peering inward with inquisitive but wary eyes.
> On the one hoof, it was nice that you wouldn't have to crane your neck to try and speak up to them.
> On the other hoof, you'd have to speak to them now.
> "So. What's your name?"
> Your name is fuck off, I don't want to talk to you.
"My name is Spitfire."
> "Hmm. Been told you can fly pretty well."
"Could."
> "You any good with weather? Monitoring it, figuring out what's coming?"
"A bit. Your weather's screwy."
> "What about navigating?"
"Not awful."
> Navigating by stars, wind patterns, and landmark alike was a prerequisite for getting into the Wonderbolts.
> But if you bored him, the human might go away again.
> "You got a particular reason for the attitude?"
> Or maybe not.
"Yeah, I'm a slave in a cage. Why, surprised?"
> Only the presence of the market-owner keeps you from adding a few choice adjectives for your interrogator to the answer.
> As it is, the sarcasm is thick enough you half hope he'll choke on it.
> "You wanna fly again?"
> You can't help it.
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>>25657452

> Wings stiffen, muscles going rigid at even the mere memory of coasting freely among the clouds-
> Laughter - human laughter - cuts into the fantasy.
> "Figured. Alright, pull her out. I'm want to see her for real."
> Mentally you curse.
> That wasn't what you'd planned on.
> He was supposed to go away, not-
> Hinges squeal as the cage door is pulled side.
> With careful hooves you creep from it and stand upright at last before anyone can get any ideas about making use of the collar on your throat for 'encouragement'.
> Instinctively you stretch, muscles trembling and several somethings popping appreciatively.
> Boots thud on the concrete floor as he circles you, the market owner hanging just behind him.
> He's got the look of most of the ones who come back here, not as fancy as the ones who you used to see sitting in on the auctions.
> A lose shirt-jacket, faded but not awful looking, hangs over a T-shirt and pants; his face has the look of someone who fails to be surprised by most things in life anymore.
> "So, you're going to buy her, then?"
> "No visible injuries I can see, no limp when she came out... yeah, fuck it. I'm in."
> Wait, what?
> That fast?
> "You know she's not going to be easy? I don't want you coming back because she decided to-"
> "Second time you're saying, and I knew the first. Yeah, I understand. You lied to me about her skill, though, I'll be coming back to give you a piece of my mind. That enough money?"
> "Yep. She's yours. You got a controller for that collar?"
> "Yeah."
> Fuck.
> Not your plan at all.
> A chain snaps to the back of the heavy collar locked about your throat; the buyer doesn't bother giving you a tug, simply turning for the exit.
> For a second you consider making a scene - planting your hooves and refusing to move.
> That'd go nowhere good, though.
> Glowering, you force your legs into motion to pull up behind him.
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>>25657469

> Faces peer out from the cages you pass, pouring out a mix of jealousy, sympathy, and occasionally silently begging to be taken with.
> Closing them out proves easy; you've become an expert at locking out unwanted emotions.
> Exiting into the sunlight leaves you squinting after so long in the cage.
> What follows is a long walk through a city you barely know the name of.
> Humans hurry past, not even glancing up at the sight of one sentient creature being owned by another.
> A few even have ponies of their own walking by their sides.
> Again you force back a wave of emotion - this time your own.
> "So."
> Your owner's voice is rough and somewhat tired-sounding now; he hasn't bothered to look down at you.
"So, what?"
> "So, thinking about getting to fly again?"
"I'm a slave. I don't get to have thoughts, and certainly not hopes."
> "Funny. Let's try answering for real."
"Let's try looking at who you're talking to. I'm not a machine, you know."
> It comes out more snappy than you'd intended, but it feels good to do so.
> To your surprise, he does - looking down with a small half-smile, as though something you'd said was intensely amusing.
> "Sorry. Habit in my line of business - eyes go elsewhere first."
> Huh.
> An actual reply.
> You hadn't expected that.
"Whatever. What's your name, or is it just 'master'?"
> "Anonymous. You're Spitfire, yeah?"
"Yeah."
> Finding your attempt at needling him stymied, you try a different tactic.
"What'd you want me for?"
> "I need a navigator and weather expert. You fit the bill."
> Great.
> Glorified weather pony - that's your life now.
"Where we heading?"
> "Home."
> 'Home' turns out to be a large, square building behind a fence the two of you have to be waved through.
> Must not be very wealthy, if he's living in a place without windows, and-
"Oh, fuck no."
> Coming around a corner had brought you to a prompt halt.
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>>25657475

> An aircraft - rust-streaked in places, with a broad wing slung high over a curved central body - sat in the center of a hangar.
"Tell me we're not going on that?"
> "Yep. Home sweet home."
> Yet again a curse is stifled from escaping your mouth.
> You hated human aicraft.
> Anonymous walks a slow circle around the contraption; unwillingly, you follow behind.
> He speaks as he does, laying out what he'd bought you for.
> By the end, you're increasingly wondering if you got bought by a madpo- madman.
"So, let me get this straight. You want me, to watch the weather for you."
> "And navigate, yeah. Plus some other stuff. My last copilot... left and it's too much work, not enough eyes with just one person."
"And you understand that I'm kind of pissed about this whole being-sold-as-property thing."
> "Yep."
> Ruffling your wings slightly, you try and focus on him again.
> Resting loosely against the side of the aircraft, Anonymous is watching you again - the chain to your collar swinging as one hand toys with something in his pocket.
"You're insane, you know that? I know what they've got listed on my profile. Doesn't respond well to discipline, obedience problems, yada yada yada."
> "Yeah. I read it before buying you."
> He's infuriatingly hard to provoke, this human.
> Much more difficult than the one who'd run the market you'd been bought from.
"And you still want to put me on that kind of duty flying."
> "Yep. And I'm going to tell you right now: I'm not going to put up with any bullshit from you. You work, things go okay. You give me trouble, I'm full well going to give it back."
"And what makes you think I'm not going to make it miserable enough you send me back?"
> "I end up sending you back, they're probably going to ship you out to the nearest labor farm pretty soon just to get rid of you. We both know what those are like."
> Unfortunately, you do.
> Suppressing a shiver, you force a neutral face that hopefully isn't too artificial.
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>>25657482

"So, I'm supposed to be happy that you own me like a piece of furniture or something?"
> "No, you're supposed to be happy they don't have you breaking rocks until you waste away and collapse, or have you on some high-mortality job."
"Kind of a raw deal."
> "Isn't it? Life's a bitch sometimes, but I think you'll figure it out."
> Pushing off the side of the aircraft, he starts climbing up into the interior.
> "Come on. I'll show you the inside."
> A few beats of your wings settles you on top of the main hull, where your owner is pulling a hatch open.
> Slipping in after him, you climb through into the aircraft's interior.
"Looks like a pile of rust and junk."
> "Hey, it'll make point-five past lightspeed."
> You shoot a glance at his back.
"...what?"
> "Nevermind. Silly reference... anyhow, this is an old warbird. Long legs, and can land damn near just about anywhere."
"A warbird? Tell me you're not some kind of mercenary."
> A loud, cracking laugh is your response.
> "Hell no. I do cargo, passengers occasionally, out to rough airstrips and remote locations. They need it there fast, I move it."
"So, I'm going to be a glorified delivery pony. Delivery pony slave."
> One finger is raised in counter to your suggestion.
> "Aerial delivery pony."
"...that makes me feel so much better."
> "Glad it helped. This way - I'll show you our 'quarters'."
> Stepping carefully behind him, you find yourself unwillingly rolling your eyes at his sarcasm.
> Moving back through what you presume is the cargo area, reveals a pair of beds stacked to either side of a central corridor.
> Each is partitioned off by a sliding cloth cover on a rail,
> "Yours is on the starboard, mine on the port."
"My own room? Wow, the luxury."
> "Hey, if you'd prefer I can get a cage or something. Have to be made out of paper, though, because I can't take extra weight."
> Despite the wit, you can't help but be actually surprised.
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>>25657505

> Going from a cage to sleeping areas equal to your owner's - even though not really private - was more than you'd expected.
> Climbing up on the bed, you find it surprisingly good for being in such a rough machine.
> Across the passage, Anon also takes a seat - lacing his fingers together and watching you quietly.
> After a few moments you pause from testing the bed and shoot a questioning look in his direction.
"What?"
> "Just watching."
"You like seeing a mare in bed?"
> Again a small smirk touches the edges of his mouth.
> "For someone who didn't even want to get aboard, you seem to be enjoying the bed."
> Raising a hoof to point at the shock collar about your throat, you roll your eyes just in case the first gesture wasn't enough.
"Not exactly giving me a ton of choice here. May as well find the best of it."
> "Point."
> His hands come un-knit; Anon leans back against the far wall of the aircraft.
> "Keep that attitude, you'll do alright. I'll reward you for good work."
> About what you expected, really.
> Better than being used in other ways.
"Well, like I said. Not much choice."
> For now, anyhow.
> If he was flying alone as he'd said, he'd have to have a tool box somewhere.
> Maybe something in there could go through your collar...?
> "Right, well. Beds fold up when we need extra cargo space, though there's a small storage area beneath yours - don't go messing with that."
"Got it. Anything else?"
> "Yeah. There's a small kitchenette just ahead of this, though you might have a bit of trouble using it - I don't have any flatware good for ponies."
> Figures.
> "Up from there's the old engineer's cabin, though now I just use it for extra cargo space. Back are the rear hatches - I'll need you to watch from those from time to time. Even further forward is the cockpit and nose position - I'll show you those later."
"Right. When do we go?"
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>>25657513

> "Couple of hours. I need to go finalize a few things, so you get a some spare time. When I get back I'll introduce you to your duties and we can get moving."
"Fine. Whatever."
> Standing, he takes a moment to padlock your chain to a structural member before departing.
> Evidently he doesn't trust the threat of later punishment to keep you still just yet.

So, that's the beginning of this. I hope to be able to get a few more posts up later on; in the meantime, I really would like feedback on this, as it's obviously a bit different than the Twilight story - no whiteknight, no mentally broken pony - at least not obviously so, anyhow.
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>>25657519

Lookin good. Good to see something that's not the standard whiteknight story.
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>>25657519
liking it so far
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>You are Anon.
>And boy o’ boy did you luck out.
>Yesterday you went to the pony auction house hoping to finally put the money you saved to some use.
>However the moment you got there, the realization hit you like reality hitting a 18 year straight out of high school.
>Ponies weren’t cheap.
>Mares went for something close to 3 grand.
>And the younger they were the more it cost.
>Fuck.
>Shit.
>Balls.
>Speaking of balls.
>Maybe luck was on your side after all.
>Two colts were being sold together for only 500 bucks.
>Looking at the guy selling them you almost regretted what you were about to do.
>The guy eyed you up, slowly rubbing his hands together.
“How come they’re so cheap?”
>”No reason goy… my friend. They’re perfectly healthy and have all their shots.”
“Bullshit, what’s the catch?”
>Now the man with the abnormally large nose started to visibly sweat.
>”They’re sterile, so if you’re trying to use them for breeding it’s not really going to do you any good.”
>How come you still felt like the guy wasn’t giving you all the info.
>So naturally you continued to stare him straight in the eye.
>Man this guy sweats a lot.
>”Okay fine, they colt-cuddlers. I bought them two months ago, hoping to have them just be useful for satisfying the mares needs.”
>”But they would even get a chubby from the pinkest of pony pussies.”
>Beggars can’t be choosers.
“Alright you got yourself a sale.”
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>>25657519
>I really would like feedback on this
I have really hard time coming up with a feedback. Mainly because there is nothing really that would make me stop reading and think 'wait, thats bullshit!'.
I hate to sound like an asskisser, but I cant find anything that I didn't like in it so far.
It's good, I like it.
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>>25657593

Several Hours later…
>So the two stallions were named Soarin and Braeburn.
>And not that you planned for this in advance, but they were wearing matching pony maid outfits.
>And while blue wasn’t looking to happy with his current predicament, Braeburn looked absolutely tickled pink.
>”Master, thank you for these.”
“Yeah no worries. Your guys room is down the hall and on the left. I’m going to get some sleep. Just knock on my door if you need anything.”
>After getting undressed and hopping into bed you fell asleep almost instantly.
>Dreams of crushing some puss cascaded around you.
>However the sensations coming from your dick were not dream induced.
>Opening your eyes you looked down.
>There lapping hungrily at your dick were the two stallions, still in their maid outfits.
>While Braeburn lapped at the head, Soarins broad tongue worked its way up and down your shaft.
>Each moment was nothing more than ecstasy as their nimble tongues danced around each other and your cock.
>Your eyes never faltered from their actions.
>At one point Soarins eyes even caught your own, which only renewed his efforts around your shaft.
>Soon the familiar feeling of pressure building was making itself know.
“I’m about to..”
>Before you could finish Braeburn decided to hog you all to himself.
>His mouth descended on your length in its entirety.
>The warmth of his mouth surrounding you was the final push you needed.
>Your hips jerked forward as rope after rope exploded from your tip.
>All of which was greedily swallowed up by the colt still firmly attached.
>”No fair Braeburn, learn to share.”
>Soarin, who must have been upset by his friends actions pulled Braeburn right off of you.
>And smashed his lips against his.
>So yeah.
>Best 500 bucks you ever spent.

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>And so Anon lived out his days with two trap ponies, whom he dicked on a regular basis.
>No Homo of course.
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>>25657519
I like it.
I like PBY-5As
I like greentext
I like spitfire
I like anon insofar.
Keep goin pls, these last couple of threads have been bare of content.
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>>25657482
>aircraft
>realize its the spitfire prompt i wanted
YES YES YES
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>>25657519
I love this. It followed what I imagine and it isnt a white knight but he isn't an abusive asshole. Feels are good but having them thrown in your face immediately is bullshit, so i like that about this to. Not much else so far.
>>25657603
>colt cuddler and maids
HA
>gay as fuck immediately
HAHA
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>tfw no pony slave to forcibly snuggle
>tfw no pony slave to bathe and pamper
>tfw no pony slave that can't say no to brushing her mane and tail or dressing her up in cute little outfits
>tfw no pony slave to say "I love you Master," as you curl up with her and squeeze her firmly but gently against your chest as the two of you happily drift off to sleep together every single night
>tfw no ex pony slave to say "P... please... I want to stay with you,Master! This is the only home I've ever known here... p..please let me stay!" when all slave ponies are eventually liberated and given equal rights
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>>25658659
What kind of sick monster are you?
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>>25657452
Oh shit is the plane story finally happening?

>Catlina
>Not Dornier
>Not Short
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>>25658659
>implying she wouldn't immediately crush your balls under her hooves the moment she was free
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>>25658747
She'd have no reason to. I'd be nothing but kind, attentive, and loving to my little "slave."
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>>25658761
She was still legally your slave. You don't think there won't be even the slightest hint of resentment toward you over that fact?
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>>25658774
I seriously doubt it if I explained to her thoroughly I only bought her to protect her and because I wanted a friend as well. She'd be free to go at any time anyway, but only I could keep her safe as she's my property in the eyes of the law and doesn't have any rights. I wouldn't blame her if she still hated me and left the very moment it became safe and convenient to do so, but I'd hope she would want to stay, at least for a little while.
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>>25658807
>being kind
>to your slave
>ever
>not brutalizing her for your own amusement
>not whipping and beating her for doing nothing wrong
>not violently raping her and enslaving your satyr abomination children as well
>not torturing them and forcing her to watch to punish her
Gee, Anon, how come your mom lets you suck TWO dicks?
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>>25658837
>not being murdered in your sleep when she can't stand the abuse any longer
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>>25655854
Is it gay to want to nonsexually spoon with your pretty pygmy stallion?
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http://strawpoll.me/6178906
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>>25657519
So after reading through it proper I have to say I like the direction this is taking so far.

Either way in-flight weather lookout isn't the first thing that comes to mind.

Here's some:
>Pre and post-flight paperwork, calculations and general planning
>Navigation
>Radiotelephony
>Engine management
>Spending parts of the flight as pilot flying because shit gets tiring
>Flight Attendant on passenger flights
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>>25658884
Not at all.

>Petting the qt stallion in his little maid outfit.
>Snuggling underneath a blanket.
>One hand holding him while the other gently pets the silky fur on his tummy.
>Reducing the trap pony into a quivering mess where he's begging for you to take him.

Oh wait you said nonsexually.
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>>25658947
Was gonna say, if he's that pretty, I'll gladly take gay. Was just wondering.
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>>25658929
Yes. Nobody gets a free ride, not even qt pone. They'd have to provide some kind of service. I work and pay the bills, you don't bring in any income of your own, therefore you have to work for me to earn the right to stay here, live under my roof, eat my food, use my electricity and water, etc.

At a minimum they'd be expected to keep the house clean, do my laundry, the dishes, stuff like that.

I wouldn't "punish" her to keep her in line, I'd just show her videos on the internet of other people abusing ponies and tell her she's free to take her chances out in the world any time she wants to, but that most people would not be as fair to her as I am. As long as she's with me I'll keep her safe and support her, but she'll have to work for it.

As long as she puts forth a decent effort she'll be just fine, but if she becomes lazy or unruly and defiant I wouldn't tolerate it for long.
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>>25659015
>tfw you will never be a good pony for your firm but fair human master
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>>25657519
If figuring out things about the plane or piloting in general gets frustrating, go to /k/ and ask them about what cargo planes usually do, or about re purposing old cargo planes . Don't hint at ponies of course
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Am I the only one who would crack in this scenario?

Even if I was a rich, resourceful mary-sue who could easily reunite the mane six and take care of them forever, I still couldn't sleep at night without a hole eating away at the walls of my stomach as I thought about them all huddling together in the next room to fend off the feeling of living in a world with so much morbid bullshit.

I would probably die of a broken heart watching Fluttershy fall to pieces when she realizes that we breed billions of animals a year for the sole purpose of dying and sustaining us, and that's just the tip of the iceberg.
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>>25659149
Idk.
I just know we need more writefriends in this thread.
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>>25659221
Trying really hard to get on a sane sleep schedule so my brain works for this shit. Just isn't coming to me very quickly.

And holy shit do I want that bottle of love
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>>25659221
we couldnt have finished all the other stories?
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>>25659221
At the moment it looks like we have more writefags than most other threads combined though.
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>>25659058
>tfw you will never have a fair pony with a good firm butt
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>>25659403
tfw you will never have a cute trap pony in your lap riding your dick. His ponut stretched around your shaft as he bounces up and down, determined to milk you of your seed.
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>>25657175
Do it, faggot. Break that Nightmare horse. Make her your bitch.
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>>25659221
Give me a couple hours
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>>25596875

>After turning off the TV you spend much of the day in conversation with Fluttershy.
>It's mostly small talk while the both of you tidy up the house.
>She tells you about life back where she came from.
>The little community she lived in, the adventures she had, the friends she loved.
>It would seem as if she had a pretty nice life.
>Your life really wasn't that great.
>But considering what you'd seen other people go through in the past few years?
>Oh, it sure as hell wasn't the worst.
>You had finished your bachelor's degree a year ago, and now ran the family store.
>You weren't drafted, either, but that was a very close call.
>They'd actually called your birthday on the service lottery back when the war was at its climax.
>It was getting brutal over there.
>The sole reason that kept you out of the meat grinder was a tibia that never healed correctly.
>You ponder what might have happened differently over a pile of unfinished tax papers, while Flutter hovers a couple feet in the air, sweeping the floor.
>It's strange how they can fly with wings that small.
>Considering the fact that it's early December, the sun has almost set, even though it's only 4:00.
>Tomorrow is the first day you put your pony to work.
>Yep, you definitely aren't rich enough to buy a slave just as a companion and light housekeeper.
>You'd gone over this with her already.
>You'll have to show her how things work, but manning the cash register and restocking shelves isn't too hard.
>Just tedious.
>Except for when someone tries to sneak out a solar panel or dynamo to get around electricity rationing.
>Or, when someone abandons stealth completely and tries to rob you.
>So many people carry weapons on them these days.
>Hence why you keep a glock under the counter.
>17 shots, no 38.
>The sad part is that it's actually come in handy before.
>Multiple times.

Just a small update that I will expand on, I feel bad because I didn't have time to post from Monday until now.
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>>25651967
>>25651967
Damn son, took my idea of shop worker Flutters before I could even write it down. Great minds think alike, I guess.
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>>25660211
Well now we know what store he went to
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>>25660211
They do indeed.
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>>25660202
>I can&039;t think of a name. FUCK.
Voting the new writefag calls himself "thirty-nine"
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>>25660843
Seconded
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>>25660843
I do like that name...
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New story, incoming.

Maud, Geologic Assistant

>You've gotten your new assignment from your boss.
>Almost 1000 square miles of detailed geologic mapping work.
>1000 very rugged, arid square miles.
>No partner or assistant.
>Not sure what you did to piss him off...
>One of your coworkers told you to look into buying one of those technicolor ponies that have shown up on the market.
>They are supposed to be reasonably intelligent, and physically able.
>So, you looked on the online sales sites.
>You spent hours searching, and found what looked to be a good fit.
>A pony with a 'cutie mark' (something about inherent talents) of a rock, and their profile said they appeared to enjoy talking about rocks and minerals.
>And a decent price to boot.
>AND, in Grand Junction, which is on your way to where you are working.
>You contact the seller, and arrange a pick up in two days, right on schedule for getting to work.
>Driving through the Rocky Mountains has always brought you joy...
>The high, snow capped peaks, the alpine forests...
>It just makes you feel right with the world.
>Though, purchasing another intelligent being does make you rather uncomfortable.
>Assuming the profile is accurate, you should atleast be putting the pony into an environment they are comfortable with...
>Moreso than the sex slave, home assistant, or heavy labor markets most of the ponies seem to get thrown into.
>The further west you continue along the interstate, the more dry the landscape becomes.
>When you eventually reach Grand Junction, the valley floor itself is quite green, thanks to the Colorado River, but you can see the high plateaus around are parched...
>You drive your work truck to the pony trader's warehouse, on the northern edges of town, and show your paperwork to the man guarding the front gate.
>You park, and go into the front office.
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Would anyone be interested in a CYOA from the perspective of the slave pony?
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>>25660994
Please continue.

>>25661158
I would be.
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>>25660202
>>25660843
Well, name change, I guess.

*Take note of this, thread people, I changed my fagging name*

Updates to my story will come before too long.
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>>25660994

>Waiting at the front desk is a pony... A female, you guess... Lavender coat, very pale grey mane, violet eyes, cutie mark of a flower...
>"Mr. Ymous. We are expecting you. Please, follow me."
>You lift your hand up to speak, but choose to say nothing, and follow the pony.
>She leads you down a hallway, to 'Sales Room C'.
>"Have a nice day, Mr. Ymous."
>You step inside the room, and there is a man, filling out some paperwork, and sitting in a cage filling one side of the room, is the pony you are purchasing.
>Maud. A gray goat, violet hair, and turqoise eyes, and as promised, a rock on her flank.
>"Just a little bit of paperwork, and she is all yours, Anon Ymous."
>The man hands you a clipboard.
>"Just sign here, here, initial here, then sign and date here, and that will complete the sale."
>Maud looks to you, looking slightly pissed off... Not the bright happy eyes most ponies you had ever seen have.
>You take the clipboard, and fill in where the salesman indicated, and return it to him.
>After looking it over, he smiles, and hands you a leash, and a large folder.
>"Congratulations on your purchase! Here is a leash, and some important documentation... Proof of ownership, legal responsibilities, general care information..."
>You take the leash and documentation, and turn to Maud.
>She appears to be looking you over.
Alright, Maud, lets hit the road. We have work to get ready for.
>She sighs, and steps up to you, allowing you to attach the leash to the harness she is wearing.
>You lead her out the open gate of the cage, then out the front of the warehouse, and out to your truck.
>She looks oddly at print on the side of your vehicle.
>"United States Geologic Survey?"
Yup. Im a Geologist, Maud. I have... brought you under my supervision to be my assistant in the field work I do for a living.
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>>25661307

>Maud continues to stare for a moment.
>She then replies in a deadpan.
>"That's good. I like rocks. I actually have a Rocktorate in Rock Science."
>Wait what?
A... Rocktorate? Is that anything like... a doctorate?
>She responds in what you guess is her normal speaking voice... very monotone.
>"I guess. It means I went to a university for a long time to study rocks. And minerals."
>Holy shit, you just paid $2000 for a pony with what could very well amount to a Ph.D.
Well, Maud... Let's uh... get into the truck, and I can explain what we are going to be doing for the next month before we get a break...
>You open the passenger side, and motion for Maud to enter the truck, unclipping the leash from her harness.
>You then move ro the other side, and jump into the drivers seat, then turn on the engine (and air conditioning).
So... Maud. You would consider yourself an expert on rocks and minerals?
>"Yes. I especially like sedimentary rocks... They make me sedimental."
Thats... Gneiss.
>You reach down to the small storage space in the truck's door, and grab a chunk of rock you picked up along the interstate earlier, then hand it to Maud.
>"Yes... Anon, was it? It is Gneiss."
>You smile at your terrible pun.

That's all I have prepared for now.
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>>25650607
>>25651146
Story so far- https://ghostbin.com/paste/yjxpx/raw

>”Mmmmmmm, warm….”
>Lyra winces in pain as Scootaloo uses her overgrown mane as a makeshift blanket
>”Easy Scoots, just because I’m letting you ride on my back doesn’t mean you get free rein back there.”
>”S-s-s-sorry Lyra, i-its just so c-c-cold.”
>”Im cold too Scootaloo, but pulling my mane isn’t making this any more enjoyable than it already is.”
>Shuddering, Scootaloo buries her face further down into Lyra’s mane
>Lyra sighs, letting the orange filly have her way
>The four mares mush forcefully through the freshly packed snow
>The storm before was a unexpected surprise for sure
>Bon-Bon ranted and raved when the first freshly baked flakes of frozen water befell on them
>Originally they all tried to ignore it, walking through the the rising wind just fine
>But when it began to fall in more collective clumps, they knew they were in for a treat
>Luckily they came across a narrow eroded brook where they took temporary shelter
>They managed to start a small fire using what little magic capability Lyra still had
>Using Coco’s collar and some of Bon-Bon’s hair to fuel it
>Still neither of them said a word to one another
>The past confrontation still left Coco, Fluttershy and Scootaloo wary of their ambiguous guide
>Only Lyra tried to lighten the mood, but still none of the mares were interested in her tall tales
>They seemed mostly interested in trying to get as much sleep as possible before having to trek back outside
>Morning wasn’t any better
>The snow was thick with an easy cool cream like look to its texture, as the whirling hornet’s nest of wind stung any living thing in its path
>Sighing Bon-Bon wakes the others up
>None of this was going according plan, it never goes according to plan
>Ignoring their cries
>Bon-Bon was the first out, making holes for Fluttershy to step in
>Complaining but seeing no other way around the snow, they trekked on
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>>25650336
Can I dress her in style?
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>>25661692
>”Brrrrrr!”
>Coco’s body twitched as she trembled with each wet step she took
>”B-Bon-Bon maybe w-we should stop and l-look for shelter.”
“Shelter?”
>Bon-Bon looks behind her as she helped Fluttershy move through the snow
>”Sh-Shelter sounds nice -huff-“
>The yellow mare mutters as she forces herself against snow
>She’s ignored
“Shelter where? There’s nothing but trees and snow around us, where are we going to find a shelter?”
>”M-M-Maybe we could find a-another hollowed out t-t-tree....”
>Coco ties her ascot tighter around her neck
“We got lucky before, we’re not going to get lucky now. Plus, if we make lots of progress today than tomorrow isn’t going to be so hard.”
>Bon-Bon sniffles as she returns her full attention to Fluttershy
>”A-are you sure we c-can’t ‘stop’ I-I mean, they wouldn’t look for us in a storm like this?”
>Coco continues in her attempts to persuade Bon-Bon
“They would, with no doubt they’re looking for us right now. Even if you were right, moving now would still give us a massive advantage.”
>”Or leave us mostly frozen solid.”
>Bon-Bon rolls her eyes
“Well, you could always leave. Just take any turn towards the right or left, maybe you’ll find a lovely log cabin with a nice human inside, humans that won’t enslave you or give you to the authorities!”
>Bon-Bon utters without turning around, putting the mare back in her place
>Coco mutters some things under her breath but decides to keep it to herself
>She instead starts to lean left towards Lyra and Scootaloo
>”Hey what’s her deal?”
>She asks the energetic mint colored mare
>”Huh?”
>”Oh, don’t play dumb with me. Y-You’re friend there, why is she s-sooo-”
>Lyra cuts her off
>”Pushy, bossy, a bit of a hard flank?”
>Coco nods
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>>25661704
>”Well…….she’s always been the serious type…”
>Grunts and groans from Fluttershy are heard as Bon-Bon continually tries to keep the pregnant mare moving
>”...always complaining about things, never wants to do anything fun or has time for anything fun; we’re secret agents after all….”
>Lyra’s eyebrows mischievously go up and down, as she smiles mischievously
>”Agents to what exactly? T-The old kingdom is gone and whoever was still f-fighting for the old order is either dead or enslaved.”
>”To the resistance! Who else would we follow?”
>Coco now seemed genuinely interested
>”There’s……. a resistance?”
>”Pffffhhhh-”
>Lyra chuckles
>”Is there a resistance? HA! Of course there’s a resistance, if there wasn’t one we wouldn’t be risking our lives in saving anypony here.”
>”Do you even know where we’re going?”
>”To the resistance camp! Where else?”
>Lyra licks her lips as she looks to Bon-Bon then back to Coco
>”Could you elaborate a bit more, I mean I hate to ask stuff constantly but it just seems like we’ve been walking to nowhere at this point.”
>”Well, i'm not too sure myself, if you really want to know then you have to ask Bon-Bon herself.”
>Coco remisses on the idea of talking to Bon-Bon again
>”I hope you’re right.”
>”There’s nothing the matter Coco, yeah it's cold but just think of all the nice food, bedding, and shelter we’ll get when we reach the camp!”
>”Food? Food where?”
>Scootaloo drowsily says, emerging from Lyra’s mane as she wipes the sand from her eyes
>”False alarm Scoots, we’re just talking spy stuff and all.”
>Lyra smiles at the tired filly
>”J-just go back to sleep Scootaloo, we’ll be t-there soon.”
>Coco lies through her teeth
>”Oh…...okay….”
>Scootaloo yawns as she returns to her nap
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>>25661718
>”I still c-can’t believe she’s made it this far with us.”
>Coco lifts a hoof rubbing the filly’s neck
>Then continually down her back, lifting her hoof when she neared her cutiemark
>Or what was left of a cutiemark
>Coco looks back at her own mark
>Nothing more than a branded equal sign remained
>Like anypony else
>”Yeah, she’s a tough little one. I guess she gets it from all that time hovering around Rainbow Dash back in Ponyvile.”
>Lyra chips in
>”You know Rainbow Dash?”
>Coco asserts
>”Not really, we just live in the same town.”
>”Oh…”
>”Why? You know her?”
>Lyra asks
>”Well sorta, I’m good friends with her friend Rarity an-”
>She pauses
>”I was good friends with Rarity…”
>”Rarity! Pffffffff-I haven’t heard that primadonna's name in ages!”
>Coco frowns at the giggling mare
>Lyra quickly takes notice
>”Heh, sorry…”
>She smiles half heartedly as Coco looks the side
“Fluttershy! Come on!”
>Bon-Bon roars catching the attention of the two mares and waking up the filly

>”S-s-so-o-o-o c-cold!”
“You have to keep moving!”
>”B-b-but-“
>Tears swell up in her eyes
“Come on just a few more hooves!”
>Bon-Bon begins to forcefully push against the pregnant mare
>”NO! Please, I can’t walk anymore!”
>She collapses
>Sobbing her heart out in the cold snow
>”Bon-Bon you’re hurting her!”
>Coco runs and leaps in front of the mare before she could continue her pushing
”Coco we can’t stop moving, every second we stop is another second they have before catching us!”
>Bon-Bon tries to maneuver around Coco with no luck
“Quit-Making-This-DIFFICULT!”
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>>25661729
>Grunting she grabs Coco tackling her to the frozen ground
>Hooves go flying as the two begin to scuffle
>”Please stop! I didn’t mean for any of this!”
>Fluttershy wails as she sees the two ponies beating the living daylights out of one another
>”Hey! Hey! Hey!”
>Using what little of her magic she had left
>Lyra painfully separates the two
>”Scootaloo! I could use some help here!”
>Now fully awake, Scootaloo jumps off her back and springs into action
>She grabs on to Coco, allowing Lyra to focus most of her attention on Bon-bon
“Ugh-Erm! Lyra put me down!”
>Bon-Bon screams
>”Only if you –OW- promise not to –AH- hurt anypony!”
>Sparks start to fly out of Lyra’s horn as a signal stream of blood runs down from her nose
“Fine! Just stop! You’re hurting yourself!”
>”Thank you.”
>The yellow aura surrounding Bon-Bon disappears as she drops to the ground
>Lyra sighs falling on her hindquarters
>”Hey Scootaloo, I won’t hurt anypony either, so ah……could you please stop holding me?”
>”But you’re so warm.”
>Scootaloo mutters as she continues to rub her head in Coco’s chest fluff
>Coco rubs her back a bit before gently removing her
>Scowling she starts to shoot daggers at Bon-Bon
>But noticing the bleeding mare next to her
>She switches her attention to Lyra
>”Lyra, are you okay?”
>”Yeah! Peachy, Ay O’kay! –gah-“
>Lyra continues to rub her horn
>”And what about you Fluttershy?”
>The sniffling mare said nothing as she continued shiver
>”See what you’ve done?”
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>>25661746
>Coco groans as she limps towards Fluttershy
>Scootaloo tags along hugging her leg to support her and for warmth
>She shuffles around trying to create space between her and Bon-Bon
>All the while Bon-Bon looks at her with an ugly grimace
>”Shhhh-Shhhh, its alright-“
>Coco removes her ragged ascot and places it around Fluttershy’s neck
>”-no more tears now…”
>”Th-thank you..”
>Fluttershy murmurs, still wiping the frozen tear drops from her face
>Scootaloo rushes in to hug her
>”Mmmmm, so cozy!”
>Fluttershy blushes as Scootaloo borrows between her overgrown chest fluff and belly for maximum warmth
>”Scootaloo not so ruff, you don’t want to hurt the baby any more than what Bon-Bon already did.”
“It wasn’t even a hard push!”
>Bon-Bon interjects
>Glaring at the cream pony as she rubs Fluttershy’s belly
>”Pushing a pregnant mare down to her knees is what you call ‘not hard’?
“Well that wasn’t the intended idea-“
>Bon-Bon slowly tries to approach them
>”Stay back Bon-Bon!”
>Coco yells
>Fluttershy hesitantly shakes her head back and forth
>Mouthing the word ‘no’ to Bon-Bon
>Bon-Bon complies
“-sigh- Alright fine, we’ll rest for a bit but after this we’re walking non-stop till sunset.”
>”Is that all?”
>Coco gets on all fours and limps in front of Fluttershy
>”Where’s the apology?”
>The distance between the two mares continues to diminish
>”Can’t you see Fluttershy can’t even walk anymore-“
“You’re pushing your luck Pommel….”
>”-And you still want us to walk through this icy wasteland.”
>The two are now only a foot away from each other
>”What’s wrong with you?”
>Coco says with actual sympathy in her voice for once
>Bon-Bon huffs
“A lot of things, things you don’t even want to imagine. But that’s beside the point, if we don’t pass the main interstate highway by sundown we’re never going to lose them”
>”Interstate highway?”
>Coco tilts her head curiously
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>>25661754
“Basically a massive road where humans drive those mini trains on to get-“
>”Wha?”
“Never mind, let's just say I learned a lot about this world during my little trips in and out of those prisons. Now Coco if we don’t make it to that highway right away, when we do make it they’ll be sitting around waiting for us with darts and dogs. I don’t know about you, but I promised myself to never ever return to that place or any other place like it!”
>The tension between the two is stiff
>Fluttershy begins to hug Scootaloo like a stuffed bear anxiously as she watches the unstable mares argue
>Lyra currently as her head buried in the snow, oblivious to everything as she tries to cool down her headache
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>>25661773
“I have a mission to complete and by Celestia’s name I plan to on deliver on time!-“
>Bon-Bon lays a hoof down
“And I’m not going to let some two-bit-yarn-spinner stop me from my goal!”
>”YARN SPINNER!”
>Coco angrily yells as she lunges for Bon-Bon again
>This time though Bon-Bon was ready
>Using Coco’s momentum against her, she manages to catch her in a headlock
>She struggles trying to get free but Bon-Bon continues to tighten her grip
>Coco’s face starts to turn a light shade of purple as she’s too weak to break her grip
>Resorting to kicking the mare in the gut
>Bon-Bon unfazed by her attacks, gets the poor mare on to her knees
>”STOOOOOOOOOOOOP!”
>The echoing howl pierces through the frigid tundra
>Birds of all sorts begin to fly in fear as snow from the top of the highest tree begins to fall due to the sheer force
>”-Dramatic gasping for air sound-Wait what happened, do it again I wasn’t looking!”
>Lyra spastically looks around trying to comprehend what just happened
>Gathering whatever force she had left
>Fluttershy nudges Scootaloo away from her as she raises back on to her hooves
>”Fluttershy wait!”
>”Don’t worry im going to be fine.”
>She hushes the young filly
>“If they don’t behave, make them your slave….”
>Painful memories begin to flood her mind once more as she struggles to stand
>”You have to be assertive…..”
>She whispers to herself repeatedly as she turns towards the other two

That will be all for tonight, I wanted to expand a bit more and maybe add a Anon scene but I thought to myself its long enough.

Feed back would be great.
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>>25661307
>Maud. A gray goat, violet hair, and turqoise eyes, and as promised, a rock on her flank.
>A gray goat
>goat
I need goat maud picture now
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>>25661937

Fuck. I'll fix that when I make the pastebin.
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>>25659149
I hear ya. But that's life on earth.Got to make the best with what you got. You can't let it get you down because if your not strong you won't get back up.

And sadly. The softer ponies (probably around 1/3 of em) wouldn't live long on earth. Without help or protection.

And that's why I'm here. To read stories of hope.
Because they aren't real, and that's probably a good thing.
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>>25660994
>New story, incoming
Oh boy
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>>25661307
>Maud story
>about rocks
>Hopefully its all about rocks
>with rock facts
>and rock science
>and Maud being amazed by rocks on Earth not in Equestria
I love you more than you know right now anon, i need this.
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>>25662861

I choose to write what I know.

And rocks is something I know.

I should have a fresh batch of stuff to post in the morning. Will try to include earth porn, because who doesn't like sweeping vistas and cliffs and shit.
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>>25662888
Based anon Maud is one pony who I don't need to sexual her, but my god earth porn yes
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>>25662888
Don't keep us waiting
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>You approached the aged guard who was snoozing happily in his chair.
>Gripping his shoulder you gave him a good shake.
"Time to wake up old timer, duty calls."
>"Whas that, what in the sam hill, is the japs? I knew those sneaky fuckers would be back!"
>That was oddly racist, and entertaining.
>Looking around and trying to get his eyes to focus the old guys eyes finally landed on you and buttermilk.
>"This area is off limits to customers sir, Fluttershy you should know that."
>The pegasus which stood alongside you managed to shrink and hide behind her mane.
>Hell look at that a portable pegasi.
>You could probably fit her in a backpac.....
>An idea began to form in your head at that moment.
>You'd save that for a later time.
>Back to business though.
"Listen, I came into the store with a small filly who's gone missing."
"Chicken little here said you could help."
>"Settle your briches down fella. Yes I can help, come with me, the video room is in the back."
>The old timer rose, and with a few cringe inducing pops courtesy of his bones the three of you set off.
>Could this guy move any slower?
>If Scootaloo was abducted the guys would probably be halfway to mehico by now.
>After an agonizing walk, the three of you stood in a dimly lit room with several monitors adorning the walls.
>"Alrightie sonny, lets see what we can do here."
>The old guy started pressing some buttons.
>The images on the screens began to change.
>Rapidly shifting from camera to another.
>Scenes from the cashiers stations.
>The employee breakroom, oh look some dude was getting a blowie, good for him.
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>>25663423

>Customer service desk.
>Hell that lady is still ko'd.
"Stop there!"
>On the upper most screen you saw her.
>Scootaloo.
>And she wasn't being kidnapped.
>Or tortured.
>But she was going to get a spanking when you got to her.
>Because dear readers, the little filly was happily jumping on a demo bed in the back area of the store.
>Sprinting out of the room you ran as fast as your legs would carry you.
>Hell you got more cardio today than you have in the past month.
>Your two helpers however barely managed to register your quick departure.
>"Welp, my job here is done. Fluttershy make sure to lock the door when you leave."
>"Yes sir."
>With a salute the old guy went on his merry way, probably back to take another nap and dream of his days in dubya dubya tuh.
>Which left us with miss yellowquiet.
>Who took one quick glance at the monitor.
>With a confused look on her face she lifted off the ground with a gentle flap of her wings.
>"Is that?"
>Slowly she floated to the screen to get a better look.
>"Scootaloo?"
>The filly continued to happily jump atop the bed.
>And from the side approached the human from earlier, and boy he did not look happy at all.
>A sudden realization hit Flutters at that moment.
>Maybe she should go check on her unconscious supervisor and owner.
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>>25663432

>Deep boiling anger.
>That and a whole lot of really pissed off Anon.
>That is exactly what you are at this moment.
>And there not even fifteen feet from you, happily jumping on a bed was the rapscallion that caused you all this headache.
>Like papa anon always told you whenever you stole his nudie mags, I'm about to paint your bottom red.
>You approached slowly.
"Having fun there Scootaloo?"
>The jumping stopped.
>The little pony stared at you with a sheepish grin.
>"Yeah this place is great!"
>Nope.
"What were you thinking!"
>The tone and volume of that simple string of words carried through the entire store.
"Do you have any idea how worried I was?"
"I honestly thought someone abducted you?"
>Scootaloo shrank with each word that left your mouth.
>Her ears folded against her head.
>You closed the distance between the two of you.
>The look in her eyes described how scared she really was at this moment.
>Grabbing the little filly you brought her to your chest and hugged her.
"Don't ever scare me like that again okay?"
>God damn you were being a big pussy right now.
>But it's okay, cause she was okay.
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>>25663450

>"I'm sorry."
"I'm sorry too but you cant run off like that. You know better than anyone that there are some bad people here in the world."
>"I know, so are you still mad at me?"
"Oh yeah, I'm pissed. But for now I'm just relieved that your okay."
>You still held the pegasus close.
>Thank goodness she was okay.
>Fuck.
>You were starting to sound like your dad.
>Maybe next you'd pick up a drinking and pipe tobacco habit.
"And now were going to go see the three that helped me find you, so you can apologize to them."
>"Aww do I have to?"
>The glare you sent scoots way was the only answer she needed.
>"Fine."
>And just like that you headed to see the customer service rep and the yellow pegasus.
>After that maybe you'd be able to do what you originally set out for.
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>>25663461
Still waiting
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>>25663786
for?
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>>25663461
whenever youre done updating for the day, just say "thats all for now" at the end of your post
scoots is adorbs
>>25663786
I think hes waiting for more
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>>25663461
Your adorable green is wonderful,

>pick up a drinking.

Ya i can imagine having kids would do that.
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>>25650336
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>CTRL + F
"slave pony auction"
>No results
>backspacebackspacebackspacebackspacebackspacebackspacebackspacebackspace
>owning a pony
>firefox takes me right to it

Either OP is magic or all browsers are absolute, utter shit.
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>>25665682
fake fegel detected
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>>25661485

>You also see a small smile across Maud's face... Though her eyes still look tired... or pissed off... or something.
>It doesn't last, and she resumes her resting 'lack of care' face.
>Her demeanor kind of reminds you of Daria.
Well, since you seem to be... possibly more knowledgeable than myself... Let's get down to the core of what the work we are going to do.
>From the center console, you pull out a folded map, and open it up.
This is the San Rafael Swell. We are going to be mapping the entirety of it on foot, at a very detailed scale. This is the old geologic map. I assume you are familiar with these?
>"Where I come from, I don't think I've seen anything like this map..."
>That gives you some relief... Apperantly the world these ponies came from isn't big on detailed maps like humans.
Ok... The different colors on the map represent the different rocks that outcrop on the surface.
For example, the gray with the red slashes across it, with the Pkc is the undiferentiated Kaibab Limestone and Coconino Sandstone.
When we get to there on the map, we are going to find where those contacts are, and differentiate them for newer maps.
>You pull out a quadrangle map that matches up to the spot you were pointing at on the larger scale map.
See, this small section here on this map is scaled up to cover this entire sheet here, Maud. We will need to fill in the detailed geology on this map.
That includes faults, strike and dip of beds, unique minerals we might find... The whole shebang.
>"I guess that makes sense. I suppose we are going to be looking at sedimentary rocks then?
That's correct... There may be a few igneous rocks exposed on the flanks of the swell, but that's not gonna be the biggest part of what we are looking at.
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>>25666417

Oh... And the squiggly lines on the map... Those are contour lines. They show the surface topography of the land on the map. If you were to walk along one, you would be staying completely flat.
>You shift the truck into drive.
Buckle your seatbelt, Maud... And take a look at these maps while I drive. We are going for a supply stop, since this city is the last real bastion of civilization before we reach the wilderness.
We need to buy food, so think of what you might want to eat, and if you need any specific supplies... We should be able to find all of that before we head out.
>You drive the truck out of the parking lot, nodding to the guard at the gate, and begin driving towards the ultimate supply location in a small city like this; Wal-Mart.
>While driving, Maud is carefully studying the old maps... Easily over 50 years old at this point.
>AFter about 15 minutes of driving, you arrive at the Wal-Mart Supercenter...
>Camping equipment, food, clothing... Not necessarily the best of any, but having it all in one place is damn handy.
>YOu park the truck, and turn to Maud.
Alright, ready to pay a visit to the store? You thought of anything you might need?
>"Clothes."
>You cock your head to the side in confusion.
I... was under the impression ponies generally didn't wear much clothing?
>"I always wore a smock when working. Pockets to stick things, and protection from the sun and plants.
I suppose that makes sense... I always wear long pants, even in the heat of the summer when doing field work. We'll see what they have at the store, here.
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>>25666427

>Wal-Mart, as always, is fucking miserably crowded.
>You lead maud with the leash attached to her harness...
>You don't entirely trust her to not run off yet, and most stores have rules about such things.
Alright maud, they should have a small section of pony clothing over here... You gonna need a hat to go with it? The sun out here in the desert can be rough.
>"I guess so. I've never been much for hats, but I never spent much time in the desert."
So, a hat it is.
>You come across the pony clothing section.
See anything that fits your needs, Maud?
>She walks up, and looks through a rack of earth toned pony smocks
>She pulls out a moderate beige one.
>"This will do, Anon."
>You point to a nearby shelf of hats designed for pony heads.
Grab a hat too. Wide brimmed, with a strap so you won't loose it in the wind.
>She goes and grabs a light beige wide brimmed boonie hat.
Nice choice.
>You put both her selections into your cart, and head to the grocery section.
So, what kinds of food do you want that don't need to be kept cold, Maud?
>"Hay. Apples. Stuff like that."
>Sounds easy enough to please...
>"Why no cold food?"
Well, Maud, there's only one thing I keep cold while doing field work... But we'll come to that later.
>Maud follows obediently as you lead her around the food section.
>Pasta, canned soup, oatmeal, rice, beans, granola bars...
>All wonderful things to have so you can have atleast a few days before you need to make the 2+ hour drive back here.
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>>25666448

>However, there is one last thing you need.
>The one thing that you are willing to get to a podunk ass gas station every other day to pay out the ass to maintain ice for.
>Beer.
>Nothing beats finishing a hard day of field work, sitting around a campfire, and drinking a nice cold beer.
>Nothing.
>Sure, the physicists and chemists might call geologists a bunch of alcoholics (and they are probably right), but bring them out for a hard day in the field, and they won't disagree with your sentiment once you get back to camp.
So, Maud. You drink beer?
>"I drink Cider. They didn't really have beer where I come from. Previous owners drank beer though. It was OK."
Good to hear. This is the one thing thats worth carting ice out in the the Utah desert. You'll probably like some of it after a hard day's work out in the field.
>You grab 2 30-packs of Coor's.
>Pleb tier, but damn it, as tired as you are gonna be, you aren't gonna give a shit.
>And its not as bad as going for Natty Lite like everyone did in college.
>No need to visit the camping and outdoors section on this trip... You are already stocked up on fuel, and your equipment otherwise is in good working order.
>After purchasing your goods, you return to your truck, turn it on to get the AC cranked, and let Maud inside the cab while you load your new supplies into the back.
>You elect to keep a camper shell on the bed of your truck...
>Keeps stuff dry in the event of shit weather, and can work well as a place to sleep if you leave enough room.
>At the moment, you didn't leave enough room.
>After loading the beer into your expensive, well sealing cooler, and tossing the non-perishable foodstuffs into crates, you take the smock and hat for Maud up to the cab.
>You begin drive the truck up to the interstate, to proceed to the west.
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>While driving, you begin to discuss the finer points of Human vs Pony Geologic techniques and studies.
>They didn't seem all that big on large scale mapping for whatever reason.
>But, she seems to have a pretty good grip on rock and mineral identification, especially on the igneous and metamorphic side of things.
>Her sedimentary basis is a little more shaky, especially with the level of detail you want, but you are sure that with time and practice, she will become quite effective at that as well.
>When you stop for gas, right before entering the interstate, you pull out a few of the rock classification schemes you are going to use.
>Dott for your sandstones, Dunham for your carbonates, of course.
>Once you finish refuelilng, you head out on the interstate in earnest.
>You open up a discussion about the rocks you see to your right... The Book Cliffs.
>You try to start talking to Maud about Sequence Stratigraphy... a subsection of the study of sedimentary rocks that was developed by geologists studying these cliffs.
>But you have a hard time conveying the concepts involved other than concentrating it to its most simple essence.
>'The levels rose, the sea levels fell, and it all happened a really long ass time ago'
>Perhaps, when you get some time off, you'll have to take her through there and show her those outcrops.
>Eventually off to the south, you can see the La Sal Mountains, towering over the Paradox Basin.
You familiar with Laccoliths, Maud?
>"I can't say that I am, Anon."
Well, thats what we call an igneous body that was injected between sedimentary layers... Kinda has a mushroomish shape.
Them tall snow capped peaks off to the south there, thats a big ol' Laccolith.
>"What kind of igneous rocks are up there?"
Im pretty sure it's mostly porphyritic diorite... Nice place to go hiking. Cool, even in the summer.

Aaaand, that's a morning dump.
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>>25666494
I don't know shit about geology, but I like it so far.
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>>25666574
Wat
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>>25666713
someone drew some picture for the old sweetie belle story that is still unfinished
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>>25666494
waiting for the maud feels
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Jessi come here fuffy
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>>25650336
plz explain how you guys arent just another submission is necessary thread
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>>25650336
I tried a thing.

>You can't help but flex a little as you're stood by a mirror.
>Or a window.
>Or any reflective surface really.
>This time you're holding your Glock 17, tight dark grey t-shirt on, Bullet Proof vest on top, 'MLP' written on the front of it.
>You tense, admiring your biceps and forearms as you look at the van door window you're stood by.
>Leon aint got shit on you.
>You smile to yourself before getting your head in the game. You press a button on the pager like device on your belt, count to three under your breath, and then you kick next to the lock of the door in front of you.
"Hands in the air, Mythical Legends Police!"
>Damn do you love this shit.
>Across from you and to the right, the other two doorways burst open.
>You take a split second to relish that your door looks to have gotten fucked up more than theirs.
>Glass shatters from above as more agents enter the place, coming down on ropes.
>Yeah it's cooler. But if you had done that you couldn't effectively shout.
>And you love shouting.
>There's a panic as the rows of seats are knocked over, buyers tripping over each other to try and escape.
>You cock one over the head with the bottom of your gun.
>Fun stuff.
>And it should help remind the rest that you're holding a fucking gun.
>Fat wealthy people aren't a problem though, it's the sellers.
>Two of them have to be shot as they get the bright idea to try and pull their own weapons while having a half dozen guns trained on them.
>As you pull the trigger you briefly wonder what to have for dinner tonight.
>The others promptly give up, and once you've made sure everyone's in one place, and unarmed, the arresting team comes in, different people being filed out and locked into different vans for processing.
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>>25667716
>You walk towards the stage to take a look at the products.
>As you do, so does that woman you like.
>You don't want to date her or anything, you honestly prefer training, playing games, watching movies, and shitposting, but damn do she got a booty.
>Your eyes flicker to her great big juggs, looking for the nametag.
>"Christ, more of these multicoloured ponies."
"Mhm." You briefly answer, looking to the six mares in front of you.
>For about three quarters of the beings you have to deal with, it's impossible to tell what sex they are.
>It's easy with these things though, cute and girly looking.
>They're all huddled together, shivering and looking back and forth between you two, as well as behind to the two corpses being wheeled out.
>Looks like you have to do the awkward part of the job.
"I'm Anon, Captain of this squad. You're safe now, I promise. I've dealt with one of your cases before, and I know that you can understand me."
>You get down on one knee and hunch over a little to get more on their level, the ponies only the tiniest bit over three foot tall.
>And that's including their hair.
>Manes.
>Whatever.
>They still look scared, but not as much. Except the pale yellow and pink Pegasus. Fucking terrified.
>Honestly, it's easier dealing with the creatures, or more appropriately, monsters, that try ripping your face off.
>Just knock them the fuck out, they wake up in one of the zoo like facilities, done.
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>>25667729
"I'm mostly here to deal with the bad guys, like the ones keeping you captive. Now I know about your homeland being destroyed, and I know you must be scared in this strange new world, but I promise, you'll be taken care of. There are many facilities around the world made for your protection. You'll be given the best of care. You have nothing to worry about, right Cassie?"
>You look to your side and up at her as she listens in to her earpiece for a moment, before responding.
>"They're going to be split up across the globe far away from each other and housed in isolation chambers due to all of the facilities larger environment immitations now housing mostly predators as well as cutbacks to their funding."
>"What?!" The pink one cries out, before they all huddle together, shivering more and weeping.
>Oh for fuck sakes.
>You turn back to the crying heap of ponies.
>They're sentient.
>And sapient.
>And female.
>And they're crying.
>You feel the invisible fedora atop your head tip towards them.
"I'll..."
>Don't do it.
"I'll take them in."
>"What?"
"I'll take them in. I live off of one of the bases. I can use my own money for their housing. And I have some pull with the higher ups."
>By that you mean the Directors gay twink son thinks 'You're a big slab of beef aren't you?'
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>>25667738
>You have to have one of the suits by your side as they're the ones that do the transfers and paper work associated with this.
>You usually just write up a report saying 'Killed however many people, illegal goods safe'.
>"While we're all very appreciative of your goodwill, I assure you this isn't necessary." The white one with the purple mane and tail says to you as you fit a collar and leash around her neck.
"It's procedure, it's either this or a cage."
>She's lucky they're obviously intelligent, otherwise it would be a tazing and the cage.
>She's also obviously... Fancy. A little charm couldn't hurt.
"Don't worry, in human society this is high class fashion. I'm sure a lady like you can pull it off."
>You were hoping it would just make her more agreeable to the idea, now though she looks almost proud of it.
>You gently apply the collars and leashes to the others, fighting back the desire to tug on them like they were dogs.
"Alright, lets go."
>You walk out to your own van. Non descript, but decked out, blacked out windows, fast and powerful. You watch as they each hop on up into the back, and you tie their leashes onto a railing.
>Even though she has wings to assist her, the pale yellow one hops up and down, nervous and unsure if she can jump up.
>Like a puppy wanting to get on the couch.
>You crouch down, cradling her with an "Eep" sounding out from her.
>You place her in the van and tie her leash to the railing as well.
>The white and purple ones could probably untie them with magic. They can only just about leviate objects, being so far away from their destroyed homeland.
>But they probably wouldn't.
>And if they tried escaping you could just let out a few bursts of knockout gas in the back.
>You drive while the suit, the man in black, sits next to you.
>He stares straight forwards, not attempting any communication.
>Creepy things.
>You're not even sure what they are, but they're good at obeying orders and looking official.
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>>25667752
>Once you're back at the compound, you walk the ponies to your accomadations.
>Getting a few looks on the way.
>So what if you're bringing six fantastical beings that most of the rest of the world is unaware of, and all six of them have human level intelligence, and sexual deviants are usually the ones trying to buy them.
>Jenkins has a Dodo in his office and no-one gives him shit.
>You ask the ponies their names to take your mind off the stares you're getting.
>Once 'home' you take their leashes off, and uncollar them, except for Rarity who insists she keeps it on before trotting away to explore your home with the others.
>You sit on the couch and warily watch the suit going over paper after paper from a briefcase you didn't even notice he had. After half an hour of constant writing, stamping, and ticking, he hands you a single sheet of paper, which you sign.
>He promptly files the stacks of papers away, stands, and walks to your front door.
>You open it for him and he steps out, and turns back, offering you a hand to shake.
>You stare at it for a few seconds, before wordlessly closing the door on him.
>You look through the peephole to see him standing there.
>Unblinking.
>Unmoving.
>Unbreathing.
>For two minutes.
>Before he turns and walks away.
>You swear you're gonna kill one of those things one day.
>You turn and go to find where the six ponies are.
>AppleJack and Dash are both trapped beneath a barbell, trying to lift it, while Rarity and Twilight both try and assist with their magic, Fluttershy weeps over the situation, and Pinkie stares into the business end of a thankfully unloaded shotgun, wondering what it is.
>You suspect you'll soon be in court for having an endangered species die under your watch.

And that's all I've got so far.
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>>25667766
nice triple dubs. will read when im not eating fecal matter
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>>25661158
Yes but CYOA would be very disruptive to other writers updating and story feedback. Most CYOAs require there own thread because of the amount and intensity of feedback required from the users. I'd recommend the same.

>>25661485

Maud slave huh? This should be fun. I expect many rock jokes and puns. My interest is high for this one.

>>25666494
Oh yeah this is pure gold here, Keep going,

>>25658659
Wait if they are given equal rights then what exactly is preventing them from staying if they want to? They wouldn't be a legal slave master relationship anymore true but there's no reason it couldn't just be kinky.

>>25660202
Your world is oppressively bleak. Its like none is having a good time here not even the slave owners. I want to see more, but some good feels would be nice

>>25663461
Are you going to do something with the Flutterbutter in this story? Also I'm a bit confused I thought ponies in your universe were something only the rich ever got and Anon was confused about even seeing one. Why are they working at stores.

>>25661825
This is hard to read. Ponies being cold and miserable with little hope. Don't get me wrong its well written its just sad.
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>>25666574
Because rather then use your magic to snap off your chain and run, you decided to threaten me with a knife at a safe distance. Above everything else, you want to believe me.
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>>25667674
>SiM's Anon is a sick pervert who enjoys raping and mind break ponies
>SPA's Anon is a beta kek whiteknight
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>Leon
Nigga, that pic is of Chris. Leon's the blond nigger from RE4.
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>>25668284
Yeah I know, I typed it up before I went to try finding a picture to use, and that one suited the idea in my head more. Changed it on the word document.
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>>25667766
fucking gr8 m8, can't wait for moar!
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still waiting for jessi to deliver
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>>25668188
>Don't get me wrong its well written its just sad
Maybe I should lighten the mood?
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>>25667766
Some more.

>You gasp and pant slightly.
>Dragging three incredibly thick and soft matresses into the house would be fine.
>Three incredibly thick matresses, six blankets and covers, and eight pillows would be fine.
>The six childrens beanbag chairs for children, and the vanity mirror and desk, also fine.
>But dragging and carrying them all from the parking lot, down half a mile of sleek metal corridors to get to your 'home' inside the facility and making return trips was horrible.
>You place the three very thick soft matresses down into the spare room. These damn ponies will look like royalty sleeping on these things, absolutely iant in comparison. They could all fit on one, but would roll into each other through the night.
>You wanted to get two.
>They wanted three.
>So you got three.
>You put all the covers on, and throw the extra, extra blankets, and extra pillows down.
>They wanted that as well.
>You put down the desk and vanity mirror, a few feet away from the door to bathroom that's connected to the bedroom.
>You throw down all the beanbags into the living room, each one a different colour, their colours.
>Finally.
>Now you just need to bring in the new giant fridge that can fit your six new roommates dietary needs.
>Fuck.
>At least it's worth it in the end.
>You get to see six cute pony faces beaming up at you from the floor as you sit on the couch, breathing hard.
>The purple one, Twilight smiles happily.
>"I don't think we really got it across to you before but... Thank you. Thank you so much for all of this. We know you're putting yourself through a lot of trouble to house us and keep us safe, together, and, and..."
>"Thank you!" Pinkie yells out, tackling you.
>Well, sort of tackling you.
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>>25668846
>Theres a soft pomf sound as she pounces onto the couch and into your side, trying to hug all the way around your waist, nuzzling her face side to side.
>They all look a little teary eyed.
"Um, girls, really, it's okay... If I ever stumbled into your strange pony lands I bet you'd help me out too."
>It's always weird dealing with something with human intelligence, that looks so vastly different to you.
>You remember the first time you had a philosophical debate with a longsword.
>You live a strange life.
>"So what do you do for fun?" Pinkie asks, sitting back, smiling up to you as you resist the notion to scratch behind her ears.
>They look like pets, they're very friendly and affectionate..... And they look like pets.
>You didn't like the feeling when a Frost Giant tried to take you home, pet you, hug you, and call you George.
>These guys probably wouldn't appreciate it either.
"Well uh, I usually work out about now, and you guys can't really uh, leave." You scratch the back of your head.
>You're basically a slave owner.
>Just a really really nice one.
"But I have tonnes of movies you've never seen before." 'That won't scar you for life.'
>One of the other things you did was hide away all the non family friendly DVDs you have.
>From what you've read, and experienced so far, their homeland was incredibly child friendly.
>Dash hovers close to you. "Sounds cool Anon, just make sure there's lots of fighting will ya?"
>She starts to perform some pony equivalent of karate while flapping her wings to keep in the air.
>From what you've read it also looks like they have to put in a lot more effort into flying, Pegasi using the abundant magic in the air of their homeland to assist them and gain greater speeds.
>Some of them hop up onto the couch, others jumping back into their new beanbags.
>Pinkie starts grabbing and handing out snacks as you look for a movie to put on.
>Snow White and the Seven dwarves would do.
>And yes. You do own that.
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>>25668882
>You also don't want to show them the latest and greatest CGI effects, and then work your way backwards.
>As the movie begins to play you head into the other room with a cool pint glass of water, getting ready to lift.
>Sweat runs down your forehead as you grunt, your feet trying to plant themselves through the floor as you lift, your core tensing.
>You love this feeling.
>The last few nigh impossible reps of the last set.
>Throughout your workout, you can hear the muffled Disney songs through the door.
>When you've finished, weights clanging back into place, you head out as quietly as you can, seeing the ponies watching the tv with absolute amazement, before you continue sneaking, going to shower.
>You towel yourself off, put on some different comfortable clothes before heading out and to the kitchen. By the time you've finished making yourself something to eat, the movie is just ending, and you turn to see the mares.
>They look happy, but are also a blubbering mess.
>The ones on beanbags have all migrated to the couch, all huddled together and comforting each other as the credits play.
>Rarity dabs her eyes with an embroidened handkerchief.
>Where the fuck did she get that?
>You walk over to them, into their line of sight.
"Girls... Are you alright?"
>"Th-that... Was THE most... Romatic thing I've, I've.... WAAAAA!"
>She bursts into tears, the others joining her.
>You roll your eyes and move to scoop them up in your arms, unsure what's taken over you.
>Fucking crying girls.
>One of them is light, but lifting all six while also not applying enough pressure to crush them is like holding two huge bags of cement.
>It becomes a lot easier as you turn to sit back on the couch, bringing them against your body as you hold them.
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>>25668893
>Over time, their crying and shivering turns into light hiccups as your hands and fingers lightly stroke over their manes and their backs as you're surrounded by comfortable softness.
>Luckily they really don't mind being treated like pets.
>They're soon moving closer into you for warmth, while also trying to move back against your petting hands.
>Silly ponies.
>"Ahve said it before and Ahll say it again, fingers are amazin."
>You move your hand to just under the rim of Applejacks hat, scratching behind her ears.
>She almost melts.
>After a short while more of holding them, but less petting and scratches, they're now very comfortable and relaxed.
>Rarity looks up at you. "So Anon, are you our Prince Charming?" She giggles, as do the others.
>You notice the collar she's wearing now has the pattern of her Cutiemark stitched in.
"Oh yeah, a regular Prince Charming, that's me." You let them each hop off of you, allowing you to finally eat your post workout meal.
>You can see that they're starting to look ever so slightly tired.
>They're really a lot like children.
"Alright girls, feel free to... Do whatever. I need to leave in a while..." You don't elaborate as you stand, putting the DVD back in its case and going into your bedroom, changing into something more formal.
>As you're readying to leave you see each of the mares has a cup of warm milk to drink.
>Seriously, just like children.
>"So where are you going Anon?" Dash asks.
"Ah.. Well as you already know this isn't the usual thing for Agents, especially Captains to do. I need to meet with some of the more influential people in order to sway them over, let them know I've got this handled as well as to give them any reports I need to."
>And by that you mean you have to go on a date with the Directors gay twink son.
>You open the front door and leave.

And that's all I've got so far.
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>>25667766

Interesting. Will await further exploration.
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>>25654883

>”She hit me again!”
>Your Anon
>You’re with you’re family’s pet pony
>More accurately, Slave pony
>Even more accurately, your sister’s slave pony
>Her given name was Emerald Mist
>Your sister named her Rachel
>So she was Rachel
>Rachel was crying in your room
>Your sister punched her in the snout for trying to join in on her sleep over
“Calm down Rachel”
>You’re cleaning the blood off her snout
>She’s not calming down
>”I..I just wanted to be a good pony for Madam Peaches…”
>Your sister forced Rachel to call her Madam Peaches when she was a filly
>The name stuck with Rachel
>“She doesn’t love me any more”
>The crying had exacerbated
>Over the last year, your sister had systematically started ripping Rachel apart.
>First, she didn’t allow Rachel to sleep with her anymore
>So she got to sleep on the hard floor
>Next, she mostly stopped talking to Rachel
>No one else talked to Rachel except you, and even then it was sparingly
>You only noticed because Rachel kept coming to talk to you when no one else would
>Now there was the violence.
>Your sister started using Rachel as a punching bag.
>This was the second time she punched Rachel in the snout.
>”I’m no good am I sir… I… I’m just broken goods… I… “
>She’s hyperventilating
>Pupils are dilating
>You can tell she is seeing her possible future
>Sold to do manual labor at a sweat farm or some such shit
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>>25669008
>You slowly pet her as she starts to relax
>You close your door
>“Sir! What if Madam Pea-“
”Quiet…”
>You’re tired and need some sleep.
>Her bleeding had stopped and she was obviously tired too.
>You go to your bed and lift the covers
“Get in.”
>”Sir, p…ponies aren’t-”
>You give her the stfu look
>She nods and gets in.
>You turn off the light and get in as well, holding her close
>”Why sir? I don’t understand”
“Because I refuse to let you sleep on the cold ground again”
>You can feel her adjusting herself
“You come to me for now on if my sister neglects or hits you. Got it? Now get some sleep.”
>”Y…yes sir.”
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>>25669019
YEEEEEEEEES MOAR, MOOOOOOAR!
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>>25669019
Fuck yeah!!!!! More of this!
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>>25669041
>>25669054
Later, work to do now.
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>>25669103
O-ok...
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>>25669103
MOVE YOUR ASS OR I WILL FIND YOU YOU BRITISH FUCK
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>>25669019
More of this please.
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>>25668188
>Are you going to do something with the Flutterbutter in this story?
Buttermellow will play a small role a bit later on.

>Also I'm a bit confused I thought ponies in your universe were something only the rich ever got?
In the first part Anon did say that pony's were a bit rare, but he managed to gain Scootaloo for $2500. So ponies may be rare but only as rare as seeing a luxury car, but would cost about as much as a high end gaming computer.
I won't go into the circumstances of how Shyquiet got to working there alongside her owner in this story though.

>And Anon was confused about even seeing one. Why are they working at stores.
That confusion was due to finding Scoots in an alleyway in the bad part of town.
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>>25658837
welp that's completely new level of autism, well done anon
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>>25667766
Interesting new setting. Will Anon be doing the rehabilitating or will it be someone else?

>>25666494
This is turning out to be a great slice of life story and educational. Not what I was expecting, but a nice surprise.

>>25663461
Suspenseful scene capped off with adorableness. Scootaloo is best filly.

You need to include fluttershy in more to develop their relationship.

>>25661825
Maybe Anon will have a change of heart seeing them in such a state?

Pony is not meant for suffering

Continue I got to see were this goes.
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>>25667766
i enjoy it so far
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>>25669347
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>>25668910
Done some more.

Day 3
>You unlock, open, and step through your front door.
>Pink glossy kiss marks are left on your neck, face, and lips, and your shirt is buttoned up all wrong.
>You're not sure how to feel about this.
>The Directors son has certainly... Changed.... Since last you saw him.
>At least you've secured the ponies chances at staying here.
>You close the door behind you, locking it again.
>It's 2AM.
>You quietly creep to the second bedroom, opening the door a crack.
>They have a teddy bear nightlight plugged into the wall, illuminating the room enough for you to see them, all six in bed.
>The three huge mattresses are all pushed together, covers over them, the six ponies splayed out on top, with blankets on top of them.
>You daaw internally at the sight of ears twitching, and a few hooves sticking out, twitching.
>You quietly close the door before going to wash up and go to sleep yourself.
>You have one more day to help them settle, as much as they can be when currently their entire world is supposed to just be your home.
>And then you'll be on the clock again.
>Sent out on a moments notice.
>On top of all the neccesities they need you're also going to have to buy them some luxuries, games maybe, anything to keep them from being bored as hell.
>You have no idea how long this arrangement may last.
>So you put it out of your mind.
>Strip.
>And flop into bed, pulling the covers over you.
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>>25670520
>"Wakey wakey eggs and horrible murder that I'm super uncomfortable with so Fluttershy had to make it please get it away from me this is horrifying."
>A voice manages to sing song all of that.
>You blearily open your eyes to see Pinkie pushing a tray onto your form, on top of the covers.
>You grunt and move to sit up in bed, exposing your naked torso from your belly button and up.
>Pinkie looks horribly uncomfortable, her face reddening, sweating slightly, eyes transfixed on you.
"Uh, sorry Pinks, I guess you must be super freaked out by meat as a herbivore."
>You take the tray, pulling it into a more comfortable position, getting it further away from her.
>"Yes... Yes that's right." She answers, breathing deeply.
>She starts to slowly moonwalk out of the room.
>"Well I hope you like me. It. It, I hope you like it. Breakfast. Because you look delicious. It. The breakfast. It looks delicious. Umm, bye!"
>She opens the door, leaps through, and slams it closed.
>Well.. That was nice of her.
>You hungrily wolf down the tasty breakfast of champions, before getting dressed for another day of 'Look after the rare mythical creatures that apparantly aren't as important as Chupacabras, Mothmen, Tooth Fairies, Skinwalkers, Mermaids, Krampus, Manticores, Weeping Angels, Zombies, Golems, Lizardmen, Splicers, Dodos, Bunyips, Yetis, Minotaurs, Chimeras, Centaurs, Thunderbirds, Cockatrice, Sirens, Sickel Weasels, Gremlins, Ya-te-veo, Griffins, Harpies, Giants, Cyclops, Wendigos, Sphynx, and a whole host of grey spindly deceptively strong things'. Seriously. Fuck all those things.
>Okay, most of them are cool, but still.
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>>25670524
>You head on out to the sounds of Pinkie saying something about "super muscular and-" they turn to you.
>Fluttershy hides behind her curtain of a mane. "D-did you enjoy breakfast?"
"Yeah I did, thanks Shy."
>Twilight then jumps in "Well he have to try paying you back in some way, for now kindness will have to do."
>The girls all smile to each other and you.
>You chuckle a little, they're so enthusiastic.
"Well thanks. So, is there anything else you'd like? Now that I've gotten you all the things you really need, anything else I won't really have to worry about getting it quickly, so we can just buy online."
>You see six quizical looks all directed at you.
"Right... Let me just show you." You say, grabbing your laptop.
>A few hours later you've bought a tonne of glow in the dark space stickers for the ceiling of their room, a ridiculous amount of pampaering products, a lot of famous literature, stuffed animals, and a giant exercise wheel.
>Luckily you managed to hide all the bdsm stuff that surrounded the link to that last one.
>Looks like you've never afford going on holiday though. Ever.
>You've also set up your music system for easy access to all the super girly songs these mares actually like.
>You end up spending most of the day just talking and hanging out with them.
>This is so comfy.
>You have six mares all trying to cuddle with you as you talk about your life and theirs, your arms around them, hands idly stroking through their manes.
>"The worst part is I never even got to kiss a stallion. I thought I'd have my whole life ahead of me for something like that, and now I'm stuck here with you."
>Four other girls all agree with her plight, voicing their own similar situation.
>You can't help but think that Rarity must be lying though.
>And Dash makes a 'bleurgh noise' and acts disinterested by the whole thing.
>Twilight blushes. "I-I don't mean it like that though, o-of course I'm happy to be here, it's just-"
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>>25670535
>You decide to put a stop to this before she accidentally summons a spaghetti monster.
"Twilight, it's alright, I get what you mean."
>There's a comfortable silence for a minute.
>"Anon, are human kisses nice?"
>Now it's your turn to blush.
"Uh well uh, yes, I mean kisses are always nice."
>"Well I don't know about that Anon, I can't imagine kissing a Griffin would be too great." She smiles.
>You forgot how easy ponies are with the idea of intimacy with another species, having come from a land where... Well, that sort of just happens.
>"Do you think, maybe, you could give me one kiss? J-just so I know what it's like is all!" Twilight blushes hard.
>"Well darling that's not really fair to the rest of us is it?"
>"Yeah, I want one too!"
>Well Dash sure fucking changed her tune.
>There's another not quite so comfortable silence for a minute.
>And then another.
>You let out a sigh.
>You are supposed to keep these beings content...
>And one chaste kiss won't change anything.
>You fucking freak.
>You're going to kiss a pony.
"One kiss. Just so you know what it's like. It's not going to be this life changing event, it's just sort of nice." You let out another sigh.
>Your heart is beating so hard.
>Thump thump thump.
>You can hear it in your ears your heart is pumping so hard over the idea of the thought of doing something so... Unholy?
>No, it's not that bad, but it sure is fucking weird.
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>>25670551
>Your heart beats so loud as she closes her eyes and puckers her lips.
>Right, they're like children.
>This'll be nothing.
>You'll barely have to do anything, and she'll probably think you've infested her with cooties, run off, and rinse her mouth out.
>Your heart beats so loud, you don't hear the knock at your door.
>Twilight must be in a similar boat.
>Pinkie however, being the sweet and oblivious to consequences pony that she is, calmly trotted to the door, unlocked, and opened it.
>And there stands Jenkins, holding one of your reports in his hands, probably here to complain that the information on your last report wasn't detailed enough.
>Again.
>I mean come on, this isn't a school essay, he can't just tell you the minimum number of words you can use.
>But that's not really the problem right now.
>The problem is that the door opened, and his sight landed on you, just as your lips connected with Twilights.
>You do barely more than move your lips and suckle ever so slightly, for a meager two seconds.
>You pull your head back to look at her.
>A few seconds pass before her eyes finally flutter open. She lets out a shakey breath.
>"Oh... Oh my...."
>You can barely even hear her.
>Your eyelines notice the other ponies aren't looking at you, they're instead looking at....
>Oh fuck.
>The door closes slowly.
"Oh no...."
>You lower twilight to the couch, she seems to be... Pretty much out of it. It must be from embarassment. Nothing else.
>Nope.
>You however are slightly freaking out.
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>>25670564
>No. No need to panic.
>This is like when a parent catches their son masturbating.
>They look away quick, walk away, never discuss it, but the son always cringes over the memory of it.
>You sit there for ten minutes, the girls, Twilight now included, asking if you're okay.
>No.
>Jenkins is a cunt.
"I'll uh, I'll be back in a while. Just need to see if... If everything's okay."
>As you exit your home, the first thing you see across the hall is a printed sheet of A4 paper, laminated, stuck to the wall.
>'Anon Kisses Ponies' is the title, it goes over Jenkins account of the event, and has a photo of a horse, the hue changed to purple, mouth pressed to a photo of you taken from your file, and a love heart above the two of you.
>Ten minutes.
>You start to walk down to different open offices, finding more posters.
>The fucker did this in ten minutes.
>Your eyes are affected by the gravitational pull of great heaving jugs.
>You turn to see Cassie in all her tight uniform voluptuous glory.
>"I can't believe I was going to make you my booty call."
>She strides away, shaking her head.
>What.
>WHAT.
>You start marching to Jenkins closed off office.
>You'll destroy him.
>Just one good punch, leaning all your weight into it, that should disfigure him nicely.
>You storm all the way to his office, raising a hand to knock at the door.
>You let out a breath.
>No, this is a bad idea.
>You can't do this.
>This isn't you.
>You're better than this.
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>>25670576
>If you're going to fuck someone up, you're going to make an entrance at least.
>You take a short step back, and then bring your foot up, extending it out hard and fast, your other foot planted firmly against the ground like a mighty tree.
>The doorframe around the lock almost explodes from the impact, the door swinging open wildly.
>And there before you is Jenkins.
>Balls deep in his Dodo.

That's it for now.
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>>25669019
Please continue....i need my fix man
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>>25670818
I'm fiending for more!!!!!!
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Can't get enough of this omg so nice
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So I had this idea, nothing really blown out but an idea nonetheless.

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>You hate the night shift.
>Besides the simple fact your entire sleep schedule is fucked up beyond belief, there is jack shit to do.
>Not really though.
>There’s always stuff to do, that’s what the boss says anyway.
>But he’s a fucking liar.
>You and your bro on the day shift fucking run this show.
>Passing through the doors you sigh as you know what the night is going to consist of.
>”Anon! Over here.”
>Speak of the prick and he shall appear.
“Whats up boss?”
>”Listen, Pinkie’s gotten into the cookie dough again. Rainbow smashed through a bookcase, and Roseluck was trying to grow a garden in her pen again.”
>Fucking dammit.
>Can’t you ever have an easy night?
“Alright, gotcha.”
>”Have fun Anon, I’m out for the night.”
>With that your boss, the ever vigilant asshole flipped you off and headed out.
>No wonder the three of you got along so well.
>You all hated each other’s guts, but you still worked together.
>That counts for something… right?
>Taking a deep breath you ready yourself for the ‘fun’ you’re about to have.
>Walking through the door into the back area you set yourself to work.
>Such is the life of working at the “Equine Animal Shelter”.

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So thoughts? If another writefriend wants to use the idea be my guest. The premise was that for those slaves that are truly no longer wanted would be dropped off at the shelter where they stayed until getting a new owner.
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>>25669019
>Weeks Pass by with little incident
>Rachel has been bunking with you virtually every night
>Her conversation is pleasant
>She's quiet when you're working
>She sits in your lap when your playing vidergmzzz
>Then another bad day
>Rachel is laying on your desk
>Tears dripping from her eyes
>She hasn't said a word while you worked
>Working on her
>Your sister took her curling iron and held it to her flank
>"S...she said she was going to give me my cutie mark..."
>Rachel sniffed
>You were cleaning her burn
>Awful smell
>Awful sight of burned pink fur
>You were reading up on first aid for burns
>Your parents probably wouldn't take Rachel to the vet
>You had no cash
>Rachel and you were going to have to make due with what you could find
>"Sir... I.."
"Don't call me sir. Call me by my name."
>"A..anon, why?"
>You pause
"A long time ago, I had a wonderful Dog. My Dad bought her, and I loved her. She just had one flaw"
>Rachel tried to get a better look at me
>"What?"
"She dug holes. She dug holes in my Dad's <s>perfect<\s> backyard."
>"So what? You disciplined her right?"
"Yes, but she had a compulsion to dig."
>Momentary pause
"One day, my dad had enough and called me out to the back yard. Do you know what happened next?"
>"No..."
"He choked her. He grabbed her by the throat and throttled her Rachel. And I watched. He killed her and I just watched."
>She bent up and looked at you in the eyes
>"W..I"
"I failed her Rachel, I could have tried something, hit my dad, grabbed the water hose and distracted... but I just watched."
>She keeps staring at you
>"Anon, I... I'm sorry... I didn't know"
>You nod
>You get back to work
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>>25671441
My face is an inch from the screen reading this........
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>>25671577
kek
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>>25671441
and then they fucked.

please
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>>25669019
s-Sir is this an oc? I would really like to know what she looks like.

My relatively mundane idea is getting writefagged. My face is hurting from smiling too much. I love you.
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>>25672113
Pink Pony with straight mane
Slightly white highlights in mane
Has just reached adult sized (probably, might gain a 1/2 inch or so)
No cutie mark due to the fact that she's spent her entire life pleasing one immature human being rather than trying to find a talent (or even stumbling into one).
Will have scarring on the left hip (right over where her cutie mark would be) due to incident.
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>>25672113
Forgot: Called Emerald Mist due to eye color, not coat
>>25672036
I am compelled to tantalize the readers now with sitcom esque "Will they or won't they" bullshit

That being said, I'm writing these as stress relief from finals. After finals, i'll try something more scheduled.
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>>25672036
Not so fast! Longer the buildup, the sweeter it will be!
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>>25672230
I think I can picture her. She is beautiful Mr.Poet. I already want to drown the little sister in a backed up toilet......
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>>25666494
still loving it so far
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>>25671441
>punching ponies
>burning them with curling irons
>choking dogs to death
A family of sociopaths.
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>>25671441
Please happy end. bump
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>>25670589
Ahahahhahahh. dis gon be gud.
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>>25670589
I...what
your pacing seems a bit strange. But. its certainly an interesting story
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>>25671441
have the impression that Anon's sister used Rachel to vent their anger at their probable "Teen Problems" whatever, but being a submissive creature the ponie becomes the ideal victim, now Anon commented as his father murderer your pet in the past, I can think of that insanity runs in the family or sister simply follow the parental example, i hope that in the future can continue your good story
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More incoming soon. For now, have relevant to the story Earth Porn.
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>>25672230
her mane is pink too? but with white highlights?
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>>25666494

>Eventually you reach the true last bastion of civilisation; Green River.
>A small town of roughly 1000 you could resupply at...
>Too bad the selection at the local grocer is small, and the prices high.
>However, driving all the way from Denver, and stopping a bit on your drive through the Rocky's, you decide to pick up a camp site here in Green River.
>The state park is cheap, and has significantly more facilities at your disposal than what you'll have starting tommorow.
>Showers, toilets, running water in general, electricity, all become invaluable resources you just don't have much of doing your kind of work.
>As you exit the interstate to drive into the city, you notice Maud looking a rock you pulled out of your back seat earlier.
Ya alright, Maud?
>"This rock reminds me of Boulder."
>You raise your eyebrow.
>"Boulder. He was my pet rock. Before..."
>That still doesn't make sense...
>"I miss my family."
>Oh... OH! Oh...
>Shit, how are you gonna deal with this?
Uhh... Sorry... I wish I could help you there, but I really don't know how.
>"That's fine. You are a nice human, and you atleast want me to do work I know and enjoy. That's better than I've had to deal with in years."
>"I'm sure my family is so spread out... Finding them would be impossible anyway."
>Your heart...
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>You arrive at the Green River state park, and pay for a site for the night.
>Before you drive past the gate, the attendant informs you of a few things... Particularly...
>"And remember, no ponies in the shower house. They can use the toilets near your campsite, but she isn't allowed to use the showers."
>Rats... This is the last chance for that for probably a week.
Alright... Whatever.
>You drive into the camping area after putting the piece of paper that identifies your truck as having paid for a site for the night onto the dashboard.
Sorry Maud... Apperantly no shower for you tonight.
>"That's fine, Anon. I was able to be bathed this morning before you picked me up."
Yeah, well, this is the last shower chance for probably a week. Starting tommorow, we are gonna be in the heart of the swell, and we are only gonna come out when we need gasoline and ice.
And thats only to some shit gas station here or Emery if we are too far west... Fuckin 110 miles of no services on the god damned interstate...
>You pull into your spot for the camp site, and stop the engine.
>The sun is getting low in the sky.
You familiar with tent camping, Maud? I got a tent for you, and a tent for me. Also, got you some good warmer weather sleeping stuff as well... Some small cots to keep us elevated off the ground while we are sleeping.
>You think back to the first (and last) time you slept directly on the ground at this elevation at this time of year.
>Like sleeping on a god damned frying pan.
>Shit doesn't get bearable until like 4 AM, and by then, you don't have that long before the sun rising wakes your ass up.
>A cot that only keeps you a few inches off the ground makes a world of difference.
Alright, lets set up for the night, and used to the equipment before we are out in the wilderness.
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>>25674428

>After about 15 minutes, you manage to have 2 tents setup, and ready for habitation.
>In that time, you also have managed to set up your mobile kitchen...
>A large box that opens into a nice, easy 'chuck wagon' you can set on a folding table, plus a 2 burner propane stove.
You like rice and beans, Maud?
>"I have eaten rice, and I have eaten beans, and found them acceptable."
Alright then. We are gonna have...
>Fuck.
>Ponies are vegetarian.
Uhh... Vegetarian cajun red beans and rice.
>You'll have to cook your sausage on the side and mix it into your portion.
>The camp site luckily has a water spigot located at it, so you can top off your water stores in your truck, and get all your cooking and cleaning done without tapping into that.
>dried onion, dried garlic, cajun seasoning... delicious, tasty, and easy to do in the wilderness.
>And tastes great on beans and rice as a sort of soup.
>While you are cooking, Maud dons her newly purchased smock, and digs through some of the small rock samples you have piled up in the back seat of the truck's cab.
>"That's granite. Thats a nice piece of quartz. Thats rhodochrosite. That's syenite."
>Her knowledge, and despite her monotone voice, great enjoyment of geology puts a smile on your face.
>"Quartz with molybdenite... neat. It has Hexagons."
>After finishing up your cooking, including hydrating up some dry sausage for your part of the dish, you call Maud to the camp site's picnic table.
Aight, Maud, Dinner.
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>>25674454

>She looks at you, and puts down a piece of rock you keep shoved in a small cubby on the driver's side.
>Not a specimen that can be found in Colorado, but it makes you feel closer to where you grew up.
>"That's a wierd piece of rhyolite. Is that blue quartz?"
Yeah... Llanite from Central Texas. Only one outcrop thats publicly accessable, and even on private property there isn't much of it. Not many places you find something that looks like that.
>You don't want to tell her its also called the Babyhead Rhyolite, or the story behind that name...
Human igneous petrologists are silly, and like to make up lots of extraneous names for their rock types. It is just a wierd porphyritic rhyolite. Fuckers make life too hard on themselves.
>You sigh.
Or, more likely, they make it miserable for anyone not in their little clique to understand what the hell they are talking about.
Anyway, dinner is served.
>You put about half of the food into a bowl, and set it for Maud, then mix some sausage in the rest, and dump it onto a bowl for yourself.
>... How the hell do ponies eat food like this without hands?
>You take a few bites of yours, and watch Maud.
>She just kinda... Sticks her face in it, and eats.
>Huh... simple enough.
>Her face is even clean when she looks up, and speaks to you.
>"This is acceptable. Thank you for cooking."
>You both finish eating, and you use the faucet to clean up all the cookware and bowls used.
>The sun is just about down at this point, so you decide its time to build a little camp fire, and get your drink on.
>You pull a few logs out of the bed of the truck, and some kindling, and build a fire in your sites fire ring.
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>>25674485

>You also grab your folding camp chairs, and set them out.
>Once you get the fire started, you invite Maud to sit in the other empty chair.
>She jumps into it, and sits in it, much like a dog might.
>Its a bit on the small side, but it still works.
>You chug your first beer.
>Life is good.
>You stand up to grab another beer.
Maud, you want a beer too?
>"Sure, why not."
>You go back to your cooler, grab two more beers, and carry them back to the camp fire.
>You pop both of them open, and set one in Maud's cup holder, and sit down in your chair, and begin to sip your own.
So, most of our work is gonna be in detailing out the members the Chile and Moenkopi. Most of the other stuff shouldn't need quite as much work.
>You take another sip of beer.
>"How do you get all these wierd names for these rocks? Why not just call them sandstones. Or Limestones."
Well... The names come from the place where someone first described them. And we give them such names, because we want to map them over a large area, and names make it easy to keep track of them on the large scale.
>"Makes sense. I guess."
Eh, it might make more sense once we get out and start mapping stuff, Maud.
>You take another sip of your beer, and look up, enjoying the beautiful night sky.
>Out of the corner of your eye, you see Maud manage to grab her beer, and down that sucker in one quick gulp.
>Damn... Pony knows how to drink.
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>>25674312
you history is very good RM-Writing, is obvious you know of geology and really is a fine and educative, take you time and continue in the future
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>>25674508

>"That's different beer."
Yeah, its cheap shit. Tastes nice after a day of work though.
>"I like it."
>Seems Maud has good taste in cheap ass beer.
>You sit silently around the campfire, enjoying the ambience.
>Eventually, you check the time.
Damn... about time to go to bed.
>You stand up, and stretch, and then proceed to get some water to dump on the fire.
Remember, Maud, your tent is the Yellow one. I'll wake you up in the morning.
>She walks up to the tent.
>"How do I open it?"
>Aww shit... You forgot zippers take a reasonable amount of physical dexterity to operate...
>Atleast it means she won't be able to wander off in the night without making a lot of noise messing up the tent.
>You move and open the zipper, allowing Maud entry.
>After she steps inside, you zip the door shut.
Gnite, Maud.
>"Good night, Anon."
>You open your tent, and lay down on the cot.
>Pulling up your phone, you set a 5:30 AM alarm.
>Always best to get up, and camp taken down, and on the road before the day gets too hot.
>You set your phone into one of the tent's storage pockets, and let the sweet embrace of sleep overtake you.

Done for tonight.

Now, with paste: http://pastebin.com/v2j02fq3

Also, shill for the IRC channel. #slavepone on rizon.
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>>25674558
Bump for more
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>>25674558
>IRC
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>>25661692
>Pulling on a horse's head
>'don't get free reign back there'
Not sure if that was deliberate, but I chuckled.

Anyhow, please do continue this. It's quite interesting, a departure from most of the stories here.
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>>25670589
give me the FUCKING MEATLOAF
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>>25671341
Looks pretty interesting. Worth dropping a post or two on if you have writer's block on the Scoots thing or something.

>>25670589
This looked horribly stereotypical... right up until that last line. Holy shit you got me there - keep going.
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>>25670589
Is it bad that I'm envisioning Anon as Doomguy?
Honestly a little sad he didn't open the door shouting "Knock Knock! Who's there? ME! Me! Me! Me! Me! Me!"
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>>25670589
I want Jenkins to cum inside Dodo.

This is cute and silly m8. I thought it was going to be edgy and stupid. Thank you for proving me wrong.


>>25671441
>Assaults animals
>Burns/tortures animals
>Kills dogs
>Fucking slowly kills dogs

Okay listen whether you see them as just animals or not NOBODY does this and isn't also a cruel sociopath to other humans. Killing a dog like that would get you fined out the ass for animal cruelty at the very least and put you on a mentally disturbed watch list at worst. I find it hard that somebody who does that would be allowed to keep their children if it was known as that is one of the many signs of a abusive as hell parent.

Look. I love you story so far and I really like the older brother looking after/falling in love with his sister slave pony prompt, but maaaaaaaaan are you pushing my suspension of disbelief when it comes to average humans acting this edgy and being allowed to act this edgy without others freaking out.
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>>25675966
I want to know where Jingle Jangle is I want my cute moon horse snuggling damn it.
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>>25671441
If his sister doesn't have her life ruined by the end of this, I hope that you, as the author, drown in a lake of diarrhea and porcupine quills.

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>>25675923
>NOBODY does this

Underage detected.
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>>25670589
this is fanfuckingtastic
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>>25670551
>At first i was putting off reading your story for some reason. But now that I've gotten into it you're pressing all my buttons quite nicely.


>>25670589

Goddamnit. Highlarious.

obligatory pony picture because any green with anon innocently getting kissy kissy with the ponies deserves more attention.
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>>25676180
I'm not sure why I was Quoting with that first part
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>>25676021
Are you suggesting that people who abuse animals aren't sociopaths in the making?
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>>25676234
I'm suggesting that the sheltered toddler who said "NOBODY does that" is so closed minded that both the rigors of daylight and the darker depths of the internet are unknown territory to them, because if they had, they would know how realistic and borderline common such cruelty is.

Choking a dog to death? That's terrible, for sure, but speaking proportionately, that's so fucking tame.
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>>25676021
>>25676379

>Doesn't read the entire sentence
>Cherry picks one part of a statement of the rest
>Uses it to meme
>Calls someone else underage

wew lad.

Or in case you don't quite understand

"NOBODY does this and isn't also a cruel sociopath to other humans" != "NOBODY does this". Thanks for lacking the ability to finish reading simple sentences, yeah I'm sure. He that guy is the one who isn't grown up.
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>>25676646
god that was easy
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>>25670589
Thanks to everyone who responded. I've never written before except one of the first Flutter rape threads. Wasn't sure if I should continue or not.

Day 4
>You step out of the shower, barely drying yourself before you can no longer keep away the temptation.
>You look in the mirror and flex.
>'Damn I'm fine.'
>Since you caught Jenkins fucking the Dodo in his office, and subsequently shouting out for as many people to come look while holding the door wide open, everyone has seemingly forgotten about you kissing a pony.
>Especially as Jenkins was the only witness to it.
>While there were many witnesses to Jenkins.... Oddity.
>Plus the semen leaking from the Dodo as it went wild and ran out of his office, giving many unsuspecting people a fright.
>It's not every day you're confronted by a thought to be extinct creature with a gaping asshole dripping cum as it squawks in panic.
>And hell, anyone who does remember the story of you kissing a pony would probably think it was just Jenkins trying to throw people off of his own weird sexual fancies.
>Poor Dodo.
>At least Jenkins was on the small side.
>You spent the remainder of the evening finding every one of those pony kissing posters and tearing them down.
>And of course the mares other than Twilight all kept pestering you for their own kisses.
>You had to cave in. You'd get no sleep otherwise.
>One after another, you give them small, two second long kisses, each of them having the same sort of reaction as Twilight.
>You're not sure if it's good or bad for them, or a mixture of the two.
>You're also not sure if throughout the ages Stallions just sucked at kissing, or maybe it's your vastly different biology.
>Like, chemicals coming together, or something.
>Fuck, you don't know, you mostly just punch or shoot things.
>As they staggered to bed, Twilight began to mumble "You know, I'm not sure if I got the full experience of that first kiss....-" Before deciding not to risk any more and continuing to the bedroom.
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>>25676864
>You apply an odourless deodrant to yourself, having gone through the rest of your routine.
>You're like Patrick Bateman.
>If he was also concerned with not being pounced on by monsters.
>You don't want anything to potentially catch wind of your scent, or the scent of the chemicals in other deodrants.
>Yes. You're on duty today.
>Once again the girls made you breakfast without even having to ask.
>They're real nice.
>You dress, and arm yourself.
>Stepping out to begin talking to the mares, you notice they seem more shy and bashful around you than they did before.
>But with your phone going off, you don't really have the time to wonder why that is.
"Sorry girls, thanks for breakfast, but I've got to go, have a good day."
>You smile to them as you leave, answering your phone.
>You're soon in your van, being given the rundown of an abandoned military base whilst you're driving.
>Oh boy.
>You're pretty sure you've read about this on /x/.
>And two gun toting 'innawoods' survival type campers have gone missing.
>Well, one and four fifths of the campers.
>They did find a leg.
>You find yourself bouncing in your seat a little.
>This is gonna be cool.
>And more importantly, it'll take your mind off of potentially getting the ponies taken off your hands.
>And who knows what would happen to you.
>Being seen kissing one of them, however brief. Is a big no no.
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>>25676875
>You're definitely not supposed to get sexually involved with the completely different species, that's also endangered, that you're looking after.
>You haven't seen Jenkins since. No word of firing, just gone.
>And that was for fucking a stupid bird that would walk up to a rifle and happily get wrecked by it.
>Obviously you should never do that in an office environment, but... Your head will start hurting if you keep thinking about this.
>Just don't kiss the ponies.
>You let them get a taste of it, so to speak, now it's done. No more.
>You look to your weapons, deciding to take your mind off of it for reals this time.
>Sawn off shotgun, cartridges full of rock salt.
>Flask of holy water.
>Rosary beads.
>A bible.
>wooden stakes.
>Silver knives.
>Oak baton.
>Hey, you never know right?
>Reports of, 'Guys got killed, good luck working with that' don't exactly give you a lot of information on what you're up against.
>And of course, your Glock 17, standard ammo, as well as an AS50. A sexy fucking sniper rifle.
>Unfortunately, whatever you're up against, you're expected to bring it back alive unless the global facilities already contain a certain number of the creature.
>In which case, kill it before it kills you, leave no evidence behind.
>Joy.
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>>25676878
>You are officer Nick Jackof.
>Your partner is off sick, and the department couldn't afford to assign you another.
>That's okay though, you're only a year away from retirement, and after all the medals you've earned, and cases you've solved, you've been stationed on a nice, empty, long, empty, deserted, very empty, very long, and extremely empty, section of road.
>You let out a long happy sigh, listening to your favourite tunes on the radio. You're about to open the box of poptarts your wife Mildred made for you, when you see in your rear view mirror, an incredible sight.
>A van.
>Driving down this section of road.
>The road where you haven't seen any other vehicle of any description, ever.
>You perk up slightly at this, might as well do your job every once in five years right?
>You watch as the van drives passed, going the speed limit exactly.
>The left tail light is busted.
>Eh, might as well.
>You let off a short woop woop of siren as you drive after the van, which promptly slows to a crawl, and pulls over.
>You step out of your car, and wiggle your belt about before striding up to the drivers side.
>The blackened window rolls down, to reveal a young man, sweating bullets, on the seat next to him a small mountain of tissues, all soaked with red liquid.
>"Evening officer, is there a problem?"
"You've just got a tail light out, thought I'd let you know. I won't write you up or anything. License and registration?"
>He pulls open his glove compartment, and a flood of different passports, licenses, and bricks of different currencies of paper money wrapped in cellophane fall out.
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>play slavemaker because bored
>they add twily as a slave
>it's fucking twilycorn
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>>25676883
>Must be a busy guy.
>"Ah, h-here you go officer."
You briefly look it over.
"Ah, everything looks in order here." You go to hand him back the items, ready to leave.
>There's a great thump in the back of his van, followed by a moaning.
>You decide to hold onto his means of identity a little longer.
"... Sir, I'm doing to look through the back of your van, do you mind?"
>".......... No...."
>You walk to the back, and open the doors.
>There you see a naked, genderless, dirty being, very tall and large, with sinewy yet vastly powerful looking muscles. It's tied up with many steel cables, and has a head that looks halfway between a mans and a deers, including the antlers.
>You can see where it's popped it's bones out, trying to escape from its bonds.
>The fingers of its hands are twice as long as you'd expect, ending in four inch long razor sharp claws.
>Its legs are longer than normal, ending in hooves, making it even taller if it were to stand.
>The eyes are blood red as it stares into your very soul.
>And it has an erection.
>It opens its mouth, revealing multiple rows of jagged teeth, drool dripping from them.
>"It's okay. Go to sleep."
>You stare at it for a few seconds more, then slowly close the doors to the van, and walk back up to the drivers side.
>You hand him back his license and registration.
"Have a good day sir."
>You walk back to your car, and start to reverse, and reverse, and reverse.
>Mildreds getting beaten tonight.
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>>25676888
>Fuck your shoulder hurts.
>Fucking Deer Men.
>Fucking terrifying Deer Men.
>You drive back to the facility, parking your Van in a containment area.
>You go to meet one of the suits, one of the men in black, and you give them the rundown of what happened, and obviously the type of creature that it is.
>He stares wordlessly at you.
>You want to reach up and poke his face.
>It's probably a mask.
"Well, alright, have a good day."
>At that he smiles the biggest grin.
>You almost die.
>And then you walk out of there.
>For fuck sakes, the higher ups are trying to teach them about emotions and customer relation type shit again aren't they?
>Your whole body shivers at the vision of that grin being pounded into your memory forever.
>You could fuck Hitomi Tanaka like a runaway freight train and not cum for a year.
>You enter your home.
"Hey girls, we'll talk in a second, just need to go to my whiskey room."
>You try not to smile at the thought, wanting to maintain your cool guy illusion.
>The whiskey room is a tiny coat room.
>With a single light.
>A stool.
>A table.
>A sewing kit.
>A lighter.
>And a bottle of whiskey.
>It's where you go to patch up your wounds and feel like the biggest badass in the world.
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>>25676893
>As you make the slightest of turns however.
>"GAAAASP!!"
>The six mares are all over you, moving you towards the couch.
>"Now you just lay right there mister! Um, if you want to, that is."
>What?
>"Oh my that looks so painful, you're being a brave colt to endure this."
>The girls strip you of the upper half of your clothes, and you feel rivers of blood treakle down from your right shoulder blade.
"It's fine I can do it myse-"
>"There there Anon, it's okay...."
>Pinkie lightly strokes your head.
"Really, I can-"
>"I'll put some hot chocolate on for him."
>"I'll grab his blankets!"
>Rarity and Dash both make their intentions known as Fluttershy is already starting to do what you would usually do.
>Except without leaving a jaggedy sewing pattern from trying to sew your own back.
>"Ahll get the marshmellows, Twi?"
>"Way ahead of you." She smiles and zips off.
>You're soon patched up, holding a mug of hot chocolate, marshmellows floating in it, covers lightly draped around you, Twilight placing plasters with smiles on them over the smallest of scrapes you have, and kissing each of the 'booboos' better.
>The beginning of Lady and the Tramp starts to play on the tv as you're once again surrounded by soft cuddling poines.
"I'm a man damnit..." You grumble.
>Pinkie slides the stem of a flower through the locks of your hair, you can just about see the blurry redness of the flower coming from the corner of your vision.
"A manly man..."

And that's all so far.
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>>25676888
>Mildred
lol what? why?
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>>25676899
I'm really liking your story so far. The pacing feels a little wonky but not bad.
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viva la fegel
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>>25674485

>muh serious rockhound fiction

Goddammit. It is true, someone will eventually write good fiction that combines almost anything you like with pony.
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>Back home from school
>Open front door
>Can already hear hammering
>It’s coming from your room
>You see your sister slamming her fist in your room’s cheap door
>Find out that she is looking for Rachel, but can’t find her, this is the last place she could be
>Point out that you’re too tired for this and want some sleep
>Sister is being adamant
>Fine
>Unlock door
>Quick Glance
>Rachel isn’t found in your mess of a room
>Sister hrumphs and walks away
>Close and lock door
>Go over to pile of dirty cloths
>Stick hand in
>Find Fur
>Rachel’s head plops up
“Are you okay Rachel?”
>Rachel nods
>She plops out of the pile of dirty cloths
>”I thought she was going to hit me again…”
>She turns to her flank and looks at her scar
>She flinches
>You plop up on the bed
>In the past, Rachel would have just laid next to the bed
>Now she has no compunction following you onto it
>You start to play vidergmzezzz while she lays on you
>”Anon… thank you for giving me a key”
>You nod, more interested in the game you’re playing
“You do realize that you’re going to have to face her sooner or later, and you’re going to have to come up with a damn good excuse right? I’m not taking the fall for this.”
>Rachel nods

>Some time passes
>Now just watching TV
>”Anon… can you please touch my scar?”
“Wut?”
>Rachel gives very subdued look
>”Please?”
>Strange, but fine
>You start to rub her scar
>She shudders
>After a few moments you stop
>She looks back at you
>”Anon, is it supposed to feel weird?”
“The scar on my leg feels weird whenever something brushes against it, so I guess so.”
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>>25677755
>She nods and buries her head in your chest

>”Anon… how do I get my cutie mark?”
>You pause
>You remember reading about them during a Wikipedia binge
“I think you get one when you find something that you either really like or something that you’re good at. Not sure, memories are splotchy. Generally happens when a pony is still young.”
>”… can a pony be too old to get a cutie mark?”
“I… I honestly have no clue”
>A few moments pass before she speaks up
>”W…what do you think mine would be?”
>You have no fucking clue
>Inspiration hits
”Boxing”
>Rachel adjusts herself, slightly startled
>”Boxing? Like making boxes?”
“No, like 12 rounds of two guys beating the shit out of each other Boxing”
>”I… I don’t understand.”
“You take what my sister dishes out. Every minor insult ever major burn and you’re still here, the same filly who was stuffed by my dad in a Christmas box and told to shut up for 4 hours”
>Rachel stares at you
>”I… I can’t tell if your being mean or wh-“
“I’m not being mean. Right now, you’re going 12 rounds with my sister and you’ve managed to take the swings or dodge them. And you’re still here. You haven’t tried to run away or get revenge. You keep standing back up and she keeps going for the final punch.”
>She takes a moment to take it in
>”I… I never saw it that way. Thank you”
>You nod and start to scratch behind her ear.
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>”Anon… how do I get my cutie mark?”
This brought me to tears. Real shit man.
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>>25674558
>You awaken to the screeching of your phone's alarm.
>Up, and at 'em... Time to get up for a day of proper ass field work.
>Silencing the alarm, you roll off your cot, onto the hard ground, and dig around for your change of clothes for the day.
>Long khakis with cargo shorts, a light colored, long sleeved, light material shirt, and wool socks.
>And a sturdy pair of boots, of course.
>You hear rustling coming from the nearby tent.
>The alarm must have roused Maud as well.
>You change out yesterday's clothing for todays, then unzip the door to your tent, and stand up, and get your first good stretch of the day in.
>After properly tying up your boots, you go over and give Maud's tent a light shake.
Hey, you awake in there Maud?
>"Your alarm is quite loud."
>You unzip the tent slightly.
When you are ready to come out, you should be able to open it up by sticking your hoof through that hole and kinda pushing to the side.
>You move over to your portakitchen.
>Time for everyones favorite morning start... instant coffee!
>You light the stove, then fill a pot with water, and then set it onto the burner.
You take coffee, Maud?
>"Coffee is an acceptable morning stimulant beverage."
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>>25678235

>Within a few minutes, the water is boiling. You turn off the stove, and pour the water into two waiting mugs.
>You scoop in some coffee crystals, and stir.
>Tastes awful, but is quick and easy.
>You move to begin taking down your tent while you wait for the coffee to become not mouth scalding hot.
>Within a few minutes, your tent is down, your equipment ready to be stowed, and your coffee, ready to drink, and Maud is stepping out of her tent.
Up and at 'em, slowpoke. We need to get on the road soon so we can to get more stuff done before it gets too hot to be walking around. Coffee is on the picnic table.
>As Maud moves to get her coffee, you move to take down her tent.
>Its a little easier... She doesn't have excess clothing to pack up, so you just need to roll up the sleeping bag, collapse the cot, and tear down the tent.
>You manage to get it all taken down in a few minutes, ready to pack in the truck.
>"Anon, this coffee is terrible."
Yeah, it's instant coffee. Quick, and easy, even if it tastes like crap. Gets ya going better than regular coffee... the little bit of rage you get from the bad taste adds a nice edge.
>You chuckle.
Here, have a granola bar, Maud.
>You grab and open a granola bar for yourself, while you load everything into the back of the truck.
>Maud nibbles the granola bar slowly as you stow the stove and kitchen hutch.
>Looking about the camp site, it appears you have everything packed and readya to go, and no trash left behind.
Aight, lets get in the truck. You can finish your coffee and granola bar once we hit the road.
>Maud looks at you, then moves and jumps into her side of the truck.
>She appears to have figured out how to get the door, and seatbelt to work pretty quickly.
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>Jumping into the drivers seat, you crank up the engine, and get on your way.
>Today's gonna be a good day for science.
>On your way out of town, you stop and fuel up the truck, and while doing so, refill your ice in the beer chest.
Alright Maud, say goodbye to civilization. Its time to get out into some true wilderness.
>Maud looks at you for a moment, then looks out the window at the gas station.
>"Goodbye, civilization."
>You start up the engine again, and accellerate down the road, and onto the interstate onramp.
>In the distance, you can see the flatirons that mark the obvious debarkation of the San Rafael Swell.
That's it Maud. The eastern edge of the San Rafael Swell.
>Maud looks down at the geologic map she pulled out from yesterday, then back up at the horizon, then back down at the map.
>"So, Anon, if I understand this map correctly, this big white bits are the 'Navajo Sandstone'?
That would be a correct assessment, Maud. Looks like you are picking this map thing up pretty quickly.
>"It is a good way of showing all this information on one piece of paper."
>You spy the ever infamous '110 miles, no services' sign on the side of the interstate.
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>Slowly, the cliffs before you grow larger and larger, until you finally reach where the interstate climbs onto the swell via Spotted Wolf Pass.
>Maud is transfixed, looking out the window as you approach the narrow gap the highway runs up.
>Rapidly, you climb up onto the top of the flatter portion on the middle of the swell.
>In the distance, you can see various canyonlands and plateaus off to the side of the small plain the interstate runs across in the middle of the swell.
>You eventually come to an exit to the interstate, and you figure you should start here on the eastern side today.
>Turning off, you leave pavement into a rough gravel 'road', and nod as you come to your decision on where to start.
Black Dragon Canyon.
>"You have dragons here?"
What, no? Dragons aren't real, they are mythological creatures. Someone just named the canyon we are gonna start working at after one. Probably cause of the dark veneer on the rocks.
>"Oh. That's good. Dragons make field work more difficult than it needs to be."
>The fuck?
>You continue driving, eventually arriving on an even more rough trail that leads down into the canyon.
>You drop the truck into 4WD, and pull onto the less maintained trail.
>You twist and turn across the terrain, slowy dropping off the top of the swell again.
>Reaching where the Moenkopi outcrops, you slow down, and look around.
We should set up camp around here... Can't camp too much further into the canyon, and there's a few decently flat places to make camp.
>"You know best out here, Anon."
>Ahead, you see a small plateua of Chinle that the road snakes around.
>The far side of that will get you some shade earlier in the day...
>Looks like camp to me.

That's all for this morning. Might have more later today. We'll see.
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>>25677764
That hits the spot.God bless you lad
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>>25676885
...seriously?

Post screencaps if you can.
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>Be Anon
>Be staring out the window for about the last hour
>Or rather, just having your face turned to the window, in direction of outside.
>You didn't see shit
>But just now you've heard your parents knock on the door to your apartment, claiming they know you were in there and that they have the key and- yadda yadda
>Eventually they make their threat true and unlock the door.
>You don't face them.
>You don't see the point in it.
>See the point – isn't language just the nicest thing to you?
>For some reason you can relate to tumblr whiny bitches now, but at least you're shut down in your own home and don't bother anyone
>Not unlike you were before...
>You sigh.
>Your mother takes this as a sign that you have listened to her.
>She brought you groceries, that much you understood, but you didn't bother with listening to her further.
>”Anon, Anon!”
>You gave up.
“What?”
>The word came like a growl at her.
>You hear her take a step back.
>But it wasn't the only thing you hear. Something else had given a small whimper at your outburst.
>”I also got you something else.”
>You'd roll your eyes if you could, but just sigh again, all the while continuing to have your cheek glued on the window.
>“I got you someone to help you with your daily life.”
“I told you I don't need a nurse, or a housekeeper! Or... whatever...”
>Your words were louder than you meant them to be.
>Somewhere you know she means well, but there wasn't room in your mothers or in your own budget to hire someone to take care of you.
>But the fact that someone has to take care of you to begin with infuriates you.
>And if you judge correctly, whomever your mother brought with you had whimpered earlier at you simply having snarled 'what?' at your mom.
>Neither had he or she said anything of introduction.
>Maybe they assume you didn't hear them come in with your mom, and can be rude.
>Listening in on the conversation of a mother and her son having just... lost his eyesight in an car accident.
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>>25679343
>lost his eyesight in an car accident
Interesting. Here I was thinking he was just another neet faggot. Continue
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>>25679343
>Your cheek leaves the glass pane.
>You always hated the view anyway.
“So? Aren't you gonna fucking introduce yourself, or what?”
>You shout into the room in direction of the door, where you assume the other person stood, and hear another whimper in response.
>”It's not a person.”
>It was the voice of your mother, and not whomever it was introducing themselves.
“What then? You better not got me a dog.”
>”It's one of them ponies.”
>Of course you have heard of these ponies.
>Sentient alterterrestrial aliens who were enslaved.
>And as you spend most of your time on the internet on morally dubious sites, you of course know that pone is for sexual
>A proverbial sting of pain goes through you as you bring your thoughts to the internet.
>You only used to do that.
>Without your eyes you can't internet for shit.
>And no way in hell you ask someone to read and shitpost in your... place
>But a slave...
>Hmm...
“A pony, huh? Okay, I take it.”
>Your mom was surprised at your positive response.
>”You're taking it? Oh, I'm glad. I hope interacting with another creature will do you some good, especially never left your apartment-
>Again she began to ramble on about your life before the accident.
>Go outside, Anon.
>Meet people, Anon.
>Be more social, Anon.
>Why don't you have a girlfriend, Anon? You're so nice.
>The usual.
>Like hell you go outside, and like hell you go outside in your state.
>Or get a grill.
>Who would be interested in a blind guy with scars all over his face because he flew face first into a windshield?
>Hmm... Is pone for sexual?
>Wait... Is it even female?
>Not exactly like you care much, you have delved too deep into /d/ to still consider yourself straight
>or any regular sexual orientation for that matter.
>Problem was that you actually are a nice guy, and you don't think you can simply order the pone to spread it's legs for you.
>Gosh dangit, now you are thinking about sex.
>You don't want to get a boner in front of your mom.
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>>25679412
I give you a dollar if you can guess what pone I'll give him.
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>>25679475
Well, it couldn't be Snowdrop.
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>>25679475
give us a hint
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Recovery
http://pastebin.com/DNvbjnQG

Sorry guys for not posting last days, i'm always pretty busy on weekends.


„Ooof. I was really worried few times.“
>„What exactly do you think would happen if they caught you?“
„Nothing nice. Aside from the fact i'd get fined, he would most likely see you. Nobody knows what might happen. Maybe nothing, but you never know. Cops are unfathomable, you never know if he's a total asshole who wants to ruin your life or some normal guy.“
>you sit on the couch, just to stand up immediately again
>you walk towards the drawer with your underpants, where you grab one of your least used boxers
„Hey Sarah, take this.“
>„Oh, thanks.“
>you turn away, while she struggles to put it on
>“Heck, this is hard. If i at least was a unicorn..“
>then you hear a thud
„You alright back there?“
>“Yeah, yeah I'm just having a bit of trouble here.“
>after few more seconds of struggling she announces her success
>you turn back to see
>“So, now i'm like normal, according to human social standarts?“
„Well, you're still a pony and there's nothing bad about it, but i guess there's pretty much no point trying to fit in. Thought you just wanted to hide your… you know.“
>“Well, yeah. I just don't wan't you to think that I'm weird or uneducated. Since you said it's obscene here...“
„Wait, you're doing this just so i wouldn't get bad impression on you?“
>“K-kinda…?“
>it feels weird, when your opinion actualy matters to someone
>you're flattered, but you don't really know what to say
„Oh, well. You don't have to worry about that. If i had bad impression on you, i'd most likely tell you. You're amazing and just because you don't know our social norms doesn't change anything.“
>“Me? And amazing?“
>how is it possible that she still thinks you're doing all of this just because of your “neverending hospitality“?
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>>25679557
>>25679566
well, he needs one that can see, as the pony should act somewhat like a seeing-eye dog.
Should have a submissive nature to be even considered for a job like that.
And the only other story i read in the slave thread including her (no matter how long it was) was actually not good

>>25679589
nuuu, two writefags at once, I will loose all my starting momentum, how can I compete with Klaifferon whom people have been waiting for!
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>>25679609
not good in my opinion of having only read the short pastebin, not the entire story that is in thread
maybe I'll give ti another chance just to differantiate myself from that [ponyname]-story
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>And the only other story i read in the slave thread including her (no matter how long it was) was actually not good
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>>25679652
how dares someone on the internet have a different opinion from you?
I should be ashamed of myself

Already tried to clarify I wasn't particularly fond of it with the second line of the entire story already, seeing as that anon wasn't nice to mah waifu
this is white knight general after all,
even though I will do some waifu abuse as well
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>>25679676
actually i complain not because you have a different opinion
its because that "clue" didnt say shit
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>>25679609
>>25679652
>>25679676
>>25679699
Am I the only one who has no fucking idea who it is?
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>>25679706
no
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>>25679676
>second line of the entire story

*goes through all stories*

>You are Anon.
>And you've just force-fed a raw steak to a little technicolor pony.
>She wasn't the one you wanted to buy, but still, does that warrant what you did?

It's fluttershy
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>>25679736
Oh, yep. Makes sense. I didn't think of it because I stopped reading that one almost immediately
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>>25679699
not many ponies whos personality was explored are actually naturally submissive without stretching it, fluttershy was an easy guess
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>>25679467
>Creating a distraction seems like the way to go to avoid unwanted boners
“Pony, come here.”
>You order as your mother is seemingly explaining the paperwork of sentient pet ownership.
>It took a few seconds until you were able to hear hoof steps come closer to you.
>You crouch down extent your hand out, palm up for the pony to touch.
>But the pone stops just before you.
>Slightly annoyed you stretch your hand out to touch it.
>only to boop the pone's snout somewhat forcefully.
>It reels back and you could hear the sound of it falling over.
“Sorry-”
>You try to apologize for being rough but your mother cuts you off.
>”Anon! What were you thinking punching her like that?”
“I didn't mean to punch her!”
>Her
>At least you know now that if you try to stick your dick in you can miss and always hit another hole.
>No, bad Anon.
>You pat along the floor to find the pony's form until you hit it's fuzzy coat.
“I didn't know how far away you were. I certainly didn't mean to punch you.”
>”And the man at the store said her last owner gave her up because she was too delicate. But I thought my Anon wouldn't hit a girl, no matter the species.”
>You hear sniffing.
>Wait... Is she crying?
>Oh shit.
“I didn't even know it was a girl!”
>”Oh, you made her cry.”
“I DIDN'T MEAN TO!”
>You shout at your mom.
>Every time she has visited you since the accident you ended up shouting at her.
“Just say what I need to know about keeping a pony or leave, please. I much rather be along.”
>Alone.
>Well, you have a slave now, not like you'll be alone again unless you sell that delicate pony you made cry and didn't even know the name of.
>”Fine.”
>You know exactly what type of 'fine' that was.
>”I'm leaving.”
>She only means well, you are an asshole and she doesn't have to deal with your shit.
>And you have put her under a lot stress with the whole accident anyway.
>A few seconds later you are left alone with an quietly sobbing pony.
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>>25679929
>>25679929
so far this story is actually really fucking good, senpai. Pitiful protagonist for us to sympathize with and i can't stop giggling at him accidentally socking a pony cause i do that with my pets all the time.
also, see eye flutters is fucking great premise.
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>>25676899
The pacing is strange to the most acceptable degree. Loving this though. Really sick of worrying about them getting taken away though.
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>>25677764
Reminder that you had better not let me see you in Hell if that sister doesn't get what she deserves.
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>>25679929
“So, uhh... what's your name?”
>Her sobs change a little, almost as if she had tried to speak.
“Can you stop crying?”
>She almost immediately begins holding her breath.
>You could feel her body convulse, with every suppressed sob.
“I didn't mean to hit you, honest. I'm bad ad judging where stuff is. I haven't mastered my blindness, you understand?”
>Cautiously you pet the small pony.
>No response came, but the twitches of her crying become more frantically.
“Sheesh, you can breath, okay? Err.. let yourself cry.”
>She didn't need to be told that twice as she begins to bawl out her eyes-
>god damnit, is there an eye metaphor around every corner?
>Anyway... Apparently there was a lot on that pony to make her cry.
>Well, she was ripped from her home and enslaved. And you take it she never really had the opportunity to cry herself out.
>With that you lift her up, and press her to your chest.
>God, she was thin – You could feel her ribs easily.
>Like a rag doll she didn't move to stop you from having done so.
>Her crying only got more intense as you try to comfort her, lightly patting her back, letting your fingers flow through her dirty hair.
>She reeks of stable.
>In general she didn't seem to be in a lousy condition.
>Your problems seem so small in comparison.
>And, while you wouldn't admit it, you like the fact that there are people worst of than you.
>Or ponies- whatever.
>The thought of increasing her suffering went through your skull.
>Yes, that would be nice.
>Make a snuff film for animal nightmare or the likes of the more fucked up deep web bullcrap.
>film...
>fuck
>How can you be so insensitive around blind people?
>You sigh again.
>No, of course you weren't going to do that.
>You're too good of a guy for that.
>You had twisted desires and impulses, but you know not to act upon them.
>It's what seperates man from beast.
>Hopefully helping this pony feels good as well, and that you could eventually really use her as a seeing eye pony.
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A bunch of crap and one car accident later, I live

Continuing from: >>25616207

>That alarm is just annoying sometimes.
>But wait...
>It's lighter in your room than normal.
>You decide to peer out the window to find out the best thing right now.
>No more rain, and the sun is motherfucking out.
>Though, there is mud and puddles everywhere.
>Eh, who cares? Sun is out bruh.
>Time for the daily routine.
>Upon entering your living room, you find Rainbow Dash floating around.
>Well it looks more like pacing, but in the air.
>"Finally! I've been waiting all morning!"
"That eager to make a break for it?"
>"Yea- I mean, no! Stop that, it's too early for that!"
"Heh, well first things first."
>She has a curious look on her face as you reach into the basket near the door.
>You hold the object directly in front of you.
>"Ummm, what's that?"
"It's a harness. While we are going outside, other humans will still see you as my "pet"."
>She somewhat gives a menacing look at the harness.
>"And if I don't want to wear it and go out anyway?"
"Then I'll be fined heavily and run the risk of you being taken away.
>She didn't like the sound of that.
*sigh* "Look it's adjustable. That way you can somewhat fly around and stuff."
>You extend the cord out of the handle.
"The cord goes up to about 15ft, so you'll get a bit of open space to work with while we are out."
>This harness was originally for a dog you were gonna get a good while back.
>You decided against it though and was left with just a harness.
>It was a high dollar one at that, the cord is essentially made to be heavy duty.
>"Well, I gueeesss I can wear it."
>She rolls her eyes in reluctance, but accepts it nonetheless.
>She just wants to go outside so badly that it looks like she would be possibly willing to do anything.
>Maybe even....
>NO STOP BRAIN. Now is not the time for your shenanigans.
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>>25680213

>After outfitting her with the harness, you give one final check.
"Okay, before we head out there is just a few rules that I like t-"
>"UGGHHHHHHH....."
>Well then.
*ahem* "So the first rule is no sudden outbursts. Second, you can fly unless we are indoors. It's said to bring a bad omen but I don't care if you do it in my house. Third, don't get violent with anyone or cause a scene."
>"Are we finally done now?"
"Yeah, that was pretty much it."
>You open the door to take a look out.
>Not even a moment after having the door opened she barrels through it and is now in front stretching.
>"Man, this feels so nice to be outside after being shut-in for a couple of days."
>She turns around and sticks her tongue out at you.
>"It your fault!"
"How exactly was the rain my fault? You know we are just in front of the house, right?"
>"I'm just messing with ya."
>She comes up and lightly taps you in the shoulder.
>"So where should we go?"
"A-actually, I haven't the slightest clue. I usually don't go out much."
>It's true. You just only went to places deemed necessary to you.
>Guess it never hurts to change.
>"Wow dude, that's kind of lame."
"Eh, it never was an interest to me."
>"Well then, let's explore this world you live in then, huh?"
>She's more hyped up about it than you are.
>"Come on, let's go!"
"H-hey wait!"
>You try to keep up so you don't end up getting jerked by the cord.
>You didn't really think you would be the one getting dragged around today.
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>>25680231

>After a good 15 minutes, you end up at what appears to be a park.
>Keeping up with her even with the harness was still a task.
"Hey, can we at least take a break for a second? You're already wearing me down."
>She gives you a smile with an eybrow raised.
>"What, not that physically in shape?"
"No, n-not really."
>Walking large distances was fine, but running always drained your stamina too fast.
>You aren't fat, but you aren't slim either.
"I'm gonna sit on the bench for a moment."
>"Fine by me."
>Sitting on the bench, Rainbow still flies in small patterns around you.
>Though entertaining for you to watch, she seems to be doing it just so she isn't bored.
>After a couple of moments of rest, you were strating to get up when Rainbow lands right beside you on the bench.
>"Hey, I didn't make you mad or anything jerking you around earlier did I?"
"I was annoyed at first, but i know you were just eager to be out and about."
>"Yeah, sorry about that. Hehe..."
>She's looking the other way scratching her cheek with her hoof.
>Looking around you, the park was nice and small, albeit a bit underkept.
>This park is actually the park you drive by everyday.
>Which means your work is actually about another 30 minutes away if you walked from here.
>What a small world you live in.
>Not really, it's actually pretty big and so much variety you never figure out what you actually want.
>Your stomach started growling.
"Guess it'd be best to go get something to eat, huh?"
>"Hey, you're the one who is hungry here, pal."
>Her stomach starts growling as well.
>"T-though it wouldn't hurt to pick up a quick bite."
>Both of you laugh at each other.

And that is that for now.
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>>25680165
>>Make a snuff film for animal nightmare
>animal nightmare

damn nigga
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>>25680247
yay, update
shit man, you alright?
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>>25680319
I'm fine, the car however is pretty much fucked.
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>>25680408
that sucks dicks
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>>25679706
I have got a clue, so no, you're not alone in that.
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>>25680546
pretty obv buttershy
we'd know for sure if we were given some more dank green.
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>>25680165
“Let yourself cry.”
>You repeat, while continuing to pet her.
>After a small while she even went in on the embrace and pushes herself into you.
>After a little longer while you start to feel majorly awkward about sitting on the floor with a crying pony in your arm you don't even know the name of.
>You weren't exactly in the position to just leave her as she is.
>I mean... you wear perfectly capable of dropping her immediately.
>She was your slave and you could treat her however you wanted.
>But you couldn't just leave her like that.
>You don't know a single thing about her, but caring for her is simply what a good person would do, wouldn't it?
>You never gave much thought into being a good person.
>After all, you had shitposted really fucked up stuff.
>But when it comes to a situation where you are actually have to make a decision.
>Being a nice guy at the cost of spending some awkward time
>Or being an udder ass.
>You know what you were doing.
>You simply let herself cry.
>...
>...
>Just how many tears can a pony of her size hold?
>Your shoulder was already soaked and you were getting more and more uncomfortable.
“Do you want some tissues?”
>You can only feel her nod.
>But as you try to remove yourself from her, she kept clinging to you.
“You-
>why are you pausing?
“You need to let go of me so I can bring you some.”
>”e-excuse me.”
>These were the first things she spoke to you.
>Her voice sounds so frail.
>Really, like coming from someone who can break at any given moment.
>Then again, she may be broken already.
>Being a slave and all that.
>Eventually she actually let's go of you and you set her down.
>Stumbling through the room you make it to your desk
>You sit down - your normal position
>Your each your hand out and grab it with your first try
>Your epic skills, make you swing around in your chair until your knee hits something...
>And you hear something fall over again.
>The crying resumed from it's small break with renewed vigor.
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>>25680764
lol. udder ass.
also this accidental abuse is great
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>>25680843
>udder
DAMNIT
I looked it up because I wasn't sure, and then I forget to change it

I don't speak english natively
I usually only fall for homophones when they are not used frequently
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>>25680882
that explains the little errors. Not gonna complain, though. I'm enjoying it. Really great premise.
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>>25680764
This is not ass kissing, this is not embellishment, exaggeration, or anything of the sort: Reading this is giving me chest pain.
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>>25680932
oh please, complain away, how else would I get better?
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>>25680764
“NO!”
>She had followed you.
>And you hadn't paid attention to her.
>You had been so focused on trying to remember the position of every item on your desk that you disregarded your little pony.
>Your thoughtlessness will be the end of you, or someone else one day.
>Immediately you jump down and place the tissue box beside her.
>Or at least where you thought she was.
>Quickly reaching out to search for let your fingers meet with damp fur.
“You have to believe me, I don't do this on purpose.”
>More sniveling, but more controlled this time.
>”I know...”
>She actually managed to speak during all of this.
>You stand there helplessly, only petting her back as she moves around on her belly and reaches for the box to clean herself.
>You were so ashamed, you barely let yourself touch her.
>All you've done so far was punch your her twice and shout at your mom in front of her.
>What kind of person must she think you are?
>You know you had anger issues, especially after the accident.
>But that usually comes down to throwing mugs across the room.
>And you couldn't do that in a while because you couldn't clean them up yourself afterward.
>So you retreat your hand from the pony and simply sit in front of her, drifting off into thought.
>You shout at your mom, you think about bestiality not 2 minutes after being near a pony, you were reckless, a slave-puncher, and you don't think about how others are affected by your actions before you make them.
>You are far from the nice guy you claim yourself to be,
>Damaged goods inside, damaged goods outside.
>You can't flee in the world of a book, a movie, a videogame, or the internet anymore.
>And now's the time to take your anti-depressants, because you are suicidal again.
>You stand up and leave the pony alone, only walk over to the window you had been sitting on earlier and pop one of the pills with the two circles carved into the lid.
>Then you simply sit down again and place your forehead against the window.
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>>25681077
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>>25681113
That's the perfect face I would image her making before bursting in tears again. lolz
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>>25681156
>>25681113
lol, she just takes a deep breath and begins wailing every time blindanon runs into her
>>25681077
>>25680944
Nice double dubs
I meant more the odd phrase and the general cant of everything a little off. There's not much really "wrong" grammatically, things are just awkward at times but it's far from the worst I've seen, native language aside.
>You better not got me a dog
for example, needs some work.

Just keep reading and writing m8, you're fine.
where are you from, anyways?
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>>25681156
guess anon will never know what face she will make

>>25681175
Austria

also blindanon? I guess I found myself a storyname
blindanon's seeing-eye fluttershy
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>>25681113
OH GOSH BLIND SENPAI IS ABOUT TO RUN INTO ME
OH CELESTIA HES ABOUT TO TOUCH ME
AHHHHHHHH
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>>25680213
>and one car accident later
Well, shit. Read the details a bit below, sorry to hear that.

>>25681077
This is a good one too. I like this.
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>>25681263
he moment you realize... Neutral created blindanon
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>>25681077
>Be Fluttershy
>Your new master had left you while you try to control your sobbing. Trying to finally stop.
>The tissues helped
>His care helped.
>He is beating himself up about your pain.
>Maybe it's because you instantly went limp and let yourself fall after being hit.
>That was your defense mechanism this past... you don't even know how much time has passed.
>Getting limp, and playing dead were your go to ways of keeping your previous masters from hitting you.
>It was in the instinct of every creature to not attack dead things.
>Your last masters reason for selling you was literally 'clubbing a wet ball of fur is more entertaining.”
>Your new master wasn't like that at all.
>He... actually cared?
>It didn't stop you from your muscle memory to start on his second hit.
>Well, he never really hit you. Both times it was an accident.
>The first time you were just afraid of the rough treatment as his first interaction with you, not yet having known him
>The second time it actually hurt, but it was more obviously an accident.
>You finally managed to stop crying and have gotten your face somewhat clean again when you look for your master.
>He was at the window again, in the almost exact same position as when you had entered with his mother.
>It doesn't exactly need your expertise with critters to see when an animal is in pain.
>He isolated himself. Almost as if he was about to get ready to die.
>You were too scared when Mistress was still here, but now you could observve him with anyone noticing you.
>Yes, he was in a lot of pain.
>Not from the scars that were clearly visible on his body, but from... everything else.
>The scars have barely healed and if you understood correctly it was that time when he lost his eyesight.
>A blind animal without someone to look after was as good as dead.
>And if you have understood correctly that was your job now.
>Taking care of master.
>You can't stand seeing any type of creature in pain.
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>>25681207
>cheap top-tier beer
>top-tier women
>mountains
>escaping blame for both world wars
>cheap imports from the rest of Europe
Nice, austrianon, nice.

>>25681403
also, muh heart.
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>>25676899
Day 5
>You wake up.
>Apparently you fell asleep on the couch, as did the girls.
>You're covered in a blanket of sleeping soft cuddly ponies, nuzzled up to your sides, your legs, laying over your torso...
>And Pinkie is nestled between your legs.
>Face against your crotch as she slowly breathes in and out.
>Well...
>Lets just hope you didn't grow hard at any point during the night.
>You carefully extract yourself from the sleeping ponies, removing your limbs out of their grips, one at a time, laying them on the couch away from you.
>After six goes at this, you're finally free.
>It's another work day, so you eat, and decide to leave before you have a chance to accidentally wake them.
>Tomorrow will be the day when everything is normal and you won't have conflicting feelings over these adorable sweet ponies.
Yeah, tomorrow.
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>>25681403
>>25681460
basically this, I honestly can't find a complaint
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>>25681512
>You are Pinkie.
>"Oh my, that has got to be the most wonderful nights sleep ever."
>"My goodness he's so comfy, better than the beds at Canterlot." Rarity beams.
>"Psh, forget that, he's more comfy than clouds!" Dashies voice cracks halfway through.
>"I know girls, it was heaven. He radiates warmth, and that scent!" Twilight shivers.
"And he was booping me throughout the entire night!"
>You smile wide, you knew you picked the best sleeping spot.
>And if Twilight thinks the scent by his chest was good...
>You shiver in place, tongue lolling out just from the memory.
"Oh yeah that's the good stuff...."
>The others look at you strangely.
>Like they don't know what you're talking about.
>"So, um, what are we going to do? I mean... He's really nice, and kind, and sweet..." Fluttershy blushes.
"And he's got a huge-"
>"And them kisses? I thought ah could only feel like that when ahm in heat!" Applejack starts to fan herself with her hat.
"And he's got a massive-"
>"And so handsome! I never thought I could look at someone that wasn't a pony and feel so... I mean... What a hunk right?!" Rarity exclaims brightly.
>The others all nod their heads and smile in return.
"And he's got a giant-"
>"So girls, what are we going to do about this? We obviously feel... Something for him. We live with him, he's perfect for us, do you think we should.... Help him get over the species gap between us?" Twilight asks.
"DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICK!!"
>You pant for breath, before looking around to bemused faces.
>"Pinkie darling, this isn't the time for one of your random outbursts. We need to come up with a plan. He just needs a... Little push in the right direction."
>"Who knows girls, we might end up better off than in Equestria, a colt-friend, er, human, man, friend, to give us belly rubs and call us pretty ponies!" Twilight squees and clops her hooves together.
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>>25681460
our biggest accomplishment will be convincing the world beethoven was austrian and hitler german

also, keep the compliments comming everyone,
I have to choose between playing fallout 4 until 4 am or write, and so far you've earned yourself at least 2 more posts.

(i have a day off tomorrow btw. it's 23:40 right now)
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>>25681546
>You are Anon, coming back to your home after having run around like a headless chicken, chasing after and catching Jackalopes all day.
>As you open the door, you see that the lights have been dimmed, but not turned off.
"Girls?"
>You call out. You would think that they'd dimmed the lights to better watch a movie, except you can see the couch and tv right there, no one sat down, tv off.
>"Oh, good evening Anon."
>At that, candles light up around the room, particularly around the kitchen area.
>You don't even own any candles.
>You wonder if you'll end up regretting teaching them of online shopping.
>At least you put all the child safety locks on your laptop.
>And all your porn is hidden in a file called 'Boring documents'.
>The perfect crime.
"Uh, hey girls, you have a good day?"
>With more light you can now easily see Flutters and Dash flying up to you, as Rarity titters.
>"Oh no darling, how was your day? You're the one who had to go out and work so hard for us."
>Flutters and Dash help you out of your jacket, hanging it up, as well as unstrapping gear from you, placing it on a table.
>Gentle pushing moves you more to the others.
"Oh well, you know, same old stuff."
>Applejack lightly pushes you back into a chair.
>It's now you notice....
>Are they wearing dresses?
>And makeup?
>What?
>"Now now shugacube, you don't have to hold back with us. Come on, how was your day?"
>She takes off your right shoe, and Pinkie your left, then taking off your socks.
>Twilight magics a soft lowdown stool you've never seen before beneath your heels.
>The two earth pony girls start to gently massage the soles of your feet.
"Well... It was actually kind of tough actually."
>"Oh I bet it was darling, our poor Anon, working so hard, you don't get the respect you deserve."
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>>25681580
>Rarity stands on her back hooves, nuzzling into your side lightly.
"Well... Yeah actually. I always bring my A game, always achieve results, but my bosses never even thank me."
>"My poor Anon."
>With you sat down, and her stood on her back hooves and leaning against you, she's tall enough to kiss your cheek.
>This is actually kind of nice.
>Fluttershy rests her head against your thigh, looking up at you, her mane hanging across her legs.
>"Dinner will be ready soon honey, you just relax."
>H-honey?
>Pinkie and AJ smile up to you as well as they massage your feet, Pinkie quietly giggling at feeling your toes.
>Dash hovers behind you, hooves massaging around the top of your shoulders and neck.
>"Damn Anon, you're real muscular you know that? Our big strong man."
"Th-thanks."
>Fluttershy gently flaps her way to the oven, and with you feeling thoroughly more relaxed, your dinner is plated and set in front of you on the table. Your tair is tucked in while you're still sat down, and soon you have six cute mares sat mostly across from you, a few candles between you.
>You all eat as they ocassionally ask you questions about your day, you compliment Shy for the dinner, and their eyes seem to sparkle as they look.... Genuinely interested in your thoughts and feelings.
>After dinner, you find yourself on the couch with six mares, lightly hugging them, petting them, hearing soft coos coming from their lips.
>You don't even have the tv on.
>As the evening winds down to night, they start to stand.
>"Thank you for the wonderful evening Anon." Rarity smiles, kissing your cheek, catching the corner of your lips.
"Y-you too."
>One by one, they each give you a soft kiss on your cheeks, just barely brushing against your lips.
>They each blush after the action, Pinkie says 'boop' as she kisses your nose as well, and one after the other they trot to their room, leaving you alone to think on things.
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>>25679589

>well, you basicaly did tell her that when she asked the first time, but only because you didn't want to look like a creep
>but what to say now?
>should you just plainly say something that would end with telling her „I love you?“
>no, that would be too much spaghetti
>it would be easier to recite whole gorilla warfare copypasta right now
>how about a compromise between „i love you“ and „i like you“?
>you sit on the couch she's standing next to
„Of course you are. You know, i really had fun today. And it's not the weed. My life is usualy pretty boring and lonely most of the time. B-but with you, it's like you've brought some colours into this grayness. I mean, i can get high with friends sometimes, but with you today, this was just different. A lot better.“
> she sits on the couch next to you „You really mean that?“
„I do.“
>“And you're not saying it just like that?“
„Why would i lie to you?“
>„It's just,.. I never meant anything special to anyone. I wasn't a good flier, never prominent in anything and i didn't even get my cutie mark so far while being almost adult… That's when a picture of something the pony is good at appears on their flank. And in Equestria, that's pretty serious thing. I'm not used to being told things like these...I…..“
>suddenly, as if you knew what to do
>you reach out your hand, putting it on her head and then slowly fondling down, stopping at her cheek
„Come on, that's alright. I couldn't care less about butt tatoos. They don't change a thing.“
>while backing with your hand, you continue
„You know, from your position after saving you and showing you all this new stuff, it may not seem that way, but i never was anything special as well. Sometimes, there's just this one in the herd, that's different in some way. That doesn't fit quite in. But that's okay. Even that one, finds his or her way eventualy.“
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>>25681615
>Oh God.
>That was nice....
>That was really nice...
>That was better than any date, any kind of interaction you've ever even had with a woman.
>You can't do this.
>It's bad for your job.
>And they're little fucking brightly coloured ponies.
>That are incredibly sweet.
>Cute and pretty.
>With big butts.
>No. Bad Anon.
>........
>You're going to fuck them aren't you?


And that's it for now.

I also forgot to put my name up for some of those posts, but oh well.
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>>25681403
>>25681615
>>25681622
too many writefags at once, why does this happen!
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>>25681670
>>You're going to fuck them aren't you?
I hope so.
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>Still waiting for Jessi
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>>25681689
>implying it's a bad thing
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>>25681622
heh, your story is interesting. I'm curious to see where this goes
>>25680247
silly RD wew lunch
>>25681077
oh gosh...anon..hnng
>>25676888
HAHA HES A SKINWALKER HUNTER?!
is this your first real greentext? You have a lot of ideas, and I think with practice you could be pretty good
>>25677764
this..poor pony..


Sorry I cant think of any criticisms. other then whats already been said about them, i can think of anything
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Gots a Pastebins now: http://pastebin.com/u/IAmTheLostPoet

>Months pass
>You’re crying on your bed
>Door locked
>You needed to be alone
>Soft tapping at the door
“Go away”
>Nothing for a few moments
>*Click*
>You don’t move
>You already know its Rachel
>Two more clicks
>One for the door closing
>One for the lock
>You don’t move
>You owe her nothing
>”Anon… what happened?”
>She maneuvers herself around your bed, trying to make eye contract
>You pull up the covers
>”I promise I won’t tell… Anon please let me help you…”

>An hour passes
>She dutifully sits nearby
>You were compelled to speak
>She earned as much
“I asked out a girl today… but she laughed and ran off… she was laughing at me Rachel”
>Rachel’s jaw unhinges a little
>She quickly regains composure as you turn your back to her
….
>She still remains
>It’s deep into night and she is unmoving
>Painful Boredom compels you to prop yourself up
>You can only cry for so long before your tears are drained up
>She doesn’t lift her head, only her eyes
>”Anon… I’m sorry… If there’s anything I could do, I mean… i-“
>You put your finger on your lips and wave her onto your bed
>She picks herself up, and carful gets on the bed, being very careful to avoid stepping on you
>Collapses on top of you as you just embrace her
>Her forelegs do their best to wrap around you
>”Anon, you’re the kindest, gentlest human I’ve ever met. You’re not like Madam Peaches or your Dad… you’re not a-“
“Not a Monster like them?”
>She looks away, you said what she wanted to say, but refused to because her duty as a slave demanded it
“You don’t get it.”
>You rub your tear stained eyes
“I’m just like them Rachel.”
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>>25681403
>Be Anon again
>You snap out of your train of thought after you hear a quiet voice behind you mumble something
“Huh?”
>”M-my name is Fluttershy.”
>You look- no- you turn your head around to face in direction of the pony.
>”You a-”
>She pauses.
>”You asked for m-my name earlier.”
>You can't even remember asking her.
>Not knowing what to do you simply nod.
>Looking away again- or facing the window again would be rude so you wait for her to say something else
>But she didn't.
>Then you realize another point in which you have been rude.
“Uhh... I'm Anon, but I guess you've already heard that from my mom.”
>”I-I did.”
>There was an awkward silence again.
>You then could hear her step closer to you.
>On reflex you scoot away a bit, you don't want to accidentally send her flying again.
>As if on cue her hoof steps stop with your motion too.
>You try to relax your body, and lean back against the glass.
“So, what now?”
>She didn't answer.
>Of course she didn't answer.
>She's a slave, she probably learned not to command her master around.
>Master...
>You only know that word with kinky implications.
>You could always fuck her.
>That's about the only activity your brain could form of what a blind person can do.
>And it is what most people do with their slaves anyway.
>you wouldn't even have to feel the need to feel bad about it.
>But of course you would.
>It simply is in your beta genes
>You researched all kinds of knots for bdsm, but you wouldn't be able to fuck a slave.
>Slave roleplay is hot
>but if she actually was a slave
>You have problems, deep rooted problems.
>”Y-You keep on sighing, Master Anon.”
>You were?
“I wasn't aware...”
>You turn your face away.
>Hah! You didn't think about looking- oh god damnit.
>”I-it's okay. Y-your mother bought me for you so I'd... I'd can help you with your daily life and-”
“I don't have a daily life.”
>You interrupt her.
“Not anymore.”
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>>25681749
>”Don’t be silly Anon… I mean, yo-“
“Listen… just… listen Rachel”
>Rachel looks at you, dips her face, but keeps looking up at you
“Do you remember the story of the Dog? The one that my dad killed?”
>Rachel nods yes
“Before he killed her… she made me angry one day… she was playing with my sister rather then me… and I got angry Rachel…. oh so angry.
>Her eyes widen a bit
“I… grabbed her and threw her Rachel… and you know what she did Rachel? She shook in fear. My Dad did the same thing to me when I was younger. As I shook in fear with my dad, she shook in fear of me Rachel.”
>Nothing is said for a moment
>”Why are you telling me this Anon?”
“Because you deserve to know. I… I saw what I did and at that moment… a moment of perfect empathy… I knew exactly as she felt and… I tried to make it up to her. Never again with my outbursts of anger at her, thats what I promised Rachel. That moment… I knew I was just my Dad given new flesh… So I made it my goal to repair our relationship… to make sure she never feels how my Dad made me feel… after, what I had assumed she would have passed from natural causes… no more pets, no one else Rachel… then… Dad killed her… he killed her before I could make amends.”
>”Anon”
>She just stared at you with those Emerald eyes
“I am a monster Rachel… the next in a long line of monsters. There is no freedom for me. But for now, I can try to be less of a monster. Do you understand?”
>You look away from her
>She doesn’t move
>”Monsters don’t spend hours cleaning a slave’s burn every few days Anon, I m-“
“You don’t understand. So allow me to elaborate. I might be nice now… but some day, if I don’t die soon, I’ll lose the fight. I’m trying to rebel against my nature. But it’s hard Rachel…”
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>>25681763
>There’s no talking
>A peck on the cheek
>You turn to look at her
>Rachel is staring at you with tears in her eyes
>”Anon, monsters don’t fight against their own nature. Monsters don’t comfort toy slaves who are rejected by the person they love. Monsters dump off their entire desk to give them more space to heal a slave’s wound. Please don’t call yourself a monster. Please. it hurts me when you do.”
>You both say nothing
>She snuggles in with you
>”I wish I could have been there for you Anon… but I’m just a slave. I would have at least called the girl who ran off a coward. I wish I could be human for you Anon. I would be there for you, like you were for me… but I’m just a slave. A pony slave”
>A momentary pause
>You close your eyes
>You can feel an inrush of light, blasting your despair away
>In that very second, you knew exactly how you felt about her.
“No Rachel. A pony, yes, a slave, yes. But… you’re more to me… my best friend…
>You start to stutter
>”Anon… ”
>You start to get up
>Rachel works with you
“When was the last time my sister took you for a walk?”
>”I don’t know, why?”
“Because while I must to keep you on a chain, I think you’ve been trapped in this house for far too long.”
>She starts to get giddy
>”Where are we going to go?”
>You take a moment
“Interesting, I was going to ask you the same thing.”
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>>25681779
the rabbit hole..it goes deeper
>>25681752
this poor anon, muh heart strings
also as an anon with a blind pone OC, I can tell you that when youre doing something from anons perspective, if theres something going on, try to focus on the relevant senses if you want some detail. like if he touches her hoof, forget about descriping anything about her looks, describe the feeling. or if theres a smell, describe that and have that be the thing he follows, ect. Hearing of course is always a big one. plus theres so many ambient sounds in the world that it may end up being a lot to describe, if you go in full detail

blind anon makes me want to write about muh pone...
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>>25680408
>>25681548
>>25681615
oh lord, let us give thanks for this bounty of fresh greentext, and for the generous writefriends who post it.
And let us never forget our dear departed writefag, Jessi Jinx, may he rip in peace.
nugg bosdon
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>>25681752
>She was quite taken aback by that, but didn't want to let you go.
>”To feel happy again you need to get a daily routing back, Master.”
>She takes a deep breath.
>”How about you take of y-your shirt I soiled you, a-and take a shower. C-clean your body.”
>You indeed were quite filthy. Not only from her crying on you, but also from not having taken care of yourself at all in a while.
>”A clean soul can only live in a clean body.”
>Is she a fortune cookie?
>”I-”
>You hear her gulp as she slowly continues.
>”I think you are in-”
>Say it.
>Do it faggot.
>”-in depression, Master.”
>The words came out of her mouth rapidly and almost incoherently, but you knew what she was about to say.
>She really stepped over a line of what you believe a slave is allowed to do and what not.
>You quickly think about if she deserves a punishment for that.
>But as she was holding her breath, seemingly waiting for you to hit her you could only do one thing.
>Agree with her.
“Yeah...”
>Your head goes to the window again.
>You don't need a therapist who tells you what you already know.
>And you certainly don't need one who lives in your house.
>You'll have to return her.
>But for that you need to call your mother, whom you do not want to talk to.
>You have the paperwork, but you can't read shit on it.
>Didn't you just want to take care of that pony a few minutes ago?
>Are you fucking bipolar now too?
>You smash your hand on the windowsill, and stand up.
>Fluttershy made a sound like a squeaky toy as your hand hit the wood.
>You head to the bathroom, and begin to undress yourself on the way to it.
“You'll have to bathe later as well. Your hair is filthy, and your fur rough.”
>Insulting her felt somewhat good, a little bit like blowing off steam.
“You'll make us something to eat, while I'm in the bathroom, use whatever my mom bought.”
>She had been bought by your mom.
>You can't help but imagine a pony covered in whipped cream with a cherry on top.
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Never stop you glorious bastards...
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>>25681546
Leave it to Pinkie to steal my sides.
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>>25682155
Amen!
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Can't decide which story to fap to
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You folks ready to get back to the farm?

>>25631683
>You give Lauren a little nod to show that you understand – and not because you’re just giving in.
>Hell, you’re practically a goddamn expert on taking the easy path, and that doesn’t make you a coward or lazy or anything of the sort.
>Isn’t there some Eastern religion about doing just that?
>Not that you follow it, as such, but it feels *right*.
>You *do* understand what she means and it *is* easier. For everyone.
“Fine, I can wait.”
>”Gee, thanks,” Lauren sniffles, trying to mask her vulnerability with sarcasm. It almost makes you regret being nice to her, but you can’t bring yourself to kick someone who’s down *this* low. “I’ll be back tomorrow.”
>Besides, apparently you don’t have to wait *that* long for your money.
“That’s pretty fast.”
>”With the stallion,” she sneers.
“But –“
>“We gotta keep up the pretense, dumbass.”
>Oh.
>Makes sense.
“Why not just leave him here, then?”
>You gesture towards the barn with the hand holding the apple.
“Don’t want him in the dorms, but you had to see we got plenty of empty stables in there…”
>As does everyone.
>It’s been at least a year since your uncle sold off the last of the real horses in these parts.
>That sale alone kept the farm going for over the winter months.
>”Course I saw,” Lauren mumbles before finishing off her apple.
“Well?”
>She answers you with silence and by gazing off at the horizion.
“Means you won’t have to waste your time coming up here every day.”
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>>25682902
>And that means you won’t have to see her until she comes to pick him up.
>”Can’t,” the woman says after a few moments. “Daddy don’t like having any of his belongings out of arm’s reach that long.”
>She sighs, turning her head just enough to look at you out of the corner of her eye.
>”Speakin’ of, I better get back to the farm.”
>She waits a moment longer, just watching you with those green eyes of hers.
>You get the feeling she’s expecting – hoping – you’ll say something to change her mind.
“Yeah, I guess so.”
>You give yourself a little push off of the trailer and stand.
“Sounds like you’ve got a lot to do.”
>You can hear the scrape of her boots against bare dirt as she rises behind you.
>”I… I guess I’ll see you tomorrow, then.”
“Don’t really have a choice, do we?”
>Her reply is lost to you as you take another bite of your apple, the crunchy flesh of the fruit drowning out whatever she says.
>Whatever.
>It’s not important.
>You wave with your free hand without even turning to look at her and trudge back up the trial to the house.
>There’s only one or two more bites left on the fruit – you take your time and finish it off in three, tossing the core aside without stopping.
>You’re a quarter of the way there when you hear her slam the truck door shut and its engine cough a few times before finally turning over.
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Jessi is a motherfucking nigger
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>>25682168
>You took a long shower.
>You had to sort your thoughts... again.
>You readily commanded her to make something to eat.
>Were you so easily accepting of slavery that the moment you get a slave yourself you think it's okay to command them around?
>No, you only said that because she's malnourished and should eat.
>Yes, that is the conclusion gained from your 20 minutes shower.
>You do it for her.
>Now as to convince yourself.
>You leave the bathroom in only a fresh pair of underpants
>You already smell fresh cooked bacon.
>ahh...
>Don't get distracted, walk straight to your bedroom to search for pants and a shirt.
>You usually don't wear more than underpants in your house but it was winter, and you want to save heating cost.
>And you had a guest.
>No, you had a slave.
>You wonder how long you can keep it up to wear clothes every day.
>Then again, you already thought about getting rid of her.
>Not having to wear pants falls on that list as an important item now.
>You sigh again as you walk into the kitchen and search for a seat.
>You couldn't hear her work anymore, nor could you somehow sense where she was.
>Last thing you need is to run into her and send her crying again.
>Better walk slowly.
>Eventually you sit down at the kitchen table and turn your head around, perking your ears to hear what's going on.
>Scraping of ceramic on wood then gave you the indication of her pushing a plate toward you.
>”I made you two sandwiches. Both have m-meat from an pig.”
>”The first is h-ha-ham... with an boiled egg cut in pieces and some mayonnaise.
>”The second b-b-b-b-bacon! And cheese, with an barbecue sauce.”
“Uh... Sounds delicious. Thanks, Fluttershy.”
>You search out with your hand for the plate and it's tasty tasty contents.
>When you smell of fresh bacon directly from the source you think about Fluttershy again.
"What have you made yourself?"
>"I ahh-"
>She only provided for her master... so you slide her the plate with the other sandwich.
"Eat."
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>>25682969
yes, eat the ham sandwich
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>>25682920
>A happy sigh escapes your mouth as the truck rumbles off.
>Good, she’s gone.
>When you come to a fork in the path, you briefly consider going right and doing a round of the fields to check on your ponies’ progress, but it seems rather inconsequential next to seeing after Apple Bloom.
>Besides, that leads off to the shed, and Maud already told you Full Steam couldn’t get the tractor running.
>The sharp sound of a dinner bell makes you glance towards the left – to the dorms and the big pavilion filled with tables.
>Ponies are gathering around, apparently having already finished up in the fields for the day.
>Even in the dying light, you can see Roma and her two assistants are hard at work serving dinner.
>Well, good then.
>That gives you enough time to see to Apple Bloom and take a shower before she’ll be up to make your meal.
>Still, your pace quickens, rapidly eating up the remaining distance.
>Before too long, you’re standing outside the spare room, hand hovering just shy of the door.
>Should you knock?
>Or just walk in?
>You’ve never had to think that through, before.
>It’s always been a pretty obvious thing – either they’re on your territory or you’re on theirs – but this is the first time you’ve had a pony sleeping in your house, so you’re not sure.
>She *might* be asleep…
>You knock softly.
>”Y-yeas…?”
>Well, she *could* have been.
“Hey, Apple Bloom, it’s me…”

more later tonight
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>>25682969
I think I leave it here for the night, sorry guys
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>>25683054
thx for the content.
looking forward to more.
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>>25683032
>This is back
Don't feel neglected - I've waited long for this.
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>>25681779
I am loving every line of this tale.
Yeah, I know the pic has wrong color mare-should be pink.
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>>25681670
>Day 6
>You wake up, already feeling confused.
>Your brain has switched on straight away, you're highly alert, and remembering all of last night.
>Maybe.... It wasn't as... Romantic, as you thought it was?
>Maybe you were somehow getting the wrong signals from being doted on affectionately the entire evening by girls that had dressed to look their best for you and each kissing you goodnight.
>Yeah, that's probably it.
>You shower and change, stepping out of your bedroom.
>Hi honey, ready for breakfast?" Fluttershy smiles at you, flapping to get to your height, and pecking your cheek softly.
"Uh... Yes please."
>What's happened.
>A few days ago they were a lot more shy about these things.
>Now the tables have flipped completely.
>You're led out to eat breakfast on the couch, a pony cuddled up either side of you, Pinkie and AJ.
>Twilight trots to you.
>"Here's the paper Anon." She smiles.
"Paper, I... What?"
>"Oh, I took the liberty of using your intercom system to make sure the runners new to start bringing a newspaper to your door every day."
>You... Didn't even know the facility had these things.
"Ah, thanks Twilight."
>You reach out, petting her, and lightly scratching beneath her ear.
>She steps towards you, resting her head on your thigh, her ears flicking.
>"Mmm, anything for my man..."
>Either you're retarded or these ponies absolutely have a thing for you, and want to make it a reality.
>But still, you might just be retarded.
>Can't forget that option.
"Thanks girls, for all this, this is uh... Amazing of you really."
>You hope that will sate them.
>M-maybe they're just being super friendly?
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>>25683402
Day 16
>They're not just being super friendly.
>Every morning and evening has pretty much been the same.
>They show you so much love and affection.
>It would probably be tiring for them, frustrating even, if there weren't six of them to all do their part.
>It looks like they're not having to put any effort into the things they do for you.
>They're just that wonderful.
>And luckily they're more than sated by the touch of your hands.
>Still, that's not all you do now.
>At some point, the kisses on your cheek, just catching your lips, before they went to bed, migrated further, until they were just full on kissing you.
>You kissed back.
>You then started to give them the two second long kisses that left them looking completely blissful.
>And then, from their encouragement, the kisses lasted longer.
>For the past three nights, you've been kissing them each for around ten seconds long.
>You can't even kid yourself any more.
>This isn't for them.
>This is for you.
>You want to kiss them and take their breath away.
>And now it's the morning of your sixteenth day with them.
>Pinkie taps her hooves together, looking nervous as she tries to come up with some sort of explanation.
>"I just think, in the interest of group morale, as well as to uh, keep our lips well exercised.... We should probably start kissing in the morning too. Not just because I want to, b-but because-"
"Okay."
>Your fingers sink into the fur covered warm flesh of her rump, squeezing softly as you lift her up, bringing her close to you.
>Her eyelids sink to close as her front hooves touch your chest.
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>>25683428
>Your lips press against hers as you begin kissing, lightly sucking.
>She tastes like cotton candy, of course, but without any of the stickyness.
>She kisses back as she leans into you, soft cute moans vibrating over your lips.
>Her big curly frizzy mane rubs against your forehead as you deepen the kiss.
>While you want to continue it, you don't know where you'd stop.
>And you're still pretty hung up about the whole bestiality thing.
>You break the kiss, and you see her lower lip tremble.
>Her eyes flutter to open, before she slowly stumbles away from you, then collapses onto her back on the couch, whimpering slightly, left back hoof twitching.
>"Darling... It isn't polite to keep a lady waiting."
>Of course.
>Your arms wrap around her.
>She prefers being surrounded by your muscle.
>She barely lets out a "Oh you brute" before you start to kiss her deeply.
>Your tongue parts her lips and slides inside, playing with her own.
>She presses herself as close to you as she can as you hold the back of her head.
>When you release her from the kiss, a strand of saliva connects your lips.
>"Only you can touch my mane darling... Only you..." Her voice fades away as her body slides down next to Pinkies.
>You see a very needy looking Twilight.
>Your hands lift her just under her... Shoulders?
>Either way this is how she likes it best.
>You kiss her softly, for a second, before backing off.
>She tries to gaze into your eyes for as long as she can.
>You move back in for a two second kiss, before breaking it again.
>She keeps trying to gaze back, eyelids falling while her eyes try rolling back.
>You move forwards again, kissing her hard, and deliberately grunting into her mouth.
>That's it.
>She's draped against your body as her back hooves give out, and as she slides down you lean over more and more, kissing and pecking her lips again and again before you're hunched over.
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>>25683442
>Twilight almost falls to the floor before you hold her again, lifting her like a child, and placing her completely out of it form on the couch.
>Applejack climbs up into your lap.
>"Yah, yah don't mind do ya?"
>You smile back assuringly.
"Go ahead."
>You actually find this the hottest.
>She leans right up close to you, both of your mouths open.
>As she breathes in, you breathe out. Sharing breath. She shivers, but tries to stay as still as she can.
>You keep breathing each others breath as her head draws closer and closer.
>With your mouth open, she pushes forwards, and her lips connect.
>With your tongue.
>She sucks your tongue deeper into her mouth, playing with your tongue with her own, while your hands start to squeeze and knead her big booty.
>She makes lewd sounds from her suckling, and moaning.
>You then crash your lips against hers, kissing her hungrily with your tongue in her mouth.
>And she's out.
>You lay her next to you, drool running down her cheeks and chin.
>Dash lays on the floor, looking helpless.
>You know what she likes.
>You lift her up, cradling her in your arms effortlessly.
>As you hold her up, you kiss her delicately.
>Your lips only part enough to whisper.
"You're such a girly pony."
"So pretty."
"You'd look beautiful in a dress."
>Between each compliment your lips lightly suckle against hers, soft smacking sounds adding to the scene.
>A hand meanwhile lightly plays with the fluff on her chest.
>As she struggles to take more, you lower her to the couch.
"What a pretty Princess..."
>That did it.
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>>25683468
>And now for Fluttershy.
>She hovers up to you, and you pretend you have your hands tied bhind your back.
>"Th-that's right, take it."
>She kisses your nose.
>"Take it all, you, you handsome man."
>Her kisses migrate around your face, her body seeming to grow heavier as her wings struggle more and more to keep her up.
>As her lips land on yours, you hold the back of her head and kiss her back passionately.
>As she squeels and soon goes limp, you stand, and place her body where you were sat.
>Some of their requests are a little odd, but it's not like you don't kiss them more normally as well.
>As you strap some equipment to yourself and throw on your jacket, you look to them. One by one starting to regain control of their senses.
>You can't keep this up.
>It's wrong....
>You'll talk to them tonight about it.
>And you won't get distracted by those big pony asses, or those dazzling expressive eyes and plump pouty lips.
>Nope.


And that's it for now.
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>>25683503
>"You're such a girly pony."

>>"Th-that's right, take it."

holy shit
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Humanity would never be so retarded as to enslave another sentient, sapient race. If there are ponies, there are probably other aliens too, and they'd probably come wreck our shit and make US slaves if they saw us pulling some sick shit like this.
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>>25683708
Do YOU give a shit about what two alien races may or may not be doing halfway across the galaxy?
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>>25683989
Yeah, senpai. I don't know who those guys are or what they're doing, but fuck those guys! I'm gonna fuck their shit up.
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>>25684138
Yee Haw!
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>>25683054
just remember to come back tomorrow
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>>25683503
U-unf
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>>25681580

>Mopping the sweat off my brow.jpg
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>>25683442
>>25683468
>>25683503
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>>25678298
Even tho i know nothing of rocks, im loving this so far. Keep em coming!
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>>25683503
Still day 16
"If there's somethin strange! Doo doo, In ya neighbourhood. Doo doo."
>You lightly kick your legs forward with each step.
"Who ya gonna call?.."
>Your head bobs back and forth, your torso doing the same.
"Ghost Bus-"
>A fat balding see-through green illuminated man with slashes down his chest and face, the upper half of his patients gown torn to ribbons lunges at you.
>Your boom stick booms out as you send a load of rock salt smashing through his body. He evaporates into thin air with a wailing howl of torment.
>You pump the shotgun, expending a round to clink onto the floor.
>.......
"Busters doo be doo ba doo."
>You continue singing and dance walking as you travel down the hallway, always on the lookout.
>Now this is what you love.
>Poltergeists.
>Can't catch them.
>They're never endangered.
>And everybody hates them.
>There's none of that 'Oh, can you try and safely bring back this fast as fuck creature that's used to killing gun wielding humans?'
>Nope.
>Whenever you're told to go to a closed run down asylum, hospital, orphanage, or any of the clichés, you know you're gonna be in for a fun night of uncensored killing.
>Helps take your mind off how you're going to broach the subject of 'I should probably stop playing tongue twister with the six of you ponies' too.
>You trudge up and down the hallways, searching every room...
>Alas, all good things come to an end.
>You open up your bible and shout out loudly, voice echoing down the halls as you perform an exorcism.
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>>25686635
>You are Nick Jackof.
>Your superiors didn't understand why you wanted to be moved from your regular section.
>After all, it was the quietest area on the books.
>Or off the books really. There's never anything to report.
>But with all you've done for the city, they still tried to find another place you could be stationed at.
>Your partner is sick again, the fucking weakling.
>Back in your day, you'd be thankful to get sick, it would take your mind off of all you had to do in 'Nam.
>You haven't missed a day of police work in... Ever.
>Oh well, more of Mildreds' apple pie for you.
>You open the box, when you here strange booming sounds coming from the old abandoned Asylum coming from the top of the hill.
>You're already parked at the outskirts of the city, no one ever drives up here, it's a single road.
>Darn kids.
>Might as well check it out.
>As you drive passed the gates... Weren't those supposed to be locked? You look over the fire blackened walls of the Asylum, trying to see if you can see any flashlights inside.
>You park the car near the front doors, just before the window above them bursts out.
>Two men land in front of you, on the hood of your car, making the back end jump.
>You then notice that one of them is more than just a man.
>He's a towering brute, wearing little more than rags, allowing you to see his mismatched body, like he was sewn together.
>It roars out, the third arm that comes out of its side strangling the normal looking man beneath him, its other two mismatched arms beating down on him.
>The guy below punches up, a clanging echo sounding out.
>The creature falls back, and the man rolls on top of it, brutally punching its face in, blood splattering outwards as the face and skull is caved in by the golden knuckle dusters he wears.
>All on the hood of your car.
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>>25686662
>You can hear him pant as he drags the body off, letting it fall in a crippled heap on the floor.
>The body glows from the centre, and a dozen green glowing see-through people fly out, soaring upwards, where a brilliant white crack opens up in the sky, swallowing them before closing.
>The man looks to you, and while your windows are closed you still hear him say ".... This isn't what it looks like."
>You slowly reverse, and reverse, and reverse, back the way you came.
>Mildred's getting beaten tonight.

>Fucking thing.
>Had to be Frankenstein-esque experiments didn't it.
>No wonder all those apparitions were pissed.
>.....
>You just realise you've killed one of the very few examples of a being that has been brought back to life via scientific means.
>Eh. Wasn't in the report so they don't know.
>And if they don't know, you don't have to care.
>You drag it by its giant feet, back into the asylum.
>You then go back to your van, starting to whistle a happy tune as you grab what you need, then walk back inside, dousing as much of the place as you can with what you can carry in the two fuckhuge jerrycans.
>You place the two now empty, significantly lighter jerrycans back in the van, and you grab a cigarette, lighting it up.
>You don't actually smoke.
>It just looks cool.
>You stand before the trail of liquid that glimmers.
>And you flick the cigarette.
>And miss.
>You try another two times, but it's okay, because in that time you thought of a badass line.
"Smoking'll kill ya."
>It connects, and the trail lights up, racing towards the Asylum
"See you in hell."
>You hold back a giggle and a little jump, wanting to remain badass, before you get back into your van and drive away, every once in a while checking your mirror to see the raging inferno.
"Looks like I brought the heat."
>Okay that's enough
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>>25686680
>Arriving home, you go through your new routine.
>Namely, whatever the girls are willing to do for you.
>You're laying back on the couch as six mares dote on you while asking about your day.
>As you get to the part where you fly out the window, they let out a collective gasp.
>"Darling no! Are you alright? Are you hurt?"
"I'm fine Rarity, like all the other times, it's just part of the job."
>As you go on though...
>"That's it mister, you obviously must be hurt, and we're going to make you feel better, right girls?" Assertive Fluttershy is hot.
>In a cute non sexual way you mean.
>You feel mouths nipping at you as they slowly try and reveal your torso.
>You lean up on your elbows, helping them.
>As you soon lay back, upper body fully on display, you can see their cheeks redden.
>However the bruises on your chest still worry them.
>Can't exactly stitch a bruise, they'll probably get you an ice pack or...
>Oh.
>Kissing your booboos will probably help.
>You gulp as they kiss your muscled torso, sucking slightly with each kiss.
>They're obviously not just focusing on the bruised areas.
>Fuck... You must be part God, or magic, or something, to have stopped your cock from bursting through your pants by now.
>You grunt slightly.
>"W-will you promise to be, um, more careful in the future?" Fluttershy asks.
>"Are you kidding?! Look at him, he doesn't need to be careful, he could fight his way out of anything." Dash smiles, her hooves lightly pressing into and roaming around your bicep.
>You can't help it, you raise and flex your arms, and tighten your stomach.
>"Oh sweet Celestia...."
>They all have similar reactions, eyes trying to take in as much of you as they can.
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>>25686706
>"You're simply divine darling."
>"Could punch straight through an apple tree."
>"Anon you're just so sexy."
>You know you have a good body.
>You're satisfied with your life.
>You're happy with your job.
>But this...
>It's like nothing you've ever had before.
>They burry themselves into you, cuddling, feeling, and lightly kissing as much of your torso as possible while you pet and caress them in return.
>You know you're going to regret this but... If anyone found out about this.... You're done.
>No more working here, possibility of disappearing off the face of the Earth, no more ponies... Ponies would be split up... Bad news for everyone.
>The regret is already seeping in as you let out a sigh.
"Girls?"
>At your tone of voice they move back, looking down at you, ready to hear what you have to say.
"This has all been... Honestly, just amazing... But, I think we need to talk about... This." You gesture with your hands to what's going on.
>Twilight sighs as well. "I know this had to come up at some point and... It's okay, of course we have to talk about it. We can't just keep going as we have and pretend that everything's okay."
>Damn... In the back of your mind you were hoping they'd just tell you to shut up or something.
>"This situation isn't fair, to any of us. We don't want to just play with your feelings, or have ours in turn being played with, so.... We need to stop with how we've been acting. We can't just kiss and be held by you, and dote on you, it needs to stop."
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>>25681779
Damn you. I almost stared just bawling at my desk, but I chocked it back at the last second.
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>>25686735
>"We need to make it clear that we love you and want you with us as much as possible. And we need to set some rules between us so we won't end up fighting over you or end up jealous of each other."
>"So, what do you say, want to start a real relationship with us, and be our Special Somepony?"
>"Manfriend."
>"Thanks Pinkie. Manfriend?"
>Six pairs of hopeful bright eyes gaze back at you, and you can feel their tails lightly brushing against you as they slowly trail back and forth.
......
"Yes."


And that's it for now.
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>>25683032
>”Ah know, sir,” she mumbles, just loud enough for you to hear through the door.
“Can I…”
>No, you shouldn’t have to ask.
“I’m coming in, girl.”
>You push the door open slowly and poke your head through the gap.
>Apple Bloom is huddled on the far side of the bed, clutching the pillow to her chest.
>She’s not quite trying to hide behind it, but close enough to make you wonder for a second.
>You step inside and take a look at the nightstand.
>Good, it looks like she ate.
>Not much, though.
>At least the pitcher you’d set out for her is nearly empty.
“How are you feeling, girl?”
>”Betr – better.”
>That wouldn’t have fooled a child.
“You were going to say something else?”
>She squeezes the pillow tighter.
>”Ah hurt… sir,” she answers reluctantly. “Ah hurt all over.”
>Shit.
“But you’re doing better?”
>The mare half-smiles at your hopeful tone.
>”Yes, sir.”
>Well, she’s feeling good enough to lie to you, and that’s something. You’ll let it slide.
“Anything I need to get you?”
>”No, sir.”
“What about some more water?”
>”O-okay.”
“Anything else?”
>She shakes her head slightly, her mouth clamped tightly shut.
“Be right back, girl.”
>Apple Bloom is still using the pillow as a shield when you return with the refilled pitcher.
>”Thank you, sir,” she mumbles as you set it down.
“Anything else?
>That’s not what you want to ask her – you *want* to ask her about the stallion, about her brother, but you can’t.
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>>25687488
>You just can’t.
>You’ve already pushed one mare too far today, and don’t have the strength for another one of those conversations right now.
>She’ll still be here tomorrow.
>You can have that little talk then.
>”S-sir…?”
>Oh, damn. You zoned out a minute there.
“Yes?”
>”Ah… Ah said Ah don’t need nothing else…”
>Wearily, you nod your head and leave the room.
>You’re too tired for this.
>Until now, you hadn’t realized exactly how worn out you were, but between having to deal with Lauren after a full day’s work has left you absolutely exhausted.
>Somehow, you find the strength to get upstairs and into the shower.
>You do some of your best thinking in the shower, but that doesn’t seem to help now – your thoughts run in an endless circle that goes nowhere.
>Not really surprising, since you aren’t even thinking about anything in particular.
>Just a constant stream of stuff and worries.
>It’s frustrating, but not enough to make you get out – not until the water runs cold.
>The shock of it sends you jumping out of the shower and toweling yourself dry.
>You were in there too long.
>Dinner is going to be cold.
>Besides, you wanted her to make something
>Still doing up the buttons on your shirt, you rush down the stairs and into the kitchen.
>Roma jerks up in near panic as you run into the kitchen.
>”Is something wrong, sir!?”
“No, I just need you to… oh…”
>There are two bowls on the counter.
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>>25687500
>”To what, sir?”
>She doesn’t wait for your answer before dumping greens and sliced tomatoes into both bowls.
“Is that for Apple Bloom?”
>Roma blushes and nods.
>”I thought…” she says timidly, floundering before finding her words again. “I hope you don’t mind, sir, but I thought she might need something.”
“Oh.”
>She continues on with her work, but keeps watching you warily.
“Perfect, that’s exactly what I was going to ask.”
>She relaxes slightly, but that only makes you more self-aware of the effect you have on her.
“Thanks, Roma.”
>”It’s my duty,” she responds quickly, cutting thin slices of cheese to add to the salads. “I would hate to disappoint you.”
“Anything I can do to help?”
>You’re starting to feel a little guilty just watching Roma make your dinner, but she entire body tenses up when you reach for a knife.
“Don’t worry, I was just going to chop some –“
>”I can do that, sir,” she cuts you off bluntly. “I will have everything ready in just a few minutes.”
“Oh… okay…”
>She grabs the knife off the counter and begins cutting up some leftover chicken from yesterday.
>”Miss – I mean, Apple Bloom is in the downstairs bedroom, sir?”
“How did you know?”
>”I could smell her, sir. I’ll take her meal in to her after you’ve been served.”
“No, I’ll do that.”
>”I can do it, sir,” she insists, dumping the sliced chicken onto one of the salads and reaching for the dressing. “No reason for you to trouble yourself.”
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>>25687521
“I said I’ll take care of it.”
>You really doubt Apple Bloom wants another pony seeing her right now.
>”Sir –“
>Roma looks up fiercely.
“Don’t worry, I’ll take care of it.”
>She looks away quickly, shuddering at the iron in your voice.
>”Sir, she needs to eat…” the mare pleads. “Please, let me –“
>Roma cuts off at your sigh.
>She’s been on the receiving end of it less often than Apple Bloom, but she knows what it means.
“Roma, I’ll –“
>”Please, sir,” she begs. “I don’t know what she did, but don’t punish her anymore. The rest of us are willing to take her punishment on ourselves, so long as you don’t… don’t…”
>Another sigh escapes your lips. Out of patience, you grab the meatless bowl from the counter.
“You told the others?”
>And you thought you could trust her after she promised not to last night.
>”N-no, sir, but when she was absent, the others figured something was up!”
>Dammit.
>”And then when that truck came again, we thought… we thought…“
“She’s not being punished, Roma.“
>”But sir, you’re keeping her locked up all alone!” the cook cries out. “After what happened with her brother and sister, we’re the closest thing to family she has! If you won’t let her out, at least let me in to see her! Please!”
>The mare seems on the verge of tears.
>Fine.
“I give up.”
>She flinches as you sigh again.
“Apple Bloom wants to be alone right now, but I’ll take this in to her.”
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>>25687521
He better ask Roma about that brother now that he's got a chance, but I suspect cowardanon will strike again.
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>>25687533
>”T-thank you, sir,” Roma mumbles after a moment’s pause.
>You thought she was going to push for more.
>So did she, you suspect, before her courage failed her.
>”I’ll just finish up your dinner and leave, then.”
“No.”
>The mare freezes in place, her eyes wide as dinner plates and very purposefully pointed at the ground.
“Stay. I have some questions.”
>With the slow and deliberate movement of someone that knows they have just made a horrible life choice, the mare nods once.
>”Yes, sir,” she says dully.

>Roma calms down slightly after watching you go into Apple Bloom’s room with her meal, but only slightly.
>You should beat her – you know this – but can’t find the energy for it.
>Besides, if she’s willing to stand up to you when she’s this scared already, what good would it do?
>None at all, and you know it.
>As you eat, you question her about Apple Bloom’s family.
>Just like Maud said, she has a brother.
>Or had.
“Are you sure he’s dead?”
>”No more than I’m sure about anypony else,” Roma mumbles into the floor. She can’t bring herself to meet your eyes. “We… we…”
>She cuts off, wiping at her eyes with her hoof.
“Yes?”
>”There were a lot of bodies that weren’t recovered,” she answers after a moment. “Even more that couldn’t be identified.”
“So he’s officially missing?”
>Still works in your favor, not that it really matters unless Steffords finds out about his daughter’s deal.
>”No, sir. Officially, Big Mac is dead.”
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>>25687546
>Damn.
>”He was listed…”
>You take another bite of your salad as Roma visibly shakes, reliving the memories.
>”He was listed as an irrecoverable casualty, and – and – “
>She squeezes her eyes shut, as if that could block out the scene playing out in her mind.
>” – after we saw what your weapons did, anypony we couldn’t save was assumed killed in action.”
>The pictures the press showed were heavily censored, but you could understand.
>”Apple Bloom never gave up hope, though,” the mare adds. “She always believed that he had run off with her sister to do… to do whatever it was she was going to do.”
>Great.
>This Big Mac could be Stefford’s stallion or he could be dead or possibly even still free somewhere in Equestria.
>Basically, Roma knows nothing.
>At least you got that much out of it.
>You continue to eat in silence, ignoring the pony as she tries to control her emotions.
>It’s been years.
>She should be over this by now.
“Well, that was interesting.”
>Roma glances up for a fraction of a second when you set your fork down.
>”Anything else, sir?” she sobs as you push your chair back and stand.
“There’s still the matter of your punishment.”
>”Y-yes, sir.”
“You know you can’t talk back like that, right?”
>”I know, sir,” she mumbles. “I was just… I know, sir.”
>You can’t beat or whip her and expect it to do any good.
>Not only would she not learn anything from it, your reputation would suffer amongst the other ponies if their cook came back bloody and bruised because she dared to help Apple Bloom.
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>>25687562
>And they outnumber you… by an uncomfortable ratio.
“Good.”
>She dares another quick look at your face, trying to judge your anger, but you doubt it does her any good.
>You’re still trying to figure out a suitable punishment.
>Ah.
“What would my uncle have done to you?”
>”T-twenty lashes, though it’d depend on his mood.”
>Shit, you don’t even know where the whip is.
>Haven’t used it once since you got here.
“Good thing I’m not him, then.”

>The mare shambles out the front door, still a nervous wreck despite your leniency.
>Leniency isn’t even the right word – that would be giving her ten lashes, or maybe even five.
>She’s lucky you’re so tired, and far too busy to do it tomorrow.
>And gathering everypony around to watch? That’s just wasted time that would be better spent with them out in the fields.
>You slump in the recliner and grab the TV remote.
>As the weather forcast flashes across the screen, you silently agree with your decision.
>First freeze of the season is coming at the end of the week.
>Earlier than expected.
>Shit.
>You need every pony in the fields right now.
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>>25687575
>Yeah, you definitely picked the right punishment.
>Having Roma come up to the house three times a day to make meals for Apple Bloom will hurt a little, but not if it gets your best pony back in the fields even a day sooner.
>At least that’s the only piece of bad news you get – the rest of the forecast seems to be the usual fluff pieces – some rich bitch’s puppy got stuck in a pipe and had to be rescued, another high school sports team feature, the pony princess demanding the return of the elements of kindness and loyalty… nothing special.
>Certainly nothing that affects you or your farm.
>But that freeze…
>Aside from running your ponies to the bone, you don’t know what to do about that.
>Shit.
>SHIT!
>You flip off the TV.
>Then you turn it off.
>You need to talk to Apple Bloom.
>She’ll know what to do.

end for tonight
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>>25687610
>the pony princess demanding the return of the elements of kindness and loyalty
Which one I wonder?
At least this means FS and RD are presumed alive. We know AJ is going to appear at some point and since the princess didn't ask for the return of the element of honesty, it could be assumed that AJ is presumed dead.... or working for the princess. If the princess is Twilight then only PP and Rara are unheard from.
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>>25687537
He may not have gotten a real answer, but at least he asked.
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>>25650336
bump
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I'm going to bed. I will have more to post in the morning (US Time)
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>>25686861
That lucky son of a bitch needs to explain very carefully what is at stake if they are caught...

y-You're going to brutalize our emotions. Aren't you anon. You're building us all up.

pic not related.

>>25688387
night
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>>25650336
>Buying a Bookhorse (Twilight) by Lurkernon -- COMPLETE
>COMPLETE
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>>25683054
we fucking love you

>>25680247
still waiting for scary butt fun
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>>25681546
I'm not hard but my heart is.
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>>25689364
Agreed.
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>>25683468
My deepest regret is reading this after getting off three times in quick succession. This has been a tragic waste of fresh 10/10 green. God. F*cking. Damn it.

>She leans right up close to you, both of your mouths open.
>As she breathes in, you breathe out. Sharing breath. She shivers, but tries to stay as still as she can.
>You keep breathing each others breath as her head draws closer and closer.

Nobody ever fucking utilizes this. You are a champion, my friend.
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>>25689450
Now lets keep this up.
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So, this is your new home.
>You open the pony carrier and let the purple pony out into the living room.
Now I want to let you know a few things before we make this a permanent situation for you.
First, I don't hit ponies. Nor do I yell at them or emotionally abuse them.
Second, you are expected to do light housework during the day while I'm at work. Can you cook?
>The pony shakes her head.
Well that sucks. So I'll be taking care of that for the two of us.
>You walk over to the couch and sit down while the purple pony just looks at you.
Now the third thing is something you're probably not going to like. I expect you to have sex with me at least once a day. Unless you're sick or something.
>She grimaces.
I'm not going to force you, and I'm going to give you the week to mull it over. But if you can't force yourself to do it then I'll take you back to the shelter and you can try your luck with the next human.
>She gives you a look of utter disgust.
Oh don't be like that. Having a normal relationship with you ponies is impossible and like I said. I won't force you to do anything you don't want to.
>"Except for raping me."
Would you I rather beat you into submission or use a shock collar?
>"I'd rather not be used as some kind of sex puppet again."
I was thinking more like concubine, but yeah pretty much what you said.
>She just looks at you for a while.
>"Do I get my own room?"
Yes.
>"Can I have regular work hours where I'm not going to get raped?"
We can do that. Consider yourself "on call" from 6 in the morning until 8 at night.
>"...I've had worse offers."
Sorry to hear that.
>The pony sits down on the carpet.
>"I'll never love you. You do know that, right?"
I'm okay with that.
>"My name is Twilight Sparkle."
Anonymous.
Why don't you go wash the shelter off yourself while I make us something to eat.
>"Fine."
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>>25689672
I want to see were this goes any one else. bump
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>>25689672
man this anon gets down to business quickly
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>>25688706
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>>25689692
>>25689733
Well fuck, okay.

>It's been a month since you were purchased by Anonymous. He just finished raping you for the day.
>He is a morning rapist after all.
>He may require you to fellate him after dinner, but you could live with that for now. You've been treated worse than this before.
>Anonymous is kind of an oddball human. He made a contract dictating the terms of your ownership. It almost makes you feel like an employee instead of a slave. At least he washes himself regularly.
>You shudder at the memory of previous owners who were not as hygienic. There are just some things you can't untaste no matter how hard you try.
>Anonymous lets you have free reign in the house. He has a small library of books. Mostly science fiction and fantasy, but it is nice to be reading again. He'll even talk to you about what you are reading when you aren't servicing him and degrading yourself.
>It could be worse though.
>You've long since given up fighting against the humans. There are enough scars under your coat to show that.
>Life here with him is both easy and difficult. Easy because he doesn't ask much of you. The house isn't very large and the two of you do not make much mess. Hard because he makes an effort to get to know you. It's almost like he cares about you and how you are feeling. It's a subtle cruelty.
>You've taken up smoking. It helps keep you calm.
>You almost want him to blow up at you. You've been waiting for the other shoe to drop since you agreed to stay.
>It's almost too much. Especially because you're getting comfortable, and you're starting to enjoy his touch.
>Sometimes you can close your eyes and pretend he's a pony like you.
>You are disgusting.
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>>25689849
bump
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>>25689864
Sorry friend. That's probably all I'm going to do with that.
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>>25689935
I am disappoint
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>>25689937
Can't think of anywhere else to go.
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>>25689935
Give it time then come back later.
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>>25687085
Reddit go away. Your supposed to be infecting /qa/ with your cancer right now not here.
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>>25650336
bump
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JESSI!!!!!!!
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>Be pony.
>Life as a slave isn't as bad as you thought it would be.
>Your owner treats you well.
>Except he only lets you poop once a day.
>He enforces this with a buttplug.
>Your tummy hurts.
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>>25690193
>>He enforces this with a buttplug.
>>Your tummy hurts.
I enjoyed this more than in comfortable admitting
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>>25690243
>"Master, why do you make me do this?"
Because it's funny to me. Now stand over the cardboard while I set up the camera.
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>>25690310
Hold you tail up more and don't look at the camera.
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>>25689733
>Tripfag with a ebin reddit maymay for a name

Is it seriously getting this bad?
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>>25650336
HOW THE FUCK " BYING A BOOKHORSE" IS " COMPLETE?! HE LITERALLY BROKE IT UP IN MID-SENTENCE !WTF?!
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>>25686861
god
fucking
DAMN IT
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>You pull into your selected camp mfor atleast the next few days, and you pull together your day pack and other equipment.
>Camelbak with 3L reservoir.
>Backpack, stowed with sports drinks on the side.
>'utility belt' with hammer hook, hammer in said hook, notebook pouch, and compass.
>Even with fancy technology, nothing beats an old school analog compass for durability and reliability.
>Same for a good old fashioned waterpoof notebook.
>However, modern technology still gets into your toolkit.
>You keep a high accuracy GPS for recording locations down to the meter scale, that you can tie in with the notes in your notebook.
>It also has topo maps for the region loaded onto it, so in the event you get lost, it can be a great navigation aid.
>Maud has also disembarked from the truck.
>For her to carry...
>Some canteens for water, and a few small pouches.
>Shit, next time you go into Grand Junction, you are gonna need to get her some more equipment for carrying stuff.
Alright, Maud, I got some canteens for you to carry your own water supply, and here's a few little bags you should be able to lay over your back...
Ain't got much to put in them now, so I guess you can be in charge of hiking specimens we pick up around in them.
Anway, we'll set up the tents and stuff later. For now, lets get out there, and get started on this project.
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>>25690946

>There is still quite a bit of morning shade in the area from the big Navajo cliffs to the east of you.
>You decide to start moving down towards the wash below the campsite, and looking at the outcrops along it.
>Once you arrive, you get a nice little outcrop to start working with Maud on.
So, Maud, can you describe this rock right here?
>She walks up, strikes the wall of rock with her hoof, and a perfect sized chunk breaks off.
>Damn... she don't need to carry no hammer with her.
>"Its sandstone."
Any other details?
>"It has ripple marks. Its kinda red... Kinda brown."
Grain description? Use that little plastic card I gave you yesterday.
>Somehow, beyond you, she pulls out the little plastic grain size card with her hoof, and sets it on the rock chunk she procured.
>"It looks like its fine grained."
So, I know you were reading the map, do you know what part of the Moenkopi this should probably fall into?
>"It said that the upper Moenkopi had sandstone like this. So this must be the upper Moenkopi."
I agree with your assessment of the situation, Maud.
>You pull out your GPS, and mark your location.
>Then, you grab your new field notebook, and open it up to page 1, and begin to write.
Location 1. Upper Moekopi... Finegrained sandstone, Quartz Arenite, ripple marks... Alright, looks good.
Lets continue down this wash, and make a stop every few dozen yards, or if something obvious changes.
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>>25687610
For a thread that wants green, you guys sure are ungrateful pricks when it comes to making sure your authors are getting listened to.

Liking the pacing here. I wait for more
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>>25690954

>And so, continue you did.
>Eventually, however, maud asked you a question that baffles you.
>"Where are all the gems?"
Wut?
>"Gems. In Equestria, gems are common. I haven't seen any gems, or even any sign of them, since we have been walking down this dry stream."
Thats... Interesting. Gems aren't terribly common, especially not coming out of sedimentary rocks like this. In Colorado, there's a few places you can find 'gem' quality specimens, one I can think of off hand here in Utah...
But no... No gems lying everywhere.
>Man, this world the ponies comes from sounds like some kind of magical fantasy land... Gems everywhere, dragons...
>The sun rises higher and higher in the sky, the air temperature getting warmer, and becoming quite hot.
>You check your watch, and its about lunch time.
Alright Maud. Lunch time. I got more granola bars, and some apples. We can have something a little more substantial for dinner.
>"Okay. You were right about it being hot out here. A break sounds good."
>You find a tiny bit of shade, despite the height of the sun, given by a small cedar growing over the edge of the small slot canyon you are sitting in.
Good shade trees are a rare commodity at this elevation... Bleh.
>You take a seat, pull out lunch for yourself and Maud, and enjoy a nice break from working in the heat of the day.
>Eating granola bars, drinking tons of water. you break into your sports drink.
>You are moving at a pretty good rate down this valley.
>Going down each wash, you should be able to find the details you need pretty easily...
>All the old maps are based on aerial photography, not some poor schmuck out here in the field.
>All that missing detail.
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>>25690960

>You and Maud continue moving down the canyon after finishing lunch.
>She's probably the best partner you've had in the field.
>Knowledgable, suprisingly strong, and able to get around really well.
>And the small talk about the differences are insightful...
>She is damn good at on the spot identification, and when you run into a change, she is able to tie it back to what she's seen really quick.
>Lets you focus on the note taking, and map sketching.
>You've gotten up to 75 locations marked on the GPS with notes taken, and its about 4 in the afternoon... Probably time to make the trek back up the canyon to the truck.
Alright, Maud, I think thats a day. Lets head back to the truck. I'll probably be easier if we get out of this wash, and back up to the trail.
>"Sounds OK."
>You still aren't sure what to make of the eternal Daria vibe you have coming from Maud.
>It's tough to tell if she is being sarcastic, or he is just really really that monotone.
>You climb up out of the wash, and easily find the offroading trail, and begin walking back uphill.
So, Maud... If you don't mind me asking, how did you end up in Grand Junction.
>"Sorry, Anon... I do mind. I don't want to talk about it."
Uh... Fair enough. How about all them gems you talked about?
>"Oh yeah. In Equestria, there's gems in the rocks everywhere. The unicorns use them for magic, I think."
>Magic.
>You had heard of the ones with horns having magic abilities.
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>>25689849
This is such a strange take on the prompt. Agreed with the others; I wanna see where this goes.

Twiggy smoking, though? Come on.
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>>25690967

How does that work... Magic?
>"I'm not too familiar. I'm an Earth Pony."
So what... Unicorns only get magic?"
>"Yes. Earth ponies have their own talents though."
>You'll have to do more searching on this crap when you get back to a place with an existant internet connection...
>You ain't got data worth a shit on the swell.
>Out here, the interstate barely has voice coverage.
>Eventually, you reach the truck, and you set up what is to be your camp for the next few days.
Drop the specimens we picked up today in the back seat while I get tents set up, Maud.
>You drag the tents and sleeping stuff out of the back of the truck, and find a nice flat, gravelly, not rocky spot for the tents.
>You've done this so many times now, you get the tents and cots set up in real quickly.
Aight, Maud, what do ya want for dinner? I was thinking something with couscous.
>"Whatever you cook is fine, Anon."
>You think for a moment.
Even if it has meat in it?
>"I don't really like meat."
>Bah... More work cooking stuff separately.
I guess I'll cook some couscous and some beans.
>Maybe mix some canned chicken into your portion...

That's all for now.
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>>25690979
This is the kind of excessive slice-of-life-esque material I've been wanting out of this thread. Keep this shit up.
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>>25690481
nah im not from reddit I'm just a shameless asshole
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Test
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>>25691062
well tested, my friend, well tested
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>>25686861
Day 17
>You wake up, feeling slightly nervous, but happy, over the brief conversation you had last night.
>The girls wanted to talk with eachother in private after that. So you decided to go to bed.
>After giving each of them a more prolonged, deep kiss.
>You feel like a King with how dreamy eyed you left them, panting on the couch.
>As you start to go through your morning routine, you wonder what they might have talked about.
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>>25691838
>You are Pinkie Pie.
>Once all the girls are sufficiently alert, after those yummy, mouth watering, knee trembling.... Mmmm... Kisses... Twilight begins to speak.
>"So, I think we all know what we need to talk about... If this relationship is going to advance, at some point we need to talk about..." She blushes. "Sexual relations."
"Dibs on the dick!"
>"Pinkie! This is supposed to help us to NOT get jealous of one another."
"Dibs, dibs, dibs on the dick!"
>Fluttershy lightly trots to you.
>"Umm, if it's not too much uh, trouble, Pinkie, uh, if you wouldn't mind, could you please um, back the fuck up?"
>"Come on girls." Twilight groans. "As you can see, I've drawn up some charts. Now I think as human calendars go by weeks, we should each have a separate day where each of us can uh, go all the way with him.... The others will be free to ah, watch if they wish, kiss and cuddle, but the act of penis in vagina goes solely to the mare whos day it's on."
>She looks very happy with how her presentation is going so far.
>"So, unless there are any particular days you'd prefer, lets just go by alphabetical order, so, Monday = Applejack, Tuesday = Dash, Wednesday = Fluttershy, Thursday = Pinkie, Friday = Rarity, and Weekend will be for me, Twilight!"
>She beams. "Now onto the business of-"
>"Uh, shugacube? Aint these human week things seven days long?"
>Twilight stops in her tracks for a moment.
>"Oh, uh, is it? Ah ha, silly me, I must have counted the weekend as being one day, uh... So Saturday will be for me, and Sunday will be on a rotation, and can also be given up to any other if that pony wishes."
"I'll never give up the dick!"
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>>25691855
>"And, well, that's your right Pinkie. Soo anyway. Next up, snuggle time. I think we can all agree that's he's been very generous with his hands, hasn't left any of us out, and he's big enough that we can all easily cuddle him at once right?"
>There are nods and 'mhmms' all around.
"Big enough? You don't know the half of it Twi."
>You raise your eyebrows up and down, wink, and nudge the ponies either side of you.
>"Darling, are you having a stroke?"
"Urgh come on, I'm trying to tell you that he has a massive-"
>"Pinkie please, can you stop interrupting?" Twilight sighs as you sit on your flank, pout, and cross your hooves.
>"Now I think it's fair to say that he smells, and tastes, absolutely wonderful?"
>Again, nodding aplenty as you grumble.
"Not as good as his dick..."
>"Well I've been looking up things on the internet to see if we can make him even tastier to the senses... If you can even imagine. Now his diet is great already, and unfortunately I couldn't get all the information I wanted due to some locked content, but I've placed orders for different things we should secretly give to him for the..."
>She taps her hoof on her chin.
>"I think it was the holy grail of taste or something? I couldn't get to the more detailed images due to the locks. But still, L-Arginine, Soya Lecithin Granules, and Zinc with added Selenium. We'll also give him some more veggies like Celery, fruits like pineapple, and make sure to give him lots of water."
>"Gee Twi, you think of everythin." AJ smiles and Twilight blushes at the compliment.
"Hey um, Twilight, can I use the laptop more?"
>She shrugs, "Well of course Pinkie, you don't have to ask me for permission."
>"Now, lets continue with..." She shivers in place and smiles. "Belly rubs."
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>>25691881
>The girls fed you as usual, and at their insistence, you kissed them one after another while they layed back, and you rubbed and tickled their bellies.
>You can't help but feel like a sex God as you have to do so little to satisfy them so much.
>As you left for work Pinkie was muttering something about 'The D' while her hind legs kicked, and her tongue hung out of her mouth.
>According to your reports, a cargo train is leaving a station, and on it are a host of mythical creatures.
>No reports as to what those will actually be.
>No accurate data as to which train it is.
>Even with detection devices. So the creatures can't have any magical, radioactive, or thermal signatures.
>And you can't just open the doors and let whatevers held inside storm out while there's a tonne of people on the platforms.
>So different high level agents will be going after different trains.
>Which means you're currently sat on a motorbike, behind some bushes. Waiting.
>With a huge pair of warm fleshy juggs squashing against your back.
>Cassie's here too.
>You let out a breath of air.
>You've been waiting like this for ten minutes.
>Her arms around your waist.
>She doesn't want to be caught unaware, always ready to go.
>It probably helps that she no longer thinks you've been kissing ponies.
>You can feel her juggs press against you a little more, and pulling back just slightly, with each breath she takes.
>You glance at the small mirror on the bike.
>You definately didn't position it so you can see her huge round shelf of a booty.
>Nope.
>Jesus, control yourself man.
>..........
>Looking never hurt.
>You can hear the piston like rumbling of a train approaching.
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>>25691915
>As the train rattles passed, and ahead of you, you rev up the engine and accelerate, starting to follow.
>After a brief minute of following, you accelerate faster, catching up to the train and then getting alongside it. You move further and further alongside it, and you feel those massive udders squash hard against your back.
"You ready?!"
>You shout over the wind.
>Her body heat leaves you as she stands, hands on your shoulder and head for more balance as she stands on top of the bike seat, then leaps to the side of the train.
>The push of her feet causes you to drift away from the train slightly.
>Her hands grip onto the side, before she pulls herself on top.
>She looks at you expectantly as her hair whips around in the wind.
>You draw the bike up to the side of the train, and slowly, shakily stand, while keeping your hands on the bars, accelerating and keeping it steady.
>Fuck, this is a lot more difficult than what she had to do.
>The fear of having your head crack into rocks at 50 miles an hour keeps you and the bike steady.
>Well, here goes.
>You launch yourself to the train.
>Immediately the bike falls, and starts to flip.
>It seemingly disintegrates more and more with each flip, slamming into the hard rocky ground, bits of metal flying as it's wrecked.
>You don't actually see this however as you get a face full of train, slamming into the side of it.
>Your hands managed to catch onto the top though, and so you haul yourself up.
>You look behind at the dust cloud that's formed from the shattered bike, before turning.
>You and Cassie both crouch walking over the cargo holds, moving towards the front of the train and the two carriages for human travellers.
>As you walk across, your feet feel like they're on fire, your mind swirls with thoughts of suicide, your stomach lurches, and the skies fade to black.
>Oh yeah, this is the right train.
>As you step onto the passenger carriage all thoughts, feelings, and visions drift away.
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>>25691942
>The two of you stand above a hatch, both taking a deep breath.
>You burst through.
>Your booted foot kicks into a mans face, making a crunching sound as you break his nose.
>You lunge towards the next, sending your left fist into his solar plexus, before you land a hook with your right.
>Cassie jumps down as well, promptly sprinting in the other direction, engaging the men on that side.
>The two of you swiftly clear the first carriage, before running to the next.
>By the time you get to the engine room your knuckles ache so good.
>You elbow the driver in the temple, knocking him out, before setting the trains speed to about 35.
>Time to check on the goods.
>You walk through carriages, stepping out into open air and over the connectors for each one, before you get to the first cargo hold.
>You open up the bolted from the outside metal door, and you and Cassie peak in.
>You stare into the abyss.
>And it glares back.
>Eldritch horrors meet your gaze, the writhing mess of abominations wrapped with chains used to anchor the biggest of ships.
>You see the chains and shackles glow slightly, from the runes etched and then painted into the metal.
>At least you don't have to worry about them escaping.
>These powerful spells can only be disrupted if the link between them and the casters have been cut, like if they were extremely far away, or if you had knocked them out.
>........
>Oh.
>The groaning of metal, as thick as your wrist, being pulled on, stretched, and slowly broken, sounds out.
>Cassie is already on her ear piece. Whilst you've been staring, she's been frantically telling them the situation.
>"Please advise." She finishes, wondering what the hell could possibly be done to not unleash a constantly growing with power, growing with size, growing with wrath, unit of terrifying unworldly physics defying monsters.
>Her eyes open wide as she sees you, arm cocked back, a split second from throwing.
>Looped belt of pipe bombs in your hand.
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>>25691968
>As the munitions leave your hand, you slam the door closed, and pull a shocked Cassie back.
>You need to be fucking quick.
>You yank out the connector from the cargo hold to the carriage, the cargo starting to drift behind.
>You grip Cassies wrist, and sprint.
>You soon burst into the engine room, and slam the controls back up to the max limit of fifty miles an hour.
>And then you wait.
>There's a gargantuan explosion, and looking out the doorway you see the back carriage still connected to you get ripped up from the tracks.
>And then the one right next to you is torn in half.
>It's a lot easier to view now as you see the cargo holds blow up in a fiery inferno, electricity striking up into the sky, more and more explosions rumbling out, the train tracks being bent upwards and torn from the ground.
>All air and sound is sucked away, and the rest of the carriage you're looking through is crunched flat. And then half of the engine room that you're stood in.
>All at once, seemingly everything that's in front of you explodes in a ball of fire and rage.
>Screaming faces swirl around trying to escape from the ball of energy, before it burns away, and everything seems to stop.
>The engine has failed, and you're starting to slow down.
>You stare into the abyss....
>And it doesn't stare back.
>You're now looking into the biggest crater you've ever seen, perfectly cut, like God just decided to take a big scoop out of the Earth, with no regards to anything else that might have been in the way.
>Your hair has been blown back.
>You shakily turn towards Cassie.
>Time to impress her with a badass line.
........
"I think I just pissed myself."
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>>25691990
>She stands there, eyes wide, looking at you, before slightly shaking her head.
>"Well then... We should get you out of those wet clothes."
>What?
>She steps towards you, lips parted as she breathes, her great heaving juggs squashing against you.
"Uh, uhh..."
>You want this.
>Or rather, you did want this.
>But this wouldn't be fair to the girls waiting for you at home.
>Her hands slowly grip your ass.
>You can see the delight in her eyes as she breathes heavier, before they slowly close. She stands on her tiptoes, leaning up towards you, big thick lips trembling slightly.
......
"I can't."
>Her eyes snap open.
>"What?"
"I... I can't."
>She takes a small step back from you.
>"And why's that?"
>Fuck, she wants an actual reason? ....Ah hell, you need to make it a good one, she might suddenly remember the pony kissing story and think it's that.
"Well... I'm in a relationship."
>"With who?" She asks, an eyebrow raised.
>Fuck, okay, who could you possibly be in a relationship with?
......
"The Directors gay son."
>Why?
>"Oh... So you're gay."
"Well, no actually, I'm not gay, I mean, he used to just be a bit feminine, now, I mean, he looks like a really girly girl."
>"He still has a dick Anon. That's gay."
"That's........ How I like my girls."
>The train finally slows to a stop.
>She turns from you wordlessly and sits on the edge of the half destroyed engine room.
>So now you just have to wait, with her, to be picked up by someone.
>Great.

And that's it for now.
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>>25692014
>to maintain the lie, he actually has to start dating the directors gay son.
>ends with "jokes on him. He's been sticking his dick in a straight man"
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>>25687610
>You flip off the TV.
>Then you turn it off.

Ha

>>25690955
You only need to fellate the newcomers so they stay.
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>>25692317
I feel very fellated
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>>25690979
>>25691042
Agreed
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>>25692331
Good because it's only handjobs from here on out except when you give us a feel or boner.
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It is a sad day anons.

I just got back from classes to find my computer refusing to boot properly. After some research, I've come to the conclusion that my HDD is fucked. I had no backup so I lost all progress on my projects that are due very soon. What doesn't help is that my teachers don't give a shit and still want me to give the projects in on time.

Alas, this means no updates until the holidays since I gotta hurry my ass to give hand projects in on time. I have no idea if I'm going to visit family during the holidays so there may or may not be any updates during that time.

However I'm still going to be able maintain the thread and pastebin.

God dammit, my fucking day has been ruined by this random bullshit. Just fucking kill me.
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>>25692764
k
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>>25692764

Sorry bro. Let this be a lesson to set up like, dropbox and/or google drive and/or a jump drive to back up projects.

As someone working on a thesis, the loss of stuff on my HDD would be like... 18+ months of work lost.

On that note, I should go make a backup copy of my insturmental data in the lab...
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>>25692764

Also, check your power supply. I had a HDD scare a year or so ago, and it turned out it wasnt my HDD, it was my power supply. Took it past my universities computer repair place and stuck a random one they had lying around to see if that was the issue component.
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kinda got caught up having to critique an art stream of a friend
but I'll get right on writing now

>>25692764
sucks to be you right now
but seriously, go for sure it's the HDD
the most important part of a computer is always the data, it's what they tell you in IT-school
always make backups
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>>25693181
coolio.
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>>25692764
Even if the HDD is fucked, see if you can run a recovery and/or extraction tool on it. It might not get you anything in time to turn in, but it will preserve anything else you had hanging around on there.
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>>25692014

>"That's........ How I like my girls.
anon has spent too much time on the internet
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>>25693478
He's an anon, he was born on the internet
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>>25682969
>You take the first bite of a truly delicious sandwich.
“mmmh,~”
>It's like an orgasm in your mouth
>Not like someone cumming in your mouth, but like...
>Bad train of thought, Anon.
>Swallowing doesn't come easy
>Anyway... You just found out she knows how to cook.
>You are so going to keep her.
>You take another bite without moaning into it again.
>This meal just got awkward.
>As you silently chew you perk your ears.
>It's not what you heard from her that unsettles you
>It's what you didn't hear.
“You're not eating.”
>”I'm sorry, Master. I'll eat.”
>Her voice was completely frail again.
>Damnit, she was on the verge of crying... again.
>Why would she-
>The ham...
>That's why she was almost unable to pronounce what she used to make the sandwiches.
“NO!”
>You shout out, trying to stop her.
>squeakytoy.mp3
“Don't eat the meat! You don't have to eat the meat.”
>You hear her softly whimpering again, but you hope it came from relieve, not just your outburst.
“I was-”
>Not thinking? Reckless? Your usual self without regard for another's feelings?
>You sigh and let the sandwich down to the table.
>Any appetite you had was gone, no matter how delicious it had been
>You think about returning to your window, but it just seemed rude.
>As if you have any social obligations to a slave species.
>Can't you just be the bad guy? Even for a second?
>You face away, drawn to your window.
“Make yourself something. Something a pony would think is tasty. I don't care what.”
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>>25694011
Nope, can't find motivation today.
Pixels drained me

Will read maudstory and go to sleep
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>>25694029
That makes me sad.
Don't force yourself though. Do what you need to do to do something good
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>>25694011
give me the pastebin Shaytan
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>>25694029
gnight, anon
pleasant dreams
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>>25694011
Very nice, dubs too
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>>25694074
Yeah, I don't want it to feel like a chore to me, especially as I'm a little bit stuck in a scene I didn't really plan on writing but the entire "Forcing Flutters to eat meat"-thing was something I spontaneously decided upon
just like the second time he hurt her with his knee to the face, it was also spontaneous, but at least let me delve somewhat into flutters past.
This right now is just Blindanons depression now and I don't quite see the way toward the scene I want to write...
I actually don't want to write a lot in this setting, only a few things and how those came to be.
I completely lack an endgame. Like an amateur I just started writing and let myself see what the story itself demands of me.

also i changed my mind, some fallout, then maudstory and then I see if i feel motivated to write, or i go to sleep
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>>25694231

Something I've found to help is add some notes to the end of what you are writing... Sort of an outline of scenes you want to go through. And yeah, sometimes writing through some scenes can take longer than you expect. I feel your pain.
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>>25690979

Got some more written today, gonna post it now.

>Beans, onion and garlic flavored couscous, and some chicken for yourself.
>As far as you can tell, Maud liked it.
>Atleast, she ate all her portion.
>After you ate, and the sun was just touching the, you pulled a little bit of firewood from the back of the truck, and built a fire ring out of rocks.
>"Its so warm... Why build a fire?"
Well, the air gets a little cool out here at night, but its more than that.
The fire, its entertaining, and comforting. The dancing light of the fire just has some kind of... magic.
>"I guess that makes sense."
Also, smelling like campfire is much preferred to smelling like hot sweaty ass when there's no bathing.
>"That also makes sense."
>YOu do feel a bit crusty after hiking around for the day... But that's the price you pay for getting to enjoy wilderness like this.
>Once the fire was rolling, and you and Maud both had a beer, and the cooler set within arms reach, you discuss things with Maud.
So, what did the tectonics of your world look like?
>"Tectonics?"
Wait... did you not know about plate tectonics in Equestria?
>Maud just looks at you, saying nothing.
>You sigh.
I suppose it shouldn't suprise me if you didn't really care so much about wide scale mapping, tectonics might not be a thing...
>Shit, the maps you are working on updating actually predate widespread human acceptance of plate tectonic theory.
>You've talked to older geologists who can remember the first people they worked under balking at the idea.
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>>25694517

Well, Maud, the world we see is what we call the crust, a thin layer of rock basically floating on top of a bunch of hot, gooey rocks.
The rocks the crust sits on, the mantle, is kind of like silly putty... and as you might very well observe, the crust is rather solid and hard.
They crack, and break into big chunks that kinda slide around on top of this hot goopy stuff.
Where plates come together, you get mountains. Where they spread apart, you get volcanoes and stuff.
Atleast, thats the basic gist of it... When we are done with this project, I got a bunch of books you might want to look into.
>You both drink beer, and enjoy that special kind of relaxation you can only find around a campfire and a clear night sky.
>A thought hits you.
You know what Maud, when we are done with this project, you might very well be the first pony to get their name on a published paper.
>Maud looks at you, almost cocking her head slightly.
>"My name on a paper?"
Well, yeah. You are knowledgeable on the subject at hand, and you are helping a good chunk with making the work move along quickly.
>She still stares at you.
... How do academic publications work in Equestria?
>"You write books. I never finished a book."
>Fucking wierd ass ponies...
Ok, how stuff tends to work, especially these days, is anytime people collaborate on research, they all get their names stuck on the paper thats published when its done.
>YOu stand up, and go and grab a bulletin out of the center console of the truck.
Here's a paper I'm credited as an author on... See, A. N. Ymous.
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>>25694535

>"Why does having your name on a paper matter?"
Having your name out there is a way to increase your respect amongst your peers in your field. Prove you know what the fuck you are doing.
>"And you'd put a pony's name as an author on your paper?"
Shit, Maud, to be honest, you are doing more work than most credited authors on a paper do. Most of the time, a top line author doesn't do any of the damn work, and takes all the credit.
Thats what's nice about not being directly in academia...
>At that, you finish off your current beer, then pull another one out of the cooler.
Of course, that assumes my boss'll let me...
>You pop open your new can, and take a swig.
You have a last name, Maud?
>"Pie."
Maud Pie? Not the strangest last name... A lot of people might not even realise M. Pie is a pony's name.
Still though, you deserve it if we can keep up the pace we had today.
>Maud sips her own beer.
>"Thank you, Anon. Today has probably been the best day I've had since coming to your Earth."
>Ooof.
Uh, glad to hear that.
And, sorry to hear so much of the rest of your time here was... less than ideal.
>Maud stares at the campfire, and takes a drink from her beer.
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>>25694551

>As the fire begins to burn low, you take a look at the time.
>Bed time.
Alright, Maud, I think its bed time.
>You stand up from your chair and stretch.
>After a good stretch, you grab your head lamp from your pocket, and put it on.
You gonna lay down as well, Maud? If not... I think I got an idea for making it so you can more easily work the zipper on the tent, actually.
>You go and dig a little bit through the cab before you find what you thought up to help Maud.
>Extra shoe laces!
>You go and tie them through the little handles on the zipper, giving something Maud could either grab with her mouth, or hooves.
>As you are doing this, Maud comes up behind you.
>"I think it is about a good time to go to bed."
Yeah, alright. These strings ought to help you get in and out of the tent yourself.
>"That's awfully trusting of you."
I suppose... But, honestly, where are you gonna go from here, Maud. There ain't anything out here for miles.
>"I know. I appreciate your trust."
>You nod to Maud.
G'nite.
>You move over to your tent, crawl in, and lay down on the cot.
>You set an alarm for 5:30 AM.
>After a long hard day of field work, you fall asleep quickly.

And, that's it for this evening.
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>>25694569
>>25694597
I think you have a duplicate post.


Feels are coming nice and steady and the relationship building is golden almost realistic... well as realistic as talking pastel ponies on earth studying doing geologist work can be.

This is high quality stuff and rather calming to read. Nice work m80
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>>25694597
>>25694569
>>25694551
>>25694535
>>25694517
Maud is pretty great.
I'm still lovin' it
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>>25658884
Of course not, silly.
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>>25650336
Bump
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>>25681403
this is too... FEEL
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http://pastebin.com/u/CaptainAnonymous

I made a pastebin.
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>>25687695
>>the pony princess demanding the return of the elements of kindness and loyalty
>Which one I wonder?
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>>25680247
>Choosing where to go for lunch was rather difficult
>While searching for where to eat Rainbow said that she doesn't eat most meat.
>However fish was fine, though.
>At the end, you suggested sushi.
>You told her it was pretty much fish and vegetables wrapped in rice and seaweed.
>It didn't so all too appetizing to her at first, but she would try it.
>Since she couldn't actually hold chopsticks, you had to feed it to her.
>After a few pieces, she took a liking to it.
>Although she is kind of blushing.
>She is more embarressed than usual.
"Something the matter?'
>"I-It's awkward to be fed like this out in public. I feel like I'm a baby or something."
"It's not all that terrible. It's not like you can actually use the chopsticks."
She looks down at he remainder of the plat before her
>"I'll just eat the rest by myself."
>She just shoves her face into the sushi.
>Now you really are acting like a baby.
>Upon finishing her platter, wish she somewhat made a mess of trying to eat off, she looks back up at you.
>There is a few grains of rice stuck to her face.
>You get a napkin to wipe it off, but she grabs the napkin from you.
>"I can do these things myself you know."
>She seems to be acting very different than when you two were at the park.
>The sushi bar here is somewhat crowded today.
"You seem to hold yourself in another light in public."
>"Honestly, it's only when there are a bunch of other around."
"Oh?"
>"Yeah, I just don't want to be seen as anything less than awesome when out in public."
"So like wearing a mask so you don't appear to have any faults?'
>She takes a sip out of the drink beside her plate
>"Yeah, kind of. Except I don't have faults."
"Heh. Yeah, okay."
>"Oh, can it. You probably do the same thing."
"Not as much since I don't hold myself in such high status."
>All she does is stick her tongue out at you.
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>>25696881
>After lunch, both of you decide to explore the area a little more.
>This time she isn't dragging you around.
>Rather, she is floating by you side the whole time.
>After walking around a bit, you realize one thing.
>That this city doesn't have a lot of stuff either of you are interested in.
>It's nice to get out though.
>Looking at her she seems to be enjoying just looking around than finding anything of true interest.
>After a while you arrive at the center of the city.
>It's pretty bustling with all the cars and people walking.
>Only took an hour or so to get here.
>You see a couple of other ponies as well walking around their owners.
>"It not okay by a long shot, but it doesn't seem like everyone here is terrible"
"It may look fine on the surface, but we don't know what goes on behind closed doors."
>"Yeah, I guess you're right."
>She gives you a light tap on the shoulder.
>"But I know you're cool."
>The conversation is abruptly stopped by a loud crash.
>You hear a rather stern man's voice.
>?:"You idiot! You look what you did."
>Upon looking at where the noise was coming from it's a food stand owner yelling at a pony.
>Further inspection shows that pony in question is a light beige color fur with with hair color matching Rainbow's fur with lighter streaks added in.
>Owner:"If you keep this up, you'll be going back from where you came! I can't be having this!"
>The pony in question is hiding her eyes.
>Pony: "I-I'm sorry sir! It won't happen again, I promise!"
>Owner: "That's what you said last time! And look me in the eyes when I'm talking to you!"
>He grabs her hooves and to move away from her face and give her a dead stare.
>Owner: "You got one more time, pony."
>Pony: "Yes sir..."
>Everyone is walking by as if nothing is really going on.
>You turn to look at Rainbow, and now you're worried.
>That is a look of murder on the mind.
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>>25696902
>>That is a look of murder on the mind.
Or
>rape
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"Rainbow, it's time to go home."
>"That manure eater is gonna get it."
"No Rainbow, we can't intervene in it. It'll cause a scene."
>She looks at you and starts yelling.
>"So we- I am supposed to just stay here and watch this happen?!"
>The loudness has caused the stand owner to have his attention focus on you.
>Owner: "Hey guy, you need to make sure your pony is kept in check!"
>You really want to punch that guy now.
>Is it worth getting in trouble though? No.
>You're gritting your teeth on the situation, but before you can even register another thought Rainbow is already making her way to the stand.
>This is bad, and you need to defuse it quickly or just get away and deal with her later.
"Rainbow, wait!"
>She is literally inches from the guys face.
>"Hey you, watch how you treat her otherwise you'll have to answer to me."
>Owner: "Eh? I didn't realize you had the authority, pony. Now scram before I call the cops."
>Time to act fast.
>You grab Rainbow from out of the air and hold her before she cause anymore trouble.
>"H-hey! What the-?"
"Sorry sir, we will be making our way on now."
>Owner: "Hmph. Kids these days need to learn to control their pets."
"...I'll keep that in mind sir."
>"Let me go! I'm gonna show that guy what's what!"
"Just be quiet, please Rainbow."
>You proceed to walk back toward home with a struggling pony in your arms.
>A couple of blocks later the struggling has stopped.
>"...You can put me down now."
"You gonna drag me back there if I do?"
>"..."
>You decide to put her down.
>She notices the trash can near the street pole and proceeds to walk up to it and take a good swing at it.
>It left a noticable dent in the side, but those metal trash cans weren't the most sturdy anyway.
>"Why did it have to be like this?!"
>You don't have an answer to it.
>...
>The remainder of the travel home was silent.

That is all for an update, but in case anyone wants to know who the pony was being yelled at well.
>pic related
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>>25696931
N-no! Not m-muh waifu!
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bamp.
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>>25687610
>You don’t want to wake her almost as much as you don’t want to admit you don’t know what you’re doing here, but since she already knows that last part…
>With a sigh, you heave yourself to your feet and head towards her room.
>The sooner you talk, the sooner you can start preparing.
>You have the door to half-open before you remember to knock.
>With the lights off, you can just barely see the mare jerk upright in shock, still clutching that damn pillow.
>Hopefully… hopefully getting back to work will help get her mind off of everything.
“Apple Bloom, we need to talk.”

>Your blind flailing sends the alarm clock smashing into the far wall.
>Oops.
>And the damn thing is *still* ringing!
>So much for turning it off and getting a little more sleep.
“Dammit.”
>You need to get up, anyway; you set it a half-hour earlier for a reason, after all.
>It was a good reason, at the time, but now you’re not so sure.
>You can’t hear yourself sigh over that FUCKING alarm, but your body makes the usual movements.
>No, you’re sure – you need to get up.
>Dammit, if Roma hadn’t left so early, you could have…
>What, been too busy beating her to watch the weather forecast? Wondering why she was standing around for no fucking reason?
>You could have gone down to the dorm last night, but it was late.
>Too late, you felt at the time.
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>>25698256
>You reach up and turn on the lamp sitting on your nightstand.
>And then glare at the alarm clock.
>It doesn’t react.
“Fucker.”
>You pull yourself out of bed and begin to get ready to face the day, starting by turning off that damn noise.
>Clothes follow, and by the time you’re pulling on the boots, you’re mostly awake.
>Also a little angry, but that helps keep your eyes open.
>Fucking alarm.
>Fucking common courtesy.
>Fucking Apple Bloom talking you into letting the other ponies get their sleep.
>You should have kicked in the fucking door last night and gone over the schedule changes with Maud instead of waking up before the fucking… fucking… something.
>Meh.
>You’re too sleepy to keep that going, even if it does help.
>Instead, you focus on getting down the stairs without falling and dying. That’s hard enough on its own.
>Either you manage, or hell is just like the farm, because you’re walking out the front door moments later, flashlight in hand.
>You don’t really need it – the stars and moon are bright enough to light the way – but bring it anyway, just leave it switched off.
>Never know when you might need some light at too-fucking-early-o’clock in the morning.
>The dorm’s lights are on, and as you get closer, you can see a few silhouettes as ponies rush past the windows.
>About a hundred feet out – oh, who the fuck are you kidding? You don’t know how far it is – some ways out, you click on the flashlight.
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>>25698266
>Don’t want them to think you’re sneaking up on them.
>Things run smoothly here because you trust your ponies and they know it.
>Not that you have a choice.
>Without any other humans around, you *have* to trust the ponies.
>You stop short of the building, just outside of the circle cast by its lights.
>It has little to do with trust – not directly, anyway – and more to do with habit ingrained in you back from when this place was used to house migrant workers.
>Back when there *were* migrant workers.
>It was one of your uncle’s rules.
>It’s been years, but that bit of advice has stuck with you.
>”A person needs space,” he had told when you first came to stay at the farm. “Let ‘em have it and things’ll be a lot smoother.”
>He was far more… reasonable… in those days, before the portals opened.
>You don’t stand there long before Maud is trotting out to meet you.
>”You’re up early.”
“So are you.”
>She stares at you blankly in response.
“I’m afraid there’s going to be a change –“
>Her tail twitches slightly.
>The movement is small enough you’re surprised you noticed.
>Hell, it’s small enough, you wonder if you imagined it.
>You ponder that a little too long, leaving that sentence unfinished.
>”To?” Maud has to ask after a while, her question waking you from your little daze.
“Oh, right. A change to…”
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>>25698275
>While you were out of it, a small group of ponies has gathered just inside the open doorway. None whose name you can remember – certain not right now, when you can barely remember your own – but a few you recognize.
>Both of Roma’s assistants are trying their hardest to pretend they aren’t listening, but their stiff ears and awkward glances give it away.
>What are they worried about?
>Thanks to their duties, they spend far less time in the fields than most of the others.
>”Is something wrong?” Maud asks, her tail lazily swishing back and forth.
“Why would you think that?”
>”Because you’re frowning.”
>Oh.
>So you are.
>Well, you have good reason to, being up this fucking early and with… right. The freeze.
“Yeah, we’ve got a problem, Maud.”
>You can’t help but notice the many eyes that look in your direction.
“There’s going to be a hard freeze end of this week.”
>A few of the pegasus ponies nod, acting as if they had a fucking clue about this. One even has the temerity to smirk and doesn’t even try to hide it.
>Others look relieved, Roma’s assistants among them.
>Oh.
>They thought this was about her?
>Inwardly, you roll your eyes.
>Externally, you think you manage to keep a straight face.
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>>25683054

I feel if you're thinking between make to anon an abusive master or a person in need of healing, one better than Fluttershy to attend a wounded animal
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>>25698290
“We’ve gotta change up the work schedule a bit to get everything vulnerable in before then, so…”
>Maud doesn’t seem to be paying attention to you, not until the group she’s staring at disperses, leaving the two of you alone.
“Hey, Maud? You awake?”
>”Thought you’d want to talk in private.”
>It didn’t matter to you, but you shrug and explain the changes to her.
>By the end of it, she’s smiling.
>You don’t think you’ve ever seen her smile.
>You didn’t think she was *capable* of smiling, but there it is – a slight, but noticeable upward curl at the edges of her mouth.
“What?”
>”Nothing you’d think is important,” the mare answers.
“No, tell me.”
>You don’t want it to become habit – the not answering you thing, that is.
>Maud looks away and her ears twitch, but she complies after a second.
>”It’s a good plan,” she responds in her usual monotone. “So Apple Bloom has to be alright.”

end for tonight
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>>25698316
bump. hoping for happy end.
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>>25698316
That's a subtly heartwarming moment at the end of things. This really does remain one of my favorite stories around here.
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>>25692764
Work on your projects, the thread will be here when you get back.
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>Leave for a day
>Multiple new stories out of nowhere updating rapidly

wow... nice.

>>25696931
A-anon's going to help that poor pony r-right?

How could you be mad with Coco she's the ideal pony slave basically no training required?

>>25694597
Your story is super comfy man. Perfect thing to read while relaxing. Need more Maud and rock facts.

>>25694011
>continually hurting Fluttershy by acciedent

At first I felt when this started. Now this is getting silly. I read through your entire story today and I got to say its a strong start though each update seems to peter off without going anywhere. If I was to suggest something it would be to prewrite your update section then post. Writing on the fly tends to leave you bereft of your goal when you eventually stop.

That being said this is a very interesting scenario and relationship. I'm interested to see where this goes.

>>25692764
That sucks man. I've been looking forward to more adorable moonhorse for awhile. School's more important though youngster so focus on that then do horsewords. We can wait.

1/?
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>>25692014
I just read all your posts up to this point I need to thank you. This is fucking perfect. The humor is spot on, the ponies are all in character, Anon's character isn't cingey as hell. The setting is new, the pony moments/cuddlying is adorable as fuck/sweet ,and basically I feel obligated to suck your dick. The only thing a little off about this is that the realtionship/trust between anon and the ponies is building pretty fast. That could be you trying to show ponies are natually trusting and more quick to love then humans, but it is coming off as awkward pacing.

Nigger you better write more of this good shit this is grade A material.


>>25689849
Now that's an interesting take on Anon treating a slave pony. Be upfront and blunt with it, don't be cruel and wait for it to just accept you.

I know you're not doing anything else with it, but I'd like to see more of this from someone. Hell I might give it a shot.
2/?
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>>25681779
This particular human family is excessively edgy. Like more so then what you'd see from actual slave owners back in the 1800. Your story is good and I'm loving the development of Anon and Rachel's relationship (its rather sweet), but the abuse descriptions and that bit where anon gives a spleal about fighting the ''monster inside of him' swear to God that is right out of a Shadow the Hedge Hog fanfic.

Maaaaybe tone that down.

>>25681622
This is getting good. Don't stop now. What happens next?

>>25676649
>pretending to be retarded

About 8 years late for that particular meme boat m80.

>>25661825
Maybe call it snowbound for now it looks like the blizzard is going to be the main driving force of the whatever is going to happen. The story is good so far but maybe do a check up on your characters particulary Scootaloo and Coco. They seem a little... off character wise. Lyra and Bon-Bon are free game I guess and while Lyra fits perfectly Bon-Bon feels a little hollow character wise and uh how do I say this? Too human? They way she acts doesn't feel like a pony acting.

I do want to see how this plays out though so keep going.

>>25660202
Your updates are too small to really say anything about them. Not sure what you have planned for this whole anon with a split personality in grimdark world, but it really doesn't seem to be going anywhere or doing anything. Maybe set up some kind of goal fro the characters to achieve?

>>25658659
I want to buy a slave pony for the express purpose of being a blanket/body pillow. Hell if they are enslaved long enough you could probably buy a pony who's special talent was that.

>>25663461
Scootaloo is best daughteroo that you also fuck if she's okay with it.

But really Scootaloo is very adorable here and the father role anon adopted is very fitting to the situation. Hope to see more family.

3/3

This is what happens when you have autism. You get this wall of text
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>>25698955
I kind of based Anon on a guy I used to work with. He got a mail order bride from the Philippines and worked out a sex contract marriage until she could get a permanent resident visa. I figure there'd be a lot of guys who would do something similar to slave ponies.
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>>25698982
agree with all this. bump with great expectations.
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>>25689672
this pony still has much to learn about discipline and obedience, unless you prefer to turn Anon in the mascot of Twiligth
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>>25699080
There is actually a guy in my neighborhood who did that. Except she got pregnant and they decided to stay together for the child. They ended up having 4 more children after that and decided to get married again after 7 years, turns out if you can be friends/work well with somebody for a long and just fuck them a lot that is often better than 'love'.
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>>25699271
I'm not saying it's a bad way to go about things just that there would be plenty of these guys buying up pony "wives" for themselves.

>>25699247
Maybe this Anon isn't a sadist who feels the need to dominate another sapient.
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>>25699271
Huh. good to know. bump
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>>25699298
I'd probably be one of those guys. It gets really cold and lonely where I work even if she never loved me having somebody to hold and make small talk to would do wonders for my anxiety.
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>>25696881
Dude. dredging up an old 4chaners otaku side after finally kicking the habit for ponies is not cool baka
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>>25698982
I agree except the bit about edgy. Edgy is not necessarily bad. If he wants to write it that way he can. I'll read it. To me It's more about how it's handled.

But then again. I don't read sonic the hedge hog fanfic. so I may just not be as tired of it as you.
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>>25650336
bump
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>>25650336
bump
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>>25650336
bump
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>>25698955
seconded
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>>25698316
How do I slob your knob properly for this?
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>>25698982
This is all true... I just think the edginess kind of fits. Having a low grip on one's self is what drives such self-loathing and dramatic articulation into a person's head, you know. As cringeworthy as it is, it's shockingly realistic.

>>25699958
This guy gets it.
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>>25689849


>"Anonymous?"
Yes Twilight.
>She looks apprehensive. She still is nervous around you even after 6 months together. Twilight is getting to the point when she can look at you while you're having your way with her. It's better than the first few days where she just shut her eyes and tried not to cry.
>You were gentle and didn't make her do too much. Your tastes are pretty vanilla anyway. Just the fact you're burying your dog in a pony is enough for you.
>"I found one of my friends while searching the internet."
Really? Which one?
>"Applejack."
Well that's nice, how is she doing?
>"I-I don't know. I was hoping that maybe you could arrange a visit for me?"
Oh, did you save the contact information?
>"Yes, I wrote it down on the notepad by the computer."
Well let me take a look.
>You type in the URL to see where her friend is being kept. Looks like they have her working as a lifter at the local hardware store. Couldn't hurt to go see her you guess.
We'll go see her tomorrow afternoon. I'll call ahead to see if we can rent her for an hour or so.
>"Thanks Anonymous. This really means a lot for me."
No problem Twilight.
You want to watch a movie with me?
>"Okay."
>Twilight blew you about 20 minutes into the movie. You didn't ask her to, but you guess she felt obligated after you agreed to let her see her friend.
>Twilight is a good house pony.
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>>25701138
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>>25701138
Bump for moar
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Do what ever I whish?
Probably opening the chain and giving rainbow dash tons if cuddles and love
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>>25698943
all taken into account, thanks
and i only hurt fluttershy twice, the third time got corrected swiftly.
yes... the second was only for a cheap laugh, and i could have skipped it, bbut it at least lead somewhere.
will work on myself
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>>25701138
>It didn't go well. Applejack has had a rough time of it since she's been here. Well, we all have, but she still has her pride intact. You can't say the same for yourself.
>She was angry that you gave in so meekly to your current owner. Angry that you stopped fighting. Mostly you think she's angry that you are allowed to rest right now while she toils away on dangerous construction projects.
>You don't blame her for being angry with you. It still hurt though.
>Anonymous gave you the next few days off. You didn't take them. You needed to feel the touch of another, even if it was mostly fake. It's nice when they aren't trying to hurt you during the act.
>You'll go see Applejack again. Mostly because you can see how she needs a friend right now, even if she doesn't want one. You are also going to convince your owner to purchase your friend as well. If only to keep her safe.
>Safe. It's odd that you feel that way here. You know Anonymous isn't going to harm you, but at the same time you don't want to push your boundaries too far. He might send you back to the shelter if you upset him too much.
>You can't go back there. Your shelter time is almost used up. If you are there for another month, then they will euthanize you or send you to the hardest of labor camps. Same thing really. One just takes longer than the other.
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>>25701378
Bump for moar
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>>25701378
>>25701430
seconded. this new angle is getting good
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>>25701443
Maybe tomorrow.
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>>25701459
Awwwww, but why?
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>>25701475
Because I have shit to do.
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>>25701550
Curse you life.
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>>25701622
bump
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I'm probably gonna wait for the next thread to post more. I need to go work in a lab today anyway.

I should stop procrastinating today, at the very least
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>>25702110
I have a freckle on my penis.
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>>25702155
Me too, but it's heart shaped
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Clop soon. First time trying it.
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>>25703099
PASTEBIN
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>>25703159
>>25696407
Haven't added anything else.

I'm going over what I've written now, will probably put it up at the beginning of the next thread.
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>>25694011
>You sit at the table, listening to Fluttershy cook something for herself.
>Every minute she felt the need to asks if it was okay to use another ingredient
>And every time you told her a different version of 'It's okay' or 'I don't care'
>It was annoying, and with each new question your rebuke got louder, as her next question got quieter.
>Eventually the next thing she said was inaudible.
“Goddamnit, Fluttershy. I said I don't care what you eat. I just- You felt really thin, okay?”
“I don't want my property to be starving to death.”
>You don't exactly know why you empathized 'property' in that way, or why you were mean to her in general.
>Well... you do know.
>It's that damn helpful nature and cautious approach she, and everyone else for that matter, has towards you.
>Aww, poor cripple, gotta treat him like a raw egg who can break at any given moment.
>...
>Well, you do /explode/ at any given moment, but it's just...
>...
>You just want to be alone, sulk in your depression, and not hurt anyone in a fit of bi-polar anger.
>You have to give her away, or you'll just hurt her.
“I'm sorry if I hurt you. I'm sorry if I act like a child and not think about anyone's feelings while doing so.”
>Your apology came out monotone, and not at all sincere.
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>>25703567
>It was a standard phrase you've learned and it usually pisses of people even more.
>You know that.
>That's self destructive behavior, isn't it?
>You know that too.
>You don't need a roommate who shows you all your hypocrisy every 5 minutes.
“I'm going to return you, then you'll be save from-”
>”No...”
>You were interrupted by another squeaky sound that somehow reminded you of a 'no'
“Huh?”
>She gasps for air and keeps quiet.
>...
>Was she... Was she holding her breath?
“Breath, Fluttershy.”
>Again a gasp, this time one for air.
>You have no idea what you should make of her.
>Her behavior is just... weird.
>On one hand she seemingly want's to be a good slave and try to follow your orders as good as she could.
>On the other she calls you out on your depression and even interrupts you to disagree with you.
>And whenever she does so she was totally aware she stepped over a line for someone in a position like hers.
“What's on your mind?”
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>>25703572
>Be Fluttershy
>Be with the nicest human you have ever met.
>Your new master.
>And he wants to give you back, because he thinks he hurt you.
>While he did hurt, gets loud easily and seems to have a temper, he always apologizes.
>You don't want to go back.
>Not to the others.
>Not just the other masters you have had, but also the other ponies you met.
>They knew who you were.
>Word had spread about the Elements of Harmony
>And the ponies were so keen on having a scapegoat, one who wouldn't even fight back.
>When the slave master at the shop noticed how they were beating you up you were simply placed into some cell out of reach from the others hooves.
>But not from their words... or their spit.
>You don't want to go back...
>You want to stay with Master Anon.
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>>25703581
>Tears well up in your eyes again as you walk around the kitchen table and place your head in his lap.
“Please, Don't send me away, Master. Please- please. I- I'll do whatever you want. I- I-”
>Everything you wanted to say dies down once again in a stream of tears.
>He had to keep you.
>You couldn't go back.
>You were at your breaking point.
>You had simply hoped to die, when every day was worse than the day before.
>Just to escape the suffering
>They didn't even let you sleep to escape.
>You can't take it any longer.
>You had to stay with Master, or you would...
>you would...
>...
>You would kill yourself.
>Yes..
>You'd strive for salvation through the sweet, sweet release of death.
>But there is this shimmer of hope.
>Staying with Master Anon.
>He was so nice.
>It's almost as if he treated you like a real person.
>You didn't even notice when he had crouched down to hug you.
>Neither do you notice you were ruining his fresh shirt again.
>All you felt right now was Master's warmth.
>His sweet embrace.
>His promise to keep you.
>Even though you haven't had many tears left as you already cried for a long time earlier.
>But you cried.
>You cried until you had no more energy left in your body to convulse from lack of tears
>You eventually fell asleep.
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>>25703567
>>25703572
>>25703581
>>25703587
this is blindanon, btw.

>>25694109
don't call me things i have to google to know the meaning of
http://pastebin.com/0rmywwyB

Captcha: pick all mountains
I'm austrian... those aren't mountains... fine I click your meager hills
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>>25698290
I see revolución in those pones' eyes.
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>>25698316
Is she implying he can't make a good plan? That's a lashing.
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>>25703612
I'm really enjoying this story
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>>25703587
Poor Fluttershy.
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>>25703612
i want anal rape
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>>25704210
this is white knight general
Fluttershy is for consent only
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>>25704287
fuckoff
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>>25704287
What if she didn't know she liked/wanted anal until after he goes at it for a bit?
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>>25694597
Good work here RM-Writing, the work time and dialogues betwen the homo sapien and the Equus ferus caballus is fine for now and not need sexual tension, manerism or violence, you may need a little more introspection and conversations about their lives and family atmosphere, a factor that can unite them more than just work, to attenuate the line between master and slave that I would like to be dissolved before the end, if not friends at least professional colleagues.
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Would you guys be okay with me calling the thread "Slave ponies" instead of "Slave pony auction"? Makes sense to me since the main focus is the slaves and not the auction.
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>>25704363

Go for it. I suppose my story doesnt include the auction at all.
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New thread: >>25704391
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>>25696931
>but in case anyone wants to know who the pony was being yelled at well.

>Is Coco Pommel

>the cute and sweet Coco Pommel

>Coco Pommel is victim of an asshole that makes his life one hell

You first and only think now

You're dead asshole!
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>>25681622

>for very few seconds, you're just silently looking in her big blue eyes, still smiling, patienly waiting till she finds the right words
>she looks away and then back at you again to say what's been on her mind
>“….Thanks for saying that Anon. It really does mean a lot to me...And most of all, you mean a lot to me. When i got into this world, i though i'm just gonna die, and all alone. When they took me, I was so scared and lost pretty much all hope for salvaltion. Blindsided, waiting for nothing, couldn't even move. It felt like i'm gonna lose my mind any time. But then you appeared, bright like a shining sun, driving the darkness away. Freed me from the shackles, gave me the time of my life and even told me things so kind and understanding…Never even asking for any kind of reward. I wish i could just at least...“
>she doesn't finish, but it's obvious what she meant
>slowly and carefuly, to see if you're not protesting, she's getting closer to your lips for a kiss
>you're leaning closer as well, laying your hand on her shoulder, very gently helping her to bring her body closer to yours
>as your lips are just about to touch with hers, you both close your eyes, wrapping each other in a loving hug
>you can feel her heart beating fast like a motorcycle rushing trough the highway
>and then it happens
>the most expected and pleasant moment, when you finally meet her soft, warm lips in a long and deep kiss
>gentle at first, just barely in contact with each other, but continuously more and more lustful with passion to absorb all the love you're both putting into this action
>few small kisses at the start, then few more longer and deeper ones
>you can already feel her saliva in your mouth as your tongue meets hers for the first timea
>you twist it around for a bit and pushing gently against afterwards
>her tongue seems to be quite bigger than yours and pretty much like everything about her, softer
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>>25705033

>all this time, you're fondling her whole body with your hands and at this point, you use your right arm to push her even closer on you
>trully, the most wonderful moments of your life so far
>as if everything around seized from existing and only thing that remained were your naked spirits
>you wish for it to never end, but it already must have been like ten or fifteen minutes
>when it actualy ends, none of you really feel like letting go
>she's still holding you tight as you're backing away from each other, still in a kiss that's getting lighter and lighter, ending with one that's as gentle as the very first one
„Whoa.“ you say between your breath after few seconds of silence
>Sarah just giggles instead of answer, because she doesn't seem to know what exactly to say
>from the look on her face, you're guessing she mixed up between happines, confusion and something you weren't sure about
>“This was my first real kiss I...never kissed anyone like that.“
„Aaand...*cough* how do you feel about it?“
>“It's…so wrong. But felt so good at the same time. So...outta this world, or even mine. I just couldn't help myself, couldn't stop, i don't even know where it came from. And you weren't even resisting...“
„Well, yeah. I didn't want to.“
>“But you're a human. Were not even the same species. Isn't it forbidden in your culture as well, to do things like these with other species?“
„Um, it is. Pretty much. But it was way too good to regret it.“
>“...Was it?“
„For me, 100%. It was incredible.“
>“Oh my...But what would other ponies say if they knew. But you're just- I feel so happy around you, but i felt like it just wasn't enough. I needed more so i just...did a...thing.“
„Look Sarah, that's alright. If you want to or just feel guilty or something, well guess we can just forget about it...“
>„N-no. Please, don't... And um, so, you were saying you don't mind this at all?“
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>>25705033
More :(
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>>25701378
please, continue good anon...
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>>25705115
This is so good!
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>>25704363
Some stories start with the auction or use it as an essential element to the story, there are also stories where the ponies are collected in the same way they do with animals living in shelters.

maybe the correct name for this thread is: "Save the pony! the anti-slave thread!"
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>>25701378
I was thinking that if anon gets aj how pissed she would be at him once she found out about twi. then twi would cry to her about what she's had to do in the past and how much worse she has had it before. and how much stronger aj is than her without magic. and maybe aj will eventually worm up to anon if just to take some of the load (hehe) off twilight.

>>25694231

Just and idea i came up with for more.

he lost his sight to and accident so he would probably be eligible for an eye transplant.
maybe his mom came by FS by and unorthodox way and neither of you realize how valuable she is. Maybe after anon and her settle down together his mom show up unexpectedly saying excitedly that they could afford the surgery but only if they sell flutters. thinking he would do it.
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>>25650336
bump
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>>25705033
man you'r posting after the bump limit. i would repost in the next thread.
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>>25650336
bump
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>>25705693
dang, didn't realise there's a new thread already
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>>25705719
cant bump more look here
>>25704393
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