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FOE: A Post-Nuclear Pony Thread

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Minute Minutemare edition

Old thread: >>25527895

The original, read it first:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/119190/

EqD Side Story Compilation Post - March:
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2015/03/fallout-equestria-side-stor-updates.html

Tales from the Wasteland:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jjr70KyM4O4tilvWOPMbgT0c9hPnFK12xUQW6wGrCm8

PnP Document:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ApDd-Pi_fJGZdGZiN0U0ajdtR3dTZ0FVQUh4cnhqenc

Smut Collection:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LBe5FGXd2Fgj0CRbz8HDZ6fDC11aRB9O-KfYxCODjGM

/foe/ Chatrooms:
#FOEchat (and #foefetish for you horsefuckers) on irc.canternet.org:6667
http://falloutequestria.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Chat

Recent updates:

The Things We've Handed Down (October 12th)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/285142/

Longtalons (October 14th)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/172805/

Old Souls (October 22nd)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/73868/

Ditzy Doo Chronicles (October 23rd)
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/6663/

Heroes (October 24th)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/662/

Treasure Hunting (November 2nd)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53502/

Frozen Skies (November 7th)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/201326/

Current /foe/ book club story: Black and White
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/44457/fallout-equestria-black-and-white

ITT: Pip's adventures and feats as general of the minutemen.
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First for canon wasteland.
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>>25587694
A nice sentiment, though in reality the spell always sends Twilight back to the altered present, not to the distant future. Still very telling what or who caused Equestria to become like that.

>>25587642
That depends, founded or restored the Minutemares in her reality? And would that make Calamity the Preston Garvey to Littlepip? Would he get teased all the time being called a Minutemare? Would he cope being second in command of a bunch of gun totin mares?
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>>25587849
>Keklamity
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>>25587849
>Would he cope being second in command of a bunch of gun totin mares?
Can't imagine him complaining.
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>>25587642
Imagine that instead of Arbu and the cannibalism, General Littlepip instead faced a crisis similar to Covenant. While initially investigating missing caravans, she uncovers whole community performing torture and autopsies on ponies in order to perfect methods detecting changeling infiltrators. Would Littlepip still have went into massacre mode, or take a more measured response? How would each of her companions have reacted?

How would Pip feel that if she had chosen to kill everypony in the settlement, but the caravaner mare she rescued turned out to be a changeling all along?
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>>25588300
That, doesn't really work actually.
Most proxies are already banned for "child porn" and other such uses by default.
Mostly because this place is an FBI honeypot, though more recently because of 4chan pass.

Hell not even a notarized receipt of purchase on the IP is sufficient proof I own the damn IP now and not the previous fucker.
But eh, such is life in the police state.
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>>25588443
"what makes you think you won't try to reverse dox me, hire some hitman, or otherwise come after me?"
"Your insignificance."
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>>25588467
Oh please, somebody already tried doxxing me by finding my gmail.
Its not hard, all you ahe to do is report a document to get it.
Its far more funny as well since I throw it out whenever I see someone asking for an editor.

PS, anon who shall stay as =, I got it and shall read it starting Monday.
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Dear KKat,
You are an absolute and gigantic fucking faggot for thinking you can actually make a book about a 4chan thread.

Sincerely,
Anonymous

P.S. Fallout 3 was shit for it's difficulty and boring gameplay.
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>>25588524
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>>25588524
Just ignore and report that attention seeking whore faggot.
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>>25588524
u w0t
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>>25588524
Sure thing kiddo.
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>>25588566
I also wanted to comment on that. Why the fuck am I getting banned for calling someone a faggot on an /mlp/ general? It's literally the entire job.
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>>25588524
>>25588553
>>25588562
>>25588564
>>25588566
EVERYBODY. Just ignore. Replying only wastes valuable bumps. The best comeback is not acknowledging this anon. And if he persists just report him for spamming.

>>25588271
I do not see Littlepip being complacent to any settlement committing the things Covenant did, though ultimately I feel it would all end with Pip needing to kill the inhabitants out of self defense as they can't afford their actions going out in the open. And then having serious a serious moral crisis upon finding out they were partially right with that mare being a changeling.
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>>25588696
But he's a new anon, a gullible fucking moron.
Please, may i keep him? Please?
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>>25588696
Whats he going on about tho
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>>25588566
>the main IRC
bitch, I abandoned fimfic, and realized that place was a circlejerk months (years, now...) beforehand. Whenever somber showed up he'd moan, groan, and get his ego a blowjob for making PH.

#foechat is usually quiet, but it doesn't appear to tolerate that circlejerk shit as heavily. It's just mean enough to make you realize you're not hot shit, and shouldn't pretend you are thinking it'll get you new pals. Kind of like a bar with plenty of regulars.
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We need more Travis pone.
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>>25588740
#foechat is dead, nobody wants to talk in there. Pretty sure its just a bunch of cron jobs now.
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>>25588740
All the regulars and activity from #foechat are at #foefetish

It's not as lewd a place as you think. Most people just use that instead of #foechat because there's less rules as to what you can talk about
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>>25588779
>>25588788
My mistake then, I haven't been there in a while. never went to the fetish chat because it wasn't my thing.
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>>25588602
Try #foefetish
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>>25588743
I will never did travis, his cringy nature makes my play through all that better
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>>25587391
Done
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>>25589685
hue
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>>25589801
Anon you can't post gore here.
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>>25589685
how i wanted it to end/10
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bump
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>>25585797
Finished reading.
It's not bad. Could do with an editor though. Some redundant or odd wording here and there. Shaky grammar in a few places. The S.P.E.C.I.A.L reference is a little on the nose. Talos's ability is going to need a pretty solid explanation.
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>>25589685
denouttaden
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>>25590991
>Talos

I haven't read whatever it is you've just read, but Talos cannot be a character's name.
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>>25591240
Maybe it isnt a pony? I can see it working with another specie, sounds dumb but works
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>>25591306
The association with the elder scrolls ruins it for me no matter the species.
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>>25589685
Any chance you make a ponified version of pic related using Twi wearing an eye patch as a sequel to that?
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>TFW can't find any joy or interest in the setting now
>Every sidefic I've read now has been boring drivel
>Becoming more interested in other pone ideas for settings
>starting to get of the FoE ride
What do
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>>25592407
Write your own.
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>>25592249
Oh shit, I totally forgot that Talos was a name used on Skyrim. Now I agree with you, I wont think on anything but on that shrine and the priest on Whiterun everytime I read that character name
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>>25587642

>years old dark and edgy fanfiction

>>>/trash/
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>>25593336
no u
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>>25593638
Ignore, he thrives on any response. There are better ways to use our bumps.

Sorta like this!
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>>25590991
Thanks for the feedback! The SPECIAL reference was something I threw in to see if it worked. Talos' ability is something that's pretty major to his character, so don't worry, I'm not just throwing it in there and yoloing it.
>>25591240
>>25591306
>>25592249
I've actually never played Skyrim, so its probably unintentional. Again, his name being so odd is something important about his character that will be explained later into the story. I'm not anal about keeping that his name though, if the Skyrim thing is too off-putting for you guys.
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>>25593918
I've not read your fic. But I can already advise you about the name. Aside from Skyrim, Talos follows the myth of a bronze android/golem created by Zeus to protect the lady Europa from being taken by pirates and raiders. If your main character has any bearing to the mythos then I believe its fine. Or if the character is a species other than a pony.

Otherwise, I dunno. The name doesn't sound very Equestrian unless Talos has a branching name preceding or after.
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>>25593918
Dont worry that much about it, if you cant find a more fitting name just keep it. Again, I only made that connection after an anon above posted it and I have played that game for hundreds of hours. If you consider it important dont change it
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>>25594172>>25594177

My fic is basically about the ponified version of synths. Talos isn't one himself but the name is basically the first clue the reader gets that the story is about synths. Plus personality shit as well.
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Are water talismans common?
They seem to show up often enough in the main fic that they are uncommon at worst.
I mean they can generate infinite water it would seem, so shouldn't somebody have seen if they could redo a river yet with a few?

Then again, the Canterlot river still flows...

So actually, thinking about it, is the wasteland actually blasted desert?
It seems it would at least have lots of water, if not plants outright.
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>>25594989
Water talismans are basically the fic's answer to Fallout 1's water chip, except because it's magic it makes the water rather than just purifying it, but I think the fic is drawing from Fallout 3 in this regard in that nothing about the environment makes any goddamn sense.

The constant cloud cover means there's rain (in fact it's even depicted a few times I think). So water isn't a problem. Radiation levels are shown to be safe in most areas, so that's not a problem. The whole "radioactive water" thing is a big pile of crap, honestly. The games are probably using it as shorthand for untreated water since they have mechanics for radiation exposure but not like, cholera and typhoid.

I can only guess the story is using magic as a copout to make everything dead. "Necromantic radiation" and all that.
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>>25595106
So its much closer to Wasteland in that just beyond a border, everything is green and living, its just nobody wants to go there.

Or modern pop culture, the book of Eli and how you had to have faith the world was green on the outside.

Ifigure radioactive water came in part from somebody thinking through the leaking reactors and vaults and remembering Lake Karachay and Mayak. There, the water is still holding radionucleides decades later. I mean if its still there in another century, then FO3 is solid. The other part seems to be that FO3's environ was supposed to be a shortly after bombfall to start, given how everything makes more sense from that idea, and then Bethesda actually did it in 4.
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How prevalent should robots be in Equestria? Would Zebras ever try a drone program?
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How bothersome would it be for random why boners between gryphons and stallions? Would they wear pants to hide the fact or would it be considered ignorable, like someone shitting on the street?
Could it be used for intimidation, either by implying rape or love for violence?
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Is teleportarion something that should be in FOE? Either for some unicorns and cargo or as pads?
Why would it be detrimental?
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>>25595873
Teleportation is already canon, and it's been used in plenty of stories already.

However, it should stick to the realm of unicorn magic cast on themselves/their companions, because any artificial form is... well. It just kills the original and makes a copy.
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>>25595897
So what does the magic one do then?

Clonoportation is mostly just philosophy with the matter, as the vast majority do nothing more than redefine coordinates.

But anyways, what should the limits be? Very short range, just their flesh, - leaving fur everywhere, organics only?
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>>25595917
Well, consider the show. Twilight uses teleportation fairly regularly and as the series progresses and she becomes more adept at it, it gets more versatile.

A weak unicorn would be similar to the early seasons. Short distances, infrequent use, and it would take a lot out of them. It's a 'panic button' to get out of the way of something. A pony with more significant skills would be able to teleport not only themselves, but what they're wearing and potentially their friends more often and further distances.

There's always a progression of ability depending on the character, a novice can't cast world-altering spells, y'know? Hell, look at the PnP rulesets. There's a fairly extensive amount of basic information on teleportation if you scroll down a bit from here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fsNLwKTWEt0pawFWLRzBtEPfvDQGitGPh8NN3Zk0xo4/edit#bookmark=id.9vpn871828nj
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So if the wasteland is so dangerous, why is there no carrion? Shouldn't there be random carcasses and corpses about, very few, but still there?

I mean its not like its just manticores, bloodwings, and ponies right? Since Manticores don't seem like they would swallow prey whole when hunting.
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>>25595996
Are you implying there aren't random corpses about?
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>>25596079
Skeletons aren't corpses. I mean like scavenged deer and roadkill. Corpses that have been partially eaten but are still mostly there.
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>>25596097
Why would anything in the wasteland leave a corpse half eaten?
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>>25596107
Its full and moved on? Same as in real life.
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>>25596136
It's a survival of the fittest nightmare with a depleted population and a severely dangerous environment. Anything left after two centuries of it would eat big and eat fast. Anything they left? Eaten shortly after by something else, or at least dragged out of the open and into a nest or den.
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>>25588498
Are you ever going back to drawing nymph? That or more autismo edgey writing?
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When it comes to FoE, I think the best part about the finale is that FoE no longer can be seen as this hyper unrealistic future by people who've not read it yet.
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>>25596827
Except for the guy(s) who came in yesterday to bitch at everyone about tying links from FoE to FiM.
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>>25596299
Why would we want him back though? Thread has been quite fine without his theft.
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>>25596856
>>25596827
I don't mind it being sorta kinda plausible. I just really don't think the references are specific. In fact I think the writers aren't allowed to read fan fiction for that reason. It's kinda hard to avoid being influenced by fan material in a fandom that's as... intense as this one, but given that the show is kinda running out of ideas anyway, it's not hard for it to start hitting the same premises as some fan fictions. Assuming that correlation = causation is just a teeny bit arrogant.
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>>25597303
>I think the writers aren't allowed to read fan fiction for that reason
They're not, but we're only human. You can't sit there and tell me you think every single employee at DHX has rock-solid resolve, especially if they themselves are bronies. While I don't think it's likely that the references were intentionally a nod towards FoE, (probably just Fallout itself, honestly) I think it's perfectly feasible that some of them have read FoE.
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>>25596856
I thought they were complaining about claims they were references to FOE, instead of just being references to Fallout.
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More latex pip.
Best pip.
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>>25594339
What is the relation between the name Talos and Synths? Sure, in greek mythology is an android but if that is your only clue that you are giving to the readers, its a very bad one
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>>25593687
I love these pictures. Who does these?
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>>25597769
Funny thought.
To drink, Pip would have to deep throat a stallion cock from the wall in that stable.
Its funny to think that one comic would have her bobbing up and down on a dick bits of white cream on her muzzle, looking as het as can be, only to pull off and show she managed to get the oreo chunk blocking her cookies and creme milkshake out.
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>>25598221
what the fuck are you trying to say
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>>25598261
He's not trying to say anything. It's the same faggot that's been raiding this place for the past few weeks, just ignore him.
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>>25598261
https://derpibooru.org/926112

This how Pip would have to drink in the latex stable.

Then a joke about a cookies and creme milkshake looking good enough for oral when one of the chunks gets stuck in the tube.
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>>25598221
What did I just read

>>25598296
That sounds like it.
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>>25598310
The worst thing about these is that every time I get a remotely similar idea I want to draw these posts just ruins it.
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>>25598221
>my reaction right now
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>>25598221
If cum tasted like milkshake then I think the wasteland would be a much friendlier place.
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tried to use less of the reference image i used for this
inb4 this kills ham
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>>25598639
Neuro, embrance the "=", equality is good for us

Nice drawing, getting better at this
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>>25598639
My god Neuro, thank you. Just brightened my day c:
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>>25598741
sure anon
>>25598781
Have another drawing ham
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>>25598397
I apologize for infiltrating your mind and stealing your thoughts.

>>25598533
Its better than cooking ponies in a bread oven or fetish anon.

>>25598633
I thought cum could if you ate the right things?
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>>25598907
Did you use a reference for this one?
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So just finished the season finale.

Its not FOE confirmed, its FOE possible.
That is, all elements are now canon to the show and can occur, just not that they did occur. We have cybernetics, industry, war, and so on all at one time, and in fact much shorter than the fic.

Though, future generic blasted wasteland event is canon. So strictly, FOE is canon, but in the sense we don't know what happened for that last time jaunt.

This is funny, as we now know that PH is actually quite right handing out cybernetics everywhere.

Dear God...


Also anyone else notice Dash's voice lost the cracking when in Nightmare Moon time? Wonder if it means boomy voice pegasi speak normally, or the actor just couldn't do both at once.
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>>25599018
Yeah I use a reference for all my human drawings since im shit wqith how anatomy and size goes with them, only really go over the3 picture with very simple consctrucvtion lines then delete the layer with the reference.
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>>25598131
Apparently everyone now
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>>25599072
>please
what a polite horse
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>>25599335
I guess this means his head is in the clouds?
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>>25599335
I think Sinrar is trying to out-giraffe Datte. I think Sinrar might be winning.

Solara's hoofsies look so delicate.
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>>25599362
You joke, but I <3 Sinrar's giraffepons.
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>>25599094
You know, if the average equestrian wastelander found out their timeline is the result of a mare having a petty grudge against Twilight...
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>>25599427
I never said there was an issue.
I am just laughing right now that the drugs are hitting.
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>>25599433
It can't be because of that anyway. Sure, the spell makes it possible, but if it happens it's not during that episode. Twilight and her friends getting together and using the elements is part of FoE's pre-war canon. Hell, without reforming Luna and Luna knowing the mane6's potential, they'd never be ministry mares.
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>>25599335
The neck that will pierce the heavens.
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>>25599496
However, only one timeline had Luna not reform. So basically, its things are mostly the same, except when they weren't.
In fact Discord line had reformed Luna on screen.
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>>25596299
Nope and nope.
People asked me to stop, so I have. See no reason to disappoint and anger people by doing stuff.
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>>25599557
Fuck those people do what you want and what makes you happy. I personally enjoyed the writing.
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>>25599517
So you're suggesting they simply found each other and the elements in a different way than the sonic rainboom? Wouldn't that just defeat the whole point with splitting them apart and Equestria not surviving without them being friends?

I suppose it's possible by a small margin, but I find it hard to imagine that they somehow got together to have those same exact moments Watcher told about despite Twilight not getting into magic school and becoming Celestia's pupil.
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>>25599626
Conceivably, each line had its own methods of friendship that worked up to the witnessed villain.

That is, the main 6 are the only ones that can clear all the hurdles, but others can get through to a point before facing a villain too strong.

I mean for the Chrysalis line, not Twilight were all friends and themselves, in fact given we saw Twilight march off to war in Sombra's line, we know that its not a replacement time travel.

So, its plausible to say sans Rainboom, they still meet and do things, it just doesn't work out properly without the rainboom, in as much as an alternative 6 crop up and take on being the EOH.

So, what I'm getting at is, each worldline had its own issue that occurred in response to the altered stopping of Dash. Some make sense, such as Glimmer's no fighting actually making the bullies friendly, thus resulting in friendship of a different sort, whereas others seem to occur from the race being interrupted in motion or by the fighting stopping it.

Given that it was the super fight right before blasted lands world, perhaps seeing the magic displayed and description of alicorn twilight led Celestia to smooth things over as much as possible, recognizing that it matched Starswirl's timetravel spell, and the Canterlot library one.

This could then be spun as to why Celestia couldn't prosecute the war, she knew her world was fake, and that weighed even more heavily on her. A sort of, does she really have the right to condemn so many lives, when she knows that they will be vanished at some point when the time stream corrects?
Shouldn't she be focusing on making them happy as possible?
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>>25599765
>in fact given we saw Twilight march off to war in Sombra's line,
We didn't see that though. Just a correction. As for the rest, 2deep4me.
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>>25599094
Who's the white cock socket?
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Homage about to get keked
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>>25599895
The faggot artist's OC.
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>>25600001
Literally 1 off quints. I'm so sorry for your loss.
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What else would have explained Equestria's coal shortage?
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>>25599878
No, Twilight boards a train after getting her uniform.

Basically, the writers used the river flows around a rock method.
Timetravel doesn't break and create new things, and tries to stay the same as much as possible.

Kill Hitler and Gobbels steps up, Nazis defeated roughly the same.
But later on, the Soviets invade the US.
So, main 6 either get together or counterparts appear to defeat Nightmare Moon in all but one line, Sombra in others, Chrysalis, etc...
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>>25600042
Can anyone here translate stupid?
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>>25599604
And which part was that?
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>>25600116
Doesn't look like Twilight to me.
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>>25600167
Ah well, we still saw filly Twilight not hatch Spike, so my point stands.
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>>25600116
Got a better screencap?
That looks like Dolphinbutt, Sea Swirl.
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>>25599604
I'm actually still writing, been doing the unnamed cyoas. The nice part is nobody naming me and instead just participating. Art is done, though that is mostly just because of lack of interest on my end.
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>>25601577
I saw that you little
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>>25601025
Where did Leaky find an intact couch?
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>>25600117
are you fucking new here?
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ASS.
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>>25602324
Yes.
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>>25602324

Will Erth ever continue with Sierra's story?...
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>>25602597
no, erth is kill
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Do you ever wonder if you die, you will go to the Fallout Universe?
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>>25602667
So is stablequest.

Alas, we shall never see Wander bed Sierra. There would have been such quiet explosions of love between the two.

>>25602749
My tulpa means I don't have to worry.
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>>25602749
I'd hope not.
I wouldn't wish that future on them.
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>>25571362
Is D&D Anon still alive?
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>>25565512
>>25565526

After waiting for what feels like days, you choose to go with the nachos at Bean’s less than sure assurance. A trough of ghost chili pepper nachos with chives, sour cream, green chili salsa, melted monetary jack cheese, black olives, and hashed ham is set before you, small puffs of steam floating off. Hesitantly you pluck one of the chips, watching the topping stretch as you brought it near your muzzle. Sniffing, you quickly find that was a regrettable decision as your nostrils begin to burn. Knowing it could only get worse, you pop the whole thing in your mouth and eat it before washing it down with some everclear. This was a mistake, as your mouth goes from burning pain, to actively tongefucking a Mr. Gutsy’s recharging port. The resulting sputtering snuff sprayed bits of chip pulp across the floor, great strands of snot dangling from your nostrils. All in all, far better tasting than any of the food they gave you in flight school. After getting some water, you dig in with gusto, your lips quickly becoming saturated with condiments as Bean snatches a bit every so often, only to be met with a cute possessive growl from your tiny frame. You finish with tears streaming from your eyes, a nose that looks like you have the flu, and a swollen and numb tongue from the spiciness. Some of the best 12 caps you have ever spent you decide. You are full and done eating, though you still have some of the everclear left. Bean offers to guide you home, a bit worried you are drunk when you start gazing into his eyes longingly. Mostly he points this is because you are floating upside down with your hooves on the ceiling.

>Go home alone, or accept Bean’s offer?
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>>25603491
Dat punchline.
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Have another shitty comic.
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>>25603669
Accept escort.
Ladies always get walked home, and we're definitely a lady if you squint and ignore the bad manners.
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>>25603803
This is exactly what happen to my friend. Stopped his current build and only started to use that thing.
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So any fallout 4 fics yet?
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>>25604179
Yeah, Tofu's Outlaws.
Already has porn of it as well, in drawn and written form.
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>>25604230
>updated
Pls you know I didn't.
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>>25603491
Yeah, I've had players in a group like these.
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>>25604267
Its just an image for you.
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Littlepip attains Rank 2 of Chem Resistant before Velvet stages her intervention. What happens?
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>>25604448
They tranq her anyway.
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Murky!!
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>>25604679
D'awww
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I know you don't care, but the scene in chapter 45 of Horizons where Psalm killed Pinkie has been taken out. You were right.
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>>25605828
wait, He removed that scene? The one where he ReWrote the original to fit his story?

Don't pull my leg anon.
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>>25605828
Well that's certainly something.
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Is there still interest in the continuation of this adventure? I'm getting ready to start posting it again, but I feel a need to gauge interest before I make any plans.

Also, to those who've read it so far, do you have any critique, advice or anything you'd like to see done differently? I'm not entirely pleased with the direction I've been taking it, and I want to hear what you think.
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Neuro, when you have the chance, could you repost your Swan drawing please?
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>>25607060
>still interested
For my part, absolutely! Their interactions are great, it's a fun story.

That being said... I'm not around regularly enough, for a sustained enough time, to really have much input as things are live. I'm kind of along for the ride, andam appreciating it more like a story than the CYOA it is. There's nothing wrong with that, but for me personally, it would be... different. Not sure if "better," from an objective point of view, but I think it would certainly be worthwhile as a story. If it were written up, polished, and presented as a story.

You've done great with short stories - some that pushed the edges of "short," mind you, but stories nonetheless. I still think you'd do great putting that talent to something longer.

I also think that if you really do want to see the end of their story - I think I recall you saying you had three timeline segments in mind, and we're currently in the second - I think a story would be for the best for that last arc. There are enough variables in play that we can ruin tie-ins without even realizing it, and hurt the story overall. Just my two cents.
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>Okay boys-

BZZT!

>-and girls, you all get set up over there, I'll see about our pay...ment...huh.

"Mmph!"

>Wow, y'know me and you just meet in the strangest circumstances, huh?

"Mmmmph!"

>Yeah, I guess our two little rendezvous before kind of pale in comparison to you strung up and gagged over a fire surrounded by tiny figurines of Princess Celestia. You have me there, I will admit.

"..."

>Soooo, I'm guessing you ran into what our hosts built their settlement around-literally and culturally, hm?

"..."

>Big statue of Princess Celestia? Got a clock in her chest? Still works for some reason? Worshipped as a god because silly tribals don't know no better? Any of this ring a bell?

Ding ding dong dong~ Ding ding dong dong~

>Yeah, like that.

'Good evening, my little ponies, the time is Nine OH Clock, the mall will be closing in ONE hour. Please finish up your shopping and exit the mall in an orderly manner. Nopony likes being tardy!'

"..."

>Wow, that'll get on your nerves in a hurry, how long have you been here-?

"MMMMPH!"

>I'll take that as a looooong while. Well don't you worry about a thing, your good buddy Happy Trails is on the job. I'll negotiate with these fellas and get you outta here in no time.

"Mmph?"

>Trust me, they love me here. Just, uh, do me a favor? You remember how that guy on poor Bumble's speakers called me 'Sandwich'?

"...?"

>Can you...stop remembering that? Please? I'll be your best friend!

"...mmph."

>Fantastic! You stay right there-

"..."

>Right, stupid thing to say. But yeah, you'll be free in a jiffy!

Whoosh!

"...phn ffha btch..."
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so, been wondering about a particular late-story scene. power armor/enclave shit is largely not seen in what I do, so what I have happen in this event is "civilian."

that is, one of the protags wields bomb disposal armor to do some shit, gathered from a police armory. suitable? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gl3wQ4AzKww
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Dear KKat,
You are an absolute and gigantic fucking faggot for thinking you can actually make a book about a 4chan thread.

Sincerely,
Anonymous

P.S. Fallout 3 was shit for it's difficulty and boring gameplay.
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>>25608092
The anons are just...they're a dirty people. They shitpost in threads like animals.
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>>25608092
Is this a new ebin meme? Better than the faggot trying to get people to hate Glimmer by shitposting To Be Honest Family
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That was "ArfaBarka Honeymoon" folks...I don't think Orthrus's are not as smart as Diamond Dogs for marriages to count...b-but who am I to judge about standards centuries ago. Then again, who knows if...um...if Diamond Dogs really made this song.

...So I...heard about some scuffles happening in /foe/ City about some really angry Wastelander all the way from Prance writing these angry letters to some cat...though he spelled the word cat with two k's in the beginning. Anyways, I wouldn't ever wanna be called a 'friggin cigarette', shriveled is pretty bad enough with the lack sunlight and the end of the world...

Although I guess it's all mild news compared with that Mr. Dung Poster who's been distributing really ...explicit?...Dirty? Compromising...? Inappropriate... drawings all over the /foe/ City Markets well during public hours the past week. It's sorta weird when you think about it, there was never actually any indication he read the Book of Littlepip.
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>>25603803
I hate that there's no way to use gauntlets in power armor.
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>>25605828
Thanks Somber, you're one tiny step in the right direction. Now remove the rest of it.
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>>25609319
Does this mean melee weapons are supreme?
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>>25598221
Why not just tip the glass over and lick the shake off of the ground like the fucking furry animal she is?

Or just do exactly what you said. You said this was a comic? Sounds funny.
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>>25607060
>is there interest
Yes.
>not entirely pleased with the direction I've been taking
Well. Shit. You mean since we took control of Cap, or the whole "fight the griffons" bit? Cuz if the former you can just wrap it up in a couple posts, if the latter, uh... Shit.
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>>25607060
Interested!
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>>25608746
This type of posting needs to be it's own series.
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>>25608746
>>25609661
good yes more travispon interludes
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>>25607060
>Is there still interest
Da.
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>>25607215
i got you senpai
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>>25609885
Also.
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>>25609890
Also also.
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>>25609885
>>25609890
>>25609892
Not the anon who requested it but thanks senpai.
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>>25609529
I meant in, there should be a comic sense.Straight Pip is fine, though rarely more than just ignoring her lesbian characterism. This was more funny in that she is full and true a lesbian through, but sees no problem with deepthroating a stallion dildo as its how to get a drink there.

Also because dickstraw on Derpi needs more images.


>>25607060
Go for it man, not like we can comment on a vacuum.
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>>25597769
I really need to stop putting off that latex stable fic I keep wanting to write
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>>25609986
I was just looking for a funny switch out joke. Whatever you say about characterization, man.
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So what would be the equivalent of a pillowcase of doorknobs and a sleeping bag to beat up the shit head in basic for the Enclave?

How much of doing that is catharsis and how much is too teach a lesson?

What would be the Enclave equivalent of some of the stuff unsupervised military personnel get up to?

Would the replacement for waxed floors be perfectly smooth clouds?
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>>25610877
>So what would be the equivalent of a pillowcase of doorknobs and a sleeping bag to beat up the shit head in basic for the Enclave?

Non-consensual cuddling in a sleeping bag

>How much of doing that is catharsis and how much is too teach a lesson?

Cuddles are mandatory, when offered cuddles you must receive

>What would be the Enclave equivalent of some of the stuff unsupervised military personnel get up to?

Cuddle parties

>Would the replacement for waxed floors be perfectly smooth clouds?

Smooth enough to cuddle on.
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>>25603669
Walk home with him. He's gonna be our big strong alpha male!
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>>25607060
STEALTH I LOVE YOU PLS BRING BACK WAIFU SNUGGLES PLEASE
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>>25611040
Not him but I'd say with a species of happy magical ponies, these answers are 100% correct
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>>25598639
Is that a Ham sandwich? If so it needs some more Tofu in it ^;)
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>>25607936
Depends what you mean by do some shit.
Full bomb suits are heavy and restrictive. They limit your range of movement and visibility and are pretty hot. Not really good for running around in.
They do provide excellent protection though, with overlapping armor and layers that cushion against the force of explosions, and the most modern ones have cooling systems built in and serve as sealed hazard suits. I don't really know how well they perform against bullets, but I'd say you'd probably be unlucky if you even got bruises from being shot with small caliber.
It's also worth noting that some of them have ceramic plates in them, which would probably perform well against energy weapons.
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>Your lips begin to quiver, and you feel your heart thud heavily in your chest.
>You stare into space for what seems an eternity before you feel a tapping on your shoulder.
>"Beacon? You in there?" Rider asks, a frown gracing her face.
>She would have been a pretty mare once, but now that you look closer you can see evidence of damage caused by shrapnel and stress.
>Her mint coloured short cut mane was missing a patch on the left side of her fringe, the small fleshy burn - which was somewhat camoflauged by her pink coat - was matted with dirt and dead hairs that somewhat obscured the injury.
>You wonder when the last time any of these ponies had a shower was.
"Y-Yeah... sorry. Blanked out for a minute... H-Ha ha..."
>"Good, then let's go," Rider says impatiently.
>You leave the Sergeant and Mixer alone as you follow Rider out of the tent and out into the staging area where maintenence crews worked on various armoured vehicles.
>You end up following the earth pony mare entirely in silence for about 5 minutes until she finally stops in front of what must be your vehicle.
>A large grey metal box stood before you, huge earth grinding treads caked in mud adorned either side of the war machine.
>A stubby 75mm gun - the tanks main armament - pointed towards the horizon, slightly angled as if to shoot over it.
>From what you had learned in training this was an M77 Ursa main battle tank, produced in collaboration between Ironshod Firearms and the Ministry of Wartime Technology.
>On top of the tanks turret stood a solitary .50 machine gun, with little more than a couple of angular metal plates around its mount to protect its user.
>A line had been struck through the mud on the side of the tanks hull revealing the words, "POUND CAKE" written in white paint.
>On the front of the tank - although you couldn't see it - there was a internally operated forward facing hull machine gun in .45 calibre.
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>>25611528
They're also the first ones slated to have real exoskeletons in them, such that the weight is greatly reduced.
Could be modeled as either the suit being self supporting, or actually given a small strength boost to its wearer.

Oh and some of them have mp3 players in them, though you would be hard pressed to find one with an emitter due to the fear of RF detonations.
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Is the book club not a thing anymore?
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"What if the Enclave had access to the Rainbow Factory..."
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Can anyone give me some BoS ponies?
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>>25611729
Fetishanon killed it.
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>>25611708

>"Go ahead and climb in, you should know your way around an Ursa by now."
>You slowly climb up onto the tread housing, then onto the turret before opening the hatch right behind the .50.
>You're immediately greeted by the stench of tobacco and day-old coffee, the mixture is less than pleasant and you grimace slightly as you slide down into the dimly lit compartment.
>You drop down to just below the loader's position and drag yourself forward and into the driver's seat.
>Ursa's weren't exactly roomy despite being rather large, crewponies almost always only a few centimetres from each other.
>In front of you were two levers with which you would be operating the treads, and a tiny horizontal slit through which you could see out the front of the vehicle.
>Directly next to you was the bow gunner's chair, in front of which sat the pistol grip and ammo feed of the .45 hull mounted machine gun.
>Slightly elevated behind that was the main gunner's seating and instrumentation; a sort of periscope with two small wheels on either side of it.
>Finally, at the rear end of where the main gun stuck into the turret was the loader's position, large shells were mounted into the stands on the walls on either side of the chair.
>Behind the loader's chair there was a radio set, as in the Ursa the loader doubled as the communications officer.
>Another odd feature of the Ursa was that there was no 'commander' position like in other armoured vehicles.
>A unicorn was a required component of the team for this reason, as mounted in the turret was a small sensor that a unicorn could stimulate with his/her horn.
>The sensor would then releases a short sonar pulse, effectively painting a picture of the tank's surroundings within 500m for the unicorn.
>Beyond that the gunner would be expected to be the crew's 'eyes'.
>This design had been heavily scrutinised, but with too many already in service the Equestrian Army refused to pull them out.
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>>25611746
We call em Steel Rangers. And I would post a picture but I don't have any availible at the moment.
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>>25611746
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>>25611746
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>>25611746

>>25551129
cuddles.
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>>25611994

>Rider adeptly slides in behind you and takes a seat in the loader's position.
>"If you have any momentos you'd like to pin up next to your position go right ahead."
>You stop going through everything you knew about the vehicle and instead look at the many personal touches that had been added to Pound Cake's interior.
>Next to the bow gunner's viewing slit were... well, sluts.
>Pictures of them at least, a few even had messages written on them.
>The ones with messages were all from the same mare... curious!
>Next to them was a medal and two sets of dog tags.
>You look back to the main gunners position and notice various letters taped to the wall.
>Strangely, four black and white zebra braids were also affixed to the wall.
>Photographs of your crewmates were there also, Mixer danced with Sapphire Shores, trimmed his moustache in a small shard of mirror.
>Rider lay on Pound Cake's main gun, biting her lip wearing little more than her uniform's jacket.
>She looked on at a rainy funeral dressed in her formal uniform, still gorgeous despite her scars.
>A slightly younger Rider smiled sweetly in her formal uniform, no evidence of the war yet marring her innocent face.
>Sergeant Winny lay back in his chair, a copy of 'Home Improvements' magazine on his lap and a cup of coffee in his telekinetic field.
> In another he kissed an overjoyed teal unicorn mare, her mane a striped mix of white and navy - wedding rings graced both of their horns.
>There seemed to be so much history in these photos, and you wonder how long this crew had lived and fought together.

What do/say?
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>>25611746
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>>25611746
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>>25612201
Take in history, recognize one of the crew did successfully bring a knife to a tank fight and win.
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>>25612201

ask what the fuck is with the native american-esque scalping
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>>25609890
ThisSwan was the one I was looking for.
One of your best in my opinion. Thanks Neuro
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New Tales of a Junktown Pony Peddler episode incoming in T-minus 30 minutes.
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>>25612286
Holy shit we all thought you were dead.
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>>25612294

Rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated.
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>>25612301
All the same, I'm prepping for an end of the world/zombie apocalypse right now. You have a pulse and warm blood right?
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>>25612307

I make no declarations one way or another.
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>>25612286
I thought you were dead. Did you get ANY of my emails???
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>>25612368

Apologies! Kinda fell off the planet for a bit, depression and all that! I probably did but goooooooodddd loooooord has it been a while since I checked my various email accounts...
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>>25612380
Alright alright no worries, I'm at work right now and my connection sucks but I've been dying to get back into TJPP.
Can we talk later today? Or on Steam?
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>>25612402

I'm on skype more these days if you want to poke me there email me your skype info.
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>>25611708
When you say "stubby 75," are we talking early Sherman, or some sort of tracked AVGP? Because the CC/Loader and "Stubby" tells me AVGP, while everything else says Sherman.

I can dig it either way, just curious.

Also, are we in P squadron, or is it a free naming system?

>>25612201
Inspect the medal and tags - equestrian, or zebra, and what sort of medal are we talking? Could give us a hint at the exploits of the previous driver without asking painful questions.

Other than that, pin up... something, if we have it a picture, or something. Then start pre-start driver checks and get the glow plugs warmed up to start on command.
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>>25612502
Alright, let's hope I remember it.
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>>25612343
Is Blackjack actually giving Murky a blowjob?
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>>25612573
Riddles pls, just open your profile.
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>>25612589
I've talked in depth with Riddles. There wasn't much to it that made it worthwhile. You could say its perplexing as to why you want it, an enigma if you would.
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>>25612586
Yes, now shush.

>>25612589
I don't really use (or like) skype. Forgot my old one and had to make a new one recently.

>>25612631
What?
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>>25607317
This isn't the first time I've been encouraged to re-write it as a proper story. I want to and I intend to, but that is a very very long way off. I already have another story that I'm working on (that I've been screwing around with for the past eleven months) and I need to handle that first.

I agree with you on the last arc being written as a story rather than a CYOA. I'll keep it in mind for when I figure out a way to end this thing.

>>25609559
The latter. I actually like writing for Quick's POV a lot. In hindsight, the involvement of the griffons was a bit of a mistake but I had to put them in because griffons are nice. It feels out of place to have a conflict like that in this CYOA. I was thinking to big. I think I've worked out a plan for how I'm going to deal with it, though.

>>25611089 pls
>>25609621
>>25609872
>>25609986
Interest noted!
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pip edit when?
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>>25612864
Lemme go ask Bris
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>>25612887
WHAT AM I CHOPPED LIVER
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>>25612898
yes
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>>25612989
FINE IT'S NOT LIKE I WANT TO DO REQUESTS FOR YOU GUYS ANYWAY
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>>25613009
Do one for me then, a pegasus eating nachos.
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>>25611751
Disappointing. We only had two left to look at.
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>>25613009
If you're fast you might beat him to it. You vs. Bris.
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>>25613223
>>25612887
>>25612864

I'm actually working on another vector right now, so he can have it.

Though mine will always be objectively better.
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>>25613235
WOW

WOW

EXCUSE YOU BRIS

RUDE
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Which rad ponies would want to be captured as part of their kinkiness? Which ones would find out they like it after being captured and keep trying to be captured again?

What should a rational and reasonable faction in FOE, under FOE logic, do with captives?

What would the various major groups do with captives they make going about their business?
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>>25613223
I win.
But I quite dislike contests in which the person holding said contest wins in the end. Have some watermarks for trying to pit Bris vs. Tofu.
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>>25613339
Atom Smasher
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>>25613532
Anon don't be a stupid shit. Freckles don't show from the front on showpones.

IF YOU VECTORED YOU'D KNOW THAT SCRUB
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>>25613585
woooooow who cares
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>>25613627
He says as he deletes his post.

I saw that, jackass.
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>>25613640
>there are only two people on 4chan
Not sure why he deleted it, but here, have it again :^)
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>>25613712
Because it was wrong, so why put it up?
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>>25613744
Wrong how? And why delete it?
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>>25613753
see
>>25613585


Why keep something that is clearly wrong around? There is no point in doing so.
It is spitting in the face of all who see it.
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>>25613776
nymph is that you
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>>25613776
You're taking this very seriously. Who cares how the show presents freckles?
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>>25613791
People care when Tofu deviates from the show's style, why should this be any different?
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>>25613805
They care when it looks bad. Do you think this looks bad?
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>>25613821
I don't think it looks bad, but I don't think it looks right, either.
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>>25613729
We spread into evERYTHING AND YOU CAN'T DO ANYTHING TO STOP US LIKE RADIATION
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>>25613376
See what happens when you put watermarks on your work? It becomes inferior. :^) Still thanks I suppose.
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New Peddles

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-jJrx2pCApBcGJrcVlwTWQ0XzA/view?usp=sharing

Youtube video in the works for those who are interested in this still.
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>>25613585
Maybe for Applejack, but Pip is a small pip.
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>>25613840
Fair enough. I don't mind it, but I guess I might just be remembering how foal Applejack's freckles were.
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>>25613950
anon everyone knows you leave your nose freckles under your pillow for the freckle fairy when you grow up

it's just horse science
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>>25613946
Fan-fucking-tastic man. I'm so happy that you're back.
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>>25613950
What a puny poner.
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>>25613789
I just wanted to do something nice.I was wrong for doing so.
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>>25613946
OH YES THE BRITISH QT IS BACK
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>>25613376
Fortunately I was working on the most appropriate reaction.

>>25613729
Bite me.
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>>25614043

Huh....how have I not seen that fanart? That's adorable...

>>25613972
Nice to be back!
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>>25614152
The dude is humble, but at least he has a deviantart.
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>>25614049
>mane clipping under eye
I'm sorry, what was that about being better than me, Bris?
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>>25613946
Just finished it. That was a good 'un. I forgot that last episode had started hinting at changelings in the story.

And damn, I want to know what that harness in the briefcase was! Damn you Prodigious Peddler and your apathy!
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>>25614267

Thank'ye muhaha I have plans yisss plans
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>>25614371
>tripfagging
Who the fuck are you
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>>25614187
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>>25614403
You can't work that out?
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>>25614403
>not knowing Squeak
Who the fuck are YOU? How fucking new are you, you fucking faggot?
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>>25614187
Tofu, if it's any consolation, I'd like to request pic related, but with Velveeta Pip.

At least your vectors look better than Bris'

:^)
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>>25614415
I would like a cookie, actually.

Also I don't think I care much for your sass, Bris.

BRUH I THOUGHT WE WERE COOL BUT YOU'RE STEPPING TO ME TODAY MAN

>>25614423
VRanon is that you
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>>25614451
Nope.
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>>25614403
You fucking newfag
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>>25614415
Needs freckles
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>>25613946
Spendid work as always, and good work interpreting adult Pipsqueak's voice. I always likened that Pipsqueak became a naval captain/admiral during the war but being a spy also fits in the context of this radio play since I reckon only a species like changelings only respect other ponies with an art in subterfuge. Hmms, I honestly wonder what the changelings long term goals are if they were fence sitting during the war. If you account for the fact war-time and industrialized Equestrians are not easily to victimize anymore.
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>>25614480
omg anon we literally just went over this >>25613585
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>>25614497
But you're bad and wrong. Also a butt.
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>>25599421
He can keep it, my giraffe neck thing is a very bad habit and a killer of proportions
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>>25607916
Anon pls write a fic about the adventures of ghoul Cheese
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Look here, have porn.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9zeemL18McCekFmcEEtSm5CRFU/view?usp=sharing

Now fuck off and leave me alone, I just wanted to make something nice assholes. Fucking hell this is why I stopped doing anything art related, all it gets is fucking asshole and dicks everywhere going for balls deep gaping at anything I do and whining like a virgin bitch trap about their burning asshole.
So thank you kindly, sodomize yourselves with a taped together steak knife set until you shut up.
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>>25614697
Wow anon did you get painal by your girlfriend or something
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>>25614697
I don't understand what you're talking about. Who whined?
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>>25614697
>look at me guys, I'm endearing because I cuss and I have a love/hate relationship with you all. aren't I quirky?
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>>25614403
>>25614421

Well in his defence I've been gone some time. Fallout 4 probably brought in a bit of new blood, and I've basically been dead to the world for months.

Anyway I'm Squeak, I make a Fallout Equestria Radioplay called Tales of a Junk Town Pony Peddler about a traveling merchant in the wasteland.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9U6fFocEWcE&list=PLM59Gwk-2WQsgV6R0muUNb5TzP2lOCl0h&index=1

You can watch the first episode, and find a playlist of the following 11 here.

And also download them for various devices (Including itunes) at my website.

https://ponyinabox.com/shows/peddler
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>>25614754
see
>>25613585
>>25613627
>>25613640
>>25613805
>>25613841
>>25613712
>>25614497
>>25614480
>>25614736
>>25614775


>>25614736
No, but I did just to get yell at random people on the internet who failed to get a long standing joke or anything. Also, yay dicks and balls, I can draw them now.

>>25614775
Nah you guys are friends, hell I even met a few of you. Quirky ain't but shit for presenting a desired persona to people. That is, i am acting as a specific persona, and then returning to a normal one that leaves people unawares as too who I am.
And yes, writing class did pay off.
Thank you to the anon that suggested it.
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>>25614924
So one guy said it was bad and you decided to shit your diaper?
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>>25614976
Please my good sir, my shitposting is a mere act for my entertainment and not to be compared with the lowly plebian fetish sewer spewage of hat anon.
I do it as much as random fun on my part, as much as ensuring that anons have reason when they invoke the name clopanon as a boogieman, rather than it being a mere, pathetic invocation as though summoning a god of from stone.

If you wish to persist in believing I am in need of frozen Snickers and Kit Kats, that is your own prerogative. I am quite calm and unhurt by this little false rage bit.
By all means, enjoy a delusion you have set upon yourself, it is a good thing to selectively view reality without caring for its manifold complexity and whimsical nature.


*ahem*

I mean you are all a bunch of fucking asshole cunts that shit all over anyone making content and chase them away. Big fucking wonder this shitty channel is dying with douches like you all over the place.
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This is why nobody likes us
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>>25615050
then repeat to yourself it's just a show, i should really just relax
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>>25615123
I thought that was because weren't a safe space hugbox offering enough dick sucking?
I mean I know we're gay, but I'm pretty sure its because we also aren't droping /me and ~ shit faster than a hippo fertilizing the Nile delta.
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>>25615157
Nah, it's definitely the retardation.
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>>25615145
I'm the show.

You're the one who needs to relax.

At least get the partaking right, dear anon. Its really more I do this every so often out of boredom and all, you will note a rather lacking amount of my particular former grammar issues, and the resulting hatred that came from it. Unfortunately, shitposting happens in a vacuum and we have gained a few new prattling feckers to despoil the thread like some inane bout of mice finding the soap flakes.
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>>25615050
why are you here
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>>25615173
How the..
Anon, how did you invert her hooves just playing with the eyes?
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>>25615192
I probably didn't mean to reply directly to you, it was just a general thing
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>>25615173
Yay this is back!
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>>25615212
Magic
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>>25615231
I hate you all.
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>>25615157
>implying

That is such blatant ply autistic denial that I can feel my ass clench, trying to protect itself from getting buttfucked by the bergs you created with that retarded post.

I'm a highly regarded contributor and everything I did was made to pander to you goyim. The biggest mistake I made was posting a controversial character that thankfully didn't go the way of Crimson Wings.
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Well...I think we need to get this thread back on topic yes?

Though this probably isn't a much better topic, I hear PH ended? How did that go? And what's everyone reading now, if we're reading anything at all.
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>>25615209
I am here and fine. My staying or going is of my own volition. There are little minus signs to hide things you don't like. Though I must question why you remain here with a skin thin enough to be affronted and aghast by this crap instead of exiting.


>>25615229
Clearly you needed to give it to >>25615209
Regardless of events and things I do think that the ability to take criticism and laugh at ones self are very critical things this general grants, and are very difficult to acquire elsewhere in constructive settings.
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>>25615297
You sound so euphoric that I thought you were a certain nigger buttslut. Holy fuck.
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>>25615286
>I hear PH ended?
Yes.
>How did that go?
Worse than you thought.
>And what's everyone reading now
About to start Duck and Cover. also reading through the MoA cyoa.
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>>25615286
It ended in Somberesque fashion, we also had a dramatic reading by an anon on YT somewhere.

Succinctly, Somber got his happy fucking after with being less than 4 times having Blackjack fuck Littlepip. Jesus allegory died and was the only thing to stay dead other than P13.

Personally, debating of starting Background Pony, though it seems rather dark and depressing form the reviews.
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>>25615307
Mahoney, I am so euphoric, there is an entire rave licking me over right now for some E.
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>>25615351
>>25615309

Huh...I wonder if I should finish that just to see it for myself and say I finished it...Eh, then again I have got lots of other things to do.

ALSO

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oNx0meWrPJI&feature=youtu.be

Peddler now on youtube.
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Just hug it out you two
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>>25615598
Wow, gay much?
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>>25615598
>>25615612
I would hug each and every one of you, except if you were radioactive.
Then I'd have to hug you in Power Armor.
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>>25615651
>ruining sheer perfection of T-51 with a raider helmet.
Ew.
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>>25615669
I couldn't find the helmet at the time.
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>>25615669
>Running the perfect Raider PA with the outdated T-51 Model
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>>25615701
Anon you disgust me.
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>>25615701
>wanting Big Daddy/Master Blaster armor
It's low maintenance but it's flimsy as fuck.

Also
>51b
>Dated
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>Not using Silver Shroud Armor
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>>25615790
You can have both, you goob.
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>not red dress master race
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This thread really needs to be cleaned up. Who did it this time?
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Anyone who isn't wearing a tactical sweater vest is a noob.
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>>25615286
By the epilogue, Blackjack basks how she saved Equestria harder than Littlepip did, and becoming divine Friends-With-Benefits with the added incentive Homage supporting the arrangement. You can imagine how invasive that puts across.

PH, to me, stopped being a Fallout: Equestria side-story because at some point it no longer had any bearings with either of the source materials. Neither F:oE, neither FiM, and neither Fallout, unless Somber was obsessed with the Dunwich sidequest.

I just can't respect a story that outright defied aspects Kkat established; excusing raider behavior because of a virus instead of Fallout's theme of spiritual decline, having Pinkie Pie being assassinated when her death was meant to have been poignant and alone, The Legate having truly been the one to have hastened the war instead of Kkat's representation of it being born of religious misunderstanding, depicting Luna to be a mad tyrant through and through. Liberal use of cyberdization when only Stable 101 should have possessed the capabilities.

MN7, Heroes, Pink Eyes, Treasure Hunting, Frozen Skies, and all the cancelled fics authors thought wasn't good enough at least respected the source materials. But Somber ultimately went on his own fantasy tangent.
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>>25615286
Well, I'm masochistically reading every good side-fic cancelled or put on indefinite hiatus atm.
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Why did Erth and Neuro leave?
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>>25616271
Neuro's still here, dude.
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>>25616327
Spooky ghosts in this thread senpai.
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All this just because someone made a cuter Littlepip picture.
Why?
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>>25616271
Better question, the fuck did Bobulator go?
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>>25616642
What the hell kind of question is that? He never came back after he pissed everyone off and left like a year ago.
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>>25616678
Oh.
What about Kip?
Is he still around? Love the cherry wine bastard.
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>>25616704
He pops in every now and then.
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>>25616721
Is FOE in Equestria still going on?

What happened to the guy offering up some Robinson Crusoe level knowledge?
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>>25616763
That one died quite a while ago. I think your Robinson Crusoe guy is actually the entity known as Nymphanon these days, but I could be mistaken.
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>>25587849
>the spell always sends Twilight back to the altered present, not to the distant future
So it's the begining of the end, everyone is still sheltered undergruond.
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>>25616777
Oh. Again.
Is Riddles still around? What about DILeak? Is Tofu writing something to replace Outlaws?
Are you sure on Robinson Crusanon? He doesn't seem to match the Nymphanon in this thread.
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>>25616859
I literally posted this afternoon.
>>25612368
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>>25616859
-Yes
-Lurking
-No
-I really have no idea
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>>25616859
You heard of this thing called the scroll wheel?
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>>25616888
I rarely use USB as is, scroll wheels not a clue.
PS/2 master race.
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>>25616971
>implying a PS2 mouse can't have a scroll wheel
Are you high?
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>>25616999
I'd show you if I had a camera. Its an old mouse, still has its ball.
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>>25617010
So? I have a mouse like that and it has a scroll wheel. The thing is from like 2003.
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>>25617030
1997 mouse. I like it, it fits my hand, and there are no USB ports anyways.
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>>25617053
>no USB ports
What the fuck are you using, an Apple II?
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>>25617071
A Micron laptop running Windows 98.
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>>25617079
This causes me physical pain.
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>>25615286
Also, the new PH2 will have interracial child clop between a normal pony, a zebra an a dragon

If you are into that
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>>25618191
Anon if you're serious I think I'll have to get to work on that suicide note I've been holding off for a long time.
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>>25611528
those were the limitation ideas I had revolving around them. The concept of the bulletproof everything is kind of important too, but I have to look into ablatives and how much they could take. The scene involves an explosives expert inside of it (he is otherwise non-combat for the most part, he's difficult to explain), using it as intended. I'll have to do some research between sniping team research. That right there is interesting shit. Thanks for the input though.
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Was bored.
Drew this.
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>>25618723
She looks delicate and pretty.
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As someone who has never played Fallout or never read the original FOE and only previous experience in reading this genre(?) of fanfiction is Pink Eyes and Duck and Cover, is Murky Number Seven worth reading?
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>>25618736
I bet she's got 10 Strength.
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>>25618768
MN7 requires a good amount of knowledge from the original, I think. But since plenty of people have enjoyed the original story without having played fallout, I'd say it's worth it.

Be prepared for a much more serious story than Duck and Cover or Pink Eyes.
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>>25618768
Pink Eyes is better.
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Sitting here hoping for another Travis pone post.
Vaguely disguise request please.
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Would this story be any different if Steelhooves and Xenith were demoted to minor characters, or simply removed entirely? What about Velvet and Calamity?
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>>25619602
>would this story be any different if it was different
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>>25619602
Yes
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>>25615286

Pretty well. Most people liked it. Very bittersweet ending though. Alicorn Blackjack died. Blankjack lived, and 200 years later was still friends with LittlePip. They went back to the moon and brought back Rampage, who gets a normal pony life with no crazy and no immortality. The end.

Now there's Homelands, which is set in the zebralands. So far the reception has been okay, but critical feedback is sorely needed now rather than the usual butthurt. It's on fimfiction rather than Gdocs.
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>>25619713
Fuck off shill, PH was shit and PH 2.0 is going to be just as bad if not worse.
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>>25619713
>most people liked it
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>>25618216
We understand anon, but unfortunately its true
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>>25616070

Question. Would you kick back and hang out with a bunch of dead corpses and mutilated bodies? No. Why? Stink. Rotting bodily gasses. Erupting corpse torsos spreading plague and disease. This was something FO screwed up originally too. Are there depraved people? Sure. But depraved people don't hang out with the spoils of their depravity. Isis doesn't nail the bloody corpse to the wall to admire, because pretty soon the blowfies are coming. So a virus was a way to rationalize raider behavior. It actually would have been better to normalize raider behavior rather than trying to copy chapter three of FoE, but it was a new fic.

Secondly, that assassination is being removed. Three years later, he feels less raw and strongly about it and is taking it out. And if you look up, that was noted.

Thirdly, the Legate didn't hasten anything. After ten years... Ten years... the war was winding down. Horizons tried to explain why a WMD would be wasted on a school, because it makes no sense for the zebras to use it as an attack. In fact, it makes no sense for a bunch of refugees to have such a weapon in the first place. If they were caught by an Equestrian patrol and the weapon were found, they'd have been shot. The Legate was using a desperate ploy to try and keep the fighting going. It worked better than he ever could have dreamed, as he himself said.

Fourth, Luna wasn't a tyrant. She was a monarch. More to the point, she was a princess of the Night. She was a vastly different person than the Princess of the Day, who, lets be honest, even in the show runs Equestria. Horizons attempts to explain why Luna would even bother with ministries and appointing the Mane six to run them. Instead, why didn't she just send the mane six with the elements to zebraland to zap them with rainbows and end the war, since that's what they've done to defeat EVERY SINGLE MAJOR THREAT to Equestria?
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>>25616070

Also, who are you to say what level of cyberization Equestria was capable of? We saw Gizmo in FoE and he wasn't a product of 101, so clearly there had to be other sources as well. Or perhaps you have an explaination about how an earth pony stable underground made cyberwings?

Horizons did try to stay true to the source material, but the fact is that after three years, Horizons had to be its own thing. Now you can live with that or not. The author has said repeatedly that Horizons grew outside the scope of Fallout. He admits that, so why hold it against the story? Never has the author claimed the story was perfection, only that it was the best he could do.

And THAT you should respect.
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>>25619725

How so? What makes you say that?
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>>25619926
At least try better with your shitposting an baits anon
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>>25619915
>but the fact is that after three years, Horizons had to be its own thing
Funny how nothing else required that.
You stay true to your source. It's important. If Somber doesn't want to then that's fine, but he can take the 'Fallout Equestria' out of the title, because his tale moved outside that particular sphere.
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>>25619983

Not shitposting. Asking. He might actually have some thought out reasons for his statement. But let me just assume that he doesn't, since most objections to horizons boils down to 'I don't like it, blah blah blah.'

After four years, Somber might have learned a few things about what NOT to do for the next story. Like to not take it too far over the top. Like to keep it centered to the Lore. And he doesn't have to deal with a lot of the stuff that happened in the war, because now the story is going out elsewhere.

>>25620004
Somber stayed as true to that source as he could, but he wasn't perfect. It was still set in and inspired by and based on events of the original fic, and attempted to stay true to it until the very end.
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>>25619875
Raider behavior didn't need to be rationalized. Making their craziness the result of a virus is strikingly similar to the midichlorians being the cause of the force in Phantom Menace.

>Horizons tried to explain why a WMD would be wasted on a school
>Horizons attempts to explain why Luna would even bother with ministries and appointing the Mane six to run them

This is another thing about PH that nobody likes, it's pretentious enough to think it needs to fix the source material. Don't mistake that for me saying the source material is perfect.

>We saw Gizmo in FoE and he wasn't a product of 101

Gizmo was a product of 101.

>Horizons did try to stay true to the source material

It didn't, it simply did not.

>Horizons had to be its own thing

No it didn't.

>And THAT you should respect.

I'm not even the anon you're replying to. Nobody has to respect anything that somber did, aside from his devotion to finally finishing that train wreck.
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>>25620038
>but he wasn't perfect
I can't think of anyone else who shat on the source nearly as much. He got more and more wrapped up in his own little world and forgot he was building on top of other works. He's not even in the same timezone as perfect.
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>>25620074

It didn't need to be for you. How wonderful! Did you present yourself to Kkat as the 'standard for credulity' for her other of thousands of readers? Raiders aren't crazy. They're depraved. One is mental illness and the other is the result of social collapse. Jeffery Dhalmer vrs ISIS. What would have been better was if Somber had changed the over the top raider rediculousness from mooks to gangers, as he did later when 'raiders' sort of melted away under the gang identities.

Littlepip speculated he was from 101, because red eye was from 101. That doesn't omit any other source.

Once again, so glad you're the authority on was must and must not be!

>>25620076
Which he admitted. Every. Single. Chapter.
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>>25620136
>if he admits he's shit it's okay
Nah, it's even worse because he knows he's doing it.
Think I'm done talking to you.
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Now, here's the deal. You don't like Horizons? Fine. Plenty of reasons not to like and you can argue about it all day. But Homelands is new, and you have an opportunity to make is good. It's clear Somber, for some insane reason, cares about your criticism. Hense the removal of Pinkie's assassination. So you want to ignore Homelands? Fine. But if you want another FoE story that is better that Horizons, you might want to give some feedback to improve it. Otherwise you're just in for more bitchfest material when Somber decides you're not worth his consideration.

Food for though. Good night.
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>>25620136
>Raiders aren't crazy. They're depraved.

They're both and/or neither. Don't generalize them.

>That doesn't omit any other source.
I sincerely doubt it. Cybernetics in the original were presented as being solely related to Red Eye and stable 101.

>Once again, so glad you're the authority on was must and must not be!

Pffft, and YOU are? We're just throwing shit at each other at this point. It's not much of an argument when the go to response is "no u."

>>25620186
>give some feedback to improve it
He never listened to any feedback from here up until very recently with the assassination removal.

What's the point in all of these posts you're making? Are you trying to get people to change their minds about Somber? I'm not trying to attack you or make you look like an idiot, I'm genuinely curious.
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>>25620186
>wasting time that could be given to better authors
>reading it for anything other than laughs
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>>25619915
>Gizmo in FoE and he wasn't a product of 101

It's pretty much stated that Littlepip thinks Gizmo is from 101, thinking that it's the only place she knows that could possibly produce such a pony.

That said, ponies in the Stable were descendants from pre-War ponies and it's pretty understandable that they knew what pegasus ponies were, at the very least from books.

Horizons shat all over the original in tons of ways. Clear examples are given in the very post you're quoting. Does rewriting main cast deaths, the justifications for the War, and having entire chapters dedicated to forcing that overpowered shounen-level-bullshit mary sue character interacting with and even fucking the main protagonist of FOE not personify not staying true to the source material? Because jesus fucking christ if you think PH stayed true despite all the shit it did to rewrite canon, you're goddamn retarded.

No one has to respect a story that shit all over what it was supposed to be drawing inspiration from.
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>>25620271

Was about to go to bed but I'll stay up. I want Somber's next story to be awesome. I want it to be a quarter the size of Horizons and twice as good. But that takes honest criticism. The stuff people said here about Horizons came too late. Somber didn't even know what 4chan was by the time the story was in its 40's, and there was too much to change. But now you have an opportunity to improve a story. Or not. It's in its infancy. You know he has the ability. But eventually Homelands will be too big to make changes to and all you'll have is complaining left to do. You'll miss your chance.

Anyway, I have work tomorrow. Goodnight.
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I'm just gonna throw this out here for the hell of it.

If anyone would like to draw Ghoulified Cheese, I'd really welcome it. I figure if I had a pic like that someone will be able to tell when I'm throwing one of his dimb little interludes up and read or skip at their leisure.

Sorry if this comes out as egotistical, it's late and I'm writing this in the middle of one hell of a headache.
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>>25620186
>>25620494
Fuck you man.

You know what? I fucking DID give Homelands critique. Hell, I fucking wrote out several pages of critiques and suggestions to Somber over the first 2 drafts and I was among the first to actually do so. I actually said good things about the story and had some faint glimmer of hope in my cold dead heart that he would improve his 3rd and final draft.

And you know what he did? He fucking added a bunch of shit that wasn't in the first 2 drafts. He added a whole new fucking MAIN CHARACTER of a shitty Half-pony dragon and added Cybernetics into the story even though the first two drafts didn't even fucking mention them.

But hey, too fucking late now huh? The chapter is already out on Fimfiction. Can't go and fucking cut a pointless main character that got shoved in for no reason. Can't cut out those cybernetics because shit it's probably too 'important to the story'.

Somber has 9 editors, released his drafts several times to public places (and never once had people clamoring for shitty hybrid ponies or Cybernetic shit, if anything they just wanted Glory and P-21 to come back), A Patreon of loyal shit eaters, had a constant stream of criticism coming in and he still managed to fucking shoot Homelands in the foot before it even began the race.

A writer who needs that much support just to churn out shit isn't a writer at all. He doesn't even deserve the title of a shitty writer because at least fucking hacks usually only vomit on a page and get and editor or two to make sure it smells less terrible.

It's like if I had all of NASA guiding me on how to build my middle school science project and but the day before the Science Fair I took a shit in the volcano. Then acted surprised that everyone at school doesn't like being showered in my shit.
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>>25620871
I love you, anon.

Somber is literally George Lucas when he was making the prequels. He had complete control of everything, and the people that were supposed to be editing and helping him were all suck ups, idiots, or spineless, and those that weren't were ignored.
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>>25620871
Well said Anon.
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Hey just an update guys for those who have been wondering. The Club isn't dead i'm just in a little reading burnout currently plus right now my fifth chapter is a cluttered nightmare of writers block and slow movement and I really want to let my story take precident before I go any longer without an update.

The Book Club will be back soon enough once I get back into the swing of it and get some momentum back in my reading.

Sorry to keep you all waiting this long for an update!

Also Wasteland is canon.
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>>25621294
I cant help but to read your posts with a sad and deppresed voice thanks to the image

And take your time, is normal to get bored from time to time
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>>25620494
>Twice as good
Two multiplied by zero is still zero
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>>25620074
>Making their craziness the result of a virus is strikingly similar to the midichlorians being the cause of the force in Phantom Menace.
As if Somber and George weren't similar enough already.
>raiders are so off the deep end the reasoning behind their behavior is a mystery
>Littlepip ends up at the top of the slaughtering charts as she ends up fighting them again and again
>goes through a crisis, afraid she's becoming what she's trying to destroy, afraid she's becoming one of them
>oh it's just a virus
>don't get bitten is the rule
>just gas them all it's ok
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>>25620186
>validating PH's existence by Homelands becoming good
I'd rather see it fail and Somber rising a new fic unrelated to PH
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>>25621994
I figured it was the constant consumption of preserved food fucking over their brains. I mean we already have research ongoing into this IRL.
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So what was the most edgy/gory moment in PH to you, and why should that be avoided?


Also, how frequent is bowel control loss in combat if you're still alive? Is it an often enough to worry, a bit of a myth, or a pretty much guaranteed thing once the pain starts?
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>>25622032
The edgy/gory bits was never what bothered me. In fact I would've enjoyed reading about her getting raped on the boat if it wasn't for the incredibly dumb circumstances, like how everyone left a defenseless filly and a handicapped blind mare alone inside a mobile beacon of loot in raider territory. I can't remember if they blamed themselves for being dumb enough to let that happen, but if there's ever a reason for angst and self-blame in PH that'd be it for the entire cast.
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>>25622075
So rape by overpowering is good? Ie two raiders get in a fight, one loses painfully, and gets raped despite injuries is good?
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>>25622147
In what situation? A smutfic? I don't see why I should care about two random raiders either way.
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>>25622166
Well more an example. I doubt there are any good pair offs for this that could have fight? rape and work. Essentially too many characters, villains included, are written clean and would not violate a PG rating.
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>>25622166
>>25622184
>>25622147

I could write this, if you have interest.
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>>25622294
Nah, spare yourself the effort. If you're going to write smut, write about established characters your audience already care for in a way that makes sense. If it's a full fic that manage to make us care for the characters first, then it'd fail for being centered around the idea of a simple rape scene.
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>>25622352
Right-o
Then which established character/s would work? Should they be the rapist or the rapee? How long should the fight go on for before being dropped off in favor of rape?
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>>25622032
Loss of bowel control bas nothing to do with injury in combat. They can happen simultaneously, but the cause is combat stress. Your body is deciding, in those critical instants, that it needs to do everything it can to pump you full of adrenaline and shut down nonessential funtions. End result is a lot of combat virgins end up shitting themselves the first - or more - time they're in a life-or-death situation. Generation Kill is exactly spot on with them stocking up on adult diapers. It'll get ya teased, but in most first world militaries, it's accepted among the troops that there's a percentage it'll just happen to.

Bowel control loss after death is guaranteed, depending on environmental factors. Battlefields are terrible places if they ain't cleaned up.
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>>25622369
It's the wasteland, so really it could be anyone. Just as long as it makes sense. Whether it makes sense or not is a deal breaker for anyone with a sense of standards for their erotica. I'd recommend going for a character you're familiar with, as you'd have to write the character correctly for it to make sense and for the reader not to be pulled out of the experience. This is what Harsh Reality did so well with Littlepip (but I won't deny it had its share of problems).
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>>25622467
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>>25622435
I haven't actually read much of anything...
Maybe I will just stick with randoms then.
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>>25622467
Neuro pls
Learn how to record/encode properly.
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pls i forget to up the bitrate for when i record
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>>25620871

The shit you did! A few people on reddit gave a few lines of suggestions here and there. A paragraph or two at most. He took their advice. No one wrote several pages of anything, even when he practically begged for it.

Precious was put in for a reason: she had almost no chance for character development and provides a character counterpoint to Majina's sweetness. No where were cybernetics added! No where!

He has three editors and two people who go over final drafts for errors. That's it.

And fuck you if you think a writer doesn't need support. There are professional writers who use entire editing teams to churn out books like that.

And you have yet to give any solid criticism of ANYTHING that actually happened in the frigging chapter. Did you actually bother to read it, or is this you talking out your ass?

>>25620971
And now you have a chance to change that if you demonstrate you can do more than talk shit. Anon proved he doesn't know what the fuck he's talking about the second he said the word 'cybernetics'.

>>25622003
Actually, he's doing both. Homelands for patreon and Dyne for e-pub.
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>>25598131
http://piecee01.deviantart.com/art/Hmmm-575115477
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>>25622075

They weren't left alone, they killed the two that were watching them.

>>25622032
When blackjack gave her self facial surgery with her sword after pink cloud.

Also, it's a survival reflex. Drop a load of nasty smelly shit and maybe it will distract or deter the predator long enough for you to get up a tree.

>>25622147
Uh. Rape is always about power dominance. You don't need to rape to demonstrate that. So it could happen, but raiders need to maintain enough cohesion that they can shake down targets and deal with other threats. Also depends on what borderline personality disordrers you're dealing with.
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>>25622836
>A paragraph or two at most
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19CJT369z_S_SdD2NFxSRCJ3YyNqIkAMxxBFSQZYFyAs

Read that shit and tell me if that's a paragraph.

>Precious was put in for a reason: She has no chance for character development and provides a counterpart to Majina's sweetness
Why the fuck would you include a character in the main party who has no chance to grow or change? You literally admitted to me why Precious is such a shitty choice. As for being a 'counterpart to Majina' there already was fucking Pythia for that. So what you've said is basically 'this character has no purpose for being in the story' to me. Explain what a shitty hybrid pony can offer to the story correctly

>No Cybernetics!
I admit I got mixed up there since I wrote that mad as fuck at like 2 in the morning. But I did talk to Somber and he mentioned he was shoving in Cybernetics again.

>he has 3 editors and 2 people who go over final drafts
I was exaggerating yes but still, that's much more than most writers ever have. He also has his fucking Patreon who he should probably release his drafts to. And I'm pretty sure he has more than 3 editors.

>Some author use entire editing teams!
Yes. 'some' authors. Not many ever had giant editing teams holding their hand through the writing process and even then I expect them to be able to look at Somber and say 'This fucking character has no reason to exist, cut her out' but apparently they can't even do that.

Either way he only took a few superfluous critiques to heart. Like me saying how Scotch Tape talking about all the underage sex she's had was awkward. And giving Majina things to actually do. I also said to keep the party tight and not shove in useless party members but there he goes and fucks it up.
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>>25622967
>>A paragraph or two at most
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/19CJT369z_S_SdD2NFxSRCJ3YyNqIkAMxxBFSQZYFyAs

I remember this... And then Somber's little hugbox brigade came in and shrieked at you for shaming the author, as they often do. Sad day, that one...
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>>25622916
Well in regards to the offering, the idea would be a practice fight gone to far, and the victor raping the loser to show just how weak they are. So pretty much just what you are saying.
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>>25622916
In what regards made the autonosejob edgy?
I haven't read PH, but the strong feelings on it seem to be a good way to find what not to do, and how one should write.
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You know what I don't understand.

Why Diamond Dogs are the Deathclaw equivalency and not Dragons.

DDs would fit the Super Mutant role a lot better IMO.
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>>25622993
You want to know what else is funny?

Somber never got this.

Where the heck did you send it?

We'll see what he says about the homelands review part. Was this before or after it was finished?
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>>25623029
>Somber never got this.
Now you're the one who is misinformed.

https://www.reddit.com/r/falloutequestria/comments/3n9i2x/criticism_of_the_two_potential_project_horizons/

In fact, he actually responded and we had some good back and forth banter

https://www.reddit.com/r/falloutequestria/comments/3n9i2x/criticism_of_the_two_potential_project_horizons/cvm1fpp

This was for the first draft. So he already read this like a month ago.
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>>25622967

Wait. No. He did. He had to read through it a bit to remember. It was just a while ago. And actually, the suggestion part was gold! He actually incorporated quite a bit of this into moving things around, putting the Thrush scene in a prologue, and keeping it there. He continued past the meh breaking point to when Riptide shows up. So he took a lot of your suggestions and put them in. So... what are you angry about?

What he'd like is something that addresses the actual finished chapter, because this did have some gold nuggets. Since Precious is going to be in the story, is he working with her personality well?
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Guise maybe Somber is in this thread, subtly defending his stories.
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>>25623074
I only read the finished chapter recently. Tell Somber I'm angry that Precious fucking exists in this story because she has no reason to. And nothing in the Prologue or first chapter has proven to me that her inclusion actually means anything.

>>25623086
At the very least someone from his fanclub is
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>>25623106

Give it time. Aside from taking her out, because she's in, what else can be done to improve her next chapter? Are there things you want to see? Things you want her to do? She's not a talky character so she needs some way to work, and if you feel this way, other readers will too.

Also, aside from precious, what worked and what needs tightening up?
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>Aside from taking her out, because she's in, what else could be done to improve her next chapter.
See, this is the kind of shit why I don't want to give any more critique. Because it ultimately won't fix anything.

You just said before that criticism came 'too late' before >>25620494 but I remember Somber getting critique really early too.

And now that only one chapter got released it's suddenly 'too late' to take out a main character that got shoved in randomly in one month without much consideration? Who you admit Somber doesn't even fully know how to write her personality, or what to really do with her? This is literally the earliest time I can react to this because he gave no indication that he wanted to shove in a 4th character prior to this.

Hence why I've given up trying to help him turn Homelands not shit. Unless his editors actually grow a spine and challenge his shitty spontaneous ideas his stories will forever be shit.
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>>25623021
I get where you're coming from but there's no use crying over spilt milk at this point.
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I want somber's lacky to leave.
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>>25623086
Whatever is going on, I want the PH shill to leave.
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>>25623177 Sec. Let me get a reply.

All four characters don't have a place they belong. They're homeless. They're orphans. They're adrift. They don't belong. Scotch Tape wants to matter, like Blackjack and P-21 did. Pythia wants to be happy, and is certain she's doomed. Majina wants to be the happy daughter she was. Precious wants to find a place where she belongs. All four are looking for home. To continue your analogy, Precious is Babs Seed. And odd duck out, but still one that belongs and has things to offer. She's terrified that in the end, she's not going to belong anywhere. She's hoping that when they get to the zebra lands, she'll find wherever dragons migrate from and hope they'll accept her, even if she is half pony. Her personality is reserved, annoyed, and blunt, but not stupid. She likes a fight and is terrified of drowning. She enjoys seeing Pythia freak out when her smug all knowing shit blows up in her face. She thinks of Scotch as her only friend, and wants Majina to grow up and toughen up. She wants to be accepted, liked, and feel like she belongs somewhere rather than just being a freak of nature.

Does that help?

And if you want to take this out of 4chan, you could probably hash it out on reddit messages.
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>stop talking shit about PH, the best foe fic ever!
>how dare you criticize an author's work!
>Homelands can be just as good as PH is if you guys would just leave feedback that somber senpai will never listen to!
>I'm right and y-you guys are all wrong! I am completely unwilling to see things from another perspective!
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Oi! Enough about PH...let's say instead we talk about the stories we love?
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>>25623263
Please. First one never happening.
Second one he's actually asking for.
Third one might be true. Might be even better than Horizons. Hopefully shorter at least.
Last one, he's asking for this guy's perspective.

>>25623269
Like which one?
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>>25623269
I'm sure none of them are as good as the carefully crafted masterpiece that is PH!
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>>25623295
Puhlease.
Nymph writes better.
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>>25623295

Definitely not as long, I hope.
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I wish we could get 1/10th as excited about other stories as we get about PH and its continuation.

>>25622836 much as it's distasteful, I'll pipe up here. He shouldn't need some sort of collossal support group. No one should. One trusted editor that's completely in the loop as to your plans, someone you trust implicitly and whose vision is in line with what you WANT the story to end up as, even if he has to defend that vision from your own impulsive "But this would be awesome!" Thoughts. Someone who, when they tell you to cut something, you seriously consider why they're telling you to do it.

That's what *most* professional writers get. Not massive teams, a relative handful of people that have even seen things prior to publication.

To reduce strain on that dude, I think having a couple others, less in-the-loop, editors can help with the short term view. "You seem to have an idea here, but I have no idea why it's here right now." Type of feedback.

You don't need a massive team. If they can't be kept up on via skype or teamspeak or steam or what have you - if you have to search to find their feedback, at that point you are employing bulk labour style editing, and despite that, it sounds like he got some really fucking good input from it. Any more cries of "they haven't given me feedback! I blame my readers!" Is a cop out, and nothing more. It's spitting in the face of the writers and stories that get ecstatic when we see a couple comments on a chapter we fucking agonized over.

Don't you dare put the onus on the readers for not correcting him, because he is by and large the exception for getting as much notice as he does.
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Actually, he's not putting anything on readers. I think he's putting it on people who bash his story here without offering suggestions for improvement. He's also telling me I probably shouldn't bother.

So anyway, want a good story, give actually points that can be fixed. Like "I want to know why Precious is here" is good, actionable advice. 'Somber is shit and HL is shit.' isn't.

Anyway, time to go to work. Think about what I said.
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>>25623269
Omit your pregnancy fetish amd ask why you like The Things We've Handed Down
Do away with uour sistercest dreams and explain why Treasure Hunting is good.
Sap all the lesbianism from the main fic and Frozen Skies and sell it to me
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>>25623373
He shouldn't need a fucking 4chan thread to write his story for him. The bashing, or criticism, from here is all the feedback he should need to tell when an idea isn't working or that PH was spiraling way out of control.

I say this as a writer. Somber is either a fucking idiot, or arrogant enough to think he knows better than everyone else. He saw the criticism when PH was getting longer and longer, the characters becoming more insane and unrelateable, and the connection to the source material getting weaker and weaker, and he chose to change nothing. If you're telling me that he couldn't change that because we didn't offer him some sort of alternative to the direction his story was taking, get bent. He should come up with this shit himself and realize that when people bash and rip on his work it's because it's bad and needs to be fixed pr adjusted, or at least get some editors that aren't braindead that can help him with it.

It is an insult to every other writer in this fandom that you are blaming this place, as much of a shithole as it is, for why PH was a disaster, and why Homelands is becoming a disater.

Go fuck yourself.
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>>25623446
Frozen Skies has a strong protag who knows her tactics.
Fun characters and their interactions. Interesting world.


No matter how much Leaky fucks up, she still tries her best to do good. Need more chapters to see more about her world and her way of dealing with it.
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>>25623446
Oh not you again. I'm not taking your bait this time.
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>>25623446
I like Things We've Handed Down as I am actually happy to help and do some collaborative work on it. Makes me feel good.

TH is good in that it is shit. It does not have an overarching plot of destiny, no crappy "My child/family/cohabitant in the yogurt sack" needs to be rescued. It is simply a day to day fic focusing more on what happens to everyone not blessed with the protagonist wand. In this, it is good. It makes for variety and a reduced need to have everything tie up all ice and pretty. Like Hidden in bondage wraps!


Frozen Skies gives a decent look into a team based project on how to prevent a main author from murdering the cast, while maintaining proper Canadian etiquette. The main plot has currently stalled, though this is mostly because of a backwards done in media res via autobiographical works. Its main selling point is in its potential and where it could go right now, rather than where it has been. This is not a bad thing, since its also early in the fic. Mostly though its from the lesbianism that keeps people interested right now. I mean seriously, i can't even remeber the names for the plot right now, between the father unicorn, his daughter, and the stallion they're after.
Relentless, Belmor, you really need to put a bit more on this in the next chapter.
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>>25623624
That still looks like lewd Kim Possible face.
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>>25623643
>pic
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>>25623446
Treasure Hunting represents responsibility in the face of adversity. How Hidden honored Gunbucks posthumous mission despite being long dead and having nearly killed her sister, and journeying to help buey Xeno's brothers despite their transgressions.
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>>25623624
The thing about Frozen Skies that dragged me in was its world building, especially in the sky. Something that I really appreciated, seeing how it's neigh impossible to grow attached to characters fast enough to be hooked that fast.
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>>25623624
The stallion trying to get his daughter back was a blue earth pony named "Bernard." Not a unicorn.
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>>25623737
I'd say the worldbuilding is good, but its like reading a GURPS book and then trying to call that your RPG adventure story.

Its very good, very well written, but it lacks in a story right now thanks to that. My thought is it needs time now that its established the background to move on in the plot.

A sort of, because we are making our own unique thing, we have to occasionaly info dump and stretch out things in the name of explanation. Such as the doc they met who set them on the right track or the tribal stable. Useful background expanding and growing spots, but, but they do not add to the plot.

Basically, FS should not be asked on its story yet, but on its world building and what it is going to do. I fully expect good things from the League of Don't let Belmor have the pen near Tail Winds.


>>25623854
>That's the joke.
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>>25623446
Oi m8, I've never focused on Leaky's pregnancy in a fetishy way, and I never will

What the hell you on about?
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>>25623861
>>that's the joke
Well it would have been remotely humorous if you actually worked on your fucking delivery then you fag
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>>25623941
I eat Digirno not Dominoes.
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It's all over.
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>>25623948
Better. But you're still a faggot.
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>>25623972
That was a bear-y nice thing. Yao Gui-ing to make another?
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>>25623985
BG PLS

Maybe if I can actually get VATS to give another good cinematic angle.
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>>25624022
Aha!
I am not BG. BG would only do that for a pretty pegasus.
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>>25624022

see >>25624048
I do applaud this pun. Bravo!
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>>25622833
Needs more lewd pictures
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>>25623861
>don't add to the plot

Heh. I wanna say things, but I'll be slapped if I do. That said, I still do want to reply to this, so we'll see how well I can tiptoe here.

I do appologize, after a fashion, that up til now wasn't exactly story heavy. How I want to put it, without deliberately spoiling anything, is that the world building - which, from what I've heard, is one of my/our strong suits - is more than just flavour. There's meat there, in how things work. Have worked. And that elaborating on the factions in play is by no means a wasted effort, story-wise. And that "Doctor" whom the DJ knew by a radio moniker well before Homage inherited the title, considering how old he is. long before a certain town was razed.

When you say "next chapter"... well, to be vague, I would like a bit more time than that. Things are planned, things are in motion. It's taken maybe a bit more words than it could have to get to this point, but I certainly don't feel they were wasted. Next chapter marks the start of a new story arc, and suffice to say, by the next time Snap sits down to write, you'll have a lot more of the picture to go on.

Next chapter is well on the way to a pre-new years release.
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>>25625292
Oh don't get me wrong, I'm not saying its a bunch of landscape pictures and technical docs strung together in some mockery of a story, its obvious its going places with it.

The issue is like saying you aren't going anywhere on a trip just because you have only left now after all the packing and planning and just made it to the first stop sign. True, nothing has really begun, but its because of the towering stack of setup and preparation needed to get there.

I mean we know who our cast is, save Fade and Bernard. One is being learned of as plot points, the other is an admittedly cagey pony who needs screen time.

I do enjoy reading, I just don't see a point in sugar coating these reviews. I'm not fucking Kotaku, and you sure as hell aren't pumping maple syrup in me for better reviews.
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IT'S CANON!
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>>25623985
Ursa-ying one wasn't good enough?
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>>25625666
I'm just saying that wasn't a Kodiak bear-ing moment. It wasn't Grizzly enough for it.
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>>25625663
Anon pls, we're past this already.
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>>25625350
Fair enough. In that case, keep on doing exactly what you were doing. It keeps me honest.
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You fuckers are unBEARable.
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>>25626089
Should we reimb-ursa you for this?
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Alright, which one of your fuckers is responsible for this?
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>>25626287
I'm trying to think of who that face reminds me of.
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>>25626008
I shall. I think this is one of those, "I only hurt you because i love you" deals.
No homo though.
Lesbian love birds all the way though.
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>>25626328
Michael Sera?
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>>25626689
OH MY GOD YOU'RE RIGHT.
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>>25626565
This picture would be nicer if the hips and crotch weren't borked.
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>>25626689
Fuuuuuug.
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>>25626799
How are they borked?
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>>25623624
Best outfit on Snap Roll.
Possibly second best after >pic
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>>25626909
Her right thigh is huge and the left just barely folds over it without much tell to a fork in her legs.
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>>25627113
THis is the line copy of her. Do you think you could slap a correction mark in green on it in pain to show where you think it should be?
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>>25627143
On a phone right now so no, I can only describe.
but if I'm looking at this right, that navel by her hoof should be hidden by it instead, and the angle of her left flank is too sharp. Looks like the angle is straight on from the side while the other is a 90 degree angle difference. It's like the left leg has inverted in order to show off the flank.
>>
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Did somebody say Travis
>>
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>>25627143
You need to show the tuuuum
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>>25627404
now kiss
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>>25627143
>>25627311
Pretty much >>25627412
You gotta define the tummy separate from the leg. It looks like one giant leg right now. Here's a good example.
http://i.4cdn.org/mlp/1448756437768.png
See the lines that split where her legs connect to her torso? That's what you need.
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>>25627311
Correction, i can manipulate the expanded items.
Neat, just have to alter the anchors and hope its doesn't reattach to the closest one.

>>25627412
I used the shading to try and pronounce it some.
Or should it be a solid body outline piece going to the little upturn?
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>>25627504
So more like this?
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>>25627593
ye that looks way better
>>
So is it basically impossible for any new FoE stories to reach the popularity of stories like PH, Heroes, Pink Eyes, etc?
>>
>>25627603
Pretty much. We're trying though, dammit.
>>
>>25627603
Rules of Rarity doesn't mean shit here, sadly. If it's not a PH clone, it's gonna bomb.
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>>25627603
The ship has sailed and is unlikely to return. I'd say to be contented with a smaller readership that's genuinely engaged rather than... whatever the fuck PH has.
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>>25627593
Much better, but there's always room for improvement.
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>>25627645
>>25627600
Agreed.

>filename
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>>25627643
>whatever the fuck PH has
It's called a cult of fanatics.

Zealots, if you will.
>>
>>25627660
I kinda feel like her legs should be closer together still, the apparent distance between the two still makes that left leg look like it's folding in on itself.
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>>25627404
M-More drawfag I forget his name base on his art because its been a while.
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>>25627835
CaptainHoers? That's CaptainHoers draws.
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>>25627744
I think adjusting the "flank" line might make the ratios work easier on the eye.
>>
>>25627872
Wow I actually thought that first in my mind but put it to the side thinking he must be the type of guy to not post here.
>>
Who is this mare being shilled?
>>
>>25628299
Snap Roll? Anon pls.
>>
>>25628299
Its Nymph's OC, note the bondage gear.
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>>25628299
The protagonist of Frozen Skies. Not sure why there's so much posting of her in a collar though.

That said, I finally got round to reading the latest update, the Crafter chapter. Damn fine work, Relentless.
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>>25628299
it's obviously Tailwind.
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>>25618723
>>25619602
Pip is such a cute horse. 10/10 would pick up and hold.
>>
>>25628360
What is it with nymph and bondage? In fact what is it with this thread in general?
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>>25628864
Are you new?
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>>25628235
same here, anon
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>>25629046
You guys are ridiculous, Hoers has been in the thread several times. We even convinced him to draw more latex stable pone.
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>>25628922
Yes
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>>25629082
W-what? Really? I must see this.... for proof.
>>
>>25629331
Wait, are Hoers and KRD the same person?!
>>
>>25629379
Yes, I told you all that ages ago.
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>>25629114
This is for you.
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>>25629386
You do know its possible to make a breathable fluid with a variable viscosity? So, you could ditch the tubes if you want to go full gel. Check out perflurocarbons. Also can equalize density with a human body to the point of giving the floaty feeling of neutral buoyancy.

I mean, its a very interesting shock dissipation material for going under power armor to protect against explosions. Its possible usage in bondage and my interests in such are mere speculation.
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>>25629556
I'm not Hoers, anon. I'm just the anon that pointed out the connection a handful of threads ago.
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>>25629534
Thanks?
It doesn't answer my question though.
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>>25629577
trust me, it does.
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>>25629801
I'm not seeing nymph or his work there, so no. Much less anything on bondage.
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>>25629945
it was an answer to your question about fetishes.

And Nymph doesn't have a patent on a bondage fetish. I do.
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>>25630001
Who are you?
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>>25618723

good to see you back.
>>
Bump limit, someone prepare new thread.
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>>25629556
I vivid dreamt that once upon a time. I woke up and was just... it felt weird, and I have no idea how my brain imagined what breathing liquid would be like.

Wait, that means you /really/ liked the start of FS chapter 01, didn't you?
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>>25630693
New thread when?
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>>25631078
(ready, just waiting til either I go to bed, or we hit 10)
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>>25631078

New Combat!
>>25631249
>>25631249
>>25631249

Fuck me, I put it in the name field didn't I. Oh well.
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>>25629331
the mare is pretty
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Hey look, I can be basically competent, too!

>>25631472
>>25631472
>>25631472
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