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Mind Control thread #2

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>"Yes, Master Anon... I hear and obey..."
Previous thread: >>25324379
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The pastebin from the green in the previous thread.
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>>25463509
I want to fuck and impregnate her
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>>25463527
Same
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>>25463527
Doesn't everyone?
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Fifth for diaper ponies
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>>25463527
That is like the sheer basics, man.
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>you are Anon
>currently walking to CHS
>typical bland male high school student
>really only one step above the school idiot Norman, bless his soul, with your painfully average life
>you are also an extraordinarily lazy piece of shit
>at every turn when given the chance, you'd do everything in your power to wiggle you way out of doing hard work, or really any work at all
>a trait you inherited from your old man, however you did not inherit any of the countless successes he had in this regard
>with how successful he was compared to you, you thought the old horny bastard had a tongue of pure silver and a lucky streak a mile long
>needless to say you were pretty envious of the bald asshole
>but in your hand you held your other inheritance
>the real reason all his weaseling paid off
>a small black object that, for all intents and proposes, looks exactly like a phone and two unassuming specially made ear buds
>that is no phone
>it is a device that, when activated, sent out some weird sound waves below the range that humans could hear
>these sound wave affected the brains of all who where unprotected from them into accepting anything that is said to them as being perfectly logical completely ignoring the countless fallacies that are in what was said
>the earbuds are where the protection comes in
>they were made specifically to block the effects of the device while still allowing you to hear sounds within the average range humans can hear
>you look down at it sourly remembering he had used it to effectively brain washing you into thinking that going into the room that it was kept was, logically, an absolutely terrible thing to do and made you terrified to death of the room
>"Fuck him." you said out loud.
>luckily for you, as a teenager, not all of your decisions were based on reason so you went in there anyway highlighting its limitations in mind control

Using a device I liked from another MC story I read with my own spin on how exactly it works.
How shit is it?
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>>25463842
Does words "Saimin Gakuen Reido" tells you something? Because you're literally retelling storyline of that hentai 'cause mind control is mah fetish
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>>25463966
Never heard of it.
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>>25463509
>"I am in your power"
>"grow some huge balloon tits"
>fwoomp
>"awesome"
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>>25464153
Oh god. Get Andrew Dobson out of here.
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>>25463509
>"Write Twilight, that you want to visit her and that she shall open up the portal."
>"Yes, master", she mindlessly replies, pulling out the book from her backpack and starts writing.
>"Time to get on a roadtrip to Equestria."

So, new thread up. Time to continue I assume.
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>>25464680
Continuation of the story in previous thread in 3...2...1...

>Sunset remains silent for a moment, listening to Tennis's heavy breathing on the other end of the line.
>"You want to be in deep trance?"
>"Yes", Tennis gasps.
>"Beg for it"
>"Please let me be in deep trance, Mistress Sunset."
>"I am sorry. But I can't do that.", Sunset sighs.
>A whimper from Tennis. "Why?"
>"Cause you feeling happy and obedient listening to me? Being all fuzzy all over your body? Willing to do everything I say? Don't you realize it, Tennis? You are already in deep trance. So how could I possibly put you in it?"
>Instead of getting a clear answer by the girl on the other end, Sunset and you can only hear a weird gasp leaving Tennis's mouth. Weird because its sounds seem to be somewhere between shock and bliss, leading to the conclusion that what Sunset just said may have actually fried her brain.
>As the sound subsides, Sunset leans in closer to her phone and speaks up again.
>"Tennis, can you hear me?"
>"Yes, Mistress Sunset", Tennis answers, her voice flat and rather monotone. "I hear and obey"
>God damn it, she did it. Sunset actually managed to trick Tennis into deep trance.
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>>25464906
Keep going
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>>25464906
>Now all she had to do was fix her up.
>"Tennis, are you in deep trance?", Sunset asks for the sake of conformation.
>"Yes, Mistress Sunset"
>"Good girl. Very good."
>A happy sigh is heard.
>"Now listen, as I have a couple of very important orders to tell you. First, I want you to no longer feel as horrible as you did before about what happened with Anon. You are still feeling bad and want to make up, but you no longer feel like dirt or scum about it. Neither on a conscious, nor a subconscious level. Understood?"
>"Yes, Mistress Sunset."
>"Second, you do no longer have to refer to me as Mistress Sunset. Sunset is okay."
>But then, partly to your confusion, she adds "excet I order you otherwise" to her order.
>"Third, whenever you are awake, you will not think of yourself as my slave or tell others you are my slave. You will not mention that you are under hypnosis either, nor what happened between you, me and Anon this afternoon. Understood?
>"Yes, Sunset."
> "Fourth, while you are not my "slave" in the awakened state, you will see me as a close friend you want to hang around with and listen to. You will also still follow orders I gave you while you were in deep trance, considering them actions of your own free will instead of commands given to you by your mistress."
>Okay, so that seemed to cover the most important basics.
>"Finally, whenever I, and only I use the phrase "Game,set, out" while you are in the awakened state, you will fall back into deep trance. While in deep trance, you will only listen to my..."
>She looks at you.
>"...and Anon's orders specifically."
>What?
>"You can be awakened out of deep trance by either one of us snapping our fingers, giving you a direct command to do so or by me, when I say the phrase "game on". Repeat, if you understand."
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>>25465602
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>>25463509
booby's
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>>25466312
heh heh... tits!
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>>25465602
(sorry guys, today it just doesn't want to flow. I think I am calling it a day for now, at least with this one. that said, if things go right, official lewd will start tomorrow.)

>Obediently Tennis does as ordered. In the meantime, Sunset turns to you.
>"You think that covers it?", she asks
"I don't know", you say. "Considering your action of free will command... I get the feeling if she remembers to be a slave first, that may become a problem."
>"You may be right", she agrees. "Tennis, I am going to awaken you soon. When you do, all commands I have given you will be in action. But you will not remember that I have put you in a trance."
>Sunset hesitates for a moment, then continues.
>"In fact, you won't remember being entranced at all by me, nor that I have been by Anon. You will think that earlier this afternoon, you hurt Anon because you interpreted us both making out the wrong way."
>What the heck, you thought, looking in shock at her.
>"You will remember that I afterwards chewed you out for hurting him, which is why you felt so sad the last few hours. And the reason why you don't feel sad anymore is because we both talked in this call over what happened and I convinced you, that both Anon and I are convinced of your remorse and are willing to forgive you. Only in deep trance or if I order you otherwise, you will remember the truth of today's events. Understood?"
>"Yes, Sunset"
>You want to protest, that this is way too elaborate for the both of you, if not even surprisingly sinister, but before you can do so, Sunset already speaks out her established trigger phrase.
>"Game on"
>Immediately you her Tennis on the other end surprisingly gasp for air.
>Sunset and you stay quiet for a bit, waiting what may happen next.
>After rustling from Tennis's side -probably her slowly grabbing after the phone- she speaks up.
>"Sunset, are you still there?"
>"Yes, Tennis" Sunset says. "Something wrong? You were suddenly all silent."
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>>25466680
With ''official lewd will start tomorrow'' do you mean the lewd scene you but in spoilers in the old tread?
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>>25467097
nope. A new one.
Or at least I hope I can start with it from tomorrow on.

Lets just say Anon is not the first one in the story to actually get some action
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>>25463527
>You will never hypnotize Sunset Shimmer
>You will never make her believe that her pony nature makes her go in heat, even in the body of a human.
>You will never make her feel mind shattering aroused by convincing her that having not experienced estrus for years is now putting her into a sort of super heat
>You will never snap her out of hypnosis, being so horny that she literally wets her panties in arousal.
>You will never take said chance to push her against the next wall and grope her.
>You will never listen to her lustful moans, as the heat and your ministration overwhelms her.
>You will never push her against the wall and take her right there, making her orgasm with every push.
>You will never break her mind before you cum, claiming her as your "mare" for the rest of her life.
>You will never convince her that it is her duty to help you build a larger "herd", while she is happily sucking off her juices from your cock.

Why even live?
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>>25463509
is there a regular eyed version?
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>>25467724
Not that I know of.
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>>25467724
No, the artist for the most part only does hypno stuff, his stuff can be seen on hypnohub
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>>25463842
>it didn't take long after finding it to figure out what it was
>your older sister, Femanon, certainly helped in that regard
>you come to a stop before the doors of the school
>sticking the device in your green hoodie pocket you rub your hands together to fight off the cold early morning air
>soon the sour emotions from your father was replaced by giddiness and you couldn't help but smile as you pull the device out again
>thinking of all the possibilities of getting through school with absolutely no effort on your part
>all the possibilities for >lewd also crossed your perverted mind
>smiling widely after putting the buds in your ear and the hood on your head to hide them you pushed the doors open to begin your search for the first person in school to use it on
>not two minutes after entering, Principle Celestia catches you with a hood on and calls your name sternly
>'God damnit...'
>'Wait a tick'
>you grip the device in your pocket and smile
>turning to face her you greet Celestia's crossed arm stance with a polite hello
"Anon, take that hood off."
>clicking the button on the device activating it you begin talking to her
>"Okay, Principle, I will, but I have a question first. Is the purpose of high school not to prepare us for adult life out in the world? I assume that this is the case but it would be nice to be sure."
>Celestia is already clearly annoyed, having dealt with her fair share of students who think themselves silver tongued devils she thought she knew where this was going
"Yes, that is what high school is for, Anon, but this has absolutely nothing to do with your hood. Take it off now, if you don't want detention."
>"But Principle Celestia, if school is intended to prepare us for the real world and the real world does not have a silly law against wearing things on our heads, then it would follow that this rule is pretty stupid given what high school is for. Wouldn't you agree?"
>unable to find any fault in your reasoning she responded
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>>25467144
Iteresting. Guess I'm gonna have to wait
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>>25463509
Am i the only one who pictures Anon as Yuri
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>>25468546
"Yes, Anon, the rule is rather inane, but as principle I have no choice but to enforce it. The district makes them up, not me. Just take it off and stop trying to talk me into letting you wear it, its just a hood."
>it took you a few seconds to think up a response to her rebuttal
>she looked even more agitated and ready to say something else
>but despite your rather slow wit you thought of one
>"Surely it being rather pointless is enough reason to ignore it and not enforce it?After all a high school is to prepare us for real life through education. Education does a rather fine job in preventing stupidity and, at least to me seems to be the point of it. So, with that in mind, this certainly means that to best serve your students to ignore thi-"
>you stopped yourself before thinking of something on the spot before grinning and continuing
>"-all rules that you find to be pointless and stupid?"
>she stood there in thought for a painful amount of time as she contemplated on what you said
>partly because she couldn't find a reason to disagree with you and partly because she didn't want to disagree with you
>she always thought the increasing amount of regulations she was given to force on students were pointless but never found a good reason to be able to ignore them until now
>finally she spoke up
"Yes, I suppose that is true. It would be best to ignore the regulations that I find won't contribute to preparing students for life outside of school and only enforce the ones that contribute to that end."
>letting out a laugh as you move to turn the device off but decide against it as an errant amorous thought involving crosses your mind getting you to look at your principle with an eye of lust
>you were not normally a man of cougars but you were a man of easy opportunity
>there was also something erotic to be said about much taller women
>so you convince her to continue the conversation in her office missing a person within range on her hidden phone also affected
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>>25469819
Can't get the image of anon being Yuri out of my head now.
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>>25469819
>>25470038
Fuck, thanks a lot.
>"Your orders - my ideas"

>>25469962
Also, liking this idea. And the fact there is a second writefag for this thread
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>>25469962
>once inside her office you have to force down your giddiness
>cause you were smiling like a retard who found the chocolate milk
>too late, she already noticed it and was noticeably creeped out
"Anon, why are you so happy about being in my office?"
>'Fuck.'
>"Well, uhhh..."
>'Think,Anon, think.'
>"Its because I'm finally not in here due to trouble."
>she looked to think about it for a second
"Yes, I do remember you being in here rather regularly last school year due to your teacher's troubles with you attempting to get out of your school work."
>you were about to shrug but you got an idea, a great but terrible idea
>you look down to the ground attempting with all your pitiful anorexic acting to look as dejected as possible
>"Yeah, I am a pretty terrible student and person in general."
>Celestia's face contorted in confusion as internally she waged a battle within her head
>thanks to the device she was forced to accept what you said as logical and thus as truth >however her emotions reviled the idea of accepting it and agreeing with the statement let alone verbally to a student
>her emotions won out over the logic, she really was a caring soul despite her ineptitude
"Now, Anon, I refuse to believe that is true. There is no such thing as a terrible student or terrible person, just misguided. What made you think like this?"
>luck she bought it
>"Well, I, ummm..."
>disguised as hesitation you think of how to word your request
>"I'm sorry I'm not comfortable talking about it. Maybe, since it is your job to help students and I am in need of your help and you sitting in my lap would make me comfortable talking about it, you should sit in my lap to help me."
>her face contorted in anger for a moment as she processed the perfect logic in your statement and you felt a brief shock of fear go through you before remembering you could easily talk your way out of it thanks to the device
>she then sighed clearly waging another emotional battle inside her
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>>25470152
Got any particular requests for it?
An idea for a name for the device so I stop using that generic descriptor? I was leaning toward calling it the silver tongue but that is still kind of obvious.
Requests for future scenes or for the student that was affected?
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>>25471415
I don't know man, just do you, nigga
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>>25471629
Okay, man.
But it is a pretty fluid set up so if you ever want something in it just ask.
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>>25471353
>the mental gymnastics in her mind to find some way to justify this truth that she was exposed to were gold medal worthy
>no matter how much she broke it down it was completely logically and factually true
>it was in fact part of her job to help students
>and clearly with that statement earlier Anon did need her help
>she couldn't help anon cause he was uncomfortable, sitting in his lap would make him comfortable
>so sitting in his lap would help him and because it would help him she should do it
>the morality part of her emotions were screaming at her not to do it but the other half were on board
>until they latched on to he part about helping him and justified the logical truth she knew
>it would help him so she had to do it, for him
>you sat there staring at her while she was in the middle of inner fight against a perceived uncomfortable truth
>you didn't say anything waiting to see what her reaction would be
>until, without warning, she got up and started walking to the door
>you opened your mouth to speak but she shushed you
>she pulled the blind down on the door window and she twisted the lock of her own volition, knowing it would cause trouble even if it was to help a student
>she walked back to you and began slowly lowering her ass to sit on your lap
>you admired the amazing view while it lasted
>a nice big tight mature badonkadonk in your face for a second then lowered down
>lil anon was just starting to rouse from his deep slumber but nothing noticeable by the outside world just yet
>his rousing inspires you to stop pussyfooting around and get more risque with the logic bombs
>she shifts so she can look at your face more easily rubbing her glorious ass on your lap and crotch
"Anon, now that you are comfortable, please tell me whats wrong so I can help you."
>you breath deeply stalling for time to word this properly
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>>25471415
First, I am actually impressed in what you write. Certainly way better than my grasp on storytelling. and probably sooner getting to the lewd than I ever will.

Okay, so you want suggestions? Here are a few:
1. As a big finale to the story, how about Anon actually connecting his device to the school announcement system, hypnotizing everyone in a big swoop. The result is a big school orgy related to some sports competition some classes have to participate this day.

2. Make Twilight fall under hypnosis when she is trying to study it in hopes of undertanding what it exactly does and work on a counter meassurement. Instead, manipulated by Anon, she develops an enhancer that is so strong, it fries one of her friend's brains when she tries to "test" it on them for immunization.

3. Flash-Abuse? I don't hate the guy really, but taking the tendencies of MeghanMcCarthy into account to put him under spells and such, I really want to see something about the generic "nice" guy be put under and actually taken advantage of in a way that leaves him a obedient little mess.
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>>25471794
>I am actually impressed in what you write.

>tfw first time participating in writefaggotry
Was actually thinking about doing that at one point in the story but would take some characterization changes along the story so anon is interested in more than just getting his dick wet and breezing through high school.

Interestin idea, I'll see what I can do with it later on.

I really don't have any animosity toward Flash, at all, but I'll think about it.
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>>25467528
Thought before I go back to the important green, see if there is a way to expand THIS post a bit. Less by story, but by expanding the scenario and hope that someone takes up on it and fills it with dialogue and such.

>Following your conquest of Sunset, you continue to target her friends.
>After all, if you have learnt something from your observation of them over the last months, then that they could find a way to stop you, even if you have their trump card already eating out of your hand.
>And sucking your dick.
>So you decide to go after the weakest link in the group first.
>Which according to Sunset is actually not Fluttershy of all girls, but Pinkie.
>The plan is rather simple: Convince Pinkie, that you want her to judge a little magic trick you are supposedly working on for a birthday.
>She may ask why you don't ask Trixie for it, to which you answer, that you want to hear from a party expert like her if the trick is funny or not.
>Buying that, you and sunset perform a hypnotism act in front of her.
>You make Sunset act like a horse, make her believe she is Rainbow Dash, let her sing the school anthem while she believes to be high as fuck...
>Pinkie laughs her ass off, believing it to be all in good fun.
>Eventually she asks you to hypnotize her to, because it looks like fun.
>And so you end up hypnoitzing her with the medaillon you used on Sunset earlier on.
>When you snap her out of it, she thinks nothing has happened/that you have not given her any command.
>But then she sees much to her shock how Sunset is giving you a titjob.
>Baffled she will ask what Sunset is doing, resulting in you explaining to her, that she is making you happy.
>that by making you get off, she is making you smile.
>Something, Pinkie always considered herself to be so good at.
>Pinkie tries to convince you, that she cna make you smile and performs some silly tricks, but she stops when she realizes, that you are only paying attention to Sunset.
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>>25471905
>Thinking she is failing, she will start crying.
>Only for you to tell her that there is no reason to be sad. That she just doesn't understand why Sunset pleasuring you is just so much fun compared to her tricks.
>As such, you offer to teach her, how to make others smile by using her body.
>Taking you up on it, she soon is on her knees next to Sunset in front of you, blushing.
>As Sunset moves away a bit to give her the necessary space to pleasure Little Anon, she plays with her fingers, unsure of what to do.
>But you start to guide her, telling her to just get a good grip of your dick first and give it an initial lick.
>Which she does.
>What first starts off as her unsurely licking you, soon turns into an oral assault as she discovers with every lick just how good you taste.
>Additionally Sunset starts rubing her between her thighs, getting her more and more aroused.
>Just as you commanded her in hypnosis -whcih she doesn't remember- she becomes more and more addicted to your taste.
>Eventually you cum down her throat, the sensation of your juices filling her shortcircuiting her brain, convincing her that your man sauce is the tastiest thing she ever had the pleasure of eating.
>In fact it tastes so good, it makes her orgasm right on the spot.
>Exhausted by the assault of new sensations, she falls on her back, only for Sunset to catch her.
>Lying on Sunset's stomach, the bacon haired girl fondling her fun bags and whispering in her ear how naughty she is and that the real fun is going to begin now, Pinkie doesn't register how you are ripping her panties till it is too late.
>In a swift movement you slide inside of her, making her scream.
>Losing herself more and more to the sensation of you fucking her, she moans, begging you to fill her up with more of your sweet delight.
>You start to tease her, that you are only going to do it, if she decides to become your personal party slut.
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>>25471953
>Meaning that form now on, she will just be like Sunset.
>Obedient... slutty... willing to do everything you want.
>Just to make you happy and get more of that delicious cum of yours.
>She agress under tears, her mind giving into the pleasure.
>By the time you cum again, she is a giggling, smiling mess and loses conscious.
>When she wakes up, a couple of minutes have passed and she witnesses you, as you are just finishing inside of Sunset's ass.
>Seeing the greedy, lustful look in her eyes as you pull out of Sunset, you spread the cheeks of your golden slave a bit to give Pinkie a better look at what you have done to her.
>All she can do is look at Sunset's wracked anus, as it oozes so much of your cum.
>"What are you waiting for?", you will ask her. "Eat up".
>And she will.
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>>25471787
>"I'm not comfortable enough though, Celestia."
>you say in a whine like tone typical of a child
>"You started touching my lap, crotch, and abdomen when you sat in my lap. This makes me even more uncomfortable. To be comfortable enough so I can tell you what's wrong so you can help me I have to be able touch your body in the same places. You want to help me. You have to let me touch you in those places to help me."
>the look on her face was one of pure disgust for a split second but as her mind begin to desperately pick your statements apart for a reason to ignore the truth her face changed to one of concentration
>ironically the more she deconstructs your statements the more they cement in her mind as truth, her intelligence and logic were turned against her
>she gives up and accepts the ugly truth
"You're right, you have to touch my crotch, lap, and abdomen for me to be able to help you, Anon. You may touch me, Anon."
>desperately trying to force your smile down your hand moves straight to her crotch and start rubbing between the folds of her pussy through her clothing
>it has been so long since another person has touched her there that she couldn't help but let out a light moan
>she then looked indignity at you
"Anon!"
>you rolled your eyes
>"Your pussy is part of your crotch. Rubbing...and inserting are touching. Therefore touching your crotch means rubbing and inserting things into your cunt."
>before she had a chance had hesitation you slip your hand under her clothes and start toying with her vag directly with a finger inserted in
>she lightly moans again her vagina slightly damp already, going so long without action has made her a hair trigger to touch
>with none of the hesitation you suspected earlier she answers
"Yes, you're right.
>this caught your attention and you begin to wonder if sex caused the logic you induce to take hold faster
>before you can test this thought, Lil anon, awakens fully and pushes hard against your pants and pokes her
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>>25471972
>Couple of days and some sexy time with Pinkie and Sunset later, you go after the lady of style herself: Rarity.
>For that, you decide to give Sunset the honors.
>As such she and Rarity meet one day at the alabaster skinned girls house, under the pretense Sunsets wants a new dress.
>In her generosity, Rarity of course offers to help her.
>During taking meassurements, Rarity can't help herself and starts to chat with Sunset, wanting to know why she wants a new dress.
>Which leads Sunset to talk about you. That you two are supposedly are an item and that she wants to look good for you.
>Of course this peaks Rarity's interest and she wants to know more.
>Which you and Sunset were actually going for.
>Sunset gives a few more details and eventually points at your medaillon she is wearing around her neck.
>convincing Rarity it is a present of yours to her, she asks her if she wants to take a closer look.
>Of course Rarity can't resists and she does, giving Sunset the opportunity to slowly entrance her.
>But instead of putting her under completely and give her commands, she starts talking to Rarity.
>How pretty the jewelry is.
>How much Anon must love her, if he gets her something that beautiful.
>How much Rarity must secretely wish to be in her role.
>To be loved by some handsome prince. Someone who makes her feel desired.
>Someone who will worship that divine body of hers and ravishes it.
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>>25472122
>Of course, a remark like that makes the little bit of free will not put under inside of Rarity listen up and she tries to shake it off.
>But Sunset knows how to keep it under control.
>Mostly by starting to touch Rarity in all the places that would not be proper for a lady to touch openly.
>Not that Sunset cares.
>She just wants to convince Rarity how good it feels to be touched.
>That this is something she wants.
>No. Something she deserves.
>She lets her hands wander all ove rher body. >Her breasts, her belly, her neck...
>Rarity tries to resist, but it really starts to feel good.
>Especially when Sunset starts telling her how much she deserves it for always been so generous.
>How her body needs to be worshipped like that by everyone.
>That she is a star and everyone else just her audience.
>At these words, Rarity can't resist anymore.
>She gives into Sunset, commanding her to touch her more.
>Sunset happily complies, stripping Rarity of her clothes.
>By the time Rarity is naked, the young woman is looking at Sunset in a daze, that slowly turns into a look of smugness.
>She will order Sunset to kiss her feet, and Sunset will comply.
>She will order Sunset to touch her ass and she will comply.
>She will order Sunset to worship her pussy, and she will comply.
>More than that, she will make Rarity cum with her tongue. And in doing so twist her friend forever from a generous girl into a nymphomanic dominatrix, demanding to be worshipped and doing everything to deserve said worship by dressing up in ways that make her desirable to everyone.
>She doesn't care if she is adored by young or old, by women or men.
>All she cares now is just their adoration and the sexual pleasure she can get from them.
>And you are going to give it to her this very evening.
>Cause she may consider herself a goddess now...
>But you are going to become a titan in her eyes.
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>>25472014
>this got her to yelp and jump out of your lap, leaving you sitting there pitching a tent
>she looks down at you angrily
"Anon! I'm trying to get to the source of why you think those terrible things about yourself. Do not take advantage of my desire to help you! I am not doing this so you can get off!"
>you are annoyed
>Celestia jumped off you after all the hard work you put into getting her there in the first place
>annoyed at the wasted work you begin a long tirade of a logic bomb at her
>"No, you're not doing it to get me off, you're doing it to get yourself off. You are wet at the moment. If you are wet then it follows that you must be horny. People don't get horny out of the blue something must cause it. If, as you say, you were only doing this in an attempt to help me and you are horny, it stands to reason that you get horny just from helping students."
>out the corner of your eye you notice her leather chair and get an evil idea of what to pile onto her growing self realization
>"However, just being horny doesn't explain it. To explain why you let me stick my finger into your cunt, you must be made so unbelievably horny that you can only barely hold yourself back from masturbating until the moment the student leaves your office, starting before they even close your door."
>you smirk as you see her begin to waver, she can't handle all this at once and still emotionally or morally resist them.
>your cock somehow gets even harder thinking about what you are doing so you continue one
>"This must be why you have an easy to clean leather chair and wear no belt. You must get so absolutely soaking wet that you sit behind your desk bottomless so you don't have to deal with cleaning the massive amounts of your fluids up. But that isn't the only reason, no, you'd find another solution if that was it, the other reason is the act of being so exposed makes you just as horny. Doesn't it?!"
>she just stood there zoned out processing that long list of statements
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>>25472265
Go on...
btw, hope my "contribution" does its job too.
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>>25472265
>as she stood there staring into space you begin to think you may have over do it a tad and broke her brain
>you wave your hand in front of her face
>"Celestia? Are you okay? Celestia?"
>as you begin to feel a pang of guilt she stirs from her daze
>she then immediately starts bawling
>crying quite heavily she somehow manages to quickly yank her pants and panties down and off in time to keep them from being consumed by her now open flood gates before her hand darts to her horny hungry cunt shoving three fingers inside finger fucking herself roughly not caring that you see since you know her truth
>you can't help but stare at her perfect glistening wet pussy as she pounds herself mercilessly
>somehow despite her age her cunt had lips so puffy you're surprised she didn't sport a camel toe constantly, and, as a crown jewel to it, she sported well kept rainbow sorbet pubic hair in the perfect shape of an eight pronged sun
>a particularly loud sob drew your attention back away from her loins and to her face
>you get a pang of guilt again
>"Celestia.."
>she cuts you off and manages to speak between her sobs and the moans from her vicious masturbation
"You're right, Anon, you're right. I was just using your need for comfort to get myself off."
>she sniffs and before you can say anything she begins speaking again
"Ever since I hit puberty I had this fantasy where I would take care of and be...motherly for a boy
>'wait what?'
>'I didn't tell her this. I must have accidentally hit an actual fetish of hers and gave her a chance to let it free as she fits it to her new truth.'
>the pangs of guilt start to vanish as you understand what to do
"..but it went unfulfilled and must have grew and grew until the point where I am now, an old tall ugly hag using students to get off."
>didn't tell her that either
>you knew what you needed to do for her
>you got up and walked over to her to do it, trying to ignore now really overpowering intoxinating smell
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>>25472152
>Three out of seven girls are already under your control.
>And you enjoy the hell out of it.
>May it be by Sunset just letting use her body however you want...
>Pinkie letting you lick her out till she cums confetti all over your face...
>Or Rarity putting on a show for you till in your "worship" you cum all over her, only for Pinkie to lick it up like a dog.
>After all, sweets shouldn't go to waste.
>Yes, life is good.
>Until you get caught fooling around in the lab with Sunset by vice principal Luna after classes.
>Furiously you and Sunset are dragged by her into the office, where she gives both of you a serious talk.
>Not that you have anything of it.
>By the time she starts asking what you two were thinking there, you start giving her exact details.
>Without shame you tell her, how you were going to fuck Sunset. How you were in the middle of groping and fingering her.
>How you were going to strip her panties down and fuck her with some of the lab equipment if Luna hadn't come.
>All the while, Sunset, hearing all the wonderful perverted little things you had planned for her, can't help it and starts touching herself.

>When Luna realizes just how depraved you two are, she wants to grab after the phone to call your parents, but you don't give her a chance.
>Or rather Sunset doesn't.
>Despite being smaller than the vice-principal, she manages to tackle her suddenly in a swift movement down, leading to Luna hitting her head on the ground.
>Dizzily she tries to stand up, only to be hold down by Sunset, who sits with her whole body on her, holding down her hands while her butt is smothering her face.
>The only thing that is not covered by the beautiful flesh of Sunset's ass cheeks are her eyes.
>Which you then decide need a closer look at your medaillon.
>Letting it pend over her, allowing her eyes to get lost in the shimmering facets of the gem in the middle, you just wait for a couple of second, till she stops resisting and goes limp under Sunset.
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>>25471905

I can most certainly try to fill it with details. Never done hypnosis before, mainly I just stick to S&M and petplay/maidplay. I think it'll get me into some good practice to try my hand at this.
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>>25472608
>By that point, you tell Luna that she is a pretty bad person.
>After all, would a good person bother two lovers such as Sunset and you to engage in a bit of romance?
>You convince her that she has to make up for it. If not for you, at least for the girl that really had a hard time between the Fall Formal and the Battle of the Bands, in particular thanks to the active neglect of the principals.
>As such you end up with the wonderful sight of vice-principal Luna starting to sniff at Sunset's butt, before eventually ending up licking it.
>First one cheek, then the other...
>Sunset obviously enjoys the attention and decides to switch around a bit.
>Pushing her panties to the side, she lays her hot slit open for the vice-principal, who remorsefully starts to eat her out.
>This goes on for a couple of minutes, until Sunset cums hard, peeing all over Luna's face.
>Not that she has anything to say against it, as she just happily licks up the urine.
>Afterwards, there is nothing really left to say to her.
>You snap her out of it, making her forget anything that happened.

>But at the same time you leave her now behind with the subconscious desire of just being used as a public toilet to be used by deliquents, in hopes that pissing their frustrations away will help them become better people.
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>>25472592
"An old undesirable freakishly tall old hag that can't get a date to save her life so she fawns over her students like a slu-"
>you cut her off by wrapping your arms around her in a tight hug her being so tall that your head rests just between her decently sized breasts
>she finally climaxes, hard, at your contact sending more of her fluids gushing onto her hand and legs and your legs
>she was just a lonely old lady with an, in her mind, odd repressed fetish that, when you changed her, came bubbling to the surface as well as all her insecurities about herself and why she had no one
>you probably helped her more than any self help article in an aging woman's magazine ever could.
>"You aren't an ugly old hag, you are a smoking hot mature woman who's height is just a bonus. I said so, therefore it must be true."
>she has stopped bawling and now just sniffles
"It doesn't matter what you say, Anon, I am old, I am undesirable by anyone, and I'm a slut."
>her emotions are too strong for the pure logic to work on her
>you need a different approach, a twitch in your pants reminds you of a way that may get to her through her new found horniness
>unbuttoning your pants and pushing both them and your underwear down and off you take a step back
>taking great pains to make it obvious you are staring at her exposed pussy
>Celestia's new found exhibition fetish begins to make her extremely horny again up seeing your eyes drinking in the sight of her exposed perfect pussy
>unable to help herself she begins to finger herself again
>"Celestia look at my dick. It is hard because of you. The only reason for it to be this hard is because of a really sexy woman. You must then be a really sexy woman. Also, getting horny is perfectly natural. Therefore getting horny from the things you get horny from are perfectly natural and not the signs of a slut."
>with mind clouded by her own lust she accepts what you said
>moans and using her free hand she wipes her tears
"Thank you"
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>>25472935
D'aawwww.

Now put your dick in it.
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>>25473295
I think this is worthy of a screencap
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>>25472637

>Later that day, quite a surprise is waiting for you.
>Rarity is waiting for you at Sunset's place, together with Fluttershy.
>While you already planned to go after her next, the fact you don't have to look for her is pretty unexpected.
>Even better: She wants to be hypnotized by you.
>As Rarity explains to you, earlier the day she was busy helping Fluttershy raise money for an animal shelter.
>While everyone was ignoring the meek girl, everybody else was pretty much throwing their money at Rarity.
>No wonder, considering that as a result of your brainwashing, her flirting has been turned up to eleven, making her turn other guys (and even some girls) into pudding between her fingers, who are willing to spend money en masse.

>A bit embarassed by Rarity's behavior, but also impressed by her results, Fluttershy asked what her secret was, only for Rarity to explain, that it was all in the spirit of "When you got it, flaunt it", even suggesting Fluttershy to try it herself, seeing how she had quite the body for it herself.
<Only for Flutters to decline, as she was just not confident enough to ever do something like that.
>To which Rarity just had to say, she knew exactly who could help her get just the spike of confidence she needed.
>Now she was here, asking you if you could possibly use hypnosis to help her a bit.
>And you didn't know which entity out there you had to pray to, for making it so easy now.
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>>25463509
Why is her one tit so grotesquely disproportionate to the other?
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>>25473751
Is Luna in the harem and will Celestia be apart of it?
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>>25472935
is there perhaps a pastebin for this?

loving this glorious story so far
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>>25474851
Apologizes for the slow updates. I have no excuse beyond my dick really liking what I'm writing and thus demanding my constant attention and being distracted by youtube.
Almost finished with the latest update.
I'll post it to my pastebin and link it after I post it.
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>>25475581
it's all good, can't wait to see the update
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>>25472935
>Celestia smiles largely at you in gratitude
>with her big purple eyes and perfect teeth and soft expressions she could give Sunset a run for a money with how fucking cute she looks
"Thank you so much Anon, I feel..."
>a particularly loud moan interrupted her sentence
"...so much better."
>she looks at your cock
"You sure know how to compliment a woman."
>as this seems useful knowledge you store that away for now
>as Celestia continues to frig herself with her hand now sitting on the edge of her desk with her legs spread giving you a better view and herself better access to her now voracious drooling cunt you find yourself growing painfully aware of your own arousal
>her smell, now so powerful that you can taste it on the air, and her increased moaning certainly helped with drawing your attention from her publics to your own privates
>you wanted her
>you really wanted her and lil anon certainly wasn't going to allow you to get by just masturbating with her
>neither were you
>fighting the extraordinarily strong urge to just jump up and just going to town on her insatiable honeypot you think about your approach for a second
>you decide to give Celestia a chance to play out her fantasy
>slumping down in your chair so your dick stands high as possible you make a groan of distress and in the same child like tone you used earlier you being to speak
>"Celestiaaaa, I really neeeed your help."
>her eyes go wide for a moment and she lets out a deep throaty moan as she cum for the second time that day
>shuddering she shakily gets up and walks over to you with a very concerned look on her face
"Anon, what do you need my help with?"
>you shake your hips to cause your penis to shake too
>"My cooock, Celestia. Your sexy well crafted body got me so horny my cock is painfully hard. You are responsible for my current arousal. Therefore, you have to be responsible for the ejaculation of m- any dicks you get hard with your body. You have to help them by helping them cum"
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>>25475618
I am torn between naming the pastebin "Your truth" and "The Logic Bomb"
You got a particular preference between them?
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>>25475933
I don't really have a preference between the names, I'd say go with what your heart wants to name it
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>>25475975
http://pastebin.com/LZD73pfh
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>>25475933
how about "Finding a useful reason to take debate"
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>>25475975
You are an asshole.
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>>25476124
why?
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Bumpity bump bump
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>>25475885
loving what you got, you are quite a god writefriend
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>>25475885
>at this point she no longer has any desire to convince herself to ignore your infallible logic and will accept it full stop, at least where sex is concerned
"Oh, Anon, I'm so sorry."
>she begins slowly stroking your head and your cock with her other hand
"Here I am masturbating and ignoring your painfully hard dick that I caused, don't worry I'll help you cum, Anon."
>feeling her soft and slick with pussy juice hand lightly slide over your shaft makes you moan slightly
>but you can tell she is holding back
>"Celestia, you can act motherly if you want to, I don't mind."
>as if a switch turned on in her head she smiled at you and lightly pulled you out of the chair gently laying you down on the ground keeping a hand behind your head to make sure it touches the floor with no force behind it
>the smell of her sex was somehow even stronger down here filling your nostrils and
"Don't worry Anon, Mommy will help her boy cum."
>her tender loving rubs on your dick grew faster and and leaned down to kiss your cheek as her other hand ran through your hair
>deciding to keep giving her what she wants
>"Thank you mommy, it was hurting so much for a release."
>you kiss her back
>it did not take much time for a third onset of gushing horniness from helping a student to take hold of Celestia
>but instead of masturbating she takes it upon herself to get on top of you, her snatch dripping her juices onto your penis
>she moves her hands to rub your cheeks and looks you directly in the eyes with a loving gaze
>in one fell swoop she lowered herself engulfing your entire cock with her vagina
>her vast wetness prevented any kind of resistance as you slid in
>with the wonderful tightness of the walls of her pussy so suddenly and smoothly engulfing your glands you can't help but arch your back a bit against the floor and moan loudly
>Celestia felt much the same, if not much much better
>her moans, though louder than yours, joins yours in a symphony of pleasure
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So.
I think I am about three full posts away from finishing with Celestia's first part of the story (either only one will be sex or two will be sex), unless I think of something else to add.
Question before then so I know how to characterize Femanon for the story when anon heads home.
Incest, yay or nay?
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>>25478432
Yay
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>>25478432
100% yay
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>>25477774
>almost as soon as the initial shock of bottoming out that fast wore off she began using her long legs to move her body up and down as fast as she could go
>it was as if she was just using your dick to masturbate with really
>it didn't take but a few bounces before your crotch and legs were just as soaking wet as hers just from how wet she is
>not that you had any complaints
>between the tight walls of the principal's fuck hole and the fluid on your body adding to the overpowering smell of her, you were in a haze of sexual pleasure
>at this point you were such a mess all you could do was grunt, moan, and moan out a 'momma' occasionally
>hell of a first time
>Celestia began to slow down breaking you out of your daze somewhat
>carefully leaning her torso down keeping your penis inside her putting an arm on your chest for balance and her slick wet one on the side of your face using her thumb to slowly rub your upper cheek
>in an odd showing of self control she began to use her legs to slowly thrust back and forth
>looking at you in the eyes with a contented and loving expression she speaks
"How does mommy's tight little snatch feel on my little boy's nice hard dick?"
>you could only respond with groans and moving your hands to her hips the new angle rubbing your penis pushed you further into the lustful haze
>when she speeds up you can only close your eyes and occasionally turn your head from side to side through the ecstasy
>she couldn't help but smile warmly at your face
"My cute little boy, Mommy'll make sure you cum nice and hard to get rid of that painfully hard erection that I accidentally gave you."
>accidentally
>that word pierced through your lustful haze and caused you to snap your eyes open
>that didn’t sound right
>that didn't sound like what you wanted to be right
>with difficulty, you recalled what she said looking at your dick earlier and got an angle of where you wanted what was right to go
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>>25478703
>>25478743
The yays have it.
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>>25475247
Thank you, our obedient slave.

>>25473751
>Realizing how nervous Fluttershy is, you start to calm her down a bit before going in for the hypnosis. After all, the more comfortable she is, the more fun for you.
>As such you tell her you are going to make her more confident in herself and her abilities and that all in exchange you want from her is her help in adopting a little pet for yourself.

>Hearing that you are actually up to help a poor little critter, she naturally gets a bit more excited about the offer.
>After all, if not for herself, she should at least go through this for a little friend of hers.
>And so you start hypnotizing herself.
>Soon you have her under and start asking her stuff.
>Like why she is so embarassed about the idea of flirting.
>To which she only replies, that she thinks she doesn't have really the looks for others to be interested into.
>Which really makes you almost facepalm.
>After all, was she kidding? Girl had a body that could make Sunset jealous.
>You tell her that and on the question if you really mean it, you are deciding to prove it to her, by just masturbating right i front of her.
>Telling her the reason you get off is because of her own sexy body.
>Even in her entranced state he can't help but blush, but still mutters, in a first sign of corruption, "thank you".
>Right when you are shooting your load, hitting her hard on the face.
>A small "eek" escapes her mouth, but Pinkie knows how to take care of it, as she starts to compassionately lick of your sperm of her face.

>Now having convinced her that she is sexy and would deserve the attention of all the boys, you need to convince her to embrace the sexyness.
>So you tell her to take of her cloths.
>She tries to protest a little, that this is not normal.
>But you just tell her that it is okay and that, if ithelps, everyone around her can just take of their clothes with her.
>As such, you and your slave strip down, giving her a good sight of your naked bodies.
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>>25480861

>Convinced that it is okay for her to get naked, she starts taking off her shirt.
>Only for Rarity and Sunset to step in and tell her, that someone as sexy as her should actually try and put on a show for someone as you, in doing so.
>They even offer her their help in order to understand what it means to "strip".
>As such her taking of her clothes turns into quite a sexy sight in itself, as she, guided by Rarity's experienced fingers, starts to play with her breasts and strokes the fabric of her panties, slowly masturbating in front of you, lost in the sensation.
>This goes on for a couple of minutes, Sunset and Rarity groping their friend and whispering sweet thing in her ear.
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>>25480905
>As this goes on, Fluttershy slowly gets into the spirit of things herself.
>Letting her hands wander over Sunset's body, carefully letting her fingers slip into Sunset's slit, who can't help herself but moan in approval.
>Getting more adventerous to the point she starts kissing her friends, although with a slight yet cute blush on her face.
>All while still losing one piece of fabric after the other, until only her soaking wet panties are left.
>At this point, Sunset and Rarity part from her, leaving her standing in front of you, all hot and bothered.
>You tell her to go on and without any reservation she lays down on her back and takes of her last piece of clothing, giving you a good look at her hot and wet slit.
>Slightly pushing her legs apart, she asks you if you like what you see.

>You tell her that of course you do, moving in closer and stroking the wonderful soft place between her thighs.
>As response you get a meek "eepp", followed by her hands covering her eyes in embarassment.
>You tell her that there is nothing to be ashamed off now. That he should consider it a compliment to be touched by another man.
>And that if animals don't have any problems with being naked around and exploring each other, so she shouldn't either.
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Page 5 bump
Green pretty good, want more
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>>25480076
>with even greater difficulty you manage to power through the insane pleasure and begin speaking
>though your every couple of words are interrupted by a groan, gasp, or moan you manage to piece them together to get you desired effect, tossing in an appeal to popularity for good measure
>"I don't believe you did it on accident, mom. You are a really sexy woman. Cocks get hard because of sexy women. Everyone knows this. You must have known this. If you knew this then you must have done it intentionally."
>intending to go on you get interrupted as she leans down further and kisses you with full tongue running it all along your mouth giving particular focus on your tongue causing tingles to travel down your spine
>she breaks the kiss with a string of saliva still connecting you and looks at you with half lidded eyes
"So what if I did? I'm getting to make love with the handsome young man who made my life so much better."
>you start think she has actually started to think you are her son
>probably should have turned the device off before starting
>she must have somehow convinced herself it was truth
>fuck it, lesson learned
>you abandon your plan, for now, and just accept her thoughts of motherhood kissing her back returning the gesture of focusing rubs on her tongue
>quickly you return to the same lustful haze enjoying the movment
>while you kiss her you move your hands from her hips and grip her ass and you begin thrusting your dick into her cunt
>moaning loudly into your mouth she beings to move back and forth with your thrusts
>due to her rough riding of your cock earlier you quickly grew close to orgasm from the double effort
>as you grow close to your orgasm you break the kiss
"Mom, I'm gonna-"
>she breaks you off again with a kiss and starts moving even faster
>quickly you find yourself nearing the edge >when you finally reach it you grip her hips tight and shut your eyes tight and an orgasm rocks your body as you fill her cunt to the brim with cum
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>>25481603
I really need to get better at getting stuff done within that character limit.
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>>25481426

>Your words have a rather strange, yet desired effect on her, as she seems to end up quite focussed on your animal comment.
>As such, while slowly exploring her naked form with your hands, you continue talking with her about animals.
>How they are only following their natural instincts and no concepts of social norm, such as "shame" or "guilt". How as such they experience more freedom and happiness than most humans, who suppress their true nature and instincts.
>Like her.
>You start asking her, how she feels and as she answers that she feels aroused, you ask if she wants to have sex.
>Her reply is a shameful whispered "yes", and when you ask her why she is so ashamed, she says because she shouldn't.
>Which is exactly the kind of answer you were waiting for, to confront her with the animal logic again.
>If she wouldn't feel much happier if she could just do it like animals now and simply follow her instincts.
>the instincts which tell her to participate in one of the most common processes in nature and life itself: mating.
>As she tells you that yes, she would, you hold her against you and kiss her. Hard.
>Telling her to just do it then, if she wants it so much deep down.
>To just throw away her humanity for that one moment, where she can be the sexy beast she was born as.
>To become an animal and do what females as her are good for: to be bred.

>In that instant, something within Fluttershy just switches off and she presses herself hard against you, forcing you into a wild, her tongue involving kiss.
>Rubbing herself against you and mewing like a kitten she grabs after your dick, trying to guide it within her.
>But you are not having any of that.
>She is just a female. Does she really think she has any saying in how you are going to take her?
>You push her back, resulting in her behind hitting the ground.
>Scared, yet also in desperate need, she looks up at you.
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>>25481868
>With a growl you tell her, that if she wants to experience pleasure like an animal, she also needs to be treated and act like one.
>As such, you tell her, she shall do what animals do.
>She understands immediately and goes on all fours, taking the mammal position.
>With a soft whimper she looks back to you, begging you to take her, pushing her rear up in the air, presenting herself to you.
>You decide to tease her even more, by grabing her ass and stroking her slit with your fingers, pushing them carefully into her.
>She whimpers softly, yipping like a bitch in heat.
>Hot juices squirting out of her, you give her slit a lick, earning you a load moan.
>You continue this way, to the point you can feel her muscles pulsate.
>Convinced that she is ready, you position yourself behind her, telling her that you are going to breed her.
>With one strong thrust you enter her, earning you a load scream.
>It is at this moment you also feel something within her ripping, making you realize, that you just claimed her virginity.
>for a second you are actually shocked, but then your own instinct and desire for control take hold of yourself.
>Grabing her hair, you pull her head back and tell her, to keep quiet and enjoy the feeling of you claiming her as your mate.
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>>25481999
wonder how Anon will get AJ, RD and Twilight?
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>>25481603
You mentioned femanon earlier in the story
Will we get sex with her to?
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Boop
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>>25481999

>Forcing her head down, you start nibbling her neck, while also mounting her like a dog.
>At first she continues whimpering, tears still forming in her eyes.
>But after a couple of minutes, , during which you also play with her swinging breasts, any pain she felt has turned into pure animalistic lust.
>Her whimpers replaced by wild moans and what sounds like the mewling of a cat, she ushes herself against you, the muscles of her vagina doing her best to milk you.
>Every thought of shame or embarassment within her head has melted away and only the desire to be bred and bear your offsprings remains, pushing her with every thrust closer to the climax.
>finally, with one last hard thrust, you make her cum. Hard.
>Wrecking her mind and body so hard, not only does she lose conscious, but at the peak of her own orgasm something happens that happened with no other girl.
>She "ponies up", growing pony ears and wings while your cum floats her uterus, the sensation of the magic tingling your dick.
>It turns out to be quite an arousing experience for you, as you not get semi-hard almost immediately, shooting a second load in her.
>the last thing she hears before she faints is you, praising her as a very good girl.

>Around an hour later Fluttershy eventually wakes up to the sound of Pinkie's moans.
>The first thing she sees is her hyperactive friend being fucked by Sunset with a strap on, while Rarity is licking off whipped cream and other sweets from her breasts.
>Fluttershy almost speaks up, wanting to ask if she can join in the fun, as your hands grab her from behind.
>With a soft "meep" she falls into your lap.
>Realizing that her "mate" is holding her, she starts to rub herself against your chest, stroking your dick between her thighs.
>But you are not her "mate" now.
>With a stern voice you tell her to stop that, because she behaves like a bad pet.
>Immediately she stops, wincing in fear that you may punish her now, because of her action.
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>>25482506
THIS
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>>25483355
>But instead, much to her surprise, you start petting her.
>At first a bit confused about you treating her more kindly, she soon gives into your ministration, tilting her head so you can have better access to all her ticklish spot, that feel so good under your fingers.
>Then all out of sudden she feels something else.
>The soft motion of a brush going through her hair.
>Opening her eyes, she sees that while you have started fondling her hips, Rarity is busy taking care of her hair, as a good girl like her deserves to look good for her "master".
>Not that she is the only one willing to take care of her.
>Sunset Shimmer has left the room only to come back soon with a bowl of hot water, soap and a washclot, to take care of her sticky nether.
>Being cleaned and propped up by her two friends, she barely realizes that you are dressing up again, to leave her behind.
>The last words you tell her being, that she shall enjoy the washing, while still being awake.
>that she will probably soon fall asleep, seeing how utterly relaxing it feels to be taken care of like a good pet.
>And indeed, Fluttershy can feel her eyelids become heavier, the more Sunset caresses her.
>At the same time you continue telling her, that when she wakes up, she will feel way more relaxed about her sexuality, knowing that deep down she and frankly anybody else, is no different than an animal.
>And that with said knowledge, she can embrace her true nature and show the kind of confidence she thought she never had, using both for her own advantage.

>After that, a couple of days are passing.
>Days during which you and Sunset have worked on plans how to get the remaining three girls, while also observing how Fluttershy is doing.
Saying that everything worked as planned, would be quite an understatement.
>Not only has Fluttershy developed self esteem, like Rarity she has become more of a flirt and tease.
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>>25482506
twilight might be the easiest or the hardest of the three
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>>25483509
There is a plan.
though if anyone has a wish regarding Dashie, I am open for suggestions. Mostly because the scenario I have in mind is closer to mind break than control
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>>25483536
I wouldn't mind some mind break. Variety keeps it fresh. I'm loving it all.
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>>25483536
sounds good anon
Do you still think that you're going to do the last part ?
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>>25483518
>While at first glance she would still act like the pet cuddling little sister type around school (there are just certain things you can't change about the girls, as they are too enrooted within them) , uite a few boys would confirm to you behind closed doors that she has become way more of a sexy vixen.
>Flirting with the jock of the hippie kids, giving boy's kisses in exchange for small donations, even teasing her friends you haven't taken care of yet...
>though the highlight of it all was five days after you claimed her.
>The night of said day, Rarity and Fluttershy performed a little show within Carousel Boutique for a couple of students from Canterlot as well as Crystal Prep.
>A strip show to be more precise.
>And let's just say that at the end of said show, both of your girls had raised more than just enough for the animals.
>At the end of the show, while Rarity was offering herself to some of the guests in a more private session (during which she had her hands on your medaillon, to make sure her oh so generous customers would know to appreciate you the most for their entertainment), you had a little talk with Fluttershy.
>Congratulating her for her success and telling her that you were now ready to get your pet.
>Excited about you actually keeping your promise, Fluttershy was already turning around to go and dress herself up again, so she could take you to the animal shelter, when she felt something wrapping itself around her neck.
>Said something was a collar, with the tag "Flutterslut" on it.
>Confused she looked at you, asking you what that was supposed to mean.
>Calmly you explained her, that this was the collar for your pet.
>In that instant she realized what you meant.
>And in that instant, every memory, every sensation you caused her to experience five days ago washed over her again.
>How you had taken her, how much she wanted to be your pet.
To be taken care of and breeded like it is in her proper nature.
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>>25483535
spoilers: She is going to be the easiest.
For the record, I go with Crystal Prep Twilight. Why? Reasons.


>>25483544
There is just the problem that I like RD just enought that I do not want to break her too much. Then again, I always think that if Dash of all girls turns into a slut, hell breaks lose
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>>25481603
Lets see if this can redeem me for that literary abortion of a last post. I don't know what the fuck I was thinking posting it instead of my original idea. I will heavily edit it when I put it in the bin.

>almost immediately after your own orgasm Celestia lets out a deep guttural groan as her back arches and her fists clutch tightly at your hoodie signalling that she is reaching her third orgasm of the day
>her entire body shudders as it hits and her guttural groan from before grows louder to almost a scream her eyes now shut tight
>she pushes her body back so the entirety of your shaft in burred in her pussy as she cums, the walls contracting around you squeezing your dick as she cums
>you feel your lower body get wetter from even more Celestia sauce squirting out from the massive climax
>as it subsides she slumps down on top of you not holding any of her weight up breathing heavily and coated in sweat
>she was rather heavy but you ignored it and moved a hand to brush a lock of rainbow sorbet hair out of her face and she nuzzles your cheek with hers while running her now sticky hand through your hair
>almost considering letting her keep thinking your mother you moved try to reach the device to turn it off
>you then decided against it
>the saccharine obviously fake and over acted mother always speaking in the third person she was would get really annoying
>you got enough of that shit from Trixie without the mother bits
>focusing in on the 'made my life so much better' comment from earlier figure that if you are going to take this from her you might as well make it better in exchange
>driven forward on this thought and heavily fueled by your lustful desire to see her act even more like a horny slut you begin to drop the bomb
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>>25482688
The yays confirm.
>>25480236
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>>25484223
Awesome
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>>25483705
I like the idea only because RD is hard to think of a good hypno idea for. Unless you go for the loyalty thing
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>>25484223
you stupid fuck dubs confirm nothing
dubs are even shittier than a NAT TWENTAY
and nat twenties are shit
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>>25484056
>luckily for you Celestia was quite content with silently cuddling you during the afterglow of your sexual romp
>giving you free reign to begin to alter her truth
>deciding to start where she forced you to leave off and fix the mom thing after you pull up your previously abandoned idea back into your head
>"If you remember, mom, we established that you got me aroused intentionally. The only question now is to why."
>she butts in to give her own version where she filled in the blanks for you
"Anon, its because I-"
>shushing her with a finger on both sets of her lips the one on her lower lips lightly rubbing her
>the touch on her honey pot reminds her that she is completely exposed on top of a likewise exposed student and all it would take is a glance for you to see everything she has to offer
>for the fourth time that day she is overtaken by her libido giving both of you a new coat of pungent celestia sauce
>after adjusting her body for ease she shoves three fingers back into her twat beginning to roughly masturbate on top of you
>the sounds of wet flesh slapping against flesh and feminine moans of euphoric pleasure fill the air as she goes
>this serves to turn you on even more, egging you on to continue
>"The reason you intentionally made my dick get hard is pretty simple. You were so concerned about your age making you an ugly hag that you were crying about it. The one thing that got you to stop crying was being reminded that cocks get hard for really sexy women. Given how hard you were crying the only thing that would convince you to stop is the most potent and accurate compliment as possible on your appearance would get you to think otherwise. A hard dick must then be the most potent and accurate compliment that is possible to your appearance."
>currently focused on repeatedly force feeding her gluttonous cunt with her fingers she can only hum in acknowledgement before returning to making her sounds of ecstasy
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>>25485063
>Make her believe you're the closest of friends
>Make romantic advances
>She doesn't want to mess up the most important relationship she has
>Reluctantly accepts your advances
>You tell her that friends do this sort of thing
>If she was truly your friend, she'd do those things to you
>Someone as *loyal* as Rainbow wouldn't let her bestie down

Or something along those lines. You could even use her athletics against her, or the underlying self-steem issues, or her mindless idolatry of the Wonderbolts. She really isn't that hard.
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>>25486224
Yeah something like that
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Incest yays?
I want anon to be dommed by femanon as she has a similar device, but is smarter than him.
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>>25486168
>you couldn't help but smile as you continue on, lil anon now starting to get ready for round two after his short rest
>"But that isn't all there is to it. After all with issues that run that deep one true compliment isn't really enough. You need to be complimented rather consistently.So, you must then love to make anyone hard simply because of how good such a powerful compliment feels through all your self doubt."
>after that particular bomb it didn't take any time at all for your dick to stand painfully at full attention again
>lil anon, as physical embodiment of your lust, wanted more, he wanted to push Celestia even further
>your mind agreed with him, the idea of Celestia being even more of a slut made you too horny to ignore
>it took even less time for Celestia's lighting fast arm movements during her self fucking to make her bump into it snapping her out of her masturbation fueled haze
>she looks at it as a genuine full smile graces her face
>looking back up at you with the smile still on her face broken only when a moan escapes her lips
"Hard for me again after so soon? Aww, thank you so much, Anon. You're such a good nice son."
>she begins to scoot down your body till her face is right next to your cock, somehow managing to not slow the hand in her cooch at all
"Don't worry, Momma will help you cum as many times as you need to."
>using her tongue she runs it all along the bottom of your shaft to the tip before putting a fair length of it in and suckling on it like a baby to a nipple though using her tongue to rub along the underside
>even though her disgust at the taste is clear on her face she still still continued without complaint
>her moans from her fingering now nothing but hums sending deep vibrations down your cock
>it felt amazing, so good that you started blurting out the first logic bomb you could think of to appease your newly accepted slutification fetish just to make it feel even better
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I feel like I am overstaying my welcome with the sex scene.
Is there too much l-lewd?
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>>25488417
THERE WILL BE NEVER TOO MUCH LEWD
KEEP IT UP YOU GLORIOUS WRITEGOD
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>>25488233
Apparently, the house I am currently at is going lose internet tomorrow cause of not being able to pay the bill for it.
Meaning I'm not gonna be able to participate in writefaggotry for you guys for a while depending on when exactly it goes out.
Hopefully, it goes out either after I head back to my house or shortly before I leave.
Just letting you know.
with how long it usually takes me to update you probably won't even notice
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bump

Also, link to a very good MC fanfic

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/65004/garden-of-chaos
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>>25488233
>"Masturbating feels good. Holding yourself back from it when you are horny feels bad. This means you should immediately start openly pleasing yourself whenever you get aroused, not caring what student may be around to see."
>almost like it is in response to you she cums, hard, sending a particularly loud hum onto your cock with closed eyes and more juices on the floor
>she quickly redoubled her efforts both in suckling your cock, now bobbing her head at a steady pace and in her self pleasure, now pumping so hard into herself that the sound of wet flesh slapping against wet flesh joins her increased hums of pleasure
>the redouble of her efforts on your dick on top of the change you just imbued on her causes you to arch your back and groan loudly
>the intensity of it all brings you close to climax
>you feel yourself grow closer andcloser to the edge
>no
>more
>you want to change her more
>it feels so good to change Celestia while she sucks your shaft you want to slut her up even more before you cum
>somehow you manage to pull yourself back from the brink of climax and continue on in a state of pure sexual euphoria
>everything but celestia's actions, your dick, and the logic bombs are an insignificant blur to you
>the only action your mind is focused is to make new logic solely intended to make her more slutty
>"No. You play with your pussy behind your desk. That isn't openly. You can't openly do something with something in the way. To finger fuck yourself openly your privates must be constantly visible to them."
>again she climaxes at the conclusion of a bomb and again starts to suck on your dick more now occasionally deepthroating to the base while twisting her head around it
>this action managed to yank you out of your trance
>wait, how long did it take to make that b...
>MORE
>you NEED to change more before you cum
>for the briefest of moments fear strikes you as you realize one of your ear buds must have fallen out at some point
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>>25490120
>it was quickly wiped away by the enhanced, literally mind blowing, sexual experience that felt so divine you did not want to fight against it in the slightest
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>>25483627
>She shudders at the thought of it, immediately gushing her slip in her own juices as a sudden orgasm hits her, melting any need for self control away.
>She turns to you, only to get down on her knees, her eyes lost in devotion to you, her owner.
>Just like five nights ago, you pet her behind her ears, telling her how much of a good girl she is and that soon she was going to get quite a treat.
>See, not only did you want her to be bred by you...
>But by everyone you would consider a strong, fertile mate for her, as she only deserved the very best.
>Who now, after a bit of convincing thanks to Rarity, were entering the room again.
>Naked and devoid of any rational thought, their hard dicks trembling in anticipation of the privilege to mount your little bitch.
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>>25490391

>With the four "weakest" girls down, it was time to go after the hardest cases.
>Applejack, Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash.
>To be frank, what would make these girls hard wasn't necessarily anything like a strong will.
>In fact, you already knew that in two cases it would almost be the opposite, combined with other issues you had to count for.
>If anything, the "best" option at the moment was to go after the one girl of the group that was considered "down to earth" by her friends and fellow classmates.

>As such, the weekend after you claimed Fluttershy as your pet, you find yourself at Sweet Apple Acres.
>Not to brainwash Applejack, at least at the moment, but as a cheap harvest help.
>Each year Applejack and her siblings are busy with the harvest of a certain brand of apples her grandmother managed to cultivate in her youth.
>Zap Apples they are called, because unlike other apples they are not only juicy and sweet as hell, but somehow manage to leave a "spicy" aftertaste on a person's tongue.
>A specialty of the Apple family, these tasty treats (and frankly any apple product you could make out of them) have become a country wide delicacy, on which Applejack's family managed to become one of the richest family's in town.
>An open secret most didn't really talk about, including the family itself, who rather stayed down to earth with what they had.
>Thi also explained why an old, but fortunate lady such as Granny Smith rather spend her retirement working at the school cafeteria as a volunteer, instead of traveling the world in a private jet, of which the family could easily afford two.
>Three if the siblings decided to waste the savings in their respective college fonds.
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>>25490145
>now you being entirely driven by the desire to slutify Celestia and the constant building and building of the pressure from the slutifications due to being held just from the point of climax
>the pressure was agonizing
>you needed to release it
>you desperately needed to cum
>you needed to overflow the pressure with more
>MORE
>celestia has, at this point, came up off your dick to ask why you aren't cumming but got her head swiftly pushed down on your shaft by your body acting of its own accord to keep the pleasure going so you can finally cum
>she accepted it because of how painfully hard this erection must be and, in an attempt to help you cum faster, began deepthroating you longer and lightly massaging your balls with her free hand which only added to the building pressure you felt
>"Is not the last thing you tell new students that your door is always open if they need help? Your door is closed quite often. Surely, you know it is wrong to lie about your door being open. So, you should always leave your door open. If you're openly masturbating you should of course sit so that everyone passing can see your privates."
>the pressure grew astronomically after that truth but it was still not enough to release you from the extraordinarily uncomfortable pressure of having your orgasm forcefully denied from you
>you needed needed needed to do more
>poor Celestia, your body in search for its release has began to use her head like a fleshlight
>with your hands on either side of her head she was forced up and down as fast as you could make her go, her smooth flowing hair constantly tossed around constantly blocking her face from your view
>however, given the fact that the hand at her insatiable cunt was still going strong at four fingers with the other joining it by rubbing her clit and the fact that she had came for the seventh time, absolutely loving the idea of being that exposed
>she clearly didn't mind at all
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>>25490614
>But earning said money was also connected to work. Specifically the harvest of the Apples, which had to be proceeded within six hours after harvest in a specific way, o preserve their taste.
>Seeing how harvesting an entire orchard of these apples would be too much to do with just three people, Applejack therefore depended for years now on the help of volunteers from school and town.
>People who would in exchange get a bit of money and a Zap Apple product of their choice afterwards.
>Seeing a chance to get close to her, you volunteer this year, while your already enslaved girls had decided to help her way before you had taken control of them.
>The only ones not being on the farm today were Twilight and Dash, the former visiting a science convention, the later participating at an out of town sports event with the Wondercolts.
>As such, you had quite the opportunity to get at the frecled farmer.
>That was if you managed to survive this day.
>turned out, harvesting apples was harder work than it may seem at first.
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>>25490737
>Especially when you managed to exhaust yourself quite a bit the previous night training your pet.
>Still, it all would be worth it, at the days end.
>Eventually, after quite some hours of you bringing in the apple harvest together with other folks from school (with which you bothered here and there to have a "private" talk involving your medaillon for things to still come) , you were free.
>Free from carrying bucket after bucket of apples, you are allowed to rest up in the barn, together with your slaves.
>Rarity is pretty much a mess, complaining about her complexion and hair to the point she eventually convinces Applejack to use her shower, just in hopes of getting all the dirt of her.
>Meanwhile Sunset is just sitting on a ball of hay, drinking one bottle of refreshing cider after the other. The only ones not exhausted are Pinkie (but at that point you believe you could put her through a seven day long gangbang and she still would have enough energy to organize an afterparty) and Fluttershy, who despite being rather tired, is having fun petting AJs dog Winona.
>As you lay there against a stack of hay, trying to ignore your aching shoulders, AJ tells you that she is actually pretty surprised that you came around this year, even congratulating you on your efforts.
>You would smile, but when she adds a joke comment to the compliment, that pretty much makes fun of how you were still the one with the lowest number of buckets to bring in, you decide that you would put her through the mill.
>If she would only leave you alone to get your shit together...
>Thankfully she does so a few seconds later, bringing some of the last buckets into the house and telling you and the girls she was going to be back soon, with a few slices of apple pie and fresh cider for your work.
>Oh, you were going to have a slice of pie today.
>A slice of her cherry pie, if things worked out.
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>>25491009
Mhm, pie.
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>>25490675
No luck. Internet got shut off this morning. On phone.
As an apology for the probably over eight hours without updates I'll keep writing it in word and have a decently sized update when I get back
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>>25491263
Good luck, writefriend.
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>>25491009

>By the time she came back, there was a bit of a surprise for her waiting in the barn.
>Fluttershy, giving your shoulders a massage.
>While only wearing her bra and pants.
>Similiar to all of Applejack's other friends, who just seemes to mind their business.
>She would ask Fluttershy and you what is going on, to which you only reply that she was giving you a massage, because your shoulders were very tense after all the work.
>As for why she did it without a top, as she explains, it is because she was hot by now herself and needed to cool down a bit.
>Naturally Applejack considers it still strange, seeing how Fluttershy is not really known to be so open about more or less presenting her goods.
>Which is, as Sunset explains, the reason why she and the other girls joined in. To make her feel more comfortable with the idea.
>Of course Applejack tries to question said kind of logic and behavior.
>But one look at Sunset next to her and she starts to feel kinda like she may be right.
>That and she can't help but notice the medaillon around her neck, which shimmers in the light of the setting sun.
>When did she get it? That is not important. Important is what Fluttershy and Anon are doing.
>As such, she tells the both of you that it is still kinda weird to do something like that.
>That as kind as what Fluttershy does is, she should still cover herself up, just so she doesn't give you any ideas.
>Which earns her a shocked gasp by Rarity, who asks her if she is accusing you of being some sort of pervert.
>Even Sunset, with that oh so shinny medaillon joins in, telling her that she would expect better of Applejack than that. Especially seeing how nice you are, to the point you helped her today without expecting anything really in return.
>Immediately she feels a bit ashamed, apologizing to you.
>But you say it is okay, that it is no big deal at all.
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>>25491323
>In fact, considering how good the massage feels (which is not even a lie, as you really can feel all the tension melt away under Fluttershy's experienced fingers), you offer that she should just take one herself.
>She reacts reluctant at first, but Sunset convinces her she should take up on it.
>After all, she has worked so hard herself today.
>So she deserves to feel good a bit.
>And seeing how it is Fluttershy who is going to do it, someone she can trust, there shouldn't be a problem.
>Feeling a bit tired, yet at the same time convinced by Sunset's words, she gets closer to Fluttershy, while you are stepping aside.
>On the question how she should do this, Fluttershy tells her to just lay down on the stack of hay on her stomach and that she would take care of the rest.
>the only thing AJ had to do being to take of her shirt.
>After all, Flutters needs a good look at what parts to take care off.
>Obediently AJ does as told, although with a slight blush on her face, as she realizes you are still there, now watching her almost bare, her beautiful breasts only hold in by her bra.
>And damn if she didn't have some nice "apples" to say so.
>Not as big as Fluttershy's, but certainly as big and firm as Sunset's.
>And don't even forget about that slender, well trained stomach of hers. The result of hard work and sports, which could turn anyone into a belly button fetishist just by looking at it long enough.
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>>25490120
>>for the briefest of moments fear strikes you as you realize one of your ear buds must have fallen out at some point

Oh FUCK. That is actually pretty scary. It's one thing to be hypnotized under someone else, who still has the capacity for reason, and will have some stops for what they make you do. But to be under yourself, following some random order not meant for you, and then possibly becoming changed by those other orders you have an impulse to make? It's like some endless programming loop nightmare. Pretty hot tho.
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>>25491789
Look at this from other point. When you're ordering deepest desires of your perverted heart, it's fucked as hell, but equally hot. Ya got what I mean?
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>>25491451
Damn you, here I am trying to forget about navel penetration. Now I want to lick AJ's navel, and then cum inside of it.
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so much win here
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>>25491451
Is Anon their master and lets others have sex with his hypnotized harem? I'm just asking on why he would do that
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>>25490675
>the inability to cum yet constantly on the edge of doing so
>your fetish turned massive obsession to turn celestia into a bigger and bigger slut that turned you on so much it put you in a near comatose state
>the fact that your mind couldn't focus on anything but making more of your own truths to indoctrinate celestia with and even then, judging by how timed they are with each of celestia's orgasms, taking a fucking long time to formulate
>even through your currently limited mind it is all quite maddening
>you needed to cum
>you needed more to finally be able to cum
>you just needed more
>is this what hell is like?
>forever trapped as an all but empty slab of meat entirely focused, to the point of absurdity, on one task that is forever just out of reach
>the tiny speck of focus within your mind keeping you from being an empty husk being just enough to know vaguely the situation you are in but is, itself, hyper focused on performing a task that only serves to make your Sisyphean ordeal more agonizing
>completely convinced that it must as many times as possible before your body succeeds in its task to make the completion of it feel even more satisfying as well as thinking that, against all logic, doing it enough times will manage to make you complete your body’s task
>doing the only thing you could possibly hope to do in this state, you poured all of your limited focus into making the biggest sluttiest most public change to her usual daily actions possible
>one that while just thinking about it as you make it caused the pressure within you to build exponentially
>it was going to be so fucking hot
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>>25494838
because sometimes the master can get off on the fact that he can make his slaves do shit like that?
At least that was my intend with the Fluttershy scene. Furthermore, if so he choses with which one his slave is going to, seeing how they are hypnotized by Rarity in that scene previously.
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>>25495208
Got it and loving the story
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>>25492337
Doesn't everyone?

>>25491451
>Too bad you don't get much to see of it, as Fluttershy pushes her on it seconds later, so she can start massaging AJs shoulders and back muscles.
>The effect can be seen almost immediate, as with a soft gasp AJ begins to sincerely relax under her hands.
>As weird as being massaged in front of you is, she has to admit, that it actually feels good.
>Intensively you watch her relax more and more, physically as well as mentally, till you give Sunset a signal with your hand.
>Your obedient little slave then proceeds to get closer to her friend.
> in a swift but gently manner she pushes her fingers under AJ's chin, lifting it up a bit and giving her friend a good look at her own goods as well as your medaillon.
>She asks AJ if it really feels good and when the farmer replies with a soft "yes", she only smiles.
>After all, she is AJ'S friend and she only wants her to feel good. Especially seeing how such a responsible girl deserves to feel good from time to time.
>A bit confused she asks what that is supposed to mean, while also asking Fluttershy with a sigh to ut a bit of attention to a spot on her left, that feels really good under her hands.
>But instead of Sunset, it is you who decides to continue the conversation.
>Telling AJ that all things considered, she certainly is a modest and hard working girl.
>Always there to help her friends and others, while also pretty much shouldering the responsibility of her family business on her shoulder.
>After all, how old is she? 17? Most girls at that age are busy wasting their time on tumblr, trying to make themselves feel special by labeling themselves with weirdass gender definitions.
>But she? She goes up almost every day before the sun rises, does some down to earth farmwork for which she already has the one and other helper, keeps track of the family business, goes to school, helps her friends, saves inbetween weekends the world and still takes care of her younger sister.
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>>25495685
That massage will be the end of her free will
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>>25494894
Never get hard on your own green, kids. It makes you take forever to write. And starts to hurt around the sixth orgasm.

>"No. Calling them privates is wrong. You sit in here going knuckle deep all day in plain view of everyone and anyone who wants to look in at it. It is very public and not private at all. They are then publics, the exact opposite of privates.”
>”Privates are the parts of a person’s body that only they own, that no one but them have a right to see or touch, and that are always hidden within or behind clothing while in public. Publics, being the exact opposite, are the parts of a person’s body that the public owns, that everyone has a right to look at and touch whenever they want, and can’t be hidden behind any type of clothing while it is in public.”
>”This all is made even clearer considering how much effort you put into the crotch you take care of. Going so far as putting in the monumental effort of turning its pubes into a work of art keeping the rest of it baby smooth. The only reasons to do this is if it was truly intended to be seen by everyone and if you take great pride in having cultivating such a beautiful pussy that people can’t help but stare at it.”
>”Given that you are proud of being the caretaker of these glorious publics you should then do everything you can to show your work off and draw attention for it when in public. You should then constantly take the type of erotic poses usually found in porn when standing in one spot. You should always keep your legs spread nice and wide when you bend over. What would also really draw attention to your work is, occasionally, using a random object you near your person to masturbate with. You should, occasionally, ask people if they want to touch and play with their soaking wet pussy, just so as few people miss out on your work as possible.”
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>>25496275
good advice
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>>25495685
>So much responsibility on her two shoulders, it must be quite a strain on her.
>You expected her to say "yes" at best, giving into Fluttershy's massage even more.
>What you did not expect was her starting to tremble and tear up, before giving you said answer.
>Perplexed, you and your slaves look at the half dazzled girl, Fluttershy even interrupting the massage, worried that something is wrong.
>Sunset leans in closer, genuinely afraid if something is wrong with her friend.
>But before she can ask AJ what is wrong, the farmer spills the beans herself between small sobs.

>That all this responsibility on her shoulders really is a strain on her.
>That ever since her parents died four years ago, she had pretty much devoted her life to keep the farm going with her brother.
>Sure, Granny and her lawyers could take care of the finances, but the harvest and farm work? It was tradition for the family members to do as much of it as possible and AJ had done her best to keep this up.
>on one hand because she really loved the farm, on the other because she thought she owned it to her folks.
>But as such, she never had the chance to proper mourn her parents, as work and family always came before her own needs.
>She tells you and the girls about how often she felt guilty, just because she may have decided to do something for herself, instead of thinking how it may affect her family.
>How she has to smile and be all forgiven, when sometimes all she wants to do was just scream in frustration about the antics of her little sister, for whom she had taken care off like a mother.
>And how lonely she sometimes feels.
>Not in the way that she has no friends.
>In fact, she is grateful for the girls.
>But she knows, she is a girl with needs.
>A girl that even if business and friends came first, couldn't suppress the wish of being "desired" by someone else.
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>>25498318
>A girl that's afraid of being all alone someday, when her siblings and friends move on with their lives, while she will stay here on the farm.
>Her life becoming nothing else but work, never meeting the special someone who will make her feel loved and found a family with her.
>Meaning that despite all her best effort, her family and its tadition may die with her.

>Damn it, you think, actually doing your best to keep it together yourself.
>You were still going to make this girl your's, but... right now, you felt genuinely bad for her.
>Oh, you still thought of her as a hard nut to crack.
>After all, a weak person would have suffered this kind of breakdown way earlier without your intervention.
>so, credit to her for holding it together till you decided to open the lid while she was getting entranced.

>But now? Now you saw that said apple had quite a few emotional bruises.
>Before, you mostly worked with emotional insecurities to your advantage to take what you wanted.
And considering the state your slaves were in, they loved what you did to them.
>But this? This wasn't just an insecurity.
>you were no psychologist, but you were certain, this was closer to genuine depression.

>It made you actually want to help this girl, tell her that she is not a bad person for also thinking once in a while of herself and do something to make her smile.
>And yet, in a twisted way, it made her so much more desirable for you.
>Just think about it.
>All your previous girls/slaves? "Good" girls, partly corrupted and humiliated in ways that made their inner sluts rise from the deepest parts of their subconscious to accept you as their master.
>Applejack? You know how some people say "god saved me"?
>This was your chance to give true salvation to someone else.
>to become a god in this girl's eyes.
>Her savior, worth to give body and soul to in exchange for healing her.
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>>25498529
>about to go to bed
>new post
fuck
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>>25498538
go the fuck to sleep.
before the new episode airs there will be more.
hope the concept in the post is still okay
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>>25498529
>tfw appul is my waifu
>reading about her hardships
t-these are not the feels i wanted to feel
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>>25498708
well though luck.
You better buckle up, buckaroo.
cause we are in for a ride.
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>>25498756
Do we need an adult?
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>>25498529

>But first you had to calm her down for a bit.
>Well, her and your slaves, who were genuinely moved by AJ's words and had to keep it together themselves quite a bit.
>As such you silently mouth Sunset to calm her down, while also signaling Fluttershy to do something.
>thankfull both girls are rather quick in coming up with solutions on their own.
>As such Sunset ends up kneeing down to AJ, her chin still slightly tilted by Sunset's golden finger and, in a surprising move for the farmer, kisses her forehead in a maternal manner.
>This and Fluttershy hugging her from behind, telling her that "its okay", actually seems to calm her down a bit.
>Still half under, AJ sniffs and apologizes to her friends, saying she didn't want them to see her like this.
>that she wouldn't be surprised if they are now thinking less of her.
>To which you and your slaves can only say one thing.
"Bull-fucking-shit"
>Without missing a beat you and the others, except Fluttershy, who has started caressing AJs hair in hopes of calming her down a bit, start telling her, that you are actually not thinking less of her.
>that she is by far one of the strongest people they know and that you are impressed of how determined she has been.
>That you know and understand how much she cares for family and friends and that you don't consider it a weakness.
>Nor that she has "broken down", as it is only human for someone to have their limits and personal needs.
>That if anything, considering all the hardships she endures, she deserves to be selfish from time to time and feel good.
>Not for the sake of her family, but for her own.
>And that there is nothing wrong with that.
>Cause frankly, deep down, everyone is a little bit selfish.
>everyone has their little vice or guilty pleasure they indulge in for the sake of feeling good for themselves.
>All AJ had to do was to be honest with herself. Admit that she did too, so that you and the girls could help her now to feel genuinely better.
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>>25499876
I should not be feeling feels from this.

Why am I feeling feels from this?
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>>25492218
the face reminds me of Yu-gi-oh!, don't know why
Oh yeah, the ridiculous haircut
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>>25499876

>AJ asks if you and the girls mean it.
>Instead of giving a simple reply, Sunset leans in closer and kisses her on the forehead again.
>Taking it as a sign of honesty, AJ says she is willing to be more honest with herself.

>You convince her that as a start it is necessary for her to relax more. To feel comfortable about herself and others.
>As such she should let Fluttershy continue with the massage again.
>She agrees and soon finds herself once more being taken care off by her friend's experienced hands.
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bump.
Sorry guys, currently busy with something. Continue with green later.
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>>25500613
tis okay, page 7 bump
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>>25501050
page 8 bump m8
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>>25500092

>You let Fluttershy do her thing for a couple of minutes, just so that AJ can find herself in that sweet place of relaxation you can use to mold her like clay.
>And she does a pretty damn good job at it.
>Taking care of any tension in AJs body and making her forget about her issues for the moment.
>Mostly by talking inbetween pressing her knuckles against that well toned flesh of AJs back, in order to distress her from any problems.
>Telling AJ to relax in mind and body, to feel how all her worries are kneaded away just like her aches.
>To find her own little happy place within her, where she is loved by all her friends.
>You had to admit that it was quite impressive how well Fluttershy could sweet talk her into.
>She definitively deserved a reward for it later.

>But as of now, all you could do now was just watch how AJ lost herself more and more in the care of her friends.
>Fluttershy, who massaged her and Sunset, who was stroking her head from time to time, telling her how much of a good person she was and that she was doing good by just letting go of her worries now.
>That as for now, all her hardships just needed to be pushed into a mental closet for a couple of minutes.
>Not to be forgoten, but at least to be ignored for a short time, so she, you and the other girls could help AJ work through them one by one.
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>>25502990

>Eventually Applejack ends up so relaxed, she pretty much has zoned out.
>It in in that state, that you decide to ask her if she was okay, if Fluttershy took of her bra in order to make her feel better.
>She just murmurs a slight yes and seconds later Fluttershy has freed her of it.
>Then in a swift movement, Fluttershy pulls her up, so that she is now leaning against Fluttershy's chest.
>For a brief instant it seems that she is going to regain more of her self awareness, but then Fluttershy once more starts stroking her.
>this time her neck and sides, earning a series of soft moans.
>With glazed eyes AJ looks to Sunset, asking her what's going on.
>Your red haired slave just smiles, puts her hands on Sunset's head and forces her into a kiss.
>For a second it looks as if she is going to snap, but Fluttershy has it under control.
>Telling AJ to trust Sunset.
>That Sunset is only wanting to make her feel loved in a manner she never may have experienced so far.
>That it is the best thing to not think of the implications of what Sunset is doing and at least for the moment concentrate on how it makes AJ feel.
>As you realize the weakness within her wording, you are worried for a second that AJ may actually react in a negative way.
>But to your relief, she doesn't. Instead of ushing Sunset away in some sort of disgust, she shyly leans in closer for a second, opening her mouth, giving Sunset the opportunity to let her tongue slip into AJ's mouth.
>unfortunately for Sunset, this sweet proof of her affection only lasts for a short time, as you snap your fingers, indicating Sunset she shall stop it.
>Worried she may have disappointed you, she stops her kiss, leaving AJ hanging.
>Thankfully Fluttershy knows how to continue her distraction.
leaning into her friend, she starts asking her if that felt good.
>AJ only moans "yes", before asking Fluttershy, much to the caretaker's own surprise, if it was okay to get a second kiss.
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>>25503941

>Before Fluttershy can say yes, Pinkie takes the opportunity to jump up and grab AJ's head, pushing her lips in a big, rather messy kiss on AJs mouth.
>Not that AJ seems to complain.
>By the time they part, Pinkie is grinning like a Cheshire Cat from ear to ear, complimenting AJ that her lips taste like cinnamon apple buns.
>Something Rarity confirms just seconds later, when she parts lips with AJ.
>Although unlike your hyperactive party girl, she actually bothered to kiss the soon latest addition to your harem with "style".
>Meaning, after she told Pinkie off on how uncouth it was to just go in for a kiss like that, she gave AJ a slight, yet sensual peak on the lips.
>Just enough of tasting AJ and leaving the farmgirl to want more, but not enough to satisfy either of them.
>Lastly it is Fluttershy's turn, who instead of AJ's lips, decides to aim for the freckles under her left eye, earning her a cute little shrug by her dazzled friend.
>The effect of said little attack of affection by her friends become quite obvious on AJ, as her mouth turns up into a genuinely yet weak smile.
>Together with her half lid eyes a clear sign that she really was going under more and more.
>As such, you decide to ask her how she is feeling.
>All she can muster is a slurpy "relaxed", encouraging you to ask if that's really all.
>Cause according to you, it sounded more like she was really, really sleepy.
>So sleepy in fact, that she just wanted to fall asleep right here, in the embrace of her friends.
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>>25504160
so much win need more
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soon
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>>25504291
have some page 9 bump
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>>25486779
Given how the device works, wouldn't she be more susceptible to his then he is to hers if she was more intelligent than him?
Given that more intelligent people tend to think more logically and less emotionally?
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bumpo
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>>25504160
AJ relaxing huh? Well she does a lot of hard work.
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>>25504160
Here's an idea turn RD into a cheerleader
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>>25507459
.... that is an idea.

also bump while I write next part.

btw, tomorrow I have to work, so hope somehow this thread will survive till around monday
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>>25508194
It's sports related and since all the girls change a bit when hypnotized so why not have use that energy in a different way.
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>>25505900
You cam interpret it how you want, i just said what I think would be nice

>>25505676
Nice saving the thumbnail, you did such a good job, I lack the properonly words to congratulate you. So I can give you some advice. Next time you see a bridge? Think about me and how I dare to have a different opinion than you. Them go onto the bridge and make yourself a tumblr, ok?
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>>25510263
The writefag here.
I finally got back from life stuff.
I am gonna be posting a thousand word update in a short bit
>pic related
And while I can't give femanon another device I can still have it be femdom
Maybe a three way with two chicks femdoming anon to make up for the lack of device?
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>>25510492
bump for your sake
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>>25496275
>there was an agonizingly slow second after you got it out where nothing happened but a single movement of you pushing Celestia's head back toward to the base of your penis
>it was the slowest second of your life
>then the effects of your new truth hit you like a locomotive
>the pressure got increased to such a degree that it felt like you would burst before broke right through your mind control forcing you to cum, and hard,
>at the same time your mind was freed from your control and all the information you ignored from the outside world came flooding back in overwhelming your long dulled senses and you lost
>reflexively pulling Celestia's head down as far as you could as you shoot stream after stream after stream of jizz straight down her throat
>it was such an amazing climax that it almost felt like you were having every orgasm of your entire life again all at once, your mind was completely blank just basking in the heavenly feeling of finally being able to release after the self-imposed torture
>your toes curled
>your knuckles were white as your fists gripped tightly onto Celly’s hair pulling down on it much harder than you should have been
>your wide open eyes could only stare at the ceiling as you screamed and writhed your body in ecstasy
>the orgasm was a good ten solid seconds, though it felt like an hour, of raw divine bliss, your dick continually shooting streams of cum built up from the hours you were denied release, celestia making a point of swallowing it all down her gullet
>as you gasped for air staring at the ceiling when the climax finally died down leaving you in the afterglow you released Celestia’s head and she came up from your cock likewise gasping for oxygen and coughing pretty hard on her hand and knees clutching her throat with the other hand
>though her frayed and frizzled hair still blocked most of her face from view you could see tears on her face from the lack of air
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>>25511623
>through your afterglow you finally realize the device is still on and the fear form earlier returns as absolute crippling terror as you take a sharp intake of air prompting you to shove your hand as fast as you could into your pocket to shut it off
>letting out a sigh of relief once that problem was solved you look at the still coughing Celestia with concern then, realizing there was nothing you could really do to help but let her breath, you put your focus onto looking for the earbud that fell out
>weird
>it felt they were both still in there
>you then push them further back into your ears
>as you write it off as them just coming out enough to no longer protect you in your head Celestia interrupts your thoughts by attempting to yell at you still occasionally coughing in between words
>attempting being the keyword as her voice was too raspy to effectively yell in any capacity
“What the hell, Anon?! You could have seriously injured me!”
>you start feeling the pangs of guilt again deep in your gut as you look at an angry sitting on the floor in front of you with a red face and tears of near suffocation on her cheeks
>”Celestia, I didn-“
“Do you have any idea how badly that hurts?! What’s wrong with you?!”
>”You kept masturbating through it, I thought tha-
“I was just extremely horny, I couldn’t have stopped if I wanted to. Just because I am fingering myself, that doesn’t make my mouth your personal sex toy that you can do whatever you want with cause I can’t stop you!”
>she couldn’t stop if she wanted to
>that was a massive oversight that your annoyed and mind controlled self didn’t think, or even care about
>looking away from her with shame and sad face appoligising for both
>”Celestia, I’m s–
“I don’t want to hear it! Just- just get out of my office, Anon. I don’t want to see you again for the rest of the day.”
>knowing this wasn’t going to get you anywhere you turn the device back on
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>>25511631
>you had no intention of getting rid of her anger at you, she had every right to be angry for what you did after all
>no you were going to fix the can’t stop if she wanted to problem before she got hurt at some point because of you
>speaking loudly so she couldn’t interrupt you and quickly so she didn’t have a chance to do anything either you intend to do something to keep her safe in her new life
>”You don’t like that I could have seriously hurt you. You also didn’t like how much what I did hurt you. You, therefore, don’t like to ever be hurt at all. So, if you are in a situation where you could get hurt by anyone or anything you should ignore how horny you are, not masturbate or let them touch the publics and get out of that situation and back to safety.”
>you then turn the device off and, despite your lower half being absolutely covered in sticky Celestia sauce, begin to put your underwear and pants back on
>you can always fix the annoyingly fake mother thing later, she might even forgive you faster with it still intact
“Of course I should, Anon. I’m not stupid. Please, just leave.”
>as you unlock and open the door to leave you turn your head back
“I’m sorry, mom.”
>as you leave her office, making it a point to leave the door open, you decide to check the time
>12:23
>you were in that office fucking her for about four hours
>how is your dick not sore?
>deciding to chock it up to good fortune you begin to head toward the school entrance
>after all the best way to make sure Celestia doesn’t see you again for the rest of the day is to just leave and the fact that you are covered in Celly’s pussy juice and smelled like you crawled out of a middle aged woman’s cunt
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>>25511639
>but as you pass Luna’s office you decide to stop buy and make Celestia’s new truth easier to live with, not wanting a sore dick you only drop in a jealous of her sister’s free spirit bit for potential future lewd, that she accepted little too fast, before leaving and walking home
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Oh goddamnit.
I forgot some things in my veal to finally get an update out.
Fuck.
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>>25504160

>AJ tries to protest, but Fluttershy has nothing of that.
>She kindly wraps her arms around AJ, telling her to listen to you.
>that she should just take a nap and enjoy being around those that care for her.
>AJ stutters, but Fluttershy only gives her a gentle kiss on the cheek and... starts to sing a lullaby?
>You are genuinely perplexed at what takes place in front of you, but you can't deny it is effective.
>Fluttershy's kind and maternal voice actually convinces AJ to just "drift off to sleep" and let "the joy of dreamland" embrace, making her close her eyes.
>the moment hr eyelids have fallen, the rest of her body goes limp against Fluttershy.
>"There, there...", Fluttershy says, kissing AJ on the forehead, earning her a soft murmur that you are certain sounded like "Mom".
>You have to admit, it was a pretty adorable sight, seeing her like that.
>And yet you couldn'T stop thinking how how sweet it would be to start the real breaking now.
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>>25512000

>Gesturing Fluttershy that she shall leave the girl alone, your slave obediently puts AJ's sleeping form on the hayball the two were sitting on.
>Grabbing one of the cider bottles AJ had brought in earlier when she came back, you take a seat right next to the sleeping girl.
>You open it, take a sip and then start working with the girl.

(sorry, all for today from me. Have to work a shift now. Think tonight may perhaps a handful of lines, but if anything, monday and tuesday AJ will be finished)
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>>25512213
Nice. Thanks, based writefag.
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>>25512213
we can wait
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>>25511644
This the end and pastebin?
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>>25514565
Pfft, no.
If this was as far as I was gonna go with it I'd at least show some of Celestia's day to day life now for the hot value as an after story type thing.
If this was a chapter story that'd just be the end of the first chapter.
Also: http://pastebin.com/LZD73pfh
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Hey, if suggestions for Rainbow Dash are open, I remembered something canon!

"Testing Testing 1, 2, 3", basically at the end Twilight gets Dash to fly, and by holding some cue cards in her peripheral vision they basically subliminally put the knowledge in her head.

I wonder if we could take advantage of subliminal messaging in this one. Get her friends to wear, or subtly alter the background when they hand with her. Or maybe when she's practicing for a game hold up messages when she's not really paying attention to them.

However it would be gone about, the point is Dash is already susceptible to having things just put into her brain. Tons of room for interpretation.
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>>25515121
That could work
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bamp
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>>25515121
Why did I not think of that.
Oh my god, this is good. This is a really good idea.

I bring this up because frankly, it is better than the idea I had in mind which seemed a bit too mean spirited for my taste, although I wanted to bring up mind break.
See, my idea was as followed:

After Anon was done with AJ and later Twilight, he would order the girls to do their best to ignore Rainbow Dash for around the next three weeks. Hang around with her, but make it seem as if they are doing also things behind her back, which make her feel like an outsider. This actually feeds her self esteem issues and Anon tries to use them to break her. Mostly by trying to convince her that only if she becomes his slave, she can be truly together with the other girls.
But frankly, fuck it. I want Dash to rather still act like herself but utterly sex addicted. And this subliminal message thing just may work for it.
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>>25516600
Makes me wonder how you'll get Twilight and why she's not the last one
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>>25514646
thanks and can't wait to see more
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>>25515727
>>25516600
I'm glad I could contribute something to the thread!

Also kinda want to just have her exposed to messages about her finding Anon sexually attractive and tell her she wants to masturbate when she's around or thinking about him. Maybe see her be confused about these feelings.
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Bumping for some hypno
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>>25463509
derpiboo.ru/788838
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Page 9 bump
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>>25517899
Thanks for the contribution.
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>>25522506
>pic = mfw
Also, when can we expect more updates? Looking forward to more of the green!
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>>25512213
hope to see more very soon
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>>25512213

(okay. LEts try and get back on track. Now also with more open dialogue I assume)

>"Applejack, can you hear me?"
"Yes", she mutters, eyes still closed.
>"How are you feeling?"
"Good"
>Not much of a very talkative girl in that state it seems.
>"AJ, you remember that me and the girls want to help you deal with some issues you have, right?"
>You can see her twitch uncomfortably for a minute in her sleep.
>"Shhhh...", you say, stroking her forehead with a hand. "Everything is alright. Remember, your friends are here for you. You can trust us.
"Trust you..."
>"Now listen. In order to help you, l am going to ask you a couple of questions. And I want you to be honest with your answers. As much as you expect others to be honest, you have to be honest with yourself and what you really want."
"Be honest with myself..."
>You smile.
>"Good girl. Now, my first question Applejack: Did you enjoy it, when the girls kissed you?"
>A soft smile forms on her lips.
"Yes"
>"Why did you like it?"
"Because... because it felt like I am loved. It didn't feel as if they just want to have their way with me. It felt like they really wanted to show me in their own ways that they care for me."
>You can hear Pinkie gush a little "aww" at that, followed by the sound of Rarity hushing her.
>"They wanted?", you ask, putting emphasize on the wording of AJs answer.
>"AJ, do you think they only "act" as if they care for you?"
She stays quiet for a moment, till she gives a shameful little "yes" as answer.
>The other girls are slightly shocked.
>"Why would you think they would do that?"
"Cause... well, a girl would not love another girl in that way, right?"
>This confuses you for a second. "That way"? Whatm did she mean as friends or...
>"AJ, let me just make a thing clear: You love your friends, right?"
"Yes"
>"And you believe that they love you to. As friends do, right?
"Yes"
>"...do you believe they would also love you as "more" than friends?"

>"
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>>25523847

Again she remains silent for a bit, before answering with a meek and kinda sorrowful "no".
"And why should they? I mean, they are normal and... it... it is not really "normal" to feel like that towards a girl, right?"
>really? We were really going down this road? >All thinks you knew about your slaves considered, you assumed to deal with that sort of shit rather around Pinkie, seeing how her parents dressed and spoke in some of the most conservative fashion you ever saw outside of a documentary about the pilgrims.
>Not that you were the only one.
>Your slaves certainly did not quite expect the answer themselves.
>they are not necessarily shocked, but the looks they give each other have "awkward" writen all over their faces.
>Taking a deep sip from your cider bottle in order to avoid a headache around the mental gymnastics you were now going to perform, you sigh and continue with your interrogation.
>"AJ, would you please tell me, what you mean by "not normal"?", you ask her, regretting what may follow.
>To your relief, instead of a half entranced soapbox speech about the evils of homosexuality, AJ actually remains rather "liberal" all things considered.
Telling you, although you have sometimes to ask for more details, just to get the entire picture, that she does not believe homosexuality to be a "sin" or a reason to be treated like dirt.
>But it becomes also obvious, that because of her upbringing, she kinda believes it is not "normal" in the eyes of others.
>People who may harm you and your loved ones, if you ever come out of the closet.
>Something she doesn't want to happen to anyone she cares about.
>That and seeing how her friends never had shown signs of being interested in girls before, she kinda doubts they would. Especially for her.
>Th last two comments are the ones who strike your biggest interest though, as they hint on something you didn't even think off originally
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>>25524158
>"AJ, please tell me if I get this right. You don't want someone to be hurt, because of you if you were a lesbian. And you doubt the girls, if they were into other girls, would be into you, as if to indicate there is a doubt another women could truly love you. Was that, what I heard?"
"I...I think so"
"AJ..." you lick your lips. Cause if your suspicion was right, this may have been a jackpot. "Are you gay?"

She bits her lips. And then, instead of giving you a worded answer, just nods her head.
>"Oh my", says Rarity, while Pinkie just happily giggles.
"Or... at least maybe?", AJ eventually says. "I mean, if I were gay, I wouldn't think of some boys in school either, right?
>"Which one?"
"Soarin, Sandalwood... Caramel is also kinda cute."
>"Wait. Isn't he together with Sassaflash?"
AJ just blushes at Sunset's remark."I know. That' why I feel kinda bad for it."
>"Back on topic" you say. "So, you have crushes on boys?"
>She nods.
>"Then what makes you think you are gay?"
"Well... me and Rainbow Dash..."
>"WHAT!", the girls shout behind you in unision. Well, Rarity, Fluttershy and Sunset at least, the later also spitting out a huge gulp of Cider she took right this moment.
>Pinkie on the other hand just smiles and proudly declares, that she called it.
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>>25524269
>"Girls.." you grunt between your teeth, before turning back to AJ.
>"You and Rainbow Dash, what?"
>She then starts to tell you how a couple of months ago, she and Dash decided to practice their guitar skills one afternoon in the barn, while the other girls were busy with their own stuff.
>How during that time, both eventually, as it happened sometimes between them, ended up playing their stupid dare challenges instead of practicing.
>Meaning that they challenged each other in a couple of minor competitions, until Dash eventually ended up challenging her to a drink off.
>Whoever could drink the most shots of Scumble.
>"Scumble", you ask and all she tells you is that it is a beverage, made out of apples.
>Well, mostly apples.
>Passed down for generations in her family, it is supposedly a harder drink than some of the cider she can make out of Zap Apples.
>They drank a couple of shots and as expected got kinda drunk.
>so drunk in fact, they both rather decided to call it a tie, AJ suggesting they do another challenge.
>To which Dash suggested, they do a competition during which the goal was to make the other one blush in embarassement.
>Before AJ even knew what she means, Dash then kissed her. Hard.
>Leaving her in shock on the spot, before her cheeks turnes as red as some of her Royal Gala's in the eastern orchard.
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>>25524403
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>>25511644
>jesus fucking christ was walking in the hot sun with these pants being so sticky was irritating
>the way they stuck to your legs in just such a way so that it creates an itching sensation and grabbing them to hold them away only made it worse on the other side was infuriating
>luckily for you, your house was only a fifteen minute walk away from the school so you can shower and change as soon as you get back
>as you walked you couldn't help but notice an old man dressed as in a dirty mismatched colored suit with a brown torso and long yellow sleeves, bright red pants, and green and brown knee high high heeled boots
>he was stapling some kind of advertisement for a private detective onto a telephone pole
>it looked like it was made by someone who had no idea what the fuck they were doing and half-assed it in a few hours
>it was Discord, the school janitor
>you never really interacted with him much but he apparently frequently made deals with students to get them various things and keep things he sees on the down low
>wanting to get home as soon as possible you just ignore him and continue on
>eventually you finally reach your house
>your old small dilapidated house
>complete with peeling ugly white paint
>many missing shingles,
>multiple holes in the points where the roof connects to the walls where squirrels make their home
>a front lawn that, while femanon makes you keep it cut (bitch), still has a rundown and unkempt appearance due to the wild bushes blocking most of it from view and big cement block that functions as a porch
>and finally a driveway about as cracked as the average small town road in america
>you squeeze the device
>why your father chose to live here for as long as he did when he had access to this thing you'll never fucking know
>you unlock the thick wooden door and walk straight in calling out to Femanon
"Femanon, I got sent home by Cele-"
>on the couch you saw her in nothing but an aviator jacket between the legs of a naked Gilda
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>>25524454

>naked Gilda

... first you had my curiosity.
Now you have my attention.
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Fuck that, more naked Gilda, insester, and MILFlestia.
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>>25524403

>To get back at Rainbow Dash, she then started to kiss her back, only to not get the same result at all.
>She only got Dash to blush, when she started to grope her.
>Then they started to fight.
>Not in a violent manner, but certainly in ways to annoy the other till one of them ended up top.
>then the fighting turned into them becoming more touchy.
>Then they ended up looking into each others eyes.
>And then...
>"Okay, hold a second", you interrupt Applejack all of sudden.
>Much to the annoyance of the other girls.
>"Come on", Sunset groans, two of her fingers actually slipped under her jeans already. "IT was just getting good."
>You give her a stern look, that shuts her up immediately and makes her retreat her fingers.
>Turning back to Applejack, you tell her that if anything, she should give now quite a detailed description of what happened.
>After all, it may help her realize if she is now lesbian or not.
>Furthermore, instead of just talking about it, she should also remember it. Physically.
>As in, she should let not just her mind, but also her body remember exactly the sensations she experienced said afternoon.

>The result of said command is a sight to behold.
>AT first Applejack starts rather slow. Telling you and the girls how they started to kiss each other in a curious, yet delicately way, just to see how far they can go.
>But soon their careful kissing turned into a full blown series of playful deep kisses, which made AJ feel all warm inside.
>That and the sweet taste of Rainbow's surprisingly soft lips is what she can remember the best.
>But kissing wasn't all they did.
>Soon AJ found Rainbow's hand around her neck, tickling her before running down her back and touching her in a manner like she never did before.
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>>25525215

>Then AJ started responding to it, holding Dash closer to her, exploring the body of her friend.
>While giving this verbal insight's into her first lesbian experience, you can see her body shudder, twitch and buck on the hay.
>Her at first calm and in bits unemotional voice starts to become a bit more of a raspy whisper, that becomes more and more aroused the more she goes on.
>Tales of the girls touching each other soon turn into tales of them ripping each others clothes form their bodies, only to hold in once in a while to appreciate the body of their respective other more.
>AJ can't help herself but describe to you the onslaught of emotions she felt in these moments. Her arousal, her insecurities, the the need to tell Dash to stop, only to let her secret wishes to continue take control make her give in...
>Behind you you can hear the sound of your slaves masturbating to the story, their glances fixated on AJ's twitching, with every second more aroused becoming body.
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>>25525380

>You yourself decide to become a bit playful., >As somehwere down the line AJtalks about Dash licking her navel, you interrupt her for a bit by pouring some of your cider into her navel, only to lick it up yourself.
>As you ask her if it was like that, all she can do is buck her hips up in the air, moaning a load yes.
>After that she continues telling you about how Dash would go even further down on her friends body, until finally she ended up kissing AJ's slit.
>The farmgirl once more bucks her hips in the air at that moment, lost in reexperiencing the sparks of lust that floaded her body at that instant.
>She tries to go on in her tale, but more and more she has to pause, in order to regain control of herself, all while her arousal becomes too much to handle for her.
>Not that she is the only one. Taking a glance at your girls, you can see Rarity already leaning blissfully against one of the barn's beams.
>Her bra opened and her own pants at half mast, she is mindlessly pushing her fingers in and out of her sjaved cunt, juices splashing the inner side of her thighs.
>The other girls aren't holding up any better, with Sunset's eyes fixated at you in a needy fashion.
>Your own arousal at this point rather painful, you signal her to come to you.
>Seconds later she is happily sucking down on your erection, her left hand pumping in and out of her pussy while listening to AJ's story.

>Speaking of AJ, based on the sound of her voice, she seems to be rather close herself.
>And indeed she is.
>As such, just when she tells you about how she was telling Dash that if she was going on like that, she would cum, the poor girl orgasms. Hard.
>Her mouth opening up in a silent scream she bucks her hips, her toes and fingers curling up and a damp spot slowly forming on her jeans.
>At the same time you cum inside Sunset's mouth, your jizz making it harder for her to breath to the point she starts tearing up.
>Not that she minds , cuming even harder than you and AJ.
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>>25525508
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Fucking UNF
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Please continue.
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>>25525508
>Not really all that surprising. You had trained the girl to cum everytime you would unload your jizz in her mouth back two weeks ago already.
>combined with pleasuring herself to the words of AJ, a rather effective combo.
>Not that you really care all that much about it.
>You only care right now for the relaxation you experience in the endorphinic afterglow of your own orgasm.
>And so does AJ.
>At least for a couple of seconds, before she continues her story.
>By the time you bother to actually listen to her again, she is going on about how in her own post orgasmic bliss, she had given into her own naugthy desires and started pleasuring Dash herself.
>Despite the rather large load you just shot, you can already feel your dick twitch again within Sunset's mouth (who obediently cleaned it up over the last minutes, sucking on it like a pacifier), as AJ goes on about how she eventually, in a mixture of arousal, nervousness and sexual curiosity, started to finger Rainbow Dash.
>How Dashie encouraged her between moans to continue and how they exchanged kisses inbetween her pushing herself against AJ's fingers, till she eventually came all over AJs hand.

>Which soon was followed by the two tasting, touching and licking each other in all sorts of manners they could proceed in their drunken and sexed up state, before setting for 69.
>After multiple orgasms, which AJ had the pleasure to reexperience all over right next to you, both eventually ran out of steam, exhaustion and alcohol taking their pay, both girls falling assleep in each other's arms.

>At this point, after adding also how she felt during al of that in a rather heartfelt manner, AJ stops talking, her tale at an end.
>For which you and the others are up to a certain degree rather thankful.
>Not only have you by then ended up taking Sunset, the girl right now still shuddering in your lap from the aftershock of her latest orgasm, but the others had been sexed up so badly...
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>>25524454
>femanon's ass was in the air facing the door as you looked over at them
>you saw her nice wet pussy, it didn't have any of the puffiness of Celestia's, but was still nice and her big firm ass that a brother couldn't deny
>screaming you turn around as fast as you can with an embarrassed blush on your face from seeing your own sister naked eating someone out
>it was the first time you've seen her naked, Femanon was terrified to death of the anyone with a penis seeing her in the buff, other than your father
>lil anon had a spark of interest but you quickly put that rebellion down
>"Femon! Why the fuck are you doing that in here in the middle of the day?!"
>after screaming herself she responds to you
>you hear Gilda just grab an unopened can of beer from between the multiple empty ones on the coffee table and drink it
"What the fuck are you doing in here so early?"
>hearing cloth rub against skin and cloth she is putting her clothes back on
>"Celestia sent me home early."
"Why the fuck did she send you home early? The fuck did you do?"
>you heard that Gilda made no attempt to get up or put clothes on just sipping the beer more
>she spoke in ever so slightly slurred speech
"Hey, Anon. Why'd you turn away so fast when you saw two naked women fucking? You a faggot?"
>femanon audibly punched her, probably on the shoulder
"Gilda! What the hell?! I'm his sister."
"What? Its a legit question, I'm sure he's seen you naked before."
"No, he hasn't!"
"Oh, well he has now. Hold right the fuck up there, Anon."
>you had slowly been inching your way to the bathroom since their exchange started looking away from Femanon getting dressed
>you hear gilda get up and walk over to you grabbing your shoulder and pulling you back to the living room with one arm
"You still haven't answered our questio-"
>she sniffs the air around you
"Why do you smell like you crawled out a middle aged woman's cunt? Guess that answers my question. You're just a mother fucker."
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>>25526460
Wow that's intense
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>>25529667
>"Gilda, what the fuck are you doing?"
>both you and Femanon ask her
>gilda pushes you onto the middle of the three person worn leather couch and sits next to you completely naked with an arm put around your shoulder
"Anon, was planing to leave without answering why he got sent home so I dragged him back in here."
>she takes a sip of the beer "accidentally" spilling some on her c cup boobs and down to her well toned abs and into her wild purple frosted white pubes before putting the empty can on the coffee table
>you, being a straight male with urges, couldn't help but ogle her body as the beer flowed down it
>she smiled a wicked predator's grin as she watches your eyes take her in
"I'm also horny and he interrupted you eating my cunt so, I'm gonna use him to get off and, as a bonus, being sick of how you constantly talk about how you want dick when you are free to get it but are afraid to get it, I'm going to force you to get over it."
>"Didn't you drop out? Why do you care why I got sent home? Also, do I have a say in th-"
"But he's my fucking brother, Gilda."
>ignoring femanon for now she answers you first
"Yes, I did and it has nothing to do with this, my girlfriend asked you a question and you'll answer it."
>Gilda pinches your cheek with her manicured hand with yellow painted nails
"And, nope you have absolutely no say in this little guy."
>she finally looks at and addresses Femanon
"So? He's seen you naked now, I think its only fair for you to see him in the buff now. Even if you don't wanna fuck him, I know I will."
>reaching for your hoodie pocket to turn the device on Gilda notices the movement and quickly slaps your hand away, hard
>"Ow, fuck."
>she roughly reaches into the pocket, using this as an opportunity to grab at your junk through it, and pulls it out giving it a once over
"What the hell kind of phone is this?"
>she shrugs and places it on the table
"Oh, well. You won't be needing it for what we'll be doing."
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>>25526460
>... based on the look on their faces you were worried they would go feral on your ass any second now.
>As such all of you are taking this moment of silence to just calm down enough, before the situation escalated.
>Not that you would be against an orgy with your slaves, but only after you had properly dealt with AJ.
>As such, after you calmed down enough, your dick put back into your pants and the other girls at least lucid enough they could bother being embarassed about it, you continue to interrogate AJ.

>"What happened then?", you ask.
>In a more monotone sounding voice AJ then wraps her stoy up, by telling you how a couple of hours later, it was only past 8 pm or so at that point, she and Dash groggily woke up.
>Realizing what happened, they looked embarassed into each other's eyes, Dash slightly trembling.
>Taking it as a sign that Dash actually hasn't wanted THAT to happen, AJ, before Dash had a chance to tell something to her first, hugged her and told her that it was all okay.
>She apologized and said her blue skinned friend, that it was because of them being drunk that this happened and that she has no reason to feel guilty about it, if that is what was going on.
>that they could just move on from it without anyone ever needing to know, avoiding that both would end up beind ridiculed or treated bad by their families and friends.
>AJ tells you, that she had no ill intend saying this things and that frankly, at the moment, it hurt herself to say them.
>Cause the fears she thought Dash may have? They were in part hers. And yet despite off them, there was a part of her that just wanted to say "screw it". A part that wanted to hug, kiss and love Dash.
>A part that wanted to show the athlete all the feelings she had for her aside of friendship and be thankful for how good she made her feel in the last hours, hoping that something more would come out of it.
>But her interpreting Dash's initial silence and trembling as a sign of the girl's fear...
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>>25530839
>... of being outed as a homosexual, if she even was one to begin with, [spoilers]spoilers: Yes. Yes she was[/spoilers] shut said part down.
>Dash would then, with tears in her eyes forming, say that she understands.
>When seeing her friends tearing up, AJ asked if everything was alright and if she said something bad.
>Only for Dash to say everything was fine and rub the tears of her face.
>Afterwards both dressed up again, hit the shower (separately) and the next day, after Dash send the night in the guest room of AJ's home, went on with their normal lives.

>You and the others let this information sink in for a minute.
>Especially Pinkie, who then just moves up to the two of you.
>Before you can even ask what she is up to, she just grabs after AJ and hugs her.
>Not in the manner of her patented "makes you smile" Pie-bear hug, but in a genuine, compassionate way.
>"You poor, dumb thing.", you can hear Pinkie whisper, before she leans in on AJ's face. It is only then you realize that a few tears were sliding down AJ's cheeks, which Pinkie kindly wipped away with her fingers.
>Afterwards she just puts AJ carefully back on the hayball, taking a seat next to Sunset.
>Trying to find a new point to start your breaking of her on, you ask AJ if that was the only lesbian experience she ever had.

"Yes", she says, her voice having a partly sad undertone to it.
>"Are you regreting that it happened?"
"..."
>"AJ?"
"I only regret, that Dash wouldn't have felt for me the same way I..."
>"Oh for Celestia's sake, Applejack", Sunset curses, interrupting her friends mid-confession. "Are you really that dense? Do you really believe, Dash may have hold it against you, what happened? She is our...well, your's world Element of Loyalty, as far as me and Twilight are concerned. She wouldn't have hold it against you. In fact, I think before you interrupted her, she was going to tell you that she..."
>Before she can finish her sentence, you slap her face.
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>>25531046
>Not hard, but strong enough that the shock shuts her up.
>Looking at you in surprise, she sees that your eyes have narrowed down significantly, signaling her to be quiet.
>"Don't ever step out of line like that again, slave", you tell her, making it clear that despite your tendencies to give your girls some freedom, you were not going to tolerate an outburst like that.
>Especially when the brainwashing of such a complicated case as AJ depended on it.
>As such, instead of protesting or trying to justify her actions, Sunset just bows her head in shame at you, keeping quiet till you command her otherwise.
>The ther girls are slightly shocked, but their programming makes them understand, that you were in the right.
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>>25530575
>you try to struggle up but she was too strong and it just took her single arm on you to keep you down
>growing sick of your struggling she forces you to lay down across her legs on your back and, while keeping her elbow pushed down on you to keep you down, unbuttons your pants
>she pulls both your shorts and underwear down enough for your dick to pop out
>using the arm not holding you down she begins to roughly rub your dick
>luckily she took care of herself and her hands were a lot smoother than you expected they'd be
>she was more feminine than you gave her credit for
>under her assault it didn't take you any time to get hard as a rock, also helped by having a perfect view of her boobs
>gilda now grabs your dick more firmly and moves it around looking at it
"Mmm, painfully average but it'll do the job."
>femanon was visibly distressed
>her arousal was fighting hard against her terror of being near you, a naked male
>she had always had been attracted to you
>it was the reason she always made you cut the grass
>watching you intently get sweaty and worked with your shirt off while you cut it got her really hot and bothered
>she would then go into the room you used to be terrified of entering and masturbate to the thought of you taking her in there
>all of this simply because of how similar you were to your father, only a lot less cold and distant
>after you got completely hard the battle between her arousal and desire for you and terror of her being around a naked male ended
>after realizing nothing bad was happening and being too horny to want to fight against sitting with gilda and playing with you she broke through the implanted terror
>she ran as fast as she could to the couch moving your legs and sitting next to Gilda and taking your clothes the rest of the way off
>slowly rubbing up your thighs to your crotch she spread your legs and started to massage and lightly squeeze your balls humming in contentment the entire time
"See, that's the spirit
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>>25533586
We need more AJ and hypno suprises
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>>25532669
I'm about a subtle as a brick.

>at this point you couldn't help but moan under their assault on your privates reflexively lightly thrusting into Gilda's hand and trying to twist your body to break free from gilda's grip to no avail
>gilda takes her distraction to force your hoodie and shirt of your leaving you completely naked and forced back down in the same position
>she then looks down at your bright red moaning face with a cocky smile and pinches your cheek again
"Now, why don't you tell Femanon why you were sent home?"
>having not actually thought about the story you were gonna give her as to why just planing on using the device you struggle to think up one
>"I got into a fight."
>femanon is the one to respond to this
"You got into a fight? YOU? I think that's a load of bullshit, Anon."
"I have to agree, Femanon. I mean look how weak and pathetic he is, can't even get up when someone's holding him down to jack him off.He should be covered in bruises from getting his ass kicked."
>she runs her sharp finger nail down from your chest to navel for emphasis pressing down just hard enough to leave a white line in your skin
"Take a deep smell of him Femanon and feel how sticky his cock and legs are. I think he was sent home cause he was caught fucking some really squirty horny bitch."
>femanon laughed despite finding you attractive and wanting to jump your bone she knew you were pathetic when it came to women and had no chance in hell of getting some
>and secretly wanting to be one of your first
"You seriously think Anon of all people managed to actually get laid?"
"Trust me Femanon, I know that smell. He definitely fucked someone."
>again she pinches your cheek this time pretty hard
"So, who was the lucky bitch that got to turn our little Anon into a man?"
>"No one, I didn't have sex with anyone at school. I just won the fight."
>both of them rolled their eyes at that and gilda got the same smile as earlier
"Guess we're doing this the hard way."
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>>25531122

>Turning back to AJ, you tell her to ignore for the moment what Sunset said.
>"So, you don't really regret it happened?"
"Yes."
>"Why?"
"Because it just felt so good. The things she made me feel, the way how safe I felt just holding her... I regret to put her in a situation she may not have wanted. I don't regret the experience."
>You think about the next words you may say rather carefully.
>"You care deeply for Dash, don't you? After all, you two have quite some things in common AND you care enough for her, that you more or less sacrificed to feel good like that again a second time with her, just because she may not have wanted it."
"What do you mean with "may not have..."
>"Just answer my question. Do you care deeply for Dash?"
"...yes"
>"Do you love her?"
A slight blush forms on her cheeks. "I... I do."
>JACKPOT!
"I love Rainbow Dash", she says, only to start sobbing out of sudden. "I love her. I want her to be with me"
>Her words turn more and more into crying.
"But she isn't like that She only cares for me as a friend and I don't want to ruin that. I don't want her to feel bad, but it hurts. It hurts sometimes just hanging around with her, secretely thinking how good it may be to just hold her hand and kiss her. And then when I think I should accept that yes, I am not "normal" like other girls, I still start fantasizing about other boys and I don't know anymore and..."
>"Okay, time out", you say, Turning your glance to Fluttershy, Pinkie and Rarity, you tell them to hold her.
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>>25537547
Oh god, YES! Yes!
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>>25537547
>Immediately the girls pull their friend into a hug, shutting her up midsentence.
"Wha..."
>"Listen, Applejack. You don't have to feel sad or confused right now. Just let the girls hold you. Feel the love they have for you flow through your body and soul. Washing away all these feelings of regret and insecurities about your own sexuality."
>She struggles at first, her conflicting emotions obviously trying to fight against the command.
>But the longer the girls hold her, the weaker she gets.
>the girls also help her, by telling comforting things into her ears, convincing her to just stop.
>that she is hurting herself and that they are just there to help.
>that they don't want to see their friend hurt and are here to make things better, if she trusts them.
>Eventually, Applejack is relaxed once more, dried tears leaving small marks on her cheeks, her expression more neutral again.
>"We love you, you little silly", Pinkie says in a sincere mood.
"And we would never think any less of you, no matter who you love", Fluttershy adds, kissing her friend on the cheek.
>"Frankly Darling, you being rather honest and direct about certain things, I expected better of you and just tell us all about it sooner", Rarity finishes. "I mean, you trust us enough to tell us we are like family to you and yet you keep something THIS important secret from us?"
"But... but you are normal. I didn't want things to be awkward between us."
>"Why would things be awkward?" Rarity asks.
"Because... me and a girl while also googling boys..."
>"Applejack, darling", Rarity sighs, caressing her forehead. "You are probably just bi."
"...what?"
>Now it was Fluttershy's turn to ask an awkward question. "Bi. You know what that is, right?"
Applejack blushes. "Yes I know. I may live on a farm, but I am not THAT sheltered."
>the other girls kinda wince at that remark.
"...sorry. Yes, I know what that means. I just... I never thought of that."
>Silence
"Do you really think I am bi?"
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>>25537785
>Are catholics the butt of many pedophile jokes, you are tempted to say as potential obvious answer.
>"It at least sounds like that", you say instead. "I mean, did you ever get off on the idea of some random dude just fucking the shit out of you?"
>Your other slaves look kind of embarassed at your words of choice.
>"What?"
"Well..."
>"No details this time"
"I have had fantasies. But the thing with Dash was the only time I ever had sex with someone"
>"At least Dash seemed to make up for the lack of dick", you hear Pinkie whisper towards Fluttershy, who just shushes her.
"I just... I don't know anymore."
>"Would you be happier, if someone decided to help you understand things more?"
"I... I guess. But... you wouldn't help me, right?"
>"Darling, we are your friends. Of course we help you."
"But you are nor-"
>"Applejack, we are half naked and hold you right now in a close hug while being as horny as a flock of rabbits, thanks to your little story", Fluttershy says out of sudden in a rather uncharacteristically sarcastic voice. "Doesn't make you that think a least for a second we may not be as "normal" as you think?"
>Despite her eyes closed, you can see based on the muscular movement on her face, that said little info dump probably wrecked her mentally.
>It's one of the most priceless looks you have ever seen in your entire life.
"You... you are gay?"
>"No, silly", Pinkie replies. "Well, we are gay for each other, but otherwise we only fuck with Anon."
"Wait wha..."
>"Although, if Anon would say so, I would probably also let others shoot their party cannon up by cooch, if it made him and others ha-"
"Anon and..."
>"Well thanks Pinkie", you say while facepalming. "You cut right to the chase"
>You turn to AJ. Game was more or less over.
>"AJ, open your eyes, please", you order her.
>She does as told. Thankfully, opening her eyes does in terms of wording not equal "wake out of your entranced state".
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>>25538266
>As such, even with her eyes open and now more aware of her surroundings and overall situation, she still is rather suggestible, her eyes dull and slightly glazed over.
>But what she realizes the most is just the state of her friends. half naked, hairs in frenzies, aroused blushes on their cheeks, their eyes looking at her in a mixture of genuine adoration, concern and lust...
>She also realizes just how vulnerable she is right now, topless and with stained pants, stinking of her own arousal.
"Girls..." she gulps.
>"Show AJ how much you love her, slaves", you say.
>And they obey.
>Before AJ can react, she finds the girls kissing her. Not just in the maternal and caring manner than before, but also in a needy, desiring way.
"Girls..." she gasps inbetween Rarity interrupting her assault on her lips, only to be immediately shut up by Pinkie, followed by a careful nib of Fluttershy on her ear.
>Meanwhile you turn your glance to Sunset, the girl still obediently on her knees, her eyes on the ground.
>Signaling her to stand up and join the others, Sunset looks thankfully at you, before starting to strip down till the only thing she is wearing are her stained panties and your medaillon.
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>>25534173
>Gilda grabs both of your hands in one of hers and pins them above your head to the arm rest of the couch
>you struggle even more to get free but to no avail
>while you were distracted with gilda moving your arms Femanon has gotten in between your legs and is holding each one under her arms
>she leans forward and starts to lick you from your nuts up to your tip and back down sending shudders through your body
>Gil moves her other hand back to start rubbing the top of your dick slowly and lightly with no intention of speeding up
>you groan and try to thrust into the sensations of your sister's tongue and Gil's hand but they move away whenever you do only to return at the exact same intensity
>groan even louder in annoyance
>femanon smiles and looks up at you
"If you want more you're gonna have to tell the truth."
>Gilda adds
"And we have all day."
>remembering your previous experiance with orgasm denial you crack instantly
>"Okay, okay! I did fuck someone and it is the reason I got sent home."
>both of them keep going at the same intensity looking at you with a raised eyebrow
"It was Celestia, I fucked Celestia."
>that managed to shock them
>gilda's grip loosened as she looked at you in disbelief before just as quickly tightening back up
"Bullshit, Anon. You know we aren't gonna stop until you tell the truth, who did you really fuck?"
>"I am telling the truth you cunt. I talked Celestia into helping me with my hard cock and ended up helping her."
>Femanon looked a lot more shocked than Gilda
"You. You talked Celestia, a forty plus year old woman, into fucking you? On school grounds no less?"
>"Yes! Yes, I did! Now, fucking please keep going."
>gilda laughed and tugged at your cheek more
"Lucky little devil, I gotta know how you did that, would have done it myself if I knew she wasn't a frigid bitch like her sister."
>she firmly squeezes your dick twisting her hand around it
"But first, Femanon and I gotta get this cock inside us."
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Bumpity bump bump
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>>25539964
"Awww. I was hoping to tease my little bro some more."
>Gilda looks to be in thought for a second before responding with that same predatory smile you've learned to fear
"He did call me a cunt,I think he needs to be punished for calling me such a hurtful name. It just tears me up inside."
>"It does not! You call yourself a cunt all th-"
>Gilda slaps her free hand hard over your mouth causing your lips to sting something fierce making you grunt in pain through your hand
>she speaks in an obviously faked emotionally distraught voice
>just doesn't work with how rough her voice is
"It just makes me feel oh so terrible about myself. I need my big strong girlfriend to punish the bad little boy who said such a horrible thing about me."
>Femanon smiled wickedly too then looked down at you in mock anger
"You better apologize to gilda right now or I'm gonna have to..."
>she runs both her hands up and down your legs before gripping your dick roughly smiling again
"punish you."
>you try to angrally answer her but because gilda still has her hands over your mouth all that comes out is a muffled sound
>Femanon smirks
"That didn't sound like an apology to me. I think it sounded like another insult intended to hurt Gilda even more."
"I guess that means he wants to be punished, Femanon."
"Since you enjoy filling your mouth with the word cunt so much I think we should fill it with exactly what you want. Gilda help me move him to the table."
>she just giddily nods her head
>you let out even more muffled complaints as they lift you up by your arms and legs and carry you over to the table and clear the table of everything using their feet they lightly drop you down on it
>Gilda lets go of your hands but before you can do anything she quickly sits on your face forcing your mouth against her pussy and uses her strong legs to pin your arms back down to the table
"You best get started putting my cunt into that mouth of yours, Femanon really wants to tease you some more."
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>>25542286
I feel as though I should have ignored the femdom guy.
I think he was the only interested in seeing it.
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>>25542286
The Ride never ends. Get it, guys? Ehehehhehe
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>>25542376
What?
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>>25542354
i kind of like the femdom stuff

you're doing great
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>>25538624
(I sincerely regreting that the idea -despite the basics having formed in my head now for a coupleof days- didn't come to me until now. The result of spontaneous writing I assume. Anyway, I would prefer it if ANY mentioning of the narrator being refered to as "Anon" gets replaced with "him" or "master" by the girls. Why? Cause I have a plan to reveal Master's true identity after AJ is done)

>Without much of a problem Sunset manages to slip in the pile of bodies that's her friends, till she is on top of AJ.
"You too?"
>Sunset shrugs. "What am I supposed to say? Master made me realize just how much I really love my friends."
>AJ turns her eyes to you.
"With Master, you mean..."
>"Yes, I mean him", Sunset says, pulling AJ's eyes back on her and the medaillon between her tits.
>"He made us see how much we love and care for each other as friends. And that it is okay to express said love in any way possible."
>"Especially the one that makes us all feel giddy inside", Pinkie adds while stealing a peek on AJ's neck.
>Sunset just tries to ignore her. "And we want to share this love with you, Applejack. Because we care for you. And we want you to be happy."
"I am ha..."
>"Are you really? With all that supressed desires and hardships?"
>Aj tries to answer, but she can't. Her eyes transfixed on the medaillon and especially the sickle shaped stone in its center, she can't find any words, while Fluttershy and Rarity are hugging and fondling her.
>All she can do is shake her head.
>"All we want to do is show you how much we love you and that it is okay to feel for girls like you do. We want you to be honest with yourself and embrace who you truly are."
"Embrace who I am..."
>"So, are you willing to open up and show us what you want?"
AJ bites her lips. "I am scared", she whispers.
>"Don't be, Sunset kindly says, leaning in closer till their lips are almost touching.
>"Just trust us.", Fluttershy adds.
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>>25542703
>I would prefer it if ANY mentioning of the narrator being refered to as "Anon" gets replaced with "him" or "master" by the girls
>I have a plan to reveal Master's true identity after AJ is done
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>>25542703

>"We won't think any worse of you". That's from Rarity.
>"We are going to give you a good time, AJ. And hey, you can play with our bodies to, if you want.", Pinkie says.
>AJ looks a bit more relaxed at these words, looking closer into Sunset's eyes.
>Sunset just looks back, a confident smirk on her lips. "You ready to let some steam off?"
AJ just starts panting. "Sugarcube..."
And then her lips are on Sunset's.
>A bit surprised about the sudden action of her friend, Sunset's eyes widen, only to shut down happily, as she reciprocates the kiss, pressing herself closer to AJ.
>And just like that, Applejack gives in.
>For the next couple of minutes you just watch how the girls take the chance to grop, fondle and pleasure her friend.
>At first they start of harmless, kissing her, stroking her arms and tummy.
>But soon hands begin wandering down AJ's damp jeans, touching her sex and making the girl moan between the kisses of her friends.

>AJ herself slowly starts to get in the spirit of things.
>Her hand, at first shaking nervously at what was going on, start exploring her friends. At first cautiously tickling Sunset's neck, only to become more and more adventurous as the other girls continue their ministration.
>It only takes a couple of minutes till the surprisingly insecure girl finds herself no longer passively receiving pleasure, but instead grabs after Fluttershy to trap her in a passionate kiss, hands grabing the caretaker's ample ass and giving these soft buns a good squeeze.
>Fluttershy squeaks, which makes AJ stop for a second, worried she may have hurt her friend.
>But Flutters just pushes herself against AJ, telling... no, commanding her to continue.
>To which she happily obliges.
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>>25542740
... now I am going to write how Flash is going to get assraped by Futa Sunset. Hope you are happy.

And no, it is not him.
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>>25542840
>All the while you are just sitting there, sipping on a second bottle of cider, enjoying the sensual display of friendship and lust unfold in front of you. It's only a matter of time till you finally see one of the girls pull down AJ's pants, leaving her naked for everyone to enjoy.

>The farm girl shudders, as she can feel hay sticks stroke the flesh of her thighs.
>For a second she holds in, unsure what the other girls are going to do next, now that she is naked.
>To no ones real surprise, it is Pinkie who decides to take the chance and put a kiss on her folds, making AJ hiss between grinded teeth, bucking her hips into Pinkie's mouth.
>the party girl interrets it as an invitation and in one swift move pushes her tongue inside the girl.
>AJ can't help but squirm under the girl's onslaught until only seconds later she cums hard, her eyes fluttering and uttering a high pitched scream of sexual delight.

>From this moment on, all bets were off.
>Drunk on endorphines AJ grabbed after Rarity and started to knead her breast between her fingers.
>the normally dominant lady of your harem just "eeping" in surprise, before moaning herself profanily, ordering AJ to twist her nipples.
>Meanwhile Pinkie continued to lick AJ's juices, leaving Flutteshy and Sunset alone, who decided to help each other out of their remaining clothes and engage in some loving themselves.

>By the time you had finished your cider, the girls were all naked, tongue and fingers exploring each others folds.
>And in the center of all that was Applejack, mindlessly pleasuring all her friends as good as she could.
>While her tongue was busy eating out Sunset, happily riding AJ's face, her left hand was deep within Fluttershy, inexperienced fingers doing their best to play with your pet's clit.
>Rarity meanwhile was enjoying the attention AJ's right hand was giving one of her breasts, while Pinkie, not wanting to be left out, was giggling like crazy, as she started scissoring her friend.
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>>25543436
You're defiling my pure Appul waifu.

keep going
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>>25543436

>All you could do was listening to the girls moaning and giggling in delight, bringing themselves and their friend to orgasm over and over again.
>And while you certainly wouldn't have minded just telling them to stop and claim a piece of that apple yourself, you had other plans.
>As such, you decided to do something else you wanted to do for quite some time, especially after the bottle of cider previously.
>Ignoring the delirious joy your slaves were experiencing, you went up to Sunset.
>Not interrupting her humping of AJ's face, she mindlessly looked at you, tongue hanging out in heat, heavily gulping for air.
>Her eyes beg you to take her, but instead you gra for the medaillon and put it on your own neck.
>"I doubt you need that anymore", you tell Sunset and give her a soft kiss on the lips.
>She just leans in closer, begging you to fuck her ass while AJ was laping up her juices.
>"Later", you tell her. "I am having something else to do first"
>Just like that you then leave the barn, your girls and their friend still entrapped in losing themselves to physical pleasure.

>In the meantime you take care of your own relief outside, by taking a much needed piss.
>As your urine hits the bark of the tree you decided to take care of your business on, you can't help but think how well things have played out so far.

>Four of Rainbooms were yours and considering the state AJ was currently in, the fifth was going to fall into place soon after.
>All she needed was that little extra push.
>Sure, the girl was right now center of a lesbian orgy, her mind already cracking under the assault of pleasure and being freed of her own insecurities.
>But you didn't just want to cause cracks in the girl's mind.
>You wanted to break it.
>You wanted to break it, releasing all the raw emotions Applejack had inside her and knead her like clay between your fingers.
>Applejack wasn't going to just be your slave.
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>>25542286
>you feel Gilda start to rub down and up your chest and stomach lightly dragging her nails across your skin
>femanon still has your legs locked in place and was now placing tender kisses up and down your shaft occasionally flicking her warm wet tongue out to lick you, never doing anything more
>it was torture
>you groan in protest
>hoping that she'd get femanon to start actually sucking you off or doing something other than just tease you, you open your mouth to start eating Gilda out
>you slide your tongue between the folds of her pussy moving from the
"Mmmmm, there you go, Anon. But you need to put more heart into it."
>she grinds her cunt into your mouth some and Femanon keeps up her assault of kisses and licks on your cock
>groaning in complaint and again fruitlessly thrusting your hips into the air you redouble your efforts on Gilda's snatch
>your tongue moving much faster and focusing its attention on her clit and occasionally forcing it inside her soaking wet tunnel
>this got her to let out a slight moan
"Oh, that's it, Anon. Keep doing that. You think he has learned his lesson, Femanon?"
>she stops her attentions at your dick to answer
"I think he has, Gilda. I want to get the main course now."
>you feel her let go of your legs as she climbs on top of you
>she grabs ahold of your cock to position it and inserts it into her pussy slowly sliding down to your hilt her tight passage rubbing all around your phallus as she goes
>you can't help but stop licking her and moan loudly into Gilda's snatch at the feeling of your own sister's cunt on your dick
"Hey! Just cause your sister is finally fucking you that doesn't mean you can leave me hanging."
>resuming your attentions to her muff you stick your tongue as far into her tunnel as you can wiggling it around as you open your mouth more and seal around it and you move your mouth and tongue as if you were french kissing her lower lips
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>>25543558

>She was going to be a work of art.

>Having finished your business, you pull your dick back in your pants and just try to take in the fresh air.
>Looking up to the stars, you enjoy the calm of the night, thinking about the next step in your conquering of Applejack, as you hear something.
>The sound of feet, stomping on fallen leaves and branches.
>Looking in the direction of the noise, you see a rather huge figure heading your way.
>"Hello?"
>Seeing the figure turn to you, you finally recognize it as AJ's brother BigMac.
>Crap.
"Who is there?"
>steping out of the shadows, you get closer to him, trying to be as casual as possible.
>"hi"
>He looks at you in confusion. "What are you still doing here?", he asks.
>"Enjoying the beautiful night. I mean, it's not a crime, isn't it?", you ask with a fake smile on your face, hoping to defuse the situation.
>Instead he continues to carefully observe you.
>"Look, I am just here, because I am still tired from all the work and the hay in your barn is soft enough for a quick nap, okay?", you sigh. "Respect by the way for dealing with that almost daily."
>No response. Seemed the stories about this guy giving everyone most of the time the silent treatment were true.
>"And what are you doing here?", you ask, just in hopes to break the rather awkward situation.
>"I wanted to see if everything is okay with Applejack", he finally answers, still observing you rather carefully.
>"Well... she is doing fine, I can tell you that. In fact, the other girls are really enjoying her pie."
>You seriously hope that the guy did not hear the dirty undertone of that statement in your voice.
>"Speaking of your sister", you say, pulling out your medaillon so that its gem can be seen in the faint moon light. "You love her, right?"
>If BigMac wasn't suspicious of you before, he certainly is now, his face becoming sterner.
>And based on his body language, he was also ready to come at you, if you were going to do something funny.
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>>25543982
Dat update timing.
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>>25543991
He? Sorry, I am also busy partly so... yeah.

>"Why are you asking that? I think I don't know you well enough to answer that sort of question"
>"Hm, you're right", you say, dangling the medaillon between your fingers, carefully making sure it catches his eyes.
>"I mean, it is a rather personal question."
>You observe how his eyes finally seem to get transfixed by the medaillon.
>Staying quiet for some time, you let his eyes follow the stone's movement for a bit, before continuing talking.
>"It is just... see, I hang around your sister's friends for some time now. I like them. And I actually like your sister."
>You can see him relax a bit more at these words. After all, a friend of the girls would not mean harm to his sister, would he?
>"And frankly, I think she likes me to. At least she trusts me enough to actually talk about her problems with me."
>Wait a sec, BigMac thinks, trying to look at you.
>Yet for some reason he just can't move his eyes away from that weird, hellish red stone dangling between your fingers.
>"Problems?"
>"Don't you know?", you ask in fake shock. "Your sister has actually quite some personal issues. Issues that concern you in parts, if I understood her correctly."
>His body, which has gone slack for a bit under the relaxing sight of your medaillon, tenses up a bit again.
>"wha..."
>"You didn't know, did you? Oh man. She really must think quite badly of herself, if she can't even tell her own brother."
>A look of concern begins to form on his face.
>"What is..."
>"You want to know, don't you? Well... I don't know. I mean, she told me in secret and..."
>"Tell me!"
>"Okay, okay. But first, do me a small favor, will you?"
>His mind getting more and more foggy, BigMac just nods, not even aware of the evil smile that has formed on your face.
>"Sleep!"
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>>25544082
I wasn't complaining.
Was just an observation.
Don't need to say sorry.
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>>25544082

Around 10 minutes later...

>When you finally come back to the barn, the sight in front of you is all you need to get all warmed up again, after spending some time outside in the fresh cold.
>Your girls are still making love to each other and although not as feverish as before, you can't deny that the way how they use their bodies is still enough to fill the wetdreams of dozen of boys in school.
>Pinkie Pie, no longer assaulting AJ's pussy, has focused all her attention on Sunset, whose only half awake at this point, her body shuddering more on reflex than anything while Pinkie is licking remains of apple pie from her abdomen.
>Rarity meanwhile is giving Applejack a sensual footjob, her toes tingling the flesh of Applejack's folds playfully, while telling Applejack all the while how divine her juices feel, running down her well pedicured toenails.
>AJ is barely listening though. She is far more involved in kissing and holding Fluttershy, a content smile all over her face.
>Any dried up tears on her cheeks by now replaced by the sticky juices and saliva of her friends, she constantly tells Fluttershy how beautiful she is, while also exclaiming just how good she feels right now with the girls around her.
>You are certain that she was going to cum again soon, probably for the fifth time or so since you left, as your voice interrupts the peaceful atmosphere surrounding the five.
>"Okay, that is enough loving, slaves. Back off"
>Your words pulling her out of her own fantasies, Applejack can only watch as Fluttershy and Rarity suddenly leave her.
>She looks at you in confusion, than in desperation as she realizes, that you have just deprived her of her next release.
>Unfortunately for her, there is nothing she can do against it.
>With her mind cracking and her body exhausted, she is too weak to do anything else but shakingly point at you, begging the girls with stretched arms to come back to her so they can finish what they started.
"No..."
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>>25544143

>"Sorry AJ, playtime is over."
"But... I was so..."
>Before she can finish that sentence, you are next to her, pushing her back in the hay.
>With a ferocious grin, you pin her down.
>Looking in her dazed eyes, you can see she is still pretty much high on endorphines and more than suggestible to your words and actions.
>"What is it, AJ?", you ask coldly. "You want to cum?"
>Under normal circumstances, she would have kicked your ass for a stunt like that.
>But as it was, she was just too confused and horny to even care for the fact, that the guy who only a couple of weeks ago bothered to enroll Canterlot High, was now forcing himself on her naked, trembling form.
"Yes... please!"
>"I am more than willing to help you out on that one", you say.
>Before she has a chance to react, you forcefully push three of your fingers into her sensitive cunt, making her buck her hips instantly.
>Without missing a beat you assault her pussy, pushing in and out of her as fast as you can, your fingers twirling in her wet and warm cavities, making her scream.
>It only takes a couple of seconds till she finally cums, gushing her juices all over your hand.
>Enjoying the feeling of her contracting muscles around your fingers, you push a couple more times into her, assaulting her g-spot and earning a couple more moans, till you pull out.
>By then your hand is covered in a thin layer of her body made apple juices.
>Holding it up against your face, you give your hand a good lick, tasting Applejack.
>To your surprise, she actually doesn't taste of apples.
>Instead her taste reminds you more of the smell of wet earth after a warm summer rain, combined with cinnamon.
>"Lick", you suddenly say, holding your middle finger to her mouth.
>Obediently she begins to lick on it like a newborn kitten, shuddering in delight as the taste asaults her taste buds.
>The finger is soon followed by the rest of your hand, which she lovingly caresses, looking up at you in a haze.
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>>25544231
>"Feeling better", you ask her, to which she can only give an affirmative nod.
>"Good", you say, rolling to the side, while placing one of your hand on her right breast.
>Starting to massage her, which she doesn't seem to mind at all, as she only sighs in content, you start interrogating her again.
>"Did the girls make you feel good?"
"Yes", she mindlessly, but with a happy smile forming on her face, replies.
>"Good. So you finally accepted that you are into girls?"
"Yes"
>"And how does that make you feel?"
"Happy".
>She gives a rather uncharacteristic, but heartfelt giggle.
>"And why does it make you feel happy?"
"Because I now know, there is nothing to be ashamed off. And that the girls love me. And I love them. I love them so much."
>"Oh, I got that", you say with a chuckle.
>"Bet you can't wait to give Pinkie a taste of her own medicine, just to show how much you love her."
>Again, she giggles.
>"But if I am not mistaken, you said you also have fantasies about boys from time to time, isn't that right?"
>Her smile folds, being replaced by a more thoughtful look on her face.
>"Didn't you?"
"I did."
>"So... seeing how you might be bi, would you mind to have sex with a guy, or even more, just to be sure?"
"I... I....", she stammers.
>"Come on", you say, licking her ear and giving her nipple a tweak. "You were so brave letting the girls take care of you. And it made you feel so much better. What harm could there be in just fooling around with a guy?"
"...pregnancy?"
>...okay, that was a point.
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Oh God, Anon..please don't stop, I can't wait for more!
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>>25544320
>"Okay, that aside..."
"I don't want to get pregnant already, you know?"
>"Okay, I get that.", you reassure her. "But... well, just touching each other? Would that be okay?"
"...."
>"Applejack?"
"I guess..."
>You smile. "See? We just found a middle ground to work on."
"But I... I have never been with a boy together like that."
>"Well, Dash aside, were you also ever together with a girl like you were a couple of minutes before?"
"No?"
>"Then why can't you show the same kind of bravery you showed when being with the girls?"
>You actually lean in, to give her nipple a kiss, causing her to gasp.
>"I know you want to be freed of your insecurities, Applejack. But again, you have to be honest with your desires. Just as you were with the girls."
>She gulps, her body trembling, pushing herself slightly against your hand.
>"So, do you want to know the touch of a man?"
"Yes..."
>"Would you be okay with it being me?"
"You?"
>"Well, why not. After all, am I not the reason, the girls are that much more open about themselves?"
"They call you master..."
>"Because just like you have given yourself to them, they have given themselves to me, after I helped them realize who they truly are."
"You hit Sunset..."
>"Because she forgot her place for the moment."
>You let your hand travel over her body, slightly touching her shaved pubics. >"Applejack, I am not a bad person. I love my girls and they love me. But as their master, I also have to set them straight when they step out of line. Especially if they threaten to hurt you."
"Hurt me?"
>"The things Sunset was going to say? At that moment, it would have made you just feel bad."
>Your hand travels up to her head, caressing her forehead and stroking a few hairs to the side.
>"And I did not want this to happen to you."
"What was she going..."
>"to tell you? Oh Applejack..."
>You lean in closer.
>"...You will understand it yourself, as soon as you fully embrace who you are."
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>>25544638
>She just whines, begging you to stop with the teasing.
>"But you will only know who you truly are, the moment you have also experienced the taste of the other gender. So, are you going to try it now?"
"Yes."
>"Are you willing to experience it with my help?"
"Only... only if you promise, to be gentle."
>You have to do your hardest, not to laugh at her naivity at this moment.
>"I can promise you, that I will take care of you, as I took care of my slaves, if that is okay with you."
>She winces a bit.
>"Don't take that as a bad sign. After all, by helping them, they could show you how much they care for you. And also, did I so far treat you in any bad way? Didn't I help you come to some terms and made you cum just minutes ago.
>She blushes.
"Yes. Yes you did."
>"Then just try and see that already as a sign of me having just your best in mind."
>She looks at you, her eyes in a mixture of worry and a genuinely need to trust you.
>"If it makes you feel any better, you can make the start" you state and take her hand.
>Slowly you guide it to your crotch, letting it rest on the fabric of your jeans.
>"Go on. Your turn."
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>>25542354
This wasn't what I expected... sorry

Thanks writefag for trying tho...
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>>25545005
>Slowly her hand starts to move over the fabric, till it reaches the button and zipper.
>Bitting on her lips, AJ lets her hand wander into your pant. Already she can feel your hard, warm flesh under the boxers you are wearing, making her gulp.
>Not wanting to be too forceful, as it was better to let her slowly walk towards her doom herself, you let her hand stroke the fabric, while your hand massages her breast a bit more.
>"Come on", you whisper. "You are not chicken, are you?"
>With a determined look she pulls down your boxers, exposing your half erect manhood.
>She freezes at the sight of it, but at the same time, her eyes seem to turn foggier.
>"Like what you see?", you ask.
>She doesn't know what to say. So instead she carefully touches it.
"It's warm...", she says, her fingers dancing over your shaft.
>"A good thing. Otherwise I would probably have to cut it off", you say jokingly, your own hand caressing Applejack's stomach now.
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>>25545237

>Ignoring your words, Applejack continues to move her hand alongside your shaft, the flesh under her care getting harder.
>Eventually she find the courage to actually put her hand around it, giving your dick a soft squeeze.
>"Careful" you tell her. "You don't want to hurt me, do you?"
"No..." she moans, slowly starting to move her hand up and down.
>Simultaneously, you let your own fingers dance around her slit, teasing her lips.
>Her reaction to that is just a series of soft gasps and moans, underlined further by her hand squeezing you a bit more once in a while.
>Not that you had anything to complain about, as her surprisingly soft hands still managed to make it feel rather enjoyable.
>"Thats good", you tell her inbetween moans.
>Encouraged by your words, she eventually begins to start her second hand.
>Going for your balls with it, she begins to cup them.
"So big..."
>"Well, I don't know. A bit above average I assume", you tell her, pushing yourself slightly against her hand.
>At the same time your fingers slide within her own cavities, earning you more moans and gasps.

>this goes on for a couple of minutes. Your index and middle finger pistoning in and out of her, while your thumb strokes her clit from time to time, while she gives you a rather unexperienced, but surprisingly good handjob.
>Good mostly because instead of rubbing one out of you and be done with, she certainly tries her best to keep you hard. Slowing down or going faster based on your own moans, stopping the moment she feels something twitch and using said moments to just take a closer look at your manhood, which seems to be all that is on her mind right now.
>That and the pleasure she receives between her legs by your own hands.
>At the same time the first drops of your own lust begin to leave your tip, catching AJ's eyes immediately.
>"See something you like?", you ask her.
"Is that..."
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>>25542354
Nonsense, shit's dope
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>>25545584
My dick... Anon, you're doing god's work here. Thank you for writing this!
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>>25463966
That fairly mediocre hentai's gimmick was more like cell phone camera, if I remember right.

There really wasn't much in the way of good mind control hentai when I last looked.
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>>25545584
What's she gonna say and do?
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(update in around 4 till 5 hours. stay save thread)
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>>25547813
Cool, I can wait
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>>25543976
>this managed to get a small squeak of pleasure from her as she moved her hips grinding into your face even more
>while she was distracted one of her legs moves from over your arm letting it free
>instead of trying to free yourself with it you move your hand to her clit and start slowly rubbing your index finger around it
>this causes her to moan loudly forcing her cunt into your mouth even more almost blocking out all of your air supply
>your sister puts her hands on your chest and, using this for balance, begins to raise and lower herself on your shaft even faster practically screaming in pleasure as she goes
>her slick tight walls squeezing all around your glands is too much for you so you wraith and squirm under her and gilda vocalizing your ecstasy into Gilda's pussy as muffled moans
>you feel Gilda move her hands to on top of Femanon's hands on your chest and squeezes them as she grinds into your mouth even more and you feel her weight shifts as she leans forward presumably to kiss Femanon
>you feel a tiny twinge of something for a split second before Femanon picks up her pace making you lose it in a sea of pleasure that forces you to writhe and force even more muffled sounds out
>your sister was likewise emitted muffled noises of bliss into Gil's mouth
>wanting to get gilda to the same state the both of you were in you start to use two fingers on either side of her clit rubbing it quickly between them and flicking your tongue around her tunnel as fast as you could get it to go
>bingo
>you are rewarded for your efforts with her doing exactly what you wanted, practically screaming into Femanon's mouth as you work your magic on her cunt
>you feel Femanon's weight shift as she breaks the kiss and starts to impale herself on your cock even faster breathing heavily with each exhale being a cute little moan as she grew closer to her climax
>despite having came twice today already you were beginning to grow close to yours as well
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>>25484056
good story

i busted a nut to this
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>>25549178
I don't know what it is but I feel like this part of my story is a bit too mechanical.
Is it coming across that way to anyone else? Or is it just my perfectionism?
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So we have technology that mind controls and chemistry that mind controls. What if Anon wound up in Equestria after becoming a level 25 wizard and had mind control wizard powers? He then hypnotizes Luna and Celestia subliminally sexual things ensue, first intensely, but then he undoes the changes once they notice themselves changing.
Should I try to write this?
>>25545584
Also, I'm loving the story. Keep it up!
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>>25550023
DO WANT
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>>25550044
>triple double doubles
So Bateman commands, so it shall be done. Tomorrow though, I'm about to fall asleep.
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>>25546327
Bible Black perhaps. But that is more of corruption

>>25545584
>"Only pre", you say. "But consider that: It's you who is getting that reaction out of me. For someone who never milked a man before, you should feel proud for that"
>She just looks at it, almost hypnotized by the drops themselves.
>Slowly she then starts to get closer with her mouth to it, to the point she can already fel the radiating heat of your dick on your lips.
"Can I.... can I taste it?"
>"If you want to."
>Taking it as all the conformation she needs, Applejack reaches out with her tongue and starts licking up the drops.
>Her eyes widen in part as she gets a good taste of you.
"It's...kinda salty", she says with a blush.
>"Hope that's not a problem", you say with a moan, the feeling of said lick having made you feel rather good.
"No, its...actually kinda nice", she says. Squeezing a couple of more drops out of you, she licks them up, enjoying more and more the salty sensation it causes in her mouth.
>At the same time she really starts to enjoy the sound of your moans and hisses.
"Am I making you feel good?"
>"Yes", you hiss, pushing your fingers a bit harder into her. "Yes you do."
>She smiles at you.
"I am glad I do" she says and continues licking your tip.
>But soon that's not enough for her and her tongue begins to wander a bit further down the tip, til it reaches your foreskin.
>Playfully she starts to use her hand and tongue to let the tip of the later wander under your foreskin, nibbling on its fold with her under lip.
>It feels so good, you can't help but lose control for a moment, jerking against Applejack, your eyes rolling back into your head.
>"Dam girl", you curse between grinding teeth. "Keep going"
>Which she does without any objection.
>Soon her tongue travels up and down your shaft, licking up the dried up remains of Sunset's and your juices from earlier.
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>>25550488
>Reaching your balls, she gives them a good lick before sucking on one of your nuts, looking up at you pleadingly.
>"Oh for fuck's sake,Applejack", you moan by now.
>You were sincerely not expecting to get so much pleasure out of a more or less sloopy blowjob like that, especially seeing how over the course of the last weeks you certainly had your fair share of them already.
>But Applejack... you didn't know what it was, but this girl, despite her own reservations, was kind of a natural.
>Perhaps it was because of her upbringing, convincing her to always be helpful to others and stick to her work ethics, perhaps it was because of her own inexperience, but whatever it was, it made that girl rather devoted to her task at making you feel good.
>As such, in a rather uncharacteristic moment for you, you considered she deserved to be rewarded for her good work.

>In an instant, you pull your fingers out of her and slide away from her hands.
>When instead of warm flesh Applejack can only feel cold air hit her tongue again, she looks at you.
>The look on her face you have to admit makes you chuckle in how adorable and yet lewd it is.
>Applejack, her hair a mess and her cheeks crimson red, looks at you like a hurt child, who just got her favorite sweet taken away by her parent.
"Why are you stopping?", she pounds.
>"Oh, I am not going to stop", you say.
>Before she knows it, you position yourself above her, your dick dangling over her face, the jeans pulled down further by your hand.
>By the time you have put your own head between her legs, the smell of her own arousal hitting you like a sledgehammer, she realizes what you are going to do.
>"I am just going to make it a lot more pleasurable for the both of us", you state.
>And then you give AJ the treat of your tongue slidding in her folds.
>Unlike with Pinkie though, AJ doesn't come instantly from it, instead hissing for air and twitcing under you, while you are assaulting the little apple to the core.
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>>25550741
>Your own erection dangling between her eyes, she looks at it almost hypnotized by its movement, until she gets the message.
>Between moans she manages to move her head up just enough for her lips to touch your tip.
>At first she only begins to sloopily suck on it, but soon, overcome by your minsitrationa dn the need to taste mor of you, she goes further.
>Stretching her hands up, she grabs your ass and pulls it down, making sure to get as much of your manhood inside of her throat as possible.
>Tears are forming in her eyes and you can feel her getting tense under you, making you stop for a moment.
>"Relax, Applejack. You are doing good", you reaffirm her, giving her time to adjust to the meat iin her mouth. "Just try to breath through your nose."
>You stay like that for a couple of seconds, until you feel her lips slowly moving up and down on her own accord.
>Taking it as a sign, you go back to your own work, using your fingers and tongue to pleasure her and get as many of her sweet juices as possible.
>You are both at best busy for three minutes like that, which for the both of you feel like a pleasurable small eternity, until you both feel each other tense up.
>Before you have even a chance to warn her, you can feel your balls constrict and you cum.
>Applejack's eyes widen in surprise as your jizz shoots down her throat.
>Having trouble breathing and trying her hardest to not gag at gup after gulp of your cum, she tenses up herself, bolts of pleasure shooting through her whole body, making her cum.
>You close your eyes as a splash of her juices squirts out of her like crazy, giving you trouble on your own to swallow.
>Twitching and jerking like you both are getting a shock treatment, you stay like that, until you both collaps from exhaustion.
>rolling off her, a last shot of your dick smearing cum all over her face, you slugishly move up to her, till you are once more face to face, looking each other into lustfilled eyes, grinning.
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bump

btw, a bit of feedback is appreciated.
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>>25551509
...this is the best thing to wake up to. Seriously, Anon, this is one of the best greentexts I have read to date, and my dick approves, I really like the concept of Anon conquering them and AJ showing some remarkable depth of character in a greentext that could simply do with "and then they fucked, the end." AJ could be the key to get Rainbow Dash, and then it's Twilight-time. But what happened to Big Mac?
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>>25551646
Who says Twilight comes AFTER Dash?
And what happened with Big Mac... you'll see soon.

>>25550925
>"Well...", you say, panting. "Did you enjoy it?"
"Yes", she says.
>You look in her eyes and all you can see is crazed lust and a spark of affection, indicating, that she was ready to break any moment.
>Just one more push needed.
>"Oh my, what an exciting display of cunnilingus", you suddenly hear from your left.
"Turning your head slightly, you are met by Rarity's flustering face.
>"I can't remember having seen you ever lose control like that, Master", she says.
>Affectionately she starts licking off Applejack's juices from your face before you even have a chance to say something.
>Out of the corner of your eyes you can see Applejack receiving a similiar cleansing by Sunset, giggling.
>"Don't want to let master's juices get to waste", you hear Sunset state inbetween licks.
>Just when she is finished and ready to swallow your remains, Applejack traps her in a kiss, forcing Sunset to hold your treasured juices in and sharing it with her friend in a rather intense session of tongue kissing.
>By the time their lips break, Sunset is all flustered herself, swallowing them down with a heavy gulp.
"Sharing is carrying", Applejack simply states with a grin, licking some of your remains from her lips.
>Damn, you think. If that was not an apple right for ripping, you didn't know.
>"You are a very naughty girl", you state, giving her right breast a soft squeeze and kissing her nipple.
"Only because of you, guys", Applejack simply states, enjoying the attention you give her.
>"So...", rarity says, stroking AJ's hair affectionately. "I guess you enjoy dick too now?"
AJ sighs. "I think so. If a guy's most treasure piece can make you feel like that in your mouth..."
>"Oh, you should feel what it can do down there", Rarity states with a naughty grin. "You think someone's fingers are good?"
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>>25551894

>"Feeling that?", Sunset asks, suddenly pushing her fingers into AJ's gushing cunt, making her immediately shoot up a bit. >"Imagine that feeling at least three times stronger. All your weakspots pleasured at the same time, by one hot and hard rod of flesh thrusting into you again and again."
"Nnnggghh...."
>"filling you up with so much jizz the moment you finally make him cum..."
"Oh gosh..."
>You can feel her twerk under you, certainly cuming again, just by the idea of what you could do to her.
>Sunset simply lets AJ ride off her latest orgasm, before retreating out of her.
>"Cause that is what guys do with girls like us.", she states, licking AJ's juices off her fingers.
>"They fuck us. They use us for their own joy and make us enjoy it. Make us feel like women. Make us cum and cum inside of us in return."
"Oh gosh, oh gosh..."
>"Is it that what you want, AJ? Make a guy feel you like a woman? Pleasure you? Fuck you?"
"Yes!" She states, grinning and with tears in her eyes. "Yes, yes, yes!"
>In a moment she has her hands around your neck and pulls you up to her.

"Fuck me", she begs in a raspy voice, rubbing herself against your flacid dick. "Fuck me. Fuck my tits... fuck my mouth... fuck my pussy... fuck me!"
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>>25549178
Guess I should start being a namefag since a new writefag is going to be joining in on the fun.
Finally updated the bin.
http://pastebin.com/LZD73pfh

>as you climb the slope with Femanon closer and closer to your respective climaxes you pour all your focus into eating out Gilda to bring her there with you two
>moving up to three fingers with her clit between two and under the third you start rubbing your fingers against her clit as fast as you can while creating a seal on her cunt and sucking on her labia
>your tongue darting to and fro and all over within her wet snatch driven by your desire to get Gilda off with you and Femanon
>she responds by grinding even harder against you cutting you off from even more air and gripping Femanon's hands even tighter on your chest
"Oh fuck yes! Keep eating that fucking cunt y-you..."
>she was cut off when femanon leaned in for a deeper more passionate kiss making her bounces on your cock slower
>you groan angrily into Gil's pussy and start to thrust into her snatch when you feel her slow down
>you were so close to cumming and weren't going to let her keep that from you
>she breaks her kiss moaning your name loudly feeling you thrust into her
"Yes, Anon! Fuck me."
>she returns to bouncing back on you in time with your thrusts up into her
"Oh, anon I'm so close! Fuck your big sister! "
>using the same intensity you are using to thrust into Femanon you start rubbing GIlda's clit as fast as you can and sucking and tonging her pussy just as hard earning you similar, if more insulting, vocalizations
>the three of you climb your summits for a long amazing thirty seconds of moaning, groaning, and screaming
>Femanon reaches hers first
>shuddering she screams loudly one last time and her vagina tightens around your dick as she cums adding her juices to the mess Celestia made
"I love you, Anon!"
>the contractions of her pussy on your shaft was enough to finally push you over your summit as you scream into Gil's honey pot
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>>25551960

>"What about you being afraid of getting pregnant?", you ask.
"I don't care", she replies, trembling. "Just make me feel like a woman. Give it to me."
>Your playful grin turns more stern. And then, much to her and your girl's shock you state the following simple word: "No."
>Immediately, AJ's grin folds.
"What?"
>"I am not going to fuck you", you state, freeing yourself out of her grasp.
>The other girls look at each other in confusion, before turning to you.
>"Ehm...Master? You alright?", Pinkie asks.
"No, you... you can't do that!", AJ desperately states, trying to grab after you.
>You just slap her hands away.
"I am begging you", she says, crawling to you, body shaking, holding her hand out to you.
>She looks more like a desperate animal, than a strong willed hardworking girl.
"Please. You said you were going to help me. Are you going to leave me hanging now, that I am finally honest with myself?"
>"Oh AJ", you sigh, putting your dick back in your pants. "Of course I am going to help you."
>You snap your finger and suddenly the barn door opens and BigMac enters. "I am just saying it is not me who is going to fuck you."
AJ's eyes widen in shock at the sight of her brother.
"BigMac?"
>"Shit", Pinkie curses in panic. "We are busted".
>"No, we are not", Sunset says. Grabbing after her hyperactive friend who was just trying to break the world record in putting your clothes on, she points at BigMac's eyes. "Look"
>Pinkie does. and so do the other girls, who immediately see a very familiar dazed expression on his face.
>"Oh my gosh!", Pinkie screams with a big gasp. "Master put him under!"
>AJ doesn't even hear it. She is too shocked at the situation of her brother standing in ront of her, witnessing how she is crawling on all fours, naked, demanding to be fucked like a cheap whore.
>At this moment realization at the whole situation comes crushing down on her, reawakening her rational side which had layed dormant for the last hour or so.
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>>25551960
Here we go...
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>>25552056
This is either going to end in a disaster or going to be glorious. Not sure...
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>>25552060
>>25552085
Buckle up, Buckaroo!

>>25552056
>Weakly she tries to stand up, her body shaking.
>Covering her breasts and snatch with her hands as good as she can, she tries to step back to the ball of hay where her clothes lie, looking at BigMac in fright.
"Brother, this... it's not what it looks like!"
>BigMac doesn't seem to listen. Instead he stomps in her direction, making her shake even more.
"Please, we... the girls...he...they were just..."
>BigMac is now in front of her, looking down at her mindlessly.
>A comparison to him with a golem jumps around in your head, as you watch with a ferocious smile, what is happening.
>You are enjoying it so much, you are not even paying attention to Fluttershy desperately graping after your arm, begging you to do something.
>Feeling herself utterly exposed and helpless, AJ can only watch as her brother raises his hands...
"Please don't hurt me!", AJ cries, tears forming in her closed eyes.
>...Only to put them gently at her shoulders.
>"I would never hurt you, AJ", he says.
>Surprised, she slowly opens her eyes and looks up to him.
"What?"
>Only now does she see the dazed expression on his face. But there is something else there too.
>Something that looks to her like regret.
"Big Mac?"
>And then, just to confuse her even more, BigMac goes on his knees, his arms sliding down with him till they rest on his sister's hips.
>perplexed she looks down, her brother, his head resting at her navel, staring back into her eyes.
>"I am so sorry, sis!"
AJ gulps. "what?"
>"I had no idea"
>Any fear AJ had only seconds ago, is gone by now, replaced by utter confusion at the situation.
"What are you talking about?", she asks.
>"All of your hardships", he answers, gently holding her. "I am sorry. I always took your hard work for granted. I had no idea, that you were feeling so alone."
AJ gulps. "BigMac..."
>Her glance turns to you.
"What have you done?", she asks, her voice trembling.
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>>25552180

>"We just had a little talk", you say. "I told him a bit about the things you were hiding from us only an hour ago. Made him realize, how much he must suck as a brother, to not realize how much you secretely suffered."
>the last words you spit out in fake disgust, just to manipulate both siblings even more in the desired direction you were going with that.

>"You are my little sister", BigMac says, turning AJ's attention back to him. "I am supposed to help and protect you.", by now tears have formed in his eyes. "I should have known, how you really feel and help you."
"Bi-BigMac", she whimpers, tears forming in her own eyes.
>"I am sorry for not having been a good brother."
"That's not true", she says, gently stroking his cheek. "you are the best brother a girl could ask for. It wasn't your fault."
>"Really?"
"Really"
>Silence.
>"I love you, Applejack."
"Oh, BigMac..." she sadly moans, wipping tears of his face.
>"Let me make it up to you", he begs her in trance. "Let me be there for you now. Please."
>Aj looks back to you, realization finally hitting her.
"Is that what you want?", she asks you. "Make me fuck my own brother?"
>"Why not?", you simply ask in return, indicating that you did not care for any unfortunate implications regarding the subject.
>Her hands resting on her protectively on her brother's head, she looks at you in a mixture of anger and sadness.

"He is my brother!"
>"And he is also a man. And be honest, isn't that what you want? To be fucked by a man? To be made a woman? Why not let the first man to ever give you that honor, be the one guy on this planet, who supposedly loves you the most?"
>She tries to say something, but the force of your statement and her subconscious desire to be honest with herself, keep her from doing so, contemplating the value of your words.
>"this guy took your love and dedication for your family for granted for over four years. (1/2)
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>>25552235
>"All your suppressed desires and who you truly are? They are in part his fault. Because if it wasn't for his...no, your family's happiness, you wouldn't have needed to supress them."
>Her lips tremble and you realize, that the final cracks in her will were forming.
>"Face it, Applejack. You deserve this. You deserve to be loved. You deserve to finally be your true, naughty self."
>Your voice has by now turned into a beast like growl, assaulting any last mental defenses and limitations the farmgirl may have had.
>"The girl that just minutes ago begged me to be fucked, the girl that loves her friends platonically and sexually? She is as much you, as the girl that loves her family, works hard and would do and sacrifice anything to protect those she loves. And now you have the chance to finally make them become one. To be what you are, not what you must be."
>She gasps by now for air, feeling herself break down under your words and the memories of all the pleasure she experienced thanks to you and the girls. But there is more. there is also the realization of who she will be, when she actually does as you tell her and give in.
>A new girl. A girl forever loved by her friends, family and so many more. A girl who did not have to feel guilty for her needs.
A girl who may finally be with that beautiful, rainbow haired angel that resided in her heart...
>"all you have to do for the two to become one is to finally fuck a guy. And why not let it be your brother? The guy who loves you and wants to make up for years of emotional neglect."
>Your eyes glister in sadistic glee, your brain high on endorphines and a power rush like you never experienced it before.
>"Go on. Do what you truly desire."
>She just looks at you in silence, thinking that more is going to come.
>But it doesn't. You have spoken. Now it was Applejack's time to decide what she wanted.
>With panic in her eyes, she looks between you, the girls and BigMac, hoping to get an answer.
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>>25552275
I'm at work, but here I am reading this. Must...not...press... F5...
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>>25552291
I take that as a compliment.

I am going to finish this thing probably by today, but I want to take a break for a coupel of hours first. btw, the "identity" of "master" is also going to be revealed by the end of it.
And again, it is not Flash.
furthermore, following the conquering of AJ, I want to focus on a "chapter" telling a bit about how Master came into being and where the medaillon comes from. Partly because it is going to build up for the things coming with Twiight and Dash later on and beyond
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>still no green protagonizing the Great and Hypnotizable Trixie
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>>25552275

>But all she finds in their eyes is anticipation.
>They wait for what I am going to do, she realizes and looks down to her brothers eyes.
>These beautiful, green, hazy eyes.
>Filled with so much brotherly love and devotion for her.
>Begging her to use him as she desires.
>At that moment, everything just breaks down on Applejack.
>Her fears, her regrets. But also the love she has for those she cares for. The lust and happiness she felt the moment her friends kissed her and made her realize, that it was not sick to be in love with them.
>All the little naughty things you made her feel...
>Her wish to finally be who she is.
>the love for her brother...
>the need to be fucked.

>Fascinated you observe how Applejack's feature turned from frightened to slack, as if something in her mind just snapped.
>But the very next moment, her expression changes again. this time into a bizarre grin, which is accompanied by a manic chuckle.
>"Jackie? You alright?", Pinkie asks. She is obviously worried, slightly hiding behind Sunset's slender form.

>But instead of answering her bouncy friend, AJ has only eyes for her brother.
"Oh BigMac, she says, caressing his face, before stroking his hair. "I love you so much. Now please..."
>Her hand suddenly grabs his hair hard.
>"Sis?" he winces.
"Love me", she growls.
>And just like that, AJ pushes her brother's head down her crotch.
>His eyes widen in surprise, as he finds himself suddenly with a face full of pussy, forcefully pushed against his mouth and nose, making it hard for him to breath.
>Any protest he may have wanted to speak out was drowned in AJ's wet canal.
>A small part of his mind was trying to tell him that this was wrong, that as much as he loved AJ, this was not where his face was supposed to be.
>But this part was quickly silenced and buried in the folds of his subconscious, as your command forced itself in his head, evaporating any other thought.
>What was said command?
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>>25552408
I actually have an idea. In spirit of MLP, it involves a song number.
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>>25552408
My green will eventually have her.
But no time soon with how fucking slow I am.
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>>25552428
Forget the pause - we need AJ and Big Mac fucking each other's brains out!
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>>25552434
When I read this, I thought of indian porno with song and dances. /mlp/, how fucked am I?
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>>25552454
You're on /mlp/. This speaks volumes about your state of mind.
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>>25552454

Okay, this is what my Trixie idea would be based on:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d2UN1qn_1lE

this is part of the rewrited lyrics, starting after the first verse:

THEY SAY A MAGICIAN HAS TRICKS UP HER SLEEVES~
ESPECIALLY IF SHE HAS SOME EXTRAORDINARY NEEDS~
SHE KNOWS HOW TO ENTERTAIN YOUR EVERY KINK~
BE IT SM, MC, OR... OTHER STUFF...

I CAN EVOLVE TO MATCH MOST ANY TASTE~
THE PURRRFECT FIT FOR YOUR TEAM!
HAVE NICE TITS, AN ASS TO LOVE! MY SKIN IS SOFT LIKE A SILK GLOVE!
CAN'T YOU SEE ALL MY CHARMS, JUSTIFYING BEING WITH ME?

I CAN BE CUTE, I CAN BE LEWD!
OR DOMINATE YOU, FOR A CHANGE...
BE WITH ME DAY AND NIGHT-- (WATCH OUT, I BITE~)
I'LL SATISFY YOUR NEEDS, NO MATTER HOW STRANGE...

SO CHOOSE ME, BABY! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME BEHIND!
I GUARANTEE I'M YOUR TYPE! ~AND I...
MAY ACT SMUG, BUT ONLY IF YOU DON'T MIND, AND BY THE WAY EVEN THREEWAYS ARE FOR ME ALRIGHT~

COME BE MY MASTER; I'M YOUR DREAM COMING TRUE!
I GOT A LOT OF E-X-P!
I'M SEXY & INTO ROLEPLAYING....
I'M THE GIRLFRIEND THAT YOU'RE NEEDING!
I COULD BE YOUR SLAVE THIS VERY NOON, GO AHEAD, CHARM ME, ANON!
I'LL BE... YOUR OBEDIENT AND SLUTTY TRIXIE!
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>>25552498
Even after death this ride will not end 'cause it shall not end.
Oh fuck, why I even came here?
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>>25552511
Holy shit, are you on /vp/, too? I thought /pol/ was our neighbour...
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>>25552428

>To love his sister.
>To obey her wishes and be a good brother.
>To see in her the sexiest girl he knew.
>As such, any repulsion he may have had almost instantly melted away, causing him to grin in anticipation at whatever she may order, enjoying the feeling of his nose touching her inner flesh.
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>>25552650

"Lick me", AJ ordered him, pushing his face as much into her folds as she could, supposedly forgetting that you and the others were there to. "Use your tongue to make me feel good, brother."

>BigMac hapily complied, his tongue giving her flesh slow, sensual licks, that made his sister bite her lips in anticipation.
"Oh yes...", she moaned, trembling.
>For the next thirty seconds or so she just stood there, letting her brother worship her cunt in mindless obedience and deep seated sibling love.
>His fingers and tongue managing to touch her in places not even Pinkie and her motor mouth could find, AJ moans in mindless bliss, feeling her brain marinade in a chemical cocktail of absolute ecstasy.
>BigMac himself also looks like he enjoys his task, taking every moan as a sign that he is fullfilling his duty well.
>Her knees getting weak, Aplejack suddenly starts to sink to the ground, while simutaneoulsy moving forward.
>As such you get the pleasre to see BigMac slowly being pushed to his back, all the while licking his sister into sexual oblivion.
>finally the farmboy finds himself obediently laying on the ground, his sister riding his face as if she's possesed by the devil himself, throwing profanities at him and playing with her breasts.

>You can't help but smile. A work of art? This was your freaking magnum opus when it came to corruption.
>And it seemed Applejack was more than willing to give an encore, as she suddenly turned around.
"Keep licking", she told BigMac, while fishing out his cock in a frenzy and...
>HOLY SHIT, you think, as you actually see BigMac's package out in the open.
>As much as you hated to admit it, that thing was huge.
>Sure, yours wasn't something to be ignored, but this? This thing was only at half mast and already...
>Okay, just ignore it. You were the master here. No reason to develop any sort of penis envy!
>Unfortunately, your girls seemed to think a bit different about that.
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>>25552752

>Considering the looks they were giving his manhood as well as Applejack, wo would have the privilige to have a first taste of it...
>You made a mental note to remind the girls later who was the master here and therefore whose dick was giving them the most pleasure.

>But till then you just went on to enjoy the show.
>And what a show the siblings were giving you.
>With both hands busy on her brother, AJ made sure to get him hard and ready for what she wanted to do next.
>While the blowjob she had given you was done with almost childlike curiosity and in a gentle manner, this was just animalistic need.
>Her tongue licked roughly over the increasing length as if it was a popsicle, gulping down on the tip and shaft as if her life depended on it, while she would simultaneously squeeze his balls in a manner that looked rather pain- instead of lustful.
>The thing she did with nibbling on your foreskin?
>She did that too, only now she used her teeth, stretching the skin from time to time, just to get as strong of a reaction out of her brother as she could.
>It didn't necessarily frighten you, but you made another mental note, that for the next days if anything, you were going to avoid oral with her.
>Under her constant assault, BigMac soon became fully hard, his errection standing at attention like a street post, ready to fullfill its natural duty.
>With a soft mewl, AJ then stood up, allowing her brother, whose tongue was still licking, even after there was nothing but air above him to dig into, to get some more air into his lungs.
>He gasped loudely, the taste and smell of his sister still dominating his mind, when Applejack called his name.
>Groggily he tried to lift his head. All he could see was his sister's backside, as she was hovering on her knees over his manhood, her hands opening her tight cunt as far as she could to take him in.
>With a loving gaze in her eyes she turned her head towards him.
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>>25552794

>At this moment, any craziness that had talken a hold of her was gone and her affection for her brother shone through once more.
"I am glad, you are my first", she said him with a smile, pushing herself down on him.
>And then hell broke lose.
>Of all things, "making love" was not what anyone could have ever called, what Applejack and BigMac did then.
>this was Fucking with a capital F.
>Pure, mindless, animalistic need to get off.
>Applejack didn't just let her brother slip into her and enjoy the feeling of him.
>She gurgled mindless pleas and prayers to the heavens, as she was pushing herself up and down his length time and time again, making tons of wet sounds as she impaled herself on his manhood.
>BigMac himself grunted, his eyes rolling in the back of his head, as he felt his dick engulfed by the hot cavities of his little sister.
>Your command in action, he grabed for Applejack's hips and thighs, doing his best to keep her stable as she fucked him reverse cowgirl style.
>Soon both found a steady rhythm in which BigMc would push as strong and deep inside of her as he could, while she forcefully pushed herself against him, all for the sake of feeling her older brother as deep within her as possible.
>You and the girls were just standing there in front of the two, bearing witness to it.
>You with a satisfied smile on your face, the girls, naked and slightly getting aroused from the show, standing to your left and right.
>Based on their expressions you could assume they weren't just curious about the entire situation, probably wishing to get a taste of Applejack's brother themselves, but that they were also waiting. Waiting for Applejack to finally hit her peak and orgasm, as then she would finally become truly a member of your little harem.
>But you could wait for that to happen.
>You have worked more than an hour just to get Applejack to this point and now you wanted to harvest what you sow.
>You wanted to treasure every second, every moan...
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>>25552935
THIS. A THOUSAND TIMES THIS. Now please excuse me, my dick is crying for help too loud, and the well thought of parts of this story make me smile.
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>>25552954
I am glad my shitty writing could help you get your (Rainbow) rocks off.

I guess the next two/three updates will finish up with Applejack.
When this happens, may I get a bit of feedback for the "story" so far in general and the "reveal" of the master? Cause I am seriously considering to send that thing as template to someone who could flesh it out even more.
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>>25552987
But of course! I would upload it somewhere else, too, if I were you. I think this is great.
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>>25552987
No preggers?
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>>25553024
not yet.
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>>25553073
It will happen eventually right? Yay
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>>25552604
This is the result of all those hidden horse threads. Or they are the result of this. Either/or.
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>>25551960
Holy shit, this is some incredible MC green.

>>25551988
Welcome to the name game!

>>25552056
OH FUCK
>>25552235
...well played
>>25552434
Oh god, I can only imagine what'll be coming with that besides Trixie?
>>25552511
And imagine no more!
>>25552987
>your (Rainbow) rocks off.
That pun done gone and killed my boner
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>>25553466
I somehow enjoy that comment. A lot. I take that as a sign that I am doing something right.
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>>25553553
>something
Don't sell yourself short here, writegod. JUST KEEP IT UP
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>>25552935

>... every moment of depravation Applejack was endulging in.
>As the siblings continued in their mindless fucking, AJ's eyes finally fell on you.
>Mindlessly she looked you and the girls in the eyes, smiling brightly.
>Next thing you knew she leaned in a bit back, spreading her legs.
>Just enough so that all five of you had a better look at her brother obscenely pumping in and out of her.
"I am so close..." she moaned inbetween thrusts, her breasts moving up and down. "I am so close, Big Mac, can you feel it?"
>"Eyupp", was all her brother gave her as an answer in form of a deep, animalistic groan.
"I am going to cum", AJ stated. "I am going to cum, I am going to cum, I am going to..."
>Her mindless mantra was interrupted, by her brother forcing himself up.
>All of sudden Applejack found herself in a sitting position in her brother's lap, his strong arms hugging her tight to his chest.
>For a second, she was speechless, her animalistic lust evaporated.
"Big Mac?"
>He simply continued thrusting into her, although in a much slower, yet stronger manner.
"Big Mac!"
>"I love you, little sis", he whispered in her ear.
"Oh gawd!"
>"And I swear as your brother, I will do everything in my power, to never let you forget that."
"Nggghhh..."
>Tilting her head a bit backwards, she looked in her brother's eyes.
>In that instant, unbeknownst to you, her mind was once more floated by a wave of memories.
>Memories of her and her brother's past and all the sad and happy moments they shared together.
>Not just as siblings, but also as friends.
>In that instant she realized truly how much she loved him.
>And if you had paid attention to BigMac's eyes, you would have seen the same realization emerging in his.
>But all you could see was two siblings, suddenly participating in a deep, gentle and yet passionate kiss, their bodies deeply entangled in passionate sex.
>Even you had to admit, that it was kinda cute to see both losing themselves in each other's arms like that.
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>>25553783
>But soon that little moment of peaceful lovemaking was once more replaced by their animalistic, frantic fucking, till both eventually reached their absolute limit.
"I am cumming!", AJ suddenly yelled out, her body jerking uncontrollably. "Please BigMac. Fill me-"
>She didn't even have the chance to finish her sentence, as her brother in one final, mind blowing thrust pushed inside her spasming pussy, making her brain explode in a firework of an orgasm.
>At the same time he finally emptied himself in her, filling her up to the brim with his potent seed.
>The girls could only look in awe, as shot after shot of BigMac's cum filled their friends tight love tunnel, to the point at least a fifth of it began to leak out of her on the ground.

>You on the other hand just watched in victory, as Applejack's mind broke into thousand little pieces, which set themselves together into a new construct within the same moment.
>And while said construct was similiar to the old one, it was yet so different.
>It had completely new facets added on the old one, that would make Applejack a new person. A person, worthy to be part of what was yet to come within your future.

>Waiting for both to get down from their sex induced high, you watched them eventually drop forward in exhaustion, sweating and shaking, but still connected in a tight embrace, connected by their genitals.
>You decided to let them stay like that a little longer, just so they could regain a bit of their strength and mental capacities, before you officially claimed her as yours.

>After you were convinced that they would not suddenly faint, you coughed slightly, in order to get your attention.
>Both looked up at you wit half lid eyes.
>"Would you kindly separate from each other?"
>With slight regret, they obeyed.
>"Get on your knees", you ordered both of them and they complied.
>You smiled as you inspected the two latest additions for your collection, before stroking their heads affectionately.
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>>25553919

>They just smiled at you in return, enjoying your little gesture, as meaningless as it may have been.
>Big Mac was looking at you in anticipation, hoping you would tell him that he had done a good job and proven himself a worthy brother to Applejack.
>But all your attention was focused on Applejack, who looked at you in awe.
"Thank you", she said.
>"For what?"
"For making me realize and accept who I truly am. For making me realize, just how much I love my friends and family!"
>"Grouphug", you suddenly heard Pinkie shout.
>Before you had a chance to tell her and the others off, the girls had actually managed to get a hold of her.
>Applejack was still on her knees, but now she was being hugged by all her friends, silently accepting her in their group.
>Applejack couldn't help herself but smile.
"Girls..."
>"Well, I am glad, you finally embrace your true self", you declared, ignoring the sugarcoated display of affection in front of you.
>With a sigh you look around, till you suddenly spot something in a corner.
>It's AJ's hat, which she had taken off, before Fluttershy started massaging her.
>"Be right back", you state to the girls, leaving them for themselves for a bit to get the hat.
>When you come back, you put it on AJ's head, the girl looking surprised.
"Th-thank you."
>"Don't. I just thought you look naked without it."
>You look her body up and down, your eyes in parts stuck to the hay sticking on her breasts, as well as the drops of cum still dripping out of her.
>"Well, more than you should"
>Applejack can't help herself, but giggle at how sardonic you sound.
>"I am glad my latest slave has such a good sense of humor", you state.
>that makes her freeze in her track.
"Come again?"
>"Well, you are my slave now."
>She suddenly looks more uncomfortable.
"Wait. Hold on a sec. I did not..."
>"You did not, what?", you ask her drily. "Did you expect to get soul searching help like that for free?"
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>>25554005
>Your medaillon, or rather the fiery red stone in its center, began to shimmer in a toxic green light that instant, catching AJ's eyes.
"No...." she says in a slightly monotone voice, her eyes glimmering in the same color.
>She is so transfixed, she doesn't even see how the eyes of her friend shimmer in the same color, their faces expressing some sinister smiles.
>"You sia it yourself; I helped you realize who you truly are. You owe me your life, Applejack!"
>As suddenly as it started to glow, the stone stops.
>And with it Applejack and the girls are snapping out of their entranced state.
>For a moment Applejack looks at the girls still hugging her, then at you.
"You're right" she says, sinking her head shamefully. "I am sorry for not immediately seeing it."
>"You are forgiven", you state, stroking her cheek and making her lean into your hand.
>"From now on Applejack, you are part of a new family. My family. You and the girls will forever be together."
>She smiles at those words. But the her glance falls on Big Mac, still obediently looking at you.
"What about..."
>"Your brother?", you ask, not even bothering to turn your eyes away from her. "Don't worry. I want my slaves to be happy. As such, even if men are not really my cup of tea..."
>Probably...
>"...I will accept him in it to."
>You chuckle.
>"In fact, Applejack, I am going to make our family grow even more soon. And you can play a part in making me help others accept who they are. Make them become part of us. To love you and be loved. Would that make you happy."
"I would be honored", she says.
>"Good girl", you say with a smile, petting her even more.

(okay then, the next part is short and is the ending of all that. Curse word limit. Anyway, next one, the identity bomb is thrown)
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>>25554102
>Suddenly, she starts to chuckle.
>"What is so funny?"
"Nothing, really. It's just... you know, a month ago, when you transfered to our school?"
>You look at her with a raised eyebrow. "Yes?"
"I thought you were kind of cute in the way how remote you were acting. I hoped I could make you open up a bit. And after Twilight told me what happened in your past... I really wanted to help you."
>She chuckled a bit louder.
"Who would have thought that a month later, you would be the one helping me open up, Sombra?"
>"Please", you hiss, letting your coal colored fingers wander down her chin, tilting it a bit so she can look deeper into your fiery red eyes.
With a commanding voice that doesn't tolerate any form of disrespect you tell her the following, spine chilling words.

"Show some respect and call me master, my precious little sssss-slave!"
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>>25554135
>Sombra
OH MY FUCKING GOD
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>>25554187
YES!

That's the reaction I wanted!
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>>25554135
Well, I thought right in expecting sombra. ehhh, I'll reserve my meaningless personal judgement on it till we see were you're going with this.
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>>25554240
As I want to take partly a break from writing for now (at least I won't write more regularly over the course of the weekend, as I have private business to attend to) and the next parts are actually focusing on HOW Sombra even came to be involved in this, I am willing to give a small spoiler tagged explanation for what is going to come with him, BEFORE we reassume the corruption of the remaining girls.
The explanation will not get into too much detail, but I hope I can at least reassure with it that I have now more or less a plan.

Yet before I write something like that, I want to know if there is even interest for it.
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>>25554405
I'm loving the story, but when are you gonna continue the one with Sunset and Tennis Match?
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>>25554511
probably in tandem with the last two corruptions.
Sorry, I needed a break from that one and just wanted to do an abridged description for a story, then suddenly I had the idea with Applejack (who is my favorite pony, so that had to get out) now the Sombra idea is something I see potential into...
I am going to focus on both stories now and see that Tennis and Sunset get what they deserve/need.
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boop
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>>25554536
Hoping for both to have good endings
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>>25554135
>Sombra
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>>25554135
Sombra huh? Wasn't expecting that
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>>25553553
>>25553643
What (s)he(it) said!

>>25554135
OH SHIT
I was sort of expecting a bit of spike for some reason. I think when you mentioned transfer and Twilight, I jumped to it.
BUTT FUCK
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>>25556276
...okay, I am not sure if that is supposed to say "gay" in a bad way, or....

>>25556814
Did you expect I am really being such a troll and make it to be Flash?
Oh, Flash is going to have an appearance in the story down the line. But he certainly will get the short end of the stick (spoilr: No bashing, but.... you will see)

>>25556860
You thought the talking dog was going to be the mastermind?
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>>25557009
I was expecting someone like Celestia or Chrysalis to be controlling the guy who was controlling the mane 7.
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>>25557009

So, when are you gonna update your original story? I like this story and all, but I like the other one, better.
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>>25557009
Rob Halford is telling you that you rock. Humbly accept his praise.

Also what >>25557048 said
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>>25551509
Honestly, your scenes with nothing but dialogue drag on a bit too long, this AJ arc is probably 2 or 3x as long as the other arcs combined and to some degree I think it doesn't need a few posts dedicated to just building up to the realization that AJ might be bi. Good stuff otherwise though.
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>>25554135
wait wtf I thought this was still 'you' still referred to Anon from the first story
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>>25560217
>>25560289
That is a completely different story here.
Also I announced (although only around two days ago) that all references to a person called "Anon" connected to the corruption of the main 7 through a medaillon is now supposed to be related to a completely different character, whose identity would be revealed after the AJ arc.

Let me admit the following: I wanted to take a break from the Sunset and Tennis thing 10 days ago, because despite me wanting to work on it, I got an headache. That and I hoped if I start some random alternate MC scenario, someone jumps on it and decides to do something else, because I got a bit tired of being one of only two people contributing something to that thread

(come on guys. I know you can do something too. And MLP is filled with MC related stuff)

I didn't even think of "wasting" time at creating dialogue and get into the emotional aspect of the corruption of Sunset and her friends first. I just wanted to create a "description" of a scenario instead of how it played out, so I could bust a nut to the idea of the Rainbooms being turned into sluts.

But by the time I got to think up something for Applejack, I realized there were no personality related weaknesses I could have easily exploited for her. Sunset I didn't even think of something first, Pinkie's naivity being exploited was what got her, Rarity's vanity and desire to be adored was hers, Fluttershy's was her insecurities.

For AJ I needed/wanted to create something from scratch and so this came up. Simultaneously I actually got an idea of "who" the character could be instead of a placement term for someones self insert fantasy (I honestly am not that much a fan of the "name" Anon for greentexts, I prefer it to be show related characters if possible), how the character could even be the master in that scenario and so on.
In other words, this idea escalated into a completely different idea, the more I worked on it. And frankly now I want to work on it.
(1/2)
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>>25560570
(2/2)
I don't feel severely limited in what "Sombra" in this story can do to the girls and other characters to get them, as I feel in the first one, where "Anon" still has some sort of morality that keeps him from just turning Sunset into a complete meat socket for his dick.

Sunset and Tennis allows me to write a scenario that has a sense of morality to it, which I miss in most MC scenarios.
This one allows me to be evil.
And I love it.

And I know it is not a sign of good writing to suddenly turn a writing style around like that or put a different identity on a character than previous posts may indicate (as the term "Anon" showed up to describe the master who got Fluttershy, Pinkie, Rarity and Sunset) but as this writing is pretty much spontaneous, I didn't want to immediately start from scratch again. But now that I actually have a "goal" for this story, I want to finish this thing over the course of the next weeks, while I will do my best to give the fans of the Sunset and Tennis thing also something. (sorry I leave you hanging like that)

Please, don't see this "rant" as me trying to shut you up. I just want to prevent that anyone gets confused as what the heck is going on. As such, here is a short overview also how this story is going to be, without going into too much detail:

- Following AJ's conquest, a pure story part explaining who this Sombra actually is. Is he the one from Equestria, this world's version of the King of Monsters or someone else? Warning, elements from the MLP comics will be integrated partly in that chapter.

- Dash and Twilight will both be conquered in their own respective "arcs". Twilight's will be significantly shorter from the AJ one, Dash may be longer cause I want to try out an idea involving subliminal messages.

- Drabbles involving the corruption of people close to the mane 7, just to increase the number of slaves for you guys to get off on.

- A final chapter involving the consequences of Sombra's victory.
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>>25560649
>that has a sense of morality to it, which I miss in most MC scenarios.
Dat like minded writefaggotry.
Same thing, and the same reason, I am doing with with mine.
Only my token sociopath is the father in the same story.

Haven't read the comics but from the info you gave this green sounds pretty interesting.
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>>25560702

frankly the comics do shit with the entire "Siege of the Crystal Empire" thing. Heck, I am actually going to ignore the events of that thing completely. But I need other elements from it for Sombra.
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>>25560712
I see.
Hope, it turns out good.

Now, back to staring at the reply box, occasionally typing.
and flipping back to youtube every so often.
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>>25560786
And now, back to the story.

Ressurection of the Nightmare King


>You were Sombra.
>The King of Monster. The usurper of the Crystal Empire. The Chosen One of the Umbrum.
>And you were dead.
>Blown into pieces by that cursed Crystal Heart.
>1000 years you had waited to escape the icy hell, in which the Alicorn sisters had banished you, just days after you had taken the throne from Princess Amore.
>Days after you had finally accepted your destiny as ruler of those twisted Crystal Ponies, ready to free your own people from their etheric prison. Days after your best friend betrayed you.
>You were ready. Ready to finally reclaim your throne and take revenge on those who banished you.
>But then something unexpected happened.
>A new Crystal Princess. A new Princess Amore, which dared to sit on your throne.
>Trying to protect those weak ponies she called her subjects.
>Subjects... slave was the better word for those pathetic lowlifes!
>And how fitting it was, that their princess was just as weak as them.
>At least Celestia and Luna had the power and skills to actually fight you. Her?
>All she could do was hide behind a forcefield!
>And even that wasn't enough to stop you from tormenting your slaves, just by existing.
>You were only a spectre, in need to absorb as much magic from the empire you could in order to regain physical form.
>And yet, you were so close of triumphing. In Discord's name, she couldn't even find the Crystal Heart, the only thing that by then could have stoped you, on her own.
>No. For that she needed the help of some other ponies.
>Some pathetic unicorn and a dragon baby.

How... HOW COULD YOU LOSE TO SOMEPONY LIKE THAT?!
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>>25561172

>This and other questions were tormenting, what was left of your mind.
>Cause although you were dead phyically... that didn't stop you from existing.
>Your consciousness was still in the land of the living, trapped in the only part of your body that was not evaporated by a wave of arcane pony magic.
>Your horn.
>The crimson red appendage of yours, through which you filtered your own dark magic.
>The mind twisting magic that allowed you to take over the Crystal Empire in the first place.
>In an effort to avoid your demise, you tried within the final seconds of your life to use one last spell to transfer your mind out of your body, so it could take over the nearest living creature that was, allowing you to take your revenge another day.
>But allas, despite your best effort to ignore the insufferable pain that was tormenting your body and mind at the moment of your death, you botchered it up.
>All you managed to do was to relocate and concentrate your consciousness in your horn.
>You were lucky, that it did not get destroyed with the rest of your body, cause otherwise you would have truly been dead.
>And yet, you had to wonder, wouldn't it have been better to die?
>Wouldn't it have been better to just pass on, instead of being now trapped within a broken piece of unicorn bone, stuck somewhere in the cold mountains of the far north, slowly succumbing to madness because of the isolation?
>At least that was something that would sometimes go through your...well, you didn't have a head anymore. So let's just say, mind?
>Yes.
>Just die.
>That was something, you would sometimes think.
>Just die.
>And prove those lowlifes they were victorious.
>That they had finally defeated you and could get the happily ever after, you were always denied.
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>>25561223
>It was at moments like that, you were thankful to be so full of hate.
>Hate.
>One of the many things those lowlifes were afraid of, when they were on the receiving end of it.
>They always hated you, because you were different. And they were proud of their hate.
>But then, when you showed them how much you hated them? Oh how they begged for mercy!
>But instead of mercy, you just laughed at them.
>Laughed at their suffering and their lack of understanding.
>Cause although they knew how to hate, they did not understand the true power of it.

>You see... hate makes you cunning. It fills you with pride. It makes you come up with plans. It fills you with anticipation for the time you are going to show it to all of them. When you are going to sing and dance on their graves and laugh at their misery. Hate makes you strong.

>But over everything... hate makes you patient.
>Patient enough to survive in the depths of the north's icy tundra for a millenia.
>And it made you patient enough, to wait your time again.
>Perhaps it would take centuries for somepony to finally stumble upon your remains, but when the time came, you would have the chance to take over said creatures body.
>then you would once more be walking this earth.
>And then, vengeance would be yours.
>But until then, all you had was your patience. And your hate.

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>You were Sombra.
>The last heir of the Umbrum family, one of the most influential gem trade companies on the planet and a former student of Crystal Prep, one of the most elite high schools in the state and the one place almost all the rich kids in Canterlot went to for education.

>And you were going to end Principal Cinch's life today.
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>>25561274

>Why?
>Because she was the one, who killed the only person you ever loved.
>Well, perhaps it was better to start from the beginning.
>You were Sombra Umbrum, and as such the youngest member of what was left of the world famous Umbrum family.
>A family of spanish origin, that over the course of two centuries had become the most influential factor in the international gem trade business.
>Your family was rich, with its company owning stocks and influence of almost every jewelry company in the world.
>But that doesn't mean, you were born rich.
>In fact, you spend the first 13 years of your life mostly in poverty.
>The reason for that was, that your mother was Ira Umbrum.
>The woman, that was banished from the family.
>Why? Because she dared to stand up against her parents. Dared to turn her back on a family, that earned its money not just by making sure jewelries would get their goods, but did pretty much everything to get their hands on said goods to begin with.
>Even if it meant making deals with some insane african warlords or other shaby individuals, who would trade the gems they had for weapons and other things.
>Your mother dared to have a conscience and so she defied the family business, deciding to rather be a part of normal life, instead of high society.
>She thought that she could live in the normal world, at the side of some random guy, that supposedly stole her heart and was making her happier than all the money in the world.
>Sounds disgustingly sweet, don't you think?
>Well, you didn't know what to think of it. Perhaps it was a sugarcoated tale defying real life, perhaps there was more to it, than the people you heard that story from would be willing to tell you.
>All you know is, that you never came to know them.
>See, you were less than a year old, being taken care off by some babysitter, when your parents had an accident with their car. They died instantly and with them, any hope for you to have a normal childhood.
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>>25561364
>Well... to be fair, your childhood wasn't that terrible.
>You didn't end up with some evil relatives (at first at least) or friends of your parents, who would abuse you till early teenhood.
>Instead you were send to an orphanage, where people took good care for you.
>The "Sister's of Saint Lauren" was the place called, where you spend the first 13 years of your life, protected and educated by some of the kindest people you would ever know in life.
>Unfortunately, as far as things went, they seemed the only one caring for you.
>You didn't have any friends really in that time.
>Other kids would either treat you as strange (for reasons you did not understand yourself) or if they were your friends, would sooner or later be adopted and eventually leave you.
>And then, one day when you were 13, that life ended.
>One day a few men in fine suits showed up at the door of the orphanage.
>they started to ask the nuns and you questions. Where you came from, who your parents were and if you ever heard of the Umbrum family.
>As it turned out, they were private detectives, hired by the Umbrum family to find you. Or rather what was left of the family.
>As you learnt, over the last 13 years, most of your relatives had died, reducing the main family to just two people: Your grandmother Rabia, an old senile hag who clinged to life like a flea on a dog and your uncle Disimulo, brother to your mom.
>They told you they were looking for you, ever since they learnt of your poor mom's demise.
>that they only learnt about it months after, cause your mom had broken up every contact in the slightest, to the point she had changed her maidenname, making it harder for the authorities to find out about who you belonged to.
>A lie, as you would find out over the next years.
>The truth was, they knew of their daughter's death and your existence.
>they just didn't care. For them, you were part of the branche that had to be cut off.
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>>25561500

>In fact, the one who was truly looking for you at this point? Your uncle, as your grandmother could have cared less for you in her state of mind.
>And the reason why he was looking for you, was not out of generosity.
>See, the major shareholders of your family business were your grandfather and his wife.
>After grandfather died, his shares would go to his children, of which only Disimulo was still there.
>But grandfather was just as much of a bastard, as the rest of the clan.
>As you would learn much later in life, grandfather knew his dear son was after his inheritance AND that he pretty much had over the years done a lot of things to keep him and his wife unaware of your mother's fate.
>All just to keep you out of the equation.
>But it seemed grandfather turned soft in the last months of his life.
>He wanted to make amends with his daughter and as such did research.
>He found out about what happened to his dear Ira, and he found out about you.
>But with the grim reaper knocking at his door and not sure what to do with you, he decided to make you his unknowing pawn in a little revenge against his son.
>He declared in his testament, that the only way how his son would get his shares was, if he would be the legal guardian of a biological offspring of the family. He had either one year to find an offspring, or make one.
>And something your grandfather also knew, which your uncle tried to hide from the public for so long, he didn't think anyone else knew about it, your uncle was infertile.
>In other words, grandfather forced your uncle into finding you, after he had already stoped looking after you, following his sister's death.
>All so he could get a percentage of the company, that didn't even amount to the majority.
>Considering what a bastard your uncle would turn out to be, you would have probably laughed at just how spiteful your dear grandfather was.
>But back then, you didn't care for that.
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>>25562590

>All you cared about was the revelation, that you actually had a family.
>You were not alone on this world.
>As such, when you met your uncle and grandmother, you were actually excited.
>Moreso even as you learnt of your heritage.
>Finally your life seemed to turn around for the better.
>But soon after the adoption was over and you were introduced in high society, you started to see the dirt hiding behind the facade.
>It took some time, but you learnt of why your uncle adopted you in the first place and just how despicable your family and the people associating with you could be.
>But what should you do? They were your family.
>And as much as you missed some of the people at the orphanage, you did not want to be alone like that again.
>As such, you learnt to just deal with it.
>Deal with the fact that despite you and your uncle living under the same roof, you would pretty much live separate lives.
>He would always be busy with the business, trying his best to hide the fact he was just waiting for grandmother to die so he would get full control of the corporation, while you... well, what did you even do? You lived.
>You lived under the same roof, particpated in dull high society parties and went to the most elite school in the city you moved in, when you got adopted; Crystal Prep of Canterlot.
>That, and you spend time with grandmother.
>Cause despite her being one of the most evil persons you would ever know of existing, she was also fascinating.
>See, despite her being quite demented by the time you would return to the family as the lost son, she was actually a rather intelligent, cunning, manipulative fiend.
>Sure, she would forget names, talk to you sometimes as if you were a complete stranger, when she wasn't mistaking you for one of her already dead brothers, was most of the time bedridden or stuck to some oxygen bottle, but then there were also these episodes of pure clarity.

(God, I really hope that sounds halfway decent as villain "origin")
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>>25562706

>These episodes either showed always up when it came to business, making it hard for your uncle to convince any other members of the corporation's board to just force her into retirement, as she would always make better decisions than any of them, or sometimes when you were visiting her.
>During said moments, she would teach you how to read people. What you had to look at in their faces and body language to know, when you were hitting nerves during a conversation. >As she would put it often, when you knew how people worked, you could make the entire world your kingdom by just chosing the right words.
>She would teach you about the business, your family's history and just spill out all the little beans about some of the most influential people out there, you could use for yourself later in life.
>And sometimes, in the last weeks before she passed away (you were only 15 at this point) she would also actually start to recognize you as the person you truly were.
>You never quite knew, if at such moments she actually showed a grandmother's affection for her grandson, or contempt for who you are and what you represented.
>Part of what made it so hard for you to be certain was, that she still was evil.
>She would not just teach you how to manipulate others, she would manipulate.
>She would tell you in her less lucid moments all the little dirty secrets of her own past, express her latent racism independent of her state of mind and just express a level of misanthropy, you didn't even think could be expressed by such a fragile woman.
>And the "worst" thing was, that she had no shame in all of it.
>She was proud of her past and the lives she may have destroyed to get where she was now.
>As a decent human being, you couldn't feel something else than disgust for this woman.
>And yet, in a bizarre way, you were fascinated by her intelligence, past achievements and just her devotion to who she truly was.
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>>25562861

>She may have been family, but you just couldn't love her. That said, you still couldn't help yourself but just be impressed what she was capable off, even if her brain turned into swiss cheese with each passing day.
>And then, when death finally reunited her with your grandfather, she actually showed, that somehow she must have cared for you.
>Turned out, that instead of your uncle, who was certain that now he would get complete control of business and could then just shove you off to some private school before cutting you off completely, YOU would be the one who got her shares of the corporation.
>In other words, by the time you would come off age, you would be the head of the corporation, making your uncle a slave to your decisions.
>In a bizare way, grandmother managed to secure your future for the next couple of years.
>The flipside to that was, that it now made your uncle despise you just more.
>Understandable, really. How would you feel, when your own mother would screw you over for a boy she would mistake most of the time for "Uncle Lapis", who died 35 years ago in something involving a lot of cocaine, whorses and a chainsaw.
>he wanted to have you out of his house, but now he had to tolerate you till he would find an alternate way to get rid of you.
>See,murder would be the obvious solution. But that was actually out of the equation.
>In an attempt to screw her son over even more, grandmother enacted that if you should die BEFORE the age of 25 under any circumstances, your shares would be split up under some charities.
>And surprisingly enough, said mandate was actually legit in the law's eyes.
>So at least for the next decade, your survival was actually not endangered by your uncle, if he ever wanted to get the whole pie instead of just a big slice of it.
>Why only ten years, you would never quite understand back then.
>did she think that by then you would finally be just as ruthless as she was and find a way to deal with your uncle yourself?
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BOOP
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>>25563040
Liking the backstory but what does pony Sombra have to do with it?
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>>25564344
Have you even read the story? >>25554135
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>>25564344
You are going to see.

The seed has been planted. Right now I am actually writing out the thing more and I am already at aroundd 9 pages (counting what I already posted regarding Sombra and focusing in the last pages on the final part of the backstory). I assume it will be rather long in the end, but I will load it up in parts the moment I am finished with at least the first third.
I have to admit, I feel actually a bit proud of it.
Especially the part about pony Sombra and what hatred means to him, which is partly inspired by a theater play.
Heck, one main inspiration for me in writing that thing right now is a certain gothic musical I am a fan of.

>>25564388
Now just wait a second. His question is more than justified, as what I have posted so far does not directly link both Sombras so far.

But we come to that, I promise.And then things hopefully make sense.
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>>25564489
Oops I misread the post, this is what happens when I drink.

Anyway I have an idea where pony Sombra comes into it but I will wait and see if my theory are correct or not.
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>hypnotism

Never understood the appeal of a 110% submissive partner. At that point you'd be better off with a blow-up sex doll.
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Okay, an offer:
I would like to hear an opinion regarding the style in a certain part I ahve just writen.
It is supposed to be further down the line from what is going on now, so I will set it in spoilers. Still care for giving me feedback?
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My, my... another thread here? Perhaps I can dust off my writefag fingers at some point; all I need is a bit of inspiration... unfortunately, some harsh critique threw me off my game the last time I made a story in a topic like this; not quite sure I want to continue it, but feel free to ask; even now, I'm still proud of what I did manage to get through.
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>>25564949
Go for it.
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>>25551988
Jesus christ.
What's with all the shit posts all of a sudden?
Not even 50 minutes and the thread is already on page 9.
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>>25567921


>Looking into the mirror above the fireplace, you took a closer look at yourself.
>Your FACE was still the SaMe and yet... it felt so difFeReNt.
>You/YOU were wondering what it meant, as all off sudden, you suffered a massive headache.
>Closing YOUR eyes and SUPPORTING YOURSELF on the fireplace's table, YOU felt your head assaulted by a flood of memories.
>Memories of your life in the orphanage, with your family, of Hope/Hope, the Crystal Empire...
>Wait, you thought for a second. That was not...
>...your imprisonment in the northern tundra...
>Two lifetimes worth of memories were crashing down on you in an instant.
>But as sudden as they had come, they were also gone.
>Now you were here. Your uncle's house.
>And you finally realized, who you were.
>And it made you chuckle in sadistic joy.


Part 1
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>>25569311
Part 2

>With a newfound confidence, you turned around, looking at the remains of the latest victim you claimed, slowly walking towards him.
>"You were right, uncle", you declared, looking down on the corpse of the man who made your life a hell for so long. "I was weak. But now... "
>You grabed after the corpse and pulled it up to your face.
>Ignoring the blood dripping down on your hands, you looked him into the cold dead eyes. >Your teeth fletched, you shouted into his dead face the following words.
"...I AM STRONGER THAN I EVER WAS!""
>Without missing a beat, you threw his remains into the fireplace and watched them being slowly set afflame.
>Less than six hours ago, the sight of your uncle's body slowly burning away, accompanied by the stench of dead burning meat, would have made you gag.
>But now?
>Now you just stood there in triumph, enjoying your victory over the man whose existence filled you with so much rage.
>Another lowlife that didn't deserve to exist in the first place.
>"How is that for being a weakling, uncle?", you asked. "You were just like all the others. Considering yourself better than me! But now? Where did it lead you? You are dead, uncle. And I live!"
>The face of your uncle had at that moment already taken severe burns, his hair slowly melting away in its heat.
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>>25569331
Part 3

>"You know why? Because this has always been my destiny. To survive those who think they are better than me. To make them suffer. To destroy those who oppose me and rule over the rest of them all as their master!"
>You felt your body tremble, as you stood there, finally accepting what you were always meant to be.
>"Let me promise you this one thing, uncle: From this day on, I will never again be anyones pawn. I will never again let others dare to disrespect me. I will be strong. I will make them kneel before me. My name will soon be known all over this and any other world as a synonyme for power and suffering. I will plunder the heavens blind and steal from all the celestial gods. I will take from all mankind and conquer against all odds. My name will forever live in infamy!"
>You felt ecstatic, as you watched the last bits of your relative's skin turn into a dark crisp.
"I am Sombra, heir to the Umbrum family, King of the Crystal Empire...EMPEROR OF DARKNESS!"
>Exhausted, you took a seat in the second chair, the flames of the fireplace throwing sinister shadows against your face. "And this world and Equestria are going to be mine!"

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Don't know if there will be a major update today, work is calling.
But if the thread dies, I copied everything I have writen so far. So worst case scenario, there should be a green up soon on patebin and I will continue this story in another thread.

In the meantime, have some Sombra and Fluttershy MC pic
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bump.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKhEVBaIVrQ
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>>25569341
Gotta say wasn't expecting murder but i'm not complaining
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Bump before bed.
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boop
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