Angel Cop Scanlation

Any Jews in this one?

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>>14923775
Naw, just evil Americans

>>14923701
YES YES YES YES YES

>>14923808
Angel is cute!
CUTE!

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I guess there are a few things I need to say about the last few pages.

First: Aikawa keeps mentioning Japanese Television shows, that never made it abroad and I'm really not sure, if I translated the titles right. I'm actually not sure I correctly translated anything that Aikawa wrote. That guy is a menace with a keyboard.

Second: the format I choose to represent that wall of text that is the production report seemed like a really good idea at the time. Now I wanna hit myself with a banana until I lose consciousness. Oh well.

If you got time on your hands, pls feel free to heap lots and lots of criticism on this thread. Need to know how to improve. I will read it tomorrow. Good night /m/

>>14923988

frankly I don't know what could be improved

>>14923988
do you have a name or blog or anything? I wish to add to mangaupdates for more people to get to read.

also, post on batoto.

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>>14923988
Also, if you want to do it again with 2 volumes, there is two volumes left of Linebarrels of Iron to conclude, there is already a tl

>>14919032

>>14923701
Fantastic work!

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>>14923988
>>14924281
here, finished reading.

Never watched the anime but this manga felt like a live action police movie, would be really cool to see this adapted to live action, even more than Ghost in the Shell.

Now about the scanlation job, That I am a newbie too, not even using photoshop but paint ultimate always use outlined text when the text goes over the image, it was kinda hard to read the first pages because the text was white. Also try to make the text like a pyramid in the mirror. Also using other fonts is cool and using bigger fonts in laughing is important. Pay attention for the baloons, if its a screaming baloon, you can make the text bold.

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>>14924416
look this page I typesetted, the text in the first panels are cool but in the last they are not so good and not looking like a pyramid in a mirror:

/ \
\ /

kinda like this, at least is the way I like to read the text.

What fonts do you use? I've been digging through free fonts and there's lots of interesting stuff if you want to make a sign or poster but not so much for pages of dialogue in speech bubbles.

>>14923701
Awesome, thank you!

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>>14924429
>>14924424
Here I use CC Astro City Int, CC Wild Words Int, Anime Ace, Edo for screaming like here> >14924416, Krysten itc for text outside the bubble like in this last pane >>14924424

>>14924424
Your text is too large for the bubbles. Also, use smooth or strong anti-aliasing for your text.

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>>14924281
No name. Just anonymous. I was orignally only the translator. I did it for shits and giggles, cause /m/ was really pining for angel some while back. But then nobody went in for the scanlation, so I learned photoshop and did it myself. I'm not really attached to this. Someone wanna upload it anywhere or make a torrent, pls feel free. Actually pls do, I don't know Jack about things like that.

>>14924416
About the live action bit, there is some explanation for that in the commentary and postscript at the end of the volume. pic related

thanks for the tips

>>14923701
Thanks, /m/ate. Last time when it was posted I couldn't save it in time.
Once again, thanks you for compiling it.

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>>14924672
I use anti-aliasing but like I said before, I dont use photoshop. My tool is Ultimate Paint, there are some limitations.

And I prefer large texts over tiny ones.

>>14923701
Thanks. Been waiting for this.

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>>14925409
>correctly sized text != tiny
>overly large text != good
>using a bad program != excuse

>>14926824
cute!

>>14923701
Oh shit, nice.
Thanks dude!

>>14923701
>File expired

>>14927136
So yeah, dropfile expired. Does anyone in /m/ wanna make a torrent of the thing or something?
Re-up?

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Wow, I just read through this, and it sorta sucked

Nice art though, Angel a cute

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>>14923701
Why you gotta raise my hopes up just to crush them in an instant?

>>14927372
re-upload
dropfile to/VLO2dRO

I put on batoto and mangaupdates but they did not accept, it was my first time though, if anyone here know the drills put there.

>>14923701
I made a .cbz format version. If anyone wants it in that format I can post a link.

>>14927746
Isn't cbz just a zip archive with different filename extension though, what's the point?
Also, please put it on mega or something so link wouldn't die in a day.

>>14928219
Pomf.cat works too.

So there's no /pol/-tier talking shit about the jews in this, is there?
Not interested otherwise.

>>14928230
>Max upload size is 75MiB
Not in this case I think.

>>14928249
there was no /pol/-tier anything in the OVA either, the reference to jewish bankers was almost incidental

>>14930184
>The five minute spiel about Jews destroying and controlling the US and seeking to do the same to Japan was almost incidental.

>>14930233
Yes, it's rushed as fuck and not the focus of the movie.

Also the fact that they're jews has no racist undertones.

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>>14927239
CUTE!

>>14930184
>>14930254
Uhmm

>>14927239
the cutest robocop

I gotta be honest: I kinda miss the brain rape

Today I have felt the feeling of being too old and too rich for something for the first time.

>>14931419
what?

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>>14931203
>the cutest robocop
>not Lady Battle Cop

>>14933368
no bandaid
no cute

Bumping. Also the download link expired.

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>>14930286

>>14930286
Uggly

>>14923701
Some of your dialogue is a little stiff, like "fan the anxiety in the populace" when you could've used "make people/masses more nervous/anxious". If your mother tongue is English, re-reading a line and asking yourself "Would a normal person say this?" is a really good way to make your translations sound more natural. I would also use "drop their guard" because it's more common than "showing their tails"

>>14923706
For this page, you have a very common problem with Japanese translation and はい being a valid response for any and every question. Remember to translate in context: "And there's one more thing" usually elicits a response of "What is it?" "...which is?" or even "Being...?" Instead of "Yes?"

>>14923717
It starts being noticeable from this page, but contractions are usually used in conversation "we will=we'll" and so on. Unless it's a news report or you're trying to make a character sound foreign, contractions are usually used.

>>14944130
Other people in the thread have mentioned it already, but typesetting is more than just placing text in the bubbles. Think about size relative to the other lines on the page (larger/smaller text gives off an impression that the character is yelling/whispering), try to keep the text in a box or oval shape and avoid cutting short words in half (makes it easier to read).
It's a good start, keep up the nice work!

>>14944127
>>14944130
>>14944157
Fuck off, no one wants your opinions. Not even OP. He did a fine job and your suggestions are shit.

>>14944631
Oh shut up

>>14944127
I'm not a native english speaker, so this helps quite a bit

>>14944130
I assumed that not using a contraction would put emphasis on the "will" there. At least that's how I would read it

>>14944127
>"fan the anxiety in the populace" when you could've used "make people/masses more nervous/anxious"
Some of the worst advice I've seen. Your line is significantly worse than his, aside from his grammatical error. The line should be
>fan anxiety in the populace
or even
>spread anxiety throughout the populace
or whatever would work best in context.
But definitely NOT
>make people more nervous
This is Elementary tier sentence construction.

>For this page, you have a very common problem with Japanese translation and はい being a valid response for any and every question. Remember to translate in context: "And there's one more thing" usually elicits a response of "What is it?" "...which is?" or even "Being...?" Instead of "Yes?"
No no NO. His translation was perfectly fine, more fitting and even more natural than most of what you're proposing.

3/10 see me after class, mister.

>>14945072
Cuck

>>14945190
Actual criticism? So why didn't you post this the first time? Why the shitpos-...oh, cause 4chan. Nevermind.

Lieutenant Newfag, signing off

>>14945190
I thought the Moon Dwellers translation was perfectly fine.

>>14942128
poor Raiden

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>>14923808
>>14949370

>>14948844
that's a lotta high-cut