/m/vn

How the fuck did underboob girl get her panties on like that.

One side is under the garter, the other is over. What the christ

>>13869351
I'm curious about this as well

Learn to just think nothing will ever get done. It makes life less disappointing, and occasionally surprisingly pleasant.

>>13869408
the only thing that gets done is when we all pitch in 1 cell, and we all know how that turns out

Why did the threads stop? Hit a brick wall?

>>13869421
Yeah it's great
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cf_lDST4Q84

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artist-kun here

the project was on hiatus because i was studying for finals but it's over now.

so if anyone wants to continue the project, let's make another thread.

>>13869389
>One side is under the garter, the other is over. What the christ

she puts on one garter
puts on her panties
puts on the second garter

duh

>>13869455
Anyone have a link to the old Google doc?

>>13869455
did you ever get around to drawing lewds?

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>>13869475

General Ideas Info and Bios
http://tinyurl(d0t)com/oa9ba68

General Mecha Details and Lore:
tinyurl(d0t)com/ks9u9pl

Project Art:
http://tinyurl(d0t)com/obk5bad

not sure if it's updated

>>13869467
just like my chinese cartoons

>>13869504
Probably not updated since it's been MIA for so long. Thanks though.

>>13869351
>>13869455
wow I feel kinda bad for not making this thread earlier,I had a thought to but forgot.
Anyway Artist-kun how have you guys been working on it outside of 4chan

>>13869435
As far as I remeber the last time I was lurking there was a lot of shitposting and got nowhere. That's a shame because some desings of the mechs were really good.

>>13869504
There was an alpha released do you have a link to it?
If not I can try and upload it somewhere

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>>13869893
I don't have the demo on my computer, HOWEVER I do have Script. Dev-anon sent me a link to it a while back... almost a year ago I think.

>>13869933
Okay,I'll try and upload it somewhere,I don't do it to often so it'll take a while

>>13869816
>some designs of the mechs were really good
>blatant ripoffs of existing /m/ designs
>good

>>13869968
Hey they got some decent stuff done for a /m/ project also I remember some of those ripoffs being obvious on purpose like the obari stuff,it was a type of homage like how you see anime reference 0079 once in a while

>>13869983

Something being on purpose like a homage doesn't make it any less garbage.

>>13869995
Why? Is that including all works references to other works in media

>>13870002

Because it involves no creativity or originality and serves no purpose but worthless masturbation over something somebody likes.

If you build it they will come.

Here's The Demo guys I packed it all into a rar file
https://mega.nz/#!BZsEzbwI!bAvd2Ej9b7t8uoXpM1eGomoWRLlu8nQrxZEREX5YHAg

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Personal Favorite

>>13869351

One can only hope. Retarded weeaboos glorifying and making use of the worst medium of Jap entertainment need to be culled.

>>13870134
Too soon to get your hopes up. So much critical acclaim you'd swear we're rustling jimmies.

I see /m/ is still the same cesspool, never change guys. What is mecha these days anyways?

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>>13870198
>What is mecha these days anyways?
Karate Bugmen

>>13870134
Why so much hate anon?

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>>13870134

Let's just keep drawing like old times.

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>>13869351
it will live, if there's more Lune's art.

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>>13869494
yeah, but drawing takes time

at the very least i want it to look better than katawa shojou

>>13870746
The next best thing is to just turn it into a comic and save time and resources. That's what Blackhook did for his Mega Man fangame concept (but with sprites).

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>>13869504
Why not just put the garters on first, then the panties?

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>>13870928
Why put on the panties at all?

>>13870134

you're thinking of light novels, friend

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Now that we're back on topic, let's discuss what really matters: Improvements on design choice.

We actually left off with our older bro-tier pilot Lt.Oz. Concept samples shown below.

Dont you guys have a chatroom for this stuff? I think itd be better for discussion while using threads to publicly show progress.

>>13871304
did you forgot that gundam highschool threads

>>13871295
This is pretty much what the project needs. Put up an IRC channel, use it to get some organization going. If the script is on a Google doc, every thread should start with a link to it and it should be shared as open for comments.

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>>13871304
Strike girl was really the best thing to come out of that.

>>13871367
Is this yours?
You mite be a genius m8.

>>13871367
>>13871400
huh yeah i made that. i also draw Epyon

>>13871367
Oh lawdy yes please

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>>13871429

>>13871135
Lock-On as fuck. Are we supposed to choose a letter here? I like B.

>>13871135
B or C

>>13871367
>>13871458
I should've saved more of these now it's all lost, I think. I can't remember if it happened before the archive got shut down

>>13871458
Do you think Wing Zero is one of those holier-than-thou types?

>>13871602
with angel wings on maybe

>>13871598
If you are the drawfag then you just need to draw more.

>>13871608
I would but I don't have any digital drawing tools, plus it takes a while to learn to switch from physical to digital mediums,I plan to get around to it soon though

>>13869389
>>13869393
Put one leg into the panties and pull them up
Put on your garters
Put your other leg into the panties and finish pulling them up.

Was this a project that died and is now getting revived or something?

>>13872670
nah it's still alive it was just on hiatus
basically it's a Mecha VN made by a group on /m/ that started as a joke, but became something with actual promise.
it's basically a mecha-themed VN with some references to other works here and there. I'm hoping it turns out good,it could be /m/'s Kawata Shoujo

>>13871135
This guy looks like BTFO material.

Does he get BTFO at some point?

>>13871365
Join us on IRC:

http://irc.lc/rizon/mvn

>>13869968
>>13869995
>>13870016
>>13870134
Well done, devs! You've made your first grumpus. Making enough headway with a project that people start to sneer at it to validate themselves is an important step!

Keep it up and some day you'll have a full release for them to decry.

>>13872727
probably,I can see him dying a glorified death by sacrificing himself in a kamakazi so his kouhais can live on

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>>13871135
>>13871510
>>13872727
>>13873031

For the record, Lt. Oz's original design was based on Russell Crowe as Maximus.

>>13872728
Aw, the IRC doesnt work on my phone and i cant get to a computer for a week

If you don't make any progress I will be forced to inform the Moon Sahibs of your failure.

You don't want to piss off the Moon Sahibs.

>>13874846
So, what did they do to you, exactly?

>>13874897

moon you.

>>13869351
You're silly if you thought that would ever go anywhere.

>>13869389
King Crimson

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>>13869968
>blatant ripoffs of existing /m/ designs
>bad

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>>13869351

bump

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>>13874846
ojii-san pls go

bump for more Lune.

>>13871135
Hard to say, but B is slightly above C and both are way above A. All three are better than what we were using before, though...

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>>13870134

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>>13881396
TOH!

>>13871135

B is definitely how I imagined Oz' design in this style. But A looks like a nice design for some other character. Maybe Alega Lex?

Also, love that this is back!

>>13871458
So uh, is there an design for WZ

>>13871135
A's design compliments the mech the best, but I have no idea what the character is like, so who knows.

>>13870746
Man as long as it gets made eventually its fine. But no one will be happy till its done.
I learned that from being a scanlation cleaner for multiple summers.

>>13884945
I'm just here for the pics man. The guy drawing them has a style I really like. So as long as more gets drawn I don't care about any vn getting finished or whatever.

>>13870016
>>13869995
Mazinger was based on Mao Dante. Garbage mecha design if you ask me.

There's also apparently some mecha VN the recently passed Greenlight on Steam called The Stargazers. Don't know if it's any good though.

>>13871135
B

>>13886437
Also
Sunrider: Mask of Arcadius http://store.steampowered.com/app/313730
ACE Academy https://youtu.be/8zy6osN5Ir0

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>>13884054
>A looks like a nice design for some other character. Maybe Alega Lex?

maybe i'll do that. there's also random thoughts making the other guy into a shota

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>>13891264

more like this

>>13891298
beautiful

Can i ask wtf is this thread about?

>>13869436
What happened to the Mazinger one?

>>13894908
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ibthRmtLM9trnZApABe5NSjLwsknu6YJQ0DSsrjEknE/edit?usp=sharing

>>13872728
Join this

>>13894920
Seems Archivist has it dead

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>>13894908
making VN and stuffs

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>>13891298

>>13894908

Making a waifu light novel with sci-fi and /m/ sprinkles for flavor.

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>>13894908

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>>13901434
but it is

>actually competant artist drawing and posting on 4chan
not that I just found out about this, but browsing /h/drawfag threads reminds me of how un self aware some people can be online, this is miles better than your average online fanart poster
porn when

>>13884061
Preferably with her pleasing old men for money and new parts.

>>13903529
This image explains literally everything. Nice work!

>>13898237
>literally everyrhing /m/ hates and the so called cancer of anime + robots
>completely unironic

And i thought /v/ had flip flopping opinions

>>13907923
Considering that /m/ doesn't have any personality of it's own and just regurgitates whatever everyone else says I'm not surprised.

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>>13903529
touche.

more Lune's art when?

>>13886437
>VN is finished (hah)
>somehow manages to publish it on steam

>>13908754
Think of it senpai
It could be the next Katawa Shoujo or at the very least the next John Cena's Sexy High School Adventure

>>13908761
>implying you can ever go over BMJ's Sexy Adventure

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>>13908692
I have some from ye olde threads. Puru Sarah.

>>13907939
Maybe /m/ isn't one person.

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>>13910401
have most of the past folder, prefer something newer.
there's no brakes in Lune fascination.

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>>13908692
We do have other characters to work on too, let's not forget we want the mechs to be in line with each personality. Or at least you know attempt it.

I had a thought:
>Each route features EXALD being upgraded with tech from the featured heroine's prototype mech.
>The final "harem" route has Perfect EXALD, which combines all the tech advancements into one unit.
>Daibarion is meant to have an incredible power source, but a frame that can't keep up, meaning it tears itself apart whenever it uses its weapons.

What if Daibarion's issue is that it builds up too many Plot Particles with no way of venting them... and one of the other mech prototypes has a propulsion system based on venting Plot Particles?
Then P-EX could use Daibarion's power source, but with vents all over its frame, making it almost as powerful as Daibarion but also super-fast? It would also be an easy way to distinguish P-EX's design from the original model, since you can make it look a lot like the EXALD then cover it in energy wings.

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>>13912920
Right because most of the battles are in the vacuum of space, which prevents all convection.

If heat is being generated at a faster rate than it is dissipated, it will surely overheat until inoperable. Usually the only means to vent is with even more radiation.

It could work, the visible particle exchange rates make up for the usage. It seems like the V2 and Destiny's Wings of Light (Voiture Lumiere is more for propulsion). I suppose it would be the "End all" unit.

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Has the Casaba Howitzer weapon been written up yet?

>>13913071
I wouldn't want to carry them around everywhere. Remote satellite weapons systems for sniping battleships, sure.

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>>13916471
Why not? I mean, shouldn't every /m/echa fan be able to appreciate the idea of carrying an enclosed nuclear blast chamber incapable of fully containing the bomb when fired?

SOLOMON! I HAVE RETURNED!

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>>13912920
>games that force harem route as the true ending
Pretty sad that monogamy is a dying ideal desu

That being said the idea itself is solid. I'd rather it be a plot particle or something rather than pure heat. I feel like there would be too many workarounds for heat transfer but with a plot particle you can just say "it needs Plotonium to vent the plot particles correctly" and the reader just has to go "well, can't argue with that".

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>>13912889
welp, fine.

i would wait for new Lune's art, while you guys work on other things.

What is dead may never die

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>>13921411
just you wait then

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>>13926748

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>>13895044
>Erlidia -
5th Unit of EX-ALT
The fruit of labor and many improvised new technologies. Improved stability from the predecessor Elegia model. The predominant reinforced right arm is able to connect with it's unique polearm weapon "Frunze" providing enormous defensive and offensive ability. Piloted by Alega Lex male rival pilot

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>>13926778

>>13926748
Not scruff enough for me, you could make him older-looking or more worn

>>13926778
That better be a reverse trap

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more stuff for super route

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>>13927463
anon that's a boy

>>13929342
Failed potential.

>>13929337
>大黒天
Nice name, faggot
Are you 12? What is this

There should be a route where every boy fugs every girl.

>>13926778
>>13929342
>draw a girl
>call it a boy

also bump

>>13926748
Less scruff
More gruff

>>13929337
Looks like a combination between Daizengar and Linebarrel.

>>13929337
Not particularly enticing, seconding >>13929352
>>13936994
>Daizengar
Not in the slightest. It's just Linebarrel+Deus.

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Is there gonna be powered armor?

>>13926748
Needs more gruff.

>>13869436
Holy fuck I lost something and I'm never getting it back
Ten outta fucking Ten

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>>13937830
They're there, just not in the limelight.

>>13941322
>toned down Halo armor
I like it

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SARAH ON THE FRONT PAGE!

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>>13942755

She is the miracle of the setting. Please more!

SRW Confirmed.

More VNs to market, a campaign like such is not impossible:

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/cccn/quantum-suicide-a-visual-novel-in-space-kill-or-be/description

Many assets are still needed to complete the pipedream. All of the art and resources needed is either going to require many individuals or a reasonable amount of funding.

>>13943353
As much as I like the idea, I wouldn't fund until I see significant progress posted on here, especially the story. Money may be able to make visuals and music look better can't fix a bad production team. But there's a big difference between >they do it for free and a kickstarter-funded project. Whether the team wants to keep it unfunded or not is their choice.

>>13943406
>as much as I like the idea
The idea being the idea of a mecha visual novel, not the idea of it being funded like that. I want to be clear about that.

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>>13942869

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>>13943406
>>13943413

I'd say /m/ is the least progressive place to be. If it wasn't for our very underrated yet determined artist and writer there wouldn't be much of anything to show.

Aside from the samples that we allow to leak out there isn't even much motivation for anyone new to try their hand at submissions or concepts. This has been ongoing since last year. No one even wants to get their hands dirty without a lump sum or fees.

The love for mecha will only get us so far. This project is a very huge task and I can't see it meeting goals if not treated and managed like a paying job.

Personally I just want to nail the mecha feels parody without taking itself too serious and give the player a sense of real choices and decision logic. Pretty backgrounds, complementary music and themes, with an interesting GUI for the Comm relays and dialogue via military channels. Who doesn't want to text with Izumi?.

We have discussed and almost want a website instead so we can actually publish or at least not have to worry about misinformation, miscommunication or missed opportunities to show more interest. And perhaps contain shit post.

And thank you based anon for drawing grunts. We like grunts too. Pic related

>>13943548
You want money, but you have nothing to offer. What you need to do is release a small, very contained sample of the game. Put together one scene and release it. Then you'll get your funding.

>>13943561
I have the game demo still. It's a few sprites away from complete I'm looking at you Oz!. I'd like to replace the tacky backgrounds and have at least a reasonable soundtrack for the ship interior.

>>13943567

As for soundtrack a generous anon made us these but mentioned he didn't actually own the software to create said soundtracks. Likely to use the first for the interior theme.

Music Samples

>Another Day in the Big A-Standard BGM
http://a.pomf.se/hbogmh.mp3

>Memories and Smiles never lost-Gallery BGM
http://a.pomf.se/fyofcx.mp3

>The Groovy Parfait from Outer Space-Living Quarters Cafè BGM
http://a.pomf.se/zyjbew.mp3

>Also, generic love scene BGM
http://a.pomf.se/biukjl.mp3

>Der Riese-Theme of Lloyd Reinhart
http://a.pomf.se/ozxazj.mp3

>Have a remix of Lloyd's theme
http://a.pomf.se/wqccsc.mp3

>Enemy Immunis
https://d.maxfile.ro/abgzkittnf.mp3

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>>13869351
It went the way of /m/tg, I'm sure.

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The anon who drew >>13943548 here, was wondering if you guys needed any designs hammered out or finalized from rough versions. Will reply in a couple hours after work, may be trapped if the snowstorm comes though

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>/m/ wants to make a vn
>by taking every tired mecha trope and cliche A to A and B to B and stuffing it into one package like its some kind of checklist
This is why mecha is niche these days. No one does anything original, and the fact that a bunch of /m/aggots are doing the same thing with their own project shows a lot about the genre as a whole.
At least the art is good

What's the story and premise anyway? No tl;dr, keep it short.

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>>13943617
Now is the best time to hammer our designs as we need it to remain interesting. Often its the smaller details that make the artwork stand out.

We have a very solid idea for the Earth models and production line but a larger challenge was closing the gap for the Jupiter and Deep Orbit mecha. We have annals of power armor and the design philosophy was favored to be more utilitarian.

Initially the design was to keep the mono-eye units but with a central rotating optic. The Graze now reminds me of the ideas we had but now I would like to see redesigns and lose the Nazi-themed enemies in favor for something more practical.

Bad mooks unit name pending

>>13943660
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ibthRmtLM9trnZApABe5NSjLwsknu6YJQ0DSsrjEknE/edit?usp=sharing

If you join
>http://irc.lc/rizon/mvn
You can read small samples of script.

>>13943672
is that the only Jupiter mech so far? Is there a link to the complete list of mechs? (or that picture that was in one of the older threads)

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>>13943699
Most the Jupiter forces is in relative sketches I will have to search for. We do have the preceding power armor designs that we'd like to see incorporated with the different mechs.

Sarah and Lilah are the exceptions as their piloting abilities call for extremely precise modifications for their unique abilities

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>>13943734
Another smaller armor.

I would say of the 3 factions Jupiter needs the most love.

why does everything gundam

>>13943691
How much of the script is complete?

>>13943691
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cnq3ZsHndirvOlWz0UMfpaIOzhMcgb99DS0mAffaLyc/edit?usp=sharing

Oh there was that one short story too. I lost the actual pastebin.

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>>13943784
Currently writing Huey then next is Sarah's intro. Wrapping up the first chapter. There is one important choice so far. Enough to make a prologue and demo.

I can't help but notice that there are some people who post in these threads for the sole reason of discouraging and trash-talking the people working on the project. It makes me sad.

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>>13943747
:)?

>>13943870
The same thing happened with KS.
Then again, KS wasn't just a homage to /a/ memes.

>>13943785
You need to get a better writer. Preferably one that actually knows how to write. In English.

>>13944109
That segment is not our writer and hasn't been touched since that text appeared last year. The actual script writing is linked in IRC.

>>13943875
Sup Neue Azieru

>be hired mecha pilot
>on space cruise to planet
>ship is thrown off course by space storm
>things get tense in ship hierarchy
>mutiny breaks out, captain is killed
>take reins of command and reclaim the ship while fucking bitches along the way
>sequel to game is about when you finally get to the planet, as new captain of the ship, and everything's fucked but only you can save them
would VN

Where's The D?

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>>13944137

Descartes! It's time to send the new machine out. I'm afraid too powerful for any other assigned pilot. We have no choice.

Prepare Sarah for The D!

>>13944131
thanks, that was what i was going for actually

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>>13944201
artist-kun and followers that want to view the VN script:

>Get in here!
http://irc.lc/rizon/mvn

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>>13943672
>>13943875
>>13943699

Last known Work in Progress Roster

>>13944346
>literally gundam and one o'bari

>>13944358
They are very boring, the Obari "homage" included.

>>13944358
>>13944405

Show us how to make better great senpai's

>>13944440
>better great senpai's
What are you even saying?

>>13944440

> Criticize thing
> Do better or no criticism allowed

Always a good thing.

>>13944469
I would like to see more resemblance to quick prototypes or even for the enemies being hastily constructed.

The alien mechs having visible muscle and carapace for that other worldly feel.

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very quick rough, desu I don't like the sniper and the final suit looks very different.

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>>13944797
update

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>>13944797
>>13944837

A fine mech for a Lune, indeed.

>>13943875
I love this

>>13944346
I like the Astell design,and colors alot

>>13870202

As a karate bugman fag who started life as a good and noble /m/an, I sympathize with you. But we've got nowhere else to go.

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please suggest colour schemes, I'll fix stuff up tomorrow

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>>13944993

Astell - Corporation exclusive test design. Prototype is one of several to feature Nereid technology. State of the art in maneuverability and top acceleration. The spine frame support is built to mimic vertebrae, extremely durable with lighter chassis. Variants feature moderate firepower however custom units are standard with additional armaments. First prototype assigned to Jin Ortiz.


Jin Ortiz- seeking thrills and enjoyment for risking his life. Jin suffers a desire to push a machine beyond its safety limiters. To squeeze every last bit of juice out of the engine thrusters. However, he's a bit of a coward once he's dead in the water. Where he can't use his speed freely or to escape his vulnerability. Wouldn't admit it even if you saved his ass.

Hiiiighway
to
the
DANGER ZONE

Eh, the hair came out like Asemu Asuno's

>>13944346
Gotta agree with the other anons. I know a lot of these were donated kindly by anons but some are too Gundam-y. Vigilante is literally Gump, Elegia (especially Elegia) and Erlidia are pretty obvious too.

Are the Jupiter mechs mostly custom/midbosses? They don't fit with any single design scheme. Judge (which looks a bit too Naziboo to me) and Padadis are pretty humanoi; Lilah, Hagel, Lloyd and to an extent Immunis are all bulky and thick and less maneuverable; Starchan is her own thing; Y and NZK are odd in a good way. If most of the middle ones are one-offs then I understand, but I hope they aren't production mechs.

>>13944346
>>13944490
A lot of stuff wasn't included in this roster.

>>13945131
white/orange/blue/green

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>>13945131
The middle with red just feels so right.

Also the Advanced Suit really was the best.

>>13945339
Huh, I was kind of digging the first one. Middle one just kind of screams "Spring has Sprung" at me.

>>13945131
Red/white/touch of green

>>13945345
>"Spring has Sprung
Is that so bad?

Do you NOT want to go sunning?

https://youtu.be/Or8j2cSqn2k

>>13945494
Maybe as a test palette but didn't one mecha already have that color scheme?

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>>13944167
Waah, what are we doing on the Daibarion?

>>13943875
Kondou as fuck. Make it look like it's made of dirt and clay for no reason and you've nailed it.

>>13943672
We don't need "idea guys" like you. We need programmers.

>>13948448
And you would be?

>>13948448
What you need to do is get off of your ass and learn how to program something as simple as VN.

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>>13948496
Most of this thread is the guy on the left. We need the second girl from the right.

>>13948656
Who is "we"?

>>13949142
Colors don't compliment as well but I can see potential, it just needs some tweaking I think. I'd have to see it polished to compare it to the others but right now it's lacking. The others compliment the visor color too, this one doesn't.

>>13949716
>red doesn't compliment green
lad

>>13949142
Needs less red and more white, and the visor should be something like yellow. Consider making the already yellow parts green.

>>13949742
Look at the color of the frames on the others. They work well with the visor color in addition to being complimentary. The brown-on-green looks strange too.

>>13949742
The problem is the ratio I do believe, not the colors themselves.

>>13949782
>brown
pls sempai
I bet you can't even see the blue on your monitor

>>13945494
make the blue grey or charcoal,it makes it look more prototype like when it's just orange and white

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>>13949142
Maybe something like this? The sensor could be an entirely different shade of yellow or another color entirely, and it might need a bit more white and possibly a different shade of green.

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>>13949920
Apologies for both of these, it's just a quick hack job.

>>13949920
Switching the yellow and green is definitely a mistake.

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>>13949807
What's life like with colorblindness?

Anyway I was thinking more along these lines. Mint green frame is a bit much and it's not supposed to be a finalized scheme but it was made in 10 seconds in MS paint. Still better than whatever that was supposed to be. Maroon? Burgundy?

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>>13949930
Okay, good to know. Which shade of yellow is better in this case, and do you think it could use some more white around the chest region?

>>13949953
Wow, mint frame is even more unflattering than it was while editing.

>>13949920
>>13949929
I missed those because my internet went down for a little, I agree that the green and yellow were fine.
>>13949960
Darker, the first one is too saturated. I'd keep experimenting with the reds though.

>>13949953
That's not mint green. Also, that looks far worse.

How about less Getter-1 and keep the red more as a motif or accent and not over complicate the mech design?

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>>13949980
I'll call it Hint of Mint (tm) and we can compromise. This isn't the final, I'm drumming up vague schemes for now. If anyone wants to see more of any scheme, from myself or another, then they should comment so we can get an idea of what looks good.

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>>13950004
Better version of that one

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>>13949967
Ignoring the obvious differences in reds, does it having a whiter chest region help, or is it better as is?

>>13950022
Hard to say. More white blends in with the mecha's frame in this instance, though, so I'm kind of leaning towards the first.

Some pilot & lore information could be useful for figuring out a good colour scheme for >>13945131
Also, what type of sniper should it use?

>>13950735
Nah.
>>13950724
MUH dick. As good as that looks, I don't know if that would come out well most of the time because of how subtle the differences are in color, but that's exactly what makes it look so nice. Top tier in any case.

>>13950064
I like this one best. The design of this mecha makes me think of Feddie/Valkyrie crossed with ZOE. The good guy mook suit, more or less. I think blue and white gives it that heroic feel, while still making it look expendable.

Really, it depends on what the suit's role in the VN is.

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>>13950790
>Really, it depends on what the suit's role in the VN is.
This

>>13950724
>>13950735
Somewhere Katoki is breathing heavily and doesn't know why.

Those are some serious gams.

>>13950826
When coloured like that, I'm reminded of Valzacard.

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made a sprite for this one
>>13943672

>>13869351
Porn when?

>>13944102
What's the /m/ version of Feminists though?
spics?

>>13948448
Just use whatever that easy mode VN making tool is and call it a day.

>>13944346
Are you sure you want all of these not gundams?
I mean unless you have something to replace them in case they ever need to be erased from existence and never be spoken of ever again.

>>13871367
Holy fuck this is genius. Drawfag, you are fucking awesome.

>>13945131
First one looks great.

It'd be nice if the mecha were something other than generic gundams

>>13951825
Starting to wonder if this is all the same person. Yes, I agree there's a Gundam glut in the design area but 80% of the designs are fairly different.

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>>13951842

That image is also very outdated, when the Official Thread starts there will be a new roster.


I'm starting to wonder what Gundam even means now.

Is it the shapes and pose? using white colors? Mecha with eye cameras? Because I always assumed it the was clown colors and v-fins that made Gundam unique.

These of course are the starter designs as I would like to see tweaks to always give feelings that you can depend on your space purposed giant humanoid machine. Armored Core and Thunderbolt influences come to mind

Also the roster doesn't depict what the units will actually do or if they'll make an appearance. I believe the original vision was to have massive forces of grunts in combat GALMs vs the Jupiter en masse. The special units being more of a spin off if you obtain upgrades or parts.

>>13951842
>Starting to wonder if this is all the same person.
It isn't.

>>13951856
Just look at your image you posted. Gundam shoulders, Gundam legs, Gundam torsos, Gundam waists, Gundam skirts. I think your experience with mecha probably boils down to Gundam and whatever was on Toonami.

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Currently working on a redesign, prepare for lots of dakka and HIPS

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>>13945131
Man, I can't help painting things like this.

I'll do a proper one, though. What's the general idea for the suit, are they supposed to be more drab and militaristic or Gundam Military with primary colours and stuff?

>>13952076
Hmmm, i'm not fully sure about what role it will have in the final product, but I think that it would be in darker, drab colour scheme. I picture it somewhat like Michael from Macross Frontier, or Gundam Thunderbolt, where it would attach itself onto random debris, fire a couple shots off, than getting out of the fuck zone

Hopefully it will be cleared up by the anon who knows more about it

desu I hate the radiator on the back. It's like a giant ant. It's a great design otherwise.

>>13952095
lol I meant for it to look more like a bee's ass, but an ant makes more sense, it also contains tiny thin (tripod-esque?) legs that would help to stabilize the suit while firing

>>13951625
The designs would all be not whatevers anyway, so I suppose not gundams are not particularly worse than any other option.

>>13952110
Then he should make not-whatever-gundams. Make a not-votoms-gundam, a not-big-O-gundam, a not-giant-robo-gundam etc

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>>13952090
Ok, I get you, so something low-profile.

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>>13952067
Update. I'm just not feeling the current state of the mech. Any suggestions? It's supposed to be the redesign for the Jupiter Hagel-Heavy unit.

>>13952145
I fucking love the first and third one, the first one reminds me of the Arbalest from FMP, and the third of the Flags from G00

>>13952186

Thanks, I'm not fond of the shade of blue on the first one, I think I'll make it more desaturated. I like the look of that Hagel-Heavy, although I feel the arms and shoulders don't at all fit. Perhaps don't give them arms at all and have more oversized weapons bolted right onto the sockets. Add folding legs to the back of the thighs for stability, so it has more of a mobile weapons platform aesthetic.

>>13952186
Legs are incredibly huge and disproportional. It looks like a freaky horse monster. The core does not match with the rest of the design. The wang between the legs is hideous. I don't know where you're going with those arms but I don't like it. Shoulders could be better.

What I do like is the head, torso, and knee protrusions (if done much smaller).

>>13952209
>>13952227

Thanks for the advice, I must admit looking at it overall I only like the head and the kneecaps of the Hagel... I'll probably completely rework the rest. Though I don't lie the idea of the arms being completely weapons only, I have an idea for it that may fit both bills. I'm starting to think I should be going at this more like a quad-legged armored core style suit, though i'm not too sure how to make it fit with the rest of the Jupiter aesthetic

>>13952234
>quad-legged
pls don't this kills the mecha

>>13952234
By the way, if you want to make any specific requests for colour changes on the few above, by all means ask. It's a 5 minute job.

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>>13952343
And here I was meaning to add this.

I don't get what all the 'that's gundam' talk is about, I see a lot of basic mecha but I prefer a minimum of random non-mechanical shit hanging off and for there to be at least a little bit of production engineering to be evident, which would mean a minimum of complex curves.

Do you guys mean that only Gundam bothers to design like that?

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throwing some concepts together to see what sticks. Which ones do you guys prefer, mix and swap pieces, critique

Mind you these proportions and designs aren't final (obviously)

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>>13952387
3, 4, 5 and 7 are nice.
The shoulders weapons on 3 are a bit overkill, maybe make them smaller or alter them.
7 needs more dakka and more powerful lower legs.
5 should have dual rifles (based on the one its already holding) that are attached to the back hip. Basically, they would hang from the hip at an angle when idle and then swing up to arm level firing level for use.

>>13952067
Pointy vent-like things make me think Zeta Gundam, I kind of liked how it was before. Don't let me change your whole design though.

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>>13952387
Thus far my favourites are 1, 4, and 5.
I think 1 & 5 fit the bill the best. 4 looks cool fuck it looks like they just strapped on the bunch on fuckhuge missles on a TSF.
5 does have dual rifles, I didn't draw the other b/c it would block some of the design
as for 7, it looks too front mission compared to the rest, so it may look too different compared the to other Jupiter suits...

As for your recolours, I think i'll compile all of the ones in the thread and put them all into one image so the staff guys can pick the final colour scheme.

>>13952444
Already scrapped the design lol.

I'm done for today, have a design I submitted a while ago

>>13952513
1 is hideous, senpai. It's the worst design on the sheet by a mile. Also they all look like ripoffs, so why care?

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>>13952523
haha, I just like the idea of a mech in a mech, my execution -isn't the best to be kind.
Care to specify what they look ripped-off of? I'm curious since they're pretty much rough ideas thrown together. I think 2 & 6 are the worst

>>13952558
1. The little robot is an arms slave from FMP
2. Armored Core
3. More Armored Core. Those shoulder attachments are literally a missile interceptor system from AC3
4. Muv-Luv with carrots
5. More Muv-Luv, the legs especially
6. Guncannon
7. Front Mission

>>13952558
Also that's a Leo with shitty arms

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>>13952523
>>13952558
>>13952558
>>13952579

All I see is someone just trying to get ideas. There was a time when /m/en could be real bros. How about we mention ideas with like/love about mechs? Especially for a Heavy role.

To a certain point everything is X is rip off of X. Let's not waste the bump limit on shit.

Why do I only see one artist in attempt to improve?

>>13952623
We're having production discussion about the designs/colors and then you come in here complaining that everyone isn't uber nice? The fuck? Contribute or GTFO. If you want lovely opinion then please post them.

>>13952579
>>13952583
Well I have to admit that i'm a huge fan of Ebikawa, Kawamori, and Izubuchi so I understand if they look fairly similar.

1.The mech is a placeholder in the general proportions of the Jupiter suits, thin waist, wide upper chest, generic gm arms and temjin shaped robo head

2.literally the same upperhalf as 1, generic block legs, zabanya sideskirts.

3.shoulder things more influenced on the laser arms from one of the ACs, i don't really see the suit semblance, apart from maybe the legs. But those were roughly copied from the other jupiter suit

4.I can see that

5.top half looks more like the Arbalest, legs are more Linebarrel than ML

6. Top Canons = guncannon

7.I can definitely see Front Mission, was trying to go for a more Western aesthetic

I like the arms on the Leo

>>13952638
you don't have to be so toxic, lol

>>13952513
I rather like that second one there, it has more of a feel for heavy artillery. Perhaps you could add extending foot-like supports to the knees, which allow the suit to kneel down. The Zaku Sniper had something similar, if I remember correctly.

You guys do realize that there are no possible original designs left to be invented right
no matter what you do its gonna look like a ripoff of something
stop worrying/crying about it and draw what looks cool

>>13952690
>all that trying to defend yourself
Well it's pretty obvious that you're not open to criticism and just want people to praise your drawings.

>>13953352
Did you even read the thread? The guy who drew it said he didn't want to use designs that he thought were too derivative, but it was pointed out that they were all derivative and that he shouldn't care. He then started trying to get people to point out specifically how they were derivative because I guess he thought he was original or something.

>>13953733
>>13953738

It's a good thing you guys are here to champion originality, it really gets my goat when people draw robots in their spare time and they look like someone's else's robots. Like, 200% mad.

>>13953855
Why are you shitposting? It was literally said that the artist shouldn't even care about it and should use the designs because they're good.

>>13953733
Well desu I wanted to figure out what they resembled, and most of that defense is admitting or arguing things that I thought. Though i must admit his particular use of language did get me flustered.
>Well it's pretty obvious that you're not open to criticism and just want people to praise your drawings.
Not really, if you visited some older threads, and some drawthreads I would change stuff that people would suggest to me 'cause it would always improve my shit (I do fall on a lot of the same 'isms'/habits in my designs)

>>13953738
If it came off as me saying derivative, that's me wording it badly, or you may have confused my posts for another's. I redesigned/ am redesigning the Jupiter suits b/c they do not follow a cohesive aesthetic, and cause i'm interesting in seeing the final product of this endeavour

>yes, i did get salty, and it was unwarranted for

bumpu

don't die on me thread, at least some new Lune's art before gone.

>>13959415
This has actually been one of the more successful /mvn/ threads,in the past they would usually die a little after reaching 200 posts

Give me more robots to color, it's like an autism coloring book and I need my fix.

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>>13959615

>>13952387
>>13952387
#3 pretty much is the Qmoeva from Xenoblade Chronicles X.

#4 is the Galdr from the aformentioned game.

So for my SA, is this project on hold or still going?

If the former, it's a shame since it would be something that I'd be willing to dedicate time too, esp with the amount of times I've had VN projects flake on me.

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>>13964681
Still going

more lineart

>>13964892
Nice colors, reminds me of ARX-7 Arbalest.

>>13964892
>I can't stop drawing Gendems

>>13965041
>I'm so immersed in Gundam I can't stop seeing it in other mecha
I think it's the shoulder shape and the vaguely core fighter-ish torso (two vents beside the center cockpit)

>>13965053
The only thing non-Gundam is the head. The shoulders and arms, the Zeta torso, the hips are clearly Gundam elements. The legs are fairly Gundam, but the knee protrusions make it look different enough even though the feet and legs are typical Gundam designs. Are you going for a Gundam parody? Maybe the universe is supposed to mirror Gundam?

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Hagel Bagel update

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>>13965834

Bump for more designs

>>13966381
love the hands,jetpack over the shoulders is cool too,I kinda with it had some red and blue on it though like maybe on the wingtips or the front of each shoulder

How many people are working on this?

Do you need any additional staff? Musicians?

Just curious what's up, you guys seem to be doing great, I love the designs! Good to see a new thread

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>>13966425
There are 5 of us that communicate outside these related threads, and we have a few music samples but no dedicated project composer at this time. Any help to complement our barebones work would be appreciated.

>>13959415
well looks like i can't draw more Sarah for today either

apparently i got dengue fever and have to hospitalized for 3 weeks

>>13966931
> dengue fever
that sucks. living in tropical area?

hope you have full recover, as those diseases was pretty nasty.

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>>13966425
>>13966448
Asides from the core, there's a handful more that contribute as the situation permits.

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>>13966381
I really like this design. Shit, I forgot to do an actual space cop one.

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>>13967407
Nailed it

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>>13964892
>>13951196

>>13967757
>>13951196

There are great! You still have the Daibarion sprite?

>>13943625
Doesent bother me m80

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>>13943625
The same could be said of all religions

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>>13943625
I get what you mean but since it's a amateur project like this, you can't complain that much.

What I would like to know is what the main point of this story is going to be. I mean what is the reader going to get out of this? So far I've seen only bits of waifu routes and single story points and these threads are mostly focused on drawing the robots. If the story is going to be like a celebration of all things mecha, which is what it feels like to me right now, then I think the tropes are justified.

>>13968124
>but since it's a amateur project like this, you can't complain that much.

No, he's right. Even if it's a fan project, it's pathetic to see such a cliche ridden attempt. Originality isn't a professional commodity. Try to think of an actual story and not just a vague parody of mecha.

>>13968153
it's almost like this was just an excuse to draw a bunch of waifus and mecha designs

>>13968153
But the point isn't to be anything other than a vague parody of mecha. It's not really a mecha visual novel as much as it is an /m/ visual novel.

At least as I understand it.

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>>13968229
Implying we need an excuse to draw robots or cute girls on the daily. There isn't a checklist or any hamfisted attempts. Obviously there are things we love and hate about our chinese cartoons. We share and express these here. I'm not sure where everyone is pulling information from any unfinished concepts and doodles, especially when the script drafts are posted in the IRC.

Above all this project is going to be a space military sim. The parody elements and references will mostly be done through a few of the characters love for mecha anime, model kits and video games.

I just want my animated mecha gore, and nothing will make me happier.

>>13951196
>>13967757
Awesome, are these the battle sprites?

>>13968229
IIRC that's basically how it started,I'm pretty sure sarah Lune was drawn as a parody of Lalah Sune

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uhhh, i'll get the weapons and shit whenever

>>13970718
pcool but the knees are far too large they look like knotted tumors

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>>13970789
Better? I actually wanted to extend the knees on the triangle part but I had to contain myself lol

>>13970841
>Better?
It didn't even address what I was talking about

>>13970872
I'll come up with diff parts tomorrow, gotta hit the hay

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>>13967887

yup, though i'm making a new sprite for it

>>13970841

I think the knees are fine, but the feet are far too small (which may in and of itself be exaggerating their scale). It looks as if the feet would be too small even if it had normal sized knees, since they're only slightly bigger than the suit's hands.