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Is the following sentence grammatically correct?
"The use of models in technical education using the example of gear drives"
thanks
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it needs at least one comma and probably a re-wording
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it's a bachelor thesis, so it does not need a verb.
where is the comma missing?
do you have a suggestion for a rewording? Maybe it's easier to take a correct english thesis and translate it back to german.
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>>9977912
that is an incomplete clause
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>>9977922
Put after education
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>>9977922
if its a title remove the first 'the'
oh and
>use
>using
nvm, not salvageable, kys
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>>9977912
Sentence fragment, revise
3/10
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>>9977912
> Gear drives as a model in technical education
There, fixed it for you.
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