What is the Paterson of /lit/?

Water falls from the bright air
It falls like hair
Falling across a young girl’s shoulders
Water falls
Making pools in the asfault
Dirty mirrors with clouds and buildings inside
It falls on the roof of my house
Falls on my mother and on my hair
Most people call it rain

what do you guys think about my poem

>>9916407
tao lin

>>9916407
In the American Grain, of course. Or that long 4-part poem by I forget his name....

what is the "splendid and profound" of film?

>>9916473
Cisheteronormative and noumenal

>>9916473
i think you are a little girl in a movie called paterson. honestly, it could use some tightening up.

"The Red Wheel Barrow" by William Carlos Williams

>>9916407
James Paterson, duh

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Probably this.

>I prefer the ones that don't rhyme too
wow really cutting edge jarmusch!!

>>9916473
The collective works of William Carlos Williams

Paterson.