Thoughts on this poem I wrote?

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>>9819988

>>9819988
Dupi Kaur?

>>9819988
Kinda cute.

>>9819988
What is this?

>>9820000
IDK who that is. Also, nice digits.

>>9820035
a poem.

>>9820050
It's neither terrible or great.

>>9819988
It's quite bad. Best of luck

>>9819988
Dubs..easy on the poetry

>>9819988
What's with the recent trend of writing prose and then line breaking it and calling it poetry?

>>9819988
>>9820008

You both clearly dont get it

Burn this thread to the ground

>>9820221
>doesn't recognize the dub dubs

Poetry about thots has never been particularly good unfortunately. While cheesy, it's not the worst poem I've ever seen. Keep writing and improving OP.

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>>9820251
Dub dubs, bugs, fugs.

>>9819988
Reads like something I wrote in high school. keep trying though.

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>>9820000
checked

>>9820067
One of those is not true, and we all know which I'm talking about.

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>>9820000
Fantastic get

>>9819988
>>9820000


dubs... easy on the dubs

>>9819988
dubs thread?

>>9820501
Yep

>>9819988
it is shit

>>9819988

Are you literally fifteen?

>>9819988
>This is what I think of your poem, anon...
you were music
but I had my ears cut off

>>9820000
Checked.

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>>9819988
>So let's begin
>again

>>9822696
this is more poetic than the poem itself

>>9819988
haha nice try, rupi