ITT: We post literary criticisms that give you hope. Too much

Some anime fanfictions are good though.

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>>9748124
.....anon...I.....

>>9748124
It's a good first step.

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>>9748180
No. My dude. Stop

>>9748346
i hooked up with a girl in a creative writing workshop who looked like this

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>>9748352
What happened?

>>9748387
She wrote anime fanfiction.

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>>9748400
You're joking.

>>9748416
Hang on while I get the link.

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>>9748455
We may as well have it. Also, post any reviews of your work that gave you hope famalam.

>>9748387
i was recently single and started a workshop in the fall. she was a freshman i was a junior. kept looking at her legs the whole time, made it fun to go. she also was shy af and didn't want to write a story for the workshop (it was a club). saw her at a party so started talking was p. drunk walked her home and hooked up. got her completely naked it was fun but she was a virgo so i didnt want to deal with the blood/deflowering so we didnt bang.
got drunk at a frat mixer the next night and on the way home hooked up with her again.
next night went to a big party though none of my mates wanted to go and i was alone there, and sexually frustrated, and got pretty upset when some chick turned me down, and was also dealing with latent depression/general fuckery from my break up earlier in the month+general conditions, so when i got home i finished my rum and cut up me arms a good deal while grinding the anor londo stairs in dark souls 3, and checked involuntarily into a psychward the next day after walking through the hood to a hospital, where i stayed for a few days and missed two midterm exams.
wonder how the year would have turned out if i just hit her up again that night instead of going home, something i had considered at the time.

>not writing my little pony fanfiction

come on dweebs

>>9748609
>tfw you've written several MLP fanfics, including one that became somewhat famous within the fandom

>>9748110
I'm guessing the guy in the picture wrote anime fanfiction on account of those profile images.

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>>9748637
Anon..please go.

>>9748545
That's...alot really. Hope you have recovered since then.

I write pony fanfiction, is it too late for me?

>>9748648
That's me and no I do not write anime fanfiction

>>9748716
it was always too late post excerpt

>>9748545
dam. I respect your respect for virgins

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>>9748723
What this anon said. Do it gay.>>9748716

>>9748637
why aren't you dead yet you crusty asswipe

>>9748637
Hit me up with a link, I wanna see.

>>9748829
why

>>9748865
Why the fuck not, you fucking cunt?

>>9748899
anon shut yo bitch ass up

>>9748916
Suck my dick you fucking nerd.

>MLP fanfiction is the pinacle of literature.

>>9748973
Make me nigger

>>9748981
You're goddamn right

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>>9748387
Have some decency

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>>9750002
no

>>9748470
https://pastebin.com/S4TBJG4W
Here's that anime fanfiction you were waiting for. Critiques appreciated.

For all the ponyfaglets, let's dispell the fact that Pen Stroke is a good writer. Kkat is and Fallout:Equestria is gospel.

That is all.

Praise the lightbringer.

All of you are fucking stupid.

>>9750190
>She was an older woman, perhaps late thirties to early forties,

murakami/10

also your writing is turgid with adverbs and -ing forms

>>9748387
>>9750064
sauce please

>>9750553
@peyolive

>>9751892
thats her twitter.