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It's about nazis with cannibal fetishes

Pretty bad, desu. If you're over 18, trying reading something other than YA.

>>9671682
lol it's not meant to be taken seriously

>>9671696

It's structurally and linguistically bad, desu. Detached sense of irony to protect your fragile ego "its just a joke bro".

>>9671696
it still needs to be funny and it fails. Not every piece of garbage you put out can be immune to criticism just because you're being cutesy and ironic.

>>9671704
Nigga this was a nightmare I had its one of those cancerous fan fiction things in the next chapter I have them fuck a placenta

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>>9671707
Chapter 2 sneak peek (improved)

>>9671720

>it was j-just a joke, brah

If you're not going to take yourself seriously, why should anyone else?

>>9671792
Because this is 4chan home of cancer

>>9671792
As long as I fill up the internet with this cancer my job is finished

>>9671797

No, that's /b/. This is /lit/. Step up, l'il bitch nigga.

>>9671815
Nigga I do it 4 my hood u think u hard nigga