>someone sent me this
>"hey anon do you think this is good?"
>read the entire thing
>author is a kid, probably still think that life has a meaning
>don't know what to reply
Darkness
In a small city, that’s where I’ve been for almost 12 years. A city that you will never want to live in all my windows and doors are locked, the curtains won’t let the sunlight come in, a room of darkness.
I took a small glance outside my house, I opened a curtain lightly but like before all I can see, we’re people..people bathing in their own blood. I immediately closed the curtain. I took a deep sigh and closed my eyes.
“mom..” I whispered.
And as if on cue, a tear fell down from my eyes. I took a deep sigh once more. I went to my closet to get my cloak and my katana.
“I’ll revenge”
I clenched my fist and went infront a mirror. I closed my eyes. When I opened my eyes I saw a girl infront of me with red eyes. Eyes that will make anyone tremble in fear.
“ I hate you! You killed mom and dad! You killed everyone!”
Tears keep flowing down my face,non-stop.
I just looked at the girl infront of me. I saw how blood flows. I smiled before everything went black.
>>9662788
Tell him honestly and constructively what he needs to improve on and how he can do it. How else would you reply?