What went wrong?

>>9658986
It was published.

>>9658986
trite garbage
by a poet
who is only famous
because she
is a poc
and talks about rape and periods

>>9658986
>went
if the very idea, before the writing even begins, is a mistake, then nothing went wrong, it's just one bad idea after another one, a cock-up cascade, if you will

read my book
about whats wrong with
people hating
everything 'woman'

>>9658986
POO

>>9658986
The last fifty years of poetry.

>>9660495
In the loo

/thread

>>9658986
Nothing. It's an excellent, emotionally moving, book of a poetry. There's a reason it has such high critical acclaim.

>>9660548
lol

>>9658986
he told me

it was my fault.

he told me

'clean that up now! that's dirty!

clean

your

self

now!'

i told him

'my culture doesn't believe in toilets.

my culture believes in mother earth

and production

and natural smells'

and i

flushed him

away

away

away

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too much honey, not enough milk

i wonder how she likes to fuck

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people tell me
that toilet witches don't exist
then why
does it smell like death in there?

>>9660612
she's a submissive slut who loves feeling chad drain his nads down her every hole

>>9658986
Nothing went wrong, it's just a journal from a woman sold as poetry, and other stupid women went apeshit for it.

>>9660548
Maybe you are thinking of something else.

>>9658986
You know you're shitty at your craft when the parodies are completely indistinguishable from original. I would be embarrassed if I were her.

Crawling
in my skin
these Wounds they
will
not
heal

^Literally as good as anything she ever wrote.

>>9660998
im so desensitized but that was disgusting

>>9658986
ugh, just from the picture you know that the books cover is coated in that waxy cheapo shit

she's made more money
and can get more dick
and get more pussy
and will be read by more people
than anyone on 4chan
ever will

so i think it all went right
quite quite right

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How does she do it /lit/?

It's just so....inspiring.

>>9660998
I sit in shame

kneeling down

i hear her moans

he slaps her again

their hips slap again

lost in a trance

i begin to tug

myself to them

we are together

they are together

but in this moment

i sit alone

in the corner