Instead of posting just critique, you rewrite what the other guy wrote.
Obviously can be completely different,.
>>9655104
when you read what this guy says, just redo it instead of criticizing it at length, oh and please try to be creative.
>>9655104
>ask for critique without offering critique of your own on another piece, shitting up the thread
>rewrite instead of offering critique, because your intelligence surpasses all else even when the story isn't your own
>reject all criticism of your work because you can explain it away as muh, muh, muh (insert bullshit excuse for bad writing)
>offer critique despite never having read a book in your life; offer advice based on how it would look in a movie