Hi /lit/,
Approximately 2 weeks ago I made a thread where I asked for help with my composition because I needed better grades in my English Course.
Thankfully everything went better than expected and I also got better grades in the following exams. I still gotta chances to get approved this semester. I just need to keep improving.
Teacher delivered our compositions back and as I promised I'm here to deliver it.
I made 82 out of 100 points.
I'd like to thank the Anons who helped me very much.
The original thread link is here: >>9579686
I don't entirely agree with your graders corrections, some are unneccesary. I would work on your handwriting though.
>>9621194
It's quite shaky lol and I had to write it down over a faulty table. Sometimes my "R" and "s" are indistinguishable.
But I really appreciate your comment.