Which are some poetrhy exercises lads?

>>9527641
I'll give you one.

Write a sonnet about electricity. Right now. Don't be a bitch. Do it.

Post it when you're done and I'll review it and give you feedback. Remember to use the proper rhythm.

>>9527689
can you read spanish?

>>9527695
I can. Show me what you got.

>>9527814
give me 30 minutes then.

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>>9527641

Out here in the fields
I fought for muh meals
I get my back into my living
I don't need to fight
to prove I'm right
I don't need to be forgiven

>>9527814
are u still here?
give me five minutes, almost got it.

>>9527814
Cuan bravura es la electricidad
como arregalose de los dioses
Cuan deseable paranostra; oh, es
cual millones demis caballos se dad

Era au era una era nomas
antigua y desdeñable anomas
olvidables ignorantes, y no mas
Era esame au era inomas

Regalo perfectisimo de dioses
Regalo grandioso del intelecto
Que gaqui desperdician los mortales

Oh, que inmoral; Oh, que desperdicio
desperdiciar lo es imaginario
Oh, que gran tragedia, que gran boquicio

Translation:

How brave is electricity
like a god’s gift
how desirable for us, oh, is.
which millions of horses is

It’s an age no more
ancient and depicable no more
fogettable ignorants, and no more
It’s a no more

Perfect gift from gods
Glorious gift from intelect
That the mortals here waste

Oh, how inmoral, oh, what a waste
wasting imaginary
oh, what a great tragedy, what a great boquicio

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>>9527814
Not OP but:

Son pequeños los impulsos que nos entregamos
mientras caminamos por los paseos oníricos,
y sólo eso basta para el cuadro que pintamos;
un beso entre neuronas, olvido de lo empírico

Por las venas fluye estática, nos acordamos
al saborear el hierro en cada beso vampírico,
al colorear de rojo ese retrato que amamos.
Flujos negros nos conectan, te rujo satírico.

"De torre a torre corren ríos, mira.
Escucha el palpitar de la ciudad
y acompáñame a encender esta pira

porque esta mente ha impulsado nuestra ira
y hay que hacerle entender que la otredad
se cansó de vivir sin electricidad."

Last verse as a liberty because I need to get going now.

>>9527948
Is this really spanish? Because i'm a native speaker and even though I mostly understood what you wanted to say i'm pretty sure some of those are not really words

>>9527814
Let me take a wack at it, but in english.

Luminescent spritz blazing from the ceiling
Looming over chairs, tables, feast, so healing
Like tidal waves of electric storm brought sparks
In wattage, volts, ohms, and measured marks.
Glistening our vantage taken for granted
Yet how easily energy to us has been handed
Arch towards rising hairs
And tingle my skin on all layers.
Zeus will hear my prayers, tonight
When I ask for one more bright lit night

>>9527814
in engrish too

There hang endless bulbs of florescent light
Like glowing lanterns across a Canton wire
Across the clean lines of a square and its old church spire.
Stealing dark's dull grip and giving sight
Granting daring man a newfound right.
No more eerie nights cowering by the fire
No more mist-laid dusks held back by fearful sounds out in the mire
Just calm science, brave and steady, conquers night.
But now I wander lost in amber glows
In sleepless hours while the city's dead
Not fear but lack of all emotion shows
Amongst shadows of light and thoughts I've left unsaid
Across the unmarked square my figure flows
Wishing dark to swallow up all this life I've led

>>9527641
Spend 20 mins each day writing about a specific subject or thing.

Write down the thing in a sentence (the sun turns red when it goes down)

Then rewrite it once in rhyming, once in free verse, and cut out as many words as you can.