LINK (no download): http://docdro.id/yYkEgIw
Hi /lit/,
Redditfag here with a response to a prompt on r/writingprompts that I just drafted. I know that the chance that it will be deleted from Reddit and cause me to be banned forever and the chance that I'll only receive a couple of "Reddit fag" replies on here are about the same, but I'd like to see what reaction it gets.
It's not your typical writing prompt response, though it still might be shit. So, if you want to shit on me for being a horrible writer and Reddit fag, please read it first, and then proceed with your insults. Thanks.
Note that the piece isn't intended to be sexually pleasing. It is intentionally disgusting. Picture is an intentional trigger.
LINK (no download): http://docdro.id/yYkEgIw
OP here. Sorry for inconsistent capitalization in the piece. I'm not an idiot. I couldn't decide whether t capitalize the male pronouns.
wtf that link rickrolled me
OP - fuck you. It's not a rick roll. I'm not that stupid.
>>9470850
you are a horrible writer and a reddit fag
explain this then fgt
>>9470850
It's bad... you need to read to be a good writer
Unironically pretty good.
OP here - fuck you with your 4chan magic programming tricks. I am a mere Reddit leAmateur. I am unfamiliar with the brilliance of the 4chan /lit/ browsing gods. I can not explain your technological prowess. My simple Reddit-fed mind fails to comprehend its complexity.
>>9470850
>prompt writing
Holy shit it's actually a good read. Fucked tho
>>9470850
>>9470888
"trite abstractions of sentimental associations"
What the fuck does that even mean? Sounds like a trite abstraction of sentimental association to me
not bad by Reddit standards. Better than DFW
>>9470899
Baby-> product
Parent -> bearer
Name -> Number
People -> Humans
Its all very formulaic. The gonzo violence being the most lazy application of it
reader here -- that's the point dumbass.
this is what happens when Red Pill dunces like Trump run the government. Important values like family and parenthood vanish