This would have worked a lot better as a play.

It's too long and involved to be a play, and anyway I thought Gaddis pulled it off

You're dumb. Don't post again.

No, its great as is.

>>9470020
You would have worked a lot better as a play.

It would've worked a lot better as a good book.

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>>9470020
you shall never unsee

>youll never understand gaddis
>gaddis is the goat
fucking relax, it's not that serious, he's fine