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Could you guys critique the beginning to my new novel?

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Could you guys critique the beginning to my new novel? 2017-04-20 02:48:30 Post No.
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Could you guys critique the beginning to my new novel? Anonymous 2017-04-20 02:48:30 Post No. [Report]
>Waking up to a loud crash rarely means something good is happening. It’s never “CRASH! Mom made pancakes!” or “CRASH! We decided to adopt a Golden Retriever!”
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 02:52:15 Post No.9403788
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>>9403772
>Violently awakening to a thundering clash seldom indicates that Fortune is smiling down upon you. It’s never “CRASH! Mom made pancakes!” or “CRASH! We decided to adopt a Golden Retriever!”
lul
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 02:53:35 Post No.9403798
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 02:53:35 Post No.9403798 [Report]
It's very...plain. Now check MY new novel's beginning.

>The
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 03:21:45 Post No.9403917
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 03:23:21 Post No.9403921
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 03:23:21 Post No.9403921 [Report]
This... this is a meme, right?
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 07:12:55 Post No.9404503
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Anonymous 2017-04-20 07:12:55 Post No.9404503 [Report]
>>9403772
Was that Green hahahah
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